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      locations/club.qsrc

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locations/club.qsrc

@@ -111,8 +111,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inside':
 		act 'Hear him out':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club11.jpg"></center>'
-			'"The club opens at 6pm you can work for an hour at a time up to 1am. The jobs vary according to time and demand, It includes finding customers to bring to the club, promoting drinks and some dancing."'
-			'"The pay depends on results, get more people in, get people buying up the promotional drinks or if you dance well and you get 200 <b>₽</b>. Do worse, you get less, do very well, you get a bonus. When you finish you can stay in the club, so you get free entry as well."'
+			'"The club opens at 6 p.m. You can work for an hour at a time up to 1 a.m. The jobs vary according to time and demand. They include finding customers to bring to the club, promoting drinks and some dancing."'
+			'"The pay depends on results. Get more people in, get people buying up the promotional drinks or if you dance well and you get 200 <b>₽</b>. Do worse, you get less. Do very well, you get a bonus. When you finish you can stay in the club, so you get free entry as well."'
 			'"So, are you interested?"'
 			act 'No':clubno = 1 & gt 'club', 'inside'
 			act 'Yes':
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inside':
 					act 'Return':gt 'club', 'inside'
 				end
 			else
-				'You ask him about work, but he says your not pretty enough and walks off. You are shocked enough that you just stand there and watch him walk away.'
+				'You ask him about work, but he says "you're not pretty enough" and walks off. You are shocked enough that you just stand there and watch him walk away.'
 			end
 
 			exit
@@ -186,14 +186,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toi':
 	menu_off = 0
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
-	'Shit, there''s a very long queue in front of the womens toilet. You can''t tell how long this is going to take.'
+	'Shit, there''s a very long queue in front of the women''s toilet. You can''t tell how long this is going to take.'
 
 	act 'Wait in line':
 		cla
 		menu_off = 1
 		minut += rand(10, 30)
 		gs 'stat'
-		'Finally there''s a free booth for you.'
+		'Finally there''s a free stall for you.'
 
 		act 'WC':gt 'club', 'tou'
 	end
@@ -262,7 +262,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">The dance floor</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club9.jpg"></center>'
-	'The club is filled to the brink with people. Most of whom are on the dance floor having a great time.'
+	'The club is filled to the brink with people, most of whom are on the dance floor having a great time.'
 	
 	act 'Leave the dance floor':gt 'club', 'inside'
 	
@@ -279,7 +279,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 			pcs_mood += 10
 			clrand = rand(0, 400)
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club4.jpg"></center>'
-			'The dance floor is packed and everyone is dancing very closely, you could put your hand on the shoulder of the guy in front of you but you when you turn around your chest is right up against another. You don''t let it bother you as everyone is forced to dance this close.'
+			'The dance floor is packed and everyone is dancing very closely. You could put your hand on the shoulder of the guy in front of you but you when you turn around your chest is right up against another. You don''t let it bother you as everyone is forced to dance this close.'
 
 			if pcs_apprnc >= clrand:
 				pcs_horny += 1
@@ -326,7 +326,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 				if clrand > 85:
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/dancelezb.jpg"></center>'
-					'While you''re dancing you a hand groping your ass. You turn around to see who touched your butt, but you''re surprised to see a woman smiling at you, she is seductively biting her lip.'
+					'While you''re dancing you a hand groping your ass. You turn around to see who touched your butt, but you''re surprised to see a woman smiling at you.  She is seductively biting her lip.'
 					
 					act 'Stop dancing':gt 'club', 'inside'
 					
@@ -362,8 +362,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 
 					if alexeyClubSex = 3 and sashaClubQW = 0:
 						sashaClubQW = 1
-						'Into the booth came a man, who seems to be somewhere in forties. He has a large belly, has a bald head and is wearing glasses. Alexei greeted him and introduced you to him, his name is Alexander E. and he''s the owner of the club.'
-						'Alexander had a small talk with Alexei, then he left again.'
+						'A man comes into the booth who seems to be somewhere in forties. He has a large belly, a bald head and is wearing glasses. Alexei greets him and introduces you to him. His name is Alexander E. and he''s the owner of the club.'
+						'Alexander talks briefly with Alexei before leaving.'
 
