Merge remote-tracking branch 'spectre1viper/master'

locations/Komp.qsrc

@@ -551,7 +551,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'agent':
 		*nl
 	elseif home_owned[1] = 0 and ArendHouseSL = 0:
 		'There is an apartment in St. Petersburg residental area available, for rent or puchase.'
-		'Rent is: <<$home_rent_txt[1]>> ₽ per month. Curent sale price is listet at: <<$home_value_txt[1]>> <b>₽</b>'
+		'Rent is: <<$home_rent_txt[1]>> ₽ per month. Current sale price is listed at: <<$home_value_txt[1]>> <b>₽</b>.'
 		*nl
 	end
 
@@ -565,8 +565,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'agent':
 		'You have <B><<ArendHouseSL4>> days</B> remaining on the rental of your Pushkin apartment.'
 		*nl
 	elseif home_owned[4] = 0 and ArendHouseSL4 = 0:
-		'There is a n apartment in Pushkin area available to rent.'
-		'Rent is: <<$home_rent_txt[4]>> ₽ per month.'
+		'There is an apartment in Pushkin area (Old Town) available to rent.'
+		'Rent is: <<$home_rent_txt[4]>> <b>₽</b> per month.'
 		*nl
 	end
 

locations/Timofei.qsrc

@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ act 'Have a chat with Timofei':
 		elseif sosed = 5:
 			'Timofei tells you that he spends most of his evenings repairing computers. It costs him most of his freetime but at least he doesn''t have to rely on his parents for money.'
 		elseif sosed = 6:
-			'Timofei tells you that after college, he wants to go to university and study law; he''ll probably have to serve in the military first, though.'
+			'Timofei tells you that after college, he wants to go to the university and study law; he''ll probably have to serve in the military first, though.'
 		elseif sosed >= 7:
 			'Timofei and you chat about life, computers and other things, cracking jokes and enjoying each other''s company.'
 		end

locations/bed2.qsrc

@@ -102,6 +102,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			act 'Return to bed':gt 'bed2'
 		end
 	end
+	if sisterHere = 0 or (sisterHere = 1 and hour < 7):
+		if (pcs_horny > 75 and pcs_inhib >= 60) or (pcs_horny > 50 and pav_slut >= 75) or (pcs_horny > 50 and pav_slut >= 25 and pcs_inhib >= 60):
+			act 'Masturbate':
+				InSleep = 0
+				gt 'selfplay', 'start'
+			end
+		end
+	end	
 	act 'Sleep options':gt 'bed2', 'options'
 end
 

locations/brother.qsrc

@@ -53,9 +53,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/kolka/brother.jpg"></center>'
 	'Your brother Kolka is younger than you, he''s <<brotherAge>> years old. While you share the same mother, unlike you and your sister, Kolka''s dad is your stepfather. He is a student at the same school as you, and enjoys soccer.'
 
-	if brotherSex = 10:
+	if brotherSex >= 10 and npc_rel['A34'] >= 80:
 		'You and your brother are lovers.'
-	elseif brotherSex = 9:
+	elseif brotherSex >= 10 and npc_rel['A34'] >= 60 and npc_rel['A34'] < 80:
+		'You and your brother are good friends with benefits.'	
+	elseif brotherSex > 5 and npc_rel['A34'] >= 40 and npc_rel['A34'] < 60:
 		'You are siblings with benefits.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A34'] < 20:
 		'You and your brother argue all the time.'
@@ -160,7 +162,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				'The guys gather together and tell you "We just finished playing soccer, Let''s go watch porn."'
 
 				act 'Go watch porn':minut += 5 & gt 'seeporn'
-			elseif evgenQW < 4:
+			elseif evgenQW < 4 or kolkaseepornday = daystart:
 				'Your brother grins "Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>. Fancy a game of football?"'
 				if $clothingworntype ! 'exercise':
 					'"Oh, you can''t play dressed like that, put on some sportswear first, or you can watch us."'

locations/carF.qsrc

@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	act 'Move away from the car':dynamic $enddrive
 
 	if kanistra > 0:
-		'In the trunk there is a <<kanistra>>. It contains 5 liters of gasoline.'
+		'In the trunk there is <<kanistra>> canister/s of gasoline. Each canister contains 5 liters of gasoline.'
 
 		if benz <= 35:
 			act 'Pour gasoline into the tank':
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				menu_off = 1
 				benz += 5
 				kanistra -= 1
-				'You emptied the canister of gasoline in the tank.'
+				'You emptied the canister of gasoline into the tank.'
 
 				act 'Move away':gt 'carF', 'start'
 			end
@@ -81,18 +81,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 
 	'<<$teh>>'
 
