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  KevinSmarts 3f910853f0 [fixed] Array numbers not updated when posting fix for notebook record about generic lover пре 5 година
  KevinSmarts d32223002a [fixed] misspelling of receive пре 5 година
  KevinSmarts 9fa08984a9 [fixed] Couple more incorrect ises of a before words starting with a vowel пре 5 година
  KevinSmarts b1e77f960c Merge remote-tracking branch 'CroWke/master' пре 5 година
  KevinSmarts fb30c294fc Merge remote-tracking branch 'julzor/master' пре 5 година
  KevinSmarts f1b2fbaaea [fixed] Incorrect uses of a before a word begining with a vowel and duplicate a's пре 5 година
  CroWke 290b917ac9 [fixed] found it!, added the missing brackets пре 5 година
  CroWke c3168ecf95 Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/Kevin_Smarts/glife пре 5 година
  CroWke 91f8c5094c [added] unaware messages but I can't figure out why it doesn't go into "if $ARGS2 = 'unaware':" пре 5 година
  CroWke 0c4d60bd74 [edit] added virginity_call to the project пре 5 година
  julzor 0a69b1bbfe [fixes] blocked stripping when willpower or mood is very low to prevent a buggy game over пре 5 година
  KevinSmarts dfb0f091a9 Merge remote-tracking branch 'CroWke/master' пре 5 година
  CroWke 9d4696ac0a [New] New feature to keep track of how Sveta loses her virginity. Includes generated responses that can be used in conversations. пре 5 година
  julzor 346db57aea [text edit] painkiller in the purse пре 5 година
  julzor f19b3c7214 Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/Blatte/glife пре 5 година
  julzor 34762e4410 [fixes] compact mirror image пре 5 година
  julzor 562d3a6a45 [fixes] end in a new line in hotelwork пре 5 година
  julzor 622afd93f6 [fixes] impossible if condition in street_event пре 5 година
  julzor 745e9860f9 [fixes] wrong payment description in stwork2 пре 5 година
  julzor 61c655fec8 [added] painkiller to the purse пре 5 година
  julzor cba196bf93 [fixes] removed unnecessary cla's in brother пре 5 година
  CroWke da990622fb [text edit] Various fixes to grammar/spelling/tense. Changed the crying in room scene as that was a copy paste from the other action there. Now it matches it's action. Added a check of Katja's slut level to change what Vicky calls her. пре 5 година
  julzor 14aff51861 [fixes] wrong return location in ender пре 5 година
  julzor 5843faffd6 [fixes] hair color cheat in cheatmenu_din пре 5 година
  julzor 7551da2b7d [fixes] wrong variable in din_pav пре 5 година
  Blatte 56b551630f [text edit]small text fix in HotelWork пре 5 година
  CroWke dfdff51b4d Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/Kevin_Smarts/glife пре 5 година
  CroWke 41811a2ba5 [text edit] It now mostly says Tamara instead of constantly using her full name. A few more typos/grammar corrected. пре 5 година
  KevinSmarts 12400f541b Merge remote-tracking branch 'CroWke/master' пре 5 година
  KevinSmarts 46ff9859c9 Merge remote-tracking branch 'Blatte/master' пре 5 година
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  KevinSmarts b9958cc950 [added] Description for the kickboxing gym to make things a little clearer. пре 5 година
  CroWke d555ad4d59 [text edit] Various fixes to grammar/spelling. пре 5 година
  Blatte 0e3bce6754 Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/Kevin_Smarts/glife пре 5 година
  Blatte 47b1066770 [text edit] hotelWork events edited пре 5 година
  spectre1viper cebaf5a186 Update 'locations/fit.qsrc' пре 5 година
  spectre1viper b6465959b4 Update 'locations/cityTrain.qsrc' пре 5 година
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  spectre1viper 768055140d Update 'locations/kikbox.qsrc' пре 5 година
  julzor a5aa92f170 [fixes] double flashing at the park during the run event, move the leave option to the top in sentence and a small text edit in MEastbed пре 5 година
  spectre1viper 1309526500 Update 'locations/succubus.qsrc' пре 5 година
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  julzor 4e09b8afdf [fixes] the courthouse should open at 07:00 because you can have a hearing between 07:00 and 11:00 пре 5 година
  spectre1viper 8bf7983e48 Update 'locations/din_van.qsrc' пре 5 година
  CroWke 8b77b653f9 [text edit] Various fixes to spelling/grammar пре 5 година
  julzor 7086a50e54 [fixes] added some missing *clr & cla, moved the decline option to the top пре 5 година
  julzor 3df3b8b2b9 [fixes] dead end in anushka пре 5 година
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  1. 1 0
      glife.qproj
  2. 1 1
      locations/BDSM_Club.qsrc
  3. 7 5
      locations/Cheatmenu_din.qsrc
  4. 1 1
      locations/FedorEv3.qsrc
  5. 1 1
      locations/FedorEv4.qsrc
  6. 1 1
      locations/Gadsarai.qsrc
  7. 1 1
      locations/Gnpc.qsrc
  8. 159 65
      locations/HotelWork.qsrc
  9. 2 2
      locations/IgorEv.qsrc
  10. 1 1
      locations/KGOLexpa.qsrc
  11. 1 1
      locations/Katja_Tanga.qsrc
  12. 2 2
      locations/Kikatak.qsrc
  13. 2 2
      locations/LCwork.qsrc
  14. 1 1
      locations/MDining.qsrc
  15. 17 19
      locations/MEastbed.qsrc
  16. 1 1
      locations/MartinSex2.qsrc
  17. 10 10
      locations/NikoDates.qsrc
  18. 1 1
      locations/NikoDreams.qsrc
  19. 1 1
      locations/NikoEv.qsrc
  20. 1 1
      locations/NikoPayback.qsrc
  21. 2 2
      locations/NikoSlut.qsrc
  22. 1 1
      locations/Snpc.qsrc
  23. 1 1
      locations/Vika.qsrc
  24. 4 4
      locations/Voltrenersex.qsrc
  25. 1 1
      locations/abductionCustomer.qsrc
  26. 2 2
      locations/anushapt.qsrc
  27. 128 125
      locations/anushka.qsrc
  28. 1 1
      locations/anushkaev1.qsrc
  29. 1 1
      locations/bedr.qsrc
  30. 2 2
      locations/bedr2x.qsrc
  31. 2 2
      locations/brothel.qsrc
  32. 11 23
      locations/brother.qsrc
  33. 1 1
      locations/brother_lessons.qsrc
  34. 2 2
      locations/cityTrain.qsrc
  35. 1 1
      locations/clothing_descriptions.qsrc
  36. 4 4
      locations/dateF.qsrc
  37. 6 6
      locations/dateM.qsrc
  38. 2 2
      locations/dibodi.qsrc
  39. 1 1
      locations/dimaEv.qsrc
  40. 2 2
      locations/dimaHome.qsrc
  41. 1 1
      locations/dimaRevenge.qsrc
  42. 5 5
      locations/dinParty.qsrc
  43. 5 1
      locations/din_bad.qsrc
  44. 5 5
      locations/din_pav.qsrc
  45. 2 6
      locations/din_van.qsrc
  46. 1 1
      locations/dk.qsrc
  47. 3 3
      locations/dolls.qsrc
  48. 4 4
      locations/down.qsrc
  49. 11 2
      locations/ender.qsrc
  50. 2 2
      locations/experiment.qsrc
  51. 1 1
      locations/femcyc.qsrc
  52. 5 2
      locations/fit.qsrc
  53. 1 1
      locations/gameover.qsrc
  54. 1 1
      locations/gdksport.qsrc
  55. 4 4
      locations/gdktoilet.qsrc
  56. 1 1
      locations/gopsex.qsrc
  57. 1 1
      locations/gpoli.qsrc
  58. 7 7
      locations/gschool_boys_bathroom.qsrc
  59. 12 12
      locations/gschool_detention.qsrc
  60. 2 2
      locations/gschool_events.qsrc
  61. 4 4
      locations/gschool_girls_bathroom.qsrc
  62. 3 3
      locations/gschool_lessons.qsrc
  63. 4 4
      locations/gschool_lessonsev1.qsrc
  64. 9 9
      locations/gschool_lessonsev2.qsrc
  65. 6 6
      locations/gschool_lessonsev3.qsrc
  66. 1 1
      locations/gschool_lunch.qsrc
  67. 1 1
      locations/gschool_office.qsrc
  68. 5 5
      locations/gschool_sex.qsrc
  69. 9 9
      locations/gschool_socialchg.qsrc
  70. 10 10
      locations/housecall.qsrc
  71. 1 1
      locations/hunters.qsrc
  72. 2 2
      locations/igorhome.qsrc
  73. 3 3
      locations/ira.qsrc
  74. 1 1
      locations/kafeM.qsrc
  75. 1 1
      locations/katalkin.qsrc
  76. 3 3
      locations/kikbox.qsrc
  77. 1 1
      locations/kisameQW.qsrc
  78. 1 1
      locations/klofdomhouse.qsrc
  79. 8 8
      locations/korr.qsrc
  80. 1 1
      locations/korr2x.qsrc
  81. 2 2
      locations/kotovSex.qsrc
  82. 1 1
      locations/love.qsrc
  83. 1 1
      locations/lover_change.qsrc
  84. 1 1
      locations/lover_meet.qsrc
  85. 7 7
      locations/masharoom.qsrc
  86. 136 135
      locations/mey_tamara_events.qsrc
  87. 232 218
      locations/mey_vika_events.qsrc
  88. 3 3
      locations/mirror.qsrc
  89. 1 1
      locations/mother.qsrc
  90. 1 1
      locations/motherQW.qsrc
  91. 1 1
      locations/motherkafeboss.qsrc
  92. 1 1
      locations/npcbreeder.qsrc
  93. 1 1
      locations/npcgeneratec.qsrc
  94. 1 1
      locations/npcgenext.qsrc
  95. 1 1
      locations/npcpreservec.qsrc
  96. 1 1
      locations/npcstatic1.qsrc
  97. 1 1
      locations/npcstatic3.qsrc
  98. 3 3
      locations/nyp_school.qsrc
  99. 7 7
      locations/obj_din.qsrc
  100. 10 10
      locations/office.qsrc

+ 1 - 0
glife.qproj

@@ -55,6 +55,7 @@
 		<Location name="exercise"/>
 		<Location name="food"/>
 		<Location name="food_menu"/>
+		<Location name="virginity_call"/>
 	</Folder>
 	<Folder name="Body">
 		<Location name="body"/>

+ 1 - 1
locations/BDSM_Club.qsrc

@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'in':
 				!'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/bdsm_club/<<$BDSMrole>><<BDSMmeet>>_2.jpg"></center>'
 				'The woman sighs disappointedly.'
 				'"Pity, we are short on subs."'
-				'"There is a registration fee of 10,000 <b>₽</b>. You should wear a expensive or formal clothing."'
+				'"There is a registration fee of 10,000 <b>₽</b>. You should wear an expensive or formal clothing."'
 				'"That seems reasonable" You reply.'
 				'"If you find a submissive and come together, then they can earn you tips."'
 				'"Before you can get started, you will have some orientation under the guidance of an experienced mistress." She points at herself, "The cost of this is covered by your registation fee. If you are satisfied, sign this document."'

+ 7 - 5
locations/Cheatmenu_din.qsrc

@@ -642,12 +642,14 @@ $cheatmenu['looks'] = {
 
 	'</td><td width="33%" cellpadding="20" valign="top">'
 	'<<$hair>>'
-	if pcs_haircol =< 0:
-		'Your hair is now (prev) <<$pcs_haircol>> <a href="exec:pcs_haircol +=1 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks''] & pcs_haircol = nathcol">(next)</a>'
+	if pcs_haircol = 0:
+		'Your hair is now (prev) <<$pcs_haircol>> <a href="exec:pcs_haircol +=1 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks''] & nathcol = pcs_haircol">(next)</a>'
 	elseif pcs_haircol > 0 and pcs_haircol < 3:
-		'Your hair is now <a href="exec:pcs_haircol -=1 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']" & pcs_haircol = nathcol>(prev)</a> <<$pcs_haircol>> <a href="exec:pcs_haircol +=1 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']" & pcs_haircol = nathcol>(next)</a>'
-	elseif pcs_haircol => 3:
-		'Your hair is now <a href="exec:pcs_haircol -=1 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']" & pcs_haircol = nathcol>(prev)</a> <<$pcs_haircol>> (next)'
+		'Your hair is now <a href="exec:pcs_haircol -=1 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']" & nathcol = pcs_haircol>(prev)</a> <<$pcs_haircol>> <a href="exec:pcs_haircol +=1 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']" & pcs_haircol = nathcol>(next)</a>'
+	elseif pcs_haircol = 3:
+		'Your hair is now <a href="exec:pcs_haircol -=1 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']" & nathcol = pcs_haircol>(prev)</a> <<$pcs_haircol>> (next)'
+	else
+		'To change your natural hair color, you have to <a href="exec:pcs_haircol = nathcol & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">restore your natural hair color</a> first.'
 	end
 	if pcs_hairlng > 975:
 		'Hair length (<<pcs_hairlng>>)	<a href="exec:pcs_hairlng -= 100 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">-100</a> <a href="exec:pcs_hairlng -= 25 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">-25</a> <a href="exec:pcs_hairlng -= 5 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">-5</a> <a href="exec:pcs_hairlng += 5 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">+5</a>'

+ 1 - 1
locations/FedorEv3.qsrc

@@ -1246,7 +1246,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Rescue':
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/head/5.jpg"></center>'
 			end		
-			'You wrap your arms around Fedor''s chest and lightly pull him off the guy as you tell him "Hey Fedor, It''s over now. I''m safe, thanks to you." as you give him a innocent smile. Fedor closes his eyes as he tilts his head back trying to collect his thoughts and then responds, "You''re right <<$pcs_nickname>>, I don''t know what came over me." You hug him as you tell him "I''m so lucky to have you." Fedor kisses you then stays with you as you wash up. After you finish Fedor walks you out of the restroom.'
+			'You wrap your arms around Fedor''s chest and lightly pull him off the guy as you tell him "Hey Fedor, It''s over now. I''m safe, thanks to you." as you give him an innocent smile. Fedor closes his eyes as he tilts his head back trying to collect his thoughts and then responds, "You''re right <<$pcs_nickname>>, I don''t know what came over me." You hug him as you tell him "I''m so lucky to have you." Fedor kisses you then stays with you as you wash up. After you finish Fedor walks you out of the restroom.'
 				
 			if EndMovie = 1:
 				act 'Leave restroom':gt 'FedorEv3', 'Movies 3'

+ 1 - 1
locations/FedorEv4.qsrc

@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  '3way1':
 		minut -= 5
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/3way/bed2.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You feel Ivan''s hands clench your waist as he lifts you up and pushes you down on Fedor dick causing a instant rush of arousal and excitement to flow through you. You reach over to continue jerking Ivan as you Ride Fedor''s dick so that Ivan won''t feel left out and you can see a very pleased smile on his face as he stares into your eyes while you jerk him off. Ivan then lays back, making himself comfortable. After a few seconds Ivan leans forward and smacks your ass. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>> why don''t you put that pretty mouth of yours to work?"'
+		'You feel Ivan''s hands clench your waist as he lifts you up and pushes you down on Fedor dick causing an instant rush of arousal and excitement to flow through you. You reach over to continue jerking Ivan as you Ride Fedor''s dick so that Ivan won''t feel left out and you can see a very pleased smile on his face as he stares into your eyes while you jerk him off. Ivan then lays back, making himself comfortable. After a few seconds Ivan leans forward and smacks your ass. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>> why don''t you put that pretty mouth of yours to work?"'
 		gs 'boyStat', 'A5'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 		gs 'boyStat', 'A3'

+ 1 - 1
locations/Gadsarai.qsrc

@@ -304,7 +304,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 				'On your right is a <a href="exec: gt ''Gadsarai'',''cow'' ">cattle</a> barn.'
 			end
 			if hour > 9 and hour < 20 and week < 6 or horse_river = 2:
-				'On your left is a a horse stable.'
+				'On your left is a horse stable.'
 			else
 				'On your left is a <a href="exec: gt ''Gadsarai'',''horse'' ">horse</a> stable.'
 			end

+ 1 - 1
locations/Gnpc.qsrc

@@ -301,7 +301,7 @@ if GboyBalabol[numnpc] = 1:
 			sub += 5
 			GboyBalabol[numnpc] = 2
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You think a about what he said. Because of the rumours, a lot of people have already a bad opinion about you and you don''t want to lose your <<$bfTitle[numnpc]>>, too. So you reluctantly decide to forgive him.'
+			'You think about what he said. Because of the rumours, a lot of people have already a bad opinion about you and you don''t want to lose your <<$bfTitle[numnpc]>>, too. So you reluctantly decide to forgive him.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
 		end

+ 159 - 65
locations/HotelWork.qsrc

@@ -729,7 +729,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 				end
 			elseif maidrand <= 100:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/maid.event4,'+rand(0,6)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'You open the door to the next room, and immediately freeze in place when you hear a somewhat desperate moaning coming from inside. Curious as you are, you decide to sneak a peek and see what''s happening in the room. You carefully put your things away and look around the corner, and you see a girl... but she''s not with one man, but with a whole group of men! From what you can see, there are at least five of them, taking turns fucking her however they like.'
+				'You open the door to the next room, and immediately freeze in place when you hear a somewhat desperate moan coming from inside. Curious as you are, you decide to sneak a peek to see what''s happening in the room.'
+				'You carefully put your things away and look around the corner, and you see a girl... but she''s not with one man, but with a whole bunch of them! From what you can see, there are at least five of them, taking turns, fucking her however they like.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10
 				gs 'stat'
 
@@ -737,7 +738,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 
 				act'Watch them for a while':
 					cla
-					'You decide to watch them for a while longer, and idly begin to fondle yourself through your clothes. You notice they''re quite rough with the girl, and sometimes she''s struggling a bit. Should you say something to the manager? Then again... how would you explain watching them? You decide against it, figuring the girl will probably be okay.'
+					'You decide to watch them for a while longer, and idly begin to fondle yourself through the clothes. You notice they''re quite rough with the girl, and sometimes she''s struggling a bit.'
+					'Should you say something to the manager? Then again... how would you explain watching them? You decide against it, figuring the girl will probably be okay.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -754,11 +756,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 				if IgorevnaBDSM = 0:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/peeping/1.jpg"></center>'
 					if lariskaMotherKnown = 1:
-						'To your surprise you see Lariska''s mum, Anna Igorevna. "Oh my... ." You whisper.'
+						'To your surprise you see Lariska''s mom, Anna Igorevna. You gasp in surprise.'
 					else
-						'You see brunette middle age woman, about the same age of your mother and a blonde youger woman. "Oh my... ." You whisper.'
+						'You see a middle age woman, brunette, about the same age of your mother and a blonde younger woman. You gasp in surprise.'
 					end
-					'She''s hitting the other girl with a crop. The blonde is bended on a tv screen waiting for the torture to end, suddenly she hit the top of the tv screen three times. The torture seems finished.'
+					'She''s hitting the other girl with a crop. The blonde is panting, bent over the tv waiting for the session to end, suddenly you hear three loud slaps against the flesh. The session seems to have finished...'
 					
