[text edit] clean up sister

locations/sister.qsrc

@@ -33,11 +33,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pav_commcenter':
 		gs 'stat'
 		if npc_rel['A57'] >= 80:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/reks/reks.jpg"></center>'
-			'Anya and her friends are dressed up and hanging out, but look like they are about to leave and go somewhere.'
+			'Anya and her friends are dressed up and hanging out but look like they are about to leave and go somewhere.'
 			gs 'sister', 'partyanswer', 'rex'
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/community/anyaroma2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Anya and her friends are dressed up and hanging out, but look like they are about to leave and go somewhere.'
+			'Anya and her friends are dressed up and hanging out but look like they are about to leave and go somewhere.'
 			'Your sister sees you, smiles and waves you over. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! We''re going to a party at Rex''s place. Want to come with us?"'
 			gs 'sister', 'partyanswer', 'anya'
 		end
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partyanswer':
 				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, how the hell did you get so drunk already? I was going to invite you to a party, but you look like you have already been to one. Go home and sleep it off!"'
 				act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			else
-				'Her smile fades and she seems confused for a moment before a look of disgust appears on her blushing face. "My God, why are you walking around with cum all over your face!? You''ll get yourself a reputation! Go home and wash that off, quickly!" She then shoos you away as her friends stare at you.'
+				'Her smile fades, and she seems confused for a moment before a look of disgust appears on her blushing face. "My God, why are you walking around with cum all over your face!? You''ll get yourself a reputation! Go home and wash that off, quickly!" She then shoos you away as her friends stare at you.'
 				'You feel a little ashamed that you have embarrassed yourself and your sister by walking around like this in public.'
 				act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			end
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partyanswer':
 			else
 				'"Shit <<$pcs_nickname>>, is that cum?" He leans in to get a better look then recoils in disgust.'
 				'Your hand goes up to the dried cum on your face that you forgot to wipe off. "I don''t know what came over me, I wasn''t myself. Please, forgive me if you can."'
-				'"Whatever slut. Just get away from me." He moves away from you and you see everyone giving you either a disgusted or angry look.'
+				'"Whatever slut. Just get away from me." He moves away from you, and you see everyone giving you either a disgusted or angry look.'
 				'"Okay..." Not knowing what else to say, you walk away disheartened.'
 				act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			end
@@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 	else
 		temp = rand(0,4)
 		if temp = 0:
-			'Impatiently, Anya picks up a bottle of beer and shouts "Come on guys! Will you pour me some beer today or what?"'
+			'Impatiently, Anya picks up a bottle of beer and shouts, "Come on guys! Will you pour me some beer today or what?"'
 			if rand(0,1) = 0:
 				'Rex takes the bottle out of Anya''s hands.'
 				temprand = rand(0,4)
@@ -175,48 +175,48 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 					'"Stop shouting, I''m pouring!"'
 					temprand = rand(0,2)
 					if temprand = 0:
-						'Between fits of giggles, Anya says "I haven''t even started to yell. If I do, you''ll know!"'
+						'Between fits of giggles, Anya says, "I haven''t even started to yell. If I do, you''ll know!"'
 					elseif temprand = 1:
-						'With a resounding slap on Rex''s shoulder, Lusya says "Hurry up, you piece of dog shit!"'
+						'With a resounding slap on Rex''s shoulder, Lusya says, "Hurry up, you piece of dog shit!"'
 					else
-						'With a smile, Ira says "Don''t get angry, Rex."'
-						if rand(0,10) = 0:'Anya quickly interjects. "We might need to chain him to a post until he calms down."'
+						'With a smile, Ira says, "Don''t get angry, Rex."'
+						if rand(0,10) = 0:'Anya quickly interjects, "We might need to chain him to a post until he calms down."'
 					end
 				elseif temprand = 1:
 					'"Well, you always like to be late for the fun. Will your loud ass relax? I''m sorting it all out."'
 					temprand = rand(0,2)
 					if temprand = 0:
-						'Between fits of giggles, Anya says "My ass is always relaxed."'
