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[text edit] clean up shulgabath

Spackled Lanturn 3 лет назад
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      locations/shulgabath.qsrc

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locations/shulgabath.qsrc

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/vanna.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'Uncle Sergey''s bathroom is small and very unpretentious. Nevertheless, it has everything a bathroom needs. There is a <a href="exec: gt ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a> above the sink, where you can ' + iif(pcs_hairbsh = 0,'<a href="exec: gt ''mirror'',''brush''">brush</a>','brush') + ' your hair, a shower and bath tub.'
+	'Uncle Sergey''s bathroom is small and very unpretentious. Nevertheless, it has everything a bathroom needs. There is a <a href="exec: gt ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a> above the sink, where you can ' + iif(pcs_hairbsh = 0,'<a href="exec: gt ''mirror'',''brush''">brush</a>','brush') + ' your hair, a shower and a bathtub.'
 	*nl
 
 	act 'Return to the hallway': gt'shulgahall'
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sexev1':
 	sh_sonya_sexev += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/shuglinhome/vanna/bj'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'When you enter the bathroom, you freeze when you hear a girl''s voice in there. You carefully open the door to see Sonia sucking Sergey''s cock. She''s even taking a video of herself doing it... you wonder why?'
+	'When you reach the bathroom, you freeze when you hear a girl''s voice in there. You carefully open the door to see Sonia sucking Sergey''s cock. She''s even taking a video of herself doing it... you wonder why?'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -73,26 +73,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sexev2':
 	sh_sonya_sexev += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/ev2_1'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'When you want to enter the bathroom, you see Sonia standing in front of the mirror. Luckily she didn''t see you; she was too occupied counting money. Your curiosity gets the better of you, and you decide to watch her for a while. Where did she get that money?'
+	'When you start to enter the bathroom, you see Sonia standing in front of the mirror. Luckily, she doesn''t seem to see you; she is too occupied counting money. Your curiosity gets the better of you, and you decide to watch her for a while. Where did she get that money?'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/ev2_2'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'Sonia starts to undress, and then puts on a delicate lingerie set. She then touches up on her make-up, fixing every little blemish she can find.'
-		'You realize she''s probably going to come out of the bathroom soon, and quickly move to the kitchen and hide there.'
-		'Sure enough, Sonia comes out of the bathroom a few seconds later, and heads straight for uncle Sergey''s bedroom.'
+		'Sonia starts to undress and then puts on a delicate lingerie set. She then touches up on her make-up, fixing every little blemish she can find.'
+		'You realize she''s probably going to come out of the bathroom soon and quickly move to the kitchen and hide there.'
+		'Sure enough, Sonia comes out of the bathroom a few seconds later and heads straight for uncle Sergey''s bedroom.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/shuglinhome/vanna/ev2_3'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'You quickly sneak to the door, and carefully open it just enough so you can see what''s happening inside the room.'
+			'You quickly sneak to the door and carefully open it just enough so you can see what''s happening inside the room.'
 			'What you see does not surprise you in the slightest; Sonia is on her knees in front of Sergey, eagerly sucking on his dick.'
 			'"Very nice, baby. Take it deeper... all the way in, there you go..." he encourages her.'
-			'After sucking his dick for a few minutes, Sonia pulls away from Sergey. Just when he''s about to ask if something''s wrong, she grins lewdly at him and whispers: "Sergey Borisovich, I want you to fuck me like I''m the last whore on the planet! I''m all yours, baby."'
+			'After sucking his dick for a few minutes, Sonia pulls away from Sergey. Just when he''s about to ask if something''s wrong, she grins lewdly at him and whispers, "Sergey Shulgin, I want you to fuck me like I''m the last whore on the planet! I''m all yours, baby."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 			gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -100,8 +100,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sexev2':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/shuglinhome/vanna/ev2_4'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'Sergey makes Sonia bend over for him and rams his cock inside her sopping cunt. When he rhythmically fucks your classmate, Sonia moans and groans while her face turns a deep red. She''s completely lost in the moment... for a second you wonder why Sergey even gave her money, looking at her like this makes you think she probably would''ve done it for free anyway.'
