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Added porn options to computer

Vengeance_11 1 ay önce
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  1. 183 77
      locations/Komp.qsrc
  2. 143 159
      locations/qjob.qsrc

+ 183 - 77
locations/Komp.qsrc

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	!!elektro += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/komp.jpg"></center>'
-	'Your computer boots up, and soon you''re looking at your operating system''s main screen.'
+	'Your computer boots up and you''re soon looking at your operating system''s main screen.'
 
 	act 'Shut your computer down': 
 		killvar '$subs'
@@ -28,8 +28,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 	!!act 'SunReview of the Dead': gt 'KGZstart'
 
-	!! If the access uses one of the home connections (i.e. Sveta is at home, or in a location that she owns)
-	!! and the 'internet_enabled' value is 1, the Sveta is paying utlities.
+	!! If the access uses one of the home connections (i.e. Sveta is at home, or in a location that she owns and the 'internet_enabled' value is 1, then Sveta is paying utlities.
 	!! Now electricity can go up - but by 5???
 	elektro += 5
 
@@ -62,23 +61,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'browse':
 	!! check if the original account still valid?
 	!! if account_used > 0
 	!! There are 3 ways this can happen during the use of the inernet:
-	!!  1. Sveta is using a minute based internet and ran out of minutes.
-	!!  2. Sveta is using a subscription, she didn''t have enough money to pay the monthly fee, grace period expired and 
-	!!		the interned service has been cut off
-	!!  3. Sveta is using a free internet and something went really, really wrong that set subscription[''free''] to 0.
+	!!  1. Sveta is using minute based internet and ran out of minutes.
+	!!  2. Sveta is using a subscription, she didn''t have enough money to pay the monthly fee, the grace period expired and the interned service has been cut off.
+	!!  3. Sveta is using free internet and something went really, really wrong that set subscription[''free''] to 0.
 	if subscription[$subs] < 1:
 		'<center><b>Browser</b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/eror.jpg"></center>'
-		'You have no internet access, '+iif(access['metered'], ' you have to buy more minutes.', ' maybe you forgot to pay the internet bill?')
+		'You have no internet access. '+iif(access['metered'], ' You have to buy more minutes.', ' Maybe you forgot to pay the internet bill?')
 		
-		if  camwhore = 1 and access['nocamshow'] = 0 and mc_inventory['tech_webcam'] = 1: 
+		if camwhore = 1 and access['nocamshow'] = 0 and mc_inventory['tech_webcam'] = 1: 
 			'Since MyFreeCams will cover the cost, you can still log on to do a cam show.'
 			act 'Go to MyFreeCams.org': gt 'komp_camgirl', 'start'
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/komp.jpg"></center>'
 		if access['general-text'] = 1: '<center><h4 style="color: red;"><b><<$access[''general-text'']>></b></h4></center>'
-		'You go to your favourite start page, while you try to decide on what you want to see right now.'		
+		'You head to your favourite start page while you decide what you want to do.'		
 		'A blinking banner for a <a href="exec: gt ''komp'',''agent''">Kirsanova Real Estate Agency</a> keeps popping up in the corner.'
 		if access['noporn'] = 1:
 			"<b><<$access['noporn']>></b>"
@@ -94,7 +92,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'browse':
 
 		if hour < 20 and hour > 7:
 			if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
-				'You need to be dressed before searching for jobs.'
+				'You should get dressed before searching for jobs.'
 			else
 				act 'Look for a job online': gt 'komp', 'rabota'
 			end
@@ -110,7 +108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'browse':
 
 		if fuckornot_uni = 1: act 'Visit ''Fuckable or not'' University site': $view_location = 'komp' & gt 'komp_HF_or_not', 'fuckornot_uni'
 		if hotornot_uni = 1: act 'Visit ''Hot or not'' University site': $view_location = 'komp' & gt 'komp_HF_or_not', 'hotornot_uni'
-		!!if bankAccount > 0: act 'Visit your bank, maybe to purchase more online time': gt 'komp', 'bank'
+		!!if bankAccount > 0: act 'Visit the bank website': gt 'komp', 'bank'
 		if gor_dorm = 7: act 'Read letter from Eugene': gt 'etoexhib', 'pos91'
 		if camwhore = 1 and access['nocamshow'] = 0 and mc_inventory['tech_webcam'] = 1: act 'Go to MyFreeCams.org': gt 'komp_camgirl', 'start'
 		if (mid($start_type,1,2) = 'sg' and SchoolAtestat = 0) or func('uniutil', 'student', 'enrolled'): act 'Spend time studying': gt 'komp', 'study'
@@ -129,19 +127,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sale':
 		minut += 30
 		elektro += 3
 		gs 'internet_mobile', 'use_internet', $subs, 30
-
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/komp.jpg"></center>'
 		'You go to a popular website where people can post advertisements for free. You could post an advertisement here.'
-		if obkvsdam >= 1 and func('homes_properties', 'property_status', 'city_apartment') = 2: 'You placed an advertisement to rent out your apartment. You should probably check every once in a while to see if anyone responded.'
+		if obkvsdam >= 1 and func('homes_properties', 'property_status', 'city_apartment') = 2: 'You place an advertisement to rent out your apartment. You should check every once in a while to see if anyone responds.'
 
 		if obkvsdam = 0 and func('homes_properties', 'property_status', 'city_apartment') = 2:
-			act 'Rent out your city residential apartment':obkvsdam = 1 & gt 'komp', 'sale'
+			act 'Rent out your city residential apartment': obkvsdam = 1 & gt 'komp', 'sale'
 		elseif obkvsdam > 0:
 			act 'Check if you got any replies':
 				cla
 				if obkvsdam = 1:
-					'No one has responded to your offer to rent out your apartment just yet.'
+					'Nobody has responded to your offer to rent out your apartment yet.'
 				elseif obkvsdam > 1: 
 					predsum = 14000 + (obkvsdam*1000)
 					'Someone wants to stay in your apartment for a month! They''re offering you <<predsumm>> <b>₽</b> in cash.'
@@ -168,9 +165,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'porno':
 	if subscription[$subs] < 1:
 		'<center><b>Browser</b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/eror.jpg"></center>'
-		'You have no internet access, '+iif(access['metered'], ' you have to buy more minutes.', ' maybe you forgot to pay the internet bill?')
+		'You have no internet access. '+iif(access['metered'], ' You have to buy more minutes.', ' Maybe you forgot to pay the internet bill?')
 
-		act '<B>Close the browser</B>': gt 'komp','start'
+		act 'Close the browser': gt 'komp','start'
 	elseif access['noporn'] = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/komp.jpg"></center>'
 		'<<$access[''noporn'']>>'
@@ -178,23 +175,109 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'porno':
 		act 'Leave this website': gt 'komp', 'browse'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/komp.jpg"></center>'
-		'You go to a porn site and browse for a few minutes, trying to find a hot video.'
+		'You go to a porn site and browse through videos for a few minutes.'
+		
+		if fame['city_porn'] >= 100: 
+			act 'Watch one of your own videos':
+				*clr & cla
+				gs 'stat'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/porno.jpg"></center>'
+				'You find a video you like the look of and click on it before getting comfortable. When the video loads up, you''re surprised to find that the girl starring in it is you!' 
+				act 'Watch it':
+					cla
+					elektro += 3
+					pcs_mood += rand(10,20)
+					minut += 30
+					gs 'internet_mobile', 'use_internet', $subs, 30
+					gs 'stat'
+					'Watching yourself performing on camera is an oddly erotic experience.'
+					if fame['city_porn'] < 300:
+						'Most of the people commenting don''t appear to really know who you are. You wonder if anyone you know has seen your videos?'
+					else
+						'The viewers have no trouble recognizing you and a lot of the comments refer to you by your stage name. You wonder if anyone you know has seen your videos?'
+					end
+					gs 'arousal', 'porn', 30
+					gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 30
+					minut -= 30
+					gs 'stat'
+
+					act 'The video ends': gt 'komp', 'porno'
+				end
+				
+				act 'Turn it off':
+					cla
+					minut += 5
+					gs 'stat'
+					'You immediately turn the video off and leave the website. If you found that video yourself, then how many people have seen you?"'
+					
+					act 'Leave this website': gt 'komp', 'browse'
+				end
+			end
+		end
+		
+		
+		act 'Watch vanilla porn':
+			*clr & cla
+			elektro += 3
+			pcs_mood += rand(10,20)
+			minut += 30
+			gs 'internet_mobile', 'use_internet', $subs, 30
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/porno.jpg"></center>'
+			'You find a video of a girl getting fucked and spend some time watching it while imagining yourself being in her place.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'porn', 30
+			minut -= 30
+			gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'Watch porn':
+			act 'The video ends': gt 'komp', 'porno'
+		end
+		
+		act 'Watch anal porn':
 			*clr & cla
 			elektro += 3
-			pcs_mood += rand(10, 20)
+			pcs_mood += rand(10,20)
 			minut += 30
 			gs 'internet_mobile', 'use_internet', $subs, 30
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/porno.jpg"></center>'
-			'You find a video you think you''d enjoy and spend some time watching it. Wow, that girl is so lucky...'
+			'You find a video of a girl getting fucked in the ass and spend some time watching it while imagining yourself being in her place.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'porn', 30
+			minut -= 30
+			gs 'stat'
 
