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[fixed] a bunch of was->were typos

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+ 1 - 1
locations/FedorEv2.qsrc

@@ -506,7 +506,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Virgin Sex':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/vagcum.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'Fedor groans while jerking his cock over your stomach as you lay back enjoying the warmth of his seed washing over you. You can''t help but feel great joy seeing Fedor so blissful. After Fedor''s finishes, he looks down at you with an adoring gaze as he tells you. "<<$pcs_firstname>>, You are the sexiest girl I''ve ever met...Thank you for letting me be your first, you was amazing." and you respond. "You were incredible Fyodor, I will never forget this day." and he leans forward and gives you a gentle kiss.'
+						'Fedor groans while jerking his cock over your stomach as you lay back enjoying the warmth of his seed washing over you. You can''t help but feel great joy seeing Fedor so blissful. After Fedor''s finishes, he looks down at you with an adoring gaze as he tells you. "<<$pcs_firstname>>, You are the sexiest girl I''ve ever met...Thank you for letting me be your first, you were amazing." and you respond. "You were incredible Fyodor, I will never forget this day." and he leans forward and gives you a gentle kiss.'
 						*nl	
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/vagkiss.mp4"></video></center>'
 						gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'sub'

+ 1 - 1
locations/FedorEv4.qsrc

@@ -2704,7 +2704,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Hallway':
 	minut += 5
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/fedorhome/hallway.jpg"></center>'
-	'This is the central hallway which connects the whole house. There is a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a>, a coat rack and multiple painting on the walls.'
+	'This is the central hallway which connects the whole house. There is a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a>, a coat rack and multiple paintings on the walls.'
 
 	act'<b>Leave the house</b>':
 		if $clothingworntype = 'nude':

+ 2 - 2
locations/IgorEv.qsrc

@@ -1225,7 +1225,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Dimka':
 											'You are panting as you enter Igor''s home. You still haven''t stopped laughing and between the breaths you ask, "Well, how did you enjoy the walk?"'
 											'"Awful, I knew something would go bad! He... He... HE KISSED ME!!!" Igor says.'
 											'"Well, if you ask me, I would say it was fun." you reply.'
-											'"Shut up!" he said but he seemed less mad than you was expecting.'
+											'"Shut up!" he said but he seemed less mad than you were expecting.'
 											'"Come on, Diana, lighten up..." you keep on teasing Igor, "You have no idea how much fun that was to watch."'
 											'"Whatever, glad you enjoyed yourself. I''m going to go change." he leaves upset.'
 											'You can''t put your finger on it, but you have a feeling Igor is not telling you everything.'
@@ -1517,7 +1517,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Ask about Dianas date':
 												act 'And that was that':
 													*clr & cla
 													'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/igor/dimanos/poimal.mp4"></video></center>'
-													'"No, he yelled he screamed, threatened to tell everyone. I begged him not too, I reminded him about all the years we had been friends. Finally he calmed down enough that we was able to talk. I explained everything, why I did it and how I felt."'
+													'"No, he yelled he screamed, threatened to tell everyone. I begged him not too, I reminded him about all the years we had been friends. Finally he calmed down enough that we were able to talk. I explained everything, why I did it and how I felt."'
 													'"What did he say?" you ask him, eagerly awaitng Igor to continue on...'
 													'"He was worried I would tell everyone I tricked him. I swore I wouldn''t and in the end I convinced him but only after I let him record me in drag." he sighs.'
 													'"What?" you ask.'

+ 2 - 2
locations/Katja_Tanga.qsrc

@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'secretroom':
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
 							''
-							'After your orgasm subsides, she pulls her finger and the dildo out of you. Then she extends the dildo down to your mouth, opening your mouth as she slides the wet dildo into your mouth, as happily sucks your own pussy juices off it. Katja watches you with hungry eyes and biting her lower lip as you finish cleaning the dildo with your mouth. "That was amazing, I bet all the boys will be walking to their classes with erections thinking about what we was doing." She says and you both laugh, before getting quickly get dressed, knowing if you don''t hurry you will be late to class.'
+							'After your orgasm subsides, she pulls her finger and the dildo out of you. Then she extends the dildo down to your mouth, opening your mouth as she slides the wet dildo into your mouth, as happily sucks your own pussy juices off it. Katja watches you with hungry eyes and biting her lower lip as you finish cleaning the dildo with your mouth. "That was amazing, I bet all the boys will be walking to their classes with erections thinking about what we were doing." She says and you both laugh, before getting quickly get dressed, knowing if you don''t hurry you will be late to class.'
 							act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 						end
 					end
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'secretroom':
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
 					''
-					'Waiting until you recover from your orgasm, Katja looks at you biting her lip and says. "That was amazing, I bet all the boys will be walking to their classes with erections thinking about what we was doing in here." You both laugh as quickly get dress, knowing if you don''t hurry you will be late to class.'
+					'Waiting until you recover from your orgasm, Katja looks at you biting her lip and says. "That was amazing, I bet all the boys will be walking to their classes with erections thinking about what we were doing in here." You both laugh as quickly get dress, knowing if you don''t hurry you will be late to class.'
 					act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			end

+ 1 - 1
locations/LCwork.qsrc

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start1':
 		cla
 	    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/bbq/sex/1b.jpg"></center>'
 	    'When you arrive at a house, the guys begin to strip you almost as soon as you walk through the door. You also noticed there was several of them waiting at the house for their friends to return with you. All six of them proceed to fuck all of your holes, two or three at a time. They take turns and swap holes fairly randomly, for a good two hours.'
-	    'At least they was nice enough to all wear condoms and use lubricant, still six guys all taking turns, fucking each of your three holes leaves them aching and gapping.'
+	    'At least they were nice enough to all wear condoms and use lubricant, still six guys all taking turns, fucking each of your three holes leaves them aching and gaping.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 120, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 120, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 120, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'

+ 1 - 1
locations/Snpc.qsrc

@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ if numnpc = 144:
 			if Anush_lunch = 0:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big<<numnpc>>.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Hey Anush you feeling ok? You kinda look flush, is something wrong? Would you like to talk about it?"'
-				'She leans in close and tries to kiss you, while one hand reaches down and squeezes your butt. You turn your head and pull away. "What are you doing? I was only seeing if you was ok."'
+				'She leans in close and tries to kiss you, while one hand reaches down and squeezes your butt. You turn your head and pull away. "What are you doing? I was only seeing if you were ok."'
 				'She crowds you a bit and leans in close. "You talk to much, I can think of better things you can do with that tongue of yours."'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian', 'exhibitionism'
 				minut -= 5

+ 1 - 1
locations/StasQW.qsrc

@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ elseif StasKafe = 0:
 			fat += 4
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/diner/kafe.jpg"></center>'
-			'You feel relaxed in Stas companing, drinking champagne you listen Stas regale you with tales. You was so caught up in the moment, you do not even notice Stas ordered another bottle. Finally you realize that you are already well on your way to being drunk. The music starts up in the cafe and Stas rises from his chair and gallantly offered you a hand.'
+			'You feel relaxed in Stas companing, drinking champagne you listen Stas regale you with tales. You were so caught up in the moment, you do not even notice Stas ordered another bottle. Finally you realize that you are already well on your way to being drunk. The music starts up in the cafe and Stas rises from his chair and gallantly offered you a hand.'
 
 			act 'Dance':
 				cls

+ 1 - 1
locations/Vika.qsrc

@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ if hour < 20:
 			vikaslut = 1
 
 			'Vika hesitates and blushes, "I''m just walking around the city..."'
-			'"So you just walk around the city all night long? You expect me to believe that? I thought we was friends, but if you don''t want to tell me that''s fine." You try not to be disappointed she won''t tell you, but you understand it is none of your business.'
+			'"So you just walk around the city all night long? You expect me to believe that? I thought we were friends, but if you don''t want to tell me that''s fine." You try not to be disappointed she won''t tell you, but you understand it is none of your business.'
 			'"I work at the local night club..." Vika mumbled hesitantly.'
 			'"I have been to that club many times and have not seen you there, ever." you feel hurt as she''s bluntly lying to your face. "If you don''t want me to know where you go, just so say. I was just hoping we could go together and hang out." You say and turn away, feeling rejected.'
 			'"Don''t be mad, I''ll show you. Just promise, you''ll still be my friend."'

