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[text edit] fix typos in tour_guide

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locations/tour_guide.qsrc

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tourstart':
 		'You see an ad posted in the park for summer only tour guides needed and decide to inquire about it at an office outside the old Imperial Palace.'
 		*nl
 		'You answer a few questions the management team asks you and are offered a summer position at 100 <b>₽</b> an hour, 6 hours a day. Fresh uniforms are provided daily and training will be you shadowing another guide for the first couple of days to make sure you know the details required to lead your groups.'
-		'Like any teenager your only questions are about breaks and days off. The manager smiles, not suprised, and tells you that working is voluntary. If you do not show up then obviously you will not make any money that day, but otherwise no daily commitment is required from you. Breaks will be allowed if there are no groups to lead at that time and you will be given a small lunch everyday that you choose to work.'
+		'Like any teenager your only questions are about breaks and days off. The manager smiles, not surprised, and tells you that working is voluntary. If you do not show up then obviously you will not make any money that day, but otherwise no daily commitment is required from you. Breaks will be allowed if there are no groups to lead at that time and you will be given a small lunch everyday that you choose to work.'
 		act 'Accept the position':TourGuide = 1 & work = 1 & gt 'pav_park', 'start'
 		act 'Change your mind': gt 'pav_park', 'start'
 	elseif TourGuide = 1:
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tourran2':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><h2>Imperial Palace</h2></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/palace/pav_palace.jpg"></center>'
-	'Your group this time is a bunch of jocks who do not seem all that interested in the tour. They spent a lot of their time talking to each other and mostly ignoring your comments on the history they were supposed to be there to learn about.'
+	'Your group this time is a bunch of jocks who do not seem all that interested in the tour. They spend a lot of their time talking to each other and mostly ignoring your comments on the history they were supposed to be there to learn about.'
 	*nl
 	'You get really tired of being ignored and finally ask them why they came. "Coach made us," one of them says. "Then he bailed and went back to the hotel to chase maids, probably. As soon as this is done we are going to the beach." The rest of them cheer, obviously looking forward to it.'
 	'You think about it a minute, and realize that since there are so many groups and a lot of tour guides employed nobody would actually miss your group if it went missing for an hour or two. You also know a quiet, out of sight stretch of river nobody would find you.'
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tourran2':
 				persuas_exp += rand(1,2)
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/lake.summer.jpg"></center>'
-				'You tell the group to follow you as you slip into the trees and down to the river spot you decided would be a good place to swim without interuption. Since they planned to go swimming after the tour they already have swim trunks on and jump straight in once you get there.'
+				'You tell the group to follow you as you slip into the trees and down to the river spot you decided would be a good place to swim without interruption. Since they planned to go swimming after the tour they already have swim trunks on and jump straight in once you get there.'
 				if exhibitionist_lvl > 1:
 					'As you watch them jump around, half-naked, you feel a strong desire to join them. Since you are wearing your tour guide outfit, doing so will mean going in completely nude, just going in your underwear would mean wet spots on your uniform. Management would definitely notice and question you about it. You could even have some fun with the boys, if you wanted to.'
 					act 'Hang out nude': gt 'tour_guide', 'rivernude'
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tourran3':
 	menu_off = 1
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/palace/palace_garden.jpg"></center>'
-	'You end up with a group that has several small children. When taking them through some of the gardens a couple kids break loose from their parents and run through some of the flower beds. The parents run after them, grab them, and bring them back to the group, faces red with embarressment.'
+	'You end up with a group that has several small children. When taking them through some of the gardens a couple kids break loose from their parents and run through some of the flower beds. The parents run after them, grab them, and bring them back to the group, faces red with embarrassment.'
 	observ_exp += rand(0,1)
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue with the tour': gt 'tour_guide', 'toursdone'
@@ -148,16 +148,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'riverbate':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/palace/river/river_bate1.jpg"></center>'
 	'"No touching," you giggle, before heading back to the riverbank. Going down on your knees facing away, you push your butt into the air to give them a good view. Reaching between your legs, you start rubbing yourself, while looking over your shoulder at the guys.'
-	'Most of them have pulled out their dicks and are stroking themselves, watching you intently. They unconciously move closer to the riverbank, for a better view, and stop pretty close to you.'
+	'Most of them have pulled out their dicks and are stroking themselves, watching you intently. They unconsciously move closer to the riverbank, for a better view, and stop pretty close to you.'
 	'The sight of that many guys masturbating as they watch you gets you very wet, and it isn''t long before you''re moaning and grinding against your hand. The boys are jerking themselves faster now, a few are starting to make funny faces as they reach their limits.'