-				'After a few minutes Sonia orgasms violently on Sergey''s cock, and even squirts a little.'
+				'Sergey makes Sonia bend over for him and rams his cock inside her sopping cunt. When he rhythmically fucks your classmate, Sonia moans and groans while her face turns a deep red. She''s completely lost in the moment... for a second you wonder why Sergey even gave her money. Looking at her like this makes you think she probably would''ve done it for free anyway.'
+				'After a few minutes, Sonia orgasms violently on Sergey''s cock and even squirts a little.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
@@ -109,8 +109,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sexev2':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/shuglinhome/vanna/ev2_5'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 					*nl
-					'When he''s too worked up to postpone his orgasm any longer, Sergey says: "On your knees! Fast!"'
-					'Sonia aims to please, and immediately drops to her knees in front of him with her mouth wide open. Sergey finishes inside Sonia''s mouth, and she swallows his load eagerly. She loudly smacks her lips and smiles at him: "Mmm... delicious!"'
+					'When he''s too worked up to postpone his orgasm any longer, Sergey says, "On your knees! Fast!"'
+					'Sonia aims to please and immediately drops to her knees in front of him with her mouth wide open. Sergey finishes inside Sonia''s mouth, and she swallows his load eagerly. She loudly smacks her lips and smiles at him. "Mmm... delicious!"'
 					gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
 					'Now that they''re done, you realize you should probably get the hell out of there before they find you staring. You quickly shut the door.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
@@ -189,13 +189,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bazar':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/b.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'Ever since Sonia inadvertedly got way too drunk and gave five guys including Vitek and his friends a simultaneous blowjob near the disco, her reputation in Pavlovsk has been in shambles. The girls in her class all give her the silent treatment, pretending she does not exist. Meanwhile the guys all treat her like a cheap whore and regularly ask (or sometimes even demand) sex from her, knowing she doesn''t have the strength to say no.'
+	'Ever since Sonia inadvertently got way too drunk and gave five guys including Vitek and his friends a simultaneous blowjob near the disco, her reputation in Pavlovsk has been in shambles. The girls in her class all give her the silent treatment, pretending she does not exist. Meanwhile, the guys all treat her like a cheap whore and regularly ask (or sometimes even demand) sex from her, knowing she doesn''t have the strength to say no.'
 
 	sonya_textb_vanna = rand(1,7)
 	if sonya_textb_vanna = 1:$sonya_textb_vanna = 'You spend some time chatting about everyday things with Sonia.'
-	if sonya_textb_vanna = 2 and SchoolAtestat = 0:$sonya_textb_vanna	= 'When you ask Sonia how she''s doing in school, she laughs and says: "It''s very easy to get good grades at our school. All you have to do is get the teachers to like you. And as you may know, they all like me..."'
-	if sonya_textb_vanna = 2 and SchoolAtestat = 1:$sonya_textb_vanna	= 'When you ask Sonia about the kind of work she does since school ended, she shrugs: "It''s tough to get a decent job nowadays. I''m lucky I have some nice guys like Sergey helping me out with my bills, otherwise I wouldn''t know how to make ends meet!"'
-	if sonya_textb_vanna = 3:$sonya_textb_vanna = 'When you ask Sonia how often she comes to meet Sergey, you get a surprisingly honest answer: "It depends. Usually a few times a week, depending how much money he has. If he can afford it I come by more often, if money is tight I don''t visit as much. You don''t look like a fool, you know why I''m here. Still, I have so say... being fucked by Sergey is amazing! He''s more mature than most guys I sleep with, and such a skilled lover..."'
+	if sonya_textb_vanna = 2 and SchoolAtestat = 0:$sonya_textb_vanna	= 'When you ask Sonia how she''s doing in school, she laughs and says, "It''s very easy to get good grades at our school. All you have to do is get the teachers to like you. And as you may know, they all like me..."'