+ 1 - 1
locations/Voltrenersex.qsrc

@@ -278,7 +278,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Defl':
 			npc_rel['A69'] += 10
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/sex/voitrensex21.jpg"></center>'
-			'Coach dropped to his knees and began to lick your pussy. He then licked the clit, the tongue penetrated into the vagina, when he took the clit into his mouth and began to suck, you thought you was going crazy with pleasure. You grabbed his head with both hands and grinded your crotch against his face.'
+			'Coach dropped to his knees and began to lick your pussy. He then licked the clit, the tongue penetrated into the vagina, when he took the clit into his mouth and began to suck, you thought you were going crazy with pleasure. You grabbed his head with both hands and grinded your crotch against his face.'
 			Act 'Surrender':
 				cls
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A69'

+ 1 - 1
locations/albinahome.qsrc

@@ -631,7 +631,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ablina_ass_fucks_you':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/getanal2.jpg"></center>'
-		'After you seem to be use to the dildo all the way up you ass, she stands up over you and starts getting harder and faster with the ass fucking she is giving you. When it starts getting a little to rough she seems to notice and backs off just a little and then gets into a nice rhythm of slaming the dildo up your butt. Just as it is starting to hurt a little she suddenly stops and pulls out of you. "You was such a good little butt slut <<$pcs_nickname>>" She tells you as she takes off the harness, apparently finished with you.'
+		'After you seem to be use to the dildo all the way up you ass, she stands up over you and starts getting harder and faster with the ass fucking she is giving you. When it starts getting a little to rough she seems to notice and backs off just a little and then gets into a nice rhythm of slaming the dildo up your butt. Just as it is starting to hurt a little she suddenly stops and pulls out of you. "You were such a good little butt slut <<$pcs_nickname>>" She tells you as she takes off the harness, apparently finished with you.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 10, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Finish': gt 'albinahome', 'strapon_finish'

+ 1 - 1
locations/anushapt.qsrc

@@ -1871,7 +1871,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nushshower':
 		minut += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/bathroom/dry2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You tell her. "Just came over to see what you was up to."'
+		'You tell her. "Just came over to see what you were up to."'
 		'She nods a bit as she keeps drying off, seeming to care in the least that you are in there with her. "Was debating what I wanted to do myself tonight."'
 		'"Well now we can do something together then." you tell her.'
 		'"Sure sounds good to me, what do you want to do?"'

+ 5 - 5
locations/anushkaev1.qsrc

@@ -362,7 +362,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watch_nushrad':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big154.jpg"></center>'
 									if hotcat >= 6:
-										'You only take a couple of steps from the door when it opens. You turn like you was just heading to the room. He gives you a knowing smirk. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, next time why don''t you join us? I wouldn''t mind giving you the fucking of your life. I''m sure Nush wouldn''t mind, hell her ass could likely use a break, she finds me a bit to big, but what can a guy do." He asks rhetorically, with a laugh.'
+										'You only take a couple of steps from the door when it opens. You turn like you were just heading to the room. He gives you a knowing smirk. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, next time why don''t you join us? I wouldn''t mind giving you the fucking of your life. I''m sure Nush wouldn''t mind, hell her ass could likely use a break, she finds me a bit to big, but what can a guy do." He asks rhetorically, with a laugh.'
 										act 'Say nothing':
 											*clr & cla
 											'<center><img src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big154.jpg"></center>'
@@ -379,7 +379,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watch_nushrad':
 											act 'Go in her room': gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
 										end
 									else
-										'You only take a couple of steps from the door when it opens. You turn like you was just heading to the room. He gives you a slight frown of disgust. "You know <<$pcs_nickname>> if you took better care of yourself, I might giving you the fucking of your life too. But I got standards, you know. Now Nush she is a fine peace of ass." He says indicating back towards her room.'
+										'You only take a couple of steps from the door when it opens. You turn like you were just heading to the room. He gives you a slight frown of disgust. "You know <<$pcs_nickname>> if you took better care of yourself, I might giving you the fucking of your life too. But I got standards, you know. Now Nush she is a fine peace of ass." He says indicating back towards her room.'
 										act 'Say nothing':
 											*clr & cla
 											'<center><img src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big154.jpg"></center>'
@@ -465,7 +465,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watch_nushval':
 						act 'Wait for him to leave':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big158.jpg"></center>'
-							'You only take a couple of steps from the door when it opens. You turn like you was just heading to the room. He looks a bit surprised to see you but he smiles. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, Anushka is in her room if you are looking for her. I need to get going, got to go get this part for my bike." He explains as he walks past you. "See''ya around" And with that he walks towards the front door and out. You open Anushka''s door and walk in and decided not to say anything about what you just seen.'
+							'You only take a couple of steps from the door when it opens. You turn like you were just heading to the room. He looks a bit surprised to see you but he smiles. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, Anushka is in her room if you are looking for her. I need to get going, got to go get this part for my bike." He explains as he walks past you. "See''ya around" And with that he walks towards the front door and out. You open Anushka''s door and walk in and decided not to say anything about what you just seen.'
 							act 'Go in her room': gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
 						end
 					end
@@ -528,7 +528,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watch_nushmar':
 						act 'Wait for him to leave':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big146.jpg"></center>'
-							'You only take a couple of steps from the door when it opens. You turn like you was just heading to the room. He looks a bit surprised to see you and then blushes, obviously wondering if you heard. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I was just... I mean we was just..." He trails off obviously trying to think of a a reason other than the truth he is there.'
+							'You only take a couple of steps from the door when it opens. You turn like you were just heading to the room. He looks a bit surprised to see you and then blushes, obviously wondering if you heard. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I was just... I mean we were just..." He trails off obviously trying to think of a a reason other than the truth he is there.'
 							'You can''t help but smile, about him trying to save Anushka''s rep and blushing at the same time. "I know what you guys was doing, hope you two had fun." You say to him with a wink. Which makes him blush even more.'
 							'"Um yeah, uh we did... I need to go, see you at school <<$pcs_nickname>>." With that he hurries past you and out of the apartment. You open Anushka''s door and walk in and decided not to say anything about what you just seen.'
 							act 'Go in her room': gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
@@ -660,7 +660,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'couch_fuck_her_ass':
 				'"Fuck <<$pcs_nickname>> that hurts!" She says as she white knuckles the back of the couch, despite what she says, she also doesn''t try to push you off either. You know her well enough to know she is also getting off and being used like this. Sure enough a few minutes later she cries out in ecstasy and her whole body shakes as she orgasm''s hard, you keep fucking her until, riding the orgasm out. Once it passes you step back and pull the dildo out of her ass.'
 				*nl
 				'She rolls over, placing on hand on her butt. "Fuck my ass is going to be sore tomorrow."'
-				'You laugh and point out. "Yeah for all the bitching you was doing, I noticed you didn''t try and push me off either, you know you loved having your ass ripped up."'
+				'You laugh and point out. "Yeah for all the bitching you were doing, I noticed you didn''t try and push me off either, you know you loved having your ass ripped up."'
 				'She blushes a little. "Fuck you <<$pcs_nickname>>!" she says in a mostly joking tone.'
 				'"No I think I just fucked your ass not the other way around." Which gets her to laugh slightly.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 7, 'lesbian', 'rough', 'dom', 'sadist'

+ 1 - 1
locations/dinParty.qsrc

@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_toilet_event':
 					'Once they finish you walk in. Ira and Lena look at each other and then smile at you.'
 					'"Oh, it''s you <<$pcs_nickname>>, glad it is not some guy. We do not know what we would have done with him."'
 					'"Yes, I just wanted to tidy myself up." you said with a slight blush.'
-					'Lena came up to you and leaned in close as she whispered in your ear: "I know, liked watching, what we was doing. Stay with us, and you''d like it even more."'
+					'Lena came up to you and leaned in close as she whispered in your ear: "You liked watching what we were doing, right?. Stay with us, and you''ll like it even more."'
 					act 'Stay':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs'stat'

