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[text edit] clean up tatiana_missions

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      locations/tatiana_missions.qsrc

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locations/tatiana_missions.qsrc

@@ -27,9 +27,9 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'phone_intro':
 	TatianaCall = 1
 	'"Hello?"'
-	'"<<$pcs_firstname>>, it''s Tatiana", she greets you. "I need you to come by the lab. How soon could you be here?"'
+	'"<<$pcs_firstname>>, it''s Tatiana," she greets you. "I need you to come by the lab. How soon can you be here?"'
 	'"The lab? Well, I- wait, when did I give you my cellphone number?"'
-	'"You didn''t", Tatiana says cheerfully. "But I''m a PI <b>and</b> I can use magic, silly. Finding out your phone number is the easiest thing in the world for me. Anyway, when could you be here?"'
+	'"You didn''t," Tatiana says cheerfully, "but I''m a PI <b>and</b> I can use magic, silly. Finding out your phone number is the easiest thing in the world for me. Anyway, when can you be here?"'
 	'"I don''t know," you respond, unwilling to commit until you know what this is about. "What''s wrong?"'
 	'"Nothing, don''t worry. Just come by when you have the chance. There are some things we should talk about."'
 	'And before you can question her further, she hangs up on you.'
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/library/downlibint.jpg"></center>'
 		'"I don''t see anything magical," you say, disappointed.'
 		'"What did you expect, dragons?" Tatiana laughs. "The magic is all around you, <<$pcs_firstname>>. Most of the books in this part of the library are books on magic, ranging from magic theory and philosophical works to spellbooks on geomancy and shamanism. It''s one of the biggest collections of its kind in this country, I''ve been told."'
-		'Your eyes go wide. You thought the literature at Tatiana''s lab had been a lot, but it is like a drop of water, compared to the lake in front of you. "And I''m supposed to read all this?"'
+		'Your eyes go wide. You thought the literature at Tatiana''s lab had been a lot, but it is like a drop of water compared to the lake in front of you. "And I''m supposed to read all this?"'
 		'"Well, not all of it. But this is where you can come to learn about magic, where you can learn what you need to know in order to be able to cast spells and all that," she explains.'
 		'You take a moment to let that sink in. Only a short time ago, you had no idea magic existed, and now here you are, standing in the middle of a public library, and you realize that this knowledge was there all along, right under everybody''s noses. And what knowledge it must be... "Can I read whatever I like?"'
 		'"Sure, anything you want. There are no restrictions. None of it is barred from you."'
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro':
 		act 'Hurray for skipping the basics!':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/library/mission/tatiana_lib.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Here, how about you start with this." Tatiana suggests, offering you a book she randomly picked from the bookcase next to her.'
+			'"Here, how about you start with this," Tatiana suggests, offering you a book she randomly picked from the bookcase next to her.'
 			'"What is it?"'
 			'"It''s," she takes a peek at the spine, "''Advanced Pyromancy, or: How to get rid of pesky squirrels.''"'
 			'"... That''s not what it says."'
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro':
 			act 'Look at the book':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/library/mission/book_pyromancy.jpg"></center>'
-				'Tatiana extends her hand once more and you take the book. It is warm to the touch, bound in red leather with cracks all over the surface - cracks that seem to be flickering, like you can peek at a fire behind them. But when you look at the book''s spine, you''re having trouble making out the words there. Irritated by this, you open the book on a random page. The heavy parchment contains diagrams, hand-drawn images and hundreds of pages worth of text, you can see them... but their meaning seems to slip away every time you think you are getting ahold of it.'
+				'Tatiana extends her hand once more, and you take the book. It is warm to the touch, bound in red leather with cracks all over the surface - cracks that seem to be flickering, like you can peek at a fire behind them. But when you look at the book''s spine, you have trouble making out the words there. Irritated by this, you open the book to a random page. The heavy parchment contains diagrams, hand-drawn images and hundreds of pages worth of text, you can see them... but their meaning seems to slip away every time you think you are getting ahold of it.'
 				'"I can''t read it," you say, defeated.'
 				'"Of course you can''t," Tatiana says understandingly, "you are not ready for this knowledge. I wasn''t kidding when I said that I tried cutting corners with the reading: I <b>hate</b> reading; loathe it, really. Not the ''getting smarter'' part of it but the physical act of sitting down in dark libraries and sticking my nose into dusty scrolls and books. But," she points towards the rows upon rows of bookcases, packed with books all the way up to the ceiling, "I would hate it even more to let all this magic go to waste and to leave all of my potential untapped, just because I don''t like how I have to acquire some of it."'
 				'"You plan on reading all of it?"'
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro':
 					end
 					'When your look falls back on the book, a question takes form in your head. "Why can''t I read it, though? It almost seemed to me like," you pause for a second because it sounds crazy to you, "like the letters were moving, like they were avoiding my looks."'
 					'"Noticed that, didn''t you? Yeah, I guess when I explained to you that magic is in all living things, maybe a better way to put it would have been: ''Magic IS a living thing.'' I don''t know what it is, whether your mind has to be prepared for it, or your magical power has to grow to the point where you can sync it with that in the books, or something else entirely. All I know is that you can''t just grab any book and go nuts - you have to start with the basics and stick to them until you fully comprehend them; then, when you are ready, you''ll be able to move to the next step." She sighs. "Learning takes time, <<$pcs_firstname>>. If I could, I''d be all over books on how to shift the shapes of bodies on a whim, or create life from nothing, but the bottom-line is that you can only skip so many steps."'
-					'If what Tatiana said about how normal people perceive magic was true for these books too, then non-magical people would look at them and probably see books they weren''t interested in, you conclude. "So, my only mission here is...?"'
+					'If what Tatiana said about how normal people perceive magic is true for these books too, then non-magical people would look at them and probably see books they weren''t interested in, you conclude. "So, my only mission here is...?"'
 					'"Reading," Tatiana says with a sympathetic smile. "Come here every now and then and read, learn, understand magic. I can teach you some basic spells to start off with, but only once you''re ready."'
 					'You slump your shoulders. "I guess that means no missions until I''ve done some reading, huh?"'
 					'"Oh no, there will still be ''missions'' for you, don''t worry. Don''t expect Reinhold to take you on any big journeys until you have learned some spells, though. I''ll hold your hand and show you around a little bit, and once you''ve gotten used to the drill and learned a little bit, you can help me out with my investigations, because, frankly," she sighs once more, "I don''t have the time to look into everything myself."'
