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  1. 1 1
      locations/BDSM_training.qsrc
  2. 1 1
      locations/BurgerTip.qsrc
  3. 3 3
      locations/FedorEv2.qsrc
  4. 7 7
      locations/FedorEv4.qsrc
  5. 2 2
      locations/FedorMisc.qsrc
  6. 2 2
      locations/MeynoldHome.qsrc
  7. 6 6
      locations/NikoDates.qsrc
  8. 2 2
      locations/NikoDreams.qsrc
  9. 1 1
      locations/NikoEv2.qsrc
  10. 2 2
      locations/NikoMeyHome.qsrc
  11. 5 5
      locations/NikoPayback.qsrc
  12. 3 3
      locations/NikoWhore.qsrc
  13. 1 1
      locations/albinahome.qsrc
  14. 2 2
      locations/andrey.qsrc
  15. 3 3
      locations/brothel.qsrc
  16. 1 1
      locations/city_clinic.qsrc
  17. 1 1
      locations/dimaEv.qsrc
  18. 2 2
      locations/dimaRevenge.qsrc
  19. 3 3
      locations/dimalina.qsrc
  20. 1 1
      locations/dom_gor.qsrc
  21. 1 1
      locations/ender.qsrc
  22. 1 1
      locations/gadprostitutes.qsrc
  23. 1 1
      locations/gadukino.qsrc
  24. 1 1
      locations/gdksex.qsrc
  25. 2 2
      locations/gschool_chats1.qsrc
  26. 1 1
      locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc
  27. 1 1
      locations/gschool_lessonsev3.qsrc
  28. 1 1
      locations/gschool_socialchg1.qsrc
  29. 6 6
      locations/hunterLoveSex.qsrc
  30. 17 17
      locations/katjaEv.qsrc
  31. 1 1
      locations/kuhr.qsrc
  32. 1 1
      locations/kuhr2x.qsrc
  33. 1 1
      locations/lesbimistress.qsrc
  34. 1 1
      locations/love.qsrc
  35. 1 1
      locations/mirafather.qsrc
  36. 3 3
      locations/mitkabuh.qsrc
  37. 1 1
      locations/pav_clinic.qsrc
  38. 3 3
      locations/pav_complexrolan.qsrc
  39. 1 1
      locations/pav_library.qsrc
  40. 1 1
      locations/police_station.qsrc
  41. 3 3
      locations/preNT.qsrc
  42. 1 1
      locations/shoplifting.qsrc
  43. 1 1
      locations/sitr.qsrc
  44. 1 1
      locations/sitr2x.qsrc
  45. 5 5
      locations/street_walker.qsrc
  46. 6 6
      locations/tatiana_missions.qsrc

+ 1 - 1
locations/BDSM_training.qsrc

@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 					'You are shaking, ready to cum, but Mistress knows her stuff, she doesn''t allow you to reach the peak, masterfully holding you on the crest of a wave.'
 					'"Mistress, PL... , please, let me cum!" You barely squeeze out, almost biting your tongue.'
 					'"I didn''t catch that." Mistress pretends.'
-					'"Please...you must...let me CUM!'
+					'"Please... you must... let me CUM!'
 					'"Too soon!"'
 					'Mistress withdraws her hand. You look at it, like a child, who was given candy, only to have it taken away. Unable to tolerate it, you reach a hand to your crotch.'
 					'No!'

+ 1 - 1
locations/BurgerTip.qsrc

@@ -268,7 +268,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 					if BurgerQW['sergeyQW'] = 1:
 						'The pimply young man chuckles, and sits on the edge of your desk. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re dynamite. We are very lucky to have a girl like you around," he says, leering at you.'
 					elseif BurgerQW['sergeyQW'] = 0:
-						'The pimply young man chuckles, and sits on the edge of your desk. "<<$pcs_nickname>> you seem like such a cool girl, do you think...I mean would you like, to go out with me after work?"'
+						'The pimply young man chuckles, and sits on the edge of your desk. "<<$pcs_nickname>> you seem like such a cool girl, do you think... I mean would you like, to go out with me after work?"'
 
 						act 'Eww, no way!':
 							*clr&cla

+ 3 - 3
locations/FedorEv2.qsrc

@@ -457,7 +457,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Virgin Sex':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/virgintalk.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Fedor...This is my first time" you tell Fedor and he responds with a puzzled look "First time?... ohh you mean... I see..." Fedor lightly bites his lip and asks "<<$pcs_firstname>>, Will you let me be your first?...I promise I will take it slow and be as gentle as possible but if you aren''t ready we could try another position" he asks while gently rubbing your legs.'
+	'"Fedor... This is my first time" you tell Fedor and he responds with a puzzled look "First time?... ohh you mean... I see..." Fedor lightly bites his lip and asks "<<$pcs_firstname>>, Will you let me be your first?...I promise I will take it slow and be as gentle as possible but if you aren''t ready we could try another position" he asks while gently rubbing your legs.'
 	
 	act 'Lose Virginity <b><h4><font color=#ff00cc>[Go steady]</font></h4></b>':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -467,7 +467,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Virgin Sex':
 		fedorKozlovQW = 20
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/virginvag.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'"It''s ok, I''m...I''m ready" you give him a sweet smile and he replies, "I''m so glad that you will let me be your first. I promise I will be gentle." you lightly grip his hand and respond, "I know I can trust you." Fedor smiles and starts rubbing his penis head against your pussy lips and after a few seconds slowly pushes his <<dick>> centimeter penis into your vagina. You feel his penis move deeper inside until it is pressing against your hymen and a second later, you feel it burst through and you can''t help but let out a loud moan when you feel your cherry get popped.'
+		'"It''s ok, I''m... I'm ready" you give him a sweet smile and he replies, "I''m so glad that you will let me be your first. I promise I will be gentle." you lightly grip his hand and respond, "I know I can trust you." Fedor smiles and starts rubbing his penis head against your pussy lips and after a few seconds slowly pushes his <<dick>> centimeter penis into your vagina. You feel his penis move deeper inside until it is pressing against your hymen and a second later, you feel it burst through and you can''t help but let out a loud moan when you feel your cherry get popped.'
 		*nl	
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
@@ -1052,7 +1052,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Breakup':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorsad.jpg"></center>'
-	'Fedor approaches you with a serious look on his face. "Look <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''ve noticed that you and I don''t seem to be progressing at all in this relationship and I feel like I would only be holding you back if I continued this, so I think we should break this off...I''m sorry that I couldn''t be the man you needed." and before you get to say a word he turns around and leaves.'
+	'Fedor approaches you with a serious look on his face. "Look <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''ve noticed that you and I don''t seem to be progressing at all in this relationship and I feel like I would only be holding you back if I continued this, so I think we should break this off... I'm sorry that I couldn''t be the man you needed." and before you get to say a word he turns around and leaves.'
 	
 	act 'Leave': gt 'pav_residential'
 end		

+ 7 - 7
locations/FedorEv4.qsrc

@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3Way':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="green"><<"Ivan Prokhorov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/ivan/ivan1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You look closely at the person in the doorway then recognize him as Ivan. You exclaim. "Fedor, Ivan is standing in the doorway!" Fedor quickly stops and turns to Ivan and says, "Ohh shit, I totally forgot that I invited Ivan to hang out with me this afternoon." Ivan approaches you casually as he says, "I could come back later if this is a bad time but I wouldn''t say no to joining in on the fun... if you don''t mind sharing, that is." Fedor responds, "Sharing? Sharing wha... ohh...I see." Fedor turns to you with a curious look on his face. "What do you think <<$pcs_firstname>>?"'
+		'You look closely at the person in the doorway then recognize him as Ivan. You exclaim. "Fedor, Ivan is standing in the doorway!" Fedor quickly stops and turns to Ivan and says, "Ohh shit, I totally forgot that I invited Ivan to hang out with me this afternoon." Ivan approaches you casually as he says, "I could come back later if this is a bad time but I wouldn''t say no to joining in on the fun... if you don''t mind sharing, that is." Fedor responds, "Sharing? Sharing wha... ohh... I see." Fedor turns to you with a curious look on his face. "What do you think <<$pcs_firstname>>?"'
 
 		act 'Invite Ivan to join':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -278,7 +278,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3way1':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/3way/bed4.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'"Cover me in your cum." you say before wrapping your lips back around Ivan''s dick as he turns to Fedor. "You heard the girl, Let''s give her some body paint." Ivan then gives him a high five as they continue spit roasting you. After a few seconds Fedor pulls out and starts covering your stomach with his seed and soon after Ivan pulls out of your mouth and immediately begins spraying his load all over you face. They both continue covering your body as you try to catch their cum with your hand then rub it all over your body. Ivan turns to Fedor. "Holy shit, <<$pcs_nickname>> is nasty...I almost envy you." as he gets out of the bed and exits the bedroom to clean up.'
+				'"Cover me in your cum." you say before wrapping your lips back around Ivan''s dick as he turns to Fedor. "You heard the girl, Let''s give her some body paint." Ivan then gives him a high five as they continue spit roasting you. After a few seconds Fedor pulls out and starts covering your stomach with his seed and soon after Ivan pulls out of your mouth and immediately begins spraying his load all over you face. They both continue covering your body as you try to catch their cum with your hand then rub it all over your body. Ivan turns to Fedor. "Holy shit, <<$pcs_nickname>> is nasty... I almost envy you." as he gets out of the bed and exits the bedroom to clean up.'
 				*nl
 				'Fedor turns to you "That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>. Maybe we can do it again sometime." You give him a mischievous smile as you respond, "Continue treating me right and I might agree to do this again." Fedor then replies, "You have yourself a deal." with a playful smile as he lifts you up and carries you to the bathroom to wash up.'
 				*nl
@@ -3164,7 +3164,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Love Talk':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/fedor.jpg"></center>'
 	'You sit down next to Fedor and ask him "You look troubled. What''s on your mind?" Fedor responds, "I''m just thinking about how much my life has changes since I met you." You respond, "Changed for the better I hope." He turns to you with a wide smile on his face "Of course. I have never been as happy as I am with you and I just needed to tell you how much you mean to me."'
 	*nl
-	'You crawl up the bed and lay down beside him and reply, "I feel the same way about you...I love you Fyodor." Fedor looks shocked for a moment then responds, "I love you too <<$pcs_firstname>>. You really mean everything to me and I never want to lose you." You respond, "You never will." as you lean forward and share a very passionate kiss with Fedor'
+	'You crawl up the bed and lay down beside him and reply, "I feel the same way about you... I love you Fyodor." Fedor looks shocked for a moment then responds, "I love you too <<$pcs_firstname>>. You really mean everything to me and I never want to lose you." You respond, "You never will." as you lean forward and share a very passionate kiss with Fedor'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/kiss.jpg"></center>'
 
@@ -3182,7 +3182,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Love Talk Strela':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/fedor.jpg"></center>'
 	'You sit down next to Fedor and ask him "You look troubled. What''s on your mind?" With a tear sliding down his cheek, Fedor responds, "I keep thinking of that day where I felt completely helpless and almost lost everything to those bastards. The thought of what might have happened if you weren''t there, chills me to my very core." You crawl forward and lay next to him "It was a crazy day and I''m glad everything worked out in the end. I would hate for something like that to happen to you because of me." Fedor places his hand on your cheek "You saved me <<$pcs_firstname>> and I will never forget it. You are everything I could ever hope for in a girl."'
 	*nl
-	'You can feel your cheeks getting flushed as you respond, "Well you''re everything I need in a man and that is why I...I love you Fyodor." Fedor looks shocked for a moment then responds, "I love you too <<$pcs_firstname>>. You really mean everything to me and I never want to lose you." You respond, "You never will." as you lean forward and share a very passionate kiss with Fedor.'
+	'You can feel your cheeks getting flushed as you respond, "Well you''re everything I need in a man and that is why I... I love you Fyodor." Fedor looks shocked for a moment then responds, "I love you too <<$pcs_firstname>>. You really mean everything to me and I never want to lose you." You respond, "You never will." as you lean forward and share a very passionate kiss with Fedor.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/kiss.jpg"></center>'
 
@@ -3335,7 +3335,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Shelter':
 	FedorShelter = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit down next to Fedor then say, "Fedor... I need your help." Fedor quickly sits up then responds, "What do you need?" you downcast your eyes then say, "My mother threw me out...of my home, and I don''t know what to do." you begin sobbing as Fedor wraps his arms around you. "That''s horrible. I bet my mother will take you in. I will speak to her the next time I see her. Don''t worry I won''t let you live on the streets." you quickly wrap your arms around Fedor''s chest then say, "Thank you so much Fedor. I am so scared." Fedor kisses you on the forehead, as he responds, "I will always be here for you <<$pcs_firstname>>, whenever you need me." you give Fedor a soft kiss then get up and say, "I''m so lucky to have you." Fedor responds with a thumbs up, and a smile.'
+	'You sit down next to Fedor then say, "Fedor... I need your help." Fedor quickly sits up then responds, "What do you need?" you downcast your eyes then say, "My mother threw me out... of my home, and I don''t know what to do." you begin sobbing as Fedor wraps his arms around you. "That''s horrible. I bet my mother will take you in. I will speak to her the next time I see her. Don''t worry I won''t let you live on the streets." you quickly wrap your arms around Fedor''s chest then say, "Thank you so much Fedor. I am so scared." Fedor kisses you on the forehead, as he responds, "I will always be here for you <<$pcs_firstname>>, whenever you need me." you give Fedor a soft kiss then get up and say, "I''m so lucky to have you." Fedor responds with a thumbs up, and a smile.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console2.jpg"></center>'
 
@@ -3363,9 +3363,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Dimka Help':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit at the edge of the bed next to Fedor then lower your head, staring blankly at the ground, trying to collect your thoughts when you feel Fedor''s hand on your shoulder. "<<$pcs_firstname>>, what''s wrong?" You look toward him but are unable to look him in the eye. "Fedor...I need your help with something but I..." He sits up then wraps his arms around your waist. "<<$pcs_firstname>> whatever it is, you can talk to me."'
+	'You sit at the edge of the bed next to Fedor then lower your head, staring blankly at the ground, trying to collect your thoughts when you feel Fedor''s hand on your shoulder. "<<$pcs_firstname>>, what''s wrong?" You look toward him but are unable to look him in the eye. "Fedor... I need your help with something but I..." He sits up then wraps his arms around your waist. "<<$pcs_firstname>> whatever it is, you can talk to me."'
 
