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  KevinSmarts 5855b1d178 Merge remote-tracking branch 'Spackled_Lanturn/minor-fixes' 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn daff9c213f [fixed] dealt with some issues in the Ivan related parts of the quest line to become a starter for the volleyball team: (1) made it so that declining Ivan's request to have sex after school in the showers on the current day doesn't block him asking again (agreeing to his request is necessary for coach to spy on the two of you), (2) removed the VoltrenerVoyeur += 1 from VoluntrenerSexShower scene triggered when VoltrenerVoyeur = 2 (this line was never called as it was guarded by a check that IvanShowerYes = 2 but the gt call that triggers the scene is guarded by IvanShowerYes = 0), (3) moved the line IvanShowerQW = 1 from inside ShowerWithIvan to the code stanza that calls ShowerWithIvan (this avoids IvanShowerQW getting reset in subsequent calls of ShowerWithIvan and avoids there being paths in ShowerWithIvan that don't set this var, which there inadvertently were previously), (4) removed the IvanShowerQW = 1 lines in the cases in the scene in gdksport where the player does not shower with Ivan (the Ivan dialogue at school only makes sense if you do shower with him), and (5) made the intro Ivan shower scene repeatable until the player showers with him (this can be changed back to a one-off if alternative dialogue for the scenes in IvanEv and gschool_chats1 where the player and Ivan discuss the shower incident is added for if the player doesn't shower with Ivan) 3 years ago
  Vengeance11 7c9ca283c0 Text edit missed in last commit. 3 years ago
  Vengeance11 4392aa84a8 Cleaned up school texts and made a few minor edits to Albina dialogue. 3 years ago
  KevinSmarts dee65e0ee6 Merge remote-tracking branch 'Spackled_Lanturn/minor-fixes' 3 years ago
  KevinSmarts 8025d65123 Merge remote-tracking branch 'Alaratt/master' 3 years ago
  rachels bb7effa403 show shoes even if Sveta is not dressed properly 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn cd1d1023b2 [text edit] clean up road 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn bcd63eca71 Merge remote-tracking branch 'upstream/master' into minor-fixes 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn 0d7725194d [text edit] clean up sbReksHome 3 years ago
  rachels 997f9711f0 Move the orgasm in the proper place 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn 526dca232c [text edit] clean up seeporn 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn df64f54538 [text edit] further clean up serpent 3 years ago
  rachels 4f1b6aed35 clear unused variable 3 years ago
  rachels 3286bbe8ba do not rename array index 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn 8f34ecb780 [fixed] in sergeihunter, move code present in all branches of conditional to outside conditional 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn a25ac1a757 [text edit] clean up sergeihunter 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn 683c07013c [text edit] clean up serpent 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn 3cb62218e0 [fixed] in sewing, (1) make it so that the too few sewing materials message properly displays when clicking the resize some of your clothes action, (2) pull out some common actions in all branches of conditionals, (3) restructure conditionals to avoid having different variables be checked in the if and elseif branches and to avoid copypasting text, (4) add text (a) saying how much space for trinkets you have left in your room when you finish one and (b) saying that you are out of space in both your room and garage when you make a trinket that fills up the last space in each 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn 2e15a32a4f [text edit] clean up sewing 3 years ago
  Alaratt d03c42ebf8 [text edits] cleaned up some text in the journal 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn 05f3dd1c9f [changed] in sex, (1) added a separate text for when the man comes while giving you oral instead of just reusing the one for when you're blowing him and (2) made it so that him giving you oral doesn't reduce his counter that counts down to him cumming unless he's already close to cumming or that's the only sex act that's enabled 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn 71e0b83129 Merge remote-tracking branch 'upstream/master' into minor-fixes 3 years ago
  KevinSmarts b88d2ab32b Merge remote-tracking branch 'Arcadia/master' 3 years ago
  KevinSmarts da3c324fff Merge remote-tracking branch 'Spackled_Lanturn/minor-fixes' 3 years ago
  KevinSmarts 42a78396fd [fixed] Added check for suitable slut fame before seeing grafiti in school toilets 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn 21a8c21201 [fixed] in sex, (1) delete unused sxkuni variable, (2) merge together the code for the near identical four vaginal sex options (since pos is only used to determine where cum goes and values 3 to 6 had it go to the same place (inside vagina) in previous implementation, only real differences between these was the picture displayed), and (3) kill vars when we're done with them instead of just zeroing them out or leaving them as is 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn b8f8fcb0f2 [text edit] clean up sex 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn d50531ac36 [fixed] in sexdvanadva, (1) move common code outside conditional, (2) delete unused variables, and (3) kill variables that were being set to 0 when this file exited (sexvar) or are only used in this file and are randomly reset every time they are used (sexdvarand). (1) and (2) cut this file from 175 to 106 lines 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn c868909499 [text edit] clean up sexdvanadva 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn 6e8c947bfe [fixed] in sexdvoe, (1) move common code outside conditionals, (2) delete unused variables, and (3) kill variables that were being set to 0 when this file exited (sexvar, sameboy, sexstart) or are only used in this file and are randomly reset every time they are used (sexdvoeloc). (1) and (2) cut this file from 416 to 295 lines 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn 49537408e8 [text edit] clean up sexdvoe 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn c1aaf5e507 [fixed] in sexm, move action common to all branches of a conditional to outside the conditional 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn 10fb2b0ee4 [text edit] clean up sexm 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn 428cea0a11 [text edit] clean up bouling 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn b1acfd7f1e [fixed] in sexorg, (1) move common code outside conditional, (2) delete unused variables, and (3) kill variables that were being set to 0 when this file exited (sexvar) or are only used in this file and are randomly reset every time they are used (sexorgrand). (1) and (2) cut this file from 169 to 92 lines 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn efc40cc423 [text edit] clean up sexorg 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn e4dcb9597e [text edit] clean up sexshop 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn 46cd25d20c [text edit] clean up shop 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn 78c8bd05ee [text edit] clean up shop_dolls 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn 45509bd720 [text edit] clean up shop_fashionista 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn 26e2475b4d [text edit] clean up shopdacha 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn 38d5e14baf [text edit] clean up shoplifting 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn 589898b334 [fixed] in bordel, (1) prevent the player from continuing to wait for clients after the brothel closes, (2) block the wait for customers action from showing up when the player has hit the clients per night limit instead of the button being clickable but just looping the player back to the same place so that it looks like nothing happened, (3) add lines of text explaining why the player cannot work when the player can't, (4) add a line of text warning the player that the brothel is closing when they get a client offer so that they know they can't get another until the next night if they refuse this one 3 years ago
  Spackled Lanturn 128686cffb [text edit] clean up shulgabath 3 years ago
42 changed files with 1366 additions and 1712 deletions
  1. 2 2
      locations/AlbStars.qsrc
  2. 3 1
      locations/IvanEv.qsrc
  3. 1 1
      locations/Snpc.qsrc
  4. 3 1
      locations/VoltrenerSexShower.qsrc
  5. 1 1
      locations/_body_image.qsrc
  6. 1 1
      locations/albinaRide.qsrc
  7. 2 2
      locations/albina_election_events.qsrc
  8. 2 2
      locations/albinahome.qsrc
  9. 37 21
      locations/bordel.qsrc
  10. 6 6
      locations/bouling.qsrc
  11. 1 2
      locations/brother.qsrc
  12. 13 7
      locations/gdksport.qsrc
  13. 179 185
      locations/gschool_boys_bathroom.qsrc
  14. 190 189
      locations/gschool_break.qsrc
  15. 2 1
      locations/gschool_chats1.qsrc
  16. 5 1
      locations/gschool_events.qsrc
  17. 186 169
      locations/gschool_girls_bathroom.qsrc
  18. 1 1
      locations/gschool_grounds.qsrc
  19. 1 1
      locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc
  20. 10 10
      locations/journal.qsrc
  21. 2 2
      locations/pav_commercial.qsrc
  22. 2 2
      locations/pav_industrial.qsrc
  23. 2 2
      locations/pav_residential.qsrc
  24. 57 71
      locations/road.qsrc
  25. 1 1
      locations/saveupdater.qsrc
  26. 22 23
      locations/sbReksHome.qsrc
  27. 38 37
      locations/seeporn.qsrc
  28. 27 35
      locations/sergeihunter.qsrc
  29. 5 5
      locations/serpent.qsrc
  30. 44 53
      locations/sewing.qsrc
  31. 48 128
      locations/sex.qsrc
  32. 14 83
      locations/sexdvanadva.qsrc
  33. 28 149
      locations/sexdvoe.qsrc
  34. 97 109
      locations/sexm.qsrc
  35. 18 95
      locations/sexorg.qsrc
  36. 85 83
      locations/sexshop.qsrc
  37. 19 19
      locations/shop.qsrc
  38. 13 13
      locations/shop_dolls.qsrc
  39. 8 8
      locations/shop_fashionista.qsrc
  40. 23 23
      locations/shopdacha.qsrc
  41. 131 131
      locations/shoplifting.qsrc
  42. 36 36
      locations/shulgabath.qsrc

+ 2 - 2
locations/AlbStars.qsrc

@@ -288,8 +288,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'starlets':
 			!! third rally in the park if sveta is dancing
 			if ((month > 9 and day > 20) or (month = 11 and day < 16)) and week > 5 and hour > 8 and hour < 20 and AlbinaQW['ParkRally'] = 2 and AlbinaQW['ParkRallyDay'] < daystart :  gt 'AlbStars', 'parkrally'
 
-			if AlbinaQW['albina_election_events']  = 0 and AlbinaQW['StarletsWhore'] >= 8:
-				AlbinaQW['albina_election_events']  = 1
+			if AlbinaQW['AlbFatherQW']  = 0 and AlbinaQW['StarletsWhore'] >= 8:
+				AlbinaQW['AlbFatherQW']  = 1
 				'At the end of the session, Albina beckons you to her. "I''ve been told to tell you that you''re doing good <<$pcs_nickname>> and that the clients are saying that you''re their new favourite girl. You''re handling it all quite well, but it will all be over soon. He won''t get away with it much longer. I promise."'
 				'You raise an eyebrow at her, but she just pats you on the shoulder and walks away before you can ask her who or what she is talking about.'
 			end

+ 3 - 1
locations/IvanEv.qsrc

@@ -143,10 +143,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'School Chat':
 				else
 					act 'Tell Ivan you''re bored':gt 'gdksport', 'Ivan_bored'
 				end
+			!! Since Ivan is only asking about the current day, not indefinitely, might be good to use a
+			!! daystart variable here and in the scene in gdksport IvanShowerYes guards
+			!! (like IvanShowerDayStart or something)
 			elseif IvanShowerYes = 0 and IvanShowerQW = 11 and ShowerIvan < 3:
 				'When you''re about to head for your next class, Ivan suddenly stops you and asks: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, want to meet up with me in the showers after school?"'
 				act 'Decline':
-					IvanShowerYes = 2
 					cla
 					'You give it some thought, but have to decline. You shake your head apologetically and say: "Sorry Ivan, I can''t make it today."'
 					act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'

+ 1 - 1
locations/Snpc.qsrc

@@ -227,7 +227,7 @@ if numnpc = 23:
 	! 	AlbinaQW['Friends'] = 2
 	! 	npc_rel['A23'] = 100
 	! 	'Albina smiles gratefully at you as she says: "Thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>! Like they say... a friend in need is a friend indeed. Your timely warning saved me, I had just enough time to get rid of all the evidence! Unfortunately we do have to stop with Albina''s Starlets, to keep ourselves out of trouble."'
-	! elseif AlbinaQW['albina_election_events']  = 2 and AlbEnemy = 0:
+	! elseif AlbinaQW['AlbFatherQW']  = 2 and AlbEnemy = 0:
 	! 	npc_rel['A23'] = 0
 	! 	AlbEnemy = 1
 	! 	'Albina angrily glares at you as she talks: "Cut the crap, bitch... I know what you did. You''ll regret this!"'

+ 3 - 1
locations/VoltrenerSexShower.qsrc

@@ -60,6 +60,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	end
 end
 
+!! Note, this scene does not increase VoltrenerVoyeur unlike the other VoltrenerSexShower scenes.
+!! This is intentional. The way to raise VoltrenerVoyeur from 2 to 3 is to talk to the coach about
+!! him spying on the player in the shower.
 if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 	cls
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/event/voltrenersexshower1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -74,7 +77,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 	if (pcs_horny >= 70 or pav_slut > 50) and will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 		act 'Masturbate (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
-			if IvanShowerYes = 2: VoltrenerVoyeur += 1
 			npc_rel['A69'] += 1
 			trenerlust += 4
 			minut += 10

+ 1 - 1
locations/_body_image.qsrc

@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bra':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'shoes':
-	if $clothingworntype = 'nude' or $shoeworntype = 'none':
+	if $shoeworntype = 'none':
 		$RESULT = 'images/pc/body/feet.jpg'
 	else
 		$RESULT = FUNC('$shoe_image', $shoeworntype, shoewornnumber)

+ 1 - 1
locations/albinaRide.qsrc

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ act 'Get in':
 		*nl
 		'Yes, because I wanted him to expose us. I gave him the evidence he needed to take down the ringleader."'
 		'"Wait a second. <i>You''re</i> the ''anonymous source''? Why?" you ask in confusion. "I have my reasons." is all she says in reply and continues driving in silence.' 
-		'After driving for a while, you reach her house. She drives through the gate and stops outside the front door. She tells you to follow her and exits the car.'
+		'After driving for a while, you reach her house. She drives up the driveway and stops outside the front door. She tells you to follow her and exits the car.'
 	end
 
     act 'Go with Albina':gt 'albinahome', 'start' 

+ 2 - 2
locations/albina_election_events.qsrc

@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ $din_zajava_albfather = {
 		*clr & cla
 		menu_off = 1
 		minut += 1
-		AlbinaQW['albina_election_events']  = 2
+		AlbinaQW['AlbFatherQW']  = 2
 		AlbinaQW['Chernov'] = 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/chernov.jpg"></center>'
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ $din_zajava_albfather_no2 = {
 		*clr & cla
 		menu_off = 1
 		minut += 1
-		AlbinaQW['albina_election_events']  = -1
+		AlbinaQW['AlbFatherQW']  = -1
 		AlbinaQW['Chernov'] = 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/chernov.jpg"></center>'

+ 2 - 2
locations/albinahome.qsrc

@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/kissingattempt.jpg"></center>'
 								'You cradle her head against your chest as she sobs away, her tears soaking into your top. "Hey, hey. But you did do something about it. He''s going to prison for what he done!" you reassure her while softly stroking her hair.'
 								'She sits up, her eyes puffy from crying and wipes away her tears. "Yeah, yeah you''re right <<$pcs_nickname>>. I just got tired of watching my friends suffer when they didn''t deserve any of this. So I exposed him as what he is. A vile fucking creep!"'
-								'"I just wanted to live my life without fearing what my own father, or any other man for that matter, would do to me. For the longest time, I was just too fucking submissive. I done what I should have years ago. Got what I wanted, when I wanted." she says before looking intently into your eyes.'
+								'"I just wanted to live my life without fearing what my own father would do to me. For the longest time, I was just too fucking submissive. I done what I should have years ago. Got what I wanted, when I wanted." she says before looking intently into your eyes.'
 								'You smile at her and are about to reply when she suddenly leans in and tries to kiss you.'
 								gs 'willpower', 'cuni', 'resist', 'medium'
 								if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -565,7 +565,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fuck_albina_ass':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/anal2.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>. Put it back in and fuck me... hard." she says while wiggling her hips. You smile at her and slide the dildo back into her hole with ease, making her moan in pleasure. You grab onto her hips and start fucking her balls deep, filling her ass with the entire dildo. After several minutes, you feel her ass tighten around your fake cock and she cries out as her body is rocked by an intense orgasm and juices squirt from her pussy. You keep fucking her throughout her orgasm, only pulling out once her shudders have passed.'
+		'"Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>. Put it back in and fuck me... hard." she says while wiggling her hips. You smile at her and slide the dildo back into her hole with ease, making her moan in pleasure. You grab onto her hips and start fucking her balls deep, filling her ass with the entire dildo as she reaches back and starts rubbing her clit. After several minutes, you feel her ass tighten around your fake cock and she cries out as her body is rocked by an intense orgasm and juices squirt from her pussy. You keep fucking her throughout her orgasm, only pulling out once her shudders have passed.'
 		'After you''ve pulled out, she inserts a few fingers into her gaping hole as juices continue leaking from her pussy. "Oh fuck yes <<$pcs_nickname>>! That was fucking amazing!"'
 		'"Fucking such a nice looking ass was amazing!" you reply and you both laugh.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5, 'lesbian'

+ 37 - 21
locations/bordel.qsrc

@@ -53,22 +53,31 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel':
 		end
 	end
 
-	if func('bordel', 'is_open'):
-		act 'Go to the reception room and wait for customers':
-
-			if (cumloc[6] = 1 or cumloc[7] = 1) or cumloc[11] = 1 or pcs_makeup < 2 or pcs_leghair > 3 or pcs_pubes > 3 or sweat > 25 or pcs_hairbsh = 0:
-				cla
-				'The brothel madam comes over to you and says, "Our customers expect you to be clean, shaven, made-up and with your hair looking nice. Go and sort yourself out, now!"'
-
-				act 'Go to the bathroom':gt 'bordel', 'dysh'
-			elseif $clothingworntype ! 'fancy_burlesque' and PCloStyle ! 4 and $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
-				cla
-				'You need to wear an outfit that can be used for prostitution. If you haven''t got anything suitable and you are desperate, you could work naked, but you will get paid less and might get treated badly.'
-				'You can change your clothes in the bathroom.'
-
-				act 'Go to the bathroom':gt 'bordel', 'dysh'
-			else
-				gt 'bordel', 'var'
+	if func('bordel', 'is_open') = 0:
+		'The brothel is closed for the night however, so you won''t be able to work now regardless.'
+	else
+		if borsexkol >= 2:
+			!! borsexkol is reset in cikl, meaning that it is reset at midnight, not when the brothel
+			!! opens or closes. if this is not desired behavior, will need to handle resetting this var
+			!! in brothel specific code.
+			'You have already hit this limit, so you won''t be able to work again until midnight.'
+		else
+			act 'Go to the reception room and wait for customers':
+
+				if (cumloc[6] = 1 or cumloc[7] = 1) or cumloc[11] = 1 or pcs_makeup < 2 or pcs_leghair > 3 or pcs_pubes > 3 or sweat > 25 or pcs_hairbsh = 0:
+					cla
+					'The brothel madam comes over to you and says, "Our customers expect you to be clean, shaven, made-up and with your hair looking nice. Go and sort yourself out, now!"'
+
+					act 'Go to the bathroom':gt 'bordel', 'dysh'
+				elseif $clothingworntype ! 'fancy_burlesque' and PCloStyle ! 4 and $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
+					cla
+					'You need to wear an outfit that can be used for prostitution. If you haven''t got anything suitable and you are desperate, you could work naked, but you will get paid less and might get treated badly.'
+					'You can change your clothes in the bathroom.'
+
+					act 'Go to the bathroom':gt 'bordel', 'dysh'
+				else
+					gt 'bordel', 'var'
+				end
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -112,7 +121,6 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'var':
     $location_type = 'event'
 	menu_off = 1
-	if borsexkol >= 2:gt 'bordel', 'brothel'
 	if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 		bordelpay = 8
 	else
@@ -121,6 +129,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'var':
 	gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Client', rand(18,40)
 	gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 	minut += 30
+	gs 'stat'
 	borrand = rand(0, 10)
 
 	if borrand = 0:
@@ -276,11 +285,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'var':
 			gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated,'2'
 			gt 'paysex', 'start'
 		end
-	elseif borrand > 4:
-		'You are not chosen.'
-
+	else
 		act 'Go to your room':gt 'bordel', 'brothel'
-		act 'Wait for another':gt 'bordel', 'var'
+		if func('bordel', 'is_open'):
+			'You are not chosen.'
+			act 'Wait for another':gt 'bordel', 'var'
+		else
+			'You are not chosen, and the brothel is now closed.'
+		end
+	end
+
+	if borrand <= 4 and func('bordel', 'is_open') = 0:
+		'The brothel is closing now, so this is your last chance to work today.'
 	end
 end
 

+ 6 - 6
locations/bouling.qsrc

@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 				end
 			elseif boulrand = 1:
 				killvar 'boulrand'
-				'You meet two girls and they suggest challenging two guys to a game: Prize 5000 <b>₽</b>, lose and they have sex with you.'
+				'You meet two girls, and they suggest challenging two guys to a game: Prize 5000 <b>₽</b>, lose and they have sex with you.'
 				act 'Play':boulvar = 2 & gt 'bouling', 'randwin'
 				gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'hard'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -86,22 +86,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'randwin':
 
 	if boulwin > 10 and boulvar = 0:
 		money += 300
-		'You won and received 300 <b>₽</b>.'
+		'You win and receive 300 <b>₽</b>.'
 
 		act 'Leave': gt 'bouling'
 	elseif boulwin > 10 and boulvar = 1:
 		money += 2000
-		'You won and received 2,000 <b>₽</b>.'
+		'You win and receive 2,000 <b>₽</b>.'
 
 		act 'Leave': gt 'bouling'
 	elseif boulwin > 10 and boulvar = 2:
 		money += 5000
-		'You won and received 5,000 <b>₽</b>.'
+		'You win and receive 5,000 <b>₽</b>.'
 
 		act 'Leave': gt 'bouling'
 	elseif boulwin <= 10 and boulvar = 0:
 		money -= 300
-		'You lost and paid 300 <b>₽</b>.'
+		'You lose and pay 300 <b>₽</b>.'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'bouling'
 	elseif boulwin <= 10 and boulvar = 1:
 		picrand = 14
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'randwin':
 			end
 			act 'Pay': money -= 2000 & gt 'bouling'
 		else
-			'You lost, but you do not have money to pay, only one thing for it.'
+			'You lose, but you do not have enough money to pay. Only one thing for it.'
 
 			act 'Offer sex instead':xgt 'sexdvoe', 'var'
 		end

+ 1 - 2
locations/brother.qsrc

@@ -644,7 +644,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sleepsexcum':
 
 	pose = 0
 	if sexcontra > 0: sexcontra = 0
-	$risk_boy = ''
 
 	gs 'stat'
 
@@ -838,6 +837,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fuckvaginal':
 	gs 'dinsex','sexcum'
 
 	gs 'brother', 'brotherSexEnd'
+	killvar '$risk_boy'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'fuckanal':
@@ -1084,7 +1084,6 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_sex_end':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
-	$risk_boy = ''
 	gs 'stat'
 	minut += rand(2,5)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/shower.mp4"></center>'

+ 13 - 7
locations/gdksport.qsrc

@@ -591,7 +591,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 	if IvanShowerYes = 1 and rand(0,3) = 1 and ShowerIvan < 3:
 		if ShowerIvan = 1: ShowerIvan = 2
 		'You enter the women''s shower, and turning the water on, you begin to lather up your body with a washcloth. Suddenly, you hear the door creak open and you remember that you agreed not to lock it for Ivan.'
-		'You look around and see Ivan standing there looking at you. "Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>. The men''s shower is full, so I thought I would join you instead." he smiles.'
+		'You look around and see Ivan standing there looking at you. "Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>. The men''s shower is full, so I thought I would join you instead." He smiles.'
 		act 'Shower with Ivan': gt 'gdksport', 'ShowerWithIvan'
 		gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -609,15 +609,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 		else
 			act 'Not today (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
-	elseif kotovVSprohorov = 1 and ShowerIvan < 3:
-		kotovVSprohorov = 2
+	!! We only set IvanShowerQW = 1 if the player showers with Ivan because the scene that uses this
+	!! variable where the player talks to Ivan about the shower at school assumes the player did
+	!! not run away or kick out Ivan before anything happened. This scene was initially a one-off,
+	!! but was changed to make it repeatable because showering with Ivan here is non-obviously an
+	!! intermediate step in becoming a starter on the volleyball team. If avoiding needing this
+	!! scene to be repeatable is desired, someone with a better sense of Ivan as a character than
+	!! me could add one at some point. If this is done, this scene can be made non-repeatable by
+	!! removing the (kotovVSprohorov = 2 and IvanShowerQW = 0 and rand(0,3) = 1) part
+	elseif (kotovVSprohorov = 1 or (kotovVSprohorov = 2 and IvanShowerQW = 0 and rand(0,3) = 1)) and ShowerIvan < 3:
 		'You enter the women''s shower and turning the water on, begin to lather your body with a washcloth. Suddenly, you hear the door creak open and you remember that you forgot to lock it.'
-		'You look around and see Ivan standing in the doorway looking at you. "Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>. Can I join you? The men''s shower is full." he smiles.'
+		'You look around and see Ivan standing in the doorway looking at you. "Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>. Can I join you? The men''s shower is full' + iif(kotovVSprohorov = 2, ' again', '') + '." He smiles.'
+		kotovVSprohorov = 2
 		gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Throw Ivan out (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
-				IvanShowerQW = 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -640,7 +647,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Escape from the shower (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 					*clr & cla
-					IvanShowerQW = 1
 					gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist', 'hard'
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -652,6 +658,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 				act 'Escape from the shower (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end
 			act 'Wash together':
+				IvanShowerQW = 1
 				IvanShowerYes = 0
 				if ShowerIvan = 0: ShowerIvan = 1
 				gt 'gdksport', 'ShowerWithIvan'
@@ -736,7 +743,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ShowerWithIvan':
 				else
 					act 'Turn around and bend over':
 						*clr & cla
-						IvanShowerQW = 1
 						lubonus = 2
 						spafinloc = 3
 						gs 'Cum_Manage'

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+ 179 - 185
locations/gschool_boys_bathroom.qsrc


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+ 190 - 189
locations/gschool_break.qsrc


+ 2 - 1
locations/gschool_chats1.qsrc

@@ -1339,10 +1339,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ivan':
 		else
 			act 'Tell Ivan you''re bored':gt 'gdksport', 'Ivan_bored'
 		end
+	!! Since Ivan is only asking about the current day, not indefinitely, might be good to use a daystart
+	!! variable here and in the scene in gdksport IvanShowerYes guards (IvanShowerDayStart or something)
 	elseif IvanShowerYes = 0 and IvanShowerQW = 11 and ShowerIvan < 3:
 		'When you''re about to head for your next class, Ivan suddenly stops you and asks: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, want to meet up with me in the showers after school?"'
 		act 'Decline':
-			IvanShowerYes = 2
 			cla
 			'You give it some thought, but have to decline. You shake your head apologetically and say "Sorry Ivan, I can''t make it today."'
 			act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'

+ 5 - 1
locations/gschool_events.qsrc

@@ -2251,7 +2251,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet_bj':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/boysbathroom.jpg"></center>'
 	'You know perfectly well that the group of boys are not going to let you escape. You meekly let the boys drag you to the men''s room, hoping for a miracle to save you. It never comes. When you arrive at the men''s room, one of the guys drives everyone else out; it''s just you and the gopniks in here now. He goes outside and keeps watch while two of the others reach for their pants. Several more come in to watch.'
-	'The walls of the restroom are covered in crude texts, quite a few of them involving you in some way. On one wall, you see written, in particularly large letters, "<b><<$pcs_nickname>> <<$pcs_lastname>> = <<$gnikname>>"</b>.'
+	if pav_slut > 250:
+		'The walls of the restroom are covered in crude texts, quite a few of them involving you in some way. On one wall, you see written, in particularly large letters, "<b><<$pcs_nickname>> <<$pcs_lastname>> = <<$gnikname>>"</b>.'
+	else
+		'The walls of the restroom are covered in crude texts, quite a few of them involving your classmates in some way.'
+	end
 	act 'Start sucking':
 		*clr & cla
 		if $boydesc = 'Vitek':

+ 186 - 169
locations/gschool_girls_bathroom.qsrc

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/girlsbathroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slip into the girl''s bathroom and into one of the stalls; the few other students who are already in the room don''t pay any attention to you. You sit on one of the toilets and pull your feet up, so no one can see them under the stall. After a few minutes, you hear the other girls all leave. Only moments later, the bell for class rings and you relax, a period of peace and quiet ahead of you.'
+	'You slip into the girl''s bathroom and into one of the stalls; the few other students who are already in the room don''t pay any attention to you. You sit on one of the toilets and pull your feet up so no one can see them under the stall. After a few minutes, you hear the other girls all leave. Only moments later, the bell for class rings and you relax, a period of peace and quiet ahead of you.'
 	act 'Play on phone':
 		*clr & cla
 		menu_off = 1
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/usephone'+ rand(1,2) +'.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sit on the toilet, playing on your phone. With class in session, most people you could text with would take agonizingly long to respond, and the few games you find to occupy yourself with are pretty terrible, but it still sure as hell beats another boring class.'
+		'You sit on the toilet, playing on your phone. With class in session, most people you text with take agonizingly long to respond, and the few games you find to occupy yourself with are pretty terrible, but it still sure as hell beats another boring class.'
 		i = rand(1,100)
 		if i <= 25:
 			gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'girls'
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/smoke'+ rand(1,3) +'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You pull out a cigarette and light it, take a long drag and holding it in for a while. You immediately feel yourself relaxing, the smoke''s familiar tingling in your lungs taking the edge off. Yep, much better than going to class.'
+			'You pull out a cigarette and light it, take a long drag and hold it in for a while. You immediately feel yourself relaxing, the smoke''s familiar tingling in your lungs taking the edge off. This feels much better than going to class.'
 			i = rand(1,100)
 			if i <= 25:
 				gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'girls'
@@ -66,10 +66,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom2':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	if school_bunk = 0:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/usephone'+ rand(1,2) +'.jpg"></center>'
-		'For the rest of the period, you play on your phone. Despite several instances of boredom and indecision that left you wishing you could just go out, you find it very relaxing to be your own master and by the time the next class bell rings, you are in a far better mood than before.'	
+		'For the rest of the period, you play on your phone. Despite several instances of boredom and indecision that leave you wishing you could just go out, you find it very relaxing to be your own master and by the time the bell rings, you are in a far better mood than before.'	
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/smoke'+ rand(1,3) +'.jpg"></center>'
-		'You spend the rest of the period playing on your phone while you smoke. The games on your cellphone are kinda boring, and once or twice you hear somebody walking around out on the corridor, causing your heart to skip a beat when you realize they might smell the smoke, but despite all that, you found this use of the period very relaxing and by the time the next class bell rings, you are in a far better mood than before.'
+		'You spend the rest of the period playing on your phone while you smoke. The games on your phone are boring, and once or twice you hear somebody walking around out in the corridor, causing your heart to skip a beat when you realize they might smell the smoke, but despite all that, you find this use of the period very relaxing and by the time the bell rings, you are in a far better mood than before.'
 	end
 	act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girl1':
 	jump_counter = 0
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/girlsbathroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'After a couple of minutes, you hear the bathroom door open - someone else is in the bathroom with you! Carefully, you peek out, half-expecting to see a teacher... and see <<$rand_girl>>. Relieved and smiling, you exit the stall and greet her. She turns around, slightly startled at first but then breaking into a smile when she see you. Within seconds, the two of you are chatting away about school, boys, clothes, makeup and anything else that strikes your fancy, having all but forgotten about the fact that you are sitting in the school bathroom. Before you know it, the class bell rings. You both stop and look up out of reflex, then bid each other later and head to your next class.'		
+	'After a few minutes, you hear the bathroom door open - someone else is in the bathroom with you! You carefully peek out, half-expecting to see a teacher, but see <<$rand_girl>>. Relieved and smiling, you exit the stall and greet her. She turns around, slightly startled at first but then breaking into a smile when she see you. Within seconds, the two of you are chatting away about school, boys, clothes, makeup and anything else that strikes your fancy, having all but forgotten about the fact that you are sitting in the school bathroom and before you know it, the bell rings. You both stop and look up out of reflex, then bid each other farewell and head to your next class.'		
 	act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
 
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girl2':
 	'After a couple of minutes, you hear the bathroom door quietly open and close. Soft footsteps echo back and forth and you know someone else is in the bathroom with you. You peek out of your stall and see Sonia standing at the mirror, applying makeup. Relieved, bored and starved for company, you open the stall door. "Hey Sonia, what''s up?"'
 	*nl
 	'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, you cutting class?" she asks while looking at you from the mirror.'
-	'"Yeah, I couldn''t take another boring class, I needed a little fun," you tell her with a smile.'
+	'"Yeah, I couldn''t take another boring class, I needed a little fun." you tell her with a smile.'
 	'Sonia turns around and looks at you for a moment, biting her lower lip. You can tell by the way the look in her eyes that she''s considering something; her mind made up, she walks up to you, gives you a kiss and whispers seductively into your ear: "I know what we could do for fun..."'
 	gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -117,14 +117,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girl2':
 			npc_rel['A25'] += 10
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/girlsbathroom.jpg"></center>'
-			'You can kinda understand why the boys are going crazy over Sonia - something about the way she looks, talks, even smells is incredibly tempting. It takes all of your strength of will to gently push her away. "Sorry Sonia, but that''s not what I meant."'
-			'Sonia seems a little surprised but then shrugs and goes back to the mirror, continuing her work on her makeup. "So what **did** you have in mind?"'
+			'You can understand why the boys are going crazy over Sonia - something about the way she looks, talks, even smells is incredibly tempting. It takes all of your strength of will to gently push her away. "Sorry Sonia, but that''s not what I meant."'
+			'Sonia seems a little surprised but then shrugs and goes back to the mirror, continuing her work on her makeup. "So what <i>did</i> you have in mind?"'
 			*nl
 			'"We could, you know, just talk. I mean, how have you been? I know things have been rough but that doesn''t mean we can''t be friends and talk to each other, right?" you ask as you walk up to stand next to her.' 
-			'Now that the spell is broken, you can''t help but feel sorry for her. She made a stupid mistake, some guys took advantage of her drunken, horny mood, and now she was a pariah, the school slut that practically nobody wanted to be seen with... including *you*, you realize.'
+			'Now that the spell is broken, you can''t help but feel sorry for her. She made a stupid mistake, some guys took advantage of her drunken, horny mood, and now she is a pariah, the school slut that practically nobody wants to be seen with... including you.'
 			*nl
 			'She glances at you, and smiles - not seductively like before but in a way you''ve rarely seen her smile since her fall from grace: Genuine, glad, happy even. "Sure. Yeah, I think I''d like that."' 
-			'The two of you spend the next hour talking about a variety of things, like you used to before. She gives you more than a few tips about how to use makeup, and you help her finish her own, putting into practice what she taught you. You talk about school and what you wanna do after, about family, about life... about anything and everything, except one thing: Sex. For one short period, Sonia and you pretend that you''re both innocent schoolgirls again.' 
+			'The two of you spend the next hour talking about a variety of things, like you used to before. She gives you more than a few tips about how to use makeup, and you help her finish her own, putting into practice what she taught you. You talk about school and what you want to do after, about family, about life... about anything and everything, except one thing: Sex. For one short period, you and Sonia pretend that you''re both innocent schoolgirls again.' 
 			'And before you know it, the bell rings. Sonia gives you lingering hug and a final, dazzling smile before both of you head to class.'
 			act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
@@ -160,14 +160,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girl2':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/school/soniatrade.jpg"></center>'
-					'You relish the smell and taste of her as she comes down from her high, eyes locked with each other and smiling like idiots as you recover. When her convulsions have stopped, she pulls you up and passionately kisses you, then gently licks her own juices off your face. The final kisses she gives you are different: Lingering, tender, almost bashful. With a smile, she breaks away from you and announces that you better get dressed. As you do, she asks: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, do you think we are going to write a test in chemistry this week?"'
+					'You relish the smell and taste of her as she comes down from her high, eyes locked with each other and smiling like idiots as you recover. When her convulsions have stopped, she pulls you up and passionately kisses you, then gently licks her own juices off your face. The final kisses she gives you are different: Lingering, tender, almost bashful. With a smile, she breaks away from you and announces that you better get dressed. As you do, she asks: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, do you think we are going to have a test in chemistry this week?"'
 					*nl
-					'The question leaves you dumbfounded - it takes you a moment or two to realize that everything you just experienced with her took place in a school toilet and that you now have to return to ''reality''. "Uh, I think he said there would be a quiz, yeah. Maybe we should have studied instead of having fun." You can''t help but giggle, and Sonia joins in. You spend the rest of the hour till the bell rings talking about mundane stuff and (sigh) going over some chemistry notes. Still, if this is how good it can be, maybe you should skip class more often.'
+					'The question leaves you dumbfounded - it takes you a moment or two to realize that everything you just experienced with her took place in a school toilet and that you now have to return to ''reality''. "Uh, I think he said there would be a quiz, yeah. Maybe we should have studied instead of having fun." You can''t help but giggle, and Sonia joins in. You spend the rest of the hour until the bell rings talking about mundane stuff and (sigh) going over some chemistry notes. Still, if this is how good it can be, maybe you should skip class more often.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'lesbian'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', -5, 'lesbian'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
-					act 'Go to Class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+					act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -181,17 +181,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girl3':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/lena-lera.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	if grupTipe ! 4:
-		'After a couple of minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you: Two girls are talking, and you recognize the voices as Lena and Lera''s. Most of the other girls in school avoid them, as they like to bully them and even some of the boys. Trying to be quiet, you pull your feet up - you really don''t want to draw their attention and catch you here, alone in the bathroom. Unfortunately, you''ve forgotten all about your phone in your lap: As you raise your legs up so they can''t see your feet under the stall, your phone slides off your lap and clatters onto the floor.'
+		'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you: Two girls are talking, and you recognize the voices as Lena and Lera''s. Most of the other girls in school avoid them, as they like to bully them and even some of the boys. Trying to be quiet, you pull your feet up - you really don''t want to draw their attention and catch you here, alone in the bathroom. Unfortunately, you''ve forgotten all about your phone in your lap: As you raise your legs up so they can''t see your feet under the stall, your phone slides off your lap and clatters onto the floor.'
 		*nl
-		'At once, the room is eerily silent; you hold your breath, your heartbeat so loud in your ears that, for a moment, it might be drowning out their sounds, but then you hear them walking in your direction and, suddenly, the door is slammed open. Lena and Lera stand on each side of the open stall, cigarettes in their mouths, looking right at you. "Well, well, look what we have here, Lena: A scared little bunny hiding in a stall," Lera says with a smirk.'
+		'At once, the room is eerily silent; you hold your breath, your heartbeat so loud in your ears that, for a moment, it might be drowning out their sounds, but then you hear them walking in your direction and, suddenly, the door is slammed open. Lena and Lera stand on each side of the open stall, cigarettes in their mouths, looking right at you. "Well, well, look what we have here, Lena: A scared little bunny hiding in a stall." Lera says with a smirk.'
 		*nl
 		'Lena leans in a bit, taking a closer look at you. "Is that right? Are you a scared little bunny, <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Without waiting for you to answer, she glances at Lera. "Maybe she thinks she''s a bad girl, trying to cut class. How about we show her what happens to bad little girls?" She laughs gleefully and Lera joins in. You have a really bad feeling about what they might want to do to you.'
 	else
-		'After a couple of minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you: Two girls are talking, and you recognize the voices as Lena and Lera''s. You consider going out to talk to them. All and all, they treat you pretty well, but sometimes they can be pretty mean and demeaning. You know you are the low girl on the totem pole in the gopniks, but it would be nice if they treated you better. Still, they do make sure no one else messes with you, and when they are in a good mood, it is a blast hanging out with them, so it''s not all bad.'
+		'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you: Two girls are talking, and you recognize the voices as Lena and Lera''s. You consider going out to talk to them. All and all, they treat you pretty well, but sometimes they can be pretty mean and demeaning. You know you are the low girl on the totem pole in the gopniks, but it would be nice if they treated you better. Still, they do make sure no one else messes with you, and when they are in a good mood, it is a blast hanging out with them, so it''s not all bad.'
 		*nl
-		'Before you can make up your mind, though, you hear their footsteps heading your way and you realize you forgot to lift up your feet. Suddenly, the door is pushed open. Lena and Lera stand on each side of the open stall, cigarettes in their mouths, looking right at you. "Well, well, look what we have here, Lena, our favorite scared little bunny hiding in a stall," Lera says with a smirk.'
+		'Before you can make up your mind, though, you hear their footsteps heading your way and you realize you forgot to lift up your feet. Suddenly, the door is pushed open. Lena and Lera stand on each side of the open stall, cigarettes in their mouths, looking right at you. "Well, well, look what we have here Lena, our favorite scared little bunny hiding in a stall." Lera says with a smirk.'
 		*nl
-		'Lena leans in a bit, taking a closer look at you. "Is that right? Are you a scared little bunny, <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Without waiting for you to answer, she glances at Lera. "I bet she thinks she''s a bad girl, for cutting class. How about we show her what happens to bad little girls?" She starts laughing and Lera joins in. You are not sure how you feel about this; they are a lot of fun, but their idea of fun can also be pretty damn mean. Part of you is strangely excited, but you are also worried about what comes next.'
+		'Lena leans in a bit, taking a closer look at you. "Is that right? Are you a scared little bunny, <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Without waiting for you to answer, she glances at Lera. "I bet she thinks she''s a bad girl for cutting class. How about we show her what happens to bad little girls?" She starts laughing and Lera joins in. You are not sure how you feel about this; they are a lot of fun, but their idea of fun can also be pretty damn mean. Part of you is strangely excited, but you are also worried about what comes next.'
 	end
 	gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -203,17 +203,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girl3':
 			if runout = 1:
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">School Hall</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/angryteacher.jpg"></center>'
-				'Afraid of what they might do, you run out of the stall, and straight out of the bathroom - you are just as surprised at the fact that this worked as they must have been at you even attempting to flee. With your footsteps echoing from the walls, you can''t tell if they''re on your tail or not, so you keep running down the hall, past several class room. You think you are almost in the clear... when you hear a voice behind you. "Where do you think you are going in such a hurry, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" The adrenaline in your bloodstream seems to multiply, but the fear of being followed itching at the back of your neck is instantly replaced by cold dread filling your stomach: You''re busted. Grinding to a halt, you turn around and see a teacher glaring at you.'
+				'Afraid of what they might do, you run out of the stall, and straight out of the bathroom - you are just as surprised at the fact that this worked as they must have been at you even attempting to flee. With your footsteps echoing from the walls, you can''t tell if they''re on your tail or not, so you keep running down the hall, past several classrooms. You think you are almost in the clear... when you hear a voice behind you. "Where do you think you are going in such a hurry, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" The adrenaline in your bloodstream seems to multiply, but the fear of being followed itching at the back of your neck is instantly replaced by cold dread filling your stomach: You''re busted. Grinding to a halt, you turn around and see a teacher glaring at you.'
 				*nl
-				'"Well, you see, I-," you stammer but he interrupts you before you can finish. "I know you have class this period, and yet you are out here, **running late** in every sense of the word. You weren''t cutting class, were you?"'
-				'The sarcastic tone leaves little doubt that he already knows the answer, but maybe you can still bullshit your way out of this. "Uh,yes, I mean, no. I mean... Yes, I have a class, but I wasn''t cutting. I was just running late, I had some stuff to do and I," you trail off lamely. You can tell he isn''t buying it, not even a part of it.'
+				'"Well, you see, I-" you stammer, but he interrupts you before you can finish. "I know you have class this period, and yet you are out here, running late in every sense of the word. You weren''t cutting class, were you?"'
+				'The sarcastic tone leaves little doubt that he already knows the answer, but maybe you can still bullshit your way out of this. "Uh, yes. I mean, no. I mean... Yes, I have a class, but I wasn''t cutting. I was just running late, I had some stuff to do and I..." you trail off lamely. You can tell he isn''t buying it, not even a part of it.'
 				*nl
-				'"Be that as it may, that is no excuse. Now get your butt to the Principal''s office. I will let her know you are on your way." With that, he points in the direction of her office, his stare extinguishing any hope of avoiding this. You can feel his eyes on your back until you are turning the corner before he returns to his classroom. With a sigh and no choice, you head to the Principal''s office.'
+				'"Be that as it may, that is no excuse. Now get to the Principal''s office. I will let her know you are on your way." With that, he points in the direction of her office, his stare extinguishing any hope of avoiding this. You can feel his eyes on your back until you are turning the corner before he returns to his classroom. With a sigh and no choice, you head to the Principal''s office.'
 				act 'Go to Principal''s Office':demerit += 10 & gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 			else
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">School Hall</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/building/gschool_hall02.jpg"></center>'
-				'Afraid of what they might do, you run out of the stall, and straight out of the bathroom - you are just as surprised at the fact that this worked as they must have been at you even attempting to flee. With your footsteps echoing from the walls, you can''t tell if they''re on your tail or not, so you keep running down the hall, past several class room; you don''t even really know where you''re going, you just want to put some distance between them and you. Finally you stop and lean against some of the lockers, looking back you don''t see them and it seems no one notice you running down the halls. Sighing you spend the rest of the period trying not to be spotted until your next class.'
+				'Afraid of what they might do, you run out of the stall, and straight out of the bathroom - you are just as surprised at the fact that this worked as they must have been at you even attempting to flee. With your footsteps echoing from the walls, you can''t tell if they''re on your tail or not, so you keep running down the hall, past several classrooms; you don''t even really know where you''re going, you just want to put some distance between them and you. Finally you stop and lean against some of the lockers - looking back, you don''t see them and it seems no one noticed you running down the halls. Sighing, you spend the rest of the period trying not to be spotted until your next class.'
 				act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		end
@@ -226,7 +226,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girl3':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/lena-lerabully.jpg"></center>'
 		'"No. I mean, I''m cutting class, but I''m not scared, and I don''t think I''m bad. I just needed a break and was hoping for a little fun, you know?" You smile weakly at them as you step out of the stall.'
 		*nl
-		'Lera leans in close and blows smoke in your face while Lena says: "Oh, you want to have some fun, huh? Ok, we can have some fun with you." Glancing and smirking at Lera as she speaks, both of them grab ahold of you from each side and you''re starting to wish you had just kept your mouth shut.'
+		'Lera leans in close and blows smoke in your face while Lena says: "Oh, you want to have some fun, huh? Ok, we can have some fun with you." Glancing and smirking at Lera as she speaks, both of them grab hold of you from each side and you''re starting to wish you had just kept your mouth shut.'
 		act 'Submit': gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'toy bunny'
 		gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -238,17 +238,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girl3':
 				if runout = 1:
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">School Hall</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/angryteacher.jpg"></center>'
-					'Afraid of what they might do, you run out of the stall, and straight out of the bathroom - you are just as surprised at the fact that this worked as they must have been at you even attempting to flee. With your footsteps echoing from the walls, you can''t tell if they''re on your tail or not, so you keep running down the hall, past several class room. You think you are almost in the clear... when you hear a voice behind you. "Where do you think you are going in such a hurry, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" The adrenaline in your bloodstream seems to multiply, but the fear of being followed itching at the back of your neck is instantly replaced by cold dread filling your stomach: You''re busted. Grinding to a halt, you turn around and see a teacher glaring at you.'
+					'Afraid of what they might do, you run out of the stall, and straight out of the bathroom - you are just as surprised at the fact that this worked as they must have been at you even attempting to flee. With your footsteps echoing from the walls, you can''t tell if they''re on your tail or not, so you keep running down the hall, past several classrooms. You think you are almost in the clear... when you hear a voice behind you. "Where do you think you are going in such a hurry, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" The adrenaline in your bloodstream seems to multiply, but the fear of being followed itching at the back of your neck is instantly replaced by cold dread filling your stomach: You''re busted. Grinding to a halt, you turn around and see a teacher glaring at you.'
 					*nl
-					'"Well, you see, I-," you stammer but he interrupts you before you can finish. "I know you have class this period, and yet you are out here, **running late** in every sense of the word. You weren''t cutting class, were you?"'
-					'The sarcastic tone leaves little doubt that he already knows the answer, but maybe you can still bullshit your way out of this. "Uh,yes, I mean, no. I mean... Yes, I have a class, but I wasn''t cutting. I was just running late, I had some stuff to do and I," you trail off lamely. You can tell he isn''t buying it, not even a part of it.'
+					'"Well, you see, I-" you stammer, but he interrupts you before you can finish. "I know you have class this period, and yet you are out here, running late in every sense of the word. You weren''t cutting class, were you?"'
+					'The sarcastic tone leaves little doubt that he already knows the answer, but maybe you can still bullshit your way out of this. "Uh, yes. I mean, no. I mean... Yes, I have a class, but I wasn''t cutting. I was just running late, I had some stuff to do and I..." you trail off lamely. You can tell he isn''t buying it, not even a part of it.'
 					*nl
-					'"Be that as it may, that is no excuse. Now get your butt to the Principal''s office. I will let her know you are on your way." With that, he points in the direction of her office, his stare extinguishing any hope of avoiding this. You can feel his eyes on your back until you are turning the corner before he returns to his classroom. With a sigh and no choice, you head to the Principal''s office.'
+					'"Be that as it may, that is no excuse. Now get to the Principal''s office. I will let her know you are on your way." With that, he points in the direction of her office, his stare extinguishing any hope of avoiding this. You can feel his eyes on your back until you are turning the corner before he returns to his classroom. With a sigh and no choice, you head to the Principal''s office.'
 					act 'Go to Principal''s Office':demerit += 10 & gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				else
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">School Hall</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/building/gschool_hall02.jpg"></center>'
-					'Afraid of what they might do, you run out of the stall, and straight out of the bathroom - you are just as surprised at the fact that this worked as they must have been at you even attempting to flee. With your footsteps echoing from the walls, you can''t tell if they''re on your tail or not, so you keep running down the hall, past several class room; you don''t even really know where you''re going, you just want to put some distance between them and you. Finally you stop and lean against some of the lockers, looking back you don''t see them and it seems no one notice you running down the halls. Sighing you spend the rest of the period trying not to be spotted until your next class.'
+					'Afraid of what they might do, you run out of the stall, and straight out of the bathroom - you are just as surprised at the fact that this worked as they must have been at you even attempting to flee. With your footsteps echoing from the walls, you can''t tell if they''re on your tail or not, so you keep running down the hall, past several classrooms; you don''t even really know where you''re going, you just want to put some distance between them and you. Finally you stop and lean against some of the lockers - looking back, you don''t see them and it seems no one noticed you running down the halls. Sighing, you spend the rest of the period trying not to be spotted until your next class.'
 					act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			end
@@ -262,7 +262,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girl3':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/lena-lerabully.jpg"></center>'
 		'You step out of the stall and decide to put on your best tough-girl act: "What''s it to you if I want to cut class, huh?" All that does is get a laugh out of them, though. Lera leans in close and blows smoke in your face.'
 		*nl
-		'"Is that so, bunny? You a bad girl now? Why don''t we show you what real bad girls are like," Lena says as she steps close and grabs your arm; Lera quickly follows suit on your other side. "We''re going to have some fun with you, little bunny." Lera promises with a mean grin.'
+		'"Is that so, bunny? You a bad girl now? Why don''t we show you what real bad girls are like?" Lena says as she steps close and grabs your arm; Lera quickly follows suit on your other side. "We''re going to have some fun with you, little bunny." Lera promises with a mean grin.'
 		act 'Submit': gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'toy bunny'
 		gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -276,15 +276,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girl3':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/angryteacher.jpg"></center>'
 					'Afraid of what they might do, you run out of the stall, and straight out of the bathroom - you are just as surprised at the fact that this worked as they must have been at you even attempting to flee. With your footsteps echoing from the walls, you can''t tell if they''re on your tail or not, so you keep running down the hall, past several class room. You think you are almost in the clear... when you hear a voice behind you. "Where do you think you are going in such a hurry, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" The adrenaline in your bloodstream seems to multiply, but the fear of being followed itching at the back of your neck is instantly replaced by cold dread filling your stomach: You''re busted. Grinding to a halt, you turn around and see a teacher glaring at you.'
 					*nl
-					'"Well, you see, I-," you stammer but he interrupts you before you can finish. "I know you have class this period, and yet you are out here, **running late** in every sense of the word. You weren''t cutting class, were you?"'
-					'The sarcastic tone leaves little doubt that he already knows the answer, but maybe you can still bullshit your way out of this. "Uh,yes, I mean, no. I mean... Yes, I have a class, but I wasn''t cutting. I was just running late, I had some stuff to do and I," you trail off lamely. You can tell he isn''t buying it, not even a part of it.'
+					'"Well, you see, I-" you stammer, but he interrupts you before you can finish. "I know you have class this period, and yet you are out here, running late in every sense of the word. You weren''t cutting class, were you?"'
+					'The sarcastic tone leaves little doubt that he already knows the answer, but maybe you can still bullshit your way out of this. "Uh, yes. I mean, no. I mean... Yes, I have a class, but I wasn''t cutting. I was just running late, I had some stuff to do and I..." you trail off lamely. You can tell he isn''t buying it, not even a part of it.'
 					*nl
-					'"Be that as it may, that is no excuse. Now get your butt to the Principal''s office. I will let her know you are on your way." With that, he points in the direction of her office, his stare extinguishing any hope of avoiding this. You can feel his eyes on your back until you are turning the corner before he returns to his classroom. With a sigh and no choice, you head to the Principal''s office.'
+					'"Be that as it may, that is no excuse. Now get to the Principal''s office. I will let her know you are on your way." With that, he points in the direction of her office, his stare extinguishing any hope of avoiding this. You can feel his eyes on your back until you are turning the corner before he returns to his classroom. With a sigh and no choice, you head to the Principal''s office.'
 					act 'Go to Principal''s Office':demerit += 10 & gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				else
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">School Hall</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/building/gschool_hall02.jpg"></center>'
-					'Afraid of what they might do, you run out of the stall, and straight out of the bathroom - you are just as surprised at the fact that this worked as they must have been at you even attempting to flee. With your footsteps echoing from the walls, you can''t tell if they''re on your tail or not, so you keep running down the hall, past several class room; you don''t even really know where you''re going, you just want to put some distance between them and you. Finally you stop and lean against some of the lockers, looking back you don''t see them and it seems no one notice you running down the halls. Sighing you spend the rest of the period trying not to be spotted until your next class.'
+					'Afraid of what they might do, you run out of the stall, and straight out of the bathroom - you are just as surprised at the fact that this worked as they must have been at you even attempting to flee. With your footsteps echoing from the walls, you can''t tell if they''re on your tail or not, so you keep running down the hall, past several classrooms; you don''t even really know where you''re going, you just want to put some distance between them and you. Finally you stop and lean against some of the lockers - looking back, you don''t see them and it seems no one noticed you running down the halls. Sighing, you spend the rest of the period trying not to be spotted until your next class.'
 					act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			end	
@@ -314,16 +314,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girl3':
 			grupvalue[4] += 3
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/nowkiss.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You step out of the stall and look the two girls up and down. You know the game they''re playing, but you can play games, too. You reach up, grab the cigarette from Lera and take a drag off it, blowing smoke in her face as you hand it back. "Maybe I''m not the one that should be scared." Lera is momentarily stunned by your brazenness while Lena watches on in curiosity and amusement.'
+			'You step out of the stall and look the two girls up and down. You know the game they''re playing, but you can play games too. You grab the cigarette from Lera and take a drag off it, blowing smoke in her face as you hand it back. "Maybe I''m not the one that should be scared." Lera is momentarily stunned by your brazenness while Lena watches on in curiosity and amusement.'
 			*nl
-			'When she recovers, Lera steps closer to you, determined to regain the upper hand. "Is that-" But you don''t give her the chance: You interrupt whatever she was going to say by grabbing her and pulling her into a long, passionate french kiss.'
-			'She stiffens at first, her hands grabbing your arms as if to push you back, but before she''s even taken hold of you, she''s molten into it and returns it as passionately as you give it. A good minute passes and Lena is starting to feel a little left out before you finally break the kiss, leaving Lera flushed and breathless. "Yeah, it is," you respond to her unfinished sentence. "Speaking of which, what are you girls up to?"'
+			'When she recovers, Lera steps closer to you, determined to regain the upper hand. "Is that-" But you don''t give her the chance: You interrupt whatever she was going to say by grabbing her and pulling her into a long, passionate French kiss.'
+			'She stiffens at first, her hands grabbing your arms as if to push you back, but before she''s even taken hold of you, she''s molten into it and returns it as passionately as you give it. A good minute passes and Lena is starting to feel a little left out before you finally break the kiss, leaving Lera flushed and breathless. "Yeah, it is." you respond to her unfinished sentence. "Speaking of which, what are you girls up to?"'
 			'Lena, looking a little turned on by the make-out session she just witnessed, offers you a cigarette. "We were just bored and looking for a little fun."'
 			*nl
-			'"Yeah, me too, but not that kind of fun... at least not this week," you meaningfully place your hand on your stomach and Lena nods in understanding while Lera licks her lips, obviously hoping for some more smooches to make up for other pleasures. Instead, you manage to steer them away from the topic entirely and the three of you are soon talking about school, the gopniks and a couple of other things. Before you know it, the class bell rings and the three of you head to your next class.'
+			'"Yeah, me too, but not that kind of fun... at least not this week." you meaningfully place your hand on your stomach and Lena nods in understanding while Lera licks her lips, obviously hoping for some more smooches to make up for other pleasures. Instead, you manage to steer them away from the topic entirely and the three of you are soon talking about school, the gopniks and a couple of other things. Before you know it, the bell rings and the three of you head to your next class.'
 			'You feel like you''ve earned a little more of their respect today.'
-			act 'Go to Class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+			act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
+	elseif grupTipe = 2:
+	  !!Lead to an event during break where Sveta is confronted by Vitek, but is defended by the other jocks?
+	    act 'Fuck off':
+		  *clr and cla
+		  npc_rel['A20'] -= 5
+		  npc_rel['A21'] -= 5
+		  grupvalue[4] -= 3
+		  '<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
+		  '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/image_needed.png"></center>'
+		  'You step out of the stall and look the two girls up and down. You know the game they''re playing, and you want nothing to do with it. You grab the cigarette from Lera and throw it into the toilet. "You need to get out of my face and fuck off... bitch." you snarl as you get up in Lera''s face and forcefully shove her against the stall, causing her to fall to the floor. Lena''s enraged snarl gives her away and you turn to dodge her incoming right hook before kicking her hard in the stomach, causing her to crumple to the floor next to Lera.'
+		  'The two girls, stunned by your actions, struggle pathetically to get to their feet as you open the door and walk out, Lena''s threat bellowing out behind you. "VITEK WILL HEAR ABOUT THIS, YOU FUCKING CUNT!!!" You ignore the threat and head on your way as the bell rings.'
+		  'It''s obvious that you''ve lost respect with them and their clique, but you don''t care.'
+		  act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+	    end	
 	end
 end
 