@@ -124,19 +124,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission1':
 		'"Where are we going exactly?"'
 		'"Pavlovsk," she replies, handing you your ticket.'
 		'You raise an eyebrow. "What''s in Pavlovsk that''s worth looking at?"'
-		'"You mean besides the bastion, the church, and the nice people?" She teases. You open your mouth to ask for a serious answer, but she preempts it: "Well, one of my contacts told me about a strange ball of light floating around the park, and I''m positive what he saw was a fairy."'
+		'"You mean besides the bastion, the church, and the nice people?" she teases. You open your mouth to ask for a serious answer, but she preempts it: "Well, one of my contacts told me about a strange ball of light floating around the park, and I''m positive what he saw was a fairy."'
 		act 'A fairy, you say?':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/ride3.jpg" ></center>'
 			if knowsfairy >= 1:
 				'"Oh, that one," you say, slightly disappointed. You expected something more exciting. "Yeah, I know her."'
 				'"Do you now?" She seems genuinely surprised. "My my, you get around more than I expected. How did you manage to make her acquaintance?"'
-				'"I just ran into her one night and we got talking," you shrug. "Before I knew it, a couple hours had passed and she flew off."'
-				'"So she''s one of the sociable ones," Tatiana muses. "I don''t know why but fairies usually avoid me."'
+				'"I just ran into her one night, and we got talking," you shrug. "Before I knew it, a couple hours had passed, and she flew off."'
+				'"So she''s one of the sociable ones," Tatiana muses. "I don''t know why, but fairies usually avoid me."'
 				'Her saying that reminds you of something: "Wait, how did your contact even see her? She told me that I was the only one who could see her and who she could talk to."'
 				'"She''s right, normal people can''t see fairies at all. But all of us who are magically inclined can. Well, most of us can."'
 				'"What do you mean, ''most of us?''"'
-				'"It might have something to do with a lack of imagination, or maybe it''s some weird interaction between magic and our biology, but as far as I know, only female mages can see fairies. Which might explain why she doesn''t have anybody to talk to - that and what with Pavlovsk being a backwater."'
+				'"It might have something to do with a lack of imagination, or maybe it''s some weird interaction between magic and our biology, but as far as I know, only female mages can see fairies, which might explain why she doesn''t have anybody to talk to - that and what with Pavlovsk being a backwater."'
 				!Comment by cursed schoolgirl only - correct variable?
 				if altQS = 1:
 					'"Hey, I''m from Pavlovsk," you pout.'
@@ -149,9 +149,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission1':
 				'You give her a sceptical look as the train arrives in Pavlovsk.'
 			else
 				'"A fairy?" Your voice is quivering with excitement. "You mean like that Tinkerbell from Peter Pan?" The library and the secrets it holds weren''t a bad start, but it pales in comparison to the prospect of seeing an actual magical creature.'
-				'"Tatiana laughs at your description. "Yeah, Tinkerbell is fairly close to the original, though she''s wearing way too much. They''re usually very sociable. I don''t know why but fairies usually avoid me..." She muses.'
+				'"Tatiana laughs at your description. "Yeah, Tinkerbell is fairly close to the original, though she''s wearing way too much. They''re usually very sociable. I don''t know why but fairies usually avoid me..." she muses.'
 				'"How come I haven''t been hearing more about this? You''d think that a mythical creature would be a pretty big deal."'
-				'"Normal people can''t see fairies at all", she explains. "But all of us who are magically inclined can. Well, most of us can."'
+				'"Normal people can''t see fairies at all," she explains, "but all of us who are magically inclined can. Well, most of us can."'
 				'"What do you mean, ''most of us?''"'
 				'"It might have something to do with a lack of imagination, or maybe it''s some weird interaction between magic and our physiology, but as far as I know, only female mages can see fairies, which might explain why no one''s run into her before - that and what with Pavlovsk being a backwater."'
 				!Comment by cursed schoolgirl only - correct variable?
@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission1':
 				if altQS = 1:
 					'You see a few familiar faces along the way, mostly schoolmates of yours who give the woman next to you curious, in the case of the gopniks outright lustful looks. To your eternal gratitude, none of them stop you and the few who greet you are content with your saying that you''re "in a hurry".'
 				end
-				'The park is the same as always - the same people hang or stroll around. You look in all directions but you cannot, for the life of you, make out anything even remotely resembling a fairy. "I don''t see any fairy here."'
+				'The park is the same as always - the same people hang or stroll around. You look in all directions, but you cannot, for the life of you, make out anything even remotely resembling a fairy. "I don''t see any fairy here."'
 				'"What would I do without your keen observations?" Tatiana mocks.'
 				'"So, what, would you like to go looking for her in the undergrowth?"'
 				'"Sure. Don''t tell me you''re afraid of bushes?" With that, she walks off the path and into the thickest part of the thicket.'
@@ -205,25 +205,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission1':
 					minut += 30
 					'You could have done without a tour through the brambles - at the very least, she could have started looking for the fairy in the easier-to-traverse parts of the park - but you sigh and accept your fate as you follow the redhead.'
 					'For a while, you just wander around aimlessly, always a few meters behind your mentor, always on the lookout for a glowing orb of light. In vain.'
-					'"Are you sure she''s here?" You ask.'
+					'"Are you sure she''s here?" you ask.'
 					'"Where else would she be?" Tatiana''s voice responds from somewhere behind the next tree.'
 					'"Maybe she''s on vacation," you mutter sarcastically - and just then, you see it: At first it''s just a bright glow, emanating from somewhere in the crown of said tree, then a ball of light, and then, as it comes closer, you can make out the creature at its center: A tiny, winged, naked woman, surrounded by light like a halo.'
 					if knowsfairy = 1:
 						'"Hi," you say and awkwardly raise your hand.'
 						'In the blink of an eye, the fairy is fluttering next to you. "Hello!" She says brightly. "So nice of you to visit me during the day!"'
 						'"Yeah, my teacher heard that you lived in this park and wanted to see you, I guess," you explain.'
-						'"See me?" She asks, hopefully.'
+						'"See me?" she asks, hopefully.'
 						'"That was the plan," a voice behind her states. Tatiana seems to have heard the exchange and backtracked, now standing next to the tree. "God, it''s been years since I''ve seen one of you."'
-						'"You can see me!" The fairy exclaims, overjoyed, and flies around in excited circles. "And I thought there was only one human who I could talk to."'
+						'"You can see me!" the fairy exclaims, overjoyed, and flies around in excited circles. "And I thought there was only one human who I could talk to."'