-	act 'It''s...It''s nothing':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Bedroom'
+	act 'It''s... It''s nothing':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Bedroom'
 	
 	act 'Ask him for help':
 		*clr & cla

+ 2 - 2
locations/FedorMisc.qsrc

@@ -805,7 +805,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Outcast Intro':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"Fyodor [Masha] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorangry.jpg"></center>'
-				'You slowly step toward Fedor and say, "Look Fedor...I never meant for any of this to happen." Fedor shouts "YOU AGREED TO GO OUT WITH VIKTOR WHILE DATING ME! How can you expect me to believe that you cared for me at all... Just go away <<$pcs_firstname>>. I have nothing for you." you step away from Fedor knowing that nothing you say will console him while thinking to yourself "If only he trusted me more, then maybe he would believe that my apology is sincere."'
+				'You slowly step toward Fedor and say, "Look Fedor... I never meant for any of this to happen." Fedor shouts "YOU AGREED TO GO OUT WITH VIKTOR WHILE DATING ME! How can you expect me to believe that you cared for me at all... Just go away <<$pcs_firstname>>. I have nothing for you." you step away from Fedor knowing that nothing you say will console him while thinking to yourself "If only he trusted me more, then maybe he would believe that my apology is sincere."'
 
 				act 'Walk away':gt 'pav_park', 'start'
 			end
@@ -876,7 +876,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Outcast':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/outcast/outcast1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You walk up to Fedor and he immediately turns to face you with a very welcoming smile on his face. "Hello <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''ve been reflecting on what we spoke about last time and I really need to thank you for cheering me up. I really needed that." You place your hand on his shoulder. "It was the least I can do Fedor." Fedor rubs your hand on his shoulder while still keeping his welcoming smile intact as he asks "So, is there anything I can do for you?" You wrap your fingers around his as you reply, "Fedor I...I just... I can''t stop thinking of you Fyodor. I need you in my life. Will you please take me back." Fedor replies with a shocked look on his face "If we hooked up again then Viktor will tear me apart. I''m just not strong enough to deal with him. I''m sorry."'
+			'You walk up to Fedor and he immediately turns to face you with a very welcoming smile on his face. "Hello <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''ve been reflecting on what we spoke about last time and I really need to thank you for cheering me up. I really needed that." You place your hand on his shoulder. "It was the least I can do Fedor." Fedor rubs your hand on his shoulder while still keeping his welcoming smile intact as he asks "So, is there anything I can do for you?" You wrap your fingers around his as you reply, "Fedor I... I just... I can''t stop thinking of you Fyodor. I need you in my life. Will you please take me back." Fedor replies with a shocked look on his face "If we hooked up again then Viktor will tear me apart. I''m just not strong enough to deal with him. I''m sorry."'
 			
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr & cla

+ 2 - 2
locations/MeynoldHome.qsrc

@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 						gs'stat'					
 						'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/vicky.jpg"></center>'					
-						'You take a second before continuing your story. "He helps me find my confidence, and break out of my safety bubble. I''m alway trying something new, and facing my fears. I...I just don''t know what to do without him. Niko always guides me in bettering myself, and feeling so alive." <<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder, "If you really care for him then maybe you can work things out with Niko..." Katja immediately cuts <<$VK_VikName>> off, "No! You need to dump that freak! Do you really want to stay with a boy who stripped you down, and let those gopnik punks... RAPE YOU!!!?" Natalia tries to calm her. "We might not like him, but it is <<$pcs_firstname>>''s decision, and we can''t control her. We can only give her our advice, and hope that she makes the right decision... on her own."'
+						'You take a second before continuing your story. "He helps me find my confidence, and break out of my safety bubble. I''m alway trying something new, and facing my fears. I... I just don''t know what to do without him. Niko always guides me in bettering myself, and feeling so alive." <<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder, "If you really care for him then maybe you can work things out with Niko..." Katja immediately cuts <<$VK_VikName>> off, "No! You need to dump that freak! Do you really want to stay with a boy who stripped you down, and let those gopnik punks... RAPE YOU!!!?" Natalia tries to calm her. "We might not like him, but it is <<$pcs_firstname>>''s decision, and we can''t control her. We can only give her our advice, and hope that she makes the right decision... on her own."'
 						
 						act 'Continue':	
 							*clr & cla
@@ -1006,7 +1006,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja Bath':
 			cla & *clr
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/bath1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Realizing your pain, Katja quickly stops then whispers in your ear, "I''m sorry I just...I forgot." You stroke her cheek then say, "Take off your clothes then get in." Katja quickly undresses herself and joins you. She begins soaping up the sponge then says, "Can you sit up please." You nod and she begins lathering your body with the soft sponge while being very careful not to put too much pressure on your sore spots.'
+			'Realizing your pain, Katja quickly stops then whispers in your ear, "I''m sorry I just... I forgot." You stroke her cheek then say, "Take off your clothes then get in." Katja quickly undresses herself and joins you. She begins soaping up the sponge then says, "Can you sit up please." You nod and she begins lathering your body with the soft sponge while being very careful not to put too much pressure on your sore spots.'
 					
 			act 'Let Katja rinse you off':	
 				cla & *clr

+ 6 - 6
locations/NikoDates.qsrc

@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_1':
 						minut += 5
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/1/d3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You and Niko grab a plastic gun then begin shooting the bottles as quickly and efficiently as possible. After a few minutes, the scores get tallied up and...Niko won. The man hosting the event, hands Niko a stuffed bear. Niko holds it below his chin with an innocent smile on his face as he asks you, "Since I won, I would like to know if it would be too brazen of me to ask you for a kiss. What say you m''lady?"'
+						'You and Niko grab a plastic gun then begin shooting the bottles as quickly and efficiently as possible. After a few minutes, the scores get tallied up and... Niko won. The man hosting the event, hands Niko a stuffed bear. Niko holds it below his chin with an innocent smile on his face as he asks you, "Since I won, I would like to know if it would be too brazen of me to ask you for a kiss. What say you m''lady?"'
 
 						act 'Agree to Kiss Niko':
 							*clr & cla
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_1':
 						minut += 5
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad2.jpg"></center>'
-						'You and Niko grab a plastic gun then begin shooting the bottles as quickly and efficiently as possible. After a few minutes, the scores get tallied up and...You won. The man hosting the event, hands you a plastic gnome. Niko looks at the score, a little shocked as he scratches the back of his head. "I guess... You won. So what do you desire for your prize?" Niko moves his face closer to yours.'
+						'You and Niko grab a plastic gun then begin shooting the bottles as quickly and efficiently as possible. After a few minutes, the scores get tallied up and... You won. The man hosting the event, hands you a plastic gnome. Niko looks at the score, a little shocked as he scratches the back of his head. "I guess... You won. So what do you desire for your prize?" Niko moves his face closer to yours.'
 
 						act 'Kiss me':
 							*clr & cla
@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_2':
 								minut += 5
 								gs'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad2.jpg"></center>'
-								'"I trust you but I...I just can''t." Niko gives you an exaggerated frown as re responds, "You have such a beautiful body and I just want you to feel more confident with your body." You lower your head as you respond, "I don''t quite have that confidence... yet." Niko smiles as he says, "We could work on that if you like." You reply, "Maybe but not today." Niko responds, "Fair enough. Let''s get you home." Niko helps you get dressed then takes your hand and walks you toward the train station.'
+								'"I trust you but I... I just can''t." Niko gives you an exaggerated frown as re responds, "You have such a beautiful body and I just want you to feel more confident with your body." You lower your head as you respond, "I don''t quite have that confidence... yet." Niko smiles as he says, "We could work on that if you like." You reply, "Maybe but not today." Niko responds, "Fair enough. Let''s get you home." Niko helps you get dressed then takes your hand and walks you toward the train station.'
 								act 'Follow Niko':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoDates', 'Home Sad'
 							end
 						else
@@ -1038,7 +1038,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Hallway Strip':
 			inhib_exp += 1
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/strip/strip1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You look around to make sure that no one is looking before slowly reaching for your shirt and sliding it off while looking back to Niko and seeing the pleased grin on his face as you continue striping for him. You constantly look back at the cafeteria, checking if someone has noticed you. After removing your shirt, you look Niko in his eyes, "There... I took off my top... I feel more daring now... thank you, I should go now." You then quickly try to put on your top when Niko grabs it as he responds, "Come on now, don''t let fear get the better of you. Take it all off." You grab onto Niko''s hand, "Please...I...I can''t. Someone will see me." Niko whispers in your ear, "Don''t get cold feet now. Take it all off."'
+			'You look around to make sure that no one is looking before slowly reaching for your shirt and sliding it off while looking back to Niko and seeing the pleased grin on his face as you continue striping for him. You constantly look back at the cafeteria, checking if someone has noticed you. After removing your shirt, you look Niko in his eyes, "There... I took off my top... I feel more daring now... thank you, I should go now." You then quickly try to put on your top when Niko grabs it as he responds, "Come on now, don''t let fear get the better of you. Take it all off." You grab onto Niko''s hand, "Please... I... I can''t. Someone will see me." Niko whispers in your ear, "Don''t get cold feet now. Take it all off."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'exhibitionism'
 			gs'stat'
 			
@@ -1334,14 +1334,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Disco':
 													minut += 5
 													gs'stat'
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/disco/Valentin.jpg"></center>'
-													'You stumble around looking for Niko and find him drinking with Valentin Bogdanov. You walk up to Niko and say, "Niko, you said that you''d... be right back. I was waiting... for you." Niko replies, "Ohh shit. I totally forgot, I''m sorry, would you like me to walk you home?" You reply, "It''s cool, we all forget things sometimes...I''ll be fine on my own."' 
+													'You stumble around looking for Niko and find him drinking with Valentin Bogdanov. You walk up to Niko and say, "Niko, you said that you''d... be right back. I was waiting... for you." Niko replies, "Ohh shit. I totally forgot, I''m sorry, would you like me to walk you home?" You reply, "It''s cool, we all forget things sometimes... I'll be fine on my own."' 
 													
 													act 'Hear Niko''s reply':
 														*clr & cla
 														NikoEv = 8
 														gs'stat'										
 														'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/2/d4.jpg"></center>'
-														'Valentin adds, "Damn Niko, she looks wasted, you should probably take her home." Niko responds, "You''re right, come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''m taking you home." You try to object, "I''m fine...I...I can..." Niko igrores your protests and lifts you onto his back then carries you home.'
+														'Valentin adds, "Damn Niko, she looks wasted, you should probably take her home." Niko responds, "You''re right, come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''m taking you home." You try to object, "I''m fine... I... I can..." Niko igrores your protests and lifts you onto his back then carries you home.'
 
 														act 'Rest on Niko''s back':minut += 10 & gt 'korrPar'
 													end	

+ 2 - 2
locations/NikoDreams.qsrc

@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Woods':
 	VKSmiley = 3
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/nightmares/happyhome/woods/1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You can feel grass on your face which you quickly brush away before looking around and noticing that you are in the middle of the woods with a mist that surrounds you. '+$OpenInnerThought+'What''s going on? Why am I here? How did I get here? Where am I?'+$CloseInnerThought+' You stand up then look around to try to get your bearings when you begin hearing music along with the sounds of laughing in the far distance. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Where is this music coming from? Was that a person laughing? Maybe they can help me.'+$CloseInnerThought+' you begin heading in that direction when you suddenly feel a cold chill down your spine. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Something about that laughter is...unnerving.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
+	'You can feel grass on your face which you quickly brush away before looking around and noticing that you are in the middle of the woods with a mist that surrounds you. '+$OpenInnerThought+'What''s going on? Why am I here? How did I get here? Where am I?'+$CloseInnerThought+' You stand up then look around to try to get your bearings when you begin hearing music along with the sounds of laughing in the far distance. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Where is this music coming from? Was that a person laughing? Maybe they can help me.'+$CloseInnerThought+' you begin heading in that direction when you suddenly feel a cold chill down your spine. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Something about that laughter is... unnerving.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
 	*nl
 	'You can hear someone laughing, far away.'
 
