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[text edit] clean up sister_party

Spackled Lanturn há 3 anos atrás
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      locations/sister_party.qsrc

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locations/sister_party.qsrc

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_party':
 		''
 	end
 	'Your sister' + iif($loc_arg = 'party_gost', ' is drunk and in good spirits.', '.')
-	'"Oh <<$pcs_nickname>>, How do you like our humble party? It looks like you''re having a good time."'
+	'"Oh <<$pcs_nickname>>, how do you like our humble party? It looks like you''re having a good time."'
 	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	if alko < 6 and $loc_arg = 'party_home': act 'Have a drink': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_drink'
 	if $loc_arg = 'party_gost': act 'Drink': gt 'sister_party', 'sister_drink'
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk':
 			'"I know, I know. I got excited a little bit, but now everything is worked out."'
 		elseif sisterQW['partytalk'] = 3:
 			'"So you are just going to continue dating him after everything that happened?"'
-			'"Well little sis, he made mistakes. Now he and I have worked things out and I thank God everything is behind us."'
+			'"Well little sis, he made mistakes. Now he and I have worked things out, and I thank God everything is behind us."'
 		elseif sisterQW['partytalk'] = 4:
 			'"I cannot believe it! You let him crawl back and took him back? It''s not like you."'
 			'"Well <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s best to have a bird in the hand, especially now that we don''t have such a simple relationship anymore.'
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk':
 			'"Eh, something like that <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 		elseif sisterQW['partytalk'] = 7:
 			'"I can see that you are a fool! I could not agree to that."'
-			'"Why? I know he loves me and he knows that I love him, but while we are young, we have fun."'
+			'"Why? I know he loves me, and he knows that I love him, but while we are young, we have fun."'
 		elseif sisterQW['partytalk'] = 8:
 			'"I still say it''s crazy how you can be in a loving relationship and still fuck anyone."'
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I am not a complete fool. Why ''anyone''? Look around, there are other nice guys here too, such as Rex.'
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk':
 		if i = 2:'"Sometimes I can''t decide what is more important: the size of their wallet or the size of their dick. What do you think <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 		if i = 3:'"If you have a reputation as the town whore, the guys won''t let you come to the parties anymore."'
 		if i = 4:'"It''s not good to come here when you''re in a bad mood. Rex hates having miserable bastards in his house."'
-		if i = 5:'"Still going to that crap school? Idiot, find yourself a rich man and all your problems are solved!"'
+		if i = 5:'"Still going to that crap school? Idiot, find yourself a rich man, and all your problems are solved!"'
 		if i = 6:'"When I drink, I become like a man and constantly think about sex."'
 		if i = 7:'"Roma sends his greetings. He said he missed our threesomes, so I slapped him across the face."'
 		if i = 8:'"What do you think of our host?"'
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_drink':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anya</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_sister_2.jpg"></center>'
-	'Anya hands you a bottle. You take a swig and hand it back. "Keep the bottle, little sis. I won''t tell <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>." she says with a wink.'
+	'Anya hands you a bottle. You take a swig and hand it back. "Keep the bottle, little sis. I won''t tell <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>," she says with a wink.'
 	if alko >= 7:
 		'With her encouragement, you end up drinking more than you should.'
 		'Suddenly your head is severely spinning...'
@@ -121,8 +121,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fun':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anya</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_sister_3_<<rand(3,4)>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you dance half naked with your sister, the strong intoxication and excitement turns you on and you start kissing her.'
-		'She doesn''t resist. Instead, she responds in kind and soon you are both embraced in a deep passionate makeout, your tongues exploring each other''s mouths.'
+		'As you dance half naked with your sister, the strong intoxication and excitement turns you on, and you start kissing her.'
+		'She doesn''t resist. Instead, she responds in kind, and soon you are both embraced in a deep passionate makeout, your tongues exploring each other''s mouths.'
 		if Rex_Love = 1:'Rex continues to watch you and your sister with great curiosity.'
 		'Wild desire seizes you. As you continue to kiss, you pull her towards one of the bedrooms.'
 		
