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  1. 2 2
      locations/BurgerTip.qsrc
  2. 1 1
      locations/FedorEv2.qsrc
  3. 1 1
      locations/Military.qsrc
  4. 1 1
      locations/NikoDates.qsrc
  5. 2 2
      locations/NikoWhore.qsrc
  6. 1 1
      locations/Nudelake.qsrc
  7. 1 1
      locations/Snpc.qsrc
  8. 8 8
      locations/_clothing_name.qsrc
  9. 3 3
      locations/andrey.qsrc
  10. 10 10
      locations/anushkaev1.qsrc
  11. 3 3
      locations/artemEv.qsrc
  12. 1 1
      locations/artemhome.qsrc
  13. 2 2
      locations/brothel.qsrc
  14. 1 1
      locations/brother_voyeur.qsrc
  15. 2 2
      locations/club.qsrc
  16. 1 1
      locations/dateF.qsrc
  17. 1 1
      locations/dateM.qsrc
  18. 1 1
      locations/dimalina.qsrc
  19. 1 1
      locations/din_pav.qsrc
  20. 6 6
      locations/event.qsrc
  21. 1 1
      locations/fight.qsrc
  22. 4 4
      locations/flash.qsrc
  23. 3 3
      locations/foto_events.qsrc
  24. 2 2
      locations/foto_events2.qsrc
  25. 1 1
      locations/foto_model_documentary.qsrc
  26. 1 1
      locations/gadhouse.qsrc
  27. 1 1
      locations/gadriver.qsrc
  28. 1 1
      locations/gdktoilet_womens.qsrc
  29. 1 1
      locations/gopnik_initiation.qsrc
  30. 2 2
      locations/gopsex.qsrc
  31. 46 46
      locations/grigory.qsrc
  32. 2 2
      locations/gschool_break.qsrc
  33. 1 1
      locations/gschool_detention.qsrc
  34. 2 2
      locations/gschool_girls_bathroom.qsrc
  35. 2 2
      locations/gschool_sex.qsrc
  36. 1 1
      locations/gskino.qsrc
  37. 3 3
      locations/hunterLoveSex.qsrc
  38. 1 1
      locations/hunters.qsrc
  39. 1 1
      locations/husbSex.qsrc
  40. 6 6
      locations/igorev.qsrc
  41. 2 2
      locations/igorhome.qsrc
  42. 3 3
      locations/ivanRoom.qsrc
  43. 1 1
      locations/journal_quests.qsrc
  44. 1 1
      locations/kinosvid.qsrc
  45. 1 1
      locations/leonid.qsrc
  46. 1 1
      locations/lesbimistress.qsrc
  47. 8 8
      locations/lover_change.qsrc
  48. 8 8
      locations/lover_likes.qsrc
  49. 1 1
      locations/mirasex.qsrc
  50. 1 1
      locations/mother.qsrc
  51. 1 1
      locations/nerd_game_night.qsrc
  52. 1 1
      locations/nichApartment.qsrc
  53. 1 1
      locations/nichBedroomServant.qsrc
  54. 1 1
      locations/nichClub.qsrc
  55. 1 1
      locations/nichStudy.qsrc
  56. 4 4
      locations/olu.qsrc
  57. 4 4
      locations/olutaxi.qsrc
  58. 1 1
      locations/party_boys.qsrc
  59. 4 4
      locations/pav_aptcourtev.qsrc
  60. 1 1
      locations/pav_complex.qsrc
  61. 1 1
      locations/pav_shared_apt.qsrc
  62. 1 1
      locations/post_office.qsrc
  63. 2 2
      locations/preALT.qsrc
  64. 2 2
      locations/preTG.qsrc
  65. 1 1
      locations/ptu_dush.qsrc
  66. 1 1
      locations/reks.qsrc
  67. 1 1
      locations/restoranM.qsrc
  68. 1 1
      locations/salon.qsrc
  69. 1 1
      locations/scandalicious.qsrc
  70. 2 2
      locations/selfplay.qsrc
  71. 1 1
      locations/shop_coco_carmen.qsrc
  72. 1 1
      locations/shop_flamingos.qsrc
  73. 3 3
      locations/shop_pussycats.qsrc
  74. 1 1
      locations/shop_skuas.qsrc
  75. 2 2
      locations/shulga_room.qsrc
  76. 4 4
      locations/soniadisco.qsrc
  77. 6 6
      locations/street_event.qsrc
  78. 1 1
      locations/stripclub.qsrc
  79. 1 1
      locations/tatiana_lab.qsrc
  80. 1 1
      locations/tatiana_missions.qsrc
  81. 2 2
      locations/taxi.qsrc
  82. 1 1
      locations/tobiQW.qsrc
  83. 1 1
      locations/train_incidental.qsrc
  84. 1 1
      locations/webcam_site.qsrc
  85. 2 2
      locations/yarik.qsrc

+ 2 - 2
locations/BurgerTip.qsrc

@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 							*clr&cla
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/anatoly/sex/bossex2.jpg"></center>'
-							'Anatoly puts you on your back, and begins to undress you. His kisses and his hands run all over your body, soon his hand finds it''s way between your legs.'
+							'Anatoly puts you on your back, and begins to undress you. His kisses and his hands run all over your body, soon his hand finds its way between your legs.'
 
 							bosstipsexrand = rand(1, 10)
 
@@ -831,7 +831,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bend':
 		'He starts rubbing the head of his cock against your little pussy.'
 		act 'Moan': gt 'BurgerTip', 'sex'
 	elseif bosstipsex > 8:
-		'He bends down and spits into your ass. Then you feel his finger start working it''s way into your backdoor.'
+		'He bends down and spits into your ass. Then you feel his finger start working its way into your backdoor.'
 		act 'Give it to him': gt 'BurgerTip', 'anal'
 	end
 end

+ 1 - 1
locations/FedorEv2.qsrc

@@ -253,7 +253,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Movies 2':
 				*clr & cla				
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/cinema/sex/kinosex3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You slowly turn back to Fedor and notice that he forgot to zip his pants and you can see his underwear poking out, so you slowly reach out to zip it for him when you feel sudden excitement as your hand is over his crootch and with out thinking you reach into his pants and start rubbing on his penis. You can feel how rock hard his cock is and unable to stop yourself you start jerking him off hearing him softly moan. You then look up to him to see him biting his lip trying not to make to much noise.'
+				'You slowly turn back to Fedor and notice that he forgot to zip his pants and you can see his underwear poking out, so you slowly reach out to zip it for him when you feel sudden excitement as your hand is over his crootch and with out thinking you reach into his pants and start rubbing on his penis. You can feel how rock hard his cock is and unable to stop yourself you start jerking him off hearing him softly moan. You then look up to him to see him biting his lip trying not to make too much noise.'
 				
 				act 'Continue jerking him':
 					*clr & cla

+ 1 - 1
locations/Military.qsrc

@@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/military/sex/rape2.jpg"></center>'
 		'You began to cry for help, when a dick is stuffed in your mouth.'
 		'"Here''s something to shut your mouth", came the voice of a rapist.'
-		'You tried to spit it out, but its getting worse as he thrust it down your throat, and began to throatfuck you.'
+		'You tried to spit it out, but it''s getting worse as he thrust it down your throat, and began to throatfuck you.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'rough'
 		gs 'stat'

+ 1 - 1
locations/NikoDates.qsrc

@@ -817,7 +817,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Home':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/3/home/home6.jpg"></center>'
-							'Niko pushes his dick inside of you, causing a rush of pleasure, feeling his hard cock pushing it''s way inside you. You lay back enjoying the thrusts as you continue to stare into Niko''s eyes, feeling his lustful gaze almost hypnotizing you into submission, wanting him to fuck you harder while feeling helpless to stop it, but also feeling satisfaction in that feeling.' 
+							'Niko pushes his dick inside of you, causing a rush of pleasure, feeling his hard cock pushing its way inside you. You lay back enjoying the thrusts as you continue to stare into Niko''s eyes, feeling his lustful gaze almost hypnotizing you into submission, wanting him to fuck you harder while feeling helpless to stop it, but also feeling satisfaction in that feeling.' 
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 							gs'stat'
 							act 'Ponder':

+ 2 - 2
locations/NikoWhore.qsrc

@@ -591,7 +591,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/smroom/event/rought/dog9.mp4"></video></center>'
-									'Vitek fucks your ass slowly at first, but then picks up the pace. You let out high pitch squeals as you feel Vitek''s penis rubbing against your inner ass. His big hard cock, pushing it''s way deeper inside you as his strong hands firmly grips you hair. Yuo feel completely at his mercy as he continues to ram is cock in your sore asshole.' 
+									'Vitek fucks your ass slowly at first, but then picks up the pace. You let out high pitch squeals as you feel Vitek''s penis rubbing against your inner ass. His big hard cock, pushing its way deeper inside you as his strong hands firmly grips you hair. Yuo feel completely at his mercy as he continues to ram is cock in your sore asshole.' 
 									$orgasm_txt = ''
 									gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
 									gs 'stat'
@@ -798,7 +798,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/5.jpg"></center>'
-									'You suddenly feel Roman''s hard cock ram it''s way into your anus, causing a sudden jolt of pain. You scream out loud before Roman covers your mouth with his hand for a few seconds before the pain reduces to a manageable level. As Roman begin rapidly fucking your ass, you ask him "Can you... ehh... take it slow... please..." Roman continues fucking you at the same pace, it seems that he is either ignoring you, or didn''t hear you speak. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Owww It hurts, he is fucking me so hard. Please slow down. It hurts, please stop. OOOwwwwww!'+$CloseInnerThought+' You close your eyes and just wait for it to be over. Roman suddenly wraps his arms around yours then drops back causing you to be on top of him with his dick still in your ass. Roman then says, "Ride me."'
+									'You suddenly feel Roman''s hard cock ram its way into your anus, causing a sudden jolt of pain. You scream out loud before Roman covers your mouth with his hand for a few seconds before the pain reduces to a manageable level. As Roman begin rapidly fucking your ass, you ask him "Can you... ehh... take it slow... please..." Roman continues fucking you at the same pace, it seems that he is either ignoring you, or didn''t hear you speak. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Owww It hurts, he is fucking me so hard. Please slow down. It hurts, please stop. OOOwwwwww!'+$CloseInnerThought+' You close your eyes and just wait for it to be over. Roman suddenly wraps his arms around yours then drops back causing you to be on top of him with his dick still in your ass. Roman then says, "Ride me."'
 									gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 									gs 'arousal', 'end'
 									gs 'stat'

+ 1 - 1
locations/Nudelake.qsrc

@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ if hour >= 6 and hour <= 20 and temper >= 15:
 		'Also, you can play <a href="exec:gt ''Nudelake'', ''voleybol''">beach volleyball</a>'
 	end
 elseif hour >= 6 and hour <= 20:
-	'Its too cold for any nudist activities.'
+	'It''s too cold for any nudist activities.'
 else
 	'The nudist beach is closed.'
 end

+ 1 - 1
locations/Snpc.qsrc

@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ if numnpc = 144:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big<<numnpc>>.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Hey Anush you feeling ok? You kinda look flush, is something wrong? Would you like to talk about it?"'
 				'She leans in close and tries to kiss you, while one hand reaches down and squeezes your butt. You turn your head and pull away. "What are you doing? I was only seeing if you were ok."'
-				'She crowds you a bit and leans in close. "You talk to much, I can think of better things you can do with that tongue of yours."'
+				'She crowds you a bit and leans in close. "You talk too much, I can think of better things you can do with that tongue of yours."'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian', 'exhibitionism'
 				minut -= 5
 				gs 'stat'

+ 8 - 8
locations/_clothing_name.qsrc

@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swimwear':
 	if ARGS[1] = 36:$RESULT = 'A red bikini with small briefs and a boob tube style top. Attention grabbing without being indecent.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 37:$RESULT = 'A one-piece swimsuit in blue with white and pink stripes, it has a high neck and is designed for performance as much as looks.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 38:$RESULT = 'A floral design bikini with bows and ruffles just perfect for the beach but not so good for swimming in.'
-	if ARGS[1] = 39:$RESULT = 'A one-piece with so many cut-outs its could pass for a bikini, it has a bit of a spider web vibe and might just be the perfect thing for a sexy Goth.'
+	if ARGS[1] = 39:$RESULT = 'A one-piece with so many cut-outs, it could pass for a bikini. It has a bit of a spider web vibe and might just be the perfect thing for a sexy Goth.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 40:$RESULT = 'A leatherette bikini with scale detail to look like crocodile skin but in a glossy black. A little skimpy with string details.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 41:$RESULT = 'A fashionable one-piece swimsuit in Egyptian blue, it teases yet remains somewhat functional.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 42:$RESULT = 'A classic black bikini with white trim and florescent yellow detail, very chic.'
@@ -155,11 +155,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swimwear':
 	if ARGS[1] = 149:$RESULT = 'A bikini set with actual zebras printed on them, you feel both silly and cute at the same time.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 150:$RESULT = 'A black bikini set, it has a triangle top with a side-string bottom that offers full coverage.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 151:$RESULT = 'A bikini set with a triangle top and side-tie bottom in the color mineral alloy, it has crochet print.'
-	if ARGS[1] = 152:$RESULT = 'A bikini set in the color sangria, it has a tie-back top and a cheeky bottom, its both flirty and functional.'
+	if ARGS[1] = 152:$RESULT = 'A bikini set in the color sangria, it has a tie-back top and a cheeky bottom, it''s both flirty and functional.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 153:$RESULT = 'A bikini in dark periwinkle, it has a triangle top with tie-back and a classic bikini bottom.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 154:$RESULT = 'A bikini set with a triangle top and a Brazilian bottom, its traditional Japanese art print makes look exotic.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 155:$RESULT = 'A bikini set with a tie-back top and a Brazilian bottom, the strings draws attention to your breasts.' 
-	if ARGS[1] = 156:$RESULT = 'A bikini set with a bralette top and a cheeky Brazilian bottom, its blue if worn normally but black if worn reversed.'
+	if ARGS[1] = 156:$RESULT = 'A bikini set with a bralette top and a cheeky Brazilian bottom, it''s blue if worn normally but black if worn reversed.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 157:$RESULT = 'A bikini set with a twist Bandeau top and a string bikini bottom, it has decorative gold stripes.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 158:$RESULT = 'A bikini set with a small triangle top and a g-string bottom that leaves very little to the imagination.' 
 	if ARGS[1] = 160:$RESULT = 'A black bikini set with a triangle top and a little thong bottom that shows off your booty quite nicely.'
@@ -178,15 +178,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swimwear':
 	if ARGS[1] = 173:$RESULT = 'A black bikini set with a bralette top and a full bottom, it has the classy vibe to it.' 
 	if ARGS[1] = 174:$RESULT = 'A bikini set in the Cerulean color, it has a classic bottom as well as a tie-back top that reveal part of the cleavage.' 
 	if ARGS[1] = 175:$RESULT = 'A bikini in Sky blue color, it has a fashionable halter-top top and a classic bikini bottom.' 
-	if ARGS[1] = 176:$RESULT = 'A black bikini set with a strapless Bandeau top and a Brazilian bottom, its fun and flirty.'
+	if ARGS[1] = 176:$RESULT = 'A black bikini set with a strapless Bandeau top and a Brazilian bottom, it''s fun and flirty.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 177:$RESULT = 'A bikini in the color Laure, it has a front-tie top and a multi-string bikini bottom.'
-	if ARGS[1] = 178:$RESULT = 'A Triangle grey bikini top with rings and a scrunch Brazilian bottom, its both fashionable and functional.'
+	if ARGS[1] = 178:$RESULT = 'A Triangle grey bikini top with rings and a scrunch Brazilian bottom, it''s both fashionable and functional.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 179:$RESULT = 'A Triangle bikini top with a Brazilian bottom in multi-floral print.'
-	if ARGS[1] = 180:$RESULT = 'A pink ruffled bikini with a triangle top and a thong bottom, its both playful and flirty'
+	if ARGS[1] = 180:$RESULT = 'A pink ruffled bikini with a triangle top and a thong bottom, it''s both playful and flirty'
 	if ARGS[1] = 181:$RESULT = 'A black bikini set with a triangle top and a g-string bottom.' 
 	if ARGS[1] = 182:$RESULT = 'A red bikini set with a triangle top and a sexy thong bottom.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 183:$RESULT = 'A bikini set with a triangle top and a g-string bottom, its design reveals much of your body.'
-	if ARGS[1] = 184:$RESULT = 'A red bikini with a tie-back top and a cheeky bottom, its sassy with class.'
+	if ARGS[1] = 184:$RESULT = 'A red bikini with a tie-back top and a cheeky bottom, it''s sassy with class.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 185:$RESULT = 'A black bikini with a a multi-colored top and a classic bikini bottom.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 186:$RESULT = 'A red bikini top with a deep plunge that shows off your cleavage and a small classic bottom.' 
 	if ARGS[1] = 187:$RESULT = 'A black bikini with a deep-plunge top and a thong that shows your body off with minimum decency.'
@@ -318,7 +318,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'beach':
 	if ARGS[1] = 96:$RESULT = 'A two-piece set that''s totally see-through when wet, ideal for an attention-needing tramp!'
 	if ARGS[1] = 97:$RESULT = 'A transparent sky blue bikini that''s wholly see-through when wet, perfect for an attention-seeking bimbo.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 98:$RESULT = 'A transparent white bikini that''s wholly see-through when wet, it is classy, in a bimbo kind of way.'
-	if ARGS[1] = 99:$RESULT = 'A transparent white bikini that''s totally see-through even when its dry, it is perfect for an attention-needing bimbette!'
+	if ARGS[1] = 99:$RESULT = 'A transparent white bikini that''s totally see-through even when it''s dry, it is perfect for an attention-needing bimbette!'
 	if ARGS[1] = 100:$RESULT = 'A transparent white bikini that''s wholly see-through when wet, perfect for an attention-wanting floozy.' 
 	if ARGS[1] = 101:$RESULT = 'A monokini that almost covers nothing, it''s perfect to show off your body, if that is your thing...' 
 	if ARGS[1] = 102:$RESULT = 'A monokini that almost covers nothing, it''s perfect for an attention-seeking bimbette!' 

+ 3 - 3
locations/andrey.qsrc

@@ -455,7 +455,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired1':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\bj3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You soon settle into a rhythm with your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually, he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deep throat him, which causes you to gag.'
+				'You soon settle into a rhythm with your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually, he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deepthroat him, which causes you to gag.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'pain', 2, 'throat', 'stretch'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -510,7 +510,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired2':
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired2.jpg"></center>'
 			'After a few minutes, you put his cock in your mouth and start moving your head back and forth with your tongue constantly rolling over the head of his shaft. You feel his cock growing and stiffening as you caress it with your mouth and tongue.'
-			'You soon settle into a rhythm with your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens, and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually, he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deep throat him which causes you to gag.'
+			'You soon settle into a rhythm with your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens, and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually, he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deepthroat him which causes you to gag.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'pain', 2, 'throat', 'stretch'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -593,7 +593,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rehired':
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired2.jpg"></center>'
 			'After a few minutes, you put his cock in your mouth and start moving your head back and forth with your tongue constantly rolling over the head of his shaft. You feel his cock growing and stiffening as you caress it with your mouth and tongue.'
-			'You soon settle into a rhythm with your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens, and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually, he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deep throat him which causes you to gag.'
+			'You soon settle into a rhythm with your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens, and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually, he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deepthroat him which causes you to gag.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'pain', 2, 'throat', 'stretch'
 			gs 'stat'

