Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/Kevin_Smarts/glife

locations/AlbFatherQW.qsrc

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ act 'Speak with Chernov':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/image_needed.png"></center>'
 	'Chernov pulls you aside. Upon closer examination, you notice he is holstering a gun under his left armpit. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, I know that you are a member of Barlovskaya''s entourage. I also know that this is just a front. Their criminal activities are about to be put on hold, with or without your collaboration."
-	"Our little talk here is quite important. When this case starts getting coverage, the whole town will know about the Starlets''s secret. We''ll have to inform your parents and your school that you were an illegal prostitute for Barlovskaya. You can testify anonymously like the other girls and keep your name out of it if you wish."'
+	"Our little talk here is quite important. When this case starts getting coverage, the whole town will know about the Starlets'' secret. We''ll have to inform your parents and your school that you were an illegal prostitute for Barlovskaya. You can testify anonymously like the other girls and keep your name out of it if you wish."'
 
 	act 'Ask him what he means':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ act 'Speak with Chernov':
 				minut += 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/image_needed.png"></center>'
-				'"What is so important about Albina that the Security Service are involved?" you ask. Chernov raises a brow. "You''re a smart girl, huh? You know Boris Barlovskaya, her father? He''s a retired police officer who served as the chief of police for years." In his retirement, we believe he has formed connections with the local criminal syndicate and is bribing his successor to block any investigations."'
+				'"What is so important about Albina that the Security Service are involved?" you ask. Chernov raises a brow. "You''re a smart girl, huh? You know Boris Barlovskaya, her father? He''s a retired police officer who served as the chief of police for years. In his retirement, we believe he has formed connections with the local criminal syndicate and is bribing his successor to block any investigations."'
                 '"Your friend is our way in. All we need to do is prove that Albina''s dance troupe is actually a front for illegal prostitution. We need your statement Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
 				if pcs_intel >= 75:
 					act 'Ask about Albina''s involvement':

locations/Club2.qsrc

@@ -9,9 +9,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet1':
 	gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'You went into the booth and closed the door. The walls are covered with obscene graffiti in the walls and booths carved strange round holes. Sitting on the toilet you hear what that noise in the next stall. Through the hole in the wall you looked someone''s eyes.'
-	'In a hole in the wall squeezed fat cock. Lustful voice said, "here''s a yum yum, baby."'
-	'This is so not surprisingly, that you do not believe in the reality of what is happening to touch the finger member. It is hard and hot.'
+	'You went into the booth and closed the door. The walls are covered with obscene graffiti, and holes are carved in opposite walls. Sitting on the toilet you hear a noise coming from the next stall, and then someone''s eye appears at the hole.'
+	'The next thing you know, a cock is pushed through the hole. A lustful voice says, "here''s a treat for you, baby."'
+	'This is so unexpected, that you hardly believe any of this is real, as you tentatively touch their member. It is hard and hot.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'club', 'inside'
 
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet1':
 		pcs_throat += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory1.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'You lean against a member, it''s so big, warm and solid, you licked it, then again and again.'
+		'This is so surreal, but you lean closer to their member and impulsively find yourself licking it, again and again.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -33,8 +33,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet1':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory2.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'You bows member lips and start sucking it, trying to take it as deep as possible.'
-			'Suddenly, in your mouth and poured hot tart liquid.'
+			'You wrap your lips around the head and start sucking, trying to take it as deep as possible.'
+			'Suddenly, the reality of the situation comes flooding back into your head - and a warm liquid comes flooding into your mouth.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -47,8 +47,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet1':
 				money += 1000
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory3.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'You dial a mouthful of sperm, and then swallow it, sperm is not tasty, sticky and sharp taste.'
-				'A male voice telling you - excellent crumb, the money you deserve, a member of the hole and the hole disappears pushes 1,000 RUB.'
+				'You gather a mouthful of sperm, and then swallow it. Their sperm has a sticky and sharp taste which makes you grimace.'
+				'A man''s voice tells you - "That was fucking great, here, you deserve it." and then 1,000 RUB are pushed through the hole.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -63,8 +63,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet1':
 				money += 500
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory3.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'You dial a mouthful of sperm, the sperm is not tasty, sticky and sharp, you spit it on the floor.'
-				'A male voice telling you - excellent crumb, the money you deserve, a member of the hole and the hole disappears and is replaced by 500 RUB.'
+				'You gather a mouthful of sperm, but the sticky and sharp taste overwhelms you, and you spit it on the floor.'
+				'A man''s voice tells you - "Here, your money." and then 500 RUB are pushed through the hole.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
-	'You pee sitting on the toilet and began to wipe your vagina with toilet paper. Apparently you pressed too hard because you embraced the thrill of touching between the legs.'
+	'You pee sitting on the toilet and begin to wipe with toilet paper. Apparently you pressed too hard, as you feel a thrill coming from between the legs.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 3 
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -93,9 +93,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/mast/tomas.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'You caress his fingers swollen pussy until you orgasm does not cover.'
-		'After orgasm, you take it easy, but hear from the next stall pant, look at the wall you see that someone is peeking through the hole located in the wall.'
-		'The man behind the wall and realized that found giggled, great show. Eye of the holes in the wall and disappeared into it squeezed 500 RUB.'
+		'You caress swollen pussy with your fingers until you orgasm enthusiastically.'
+		'After orgasm, you catch your breath, but then notice someone is peeking at you through a hole in the wall.'
+		'The man behind the wall realises he has been caught, and giggles that you put on a great show. Suddenly the eye disappears, and 500 rubles are pushed through the hole.'
 
 		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 		gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 5, 'exhibitionism'
@@ -108,8 +108,8 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet2':
 	*clr & cla
-	'You sit in a booth and hear someone come into the toilet after you and doors of adjacent booths closing. You realize there is two of them.'
-	'Voice from the next stall tells you - do not be afraid baby, we will not hurt you, on the contrary, we will give you some delicious candy with cream filling.'
+	'You sit in a booth and hear both adjacent doors closing as two others enter.'
+	'A voice from the next stall tells you - "Don''t be afraid baby, we won''t hurt you! On the contrary, we will give you some delicious candy with extra cream filling.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'club', 'inside'
 
@@ -118,8 +118,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet2':
 		slutiness += 10
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory4.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'On both sides of your booth through holes in the walls climbed members. Voice on the wall said, come on, baby, come on, we''re fed.'
-		'You took both members and began to caress them, then bent over to one of the members and took it into your mouth.'
+		'On both sides of your booth cocks poke through holes in the wall. The same voice says, "Come on, baby, come on, feeding time".'
+		'You take both members and begin to caress them, then bend over to one and take it into your mouth.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'group'
@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet2':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory6.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
 				'Finally one of the men finishes in your mouth.'
-				'You lick and start to finish processing the second in turn.'
+				'You lick it up and turn all your attention to the other.'
 				
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -149,16 +149,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet2':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory7.jpg"></center>'
 					*nl
-					'The second man also comes in your mouth.'
-					'You swallow a mouthful and wipe your face, but semen is smeared all over it.'
+					'Before long, the second man also comes in your mouth.'
+					'You swallow a mouthful and wipe your face, but find semen smeared all over it.'
 					
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 					
 					if rand(1, 100) > pcs_horny:
-						pcs_horny += 10 & 'You were not satisfied.'
+						pcs_horny += 10 & 'You were not satisfied - after all, they were only in your mouth!'
 						$orgasm_or = 'no'
 					else
-						pcs_horny = 0 & 'Orgasm washes over you.'
+						pcs_horny = 0 & 'Even though they only fucked your mouth, you feel an orgasm wash over you from the sheer depravity of the situation.'
 						$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					end
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -167,8 +167,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet2':
 						cla
 						money += 2000
 						TQuest = 3
-						'Pleased voice says from behind the wall - "You''re a great pacifier, I think you''ve earned a reward."'
-						'2,000 RUB pokes through the hole in the wall.'
+						'A pleased voice says from behind the wall - "You were great, I think you''ve earned a reward."'
+						'2,000 RUB pokes through the hole.'
 
 						guy += 2
 						swallow += 2
@@ -186,7 +186,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet2':
 						if pornstudio = 0:
 							act 'Continue':
 								pornstudio = 2
-								'A male voice says - "Some work for you. Take the card, come if you want to have fun and make money."'
+								'A male voice says "I have some more work for you."'
+								'He pushes a card through the hole and says "Come find me at my studio if you want to have fun and make more money."'
 
 								act 'Leave':gt 'club', 'inside'
 							end
@@ -200,5 +201,4 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet2':
 	end
 end
 
---- Club2 ---------------------------------
-
+--- Club2 ---------------------------------

locations/Peterroom.qsrc

@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start_door':
 		if petersexday < 1:
 			petersexday += 1
 			'Peter opens the door.'
-			'"Come in and get changed."'
+			'Come in and get changed.'
 
 			act 'Enter the apartment':gt 'peterroom', 'start'
 		else
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	if peter > 0 :
 		peterrand = rand(1, 2)
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/9.jpg"></center>'
-		'You get undressed and lock a collar around your neck. You hear Peter in the next room. "Who''s my whore?"'
+		'You get undressed and fix your collar around your neck. You hear Peter in the next room. "Who''s my whore?"'
 
 		act 'I am, Master.':
 			petersex = petersex + 1
@@ -63,21 +63,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		petersexday += 1
 		minut += 10
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you start to undress, he puts a collar down in front of you. It''s a narrow strip of leather with space for a leash to be attached.'
+		'As you start to undress, Peter walks into the room, a multi-tailed whip in one hand and a collar in the other.'
+		'He puts the collar down in front of you. It''s a broad strip of leather with a ring at the front where a leash can be attached.'
 
 		act 'Put it on' :
 			*clr
 			cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You put the collar on and Peter strokes you gently on the cheek. Then, without warning, pulls his hand back and slaps you hard. "Lustful girl! Stand up and turn around - hands behind your back!"'
-			'You quickly do as he says, feeling cold metal closing around your wrists.'
+			'You eagerly put the collar on and Peter strokes you gently on the cheek, but then suddenly pulls his hand back and slaps you.'
+			'"Lustful girl! Stand up and turn around - hands behind your back!"'
+			'You do as he says and feel leather cuffs being fastened around your wrists.'
 
 			if analplugin = 1 :
 				analplugin = 0
 				'"What do we have here?" Peter grips the end of the butt plug sticking out of your ass, and eases it out.'
 			end
 
-			act 'Submit yourself':
+			act 'Smile':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -89,16 +91,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					*clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/4.jpg"></center>'
 					'Peter unbuttons his pants and pulls out his 25cm cock. He grabs you by the hair and shoves the head in your mouth. You obediently wrap your lips around it, then begin to suck and caress it with your tongue, feeling it grow and strain inside your mouth.'
-
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 					gs 'stat'
 					
-					act 'Continue':
+					act 'Continue' :
 						cla
 						*clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/5.jpg"></center>'
-						'Peter pushes you onto the bed and pushes your legs up to your chest before tightly binding them and your hands together. He then inserts his member into your pussy and starts fucking you hard. After a few minutes, he stops and pulls his cock out of you, unties you and then shoves you to the floor. He walks across the room, turns and says "Crawl to me, bitch!"'
-                        gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
+						'Peter pushes you onto the bed and presses your legs up to your chest before binding your hand cuffs behind them.'
+						'With some impatience, he climbs onto the bed and thrusts his member into your pussy, fucking you like a mindless doll. After a few minutes, he stops and pulls his cock out of you, unties you and then shoves you to the floor.'
+						'He walks across the room, turns and says, "Crawl to me, bitch!"'
+						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 						gs 'stat'
 					
 						act 'Crawl' :gt 'peterroom', 'klap'
@@ -113,9 +116,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/4_1.jpg"></center>'
-						'"You need to be punished!" He rounds the table and forces you on your knees with your ass high in the air. You squeal when he shoves a butt plug deep into your ass before he starts delivering several stinging smacks to your ass cheeks, alternating cheeks with each strike. He counts the strikes aloud, ignoring your pained sobs.'
+						'"You need to be punished!" Peter rounds the table and forces you on your knees with your ass high in the air. You squeal when he shoves a butt plug deep into your ass, but it gets worse. He reaches for his whip, and starts flogging your ass, alternating cheeks. He counts the strikes aloud, ignoring your sobs as the leather tails burn across your raw ass.'
 						'"Beg me to fuck you, whore!"'
-                        'Please fuck me, Master! Please! Fuck me like the dirty little whore I am!'
+						'Please fuck me, Master! Please! Fuck me like the dirty little whore I am!'
 						act 'Continue' :gt 'peterroom', 'klap'
 					end
 				else
@@ -133,9 +136,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'klap':
 	*clr
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/6.jpg"></center>'
-	'Peter puts you on a leash and leads you into the bedroom. He pushes you onto the huge bed and securely ties your hands and feet before fastening a ball gag into your mouth.'
-	'"I love you <<$pcs_nickname>>, especially when you moan, but when you''re allowed to talk, you start spouting nonsense. So I think you''re better off gagged.'
-
+	'Peter puts you on a leash and leads you into the bedroom. He pushes you onto the huge bed and ties your hands and feet to the headboard, before fastening a ball gag into your mouth.'
+	'"I love it when you moan, <<$pcs_nickname>>, but when you''re allowed to talk, you start spouting nonsense. So I think you''re better off gagged.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub', 'bound'
 	gs 'stat'
 					
@@ -143,7 +145,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'klap':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/7.jpg"></center>'
-		'Peter spreads your legs and bears down on you from above. "Let''s see how well your sweet ass opens for me." he says'
+		'Peter spreads your legs and bears down on you from above. "Let''s see how well your sweet ass opens for me," he says'
 
 		if analplugin = 1 :
 			analplugin = 0
@@ -151,14 +153,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'klap':
 		end
 
 		', and positions his huge erection against your asshole, half-entering with the first thrust. You gasp in pain, moaning into the gag. You can''t wait for him to bury himself in your ass completely. Peter sees your reaction and begins to fuck your ass, penetrating deeper with each stroke, until his dick is completely buried inside you and his balls slap hard against your buttocks. He fucks you so hard that your knees start to shake, and pussy juices trickle down your ass.'
-        gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub'
+		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 					
 		act 'Moan again':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/8.jpg"></center>'
 			'He continues to fuck you hard and fast, then slows the rhythm, finishing with several sharp uneven thrusts that fill your insides with a hot stream of cum.'
-            gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub'
+			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 		
 			if pcs_ass < 25:pcs_ass += 1
@@ -169,7 +171,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'klap':
 				$orgasm_txt = 'A pleasant sensation surges within you and an orgasm washes over you, juices spraying from your pussy as you moan loudly into the gag.'
 			end
 
-			'Your ass makes a loud squelching noise when he pulls his dick out. Peter sits on the bed, breathing heavily while you remain bound, his cum slowly leaking from your ruined asshole.'
+			'Your ass makes a loud squelching noise when he pulls his dick out. Peter sits on the bed, breathing heavily while you remain bound, his cum slowly leaking from your asshole.'
 			
 			act 'Relax' :gt 'peterroom', 'end'
 		end
@@ -182,7 +184,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 	minut += 30
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/vanroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'"You were great." Peter says, smacking you on the ass. After a few minutes, he picks you up and carries you to the bathroom, where you shower together.'
+	'"You were great." Peter says, smacking you on the ass. After a few minutes, he picks you up and carries you to the bathroom, where you take a bath together.'
 
 	act 'Leave' :
 		cla
@@ -190,7 +192,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 		peter += 1
 		minut += 20
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/mash.jpg"></center>'
-		'You walk down to the front yard together, and Peter starts the car. He kisses you on the lips and says "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you really brighten up my lonely, dull existence. For me, your presence is like a light in the darkness, or a breath of fresh air. I need to leave for now, but I truly hope to see you against soon." He starts the car. "Oh, do you need a lift?" he suddenly asks.'
+		'Leaving his apartment, Peter grabs his keys, planning to head out too. You walk down to the yard together, and when you reach his car, Peter leans in to kiss you on the lips.'
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you really brighten up my lonely existence. Your appearance is like a light in the dark - a breath of fresh air." He smiles, stroking your cheek. "I need to leave for now, but I hope I can see you against soon."'
+		'Peter slides into his car and starts the engine, but just as he''s about to drive off, he suddenly calls to you. "Forgive my rudeness, but do you need a lift somewhere?"'
 			
 		act 'To the city center':
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -208,15 +212,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'd1':
 	*clr
 	if pcs_ass < 25:pcs_ass += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/d1-1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Peter ties your hands behind your back, then lifts you up by the hips, placing you on a hook.'
-
+	'Peter binds your torso and hands, then lifts you up by the hips, hanging your bound form from a hook.'
+	
 	act 'Suck his fingers':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/d1-2.jpg"></center>'
 		'Peter grabs your head and shoves all of his fingers into your mouth, forcing you to suck on them.'
-		'After a few seconds of you sucking and gagging on his fingers, he withdraws them and moves around behind you.'
-
+		'After a few seconds of you sucking and gagging on his fingers, he withdraws them and moves around behind you.'     
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		
@@ -229,7 +232,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'd1':
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 		
-			act 'Submit yourself':
+			act 'Moan':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/d1-4.jpg"></center>'
@@ -238,14 +241,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'd1':
 				if pcs_horny >= 100:
 					analorgasm += 1
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
-					'He continues to fuck you hard and fast and you soon feel an intense orgasm washing over you, juices spraying from your pussy as his warm cum fills your ass.'
+					'He continues to fuck you hard and fast and you soon feel an intense orgasm washing over you, juices squirting from your pussy as his warm cum fills your ass.'
 					