@@ -334,9 +348,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toy bunny':
 	gs 'pain', 1, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/lena-leraown.jpg"></center>'
-	'The first thing they do is unbutton your shirt and pull it off - you protest meekly, but they simply ignore you. Lena wraps one hand around your head and holds it steady while leaning in and licking the side of your face. Meanwhile, her other hand reaches into your shirt and she pulls down one side of your bra, exposing your breast which she quickly starts to kneed and squeeze.'
+	'The first thing they do is unbutton your shirt and pull it off - you protest meekly, but they simply ignore you. Lena wraps one hand around your head and holds it steady while leaning in and licking the side of your face. Meanwhile, her other hand pulls down one side of your bra, exposing your breast, which she quickly starts to kneed and squeeze.'
 	*nl
-	'Lera squats down next to you and pulls your skirt and panties down to your ankles and makes you step out of them before tossing them across the room. Lena unclasps your bra, letting it fall to the floor as she starts kissing you, her tongue darting into your mouth and her hands roaming your body, making you acutely aware of the fact that you are now completely naked except for your shoes and socks. Suddenly, Lera gives your ass a smack so hard it makes you yelp and even jump a little; that seems to be exactly the reaction they were looking for, because she and Lena giggle and proceed to spank you.'
+	'Lera squats down next to you and pulls your skirt and panties down to your ankles and makes you step out of them before tossing them across the room. Lena unclasps your bra, letting it fall to the floor as she starts kissing you, her tongue darting into your mouth and her hands roaming your body, making you acutely aware of the fact that you are now almost completely naked. Suddenly, Lera gives your ass a smack so hard it makes you yelp and even jump a little; that seems to be exactly the reaction they were looking for, because she and Lena giggle and proceed to spank you.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'lesbian', 'group', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'You got a pretty mouth':
@@ -344,10 +358,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toy bunny':
 		gs 'pain', 2, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/lena-leranipple.jpg"></center>'
-		'Lena keeps making out with you while her hands fondle your breasts. Meanwhile, Lera stands up and continues to smack your ass until it''s stinging so much you''re sure it must be cherry red by now. She finally stops and takes off her top and bra, exposing her perky tits, and says to Lena, "Okay, now it''s my turn with her pretty mouth".'
+		'Lena keeps making out with you while her hands fondle your breasts. Meanwhile, Lera stands up and continues to smack your ass until it''s stinging so much you''re sure it must be cherry red by now. She finally stops and takes off her top and bra, exposing her perky tits. "Okay, now it''s my turn with her pretty mouth."'
 		*nl
-		'Lena breaks her kiss with you and forcefully turns you to face Lera, grabbing you by your arms to hold you in place, and Lera grabs your head and pulls you down to her bust. "Suck my nipple, bunny. Do a good job and maybe we won''t hurt you... too much," she promises with an amused tone, causing Lena to chuckle behind you.'
-		'Not knowing what else to do and afraid of angering them, you go to work on her nipple, kissing, licking, sucking on it, your efforts guided by Lera''s soft moans as she obviously enjoys it. After a while, she shifts her body so you can give the other breast a similar treatment.'
+		'Lena breaks her kiss with you and forcefully turns you to face Lera, grabbing you by your arms to hold you in place as Lera grabs your head and pulls you down to her bust. "Suck my nipple, bunny. Do a good job and maybe we won''t hurt you... too much." she promises with an amused tone, causing Lena to chuckle behind you.'
+		'Not knowing what else to do and afraid of angering them, you go to work on her nipple, kissing, licking and sucking on it, your efforts guided by Lera''s soft moans as she obviously enjoys it. After a while, she shifts her body so you can give the other breast a similar treatment.'
 		*nl
 		'As they make you suck on Lera''s tits, you notice Lera pulling down her panties, letting them slide off her legs and down around her ankles where she quickly kicks them aside.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'lesbian', 'group', 'sub'
@@ -356,11 +370,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toy bunny':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/lena-leraeat.jpg"></center>'
-			'Looking over your head, Lera meets Lena''s eyes. "Her mouth isn''t too bad, but I wanna know how good she is with her tongue." By unspoken agreement, Lena lets go of your arms and puts her hands around your neck, first pulling you away from Lera, then forcing you down on your knees while Lera pulls up her skirt and spreads her legs, exposing her sex.'
+			'Looking over your head, Lera meets Lena''s eyes. "Her mouth isn''t too bad, but I want to know how good she is with her tongue." By unspoken agreement, Lena lets go of your arms and puts her hands around your neck, first pulling you away from Lera, then forcing you down on your knees while Lera pulls up her skirt and spreads her legs, exposing her pussy.'
 			*nl
-			'Lena forces your face between Lera''s legs, practically rubbing your nose against Lera''s pussy as she does. Without even thinking about resisting, you open your mouth and start licking and sucking on Lera''s clit. The moans that escaped her when you played with her nipples were nothing compared to the loud ones you''re hearing now, and even though you''re not doing this entirely voluntarily, it''s turning you on a little. Eventually, you feel bold enough to slip your tongue inside of her soaking wet pussy and fucking her with your mouth.'
+			'Lena forces your face between Lera''s legs, practically rubbing your nose against Lera''s pussy as she does. Without even thinking about resisting, you open your mouth and start licking and sucking on Lera''s clit. The moans that escaped her when you played with her nipples were nothing compared to the loud ones you''re hearing now, and even though you''re not doing this entirely voluntarily, it''s turning you on a little. Eventually, you feel bold enough to slip your tongue inside of her soaking wet pussy and start tongue fucking her.'
 			*nl
-			'Lera''s breathing faster now and she starts grinding her pussy against your face, her movements becoming more and more erractic. "Oh my god, bunny, you''re so good at this! You must have had a lot of practice. Are you a lesbian or something?!" With your mouth full of her pussy, you obviously can''t answer her. At this point, Lena lets go of your neck while Lera runs her fingers through your hair and grabs it tightly, using you for leverage as she rubs against you.'
+			'Lera''s breathing faster now and she starts grinding her pussy against your face, her movements becoming more and more erractic. "Oh my god bunny, you''re so good at this! You must have had a lot of practice. Are you a lesbian or something?!" With your mouth full of her pussy, you obviously can''t answer her. At this point, Lena lets go of your neck while Lera runs her fingers through your hair and grabs it tightly, using you for leverage as she rubs against you.'
 			*nl
 			'A few moments later, you hear Lena: "Lera, get over here. I need your tongue." Lera releases you, your face wet with her juices. You turn your head to see Lena naked down on all fours, her legs spread, presenting herself to her friend and you.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'lesbian', 'group', 'sub'
@@ -369,7 +383,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toy bunny':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/lena-leratrain.jpg"></center>'
-				'Lera wastes no time: She grabs you by your hair, drags you closer to Lena and forces you to lay down on your back, then straddles your face, putting her pussy right over your mouth. The order is clear, even without her command: "Finish me off."'
+				'Lera wastes no time: She grabs you by your hair, drags you closer to Lena and forces you to lie down on your back, then straddles your face, putting her pussy right over your mouth. The order is clear, even without her command: "Finish me off."'
 				*nl
 				'Without hesitation, you continue where you left off. When you glance up, you see that Lera is licking Lena''s pussy from behind. She seems to really know what she is doing and turns Lena into a moaning mess in no time by alternating between licking Lena''s pussy and her asshole, tongue-fucking one, then the other, exploring the girl''s orifices with gusto. You can''t help but smirk when you understand that Lera is Lena''s bitch, but then you realize that this makes you Lera''s bitch and thus the bottom bitch in this trio.'
 				*nl
@@ -389,9 +403,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toy bunny':
 					if grupTipe ! 4:
 						'With your face covered in Lera''s liquids, you pant, struggling to catch your breath. The two girls get up, but Lena forces Lera to squat down next to her again and gives you an imperious look. "Come here and lick my juices off Lera''s face." You get up and do as you''re told, licking Lera''s face clean. Once you''re done, Lera stands up once more, and both girls spread their legs, their pussies level with your kneeling self.'
 						*nl
-						'"What are you waiting for, an invitation? Clean our pussies up, right now," Lena orders you. Once again, you follow her instruction and bathe their cunts with your tongue until they have a spit shine.'
+						'"What are you waiting for, an invitation? Clean our pussies up, right now!" Lena orders you. Once again, you follow her instruction and bathe their cunts with your tongue until they have a spit shine.'
 						*nl
-						'Once you have them both clean, the two girls squat down next to you and force you to sit back on your heels. Lena leans in close, uncomfortably close, and suddenly grabs you by your throat, her voice a menacing whisper: "You''re a good little bitch - **our** little bitch. And as long as you keep your mouth shut about this, we won''t have to punish you. But if I hear about this though, we will find you, call every guy we know and let them fuck you senseless - hell, we could probably even make money with that. And once we were done with you, everyone would think that Sonia was just a tease next to you. You see what I''m getting at, bitch?" You meekly nod your head.'
+						'Once you have them both clean, the two girls squat down next to you and force you to sit back on your heels. Lena leans in close, uncomfortably close, and suddenly grabs you by your throat, her voice a menacing whisper: "You''re a good little bitch - <i>our</i> little bitch. And as long as you keep your mouth shut about this, we won''t have to punish you. But if I hear about this though, we will find you, call every guy we know and let them fuck you senseless - hell, we could probably even make money with that. And once we were done with you, everyone would think that Sonia was just a tease next to you. You see what I''m getting at, bitch?" You meekly nod your head.'
 						*nl
 						'"Good, don''t you forget it. Now, be a good little bitch and stay like that until we leave." With that, they both stand up and seemingly forget about your existence: They talk about a variety of things, smoke and put their clothes in order while you sit between them, naked, until the class bell rings. When they finally leave, you get up and frantically collect your clothes, just barely making it into one of the stalls before other girls come in. With your heart beating like crazy after this close call, you get dressed, take a minute to wipe the girl cum off your face, and then head to your next class. Maybe classes aren''t so bad after all...'
 						act 'Go to Class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -402,8 +416,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toy bunny':
 						*nl
 						'Once you have them both clean, the two girls squat down next to you and force you to sit back on your heels. Lena leans in close, uncomfortably close, and suddenly grabs you by your throat, her voice a menacing whisper: "You''re a good little bitch - **our** little bitch. And as long as you know your place, we will all get along great... won''t we?" You meekly nod your head.'
 						*nl
-						'"Good bunny. Now be a good little bitch and stay like that until I tell you otherwise." You want to nod yes but Lena blindsides you with a long, passionate kiss before they both stand up. For all intents an purposes, they forget about your existence, because they start talking about a variety of things, smoke and put their clothes in order. Just when you think that the bell''s gonna ring any minute now, Lena gives you a gracious smile. "You know, you''ve been a good little bunny today. Go ahead, get dressed." Not only do they help you gather your clothes from the four corners of the bathroom but they chat with you, treating you as an equal now. Lera even helps you clean your face. Once the bell rings, the three of you leave together and head to the next class.'
-						act 'Go to Class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+						'"Good bunny. Now be a good little bitch and stay like that until I tell you otherwise." You want to nod, but Lena blindsides you with a long, passionate kiss before they both stand up. They seemingly forget about your existence since they get dressed and start smoking while they chat. Just when you think that the bell is going to ring, Lena gives you a gracious smile. "You know, you''ve been a good little bunny today. Go ahead, get dressed." Not only do they help you gather your clothes from the four corners of the bathroom but they also chat with you, treating you as an equal. Lera even helps you clean your face. Once the bell rings, the three of you leave together and head to the next class.'
+						act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -440,9 +454,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'company1':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/voyvag.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'After a couple of minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. Soft murmured voices echo in the room, one male, the other female; you can''t quite make out what they are saying. Then there is some rustling of clothes, shortly followed by female moans. You creep up to the stall door, open it just a tiny bit, just as far as you dare without drawing attention, and peek outside.'
+	'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. Soft murmured voices echo in the room, one male, the other female; you can''t quite make out what they are saying. Then there is some rustling of clothes, shortly followed by female moans. You creep up to the stall door, open it just a tiny bit, just as far as you dare without drawing attention, and peek outside.'
 	*nl
-	'The couple has their backs to you but you can see that her skirt is flipped up and his pants down - you can''t tell if the guy is a student or a teacher, at first then you catch a glimpse of <<$rand_boy>>''s face in the mirror. He has <<$rand_girl>> up against the sinks, partially bent over them, and he is fucking her from behind. Her face is nearly touching the mirror as he pounds her pussy doggystyle and she seems to be loving every second of it!'
+	'The couple has their backs turned to you, but you can see that her skirt is flipped up and his pants are pulled down - you can''t tell if the guy is a student or a teacher at first, then you catch a glimpse of <<$rand_boy>>''s face in the mirror. He has <<$rand_girl>> up against the sinks, partially bent over them, and he is fucking her from behind. Her face is nearly touching the mirror as he pounds her pussy doggystyle and she seems to be loving every second of it.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'Afraid you might get caught, you close the door and move back to sit on the toilet.'
@@ -451,7 +465,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'company1':
 		pcs_horny += 15
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her "harder!". A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close, and all is quiet once more.'
+		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her harder. A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close, and all is quiet once more.'
 		if school_bunk = 0:
 			act 'Continue playing on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 		else
@@ -463,16 +477,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'company1':
 		if pcs_inhib < 40:inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/masturbate'+ rand(1,2) +'.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'Listening to <<$rand_girl>> getting her ass violated, the constant slapping sounds of flesh and her moans of pleasure is exciting - too exciting for you. You know you shouldn''t, you know it''s risky, but you just can''t resist: You pull your panties off, hike up your skirt and spread your legs. Your hands slide down, down your thigh, then back up, up towards your crotch. Your pussy lips are already swollen and starting to get wet, and your clit stands out as if to make it easier for you to find it.'
+		'Listening to <<$rand_girl>> getting her pussy violated, the constant slapping sounds of flesh and her moans of pleasure is exciting - too exciting for you. You know you shouldn''t, you know it''s risky, but you just can''t resist: You pull your panties off, hike up your skirt and spread your legs. Your hand slides down your thigh, then back up towards your crotch. Your pussy lips are already swollen and starting to get wet, and your clit stands out as if to make it easier for you to find it.'
 		*nl
-		'You rub your sensitive little nub carefully, to ease yourself into the pleasure; if you don''t stay in control, you''re going to make sounds and you don''t want them to notice you. After teasing yourself for a bit, you sink two of your fingers into your wet hole, gasping soundlessly, and mimic the fuck <<$rand_boy>> is giving a girl you don''t know. You add your other hand to the mix, rubbing your clit while you''re finger fucking yourself, faster and faster as they get louder and louder, and even play with your asshole a little bit, encouraged by the girl''s audible pleasure.'
+		'You rub your sensitive little nub carefully to ease yourself into the pleasure; if you don''t stay in control, you''re going to make sounds and you don''t want them to notice you. After teasing yourself for a bit, you sink two of your fingers into your wet hole, gasping soundlessly, and mimic the fuck <<$rand_boy>> is giving a girl you don''t know. You add your other hand to the mix, rubbing your clit while you''re finger fucking yourself, faster and faster as they get louder and louder, and even play with your asshole a little bit, encouraged by the girl''s audible pleasure.'
 		$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-		$orgasm_txt = 'You have to bite your lip to keep from crying out as an orgasm shoots through your body and causes you to convulse on the toilet seat like you are having a seizure.'
+		$orgasm_txt = 'You have to bite your lip to keep from crying out as an orgasm shoots through your body and causes you to convulse on the toilet seat.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'mast', 10
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
-		'By the sound of it, you came in perfect unison with her and only a few moments later, you can hear him grunt as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and everything is quiet once more.'
-		act 'Go to Class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+		'By the sound of it, you came in perfect unison with her and only a few moments later, you can hear him grunt as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close, and everything is quiet once more.'
+		act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -481,9 +495,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'company2':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/voyanal.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'After a couple of minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. Soft murmured voices echo in the room, one male, the other female; you can''t quite make out what they are saying. Then there is some rustling of clothes, shortly followed by female moans. You creep up to the stall door, open it just a tiny bit, just as far as you dare without drawing attention, and peek outside.'
+	'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. Soft murmured voices echo in the room, one male, the other female; you can''t quite make out what they are saying. Then there is some rustling of clothes, shortly followed by female moans. You creep up to the stall door, open it just a tiny bit, just as far as you dare without drawing attention, and peek outside.'
 	*nl
-	'The couple has their backs to you but you can see that her skirt is flipped up and his pants down - you can''t tell if the guy is a student or a teacher but after a bit you catch site of <<$rand_boy>>''s face, as he has <<$rand_girl>> bent over near the bathroom window and she is looking back at him and in your direction - or at least she would be, if she didn''t have her eyes closed. You can tell that he is fucking her ass and she seems to be loving it, getting her tight little ass pounded right here in a school bathroom! Her soft moans of pleasure echo in the room and the sight is entrancing... but if she opened her eyes right now, you are pretty sure she''d see you!'
+	'The couple has their backs turned to you, but you can see that her skirt is flipped up and his pants are pulled down - you can''t tell if the guy is a student or a teacher, but you soon catch sight of <<$rand_boy>>''s face. He has <<$rand_girl>> bent over near the bathroom window and she is looking back at him and in your direction - or at least she would be if she didn''t have her eyes closed. You can tell that he is fucking her ass and she seems to be loving it. Her soft moans of pleasure echo in the room and the sight is entrancing, but if she opened her eyes right now, you are pretty sure she''d see you.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'Afraid you might get caught, you close the door and move back to sit on the toilet.'
@@ -492,7 +506,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'company2':
 		pcs_horny += 15
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her ass "harder!". A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
+		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her ass harder. A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close, and all is quiet once more.'
 		if school_bunk = 0:
 			act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 		else
@@ -508,16 +522,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'company2':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/masturbate'+ rand(1,2) +'.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'Listening to <<$rand_girl>> getting her ass violated, the constant slapping sounds of flesh and her moans of pleasure is exciting - too exciting for you. You know you shouldn''t, you know it''s risky, but you just can''t resist: You pull your panties off, hike up your skirt and spread you legs. Your hands slides down, down your thigh, then back up, up towards your crotch. Your pussy lips are already swollen and starting to get wet, and your clit stands out as if to make it easier for you to find it.'
+		'Listening to <<$rand_girl>> getting her ass violated, the constant slapping sounds of flesh and her moans of pleasure is exciting - too exciting for you. You know you shouldn''t, you know it''s risky, but you just can''t resist: You pull your panties off, hike up your skirt and spread you legs. Your hand slides down your thigh, then back up towards your crotch. Your pussy lips are already swollen and starting to get wet, and your clit stands out as if to make it easier for you to find it.'
 		*nl		
-		'You rub your sensitive little nub carefully, to ease yourself into the pleasure; if you don''t stay in control, you''re going to make sounds and you don''t want them to notice you. After teasing yourself for a bit, you sink two of your fingers into your wet hole, gasping soundlessly, and mimic the fuck <<$rand_boy>> is giving <<$rand_girl>>. You add your other hand to the mix, rubbing your clit while you''re fingerfucking yourself, faster and faster as they get louder and louder, and even play with your asshole a little bit, encouraged by the girl''s audible pleasure.'
+		'You rub your sensitive little nub carefully to ease yourself into the pleasure; if you don''t stay in control, you''re going to make sounds and you don''t want them to notice you. After teasing yourself for a bit, you sink two of your fingers into your wet hole, gasping soundlessly, and mimic the fuck <<$rand_boy>> is giving <<$rand_girl>>. You add your other hand to the mix, rubbing your clit while you''re fingerfucking yourself, faster and faster as they get louder and louder, and even play with your asshole a little bit, encouraged by the girl''s audible pleasure.'
 		$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-		$orgasm_txt = 'You have to bite your lip to keep from crying out as an orgasm shoots through your body and causes you to convulse on the toilet seats like you are having a seizure.'
+		$orgasm_txt = 'You have to bite your lip to keep from crying out as an orgasm shoots through your body and causes you to convulse on the toilet seat.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'mast', 10
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		'By the sound of it, you came in perfect unison with her and only a few moments later, you can hear him grunt as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
-		act 'Go to Class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+		act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -529,14 +543,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'company3':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boys bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/couplesuck.jpg"></center>'
-	'After a couple of minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. Soft murmured voices echo in the room, one male, the other female; you can''t quite make out what they are saying. Then there is some rustling of clothes, shortly followed by female moans. You creep up to the stall door, open it just a tiny bit, just as far as you dare without drawing attention, and peek outside.'
+	'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. Soft murmured voices echo in the room, one male, the other female; you can''t quite make out what they are saying. Then there is some rustling of clothes, shortly followed by female moans. You creep up to the stall door, open it just a tiny bit, just as far as you dare without drawing attention, and peek outside.'
 	*nl
-	'You see Arkadi, with his pants around his ankles, while Anushka is squatting down in front of him and sucking his dick. You watch for a moment and you''d like to watch even longer, but Arkadi keeps looking around, and in your direction! You duck back into the stall before you get spotted... and feel yourself getting very aroused from watching them, listening to them, even just knowing what they are doing. The sucking sounds stop and are quickly replaced by soft female moans of pleasure. Before your inner eye, you can see him fucking her over the sink, or perhaps against the wall? And is he fucking her pussy or her ass?'
+	'You see Arkadi with his pants around his ankles, Anushka squatting in front of him and sucking his dick. You watch for a moment and you''d like to watch even longer, but Arkadi keeps looking around, and in your direction. You duck back into the stall before you get spotted... and feel yourself getting very aroused from watching them, listening to them, even just knowing what they are doing. The sucking sounds soon stop and are quickly replaced by soft female moans of pleasure.'
 	if pcs_horny < 70:
 		act 'Wait':
 			cla & *nl
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
-			'You banish these thoughts from your mind - with great effort - and decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her ass "harder!". A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
+			'You banish these thoughts from your mind - with great effort - and decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her harder. A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close, and all is quiet once more.'
 			if school_bunk = 0:
 				act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 			else
@@ -551,7 +565,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'company3':
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You banish these thoughts from your mind - with great effort - and decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her ass "harder!". A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
+				'You banish these thoughts from your mind - with great effort - and decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her ass harder. A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close, and all is quiet once more.'
 				if school_bunk = 0:
 					act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 				else
@@ -566,15 +580,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'company3':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boys bathroom</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/masturbate'+ rand(1,2) +'.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'Listening to <<$rand_girl>> getting pounded, the constant slapping sounds of flesh and her moans of pleasure is exciting - too exciting for you. You know you shouldn''t, you know it''s risky, but you just can''t resist: You pull your panties off, hike up your skirt and spread you legs. Your hands slides down, down your thigh, then back up, up towards your crotch. Your pussy lips are already swollen and starting to get wet, and your clit stands out as if to make it easier for you to find it.' 
+		'Listening to Anushka getting pounded, the constant slapping sounds of flesh and her moans of pleasure is exciting - too exciting for you. You know you shouldn''t, you know it''s risky, but you just can''t resist: You pull your panties off, hike up your skirt and spread you legs. Your hand slides down your thigh, then back up towards your crotch. Your pussy lips are already swollen and starting to get wet, and your clit stands out as if to make it easier for you to find it.' 
 		*nl
-		'You rub your sensitive little nub carefully, to ease yourself into the pleasure; if you don''t stay in control, you''re going to make sounds and you don''t want them to notice you. After teasing yourself for a bit, you sink two of your fingers into your wet hole, gasping soundlessly, and mimic the fuck the guy is giving <<$rand_girl>>. You add your other hand to the mix, rubbing your clit while you''re fingerfucking yourself, faster and faster as they get louder and louder.'
-		$orgasm_txt = 'You have to bite your lip to keep from crying out as an orgasm shoots through your body and causes you to convulse on the toilet seats like you are having a seizure.'
+		'You rub your sensitive little nub carefully to ease yourself into the pleasure; if you don''t stay in control, you''re going to make sounds and you don''t want them to notice you. After teasing yourself for a bit, you sink two of your fingers into your wet hole, gasping soundlessly, and mimic the fuck Arkadi is gicing Anushka. You add your other hand to the mix, rubbing your clit while you''re fingerfucking yourself, faster and faster as they get louder and louder.'
+		$orgasm_txt = 'You have to bite your lip to keep from crying out as an orgasm shoots through your body and causes you to convulse on the toilet seat.'
 		$orgasm_or = 'custom'
 		gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 20
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
-		'By the sound of it, you came in perfect unison with her and only a few moments later, you can hear him grunt as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
+		'By the sound of it, you came in perfect unison with her and only a few moments later, you can hear him grunt as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close, and all is quiet once more.'
 		if school_bunk = 0:
 			act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 		else
@@ -592,16 +606,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'company4':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/teachers1.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'After a couple of minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. Soft murmured voices echo in the room, one male, the other female; you can''t quite make out what they are saying. Then there is some rustling of clothes, shortly followed by female moans. You creep up to the stall door, open it just a tiny bit, just as far as you dare without drawing attention, and peek outside.'
+	'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. Soft murmured voices echo in the room, one male, the other female; you can''t quite make out what they are saying. Then there is some rustling of clothes, shortly followed by female moans. You creep up to the stall door, open it just a tiny bit, just as far as you dare without drawing attention, and peek outside.'
 	*nl
-	'You see Vice Principal Kuznetsov standing near the sinks with his pants around his ankles while Miss Orlov down on her knees, with her top pulled down. She has his cock in her mouth, sucking it for all she is worth. They both seem to be greatly enjoying themselves. You know you should really stop watching incase you get caught but how often do you get to see two of your teachers go at it?'
+	'You see Mr. Kuznetsov standing near the sinks with his pants around his ankles while Miss Orlov is down on her knees with her top pulled down. She has his cock in her mouth, sucking it for all she is worth. They both seem to be greatly enjoying themselves. You know you should stop watching in case you get caught, but how often do you get to see two of your teachers go at it?'
 	act 'Watch':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/teachers2.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You decide to keep watching them, she sucks his cock for awhile as you watch. Neither seem to be aware of your presence as they are engrossed in each other. Then he pulls her up standing and turns her around, he pushes her forward. Bending her over the sinks, as she pulls up her skirt, he pulls down her panties. With her panties around her ankles he moves up and starts fucking her, at first he is slow but passionate. As she begins to moan louder he picks up his pace and before long he is pounding her like crazy.'
+		'You decide to keep watching them. She sucks his cock for a while and neither seem to be aware of your presence as they are too engrossed in each other. Then he pulls her up, turns her around and pushes her forward. Bending her over the sinks, she pulls up her skirt while he pulls down her panties. He moves up and starts fucking her, slow but passionate at first but as she begins to moan louder, he picks up his pace and before long, he is pounding her like crazy.'
 		*nl
-		'It doesn''t take much longer until Miss Orlov is having a screaming orgasm, Mr. Kuznetsov, is forced to put his hand over her mouth as she orgasms while he fucks her to muffle her cries of ecstasy. Some time after she finishes, he pulls out of her. She turns around and gets back on her knees and starts sucking his cock again. Moment latter he starts grunting obviously cumming in her mouth. Not a single drop escapes her mouth, she milks his cock of ever last drop before removing it from her mouth.'
+		'It doesn''t take much longer until Miss Orlov is having a screaming orgasm. Mr. Kuznetsov is forced to put his hand over her mouth as she orgasms to muffle her cries of ecstasy. Some time after she finishes, he pulls out of her. She turns around and gets back on her knees and starts sucking his cock again. Moments later he starts grunting, obviously cumming in her mouth. Not a single drop escapes her mouth, she milks his cock of every last drop before removing it from her mouth.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10
 		gs 'stat'
 		'They grin at each other and then kiss, after that they get dressed and leave the bathroom.'
@@ -618,7 +632,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'company4':
 		pcs_horny += 15
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her "harder!". A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close, and all is quiet once more.'
+		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her harder. A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close, and all is quiet once more.'
 		if school_bunk = 0:
 			act 'Continue playing on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 		else
@@ -630,16 +644,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'company4':
 		if pcs_inhib < 40:inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/masturbate'+ rand(1,2) +'.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'Listening to <<$rand_girl>> getting pounded, the constant slapping sounds of flesh and her moans of pleasure is exciting - too exciting for you. You know you shouldn''t, you know it''s risky, but you just can''t resist: You pull your panties off, hike up your skirt and spread you legs. Your hands slides down, down your thigh, then back up, up towards your crotch. Your pussy lips are already swollen and starting to get wet, and your clit stands out as if to make it easier for you to find it.' 
+		'Listening to <<$rand_girl>> getting pounded, the constant slapping sounds of flesh and her moans of pleasure is exciting - too exciting for you. You know you shouldn''t, you know it''s risky, but you just can''t resist: You pull your panties off, hike up your skirt and spread you legs. Your hands slide down your thigh, then back up towards your crotch. Your pussy lips are already swollen and starting to get wet, and your clit stands out as if to make it easier for you to find it.' 
 		*nl
-		'You rub your sensitive little nub carefully, to ease yourself into the pleasure; if you don''t stay in control, you''re going to make sounds and you don''t want them to notice you. After teasing yourself for a bit, you sink two of your fingers into your wet hole, gasping soundlessly, and mimic the fuck <<$rand_boy>> is giving <<$rand_girl>>. You add your other hand to the mix, rubbing your clit while you''re fingerfucking yourself, faster and faster as they get louder and louder.'
-		$orgasm_txt = ' You have to bite your lip to keep from crying out as an orgasm shoots through your body and causes you to convulse on the toilet seats like you are having a seizure.'
+		'You rub your sensitive little nub carefully to ease yourself into the pleasure; if you don''t stay in control, you''re going to make sounds and you don''t want them to notice you. After teasing yourself for a bit, you sink two of your fingers into your wet hole, gasping soundlessly, and mimic the fuck <<$rand_boy>> is giving <<$rand_girl>>. You add your other hand to the mix, rubbing your clit while you''re fingerfucking yourself, faster and faster as they get louder and louder.'
+		$orgasm_txt = ' You have to bite your lip to keep from crying out as an orgasm shoots through your body and causes you to convulse on the toilet seat.'
 		$orgasm_or = 'custom'
 		gs 'arousal', 'mast', 10
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
-		'By the sound of it, you came in perfect unison with her and only a few moments later, you can hear him grunt as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
-		act 'Go to Class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+		'By the sound of it, you came in perfect unison with her and only a few moments later, you can hear him grunt as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close, and all is quiet once more.'
+		act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -668,14 +682,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught1':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/raven/sex/school/caughtf.jpg"></center>'
-	'After a couple of minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You peek out and see one of your teachers, Ms. Braakman, at the mirror. You duck back into the stall, close the door as quietly as you can and sit down on the toilet, your heart beating like crazy, hoping he didn''t notice you. You hear the click of her heels coming closer, closer... and stop, right outside your stall door.' 
+	'After a couple of minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You peek out and see Ms. Braakman at the mirror. You duck back into the stall, close the door as quietly as you can and sit down on the toilet, your heart beating like crazy, hoping she didn''t notice you. You hear the click of her heels coming closer, closer... and stop, right outside your stall door.' 
 	*nl
-	'"I saw you in the mirror, young lady", she says sternly as she pushes the door open. "What do you think you are doing in the bathroom in the middle of the period, anyways? Skipping class?"'
-	if school_bunk = 1:'Her nostrils flare and her eyes narrow when she finds the source of the acrid smoke: The cigarette the shock over her appearance knocked out of your hand, leaving it to smolder on the floor. "And smoking in school, I see. I really thought you were smarter than that, <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
+	'"I saw you in the mirror, young lady." she says sternly as she pushes the door open. "What do you think you''re doing in the bathroom in the middle of the period? Skipping class?"'
+	if school_bunk = 1:'Her nostrils flare and her eyes narrow when she finds the source of the acrid smoke: The cigarette - the shock over her appearance knocked out of your hand, leaving it to smolder on the floor. "And smoking in school, I see. I really thought you were smarter than that, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
 	*nl
-	'Ms. Braakman shakes her head, looking more disappointed than angry to you. "Well, come on, young lady. Get your butt out of here and down to the principal''s office." She points in the direction of the bathroom door.'
-	'You don''t know what to say, if or how you could get out of this mess. Of course she knows you are supposed to be in class, so there''s no point in trying to lie to her about that; but maybe you can convince him to let you off with a warning or something.'
-	act 'Go to Principal''s Office':
+	'Ms. Braakman shakes her head, looking more disappointed than angry at you. "Well, come on young lady. Get out of here and down to the principal''s office." She points in the direction of the bathroom door.'
+	'You don''t know what to say, if or how you could get out of this mess. Of course she knows you are supposed to be in class, so there''s no point in trying to lie to her about that; but maybe you can convince him to let you off with a warning or something?'
+	act 'Go to the principal''s office':
 		demerit += 10
 		if school_bunk = 1:demerit += 5
 		gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
@@ -685,10 +699,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught1':
 		gs 'gschool_events', 'sweet'
 		if rand(1,100) < Sweet_talk + 25:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/eartwist.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hang your head and feign shame as best you can. "I know, and I''m sorry, Ms. Braakman, but I was feeling stressed out and I just needed a break, just a few minutes alone. I know I shouldn''t have but I couldn''t help it." You give her a pleading look. "Please, please don''t report me. I promise I won''t do it again."'
-			'Ms. Braakman looks at you in silence. For a moment, you think you''ve convinced her... but then you see something change in her eyes: She wasn''t angry before, but she definitely is now. "You **dare** lie to my face like that? Do you really think I am dumb enough to fall for that?" She doesn''t give you a chance to reply but reaches out, grabs you by the arm and, with surprising strength, pulls you out of the stall, then leads you out of the bathroom. "I''m taking you to the principal''s office. And you should pray that she''s feeling more lenient than I do right now."' 
+			'You hang your head and feign shame as best you can. "I know, and I''m sorry Ms. Braakman. I was feeling stressed out and I just needed a break, just a few minutes alone. I know I shouldn''t have, but I couldn''t help it." You give her a pleading look. "Please, please don''t report me. I promise I won''t do it again."'
+			'Ms. Braakman looks at you in silence. For a moment, you think you''ve convinced her, but then you see something change in her eyes: She wasn''t angry before, but she definitely is now. "You <i>dare</i> lie to my face like that? Do you really think I''m dumb enough to fall for that?" She doesn''t give you a chance to reply but reaches out, grabs you by the arm and, with surprising strength, pulls you out of the stall before leading you out of the bathroom. "I''m taking you to the principal''s office. And you should pray that she''s feeling more lenient than I do right now."' 
 			*nl
-			'True to her word, she drags you around school by your arm, furiously muttering under her breath, until you are standing in front of the principal''s office.'
+			'True to her word, she drags you around the school by your arm, furiously muttering under her breath, until you are standing in front of the principal''s office.'
 			act 'Go to Principal''s Office':
 				demerit += 10
 				if school_bunk = 1:demerit += 5
@@ -696,8 +710,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught1':
 			end
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sweettalk'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hang your head and feign shame as best you can. "I know, and I''m sorry, Ms. Braakman, but I was feeling stressed out and I just needed a break, just a few minutes alone. I know I shouldn''t have but I couldn''t help it." You give her a pleading look. "Please, please don''t report me. I promise I won''t do it again."'
-			'Ms. Braakman looks at you in silence, her expression unreadable, her eyes sharp like a predator''s, searching for dishonesty in your expression. You''re starting to get nervous, fearing that she might look through you... when you hear her sigh. Is that pity you see? "Alright, I''ll let you off with a warning and you take some time to collect yourself... but no more cutting class, you hear me?" You nod yes. She gives you a last look, mumbling something that sounds like "my good nature be damned", and goes about her business. A few seconds later, the bathroom is quiet again.'
+			'You hang your head and feign shame as best you can. "I know, and I''m sorry Ms. Braakman. I was feeling stressed out and I just needed a break, just a few minutes alone. I know I shouldn''t have, but I couldn''t help it." You give her a pleading look. "Please, please don''t report me. I promise I won''t do it again."'
+			'Ms. Braakman looks at you in silence, her expression unreadable, her eyes sharp like a predator''s, searching for dishonesty in your expression. You''re starting to get nervous, fearing that she might see through you... when you hear her sigh. "Alright, I''ll let you off with a warning and you take some time to collect yourself... but no more cutting class, you hear me?" You nod silently and she gives you a last look, mumbling something that sounds like "my good nature be damned", and goes about her business. A few seconds later, the bathroom is quiet again.'
 			if school_bunk = 0:
 				act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 			else
@@ -709,16 +723,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught1':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/bendover.jpg"></center>'
-		'You get up and walk past her, out of the stall, then get down on all fours. You meet her look of incomprehension with feigned innocence. "I know I''ve been a bad girl, Miss, but why does it have to be the principle? Couldn''t **you** punish me instead? Those demerits could ruin my life, and you would love a chance to teach me a lesson, wouldn''t you?" You wiggle your butt invitingly.'
+		'You get up and walk past her, out of the stall, then get down on all fours. You meet her look of incomprehension with feigned innocence. "I know I''ve been a bad girl Miss, but why does it have to be the principal? Couldn''t <i>you</i> punish me instead? Those demerits could ruin my life, and you would love a chance to teach me a lesson, wouldn''t you?" You wiggle your ass invitingly.'
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'gschool_events', 'sweet'
 			if rand(1,100) < Sweet_talk + 35:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/eartwist.jpg"></center>'
-				'Ms. Braakman looks at you in silence. For a moment, you think you''ve convinced her... but then you see something change in her eyes: She wasn''t angry before, but she definitely is now. "You **dare** trying to manipulate me like that? Do you really think I''d be base enough to fall for such juvenile attempts at seduction?" She doesn''t give you a chance to reply but reaches out, grabs you by the arm and, with surprising strength, pulls you to your feet, then leads you out of the bathroom. "I''m taking you to the principal''s office. And you should pray that she''s feeling more lenient than I do right now."' 
+				'Ms. Braakman looks at you in silence. For a moment, you think you''ve convinced her, but then you see something change in her eyes: She wasn''t angry before, but she definitely is now. "You <i>dare</i> trying to manipulate me like that? Do you really think I''d be base enough to fall for such juvenile attempts at seduction?" She doesn''t give you a chance to reply but reaches out, grabs you by the arm and, with surprising strength, pulls you to your feet before leading you out of the bathroom. "I''m taking you to the principal''s office. And you should pray that she''s feeling more lenient than I do right now."' 
 				*nl
-				'True to her word, she drags you around school by your arm, furiously muttering under her breath, until you are standing in front of the principal''s office.'
-				act 'Go to Principal''s Office':
+				'True to her word, she drags you around the school by your arm, furiously muttering under her breath, until you are standing in front of the principal''s office.'
+				act 'Go to principal''s office':
 					demerit += 10
 					if school_bunk = 1:demerit += 5
 					gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
@@ -730,9 +744,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught1':
 						gs 'pain', 2, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/raven/sex/school/caughtfspank.jpg"></center>'
-						'Ms. Braakman looks at you for a long moment. You can tell that she is seriously considering her options, can see a hardness in her eyes, a desire to punish you that seems greater than you expected. A moment later, she has made up her mind and walks over to you. "I suppose the principle doesn''t have to know about this, as long as you get properly punished." She grabs you by the hair, pulls you over to the sinks and bends you over the sinks, with your head nearly touching the mirror. "And make no mistake: I will make sure you''ll remember this lesson." She pulls your skirt up and your panties down with an ease that speaks of habit - maybe those rumors about the principal being a dominatrix were about the wrong teacher? You watch her rummage through her purse and bite your lower lip, a bit turned on by her display of dominance and experience and looking forward to a little spanking... but then your eyes go wide: The object she had been looking for is a large black wooden paddle. Suddenly, you wonder if the principal might have been the better alternative.'
+						'Ms. Braakman looks at you for a long moment. You can tell that she is seriously considering her options, can see a hardness in her eyes, a desire to punish you that seems greater than you expected. A moment later, she has made up her mind and walks over to you. "I suppose the principal doesn''t have to know about this, as long as you get properly punished." She grabs you by the hair, pulls you over to the sinks and bends you over, your head nearly touching the mirror. "And make no mistake: I will make sure you''ll remember this lesson." She pulls your skirt up and your panties down with an ease that speaks of habit - maybe those rumors about the principal being a dominatrix were about the wrong teacher? You watch her rummage through her purse and bite your lower lip, a bit turned on by her display of dominance and experience and looking forward to a little spanking... but then your eyes grow wide: The object she had been looking for is a large black wooden paddle. You suddenly wonder if the principal might have been the better alternative.'
 						*nl
-						'Before you even have a chance to protest, she brings the paddle down on your bare ass. The smack echoes in the room, as does your yelp of pain. After just one swing, your butt is already stinging like you''d sat down on a beehive, and her swings come quickly, each one bringing her full force and anger down on your cheeks. Each of them makes you jump inadvertently; you even hit your head against the mirror several times. Out of instinct, you try to shield your tender flesh from the paddle''s next blow, but Ms. Braakman quickly grabs your hands with her free one and pulls them out of the way, once again exhibiting a strength you wouldn''t expect from this slender woman.'
+						'Before you even have a chance to protest, she brings the paddle down on your bare ass. The smack echoes in the room, as does your yelp of pain. After just one swing, your ass is already stinging sharply, and her swings come quickly, each one bringing her full force and anger down on your cheeks. Each of them makes you jump inadvertently; you even hit your head against the mirror several times. Out of instinct, you try to shield your tender flesh from the paddle''s next blow, but Ms. Braakman quickly grabs your hands with her free one and pulls them out of the way, once again exhibiting a strength you wouldn''t expect from this slender woman.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'sub', 'maso'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Continue':
@@ -744,9 +758,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught1':
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/raven/sex/school/caughtfspank.jpg"></center>'
 							'If you didn''t know better, you could have sworn she was getting off on hurting you. You try your best to hold back the tears, but by the tenth smack or so, the pain has gotten so intense that nothing can stop the tears from rolling down your cheeks, followed by soft sobs.'
 							*nl
-							'The dread of the next blow seems to slow down time, turning seconds into small eternities; counting the hits doesn''t help either. Ms. Braakman always looked kinda tough, but - ''***swat***'' FUCKING HELL, THAT HURT! - you never expected her to be the kind of woman who would turn your ass into an aching mess. Finally, after a full thirty swats, she stops and releases your hands. Your knees almost give away from relief. You rub your stinging ass cheeks while Ms. Braakman puts her paddle away. She looks immensely, almost physically satisfied. "You''re going to feel this punishment for a while. When you sit down in class, or try to, you''ll remember this and you''ll think twice about cutting class again. I will give you the rest of this period to recover, but," she warns as she leaves the bathroom, "God help you if I see you in here again."'
+							'The dread of the next blow seems to slow down time, turning seconds into small eternities; counting the hits doesn''t help either. Ms. Braakman always looked kind of tough, but you never expected her to be the kind of woman who would turn your ass into an aching mess. Finally, after a full thirty swats, she stops and releases your hands. Your knees almost give away from relief. You rub your stinging ass cheeks while Ms. Braakman puts her paddle away. She looks immensely, almost physically satisfied. "You''re going to feel this punishment for a while. When you sit down in class, or try to, you''ll remember this and you''ll think twice about cutting class again. I will give you the rest of this period to recover, but-" she warns as she leaves the bathroom, "God help you if I see you in here again."'
 							*nl
-							'You shiver at that promise and spend the rest of the period rubbing your ass, trying to get it to stop stinging; by the time you realize that it''s not gonna stop anytime soon, you''ve stopped crying and can at least put on a little makeup to make yourself more presentable. Once the bell rings, you head to class; the agony your hard chair promises makes skipping class seem a lot less appealing.'
+							'You shiver at that promise and spend the rest of the period rubbing your ass, trying to get it to stop stinging; by the time you realize that it''s not going to stop anytime soon, you''ve stopped crying and can at least put on a little makeup to make yourself more presentable. Once the bell rings, you head to class; the agony your hard chair promises makes skipping class seem a lot less appealing.'
 							if school_bunk = 0:
 								act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 							else
@@ -759,23 +773,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught1':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/strap.jpg"></center>'
-						'Ms. Braakman looks at you for a long moment. You can tell that she is seriously considering her options, can see a hardness in her eyes, a desire to punish you that seems greater than you expected. A moment later, she has made up her mind and walks over to you. "I suppose the principle doesn''t have to know about this, as long as you get properly punished." She grabs you by the hair, pulls you over to the sinks and bends you over the sinks, with your head nearly touching the mirror. "And make no mistake: I will make sure you''ll remember this lesson." She pulls your skirt up and your panties down with an ease that speaks of habit, then strips off your shirt and bra too - maybe those rumors about the principal being a dominatrix were about the wrong teacher? You watch her rummage through her purse and bite your lower lip, a bit turned on by her display of dominance and experience and looking forward to a little spanking... but then your eyes go wide: The object she had been looking for is a large black strapon. It looks like it could hurt a bit, but you''re already a little wet, so maybe it won''t be so bad. Steeling yourself, you reach down between your legs and spread your pussy lips to make it easier for her to enter.'
+						'Ms. Braakman looks at you for a long moment. You can tell that she is seriously considering her options, can see a hardness in her eyes, a desire to punish you that seems greater than you expected. A moment later, she has made up her mind and walks over to you. "I suppose the principal doesn''t have to know about this, as long as you get properly punished." She grabs you by the hair, pulls you over to the sinks and bends you over, your head nearly touching the mirror. "And make no mistake: I will make sure you''ll remember this lesson." She pulls your skirt up and your panties down with an ease that speaks of habit, then strips off your shirt and bra too - maybe those rumors about the principal being a dominatrix were about the wrong teacher? You watch her rummage through her purse and bite your lower lip, a bit turned on by her display of dominance and experience and looking forward to a little spanking... but then your eyes grow wide: The object she had been looking for is a large black strapon. It looks like it could hurt a bit, but you''re already a little wet, so maybe it won''t be so bad. Steeling yourself, you reach down between your legs and spread your pussy lips to make it easier for her to enter.'
 						*nl
-						'She notices and chuckles: "You were right, I''d love to punish you... but I''m going to punish you how **I** want." With the strapon in place, she slips a condom on and spreads some lube on it too. *If she''s even lubing it up, maybe this won''t be so bad*, you hope. If this is how she wants to punish you, then who are you to argue with your teacher? You start rubbing your spread pussy as she comes closer, planning to enjoy this.'
+						'She notices and chuckles: "You were right, I''d love to punish you... but I''m going to punish you how <i>I</i> want." She tightens the strapon into place and squirts some lube over it. "If she''s even lubing it up, maybe this won''t be so bad?" you hope. You start rubbing your pussy as she comes closer, planning to enjoy this.'
 						act 'Continue':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/raven/sex/school/caughtfstrap.jpg"></center>'
-							'But instead of feeling it slip into your pussy, you feel the large, lubed-up tip force its way past your sphincter: She wants to fuck your ass with this huge thing! It hurts, and you try to pull away, but she grab your hips and keeps you in place. "You''ve been a bad little girl, <<$pcs_firstname>>", Ms. Braakman observes, her voice somewhere between imperious and gleeful, "and bad little girls deserve to have their asses punished." You shiver in fearful anticipation of the anal rape her words promise, but instead, all she does is slowly push the massive dildo in.'
+							'You wince in pain when instead of feeling it slip into your pussy, the lubed-up tip force its way into your asshole. It hurts, and you try to pull away, but she grabs your hips and keeps you in place. "You''ve been a bad little girl, <<$pcs_firstname>>!" Ms. Braakman states, her voice somewhere between imperious and gleeful, "and bad little girls deserve to have their asses punished." You shiver in fearful anticipation as she slowly pushes the massive dildo deeper inside.'
 							*nl
-							'It''s not exactly pleasant, and she seems to have no intention of stopping until at least a good part of it is inside you, but the pain is bearable. After a few seconds, she seems content with how much of your ass she has claimed and pulls out again, commencing the assfuck proper. However, that too proves much gentler than you''d expect, going neither very fast nor hard. In fact, now that your backdoor has had some time to adjust to the intrusion, it''s slowly starting to feel good. You remember that your hand is still resting on your pussy and tentatively brush against your clit. Yes, you realize, with a little extra stimulation, this might not be too bad. As you play with the cunt you so willingly offered your teacher, pleasure defeats pain as main sensation and a first sigh of desire escapes you. You hear a buzz coming from the harness now - sounds like that strapon came with gadgets.'
+							'It''s not exactly pleasant, and she seems to have no intention of stopping until at least a good part of it is inside you, but the pain is bearable. After a few seconds, she seems content with how much of your ass she has claimed and pulls out again, commencing the assfuck proper. However, that too proves much gentler than you''d expect, going neither very fast nor hard. In fact, now that your backdoor has had some time to adjust to the intrusion, it''s slowly starting to feel good. You remember that your hand is still resting on your pussy and tentatively brush against your clit. As you play with your now wet pussy, pleasure replaces pain and a moan of desire escapes you. You hear a buzz coming from the harness now - sounds like that strapon came with gadgets.'
 							*nl
-							'Her rhythm is steadily increasing, Ms. Braakman''s pounding your ass harder and deeper and, in turn, causing you to cry out louder. She''s starting to pant, the vibrating harness and sight of the schoolgirl whose ass she''s violating stoking the flames in pelvis. Whatever regard she displayed for your comfort is evidently gone now as she mercilessly hammers the strapon into you, going tip to root almost every time. But the truth is that you don''t need and, in fact, don''t *want* her to be gentle anymore, now that the eroticism of the situation has caught up with you: You''re a student, naked and bent over a school bathroom sink, and your female teacher is fucking your ass hard with a large strapon - it sounds like something out of a cheap porno, and you''re loving it. Your moans are loud, almost matching hers, as you feel warmth pool in your belly.'
+							'Her rhythm is steadily increasing, Ms. Braakman pounding your ass harder and deeper and, in turn, causing you to cry out louder. She''s starting to pant and whatever regard she displayed for your comfort is evidently gone now as she mercilessly hammers the strapon into you, going tip to root almost every time. You then realize that you don''t want her to be gentle anymore as the eroticism of the situation catches up with you. Your moans are loud, almost matching hers, as you feel a warmth pool in your belly.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 10, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
 							*nl
-							'All too soon, she cries out and goes still, nearly collapsing on your back when her orgasm hits, the strapon fully buried in your ass. You can feel her kisses on the back of your neck, a display of affection to contrast the rough anal you received, and she whispers: "My my, I really think you earned to take the rest of the period off." She gently pulls the strapon out of you and takes the harness off, then moves to the sinks to clean it up. "This will be our little secret, <<$pcs_firstname>>," she promises, smiling absentmindedly as she dries the dildo. After throwing the condom away and checking her appearance, she walks towards the exit and gives you one last look, a hint of desire gleaming through the cracks of her mask of authority and indifference, before she silently leaves the bathroom. You rub your butt, get dressed while your mind goes over what you just experienced, and you eventually find yourself back in your stall where you have to decide what to do with the rest of the period.'
+							'All too soon, she cries out and goes still, nearly collapsing on your back when her orgasm hits, the strapon fully buried in your ass. You can feel her kisses on the back of your neck, a display of affection to contrast the rough anal you received, and she whispers: "My my, I really think you earned the rest of the period off." She gently pulls the strapon out of you and takes the harness off, then moves to the sinks to clean it up. "This will be our little secret, <<$pcs_firstname>>." she promises, smiling absentmindedly as she dries the dildo. After checking her appearance, she walks towards the exit and gives you one last look, a hint of desire gleaming through the cracks of her mask of authority and indifference, before she silently leaves the bathroom. You rub your ass and get dressed while your mind goes over what you just experienced, and you eventually find yourself back in your stall where you have to decide what to do with the rest of the period.'
 							if school_bunk = 0:
 								act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 							else
@@ -797,28 +811,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught1':
 			gs 'gschool_events', 'sweet'
 			if rand(1,100) < Sweet_talk + 30:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/eartwist.jpg"></center>'
-				'Ms. Braakman looks at you in silence. For a moment, you think you''ve convinced her... but then you see something change in her eyes: She wasn''t angry before, but she definitely is now. "You **dare** trying to manipulate me like that? Do you really think I''d be base enough to fall for such juvenile attempts at seduction?" She doesn''t give you a chance to reply but reaches out, grabs you by the arm and, with surprising strength, pulls you to your feet, then leads you out of the bathroom. "I''m taking you to the principal''s office. And you should pray that she''s feeling more lenient than I do right now."' 
+				'Ms. Braakman looks at you in silence. For a moment, you think you''ve convinced her, but then you see something change in her eyes: She wasn''t angry before, but she definitely is now. "You <i>dare</i> trying to manipulate me like that? Do you really think I''d be base enough to fall for such juvenile attempts at seduction?" She doesn''t give you a chance to reply but reaches out, grabs you by the arm and, with surprising strength, pulls you to your feet before leading you out of the bathroom. "I''m taking you to the principal''s office. And you should pray that she''s feeling more lenient than I do right now."' 
 				*nl
-				'True to her word, she drags you around school by your arm, furiously muttering under her breath, until you are standing in front of the principal''s office.'
-				act 'Go to Principal''s Office':
+				'True to her word, she drags you around the school by your arm, furiously muttering under her breath, until you are standing in front of the principal''s office.'
+				act 'Go to principal''s office':
 					demerit += 10
 					if school_bunk = 1:demerit += 5
 					gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/raven/sex/school/caughtffinger.jpg"></center>'
-				'Ms. Braakman looks at you for a long moment. You can tell that she is seriously considering her options, can see a hardness in her eyes give way to lust. She seems to be struggling with herself, but her words leave no doubt as to which side came out on top: "Take off your skirt and panties." Suppressing a smile, you do as she tells you and you get naked from the waist down. Once you are, she bends you over the sink, sucking on two of her fingers as she goes. With her other hand, she gives your bare ass several hard swats of the kind that make you yelp and leaves your butt red and stinging, but you almost immediately forget about that when she slides her wet fingers inside your pussy and starts finger-banging you with one hand. Ms. Braakman doesn''t ease up on the spanking but now all the pain does is add to the pleasure.'
+				'Ms. Braakman looks at you for a long moment. You can tell that she is seriously considering her options, can see a hardness in her eyes give way to lust. She seems to be struggling with herself, but her words leave no doubt as to which side came out on top: "Take off your skirt and panties." Suppressing a smile, you do as she tells you and get naked from the waist down. Once you are, she bends you over the sink, sucking on two of her fingers as she goes. With her other hand, she gives your bare ass several hard swats that make you yelp and leaves your ass red and stinging, but you almost immediately forget about that when she slides her wet fingers inside your pussy and starts finger-banging you with one hand. She doesn''t ease up on the spanking, but the pain adds to the pleasure.'
 				*nl
-				'Moans start to escape you; your teacher''s fingers seem to touch all the right spots inside you with unerring ease and you can feel the heat in your cunt build up - it looks like this woman is going to make you cum in record time!'
+				'Moans start to escape you; her fingers seem to touch all the right spots inside you with unerring ease and you can feel the heat in your pussy build up - it looks like this woman is going to make you cum in record time!'
 				$orgasm_or = 'no'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 10, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'But just as you''re approaching the edge, she stops, pulls her fingers out of you and steps away. You want to protest, but her order preempts it: "Take off the rest of your clothes."'
+				'Just as you''re approaching the edge, she stops, pulls her fingers out of you and steps away. You want to protest, but her order preempts it: "Take off the rest of your clothes."'
 				