+			act 'The video ends': gt 'komp', 'porno'
+		end
+		
+		act 'Watch lesbian porn':
+			*clr & cla
+			elektro += 3
+			pcs_mood += rand(10,20)
+			minut += 30
+			gs 'internet_mobile', 'use_internet', $subs, 30
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/porno.jpg"></center>'
+			'You find a video of two girls licking each other''s pussies and imagine yourself as one of them.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'porn', 30
+			minut -= 30
+			gs 'stat'
+		
+			act 'The video ends': gt 'komp', 'porno'
+		end
+		
+		act 'Watch BBC porn':
+			*clr & cla
+			elektro += 3
+			pcs_mood += rand(10,20)
+			minut += 30
+			gs 'internet_mobile', 'use_internet', $subs, 30
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/porno.jpg"></center>'
+			'You find a video of a girl getting fucked by a BBC and spend some time watching it. You can''t keep your eyes off the massive cock on your screen as you imagine yourself being in the girl''s place.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'porn', 30
 			minut -= 30
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'The video ends...': gt 'komp', 'porno'
+			act 'The video ends': gt 'komp', 'porno'
 		end
 
 		if pcs_horny >= 50: act 'Masturbate': gt 'komp', 'masturbate'
@@ -205,10 +288,9 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'masturbate':
 	*clr & cla
-	
-	!! needs this because can arrive here from this code block and time can be gone
+	!! needs this because you can arrive here from this code block and time can be gone
 	if subscription[$subs] < 1:
-		'You have no internet access, '+iif(access['metered'], ' you have to buy more minutes.', ' maybe you forgot to pay the internet bill?')
+		'You have no internet access. '+iif(access['metered'], ' You have to buy more minutes.', ' Maybe you forgot to pay the internet bill?')
 	else
 		gs 'sweat', 'add', 10
 
@@ -219,22 +301,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masturbate':
 
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/kompmas.jpg"></center>'
-		'You get comfortable in front of your computer and with one hand begin to fondle your breasts, while you click on a link to something really dirty.'
-		'You let go of the mouse and start rubbing your pussy, imagining you''re the woman in the video. The fantasy and your touching are getting you all hot and bothered.'
-
+		'You click on a link to something really dirty and get comfortable in front of your computer, rubbing your clit and fingering yourself while imagining you''re the girl in the video.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', 30, 'masturbate'
+		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 30, 'masturbate'
 		minut -= 30
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		if pcs_horny >= 100:
 			$orgasm_or = 'yes'
-			$orgasm_txt = 'Suddenly your muscles tighten and you cum powerfully, while you stifle your moans so your neighbors won''t find out. Afterward, you have goosebumps all over your skin. That was just what you needed!'
+			$orgasm_txt = 'Your muscles suddenly tighten and you stifle your moans as you have a powerful orgasm. That was just what you needed!'
 			gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', -1, 'masturbate'
 			gs 'stat'
 		end
 
-		act 'Stop masturbating':divanmastr = 0 & gt 'komp', 'porno'
-
+		act 'Stop masturbating': divanmastr = 0 & gt 'komp', 'porno'
+		
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 
@@ -247,10 +328,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pasians':
 	minut += 20
 	elektro += 3
 	pcs_mood += rand(10, 20)
-
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/komp.jpg"></center>'
-	'You entertain yourself for about twenty minutes, playing a game of solitaire on the computer.'
+	'You entertain yourself by playing a game of solitaire on the computer.'
 
 	act 'Play for another 20 minutes': gt 'komp', 'pasians'
 	act 'Return to desktop': gt 'komp', 'start'
@@ -271,16 +351,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'znak':
 		act 'Pick someone suitable for Eugenia':
 			cla
 			gor_dorm = 9
-
-			'You click through dozens of profiles, before choosing a guy who you think would be a good match for Eugenia. You send him a message, asking if he wants to meet up somewhere.'
+			'You click through dozens of profiles before choosing a guy you think would be a good match for Eugenia. You send him a message, asking if he wants to meet up somewhere.'
 			'Now the waiting game begins! Let''s hope you picked a nice guy for her...'
 
 			act 'Leave this website': gt 'komp', 'browse'
 		end
 	!! Eligible homes: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 7 , 10, 11, 15
 	elseif $home['type'] ! 'permanent_residence':
-		pcs_mood += rand(5, 10)
-		'You spend time looking at the various profiles, but it won''t let you register unless you have your own home and it is set as your current home.'
+		pcs_mood += rand(5,10)
+		'You spend time looking at the various profiles, but it won''t let you register unless you have your own home.'
 		'Still, some of the pictures were quite raunchy and the more desperate profiles were really funny.'
 	else
 		if pcs_lover < 3:
@@ -289,7 +368,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'znak':
 				gs 'boy'
 				gs 'boyfrend', 'start'
 				haraklover[lover_number] = 0
-				'You find a guy named <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> and send him your number after checking out his profile. You hope he will call you!'
+				'You find a guy named <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> and send him your number after checking out his profile. You hope he''ll call you!'
 
 				act 'Leave this website': gt 'komp', 'browse'
 			end
@@ -299,7 +378,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'znak':
 				gs 'boy'
 				gs 'boyfrend', 'start'
 				haraklover[lover_number] = 1
-				'You find a guy named <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> and send him your number after checking out his profile. You hope he will call you!'
+				'You find a guy named <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> and send him your number after checking out his profile. You hope he''ll call you!'
 
 				act 'Leave this website': gt 'komp', 'browse'
 			end
@@ -309,7 +388,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'znak':
 				gs 'boy'
 				gs 'boyfrend', 'start'
 				haraklover[lover_number] = 2
-				'You find a guy named <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> and send him your number after checking out his profile. You hope he will call you!'
+				'You find a guy named <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> and send him your number after checking out his profile. You hope he''ll call you!'
 
 				act 'Leave this website': gt 'komp', 'browse'
 			end
@@ -335,7 +414,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kabtv':
 			cla
 			kabel = 0
 			karta -= 300
-			msg 'Your subscription has been canceled and you can no longer watch the extra channels. The cable firm charges a one-time fee of 300 <b>₽</b> for disconnecting you.'
+			msg 'Your subscription has been cancelled and you can no longer watch the extra channels. The cable firm charges a one-time fee of 300 <b>₽</b> for disconnecting you.'
 			gt 'komp', 'browse'
 		end
 	elseif kabel = 0 and mc_inventory['tech_tv'] >= 1 and mc_inventory['plasma_tv'] = 0:
@@ -343,7 +422,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kabtv':
 
 		act 'Get cable services for your TV':
 			cla
-			msg 'Unfortunately your TV is too old and crap for cable. You''ll have to get a modern TV first.'
+			msg 'Your TV is too old for cable. You''ll have to upgrade to a better one first.'
 			gt 'komp', 'browse'
 		end
 	elseif kabel = 0 and mc_inventory['plasma_tv'] >= 1:
@@ -373,12 +452,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'foto':
 	if subscription[$subs] < 1:
 		'<center><b>Browser</b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/eror.jpg"></center>'
-		'You have no internet access, '+iif(access['metered'], ' you have to buy more minutes.', ' maybe you forgot to pay the internet bill?')
-		act '<B>Close the browser</B>': gt 'komp','start'
+		'You have no internet access. '+iif(access['metered'], ' You have to buy more minutes.', ' Maybe you forgot to pay the internet bill?')
+		act 'Close the browser': gt 'komp','start'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/komp.jpg"></center>'
 		'You''re currently on Russia''s biggest social network site, "Assbook". Almost everyone has an account here, probably including the girl you took that photo of the other day!'
-		'"Maybe if I can find her, I can blackmail her", you think to yourself. "This photo is very raunchy, after all... I bet she would hate to see it published if she''s important!"'
+		'"Maybe if I can find her, I can blackmail her?" you think to yourself. "This photo is very raunchy, after all... I bet she would hate to see it published if she''s important!"'
 		'You can''t help but rub your pussy every now and then while you look at it. You''ll probably keep a copy of this for yourself, either way!'
 
 		if shantfoto > 0:
@@ -397,28 +476,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'foto':
 
 				if fotsearchrand > 7:
 					shantfoto -= 1
-					'Despite your best efforts, you don''t manage to... wait, that''s her! You found her!'
+					'Despite your best efforts, you don''t manage to... Wait, that''s her! You found her!'
 					gerofotorand = rand(0,100)
 
 					if gerofotorand > 30:
-						'Your dreams of making a fortune are quickly shattered when you check out her profile. Cheap clothes, few friends, lives in a poor district of the city... this girl is not worth blackmailing.'
+						'Your hopes are quickly shattered when you check out her profile. Cheap clothes, few friends, lives in a poor district of the city... This girl isn''t worth blackmailing.'
 