+ 2 - 2
locations/gameover.qsrc

@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ elseif over = 8:
 	'"At some point you question your life decisions." You are trying to understand why you made the choices you did, while your mouth is as yet another explosion of cum fills it. Without finding an answer, you swallow everything like you normally do and drift back into your drug hazed existence.'
 elseif over = 9:
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/gameover/overdose.jpg"></center>'
-	'Your last moments where those of bliss, your mind was so hazed by the drugs you didn''t even know you was dying. You body was found surrounded by the drugs that had ended your life.'
+	'Your last moments where those of bliss, your mind was so hazed by the drugs you didn''t even know you were dying. You body was found surrounded by the drugs that had ended your life.'
 elseif over = 10:
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/gameover/over10.jpg"></center>'
 	'You fell into a quagmire while trying to find a way out of the swamp, it sucked you down deeper, and deeper. The blue sky through the tree tops is the last thing you see before marsh muck closes over you forever.'
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ elseif over = 12:
 	'Your body was found a few months later by some hunters, no one ever found out what happened to you.'
 elseif over = 13:
    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/gameover/fade.jpg"></center>'
-   'As the procedure continues, you feel a strange sensation. As if someone punched a hole in your spirit. You lose focus on everything around you, and it felt like you was flying into the ether. You attempt to rally your magical energies, to plug the hole, but the hole in your spirit isn''t able to be blocked by spirit energy, and you just force more of yourself out of it. You can''t run from it, it eats you up from your center, leaving no energy remaining in the part that was once you. The last b t of you f des aw y, an  wha   as y   n     g r                                .'
+   'As the procedure continues, you feel a strange sensation. As if someone punched a hole in your spirit. You lose focus on everything around you, and it felt like you were flying into the ether. You attempt to rally your magical energies, to plug the hole, but the hole in your spirit isn''t able to be blocked by spirit energy, and you just force more of yourself out of it. You can''t run from it, it eats you up from your center, leaving no energy remaining in the part that was once you. The last b t of you f des aw y, an  wha   as y   n     g r                                .'
    !! {"The last bit of you fades away, and what was you no longer has the ability to care anymore." The idea being there was no soul that went to the afterlife. Total death. So not even able to bring full understanding of what happened, because you are gone. Broodmare curse abortion death.}
 end
 act 'End?':gt 'gameover', 'endscreen'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gdksport.qsrc

@@ -1048,7 +1048,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ShowerWithIvan':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/dush.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'Ivan walks over to you, pulling his boxer shorts and stepping out of them as they fall around his ankles. Stepping into the shower with you, getting himself wet under the shower. His muscular body was very close to yours.'
-	'You tried not to look at him but your eyes involuntarily dropped to his groin where his thick cock hung and swung as he moved. Ivan seeing where you was looking winked, "Want to wash me?"'
+	'You tried not to look at him but your eyes involuntarily dropped to his groin where his thick cock hung and swung as he moved. Ivan seeing where you were looking winked, "Want to wash me?"'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Lather Ivan':

+ 1 - 1
locations/glake.qsrc

@@ -482,7 +482,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nude_home':
 		gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 		inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/naked/sneakhomenaked.jpg"></center>'
-		'You decided it would be better to take your time and sneak home, doing your best to not be seen. You use you hands to cover yourself as best you can, using cover as often as you, can. Hiding behind trees, parked cars, ducking down alleyways and when that doesn''t work you wait till you don''t see anyone and dart across open stretches of ground. Once or twice you think someone might have seen you, but you hope you wasn''t recognized, if you was seen. Finally after what seems forever you make it to the apartment complex.'
+		'You decided it would be better to take your time and sneak home, doing your best to not be seen. You use you hands to cover yourself as best you can, using cover as often as you, can. Hiding behind trees, parked cars, ducking down alleyways and when that doesn''t work you wait till you don''t see anyone and dart across open stretches of ground. Once or twice you think someone might have seen you, but you hope you weren''t recognized, if you were seen. Finally after what seems forever you make it to the apartment complex.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'flash', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue to complex': gt 'pavaptcourtev', 'naked_aptcomplex'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gopsex.qsrc

@@ -1510,7 +1510,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hide':
 		"No. I''ll tell you later."'
 		if txt_sex_cun = 2:$txt_sex_cun = 'You lie down on your back and spread your thighs wide apart. <<$boydesc>> pulls your panties aside and his mouth clings to your wet pussy. He licks and sucks your cunt lips, your clit, and from time to time his tongue slides into your box. You moan, holding his head and pressing it tightly to your wet pussy.'
 		if txt_sex_cun = 3:$txt_sex_cun = '<<$boydesc>> puts you on your back and moves to your wet box. He licks your clitoris, then he puts straight two fingers into your wet pussy and starts fingering you. Squishing sounds are coming from your cunny and your moaning resounds surroundings. <<$boydesc>> grins and his hand moves even faster'
-		if txt_sex_cun = 4:$txt_sex_cun = 'You part your legs apart exposing your pussy to his view. Without hesitation, <<$boydesc>> starts kissing your box. He tickles your clit with his tongue and then he ran down between your pussy lips to your love hole, which was really very wet. You was ready for sex already so you could start fucking right now. But <<$boydesc>> is not in a hurry. He caresses you with both his tongue and his fingers listening to your sweet moans. You writhes with eagerness, but you don''t beg just enjoy the moment.'
+		if txt_sex_cun = 4:$txt_sex_cun = 'You part your legs apart exposing your pussy to his view. Without hesitation, <<$boydesc>> starts kissing your box. He tickles your clit with his tongue and then he ran down between your pussy lips to your love hole, which was really very wet. You were ready for sex already so you could start fucking right now. But <<$boydesc>> is not in a hurry. He caresses you with both his tongue and his fingers listening to your sweet moans. You writhes with eagerness, but you don''t beg just enjoy the moment.'
 		if txt_sex_cun = 5:$txt_sex_cun = '"<<$boydesc>>, lick my pussy, please!" you asks kindly.
 		"With pleasure!" He replies.
 		<<$boydesc>> lowers his mouth to your groin and starts licking your pussy skillfully.'