 				act 'Continue':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/raven/sex/school/caughtfvag.jpg"></center>'
-					'Tense and frustrated, you do as you''re told, watching from the corner of your eyes as Ms. Braakman removes her blouse, skirt, and panties, leaving her naked save for her stockings and corset. With most clothes removed, she grabs you by your hair and pulls you into the stall; there, she puts one foot up on the disabled bar and presses your face against her crotch.'
+					'Tense and frustrated, you do as you''re told, watching from the corner of your eyes as Ms. Braakman removes her blouse, skirt and panties, leaving her naked save for her stockings and corset. She grabs you by your hair and pulls you into the stall; there, she puts one foot up on the disabled bar and presses your face against her crotch.'
 					*nl
 					'Even if the silent command wasn''t clear on its own, the glistening pussy in front of you leaves no room for doubt. You immediately attack her pussy and clit with your tongue, lapping at her inviting slit and occasionally taking her engorged button between your lips and sucking on it. Her grip on your head tightens and she grinds her pussy against your face, trying to increase the sensations you''re giving her. You can hear her moan softly from your ministrations and she seems to be getting wetter still. Minutes pass as you work her cunt with your mouth and she''s covered most of your face with her liquid before her sounds change, the telltale sign you''ve been waiting for.'
 					*nl
@@ -826,7 +840,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught1':
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
-					'She basks in the afterglow, rhythmically moving against you still but without the need that drove her before. Once she has come back to her senses, she immediately lets go off your hair and moves her leg back down. Your teacher awkwardly moves past you and starts getting dressed, and even as you join her at the sinks to wash her secretions off of you, she avoids your curious gaze. "This never happened, you understand? You stay in this stall until I leave, and we will both forget this ever happened." It would seem that she''s regretting your encounter, now that her lust is sated and she''s cleaning herself up. Still, you nod, and a few seconds later, she hastily leaves the bathroom. Alone once more, you gather up your clothes and get dressed - looks like your still have a little bit of time to kill before the bell rings.'
+					'She basks in the afterglow, rhythmically moving against you still but without the need that drove her before. Once she has come back to her senses, she immediately lets go off your hair and moves her leg back down. She awkwardly moves past you and starts getting dressed, and even as you join her at the sinks to wash her secretions off, she avoids your curious gaze. "This never happened, you understand? You stay in this stall until I leave, and we will both forget this ever happened." It would seem that she''s regretting your encounter, now that her lust is sated and she''s cleaning herself up. You nod, and a few seconds later, she hastily leaves the bathroom. Alone once more, you gather up your clothes and get dressed - looks like you still have a little bit of time to kill before the bell rings.'
 					if school_bunk = 0:
 						act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 					else
@@ -846,12 +860,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught2':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/caught'+ rand(1,2) +'.jpg"></center>'
 	'After a couple of minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You peek out and see one of your male teachers standing at the mirror. You duck back into the stall, close the door as quietly as you can and sit down on the toilet, your heart beating like crazy, hoping he didn''t notice you. What the hell is he doing in the girls bathroom anyways?! You hear his footsteps coming closer, closer... and stop, right outside your stall door.' 
 	*nl
-	'"I saw you in the mirror, young lady", he says sternly as he pushes the door open. "What do you think you are doing anyways? Skipping class?"'
-	if school_bunk = 1:'His eyes fall on the smoldering cigarette on the ground. His eyes narrow. "Smoking in school, I see. I really thought you were smarter than that, <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
+	'"I saw you in the mirror, young lady." he says sternly as he pushes the door open. "What do you think you''re doing anyways? Skipping class?"'
+	if school_bunk = 1:'His eyes fall on the smoldering cigarette on the ground. His eyes narrow. "Smoking in school, I see. I really thought you were smarter than that, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
 	*nl
-	'Your teacher shakes his head. He looks more disappointed than angry, you think. "Well, come on, young lady. Get your butt out of here and down to the principal''s office." He points in the direction of the bathroom door.'
+	'Your teacher shakes his head. He looks more disappointed than angry, you think. "Well, come on young lady. Get down to the principal''s office." He points in the direction of the bathroom door.'
 	'You don''t know what to say, if or how you could get out of this mess. Of course he knows you are supposed to be in class, so there''s no point in trying to lie to him about that, but maybe you can convince him to let you off with a warning or something.'
-	act 'Go to Principal''s Office':
+	act 'Go to principal''s office':
 		demerit += 10
 		if school_bunk = 1:demerit += 5
 		gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
@@ -861,17 +875,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught2':
 		gs 'gschool_events', 'sweet', 'normal'
 		if rand(1,100) < Sweet_talk:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/angryteacher.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hang your head and feign shame as best you can. "I know, and I''m sorry, sir, but I was feeling stressed out and I just needed a break, just a few minutes alone. I know I shouldn''t have but I couldn''t help it." You give him a pleading look. "Please, please don''t report me. I promise I won''t do it again."'
-			'The teacher looks at you and snorts. "Do you really think I am dumb enough to fall for that?" He doesn''t wait for your reply but reaches out, grabs you by the arm and pulls you out of the stall, then leads you out of the bathroom. "Come on, I''m taking you to the principal''s office."' 
+			'You hang your head and feign shame as best you can. "I know, and I''m sorry sir, but I was feeling stressed out and I just needed a break, just a few minutes alone. I know I shouldn''t have, but I couldn''t help it." You give him a pleading look. "Please, please don''t report me. I promise I won''t do it again."'
+			'The teacher looks at you and snorts. "Do you really think I''m dumb enough to fall for that?" He doesn''t wait for your reply but reaches out, grabs you by the arm and pulls you out of the stall before leading you out of the bathroom. "Come on, I''m taking you to the principal''s office."' 
 			'He is nothing if not a man of his word, and he drags you down the hall, by your arm, until you are standing in front of the principal''s office.'
-			act 'Go to Principal''s Office':
+			act 'Go to principal''s office':
 				demerit += 10
 				if school_bunk = 1:demerit += 5
 				gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 			end
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sweettalk'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hang your head and feign shame as best you can. "I know, and I''m sorry, sir, but I was feeling stressed out and I just needed a break, just a few minutes alone. I know I shouldn''t have but I couldn''t help it." You give him a pleading look. "Please, please don''t report me. I promise I won''t do it again."'
+			'You hang your head and feign shame as best you can. "I know, and I''m sorry sir, but I was feeling stressed out and I just needed a break, just a few minutes alone. I know I shouldn''t have, but I couldn''t help it." You give him a pleading look. "Please, please don''t report me. I promise I won''t do it again."'
 			'Your teacher looks at you for a long minute and then sighs. You think you can see pity in his eyes. "Okay. I''ll let you off with a warning and you take some time to collect yourself... but no more cutting class, you hear me?" You nod that you understand, then he shakes his head, mumbles something that sounds like "my good nature be damned" and goes about his business. A few seconds later, the bathroom is quiet again, leaving you to wonder why he was in the girls bathroom in the first place. You can''t think of a good reason.'
 			if school_bunk = 0:
 				act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
@@ -890,9 +904,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught2':
 			gs 'gschool_events', 'sweet', 'sex'
 			if rand(1,100) < Sweet_talk:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/angryteacher.jpg"></center>'
-				'The teacher looks at you and snorts. "Please, don''t embarrass yourself, or me, with such juvenile attempts at seduction. Did you really think that would work on me?" He doesn''t wait for your reply but reaches out, grabs you by the arm and pulls you out of the stall, then leads you out of the bathroom. "Come on, I''m taking you to the principal''s office."' 
-				'He is nothing if not a man of his word, and he drags you down the hall, by your arm, until you are standing in front of the principal''s office.'
-				act 'Go to Principal''s Office':
+				'The teacher looks at you and snorts. "Please don''t embarrass yourself, or me, with such juvenile attempts at seduction. Did you really think that would work on me?" He doesn''t wait for your reply but reaches out, grabs you by the arm and pulls you out of the stall before leading you out of the bathroom. "Come on, I''m taking you to the principal''s office."' 
+				'He is nothing if not a man of his word, and he drags you down the hall by your arm until you are standing in front of the principal''s office.'
+				act 'Go to principal''s office':
 					demerit += 10
 					if school_bunk = 1:demerit += 5
 					gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
@@ -900,11 +914,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught2':
 			else
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A128'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtbj.jpg"></center>'
-				'He looks down at you and seems to freeze. He doesn''t say anything, doesn''t move away either - all he does is look at you, transfixed with your lips. You decide to take that as assent, stretch out your hand and unzip his pants. You reach inside and feel that his dick is almost hard already; seems like you read his reaction right, you think to yourself with a smile.'
+				'He looks down at you and seems to freeze. He doesn''t say anything, doesn''t move away either - all he does is look at you, transfixed with your lips. You decide to take that as a yes, stretch out your hand and unzip his pants. You reach inside and feel that his dick is almost hard already.'
 				*nl
-				'He pulls his pants down a little bit, just enough to release his manhood and make it easier for you. You give him an appreciative look and stroke his dick a few times until it is fully hard, then lean forward and start licking it; you lick up the shaft and back down, then back up, run your tongue around the head once, twice, thrice, four times, your eyes locked with his all the while... before you smile at him and take his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth. You wrap your <<$liptalk>> tightly around his dick and start bobbing your head, stroking his cock with your lips, your tongue still making its rounds. He rests one hand on the top of your head, but he lets you completely control the action.'
+				'He pulls his pants down a little bit, just enough to release his manhood and make it easier for you. You give him an appreciative look and stroke his dick a few times until it is fully hard, then lean forward and start licking it; you lick up and down the shaft and run your tongue around the head, your eyes locked with his all the while before you smile at him and take his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth. You wrap your <<$liptalk>> tightly around his dick and start bobbing your head, stroking his cock with your lips, your tongue still making its rounds. He rests one hand on the top of your head, but he lets you completely control the action.'
 				*nl
-				'You caress and fondle his balls with one of your hands while the other strokes him in unison with your head''s movement. You increase your speed over time and take him deeper inside, too, as deep into your mouth as you can without gagging. He starts moaning now, all false pretense of self-possession gone, completely at the mercy of you, his student, right here in a school bathroom - the thought is empowering and intoxicating. You feel his hand dig into your hair and can tell that he is getting close to cumming.'
+				'You caress and fondle his balls with one of your hands while the other strokes him in unison with your head''s movement. You increase your speed over time and take him as deep into your mouth as you can without gagging. He starts moaning and you feel his hand dig into your hair, telling you that he is getting close to cumming.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'dom'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -913,12 +927,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught2':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtcum.jpg"></center>'
-					'You pick up the pace even more, you want him finish soon. "I''m about to cum", he mutters weakly, as if trying to warn you - maybe his wife or girlfriend doesn''t swallow, you think, but you don''t care and suck him even harder. He starts grunting and you feel his dick throbbing in your mouth, when he suddenly pulls your head away, his hand in your hair firmly gripping you.'
+					'You pick up the pace even more, you want him finish soon. "I''m about to cum!" he mutters weakly, as if trying to warn you, but you don''t care and suck him even harder. He starts grunting and you feel his dick throbbing in your mouth, when he suddenly pulls your head away, his hand in your hair firmly gripping you.'
 					*nl
-					'As soon his dick is out of your mouth with a loud pop, his free hand goes to it at once and he jerks it a couple of times, pointing it at you. It starts spurting loads of hot cum out and the jets land all over your face, mostly around your mouth, a small flood of white he must have been saving up for several days, at least. When the well in his balls dries up, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips and then shoves it back into your mouth, the sight of you covered in his cum emboldening him. You look up at him while you suck his cock clean, smiling around him as you feel him getting soft in your mouth. He pulls himself out of your mouth again and tucks his dick back into his pants.'
+					'As soon his dick loudly pops out of your mouth, he jerks it a couple of times while pointing it at you. It soon starts spurting loads of hot cum out and the jets land all over your face, mostly around your mouth. When he finishes, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips and then shoves it back into your mouth, the sight of you covered in his cum emboldening him. You look up at him while you suck his cock clean, smiling around him as you feel him getting soft in your mouth. He then pulls out of your mouth and tucks his dick back into his pants.'
 					*nl
-					'Without a word, your teacher walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you but you can see that he''s looking at you in the mirror. Finally, he smiles and says: "Feel free to cut class any time you like, <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''ll happily keep your secret." With a chuckle, he leaves out of the bathroom - in fact, you think you can hear him whistling outside as he walks away.' 
-					'You go to the mirror yourself and clean yourself up, get the cum off your face and fix your hair. That wasn''t too bad, you think, and at least you have the rest of the period to yourself. Still, you wonder what he was doing in the girls bathroom, besides getting a blowjob.'
+					'Without a word, your teacher walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see that he''s looking at you in the mirror. Finally, he smiles and says: "Feel free to cut class any time you like, <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''ll happily keep your secret." With a chuckle, he leaves - in fact, you think you can hear him whistling outside as he walks away.' 
+					'You go to the mirror yourself, clean yourself up and fix your hair. That wasn''t too bad, you think, and at least you have the rest of the period to yourself. Still, you wonder what he was doing in the girls bathroom in the first place.'
 					if school_bunk = 0:
 						act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 					else
@@ -932,33 +946,33 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught2':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/bendover.jpg"></center>'
-		'You get up and walk past him, out of the stall, then bend over against the wall. One of your hand runs down to your butt and you hike the skirt a bit, then a bit more... then a little bit more, just enough to see a hint of your crotch. All the while, you are looking at Mr. Vasilyev over your shoulder, and now you say: "I know I''ve been a bad, bad girl... and I don''t want any demerits. If you don''t report me, sir, I will let you fuck me." You follow your offer up with an inviting wiggle of your butt.'
+		'You get up and walk past him, out of the stall, then bend over against the wall. One of your hands runs down to your ass and you hike your skirt a bit, then a bit more... then a little bit more, just enough to see a hint of your crotch. All the while, you are looking at him over your shoulder. "I know I''ve been a bad, bad girl... and I don''t want any demerits. If you don''t report me, sir, I will let you fuck me." You follow your offer up with an inviting wiggle of your ass.'
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'gschool_events', 'sweet', 'sex'
 			if rand(1,100) < Sweet_talk:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/angryteacher.jpg"></center>'
-				'Your teacher looks at you and snorts. "Please, don''t embarrass yourself, or me, with such juvenile attempts at seduction. Did you really think that would work on me?" He doesn''t wait for your reply but reaches out, grabs you by the arm and pulls you out of the stall, then leads you out of the bathroom. "Come on, I''m taking you to the principal''s office."' 
-				'He is nothing if not a man of his word, and he drags you down the hall, by your arm, until you are standing in front of the principal''s office.'
-				act 'Go to Principal''s Office':
+				'Your teacher looks at you and snorts. "Please don''t embarrass yourself, or me, with such juvenile attempts at seduction. Did you really think that would work on me?" He doesn''t wait for your reply but reaches out, grabs you by the arm and pulls you out of the stall before leading you out of the bathroom. "Come on, I''m taking you to the principal''s office."' 
+				'He is nothing if not a man of his word, and he drags you down the hall by your arm until you are standing in front of the principal''s office.'
+				act 'Go to principal''s office':
 					demerit += 10
 					if school_bunk = 1:demerit += 5
 					gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/seduction.jpg"></center>'
-				'Your teacher looks at you for a long moment. You can tell that he is seriously considering his options; you can also see one of those ''options'' getting hard in his pants while he stares at your ass. You smile and tug at your skirt, causing it to rise and fall just a tiny bit every time. Only a few seconds later, he walks towards you, pulling out his dick and stroking it - apparently, your wiggling tight nubile ass was too much for him to say no to. When he reaches you, he pushes you down. "Get on your knees and give me a blow job."' 
+				'Your teacher looks at you for a long moment. You can tell that he is seriously considering his options; you can also see one of those ''options'' getting hard in his pants while he stares at your ass. You smile and tug at your skirt, causing it to rise and fall just a tiny bit every time. Only a few seconds later, he walks towards you while pulling out his dick and stroking it. When he reaches you, he pushes you down. "Get on your knees and give me a blowjob."' 
 				'You do as he says and reach out for his cock.'
 				act 'Suck him':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A128'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtbj.jpg"></center>'
-					'You stroke his dick a few times until it is fully hard, then lean forward and start licking it; you lick up the shaft and back down, then back up, run your tongue around the head once, twice, thrice, four times, your eyes locked with his all the while... before you smile at him and take his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth. You wrap your <<$liptalk>> tightly around his dick and start bobbing your head, stroking his cock with your lips, your tongue still making its rounds. He rests one hand on the top of your head, but he lets you completely control the action.'
+					'You stroke his dick a few times until it is fully hard, then lean forward and start licking it; you lick up and down the shaft and run your tongue around the head, your eyes locked with his all the while before you smile at him and take his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth. You wrap your <<$liptalk>> tightly around his dick and start bobbing your head, stroking his cock with your lips, your tongue still making its rounds. He rests one hand on the top of your head, but he lets you completely control the action.'
 					*nl
-					'You caress and fondle his balls with one of your hands while the other strokes him in unison with your head''s movement. You increase your speed over time and take him deeper inside, too, as deep into your mouth as you can without gagging.'
+					'You caress and fondle his balls with one of your hands while the other strokes him in unison with your head''s movement. You increase your speed over time and take him as deep into your mouth as you can without gagging.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'dom'
 					gs 'stat'
-					'He enjoys your blowjob in silence and after several minutes of this, he grabs you by the hair and roughly pulls you up and over to the sinks.'
+					'He enjoys your blowjob in silence and after several minutes, he grabs you by the hair and roughly pulls you up and over to the sinks.'
 					if pcs_vag = 0:
 						act 'Cum': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'caught2_cum'
 					else
@@ -966,17 +980,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught2':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtsex.jpg"></center>'
-							'He has you get up on one of the sinks, pushes up your skirt all the way and pulls down your panties, tossing them aside. His fingers find your pussy a few moments later and it seems he''s making sure you are good and wet. Then you see a condom in his hand - does he always have one in his pocket when he''s at school? - and he puts it on. As he does that, you try to get comfortable but it is not easy with the faucet jabbing you in the back.'
-							*nl
-							'Once the condom is in place, he rubs the tip of his dick against your pussy lips, making sure it is well lubricated, then gently pushes his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock inside you, causing you to gasp. His movements are slow and he is taking all the time in the world to work his way deeper into you, one of his hands rubbing your clit all the while. You groan in pleasure; you hardly even notice the faucet jabbing into your back anymore.'
-							*nl
-							'He might have been slow at first but he''s steadily picking up the pace, now that he is balls deep inside you; he stays gentle with you the whole time, though, and keeps stimulating your clit and occasionally kneads your breasts as well. You didn''t expect this to feel so good and cry out: "Oh God! Fuck me, sir! Fuck me harder!" He smiles and indeed gets a little rougher with you. Once or twice, he lifts his fingers from your wet pussy and sticks them into your mouth for you to suck them, tasting your own juices.'
-							$orgasm_txt = 'With an unexpectedly considerate lover like that, it doesn''t take long until you orgasm and scream out your ecstasy, your wet folds twitching around your teacher''s hard cock. He doesn''t let up, though, and his stamina seems to know no limit, violating your pussy in all the right ways. A second orgasm and even a third shake you before he finally starts to grunt.'
-							$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'dom'
-							gs 'arousal', 'end'
-							gs 'stat'
-
+							if $pantyworntype = 'true':
+						        'He has you get up on one of the sinks while pulling your skirt up. His fingers find your pussy a few moments later and it seems he''s making sure you are good and wet. Then you see a condom in his hand and he puts it on. As he does that, you try to get comfortable, but it is not easy with the faucet jabbing you in the back.'
+					        else
+							    'He has you get up on one of the sinks, pushes up your skirt all the way and pulls down your panties, tossing them aside. His fingers find your pussy a few moments later and it seems he''s making sure you are good and wet. Then you see a condom in his hand and he puts it on. As he does that, you try to get comfortable, but it is not easy with the faucet jabbing you in the back.'
+							    *nl
+							    'Once the condom is in place, he rubs the tip of his dick against your pussy lips, making sure it is well lubricated, then gently pushes his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock inside you, causing you to gasp. His movements are slow and he is taking all the time in the world to work his way deeper into you, one of his hands rubbing your clit all the while. You moan in pleasure; you hardly even notice the faucet jabbing into your back anymore.'
+							    *nl
+							    'He might have been slow at first, but he''s steadily picking up the pace now that he is balls deep inside you; he stays gentle with you the whole time though and keeps stimulating your clit and occasionally kneads your breasts as well. You didn''t expect this to feel so good and cry out: "Oh God! Fuck me, sir! Fuck me harder!" He smiles and indeed gets a little rougher with you. Once or twice, he lifts his fingers from your wet pussy and sticks them into your mouth for you to suck them, tasting your own juices.'
+							    $orgasm_txt = 'With an unexpectedly considerate lover like that, it doesn''t take long until you orgasm and scream out your ecstasy, your wet folds twitching around your teacher''s hard cock. He doesn''t let up though, and his stamina seems to know no limit, violating your pussy in all the right ways. A second orgasm and even a third shake you before he finally starts to grunt.'
+							    $orgasm_or = 'custom'
+							    gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'dom'
+							    gs 'arousal', 'end'
+							    gs 'stat'
+                            end
 							act 'Cum': gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'caught2_cum'
 						end
 					end
@@ -991,10 +1008,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught2_cum':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtcum.jpg"></center>'
-	'Your teacher pulls out of you and you off the sink, gentle pushing you down to your knees while he gets rid of the condom. He holding his dick near your face, right in front of your mouth, and jerks it a couple of times. It starts spurting loads of hot cum out and the jets land all over your face, mostly around your mouth, a small flood of white he must have been saving up for several days, at least. When the well in his balls dries up, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips and then shoves it back into your mouth, the sight of you covered in his cum emboldening him. You look up at him while you suck his cock clean, smiling around him as you feel him getting soft in your mouth. He pulls himself out of your mouth again and tucks his dick back into his pants.'
+	'Your teacher pulls out of you and drags you off the sink, gently pushing you down to your knees while he gets rid of the condom. He holding his dick near your face, right in front of your mouth, and jerks it a couple of times. It starts spurting loads of hot cum out and the jets land all over your face, mostly around your mouth. When he finishes, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips and then shoves it back into your mouth, the sight of you covered in his cum emboldening him. You look up at him while you suck his cock clean, smiling around him as you feel him getting soft in your mouth. He pulls out of your mouth and tucks his dick back into his pants.'
 	*nl
-	'Without a word, he walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you but you can see that he''s giving you sideways glances. Finally, he smiles and says: "Feel free to cut class any time you like, <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''ll happily keep your secret."' 
-	'You smile back. "If I get ''punished'' like that every time I skip class, I will." He chuckles at that, shakes his head, then leaves the bathroom - you think you can hear him whistling outside as he walks away. You get up to the mirror now and clean yourself up, get the cum off your face, wipe the sweat and pussy juices off, fix your hair. That was amazing, you think, and not only do you feel a little sore from the orgasms but you also have the rest of the period to yourself. Still, you can''t help but wonder what he was doing in the girls bathroom - besides fucking one of his students silly, of course.'
+	'Without a word, he walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see that he''s giving you sideways glances. Finally, he smiles and says: "Feel free to cut class any time you like, <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''ll happily keep your secret."' 
+	'You smile back. "If I get ''punished'' like that every time I skip class, I will." He chuckles at that, shakes his head, then leaves the bathroom - you think you can hear him whistling outside as he walks away. You get up to the mirror, clean yourself up and fix your hair. That was amazing and you also have the rest of the period to yourself. Still, you can''t help but wonder what he was doing in the girls bathroom in the first place.'
 	if school_bunk = 0:
 		act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 	else
@@ -1008,40 +1025,40 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught3':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/caughtpr1.jpg"></center>'
-	'After a couple of minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You peek out and see Miss Volkov, standing at the mirror. You duck back into the stall, close the door as quietly as you can and sit down on the toilet, your heart beating like crazy, hoping she didn''t notice you. You hear her footsteps coming closer, closer... and stop, right outside your stall door.' 
+	'After a couple of minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You peek out and see Miss Volkov standing at the mirror. You duck back into the stall, close the door as quietly as you can and sit down on the toilet, your heart beating like crazy, hoping she didn''t notice you. You hear her footsteps coming closer, closer... and stop, right outside your stall door.' 
 	*nl
-	'"I saw you in the mirror, girl", she says menacingly as he pushes the door open. "What do you think you are doing? Skipping class, I presume?" Then her eyes fall on the smoldering cigarette on the ground. Her eyes narrow to slits. "And smoking in school, too, huh? You know how I feel about students smoking in my school."'
+	'"I saw you in the mirror, girl." she says menacingly as she pushes the door open. "What do you think you are doing? Skipping class, I presume?" Then her eyes fall on the smoldering cigarette on the ground and her eyes narrow. "And smoking in school too, huh? You know how I feel about students smoking in my school."'
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/caughtpr2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Before you can even respond, she grabs you painfully by the hair and yanks the cigarette out of your mouth. "I am tired of you kids thinking you can just do anything you want, well you can''t, there are consequences to your actions."'
-		'She seems really pissed, you try to explain come up with anything to defuse this, but she is having none of it. She interupts you before you even get a word out. "I don''t want to hear any of your feeble excuses!"'
+		'Before you can even respond, she grabs you painfully by the hair and yanks the cigarette out of your mouth. "I am tired of you kids thinking you can just do anything you want. Well, you can''t and you need to learn that there are consequences to your actions."'
+		'She seems really pissed. You try tt come up with anything to defuse the situation, but she is having none of it. She interupts you before you even get a word out. "I don''t want to hear any of your feeble excuses!"'
 		act 'Not the ear':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/caughtpr3.jpg"></center>'
-			'She tosses the cigarette between your legs into the toilet, followed by her grabbing your uniform in one hand and your ear with her other hand. She painfully twists your ear and drags you out of the stall, so fast you nearly stumble and fall. "You will learn to respect me and this school, no matter what. Before I am done with you missy you will either be toeing the line or begging to be expelled."'
+			'She tosses the cigarette between your legs into the toilet, followed by her grabbing your uniform in one hand and your ear with her other hand. She painfully twists your ear and drags you out of the stall so fast you nearly stumble and fall. "You will learn to respect me and this school, no matter what. You''ll either be toeing the line or begging to be expelled when I''m done with you young lady."'
 			act 'She''s really pissed':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/caughtpr4.jpg"></center>'
-				'She twists you ear so painfully that tears well up in your eyes. She forces you down on all fours on the floor, she slides her foot forward and then forces your head down right over her shoe. "Lick my shoes clean" When you hesitate she twists your ear hard enough you think she is about to rip if off the side of your head. Not having much of a choice your start licking her shoes. After you do as you are told and lick her shoes for a bit she lets go of your ear and instead directs you how to lick her shoes. You are tempted to stop but you know she will just get ahold of your ear again or worse, so you do as you are instructed.'
+				'She twists you ear so painfully that tears well up in your eyes. She forces you down on all fours on the floor, slides her foot forward and forces your head down. "Lick my shoes clean" When you hesitate, she twists your ear hard enough you think she is about to rip if off the side of your head. Not having much of a choice, you start licking her shoes. After you do as you are told, she lets go of your ear and instead directs you on how to lick her shoes. You are tempted to stop, but you know she will just grab your ear again, or worse, so you do as you are instructed.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'This is not fair':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/caughtpr5.jpg"></center>'
-					'As you lick her shoes, she reaches down and grabs you by the hair and twists it painfully in her hand, yanking you to your feet by your hair painfully. Once back on your feet she pushes you forward bending you over, her hand in you hair holds you in place while her other hand pulls up your skirt and pulls your panties down around your knees.'
+					'As you lick her shoes, she reaches down, grabs you by the hair and twists it painfully in her hand before painfully yanking you to your feet. She then pushes you forward, bending you over as her hand in your hair holds you in place while her other hand pulls up your skirt and pulls your panties down around your knees.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'sub', 'maso'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
-					if $pantyworntype = 'none': 'As you lick her shoes, she reaches down and grabs you by the hair and twists it painfully in her hand, yanking you to your feet by your hair painfully. Once back on your feet she pushes you forward bending you over, her hand in you hair holds you in place while her other hand pulls up your skirt and when she can''t find your panties. She twists your hair painfully. "You dirty little slut, where are your panties? From now on you better be wearing panties in my school, you hear me?!" She''s not waiting for a reply.'
+					if $pantyworntype = 'none': 'As you lick her shoes, she reaches down, grabs you by the hair and twists it painfully in her hand before painfully yanking you to your feet. She then pushes you forward, bending you over as her hand in you hair holds you in place while her other hand pulls up your skirt. When she can''t find your panties, she again painfully twists your hair. "You dirty little slut, where are your panties? You better be wearing panties in my school from now on, you hear me?!" She''s not waiting for a reply.'
 					*nl
 					if detention_set = 0:
 						detention_set = 1
 						gs 'pain', 2, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
-						'Once your bare ass is exposed your begins to spank it with her open hand. She uses the full force of her swings to deliver stinging slaps to your bare ass. She spanks you until your ass is cherry red, she seems to only stop when her hand starts to hurt too much from spanking you to continue. She finally lets go of you and steps away. "In addition you will report to detention this weekend. Now get your ass to class and I don''t want to catch you cutting class again, you understand?" You nod your head and wipe away the tears, you straighten up your clothes and go to class.'
+						'Once your bare ass is exposed, she begins to spank it with her open hand. She uses the full force of her swings to deliver stinging slaps to your bare ass and spanks you until your ass is cherry red. She only stops when her hand starts to hurt too much to continue. She finally lets go of you and steps away. "In addition, you will report to detention this weekend. Now get your ass to class! I don''t want to catch you cutting class again, you understand?" You nod your head and wipe away the tears before you straighten up your clothes and go to class.'
 					else
 						gs 'pain', 2, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
-						'Once your bare ass is exposed your begins to spank it with her open hand. She uses the full force of her swings to deliver stinging slaps to your bare ass. She spanks you until your ass is cherry red, she seems to only stop when her hand starts to hurt too much from spanking you to continue. She finally lets go of you and steps away.' 
+						'Once your bare ass is exposed, she begins to spank it with her open hand. She uses the full force of her swings to deliver stinging slaps to your bare ass and spanks you until your ass is cherry red. She only stops when her hand starts to hurt too much to continue. She finally lets go of you and steps away.' 
 !!Todo: Has to be written
 !!						'"In addition you will report to my office after school. Now get your ass to class and I don''t want to catch you cutting class again, you understand?" You nod your head and wipe away the tears, you straighten up your clothes and go to class.'
 					end

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_grounds.qsrc

@@ -302,7 +302,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 				'<TABLE BORDER=1><<$show_table>></TR></TABLE>'
 			end
 		end
-		if AlbinaQW['albride'] = 0 and AlbinaQW['RideDaystart'] <= daystart and AlbinaQW['albina_election_events']  >= 1 and AlbinaQW['ParkRally'] > 0 and AlbinaQW['Chernov'] > 0: 
+		if AlbinaQW['albride'] = 0 and AlbinaQW['RideDaystart'] <= daystart and AlbinaQW['AlbFatherQW']  >= 1 and AlbinaQW['ParkRally'] > 0 and AlbinaQW['Chernov'] > 0: 
 			'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''albinaRide''">Albina Barlovskaya</a> is waiting behind the wheel of a large black SUV, parked near the school.'
 		end
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

@@ -1290,8 +1290,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 				'As a large group of girls gather around to watch and film the show, you spot Christina trying to quietly slip out with the group of girls. She sees you looking at her and she stops in her tracks, her eyes fearfully pleading with you. You ignore her and mercilessly drag her into the middle of the room and throw her down next to Sonia. "I brought an extra bitch to the party!" you say mockingly to the laughter of the others. You waste no time and immediately present your pussy to Christina, spreading yourself wide and exposing your clit. She looks at you scornfully, but knowing that she has no choice, she reluctantly starts eating you out. "Come on slut, you can do better than that!" you say before you grab her hair and start grinding against her, smearing her face with your wetness as she keeps licking away at your clit. She seems to put more effort in and you slowly feel your orgasm building within you.'
 				$orgasm_txt = 'Just as you are about to climax, you pull her face out of your crotch and quickly rub your engorged clit, bringing yourself to an explosive orgasm as you spray a fountain of pussy juice across Christina''s face, much to the amazement and amusement of the other girls present.'
 				$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-				'When you finish cumming, you force her head back into your crotch, making her lick up every last drop of your juices. When you''re done, you pat her on the head and throw her to the floor for the other girls to have some fun with her. When everyone has had a turn, Sonia and Christina are both drenched in sticky girl cum. Christina is furious, but Sonia doesn''t care, instead focusing on fingering herself. You give Christina a mocking smile and leave her sitting there as you join the others in returning to the locker room to get dressed. She doesn''t resist, instead just sitting on the floor, dejected and defeated. She hasn''t returned to the locker room by the time you finish getting dressed and leave.'   
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -8, 'lesbian', 'dom'
+				'When you finish cumming, you force her head back into your crotch, making her lick up every last drop of your juices. When you''re done, you pat her on the head and throw her to the floor for the other girls to have some fun with her. When everyone has had a turn, Sonia and Christina are both drenched in sticky girl cum. Christina is furious, but Sonia doesn''t care, instead focusing on fingering herself. You give Christina a mocking smile and leave her sitting there as you join the others in returning to the locker room to get dressed. She doesn''t resist, instead just sitting on the floor, dejected and defeated. She hasn''t returned to the locker room by the time you finish getting dressed and leave.'   
 				gs 'stat'
 				'You can choose another outfit while you''re here.'
 				act 'Finish dressing':

+ 10 - 10
locations/journal.qsrc

@@ -27,27 +27,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'records':
 	if home_owned[1] = 3:'You own a two room apartment in the city residential area. It''s currently occupied by your tenants.'
 	if home_owned[2] > 0:'You live in a two room apartment in a large apartment complex. You live with your parents and siblings in Pavlovsk.'
 	if home_owned[3] > 0:'You own small holiday cottage with an adjacent allotment in the communal village.'
-	if home_owned[4] > 0:'You rent a two room apartment in Pushkin. Your rent for the apartment is subtracted automatically in sum of <<home_rent[4]>> <b>₽</b> us electric bill on 25th of each month. You are currently paid up for <b><<ArendHouseSL4>></b> days'
+	if home_owned[4] > 0:'You rent a two room apartment in Pushkin. Your rent for the apartment is subtracted automatically in the sum of <<home_rent[4]>> <b>₽</b> us electric bill on the 25th of each month. You are currently paid up for <b><<ArendHouseSL4>></b> days'
 	if home_owned[5] = 1:'You own a vacant block in the city suburbs. Your utility bills are due on the 25th of each month.'
-	if home_owned[5] = 2:'You own a block in the city suburbs upon which you are building a house. Your utility bills are due on the 25th of each month.'
+	if home_owned[5] = 2:'You own a block in the city suburbs, upon which you are building a house. Your utility bills are due on the 25th of each month.'
 	if home_owned[5] = 3:'You own an impressive mansion in the suburbs of St. Petersburg. Your utility bills are due on the 25th of each month.'
 	
 	'<center><h2>Work</h2></center>'
 	
 	if workPTU > 2:'You work as a teacher at the Lycée and your schedule is Mon-Sat, teaching between 14:00 to 16:00. Your salary is 300r/day. The dress code is Office Clothes, Strict. The road from the apartment to the Lyceum takes 2 hours 10 minutes.'
 	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workKafe > 0:'You are working as a waitress at The Roadhouse cafe. You need to come to work between 11:00-12:00 while your working days are: Tuesday, Wednesday, and Thursday. At work, you can receive tips from customers and your wages are received on 25th of each month.'
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workhosp > 0:'You work as a nurse in the city residential area clinic. You need to come to work between 08:00-09:00 during the week. Salary is automatically transferred on 25th of each month.'
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workhosp > 0:'You work as a nurse in the city residential area clinic. You need to come to work between 08:00-09:00 during the week. Salary is automatically transferred on the 25th of each month.'
 	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and worksalon > 0:'You work as a masseuse in the city at the Beauty Bar. You need to come to work between 09:00-10:00 while your working days are: Monday, Wednesday, and Friday. Salary is automatically transferred on 25th of each month.'
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workSec > 0:'You work as a secretary at Titran Express. You need to come to work by 09:00 during the week Monday-Friday. Salary is automatically transferred on 25th of each month.'
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workSec > 0:'You work as a secretary at Titran Express. You need to come to work by 09:00 during the week Monday-Friday. Salary is automatically transferred on the 25th of each month.'
 	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and tanwork > 0:'You work as a governess for Tanya at Nicholas'' luxury city apartment. Salary is automatically transferred on the 25th of each month.'
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work = 1:'You work in the city as a store clerk at the Pussy Kats clothing store. Work starts at 15:00 Monday to Friday. The salary shall be issued once a week on Fridays.'
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work1 = 1:'You work in the city as a store clerk at the Pussy Kats clothing store. Work starts at 09:00 Saturday and Sunday. The salary shall be issued once a week on Fridays.'
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work2 = 1:'You work in the city as a store clerk at the Pussy Kats clothing store. Work starts at 09:00 Monday through Friday. The salary shall be issued once a week on Fridays.'
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workFabrika = 1:'You work as a seamstress in a factory in Pavlovsk. Work is every day except Saturday and Sunday. Salary is automatically transferred on 25th of each month.'
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work = 1:'You work in the city as a store clerk at the Pussy Cats clothing store. Work starts at 15:00 Monday to Friday. The salary shall be issued once a week, on Fridays.'
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work1 = 1:'You work in the city as a store clerk at the Pussy Cats clothing store. Work starts at 09:00 Saturday and Sunday. The salary shall be issued once a week, on Fridays.'
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work2 = 1:'You work in the city as a store clerk at the Pussy Cats clothing store. Work starts at 09:00 Monday through Friday. The salary shall be issued once a week, on Fridays.'
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workFabrika = 1:'You work as a seamstress in the factory in Pavlovsk. Work is every weekday, with weekends off. Salary is automatically transferred on the 25th of each month.'
 	if workrin = 1:'You are working at the market in Arthur''s tent as a clothing saleswoman. You work on Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday with a start time of 08:00. Salary depends on sales.'
 	if maidqw = 1:'You work in the Pavlovsk hotel as a maid. Your work schedule is every day from 16:00 to 19:00 and your salary is 250 <b>₽</b> plus tips.'
 	if postjobQW = 2 or postjobQW = 4:'You deliver mail for the postmaster. The work day starts each Saturday between 11:00 and 12:00. Salary is 450 <b>₽</b> .'
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and gpoliuborka > 1:'You work part-time as a cleaner in the Pavlovosk clinic. Your schedule is from 16:00 to 21:00.'
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and gpoliuborka > 1:'You work part-time as a cleaner in the Pavlovsk clinic. Your schedule is from 16:00 to 21:00.'
 	if stripwork >= 1:'You can work as a stripper in the city industrial region. You have an open schedule that can be every day from 15:00-00:00. No salary as you earn tips.'
 	if film > 0:'You are working in the city industrial region as a pornographic actress under the name <<$pfname>>.'
 	if bumtolik = 4:'You have been asked to help the homeless at the Mercy Clinic in the city industrial region.'
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'records':
 	if audition['day'] = daystart:
 		'Your audition for the role of <<$role>> is today!'
 	elseif audition['day'] - daystart = 1:
-		'You are auditioning for the role of <<$role>> is tomorrow.'
+		'You are auditioning for the role of <<$role>> tomorrow.'
 	elseif audition['day'] - daystart > 1:
 		'You are auditioning for the role of <<$role>> in <<audition[''day''] - daystart>> days.'
 	end

+ 2 - 2
locations/pav_commercial.qsrc

@@ -55,13 +55,13 @@ end
 
 gs'street_event','pav_commercial', 'extras'
 
-if AlbinaQW['albina_election_events']  >= 1 and AlbinaQW['ParkRally'] > 0:
+if AlbinaQW['AlbFatherQW']  >= 1 and AlbinaQW['ParkRally'] > 0:
 	if AlbinaQW['ElectionCampaignTime'] = 0:AlbinaQW['ElectionCampaignTime'] = totminut + 2880
 
 	'You can see election posters on the walls all over town. They say: "Vote for Boris Barlovsky!" Wait a minute... isn''t that Albina''s father?'
 end
 
-if AlbinaQW['ElectionCampaignTime'] > 0 and AlbinaQW['ElectionCampaignTime'] <= totminut and hour >= 14 and AlbinaQW['albina_election_events']  = 1:gt 'albina_election_events'
+if AlbinaQW['ElectionCampaignTime'] > 0 and AlbinaQW['ElectionCampaignTime'] <= totminut and hour >= 14 and AlbinaQW['AlbFatherQW']  = 1:gt 'albina_election_events'
 
 if StoryLine > 0 and hour < 4 and motherWorry = 0 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and age < 18 and home_owned[2] = 1:
 	motherWorry = 1

+ 2 - 2
locations/pav_industrial.qsrc

@@ -47,13 +47,13 @@ end
 
 gs'street_event','pav_industrial', 'extras'
 
-if AlbinaQW['albina_election_events']  >= 1 and AlbinaQW['ParkRally'] > 0:
+if AlbinaQW['AlbFatherQW']  >= 1 and AlbinaQW['ParkRally'] > 0:
 	if AlbinaQW['ElectionCampaignTime'] = 0:AlbinaQW['ElectionCampaignTime'] = totminut + 2880
 
 	'You can see election posters on the walls all over town. They say: "Vote for Boris Barlovsky!" Wait a minute... isn''t that Albina''s father?'
 end
 
-if AlbinaQW['ElectionCampaignTime'] > 0 and AlbinaQW['ElectionCampaignTime'] <= totminut and hour >= 14 and AlbinaQW['albina_election_events']  = 1:gt 'albina_election_events'
+if AlbinaQW['ElectionCampaignTime'] > 0 and AlbinaQW['ElectionCampaignTime'] <= totminut and hour >= 14 and AlbinaQW['AlbFatherQW']  = 1:gt 'albina_election_events'
 
 if rand(1,5) >= 4 and pav_slut >= 100:
 	if pav_slut < 150:

+ 2 - 2
locations/pav_residential.qsrc

@@ -86,12 +86,12 @@ if pav_slut >= 250 and rand(1, 10) = 10 and pav_residential_prost_day ! daystart
 	exit
 end
 
-if AlbinaQW['albina_election_events']  >= 1 and AlbinaQW['ParkRally'] > 0:
+if AlbinaQW['AlbFatherQW']  >= 1 and AlbinaQW['ParkRally'] > 0:
 	if AlbinaQW['ElectionCampaignTime'] = 0:AlbinaQW['ElectionCampaignTime'] = totminut + 2880
 	'<br>You can see election posters on the walls all over town. They say: "Vote for Boris Barlovsky!" Wait a minute... isn''t that Albina''s father?</br>'
 end
 
-if AlbinaQW['ElectionCampaignTime'] > 0 and AlbinaQW['ElectionCampaignTime'] <= totminut and hour >= 14 and AlbinaQW['albina_election_events']  = 1:gt 'albina_election_events'
+if AlbinaQW['ElectionCampaignTime'] > 0 and AlbinaQW['ElectionCampaignTime'] <= totminut and hour >= 14 and AlbinaQW['AlbFatherQW']  = 1:gt 'albina_election_events'
 
 if rand(1, 5) >= 4 and pav_slut >= 150:
 	if pav_slut < 200:

+ 57 - 71
locations/road.qsrc

@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			if gorand<=60:
 				'<center><B>Main road between St. Petersburg and Pavlovsk</B></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/autostop (<<picrand>>).jpg" ></center>'
-				'You try to catch the attention of people driving towards Pavlovsk but everyone just rushes by, ignoring you completely.'
+				'You try to catch the attention of people driving towards Pavlovsk, but everyone just rushes by, ignoring you completely.'
 				act 'Continue':gt $curloc
 			elseif gorand>60:
 				gs 'road', 'autostop_d'
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			if gorand<=60:
 				'<center><B>Main road between St. Petersburg and Pavlovsk</B></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/autostop (<<picrand>>).jpg" ></center>'
-				'You try to catch the attention of people driving towards St. Petersburg but everyone just rushes by, ignoring you completely.'
+				'You try to catch the attention of people driving towards St. Petersburg, but everyone just rushes by, ignoring you completely.'
 				act 'Continue':gt $curloc
 			elseif gorand>60:
 				gs 'road', 'autostop_d'
@@ -89,18 +89,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	end
 
 	if nroad = 0:
-		'You''re on the outskirts of St. Petersburg. You see a number of crudely made huts near the trees, a bunch of homeless people must have sought shelter here.'
-		'A <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''furi''">lorry</a> is parked next to the road. The driver is currently taking a break, and is having a cigarette. He could probably bring you to Gadukino or Pavlovsk, for a price...'
+		'You''re on the outskirts of St. Petersburg. You see a number of crudely made huts near the trees. A bunch of homeless people must have sought shelter here.'
+		'A <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''furi''">lorry</a> is parked next to the road. The driver is currently taking a break and is having a cigarette. He could probably bring you to Gadukino or Pavlovsk, for a price...'
 	elseif nroad = 1:
 		'You''re not very far from St. Petersburg. You see a bunch of <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''city_suburbs'',''start''">luxury houses</a> not far from the road. That settlement looks like it''s very expensive to live in.'
 	elseif nroad = 2:
 		''
 	elseif nroad = 3:
-		'You see a sign pointing towards a <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''graveyard''">cemetery</a>, hidden between lots of trees. You think it''ll be a 15 minute walk, from here.'
+		'You see a sign pointing towards a <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''graveyard''">cemetery</a>, hidden between lots of trees. You think it''d be a 15 minute walk from here.'
 	elseif nroad = 4:
 		''
 	elseif nroad = 5:
-		'You see a <a href="exec:gt ''train'', ''communal''">railway platform</a> not far from the road. A bit further away, someone built <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''dachi''">a bunch of cottages</a>. Some of them are for sale. This must be a nice place to stay at, in the summer!'
+		'You see a <a href="exec:gt ''train'', ''communal''">railway platform</a> not far from the road. A bit further away, someone built <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''dachi''">a bunch of cottages</a>. Some of them are for sale. This must be a nice place to stay at in the summer!'
 	elseif nroad = 6:
 		''
 	elseif nroad = 7:
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		display_bb = 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'You see a <a href="exec:gt ''train'', ''village''">railway platform</a> not far from the road. In the same direction, a dirt road leads to the village of <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''gadukino''">Gadukino</a>.'
-		'A <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''furi''">lorry</a> is parked next to the road. The driver is currently taking a break, and is having a cigarette. He could probably bring you to Pavlovsk or St. Petersburg, for a price...'
+		'A <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''furi''">lorry</a> is parked next to the road. The driver is currently taking a break and is having a cigarette. He could probably bring you to Pavlovsk or St. Petersburg, for a price...'
 		!if npc_QW['A60'] > 15 and gadriver_gang = 2:
 		!	'You and Mira can both <a href="exec:gt ''gadprostitutes'', ''start''">prostitute</a> yourselves around here.'
 		!elseif npc_QW['A60'] > 15:
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	elseif nroad = 11:
 		''
 	elseif nroad = 12:
-		'You see a <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''motel''">trucker motel</a> near the road. You have no business there, you''re no trucker!'
+		'You see a <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''motel''">trucker motel</a> near the road. You have no business there. You''re no trucker!'
 	elseif nroad = 13:
 		''
 	elseif nroad = 14:
@@ -139,20 +139,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	elseif nroad = 18:
 		''
 	elseif nroad = 19:
-		'You are on the outskirts of the <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''liam''">old town</a> district of Pavlovsk about a five minutes down a cobblestone road is the old town center. It''s a fairly popular for tourists to explore with much of its old architecture still intact.'
+		'You are on the outskirts of the <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''liam''">old town</a> district of Pavlovsk. About five minutes down a cobblestone road is the old town center. It''s a fairly popular place for tourists to explore with much of its old architecture still intact.'
 	elseif nroad = 20:
 		'The main road ends at the provincial town of Pavlovsk. You can see the castle in the distance.'
-		'A <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''furi''">lorry</a> is parked next to the road. The driver is currently taking a break, and is having a cigarette. He could probably bring you to Gadukino or St. Petersburg, for a price...'
+		'A <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''furi''">lorry</a> is parked next to the road. The driver is currently taking a break and is having a cigarette. He could probably bring you to Gadukino or St. Petersburg, for a price...'
 		'A small road leads to an almost hidden old <a href="exec:gt ''brothel'', ''lobby''">hotel</a>. Usually tourists use it when passing by or when visiting the old town of Pavlovsk.'
 		if hour >= 7 and hour <= 17:
-			'You can see a bunch of trucks around the <a href="exec:gt ''NikoSlut'', ''Diner Exterior''">Boris diner</a>. Which is a diner that is frequently visited by both truckers and bikers.'
+			'You can see a bunch of trucks around the <a href="exec:gt ''NikoSlut'', ''Diner Exterior''">Boris diner</a>, which is a diner that is frequently visited by both truckers and bikers.'
 		else
-			'You can see a bunch of motorcycles around the <a href="exec:gt ''NikoSlut'', ''Diner Exterior''">Boris diner</a>. Which is a diner that is frequently visited by both truckers and bikers.'
+			'You can see a bunch of motorcycles around the <a href="exec:gt ''NikoSlut'', ''Diner Exterior''">Boris diner</a>, which is a diner that is frequently visited by both truckers and bikers.'
 		end
-		if hour = 22 and NikoEv < 21 and Yurik_Diner_Daystart ! daystart:
-			'You can see a <a href="exec:gt ''NikoSlut'', ''Yurik Out''">drunk man</a> stumbling along the highway with a beer bottle in his hand.'
-		elseif hour = 22 and NikoEv < 21 and Yurik_Diner_Daystart = daystart:
-			'He still seems to be stumbling along the highway with a beer bottle in his hand.'
+		if hour = 22 and NikoEv < 21:
+			'You can see <a href="exec:gt ''NikoSlut'', ''Yurik Out''">' + iif(YurikEv['Name'] = 'Yurik', 'Yurik', 'a big burly man') + '</a>, clearly drunk, stumbling along the highway with a beer bottle in his hand.'
 		end		
 	end
 end
@@ -180,16 +178,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'drive_sex1':
 	end
 	'<center><B>Main road between St. Petersburg and Pavlovsk</B></center>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/highway/sex/bj (1).mp4" width="1000" height="562"></video></center>'
-	'When you get in the car, you immediately reach for his pants and take out his semi-erect cock. That''s what you promised him, after all. You feel it slowly hardening between your fingers as the man drives off.'
+	'When you get in the car, you immediately reach for his pants and take out his semi-erect cock. That''s what you promised him after all. You feel it slowly hardening between your fingers as the man drives off.'
 	if pcs_throat < dick: pcs_throat += 1
 	if dick >= 14 and dick < 16: $raod_text_sex = 'a normal size'
 	if dick >= 16 and dick < 18: $raod_text_sex = 'a bit larger than average'
 	if dick >= 18 and dick < 20: $raod_text_sex = 'quite large'
 	if dick >= 20: $raod_text_sex = 'huge'
-	'You gentle massage his cock between your fingers while the man gets comfortable. It''s <<$raod_text_sex>>, roughly <<dick>> centimetres long and quite girthy. You manage to massage him to a full erection in no time at all, and lower your head to take it between your lips.'
-	'As you lick the tip of his cock with your tongue and begin to suck him off, you have to admit: this is kinda hot! The man is well groomed, and has a pleasant masculine smell to him.'
-	'You eagerly bob your head up and down while he drives, totally forgetting about your earlier doubts and do your best to get him off.'
-	'With success: in no time at all, the man groans and his cock erupts inside your mouth, shooting gobs of his hot sperm onto your tongue while you keep your lips closed around his cock to not make a mess.'
+	'You gently massage his cock between your fingers while the man gets comfortable. It''s <<$raod_text_sex>>, roughly <<dick>> centimeters long and quite girthy. You manage to massage him to a full erection in no time at all, and lower your head to take it between your lips.'
+	'As you lick the tip of his cock with your tongue and begin to suck him off, you have to admit: this is kinda hot! The man is well groomed and has a pleasant masculine smell to him.'
+	'You eagerly bob your head up and down while he drives, totally forgetting about your earlier doubts, and do your best to get him off.'
+	'With success: in no time at all, the man groans, and his cock erupts inside your mouth, shooting gobs of his hot sperm onto your tongue while you keep your lips closed to not make a mess.'
 	'Realizing you can''t spit it out anywhere, you have no option but to swallow his load while he keeps driving.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'hj', 15, 'prostitution'
@@ -198,7 +196,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'drive_sex1':
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
 	
-	act'To go further': gt 'road', 'autospot_drive'
+	act'Continue': gt 'road', 'autospot_drive'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'drive_sex2':
@@ -223,13 +221,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'drive_sex2':
 	end
 	'<center><B>Main road between St. Petersburg and Pavlovsk</B></center>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/highway/sex/hj (1).mp4" width="800" height="448"></video></center>'
-	'When you get in the car, you immediately reach for his pants and take out his semi-erect cock. That''s what you promised him, after all. You feel it slowly hardening between your fingers as the man drives off.'
+	'When you get in the car, you immediately reach for his pants and take out his semi-erect cock. That''s what you promised him after all. You feel it slowly hardening between your fingers as the man drives off.'
 	if dick >= 14 and dick < 16: $raod_text_sex = 'a normal size'
 	if dick >= 16 and dick < 18: $raod_text_sex = 'a bit larger than average'
 	if dick >= 18 and dick < 20: $raod_text_sex = 'quite large'
 	if dick >= 20: $raod_text_sex = 'huge'
-	'You gentle massage his cock between your fingers while the man gets comfortable. It''s <<$raod_text_sex>>, roughly <<dick>> centimetres long and quite girthy. You manage to massage him to a full erection in no time at all, and begin to jerk him off while he drives, rubbing your fingertips over his glans.'
-	'Even though you feel a bit awkward for having to service this man to get where you need to be, you''re serious about what you promised him and jerk him off diligently. In no time at all, your soft touch brings him to an orgasm. Unfortunately his cock was pointing straight at you when it happened, and most of his sperm ends up on your clothes.'
+	'You gently massage his cock between your fingers while the man gets comfortable. It''s <<$raod_text_sex>>, roughly <<dick>> centimeters long and quite girthy. You manage to massage him to a full erection in no time at all, and begin to jerk him off while he drives, rubbing your fingertips over his glans.'
+	'Even though you feel a bit awkward for having to service this man to get where you need to be, you''re serious about what you promised him and jerk him off diligently. In no time at all, your soft touch brings him to an orgasm. Unfortunately, his cock is pointing straight at you when it happens, and most of his sperm ends up on your clothes.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'hj', 15, 'prostitution'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -255,22 +253,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'autospot_drive':
 		nroad = 0
 	end
 	picrand = RAND(1,2)
+	'<center><B>Main road between St. Petersburg and Pavlovsk</B></center>'
 	if truck_drive = 1:
-		'<center><B>Main road between St. Petersburg and Pavlovsk</B></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/truck_drive (<<picrand>>).jpg" ></center>'
-		'You try to start a conversation once or twice, but the man doesn''t really seem to be interested in chatting while he drives. You give up and just look out the window, while he drives you to your destination.'
-		'Fifteen minutes later you arrive, and the man pulls over. "Alright, we''re here. Take care, girl!"'
-	elseif bandit_drive = 1:
-		'<center><B>Main road between St. Petersburg and Pavlovsk</B></center>'
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/drive (<<picrand>>).jpg" ></center>'
-		'You try to start a conversation once or twice, but the man doesn''t really seem to be interested in chatting while he drives. You give up and just look out the window, while he drives you to your destination.'
-		'Fifteen minutes later you arrive, and the man pulls over. "Alright, we''re here. Take care, girl!"'
 	else
-		'<center><B>Main road between St. Petersburg and Pavlovsk</B></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/drive (<<picrand>>).jpg" ></center>'
-		'You try to start a conversation once or twice, but the man doesn''t really seem to be interested in chatting while he drives. You give up and just look out the window, while he drives you to your destination.'
-		'Fifteen minutes later you arrive, and the man pulls over. "Alright, we''re here. Take care, girl!"'
 	end
+	'You try to start a conversation once or twice, but the man doesn''t really seem to be interested in chatting while he drives. You give up and just look out the window, while he drives you to your destination.'
+	'Fifteen minutes later, you arrive, and the man pulls over. "Alright, we''re here. Take care, girl!"'
 	act'Get out of the car':gt $curloc
 end
 
@@ -284,50 +274,48 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'autostpo_money':
 	if textrand = 1:$road_textrand4 = 'I''ll take you there for <<autostop_price*100>> <b>₽</b>.'
 	if textrand = 2:$road_textrand4 = '<<autostop_price*100>> <b>₽</b>. Take it or leave it.'
 	if textrand = 3:$road_textrand4 = '<<autostop_price*100>> <b>₽</b>.'
+	'<center><B>Main road between St. Petersburg and Pavlovsk</B></center>'
 	if truck_drive = 1:
-		'<center><B>Main road between St. Petersburg and Pavlovsk</B></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/truck_guy (<<picrand>>).jpg" ></center>'
 	elseif bandit_drive = 1:
-		'<center><B>Main road between St. Petersburg and Pavlovsk</B></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/guy (1).jpg" ></center>'
 	else
-		'<center><B>Main road between St. Petersburg and Pavlovsk</B></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/guy (<<picrand>>).jpg" ></center>'
 	end
-	'You approach the driver and say: "Hello, sir! I need a ride to <<$road_textrand0>>, can you help me?"'
+	'You approach the driver and say, "Hello, sir! I need a ride to <<$road_textrand0>>, can you help me?"'
 	'The driver gives you another appraising look.'
 	vnerand = RAND(0,1200) 
 	if vnerand <= pcs_apprnc:
 		cla
-		'"I can take you there for free, but only if you do something for me in return", the guy smiles.'
+		'"I can take you there for free, but only if you do something for me in return," the guy smiles.'
 		'"Uhh... like what?" you ask him, even though you''re pretty sure you know where this is going.'
-		'The man laughs and shifts a bit in his seat. He says: "You''re a grown-up girl with a nice body! Surely you can think of something?"'
+		'The man laughs and shifts a bit in his seat. He says, "You''re a grown-up girl with a nice body! Surely you can think of something?"'
 		act'Offer a blowjob':
 			cla
 			drive_sex[1] = 1
-			'You bite your lip for a second, quickly going through your options. Then you say: "I really do need this ride, sir! Would a blowjob be okay?"'
-			'The guy grins greedily and says: "Excellent, I knew we would find a way to help each other out! Get in."'
+			'You bite your lip for a second, quickly going through your options. Then you say, "I really do need this ride, sir! Would a blowjob be okay?"'
+			'The guy grins greedily and says, "Excellent, I knew we would find a way to help each other out! Get in."'
 			act'Get in the car':gt 'road', 'drive_sex1'
 		end
 		act'Offer a handjob':
 			cla
 			drive_sex[2] = 1
-			'You bite your lip for a second, quickly going through your options. Then you say: "I really do need this ride, sir! Would a handjob be okay?"'
-			'The guy gives you a slightly disappointed look and frowns: "What? Only a handjob?"'
-			'You really don''t want to go further than that! Your cheeks turn a deep red and you begin to stumble: "I''m sorry. I don''t normally do this..."'
-			'After some hesitation, he responds: "Oh, alright then. Getting a handjob from a cute girl such as yourself sounds like a fair deal. Get in."'
+			'You bite your lip for a second, quickly going through your options. Then you say, "I really do need this ride, sir! Would a handjob be okay?"'
+			'The guy gives you a slightly disappointed look and frowns, "What? Only a handjob?"'
+			'You really don''t want to go further than that! Your cheeks turn a deep red and you begin to stumble, "I''m sorry. I don''t normally do this..."'
+			'After some hesitation, he responds, "Oh, alright then. Getting a handjob from a cute girl such as yourself sounds like a fair deal. Get in."'
 			act'Get in the car':gt 'road', 'drive_sex2'
 		end
 		exit
 	else 
-		'He ponders for a second, and then says: "<<$road_textrand4>>"'
+		'He ponders for a second and then says, "<<$road_textrand4>>"'
 	end
 	if money > autostop_price*100:
 		act'Agree to pay him': gt 'road', 'autospot_drive'
 	end
 	act'Decline his offer':
 		cla
-		'"I''m sorry, sir. I can''t afford that", you apologize, and step away from the car. The man shrugs and drives off.'
+		'"I''m sorry, sir. I can''t afford that," you apologize and step away from the car. The man shrugs and drives off.'
 		act 'Continue':gt $curloc
 	end
 	act'Ask for a lower price':
@@ -337,33 +325,33 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'autostpo_money':
 		if textrand = 2:$road_textrand5 = 'Maybe we can work something out?'
 		if textrand = 3:$road_textrand5 = 'Oh no, I don''t have that much! Could you lower your price? Maybe a bit, just for me?'
 		'You twirl your hair between your fingers and give the man a cute look, hoping he will have pity on you and lower the price. "<<$road_textrand5>>" you ask him sweetly.'
-		'The man seems a bit reluctant, and looks at you once more.'
+		'The man seems a bit reluctant and looks at you once more.'
 		vnerand = RAND(0,400)
 		if vnerand <= pcs_apprnc:
 			cla
 			'"I can take you there for free, but only if you do something for me in return", the guy smiles.'
 			'"Uhh... like what?" you ask him, even though you''re pretty sure you know where this is going.'
-			'The man laughs and shifts a bit in his seat. He says: "You''re a grown-up girl with a nice body! Surely you can think of something?"'
+			'The man laughs and shifts a bit in his seat. He says, "You''re a grown-up girl with a nice body! Surely you can think of something?"'
 			act'Offer a blowjob':
 				cla
 				drive_sex[1] = 1
-				'You bite your lip for a second, quickly going through your options. Then you say: "I really do need this ride, sir! Would a blowjob be okay?"'
-				'The guy grins greedily and says: "Excellent, I knew we would find a way to help each other out! Get in."'
+				'You bite your lip for a second, quickly going through your options. Then you say, "I really do need this ride, sir! Would a blowjob be okay?"'
+				'The guy grins greedily and says, "Excellent, I knew we would find a way to help each other out! Get in."'
 				act'Get in the car':gt 'road', 'drive_sex1'
 			end
 			act'Offer a handjob':
 				cla
 				drive_sex[2] = 1
-				'You bite your lip for a second, quickly going through your options. Then you say: "I really do need this ride, sir! Would a handjob be okay?"'
-				'The guy gives you a slightly disappointed look and says: "What? Only a handjob?"'
-				'You really don''t want to go further than that! Your cheeks turn a deep red and you begin to stumble: "I''m sorry. I don''t normally do this..."'
-				'After some hesitation, he responds: "Oh, alright then. Getting a handjob from a cute girl such as yourself sounds like a fair deal. Get in."'
+				'You bite your lip for a second, quickly going through your options. Then you say, "I really do need this ride, sir! Would a handjob be okay?"'
+				'The guy gives you a slightly disappointed look and says, "What? Only a handjob?"'
+				'You really don''t want to go further than that! Your cheeks turn a deep red and you begin to stumble, "I''m sorry. I don''t normally do this..."'
+				'After some hesitation, he responds, "Oh, alright then. Getting a handjob from a cute girl such as yourself sounds like a fair deal. Get in."'
 				act'Get in the car':gt 'road', 'drive_sex2'
 			end
 		else 
 			ivrand = RAND(1,2)
 			autostop_price -= ivrand
-			'The man sighs exasperatedly, but yields: "Okay, fine. I''ll make it <<ivrand*100>> <b>₽</b> less, because you seem like a nice girl and I want to help you out. I''ll take you there for <<autostop_price*100>> <b>₽</b>, but I can''t go any lower than that!"'
+			'The man sighs exasperatedly, but yields, "Okay, fine. I''ll make it <<ivrand*100>> <b>₽</b> less, because you seem like a nice girl and I want to help you out. I''ll take you there for <<autostop_price*100>> <b>₽</b>, but I can''t go any lower than that!"'
 			
 			if money > autostop_price*100:
 				act'Agree to pay him':
@@ -373,15 +361,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'autostpo_money':
 			end
 			act'Decline his offer':
 				cla
-				'"I''m sorry, sir. I still can''t afford that", you apologize, and step away from the car. The man shrugs and drives off.'
+				'"I''m sorry, sir. I still can''t afford that," you apologize and step away from the car. The man shrugs and drives off.'
 				act 'Continue':gt $curloc
 			end
 			act'Offer him a blowjob instead':
 				cla
 				drive_sex[1] = 1
-				'You bite your lip, as if you are ashamed for what you''re about to say next. In a weak voice, you offer: "I can''t pay you money, sir. But... I could give you a blowjob? Would that be okay?"'
+				'You bite your lip, as if you are ashamed of what you''re about to say next. In a weak voice, you offer, "I can''t pay you money, sir. But... I could give you a blowjob? Would that be okay?"'
 				'You lick your lips seductively and offer him a weak smile, hoping that maybe he''ll feel bad for you and just take you with him for free.'
-				'The man grins from ear to ear, and says: "You know what, girl? I was kinda hoping you''d say that. Get in."'
+				'The man grins from ear to ear, and says, "You know what, girl? I was kinda hoping you''d say that. Get in."'
 				act'Get in the car':gt 'road', 'drive_sex1'
 			end
 		end
@@ -416,31 +404,29 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'autostop_d':
 	if textrand = 5:$road_textrand3 = 'grey'
 	!wagon and sedan
 	ivrand = RAND(1,2)
+	'<center><B>Main road between St. Petersburg and Pavlovsk</B></center>'
 	if ivrand = 1:
 		!gangsters or not
 		ivrand = RAND(1,4)
 		if ivrand > 1:
 			picrand = RAND(2,4)
 			bandit_drive = 1
-			'<center><B>Main road between St. Petersburg and Pavlovsk</B></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/guy (<<picrand>>).jpg" ></center>'
 			'After a few minutes of you trying to get someone to pull over, a <<$road_textrand3>>, <<$road_textrand2>> car stops near you. The driver rolls down his window and looks at you for a second, probably making sure you wouldn''t ruin his seats with dirty clothes or something.'
-			if pcs_apprnc < 60:'Then he shrugs and says: "Where do you need to go, lady?"'
-			if pcs_apprnc >= 60:'Then he gives you a friendly smile and says: "<<$road_textrand1>>"'
-		elseif ivrand = 1:
-			'<center><B>Main road between St. Petersburg and Pavlovsk</B></center>'
+			if pcs_apprnc < 60:'Then he shrugs and says, "Where do you need to go, lady?"'
+			if pcs_apprnc >= 60:'Then he gives you a friendly smile and says, "<<$road_textrand1>>"'
+		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/guy (1).jpg" ></center>'
 			'After a few minutes of you trying to get someone to pull over, a black car with tinted windows stops near you. Two guys wearing leather jackets are clearly appraising your body.'
-			'One says to the other: "Nice, we clearly drove to the right place!"'
+			'One says to the other, "Nice, we clearly drove to the right place!"'
 		end
 	elseif ivrand = 2:
 		picrand = RAND(1,3)
 		truck_drive = 1
-		'<center><B>Main road between St. Petersburg and Pavlovsk</B></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/truck_guy (<<picrand>>).jpg" ></center>'
 		'After a few minutes of you trying to get someone to pull over, a huge <<$road_textrand3>>, <<$road_textrand2>> truck stops near you. The truck driver looks at you intently for a second, probably making sure you wouldn''t ruin his seats with dirty clothes or something.'
-		if pcs_apprnc < 60:'Then he shrugs and says: "Where do you need to go, lady?"'
-		if pcs_apprnc >= 60:'Then he gives you a friendly smile and says: "<<$road_textrand1>>"'
+		if pcs_apprnc < 60:'Then he shrugs and says, "Where do you need to go, lady?"'
+		if pcs_apprnc >= 60:'Then he gives you a friendly smile and says, "<<$road_textrand1>>"'
 	end
 end
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/saveupdater.qsrc

@@ -494,7 +494,7 @@ if ((100*version_major +version_minor)*100+version_revision)*100+version_patch
 	! ----- Diner Bystroeshka (burger) story variables migrated to array
 
 	! ----- Albina story variables migrated to array
-	if AlbFather > 0:          AlbinaQW['albina_election_events'] = AlbFather & killvar 'AlbFather'
+	if AlbFather > 0:          AlbinaQW['AlbFatherQW'] = AlbFather & killvar 'AlbFather'
 	if AlbFrend > 0:           AlbinaQW['Friends'] = AlbFrend & killvar 'AlbFrend'
 	if ZvezdEnd > 0:           AlbinaQW['StarletsShutDown'] = ZvezdEnd & killvar 'ZvezdEnd'
 	if DanceWhore > 0:         AlbinaQW['StarletsWhore'] = DanceWhore & killvar 'DanceWhore'

+ 22 - 23
locations/sbReksHome.qsrc

@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ if indorf = 0 and (sisboyparty_day + 2 = daystart or hour > 21):
 	cls
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Rex''s Apartment</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_6_' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-	*nl 'Drunk and disheveled, Anya bursts into the room. You noticed that her hair, and all over her clothes she is smeared in sticky sperm. Anya stopped you and said:' 
-	'"We should move our asses and go home <<$pcs_nickname>>, or mother will kill us both, if you don''t come home tonight."'
-	if Rex_save = 1 and Rex_Love = 0: 'As you leave the apartment, you gently kiss Rex on the cheek, thanking for the evening.'
-	if Rex_Love = 1: 'As you leave the apartment, you passionate kiss Rex on the lips, "Thank you for a lovely evening."'
+	*nl 'Drunk and disheveled, Anya bursts into the room. You notice that her hair and clothes are smeared all over in sticky sperm. Anya stops you and says, "We should move our asses and go home <<$pcs_nickname>>, or mother will kill us both, if you don''t come home tonight."'
+	if Rex_save = 1 and Rex_Love = 0: 'As you leave the apartment, you gently kiss Rex on the cheek, thanking him for the evening.'
+	if Rex_Love = 1: 'As you leave the apartment, you passionately kiss Rex on the lips. "Thank you for a lovely evening."'
 	if party_boys_in >= 1: 'As you leave the apartment, some drunk guys tell you they will miss you and sleep well, while laughing to each other.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -49,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party':
 	sister_party_dom = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_1_' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-	'You arrive at Rex''s apartment, for the weekend party. Going inside with the others, the loud music drowned out any noise from outside. As soon as you are inside several boys immediately start offering you drinks.'
+	'You arrive at Rex''s apartment for the weekend party. Going inside with the others, the loud music drowns out any noise from outside. As soon as you are inside, several boys immediately start offering you drinks.'
 	act 'Drink':
 		cls
 		minut += 5
@@ -57,8 +56,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party':
 		gs 'drugs ', 'alcohol', 'vodka'
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_2_' + rand(1,4) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'In all this mess you are unable to find a clean cup and are handed a full bottle of booze. Clinking glasses with the bottle, you put your lips to the mouth of the bottle and turn it up, gulping down several swigs of strong drink, noticing the effects almost at once.'
-		'The party has just begun, you can still walk through the apartment and find something to do.'
+		'In all this mess, you are unable to find a clean cup and are handed a full bottle of booze. Clinking glasses with the bottle, you put your lips to its mouth and turn it up, gulping down several swigs of strong drink, noticing the effects almost at once.'
+		'The party has just begun. You can still walk through the apartment and find something to do.'
 		act 'Move away': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_home'
 	end
 end
@@ -73,19 +72,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_home':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Rex''s Room</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_1_' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-	'Sitting at a table and drinking with your friends, sitting to one side of you sharing a bottle as always is <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''lena''">Lena</a> who is always fun, her slightly more reserved friend <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''ira''">Ira</a>, and always up beat <a href="exec: gt ''reks'', ''party''">Rex</a>.'
-	'To your other side sits your sister <a href="exec: gt ''sister_party'', ''sister_party''">Anya</a> drinking already and <a href="exec: gt ''sbReksHome'', ''roma''">Roma</a>, whom himself sits just a bit away looking more serious than normal, plus lots of <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''party_girls''">girls</a> and <a href="exec: gt ''party_boys'', ''party_boys''">guys</a> you barely know.'
-	if alko < 3:'One of the guys offers you a bottle to <a href="exec: gt ''sbReksHome'', ''party_drink''">drink</a> from as they say "A little more to set the mood."'
+	'You sit at a table and drink with your friends. Sitting to one side of you sharing a bottle as always are <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''lena''">Lena</a> who is always fun, her slightly more reserved friend <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''ira''">Ira</a>, and always upbeat <a href="exec: gt ''reks'', ''party''">Rex</a>.'
+	'To your other side sits your sister <a href="exec: gt ''sister_party'', ''sister_party''">Anya</a>, drinking already, and <a href="exec: gt ''sbReksHome'', ''roma''">Roma</a>, who himself sits just a bit away looking more serious than normal, plus lots of <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''party_girls''">girls</a> and <a href="exec: gt ''party_boys'', ''party_boys''">guys</a> you barely know.'
+	if alko < 3:'One of the guys offers you a bottle to <a href="exec: gt ''sbReksHome'', ''party_drink''">drink</a> from as he says, "A little more to set the mood."'
 	!You''re drunk
 	if alko >= 3:
 		*clr
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Rex''s Room</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_home_1_' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'After awhile everyone gets up to go dance and drink. Only a few <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''party_girls''">girls</a>, are left in the room, who are fun to hang out and gossip with.'
+		'After a while, everyone gets up to go dance and drink. Only a few <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''party_girls''">girls</a> are left in the room, but they are fun to hang out and gossip with.'
 		iif(party_girls_talk >= 2,'You <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''talk''">chat</a> and gossip with them. One of the girls pulls out some marijuana and invites all of you to <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''smoke''">have a smoke</a>.', 'You <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''talk''">chat</a> and gossip with them.')
 		if pcs_mood = 100 and pcs_horny >= 50 and girls_smoke > 1:
-			'All the girls are in a good mood, and several of them excited pull you with them to have some <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''fun''">fun</a>.'
+			'All the girls are in a good mood, and several of them excitedly pull you with them to have some <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''fun''">fun</a>.'
 		end
 	end
 	act 'Go to the living room': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_gost'
@@ -97,7 +96,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'roma':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Roma</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/roma/roma.jpg"></center>'
-	'Red-haired skinny guy named Roma'
+	'Red-haired skinny guy named Roma.'
 	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
 
@@ -109,7 +108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_drink':
 	gs 'drugs ', 'alcohol', 'vodka'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_2_' + rand(1,4) + '.jpg"></center>'
-	'Someone hands you a half full bottle of booze, putting your lips to the mouth of the bottle, you turn it up and gulp down several swigs of strong drink, noticing the effects almost at once.'
+	'Someone hands you a half full bottle of booze. Putting your lips to the mouth of the bottle, you turn it up and gulp down several swigs of strong drink, noticing the effects almost at once.'
 	'The party has just begun, you can still walk through the apartment and find something to do.'
 	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
@@ -125,16 +124,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_gost':
 	if alko < 3:
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Living room</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_3.jpg"></center>'
-		'This is a large living room, hardly anyone is here, most are all still sitting in the other room talking and drinking. Only one <a href="exec: gt ''sbReksHome'', ''party_boy''">guy</a> is in here tinkering with a turntable.'
+		'This is a large living room. Hardly anyone is here, most are all still sitting in the other room talking and drinking. Only one <a href="exec: gt ''sbReksHome'', ''party_boy''">guy</a> is in here tinkering with a turntable.'
 	elseif alko >= 3:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_4_' + rand(1,8) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'The party is in full swing. In one corner a <a href="exec: gt ''sbReksHome'', ''party_boy''">guy</a> the party DJ is spinning the beats at the turntable. You want to give it a try and <a href="exec: gt ''dinParty'', ''dance''">spin some beats</a>.'
+		'The party is in full swing. In one corner. a <a href="exec: gt ''sbReksHome'', ''party_boy''">guy</a>, the party DJ, is spinning beats at the turntable. You want to give it a try and <a href="exec: gt ''dinParty'', ''dance''">spin some beats</a>.'
 		'<a href="exec: gt ''sbReksHome'', ''roma''">Roma</a> and <a href="exec: gt ''sister_party'', ''sister_party''">Anya</a> are locked together having fun dancing.'
 		if Rex_Love = 0:'<a href="exec: gt ''reks'', ''party''">Rex</a> is having fun dancing with some <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''party_girls''">girls</a>.'
 		if Rex_Love = 1:'You are dancing with some <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''party_girls''">girls</a> and <a href="exec: gt ''reks'', ''party''">Rex</a>, who looks at you with loving eyes.'
 		'<a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''lena''">Lena</a> and <a href="exec: gt ''party_girls'', ''ira''">Ira</a> are having fun in the company of drunken <a href="exec: gt ''party_boys'', ''party_boys''">guys</a>.'
 	end
-	act 'Go to the Rex''s room': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_home'
+	act 'Go to Rex''s room': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_home'
 	act 'Go to the kitchen': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_kuh'
 	act 'Go to the bathroom': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_toilet'
 	act 'Leave Rex''s home': gt 'pav_commercial'
@@ -149,11 +148,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_boy':
 	if party_dj = 1 and dj_beer < 1:
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>DJ</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_boy.jpg"></center>'
-		'The guy messes with the soundboard and makes the sound even louder. "Hello, <<$pcs_nickname>>, get me a beer. You can find all the booze in the kitchen."'
+		'The guy messes with the soundboard and makes the sound even louder. "Hello, <<$pcs_nickname>>, get my friend and me a beer. You can find all the booze in the kitchen."'
 	elseif dj_beer = 1 and dj_thank < 1:
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>DJ</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_boy.jpg"></center>'
-		'The guy messes with the soundboard and makes the sound even louder. "Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>, where is our beer?" You go into the kitchen, get two bottles of beer and <a href="exec:gt ''dinParty'', ''dj_beer''">bring</a> it to the guys.'
+		'The guy messes with the soundboard and makes the sound even louder. "Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>, where are our beers?" You go into the kitchen, get two bottles of beer and <a href="exec:gt ''dinParty'', ''dj_beer''">bring</a> them to the guys.'
 	elseif dj_thank = 1 and dj_bad < 1:
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>DJ</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_boy.jpg"></center>'
@@ -186,9 +185,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_kuh':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kitchen</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/kuh.jpg"></center>'
-	'The kitchen is spacious, but kinda dirty. The kitchen table is covered in cans and bottles of beer as well as 5th''s of booze. You can grab any bottle you want and <a href="exec: gt ''sbReksHome'', ''party_drink''">drink</a>.'
-	if party_dj =1 and dj_beer < 1:'You grab two bottles and <a href="exec: gt ''dinParty'', ''dj''">take</a> them for the DJ.'
-	if alko >= 3: 'Some <a href="exec: gt ''party_boys'', ''party_boys''">guys</a> bang their empty drinks down on the table, refilling they offer a cup to you and try to get you to <a href="exec: gt ''party_boys'', ''drink''">drink</a> with them.'
+	'The kitchen is spacious, but kinda dirty. The kitchen table is covered in cans and bottles of beer as well as 5ths of booze. You can grab any bottle you want and <a href="exec: gt ''sbReksHome'', ''party_drink''">drink</a>.'
+	if party_dj =1 and dj_beer < 1:'You grab two bottle for the <a href="exec: gt ''dinParty'', ''dj''">DJ and his friend</a>.'
+	if alko >= 3: 'Some <a href="exec: gt ''party_boys'', ''party_boys''">guys</a> bang their empty drinks down on the table. Refilling, they offer a cup to you and try to get you to <a href="exec: gt ''party_boys'', ''drink''">drink</a> with them.'
 	act 'Go to the living room': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_gost'
 end
 
@@ -206,7 +205,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_toilet':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Toilet</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/toilet.jpg"></center>'
 
-	'Here you can wash your face, freshen up or touch up your make up at <a href="exec: gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirrors</a>.'
+	'Here you can wash your face, freshen up or touch up your make-up at <a href="exec: gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirrors</a>.'
 	if pcs_horny > 50:'Feeling yourself ready to burst with desire, you can''t take it anymore and begin to <a href="exec: gt ''dinParty'', ''toilet_mast''">masturbate</a>.'
 	act 'Go to the living room': gt 'sbReksHome', 'party_gost'
 	if cumloc[11] = 1 or cumloc[12] = 1:

+ 38 - 37
locations/seeporn.qsrc

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 *clr & cla
 '<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/tv/seeporn.mp4"></video></center>'
-'You and the boys sit down around the TV, Kolka puts on a DVD and immediately the screen is filled with porn.'
+'You and the boys sit down around the TV. Kolka puts on a DVD, and immediately, the screen is filled with porn.'
 see_rand1 = rand(0,100)
 act 'Watch it':
 	cla
@@ -15,18 +15,18 @@ act 'Watch it':
 	if evgenQW >= 4 and pav_slut >= 150: gt 'seeporn','SeePornPalevo'
 
 	if seepornofut < 3:
-		'The boys are looking at what is going on the screen but they are clearly uneasy and embarrassed with you here.'
+		'The boys are looking at what is going on on the screen, but they are clearly uneasy and embarrassed with you here.'
 	elseif seepornofut >= 3 and seepornofut < 10:
 		'The guys have become accustomed to watching porn with you about, sometimes even commenting on what is happening.'
 	elseif seepornofut >= 10:
-		'The boys intensely watch the porn, you notice a distinct tightness in their pants.'
+		'The boys intensely watch the porn. You notice a distinct tightness in their pants.'
 
 		if evgenQW = 4:
 			*clr & cla
 			boyseeporn += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/tv/seeporn.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'The boys intensely watch porn, you notice that they are all clearly aroused. Zhendos asks "<<$pcs_nickname>>, Want to put that mouth of yours to use?"'
+			'The boys intensely watch porn. You notice that they are all clearly aroused. Zhendos asks, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, want to put that mouth of yours to use?"'
 
 			act 'Keep quiet':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ act 'Watch it':
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/seeporn/sex/seepornbbcum.jpg"></center>'
-					'The boys don''t last long and cum right in your face, Soon almost all of your face is covered in a layer of sperm and it''s dripping onto your clothes.'
+					'The boys don''t last long and cum right in your face. Soon, almost all of your face is covered in a layer of sperm, and it''s dripping onto your clothes.'
 
 					evgenrand = rand(1,5)
 
@@ -84,8 +84,8 @@ act 'Watch it':
 
 						gs 'stat'
 						'Kolka tells the guys that he should take you home.'
-						'As soon as you leave the school building your brother whispers; "Let''s look for a quiet place, I''m still horny."'
-						'Soon you find a secluded spot and Kolka says, "This looks good. Bend over."'
+						'As soon as you leave the school building, your brother whispers, "Let''s look for a quiet place, I''m still horny."'
+						'Soon, you find a secluded spot, and Kolka says, "This looks good. Bend over."'
 						if see_rand1 < 5:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/public/boysex.jpg"></center>'
 						if see_rand1 >= 5 and see_rand1 < 30:'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/public/publ1,<<rand(0,2)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 						if see_rand1 >= 30:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/public/publ1,<<rand(0,6)>>.jpg"></center>'
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ act 'Watch it':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/seeporn/seeporn.jpg"></center>'
-			'The boys intensely watch porn, you notice the bulges in their pants. Zhendos suddenly takes your hand and holds it against his groin, Mishan does the same with your other hand. Your brother Kolka laughs nervously. Mishan tells you conspiratorially "<<$pcs_nickname>>, wank us off."'
+			'The boys intensely watch porn. You notice the bulges in their pants. Zhendos suddenly takes your hand and holds it against his groin, and Mishan does the same with your other hand. Your brother Kolka laughs nervously. Mishan tells you conspiratorially, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, wank us off."'
 
 			act 'Jerk guys':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ act 'Watch it':
 
 				if boyseeporn < 2:
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/seeporn/sex/seeporn.hand1,<<rand(0,2)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'They get their cocks out and you gently rub both members with your hands, Zhendos quickly groans and lets fly a jet of sperm onto your foot, immediately followed by Mishan who also manages to hit your foot.'
+					'They get their cocks out, and you gently rub both members with your hands. Zhendos quickly groans and lets fly a jet of sperm onto your foot, immediately followed by Mishan, who also manages to hit your foot.'
 
 					act 'Eew':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ act 'Watch it':
 						gs 'cum_manage'
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/seeporn/sex/seeporncumhj.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shout "You assholes, all over my feet!" But the boys are blissfully sprawled on the couch "Great handjob <<$pcs_nickname>>, such small, soft hands."'
+						'You shout, "You assholes, all over my feet!" but the boys are blissfully sprawled on the couch. "Great handjob <<$pcs_nickname>>, such small, soft hands."'
 
 						act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'sports'
 					end
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ act 'Watch it':
 					evgenQW = 4
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/seeporn/sex/seepornfirst.jpg"></center>'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/seeporn/sex/seepornbro0,<<rand(0,2)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'They get their cocks out and you gently rub both members with your hands, your brother Kolka walks over, his eyes filled with lust and puts his dick in your mouth. You eyes widened at this turn of events. Zhendos quickly groans and from his cock flys a jet of sperm onto your foot, immediately followed by Mishan who also manages to hit your foot.'
+					'They get their cocks out, and you gently rub both members with your hands. Your brother Kolka walks over, his eyes filled with lust, and puts his dick in your mouth. Your eyes widen at this turn of events. Zhendos quickly groans, and from his cock flies a jet of sperm onto your foot, immediately followed by one from Mishan, who also manages to hit your foot.'
 
 					act '"Groo gaskers!"':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -177,9 +177,9 @@ act 'Watch it':
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial22.jpg"></center>'
-						'Suddenly, your brother takes his dick out of your mouth a jet of hot cum splatters across your face.'
+						'Suddenly, your brother takes his dick out of your mouth, and a jet of hot cum splatters across your face.'
 						'Mishan laughs, "Kolka, you just fucked your sister in the mouth!"'
-						'Kolka wipes the sweat from his forehead, "Holy shit, I don''t fucking believe it! The slut was asking for it! No man could have resisted!"'
+						'Kolka wipes the sweat from his forehead. "Holy shit, I don''t fucking believe it! The slut was asking for it! No man could have resisted!"'
 						
 						act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'sports'
 					end
@@ -203,13 +203,13 @@ act 'Watch it':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/seeporn/seeporn.jpg"></center>'
-			'The boys intensely watch porn, you notice the bulges in their pants. Zhendos suddenly takes your hand and holds it against his groin, Mishan does the same with your other hand. Your brother Kolka laughs nervously. Mishan Says conspiratorially "<<$pcs_nickname>>, wank us off."'
+			'The boys intensely watch porn. You notice the bulges in their pants. Zhendos suddenly takes your hand and holds it against his groin, and Mishan does the same with your other hand. Your brother Kolka laughs nervously. Mishan says conspiratorially, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, wank us off."'
 
 			act 'What the fuck?':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/seeporn/seeporn.jpg"></center>'
-				'You shake your head. Mishan says "Come on, you''re a girl, it''s something good friends do for each other."'
+				'You shake your head. Mishan says, "Come on, you''re a girl, it''s something good friends do for each other."'
 				act 'Jerk them':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'arousal', 'hj', 10, 'group', 'sub'
@@ -219,7 +219,7 @@ act 'Watch it':
 					evgenQW = 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/seeporn/sex/doublehj.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'They get there cocks out and you gently rub both members with your hands, Zhendos quickly groaned and his cock flew jet of sperm on your foot, immediately joined by Mishan and also finished on your foot.'
+					'They get there cocks out and you gently rub both members with your hands. Zhendos quickly groans, and his cock lets fly a jet of sperm onto your foot, immediately joined by one from Mishan, who also finishes on your foot.'
 
 					act 'Resent':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -233,7 +233,7 @@ act 'Watch it':
 						gs 'cum_manage'
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/seeporn/sex/seeporncumhj.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shout "You assholes, all over my feet!" But the boys are blissfully sprawled on the couch "Great handjob <<$pcs_nickname>>, such small, soft hands."'
+						'You shout, "You assholes, all over my feet!" but the boys are blissfully sprawled on the couch. "Great handjob <<$pcs_nickname>>, such small, soft hands."'
 
 						act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'sports'
 					end
@@ -257,8 +257,8 @@ act 'Watch it':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/seeporn/assgrab.jpg"></center>'
-			'The boys intensely watch porn, you notice, their boners straining to get out of their pants.'
-			'You feel Zhendos hand gently stroking your ass.'
+			'The boys intensely watch porn. You notice their boners straining to get out of their pants.'
+			'You feel Zhendos''s hand gently stroking your ass.'
 
 			gs 'willpower', 'foreplay', 'resist', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@ act 'Watch it':
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/reactions/fuckoff2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You angrily remove Zhendos hand from your ass.'
+					'You angrily remove Zhendos''s hand from your ass.'
 					act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'sports'
 				end
 			else
@@ -280,7 +280,7 @@ act 'Watch it':
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/seeporn/assgrab.jpg"></center>'
-				'You sit on the couch turning red as a lobster enjoying having your butt rubbed.'
+				'You sit on the couch turning red as a lobster, enjoying having your butt rubbed.'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'sports'
 			end
@@ -290,8 +290,8 @@ act 'Watch it':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/tv/seeporn.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'The boys intensely watch porn, you notice, their boners straining to get out of their pants.'
-			'Zhendos looking at the porn asks you "Have you ever done that, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+			'The boys intensely watch porn. You notice, their boners straining to get out of their pants.'
+			'Zhendos, looking at the porn, asks you, "Have you ever done that, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -311,7 +311,7 @@ act 'Watch it':
 				evgenQW = 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/seeporn/seeporn_umm.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You swallow and remain silent watching the porn. Mishan chuckles "And now she''s all flushed. It turns out the girls like porn as well."'
+				'You swallow and remain silent, watching the porn. Mishan chuckles, "And now she''s all flushed. It turns out the girls like porn as well."'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'sports'
 			end
@@ -329,7 +329,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SeePornPalevo':
 	bratrand = RAND(0,1)
 	!boyseeporn += 1
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/tv/seeporn.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'The boys watch porn and whisper to each other, casting lustful glances at you'
+	'The boys watch porn and whisper to each other, casting lustful glances at you.'
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	if bratrand = 0:
@@ -337,7 +337,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SeePornPalevo':
 		boyseeporn += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		'Zhendos suggests "<<$pcs_nickname>>, How about putting that mouth to work? Kolka told us how you entertained the guys in the park so there''s no need to act all innocent. Unless of course you want everyone to know."'
+		'Zhendos suggests, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, how about putting that mouth to work? Kolka told us how you entertained the guys in the park, so there''s no need to act all innocent. Unless of course, you want everyone to know."'
 
 		act 'Say nothing':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -345,8 +345,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SeePornPalevo':
 
 			if see_rand1 < 30:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/seeporn/sex/seepornblowbang.jpg"></center>'
 			if see_rand1 >= 30:'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/seeporn/sex/seepornbro0,<<rand(0,2)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Your silence is taken as consent, Zhendos gets his dick out and pulls your face toward it, you dutifully wrapped your lips around it and began to suck.'
-			'Your brother Kolka and Mishan also get their members out and stand around you, you start to masturbate and suck dick. You find the unusual and awkward situation a little exciting.'
+			'Your silence is taken as consent. Zhendos gets his dick out and pulls your face toward it, and you dutifully wrap your lips around it and begin to suck.'
+			'Your brother Kolka and Mishan also get their members out and stand around you. You start to masturbate and suck dick. You find the unusual and awkward situation a little exciting.'
 
 			act 'Suck':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SeePornPalevo':
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/seeporn/sex/seepornbbcum.jpg"></center>'
-				'The boys don''t last long and cum right in your face, Soon almost all of your face is covered in a layer of sperm and it''s dripping on to your clothes. The boys laugh "That''s right, good girl".'
+				'The boys don''t last long and cum right in your face. Soon, almost all of your face is covered in a layer of sperm, and it''s dripping onto your clothes. The boys laugh, "That''s right, good girl".'
 
 				act 'Escape':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'sports'
 			end
@@ -394,14 +394,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SeePornPalevo':
 			*clr & cla
 			BrotherNo = 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/reactions/fuckoff2.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Fuck off, who would believe you." Your brother looks at you then says to Zhendos "Better luck next time."'
+			'"Fuck off, who would believe you." Your brother looks at you then says to Zhendos, "Better luck next time."'
 
 			act 'Escape':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'sports'
 		end
 	elseif bratrand = 1:
 
 		'Zhendos suggests, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, are you going to serve us like you did with the kids in the park? Want to see if you can take two cocks in your mouth?"'
-		'You realise, your brother could not resist and told his friends. Hopefully only them.'
+		'You realise your brother could not resist and told his friends. Hopefully only them.'
 
 		act 'You can manage two little ones':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -409,7 +409,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SeePornPalevo':
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/seeporn/sex/seeporndouble.jpg"></center>'
 			'You dutifully kneel in front of the guys, grab their hard dicks and start to push them into your mouth.'
-			'"I told you that she would take it in the mouth like a pro, and you didn''t believe me", your brother laughs.'
+			'"I told you that she would take it in the mouth like a pro, and you didn''t believe me," your brother laughs.'
 
 			act 'Suck':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -418,7 +418,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SeePornPalevo':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/seeporn/sex/seeporndouble2.jpg"></center>'
 				'You diligently continue to suck two dicks at the same time, the guys moaning and moving their hips trying to shove them into you deeper.'
 				'Your brother is looking at you closely and with his hand down his pants, while loudly telling details about what a dirty whore you are.'
-				'Just as you feel that this situation is beginning to slow you. You unzip your brothers pants and start alternate between his cock on its own and both of his friends at the same time.'
+				'Just as you feel that this situation is beginning to slow, you unzip your brother''s pants and start alternate between his cock on its own and both of his friends at the same time.'
 				'The boys don''t last long and almost simultaneously finish on your face. Seen too much damn porn, juvenile perverts.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'group', 'incest', 'sub'
 
@@ -446,9 +446,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SeePornPalevo':
 
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/seeporn/sex/seepornbjcum<<rand(2,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'Doing nothing but close your eyes, you sit humbly on your knees, without disturbing them while they cum. Then it hits you, the pungent smell of sperm.'
-					'You feel like a hot sticky goo covers your entire face, individual droplets fall on to your neck and hair.'
-					'"This is for you, instead of face masks", laugh the boys. Real funny, you wipe your eyes and angrily stare at them.'
+					'Doing nothing but close your eyes, you sit humbly on your knees without disturbing them while they cum. Then it hits you, the pungent smell of sperm.'
+					'You feel like a hot sticky goo covers your entire face, individual droplets falling onto your neck and hair.'
+					'"This is for you, instead of face masks," laugh the boys.'
+					'"Real funny." You wipe your eyes and angrily stare at them.'
 
 					act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'sports'
 				end
@@ -462,7 +463,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SeePornPalevo':
 				BrotherNo = 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/reactions/disgust.jpg"></center>'
-				'You indignantly reject the kids. Your brother looks at you and announces "Probably for the best, your tiny peckers would only count as one cock."'
+				'You indignantly reject the kids. Your brother looks at you and announces, "Probably for the best, your tiny peckers would only count as one cock."'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'sports'
 			end

+ 27 - 35
locations/sergeihunter.qsrc

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ if huntersSergeiLove = 0 or (huntersSergeiQw >= 10 and huntersSergeiQw <= 50):
 	if huntersSergeiLove > 0 and pcs_horny <= 60 and huntersSergeisex = 0  and rand(0,2) = 0:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterlove1.4.jpg"></center>'
-		'You went to Sergei to spend time together, but instead he kisses you and playfully bites on your lip.'
+		'You go to Sergei to spend time together, but instead, he kisses you and playfully bites on your lip.'
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you," he whispers after the kiss.'
 		huntersSergeisex += rand(9,30)
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
@@ -38,9 +38,9 @@ if huntersSergeiLove = 0 or (huntersSergeiQw >= 10 and huntersSergeiQw <= 50):
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Sergei</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big174.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'Sergei is a friend of Andrei and Igor, and a member of the group of hunters that frequent the woods and swamp by Gadukino. He''s <<boyage>> years old. He is married and lives in the City Center...'
+		'Sergei is a friend of Andrei and Igor, and a member of the group of hunters that frequents the woods and swamp by Gadukino. He''s <<boyage>> years old. He is married and lives in the City Center...'
 		if huntersSergeiQw < 0:
-			'You and him have a bad relationship, because you offended him in the past.'
+			'You and him have a bad relationship because you offended him in the past.'
 		elseif huntersSergeiQw < 10:
 			'You have a normal relationship with him.'
 		elseif huntersSergeiQw < 20:
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ if huntersSergeiLove = 0 or (huntersSergeiQw >= 10 and huntersSergeiQw <= 50):
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/talk1.'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
 			if huntersSergeiQw >= 0:'You spend some time chatting with Sergei, listening to interesting stories from his life and telling some stories of your own.'
-			if huntersSergeiQw < 0:'You talk with Sergei. He seems uncomfortable, but doesn''t force you away.'
+			if huntersSergeiQw < 0:'You talk with Sergei. He seems uncomfortable but doesn''t force you away.'
 			minut += 30
 			if huntersSergeiQw < 10:huntersSergeiQw += 1
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ if huntersSergeiLove = 0 or (huntersSergeiQw >= 10 and huntersSergeiQw <= 50):
 				act 'Flirt':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt1.'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-					*nl 'You flirt playfully with Sergei. He is glad for your company, though he can'' stop himself from letting his eyes wander.'
+					*nl 'You flirt playfully with Sergei. He is glad for your company, though he can''t stop himself from letting his eyes wander.'
 					minut += 5
 					!!not using arousal as no orgasm chance
 					pcs_horny += 10
@@ -84,17 +84,17 @@ if huntersSergeiLove = 0 or (huntersSergeiQw >= 10 and huntersSergeiQw <= 50):
 
 
 					if huntersSergeiQw >= 30 and huntersKnowSlut = 0 and pcs_apprnc >= 60:
-						act 'Continue Flirt':
+						act 'Continue flirting':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss1.jpg"></center>'
-							*nl 'Suddenly he cups your chin in his hand and gives you a kiss full of passion.'
+							*nl 'Suddenly, he cups your chin in his hand and gives you a kiss full of passion.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 							gs 'stat'
 
 							act 'Answer kiss':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss2.jpg"></center>'
-								*nl 'You''ve been waiting for this and respond just as passionately. Sergei keeps kissing you and you are right there with him, returning every kiss.'
+								*nl 'You''ve been waiting for this and respond just as passionately. Sergei keeps kissing you, and you are right there with him, returning every kiss.'
 								huntersSergeiLove = 1
 								huntersSergeiQw += 1
 								pcs_mood = 100
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ if huntersSergeiLove = 0 or (huntersSergeiQw >= 10 and huntersSergeiQw <= 50):
 									act'Further':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
-										*nl '"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I want to make love to you," he says, when he finally pulls back. You answer Sergei with a kiss every bit as passionate as the one that started this. You begin to make your way back towards his room as you do so.'
+										*nl '"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I want to make love to you," he says when he finally pulls back. You answer Sergei with a kiss every bit as passionate as the one that started this. You begin to make your way back towards his room as you do so.'
 										minut += 5
 										gs 'stat'
 
@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ if huntersSergeiLove = 0 or (huntersSergeiQw >= 10 and huntersSergeiQw <= 50):
 									act'Continue':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
-										*nl '"That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>," Sergei said, when your lips finally parted. You see a look that clearly shows he wishes for more and smile.'
+										*nl '"That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>," Sergei says when your lips finally part. You see a look that clearly shows he wishes for more and smile.'
 										minut += 5
 										gs 'stat'
 
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ if huntersSergeiLove = 0 or (huntersSergeiQw >= 10 and huntersSergeiQw <= 50):
 							act 'Move away':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/reactions/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-								*nl '"Sorry, Sergei, but this isn''t what I wanted", you say. He leaves with an angry look on his face.'
+								*nl '"Sorry, Sergei, but this isn''t what I wanted," you say. He leaves with an angry look on his face.'
 								minut += 5
 								huntersSergeiQw -= 50
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ if huntersSergeiLove = 0 or (huntersSergeiQw >= 10 and huntersSergeiQw <= 50):
 					act 'Break up with Sergei':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosila.jpg"></center>'
-						*nl '"Sergei the passion is gone", you say, "I think it''s time we parted." You leave without looking back.'
+						*nl '"Sergei, the passion is gone," you say, "I think it''s time we parted." You leave without looking back.'
 						minut += 5
 						huntersSergeiLove = 0
 						huntersSergeiQw -= 100
@@ -181,36 +181,28 @@ if huntersSergeiLove = 0 or (huntersSergeiQw >= 10 and huntersSergeiQw <= 50):
 				end
 			end
 		end
-		act'Depart':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+		act 'Depart':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	end
 else
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosil.jpg"></center>'
+	*nl
 	if huntersSergeiQw < 10:
-		*clr & cla
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosil.jpg"></center>'
-		*nl
-		'You wanted to talk to Sergei, but he beat you to it, and started speaking before you could get a word in.'
-		'<<$pcs_nickname>>, I realized that our relationship had no future, and we need to stop seeing each other, " he said, and trying not to look in your direction, resolutely walked away.'
-		'"Well, maybe it''s for the best, " you think, as you leave in the other direction.'
-		minut += 5
-		huntersSergeiLove = 0
+		'You want to talk to Sergei, but he beats you to it and starts speaking before you can get a word in.'
+		'<<$pcs_nickname>>, I realized that our relationship has no future and we need to stop seeing each other, " he says and, trying not to look in your direction, resolutely walks away.'
+		'"Well, maybe it''s for the best," you think as you leave in the other direction.'
 		huntersSergeiQw -= 10
-		gs 'stat'
-
-		act 'Leave':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	else
-		*clr & cla
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosil.jpg"></center>'
-		*nl
-		'You wanted to talk to Sergei, but before you say anything he speaks instead.'
-		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I realized that our relationship has no future. You''re passion is unmatched, but I really love my family. I can''t risk that for you, " he says. He turns and walks away without saying another word, nor giving you time to say anything.'
-		'"Well, that''s how you feel is it?" you think as you stand there stunned. "Although this is probably for the best since he was married." you conclude before walking away.'
-		minut += 5
-		huntersSergeiLove = 0
+		'You want to talk to Sergei, but before you say anything, he speaks instead.'
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I realized that our relationship has no future. Your passion is unmatched, but I really love my family. I can''t risk that for you," he says. He turns and walks away without saying another word nor giving you time to say anything.'
+		'"Well, that''s how you feel is it?" you think as you stand there stunned. "Although, this is probably for the best since he is married," you conclude before walking away.'
 		huntersSergeiQw -= 50
-		gs 'stat'
-
-		act 'Leave':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	end
+	minut += 5
+	huntersSergeiLove = 0
+	gs 'stat'
+
+	act 'Leave':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
 
 --- sergeihunter ---------------------------------

+ 5 - 5
locations/serpent.qsrc

@@ -10,13 +10,13 @@ if findneck = 1:
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/gadukino/serpent/serpentintro.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You hear a whispered word coming from somewhere in the barn. "Ahhhh, I sseee the little fae mortal hasss s found my horcrux. You hold in your handsss my greatessst prizzzzze." You look around for who is talking, but don''t see anyone in the barn with you.'
-	'"Let usss make a deal, you and I. You return my prizzzze and I will teeeach you muccch about the magicssss you possssessss." You hear a scrapping sound coming from above you in the shadowy rafters.'
-	'"Who are you ? Where are you?" you yell. Looking for the owner of the strange sibilant voice.'
-	'"I am Zzathrezzz. Lord of Ssserpentsss." as the voice continues from above you see a large snake emerge out of the shadows. Outside the barn you hear Bandit start to loudly bark. Zathrez hisses in anoyance.'
+	'You hear a whispered word coming from somewhere in the barn. "Ahhhh, I sseee the little fae mortal hasss s found my horcrux. You hold in your handsss my greatessst prizzzzze." You look around for who is talking but don''t see anyone in the barn with you.'
+	'"Let usss make a deal, you and I. You return my prizzzze, and I will teeeach you muccch about the magicssss you possssessss." You hear a scraping sound coming from above you in the shadowy rafters.'
+	'"Who are you? Where are you?" you yell, looking for the owner of the strange sibilant voice.'
+	'"I am Zzathrezzz, Lord of Ssserpentsss." As the voice continues from above, you see a large snake emerge out of the shadows. Outside the barn, you hear Bandit start to loudly bark. Zathrez hisses in annoyance.'
 	'"That dog isss a noicccenccce!"'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/serpent/serpent1_0.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Now, do we deal?" the sibilant voice continues.'
+	'"Now, do we have a deal?" the sibilant voice continues.'
 	
