Proofreading and typo fix

locations/KatjaHomeTalk.qsrc

@@ -1257,7 +1257,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Sextalk':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
 					'You tell Katja how you '+iif(stat['self_fisting'] = 0, 'once', 'sometimes')+' put your whole fist into your pussy, and how it felt doing it.'
-					'Katja looks '+iif(katjaQW['knows_self_fisting'] = 0, 'completely shocked, but', 'excited, and')+' her head turns even redder as she bites her lip'
+					'Katja looks '+iif(katjaQW['knows_self_fisting'] = 0, 'completely shocked, but', 'excited, and')+' her head turns even redder as she bites her lip.'
 
 					if katjaQW['knows_self_fisting'] = 0: katjaQW['knows_self_fisting'] = 1
 

locations/katja_dorm.qsrc

@@ -351,13 +351,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 	end
 
 	if katjaQW['boy_block'] = 1:
-		act 'Tell Katja you are have decided that boys are fun after all <br><font color="red">(Katja will start asking about sex with boys boys again)</font>': gt 'KatjaHomeTalk', 'boy_yes'
+		act 'Tell Katja you have decided that boys are fun after all <br><font color="red">(Katja will start asking about sex with boys boys again)</font>': gt 'KatjaHomeTalk', 'boy_yes'
 	end
 
 	act 'Stop talking': gt 'katja_dorm', 'start'
 	act 'Leave Katja''s dorm room':
 		if sofiaQW['know'] = 0 and university['semester_week'] > 0:
-			gt 'katja_dorm', 'soifa_meet'
+			gt 'katja_dorm', 'sofia_meet'
 		else
 			minut += 2
 			gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
@@ -370,12 +370,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sofia_meet':
 	sofiaQW['know'] = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big260.jpg"></center>'
-	'Just as you are about to leave, the door opens and and a girl walks in. "Hi Katja, I am home early since Maxim suddenly had a meeting with one of professors. I swear that he is doing so much to study hard, almost to much always trying to meet with his teachers. I told him that they might see it as.... Oh you have a guest." she says.'
-	'"Sofia this is <<$pcs_nickname>> my '+iif($university['enrolled_in'] = 'teaching_studies', 'classmate and ', ' ')+'friend form school who is just bout to leave." Katja says to the girl who just entered the room, Katja then turns to you and say "<<$pcs_nickname>> this is Sofia my room mate."'
-	'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, it is so nice to meet Katja''s friends she doesn''t seem to have a lot of them" Sofia says which clearly make Katja blush. "So '+iif( $university['enrolled_in'] = 'teaching_studies', 'you are also studying to become a teacher like Katja', 'what are you studying')+'?" she ask. '+iif( $university['enrolled_in'] = 'teaching_studies', '"yes" ', '"I am '+iif(university[student] = 1, 'in the '+func('uni_programs', 'program_name')+' program', 'not studying at the university')+'" ')+'you answer.'
-	'"Cool. I am '+iif($university['enrolled_in'] = 'nursing', 'also studying to become a nurse, now I notice I do think I have seen you in class.', 'studying to become a nurse.')+' You must tell me all about yourself and what naughty things Katja was up to in school." she sha making Katja blush even more. "I am sorry, but <<$pcs_nickname>> was a bout to leave." Katja says, looking at you as trying to say she is sorry.'
-	'"That''s right I will be leaving now." you say. "Nice meeting you" Sofia says "Wish we had more time to chat, I barely knows anybody here, just Katja and my boyfriend Maxim. See you again soon. I am sure we will become great friends." she continues.'
-	'You say goodbye to Katja and as you leave the room you can hear that Sofia continues to talk the ear of Katja.' 
+	'Just as you are about to leave, the door opens and and a girl walks in. "Hi Katja, I''m home early since Maxim suddenly had a meeting with one of professors. I swear that he''s doing so much to study hard, almost too much. Always trying to meet with his teachers. I told him that they might see it as.... Oh you have a guest."'
+	'"Sofia, this is <<$pcs_nickname>>, my '+iif($university['enrolled_in'] = 'teaching_studies', 'classmate and ', ' ')+'friend from school who is just about to leave," Katja replies before she turns to you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, this is Sofia, my roommate."'
+	'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s so nice to meet Katja''s friends since she doesn''t seem to have a lot of them," Sofia says, which clearly makes Katja blush. "So '+iif( $university['enrolled_in'] = 'teaching_studies', 'you''re also studying to become a teacher like Katja', 'what are you studying')+'?" she asks.' 
+	''+iif( $university['enrolled_in'] = 'teaching_studies', '"yes" ', '"I''m '+iif(university[student] = 1, 'in the '+func('uni_programs', 'program_name')+' program', 'not studying at the university')+'" ')+'you answer.'
+	'"Cool. I''m '+iif($university['enrolled_in'] = 'nursing', 'also studying to become a nurse. I do think I''ve seen you in class now that I think about it.', 'studying to become a nurse.')+' You must tell me all about yourself and what naughty things Katja was up to in school," she says, making Katja blush even more.' 
+	*nl
+	'"I''m sorry, but <<$pcs_nickname>> was just about to leave," Katja says, looking at you as if trying to say she''s sorry.'
+	'"That''s right, I''ll be leaving now," you say.' 
+	'"Nice meeting you," Sofia says "Wish we had more time to chat since I barely know anybody here; just Katja and my boyfriend Maxim. See you again soon. I''m sure we''ll become great friends," she continues.'
+	'You say goodbye to Katja and as you leave the room, you hear Sofia continuing to talk the ear off of Katja.' 
 	act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'	
 end
 

