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[text edit] clean up VolkovHome

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      locations/VolkovHome.qsrc

+ 4 - 4
locations/VolkovHome.qsrc

@@ -30,9 +30,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Hallway 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/volkovhome/rooms/hallway2.jpg"></center>'
 	if NikoEv = 18:
-		'This is the second floor hallway where the bathroom, Niko''s room and Yurik''s room is located.'
+		'This is the second floor hallway where the bathroom, Niko''s room and Yurik''s room are located.'
 	else
-		'This is the second floor hallway where the <a href="exec:gt ''VolkovHome'', ''Bathroom''">Bathroom</a>, <a href="exec:gt ''VolkovHome'', ''Niko Bedroom''">Niko''s room</a> and <a href="exec:gt ''VolkovHome'', ''Yurik Bedroom''">Yurik''s room</a> is located.'
+		'This is the second floor hallway where the <a href="exec:gt ''VolkovHome'', ''Bathroom''">bathroom</a>, <a href="exec:gt ''VolkovHome'', ''Niko Bedroom''">Niko''s room</a> and <a href="exec:gt ''VolkovHome'', ''Yurik Bedroom''">Yurik''s room</a> are located.'
 	end
 
 	act 'Head downstairs':gt 'NikoEv2', 'Yurik BJ'
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bathroom':
 	menu_off = 0
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/volkovhome/rooms/bathroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'This bathroom seems rather clean, and has two towels, two bathrobes, a sink, a toilet, a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a>, and a bathtub.'
+	'This bathroom seems rather clean and has two towels, two bathrobes, a sink, a toilet, a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a>, and a bathtub.'
 
 	act 'Quick wash (0:10)':gt 'NikoDates', 'Quick Wash'
 
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Quick Wash':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><h4><font color="blue">Bathroom</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/movies/restroom/facecleanse.jpg"></center>'
-	'You grab a few paper towels then approach the sink to clean yourself, as thoroughly, as possible while taking a few seconds to enjoy a splash of warm water on your face, leaving you feeling refreshed as you finish up and walk away from the sink.'
+	'You grab a few paper towels then approach the sink to clean yourself as thoroughly as possible. You take a few seconds to enjoy a splash of warm water on your face, leaving you feeling refreshed as you finish up and walk away from the sink.'
 
 	act 'Dry off':
 		if NikoEv = 5: