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[text edit] clean up sexdvoe

Spackled Lanturn 3 年之前
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共有 1 个文件被更改,包括 5 次插入5 次删除
  1. 5 5
      locations/sexdvoe.qsrc

+ 5 - 5
locations/sexdvoe.qsrc

@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'var':
 	sexstart = 1
 	sexvar = rand(3,6)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexdvoe/kiss.jpg"></center>'
-	'After some kissing it is time to move on to the next stage.'
+	'After some kissing, it is time to move on to the next stage.'
 	xgt 'sexdvoe', 'menu'
 end
 
@@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 		else 
 			if $knownboy[1] = 1:gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy[1], 1 else gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy[1]
 		end
-		'With a groan they both cum, mostly in your mouth, but it may have gotten on your face too.'
+		'With a groan, they both cum, mostly in your mouth, but some may have gotten on your face too.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -298,7 +298,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 			gs 'stat'
 			
 		else
-			'They both groan, and you feel as <<$boydesc[0]>> pump your pussy full of his seed, while <<$boydesc[1]>>''s semen is released in your ass.'
+			'They both groan, and you feel <<$boydesc[0]>> pump your pussy full of his seed, while <<$boydesc[1]>>''s semen is released in your ass.'
 			
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 			gs 'stat'
 			
 		else
-			'They both groan, and you feel as <<$boydesc[1]>> pump your pussy full of his seed, while <<$boydesc[0]>>''s semen is released in your ass.'
+			'They both groan, and you feel <<$boydesc[1]>> pump your pussy full of his seed, while <<$boydesc[0]>>''s semen is released in your ass.'
 			
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -390,7 +390,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	end
 
-	if picrand = 29:'When it ends boss says that you did well and today you are free and can go.'
+	if picrand = 29:'When it ends, boss says that you did well and today you are free and can go.'
 	if picrand = 39:'Then <<$boydescA>> throws you out of the apartment.'
 	killvar 'knownboy'
 	killvar 'knwn'