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -768,13 +770,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 						IgorevnaBDSM += 1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/peeping/2.jpg"></center>'
 						if lariskaMotherKnown = 1:
-							'The blonde girl now lay on the floor clearly exausted. Anna Igorevna is hitting and teasing softly the blonde''s pussy, she seems pleased by this action, she''s moaning as for beg for something more.'
+							'The blonde girl drops on the floor clearly exhausted. Anna is hitting and teasing softly the blonde''s pussy with the crop, she seems pleased by this action as she''s moaning, beginning for more.'
 						else
-							'The blonde girl now lay on the floor clearly exausted. The brunette woman is hitting and teasing softly the blonde pussy, she seems pleased by this action, she''s moaning as for beg for something more.'
+							'The blonde girl drops on the floor clearly exhausted. The brunette woman is hitting and teasing softly the blonde''s pussy with the crop, she seems pleased by this action as she''s moaning as, begging for more.'
 						end
-						'"mmmmh...mmmoooh...mmmaah." The blonde moans.'
-						'"Do you want your reward? Ask for it!"'+iif(lariskaMotherKnown = 1, ' Anna says.', ' The brunette woman says.')
-						'"...mmmm..fff...lesssshh."'
+						'The blonde is loudly moaning. While the other woman is yelling at her;'
+						'"Do you want your reward? Beg for it!"'+iif(lariskaMotherKnown = 1, ' Anna says.', ' The brunette says.')
+						'The other woman only manages to let out some muffled cries...'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10
 						gs 'stat'
 
@@ -782,20 +784,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/peeping/3.jpg"></center>'
 							if lariskaMotherKnown = 1:
-								'Anna Igorevna removes the bite from the girl who stand up and eagerly starts to clean her boots. "Good girl. Good girl. Now something better."'
+								'Anna removes the bite from the girl and commands her to stand up, "Clean my boots, slut!"' 
+								'The blonde eagerly starts licking the boots.'
+								'Anna is encouraging her, "Good girl. Good girl. Now something better..."'
 							else
-								'The brunette woman remove the bite from the girl who stand up and eagerly starts to clean her boots. "Good girl. Good girl. Now something better."'
+								'The brunette removes the bite from the girl and commands her to stand up, "Clean my boots, slut!"' 
+								'The blonde eagerly starts licking the boots.'
+								'The brunette is encouraging her, "Good girl. Good girl. Now something better..."'
 							end
 							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10
 							gs 'stat'
 
-							act 'Keep watching':
+							act 'What''s next':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/peeping/4.jpg"></center>'
 								if lariskaMotherKnown = 1:
-									'Anna Igorevna links the chain leash to her neck then rise on the top of the table and spread her legs. The blond girl rise too, since linked in chain, but that doesn''t seem to bother her; she''s going down toward her "reward"... . You decide it''s time to leave, it''s not professional afterall.'
+									'Anna yanks the blonde''s chain leash to follow after her while she lays on the table.'
+									'The blonde is blissfully following closely after, obeying the mistress.'
+									'Anna spreads her legs and tells her slave, "Here''s your reward slut..." You decide it''s time to leave, it''s not professional and you don''t want to get caught.'
 								else
-									'The woman links the chain leash to her neck then rise on the top of the table and spread her legs. The blond girl rise too, since linked in chain, but that doesn''t seem to bother her; she''s going down toward her "reward"... . You decide it''s time to leave, it''s not professional afterall.'
+									'The woman yanks the blonde''s chain leash to follow after her while she lays on the table.'
+									'The blonde is blissfully following closely after, obeying the mistress.'
+									'Anna spreads her legs and tells her slave, "Here''s your reward slut..." You decide it''s time to leave, it''s not professional and you don''t want to get caught.'
 								end
 								gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -807,11 +817,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 					end
 				elseif IgorevnaBDSM = 1:				
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/peeping/5.jpg"></center>'
-					'After the previous show in this room, you were expected to see almost everything but not this.'
+					'After the previous experience with this room, you carefully approach it as you''re expecting to see another act but this blows your expectations away...'
 					if lariskaMotherKnown = 1:
-						'Anna Igorevna, Lariska''s mum, stands on her knees completely naked with a collar linked to a leash, holded by a woman you have never seen before.'
+						'Anna, is on her knees completely naked, collared and leashed by a woman you''ve never seen before.'
 					else
-						'The brunette woman seems on a reverse position this time, she stands on her knees completely naked with a collar linked to a leash, holded by a woman you have never seen before.'
+						'The brunette is on her knees completely naked, collared and leashed by a woman you''ve never seen before.'
 					end
 					
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
@@ -821,12 +831,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 						IgorevnaBDSM += 1
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/peeping/6.jpg"></center>'
-						
-						'Her nipples are pinched with a nipples pincher and both her arms and legs have leather cuff on.'
+						'Her nipples are pinched with nipples pincher''s and all of her limbs are cuffed...'
 						if lariskaMotherKnown = 1:
-							'The other woman constantly pat Anna Igorevna between her legs, and she seems to like this! You wonder if you have seens right last time, you are quite confused by this situation... and aroused.'
+							'The other woman gently taps Anna between her legs with a whip, and she seems to enjoy it! You remember the last time, the woman being subjective this time was dominating a woman last time... It''s making you quite confused... and aroused.'
 						else
-							'The other woman constantly pat the brunette between her legs, and she seems to like this! You wonder if you have seens right last time, you are quite confused by this situation... and aroused.'
+							'The other woman gently taps the brunette between her legs with a whip, and she seems to enjoy it! You remember the last time, the woman being subjective this time was dominating a woman last time... It''s making you quite confused... and aroused.'
 						end
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -835,24 +844,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/peeping/7.jpg"></center>'
 							if lariskaMotherKnown = 1:
-								'"Crawl to me and start lick my boots!" The woman order. Without any objection Anna Igorevna crawl to the woman and start lick her boots.'
-								'Is she willingly let her have this control on her? You wonder.'
-								'"Good girl, and now is the time for your reward. Here, put this on. You will need it." Says the other woman offering a bite and a leather strap to Lariska''s mum.'
+								'"Crawl to me and start lick my boots!" The woman commands. Without objecting, Anna crawls to the woman and starts licking her boots.'
+								'<i>Is she willingly letting her have this control over her?</i> You wonder.'
+								'"Good girl, and now is the time for your reward. Here, put this on. You will need it." Says the other woman as she hands over a bite and a leather strap to Anna.'
 							else
-								'"Crawl to me and start licking my boots!" The woman order. Without any objection the brunnette crawls to the woman and start licking her boots.'
-								'Is she willingly let her have this control on her? You wonder.'
-								'"Good girl, and now times for your reward. Here, put this on. You will need it." Says the other woman offering her a bite and a leather strap.'
+								'"Crawl to me and start lick my boots!" The woman commands. Without objecting, the brunette crawls to the woman and starts licking her boots.'
+								'<i>Is she willingly letting her have this control over her?</i> You wonder.'
+								'"Good girl, and now is the time for your reward. Here, put this on. You will need it." Says the other woman as she hands over a bite and a leather strap to her.'
 							end
 							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
 							gs 'stat'
 
-							act 'Keep watching':
+							act 'What happens next':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/peeping/8.jpg"></center>'
 								if lariskaMotherKnown = 1:
-									'Lariska''s mother quietly obey and put the bite and the straps on herself. Then she sit on some kind of gym furniture offering her back to the unknow woman. The woman link together Anna Igorevna''s arm and her legs to the furniture. "Take it bitch! I''ll teach your place." The woman start whipping Lariska''s mum. You watch them for some time reflecting about the show, when you have seen enough you decide to leave.'
+									'Anna quietly obey''s and puts the bite and the straps on herself. Then she places herself on some kind of gym bench spreading herself to the unknown woman.' 
+									'The woman chains her arms and legs to the bench, "Take it bitch! I''ll teach you your place." she yells as she starts whipping Anna.'
+									'You watch them for some time flabbergasted of what you''re seeing, and after a while you feel you''ve seen enough as you decide to leave.'
 								else
-									'The brunette woman quietly obey and put the bite and the straps on herself. Then she sit on some kind of gym furniture offering her back to the unknow woman. The woman link together her arm and legs to the furniture. "Take it bitch! I''ll teach your place." The woman start whipping the brunette. You watch them for some time reflecting about the show, when you have seen enough you decide to leave.'
+									'The brunette quietly obey''s and puts the bite and the straps on herself. Then she places herself on some kind of gym bench spreading herself to the unknown woman.' 
+									'The woman chains her arms and legs to the bench, "Take it bitch! I''ll teach you your place." she yells as she starts whipping the brunette.'
+									'You watch them for some time flabbergasted of what you''re seeing, and after a while you feel you''ve seen enough as you decide to leave.'
 								end
 								gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -865,24 +878,29 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 				elseif IgorevnaBDSM = 2:				
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/peeping/9.jpg"></center>'
 					if lariskaMotherKnown = 1:
-						'While passing near the room where you have seen Lariska''s mum, you hear some male voice. Curious as you are you decide to open the door a little with the passpartout you have on dotation. When you open the door you can see Anna Igorevna completely naked with only a pair of gloves and her pantyhose. You have missed most of the dialogue between them, from what you were able to hear she''s not in danger; you decide to listen. They seem to agree on something. "Now i''ll put your gag back. You can start to moan when I''ll tell you. Are we clear?" the man say pulling her hair and groping her marvelous boobs. Anna Igorevna, cannot move, her hands are tied to a rope pending from the ceiling. Neither she answer to his question but simply nods; you can say from her expression that she''s affected by his groping. Her boobs must be really sensitive.'
-						'Finally the man move his hand to take the gag and she says "Thank You."'
+						'While passing by the room where you''ve seen Lariska''s mom, you hear a male voice. Curious as you are you decide to take a peek to still your curiosity.'
+						'As you gently open the door you see Anna completely naked wearing only a pair of gloves and pantyhose. You''ve missed most of the initial encounter between them, but from what you were able to pick up is that she''s not in danger.'
+						'And instead they seem to agree on something, "Now I''ll put the gag back. You can start to moan when I''ll tell you. Are we clear?" the man say pulling her hair and groping her marvelous boobs.' 
+						'Anna, not able to move as her hands are tied to a rope pending from the ceiling. Not letting out a sound she simply nods; you can say from her expression that she''s affected by his groping. Her boobs must be really sensitive.'
+						'As the man removes the gag, she quietly answers, "Thank you, master..."'
 					else
-						'While passing near the room where you have seen the brunette bondage woman, you hear some male voice. Curious as you are you decide to open the door a little with the passpartout you have on dotation. When you open the door you can see the brunette woman completely naked with only a pair of gloves and her pantyhose. You have missed most of the dialogue between them, from what you were able to hear she''s not in danger; you decide to listen. They seem to agree on something. "Now i''ll put your gag back. You can start to moan when I''ll tell you. Are we clear?" the man say pulling her hair and groping her marvelous boobs. The brunette, cannot move, her hands are tied to a rope pending from the ceiling. Neither she answer to his question but simply nods; you can say from her expression that she''s affected by his groping. Her boobs must be really sensitive.'
-						'Finally the man move his hand to take the gag and she says "Thank You."'
+						'While passing by the room where you''ve seen the brunette, you hear a male voice. Curious as you are you decide to take a peek to still your curiosity.'
+						'As you gently open the door you see her completely naked wearing only a pair of gloves and pantyhose. You''ve missed most of the initial encounter between them, but from what you were able to pick up is that she''s not in danger.'
+						'And instead they seem to agree on something, "Now I''ll put the gag back. You can start to moan when I''ll tell you. Are we clear?" the man say pulling her hair and groping her marvelous boobs.' 
+						'The brunette, not able to move as her hands are tied to a rope pending from the ceiling. Not letting out a sound she simply nods; you can say from her expression that she''s affected by his groping. Her boobs must be really sensitive.'
+						'As the man removes the gag, she quietly answers, "Thank you, master..."'
 					end
 					
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					act'Watch them for a while':
+					act'Keep on watching':
 						*clr & cla
 						IgorevnaBDSM += 1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/peeping/10.jpg"></center>'
-						'This woman clearly likes to be dominated. You think. Definitively she''s not in danger, that''s for sure.'
-						'Once the man put the gag on her, she turn again facing her and starts to pinch her nipples. "Impossible. It''s simply impossible to be tired of your massive boobs." The man continues to pinch her nipples, but not a moan not a loud excapes from her gagged mouth.'
-						'Does she like it? Or is she complying with the orders he gave her?...Or both? You wonder.'
-						'"I know you like when i pinch you." The man gives her one last strong pinch "But i''m not ungratefull. Soon you''ll moan as you like. Considere it a gift." Its seems the man is going to do something; he start to unbound her.'
+						'By now you are convinced that she clearly likes to be dominated.'
+						'Once again, the man put the gag on her, turning towards her, pinching her nipples, "It''s simply not possible to be tired of your massive boobs." the man comments as he continues to pinch her nipples.'
+						'"I know you like when I pinch your nipples..." The man gives her one last strong pinch, "Don''t worry, I''m not ungrateful. Soon you''ll be able to moan as loud as you want. Consider it a gift." It seems the man is going to do something as he begins to unbound her.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
 						gs 'stat'
 
@@ -890,9 +908,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/peeping/11.jpg"></center>'
 							if lariskaMotherKnown = 1:
-								'The man completely strip Anna Igorevna from the pantyhose and the gloves; he takes a blindfold and cover her eyes, then he binds her arms and ankles to a wooden pillar in the middle of the room with a rope, while another rope link together her tiptoe and the blinfold. ... <font color = #DC143C>'' ...It seems this man know what he''s doing... ''</font> ... you think... . <br>"Now your reward." the man take a vibrator from a bag and put it between Lariska''s mother legs, teasing her clit.....'
+								'The man completely strips Anna naked as he takes out a blindfold and covers her eyes, then he binds her arms and ankles to a wooden pillar in the middle of the room with a rope, while another rope link together her tiptoe and the blindfold...'
+								'"Now for your reward." the man take out a vibrator from the bag laying on the floor and put it between Anna''s legs, teasing her clit...'
 							else
-								'The man completely strip the woman from the pantyhose and the gloves; he takes a blindfold and cover her eyes, then he binds her arms and ankles to a wooden pillar in the middle of the room with a rope, while another rope link together her tiptoe and the blinfold. ... <font color = #DC143C>'' ....It seems this man know what he''s doing... ''</font> .... you think... . <br>"Now your reward." the man take a vibrator from a bag and put it between her legs, teasing her clit.....'
+								'The man completely strips the brunette naked as he takes out a blindfold and covers her eyes, then he binds her arms and ankles to a wooden pillar in the middle of the room with a rope, while another rope link together her tiptoe and the blindfold...'
+								'"Now for your reward." the man take out a vibrator from the bag laying on the floor and put it between brunette''s legs, teasing her clit...'
 							end
 							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -901,9 +921,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/peeping/12.jpg"></center>'
 								if lariskaMotherKnown = 1:
-									'The man close the bag then he sits on a chair admiring his work; "You can start." He takes the controller and turn it on the vibrator. You can hear the buzz and immediately she start to moan. This should be very powerful. You cannot move away your eyes from Lariska''s mum, Anna Igorevna, clearly like this, you can tell it by her constant moves in search of the head of the vibrator. Maybe she moves a little too much, because she push the vibrator back and struggle herself to reach it, but the man immediately push it forward as if he doesn''t wait for anything else than to see her climax. This image is a great turn on...you are not sure of what catch your interest, but the whole situation let you involved in some way. You decide that''s better to let them finish in peace so you silently close the door and turn back to your duties.'
+									'As the vibrator is pleasing Anna, the man close the bag and takes a seat on a chair admiring his work; "Now to start the show..." he snickers.'
+									'He takes the controller and turn it on the vibrator. You can hear the buzz and immediately she start to moan. You can''t take off your eyes off Anna, she''s clearly liking this, you can tell it by her constant moves in search of the head of the vibrator.'
+									'Getting too aroused, she looses control and pushes the vibrator too far away and struggles to reach it again, the man quickly jumps up from the chair and immediately push it towards her dripping wet pussy as if he doesn''t want anything else then to see her climax.'
+									'Seeing all of this play out is such a turn on... you are not sure of what is peaking your interest, but the whole situation is making you wet. You decide that''s better to let them finish in peace so you silently close the door and turn back to your duties.'
 								else
-									'The man close the bag then he sits on a chair admiring his work; "You can start." He takes the controller and turn it on the vibrator. You can hear the buzz and immediately she start to moan. This should be very powerful. You cannot move away your eyes from the woman. She clearly like this, you can tell it by her constant moves in search of the head of the vibrator. Maybe she moves a little too much, because she push the vibrator back and struggle herself to reach it, but the man immediately push it forward as if he doesn''t wait for anything else than to see her climax. This image is a great turn on...you are not sure of what catch your interest, but the whole situation let you involved in some way. You decide that''s better to let them finish in peace so you silently close the door and turn back to your duties.'
+									'As the vibrator is pleasing the brunette, the man close the bag and takes a seat on a chair admiring his work; "Now to start the show..." he snickers.'
+									'He takes the controller and turn it on the vibrator. You can hear the buzz and immediately she start to moan. You can''t take off your eyes off her, as she''s clearly liking this, you can tell it by her constant moves in search of the head of the vibrator.'
+									'Getting too aroused, she looses control and pushes the vibrator too far away and struggles to reach it again, the man quickly jumps up from the chair and immediately push it towards her dripping wet pussy as if he doesn''t want anything else then to see her climax.'
+									'Seeing all of this play out is such a turn on... you are not sure of what is peaking your interest, but the whole situation is making you wet. You decide that''s better to let them finish in peace so you silently close the door and turn back to your duties.'
 								end
 								gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -916,9 +942,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 				elseif IgorevnaBDSM = 3:				
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/peeping/13.jpg"></center>'
 					if lariskaMotherKnown = 1:
-						'You pass near the room that usually Lariska''s mother pays for...she takes always the same room. Maybe she''s some kind of whore that likes to be dominated you wonder; some voice comes from the room...definitively there''s some one in. You decide to look in and slightly open the door... . Anna Igorevna sits near a well shaped shirtless young man with a necktie... <font color = #DC143C>'' ...He''s probably a stripper man, she probably pays for service too, not only being payed for... ''</font> ... it''s your first thought. But then your attention focus on something shiny... <font color = #DC143C>'' ....What the f... are those nipple pincher? ... ''</font> ...'
+						'You pass near the room that usually Lariska''s mother rents... you''re used by now as she always rents the same room. Maybe she''s some kind of whore that likes to be dominated you wonder as you hear some voices come from the room, someone is definitively in there. You decide to look in and slightly open the door...'
+						'Anna is standing next to a buff young man wearing nothing but a necktie...'
+						'<font color = #DC143C>''He''s probably a stripper man, she probably pays for him, not only being payed for...''</font> is your first thought. But then your attention focus towards something shiny... <font color = #DC143C>''What the hell, are those nipple pincher''s...?''</font>'
 					else
-						'You pass near the room that usually the brunette sado-woman pays for...she takes always the same room. Maybe she''s some kind of whore that likes to be dominated you wonder; some voice comes from the room...definitively there''s some one in. You decide to look in and slightly open the door... . The brunette woman sits near a well shaped shirtless young man with a necktie... <font color = #DC143C>'' ...He''s probably a stripper man, she probably pays for service too, not only being payed for... ''</font> ... it''s your first thought. But then your attention focus on something shiny... <font color = #DC143C>'' ...What the f... are those nipple pincher? ... ''</font> ...'
+						'You pass near the room that usually the brunette rents... you''re used by now as she always rents the same room. Maybe she''s some kind of whore that likes to be dominated you wonder as you hear some voices come from the room, someone is definitively in there. You decide to look in and slightly open the door...'
+						'The woman is standing next to a buff young man wearing nothing but a necktie...'
+						'<font color = #DC143C>''He''s probably a stripper man, she probably pays for him, not only being payed for...''</font> is your first thought. But then your attention focus towards something shiny... <font color = #DC143C>''What the hell, are those nipple pincher''s...?''</font>'
 					end
 					