 				elseif pcs_horny < 100:
 					$orgasm_or = 'no'
-					'He suddenly slows the rhythm, finishing with several sharp uneven thrusts that fill your ass with a hot load of cum.'
-					
+					'He suddenly slows the rhythm, finishing with several sharp uneven thrusts that fill your ass with a hot load of cum.'					
 				end
-
+				
 				'Your ass makes a loud squelching noise when he pulls his dick out. Peter sits on the bed, breathing heavily while you remain kneeling with your ass in the air, his cum trickling down your leg.'
 
 				act 'Further' :gt 'peterroom', 'end'
@@ -259,6 +261,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'd2':
 	*clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/d2-1.jpg"></center>'
 	'Peter forces you on your knees, then lifts your head and thrusts his cock into your mouth. The head of his cock goes down your throat, but he continues to thrust, forcing more of its 25cm length inside.'
+
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 		
@@ -267,23 +270,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'd2':
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/d2-2.jpg"></center>'
 		'He thrusts mercilessly, fucking deeper into your mouth. Eventually, you feel his balls slap your chin, and realize that he''s bottomed out.'
-        gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
+		'You feel a sense of pride in managing to take it all, but the feeling melts away as he begins to use your throat.'
+
+		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 		gs 'stat'
 	
-		act 'Deepthroat':
+		act 'Moan':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/d2-3.jpg"></center>'
 			'Tears stream from your eyes as he begins moving slowly. He takes his hands away from your head, and you desperately grab onto him while you let him use your throat. Trembling, you are lost in sensations - caught between the fire raging between your legs and your shameless awareness of the depravity of the situation.'
-            gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
+			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'stat'
 		
-			act 'Continue':
+			act 'Moan':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/d2-4.jpg"></center>'
 				'Peter is nearing climax, his thrusts becoming ragged, when he suddenly stops and pushes in deep. His balls draw up, coated with your saliva, and you feel his sperm shooting down your throat.'
-                gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
+				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'stat'
 		
 				if pcs_horny >= 100:

locations/_attributes_fetish.qsrc

@@ -2,529 +2,1526 @@
 
 !!Quality range is 2-6.
 if ARGS[1] = 1:
-	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 2:
-	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 5
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 3
-	ClopantsShortness = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 3:
 	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 4:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloSkirtShortness = 1
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 5:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloPanties = 1
-	CloOnePiece = 1
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 6:
-	CloQuality = 5
+	CloQuality = 3
 	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 3
-	ClopantsShortness = 2
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloBimbo = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 7:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 8:
-	CloQuality = 5
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 5
 	CloTopCut = 1
-	ClopantsShortness = 6
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloBimbo = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 9:
-	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 6
-	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 10:
 	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 11:
-	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 12:
 	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 13:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloSkirtShortness = 5
-elseif ARGS[1] = 14:
 	CloQuality = 3
 	CloThinness = 5
 	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloPanties = 1
-	CloOnePiece = 1
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloPanties =1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 14:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 6
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloBimbo = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 15:
-	CloQuality = 5
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 5
-	CloBra = 1
-	CloPanties = 1
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 16:
-	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 6
-	CloBra = 1
-	CloPanties = 1
-	CloOnePiece = 10
-elseif ARGS[1] = 17:
 	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 17:
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloPanties = 1
-	CloOnePiece = 1
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 18:
 	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
-	CloOnePiece = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 19:
-	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 5
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloSkirtShortness = 4	
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3	
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloStyle= 4
 elseif ARGS[1] = 20:
-	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloPanties = 1
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 21:
 	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloPanties = 1
-	CloOnePiece = 1
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 22:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloSkirtShortness = 5
-elseif ARGS[1] = 23:
-	CloQuality = 6
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloSkirtShortness = 2
-elseif ARGS[1] = 24:
 	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 23:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 24:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 25:
-	CloQuality = 6
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloPantsShortness = 2
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 26:
-	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloPanties = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 27:
 	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloPanties = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 27:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 28:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloPanties = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 29:
 	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloThinness = 6
+	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 4
-elseif ARGS[1] = 30:
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 29:
 	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 5
 	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPanties = 1
-	CloOnePiece = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 30:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 31:
 	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloBra = 1
-	CloPanties = 1
-	CloOnePiece = 1
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 32:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
-	CloOnePiece = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 33:
-	CloQuality = 6
-	CloThinness = 5
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
-	CloOnePiece = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 33:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloStyle2= 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 34:
-	CloQuality = 5
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloBra = 1
+	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloStyle2= 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 35:
 	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloStyle2= 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 36:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 37:
 	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloPanties = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 37:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
 elseif ARGS[1] = 38:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloBra = 1
-	CloPanties = 1	
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 39:
 	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloSkirtShortness = 4	
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 40:
-	CloQuality = 2
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 41:
-	CloQuality = 2
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloPanties = 1
-	CloOnePiece = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 42:
 	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 6
-	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloSkirtShortness = 4
-elseif ARGS[1] = 43:
-	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 42:
+	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 43:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
-	CloOnePiece = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 44:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 5
 	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloPanties = 1
+	CloBra = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloBimbo = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 45:
-	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	loTopCut = 1
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
-	CloOnePiece = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 46:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 3
+	loTopCut = 1
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
-	CloOnePiece = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 47:
-	CloQuality = 5
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	loTopCut = 1
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 48:
 	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	loTopCut = 1
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
-	CloOnePiece = 1	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 49:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 6
-	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloSkirtShortness = 6
-elseif ARGS[1] = 50:
-	CloQuality = 2
+	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 4
+	loTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 50:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 51:
-	CloQuality = 6
+	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 52:
-	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 6
+	loTopCut = 1
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
-	CloOnePiece = 1
+	CloStyle = 4
 elseif ARGS[1] = 53:
 	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloThinness = 4
+	loTopCut = 1
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
-	CloStyle = 2
 elseif ARGS[1] = 54:
-	CloQuality = 2
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 55:
 	CloQuality = 6
-	CloThinness = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 56:
-	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
 elseif ARGS[1] = 57:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 58:
 	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloPanties = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 59:
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+elseif ARGS[1] = 58:
 	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 6
-	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+elseif ARGS[1] = 59:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
 elseif ARGS[1] = 60:
-	CloQuality = 6
-	CloThinness = 5
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloStyle = 4
 elseif ARGS[1] = 61:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
 	CloBimbo = 1
-	CloBra = 1
-	CloPanties = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 62:
 	CloQuality = 3
 	CloThinness = 5
 	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 6
+	CloBimbo = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 63:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+	CloBimbo = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 64:
 	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 4
-elseif ARGS[1] = 64:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloSkirtShortness = 3
 elseif ARGS[1] = 65:
-	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloPantsShortness = 4
-elseif ARGS[1] = 66:
 	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloPanties = 1
-	CloOnePiece = 1
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+elseif ARGS[1] = 66:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 6
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
 elseif ARGS[1] = 67:
-	CloQuality = 5
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloBra = 1
-	CloPanties = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 68:
 	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloBimbo = 1
-	CloBra = 1
-	CloPanties = 1
-	CloOnePiece = 1
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 69:
 	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloBra = 1
-	CloPanties = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 70:
-	CloQuality = 3
 	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloPantsShortness = 6
-	CloBra = 1
-	CloPanties = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 71:
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 70:
 	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloBra = 1
-	CloPanties = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 72:
-	CloQuality = 6
-	CloThinness = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloPanties = 1
-	CloOnePiece = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 73:
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 71:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 72:
 	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 6
-	CloBimbo = 1
+	CloTopCut = 4
 	CloBra = 2
-	CloPanties = 1
-	CloOnePiece = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 73:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 74:
 	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloPanties = 1
-	CloOnePiece = 1
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 75:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 76:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 77:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 78:
 	CloQuality = 6
-	CloThinness = 6
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
-	CloBimbo = 1
-	CloBra = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 79:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 80:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 81:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloDress = 1
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloOnePiece = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 76:
+elseif ARGS[1] = 82:
 	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 6
-	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloDress = 1
 	CloPanties = 1
-	CloBra = 1
 	CloOnePiece = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 77:
+elseif ARGS[1] = 83:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloStyle = 4
+elseif ARGS[1] = 84:
 	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+elseif ARGS[1] = 85:
+	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 86:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 6
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 87:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 88:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 89:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 90:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 91:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+elseif ARGS[1] = 92:
+	CloQuality = 44
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloBimbo = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 93:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 94:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+elseif ARGS[1] = 95:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+elseif ARGS[1] = 96:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 97:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 6
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 98:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 99:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 100:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 101:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+elseif ARGS[1] = 102:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 103:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 6
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloStyle = 4
+elseif ARGS[1] = 104:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 105:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 106:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 107:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 108:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 109:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloBimbo = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 110:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 6
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 111:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloBimbo = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 112:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloBimbo = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 113:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 114:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 115:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+elseif ARGS[1] = 116:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 117:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 3
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 118:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 119:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 120:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 3
 	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 121:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 122:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 6
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 123:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 124:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 125:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 126:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 127:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 128:
+	CloQuality = 2
+	CloThinness = 6
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 129:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 130:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 131:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+elseif ARGS[1] = 132:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 133:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 134:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+	CloStyle = 4
+elseif ARGS[1] = 135:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 136:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
 	CloBimbo = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 137:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+elseif ARGS[1] = 138:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 4
 	CloBra = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 78:
+	CloSkirtShortness = 6
+elseif ARGS[1] = 139:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloSkirtShortness = 6
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 140:
+	CloQuality = 2
+	CloThinness = 6
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 141:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 142:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 6
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+	CloBimbo = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 143:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 144:
+	CloQuality = 2
+	CloThinness = 6
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 145:
+	CloQuality = 2
+	CloThinness = 6
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 146:
+	CloQuality = 2
+	CloThinness = 6
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 147:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 148:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 149:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 6
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 150:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 6
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 151:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 152:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+	CloStyle= 4
+elseif ARGS[1] = 153:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 154:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 155:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 156:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 157:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 158:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloStyle = 4
+elseif ARGS[1] = 159:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloBra = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 6
+	CloPanties
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 160:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 6
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 161:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 162:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 6
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 163:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 6
+elseif ARGS[1] = 164:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 165:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 166:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 167:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 168:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 169:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 170:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 171:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloStyle = 4
+elseif ARGS[1] = 172:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 173:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 174:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloBra = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloBimbo = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 175:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloBimbo = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 176:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 177:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloBra = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 178:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloBimbo = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 179:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 180:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 6
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+elseif ARGS[1] = 181:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 182:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloStyle = 4
+	CloBimbo = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 183:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 184:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 6
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 185:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+elseif ARGS[1] = 186:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+elseif ARGS[1] = 187:
 	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloSkirtShortness = 4
-elseif ARGS[1] = 79:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloBimbo = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 188:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloSkirtShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloStyle = 4
+elseif ARGS[1] = 189:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+elseif ARGS[1] = 190:
+	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 5
 	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloSkirtShortness = 6
 	CloPanties = 1
-	CloBimbo = 1
-	CloBra = 1
 	CloOnePiece = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 80:
-	CloQuality = 5
+elseif ARGS[1] = 191:
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 5
 	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloSkirtShortness = 4
-elseif ARGS[1] = 81:
+	CloSkirtShortness = 6
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 192:
 	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 6
-	CloBimbo = 1
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 4
 	CloBra = 2
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloOnePiece = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 82:
+elseif ARGS[1] = 193:
 	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 6
-	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloSkirtShortness = 4
-	CloBimbo = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 83:
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 194:
 	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	CloBimbo = 1
-	CloBra = 1
-	CloPanties = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 84:
+elseif ARGS[1] = 195:
 	CloQuality = 6
-	CloThinness = 6
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 196:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 197:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 198:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 199:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 5
 	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 200:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 201:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPanties = 1
-	CloBimbo = 1
 	CloOnePiece = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 85:
+elseif ARGS[1] = 202:
 	CloQuality = 6
-	CloThinness = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
-	CloBimbo = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 86:
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 203:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 204:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 205:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 206:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 207:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 208:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 6
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 209:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 210:
 	CloQuality = 6
 	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+elseif ARGS[1] = 211:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 87:
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+elseif ARGS[1] = 212:
 	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloBra = 1
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloOnePiece = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 88:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloSkirtShortness = 4
-elseif ARGS[1] = 89:
+elseif ARGS[1] = 213:
 	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 214:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 6
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
 	CloBimbo = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 90:
+elseif ARGS[1] = 215:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 216:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 217:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 218:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 219:
 	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 220:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
 	CloOnePiece = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 91:
+elseif ARGS[1] = 221:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 222:
 	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloPanties = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 92:
-	CloQuality = 6
 	CloThinness = 6
-	CloBimbo = 1
-	CloBra = 1
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 2 
 	CloPanties = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 93:
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 223:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 224:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 225:
 	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloPanties = 1
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
 	CloOnePiece = 1
-elseif ARGS[1] = 94:
+elseif ARGS[1] = 226:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+	CloBimbo = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 227:
 	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 228:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloBra = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
 	CloBimbo = 1
-	CloBra = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 229:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 230:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 6
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+	CloBimbo = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 231:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 232:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 233:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 234:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 235:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 236:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 6
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 237:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 238:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 239:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+elseif ARGS[1] = 240:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 1
+	CloDress = 1
 end
 
 --- $attributes_fetish ---------------------------------

locations/albinaRide.qsrc

@@ -5,34 +5,35 @@ frost = 0
 menu_off = 1
 AlbinaQW['albride'] = 1
 gs 'stat'
-'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A23'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A23'']>></font></b></center>'
-'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big23.jpg"></center>'
-'An SUV pulls up to you and the window rolls down. Albina smiles at you. "Let''s go to my place. We need to talk."'
+'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/bmw.jpg"></center>'
+'An SUV pulls up to you and the front window rolls down. Albina is sitting in the driver''s seat and she smiles at you. "Let''s go to my place. We need to talk."'
 
 act 'Get in':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
-	'You climb into the car and sit in the back seat next to Albina. A large man in a black leather jacket is in the driver''s seat.'
-	'The man puts the car in gear and starts driving through town. Albina turns to you.'
-	!!If Sveta helped Chernov
+	'You climb into the car next to Albina. She puts the car into gear and starts driving through town.'
+    !!If Sveta helped Chernov
 	if AlbinaQW['Chernov'] = 1:
-		'She smiles at you very happily. "You don''t know what good you''ve done for me <<$pcs_nickname>>. I didn''t think the Security Service would actually have jumped on the lead I gave them."'
-		'"Wait, you were their ''anonymous source'' that exposed the Starlets? Why?" you ask in surprise.'
-		'"I have my reasons. The main thing is that you and the other girls all testified against the ringleader and took them down." She looks away meekly as she finishes her sentence.'	
-		'The car drives through the gate to her house and stops outside the front door. Albina tells you to follow her and exits the car.'
+	    '"Is this your car? And since when could you drive?" you ask. She laughs in response. "No, this is my father''s car. I don''t have a licence, but the police ignore me since my father was the chief."'
+		'She stops at a red light and turns to you, looking rather happy. "You don''t know what good you''ve done <<$pcs_nickname>>. I didn''t think the Security Service would actually have jumped on the lead I gave them."'
+		'"Wait, <i>you</i> were their ''anonymous source'' that exposed the Starlets? Why?" you ask in surprise.'
+		'"I have my reasons. The main thing is that you and the other girls all testified against the ringleader and took them down." She looks away meekly as she finishes her sentence and the light turns green. She continues driving in silence.'	
+		*nl
+		'After driving for a while, you reach her house. She drives through the gate and stops outside the front door. She tells you to follow her and exits the car.'
 	end
 	!!If Sveta did not help Chernov
 	if AlbinaQW['Chernov'] = 2:
+		'"Is this your car? And since when could you drive?" you ask. She laughs in response. "No, this is my father''s car. I don''t have a licence, but the police ignore me since my father was the chief."'
 		'"I really wish you had told that man everything he was asking for <<$pcs_nickname>>. It would have been very helpful to me."'
 		'"What do you mean ''helpful to you?'' He was trying to get me to speak out against the Starlets." you reply.'
+		*nl
 		'Yes, because I wanted him to expose us. I gave him the evidence he needed to take down the ringleader."'
-		'"You''re the ''anonymous source''? Why?" you ask in confusion. "I have my reasons." is all she says in reply and turns to look out the window.' 
-		'The car drives through the gate of her house and stops outside the front door. Albina tells you to follow her and exits the car.'
+		'"Wait a second. <i>You''re</i> the ''anonymous source''? Why?" you ask in confusion. "I have my reasons." is all she says in reply and continues driving in silence.' 
+		'After driving for a while, you reach her house. She drives through the gate and stops outside the front door. She tells you to follow her and exits the car.'
 	end
 
-!! Can this lead to the scene where Albina sits Sveta down for some wine and admits everything to her?
-	act 'Go with Albina':gt 'albinahome', 'start' 
+    act 'Go with Albina':gt 'albinahome', 'start' 
 end
 
 --- albinaRide ---------------------------------

locations/albinahome.qsrc

@@ -36,17 +36,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				'"Hate him that much?" you ask as you take a sip from your glass.'
 				'Albina just glares at you. "Let''s just drink." she scorns.'
 				'You sit quietly for a while, sipping your wine while Albina again gulps down the contents of her glass. She sits in silence before suddenly screaming and throwing the glass in frustration, shattering it as it hits the wall.'
-				'"Fucking bastard!! If there is a hell, there is a special place reserved just for you to suffer for what you done you fucking creep!!"'
+				'"FUCKING BASTARD!! If there is a hell, there is a special place reserved just for you to suffer for what you''ve done you fucking creep!!"'
 				act 'Ask what she''s talking about':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 15
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/comfort.jpg"></center>'
 					'"What are you talking about?" you ask, startled by her outburst. Albina looks at you meekly as tears well up in her eyes.'
-					'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, my father has raped and abused me from such an early age, I don''t even remember when it all began. I''ve spent my entire life being his plaything." she tearfully admits.'
+					'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, my father has abused me from such an early age, I don''t even remember when it all began. I''ve spent my entire life being his plaything." she tearfully admits.'
 					'"When my mother found out, he used his connections to stop her taking me with her when she left him."'
 					*nl
-					'But now that he''s going down, she came back here to live with and look after me. Get me counselling if I need it, you know? That''s why she''s always checking up on me. She''s on edge about what my father can do, even in prison."'
+					'But now that he''s going down, she''s come back to live with and look after me. Get me counselling if I need it, you know? That''s why she''s always checking up on me. She''s on edge about what my father can do, even in prison."'
 					'She continues. "The truth is his political campaign never took off. He loved abusing his position as a cop to bully others, including me, but when he retired, he didn''t have that power anymore. A political career was his chance to get that back."'
 					'"Nobody was willing to back him however." She stops talking for a few seconds and you can clearly see her hands shaking. "That''s when...that''s when he decided to...whore me out to his friends. For ''a bit of fun'' with me, they would ''donate'' to his campaign fund.". She is on the verge of bursting into tears in front of you.'
 