+ 10 - 10
locations/anushkaev1.qsrc

@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon1':
 							act 'Face sitting':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/strapon/strapme5.jpg"></center>'
-								'Once she has you soaking wet from her tongue lashes against your pussy. She crawls up on the bed, straddling your face, she easy down until her pussy is against your face. You start licking her in return, hearing her soft moans of pleasure just turns you own more.'
+								'Once she has you soaking wet from her tongue lashes against your pussy. She crawls up on the bed, straddling your face, she easy down until her pussy is against your face. You start licking her in return, hearing her soft moans of pleasure just turns you on even more.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 								gs 'stat'
 								act 'Suck this':
@@ -341,7 +341,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watch_nushrad':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A154'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/spyrad4.jpg"></center>'
-				'Just as she is starting to moan in pleasure even louder than him, he pulls out of her and flips her over, grabbing her butt and giving her butt cheek a hard squeeze, followed by another hard slap that leaves a red outline of his hand on her bare ass, causing her to yelp again. "Fuck you have such a nice ass Nush." He tells her, she apparently knows what that means, as she quickly grabs the bottle of lube out of her night stand. But before she can use it, he grabs it from her. "Give me that, you always use to much." He growls, then he squirts just a little onto the head of his dick, rubbing it down the shaft of his dick. Once done with that he briefly rubs his fingers between her butt cheeks. It doesn''t look like he used much lube to you, nor hardly applied any to her.'
+				'Just as she is starting to moan in pleasure even louder than him, he pulls out of her and flips her over, grabbing her butt and giving her butt cheek a hard squeeze, followed by another hard slap that leaves a red outline of his hand on her bare ass, causing her to yelp again. "Fuck you have such a nice ass Nush." He tells her, she apparently knows what that means, as she quickly grabs the bottle of lube out of her night stand. But before she can use it, he grabs it from her. "Give me that, you always use too much." He growls, then he squirts just a little onto the head of his dick, rubbing it down the shaft of his dick. Once done with that he briefly rubs his fingers between her butt cheeks. It doesn''t look like he used much lube to you, nor hardly applied any to her.'
 				*nl
 				'He pushes her down until she is laying on her stomach, as he tosses the bottle aside and then leans forward, pushing his dick between her butt cheeks as she struggles a bit. "Rad you didn''t use enough lube." She says as she winces as he keeps struggling to push his dick between her butt cheeks. "Shut up Nush, this feels better, you feel really tight." He says just as shoves his hips forward hard, which causes her to jump a little and cry out in pain. "Ow fuck Rad, that hurt, you need to use more lube." She says in a obviously pain stressed voice. He pushes her head against the mattress. You can see her wincing in pain and white knuckling her grip on the bed sheets. "See I knew you didn''t need much lube, fuck your ass is tight." He says as he struggles to force his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock balls deep into her ass, moaning in pleasure as he does.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
@@ -740,7 +740,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watch_nushval':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/spyval5.jpg"></center>'
 					'Once her orgasm has passed he slaps her ass again, as he pulls his dick out of her pussy. "Spread your ass for me baby." She grabs a bottle of lube out of her dresser, putting some of the lube on his dick and some on her ass, then reaches back with one hand, grabbing one of her butt cheeks and spreads it wide. He pushes his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick gently into her ass, which elicits a loud moan of pain and pleasure for her.'
 					*nl
-					'He is fairly slow and not to deep at first, but once she starts moaning loudly and saying. "Yes!, Yes, fuck yes! Oh god yes!" He starts fucking her a lot harder and faster, finally slamming himself balls deep into her ass. She grips the sheets tightly, just as her body is rocked by another massive orgasm. She buries her face in her own shoulder partially muffling her cries of pleasure. You glance around to make sure no one else heard that and is coming to find out what is going on.'
+					'He is fairly slow and not too deep at first, but once she starts moaning loudly and saying. "Yes!, Yes, fuck yes! Oh god yes!" He starts fucking her a lot harder and faster, finally slamming himself balls deep into her ass. She grips the sheets tightly, just as her body is rocked by another massive orgasm. She buries her face in her own shoulder partially muffling her cries of pleasure. You glance around to make sure no one else heard that and is coming to find out what is going on.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Leave apartment': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'pav_complex','start'
@@ -819,7 +819,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'val3some':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/join/val/valnushs5.jpg"></center>'
-							'She lowers herself down on him until his cock slides into her pussy. They both moan in please as she does, she starts riding him hard and fast. You grab ahold of her hips and help pull her down so she takes all of him into her. He slaps your ass, but not to hard and then squeezes it and alternates between slapping and squeezing your ass, while Anushka rides him. After a few minutes he lifts Anushka off him and turns to you. "Lay down and spread you legs" He says as he helps you lay down.'
+							'She lowers herself down on him until his cock slides into her pussy. They both moan in please as she does, she starts riding him hard and fast. You grab ahold of her hips and help pull her down so she takes all of him into her. He slaps your ass, but not too hard and then squeezes it and alternates between slapping and squeezing your ass, while Anushka rides him. After a few minutes he lifts Anushka off him and turns to you. "Lay down and spread you legs" He says as he helps you lay down.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'group', 'lesbian'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Get fucked':
@@ -827,7 +827,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'val3some':
 								gs 'boyStat', 'A158'
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/join/val/valnushs6.jpg"></center>'
-								'Anushka watches as he slides his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick into your wet pussy, he starts fucking your pussy not to hard but just hard enough, moments later Anushka crawls back on top of him and straddles his face, he eagerly starts eating her pussy as he keeps fucking you.'
+								'Anushka watches as he slides his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick into your wet pussy, he starts fucking your pussy not too hard but just hard enough, moments later Anushka crawls back on top of him and straddles his face, he eagerly starts eating her pussy as he keeps fucking you.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'group', 'lesbian'
 								gs 'stat'
 								act 'Get fucked some more':
@@ -871,7 +871,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'val3some':
 													gs 'stat'
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/join/val/valnushs10.jpg"></center>'
 													'You shake your head no, as you support Anushka''s weight some as she recovers from her orgasm. "I don''t want to do anal."'
-													'He shrugs to you and then looks to Anushka. "Your ass ready for round two then babe?" She bites you shoulder blade, not to hard but enough you feel it and then looks back to him.'
+													'He shrugs to you and then looks to Anushka. "Your ass ready for round two then babe?" She bites you shoulder blade, not too hard but enough you feel it and then looks back to him.'
 													*nl
 													'You can feel her hips bouncing against your ass as she bounces and wiggles her ass at him. "Yeah, I want you to fuck my ass, fuck my ass like I''m a dirty little slut." She purrs to him.'
 													'He grins and says. "Your wish is my command." Just as he moves back up behind her and slams his dick back up her ass, causing her to cry out a little. He starts really hammering her ass this time and she seems to be loving it. She grips you tightly occasionally nipping and biting at the back of your neck as she moans loudly in pleasure. It doesn''t take to long until she has another huge orgasm. Then he says. "Fuck I''m about to cum."'
@@ -1105,7 +1105,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mar3some':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/join/walkin3.jpg"></center>'
 	if hotcat >= 6:
-		'You walk in confident in joining them in their sexcapades, closing the door. You manage to walk all the way over to the bed before Anunshka finally notices you and gives you a slight wave as she sucks Marcus'' cock. Perhaps hearing you or noticing her wave, Marcus turns his head and notices you. He is obviously surprised as he steps away and uses his hands to cover himself up. As he does he backs into the bed and ends up sitting on the bed, by virtue of backing into it to hard. He looks very confused at you then Anushka. "I... Uh... I mean..." He stammers obviously not sure what to say.'
+		'You walk in confident in joining them in their sexcapades, closing the door. You manage to walk all the way over to the bed before Anunshka finally notices you and gives you a slight wave as she sucks Marcus'' cock. Perhaps hearing you or noticing her wave, Marcus turns his head and notices you. He is obviously surprised as he steps away and uses his hands to cover himself up. As he does he backs into the bed and ends up sitting on the bed, by virtue of backing into it too hard. He looks very confused at you then Anushka. "I... Uh... I mean..." He stammers obviously not sure what to say.'
 		'Anushka laughs at Marcus''s reaction before turning towards you and calmly asks "So what''s up <<$pcs_nickname>>?" as if she was commenting on the weather instead of just having been caught with a black cock in her mouth.'
 		*nl
 		'You smile in return and tell her. "It looked like you guys were having so much fun, I thought I could join in as well."'
@@ -1142,7 +1142,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mar3some':
 						act 'Suck his dick':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/join/mar/marnushs5.jpg"></center>'
-							'You open your mouth and feel his wet dick slide into it, you can taste Anushka juices on his dick. You mostly just stay still and let him fuck your mouth, he doesn''t go to deep to gag you or to hard. You squeeze and spank Anushka''s butt while Marcus fucks your mouth. A couple of minutes or so go by when Marcus says. "Turn around <<$pcs_nickname>> I wan''t to bang you some more."'
+							'You open your mouth and feel his wet dick slide into it, you can taste Anushka juices on his dick. You mostly just stay still and let him fuck your mouth, he doesn''t go too deep to gag you or too hard. You squeeze and spank Anushka''s butt while Marcus fucks your mouth. A couple of minutes or so go by when Marcus says. "Turn around <<$pcs_nickname>> I wan''t to bang you some more."'
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 2, 'group', 'lesbian'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Eat Anushka while getting fucked': gt 'anushkaev1', 'eat_nush_fucked'
@@ -1154,7 +1154,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mar3some':
 	else
 		if pcs_mood > 10: pcs_mood -= 10
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'dislike'
-		'You walk in confident in joining them in their sexcapades, closing the door. You manage to walk all the way over to the bed before Anushka finally notices you and gives you a slight wave as she sucks Marcus cock. Perhaps hearing you or noticing her wave, Marcus turns his head and notices you. He is obviously surprised as he steps away and uses his hands to cover himself up. As he does he backs into the bed and ends up sitting on the bed, by virtue of backing into it to hard. He looks very confused at you then Anushka. "I... Uh... I mean..." He stammers obviously not sure what to say.'
+		'You walk in confident in joining them in their sexcapades, closing the door. You manage to walk all the way over to the bed before Anushka finally notices you and gives you a slight wave as she sucks Marcus cock. Perhaps hearing you or noticing her wave, Marcus turns his head and notices you. He is obviously surprised as he steps away and uses his hands to cover himself up. As he does he backs into the bed and ends up sitting on the bed, by virtue of backing into it too hard. He looks very confused at you then Anushka. "I... Uh... I mean..." He stammers obviously not sure what to say.'
 		'Anushka laughs at Marcus''s reaction before turning towards you and calmly asking "Do you mind <<$pcs_nickname>>? We are kind of busy." as if she was commenting on the weather instead of just having been caught with a black cock in her mouth.'
 		*nl
 		'Your smile falters at their reaction and tell them. "It looked like you guys was having fun, so I thought I could join in as well."'
@@ -1466,7 +1466,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'couch_fuck_her_ass':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/livingroom/couchstrap8.jpg"></center>'
 	'Standing up with the strapon firmly in place you point at her. "Turn around and get on your hands and knees you little slut, I''m gong to fuck your ass now!" She gives you a really turned on look and gets on her knees and turns around, so her ass is facing you. She grabs some lube and applies it to her asshole, while you apply a good amount to the dildo getting it nice and slick. You get up on the couch, lowering your self down and guiding the dildo. You line the tip of the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo against her asshole. Pushing forward you feel some resistance and then you feel the head pop into her ass and she gasps. You grab ahold of her hips with your hands so she can''t pull away and you start slowly fucking her ass, working it deeper with each stroke.'
 	*nl
-	'You feel her trying to pull away a little, but with your hands on her hips, she really can''t. You tighten your grip on her hips and yank her back, forcing the strapon balls deep into her ass. "Don''t pull away from me bitch, you''re ass belongs to me now." You tell her as you start picking up a little speed as you fuck her.'
+	'You feel her trying to pull away a little, but with your hands on her hips, she really can''t. You tighten your grip on her hips and yank her back, forcing the strapon balls deep into her ass. "Don''t pull away from me bitch, your ass belongs to me now." You tell her as you start picking up a little speed as you fuck her.'
 	'"Tell me how much you love getting your ass fucked!" You tell her.'
 	'You moans loudly. "Oh yes I love getting my ass fucked, please fuck my ass!" She begs you.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 3, 'lesbian', 'dom'

+ 3 - 3
locations/artemEv.qsrc

@@ -350,7 +350,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'striptease':
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/strip4.jpg"></center>'
-			'Next you start to slowly pull your panties down, almost to the point your clit is visible then your pull them up a little teasing him, while your panties just barely obscure your pussy. Finally you pull your panties down to your mid thighs, showing off your pussy in all its glory.'
+			'Next you start to slowly pull your panties down, almost to the point your clit is visible. Then you pull them up a little teasing him, while your panties just barely obscure your pussy. Finally you pull your panties down to your mid thighs, showing off your pussy in all its glory.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Get naked':
@@ -692,7 +692,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/first9.jpg"></center>'
 							'You crawl over to him, noticing a bit of your blood on his penis. A quick glance between your legs reveals a small trickle has run out of your pussy too. Using some tissues from the nightstand you wipe the blood away before straddling Artem.'
-							'You take hold of his penis and guide it as you lower yourself even more until it slides back inside of your pussy. You start eagerly riding him, controlling the action, as you do he starts to grunt more and more, you can tell he is going to cum before to much longer.'
+							'You take hold of his penis and guide it as you lower yourself even more until it slides back inside of your pussy. You start eagerly riding him, controlling the action, as you do he starts to grunt more and more, you can tell he is going to cum before too much longer.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'cum surprise': gt 'artemEv', 'cum_surprise'
@@ -758,7 +758,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 							act 'Mount him':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/first9.jpg"></center>'
-								'You crawl over to him, straddling him as you lower yourself down. You take hold of his penis and guide it as you lower yourself even more until it slides back inside of your pussy. You start eagerly riding him, controlling the action, as you do he starts to grunt more and more, you can tell he is going to cum before to much longer.'
+								'You crawl over to him, straddling him as you lower yourself down. You take hold of his penis and guide it as you lower yourself even more until it slides back inside of your pussy. You start eagerly riding him, controlling the action, as you do he starts to grunt more and more, you can tell he is going to cum before too much longer.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 								gs 'stat'
 								act 'cum surprise': gt 'artemEv', 'cum_surprise'

+ 1 - 1
locations/artemhome.qsrc

@@ -606,7 +606,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Living room</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/living.jpg"></center>'
-	'The living room is clean and neat. A couch rests against one wall, with a throw rug between it and the tv stand. On the throw rug is a nice coffee table. On the tv stand sits a nice but not to big flat screen tv, while in the bottom of the stand is a neatly stored playstation. Along one side of the tv is a stand with several dozen movies.'
+	'The living room is clean and neat. A couch rests against one wall, with a throw rug between it and the TV stand. On the throw rug is a nice coffee table. On the TV stand sits a nice but not too big flat screen tv, while in the bottom of the stand is a neatly stored playstation. Along one side of the tv is a stand with several dozen movies.'
 	if hour < 6:
 		gt 'artemhome', 'timecheck'
 	elseif hour > 22:

+ 2 - 2
locations/brothel.qsrc

@@ -1013,8 +1013,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:finish':
 				'Ironically you actually sigh in relief as the Client sticks his warm yet hard pole in your anus and not your pussy.'
 				if analplugIN = 1:
 					'But you entirely forgot about that thing already inside you!'
-					'The pain is intensified as the previously inserted anal plug is still in its place...in your ass!'
-					'The Client seems to disregard that, as he stretches your anus even more with his fallus..'
+					'The pain is intensified as the previously inserted anal plug is still in its place... in your ass!'
+					'The Client seems to disregard that, as he stretches your anus even more with his fallus...'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/fuckanalwithplugfrombehind.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Owwwwuuch! Pleaaase no no take it ouuuut! Maaaster pleaaase!"</font>'
 					'Just as you say that the next pound of Client''s dick pushes out the plug, which falls out down between your bound legs.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/brother_voyeur.qsrc

@@ -1972,7 +1972,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_swallow':
 						'You gasp in mock indignation. "Kolka! How dare you! I have never been anything other than ladylike! How could you call your beloved sister a slut?"'
 						'"Probably because she loves the taste of cum," he snickers at you while you rinse your hair one last time.'
 						'"Have you considered maybe it''s just yours?" you ask, looking over your shoulder.'
-						'"A cumslut is still a cumslut, even if its only for one kind."'
+						'"A cumslut is still a cumslut, even if it''s only for one kind."'
 						'You roll your eyes. He''s being a punk but you can''t find the anger to be annoyed with him. He does have a bit of a point after all.'
 						act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
 					end

+ 2 - 2
locations/club.qsrc

@@ -412,7 +412,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 		end
 	else
 		menu_off = 1
-		'Its getting late and the music stops, looks like it might be time to go home.'
+		'It''s getting late and the music stops, looks like it might be time to go home.'
 		act 'Leave the dance floor': gt 'club', 'inside'
 	end	
 end
@@ -1251,7 +1251,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 		end
 	elseif clubr = 1:
 		'"OK <<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you to go around the club getting people to try and hopefully switch to these spirits. You can''t go wrong here, just smile and give out free drinks."'
-		'"No need to hold back with it, the suppliers are paying and if you''re curious and want to try it, don''t its horrible. I''ll see you back here in an hour."'
+		'"No need to hold back with it, the suppliers are paying and if you''re curious and want to try it, don''t it''s horrible. I''ll see you back here in an hour."'
 		act 'Get to work':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 60

+ 1 - 1
locations/dateF.qsrc

@@ -457,7 +457,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bartalk':
 						'"Damn <<$pcs_nickname>> you really know how to move. I bet all that dancing made you even thirstier."'
 						'You nod and she quickly gets up and gets more drinks.'
 						'You chug the drink down, quenching some of the thirst. "Look at you go. I love a girl that can keep a drink down."'
-						'By now you''re feel quite tipsy, feeling your inhibitions fading away. You panic a little at feeling and feel you must get a breather before you lose control.'
+						'By now you''re feeling quite tipsy and feeling your inhibitions fading away. You panic a little at the feeling and feel you must get a breather before you lose control.'
 						act 'Excuse yourself':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 10

+ 1 - 1
locations/dateM.qsrc

@@ -796,7 +796,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bartalk':
 						'"Damn <<$pcs_nickname>> you really know how to move. I bet all that dancing made you even thirstier."'
 						'You nod and he quickly gets up and gets more drinks.'
 						'You chug the drink down, quenching some of the thirst. "Look at you go. I love a girl that can keep a drink down."'
-						'By now you''re feel quite tipsy, feeling your inhibitions fading away. You panic a little at feeling and feel you must get a breather before you lose control.'
+						'By now you''re feeling quite tipsy and feeling your inhibitions fading away. You panic a little at the feeling and feel you must get a breather before you lose control.'
 						act 'Excuse yourself':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 10

+ 1 - 1
locations/dimalina.qsrc

@@ -373,7 +373,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watch2':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/linased/D11.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Like this, Dimka?"'
-	'He groans, "Oh yeah... just like that, keep going." You didn''t notice until now that they''ve moved to the bed, where Lina has been giving him a handjob. As he calls her his girlfriend, you think she seems excited as she spits onto his cock and pumps him a bit faster, but judging by the look of discomfort, its obvious she did that to distract him so he doesn''t call her that again.' 
+	'He groans, "Oh yeah... just like that, keep going." You didn''t notice until now that they''ve moved to the bed, where Lina has been giving him a handjob. As he calls her his girlfriend, you think she seems excited as she spits onto his cock and pumps him a bit faster, but judging by the look of discomfort, it''s obvious she did that to distract him so he doesn''t call her that again.' 
 	'"Fuck... that''s much better!" Dimka then caresses the back of Lina''s head as his face twists with pleasure.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5, 'bound'
 	gs 'stat'

+ 1 - 1
locations/din_pav.qsrc

@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ $koncepodos1 = {
     '"There''s an advert?" Asks the old man seeming upset. "That''s odd, no one said anything to me about it being up for rent."'
     '"So can I have a look at it?" You say, wondering why you''re having to work so hard in this conversation.'
     '"You want to rent it"?'
-    '"I want to look at it first. If its too much hassle to do your job I can leave."'
+    '"I want to look at it first. If it''s too much hassle to do your job I can leave."'
     '"OK then you can go look at the apartment. It''s upstairs, room 17. I will not go with you, my legs ache."'
     'What an unpleasant man. He has you sign a registrar and then says, "Follow me <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
     'You follow him through the dimly lit lobby and down a corridor. You can hear barely discernible sounds from various apartments, merging into ghostly mutterings that ste the hair on the back of your neck on end. You hear what sounds like a whisper, "Run."'

+ 6 - 6
locations/event.qsrc

@@ -927,7 +927,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesbi':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/natalya/lesbi.jpg"></center>'
-	'The woman, stares at you, you catch her eye. She looks you up and down, smiles and licks her lips.'
+	'The woman stares at you, you catch her eye. She looks you up and down, smiles and licks her lips.'
 
 	act 'Turn away':gt 'moncheri', 'start'
 	act 'Get acquainted':gt 'event', 'lesbi1'
@@ -938,8 +938,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesbi1':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/natalya/lesbi.jpg"></center>'
-	'You go to the woman. She looks at you with a twinkle in her eye "I am Natalya Petrovna, here''s my card, maybe you would let me take you somewhere interesting". Then the woman is very confident and it makes it hard for you think clearly.'
-
+	'You go to the woman. She looks at you with a twinkle in her eye "I am Natalya Petrovna, here''s my card, maybe you would let me take you somewhere interesting?"'
+    'The woman is very confident and it makes it hard for you to think clearly.'
 	act 'Paris?':gt 'event', 'lesbi2'
 end
 
@@ -948,11 +948,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesbi2':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/natalya/lesbi.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Paris?! Your cute, but for that you''d need to be absolutely stunning." She laughs and you feel a little embarrassed.'
+	'"Paris?! You''re cute, but for that you''d need to be absolutely stunning." She laughs and you feel a little embarrassed.'
 	'"Heh, thanks, but I was looking for a rich man, good effort".'
 	'"Guys? You can twist them around your little finger, if you want, you little cutie, but have you ever managed to force another girl to obey and do anything you desire?"'
-	if lesbian > 0:'Nuu..no..I haven''t - You mumble. I''ve been with girls, but not like that...'
-	if lesbian = 0:'Nuu..no..I haven''t - You mumble. I''ve never been with a girl to try such a thing...'
+	if lesbian > 0:'No... no, I haven''t - You mumble. I''ve been with girls, but not like that...'
+	if lesbian = 0:'No... no, I haven''t - You mumble. I''ve never been with a girl to try such a thing...'
 
 	act 'Ask to learn':gt 'event', 'lesbi3'
 end

+ 1 - 1
locations/fight.qsrc

@@ -545,7 +545,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Attack':
 		end
 	!! Does physical damage, but not a lot
 	elseif fightAtk['TargetHealthLoss'] > 0:
-		'Its a glancing blow, but still hurts.'
+		'It''s a glancing blow, but still hurts.'
 	!! No physical damage was done.
 	else
 		'Defenses were not pierced.'