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
@@ -929,9 +959,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 						IgorevnaBDSM += 1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/peeping/14.jpg"></center>'
 						if lariskaMotherKnown = 1:
-							'You try to explain to yourself what are you seeing without results when Anna Igorevna suddenly slaps his face few times...<font color = blue>"You were bad....really really bad."</font> <br>"i-i''m sorry ...i promise..."...<br><font color = blue>"Promise promise...is all that you got?"</font>.... . <br>... <font color = #DC143C>'' ...What the fuck is going there?... ''</font> ... you mumble. Then Anna Igorevna pull the guy''s necktie and start beating his chest with a can... . <br>"i-i''m sorry Mis..." the man continues interrupted by the strokes. <br><font color = blue>"you didn''t do your homework...again! How do you expect to improve your grades? Do you think your smile will be enough? Pull down your boxer and assume the position! Now."</font> She shout.... . <br>... <font color = #DC143C>'' ... Homework? Position? What sick is this? Lariska''s mum haven''t any male child, at least i didn''t know about this... ''</font> ....'
+							'You are having a hard time processing what is happening as Anna suddenly slaps his face few times, "You have been behaving really bad... really really bad."'
+							'"I-I''m sorry... I''ll do better..." the man tries to plead with Anna...'
+							'"All I hear are promises... Is all that I get to hear from you?"'
+							'"What the fuck is going here?" you quietly mumble. Anna continues on by pulling the guy''s necktie and start beating his chest with a cane...'
+							'"I-I''m sorry Mis..." the man gets interrupted by the slaps.'
+							'"You didn''t do your homework... again! How do you expect to improve your grades? Do you think your sweet smile is enough? Pull down your boxers and assume the position! Now!" she shouts.'
 						else
-							'You try to explain to yourself what are you seeing without results when the woman suddenly slaps his face few times...<br><font color = blue>"You were bad....really really bad."</font><br>"i-i''m sorry ...i promise..."...<br><font color = blue>"Promise promise...is all that you got?"</font>.... . <br>... <font color = #DC143C>'' ...What the fuck is going there?... ''</font> ... you mumble. Then the brunette woman pull the guy''s necktie and start beating his chest with a can... . <br>"i-i''m sorry Mis..." the man continues interrupted by the strokes. <br><font color = blue>"you didn''t do your homework...again! How do you expect to improve your grades? Do you think your smile will be enough? Pull down your boxer and assume the position! Now."</font> She shout.... . <br>... <font color = #DC143C>'' ...Homework? Position? What sick is this? Does she teach to her child with beating?... ''</font> ....'						
+							'You are having a hard time processing what is happening as the brunette suddenly slaps his face few times, "You have been behaving really bad... really really bad."'
+							'"I-I''m sorry... I''ll do better..." the man tries to plead with Anna...'
+							'"All I hear are promises... Is all that I get to hear from you?"'
+							'"What the fuck is going here?" you quietly mumble. The woman continues on by pulling the guy''s necktie and start beating his chest with a cane...'
+							'"I-I''m sorry Mis..." the man gets interrupted by the slaps.'
+							'"You didn''t do your homework... again! How do you expect to improve your grades? Do you think your sweet smile is enough? Pull down your boxers and assume the position! Now!" she shouts.'
 						end
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -940,9 +980,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/peeping/15.jpg"></center>'
 							if lariskaMotherKnown = 1:
-								'The young man pull down his boxer and walk to the middle of the room. In the meantime Anna Igorevna start to undress herself, and in no time she''s in her underwear... . You are trying to explain to yourself why Lariska''s mum has only her underwear on when she start to spank his butt with two paddles. Despite the beating the guy stays in his place...his ass is red as a lobster, but he didn''t try to escape the punishment. <font color = blue>"Say you like it...say you did it on purpose."</font> But she left him no time to answer and continues beating. <br><font color = #DC143C>... '' ...He...likes...it?... ''</font> ... you don''t know what to think... . Satisfied with her work she order the guy to lay on the table, then she approach the table and starts to bind him...'
+								'The young man pull down his boxers and steps into the middle of the room. In the meantime Anna starts to undress herself, and in no time she''s in her underwear. Before you know it, she starts to spank his butt with two paddles.'
+								'Despite the beating the guy stays in his place... his ass is getting red as a lobster, but he isn''t trying to escape the punishment.'
+								'"Say you like it... say you did it on purpose." Before he''s able to answer she continues to beat him. Satisfied with her work she commands him to lay on the table, then she approach the table and starts binding him.'
 							else
-								'The young man pull down his boxer and walk to the middle of the room. In the meantime the woman start to undress herself, and in no time she''s in her underwear... . You are trying to explain to yourself why she has only her underwear on when she start to spank his butt with two paddles. Despite the beating the guy stays in his place...his ass is red as a lobster, but he didn''t try to escape the punishment. <font color = blue>"Say you like it...say you did it on purpose."</font> But she left him no time to answer and continues beating. <br><font color = #DC143C>... '' ...He...likes...it?... ''</font> ... you don''t know what to think... . Satisfied with her work she order the guy to lay on the table, then she approach the table and starts to bind him...'								
+								'The young man pull down his boxers and steps into the middle of the room. In the meantime the brunette starts to undress herself, and in no time she''s in her underwear. Before you know it, she starts to spank his butt with two paddles.'
+								'Despite the beating the guy stays in his place... his ass is getting red as a lobster, but he isn''t trying to escape the punishment.'
+								'"Say you like it... say you did it on purpose." Before he''s able to answer she continues to beat him. Satisfied with her work she commands him to lay on the table, then she approach the table and starts binding him.'
 							end
 							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -951,9 +995,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/peeping/16.jpg"></center>'
 								if lariskaMotherKnown = 1:
-									'Anna Igorevna goes sit on a chair and remove her bra. You are starting to think that''s not normal and probably you were wrong, when suddenly she pull out from a dresser a strapon and wear it. She start to tap the man chest again, then she take out a vibrator and put it on her crotch. <font color = blue>"We''ll see if you didn''t do it on purpose."</font> <br>"Y-yes Mistress... "... <br><font color = blue>"Yes what?"</font>. <br>"...N-no Mistress...i''m sorry Mistress...". <br>Ok, you were totally wrong. ... <font color = #DC143C>'' ... ''</font> ... <br>.... "i-i mean thank you Mistress...". With these words Anna Igorevna spit a little on the tip of the strapon, and with a big grin on her face...<br><font color = blue>"Bad news...no lube for bad guys..."</font>... . You cannot believe what you are seeing, if something could be confusing about this woman, that''s probably the most...you are not ready to see this time and you decide to leave althought something in you wants to stay to see what happen to bad guys...'
+									'Anna takes a seat on a chair and all of a sudden pulls out a strap-on from the dresser and puts it on. She start to tap the man chest again, while she starts playing around with a vibrator.'
+									'"We''ll see if you didn''t do it on purpose." she sternly looks at him.'
+									'"Y-yes Mistress..." he mumbles as he knows what is about to happen...'
+									'"Yes what?" she annoyingly yells back.'
+									'"N-no Mistress... I''m sorry Mistress... I-I mean thank you Mistress..." the man struggles to find the correct words...'
+									'Hearing this Anna spits a little on the tip of the strap-on, and with a big grin on her face, "Bad news... no lube for bad behaving slaves..."'
+									'You cannot believe what you are seeing... You are not ready to see this time and you decide to leave although something in you wants to stay to see what happens to bad slaves...'
 								else
-									'The woman goes sit on a chair and remove her bra. You are starting to think that''s not normal and probably you were wrong, when suddenly she pull out from a dresser a strapon and wear it. She start to tap the man chest again, then she take out a vibrator and put it on her crotch. <font color = blue>"We''ll see if you didn''t do it on purpose."</font> <br>"Y-yes Mistress... "... <br><font color = blue>"Yes what?"</font>. <br>"...N-no Mistress...i''m sorry Mistress...". <br>Ok, you were totally wrong... <font color = #DC143C>'' ... ''</font> ... <br>.... "i-i mean thank you Mistress...". With these words the brunette woman spit a little on the tip of the strapon, and with a big grin on her face...<br><font color = blue>"Bad news...no lube for bad guys..."</font>... . You cannot believe what you are seeing, if something could be confusing about this woman, that''s probably the most...you are not ready to see this time and you decide to leave althought something in you wants to stay to see what happen to bad guys...'
+									'The woman takes a seat on a chair and all of a sudden pulls out a strap-on from the dresser and puts it on. She start to tap the man chest again, while she starts playing around with a vibrator.'
+									'"We''ll see if you didn''t do it on purpose." she sternly looks at him.'
+									'"Y-yes Mistress..." he mumbles as he knows what is about to happen...'
+									'"Yes what?" she annoyingly yells back.'
+									'"N-no Mistress... I''m sorry Mistress... I-I mean thank you Mistress..." the man struggles to find the correct words...'
+									'Hearing this she spits a little on the tip of the strap-on, and with a big grin on her face, "Bad news... no lube for bad behaving slaves..."'
+									'You cannot believe what you are seeing... You are not ready to see this time and you decide to leave although something in you wants to stay to see what happens to bad slaves...'
 								end
 								gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -965,7 +1021,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 					end
 				elseif IgorevnaBDSM = 4:					
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/peeping/17.jpg"></center>'
-					'Last time you have passed this door, things turns to be rather unexpected... . You were almost hoping to see something new this time and to catch some other info about this confusing situation, so you decide to go near the door to listen what you can catch. It''s seems two womans were chatting... .... <font color = #DC143C>'' ...Mmmmh ... maybe she has a twin sister that is the same in appearance but the opposite in personality... ''</font> ...you decide to see if you are right so you put your hear on the door. .... <br>"Roll!" You clearly hear what seems to be an order and decide to open slightly the door. You can see two bounded woman. A woman with some kind of mask and a collar is dressed in regular clothes, it seems she''s executing the order and roll on the floor...'
+					'Last time you have passed this door, things turned to something rather unexpected. As you pass by you are hoping to catch something new happening as you''re intrigued to what is happening.'
+					'As you approach the door you hear two woman chatting, "Maybe she has a twin sister that looks as her but has a completely different personality."'
+					'Intrigued, you slightly open the door as you hear someone yell out, "Roll!"'
+					'On the floor you can see two bound woman while a woman is wearing some kind of mask and a collar is dressed in regular clothes, it seems she''s executing the order and rolling on the floor...'
 					
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -975,21 +1034,43 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 						IgorevnaBDSM += 1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/peeping/18.jpg"></center>'
 						if lariskaMotherKnown = 1:
-							'..."See...she obey in everything." ...a woman you have never see continues after the girl performed the order. <br><font color = blue>"She obey in everything too"</font>... . You hear another voice, a familiar one.... <font color = blue>"Take care of our guest!"</font> . The girl with the red gag obey the order. She crawl toward the other girl and start caressing her. You can clearly see now that''s Lariska''s mum who gave the order. <br>You wonder about who''s her guest ... <font color = #DC143C>'' ...So...there are no twin sisters here... ''</font> ... . <br>"I''m not saying you aren''t good in what you do, i''m only saying there''s no need to have different points of view...not to say that this is rather uncommon; it''s not for everybody to change their way with those kind of decision. I think that once you have made your decision you shouldn''t be able to turn back when you want. ..."...the unknow woman continues..."...don''t take me bad...i know you from how many....20-25 years? and you have never disappointed me ... but let me say one thing: you are strange. ...And exceptional...". <br>A little disappointed Anna Igorevna reply: <font color = blue>>"I''ll take it as a compliment El ..."</font>. It seems the two woman know each other since their youth. The girls on the floor continue their duties but you weren''t able to see much more because the unknown woman is near to leaves...'
+							'"See... I told you, she obey''s to whatever you command her." a woman you''ve never seen before says.'
+							'"You''re right..." you hear another voice, a familiar one, "Take care of our guest!"' 
+							'The gagged girl obediently follows the command. She crawls toward the other girl and start caressing her. You finally get a clear view that it''s Anna that''s handing out the commands.'
+							'The unknown woman speaks up, "I''m not saying you aren''t good in what you do, I''m only saying there''s no need to switch back and forth all the time. I''m not saying it''s wrong; but it is a bit odd. I think that once you have made your decision you shouldn''t be able to turn back when you want."'
+							'The woman continues on, "Don''t take it the wrong way, we''ve known each other for a long time and you have never disappointed me... but let me say one thing, you are strange... but at the same time exceptional..."'
+							'Anna, looking a bit disappointed, "I''ll take it as a compliment El..." It seems the two woman know each other since their youth.'
+							'The girls on the floor continue with their duties but before you can get into it you get interrupted as the unknown woman packs her stuff and gets ready to leave...'
 						else
-							'..."See...she obey in everything." ...a woman you have never see continues after the girl performed the order. <br><font color = blue>"She obey in everything too"</font>... . You hear another voice, a familiar one.... <font color = blue>"Take care of our guest!"</font> . The girl with the red gag obey the order. She crawl toward the other girl and start caressing her. You can clearly see now that''s the brunette woman who gave the order. <br>You wonder about who''s her guest ... <font color = #DC143C>'' ...So...there are no twin sisters here... ''</font> ... . <br>"I''m not saying you aren''t good in what you do, i''m only saying there''s no need to have different points of view...not to say that this is rather uncommon; it''s not for everybody to change their way with those kind of decision. I think that once you have made your decision you shouldn''t be able to turn back when you want. ..."...the unknow woman continues..."...don''t take me bad...i know you from how many....20-25 years? and you have never disappointed me ... but let me say one thing: you are strange. ...And exceptional...". <br>A little disappointed the woman you usually see in this room reply: <font color = blue>"I''ll take it as a compliment El ..."</font>. It seems the two woman know each other since their youth. The girls on the floor continue their duties but you weren''t able to see much more because the unknown woman is near to leaves...'
+							'"See... I told you, she obey''s to whatever you command her." a woman you''ve never seen before says.'
+							'"You''re right..." you hear another voice, a familiar one, "Take care of our guest!"' 
+							'The gagged girl obediently follows the command. She crawls toward the other girl and start caressing her. You finally get a clear view that it''s the brunette that''s handing out the commands.'
+							'The unknown woman speaks up, "I''m not saying you aren''t good in what you do, I''m only saying there''s no need to switch back and forth all the time. I''m not saying it''s wrong; but it is a bit odd. I think that once you have made your decision you shouldn''t be able to turn back when you want."'
+							'The woman continues on, "Don''t take it the wrong way, we''ve known each other for a long time and you have never disappointed me... but let me say one thing, you are strange... but at the same time exceptional..."'
+							'The brunette, looking a bit disappointed, "I''ll take it as a compliment El..." It seems the two woman know each other since their youth.'
+							'The girls on the floor continue with their duties but before you can get into it you get interrupted as the unknown woman packs her stuff and gets ready to leave...'
 						end
-						!!the unknow woman is Elektra who pass to visit Lariska''s mum...there''s a check to add if Sveta have met Elektra before... 
+						!!the unknown woman is Elektra who pass to visit Lariska''s mum...there''s a check to add if Sveta have met Elektra before... 
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
 						gs 'stat'
 
-						act 'Keep watching':
+						act 'Keep quiet':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/peeping/19.jpg"></center>'
 							if lariskaMotherKnown = 1:
-								'"Well it''s time to go. You know, i cannot leave my place for more than two hours, ... If Uslada wander around the mansion for more than two hours we''ll find a candy factory!" Both the woman start laughing, then the unknown one pull the leash to rise her girl. <br><font color = blue>"See ... she continues to accomplish my order without a leash..."</font> Anna Igorevna sentences patting her girl''s butt. <br>The unknown woman become serious..."That''s exactly what leads me to our discussion. How are you able to not be influenced by the switch of your status? I can understand some people want to change, and by itself this is a one time thing....but you...you can change easily as day and night. It''s not so simple and you should know it better than anyone, the few people that switch between states spend years to clear their mind, and they fail most of the time... . Tell me the truth: are you sick? do you use some drugs? there shouldn''t be any secrets between us..." She is worried, they seems like real good friends. <br>Lariska''s mum start to laugh <font color = blue>"Ahahah stop it do you want me to wet my panties? let''s say that the weather has its influence..."</font>. <br>"Humpff, as you wish...i really have to go now; tell me when you are on the other side we can spend some "good" time together." <br><font color = blue>"Who know? Maybe you were asking so much because you are curious for yourself..."</font> Anna Igorevna says with a grin on her face. <br>"Sure you found me...see you" the unknown woman reply. The women exchange the welcoming "See you next time." The unknown woman is leaving and you turn back and approach another door to hide from her, it''s better for you to not be seen. She didn''t close the door and curious as you are you decide to look some other times for Anna Igorevna and the girl...'
+								'"Well it''s time for me to leave. You know that I cannot leave my place for more than two hours... If Uslada starts wandering around the mansion alone for more than two hours I''ll come back to a hot mess!" both the woman start laughing, then the unknown woman pulls on the leash of one of the girls, "See how easy it is to control..."'
+								'All of sudden the mood swings and the unknown woman become serious, "That''s exactly what lead me to our discussion. How are you able to not become influenced by switching back and forth? I can understand that some people want to switch it up every once in a while. But you, you switch easily as day and night. It''s not so simple and you should know it better than anyone. Be upfront with me, are you sick? Have you started abusing drugs?"'
+								'Anna begins to laugh, "Don''t be silly! There''s nothing wrong, I just let the weather influence me." she teasingly sticks out her tongue.'
+								'The unknown woman shrugs her shoulders, "If you say so, but I really have to go now, let me know when you are in that mood so we can spend some "good" time together."'
+								'Anna cockily replies back with, "You should try it some time, who knows you might like it."'
+								'The unknown woman approaches the door as you quickly move away and stand in front of a different door, not to be seen. Luckily you notice that she didn''t close the door completely and curiously return back...'
 							else
-								'"Well it''s time to go. You know, i cannot leave my place for more than two hours, ... If Uslada wander around the mansion for more than two hours we''ll find a candy factory!" Both the woman start laughing, then the unknown one pull the leash to rise her girl. <br><font color = blue>"See ... she continues to accomplish my order without a leash..."</font> the brunette woman sentences patting her girl''s butt. <br>The unknown woman become serious... "That''s exactly what leads me to our discussion. How are you able to not be influenced by the switch of your status? I can understand some people want to change, and by itself this is a one time thing....but you...you can change easily as day and night. It''s not so simple and you should know it better than anyone, the few people that switch between states spend years to clear their mind, and they fail most of the time... . Tell me the truth: are you sick? do you use some drugs? there shouldn''t be any secrets between us..." She is worried, they seems like real good friends. <br>The brunette start to laugh <font color = blue>"Ahahah stop it do you want me to wet my panties? let''s say that the weather has its influence..."</font>. <br>"Humpff, as you wish...i really have to go now; tell me when you are on the other side we can spend some "good" time together." <br><font color = blue>"Who know? Maybe you were asking so much because you are curious for yourself..."</font> The brunette woman says with a grin on her face. <br>"Sure you found me...see you" the unknown woman reply. The women exchange the welcoming "See you next time." The unknown woman is leaving and you turn back and approach another door to hide from her, it''s better for you to not be seen. She didn''t close the door and curious as you are you decide to look some other times for the brunette and the girl...'
+								'"Well it''s time for me to leave. You know that I cannot leave my place for more than two hours... If Uslada starts wandering around the mansion alone for more than two hours I''ll come back to a hot mess!" both the woman start laughing, then the unknown woman pulls on the leash of one of the girls, "See how easy it is to control..."'
+								'All of sudden the mood swings and the unknown woman become serious, "That''s exactly what lead me to our discussion. How are you able to not become influenced by switching back and forth? I can understand that some people want to switch it up every once in a while. But you, you switch easily as day and night. It''s not so simple and you should know it better than anyone. Be upfront with me, are you sick? Have you started abusing drugs?"'
+								'The brunette begins to laugh, "Don''t be silly! There''s nothing wrong, I just let the weather influence me." she teasingly sticks out her tongue.'
+								'The unknown woman shrugs her shoulders, "If you say so, but I really have to go now, let me know when you are in that mood so we can spend some "good" time together."'
+								'The brunette cockily replies back with, "You should try it some time, who knows you might like it."'
+								'The unknown woman approaches the door as you quickly move away and stand in front of a different door, not to be seen. Luckily you notice that she didn''t close the door completely and curiously return back...'
 							end
 							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -998,21 +1079,34 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/peeping/20.jpg"></center>'
 								if lariskaMotherKnown = 1:
-									'You turn around and go back near the room. Lariska''s mother is sitting in the chair while she pat the girl''s butt. <font color = blue>"You are a good girl you know? I''ll let you choose: pain or pleasure? But first i think we have to introduce our guest don''t you agree?"</font>. <br>... <font color = #DC143C>'' ...Guest? What is she talking about?... ''</font> ... Suddenly Anna Igorevna rise herself and move toward the main door...you have to hide.'
+									'You turn around and go back. Anna is sitting in the chair as she''s slapping the girl''s butt, "You are a good girl you know? I''m in a good mood today so I''ll let you choose, pain or pleasure? But before that I think we should say hello to our guest, don''t you agree?"'
+									'Caught, you start to panic as Anna pushes away the girl and starts walking toward the door...'
 								else
-									'You turn around and go back near the room. The brunette sado-woman is sitting in the chair while she pat the girl''s butt. <font color = blue>"You are a good girl you know? I''ll let you choose: pain or pleasure? But first i think we have to introduce our guest don''t you agree?"</font>. <br>... <font color = #DC143C>'' ...Guest? What is she talking about?... ''</font> ... Suddenly she rise herself and move toward the main door...you have to hide.'
+									'You turn around and go back. The brunette is sitting in the chair as she''s slapping the girl''s butt, "You are a good girl you know? I''m in a good mood today so I''ll let you choose, pain or pleasure? But before that I think we should say hello to our guest, don''t you agree?"'
+									'Caught, you start to panic as she pushes away the girl and starts walking toward the door...'
 								end
-								gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
 
-								act 'Leave':
+								act 'Run away':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/peeping/a.jpg"></center>'
 									if lariskaMotherKnown = 1:
-										'You weren''t fast enough...<font color = blue>"Catch you <<pcs_nickname>>!"</font> You are quite embarassed, she found you spying on her! <font color = blue>"Did you like the show?"</font>...You weren''t able to speak, she found you spying, and with one word she can get you kicked out... you stay silent. <font color = blue>"Come on i''m not angry. I know you were spying on me and this is not the first time."</font> <br>... <font color = #DC143C>'' ...Fucked up. I''m totally fucked up. But she said she''s not angry... ''</font> ... you quickly try to think to some excuse you can say.... . <font color = #DC143C>"I-i.."</font> you stammer. <br><font color = blue>"I see. You are worried about your work. Let''s go through this: i''ll do nothing. I usually encourage to be curious, and so this time. Say: would you like to know something about the thing you may have seen?"</font> You do not dare to rise your head but only your eyes... . <font color = blue>"Let''s do in this way. Come here at the hotel in this room, at 20:00 on (monday, tuesday...sunday pick one or two) if you want; we can talk free."</font> You quickly nod not wanting to push your luck. <font color = blue>"I''m sure we''ll have a lot of arguments to talk about. As you have noticed, i have something to settle. Feel free to pass when you want, there are no commitments. Now, if you excuse me..."</font> She close the door with pics(the pics "do not disturb") and key this time, leaving you freezed on your place; maybe you''ve been able to avoid a big mess. You are not sure of her words and their meaning, you can visit her when you want she said. You can try to go to see if she really is willing to not report you on one side...on the other side you have no idea on where this whole thing can leads you..'
+										'You weren''t fast enough, "Got you <<pcs_nickname>>!" You are quite embarrassed, as you were found out, "Did you like the show?" Anna asks.'
+										'Not able to say anything to your defense, and being afraid she might get you fired, you remain silent.'
+										'"Come on, cheer up, I''m not angry. I know you have been spying on me for some time" Anna smiles.'
+										'You quickly try to come up with an excuse, "I-I..." you stammer.'
+										'Anna looks at you, "I see. You are worried about your work. Don''t worry I won''t tattle on you. Let us agree on something, if you want to talk come and visit me in this room, at 20:00."'
+										'You quickly nod not wanting to push your luck. "I''m sure we''ll have a lot to discuss. As you may have noticed I need to head back to business. Feel free to visit whenever you want, I''ll be here. Now, if you excuse me..." she closes the door and locks it.'
+										'You are not sure what to make of it, you can visit her whenever you want. But does she have any ulterior motives...'
 									else
-										'You weren''t fast enough...<font color = blue>"Catch you!"</font> You are quite embarassed, she found you spying on her! <font color = blue>"Did you like the show?"</font>...You weren''t able to speak, she found you spying, and with one word she can get you kicked out... you stay silent. <font color = blue>"Come on i''m not angry. I know you were spying on me and this is not the first time."</font> <br>... <font color = #DC143C>'' ...Fucked up. I''m totally fucked up. But she said she''s not angry... ''</font> ... you quickly try to think to some excuse you can say.... . <font color = #DC143C>"I-i.."</font> you stammer. <br><font color = blue>"I see. You are worried about your work. Let''s go through this: i''ll do nothing. I usually encourage to be curious, and so this time. Say: would you like to know something about the thing you may have seen?"</font> You do not dare to rise your head but only your eyes... . <font color = blue>"Let''s do in this way. Come here at the hotel in this room, at 20:00 on (monday, tuesday...sunday pick one or two) if you want; we can talk free."</font> You quickly nod not wanting to push your luck. <font color = blue>"I''m sure we''ll have a lot of arguments to talk about. As you have noticed, i have something to settle. Feel free to pass when you want, there are no commitments. Now, if you excuse me..."</font> She close the door with pics(the pics "do not disturb") and key this time, leaving you freezed on your place; maybe you''ve been able to avoid a big mess. You are not sure of her words and their meaning, you can visit her when you want she said. You can try to go to see if she really is willing to not report you on one side...on the other side you have no idea on where this whole thing can leads you..'
+										'You weren''t fast enough, "Got you!" You are quite embarrassed, as you were found out, "Did you like the show?" the brunette asks.'
+										'Not able to say anything to your defense, and being afraid she might get you fired, you remain silent.'
+										'"Come on, cheer up, I''m not angry. I know you have been spying on me for some time" she smiles.'
+										'You quickly try to come up with an excuse, "I-I..." you stammer.'
+										'The brunette looks at you, "I see. You are worried about your work. Don''t worry I won''t tattle on you. Let us agree on something, if you want to talk come and visit me in this room, at 20:00."'
+										'You quickly nod not wanting to push your luck. "I''m sure we''ll have a lot to discuss. As you may have noticed I need to head back to business. Feel free to visit whenever you want, I''ll be here. Now, if you excuse me..." she closes the door and locks it.'
+										'You are not sure what to make of it, you can visit her whenever you want. But does she have any ulterior motives...'
 									end	
 									gs 'stat'
 

+ 2 - 2
locations/IgorEv.qsrc

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 menu_off = 1
 !!Igor = A4
 
-!!It starts off by talking to Igor at school and there will be a option where he is aceing history and Sveta is not as good as she wants to be. No mention of grades just she is doing worse class than he is. She can then ask if they can study together. This leads to them going to Igor's house to study and talk. From there two things can happen, each is it's own story that links back up later on.
+!!It starts off by talking to Igor at school and there will be an option where he is aceing history and Sveta is not as good as she wants to be. No mention of grades just she is doing worse class than he is. She can then ask if they can study together. This leads to them going to Igor's house to study and talk. From there two things can happen, each is it's own story that links back up later on.
 
 !!1) Friendship gets high enough and Igor asks Sveta out on a date.
 !!2) Friend Sveta catches him cross dressing.
@@ -846,7 +846,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught':
 			'You give him a reassuring hug. "I would never do that to you, I promise I won''t tell a soul."'
 			'He lets out the breath he was holding and relaxes a bit as he hugs you back. "Thank you, I am so relieved to hear you say that."'
 			'You smile to him a bit. "Actually it is kinda sexy, but I am curious. Why do you do it? I mean if you are so worried about anyone knowing, why do it at all?"'
-			'He is silent for a moment and then shrugs. "I don''t really know, one day I was home alone and bored. I went into my sisters room and seen all those clothes and I suddenly had a urge to try them on. So I did and it felt great. I guess I have always been curious what it would be like to be a girl."'
+			'He is silent for a moment and then shrugs. "I don''t really know, one day I was home alone and bored. I went into my sisters room and seen all those clothes and I suddenly had an urge to try them on. So I did and it felt great. I guess I have always been curious what it would be like to be a girl."'
 			'Nodding a bit you reply to him. "I can see that, we are all trying to figure out who we are going to be.'
 			'He offers a faint smile. "Yeah, I guess I just wish I was a girl instead."'
 			act 'Let''s study':

+ 1 - 1
locations/KGOLexpa.qsrc

@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ $KGOLatkV = {
 		if KGOLatakaV >= KGOLzas * 2:
 			KGHPnpow = rand(KGOLpowerV / 2, KGOLpowerV)
 			KGHP -= KGHPnpow
-			'<font color="red">You recieve <<KGHPnpow>> damage</font>'
+			'<font color="red">You receive <<KGHPnpow>> damage</font>'
 		else
 			KGHPnpow = rand(KGOLpowerV/10, KGOLpowerV / 4)
 			KGHPntpow = KGHPnpow - KGOLbrona

+ 1 - 1
locations/Katja_Tanga.qsrc

@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'secretroom':
 						gs'stat'
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/school/tanga4_9.jpg"></center>'
-						'Katja, begins moaning louder and bucking her hips against your fingers. You pull the dildo out of her mouth and your fingers out of her twat. You roll her over onto her stomach, as you slide down till your face is over her ass as you slip the wet dildo into her soaking wet pussy and begin to stroke the dildo deeply in her pussy. With your other hand you pull her ass cheeks apart and being to lick her asshole. Stroking the dildo as deep into her as it will go, she moans with pleasure getting ever louder. She beings to arch her hips up trying to take even more of the dildo into herself, but there is no more to give her. Instead you stick your tongue in her ass and begin to tongue fuck her ass. This brings even louder moans and before long she starts bucking her hips as her body spasms in a intense orgasm, as she cums.'
+						'Katja, begins moaning louder and bucking her hips against your fingers. You pull the dildo out of her mouth and your fingers out of her twat. You roll her over onto her stomach, as you slide down till your face is over her ass as you slip the wet dildo into her soaking wet pussy and begin to stroke the dildo deeply in her pussy. With your other hand you pull her ass cheeks apart and being to lick her asshole. Stroking the dildo as deep into her as it will go, she moans with pleasure getting ever louder. She beings to arch her hips up trying to take even more of the dildo into herself, but there is no more to give her. Instead you stick your tongue in her ass and begin to tongue fuck her ass. This brings even louder moans and before long she starts bucking her hips as her body spasms in an intense orgasm, as she cums.'
 						act'Use dildo':
 							*clr & cla
 							pcs_horny = 0

+ 2 - 2
locations/Kikatak.qsrc

@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'enemy':
 		damage += damageKrit
 		pcs_health -= damage
 		pointKikV += 1
-		'<font color="red">You have recieved <<damage>> points of damage.</font>'
+		'<font color="red">You have received <<damage>> points of damage.</font>'
 
 		if damage >= pcs_health * 20 / 100:
 			pointKikV += 1
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'enemy':
 		'<font color="red">You''ve gotten hit.</font>'
 		pcs_health -= damage
 		pointKikV += 1
-		'<font color="red">You have recieved <<damage>> points of damage.</font>'
+		'<font color="red">You have received <<damage>> points of damage.</font>'
 
 		if damage >= pcs_health * 20 / 100:
 			pointKikV += 1

+ 2 - 2
locations/LCwork.qsrc

@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start4':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/bbq/sex/couple.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you walk up to the couple, you remember them from before. The guy grins at you and the girl smiles. "Told you we would be back, are you ready to go?"'
 		'They live in the residential area of the city, and it''s a short drive there. You remember it form last time, they inform you, she is ready to try anal, but wants you to coach her through it and get her ready.'
-		'Once inside he watches the two of you have fun. He waits until you bring his girlfriend to a orgasm.'
+		'Once inside he watches the two of you have fun. He waits until you bring his girlfriend to an orgasm.'
 	
 		gs 'arousal', 'give_cuni', 60, 'sub', 'prostitution', 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start5':
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_finger', 90, 'sub', 'prostitution', 'lesbian'
 	minut -= 90 
 	
-	if horand <= pcs_horny:Set pcs_horny = 0 & orgasm += 2 & 'Even though the girl had no prior experience with women, she touches you in all the right places and you reach a orgasm more than once during your session.'
+	if horand <= pcs_horny:Set pcs_horny = 0 & orgasm += 2 & 'Even though the girl had no prior experience with women, she touches you in all the right places and you reach an orgasm more than once during your session.'
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	if horand > pcs_horny:Set pcs_horny += 10 & 'You mostly focus on making this a pleasurable experience for her, and don''t orgasm yourself. That''s fine, though... the ecstatic look in her eyes when you gave her the third orgasm of the evening more than makes up for it!'
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/MDining.qsrc

@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ elseif rand (0,100) < 3:
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/tablepussy1.jpg"></center>'
 	end
-	'A naked woman sits on the end of the table with her feet on it and her legs spread wide. A middle aged couple stand in front of her, the woman pointing at varies parts of the naked womans pussy, apparently giving her husband a anatomy lesson on pussies and the proper way to pleasure them.'
+	'A naked woman sits on the end of the table with her feet on it and her legs spread wide. A middle aged couple stand in front of her, the woman pointing at varies parts of the naked womans pussy, apparently giving her husband an anatomy lesson on pussies and the proper way to pleasure them.'
 	act 'Return':gt 'MDining'
 elseif rand (0,100) < 3:
 	menu_off = 1

+ 17 - 19
locations/MEastbed.qsrc

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guestB':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/bedb.jpg"></center>'
 	'Guest bedroom B'
-	act 'Go to the east wing landing':gt 'MLanding', 'east'
+	act 'Go to the east wing landing': gt 'MLanding', 'east'
 	if rand (0,100) < 3:
 		menu_off = 1
 		*clr & cla
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guestB':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/mis_1.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'A well dressed women is very much enjoying giving a blowjob, she must be a switch.'
+		'A well dressed woman is very much enjoying giving a blowjob, she must be a sub.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -48,8 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guestB':
 		act 'Return':gt 'MEastbed', 'guestB'
 		if $BDSMrole = 's':
 			act 'Join them':
-				cla
-				*clr
+				*clr & cla
 				gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'pcs_dom from the Club', rand(18,45)
 				gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 				sexpartkno = 1
@@ -100,8 +99,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guestC':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/bedmff.jpg"></center>'
-				'As you watch the man notices you and motions you over, obeying you walk over to him. He keeps fucking the woman on the bed he says."Straddle her face and look at me."'
-				'You do as you was told and the womans tongue plunges into your pussy at once as she starts tongue fucking you. The man pulls you forward and kisses you as he keeps fucking the other woman.'
+				'As you watch the man notices you and motions you over. Obeying you walk over to him. While he keeps fucking the woman on the bed he says. "Straddle her face and look at me."'
+				'You do as you are told and the woman''s tongue plunges into your pussy at once as she starts tongue fucking you. The man pulls you forward and kisses you as he keeps fucking the other woman.'
 				'You orgasm before he does and when he does, he does deep inside or her. Once finished they get dressed.'
 				
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
@@ -129,7 +128,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guestC':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/maid_pun1.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'A submissive women has been tied and gagged with a body massager strapped to her pussy. Poor thing, hopefully someone will let her go soon.'
+		'A submissive woman has been tied and gagged with a body massager strapped to her pussy. Poor thing, hopefully someone will let her go soon.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -168,28 +167,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guestD':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/bedrand6.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'A submissive women is tied up and gagged, her domme is fucking her with a strap-on.'
+		'A submissive woman is tied up and gagged, her domme is fucking her with a strap-on.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		
 		act 'Return':gt 'MEastbed', 'guestD'
 		if $BDSMrole = 's':
-			act 'watch':
-				cla
-				*clr
+			act 'Watch':
+				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/bedrand6.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You keep watching them, at the rough treatment the sub occasionally cries out through the gag, which only seems to annoy her dom, which gives her a smack each time and tell her to take it like a good whore.'
-				'Noticing you the dom turns and pulls out of her sub. "You come over here and show my worthless sub how to take it like a good whore."'
+				'You keep watching them. At the rough treatment the sub occasionally cries out through the gag. Which only seems to annoy her domme, who gives her a smack each time and tell her to take it like a good whore.'
+				'Noticing you the domme turns and pulls out of her sub. "You come over here and show my worthless sub how to take it like a good whore."'
 
-				act 'obey':
+				act 'Obey':
 					*clr & cla
 					pcs_ass += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/fffdomstrap.jpg"></center>'
-					'You undress and walk over to her as she unties her sub. As you get to the bed she grabs you and pushes you down face first on the bed. She crawls up on top of you and rubs the strap-on against your asshole.'
-					'With only the lube from her subs pussy juices she shoves it in your ass, sliding it balls deep in you, then she starts to furiously fuck you as she tells her sub this is how she should take it.'
-					'After a long time she beings to pant and sweat from her efforts in fucking you. Finally rolling off you to take a break, she looks at you. "You may go." You get up and get dressed leaving them still in the room.'
+					'You undress and walk over to her while she unties her sub. As you get to the bed she grabs you and pushes you down face first on the bed. She crawls up on top of you and rubs the strap-on against your asshole.'
+					'With only the lube from her subs pussy juices she shoves it in your ass, sliding it balls deep in you. Then she starts to furiously fuck you as she tells her sub this is how she should take it.'
+					'After a long time she beings to pant and sweat from her efforts in fucking you. Finally rolling off you to take a break, she looks at you. "You may go." You get up and get dressed leaving them in the room.'
 					