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/comfort.jpg"></center>'
 						'"Your own father sold your body to fund his election? That''s horrible!" you exclaim in shock.'
-						'Albina nods. "That''s right, but I wasn''t earning enough for him. That''s when he discovered my dance troupe and forced me to start selling my friends instead. I had to <<$pcs_nickname>>! I had to!" she tearfully exclaims.'
+						'Albina sits in silence before quietly nodding. "However, I wasn''t earning enough for him. That''s when he discovered my dance troupe and forced me to start selling my friends instead. I had to <<$pcs_nickname>>! I had to!" she tearfully exclaims.'
 						'"I was forced to let those fucking perverts do whatever they pleased with my friends <<$pcs_nickname>>! They were humiliated and abused for some fucking rubles! Rubles that the fucking bastard spent on his own whores that he mistreated instead of his campaign!"'
                         !! if virgin or not
 						if pcs_vag = 0 and stat['vaginal'] = 0: 
@@ -73,8 +73,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 							'"What did he do?" you ask.'
 							'"It was bad enough being forced to whore out my friends to abusive creeps who almost choked them to death, but......but....."'
 							'"But what?" you ask softly. She steels herself before answering you. "If I didn''t get the girl the guys wanted, my father said it was perfectly fine for them to take me and do what they wanted, even rape me." she cries.'
-							'"They would take their anger at not getting the girl they wanted out on me. I would be choked, slapped, even spat on! Some nights, I''d come home and he would berate me for not ''helping his donors'' and I would be subjected to his abuse as well."'
-							'"My dad being a pimp for underage girls who''s abused me my entire life, my friends being subjected to abusive sexual exploitation...and I...I couldn''t anything about it!" The words barely make it out of her mouth before she bursts into a flood of tears.'
+							'"They would take their anger at not getting the girl they wanted out on me. I would be choked, slapped, even spat on! Some nights, I''d come home and he would berate me for not ''helping his donors'' and I would be subjected to his abuse as well. Other times, he would bring his friends home and let them have their way with me. One guy or four, it didn''t matter to him so long as they paid.'
+							'"My dad abusing me my entire life while running a prostitution ring where my friends were subjected to abusive sexual exploitation...and I...I couldn''t anything about it!" The words barely make it out of her mouth before she bursts into a flood of tears.'
 
 							act 'Comfort her':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -82,9 +82,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/kissingattempt.jpg"></center>'
 								'You cradle her head against your chest as she sobs away, her tears soaking into your top. "Hey, hey. But you did do something about it. You went to the police and now he''s going to prison!" you reassure her while softly stroking her hair.'
-								'She sits up, her eyes puffy from crying and wipes away her tears. "Yeah, yeah you''re right <<$pcs_nickname>>. I did. I guess I just got tired of feeling helpless as my friends suffered when they didn''t deserve any of this. So I exposed him as what he is. A vile fucking creep!"'
-								'"I just want to live my life without having to fear my own father, or any other man for that matter. For the longest time, I was just too fucking submissive."'
-								'You smile at her and are about to reply when Albina closes her eyes and tilts her head towards you.'
+								'She sits up, her eyes puffy from crying and wipes away her tears. "Yeah, yeah you''re right <<$pcs_nickname>>. I just got tired of watching my friends suffer when they didn''t deserve any of this. So I exposed him as what he is. A vile fucking creep!"'
+								'"I just wanted to live my life without fearing what my own father, or any other man for that matter, would do to me. For the longest time, I was just too fucking submissive." she says before looking intently into your eyes.'
+								'You smile at her and are about to reply when she closes her eyes and tilts her head towards you.'
 								gs 'willpower', 'cuni', 'resist', 'medium'
 								if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 									act 'Pull away (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/kissing.jpg"></center>'
 									'You''re not sure if it''s just the alcohol or if something else is compelling you, but you lean towards Albina and lock lips with her.'
-									'You feel your excitement growing as you and Albina start passionately making out with each other.'
+									'You feel your excitement growing as you and Albina start passionately making out with each other, your tongues twisting around each other in a sweet embrace.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 2
 									gs 'stat'
 									act 'Kiss':
@@ -129,10 +129,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 											*clr & cla
 											gs 'stat'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/lesb.jpg"></center>'
-											'Albina breaks your kiss and her hand slides out of your panties. She stands and starts undressing herself.'
+											'Albina breaks the kiss and her hand slides out of your panties. She stands and starts undressing herself.'
 											'You follow her lead and undress yourself. Once naked, she pushes you back onto the sofa and moves in on top of you, resuming your passionate makeout.'
 											'Her hand works its way back down to your wet pussy. This time, she slides her fingers inside you. A wave of pleasure runs through you and you moan into her mouth as she fingerfucks your pussy.'
-											'Your own hand begins exploring Albina''s crotch and you find her pussy is already wet. You insert a finger into her and she moans into your mouth as her pussy tightly squeezes your digit.'
+											'Your own hand begins exploring Albina''s crotch and you find her smooth pussy is already wet. You insert a finger into her and she moans into your mouth as her pussy tightly squeezes your digit.'
 											gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 											gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 5
 											gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 5
@@ -149,8 +149,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 												'You moan softly at the pleasure and grab Albina by the hips, pulling her crotch down to your face. Her legs quiver as you gently trace her labia with your tongue before you spread them and start swirling your tongue around her engorged clitoris.'
 												'You are passionately eating each other out when you hear Albina''s breathing become faster and her legs start shaking as you feel your own orgasm building within you.'
 												*nl
-												'Albina lets out a pleasured scream as her pussy twitches and sprays her juices across your face. You buckle as your own orgasm overwhelms you and you scream loudly. You both collapse in ecstasy.'
-												'Albina pulls her herself up and turns back around, cuddling into you. "I didn''t take you for a squirter!" you laugh. She smirks. "I''ve been with a few girls <<$pcs_nickname>>, but you gave me the greatest orgasm I''ve ever had! I think that was actually my first squirt!"'
+												'Albina lets out a pleasured scream as her pussy twitches and sprays a huge amount of her juices across your face. You buckle as your own orgasm overwhelms you and you scream loudly. You both collapse in ecstasy.'
+												'Albina pulls her herself up and turns back around, cuddling into you. "I didn''t take you for a squirter!" you laugh. She smirks. "I''ve been with a few girls <<$pcs_nickname>>, but you gave me the greatest orgasm I''ve ever had! I think that was the biggest squirt I''ve ever done!"'
 												'She leans over and grabs some tissues from a box on a nearby table, handing you some to clean your face. She runs her hand over her still twitching pussy. "I think I''m still cumming!" she says. You both lie on the sofa, your powerful orgasms pulsing through the both of you. You eventually recover and manage to get dressed.'
                                                 'Albina remains on the sofa, pussy juices still trickling from her. "Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>. It was nice to let it all out and just talk about it...among other things." she smirks. "Thanks for being a good friend." You smile at her and start leaving when she suddenly embraces you in a tight hug, her breasts squeezing against you, before walking you to the door.' 
 												gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 30
@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big23.jpg"></center>'
 				'"I don''t like the sweaty perverts at the gym staring at my ass, so I prefer training at home instead." she replies.'
 				'You can''t help but stare at her firm, shapely rear as she says that and she grins at you.'
-				'Eyes up here <<$pcs_nickname>>! Anyways, I could teach you about stripping and poledancing if you want."'
+				'Eyes up here <<$pcs_nickname>>! Anyway, I could teach you about stripping and poledancing if you want?"'
 				act 'No thanks': AlbinaQW['SportDay'] = daystart & gt 'albinahome', 'start'
 				act 'Teach me stripping': gt 'albinahome', 'stripping'
 				act 'Teach me poledancing': gt 'albinahome', 'poledancing'
@@ -432,7 +432,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'playgame':
 		'You laugh and nod. "Sure, but you are so going down."'
 		'She laughs in response. "You''re that sure? Then how about we make it a bit more interesting then?"'
 		'You arch your brow curiously. "What do you have in mind?"'
-		'She grins at you, gets up and goes over to her dresser. She rummages around in it for a moment before pulling out a strapon harness with a sizeable dildo attached. "I bought this the other day, just for fun. The winner gets to use it on the loser how ever they want." she says with a smirk.'
+		'She grins at you, gets up and goes over to her dresser. She rummages around in it for a moment before pulling out a strapon harness with a large black dildo attached. "I bought this the other day, just for fun. The winner gets to use it on the loser how ever they want." she says with a smirk.'
 