+ 4 - 4
locations/flash.qsrc

@@ -233,14 +233,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'full':
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/full/hairy' + rand(1,dress_ind_full_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
 			end
-			'Making sure there are no children around and its not too busy you lift your skirt and top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
+			'Making sure there are no children around and it''s not too busy you lift your skirt and top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
 		else
 			if pcs_pubes <= 20:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/full/' + rand(1,dress_out_full) + '.jpg"></center>'
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/full/hairy' + rand(1,dress_out_full_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
 			end
-			'Making sure there are no children around and its not too busy you lift your skirt and top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
+			'Making sure there are no children around and it''s not too busy you lift your skirt and top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
 		end
 	else
 		if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
@@ -249,14 +249,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'full':
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/full/hairy' + rand(1,pants_ind_full_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
 			end
-			'Making sure there are no children around and its not too busy you lower your pants and lift your top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
+			'Making sure there are no children around and it''s not too busy you lower your pants and lift your top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
 		else
 			if pcs_pubes <= 20:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/full/' + rand(1,pants_out_full) + '.jpg"></center>'
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/full/hairy' + rand(1,pants_out_full_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
 			end
-			'Making sure there are no children around and its not too busy you lower your pants and lift your top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
+			'Making sure there are no children around and it''s not too busy you lower your pants and lift your top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
 		end
 	end
 end

+ 3 - 3
locations/foto_events.qsrc

@@ -2121,11 +2121,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'runway2':
 							elseif model['runway_outfit'] = 4:
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/skill/runway/4.mp4"></video></center>'
 								if tits >= 3:
-									'As you walk forward, you can''t help but wonder if the girl this outfit was designed for a girl with small breasts. It''s tight around your chest and you can feel it riding up with every step. In the short the time it takes you to get to the end of the runway, the top has risen so much that your nipples are just barely still hidden by its hem. Within a few steps on the way back you need to pull it back in place. But at least once the walk is finished you''ll finally be able to let your sweater puppies free.'
+									'As you walk forward, you can''t help but wonder whether the girl whom this outfit was designed for is a girl with small breasts. It''s tight around your chest and you can feel it riding up with every step. In the short time it takes you to get to the end of the runway, the top has risen so much that your nipples are just barely hidden. Within a few steps on the way back you need to pull it back in place. But at least once the walk is finished you''ll finally be able to let your sweater puppies free.'
 								elseif tits >= 2:
-									'As you walk forward, you can''t help but wonder if the girl this outfit was designed for a girl with smaller breasts than you. Or maybe even a girl who is completely flat. Even around your humble bosom, you can feel the material straining against your chest and it rides up with every step you take forward. In the short the time it takes you to get to the end of the runway, the top has risen so much that your nipples are just barely still hidden by its hem. Within a few steps on the way back you need to pull it back in place. But at least once the walk is finished you''ll finally be able to take this thing off and breathe normally again.'
+									'As you walk forward, you can''t help but wonder whether the girl whom this outfit was designed for is a girl with smaller breasts than you. Or maybe even a girl who is completely flat. Even around your humble bosom, you can feel the material straining against your chest and it rides up with every step you take forward. In the short time it takes you to get to the end of the runway, the top has risen so much that your nipples are just barely hidden. Within a few steps on the way back you need to pull it back in place. But at least once the walk is finished you''ll finally be able to take this thing off and breathe normally again.'
 								else
-									'As you walk forward, you can''t help but wonder what idiot designed this outfit. Even with your virtually flat chest, your body strains against the material. You can feel it riding up with every step you take forward. In the short the time it takes you to get to the end of the runway, the top has risen so much that your nipples are just barely still hidden by its hem. Within a few steps on the way back you need to pull it back in place. But at least once the walk is finished you''ll finally be able to take this thing off and breathe normally again.'
+									'As you walk forward, you can''t help but wonder what idiot designed this outfit. Even with your virtually flat chest, your body strains against the material. You can feel it riding up with every step you take forward. In the short time it takes you to get to the end of the runway, the top has risen so much that your nipples are just barely hidden. Within a few steps on the way back you need to pull it back in place. But at least once the walk is finished you''ll finally be able to take this thing off and breathe normally again.'
 								end
 							elseif model['runway_outfit'] = 5:
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/skill/runway/5.mp4"></video></center>'

+ 2 - 2
locations/foto_events2.qsrc

@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kickboxing_documentary':
                     '"Your feeling about that victory? Your favorite color? A man in your life?"'
                     'The interview goes and goes like this during a long time, until your allocated time end, and then reluctantly the journalist leaves you to talk to another kickboxer.'            
                 elseif city_kickboxing >=60 and razradKik >= 2:
-                    'Between shots, a journalist comes and asks you questions. Most of them, are fairly generic. Personal data, your opinions about the league, confirmation on their information. In general, it doesn''t seems to deep but it is evident that the journalist has his hands more than full, catching up with all the women in the gymnasium.'
+                    'Between shots, a journalist comes and asks you questions. Most of them, are fairly generic. Personal data, your opinions about the league, confirmation on their information. In general, it doesn''t seem too deep but it is evident that the journalist has his hands more than full, catching up with all the women in the gymnasium.'
                 else
                     'You wait between shots, but the journalist seems to find somebody else more interesting and forgets to talk with you.'
 				end
@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'track_&_field_documentary':
                     '"Your feeling about that victory? Your favorite color? A man in your life?"'
                     'The interview goes on and on like this for a long time, until you''re allocated time ends, and then reluctantly the journalist leaves you to talk to another runner.'            
                 elseif city_running >=30 and razradKik >= 1:
-                    'Between shots, a journalist comes and asks you questions. Most of them, are fairly generic. Personal data, your opinions about the Championship, confirmation on their information. In general, it doesn''t seem to deep but it is evident that the journalist has his hands more than full, catching up with all the women in the field.'
+                    'Between shots, a journalist comes and asks you questions. Most of them, are fairly generic. Personal data, your opinions about the Championship, confirmation on their information. In general, it doesn''t seem too deep but it is evident that the journalist has his hands more than full, catching up with all the women in the field.'
                 else
                     'You wait between shots, but the journalist seems to find somebody else more interesting and forgets to talk with you.'
 				end

+ 1 - 1
locations/foto_model_documentary.qsrc

@@ -868,7 +868,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'documentary_7':
 		foto_documentary['question_7'] = 6
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/special/interview/12.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'"I think for me, my ideal date is a romantic evening that ends with great sex. The sex is a big part of it, sure, but without the build up its nothing. A fancy restaurant in expensive clothing, wine and chocolates, starring at each other and taking in how beautiful the other person looks. All of these things just building, building, building our desire. And at the end of the night, when we''re at our limit, that''s when we let our inhibitions go. Hands get handsy, tongues get invasive, and every touch becomes passionate and expressive. And after we''re done we can bask in the afterglow of the evening and in each other''s presence," you smile.'
+		'"I think for me, my ideal date is a romantic evening that ends with great sex. The sex is a big part of it, sure, but without the build up it''s nothing. A fancy restaurant in expensive clothing, wine and chocolates, starring at each other and taking in how beautiful the other person looks. All of these things just building, building, building our desire. And at the end of the night, when we''re at our limit, that''s when we let our inhibitions go. Hands get handsy, tongues get invasive, and every touch becomes passionate and expressive. And after we''re done we can bask in the afterglow of the evening and in each other''s presence," you smile.'
 		'"<i>Just</i> those things?" the interviewer smiles back.'
 		'"And... in the afterglow of our orgasms too," you admit.'
 		*nl

+ 1 - 1
locations/gadhouse.qsrc

@@ -512,7 +512,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandma.jpg"></center>'
 	'Your grandma is extremely old, and almost never leaves the house. Most of the time she just sits on her bed watching TV, or is slowly cleaning.'
 	if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
-		'Grandma looks a little shocked but its nothing she hasn''t seen before.'
+		'Grandma looks a little shocked but it''s nothing she hasn''t seen before.'
 		'"Go put some clothes on dear, you''ll give your poor grandpa a heart attack if he sees you."'
 
 		act 'Maybe you should get dressed before talking to her':gt 'gadhouse', 'start'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gadriver.qsrc

@@ -784,7 +784,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Mira':
 				'"My granma-ma and Pop-pop live here, my folks like to come here over the summer. They think the country air will be good for me."'
 			elseif npc_QW['A60'] = 7 and sunWeather = 1:
 				'You decide to strike up some conversation with Mira, "So what is there to do here in the village?"'
-				'"Its a lot quicker than town, we do have a shop, this lovely beach and there are some beautiful walks. Other than that there''s only the gopnik guys but they are just after one thing and I don''t want that, plus dad would kill me."'
+				'"It''s a lot quieter than a town, but we do have a shop, this lovely beach and there are some beautiful walks. Other than that there''s only the gopnik guys but they are just after one thing and I don''t want that, plus dad would kill me."'
 			elseif npc_QW['A60'] < 7 and sunWeather = 1:
 				if npc_rel['A60'] < 15:npc_rel['A60'] += 1
 				'You and Mira are chatting about trivial things.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gdktoilet_womens.qsrc

@@ -395,7 +395,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal':
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/womens/sex/analpain.jpg"></center>'
-				'The pain gets to be to much and you can''t take it anymore, on the verge of tears you stop and pull your ass off his dick. You quickly get dressed and leave, you wonder if it was supposed to hurt that much. You can hear the guy yelling at you for having stopped before he finished.'
+				'The pain becomes too much and you can''t take it anymore, on the verge of tears you stop and pull your ass off his dick. You quickly get dressed and leave, you wonder if it was supposed to hurt that much. You can hear the guy yelling at you for having stopped before he finished.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'gdktoilet_womens', 'womens'
 			end
 		else

+ 1 - 1
locations/gopnik_initiation.qsrc

@@ -1041,7 +1041,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik slut':
 	act 'Join the party':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/oldschool/main.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you get closer, you can already hear music playing and people talking loudly. Once inside you see all the gopniks from school, along with a few you don''t know. Some are from the other years class and others you think have already graduated or dropped out. Many of them cast hungery eyes on you, as the new girl. You are far less sure about this, but also you know it was way to late to change your mind. You are pretty sure you choices are go along with it willingly or unwillingly. If you go along with it, maybe it won''t be to bad.'
+		'As you get closer, you can already hear music playing and people talking loudly. Once inside you see all the gopniks from school, along with a few you don''t know. Some are from the other years class and others you think have already graduated or dropped out. Many of them cast hungery eyes on you, as the new girl. You are far less sure about this, but also you know it was way too late to change your mind. You are pretty sure you choices are go along with it willingly or unwillingly. If you go along with it, maybe it won''t be to bad.'
 		*nl
 		'Lena walks over to her brother Vitek, while Lera motions for you to stop. You do and look around the room. It seems the gopniks have been busy, several of the windows have been busted out and covered with boards, graffiti covers the walls, though much of it is pretty good. A large potbellied stove is near one of the boarded up windows with a pipe going out between two boards. Several tables in varies styles and condition litter the room, along with a motley crew of chairs and even a couple of old couches. Candles seem to be all over as the main source of light, while an old boombox plays music. A couple of doors lead off the main room, you suspect to the teachers lounge and principals office, or what they use to be.'
 		gs 'stat'

+ 2 - 2
locations/gopsex.qsrc

@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masturb_gg':
 		pcs_horny = 0
 		pcs_mood = pcs_mood - 10
 		minut +=3
-		'<font color = red><b>What you are seeing makes you a little excited, but since its your time of month, you don''t feel like masturbating and getting your fingers bloody...</b></font>'
+		'<font color = red><b>What you are seeing makes you a little excited, but since it''s your time of month, you don''t feel like masturbating and getting your fingers bloody...</b></font>'
 	elseif mesec <= 0:
 		!no monthly, orgasm is possible
 		if pcs_horny >=50:
@@ -1601,7 +1601,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hide':
 		if txt_sex_doggy = 4:$txt_sex_doggy = '"Go down on the floor and get on all fours, my sweet!"
 		You obey dumbly, and you get on all fours. You like to be fucked in this way.
 		"<<$pcs_nickname>> bend backwards and lower your head!"
-		"Yes, <<$boydesc>>." You say excitedly and arch your back more and lower your head. Your bum move up more and your pussy become closer and easier to reach that appeals to him. <<$boydesc>> gets on the floor and parts your legs to sides and he kneels between them. Thereafter, he widely stretches your butt cheeks , slowly runs his shaft along your wet pussy and then shoves it deeply in.
+		"Yes, <<$boydesc>>." You say excitedly and arch your back more and lower your head. Your bum move up more and your pussy become closer and easier to reach that appeals to him. <<$boydesc>> gets on the floor and parts your legs to sides and he kneels between them. Thereafter, he widely stretches your butt cheeks, slowly runs his shaft along your wet pussy and then shoves it deeply in.
 		"Mmmm ... aaah ... mmm," you moaned. 
 		<<$boydesc>> puts both hands on your bum and starts plowing your pussy with his prick with delight.'
 		if txt_sex_doggy = 5:$txt_sex_doggy = 'Holding your waist, <<$boydesc>> is banging you, slowly increasing his pace. You are diligently fucking back moaning with pleasure and in quest to please him. Your boobs are swaying and your pink swollen nipples are sticking out seductively. You feel as his strong member alternately fills and pleasantly stretches your pussy at one moment and then it gets out fully. You feel like a whore and you like it.'

+ 46 - 46
locations/grigory.qsrc

@@ -28,13 +28,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'meet':
 		minut += 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big221.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Grigory? Grigory Chekov?" You ask, a smile blossoming on your face, "Its been a long time. I thought you had moved to the city?"'
+		'"Grigory? Grigory Chekov?" You ask, a smile blossoming on your face, "It''s been a long time. I thought you had moved to the city?"'
 		'Grigory gives you an authentic smile, "Yes and no. There''s a big corporate farm to the southeast of Saint Petersburg. I worked there for a couple of years, but," Grimacing, "It just wasn''t a good fit for me so I came home," He gestures at the area around him.'
 		'His smile is a little self conscious, "I love this little town, and I missed it.'
-		'"Its been too long Kiska," When he finally nears where you''re standing, he shows no sign of slowing down, instead reaching out and picking you up by your hips and holding you out at arm''s length.'
+		'"It''s been too long Kiska," When he finally nears where you''re standing, he shows no sign of slowing down, instead reaching out and picking you up by your hips and holding you out at arm''s length.'
 		'The sheer strength involved in such a feat, to pick you up so effortlessly, is impressive. You can see him looking you over, his eyes lingering momentarily on your breasts before he blushes slightly and pulls you into a small hug before sitting you back down, "You''ve grown into quite the woman," He says, glancing at the cows in the field.'
 		'Reaching for his back pocket, he pulls a flask. Tipping the flask back, he takes a long pull from it before screwing the cap back in place and returning it to his back pocket.'
-		'"I had a little money saved up, barely enough to make a downpayment on the farm up the road," Ha half smiles, "I''ll be paying on it the rest of my life, but its mine."'
+		'"I had a little money saved up, barely enough to make a downpayment on the farm up the road," Ha half smiles, "I''ll be paying on it the rest of my life, but it''s mine."'
 		act '"That''s great!"':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 2
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'barn':
 		'"Hi!" You call out.'
 		'"Hey there Kiska!" He replies with a smile and a little wave, "Any chance you''d be willing to help look for their shovel?"'
 		'You don''t have quite enough time to answer before he speaks again, "Nevermind, there it is." He says.'
-		'Crossing the barn, he retrieves the shovel and starts to walk your way, "Its good to see you again." He gives you a little smile as he exits the barn.'
+		'Crossing the barn, he retrieves the shovel and starts to walk your way, "It''s good to see you again." He gives you a little smile as he exits the barn.'
 
 		act 'Talk for a bit': gt 'grigory', 'barn_stand'
 	end
@@ -168,9 +168,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'barn_closer':
 				minut += 2
 				'Without a further word, he takes hold of your hips, flipping you over onto your hands and knees. You feel his calused hand reach between your legs to fondle your pussy, testing its wetness.'
 				'He almost immediately removes his hand and takes hold of both of your hips. You can feel the tip of his cock brush the inside of your thigh, finding your slit he thrusts forward, sinking his entire length into you in one rough shove. You cry out in pain at the sudden loss of your virginity. Grigory freezes in place, concern in his features. When he looks down at where your bodies meet, his expression turns to surprise, "You?" He stammers, starting to withdraw.'
-				'Reaching out, you put your arms around him, holding him to you so that he can''t fully pull out of you, "Its ok," You say softly, forcing a smile through the discomfort, "I wanted you to be my first."'
+				'Reaching out, you put your arms around him, holding him to you so that he can''t fully pull out of you, "It''s ok," You say softly, forcing a smile through the discomfort, "I wanted you to be my first."'
 				'For several seconds, he just looks down at you a blank expression on his face like he''s still trying to make sense of what you just said. His cock throbs once inside of you as a smile starts to touch his lips.'
-				'Suddenly, he''s kissing you again, his lips pressed firmly against your own as his hips begin to buck against you. At first its uncomfortable, but eventually it begins to feel good.'
+				'Suddenly, he''s kissing you again, his lips pressed firmly against your own as his hips begin to buck against you. At first it''s uncomfortable, but eventually it begins to feel good.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Continue':
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'barn_closer':
 					cla
 					npc_qw['A221'] = 3
 					'For several minutes he fucks you with rapid thrusts that fill the air with the sounds of your bodies meeting.'
-					'Its not long before you can feel his pace become irregular, then with one sudden lunge and a grunt, he presses deep before unloading his seed deep inside of you.'
+					'It''s not long before you can feel his pace become irregular, then with one sudden lunge and a grunt, he presses deep before unloading his seed deep inside of you.'
 					'Withdrawing, you can feel some of his cum, mingled with your virgin blood, drip from your freshly used pussy. He gives your ass a playful slap, then reaches for his clothes.'
 					'With his clothes in hand, he stops to look at you, "I want nothing more than to stay here with you, but I need to get back to work," Grigory says, you can still hear that he''s still short of breath, "See you later Kishka."'
 					'Without another word, he exits the barn. After he is gone, you can''t help but think about how happy he looked before leaving.'
@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'barn_closer':
 			'Once naked, he pushes you onto a pile of hay, the motion only somewhat playful. Within seconds, his own clothing joins yours on the ground at his feet.'
 			'Moving towards you, he smiles, both affection and need clear in his expression. Without a word, he takes hold of your hips, flipping you over onto your hands and knees. You feel his calused hand reach between your legs to fondle your pussy, testing its wetness.'
 			'He almost immediately removes his hand and takes hold of both of your hips. You can feel the tip of his cock brush the inside of your thigh, finding your slit he thrusts forward, sinking his entire length into you in one rough shove. Without so much as a pause, he begins to fuck you with rapid thrusts that fill the air with the sounds of your bodies meeting.'
-			'Its not long before you can feel his pace become irregular, then with one sudden lunge and a grunt, he presses deep before unloading his seed deep inside of you.'
+			'It''s not long before you can feel his pace become irregular, then with one sudden lunge and a grunt, he presses deep before unloading his seed deep inside of you.'
 			'Withdrawing, you can feel some of his cum drip from your freshly used pussy. He gives your ass a playful slap, then reaches for his clothes.'
 			'"I need to get back to work," Grigory says, you can still hear that he''s still short of breath, "See you later little lady."'
 			'Without another word, he exits the barn.'
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'barn_closer':
 			'You can''t quite suppress a smile, and when he sees your smile he returns it with one of his own.'
 			'Without a further word, he takes hold of your hips, flipping you over onto your hands and knees. You feel his callused hand reach between your legs to fondle your pussy, testing its wetness.'
 			'He almost immediately removes his hand and takes hold of both of your hips. You can feel the tip of his cock brush the inside of your thigh, finding your slit he thrusts forward, sinking his entire length into you in one rough shove. Without so much as a pause, he begins to fuck you with rapid thrusts that fill the air with the sounds of your bodies meeting.'
-			'Its not long before you can feel his pace become irregular, then with one sudden lunge and a grunt, he presses deep before unloading his seed deep inside of you.'
+			'It''s not long before you can feel his pace become irregular, then with one sudden lunge and a grunt, he presses deep before unloading his seed deep inside of you.'
 			'Withdrawing, you can feel some of his cum drip from your freshly used pussy. He gives your ass a playful slap, then reaches for his clothes.'
 			'"I need to get back to work," Grigory says, you can still hear that he''s still short of breath, "See you later little lady."'
 			'Without another word, he exits the barn.'
@@ -318,7 +318,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'garden':
 		minut += 30
 		'You''ve been working in the garden for several minutes when you notice a movement through the bushes along the fence.'
 		'Glancing that way, you can see someone on the other side bushes watching you.'
-		'It takes you a few seconds, but you finally realize that its Grigory watching you.'
+		'It takes you a few seconds, but you finally realize that it''s Grigory watching you.'
 
 		act 'Ignore him':
 			'Ignoring the fact that he''s spying on you, you return to weeding the garden.'
@@ -347,7 +347,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'garden':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'Smiling to yourself, you stretch a little, making sure to push your chest out in the direction of your voyeur.'
 				'When you return to working, you kneel with your back to him, pushing your bottom in his general direction, wiggling it playfully as you do so.'
-				'A short while later you glance back at him, its clear that he is still watching, but the bushes are too thick for you to make out much more than that.'
+				'A short while later you glance back at him, it''s clear that he is still watching, but the bushes are too thick for you to make out much more than that.'
 				'Eventually you''re done working in the garden. When you stand up, you look at the bushes one last time, blowing a little kiss, then leaving the garden.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'grigory','dummy'
 			end
@@ -379,7 +379,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'garden_brush':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'garden_tease':
-	'"You could really scare a girl peeping at her like that," You say with a little smirk, "Its a good thing I know you''re just a little strange."'
+	'"You could really scare a girl peeping at her like that," You say with a little smirk, "It''s a good thing I know you''re just a little strange."'
 	'Grigory opens his mouth like he''s going to say something, but then closes it again. With a sigh, you see the big man defalte a little, "Sorry Kiska," He finally mumbles.'
 	'Again, he looks like he''s going to say something, but finally gives you a self conscious wave and leaves.'
 	'Shrugging to yourself, you return to your work.'
@@ -392,7 +392,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'flower1':
 	'Along the windowsill are dozens of prairie crocus, the little purple flowers tucked in near the frame so they won''t fall.'
 	'Standing up, you pad towards the wondow, opening it. Just the act of opening the window is enough for several of the flowers to fall to the ground outside.'
 	'Reaching out, you pick up one of the flowers, looking at it in wonder.'
-	'I used to pick these things all the time when I was little.'
+	'You used to pick these things all the time when you were little.'
 	'Wondering who could have put them there, you look out across the yard but see no sign of who might have left them there.'
 