 						act 'Leave the booth':gt 'club', 'dance'
 
@@ -395,8 +395,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 								gs 'cum_manage'
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/cum<<rand(34, 47)>>.jpg"></center>'
-								'Streams of sperm hit you in the mouth and began to run down your <<$liptalk>>. Alexei wiped his dick on your <<$liptalk>> and put it away in his pants.'
-								'You began greedily to swallow his warm cum and use your finger to collect the drips, that escaped your mouth, then lick your finger clean. Once you''ve swallowed every last drop, you stand up again and thank him for this tasty snack.'
+								'Streams of sperm hit you in the mouth and begin to run down your <<$liptalk>>. Alexei wipes his dick on your <<$liptalk>> and puts it away in his pants.'
+								'You began greedily to swallow his warm cum and use your finger to collect the drips that escape your mouth, then lick your finger clean. Once you''ve swallowed every last drop, you stand up again and thank him for this tasty snack.'
 
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -412,7 +412,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 		end
 	else
 		menu_off = 1
-		'Its getting late and the music stops, looks like it might be time to go home.'
+		'Its getting late and the music stops.  Looks like it might be time to go home.'
 		act 'Leave the dance floor': gt 'club', 'inside'
 	end	
 end
@@ -426,7 +426,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">bar</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club10.jpg"></center>'
-	'You have to squeeze yourself through the crowd to get to the bar. On your way, random guys try to lay their hands around you, try to convince you into dancing or drinking with them, some even try to grope your tits or ass and some play the white knight and try to get your attention by protecting you.'
+	'You have to squeeze yourself through the crowd to get to the bar. On your way, random guys try to lay their hands on you or try to convince you into dancing or drinking with them. Some even try to grope your tits or ass and some play the white knight and try to get your attention by protecting you.'
 