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:

+ 44 - 53
locations/sewing.qsrc

@@ -3,15 +3,17 @@
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/sewing/kit.jpg"></center>'
-	'	You pull your sewing kit out from under your bed.'
+	'You pull your sewing kit out from under your bed.'
 	*nl
-	if tkan >= 1:
+	if tkan > 1:
 		'You have <<tkan>> pieces of sewing fabric left.'
+	elseif tkan = 1:
+		'You have 1 piece of sewing fabric left.'
 	else
 		'You have no fabric left to use as material.'
 	end
-	act'Leave':gt $loc, $loc_arg
-	act'Practice sewing (0:30)':
+	act 'Leave':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+	act 'Practice sewing (0:30)':
 		minut += 30
 		gs 'stat'
 		cla & *clr
@@ -19,23 +21,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		if pcs_sewng < 40:
 			sewng_exp += 2
 			'You practice your sewing skills.'
-			act'Finish':gt 'sewing','start'
 		else
-			'	You spend some time practicing stitches and other sewing techniques but you don''t feel like you''re getting any better.'
+			'You spend some time practicing stitches and other sewing techniques, but you don''t feel like you''re getting any better.'
 			*nl
-			'	You think you need to real projects to work on to increase your skill, either in a class or on your own.'
-			act'Finish':gt 'sewing','start'
+			'You think you need real projects to work on to increase your skill, either in a class or on your own.'
 		end
-	end
-		
+		act'Finish':gt 'sewing', 'start'
+	end		
+
 	
-	act'Sew trinkets (0:30)':
+	act 'Sew trinkets (0:30)':
 		minut += 30
 		gs 'stat'
 		cla & *clr
+		act 'Finish':gt 'sewing', 'start'
 		if tkan < 1:
-			'	You do not have any material to sew anything. You should buy some from the supermarket.'
-			act'Continue':gt 'sewing','start'
+			'You do not have any material to sew anything. You should buy some from the supermarket.'
 		else
 			sew_trinket_success = rand(1,240)
 			tkan -= 1
@@ -44,51 +45,41 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 			if sew_trinket_success > pcs_sewng*4:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/sewing/practice.jpg"></center>'
-				'	You do your best trying to sew together a trinket at a quality you can sell but somewhere along the way you mess it up. The material is ruined and you''re frustrated as hell, but at least you felt like you learned something.'
-				act'Finish':gt 'sewing','start'
-			
-			elseif tovarL = 30 and YouCanGar = 0:
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/sewing/kit.jpg"></center>'
-				'	You put together another trinket but then realize you have too many trinkets already. With a deep sense of regret, you throw it away, having no place to store it. At least you learned more about sewing...'
-				act'Finish':gt 'sewing','start'
-				
-			elseif tovarL = 30 and GarTorgItem = 100:
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/sewing/kit.jpg"></center>'
-				'	You put together another trinket but then realize you have too many trinkets already. Even the space in your father''s garage is full. With a deep sense of regret, you throw it away, having no place to store it. At least you learned more about sewing...'
-				act'Finish':gt 'sewing','start'
-			
-			elseif tovarL < 30:
-				tovarL += 1
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/sewing/trinket.jpg"></center>'
-				'	You spend some time trying to sew something together. After a half hour, you find yourself rewarded for your effort with a small trinket that''s actually of decently high quality.'
-				*nl
-				'	You wonder if you can sell it somewhere?'
-				act'Finish':gt 'sewing','start'
-				
-			elseif tovarL = 30 and GarTorgItem < 100:
-				GarTorgItem += 1
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/sewing/trinket.jpg"></center>'
-				'	You spend some time trying to sew something together. After a half hour, you find yourself rewarded for your effort with a small trinket that''s actually of decently high quality. The storage space in your room is full but you can still store at least <<100 - GarTorgItem>> in your father''s garage.'
-				*nl
-				'	You wonder how many you can sell at the train station?'
-				act'Finish':gt 'sewing','start'
+				'You do your best trying to sew together a trinket at a quality you can sell, but somewhere along the way, you mess it up. The material is ruined, and you''re frustrated as hell, but at least you feel like you learned something.'
+			else
+				if tovarL >= 30 and (YouCanGar = 0 or GarTorgItem >= 100):
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/sewing/kit.jpg"></center>'
+					'You put together another trinket but then realize you have too many trinkets already. ' + iif(YouCanGar > 0, 'Even the space in your stepfather''s garage is full. ', '') + 'With a deep sense of regret, you throw it away, having no place to store it. At least you learned more about sewing...'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/sewing/trinket.jpg"></center>'
+					*p 'You spend some time trying to sew something together. After a half hour, you find yourself rewarded for your effort with a small trinket that''s actually of decently high quality. '
+					if tovarL < 30:
+						tovarL += 1
+						'Storing it away, you figure you ' + iif(tovarL < 30, 'still have space for about <<30 - tovarL>>', 'probably don''t have room for any') + ' more of these in your room.' + iif(tovarL >= 30 and YouCanGar > 0, ' If you make any more of these, you''ll need to start storing them in your stepfather''s garage.', '')
+						*nl
+						'You wonder if you can sell them somewhere.'
+					else
+						GarTorgItem += 1
+						'The storage space in your room is full, but you can still store it in your stepfather''s garage, ' + iif(GarTorgItem < 100, 'along with probably another <<100 - GarTorgItem>>.', 'though it doesn''t look like there''s space for any more beyond that there either.')
+						*nl
+						'You wonder how many you can sell at the train station.'
+					end
+				end
 			end
 		end
 	end
-	if pcs_sewng >= 50:
-		act'Resize some of your clothes':gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', 'resize'
-	elseif pcs_sewng < 50:
-		act'Resize some of your clothes':msg'	You aren''t good enough at sewing to do this.'
-	elseif tkan < 1:
-		act'Resize some of your clothes':msg'	You don''t have any sewing materials left to do this. Maybe you should buy some more.'
+	act 'Resize some of your clothes':
+		if tkan < 1:
+			msg'You don''t have any sewing materials left to do this. Maybe you should buy some more.'
+		else
+			if pcs_sewng < 50:
+				msg 'You aren''t good enough at sewing to do this.'
+			else
+				gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', 'resize'
+			end
+		end
 	end
 end
 			
-
-!!gt $loc, $loc_arg
-
-!!tovarL
-!!sewng_exp += rand(pcs_intel/20, pcs_intel/10)
-
 --- sewing ---------------------------------
 

+ 48 - 128
locations/sex.qsrc

@@ -49,10 +49,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'minet':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexrand/minet<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
 
-	if textrand = 1:'You take his member in your hand and pull his foreskin back, exposing the shiny head underneath. Giving him a sweet smile, you close your lips around it and run your tongue over the tip. You then continue to suck his cock vigorously, teasing him with your tongue and fondling his balls with your fingers. He moans blissfully while you service him with your mouth, not taking his eyes from you.'
-	if textrand = 2:'You kneel down and place your hand in on his nearly fully erect trunk. You smile at him shyly and mutter: "That''s a nice cock you have there..." before closing your lips around the tip and sucking him off.'
-	if textrand = 3:'You dart your tongue all over his shaft, licking him eagerly all the way from the tip of his cock, to and including his testicles. Then your tender lips close around the well-engorged head, and you slowly take more and more of his length down your throat while you stroke the rest of his shaft that doesn''t fit in your mouth with your hand.'
-	if textrand = 4:'You wrap your delicate fingers around his hard cock and guide it to your mouth, closing your lips around the tip. You try to take as much of his length down your throat as you can, gently caressing your own clit while you service him with your mouth.'
+	if textrand = 1:'You take his member in your hand and pull his foreskin back, exposing the shiny head underneath. Giving him a sweet smile, you close your lips around it and run your tongue over the tip. You then continue to suck his cock vigorously, teasing him with your tongue and fondling his balls with your fingers. He moans blissfully while you service him with your mouth, not taking his eyes off you.'
+	if textrand = 2:'You kneel down and place your hand on his nearly fully erect trunk. You smile at him shyly and mutter, "That''s a nice cock you have there..." before closing your lips around the tip and sucking him off.'
+	if textrand = 3:'You dart your tongue all over his shaft, licking him eagerly all the way from the tip of his cock to and including his testicles. Then your tender lips close around the well-engorged head, and you slowly take more and more of his length down your throat while you stroke the rest of his shaft that doesn''t fit in your mouth with your hand.'
+	if textrand = 4:'You wrap your delicate fingers around his hard cock and guide it to your mouth, closing your lips around the tip. You try to take as much of his length down your throat as you can, gently caressing your own clit while you service him.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -65,20 +65,24 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'kuni':
 	cls
-	sexvar -= 1
+	if BlowBan > 0 and MissionBan > 0 and CowgirlBan > 0 and DoggyBan > 0 and SidewaysBan > 0 and AnalBan > 0:
+		!! If no other sex acts are usable, reduce sexvar by 1 here to avoid the game getting stuck
+		sexvar -= 1
+	else
+		!! A man wouldn''t generally get closer to cumming from eating someone out, at least to the extent he
+		!! would from a blowjob, vaginal, or anal, so only reduce sexvar if he''s already on the edge
+		if sexvar = 1:sexvar = 0
+	end
+
 	gs 'dinsex2', 'stamina_npc'
 	pos = 2
 
-	if sxkuni = 0:
-		sxkuni = 1
-	end
-
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexrand/kuni<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
 
 	if textrand = 1:'He places gentle kisses and licks all across your thighs, slowly working his way to your sweet slit. When he reaches it, he eagerly thrusts his tongue inside you as far it will go, lapping up your juices enthusiastically.'
-	if textrand = 2:'He immediately thrusts his tongue deep inside your pussy, and moves it around as much as he can. He''s completely ignoring your clitoris though, and the devious glint in his eyes makes you believe he''s doing that on purpose. You enthusiastically rub your groin against his face, in an attempt to get yourself off.'
+	if textrand = 2:'He immediately thrusts his tongue deep inside your pussy and moves it around as much as he can. He''s completely ignoring your clitoris though, and the devious glint in his eyes makes you believe he''s doing that on purpose. You enthusiastically rub your groin against his face in an attempt to get yourself off.'
 	if textrand = 3:'With his nose against your clitoris and his tongue plunged deep inside you, he licks you enthusiastically. Then he moves away from you and guides your ass to his mouth, eagerly licking your sphincter and trying to squeeze his tongue in. It feels heavenly, and you moan loudly while you thrust your hips against his face, encouraging him to go on.'
-	if textrand = 4:'His tongue gently begins to lick your pussy lips. "Oh my!" you think to yourself, enjoying his touch more and more. When he pays more attention to your clitoris you have to pull away from him for a moment... wow, that''s intense!'
+	if textrand = 4:'His tongue gently begins to lick your pussy lips. "Oh my!" you think to yourself, enjoying his touch more and more. When he pays more attention to your clitoris, you have to pull away from him for a moment... wow, that''s intense!'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -89,7 +93,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kuni':
 	if sexvar = 0:gs 'sex', 'end'
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] = 'vag':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'vag' or $ARGS[0] = 'nae' or $ARGS[0] = 'rak' or $ARGS[0] = 'bok':
 	cls
 	if sexstart = 0:sexstart = 1 & sexvar = rand(3,7)
 	sexvar -= 1
@@ -102,98 +106,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vag':
 		sxsex = 1
 	end
 
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexrand/vag<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexrand/<<$ARGS[0]>><<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
 	
-	if textrand = 1:'He slowly penetrates you, and keeps thrusting until most of his length is buried inside you. You eagerly kiss him when you see the look of ecstacy on his face, and wrap your arms around him while he thrusts his hips against yours.'
-	if textrand = 2:'His hard cock slides inside your wet cunt easily, and you feel the engorged head of his cock slowly part your insides when it goes deeper and deeper. You can''t help but rub your clit, while you encourage him to fuck you harder.'
-	if textrand = 3:'He doesn''t stop until his cock bottoms out in you, and then proceeds to fuck you with the entire length of his impressive shaft. His thrusts become more and more intense, and soon the sound of his skin slapping against yours fills the room.'
-	if textrand = 4:'Your wet pussy eagerly takes his cock in, and you hear some embarrassing sopping sounds when he proceeds to fuck your pussy enthusiastically. You must''ve wanted him pretty badly, if you got this wet...'
-
-	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10
-	gs 'stat'
-
-	if sexvar < 0:sexvar = 0
-	if sexvar = 1:'<br>The man groans that he will cum soon.'
-	if sexvar > 0:cumprecheck = 1 & gs 'cum_manage' & xgt 'sex', 'var'
-	if sexvar = 0:gs 'sex', 'end'
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = 'nae':
-	cls
-	if sexstart = 0:sexstart = 1 & sexvar = rand(3,7)
-	sexvar -= 1
-	gs 'dinsex2', 'stamina_npc'
-	pos = 4
-
-	if sxsex = 0:
-		if svidboysex = 1:sexa += 1
-
-		sxsex = 1
-	end
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexrand/nae<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-
-	if textrand = 1:'He slowly penetrates you, and keeps thrusting until most of his length is buried inside you. You eagerly kiss him when you see the look of ecstacy on his face, and wrap your arms around him while he thrusts his hips against yours.'
-	if textrand = 2:'His hard cock slides inside your wet cunt easily, and you feel the engorged head of his cock slowly part your insides when it goes deeper and deeper. You can''t help but rub your clit, while you encourage him to fuck you harder.'
-	if textrand = 3:'He doesn''t stop until his cock bottoms out in you, and then proceeds to fuck you with the entire length of his impressive shaft. His thrusts become more and more intense, and soon the sound of his skin slapping against yours fills the room.'
-	if textrand = 4:'Your wet pussy eagerly takes his cock in, and you hear some embarrassing sopping sounds when he proceeds to fuck your pussy enthusiastically. You must''ve wanted him pretty badly, if you got this wet...'
-
-	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10
-	gs 'stat'
-
-	if sexvar < 0:sexvar = 0
-	if sexvar = 1:'<br>The man groans that he will cum soon.'
-	if sexvar > 0:cumprecheck = 1 & gs 'cum_manage' & xgt 'sex', 'var'
-	if sexvar = 0:gs 'sex', 'end'
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = 'rak':
-	cls
-	if sexstart = 0:sexstart = 1 & sexvar = rand(3,7)
-	sexvar -= 1
-	gs 'dinsex2', 'stamina_npc'
-	pos = 5
-
-	if sxsex = 0:
-		if svidboysex = 1:sexa += 1
-		sxsex = 1
-	end
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexrand/rak<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-
-	if textrand = 1:'He slowly penetrates you, and keeps thrusting until most of his length is buried inside you. You eagerly kiss him when you see the look of ecstacy on his face, and wrap your arms around him while he thrusts his hips against yours.'
-	if textrand = 2:'His hard cock slides inside your wet cunt easily, and you feel the engorged head of his cock slowly part your insides when it goes deeper and deeper. You can''t help but rub your clit, while you encourage him to fuck you harder.'
-	if textrand = 3:'He doesn''t stop until his cock bottoms out in you, and then proceeds to fuck you with the entire length of his impressive shaft. His thrusts become more and more intense, and soon the sound of his skin slapping against yours fills the room.'
-	if textrand = 4:'Your wet pussy eagerly takes his cock in, and you hear some embarrassing sopping sounds when he proceeds to fuck your pussy enthusiastically. You must''ve wanted him pretty badly, if you got this wet...'
-
-	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10
-	gs 'stat'
-
-	if sexvar < 0:sexvar = 0
-	if sexvar = 1:'<br>The man groans that he will cum soon.'
-	if sexvar > 0:cumprecheck = 1 & gs 'cum_manage' & xgt 'sex', 'var'
-	if sexvar = 0:gs 'sex', 'end'
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = 'bok':
-	cls
-	if sexstart = 0:sexstart = 1 & sexvar = rand(3,7)
-	sexvar -= 1
-	gs 'dinsex2', 'stamina_npc'
-	pos = 6
-
-	if sxsex = 0:
-		if svidboysex = 1:sexa += 1
-
-		sxsex = 1
-	end
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexrand/bok<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-	
-	if textrand = 1:'He slowly penetrates you, and keeps thrusting until most of his length is buried inside you. You eagerly kiss him when you see the look of ecstacy on his face, and wrap your arms around him while he thrusts his hips against yours.'
-	if textrand = 2:'His hard cock slides inside your wet cunt easily, and you feel the engorged head of his cock slowly part your insides when it goes deeper and deeper. You can''t help but rub your clit, while you encourage him to fuck you harder.'
-	if textrand = 3:'He doesn''t stop until his cock bottoms out in you, and then proceeds to fuck you with the entire length of his impressive shaft. His thrusts become more and more intense, and soon the sound of his skin slapping against yours fills the room.'
-	if textrand = 4:'Your wet pussy eagerly takes his cock in, and you hear some embarrassing sopping sounds when he proceeds to fuck your pussy enthusiastically. You must''ve wanted him pretty badly, if you got this wet...'
+	if textrand = 1:'He slowly penetrates you and keeps thrusting until most of his length is buried inside you. You eagerly kiss him when you see the look of ecstasy on his face and wrap your arms around him while he thrusts his hips against yours.'
+	if textrand = 2:'His hard cock slides inside your wet cunt easily, and you feel the engorged head slowly part your insides when it goes deeper and deeper. You can''t help but rub your clit, while you encourage him to fuck you harder.'
+	if textrand = 3:'He doesn''t stop until his cock bottoms out in you and then proceeds to fuck you with the entire length of his impressive shaft. His thrusts become more and more intense, and soon, the sound of his skin slapping against yours fills the room.'
+	if textrand = 4:'Your wet pussy eagerly takes his cock in, and you hear some embarrassing sopping sounds when he proceeds to fuck your pussy enthusiastically. You must''ve wanted him pretty badly if you got this wet...'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -210,7 +128,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal':
 	if sexstart = 0:sexstart = 1 & sexvar = rand(3,7)
 	sexvar -= 1
 	gs 'dinsex2', 'stamina_npc'
-	pos = 7
+	pos = 4
 
 	if sxanal = 0:
 		if svidboysex = 1:anala += 1
@@ -220,10 +138,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexrand/anal<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
 
-	if textrand = 1:'You spread your buttocks invitingly, inviting the man to fuck your ass. He does not hesitate and guides his cock to your puckered sphincter, slowly penetrating you further and further with each thrust. He''s a bit rough about it, making you squeal loudly with every thrust.'
-	if textrand = 2:'His cock slowly but surely finds its way into your ass. After a while he bottoms out in you, and you squeeze your ass around the base of his cock testily. The tightness of your sphincter around him makes his cock pulse even harder, and he groans: "Oh yea! Keep doing that! That feels great... don''t stop!"'
-	if textrand = 3:'You feel something thick and hard press against your sphincter, and enter it. You cry out in pain but he pays no attention to you, and begins to fuck you enthusiastically. Slowly your whimpers of pain become moans of pleasure, and despite the pain you greatly enjoy him fucking your ass.'
-	if textrand = 4:'You spread your buttocks invitingly, inviting the man to fuck your ass. He does not hesitate and guides his cock to your puckered sphincter, slowly penetrating you further and further with each thrust. He''s a bit rough about it, making you squeal loudly with every thrust.'
+	if textrand = 1:'You spread your buttocks enticingly, inviting the man to fuck your ass. He does not hesitate and guides his cock to your puckered sphincter, slowly penetrating you further and further. He''s a bit rough about it, making you squeal loudly with every thrust.'
+	if textrand = 2:'His cock slowly but surely finds its way into your ass. After a while, he bottoms out in you, and you squeeze your ass around the base of his cock testily. The tightness of your sphincter around him makes his cock pulse even harder, and he groans, "Oh yea! Keep doing that! That feels great... don''t stop!"'
+	if textrand = 3:'You feel something thick and hard press against your sphincter and enter it. You cry out in pain, but he pays no attention to you and begins to fuck you enthusiastically. Slowly, your whimpers become moans of pleasure, and despite the pain, you greatly enjoy him fucking your ass.'
+	if textrand = 4:'You spread your buttocks enticingly, inviting the man to fuck your ass. He does not hesitate and guides his cock to your puckered sphincter, slowly penetrating you further and further. He''s a bit rough about it, making you squeal loudly with every thrust.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -236,26 +154,28 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 	cla
-	sexstart = 0
-	sexvar = 0
-	sxkuni = 0
-	sxbj = 0
-	sxsex = 0
-	sxanal = 0
-	SexTypeCheck = 0
-	BlowBan = 0
-	CooneyBan = 0
-	MissionBan = 0
-	CowgirlBan = 0
-	DoggyBan = 0
-	SidewaysBan = 0
-	AnalBan = 0
-	dick = 0
-
-	if pos < 3:
+	killvar 'sexstart'
+	killvar 'sexvar'
+	killvar 'sxbj'
+	killvar 'sxsex'
+	killvar 'sxanal'
+	killvar 'SexTypeCheck'
+	killvar 'BlowBan'
+	killvar 'CooneyBan'
+	killvar 'MissionBan'
+	killvar 'CowgirlBan'
+	killvar 'DoggyBan'
+	killvar 'SidewaysBan'
+	killvar 'AnalBan'
+	killvar 'dick'
+
+	if pos = 1:
 		spafinloc = 12
 		'He groans loudly, and you feel his hard cock erupting in your mouth. You swallow it obediently, figuring that is what he wants you to do.'
-	elseif pos < 7:
+	elseif pos = 2:
+		spafinloc = 9
+		'Stroking himself while he pleasures you, he groans loudly, spraying his seed on the floor. Some of it splatters against your feet as well.'
+	elseif pos = 3:
 		spafinloc = 0
 		cuminside = 1
 		'He groans loudly, spraying his seed deep inside your pussy.'
@@ -269,7 +189,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 		orgasm += 1
 		'You feel so horny after bringing him to orgasm, you''re very close to having an orgasm also! You close your eyes and surrender yourself to the moment, quickly rubbing yourself to completion.'
 	end
-	if cuminside = 1: gs 'cuminsidereact'
+	if cuminside = 1: killvar 'cuminside' & gs 'cuminsidereact'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 
@@ -286,7 +206,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 		if picrand = 89: killvar 'picrand' & gt 'bed', 'start'
 		killvar 'picrand'
 		if svidboysex = 1:
-			svidboysex = 0
+			killvar 'svidboysex'
 			gt $svidboy_home, $svidboy_home_arg
 		end
 

+ 14 - 83
locations/sexdvanadva.qsrc

@@ -14,143 +14,74 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'var':
+	cla
+	*clr
+	sexvar += 1
+
 	sexdvarand = rand(0, 6)
 
 	if picrand = 11:sexdvarand = rand(0, 5)
 	if picrand = 14:sexdvarand = rand(0, 4)
 
 	if sexdvarand = 0:
-		cla
-		*clr
-		sexvar += 1
-
-		if dvdvsxbj = 0:
-			dvdvsxbj = 1
-		end
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexdvanadva/minet<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
 		'The two of you suck their cocks.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub'
-		gs 'stat'
-
-		if sexvar < 3:act 'More':xgt 'sexdvanadva', 'var'
-		if sexvar >= 3:act 'Finish':gt 'sexdvanadva', 'end'
 	elseif sexdvarand = 1:
-		cla
-		*clr
-		sexvar += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexdvanadva/vag<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
 		'While she enjoys a stiff cock in her pussy, you are not left wanting for attention.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 10, 'sub'
-		gs 'stat'
-
-		if sexvar < 3:act 'More':xgt 'sexdvanadva', 'var'
-		if sexvar >= 3:act 'Finish':gt 'sexdvanadva', 'end'
 	elseif sexdvarand = 2:
-		cla
-		*clr
-		sexvar += 1
-
-		if dvdvsxsex = 0:
-			dvdvsxsex = 1
-		end
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexdvanadva/uvag<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
 		'He thrusts into you. His cock sends waves of pleasure over your body.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub'
-		gs 'stat'
-
-		if sexvar < 3:act 'More':xgt 'sexdvanadva', 'var'
-		if sexvar >= 3:act 'Finish':gt 'sexdvanadva', 'end'
 	elseif sexdvarand = 3:
-		cla
-		*clr
-		sexvar += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexdvanadva/anal<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
 		'You enjoy the sight of a cock in her ass, but you are mostly too distracted by the cock in your mouth.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub'
-		gs 'stat'
-		
-		if sexvar < 3:act 'More':xgt 'sexdvanadva', 'var'
-		if sexvar >= 3:act 'Finish':gt 'sexdvanadva', 'end'
 	elseif sexdvarand = 4:
-		cla
-		*clr
-		sexvar += 1
-
-		if dvdvsxanal = 0:
-			dvdvsxanal = 1
-		end
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexdvanadva/uanal<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'When he enters your backdoor it hurts a little, but soon the pain goes away. Pleasure takes its place, as he slowly moves back and forth, stretching your hole.'
+		'When he enters your backdoor, it hurts a little, but soon, the pain goes away. Pleasure takes its place, as he slowly moves back and forth, stretching your hole.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub'
-		gs 'stat'
-		
-		if sexvar < 3:act 'More':xgt 'sexdvanadva', 'var'
-		if sexvar >= 3:act 'Finish':gt 'sexdvanadva', 'end'
 	elseif sexdvarand = 5:
-		cla
-		*clr
-		sexvar += 1
-
-		if dvdvsxsex = 0:
-			dvdvsxsex = 1
-		end
-
-		if dvdvsxanal = 0:
-			dvdvsxanal = 1
-		end
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexdvanadva/udp<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
 		'Both men enter you at the same time. The feeling is almost too intense. Your moans of pleasure urge them on.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub'
 		minut -= 10
-		gs 'stat'
-		
-		if sexvar < 3:act 'More':xgt 'sexdvanadva', 'var'
-		if sexvar >= 3:act 'Finish':gt 'sexdvanadva', 'end'
 	elseif sexdvarand = 6:
-		cla
-		*clr
-		sexvar += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexdvanadva/dp<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'She has both men fucking her. It makes you feel a little envious, as you watch playing with yourself.'
+		'She has both men fucking her. It makes you feel a little envious as you watch, playing with yourself.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10, 'sub'
-		gs 'stat'
-
-		if sexvar < 3:act 'More':xgt 'sexdvanadva', 'var'
-		if sexvar >= 3:act 'Finish':gt 'sexdvanadva', 'end'
 	end
+
+	gs 'stat'
+	if sexvar < 3:act 'More':xgt 'sexdvanadva', 'var'
+	if sexvar >= 3:act 'Finish':gt 'sexdvanadva', 'end'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	minut += 10
-	dvdvsxbj = 0
-	dvdvsxsex = 0
-	dvdvsxanal = 0
 	gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Random Guy', rand(18,45)
 	gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 	spafinloc = 12
 	gs 'cum_manage'
-	sexvar = 0
+	killvar 'sexvar'
+	killvar 'sexdvarand'
 
-	if pcs_horny >= 80:
-		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
-	end
+	if pcs_horny >= 80:$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexdvanadva/cum<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'They spill semen all over both of you. You lick it of each other, and share a deep kiss, before you both swallow.'
+	'They spill semen all over both of you. You lick it off each other and share a deep kiss before you both swallow.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'

+ 28 - 149
locations/sexdvoe.qsrc

@@ -60,22 +60,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'var':
 	sexstart = 1
 	sexvar = rand(3,6)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexdvoe/kiss.jpg"></center>'
-	'After some kissing it is time to move on to the next stage.'
+	'After some kissing, it is time to move on to the next stage.'
 	xgt 'sexdvoe', 'menu'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
+	*clr
+	sexvar -= 1
+	gs 'dinsex2', 'stamina_npc'
 
 	!blowjob
 	if sexdvoeloc = 0:
-		*clr
-		sexvar -= 1
-		gs 'dinsex2', 'stamina_npc'
-
-		if dvsxbj = 0:
-			dvsxbj = 1
-		end
-		
 		if sexvar > 0:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexdvoe/minet<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
 		else 
@@ -86,28 +81,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10
 		gs 'stat'
 		
-		if pcs_horny >= 80:
-			$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-			$orgasm_txt = 'You have an orgasm.'
-		end
-		if sexvar = 1:'<br>They indicate that they will cum soon.'
-		if sexvar > 0:xgt 'sexdvoe', 'menu'
-		if sexvar = 0:gs 'sexdvoe', 'end'
-		
 	!double penetration
 	elseif sexdvoeloc < 3:
-		*clr
-		sexvar -= 1
-		gs 'dinsex2', 'stamina_npc'
-
-		if dvsxsex = 0:
-			dvsxsex = 1
-		end
-
-		if dvsxanal = 0:
-			dvsxanal = 1
-		end
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexdvoe/dp<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
 		if sameboy = 1:
 			'Both of them fuck you, one of them your ass, the other your pussy. The double friction gives you great pleasure as they are pumping in and out of your body in tandem.'
@@ -140,29 +115,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 			cumprecheck = 1
 			if $knownboy[1] = 1:gs 'cum_call', '', $boy[1], 1 else gs 'cum_call', '', $boy[1]
 		end
-
-		if pcs_horny >= 80:
-			$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-			$orgasm_txt = 'You have an orgasm.'
-		end
-		if sexvar = 1:'<br>They indicate that they will cum soon.'
-		if sexvar > 0:xgt 'sexdvoe', 'menu'
-		if sexvar = 0:gs 'sexdvoe', 'end'
 			
 	!spitroast, pussy
 	elseif sexdvoeloc < 5:
-		*clr
-		sexvar -= 1
-		gs 'dinsex2', 'stamina_npc'
-
-		if dvsxbj = 0:
-			dvsxbj = 1
-		end
-
-		if dvsxsex = 0:
-			dvsxsex = 1
-		end
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexdvoe/vag<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
 		if sameboy = 1:
 			'While one guy is fucking your pussy, you diligently suck off the second.'
@@ -195,30 +150,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 			cumprecheck = 1
 			if $knownboy[1] = 1:gs 'cum_call', '', $boy[1], 1 else gs 'cum_call', '', $boy[1]
 		end
-
-		if pcs_horny >= 80:
-			$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-			$orgasm_txt = 'You have an orgasm.'
-			
-		end
-		if sexvar = 1:'<br>They indicate that they will cum soon.'
-		if sexvar > 0:xgt 'sexdvoe', 'menu'
-		if sexvar = 0:gs 'sexdvoe', 'end'
 		
 	!spitroast, ass
 	else
-		*clr
-		sexvar -= 1
-		gs 'dinsex2', 'stamina_npc'
-
-		if dvsxbj = 0:
-			dvsxbj = 1
-		end
-
-		if dvsxanal = 0:
-			dvsxanal = 1
-		end
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexdvoe/anal<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
 		if sameboy = 1:
 			'While one guy is fucking your ass, you diligently suck off the second.'
@@ -226,46 +160,40 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub'
 			gs 'boyStat', $boy[1]
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub'
-			minut -= 10
-			gs 'stat'
 		elseif sexdvoeloc = 3:
 			'While <<$boydesc[0]>> is fucking your ass, you diligently suck off <<$boydesc[1]>>.'
 			gs 'boyStat', $boy[0]
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub'
 			gs 'boyStat', $boy[1]
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub'
-			minut -= 10
-			gs 'stat'
 		else
 			'While <<$boydesc[1]>> is fucking your ass, you diligently suck off <<$boydesc[0]>>.'
 			gs 'boyStat', $boy[1]
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub'
 			gs 'boyStat', $boy[0]
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub'
-			minut -= 10
-			gs 'stat'
 		end
 
-		if pcs_horny >= 80:
-			$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-			$orgasm_txt = 'You have an orgasm.'
-		end
-		if sexvar = 1:'<br>They indicate that they will cum soon.'
-		if sexvar > 0:xgt 'sexdvoe', 'menu'
-		if sexvar = 0:gs 'sexdvoe', 'end'
+		minut -= 10
+		gs 'stat'
+	end
+
+	if pcs_horny >= 80:
+		$orgasm_or = 'custom'
+		$orgasm_txt = 'You have an orgasm.'
 	end
+	if sexvar = 1:'<br>They indicate that they will cum soon.'
+	if sexvar > 0:xgt 'sexdvoe', 'menu'
+	if sexvar = 0:gs 'sexdvoe', 'end'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 	cla
 	gs 'sweat', 'add', 10
 	minut += 10
-	dvsxbj = 0
-	dvsxsex = 0
-	dvsxanal = 0
-	sexvar = 0
-	sameboy = 0
-	sexstart = 0
+	killvar 'sexvar'
+	killvar 'sameboy'
+	killvar 'sexstart'
 	if sexdvoeloc = 0:
 		temp = rand(0,5)
 		if temp = 0:
@@ -283,114 +211,65 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 		else 
 			if $knownboy[1] = 1:gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy[1], 1 else gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy[1]
 		end
-		'With a groan they both cum, mostly in your mouth, but it may have gotten on your face too.'
-		
-		gs 'arousal', 'end'
-		gs 'stat'
-		
+		'With a groan, they both cum, mostly in your mouth, but some may have gotten on your face too.'
 	elseif sexdvoeloc = 1:
 		if $knownboy[0] = 1:gs 'cum_call', '', $boy[0], 1 else gs 'cum_call', '', $boy[0]
 		if $knownboy[1] = 1:gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy[1], 1 else gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy[1]
 		if sameboy = 1:
 			'They groan, and you feel the copious amount of their seed they both pump inside your body at the same time.'
-			
-			gs 'arousal', 'end'
-			gs 'stat'
-			
 		else
-			'They both groan, and you feel as <<$boydesc[0]>> pump your pussy full of his seed, while <<$boydesc[1]>>''s semen is released in your ass.'
-			
-			gs 'arousal', 'end'
-			gs 'stat'
-			
+			'They both groan, and you feel <<$boydesc[0]>> pump your pussy full of his seed, while <<$boydesc[1]>>''s semen is released in your ass.'
 		end
 	elseif sexdvoeloc = 2:
 		if $knownboy[1] = 1:gs 'cum_call', '', $boy[1], 1 else gs 'cum_call', '', $boy[1]
 		if $knownboy[0] = 1:gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy[0], 1 else gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy[0]
 		if sameboy = 1:
 			'They groan, and you feel the copious amount of their seed they both pump inside your body at the same time.'
-			
-			gs 'arousal', 'end'
-			gs 'stat'
-			
 		else
-			'They both groan, and you feel as <<$boydesc[1]>> pump your pussy full of his seed, while <<$boydesc[0]>>''s semen is released in your ass.'
-			
-			gs 'arousal', 'end'
-			gs 'stat'
-			
+			'They both groan, and you feel <<$boydesc[1]>> pump your pussy full of his seed, while <<$boydesc[0]>>''s semen is released in your ass.'
 		end
 	elseif sexdvoeloc = 3:
 		if $knownboy[0] = 1:gs 'cum_call', '', $boy[0], 1 else gs 'cum_call', '', $boy[0]
 		if $knownboy[1] = 1:gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy[1], 1 else gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy[1]
 		if sameboy = 1:
 			'They groan, and you have to swallow one of the <<$boydesc[0]>>''s seed while the other pumps your pussy full of his own.'
-			
-			gs 'arousal', 'end'
-			gs 'stat'
-			
 		else
 			'They both groan, and you have to swallow <<$boydesc[1]>>''s seed while <<$boydesc[0]>> pumps your pussy full of his own.'
-			
-			gs 'arousal', 'end'
-			gs 'stat'
-			
 		end
 	elseif sexdvoeloc = 4:
 		if $knownboy[1] = 1:gs 'cum_call', '', $boy[1], 1 else gs 'cum_call', '', $boy[1]
 		if $knownboy[0] = 1:gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy[0], 1 else gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy[0]
 		if sameboy = 1:
 			'They groan, and you have to swallow one of the <<$boydesc[0]>>''s seed while the other pumps your pussy full of his own.'
-			
-			gs 'arousal', 'end'
-			gs 'stat'
-			
 		else
 			'They both groan, and you have to swallow <<$boydesc[0]>>''s seed while <<$boydesc[1]>> pumps your pussy full of his own.'
-			
-			gs 'arousal', 'end'
-			gs 'stat'
-			
 		end
 	elseif sexdvoeloc = 5:
 		if $knownboy[0] = 1:gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy[0], 1 else gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy[0]
 		if $knownboy[1] = 1:gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy[1], 1 else gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy[1]
 		if sameboy = 1:
 			'They groan at the same time, and you feel the taste of one of the guys as he cums inside your mouth, while the other one pumps your ass full of his own semen.'
-			
-			gs 'arousal', 'end'
-			gs 'stat'
-			
 		else
 			'They groan at the same time, and you feel the taste of <<$boydesc[1]>>''s seed as he cums inside your mouth, while <<$boydesc[0]>> pumps your ass full of his semen.'
-			
-			gs 'arousal', 'end'
-			gs 'stat'
-			
 		end
 	else
 		if $knownboy[1] = 1:gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy[1], 1 else gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy[1]
 		if $knownboy[0] = 1:gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy[0], 1 else gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy[0]
 		if sameboy = 1:
 			'They groan at the same time, and you feel the taste of one of the guys as he cums inside your mouth, while the other one pumps your ass full of his own semen.'
-			
-			gs 'arousal', 'end'
-			gs 'stat'
-			
 		else
-			'They groan at the same time, and you feel the taste of <<$boydesc[0]>>''s seed as he cums inside your mouth, while <<$boydesc[1]>> pumps your ass full of his semen.'
-			
-			gs 'arousal', 'end'
-			gs 'stat'
-			
+			'They groan at the same time, and you feel the taste of <<$boydesc[0]>>''s seed as he cums inside your mouth, while <<$boydesc[1]>> pumps your ass full of his semen.'	
 		end
 	end
 
-	if pcs_horny >= 80:
-		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
-	end
+	killvar 'sexdvoeloc'
+
+	gs 'arousal', 'end'
+	gs 'stat'
+	
+	if pcs_horny >= 80:$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 
-	if picrand = 29:'When it ends boss says that you did well and today you are free and can go.'
+	if picrand = 29:'When it ends, boss says that you did well and today you are free and can go.'
 	if picrand = 39:'Then <<$boydescA>> throws you out of the apartment.'
 	killvar 'knownboy'
 	killvar 'knwn'

+ 97 - 109
locations/sexm.qsrc

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> kisses you on the lips, while his hand squeezes your ass.'
 				elseif loverdays[lover_number] >= 3:
 					loverrelation[lover_number] -= 2
-					'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> kisses you on the lips and then pulls away mumbling irritably: "Not much happening, so far."'
+					'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> kisses you on the lips and then pulls away mumbling irritably, "Not much happening, so far."'
 				end
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 1:
 				if loverdays[lover_number] < 10:
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> kisses you goodbye on the lips, hugging your waist.'
 				elseif loverdays[lover_number] >= 10:
 					loverrelation[lover_number] -= 2
-					'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> kisses you goodbye on the lips and asks: "Maybe it''s time we took things to the next level?"'
+					'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> kisses you goodbye on the lips and asks, "Maybe it''s time we took things to the next level?"'
 				end
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 0:
 				if loverdays[lover_number] < 20:
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> kisses you goodbye on the lips while squeezing your ass with both hands.'
 				elseif loverdays[lover_number] >= 3:
 					loverrelation[lover_number] -= 3
-					'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> kisses you on the lips, then pulls away from the kiss muttering in exasperation: "No sex today, huh?"'
+					'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> kisses you on the lips, then pulls away from the kiss muttering in exasperation, "No sex today, huh?"'
 				end
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 1:
 				if loverdays[lover_number] < 10:
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> kisses you goodbye on the lips, hugging your waist.'
 				elseif loverdays[lover_number] >= 10:
 					loverrelation[lover_number] -= 2
-					'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> kisses you goodbye on the lips and says: "Okay, I can live one day without sex.".'
+					'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> kisses you goodbye on the lips and says, "Okay, I can live one day without sex.".'
 				end
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 0:
 				if loverdays[lover_number] < 20:
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> seems slightly annoyed. "What are you, a holy virgin?"'
 				elseif loverdays[lover_number] >= 3:
 					loverrelation[lover_number] -= 3
-					'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> seems irritated "So you do not even want to kiss? Oh well."'
+					'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> seems irritated. "So you do not even want to kiss? Oh well."'
 				end
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 1:
 				if loverdays[lover_number] < 10:
@@ -108,10 +108,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			if haraklover[lover_number] = 2:
 				if loverdays[lover_number] < 3:
 					loverrelation[lover_number] -= 2
-					'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> is annoyed and tells you to go fuck yourself'
+					'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> is annoyed and tells you to go fuck yourself.'
 				elseif loverdays[lover_number] >= 3:
 					loverrelation[lover_number] -= 4
-					'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> is dissapointed and asks " What are you afraid of?"'
+					'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> is disappointed and asks, "What are you afraid of?"'
 				end
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 1:
 				if loverdays[lover_number] < 10:
@@ -153,12 +153,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					act 'Go to your apartment': gt 'din_npc', 'go_straight_home'
 
 				elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 1:
-					'"Well then, see you, I''ll call you," he said quietly and left.'
+					'"Well then, see you, I''ll call you," he says quietly and leaves.'
 
 					act 'Go to your apartment': gt 'din_npc', 'go_straight_home'
 
 				elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 2:
-					'"If your husband is in the apartment, maybe you can climb a little higher, perhaps up to the attic?" he says, with a sly grin.'
+					'"If your husband is in the apartment, maybe you can climb a little higher, perhaps up to the attic?" he says with a sly grin.'
 
 					act 'Refuse':
 						loverrelation[lover_number] -= 1
@@ -197,7 +197,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'room':
 
 	if haraklover[lover_number] = 2:
 		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> grabs you and rudely pushes you on your back. He starts to kiss you passionately and tries to take off your clothes.'
-		'Finally <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> won the difficult battle with your bra straps.'
+		'Finally, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> won the difficult battle with your bra straps.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -213,8 +213,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'room':
 					loverrelation[lover_number] += 3
 					gt 'sexm', 'minet'
 				end
-
-				act 'I don''t want to do this, let''s try something else':gt 'sexm', 'variant'
 			elseif sexrand = 1:
 				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I want your ass."'
 
@@ -223,29 +221,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'room':
 					loverrelation[lover_number] += 5
 					gt 'sexm', 'anal'
 				end
-
-				act 'I don''t want to do this, let''s try something else':gt 'sexm', 'variant'
 			elseif sexrand = 2:
 				'"Lie down and spread those gorgeous long legs, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 
 				act 'Spread her legs ':gt 'sexm', 'miss'
-				act 'I don''t want to do this, let''s try something else':gt 'sexm', 'variant'
 			elseif sexrand = 3:
 				'"Get on your hands and knees, I want to fuck you like a bitch in heat."'
 
 				act 'Doggy-Style':gt 'sexm', 'dog'
-				act 'I don''t want to do this, let''s try something else':gt 'sexm', 'variant'
 			end
 		elseif boyonce[lover_number] = 0:
 			'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> throws you on the bed and starts sucking on your breasts.'
 			gs 'arousal','breasts', 1
 
 			act 'Sex':gt 'sexm', 'miss'
-			act 'I don''t want to do this, let''s try something else':gt 'sexm', 'variant'
 		end
+		act 'I don''t want to do this, let''s try something else':gt 'sexm', 'variant'
 	elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 1:
 		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> gently hugs you and starts to cuddle.'
-		'You undress and smoothly <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> asks you "how do you want it, darling?"'
+		'You undress, and smoothly, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> asks you, "How do you want it, darling?"'
 
 		act 'I want whatever you want sweetie':
 			cla
@@ -259,8 +253,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'room':
 						loverrelation[lover_number] += 2
 						gt 'sexm', 'minet'
 					end
-
-					act 'I don''t want to do this, let''s try something else':gt 'sexm', 'variant'
 				elseif sexrand = 1:
 					'"<<$pcs_firstname>>, I want to take you in the ass."'
 
@@ -269,26 +261,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'room':
 						loverrelation[lover_number] += 4
 						gt 'sexm', 'anal'
 					end
-
-					act 'I don''t want to do this, let''s try something else':gt 'sexm', 'variant'
 				elseif sexrand = 2:
 					'"<<$pcs_firstname>>, I want you."'
 
 					act 'Spread her legs ':gt 'sexm', 'miss'
-					act 'I don''t want to do this, let''s try something else':gt 'sexm', 'variant'
 				elseif sexrand = 3:
 					'"<<$pcs_firstname>>, I want to take you from behind."'
 
 					act 'Doggy-Style':gt 'sexm', 'dog'
-					act 'I don''t want to do this, let''s try something else':gt 'sexm', 'variant'
 				end
 			elseif boyonce[lover_number] = 0:
 				'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> throws you on the bed and starts sucking on your breasts.'
 				gs 'arousal','breasts', 1
 
 				act 'Sex':gt 'sexm', 'miss'
-				act 'I don''t want to do this, let''s try something else':gt 'sexm', 'variant'
 			end
+			act 'I don''t want to do this, let''s try something else':gt 'sexm', 'variant'
 		end
 
 		act 'Propose options':gt 'sexm', 'variant'
@@ -304,7 +292,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'variant':
 	if haraklover[lover_number] = 2:loverrelation[lover_number] -= 1
 	'<img src = "images/characters/shared/'+lover_picture[lover_number]+'.jpg">'
 
-	'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> looks at you and is waiting for you to say something'
+	'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> looks at you and waits for you to say something.'
 
 	act 'Lie down and spread your legs':gt 'sexm', 'miss'
 	act 'Doggy-Style':gt 'sexm', 'dog'
@@ -353,7 +341,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'minet':
 		gs 'cum_manage'
 		loverrelation[lover_number] += 3
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/cum30.jpg"></center>'
-		'A hot jet of sperm hits you in the mouth. You start to swallow his cum while <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> continues to cum in your mouth. Finally the flow of hot liquid with a pungent taste stops.'
+		'A hot jet of sperm hits you in the mouth. You start to swallow his cum while <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> continues to cum in your mouth. Finally, the flow of hot liquid with a pungent taste stops.'
 
 		act 'Leave':gt 'sexm', 'endsex'
 	end
@@ -381,7 +369,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'minet':
 					gs 'cum_manage'
 					loverrelation[lover_number] += 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial16.jpg"></center>'
-					'You took his dick out of your mouth and pointed it right at your face. You are now covered with <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>s warm and sticky cum.'
+					'You take his dick out of your mouth and point it right at your face. You are now covered with <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>''s warm and sticky cum.'
 				end
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 2:
 				facial += 1
@@ -407,7 +395,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hand':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/handjob/hand1.jpg"></center>'
 	'You take his <<loverdick[lover_number]>> centimeter penis and begin to caress it gently, moving the skin on the purple head back and forth.'
-	'Soon, your skillful movements makes the guy cum in your hands, covering them with warm and sticky sperm.'
+	'Soon, your skillful movements make the guy cum in your hands, covering them with warm and sticky sperm.'
 
 	if haraklover[lover_number] = 0:loverrelation[lover_number] -= 1
 	if haraklover[lover_number] = 1:loverrelation[lover_number] -= 5
@@ -451,7 +439,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/dom/pegging.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You go to the drawer and put on your strapon. <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> gets ready on all fours on the bed.'
-	'You use some lubrication on the guys anus and stick the strapon in. While you fuck his ass he groans a lot and finally finishes. You remove the strapon from his ass and go to the bathroom.'
+	'You use some lubrication on the guy''s anus and stick the strapon in. While you fuck his ass, he groans a lot and finally finishes. You remove the strapon from his ass and go to the bathroom.'
 