 	act 'Well that''s kind of creepy':
@@ -412,7 +412,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'flower1':
 			'Your heart flutters momentarily, a smile plastered across your face as you hold the flower close to your heart before smelling it.'
 		elseif rand(0,1) = 0:
 			'Unable to suppress a smile, you raise the flower to your nose to smell it.'
-			'I wonder who could have left them there? Mitka maybe, but he''s never expressed this kind of romantic side before. You think.'
+			'<i>I wonder who could have left them there? Mitka maybe, but he''s never expressed this kind of romantic side before</i>, you think to yourself.'
 			'Looking out the window for a few seconds, you turn and place the flower on the stand beside your bed before starting your day.'
 		else
 			'Smiling, you wonder happily who might have left the flowers there for you. You''ve got a secret crush!'
@@ -571,9 +571,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'flower6':
 			'You wonder where he is taking you, but you don''t trust yourself to talk just yet. It doesn''t take long before you realize he''s headed for his house.'
 			'Once he puts the truck in park just outside of his house, he walks around and opens the door for you. Taking your hand, he leads you inside.'
 			'When you reach the living room, he turns to you, raw emotion in his features. Softly he says, "Wait here, I have something to show you."'
-			'A second later, he vanishes into his bedroom. Its not long before he returns with a childrens book in his hand.'
-			'He sits the book on the small table in the center of the living room. Its an old copy of The Golden Key written by Aleskei Tolstoi. '
-			'The silence stretches for a few seconds before he starts to talk, "You were five, maybe six years old at the time," He begins, his voice deep as he talks softly, "And I was still trying to get over the girl I had lost," He half smiles, but it quickly falters as he continues, "You walked up to me and told me that things would be ok. You handed me this book and told me that your mother would read this book to you, and that its how you knew she loved you," He pauses, thought you aren''t sure if he''s waiting for some sign of recognition from me, or just giving a moment for the information to sink in.'
+			'A second later, he vanishes into his bedroom. It''s not long before he returns with a childrens book in his hand.'
+			'He sits the book on the small table in the center of the living room. It''s an old copy of The Golden Key written by Aleskei Tolstoi. '
+			'The silence stretches for a few seconds before he starts to talk, "You were five, maybe six years old at the time," He begins, his voice deep as he talks softly, "And I was still trying to get over the girl I had lost," He half smiles, but it quickly falters as he continues, "You walked up to me and told me that things would be ok. You handed me this book and told me that your mother would read this book to you, and that it''s how you knew she loved you," He pauses, thought you aren''t sure if he''s waiting for some sign of recognition from me, or just giving a moment for the information to sink in.'
 			'"You gave me the book and told me that some day I could read it to a woman I love so that she will know that I love her too," You can see unshed tears in his eyes as he almost reverently opens the front cover. There pressed flat just inside the cover is a single prairie crocus, "Then you ran to the fence and picked this flower before coming back to me and handing it to me. I''ll never forget the smile on your face as you threw your arms around my neck, and every time I saw one of those little purple flowers, it made me think of you."'
 			'You can see in his expression his fear that you''re going to reject him.'
 			'Not knowing what to say, you lean towards him, one hand coming to rest on the cheek of his weathered face. You can feel one of his arms slip around your middle, almost timidly. With your face mere inches from his, you close the last little distance to let our lips touch his.'
@@ -627,9 +627,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'flower8':
 			'You wonder where he is taking you, but you don''t trust yourself to talk just yet. It doesn''t take long before you realize he''s headed for his house.'
 			'Once he puts the truck in park just outside of his house, he walks around and opens the door for you. Taking your hand, he leads you inside.'
 			'When you reach the living room, he turns to you, raw emotion in his features. Softly he says, "Wait here, I have something to show you."'
-			'A second later, he vanishes into his bedroom. Its not long before he returns with a childrens book in his hand.'
-			'He sits the book on the small table in the center of the living room. Its an old copy of The Golden Key written by Aleskei Tolstoi. '
-			'The silence stretches for a few seconds before he starts to talk, "You were five, maybe six years old at the time," He begins, his voice deep as he talks softly, "And I was still trying to get over the girl I had lost," He half smiles, but it quickly falters as he continues, "You walked up to me and told me that things would be ok. You handed me this book and told me that your mother would read this book to you, and that its how you knew she loved you," He pauses, thought you aren''t sure if he''s waiting for some sign of recognition from me, or just giving a moment for the information to sink in.'
+			'A second later, he vanishes into his bedroom. It''s not long before he returns with a childrens book in his hand.'
+			'He sits the book on the small table in the center of the living room. It''s an old copy of The Golden Key written by Aleskei Tolstoi. '
+			'The silence stretches for a few seconds before he starts to talk, "You were five, maybe six years old at the time," He begins, his voice deep as he talks softly, "And I was still trying to get over the girl I had lost," He half smiles, but it quickly falters as he continues, "You walked up to me and told me that things would be ok. You handed me this book and told me that your mother would read this book to you, and that it''s how you knew she loved you," He pauses, thought you aren''t sure if he''s waiting for some sign of recognition from me, or just giving a moment for the information to sink in.'
 			'"You gave me the book and told me that some day I could read it to a woman I love so that she will know that I love her too," You can see unshed tears in his eyes as he almost reverently opens the front cover. There pressed flat just inside the cover is a single prairie crocus, "Then you ran to the fence and picked this flower before coming back to me and handing it to me. I''ll never forget the smile on your face as you threw your arms around my neck, and every time I saw one of those little purple flowers, it made me think of you."'
 			'You can see in his expression his fear that you''re going to reject him.'
 			'Not knowing what to say, you lean towards him, one hand coming to rest on the cheek of his weathered face. You can feel one of his arms slip around your middle, almost timidly. With your face mere inches from his, you close the last little distance to let our lips touch his.'
@@ -647,9 +647,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'flower8':
 			'You wonder where he is taking you, but you don''t trust yourself to talk just yet. It doesn''t take long before you realize he''s headed for his house.'
 			'Once he puts the truck in park just outside of his house, he walks around and opens the door for you. Taking your hand, he leads you inside.'
 			'When you reach the living room, he turns to you, raw emotion in his features. Softly he says, "Wait here, I have something to show you."'
-			'A second later, he vanishes into his bedroom. Its not long before he returns with a childrens book in his hand.'
-			'He sits the book on the small table in the center of the living room. Its an old copy of The Golden Key written by Aleskei Tolstoi.'
-			'The silence stretches for a few seconds before he starts to talk, "You were five, maybe six years old at the time," He begins, his voice deep as he talks softly, "And I was still trying to get over the girl I had lost," He half smiles, but it quickly falters as he continues, "You walked up to me and told me that things would be ok. You handed me this book and told me that your mother would read this book to you, and that its how you knew she loved you," He pauses, thought you aren''t sure if he''s waiting for some sign of recognition from me, or just giving a moment for the information to sink in.'
+			'A second later, he vanishes into his bedroom. It''s not long before he returns with a childrens book in his hand.'
+			'He sits the book on the small table in the center of the living room. It''s an old copy of The Golden Key written by Aleskei Tolstoi.'
+			'The silence stretches for a few seconds before he starts to talk, "You were five, maybe six years old at the time," He begins, his voice deep as he talks softly, "And I was still trying to get over the girl I had lost," He half smiles, but it quickly falters as he continues, "You walked up to me and told me that things would be ok. You handed me this book and told me that your mother would read this book to you, and that it''s how you knew she loved you," He pauses, thought you aren''t sure if he''s waiting for some sign of recognition from me, or just giving a moment for the information to sink in.'
 			'"You gave me the book and told me that some day I could read it to a woman I love so that she will know that I love her too," You can see unshed tears in his eyes as he almost reverently opens the front cover. There pressed flat just inside the cover is a single prairie crocus, "Then you ran to the fence and picked this flower before coming back to me and handing it to me. I''ll never forget the smile on your face as you threw your arms around my neck, and every time I saw one of those little purple flowers, it made me think of you."'
 			'You can see in his expression his fear that you''re going to reject him.'
 			'Not knowing what to say, you lean towards him, one hand coming to rest on the cheek of his weathered face. You can feel one of his arms slip around your middle, almost timidly. With your face mere inches from his, you close the last little distance to let our lips touch his. You''re tense at first, but eventually warm to his kiss, returning it.'
@@ -697,14 +697,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'accept':
 		'With almost exagerated care, Grigory lays you on his bed, his big hands taking hold of your panties and sliding your last article of clothing slowly down your legs.'
 		'"I''m," You start to say, but can''t quite find the words to tell him you''re still a virgin, "I''ve never."'
 		'Realization crosses his features, his eyes widening a little, "We don''t have to," He begins, but you cut him off.'
-		'"Its ok," You tremble slightly, but he has nothing to do with the temprature, "I want this too,"  Your voice is barely a whisper.'
+		'"It''s ok," You tremble slightly, but he has nothing to do with the temprature, "I want this too,"  Your voice is barely a whisper.'
 		'With a nod, Grigory leans in to kiss you tenderly on the lips. You can feel his big fingers parting the folds of your pussy, his caluses feeling rough on your tender flesh.'
 		'You''re just starting to feel wet when you feel the tip of his penis bursh your pussy, barely finding your hole before he starts to push forward.'
 		'A kind of pressure starts to build at your opening, bordering on uncomfortable before the tip of his cock slips inside leaving you feeling full in a way you''ve never experienced before. Not waiting for invitation, he starts to push forward, the fullness turning to discomfort a short distance inside of you.'
 		'You''ve barely had tie to realize he''s pressing against your hymen before he jerks his hips forward, shoving a little over half his length into you in a single thrust. Pulling back, he pushes forward a second time.'
 		'You grunt at the pain and bite your lip to muffle the sound.'
 		'Within a few seconds, his hips are moving in slow but steady movements. The pain slowly giving way to discomfort, and the discomfort not quite going away before you start to feel something more pleasant replacing it.'
-		'Its not long before Gribory''s fucking starts to become rougher, his own need evident.'
+		'It''s not long before Gribory''s fucking starts to become rougher, his own need evident.'
 		'You can start to feel a pressure starting to build inside of you. Around that same time, Grigory''s thrusts start to loose their rhythm, becoming erratic as he nears his own orgasm.'
 		'The pressure inside of you continues to build until he feels like you can barely think anymore, a sudden warmth floods your pussy as Grigory fills you with his seed. A whimper escapes your lips at the pleasure of it, though your pussy still aches and quivers around his shrinking shaft, desperate for the release you didn''t quite experience.'
 		'"I love you Kiska," Grigory says, short of breath. He slips his arms around you, pulling you into a tight embrace before rolling onto his side beside you. A few seconds later, you can hear the soft sounds of him sleeping.'
@@ -724,7 +724,7 @@ end
 
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'field1':
-	'When you near the field, you can see Grigory working in the field with some of the animals. You pause to watch, but its clear that he is busy so you don''t want to interrupt.'
+	'When you near the field, you can see Grigory working in the field with some of the animals. You pause to watch, but it''s clear that he is busy so you don''t want to interrupt.'
 
 !!	If relationship has NOT progressed to romance:
 		'Eventually he looks your way, smiling when he notices you. He gives you a little wave that you quickly return.'
@@ -766,7 +766,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'field_tease':
 	end
 
 	act 'Brush it off':
-		'"Its ok, I won''t say anything to anyone," You say, not wanting to further embarrass him.'
+		'"It''s ok, I won''t say anything to anyone," You say, not wanting to further embarrass him.'
 
 		if grig_caught = 0:
 			grig_caught = 1
@@ -775,18 +775,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'field_tease':
 			'Reaching for his flask, he takes a sip, but doesn''t put it away like he usually does.'
 			'"I didn''t know that there were actually people into that kind of thing," Your voice is full of surprise.'
 			'"I''m really sorry," For such a large man, his voice is surprisingly timid, "I should probably go now."'
-			'You take a few steps closer to him, "Its alright," You say to him reassuringly, "I''ll pretend I never saw anything if it makes you feel better," Stepping close to him, you give him a little hug.'
+			'You take a few steps closer to him, "It''s alright," You say to him reassuringly, "I''ll pretend I never saw anything if it makes you feel better," Stepping close to him, you give him a little hug.'
 			'He tenses initially, then relaxes, his face near your head as he inhales deeply.'
 			'You''re a little surprised when he puts his hands on your hips and pushes you gently away, "Thank you for being understanding my little Kiska," His voice is raw with emotion when he speaks.'
 			'"You''re my friend right? We can''t let your little kink get in the way of a good thing," You meet his gaze. His eyes never leave your own as he takes another small sip from his flask.'
 			'"Friend," He says softly, "Right."'
-			'Stepping back towards him, you give him one more little hug before letting go again, "Just don''t let anyone else know about this," You say with comical sternness, "Its our secret, and our secret alone," You playfully cross your arms over your chest while putting on your best fake serious face.'
+			'Stepping back towards him, you give him one more little hug before letting go again, "Just don''t let anyone else know about this," You say with comical sternness, "It''s our secret, and our secret alone," You playfully cross your arms over your chest while putting on your best fake serious face.'
 			'Grigory laughs suddenly, much of the tension leaving him, "You''re a very special girl," He says softly, you''re not entirely sure he was talking to you when he said it. More firmly he adds, "I should really get back to work."'
 			'With a self conscious smile and a half wave, he returns to his truck and leaves.'
 		else
 			'"This is starting to become a habit," You say, shaking your head.'
 			'"Sorry," He says softly in reply.'
-			'"Its ok, if it makes you happy, that''s what''s important," You tell him reassuringly.'
+			'"It''s ok, if it makes you happy, that''s what''s important," You tell him reassuringly.'
 			'He gives you a little smile, "Thank you for being so understanding Kiska."'
 			'After the silence stretches for a few seconds, he says, "I should get back to work." Reaching out, he puts his arm around you in a half hug. You return it without a second thought, savoring the warmth of his large body for just a second before releasing him again.'
 			'"don''t let me stop you," You say with a grin. Waving, you watch as he gets in his truck and drives off.'
@@ -797,7 +797,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'field_tease':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'field_watch':
-	'Staying quiet, you watch the animals mating in the field. You''re a little surprised at just how quickly its over. The bull mounts its mate, thrusting savagely for maybe half a minute before leaving its mate behind, massive amounts of cum dripping from her vagina.'
+	'Staying quiet, you watch the animals mating in the field. You''re a little surprised at just how quickly it''s over. The bull mounts its mate, thrusting savagely for maybe half a minute before leaving its mate behind, massive amounts of cum dripping from her vagina.'
 	'Turning your attention back to Grigory, you can see that his hand is now inside of his pants, moving rhythmically.'
 	'You can feel your own arousal growing slightly at the sight.'
 
@@ -807,7 +807,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'field_watch':
 		'Becoming aware of his surroundings again, he looks around quickly, spotting you. His expression becomes shocked.'
 		'"So, what you been up to?" You try to make it sound like you just arrived.'
 		'"Not much Kiska," He replies uncertainly.'
-		'You move closer, leaning against the truck beside him, "Its a nice day," You try to sound innocent.'
+		'You move closer, leaning against the truck beside him, "It''s a nice day," You try to sound innocent.'
 		'You see him pull his flask out of the corner of his eye and take a small sip, "And the view just keeps getting better," He says softly, looking straight at you as he does so. You''re sure he didn''t mean for you to hear. When you blush he quickly looks away.'
 		'Almost absently, he offers you the flask. Taking it, you raise it to your lips, barely tasting the fluid before handing it back. He quickly takes another sip before returning it to his back pocket.'
 		'"I should get going, I''ve got plenty that still needs to be done today."'
@@ -824,7 +824,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'field_watch':
 
 !!		If NOT Intimate:
 			'"Oh my God," You blurt, blushing bright red.'
-			'You see him take a slow sip from his flask, "Its OK, I didn''t mind."'
+			'You see him take a slow sip from his flask, "It''s OK, I didn''t mind."'
 			'He swallows visibly, seeming to snap out of a trance as he looks away.'
 			'The silence stretches on until it starts to be uncomfortable, "You might be a little embarrassed," He starts, "But you don''t have to be. That was the hottest thing I''ve seen in a long time," He can''t quite seem to look at you as he says it.'
 			'"Thanks," You pause, "I think."'
@@ -850,7 +850,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'field_watch':
 	end
 
 	act 'Move closer':
-		'Without wanting to draw attention, I move closer to Grigory, your gaze alternating between him and the bull in the field'
+		'Without wanting to draw attention, you move closer to Grigory, your gaze alternating between him and the bull in the field'
 		'Not as sneaky as you had intended, he quickly notices your approach.'
 !!		If NOT Intimate:
 			'"I, uh," He sputters, looking for a way to explain himself, "Well shit." He finally blurts.'
@@ -941,7 +941,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'drunk':
 	'Thinking little of it, you keep stumbling down the road.'
 	'Stumbling again, you start to fall, but suddenly the world shifts and you''re flying instead.'
 	'It takes you a few seconds to realize that someone just caught you and is still holding you in their arms, having swept you off of your feet.'
-	'Disoriented, you start to struggle until you hear a familiar voice, though you''re too drunk to place it, "Easy Kiska, its just me."'
+	'Disoriented, you start to struggle until you hear a familiar voice, though you''re too drunk to place it, "Easy Kiska, it''s just me."'
 	'You find the rumbling voice comforting, and you stop struggling. Instead, you try to look up at the big man carrying you, "Yyeti?"'
 	'The man chuckles lightly, "It would break your grandparents'' hearts to see you like this," He says to himself. You can feel him stop walking, only becoming aware of the gintle swaying as it comes to an end.'
 	'"Now what?" He asks.'
@@ -951,14 +951,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'drunk':
 	'A second later you begin to feel the swaying of his footsteps again. Within seconds you drift to sleep.'
 		act 'Continue':
 		'With a groan of discomfort, you feel yourself being sat in a cold leather chair, the chill of the night making you shiver as the big warm thing you had snuggled against is gone.'
-		'"Its ok," You hear someone say softly. The voice is familiar, Grigory? What''s he doing with me?'
+		'"It''s ok," You hear someone say softly. The voice is familiar, Grigory? What''s he doing with me?'
 		'The train of thought is interrupted as he wraps his big warm coat around you. With a little sigh, your world fades once more.'
 			act 'Continue':
 			'You''re woken again when you feel someone picking you up. You struggle ineffectively for a second before you''re able to focus on the big man holding you, "Grigory?" You slur heavily, "What uuh doin?"'
-			'"Its ok Kiska," Grigory says softly, "You''re drunk and I brought you home."'
+			'"It''s ok Kiska," Grigory says softly, "You''re drunk and I brought you home."'
 			'"Kaaaaay," You manage, closing your eyes and enjoying the feel of his big body pressed against your own.'
 			'The creak of wood causes you to open your eyes again, the world tilting wildly for a second. You are almost sick but close your eyes until it passes. When you finally focus on the room around you, "Not iiih hoooome."'
-			'"No, its mine," Grigory''s voice says soothingly, "Figured it was here or your grandparents place, and they''re probably happier not knowing their granddaughter is drunk."'
+			'"No, it''s mine," Grigory''s voice says soothingly, "Figured it was here or your grandparents place, and they''re probably happier not knowing their granddaughter is drunk."'
 			'He shifts his grip, cradling you, but only with one arm for a few seconds. You can tell he''s doing something, but you can''t focus enough to figure out what. A moment later, he lays you in a large bed, the covers pulled back already. You make a small grunt of protest when you feel him pull your shoes free of your feet, but can''t bring yourself to mount a real objection. He doesn''t seem to pay any mind to your protest anyway. With almost exagerated care, he tucks you in, fully clothed.'
 			'"Sweet dreams my little Kiska," He says softly.'
 			'"Youuuu sweet," You mumble, closing your eyes.'
@@ -1084,7 +1084,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'drunk_late':
 
 	if Flower_path_not_complete = 1:
 		'"Grigory, I think you''re drunk," You say, "Maybe you should go home and get some sleep? You''re talking nonsense."'
-		'Grigory pauses, leaning heavily against the building. Meeting your gaze, he reaches for his flask again, raising it almost to his lips before seeming to remember that its empty. Making a sour face, he puts it away again.'
+		'Grigory pauses, leaning heavily against the building. Meeting your gaze, he reaches for his flask again, raising it almost to his lips before seeming to remember that it''s empty. Making a sour face, he puts it away again.'
 
 		act 'Offer to help him':
 			'"Do you need help getting home?" You ask softly, stepping towards him.'
@@ -1126,7 +1126,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'drunk_late':
 
 		if Not_Romanticly_involved=1:
 			'"We''ve already talked about this. I don''t have those kind of feelings for you."'
-			'Grigory pauses, leaning heavily against the building. His eyes are filled with sadness, he reaches for his flask again, raising it almost to his lips before seeming to remember that its empty. Making a sour face, he puts it away again.'
+			'Grigory pauses, leaning heavily against the building. His eyes are filled with sadness, he reaches for his flask again, raising it almost to his lips before seeming to remember that it''s empty. Making a sour face, he puts it away again.'
 			'"You should get home, sleep it off," You add.'
 			'He opens his mouth like he''s going to say something, but before he can utter a word, you turn and walk away.'
 