-	if cardrive = 1:'Through the windshield, you see the residential area.'
-	if cardrive = 2:'Through the windshield, you see downtown.'
-	if cardrive = 3:'Through the windshield, you see the city industrial region.'
+	if cardrive = 1:'Through the windshield, you see St. Petersburg''s residential area.'
+	if cardrive = 2:'Through the windshield, you see St. Petersburg''s downtown (city center).'
+	if cardrive = 3:'Through the windshield, you see St. Petersburg''s industrial region.'
 	if cardrive = 4:'Through the windshield, you see the lake.'
-	if cardrive = 12:'Through the windshield, you see a construction site.'
-	if cardrive = 14:'Through the windshield, you see the old town.'
 	if cardrive = 5:'Through the windshield, you can see the park.'
-	if cardrive = 19:'Through the windshield, you see the Station.'
+	if cardrive = 12:'Through the windshield, you see a construction site.'
+	if cardrive = 14:'Through the windshield, you see the Old Town (Pushkin).'
+	if cardrive = 19:'Through the windshield, you see the Train Station.'
+	if cardrive = 20:'Through the windshield, you can see Pavlovsk''s residential area.'
 	if cardrive = 23:'Through the windshield, you see the huts of the village of Gadukino.'
-	if cardrive = 24:'Through the windshield, you can see the Old Town.'
+	if cardrive = 24:'Through the windshield, you can see Pavlovsk''s commercial region.'
 	if cardrive = 25:'You cross one of the bridges that leads to the island.'
-	if cardrive = 26:'Through the windshield, you can see the Old Town.'
+	if cardrive = 26:'Through the windshield, you can see Pavlovsk''s industrial region.'
 
 	if prava = 0:'You don''t have a driver''s license.'
 
@@ -155,7 +156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 			if avarand >= 50:
 				teh = teh/2
 				wrek = 1
-				'Driving drunkn, you crash into a tree and wreck your car.'
+				'Driving drunken, you crash into a tree and wreck your car.'
 
 				act 'In the salon':gt 'carF', 'salon'
 
@@ -166,7 +167,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 		if wrek = 0:
 			if cardrive >= 20:
 				if cardrive ! 3:
-					act 'Go to town':
+					act 'Go to St. Petersburg''s Industrial Region':
 						cla
 						minut += 75
 						benz -= 1
@@ -212,7 +213,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 			end
 
 			if cardrive ! 1 and cardrive < 20:
-				act 'Go to the residential area':
+				act 'Go to St. Petersburg''s residential area':
 					cla
 					minut += 15
 					benz -= 1
@@ -224,7 +225,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 			end
 
 			if cardrive ! 2 and cardrive < 20:
-				act 'Go to the city center':
+				act 'Go to St. Petersburg city center':
 					cla
 					minut += 15
 					benz -= 1
@@ -236,7 +237,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 			end
 
 			if cardrive ! 3 and cardrive < 20:
-				act 'Go to the city industrial area':
+				act 'Go to the St. Petersburg''s industrial area':
 					cla
 					minut += 15
 					benz -= 1
@@ -298,7 +299,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 			end
 
 			if cardrive ! 7 and cardrive < 20:
-				act 'Go to the car wash':
+				act 'Go to the auto repair shop':
 					cla
 					minut += 15
 					benz -= 1
@@ -310,7 +311,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 			end
 
 			if cardrive ! 8 and cardrive < 20:
-				act 'Go to a car dealership':
+				act 'Go to the car dealership':
 					cla
 					minut += 15
 					benz -= 1
@@ -382,14 +383,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 			end
 
 			if cardrive ! 14:
-				act 'Go to the Old Town':
+				act 'Go to Old Town (Pushkin)':
 					cla
 					if cardrive < 20:
 						minut += 75
-						'It takes you more than an hour to get to the Old Town.'
+						'It takes you more than an hour to get to Old Town (Pushkin).'
 					else
 						minut += 15
-						'15 minutes later, you reach the Old Town.'
+						'15 minutes later, you reach Old Town (Pushkin).'
 					end
 					benz -= 1
 					teh -= rand(2, 5)
@@ -399,16 +400,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 				end
 			end
 
-			if cardrive ! 20:
-				act 'Go to Pavlovsk residential area':
+			if cardrive ! 23:
+				act 'Go to the village of Gadukino':
 					cla
-					benz -= 1
-					teh -= rand(3, 6)
-					cardrive = 20
+					benz = benz - 1
+					teh = teh - RAND(3,6)
+					cardrive = 23
 
 					if cardrive < 20:
 						minut += 75
-						'You spend more than an hour on the highway going to Pavlovsk.'
+						'You spend more than an hour on the highway going to Gadukino.'
 					else
 						minut += 15
 						'15 minutes later, you reach your destination.'
@@ -418,16 +419,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 				end
 			end
 
-			if cardrive ! 23:
-				act 'To go to the village of Gadukino':
+			if cardrive ! 20:
+				act 'Go to Pavlovsk''s Residential Area':
 					cla
-					benz = benz - 1
-					teh = teh - RAND(3,6)
-					cardrive = 23
+					benz -= 1
+					teh -= rand(3, 6)
+					cardrive = 20
 
 					if cardrive < 20:
 						minut += 75
-						'You spend more than an hour on the highway going to Gadukino.'
+						'You spend more than an hour on the highway going to Pavlovsk.'
 					else
 						minut += 15
 						'15 minutes later, you reach your destination.'
@@ -438,7 +439,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 			end
 
 			if cardrive ! 24:
-				act 'Go to Pavlovsk high street':
+				act 'Go to Pavlovsk''s Commercial Region':
 					cla
 					benz -= 1
 					teh -= rand(3, 6)
@@ -457,7 +458,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 			end
 
 			if cardrive ! 26:
-				act 'Go to Pavlovsk Industrial Region':
+				act 'Go to Pavlovsk''s Industrial Region':
 					cla
 					benz -= 1
 					teh -= rand(3, 6)

locations/dinmother.qsrc

@@ -57,10 +57,10 @@ $d_mother[3]={
 		'You have a chat with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, and she tells you how she misses her youth and envies you.'
 	end
 	if motherTalk = 8:
-		'You have a chat with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, and she tells you how she was angry with Anya, when she decided not to go to university.'
+		'You have a chat with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, and she tells you how she was angry with Anya, when she decided not to go to the university.'
 	end
 	if motherTalk = 9:
-		'You have a chat with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, and she tells you that education is very important and that she hopes you won''t make the same mistake your sister made by not going to university.'
+		'You have a chat with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, and she tells you that education is very important and that she hopes you won''t make the same mistake your sister made by not going to the university.'
 	end
 	if motherTalk = 10:
 		'You have a chat with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, and she tells you she had to go to the tailor at the garment factory to get some clothes adjusted after she had went up a few sizes. She proudly added that she had to go back and have them readjusted again when she lost the weight a few months later.'