@@ -392,7 +392,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Friends':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/sex/cam/Cam2.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You quickly stand up then begin dancing. '+$OpenInnerThought+'I need to keep dancing because ...Umm...Why am I dancing?'+$CloseInnerThought+' Vicky reaches forward then shoves her fingers inside of your vagina while Katja sticks her finger in your ass. Natalia walks up to you then begins squeezing your breasts. Vicky then says, "And they thought that Sonia was a whore." Katja giggles as she responds, "That''s just silly. <<$pcs_firstname>> is the only whore here." Natalia replies, "I agree, I don''t even know why she thought that she could hide it." '+$OpenInnerThought+'Why are they being so mean to me? and why can''t I stop dancing?'+$CloseInnerThought+' Vicky gives your ass a firm smack as she says, "Alright, we kept the boys waiting long enough!"'
+		'You quickly stand up then begin dancing. '+$OpenInnerThought+'I need to keep dancing because... Umm... Why am I dancing?'+$CloseInnerThought+' Vicky reaches forward then shoves her fingers inside of your vagina while Katja sticks her finger in your ass. Natalia walks up to you then begins squeezing your breasts. Vicky then says, "And they thought that Sonia was a whore." Katja giggles as she responds, "That''s just silly. <<$pcs_firstname>> is the only whore here." Natalia replies, "I agree, I don''t even know why she thought that she could hide it." '+$OpenInnerThought+'Why are they being so mean to me? and why can''t I stop dancing?'+$CloseInnerThought+' Vicky gives your ass a firm smack as she says, "Alright, we kept the boys waiting long enough!"'
 
 		act 'Boys?':	
 			*clr & cla

+ 1 - 1
locations/NikoEv2.qsrc

@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Niko Wake':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/charmer2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You open your eyes and see Niko with a concerned look on his face, he has his hand on your shoulder, shaking you. "<<$pcs_firstname>> are you alright? You looked like you were having an intense dream." You quickly look around the room then take several deep breaths, '+$OpenInnerThought+'It was a dream. It was only a dream. Oh my. I can''t keep doing this. Why does this keep happening to me? Why me?'+$CloseInnerThought+' Niko gives you a kiss on the forehead. "I''m so worried about you. Are you alright?" You nod slowly before saying, "I''m...I''m fine. I just had a nightmare, that''s all."' 
+	'You open your eyes and see Niko with a concerned look on his face, he has his hand on your shoulder, shaking you. "<<$pcs_firstname>> are you alright? You looked like you were having an intense dream." You quickly look around the room then take several deep breaths, '+$OpenInnerThought+'It was a dream. It was only a dream. Oh my. I can''t keep doing this. Why does this keep happening to me? Why me?'+$CloseInnerThought+' Niko gives you a kiss on the forehead. "I''m so worried about you. Are you alright?" You nod slowly before saying, "I''m... I'm fine. I just had a nightmare, that''s all."' 
 	*nl
 	'Niko continues kissing your forehead before responding, "I will do everything in my power to protect you. Just stay strong. Okay <<$pcs_firstname>>?" You nod your head again before saying, "Thank you Niko. I always feel safe in your arms." Niko smiles as he wraps his arms around you.'
 

+ 2 - 2
locations/NikoMeyHome.qsrc

@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 						gs'stat'					
 						'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/vicky.jpg"></center>'					
-						'You take a second before continuing your story. "He helps me find my confidence and break out of my safety bubble. I''m alway trying something new and facing my fears. I...I just don''t know what to do without him. Niko always guides me in bettering myself and feeling so alive." <<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder, "If you really care for him then maybe you can work things out with Niko..." Katja immediately cuts <<$VK_VikName>> off, "No! You need to dump that freak! Do you really want to stay with a boy who stripped you down and let those gopnik punks... RAPE YOU!!!?" Natalia tries to calm her. "We might not like him, but it is <<$pcs_firstname>>''s decision and we can''t control her. We can only give her our advice and hope that she makes the right decision... on her own."'
+						'You take a second before continuing your story. "He helps me find my confidence and break out of my safety bubble. I''m alway trying something new and facing my fears. I... I just don''t know what to do without him. Niko always guides me in bettering myself and feeling so alive." <<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder, "If you really care for him then maybe you can work things out with Niko..." Katja immediately cuts <<$VK_VikName>> off, "No! You need to dump that freak! Do you really want to stay with a boy who stripped you down and let those gopnik punks... RAPE YOU!!!?" Natalia tries to calm her. "We might not like him, but it is <<$pcs_firstname>>''s decision and we can''t control her. We can only give her our advice and hope that she makes the right decision... on her own."'
 						
 						act 'Continue':	
 							*clr & cla
@@ -1007,7 +1007,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja Bath':
 			cla & *clr
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/receiving/1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Realizing your pain, Katja quickly stops then whispers in your ear, "I''m sorry I just...I forgot." You stroke her cheek then say, "Take off your clothes then get in." Katja quickly undresses herself and joins you. She begins soaping up the sponge then says, "Can you sit up please." You nod and she begins lathering your body with the soft sponge while being very careful not to put too much pressure on your sore spots.'
+			'Realizing your pain, Katja quickly stops then whispers in your ear, "I''m sorry I just... I forgot." You stroke her cheek then say, "Take off your clothes then get in." Katja quickly undresses herself and joins you. She begins soaping up the sponge then says, "Can you sit up please." You nod and she begins lathering your body with the soft sponge while being very careful not to put too much pressure on your sore spots.'
 					
 			act 'Let Katja rinse you off':	
 				cla & *clr

+ 5 - 5
locations/NikoPayback.qsrc

@@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 	elseif VK = 2:
 		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "Today you will be my little pee slut, understand?" You lower your head and nod as Niko pulls down his pants then says, "Open your mouth and say ahh."'
 	elseif VK = 3 and pcs_vag = 0 or VK = 4 and pcs_vag = 0:
-		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "I''m gonna fuck your pussy today so spread those legs!" You quickly reply, "But I can''t...I''m...I''m a virgin." Niko''s eyes light up. "Really? Today really is my lucky day. I get to fuck a virgin and take your innocence from you at the same time." You recoil in shock. "Please no! Why would you want take that from me?" Niko replies, "Because it will make you sad, that''s why. Now get over to the sink then spread those fucking legs of yours or I will!"'
+		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "I''m gonna fuck your pussy today so spread those legs!" You quickly reply, "But I can''t... I'm... I'm a virgin." Niko''s eyes light up. "Really? Today really is my lucky day. I get to fuck a virgin and take your innocence from you at the same time." You recoil in shock. "Please no! Why would you want take that from me?" Niko replies, "Because it will make you sad, that''s why. Now get over to the sink then spread those fucking legs of yours or I will!"'
 	elseif VK = 3:
 		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "I''m gonna fuck your pussy today so spread those legs!"'		
 	elseif VK = 4:
@@ -499,7 +499,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Help':
 	minut += 5
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You move toward Fedor then wrap your arms around him as you say, "Fyodor I...I need your help." Fedor gently rubs your back as he responds, "Please <<$pcs_firstname>>, tell me what''s wrong." You can feel tears streaming down your face as you reply, "Nikolai Volkov has been bullying me at lunch everyday. Please make him stop." Fedor clenches his fist, "That little gopnik shit! I will make him pay. Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>> the next time he tries I will bash his face in!"'
+	'You move toward Fedor then wrap your arms around him as you say, "Fyodor I... I need your help." Fedor gently rubs your back as he responds, "Please <<$pcs_firstname>>, tell me what''s wrong." You can feel tears streaming down your face as you reply, "Nikolai Volkov has been bullying me at lunch everyday. Please make him stop." Fedor clenches his fist, "That little gopnik shit! I will make him pay. Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>> the next time he tries I will bash his face in!"'
 	
 	act 'Thank Fedor':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -520,7 +520,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Help 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You approach Niko and a confident grin covers his face as he says, "You showed up? Good. How will you be paying today?" You reply, "I...I want you to leave me alone." Niko chuckles as he replies, "Well that''s not up to you now is it? For wasting my time, you will be paying me in both, money and pleasure. Now let''s get moving." Niko grabs your hand then begins pulling you into the restroom...'
+	'You approach Niko and a confident grin covers his face as he says, "You showed up? Good. How will you be paying today?" You reply, "I... I want you to leave me alone." Niko chuckles as he replies, "Well that''s not up to you now is it? For wasting my time, you will be paying me in both, money and pleasure. Now let''s get moving." Niko grabs your hand then begins pulling you into the restroom...'
 	
 	act 'Continue':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -568,7 +568,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fyodor Help':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You approach Niko and a confident grin covers his face as he says, "You showed up? Good. How will you be paying today?" You reply, "I...I want you to leave me alone." Niko chuckles as he replies, "Well that''s not up to you now is it? For wasting my time, you will be paying me in both, money and pleasure. Now let''s get moving." Niko grabs your hand then begins pulling you into the restroom...'
+	'You approach Niko and a confident grin covers his face as he says, "You showed up? Good. How will you be paying today?" You reply, "I... I want you to leave me alone." Niko chuckles as he replies, "Well that''s not up to you now is it? For wasting my time, you will be paying me in both, money and pleasure. Now let''s get moving." Niko grabs your hand then begins pulling you into the restroom...'
 	
 	act 'Continue':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -597,7 +597,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Ivan Help':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="green"><<"Ivan Prokhorov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/ivan/sad1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk up to Ivan then downcast your eyes before saying, "Ivan I need your help...I..." Ivan''s face saddens as he wraps his arms around you. "What''s wrong <<$pcs_firstname>>? You can tell me."'
+	'You walk up to Ivan then downcast your eyes before saying, "Ivan I need your help... I..." Ivan''s face saddens as he wraps his arms around you. "What''s wrong <<$pcs_firstname>>? You can tell me."'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/ivan/hug1.jpg"></center>'	
 	

+ 3 - 3
locations/NikoWhore.qsrc

@@ -689,7 +689,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 																		*clr & cla
 																		gs'stat'
 																		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lock8.mp4"></video></center>'
-																		'Petka begins fucking you, thrusting at an increased pace as he holds your legs open, giving himself easier access. You have no fight left, your strength is gone, your entire body is numb, you feel nothing as Petka continues using your body. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Wha...what''s going...feel...so hot...head...can''t think...why...'+$CloseInnerThought+''
+																		'Petka begins fucking you, thrusting at an increased pace as he holds your legs open, giving himself easier access. You have no fight left, your strength is gone, your entire body is numb, you feel nothing as Petka continues using your body. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Wha... what''s going... feel... so hot... head... can''t think... why...'+$CloseInnerThought+''
 																		$orgasm_txt = ''
 																		gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', 'A6', 1
 																		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'
@@ -938,7 +938,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You look up to see Niko with a very distressed look on his face, "<<$pcs_firstname>> please tell me you''re ok." You take a few seconds to collect your thoughts then respond, "I...I''m scared Nikolai. I don''t think things will ever be normal for me again. I''m just a whore to everyone. What do I do Niko? What do I do?" Tears are streaming down your face as Niko holds you in his arms, "I''m sorry about what happened to you, I wish I was there to prevent it, but I will always be here for you when you need me. Remember that. I will always be here for you." You begin weeping in his arms as he holds you tighter.'
+	'You look up to see Niko with a very distressed look on his face, "<<$pcs_firstname>> please tell me you''re ok." You take a few seconds to collect your thoughts then respond, "I... I'm scared Nikolai. I don''t think things will ever be normal for me again. I''m just a whore to everyone. What do I do Niko? What do I do?" Tears are streaming down your face as Niko holds you in his arms, "I''m sorry about what happened to you, I wish I was there to prevent it, but I will always be here for you when you need me. Remember that. I will always be here for you." You begin weeping in his arms as he holds you tighter.'
 
 	act 'Weep in his arms':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -947,7 +947,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame 2':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-		'You let out your tears, submitting to your own sorrow while answering your own question in your head. '+$OpenInnerThought+'No matter what happens, Nikolai will be here for me, he is the only one who cares for me. I need you Niko. Please don''t leave me...Please!'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
+		'You let out your tears, submitting to your own sorrow while answering your own question in your head. '+$OpenInnerThought+'No matter what happens, Nikolai will be here for me, he is the only one who cares for me. I need you Niko. Please don''t leave me... Please!'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
 
 		act 'Embrace Niko':
 			*clr & cla

+ 1 - 1
locations/albinahome.qsrc

@@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'playgame':
 				npc_rel['A23'] -= 2
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You shake your head. "Uhhh...I''m really not interested in doing that."'
+				'You shake your head. "Uhhh... I'm really not interested in doing that."'
 				'Albina puts the strapon away and you can tell she is a little disappointed. She comes back over and lies down beside you again. "You are so going to lose!" she laughs. You continue to play games for a while, although things are awkward between you. Eventually, Albina stops. "Well I had fun, but there is some stuff I need to take care of." she says as she turns the consloe off.'
 				'Getting the hint, you get up as well. "Yeah, I should probably get going myself." You exchange a brief hug before you leave.'
 				act 'Say goodbye and go home':gt 'pav_residential'