 	if pcs_apprnc > 56:
 		barsexrand = rand(0, 10)
@@ -476,7 +476,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar':
 			gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 			spafinloc = 12
 			gs 'cum_manage'
-			'The last thing you remember, is how you sucked someones cock in the middle of the dancefloor.'
+			'The last thing you remember is how you sucked someone''s cock in the middle of the dancefloor.'
 			'You''re too drunk to continue partying here. The security has to escort you out.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub'
@@ -490,7 +490,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar':
 			pcs_horny += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club5.jpg"></center>'
-			'The last thing you remember, is how you tried to pose as a waitress.'
+			'The last thing you remember is how you tried to pose as a waitress.'
 			'You''re too drunk to continue partying here. The security has to escort you out.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt 'city_center'
@@ -499,7 +499,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar':
 		elseif temp = 9:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/public/ivrand6.jpg"></center>'
-			'The last thing you remember, is a sex scene at the tables, where a girl is bent over one and fucked by a guy from behind.'
+			'The last thing you remember is a sex scene at the tables, where a girl was bent over one and fucked by a guy from behind.'
 			'You''re too drunk to continue partying here. The security has to escort you out.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic_sex', 10
@@ -512,7 +512,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar':
 		elseif temp = 10:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/public/ivrand7.jpg"></center>'
-			'You see a small group of girl loosing it on the dancefloor. They''re moving like there''s no tomorrow.'
+			'You see a small group of girls losing it on the dancefloor. They''re moving like there''s no tomorrow.'
 			'You''re too drunk to continue partying here. The security has to escort you out.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 10
@@ -538,7 +538,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar':
 		elseif temp = 12:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/public/ivrand9.jpg"></center>'
-			'The last thing you remember, is a girl who crawled under a table, because she probably dropped her phone. But her skirt moves up and reveals her bare naked ass and the fact that she didn''t put on any panties.'
+			'The last thing you remember is a girl who crawled under a table, because she probably dropped her phone. But her skirt moved up and revealed her bare naked ass and the fact that she hadn''t put on any panties.'
 			'You''re too drunk to continue partying here. The security has to escort you out.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 10
@@ -551,7 +551,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar':
 		elseif temp = 13:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/public/ivrand10.jpg"></center>'
-			'You notice a women who is giving a guy a blowjob, then the women opens her mouth, with the cock in her hand and the guy pours champagne into her mouth.'
+			'You notice a woman who is giving a guy a blowjob. The women opens her mouth with the cock in her hand and the guy pours champagne into her mouth.'
 			'You''re too drunk to continue partying here. The security has to escort you out.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic_sex', 10
@@ -564,7 +564,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar':
 		elseif temp = 14:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/public/ivrand11.jpg"></center>'
-			'You happen to notice a small group of drunken girls giggling. One of which is fingering the pussy of another girl.'
+			'You happen to notice a small group of drunken girls giggling, one of whom is fingering the pussy of another girl.'
 			'You''re too drunk to continue partying here. The security has to escort you out.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic_sex', 10
@@ -590,7 +590,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar':
 		elseif temp = 16:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club13.jpg"></center>'
-			'The last thing you remember, is how you tried to dance with a random guy.'
+			'The last thing you remember is how you tried to dance with a random guy.'
 			'You''re too drunk to continue partying here. The security has to escort you out.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10
@@ -603,7 +603,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar':
 		elseif temp = 17:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club14.jpg"></center>'
-			'The last thing you remember, is how you undressed and danced half naked in front of everyone.'
+			'The last thing you remember is how you undressed and danced half-naked in front of everyone.'
 			'You''re too drunk to continue partying here. The security has to escort you out.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10
@@ -616,7 +616,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar':
 		elseif temp = 18:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/public/ivrand15.jpg"></center>'
-			'You see a guy and a girl on the dancefloor kissing each other. The guy however uses one of his hands to have some fun with the girls pussy.'
+			'You see a guy and a girl on the dancefloor kissing each other. The guy is using one of his hands to have some fun with the girl''s pussy.'
 			'You''re too drunk to continue partying here. The security has to escort you out.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic_sex', 10
@@ -629,7 +629,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar':
 		elseif temp = 19:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/public/ivrand16.jpg"></center>'
-			'You can see a drunken girl spreading her legs on one of the bar stools, she''s not wearing any panties and the bloke next to her takes the opportunity and fingers the girl.'
+			'You can see a drunken girl spreading her legs on one of the bar stools.  She''s not wearing any panties and the bloke next to her takes the opportunity to finger the girl.'
 			'You''re too drunk to continue partying here. The security has to escort you out.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic_sex', 10
@@ -655,7 +655,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar':
 		elseif temp = 21:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club21.jpg"></center>'
-			'You see a girl as drunk as you attempting taking a picture of her panties.'
+			'You see a girl as drunk as you attempting to take a picture of her panties.'
 			'You''re too drunk to continue partying here. The security has to escort you out.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 10
@@ -668,7 +668,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar':
 		elseif temp = 22:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club22.jpg"></center>'
-			'You see a girl lying on the dancefloor passed out drunk. Someone has taken her panties, exposing her private parts.'
+			'You see a girl lying on the dancefloor passed-out drunk. Someone has taken her panties, exposing her private parts.'
 			'You''re too drunk to continue partying here. The security has to escort you out.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 10
@@ -681,7 +681,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar':
 		elseif temp = 23:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club23.jpg"></center>'
-			'You see a girl lying on the dancefloor passed out drunk. Someone has lifted her skirt, exposing her panties to everyone.'
+			'You see a girl lying on the dancefloor passed-out drunk. Someone has lifted her skirt, exposing her panties to everyone.'
 			'You''re so drunk that you fell asleep on the spot. A man from the security had to wake you up and escorted you out.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 10
@@ -694,7 +694,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar':
 		elseif temp = 24:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club24.jpg"></center>'
-			'The last thing you''re able to remember is, that used the mens bathroom to pee.'
+			'The last thing you''re able to remember is that you used the men''s bathroom to pee.'
 			'You''re too drunk to continue partying here. The security has to escort you out.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 10
@@ -707,7 +707,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar':
 		elseif temp > 24:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club25.jpg"></center>'
-			'You see a girl lying on a parcel passed out drunk. You can clearly see her panties.'
+			'You see a girl lying on a parcel passed-out drunk. You can clearly see her panties.'
 			'You''re so drunk that you fell asleep on the spot. A man from the security had to wake you up and escorted you out.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 10
@@ -730,7 +730,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar':
 			pcs_horny += rand(10, 50)
 			money -= 300
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club6.jpg"></center>'
-			'You found a free bar stool and sat down on it. You ordered the barkeeper to mix you a cocktail and a few moments later, you sipping on a sweet one.'
+			'You find a free bar stool and sit down on it. You order the barkeeper to mix you a cocktail and a few moments later, you''re sipping on a sweet one.'
 
