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[text edit] clean up sbReksHome

Spackled Lanturn 3 years ago
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locations/sbReksHome.qsrc

@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ if indorf = 0 and (sisboyparty_day + 2 = daystart or hour > 21):
 	cls
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Rex''s Apartment</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_6_' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-	*nl 'Drunk and disheveled, Anya bursts into the room. You noticed that her hair, and all over her clothes she is smeared in sticky sperm. Anya stopped you and said:' 
-	'"We should move our asses and go home <<$pcs_nickname>>, or mother will kill us both, if you don''t come home tonight."'
-	if Rex_save = 1 and Rex_Love = 0: 'As you leave the apartment, you gently kiss Rex on the cheek, thanking for the evening.'
-	if Rex_Love = 1: 'As you leave the apartment, you passionate kiss Rex on the lips, "Thank you for a lovely evening."'
+	*nl 'Drunk and disheveled, Anya bursts into the room. You notice that her hair and clothes are smeared all over in sticky sperm. Anya stops you and says, "We should move our asses and go home <<$pcs_nickname>>, or mother will kill us both, if you don''t come home tonight."'
+	if Rex_save = 1 and Rex_Love = 0: 'As you leave the apartment, you gently kiss Rex on the cheek, thanking him for the evening.'
+	if Rex_Love = 1: 'As you leave the apartment, you passionately kiss Rex on the lips. "Thank you for a lovely evening."'
 	if party_boys_in >= 1: 'As you leave the apartment, some drunk guys tell you they will miss you and sleep well, while laughing to each other.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -49,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party':
 	sister_party_dom = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_1_' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-	'You arrive at Rex''s apartment, for the weekend party. Going inside with the others, the loud music drowned out any noise from outside. As soon as you are inside several boys immediately start offering you drinks.'
+	'You arrive at Rex''s apartment for the weekend party. Going inside with the others, the loud music drowns out any noise from outside. As soon as you are inside, several boys immediately start offering you drinks.'
 	act 'Drink':
 		cls
 		minut += 5
@@ -57,8 +56,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party':
 		gs 'drugs ', 'alcohol', 'vodka'
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_2_' + rand(1,4) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'In all this mess you are unable to find a clean cup and are handed a full bottle of booze. Clinking glasses with the bottle, you put your lips to the mouth of the bottle and turn it up, gulping down several swigs of strong drink, noticing the effects almost at once.'
-		'The party has just begun, you can still walk through the apartment and find something to do.'
+		'In all this mess, you are unable to find a clean cup and are handed a full bottle of booze. Clinking glasses with the bottle, you put your lips to its mouth and turn it up, gulping down several swigs of strong drink, noticing the effects almost at once.'
+		'The party has just begun. You can still walk through the apartment and find something to do.'
 		act 'Move away': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_home'
 	end
 end
@@ -73,19 +72,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_home':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Rex''s Room</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_1_' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-	'Sitting at a table and drinking with your friends, sitting to one side of you sharing a bottle as always is <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''lena''">Lena</a> who is always fun, her slightly more reserved friend <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''ira''">Ira</a>, and always up beat <a href="exec: gt ''reks'', ''party''">Rex</a>.'
-	'To your other side sits your sister <a href="exec: gt ''sister_party'', ''sister_party''">Anya</a> drinking already and <a href="exec: gt ''sbReksHome'', ''roma''">Roma</a>, whom himself sits just a bit away looking more serious than normal, plus lots of <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''party_girls''">girls</a> and <a href="exec: gt ''party_boys'', ''party_boys''">guys</a> you barely know.'
-	if alko < 3:'One of the guys offers you a bottle to <a href="exec: gt ''sbReksHome'', ''party_drink''">drink</a> from as they say "A little more to set the mood."'
+	'You sit at a table and drink with your friends. Sitting to one side of you sharing a bottle as always are <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''lena''">Lena</a> who is always fun, her slightly more reserved friend <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''ira''">Ira</a>, and always upbeat <a href="exec: gt ''reks'', ''party''">Rex</a>.'
+	'To your other side sits your sister <a href="exec: gt ''sister_party'', ''sister_party''">Anya</a>, drinking already, and <a href="exec: gt ''sbReksHome'', ''roma''">Roma</a>, who himself sits just a bit away looking more serious than normal, plus lots of <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''party_girls''">girls</a> and <a href="exec: gt ''party_boys'', ''party_boys''">guys</a> you barely know.'
+	if alko < 3:'One of the guys offers you a bottle to <a href="exec: gt ''sbReksHome'', ''party_drink''">drink</a> from as he says, "A little more to set the mood."'
 	!You''re drunk
 	if alko >= 3:
 		*clr
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Rex''s Room</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_home_1_' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'After awhile everyone gets up to go dance and drink. Only a few <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''party_girls''">girls</a>, are left in the room, who are fun to hang out and gossip with.'
+		'After a while, everyone gets up to go dance and drink. Only a few <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''party_girls''">girls</a> are left in the room, but they are fun to hang out and gossip with.'
 		iif(party_girls_talk >= 2,'You <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''talk''">chat</a> and gossip with them. One of the girls pulls out some marijuana and invites all of you to <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''smoke''">have a smoke</a>.', 'You <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''talk''">chat</a> and gossip with them.')
 		if pcs_mood = 100 and pcs_horny >= 50 and girls_smoke > 1:
-			'All the girls are in a good mood, and several of them excited pull you with them to have some <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''fun''">fun</a>.'
+			'All the girls are in a good mood, and several of them excitedly pull you with them to have some <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''fun''">fun</a>.'
 		end
 	end
 	act 'Go to the living room': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_gost'
@@ -97,7 +96,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'roma':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Roma</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/roma/roma.jpg"></center>'
-	'Red-haired skinny guy named Roma'
+	'Red-haired skinny guy named Roma.'
 	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
 