-						'Roma wraps his arm around her and cups the side of her hip with his hand. "Hell yeah it is.", which gets everyone laughing.'
+						'Between fits of giggles, Anya says, "My ass is always relaxed."'
+						'Roma wraps his arm around her and cups the side of her hip with his hand. "Hell yeah it is," he says, which gets everyone laughing.'
 					elseif temprand = 1:
-						'With a resounding slap on Rex''s shoulder, Lusya says "If we had something to drink, we would be relaxed!"'
+						'With a resounding slap on Rex''s shoulder, Lusya says, "If we had something to drink, we would be relaxed!"'
 					else
-						'Roma giggles and says "If she relaxes it anymore, it will be too loose to feel anything."'
-						'"That''s just because you have a little dick." Anya quips, which gets everyone laughing.'
+						'Roma giggles and says, "If she relaxes it anymore, it will be too loose to feel anything."'
+						'"That''s just because you have a little dick," Anya quips, which gets everyone laughing.'
 					end
 				elseif temprand = 2:
 					'"Come on, you could have opened it yourself, you lazy bitch. Don''t you have hands?" he says with a smile.'
 					temprand = rand(0,2)
 					if temprand = 0:
-						'Anya giggles "Yeah, but what else are yours good for?"'
-						if rand(0,10) = 0:'With mock indignation, Rex answers "Really? Just one other thing..."'
+						'Anya giggles. "Yeah, but what else are yours good for?"'
+						if rand(0,10) = 0:'With mock indignation, Rex answers, "Really? Just one other thing..."'
 					elseif temprand = 1:
-						'With a resounding slap on Rex''s shoulder, Lusya says "Is that how you speak to a lady?"'
-						if rand(0,10) = 0:'With mock indignation, Rex answers "Yes, I speak Russian to her."'
+						'With a resounding slap on Rex''s shoulder, Lusya says, "Is that how you speak to a lady?"'
+						if rand(0,10) = 0:'With mock indignation, Rex answers, "Yes, I speak Russian to her."'
 					else
-						'Ira smiles, saying "Don''t get so upset, Rex."'
-						if rand(0,10) = 0:'Anya quickly interjects. "We might need to chain him to a tree to keep him calm."'
+						'Ira smiles, saying, "Don''t get so upset, Rex."'
+						if rand(0,10) = 0:'Anya quickly interjects, "We might need to chain him to a tree to keep him calm."'
 					end
 				elseif temprand = 3:
 					'"Allow me, madame."'
 					temprand = rand(0,2)
 					if temprand = 0:
-						'Anya giggles "Of course, monsieur."'
+						'Anya giggles. "Of course, monsieur."'
 					elseif temprand = 1:
-						'With mock indignation, Anya says "Don''t you Madame me!"'
-						if rand(0,10) = 0:'Rex bows gallantly and answers "I''m truly sorry, mademoiselle."'
+						'With mock indignation, Anya says, "Don''t you Madame me!"'
+						if rand(0,10) = 0:'Rex bows gallantly and answers, "I''m truly sorry, mademoiselle."'
 					else
-						'Impatiently, Anya says "Pour it already, you clown."'
+						'Impatiently, Anya says, "Pour it already, you clown."'
 					end
 				else
 					'"Shit! Where are the cups? Did we not buy any?"'
@@ -226,7 +226,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 					elseif temprand = 1:
 						'"Rex, you''re the one who bought them. Is your memory really that bad?" Roma asks.'
 					else
-						'Lusya holds up the cups and says "Rex, calm down."'
+						'Lusya holds up the cups and says, "Rex, calm down."'
 					end
 				end
 			else
@@ -235,25 +235,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 				if temprand = 0:
 					'Rex holds the cups while Roma pours the beer.'
 				elseif temprand = 1:
-					'Rex takes the cups and mutters "That worthless ass. Can''t he use both of his hands at once?"'
