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[text edit] clean up shop_fashionista

Spackled Lanturn 3 năm trước cách đây
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      locations/shop_fashionista.qsrc

+ 8 - 8
locations/shop_fashionista.qsrc

@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 	
 	
 	*clr & cla
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/changingroom.jpg"</center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/changingroom.jpg"</center>'
-	'As you walk through the store you notice that there''s nobody in the changing rooms. Feeling a bit bored you go look at some clothes and grab several items to try on before heading into one of the changing rooms.'
+	'As you walk through the store you notice that there''s nobody in the changing rooms. Feeling a bit bored, you go look at some clothes and grab several items to try on before heading into one of the changing rooms.'
 	
 	
 	if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 	if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 		act 'Try on clothes': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'dressingclothes'
 		act 'Try on clothes': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'dressingclothes'
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 			if NatbelQW['seethrough'] = 0 and NatbelQW['QWstage'] > 5 and NatbelQW['underwearShop'] = 0:
 			if NatbelQW['seethrough'] = 0 and NatbelQW['QWstage'] > 5 and NatbelQW['underwearShop'] = 0:
 				*clr & cla
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/nude.jpg"</center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/nude.jpg"</center>'
-				'As you try on a particularly spicy set of seethrough underwear you notice that it doesn''t quite fit you.'
+				'As you try on a particularly spicy set of see-through underwear, you notice that it doesn''t quite fit you.'
 				'"This should fit Natasha perfectly though. And it only costs 750 <b>₽</b>." You think to yourself, imagining the look on her face if you make her wear it.'
 				'"This should fit Natasha perfectly though. And it only costs 750 <b>₽</b>." You think to yourself, imagining the look on her face if you make her wear it.'
 				act 'Buy it':
 				act 'Buy it':
 					*clr & cla
 					*clr & cla
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 					'You put the underwear aside for now so that you can take it to the register with you.'
 					'You put the underwear aside for now so that you can take it to the register with you.'
 					money -= 750
 					money -= 750
 					NatbelQW['seethrough'] = 1
 					NatbelQW['seethrough'] = 1
-					act 'Stay in the changingroom': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
+					act 'Stay in the changing room': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
 					act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 					act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 				end			
 				end			
 				act 'Don''t buy it':
 				act 'Don''t buy it':
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/nude.jpg"</center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/nude.jpg"</center>'
 					'Deciding against it, you look through the rest of the underwear for something that would fit you better.'
 					'Deciding against it, you look through the rest of the underwear for something that would fit you better.'
 					NatbelQW['underwearShop'] = 1
 					NatbelQW['underwearShop'] = 1
-					act 'Stay in the changingroom': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
+					act 'Stay in the changing room': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
 					act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 					act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 				end
 				end
 			else
 			else
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 			*clr & cla
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/dressed.jpg"</center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/dressed.jpg"</center>'
 			gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
 			gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
-			act 'Stay in the changingroom': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
+			act 'Stay in the changing room': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
 			act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 			act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 		end
 		end
 	end
 	end
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 			*clr & cla
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/underwear.jpg"</center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/underwear.jpg"</center>'
 			gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 			gs 'clothing', 'strip'
-			act 'Stay in the changingroom': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
+			act 'Stay in the changing room': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
 			act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 			act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 		end
 		end
 	end
 	end
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 			*clr & cla
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/underwear.jpg"</center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/underwear.jpg"</center>'
 			gs 'underwear', 'wear'
 			gs 'underwear', 'wear'
-			act 'Stay in the changingroom': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
+			act 'Stay in the changing room': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
 			act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 			act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 		end
 		end
 	end
 	end
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/nude.jpg"</center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/nude.jpg"</center>'
 			gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 			gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 			gs 'underwear', 'remove'
 			gs 'underwear', 'remove'
-			act 'Stay in the changingroom': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
+			act 'Stay in the changing room': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
 			act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 			act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 		end
 		end
 	end
 	end