+	if sonya_textb_vanna = 2 and SchoolAtestat = 1:$sonya_textb_vanna	= 'When you ask Sonia about the kind of work she has been doing since school ended, she shrugs. "It''s tough to get a decent job nowadays. I''m lucky I have some nice guys like Sergey helping me out with my bills, otherwise I wouldn''t know how to make ends meet!"'
+	if sonya_textb_vanna = 3:$sonya_textb_vanna = 'When you ask Sonia how often she comes to meet Sergey, you get a surprisingly honest answer: "It depends. Usually a few times a week, depending how much money he has. If he can afford it, I come by more often, if money is tight I don''t visit as much. You don''t look like a fool, you know why I''m here. Still, I have to say... being fucked by Sergey is amazing! He''s more mature than most guys I sleep with, and such a skilled lover..."'
 	if sonya_textb_vanna = 4:$sonya_textb_vanna = 'Sonia tells you about some interesting encounters she had in the Pavlovsk hotel the other day.'
 	if sonya_textb_vanna = 5:$sonya_textb_vanna = 'Sonia tells an interesting story.'
 	if sonya_textb_vanna = 6:$sonya_textb_vanna = 'You spend some time chatting with Sonia, mostly sharing what the two of you have done today.'
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bazar':
 	'<br><<$sonya_textb_vanna>><br>'
 
 	if sonya_bazar_count = 0:
-		'Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, I have time to go. Maybe I''ll see you here again, so we can chat some more!'
+		'Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, I have time to go. Maybe I''ll see you here again so we can chat some more!'
 	else
 		act 'Chat some more': gt 'shulgabath', 'bazar'
 	end
@@ -244,9 +244,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesb':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/ev1_1.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	'You fill the bath tub and get in. Sonia is still standing near the mirror, fixing her make-up. She doesn''t seem to mind that you are in here with her.'
-	'Then you smile at her and ask: "Hey Sonia... would you like to take a bath with me?"'
-	'Sonia looks puzzled for a second, and asks: "Like... you want me to get in the bath with you right now?"'
-	'When you nod, she grins: "Actually, that sounds like fun! Sure!" and quickly gets naked, sliding her naked body into the warm tub water.'
+	'Then you smile at her and ask, "Hey Sonia... would you like to take a bath with me?"'
+	'Sonia looks puzzled for a second, and asks, "Like... you want me to get in the bath with you right now?"'
+	'When you nod, she grins, "Actually, that sounds like fun! Sure!" and quickly gets naked, sliding her body into the warm tub water.'
 	if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & '<br>Your deodorant gets washed away in the bath.'
 
 	act 'Continue':
@@ -254,13 +254,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesb':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/shuglinhome/vanna/ev1_2'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'"Mmmm..." Sonia muses, enjoying the warmth of the bath water slowly seeping into her body. For the next few minutes you just sit in the bath next to each other. Sonia occasionally looks at you, but doesn''t say much.'
+		'"Mmmm..." Sonia muses, enjoying the warmth of the bath water slowly seeping into her body. For the next few minutes, you just sit in the bath next to each other. Sonia occasionally looks at you but doesn''t say much.'
 
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/shuglinhome/vanna/ev1_3'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'Just when you were about to say something, Sonia moves closer to you and kisses you full on your mouth. You freeze for a second, and then think to yourself... why the hell not?'
+			'Just when you were about to say something, Sonia moves closer to you and kisses you full on your mouth. You freeze for a second and then think to yourself... why the hell not?'
 			'You kiss Sonia back eagerly, playing with her tongue as she thrusts it into your mouth.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 10, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -274,9 +274,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesb':
 				$orgasm_txt = 'Sonia''s constant teasing pushes you over the edge, and you orgasm loudly when she licks your clit again.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', -5, 'lesbian'
-				'Sonia grins at you and asks playfully: "Did you like my tongue on your pussy, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+				'Sonia grins at you and asks playfully, "Did you like my tongue on your pussy, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 				'"Absolutely!" you nod. "Come on, let me do the same for you! I want to taste you too!"'