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 30, 'dom'
@@ -482,9 +470,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal':
 		analplugin = 0
 
 		if pcs_ass < 16 :
-			'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> has pulled the buttplug out of your narrow and tight ass'
+			*p '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> pulls the butt plug out of your narrow and tight ass, '
 		elseif pcs_ass >= 16 :
-			' <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>pulled out your butt plug '
+			*p ' <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>pulls out your butt plug, '
 		end
 
 		'and you feel his hard cock resting on your ass.'
@@ -496,10 +484,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal':
 		if pcs_ass + analpluginbonus < dick:
 			'You scream and bite your lip from the sharp pain you suddenly feel when his <<loverdick[lover_number]>> centimeter penis rips apart your ass when it enters.'
 		elseif pcs_ass + analpluginbonus >= dick:
-			'You groan slightly when you feel his <<loverdick[lover_number]>> centimeter dick enters your ass.'
+			'You groan slightly when you feel his <<loverdick[lover_number]>> centimeter dick enter your ass.'
 		end
 
-		'Finally <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> grabs your tight ass and starts slamming inside you fiercely. With one final thrust he finishes balls deep inside you.'
+		'Finally, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> grabs your tight ass and starts slamming inside you fiercely. With one final thrust, he finishes balls deep inside you.'
 		spafinloc = 4
 		gs 'cum_manage'
 		minut += 3
@@ -512,7 +500,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal':
 	else
 		if lubri = 0:
 			lubonus = 2
-			'You do not have any lubricant so <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> spits on his fingers to lubricate your ass.'
+			'You do not have any lubricant, so <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> spits on his fingers to lubricate your ass.'
 		elseif lubri > 0:
 			lubri -= 1
 			lubonus = 10
@@ -524,10 +512,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal':
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_finger', 10, 'dom'
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		if pcs_ass < 10:'When he enters the third finger you involuntarily groan in pain.'
-		if pcs_ass >= 10:'When he enters the third finger you can feel your anus getting stretched out.'
+		if pcs_ass < 10:'When he adds a third finger, you involuntarily groan in pain.'
+		if pcs_ass >= 10:'When he adds a third finger, you can feel your anus getting stretched out.'
 
-		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> pulls his fingers out of your buttocks and you feel his hard cock resting on your ass.'
+		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> pulls his fingers out of your buttocks, and you feel his hard cock resting on your ass.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 15, 'dom'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -538,7 +526,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal':
 			'You groan slightly when you feel his cock entering your ass.'
 		end
 
-		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> stops for a moment to give your ass some time to adapt to the big dick inside. Then he starts moving again with a lot more force then before.'
+		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> stops for a moment to give your ass some time to adapt to the big dick inside. Then he starts moving again with a lot more force than before.'
 
 		if pcs_ass + lubonus + 2 < loverdick[lover_number]:
 			if pcs_makeup > 1:pcs_makeup = 0
@@ -548,7 +536,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal':
 			'You start to moan rhythmically following the pace of the movements of the dick inside you.'
 		end
 
-		'Finally <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> grabs your tight ass and starts slamming inside you with all his might. With one final thrust he finishes balls deep inside you.'
+		'Finally, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> grabs your tight ass and starts slamming inside you with all his might. With one final thrust, he finishes balls deep inside you.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'dom', 'rough'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -561,7 +549,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal':
 			spafinloc = 3
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 
-			'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> takes his dick out of you and gives you a kiss.  You get up and use the bathroom.'
+			'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> takes his dick out of you and gives you a kiss. You get up and use the bathroom.'
 		end
 
 		if pcs_ass < dick:pcs_ass += 1
@@ -584,7 +572,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miss':
 	gs 'cum_manage'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/vag/miss/vag.jpg"></center>'
-	'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> spreads your legs and begins to fondle your pussy with his fingers. Once he is satisfied that you are ready he takes you vigorously.'
+	'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> spreads your legs and begins to fondle your pussy with his fingers. Once he is satisfied that you are ready, he takes you vigorously.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 5
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 25
@@ -606,7 +594,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dog':
 	gs 'cum_manage'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/vag/doggy/dog1.jpg"></center>'
-	'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> made you get on all fours and spread your pussy before he enters.'
+	'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> makes you get on all fours and spread your pussy before he enters.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 30, 'dom'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -619,7 +607,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'startPod':
 	podrand = rand(0, 1)
 
 	if podrand = 0:
-		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> whispered to you, take it in your mouth.'
+		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> whispers to you, "Take it in your mouth."'
 		gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Fuck off! (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -633,9 +621,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'startPod':
 			act 'Fuck off! (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end	
 
-		act 'use your mouth':gt 'sexm', 'blow'
+		act 'Use your mouth':gt 'sexm', 'blow'
 	elseif podrand = 1:
-		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> began to strip off your clothes.'
+		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> begins to strip off your clothes.'
 
 		gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -665,7 +653,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'doggy':
 	gs 'cum_manage'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/vag/doggy/dog.jpg"></center>'
-	'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> made you get on all fours and spread your pussy before he enters.'
+	'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> makes you get on all fours and spread your pussy before he enters.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 30, 'dom'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -679,7 +667,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'blow':
 	minut += 20
 	gs 'stat'
-	'You squatted and <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> pulled out his penis.'
+	'You squat, and <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> pulls out his penis.'
 
 	act 'Take by mouth':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -704,7 +692,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blow':
 			spafinloc = 12
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/cum30.jpg"></center>'
-			'A hot jet of sperm hit you in the mouth. You started to swallow his cum while <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> continued to cum in your mouth. Finally the flow of hot liquid with a pungent taste stopped.'
+			'A hot jet of sperm hits you in the mouth. You start to swallow his cum while <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> continues to cum in your mouth. Finally, the flow of hot liquid with a pungent taste stops.'
 
 			act 'Leave':
 				cla
@@ -736,7 +724,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blow':
 						spafinloc = 11
 						gs 'cum_manage'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial16.jpg"></center>'
-						'You took his dick out of your mouth and pointed it right at your face. You are now covered with <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>''s warm and sticky cum.'
+						'You take his dick out of your mouth and point it right at your face. You are now covered with <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>''s warm and sticky cum.'
 					end
 				elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 2:
 					facial += 1
@@ -766,7 +754,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blow':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/handjob/hand1.jpg"></center>'
 		'You take his <<loverdick[lover_number]>> centimeter penis in your hands and begin to caress it gently.'
-		'Soon, your skillful movements makes the guy cum in your hands, covering them with warm and sticky sperm.'
+		'Soon, your skillful movements make the guy cum in your hands, covering them with warm and sticky sperm.'
 
 		if haraklover[lover_number] = 0:loverrelation[lover_number] -= 1
 		if haraklover[lover_number] = 1:loverrelation[lover_number] -= 5
@@ -784,7 +772,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blow':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'gangrape':
-	'You begin to struggle and one of the guys hits you with his hand on your cheek, saying, "Shut up slut! Now spread your legs! We will fuck you up now!"'
+	'You begin to struggle, and one of the guys hits you with his hand on your cheek, saying, "Shut up slut! Now spread your legs! We will fuck you up now!"'
 	gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Stranger', rand(18,45)
 	gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 	act 'Obey':gt 'sexm', 'gangbang'
@@ -842,9 +830,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gangbang':
 
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/group/gangbang.jpg"></center>'
-	'One of the guys lives nearby and he drags you into his apartment. There he started tearing off your clothes.'
-	'Once you are completely naked they put you on your knees. One of them shoves his dick inside your mouth. They give you a cock in each hand and instruct you to start jerking them off. They make you feel like a real whore.'
-	'Suddenly one of the boys pushes you on the couch and grabs you by the waist. He thrusts his cock deep inside your pussy, you do not have time to react to this because you get two cocks shoved into your mouth at once.'
+	'One of the guys lives nearby, and he drags you into his apartment. There, he starts tearing off your clothes.'
+	'Once you are completely naked, they put you on your knees. One of them shoves his dick inside your mouth. They give you a cock in each hand and instruct you to start jerking them off. They make you feel like a real whore.'
+	'Suddenly, one of the boys pushes you on the couch and grabs you by the waist. He thrusts his cock deep inside your pussy. You do not have time to react to this because you get two cocks shoved into your mouth at once immediately after.'
 	'You feel a cold sensation on your ass. It looks like they are rubbing some lubrication there. Then you feel something big and solid at your rear entrance.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'gangbang', 'sub'
@@ -864,24 +852,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gangbang':
 		gs 'stat'
 	
 		if pcs_ass >= 10:
-			'Two cocks are hammering you from behind, you can feel like them rubbing through the thin barriers between the anus and the vaginal wall. You are starting to get wet while the two cocks enthusiastically continue to pound.'
+			'Two cocks are hammering you from behind. You can feel them rubbing through the thin barriers between the anus and the vaginal wall. You start to get wet while the two cocks enthusiastically continue to pound.'
 		elseif pcs_ass < 10:
 			pcs_horny += (10 - pcs_ass)
-			'You are crying very hard from the severe pain you feel from the hard cock ramming your ass while another cock is fucking you in your pussy.'
+			'You cry very hard from the severe pain you feel from the hard cock ramming your ass while another cock is fucking you in your pussy.'
 		end
 
 		if pcs_horny >= 90:
 			$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-			$orgasm_txt = 'You can feel the sensation in your stomach begins to grow and soon your whole body is overtaken by a shock as you moan through your orgasm.'
+			$orgasm_txt = 'You can feel the sensation in your stomach begin to grow, and soon, your whole body is overtaken by a shock as you moan through your orgasm.'
 		end
 
-		'It seems the guys have played enough with you and they have decided to come on your face. They removed their dicks from your holes and point them at you.'
+		'It seems the guys have played enough with you, and they have decided to cum on your face. They remove their dicks from your holes and point them at you.'
 
 		act 'Get on your knees':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/group/gangbang2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You humbly knelt before the guys, they quickly surround you and they all start to cum on your face, covering it with sticky, warm and fragrant sperm.'
-			'After the boys spent their load they lost interest in you and began to leave.'
+			'You humbly kneel before the guys. They quickly surround you, and they all start to cum on your face, covering it with sticky, warm and fragrant sperm.'
+			'After the boys spend their load, they lose interest in you and begin to leave.'
 
 			act 'Leave':
 				cla
@@ -900,10 +888,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 
 	if popolaini = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/p0.jpg"></center>'
-		'Just as you were about to go to the bathroom to wash up you husband walked in and caught you kneeling in front of a naked man while you are covered in semen.'
+		'Just as you are about to go to the bathroom to wash up, you husband walks in and catches you kneeling in front of a naked man while you are covered in semen.'
 	elseif popolaini = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/p5.jpg"></center>'
-		'Just as you changed position your husband entered the room.'
+		'Just as you change position, your husband enters the room.'
 	end
 
 	!!if popolaini = 2:
@@ -912,8 +900,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 	!!end
 	
 	if harakHusb = 0:
-		'"Honey what''s happening here? why are you cheating on me?" stammered <<$husName>> while looking at you.'
-		'"<<$husName>> it''s not what you think. It''s just sex, no feelings, I only love you. He does not mean anything. Come to me, I''ll show you how much I love you. " you answered him. You know you are caught red-handed so you made up some excuse on the spot but you don''t really think he will believe this.'
+		'"Honey what''s happening here? why are you cheating on me?" stammers <<$husName>> while looking at you.'
+		'"<<$husName>> it''s not what you think. It''s just sex, no feelings, I only love you. He does not mean anything. Come to me, I''ll show you how much I love you. " you answer him. You know you are caught red-handed, so you make up some excuse on the spot, but you don''t really think he will believe this.'
 
 		if izvratH = 0:
 			husbizvradd = 0
@@ -922,7 +910,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 			husband = 0
 			divorced += 1
 			gs 'boyStat', $lover[lover_number]
-			'"No, I''m going, you betrayed our love." he faltered and ran out of the room almost sobbing.'
+			'"No, I''m going, you betrayed our love." he falters and runs out of the room almost sobbing.'
 
 
 			if haraklover[lover_number] = 0:
@@ -932,7 +920,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 				act 'Leave':  gt 'din_npc', 'go_straight_home'
 
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 1:
-				'"Well, I see you are not only for me, so perhaps I''ll go, but if you want I can stay and comfort you " said <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>'
+				'"Well, I see you are not only for me, so perhaps I''ll go, but if you want, I can stay and comfort you " says <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>.'
 
 				act 'Let him go': gt 'din_npc', 'go_straight_home'
 
@@ -946,7 +934,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 					xgt 'sex', 'var'
 				end
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 2:
-				'"This is a surprise, but oh well that clown ran away, and I am once again ready. Let''s continue and let this wimp go" said <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>, clearly intending to continue the evening.'
+				'"This is a surprise, but oh well that clown ran away, and I am once again ready. Let''s continue and let this wimp go" says <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>, clearly intending to continue the evening.'
 
 				act 'Refuse':
 					loverrelation[lover_number] -= 1
@@ -963,8 +951,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 				end
 			end
 		elseif izvratH = 1:
-			'"You really only love me?" asked <<$husName>>.'
-			'"Yes, I will do everything with you like he did, but it will be with love now and you will understand the difference" you replied. You are amazed at how he believes in this nonsense. <<$husName>> came up to you and you unbuttoned his pants to reveal his dick.'
+			'"You really only love me?" asks <<$husName>>.'
+			'"Yes, I will do everything with you I did with him, but it will be with love, and you will understand the difference," you reply. You are amazed he believes this nonsense. <<$husName>> comes up to you, and you unbutton his pants to reveal his dick.'
 
 			if haraklover[lover_number] = 0:
 				gs 'lover', 'remove', lover_number
@@ -973,21 +961,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 				husbandMark = 0
 				husband = 0
 				divorced += 1
-				'"So you''re married! you deceived me even though I loved you. You are a despicable liar. Goodbye!" your guy shouted and ran out of the room.'
-				'"He''s right, you''re a liar, and you do not deserve me, you''re a fallen woman, I don''t want to see you again" You husband burst into tears and ran out to follow the guy.'
+				'"So you''re married! You deceived me even though I loved you. You are a despicable liar. Goodbye!" your guy shouted and ran out of the room.'
+				'"He''s right, you''re a liar, and you do not deserve me, you''re a fallen woman, I don''t want to see you again." You husband bursts into tears and runs out to follow the guy.'
 
 				act 'Leave': gt 'din_npc', 'go_straight_home'
 
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 1:
-				'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> stood by you and watched as you fucked your husband, "Wow, you seem to really enjoy sex with your husband. This really can''t compare to what we did. Well maybe you can use your mouth and I can still be useful" he said.'
-				'"Sure, come on." perked <<$husName>> "Dear lie down on the bed"'
+				'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> stands by you and watches as you fuck your husband. "Wow, you seem to really enjoy sex with your husband. This really can''t compare to what we did. Well maybe you can use your mouth, and I can still be useful," he says.'
+				'"Sure, come on," pipes up <<$husName>>. "Dear lie down on the bed."'
 
 				act 'Lie down':
 					*clr & cla
 					houseslut += 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/p1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You lie down on the bed and <<$husName>> enters your pussy while <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> lies before you and moves his cock to your mouth. You diligently work your husband''s cock while not forgetting your lover''s cock in your mouth.'
-					'"Mmm <<$pcs_nickname>> I have never seen you so enthusiastic when we were together. Maybe we should try some other positions" proposed <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>, and your husband agreed.'
+					'You lie down on the bed, and <<$husName>> enters your pussy while <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> lies before you and moves his cock to your mouth. You diligently work your husband''s cock while not forgetting your lover''s cock in your mouth.'
+					'"Mmm <<$pcs_nickname>>, I have never seen you so enthusiastic when we were together. Maybe we should try some other positions," proposes <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>, and your husband agreed.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -1003,15 +991,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 					end
 				end
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 2:
-				'"That''s right, her mouth is great, but her ass is even better. You fuck her ass, and I''ll fuck her mouth. With her ass she can show you if she really loves you, or not. " said <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>, explicitly directed at your husband.'
-				'"Yeah, come to bed, see how I am going to love your ass, " said <<$husName>>.'
+				'"That''s right, her mouth is great, but her ass is even better. You fuck her ass, and I''ll fuck her mouth. With her ass, she can show you if she really loves you or not," says <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>, explicitly directed at your husband.'
+				'"Yeah, come to bed, see how I am going to love your ass," says <<$husName>>.'
 
 				act 'Lie down':
 					*clr & cla
 					houseslut += 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/p2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You lie down on the bed and <<$husName>> enters you in the anus, while <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> lies before you, presenting his cock to your mouth. You diligently work your husband''s cock in your ass while not forgetting your lover''s cock in your mouth.'
-					'"If you remove your dick from her ass now then she can really show you how much she loves you." proposed <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>, and the husband agreed.'
+					'You lie down on the bed, and <<$husName>> enters you in the anus, while <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> lies before you, presenting his cock to your mouth. You diligently work your husband''s cock in your ass while not forgetting your lover''s cock in your mouth.'
+					'"If you remove your dick from her ass now, then she can really show you how much she loves you," proposes <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>, and your husband agreed.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -1035,21 +1023,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 		husband = 0
 		divorced += 1
 		gs 'boyStat', $lover[lover_number]
-		'"What the hell is going on here? " said <<$husName>> while looking at you.'
-		'"<<$husName>> it''s not what you think. It''s just sex, no feelings, I only love you. He does not mean anything. Come to me, I''ll show you how much I love you. " you answered him. You know you are caught red-handed so you made up some excuse on the spot but you don''t really think he will believe this.'
+		'"What the hell is going on here? " says <<$husName>> while looking at you.'
+		'"<<$husName>> it''s not what you think. It''s just sex, no feelings, I only love you. He does not mean anything. Come to me, I''ll show you how much I love you," you answer him. You know you are caught red-handed, so you make up some excuse on the spot, but you don''t really think he will believe this.'
 
 		if izvratH = 0:
-			'"You filthy slut. What love? You fuck with everyone. Let''s see if you will still like it in the forest you whore." he said and left the room, slamming the door.'
+			'"You filthy slut. What love? You fuck everyone. Let''s see if you will still like it in the forest you whore," he says and leaves the room, slamming the door.'
 
 
 			if haraklover[lover_number] = 0:
 				gs 'lover', 'remove', lover_number
-				'"Wait, you''re married!, you deceived me even though I loved you. Goodbye!" your guy shouted and ran out of the room.'
+				'"Wait, you''re married! You deceived me even though I loved you. Goodbye!" your guy shouts and runs out of the room.'
 
 				act 'Leave': gt 'din_npc', 'go_straight_home'
 				
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 1:
-				'"Well, I see I am not the only one for you, so perhaps I''ll go. But if you want I can stay and comfort you" said <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>'
+				'"Well, I see I am not the only one for you, so perhaps I''ll go, but if you want, I can stay and comfort you" says <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>.'
 
 				act 'Let him go': gt 'din_npc', 'go_straight_home'
 
@@ -1062,7 +1050,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 					xgt 'sex', 'var'
 				end
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 2:
-				'"Well this is a surprise, but oh well it looks like your hubby dumped you, and I am once again ready, let''s continue. Let this cuckold run away like a little bitch" said <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>, clearly intending to continue the evening.'
+				'"Well this is a surprise, but oh well it looks like your hubby dumped you, and I am once again ready, let''s continue. Let this cuckold run away like a little bitch," says <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>, clearly intending to continue the evening.'
 
 				act 'Refuse':
 					loverrelation[lover_number] -= 1
@@ -1080,9 +1068,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 			end
 		elseif izvratH = 1:
 			gs 'lover', 'remove', lover_number
-			'"Can you even hear yourself while you are talking nonsense?" asked <<$husName>>.'
-			'"I''m sorry" I muttered while looking at the floor'
-			'<<$husName>> came up to you. "I''ll leave today and will file for divorce, but first, I will punish you, " he said while unzipping his pants and pulling out his penis. "Well, what are you wating for? Suck, whore!"'
+			'"Can you even hear yourself while you are talking nonsense?" asks <<$husName>>.'
+			'"I''m sorry," you mutter while looking at the floor.'
+			'<<$husName>> comes up to you. "I''ll leave today and will file for divorce, but first, I will punish you," he says while unzipping his pants and pulling out his penis. "Well, what are you waiting for? Suck, whore!"'
 
 			if haraklover[lover_number] = 0:
 				act 'Take by mouth':
@@ -1090,8 +1078,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 					spafinloc = 12
 					gs 'Cum_Manage'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/p3.jpg"></center>'
-					'"So you''re married? You cheated on me even though I loved you. You despicable liar! goodbye!" your guy shouted and ran out of the room.'
-					'<<$husName>> did not pay any attention to him, he put his dick in your mouth and grabbed your head. He literally started to fuck you in the mouth with each thrust pushing it deeper. You were frantically grasping and trying to breathe, desperately trying not to choke as he continued, suddenly he made an abrupt movement and his cock popped into your throat, you try to pull away, but he sternly tells you to take it. He gave you a couple of seconds to get used to the dick in your throat and began to fuck your throat, you are still not getting enough air and you frantically begin to beat him to get free, but this makes <<$husName>> only tighten his grip on your head. When you''re starting to lose consciousness, he finally finishes. You feel his sperm go down your throat. After a couple of strong aftershocks he lets you go. You collapse on the floor coughing up sperm mixed with your saliva and wheezing air. <<$husName>> looked at you as you writhe on the floor. He spits on the floor next to you, and leaves the room.'
+					'"So you''re married? You cheated on me even though I loved you. You despicable liar! goodbye!" your guy shouts and runs out of the room.'
+					'<<$husName>> does not pay any attention to him. He puts his dick in your mouth and grabs your head. He literally starts to fuck you in the mouth with each thrust pushing it deeper. You frantically gasp, trying to breathe, desperately trying not to choke as he continues. Suddenly, he makes an abrupt movement, and his cock pops into your throat. You try to pull away, but he sternly tells you to take it. He gives you a couple of seconds to get used to the dick in your throat and begins to thrust. You are still not getting enough air, and you frantically begin to beat him to get free, but this only makes <<$husName>> tighten his grip on your head. When you''re starting to lose consciousness, he finally finishes. You feel his sperm go down your throat. After a couple of strong aftershocks, he lets you go. You collapse on the floor, coughing up sperm mixed with your saliva and wheezing air. <<$husName>> looks at you as you writhe on the floor. He spits on the floor next to you and leaves the room.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -1102,16 +1090,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 					end
 				end
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 1:
-				'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> stood and watched as you get fucked by your husband, "Well, I''ll probably go." he said.'
-				'"Wait! This whore can handle two cocks. You can join us if you want." offered <<$husName>>.'
-				'"Thanks for the offer, I do believe she will be able to handle me." replied <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>'
+				'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> stands and watches as you get fucked by your husband. "Well, I should probably go," he says.'
+				'"Wait! This whore can handle two cocks. You can join us if you want," offers <<$husName>>.'
+				'"Thanks for the offer, I do believe she will be able to handle me," replies <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>.'
 
 				act 'Lie on the bed':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/p1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You lie down on the bed and <<$husName>> enters your pussy while <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> lies before you and moves his cock to your mouth. You diligently work your husband''s cock while not forgetting your lover''s cock in your mouth.'
-					'"she is still a great fuck, " said the husband.'
-					'"I could not agree more" replied <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>'
+					'You lie down on the bed, and <<$husName>> enters your pussy while <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> lies before you and moves his cock to your mouth. You diligently work your husband''s cock while not forgetting your lover''s cock in your mouth.'
+					'"She is still a great fuck, " says your husband.'
+					'"I could not agree more," replies <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'group'
@@ -1127,15 +1115,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 					end
 				end
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 2:
-				'"That''s right this whore should be punished, if you want to let me help we can do it together and she will not be able to sit down for a week, " said <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>, explicitly riling up your husband.'
-				'"Yes, let''s punish the bitch, and then I can go to the authorities to initiate my divorce and remove this whore from my life" said <<$husName>>.'
+				'"That''s right, this whore should be punished. If you want to let me help, we can do it together, and she will not be able to sit down for a week," says <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>, explicitly riling up your husband.'
+				'"Yes, let''s punish the bitch, and then I can go to the authorities to initiate my divorce and remove this whore from my life," says <<$husName>>.'
 
 				act 'Lie on the bed':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/p2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You lie down on the bed and <<$husName>> entered your anus while <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> lay before you presenting his cock to your mouth. You diligently work your husband''s cock in your ass while not forgetting your lover''s cock in your mouth.'
-					'"Wow, even now she knows how to work that ass " said <<$husName>>.'
-					'"Yeah, please leave some for me" replied <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>'
+					'You lie down on the bed, and <<$husName>> enters your anus while <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> lies before you, presenting his cock to your mouth. You diligently work your husband''s cock in your ass while not forgetting your lover''s cock in your mouth.'
+					'"Wow, even now she knows how to work that ass," says <<$husName>>.'
+					'"Yeah, please leave some for me," replies <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'group'
@@ -1154,7 +1142,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 		end
 	elseif harakHusb = 2:
 		fingal += 1
-		'"Oh damn," was the last thing you heared before you were thrown to the wall by a powerful blow to the face.'
+		'"Oh damn," is the last thing you hear before you are thrown to the wall by a powerful blow to the face.'
 
 		if izvratH = 0:
 			husbizvradd = 0
@@ -1168,19 +1156,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 			stolmoney = 0
 			money = 0
 			komp = 0
-			'while getting up you could see in the corner of the room your husband giving blow after blow to your lover, and <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> was trying hard to escape out the door, finally he succeeds and he runs out of the apartment at a breakneck pace.'
-			'<<$husName>> looked at you, "Here... you... whore... cock... and pussy... and ass... and in your mouth." he says putting a strong emphasis on every word. At the end of the last word, he kicks you in the face, rendering you unconscious. You woke up two hours later. Your husband was gone and so was all of his stuff. Some of your stuff was missing too'
+			'While getting up, you can see in the corner of the room your husband giving blow after blow to <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> as he tries hard to escape out the door. Finally, your lover succeeds, and he runs out of the apartment at a breakneck pace.'
+			'<<$husName>> looks at you. "Here... you... whore... cock... and pussy... and ass... and in your mouth," he says putting a strong emphasis on every word. At the end of the last word, he kicks you in the face, rendering you unconscious. You wake up two hours later. Your husband is gone and so is all of his stuff. Some of your stuff is missing too.'
 
 			act 'Leave': gt 'din_npc', 'go_straight_home'
 
 		elseif izvratH = 1:
 			gs 'lover', 'remove', lover_number
 			houseslut += 1
-			'"Oh damn, she allowed you inside of her?" asked <<$husName>>, "So now you will need to pay me for the pleasure of using her. This is my slut! " he added, referring to you. "Once that is settled we will fuck her together." he added, lifting you off the floor and throwing you on the bed.'
+			'"Oh damn, she allowed you inside of her?" asks <<$husName>>. "So now you will need to pay me for the pleasure of using her. This is my slut!" he adds, referring to you. "Once that is settled, we will fuck her together," he continues, lifting you off the floor and throwing you on the bed.'
 
-			if haraklover[lover_number] = 0:'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> tried to protest, but after seeing your husband''s face contorted with rage he agreed'
-			if haraklover[lover_number] = 1:'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> silently complied to your husband''s request'
-			if haraklover[lover_number] = 2:'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> gladly accepted'
+			if haraklover[lover_number] = 0:'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> tries to protest, but after seeing your husband''s face contorted with rage, he agrees'
+			if haraklover[lover_number] = 1:'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> silently complies with your husband''s request.'
+			if haraklover[lover_number] = 2:'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> gladly accepts'
 
 			act 'Continue':
 				if popolaini = 1:picrand = 40

+ 18 - 95
locations/sexorg.qsrc

@@ -10,144 +10,67 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'var':
-	sexorgrand = rand(0, 6)
+	cla
+	*clr
+	sexvar += 1
 
+	sexorgrand = rand(0, 6)
 	if sexorgrand = 0:
-		cla
-		*clr
-		sexvar += 1
-
-		if orsxbj = 0:
-			orsxbj = 1
-		end
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/bowling/sex/minet<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'The two of you switch back and forth between sucking one guy''s cock for a while, getting off on his moans of pleasure but never pushing him so far that he could actually cum. Every now and then, you both lick his head simultaneously, french kissing while your "victim" watches and enjoys.'
+		'You and one of the girls switch back and forth sucking one guy''s cock for a while, getting off on his moans of pleasure but never pushing him so far that he could actually cum. Every now and then, you both lick his head simultaneously, French kissing while your "victim" watches and enjoys.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 		minut -= 10
-		gs 'stat'
-		
-		act 'Continue the orgy':gt 'sexorg', 'var'
-
-		if sexvar >= 3:act 'Let the guys finish.':gt 'sexorg', 'end'
 	elseif sexorgrand = 1:
-		cla
-		*clr
-		sexvar += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/bowling/sex/vag<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
 		'You watch as one of the girls gets her pussy filled from behind by a big cock, listening to her loud moans and idly rubbing your own clit while you wait your turn.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10
-		gs 'stat'
-		
-		act 'Continue the orgy':gt 'sexorg', 'var'
-
-		if sexvar >= 3:act 'Let the guys finish.':gt 'sexorg', 'end'
 	elseif sexorgrand = 2:
-		cla
-		*clr
-		sexvar += 1
-
-		if orsxsex = 0:
-			orsxsex = 1
-		end
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/bowling/sex/uvag<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You lie down on your back and almost instantly feel his cock entering your moist cunt. His movements are fast and rough and you''d cry out in ecstacy if it wasn''t for the pussy you were busy licking.'
+		'You lie down on your back and almost instantly feel one of the guys'' cocks entering your moist cunt. His movements are fast and rough, and you''d cry out in ecstasy if it weren''t for the pussy you are busy licking.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'group', 'rough'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 		minut -= 10
-		gs 'stat'
-		
-		act 'Continue the orgy':gt 'sexorg', 'var'
-
-		if sexvar >= 3:act 'Let the guys finish.':gt 'sexorg', 'end'
 	elseif sexorgrand = 3:
-		cla
-		*clr
-		sexvar += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/bowling/sex/anal<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You don''t break eye contact with her - you don''t even know their names - as she lowers herself onto him, impaling her tight ass on his hard dick. "You''d love to take my place, wouldn''t you?", she asks sweetly, then cries out as her partner loses patience and starts fucking her from below. You don''t have to answer - the fingers you have buried in your pussy as you watch tell her everything she needs to know.'
+		'You watch one of the girls - you don''t even know her name - not breaking eye contact with her as she lowers herself onto one of the guys, impaling her tight ass on his hard dick. "You''d love to take my place, wouldn''t you?" she asks sweetly, then cries out as her partner loses patience and starts fucking her from below. You don''t have to answer - the fingers you have buried in your pussy as you watch tell her everything she needs to know.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10
-		gs 'stat'
-		
-		act 'Continue the orgy':gt 'sexorg', 'var'
-
-		if sexvar >= 3:act 'Let the guys finish.':gt 'sexorg', 'end'
 	elseif sexorgrand = 4:
-		cla
-		*clr
-
-		if orsxanal = 0:
-			pdsxanal = 1
-		end
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/bowling/sex/uanal<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You were not as well prepared as you thought you''d be and it hurts a little as he pushes past your sphincter, but soon the pain is forgotten and replaced by a pleasant sense of fullness... and that''s before he starts really fucking you. You mean into the girl''s cunt and enjoy yourself.'
+		'You are not as well prepared as you thought you were, and it hurts a little as one of the guys pushes past your sphincter, but soon the pain is forgotten and replaced by a pleasant sense of fullness... and that''s before he starts really fucking you. You lean into the girl in front of you''s cunt and enjoy yourself.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'group', 'rough'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 		minut -= 10
-		gs 'stat'
-		
-		act 'Continue the orgy':gt 'sexorg', 'var'
-
-		if sexvar >= 3:act 'Let the guys finish.':gt 'sexorg', 'end'
 	elseif sexorgrand = 5:
-		cla
-		*clr
-
-		if orsxbj = 0:
-			orsxbj = 1
-		end
-
-		if orsxsex = 0:
-			orsxsex = 1
-		end
-
-		if orsxanal = 0:
-			orsxanal = 1
-		end
-
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/bowling/sex/udp<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'At first you were a little reluctant about being double penetrated - the two guys were both pretty well endowed, after all - but in the end, your curiosity and horniness won over all concerns and you thoroughly enjoy the feeling of having both your nether holes filled at the same time.'
+		'At first you are a little reluctant about being double penetrated - the two guys are both pretty well endowed, after all - but in the end, your curiosity and horniness wins over all concerns, and you thoroughly enjoy the feeling of having both your nether holes filled at the same time.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'group', 'rough'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'group', 'rough'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 		minut -= 10
-		gs 'stat'
-		
-		act 'Continue the orgy':gt 'sexorg', 'var'
-
-		if sexvar >= 3:act 'Let the guys finish.':gt 'sexorg', 'end'
-	elseif sexorgrand = 6:
-		cla
-		*clr
-		sexvar += 1
+	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/bowling/sex/dp<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'Her expression of bliss and loud utterances leave no doubt in your mind: Having her ass and pussy filled at the same time has sent this girl straight to heaven and while you watch on in jealousy, you have no other choice than to rub your clit and wait your turn.'
+		'Her expression of bliss and loud utterances leave no doubt in your mind: having her ass and pussy filled at the same time has sent this girl straight to heaven, and while you watch on in jealousy, you have no other choice than to rub your clit and wait your turn.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10
-		gs 'stat'
-		
-		act 'Continue the orgy':gt 'sexorg', 'var'
-
-		if sexvar >= 3:act 'Let the guys finish.':gt 'sexorg', 'end'
 	end
+	
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Continue the orgy':gt 'sexorg', 'var'
+	if sexvar >= 3:act 'Let the guys finish.':gt 'sexorg', 'end'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 	cla
 	*clr
-	orsxbj = 0
-	orsxsex = 0
-	orsxanal = 0
-	sexvar = 0
+	killvar 'sexvar'
+	killvar 'sexorgrand'
 	spafinloc = 12
 	gs 'cum_manage'
 
@@ -156,7 +79,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/bowling/sex/cum<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'They put you and the other two girls on your knees in front of them and furiously stroke their dicks into your expectant mouths. You barely even taste the sperm, even though you catch a full spurt of it on your tongue - to you, it marks the end of a thrilling adventure. It''s not every day that you have an orgy in a bowling center.'
+	'The guys put you and the other two girls on your knees in front of them and furiously stroke their dicks into your expectant mouths. You barely even taste the sperm, even though you catch a full spurt of it on your tongue - to you, it marks the end of a thrilling adventure. It''s not every day that you have an orgy in a bowling center.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'

+ 85 - 83
locations/sexshop.qsrc

@@ -21,10 +21,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
 	'The main counter displays various sex toys:'
 	'Lubricant - 145 <b>₽</b>'
-	'Dildo starting at - 800 <b>₽</b>'
+	'Dildo - starting at 800 <b>₽</b>'
 	'Vibrator - 800 <b>₽</b>'
-	'Strapon harness starting at 1,200 <b>₽</b>'
-	'Butt plug 1,200 <b>₽</b>'
+	'Strap-on harness - starting at 1,200 <b>₽</b>'
+	'Butt plug - 1,200 <b>₽</b>'
 	*nl
 	'In the basement are the private booths for viewing porn movies (50 <b>₽</b> 15 minutes).'
 
@@ -32,13 +32,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 	if analplug = 1 and dildo = 1 and hotcat >= 5 and Peter = 0:
 		if rand(0,1) = 1:
-			'You see an interesting looking middle-aged man, apparently he is the owner of this store.'
+			'You see an interesting looking middle-aged man. Apparently, he is the owner of this store.'
 
 			act 'Introduce yourself to the owner of the store' :
 				*clr & cla
 				menu_off = 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/peter.jpg"></center>'
-				'I''m Peter, I''ve been watching you for a long time. I often see you here. I find you rather interesting...'
+				'"I''m Peter, I''ve been watching you for a long time. I often see you here. I find you rather interesting..."'
 
 				act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_industrial', 'redlight'
 				act 'Go with Peter': gt 'Peterroom', 'start'
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut = minut + 60
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/pierre_2.jpg"></center>'
-					'Peter smiles, and says "New actresses are always welcome. However, in this business, many women do not take well to the work. You will have to do an audition, and if you do well, you can have the job."'
+					'Peter smiles and says, "New actresses are always welcome. However in this business, many women do not take well to the work. You will have to do an audition, and if you do well, you can have the job."'
 					'"I''ll tell you about the work here and now, but under one condition - you have to undress".'
 
 					act 'Undress':
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/film_0.jpg"></center>'
 								'"And then comes the filming itself, which is the most exciting and fun part."'
-								'"And after the filming, we create a video to sell it for profit!"'
+								'"And after the filming, we create a video to sell for profit!"'
 
 								act '...':
 									*clr & cla
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				money -= 800
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 			end
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				karta -= 800
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 			end
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				money -= 850
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 15cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 15cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -262,7 +262,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				karta -= 850
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 15cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 15cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -281,7 +281,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				money -= 900
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 20cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 20cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -295,7 +295,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				karta -= 900
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 20cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 20cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -378,7 +378,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				money -= 950
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 25cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 25cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -392,7 +392,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				karta -= 950
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 25cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 25cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -411,7 +411,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				money -= 1000
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 30cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 30cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -425,7 +425,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				karta -= 1000
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 30cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 30cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -444,7 +444,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				money -= 1100
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 35cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 35cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -458,7 +458,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				karta -= 1100
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 35cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 35cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -477,7 +477,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				money -= 1200
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 40cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 40cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -491,7 +491,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				karta -= 1200
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 40cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 40cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -510,7 +510,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				money -= 800
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a vibrator and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a vibrator and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 			end
@@ -524,7 +524,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				karta -= 800
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a vibrator and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a vibrator and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 			end
@@ -545,7 +545,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					money -= 1200
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-					'You bought a strap-on and paid the cashier.'
+					'You buy a strap-on and pay the cashier.'
 
 					act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 				end
@@ -561,7 +561,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					karta -= 1200
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-					'You bought a strap-on and paid the cashier.'
+					'You buy a strap-on and pay the cashier.'
 
 					act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 				end
@@ -576,7 +576,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					money -= 500
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-					'You bought a strap-on and paid the cashier. You have to attach one of your dildos to it.'
+					'You buy a strap-on and pay the cashier. You have to attach one of your dildos to it.'
 
 					act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 				end
@@ -590,7 +590,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					karta -= 500
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-					'You bought a strap-on and paid the cashier. You have to attach one of your dildos to it.'
+					'You buy a strap-on and pay the cashier. You have to attach one of your dildos to it.'
 
 					act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 				end
@@ -610,7 +610,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				money -= 800
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a butt plug and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a butt plug and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 			end
@@ -624,7 +624,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				karta -= 800
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a butt plug and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a butt plug and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 			end
@@ -834,7 +834,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pip':
 
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Booth movies</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/gloryhole/ghbooths.jpg"></center>'
-	'Small cabinet with a TV on the wall, terminal and two holes in the walls at waist level.'
+	'A small cabinet with a TV on the wall, terminal and two holes in the walls at waist level.'
 	if mistressqwest > 0 and mistressqwest <= 20:
 		GHchance = rand(6,10)
 		ghnowcheck = ghnow		
@@ -852,10 +852,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pip':
 			cla
 			money -= 50
 			minut += 15
-			'Once you have paid the money, the TV on the wall begins showing porn movies.'
-			'You sit in a chair and watch the porn. You began to get a little excited.'
+			'Once you pay the money, the TV on the wall begins showing porn movies.'
+			'You sit in a chair and watch the porn. You begin to get a little excited.'
 
-			act 'The movie ended':gt 'sexshop', 'pip'
+			act 'The movie ends':gt 'sexshop', 'pip'
 
 			act 'Masturbate':
 				cla
@@ -864,7 +864,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pip':
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'	
 
-				act 'The movie ended':gt 'sexshop', 'pip'
+				act 'The movie ends':gt 'sexshop', 'pip'
 			end
 
 			
@@ -883,8 +883,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pip':
 					fingerRand = rand(1, 5)
 					! WD: Rename missing Image ~  'ghFinger.jpg' to 'ghFinger5.jpg'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/gloryhole/ghfinger<<fingerRand>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'You poke your finger in the hole, letting them know that you are ready to serve the stranger.'
-					'The stranger slips ' + iif(ghnow < 5, '300', '150') +	'<b>₽</b> into the hole, and then his erect cock pokes out of the hole.'
+					'You poke your finger in the hole, letting whoever''s on the other side know that you are ready to serve him.'
+					'The stranger slips ' + iif(ghnow < 5, '300', '150') +	'<b>₽</b> into the hole, and then his erect cock pokes out of it.'
 
