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Minor text changes. Very minor.

Vengeance11 3 years ago
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2 changed files with 6 additions and 6 deletions
  1. 5 5
      locations/AlbStars.qsrc
  2. 1 1
      locations/gdksport.qsrc

+ 5 - 5
locations/AlbStars.qsrc

@@ -22,17 +22,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina1':
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A23'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A23'']>></font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big23.jpg"></center>'
 		'You approach and greet Albina. She raises an eyebrow haughtily.'
-		'"And you are? Oh, right. <<$pcs_nickname>>. You''ve taken up dancing, have you?" You nod, confirming the obvious. Albina laughs dismissively. "Well, how''s that going for you?"'
+		'"And you are? Oh, right. <<$pcs_nickname>>. You''ve taken up dancing, have you?" You nod, confirming the obvious, but Albina just laughs dismissively. "Well, how''s that going for you?"'
 		'"Not bad." you answer coldly. "Not bad at all."'
 		'Albina stares at you arrogantly. "Not bad? Well maybe in comparison with the local bowlegged cows, but I doubt that you can dance on a professional level."'
 
-		act 'I do not care':
+		act 'I don''t care':
 			*clr & cla
 			npc_rel['A23'] -= 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A23'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A23'']>></font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big23.jpg"></center>'
-			'You reply as scornfully as possible that you do not care and turn away from her.'
+			'You reply as scornfully as possible that you don''t care and turn away from her.'
 			'She snickers nastily and turns to the other girls. "Alright girls. Let''s get to work."'
 
 			act 'Leave': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina2':
 		'"I''m pretty good, I think." you reply with a smile. "Even if I do say so myself."'
 		'"Pretty good, huh?" Albina responds in a condescending tone. "Well, I''ve seen some of the dancers that take lessons here. It wouldn''t take much to be better than those bow-legged cows. I doubt you''re up to any kind of professional standard though."'
 
-		act 'I do not care':
+		act 'I don''t care':
 			*clr & cla
 			npc_rel['A23'] -= 5
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina3':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A23'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A23'']>></font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big23.jpg"></center>'
-	'At the end of the class, a few girls enter the dance studio, including Albina Barlovskaya. You know Albina from school and you have a very close relationship from your mutal love for dancing.'
+	'At the end of the class, a few girls enter the dance studio, including Albina Barlovskaya. You know Albina from school and you have a very close relationship from your mutual love for dancing.'
 
 	act 'Greet Albina':
 		*clr & cla

+ 1 - 1
locations/gdksport.qsrc

@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			end
 		end
 		if gsAboDance > 0 and AlbinaQW['StarletsJoined'] = 0 and npc_pregtalk['A23'] = 0:
-			act 'Take a dance lesson, you have <<gsAboDance>> lessons remaining': gt 'gdksport', 'dance2'
+			act 'Take a dance lesson. You have <<gsAboDance>> lessons remaining': gt 'gdksport', 'dance2'
 		elseif AlbinaQW['StarletsJoined'] > 0 and AlbinaQW['StarletsShutDown'] = 0 and npc_pregtalk['A23'] = 0 and AlbinaQW['startletsday'] ! daystart:
 			if (pregtime >= 90) or (grupTipe = 5):
 				if pregtime >= 90: act 'Train with Starlets': gt 'AlbStars', 'Starletsreact'