locations/dinsister.qsrc

@@ -301,10 +301,10 @@ $d_sister[3]={
 			'You chat with your sister, Anya, she tells you the tailor at the Garment factory is a creep who makes his customers wait around in their underwear.'
 		end
 		if sisterTalk = 3:
-			'You ask Anya about University. She grins, "I almost went, passed the entrance exam. However, I started working in the summer and got used to having cash. What can I buy with a diploma?"'
+			'You ask Anya about the University. She grins, "I almost went, passed the entrance exam. However, I started working in the summer and got used to having cash. What can I buy with a diploma?"'
 		end
 		if sisterTalk = 4:
-			'You ask Anya about her boyfriend. She smiles, "Well, I have a boyfriend. Although nothing serious. It''s more of a friends with benefits."'
+			'You ask Anya about her boyfriend. She smiles, "Well, I have a boyfriend. Although nothing serious. It''s more like friends with benefits."'
 		end
 		if sisterTalk = 5:
 			'You start talking with Anya, she tells you about the boys she met, parties she''s been to and cosmetics.'

locations/foto.qsrc

@@ -1879,16 +1879,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'model':
 						pav_modelling += rand(1,city_modelling)/10
 						mdlng_exp += rand(6,10)
 						if pcs_inhib < 50:inhib_exp += 1
-						bikinishoot = rand(1,3)
+						bikinishoot = rand(1,5)
 						gs 'stat'
 						if bikinishoot = 1:
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/bikini.mp4"></video></center>'
-						elseif bikinishoot = 2:
-							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/bikini2.mp4"></video></center>'
+						else
+							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/bikini<<bikinishoot>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 						end
+						*nl
 						'	You spend the shoot in designer bikinis, modelling them to appear in various higher end magazines.'
 						*nl
-						'	Two hours later, you''re all done. The photographer thanks you for your time, pays you <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> for the job.'
+						'	Two hours later, you''re all done. The photographer thanks you for your time and pays you <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> for the job.'
 						if pcs_mdlng >= 40 and commercial = 0:
 							act 'Leave':gt'foto','commercial'
 						else
@@ -2126,7 +2127,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nude_shoot':
 				pav_modelling += rand(0,city_modelling)/4
 				inhib_exp += 5
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/nude<<rand(1,5)>>.jpg"></center>'
-				'	Already naked, you step onto set and begin the shoot immediately.'
+				'	Already naked, you step onto the set and begin the shoot immediately.'
 				*nl
 				'	You spend two hours posing confidently for a photographer taking pictures of you, often being asked to carefully position your hands or legs in ways that tastefully hides your pussy and nipples. These images, though incredibly provocative, are still somehow considered to be conservative enough to be allowed on the front cover of fashion, sports, and other tabloid magazines. When the shoot ends, both you and the photographers are very proud of the results and you are paid <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> for your work.'
 				if pcs_mdlng >= 40 and commercial = 0:
@@ -2157,7 +2158,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nude_shoot':
 				pav_modelling += rand(0,city_modelling)/4
 				inhib_exp += 5
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/nude<<rand(6,26)>>.jpg"></center>'
-				'	Already naked, you step onto set and begin the shoot immediately.'
+				'	Already naked, you step onto the set and begin the shoot immediately.'
 				*nl
 				'	You spend two hours posing confidently for a photographer taking pictures of you, often using props, hands, legs, or shadow to shield your pussy while simultaneously teasing the would-be readers of what they cannot see. When the shoot ends, both you and the photographers are very proud of the results and you are paid <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> for your work.'
 				if pornstudio = 0:pornstudio = 2 & '	At the end of the shoot a staff member comes up to you. "By the way, you should take this," he says, handing you a business card. You''re shocked to see that it''s for a porn production company in St. Petersburg. "Since you''ve shown that you''re willing to go full nude, we figure we might as well let you know this opportunity exists. We share a couple of models with them and from what we can tell, it increases sales for both of us. If you feel like you''re up to it, use this card and tell them we sent you. That will get you a special audition. But we understand if you don''t go. We know it''s not for everyone and that some of you want more legitimate fame."'
@@ -2193,12 +2194,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nude_shoot':
 				inhib_exp += 5
 				if pcs_pubes <= 20:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/nude<<rand(27,35)>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'	Already naked, you step onto set and begin the shoot immediately.'
+					'	Already naked, you step onto the set and begin the shoot immediately.'
 					*nl
 					'	You spend two hours posing confidently for a photographer taking pictures of you that fully expose your breasts and pussy. When the shoot ends, both you and the photographers are very proud of the results and you are paid <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> for your work.'
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/nude<<rand(36,41)>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'	Already naked, you step onto set and begin the shoot immediately.'
+					'	Already naked, you step onto the set and begin the shoot immediately.'
 					*nl
 					'	You spend two hours posing confidently for a photographer taking pictures of you, your thick bush being used as a simple censor of your pussy and make it more "acceptable" as art while still maintaining the feeling of eroticism. When the shoot ends, both you and the photographers are very proud of the results and you are paid <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> for your work.'
 				end