locations/katja_uni_sex.qsrc

@@ -5,26 +5,26 @@ if ARGS[0] = 'first_time':
 	cla & *clr
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/sex/first_time1.jpg"></center>'
-	'The two of you get on her bed together, your slide your hand between her legs and start rubbing her clit through her panties. She moans softly at your touch, while looking at your intently, you can see how turned on she is by your touch.'
+	'The two of you get on her bed and you slide your hand between her legs and start rubbing her clit through her panties. She moans softly at your touch while looking at you intently; you can see how turned on she is.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay_give', 2, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Kiss her nipple':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/sex/first_time2.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you keep rubbing her clit through her panties, you pull her top down to expose her breasts and eract nipples. You dip your head down and start kissing then sucking on her nipple softly, which makes her moan even more, as she arches her back under you. "Yes, oh yes... more please."'
+		'As you keep rubbing her clit through her panties, you pull her top down to expose her breasts and erect nipples. You dip your head down and start kissing then sucking on her nipple softly, which makes her moan even more as she arches her back under you. "Yes, oh yes... More please."'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay_give', 2, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Go down on her':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/sex/first_time3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You stop rubbing her clit and pull her panties off instead, tossing them aside. She looks at you with obvious desire and longing for more, as she spreads her legs before you. You crawl between her legs and burying your face and tongue in her wet pussy, as you eat her out she pulls off the rest of her clothes, you start doing the same.'
+			'You stop rubbing her clit and pull her panties off, tossing them aside as she looks at you with obvious desire and longing for mor. She spreads her legs and you crawl between them and bury your face and tongue in her wet pussy. She pulls off the rest of her clothes as you eat her out and you start doing the same.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 3, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Ask her to go down on you': gt 'katja_uni_sex', 'first_time_cuni_get'
 			act 'Kiss her':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/sex/first_time4.jpg"></center>'
-				'Once you are both naked you get back on your knees and pull her up into a sitting position and start passionately kissing her while your hands roam around her naked body, you can feel her hands returning the favor, after a couple of minutes you break the kiss. "Now it''s your turn." You say in a seductive manner, leaving no doubt that you want her to go down on you.'
+				'Once you''re both naked, you get back on your knees and pull her up into a sitting position and start passionately kissing her while your hands roam around her naked body. You can feel her hands returning the favor before you break the kiss. "Now it''s your turn," you say in a seductive manner, leaving no doubt that you want her to go down on you.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 2, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Ask her to go down on you': gt 'katja_uni_sex', 'first_time_cuni_get'
@@ -37,14 +37,14 @@ if ARGS[0] = 'first_time_cuni_get':
 	cla & *clr
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/sex/first_time5.jpg"></center>'
-	'She bites her lower lip and then grins, as she crawls around behind you and gentle pushes you forward till your are on all fours. Her wet tongue starts to lick you wet slit, as her hair caresses your butt cheeks. You moan softly and lean forward until you are on your elbows and knee''s giving her easier access to your wet pussy.'
+	'She bites her lower lip and grins as she crawls around behind you and gentle pushes you forward until you''re on all fours. Her wet tongue starts to lick your wet slit as her hair caresses your butt cheeks. You moan softly and lean forward until you''re on your elbows and knees, giving her easier access to your wet pussy.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 2, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Grab her head':
 		cla & *clr
 		katjaQW['dom'] -= 5
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/sex/first_time6.jpg"></center>'
-		'It starts feeling really good, so you reach back and grab her head and pull it against you. Grinding her face against your wet pussy, as you push your hips backwards. You start to take control and ride her face, just using her mouth and tongue to give yourself maximum pleasure. Without a thought to her enjoyment in the moment, after a couple of moments of this you let go of her head and pull your dripping wet slit away from her face, as you turn to face her, pulling her down on her back once more with her legs spread.'