 						act 'Go back to the "Assbook" main page': gt 'komp', 'foto'
 					end
 
 					if gerofotorand >= 5 and gerofotorand <= 30:
 						shantsr += 1
-						'When you click through her profile, you estimate she''s an unknown middle-class girl. Still, she has a lot of friends and the outfits she''s wearing in her photos look stylish... she has money to spend.'
-						'"Why not make her spend some of it on me?" you laugh to yourself, and begin to write a private message.'
-						'You send her a copy of the photo with the private message and tell her to transfer a very modest amount of 5,000 <b>₽</b> to your bank account. If she doesn''t want that photo to be sent to her entire friends list (which you secured before sending the message), the money needs to be on your bank account within 48 hours.'
+						'As you click through her profile, you find that the outfits she''s wearing in her photos look stylish, so she definitely has money.'
+						'"Why not spend some of it on me?" you laugh to yourself.'
+						'You send a copy of the photo with a message telling her she has 48 hours to transfer 5,000 <b>₽</b> into your bank account, otherwise you''ll send the photo to her entire friends list.'
 
 						act 'Go back to the "Assbook" main page': gt 'komp', 'foto'
 					end
 
 					if gerofotorand < 5:
 						shantbog += 1
-						'You can barely believe it when you read her profile, this girl is a celebrity! It would be a major scandal if this photo got published!'
-						'You send her a copy of the photo with a private message, telling her to transfer 30,000 <b>₽</b> to your bank account. If she doesn''t want that photo to be sent to the press, the money needs to be on your bank account within 48 hours.'
+						'You can hardly believe it when you check out her profile. This girl is a celebrity! It would be a major scandal if this photo got published!'
+						'You send a copy of the photo with a message telling her she has 48 hours to transfer 30,000 <b>₽</b> into your bank account, otherwise you''ll leak the photo to the press.'
 
 						act 'Go back to the "Assbook" main page': gt 'komp', 'foto'
 					end
@@ -435,60 +514,59 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rabota':
 	if subscription[$subs] < 1:
 		'<center><b>Browser</b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/eror.jpg"></center>'
-		'You have no internet access, '+iif(access['metered'], ' you have to buy more minutes.', ' maybe you forgot to pay the internet bill?')
+		'You have no internet access. '+iif(access['metered'], ' You have to buy more minutes.', ' Maybe you forgot to pay the internet bill?')
 
-		act '<B>Close the browser</B>': gt 'komp','start'
+		act 'Close the browser': gt 'komp','start'
 	else
 		minut += 30
 		elektro += 3
 		gs 'internet_mobile', 'use_internet', $subs, 30
-		komprabota = rand(0, 10)
-		if $loc = 'vasilyhome':komprabota = rand(5, 15)
+		komprabota = rand(0,12)
+		if $loc = 'vasilyhome': komprabota = rand(5,15)
 		gs 'stat'
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/komp.jpg"></center>'
 
 		if komprabota = 0 and gorodokkomp = 0:
-			'You find a job vacancy, on a legit-looking website. It reads: "Wanted! <b>URGENTLY!</b> Female underwear model, for a photoshoot. Pay: 2000 <b>₽</b> cash."'
-			'The description explains that they need someone today. If you decide to take this job, you will have to shut down your computer and go there right away.'
+			'You find a job vacancy on a legit-looking website. It reads: "Wanted <b>URGENTLY</b>! Female underwear model for a photoshoot. Pay: 2000 <b>₽</b> cash."'
+			'The description explains that they need someone today. If you decide to take this job, then you''ll need to go there right away.'
 
 			if pcs_apprnc < 120:
 				'You consider it for a moment but decide against it. You''re probably not pretty enough to be an underwear model.'
 			elseif pcs_apprnc >= 120:
-				act 'Accept the job and go there': gt 'qjob', 'var1'
+				act 'Accept the job': gt 'qjob', 'var1'
 			end
 
 			if hour < 20 and hour > 7: act 'Search for more jobs': gt 'komp', 'rabota'
 
 			act 'Leave this website': gt 'komp', 'browse'
 		elseif komprabota = 1 and gorodokkomp = 0:
-			'You find a job vacancy, on a legit-looking website. It reads: "Wanted! <b>URGENTLY!</b> Female underwear model, for a photoshoot. Pay: 2000 <b>₽</b> cash."'
-			'The description explains that they need someone today. If you decide to take this job, you will have to shut down your computer and go there right away.'
+			'You find a job vacancy on a legit-looking website. It reads: "Wanted <b>URGENTLY</b>! Female underwear model for a photoshoot. Pay: 2000 <b>₽</b> cash."'
+			'The description explains that they need someone today. If you decide to take this job, then you''ll need to go there right away.'
 
 			if pcs_apprnc < 120:
 				'You consider it for a moment, but decide against it. You''re probably not pretty enough to be an underwear model.'
 			elseif pcs_apprnc >= 120:
-				act 'Accept the job and go there': gt 'qjob', 'var2'
+				act 'Accept the job': gt 'qjob', 'var2'
 			end
 
 			if hour < 20 and hour > 7: act 'Search for more jobs': gt 'komp', 'rabota'
 
 			act 'Leave this website': gt 'komp', 'browse'
 		elseif komprabota > 1 and komprabota < 5 and gorodokkomp = 0:
-			'You find a job vacancy, on a legit-looking website. It reads: "Wanted! <b>URGENTLY!</b> Good-looking female model, posing for artwork. Must be able to stand still in one pose for a long time. Pay: 1000 <b>₽</b> cash."'
-			'The description explains that they need someone today. If you decide to take this job, you will have to shut down your computer and go there right away.'
+			'You find a job vacancy on a legit-looking website. It reads: "Wanted <b>URGENTLY</b>! Good-looking female model, posing for artwork. Must be able to stand still in one pose for a long time. Pay: 1000 <b>₽</b> cash."'
+			'The description explains that they need someone today. If you decide to take this job, then you''ll need to go there right away.'
 
 			if pcs_apprnc < 60:
 				'You consider it for a moment but decide against it. You''re probably not pretty enough to be a model.'
 			elseif pcs_apprnc >= 60:
-				act 'Accept the job and go there': gt 'qjob', 'var3'
+				act 'Accept the job': gt 'qjob', 'var3'
 			end
 
 			if hour < 20 and hour > 7: act 'Search for more jobs': gt 'komp', 'rabota'
 
 			act 'Leave this website': gt 'komp', 'browse'
 		elseif komprabota > 4 and komprabota < 8 and camwhore = 0:
-			'You find a job vacancy, on a legit-looking website. It reads: "Wanted! Webcam models. Flexible working hours. Click for more info."'
+			'You find a job vacancy on a legit-looking website. It reads: "Webcam models wanted! Flexible working hours. Click for more info."'
 			act 'Gather more information':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
@@ -497,11 +575,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rabota':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/camwhore1.jpg"></center>'
 				'You click the button and get taken to the full job description.'
-				'<i>For this job, you will have to expose your body in front of customers, fulfilling their wishes. Payment is completely based on a tip system: customers on the website can buy tokens, which they can use to tip girls they enjoy watching.'
-				'The website will cover all costs during your shows. But how much money you make is up to you: the better you are at attracting viewers, and the more you are willing to do to please them, the more likely they will be to tip you.'
-				'After a quick verification, you usually get paid immediately after a session ends. The tokens you earn will be converted to rubles, and paid to your bank account right away.'
-				'The website hides your stream for viewers from your region, so the chance of being recognized by someone you know in real life is very low.'
-				'If you''re interested in becoming a webcam girl, please fill in this questionnaire below.</i>'
+				'<i>You will be required to expose your body in front of viewers and fulfil their every wish. Payment is based on a tip system: Customers on the website buy tokens which they can use to tip girls they enjoy watching.'
+				'The website will cover all costs during your shows, but how much money you make is up to you: The better you are at attracting viewers, and the more you''re willing to do to please them, the more likely they will be to tip you.' 
+				'Any tokens you earn will be converted to rubles and paid into your bank account immediately after a session ends. The website also hides your stream for viewers from your region, so the chance of you being recognized by someone you know in real life is very low.'
+				'If you''re interested, please fill in the questionnaire below.</i>'
 				
 				if bankAccount = 0:
 					'You need a valid bank account to be able to register for this job.'
@@ -521,8 +598,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rabota':
 									$pcs_webcamname = input("Which name would you like to use? (Leave blank for <<$pcs_nickname>>)")
 								if $pcs_webcamname = '':$pcs_webcamname = '<<$pcs_nickname>>'
 							end
-							'You fill out the questionnaire and register yourself as a webcam model. Ten minutes later, you have already been approved and you can now earn money as a webcam girl.'
-							'Of course, you will need a functioning webcam to do this! If you don''t have one yet, they are fairly cheap to buy at most local supermarket chains.'
+							'You fill out the questionnaire and register yourself as a webcam model. Ten minutes later, you''re approved and can now earn money as a webcam girl.'
+							'Of course, you''ll need a functioning webcam to do this! If you don''t have one yet, they''re fairly cheap to buy at most local supermarket chains.'
 							act 'Leave this website': gt 'komp','browse'
 						end
 						act 'Leave this website': gt 'komp','browse'
@@ -535,8 +612,37 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rabota':
 				if hour < 20 and hour > 7: act 'Search for more jobs': gt 'komp','rabota'
 				act 'Leave this website': gt 'komp','browse'
 			end
+		elseif komprabota > 7 and komprabota < 10 and film = 0:
+			'You find a job vacancy on a legit-looking website. It reads: "Nude female models wanted! Flexible hours and pay. Click for more info."'
+			act 'Gather more information':
+				*clr & cla
+				minut += 5
+				elektro += 1
+				gs 'internet_mobile', 'use_internet', $subs, 5
+				gs 'stat'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/komp.jpg"></center>'
+				'You click the button for the full job description, but it''s brief and not entirely helpful.'
+				'<i>Are you a girl who likes exposing herself on camera in erotic situations for other people''s pleasure? If so, then come to this address and ask for Dimitri! Under 21s preferred.<i>"'
+				'A quick search of the listed address tells you that it''s located somewhere in the red light district of the city.'
+				if pornstudio = 0: 'You''ve heard rumours that an underground porn studio is located somewhere in that area.'
+				if pornstudio = 1: 'The porn studio is located in that area. This job listing suddenly makes more sense to you.'
+				
+				if pcs_inhib >= 40:
+					act 'Write down the address':
+						cla
+						minut += 2
+						if pornstudio = 0: pornstudio = 1
+						gs 'stat'
+						'You quickly take a note of the address. A job is a job, even if it is seedy.'
+						act 'Leave this website': gt 'komp','browse'
+					end
+				else
+					*nl
+					'You have a good idea what this listing is implying, and don''t feel comfortable going along with it. You quickly close the tab.'
+				end
+			end
 		else
-			'Unfortunately, you do not find any jobs you would consider doing.'
+			'Unfortunately, you don''t find any jobs you would consider doing.'
 