 			act 'Stand up':gt 'club', 'bar'
 		end
@@ -747,7 +747,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">toilet stall</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex.jpg"></center>'
-	'You went with the guy to the men''s toilet and he dragged you into one of the free booths. He started to caress your breasts and pussy, then helped you getting rid of the clothes.'
+	'You go with the guy to the men''s toilet and he drags you into one of the free stalls. He starts to caress your breasts and pussy, then helps you get rid of your clothes.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -788,7 +788,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 					spafinloc = 11
 					gs 'cum_manage'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/clubfacial1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You grabbed his cock and point his "gun" at your face. He groans as he cums and you can feel hot streams of semen covering your face.'
+					'You grab his cock and point his "gun" at your face. He groans as he cums and you can feel hot streams of semen covering your face.'
 
 					act 'Stand up':gt 'club', 'tou'
 				end
@@ -813,7 +813,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 			spafinloc = 12
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/clubswallow.jpg"></center>'
-			'The guy came in your mouth, you can feel his hot and salty semen pouring into it. Without hesitation you swallow it, you can''t tell why, but somehow you start to enjoy the taste of fresh, warm sperm.'
+			'The guy cums in your mouth, you can feel his hot and salty semen pouring into it. Without hesitation you swallow it. You can''t tell why, but somehow you start to enjoy the taste of fresh, warm sperm.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -833,7 +833,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 		'You turn around and kneel on the toilet seat. "Fuck me", you say and present your ass and pussy to him.'
 		'You don''t have to tell him twice, he grabs your hips, positions his cock in front of your pussy and with a strong push he enters your vagina. You moan with pleasure and you are surprised by the sheer force he used to enter you.'
 		'He grunts heavy as he fucks you like the bitch in heat that you are. He continues with force and speed, if he''s slowing down, you can''t notice it, but it doesn''t take long and both of you are reaching the state of orgasm.'
-		'You look at him, "Don''t you dare to cum inside.". In between his grunts he nods and a few seconds later he cums outside of you, you are relived that he at least acts a bit like a gentleman.'
+		'You look at him, "Don''t you dare to cum inside.". In between his grunts he nods and a few seconds later he cums outside of you. You are relived that he at least acts a bit like a gentleman.'
 		spafinloc = 14
 		gs 'cum_manage'
 
@@ -842,7 +842,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 
 		if pcs_horny > 90:
 			$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-			$orgasm_txt = 'As you heartbeat slows and you are beginning to catch your breath, you realise your arousal has peaked, a warmth fills you and your eyes lose focus.'
+			$orgasm_txt = 'As your heartbeat slows and you are begin to catch your breath, you realise your arousal has peaked. A warmth fills you and your eyes lose focus.'
 		end
 		'You recover to find yourself alone in the cubicle and quickly re-dress.'
 
@@ -890,7 +890,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar0':
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/bar3.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Wait a second, let me help you with my pants.", she says, panting softly into your ear, while she drops her pants. Then she sat down on a bar stool and you moved her panty aside and began to lick her womanly folds.'
-				'Moments later, she moans heavy and cums. You look up to her and giggle softly. "Why don''t we switch and I make you feel good now?", she says, still panting heavy.'
+				'Moments later, she moans heavily and cums. You look up to her and giggle softly. "Why don''t we switch and I make you feel good now?", she says, still panting heavy.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -910,7 +910,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar0':
 					if dildo = 0:
 						cla
 						*clr
-						'Now that the adrenalin fades away again, both you begin to blush as you notice, that the people around you stare at you. Both of you quickly dress-up again and go parted ways.'
+						'Now that the adrenaline has faded away, you both begin to blush as you notice that the people around you are staring. Both of you quickly dress up again and go your separate ways.'
 