+ 4 - 4
locations/gschool_boys_bathroom.qsrc

@@ -743,7 +743,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/stall.jpg"></center>'
 	if gruptipe ! 4 and hotcat >= 5:
-		'After a couple of minutes, you hear several boy''s voices and recognize several of them as gopniks from your class. Several stall doors slam open, their echo loud as thunder and just as startling, and one of them says, "Man, you sure?" There is a pause in the noise as another answers, "I''m telling you, I saw her come in here just after the bell rang." A few more doors of stalls slam open until, suddenly, your door is the one to slam. You see Dan standing there, grinning at you, "Found her. You was right." He steps in and grabs you around the waist, dragging you out of the stall.'
+		'After a couple of minutes, you hear several boy''s voices and recognize several of them as gopniks from your class. Several stall doors slam open, their echo loud as thunder and just as startling, and one of them says, "Man, you sure?" There is a pause in the noise as another answers, "I''m telling you, I saw her come in here just after the bell rang." A few more doors of stalls slam open until, suddenly, your door is the one to slam. You see Dan standing there, grinning at you, "Found her. You were right." He steps in and grabs you around the waist, dragging you out of the stall.'
 		*nl
 		'The other boys quickly move over. Within moments, you find yourself in the middle of five of your gopnik classmates, all leering at you lustfully. You know exactly what they are thinking and what they want. You doubt you can reason with them... but perhaps you could scream? Maybe someone would hear you; or maybe it would only piss them off. You could also try and make a run for it.'
 		gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
@@ -775,7 +775,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6':
 		end
 		act 'Submit': gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'boy6_sub'
 	elseif gruptipe = 4 and hotcat >= 5:
-		'After a couple of minutes, you hear several boy''s voices and recognize several of them as gopniks from your class. Several stall doors slam open, their echo loud as thunder and just as startling, and one of them says, "Man, you sure?" There is a pause in the noise as another answers, "I''m telling you, I saw her come in here just after the bell rang." A few more doors of stalls slam open until, suddenly, your door is the one to slam. You see Dan standing there, grinning at you. "Found her. You was right." He steps in and grabs you around the waist, dragging you out of the stall.'
+		'After a couple of minutes, you hear several boy''s voices and recognize several of them as gopniks from your class. Several stall doors slam open, their echo loud as thunder and just as startling, and one of them says, "Man, you sure?" There is a pause in the noise as another answers, "I''m telling you, I saw her come in here just after the bell rang." A few more doors of stalls slam open until, suddenly, your door is the one to slam. You see Dan standing there, grinning at you. "Found her. You were right." He steps in and grabs you around the waist, dragging you out of the stall.'
 		*nl
 		'The other boys quickly move over. Within moments, you find yourself in the middle of five of your gopnik classmates, all leering at you lustfully. Vitek roughly grabs and squeezes one of your tits. "Come on, <<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s have some fun. You know you want to... and so do we. Isn''t that right?" he asks the others who nod their heads yes and start pawing at you as well. You could still get out of this and make them stop, you know that - the gopniks are a rowdy bunch but they''re not complete assholes or rapists - but if you make them stop, they''ll become angry. That makes giving in and seeing where this goes an option you seriously consider; it could genuinely be fun and would certainly make them like you more if you submitted to their desires. That''s how it works, right?'
 		gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
@@ -789,7 +789,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6':
 		end
 		act 'Submit': gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'boy6_sub'
 	elseif gruptipe = 4 and hotcat < 5:
-		'After a couple of minutes, you hear several boy''s voices and recognize several of them as gopniks from your class. Several stall doors slam open, their echo loud as thunder and just as startling, and one of them says, "Man, you sure?" There is a pause in the noise as another answers, "I''m telling you, I saw her come in here just after the bell rang." A few more doors of stalls slam open until, suddenly, your door is the one to slam. You see Dan standing there, grinning at you. "Found her. You was right." He steps in and grabs you around the waist, dragging you out of the stall.'
+		'After a couple of minutes, you hear several boy''s voices and recognize several of them as gopniks from your class. Several stall doors slam open, their echo loud as thunder and just as startling, and one of them says, "Man, you sure?" There is a pause in the noise as another answers, "I''m telling you, I saw her come in here just after the bell rang." A few more doors of stalls slam open until, suddenly, your door is the one to slam. You see Dan standing there, grinning at you. "Found her. You were right." He steps in and grabs you around the waist, dragging you out of the stall.'
 		*nl
 		'When they see it is you they all look disappointed. You even hear one of them say, "Oh, it''s you." They let go of you and walk away, back towards the door. When you hear another one say, "Well, what the fuck are we going to do now?" Then Vitek speaks up, "Shut up, I got an idea." With that, they leave without another word to you.'
 		if school_bunk = 0:
@@ -800,7 +800,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6':
 	elseif gruptipe ! 4 and hotcat < 5:
 		pcs_mood -= 20
 		gs 'stat'
-		'After a couple of minutes, you hear several boy''s voices and recognize several of them as gopniks from your class. Several stall doors slam open, their echo loud as thunder and just as startling, and one of them says, "Man, you sure?" There is a pause in the noise as another answers, "I''m telling you, I saw her come in here just after the bell rang." A few more doors of stalls slam open until, suddenly, your door is the one to slam. You see Dan standing there, staring at you, "Found her. You was right." He steps in and grabs you by the arm, dragging you out of the stall.'
+		'After a couple of minutes, you hear several boy''s voices and recognize several of them as gopniks from your class. Several stall doors slam open, their echo loud as thunder and just as startling, and one of them says, "Man, you sure?" There is a pause in the noise as another answers, "I''m telling you, I saw her come in here just after the bell rang." A few more doors of stalls slam open until, suddenly, your door is the one to slam. You see Dan standing there, staring at you, "Found her. You were right." He steps in and grabs you by the arm, dragging you out of the stall.'
 		*nl
 		'Once they see who it is they look visibly disappointed and somewhat angry. "What the fuck is your ugly ass doing in the guys'' bathroom?" Vitek asks, but before you can even respond Dan speaks up, "Maybe she forgot she was a girl; with a body like that who could blame her." The rest all bust out laughing.'
 		'Blushing as they boys laugh at you, you don''t know what to say. Then Vitek roughly grabs your arm and shoves you towards the door, "Get your ugly face out of here, before you make us sick." The others laugh some more, not sure what else to do, you leave. You spend the rest of the period roaming the hall trying not to be seen by one of the teachers and wishing you were better looking.'

+ 2 - 2
locations/gschool_break.qsrc

@@ -1383,7 +1383,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'naked_bathroom':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/principal/officenaked.jpg"></center>'
-					'You take a deep breath and decided it would only make things worse for you if you snitch. "It was stupid, I accidentally spilled a bottle of water all over my clothes. So I went to the bathroom to dry them with the hand dryer, so I took them off and turned it on. Anyways I went into one of the stalls to use it and when I came back out they was gone. I don''t know what happened to them."'
+					'You take a deep breath and decided it would only make things worse for you if you snitch. "It was stupid, I accidentally spilled a bottle of water all over my clothes. So I went to the bathroom to dry them with the hand dryer, so I took them off and turned it on. Anyways I went into one of the stalls to use it and when I came back out they were gone. I don''t know what happened to them."'
 					*nl
 					'Ms Volkov frowns at that and her expression hardens every so slightly. "If you don''t tell me who is bullying you, I can''t help. Don''t think they will stop just because you don''t tell me who it was."'
 					'You shake your head. "No one did this to me, at least no one I seen I don''t know what happened to my clothes, they were just gone." You tell her sticking to your story.'
@@ -1448,7 +1448,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'naked_bathroom':
 			gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 			gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/naked/sneakhomenaked.jpg"></center>'
-			'You decided it would be better to take your time and sneak home, doing your best to not be seen. You use you hands to cover yourself as best you can, using cover as often as you, can. Hiding behind trees, parked cars, ducking down alleyways and when that doesn''t work you wait till you don''t see anyone and dart across open stretches of ground. Once or twice you think someone might have seen you, but you hope you wasn''t recognized, if you was seen. Finally after what seems forever you make it to the apartment complex.'
+			'You decided it would be better to take your time and sneak home, doing your best to not be seen. You use you hands to cover yourself as best you can, using cover as often as you, can. Hiding behind trees, parked cars, ducking down alleyways and when that doesn''t work you wait till you don''t see anyone and dart across open stretches of ground. Once or twice you think someone might have seen you, but you hope you weren''t recognized, if you were seen. Finally after what seems forever you make it to the apartment complex.'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Continue': gt 'pavaptcourtev', 'naked_aptcomplex'
 		end

+ 2 - 2
locations/gschool_detention.qsrc

@@ -298,7 +298,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'upskirt1':
 		npc_rel['A<<r>>'] += 1
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/spreadg.jpg"></center>'
-		'You have to let her know, maybe she is doing it on purpose and maybe not. It takes a bit before you finally get her attention and then mimic closing together with your hands as if they was legs and then gesture towards her. It takes her a moment to realize what you mean, then she blushes slightly and closes her legs, followed by her mouthing thank you to you. You smile and nod back to her. Feeling pretty good about helping a fellow girl out the rest of detention doesn''t seem as bad.'
+		'You have to let her know, maybe she is doing it on purpose and maybe not. It takes a bit before you finally get her attention and then mimic closing together with your hands as if they were legs and then gesture towards her. It takes her a moment to realize what you mean, then she blushes slightly and closes her legs, followed by her mouthing thank you to you. You smile and nod back to her. Feeling pretty good about helping a fellow girl out the rest of detention doesn''t seem as bad.'
 		act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_detention', 'end'
 	end
 end
@@ -1059,7 +1059,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'couple':
 	gs 'gschool_events', 'rand_teacher_arg'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/couple.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'As you walk around you hear some soft moaning coming from further back, you quietly move forward and peek around one of the book shelves. You see Stasya standing on one leg with her skirt pulled up and Andrey with his pants down between her legs. They vigorously fuck as they kiss and they hold each other, it is almost touching, if they wasn''t fucking in a library with other students not more than ten meters away. You bite your lip as you watch, feeling your own arousal mounting.'
+	'As you walk around you hear some soft moaning coming from further back, you quietly move forward and peek around one of the book shelves. You see Stasya standing on one leg with her skirt pulled up and Andrey with his pants down between her legs. They vigorously fuck as they kiss and they hold each other, it is almost touching, if they weren''t fucking in a library with other students not more than ten meters away. You bite your lip as you watch, feeling your own arousal mounting.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 20
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Keep watching':