-				'"I can''t right now, my mother is waiting for me at home", Sonia says wistfully. "Maybe next time?"'
+				'"I can''t right now, my mother is waiting for me at home," Sonia says wistfully. "Maybe next time?"'
 				'Sonia kisses you again, and you taste yourself on her lips. Mmmm... next time you really want to get a taste of her too!'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -298,11 +298,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'serg_sex':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/vanna/gr/ev1_1_'+rand(1,5)+'.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	'"Sure, I bet Sergey would love having an extra girl around when he fucks me!" she grins. "Come on!"'
-	'You follow her into his room, and she was right; Sergey loves the idea! Sonia eagerly begins to suck his cock, and then offers it to you after a while: "Come on, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Get to work!"'
-	'Sonia notices your hesitance and puts her hand behind your head, gently but firmly guiding your head to his cock. "Go on, you''ll love it! I''ll help!"'
-	'You lick the shaft first, and then take the head of his cock in your mouth. Sonia gently strokes your hair, whispering encouraging words into your ear while you try to take more and more of his length inside your mouth. From time to time she assists you quite actively, sucking the head of his cock while you lick his balls, or licking one side of the shaft while you lick the other. At one point, you''re even trying to kiss one another with Sergey''s cock between your mouths!'
+	'You follow her into his room, and she was right; Sergey loves the idea! Sonia eagerly begins to suck his cock and then offers it to you after a while. "Come on, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Get to work!"'
+	'Sonia notices your hesitance and puts her hand behind your head, gently but firmly guiding it to his cock. "Go on, you''ll love it! I''ll help!"'
+	'You lick the shaft first and then take the head of his cock in your mouth. Sonia gently strokes your hair, whispering encouraging words into your ear while you try to take more and more of his length inside your mouth. From time to time, she assists you quite actively, sucking the head of his cock while you lick his balls or licking one side of the shaft while you lick the other. At one point, you''re even trying to kiss one another with Sergey''s cock between your mouths!'
 	'You manage to take most of him in, but you have to yield and pull away before your gag reflex takes over. Sonia and Sergey both smile at you proudly, that was great!'
-	'"Wow, <<$pcs_nickname>>", Sonia says with some admiration in her voice, "I thought I was good with my mouth, but you sure look like you could teach me a thing or two!"'
+	'"Wow, <<$pcs_nickname>>," Sonia says with some admiration in her voice, "I thought I was good with my mouth, but you sure look like you could teach me a thing or two!"'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat', 'group'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue':
@@ -312,8 +312,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'serg_sex':
 		'Sergey seems to have made his choice; he wants to fuck you first. He moves up behind you and rubs his hard cock against your pussy lips; the wetness of them combined with his precum make it feel very nice.'
 		'Sonia just watches as Sergey slowly pushes his dick further and further inside of you, idly rubbing her clit and massaging her boobs. Your pussy feels quite full when Sergey is all the way in, but it''s a good kind of full. A nice kind of full. Maybe you should visit Sergey more often...'
 		'When he slowly begins to thrust his cock in and out of you, you open your mouth and let out a soft moan. Sonia sees this as an invitation and grabs your hair, as she rubs her pussy against your lips eagerly. Her actions are making it perfectly clear: you''re supposed to service her with your mouth while you get fucked.'
-		'You do what is expected of you, and lick Sonia''s pussy as best you can. It''s fairly difficult, with Sergey fucking from behind at the same time, but you notice her breathing quickening and her biting her lip while she looks down at you. She looks rather cute when she''s squirming.'
-		'"Enjoying yourself over there, Sonia?" you teasingly ask between moans. Sonia grins mischievously, and punishes you by grabbing a firmer hold on your hair and roughly grinding her pussy against your mouth.'
+		'You do what is expected of you and lick Sonia''s pussy as best you can. It''s fairly difficult with Sergey fucking from behind at the same time, but you notice her breathing quickening and her biting her lip while she looks down at you. She looks rather cute when she''s squirming.'
