[text edit] clean up sexdvanadva

locations/sexdvanadva.qsrc

@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'var':
 		end
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexdvanadva/uanal<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'When he enters your backdoor it hurts a little, but soon the pain goes away. Pleasure takes its place, as he slowly moves back and forth, stretching your hole.'
+		'When he enters your backdoor, it hurts a little, but soon, the pain goes away. Pleasure takes its place, as he slowly moves back and forth, stretching your hole.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'var':
 		*clr
 		sexvar += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexdvanadva/dp<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'She has both men fucking her. It makes you feel a little envious, as you watch playing with yourself.'
+		'She has both men fucking her. It makes you feel a little envious as you watch, playing with yourself.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexdvanadva/cum<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'They spill semen all over both of you. You lick it of each other, and share a deep kiss, before you both swallow.'
+	'They spill semen all over both of you. You lick it off each other and share a deep kiss before you both swallow.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'