 						'"No, there are definitely more," Tatiana states, "but most of them don''t stroll through this park all that often. Oh, I have so many questions!"'
 						'And without paying you much mind, she launches into a dialogue with the fairy, who seems confused by most and can only answer about half of them, but that doesn''t deter Tatiana any.'
 					else
 						'She gives you a curious look, and you respond in kind. "Uh, Tatiana?"'
-						'The fairy flutters back and forth and you follow her with your eyes. "You can see me?" She asks uncertainly and in a very high-pitched voice.'
-						'You nod, your eyes darting to where Tatiana went. Now that you''re standing here, you realize that she didn''t mention whether or not fairies were dangerous.'
-						'"You can see me!" She shouts, overjoyed, and flies around in excited circles. "I didn''t know if anybody can see me at all. None of the humans in the park ever saw me, even if I was right in front of them."'
+						'The fairy flutters back and forth and you follow her with your eyes. "You can see me?" she asks uncertainly and in a very high-pitched voice.'
+						'You nod, your eyes darting to where Tatiana went. Now that you''re standing here, you realize that she didn''t mention whether or not fairies are dangerous.'
+						'"You can see me!" she shouts, overjoyed, and flies around in excited circles. "I didn''t know if anybody could see me at all. None of the humans in the park ever saw me, even if I was right in front of them."'
 						'Tatiana seems to have heard the exchange and backtracked, now standing next to the tree and examining the fairy. "God, it''s been years since I''ve seen one of you."'
-						'"You can see me?!" She seems about ready to faint. "And here I thought I was lucky to find even one human to talk to!"'
+						'"You can see me?!" she seems about ready to faint. "And here I thought I was lucky to find even one human to talk to!"'
 						'"No, there are definitely more," Tatiana states, "but most of them don''t stroll through this park all that often. Oh, I have so many questions!"'
 						'And without paying you much mind, she launches into a dialogue with the fairy, who seems confused by most and can only answer about half of them, but that doesn''t deter Tatiana any.'
 					end
@@ -232,7 +232,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission1':
 						knowsfairy = 1
 						minut += 60
 						'You try to follow what they''re saying, you really do, but Tatiana''s questions are about the nature of fairy magic, how their dust works and where they get it from, if and when their glow changes, how fairies choose their homes, how they procreate, and many, many more that you can either see little point to or that you quite literally have trouble understanding.'
-						'About an hour passes like this and you are starting to get tired of standing around doing nothing, but it would seem that Tatiana has also remembered that you''re still there. Or maybe she''s just tired of the fairy giving her vague and confused answers, there''s really no telling which it is.'
+						'About an hour passes like this, and you are starting to get tired of standing around doing nothing, but it would seem that Tatiana has also remembered that you''re still there. Or maybe she''s just tired of the fairy giving her vague and confused answers, there''s really no telling which it is.'
 						'Regardless of the ''why'', the redhead finally stops talking and looks at you. "I think those may be enough questions for one day; and certainly enough for our first joint encounter with a magical being, wouldn''t you say?"'
 						'You nod furiously, glad to finally be able to voice this. "Yes, it''s high time we left."'
 						'Despite her lack of interest in the questions Tatiana bombarded her with, the fairy seems disappointed. "You''re leaving already?"'
@@ -241,18 +241,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission1':
 						'"Great! Come here often, friend!" The fairy calls after you as you return to the main paths of the park. You cannot help but notice that she said ''friend'' rather than ''friends'' and was looking at you specifically. If Tatiana talked to every fairy like that, then it''s no surprise that they''d rather avoid her.'
 						act 'Back from the wild':
 							*clr & cla
-							'It doesn''t take too long before you have returned to civilization. Well out of the fairy''s earshot, you finally pose the question that had been coursing around your head: "So, what was this visit about, besides you giving that fairy the third degree?"'
+							'It doesn''t take too long before you have returned to civilization. Well out of the fairy''s earshot, you finally pose the question that had been coursing through your head: "So, what was this visit about, besides you giving that fairy the third degree?"'
 							'"Testing your patience, mostly." You expect to see one of her many grins to go with those words, but her face is completely blank.'
-							'"So all of this was about having me stand there, not doing anything? We came all the way out here so you could waste my time?" You ask, a little upset.'
+							'"So all of this was about having me stand there, not doing anything? We came all the way out here so you could waste my time?" you ask, a little upset.'
 							'Tatiana shakes her head. "Not ''waste time''. Just give you a glimpse at timelessness. Do you have any idea how old fairies can get?"'
-							'Her question quenches your anger and you shake your head.'
+							'Her question quenches your anger, and you shake your head.'
 							'"Old. Several hundred years at least. And they spend all this time in nature, seeing the world from an entirely different perspective than us. And they spend it all surrounded by their own special magic without understanding how it works or where it comes from. What this fairy told me is exactly the same the others before her told me."'
 							'"You asked her things you already knew?"'
-							'"I asked her things I had several accounts on," she corrects. "Just because magic is, you know, ''magic'', that doesn''t mean you can''t approach it as a science: Empirical evidence is the name of the game - it requires experiments and reviews of the theory, over and over and over."'
+							'"I asked her things I had several accounts on," she corrects. "Just because magic is, you know, ''magic'', that doesn''t mean you can''t approach it as a science: empirical evidence is the name of the game - it requires experiments and reviews of the theory, over and over and over."'
 							'"So, you wanted to show me that I have to keep questioning everything and that I have to be patient sometimes?"'
 							'Tatiana smiles; the look she gives you is warm, almost affectionate. "Not a bad conclusion for your first day out."'
 							'"But why a lesson on patience? I thought we covered that subject in the library," you argue.'
-							'"No, we didn''t." Tatiana objects. "I <b>told</b> you that you had to be patient, I <b>showed</b> you that sometimes, impatience won''t get you anywhere, but that''s not the same as teaching patience. I cannot teach you that. All I could do in that area was try to show you some things that might make you feel just humbled by time and magic enough to be patient when you have to be - but not so much that you wouldn''t go out and try to experience things for yourself. And encounters with fairies usually go much better than ones with dragons." She chuckles.'
+							'"No, we didn''t," Tatiana objects. "I <b>told</b> you that you had to be patient, I <b>showed</b> you that sometimes impatience won''t get you anywhere, but that''s not the same as teaching patience. I cannot teach you that. All I can do in that area is try to show you some things that might make you feel just humbled by time and magic enough to be patient when you have to be - but not so much that you won''t go out and try to experience things for yourself. And encounters with fairies usually go much better than ones with dragons." She chuckles.'