 	'"You can cum on me, just keep it away from my face," you say sweetly. It does not take long before the first guy pops, shooting his cum onto your back. Several more erupt, and your back and butt get really warm.'
 	$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-	$orgasm_txt = 'All the sensations and sights of the guys cuming on you sets your own orgasm off, leaving you gasping for breath, and your legs shaking.'
+	$orgasm_txt = 'All the sensations and sights of the guys cumming on you sets your own orgasm off, leaving you gasping for breath, and your legs shaking.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 3, 'exhibitionism'
 	pcs_horny += 25
 	gs 'stat'
 	'Once your body settles down, you slip back into the water and wipe the cum off. Most of the guys have pulled their shorts up and are back to splashing around in the water, though a few are still hanging out nearby, hoping you will let them do more.'
-	'You know you have been gone from work too long, any longer and someone will most likely realize your missing. The thought of letting them have their way with you is pretty damn tempting, though.'
+	'You know you have been gone from work too long, any longer and someone will most likely realize you''re missing. The thought of letting them have their way with you is pretty damn tempting, though.'
 	act 'Give in to your desires': gt 'tour_guide', 'riverseduce2'
 	act 'Alright boys, I have to get back to work':
 		gs 'underwear', 'wear'
@@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'riverseduce1':
 	rivermissed = rand (1,10)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/secluded_beach/voyeurism/voyeurism_start_event_<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
 	'You wait until the one you think is cute looks at you, then subtly motion him to follow. You casually walk around a bend in the river, out of sight of the others, and wait for him. He follows casually, unnoticed by the others.'
-	'He walks up to you and starts to kiss you, making you melt, hungry for more. He drops his shorts and lays in the sand, while you start kissing your way down his body, until you reach his dick. You start by licking the tip, drawing out a few soft moans from him, before taking his head into your mouth.'
+	'He walks up to you and starts to kiss you, making you melt, hungry for more. He drops his shorts and lies in the sand, while you start kissing your way down his body, until you reach his dick. You start by licking the tip, drawing out a few soft moans from him, before taking his head into your mouth.'
 	'You take your time, sucking softly and working your tongue around, slowly bobbing your head lower and lower, until you get about halfway. Taking a deep breath through your nose, you shove the cock down your throat as much as you can.'
 	'Gagging on his cock, drool escaping your lips, you keep bobbing up and down until you decide it is time to mount him. Letting his cock out of your mouth with a POP, you tell him your almost ready for a pounding.'
 	if vibratorIN = 1:
@@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'riverseduce2':
 	cla & *clr
 	rivermissed = rand (1,10)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex16.jpg"></center>'
-	+$OpenInnerThought+'"Fuck it, I will just say I was in the restroom, or something,"'+$CloseInnerThought+' you tell yourself. Motioning to the nearest guy, you lay on your back, and call out to the rest of the guys, "Come fuck me! Just don''t cum inside or on my face."'
+	+$OpenInnerThought+'"Fuck it, I will just say I was in the restroom, or something,"'+$CloseInnerThought+' you tell yourself. Motioning to the nearest guy, you lie on your back, and call out to the rest of the guys, "Come fuck me! Just don''t cum inside or on my face."'
 	if vibratorIN = 1:
 		vibratorIN = 0
 		vibratorOUT = 1
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'riverseduce2':
 	'The guys are all hard again, and closing in on you, eager looks on their faces. The guy you motioned to first is already between your legs, promising not to cum inside you as he starts to slide into your still wet snatch.'
 	if pcs_vag = 0: 'As he pushes in you feel something inside of you rip. You know it was your hymen, you are no longer a virgin.'
 	'He starts pumping as the next guy reaches you, you motion him closer and wrap your lips around his dick, as the rest of them crowd around you. He doesn''t last long though, and shoots his seed down your throat before jumping out of the way.'
-	'The guy between your legs stands up and pushes his cock inbetween your lips, as another one dives between your legs. He was already close, so he cums almost right away, giving you a moment to breathe and swallow before the next guy jumps in.'
+	'The guy between your legs stands up and pushes his cock in between your lips, as another one dives between your legs. He was already close, so he cums almost right away, giving you a moment to breathe and swallow before the next guy jumps in.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10,'rough', 'gangbang'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', -10, 'deepthroat', 'gangbang'
 	gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Rowdy guy', rand(18,30)
@@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'riverclean':
 		$start_text = 'You have no idea what your boss would do if he caught you doing this stuff, during your shift.'
 	end
 	'You go back into the water again to wash off the cum, feeling guilty, certain if you don''t hurry someone will decide to come looking for you.'