 					act 'Suck dick':
 						cla
@@ -895,7 +895,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pip':
 						ghprand = rand(1, 38)
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/gloryhole/gloryhole<<ghprand>>.jpg"></center>'
 						'You take the cock in your mouth and start to suck it, blowing him enthusiastically.'
-						'The stranger''s cock begins to throb, and finally, the stranger cums in your mouth - filling it with a huge amount of thick sperm. You swallow it, and once you''ve licked all the sperm from a his cock, it disappears back into the hole and you hear the man leaves his booth.'
+						'The stranger''s cock begins to throb, and finally, the stranger cums in your mouth, filling it with a huge amount of thick sperm. You swallow it, and once you''ve licked all the sperm from his cock, it disappears back into the hole, and you hear the man leave his booth.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'	
@@ -926,8 +926,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 			*clr & cla
 			kendrano = 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend.jpg"></center>'
-			'You smile to her. "Sorry, no. I still don''t belong to anyone."'
-			'She sighs softly. "Such a waste. Oh well, there are plenty of pretty little white Russian bitches that love being owned by an Ebony Mistress. Perhaps we will meet again and you will change your mind. I go to the University on the island, you should stop by sometime." She gives you directions to which dorm building is hers, and which floor and room number is her dorm room. With that you both say your goodbyes and she returns to shopping. As do you.'
+			'You smile at her. "Sorry, no. I still don''t belong to anyone."'
+			'She sighs softly. "Such a waste. Oh well, there are plenty of pretty little white Russian bitches that love being owned by an Ebony Mistress. Perhaps we will meet again and you will change your mind. I go to the University on the island, you should stop by sometime." She gives you directions to which dorm building is hers, and which floor and room number is her dorm room. With that, you both say your goodbyes, and she returns to shopping. As do you.'
 			act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_industrial', 'redlight'
 			act 'Go back to shopping':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 		end
@@ -941,8 +941,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 				kendraslave += 1
 				kendratoy = rand(1,2)
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You follow her down into the basement. She sits down the edge of a table and pulls her fetish clothing aside, exposing her pussy. "Now, strip for me, bitch." You do as you are told and begin to slowly strip out of your clothes, until you are fully naked. "Good little slave. Now get over her and worship my pussy." You kneel before her pussy and lick her eagerly. As continue to lick her pussy and suck on her clit, while Kendra squeals and moans in pleasure.'
-				'"Look at me" commands Kendra. When you look up at her, while still eating her out, she pulls her new toy out of her bag. "we''re going to use this, for my pleasure." She informs you.'
+				'You follow her down into the basement. She sits down on the edge of a table and pulls her fetish clothing aside, exposing her pussy. "Now, strip for me, bitch." You do as you are told and begin to slowly strip out of your clothes until you are fully naked. "Good little slave. Now get over here and worship my pussy." You kneel before her pussy and lick her eagerly. You continue to lick her pussy and suck on her clit, as Kendra squeals and moans in pleasure.'
+				'"Look at me," commands Kendra. When you look up at her while still eating her out, she pulls her new toy out of her bag. "We''re going to use this for my pleasure," she informs you.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 				gs 'stat'
 				if kendratoy = 1:
@@ -972,8 +972,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 			*clr & cla
 			kendratoy = rand(1,2)
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You follow her down into the basement. She sits down the edge of a table and pulls her fetish clothing aside, exposing her pussy. "Now strip for me, bitch." You do as you are told and begin to slowly strip out of your clothes, until you are fully naked. "Good little slave, now get over her and worship my pussy." You kneel before her pussy and lick her eagerly. You continue to lick her pussy and suck on her clit, as Kendra squeals and moans in pleasure.'
-			'"Look at me" commands Kendra. When you look up at her, while still eating her out, she pulls her new toy out of her bag. "we''re going to use this, for my pleasure" she informs you.'
+			'You follow her down into the basement. She sits down on the edge of a table and pulls her fetish clothing aside, exposing her pussy. "Now strip for me, bitch." You do as you are told and begin to slowly strip out of your clothes until you are fully naked. "Good little slave, now get over her and worship my pussy." You kneel before her pussy and lick her eagerly. You continue to lick her pussy and suck on her clit, as Kendra squeals and moans in pleasure.'
+			'"Look at me," commands Kendra. When you look up at her while still eating her out, she pulls her new toy out of her bag. "We''re going to use this for my pleasure," she informs you.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			if kendratoy = 1:
@@ -987,7 +987,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 		'As you browse the store, you see a very attractive young black woman about your age trying on latex clothes. She notices you at about the same time.'
 		'After a couple of minutes, she walks over and boldly caresses your hair. "You''re a pretty little thing, what''s your name?" she asks.'
 		'You decide to tell her. "My name is <<$pcs_firstname>>, but most people call me <<$pcs_nickname>>. What''s your name?"'
-		'She smiles. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what a pretty name. My name is Kendra, but you can call me Mistress Kendra." She says in confidence.'
+		'She smiles. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what a pretty name. My name is Kendra, but you can call me Mistress Kendra," she says with confidence.'
 		'"Oh" You reply, so she is one of those.'
 		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_industrial', 'redlight'
 		act 'Go back to shopping':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
@@ -995,13 +995,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 			*clr & cla
 			meet_kendra = 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend01.jpg"></center>'
-			'You ask her about her clothes, and soon the two of you are talking. You tell her that you live in Pavlovsk, and are in your final year of school. She tells you she is attending the University to get a degree. You find out she is from the Republic of Congo, on a student visa. You talk about a wide range of things for a while. Eventually she says "You are very pretty. I love making pretty little Russian bitches into my slaves. Call me Mistress Kendra, <<$pcs_nickname>>, and become mine." Should you call her mistress? You have no doubt where that will lead.'
+			!! the dialogue here should be different if the player is not attending the school in Pavlovsk
+			'You ask her about her clothes, and soon the two of you are talking. You tell her that you live in Pavlovsk and are in your final year of school. She tells you she is attending the University to get a degree. You find out she is from the Republic of Congo, on a student visa. You talk about a wide range of things for a while. Eventually, she says, "You are very pretty. I love making pretty little Russian bitches into my slaves. Call me Mistress Kendra, <<$pcs_nickname>>, and become mine." Should you call her mistress? You have no doubt where that will lead.'
 			act 'Call her Kendra':
 				*clr & cla
 				kendrano = 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend.jpg"></center>'
-				'You smile to her. "Sorry, but I don''t belong to anyone."'
-				'She sighs softly. "Such a waste. Oh well, there are plenty of pretty little white Russian bitches that love being owned by an Ebony Mistress. Perhaps we will meet again and you will change your mind. I go to the University on the island, you should stop by sometime." She gives you directions to which dorm building is hers, and which floor and room number is her dorm room. With that you both say your goodbyes and she returns to shopping. As do you.'
+				'You smile at her. "Sorry, but I don''t belong to anyone."'
+				'She sighs softly. "Such a waste. Oh well, there are plenty of pretty little white Russian bitches that love being owned by an Ebony Mistress. Perhaps we will meet again and you will change your mind. I go to the University on the island, you should stop by sometime." She gives you directions to which dorm building is hers, and which floor and room number is her dorm room. With that, you both say your goodbyes, and she returns to shopping. As do you.'
 				act 'Go back to shopping':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 			end
 			act 'Call her Mistress Kendra':
@@ -1014,8 +1015,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 					kendraslave += 1
 					kendratoy = rand(1,2)
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You follow her down into the basement. She sits down the edge of a table and pulls her fetish clothing aside, exposing her pussy. "Now strip for me, bitch." You do as you are told and begin to slowly strip out of your clothes, until you are fully naked. "Good little slave, now get over her and worship my pussy." You kneel before her pussy and lick her eagerly. You continue to lick her pussy and suck on her clit, as Kendra squeals and moans in pleasure.'
-					'"Look at me" commands Kendra. When you look up at her, while still eating her out, she pulls her new toy out of her bag. "we''re going to use this, for my pleasure" she informs you.'
+					'You follow her down into the basement. She sits down on the edge of a table and pulls her fetish clothing aside, exposing her pussy. "Now strip for me, bitch." You do as you are told and begin to slowly strip out of your clothes until you are fully naked. "Good little slave, now get over her and worship my pussy." You kneel before her pussy and lick her eagerly. You continue to lick her pussy and suck on her clit, as Kendra squeals and moans in pleasure.'
+					'"Look at me," commands Kendra. When you look up at her while still eating her out, she pulls her new toy out of her bag. "We''re going to use this for my pleasure," she informs you.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 					gs 'stat'
 					if kendratoy = 1:
@@ -1029,7 +1030,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend0.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you browse the store, you see a very attractive young black woman about your age trying on latex clothes. She notices you at about the same time.'
-		'She gives you a quick once over, and then stops paying attention to you. After a few moments she moves to another section of the store.'
+		'She gives you a quick once over, and then stops paying attention to you. After a few moments, she moves to another section of the store.'
 		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_industrial', 'redlight'
 		act 'Go back to shopping':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 	end
@@ -1042,7 +1043,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra1':
 	minut += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You take the dildo from her, and insert it into Kendra''s pussy. While you use one hand to fuck her with the dildo, your other hand caresses her clit, trying to bring her to orgasm. Kendra moans and writhes, sitting on the table, enjoying your efforts.'
+	'You take the dildo from Kendra and insert it into her pussy. While you use one hand to fuck her with the dildo, your other hand caresses her clit, trying to bring her to orgasm. Kendra moans and writhes, sitting on the table, enjoying your efforts.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue':
@@ -1054,15 +1055,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra1':
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend4.jpg"></center>'
-			'Then Kendra starts spasming, as her whole body orgasms. Her pussy begins to squirt as she orgasms, covering your hand, her thighs and even some of it ends up on your breasts and stomach before her orgasm subsides. Kendra looks at you: "You are my beautiful little white slave bitch, totaly committed to serving me. Now lick me clean" she orders.'
+			'Then Kendra starts spasming, as her whole body orgasms. Her pussy begins to squirt as she orgasms, covering your hand and her thighs. Some of it even ends up on your breasts and stomach before her orgasm subsides. Kendra looks at you. "You are my beautiful little white slave bitch, totally committed to serving me. Now lick me clean," she orders.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Lick':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend5.jpg"></center>'
-				'You pull the dildo out of her soaking wet pussy, and dutifully move your head between her legs to begin slowly licking the juices from her thighs and pussy.'
-				'"Keep going, you slut" Kendra orders you. You began to lick faster, licking her thighs and pussy completely clean of her juices.'
-				'"Now, it''s time for your reward" she says as she pulls a strap-on out of her bag next.'
+				'You pull the dildo out of her soaking wet pussy and dutifully move your head between her legs to begin slowly licking the juices from her thighs and pussy.'
+				'"Keep going, you slut," Kendra orders you. You began to lick faster, licking her thighs and pussy completely clean of her juices.'
+				'"Now, it''s time for your reward," she says as she pulls a strap-on out of her bag next.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Yes, Mistress':gt 'sexshop', 'kendra2'
@@ -1078,21 +1079,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra2':
 	minut += 3
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend8.jpg"></center>'
+	*p 'Kendra steps into the harness and slides it up over her hips. As she does, she starts pulling the straps tight to hold the strap-on firmly in place. With the strap-on harness now securely in place, she pulls you close and kisses you. One of her hands wanders down to your pussy and rubs it for a moment, and then she slides one finger inside of you. She breaks the kiss before saying, '
 	if pcs_vag = 0:
-		'Kendra steps into the harness and slides it up over her hips. As she does, she starts pulling the straps tight to hold the strap-on firmly in place. With the strap-on harness now securely in place, she pulls you close and kisses you. One of her hands wanders down to your pussy and rubs it for a moment, and then she slides one finger inside of you. She breaks the kiss before saying "I see you are still a virgin, well, I won''t pop your cherry. Luckily, you still have other holes I can fuck. Now, on your knees and suck my cock."'
+		'"I see you are still a virgin, well, I won''t pop your cherry. Luckily, you still have other holes I can fuck. Now, on your knees and suck my cock."'
 	else
-		'Kendra steps into the harness and slides it up over her hips. As she does, she starts pulling the straps tight to hold the strap-on firmly in place. With the strap-on harness now securely in place, she pulls you close and kisses you. One of her hands wanders down to your pussy and rubs it for a moment, and then she slides one finger inside of you. She breaks the kiss before saying "I see you are already nice and wet, slave. Eager for my cock, are you? Don''t worry, you will feel it soon enough. Now, on your knees and suck my cock" she commands.'
+		'"I see you are already nice and wet, slave. Eager for my cock, are you? Don''t worry, you will feel it soon enough. Now, on your knees and suck my cock."'
 	end
 	act 'Suck her strap-on':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend7.jpg"></center>'
-		'You kneel down and take ahold of the strap-on dildo with one hand, while wrapping your lips around it. You stroke the dildo while you suck on it at the same time. For several minutes you suck the dildo, getting it nice and wet with your saliva.'
+		'You kneel down and take ahold of the strap-on dildo with one hand while wrapping your lips around it. You stroke the dildo while you suck on it at the same time. For several minutes, you suck the dildo, getting it nice and wet with your saliva.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Deep throat':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend7.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you suck on the dildo, you feel her grab you by the hair. Next thing you know, she forces your head forward, forcing the dildo down your throat. Your lips comes to rest against the fake balls. After a few moments of gagging, she lets you pull back to get a breath through your nose - only for her to force it down your throat again, over and over, as she fucks your throat.'
+			'As you suck on the dildo, you feel Kendra grab you by the hair. Next thing you know, she forces your head forward, forcing the dildo down your throat. Your lips comes to rest against the fake balls. After a few moments of gagging, she lets you pull back to get a breath through your nose - only for her to force it down your throat again, over and over, as she fucks your throat.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'stat'
 			if pcs_vag = 0:
@@ -1110,7 +1112,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendravag':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend10.jpg"></center>'
-	'Kendra commands you. "Impale your pussy on my cock, and fuck yourself until I tell you to stop." Once Kendra sits in a chair, you straddle her strap-on, lowering yourself and sliding it into your pussy. You ride the strap-on, and Kendra drives up from under you - trying to shove it as deep into your pussy as possible. Several minutes pass, and each thrust increases your arousal. You decide to rub your clit to increase the amount of pleasure you are recieving.'
+	'Kendra commands you, "Impale your pussy on my cock and fuck yourself until I tell you to stop." Once Kendra sits in a chair, you straddle her strap-on, lowering yourself and sliding it into your pussy. You ride the strap-on, and Kendra drives up from under you - trying to shove it as deep into your pussy as possible. Several minutes pass, and each thrust increases your arousal. You decide to rub your clit to increase the amount of pleasure you are receiving.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Rub clit':
@@ -1133,18 +1135,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendraanal':
 	gs 'boyStat', 'D4'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend9.jpg"></center>'
-	'You stand up, as does she. "Lay on the table" she commands you. You jump up onto the table, and spreads your legs. Kendra steps up between your legs and gently slides the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> strap-on, slick with your pussy juices, into your asshole. She stops a moment to give your ass time to adjust to the size. Then, she begins to thrust the strap-on up your butt, causing you to moan. Seeing that you are enjoying the process, Kendra begins to slowly accelerate. "Tell me your ass belongs to me, Slave!" she commands you. You know it likely means she will just fuck you harder if you refuse to submit, but maybe deep down that''s what you really want'
+	'You stand up, as does she. "Lie on the table," she commands you. You jump up onto the table and spread your legs. Kendra steps up between your legs and gently slides the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> strap-on, slick with your pussy juices, into your asshole. She stops a moment to give your ass time to adjust to the size. Then, she begins to thrust the strap-on up your butt, causing you to moan. Seeing that you are enjoying the process, Kendra begins to slowly accelerate. "Tell me your ass belongs to me, Slave!" she commands you. You know it likely means she will just fuck you harder if you refuse to submit, but maybe deep down that''s what you really want...'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Submit':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend13.jpg"></center>'
-		'You submit to her command, telling her "My ass belongs to you, Mistress Kendra!"'
+		'You submit to her command, telling her, "My ass belongs to you, Mistress Kendra!"'
 		'She smiles at you as she continues fucking your ass. "That''s right, Slave. And what can I do with it?" she asks.'
 		'You reply to her. "Anything you want, Mistress Kendra, I belong to you!"'
-		'Her smile gets bigger. "That''s right, bitch, your ass belongs to me and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" she commands'
-		'Despite the pain, you moan in pleasure as she continues fucking your ass. "My ass belongs to you and you can fuck it anytime you want, Mistress Kendra!" you scream. She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple more minutes, as if to make her point, before she finally pulls it out of you. As she does, she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
+		'Her smile gets bigger. "That''s right, bitch, your ass belongs to me, and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" she commands.'
+		'Despite the pain, you moan in pleasure as she continues fucking your ass. "My ass belongs to you, and you can fuck it anytime you want, Mistress Kendra!" you scream. She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple more minutes, as if to make her point, before she finally pulls it out of you. As she does, she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Finish': gt 'sexshop', 'kendrafinish'
@@ -1156,8 +1158,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendraanal':
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend13.jpg"></center>'
-			'You decided not to tell her what she wants to hear. "It''s my butt, Mistress Kendra, I just let you fuck it sometimes!" you tell her.'
-			'Just as you expected, she starts fucking you harder and faster. "You will learn your place, Slave! You will submit to me, or I will fuck your ass raw." She explains and for several minutes she just fucks your butt, before ordering you once again. "Tell me your ass belongs to me, Slave!" You know she will just fuck you harder until you submit, but maybe deep down that''s what you really want...'
+			'You decide not to tell her what she wants to hear. "It''s my butt, Mistress Kendra, I just let you fuck it sometimes!" you tell her.'
+			'Just as you expected, she starts fucking you harder and faster. "You will learn your place, Slave! You will submit to me, or I will fuck your ass raw," she explains, and for several minutes she just fucks your butt, before ordering you once again, "Tell me your ass belongs to me, Slave!" You know she will just fuck you harder until you submit, but maybe deep down that''s what you really want...'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Submit':
@@ -1167,8 +1169,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendraanal':
 				'You submit to her command, telling her what she wants to hear before she fucks your asshole raw. "My ass belongs to you, Mistress Kendra!"'
 				'She smiles at you, pushing your legs together as she continues to fuck your asshole. "That''s right, Slave. And what can I do with it?" she asks.'
 				'You reply to her. "Anything you want, Mistress Kendra, I belong to you!"'
-				'Her smile gets bigger. "That''s right, bitch, your ass belongs to me and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" she commands'
-				'Despite the pain, you moan in pleasure as she continues fucking your ass. "My ass belongs to you and you can fuck it anytime you want, Mistress Kendra!" you scream. She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple more minutes, as if to make her point, before she finally pulls it out of you. As she does, she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
+				'Her smile gets bigger. "That''s right, bitch, your ass belongs to me, and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" she commands.'
+				'Despite the pain, you moan in pleasure as she continues fucking your ass. "My ass belongs to you, and you can fuck it anytime you want, Mistress Kendra!" you scream. She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple more minutes, as if to make her point, before she finally pulls it out of you. As she does, she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Finish': gt 'sexshop', 'kendrafinish'
@@ -1180,8 +1182,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendraanal':
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend6.jpg"></center>'
-					'You decide to resist again. "No, Mistress Kendra! This is my ass, and I decided who fucks it!" You tell her.'
-					'She starts fucking you even harder and even faster than before. She pushes your legs close, so she can get a better grip on your hips. "Learn your damn place, Slave! You belong to me! You will submit to me now, or else no matter what you say, I will fuck your ass raw right now!" she shouts, and for several minutes she pounds into your asshole, commanding you once again. "Tell me your ass belongs to me, Slave! Now!" You know she will just fuck you harder until you submit, you doubt you can last until she gets tired. Eventually, your asshole will start to get sore and it will start really hurting. And not in the good way it is now.'
+					'You decide to resist again. "No, Mistress Kendra! This is my ass, and I decide who fucks it!" You tell her.'
+					'She starts fucking you even harder and even faster than before. She pushes your legs close so she can get a better grip on your hips. "Learn your damn place, Slave! You belong to me! You will submit to me now, or else no matter what you say, I will fuck your ass raw right now!" she shouts, and for several minutes, she pounds into your asshole, commanding you once again, "Tell me your ass belongs to me, Slave! Now!" You know she will just fuck you harder until you submit. You doubt you can last until she gets tired. Eventually, your asshole will start to get sore, and it will start really hurting. And not in the good way it is now.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Submit':
@@ -1191,8 +1193,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendraanal':
 						'You finally submit to her command, telling her what she wants to hear before she fucks your asshole raw. "My ass belongs to you, Mistress Kendra!"'
 						'She smiles at you, pushing your legs together as she continues to fuck your asshole. "That''s right, Slave. And what can I do with it?" she asks.'
 						'You reply to her. "Anything you want, Mistress Kendra, I belong to you!"'
-						'Her smile gets bigger. "That''s right, bitch, your ass belongs to me and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" she commands'
-						'Despite the pain, you moan in pleasure as she continues fucking your ass. "My ass belongs to you and you can fuck it anytime you want, Mistress Kendra!" you scream. She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple more minutes, as if to make her point, before she finally pulls it out of you. As she does, she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
+						'Her smile gets bigger. "That''s right, bitch, your ass belongs to me, and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" she commands.'
+						'Despite the pain, you moan in pleasure as she continues fucking your ass. "My ass belongs to you, and you can fuck it anytime you want, Mistress Kendra!" you scream. She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple more minutes, as if to make her point, before she finally pulls it out of you. As she does, she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Finish': gt 'sexshop', 'kendrafinish'
@@ -1204,8 +1206,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendraanal':
 							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend14.jpg"></center>'
-							'Still, you refuse and resist her. "No!" Unable to tell her more than a simple no, as it is starting to hurt now.'
-							'She slams it balls deep into your ass, and starts hammering you as hard and fast as she can. "You will learn your place, right this instant, Slave. You will submit to me, now, or I will stay her all day and fuck your ass until you weep and beg me to stop." For several minutes, she pounds into your sore asshole over and over - it is beginning to hurt a lot. "Tell me, right now, your ass belongs to me, Slave!" she commands you. Your ass is starting to hurt, feeling like it is starting to burn. You just can''t take it anymore and you have to give in.'
+							'Though unable to get out more than a simple "No!" against the pain of her endless thrusts, still you refuse and resist her.'
+							'She slams the strap-on balls deep into your ass and starts hammering you as hard and fast as she can. "You will learn your place, right this instant, Slave. You will submit to me, now, or I will stay here all day and fuck your ass until you weep and beg me to stop." For several minutes, she pounds into your sore asshole over and over - it is beginning to hurt a lot. "Tell me, right now, your ass belongs to me, Slave!" she commands you. Your ass is burning. You just can''t take it anymore, and you have to give in.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 							gs 'pain', 1, 'asshole', 'tear'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -1216,8 +1218,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendraanal':
 								'You finally submit to her command as your ass starts to have a burning sensation, telling her what she wants to hear. "My ass belongs to you, Mistress Kendra!"'
 								'She smiles at you as she continues to fuck your asshole. "That''s right, Slave. And what can I do with it?" she asks.'
 								'You reply to her. "Anything you want, Mistress Kendra, I belong to you!"'
-								'Her smile gets bigger. "That''s right, bitch, your ass belongs to me and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" she commands'
-								'Despite the burning pain, you moan in pleasure as she continues fucking your ass. "My ass belongs to you and you can fuck it anytime you want, Mistress Kendra!" you scream. She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple more minutes, as if to make her point, before she finally pulls it out of you. As she does, she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
+								'Her smile gets bigger. "That''s right, bitch, your ass belongs to me, and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" she commands.'
+								'Despite the burning pain, you moan in pleasure as she continues fucking your ass. "My ass belongs to you, and you can fuck it anytime you want, Mistress Kendra!" you scream. She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple more minutes, as if to make her point, before she finally pulls it out of you. As she does, she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 								gs 'pain', 1, 'asshole', 'tear'
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -1244,11 +1246,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendrafinish':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend16.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you stand up, she grabs you by the throat and pulls you close. "Stick out your tongue."'
-	'You do as she says and stick out your tongue. She licks your tongue with hers, and the two of you lick each others'' tongues for a few moments. Finally, she stops and grabs your butt cheek roughly - digging her nails into your backside. Hard enough it hurts a little. Then she lets go and steps away, and the pain quickly fades. She begins taking off her harness. She cleans the dildo, and then puts it away, before getting dressed. Once she is fully dressed, she finally turns to you again. "You may get dressed, Slave."'
+	'You do as she says and stick out your tongue. She joins her tongue with yours, and the two of you kiss for a few moments. Finally, she stops and grabs your butt cheek roughly - digging her nails into your backside hard enough it hurts a little. Then she lets go and steps away, and the pain quickly fades. She begins taking off her harness. She cleans the dildo and then puts it away before getting dressed. Once she is fully dressed, she finally turns to you again. "You may get dressed, Slave."'
 	*nl
-	'"Thank you, Mistress" you tell her, as you get dressed.'
-	'Once you are both fully dressed she says "You should come visit me, I live in the dorms at the University on the island." She gives you directions to which of the dorm buildings is hers, and the floor and room number of her dorm room. "I expect my little white slave to come visit me. Often."'
-	'"Yes, Mistress Kendra" you reply. With that, you leave the basement and go back up to the shop above.'
+	'"Thank you, Mistress," you tell her as you get dressed.'
+	'Once you are both fully dressed, she says, "You should come visit me, I live in the dorms at the University on the island." She gives you directions to which of the dorm buildings is hers and the floor and room number of her dorm room. "I expect my little white slave to come visit me. Often."'
+	'"Yes, Mistress Kendra," you reply. With that, you leave the basement and go back up to the shop above.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1261,7 +1263,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shprod':
 	menu_off = 1
 	minut += 5
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/shprod.jpg"></center>'
-	'The cashier is right in front of you, offering to help, and holding a miniskirt. "Girl, this is very you. Will you try it on?"'
+	'The cashier is right in front of you, offering to help and holding a miniskirt. "Girl, this is very you. Will you try it on?"'
 
 	act 'Refuse':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 
@@ -1269,8 +1271,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shprod':
 		*clr & cla
 		picrand = 47
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/shprod1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You wear the skirt out of the booth, and pose in the mirror. You do not have panties on, and the skirt is so short that it looks more like a belt. It does not cover anything.	All your charms are visible, from all directions.'
-		'Approaching the mirror, you are considering this so-called skirt. The cashier kneels behind you and starts praising your ass in that skirt. His hands already wandering around your hips as he get his lips as close to your butt as he can. He says that he wants to "kiss your skin". Words soon cease, and just the feeling of his lips against your skin remain. Closer and closer to your pussy.'
+		'You wear the skirt out of the booth and pose in the mirror. You do not have panties on, and the skirt is so short that it looks more like a belt. It does not cover anything.	Your pussy is fully visible from all directions.'
+		'Approaching the mirror, you consider this so-called skirt. The cashier kneels behind you and starts praising how your ass looks in it, his hands wandering around your hips as he get his lips as close to your butt as he can. He says that he wants to "kiss your skin". Words soon cease, and just the feeling of his lips against your skin remains. Closer and closer to your pussy.'
 		gs 'willpower', 'cuni', 'resist', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Push him away(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':

+ 19 - 19
locations/shop.qsrc

@@ -36,8 +36,8 @@ if $shoplocation = 'main':
 	end
 
 	'In the hall stands an <a href="exec:$shoplocation = ''ATM'' & gt ''shop'', ''move''">ATM</a>, from which you can withdraw money from your bank account.'
-	'There is a branch of communication giants <a href="exec:$shoplocation = ''megafon'' & gt ''shop'', ''move''">MegaFon</a>.'
-	'On the other side is on the wall <a href="exec: gs ''noticeboard'',''start''">Public notice board</a>, where you can check various private and official advertisement.'
+	'There is a branch of communications giant <a href="exec:$shoplocation = ''megafon'' & gt ''shop'', ''move''">MegaFon</a>.'
+	'On the other side on the wall, there is a <a href="exec: gs ''noticeboard'',''start''">Public notice board</a>, where you can check various private and official advertisement.'
 	'<br>Most of the space in the supermarket is taken up by the <a href="exec:$shoplocation = ''grocery'' & gt ''shop'', ''move''">grocery department</a>, but the store has many smaller departments as well. <a href="exec:$shoplocation=''cosmetics'' & gt ''shop'', ''move''">Cosmetics</a>, <a href="exec:$shoplocation = ''hardware'' & gt ''shop'', ''move''">hardware</a>, <a href="exec:$shoplocation = ''clothing'' & gt ''shop'', ''move''">clothing</a> and the department of <a href="exec:$shoplocation = ''tech'' & gt ''shop'', ''move''">household appliances</a>. Not far from the entrance is a <a href="exec:$shoplocation = ''icecream'' & gt ''shop'', ''move''">counter selling ice cream</a>.'
 	gs 'stat'
 	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
@@ -54,18 +54,18 @@ if $shoplocation = 'main':
 	if $loc = 'city_residential':
 		if rand(1, 20) = 20:
 			if dimaQW = 0:
-				'By the store entrance a man is looking at you appreciatively.'
+				'By the store entrance, a man is looking at you appreciatively.'
 				act 'Return the look':gt 'event', 'dima'
 			elseif dimaQW = 1:
-				'In the lobby of the store you notice Dima and you are frozen with fear, you want to run, but your legs won''t respond.'
-				'Your heart is thumping in your chest, your vision narrows, you feel faint.'
+				'In the lobby of the store, you notice Dima, and you are frozen with fear. You want to run, but your legs won''t respond.'
+				'Your heart thumps in your chest, your vision narrows, you feel faint.'
 				act 'Pass out':gt 'event', 'scoreslut1'
 			else
-				'You meet the same Dima who''s friend fucked and abused you. Dima grins confidently and says, "Hello."'
+				'You meet the same Dima whose friend fucked and abused you. Dima grins confidently and says, "Hello."'
 
 				act 'Hello':
 					cla
-					'"Come with me, My wife''s away", says Dima.'
+					'"Come with me. My wife''s away," says Dima.'
 					
 					gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -87,9 +87,9 @@ if $shoplocation = 'main':
 							spafinloc = 12
 							gs 'cum_manage'
 							swallow += 1
-							'Dima takes you to his house and orders you to lie across the sofa. You get on into position, he calls you a bitch and a starts fucking you in the mouth.'
+							'Dima takes you to his house and orders you to lie across the sofa. You get into position. He calls you a bitch and starts fucking you in the mouth.'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/street/sex/gostdt2.jpg"></center>'
-							'Dima finally finishes in your mouth, you obediently swallow and lick the remnants of sperm off his big cock.'
+							'Dima finally finishes in your mouth. You obediently swallow and lick the remnants of sperm off his big cock.'
 							
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'deepthroat', 'humiliation'
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -102,10 +102,10 @@ if $shoplocation = 'main':
 							spafinloc = 4
 							gs 'cum_manage'
 							spank += 1
-							'Dima has brings you to his house and right in the corridor begins to kiss and undress you. When you are naked he takes you to the bathroom.'
-							'There he unscrews the shower-head and puts the hose in your ass. Quickly you feel the fullness and Dima sits you on the toilet. After the rough enema, he bends you over and puts his big dick in your ass.'
+							'Dima brings you to his house and, right in the corridor, begins to kiss and undress you. When you are naked, he takes you to the bathroom.'
+							'There, he unscrews the shower-head and puts the hose in your ass. Quickly, you feel the fullness and Dima sits you on the toilet. After the rough enema, he bends you over and puts his big dick in your ass.'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/street/sex/gostanal2.jpg"></center>'
-							'Dima fucks you in the ass whilst slapping your butt, at first it is painful, but gradually you get it and it feels amazing. Finally, your ass fills with hot liquid and Dima moans and grabs your buttocks.'
+							'Dima fucks you in the ass whilst slapping your butt. At first it is painful, but gradually, you get into it, and it feels amazing. Finally, your ass fills with hot liquid, and Dima moans and grabs your buttocks.'
 							
 							gs 'arousal', 'anal', 30, 'sub', 'rough', 'humiliation'
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ if $shoplocation = 'main':
 	if TorgPredZ > 0:
 		!! the location of the shop hasn''t been done today
 		if ($loc = 'city_residential' and StreetShopTPday ! daystart) or ($loc = 'city_industrial' and nordShopTPday ! daystart) or ($loc = 'torgcentr' and downShopTPday ! daystart):
-			act 'Arrange products':
+			act 'Promote products':
 				*clr & cla
 				if $loc = 'city_residential':StreetShopTPday = daystart
 				if $loc = 'city_industrial':nordShopTPday = daystart
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ if $shoplocation = 'main':
 				TorgPredZV += 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/store/shop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You arranged the products for quite a while and when I finally managed, then went to the cashier and you check it struck.'
+				'You promote the products for quite a while, and when you finally finish, you go to the cashier and confirm they sold.'
 
 				act 'Exit':gt 'shop', 'start'
 			end
@@ -169,14 +169,14 @@ if $shoplocation = 'ATM':
 				cla
 				minut += 5
 
-				kartaINATM = input ("How much money you want to deposit into the account? Note: A service charge of 100 <b>₽</b> will be deducted from the amount deposited.")
+				kartaINATM = input ("How much money do you want to deposit into the account? Note: A service charge of 100 <b>₽</b> will be deducted from the amount deposited.")
 				if kartaINATM < 100 or kartaINATM > money:
 					'This is not a valid input.'
 				else
 					atmDeposit += kartaINATM - 100
 					atmDepositDate = daystart + 2
 					money -= kartaINATM
-					'<br>You deposited <<kartaINATM>> <b>₽</b> into your account.'
+					'<br>You deposit <<kartaINATM>> <b>₽</b> into your account.'
 					'It will take 2 days for funds to be available. Your new balance will be <<karta+atmDeposit>> <b>₽</b>.'
 				end
 
@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ if $shoplocation = 'ATM':
 				cla
 				minut += 5
 
-				kartaOUT = input ("How much money you want to withdraw?")
+				kartaOUT = input ("How much money do you want to withdraw?")
 				if kartaOUT <= 0 or kartaOUT > karta + bankDebtLimit:
 					'<br>Invalid operation.'
 				else
@@ -349,7 +349,7 @@ if $shoplocation = 'clothing':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Department of Women''s Clothing</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/store/shop4.jpg"></center>'
-	'This department is mostly cheap underwear, they also have an ugly coat and one style of mumsy swimwwear.'
+	'This department is mostly cheap underwear. They also have an ugly coat and one style of mumsy swimwwear.'
 	'It is the only place you can buy ice-skates though.'
 
 	if hour < 8 or hour > 20:
@@ -517,7 +517,7 @@ if $shoplocation = 'icecream':
 			pcs_breath = 0
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/food/icecreem.jpg"></center>'
-			'You bought ice cream and ate it not going far.'
+			'You buy ice cream and eat it not going far.'
 			act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'shop', 'start'
 		end
 	end

+ 13 - 13
locations/shop_dolls.qsrc

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Patch Work Dolls</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/dolls/dolls.jpg"></center>'
 	''
-	'The store has a small front on a side street but one glance is all you need to tell this is not your average clothing store. Inside the store, shelves and racks of alternative clothes crammed into every available space - anybody setting out to find an inch of wall would have their work cut out for them. The checkout counter is near the entrance.'
+	'The store has a small front on a side street, but one glance is all you need to tell this is not your average clothing store. Inside the store, shelves and racks of alternative clothes are crammed into every available space - anybody setting out to find an inch of wall would have their work cut out for them. The checkout counter is near the entrance.'
 	if doll_staff_day ! daystart:
 		if rand(0,1) = 0:
 			doll_staff = 0
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'browse':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Patch Work Dolls</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/dolls/dollsshop.jpg"></center>'
 	''
-	'The store has a small front on a side street but one glance is all you need to tell this is not your average clothing store. Inside the store, shelves and racks of alternative clothes crammed into every available space - anybody setting out to find an inch of wall would have their work cut out for them. The checkout counter is near the entrance.'
+	'The store has a small front on a side street, but one glance is all you need to tell this is not your average clothing store. Inside the store, shelves and racks of alternative clothes are crammed into every available space - anybody setting out to find an inch of wall would have their work cut out for them. The checkout counter is near the entrance.'
 
 	act 'View dresses':gt 'shop_dolls', 'dress'
 	act 'View other outfits':gt 'shop_dolls', 'clothing'
@@ -233,7 +233,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'savva':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Patch Work Dolls</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/savva/savva.jpg"></center>'
 	if know_Savva = 0:
-		'At the counter you see a young man; he looks about your sister''s age but he has a shy, quiet, almost girlish quality about him. As you approach the counter, he quietly asks if you need help, so softly you can barely hear him. "Can I help you?"'
+		'At the counter, you see a young man; he looks about your sister''s age, but he has a shy, quiet, almost girlish quality about him. As you approach the counter, he quietly asks, so softly you can barely hear him, "Can I help you?"'
 	else
 		'Savva is working the counter today. As you walk up, he gives you a friendly smile. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, nice to see you again. What can I help you with?"'
 	end
@@ -242,7 +242,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'savva':
 		npc_rel['A204'] += 2
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Patch Work Dolls</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/savva/savva.jpg"></center>'
-		'You ask him about the shop. He tells you it opened a few years ago and they mostly cater to the college kids. Occasionally they get hassled by the local gopniks or police, but he likes the job. Then asks if you need help finding an outfit.'
+		'You ask him about the shop. He tells you it opened a few years ago and they mostly cater to the college kids. Occasionally they get hassled by the local gopniks or police, but he likes the job. Then he asks if you need help finding an outfit.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'shop_dolls', 'savva'
 	end
 !!this only shows up as an option if Anushka sent Sveta to the store from one of her chat options in Anushka file or anushapt file.
@@ -252,13 +252,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'savva':
 			npc_rel['A204'] += 3
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Patch Work Dolls</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/savva/savva.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Anushka, a friend of mine, sent me." you tell him with a smile.'
+			'"Anushka, a friend of mine, sent me," you tell him with a smile.'
 			'He laughs a bit. "Well you must lead a real interesting life then if she is your friend. So you from Pavlovsk too?"'
 			'You nod a bit. "Yeah, we go to school together actually."'
 			'He nods a bit. "Cool, I still find it hard to believe that a girl like that has good enough grades to go to the University. Guess when that happens, I''ll see a lot more of her."'
 			*nl
 			'"She is a wild one, that''s for sure. Anyways, she told me you could help and that you ''owe her one.''"'
-			'He snorts and shakes his head. "She must be failing math since she doesn''t seem to know how to count. But she''s pretty cool and if she sent you, then you have to be ok. So what''s your name?" You tell him your name and he types out a few things on the computer and a few moments later, you hear the sound of something printing. Then he hands over a card. "Here is a VIP customer card, good for ten percent off anything in the store. Now you can tell her she owes me, like I am ever likely to collect." he says with a laugh.'
+			'He snorts and shakes his head. "She must be failing math since she doesn''t seem to know how to count. But she''s pretty cool, and if she sent you, then you have to be ok. So what''s your name?" You tell him your name, and he types out a few things on the computer. A few moments later, you hear the sound of something printing. Then he hands over a card. "Here is a VIP customer card, good for ten percent off anything in the store. Now you can tell her she owes me, like I am ever likely to collect," he says with a laugh.'
 	!!can this be coded so Sveta gets a discount on all items here after this conversation.
 			act 'Continue': gt 'shop_dolls', 'savva'
 		end
@@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'viola':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Patch Work Dolls</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/viola/viola.jpg"></center>'
 	if know_Viola = 0:
-		'At the counter you see a young woman, maybe as old as your sister or a year or two older. She is reading a magazine when you walk up, only glancing up at you as you stop at the counter. "How can I help you?"'
+		'At the counter, you see a young woman, maybe as old as your sister or a year or two older. She is reading a magazine when you walk up, only glancing up at you as you stop at the counter. "How can I help you?"'
 	else
 		'"What''s up, <<$pcs_nickname>>? You here to do a little shopping or to kill some time?"'
 	end
@@ -298,7 +298,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'viola':
 		cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Patch Work Dolls</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/viola/viola.jpg"></center>'
-		'You ask her about the shop. She tells you the place is only a few years old and is about the only place to buy a decent outfit in the whole city; unless you are willing to shop online, that is, which leads her to talking about the woes of online shopping where clothes don''t fit and never seem to have anywhere near as good a quality as they seem to on the pictures. You get the impression that the topic really bothers her and she could go on for some time if you let her.'
+		'You ask her about the shop. She tells you the place is only a few years old and is about the only place to buy a decent outfit in the whole city; unless you are willing to shop online, that is, which leads her to talking about the woes of online shopping where clothes don''t fit and never seem to have anywhere near as good a quality as they seem to in the pictures. You get the impression that the topic really bothers her and she could go on for some time if you let her.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'shop_dolls', 'viola'
 	end
 !!this only shows up as an option if Anushka sent Sveta to the store from one of her chat options in Anushka file or anushapt file.
@@ -309,12 +309,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'viola':
 			npc_rel['A205'] += 5
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Patch Work Dolls</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/viola/viola.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Anushka, a friend of mine, sent me." you tell her with a smile.'
+			'"Anushka, a friend of mine, sent me," you tell her with a smile.'
 			'Viola perks up a bit at the mention of Anushka. "Oh? You''re friends with Nush? Why didn''t you say so? How is she doing? Raising hell and having fun if I know her."'
 			*nl
-			'You can''t help but grin a little. If you are not mistaken, Viola has a thing for Anushka. "She''s good, I was asking her about her clothes. You know she has such good tastes. I asked her where she got them and she said you guys could help me out. Oh and she said to tell you that you ''owe her one'' or something like that."'
+			'You can''t help but grin a little. If you are not mistaken, Viola has a thing for Anushka. "She''s good, I was asking her about her clothes. You know she has such good tastes. I asked her where she got them, and she said you guys could help me out. Oh and she said to tell you that you ''owe her one'' or something like that."'
 			*nl
-			'Viola laughs at that last bit. "I seem to always be owing her, not sure how math works in her head. But if she sent you, then you are in good hands. What''s your name?" You tell her your name and she types out a few things on the computer and a few moments later, you hear the sound of something printing. Then she hands over a card. "Here is a VIP customer card, good for ten percent off anything in the store. Now you can tell her she owes me." Viola says with a wink.'
+			'Viola laughs at that last bit. "I seem to always be owing her, not sure how math works in her head. But if she sent you, then you are in good hands. What''s your name?" You tell her your name, and she types out a few things on the computer. A few moments later, you hear the sound of something printing. Then she hands over a card. "Here is a VIP customer card, good for ten percent off anything in the store. Now you can tell her she owes me," Viola says with a wink.'
 	!!can this be coded so Sveta gets a discount on all items here after this conversation.
 			act 'Continue': gt 'shop_dolls', 'viola'
 		end
@@ -324,7 +324,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'viola':
 		npc_rel['A205'] += 3
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Patch Work Dolls</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/viola/viola.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you talk to her, you start flirting and she returns the favor to a point, occasionally touching your hand or shoulder, laughing at some of the things you say... but she never fully commits to flirting with you; either she''s playing hard to get, trying to put you in a good mood to buy stuff, or she is messing with you - you are unsure which one it is.'
+		'As you talk to her, you start flirting, and she returns the favor to a point, occasionally touching your hand or shoulder, laughing at some of the things you say... but she never fully commits to flirting with you; she''s either playing hard to get, trying to put you in a good mood to buy stuff, or messing with you - you are unsure which one it is.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'shop_dolls', 'viola'
 	end
 	act 'Chat with her':
@@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'viola':
 		npc_rel['A205'] += 2
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Patch Work Dolls</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/viola/viola.jpg"></center>'
-		'You decide to chat with her and the two of you talk about a variety of topics. She seems happy to talk with you, especially about fashion, techniques on dying your hair, music, and the injustices of life. She mentions how the gopniks hassle some of the gay boys that shop here and some time passes, before you decide to do something else.'
+		'You decide to chat with her, and the two of you talk about a variety of topics. She seems happy to talk with you, especially about fashion, techniques for dyeing your hair, music, and the injustices of life. She mentions how the gopniks hassle some of the gay boys that shop here, and some time passes before you decide to do something else.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'shop_dolls', 'viola'
 	end
 	act 'Return': gt 'shop_dolls', 'start'

+ 8 - 8
locations/shop_fashionista.qsrc

@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 	
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/changingroom.jpg"</center>'
-	'As you walk through the store you notice that there''s nobody in the changing rooms. Feeling a bit bored you go look at some clothes and grab several items to try on before heading into one of the changing rooms.'
+	'As you walk through the store you notice that there''s nobody in the changing rooms. Feeling a bit bored, you go look at some clothes and grab several items to try on before heading into one of the changing rooms.'
 	
 	if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 		act 'Try on clothes': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'dressingclothes'
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 			if NatbelQW['seethrough'] = 0 and NatbelQW['QWstage'] > 5 and NatbelQW['underwearShop'] = 0:
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/nude.jpg"</center>'
-				'As you try on a particularly spicy set of seethrough underwear you notice that it doesn''t quite fit you.'
+				'As you try on a particularly spicy set of see-through underwear, you notice that it doesn''t quite fit you.'
 				'"This should fit Natasha perfectly though. And it only costs 750 <b>₽</b>." You think to yourself, imagining the look on her face if you make her wear it.'
 				act 'Buy it':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 					'You put the underwear aside for now so that you can take it to the register with you.'
 					money -= 750
 					NatbelQW['seethrough'] = 1
-					act 'Stay in the changingroom': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
+					act 'Stay in the changing room': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
 					act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 				end			
 				act 'Don''t buy it':
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/nude.jpg"</center>'
 					'Deciding against it, you look through the rest of the underwear for something that would fit you better.'
 					NatbelQW['underwearShop'] = 1
-					act 'Stay in the changingroom': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
+					act 'Stay in the changing room': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
 					act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 				end
 			else
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/dressed.jpg"</center>'
 			gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
-			act 'Stay in the changingroom': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
+			act 'Stay in the changing room': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
 			act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 		end
 	end
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/underwear.jpg"</center>'
 			gs 'clothing', 'strip'
-			act 'Stay in the changingroom': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
+			act 'Stay in the changing room': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
 			act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 		end
 	end
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/underwear.jpg"</center>'
 			gs 'underwear', 'wear'
-			act 'Stay in the changingroom': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
+			act 'Stay in the changing room': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
 			act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 		end
 	end
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/nude.jpg"</center>'
 			gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 			gs 'underwear', 'remove'
-			act 'Stay in the changingroom': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
+			act 'Stay in the changing room': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
 			act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 		end
 	end

+ 23 - 23
locations/shopdacha.qsrc

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ gs 'stat'
 gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 '<center><b><font color="maroon">Ilyich and Biryukov construction</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/store/shopdacha.jpg"></center>'
-'In this storefront office you can upgrade your existing properties, or start a new construction project upon any land you may own.'
+'In this storefront office, you can upgrade your existing properties or start a new construction project upon any land you may own.'
 'All payments must be made from you bank account. Current balance - <<karta>> <b>₽</b>.'
 
 act 'Leave': minut += 3 & gt 'torgcentr'
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ else
 				if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 50000:
 					rembedr = 1
 					karta -= 50000
-					'You have upgraded your apartment bedroom'
+					'You upgrade your apartment bedroom.'
 				else
 					'Unfortunately, you do not have enough money in your bank account.'
 				end
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ else
 				if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 50000:
 					remsitr = 1
 					karta -= 50000
-					'You have upgraded your apartment living room'
+					'You upgrade your apartment living room.'
 				else
 					'Unfortunately, you do not have enough money in your bank account.'
 				end
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ else
 				if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 50000:
 					remkorr = 1
 					karta -= 50000
-					'You have upgraded your apartment hallway'
+					'You upgrade your apartment hallway.'
 				else
 					'Unfortunately, you do not have enough money in your bank account.'
 				end
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ else
 				if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 50000:
 					remvanr = 1
 					karta -= 50000
-					'You have upgraded your apartment bathroom'
+					'You upgrade your apartment bathroom.'
 				else
 					'Unfortunately, you do not have enough money in your bank account.'
 				end
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ else
 				if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 50000:
 					remkuhr = 1
 					karta -= 50000
-					'You have upgraded your apartment kitchen'
+					'You upgrade your apartment kitchen.'
 				else
 					'Unfortunately, you do not have enough money in your bank account.'
 				end
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ else
 			home_owned[3] = 2
 			minut += 15
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You upgraded you dacha in the cooperative.'
+			'You upgrade you dacha in the cooperative.'
 			act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 		end
 	end
@@ -108,20 +108,20 @@ else
 			home_owned[5] = 2
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You paid for a connection of services to the site.'
+			'You pay for a connection of services to the site.'
 
 			act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 		end
 	end
 
 	if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 1500000 and home_owned[5] = 2:
-		act 'Build Mansion''s shell for (1,500,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Build mansion''s shell for (1,500,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			karta -= 1500000
 			home_owned[5] = 3
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You paid for the construction of the Mansion''s shell.'
+			'You pay for the construction of the mansion''s shell.'
 
 			act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 		end
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ else
 			ymanrem[3] = 1
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You paid for the construction of the Mansion''s internal walls.'
+			'You pay for the construction of the mansion''s internal walls.'
 
 			act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 		end
@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ else
 				banaMansion = 1
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You paid for the electrics and plumbing to be installed.'
+				'You pay for the electrics and plumbing to be installed.'
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end
@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ else
 				bassMansion = 1
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You paid for the construction of the Mansion''s pool.'
+				'You pay for the construction of the mansion''s pool.'
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end
@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ else
 				ymanrem[3] = 3
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You bought lounge furniture.'
+				'You buy lounge furniture.'
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end
@@ -210,7 +210,7 @@ else
 				ymanrem[4] = 2
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You bought bedroom furniture.'
+				'You buy bedroom furniture.'
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end
@@ -295,7 +295,7 @@ else
 				ymanrem[8] = 1
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You pay for your lounge'
+				'You pay for your lounge.'
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end
@@ -319,7 +319,7 @@ else
 				ymanrem[9] = 1
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You pay for a children''s room'
+				'You pay for a children''s room.'
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end
@@ -330,7 +330,7 @@ else
 				ymanrem[9] = 2
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You paid furniture for the nursery.'
+				'You pay furniture for the nursery.'
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end
@@ -343,7 +343,7 @@ else
 				ymanrem[10] = 1
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You pay for a library'
+				'You pay for a library.'
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end
@@ -354,7 +354,7 @@ else
 				ymanrem[10] = 2
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You bought furniture for the library.'
+				'You buy furniture for the library.'
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end
@@ -367,7 +367,7 @@ else
 				ymanrem[11] = 1
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You bought a gym.'
+				'You buy a gym.'
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end
@@ -378,7 +378,7 @@ else
 				ymanrem[11] = 2
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You bought gym equipment.'
+				'You buy gym equipment.'
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end
@@ -402,7 +402,7 @@ else
 				ymanrem[12] = 2
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You bought office furniture.'
+				'You buy office furniture.'
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end

+ 131 - 131
locations/shoplifting.qsrc

@@ -15,15 +15,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'city':
 		picrand = rand(0,7)
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/steal<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'Standing in front make-up section of the supermarket. You nervously look over your shoulder to make sure none of the employees are able to spot you.'
+		'Standing in front of the make-up section of the supermarket, you nervously look over your shoulder to make sure none of the employees are able to spot you.'
 		'Seeing no one, you casually reach out for the make-up you usually use and tuck it away...'
-		'After looking around the cosmetic section for a while more you decide it''s time to make your escape.'
+		'After looking around the cosmetic section for a while more, you decide it''s time to make your escape.'
 
 		act 'Leave the store':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/leave.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, just act normal..." you sigh quietly as you step towards the exit, trying to not draw any attention towards you.'
+			'"Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, just act normal..." you sigh quietly as you step towards the exit, trying to not draw any attention towards yourself.'
 			'Don''t panic...'
 			'Walk casually...'
 			'Almost there...'
@@ -35,10 +35,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'city':
 			if ((pcs_observ+pcs_persuas > 50) and (hour = 12 or hour = 17)) or pcs_observ+pcs_persuas > 150 or rand(0,4) > 0:
 				!if observation and persuasion = sufficient: and certain time of the day (when the store is full with people)
 				kosmetica += 50
-				'As you walk by the counters and leave the supermarket you feel a rush of excitement. You''re almost there now, feeling relieved as well as triumphant. You''re going to make it, for sure!'
+				'As you walk by the counters and leave the supermarket, you feel a rush of excitement. You''re almost there now, feeling relieved as well as triumphant. You''re going to make it for sure!'
 				'You feel your hands trembling in your pockets, getting worse with every step. No matter what you do, you can''t shake the feeling that someone must''ve spotted you... surely they''ve spotted you!'
-				'You desperately try to calm yourself down with every step you get closer to the exit. No one seems to be stopping you, so far... maybe you got lucky?'
-				'Before you know it you''re standing outside, having managed to get away with all kinds of loot. You turn back one last time to make sure that no one is following you.'
+				'You desperately try to calm yourself down as with every step you get closer to the exit. No one seems to be stopping you so far... maybe you got lucky?'
+				'Before you know it, you''re standing outside, having managed to get away with your loot. You turn back one last time to make sure that no one is following you.'
 
 				act 'Keep on walking':gt 'torgcentr'
 
@@ -46,15 +46,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'city':
 				!elseif observation, persuasion and running level = sufficient and certain time of day (less people around):
 				!ADD COOLDOWN ON ATTEMPT TO STEAL, TWO WEEKS
 				'You feel your hands trembling in your pockets, getting worse with every step. No matter what you do, you can''t shake the feeling that someone must''ve spotted you... surely they''ve spotted you!'
-				'You desperately try to calm yourself down with every step you get closer to the exit. No one seems to be stopping you, so far... maybe you got lucky?'
-				'You nervously look around making sure there isn''t anyone following you as you pass the counter. All of a sudden you see a guard appear and is walking towards you...'
+				'You desperately try to calm yourself down as with every step you get closer to the exit. No one seems to be stopping you so far... maybe you got lucky?'
+				'You nervously look around, making sure there isn''t anyone following you as you pass the counter. All of a sudden, you see a guard appear and walk towards you...'
 
 				act 'Try to escape':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 10
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/running.jpg"></center>'
-					'Realizing he''s out after you, and not wanting to get caught you make a dash for it. You can''t get caught for a small thing like this.'
+					'Realizing he''s out after you and not wanting to get caught, you make a dash for it. You can''t get caught for a small thing like this.'
 
 					if pcs_run > 70:
 						!if running skills are over a certain level, higher than the first check
@@ -62,26 +62,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'city':
 						run_exp += 5
 						!Boost the stats observation and running by 1
 						kosmetica += 50
-						'You keep running while the security guard is closely following you... You turn a corner and then quickly take another corner as you try to shake him off...'
-						'The guard is not easily giving up but after a few minutes you''ve managed to outrun him as you make your escape from the supermarket. You can hear the guard screaming behind you...'
+						'You keep running while the security guard follows close behind... You turn a corner and then quickly take another corner as you try to shake him off...'
+						'The guard is not easily giving up, but after a few minutes, you''ve managed to outrun him as you make your escape from the supermarket. You can hear the guard screaming behind you...'
 
 						act 'Catch your breath':gt 'city_center'
 
 					else
 						shlif_caught += 1
 						!ADD 1 TO THE CAUGHT COUNTER
-						'You keep running while the security guard is closely following you... You turn a corner and then quickly take another corner as you try to shake him off...'
-						'But the guard is not easily giving up and as you turn the corner you reach a dead-end. You quickly try to turn around and run another way but it''s too late as you''re tackled.'
-						'Laying on the ground the security guard quickly lifts you up and leads you toward the security room.'
+						'You keep running while the security guard follows close behind... You turn a corner and then quickly take another corner as you try to shake him off...'
+						'But the guard is not easily giving up, and as you turn the corner, you reach a dead-end. You quickly try to turn around and run another way but it''s too late as you''re tackled.'
+						'Lying on the ground, the security guard quickly lifts you up and leads you toward the security room.'
 
 						act 'Get lead to the security room':gt 'shoplifting', 'securityroom'
 					end
 				end
 			else
 				'You feel your hands trembling in your pockets, getting worse with every step. No matter what you do, you can''t shake the feeling that someone must''ve spotted you... surely they''ve spotted you!'
-				'You desperately try to calm yourself down with every step you get closer to the exit. No one seems to be stopping you, so far... maybe you got lucky?'
-				'You pass by the counter and seeing no one reacting you relax for a bit and let down your guard. Just as you''re about to leave through the entrance you feel a hand grab you by the shoulder.'
-				'You instantly turn around seeing a security guard is holding you and drags you back inside. Before you''re even able to speak up he is forcefully leading back to his office.'
+				'You desperately try to calm yourself down as with every step you get closer to the exit. No one seems to be stopping you so far... maybe you got lucky?'
+				'You pass by the counter, and seeing no one reacting, you relax for a bit and let down your guard. Just as you''re about to leave through the entrance, you feel a hand grab you by the shoulder.'
+				'You instantly turn around, seeing a security guard is holding you and dragging you back inside. Before you''re even able to speak up, he is forcefully leading you back to his office.'
 
 				act 'Get dragged into the back room':gt 'shoplifting', 'securityroom'
 			end
@@ -101,23 +101,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'securityroom':
 	shplft_value = 1300
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/caught.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Where are you taking me?" you shout out, "I haven''t done anything wrong!" you look around trying to catch someone''s attention. People are staring at you in disgust and turning their heads.'
-	'The security guard is keeping quiet as he forcefully pushes you away from the supermarket. You go through a dark hallway and stop at a door which he locks up and pushes you inside the room.'
-	'He orders you to take a seat on a basic chair and you quietly comply...'
-	'He sits down next to you and lets out a deep sigh, "You might as well admit we have you on tape that you''ve stolen..."'
+	'"Where are you taking me?" you shout out, "I haven''t done anything wrong!" You look around trying to catch someone''s attention. People are staring at you in disgust and turning their heads.'
+	'The security guard keeps quiet as he forcefully pushes you away from the supermarket. You go through a dark hallway and stop at a door, which he unlocks before pushing you inside.'
+	'He orders you to take a seat on a basic chair, and you quietly comply...'
+	'He sits down next to you and lets out a deep sigh, "You might as well admit what you''ve done. We have you on tape stealing..."'
 
 	act 'Admit':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You hang your head in discouragement that you''ve been caught. Your eyes tear up with crocodile tears as you try to come up with a way to get out of it, "I admit I''ve stolen..."'
-		'The guard clears his throat, "Well, that''s a start... Now I just need to go and have a talk to the store manager on how we''ll deal with you..."'
-		'Pleadingly you look at him, "Can''t we work something out? Do you really have to go and talk to the manager?"'
-		'Looking at you the security guard starts pondering and after a short moment he speaks up, "So what would you be able to offer me?"'
+		'You hang your head in resignation, realizing there''s no denying that you''ve been caught. Your eyes tear up with crocodile tears as you try to come up with a way to get out of this, "I admit I''ve stolen..."'
+		'The guard clears his throat, "Well, that''s a start... Now I just need to go and have a talk with the store manager on how we''ll deal with you..."'
+		'Pleadingly, you look at him, "Can''t we work something out? Do you really have to go and talk to the manager?"'
+		'Looking at you, the security guard starts pondering, and after a short moment, he speaks up, "So what would you be able to offer me?"'
 
 		act 'Masturbate for him': gt 'shoplifting', 'show'
 		act 'Offer him relief': gt 'shoplifting', 'bj'
-		if pcs_money >= 5000: act 'Offer a bribe (5000<b>₽</b>)': gt 'shoplifting', 'bribe'
+		if pcs_money >= 5000: act 'Offer a bribe (5000 <b>₽</b>)': gt 'shoplifting', 'bribe'
 		act 'Keep quiet': gt 'shoplifting', 'quiet'
 	end
 
@@ -128,16 +128,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'securityroom':
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You defyingly tell him that he''s grabbed the wrong person and that you have no idea what he''s talking about.'
-			'"Listen here, girl. We''ve got you on tape as you''ve shoplifted..." he proudly boasts.'
-			'You know you''ve been caught buy you keep on sticking to you story, "That can be whoever on that tape, how can you prove that''s me?"'
-			'The security guard chuckles, "Don''t worry about that. I''ll go and get the manager and then we''ll see what he decides to do with you..."'
+			'You defiantly tell him that he''s grabbed the wrong person and that you have no idea what he''s talking about.'
+			'"Listen here, girl. We''ve got you on tape as you shoplifted..." he proudly boasts.'
+			'You know you''ve been caught, but you keep on sticking to you story, "That could be whoever on that tape, how can you prove that''s me?"'
+			'The security guard chuckles, "Don''t worry about that. I''ll go and get the manager, and then we''ll see what he decides to do with you..."'
 			'"Wait!" you squeal, "We don''t need to get him involved..."'
 			'The security guard crosses his hands, "So what possibly could you offer me?"'
 
 			act 'Masturbate for him': gt 'shoplifting', 'show'
 			act 'Offer him relief': gt 'shoplifting', 'bj'
-			if pcs_money >= 5000: act 'Offer a bribe (5000<b>₽</b>)': gt 'shoplifting', 'bribe'
+			if pcs_money >= 5000: act 'Offer a bribe (5000 <b>₽</b>)': gt 'shoplifting', 'bribe'
 			act 'Keep quiet': gt 'shoplifting', 'quiet'
 		end
 	else
@@ -152,8 +152,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'show':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/show/show1.jpg"></center>'
 	'"How about a little show? I''ll help you get off, and you can even direct me on how the show will carry on..." you desperately proclaim.'
 	'The security guard stops, pondering about it for a moment... All of a sudden you can see him smirking, "And you''ll follow my instructions to the latter?"'
-	'You nod and slyly smile giving into the fantasy that you''re going to be entirely subdued by him...'
-	'"Fine, let''s begin then." he excitingly exclaims, "Stand up and let me take a look at you. I want you to tease yourself for a while, I love seeing girls getting off."'
+	'You nod and slyly smile, giving into the fantasy that you''re going to be entirely subdued by him...'
+	'"Fine, let''s begin then," he excitingly exclaims, "Stand up and let me take a look at you. I want you to tease yourself for a while, I love seeing girls getting off."'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'sub', 'exhibition'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -162,9 +162,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'show':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/show/show2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You comply and stand up, pressed against the wall, he begins grabbing your clothes wanting to remove them. While he''s doing this you hear him say, "I want you to touch yourself." You prepare yourself by taking a deep breath and slowly slide down your hand towards your panties. As you finally reach the clit, you slowly begin touching it, biting your lip as your body reacts to the soft touches.'
-		'The security guard is satisfyingly observing you, rubbing his cock throughout his pants. He''s clearly aroused and you fear a bit what might come next, but you manage to keep focus as you know this will seal your faith.'
-		'"Wonder if your panties are soaked yet, girl?" he asks.'
+		'You comply and stand up, pressing yourself against the wall. He begins grabbing your clothes, wanting to remove them. While he''s doing this, you hear him say, "I want you to touch yourself." You prepare yourself by taking a deep breath and slowly slide your hand down towards your panties. As you finally reach your clit, you slowly begin touching it, biting your lip as your body reacts to the soft touches.'
+		'The security guard is observing you satisfied, rubbing his cock throughout his pants. He''s clearly aroused, and you fear a bit what might come next, but you manage to keep focus as you know this will determine your fate.'
+		'"I wonder, are your panties soaked yet, girl?" he asks.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'sub', 'exhibition'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -173,9 +173,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'show':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/show/show3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You answer occurs in a gentle nod and a soft moan letting him know that his orders has succeeded making you wet.'
-			'Pleased, he nods his head as he continues on, "Remove your clothing I want to see them wet panties."'
-			'Once again you comply and remove you clothing piece by piece as he carefully scans your body, "Good, now sit back down again and spread your legs, slide your panties down I want to see that vulva exposed..."'
+			'Your answer comes as a gentle nod and a soft moan letting him know that his orders has succeeded in making you wet.'
+			'Pleased, he nods his head as he continues on, "Remove your clothing, I want to see them wet panties."'
+			'Once again, you comply and remove you clothing piece by piece as he carefully scans your body, "Good, now sit back down again and spread your legs, slide your panties down, I want to see that vulva exposed..."'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 3, 'sub', 'exhibition'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'show':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/show/show4.jpg"></center>'
 				'"I hate you..." you whisper softly as you obey.'
 				'He starts chuckling, "Good, I want you to hate me, this is making you feel humiliated. Use that frustration to begin touching yourself and pick up the pace this time."'
-				'You look madly at him as you use your fingers to rub on your exposed clit, picking up the pace. Just as you''re feeling excited he tells you to slow down as he doesn''t want you to get too much pleasure out of this...'
+				'You look madly at him as you use your fingers to rub on your exposed clit, picking up the pace. Just as you''re feeling excited, he tells you to slow down as he doesn''t want you to get too much pleasure out of this...'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 3, 'sub', 'exhibition'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -195,9 +195,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'show':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/show/show5.jpg"></center>'
-					'By the time you''ve gradually slowed down, the security guard himself has started jerking off as he''s closely observing your every move, turned on by your obedience.'
-					'Suddenly an urge overcomes you and without him commanding you, your other hand travels upward your body stopping at your breast and you carefully begin to play with one of your nipples, gently rubbing it in a circular motion building up your arousal.'
-					'You don''t even care anymore if he approves or not, you''re too excited and it''s getting the best of you as you begin picking up the pace again, moaning loudly by now.'
+					'By the time you''ve gradually slowed down, the security guard himself has started jerking off as he closely observes your every move, turned on by your obedience.'
+					'Suddenly, an urge overcomes you, and without him commanding you, your other hand travels upward, stopping at your breast. You carefully begin to play with one of your nipples, gently rubbing it in a circular motion building up your arousal.'
+					'You don''t even care anymore if he approves or not. You''re too excited, and it''s getting the best of you as you begin picking up the pace again, moaning loudly by now.'
 					'"You little minx! Who told you to take the control?" he manages to say between his panting, "I''ll let you off this time as I love seeing you squirm, as you appease me... but use this instead" as he hands over a fake cock.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 3, 'sub', 'exhibition'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -207,9 +207,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'show':
 						gs 'boyStat', 'D2'
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/show/show6.jpg"></center>'
-						'Your eagerly grab the fake cock and rub it against your clit swiftly, your pussy lips have turned bright pink and you just want to explode. You look at him pleadingly to let you orgasm.'
-						'But to your dismay the security guard is only focused on himself as he''s furiously stroking his cock...'
-						'You pick up the pace not wanting to be outpaced by him and just as you''re about to orgasm, the security guard decides that it''s time for some payback, as he smugly commands you to stop touching yourself right away...'
+						'Your eagerly grab the fake cock and rub it against your clit swiftly. Your pussy lips have turned bright pink, and you just want to explode. You look at him pleadingly, begging him to let you orgasm.'
+						'But to your dismay, the security guard is only focused on himself as he''s furiously stroking his cock...'
+						'You pick up the pace, not wanting to be outpaced by him, but just as you''re about to orgasm, the security guard seems to decide that it''s time for some payback, as he smugly commands you to stop touching yourself right away...'
 