+ 2 - 2
locations/gschool_events.qsrc

@@ -983,7 +983,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_events':
 		gs 'stat'
 	elseif break_rand = 21:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/girlsskirtup.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you stop at your locker, a group of girls are teasing some of the boys about how they arn''t wearing panties under their skirt. The boys ask, beg, plead, demand the girls prove it. Finally after a bit several of them lift up their skirts to show off some boy shorts, which annoys the boys to no end and makes the girls laugh at them. Well they wasn''t lying really, they was wearing boy shorts instead of panties.'
+		'As you stop at your locker, a group of girls are teasing some of the boys about how they arn''t wearing panties under their skirt. The boys ask, beg, plead, demand the girls prove it. Finally after a bit several of them lift up their skirts to show off some boy shorts, which annoys the boys to no end and makes the girls laugh at them. Well they weren''t lying really, they were wearing boy shorts instead of panties.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 1
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -1475,7 +1475,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool_events':
 		end
 	elseif break_rand = 7 and soniaPS >= 3:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/sonialeash.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you walk down the hallway you are greeted by a unusual sight. Sonia down on all fours crawling along, with a collar around her neck and a leash attached to it. Meanwhile Vitek holds onto the leach walking Sonia like he was walking a dog, with several other of the gopniks walking along with them. The boys are making crude jokes about Sonia being their little bitch and how after he walk they was going to show her a real good time. Sonia keeps her head down, while a few of the gopniks look at at you as they pass. Knowing you couldn''t do anything about it even if you wanted to, you go on your way.'
+		'As you walk down the hallway you are greeted by a unusual sight. Sonia down on all fours crawling along, with a collar around her neck and a leash attached to it. Meanwhile Vitek holds onto the leach walking Sonia like he was walking a dog, with several other of the gopniks walking along with them. The boys are making crude jokes about Sonia being their little bitch and how after he walk they were going to show her a real good time. Sonia keeps her head down, while a few of the gopniks look at at you as they pass. Knowing you couldn''t do anything about it even if you wanted to, you go on your way.'
 	elseif break_rand = 8:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/streakers.jpg"></center>'
 		'The hallways are almost completely empty as you leave school, but then you hear giggling. You look up just in time to see two naked girls run by and up the stairs to the second floor of the school. You are fairly certain it was Anushka and Alyona, really who else would it be? With the little show over you head out.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_girls_bathroom.qsrc

@@ -317,7 +317,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girl3':
 			*nl
 			'When she recovers, Lera steps closer to you, determined to regain the upper hand. "Is that-" But you don''t give her the chance: You interrupt whatever she was going to say by grabbing her and pulling her into a long, passionate french kiss.'
 			'She stiffens at first, her hands grabbing your arms as if to push you back, but before she''s even taken hold of you, she''s molten into it and returns it as passionately as you give it. A good minute passes and Lena is starting to feel a little left out before you finally break the kiss, leaving Lera flushed and breathless. "Yeah, it is," you respond to her unfinished sentence. "Speaking of which, what are you girls up to?"'
-			'Lena, looking a little turned on by the make-out session she just witnessed, offers you a cigarette. "We was just bored and looking for a little fun."'
+			'Lena, looking a little turned on by the make-out session she just witnessed, offers you a cigarette. "We were just bored and looking for a little fun."'
 			*nl
 			'"Yeah, me too, but not that kind of fun... at least not this week," you meaningfully place your hand on your stomach and Lena nods in understanding while Lera licks her lips, obviously hoping for some more smooches to make up for other pleasures. Instead, you manage to steer them away from the topic entirely and the three of you are soon talking about school, the gopniks and a couple of other things. Before you know it, the class bell rings and the three of you head to your next class.'
 			'You feel like you''ve earned a little more of their respect today.'

+ 4 - 4
locations/gschool_lessons1.qsrc

@@ -1132,7 +1132,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 		*clr & cla
 		if rand(1,4) = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
-			'Today''s lessons don''t particularly interest you, and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while you notice Mrs. Sokoloff has stopped talking and is looking at you intently, asking you to pay attention. Apparently this is already the third time he asked; you missed the first two completely while you was lost in your own thoughts. The whole class is looking at you now.'
+			'Today''s lessons don''t particularly interest you, and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while you notice Mrs. Sokoloff has stopped talking and is looking at you intently, asking you to pay attention. Apparently this is already the third time he asked; you missed the first two completely while you were lost in your own thoughts. The whole class is looking at you now.'
 			'Mrs. Sokoloff tries to convince you of the importance of todays lesson, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, please pay attention, this is very important. Today''s topic is going to be on the exam for sure."'
 			act 'Reluctantly pay attention':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -1351,7 +1351,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 		*clr & cla
 		if rand(1,4) = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
-			'Today''s lessons don''t particularly interest you, and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while you notice Mrs. Sokoloff has stopped talking and is looking at you intently, asking you to pay attention. Apparently this is already the third time he asked; you missed the first two completely while you was lost in your own thoughts. The whole class is looking at you now.'
+			'Today''s lessons don''t particularly interest you, and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while you notice Mrs. Sokoloff has stopped talking and is looking at you intently, asking you to pay attention. Apparently this is already the third time he asked; you missed the first two completely while you were lost in your own thoughts. The whole class is looking at you now.'
 			'Mrs. Sokoloff tries to convince you of the importance of todays lesson, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, please pay attention, this is very important. Today''s topic is going to be on the exam for sure."'
 			act 'Reluctantly pay attention':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -1539,7 +1539,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/classbiology.jpg"></center>'
 	'You go to your biology class and find a seat at your lab station. Before long all of your fellow students file in and takes their seats as well. Once the bell rings Miss Orlov takes roll call, you say here when your name is called. With that done, she gets up and starts walking around the room explaining todays lessons. Occasionally stopping at each lab station to make sure the students are doing the work correctly, she often gives words of encouragement if things are going well or stops and helps the student understand what they are doing wrong.'
 	*nl
-	'She occasionally asks questions and those that get them right, she heaps praise upon them. Those that get them wrong, she takes the time to explain why they was wrong and what the correct answer is. Then making sure the student understands, once she is sure the student understands their mistake she moves on with her lesson. She is always quick to help anyone with a problem or answer questions about class, always with that shy smile of hers.'
+	'She occasionally asks questions and those that get them right, she heaps praise upon them. Those that get them wrong, she takes the time to explain why they were wrong and what the correct answer is. Then making sure the student understands, once she is sure the student understands their mistake she moves on with her lesson. She is always quick to help anyone with a problem or answer questions about class, always with that shy smile of hers.'
 	act 'Listen attentively to Miss Orlov':
 		*clr & cla
 		grupvalue[4] -= 1
@@ -1566,7 +1566,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 		*clr & cla
 		if rand(1,4) = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
-			'Today''s lessons don''t particularly interest you, and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while you notice Miss Orlov has stopped teaching and is looking at you intently, asking you to pay attention. Apparently this is already the third time she asked; you missed the first two completely while you was lost in your own thoughts. The whole class is looking at you now.'
+			'Today''s lessons don''t particularly interest you, and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while you notice Miss Orlov has stopped teaching and is looking at you intently, asking you to pay attention. Apparently this is already the third time she asked; you missed the first two completely while you were lost in your own thoughts. The whole class is looking at you now.'
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, please pay attention, this is very important. Today''s topic is going to be on the exam for sure."'
 			act 'Reluctantly pay attention':
 				*clr & cla

+ 5 - 5
locations/gschool_lessons2.qsrc

@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		*clr & cla
 		if rand(1,4) = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
-			'Today''s lessons don''t particularly interest you, and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while you notice Mr. Ivanov has stopped teaching and is looking at you intently, asking you to pay attention. Apparently this is already the third time he asked; you missed the first two completely while you was lost in your own thoughts. The whole class is looking at you now.'
+			'Today''s lessons don''t particularly interest you, and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while you notice Mr. Ivanov has stopped teaching and is looking at you intently, asking you to pay attention. Apparently this is already the third time he asked; you missed the first two completely while you were lost in your own thoughts. The whole class is looking at you now.'
 			if grupTipe=3:
 				'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, please pay attention, this is very important. Today''s topic is going to be on the exam for sure."'
 			else
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 		*clr & cla
 		if rand(1,4) = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
-			'Today''s lessons don''t particularly interest you, and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while you notice Miss Orlov has stopped teaching and is looking at you intently, asking you to pay attention. Apparently this is already the third time she asked; you missed the first two completely while you was lost in your own thoughts. The whole class is looking at you now.'
+			'Today''s lessons don''t particularly interest you, and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while you notice Miss Orlov has stopped teaching and is looking at you intently, asking you to pay attention. Apparently this is already the third time she asked; you missed the first two completely while you were lost in your own thoughts. The whole class is looking at you now.'
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, please pay attention, this is very important. Today''s topic is going to be on the exam for sure."'
 			act 'Reluctantly pay attention':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -472,7 +472,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 		*clr & cla
 		if rand(1,4) = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
-			'Today''s lessons don''t particularly interest you, and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while you notice Mr. Vasilyev has stopped teaching and is looking at you intently, asking you to pay attention. Apparently this is already the third time he asked; you missed the first two completely while you was lost in your own thoughts. The whole class is looking at you now.'
+			'Today''s lessons don''t particularly interest you, and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while you notice Mr. Vasilyev has stopped teaching and is looking at you intently, asking you to pay attention. Apparently this is already the third time he asked; you missed the first two completely while you were lost in your own thoughts. The whole class is looking at you now.'
 			'Mr. Vasilyev tries to convince you of the importance of todays lesson, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, please pay attention, this is very important. Today''s topic is going to be on the exam for sure."'
 			act 'Reluctantly pay attention':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -702,7 +702,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 		*clr & cla
 		if rand(1,4) = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
-			'Today''s lessons don''t particularly interest you, and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while you notice Mr. Vasilyev has stopped teaching and is looking at you intently, asking you to pay attention. Apparently this is already the third time he asked; you missed the first two completely while you was lost in your own thoughts. The whole class is looking at you now.'
+			'Today''s lessons don''t particularly interest you, and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while you notice Mr. Vasilyev has stopped teaching and is looking at you intently, asking you to pay attention. Apparently this is already the third time he asked; you missed the first two completely while you were lost in your own thoughts. The whole class is looking at you now.'
 			'Mr. Vasilyev tries to convince you of the importance of todays lesson, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, please pay attention, this is very important. Today''s topic is going to be on the exam for sure."'
 			act 'Reluctantly pay attention':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -903,7 +903,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 		*clr & cla
 		if rand(1,2) = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
-			'Today''s lessons don''t particularly interest you, and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while you notice Mr. Kuznetsov has stopped teaching and is looking at you intently, asking you to pay attention. Apparently this is already the third time he asked; you missed the first two completely while you was lost in your own thoughts. The whole class is looking at you now.'
+			'Today''s lessons don''t particularly interest you, and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while you notice Mr. Kuznetsov has stopped teaching and is looking at you intently, asking you to pay attention. Apparently this is already the third time he asked; you missed the first two completely while you were lost in your own thoughts. The whole class is looking at you now.'
 			'Mr. Kuznetsov tries to convince you of the importance of todays lesson, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, please pay attention, this is very important. Today''s topic is going to be on the exam for sure."'
 			act 'Reluctantly pay attention':
 				*clr & cla