-	'The palace grounds are big, but you would rather avoid that situation entirely.<<$start_text>>'
+	'The palace grounds are big, but you would rather avoid that situation entirely. <<$start_text>>'
 	if vibratorOUT = 1:
 		vibratorIN = 1
 		vibratorOUT = 0
@@ -295,10 +295,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toursdone':
 		'As you walk into the office, your boss is waiting for you. One look at his face and your heart sinks, you were noticed missing again. He motions you to follow him into the back room.'
 		act 'Follow him': gt 'tour_guide', 'backroom'
 	elseif rivermissed >= 6 and riverbusted = 0 and pav_slut > 100:
-		'Walking into the tour office, you find your boss waiting for you. "Follow me, <<$pcs_firstname>>," he say with an unpleasant look on his face, and heads to a room way in the back.'
+		'Walking into the tour office, you find your boss waiting for you. "Follow me, <<$pcs_firstname>>," he says with an unpleasant look on his face, and heads to a room way in the back.'
 		act 'Follow him': gt 'tour_guide', 'backroom'
 	elseif rivermissed >= 8 and riverbusted = 0 and pav_slut < 100:
-		'Walking into the tour office, you find your boss waiting for you. "Follow me, <<$pcs_firstname>>," he say with an unpleasant look on his face, and heads to a room way in the back.'
+		'Walking into the tour office, you find your boss waiting for you. "Follow me, <<$pcs_firstname>>," he says with an unpleasant look on his face, and heads to a room way in the back.'
 		act 'Follow him': gt 'tour_guide', 'backroom'
 	else
 		act 'Done for the day': gt 'pav_park', 'start'
@@ -383,9 +383,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spank':
 		gs 'stat'
 	elseif riverbusted = 1:
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/palace/office/office_spank2.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You strip out of your clothes slowly, not wanting to face this, but he starts getting annoyed and snaps at you to hurry up. Once your naked, he instructs you to assume the lunge position, hands and feet out wide, ass in the air.'
-		'He pulls out a long leather strap, lines himself up, and starts swinging. Since it is your second offense, he doesn''t hold back at all; Each hit literally forces a scream from your mouth and tears from your eyes.'
-		'It seems to go on forever, you have long since lost count, and you suspect he has too. Everytime you flinch away from a hit just before he lands it, he pulls back, orders you back into position, and informs you you get one extra for doing it.'
+		'You strip out of your clothes slowly, not wanting to face this, but he starts getting annoyed and snaps at you to hurry up. Once you''re naked, he instructs you to assume the lunge position, hands and feet out wide, ass in the air.'
+		'He pulls out a long leather strap, lines himself up, and starts swinging. Since it is your second offense, he doesn''t hold back at all; each hit literally forces a scream from your mouth and tears from your eyes.'
+		'It seems to go on forever, you have long since lost count, and you suspect he has too. Every time you flinch away from a hit just before he lands it, he pulls back, orders you back into position, and informs you you get one extra for doing it.'
 		'When it does finally end, you collapse to the ground and just cry, you never expected a spanking could hurt this bad. He gives you a moment to collect yourself, then tells you to get dressed and get out.'
 		pcs_mood -= 15
 		gs 'pain', 5, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
@@ -394,8 +394,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spank':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/palace/office/office_spank1.jpg"></center>'
 		'You drop your shorts, pull down your underwear, and bend over the desk. He pulls out a long, bendy looking cane and tells you if you move you will get extra lashes.'
 		'You resolve to hold your position as best you can, though the thought of what''s coming is terrifying. You grip the edges of the desk to help keep yourself in one place.'
-		'The first hit still catches you offguard, making you cry out, though it doesn''t sting as badly as you expected. At least not right away.'
-		'By the fourth smack you could feel each mark on your butt, and tears were definitely in your eyes. By the tenth you were bawling like a child and screaming with each swat he lands.'
+		'The first hit still catches you off-guard, making you cry out, though it doesn''t sting as badly as you expected. At least not right away.'
+		'By the fourth smack you can feel each mark on your butt, and tears are definitely in your eyes. By the tenth you are bawling like a child and screaming with each swat he lands.'
 		'After your 15th, he says he is done. "Let that be a lesson, <<$pcs_firstname>>. If this has to happen again, it will be a lot worse." You can barely imagine worse, as you try and pull your underwear back up, fingers trembling.'
 		pcs_mood -= 10
 		gs 'pain', 3, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
@@ -427,7 +427,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'after_spank':
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/palace/office/after_spank1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You go into the changing room and check the marks on your butt while taking off your uniform. They sting pretty badly, and you hope you wont find out how much worse it can get.'
+		'You go into the changing room and check the marks on your butt while taking off your uniform. They sting pretty badly, and you hope you won''t find out how much worse it can get.'
 		riverbusted = 1
 		if pcs_makeup > 1:
 			pcs_makeup = 0