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'rough'
@@ -205,7 +203,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guestD':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/maid_pun2.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'A submissive women appears to have broken the dress code and is being punished.'
+		'A submissive woman appears to have broken the dress code and is being punished.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -217,7 +215,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guestD':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/maid_b7.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'A submissive women is having her face fucked by a dom in a suit.'
+		'A submissive woman is having her face fucked by a dom in a suit.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'

+ 1 - 1
locations/MartinSex2.qsrc

@@ -505,7 +505,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinSexDyn':
 					'"Shit, I think the condom broke," Martin curses under his breath.' 
 					'"Don''t worry," you say with a comforting smile, "I''m on the pill."'
 				elseif sexcontra = 5 and preziktype = 0 and tabletkishot < 1 and pillcon2 < 30000: 
-					'"Shit, I think the condom slipped off," Martin curses under his breath. A shiver runs through you as you realize that you have a used condom stuck inside you and could just have been impregnated after all.'
+					'"Shit, I think the condom slipped off," Martin curses under his breath. A shiver runs through you as you realize that you have an used condom stuck inside you and could just have been impregnated after all.'
 				elseif sexcontra = 5 and preziktype = 0: 
 					'"Shit, I think the condom slipped off," Martin curses under his breath.' 
 					'"Don''t worry," you say with a comforting smile, "I''m on the pill." <<$OpenInnerThought>>Still need to get that condom out of my vagina though,<<$CloseInnerThought>> you think to yourself.'

+ 10 - 10
locations/NikoDates.qsrc

@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 1_2':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/charmer1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You both end up behind a out of order ride. Niko brings his face close to yours. "You promised to do me a favor, now may I please gaze upon your nude body?" You reply, "You want me to strip, here?" Niko holds your arms as he replies, "Yes I would and don''t worry no one will see us here."'
+			'You both end up behind an out of order ride. Niko brings his face close to yours. "You promised to do me a favor, now may I please gaze upon your nude body?" You reply, "You want me to strip, here?" Niko holds your arms as he replies, "Yes I would and don''t worry no one will see us here."'
 
 			act 'Strip':
 				cls
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 1_2':
 							minut += 5
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/1/nude/pose3.jpg"></center>'
-							'You catch the bear then hold it to your chest as you give Niko a innocent smile. You can feel your heart beat slowing down as you begin feeling more comfortable, and less nervous. Niko begins fidgeting, as you drop to your knees in multiple poses. The stuffed bear slips out of your hand, causing you to lean over to pick it up. You pick up the bear then look up to see Niko standing directly in front of you with a lustful gaze, as he unbuttons his pants, causing you to gasp which opens you mouth just enough for his dick to slide in.'
+							'You catch the bear then hold it to your chest as you give Niko an innocent smile. You can feel your heart beat slowing down as you begin feeling more comfortable, and less nervous. Niko begins fidgeting, as you drop to your knees in multiple poses. The stuffed bear slips out of your hand, causing you to lean over to pick it up. You pick up the bear then look up to see Niko standing directly in front of you with a lustful gaze, as he unbuttons his pants, causing you to gasp which opens you mouth just enough for his dick to slide in.'
 							*nl
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/1/nude/pose4.jpg"></center>'
 							gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 5, 'sub'
@@ -216,7 +216,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 1_2':
 						minut += 5
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad2.jpg"></center>'
-						'"I trust you but I...I just can''t." Niko gives you a exaggerated frown as re responds, "You have such a beautiful body, and I just want you to feel more confident with your body." You lower your head as you respond, "I don''t quite have that confidence...yet." Niko smiles as he says, "We could work on that if you like." You reply, "Maybe but not today." Niko responds, "Fair enough. Let''s get you home." Niko helps you get dressed then takes your hand, and walks you toward the train station.'
+						'"I trust you but I...I just can''t." Niko gives you an exaggerated frown as re responds, "You have such a beautiful body, and I just want you to feel more confident with your body." You lower your head as you respond, "I don''t quite have that confidence...yet." Niko smiles as he says, "We could work on that if you like." You reply, "Maybe but not today." Niko responds, "Fair enough. Let''s get you home." Niko helps you get dressed then takes your hand, and walks you toward the train station.'
 
 						act 'Follow Niko':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoDates', 'Home 1'
 					end
@@ -313,7 +313,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 2':
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff00cc><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 					*pl '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-					'You gve Niko a innocent smile as you nod your head. Niko rubs on your cheek as he says, "That''s my girl. I knew that I made the right choice with you." You reach into Niko''s pants then wrap your fingers around his penis, gripping it firmly before pulling it out of his pants then gently licking the tip. Niko continues rubbing on your cheek while giving you an adoring smile.'
+					'You gve Niko an innocent smile as you nod your head. Niko rubs on your cheek as he says, "That''s my girl. I knew that I made the right choice with you." You reach into Niko''s pants then wrap your fingers around his penis, gripping it firmly before pulling it out of his pants then gently licking the tip. Niko continues rubbing on your cheek while giving you an adoring smile.'
 					*nl
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/2/boat/boat3.jpg"></center>'
 
@@ -324,7 +324,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 2':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/2/boat/boat4.jpg"></center>'
 						'You wrap your lips around Niko''s dick, taking as much of it inside your mouth, as you can before licking and sucking the shaft. Niko begins lightly moaning while keeping his eyes on you, making you feel very sexy. You begin thinking to yourself, <font color=#FF00FF>Those eyes of his. He makes me feel so sexy. I must not disappoint him. I will please you Niko, and you will know that I am the right one for you.</font> Niko''s eyes suddenly begin squinting as he groans, filling your mouth with his warm seed. You try your best to swallow it, but with the rocking boat, and your poor position on the seat, some of it leaks out of your mouth, and onto the floor of the boat.'
 						*nl
-						'Niko pats your head gently before saying, "You were outstanding <<$pcs_firstname>>. Thank you. You are one sexy girl." You give Niko a innocent smile, as he lays back then wraps his arms around you. You both spend the next two hours chatting about your past experiences.'
+						'Niko pats your head gently before saying, "You were outstanding <<$pcs_firstname>>. Thank you. You are one sexy girl." You give Niko an innocent smile, as he lays back then wraps his arms around you. You both spend the next two hours chatting about your past experiences.'
 						*nl
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/2/boat/boat5.jpg"></center>'
 
@@ -618,7 +618,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 3':
 										minut += 5
 										gs'stat'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/3/d10.jpg"></center>'
-										'Niko recieves the ice cream cones then hands you one before saying, "You''re smoking hot <<$pcs_nickname>>, maybe this will cool you down a bit." You giggle as you take the ice cream then reply, "Well I always feel hot when you are around." Niko gives you a very pleased smile, as he responds, "How about we head back to my place for some more alone time?" You give Niko a seductive grin, as you reply, "Sounds like fun." Niko responds, "Oh we''ll have a lot of fun. Let''s go." You and Niko then head toward Niko''s home while chatting about various topics along the way.'
+										'Niko receives the ice cream cones then hands you one before saying, "You''re smoking hot <<$pcs_nickname>>, maybe this will cool you down a bit." You giggle as you take the ice cream then reply, "Well I always feel hot when you are around." Niko gives you a very pleased smile, as he responds, "How about we head back to my place for some more alone time?" You give Niko a seductive grin, as you reply, "Sounds like fun." Niko responds, "Oh we''ll have a lot of fun. Let''s go." You and Niko then head toward Niko''s home while chatting about various topics along the way.'
 										*nl
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/3/d11.jpg"></center>'
 
@@ -1377,7 +1377,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 										if pcs_apprnc >= 20:
 											'Vitek: That sounds like a great idea. <<$pcs_firstname>> is much hotter than Sonia anyway. Let''s do it. Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>, you''re coming with us.'
 										else
-											'Vitek: That sounds like a great idea. <<$pcs_firstname>> looks like a overgrown pig, but we can always fuck her from behind. Alright let''s do it. Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>, you''re coming with us.'
+											'Vitek: That sounds like a great idea. <<$pcs_firstname>> looks like an overgrown pig, but we can always fuck her from behind. Alright let''s do it. Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>, you''re coming with us.'
 										end
 									end
 									*nl
@@ -1578,7 +1578,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Exposed':
 					cls
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/hall3.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You wrap your lips around the first dick you see then use your hands to jerk off the other jocks. The jock that you are sucking begins rubbing your hair off of your face as he says, "That''s a good girl. Just like that." You look up to see Ivan Prokhorov, giving you a approving smile. You can hear some of the other jocks talking about you.'
+					'You wrap your lips around the first dick you see then use your hands to jerk off the other jocks. The jock that you are sucking begins rubbing your hair off of your face as he says, "That''s a good girl. Just like that." You look up to see Ivan Prokhorov, giving you an approving smile. You can hear some of the other jocks talking about you.'
 					*nl
 					'Lazar: I never thought that <<$pcs_nickname>> would end up being a whore, did you?'
 					'Fedor: No I always thought of her as a sweet girl, you know, one of the good ones.'
@@ -1804,7 +1804,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
 									'You lower your posture as you reply, "Alright, what do I have to lose? I doubt anything could get any worst." Niko wraps his arms around you then brings his face to yours before responding, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. That attitude won''t solve anything. Meet me after school then we will work on fixing your reputation. You can trust me, and try to cheer up." You nod your head while giving Niko a warm smile. <font color=#FF00FF>I don''t know how, but I know that Niko will find a way to help me. Niko loves me as much as I do him. I know in my heart that he will always protect me.</font> You lean forward then give Niko a passionate kiss.'
 									*nl
-									'After the kiss, Niko says, "You are such a incredible girl. I always feel so lucky to have you, now don''t forget to meet me after school. I will be waiting in the courtyard." You nod your head, as Niko turns around then walks out of the restroom. You quickly get dressed then follow him out.'
+									'After the kiss, Niko says, "You are such an incredible girl. I always feel so lucky to have you, now don''t forget to meet me after school. I will be waiting in the courtyard." You nod your head, as Niko turns around then walks out of the restroom. You quickly get dressed then follow him out.'
 
 									act 'Go to class':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 								end
@@ -1880,7 +1880,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame 2':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
 			'You lower your posture as you reply, "Alright, what do I have to lose? I doubt anything could get any worst." Niko wraps his arms around you then brings his face to yours before responding, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. That attitude won''t solve anything. Meet me after school then we will work on fixing your reputation, trust me, and try to cheer up." You nod your head while giving Niko a warm smile. <font color=#FF00FF>I don''t know how, but I know that Niko will find a way to help me. Niko loves me as much as I do him. I know in my heart that he will always protect me.</font> You lean forward then give Niko a passionate kiss.'
 			*nl
-			'After the kiss, Niko says, "You are such a incredible girl. I always feel so lucky to have you, now don''t forget to meet me after school. I will be waiting in the courtyard." You nod, as Niko turns around then walks away. You quickly get dressed then follow him to the hallway.'
+			'After the kiss, Niko says, "You are such an incredible girl. I always feel so lucky to have you, now don''t forget to meet me after school. I will be waiting in the courtyard." You nod, as Niko turns around then walks away. You quickly get dressed then follow him to the hallway.'
 
 			act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end

+ 1 - 1
locations/NikoDreams.qsrc

@@ -286,7 +286,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Woods Home':
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Happy Home">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/nightmares/happyhome/mansion/happyhome.jpg"></center>'
 	if VKTeeHee = 0:
-		'You finally approach the end of the forest when you see a old derelict mansion. As you walk toward the mansion, you can see; what appears to be a woman standing in the middle of the path, leading to the house. She appears to be crying with some kind of dark essence surrounding her. <font color=#FF00FF>She must be stranded here like me. Maybe I can help her.</font> you suddenly feel a cold chill down your spine before seeing a strange looking <a href="exec:gt ''NikoDreams'', ''TeeHee''">cat</a> on a tree stump, licking its paw.'
+		'You finally approach the end of the forest when you see an old derelict mansion. As you walk toward the mansion, you can see; what appears to be a woman standing in the middle of the path, leading to the house. She appears to be crying with some kind of dark essence surrounding her. <font color=#FF00FF>She must be stranded here like me. Maybe I can help her.</font> you suddenly feel a cold chill down your spine before seeing a strange looking <a href="exec:gt ''NikoDreams'', ''TeeHee''">cat</a> on a tree stump, licking its paw.'
 	else
 		'There is an old derelict mansion in the distance, but the path to the mansion is blocked by a crying woman with a dark essence surrounding her. <a href="exec:gt ''NikoDreams'', ''TeeHee''">TeeHee</a> continuously rubs against your leg while purring softly, obviously wanting your attention.'
 	end

+ 1 - 1
locations/NikoEv.qsrc

@@ -735,7 +735,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Fyodor':
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/head/5.jpg"></center>'
 		'You turn to see Fedor with a concerned look on his face. "<<$pcs_firstname>> what are doing over here with him? You should be careful hanging around guys like him. He is no good for you." Niko just stares on in silence with an annoyed look on his face. You turn to Fedor and say, "Don''t worry Fedor it''s not what it looks like. Niko was just..." Niko quickly continues your sentence. "<<$pcs_firstname>>''s father is planing on buying one of my brothers old bikes, so she came to me to discuss the details. That''s all." Fedor gives Niko a blank stare. "I''ve seen your brother before and I don''t think that <<$pcs_firstname>> should be dealing with him or you." Niko shrugs as he replies, "Well that''s <<$pcs_firstname>>''s call, not yours." Fedor walks right up to Niko then clenches his fists. "Well no one asked for your input."' 
-		'Niko doesn''t seem worried as he casually leans against the wall. "No need to get violent. I''m sure <<$pcs_firstname>> doesn''t want us fighting in front of her for no reason. That would be really rude of us, wouldn''t it?" Fedor looks back to you with a embarrassed look on his face. "Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>> I hope I''m not making you uncomfortable. Just be careful with this one okay?" You give Fedor a nod and a smile as he turns around then walks away.'		
+		'Niko doesn''t seem worried as he casually leans against the wall. "No need to get violent. I''m sure <<$pcs_firstname>> doesn''t want us fighting in front of her for no reason. That would be really rude of us, wouldn''t it?" Fedor looks back to you with an embarrassed look on his face. "Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>> I hope I''m not making you uncomfortable. Just be careful with this one okay?" You give Fedor a nod and a smile as he turns around then walks away.'		
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/niko4.jpg"></center>'		
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/NikoPayback.qsrc

@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Payback':
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile'+rand(2,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-						'You hand Niko 200 <b>₽</b>, and Niko counts it before giving you a approving nod, "Excellent, See you tomorrow <<$pcs_nickname>>, and don''t try to avoid me, or things will end badly, for you." Niko puts the money in his pocket then walks away. You take a minute to get dressed then try to regain your composure before leaving the restroom.'
+						'You hand Niko 200 <b>₽</b>, and Niko counts it before giving you an approving nod, "Excellent, See you tomorrow <<$pcs_nickname>>, and don''t try to avoid me, or things will end badly, for you." Niko puts the money in his pocket then walks away. You take a minute to get dressed then try to regain your composure before leaving the restroom.'
 
 						act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 					end

+ 2 - 2
locations/NikoSlut.qsrc

@@ -831,7 +831,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 7':
 				cls
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/7/bj2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You begin sucking his dick at a increased pace, causing the man to let out occasional grunts. After a few more seconds, the man groans, as his hard cock begins throbbing in your mouth, filling your throat with his warm seed which you do your best to swallow every drop of. After the man finishes, he buttons his pants then reaches into his pocket, pulling out his wallet then placing some money in your pocket. "Here is a little tip for you. Buy yourself something nice." You give him a smile as you respond, "Thank you so much." He gives you a wink before escorting you out of the back room.'
+				'You begin sucking his dick at an increased pace, causing the man to let out occasional grunts. After a few more seconds, the man groans, as his hard cock begins throbbing in your mouth, filling your throat with his warm seed which you do your best to swallow every drop of. After the man finishes, he buttons his pants then reaches into his pocket, pulling out his wallet then placing some money in your pocket. "Here is a little tip for you. Buy yourself something nice." You give him a smile as you respond, "Thank you so much." He gives you a wink before escorting you out of the back room.'
 				*nl
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'				
 				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', 'Trucker'
@@ -846,7 +846,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 7':
 				cls
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/7/bj2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You begin sucking his dick at a increased pace, causing the man to let out occasional grunts. After a few more seconds, the man groans, as his hard cock begins throbbing in your mouth, filling your throat with his warm seed which you do your best to block from sliding down then spit into the garbage. After the man finishes, he buttons his pants then says, "You must really hate the taste huh? You did a good job, Thank you <<$NikoSlutName>>. Now let''s get you back to your pimp." He then escorts you out of the back room.'
+				'You begin sucking his dick at an increased pace, causing the man to let out occasional grunts. After a few more seconds, the man groans, as his hard cock begins throbbing in your mouth, filling your throat with his warm seed which you do your best to block from sliding down then spit into the garbage. After the man finishes, he buttons his pants then says, "You must really hate the taste huh? You did a good job, Thank you <<$NikoSlutName>>. Now let''s get you back to your pimp." He then escorts you out of the back room.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'				
 				gs 'stat'		

+ 1 - 1
locations/Snpc.qsrc

@@ -511,7 +511,7 @@ if numnpc = 14:
 	end
 
 	if (npc_rel[$static_num] > 60) and (KatjaOTN > 0) and (KatjaLust > 15) :
-		!!new Katja stuff not sure where you want to put it. It should be a option when you talk to her at school or the dance where it says Chat, but add this as a option.
+		!!new Katja stuff not sure where you want to put it. It should be an option when you talk to her at school or the dance where it says Chat, but add this as an option.
 		act 'Kiss Katja':
 			*clr & cla
 			if $loc = 'gdkin':

+ 1 - 1
locations/Vika.qsrc

@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ if hour < 20:
 		elseif talkrand = 4:
 			'Vika says that one of her friends who''s guy did not pull out in time and came inside of her. But Vika is smarter than that, she buys birth control pills at the pharmacy control. Then it doesn''t matter if the guy pulls out or wears a condom.'
 		elseif talkrand = 5:
-			'Vika says in the park, she accidentally went to a area and was offered money for sex.'
+			'Vika says in the park, she accidentally went to an area and was offered money for sex.'
 		elseif talkrand = 6:
 			'Vika tells did a nude photo shoot at the photography studio, but it is bad for your reputation to do.'
 		elseif talkrand = 7:

+ 4 - 4
locations/Voltrenersex.qsrc

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/sex/voitrensex1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You go to the coaches office just as you open the door a arm reaches out and grabs you by the hand and pulls you inside.'
+	'You go to the coaches office just as you open the door an arm reaches out and grabs you by the hand and pulls you inside.'
 