 							*nl
 							'You spend a few more minutes chatting before Tatiana receives a call. Her responses don''t give away anything about what they''re talking about, but when she ends it, she only tells you that she has to run, gives you a quick goodbye and hurries off, in the opposite directions from the train station.'
 							act 'Guess that''s the end of this trip':gt 'pav_residential'
@@ -285,11 +285,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/shared/karinpre.jpg"></center>'
 		'Your face must show surprise at her words, because she is smiling. What the fuck?! A dragon?! Is this a joke? Maybe she''s talking about something else, like a triad boss?'
 		'"Yes, <<$pcs_nickname>>, <i>HIC SUNT DRACONES!</i> Not Salvatore''s sissyfied ones, I mean Tolkien''s kingdom-destroying Smaug version! I will tell you about them some other day." She gives you another cheeky smile and continues.'
-		'"Dealing with that crisis took us a while, and when I returned "The Veil" did something to the agency. It made them... hm... <i>forget</i> me. I tried to return using mundane and magical means, but I was repelled again and again. In the end, I lost the gig and the royalties, so I decided to give it time, and see if whatever magical effect was in place dissipated on its own."'
+		'"Dealing with that crisis took us a while, and when I returned, "The Veil" did something to the agency. It made them... hm... <i>forget</i> me. I tried to return using mundane and magical means, but I was repelled again and again. In the end, I lost the gig and the royalties, so I decided to give it time and see if whatever magical effect was in place dissipated on its own."'
 
 		if pcs_scstng <=50:
 			'Tatiana grabs some papers and passes them to you. "Read this, <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
-			'Without magical training the information would be nonsense, but now that you can read them, the mismatched charts and behavioral studies show a... kind of curse floating around the ''Aphrodite Model Agency'' that makes some models suffer a significant loss of IQ and partake in overly archetypal behavior."'
+			'Without magical training, the information would be nonsense, but now that you can read them, the mismatched charts and behavioral studies show a... kind of curse floating around the ''Aphrodite Model Agency'' that makes some models suffer a significant loss of IQ and partake in overly archetypal behavior."'
 			'"Yes, <<$pcs_nickname>>, they are transforming into scatter-brained bimbos! The interesting part is that they are copying some of my mannerisms and views. Following this lead, I consulted some curse experts. In summary, they think that there must be a personal item of mine at its center, and that it''s what made the curse repel me."'
 
 		else
@@ -306,23 +306,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2':
 
 			if pfilmNO = 1:
 				'"Then, what should I do Tatiana? Sneak in after dark looking for this item? Because I was blacklisted, so I can''t enter the Agency now."'
-				'The sorceress shrugs. "Don''t worry, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I have Gustav for those sorts of jobs."I know a way to help you infiltrate the place so you can look for the item in question. When the moment feels right, go to Aphrodite Model Agency and give me a call, but remember, only when the building is open. The curse seems to go dormant when there''s no people around. Don''t worry, I will pay you for your time."'
+				'The sorceress shrugs. "Don''t worry, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I have Gustav for those sorts of jobs." I know a way to help you infiltrate the place so you can look for the item in question. When the moment feels right, go to Aphrodite Model Agency and give me a call, but remember, only when the building is open. The curse seems to go dormant when there are no people around. Don''t worry, I will pay you for your time."'
 				'Saying this, Tatiana turns towards her studies, leaving you to your own devices.'
 
 				act 'Continue': AlexandriaQW = 3 & gt 'tatiana_lab', 'Tatiana'
 			else
 				if model = 1:
 					'"But, Tatiana, I am one of their models, and I didn''t feel anything unusual during the times I was there."'
-					'The sorceress shrugs. "For an impersonal force, magic can be pretty devious. Maybe the effect masked it''s presence, or -- and this is going to give you nightmares -- it made you forget. Well, now that you know that there is something magical in the agency, you need to go and look for it. Talk to the models, eavesdrop, walk around and look for something wrong. It will be good training, and when you finally find whatever is at its center, bring it to me so that I can end the curse. Don''t worry, I will pay you for your time."'
+					'The sorceress shrugs. "For an impersonal force, magic can be pretty devious. Maybe the effect masked its presence, or -- and this is going to give you nightmares -- it made you forget. Well, now that you know that there is something magical in the agency, you need to go and look for it. Talk to the models, eavesdrop, walk around and look for something wrong. It will be good training, and when you finally find whatever is at its center, bring it to me so that I can end the curse. Don''t worry, I will pay you for your time."'
 					'Saying this, Tatiana turns towards her studies, leaving you to your own devices.'
 				else
 					if hotcat <=5:
-						'"Then, what I do, Tatiana? Sneak back in after dark looking for this item?"'
-						'The sorceress shrugs and glances at you. "Nothing that dramatic, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I want to practice the tricks that I used during my tenure, so I was thinking about giving you a magical makeover, and after that you can go and ask for work at the agency. Once inside, you need to look for the item. Talk to the models, eavesdrop, walk around and look for something wrong. It will be good training, and when you finally find whatever is at its center, bring it to me so that I can end the curse. Don''t worry, I will pay you for your time."'
+						'"Then, what should I do, Tatiana? Sneak in after dark looking for this item?"'
+						'The sorceress shrugs and glances at you. "Nothing that dramatic, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I want to practice the tricks that I used during my tenure, so I was thinking about giving you a magical makeover, and after that, you can go and ask for work at the agency. Once inside, you need to look for the item. Talk to the models, eavesdrop, walk around and look for something wrong. It will be good training, and when you finally find whatever is at its center, bring it to me so that I can end the curse. Don''t worry, I will pay you for your time."'
 						'Saying this, Tatiana turns towards her studies, leaving you to your own devices.'
 					else
-						'"Then, what I do, Tatiana? Sneak back in after dark looking for this item?"'
-						'The sorceress looks you over, and smiles. "Nothing that dramatic, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Just look for work at the agency. Once inside, you need to look for the item. Talk to the models, eavesdrop, walk around and look for something wrong. It will be good training, and when you finally find whatever is at its center, bring it to me so that I can end the curse. Don''t worry, I will pay you for your time."'
+						'"Then, what should I do, Tatiana? Sneak in after dark looking for this item?"'
+						'The sorceress looks you over and smiles. "Nothing that dramatic, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Just look for work at the agency. Once inside, you need to look for the item. Talk to the models, eavesdrop, walk around and look for something wrong. It will be good training, and when you finally find whatever is at its center, bring it to me so that I can end the curse. Don''t worry, I will pay you for your time."'
 						'Saying this, Tatiana turns towards her studies, leaving you to your own devices.'
 					end if
 				end if
@@ -339,10 +339,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2A':
 	'If this was a horror flick, you, the clueless heroine, would enter a dark and dust-covered room where some unspeakable evil waits to kill you. As your friends continue partying downstairs, your screams would be muffled by the music.'
 	'But somebody hasn''t read the script.'
 	'This room is well illuminated, with props neatly organized, showing constant use. There is even a photographer in here, taking stock for a shoot. So, no, the horror flick atmosphere is utterly crushed.'
-	'"Can I help you?" The photographer, a man, asks you, without even looking away from the props. It''s baffling how he can stand beside a pretty, naked woman and still react like it was the most normal thing in the world.'
+	'"Can I help you?" the photographer, a man, asks you, without even looking away from the props. It''s baffling how he can stand beside a pretty, naked woman and still react like it is the most normal thing in the world.'
 	'"Maybe? I''m looking for a model named Tatiana. Someone told me that she hangs out around here."'
 	'The man looks around the room and then motions towards the corner, where a chair and some boxes sit, half hidden by the props. Unlike the rest of the room, they look like they haven''t been used in a while.'
-	'"I think she likes to take a rest on that old chair between shoots. Just wait around there and she should turn up."'
+	'"I think she likes to take a rest on that old chair between shoots. Just wait around there, and she should turn up."'
 	'He returns to his work and lets you continue to search for unspeakable evil. <i>Dum Dum DUM!</i>'
 	minut +=2
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -355,7 +355,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2A':
 		if bimbolevel > 0:
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Vintage Tatiana?</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/btatiana/VT2.jpg"></center>'
-			'The chair isn''t special, but you are pretty sure you''ve seen it somewhere. Where? The boxes are full of old albums, but what really catches your attention is a roll of film. You hold it up to the light, and notice that the woman in the negatives resembles... Tatiana?!'
+			'The chair isn''t special, but you are pretty sure you''ve seen it somewhere. Where? The boxes are full of old albums, but what really catches your attention is a roll of film. You hold it up to the light and notice that the woman in the negatives resembles... Tatiana?!'
 			'"Umm... can you leave that in the box?"'
 			'Turning towards the voice, you see a familiar redhead sitting half-naked on the chair, gazing at you with apprehension.'
 			'Her appearance is so sudden that you point a finger at her, screaming the first thing that enters your mind. "You!"'
@@ -370,14 +370,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2A':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/btatiana/ST1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You throw a quick punch towards a surprised "VT" and see how it passes straight through her face as if she wasn''t even there. Then there''s a shimmer, and her appearance changes to a sword-wielding bikini-clad screaming bitch.'
 					'"Blondie was right! You came here to hurt me!"'
-					'You don''t know whether you should laugh at the weird pose, or ask her about the bikini, but it is evident that there''s about to be an epic beatdown between you and--'
+					'You don''t know whether you should laugh at the weird pose or ask her about the bikini, but it is evident that there''s about to be an epic beatdown between you and--'
 					'"What the hell are you two doing?!"'
 					'You both freeze and look back to the now-shooting photographer. Without missing a beat, you motion to "VT" and try to make him understand. "She''s evil! I must stop Vintage Tatiana from hurting more people!"'
 					'"What? I''m not ''Vintage''! It''s just Tatiana, and I''m not evil!"'
 					'"Yes, you are!"'
 					'"No, I''m not!"'
 					'"Shut up you two! I don''t care about your stupid "Game of Bimbos"! If you want to brawl, do it like everyone else and look for a back alley! If you don''t want to be blacklisted, dial it down to the normal model bitching! Understood, ladies?"'
-					'You and Not-Vintage Tatiana murmur an apology, and as he returns to his work, you eye the weary clone that has returned to her ''vintage'' appearance.'
+					'You and Not-Vintage Tatiana murmur an apology, and as he returns to his work, you eye the wary clone that has returned to her ''vintage'' appearance.'
 					minut += 2
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 					gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', -10
@@ -420,7 +420,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2A':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Blondie?</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/alexandria.jpg"></center>'
-					'Blinking in confusion, you find yourself sitting back in the prop''s room, in front of a pissed-looking blonde in a suit who''s going off on a tirade.'
+					'Blinking in confusion, you find yourself sitting back in the props room, in front of a pissed-looking blonde in a suit who''s going off on a tirade.'
 					if csb_start = 1 or $start_type = 'tg':
 						'"Is this some kind of joke?! The final taunt from that three-times-damned Rikudo?! He cursed you to be a vapid woman?!"'
 					else
@@ -442,11 +442,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2A':
 		else
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Vintage Tatiana?</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/btatiana/VT2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You have seen the chair before. It appeared in the photo that Tatiana showed you. The boxes are full of old photo albums from the last twenty years, but what catches your attention is a roll of film that sits on top. You hold it up to the light, and notice that the woman in the negatives resembles... Tatiana?!The albums, the physical film. How old is she?'
+			'You have seen the chair before. It appeared in the photo that Tatiana showed you. The boxes are full of old photo albums from the last twenty years, but what catches your attention is a roll of film that sits on top. You hold it up to the light, and notice that the woman in the negatives resembles... Tatiana?! The albums, the physical film. How old is she?'
 			'"Umm... can you leave that in the box?"'
 			'Turning towards the voice, you see a familiar redhead sitting half-naked on the chair, gazing at you with apprehension. Her appearance is surprising, as your magical senses can''t seem to ''feel'' her presence.'
 			'"Hmm... I think it''s better if we talk somewhere else, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-			'Suddenly, she surges towards you with her hand outstretched. You instinctively lift your hand to slap away her wrist, only for it to pass stright through the apparition.'
+			'Suddenly, she surges towards you with her hand outstretched. You instinctively lift your hand to slap away her wrist, only for it to pass straight through the apparition.'
 
 			act 'Battle in the center of the mind':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -513,9 +513,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2B':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/<<rand(31,60)>>.jpg"></center>'
 		'Suddenly, you find yourself paralyzed as an electrical jolt courses through your nerves, realigning flesh and tissue into your new shape. Just when you think it''s over, your suffering reverses course through your veins and up into your head, where the pain sits, simmering like a burning lake of lava.'
 		'"What the fuck Tatiana?!" you groan, "What have you done to me?!"'