locations/gpoli.qsrc

@@ -355,9 +355,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 					end
 
 					'He looks up from his desk when you enter his office and recognizes you immediately: "Ah, hello <<$pcs_nickname>>. Did you come for a check-up?"'
-					'You nod and take a seat: "Hello, dr. Petrovich. Yes, I''m here for a check-up."'
+					'You nod and take a seat: "Hello, Dr. Petrovich. Yes, I''m here for a check-up."'
 					$gyn1
-					'You smile at him: "It''s true, dr. Petrovich. I am."'
+					'You smile at him: "It''s true, Dr. Petrovich. I am."'
 					'He rubs his hand over his chin, and continues: "Does your mother know?"'
 					$gyn2
 					'The gynaecologist nods, and motions for you to stand up: "Very well, let''s see how you''re doing then. Undress for me, please."'
@@ -370,7 +370,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 						$gyn2 = 'In a way, you feel touched that he is so concerned for his patients. You don''t mind answering him, and you might as well be frank: "Doctor, I really just love having sex. I don''t even care about getting paid, it just seems like I can''t ever get enough dick. You understand, right?"'
 					end
 					'He looks up from his desk when you enter his office and recognizes you immediately: "Ah, hello <<$pcs_nickname>>. Back for another check-up?"'
-					'You nod and take a seat: "Hello, dr. Petrovich. Yes, I''m here for a check-up."'
+					'You nod and take a seat: "Hello, Dr. Petrovich. Yes, I''m here for a check-up."'
 					$gyn1
 					'"Yes, doctor. I am," you tell him.'
 					'He rubs his hand over his chin, and continues: "If I may be so bold... why?"'
@@ -472,7 +472,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/gyno/sex/gpoli_8.jpg"></center>'
-									'You moan, feeling some of your wetness running down your leg as dr. Petrovich keeps rubbing his cock against your clit. He sure knows his way around a woman''s body!'
+									'You moan, feeling some of your wetness running down your leg as Dr. Petrovich keeps rubbing his cock against your clit. He sure knows his way around a woman''s body!'
 									'For a moment you close your eyes and just give in to the pleasure. Before you know it you feel something push against your labia, and your vaginal walls are being stretched by his thick dick entering you. It''s still very slick from the blowjob you gave him earlier, and you can''t help but groan louder when it slides in.'
 