+		'It starts feeling really good, so you reach back and grab her head and pull it against you, grinding her face against your wet pussy as you push your hips backwards. You start to take control and ride her face, using her mouth and tongue to give yourself maximum pleasure without a thought to her enjoyment. After a few minutes of this, you let go of her head and pull your dripping wet slit away from her face before you turn to face her, pulling her down on her back once more with her legs spread.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 3, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Fingerbang her': gt 'katja_uni_sex', 'first_time_fingerbang_her'
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ if ARGS[0] = 'first_time_fingerbang_her':
 	menu_off = 1
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/sex/first_time7.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slip one of your fingers into her soaking wet twat, she watches you intently, moaning and biting her lower lip as she slowly start to finger bang her. First once finger then you slide in a second finger and finally you slide in three fingers into her as you finger bang her pussy.'
+	'You slip one of your fingers into her soaking wet twat and she watches you intently, moaning and biting her lower lip as you slowly start to fingerbang her. You slide in a second finger and finally a third as you fingerbang her pussy.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 2, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Eat her out': gt 'katja_uni_sex', 'first_time_cuni_give'
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ if ARGS[0] = 'first_time_cuni_give':
 	cla & *clr
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/sex/first_time8.jpg"></center>'
-	'After a bit you slip out all but one of your fingers, then dip your head down. You start licking, kissing and sucking at her clit, while your one finger continues to fingerbang her. Her moan are starting to get louder and louder, you can feel her starting to tense up, until she suddenly cries out. As a  orgasm rips through her body, leaving her shaking and breathing hard.'
+	'After a few minutes, you slip out all but one of your fingers, then dip your head down. You start licking, kissing and sucking at her clit while continuing to fingerbang her. Her moans are starting to get louder and you can feel her starting to tense up until she suddenly cries out as an orgasm rips through her body, leaving her shaking and breathing hard.'
 	katjaQW['horny'] = 0
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 3, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', -3, 'lesbian'
@@ -76,15 +76,15 @@ if ARGS[0] = 'first_time_cuni_give':
 	act 'Your turn':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/sex/first_time9.jpg"></center>'
-		'Once she has recovered she grins at you. "Oh my god that was amazing, let me return the favor." She says as she gets up and trades places with you, so you are lying on your back with your legs spread. She does the same thing to you, first slides one finger into you, then slides it in and out. Soon a second finger and finally a third finger slides inside of you as she fingerbangs your cuni.'
+		'Once she has recovered, she grins at you. "Oh my god, that was amazing! Let me return the favor," she says as she gets up and trades places with you. She slides one finger into you, followed by a second and third as she fingerbangs your pussy.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 2, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Let her finish you':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/sex/first_time10.jpg"></center>'
-			'It seems she is just mimicking exactly what you did, she pulls out all but one finger and then starts to lick, kiss, and suck on your clit just like you had done to her, while she continues to fingerbang you with one finger.'
+			'It seems she''s just mimicking exactly what you did as she pulls out all but one finger and then starts to lick, kiss, and suck on your clit while she continues to fingerbang you.'
 			temporgasm = orgasm
-			if temporgasm = orgasm: 'After some time you feel the waves of pleasure come crashing over your body, as you feel it begin to shake from a full bodied orgasm.'
+			if temporgasm = orgasm: 'After some time, you feel the waves of pleasure come crashing over your body as you orgasm.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 3, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', -3, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -95,8 +95,8 @@ if ARGS[0] = 'first_time_cuni_give':
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/sex/first_time11.jpg"></center>'
-				'She grins as she watches you have a orgasm, seemingly pleased with herself. "That was fun, we should totally do that again." As you sit up she leans forward and kisses you, the two of you kiss for a couple of minutes until you break away.'
-				'"Yeah it was, I look forward to our next chance." You tell her, then the two of you start getting dressed.'
+				'She grins as she watches you have your orgasm, seemingly pleased with herself. "That was fun! We should totally do that again." As you sit up, she leans forward and kisses you for a few minutes until you break away.'
+				'"Yeah, it was. I look forward to our next chance," you tell her as the two of you start getting dressed.'
 				act 'Finish': gt 'katja_uni', 'try_clothes'
 			end
 		end