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A69'
 	silavag = 2
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'talk':
 	if Voltrenersee = 1:
-		'With a puzzled look on face you look at your coach, he looks at you then let''s go of your hand, and mumbles something: "You have a good technique <<$pcs_lastname>>", with each word his voice becomes more confident "You need to train more. At some point later, I will show you some more techniques, to improve your game." With a even more puzzled look on your face, you turned around and walked out'
+		'With a puzzled look on face you look at your coach, he looks at you then let''s go of your hand, and mumbles something: "You have a good technique <<$pcs_lastname>>", with each word his voice becomes more confident "You need to train more. At some point later, I will show you some more techniques, to improve your game." With an even more puzzled look on your face, you turned around and walked out'
 	end
 	if Voltrenersee = 2:
 		'Pulling you in and closing the door the coach whispered angrily: "<<$pcs_lastname>> is this what you asking for?", blushing you ran out of the coaches office away from Mikhail Nikolaevich. Although you desire to play on the first team. You''re not ready for something more.'
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Defl':
 					act 'Recover':
 						cls
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/sex/voitrensex27.jpg"></center>'
-						'With a grunt you feel his hot sperm shooting into you, filling you up, pulling out of you his cock is covered in blood and sperm, the coach began to talk about something, something about you not be a girl anymore but you really didn''t hear what he said the pain of losing your virginity and the ecxtasy of nearly having your first orgasm distracted you. You finally notice your coach giving you a attentive and caring look, as he helps you gather up your stuff. Once you are redressed you leave his office, ready to see the world in a new way.'
+						'With a grunt you feel his hot sperm shooting into you, filling you up, pulling out of you his cock is covered in blood and sperm, the coach began to talk about something, something about you not be a girl anymore but you really didn''t hear what he said the pain of losing your virginity and the ecstasy of nearly having your first orgasm distracted you. You finally notice your coach giving you an attentive and caring look, as he helps you gather up your stuff. Once you are redressed you leave his office, ready to see the world in a new way.'
 						act 'Leave':gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 					end
 				end
@@ -315,7 +315,7 @@ gs 'stat'
 						gs 'stat'
 						cls
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/sex/voitrensex16.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'Unable to withstand this double pressure, your body convulses as you have a orgasm. Once the feeling passes you look up at your coach as he says "Yes <<$pcs_lastname>>, you look so hot"'
+						'Unable to withstand this double pressure, your body convulses as you have an orgasm. Once the feeling passes you look up at your coach as he says "Yes <<$pcs_lastname>>, you look so hot"'
 						act 'Leave':gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 					end
 					i = rand(1,4)

+ 1 - 1
locations/abductionCustomer.qsrc

@@ -926,7 +926,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-cumAss':
 			*nl
 			'When he pulls his <<$dick_girth>> cock out, a bulge is noticeable on the lower part of your belly.'
 			'The customer looks at it with joy and punches at the bulge with his fist.'
-			'The cum burst out of your pussy as if it shot out from a uncorked champagne bottle.'
+			'The cum burst out of your pussy as if it shot out from an uncorked champagne bottle.'
 		end
 		pain['tummy'] += 20
 		gs 'stat'

+ 2 - 2
locations/anushapt.qsrc

@@ -916,7 +916,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'getpleasured':
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les6.jpg"></center>'
 				'With both of you spent, Anushka rolls herself off you and the two of you lay side by side for several minutes while you catch your breath. Then you suggest, "Maybe we should get dressed before someone walks in, like your brothers."'
 				*nl
-				'She nods "Yeah you''re right." As you both start to get up, she reaches over and pulls you in close to her. With you both on your knees she pulls you over until your face is nearly touching hers and she looks deeply into your eyes. The shared look is only broken by occasional quick but soft kisses from her and soon from you as well. Then she gives you a one more long and soft kiss, with a hint of passion that leaves you breathless, before she pulls away.'
+				'She nods "Yeah you''re right." As you both start to get up, she reaches over and pulls you in close to her. With you both on your knees she pulls you over until your face is nearly touching hers and she looks deeply into your eyes. The shared look is only broken by occasional quick but soft kisses from her and soon from you as well. Then she gives you one more long and soft kiss, with a hint of passion that leaves you breathless, before she pulls away.'
 				*nl
 				'On that little high note, she gets out of bed and starts getting dressed. You soon do the same and within a couple of minutes you are both fully dressed again.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'lesbian'
@@ -1538,7 +1538,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'album':
 	*clr & cla
 	nush_album = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/parroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'There is a open photo album on the nightstand next to the bed, you walk up and glance at it. "Is that your family?"'
+	'There is an open photo album on the nightstand next to the bed, you walk up and glance at it. "Is that your family?"'
 	'In a rare occurrence Valeria almost seems to smile as she picks up the old album and starts to look through the photos of her and her family.'
 	'"We all looked so happy then..." she says. "It was a whole different world back then. Come have a look."'
 	'You sit next to her as she flips through the photo album, all of a sudden you notice something...'

+ 128 - 125
locations/anushka.qsrc

@@ -55,8 +55,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/det3sum.jpg"></center>'
 			'Once the teacher starts snoring, Valentin gets up. "Come on, let''s go." Anushka follows suit and pulls you up as well. You wander down the halls ''til the three of you reach the teachers'' lounge. Valentin pulls some lockpicks from his pocket and expertly uses them to unlock the door. You and your companions head inside quickly and he locks the door behind you. While he does, Anushka pulls you towards a big leather couch. You both flop down on the comfy couch and Valentin sits down between you a few seconds later. He pulls a small flask from his jacket pocket and takes a quick gulp from it before passing it to Anushka, who takes a healthy swig and passes it to you.'
-!!giving the option to take part or not here.
 			act 'No thanks':
+				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A144'] -= 3
 				npc_rel['A158'] -= 3
 				grupvalue[4] -= 3
@@ -66,9 +66,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 				*nl
 				'As Anushka and Valentin make out she reaches down to close her hand around his cock, immediately starting to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she reaches toward you with both hands, grabs your head and pushes you down into his lap.'
 				act 'Pull away':
+					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A158'] -= 3
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/det3sum.jpg"></center>'
-					'Before your face gets too close to his cock you pull away, Anushka doesn''t really try to stop you when she feels you resist. "Sorry guys, but I just wanted out of detention, I don''t want to have a orgy with the two of you."'
+					'Before your face gets too close to his cock you pull away, Anushka doesn''t really try to stop you when she feels you resist. "Sorry guys, but I just wanted out of detention, I don''t want to have an orgy with the two of you."'
 					'Anushka seems completely unfazed and before you even finish speaking she lowers her head and starts sucking Valentin''s cock.'
 					'Valentin gives his head a little jerk, indicating that you should move away. "If you don''t want to party, then get lost."'
 					'After that the two of them completely ignores you from that point on. Feeling a bit uncomfortable, you get up and move away a bit farther. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone and trying very hard to ignore the sounds of the two of them having sex on the couch.'
@@ -76,6 +77,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 					act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_detention', 'end'
 				end
 				act 'Suck him':
+					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A144'] += 3
 					npc_rel['A158'] += 3
 					grupvalue[4] += 3
@@ -86,6 +88,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 				end
 			end
 			act 'Take a drink':
+				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A144'] += 5
 				npc_rel['A158'] += 5
 				grupvalue[4] += 3
@@ -95,9 +98,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 				*nl
 				'As Anushka and Valentin make out she reaches down to close her hand around his cock, immediately starting to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she reaches toward you with both hands, grabs your head and pushes you down into his lap.'				
 				act 'Pull away':
+					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A158'] -= 2
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/det3sum.jpg"></center>'
-					'Before your face gets too close to his cock you pull away, Anushka doesn''t really try to stop you when she feels you resist. "Sorry guys, but I just wanted out of detention, I don''t want to have a orgy with the two of you."'
+					'Before your face gets too close to his cock you pull away, Anushka doesn''t really try to stop you when she feels you resist. "Sorry guys, but I just wanted out of detention, I don''t want to have an orgy with the two of you."'
 					'Anushka seems completely unfazed and before you even finish speaking she lowers her head and starts sucking Valentin''s cock.'
 					'Valentin shakes his head a little. "Then be quiet and watch, maybe you''ll learn something today."'
 					'After that the two of them completely ignores you from that point on. Feeling a bit uncomfortable, you get up and move away a bit farther. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone or watching the two of them fuck on the couch, wondering if you made the right decision.'
@@ -105,114 +109,119 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 					act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_detention', 'end'
 				end
 				act 'Suck him':
+					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A144'] += 3
 					npc_rel['A158'] += 3
 					grupvalue[4] += 3
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/det3sum.jpg"></center>'
 					'You reflexively open your mouth, wrap your lips around the head and start sucking his dick. She keeps forcing your head down, making you gag slightly on his length every so often, but she doesn''t really have to force you - you are getting turned on by this dream-like situation pretty quickly.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'rough', 'group'
-					act 'Her turn':
-						*clr & cla
-						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
-						'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcbj1.jpg"></center>'
-						'Suddenly, her hands are gone and you can feel her head next to yours, so you stop sucking and make room so she can suck his dick as well. The two of you start taking turns bobbing, sucking and licking, passing Valentin''s cock back and forth between you and occasionally licking it at the same time or kissing each other while jerking him off instead. He seems perfectly content to let the two of you do as you please, as long as you please him.'
-						*nl
-						'While you get your turn to suck his dick again, Anushka takes your shirt off, then works on getting you out of the rest of your clothes. As soon as she has you completely naked, she kneels back down next to you. You move to let her suck his cock and while she''s busy, you return the favor by stripping her down as well.'
-						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'group'
-						gs 'stat'
-						'As soon as her panties are off, she pulls her mouth off Valentin''s manhood with a loud plop and the two of you start helping him undress. Within a minute, the three of you are all stark naked. She pushes him down ''til he is lying back on the couch and encourages you to straddle his lap.'
-						act 'No fucking':
-							*clr & cla
-							'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
-							'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcowgirl.jpg"></center>'
-							'You shake your head. "Sorry, I will suck him or lick you. But I don''t want to get fucked."'
-							'Anushka doesn''t say a word to you, she just climbs on top of him herself, mounting him cowgirl style and starts riding him hard and fast. You kneel down next to them on the couch, squeezing and kissing her lovely ass as she continues to ride him.'
-							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'dom'
-							act 'Suck him again':
-								*clr & cla
-								'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
-								'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcwbj.jpg"></center>'
-								'After riding him for a while, she pulls up and off him, letting his cock slide out of her sopping wet pussy. She reaches over, grabs your head and pushes it down towards his waiting dick. You quickly open your mouth and start sucking his glistening dick, you can taste her pussy juices all over it. She lets you suck his dick for a while, letting you suck up all her pussy juice before pulling your head away and then easing herself back down on his shaft. This time, however, she lets his cock slide up her ass.'
-								gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'group'
-								gs 'stat'
-								act 'Watch':
-									*clr & cla
-									'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
-									'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcownal.jpg"></center>'
-									'You watch as she rides him hard and fast, bucking and grinding against him with his cock deep up her ass. Many minutes later she really picks up the pace, moaning loudly, she is obviously about to have a orgasm. She hammers herself down on his cock, impaling herself, taking his cock as deep in her asshole as it can go. Then she takes a loud shuddering breath, shaking all over with her eyes rolling up as she slowly comes to a stop, with his dick still buried up her ass.'
-									gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'dom'
-									act 'Finish':
-										*clr & cla
-										gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
-										'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
-										'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detccum.jpg"></center>'
-										'As Anushka''s orgasm finishes, you hear Valentin panting and grunting as her ass squeezes and twitches around his cock, so you know he is getting very close. So does Anushka, it seems, because she lifts up again and quickly gets off him. She has him stand and kneels down in front of him, pulling you down as well so you can join her. She grabs his dick and rapidly starts jerking his slick cock, not for long though: Only a few seconds later, a stream of sperm spurts out and hits you in the face, right where she was aiming. The next spurt she aims at her own face, followed by your tits, then her own tits - she spreads his spunk between the two of you, coating both of your tits and faces with his sticky cum.'
-										*nl
-										'When the well has dried up, she diligently licks you clean, not leaving a trace of his sperm on your body. You return the favor of course, and when all the cum has been collected, she gives you a deep and passionate french kiss, making sure to share the cum you licked up together. With that done, the three of you get dressed again. While Valentin unlocks the lounge door, he gives you a smirk and says: "Okay, I admit it, you''re not as much of a killjoy as I thought, <<$pcs_nickname>>, and Nush was right: You are a pretty cool chick. Not to mention you really know how to suck cock." You give Anushka a sideways glance and find her grinning at you.' 
-										gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
-										gs 'arousal', 'end'
-										gs 'stat'
-										'Going back to the library, you see that the teacher is still out like a light and all the other students are gone. There is less than an hour of detention left anyways, so the three of you leave the school. Once outside, you each go your separate ways.'
+					act 'Her turn': gt 'anushka', 'Her turn'
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'Her turn':
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcbj1.jpg"></center>'
+	'Suddenly, her hands are gone and you can feel her head next to yours, so you stop sucking and make room so she can suck his dick as well. The two of you start taking turns bobbing, sucking and licking, passing Valentin''s cock back and forth between you and occasionally licking it at the same time or kissing each other while jerking him off instead. He seems perfectly content to let the two of you do as you please, as long as you please him.'
+	*nl
+	'While you get your turn to suck his dick again, Anushka takes your shirt off, then works on getting you out of the rest of your clothes. As soon as she has you completely naked, she kneels back down next to you. You move to let her suck his cock and while she''s busy, you return the favor by stripping her down as well.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'group'
+	gs 'stat'
+	'As soon as her panties are off, she pulls her mouth off Valentin''s manhood with a loud plop and the two of you start helping him undress. Within a minute, the three of you are all stark naked. She pushes him down ''til he is lying back on the couch and encourages you to straddle his lap.'
+	
+	act 'No fucking':
+		*clr & cla
+		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
+		'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcowgirl.jpg"></center>'
+		'You shake your head. "Sorry, I will suck him or lick you. But I don''t want to get fucked."'
+		'Anushka doesn''t say a word to you, she just climbs on top of him herself, mounting him cowgirl style and starts riding him hard and fast. You kneel down next to them on the couch, squeezing and kissing her lovely ass as she continues to ride him.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'dom'
+		act 'Suck him again':
+			*clr & cla
+			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
+			'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcwbj.jpg"></center>'
+			'After riding him for a while, she pulls up and off him, letting his cock slide out of her sopping wet pussy. She reaches over, grabs your head and pushes it down towards his waiting dick. You quickly open your mouth and start sucking his glistening dick, you can taste her pussy juices all over it. She lets you suck his dick for a while, letting you suck up all her pussy juice before pulling your head away and then easing herself back down on his shaft. This time, however, she lets his cock slide up her ass.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'group'
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Watch':
+				*clr & cla
+				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcownal.jpg"></center>'
+				'You watch as she rides him hard and fast, bucking and grinding against him with his cock deep up her ass. Many minutes later she really picks up the pace, moaning loudly, she is obviously about to have an orgasm. She hammers herself down on his cock, impaling herself, taking his cock as deep in her asshole as it can go. Then she takes a loud shuddering breath, shaking all over with her eyes rolling up as she slowly comes to a stop, with his dick still buried up her ass.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'dom'
+				act 'Finish':
+					*clr & cla
+					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
+					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
+					'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detccum.jpg"></center>'
+					'As Anushka''s orgasm finishes, you hear Valentin panting and grunting as her ass squeezes and twitches around his cock, so you know he is getting very close. So does Anushka, it seems, because she lifts up again and quickly gets off him. She has him stand and kneels down in front of him, pulling you down as well so you can join her. She grabs his dick and rapidly starts jerking his slick cock, not for long though: Only a few seconds later, a stream of sperm spurts out and hits you in the face, right where she was aiming. The next spurt she aims at her own face, followed by your tits, then her own tits - she spreads his spunk between the two of you, coating both of your tits and faces with his sticky cum.'
+					*nl
+					'When the well has dried up, she diligently licks you clean, not leaving a trace of his sperm on your body. You return the favor of course, and when all the cum has been collected, she gives you a deep and passionate french kiss, making sure to share the cum you licked up together. With that done, the three of you get dressed again. While Valentin unlocks the lounge door, he gives you a smirk and says: "Okay, I admit it, you''re not as much of a killjoy as I thought, <<$pcs_nickname>>, and Nush was right: You are a pretty cool chick. Not to mention you really know how to suck cock." You give Anushka a sideways glance and find her grinning at you.' 
+					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
+					gs 'arousal', 'end'
+					gs 'stat'
+					'Going back to the library, you see that the teacher is still out like a light and all the other students are gone. There is less than an hour of detention left anyways, so the three of you leave the school. Once outside, you each go your separate ways.'
 !!since we changed detention hours can you check and make sure this actually lets Sveta leave detention early still?
-										act 'Go home':minut += 15 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
-									end
-								end
-							end
-						end
-						act 'Mount him':
-							*clr & cla
-							'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
-							'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcvag.jpg"></center>'
-							'She''s right: You are sopping wet and ready. As you lower yourself down towards his crotch, she guides his cock into your pussy. You feel his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock slowly filling and stretching you open, and you start moaning softly, the sensation is incredible and somehow the alcohol is just adding to the feeling.'
-							*nl
-							'You lift yourself up and begin riding his dick, and as if that stimulation wasn''t enough for you, Anushka leans forward and starts licking your clit while he is bucking his hips up, fucking you from below. You are totally lost in pleasure, unable to keep up with all the sensations. All control over the situation has completely passed to your companions and as they keep going you can feel yourself getting close already, the rising tingle in your body threatening to overwhelm your few remaining senses.'
-							*nl
-							'Just then, when you''re right on the edge and release is finally within your grasp, Anushka pulls you off his heavenly cock and takes your place, slamming her pussy down on his cock and impaling herself time and time again. You are certain the little bitch did it on purpose, swapping places when you were so close, but you still return the favor of licking her clit while he fucks her.'
-							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'group'
-							gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 15, 'group'
-							minut -= 15
-							gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'group'
-							gs 'stat'
-							act 'Continue':
-								*clr & cla
-								'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
-								'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcanal1.jpg"></center>'
-								'Unlike you, she leaves no doubt as to who is in control, not while she''s straddling him and not when she pulls herself off and makes him get up. She lays herself down on the couch in his place, spreading her legs and gripping her butt cheeks, spreading them open as well. Her expectation is obvious and Valentin, being a perfect gentleman, obliges her. He slips his dick into her ass with ease, even without any additional lubrication, and begins fucking her practically right away. She lets go of her own butt and motions you over, to straddle her face. Who are you to refuse such an offer?'
-								*nl
-								'Her tongue laps at your clit and slit as soon as they are within reach and every now and then, her tongue darts inside of you as well. Meanwhile, Valentin lays himself down on his side and pounds her ass from behind, allowing him to lick and suck on your nipples while she eats you out. This goes on for some time, all three of you audibly content with this position, until Anushka makes the two of you move again.'
-								gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'group'
-								gs 'arousal', 'breasts', 10, 'group'
-								minut -= 10
-								gs 'stat'
-								act 'Continue':
-									*clr & cla
-									'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
-									'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcanal.jpg"></center>'
-									'She gets up and has you lay down in her place, straddling your face almost as soon as you''re on your back. After the enthusiasm with which she treated you, you have no reservations about giving her pussy a thorough licking as well and you go to town immediately. Meanwhile, she lifts up your legs and spreads them apart, having Valentin kneel down between your legs. You feel him rubbing the tip of his dick against your asshole for a moment before pushing the tip of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock past your anus into your ass.'
-									*nl
-									'Not knowing how much experience you might have, he starts off slow and gentle for a moment, allowing you to get used to it. As soon as he feels you relax a bit though, he starts hammering your ass just as hard and fast as he was pounding Anushka''s. She grinds her twat against your face as he claims your ass, each of them taking turns playing with your nipples, adding another tune to the orchestra of pain and pleasure that is filling your mind. You have completely lost all sense of time by now, but you don''t really care.'
-									gs 'arousal', 'anal', 15, 'group'
-									gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 15, 'group'
-									minut -= 15
-									gs 'stat'
-									act 'Finish':
-										*clr & cla
-										gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
-										'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
-										'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detccum.jpg"></center>'
-										'Through the haze of pleasure you can hear Valentin panting and grunting, and somehow you know he is getting close. So does Anushka, it seems, because she gets off your face right away and pulls him away from you as well, leaving you feeling suddenly empty. She has him stand and kneels down in front of him while pulling you back up to join her. She grabs his dick and rapidly starts jerking his slick cock, not for long though: Only a few seconds later, a stream of sperm spurts out and hits you in the face, right where she was aiming. The next spurt she aims at her own face, followed by your tits, then her own tits - she spreads his spunk between the two of you, coating both of your tits and faces with his sticky cum.'
-										*nl
-										'When the well has dried up, she diligently licks you clean, not leaving a trace of his sperm on your body. You return the favor of course, and when all the cum has been collected, she gives you a deep and passionate french kiss, making sure to share the cum you licked up together. With that done, the three of you get dressed again. While Valentin unlocks the lounge door, he gives you a smirk and says: "Okay, I admit it, you''re not as much of a killjoy as I thought, <<$pcs_nickname>>, and Nush was right: You are a pretty cool chick. Not to mention a damn good fuck!" You blush, giving Anushka a sideways glance and find her grinning at you.' 
-										gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
-										gs 'arousal', 'end'
-										gs 'stat'
-										'Going back to the library, you see that the teacher is still out like a light and all the other students are gone. There is less than an hour of detention left anyways, so the three of you leave the school. Once outside, you each go your separate ways.'
-										act 'Go home':minut += 15 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
-									end
-								end
-							end
-						end
-					end
+					act 'Go home':minut += 15 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+	
+	act 'Mount him':
+		*clr & cla
+		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
+		'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcvag.jpg"></center>'
+		'She''s right: You are sopping wet and ready. As you lower yourself down towards his crotch, she guides his cock into your pussy. You feel his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock slowly filling and stretching you open, and you start moaning softly, the sensation is incredible and somehow the alcohol is just adding to the feeling.'
+		*nl
+		'You lift yourself up and begin riding his dick, and as if that stimulation wasn''t enough for you, Anushka leans forward and starts licking your clit while he is bucking his hips up, fucking you from below. You are totally lost in pleasure, unable to keep up with all the sensations. All control over the situation has completely passed to your companions and as they keep going you can feel yourself getting close already, the rising tingle in your body threatening to overwhelm your few remaining senses.'
+		*nl
+		'Just then, when you''re right on the edge and release is finally within your grasp, Anushka pulls you off his heavenly cock and takes your place, slamming her pussy down on his cock and impaling herself time and time again. You are certain the little bitch did it on purpose, swapping places when you were so close, but you still return the favor of licking her clit while he fucks her.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'group'
+		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 15, 'group'
+		minut -= 15
+		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'group'
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Continue':
+			*clr & cla
+			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
+			'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcanal1.jpg"></center>'
+			'Unlike you, she leaves no doubt as to who is in control, not while she''s straddling him and not when she pulls herself off and makes him get up. She lays herself down on the couch in his place, spreading her legs and gripping her butt cheeks, spreading them open as well. Her expectation is obvious and Valentin, being a perfect gentleman, obliges her. He slips his dick into her ass with ease, even without any additional lubrication, and begins fucking her practically right away. She lets go of her own butt and motions you over, to straddle her face. Who are you to refuse such an offer?'
+			*nl
+			'Her tongue laps at your clit and slit as soon as they are within reach and every now and then, her tongue darts inside of you as well. Meanwhile, Valentin lays himself down on his side and pounds her ass from behind, allowing him to lick and suck on your nipples while she eats you out. This goes on for some time, all three of you audibly content with this position, until Anushka makes the two of you move again.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'group'
+			gs 'arousal', 'breasts', 10, 'group'
+			minut -= 10
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Continue':
+				*clr & cla
+				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcanal.jpg"></center>'
+				'She gets up and has you lay down in her place, straddling your face almost as soon as you''re on your back. After the enthusiasm with which she treated you, you have no reservations about giving her pussy a thorough licking as well and you go to town immediately. Meanwhile, she lifts up your legs and spreads them apart, having Valentin kneel down between your legs. You feel him rubbing the tip of his dick against your asshole for a moment before pushing the tip of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock past your anus into your ass.'
+				*nl
+				'Not knowing how much experience you might have, he starts off slow and gentle for a moment, allowing you to get used to it. As soon as he feels you relax a bit though, he starts hammering your ass just as hard and fast as he was pounding Anushka''s. She grinds her twat against your face as he claims your ass, each of them taking turns playing with your nipples, adding another tune to the orchestra of pain and pleasure that is filling your mind. You have completely lost all sense of time by now, but you don''t really care.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 15, 'group'
+				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 15, 'group'
+				minut -= 15
+				gs 'stat'
+				act 'Finish':
+					*clr & cla
+					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
+					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
+					'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detccum.jpg"></center>'
+					'Through the haze of pleasure you can hear Valentin panting and grunting, and somehow you know he is getting close. So does Anushka, it seems, because she gets off your face right away and pulls him away from you as well, leaving you feeling suddenly empty. She has him stand and kneels down in front of him while pulling you back up to join her. She grabs his dick and rapidly starts jerking his slick cock, not for long though: Only a few seconds later, a stream of sperm spurts out and hits you in the face, right where she was aiming. The next spurt she aims at her own face, followed by your tits, then her own tits - she spreads his spunk between the two of you, coating both of your tits and faces with his sticky cum.'
+					*nl
+					'When the well has dried up, she diligently licks you clean, not leaving a trace of his sperm on your body. You return the favor of course, and when all the cum has been collected, she gives you a deep and passionate french kiss, making sure to share the cum you licked up together. With that done, the three of you get dressed again. While Valentin unlocks the lounge door, he gives you a smirk and says: "Okay, I admit it, you''re not as much of a killjoy as I thought, <<$pcs_nickname>>, and Nush was right: You are a pretty cool chick. Not to mention a damn good fuck!" You blush, giving Anushka a sideways glance and find her grinning at you.' 
+					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
+					gs 'arousal', 'end'
+					gs 'stat'
+					'Going back to the library, you see that the teacher is still out like a light and all the other students are gone. There is less than an hour of detention left anyways, so the three of you leave the school. Once outside, you each go your separate ways.'
+					act 'Go home':minut += 15 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -233,35 +242,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wedgie fight':
 	*nl
 	'"Just what are the two of you doing?" Then he holds up his hand. "Actually, I don''t care. Both of you come with me. The rest of you behave until I get back." He then grabs both you and Anushka by the arms and drags the two of you out of detention towards the principals office.'
 	act 'In trouble':
-		*clr
-		cla
+		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Principal''s Office</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/head/50.jpg"></center>'
 		'He knocks, waiting until he hears "Enter" from inside and then proceeds to drags you both in. Once inside he releases the two of you and addresses the school principal. "These two where trying to pull each others clothes off in the middle of the library."'
 		'The principal doesn''t seem remotely surprised by this. "Miss Konstantinov, I have come to expect this kind of behavior from you, but <b>you</b> miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, I had hoped you would know better. It seems that hope was in vain." she nods to the teacher. "I will deal with them." With that he leaves the office and closes the door.'
 		act 'Punishment':
-			*clr
-			cla
+			*clr & cla
 			gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank1.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Very well, since you both wanted to be naked so badly, take off your clothes." She says as she pulls a chair over near her leather couch, taking a seat. Anushka quickly takes off all her clothes seeming not to care in the slightest. You, however, are a little slower but finally you manage to remove all of your clothes as well. Once you are both naked, Miss Volkov motions you over. As soon as you are within an arms reach she grabs you and pulls you across her lap. She then proceeds to spank your bare ass until your buttcheeks are cherry red and stinging like crazy, while Anushka takes a seat on the couch and just watches you get spanked.'
 			act 'Next':
-				*clr
-				cla
+				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank2.jpg"></center>'
 				'Once she is satisfied, she pulls you up and points to the corner of her office. "Go stand over there. Leave your clothes where they are, face the corner." You do as you are told, gingerly rubbing your butt as you go. You glance back when you hear the slap of flesh on flesh, it seems to be Anushka''s turn. She is laid out across Miss Volkov''s lap, getting her ass spanked as well. As time passes, you can hear Anushka moaning, either pretending to like it or really enjoying it. Miss Volkov seems annoyed at this and spends considerably more time spanking Anushka''s already glowing ass than she did with you. Finally she seems to grow tired of it, lifting Anushka off her lap and pointing to your corner. "Go join your friend."'
 				act 'Standing':
-					*clr
-					cla
+					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank3.jpg"></center>'
-					'You and Anushka stand facing the corner together, your ass is seriously stinging and if anything Anushka''s butt is must be much redder than yours. Apparently expecting one of you to disobey her, Miss Volkov keeps a eye on you for a while, but neither of you do. The two of you stay standing facing the corner, naked with your butts on fire.'
+					'You and Anushka stand facing the corner together, your ass is seriously stinging and if anything Anushka''s butt is must be much redder than yours. Apparently expecting one of you to disobey her, Miss Volkov keeps an eye on you for a while, but neither of you do. The two of you stay standing facing the corner, naked with your butts on fire.'
 					act 'Rebel':
-						*clr
-						cla
+						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank4.jpg"></center>'
 						'After a while, Miss Volkov either loses interest in the both of you or forgets about the two naked teenage girls standing in her office. Either way, she stops paying attention to you two. Some time later Anushka gives you a quick grin and leans over to say something. When you lean closer a bit to hear, you are surprised as she kisses you instead, it''s soft quick kiss, but you can feel some real passion behind it. A couple of hours later, Miss Volkov finally speaks to you again. "Alright you two, get dressed and go home. I don''t want to see you in here again."'
 						*nl
 						'With that you quickly gather up your clothes and get dressed again. As the two of you head out, Anushka asks you. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you want to come by my place?"'
+						act 'Can''t':
+							cla
+							'You shake your head. "Sorry Nush, I have some things I need to do, maybe some other time." Anushka shrugs, "Sure whatever."'
+							act 'leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+						end
 						act 'Sure':
 							cla
 							'The two of you walk back to the apartment complex and to her building. You go up to the fourth floor where she leads you into her family''s apartment and takes you into the living room.'
@@ -275,12 +284,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wedgie fight':
 									gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 								end
 							end
-							!!first time you go it goes to this. gt 'anushapt', 'livingroom' After that just have it go straight to Anushka''s room please.
-						end
-						act 'Can''t':
-							cla
-							'You shake your head. "Sorry Nush, I have some things I need to do, maybe some other time." Anushka shrugs, "Sure whatever."'
-							act 'leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -335,7 +338,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'temptation':
 				'"Sorry I just can''t." Then you turn and head back to your table in detention. You just can''t. The rest of detention passes very slowly, you don''t see her for the rest of it.'
 				act 'Go home':minut += 15 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 			end
-!!This is a option if exhibition is 20 but less than 30. I figure with someone else already naked and encouraging Sveta she could do it due to peer pressure even if her exhibition is not normally high enough.
+!!This is an option if exhibition is 20 but less than 30. I figure with someone else already naked and encouraging Sveta she could do it due to peer pressure even if her exhibition is not normally high enough.
 			if pcs_inhib >= 20 and pcs_inhib < 30:
 				act 'I would like to but...':
 					*clr
@@ -412,7 +415,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatWhileWaiting':
 	'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hiding.jpg"></center>'
 	'You''re waiting for the janitor to pass.'	
 	if anushLimitedQuestions > 0 and anushTalkedofDolls = 0:
-!!this will only be a option until it is asked, once you ask about her clothes once it doesn''t come back up. Maybe some code Anushka told location of Dolls and once activated this never shows up again.	
+!!this will only be an option until it is asked, once you ask about her clothes once it doesn''t come back up. Maybe some code Anushka told location of Dolls and once activated this never shows up again.	
 		act 'Make small talk':
 			*clr
 			cla
@@ -622,7 +625,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatWhileWaiting':
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/weed.jpg"></center>'
 				'You know this might be a bad call but you want to know. "Is it really that bad?"'
-				'She arches her brows at you as if to say are you serious. "I should tell you to ask her yourself but she would like blow you off or knock out your teeth. Let''s just say her father is a abusive drunk and her mother, when conscious is as meek as a mouse and lets him do what ever he wants. Her older brother is just as bad, so yeah. It''s really that bad. So just drop it."'
+				'She arches her brows at you as if to say are you serious. "I should tell you to ask her yourself but she would like blow you off or knock out your teeth. Let''s just say her father is an abusive drunk and her mother, when conscious is as meek as a mouse and lets him do what ever he wants. Her older brother is just as bad, so yeah. It''s really that bad. So just drop it."'
 				'Knowing you have pushed things as far as you dare, you change the subject.'
 				act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatWhileWaiting'
 			end
@@ -641,7 +644,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatWhileWaiting':
 			else
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hiding.jpg"></center>'
 			end
-!!This happens only the first time Sveta asks about it. Then it is no longer a option.
+!!This happens only the first time Sveta asks about it. Then it is no longer an option.
 			'Curious about her plans for the future, you decide to ask what she plans to do once school is over. "Once we graduate what do you plan to do? Focus on the band more?"'
 			'"Sorta, I mean I plan to keep playing with the band and hopefully we can make it. But I am not going to depend on that, I plan to also go to the University in the city as well. So I have a back-up plan, in case the band never takes off."'
 			'You are a bit surprised, you always heard she was doing bad like all the gopniks. "Oh... I didn''t know you were doing that good in school."'