 									gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
@@ -516,7 +516,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 												pcs_ass += 1
 												gs 'stat'
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/gyno/sex/gpoli_11.jpg"></center>'
-												'You want to pull away from him, but you''re trapped between dr. Petrovich and a wall. He slowly moves his hips, letting you get used to the size of his thick rod inside your tight little butt. It still stings a lot. Despite your best efforts you can''t relax your anus, only slowly getting used to the size of him.'
+												'You want to pull away from him, but you''re trapped between Dr. Petrovich and a wall. He slowly moves his hips, letting you get used to the size of his thick rod inside your tight little butt. It still stings a lot. Despite your best efforts you can''t relax your anus, only slowly getting used to the size of him.'
 												'When he begins to speed up you nearly cry, and groan loudly with every thrust.'
 												'He softly mutters: "This won''t do, you''re going to alarm the entire clinic if you keep screaming like that!"'
 												'He takes his penis out of your ass, and you feel relieved. And, to be honest, rather turned on. It didn''t feel very good yet, but in a way you want it to. Maybe after a few more minutes?'
@@ -598,12 +598,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/gyno/gpoli_1.jpg"></center>'
 				if gpoli_doctorhavesex = 1:
 					'You go to the doctor for help with your addiction, since you trust him enough to know he won''t tell your mother.'
-					'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>. What brings you in today?" dr. Petrovich says with a smile.'
+					'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>. What brings you in today?" Dr. Petrovich says with a smile.'
 					'"Hello, Doctor. I''m feeling weak and I hurt all over," you reply.'
 					'"Well, let''s take a look, shall we?" the doctor replies as you get up to stand by the examination table.'
 				else
 					'You go to the doctor for help with your addiction.'
-					'"Hello, young lady. I''m dr. Petrovich. Do you have specific complaints, or are you simply here for a check-up?" the doctor asks as he comes into the examination room.'
+					'"Hello, young lady. I''m Dr. Petrovich. Do you have specific complaints, or are you simply here for a check-up?" the doctor asks as he comes into the examination room.'
 					'"Hello sir. I''m feeling really weak and shaky and I hurt all over," you explain.'
 					'"Let''s take a look, shall we?" the doctor replies and gestures for you to stand next to the examination table.'
 				end
@@ -614,8 +614,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'You tell the doctor about the white powder you''ve been sniffing while he checks your temperature, blood pressure and pulse.'
 					'"Lift your shirt so we can have a listen," he tells you as he warms his stethoscope by breathing on it.'
-					'You lift your shirt and bra above your breasts as instructed and the doctor presses the stethoscope to various places on your chest. He places his left hand on your tummy to steady you as he listens to your heart and breathing, occasionally bringing the stethescope to his mouth to rewarm it. The hand on your tummy moves in small circles that slip steadily lower until his finger tips slip just below the waistband of your clothes. Unlike any other doctor you have seen before, dr. Petrovich listens by pressing the stethescope against your boobs. Does that even work?'
-					'He also warms it more often now, and it feels moist and warm on your nipples. To your embarrassment, you could feel your nipples begin to get hard. You''re not quite sure, but you''re fairly sure dr. Petrovich was just having fun for the last few minutes of that examination.'
+					'You lift your shirt and bra above your breasts as instructed and the doctor presses the stethoscope to various places on your chest. He places his left hand on your tummy to steady you as he listens to your heart and breathing, occasionally bringing the stethescope to his mouth to rewarm it. The hand on your tummy moves in small circles that slip steadily lower until his finger tips slip just below the waistband of your clothes. Unlike any other doctor you have seen before, Dr. Petrovich listens by pressing the stethescope against your boobs. Does that even work?'
+					'He also warms it more often now, and it feels moist and warm on your nipples. To your embarrassment, you could feel your nipples begin to get hard. You''re not quite sure, but you''re fairly sure Dr. Petrovich was just having fun for the last few minutes of that examination.'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/gyno/gpoli_2.jpg"></center>'
 					'He nods: "Well, so far everything is OK."'
 					'You notice that there is a certain sparkle in his eyes when he looks at your <<$titsize>> breasts with interest. You feel embarrassed at your nipples hardening even further, and try to think of bad things. You silently think to yourself: "My mother is watching! My mother is watching!"'
@@ -704,13 +704,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'referral':
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/gyno/gpoli_1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You''re a bit nervous as you enter the gynaecologist''s office. Your mother expects you to her a referral from him that states you''re still a virgin, except there''s one small problem... you''re not a virgin any more! Maybe you can work something out with him?'
+		'You''re a bit nervous as you enter the gynaecologist''s office. Your mother expects you to get a referral from him that states you''re still a virgin, except there''s one small problem... you''re not a virgin any more! Maybe you can work something out with him?'
 		if gpoliuborka = 2:
-			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>. What brings you in today?" dr. Petrovich says with a smile.'
+			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>. What brings you in today?" Dr. Petrovich says with a smile.'
 			'"Hello, doctor. It''s time for my monthly check-up again. My mother needs a referral from you to make sure I''m still a virgin," you reply.'
 			'"Ah, yes. For... school, right? Let''s take a look," the doctor replies with a chuckle as you are already on your way to stand by the examination table, like last time.'
 		else
-			'"Hello, young lady. I''m dr. Petrovich. Do you have specific complaints, or are you simply here for a check-up?" the doctor asks as he comes into the examination room.'
+			'"Hello, young lady. I''m Dr. Petrovich. Do you have specific complaints, or are you simply here for a check-up?" the doctor asks as he comes into the examination room.'
 			'"Hello sir. I''m here for my monthly referral. My mother needs one from you to establish I''m still a virgin. It''s for school," you explain.'
 			'"For... school?" he asks, a tad confused. Then he snaps out of it and replies: "Anyway... let''s take a look, shall we?" as he gestures for you to stand next to the examination table.'
 		end
@@ -870,13 +870,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spravka_arrange':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	if gpoliuborka = 2:
-		'You really need this, but you understand you''re not in a good position to negotiate. Nevertheless, you try to plea your case and beg: "Please, dr. Petrovich. I don''t have any money to offer you, but I really need that referral! My mother would kill me! Please?"'
+		'You really need this, but you understand you''re not in a good position to negotiate. Nevertheless, you try to plea your case and beg: "Please, Dr. Petrovich. I don''t have any money to offer you, but I really need that referral! My mother would kill me! Please?"'
 		'He has a wolfish grin on his face as he gets up from his chair and walks over to you, putting his hands on your shoulders. He softly says in a soothing voice: "Well, if you really need it that badly... I think we can work out a deal. It''d just be between us, no one else has to know."'