 		gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'playgame':
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'You shake your head. "Uhhh...I''m really not interested in doing that."'
-				'Albina puts the strapon away and you can tell she is a little disappointed. She comes back over and lays down beside you again. "You are so going to lose!" she laughs. You continue to play games for a while, although things are awkward between you. Eventually, Albina stops. "Well I had fun, but there is some stuff I need to take care of." she says as she turns the consloe off.'
+				'Albina puts the strapon away and you can tell she is a little disappointed. She comes back over and lies down beside you again. "You are so going to lose!" she laughs. You continue to play games for a while, although things are awkward between you. Eventually, Albina stops. "Well I had fun, but there is some stuff I need to take care of." she says as she turns the consloe off.'
 				'Getting the hint, you get up as well. "Yeah, I should probably get going myself." You exchange a brief hug before you leave.'
 				act 'Say goodbye and go home':gt 'pav_residential'
 			end
@@ -477,7 +477,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'game_bet':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/game.jpg"></center>'
 	'You stare at the size of the attached dildo. "Where and when did you get that?!" you laugh. "Whatever, you''re on. You are so going to get fucked!"'
-	'Albina laughs as she brings the strapon over with a bottle of lube, placing them on the floor. She lays back down beside you and picks her controller up. "Please! You are so going to lose." She starts the game and you both fall silent, your focus only on winning.'
+	'Albina laughs as she brings the strapon over with a bottle of lube, placing them on the floor. She lies back down beside you and picks her controller up. "Please! You are so going to lose." She starts the game and you both fall silent, your focus only on winning.'
 	act 'Play until someone wins':
 		*clr & cla
 		menu_off = 1
@@ -517,24 +517,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wear_strapon':
 	npc_sex['A23'] += 1
 	lesbian += 1
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/straponsuck.jpg"></center>'
-	'With the strapon firmly in place, you get on the bed with her and pull her head down to the dildo. "Suck my dick loser!" you giggle.'
-	'She laughs and gets down on all fours. She takes the dildo in her mouth and starts sucking while stroking the shaft with one hand. You spend several minutes making her suck on the dildo, getting it nice and wet with her drool.'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/bj.jpg"></center>'
+	'With the strapon firmly in place, you stand next to the bed and pull her head down to the dildo. "Suck my dick loser!" you giggle.'
+	'She laughs before she takes the dildo in her mouth and starts sucking while stroking the shaft with one hand. You spend several minutes making her suck on the dildo, getting it nice and wet with her drool.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Fuck her pussy':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'boyStat', 'D3'
 		gs 'stat'
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/givevag1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You pull away until the dildo slides out of her mouth and then lay on your back. "Come and ride it cowgirl!" you laugh. She crawls up and straddles you, lowering herself down until the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo slides easily inside of her wet pussy, causing her to moan in pleasure. She starts riding you slowly, but picks up speed, moaning louder and louder.'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/givevag.jpg"></center>'
+		'You pull away until the dildo slides out of her mouth, climb onto the bed next to her and lie on your back. "Come and ride it cowgirl!" you laugh. She straddles you and lowers herself down until the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo slides easily inside of her wet pussy, causing her to moan in pleasure. She starts riding you slowly, but picks up speed, moaning louder and louder.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap_give', 8, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Fuck her ass': gt 'albinahome', 'fuck_albina_ass'
 		act 'Ride it like you mean it':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/givevag2.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/givevag.jpg"></center>'
 			'You slap her on the ass. "Come on Albina! Ride it like you mean it." With your encouragement, she starts really riding you hard and fast, her huge ass slapping against your thighs as she takes the whole length inside her. She rides you for several minutes until she cries out in ecstasy. She slams down on the dildo and her body shudders as an intense orgasm passes through her. She slides off the dildo, which glistens with her juices, and collapses on the bed next to you.'
 			'Once her orgasm has passed, she looks at you with an appreciative smile on her face.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap_give', 7, 'lesbian'
@@ -553,7 +553,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fuck_albina_ass':
 	lesbian += 1
 	gs 'boyStat', 'D3'
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/giveanal1.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/anal1.jpg"></center>'
 	'Albina then leans over and whispers in your ear. "I want you to fuck my ass <<$pcs_nickname>>..." You grin as she giggles and gets on all fours. You grab the bottle of lube and squirt some onto the dildo, rubbing it up and down the shaft until it is very slick. You then spread her huge ass cheeks and rub the excess onto her asshole. You grab her ass in your hand and appreciate how firms it feels in your grip.'
 	'"Like what you see?" she giggles. You kneel down behind her, line the head of the dildo up with her asshole and slowly push forward. There is a bit of resistance, but with a little more pressure the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo pops into her ass. She moans in a mixture of pain and pleasure as you start off with slow shallow strokes, but as her groans of pain turn into moans of pleasure, you take deeper and faster strokes. You look down and admit that her ass is amazing, the dildo being enveloped by her huge, firm cheeks as you thrust in and out of her hole.' 
 	'You wonder how the guys in your class would feel knowing you''re actually fucking the best ass in school while they can only dream of it. After a few minutes, you pull out of her and she looks back over her shoulder, obviously wondering why you stopped.'
@@ -563,7 +563,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fuck_albina_ass':
 	act 'Keep fucking her ass':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/giveanal2.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/anal2.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>. Put it back in and fuck me....hard." she says while wiggling her hips. You smile at her and slide the dildo back into her hole with ease, making her moan in pleasure. You grab onto her hips and start fucking her balls deep, filling her ass with the entire dildo. After several minutes, you feel her ass tighten around your fake cock and she cries out as her body is rocked by an intense orgasm and juices squirt from her pussy. You keep fucking her throughout her orgasm, only pulling out once her shudders have passed.'
 		'After you''ve pulled out, she inserts a few fingers into her gaping hole as juices continue leaking from her pussy. "Oh fuck yes <<$pcs_nickname>>! That was fucking amazing!"'
 		'"Fucking such a nice looking ass was amazing!" you reply and you both laugh.'
@@ -579,18 +579,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'receive_strapon':
 	npc_sex['A23'] += 1
 	lesbian += 1
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/straponsuck.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slide your panties off while she tightens the strapon firmly in place. You climb on the bed and she pulls your head down to the dildo. "Suck my dick loser!" she says with a giggle.'
-	'You take the dildo into your mouth and start sucking on it while stroking the shaft with one hand. "Yeah, just like that <<$pcs_nickname>>!" she moans as she reaches between the straps and gently rubs her pussy. You spend several minutes sucking on the dildo, getting it nice and wet with your drool. She pulls it out of your mouth. "I''m so going to enjoy fucking you!"'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/bj.jpg"></center>'
+	'You slide your panties off while she tightens the strapon firmly in place, standing next to the bed. You lie down next to her and she pulls your head down to the dildo. "Suck my dick loser!" she says with a giggle.'
+	'You take the dildo into your mouth and start sucking on it while stroking the shaft with one hand. "Yeah, just like that <<$pcs_nickname>>!" she moans as she reaches between the straps and gently rubs her pussy. You spend several minutes sucking on the dildo, getting it nice and wet with your drool before she pulls it out of your mouth. "I''m so going to enjoy fucking you!"'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	if pcs_vag = 0:
 		act 'You''re a virgin':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/straponsuck.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/bj.jpg"></center>'
 			'You blush deeply and she looks at you. "Oh, right. You haven''t done this before." she says, remembering that you''re still pure.'
-			'You blush even more. "Yes, I''m still a virgin." you reply.'
+			'You blush even more. "Yes, I''m... still a virgin." you reply.'
 			'"Well, I can just fuck your ass if you want?" Then she grins. "Unless you want me to pop your cherry that is?"'
 			act 'Just fuck my ass': gt 'albinahome', 'albina_ass_fucks_you'
 			act 'Get your cherry popped':
@@ -598,8 +598,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'receive_strapon':
 				gs 'boyStat', 'D3'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/getvag1.jpg"></center>'
-				'She nods. "OK, don''t worry. I''l be gentle since it is your first time. Lay on your back and spread your legs." You do as she commands and she scoots up between your legs. She rubs your pussy with her fingers a bit to make sure it is wet enough. She adds a little lube to the dildo anyway and you feel it rubbing against your slit, causing it to open a bit. She then slowly slides the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo into your virgin pussy.' 
-				'It is both painful and pleasurable at the same time and you moan a bit as she slowly starts to fuck your pussy. After a few minutes, it starts to hurt less but she stops. "OK that''s enough. I don''t want to wear it out the first time, but I''m not finished with you. Roll over so I can fuck that tight little ass of yours."'
+				'You give her an awkward smile. "I... I want you to... take me. My... virginity, that is." you tell her as your cheeks burn bright red.' 
+				'She smiles back. "OK, don''t worry. I''ll be gentle since it''s your first time. Just lie on your back and spread your legs." You do as she commands and she climbs onto the bed and scoots in between your legs. She rubs your pussy with her fingers a bit to make sure it is wet enough. She adds a little lube to the dildo anyway and you feel it rubbing against your slit. She then slowly slides the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo into your virgin pussy.' 
+				'It is both painful and pleasurable at the same time and you moan softly as she slowly starts to fuck your pussy. After a few minutes, it starts to hurt less but she stops. "OK that''s enough. I don''t want to wear it out the first time, but I''m not finished with you yet. Roll over so I can fuck that tight little ass of yours."'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 5, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Take it up the ass': gt 'albinahome', 'albina_ass_fucks_you'
@@ -611,14 +612,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'receive_strapon':
 			gs 'boyStat', 'D3'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/getvag1.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Lay on your back and spread your legs." You do as she commands and she scoots up between your legs. She rubs your pussy with her fingers a bit to make sure it is wet enough and then slowly slides the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo inside you. You moan a bit as she slowly starts to fuck your pussy. As you start to moan louder, she starts fucking you a little faster.'
+			'"Lie on your back and spread your legs." You do as she commands and she climbs onto the bed and scoots in between your legs. She rubs your pussy with her fingers a bit to make sure it is wet enough and then slowly slides the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo inside you. You moan a bit as she slowly starts to fuck your pussy. As you start to moan louder, she starts fucking you a little faster.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 8, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Keep getting your pussy fucked':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/getvag2.jpg"></center>'
-				'She reads your body well. She fucks you harder and faster the more you moan, but when it starts to get a little too rough she backs off a bit. She eventually finds a near perfect rhythm and you can feel youself getting wet. She is enjoying it as much as you, moaning softly and squeezing her breast as she fucks you. She stops and pulls out. "OK that''s enough of that, but I''m not finished with you just yet. Roll over so I can fuck that tight little ass of yours."'
+				'She proceeds to fuck you hard, but not too hard, settling into a near perfect rhythm that you enjoy, feeling youself slowly getting wetter. She seems to be enjoying it as much as you, moaning softly and squeezing her breast as she fucks you. She leans in and kisses you before suddenly stopping and pulling out. "OK that''s enough of that, but I''m not finished with you just yet. Roll over so I can fuck that tight little ass of yours."'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 7, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Take it up the ass': gt 'albinahome', 'albina_ass_fucks_you'
@@ -634,15 +635,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_ass_fucks_you':
 	lesbian += 1
 	gs 'boyStat', 'D3'
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/getanal1.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/anal1.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you get on all fours, you glance back and see her applying lube to the dildo. She squirts plenty on the dildo and strokes the shaft with it, getting it nice and lubed up. She then rubs the excess lube onto your asshole. You and the dildo now lubed up, she moves behind you and you feel the dildo press against your asshole. The pressure builds up until the tip pops into your ass, causing you to groan slightly in pain. She slowly starts to slide the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo up your ass, steadily working it deeper.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Get your ass hammered':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/getanal2.jpg"></center>'
-		'After you seem to be used to her in your ass, she stands up over you and starts getting harder and faster with the ass fucking she is giving you. When it starts getting a little too rough, she seems to notice and backs off just a little before getting into a nice rhythm of slamming the dildo in and out of your ass. She enjoys fucking you hard, growing more aroused over time.' 
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/anal2.jpg"></center>'
+		'Once you are comfortable with her in your ass, she stands up over you and starts getting harder and faster with the ass fucking she is giving you. When it starts getting a little too rough, she seems to notice and backs off just a little before getting into a nice rhythm of slamming the dildo in and out of your ass. She enjoys fucking you hard, growing more aroused over time.' 
 		'Just as it is starting to hurt, she stops and lets out a pleasured moan before pulling out of you. You feel a rush of cold air around your gaping asshole. "You were such a good little butt slut <<$pcs_nickname>>." she says. You turn and see her sliding the harness off, apparently finished with you. You notice the wet patch on the bed. She obviously greatly enjoyed hammering your ass.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 10, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -657,12 +658,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_finish':
 	lesbian += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/aftermath.jpg"></center>'
-	'Albina embraces you and you spend the next few minutes passionately making out while fondling each other. Eventually, you both get dressed and she takes the strapon and cleans it before putting it away. Not long after, her phone buzzes. She looks at it, obviously reading a text message and frowns. "Sorry, but I need to go <<$pcs_nickname>>. I did have fun though. I''ll see later?"'
+	'Albina embraces you and you collapse onto the bed, entwined. You spend the next few minutes passionately making out while fondling each other. Eventually, you both get dressed and she takes the strapon and cleans it before putting it away. Not long after, her phone buzzes. She looks at it, obviously reading a text message and frowns. "Sorry, but I need to go <<$pcs_nickname>>. I did have fun though. I''ll see later?"'
 	'You nod in understanding. "Sure, not a problem. I had fun too." you smirk. "I''ll see you later." You share a final kiss with each other before you leave.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
-	act 'Say goodbye and go home':gt 'pav_residential'
+	act 'Leave':gt 'pav_residential'
 end
 
 --- albinahome ---------------------------------

locations/albinaporog.qsrc

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ if hour >= 17 and week < 6 and kanikuli = 0 and hour < 20 or hour >= 9 and week
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinahome.jpg"></center>'
 	if AlbinaQW['StarletsShutDown'] = 0:
 		'You push a button on the intercom and a deep voice crackles through the speaker, asking you to state your name and purpose of your visit.'
-		'You say that you''re here to visit Albina. After a brief wait, the gate opens. "Albina is waiting for you in her room." the voice says.'
+		'You say that you''re here to visit Albina and after a brief wait, the gate opens. "A friend of Albina''s is <i>always</i> welcome here." the voice says with an unsettling chuckle. "Albina is in her room."'
 		act 'Enter the house':gt 'albinahome', 'start'
 	elseif AlbinaQW['AfterFatherCheck'] = 0:
     	!!The first time after Albina exposes her father
@@ -16,14 +16,14 @@ if hour >= 17 and week < 6 and kanikuli = 0 and hour < 20 or hour >= 9 and week
 		act 'Enter the house':gt 'albinahome', 'start'
 	else
 		!!From then on
-		'You push a button on the intercom and you hear the familiar voice of Albina''s mother on the other end. You tell it''s you and she opens the gate.'
+		'You push a button on the intercom and you hear the familiar voice of Albina''s mother on the other end. You tell her it''s you and she opens the gate.'
 		'"She really enjoys having you come round and visit her you know? It''s good for her to have such a dependable friend to rely on after everything she''s been through." she adds.'
 		act 'Enter the house':gt 'albinahome', 'start'
 	end
 else
 	if AlbinaQW['StarletsShutDown'] = 0:
-		if hour >= 9:'You push a button on the intercom and a voice booms through from the other end. You say that you''re here to visit Albina. "Albina is currently not at home. Come back later he replies."'
-		if hour < 9:'You push a button on the intercom and the voice at the other end says "It''s too early. Come back no earlier than nine."'
+		if hour >= 9:'You push a button on the intercom and the deep voice booms through from the other end. You say that you''re here to visit Albina. "She isn''t here. Come back later." he abruptly replies in an annoyed tone before hanging up.'
+		if hour < 9:'You push a button on the intercom and the voice at the other end says "It''s too early to visit. Come back later."'
 	else
 		!!After Albina exposes her father
 		if hour >= 9:'You push a button on the intercom and a female voice comes through asking who it is. When you say you''re here to see Albina, she tells you that Albina is currently unavailable and you should come back later.'

locations/artemhome.qsrc

@@ -515,7 +515,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bookshelf':
 			end
 			act 'Not really':
 				cla
-				if pcs_int <= 40:
+				if pcs_intel <= 40:
 					'"It was a bit too complicated." You admit, embarrassed.'
 				else
 					'"It was a bit too bland for me. In the end it just bored me. I could guess at the outcome right at the start, and it turned out I was right."'

locations/din_van.qsrc

@@ -70,16 +70,16 @@ $shower = {
 
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/dush.mp4"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'You undress and turn on the water in the shower. When it hits the right temperature you enter the shower and let the warm water rain down on you.'
+		'You undress and turn on the water in the shower. When it hits the right temperature, you step into the shower and let the warm water rain down on you.'
 		if daystart < 10 and (StoryLine = 0 or (StoryLine = 1 and csb_start = 1)) and ntstart = 0:
 			pcs_horny += rand(6,10)
-			'It''s really arousing to see your new body with all its smooth curves, breasts with large nipples, wide hips, and smooth legs. You begin to lather your body noticing how soft and tender it feels. Once you''re sure you didn''t miss a single spot on your feminine body you begin to wash yourself off, continuing to experience new and strange sensations.'
+			'It''s really arousing to see your new body with all its smooth curves, breasts with large nipples, wide hips and smooth legs. You begin to lather your body, noticing how soft and tender it feels. Once you''re sure you haven''t missed a single spot, you begin to wash yourself off, continuing to experience new and strange sensations.'
 		elseif daystart < 30 and (StoryLine = 0 or (StoryLine = 1 and csb_start = 1)) and ntstart = 0:
 			pcs_horny += rand(2,6)
-			'You have already gotten used to your feminine body and its softness doesn''t surprise you very much anymore. But you still let your hands wander a bit over your soft curves before you begin to wash yourself in earnest.'
+			'You''ve already gotten used to your feminine body and its softness doesn''t surprise you very much anymore, but you still let your hands wander a bit over your soft curves before you begin to wash yourself in earnest.'
 		else
 			pcs_horny += rand(0,2)
-			''+iif(noShampoo_tmp = 1, 'It''s not your shampoo, so you use a little more than you normally would; with a tinge of guilt you ', 'Using your own shampoo, you carefully ')+'soap yourself trying not to miss any spot and then wash off.'
+			''+iif(noShampoo_tmp = 1, 'It''s not your shampoo, so you use a little more than you normally would; with a tinge of guilt you ', 'Using your own shampoo, you carefully ')+'lather yourself up, trying not to miss any spots, and then wash off.'
 		end
 
 		if shampoo = 0 and noShampoo_tmp = 1:
@@ -106,16 +106,16 @@ $shower = {
 
 		if lactation['active'] > 0 and pain['nipples'] < 60 and lactation['pc_aware'] <= 0:
 			if pcs_usedbreastpumponherself > 0 and pcs_massagedherbreasts <= 0:
-				'During showering you clean your breasts and something catches your eye. White drops come from your nipples. It is milk.<br>Using the breast pump regularly probably made you lactate!'
+				'As you clean your breasts, something catches your eye. White drops come from your nipples. It is milk.<br>Using the breast pump regularly probably made you lactate!'
 				lactation['induced'] = 1
 			elseif pcs_usedbreastpumponherself <= 0 and pcs_massagedherbreasts > 0:
-				'During showering you clean your breasts and something catches your eye. White drops come from your nipples. It is milk. Regularly massaging your breasts probably made you lactate!<br>'
+				'As you clean your breasts, something catches your eye. White drops come from your nipples. It is milk. Regularly massaging your breasts probably made you lactate!<br>'
 				lactation['induced'] = 1
 			elseif pcs_usedbreastpumponherself > 0 and pcs_massagedherbreasts > 0:
-				'During showering you clean your breasts and something catches your eye. White drops come from your nipples. It is milk. All that pumping and massaging your breasts probably caused you to lactate!<br>'
+				'As you clean your breasts, something catches your eye. White drops come from your nipples. It is milk. All that pumping and massaging your breasts probably caused you to lactate!<br>'
 				lactation['induced'] = 1
 			else
-				'During showering you clean your breasts and something catches your eye. White drops come from your nipples. To your surprise it is milk. You started lactating!<br>'
+				'As you clean your breasts, something catches your eye. White drops come from your nipples. You find, to your surprise, that it is milk. You have started lactating!<br>'
 				if thinkpreg = 1 or knowpreg = 1:
 					'This is probably happening because you are pregnant.'
 				else
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ $shower = {
 
 		if vanr_lock = 0 and $loc = 'vanrPar':
 			*nl
-			'In your absentmindedness you forgot to close the door.'
+			'In your absentmindedness, you have forgotton to close the door.'
 			'The idea that the door is open occupies your mind while you are showering. It would be very embarrassing if your brother or stepfather looked in at the wrong time.'
 			if indorf = 0: gs 'vanrPar', 'peek'
 		end
@@ -194,12 +194,12 @@ $bath = {
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/wash4.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'While the bathtub fills up you get undressed and then dip a toe into the water. It has just the right temperature so you climb in and let yourself sink into the warm water.'
+		'You undress while the bathtub fills up and dip a toe into the water. It is just the right temperature, so you climb in and let yourself sink into the warm water, moaning softly as you feel your muscles start to relax.'
 