-		'"Sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Three drops of your blood must be put in the potion!" You look at Tatiana like she''s mad, and she pinching her nose tiredly. "Not a Raziel''s fan are you? Damn... sorry, that was inappropriate. Look, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I can change your appearance superficially, but your magic will still try to revert any changes I make, that''s the reason why it hurt. Now I need to do a more extensive transformation, and it will probably hurt a lot more-- but don''t worry! It will pass, and the changes are only temporary."'
+		'"Sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Three drops of your blood must be put in the potion!" You look at Tatiana like she''s mad, and she pinches her nose tiredly. "Not a Raziel''s fan are you? Damn... sorry, that was inappropriate. Look, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I can change your appearance superficially, but your magic will still try to revert any changes I make, that''s the reason why it hurt. Now I need to do a more extensive transformation, and it will probably hurt a lot more-- but don''t worry! It will pass, and the changes are only temporary."'
 		'"Well, you could''ve warned me!"'
-		'She gives you a tired half-smile, before handing you a pocket mirror, so that you can see the stranger you''ve become. "Pretty neat, isn''t it, <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Tatiana says, as she looks over your shoulder.'
+		'She gives you a tired half-smile, before handing you a pocket mirror so that you can see the stranger you''ve become. "Pretty neat, isn''t it, <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Tatiana says, as she looks over your shoulder.'
 		'"Okay! Time for some action! My magic will only work for a while, so hurry into the agency and look for the McGuffin."'
 		'Tatiana ushers you out of the alleyway, and towards the building.'
 
@@ -532,7 +532,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2B':
 			'"What? Yes! I''m feeling great! You <i>must</i> meet her! She''s a redhead named Tatiana! She hangs out back there, in the room where we store the... umm... the things that we use for the shoots!"'
 			'"You mean the props room"?"'
 			'Okay, that''s a clue! Maybe you should search the props room?'
-			act 'Search the props'' room':gt'tatiana_missions','mission2A'
+			act 'Search the props room':gt'tatiana_missions','mission2A'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -571,7 +571,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2C':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Blondie?</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/alexandria.jpg"></center>'
-			'Blinking in confusion, you find yourself sitting back in the prop''s room, in front of a pissed-looking blonde in a suit who is giving you a tirade.'
+			'Blinking in confusion, you find yourself sitting back in the props room, in front of a pissed-looking blonde in a suit who is giving you a tirade.'
 			if csb_start = 1 or $start_type = 'tg':
 				'"Is this some kind of joke?! The final taunt from that three-times-damned Rikudo?! He cursed you to be a vapid woman?!"'
 			else
@@ -581,7 +581,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2C':
 			'"Tatiana?"'
 			'The blonde stops in her rant and looks at you. Now that she isn''t in some insulting monologue, you can see a familiar film in her hand, which quickly disappears into the woman''s pocket.'
 			'"Don''t worry about her, I took care of her before she had time to, well... The truth is that I doubt that your mind can be drained any more, but even without that, she was potentially dangerous."'
-			'Your mind begins to clear and you get a better look at the woman. Blonde and tall, wearing a <i>horrible</i> business suit with some <i>utterly plain</i> shoes! As you examine her, she seems to calm a little and talks to you.'
+			'Your mind begins to clear, and you get a better look at the woman. Blonde and tall, wearing a <i>horrible</i> business suit with some <i>utterly plain</i> shoes! As you examine her, she seems to calm a little and talks to you.'
 			'"Hmm... I suppose it''s time for a presentation." She sighs. "You can call me Aleksei, and you are?"'
 			minut += 1
 			npc_rel['A241'] -=1
@@ -609,12 +609,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2D':
 		end if
 	end if
 	'As the powerful magician in front of you continues with her presentation, you become aware that this is a trap.'
-	'"I admit that your presence here was all according to my design. Your -- let''s be generous -- <i>friend</i> sent you on a fool''s errand so that we can have some privacy, beyond Reinhold''s prying eyes. It was I who send that trickster the information about the curse and--"'
+	'"I admit that your presence here was all according to my design. Your -- let''s be generous -- <i>friend</i> sent you on a fool''s errand so that we could have some privacy, beyond Reinhold''s prying eyes. It was I who sent that trickster the information about the curse and--"'
 	'"Hey girl, remember the dress code!"'
-	'Alex blinks, surprised at the interruption, as a photographer calls to attention the properly dressed wizard. She slowly turns, puts her hands on her hips, sticks out her well-developed chest, and screams at him.'
+	'Alex blinks, surprised at the interruption, as a photographer calls to attention the properly dressed wizard. She slowly turns, puts her hands on her hips, sticks out her well-developed chest, and screams at him,'
 	'<i>"WHAT DID YOU JUST CALL ME?!!"</i>'
 	'The man looks nervously towards you, and begins to fidget under Alex''s hateful gaze, before continuing to stumble over his words. "Uhh... Umm... a woman? I mean, sorry, I know that you are a beautiful, well-developed woman, but you know... you need to be naked."'
-	'You feel mana piling up around Alex, and for a moment it seems that the man is going to end up getting roasted, but suddenly she groans and pushes the photographer away, running out of the room.'
+	'You feel mana piling up around Alex, and for a moment, it seems that the man is going to end up getting roasted, but suddenly, she groans and pushes the photographer away, running out of the room.'
 	'"What the hell? What did I do wrong?"'
 	'Neither the photographer nor you can understand what just happened, but you must talk quickly to Tatiana.'
 	minut += 12
@@ -646,13 +646,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2E':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Blondie?</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/alexandria.jpg"></center>'
-		'Blinking, you find yourself sitting back in the prop''s room, your bitch nowhere to be found. In her place is a tall blonde in a suit, who is giving you the once-over.'
+		'Blinking, you find yourself sitting back in the props room, your bitch nowhere to be found. In her place is a tall blonde in a suit, who is giving you the once-over.'
 		'"I admit that I wasn''t expecting this. I came here to find another of Rikudo''s victims, but no, I found a predator."'
 		'You look towards the boxes, searching for Tatiana''s film, but find it in "Blondie''s" hand, and as you give her a questioning gaze, she locks her eyes to your own. Your instincts kick in and for a moment, a silent confrontation rages in the room.'
 		'Blondie isn''t a Succubus, but she is old and powerful. That means two things. First, you will be hard-pressed to take the film from her grasp, and second, she must be an incredible tasty lay! As you ponder exactly what to do, she pockets the roll of film.'
 		'"I suppose that you can manage her, but it is better if a more experienced magician takes care of this anomaly. Hmm... I suppose this is time for a presentation."'