 		'You become hopeful, even though you feel a bit uncomfortable. You carefully ask: "Erm... okay, that''s great! What kind of deal are you thinking of?"'
 		'The doctor continues in his soothing voice: "You see, <<$pcs_nickname>>... my wife is away on a business trip, she won''t be home for weeks. I''m a man with needs, and my job is very stressful as you can imagine. I need you to help me relax... relieve the tension, so to speak. What do you think? Do you think you can help me with that?"'
 		'His grip on your shoulders intensifies a little, and he massages you while you think it over. You''re perfectly clear on what he wants from you now... but is it really worth it?'
 	else
-		'You really need this, but you understand you''re not in a good position to negotiate. Nevertheless, you try to plea your case and beg: "Please, dr. Petrovich. I really need that referral! My mother would kill me! Please?"'
+		'You really need this, but you understand you''re not in a good position to negotiate. Nevertheless, you try to plea your case and beg: "Please, Dr. Petrovich. I really need that referral! My mother would kill me! Please?"'
 		'He has a wolfish grin on his face as he gets up from his chair and walks over to you. He softly says: "Well, if you really need it that badly... we all have needs. I bet we could work something out."'
 		'You softly mutter: "But... what if..."'
 		'He looks at you playfully and asks: "What if what?"'
@@ -913,9 +913,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spravka_arrange':
 			'You want to move back, but there is nowhere to go. His stiff cock is in front of you, and his powerful hand on the back of your head pulling you in closer. The masculine smell of his throbbing cock fills your nose as you breathe and you have to admit, it excites you!'
 			'He begins to relax a little, letting you pull back until just the tip of his cock is between your lips. Then he pulls your head closer again, forcing his cock deeper each time. At first you''re okay, but at a certain point you can''t keep up any more and gag on his cock when he thrusts it in deep again. From the sadistic grin on his face you can tell he quite enjoys you gagging on his cock, and he suggests: "Try breathing through your nose, might be easier."'
 			'You do as he says, and it does indeed make things a bit easier.'
-			'Soon he is fucking your mouth, your saliva drooling down his shaft and over his hairy balls. The air of the office is filled with wet slurps and snorts as he pounds his cock into your mouth deeper and deeper, sometimes making you gag involuntarily as the head of his cock slips down your throat. With a sudden thrust, you can feel his curly pubic hair against your lips as he forces his cock down your throat as far as it''ll go. You panic as you can''t breathe, but dr. Petrovich just as suddenly pulls his dick out of your mouth again. Thankfully, you get a chance to catch your breath.'
-			'"I think that got me lubed up properly," dr. Petrovich says with a lusty voice. You can tell he is very excited now, and are not sure you want to find out what happens next. Nevertheless, you''re too far in to back down now. He urges you: "Come on, now it''s time to go deep."'
-			'"What do you mean?" you start to ask but get your answer almost immediately as dr. Petrovich raises you from the floor, and bends you over the chair. You can''t help but let out a moan as he begins to rub the head of his slippery cock against your engorged clitoris. You didn''t realize how excited you were getting while you were sucking his cock!'
+			'Soon he is fucking your mouth, your saliva drooling down his shaft and over his hairy balls. The air of the office is filled with wet slurps and snorts as he pounds his cock into your mouth deeper and deeper, sometimes making you gag involuntarily as the head of his cock slips down your throat. With a sudden thrust, you can feel his curly pubic hair against your lips as he forces his cock down your throat as far as it''ll go. You panic as you can''t breathe, but Dr. Petrovich just as suddenly pulls his dick out of your mouth again. Thankfully, you get a chance to catch your breath.'
+			'"I think that got me lubed up properly," Dr. Petrovich says with a lusty voice. You can tell he is very excited now, and are not sure you want to find out what happens next. Nevertheless, you''re too far in to back down now. He urges you: "Come on, now it''s time to go deep."'
+			'"What do you mean?" you start to ask but get your answer almost immediately as Dr. Petrovich raises you from the floor, and bends you over the chair. You can''t help but let out a moan as he begins to rub the head of his slippery cock against your engorged clitoris. You didn''t realize how excited you were getting while you were sucking his cock!'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -924,7 +924,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spravka_arrange':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/gyno/sex/gpoli_8.jpg"></center>'
-				'You can feel your arousal rising when his body touches yours. As dr. Petrovich keeps massaging your clitoris with his cockhead, you can feel your juices start to leak from your swollen pussy and run down your quivering thighs. You can hear the wet squelching, as he plows his throbbing cock between your soaking wet pussy lips. You close your eyes for a moment as you feel him push against your sopping wet cunt... it feels so good!'
+				'You can feel your arousal rising when his body touches yours. As Dr. Petrovich keeps massaging your clitoris with his cockhead, you can feel your juices start to leak from your swollen pussy and run down your quivering thighs. You can hear the wet squelching, as he plows his throbbing cock between your soaking wet pussy lips. You close your eyes for a moment as you feel him push against your sopping wet cunt... it feels so good!'
 				'Your tender flesh resists for a moment, but then surrenders. You feel the walls of your vagina stretch open, letting the invader in. You let out a passionate groan as he fills you up completely.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
@@ -938,10 +938,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spravka_arrange':
 					gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/gyno/sex/gpoli_9.jpg"></center>'
-					'Your body feels like it''s getting hotter and hotter, beads of sweat forming on your forehead and upper lip. With every thrust dr. Petrovich fucks you faster and harder, and you can feel your excitement growing too. Involuntarily you start to moan and gasp for air. You groan louder as you become more aroused. His hard hot member penetrates you ever deeper, without giving you any pause.'
+					'Your body feels like it''s getting hotter and hotter, beads of sweat forming on your forehead and upper lip. With every thrust Dr. Petrovich fucks you faster and harder, and you can feel your excitement growing too. Involuntarily you start to moan and gasp for air. You groan louder as you become more aroused. His hard hot member penetrates you ever deeper, without giving you any pause.'
 					'You silently think to yourself: "I hope the room is soundproofed..." as the sound of his body slapping wetly against yours and your cries of passion and his animalistic grunts fill the room.'
 					'You can no longer control yourself and have a thunderous orgasm as the doctor keeps fucking you relentlessly. Waves of bliss sear your nerves and your mouth opens in a silent scream, as you are consumed with pleasure.'
-					'Suddenly, dr. Petrovich pulls his dick out of you and you almost fall to the floor. He catches you with his powerful arms right on time, and lowers you on a table where once again feel his cock slide into your quivering vagina.'
+					'Suddenly, Dr. Petrovich pulls his dick out of you and you almost fall to the floor. He catches you with his powerful arms right on time, and lowers you on a table where once again feel his cock slide into your quivering vagina.'
 
