[text edit] clean up TV

locations/TV.qsrc

@@ -4,10 +4,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	elektro += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/telek.jpg"></center>'
-	'You turn on the TV and settled comfortably on the couch.'
+	'You turn on the TV and settle comfortably on the couch.'
 
-	if TV = 1:'Your ancient TV warms up and you''re greeted by adverts, the sound is terrible.'
-	if TV = 2:'Your huge plasma comes to life and you hear the crisp sound of some advert, it looks great in HD.'
+	if TV = 1:'Your ancient TV warms up, and you''re greeted by adverts. The sound is terrible.'
+	if TV = 2:'Your huge plasma comes to life, and you hear the crisp sound of some advert. It looks great in HD.'
 
 	if kabel = 0:
 		'You do not have cable, so it shows only one channel that''s just constant advertising and news.'
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		act 'Watch TV (1:00)': minut += 60 & gt 'TV', 'kable'
 	end
 
-	if daystart < 10 and StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:'Sometimes while watching TV you catch a glimpse of your legs or chest, and every time it''s a bit shocking for you to see that your body is now that of a woman.'
+	if daystart < 10 and StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:'Sometimes while watching TV, you catch a glimpse of your legs or chest, and every time, it''s a bit shocking for you to see that your body is now that of a woman.'
 	act 'Turn off the TV and get off the couch':
 		cla
 		gt $loc, $loc_arg
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nokable':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/telek.jpg"></center>'
 	'You watch the network channel, lying on the couch. It''s all repeats and cheesy infomercials.'
 
-	if daystart < 10 and StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:'Sometimes while watching TV you catch a glimpse of your legs or chest, and every time it''s a bit shocking for you to see that your body is now that of a woman.'
+	if daystart < 10 and StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:'Sometimes while watching TV, you catch a glimpse of your legs or chest, and every time, it''s a bit shocking for you to see that your body is now that of a woman.'
 
 	act 'Watch TV (1:00)': minut += 60 & gt 'TV', 'nokable'
 	act 'Turn off the TV and get off the couch': gt $loc, $loc_arg
@@ -46,9 +46,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kable':
 	elektro += 3
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/telek.jpg"></center>'
-	'You watch cable television., it''s really good these days.'
+	'You watch cable television. It''s really good these days.'
 
-	if daystart < 10 and StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:'Sometimes while watching TV you catch a glimpse of your legs or chest, and every time it''s a bit shocking for you to see that your body is now that of a woman.'
+	if daystart < 10 and StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:'Sometimes while watching TV, you catch a glimpse of your legs or chest, and every time, it''s a bit shocking for you to see that your body is now that of a woman.'
 
 	act 'Watch TV (1:00)': minut += 60 & gt 'TV', 'kable'
 	act 'Turn off the TV and get off the couch': gt $loc, $loc_arg
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pav':
 		tvtime = 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/tv/oldtvon.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You turn on the TV and settled comfortably on the couch as you wait for the ancient TV to warm up. After 5 minutes or so, the tiny white dot at the center of the screen expands into a grainy black and white image that scrolls up and down for a few moments before settling.'
+		'You turn on the ancient TV and settle comfortably on the couch as you wait for it to warm up. After 5 minutes or so, the tiny white dot at the center of the screen expands into a grainy black and white image that scrolls up and down for a few moments before settling.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'TV', 'pav'
 	elseif tvtime = 1:
 		*clr & cla
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pav':
 			*clr & cla
 			tvtime = 0 
 			'<center><video autoplay src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/tv/tv_turn_off_effect.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You turn off the TV and the image folds in on itself to form a bright line across the screen which then shrinks into a tiny white dot that slowly fades. The speakers emit a high pitched squalk in protest.'
+			'You turn off the TV and the image folds in on itself to form a bright line across the screen which then shrinks into a tiny white dot that slowly fades. The speakers emit a high pitched squawk in protest.'
 			act 'Continue': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
 	end
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gad':
 		tvtime = 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/tv/oldtvon.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You turn on the TV and settled comfortably on the couch as you wait for the ancient TV to warm up. After 5 minutes or so, the tiny white dot at the center of the screen expands into a grainy black and white image that scrolls up and down for a few moments before settling.'
+		'You turn on the ancient TV and settle comfortably on the couch as you wait for it to warm up. After 5 minutes or so, the tiny white dot at the center of the screen expands into a grainy black and white image that scrolls up and down for a few moments before settling.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'TV', 'gad'
 	elseif tvtime = 1:
 		*clr & cla
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gad':
 			*clr & cla
 			tvtime = 0 
 			'<center><video autoplay src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/tv/tv_turn_off_effect.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You turn off the TV and the image folds in on itself to form a bright line across the screen which then shrinks into a tiny white dot that slowly fades. The speakers emit a high pitched squalk in protest.'
+			'You turn off the TV and the image folds in on itself to form a bright line across the screen which then shrinks into a tiny white dot that slowly fades. The speakers emit a high pitched squawk in protest.'
 			act 'Continue': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
 	end