+ 2 - 2
locations/andrey.qsrc

@@ -434,7 +434,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired1':
 	young_shop_salary = 1
 	young_shop_bonus = 2
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
-	'You swallow hard and nod your head. "If this means keeping my job...I''ll do it."'
+	'You swallow hard and nod your head. "If this means keeping my job... I'll do it."'
 	*nl
 	'Mr. Sobulyagin smiles. "Good girl. I''m happy to have such a hard worker here at the store," he says almost mockingly. He brings his hand to your cheek and cups it admiring your face with a triumphant smirk. "On your knees," he commands as his hand suddenly moves to the top of your head to push you down towards his crotch.'
 	act 'Get on your knees':
@@ -496,7 +496,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired2':
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A101'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'Taking a deep breath you nod your head. "Fine...I''ll do it." You see Mr. Sobulyagin smile as he places his hand on top of your head and pushes you down to your knees.'
+	'Taking a deep breath you nod your head. "Fine... I'll do it." You see Mr. Sobulyagin smile as he places his hand on top of your head and pushes you down to your knees.'
 	act 'Get on your knees':
 		cla
 		*clr

+ 3 - 3
locations/brothel.qsrc

@@ -1159,7 +1159,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:tiedOnBackFuckMouth':
 	'You are still bound on your back, with hands and knees tied together, exposing both of your holes.'
 	'The Client reaches to you, looking down to your round crotch.'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"So what will it be, slut?"</font>'
-	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Uhm...a fucking of my pussy? Or anus?"</font>'
+	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Uhm... a fucking of my pussy? Or anus?"</font>'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Fucking indeed, but neither of those. Open your mouth!"</font>'
 	'You have no option but to do as he wants, opening your lips for his thick phallus.'
 	'You choke, saliva everywhere, but it seems he won''t stop until you either suffocate or until he cums!'
@@ -1186,7 +1186,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:tiedOnBackFuckAnal':
 	'You are still bound on your back, with hands and knees tied together, exposing both of your holes.'
 	'The Client reaches to you, looking down to your round crotch.'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"So what will it be, slut?"</font>'
-	'Before you even try to decide how to react to this straight question, he forces his dick down your...anus!'
+	'Before you even try to decide how to react to this straight question, he forces his dick down your... anus!'
 	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Owwwch!"</font>'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Didn''t expect such a quick entry, did you?"</font>'
 	'But again you are unable to answer, because he starts to pound you so fast and deep, that even an attempt to get a sound out of your mouth is futile.'
@@ -1215,7 +1215,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:tiedOnBackFuckVaginal':
 	'You are still bound on your back, with hands and knees tied together, exposing both of your holes.'
 	'The Client reaches to you, looking down to your round crotch.'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"So what will it be, slut?"</font>'
-	'Before you even try to decide how to react to this straight question, he forces his dick down your...pussy!'
+	'Before you even try to decide how to react to this straight question, he forces his dick down your... pussy!'
 	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Owwwch!"</font>'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Didn''t expect such a quick entry, did you?"</font>'
 	'But again you are unable to answer, because he starts to pound you so fast and deep, that even an attempt to get a sound out of your mouth is futile.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/city_clinic.qsrc

@@ -781,7 +781,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel':
 											gs 'stat'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/sex/exam18.jpg"></center>'
 											'With unnatural strength shes drives the dildo into your pussy.'
-											'You gasp in surprise at the rough treatment, how can someone with such soft hands...Suddenly she finds a perfect stroke and the initial pain turns to pleasure.'
+											'You gasp in surprise at the rough treatment, how can someone with such soft hands... Suddenly she finds a perfect stroke and the initial pain turns to pleasure.'
 											'Doctor keeps fucking you confidently, moaning with every jolt she seems to be enjoying it as much as you, and you are ecstatic. The unusual situation and Ninel''s skill quickly brings you to your peak.'
 
 											gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 10, 'sub', 'lesbian'

+ 1 - 1
locations/dimaEv.qsrc

@@ -503,7 +503,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkaabuse6':
 	if pcs_makeup ! 1:pcs_makeup = 0
 	minut += 20
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/sex/nip.jpg"></center>'
-	'Dimka make you lie down, and binds you until you are fully immobilized. He looks at you with a pensive expression. "Ok... Hm...I think that you don''t understand your position... Hmm, let''s see if you can learn something" then he clamps your nipples in small vices and tightens the jaws. It hurts, but then you see what he has prepared, and cry in terror. Suddenly he stabs a needle through your nipple. You howl in pain, but Dimka spits on you as you cry and sticks in another needle forcing you to howl again. You yell and swear at this fucking sadist, but Dimka coldly continues an to your ever growing horror, connect them to a battery. Little shocks run through your body, enhancing the sensation of helplessness. After an eternity of sobbing, pain and pleading. He releases you.'
+	'Dimka make you lie down, and binds you until you are fully immobilized. He looks at you with a pensive expression. "Ok... Hm... I think that you don''t understand your position... Hmm, let''s see if you can learn something" then he clamps your nipples in small vices and tightens the jaws. It hurts, but then you see what he has prepared, and cry in terror. Suddenly he stabs a needle through your nipple. You howl in pain, but Dimka spits on you as you cry and sticks in another needle forcing you to howl again. You yell and swear at this fucking sadist, but Dimka coldly continues an to your ever growing horror, connect them to a battery. Little shocks run through your body, enhancing the sensation of helplessness. After an eternity of sobbing, pain and pleading. He releases you.'
 	if pirsF > 0:
 		'When he gets bored of watching you in pain, Dimka pulls the needles out of your nipples and sets you free.'
 		gs 'pain', 7, 'nipples', 'pierce'

+ 2 - 2
locations/dimaRevenge.qsrc

@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@ if ARGS[0] = 3:
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big142.jpg"></center>'
 										'You catch up to Zinaida as she leaves the school building. She''s glued to her phone as always. You tap her on the shoulder and say, "Hey, Zinaida. You''re looking nice today."'
 										'Without looking away from her screen she says, "You''re lying, trying to be nice to me, so you must want something out of me, so what do you want, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
-										'"Oh...well...uh I think you should go out with Feofan."'
+										'"Oh... well... uh I think you should go out with Feofan."'
 										'"Why?"'
 										'"Well um... Alright I''m gonna level with you. I need his help and he wants a date with you. What''s it gonna take?"'
 										'She thinks for a bit then pulls out some kind of usb adapter from her backpack and hands it to you saying, "Go to the computer room and plug this flashdrive into the back of the computer furthest from the door.
@@ -1084,7 +1084,7 @@ if dimaRevChoice = 5:
 						*clr & cla
 						demerit += 40
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big134.jpg"></center>'
-						'Miss. Volkov looks at you. "I don''t know what''s on your mind miss <<$pcs_lastname>> but what have you done will have serious consequences...now go"'
+						'Miss. Volkov looks at you. "I don''t know what''s on your mind miss <<$pcs_lastname>> but what have you done will have serious consequences... now go"'
 						!!sent to princeipal''s office and earn 20 demerits, afterwards it goes to this scene.
 						!!Office doesn''t exist yet according to gschool_grounds.
 						act 'Back to class':

+ 3 - 3
locations/dimalina.qsrc

@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Listen':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/linased/D5.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Hey! I have an idea..." Lina is sitting on her knees with a puzzled expression as Dimka moves closer and suddenly starts to pull her top up, revealing her bra before she can properly react and stop him.'
 		'"Hey! What are you doing?!"'
-		'"You have an amazing body, you should show it off more, Lina. None of the other girls at school can compare, not even Christina!" Dimka reassures her, which seems to be working as she relaxes slightly. "Don''t worry, I''d never show anyone this, but I just can''t help it...you''re so beautiful! You don''t need to take anything else off...'
+		'"You have an amazing body, you should show it off more, Lina. None of the other girls at school can compare, not even Christina!" Dimka reassures her, which seems to be working as she relaxes slightly. "Don''t worry, I''d never show anyone this, but I just can''t help it... you''re so beautiful! You don''t need to take anything else off...'
 		'Lina shifts nervously, her cheeks flushed slightly after hearing Dimka''s confession. After a moment of consideration, she slips out of her bottoms, sitting there in sweater and panties as he continues to film her. Back in the closet, you try to ignore your drug-induced arousal but it gets more and more difficult. In the back of your mind, images and sensations pop up. You... Need... To... Do... Something...'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'bound'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -1058,7 +1058,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'succubusdimka':
 	act 'Awaken your true self':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/succubusself.jpg"></center>'
-		'You let the power flood your body, leaving you feeling warm and...insatiably hungry.'
+		'You let the power flood your body, leaving you feeling warm and... insatiably hungry.'
 		'If Dimka thinks that he can rape you without consequences, he will be disappointed. He''s not in control anymore and you are not going to let him hurt you any further. Easily, you pull your wrists and legs apart, ripping the tape in the process. Glancing over your shoulder, you see Dimka looking at you confused. You turn to face him and see he''s trying to process what''s going on, but isn''t able to understand how this shift in power has happened suddenly. One of your hands rise to his chest, caressing it. He''s confused yet aroused and it makes you giggle knowing how helpless he is to his own primal desires of wanting to fuck while still knowing something isn''t <i>quite</i> right...'
 		act 'Time for dinner':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -1155,7 +1155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'linaundress':
 	'Tears form in her eyes.'
 	'Slap!!'
 	'The minutes pass while Lina''s skin gets redder.'
-	'Slap...Slap...Slap!!'
+	'Slap... Slap... Slap!!'
 	act 'Helplessly watch her be abused':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/linased/D21.jpg"></center>'

+ 1 - 1
locations/dom_gor.qsrc

@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ if edaD > 0:
 		edaD -= 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/food/food.jpg"></center>'
 		if pcs_energy >= 100:
-			'You can no longer eat...For now at least.'
+			'You can no longer eat... For now at least.'
 		elseif pcs_energy >= 80:
 			pcs_energy += 40
 			'You push through to eat your meal.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/ender.qsrc

@@ -464,7 +464,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'win':
 		'"Take that bitches!"'
 		'With one last kick, the bitch squad lies fallen before you, whimpering in pain thanks to the sound beating they''ve received at your hand, but as you look around for your next victim, a redheaded girl grabs you and pulls you away from the brawl turned riot, towards the waiting Vanya & Vicky.'
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! I don''t know what to do with you! What were you thinking?!"'
-		'You...aren''t too sure why the hell you incited the massive brawl that now is being broken apart by the police, and as you try to look for a good answer, Vanya chooses that moment to express his opinion.'
+		'You... aren''t too sure why the hell you incited the massive brawl that now is being broken apart by the police, and as you try to look for a good answer, Vanya chooses that moment to express his opinion.'
 		'"Well... Katja, I want to say, well... That is hockey! Give me those five <<$pcs_nickname>>!"' 
 		'Katja looks dumbfounded as he raises his hand, more even when you clap it, followed by a shrugging Vicky, who jumps and does the same. As you turn smiling towards Katja, waiting for her to join, she facepalms, turns and begins to walk away, musing about your idiocy. Well, it is probably better if you follow her, so after saying goodbye to Vanya & Vicky, you go with her. It was "fun" but it is time to look for something else to do.'
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/gadprostitutes.qsrc

@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'just_mira':
 
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miraprost2_2.mp4"></video></center>'
 
-								'You have to duck behind some bushes as they move outside the van. The guy continues to pound into Mira''s pussy until he cums...and cums...and cums. '
+								'You have to duck behind some bushes as they move outside the van. The guy continues to pound into Mira''s pussy until he cums... and cums... and cums. '
 								'After the wild sex, Mira and the guy sit in the van and talk for a bit. He gives her a nice wad of cash and she starts walking back towards the road. She smiles at you and shows you the money as you join her.'
 
 								act 'Finish':

+ 1 - 1
locations/gadukino.qsrc

@@ -416,7 +416,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_events':
 											act 'Hide':
 												*clr & cla
 												'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miraprost2_2.mp4"></video></center>'
-												'You have to duck behind some bushes as they move outside the van. The guy continues to pound into Mira''s pussy until he cums...and cums...and cums. '
+												'You have to duck behind some bushes as they move outside the van. The guy continues to pound into Mira''s pussy until he cums... and cums... and cums. '
 												'After the wild sex, Mira and the guy sit in the van and talk for a bit. He gives her a nice wad of cash and she starts walking to the village. Seeing you, she smiles and says thanks.'
 												gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10
 												gs 'stat'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gdksex.qsrc

