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[text edit] clean up telefon

Spackled Lanturn преди 3 години
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променени са 1 файла, в които са добавени 8 реда и са изтрити 8 реда
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      locations/telefon.qsrc

+ 8 - 8
locations/telefon.qsrc

@@ -1001,8 +1001,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lover' and loverGender[ARGS[1]] = 0:
 						loverlove[lover_number] = 1
 
 						'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>, "This is wonderful! We have to celebrate!"'
-						'You start talking about living together. <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> tells you that he is not against it in principle, but first he wants you to meet his parents.'
-						'He warns you that his mother is very demanding and rigorous. <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says that he loves his mother and does not want to upset her. Therefore, you must look gorgeous, wear a dress from a boutique, have well-groomed and curled hair and makeup in moderation.'
+						'You start talking about living together. <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> tells you that he is not against it on principle, but first he wants you to meet his parents.'
+						'He warns you that his mother is very demanding and rigorous. <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says that he loves his mother and does not want to upset her. Therefore, you must look gorgeous, wear a dress from a boutique, and have well-groomed and curled hair and makeup in moderation.'
 						'When you are totally ready <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> will take you to his parents.'
 
 						act 'Hang up':gt 'telefon', 'fin'
@@ -1039,7 +1039,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lover' and loverGender[ARGS[1]] = 0:
 				elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 2:
 
 					pregtalk = 0
-					'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>, "What? You whore! Someone fucked your pussy and now you drop it on me. You''re dumped.'
+					'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>, "What? You whore! Someone fucked your pussy, and now you drop it on me. You''re dumped.'
 					gs 'lover', 'remove', lover_number
 
 					act 'Hang up':gt 'telefon', 'fin'
@@ -1050,7 +1050,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lover' and loverGender[ARGS[1]] = 0:
 				cla
 				loverrelation[lover_number] = 0
 				'"Honey, I''m pregnant with your child."'
-				'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>, "How the fuck did I manage that? Unless I own a time-machine and went back to before we met and fucked you, it''s someone elses, go and tell him. I don''t want to see you again, goodbye."'
+				'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>, "How the fuck did I manage that? Unless I own a time-machine and went back to before we met and fucked you, it''s someone else''s, go and tell him. I don''t want to see you again, goodbye."'
 
 				act 'Hang up.':gt 'telefon', 'fin'
 			end
@@ -1239,8 +1239,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Phone_notebook':
 			$calendarday += $list + 'Working as a seamstress. '
 			if age < 18:$calendarday += '<i>(16:00 - 20:00)</i>' else $calendarday += '<i>(8:00 - 16:00)</i>'
 		end
-		if w1 > 1 and w1 <= 5 and workhosp = 1:$calendarday += $list + 'Working as nurse. <i>(8:00 - 16:00)</i>'
-		if worksalon = 1 and (w1 = 1 or w1 = 3 or w1 = 5):$calendarday += $list + 'Working as masseuse. <i>(9:00 - 17:00)</i>'
+		if w1 > 1 and w1 <= 5 and workhosp = 1:$calendarday += $list + 'Working as a nurse. <i>(8:00 - 16:00)</i>'
+		if worksalon = 1 and (w1 = 1 or w1 = 3 or w1 = 5):$calendarday += $list + 'Working as a masseuse. <i>(9:00 - 17:00)</i>'
 !!		if maidqw > 0:$calendarday += '<br>&emsp;<b>•</b> Working as maid. <i>(16:00 - 19:00)</i>'
 		if pfilmday[i] > 0:$calendarday += $list + 'Porn shoot: <i><<$porndesc[pfilmday[i]]>></i>'
 		if d1 = 25 and (BurgerQW['Secretary'] = 1 or workKafe = 1 or workhosp = 1 or worksalon = 1 or tanwork = 1 or workSec = 1 or workFabrika = 1):$calendarday += $list + '<i>Pay day!</i>'
@@ -1252,7 +1252,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Phone_notebook':
 				$calendarday += $list + '<font color="orange">Anya having sex with Roma at 18:00</font>'
 			end
 		end
-		if sisboyparty = 2 and sisboyparty_day+1 = daynum:$calendarday += $list + '<font color="orange">Party at Rex, gathering before 18:00 at Community Center</font>'
+		if sisboyparty = 2 and sisboyparty_day+1 = daynum:$calendarday += $list + '<font color="orange">Party at Rex''s, gathering before 18:00 at Community Center</font>'
 		if rent1 = 0:$calendarday += $list + 'Rent on city apartment expires!'
 		if rent4 = 0:$calendarday += $list + 'Rent on Pushkin apartment expires!'
 		if birthday = d1 and birthmonth = m1:$calendarday += $list + 'My birthday!'
@@ -1890,7 +1890,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Phone_menu':
 		end
 		dynamic $telefon['print']
 	else
-		'<font color="red"><b>Your Phone is disabled for this event</b></font>'
+		'<font color="red"><b>Your phone is disabled for this event</b></font>'
 	end
 end &! --- Phone_menu ---