+ 4 - 4
locations/gschool_socialchg.qsrc

@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerd':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nerdslut.jpg"></center>'
 		'You shake your head no. "I like hanging out with you guys, but I''m just not interested in doing a game night, sorry."'
-		'Artem frowns but then nods. "Oh, ok. Well maybe some other time." With that he turns and the rest follow, looking a little depressed. Looks like they was really expecting and hoping you to join them. It makes you feel a little bad and leaves you to wonder if you made the right choice.'
+		'Artem frowns but then nods. "Oh, ok. Well maybe some other time." With that he turns and the rest follow, looking a little depressed. Looks like they were really expecting and hoping you to join them. It makes you feel a little bad and leaves you to wonder if you made the right choice.'
 		grupvalue[3] -= rand(30,50)
 !!		gs 'gschool_socialchg', 'group_rel_change','nerds', -5
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -462,7 +462,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik initiation':
 	menu_off = 1
 	!!this should be a new option that shows up at the apartment complex garages at 20:00 hours if joining the gopniks triggered it. Once it is triggered it doesn''t show up again unless Sveta triggers the gopnik invite again for some reason.
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/events/gopnikinvite/lenameet.jpg"></center>'
-	'You meet Lena where you was told to meet her after school by the apartment garages and find her and Lera already there squatting and smoking, while they wait for you. When you get close Lena stands up and asks. "You ready little bunny?" Before you can even answer, she starts off down the street with Lera in tow, talking as she goes. "We are going to that little liquor store in town."'
+	'You meet Lena where you were told to meet her after school by the apartment garages and find her and Lera already there squatting and smoking, while they wait for you. When you get close Lena stands up and asks. "You ready little bunny?" Before you can even answer, she starts off down the street with Lera in tow, talking as she goes. "We are going to that little liquor store in town."'
 	'You follow them, not sure what to say. You know this is likely going to be a test of some sort to join them, you are just not sure what it is.'
 	killvar 'gopnik_initiation'
 	killvar 'gopnik_initiation_day'
@@ -1293,7 +1293,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tRadomir':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big39.jpg"></center>'
 			'You roll your eyes at him. "We already did, remember, cutting class in the bathroom?"'
-			'He looks at you long and hard like he is trying hard to remember. "Oh yeah... yeah, you was a fine piece of ass. I remember now, well damn and here I thought I was going to get a new peace of pussy." He sighs and turns back to the guys looking disappointed and doesn''t even glance back at you, as he continues his graphic story to the guys.'
+			'He looks at you long and hard like he is trying hard to remember. "Oh yeah... yeah, you were a fine piece of ass. I remember now, well damn and here I thought I was going to get a new piece of pussy." He sighs and turns back to the guys looking disappointed and doesn''t even glance back at you, as he continues his graphic story to the guys.'
 			'Mildly annoyed you move off, what a jack ass.'
 			minut += 2
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1421,7 +1421,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tArkadi':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big41.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Isn''t there anything you like here?" You ask him.'
-			'He shrugs a bit. "It is nice playing with the band, but I wish we was doing it in the city, hell I can''t wait till school is over and we can all move to the city."'
+			'He shrugs a bit. "It is nice playing with the band, but I wish we were doing it in the city, hell I can''t wait till school is over and we can all move to the city."'
 			'You sigh, "All this talk about the city. You know if you focused on what is here, maybe you could make things better here."'
 			'"You''re right, I shouldn''t think too much about it. It''s just that I miss my friends back in the city. They''re quite the rowdy bunch."'
 			'"They sound like fun." you say, "It would be fun to meet them."'

+ 2 - 2
locations/housecall.qsrc

@@ -363,7 +363,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel1':
 													'She looks at you. "Well, how do you feel?"'
 													'Unable to resist grinning. "Ooh, Just perfect" You answer and only then do you realize just how well you do feel. The sickness seems to have passed and you feel perfectly healthy, not to mention in a wonderful mood. The sweet bouquet of sex drifts in the air and the exhaustion makes this an even more pleasant sensations.'
 													'She smiles at you. "Well, It''s magic, baby. Mm-m, you''re just a miracle. For a long time I have not gotten so much pleasure from my magic. If you get sick again, just call me or if you just want to spend time with me. You can also look for me in the clinic.'
-													'You promised to be sure to find her, closing your eyes falling asleep. While you was sleeping, Ninel quietly dressed and left.'
+													'You promised to be sure to find her, closing your eyes falling asleep. While you were sleeping, Ninel quietly dressed and left.'
 
 													gs 'arousal', 'end'
 													gs 'stat'
@@ -461,7 +461,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel2':
 							'She looks at you. "Well, how do you feel?"'
 							'Unable to resist grinning. "Ooh ... Just perfect" You answer and only then do you realize just how well you do feel. The sickness seems to have passed, leaving you feeling perfectly healthy and in a wonderful mood. The sweet bouquet of sex hangs in the air and the exhaustion makes this an even more pleasant sensations.'
 							'She smiles at you. "Well, It''s magic, baby. Mm-m, you''re just a miracle. For a long time I have not gotten so much pleasure from my magic. If you get sick again, just call me or if you just want to spend time with me. You can also look for me in the clinic.'
-							'You promised to be sure to find her, closing your eyes falling asleep. While you was sleeping, Ninel quietly dressed and left.'
+							'You promised to be sure to find her, closing your eyes falling asleep. While you were sleeping, Ninel quietly dressed and left.'
 