 		'"Yeah, I suppose. ''Blondie'', isn''t it?"'
-		'You smile as she goes stiff, then begins to grind her teeth. She seems pissed. Score!'
+		'You smile as she goes stiff then begins to grind her teeth. She seems pissed. Score!'
 		'"No! You can call me Aleksei, and you are?"'
 		act '"I am..."':gt'tatiana_missions','mission2D'
 	end
@@ -671,7 +671,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2F':
 	'"Tatiana... are you okay?"'
 	'She doesn''t answer you, just licks her lips before giving you an incredible sloppy kiss. Her tongue plays with yours and... then it goes past your tonsils! You try to push Tatiana away, but your limbs go numb as her tongue worms its way down your throat.'
 	'"<i>Shh,</i> it''s okay, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Don''t fight it! You won''t remember this!"'
-	'Tatiana''s voice resonates inside your head, and you can only lie there paralyzed, as the now freezing tongue burrows its way along your insides and towards your brain, where it metastasizes into a million tendrils that begin to do... something.'
+	'Tatiana''s voice resonates inside your head, and you can only lie there paralyzed, as the now freezing tongue burrows its way through your insides and towards your brain, where it metastasizes into a million tendrils that begin to do... something.'
 	'"<i>Mmm...</i> So good! What a wonderful taste, <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
 	act 'Where are you?':gt'tatiana_missions','mission2sex'
 end
@@ -683,7 +683,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2sex':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/btatiana/MT2.jpg"></center>'
 	'You find yourself lying face down, wearing only panties in what appears to be a photography set. Tatiana kneels by your side in a somewhat diaphanous robe.'
 	'"Are you ready for your massage, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
-	'Huh? Oh yeah! How could you forget? You were about to do a photoshoot for an new essential oil with her. It seems you dozed off for a moment, but what were you to do? Tatiana is a professional masseuse, so it''s hard not to get carried away.'
+	'Huh? Oh yeah! How could you forget? You were about to do a photoshoot for a new essential oil with her. It seems you dozed off for a moment, but what were you to do? Tatiana is a professional masseuse, so it''s hard not to get carried away.'
 	'"Okay! Let''s start with the oil, <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
 	'A freezing sensation spreads down your back as Tatiana pours the oil over you. Its coldness seeps into your spine and travels up into your head, making you forget.'
 	'...Huh...? Didn''t you have to do something?'
@@ -706,7 +706,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2sex':
 			'<i>Just do it. Take control of the performance with a new enactment.</i>'
 			'"What the hell does that mean?"'
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, please! I''m not going to hurt you! Just enjoy it like all the other girls!"'
-			'Tatiana has momentarily stopped her assault and looks at you, a little confused. This is your opportunity!'
+			'Tatiana momentarily stops her assault and looks at you, a little confused. This is your opportunity!'
 
 			gs 'willpower', 'kiss', 'force', 'hard'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'hard'
@@ -741,7 +741,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2sex':
 							'"<<$pcs_nickname>>... <i>mmm...</i> There is something I must tell you!"'
 							'The aroused redhead grabs a lock of your hair and makes you turn your head towards her.'
 							'"Umm... Look <<$pcs_nickname>>. I have done girls, but... I have never let girls do me. What I mean is... umm... I''m like... a virgin?"'
-							'You rest your head against one of her sexy legs and ponder over her words for a moment.'
+							'You rest your head against one of her sexy legs and ponder her words for a moment.'
 							if lesbian = 0:
 								'"Umm... Tatiana, if we''re being honest here, I have never done it with a girl either. So maybe this can be the first time for both of us. What do you think?"'
 							else
@@ -757,10 +757,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2sex':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/btatiana/sex/MT6.jpg"></center>'
 								'Tatiana lies back and relaxes as you begin to drink on her chaste nethers, giving her moans and encouraging words. You are doing a damn good job of breaking her away from her innocence and virginity!'
-								'"Oh, fuck,<<$pcs_nickname>>! I love being your little slut!"'
+								'"Oh, fuck, <<$pcs_nickname>>! I love being your little slut!"'
 								'And yes, she is a dirty talker who screams your name and encouraging words, as her own hands roam a cold, sexy body that is somehow burning with desire.'
 								'"Yes, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Treat me like your bitch! Fuck my cunt!"'
-								'You didn''t need her encouragement, because every time you lick, caress, finger and drink her cold wetness, your mind explodes with cold mini-orgasms.'
+								'You don''t need her encouragement, because every time you lick, caress, finger and drink her cold wetness, your mind explodes with cold mini-orgasms.'
 								'"Oh my fucking God! Yes! <<$pcs_nickname>>! I never want to get out of this bed!"'
 								'She then grabs your head and pushes it towards her rising thighs, so you can drink from her orgasming cunt. As you feast, half-forgotten memories get clearer, your insight gets sharper, and a calming sensation melts away all your problems.'
 								minut += 1
@@ -787,12 +787,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2sex':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><b><font color="maroon">Blondie?</font></b></center>'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/alexandria.jpg"></center>'
-										'Blinking, you find yourself sitting back in the prop''s room, Tatiana nowhere to be found. In her place is a tall blonde in a suit, who is looking at you with surprise.'
+										'Blinking, you find yourself sitting back in the props room, Tatiana nowhere to be found. In her place is a tall blonde in a suit, who is looking at you with surprise.'
 										'"I wasn''t expecting this! A, let''s say, ''unorthodox'' stratagem, but it worked, congratulations."'
 										'Taking into consideration her style, she must be ''Blondie'', and as your gaze roams over her figure, your attention focuses on her hand, where Tatiana''s film rests. ''Blondie'' takes notice, and before you can complain, she pockets the trinket.'
 										'"Don''t worry about her. I am sure that you can manage this anomaly, but it is better if a more experienced magician takes care of this. Hmm, I suppose this is time for a presentation."'
 										'"Yeah, I suppose. ''Blondie'', isn''t it?"'
-										'You smile as she goes stiff, then begins to grind her teeth. She seems pissed. Score!'
+										'You smile as she goes stiff then begins to grind her teeth. She seems pissed. Score!'
 										'"No! You can call me Aleksei, and you are?"'
 										minut += 1
 										npc_rel['A241'] +=3
@@ -832,28 +832,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2sex':
 		'"Oh please, Tatiana! Don''t stop!"'
 		'She playfully slaps your hands away, sitting back without stopping her own caresses over your breasts. She does so slowly, delicately, while looking at you tenderly.'