 			if hour < 20 and hour > 7: act 'Search for more jobs': gt 'komp','rabota'
 			act 'Leave this website': gt 'komp','browse'
@@ -555,7 +661,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'study':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/study.jpg"></center>'
 	'You spend an hour on the IEM website, reading news articles and educational blogs. You already feel a bit smarter.'
 
-	act 'Leave this website': gt'komp','browse'
+	act 'Leave this website': gt 'komp','browse'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'agent' :

+ 143 - 159
locations/qjob.qsrc

@@ -1,37 +1,37 @@
 # qjob
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'var1':
-	cla & *clr
+	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
-	var = rand(0, 3)
+	var = rand(0,3)
 
 	if var ! 0:
 		minut += 180
 		gs 'exp_gain', 'mdlng', rand(0,3)
 		money += 2000
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/photoshoot/f0.jpg"></center>'
-		'You arrive at a small photo studio in the center of the city, and smile: "Hi! I''m here for the model job? I came as quick as I could!"'
-		'An attractive girl guides you to a dressing room, and tells you to undress. A few other girls are standing around wearing lingerie, probably getting ready for a shoot as well.'
-		'After you undress the photographer comes in, and he studies your body scrutinously before giving his assistant an approving nod: "She''ll do, get her ready."'
-		'His assistant guides you to another dressing room, along with another girl you''ll do your shoot with. She gives you the lingerie to wear for the shoot, and skilfully puts some professional make-up on your face. She works very fast, clearly she has done this many times before.'
-		'Then you and the girl are escorted into the studio room and the shoot starts, with the photographer telling you and your temporary colleague how to position while he takes what must be hundreds of photos of the two of you. At one point, the strap of your bra slides down and one of your breasts shows quite clearly.'
-		'When you move your hand to adjust the bra, the photographer stops you: "No, stop! Leave that as it is, it''s perfect! Other girl, cover her breasts with your hands so her nipples won''t show."'
-
-		act 'Adjust the bra anyway':
+		'You arrive at a small photo studio in the center of the city. "Hi! I''m here for the model job? I came as quick as I could!" you say with a smile.'
+		'An attractive girl guides you to a dressing room and tells you to undress. A few other girls are standing around wearing lingerie, probably getting ready for a shoot as well.'
+		'Once you undress, the photographer comes in and studies your body scrutinously before giving his assistant an approving nod. "She''ll do. Get her ready."'
+		*nl
+		'His assistant guides you to another dressing room, along with another girl. She gives you the lingerie to wear for the shoot, and skilfully puts some professional make-up on your face. She works very fast, clearly having done this many times before.'
+		'You''re then escorted into the studio room and the shoot starts, with the photographer telling you and your temporary colleague how to position while he takes what must be hundreds of photos. At one point, the strap of your bra slides down and one of your breasts shows quite clearly.'
+		'When you move your hand to fix it, the photographer stops you. "No! Leave it as it is, it''s perfect! Other girl, cover her breasts with your hands so her nipples won''t show."'
+
+		act 'Fix your bra':
 			cla
-			'"I don''t think so, that''s not the type of shoot I signed up for! What kind of girl do you think I am!?" you tell the photographer resolutely, and adjust the bra even though he told you not to. The photographer grumbles a bit under his breath, but continues with the shoot as if nothing happened. A while later the shoot is done, and you get dressed again while his assistant hands you an envelope with the 2,000 <b>₽</b> as promised.'
+			'"That''s not the type of shoot I signed up for! What kind of girl do you think I am!?" you reply resolutely and adjust the bra. The photographer grumbles under his breath, but continues with the shoot as if nothing happened.' 
+			'Once the shoot''s done, you get dressed and his assistant hands you an envelope with the 2,000 <b>₽</b> as promised.'
 
-			act 'Leave':gt 'city_center'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'city_center'
 		end
 
-		act 'Leave the bra alone':
-			cla
-			*clr
+		act 'Leave it alone':
+			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/photoshoot/f1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You bite your lip and leave the bra alone, feeling a bit embarrassed while the other girl awkwardly uses her hands to hide your nipples from view.'
-			'After a while, the photographer tells you to change into a specific position again, and then walks up to you and kisses your neck while his hand rests on your buttocks.'
-			'The other girl gasps, looking at you with a confused look in her eyes. Her mouth is wide open in surprise, and she''s not really sure what to do.'
-
+			'You bite your lip and leave your bra alone, feeling a little embarrassed as the other girl awkwardly uses her hands to hide your nipples from view.'
+			'After a while, the photographer tells you to change into a specific position before he walks up and kisses your neck as his hand rests on your ass.'
+			'The other girl gasps, looking at you in confusion with her mouth is wide open in surprise. She''s clearly not sure what to do.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 3
 			gs 'stat'
 			gs 'willpower', 'kiss', 'resist', 'medium'
@@ -41,21 +41,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'var1':
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/photoshoot/f0.jpg"></center>'
-					'"Hey, stop that!" you cry out, and pull away from the photographer. He apologizes profusely and after a moment of silence, asks you put the bra back on so you can finish the shoot. The tension in the studio is palpable during the remainder of the shoot, and you''re glad when it''s over. You quickly get dressed again and leave as soon as you can, after you receive your payment.'
-					act 'Leave the studio':gt 'city_center'
+					'"Hey, stop that!" you cry out and pull away from him. He apologizes profusely and after a moment of silence, asks you put your bra back on so you can finish the shoot.' 
+					'The tension in the studio is palpable during the remainder of the shoot, and you''re glad when it''s over. You quickly get dressed and leave as soon as you receive your payment.'
+					act 'Leave the studio': gt 'city_center'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Tell him to stop (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end	
 
 			act 'Let it happen':
-				cls
+				*clr & cla
 				girl += 1
 				guy += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/photoshoot/f2.jpg"></center>'
-				'The photographer smiles when he notices you''re not objecting, and slowly kisses his way down your shoulders and down your back, until his nose rests between your buttocks. When he pulls down your stylish panties, he buries his tongue between your ass cheeks and tries to make his way to your pussy.'
-				'The other girl is still a bit baffled by what is happening, and awkwardly holds your boobs in her hands while she looks like she''s trying to figure out what to do. Then she decides to just go along with it, and kisses your lips carefully. Her hands are roving your body more and more enthusiastically after a while, kneading your boobs and rolling your nipples between her fingers while the photographer licks your pussy from behind. Your hands, in turn, are on the girl''s ass, pulling her closer to you.'
-				'Feeling that you''re close to an orgasm, you let go of the girl and lean back towards the photographer, making him lick you to completion. With a satisfied moan you cum on his mouth, while you kiss the girl happily. Then the photographer stands up and suggests: "So, girls... how about we continue this in the locker room?"'
+				'The photographer smiles when he notices you''re not objecting, and slowly kisses his way down your back until his nose rests between your buttocks. When he pulls down your stylish panties, he buries his tongue between your ass cheeks and tries to make his way to your pussy.'
+				'The other girl is still a bit baffled by what''s happening, and awkwardly holds your breasts in her hands while trying to figure out what to do. She decides to just go along with it and kisses your lips carefully while kneading your breasts and teasing your nipples. Your hands, in turn, are on the girl''s ass, pulling her closer to you.'
+				'Feeling that you''re close to an orgasm, you let go of the girl and lean back towards the photographer, making him lick you to completion. With a satisfied moan, you cum on his mouth while you kiss the girl happily. The photographer then stands up. "So... How about we continue this in the locker room?"'
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 15, 'dom', 'group'
 				gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 15, 'lesbian', 'group'
@@ -69,17 +70,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'var1':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 						gs 'stat'
-						'You smile at the photographer confidently and say: "Thanks, but no thanks. That was nice, but I have other places to go now. Ciao!"'
-						'The photographer looks at you a bit surprised, and opens his mouth to object. Then he shrugs and looks at the other girl, who is more willing to go with him. His assistant gives you the money from the shoot, while you hear the photographer and the other model having loud sex in the locker room next to you. The assistant doesn''t seem phased at all; apparently this happens all the time, and you would''ve been just one of the many notches on his belt. You quickly slip back into your normal clothes and leave.'
+						'You smile at the photographer confidently. "Thanks, but no thanks. That was nice, but I have other places to be."'
+						'The photographer opens his mouth to object before he shrugs and looks at the other girl, who is more willing to go with him. His assistant gives you the money from the shoot and you hear the photographer and the other model having loud sex in the locker room as you get dressed.'
+						'The assistant doesn''t seem bothered at all, as if this happens all the time.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
-						act 'Leave the studio':gt 'city_center'
+						act 'Leave the studio': gt 'city_center'
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Refuse and leave (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 				end
 
-				act 'Go with them for some more fun':
+				act 'Go with them':
 					picrand = 30
 					gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Photographer', rand(18,45)
 					gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
@@ -91,61 +93,52 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'var1':
 		minut += 60
 		gs 'exp_gain', 'mdlng', rand(0,1)
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/photoshoot/f3.jpg"></center>'
-		'You arrive at a small photo studio in the center of the city, and smile: "Hi! I''m here for the model job? I came as quick as I could!"'
-		'The only other people in the studio are a female photographer, and a second model you''ll be doing the shoot with. She smiles happily: "Great! I''m glad you could make it on such short notice. Just take a seat over there and we''ll get you sorted!"'
-		'You take place where she told you to, and she quickly adds a tab of make-up and hands you some clothes to wear. When you''re ready, you move to the studio and assume various poses with the other girl, while the photographer examines the two of you closely. She seems happy with her choice.'
-		'When you''re nearly done, she says: "Listen... I''ve already discussed this with the other girl, but you should know: we''re not doing this shoot for advertising purposes. It''s a shoot for a company that produces erotic content."'
-		'Noticing your questioning look, she quickly adds: "It''s only for abroad, so no one you know will see this footage, I promise! What do you say?"'
-		'Slowly it dawns upon you: without ever actually saying it out loud, the photographer is asking you to do a porn shoot with this other girl...'
+		'You arrive at a small photo studio in the center of the city. "Hi! I''m here for the model job? I came as quick as I could!" you say with a smile.'
+		'The only other people in the studio are a female photographer and a second model you''ll be doing the shoot with. The photographer smiles happily. "Great! I''m glad you could make it on such short notice. Just take a seat over there and I''ll get you sorted!"'
+		'You take your place and she quickly adds a tab of make-up and hands you some clothes to wear. When you''re ready, you move to the studio and assume various poses with the other girl while the photographer examines the two of you closely. She seems happy with her choice.'
+		'"Listen..." she says, getting your attention. "I''ve already discussed this with the other girl, but you should know: we''re not doing this shoot for advertising purposes. It''s for a company that produces... erotic content. It''s only for foreign markets, so no one you know will see it, I promise!"'
 		gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Refuse and leave (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'"What!? I''m not here to do porn! What kind of girl you think I am!?" you ask indignantly, and quickly walk back to the dressing room. The photographer tries to convince you through the door while you put your own clothes back on, but you leave the building without saying another word. The nerve of some people!'
-				act 'Leave the studio':gt 'city_center'
+				'"What!? I''m not here to do porn! What kind of girl do you think I am!?" you ask indignantly before quickly walking back to the dressing room. The photographer tries to convince you through the door as you put your clothes back on, but you storm out of the building without saying another word.'
+				act 'Leave the studio': gt 'city_center'
 			end
 		else
 			act 'Refuse and leave (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
 
 		act 'Agree to do the shoot':
-			cls
+			*clr & cla
 			money += 2500
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/photoshoot/f4.jpg"></center>'
-			'"It''s only for abroad, right?" you check. When the photographer nods with a hopeful look in her eyes, you shrug. You could use the money!'
-			'"Please? I''ll throw in an extra 500 <b>₽</b>! You''re perfect for the shoot!" she offers, noticing you didn''t leave. In her experience there are two kinds of girls: those that leave instantly at the first hint of porn, and those that end up staying when she promises a little extra money.'
-			'When you say you''ll do it, the photographer can barely hold herself back from hugging you. Apparently time is of the essence for her, and you''re really helping her out.'
-			'"Great, just hug and kiss each other a little! Do what feels right... I''ll direct you as needed", she smiles, and begins to take photos of you and the other girl while you make out. The other girl acts like she''s done this many times before, and you follow her lead and try to copy her movements for the most part.'
-			'"Slow down a bit, girls!" the photographer laughs, when you''re really starting to get involved in the shoot. Without even realizing it, you were on your knees, licking the other girl''s pussy eagerly. Following the photographer''s guidance, she takes several amazing pictures while she tells you what to do and how to act.'
-			'When you take a breather, she gives the other girl a dildo saying: "Okay, for the next part, you''re going to need this." Then she looks at you and adds: "You, get on your knees."'
-
+			'"It''s only for abroad, right?" you check. When the photographer nods with a hopeful look in her eyes, you shrug.'
+			'"Please? I''ll throw in an extra 500 <b>₽</b>! You''re perfect for the shoot!" she offers.'
+			'When you agree, the photographer can barely hold herself back from hugging you. "Great, just hug and kiss each other a little! Do what feels right. I''ll direct you as needed," she smiles and starts taking photos of you and the other girl as you make out. The other girl acts like she''s done this many times before, and you follow her lead and try to copy her movements.'
+			'"Slow down a little, girls!" the photographer laughs when you start getting into the shoot. Without even realizing it, you''re on your knees, licking the other girl''s pussy. Following the photographer''s guidance, she takes several pictures as she tells you what to do and how to act.'
+			'When you take a breather, she gives the other girl a dildo. "Okay, for the next part, you''re going to need this." She then looks at you. "You, get on your knees."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 15, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 15, 'lesbian'
 			minut -= 15
 			gs 'stat'
 			
 			act 'Get down on your knees':
-				cls
+				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/photoshoot/f5.jpg"></center>'
-				'When you drop to your knees and the other girl kneels down behind you, the photographer stops her: "Wait! I have some lube he- never mind."'
-				'She smiles when she sees your sopping wet cunt and adds: "Looks like you won''t need it. Go on."'
-				'The other girl slides the dildo inside you, and you moan and writhe in front of the camera while the other girl fucks your pussy skilfully with the dildo, hitting all the right spots. She''s definitely done this before!'
-				'After a while, the clicks from the camera stop. When you open your eyes and look behind you, you see that the photographer has her hand on the dildo now! She kisses the other girl softly, with a serene smile on her face: "I got all the shots I wanted... now it''s time for me to have some fun! Being a photographer is tough, you know... I need to unwind from time to time!"'
-
+				'You drop to your knees and the other girl kneels down behind you before she slides the dildo inside you. You moan and writhe in front of the camera as the other girl fucks your pussy skilfully with the dildo, hitting all the right spots. She''s definitely done this before!'
+				'After a while, the clicks from the camera stop. When you open your eyes and look behind you, you see that the photographer has her hand on the dildo now! She kisses the other girl softly, with a serene smile on her face. "I got all the shots I wanted. Now it''s time for me to have some fun! Being a photographer is tough, you know. I need to unwind from time to time!"'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo', 35, 'lesbian', 'group'
 				gs 'stat'
 				
 				act 'Change position':
-					cls
+					*clr & cla
 					picrand = rand(6, 10)
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/photoshoot/f<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'You''re too baffled to complain, even if you wanted to. She''s so good with that dildo, you''d have signed over your house to her if it meant she''d keep fucking you like this!'
-					'The photographer enjoys the bodies of the two of you, still giving commands from time to time. Your tongue feels tired from all the licking, by the time it''s over.'
-					'The three of you lay exhaustedly on the floor, and only slowly get up. While the three of you put your clothes back on, the other girl tells the photographer: "That was great! I loved how feisty this one was... same time next week?"'
-					'The photographer laughs as she gives you your pay check, and tells her friend: "Absolutely! I love my job..."'
-
+					'You''re too baffled to complain, even if you wanted to. The photographer enjoys the two of you, still giving commands from time to time. Your tongue feels tired from all the licking by the time it''s over.'
+					'The three of you lay exhaustedly on the floor, and only slowly get up. "That was great! I loved how feisty this one was... Same time next week?" the other girl asks the photographer as you all get dressed.'
+					'The photographer laughs as she gives you your pay check. "Absolutely! I love my job..."'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo', 40, 'lesbian', 'group'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 40, 'lesbian', 'group'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 40, 'lesbian', 'group'
@@ -153,7 +146,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'var1':
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
 				
-					act 'Leave the studio':gt 'city_center'
+					act 'Leave the studio': gt 'city_center'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -161,18 +154,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'var1':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'var2':
-	cla
-	*clr
+	*clr & cla
 	minut += 120
 	gs 'exp_gain', 'mdlng', rand(0,2)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/photoshoot/f11.jpg"></center>'
-	'You arrive at a small photo studio in the center of the city, and smile: "Hi! I''m here for the model job? I came as quick as I could!"'
-	'The only other person in the studio is a female photographer. She smiles happily: "Great! I''m glad you could make it on such short notice. Just take a seat over there and we''ll get you sorted!"'
-	'She quickly fixes your make-up and then gives you the underwear you''re supposed to wear for the shoot. It''s a very thin and practically see-through material, but very enticing. You put it on and meet her in the studio area, and diligently follow her instructions while she takes pictures that leave very little to the imagination.'
-	'At one point she tells you to lie down, and your breasts almost pop out of the sheer top you''re wearing. The photographer grins at you and says: "I''ll be honest with you. I don''t plan on publishing this shoot... I''m just a girl with a lot of money to spend, who likes to take photos of beauties such as yourself."'
-	'When you look at her with confusion in your eyes, she nods at your chest and adds: "How about you show those puppies off a little? I think you''re a gorgeous girl, and no one will see these photos but me, I promise!"'
-	'"Erm... I still get paid, right?" you ask. The lady nods and says hopefully: "Of course! You get paid either way, I think you did great! The official part of the shoot is over... it''d just be us having some fun, from now on. What do you think?"'
-	'You''re fairly sure she''s not talking about just photos, with that horny look in her eyes. She wants you, badly.'
+	'You arrive at a small photo studio in the center of the city. "Hi! I''m here for the model job? I came as quick as I could!" you say with a smile.'
+	'The only other person in the studio is a female photographer, who smiles happily. "Great! I''m glad you could make it on such short notice. Just take a seat over there and I''ll get you sorted!"'
+	'She quickly fixes your make-up and then gives you the underwear you''re supposed to wear for the shoot. It''s a very thin and practically see-through material, but very enticing. You put it on and meet her in the studio area, where you diligently follow her instructions as she takes pictures that leave very little to the imagination...'
+	*nl
+	'At one point she tells you to lie down and your breasts almost pop out of the sheer top you''re wearing. The photographer grins at you. "I''ll be honest with you. I don''t plan on publishing this shoot... I''m just a girl with a lot of money to spend, who likes to take photos of beauties such as yourself."'
+	'When you look at her with confusion in your eyes, she nods at your chest. "How about you show those puppies off a little? I think you''re a gorgeous girl, and no one will see these photos but me, I promise!"'
+	'"Erm... I still get paid, right?" you ask.'
+	'She nods. "Of course! The official part of the shoot is over, so you''ll get paid either way. It''d just be us having some fun from now on. What do you think?"'
+	'You''re fairly sure she''s not talking about just photos. With that horny look in her eyes, she wants you. Badly.'
 	gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'medium'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 		act 'Respectfully decline (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -180,22 +174,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'var2':
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 			gs 'stat'
 			money += 2500
-			'"I''m sorry, but... no. If the shoot is done, I''m done", you tell the lady resolutely. She seems disappointed, but doesn''t stop you when you go to the dressing room to change into your regular clothes.'
-			'When you''re ready to leave, she stands ready by the door with an envelope in your hand. She offers it to you and asks seductively: "Are you sure? I bet we could have some fun, you and I! Completely off-camera..."'
+			'"I''m sorry, but no. If the shoot is done, then I''m done," you reply. She seems disappointed, but doesn''t stop you when you go to the dressing room to change back into your regular clothes.'
+			'When you''re ready to leave, she stands ready by the door with an envelope in your hand. "Are you sure? I bet we could have some fun, you and I! Completely off-camera..." she asks as seductively as she can.'
 			'You smile apologetically, but decline and leave the studio. When you open the envelope you find 2,500 <b>₽</b> in it, 500 more than you were promised! It seems she really did enjoy your presence.'
-			act 'Leave the studio':gt 'city_center'
+			act 'Leave the studio': gt 'city_center'
 		end
 	else
 		act 'Respectfully decline (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 	end
 	act 'Have some fun with her':
-		cls
+		*clr & cla
 		money += 2000
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/photoshoot/f12.jpg"></center>'
 		'You wordlessly pull down your top and give her a lewd wink, inviting her to take more photos of your exposed body.'
 		'She smiles happily and brings her camera back to her face, shooting several dozen more photos of you. She''s not giving you any more orders, letting you move as you wish and exposing as much of your body as you want.'
-		'At one point she sits down next to you, and carefully puts her hand on your exposed neck. "Fun time now!" she grins, and kisses you hard on your mouth while she puts the camera down.'
-
+		'At one point, she sits next to you and carefully puts her hand on your exposed neck. "Fun time now!" she grins and kisses you hard as she puts the camera down.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 		
@@ -207,46 +200,44 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'var2':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'var3':
-	cla
-	*clr
-	qjobpristrand = rand(0, 5)
-	var = rand(0, 5)
+	*clr & cla
+	qjobpristrand = rand(0,5)
+	var = rand(0,5)
 
 	if var = 0:
 		minut += 60
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/photoshoot/n0.jpg"></center>'
-		'You double-check the address. Yep, this is the place you''re supposed to go to. You expected a studio, but are in the middle of houses.'
-		'A young man opens the door when you ring the door bell, and ushers you to his living room. He looks troubled, and you feel a bit uncomfortable.'
-		'Finally, he talks: "You see, I don''t actually need a model. What I need is a muse! Do you understand?"'
-		'When he sees you don''t, he continues: "I''ve been having a terrible case of artist''s block, and I don''t just need a girl that models for me. What I need is a girl who really gets me! A girl who inspires me!"'
-		'Artists and their cryptic descriptions! You carefully ask: "So uhh, what would my role in this be?"'
-		'He gives you an embarrassed look and mutters: "I''ve always had trouble talking to women. If you would help me... relax a little, that would help out a great deal. I can pay you!"'
-		'"So you just want to fuck me?" you ask him sharply, getting to the point. He shrugs and pulls out the money he promised. Yes, that is why you''re really here.'
+		'You double-check the address. This is the place you''re supposed to go to, but you''re in the middle of a street instead of at a studio.'
+		'A young man opens the door when you ring the door bell and ushers you to his living room. He looks troubled, and you feel a bit uncomfortable.'
+		'After a brief silence, he finally speaks. "You see, I don''t actually need a model. What I need is a muse! I''ve been having a terrible case of artist''s block and I need a girl who really gets me! A girl who inspires me!"'
+		'Artists and their cryptic descriptions! "So uhh, what would my role in this be?" you ask.'
+		'He gives you an embarrassed stare. "I''ve always had trouble talking to women. If you would help me... relax a little, that would help out a great deal. I can pay you!"'
+		'"So you just want to fuck me?" you ask sharply, getting to the point. He shrugs and pulls out the money he promised.'
 		gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Refuse angrily (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+			act 'Angrily refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'"What, you made me come all the way down here just because you need a whore? Why not just get a whore!?" you ask him, barely stopping yourself from spitting in his face in anger.'
-				'"I''m sorry! I''m so sorry!" he stutters. The guy is terribly embarrassed, and doesn''t know what to say. You actually feel a bit sorry for him when he offers you some money just for showing up, trying to apologize with a desperate look in his eyes.'
-				'Seeing it''s not much, you shout: "Keep it, I don''t want your money!" and quickly leave, slamming the door shut behind you.'
-				act 'Leave the studio':gt 'city_center'
+				'"You made me come all the way down here because you want a whore?! Why not just get a whore?!" you snark at him, barely stopping yourself from spitting in his face in anger.'
+				'"I''m sorry! I''m so sorry!" he stutters. You actually feel a bit sorry for him when he offers you some money just for showing up, trying to apologize with a desperate look in his eyes.'
+				'Seeing it''s not much, you slap it away. "Keep it!" you scoff and quickly leave, slamming the door shut behind you.'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'city_center'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Refuse angrily (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Angrily refuse (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
 
-		act 'Agree reluctantly':
-			cls
+		act 'Reluctantly agree':
+			*clr & cla
 			minut += 60
 			money += 1200
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/photoshoot/n1.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Well... okay, but I want that money up front", you reluctantly say.'
+			'"Okay, but I want that money up front," you reluctantly reply.'
 			'The guy smiles happily, readily giving you the money and even adding a little extra on top of what the advertisement promised.'
-			'Now that he''s secured your services in exchange for money, he becomes a bit more confident: "Okay. Show me your vagina, please... I need to study it for a while, and memorize it for future art projects."'
-			'"You can look all you want!" you laugh, and part your legs for him after you take your clothes off. He lies down beside you, and carefully studies your sweet pussy. He caresses your labia with his fingers, teasing your clit ever so slightly and carefully slipping his finger inside you to see how that feels. You''re quite wet by the time he takes off his pants, exposing his erect cock. Time for you to work for your money!'
-
+			'Now that he''s secured your services, he becomes a bit more confident. "Okay. Show me your vagina. I need to study it and memorize it for future projects."'
+			'"You can look all you want!" you laugh and part your legs for him after you take your clothes off. He lies down beside you, and carefully studies your pussy. He caresses your labia with his fingers, teasing your clit ever so slightly and carefully sliding his finger inside you to see how it feels.'
+			'You''re quite wet by the time he takes off his pants, exposing his erect cock.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 10, 'prostitution'
 			gs 'stat'
 			
@@ -261,25 +252,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'var3':
 		minut += 180
 		money += 1000
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/photoshoot/n2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You double-check the address. Yep, this is the place you''re supposed to go to. You expected a studio, but are in front of an estate!'
-		'A young man opens the door when you ring the door bell, and ushers you to his living room. He beams with confidence, and his eyes devour your body. Nevertheless, he smiles at you and says: "For this project, I only need your face... I need a scream of pleasure. Can you do that for me?"'
-		'You hesitantly open your mouth and make your face look like you''re in ecstacy. The artist grins: "Perfect! That''s perfect! Very genuine. I do need you to hold that expression for a long time. Just sit down over there."'
-		'Nearly two hours later, the man finally nods that you can stop. Your jaw aches a little while you walk forward to see what he was working on. It''s an anime style portrait, of a girl who looks just like you! She''s completely naked, too...'
-		'The painter stands behind you when he explains his vision to you, while you compliment his artwork. That definitely looks like you, he did a great job!'
-		'Soon you feel his breath on your bare neck. The artist suddenly embraces you in a bear grip and grasps your body as he says dejectedly: "It''s such a shame that real women can never be as passionate as their copies on the canvas..."'
+		'You double-check the address. This is the place you''re supposed to go to, but you''re in front of an estate instead of a studio.'
+		'A young man opens the door when you ring the door bell and ushers you to his living room. He beams with confidence, and his eyes devour your body. Nevertheless, he smiles at you. "For this project, I only need your face. I need a scream of pleasure. Can you do that for me?"'
+		'You hesitantly open your mouth and make your face look like you''re in ecstacy. The artist grins. "Perfect! That''s perfect! Very genuine. I do need you to hold that expression for a long time. Just sit down over there."'
+		*nl
+		'Nearly two hours later, the man finally nods that you can stop. Your jaw aches as you walk forward to see what he was working on. It''s an anime style portrait of a girl who looks just like you! She''s completely naked, too...'
+		'The painter stands behind you as he explains his vision to you and you soon feel his breath on your bare neck. He suddenly embraces you in a bear grip and grasps your body. "It''s such a shame that real women can never be as passionate as their copies on the canvas..."'
 
 		act 'Squirm free and leave':
 			cla
-			'"Erm, okay! I have to go!" you quickly say while you squirm your body out of his grip, and quickly leave his apartment before he can stop you. He can admire his erotic work of art by himself, you want no part in that!'
+			'"Erm, okay! I have to go!" you quickly say as you squirm out of his grip and quickly leave his apartment before he can stop you. He can admire his erotic work of art by himself!'
 
-			act 'Leave his apartment':gt 'city_center'
+			act 'Leave his apartment': gt 'city_center'
 		end
 
 		act 'Seduce him to make him feel better':
 			cla
-			'"I don''t know about that!" you suggest. "Maybe they''re just too shy to show it! The image displays their true level of passion, you just have to get it out of them..."'
-			'The painted shakes his head decisively: "No, I don''t think so. I''ve had a lot of women in here before, and none of them got anywhere near the level of passion that the painting displayed."'
-			'"Is that a challenge?" you smile sweetly, while you begin to unbutton your clothes. "I''ll just have to show you, then!"'
+			'"I don''t know about that!" you say. "Maybe they''re just too shy to show it! The image displays their true level of passion, you just have to get it out of them..."'
+			'He shakes his head decisively. "No, I don''t think so. I''ve had a lot of women in here before, and none of them got anywhere near the level of passion that the painting displayed."'
+			'"Is that a challenge?" you smile sweetly as you start to undo your clothes. "I''ll just have to show you then!"'
 
 			act 'Continue':
 				picrand = 82
@@ -293,27 +284,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'var3':
 		gs 'exp_gain', 'mdlng', rand(0,3)
 		money += 1000
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/photoshoot/n3.jpg"></center>'
-		'You double-check the address. Yep, this is the place you''re supposed to go to. You expected a studio, but are in front of an estate!'
-		'When you ring the door bell, a man answers the door almost immediately and invites you in. He seems very confident with himself, and talks in a matter-of-fact tone when he explains what he wants from you: "I''m working on some Roman style art pieces. I need a girl dressed in a toga, as reference."'
-		'He leaves you alone for a minute to you can change, and motions for you to go stand on a table. "Actually... how about you hold this? I think it''ll really bring the piece together", he smiles, and has you hold an ancient looking urn. It''s fairly heavy, and your arms grow tired while you pose with the urn for nearly three hours.'
+		'You double-check the address. This is the place you''re supposed to go to, but you''re in front of an estate instead of a studio.'
+		'When you ring the door bell, a man answers the door almost immediately and invites you in. He seems very confident with himself, and talks in a matter-of-fact tone when he explains what he wants from you. "I''m working on some Roman style art pieces and need a girl dressed in a toga as reference."'
+		'He leaves you alone for a minute to change before he motions for you to go stand on a table. "Actually... How about you hold this? I think it''ll really bring the piece together!" he smiles and has you hold an ancient looking urn. It''s fairly heavy, and your arms grow tired as you pose with it for nearly three hours.'
 
 		if qjobpristrand ! 0:
-			'Finally, the man is finished with his painting. He doesn''t even allow you to look at it but quickly ushers you to the hallway where he pays you the 1,000 <b>₽</b> he promised.'
+			'Finally, the man is finished with his painting. He doesn''t even allow you to look at it, but quickly ushers you to the hallway where he pays you the 1,000 <b>₽</b> he promised.'
 
-			act 'Leave the estate':gt 'city_center'
+			act 'Leave the estate': gt 'city_center'
 		else
-			'While you stand there posing, the artist occasionally walks up to you and adjusts the sheet. His hands always linger on your body a bit longer than they need to be, and he becomes more and more bold.'
-			'Eventually, he walks up to you once more and just begins to paw at your body greedily, squeezing your exposed boob and gliding his hand further and further down your chest.'
+			'As you stand posing, the artist occasionally walks up to you and adjusts the sheet. His hands always linger on your body a little longer than they need to, and he becomes more and more bold.'
+			'Eventually, he walks up to you once more and starts pawing at your body greedily, squeezing your exposed breast and gliding his hand further down your chest.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Stop him (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 					gs 'stat'
-					'"Erm... what are you doing? Could you please stop that?" you ask him intently.'
-					'The man wordlessly pulls his hands away from your body and plucks the sheet a few times, pretending he was just adjusting it. He ignores your questioning smirk as he sits down and continues working on his piece of art, as if nothing happened.'
-					'Finally, the man is finished with his painting. He doesn''t even allow you to look at it but quickly ushers you to the hallway where he pays you the 1,000 <b>₽</b> he promised.'
-					act 'Leave the studio':gt 'city_center'
+					'"Could you please stop that?" you ask him intently.'
+					'The man wordlessly pulls his hands away from your body and plucks the sheet a few times, pretending he was just adjusting it. He ignores your questioning smirk as he sits back down and continues working, as if nothing happened.'
+					'Finally, the man is finished with his painting. He doesn''t even allow you to look at it, but quickly ushers you to the hallway where he pays you the 1,000 <b>₽</b> he promised.'
+					act 'Leave': gt 'city_center'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Stop him (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -331,40 +322,37 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'var3':
 		gs 'exp_gain', 'mdlng', rand(0,1)
 		money += 1000
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/photoshoot/n4.jpg"></center>'
-		'You double-check the address. Yep, this is the place you''re supposed to go to. You expected a studio, but are in front of an apartment building!'
-		'A man invites you to his home, and tells you to have a seat on the couch. Another girl is already sitting there. You give her a nervous smile and sit down next to her, expecting instructions on what he wants you to do.'
-		'"Relax, darling!" the other girl smiles at you, when she sees how nervous you are. "He just needs you to be around, so he can look at you from time to time, you don''t have to freeze into one pose for hours!"'
+		'You double-check the address. This is the place you''re supposed to go to, but you''re in front of an apartment building instead of a studio.'
+		'A man invites you to his home, and tells you to have a seat on the couch. Another girl is already sitting there. You give her a nervous smile as you sit next to her, expecting instructions on what he wants you to do.'
+		'"Relax, darling!" the other girl smiles when she sees how nervous you are. "He just needs you to be around so he can look at you from time to time. You don''t have to freeze into one pose for hours!"'
 		'You spend a few hours chatting with the girl. She''s very friendly and chatty, and tells you about herself. She''s been doing these modeling jobs for a while, and has lots of interesting stories to share. You almost completely forget about the artist still being in the room, working quietly in the background.'
 
 		if qjobpristrand ! 0:
-			'After about three hours, the man comes from behind the canvas and smiles: "I have all I need from you. Thank you for time!"'
+			'After about three hours, the man comes from behind the canvas and smiles. "I have all I need from you. Thank you for your time!"'
 			'He tells the other girl to stay a while longer while he walks you out, giving you the 1,000 <b>₽</b> you were promised.'
 