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'

+ 1 - 1
locations/katjaEvDin.qsrc

@@ -522,7 +522,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kuni_dom':
 								end
 								'Yet she doesn''t slow down her furious pace. Finally unable to keep it up anymore she collapses on your back. You can feel the sweat from her body on your back and her heavy breathing in your ear. As she rests, half leaning against and half laying on you, with the dildo still buried it''s full length up your ass.'
 								'You take the time to rest and relax yourself coming down from the amazing fucking you just received. A few moments later she kisses your back and your neck, before getting off you and pulling the dildo out slowly. Getting up yourself, you see her taking the harness off and tossing it aside. You notice that her thighs are slick with sweat and her own juices. Once it is off and you are facing her, she grabs you by the neck and gives you a passionate, deep, long kiss. Finally breaking the kiss "My god <<$pcs_nickname>> that was amazing. I hope I didn''t hurt you too much and you enjoyed it as much as I did. No wonder boys fuck us like that, that was amazing."'
-								'She says as she falls back on her bed laying on her back, still breathing hard and looking at you with a somewhat possessive look. You lay down next to her. "It was wonderful, I''m glad you enjoyed it too, even if you was a little rough at times." She leans over and gives you another kiss. "Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>> if I was to rough, but that was beyond description, we are going to have to do that again." The two of you lay quietly for a while, basking in the aftermath. You know something in your relationship has changed and you think for the better. After a while you get up and get dressed, you need to get going.'
+								'She says as she falls back on her bed laying on her back, still breathing hard and looking at you with a somewhat possessive look. You lay down next to her. "It was wonderful, I''m glad you enjoyed it too, even if you were a little rough at times." She leans over and gives you another kiss. "Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>> if I was to rough, but that was beyond description, we are going to have to do that again." The two of you lay quietly for a while, basking in the aftermath. You know something in your relationship has changed and you think for the better. After a while you get up and get dressed, you need to get going.'
 
 								act 'Go home':
 									gs 'arousal', 'end'

+ 3 - 3
locations/masharoom.qsrc

@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masha':
 					cla
 					*clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/masha/sex/r38.jpg"></center>'
-					'You took off the makeshift strapon, you moved so you was straddling her face in a 69 position. Masha immediately went into motion with her tongue on your pussy. It didn''t take her long, you was so excited and with in a few seconds an orgasm rocked your body and you covered her face in your pussy juices.'
+					'You took off the makeshift strapon and moved so you were straddling her face in a 69 position. Masha immediately went into motion with her tongue on your pussy. It didn''t take her long, you were so excited and with in a few seconds an orgasm rocked your body and you covered her face in your pussy juices.'
 
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian', 'dom'
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masha':
 					cla
 					*clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/masha/sex/r39.jpg"></center>'
-					'You took off the makeshift strapon, you moved so you was straddling her face in a 69 position. Masha immediately went into motion with her tongue on your pussy. You returned the favor and went to work on her pussy, both of you where so excited that with in a few seconds you both orgasmed hard.'
+					'You took off the makeshift strapon and moved so you were straddling her face in a 69 position. Masha immediately went into motion with her tongue on your pussy. You returned the favor and went to work on her pussy, both of you where so excited that with in a few seconds you both orgasmed hard.'
 
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian', 'dom'
@@ -572,7 +572,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/masha/sex/r20.jpg"></center>'
-	'Trying another outfit with leather hand cuffs you click them into place and together and you hear them click. You thought they just snapped and unsnapped together but as you try and pull the fasteners apart they won''t unclick. You frantically began trying to break free, you didn''t notice the man walking in as you was trying to undo the cuffs, you only notice him with he clips the leash on the collar you was wearing. At first you happy thinking Masha had returned, but as you turn around you see he has a hard look in his eye and holding a wooden paddle in his hand. "I see you got all dressed up and ready for me, now let''s play." He says in a menacing tone.'
+	'Trying another outfit with leather hand cuffs you click them into place and together and you hear them click. You thought they just snapped and unsnapped together but as you try and pull the fasteners apart they won''t unclick. You frantically began trying to break free so you didn''t notice the man walking in as you were trying to undo the cuffs, only when he clipped the leash on the collar you were wearing. At first you were happy, thinking Masha had returned, but as you turn around you see he has a hard look in his eye and holding a wooden paddle in his hand. "I see you got all dressed up and ready for me, now let''s play." He says in a menacing tone.'
 	'"Please help me take this off." showing him your cuffed hands as you beg him to take them off. "Shut up bitch, a slave should not speak without permission of the owner, get on your knees and open your mouth, quickly." he shouted.'
 
 	act 'You keep asking for release.':

+ 1 - 1
locations/metro_events.qsrc

@@ -1023,7 +1023,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'twobbc':
 									act 'Another ass pounding':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/station/2bbc9.jpg"></center>'
-										'It looks like you was correct, after a few minutes the ones who dick you are sucking starts saying something urgently, by a guess you think he wants to trade positions. Sure enough they both pull out of you and walk around you, switching positions. The one that was just in your ass does make a detour to grab some toilet paper, which he uses to wipe off his dick, before walking over to shove it back in your mouth.'
+										'It looks like you were correct, after a few minutes the ones who dick you are sucking starts saying something urgently, by a guess you think he wants to trade positions. Sure enough they both pull out of you and walk around you, switching positions. The one that was just in your ass does make a detour to grab some toilet paper, which he uses to wipe off his dick, before walking over to shove it back in your mouth.'
 										*nl
 										'While his friend wasting no time shoves his cock in your much loser asshole, it actually slides in fairly easily since the stretching it already got. He very quickly works himself balls deep in your ass, he grabs you by the hips as he starts hammering away at your ass, just as fast and furiously as he can. Several minutes of this goes by until they both pull out of you, the one just in your ass does what his friend did and cleans his dick up with some toilet paper.'
 										gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'exhibitionism', 'group', 'sub', 'rough'

+ 1 - 1
locations/npcstatic3.qsrc

@@ -1071,7 +1071,7 @@ $npc_firstname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Andrey'
 $npc_nickname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Andrey'
 $npc_lastname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Aleksandrov'
 $npc_usedname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Andrey'
-$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Andrey Aleksandrov family took part in the exchange student program. Rumor is they was less than happy when the student they sent was an African American, but Andrey doesn''t seem to mind. He and Marcus quickly became friends, he tends to use Marcus popularity to boost his own and in the process spend a lot less time with his long time girl friend Stasya. The school nurse is his aunt.'
+$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Andrey Aleksandrov family took part in the exchange student program. Rumor is they were less than happy when the student they sent was an African American, but Andrey doesn''t seem to mind. He and Marcus quickly became friends, he tends to use Marcus popularity to boost his own and in the process spend a lot less time with his long time girl friend Stasya. The school nurse is his aunt.'
 npc_cyc['A<<npctemp>>'] = -1
 npc_fert['A<<npctemp>>'] = -1
 $npc_firstpart['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'U'

+ 1 - 1
locations/nyp_school.qsrc

@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/newyear/forceddrink.jpg"></center>'
 							'You shake your head no. "No thinks guys."'
-							'One of them snorts, while Dan says. "I don''t think you understand <<$pcs_nickname>> we wasn''t asking." You feel someone grab your hair and pull your head back. While Dan grabs your chin and forces your mouth open, while someone pours vodka into your mouth. You try to spit some out, but once your mouth is full, Dan forces your mouth closed. Then covers your mouth with his hand and pinches your nose closed, forcing you to swallow or drown. After several times of this, you are so drunk you can barely stand.'
+							'One of them snorts, while Dan says. "I don''t think you understand <<$pcs_nickname>> we weren''t asking." You feel someone grab your hair and pull your head back. While Dan grabs your chin and forces your mouth open, while someone pours vodka into your mouth. You try to spit some out, but once your mouth is full, Dan forces your mouth closed. Then covers your mouth with his hand and pinches your nose closed, forcing you to swallow or drown. After several times of this, you are so drunk you can barely stand.'
 							minut += 10
 							gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'vodka', 1
 							gs 'stat'

+ 1 - 1
locations/pavComplexb2.qsrc

@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushkaFirst':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img src="images\pc\npc_headshots\big144.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you walk into the building you nearly run into Anushka. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>> whats up?"'
-	'A bit surprised to see her but not disappointed, you was just wandering around for the hell of it. "Just killing time, kinda bored you know?"'
+	'A bit surprised to see her but not disappointed, you were just wandering around for the hell of it. "Just killing time, kinda bored you know?"'
 	'She nods a bit and finishes checking the mail. "Yeah I know how that is, hey want to come up to my place and hang out?"'
 	act 'Can''t, got to go.': minut += 1 & gt 'pavcomplex', 'start'
 	act 'Sure': minut += 2 & gt 'anushapt', 'firstvisit'

+ 2 - 2
locations/pavaptcourtev.qsrc

@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events1':
 		anushka_met = daystart
 		'<center><img src="images\pc\npc_headshots\big144.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you walk into the building you nearly run into Anushka. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>> whats up?"'
-		'A bit surprised to see her but not disappointed, you was just wandering around for the hell of it. "Just killing time, kinda bored you know?"'
+		'A bit surprised to see her but not disappointed, you were just wandering around for the hell of it. "Just killing time, kinda bored you know?"'
 		'She nods a bit and finishes checking the mail. "Yeah I know how that is, hey want to come up to my place and hang out?"'
 		act 'Can''t, got to go.': minut += 1 & gt 'pavcomplex', 'start'
 		act 'Sure': minut += 2 & gt 'anushapt', 'firstvisit'	
@@ -362,7 +362,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events2':
 	elseif nightevents = 2:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/boygirlplay.jpg"></center>'
-		'A boy and a girl are talking near one of the doors to the buildings. Then she turns till her back is to him and he pushes her forward and they dry hump a bit as if they was fucking doggy style. They both seem to really get into it, because it doesn''t take to long until they go inside in a bit of a haste.'
+		'A boy and a girl are talking near one of the doors to the buildings. Then she turns till her back is to him and he pushes her forward and they dry hump a bit as if they were fucking doggy style. They both seem to really get into it, because it doesn''t take to long until they go inside in a bit of a haste.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'unknown'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'