@@ -1486,7 +1486,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'drugs':
 	'You think to yourself, how bad can it really be. He''s planted a small nagging seed in your thoughts and now you''re too curious to say no. You give him a nod and walk closer again.'
 	'He cuts up a line and tells you to close one of your nostrils with a finger while you snort it in with the other, using a rolled up Rubel.'
 	'You hunch over the powder, line yourself and snort it. The tingling and dry itching sensation is almost too much and you suddenly feel like your nostril is on fire.'
-	'You don''t really feel anything different for a while and, almost feeling let down you say, "I think you got scammed with this stuff, I don''t feel a thing... " As you''re talking to him all of a sudden you feel your heartbeat speeding up, you feel your nipples getting hard and your pussy getting wet, in fact within just a few minutes it feels like your pussy is wetter than it has ever been and you are feeling horny as hell. You desperately want, no...you <b>need</b> to fuck something, as soon as you can.'
+	'You don''t really feel anything different for a while and, almost feeling let down you say, "I think you got scammed with this stuff, I don''t feel a thing... " As you''re talking to him all of a sudden you feel your heartbeat speeding up, you feel your nipples getting hard and your pussy getting wet, in fact within just a few minutes it feels like your pussy is wetter than it has ever been and you are feeling horny as hell. You desperately want, no... you <b>need</b> to fuck something, as soon as you can.'
 	'<<$boydesc>> looks at you and smirks as he notices the powder kicking in, "Feels great, right? Ready for some real fun?"'
 
 	act 'Nod':

+ 2 - 2
locations/gschool_chats1.qsrc

@@ -556,7 +556,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina':
 		else
 			'"Hey Albina, how are things going?" you ask her with a smile.'
 			'"Is this some kind of joke?" Albina growls. She grabs you, shoves you against one of the lockers and glares at you. "Who put you up to this!?" she snarls. The rest of the group watch, stunned by her outburst.'
-			'"No...Nobody? I just wanted to talk..." you sheepishly reply, but her tightening grip on you and her angry demeanor tell you that she doesn''t believe you. You try buttering her up with compliments, but she isn''t interested in your grovelling. She gets up in your face and tells you to stay away from her before releasing you and storming off, the others being smart enough not to follow her.' 
+			'"No... Nobody? I just wanted to talk..." you sheepishly reply, but her tightening grip on you and her angry demeanor tell you that she doesn''t believe you. You try buttering her up with compliments, but she isn''t interested in your grovelling. She gets up in your face and tells you to stay away from her before releasing you and storming off, the others being smart enough not to follow her.' 
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 200:
 		'Albina just stares at you in disbelief. "There''s some <i>nasty</i> rumors about you going around school. Everyone is saying you''re a cock hungry whore! How can you live with that - just letting guys... use you like that?"'
@@ -988,7 +988,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vanya':
 			'"What the hell Vanya!" you angrily stomp towards him...'
 			'"What now?" he looks innocently at you. "I''m getting tired of you accusing me for things I haven''t done..."'
 			'"It must''ve been you! Who else replaces talc powder with itching powder?!" you continue on.'
-			'"No idea. What an amazing...I mean cruel joke though..." he coolly replies.'
+			'"No idea. What an amazing... I mean cruel joke though..." he coolly replies.'
 		else
 			'"Funny joke you played on me there, dickhead." you angrily push Vanya.'
 			'"What are you talking about? You''ve gone crazy!" he replies.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc

@@ -1143,7 +1143,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Quit':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/changing.jpg"></center>'
 	'You enter the locker room and look around for Albina, spotting her as she finishes getting ready. You walk over to her and she gives you a puzzled stare. "Hurry up and get dressed <<$pcs_nickname>>, we haven''t got all day to wait for you!" she barks. You meekly smile at her in response. "Well? Hurry up and spit it out." she says while motioning for you to hurry up.
-	"I...I don''t want to be a part of this anymore. I''ve thought it over and this just isn''t for me."' 
+	"I... I don''t want to be a part of this anymore. I''ve thought it over and this just isn''t for me."' 
 	*nl
 	if cheerleadingQW['quest_stage'] = 2:
 		!!IF back up- 

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_lessonsev3.qsrc

@@ -832,7 +832,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'help_radomir':
 		npc_rel['A154'] +=2
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big154.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'Radomir taps you on the shoulder. "Hey, I think someone stole your paper." he says. You stare at him for a moment, unsure if this is some kind of joke or if he''s telling the truth. "Yeah, I think it''s gone. Damn...I didn''t even get to finish copying. I wonder if Bella will let me borrow hers..."'
+		'Radomir taps you on the shoulder. "Hey, I think someone stole your paper." he says. You stare at him for a moment, unsure if this is some kind of joke or if he''s telling the truth. "Yeah, I think it''s gone. Damn... I didn''t even get to finish copying. I wonder if Bella will let me borrow hers..."'
 		'"Was it stolen or did you lose it, Radomir?" you ask with a glare.'
 		'Again, Radomir shrugs his shoulders. "I might have lost it, who knows. Just go get another sheet and start over." he says with a laugh as he gets up and makes his way over to Bella. Taking his advice, you quickly try to fill out another worksheet, but you only manage to get it halfway done before class is over. Ms. Braakman isn''t pleased and gives you a bad mark for today.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_socialchg1.qsrc

@@ -459,7 +459,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tVanya':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big165.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Now you''ve peeked my interest. What are you up to?" you impatiently ask.'
-		'As Vanya lights up in a snicker, "Since you asked...I might as well tell you." He goes silent for a few moments and then continues on, "I was looking for a secluded spot for Vicky and I..."'
+		'As Vanya lights up in a snicker, "Since you asked... I might as well tell you." He goes silent for a few moments and then continues on, "I was looking for a secluded spot for Vicky and I..."'
 		'Looking at him you start loudly laughing, "Why am I not surprised? That''s so typical of you!"'
 		'"Well, you know, there''s barely anyone in the park right now, seems like the perfect time to be on the look out..." he touches the back of his head and nervously laughs.'
 		'"If it was anyone else I would say you were being really weird but I get that. I hope you find a decent spot and tell Vicky I said hi!" you give him a smile and a wink.'

+ 6 - 6
locations/hunterLoveSex.qsrc

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'din_mesec':
 	if klismaday ! daystart:
 		'<<$boydesc>>: Damn, they weren''t lying about that body of yours.'
 		'Don''t worry, we were only told good things, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Do you want it in the ass or in the mouth? " he asks you.'
-		'Oh, anal won''t work for me today <<$boydesc>>, I''m not quite ready...if you know what I mean...'
+		'Oh, anal won''t work for me today <<$boydesc>>, I''m not quite ready... if you know what I mean...'
 		'I understand, says <<$boydesc>>. -  Okay, next time, come with a clean ass!'
 	else
 		'<<$boydesc>>: Damn, they weren''t lying about that body of yours.'
@@ -4155,7 +4155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Igor':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/pc/reactions/embarrassed.mp4"></video></center>'
 					if huntersIgorQw <= 45:'You, blushing, whisper in his ear that you''re still a virgin. <<$boydesc>> distractedly scratches his chin "Wow, still a virgin and you''ve graduated from school? Well, maybe we can try it in your mouth or ass?"'
 					if huntersIgorQw <= 45 and klismaday ! daystart:
-						' - Oh, anal won''t work <<$boydesc>>, I''m not quite ready...errr, or clean if you know what I mean...'
+						' - Oh, anal won''t work <<$boydesc>>, I''m not quite ready... errr, or clean if you know what I mean...'
 						' - I understand, <<$boydesc>> says. -  Okay, next time make sure you clean your ass first.'
 					end
 					if huntersIgorQw > 45:
@@ -4226,7 +4226,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Igor':
 			if mesec > 0  and klismaday ! daystart:
 				' - <<$boydesc>>: Damn, they weren''t lying about what they said about that body of yours.'
 				'- Only good things, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Do you want it in the ass or in the mouth? " he asks you.'
-				'- Oh, anal won''t work for me today <<$boydesc>>, I''m not quite ready...if you know what I mean...'
+				'- Oh, anal won''t work for me today <<$boydesc>>, I''m not quite ready... if you know what I mean...'
 				'- I understand, says <<$boydesc>>. -  Okay, next time, come with a clean ass!'
 			end
 			if mesec > 0  and klismaday = daystart:
@@ -4369,7 +4369,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Andrei':
 			if mesec > 0  and klismaday ! daystart:
 				' - <<$boydesc>>, Damn, they weren''t lying about what they said about that body of yours.'
 				'- Only good things, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Do you want it in the ass or in the mouth? " he asks you.'
-				'- Oh, anal won''t work for me today <<$boydesc>>, I''m not quite ready...if you know what I mean...'
+				'- Oh, anal won''t work for me today <<$boydesc>>, I''m not quite ready... if you know what I mean...'
 				'- Yeah fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>, you say you have a headache, huh? Okay, next time, don''t forget to come prepared to fuck.'
 			end
 			if mesec > 0  and klismaday = daystart:
@@ -4474,7 +4474,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Sergei':
 					*pl
 					if huntersSergeiQw <= 35:'You, blushing, whisper to him that you''re still a virgin. <<$boydesc>> distractedly scratches his chin "A high school graduate and still a virgin? Wow! Well, maybe in i can use your mouth or ass?."'
 					if huntersSergeiQw <= 35 and klismaday ! daystart:
-						' - Oh, anal won''t work for me today <<$boydesc>>, I''m not quite ready...if you know what I mean...'
+						' - Oh, anal won''t work for me today <<$boydesc>>, I''m not quite ready... if you know what I mean...'
 						'- I understand, <<$boydesc>> says. -  Okay, next time, come with a clean booty.'
 					end
 					if huntersSergeiQw > 35:
@@ -4545,7 +4545,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Sergei':
 			if mesec > 0  and klismaday ! daystart:
 				' - <<$boydesc>>, Damn, they weren''t lying about what they said about that body of yours.'
 				'- Only good things, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Do you want it in the ass or in the mouth? " he asks you.'
-				'- Oh, anal won''t work for me today <<$boydesc>>, I''m not quite ready...if you know what I mean...'
+				'- Oh, anal won''t work for me today <<$boydesc>>, I''m not quite ready... if you know what I mean...'
 				' - I understand, <<$boydesc>> says. -  Okay, next time, come with a clean ass.'
 			end
 			if mesec > 0  and klismaday = daystart:

+ 17 - 17
locations/katjaEv.qsrc

@@ -823,7 +823,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan':
 									'As you prepare to change, a long, somewhat husky sigh reaches your ears. It''s come from Katja. She is in her underwear with her eyes closed, the wind playing with her red mane. She is looking sexy as hell.'
 									'"You know <<$pcs_nickname>>, the sun feels nice and there aren''t people around here. So what do you think?"'
 									'It is difficult to link the supposedly timid girl called Ekaterina Meynold with this sensual woman that is trying to tempt you with all her heart (and succeeding) to undress.'
-									'"Think <<$pcs_nickname>>. The water dripping over our naked skin, the wind in our hair and the two of us, all...alone."'
+									'"Think <<$pcs_nickname>>. The water dripping over our naked skin, the wind in our hair and the two of us, all... alone."'
 									'Ok, she is manipulating you. Can you resist the ginger temptress before you?'
 
 									act 'Of course not!':
@@ -1159,7 +1159,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan1':
 
 					if dummy <=3:
 						'<center><table><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/KS1.jpg"></td><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big14.jpg"></td></table></center>'
-						'You sit there with a redfaced, redhaired, red...something bitch! You try desperately to burn a hole in the ice with your gaze, but finally, after some... really long and full of embarrassment minutes, Katja seems to calm down and reach for you.'
+						'You sit there with a redfaced, redhaired, red... something bitch! You try desperately to burn a hole in the ice with your gaze, but finally, after some... really long and full of embarrassment minutes, Katja seems to calm down and reach for you.'
 						'"Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>! Snort... It''s just that you are one of the worst skaters I have seen!"'
 						'"Fuck you!"'
 						'Using her as a support, you rise from the ice and take care of your clothes. That is good. Now you only need to put up with the pain in your ass and the embarrassment from the "pavlovsk''s Worst Skater" title.'
@@ -1259,7 +1259,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan1':
 					'"Come on Ronnie! <<$pcs_nickname>>! Showtime!"'
 					'Katja screams at you excitedly as you rush towards the "Ice Queen", following her lead around the lake and imitating Veronika''s ice dance. Around the lake, most people stop to see your performance, but it doesn''t matter how much you strive, Veronika is always a little faster, a little more graceful and after a grueling half hour, she finally stops.'
 					'"Hmm. Not bad <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-					'There isn''t emotion, or even tiredness in the "Ice Queen"''s voice, but there is...approval? After a silent moment, she quickly leaves, letting you come back to an excited Katja.'
+					'There isn''t emotion, or even tiredness in the "Ice Queen"''s voice, but there is... approval? After a silent moment, she quickly leaves, letting you come back to an excited Katja.'
 					'"That was so cool <<$pcs_nickname>>! You are good!"'
 					'You smile tiredly as the crowd returns to their own skating, but there is more than a good share of wonderment at your demonstration. In general, you must say that it has been a great time, but it is time to look for something else to do.'
 