 		'"You know, <<$pcs_nickname>>, there have been other girls, but they were like... I dunno... Vodka shots? Yeah, that! Quick and dirty fun! But you? You''re my ''Billion Bucks Vodka!'' So, I was thinking... want to be my special girl? You know, like... my morning girl? The one that must be tasted slow and with care?'
-		'Before you can answer or even think about her question, Tatiana pushes a finger inside your mouth and waits until your somewhat m,uddled mind reacts and you suck the offered appendage. After a moment, she withdraws, and using her tongue, passionately licks her spit covered finger.'
+		'Before you can answer or even think about her question, Tatiana pushes a finger inside your mouth and waits until your somewhat muddled mind reacts and you suck the offered appendage. After a moment, she withdraws, and using her tongue, passionately licks her spit covered finger.'
 		act 'She goes down on you':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 1
 			cuni += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/btatiana/sex/MT7.jpg"></center>'
-			'After taking a while to savor you, Tatiana gets up, and with a trademarked mischievous smile, grabs your panties and pulls them off -- without complaint on your part -- so she can take in their fragrance.'
+			'After taking a while to savor you, Tatiana gets up, and with her trademarked mischievous smile, grabs your panties and pulls them off -- without complaint on your part -- so she can take in their fragrance.'
 			'"Ahhh... <<$pcs_nickname>>, I knew it! I made you so wet! Damn! You''re a slut! Tee-hee! You have no idea how much I love that!"'
 			'Tatiana then proceeds to grab your knees, opening your legs wide so she can push her cold lips against one of your thighs, before a loud <i>''muach''</i> is heard on the set.'
 			'"Tee-hee. There it is, <<$pcs_nickname>>! From now on, you are marked as my girl!"'
 			'A reddening circle is now forming on your thigh. Strangely, the hickey didn''t hurt, and as you caress the skin, you feel it numbed with cold.'
 			'"Tatiana, how did you... <i>Oh my god!</i>"'
 			'You shiver in pleasure as an ice-cold sensation rises from your loins, Tatiana''s tongue beginning to twist around inside your cunt. It''s an utterly alien feeling that you want to experience again and again. Thankfully, Tatiana is perfectly happy for you to enjoy it as she hungrily licks your pussy.'
-			act 'She finger you':
+			act 'She fingers you':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 1
 				girl += 1
 				lesbian += 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/btatiana/sex/MT8.jpg"></center>'
-				'At some point, between your moans, calls to God and screaming her name, Tatiana has managed to turn you face down. She lies over you, kissing your back and whispering sweet-nothings at the same time as finger penetrates your vulva.'
+				'At some point, between your moans, calls to God and screaming her name, Tatiana has managed to turn you face down. She lies over you, kissing your back and whispering sweet-nothings at the same time as her finger penetrates your vulva.'
 				if pcs_vag = 0:
 					'"Tatiana! I am... <i>ahh...</i> a virgin!"'
 					'You don''t know exactly why you muttered those words as Tatiana drills your cunt a little too deep, but it makes her stop and withdraw the intruding finger to your engorged outer lips, where she proceeds to do more delicate masturbation.'
@@ -872,7 +872,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2sex':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/btatiana/HT1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You barely hear Tatiana whisper in your ear, before her cold tongue slithers down your ear canal, pushing beyond your eardrum and into your head, where a not unpleasant sensation takes hold. Her tongue metastasizes into a million tendrils that begin to do... something.'
-					'"Blondie, that tall, business suit-wearing blonde jerk with a stick up her ass, warned me about your quest for the ''other'' Tatiana and I can''t let you take me to her. I don''t know what will happen, but I don''t think it will be pretty, so I was thinking about erasing your memory and letting you go. But do you know how good do you taste? Incredible! So, I have an idea! You can help me escape! Sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>, but I must do more than just erase your memory and take a bite here and there. Relax, this isn''t going to hurt you. I promise!"'
+					'"Blondie, that tall, business suit-wearing blonde jerk with a stick up her ass, warned me about your quest for the ''other'' Tatiana, and I can''t let you take me to her. I don''t know what will happen, but I don''t think it will be pretty, so I was thinking about erasing your memory and letting you go. But do you know how good do you taste? Incredible! So, I have an idea! You can help me escape! Sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>, but I must do more than just erase your memory and take a bite here and there. Relax, this isn''t going to hurt you. I promise!"'
 					'Your mind is too fuzzy, and you are barely capable of understanding her words, but you know that it isn''t a good idea to submit to her, so you thrash against her hold, a moan of pleasure escape your lips as your numbed body submits completely to the vampiric apparition.'
 					'"Oh... No, no, no! <<$pcs_nickname>>! Please just enjoy it! I''m going to... What?! No, wait! Please! N--"'
 					'Tatiana screams, and you suddenly find yourself free from her hold.'
@@ -883,14 +883,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2sex':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Blondie?</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/alexandria.jpg"></center>'
-						'Blinking in confusion, you find yourself sitting back in the prop''s room, in front of a pissed-looking blonde in a suit who''s going off on a tirade.'
+						'Blinking in confusion, you find yourself sitting back in the props room, in front of a pissed-looking blonde in a suit who''s going off on a tirade.'
 						'"Utterly disappointing! For a moment I believed that you could impose yourself against this <i>trifling</i> problem! I misjudged you!"'
 				   		'You look around, confused. Who is she? There was another woman. She was... She was... "Tatiana?"'
 						'The blonde stops in her rant and looks at you. Now that she isn''t in some insulting monologue, you can see a familiar film in her hand, which quickly disappears into the woman''s pocket.'
 						'"Don''t worry about her, I took care of her before she had time to, well... The truth is that I doubt that your mind can be drained any more, but even without that, she was potentially dangerous. Hmm... I suppose this is time for a presentation."'
-						'Your mind begins to clear and you get a better look at the woman. Blonde and tall, wearing a <i>horrible</i> business suit with some <i>utterly plain</i> shoes! There''s no doubt, she must be...'
+						'Your mind begins to clear, and you get a better look at the woman. Blonde and tall, wearing a <i>horrible</i> business suit with some <i>utterly plain</i> shoes! There''s no doubt, she must be...'
 						'"Blondie?"'
-						'She goes stiff, and grinds her teeth. She seems pissed, more pissed actually.'
+						'She goes stiff and grinds her teeth. She seems pissed, more pissed actually.'
 						'"No! You can call me Aleksei, and you are?"'
 						act '"I am..."':gt'tatiana_missions','mission2D'
 					end