+ 3 - 3
locations/pod_ezd.qsrc

@@ -844,7 +844,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys_smoke':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/stairs/event/megera.jpg"></center>'
 					'Tired of always having to defend yourself, you take all your anger out on the guys. "Are you kidding me!? Did all the blood drain from your brains and into your groins or something?"'
 					'"If I start screaming now, and accuse you of rape, everyone in the entire housing block will come to see what is happening. Who do you think they''ll going to believe, me or you?"'
-					'The guys realize they overplayed their hand, and the guy with his pants down quickly pulls them back up. "Okay okay, we''re sorry! We was just messing around." they say, and quickly walks away before you can get another word in.'
+					'The guys realize they overplayed their hand, and the guy with his pants down quickly pulls them back up. "Okay okay, we''re sorry! We were just messing around." they say, and quickly walks away before you can get another word in.'
 					act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', $smoke_loc
 				end
 			else
@@ -892,7 +892,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys_smoke':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/stairs/event/megera.jpg"></center>'
 					'Tired of always having to defend yourself, you take all your anger out on the guys: "Are you kidding me!? Did all the blood drain away from your brains and into your groins or something?"'
 					'"If I start screaming now, and accuse you of rape, everyone in the entire housing block will come to see what is happening. Who do you think they''ll going to believe, me or you?"'
-					'The guys realize they overplayed their hand, and the guy with his pants down quickly pulls them back up. "Okay okay, we''re sorry! We was just messing around." they say, and quickly walk away before you can get another word in.'
+					'The guys realize they overplayed their hand, and the guy with his pants down quickly pulls them back up. "Okay okay, we''re sorry! We were just messing around." they say, and quickly walk away before you can get another word in.'
 					act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', $smoke_loc
 				end
 			else
@@ -1416,7 +1416,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik_group_chat':
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/stairs/event/gopniks.jpg"></center>'
 							'You grab another beer and take a swig of it. Thing seem to be winding down, several people are pretty drunk and not talking much anymore, a couple of the boys are trying to chat up the girls. Then one of the guys starts hitting on Lena and Vitek jumps up and grabs him. Soon they are struggling before they are pulled apart. Vitek yells. "Stay the fuck away from my sister."'
 							'The other guy holds up his hands. "Hey I was just talking to her."'
-							'Lena gets up pissed off and shoves Vitek. "Stop being such a fucking asshole, we was just talking. I can take care of myself." With that she storms off, with Lera in tow. Vitek glares at the other guy and then the party breaks up and everyones goes their own way.'
+							'Lena gets up pissed off and shoves Vitek. "Stop being such a fucking asshole, we were just talking. I can take care of myself." With that she storms off, with Lera in tow. Vitek glares at the other guy and then the party breaks up and everyones goes their own way.'
 							act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_5'
 						end
 					end

+ 1 - 1
locations/podezdM.qsrc

@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grup2':
 
 	elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 1:
 		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> stands up and yells, "Hey, not cool bro! That''s my chick, hands off!"'
-		'The guys let go of you and put up their hands. "No problem man, we was just having a little harmless fun, we didn''t mean anything by it."'
+		'The guys let go of you and put up their hands. "No problem man, we were just having a little harmless fun, we didn''t mean anything by it."'
 		gs 'willpower', 'gangbang', 'resist', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Go upstairs (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':

+ 1 - 1
locations/rinwork.qsrc

@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					act 'Go with Artur':palevorin = 3 & gt 'RynokHoz', 'the_beginning'
 					
 				elseif palevorin = 4:
-					'Artur goes behind you into the stall carrying some stuff. He comes up behind you are working and gives your ass a slap and squeeze, with one hand while the other one snakes around and roughly grabs your tit, as he whispers in your ear. "So you like cock, I didn''t think you was a little slut but that is ok, I like dirty sluts."'
+					'Artur goes behind you into the stall carrying some stuff. He comes up behind you are working and gives your ass a slap and squeeze, with one hand while the other one snakes around and roughly grabs your tit, as he whispers in your ear. "So you like cock, I didn''t think you were a little slut but that''s ok, I like dirty sluts."'
 					'He cuts you off before you can make any protest about being slut. "No it is good, I can use this. Now come let us go to the warehouse so I can fuck you."'
 					
 					act 'Go with him ':palevorin = 5 & gt 'RynokHoz', 'sex'

+ 2 - 2
locations/sisterQW.qsrc

@@ -744,7 +744,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboyQW_party':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_9.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'Standing, you tried to get out from behind the table, to go dancing, but no one was dancing they was all just sitting and drinking.'
+		'Standing, you tried to get out from behind the table, to go dancing, but no one was dancing they were all just sitting and drinking.'
 		'Seeing, you got up and wanting to leave the table, Rex pulls you over: "Where are you going, it''s only the beginning, hold the bottle, and let''s drink, otherwise I would be offended."'
 		'You couldn''t deny the birthday boy and took the bottle from his hands, and gulp down a huge shot, feeling it burn down your throat. You hear others shouting in encouragement.'
 		act 'Go dance': gt 'sisterQW', 'dance'
@@ -764,7 +764,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 	*nl
 	'Drunk you stumble to go dance.'
 	'You did not need to be persuade, you were on the same wavelength with everyone else and pulled off your top, staying just in your bra.'
-	'The boys carried on dancing, jumping and bumping into each other, even though you was almost half-naked, it seemed like no one was paying any attention to you.'
+	'The boys carried on dancing, jumping and bumping into each other, even though you were almost half-naked, it seemed like no one was paying any attention to you.'
 	'Anya approached you:"<<$pcs_nickname>>, come on cheer up, go get into the center, have fun dancing and other very tempting things."'
 	act 'Drink':
 		*clr & cla

+ 1 - 1
locations/soniadisco.qsrc

@@ -1525,7 +1525,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'followsonia':
 				'She cries even harder. "I know." Then she takes off running as best she can, maybe you should have been nicer, even if it is her own fault.'
 			elseif soniaencourage > 0 and npc_rel['A25'] => 50:
 				npc_rel['A25'] -= 20
-				'You shake your head, she was all happy before and now crying about it. "What do you expect? You was acting like a slut, you wanted to have fun and walk on the wild side and you did. You have no one to blame but yourself."'
+				'You shake your head, she was all happy before and now crying about it. "What do you expect? You were acting like a slut, you wanted to have fun and walk on the wild side and you did. You have no one to blame but yourself."'
 				'She cries even harder. "I thought you were my friend, you encouraged me, why would you do that?" She asks you.'
 				'"Come on we both know nothing I was going to say would have got you to stop, you wanted to know what it was like to be a bad girl and nothing was going to stop you. So I helped you do what you wanted, that''s not my fault, it''s yours." You tell her.'
 				'"Stay away from me." Then she takes off running as best she can, maybe you should have been nicer, even if it is her own fault.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/street_walker.qsrc

@@ -218,7 +218,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'event3':
 		minut += 5
 		ruslan_pimp = 2
 		'You nod your head in agreement. "Yeah you''re right, having some protection would be a good thing."'
-		'When you say that he is all smiles suddenly and pulls you up beside him as he wraps his arm around you."Good good, I knew you was a smart girl. Now every Friday I will come by and collect my half of what you make. You better not hold out on me, the other girls will tell me if you do. Now here is my number, if anyone refuses to pay or you have problems you call." Once you add his number to your contact list, he slaps you on the ass. "Now get to work!" With that he turns and walks off leaving you to wonder if this was a good idea.'
+		'When you say that he is all smiles suddenly and pulls you up beside him as he wraps his arm around you."Good good, I knew you were a smart girl. Now every Friday I will come by and collect my half of what you make. You better not hold out on me, the other girls will tell me if you do. Now here is my number, if anyone refuses to pay or you have problems you call." Once you add his number to your contact list, he slaps you on the ass. "Now get to work!" With that he turns and walks off leaving you to wonder if this was a good idea.'
 		act 'Stop working for the night': gt 'street_walker', 'end'
 		act 'Keep working the street': gt 'street_walker', 'event1'
 	end