+					'Rex takes the cups and mutters, "That worthless ass. Can''t he use both of his hands at once?"'
 				elseif temprand = 2:
-					'Ira takes the cups and says "Pour already, you big doofus."'
+					'Ira takes the cups and says, "Pour already, you big doofus."'
 				else
 					'As Roma pours beer in the cups, he suddenly starts to tip over. Unable to regain his balance while this drunk, he falls over and spills all the beer on the ground.'
 					temprand = rand(0, 2)
 					if temprand = 0:
-						'Outraged, Rex screams "You worthless drunk ass! No one can trust you! Didn''t your mother ever tell you ''Always pour with two hands?!''"'
+						'Outraged, Rex screams, "You worthless drunk ass! No one can trust you! Didn''t your mother ever tell you ''Always pour with two hands?!''"'
 					elseif temprand = 1:
-						'Outraged, Rex says "How the fuck could you spill that? Are you really that drunk already?"'
+						'Outraged, Rex says, "How the fuck could you spill that? Are you really that drunk already?"'
 					else
-						'Placing her head in her hand, Anya indigantly mutters "Always the fucking same! Getting too drunk, too fast..."'
+						'Placing her head in her hand, Anya indignantly mutters, "Always the fucking same! Getting too drunk, too fast..."'
 					end
 				end
 			end
 		elseif temp = 1:
-			'Indignantly, Lusya says "Did we come here to drink beer or to look at it?"'
+			'Indignantly, Lusya says, "Did we come here to drink beer or to look at it?"'
 		elseif temp = 2:
-			'With a flirty look, Ira bats her eyelashes and says "Boys, are we going to drink beer today or not?"'
+			'With a flirty look, Ira bats her eyelashes and says, "Boys, are we going to drink beer today or not?"'
 		elseif temp = 3:
 			if rand(0,1) = 0:
 				'Rex picks up a bottle of beer and pops it open.'
@@ -265,7 +265,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 					elseif temprand = 1:
 						'"Rex, you''re the one who bought them. Is your memory really that bad? Roma asks."'
 					else
-						'Lusya holds up the cups and says "Rex, calm down."'
+						'Lusya holds up the cups and says, "Rex, calm down."'
 					end
 				else
 					'"Roma, hold the cups while I pour."'
@@ -277,39 +277,39 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 				if temprand = 0:
 					'Rex holds the cups while Roma pours the beer.'
 				elseif temprand = 1:
-					'Rex takes the cups and mutters "That worthless ass. Can''t he use both of his hands at once?"'
+					'Rex takes the cups and mutters, "That worthless ass. Can''t he use both of his hands at once?"'
 				elseif temprand = 2:
-					'Ira takes the cups and says "Pour it already, you big doofus."'
+					'Ira takes the cups and says, "Pour it already, you big doofus."'
 				else
 					'As Roma pours beer in the cups, he suddenly starts to tip over. Unable to regain his balance while this drunk, he falls over and spills all the beer on the ground.'
 					temprand = rand(0, 2)
 					if temprand = 0:
-						'Outraged, Rex screams "You worthless drunk ass! No one can trust you! Didn''t your mother ever tell you ''Always pour with two hands?!''"'
+						'Outraged, Rex screams, "You worthless drunk ass! No one can trust you! Didn''t your mother ever tell you ''Always pour with two hands?!''"'
 					elseif temprand = 1:
-						'Outraged, Rex says "How the fuck could you spill that? Are you really that drunk already?"'
+						'Outraged, Rex says, "How the fuck could you spill that? Are you really that drunk already?"'
 					else
-						'Anya places her head in her hand and indignantly mutters "Always the fucking same! Getting too drunk, too fast..."'
+						'Anya places her head in her hand and indignantly mutters, "Always the fucking same! Getting too drunk, too fast..."'
 					end
 				end
 			end
 		else
-			'Roma picks up the bottle of beer, opens it and says "Somebody hold the cups."'