+		'"Enjoying yourself over there, Sonia?" you teasingly ask between moans. Sonia grins mischievously and punishes you by grabbing a firmer hold on your hair and roughly grinding her pussy against your mouth.'
 		'Then Sergey decides it''s Sonia''s turn, and he makes her lie down on her back.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -5, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'group'
@@ -328,11 +328,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'serg_sex':
 			'You have a devious grin on your face when you see Sonia in her current position. She forced you to lick her when Sergey fucked you... well, two can play that game!'
 			'Sergey groans as he enters Sonia, the wetness of her pussy definitely easing his access to her. You must''ve done a good job with your mouth, getting her that worked up.'
 			'"Your turn to service me, dear..." you smirk, right before you lower your hips over Sonia''s mouth before she can protest.'
-			'Sonia is too enthralled by the large dick fucking her snatch, and mostly just moans and groans into your pussy when you grind your groin against her face.'
-			'Sergey is railing her quite roughly now, and since Sonia is not doing a good job of pleasing you, you encourage him: "Fuck that pussy, Sergey! No need to hold back on this whore''s slit, she can take it! Pleasing you is what she''s made for!"'
-			'Suddenly Sonia becomes far more eager to please you, and you feel her tongue actively rubbing against your clit. You smirk when you realize why; Sonia must understand that you''re the reason why Sergey is fucking her so roughly, and is trying to please you so you''ll choose her side again.'
+			'Sonia is too enthralled by the large dick fucking her snatch and mostly just moans and groans into your pussy when you grind your groin against her face.'
+			'Sergey is railing her quite roughly now, and since Sonia is not doing a good job of pleasing you, you encourage him. "Fuck that pussy, Sergey! No need to hold back on this whore''s slit, she can take it! Pleasing you is what she''s made for!"'
+			'Suddenly, Sonia becomes far more eager to please you, and you feel her tongue actively rubbing against your clit. You smirk when you realize why; Sonia must understand that you''re the reason why Sergey is fucking her so roughly and must be trying to please you so you''ll choose her side again.'
 			$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-			$orgasm_txt = 'She does such a good job, she brings you to an orgasm before you can stop her. You loudly groan and your body trembles over hers, causing Sergey to give you some confused looks.'
+			$orgasm_txt = 'She does such a good job she brings you to an orgasm before you can stop her. You loudly groan, and your body trembles over hers, causing Sergey to give you some confused looks.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian', 'dom', 'group'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Continue':
@@ -343,10 +343,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'serg_sex':
 				pcs_hairbsh = 0
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/vanna/gr/ev1_4_'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'When Sergey is close to his orgasm, he stops fucking Sonia and orders the both of you to get down on your knees before him. Sergey readily puts his cock into Sonia''s mouth, and roars loudly as he drops his hot load of sperm onto her tongue.'
+				'When Sergey is close to his orgasm, he stops fucking Sonia and orders the both of you to get down on your knees before him. Sergey readily puts his cock into Sonia''s mouth and roars loudly as he drops his hot load of sperm onto her tongue.'
 				'Sonia swallows some of it, while you lick the sperm that she didn''t manage to swallow from Sergey''s cock and balls after he pulls out of Sonia''s mouth.'
 				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you horny minx!" Sonia exclaims. "I didn''t know you were such a slut for cum!"'
-				'You take Sergey''s cock in your hand and gently rub it, trying to milk the last bits of sperm out of him. Sonia kisses you greedily, and you taste Sergey''s sperm on her tongue when she does. When she breaks off the kiss, you lick her cheek. "Just cleaning up your face, you had some sperm there", you wink at her.'
+				'You take Sergey''s cock in your hand and gently rub it, trying to milk the last bits of sperm out of him. Sonia kisses you greedily, and you taste Sergey''s sperm on her tongue when she does. When she breaks off the kiss, you lick her cheek. "Just cleaning up your face, you had some sperm there," you wink at her.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Finish': gt'shulgahall'