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[text edit] clean up bouling

Spackled Lanturn 3 tahun lalu
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1 mengubah file dengan 6 tambahan dan 6 penghapusan
  1. 6 6
      locations/bouling.qsrc

+ 6 - 6
locations/bouling.qsrc

@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 				end
 			elseif boulrand = 1:
 				killvar 'boulrand'
-				'You meet two girls and they suggest challenging two guys to a game: Prize 5000 <b>₽</b>, lose and they have sex with you.'
+				'You meet two girls, and they suggest challenging two guys to a game: Prize 5000 <b>₽</b>, lose and they have sex with you.'
 				act 'Play':boulvar = 2 & gt 'bouling', 'randwin'
 				gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'hard'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -86,22 +86,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'randwin':
 
 	if boulwin > 10 and boulvar = 0:
 		money += 300
-		'You won and received 300 <b>₽</b>.'
+		'You win and receive 300 <b>₽</b>.'
 
 		act 'Leave': gt 'bouling'
 	elseif boulwin > 10 and boulvar = 1:
 		money += 2000
-		'You won and received 2,000 <b>₽</b>.'
+		'You win and receive 2,000 <b>₽</b>.'
 
 		act 'Leave': gt 'bouling'
 	elseif boulwin > 10 and boulvar = 2:
 		money += 5000
-		'You won and received 5,000 <b>₽</b>.'
+		'You win and receive 5,000 <b>₽</b>.'
 
 		act 'Leave': gt 'bouling'
 	elseif boulwin <= 10 and boulvar = 0:
 		money -= 300
-		'You lost and paid 300 <b>₽</b>.'
+		'You lose and pay 300 <b>₽</b>.'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'bouling'
 	elseif boulwin <= 10 and boulvar = 1:
 		picrand = 14
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'randwin':
 			end
 			act 'Pay': money -= 2000 & gt 'bouling'
 		else
-			'You lost, but you do not have money to pay, only one thing for it.'
+			'You lose, but you do not have enough money to pay. Only one thing for it.'
 
 			act 'Offer sex instead':xgt 'sexdvoe', 'var'
 		end