@@ -1178,9 +1178,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'drunk_late':
 					'Looking around the room, you see that Grigory is nowhere to be seen. '
 					'"Grigory?" You call softly when you finally motivate yourself to crawl out of bed, "Grigory? Where''d you get off to?"'
 					'With no response, you exit the bedroom and start to look around. The first thing you notice is that all of Grigory''s clothes have been picked up, and that the end table has been moved back to where it belongs. The second is when you look out the living room window and notice that his truck is gone.'
-					'You sigh, then start back toward the bedroom to grab your shoes and tidy up before leaving. You''re almost to the front door when you notice a note stuck to the door. '
+					'You sigh, then start back toward the bedroom to grab your shoes and tidy up before leaving. You''re almost to the front door when you notice a note stuck to the door.'
 					*nl
-					'<b>Sorry about last night. I had a bit too much to drink. Please forgive me.'
+					'Sorry about last night. I had a bit too much to drink. Please forgive me.'
 					'I was going to wake you this morning, but you looked like a sleeping angel and I couldn''t bring myself to wake you up. I hope you slept well.'
 					'Help yourself to the fridge for breakfast, maybe I''ll see you a little later.'
 					'Love you Kiska,'
@@ -1217,7 +1217,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape':
 		'Maybe I''ve been out of line? You think, looking up at the big man as he looms over you.'
 		'Suddenly, he takes a step towards you, his arms wrapping around you in a grip that''s just a little too tight, "Grigory, you''re hurting me," You manage to say as he squeezes the air from your lungs.'
 		'The grip lingers for another second, then he lets go suddenly. '
-		'Your chest aches just a little as you take a deep breath. After a few seconds of breathing again, "Grigory?" You call his name softly, keeping just a little distance between the two of you, "I never mean to hurt you, if I tease you a little, its because you''re my friend."'
+		'Your chest aches just a little as you take a deep breath. After a few seconds of breathing again, "Grigory?" You call his name softly, keeping just a little distance between the two of you, "I never mean to hurt you, if I tease you a little, it''s because you''re my friend."'
 		'"Friend," The word sounds bitter coming from Grigory''s mouth.'
 		'"I think you need to go home, get some sleep," You venture, "Can I help you to your truck?" Even as you ask, you wonder how you''d ever be able to help the giant of a man get to his truck considering how much smaller than him you are.'
 		'Taking a step towards you again, he doesn''t embrace you this time, instead he leans forward, his lips touching your forehead. The smell of alcohol is strong on him, "Later Kiska," He mumbles, then turns and starts walking away.'
@@ -1240,7 +1240,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape':
 			'One of his hands grabs the back of your neck, pushing your face into the dirt before you can protest further. A second later, you can feel his other hand brush between your legs as he searches for your slit.'
 			'The moment his thick finger touches the folds of your pussy, you can hear him make a pleased sound. His finger probes deeper until he finds your opening, then shoves his finger forward, tearing through your hymen painfully.'
 			'"You''re a tight little slut, Kiska," He growls behind you. His fingers piston in and out of you a number of times, then withdraw.'
-			'You shudder, hoping this means Grigory has come to his senses, but the pleasant thought is dashed when you feel a finger, larger than the first probe your lips. Its not until he starts to push forward that you realize this isn''t his finger, but instead is his penis.'
+			'You shudder, hoping this means Grigory has come to his senses, but the pleasant thought is dashed when you feel a finger, larger than the first probe your lips. It''s not until he starts to push forward that you realize this isn''t his finger, but instead is his penis.'
 			'Shoving forward roughly, you feel his big cock fill you suddenly, pain, discomfort, and a sense of rightness all fill your core with a confusing mix of sensations that make you whimper.'
 			'Without any hesitation, he begins to rut at your sex, rapid, almost violent thrusts. Pain and pleasure fill you while you thrash under him, trying to escape the big man''s attack, but his size and position above you leave you helpless to stop him.'
 			'Fortunately, or perhaps not so fortunately, it only takes him a minute or two before he thrusts forward and stops suddenly.'
@@ -1257,7 +1257,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape':
 			'One of his hands grabs the back of your neck, pushing your face into the dirt before you can protest further. A second later, you can feel his other hand brush between your legs as he searches for your slit.'
 			'The moment his thick finger touches the folds of your pussy, you can hear him make a pleased sound. His finger probes deeper until he finds your embarrassingly wet opening, then shoves his finger forward, filling you with a fullness that would be pleasant under different circumstances.'
 			'"You''re a tight little slut, Kiska," He growls behind you. His fingers piston in and out of you a number of times, then withdraw.'
-			'You shudder, hoping this means Grigory has come to his senses, but the pleasant thought is dashed when you feel a finger, larger than the first probe your lips. Its not until he starts to push forward that you realize this isn''t his finger, but instead is his penis.'
+			'You shudder, hoping this means Grigory has come to his senses, but the pleasant thought is dashed when you feel a finger, larger than the first probe your lips. It''s not until he starts to push forward that you realize this isn''t his finger, but instead is his penis.'
 			'Shoving forward roughly, you feel his big cock fill you with almost no resistance, filling you with a delightful feeling that makes you moan in pleasure.'
 			'Without any hesitation, he begins to rut at your sex, rapid, almost violent thrusts. Pleasure fills you while you lay under him, enjoying the pleasure while hating the circumstances.'
 			'Fortunately, or perhaps not so fortunately, it only takes him a minute or two before he thrusts forward and stops suddenly.'
@@ -1274,7 +1274,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape':
 			'One of his hands grabs the back of your neck, pushing your face into the dirt before you can protest further. A second later, you can feel his other hand brush between your legs as he searches for your slit.'
 			'The moment his thick finger touches the folds of your pussy, you can hear him make a pleased sound. His finger probes deeper until he finds your unaroused sex, then shoves his finger forward, filling you with a fullness that is painful given the fact that you don''t feel aroused.'
 			'"You''re a tight little slut, Kiska," He growls behind you. His fingers piston in and out of you a number of times, then withdraw.'
-			'You shudder, hoping this means Grigory has come to his senses, but the pleasant thought is dashed when you feel a finger, larger than the first probe your lips. Its not until he starts to push forward that you realize this isn''t his finger, but instead is his penis. '
+			'You shudder, hoping this means Grigory has come to his senses, but the pleasant thought is dashed when you feel a finger, larger than the first probe your lips. It''s not until he starts to push forward that you realize this isn''t his finger, but instead is his penis. '
 			'Shoving forward roughly, you feel his big cock fill you suddenly, filling you with pain because you are not wet enough for the invasion.'
 			'Without any hesitation, he begins to rut at your sex, rapid, almost violent thrusts. You cry and scream as he painfully violates you.'
 			'Fortunately, or perhaps not so fortunately, it only takes him a minute or two before he thrusts forward and stops suddenly.'

+ 2 - 2
locations/gschool_break.qsrc

@@ -759,9 +759,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys_restroom_events':
 						if analplugin = 1:
 							analplugin = 0
 							'You get up and turn around, bending over. Ivan twists your buttplug, "Now there''s a good girl." He gently eases it out and places next to the basin.'
-							'He spits on your anus and rubs the spit into your ass to help lube it up. Then he lines up his dick, you feel the head of his cock press against your puckered asshole. The pressure builds up until the head pops in, he pauses a moment as you tense up and then gentle slides his dick in your ass. He pauses when you tense up to let you get use to his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick, pushing it''s way into your ass. He slowly starts fucking your ass gently, going just a little deeper slowly. It doesn''t hurt too much.'
+							'He spits on your anus and rubs the spit into your ass to help lube it up. Then he lines up his dick, you feel the head of his cock press against your puckered asshole. The pressure builds up until the head pops in, he pauses a moment as you tense up and then gentle slides his dick in your ass. He pauses when you tense up to let you get use to his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick, pushing its way into your ass. He slowly starts fucking your ass gently, going just a little deeper slowly. It doesn''t hurt too much.'
 						else
-							'You get up and turn around, bending over. Once you do, he spits on your anus and rubs the spit into your ass to help lube it up. Then he lines up his dick, you feel the head of his cock press against your puckered asshole. The pressure builds up until the head pops in, he pauses a moment as you tense up and then gentle slides his dick in your ass. He pauses when you tense up to let you get use to his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick, pushing it''s way into your ass. He slowly starts fucking your ass gently, going just a little deeper slowly. It doesn''t hurt too much.'
+							'You get up and turn around, bending over. Once you do, he spits on your anus and rubs the spit into your ass to help lube it up. Then he lines up his dick, you feel the head of his cock press against your puckered asshole. The pressure builds up until the head pops in, he pauses a moment as you tense up and then gentle slides his dick in your ass. He pauses when you tense up to let you get use to his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick, pushing its way into your ass. He slowly starts fucking your ass gently, going just a little deeper slowly. It doesn''t hurt too much.'
 						end
 						anal_slip += 4
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_detention.qsrc

@@ -533,7 +533,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strange':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/feofan/sex/school/detbj.jpg"></center>'
 					'You pull his head away from your crotch and slide off the table, then squat down in front of him. He immediately start to unbutton his pants but you slap his hands away. "Remember: I''m in charge. Just relax, do as I say and have fun, got it?" He pauses for a moment, maybe to determine whether being submissive is a turn-on or a turn-off, but then, unsurprisingly, nods his head - not that you actually expected him to turn down a blowjob. You finish unbuttoning his pants and pull them and his underwear down to his knees, revealing his erect dick.'
 					*nl
-					'Under his expectant looks, you take the tip of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth and start sucking him, slowly, teasingly. He starts to move his hips to fuck your mouth, or at least go a little deeper, but a quick slap gets him standing still. You are loving feeling completely in control, you reach down and masturbate as you suck his dick, taking more of it into your mouth at your own leisure. He does rest one of his hands on your head, but doesn''t try to force you to deep throat him, so you let it happen.'
+					'Under his expectant looks, you take the tip of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth and start sucking him, slowly, teasingly. He starts to move his hips to fuck your mouth, or at least go a little deeper, but a quick slap gets him standing still. You are loving feeling completely in control, you reach down and masturbate as you suck his dick, taking more of it into your mouth at your own leisure. He does rest one of his hands on your head, but doesn''t try to force you to deepthroat him, so you let it happen.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'dom'
 					gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 5, 'dom'
 					minut -= 5

+ 2 - 2
locations/gschool_girls_bathroom.qsrc

@@ -1038,10 +1038,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught3':
 					if detention_set = 0:
 						detention_set = 1
 						gs 'pain', 2, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
-						'Once your bare ass is exposed your begins to spank it with her open hand. She uses the full force of her swings to deliver stinging slaps to your bare ass. She spanks you until your ass is cherry red, she seems to only stop when her hand starts to hurt to much from spanking you to continue. She finally lets go of you and steps away. "In addition you will report to detention this weekend. Now get your ass to class and I don''t want to catch you cutting class again, you understand?" You nod your head and wipe away the tears, you straighten up your clothes and go to class.'
+						'Once your bare ass is exposed your begins to spank it with her open hand. She uses the full force of her swings to deliver stinging slaps to your bare ass. She spanks you until your ass is cherry red, she seems to only stop when her hand starts to hurt too much from spanking you to continue. She finally lets go of you and steps away. "In addition you will report to detention this weekend. Now get your ass to class and I don''t want to catch you cutting class again, you understand?" You nod your head and wipe away the tears, you straighten up your clothes and go to class.'
 					else
 						gs 'pain', 2, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
-						'Once your bare ass is exposed your begins to spank it with her open hand. She uses the full force of her swings to deliver stinging slaps to your bare ass. She spanks you until your ass is cherry red, she seems to only stop when her hand starts to hurt to much from spanking you to continue. She finally lets go of you and steps away.' 
+						'Once your bare ass is exposed your begins to spank it with her open hand. She uses the full force of her swings to deliver stinging slaps to your bare ass. She spanks you until your ass is cherry red, she seems to only stop when her hand starts to hurt too much from spanking you to continue. She finally lets go of you and steps away.' 
 !!Todo: Has to be written
 !!						'"In addition you will report to my office after school. Now get your ass to class and I don''t want to catch you cutting class again, you understand?" You nod your head and wipe away the tears, you straighten up your clothes and go to class.'
 					end

+ 2 - 2
locations/gschool_sex.qsrc

@@ -1152,7 +1152,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petka_lockerroom':
 							'You look at Petka where he waits meekly, already cowed by you. Seeing him so submissive sends a thrill down your spin as you point at the ground in front of you. "Come over here and suck my dick bitch"'
 							*nl
 							'He eyes you with fear and then slowly starts to crawl over. "Now!" you shout. "Or this will only get worse for you. Maybe I should call the coach in here?"'
-							'That did the trick. He scrambles over quickly and starts sucking on your strapon. You grab the back of his head with your hand and start forcing him to deep throat your dildo.'
+							'That did the trick. He scrambles over quickly and starts sucking on your strapon. You grab the back of his head with your hand and start forcing him to deepthroat your dildo.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'dom'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Get it nice and wet':
@@ -1531,7 +1531,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'victor_lockerroom':
 		act 'Suck his dick':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/locker4.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you keep stroking his dick, you lean forward and open your mouth, letting the head of his cock pass your lips. You wrap your lips around his shaft and start sucking on his dick, bobbing your head back and forth in rhythm with the stroking of your hand. For a couple of minutes, you just suck on his dick while stroking it before you feel his hand on the back of your head and he starts forcing you to take more and more of his dick into your mouth. You eventually  have to move your hand away as he forces you to deep throat him. After a minute or so of this, he says "Take your clothes off and lie down on the bench."'
+			'As you keep stroking his dick, you lean forward and open your mouth, letting the head of his cock pass your lips. You wrap your lips around his shaft and start sucking on his dick, bobbing your head back and forth in rhythm with the stroking of your hand. For a couple of minutes, you just suck on his dick while stroking it before you feel his hand on the back of your head and he starts forcing you to take more and more of his dick into your mouth. You eventually  have to move your hand away as he forces you to deepthroat him. After a minute or so of this, he says "Take your clothes off and lie down on the bench."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'stat'
 			gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'medium'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gskino.qsrc

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ if money >= 100:
 		if pav_slut >= 100 and rand(0,2) > 0:
 			cla
 			'As you are watching the film a guy sits next to you and whispers in your ear, "Everyone knows you like to suck cock, I''ll pay you if you have a go on this."'
-			'Its dark, but you can just about see well enough to see that he is pointing at his dick.'
+			'It''s dark, but you can just about see well enough to see that he is pointing at his dick.'
 			act 'Refuse':
 				cla
 				'You tell him you''d rather watch the film, he mutters something that sounded like bitch and leaves you to watch the rest of the movie in peace.'

+ 3 - 3
locations/hunterLoveSex.qsrc

@@ -793,7 +793,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'din_hunters_sex_cumface4':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/cumf40.mp4"></video></center>'
 	*pl
 	'<<$boydesc>> cum is on your chest. Warm droplets flow down to your stomach. You smear the sticky cum all over your body, relishing the feeling.'
-	if harakBoyH = 2: '-<<$pcs_nickname>>, its supposed to help your tits grow. Do you want to be my Busty beauty?'
+	if harakBoyH = 2: '-<<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s supposed to help your tits grow. Do you want to be my Busty beauty?'
 	if silavag = 0 and dikos = 0:'Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>. I couldn''t help myself!'
 	if silavag = 1 and dikos = 1:'Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>. I couldn''t help myself!'
 	if silavag = 2 and dikos = 2:'Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>. I couldn''t help myself!'
@@ -3556,8 +3556,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'din_hunters_bj_bonus8':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/kotovbjbonus8.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'While <<$boydesc>> continues to enjoy himself, you lick the pucker of his asshole, forcing your tongue inside. He jumps and looks down at you startled.'
 	if harakBoyH = 2:'-Who told you to fuck my ass with your tongue? No, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I don''t like it. Cut that shit out!'
-	if harakBoyH = 1:'- What the hell <<$pcs_nickname>> , stop!'
-	if harakBoyH = 0:'- Mmmm <<$pcs_nickname>> , don''t stop, " <<$boydesc>> says.'
+	if harakBoyH = 1:'- What the hell <<$pcs_nickname>>, stop!'
+	if harakBoyH = 0:'- Mmmm <<$pcs_nickname>>, don''t stop," <<$boydesc>> says.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'hunterLoveSex', 'din_hunters_bj8'

+ 1 - 1
locations/hunters.qsrc

@@ -559,7 +559,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big172.jpg"></center>'
 					'"What are you saying?," you ask Andrei angrily. "You''ve just made me feel like a whore."'
-					'Andrei turns to you, "You see <<$pcs_nickname>>, you were always like this, you just had to stop running away from it. You can see it this way it''s way better that this happened with us. Don''t worry, we won''t tell anyone. Now that you''ve gained some experience, you''ll become better at controlling that pretty mouth of yours.'
+					'Andrei turns to you, "You see <<$pcs_nickname>>, you were always like this, you just had to stop running away from it. You can see it''s way better that this happened with us. Don''t worry, we won''t tell anyone. Now that you''ve gained some experience, you''ll become better at controlling that pretty mouth of yours.'
 					'"You really think so?" you ask.'
 					'"Of course! You enjoy giving head, we love reciving head, there is no need we should''nt be enjoying ourself together."'
 					'"And you never know, maybe this newfound experience will make you good." said Andrei while thoughtfully scratching his chin.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/husbSex.qsrc

@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dolgend':
 	gs'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/d3.jpg"></center>'
-	'When its over, they take you to the bathroom and tell you to clean yourself up as they go back into the bedroom.'
+	'When it''s over, they take you to the bathroom and tell you to clean yourself up as they go back into the bedroom.'
 
 	if pcs_apprnc >= 60 and husbdolg = 1:
 		cla

+ 6 - 6
locations/igorev.qsrc

@@ -239,7 +239,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'din_sex':
 				'After a few minutes you feel his cock growing, getting rock hard.'
 				'"Can I cum inside you?" Igor asks.'
 				'Before you can answer you feel Igor ejaculating inside you.'
-				'He''s clearly upset over this but you tell him its okay and that you don''t mind him finishing inside you...'
+				'He''s clearly upset over this but you tell him it''s okay and that you don''t mind him finishing inside you...'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy, 1
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 15
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -937,7 +937,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught':
 			'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/igor/talk.jpg"></center>'
 			'You lean back and smile at him. "Ok sure I will keep your secret but you will owe me, I want to have some fun with this."'
 			'He looks at you shocked. "What? No!"'
-			'You frown a little. "It''s that or I can tell everyone." Seeing the panicked look on his face you quickly add. "Don''t worry, I just want to have a little fun and you will owe me. Nothing to big."'
+			'You frown a little. "It''s that or I can tell everyone." Seeing the panicked look on his face you quickly add. "Don''t worry, I just want to have a little fun and you will owe me. Nothing too big."'
 			'He sighs and nods his head, knowing he doesn''t really have much of a choice.'
 			'You grin to him. "Great now go get dressed again, I have something in mind. Hell I will even teach you how to do makeup right."'
 			'He brightens for a moment but then is a bit guarded. But he does as you command, a few minutes later he comes back in dressed as you had seen him before. You sit him down and pull out your makeup. You apply it to his face explaining it as you go. He asks a few questions, he obviously wants to learn how to do it. After a bit you are done. You stand back to admire your work and you have to admit, Igor makes a really cute girl. "Well come see for yourself." You say as you walk over to the mirror.'
@@ -1183,9 +1183,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Dimka':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/igor/crossdress/progulka_1.jpg"></center>'
 					'"Sure, why not, sounds like fun." you quicky answer. Igor immediately grabs your hand and pulls it toward him, whispering in your ear:'
-					'"WHAT THE FUCK are YOU doing? If he recognizes me... its... well... fucked up!!!" You can feel that Igor is in full panic mode.'
+					'"WHAT THE FUCK are YOU doing? If he recognizes me... it''s... well... fucked up!!!" You can feel that Igor is in full panic mode.'
 					'"Don''t worry, you''ll pull through this fine. Besides he might get suspicious if we blow him off and don''t have a drink with him." you reassure him.'
-					'"What are you whispering about there, girls?" Dimka asked curiously. "Don''t you know its rude to whisper when in company."'
+					'"What are you whispering about there, girls?" Dimka asked curiously. "Don''t you know it''s rude to whisper when in company."'
 					'"Oh, it''s nothing, it''s just that Diana here is very shy." you reply.'
 					'"Don''t worry, a couple of beers will fix that!" joked Dimka.'
 					act 'Further':
@@ -1195,7 +1195,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Dimka':
 						'The three of you continue walking, and after a while you stop at a kiosk, buying a few beers. You find a nice secluded place where you wouldn''t get disturbed in the grass. You all have a beer and gossip about the other kids.'
 						'Dimka entertains you both, but it''s clearly obvious that he''s more interested in Diana than you. He''s truly intrigued by Diana and asks her many questions about her personal life, coming up with different questions all the time.'
 						'Diana looks a little frazzled as she answers his onslaught of questions. You are amazed that Diana was able to keep it together and answer as many of the questions as she did.'
-						'You decide its time to end this before it all falls apart, as soon as you''ve finished the beers.'
+						'You decide it''s time to end this before it all falls apart, as soon as you''ve finished the beers.'
 						act 'Finish the beers':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/igor/crossdress/drinkbeers.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1263,7 +1263,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Dimka':
 				'"Should I get us some beers?" asks Dimka.'
 				'"Sounds like a great idea" you say, thinking <i>"Maybe the alcohol will loosen Igor up a little."</i>'
 				'Dimka runs over to the store and returns with a couple of beers and you find a secluded place where you could drink in peace. Dimka pours the beer in plastic cups. You all have a drink and chat about little things.'
-				'Dimka entertains the both of you, but its so obvious he''s just interested in Diana. He''s truly intrigued by Diana and asks her many questions about her personal life, coming up with different questions all the time.'
+				'Dimka entertains the both of you, but it''s so obvious he''s just interested in Diana. He''s truly intrigued by Diana and asks her many questions about her personal life, coming up with different questions all the time.'
 				'Diana looked a little frazzled as she answered his onslaught of questions. You are amazed that Diana was able to keep it together and answer as many of the questions as she did.'
 				'With the beer gone, you hastily say "Thank you for the beers, Dimka. It was nice of you to treat us, but we have to go, right Diana, so bye." and with that started Diana pulling you away from Dimka.'
 				act 'Well, now what?':

+ 2 - 2
locations/igorhome.qsrc

@@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'igorroom':
 			act 'Decline and go home': gt 'pav_residential'
 			act 'Decline and chat instead':gt 'igorhome','Chat'
 		else
-			'Igor tells you its getting late, you could take the hint and leave or maybe chat just a little longer.'
+			'Igor tells you it''s getting late, you could take the hint and leave or maybe chat just a little longer.'
 			act 'Take the hint and go home': gt 'pav_residential'
 			act 'Chat just a little longer':gt 'igorhome','Chat'
 		end
@@ -1027,7 +1027,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kitchen4':
 			'"I am not surprised that my little Igor managed to impress a girl by showing off how smart he is, I''m so proud of him."'
 			'"To be honest, I''m a bit turned on by how smart Igor is" you say blushing.'
 			'"Nothing to be ashamed of, <<$pcs_nickname>>. It runs in the family." as she''s clearly referencing to Igor''s father. "But please be careful with Igor, he hasn''t had lots of experience with women."'
-			'"I''ll take good care of him. I''ll make sure he don''t stray off to much..." you confidently say. "I should head back Igor is probably wondering where I am."'
+			'"I''ll take good care of him. I''ll make sure he doesn''t stray off too much..." you confidently say. "I should head back Igor is probably wondering where I am."'
 			'"We''ll talk about it later and don''t hesitate if you''re ever wondering anything." Inga replies as you''re moving away from the kitchen.'
 			met_IgorMother = 1
 			act 'Leave the Kitchen': gt 'igorhome','hallway'