 		if daystart < 10 and StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:
 			pcs_horny += rand(6,10)
-			'You stare at those smooth, soft legs sticking out of the water. You''re still not used to this new body and the look of all this roundness.'
-			'Starting to soap yourself you unwittingly turn your attention to your breasts. They''re so soft and big, and when you touch them you feel an unfamiliar but pleasant sensation. You take your time getting familiar with your new body, then you begin to wash yourself in earnest.'
+			'You stare at the smooth, soft legs sticking out of the water. You''re still not used to this new body and the look of all this roundness.'
+			'As you start to soap yourself, you unwittingly turn your attention to your breasts. They''re so soft and big, and when you touch them you feel an unfamiliar but pleasant sensation. You take your time getting familiar with your new body, then you begin to wash yourself in earnest.'
 		elseif daystart < 30 and StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:
 			pcs_horny += rand(2,6)
 			'You have become a little accustomed to your female body and casually soap up all these soft curves and rinse yourself off, rubbing your hands all over your feminine body to make sure you didn''t miss a spot.'
@@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ $brit = {
 				*nl
 				if daystart < 10 and StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:
 					'You can''t shake off the fact that you''re a girl now, so you decide it''d be best to shave your legs. You begin to lather your legs, still marveling at how soft and round they are. Then you take the razor in your hand and begin to shave your legs.'
-					'You feel really awkward, never having done this before as a guy. Luckily, you had more than enough experience with shaving your face and technically this isn''t really all that different. So in the end you get a pretty decent job done.'
+					'You feel really awkward, never having done this before as a guy. Luckily, you had more than enough experience with shaving your face and technically this isn''t really all that different. In the end, you get a pretty decent job done.'
 				elseif daystart < 30 and StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:
 					pcs_mood += 10
 					'With a newfound routine you lather up your legs and start shaving, careful not to miss a spot. After washing away the foam you softly glide your hands over your smooth legs, feeling good to know that you don''t need to hide your legs in pants. Maybe you should wear a skirt tomorrow?'
@@ -320,7 +320,7 @@ $brit = {
 					*nl
 					if daystart < 10 and StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:
 						'You can''t shake off the fact that you''re a girl now, so you decide it''d be best to shave your legs. You begin to lather your legs, still marveling at how soft and round they are. Then you take the razor in your hand and begin to shave your legs.'
-						'You feel really awkward, never having done this before as a guy. Luckily, you had more than enough experience with shaving your face and technically this isn''t really all that different. So in the end you get a pretty decent job done.'
+						'You feel really awkward, never having done this before as a guy. Luckily, you had more than enough experience with shaving your face and technically this isn''t really all that different. In the end, you get a pretty decent job done.'
 					elseif daystart < 30 and StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:
 						pcs_mood += 10
 						'With a newfound routine you lather up your legs and start shaving, careful not to miss a spot. After washing away the foam you softly glide your hands over your smooth legs, feeling good to know that you don''t need to hide your legs in pants. Maybe you should wear a skirt tomorrow?'
@@ -348,7 +348,7 @@ $brit = {
 					if obdysh = 1 and rand(0, 5) = 5:gt 'vann', 'brit1'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave3.jpg"></center>'
 					*nl
-					'You lather your crotch with some soapy water and carefully shave your pubic hair. After shaving you can''t help but run your fingers over your pussy, enjoying the smooth feeling and getting slightly more aroused by the touch.'
+					'You lather your crotch with some soapy water and carefully shave your pubic hair. After you''re done, you can''t help but run your fingers over your pussy, enjoying the smooth feeling and getting slightly more aroused by the touch.'
 					dynamic $dryOff
 					gs'selfplay','bathtub_dildo_check'
 					gs'selfplay','shower_dildo_check'
@@ -364,7 +364,7 @@ $brit = {
 					if obdysh = 1 and rand(0, 5) = 5:gt 'vann', 'brit1'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave4.jpg"></center>'
 					*nl
-					'You spend some time carefully shaving your pubic hair to your desired shape, and then trim it to make it neat and tidy.'
+					'You spend some time carefully shaving your pubic hair to your desired shape before trimming it to make it neat and tidy.'
 					dynamic $dryOff
 					gs'selfplay','bathtub_dildo_check'
 					gs'selfplay','shower_dildo_check'
@@ -421,7 +421,7 @@ $brit = {
 				*nl
 				if daystart < 10 and StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:
 					'You can''t shake off the fact that you''re a girl now, so you decide it''d be best to shave your legs. You begin to lather your legs, still marveling at how soft and round they are. Then you take the razor in your hand and begin to shave your legs.'
-					'You feel really awkward, never having done this before as a guy. Luckily, you had more than enough experience with shaving your face and technically this isn''t really all that different. So in the end you get a pretty decent job done.'
+					'You feel really awkward, never having done this before as a guy. Luckily, you had more than enough experience with shaving your face and technically this isn''t really all that different. In the end, you get a pretty decent job done.'
 				elseif daystart < 30 and StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:
 					pcs_mood += 10
 					'With a newfound routine you lather up your legs and start shaving, careful not to miss a spot. After washing away the foam you softly glide your hands over your smooth legs, feeling good to know that you don''t need to hide your legs in pants. Maybe you should wear a skirt tomorrow?'
@@ -973,7 +973,7 @@ $toymanage = {
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/analplug.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'You squat and tug gently at the butt plug, gasping as you push it out of you. You can''t help but feel a bit empty, now that it''s out.' & !!0.2.6: Removed unneccessary var check
+			'You squat and tug gently at the butt plug, gasping as you push it out. You can''t help but feel a bit empty now that it''s out.' & !!0.2.6: Removed unneccessary var check
 
 			act 'Finish':menu_off = 0 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
@@ -991,8 +991,8 @@ $toymanage = {
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/analplug.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			if butpluguse > 0:'You squat and gently rub the butt plug against your anus, after lubricating it with a bit of saliva. After a short while, you''ve relaxed enough to be able to push it in. Once it''s in you give it a few gentle tugs, wondering if anyone will catch you wearing it today.'
-			if butpluguse = 0:butpluguse = 1 & '"If I''m not going to use it, then why did I buy it?" you ask yourself. You look at the butt plug for a while, thinking "It is necessary to start developing my ass, so I could have great adventures someday... you could even say huge and thick adventures with crimson heads, uh, now I got carried away..." You''re slightly embarrassed at the thought for a second, but are then overcome by your horny fantasies. Determined to get the plug all the way in, you slowly press it against your asshole after lubricating it with a bit of saliva. It hurts a bit at first, but once the thickest part is in the rest follows rather easily. Patting yourself on your ass once it''s in, you wonder if anyone will notice you''re wearing it today and then immediately feel naughty for even having thought that.'
+			if butpluguse > 0:'You squat and gently rub the butt plug against your anus after lubricating it with a bit of saliva. After a few minutes, you''ve relaxed enough to be able to push it in. Once it''s in, you give it a few gentle tugs, wondering if anyone will catch you wearing it today.'
+			if butpluguse = 0:butpluguse = 1 & '"If I''m not going to use it, then why did I buy it?" you ask yourself. You look at the butt plug for a while, thinking "It is necessary to start developing my ass so I can have great adventures someday... You could even say huge and thick adventures with crimson heads..." You''re slightly embarrassed at the thought for a second, but are then overcome by your horny fantasies. Determined to get the plug all the way in, you lubricate your anus with your saliva and push the butt plug against it. It hurts a bit at first, but once the thickest part is in the rest follows rather easily. Patting yourself on your ass once it''s in, you wonder if anyone will notice you''re wearing it and then immediately feel naughty for even having thought that.'
 
 			act 'Finish':menu_off = 0 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
@@ -1146,7 +1146,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'private':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/dress.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You get dressed'
+				'You get dressed.'
 				gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Return': menu_off = 0 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
@@ -1156,7 +1156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'private':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/accessories/computer/webcam/undress1.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You remove your clothing'
+				'You remove your clothing.'
 				gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Return': menu_off = 0 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
@@ -1263,12 +1263,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'misery':
 			husporday = daystart
 			'The washing machine washed your husband''s dirty laundry.'
 		elseif poroshok < 1:
-			'You ran out of washing powder for the washing machine.'
+			'You have run out of washing powder for the washing machine.'
 		end
 	end
 
 	if husband > 0 and husbanday > 0 and husporday ! daystart and poroshok >= 2:
-		act 'Wash your husbands clothes (2 units of washing powder) (1:00)':
+		act 'Wash your husband''s clothes (2 units of washing powder) (1:00)':
 			*clr & cla
 			husband += 5
 			poroshok -= 2
@@ -1303,8 +1303,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buffpick':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/gym/exercise/fit2.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'While drying off and getting dressed you examine the sleek muscles that are showing through your skin.'
-	'As you do so you think about how you look and decide:'
+	'While drying off and getting dressed, you examine the sleek muscles that are showing through your skin.'
+	'As you do so, you think about how you look and decide:'
 	act 'You like how you look.': normbuffpick = 2 & mirror_steam = hour & menu_off = 0 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	act 'You don''t like how you look.': nrmbfpckct += 1 & normbuffpick = 0 & mirror_steam = hour & menu_off = 0 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
@@ -1319,15 +1319,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'HorrifiedReact1':
 		if stat['hidden_vaginal'] > 0 and stat['vaginal'] = 1:
 			'You don''t even know how this is possible. You''ve never even had sex with anyone.'
 			'What did you do to deserve this? What is everyone going to think of you? Your life is ruined.'
-			'After several minutes of sobbing and trying to make sense of your situation, you finally pull yourself off of the floor. You straighten your clothes and wash your face as you begin to accept the situation you’re stuck with.'
+			'After several minutes of sobbing and trying to make sense of your situation, you finally pull yourself off of the floor. You straighten your clothes and wash your face as you begin to accept the situation you''re stuck with.'
 		elseif rape > 0 and stat['vaginal'] > 1:
-			'It’s bad enough that you were raped, but possibly getting pregnant from it as well? It’s completely unfair.'
+			'It’s bad enough that you were raped, but possibly getting pregnant from it as well? It’s completely unfair!'
 			'What did you do to deserve this? What is everyone going to think of you? Your life is ruined.'
-			'After several minutes of sobbing and trying to make sense of your situation, you finally pull yourself off of the floor. You straighten your clothes and wash your face as you begin to accept the situation you’re stuck with.'
+			'After several minutes of sobbing and trying to make sense of your situation, you finally pull yourself off of the floor. You straighten your clothes and wash your face as you begin to accept the situation you''re stuck with.'
 		else
 			'This is the worst possible thing that could have happened to you. You feel like you''re going to vomit from the stress.'
 			'What did you do to deserve this? What is everyone going to think of you? Your life is ruined.'
-			'After several minutes of sobbing and trying to make sense of your situation, you finally pull yourself off of the floor. You straighten your clothes and wash your face as you begin to accept the situation you’re stuck with.'
+			'After several minutes of sobbing and trying to make sense of your situation, you finally pull yourself off of the floor. You straighten your clothes and wash your face as you begin to accept the situation you''re stuck with.'
 		end
 	act 'Finish' :menu_off = 0 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
@@ -1341,13 +1341,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ConcernedReact1':
 	'Your mind races as you gaze at the test in your hand. The two strips clearly show that you''re pregnant. You know this isn''t the worst thing that could happen to you, but your life is definitely going to change. Are you even ready for that kind of change?'
 		if stat['hidden_vaginal'] > 0 and stat['vaginal'] = 1:
 			'The worst part about this whole situation is that you don''t even know how this happened. How can you get pregnant without having sex?'
-			'After a few minutes of weighing your options, you choose to get on with your day. You still have a lot to consider before you can decide what to do about this pregnancy, but you can’t spend all day in the bathroom without drawing suspicion.'
+			'After spending a few minutes weighing your options, you choose to get on with your day. You still have a lot to consider before you can decide what to do about this pregnancy, but you can’t spend all day in the bathroom without drawing suspicion.'
 		elseif rape > 0 and stat['vaginal'] > 1:
 			'The worst part about this whole situation is that this isn''t even your fault. This was forced on you.'
-			'After a few minutes of weighing your options, you choose to get on with your day. You still have a lot to consider before you can decide what to do about this pregnancy, but you can’t spend all day in the bathroom without drawing suspicion.'
+			'After spending a few minutes weighing your options, you choose to get on with your day. You still have a lot to consider before you can decide what to do about this pregnancy, but you can’t spend all day in the bathroom without drawing suspicion.'
 		else
 			'On some level, you''re aware that this is a consequence of your own actions, but you''re not quite ready to come to terms with that.'
-			'After a few minutes of weighing your options, you choose to get on with your day. You still have a lot to consider before you can decide what to do about this pregnancy, but you can’t spend all day in the bathroom without drawing suspicion.'
+			'After spending a few minutes weighing your options, you choose to get on with your day. You still have a lot to consider before you can decide what to do about this pregnancy, but you can’t spend all day in the bathroom without drawing suspicion.'
 		end
 	act 'Finish' :menu_off = 0 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
@@ -1361,13 +1361,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ExcitedReact1':
 	'You''re overcome with glee as you look at the pregnancy test in your hand. Its two strips confirm that your wish has been granted: you are pregnant. You giggle as you clutch the pregnancy test, excited to share the news with everyone you know.'
 		if stat['hidden_vaginal'] > 0 and stat['vaginal'] = 1:
 			'You''re not sure how this happened, but you''re not going to complain. Who cares if a miracle made it happen?'
-			'You spend the next several minutes fantasizing about your entry into parenthood before you remember you have places you need to be. You finally get up, still giddy as you go on with your day.'
+			'You spend several minutes fantasizing about your entry into parenthood before you remember you have places you need to be. You finally get up, still giddy as you go on with your day.'
 		elseif rape > 0 and stat['vaginal'] > 1:
 			'You don’t even care about the circumstances that got you pregnant. It was absolutely worth it for this moment.'
-			'You spend the next several minutes fantasizing about your entry into parenthood before you remember you have places you need to be. You finally get up, still giddy as you go on with your day.'
+			'You spend several minutes fantasizing about your entry into parenthood before you remember you have places you need to be. You finally get up, still giddy as you go on with your day.'
 		else
-			'Every time you had sex, you hoped the act would make you into a mother.'
-			'You spend the next several minutes fantasizing about your entry into parenthood before you remember you have places you need to be. You finally get up, still giddy as you go on with your day.'
+			'Every time you''ve had sex, you hoped the act would make you into a mother.'
+			'You spend several minutes fantasizing about your entry into parenthood before you remember you have places you need to be. You finally get up, still giddy as you go on with your day.'
 		end
 	act 'Finish' :menu_off = 0 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
@@ -1378,16 +1378,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ArousedReact1':
 	pcs_pregtalk = 1
 	minut += 10
 	*nl
-	'You rub your thighs together as you stare at the pregnancy test in your hand. The two strips displayed confirm that you’ve been knocked up. You excitedly recount every load of cum blast into your fertile womb, wondering which one found purchase. You gently rub your clit in a circular motion as you think about the fact that, in a few months, everyone who sees your large, pregnant belly will know what a slut you are.'
+	'You rub your thighs together as you stare at the pregnancy test in your hand. The two strips displayed confirm that you’ve been knocked up. You excitedly recount every load of cum blasted into your fertile womb, wondering which one found purchase. You gently rub your clit in a circular motion as you think about the fact that, in a few months, everyone who sees your large, pregnant belly will know what a slut you are.'
 		if rape > 0 and stat['vaginal'] > 1 and incest['exp'] = 0:
-			'You pick up speed as you recall your rapist forcefully pumping you full of his wonderful semen without any concern for your desires. You loved having your agency stripped away as a complete stranger decided to make you a mother.'
+			'You pick up speed as you recall your rapist forcefully pumping you full of his wonderful semen without any concern for your desires. You loved having your dignity stripped away as a complete stranger decided to make you a mother.'
 		elseif incest['exp'] > 0:
 			'You pick up speed as you recall willingly allowing yourself to be pumped full of all of that wonderful semen. Knowing that you would get pregnant filled you with joy every time someone shot rope after rope of their baby batter into you.'
 			'The taboo knowledge that you could have gotten pregnant from incest turns you on even more.'
 		else
 			'You pick up speed as you recall willingly allowing yourself to be pumped full of all of that wonderful semen. Knowing that you would get pregnant filled you with joy every time someone shot rope after rope of their baby batter into you.'
 		end
-		'After several minutes of this you orgasm hard. You spend a moment panting before cleaning up and straightening your clothes. Once you''ve freshened up, you move on with your day, still aroused.'
+		'After several minutes of this, you orgasm hard. You spend a moment panting before cleaning up and straightening your clothes. Once you''ve freshened up, you move on with your day, still aroused.'
 	act 'Finish' :menu_off = 0 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
 
@@ -1433,19 +1433,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'prvt_pee':
 			if rand_pee = 0:
 				'You take a seat on the toilet and begin peeing, glad to feel the pressure released.'
 			elseif rand_pee = 1:
-				'After sitting on the toilet you finally release your bladder. A shiver runs down your spine as the stream flows out of you. "Wow," you think, "I had to go more than I thought."'
+				'After sitting on the toilet you finally release your bladder. A shiver runs down your spine as the stream flows out of you. "Wow." you think, "I had to go more than I thought."'
 			elseif rand_pee = 2:
-				'Settling into the toilet seat you pull out your phone and begin checking for messages and doing other things to occupy the time until the stream slows to a trickle and finally stops.'
+				'Settling onto the toilet seat, you pull out your phone and begin checking for messages and doing other things to occupy the time until the stream slows to a trickle and finally stops.'
 			elseif rand_pee = 3:
-				'You plop down onto the porcelain throne and begin to unleash a torrent of urine into the bowl. As you wait for nature to finish it''s business you begin to daydream a bit as your mind wanders off.'
+				'You plop down onto the porcelain throne and begin to unleash a torrent of urine into the bowl. As you wait for nature to finish it''s business, you begin to daydream a bit as your mind wanders off.'
 			elseif rand_pee = 4:
-				'While relaxing your bladder and beginning to pee you decide to reflect on your recent interactions with the people in your life. "What do they think of me? Do they talk behind my back?" You continue contemplating until your body signals that the flow has ended.'
+				'While relaxing your bladder and beginning to pee, you decide to reflect on your recent interactions with the people in your life. "What do they think of me? Do they talk behind my back?" You continue contemplating until your body signals that the flow has ended.'
 			elseif rand_pee = 5:
-				'You nearly piss yourself as you rush to seat yourself onto the toilet. Unable to hold back the flood anymore, your body releases a seemingly endless stream as you moan quietly in relief, thankful that you made it in time.'
+				'You nearly piss yourself as you rush to seat yourself on the toilet. Unable to hold back the flood anymore, your body releases a seemingly endless stream as you moan quietly in relief, thankful that you made it in time.'
 			elseif rand_pee = 6:
 				'After situating yourself on the toilet, you relax and begin peeing. The urine tickles your labia as it sprays out of you into the toilet bowl.'
 			else
-				'As you begin to sit down you nearly jump back to your feet as the cold toilet seat stings your bare bottom. You shake your head and sigh before settling back onto the icy seat and doing your business.'
+				'As you begin to sit down, you nearly jump back to your feet as the cold toilet seat stings your bare bottom. You shake your head and sigh before settling back onto the icy seat and doing your business.'
 			end
 
 	!!If PC is on her period and using tampon, then the following options should appear as well as the standard "Finish and wipe" act:
@@ -1455,7 +1455,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'prvt_pee':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 2
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/pee/period/tampon/' + rand(1,12) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Reaching down and taking the string between your fingers, you slowly pull the used tampon from your vagina. You wrap it in toilet paper to be thrown in the trash bin. Opening your purse, you retrieve a fresh one before unpackaging it and carefully inserting it into you.'
+					'Reaching down and taking the string between your fingers, you slowly pull the used tampon from your vagina. You wrap it in toilet paper to be thrown in the trash bin. Opening your purse, you retrieve a fresh one, unpack it and carefully insert it into yourself.'
 