@@ -109,7 +108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_drink':
 	gs 'drugs ', 'alcohol', 'vodka'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_2_' + rand(1,4) + '.jpg"></center>'
-	'Someone hands you a half full bottle of booze, putting your lips to the mouth of the bottle, you turn it up and gulp down several swigs of strong drink, noticing the effects almost at once.'
+	'Someone hands you a half full bottle of booze. Putting your lips to the mouth of the bottle, you turn it up and gulp down several swigs of strong drink, noticing the effects almost at once.'
 	'The party has just begun, you can still walk through the apartment and find something to do.'
 	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
@@ -125,16 +124,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_gost':
 	if alko < 3:
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Living room</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_3.jpg"></center>'
-		'This is a large living room, hardly anyone is here, most are all still sitting in the other room talking and drinking. Only one <a href="exec: gt ''sbReksHome'', ''party_boy''">guy</a> is in here tinkering with a turntable.'
+		'This is a large living room. Hardly anyone is here, most are all still sitting in the other room talking and drinking. Only one <a href="exec: gt ''sbReksHome'', ''party_boy''">guy</a> is in here tinkering with a turntable.'
 	elseif alko >= 3:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_4_' + rand(1,8) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'The party is in full swing. In one corner a <a href="exec: gt ''sbReksHome'', ''party_boy''">guy</a> the party DJ is spinning the beats at the turntable. You want to give it a try and <a href="exec: gt ''dinParty'', ''dance''">spin some beats</a>.'
+		'The party is in full swing. In one corner. a <a href="exec: gt ''sbReksHome'', ''party_boy''">guy</a>, the party DJ, is spinning beats at the turntable. You want to give it a try and <a href="exec: gt ''dinParty'', ''dance''">spin some beats</a>.'
 		'<a href="exec: gt ''sbReksHome'', ''roma''">Roma</a> and <a href="exec: gt ''sister_party'', ''sister_party''">Anya</a> are locked together having fun dancing.'
 		if Rex_Love = 0:'<a href="exec: gt ''reks'', ''party''">Rex</a> is having fun dancing with some <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''party_girls''">girls</a>.'
 		if Rex_Love = 1:'You are dancing with some <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''party_girls''">girls</a> and <a href="exec: gt ''reks'', ''party''">Rex</a>, who looks at you with loving eyes.'
 		'<a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''lena''">Lena</a> and <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''ira''">Ira</a> are having fun in the company of drunken <a href="exec: gt ''party_boys'', ''party_boys''">guys</a>.'
 	end
-	act 'Go to the Rex''s room': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_home'
+	act 'Go to Rex''s room': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_home'
 	act 'Go to the kitchen': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_kuh'
 	act 'Go to the bathroom': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_toilet'
 	act 'Leave Rex''s home': gt 'pav_commercial'
@@ -149,11 +148,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_boy':
 	if party_dj = 1 and dj_beer < 1:
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>DJ</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_boy.jpg"></center>'
-		'The guy messes with the soundboard and makes the sound even louder. "Hello, <<$pcs_nickname>>, get me a beer. You can find all the booze in the kitchen."'
+		'The guy messes with the soundboard and makes the sound even louder. "Hello, <<$pcs_nickname>>, get my friend and me a beer. You can find all the booze in the kitchen."'
 	elseif dj_beer = 1 and dj_thank < 1:
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>DJ</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_boy.jpg"></center>'
-		'The guy messes with the soundboard and makes the sound even louder. "Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>, where is our beer?" You go into the kitchen, get two bottles of beer and <a href="exec:gt ''dinParty'', ''dj_beer''">bring</a> it to the guys.'
+		'The guy messes with the soundboard and makes the sound even louder. "Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>, where are our beers?" You go into the kitchen, get two bottles of beer and <a href="exec:gt ''dinParty'', ''dj_beer''">bring</a> them to the guys.'
 	elseif dj_thank = 1 and dj_bad < 1:
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>DJ</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_boy.jpg"></center>'
@@ -186,9 +185,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_kuh':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kitchen</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/kuh.jpg"></center>'
-	'The kitchen is spacious, but kinda dirty. The kitchen table is covered in cans and bottles of beer as well as 5th''s of booze. You can grab any bottle you want and <a href="exec: gt ''sbReksHome'', ''party_drink''">drink</a>.'
-	if party_dj =1 and dj_beer < 1:'You grab two bottles and <a href="exec: gt ''dinParty'', ''dj''">take</a> them for the DJ.'
-	if alko >= 3: 'Some <a href="exec: gt ''party_boys'', ''party_boys''">guys</a> bang their empty drinks down on the table, refilling they offer a cup to you and try to get you to <a href="exec: gt ''party_boys'', ''drink''">drink</a> with them.'
+	'The kitchen is spacious, but kinda dirty. The kitchen table is covered in cans and bottles of beer as well as 5ths of booze. You can grab any bottle you want and <a href="exec: gt ''sbReksHome'', ''party_drink''">drink</a>.'
+	if party_dj =1 and dj_beer < 1:'You grab two bottle for the <a href="exec: gt ''dinParty'', ''dj''">DJ and his friend</a>.'
+	if alko >= 3: 'Some <a href="exec: gt ''party_boys'', ''party_boys''">guys</a> bang their empty drinks down on the table. Refilling, they offer a cup to you and try to get you to <a href="exec: gt ''party_boys'', ''drink''">drink</a> with them.'
 	act 'Go to the living room': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_gost'
 end
 
@@ -206,7 +205,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_toilet':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Toilet</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/toilet.jpg"></center>'
 
-	'Here you can wash your face, freshen up or touch up your make up at <a href="exec: gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirrors</a>.'
+	'Here you can wash your face, freshen up or touch up your make-up at <a href="exec: gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirrors</a>.'
 	if pcs_horny > 50:'Feeling yourself ready to burst with desire, you can''t take it anymore and begin to <a href="exec: gt ''dinParty'', ''toilet_mast''">masturbate</a>.'
 	act 'Go to the living room': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_gost'
 	if cumloc[11] = 1 or cumloc[12] = 1: