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Updated the slut fame call for Fedor's chat, and did a quick rewrite for the Fedor vs Vitek fight scene, improving the text a bit.

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      locations/FedorEv.qsrc

+ 9 - 9
locations/FedorEv.qsrc

@@ -17,15 +17,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '' or $ARGS[0] = 'Start':
 		gt 'FedorEv', 'Strela Chat'
 	elseif FedorvsDimka = 2:
 		gt 'FedorEv4', 'Dimka Aftermath'
-	elseif GorSlut = 1 and fedorkoztalk = 0 and FedorLove = 0:
+	elseif fedorKozlovQW >= 10 and fame['pav_slut'] >= 150 and fame['pav_slut'] < 250 and fedorkoztalk = 0 and FedorLove = 0:
 		gt 'FedorEv', 'Gorslut'
-	elseif fedorKozlovQW >= 10 and GorSlut > 1 and FedorLove = 0:
+	elseif fedorKozlovQW >= 10 and fame['pav_slut'] >= 250 and FedorLove = 0:
 		gt 'FedorEv', 'Gorslut 2'
 	elseif fedorKozlovQW = 10 and FedorLuv < -5:
 		gt 'FedorEv2', 'Fedor Breakup'
 	elseif fedorKozlovQW >= 10 and dimaFilm = 1 and FedorvsDimka = 1:
 		gt 'FedorMisc', 'Fedor Vs Dimka'	
-	elseif fedorKozlovQW >= 20 and GorSlut < 2:
+	elseif fedorKozlovQW >= 20 and fame['pav_slut'] < 250:
 		if rand(0,1) = 0:
 			gt 'FedorEv', 'Fedor Date 2'
 		else
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vitek Vs Fedor':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Viktor [Vitek] Kotov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big9.jpg"></center>'
-	'When you approach Fedor, Vitek sees you walking Fedor''s way and follows you right away. He shoves Fedor roughly: "What do you think you''re doing, punk? <<$pcs_firstname>> is <b>mine!</b>" Fedor turns his face to Vitek and calmly says, "I''m not doing anything. <<$pcs_firstname>> is with me now, so you should just leave us alone." Vitek theatrically moves his hand to his ear, and says, in a threatening voice: "What did you just say!?" to which Fedor calmly replies: "You heard me." You can tell that Vitek is seething with rage now, the knuckles on his clenched fists turning white. Fedor moves his face even closer to Vitek''s and repeats, also clenching his fists: "You heard me. Get away from <<$pcs_firstname>>, Vitek."'
+	'You approach Fedor, and wrap you arms around him, as he does the same, embracing you firmly, when Vitek quickly approaches Fedor from behind, before violently shoving Fedor back, and saying in a menacing tone, "What do you think you''re doing, punk? <<$pcs_firstname>> is <b>mine!</b>" Fedor turns his face to Vitek, and firmly states, "<<$pcs_firstname>> is with me now, so why don''t you hit the road?" Vitek theatrically moves his hand to his ear, and says, in a threatening tone, "What did you just say!?" To which Fedor boldly replies, "You heard me." You can tell that Vitek is seething with rage now, as his face turns red, and the knuckles on his clenched fists, turn a deathly white. Fedor moves his face even closer to Vitek''s, and repeats, also clenching his fists: "You heard me. Get away from <<$pcs_firstname>>, Vitek."'
 
 	act 'Tell Vitek you want to be with Fedor':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vitek Vs Fedor':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Viktor [Vitek] Kotov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big9.jpg"></center>'
-		'You tell Vitek that you don''t want to be with him any more. You can tell he''s very angry, and has to restrain himself from hitting you in the face. Ultimately he exclaims "Fuck you, bitch!" and leaves, kicking over several garbage cans on the way. You fear that this might not be the last thing you''ve heard of him.'
+		'Not wanting to see Fedor hurt, you tell Vitek the truth, "Vitek please calm down, I know we had some fun together, but I''m with Fedor now." Vitek grimaces, obviously furious with both of you, but fortunately, has enough composure to restrain himself from hitting you in the face. He ultimately, calms himself, before looking you in the eyes, and shouting, "You''re going to pay for this, you fucking cheating, bitch!" Vitek begins walking away, but not before kicking over several garbage cans on the way. you can''t help but shutter at the feeling that this might not be the last you''ve heard of him.'
 
 		act 'Continue':gt $curloc
 	end
@@ -62,9 +62,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vitek Vs Fedor':
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/Strela/fvsv.jpg"></center>'
-		'Vitek suddenly hits Fedor on the chin with a quick jab, which sends Fedor flying backwards landing on his back on the pavement. Vitek immediately gets on top of him, grabbing him by the collar with his left hand while he keeps punching Fedor in the face with his right hand. Fedor tries to ball up and kick Vitek, but doesn''t manage and Vitek gives him a hard kick in the ribs when he gets back up, which makes Fedor double over grasping his stomach. When Fedor tries to get up, Vitek kicks him against the head which makes Fedor fall over again. Then you see Vasily and Dan coming around the corner, they run towards Vitek when they notice he''s fighting. "Vitek, what''s going on?" Vasily asks. Vitek kicks the now prone Fedor once more in his sides. "This fucker is trying to steal my girl!" he exclaims, pointing at Fedor. For a moment' 
+		'Vitek suddenly hits Fedor on the chin with a quick jab, which sends Fedor flying backwards; landing backward on the pavement. Vitek immediately climbs on top of him, grabbing him by the collar, with his left hand, while punching Fedor in the face with his right one. Fedor tries to ball up and kick Vitek, but doesn''t manage to phase him, as Vitek gives him a hard kick in the ribs when he gets back up, which makes Fedor fall over grasping his stomach. As Fedor tries to get up, Vitek kicks him in his head, which causes Fedor fall over again. As Fedor hits the ground, you see Vasily and Dan coming around the corner, they run towards Vitek when they notice that he''s fighting. "Vitek, what''s going on?" Vasily asks. Vitek kicks the now prone Fedor, once more in his sides. "This fucker is trying to steal my girl!" He exclaims, pointing at Fedor.' 
 		*nl
-		'you''re scared he''s going to beat you up too, but he doesn''t. Dan moves over to Fedor''s barely conscious body and asks: "Hasn''t anyone told you that it''s rude to steal someone''s girl, Fedor? What do you have to say for yourself?" Fedor looks up, barely realizing what''s going on any more. His face is all busted up, but he''s not willing to let it go: "<<$pcs_firstname>> is my girl..." he moans. Vasily laughs like a jackal, while Vitek is furious once more: "You little shit! I''m going to..." Dan interrupts him: "Relax, Vitek. Look at his face. I think he realizes his mistake. Or do you want to make things even worse for yourself?" That last question was directed at Fedor.'
+		'Feeling terrified that Vitek might hurt you too, in his blind rage, you remain silent. Dan moves over to Fedor''s, as Fedor struggles to remain conscious, and asks: "Hasn''t anyone told you that it''s rude to steal someone''s girl, Fedor? What do you have to say for yourself?" Fedor looks up, barely realizing what''s going on any more. His face is all busted up, but he''s not willing to let it go: "<<$pcs_firstname>> is my girl..." He groans. Vasily begins laughing like a jackal, while Vitek furiously shouts at Fedor once more: "You little shit! I''m going to..." Dan interrupts him: "Relax, Vitek. Look at his face. I think he realizes his mistake. Or do you want to make things even worse for yourself?" That last question was directed at Fedor.'
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<"Vasily [Shulga] Shulgin">></font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big11.jpg"></center>'
 
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vitek Vs Fedor':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorangry.jpg"></center>'
-			'Fedor slowly rises to his feet, and softly mutters: "Fucking Gopniks..." Vasily hears him though, and immediately slams his fist into Fedor''s face. Fedor tries to keep standing, but immediately gets hit by Dan as well. No longer able to support his weight, he falls to his hands and knees. Vasily jokes: "Look at him... already assuming the position!" making the other Gopniks laugh. Vitek kicks him in the stomach again, and Fedor lies flat on the ground. Vitek looks at Dan and asks: "Can you believe I have to put up with this shit?"' 
+			'Fedor slowly rises to his feet, and softly mutters: "Fucking Gopniks..." Vasily hears him clearly, immediately slamming his fist into Fedor''s face, but Fedor refuses to fall until he is immediately hit by Dan in his stomach. No longer able to support his weight, he falls to his hands and knees. Vasily jokes: "Look at him... already assuming the position!" Making the other Gopniks laugh. Vitek kicks him in the stomach again, knocking Fedor onto his back, laying flat on the ground. Realizing he won, Vitek looks to Dan and asks: "Can you believe the shit I have to put up with?"' 
 
 			act 'Hear what Dan has to say':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vitek Vs Fedor':
 				gs 'stat'			
 				'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/Strela/fedor.jpg"></center>'				
-				'Dan replies: "We could ask Vadim Bely to take care of him. He''ll know how to punish Fedor in a way that he''ll never forget." Vitek nods: "Good plan. Set it up, will you?" He then turns to Fedor "We''re settling this tomorrow, kid. You better be here after school, it''ll be ten times worse for you if you don''t." He then waves for his friends to follow him "Come on guys. Let''s go have some beers in the park, I need to relax. <<$pcs_nickname>>, if you want to join us, you know where we''ll be." Vitek and Dan leave Fedor on the ground and head for the schoolyard exit, but Vasily walks over to Fedor and kicks him in the ribs one more time, still laughing that signature jackal laugh of his. He then joins his friends, and moments later they''re gone.'
+				'Dan replies: "We could ask Vadim Bely to take care of him. He''ll know how to punish Fedor in a way that he''ll never forget." Vitek nods: "Good plan. Set it up, will you?" He then turns to Fedor "We''re settling this tomorrow, kid. You better be here after school, it''ll be ten times worse for you if you don''t." He then waves for his friends to follow him "Come on guys. Let''s go have some beers in the park, I need to relax. <<$pcs_nickname>>, if you want to join us, you know where we''ll be." Vitek and Dan leave Fedor on the ground then head for the schoolyard exit, but as they pass Fedor, Vasily quickly kicks him in the ribs one more time, still laughing that signature jackal laugh of his. He then joins his friends, and moments later, they''re gone.'
 
 				act 'Leave the school courtyard':gt 'pav_residential'
 			end