 					gs 'din_van', 'prvt_pee_end'
 				end
@@ -1484,7 +1484,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'prvt_pee_end':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/pee/wiping/' + rand(1,9) + '.jpg"></center>'
 		rand_pee = rand(0,2)
 		if rand_pee = 0:
-			'Gathering some toilet paper from the roll, you reach down wipe your vagina clean from the last drops of pee leaking from you before dropping the paper into the toilet.'
+			'Gathering some toilet paper from the roll, you reach down wipe your vagina clean from the last drops of urine leaking from you before dropping the paper into the toilet.'
 		elseif rand_pee = 1:
 			'Wrapping some toilet paper around your hand, you reach around and give your pussy and ass a quick wipe before letting the paper drop into the bowl.'
 		else
@@ -1507,7 +1507,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pblc_pee':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/pee/pee-public/' + rand(1,11) + '.jpg"></center>'
 			rand_pee = rand(0,7)
 			if rand_pee = 0:
-				'Settling into the toilet seat you pull out your phone and begin checking for messages and doing other things to occupy the time until the stream slows to a trickle and finally stops.'
+				'Settling onto the toilet seat, you pull out your phone and begin checking for messages and doing other things to occupy the time until the stream slows to a trickle and finally stops.'
 			elseif rand_pee = 1:
 				'While relaxing your bladder and beginning to pee you decide to reflect on your recent interactions with the people in your life. "What do they think of me? Do they talk behind my back?" You continue contemplating until your body signals that the flow has ended.'
 			elseif rand_pee = 2:
@@ -1524,7 +1524,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pblc_pee':
 				'As you sit down to relieve your bladder you get distracted reading some of the graffiti on the wall of the stall.'
 				$rand_girl = func('gschool_randperson', 1, '', 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 0)
 				if rand_pee = 0:
-					'Albina and her Starlettes are a bunch of dirty whores.'
+					'Albina and her Starlets are a bunch of dirty whores!'
 				elseif rand_pee = 1:
 					'<<$rand_girl>>''s vagina smells like puke!'
 				elseif rand_pee = 2:
@@ -1542,7 +1542,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pblc_pee':
 				elseif rand_pee = 8:
 					'Tampons vs. Pads, cast your vote! Below this text are hash marks indicating various girl''s preference. One person also wrote "Freebleeder for life!" Ewww.'
 				elseif rand_pee = 9:
-					'Petra''s cock is smaller than my lipstick tube, LOL!'
+					'Petka''s cock is smaller than my lipstick tube, LOL!'
 				elseif rand_pee = 10:
 					'You''re beautiful! Believe that!'
 				elseif rand_pee = 11:
@@ -1575,7 +1575,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pblc_pee':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 2
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/pee/period/tampon/' + rand(1,12) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Reaching down and taking the string between your fingers, you slowly pull the used tampon from your vagina. You wrap it in toilet paper to be thrown in the trash bin. Opening your purse, you retrieve a fresh one before unpackaging it and carefully inserting it into you.'
+					'Reaching down and taking the string between your fingers, you slowly pull the used tampon from your vagina. You wrap it in toilet paper to be thrown in the trash bin. Opening your purse, you retrieve a fresh one before unpackaging it and carefully inserting it into yourself.'
 
 					gs 'din_van', 'pblc_pee_end'
 				end
@@ -1604,7 +1604,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pblc_pee_end':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/pee/wiping/' + rand(1,9) + '.jpg"></center>'
 		rand_pee = rand(0,6)
 		if rand_pee = 0:
-			'Gathering some toilet paper from the roll, you reach down wipe your vagina clean from the last drops of pee leaking from you before dropping the paper into the toilet.'
+			'Gathering some toilet paper from the roll, you reach down wipe your vagina clean from the last drops of urine leaking from you before dropping the paper into the toilet.'
 		elseif rand_pee = 1:
 			'Wrapping some toilet paper around your hand, you reach around and give your pussy and ass a quick wipe before letting the paper drop into the bowl.'
 		elseif rand_pee = 2:
@@ -1612,11 +1612,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pblc_pee_end':
 		elseif rand_pee = 3:
 			'You gather some of the rough, cheap toilet paper and use it to lightly wipe yourself, not wanting to irritate your sensitive skin. You drop it into the dirty toilet and use your foot to push the handle in order to flush.'
 		elseif rand_pee = 4:
-			'Looking over for the roll of toilet paper see that the roll has been used up. Noticing that the stall next to you seems occupied, you politely ask the stranger to help you out. The stranger chuckles a bit before kindly handing you a wad under the stall wall, which you happily use.'
+			'Looking for the roll of toilet paper, you are dismayed to see that the roll has been used up. Noticing that the stall next to you seems occupied, you politely ask the stranger to help you out. The stranger chuckles a bit before kindly handing you a wad under the stall wall, which you happily use.'
 		else
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/pee/wiping/no' + rand(1,6) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'Reaching out for toilet paper you sigh as you notice that the roll is empty. Annoyed, you wiggle your ass to shake the last few drops from your lady bits before pulling up your panties and walking out of the stall.'
+			'Reaching out for toilet paper, you sigh as you notice that the roll is empty. Annoyed, you wiggle your ass to shake the last few drops off before pulling up your panties and walking out of the stall.'
 		end
 
 		act 'Finish':menu_off = 0 & gt $loc, $loc_arg

locations/pav_complexrolan.qsrc

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ if month >=3 and month =< 11:
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><h4>Rolan on the bench</h4></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/benchsr.jpg"></center>'
-		'Rolan stays on the bench reading something. You can talk to him...or investigate...'
+		'Rolan stays on the bench reading something. You can talk to him... or investigate...'
 
 		if money > 8000 and rolanblockhome = 1:
 			'You have some money with you, maybe Rolan wants his old bath back...'
@@ -40,13 +40,13 @@ if month >=3 and month =< 11:
 					end
 					act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 				elseif npc_rel['A133']>=20 and npc_rel['A133']<40:
-					!He doesn''t like you very much
-					'You try to have a conversation with Rolan, but he dislikes you too much to even pretend to be interested in what you have to say.'
-					act 'Chat anyway':
+					!He likes you a bit
+					'You have a nice chat with Rolan.'
+					act 'Continue':
 						cla
 						npc_rel['A133']+=(pcs_intel/10)+(pcs_apprnc/20)
 						gs 'stat'
-						'You can tell his attitude towards you is milder.'
+						'You can tell your friendship is growing.'
 						act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 					end
 					act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ if month >=3 and month =< 11:
 						cla
 						npc_rel['A133']+=(pcs_intel/10)+(pcs_apprnc/20)
 						gs 'stat'
-						'You can tell his croth is growing.'
+						'You can tell his crotch is growing.'
 						act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 					end
 					act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
@@ -92,39 +92,40 @@ if month >=3 and month =< 11:
 			if rand(1,100) < 20:
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/starting.jpg"></center>'
-				'You hide after a tree to look what Rolan is doing. He seems in bad condition, he''s shaking in the whole body, maybe he needs help.'
-				act 'look':
+				'You hide behind a tree to see what Rolan is doing. He seems in bad condition, his whole body is shaking, maybe he needs help.'
+				act 'look closer':
 					cla & *clr
 					gs 'stat'
 !!Image needed					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/done.jpg"></center>'
-					'he furiously move his hand under the coat..."mmmh...  no he doesn''t need help...." .'
+					'he furiously move his hand under the coat... "mmmh...  guess he doesn''t need help after all...." .'
 					act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 				end
 				act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 
 			elseif rand(1,100) > 70:
+			!!Without an image, none of this scene makes any sense.
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/looking.jpg"></center>'
-				'You hide after a tree to look what Rolan is doing. He''s looking around maybe he has caught something interesting.'
+				'You hide behind a tree to see what Rolan is doing. He''s looking around; maybe he has caught something interesting?'
 				act 'look what has caught his attention':
 					cla & *clr
 					gs 'stat'
 !!Image needed 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat130.jpg"></center>'
-					'Looking better you see the reason of Rolan''s interest... well...that''s a good sight.'
+					'Looking better you see the reason for Rolan''s interest... well...that''s a good sight.'
 					act 'Look':gt 'pav_complexrolan', 'spy'
 				end
 				act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 			else
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/feeding.jpg"></center>'
-				'You hide after a tree to look what Rolan is doing. "oh crap, but how old he is that feeds little birds and post photos of himself feeding them"'
+				'You hide behind a tree to see what Rolan is doing. "Oh crap, how old is he? To feed little birds and post photos of himself feeding them?"'
 				act 'The good side of Rolan':
 					cla & *clr
 					gs 'stat'
 					if rolanpantyconfession ! 1:
 						'Well he''s a good man after all....'
 					else
-					'Well he''s a good man after all .... althought he''s a panties stealer....'
+					'Well maybe he''s a good man after all .... even though he steals panties....'
 					end
 					act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 				end
@@ -136,13 +137,13 @@ if month >=3 and month =< 11:
 		cla & *clr
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/benchs.jpg"></center>'
-		'An old man sits in the bench. He''s feeding some birds...you wonder if this bench push everyone to feed birds.'
+		'An old man sits in the bench. He''s feeding some birds... you wonder if this bench makes everyone want to feed birds.'
 		act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 	else
 		cla & *clr
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/benchsrainy.jpg"></center>'
-		'The large bench where Rolan usually sits. He spend time here to catch butterflies and look around when he can, in the late afternoons and evenings. Due to the rain Rolan isn''t here.'
+		'The large bench where Rolan usually sits. He spend time here to catch butterflies and appreciate nature when he can, in the late afternoons and evenings. However, due to the rain Rolan isn''t here right now.'
 		act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 	end
 else
@@ -150,7 +151,7 @@ else
 		cla & *clr
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/benchw.jpg"></center>'
-		'It''s too cold for Rolan to meet him there. There''s snow everywhere but someone should have cleaned the bench to sit.'
+		'It''s too cold to meet Rolan here. There''s snow everywhere - someone should have cleaned the bench to sit on.'
 		act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 	else
 		cla & *clr
@@ -165,65 +166,65 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy':
 