+ 3 - 3
locations/ivanRoom.qsrc

@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ if StoryLine = 0 or altQS = 1:
 			minut += 15
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/apartment/gun.jpg"></center>'
-			'As Juugo approaches to the door, you notice the tattoos on his face move seemingly having a life of their own, you notice them growing and twisting covering his face in black designs. As the designs settle on his face you notice his fists have increased in size and appear as if they are made of stone. With a  growl he launches a rock hard fist at the door bending the steel door inwards. Grabbing one of the exposed edges of the now damaged door Juugo tears the door from its frame and off it''s hinges. You run into the apartment after Juugo and see Ivan standing in the room holding a gun. Ivan fired a shot and Juugo twitched, then Ivan fired again and again. Juugo fell to the floor. The gun empty Ivan began frantically reloading the gun.'
+			'As Juugo approaches to the door, you notice the tattoos on his face move seemingly having a life of their own, you notice them growing and twisting covering his face in black designs. As the designs settle on his face you notice his fists have increased in size and appear as if they are made of stone. With a  growl he launches a rock hard fist at the door bending the steel door inwards. Grabbing one of the exposed edges of the now damaged door Juugo tears the door from its frame and off its hinges. You run into the apartment after Juugo and see Ivan standing in the room holding a gun. Ivan fired a shot and Juugo twitched, then Ivan fired again and again. Juugo fell to the floor. The gun empty Ivan began frantically reloading the gun.'
 
 			act 'Embed Ivan':
 				cls
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ if StoryLine = 0 or altQS = 1:
 					pcs_horny += 50
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/shared/karinpre.jpg"></center>'
-					'Together with Tatiana you entered the apartment and follow Ivan into his living room. The room was clean and cozy. Ivan invited you to sit on the sofa and sat down in a chair in front of you. Tatiana began to ask questions about his sex life and desires. Ivan looked surprisingly calm despite the aphrodisiacs effects. You tried not to breathe it in, but you can still feel its impact. Tatiana elbows you and remembering your posing as salespeople you display the vial as if its the latest greatest product.'
+					'Together with Tatiana you entered the apartment and follow Ivan into his living room. The room was clean and cozy. Ivan invited you to sit on the sofa and sat down in a chair in front of you. Tatiana began to ask questions about his sex life and desires. Ivan looked surprisingly calm despite the aphrodisiacs effects. You tried not to breathe it in, but you can still feel its impact. Tatiana elbows you and remembering your posing as salespeople you display the vial as if it''s the latest greatest product.'
 
 					act 'Splash secretly':
 						cls
@@ -247,7 +247,7 @@ else
 				pcs_horny += 10
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/shared/karinpre.jpg"></center>'
-				'Tanya said "Here, take this bottle its the aphrodisiac. Carefull with that remember it will affect us as well." Tanya gives you the bottle and you splash a little on the frame of the door, trying not to inhale the aroma. Tanya rang the bell and waited a few minutes for him to answer it. On the threshold appeared Ivan, he looked a little perplexed at you. Tanya smiled sweetly Ivan "We conducting a social survey, Can we ask you a few questions?" Ivan stands aside inviting you to go to the apartment.'
+				'Tanya said "Here, take this bottle, it''s the aphrodisiac. Carefull with that remember it will affect us as well." Tanya gives you the bottle and you splash a little on the frame of the door, trying not to inhale the aroma. Tanya rang the bell and waited a few minutes for him to answer it. On the threshold appeared Ivan, he looked a little perplexed at you. Tanya smiled sweetly Ivan "We conducting a social survey, Can we ask you a few questions?" Ivan stands aside inviting you to go to the apartment.'
 				act 'Go in to the apartment':
 					cls
 					minut += 5

+ 1 - 1
locations/journal_quests.qsrc

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		if NatbelQW['QWstage'] >= 11:
 			'This is the end of Natasha''s quest line, for now.'
 		elseif NatbelQW['QWstage'] = 10:
-			'I should check the Natasha''s fridge, I am sure there is something I can use to keep corrupting her. When she is in the laundry room would be a good time to do this.'
+			'I should check Natasha''s fridge, I am sure there is something I can use to keep corrupting her. It would be a good time to do this when she is in the laundry room.'
 		elseif NatbelQW['QWstage'] = 9:
 			'I bet Olu would love to give Natasha a ride. I should see what he thinks of other girls joining us. If I haven''t had sex with him yet, I will need to do that first.'
 		elseif NatbelQW['QWstage'] = 8:

+ 1 - 1
locations/kinosvid.qsrc

@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = '15':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/cinema/9.jpg"></center>'
-	'You guide her to the chair, and pull her pants down around her knees. She reaches back to pull her panties aside, giving you access to her cute little hole. You give her a few teasing licks between her cheeks, before your tongue finds it''s way to her hole. When it does, <<$telsob>> gasps, and reaches back to hold your head begging for more.'
+	'You guide her to the chair, and pull her pants down around her knees. She reaches back to pull her panties aside, giving you access to her cute little hole. You give her a few teasing licks between her cheeks, before your tongue finds its way to her hole. When it does, <<$telsob>> gasps, and reaches back to hold your head begging for more.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'

+ 1 - 1
locations/leonid.qsrc

@@ -586,7 +586,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bdsmForcedOrgasm':
 	'He lies you down, securing your hands and legs so you cannot move and also exposing your crotch to his liking.'
 	'He brings a large vibrator device and starts to massage your labia.'
 	'First he uses low setting, but after a while he turns it on max and instead targets directly your clitoris.'
-	'The sensation is so strong, you cannot differentiate if it hurts or if its pleasurable.'
+	'The sensation is so strong, you cannot differentiate if it hurts or if it''s pleasurable.'
 
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_vibe', 30, 'sub', 'rough', 'maso', 'bound'

+ 1 - 1
locations/lesbimistress.qsrc

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		minut += 5
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/natalya/mistress.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mistress looks at you expectantly and you look at her, you feel like its a personal thing, you are her inanimate sex-plaything, with which she is entitled to do whatever she pleases.'
+		'Mistress looks at you expectantly and you look at her, you feel like it''s a personal thing, you are her inanimate sex-plaything, with which she is entitled to do whatever she pleases.'
 	
 		act 'Undress':
 			*clr & cla

+ 8 - 8
locations/lover_change.qsrc

@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Pier':
 			end
 			if pirsG = 1000 and pierWearCount < pierPrefTmpMin:
 				'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> gets close to your ear, "Don''t make a scene okay?", then <<$tXe>> nonchalantly slides <<$tXyr>> hand down to your labia, and inserts a ring.'
-				'You cover your mouth as you let out a quick "Eep!", but in a second, its over.'
+				'You cover your mouth as you let out a quick "Eep!", but in a second, it''s over.'
 				pcs_horny += 7
 				pirsG = 1
 				pierWearCount += 1
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Pier':
 			end
 			if pirsG > 0 and pirsG < 1000 and pierWearCount > pierPrefTmpMax:
 				'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> gets close to your ear, "Don''t make a scene okay?", then he non chalontely slides <<$tXyr>> hand down to your labia, and removes the ring there.'
-				'You cover your mouth as you let out a quick "Eep!", but in a second, its over.'
+				'You cover your mouth as you let out a quick "Eep!", but in a second, it''s over.'
 				pcs_horny += 7
 				pirsG = 1000
 				pierWearCount -= 1
@@ -279,7 +279,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Pier':
 						elseif randchan = 7 and pirsG = 0:
 							if pirsG = 0 and pierCount < pierPrefTmpMin:
 								'"Ma ''am can you take off your bottoms?", the man says. You realize that he plans to pierce your labia and you reluctantly present yourself.'
-								'You cover your mouth as you let out a quick "Eep!", as you feel a quick pain through your labia, but in a second, its over.'
+								'You cover your mouth as you let out a quick "Eep!", as you feel a quick pain through your labia, but in a second, it''s over.'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/piercings/g1.jpg"></center>'
 								pcs_horny += 7
 								pirsG = 1
@@ -343,7 +343,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Pier':
 								end
 								if pirsG = 1000 and pierWearCount < pierPrefTmpMin:
 									'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> gets close to your ear, "Don''t make a scene okay?", then <<$tXe>> nonchalantly slides <<$tXyr>> hand down to your labia, and inserts a ring.'
-									'You cover your mouth as you let out a quick "Eep!", but in a second, its over.'
+									'You cover your mouth as you let out a quick "Eep!", but in a second, it''s over.'
 									pcs_horny += 7
 									pirsG = 1
 									pierWearCount += 1
@@ -834,7 +834,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Lips':
 		act 'Go with doctor to operating room':
 			*clr & cla
 			'The doctor motions for you to sit on the operating table, and you reluctantly comply.'
-			'"Don''t worry it will just be a quick injection and we will be done, its perfectly safe.", the doctor says.'
+			'"Don''t worry it will just be a quick injection and we will be done, it''s perfectly safe.", the doctor says.'
 			'As you try to get confortable on the table the doctor comes up to you with the injection.'
 			'"Okay now if you can pucker out your lips it will give me a nice surface for the shot.", he says holding your face gently.'
 			act 'Pucker out lips':
@@ -859,7 +859,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Lips':
 					'As you go back towards <<$tXem>>, <<$tXe>> looks you up and down.'
 					'"There we go!", <<$tXe>> says with a smile.'
 					if lipsPrefTmp = 1:
-						'You can tell <<$tXe>> loves girls with more modest yet full lips, and you have to admit, its better then having big whorish, cocksucking lips.'
+						'You can tell <<$tXe>> loves girls with more modest yet full lips, and you have to admit, it''s better then having big whorish, cocksucking lips.'
 					elseif lipsPrefTmp = 2:
 						'You can tell that <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> likes a girl to have whorish, cocksucking lips, and as you give the mirror in the room a quick slutty face, you have to admit it does make you look sexier.'
 					end			
@@ -915,7 +915,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Tits':
 				'Your heart skips a beat, What? "Those will be huge...", you tell to yourself.'
 			elseif titAmount <= 30:
 				'"It seems you will be getting our largest, the XLarge breast implants." '
-				'What?! You are about to get up and leave, but you realize that its to late for that now. "God, those will be MASSIVE", you think to yourself.'
+				'What?! You are about to get up and leave, but you realize that it''s too late for that now. "God, those will be MASSIVE", you think to yourself.'
 			else 
 				'This should not shoot off, if you go from 10 to 35 it should fall into preference still.'
 			end
@@ -1022,7 +1022,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Tits':
 							if titBoy = 0:
 								'You can tell that <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> likes a girl without whorish tits, and you can kind of see why as you slowly grope your now tinier breasts.'
 							elseif titBoy = 1:
-								'You can tell that <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> likes a girl with a good rack, but thankfully not to big, and you admittadly agree with <<$tXem>>, as you slowly massage your breasts.'
+								'You can tell that <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> likes a girl with a good rack, but thankfully not too big, and you admittadly agree with <<$tXem>>, as you slowly massage your breasts.'
 							elseif titBoy = 2:
 								'Reducing to max? What?'
 							end

+ 8 - 8
locations/lover_likes.qsrc

@@ -100,10 +100,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clotTopPrefTmp':
 			if haraklover[lover_number] = 0:
 
 				loverrelation[lover_number] -= 1
-				$meetTopPref = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says shyly that <<$tXe>> likes girls who wear clothes with <<$clotTopPrefTmp>> cleavage, and you kind of have to much for <<$tXyr>> taste."'
+				$meetTopPref = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says shyly that <<$tXe>> likes girls who wear clothes with <<$clotTopPrefTmp>> cleavage, and you kind of have too much for <<$tXyr>> taste."'
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 1:
 				loverrelation[lover_number] -= 1
-				$meetTopPref = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says <<$tXe>> likes girls that wear clothes with <<$clotTopPrefTmp>> cleavage, and anything else is way to much."'
+				$meetTopPref = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says <<$tXe>> likes girls that wear clothes with <<$clotTopPrefTmp>> cleavage, and anything else is way too much."'
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 2:
 				loverrelation[lover_number] -= 2 
 				$meetTopPref = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> looks at your cleavage and says <<$tXe>> likes girls that wear clothes with <<$clotTopPrefTmp>> cleavage, and anything else is trash."'
@@ -138,10 +138,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clotTopPrefTmp':
 			if haraklover[lover_number] = 0:
 
 				loverrelation[lover_number] -= 1
-				$meetTopPref = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> looks at your cleavage and says slightly embarressed that <<$tXe>> likes girls who wear clothes with <<$clotTopPrefTmp>> cleavage, and you have to much for <<$tXyr>> taste."'
+				$meetTopPref = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> looks at your cleavage and says slightly embarressed that <<$tXe>> likes girls who wear clothes with <<$clotTopPrefTmp>> cleavage, and you have too much for <<$tXyr>> taste."'
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 1:
 				loverrelation[lover_number] -= 1
-				$meetTopPref = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> looks at your cleavage and says <<$tXe>> likes girls that wear clothes with <<$clotTopPrefTmp>> cleavage, and your''s is way to much."'
+				$meetTopPref = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> looks at your cleavage and says <<$tXe>> likes girls that wear clothes with <<$clotTopPrefTmp>> cleavage, and yours is way too much."'
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 2:
 				loverrelation[lover_number] -= 2 
 				$meetTopPref = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> looks at your cleavage and says <<$tXe>> likes girls that wear clothes with <<$clotTopPrefTmp>> cleavage, and anything else is trash."'
@@ -613,7 +613,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'titBoy':
 			if haraklover[lover_number] = 0:
 
 				loverrelation[lover_number] -= 1
-				$meetTits = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> tells you shyly, "Hey <<$giveNick>>, you look beautiful, but I like girls with <<$titBoy>>, and yours are just to small."'
+				$meetTits = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> tells you shyly, "Hey <<$giveNick>>, you look beautiful, but I like girls with <<$titBoy>>, and yours are just too small."'
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 1:
 				loverrelation[lover_number] -= 1
 				$meetTits = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> cafefully says to you, "Hey <<$giveNick>>, you look beautiful, but girls shouldn''t have a flat chest. I like girls with <<$titBoy>>.'
@@ -625,10 +625,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'titBoy':
 			if haraklover[lover_number] = 0:
 
 				loverrelation[lover_number] -= 1
-				$meetTits = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says to you, "<<$pcs_firstname>>, you look amazing, but I like girls with <<$titBoy>>, and yours are way to big.'
+				$meetTits = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says to you, "<<$pcs_firstname>>, you look amazing, but I like girls with <<$titBoy>>, and yours are way too big.'
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 1:
 				loverrelation[lover_number] -= 1
-				$meetTits = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says to you, "<<$pcs_firstname>>, you look amazing, but I like girls with <<$titBoy>>, and yours are way to big.'
+				$meetTits = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says to you, "<<$pcs_firstname>>, you look amazing, but I like girls with <<$titBoy>>, and yours are way too big.'
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 2:
 				loverrelation[lover_number] -= 1
 				$meetTits = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says, "<<$pcs_firstname>>, you look amazing, but I like girls with <<$titBoy>>, and yours make you look like a cow.'
@@ -651,7 +651,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'titBoy':
 			if haraklover[lover_number] = 0:
 
 				loverrelation[lover_number] -= 1
-				$meetTits = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says quietly, "Hey <<$giveNick>>, I don''t mean to be mean, but I like girls with <<$titBoy>>, and yours are just to small."'
+				$meetTits = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says quietly, "Hey <<$giveNick>>, I don''t mean to be mean, but I like girls with <<$titBoy>>, and yours are just too small."'
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 1:
 				loverrelation[lover_number] -= 1
 				$meetTits = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says with a very calm voice, "Hey <<$giveNick>>, I don''t mean to be an ass, but I like girls with <<$titBoy>>, and yours are just not big enough for my liking."'

+ 1 - 1
locations/mirasex.qsrc

@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miralick_dog':
 		act 'Continue':	gt 'mirasex','miralick_dog'
 		act 'Stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
 	elseif miraorgasm = 0 and you_orgasm = 1:
-		act 'Its Mira''s turn':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_mis2'
+		act 'It''s Mira''s turn':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_mis2'
 	else
 		act 'Leave':
 			gs 'mirasex', 'end'

+ 1 - 1
locations/mother.qsrc

@@ -1205,7 +1205,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'motherQW_2':
 				'Yet another uncomfortable silence. You decide to seize the momentum, and drive your point home once and for all: "Well <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I think you know what I mean now. It''s really unfair of you to cause a riot every time I come home, while you did the exact same thing years ago. I don''t deserve this."'
 				'Your mother is still not willing to concede: "I... I don''t want you to make the same mistakes I did, I want you to be better than I am. I want you to have a better life, that is why. I don''t want you to be like me, I love you and want more for you." She says as she almost cries.'
 				'You feel a little guilty now, is she really just doing this out of love because she wants better for you? Even so it is no excuse for her to be this overbearing.'
-				'You nod and give your mother a weak smile. "Ok I guess... I guess I can see that. But it''s to much, you could have just talked to me instead of trying to run my life. All that did is make me want to rebel."'
+				'You nod and give your mother a weak smile. "Ok I guess... I guess I can see that. But it''s too much, you could have just talked to me instead of trying to run my life. All that did is make me want to rebel."'
 				*nl
 				'She nods and wipes at a stray tear that trickles down her face. "Your right, I went to far and I''m sorry for that. I should have learned from your sister but I didn''t. Please forgive me and try to be better than I am.'
 				'You feel yourself tearing up as well, you nod and then you and your mother hug for a long time. This is the closest you have felt to your mother in a long time. You get up getting ready to leave the room after giving her the hug.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/nerd_game_night.qsrc

@@ -292,7 +292,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'keep_playing_on2':
 	act 'Stay in camp':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/library/events/nerd_game/camp.jpg"></center>'
-		'You decide maybe that is a bit to much realism and decide to stay in camp, feeling a little embarrassed for suggesting it. Soon the party has the camp set up and eats dinner, they banter back and forth as their characters talking about what they plan to spend their share of the treasure on, before deciding the order of who is on watch during the night. After that everyone goes to sleep, taking their turns on watch until morning.'
+		'You decide maybe that is a bit too much realism and decide to stay in camp, feeling a little embarrassed for suggesting it. Soon the party has the camp set up and eats dinner, they banter back and forth as their characters talking about what they plan to spend their share of the treasure on, before deciding the order of who is on watch during the night. After that everyone goes to sleep, taking their turns on watch until morning.'
 		'"We''re out of time," since all of you are having fun you let out a sigh, "Don''t worry, there are lots of adventures left to explore. We''ll pick it up the next time."'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter', 'lobby'
 	end

+ 1 - 1
locations/nichApartment.qsrc

@@ -227,7 +227,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'jobInterview':
 		act 'Wait':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/tanya/01.jpg"></center>'
-			'Finally the elevator stops and the its doors open.'
+			'Finally the elevator stops and its doors open.'
 			
 			if nichTanyaKnown = 0:
 				'In front of you stands a cute girl smiling at you.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/nichBedroomServant.qsrc

@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'sleepEvents':
 		if nichTarSaunaPay >= 20000:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/gala/slave/taras/chat.jpg"></center>'
 			'You wake up to the feeling of something heavy resting on you. A little bit sleepy you open your eyes and see the face of Taras directly in front of yours.'
-			'"Slut, you did your job well. You earned all the money I needed and I was able to, well... , start my preparations."'
+			'"Slut, you did your job well. You earned all the money I needed and I was able to, well... start my preparations."'
 			'He hesitates for a second.'
 			'"I guess I can as well introduce you to my plan. As you might have guessed by now I have strong feelings for Mistress Gala. Sadly she didn''t realize that she would be better off with me than with her husband. That''s why I need to spend some quality time with her to convince her."'
 			'"Of course she wouldn''t agree to it if I just asked her. That''s why I needed to create a little ruse. I needed your money so I was able to prepare our travel without anybody realizing that I was doing it."'