+ 1 - 1
locations/anushkaev1.qsrc

@@ -225,7 +225,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon1':
 													killvar '$orgasm_txt'
 													'Finally, she crawls up to lay beside you, leaning over to give you a kiss. You can taste your own pussy juices on her lips. After a brief kiss, the two of you lay side by side for a few moments. Then she finally gets up and starts to get cleaned up and dressed. As she does you notice she is moving a little gingerly. Then looks at you and says. "Fuck my ass is already sore, it''s going to really hurt, later on, bitch!"'
 													'Laughing a bit, since you can tell she is mostly kidding, you get up and start to get dressed. "Oh please, you are such an anal whore, I damn near fell in."'
-													'She snorts and flips you off as the two of you get dressed. "Fuck you, Bitch!" She says in a obviously amussed tone.'
+													'She snorts and flips you off as the two of you get dressed. "Fuck you, Bitch!" She says in an obviously amussed tone.'
 													gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 													minut += 5
 													gs 'stat'

+ 1 - 1
locations/bedr.qsrc

@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ if husbandrink = 11 and husbanstrapon > 0 and husbandrinkday ! daystart:
 		cla
 		menu_off = 1
 
-		if husbanstrapon = 1:'"Honey, you were so drunk last night, that I decided to teach you a lesson and put a anal plug up your ass. I''ll never do it again, forgive me please", you say.'
+		if husbanstrapon = 1:'"Honey, you were so drunk last night, that I decided to teach you a lesson and put an anal plug up your ass. I''ll never do it again, forgive me please", you say.'
 		if husbanstrapon = 2:'"Dear, I wanted to make you happy, so I started to give you a blowjob, but you didn''t cum, so I inserted a finger into your asshole, but you still didn''t cum, then I took a small dildo and some lube and put in your ass, I''ve never seen you cum like that before. I even gave you a secong blowjob. Forgive me, but you seemed to enjoy it so much, that I could''t stop. I just wanted to make you happy.", you lie to him.'
 		if husbanstrapon = 3:'"Dear, I wanted to make you a happy, so I started to give you a blowjob, but you didn''t cum, so I inserted a finger into your asshole, but you still didn''t cum. When I put in a second finger you began to move your ass towards my fingers moaning heavily, I thought that you like it, so I put on a strapon. You enjoyed it so much that you finished over and over again, and I continued until I was tired. I then licked all the cum off your body and went to sleep. I just wanted to make you happy and you were enjoying it. Forgive me please", you lie him.'
 

+ 2 - 2
locations/bedr2x.qsrc

@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ end
 if komp = 1:'On the other bedside table is your <a href="exec:gt ''Komp'',''start''">laptop</a>.'
 *nl
 if husbandrinkday = daystart:
-	if husbanstrapon = 1:'Your husband is still passed out drunk, after you used a anal plug on him.'
+	if husbanstrapon = 1:'Your husband is still passed out drunk, after you used an anal plug on him.'
 	if husbanstrapon = 2:'Your husband is still passed out drunk, after you stuck a dildo in his ass.'
 	if husbanstrapon = 3:'Your husband is still passed out drunk, after you fucked him in the ass with a strap-on.'
 end
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ if husbandrink = 10 and hour > 20 and hour < 23 and husbanstrapon = 0:
 	'"That pig!" You swore, and then started thinking of ways to teach him a lesson.'
 
 	if analplug = 1:
-		act 'Insert a anal plug':
+		act 'Insert an anal plug':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			menu_off = 1

+ 2 - 2
locations/brothel.qsrc

@@ -1440,7 +1440,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:nailsandneedlestits':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/nailtits.mp4"></video></center>'
 		*nl
 		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Owwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww"</font>'
-		'The nails are put on your tits and nailed like a one plank to another.'
+		'The nails are put on your tits and nailed like one plank to another.'
 		step = 6
 		act 'Endure': gt 'brothel', $this
 	elseif step = 6:
@@ -1784,7 +1784,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:shockAnus':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/shockanus.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You have obviously annoyed the Client by what you did.'
 	'He takes a long rod: <font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Now where''s the fucking button!"</font>'
-	'A shiver runs through your spine and soon you know why! He sticks the rod in your anus, giving you a electrocuting your sensitive hole!"'
+	'A shiver runs through your spine and soon you know why! He sticks the rod in your anus, giving you an electrocuting your sensitive hole!"'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Owwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!"</font> Tears run out of your eyes in pain and terror..'
 	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Don''t do it again slut! Or this will be halfway in your anus!"</font>'
 

+ 11 - 23
locations/brother.qsrc

@@ -701,7 +701,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showbody':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'homework':
-	cla
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -954,7 +953,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherSexCount':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_go_away':
-	cla
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -969,7 +967,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_go_away':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_go_away2':
-	cla
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -985,7 +982,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_go_away2':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_end':
-	cla
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1007,7 +1003,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_end':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev1':
-	cla
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1020,13 +1015,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev1':
 	'You continue to wash as if nothing has happened, glancing at your brother. You carefully wash your body, paying particular attention to your breasts and pussy, feeling the excitement grow in your abdomen.'
 	gs 'arousal','breasts', 1
 	act 'Wipes':gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_end'
-	if pcs_horny >= 40:
-		act 'Play with your tits':gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_ev2'
-	end
+	if pcs_horny >= 40: act 'Play with your tits': gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_ev2'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev2':
-	cla
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1039,7 +1031,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev2':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/c (<<picrand>>).jpg"></center>'
 	'You turn to face the door, giving Kolka a better view, and erotically squeeze you <<$titsize>> tits. Your fingers pinch your nipples, and you take the shower hose in your hand and pour water over your chest, while gazing at your brother. You close your eyes for a moment immersed in a fantasy, your heart flutters and you elicit a light moan.'
 	act 'Wash':gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_end'
-	if pcs_horny >= 90:
+	if pcs_horny >= 80:
 		act 'Direct the water at your pussy':gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_ev3'
 		if npc_QW['A34'] >= 4 and npc_rel['A34'] > 60:act 'Invite him in':gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_ev3_2'
 	end
@@ -1136,7 +1128,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_sex_end':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev4':
-	cla
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1165,7 +1156,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev4':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev5':
-	cla
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1176,7 +1166,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev5':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/f (2).jpg"></center>'
 	if npc_QW['A34'] = 4:
 		if analplugIN = 1:
-			'You turn your booty towards your brother and lean forwards, resting your elbows on the chair, revealing your <<$vaginatipe2>> pussy and <<$anustipe>> anus, which has a anal plug inserted into it:'
+			'You turn your booty towards your brother and lean forwards, resting your elbows on the chair, revealing your <<$vaginatipe2>> pussy and <<$anustipe>> anus, which has an anal plug inserted into it:'
 			gs 'brother', 'anus_check'
 		else
 			'You turn your booty towards your brother and lean forwards, resting your elbows on the chair, revealing your <<$vaginatipe2>> pussy and <<$anustipe>> anus:'
@@ -1221,7 +1211,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev5':
 		act'Further':gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_ev6'
 	elseif npc_QW['A34'] > 4:
 		if analplugIN = 1:
-			'You turn your booty towards your brother and lean forwards, resting your elbows on the chair, revealing your <<$vaginatipe2>> pussy and <<$anustipe>> anus, which has a anal plug inserted into it:'
+			'You turn your booty towards your brother and lean forwards, resting your elbows on the chair, revealing your <<$vaginatipe2>> pussy and <<$anustipe>> anus, which has an anal plug inserted into it:'
 			gs 'brother', 'anus_check'
 		else
 			'You turn your booty towards your brother and lean forwards, resting your elbows on the chair, revealing your <<$vaginatipe2>> pussy and <<$anustipe>> anus:'
@@ -1306,7 +1296,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anus_check':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev6':
-	cla
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1338,7 +1327,6 @@ end
 
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev7':
-	cla
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1593,14 +1581,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherknows1':
 		cla
 		'"Don''t worry, I''ll think of something to tell her. I''ll probably just say I was raped on the way home from the disco. This''ll just be our little secret." You wink and blow a kiss to your brother before finally walking away.'
 