+			'Roma picks up the bottle of beer, opens it and says, "Somebody hold the cups."'
 			temprand = rand(0, 3)
 			if temprand = 0:
 				'Rex holds the cups while Roma pours the beer.'
 			elseif temprand = 1:
-				'Rex takes the cups and mutters "That worthless ass. Can''t he use both of his hands at once?"'
+				'Rex takes the cups and mutters, "That worthless ass. Can''t he use both of his hands at once?"'
 			elseif temprand = 2:
-				'Ira takes the cups and says "Pour already, you big doofus."'
+				'Ira takes the cups and says, "Pour already, you big doofus."'
 			else
 				'As Roma pours beer in the cups, he suddenly starts to tip over. Unable to regain his balance while this drunk, he falls over and spills all the beer on the ground.'
 				temprand = rand(0, 2)
 				if temprand = 0:
-					'Outraged, Rex screams "You worthless drunk ass! No one can trust you! Didn''t your mother ever tell you ''Always pour with two hands?!''"'
+					'Outraged, Rex screams, "You worthless drunk ass! No one can trust you! Didn''t your mother ever tell you ''Always pour with two hands?!''"'
 				elseif temprand = 1:
-					'Outraged, Rex says "How the fuck could you spill that? Are you really that drunk already?"'
+					'Outraged, Rex says, "How the fuck could you spill that? Are you really that drunk already?"'
 				else
-					'Anya places her head in her hand and indignantly mutters "Always the fucking same! Getting too drunk, too fast..."'
+					'Anya places her head in her hand and indignantly mutters, "Always the fucking same! Getting too drunk, too fast..."'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -341,7 +341,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 			npc_rel['A57'] += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/reks/rex.jpg"></center>'
-			'Already pretty tipsy, Rex approaches you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, let me refill your glass." However he, seemingly by accident, spills some on your foot. "Oh <<$pcs_nickname>>, forgive me! Here, I''ll clean that up for you."'
+			'Already pretty tipsy, Rex approaches you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, let me refill your glass." However, he, seemingly by accident, spills some on your foot. "Oh <<$pcs_nickname>>, forgive me! Here, I''ll clean that up for you."'
 			'Rex begins wiping off your legs with his shirt sleeve.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'foreplay', 'resist', 'easy'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -352,7 +352,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 					npc_rel['A57'] -= 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/reks/event/community/rexnet.jpg"></center>'
-					'"No problem, I can manage that." you say as you clean your own shoe.'
+					'"No problem, I can manage that," you say as you clean your own shoe.'
 					act 'Continue to drink beer': gt 'sister', 'scene2'
 				end
 			else
@@ -365,7 +365,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 				npc_rel['A57'] += 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/reks/event/community/rexda.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Laughing, you wait until Rex finishes wiping your foot. While you are giggling, Rex becomes more bold, gradually replacing his sleeve with his palm and working up your leg towards your thigh. Just as Rex''s hand starts to drift to your inner thigh, you realize what is going on and hurriedly remove his hand, saying: "Hey..."'
+				'Laughing, you wait until Rex finishes wiping your foot. While you are giggling, Rex becomes more bold, gradually replacing his sleeve with his palm and working up your leg towards your thigh. Just as Rex''s hand starts to drift to your inner thigh, you realize what is going on and hurriedly remove his hand, saying, "Hey..."'
 				act 'Continue to drink beer': gt 'sister', 'scene2'
 			end
 		elseif rexPark = 1 and rexParkDay < daystart and rexSisTalk = 2:
@@ -448,7 +448,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_5.jpg"></center>'
 					'You turn down the invitation.'
-					'"Sorry, but I can''t. The coach doesn''t allow me to stay out late and drinking is also prohibited."'
+					'"Sorry, but I can''t. Coach doesn''t allow me to stay out late, and drinking is also prohibited."'
 					act 'Finish': gt 'sister', 'pav_commcenter'
 				end
 			end