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
@@ -1145,7 +1145,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spravka_arrange_pale':
 		act 'Run out of the office':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
-			'In a panic, you grab your clothes and run out of the office. You know you can''t talk about this with anyone... if you say anything, dr. Petrovich would tell your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> about your addiction. You quickly get dressed again in an empty examination room, wondering how you''re going to get out of this mess now.'
+			'In a panic, you grab your clothes and run out of the office. You know you can''t talk about this with anyone... if you say anything, Dr. Petrovich would tell your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> about your addiction. You quickly get dressed again in an empty examination room, wondering how you''re going to get out of this mess now.'
 			if $loc = 'kuhrPar':
 				act 'leave': gt 'mother', 'referral'
 			else
@@ -1172,9 +1172,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spravka_arrange_pale':
 			'You want to move away, but there is nowhere to go. His stiff cock is in front of you, and his powerful hand on the back of your head is pulling you in closer. The masculine smell of his throbbing cock fills your nose as you breathe and you have to admit, it excites you!'
 			'He begins to relax a little, letting you pull back until just the tip of his cock is between your lips. Then he pulls your head closer again, forcing his cock deeper each time. At first you''re okay, but at a certain point you can''t keep up any more and gag on his cock when he thrusts it in deep again. From the sadistic grin on his face you can tell he quite enjoys you gagging on his cock, and he suggests: "Try breathing through your nose, might be easier."'
 			'You do as he says, and it does indeed make things a bit easier.'
-			'Soon he is fucking your mouth, your saliva drooling down his shaft and over his hairy balls. The air of the office is filled with wet slurps and snorts as he pounds his cock into your mouth deeper and deeper, sometimes making you gag as the head of his cock slips down your throat. With a sudden thrust, you can feel his curly pubic hair against your lips as he forces his cock all the way down your throat. You panic as you can''t breathe, but dr. Petrovich just as suddenly pulls his dick out of your mouth again. Thankfully, you get a chance to catch your breath.'
-			'"I think that got me lubed up properly," dr. Petrovich says with a lusty voice. You can tell he is very excited now, and are not sure you want to find out what happens next. Nevertheless, you''re too far in to back down now. He urges you: "Come on, now it''s time to go deep."'
-			'"What do you mean?" you start to ask but get your answer almost immediately as dr. Petrovich raises you from the floor, and bends you over the chair. You can''t help but let out a moan as he begins to rub the head of his slippery cock against your engorged clitoris. You didn''t realize how excited you were getting while you were sucking his cock!'
+			'Soon he is fucking your mouth, your saliva drooling down his shaft and over his hairy balls. The air of the office is filled with wet slurps and snorts as he pounds his cock into your mouth deeper and deeper, sometimes making you gag as the head of his cock slips down your throat. With a sudden thrust, you can feel his curly pubic hair against your lips as he forces his cock all the way down your throat. You panic as you can''t breathe, but Dr. Petrovich just as suddenly pulls his dick out of your mouth again. Thankfully, you get a chance to catch your breath.'
+			'"I think that got me lubed up properly," Dr. Petrovich says with a lusty voice. You can tell he is very excited now, and are not sure you want to find out what happens next. Nevertheless, you''re too far in to back down now. He urges you: "Come on, now it''s time to go deep."'
+			'"What do you mean?" you start to ask but get your answer almost immediately as Dr. Petrovich raises you from the floor, and bends you over the chair. You can''t help but let out a moan as he begins to rub the head of his slippery cock against your engorged clitoris. You didn''t realize how excited you were getting while you were sucking his cock!'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1183,7 +1183,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spravka_arrange_pale':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/gyno/sex/gpoli_8.jpg"></center>'
-				'You can feel your arousal rising when his body touches yours. As dr. Petrovich keeps massaging your clitoris with his cockhead, you can feel your juices start to leak from your swollen pussy and run down your quivering thighs. You can hear the wet squelching, as he plows his throbbing cock between your soaking wet pussy lips. You close your eyes for a moment as you feel him push against your sopping wet cunt... it feels so good!'
+				'You can feel your arousal rising when his body touches yours. As Dr. Petrovich keeps massaging your clitoris with his cockhead, you can feel your juices start to leak from your swollen pussy and run down your quivering thighs. You can hear the wet squelching, as he plows his throbbing cock between your soaking wet pussy lips. You close your eyes for a moment as you feel him push against your sopping wet cunt... it feels so good!'
 				'Your tender flesh resists for a moment, but then surrenders. You feel the walls of your vagina stretch open, letting the invader in. You let out a passionate groan as he fills you up completely.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
@@ -1194,10 +1194,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spravka_arrange_pale':
 					pcs_vag += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/gyno/sex/gpoli_9.jpg"></center>'
-					'Your body begins to get hotter and hotter, beads of sweat forming on your forehead and upper lip. With every thrust dr. Petrovich fucks you faster and harder, and you can feel your excitement growing too. Involuntarily you start to moan and gasp for air. You groan louder and louder as you become more aroused. His hard hot member penetrates you ever deeper, without giving you any pause.'
+					'Your body begins to get hotter and hotter, beads of sweat forming on your forehead and upper lip. With every thrust Dr. Petrovich fucks you faster and harder, and you can feel your excitement growing too. Involuntarily you start to moan and gasp for air. You groan louder and louder as you become more aroused. His hard hot member penetrates you ever deeper, without giving you any pause.'
 					'You silently think to yourself: "I hope the room is soundproofed..." as the sound of his body slapping wetly against yours and your cries of passion and his animalistic grunts fill the room.'
 					'You can no longer control yourself and have a thunderous orgasm as the doctor keeps fucking you relentlessly. Waves of bliss sear your nerves and your mouth opens in a silent scream, as you are consumed with pleasure.'
-					'Suddenly, dr. Petrovich pulls his dick out of you and you almost fall to the floor. He catches you right on time in his powerful arms, and lowers you on a table where you once again feel his cock slide into your quivering vagina.'
+					'Suddenly, Dr. Petrovich pulls his dick out of you and you almost fall to the floor. He catches you right on time in his powerful arms, and lowers you on a table where you once again feel his cock slide into your quivering vagina.'
 