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo', 3, 'sub', 'exhibition'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -219,11 +219,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'show':
 							$orgasm = 'yes'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/show/show7.jpg"></center>'
-							'All of your body is screaming in agony as you obey and stop, your pulsating pussy being deprived of an orgasm and your mind is about to snap...'
+							'All of your body is screaming in agony as you obey and stop, your pulsating pussy deprived of an orgasm and your mind about to snap...'
 							'The security guard continues stroking as you look at him pleadingly again, letting out a small whimper, "Please, let me continue, I was so close..."'
-							'The room turns almost silent as you can only hear the sound from his squishy strokes and after a few moments he barely manages to tell you to continue on and you eagerly sit on the fake cock and, spreading your swollen pussy, you don''t know if he''ll stop you anew.'
-							'It doesn''t take long before you hear loud panting and groaning as he finishes but you''ve managed to faze him out as you''re approaching an orgasm once again as you''re now furiously penetrating yourself. You want to make sure that you''re able to finish before he''s able to stop you.'
-							'His commanding tone and the build up has finally come into fruition as your legs stiffen, your pussy goes numb and you orgasm violently, trembling, barely being able to sit still on the chair. The orgasm is so immense that you feel your ears ringing afterwards for a few minutes.'
+							'The room turns almost silent as you can only hear the sound from his squishy strokes, and after a few moments, he barely manages to tell you to continue on. You eagerly sit on the fake cock, spreading your swollen pussy, as you don''t know if he''ll stop you anew.'
+							'It doesn''t take long before you hear loud panting and groaning as he finishes, but you''ve managed to faze him out as you''re approaching an orgasm once again, now furiously penetrating yourself. You want to make sure that you''re able to finish before he''s able to stop you.'
+							'His commanding tone and the build up has finally come to fruition as your legs stiffen, your pussy goes numb and you orgasm violently, trembling, barely able to sit still on the chair. The orgasm is so immense that you feel your ears ringing afterwards for a few minutes.'
 
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo', 3, 'sub', 'exhibition'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -233,9 +233,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'show':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/show/show8.jpg"></center>'
 								'You keep the fake cock inside you for a while as you calm down. The security guard is looking pleased at you.'
-								'Ashamed, you quickly grab your clothes and start putting on your clothes. While you''re getting dressed you look at him with dismay and impatiently ask, "Are we done now?"'
-								'The security guard grins and tells you to wait for a moment while he goes away explaining that he needs to go to take care of a thing and that he would be right back...'
-								'You make yourself complainant as possible as you smile and nod just wanting this to be over with so you can continue on with your day.'
+								'Ashamed, you quickly grab your clothes and start putting them on. While you''re getting dressed, you look at him with disgust and impatiently ask, "Are we done now?"'
+								'The security guard grins and tells you to wait for a moment while he goes away, explaining that he needs to go to take care of a thing and that he will be right back...'
+								'You make yourself look as compliant as possible as you smile and nod, just wanting this to be over with so you can continue on with your day.'
 
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -248,20 +248,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'show':
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/show/show9.jpg"></center>'
 									'You patiently sit and wait for the security guard to return. You closely listen to every little sound happening outside the office hoping that he''ll return soon and let you go.'
-									'All of a sudden you hear footsteps and someone opening the door...'
+									'All of a sudden, you hear footsteps and someone opening the door...'
 
 									if policeCalled <= 4:
 										'To your dismay the security guard has not only called the manager but there''s even a police officer standing there with them.'
-										'The security guard smugly proclaims, "Here she is officer I had her locked up all the time..." He turns to the manager, "Don''t worry sir, I''ve already recovered the video evidence..."'
-										'The manager nods while the police officer takes approaches you resolutely, telling you to stand and turn around so he can handcuff you.'
-										'You obediently turn around and the police officer tightens his cuffs so they sit real tight. As he finishes he grabs you by the arm and leads you away...'
+										'The security guard smugly proclaims, "Here she is officer. I had her locked up the whole time..." He turns to the manager, "Don''t worry sir, I''ve already recovered the video evidence..."'
+										'The manager nods while the police officer approaches you resolutely, telling you to stand and turn around so he can handcuff you.'
+										'You obediently turn around, and the police officer tightens his cuffs so they sit real tight. As he finishes, he grabs you by the arm and leads you away...'
 
 										act 'Go to the police station':gt 'police_station', 'entrance', 'shplft'
 
 									else
-										'The door opens and to your surprise there''s only the security guard standing there holding a video cassette in his hand, "Sorry for the wait, it took me a while to get hold of the cassette."'
+										'The door opens, and thankfully, there''s only the security guard standing there holding a video cassette in his hand. "Sorry for the wait, it took me a while to get hold of the cassette."'
 										'Your face brightens as you know that he went through all sorts of trouble to leave no trace behind that you''ve ever been here.'
-										'"Here take the tape and destroy it." he states, "Be gone now before anyone spots you and we both get in trouble."'
+										'"Here take the tape and destroy it," he states, "Be gone now before anyone spots you and we both get in trouble."'
 										'You nod and hurriedly jump away from the chair, grabbing the tape as you walk by the security guard...'
 
 										act 'Head outside':gt 'city_center'
@@ -283,26 +283,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/bj/bj1.jpg"></center>'
 	'"How about I give you a blowjob and you let me go?" you calmly suggest.'
-	'The security guard is taken aback a little by your suggestion but it doesn''t take long before you notice a smirk on his face, "How about this, if you perform well enough I''ll let you go otherwise I''ll be calling the cops."'
-	'Not having lot of choice you look him in the eyes and nod.'
-	'"Good! But before we begin I want a memento to remember you by." he adds as he pulls out his cellphone.'
+	'The security guard is taken aback a little by your suggestion, but it doesn''t take long before you notice a smirk on his face. "How about this, if you perform well enough, I''ll let you go, otherwise I''ll be calling the cops."'
+	'Not having lot of choice, you look him in the eyes and nod.'
+	'"Good! But before we begin I want a memento to remember you by," he adds as he pulls out his cellphone.'
 
 	act 'Take picture':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/bj/bj2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You happily stand up and smile as you can hear his cellphone camera snaps.'
-		'"This will do. I can''t wait to show you off to my friends." he tells you.'
+		'You happily stand up and smile as you can hear his cellphone camera snap.'
+		'"This will do. I can''t wait to show you off to my friends," he tells you.'
 		'You can''t do anything more than smile and nod as you need to play along so he lets you go.'
-		'"That''s enough, girl! Time to get to it. Remove your clothes let me see your naked body!" he commands.'
+		'"That''s enough, girl! Time to get to it. Remove your clothes, let me see your naked body!" he commands.'
 
 		act 'Strip':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/bj/bj3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You pleadingly look at him but he turns his head around to avoid meeting your eyes. Seeing he won''t budge you slowly start taking off your clothes.'
-			'The security guards gaze turns to you again and he''s carefully watching as you remove one cloth after another as you try to cover up your naked body.'
+			'You pleadingly look at him, but he turns his head around to avoid meeting your eyes. Seeing he won''t budge, you slowly start taking off your clothes.'
+			'The security guard''s gaze turns to you again, and he carefully watches as you remove one cloth after another as you try to cover up your naked body.'
 			'"Good job, girl! Look at your fine breasts. Don''t be shy and cover yourself, the plan is to arouse me..." he smirks, "Now get on your knees."'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'
@@ -312,8 +312,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/bj/bj4.jpg"></center>'
-				'You get down on your knees and await while he''s rubbing his cock through his pants.'
-				'After a short wait he unzips the pants and releases his cock. As it pops out you let out a gasp, surprised by the massive size, "You''re way bigger than I expected." you say as you observe his stiff cock.'
+				'You get down on your knees and wait while he rubs his cock through his pants.'
+				'After a short while, he unzips the pants and releases his cock. As it pops out, you let out a gasp, surprised by the massive size. "You''re way bigger than I expected," you say as you observe his stiff cock.'
 				'He lets out a laugh and jokes, "Are you sure that it will be able to fit in your mouth?"'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'
@@ -323,9 +323,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/bj/bj5.jpg"></center>'
-					'Triggered by his joke and wanting to show him up you slowly move your lips near his cock and give his glans a little kiss. You can hear him let out a soft groan, he must be really sensitive.'
-					'Feeling encouraged you start moving your lips around his glans, letting out your tongue to tease his penis head.'
-					'The security guard isn''t saying anything and seems to be pleased by your performance...'
+					'Triggered by his joke and wanting to show him up, you slowly move your lips near his cock and give his glans a little kiss. You can hear him let out a soft groan. He must be really sensitive.'
+					'Feeling encouraged, you start moving your lips around his glans, letting out your tongue to tease his penis head.'
+					'The security guard doesn''t say anything and seems to be pleased by your performance...'
 					'You look up at him and give him a little smile, biting your lip before moving your tongue up and down his shaft...'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
@@ -335,10 +335,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/bj/bj6.jpg"></center>'
-						'Not wanting to tease him anymore you wrap your lips around his glans and slowly let the head glide deeper inside your mouth. You didn''t expect him to taste this good...'
+						'Not wanting to tease him anymore, you wrap your lips around his glans and slowly let the head glide deeper inside your mouth. You didn''t expect him to taste this good...'
 						'The security guard didn''t expect you to be this bold as you feel his whole body stiffen...'
-						'After a few moments you pick up the pace and before you know it, you''ve swallowed half his cock. You''re totally engulfed and even manage to forget why you''re sucking him off.'
-						'It doesn''t take long before his cock is twitching and he tells you pull out before he cums...'
+						'After a few moments, you pick up the pace, and before you know it, you''ve swallowed half his cock. You''re totally engulfed and even manage to forget why you''re sucking him off.'
+						'It doesn''t take long before his cock is twitching and he tells you to pull out before he cums...'
 
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -348,9 +348,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj':
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/bj/bj7.jpg"></center>'
 							'Disappointed, you pull out and let out a loud mouth sound as you remove your lips from his cock.'
-							'By now the security guard is panting heavily and you give him a minute to recover before you start tugging his cock.'
-							'You grab his cock quite hard and you start quickly stroking him up and down. You''re enjoying yourself as you''re in command and he''s at your mercy.'
-							'You notice a little pre-cum come and you feel this urge to slow down and tease him as you want to drag this out for as long as possible...'
+							'By now, the security guard is panting heavily, and you give him a minute to recover before you start tugging his cock.'
+							'You grab his cock quite hard, and you start quickly stroking him up and down. You''re enjoying yourself as you''re in command and he''s at your mercy.'
+							'You notice a little pre-cum come out, and you feel this urge to slow down and tease him as you want to drag this out for as long as possible...'
 
 							gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'dom'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -361,10 +361,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj':
 								spafinloc = 15
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/bj/bj8.jpg"></center>'
-								'"Don''t you dare slowing down!" he manages to yell out just as you slowed down the pace...'
-								'Surprised by his reaction, you quickly pick up the pace and as your hand moves up and down his cock it stops twitching and gets really stiff and after two more tugs he shoots all over your chest area...'
-								'As you look down you notice you''re covered in his thick cum... You give his cock a few more tugs to get it all out and then let go of it as it continues to twitch after being let go.'
-								'"Get cleaned up and I''ll be back soon!" he tells you as he zips his pants and leaves the office...'
+								'"Don''t you dare slowing down!" he manages to yell out just as you start to...'
+								'Surprised by his reaction, you quickly pick up the pace, and as your hand moves up and down his cock, it stops twitching and gets really stiff. After two more tugs, he shoots all over your chest area...'
+								'As you look down, you notice you''re covered in his thick cum... You give his cock a few more tugs to get it all out and then let go of it as it continues to twitch.'
+								'"Get cleaned up, and I''ll be back soon!" he tells you as he zips his pants and leaves the office...'
 
 								gs 'arousal', 'hj', 2, 'dom'
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -380,14 +380,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj':
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/bj/bj9.jpg"></center>'
 									'You clean yourself up and get dressed as soon you hear the door close. There''s nothing more to do than patiently sit and wait for the security guard to return.'
-									'You closely pay attention to every little sound happening outside the office hoping that he''ll return soon and let you go. All of a sudden you hear footsteps and someone opening the door...'
+									'You closely pay attention to every little sound happening outside the office, hoping that he''ll return soon and let you go. All of a sudden you hear footsteps and someone opening the door...'
 
 									if policeCalled <= 3:
 										toldonguard = 2
-										'To your dismay the security guard has not only called the manager but there''s even a police officer standing there with them.'
-										'The security guard smugly proclaims, "Here she is officer I had her locked up all the time..." He turns to the manager, "Don''t worry sir, I''ve already recovered the video evidence..."'
-										'The manager nods while the police officer takes approaches you resolutely, telling you to stand and turn around so he can handcuff you.'
-										'You obediently turn around and the police officer tightens his cuffs so they sit real tight. As he finishes he grabs you by the arm and leads you away...'
+										'To your dismay, the security guard has not only called the manager but there''s even a police officer standing there with them.'
+										'The security guard smugly proclaims, "Here she is officer I had her locked up the whole time..." He turns to the manager, "Don''t worry sir, I''ve already recovered the video evidence..."'
+										'The manager nods while the police officer approaches you resolutely, telling you to stand and turn around so he can handcuff you.'
+										'You obediently turn around, and the police officer tightens his cuffs so they sit real tight. As he finishes, he grabs you by the arm and leads you away...'
 
 										gs 'arousal', 'end'
 										gs 'stat'
@@ -395,9 +395,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj':
 										act 'Go to the police station': gt 'police_station', 'entrance', 'shplft'
 
 									else
-										'The door opens and to your surprise there''s the only the security guard standing there holding a video cassette in his hand, "Sorry for the wait, it took me a while to get hold of the cassette."'
+										'The door opens, and thankfully, there''s only the security guard standing there holding a video cassette in his hand. "Sorry for the wait, it took me a while to get hold of the cassette."'
 										'Your face brightens as you know that he went through all sorts of trouble to leave no trace behind that you''ve ever been here.'
-										'"Here take the tape and destroy it." he states, "Be gone now before anyone spots you and we both get in trouble."'
+										'"Here take the tape and destroy it," he states, "Be gone now before anyone spots you and we both get in trouble."'
 										'You nod and hurriedly jump away from the chair, grabbing the tape as you walk by the security guard...'
 
 										gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -423,18 +423,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bribe':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/offermoney.jpg"></center>'
 	'You look the security guard straight in the eyes, "I can offer you money if you let me go."'
 	'The security guard begins to chuckle, "You? Offer me money? Don''t be silly girl, you can''t possibly bribe me... Where would you have the money for that..."'
-	'You pout a little as you listen to him, "Just tell me how much you want and I''ll pay you off..." as you finish you give him a little wink.'
-	'"If you can afford the stuff why did you steal?" he remarks.'
+	'You pout a little as you listen to him, "Just tell me how much you want, and I''ll pay you off..." As you finish, you give him a little wink.'
+	'"If you can afford the stuff, why did you steal?" he remarks.'
 
 	act 'Explain':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/offermoney.jpg"></center>'
-		'"You want my honest answer?" you look at him in all seriousness, "Simply put, because I can and the adrenaline kick is amazing!"'
+		'"You want my honest answer?" you look at him, a serious expression on your face, "Simply put, because I can and the adrenaline kick is amazing!"'
 		'The security guard smirks, "So you''re only doing it for the fun of it?"'
-		'Looking pleased, you give him a satisfying nod.'
-		'All of a sudden he changes his posture, "I don''t usually do this but if you give me 5000<b>₽</b> then we''re all good."'
+		'Looking pleased, you give him a satisfied nod.'
+		'All of a sudden, he changes his posture, "I don''t usually do this, but if you give me 5000 <b>₽</b>, then we''re all good."'
 		'"And if I don''t?" you curiously inquire.'
 		'"You''ll have to face the consequences then..." he shortly replies.'
 
@@ -445,10 +445,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bribe':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/offermoney.jpg"></center>'
 			'You burst out in laughter, "Fine, fine. I''ll pay up don''t worry... Relax, I was only joking around with you."'
-			'"Sure, sure... Hurry up now, show me the money, before anyone shows up..." he hurries you on.'
+			'"Sure, sure... Hurry up now, show me the money before anyone shows up..." he hurries you on.'
 			'You keep on laughing as you hand over the money to him.'
-			'He quickly counts the money and then has you stand up and hurries you outside the office, pushing you on. He explains to which way to take and not to talk to anyone.'
-			'You give him a smile and thank him for being so nice to you... You turn around a last time to tease him before turning the corner.'
+			'He quickly counts the money and then has you stand up and hurries you outside the office, pushing you on. He tells you which way to take and not to talk to anyone.'
+			'You give him a smile and thank him for being so nice to you... You turn around one last time to tease him before turning the corner.'
 
 			act 'Walk out':gt 'city_center'
 		end
@@ -461,11 +461,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bribe':
 			'You shake your head, "I''m not interested in paying you off. Do your worst..." you challenge him.'
 			'His face turns red with anger as he turns away from you and walks out of the office...'
 			*nl
-			'Some minutes pass while you patiently wait for him to return. You closely pay attention to every little sound happening outside the office. All of a sudden you hear footsteps and someone opening the door...'
-			'"There she is officer. This girl was stealing from the supermarket. We''ve got evidence and everything." he states clearly irritated by your arrogance.'
+			'Some minutes pass while you patiently wait for him to return. You closely pay attention to every little sound happening outside the office. All of a sudden, you hear footsteps and someone opening the door...'
+			'To your dismay, you see the security guard has returned with a police officer in tow. "There she is officer. This girl was stealing from the supermarket. We''ve got evidence and everything," the guard states, clearly irritated by your arrogance.'
 			'The officer sighs and determinedly walks over to you, "Turn around girl, I need to cuff you..."'
-			'Without uttering a word you turn around and let the officer cuff you. The cuffs are sitting tight but you refuse to give the smallest satisfaction that you''re hurting to the security guard.'
-			'The police officer chats with the security guard before leading you away to the Police station...'
+			'Without uttering a word, you turn around and let the officer cuff you. The cuffs are sitting tight, but you refuse to give the security guard the smallest satisfaction by letting him know that.'
+			'The police officer chats with the security guard before leading you away to the police station...'
 
 			act 'Go to the police station': gt 'police_station', 'entrance', 'shplft'
 		end
@@ -477,21 +477,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'quiet':
 	minut += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/quiet.jpg"></center>'
-	'All of a sudden you hesitate, why should you offer him anything. You might as keep quiet as the end result will still be the same.'
+	'All of a sudden you hesitate. Why should you offer him anything? You might as well keep quiet as the end result will still be the same.'
 	'"Well girl, don''t test my patience, I don''t have all the day. Tell me now what do you have to offer."'
-	'You give him a look full of disgust. You''re going to see this throughout no matter the consequences.'
-	'"Well? Why did you go all quiet all of a sudden?" he demands an answer. Noticing that you won''t reply his face turns red and slams the door behind him...'
+	'You give him a look full of disgust. You''re going to see this through, no matter the consequences.'
+	'"Well? Why did you go all quiet all of a sudden?" he demands. Noticing that you won''t reply, his face turns red and he stomps out of the room, slamming the door behind him...'
 
 	act 'Wait':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 10
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/police/arrested.jpg"></center>'
-		'Some minutes pass while you patiently wait for him to return. You closely pay attention to every little sound happening outside the office. All of a sudden you hear footsteps and someone opening the door...'
-		'"There she is officer. This girl was stealing from the supermarket. We''ve got evidence and everything." he states clearly irritated by your arrogance.'
+		'Some minutes pass while you patiently wait for him to return. You closely pay attention to every little sound happening outside the office. All of a sudden, you hear footsteps and someone opening the door...'
+		'To your dismay, you see the security guard has returned with a police officer in tow. "There she is officer. This girl was stealing from the supermarket. We''ve got evidence and everything," the guard states, clearly irritated by your arrogance.'
 		'The officer sighs and determinedly walks over to you, "Turn around girl, I need to cuff you..."'
-		'Without uttering a word you turn around and let the officer cuff you. The cuffs are sitting tight but you refuse to give the smallest satisfaction that you''re hurting to the security guard.'
-		'The police officer chats with the security guard before leading you away to the Police station...'
+		'Without uttering a word, you turn around and let the officer cuff you. The cuffs are sitting tight, but you refuse to give the security guard the smallest satisfaction by letting him know that.'
+		'The police officer chats with the security guard before leading you away to the police station...'
 
 		act 'Go to the police station': gt 'police_station', 'entrance', 'shplft'
 	end
@@ -504,7 +504,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 	minut += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/revenge/revenge1.jpg"></center>'
-	'The guard forcefully drags you into the room and shoves you towards the chair, saying "Well well, look who''s back... if it isn''t the little rat!" he heatedly comments.'
+	'The guard forcefully drags you into the room and shoves you towards the chair. "Well well, look who''s back... if it isn''t the little rat!" he heatedly comments.'
 	'<i>Fuck it''s the same guard, now you''ve done it, <<$pcs_nickname>>, get prepared for whatever awaits you... your fate is in his hands...</i>'
 	'"I hate you fucking rats. Do you know what I had to go through to get away from ending up in jail. Luckily one of the pigs didn''t mind getting bribed so I got away," he grins, "And now for your punishment."'
 
@@ -513,10 +513,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/revenge/revenge2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You squirm and look apologetically at him, "Please... You have to believe me I didn''t have any option. They made me confess that you forced yourself onto me..." you try to deceit him.'
+		'You squirm and look apologetically at him. "Please... You have to believe me, I didn''t have any option. They made me confess that you forced yourself onto me..." you try to deceive him.'
 		'Fuming, he lunges towards you, "Listen here, you little slut. I don''t give a shit if they forced you into anything. You ratted and you need to be taught a lesson."'
 		'You put together your hands pleading for mercy as a last ditch effort to make him rethink it all.'
-		'But to your dismay he doesn''t budge, "Like pleading will help you now, slut!" and before you know it he''s standing next you.'
+		'But to your dismay, he doesn''t budge, and before you know it, he''s standing next you. "Like pleading will help you now, slut!"'
 
 		act 'Squeak':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -524,9 +524,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/revenge/revenge3.jpg"></center>'
 			'Before you''re able to react to what he''s saying, you feel a cold hand sliding down your body towards your breasts.'
-			'Reacting instinctively you look up only to see the security guards eyes filled with rage and arousal. His hand keeps sliding down and it doesn''t take long before he is fondling one of your breasts.'
-			'You let out a soft moan as he softly touches your nipple, making you shiver with excitement, "You''re enjoying yourself, aren''t you slut?" he inquires as you let out a moan as an answer to his inquiry.'
-			'All of sudden you can feel the mood change as he violently grabs hold of your breast and starts roughly kneading it, "It''s not one of those times where you''re supposed to feel excited, slut." The pain you feel in one of your breast is almost unbearable.'
+			'Reacting instinctively, you look up only to see the security guard''s eyes filled with rage and arousal. His hand keeps sliding down, and it doesn''t take long before he is fondling one of your breasts.'
+			'You let out a soft moan as he softly touches your nipple, making you shiver with excitement. "You''re enjoying yourself, aren''t you slut?" he inquires as you let out another moan as an answer.'
+			'All of a sudden, you can feel the mood change as he violently grabs hold of your breast and starts roughly kneading it. "It''s not one of those times where you''re supposed to feel excited, slut." The pain you feel in your breast is almost unbearable.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub', 'humiliation'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -538,11 +538,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/revenge/revenge4.jpg"></center>'
-				'In sheer desperation you begin to look for a way to stop. You try looking at him pleadingly but to no avail. Next you try to speak up but he kneads it even harder, "Want this to stop?" he asks.'
-				'Urgently wanting him to stop you uncontrollably nod, "On your knees then whore. I want you to go deep and don''t you dare letting me feeling those teeth either," as he lets go of your sore breast.'
+				'In sheer desperation, you begin to look for a way to convince him to stop. You try looking at him pleadingly but to no avail. Next you try to speak up, but he kneads your breast even harder. "Want this to stop?" he asks.'
+				'Urgently wanting that, you uncontrollably nod. "On your knees then whore. I want you to go deep and don''t you dare let me feel those teeth either," he says as he lets go of your sore breast.'
 				'You quickly get down on your knees and unbutton his pants, exposing his bare cock. You grab hold of his shaft and gently lick on his glans to get him ready. You open your mouth and wrap your lips around his cock and slowly begin working your way up and down.'
-				'While you''re doing this you hear an annoyed sigh and you feel a hand on your back-head locking you in. Without any hesitation the security guard begins thrusting going deeper for every thrust, "Remember what I said, I don''t want to feel any teeth!"'
-				'Fearing what he might do you try your best to accommodate him. His thrusts become more rapid and he goes really deep down your throat and there are several times you feel that you''re close to throwing up, "Lube it up whore if you don''t want to feel any pain..." you hear him say as you gag once more on his cock.'
+				'While you''re doing this, you hear an annoyed sigh, and you feel a hand on the back of your head locking you in. Without any hesitation, the security guard begins thrusting, going deeper with every thrust. "Remember what I said, I don''t want to feel any teeth!"'
+				'Fearing what he might do, you try your best to accommodate him. His thrusts become more rapid, and he goes really deep down your throat. There are several times you feel that you''re close to throwing up. "Lube it up whore if you don''t want to feel any pain..." you hear him say as you gag once more on his cock.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -552,10 +552,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 					gs 'pain', 7, 'vaginal', 'tear'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/revenge/revenge5.jpg"></center>'
-					'"That''s enough of that!" he yells out as he pulls quickly out of your mouth, making your mouth doing a wet plop sound. He grabs you harshly by the shoulders and leads you over to the desk where he bends you over it, giving him a full look of your orifices.'
-					'"Which one should we take," he teases as you await him to decide, hoping whichever he picks he''ll be gentle. "This one will suffice today!" he declares as he furiously pushes inside your pussy without any care in the world. As he penetrates, you let out a loud scream by the sheer pain you''re experiencing.'
-					'"Scream as much as you want!" he yells out between his thrusts, "It only turns me on even more!" he continues frantically pounding you. He''s going deep and you can feel his cock hitting your cervix.'
-					'After a few minutes you expect him to slow down but he''s persisting and grabs you by the hair and continues on pounding you, leaving you in despair between pain and pleasure.'
+					'"That''s enough of that!" he yells out as he pulls quickly out of your mouth with a wet plop. He grabs you harshly by the shoulders and leads you over to the desk, which he bends you over, giving him a full look at your orifices.'
+					'"Which one should we take," he teases as you await him to decide, hoping whichever he picks he''ll be gentle. "This one will suffice today!" he declares as he furiously pushes inside your pussy without any care in the world. As he penetrates, you let out a loud scream from the sheer pain you''re experiencing.'
+					'"Scream as much as you want!" he yells out between his thrusts, "It only turns me on even more!" he continues frantically pounding you. He''s going deep, and you can feel his cock hitting your cervix.'
+					'After a few minutes, you expect him to slow down, but he persists, grabbing you by the hair and continuing on pounding you, leaving you in despair between pain and pleasure.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'rough'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -566,10 +566,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 						spafinloc = 15
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/revenge/revenge6.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel your excitement being built up as you near an orgasm and prepare for it. The security guard is still pounding you away but you''ve adjusted really well and by now you''re feeling more pleasure than pain.'
-						'You''re loudly moaning but so is he, your pussy walls are tightening and squishing his cock and just as you''re about orgasm he pulls out leaving your hole empty, craving for his cock to enter you again, "Did you really expect that I would let you orgasm?" he smirks, "Didn''t I tell you no pleasure for you today!"'
-						'You look meekly at him as he pushes you down on your knees and begins jerking off himself. You''re still feeling cheated on your orgasm and pout as he begins to groan and it doesn''t take long before your breasts are covered by his warm cum.'
-						'He gives his cock a few more jerks, making sure he''s drained his cock and he keenly looks at your chest, admiring his work. As everything settles down you almost tear up, reminded by the pain you feel in your vagina and breast.'
+						'You can feel your excitement being built up as you near an orgasm and prepare for it. The security guard is still pounding you away, but you''ve adjusted really well, and by now, you''re feeling more pleasure than pain.'
+						'You''re loudly moaning but so is he as your pussy walls tighten and squish his cock. Just as you''re about to orgasm, he pulls out, leaving your hole empty, craving for his cock to enter you again. "Did you really expect that I would let you orgasm?" he smirks, "Didn''t I tell you no pleasure for you today!"'
+						'You look meekly at him as he pushes you down on your knees and begins jerking off himself. You''re still feeling cheated on your orgasm and pout as he begins to groan, and it doesn''t take long before your breasts are covered by his warm cum.'
+						'He gives his cock a few more jerks, making sure he''s drained it, and he keenly looks at your chest, admiring his work. As everything settles down, you almost tear up, reminded by the pain you feel in your vagina and breast.'
 
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'rough'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -582,12 +582,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/shoplift/sex/revenge/revenge7.jpg"></center>'
 							!Clean yourself up as he watches, can''t believe what you''ve just done, he calls the cops and threatens Sveta not to say anything cause next time he won''t be this gentle
-							'"Here, get cleaned up and dress yourself!" he hands you over a towel. The security guard remains observing you while you clean yourself up, making sure you''ve cleaned yourself properly not leaving a trace behind.'
-							'While you''re putting on your clothes you can''t let go of feeling ashamed to what you''ve experienced and try your best to avoid eye contact.'
-							'"Sit down on that chair and wait for me to return whore!" he commands as you barely manage to even give him a subtle nod. As you sit down he walks up to you, "Listen here. Don''t you dare telling anyone about this... I know who you are and where you live and the next time I won''t be as gentle as this time." With that he turns and walks out of the office, locking it, leaving you to ponder on what''s about to happen next.'
+							'"Here, get cleaned up and dress yourself!" he hands you over a towel. The security guard remains observing you while you clean yourself up, making sure you do it properly not leaving a trace behind.'
+							'While you''re putting on your clothes, you can''t let go of the feeling of shame from what you''ve experienced and try your best to avoid eye contact.'
+							'"Sit down on that chair and wait for me to return whore!" he commands as you barely manage to even give him a subtle nod. As you sit down, he walks up to you, "Listen here. Don''t you dare go telling anyone about this... I know who you are and where you live and the next time I won''t be as gentle as this time." With that, he turns and walks out of the office, locking it, leaving you to ponder on what''s about to happen next.'
 							*nl
-							'Some minutes pass by and you hear several voices approaching the door. As they open up you see the security guard standing there with a police officer, "This one?" he asks as he points at you. The security guard nods his head, "Yeah she''s a real pain in the ass."'
-							'The officer walks over to you and cuffs you and begins leading you away. As you''re being led by the security guard he shines up in a smile, mocking you.'
+							'Some minutes pass by, and you hear several voices approaching the door. As it opens up, you see the security guard standing there with a police officer. "This one?" the officer asks as he points at you. The security guard nods his head, "Yeah she''s a real pain in the ass."'
+							'The officer walks over to you, cuffs you and begins leading you away. As you''re being led by the security guard, he flashes you a smile, mocking you.'
 
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'

+ 36 - 36
locations/shulgabath.qsrc

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/vanna.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'Uncle Sergey''s bathroom is small and very unpretentious. Nevertheless, it has everything a bathroom needs. There is a <a href="exec: gt ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a> above the sink, where you can ' + iif(pcs_hairbsh = 0,'<a href="exec: gt ''mirror'',''brush''">brush</a>','brush') + ' your hair, a shower and bath tub.'
+	'Uncle Sergey''s bathroom is small and very unpretentious. Nevertheless, it has everything a bathroom needs. There is a <a href="exec: gt ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a> above the sink, where you can ' + iif(pcs_hairbsh = 0,'<a href="exec: gt ''mirror'',''brush''">brush</a>','brush') + ' your hair, a shower and a bathtub.'
 	*nl
 
 	act 'Return to the hallway': gt'shulgahall'
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sexev1':
 	sh_sonya_sexev += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/shuglinhome/vanna/bj'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'When you enter the bathroom, you freeze when you hear a girl''s voice in there. You carefully open the door to see Sonia sucking Sergey''s cock. She''s even taking a video of herself doing it... you wonder why?'
+	'When you reach the bathroom, you freeze when you hear a girl''s voice in there. You carefully open the door to see Sonia sucking Sergey''s cock. She''s even taking a video of herself doing it... you wonder why?'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -73,26 +73,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sexev2':
 	sh_sonya_sexev += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/ev2_1'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'When you want to enter the bathroom, you see Sonia standing in front of the mirror. Luckily she didn''t see you; she was too occupied counting money. Your curiosity gets the better of you, and you decide to watch her for a while. Where did she get that money?'
+	'When you start to enter the bathroom, you see Sonia standing in front of the mirror. Luckily, she doesn''t seem to see you; she is too occupied counting money. Your curiosity gets the better of you, and you decide to watch her for a while. Where did she get that money?'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/ev2_2'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'Sonia starts to undress, and then puts on a delicate lingerie set. She then touches up on her make-up, fixing every little blemish she can find.'
-		'You realize she''s probably going to come out of the bathroom soon, and quickly move to the kitchen and hide there.'
-		'Sure enough, Sonia comes out of the bathroom a few seconds later, and heads straight for uncle Sergey''s bedroom.'
+		'Sonia starts to undress and then puts on a delicate lingerie set. She then touches up on her make-up, fixing every little blemish she can find.'
+		'You realize she''s probably going to come out of the bathroom soon and quickly move to the kitchen and hide there.'
+		'Sure enough, Sonia comes out of the bathroom a few seconds later and heads straight for uncle Sergey''s bedroom.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/shuglinhome/vanna/ev2_3'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'You quickly sneak to the door, and carefully open it just enough so you can see what''s happening inside the room.'
+			'You quickly sneak to the door and carefully open it just enough so you can see what''s happening inside the room.'
 			'What you see does not surprise you in the slightest; Sonia is on her knees in front of Sergey, eagerly sucking on his dick.'
 			'"Very nice, baby. Take it deeper... all the way in, there you go..." he encourages her.'
-			'After sucking his dick for a few minutes, Sonia pulls away from Sergey. Just when he''s about to ask if something''s wrong, she grins lewdly at him and whispers: "Sergey Borisovich, I want you to fuck me like I''m the last whore on the planet! I''m all yours, baby."'
+			'After sucking his dick for a few minutes, Sonia pulls away from Sergey. Just when he''s about to ask if something''s wrong, she grins lewdly at him and whispers, "Sergey Shulgin, I want you to fuck me like I''m the last whore on the planet! I''m all yours, baby."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 			gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -100,8 +100,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sexev2':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/shuglinhome/vanna/ev2_4'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'Sergey makes Sonia bend over for him and rams his cock inside her sopping cunt. When he rhythmically fucks your classmate, Sonia moans and groans while her face turns a deep red. She''s completely lost in the moment... for a second you wonder why Sergey even gave her money, looking at her like this makes you think she probably would''ve done it for free anyway.'
-				'After a few minutes Sonia orgasms violently on Sergey''s cock, and even squirts a little.'
+				'Sergey makes Sonia bend over for him and rams his cock inside her sopping cunt. When he rhythmically fucks your classmate, Sonia moans and groans while her face turns a deep red. She''s completely lost in the moment... for a second you wonder why Sergey even gave her money. Looking at her like this makes you think she probably would''ve done it for free anyway.'
+				'After a few minutes, Sonia orgasms violently on Sergey''s cock and even squirts a little.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
@@ -109,8 +109,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sexev2':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/shuglinhome/vanna/ev2_5'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 					*nl
-					'When he''s too worked up to postpone his orgasm any longer, Sergey says: "On your knees! Fast!"'
-					'Sonia aims to please, and immediately drops to her knees in front of him with her mouth wide open. Sergey finishes inside Sonia''s mouth, and she swallows his load eagerly. She loudly smacks her lips and smiles at him: "Mmm... delicious!"'
+					'When he''s too worked up to postpone his orgasm any longer, Sergey says, "On your knees! Fast!"'
+					'Sonia aims to please and immediately drops to her knees in front of him with her mouth wide open. Sergey finishes inside Sonia''s mouth, and she swallows his load eagerly. She loudly smacks her lips and smiles at him. "Mmm... delicious!"'
 					gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
 					'Now that they''re done, you realize you should probably get the hell out of there before they find you staring. You quickly shut the door.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
@@ -189,13 +189,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bazar':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/b.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'Ever since Sonia inadvertedly got way too drunk and gave five guys including Vitek and his friends a simultaneous blowjob near the disco, her reputation in Pavlovsk has been in shambles. The girls in her class all give her the silent treatment, pretending she does not exist. Meanwhile the guys all treat her like a cheap whore and regularly ask (or sometimes even demand) sex from her, knowing she doesn''t have the strength to say no.'
+	'Ever since Sonia inadvertently got way too drunk and gave five guys including Vitek and his friends a simultaneous blowjob near the disco, her reputation in Pavlovsk has been in shambles. The girls in her class all give her the silent treatment, pretending she does not exist. Meanwhile, the guys all treat her like a cheap whore and regularly ask (or sometimes even demand) sex from her, knowing she doesn''t have the strength to say no.'
 
 	sonya_textb_vanna = rand(1,7)
 	if sonya_textb_vanna = 1:$sonya_textb_vanna = 'You spend some time chatting about everyday things with Sonia.'
-	if sonya_textb_vanna = 2 and SchoolAtestat = 0:$sonya_textb_vanna	= 'When you ask Sonia how she''s doing in school, she laughs and says: "It''s very easy to get good grades at our school. All you have to do is get the teachers to like you. And as you may know, they all like me..."'
-	if sonya_textb_vanna = 2 and SchoolAtestat = 1:$sonya_textb_vanna	= 'When you ask Sonia about the kind of work she does since school ended, she shrugs: "It''s tough to get a decent job nowadays. I''m lucky I have some nice guys like Sergey helping me out with my bills, otherwise I wouldn''t know how to make ends meet!"'
-	if sonya_textb_vanna = 3:$sonya_textb_vanna = 'When you ask Sonia how often she comes to meet Sergey, you get a surprisingly honest answer: "It depends. Usually a few times a week, depending how much money he has. If he can afford it I come by more often, if money is tight I don''t visit as much. You don''t look like a fool, you know why I''m here. Still, I have so say... being fucked by Sergey is amazing! He''s more mature than most guys I sleep with, and such a skilled lover..."'
+	if sonya_textb_vanna = 2 and SchoolAtestat = 0:$sonya_textb_vanna	= 'When you ask Sonia how she''s doing in school, she laughs and says, "It''s very easy to get good grades at our school. All you have to do is get the teachers to like you. And as you may know, they all like me..."'
+	if sonya_textb_vanna = 2 and SchoolAtestat = 1:$sonya_textb_vanna	= 'When you ask Sonia about the kind of work she has been doing since school ended, she shrugs. "It''s tough to get a decent job nowadays. I''m lucky I have some nice guys like Sergey helping me out with my bills, otherwise I wouldn''t know how to make ends meet!"'
+	if sonya_textb_vanna = 3:$sonya_textb_vanna = 'When you ask Sonia how often she comes to meet Sergey, you get a surprisingly honest answer: "It depends. Usually a few times a week, depending how much money he has. If he can afford it, I come by more often, if money is tight I don''t visit as much. You don''t look like a fool, you know why I''m here. Still, I have to say... being fucked by Sergey is amazing! He''s more mature than most guys I sleep with, and such a skilled lover..."'
 	if sonya_textb_vanna = 4:$sonya_textb_vanna = 'Sonia tells you about some interesting encounters she had in the Pavlovsk hotel the other day.'
 	if sonya_textb_vanna = 5:$sonya_textb_vanna = 'Sonia tells an interesting story.'
 	if sonya_textb_vanna = 6:$sonya_textb_vanna = 'You spend some time chatting with Sonia, mostly sharing what the two of you have done today.'
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bazar':
 	'<br><<$sonya_textb_vanna>><br>'
 
 	if sonya_bazar_count = 0:
-		'Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, I have time to go. Maybe I''ll see you here again, so we can chat some more!'
+		'Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, I have time to go. Maybe I''ll see you here again so we can chat some more!'
 	else
 		act 'Chat some more': gt 'shulgabath', 'bazar'
 	end
@@ -244,9 +244,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesb':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/ev1_1.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	'You fill the bath tub and get in. Sonia is still standing near the mirror, fixing her make-up. She doesn''t seem to mind that you are in here with her.'
-	'Then you smile at her and ask: "Hey Sonia... would you like to take a bath with me?"'
-	'Sonia looks puzzled for a second, and asks: "Like... you want me to get in the bath with you right now?"'
-	'When you nod, she grins: "Actually, that sounds like fun! Sure!" and quickly gets naked, sliding her naked body into the warm tub water.'
+	'Then you smile at her and ask, "Hey Sonia... would you like to take a bath with me?"'
+	'Sonia looks puzzled for a second, and asks, "Like... you want me to get in the bath with you right now?"'
+	'When you nod, she grins, "Actually, that sounds like fun! Sure!" and quickly gets naked, sliding her body into the warm tub water.'
 	if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & '<br>Your deodorant gets washed away in the bath.'
 
 	act 'Continue':
@@ -254,13 +254,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesb':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/shuglinhome/vanna/ev1_2'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'"Mmmm..." Sonia muses, enjoying the warmth of the bath water slowly seeping into her body. For the next few minutes you just sit in the bath next to each other. Sonia occasionally looks at you, but doesn''t say much.'
+		'"Mmmm..." Sonia muses, enjoying the warmth of the bath water slowly seeping into her body. For the next few minutes, you just sit in the bath next to each other. Sonia occasionally looks at you but doesn''t say much.'
 
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/shuglinhome/vanna/ev1_3'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'Just when you were about to say something, Sonia moves closer to you and kisses you full on your mouth. You freeze for a second, and then think to yourself... why the hell not?'
+			'Just when you were about to say something, Sonia moves closer to you and kisses you full on your mouth. You freeze for a second and then think to yourself... why the hell not?'
 			'You kiss Sonia back eagerly, playing with her tongue as she thrusts it into your mouth.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 10, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -274,9 +274,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesb':
 				$orgasm_txt = 'Sonia''s constant teasing pushes you over the edge, and you orgasm loudly when she licks your clit again.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', -5, 'lesbian'
-				'Sonia grins at you and asks playfully: "Did you like my tongue on your pussy, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+				'Sonia grins at you and asks playfully, "Did you like my tongue on your pussy, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 				'"Absolutely!" you nod. "Come on, let me do the same for you! I want to taste you too!"'
-				'"I can''t right now, my mother is waiting for me at home", Sonia says wistfully. "Maybe next time?"'
+				'"I can''t right now, my mother is waiting for me at home," Sonia says wistfully. "Maybe next time?"'
 				'Sonia kisses you again, and you taste yourself on her lips. Mmmm... next time you really want to get a taste of her too!'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -298,11 +298,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'serg_sex':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/vanna/gr/ev1_1_'+rand(1,5)+'.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	'"Sure, I bet Sergey would love having an extra girl around when he fucks me!" she grins. "Come on!"'
-	'You follow her into his room, and she was right; Sergey loves the idea! Sonia eagerly begins to suck his cock, and then offers it to you after a while: "Come on, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Get to work!"'
-	'Sonia notices your hesitance and puts her hand behind your head, gently but firmly guiding your head to his cock. "Go on, you''ll love it! I''ll help!"'
-	'You lick the shaft first, and then take the head of his cock in your mouth. Sonia gently strokes your hair, whispering encouraging words into your ear while you try to take more and more of his length inside your mouth. From time to time she assists you quite actively, sucking the head of his cock while you lick his balls, or licking one side of the shaft while you lick the other. At one point, you''re even trying to kiss one another with Sergey''s cock between your mouths!'
+	'You follow her into his room, and she was right; Sergey loves the idea! Sonia eagerly begins to suck his cock and then offers it to you after a while. "Come on, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Get to work!"'
+	'Sonia notices your hesitance and puts her hand behind your head, gently but firmly guiding it to his cock. "Go on, you''ll love it! I''ll help!"'
+	'You lick the shaft first and then take the head of his cock in your mouth. Sonia gently strokes your hair, whispering encouraging words into your ear while you try to take more and more of his length inside your mouth. From time to time, she assists you quite actively, sucking the head of his cock while you lick his balls or licking one side of the shaft while you lick the other. At one point, you''re even trying to kiss one another with Sergey''s cock between your mouths!'
 	'You manage to take most of him in, but you have to yield and pull away before your gag reflex takes over. Sonia and Sergey both smile at you proudly, that was great!'
-	'"Wow, <<$pcs_nickname>>", Sonia says with some admiration in her voice, "I thought I was good with my mouth, but you sure look like you could teach me a thing or two!"'
+	'"Wow, <<$pcs_nickname>>," Sonia says with some admiration in her voice, "I thought I was good with my mouth, but you sure look like you could teach me a thing or two!"'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat', 'group'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue':
@@ -312,8 +312,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'serg_sex':
 		'Sergey seems to have made his choice; he wants to fuck you first. He moves up behind you and rubs his hard cock against your pussy lips; the wetness of them combined with his precum make it feel very nice.'
 		'Sonia just watches as Sergey slowly pushes his dick further and further inside of you, idly rubbing her clit and massaging her boobs. Your pussy feels quite full when Sergey is all the way in, but it''s a good kind of full. A nice kind of full. Maybe you should visit Sergey more often...'
 		'When he slowly begins to thrust his cock in and out of you, you open your mouth and let out a soft moan. Sonia sees this as an invitation and grabs your hair, as she rubs her pussy against your lips eagerly. Her actions are making it perfectly clear: you''re supposed to service her with your mouth while you get fucked.'
-		'You do what is expected of you, and lick Sonia''s pussy as best you can. It''s fairly difficult, with Sergey fucking from behind at the same time, but you notice her breathing quickening and her biting her lip while she looks down at you. She looks rather cute when she''s squirming.'
-		'"Enjoying yourself over there, Sonia?" you teasingly ask between moans. Sonia grins mischievously, and punishes you by grabbing a firmer hold on your hair and roughly grinding her pussy against your mouth.'
+		'You do what is expected of you and lick Sonia''s pussy as best you can. It''s fairly difficult with Sergey fucking from behind at the same time, but you notice her breathing quickening and her biting her lip while she looks down at you. She looks rather cute when she''s squirming.'
+		'"Enjoying yourself over there, Sonia?" you teasingly ask between moans. Sonia grins mischievously and punishes you by grabbing a firmer hold on your hair and roughly grinding her pussy against your mouth.'
 		'Then Sergey decides it''s Sonia''s turn, and he makes her lie down on her back.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -5, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'group'
@@ -328,11 +328,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'serg_sex':
 			'You have a devious grin on your face when you see Sonia in her current position. She forced you to lick her when Sergey fucked you... well, two can play that game!'
 			'Sergey groans as he enters Sonia, the wetness of her pussy definitely easing his access to her. You must''ve done a good job with your mouth, getting her that worked up.'
 			'"Your turn to service me, dear..." you smirk, right before you lower your hips over Sonia''s mouth before she can protest.'
-			'Sonia is too enthralled by the large dick fucking her snatch, and mostly just moans and groans into your pussy when you grind your groin against her face.'
-			'Sergey is railing her quite roughly now, and since Sonia is not doing a good job of pleasing you, you encourage him: "Fuck that pussy, Sergey! No need to hold back on this whore''s slit, she can take it! Pleasing you is what she''s made for!"'
-			'Suddenly Sonia becomes far more eager to please you, and you feel her tongue actively rubbing against your clit. You smirk when you realize why; Sonia must understand that you''re the reason why Sergey is fucking her so roughly, and is trying to please you so you''ll choose her side again.'
+			'Sonia is too enthralled by the large dick fucking her snatch and mostly just moans and groans into your pussy when you grind your groin against her face.'
+			'Sergey is railing her quite roughly now, and since Sonia is not doing a good job of pleasing you, you encourage him. "Fuck that pussy, Sergey! No need to hold back on this whore''s slit, she can take it! Pleasing you is what she''s made for!"'
+			'Suddenly, Sonia becomes far more eager to please you, and you feel her tongue actively rubbing against your clit. You smirk when you realize why; Sonia must understand that you''re the reason why Sergey is fucking her so roughly and must be trying to please you so you''ll choose her side again.'
 			$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-			$orgasm_txt = 'She does such a good job, she brings you to an orgasm before you can stop her. You loudly groan and your body trembles over hers, causing Sergey to give you some confused looks.'
+			$orgasm_txt = 'She does such a good job she brings you to an orgasm before you can stop her. You loudly groan, and your body trembles over hers, causing Sergey to give you some confused looks.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian', 'dom', 'group'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Continue':
@@ -343,10 +343,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'serg_sex':
 				pcs_hairbsh = 0
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/vanna/gr/ev1_4_'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'When Sergey is close to his orgasm, he stops fucking Sonia and orders the both of you to get down on your knees before him. Sergey readily puts his cock into Sonia''s mouth, and roars loudly as he drops his hot load of sperm onto her tongue.'
+				'When Sergey is close to his orgasm, he stops fucking Sonia and orders the both of you to get down on your knees before him. Sergey readily puts his cock into Sonia''s mouth and roars loudly as he drops his hot load of sperm onto her tongue.'
 				'Sonia swallows some of it, while you lick the sperm that she didn''t manage to swallow from Sergey''s cock and balls after he pulls out of Sonia''s mouth.'
 				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you horny minx!" Sonia exclaims. "I didn''t know you were such a slut for cum!"'
-				'You take Sergey''s cock in your hand and gently rub it, trying to milk the last bits of sperm out of him. Sonia kisses you greedily, and you taste Sergey''s sperm on her tongue when she does. When she breaks off the kiss, you lick her cheek. "Just cleaning up your face, you had some sperm there", you wink at her.'
+				'You take Sergey''s cock in your hand and gently rub it, trying to milk the last bits of sperm out of him. Sonia kisses you greedily, and you taste Sergey''s sperm on her tongue when she does. When she breaks off the kiss, you lick her cheek. "Just cleaning up your face, you had some sperm there," you wink at her.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Finish': gt'shulgahall'

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