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -934,7 +934,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar0':
 								*clr
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/bar6.jpg"></center>'
 								'You both stand up and use a dildo to move it in and out of each others pussy. She moves close to you and begins kissing you. Your feelings are overflowing and both of you come together at the same time.'
-								'Now that the adrenalin fades away again, both you begin to blush as you notice, that the people around you stare at you. Both of you quickly dress-up again and go parted ways.'
+								'Now that the adrenaline has faded away, you both begin to blush as you notice that the people around you are staring. Both of you quickly dress up again and go your separate ways.'
 
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_vibe', 5, 'lesbian'
@@ -959,7 +959,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar1':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Bar</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/bar7.jpg"></center>'
-	'While you sit on one of the bar stools a man comes to and grabs on of your ass cheeks. "Why don''t we both have some fun together, huh?", the bloke says and you can hear, that he had more than one beer.'
+	'While you sit on one of the bar stools a man comes to and grabs one of your ass cheeks. "Why don''t we both have some fun together, huh?", the bloke says and you can tell that he has had more than one beer.'
 
 	act 'Turn him down':
 		if alko < 4:
@@ -999,7 +999,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar2':
 	guy += 1
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Bar</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/barminet.jpg"></center>'
-	'You bend over, unbutton his pants and take out his cock. You bite your lips in anticipation and start to suck on it with your <<$liptalk>>. He''s moaning and smiling at the fact, that a random girl at a club is giving him a header.'
+	'You bend over, unbutton his pants and take out his cock. You bite your lips in anticipation and start to suck on it with your <<$liptalk>>. He''s moaning and smiling at the fact that a random girl at a club is giving him a header.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1075,7 +1075,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape':
 	gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 	if rand(0, 1) = 0:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/barminet.jpg"></center>'
-		'The guy notices you being heavily drunk and you couldn''t resits anything right now. He orders you to unbutton his pants, take out his cock and begin to suck on it. He grabs your hair and forces your to deepthroat it.'
+		'The guy notices that you are heavily drunk and that you couldn''t resits anything right now. He orders you to unbutton his pants, take out his cock and begin to suck on it. He grabs your hair and forces you to deepthroat it.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -1104,7 +1104,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape':
 				gs 'cum_manage'
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Bar</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/barsex.jpg"></center>'
-				'The bloke takes his cock out of your mouth, tells you position yourself in the stool and then he begins to fuck you roughly. As you''re drunk you barely register anything, but you catch yourself moaning heavy. Not even ten minutes laters he takes his cock out of your pussy and cums on your ass.'
+				'The bloke takes his cock out of your mouth, tells you position yourself in the stool and then he begins to fuck you roughly. As you''re drunk you barely register anything, but you catch yourself moaning heavily. Not even ten minutes laters he takes his cock out of your pussy and cums on your ass.'
 
 				gs 'dinSex', 'std_trigger'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'rough'
@@ -1135,7 +1135,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lezbsort':
 	girl += 1
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">WC</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/lezbsort.jpg"></center>'
-	'She follows you into the womens bathroom and you lure her into one of the empty booths.'
+	'She follows you into the women''s bathroom and you lure her into one of the empty stalls.'
 
 	act 'Lick her':gt 'club', 'lezbsort1'
 	act 'Tell her to lick you':gt 'club', 'lezbsort2'
@@ -1250,7 +1250,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 		end
 	elseif clubr = 1:
 		'"OK <<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you to go around the club getting people to try and hopefully switch to these spirits. You can''t go wrong here, just smile and give out free drinks."'
-		'"No need to hold back with it, the suppliers are paying and if you''re curious and want to try it, don''t its horrible. I''ll see you back here in an hour."'
+		'"No need to hold back with it, the suppliers are paying and if you''re curious and want to try it, don''t it''s horrible. I''ll see you back here in an hour."'
 		act 'Get to work':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 60