@@ -1297,7 +1297,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan2':
 	npc_rel['A14'] += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/KWT9.jpg"></center>'
-	'Snow! During Pavlovsk''s winter, this isn''t exactly a novelty, but being the first to find a clean parcel without footsteps, car tracks or snot-nosed kids around, well...that is a being lucky! So... What can you do with this innocent and virginal gift?'
+	'Snow! During Pavlovsk''s winter, this isn''t exactly a novelty, but being the first to find a clean parcel without footsteps, car tracks or snot-nosed kids around, well... that is a being lucky! So... What can you do with this innocent and virginal gift?'
 
 	act 'Snowfight!':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -1353,7 +1353,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan3':
 	'"Hey Katja, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Over here!"'
 	'Vicky screams somehow fly over all the shouting and lets you locate the perky redhead. She smiles excitedly as Vanya & Co play the field, and without missing a beat, Viktoriya screams, jumps, dances and in general encourages your champions.'
 	'"Seriously bitch! Your boyfriend sucks and you are only embarrassing yourselves!"'
-	'Some girls beside you seem to not exactly be chill with the the Meynold''s cheerleading efforts. Katja seems offended and Vicky sticks her tongue out for a moment before returning to her cheers. On their part, the other girls scoff at them and after calling your little group "childish", return their attention to the match. Hm...Maybe you must do something.'
+	'Some girls beside you seem to not exactly be chill with the the Meynold''s cheerleading efforts. Katja seems offended and Vicky sticks her tongue out for a moment before returning to her cheers. On their part, the other girls scoff at them and after calling your little group "childish", return their attention to the match. Hm... Maybe you must do something.'
 
 	act 'Who cares? Continue watching the match.':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -1395,7 +1395,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan3':
 			 npc_rel['A14'] -= 5
 			 gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/KWT14.jpg"></center>'
-			'You smile, slowly walk towards the shitmouth...and sucker-punch the bitch! She falls to the ground in surprised pain as around you, everybody stops, looking surprised and Katja reaches towards you, alarmed.'
+			'You smile, slowly walk towards the shitmouth... and sucker-punch the bitch! She falls to the ground in surprised pain as around you, everybody stops, looking surprised and Katja reaches towards you, alarmed.'
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! What are you doing?!"'
 			'The silence can be cut with a knife and then, somebody in the field tackles another player.'
 			'"Brawl!!!!!"'
@@ -1630,7 +1630,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan8':
 				'"Let''s talk to him Katja!"'
 				'"Talk with him?! <<$pcs_nickname>>! We are naked!"'
 				'Katja''s face contorts between disbelief and embarrassment. Standing your ground and looking at her, you wait patiently.'
-				'"You...You''re going to make me do this, aren''t you <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+				'"You... You''re going to make me do this, aren''t you <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 				'She gives you sad puppy eyes and slowly rises from the water to stride towards you and Ivan, extremely embarrassed...'
 
 				act 'Meeting Ivan': gt 'katjaEv','kathan9'
@@ -1661,7 +1661,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan9':
 		'You approach Ivan, and as the school''s resident stoic, he doesn''t say much. He just tilts his head and gazes from Katja to you and back, but doesn''t show, let''s say, a more MANLY reaction. You are a little... disappointed by the cold act, especially because Ivan seems more interested in drying his skin than ogling your naked bodies. Not even Katja seems to know how to react to that passivity.'
 	elseif IvanShowerQW = 11 and pav_slut <250:
 		'"Hey girls! Lucky me to encounter the most beautiful violets in all of the school!"'
-		'You can appreciate a timid smile creeping onto Katja''s cutely blushing face. You don''t know how to feel in this situation. Jealous, annoyed or...Fuck! Ivan picks up a towel and starts drying his... well-toned body. Ehhh...What were you thinking about? Bah, nothing important!'
+		'You can appreciate a timid smile creeping onto Katja''s cutely blushing face. You don''t know how to feel in this situation. Jealous, annoyed or... Fuck! Ivan picks up a towel and starts drying his... well-toned body. Ehhh... What were you thinking about? Bah, nothing important!'
 	else
 		'As he takes a towel and begins to dry himself, Ivan, the perpetual silent wolf, gives you a nod acknowledging your existence, but doesn''t seem to be really interested in the two of you. It is a little offensive, but for Ivan, hot girls coming to pester him during a training period must be a "vulgar" occurrence.'
 		'You can appreciate a timid smile creeping onto Katja''s cutely blushing face as she tries to attract the jock''s attention, but it isn''t working. Hm... Maybe you must do something to attract Ivan''s attention?'
@@ -2628,7 +2628,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan17':
 	elseif random_event = 33:
 		'"Some men were born lucky. Some men were born very lucky. Lesco? God shat all over him."'
 	elseif random_event = 34:
-		'"Ehm...I don''t know how to say this, but you do you know Ralph Wiggum? From The Simpsons? I can''t stop comparing Petia to him."'
+		'"Ehm... I don''t know how to say this, but you do you know Ralph Wiggum? From The Simpsons? I can''t stop comparing Petia to him."'
 	elseif random_event = 35:
 		'"What? Nat? Natalia? Ehm... You know... She is... I mean... I don''t know anything about her!"'
 	end
@@ -2653,7 +2653,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan18':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/KWT4.jpg"></center>'
 	'Katja gives you a nudge in the ribs, puts a finger over her lips and signals towards a secluded corner.'
 	'"Shhh <<$pcs_nickname>>. Look!"'
-	'There, Vanya and Vicky are embraced and looking towards the lake doing...nothing except enjoying their mutual company. It feels strange that the hyperactive couple can just stop and smell the flowers. Hm...What now? You can walk away without interfering with their "moment" or, if you are feeling especially childish, you can pester them.'
+	'There, Vanya and Vicky are embraced and looking towards the lake doing... nothing except enjoying their mutual company. It feels strange that the hyperactive couple can just stop and smell the flowers. Hm... What now? You can walk away without interfering with their "moment" or, if you are feeling especially childish, you can pester them.'
 
 	act 'Pester them':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -2679,7 +2679,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan18':
 			'...'
 			wait 1000
 			'...'
-			'Slurp...Life is good! With your hard-won slushie, you and Katja stroll Pavlovsk''s streets...Slurp...High on sugar, you two realize how wonderful it is to be so fabulous...Slurp...And show the world all your sugary magnificence with a selfie...Slurp...Time to look for something else to do.'
+			'Slurp... Life is good! With your hard-won slushie, you and Katja stroll Pavlovsk''s streets... Slurp... High on sugar, you two realize how wonderful it is to be so fabulous... Slurp... And show the world all your sugary magnificence with a selfie... Slurp... Time to look for something else to do.'
 
 			if hour >= 20:
 				act 'It''s too late, acompany Katja to her home':minut += 5 & gt 'pav_residential'
@@ -3000,7 +3000,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan23':
 			elseif grupTipe = 5:
 				'Smiling nervously, you unhook your arm from the redhead, and feeling insecure, stride towards the approaching Svyatoslav.'
 				'"Hey Slavik! I..."'
-				'As Svyatoslav tries to pass by your side towards Katja, he gives you an exasperated gaze. It is evident that a little outcast girl like you isn''t going to stop the big jock boy from reaching the redheaded beauty...or at least that''s what would happen if you were in school.'
+				'As Svyatoslav tries to pass by your side towards Katja, he gives you an exasperated gaze. It is evident that a little outcast girl like you isn''t going to stop the big jock boy from reaching the redheaded beauty... or at least that''s what would happen if you were in school.'
 				'"But, but... I just wanted to talk! Slavik, why are you all so mean to me?!"'
 				'You then whine and put on scared eyes for all the people on the street''s enjoyment, and in that instant, the atmosphere changes as around you, the pedestrians instantly form a dislike to the BIG BAD BULLY threatening the SCARED CUTE GIRL'
 				'"Fuck you <<$pcs_nickname>>! Why don''t you go and fuck your therapist? Just leave Katja and I alone for a minute!"'
@@ -3062,7 +3062,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TamVal':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/TK.jpg"></center>'
 	'Katja has left her phone at home, so you have a quick visit to her room, but as you reach the entry hall, some words reach your ears. Two women are talking in the living room.'
-	'"Oh Aunt Tamara! It has been marvelous to be with you again, but it is so unjust that my job only lets me see you so little, and I...I want to return all the favors you have given me."'
+	'"Oh Aunt Tamara! It has been marvelous to be with you again, but it is so unjust that my job only lets me see you so little, and I... I want to return all the favors you have given me."'
 	'The woman sounds young and, you must say, a little flirty? Turning towards Katja, you see recognition and surprise in her eyes.'
 	'"It is my pleasure Valentina, but you don''t need to do anything. What you must do is concentrate on your studies and work. With that, I''m served, but it is late and I think we must say goodbye. So, Valentina?"'
 	'The older woman sounds a lot more serious, but not without fondness, then suddenly they shut up and some muffled sounds reach your ears. Katja takes your hand and sneaks deeper into the house, where you see two women, embraced and kissing affectionately. Maybe too affectionately for a goodbye kiss. By your side, Katja gasps and the two women turn towards you. The older one smiles, unperturbed at the sudden interruption. The younger (not much older than you), after a moment, tightens her embrace and gives you a somewhat defiant smile.'
@@ -3130,8 +3130,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TamVal':
 				'Katja''s eyes open wide and, for a moment, you have the sensation that somehow you have fucked this, but she doesn''t say or do anything. She just sits by your side and looks intensely at your face.'
 				'"Yes"'
 				'You practically didn''t hear Katja''s whispered word before she leans against you and softly kisses your lips. It barely touches your skin and you think that is the end until her hands reach towards you and grab your clothes, holding you in place.'
-				'She begins kissing you slowly...experimentally. Little kisses all over your lips, with a surprising intensity in Katja''s eyes. Soon, things escalate as her tongue tries to pry open your mouth. You aren''t going to lie, she isn''t good at this, and more than one time, she bites you maybe a little too hard but. You. Don''t. Care.'
-				'You end up laying down on Katja''s bed with her all over you. The make out session quickly escalates and you find yourself gasping for oxygen as Katja tries to reach your tonsils with her tongue (and bites you again). A part of your aroused mind barely registers that the redhead is reaching under your clothes, towards your bust and...She stops?!'
+				'She begins kissing you slowly... experimentally. Little kisses all over your lips, with a surprising intensity in Katja''s eyes. Soon, things escalate as her tongue tries to pry open your mouth. You aren''t going to lie, she isn''t good at this, and more than one time, she bites you maybe a little too hard but. You. Don''t. Care.'
+				'You end up laying down on Katja''s bed with her all over you. The make out session quickly escalates and you find yourself gasping for oxygen as Katja tries to reach your tonsils with her tongue (and bites you again). A part of your aroused mind barely registers that the redhead is reaching under your clothes, towards your bust and... She stops?!'
 				'A confused "Hu?" escapes your lips as you try to understand what just happened. Katja has retreated to the bed''s headboard. Biting her lips, she looks around nervously and tries to fix her ruffled clothes.'
 				'"That was. Woah. Hm. Something <<$pcs_nickname>>"'
 
@@ -3190,7 +3190,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TamVal':
 					'It fills you completely, suffusing through your being with power...'
 					'<font color="red"><b>and hunger</b></font>'
 					'In an instant, the Veil breaks and Katja is exposed to all your radiance. Fear crosses her eyes before the fake reality reasserts its influence and obfuscates her perceptions, but by that moment, tendrils of your mana have connected with her deepest desires.'
-					'Slowly...Timidly...Katja begins to undress and she stands before you in only her panties, trying desperately to cover herself and looking mortified. You are surprised that she has the will to leave that last piece of clothing, but, damn, if she isn''t a cute vision!'
+					'Slowly... Timidly... Katja begins to undress and she stands before you in only her panties, trying desperately to cover herself and looking mortified. You are surprised that she has the will to leave that last piece of clothing, but, damn, if she isn''t a cute vision!'
 					'"Come here Katja! Just relax! We aren''t going to do anything wrong!"'
 					gs 'stat'
 
@@ -3258,7 +3258,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TamVal_2':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A14'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A14'']>></font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big14.jpg"></center>'
 	'A few minutes pass with Katja in contemplative silence before you finally decide to leave, but as you reach for the door, she finally talks.'
-	 '"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! I... look this is going to sound awkward, Especially... ehm... taking into consideration what just happened... I was thinking about this before, well, you know. Will you want to... come home to study? I''m not trying to...Ehm...Fuck!"'
+	 '"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! I... look this is going to sound awkward, Especially... ehm... taking into consideration what just happened... I was thinking about this before, well, you know. Will you want to... come home to study? I''m not trying to... Ehm... Fuck!"'
 	'You smile at Katja''s awkwardness.'
 	'"Yes, I would like that Katja, don''t worry."'
 	'She gives you a timid smile before climbing under her bed''s covers as you leave. This has been a full afternoon. There is nothing more for you here... Except Katja''s mother waiting for you in the entry hall...'