 	len_rol_ler = rand (0,8)
 	if len_rol_ler = 0:
-		$court_texta = 'You notice two girls looking at each other; one is speaking at the phone.'
-		$court_textb = 'Suddenly the girl without the phone pull dow the panty of her friend while she continues the call and start eating the pussy...it seems they don''t mind to play in the courtyard.'
-		$court_textc = 'The girl on the phone continues her calling as she wants the listener on the other side to know she''s busy; her friend furiously rub the pussy that she start to loose control and suddenly cum. You think you have some more reason to visit often the courtyard...'
+		$court_texta = 'You notice two girls looking at each other; one is on the phone.'
+		$court_textb = 'Suddenly the girl without the phone pulls down the panties of her friend and starts eating her pussy while she continues the call... it seems they don''t mind to play in the courtyard.'
+		$court_textc = 'The girl on the phone continues her call as she wants the listener on the other side to know she''s busy. Her friend furiously rubs her pussy; causing her to lose control and suddenly cum. You think you have a reason to visit the courtyard more often...'
 !!Image needed		$court_imga = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat00.jpg"></center>'
 !!Image needed		$court_imgb = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat01.jpg"></center>'
 !!Image needed		$court_imgc = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat02.jpg"></center>'
 	elseif len_rol_ler = 1:
-		$court_texta = 'Lena and lera are walking in the park hand in hand.'
-		$court_textb = 'Suddenly they stop and start groping each other butt...'
-		$court_textc = 'Both of them pull down their short flashing their asses and turn their face...ooops they seems aware of Rolan...'
+		$court_texta = 'Lena and Lera are walking in the park hand in hand.'
+		$court_textb = 'Suddenly they stop and start groping each other''s butts...'
+		$court_textc = 'Both of them pull down their shorts, flashing their asses, and turn their heads... ooops, they seem to have noticed Rolan...'
 !!Image needed		$court_imga = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat10.jpg"></center>'
 !!Image needed		$court_imgb = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat11.jpg"></center>'
 !!Image needed		$court_imgc = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat12.jpg"></center>'
 	elseif len_rol_ler = 2:
 		$court_texta = 'Two girls passionately kiss each other.'
-		$court_textb = 'They move on a nearby wall, one of the girl sits spreading her legs the other reach her panties and put them apart...she start to explore her friend.'
-		$court_textc = 'Soon they both ends without skirt and start to make out, the blond girl go down on her knees using her skirt on the floor, and starts fingerfucking her friend.'
+		$court_textb = 'They move onto a nearby wall, one of the girls sits spreading her legs. The other reacher for her panties and pulls them aside... she start to ''explore'' her friend.'
+		$court_textc = 'Soon they are both naked from the waist down and they start to make out. The blond girl kneels on her skirt and starts fingerfucking her friend.'
 !!Image needed		$court_imga = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat20.jpg"></center>'
 !!Image needed		$court_imgb = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat21.jpg"></center>'
 !!Image needed		$court_imgc = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat22.jpg"></center>'
 	elseif len_rol_ler = 3:
 		$court_texta = 'Lena and Lera kiss each other on a nearby bench...'
-		$court_textb = 'It seems it''s  not enough, because the immediately move few step away and in they both start undressing...'
-		$court_textc = 'Only their panties remain...when you hear the police sirens. "Move move" Lera drags Lena away...'
+		$court_textb = 'It seems it''s  not enough, because they immediately move a few steps away and both start undressing...'
+		$court_textc = 'Only their panties remain... when you hear the police sirens. Lera drags Lena away...'
 !!Image needed		$court_imga = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat30.jpg"></center>'
 !!Image needed		$court_imgb = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat31.jpg"></center>'
 !!Image needed		$court_imgc = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat32.jpg"></center>'
 	elseif len_rol_ler = 4:
-		$court_texta = 'Two girls are flashing pussy and tits on the weed, it seems really daring...'
-		$court_textb = 'They move on a bench, they must be really in heat...one lift on a wall near the bench and spread her legs offering an easy access to the pussy; her friend start licking and pull out a dildo that she stick in the pussy while eating the brunette''s pussy.'
-		$court_textc = 'The brunette wants to give pleasure to her friend and move down to take lead, she start fucking her friend pussy as if nobody was there...'
+		$court_texta = 'Two stoned girls are flashing their pussy and tits, it seems really daring...'
+		$court_textb = 'They move on a bench, they must be in heat... one lifts herself onto a wall near the bench and spreads her legs, offering an easy access to the pussy; her friend starts licking and pulls out a dildo. She starts attacking the brunette with both her tongue and dildo...'
+		$court_textc = 'The brunette wants to return the favour and moves down to take lead, she starts fucking her friend''s pussy as if nobody was there...'
 !!Image needed		$court_imga = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat40.jpg"></center>'
 !!Image needed		$court_imgb = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat41.jpg"></center>'
 !!Image needed		$court_imgc = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat42.jpg"></center>'
 	elseif len_rol_ler = 5:
-		$court_texta = 'You see miss Sokoloff coming, and you decide to move away...you don''t want to listen a lesson outside the school. You move away and turn to see if she''s gone, but she''s in there speaking with Rolan...wait... "Who''s there?"...You see Lena and Lera exposing their body a few step from Rolan and miss Sokoloff...'
-		$court_textb = 'Soon they move, you decide to follow them and hide behind a wall. Lera pull out a dildo and start to lube it, while Lena go down and spread Lera''s lip...'
-		$court_textc = 'It seems too much daring, and soon they move on a secluded spot to proceed unnoticed. You follow them and find a three to stay behind...Lena push the dildo inside Lera and start to fuck her. This spot pass as unoticed and they continue to fuck free from uwanted sight...well at least they think so... .'
+		$court_texta = 'You see Miss Sokoloff coming, and you decide to move away... you don''t want to listen to a lesson outside of school. You move away and turn to see if she''s gone, but she''s still there speaking with Rolan...wait... "Who''s there?" you think...You see Lena and Lera exposing their bodies a few steps from Rolan and Miss Sokoloff...'
+		$court_textb = 'Soon they move, you decide to follow them and hide behind a wall. Lera pulls out a dildo and start to lube it up, while Lena goes down and spreads Lera''s lips...'
+		$court_textc = 'It seems much too daring, and soon they move on to a secluded spot to proceed unnoticed. You follow them and find a tree to crouch behind...Lena pushes the dildo further inside Lera and starts to fuck her. This spot passes as ''hidden'' and they continue to fuck free from unwanted viewers... at least they think so... .'
 !!Image needed		$court_imga = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat50.jpg"></center>'
 !!Image needed		$court_imgb = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat51.jpg"></center>'
 !!Image needed		$court_imgc = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat52.jpg"></center>'
 	elseif len_rol_ler = 6:
-		$court_texta = 'Two girls sit on a nearby bench. They look around as if they were worried about something. Ooops you can see what they are worried about. One of the girl stick a dildo up her ass...no way she''s worry...'
-		$court_textb = 'Suddenly a man comes to the bench behind them. The girls turn a little to hide their action, they clearly do not want to stop and stay hid as possible. The man take a newspaper he probably forgot and go away...'
-		$court_textc = 'Once the man was out of their sight the girl who were fucking her friend''s ass turn her doggy on the bench to continue in this position...soon you leave, you don''t want to be caught... '
+		$court_texta = 'Two girls sit on a nearby bench. They look around as if they were worried about something. Then you see one of the girls stick a dildo up her ass... guess she wasn''t worried after all...'
+		$court_textb = 'Suddenly a man comes to the bench behind them. The girls turn a little to hide their actions, they clearly do not want to stop and stay as hidden as possible. The man picks up a newspaper he probably left behind and goes away...'
+		$court_textc = 'Once the man was out of their sight the girl who was fucking her friend''s ass turns her doggy on the bench to continue in that position... soon you leave, you don''t want to be caught... '
 !!Image needed		$court_imga = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat60.jpg"></center>'
 !!Image needed		$court_imgb = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat61.jpg"></center>'
 !!Image needed		$court_imgc = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat62.jpg"></center>'
 	elseif len_rol_ler = 7:
-		$court_texta = 'You see two girls in a dress without underware exposing their body...it seems they want to make a show...'
-		$court_textb = 'The courtyard is crowded today and they constantly change position using a three as a blindspot.'
-		$court_textc = 'They kiss and touch each other, but they are obviously ashemed to go further...soon the move away, leaving you with a wetting thought.'
+		$court_texta = 'You see two girls in a dress without underwear exposing their bodies...it seems they want to make a show...'
+		$court_textb = 'The courtyard is crowded today and they constantly change position using a tree as a blindspot.'
+		$court_textc = 'They kiss and touch one another, but they are obviously ashamed to go any further... soon they move away, leaving you with a wetness in your crotch.'
 !!Image needed		$court_imga = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat70.jpg"></center>'
 !!Image needed		$court_imgb = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat71.jpg"></center>'
 !!Image needed		$court_imgc = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat72.jpg"></center>'
 	elseif len_rol_ler = 8:
-		$court_texta = 'Rolan is pointing to the slipway...you wonder what''s there...Wow Lena and Lera are putting a show. They are completely naked on the slipway with their clothes nearby.'
-		$court_textb = 'Suddenly miss Sokoloff walk nearby the slipway with her bag on her hand but she seems to not notice what''s going on. Lena and Lera seems to find the situation funny and they continue trying to stay hide from her sight'
-		$court_textc = 'Unbelievable....miss Sokoloff pass the slipway totally unaware. Lena and Lera start kiss each other...it seems they want to party for their achievment...'
+		$court_texta = 'Rolan is pointing to the slipway... you wonder what''s there... Wow Lena and Lera are putting on a show. They are completely naked on the slipway with their clothes nearby.'
+		$court_textb = 'Suddenly Miss Sokoloff walks past, but she seems not to notice what''s going on. Lena and Lera seem to find the situation funny and they continue trying to stay hidden from her.'
+		$court_textc = 'Unbelievable... Miss Sokoloff passes the slipway totally unaware. Lena and Lera start to kiss each other...it seems they want to party for their achievement...'
 !!Image needed		$court_imga = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat80.jpg"></center>'
 !!Image needed		$court_imgb = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat81.jpg"></center>'
 !!Image needed		$court_imgc = '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/bathchat/rolchat82.jpg"></center>'
@@ -258,32 +259,32 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 		rolanapol = 3
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanturn1.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Rolan I''m sorry if I''ve done something wrong...it''s only that I don''t know what i''ve done, if only you will explain me what happend I can try to smooth things up...."'
-		'But Rolan turn back his shoulder too...'
+		'"Rolan I''m sorry if I''ve done something wrong... but I don''t know what I''ve done, please help me to understand so I can smooth things up..."'
+		'But Rolan turns his back on you...'
 		act 'Please':
 			cla & *clr
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanturncry.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Mphhhf...I cannot believe you don''t know what you have done. You snoop around in my house and take what you want...and me ....I even allow you to wander around. You really don''t know what have you done? Well I''ll tell you: you have stolen my Babushka and used her to repair my bath. Happy....what else do you want to take from me. You have taken what was the most important thing to me and throw it away..."'
+			'"Mphhhf...I cannot believe you don''t know what you''ve done. You snoop around in my house and take whatever you want... and me ... I allow you to wander around freely. You really don''t know what you''ve done? Well I''ll tell you: you used my Babushka''s ashes to repair the bath! Happy now? What else do you want to take from me? You have taken what was the most important thing to me and thrown it away..."'
 			*nl
-			'"I-I...I can''t believe it, if only I could have know something like this I could never be able to use the powder...you have to believe me..."'
+			'"I-I...I can''t believe it, if only I knew... I never would have used them...you have to believe me..."'
 			*nl
-			'"...I''m orthodox and cremation is not allowed. But I haven''t money to afford burial too and I couldn''t leave Babushka to be throwed away. This is why I can believe you, but that''s not the point...you shouldn''t snoop around someone else house. That''s not polite for a woman. And...and...Oh Babushka what have I done...why didn''t I take care of you...you were everything to me....". Rolan start crying in agony....'
+			'"...I''m orthodox and cremation is not allowed. But I didn''t have the money for a burial, and I couldn''t just leave Babushka to be throwed away. I believe you, it was an accident... but that''s not the point...you shouldn''t snoop around someone else''s house. That''s not polite. And...and...Oh Babushka what have I done... why didn''t I take care of you? You were everything to me...". Rolan starts crying in agony....'
 			act 'Cheer him up':
 				cla & *clr
 				money -= 8000
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'panties', 'dispose'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanapolgift.jpg"></center>'
-				'"....Rolan here...take this to dry your tears...I know you like them, and I don''t have some wipes, you can have them...I have a bunch...."'
+				'"...Rolan here... take this to dry your tears... I know you like them, and I don''t have any wipes, you can have them...I''ve got a bunch...."'
 				*nl
-				'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>...I think it''s time for me to make my apologize. I was extremely rude to kick you out from my house in that way...."'
+				'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>... I think it''s time for me to make my apologies. I was extremely rude to kick you out of my house in that way...."'
 				*nl
-				'"Oh Rolan there''s no need...probably I would have done the same if I was you"'
+				'"Oh Rolan there''s no need... I would have done the same if I were in your position"'
 				*nl
-				'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>...please, let me finish. It''s not from everybody to understand peoples habits and to not judge them, that''s the reason why my door will be open again for you. Please miss <<$pcs_lastname>> wolud you be so kind to accept my apologize?"'
+				'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>... please, let me finish. It''s not for everybody to understand people''s habits and to not judge them, but you can. That''s the reason why my door will always be open for you. Please Miss <<$pcs_lastname>> wolud you be so kind as to accept my apologies?"'
 				*nl
-				'"Oh Rolan I''m the one who have to apologise, I''m very happy to spend some time again with you like in the past time. Just...here take those, it cannot give you back babushka as nothing happened but you can recruit some worker to restore the vessel..."'
+				'"Oh Rolan I''m the one who has to apologise, I''m very happy to spend some time with you like before. Just... take these. I can''t give you back Babushka however I try, but you can recruit some workers to restore the vessel..."'
 				*nl
 				'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>...'
 				act 'Say goodbye':
@@ -291,7 +292,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 					gs 'stat'
 					rolanblockhome = 0
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/goodbyerolan.jpg"></center>'
-					'You kiss Rolan in the forehead, and feel like something in him finally rest in peace.'
+					'You kiss Rolan in the forehead, and feel something in him finally rest in peace.'
 					act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 				end
 			end
@@ -301,26 +302,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 			cla & *clr
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanturn1.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Rolan I''m sorry if i''ve done something wrong...it''s only that I don''t know what i''ve done, if only you will explain me what happend I can try to smooth things up...."'
-			'But Rolan turn back his shoulder too...'
+			'"Rolan I''m sorry if I''ve done something wrong... but I don''t know what I''ve done, please help me to understand so I can smooth things up..."'
+			'But Rolan turns his back on you...'
 			act 'Cheer him up':
 				cla & *clr
 				money -= 8000
 				rolanapol = 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanturncry.jpg"></center>'
-				'...Rolan, broken from inside, speaks: ..."Witch...you have stolen my Babushka and used her to repair my bath."'
+				'...Rolan, broken inside, says: "Witch...you have stolen my Babushka and put her ashes into my bath."'
 				*nl
-				'You cannot believe what you have heard."...but...but.."'
+				'You can''t believe what you have heard. "...but...but.."'
 				*nl
-				'"...Before you ask your stupid question, I''m orthodox and cremation is not allowed. But I haven''t money to afford burial too and I couldn''t leave Babushka to be throwed away..."'
+				'"...Before you ask your stupid question, I''m orthodox and cremation is not allowed. But I haven''t got enough money for a burial and I couldn''t just leave Babushka to be throwed away..."'
 				*nl
-				'"...I''m sorry Rolan ... I could never imagined...I''m so sorry Rolan, I don''t know what to do...here take those money, they cannot give you back babushka as nothing happened but you can recruit some worker to restore the vessel...if only I could have know something like this I could never be able to use the powder...you have to believe me..."'
+				'"...I''m sorry Rolan ... I never could have imagined...I''m so sorry Rolan, I don''t know what to do...here take this money, it won''t give you back babushka but you can recruit some workers to restore the vessel... if only I knew I never would have used the powder...you have to believe me..."'
 				*nl
-				'"I appreciate your effort, but that doesn''t changes things. You could have asked, and you didn''t do it. You should learn what''s yours and what''s not. Give me your panty."'
+				'"I appreciate your effort, but that doesn''t change things. You could have asked, and you didn''t do it. You should learn what''s yours and what''s not." He turns and fixes you with a hard stare. "Give me your panties."'
 				*nl
 				'...'
-				act 'Give him':
+				act 'Give them':
 					cla & *clr
 					rolanapol = 2
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -328,7 +329,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanapol0.jpg"></center>'
 					'"...o-ok...I think I''ve learned the lesson"'
 					*nl
-					'"No you didn''t....that''s because you should''n snoop around to take things that aren''t yours, and you know nothing about. Than we have to fix this, so you should really be able to remember the lesson. Now bend over."'
+					'"No you didn''t....you should''nt snoop around to take things that aren''t yours, and that you know nothing about. You need to learn a harder lesson than this. Now bend over."'
 					'...'
 					act 'Bend':
 						cla & *clr
@@ -336,28 +337,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanapol1.jpg"></center>'
 						'You bend and give Rolan access to your bare ass...'
-						'It will hurt <<$pcs_lastname>>, hold your teeth... .'
+						'It will hurt <<$pcs_lastname>>, clench your teeth... .'
 						act 'Ouch':
 							cla & *clr
 							gs 'pain', 5, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 							gs 'stat'
 							pain['asscheeks'] += 30
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanapol2.jpg"></center>'
-							'Rolan start beating your bare butt. There''s no lust in his beating, but you cannot say the same about angry....'
+							'Rolan starts beating your bare butt. There''s no lust in his beating, but you can''t say the same about anger....'
 							act 'It hurts!':
 								cla & *clr
 								gs 'pain', 5, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 								gs 'stat'
 								pain['asscheeks'] += 30
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanapol3.jpg"></center>'
-								'Your ass is red and painful, you are near to cry'
-								'"...i''m sorry Rolan...i''ve learned the lesson..."'
+								'Your ass is red and painful, you are close to crying'
+								'"...I''m sorry Rolan... I''ve learned my lesson..."'
 								act 'Continue':
 									cla & *clr
 									gs 'stat'
 									rolanblockhome = 0
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanturncry.jpg"></center>'
-									'"I''m sorry too miss <<$pcs_lastname>>...I would like this thing was not necessary. I''m sure you have learned your lesson. '
+									'"I''m sorry too Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>... I wish this wasn''t necessary. I''m sure you have learned your lesson. '
 									act 'leave':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 								end
 							end
@@ -367,7 +368,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 						cla & *clr
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolangiveme.jpg"></center>'
-						'"There aren''t other ways."'
+						'"There''s no other way."'
 						act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 					end
 				end
@@ -375,7 +376,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 					cla & *clr
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolangiveme.jpg"></center>'
-					'"There aren''t other ways."'
+					'"There''s no other way."'
 					act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 				end
 			end
@@ -383,19 +384,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 			cla & *clr
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolangiveme.jpg"></center>'
-			'"...o-ok...I think I''ve learned the lesson"'
+			'"...O-ok...I think I''ve learned my lesson"'
 			*nl
-			'"No you didn''t....we have to fix this. Now give it to me."'
+			'"No you haven''t.... We have to fix this. Now give them to me."'
 			'...'
-			act 'Give him':
+			act 'Give him your panties':
 				cla & *clr
 				rolanapol = 2
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'panties', 'dispose'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanapol0.jpg"></center>'
-				'"...o-ok...I think I''ve learned the lesson"'
+				'"...O-ok...I think I''ve learned my lesson"'
 				*nl
-				'"No you didn''t....that''s because you should''n snoop around to take things that aren''t yours, and you know nothing about. Than we have to fix this, so you should really be able to remember the lesson. Now bend over."'
+				'"No you didn''t....you should''nt snoop around to take things that aren''t yours, and that you know nothing about. You need to learn a harder lesson than this. Now bend over."'
 				'...'
 				act 'Bend':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -403,28 +404,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanapol1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You bend and give Rolan access to your bare ass...'
-					'It will hurt <<$pcs_lastname>>, hold your teeth... .'
+					'It will hurt <<$pcs_lastname>>, clench your teeth... .'
 					act 'ouch':
 						cla & *clr
 						gs 'stat'
 						pain['asscheeks'] += 30
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanapol2.jpg"></center>'
-						'Rolan start beating your bare butt. There''s no lust in his beating, but you cannot say the same about angry....'
+						'Rolan start beating your bare butt. There''s no lust in his beating, but you can''t say the same about anger....'
 						act 'It hurts!':
 							cla & *clr
 							gs 'pain', 5, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 							gs 'stat'
 							pain['asscheeks'] += 30
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanapol3.jpg"></center>'
-							'Your ass is red and painful, you are near to cry'
-							'"...i''m sorry Rolan...i''ve learned the lesson..."'
+							'Your ass is red and painful, you are close to crying'
+							'"...I''m sorry Rolan... I''ve learned my lesson..."'
 							act 'Continue':
 								cla & *clr
 								gs 'pain', 5, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 								gs 'stat'
 								rolanblockhome = 0
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanturncry.jpg"></center>'
-								'"I''m sorry too miss <<$pcs_lastname>>...I would like this thing was not necessary. I''m sure you have learned your lesson. '
+								'"I''m sorry too Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>... I wish this wasn''t necessary. I''m sure you have learned your lesson. '
 								act 'leave':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 							end
 						end
@@ -434,7 +435,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 					cla & *clr
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolangiveme.jpg"></center>'
-					'"There aren''t other ways."'
+					'"There''s no other way."'
 					act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 				end
 			end
@@ -442,14 +443,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 				cla & *clr
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolangiveme.jpg"></center>'
-				'"There aren''t other ways."'
+				'"There''s no other way."'
 				act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 			end
 		elseif rolanapol = 2:
 			cla & *clr
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolangiveme.jpg"></center>'
-			'"...o-ok...i think I''ve learned the lesson"'
+			'"...O-ok... I think I''ve learned my lesson"'
 			*nl
 			'"No you didn''t....we have to fix this. Now bend over."'
 			'...'
@@ -460,10 +461,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanapol1.jpg"></center>'
 				if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 					'You bend and Rolan lift your skirt, then he pull down your panties to have full access to your bare ass...'
-					'It will hurt <<$pcs_lastname>>, hold your teeth... .'
+					'It will hurt <<$pcs_lastname>>, clench your teeth... .'
 				else
 					'You bend and give Rolan access to your bare ass...'
-					'It will hurt <<$pcs_lastname>>, bite your teeth... .'
+					'It will hurt <<$pcs_lastname>>, clench your teeth... .'
 				end
 				act 'Ouch':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -471,21 +472,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 					gs 'stat'
 					pain['asscheeks'] += 30
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanapol2.jpg"></center>'
-					'Rolan start beating your bare butt. There''s no lust in his beating, but you cannot say the same about angry....'
+					'Rolan start beating your bare butt. There''s no lust in his beating, but you can''t say the same about anger...'
 					act 'It hurts!':
 						cla & *clr
 						gs 'pain', 5, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 						gs 'stat'
 						pain['asscheeks'] += 30
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanapol3.jpg"></center>'
-						'Your ass is red and painful, you are near to cry'
-						'"...i''m sorry Rolan...i''ve learned the lesson..."'
+						'Your ass is red and painful, you are close to crying.'
+						'"...I''m sorry Rolan... I''ve learned my lesson..."'
 						act 'Continue':
 							cla & *clr
 							gs 'stat'
 							rolanblockhome = 0
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanturncry.jpg"></center>'
-							'"I''m sorry too miss <<$pcs_lastname>>...I would like this thing was not necessary. I''m sure you have learned your lesson. '
+							'"I''m sorry too Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>... I wish this wasn''t necessary. I''m sure you have learned your lesson. '
 							act 'leave':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 						end
 					end
@@ -495,7 +496,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 				cla & *clr
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolangiveme.jpg"></center>'
-				'"There aren''t other ways."'
+				'"There''s no other way."'
 				act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 			end
 		end
@@ -503,4 +504,3 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 end
 
 --- pav_complexrolan ---------------------------------
-

locations/qwBarEncounters.qsrc

@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 					end
 				end
 
-				if money < 2500 or pcs_int >= 60 or pcs_persuas >= 60:
+				if money < 2500 or pcs_intel >= 60 or pcs_persuas >= 60:
 					act 'Tell him you don''t have that kind of money':
 						cla
 						PBB_Met = 2

locations/sexshop.qsrc

@@ -675,7 +675,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clo':
 				end
 			end
 			i += 4
-		if i <= 94:jump 'loopfetish'
+		if i <= 240:jump 'loopfetish'
 	if clothingfilter['quality'] = 1 and clothingfilter['qualitycheck'] > 0: clothingfilter['qualitycheck'] -=1 & jump 'loopquality'
 end
 

locations/shoplifting.qsrc

@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'securityroom':
 		if pcs_money >= 5000: act 'Offer a bribe (5000<b>₽</b>)': gt 'shoplifting', 'bribe'
 		act 'Keep quiet': gt 'shoplifting', 'quiet'
 	end
-	
+
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
     if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 		act 'Deny':
@@ -205,13 +205,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'show':
 
 					act 'Continue on':
 						*clr & cla
+						gs 'boyStat', 'D2'
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/show/show6.jpg"></center>'
 						'Your eagerly grab the fake cock and rub it against your clit swiftly, your pussy lips have turned bright pink and you just want to explode. You look at him pleadingly to let you orgasm.'
 						'But to your dismay the security guard is only focused on himself as he''s furiously stroking his cock...'
 						'You pick up the pace not wanting to be outpaced by him and just as you''re about to orgasm, the security guard decides that it''s time for some payback, as he smugly commands you to stop touching yourself right away...'
 