@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fun':
 				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anya</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_sister_4_<<rand(1,3)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'You kiss her breasts and stomach right down to her panties. You pull her panties down, exposing her already soaking wet pussy, which you begin to lick.'
-				'Both of you moan in pleasure. You feel hot with desire, but can''t help but think that, despite all your sister''s protests that she isn''t a lesbian, she is just kidding herself. She loves having lesbian sex way too much.'
+				'Both of you moan in pleasure. You feel hot with desire and can''t help but think that, despite all your sister''s protests that she isn''t a lesbian, she is just kidding herself. She loves having lesbian sex way too much.'
 				'Kissing, licking and sucking her clit, your face is wet with her juices. Her body twitches, and she moans loudly from your actions.' 
 				'After her moaning starts getting louder, you plunge your tongue inside of her, eliciting a cry of pleasure as you tongue fuck her pussy, slipping your tongue in and out of her.'
 				
@@ -162,13 +162,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fun':
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_sister_4_<<rand(1,3)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'You roll over as Anya climbs on top of you. As she kisses her way down to your nipples, your body arches in pleasure as you feel your pussy getting wet already.'
 				'Kissing and licking her way down your body, she pulls your panties off and gently kisses your clit. Her tongue gently flicking your clit elicits deep moans of pleasure from you. You feel a full tremor run through your body as her tongue slips inside of you.'
-				'"Mmm <<$pcs_nickname>>, you taste so sweet." Anya murmurs. You can''t help but smile at the skill of her tongue and again silently question her claims that she isn''t into girls.'
+				'"Mmm <<$pcs_nickname>>, you taste so sweet," Anya murmurs. You can''t help but smile at the skill of her tongue and again silently question her claims that she isn''t into girls.'
 				'Anya''s tongue works wonders, filling you with mounting pleasure as it strokes inside of you, penetrating you as deeply as it can go. She starts to tongue fuck your pussy.' 
 				
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 				gs 'stat'
 		
-				act 'Caress Anya with your hand': gt 'sister_party', 'hand'
+				act 'Let Anya caress you with her hand': gt 'sister_party', 'hand'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hand':
 		gs 'stat'
 		
 	end
-	act 'Let her caress you too':
+	act 'Caress each other':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anya</font></b></center>'
 		if rand(1,2) = 1:
@@ -218,9 +218,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hand':
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_sister_7_2.jpg"></center>'
 			end
-			if sister_party_dom = 2:'You also wanted to caress her pussy with your fingers.'
-			if sister_party_dom = 1:'Anya also wanted to caress your pussy with her fingers.'
-			'With delicate and skillful hands you plunge your fingers into each other, at times pulling them out to lick and suck your wet fingers. Both of you moan and pant, close to your sweet releases.'
+			if sister_party_dom = 2:'You let Anya know you also want to caress her pussy with your fingers.'
+			if sister_party_dom = 1:'Anya lets you know she also wants to caress your pussy with her fingers.'
+			'With delicate and skillful hands, you plunge your fingers into each other, at times pulling them out to lick and suck on them. Both of you moan and pant, close to your sweet releases.'
 			''
 			
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
@@ -252,8 +252,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cum':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anya</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_sister_9_<<rand(1,2)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'Your bodies convulse and spasm at the same time as a pure wave of pleasure overwhelms you both. In time, both of you will claim the other came first, but for now, you are lost in the ecstasy of the moment.'
-	'"Oh <<$pcs_nickname>>, if you weren''t my sister, I would marry you" your sister mumbles.'
-	'Your warm, wet and limp bodies lay entangled in a moment of pure bliss before you fall asleep in each other''s arms.'    
+	'"Oh <<$pcs_nickname>>, if you weren''t my sister, I would marry you," your sister mumbles.'
+	'Your warm, wet and limp bodies lie entangled in a moment of pure bliss before you fall asleep in each other''s arms.'    
 