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'rough'

locations/lover_pref.qsrc

@@ -362,7 +362,7 @@ if makePrefTmp = 0:
 elseif makePrefTmp = 1:
 	$makePrefTmp = 'a subtle amount of makeup'
 elseif makePrefTmp = 2:
-	$makePrefTmp = ' a good amount of makeup'
+	$makePrefTmp = 'a good amount of makeup'
 elseif makePrefTmp = 3:
 	$makePrefTmp = 'a slutty amount of makeup'
 end

locations/orgasm.qsrc

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 !This is intended to be hidden and the stats and calculations should not appear in game.
 
-
+pcs_mood += orgasm_buildup / 3
 orgasm_buildup -= 70
 orgasm += 1
 if temp_anal = 1: analorgasm += 1
@@ -180,18 +180,12 @@ else
 	end
 end
 
-if orgasmic > 0:
-	orgasmic = totminut
-	pcs_horny -= 10
-	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
-else
-	pcs_horny = 0
-end
+pcs_horny = 0
 
 killvar '$orgasm_txt'
-
 killvar '$orgasm_or'
 
+gs 'stat'
 
 !!'You feel so horny in this situation, you''re very close to having a spontaneous orgasm. You close your eyes and surrender yourself to the moment, reaching an explosive orgasm without ever touching yourself.'
 !!'You can resist no more, the dam breaks and you''re whole body is flooded in ecstasy.'

locations/pavCommercial.qsrc

@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ gs 'stat'
 
 if car > 0 and cardrive = 24:
 	cardrive = 24
-	'Your <a href="exec:gs ''carF'', ''start''">car<<$car>></a> is parked in the street.'
+	'Your <a href="exec:gs ''carF'', ''start''"><<$car>></a> is parked in the street.'
 end
 
 if hour >= 8 and hour <= 20:

locations/pavComplex.qsrc

@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	
 	if car > 0 and cardrive = 20:
 		cardrive = 20
-		'Your <a href="exec:gs ''carF'', ''start''">car<<$car>></a> is parked in the street.'
+		'Your <a href="exec:gs ''carF'', ''start''"><<$car>></a> is parked in the street.'
 	end
 	if rexCar = 1 and rexCarDay = daystart and hour >= 21 and hour < 23 and rexSisTalk = 3:
 		'<br>Rex is in his car, waiting for you at the parking lot near the apartment building where your parents live.'

locations/pavIndustrial.qsrc

@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ gs 'stat'
 
 if car > 0 and cardrive = 26:
 	cardrive = 26
-	'Your <a href="exec:gs ''carF'', ''start''">car<<$car>></a> is parked in the street.'
+	'Your <a href="exec:gs ''carF'', ''start''"><<$car>></a> is parked in the street.'
 end
 
 if week < 7 and hour >= 8 and hour < 15:

locations/pavResidential.qsrc

@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ end
 
 gs 'stat'
 
-if car > 0 and cardrive = 20: 'Your <a href="exec:gs ''carF'', ''start''">car<<$car>></a> is parked in the street.'
+if car > 0 and cardrive = 20: 'Your <a href="exec:gs ''carF'', ''start''"><<$car>></a> is parked in the street.'
 
 if fedorKozlovQW >= 20 and FedorKozHome = 1 or fedorKozlovQW = -15 and FedorKozHome = 1: '<br><a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''FedorEv4'', ''Home Entrance''">Fedor</a> lives in a house nearby.'
 

locations/selfplay.qsrc

@@ -543,7 +543,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sis_prov':
 					sis_watch = 2
 					$AnjaMsg = 'Anya smiles as she enters the room and waves at you to carry on.'
 				else
-					if proverkasisterhere = 2:
+					if proverkasisterhere = 2 and RAND(1,3) = 3:
 						SisterKnowMastr += 1
 						$AnjaMsg = '<font color="red"><b>Anja saw you masturbate.</b></font>'
 					end

locations/sister.qsrc

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ gs 'stat'
 *pl $sisterLocationTitle
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sister2.jpg"></center>'
 *nl
-'Your sister Anya is a bit older than you. She is <<sisterAge>> years old. She graduated from high school, but didn''t go to university and now works at the supermarket.'
+'Your sister Anya is a bit older than you. She is <<sisterAge>> years old. She graduated from high school, but didn''t go to the university and now works at the supermarket.'
 gs 'dinsister'
 dynamic $sischecks
 

locations/vanr2x.qsrc

@@ -1,9 +1,5 @@
 # vanr2x
 CLOSE ALL
-act 'To the corridor':
-	gt'korr2x'
-end
-
 
 $metka = ''
 $loc = 'vanr2x'
@@ -26,5 +22,7 @@ gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 gs 'din_van', 'private'
 gs 'din_van', 'misery'
 
+act 'Leave Bathroom': gt 'korr2x'
+
 --- vanr2x ---------------------------------