+ 1 - 1
locations/kuhr.qsrc

@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ if dildo > 0 and pcs_horny >= 50:
 
 						act 'Finish':gt 'kuhr'
 					elseif izvratH = 1:
-						'"Well, I''m...I''m not sure", he stutters.'
+						'"Well, I''m... I'm not sure", he stutters.'
 						'"So, what do you want?", you ask'
 
 						act 'Put on a show':

+ 1 - 1
locations/kuhr2x.qsrc

@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ if dildo > 0 and pcs_horny >= 50:
 
 						act 'Finish':gt 'kuhr2x'
 					elseif izvratH = 1:
-						'"Well, I''m...I''m not sure", he stutters.'
+						'"Well, I''m... I'm not sure", he stutters.'
 						'"So, what do you want?", you ask'
 
 						act 'Put on a show':

+ 1 - 1
locations/lesbimistress.qsrc

@@ -508,7 +508,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish_3':
 		'Then it hits you... if Mistress has no attributes, that usually means she''s going to shove her entire hand in there.'
 		'You immediately find out that your suspicions are correct, she begins to impatiently push several fingers against your pussy lips, pushing them aside while she works her hand in very slowly. You meekly suffer through it when she goes a bit faster than is comfortable, but all in all it''s not that painful this time.'
 		'"So warm and welcoming... why don''t we do this more often, <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Mistress grins at you, as she begins to fuck your pussy wildly with her hand.'
-		'"Aaaahh...I don''t know Mist- aaaahhhh!" you scream, trying to reply but overwhelmed by the sensations.'
+		'"Aaaahh... I don''t know Mist- aaaahhhh!" you scream, trying to reply but overwhelmed by the sensations.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_fist', 20, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'rough'
 		gs 'stat'

+ 1 - 1
locations/love.qsrc

@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@ gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>''s "friend"', rand(18,32)
 			act 'Further':gt 'sexdvoe', 'var'
 		elseif pcs_intel > 70 or izvrat = 1:
 			proverka5 = 1
-			'You keep explaining that you love him and that you made all these mistakes before you met him. In the end, you manage to convince him and <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> hugs you and whispers in your ear "I guess you still remeber a couple of tricks...I would like you to show them to me later."'
+			'You keep explaining that you love him and that you made all these mistakes before you met him. In the end, you manage to convince him and <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> hugs you and whispers in your ear "I guess you still remeber a couple of tricks... I would like you to show them to me later."'
 
 			act 'Further':gt 'love', 'frends'
 		end

+ 1 - 1
locations/mirafather.qsrc

@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ if Mira_no > 0 and mirafathertalk = 0 and miraday ! daystart:
 	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, do you know what happened to Mira?" Afanasiy asks, looking you in the eye.'
 	'"N-no, what happened to her?" you ask in a confused voice, expecting him to start shouting any second.'
 	'"I don''t know. She is just sitting at home all the time. She doesn''t leave the yard, I''m concerned." Mira''s father answers.'
-	'"Oh, ah...I don''t know," you say, trying to make it sound believable and make your eyes look innocent. "Maybe she was by hurt some local boy, or had a fight with someone..."'
+	'"Oh, ah... I don''t know," you say, trying to make it sound believable and make your eyes look innocent. "Maybe she was by hurt some local boy, or had a fight with someone..."'
 	'"Okay, I think it will pass... soon I hope. But, I want you to come and visit us, I think your company would do Mira a lot of good. It might bring her out of this funk faster." Mira''s father says good-bye, and leaves to resume working around his house.'
 	'"Close call," you think as you watch his retreating back and exhale with relief.'
 	MiraLoc = 0

+ 3 - 3
locations/mitkabuh.qsrc

@@ -463,7 +463,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_1to9':
 	
 	mitkarand = rand(1,10)
 	if (mitkarand = 1 or (mitkarand < 5 and pcs_vag > 0)) and mesec = 0:
-		act 'You nod and slur your words...mumbling something as you fall into his waiting arms':
+		act 'You nod and slur your words... mumbling something as you fall into his waiting arms':
 			*clr & cla
 			if pcs_vag = 0:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkafirst.jpg"></center>'
@@ -504,7 +504,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_1to9':
 			end
 		end
 	elseif mitkarand < 9:
-		act 'You nod and slur your words...mumbling something as you fall into his waiting arms':
+		act 'You nod and slur your words... mumbling something as you fall into his waiting arms':
 			*clr & cla
 			
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkabj.jpg"></center>'
@@ -572,7 +572,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_1to9':
 			end
 		end
 	else
-		act 'You nod and slur your words...mumbling something as you fall into his waiting arms':
+		act 'You nod and slur your words... mumbling something as you fall into his waiting arms':
 			*clr & cla
 			if pcs_ass < 10:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaanal.jpg"></center>'

+ 1 - 1
locations/pav_clinic.qsrc

@@ -1801,7 +1801,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maternity_ward_donation':
 			minut += 15
 			if lactation['breastmv'] > lactation['breastmm']/2 and lactation['breastmv'] >= 100000:
 				'The nurse looks at your breasts'
-				'Nurse: Looks like you could go for another pumping...shall we?'
+				'Nurse: Looks like you could go for another pumping... shall we?'
 				act 'Have your breasts pumped again': gt 'pav_clinic', 'maternity_ward_donation'
 			else
 				act 'Ask to donate more': gt 'pav_clinic', 'maternity_ward_donation'

+ 3 - 3
locations/pav_complexrolan.qsrc

@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ if month >=3 and month =< 11:
 					cla & *clr
 					gs 'stat'
                   !!Image needed '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat130.jpg"></center>'
-					'Looking closer, you see the reason for Rolan''s interest... well...that''s a good sight.'
+					'Looking closer, you see the reason for Rolan''s interest... well... that''s a good sight.'
 					act 'Look':gt 'pav_complexrolan', 'spy'
 				end
 				act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
@@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy':
       !!Image needed $court_imgb = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat41.jpg"></center>'
       !!Image needed $court_imgc = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat42.jpg"></center>'
 	elseif len_rol_ler = 5:
-		$court_texta = 'You see Mrs Sokoloff coming and decide to move away. You don''t want to listen to a lesson outside of school. You move away and turn to see if she''s gone, but she''s still there speaking with Rolan...wait... "Who''s there?" you think. You see Lena and Lera exposing their bodies a few steps from Rolan and Mrs Sokoloff...'
+		$court_texta = 'You see Mrs Sokoloff coming and decide to move away. You don''t want to listen to a lesson outside of school. You move away and turn to see if she''s gone, but she''s still there speaking with Rolan... wait... "Who''s there?" you think. You see Lena and Lera exposing their bodies a few steps from Rolan and Mrs Sokoloff...'
 		$court_textb = 'Soon they move, you decide to follow them and hide behind a wall. Lera pulls out a dildo and start to lube it up, while Lena goes down and spreads Lera''s lips...'
 		$court_textc = 'It seems too daring and soon they move on to a secluded spot to proceed unnoticed. You follow them and find a tree to crouch behind. Lena pushes the dildo further inside Lera and starts to fuck her. This spot passes as ''hidden'' and they continue to fuck free from unwanted viewers... at least they think so.'
       !!Image needed $court_imga = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat50.jpg"></center>'
@@ -394,7 +394,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'panties', 'dispose'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanapol0.jpg"></center>'
-				'"...O-OK...I think I''ve learned my lesson"'
+				'"...O-OK... I think I''ve learned my lesson"'
 				*nl
 				'"No you haven''t. You shouldn''t snoop around to take things that aren''t yours, and that you know nothing about. You need to learn a harder lesson than this. Now bend over."'
 				'...'

+ 1 - 1
locations/pav_library.qsrc

@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour < 18:
 		pcs_horny += 20
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/accessories/books/romance' + rand(1,20) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'You spend a very short hour reading a romance novel - choosing between a vampire or a werewolf, falling in love with an obscenely wealthy Grey...several of the scenes are very steamy and you find yourself getting quite aroused.'
+		'You spend a very short hour reading a romance novel - choosing between a vampire or a werewolf, falling in love with an obscenely wealthy Grey... several of the scenes are very steamy and you find yourself getting quite aroused.'
 		act 'Put the book back': gt 'pav_library'
 	end
 	act 'Study for an hour':

+ 1 - 1
locations/police_station.qsrc

@@ -712,7 +712,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'booking1':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/police/booking1.jpg"></center>'
 								'You quickly get dressed as the officer prepares the fingerprint process.'
-								'As you''re about to begin the process the officer speaks up, "You know...I really would''ve helped you. Think about it the next time."'
+								'As you''re about to begin the process the officer speaks up, "You know... I really would''ve helped you. Think about it the next time."'
 								'You sigh and hesitantly dip your finger one by one into the ink and take your time to press them against the paper. The officer then points at wall and tells you to stand there.'
 
 								act 'Take the mugshot':

+ 3 - 3
locations/preNT.qsrc

@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Ride':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/city/gun.jpg"></center>'
 			'You immediately recognize it as a firearm. You suddenly feel your heart sink as your thoughts race. <font color=#FF00CC>OH NO! Mother was right. I was too trusting. He is going to kidnap me isn''t he? What do I do? Do I take the gun? Is the safety on? I don''t know if I can even shoot it. Maybe I''m overreacting.</font> You carefully watch Albert while shaking until you see him reach toward his back and scratch his side, lifting his shirt just high enough for you to see something shiny. You look closer at it and realize that it is a police badge. You take a huge sigh of relief as you carefully close the glove compartment. You continue relaxing until you catch Albert, in the corner of your eye, staring at your legs.'
 			*nl
-			'You watch him at the corner of your vision while he continues to stare at your legs while you pretend not to notice. After a minute you notice him begin firmly rubbing on his crotch. You start feeling a little hot, not entirely sure why. <font color=#FF00CC>Why is it so hot all of a sudden? Maybe it is the way he is looking at me. He must really want me. He keeps rubbing that...Bulge. Maybe I should touch it for him. I bet his dick is big if his bulge is that big, but what if he doesn''t want it? That would be so embarrassing, but if he does want it then this is my chance to finally be with a real man, but am I ready?</font>'
+			'You watch him at the corner of your vision while he continues to stare at your legs while you pretend not to notice. After a minute you notice him begin firmly rubbing on his crotch. You start feeling a little hot, not entirely sure why. <font color=#FF00CC>Why is it so hot all of a sudden? Maybe it is the way he is looking at me. He must really want me. He keeps rubbing that... Bulge. Maybe I should touch it for him. I bet his dick is big if his bulge is that big, but what if he doesn''t want it? That would be so embarrassing, but if he does want it then this is my chance to finally be with a real man, but am I ready?</font>'
 
 			gs 'willpower', 'hj', 'self'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -382,7 +382,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Listings':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Corridor</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korr.jpg"></center>'
-		'You begin heading to your apartment before opening the door to your new home. After entering your home, you hang up your jacket then place your bags down before walking up to the window and opening it, letting in the fresh air while taking a few moments to think to yourself: <font color=#FF00CC>So this is my new life. A life where I can make MY OWN decisions on how to live it. I can be whatever I want to be. I can be a waitress, a model, a secretary or even a stripper if I wanted to but...I don''t think that I have the courage to work a job like that, maybe I will feel more confident about that in the months to come.</font>'
+		'You begin heading to your apartment before opening the door to your new home. After entering your home, you hang up your jacket then place your bags down before walking up to the window and opening it, letting in the fresh air while taking a few moments to think to yourself: <font color=#FF00CC>So this is my new life. A life where I can make MY OWN decisions on how to live it. I can be whatever I want to be. I can be a waitress, a model, a secretary or even a stripper if I wanted to but... I don''t think that I have the courage to work a job like that, maybe I will feel more confident about that in the months to come.</font>'
 		*nl
 		'<font color=#FF00CC>Anyway I have a new city to explore and enough money for another two months of rent. I can look for a job or maybe stop by the mall for some new clothes... Although I have heard of a rather risque clothing shop in the city center, but there is no way that I would have enough confidence to wear such clothes.</font> You quickly shake your head before taking a deep breath, ready to start your new life.'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00CC><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
@@ -465,7 +465,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Train':
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Corridor</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korr.jpg"></center>'
-					'You approach your apartment then begin opening the door to your new home. After entering your home, you hang up your jacket then place your bags down before walking up to the window and opening it, letting in the fresh air while taking a few moments to think to yourself: <font color=#FF00CC>So this is my new life. A life where I can make MY OWN decisions on how to live it. I can be whatever I want to be. I can be a waitress, a model, a secretary or even a stripper if I wanted to but...I don''t think that I have the courage to work a job like that, maybe I will feel more confident about that in the months to come. Anyway I have a new city to explore and enough money for another two months of rent.</font>'
+					'You approach your apartment then begin opening the door to your new home. After entering your home, you hang up your jacket then place your bags down before walking up to the window and opening it, letting in the fresh air while taking a few moments to think to yourself: <font color=#FF00CC>So this is my new life. A life where I can make MY OWN decisions on how to live it. I can be whatever I want to be. I can be a waitress, a model, a secretary or even a stripper if I wanted to but... I don''t think that I have the courage to work a job like that, maybe I will feel more confident about that in the months to come. Anyway I have a new city to explore and enough money for another two months of rent.</font>'
 					*nl
 					'<font color=#FF00CC>I can look for a job or maybe stop by the mall for some new clothes... Although I have heard of a rather risque clothing shop in the city center, but there is no way that I would have enough confidence to wear such clothes.</font> You quickly shake your head before taking a deep breath, ready to start your new life.'
 					'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00CC><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'