+ 1 - 1
locations/nichClub.qsrc

@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'firstVisit':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/nicholas/gentleclub/e2gyn.jpg"></center>'
 		'Mistress Malvina takes out a tape measure and begins measuring your breasts, your feet, your neck and every other part of your body.'
 		'She writes down the numbers on a piece of paper.'
-		'When she is done she takes out some kind of plastic spear with glas on its end.'
+		'When she is done she takes out some kind of plastic spear with glass on its end.'
 		'"Now for the fun part..."'
 		'She plugs in the electric cable of this device and it begins to hum.'
 		act 'Wait':

+ 1 - 1
locations/nichStudy.qsrc

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '' or $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = 'return':
 			'<font color = red>Nicholas asked you to attend him tonight but you are way too late.</font>'
 			nichGentleclubE1 = 2
 		elseif hour > 18:
-			'<font color = red>You hear the voices of Nicholas and his business contact comming from the other side of the door. You were expected to attend them but now it''s to late.</font>'
+			'<font color = red>You hear the voices of Nicholas and his business contact comming from the other side of the door. You were expected to attend them but now it''s too late.</font>'
 			act 'Return to the hallway':
 				minut += 1
 				gt 'nichApartment'

+ 4 - 4
locations/olu.qsrc

@@ -631,7 +631,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'olunush':
 	act 'Watch the show':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/olu/sex/anushka/nusholu2.jpg"></center>'
-		'With her back still towards him, he takes her bra off and tosses it aside. With that removed he spins her around roughly and shoves her down to her knees. He pulls his cock out and smacks her in the face with it, which only makes her giggles. "Careful you might knock me out with that thi..." Her eyes are glued to his massive dick, before she manages to finish what she was going to say. He shoves his dick in her mouth, she tries to deep throat him but gags and fails to get him all the way in her mouth.'
+		'With her back still towards him, he takes her bra off and tosses it aside. With that removed he spins her around roughly and shoves her down to her knees. He pulls his cock out and smacks her in the face with it, which only makes her giggles. "Careful you might knock me out with that thi..." Her eyes are glued to his massive dick, before she manages to finish what she was going to say. He shoves his dick in her mouth, she tries to deepthroat him but gags and fails to get him all the way in her mouth.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Tight fit':
@@ -654,7 +654,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'olunush':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/olu/sex/anushka/nusholu5.jpg"></center>'
 					'Olu suddenly stands up with Anushka still impaled on his dick. He starts to fall forward but his hands catch her. "EEK!" She cries out in surprise. Then he throws her down on the couch on her face, he grabs one of her legs and pulls it off the couch so she is half laying on the couch while one leg kneels next to the couch. He grabs the bottle of lube from the end table and squirts some onto his dick.'
 					'He kneels down behind her and rubs the lube onto his dick. "You want rough, I give you rough." He says as he scoots up behind her, sticking his dick between her ass cheeks, your sure trying to shove it up her ass.'
-					'She inhales sharply. "Fuck! It''s to big, it''s to big, it''s not going to fit!"'
+					'She inhales sharply. "Fuck! It''s too big, it''s too big, it''s not going to fit!"'
 					'He grabs onto her hip with one hand and keeps her pushed against the couch on her stomach so she has no where to go. "It fit." He says, just as he gives a hard shove forward.'
 					'"AAAAAAHHHH!, FFFFFUUUUCCCCKKKK!" She looks like she is in a great deal of pain, as he starts fucking her ass.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
@@ -745,13 +745,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nusholusvet':
 					'He lifts Anushka off and then rolls off the bed. He motions for the two of you to come to the edge of the bed. "Turn around and bend over."'
 					'You both turn around and get on all fours, as you both do. He grabs a bottle of lube out of the nightstand and squirts some lube on your butt and her''s and then uses one hands on each of you. He rubs the lube around, then sticks one finger up your butt and then another working the lube into your butt really well. Once he is done he squirts some lube on his dick and lubes it up really nice.'
 					*nl
-					'He stands on the bed behind you, your feel the massive head of his cock pressing against your asshole, it takes a moment before you feel it pop inside of you. You hiss a bit in pain, he gently starts fucking your butt, as he does he grabs ahold of your hair and Anushka''s hair with his other hand and pulls on it. Not to hard just enough you feel the tugs. He works his way deeper into your ass, you don''t know how far but it feels like it is about to push your stomach up into your throat.'
+					'He stands on the bed behind you, your feel the massive head of his cock pressing against your asshole, it takes a moment before you feel it pop inside of you. You hiss a bit in pain, he gently starts fucking your butt, as he does he grabs ahold of your hair and Anushka''s hair with his other hand and pulls on it. Not too hard just enough you feel the tugs. He works his way deeper into your ass, you don''t know how far but it feels like it is about to push your stomach up into your throat.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5, 'group'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Anushka''s butt':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/olu/sex/anushka/nusholusvet6.jpg"></center>'
-						'Then he pulls out of you and moves over behind Anushka. In a moment you hear her saying. "It''s to big, it''s to bi.... AAAAAHHH, FFFUUCCCKK! Oh my god, it is so big." You can''t tell if she is in pain or enjoying it, or maybe both. As he fucks her she gets more vocal. "UH, UH, UH... OH!... OH!"'
+						'Then he pulls out of you and moves over behind Anushka. In a moment you hear her saying. "It''s too big, it''s too bi.... AAAAAHHH, FFFUUCCCKK! Oh my god, it is so big." You can''t tell if she is in pain or enjoying it, or maybe both. As he fucks her she gets more vocal. "UH, UH, UH... OH!... OH!"'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5, 'group'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Your turn again':

+ 4 - 4
locations/olutaxi.qsrc

@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'djibril_taxi_sex':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/boy/djibril/taxi_chat.jpg"></center>'
 					'You roll off his lap back onto the seat to put some space between the two of you and you start grabbing your discarded clothes and getting dressed again. He looks at you looking confused, he obviously thought this is what you wanted. "Why did you stop? what''s wrong?."'
-					'You shake your head. "Nothing, I liked making out with you. I just... I can''t this is to much to soon, sorry."'
+					'You shake your head. "Nothing, I liked making out with you. I just... I can''t this is too much too soon, sorry."'
 					'He nods but you can tell he is frustrated and the bulge in his pants is a sure indicator he was really expecting more. Once you are dressed you open the door and climb out. "Sorry." You tell him as you get out and walk away. He gets out behind and closes the door as you walk away.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -505,7 +505,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'olu_taxi_sex_vaginal':
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A55'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/olu/sex/taxi/taxi6.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you lay on your back on the seat, with your legs spread. Olu kneels between your legs and rubs the tip of his dick against your wet slit, he rubs it back and forth until the head of his cock and your pussy lips are nice and wet. Then he slow pushes his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick inside of you, you feel your twat stretching as his monstrous cock invades your body. It leaves you feeling completely full, he starts fucking you slow and steady at first. Not going to deep, but slowly starting to work himself just a little deeper with each stroke.'
+	'As you lay on your back on the seat, with your legs spread. Olu kneels between your legs and rubs the tip of his dick against your wet slit, he rubs it back and forth until the head of his cock and your pussy lips are nice and wet. Then he slow pushes his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick inside of you, you feel your twat stretching as his monstrous cock invades your body. It leaves you feeling completely full, he starts fucking you slow and steady at first. Not going too deep, but slowly starting to work himself just a little deeper with each stroke.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Get fucked':
@@ -600,7 +600,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'olu_taxi_sex_anal':
 			'You grab the lube out of your purse and hand it to him. He takes it and squirts a bit on his dick and some on your asshole. He spreads the lube around really well.'
 		else
 			'With his other hand he rubs your wet twat, until his fingers are nice and wet with your pussy juices and then he uses that to get your asshole and his dick nice and slick.'
-			'His dick slides fairly easy into your gapped hole, you feel your asshole stretching and filling up with his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick. He starts slowly fucking your butt, not to deep, just slow easy short strokes. As your moans turn to pleasure he picks up the pace a little and goes a little deeper, but still fairly gentle letting you get use to his massive cock.'
+			'His dick slides fairly easy into your gapped hole, you feel your asshole stretching and filling up with his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick. He starts slowly fucking your butt, not too deep, just slow easy short strokes. As your moans turn to pleasure he picks up the pace a little and goes a little deeper, but still fairly gentle letting you get use to his massive cock.'
 		end	
 	else
 		'He grabs you in his strong hands and spins you around, still on your hands and knees but facing away from him. You can feel the head of his dick rubbing against your gapping anus. He pushes your head down until it rests on the seat along with your knees.'
@@ -608,7 +608,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'olu_taxi_sex_anal':
 			'You grab the lube out of your purse and hand it to him. He takes it and squirts a bit on his dick and some on your asshole. He spreads the lube around really well.'
 		else
 			'With his other hand he rubs your wet twat, until his fingers are nice and wet with your pussy juices and then he uses that to get your asshole and his dick nice and slick.'
-			'The head of his cock presses against your anus, the pressure building until it painfully pops into your ass, casuing you to hiss in pain. He stops moving at once until he feels you relax, the he starts to slowly fuck your butt. You feel your asshole stretching and filling up with his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick. He doesn''t go to deep, just slow easy short strokes. As your moans turn from pain to pleasure he picks up the pace a little and goes a little deeper, but still fairly gentle letting you get use to his massive cock.'
+			'The head of his cock presses against your anus, the pressure building until it painfully pops into your ass, casuing you to hiss in pain. He stops moving at once until he feels you relax, the he starts to slowly fuck your butt. You feel your asshole stretching and filling up with his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick. He doesn''t go too deep, just slow easy short strokes. As your moans turn from pain to pleasure he picks up the pace a little and goes a little deeper, but still fairly gentle letting you get use to his massive cock.'
 		end	
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'anal'

+ 1 - 1
locations/party_boys.qsrc

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'drink':
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_kuh_2_<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Guys, you poured too much into the glass. I''m drunk already." , you say."'
+		'"Guys, you poured too much into the glass. I''m drunk already.", you say."'
 		'"Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, lets have another." with that, one of the guys puts his arm around you and bares your breasts. The touchy guy is surprisingly nice and you are a little amused by this situation.'
 		if npc_rel['A57'] >= 50: 'You notice Rex in the room...'
 		if npc_rel['A57'] >= 50: act 'Get Rex''s attention': gt 'party_boys', 'Rex_save'

+ 4 - 4
locations/pav_aptcourtev.qsrc

@@ -743,7 +743,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'male_gopnik_beer':
 				'After you drink that beer, you are starting to feel the effects of the beers, but Vitek gets up and pulls you up as well. "It''s time for you to go <<$pcs_nickname>>, you are getting to drunk. So go home and I will see you later." He won''t take no for an answer and escorts you away from them, before turning and going back to join Vasily and Dan himself.'
 				act 'Stop drinking and leave':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 			else
-				'You are starting to feel the effects of the beers but you are having to much fun. So you grab another beer from the collection the boys have, they don''t seem to mind. You keep drinking as you continue to listen to them.'
+				'You are starting to feel the effects of the beers but you are having too much fun. So you grab another beer from the collection the boys have, they don''t seem to mind. You keep drinking as you continue to listen to them.'
 				gs 'willpower', 'drink', 'resist'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 					act 'Stop drinking and leave (<<will_cost>> Willpower)': 
@@ -908,7 +908,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'female_gopnik_beer_1':
 			gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'beer'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/beer' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You are starting to feel the effects of the beers but you are having to much fun. So you grab another beer from the collection the girls have, they don''t seem to mind. You keep drinking as you continue to listen to them.'
+			'You are starting to feel the effects of the beers but you are having too much fun. So you grab another beer from the collection the girls have, they don''t seem to mind. You keep drinking as you continue to listen to them.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'drink', 'resist'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Stop drinking and leave (<<will_cost>> Willpower)': 
@@ -1075,7 +1075,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'female_gopnik_beer_2':
 			gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'beer'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/beer' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You are starting to feel the effects of the beers but you are having to much fun. So you grab another beer from the collection the girls have, they don''t seem to mind. You keep drinking as you continue to listen to them.'
+			'You are starting to feel the effects of the beers but you are having too much fun. So you grab another beer from the collection the girls have, they don''t seem to mind. You keep drinking as you continue to listen to them.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'drink', 'resist'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Stop drinking and leave (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -1245,7 +1245,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'follownush':
 					act 'Eat her':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/complex/eather.jpg"></center>'
-						'Your tongue darts out and licks at her clit. Working it''s way down her pussy, which is soaking wet already. She moans loudly in pleasure, grinding her pussy against your face. Leaving your face wet with her juices, several minutes go by of this. Then she reaches over and pulls a small dildo out of her purse, with out waiting to see what she was going to do with it. You take it from here hand, turn her around and bend her over.'
+						'Your tongue darts out and licks at her clit. Working its way down her pussy, which is soaking wet already. She moans loudly in pleasure, grinding her pussy against your face. Leaving your face wet with her juices, several minutes go by of this. Then she reaches over and pulls a small dildo out of her purse, with out waiting to see what she was going to do with it. You take it from here hand, turn her around and bend her over.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5,  'lesbian', 'exhibitionism'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Dildo her':

+ 1 - 1
locations/pav_complex.qsrc

@@ -434,7 +434,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'garages':
 											gs 'boyStat', 'A154'
 											gs 'stat'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/garage/val4.jpg"></center>'
-											'Once he is sure you are good and wet, he slides his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your warm pussy. Which elicits a moan from both of you, he goes slow and not to deep at first. As he feels you getting wetter and moaning louder as he starts fucking you a little harder and slowly works himself balls deep into your twat.'
+											'Once he is sure you are good and wet, he slides his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your warm pussy. Which elicits a moan from both of you, he goes slow and not too deep at first. As he feels you getting wetter and moaning louder as he starts fucking you a little harder and slowly works himself balls deep into your twat.'
 											gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'unknown'
 											act 'More':
 												cla & *clr

+ 1 - 1
locations/pav_shared_apt.qsrc

@@ -663,7 +663,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cookForGuys':
 	pcs_mood -= 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/kitchen/cook.jpg"></center>'
-	'You prepare three meals, using what you can from the guys food. Its not very healthy but you''re not planning to offer to do their shopping too.'
+	'You prepare three meals, using what you can from the guys'' food. It''s not very healthy but you''re not planning to offer to do their shopping too.'
 	price = price_cook
 
 	act 'Leave the meal':gt 'pav_shared_apt', 'payService'

+ 1 - 1
locations/post_office.qsrc

@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ if $postloc = 'counter':
 	menu_off = 0
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Counter</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/counter.jpg"></center>'
-	'The counter, its boring here.'
+	'The counter, it''s boring here.'
 
 	act 'Leave':$postloc = 'leave' & gt 'post_office'
 

+ 2 - 2
locations/preALT.qsrc

@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Cursed Schoolgirl Start':
 			act 'Take a break':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/alt/tunnel1pre.jpg"></center>'
-				'You sit down on a large stone in the ruins and take a breath. You are starting to get hungry. If its not one thing its another. You stomp your foot in frustration and the floor gives way. You desperately try to hold on to something but everything in reach comes loose and falls down the hole with you. You feel slightly dazed but after a quick check you seem to be uninjured. You seem to be in an underground chamber of some sort. Looking up you see that climbing out is not an option, there is an old gate here but its either locked or rusted shut. Looks like the only way out is the tunnel on the other side of the chamber.'
+				'You sit down on a large stone in the ruins and take a breath. You are starting to get hungry. If it''s not one thing it''s another. You stomp your foot in frustration and the floor gives way. You desperately try to hold on to something but everything in reach comes loose and falls down the hole with you. You feel slightly dazed but after a quick check you seem to be uninjured. You seem to be in an underground chamber of some sort. Looking up you see that climbing out is not an option, there is an old gate here but it''s either locked or rusted shut. Looks like the only way out is the tunnel on the other side of the chamber.'
 				act 'Follow the tunnel':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/alt/tunnel2pre.jpg"></center>'
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Cursed Schoolgirl Start':
 						act 'Examine amulet':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/shared/amuletpre.jpg"></center>'
-							'You take the amulet in your hands and notice its much lighter than it looks and unusually warm for a piece of metal. Its shaped like an antique oil lamp and... is that a penis? As you are about to pocket it, the amulet grows even hotter and zaps you. Oww. You drop it. Screw this, you are out of here.'
+							'You take the amulet in your hands and notice it''s much lighter than it looks and unusually warm for a piece of metal. It''s shaped like an antique oil lamp and... is that a penis? As you are about to pocket it, the amulet grows even hotter and zaps you. Oww. You drop it. Screw this, you are out of here.'
 							act 'Find a way out':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/shared/kotpre.jpg"></center>'

+ 2 - 2
locations/preTG.qsrc

@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'roadPRE':
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/shared/kotpre.jpg"></center>'
 										'You walk together with Igor out of the strange chambers and up the ladder, back to the surface.'
 										*nl
-										'"We must have been down there longer than I thought, its already late. There will only be security on site now so there''s nothing we can do here until the morning, you should go to the hotel." Igor says.'
+										'"We must have been down there longer than I thought, it''s already late. There will only be security on site now so there''s nothing we can do here until the morning, you should go to the hotel." Igor says.'
 										*nl
 										'With a hasty goodbye to Igor, you make your way back to your car.'
 										'<i>Damn</i>, you think, <i>tomorrow''s going to be a stressful day.</i>'
@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'otelPRE':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/tg/otelpre.jpg"></center>'
 	'Your trip to the hotel is quite uneventful compared to your tomb raiding adventure.'
 	*nl
-	'You park your car and go to the receptionist to get a room. There are only double rooms available, but its going on the company card, so that just means you''ll get a bigger room. You swipe your company card and take your room key.'
+	'You park your car and go to the receptionist to get a room. There are only double rooms available, but it''s going on the company card, so that just means you''ll get a bigger room. You swipe your company card and take your room key.'
 	act 'Head upstairs to your room':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/tg/otelpre1.jpg"></center>'

+ 1 - 1
locations/ptu_dush.qsrc

@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos2':
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/gyno/sex/ptu_shower_5.jpg"></center>'
-						'Frightened you jump back and try to cover up but its too late they''ve already blocked your exit and looking down at their pants you clearly see their cocks pressing against the fabric.' 
+						'Frightened you jump back and try to cover up but it''s too late they''ve already blocked your exit and looking down at their pants you clearly see their cocks pressing against the fabric.' 
 						'They look at you with lust in their eyes as they get ready to join you. They quickly get naked and join you in the shower. Before you''re able to react one of them reaches out with his hand and starts playing with your nipple, making you involuntarily moan.'
 						'The guy grabbing you turns to his friend, "Look at this one, she doesn''t seem to mind..."'
 						act 'Give them a handjob':

+ 1 - 1
locations/reks.qsrc

@@ -706,7 +706,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sms':
 						*clr & cla
 						npc_rel['A57'] += 1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/reks/event/phone/smsrex17.jpg"></center>'
-						'You lie back in front of the mirror. You lift your legs up in the air and slide your panties to the side. Then your take a picture of your exposed pussy and send it to Rex.'
+						'You lie back in front of the mirror. You lift your legs up in the air and slide your panties to the side. You then take a picture of your exposed pussy and send it to Rex.'
 						
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 						gs 'stat'

+ 1 - 1
locations/restoranM.qsrc

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		xgt 'restoranM', 'a'
 	end
 
-	act 'Its not funny':
+	act 'It''s not funny':
 		cla
 		loverrelation[lover_number] -= 1
 		xgt 'restoranM', 'a'

+ 1 - 1
locations/salon.qsrc

@@ -2069,7 +2069,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'double_hardcore_massage':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/salon/double.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'"Mmmmm..." you moan around the cock in your mouth while the one behind you slams into you again and again for the hundredth time. Or is it two? Or probably more like four.'
 	*nl
-	'You have no idea how long its been since you started. Twenty minutes? Half an hour? The only thing you know is how much you have been enjoying being pistoned back and forth between these two cocks. And they guys attached to them know exactly what they''re doing. Every thrust fills you up just right, and the one you''ve been sucking on has the perfect shape and flavor for a girl''s enjoyment. You could stay between thes cocks forever...'
+	'You have no idea how long it''s been since you started. Twenty minutes? Half an hour? The only thing you know is how much you have been enjoying being pistoned back and forth between these two cocks. And they guys attached to them know exactly what they''re doing. Every thrust fills you up just right, and the one you''ve been sucking on has the perfect shape and flavor for a girl''s enjoyment. You could stay between thes cocks forever...'
 	*nl
 	'But all good things must come to an end. Eventually one of them says, "Time is almost up ma''am. Would you like us to cum inside you or give you a double facial?"'
 	

+ 1 - 1
locations/scandalicious.qsrc

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/scandalicious/shop.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	'This store is cheap and tacky. The clothing lives up to the name though and you assume they saved a lot of money on fabric.
-	Its not somewhere you''d go with your Mom or let her know you''d even looked in the window but if you want to show off your body there is nowhere better to shop. The staff aren''t judging anyone so it feels relaxed but there is still a mix of those hiding their embarrassment and those exuding confidence.'
+	It''s not somewhere you''d go with your Mom or let her know you''d even looked in the window but if you want to show off your body there is nowhere better to shop. The staff aren''t judging anyone so it feels relaxed but there is still a mix of those hiding their embarrassment and those exuding confidence.'
 	*nl
 	
 	act 'Leave':

+ 2 - 2
locations/selfplay.qsrc

@@ -724,12 +724,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bath_bathtub_suction_dildo_ride':
 			if indorf = 1:
 				'<i>Ahh~! Aaahhhh~! Ahhhh~! Aaaaahhhh~!</i>'
 				*nl
-				'You continue bouncing up and down on your dildo, unwilling to finish your shower while you''re still enjoying yourself. Maybe it''s just the steam in the room but your body feels like its on fire right now and you can''t help but cry out loudly, so happy your family is gone for the weekend.'
+				'You continue bouncing up and down on your dildo, unwilling to finish your shower while you''re still enjoying yourself. Maybe it''s just the steam in the room but your body feels like it''s on fire right now and you can''t help but cry out loudly, so happy your family is gone for the weekend.'
 				$orgasm_txt = 'Pleasure and heat build between your legs until finally you slam yourself all the way down onto your dildo and climax hard all over it. Your walls squeeze tight and you can feel the entire shape of the rubber cock inside you. Legs shaking and splashing bathwater everywhere, you groan loudly and ride out your orgasm while impaled on your dildo.'
 			else
 				'<i>Hnnn~! Hnnnnhhh~! Nnnnn~! Mmmmm~!</i>'
 				*nl
-				'You continue bouncing up and down on your dildo, unwilling to finish your shower while you''re still enjoying yourself. Maybe it''s just the steam in the room but your body feels like its on fire right now and it''s so difficult to not let your voice escape and travel into the hallway.'
+				'You continue bouncing up and down on your dildo, unwilling to finish your shower while you''re still enjoying yourself. Maybe it''s just the steam in the room but your body feels like it''s on fire right now and it''s so difficult to not let your voice escape and travel into the hallway.'
 				$orgasm_txt = 'Pleasure and heat build between your legs until finally you slam yourself all the way down onto your dildo and climax hard all over it. Your walls squeeze tight and you can feel the entire shape of the rubber cock inside you. Legs shaking and splashing bathwater everywhere, you ride out your orgasm while impaled on your dildo taking strained breaths to prevent your voice escaping and let your family know what you''ve been up to.'
 			end
 		else

+ 1 - 1
locations/shop_coco_carmen.qsrc

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Coco Carmen</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/coco/shop.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'If you are happy to push through the tourists Coco has everything a young adult might like to wear. Its a step up from G&M and unless you can afford the boutiques in Old Town you''ll be spending some time buying outfits here.'
+	'If you are happy to push through the tourists Coco has everything a young adult might like to wear. It''s a step up from G&M and unless you can afford the boutiques in Old Town you''ll be spending some time buying outfits here.'
 
 	act 'Leave the coco': minut += 3 & gt 'pav_commercial'
 	

+ 1 - 1
locations/shop_flamingos.qsrc

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Flamingo''s</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/flamingos/shop.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'Flamingos is trendy and modern while still keeping the prices low enough for the large student population on the Island. It mimics the latest fashions for young adults but cuts costs on material and manufacturing. This suits the clients who are likely to grow bored of an outfit before it falls apart and that''s why its always busy.'
+	'Flamingos is trendy and modern while still keeping the prices low enough for the large student population on the Island. It mimics the latest fashions for young adults but cuts costs on material and manufacturing. This suits the clients who are likely to grow bored of an outfit before it falls apart and that''s why it''s always busy.'
 
 	act 'Leave the flamingos': minut += 3 & gt 'liames'
 	

+ 3 - 3
locations/shop_pussycats.qsrc

@@ -527,10 +527,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">Employee Perks</font></center></b>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/clothing/cats_outfits/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
 	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, look here," Nastya approaches you. "I''ve got a nice, new blouse but it got a slight defect. The manager is just going to put it in the <b>70%</b> off discount bin, but maybe you want to take it yourself?"'
-	'The store is selling it for <b>2400 ₽</b> , but you can buy it for <b>720 ₽</b>.'
+	'The store is selling it for <b>2400 ₽</b>, but you can buy it for <b>720 ₽</b>.'
 	if cats_dress[i] = 1:
 		*nl
-		'You look at the outfit and realize its one you already own. "Thanks hun, but I have that same outfit already..."'
+		'You look at the outfit and realize it''s one you already own. "Thanks hun, but I have that same outfit already..."'
 		act 'Finish your shift':gt 'shop_pussycats', 'endwork'
 	else
 		if money >= 720:
@@ -542,7 +542,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 				cats_dress_b[i] = pcs_hips
 				cats_dress_s[i] = 0
 				*nl
-				'You hand over the money for the slightly less than perfect outfit, its not going to last you as long as the stitching has a flaw but you still got quite a bargain.'
+				'You hand over the money for the slightly less than perfect outfit, it''s not going to last you as long as the stitching has a flaw but you still got quite a bargain.'
 				act 'Finish your shift':gt 'shop_pussycats', 'endwork'
 			end
 			act 'Refuse, you don''t need a knock off outfit':gt 'shop_pussycats', 'endwork'

+ 1 - 1
locations/shop_skuas.qsrc

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Skuas</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/boutique/butik.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'This exclusive boutique stands out amongst the rest of Pushkin''s small shops mostly just selling crap to tourists. It shows reverence the each outfit, displaying them with no petty concerns like fitting in more stock or speeding up the selling process. It is beautiful and every outfit is a labour of love. Its going to cost you plenty to shop here.'
+	'This exclusive boutique stands out amongst the rest of Pushkin''s small shops mostly just selling crap to tourists. It shows reverence the each outfit, displaying them with no petty concerns like fitting in more stock or speeding up the selling process. It is beautiful and every outfit is a labour of love. It''s going to cost you plenty to shop here.'
 
 	act 'Leave the boutique': minut += 3 & gt 'torgcentr'
 	

+ 2 - 2
locations/shulga_room.qsrc

@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 		if shulga_whore < daystart:
 			shulga_whore = daystart + 7
 			gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 20
-			'As you walk in, the boys are already laughing. "To late <<$pcs_nickname>>, the whole school now knows what a whore you are. But since you''re here you might as well fuck us like the good little whore you are."'
+			'As you walk in, the boys are already laughing. "Too late <<$pcs_nickname>>, the whole school now knows what a whore you are. But since you''re here you might as well fuck us like the good little whore you are."'
 