-			act 'Leave the apartment':gt 'city_center'
+			act 'Leave the apartment': gt 'city_center'
 		else
-			'The girl becomes flirtier and flirtier while you chat, and she inches ever closer to you. She makes you lean back against the couch and pulls your clothes aside, baring your breasts. She moves her head closer to your chest, but stops a few inches before touching you. You can feel her warm breath tingling on your skin, and she looks as you with a confident smile on her lips. If you want her to stop, you''ll have to do something now.'
-
+			'The girl becomes flirtier as you chat and inches ever closer to you. She makes you lean back against the couch and pulls your clothes aside, baring your breasts. She moves her head closer to your chest, but stops a few inches before touching you. You can feel her warm breath tingling on your skin, and she looks at you with a confident smile on her lips.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
 			
 			act 'Straighten your clothes':
 				cla
-				'When you cough nervously and begin to straighten your clothes, the girl moves away and gets right back to chatting, as if nothing happened at all. She doesn''t appear to be upset with you, or if she is she does a very good job of hiding it.'
-				'Soon, the artist tells you that he is done. While he guides you to the door and gives you your money, the girl smiles: "Bye, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Maybe I''ll see you again some time!"'
-
+				'When you cough nervously and straighten your clothes, the girl moves away and starts chatting again, as if nothing happened. She doesn''t appear to be upset with you, or is doing a very good job of hiding it.'
+				'The artist is soon finished and the girl smiles as he guides you to the door and gives you your money. "Bye! Maybe I''ll see you again some time?"'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				
-				act 'Leave the apartment':gt 'city_center'
+				act 'Leave the apartment': gt 'city_center'
 			end
 
 			act 'Smile at her':
-				cls
+				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/photoshoot/n5.jpg"></center>'
-				'You smile at her, and the girl immediately takes a nipple between her lips and begins to suck on it sensually. Within minutes you''re both naked on the couch. The girl is eagerly licking your wet pussy and her hands explore your body eagerly, while you lie back with your eyes closed.'
-				'Suddenly you feel something pressing against your lips, and notice a very masculine smell filling your nostrils. When you open your eyes, you find yourself looking straight at the artist''s hard cock! Apparently he''s done with the painting, but is drawing a different kind of inspiration from his two muses right now.'
-				'You obediently part your lips and take the tip of the artist''s penis inside your mouth, caressing it with your tongue.'
-
+				'You smile at her and she immediately takes a nipple between her lips and start sucking on it sensually. Within minutes, you''re both naked on the couch as the girl eagerly licks your wet pussy and her hands explore your body while you lie back with your eyes closed.'
+				'You suddenly feel something pressing against your lips, and notice a very masculine smell filling your nostrils. When you open your eyes, you find yourself looking straight at the artist''s hard cock!'
+				'You obediently part your lips and take the tip inside your mouth, caressing it with your tongue.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 15, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15
 				minut -= 15
@@ -381,43 +369,39 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'var3':
 	elseif var = 4:
 		minut += 180
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/photoshoot/n6.jpg"></center>'
-		'You double-check the address. Yep, this is the place you''re supposed to go to. You expected a studio, but are in front of an apartment building!'
-		'A woman opens the door, and guides you to the living room where a man is already sitting, wearing a toga of some sort.'
-		'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, this is my husband", she nods at the man, as she enters the room after you. "This might sound a little bit weird, but we''re only going to need your buttocks today."'
-		'You stand near the man, who pulls your clothes aside and puts his hand on your bare ass cheeks. The two of you freeze, while the girl makes some sketches and grabs some brushes. His hand is quite warm to the touch, and you can sometimes feel him squeezing it lightly.'
+		'You double-check the address. This is the place you''re supposed to go to, but you''re in front of an apartment building instead of a studio.'
+		'A woman opens the door and guides you to the living room where a man is already sitting, wearing a toga of some sort.'
+		'"This is my husband," she nods at the man as she enters the room after you. "This might sound a little bit weird, but we''re only going to need your buttocks today."'
+		'You stand near the man, who pulls your clothes aside and puts his hand on your bare ass. The two of you freeze while the girl makes some sketches and grabs some brushes. His hand is quite warm to the touch, and you can sometimes feel him squeezing it lightly.'
 
 		if qjobpristrand ! 0:
 			money += 1000
-			'A few hours later, the girl smiles at you and says: "Thank you, you were a pleasure to work with! I''ll be sure to leave you a good review online", as the walks you to the door. She gives you the 1,000 <b>₽</b> she owes you when you''re at the door, and you thank her on your way out.'
-
-			act 'Leave the apartment':gt 'city_center'
+			'A few hours later, the girl smiles at you. "Thank you, you were a pleasure to work with! I''ll be sure to leave you a good review online," she says as the walks you to the door. She gives you the 1,000 <b>₽</b> she owes you and you thank her on your way out.'
 
+			act 'Leave the apartment': gt 'city_center'
 		else
-			'You stand like that for quite some time, and the squeezing and kneading from the man becomes more and more insistent. By the end he is eagerly pawing your ass, right in front of his wife! When you look at her questioningly, she pretends that nothing is happening and continues to paint without paying any attention to you. Then, the man snakes his hand between your legs and gently caresses your pussy lips...'
-
+			'You stand like this for quite some time, and the squeezing and kneading from the man becomes more and more insistent. By the end, he''s eagerly pawing your ass, right in front of his wife! When you look at her questioningly, she pretends that nothing''s happening and continues to paint without paying any attention to you. The man then snakes his hand between your legs and gently caresses your pussy.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 15
 			gs 'stat'
 			
 			act 'Slap his hand away':
 				cla
 				money += 1200
-				'"Hey, stop that!" you tell the man, and you slap his hand away. The girl lets out a soft chuckle while her husband apologizes and rests his hand on your ass cheek again, behaving like a perfect gentleman now.'
-				'A few hours later, the girl smiles at you and says: "Thank you, you were a pleasure to work with! I''ll be sure to leave you a good review online", as the walks you to the door. She gives you the 1,000 <b>₽</b> she owes you when you''re at the door, and even adds 200 extra. "You''ll have to excuse my husband, he can get a bit frisky at times. I better go take care of him now!" she winks at you, and closes the door.'
-
+				'"Stop it!" you say as you slap his hand away. The girl lets out a soft chuckle while her husband apologizes and rests his hand on your ass again.'
+				'A few hours later, the girl smiles at you. "Thank you, you were a pleasure to work with! I''ll be sure to leave you a good review online," she says as the walks you to the door. She gives you the 1,000 <b>₽</b> she owes you, adding 200 extra. "You''ll have to excuse my husband. He can get a bit frisky at times. I better go take care of him now!" she winks before closing the door.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				
-				act 'Leave the apartment':gt 'city_center'
+				act 'Leave the apartment': gt 'city_center'
 			end
 
-			act 'Don''t object and keep posing':
-				money += 1000
-				cls
+			act 'Just keep posing':
+				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/photoshoot/n7.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spread your legs a little to give him some room to maneuver, which he immediately takes advantage of. He rubs his fingers over your pussy lips eagerly and brushes his fingers over your clit, making you feel very horny. His wife smiles at you and continues to paint, ignoring your soft moans.'
-				'When he thrusts two fingers inside you and begins to fuck your pussy with them, you close your eyes and moan unashamedly, fully giving in to the pleasure he''s giving you. A few seconds later you hear her footsteps coming towards the two of you, and when you open your eyes you see her on her knees in front of her husband, sucking his cock obediently.'
-				'When you get up, the man immediately pulls you back towards him and returns one hand to your pussy, while he begins to kiss your breasts.'
-
+				'You spread your legs a little to give him some room to maneuver and he immediately takes advantage. He eagerly rubs his fingers over your pussy and brushes his fingers over your clit, making you very horny. His wife smiles at you and continues to paint, ignoring your soft moans.'
+				'When he thrusts two fingers inside you and starts fucking your pussy, you close your eyes and moan unashamedly, fully giving in to the pleasure he''s giving you. A few seconds later, you hear footsteps coming towards you and open your eyes to see her on her knees in front of her husband, obediently sucking his cock.'
+				'When you get up, the man immediately pulls you back towards him and returns one hand to your pussy before he starts kissing your breasts.'
+				money += 1000
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 10
 				gs 'stat'
 				
@@ -434,12 +418,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'var3':
 		gs 'exp_gain', 'mdlng', rand(0,3)
 		money += 1000
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/photoshoot/n8.jpg"></center>'
-		'You double-check the address. Yep, this is the place you''re supposed to go to. You expected a studio, but are in front of an apartment building!'
-		'He guides you to the living room and tells you to put on a bright red dress. He''s not leaving the room, and expects you to change right in front of him.'
-		'You shrug and take off your clothes; you look good and you know it, no need to be shy! The man doesn''t seem to be impressed anyway and tells you to strike a pose once you have put the dress on. He grabs a few brushes and begins to paint, every once in a while telling you to stop moving so much. Your eyes are on him the whole time, admiring his muscular arms and attractive face. Why is he so indifferent towards you?'
-		'Your muscles were just starting to feel sore from standing still so long when he says: "Alright, done. You can go now."'
+		'You double-check the address. This is the place you''re supposed to go to, but you''re in front of an apartment building instead of a studio.'
+		'A man answers the door and guides you to the living room, where he tells you to put on a bright red dress. He expects you to change right in front of him.'
+		'You shrug and take off your clothes. The man doesn''t seem to be impressed and tells you to strike a pose once you''ve put the dress on. He grabs a few brushes and starts painting, occasionally telling you to stop moving so much.'
+		'Your muscles are starting to feel sore when he finishes. "Alright, done. You can go now," he says as he hands you the money owed.'
 
-		act 'Leave the apartment':gt 'city_center'
+		act 'Leave the apartment': gt 'city_center'
 
 		act 'Seduce him':
 			gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Painter', rand(18,45)