+ 1 - 1
locations/shoplifting.qsrc

@@ -584,7 +584,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 							!Clean yourself up as he watches, can''t believe what you''ve just done, he calls the cops and threatens Sveta not to say anything cause next time he won''t be this gentle
 							'"Here, get cleaned up and dress yourself!" he hands you over a towel. The security guard remains observing you while you clean yourself up, making sure you''ve cleaned yourself properly not leaving a trace behind.'
 							'While you''re putting on your clothes you can''t let go of feeling ashamed to what you''ve experienced and try your best to avoid eye contact.'
-							'"Sit down on that chair and wait for me to return whore!" he commands as you barely manage to even give him a subtle nod. As you sit down he walks up to you, "Listen here. Don''t you dare telling anyone about this...I know who you are and where you live and the next time I won''t be as gentle as this time." With that he turns and walks out of the office, locking it, leaving you to ponder on what''s about to happen next.'
+							'"Sit down on that chair and wait for me to return whore!" he commands as you barely manage to even give him a subtle nod. As you sit down he walks up to you, "Listen here. Don''t you dare telling anyone about this... I know who you are and where you live and the next time I won''t be as gentle as this time." With that he turns and walks out of the office, locking it, leaving you to ponder on what''s about to happen next.'
 							*nl
 							'Some minutes pass by and you hear several voices approaching the door. As they open up you see the security guard standing there with a police officer, "This one?" he asks as he points at you. The security guard nods his head, "Yeah she''s a real pain in the ass."'
 							'The officer walks over to you and cuffs you and begins leading you away. As you''re being led by the security guard he shines up in a smile, mocking you.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/sitr.qsrc

@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@ if dildo > 0 and pcs_horny >= 50:
 
 						act 'Finish':gt 'sitr'
 					elseif izvratH = 1:
-						'"Well, I''m...I''m not sure", he stutters.'
+						'"Well, I''m... I'm not sure", he stutters.'
 						'"So, what do you want?", you ask'
 
 						act 'Put on a show':

+ 1 - 1
locations/sitr2x.qsrc

@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ if dildo > 0 and pcs_horny >= 50:
 
 						act 'Finish':gt 'sitr2x'
 					elseif izvratH = 1:
-						'"Well, I''m...I''m not sure", he stutters.'
+						'"Well, I''m... I'm not sure", he stutters.'
 						'"So, what do you want?", you ask'
 
 						act 'Put on a show':

+ 5 - 5
locations/street_walker.qsrc

@@ -606,7 +606,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'policelie':
 	'Unamused, the officer crosses his arms over his chest. "I know what you''re doing out here, lying won''t get you anywhere except a visit to the police station."'
 	'Your eyes immediately drop to the ground at the mention of being arrested. Heart racing, palms sweaty, you take a deep breath before nodding slowly. "I''m sorry, sir... you''re right, I was out here working..."'
 	'He scoffs. "What, suddenly you''re shy about it? Let me hear you <i>say</i> it," he orders coldly, and all you can do is nod again.'
-	'"I was...I''m a prostitute, sir..." You say quietly.'
+	'"I was... I'm a prostitute, sir..." You say quietly.'
 
 	act 'Beg him to let you go':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -635,7 +635,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'policeexp':
 	*nl
 	'You wrack your brain for a good answer but come up with nothing. "No... I was just... on my way home." You look up and bat your eyelashes innocently but he seems unfazed.'
 	'His expression darkens. "You think I''m stupid, girl?" he barks back so suddenly and loudly that it makes you jump slightly. You quickly shake your head and try to apologize, but he cuts you off. "I''ve been watching you for awhile now and all you''ve been doing is slinking up and down the streets looking for customers!"'
-	'You swallow hard as your eyes look everywhere except at him. "I...I think you might have me confused with someone else..." You start to take a step back, but the officer grabs your upper arm with an iron grip and pulls you back close.'
+	'You swallow hard as your eyes look everywhere except at him. "I... I think you might have me confused with someone else..." You start to take a step back, but the officer grabs your upper arm with an iron grip and pulls you back close.'
 	'"You really wanna keep lying to me?! You''re just making this a lot worse for yourself..." He tightens his grip even more and you wince softly. It''s not enough to really hurt you but it gets his point across.'
 	'"Alright, alright, I was! I was whoring!" You admit with a huff. "Please... please just give me a break! I don''t want to go to jail... I can''t!" Before the last words are out your mouth, you start to sniffle and soon tears are rolling down your cheeks.'
 
@@ -645,7 +645,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'policeexp':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/streetwalker/police.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
 			'"...Alright, stop your crying..." The officer says, but you''re barely able to hear him between your sobbing.'
-			'"Wh...what?" You ask when you feel him release his grip on your arm. Through blurry eyes, you see the officer is giving you a pitiful yet uncomfortable look. "You''re letting me go?"'
+			'"Wh... what?" You ask when you feel him release his grip on your arm. Through blurry eyes, you see the officer is giving you a pitiful yet uncomfortable look. "You''re letting me go?"'
 			'He clears his throat awkwardly. "Yeah, I am... but you better head straight home. I don''t want to see you out here again, understand?"'
 			'You quickly nod, wiping away the tears as you compose yourself. "Thank you!" You say, but he just responds with a grunt before waving you away.'
 
@@ -668,7 +668,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'policebribe':
 	*nl
 	'Your heart skips a beat as you think of what to do! He must already know you''re out here whoring so lying would definitely get you into more trouble. You heard that some girls offer sexual favors to avoid trouble, but it feels like too much of a risk. As you stand there squirming, you suddenly get an idea and hope it''ll get you out of this.'
 	*nl
-	'"Listen...I have some money...y''know, that I earned tonight?" You start to reach for your pocket, but the cop tenses, obviously weary of what you might be grabbing for. "No, no! It''s just money, I promise!" You reassure him as you slowly pull out a handful of crumpled bills. "This is all I have, and you can have it if... you let me go," You say quietly, your hand held out to him. He looks at you then at the money with an unreadable expression. The silence seems to stretch on forever until you speak up again, trying to further convince him. "Please, sir... I really don''t want to go to jail..."'
+	'"Listen... I have some money... y'know, that I earned tonight?" You start to reach for your pocket, but the cop tenses, obviously weary of what you might be grabbing for. "No, no! It''s just money, I promise!" You reassure him as you slowly pull out a handful of crumpled bills. "This is all I have, and you can have it if... you let me go," You say quietly, your hand held out to him. He looks at you then at the money with an unreadable expression. The silence seems to stretch on forever until you speak up again, trying to further convince him. "Please, sir... I really don''t want to go to jail..."'
 
 	act 'Wait for his reaction': gt 'street_walker', 'briberyreaction'
 end
@@ -777,7 +777,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'policesub2':
 	gs 'pain', 2, 'twist', 'pinch'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/streetwalker/sex/policesub2.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'"Right...I understand..." You answer weakly as his grin widens. Leading him to quiet and secluded area, he wastes no time hiking your dress up and shoving his knee between your legs to spread them. Careless and rough, his fingers dig into the soft flesh of your breasts as he gropes them. You don''t do much except stand there, absently looking upward to the sky as you try your best to focus your attention on anything but this.'
+	'"Right... I understand..." You answer weakly as his grin widens. Leading him to quiet and secluded area, he wastes no time hiking your dress up and shoving his knee between your legs to spread them. Careless and rough, his fingers dig into the soft flesh of your breasts as he gropes them. You don''t do much except stand there, absently looking upward to the sky as you try your best to focus your attention on anything but this.'
 	*nl
 	'"Turn around," he orders and you obey without a word. You stick your ass out for him and he pulls your panties down to your thighs. You hear him spit, using it as improvised lube as he smears it along his condom covered dick. In one violent thrust, he''s buried deep inside your pussy, stretching your walls and filling you completely. You wince and grit your teeth as he fucks you fast and hard. His labored breathing picks up and with a grunt, you feel his cock throb as the condom is filled with his hot load. You stand there, bent over with him panting over you as you wait for his dick to stop twitching. Finally, he pulls out and you''re left with a dull pain between your legs.'
 	*nl

+ 6 - 6
locations/tatiana_missions.qsrc

@@ -355,7 +355,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2A':
 		if bimbolevel > 0:
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Vintage Tatiana?</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/btatiana/VT2.jpg"></center>'
-			'The chair isn''t special, but you are pretty sure you''ve seen it somewhere. Where? The boxes are full of old albums, but what really catches your attention is a roll of film. You hold it up to the light, and notice that the woman in the negatives resembles...Tatiana?!'
+			'The chair isn''t special, but you are pretty sure you''ve seen it somewhere. Where? The boxes are full of old albums, but what really catches your attention is a roll of film. You hold it up to the light, and notice that the woman in the negatives resembles... Tatiana?!'
 			'"Umm... can you leave that in the box?"'
 			'Turning towards the voice, you see a familiar redhead sitting half-naked on the chair, gazing at you with apprehension.'
 			'Her appearance is so sudden that you point a finger at her, screaming the first thing that enters your mind. "You!"'
@@ -442,7 +442,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2A':
 		else
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Vintage Tatiana?</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/btatiana/VT2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You have seen the chair before. It appeared in the photo that Tatiana showed you. The boxes are full of old photo albums from the last twenty years, but what catches your attention is a roll of film that sits on top. You hold it up to the light, and notice that the woman in the negatives resembles...Tatiana?!The albums, the physical film. How old is she?'
+			'You have seen the chair before. It appeared in the photo that Tatiana showed you. The boxes are full of old photo albums from the last twenty years, but what catches your attention is a roll of film that sits on top. You hold it up to the light, and notice that the woman in the negatives resembles... Tatiana?!The albums, the physical film. How old is she?'
 			'"Umm... can you leave that in the box?"'
 			'Turning towards the voice, you see a familiar redhead sitting half-naked on the chair, gazing at you with apprehension. Her appearance is surprising, as your magical senses can''t seem to ''feel'' her presence.'
 			'"Hmm... I think it''s better if we talk somewhere else, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
@@ -542,9 +542,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2C':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">BTatiana?</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/btatiana/VT1.jpg"></center>'
 	'What do you say to a magical clone? Now that you can give her a good look over... she has nice shoes.'
-	'"Err...I like your shoes. Where did you get them, ahh... Tatiana?"'
+	'"Err... I like your shoes. Where did you get them, ahh... Tatiana?"'
 	'She seems taken aback by your question, but quickly smiles and begins modeling for you.'
-	'"These little things? Hmm...I don''t know. They... I mean, like I was born with them, but for sure! I think they are pretty! I love how they stylize my hips!"'
+	'"These little things? Hmm... I don''t know. They... I mean, like I was born with them, but for sure! I think they are pretty! I love how they stylize my hips!"'
 	'She then stops and nervously licks her lips.'
 	'"Look, sorry if I scared you, but there was this blonde that warned me about somebody coming to... banish me and, well, I was a little confused. You don''t look like that sort of person. I mean, hell, you know about shoes! Okay, give me a moment. Talking this way is tiring, let''s talk somewhere else."'
 	'She extends a hand, touching you and...'
@@ -562,7 +562,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2C':
 		'You continue massaging a moaning Tatiana for a while before a question finally forms in your head.'
 		'"Hey, Tatiana, you told me something about a blonde?"'
 		'"Hmm? Blondie? Yeah, she was the one that warned me about you. She is like this tall, business suit-wearing blonde jerk with a stick up her ass! I told her to try wearing some stilettos and a leather skirt suit, you know for the "hot boss dominatrix" look, and she was like, pretty insulting!" Tatiana sighs. "Look, I know that the ''other'' Tatiana sent you, but can you, like, forget it? I mean, I don''t want to be banished! I don''t know what will happen to me if that happens! I just..."'
-		'Tatiana turns towards you with a look of fear on the face and...freezes.'
+		'Tatiana turns towards you with a look of fear on the face and... freezes.'
 		minut += 1
 		AlexandriaQW = 4
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -637,7 +637,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2E':
 	'"Okay, Tatiana. Tell me about this ''Blondie''."'
 	'She nervously licks her lips and continues.'
 	'"Blondie? Yeah, she was the one that warned me about you. She is like this tall, business suit-wearing blonde jerk with a stick up her ass! She told me that the ''other'' Tatiana would send you to banish me and... I was afraid! Can you, like, forget it? I mean, I don''t want to be banished! I don''t know what will happen to me if that happens! I just..."'
-	'She stops midsentence, looks around in fear and...freezes.'
+	'She stops midsentence, looks around in fear and... freezes.'
 
 	act 'You awaken':
 		*clr & cla