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'hard'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -1413,7 +1413,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shulga_lern_sex_yes':
 	'You whimper softy and whisper, "Please Vasily, please teach me."'
 	'He smiles at you. "Ok <<$pcs_nickname>> open your mouth." As he pulls out his dick and begins stroking it.'
 	'His first lesson involves oral sex. You don''t know if you are a straight A student, but from the way he groans in pleasure as you work your mouth on his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> penis, you think you earned a passing grade.'
-	'When he eventually lays you on your back and gently licks at your labia you know longer know what to think. Eventually, he parts your lips with one hand, as his tongue finds you clitoris. It''s almost to much. You let out a desperate cry, and buck you hips burying his face deep between your thighs.'
+	'When he eventually lays you on your back and gently licks at your labia you know longer know what to think. Eventually, he parts your lips with one hand, as his tongue finds you clitoris. It''s almost too much. You let out a desperate cry, and buck you hips burying his face deep between your thighs.'
 	act 'I want you inside me':
 		*clr & cla
 		if lern_imgset = 2 or lern_imgset = 3 or lern_imgset = 4 or lern_imgset = 6 or lern_imgset = 7:

+ 4 - 4
locations/soniadisco.qsrc

@@ -1253,7 +1253,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'walkhome':
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/disco/walkhome2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Once at her door you warn her to take it easy next time. "Just be careful with drinking to much in the future, you really went a overboard tonight."'
+		'Once at her door you warn her to take it easy next time. "Just be careful with drinking too much in the future, you really went a overboard tonight."'
 		'She rolls her eyes. "Stop trying to mother me, I get enough of that at home. It was just a little harmless fun, no one cares." Then she walks into her house leaving you alone outside.'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_residential'
 	end
@@ -1374,7 +1374,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'soniabang':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/disco/gangbang2.jpg"></center>'
-	'Sonia keeps switching which dick she is sucking and which ones she is jerking off. Paulina takes out her phone and starts recording it, making sure to get a good close up of Sonia''s face as she does. Paulina seems pretty amused by all this and offers. "Why are you all just standing around, she has more than one hole." Then looks to Sonia. "Don''t you slut!" Sonia mutters something but it is to hard to tell what she said with a cock in her mouth. The guys don''t need to be told twice, the ones not getting jerked or sucked off start pulling her clothes off, before long she is completely naked.'
+	'Sonia keeps switching which dick she is sucking and which ones she is jerking off. Paulina takes out her phone and starts recording it, making sure to get a good close up of Sonia''s face as she does. Paulina seems pretty amused by all this and offers. "Why are you all just standing around, she has more than one hole." Then looks to Sonia. "Don''t you slut!" Sonia mutters something but it is too hard to tell what she said with a cock in her mouth. The guys don''t need to be told twice, the ones not getting jerked or sucked off start pulling her clothes off, before long she is completely naked.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Try to stop her':
@@ -1660,7 +1660,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'eatsonia':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/home/walkhome/walksex14.jpg"></center>'
-				'The two of you get into a 69 position, she gets on top and almost sits on your face. You start to lick at her pussy at the same time you can feel her licking at your pussy. You are both moaning, the combination of having your pussy eaten out, while you are eaten out another pussy is almost to much.'
+				'The two of you get into a 69 position, she gets on top and almost sits on your face. You start to lick at her pussy at the same time you can feel her licking at your pussy. You are both moaning, the combination of having your pussy eaten out, while you are eaten out another pussy is almost too much.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -5, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1866,7 +1866,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_eaten':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/home/bedroom/strapon/69.jpg"></center>'
 				'You start to feel a little tired and roll off her. "I want to lick your pussy while you lick mine." You tell her. She climbs up and straddles your face now and bends forward to go back to licking your pussy. You lick hers in return, several minutes of this goes by until her body shudders and she has a orgasm, coating your face in her juices.'
 				killvar '$orgasm_or'
-				$orgasm_txt = 'As she starts to orgasm it is to much for you and you feel your own body shake and rock as a orgasm courses through your body as you and Sonia have mutual orgasms.'
+				$orgasm_txt = 'As she starts to orgasm it is too much for you and you feel your own body shake and rock as a orgasm courses through your body as you and Sonia have mutual orgasms.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -5, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'

+ 6 - 6
locations/street_event.qsrc

@@ -508,7 +508,7 @@ if $ARGS[1] = 'main':
 				workDolg = 200000
 				workDolgDay = 7
 				'"It''s stolen."'
-				'"WHAT! But how could this happen! Do you realize, what you have done?! You own me 200,000 <b>₽</b>, bring it to my office, you have until next Friday. If you fail to do so, prepare yourself for a world of hurt."'
+				'"WHAT! But how could this happen! Do you realize, what you have done?! You owe me 200,000 <b>₽</b>, bring it to my office, you have until next Friday. If you fail to do so, prepare yourself for a world of hurt."'
 			else
 				konvert = 0
 				money += 5000
@@ -1661,7 +1661,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'divorce_party':
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/divorcee/d5.jpg"></center>'
 								'The two of them wrap their lips around each side of Yefim''s throbbing cock, sliding up and down, nibbling and sucking on every veiny inch. You feel the heat between your legs growing as you watch one focus on the reddened tip while the other kisses a trail down to his balls. He throws his head back and lets out a grunt, one of his hands gripping the back of Eva''s head as she laps up the leaking precum.'
 								*nl
-								'Overwhelmed by your lust, you rub your legs together, itching to touch yourself. You look around the room and are relieved to see Alla had the same idea as you as she''s sitting down with her legs spread, playing with herself while watching her friends. Without hesitation, you slide your own hand between your legs and shiver as your fingers glide along your slick folds, spreading them to find your clit. You follow the same pace as Eva and Marta, when they slowly kiss along his length, flicking the tips of their tongue along his glans, you take your time with long, hard against your clit. As soon as you see he''s had enough of their teasing and forces Marta to deep throat him fast and hard, fucking her mouth while Eva watches, you begin fingering yourself frantically. You''re edging closer and closer but you get an amazing idea when you see him throw his head back and groan loudly.'
+								'Overwhelmed by your lust, you rub your legs together, itching to touch yourself. You look around the room and are relieved to see Alla had the same idea as you as she''s sitting down with her legs spread, playing with herself while watching her friends. Without hesitation, you slide your own hand between your legs and shiver as your fingers glide along your slick folds, spreading them to find your clit. You follow the same pace as Eva and Marta, when they slowly kiss along his length, flicking the tips of their tongue along his glans, you take your time with long, hard against your clit. As soon as you see he''s had enough of their teasing and forces Marta to deepthroat him fast and hard, fucking her mouth while Eva watches, you begin fingering yourself frantically. You''re edging closer and closer but you get an amazing idea when you see him throw his head back and groan loudly.'
 									act 'Sit on his face':
 									*clr & cla
 									minut += 15
@@ -1748,14 +1748,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape':
 				'As he roughly fucks your twat, grunting with each one of his balls deep thrust into you, he says. "Don''t worry slut, I don''t any bastards either, lucky for us both you have another hole." Just as he says that he pulls out of your pussy and then shoves it up your asshole, causing you to hiss in pain again.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'rough', 'rape'
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'To much pain':
+				act 'too much pain':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/street/sex/rape6.jpg"></center>'
 					'He forces his prick balls deep into your ass and starts hammering away, just as roughly as he was fucking your pussy. He starts grunting a bit louder and faster, at least it sounds like he is nearly finished and this nightmare can finally be over. You think to yourself as tears stream down your face, from the pain and violation happening to you.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'rough', 'rape'
 					gs 'stat'
-					act 'To much pain':
+					act 'too much pain':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut +=3
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -1783,7 +1783,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/street/sex/rape8.jpg"></center>'
-			'He pins you between himself and the wall the ground. You hear him spit and then his other fingers slightly wet from his spit work there way into your ass, just getting it a little wet. Without another word he shoves his dick painfully into your asshole, you hiss in pain, as his cock rips it''s way into your mostly unlubricated ass. He roughly fucks your asshole, grunting with each one of his balls deep thrust into you. "Yeah you like this don''t you slut, all you sluts love getting fucked." You do your best to endure the pain as he roughly fucks your butt.'
+			'He pins you between himself and the wall the ground. You hear him spit and then his other fingers slightly wet from his spit work there way into your ass, just getting it a little wet. Without another word he shoves his dick painfully into your asshole, you hiss in pain, as his cock rips its way into your mostly unlubricated ass. He roughly fucks your asshole, grunting with each one of his balls deep thrust into you. "Yeah you like this don''t you slut, all you sluts love getting fucked." You do your best to endure the pain as he roughly fucks your butt.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'rough', 'rape'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Submit':
@@ -1800,7 +1800,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape':
 					'He starts grunting a bit louder and faster, at least it sounds like he is nearly finished and this nightmare can finally be over. You think to yourself as tears stream down your face, from the pain and violation happening to you.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'rough', 'rape'
 					gs 'stat'
-					act 'To much pain':
+					act 'too much pain':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut +=3
 						gs 'stat'

+ 1 - 1
locations/stripclub.qsrc

@@ -264,7 +264,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forwoman':
 			if stripfotorand < 2:
 				minifoto = 0
 				stripdolg = 1
-				'You fail to hide the camera well enough and get spotted out by the security guard. He grabs you by the hand and leads you to his office, already waiting there for you is the owner, he takes your camera, and says that you own him 50,000 <b>₽</b> for snooping around and until you pay up you are barred from the club.'
+				'You fail to hide the camera well enough and get spotted out by the security guard. He grabs you by the hand and leads you to his office, already waiting there for you is the owner, he takes your camera, and says that you owe him 50,000 <b>₽</b> for snooping around and until you pay up you are barred from the club.'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt 'stripclub', 'start'
 			elseif stripfotorand >= 2 and stripfotorand < 6:

+ 1 - 1
locations/tatiana_lab.qsrc

@@ -427,7 +427,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Tatiana':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/tatiana/magiclook.jpg"></center>'
 					'Tatiana lowers her glasses and stares deeply into your eyes. It feels like time just stops being a thing and you are floating.'
-					'It seems very soon afterwards when you snap back to reality but the big clock on the lab wall tells you its been 30 minutes.'
+					'It seems very soon afterwards when you snap back to reality but the big clock on the lab wall tells you it''s been 30 minutes.'
 					'Your body has changed much as Tatiana said it would and she is already busy checking nothing went wrong.'
 					act 'Continue': gt 'tatiana_lab', 'Tatiana'
 				end

+ 1 - 1
locations/tatiana_missions.qsrc

@@ -671,7 +671,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2F':
 	'"Tatiana... are you okay?"'
 	'She doesn''t answer you, just licks her lips before giving you an incredible sloppy kiss. Her tongue plays with yours and... then it goes past your tonsils! You try to push Tatiana away, but your limbs go numb as her tongue worms its way down your throat.'
 	'"<i>Shh,</i> it''s okay, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Don''t fight it! You won''t remember this!"'
-	'Tatiana''s voice resonates inside your head, and you can only lie there paralyzed, as the now freezing tongue burrows it''s way along your insides and towards your brain, where it metastasizes into a million tendrils that begin to do... something.'
+	'Tatiana''s voice resonates inside your head, and you can only lie there paralyzed, as the now freezing tongue burrows its way along your insides and towards your brain, where it metastasizes into a million tendrils that begin to do... something.'
 	'"<i>Mmm...</i> So good! What a wonderful taste, <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
 	act 'Where are you?':gt'tatiana_missions','mission2sex'
 end

+ 2 - 2
locations/taxi.qsrc

@@ -306,7 +306,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'trip':
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/taxi/sex/taxialleyanal.jpg"></center>'
 							'You hear him spit and you look back over your shoulder at him, you see him rubbing his spit on the tip of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock. He comes up behind you and rubs the tip of his dick against your anus for a moment to make sure he is lined up. Then he pushes his unlubricated <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock in your ass, you wince in pain as it feels like your asshole just caught on fire.'
 							'He struggles a bit to work his dick into you, but with your hips firmly against the side of his car you have no where to go and he finally shoves himself balls deep in you. You cry out in pain, you turn to look at him to ask him to be gentler but the hard cruel look in his eyes stop you before you even ask. You realize he would never be gentle with you, he is enjoying hurting you.'
-							'He starts pounding your ass hard without mercy, his hips slamming against your ass driving your hips painfully against the metal of his car. You close your eyes against the pain and try to rub your clit as a distraction, but the pain is to much and you feel hot tears running down your cheeks, smearing your makeup. He repeatedly pulls nearly all the way out and then slams violently back in, slamming your hips against the metal of the car, each time leaving you to whimper in pain.'
+							'He starts pounding your ass hard without mercy, his hips slamming against your ass driving your hips painfully against the metal of his car. You close your eyes against the pain and try to rub your clit as a distraction, but the pain is too much and you feel hot tears running down your cheeks, smearing your makeup. He repeatedly pulls nearly all the way out and then slams violently back in, slamming your hips against the metal of the car, each time leaving you to whimper in pain.'
 							'You''re certain he is making this as painful for you as he can. Biting your lower lip as you do your best to endure his furious pounding.'
 							'Once he notices your tears, he grabs you roughly by your hair and painfully twists your head to look at him as he continues to pound you in the ass. You can see an evil grin on his face, you can tell he is really enjoying hurting you. "Go ahead and cry bitch, I like it when bitches cry. Maybe this will teach you not to try and treat a mans job like a game."'
 							'In what seems like an eternity as he fucks your ass raw, even though your asshole feels looser now and rubbing your clit is helping, it still feels like your asshole is on fire. But a part of you is also loving it despite the pain, a part of you is loving being used as a whore in some dirty back alleyway. Suddenly he stops, with is dick buried balls deep in your ass as he grunts. You realizing he is cumming inside of you, you feel his spurts of cum filling up your ass.'
@@ -346,7 +346,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'trip':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/taxi/sex/taxialleyanal.jpg"></center>'
 				'You hear him spit and you look back over your shoulder at him, you see him rubbing his spit on the tip of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock. He comes up behind you and rubs the tip of his dick against your anus for a moment to make sure he is lined up. Then he pushes his unlubricated <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock in your ass, you wince in pain as it feels like your asshole just caught on fire.'
 				'He struggles a bit to work his dick into you, but with your hips firmly against the side of his car you have no where to go and he finally shoves himself balls deep in you. You cry out in pain, you turn to look at him to ask him to be gentler but the hard cruel look in his eyes stop you before you even ask. You realize he would never be gentle with you, he is enjoying hurting you.'
-				'He starts pounding your ass hard without mercy, his hips slamming against your ass driving your hips painfully against the metal of his car. You close your eyes against the pain and try to rub your clit as a distraction, but the pain is to much and you feel hot tears running down your cheeks, smearing your makeup. He repeatedly pulls nearly all the way out and then slams violently back in, slamming your hips against the metal of the car, each time leaving you to whimper in pain.'
+				'He starts pounding your ass hard without mercy, his hips slamming against your ass driving your hips painfully against the metal of his car. You close your eyes against the pain and try to rub your clit as a distraction, but the pain is too much and you feel hot tears running down your cheeks, smearing your makeup. He repeatedly pulls nearly all the way out and then slams violently back in, slamming your hips against the metal of the car, each time leaving you to whimper in pain.'
 				'You''re certain he is making this as painful for you as he can. Biting your lower lip as you do your best to endure his furious pounding.'
 				'Once he notices your tears, he grabs you roughly by your hair and painfully twists your head to look at him as he continues to pound you in the ass. You can see an evil grin on his face, you can tell he is really enjoying hurting you. "Go ahead and cry bitch, I like it when bitches cry. Maybe this will teach you not to try and treat a mans job like a game."'
 				'In what seems like an eternity as he fucks your ass raw, even though your asshole feels looser now and rubbing your clit is helping, it still feels like your asshole is on fire. But a part of you is also loving it despite the pain, a part of you is loving being used as a whore in some dirty back alleyway. Suddenly he stops, with is dick buried balls deep in your ass as he grunts. You realizing he is cumming inside of you, you feel his spurts of cum filling up your ass.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/tobiQW.qsrc

@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 	*clr
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Tatianas'' Laboratory</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/lab/lab.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Just let yourself in. Its not like this is a laboratory with sensitive equipment in it." Tatiana is sarcastically lamenting Reinhold.'
+	'"Just let yourself in. It''s not like this is a laboratory with sensitive equipment in it." Tatiana is sarcastically lamenting Reinhold.'
 	'"Well maybe if you hadn''t been playing games we would have both talked to <<$pcs_firstname>> and sorted this out already."'
 	'Gustav puts his arm around you and makes sure your OK while Tatiana and Reinhold bicker like an old married couple.'
 	'Eventually they stop long enough to see you and remember what they are here for.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/train_incidental.qsrc

@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '9':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/ride.jpg" ></center>'
-	'A fly gets stuck in the carriage, its surprisingly noisy and you spend 5 minutes trying to shoo it out of the little vent window. Finally you get it out and the 5 other people in the carriage jokingly applaud obviously having watched the whole thing. Your face turn red as you return to your seat.'
+	'A fly gets stuck in the carriage, it''s surprisingly noisy and you spend 5 minutes trying to shoo it out of the little vent window. Finally you get it out and the 5 other people in the carriage jokingly applaud obviously having watched the whole thing. Your face turn red as you return to your seat.'
 	act 'Complete your journey': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/webcam_site.qsrc

@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ $webcam_help = {
 $webcam_index = {
 	!act 'Exit': gt 'Komp', 'start'	
 	if week < 6 and hour < 19 or week >= 6 and hour < 15:
-		if week < 6 and hour >= 7 and hour < 19: 'It is too early to make a show, Most spectators at work.'
+		if week < 6 and hour >= 7 and hour < 19: 'It is too early to make a show, most spectators are at work.'
 		if week >= 6 and hour >= 7 and hour < 15: 'It is too early to make a show, most viewers still sleep off after the working week.'	
 		if hour >= 0 and hour < 7: 'Even so late. You do not want to scare away all their viewers sleepy views.'	
 		if pav_slut <= 50: 'I hesitate to get up... every. Let just before the camera.'

+ 2 - 2
locations/yarik.qsrc

@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'yaqw':
 				cla
 				money += 1500
 				uborkayar += 1
-				'"Its OK I don''t want to make you late. Here is 1500 <b>₽</b> for a job well done. Come again at the same time any evening if you want the work."'
+				'"It''s OK I don''t want to make you late. Here is 1500 <b>₽</b> for a job well done. Come again at the same time any evening if you want the work."'
 				act 'Leave':gt 'city_center'
 			end
 
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 		*clr
 		minut += 5
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/yaroslav/sex/rabotu_4.jpg" ></center>'
-		'Apparently deciding to check how I am coping, Yaroslav stands in the doorway of the bathroom, watching you. As you clean you start to imagine the situation becoming more sexual and fantisize about seducing Yaroslav.'
+		'Apparently deciding to check how you are coping, Yaroslav stands in the doorway of the bathroom, watching you. As you clean you start to imagine the situation becoming more sexual and fantisize about seducing Yaroslav.'
 
 		act 'Carry on cleaning':
 			cla