-						gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 3, 'sub', 'exhibition'
+						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo', 3, 'sub', 'exhibition'
 						gs 'stat'
 
 						act 'Stop':
@@ -225,7 +226,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'show':
 							'It doesn''t take long before you hear loud panting and groaning as he finishes but you''ve managed to faze him out as you''re approaching an orgasm once again as you''re now furiously penetrating yourself. You want to make sure that you''re able to finish before he''s able to stop you.'
 							'His commanding tone and the build up has finally come into fruition as your legs stiffen, your pussy goes numb and you orgasm violently, trembling, barely being able to sit still on the chair. The orgasm is so immense that you feel your ears ringing afterwards for a few minutes.'
 
-							gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 3, 'sub', 'exhibition'
+							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo', 3, 'sub', 'exhibition'
 							gs 'stat'
 
 							act 'Get dressed':
@@ -259,7 +260,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'show':
 										act 'Go to the police station':gt 'police_station', 'entrance', 'shplft'
 
 									else
-										'The door opens and to your surprise there''s the only the security guard standing there holding a video cassette in his hand, "Sorry for the wait, it took me a while to get hold of the cassette."'
+										'The door opens and to your surprise there''s only the security guard standing there holding a video cassette in his hand, "Sorry for the wait, it took me a while to get hold of the cassette."'
 										'Your face brightens as you know that he went through all sorts of trouble to leave no trace behind that you''ve ever been here.'
 										'"Here take the tape and destroy it." he states, "Be gone now before anyone spots you and we both get in trouble."'
 										'You nod and hurriedly jump away from the chair, grabbing the tape as you walk by the security guard...'
@@ -533,6 +534,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 
 			act 'Plead':
 				*clr & cla
+				gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Security Guard', 42
+				gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
+
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/revenge/revenge4.jpg"></center>'
 				'In sheer desperation you begin to look for a way to stop. You try looking at him pleadingly but to no avail. Next you try to speak up but he kneads it even harder, "Want this to stop?" he asks.'

locations/stat_sklattrib_lvlset.qsrc

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # stat_sklattrib_lvlset
 
-!!Attribute set section
+!!--------------- Attribute set section ------------------------
 !!This is where an attribute pcs_"name" is set by "name"_lvl and any adjustments are added
 !!Even though most of these could be done without doing a _lvl to pcs_ conversion, doing so is future proofing
 
@@ -31,14 +31,28 @@ if pcs_prcptn < 1: pcs_prcptn = 1
 pcs_magik = magik_lvl
 if pcs_magik < 0: pcs_magik = 0
 
-!!Skill set Section
+!!---------------------- Skill set Section -----------------------
 !!Each skill has three lines, the first is the comment that says what the skill is, the next that sets pcs_"name", and the finial which sets "name"[1] to [x] with the attribute index of the attribute(s) ending with a -1 to show end.
 !! Clarification on the third line:
-!!  These are the numerical attribute IDs (found at the top of stat_sklattrib) that are associated with the skill. They get a small portion (1/5) of the skill''s exp.
-!!  This means they don''t necessarily need to contribute to this skills pcs_X value, merely if it makes sense for an attribute to increase slightly due to Sveta
-!!  gaining experience with said skill, then you can do that by adding the attribute''s numerical ID there.
-!! Example:
-!!  the heel skill doesn''t benefit from agility, reaction and charisma, however they are listed in the third line (1, 4, 6) and consequently grow a little when it increases
+!!  These are the numerical attribute IDs (listed below) that are associated with the skill. They get a small portion (1/5) of the skill''s exp.
+
+!! Example
+!! jab[1] = 0 would add to attribute 0 which is strength
+!! jab[2] = 1 would add to attribute 1 which is agility
+!! jab[3] = -1 which closes the loop and must be included
+
+!!Attribute variable list
+!!$att_name[0] = 'stren'
+!!$att_name[1] = 'agil'
+!!$att_name[2] = 'vital'
+!!$att_name[3] = 'intel'
+!!$att_name[4] = 'react'
+!!$att_name[5] = 'sprt'
+!!$att_name[6] = 'chrsm'
+!!$att_name[7] = 'prcptn'
+!!$att_name[8] = 'magik'
+
+
 
 !!Jabs; Quick strikes that do not have much power
 pcs_jab = (jab_lvl + (pcs_agil * 2 + pcs_stren) / 3) / 2

locations/succubus.qsrc

@@ -496,7 +496,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'sucwalkinginit':
 			$succlolistn[x] = 'fetish' & succlolisti[x] = i & x += 1
 		end
 		i += 1
-	if i <= 94:jump 'loopfetish'
+	if i <= 240:jump 'loopfetish'
 
 	i = 1
 	:loopexpensive

locations/talent_agency.qsrc

@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'hallway':
 	*clr & cla
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/hallway.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/hallway.jpg"></center>'
 	act 'Leave':gt 'talent_agency','start'
 	act 'Room 1':gt 'talent_agency','room1'
 	act 'Room 2':gt 'talent_agency','room2'
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'SMTV':
 	*clr & cla
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/room.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 	'You enter the interview room and someone is there waiting for you.'
 	'"Ahh! Hello! You must be Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I''m Artur Yanovich. But you can call me Mr. Yanovich," he says, holding out his hand.'
 	act 'Shake his hand':
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SMTV':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/room.jpg"></center>'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 				'He frowns, seemingly puzzled. "I thought you were told what this shoot is about. You need to get naked. Unless you wanted to do it in the street?"'
 				act'"Oh... Right..."':
 					minut += 5
@@ -342,7 +342,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SMTV':
 										act 'Continue':
 											minut += 30
 											*clr & cla
-											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/room.jpg"></center>'
+											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 											'You get in the car and head back to Aurora. When you get there, Mr. Yanovich leads you back through the doors and into the same interview room you met him in. On the way there, you don''t feel as embarrassed as you did before. In fact, you feel quite confident and strong. You just walked down a busy street completely nude! You should be proud of yourself! What''s walking through a lobby with other actresses?'
 											act'Dress':
 												minut += 5
@@ -421,7 +421,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SMTV':
 										act 'Continue':
 											minut += 30
 											*clr & cla
-											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/room.jpg"></center>'
+											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 											'You get in the car and head back to Aurora. When you get there, Mr. Yanovich leads you back through the doors and into the same interview room you met him in. You feel quite proud of yourself, having done the shoot in a single take. Maybe you''re cut out to be an actress after all!'
 											act'Dress':
 												minut += 5
@@ -459,30 +459,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wrong_room':
 	interview = rand(1,21)
 
 	if interview = 1:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/wrong/1.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/wrong/1.jpg"></center>'
 		'You enter the room and see a girl having a conversation with a director or producer. You suddenly realize that you''ve gone into the wrong room and back out, apologizing.'
 		act 'Leave':gt'talent_agency','hallway'
 
 	elseif interview = 2:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/wrong/2.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/wrong/2.jpg"></center>'
 		'You enter the room and see a girl sitting down on a couch while a director or producer is shuffling notes on his desk. You suddenly realize that you''ve gone into the wrong room and back out, apologizing.'
 		act 'Leave':gt'talent_agency','hallway'
 
 	elseif interview = 3:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/wrong/3.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/wrong/3.jpg"></center>'
 		'You enter the room and stop dead in your tracks as you see a girl completely naked except for a pair of panties.'
 		*nl
 		'You rush back out the door shouting, "Wrong room! Sorry!" and slam it shut behind you.'
 		act 'Leave':gt'talent_agency','hallway'
 
 	elseif interview = 4:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/wrong/4.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/wrong/4.jpg"></center>'
 		'You enter the room and stop dead in your tracks when you see a girl standing completely naked. The man in the room shouts at you, "Hey! What do you think you''re doing here?! Get the fuck out!"'
 		'You rush back out the door shouting, "Wrong room! Sorry!" and slam it shut behind you.'
 		act 'Leave':gt'talent_agency','hallway'
 
 	elseif interview = 5:
-		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/wrong/5.mp4"></video></center>'
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/wrong/5.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You open the door to the interview room and are met with a scene of a girl riding a man''s cock like a mechanical bull.'
 		*nl
 		'"Come on! You''re going to have to go faster if you want to get this job!" the man growls.'
@@ -495,7 +495,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wrong_room':
 		act 'Leave':gt'talent_agency','hallway'
 
 	elseif interview = 6:
-		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/wrong/6.mp4"></video></center>'
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/wrong/6.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You open the door to the interview room and see a girl on all fours on the couch being pummeled from behind by a man. You and the girl instantly make eye contact and her expression immediately becomes terrified.'
 		'"Oh my God!" she screams.'
 		'The man looks up from his business and sees you. He shouts at you, "What the fuck are you doing in here! Get out!" continuing to pound the girl even though she''s struggling to get off his dick now.'
@@ -508,13 +508,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wrong_room':
 		act 'Leave':gt'talent_agency','hallway'
 
 	elseif interview = 7:
-		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/wrong/7.mp4"></video></center>'
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/wrong/7.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You open the door and see an upset looking girl bent over the desk as the man behind her slowly pulls his cock out from her pussy. You freeze in shock and then swiftly shut the door without a word but through it you can hear voices.'
 		'"Congratulations on landing the part sweetie. I just hope you realise what your role is going to be moving forward."'
 		act 'Leave':gt'talent_agency','hallway'
 
 	elseif interview = 8:
-		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/wrong/8.mp4"></video></center>'
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/wrong/8.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You open the door and are shocked to see a young girl on the couch while two men rhythmically piston her ass and pussy.'
 		'"Ahh! This ass is tight! You should try it!"'
 		'"Plenty of time for that later. We''ll have the whole of production now that we''ve found our perfect star."'
@@ -524,7 +524,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wrong_room':
 		act 'Leave':gt'talent_agency','hallway'
 
 	elseif interview = 9:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/wrong/9.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/wrong/9.jpg"></center>'
 		'You open the door to see a man with his cock hanging out and a girl kneeling in front of him with cum all over her face.'
 		'"Good job girl. Now lick me clean and we''ll talk about you getting this role."'
 		*nl
@@ -534,7 +534,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wrong_room':
 		act 'Leave':gt'talent_agency','hallway'
 
 	elseif interview = 10:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/wrong/10.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/wrong/10.jpg"></center>'
 		'You open the door and freeze in shock as right in front of you is the face of a girl being fucked violently over a desk. Her hair is being held in a tight fist behind her head as the man uses it as extra leverage to pull her farther onto his cock.'
 		*nl
 		'The man looks up at you and says, "I think you''ve got the wrong room darling," not pausing his fucking for even a moment.'
@@ -544,7 +544,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wrong_room':
 		act 'Leave':gt'talent_agency','hallway'
 
 	elseif interview = 11:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/wrong/11.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/wrong/11.jpg"></center>'
 		'You open the door and see a smiling girl with cum dripping down her face and a man who''s clearly the one who just put it there.'
 		'"Sooooo Mr. Schneider? Do you think I have what it takes to become an actress?" the smiling girl says in a sing song voice.'
 		'"Oh, I think we can find a part for such a silver tongue in our production..." he says with a grin.'
@@ -557,7 +557,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wrong_room':
 
 
 	elseif interview = 12:
-		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/wrong/12.mp4"></video></center>'
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/wrong/12.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You open the door and suddenly stop as you see a girl leaning over a desk and deeply enjoying the cock of the man behind her.'
 		'"How about these moves mister?" she giggles as she begins to wildly gyrate her hips.'
 		'"Goodness gracious girl! You''re so tigh- Ugh! I''m gonna cum!"'
@@ -570,7 +570,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wrong_room':
 
 
 	elseif interview = 13:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/wrong/13.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/wrong/13.jpg"></center>'
 		'You open the door and are greeted with the face of an unhappy looking girl being fucked over a desk.'
 		'She''s gritting her teeth and bearing with it and you can hear her muttering to herself, "Rich and famous... Rich and famous... Just let him fuck you and you''ll be rich and famous..."'
 		'The man smiles, "Don''t forget girl, you''re letting me fuck you day <i>and</i> night for this. I get a key to your apartment or you don''t get the part!"'
@@ -580,7 +580,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wrong_room':
 
 
 	elseif interview = 14:
-		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/wrong/14.mp4"></video></center>'
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/wrong/14.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'"How long do we have to keep doing this?"'
 		'You start to open the door when you hear words and realize you''ve got the wrong room. You''re about to close it completely when you peer through the crack and see two naked girls lying on the sofa half-heartedly playing with themselves. There is a man leaning back on the desk in front of them, jacking himself off.'
 		*nl
@@ -590,7 +590,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wrong_room':
 		act 'Leave':gt'talent_agency','hallway'
 
 	elseif interview = 15:
-		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/wrong/15.mp4"></video></center>'
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/wrong/15.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You open the door just in time to see a girl on her knees in front of a man and jets of cum spurt from his cock to hit her square in the face.'
 		'"Sorry! Wrong room!" and shut the door fast behind you.'
 
@@ -598,7 +598,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wrong_room':
 
 
 	elseif interview = 16:
-		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/wrong/16.mp4"></video></center>'
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/wrong/16.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You open the door and see a cheerful looking girl with fresh cum and a bright smile on her face.'
 		'"... and if you want this part I get full access to your body to fuck whenever I please and you must obey every order I give you. Are you happy with that?"'
 		'She gives a jovial double thumbs up and smiles even brighter.'
@@ -612,7 +612,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wrong_room':
 
 
 	elseif interview = 17:
-		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/wrong/17.mp4"></video></center>'
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/wrong/17.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'Opening the door, the very first thing you see is a girl choking on cock.'
 		'The man dick is deep into her throat and he says, "Ahh yes. You have the best throat in the business you know that?"'
 		'"Mmm! Mmm!"'
@@ -625,7 +625,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wrong_room':
 		act 'Leave':gt'talent_agency','hallway'
 
 	elseif interview = 18:
-		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/wrong/18.mp4"></video></center>'
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/wrong/18.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You open the door and see a girl diligently polishing a man''s cock with her lips.'
 		'"Yeah... Just like that you little slut..."'
 		'She takes his dick out of her mouth and complains, "But I''m not a slut if I only do it for you Mr. Schneider!"'
@@ -636,7 +636,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wrong_room':
 		act 'Leave':gt'talent_agency','hallway'
 
 	elseif interview = 19:
-		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/wrong/19.mp4"></video></center>'
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/wrong/19.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You open the door and see a worried looking girl doing her very best to give a man a blowjob.'
 		'"Come now, you have to do better than that if I''m going to hire you. Keeping your pussy off limits makes your job this much harder you know. I''ll need a velvet mouth and the best blowjob I''ve ever had if I''m even going to consider hiring you without access to that virgin pussy."'
 		*nl
@@ -646,7 +646,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wrong_room':
 		act 'Leave':gt'talent_agency','hallway'
 
 	elseif interview = 20:
-		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/wrong/20.mp4"></video></center>'
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/wrong/20.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You open the door and see a girl in glasses giving what looks like a loving blowjob to the man inside with her.'
 		'"Yeah girl... just like that..."'
 		'The girl lets it pop out of her mouth for a second as she turns to look at you.'
@@ -657,7 +657,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wrong_room':
 		act 'Leave':gt'talent_agency','hallway'
 
 	elseif interview = 21:
-		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/wrong/21.mp4"></video></center>'
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/wrong/21.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You open the door and see a girl being furiously fucked by three guys. Or is it the other way around?'
 		*nl
 		'"Ahh, yes! I love it when we get ready made sluts like this!"'