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 5
@@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboyQW_party':
 	'Once you burst into Rex''s house, the loud music immediately drowns out just about any other noise.'
 	'You help the guys lay out the table. They carry the drinks and you the snacks, but there is so much booze that it covers the table, leaving nowhere to put the snacks.'
 	'Everyone starts to thump in unison, dealing, laughing and telling funny stories.'
-	'You cheerfully ask Anya "you won''t leave me alone at the party will you?"'
+	'You cheerfully ask Anya, "You won''t leave me alone at the party will you?"'
 	'Anya smiles and hands you a bottle of vodka. "Of course not <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 	act 'Decline the drink':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -285,8 +285,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboyQW_party':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_9.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'You politely try to refuse the drink, but everyone watching has gathered round and started chanting. "Drink! Drink! Drink! Drink! Drink! Drink!"'
-		'Giving into peer pressure, you take the bottle from Anya''s hand and gulp down a huge swig of vodka.'
+		'You politely try to refuse the drink, but everyone watching has gathered round and started chanting, "Drink! Drink! Drink! Drink! Drink! Drink!"'
+		'Giving in to peer pressure, you take the bottle from Anya''s hand and gulp down a huge swig of vodka.'
 		act 'Go dance': gt 'sister_party', 'dance'
 		act 'Drink': gt 'sister_party', 'drink'
 		act 'Sit': gt 'sister_party', 'sit'
@@ -298,7 +298,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboyQW_party':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_9.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'You take the bottle from her hand."Well, let''s party!" you say and gulp down a huge swig of vodka.'
+		'You take the bottle from her hand. "Well, let''s party!" you say and gulp down a huge swig of vodka.'
 		'Roma looks at Anya and smirks. "Look, <<$pcs_nickname>> is drinking more than you!" Everyone then begins to drink heavily.'
 		act 'Go dance': gt 'sister_party', 'dance'
 		act 'Drink': gt 'sister_party', 'drink'
@@ -312,12 +312,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboyQW_party':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_9.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'Standing, you try to get out from behind the table to go dancing, but no one is actually dancing. They are all just sitting and drinking.'
-		'Seeing what you''re doing, Rex pulls you over: "Where are you going? It''s only the beginning! Hold the bottle and let''s drink, otherwise I will be offended."'
-		if sisterQW['rexbday'] = 2:
-			'You can''t deny the birthday boy, so you take the bottle from his hand and gulp down a huge shot, feeling it burn down your throat. You hear others shouting in encouragement.'
-		else
-			'You can''t deny the host of the party, so you take the bottle from his hand and gulp down a huge shot, feeling it burn down your throat. You hear others shouting in encouragement.'
-		end
+		'Seeing what you''re doing, Rex pulls you over. "Where are you going? It''s only the beginning! Hold the bottle and let''s drink, otherwise I will be offended."'
+		'You can''t deny the ' + iif(sisterQW['rexbday'] = 2, 'birthday boy', 'host of the party') + ', so you take the bottle from his hand and gulp down a huge shot, feeling it burn down your throat. You hear others shouting in encouragement.'
 		act 'Go dance': gt 'sister_party', 'dance'
 		act 'Drink': gt 'sister_party', 'drink'
 		act 'Sit': gt 'sister_party', 'sit'
@@ -369,7 +365,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anya_find':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
-	'You look for your sister, but can''t find her. "Where the hell did she go?" You look everywhere in desperation.'
+	'You look for your sister but can''t find her. "Where the hell did she go?" You look everywhere in desperation.'
 	act 'Look in the bathroom': gt 'sister_party', 'anya_toilet'
 	act 'Look in the kitchen': gt 'sister_party', 'anya_kit'
 	act 'Look in the bedroom': gt 'sister_party', 'anya_bed'
@@ -389,7 +385,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anya_kit':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_25.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'Turning around, you find Anya completely naked, drinking from a bottle with tears running down her face while looking at Roma. "Well it''s over between us. Go to hell dog!"'
-		'Roma doesn''t say anything in response and Anya turns and runs away in tears. You glare at him for a few few moments, then rush after her.'
+		'Roma doesn''t say anything in response, and Anya turns and runs away in tears. You glare at him for a few few moments, then rush after her.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5, 'incest'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Chase Anya':
@@ -455,7 +451,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anya_toilet':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_22.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'You walk into the bathroom and find some guy pushing some poor girl''s head into the toilet. Thankfully, it isn''t Anya and, not wanting to get involved any further, you leave.'
+	'You walk into the bathroom and find some guy pushing some poor girl''s head into the toilet. Thankfully, it isn''t Anya, and not wanting to get involved any further, you leave.'
 	act 'Look in the kitchen': gt 'sister_party', 'anya_kit'
 	act 'Look in the bedroom': gt 'sister_party', 'anya_bed'
 end
@@ -467,7 +463,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anya_bed':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_23.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'In the bedroom, you see two guys jerking off onto the face of some poor unconscious girl as one of them says to the other "let''s get the fuck out of here before she wakes up. I don''t want to deal with her ex-boyfriend. He''s one of the boxers."'
+	'In the bedroom, you see two guys jerking off onto the face of some poor unconscious girl as one of them says to the other, "Let''s get the fuck out of here before she wakes up. I don''t want to deal with her ex-boyfriend. He''s one of the boxers."'
 	'Anya isn''t here, so you keep searching.'
 	act 'Look in the bathroom': gt 'sister_party', 'anya_toilet'
 	act 'Look in the kitchen': gt 'sister_party', 'anya_kit'
@@ -481,7 +477,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reks':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_19.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	'"Hey girl! Damn, you''ve been having fun. Oh yeah, you''re Anya''s little sister, right? I know she''s... That''s odd, I haven''t seen her. Although I have been drinking bubbly all day. Here, drink up!"'
-	'He starts pouring the sweet champagne down your throat. He''s so drunk that he pours it too fast and, as much as you try to keep up, a lot of it spills on you and the floor.
+	'He starts pouring the sweet champagne down your throat. He''s so drunk that he pours it too fast, and as much as you try to keep up, a lot of it spills on you and the floor.
 	 Then, without a word, Rex just staggers off.'
 	act 'Look for Anya': gt 'sister_party', 'anya_find'
 	act 'Follow Rex to the toilet for birthday sex':
@@ -491,8 +487,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reks':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_20.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'You go to the bathroom, only to find Rex already there, having just finished taking a piss with his dick still out in his hand. "Oh <<$pcs_nickname>>, you again? I''m here already..."'
-		'Stopping him mid-sentence, you push him down onto the toilet and pull his hand away from his cock. You start undressing and watch his cock stiffen as he stares at your naked body. You climb on and straddle him. Lowering yourself onto his cock, you feel it slide into your wet pussy and you begin to ride him. "Happy birthday." you whisper in his ear.'
-		'"Fucking hell." he mumbles as you ride him.'
+		'Stopping him mid-sentence, you push him down onto the toilet and pull his hand away from his cock. You start undressing and watch his cock stiffen as he stares at your naked body. You climb on and straddle him. Lowering yourself onto his cock, you feel it slide into your wet pussy. "Happy birthday," you whisper in his ear.'
+		'"Fucking hell," he mumbles as you ride him.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Doggystyle':
@@ -503,8 +499,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reks':
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_21.mp4"></video></center>'
 			*nl
-			'Rex growls as he grabs you and lifts you off him. He gets up, bends you over and plunges his dick right back into your pussy and begins to furiously fuck you balls deep.'
-			'"Not so fast, not so deep." you beg him. However, the pain of his frantic balls deep fucking soon gives way to waves of deep pleasure as he keeps pounding you.'
+			'Rex growls as he grabs you and lifts you off him. He gets up, bends you over and plunges his dick right back into your pussy, beginning to furiously fuck you balls deep.'
+			'"Not so fast, not so deep," you beg him. However, the pain of his frantic balls deep fucking soon gives way to waves of deep pleasure as he keeps pounding you.'
 			'With a final grunt, he shoots his load deep inside your pussy. "Wow <<$pcs_nickname>>, you are hotter than your sister!" He then zips his pants and leaves you alone in the bathroom.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'rough'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -584,8 +580,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'drink':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_11.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'Everyone undresses to the waist and goes into the hall to dance. "Come dance <<$pcs_nickname>>, you don''t want to be left alone." Anya calls out to you.'
-	'Not now Anya. I want to drink some more first." you reply.'
+	'Everyone undresses to the waist and goes into the hall to dance. "Come dance <<$pcs_nickname>>, you don''t want to be left alone," Anya calls out to you.'
+	'Not now Anya. I want to drink some more first," you reply, but not taking no for an answer, Anya drags you out to dance with her and her friends.'
 	act 'Go dance': gt 'sister_party', 'dance'
 end