-		act 'Continue' :brotherSecret = 1 & gt 'sitrPar'
+		act 'Continue': brotherSecret = 1 & gt 'sitrPar'
 	end
 
 	act 'No (Blackmail him)':
 		cla
 		'"I don''t know. I might need some... incentive to keep this secret. I''ll let you know what I think of later." Your brother is clearly nervous as you walk away.'
 
-		act 'Continue' :brotherSecret = 1 & brotherBlackmail = l & gt 'sitrPar'
+		act 'Continue': brotherSecret = 1 & brotherBlackmail = l & gt 'sitrPar'
 	end
 
 	act 'Yes':
@@ -1625,7 +1613,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherknows2':
 		'You glare at Kolka. "Fuck you! I told you that you got me pregnant, and you''re still worried about yourself? Fine, I''ll keep it a secret, but you''d better fall in line! If you don''t do everything I say, I''ll end you!"'
 		'You storm away from Kolka, leaving him to squirm in discomfort.'
 
-		act 'Continue' :brotherSecret = 1 & brotherBlackmail = l & gt 'sitrPar'
+		act 'Continue': brotherSecret = 1 & brotherBlackmail = l & gt 'sitrPar'
 	end
 
 	act 'Yes':
@@ -1633,7 +1621,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherknows2':
 		'You glare at Kolka. "Fuck off! Can you think about anything other than yourself for one second? I''m not protecting you. <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is going to find out, and you''ll just have to deal with that!"'
 		'You storm away from Kolka, leaving him to squirm in discomfort.'
 
-		act 'Continue' :gt 'sitrPar'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'sitrPar'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1644,7 +1632,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherknows3':
 	'"It could be, I''m still not sure yet. I just wanted to give you a heads up." You then add with a wink "Honestly, I''m kind of hoping it is."'
 	'"Me too," he states just a little too eagerly. He then quickly moves his lips to yours and you share a passionate kiss.'
 
-	act 'Continue' :gt 'sitrPar'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'sitrPar'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherknows4':
@@ -1655,7 +1643,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherknows4':
 	'"Then I really hope it''s someone else''s problem."'
 	'"Fuck off! If it''s yours then I''ll make sure you take responsibility!" You then storm away, leaving Kolka to stew.'
 
-	act 'Continue' :gt 'sitrPar'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'sitrPar'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherknows5':
@@ -1665,7 +1653,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherknows5':
 	'"No, you got lucky this time. It''s actually <<$wombthfath>>''s, I just wanted to share the news with my little brother."'
 	'"Oh, well congratulations!" He tries to sound happy, but you detect a note of disappointment in his voice.'
 
-	act 'Continue':gt 'sitrPar'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'sitrPar'
 end
 
 !Once pregnancy fetish is added, these will be expanded

+ 1 - 1
locations/brother_lessons.qsrc

@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'homework':
 								'"I-I''m, uhh, helping Kolka with his homework right now!" you stammer, trying to force down the adrenaline in your body and keep your voice from shaking.'
 								'"Oh, that''s alright then. You can help me later. Make sure your brother gets his grades up!"'
 								*nl
-								'Sighing with relief, you and your brother share a a panicked look before turning back to the table with his homework on it. For the rest of the hour, the two of you don''t make eye contact, let alone even <i>think</i> about doing something that might get you caught again.'
+								'Sighing with relief, you and your brother share a panicked look before turning back to the table with his homework on it. For the rest of the hour, the two of you don''t make eye contact, let alone even <i>think</i> about doing something that might get you caught again.'
 								act 'Finish': gt 'sitrPar'
 							end
 						else

+ 2 - 2
locations/cityTrain.qsrc

@@ -38,10 +38,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inside':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/trainstation/central_station_inside.jpg"></center>'
 	'The grand old station is even more impressive on the inside and has a number of shops and bars as well as all the platforms and trains. '
 	*nl
-	act 'Leave the station': minut += 1 & gt 'cityTrain', 'start'
+	act 'Leave the train station': minut += 1 & gt 'cityTrain', 'start'
 	if Trainpass_day > daystart:
 		'You have <<Trainpass_day - daystart>> days left on your train pass.'
-		act 'Go to platforms': gt 'cityTrain', 'platform'
+		act 'Go to the platforms': gt 'cityTrain', 'platform'
 	else
 		act 'Go to the ticket office': gt 'cityTrain', 'tickets'
 	end

+ 1 - 1
locations/clothing_descriptions.qsrc

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ elseif CloQuality = 5:
 elseif CloQuality = 6:
 	$description = 'This good quality outfit'
 elseif CloQuality = 7:
-	$description = 'This is a outstanding quality outfit'
+	$description = 'This is an outstanding quality outfit'
 end
 
 if CloThinness = 1:

+ 4 - 4
locations/dateF.qsrc

@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/'+lover_picrand+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You give her a once over and then give her a amused look, "What did you say? I hope you know what you''re getting yourself into."'
+			'You give her a once over and then give her an amused look, "What did you say? I hope you know what you''re getting yourself into."'
 			'Not fazed by your brashness she continues on, "I know it''s just a front with girls like you. All of you just act hard but I''ve got you all figured out. Tell me this instead, what is your name?"'
 			act 'No':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/'+lover_picrand+'.jpg"></center>'
 			'You think <<$boydesc>> is cute-looking and even though you''re not sure about this you decide grasping her hand.'
 			'"Aren''t you going to tell me your name?" she asks.'
-	!!I would suggest a option for Sveta to be happy about it.
+	!!I would suggest an option for Sveta to be happy about it.
 			act 'Decline':gt 'dateF', 'decline'
 			act 'Happily tell her your name':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -271,12 +271,12 @@ end
 				
 if $args[0] = 'date_choice':
 	if sunWeather = 1:
-		!!if good weather, day/night, go to park is a option
+		!!if good weather, day/night, go to park is an option
 		act '"Let''s go to the park."':gt 'dateF', 'datepark'
 	end
 	!!not implemented yet
 	!!act '"Let''s go to a cafe"':gt 'dateF', 'datecafe'
-	!!once we add a bar to every town/city location this will always be a option.
+	!!once we add a bar to every town/city location this will always be an option.
 	act '"Let''s go to a bar."':gt 'dateF', 'datebar'
 end
 

+ 6 - 6
locations/dateM.qsrc

@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/'+lover_picrand+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You give him a once over and then give him a amused look, "What did you say? I hope you know what you''re getting yourself into."'
+			'You give him a once over and then give him an amused look, "What did you say? I hope you know what you''re getting yourself into."'
 			'Not fazed by your brashness he continues on, "I know it''s just a front with girls like you. All of you just act hard but I''ve got you all figured out. Tell me this instead, what is your name?"'
 			act 'No':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/'+lover_picrand+'.jpg"></center>'
 			'Even though you know it''s impolite to shake hands with the opposite sex, you think <<$boydesc>> is cute-looking and even though you''re not sure about this you decide grasping his hand.'
 			'"Aren''t you going to tell me your name?" he asks.'
-	!!I would suggest a option for Sveta to be happy about it.
+	!!I would suggest an option for Sveta to be happy about it.
 			act 'Decline':gt 'dateM', 'decline'
 			act 'Happily tell him your name':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -268,16 +268,16 @@ end
 				
 if $args[0] = 'date_choice':
 	if sunWeather = 1:
-		!!if good weather, day/night, go to park is a option
+		!!if good weather, day/night, go to park is an option
 		act '"Let''s go to the park."':gt 'dateM', 'datepark'
 	end
 	if $loc = 'pavResidential' or $loc = 'pavCommercial' or $loc = 'down':
-		!!if in pav or city center this is a option
+		!!if in pav or city center this is an option
 		act '"Let''s go to the movie theater."':gt 'dateM', 'datecinema'
 	end
-	!!is also a option, I am sure there is a cafe in every location.
+	!!is also an option, I am sure there is a cafe in every location.
 	act '"Let''s go to a cafe"':gt 'dateM', 'datecafe'
-	!!once we add a bar to every town/city location this will always be a option.
+	!!once we add a bar to every town/city location this will always be an option.
 	act '"Let''s go to a bar."':gt 'dateM', 'datebar'
 end
 

+ 2 - 2
locations/dibodi.qsrc

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bodiart':
 	bodimodel = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/oldtown/artstudio/downud1.jpg"></center>'
     '"I''m so glad, you agreed. Moses Kruzhinsky is the artist, everyone just calls him Masya." She pointed at a man painting a girl. "My name is Galina."'
-    'Then she turned back to the artist waving her arms and cried. "Masya, there is a new girl here that would be perfect for your work." The artist looked up and then stared at you with a appraising look, after a moment he nodded and went back to his current work.'
+    'Then she turned back to the artist waving her arms and cried. "Masya, there is a new girl here that would be perfect for your work." The artist looked up and then stared at you with an appraising look, after a moment he nodded and went back to his current work.'
     if lesbian > 0:'She chatted about a variety of things, using her hands to gesture often, which caused her breasts to move in pleasant ways, you barely pay attention to what she says as you find yourself staring at her chest.'
     'After a few minutes, perhaps noticing you paying more attention to her body than to what she is saying she falls silent.'
     'Several minutes of silence pass before she speaks again. "Our place is in the old town, you can come anytime, it was nice meeting you, but I need to get back to work."'
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bodiart1':
     '"I understand your reluctance, but you shouldn''t be worried. Moses Kruzhinsky is a great artist, everyone just calls him Masya." She pointed at a man painting a girl. "My name is Galina."'
     'You listen to her and tell her. "I have done photo shoots before, but this." Indicating the other models. "This is a bit different being naked in public in a crowd of people."'
     '"Don''t worry about it." said Galina "Even if we are completely naked, you don''t have to worry about rape or anything like that happening to you. We all watch out for one another and we will make sure no one bothers you, we all make sure no one bothers anyone, we are we almost like one big family."'
-    'Then she turned back to the artist waving her arms and cried. "Masya, there is a new girl for your work, who in my opinion would be perfect." The artist looked up and then stared at you with a appraising look, after a moment he nodded and went back to his work.'
+    'Then she turned back to the artist waving her arms and cried. "Masya, there is a new girl for your work, who in my opinion would be perfect." The artist looked up and then stared at you with an appraising look, after a moment he nodded and went back to his work.'
     if lesbian > 0:
         'She chatted about a variety of things, using her hands to gesture often, which caused her breasts to move in pleasant ways, you barely pay attention to her as you find yourself starting at her chest.'
         'After a bit, perhaps noticing you watching her body more than paying attention to her she falls silent.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/dimaEv.qsrc

@@ -751,7 +751,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkawarns':
 		pee +=1
 		face_write = 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/dom/blowbang4.jpg"></center>'
-		'The brutal rape seems to go on forever before Dimka finally achieves release. He stands panting over you then grabs hold of his mostly limp cock, points it at you, and then with a grunt, begins to empty his bladder. He directs the stream of hot piss all over your body, soaking your face and hair. You close your eyes, but the stinging liquid seeps in. Eventually, he runs out of piss and staggers away from you. Opening your eyes, you can see him rummaging through the desk. He comes back with a eyeliner pencil and uses it to write something on your forehead.'
+		'The brutal rape seems to go on forever before Dimka finally achieves release. He stands panting over you then grabs hold of his mostly limp cock, points it at you, and then with a grunt, begins to empty his bladder. He directs the stream of hot piss all over your body, soaking your face and hair. You close your eyes, but the stinging liquid seeps in. Eventually, he runs out of piss and staggers away from you. Opening your eyes, you can see him rummaging through the desk. He comes back with an eyeliner pencil and uses it to write something on your forehead.'
 		'"There. He says with satisfaction. All is forgiven. I will see you soon, dearest." Dimka unties you and leaves the room to take a shower. You waste no time gathering your clothes and escaping from him. You manage to make your way home and into your bathroom unseen. Criying you read between tears "Whore"'
 		gs 'arousal', 15, 'vaginal', 'rough'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'

+ 2 - 2
locations/dimaHome.qsrc

@@ -121,14 +121,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'study':
 	!!make it so there is only a 50% chance he is here even if the hours are correct
 	if ((hour >= 18 and week <= 5) or (hour >= 9 and week => 6)) and rand(0,1) = 0:
 		if met_DimkaDad = 0:
-			'You see Dimka''s father Leonid sitting behind a beautiful polished large wooden desk. He is well dressed and not bad looking, for a older guy. He seems to be working on something, you don''t think he has noticed you yet.'
+			'You see Dimka''s father Leonid sitting behind a beautiful polished large wooden desk. He is well dressed and not bad looking, for an older guy. He seems to be working on something, you don''t think he has noticed you yet.'
 			if hotcat > 6:
 				gt 'dimaHome', 'study1'
 			else
 				gt 'dimaHome', 'study2'
 			end
 		elseif met_DimkaDad = 1:
-			'You see Dimka''s father Leonid sitting behind a beautiful polished large wooden desk. He is well dressed and not bad looking, for a older guy. He seems to be working on something, you don''t think he has noticed you yet.'
+			'You see Dimka''s father Leonid sitting behind a beautiful polished large wooden desk. He is well dressed and not bad looking, for an older guy. He seems to be working on something, you don''t think he has noticed you yet.'
 			if hotcat > 6:
 				gt 'dimaHome', 'study3'
 			else

+ 1 - 1
locations/dimaRevenge.qsrc

@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ if ARGS[0] = 3:
 				You need stop him somehow. But what can you do?'
 				if grupvalue[3] > 50:
 					dimaRevChoice = 3
-					!!if Nerd social group 50 or higher this is a option
+					!!if Nerd social group 50 or higher this is an option
 					act 'Review the situation':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'

+ 5 - 5
locations/dinParty.qsrc

@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_toilet_event':
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_7_6.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'From the gentle caresses of girls you feel incredible pleasure, completely trusting them you feel totally relaxed. Then Ira takes Lena''s place licking your pussy, while Lena slides her tongue to your asshole as she begins to lick it.'
-							'From this dual tongue lashing you don''t last long. You start moaning loudly and your body spasms hard with a orgasm, coating Ira''s face from the wetness of your pussy. Once you orgasm passes both girls stand up and Lena starts licking Ira''s face, licking your wetness off her. You quickly join in licking Lena''s face licking Ira''s juices off her face. While Ira''s kisses you both in turns.'
+							'From this dual tongue lashing you don''t last long. You start moaning loudly and your body spasms hard with an orgasm, coating Ira''s face from the wetness of your pussy. Once you orgasm passes both girls stand up and Lena starts licking Ira''s face, licking your wetness off her. You quickly join in licking Lena''s face licking Ira''s juices off her face. While Ira''s kisses you both in turns.'
 							
 							$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 							gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'group'
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet_mast':
 	i = rand(1,3)
 	if i < 3:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_1_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
 	if i = 3:'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_1_<<i>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'With your arousal over powering your senses you couldn''t take it anymore, you pull your panties down and rigorously begin rubbing your clit. Once you are good and soaked you slide your fingers inside of yourself and finger fuck yourself, switching back and forth between rubbing your clit and fucking your fingers until you bring yourself to a orgasm.'
+	'With your arousal over powering your senses you couldn''t take it anymore, you pull your panties down and rigorously begin rubbing your clit. Once you are good and soaked you slide your fingers inside of yourself and finger fuck yourself, switching back and forth between rubbing your clit and fucking your fingers until you bring yourself to an orgasm.'
 	
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 5
@@ -276,7 +276,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dj_thank':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_boy_1.jpg"></center>'
 	'You are happy to take this opportunity, putting your fingers on the records you move them around, making god awful noises. The guys stop you before to long. "Ok I think that''s enough, I think you made my ears bleed." He says with a laugh.'
 	act 'Move away':gt $loc,$metka
-!why not add in a option here to start the series below?
+!why not add in an option here to start the series below?
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dj_boobs':
@@ -362,9 +362,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 	if pcs_inhib < 40:inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_gost_1_' + rand(1,7) + '.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'Moving to the rhythmic sounds, you indulge in a unrestrained dance.'
+	'Moving to the rhythmic sounds, you indulge in an unrestrained dance.'
 	'You jump, sway your body, and rock your booty, losing yourself in the general merriment.'
-	if pcs_danc >= 50:'You move your body perfectly with the rhythm of the music in a erotic way, getting you a lot of attention from others and you love they attention.'
+	if pcs_danc >= 50:'You move your body perfectly with the rhythm of the music in an erotic way, getting you a lot of attention from others and you love they attention.'
 	if pcs_danc < 50:'Your ridiculous movements during the dance does not bother anyone, You dance badly, but you do not care.'
 	act 'Have a rest':gt $loc,$metka
 	act 'Dance more':gt 'dinParty', 'dance' 

+ 5 - 1
locations/din_bad.qsrc

@@ -120,7 +120,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'd_bag':
 	'<center><table cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top"><tr>'
 	'<td cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0" valign="top">'
 	if salfetka > 0: 'You have <b><<salfetka>></b> wet wipes left in your purse. <a href="exec:dynamic $d_salf">Use a tissue</a>'
-	if pain_timer > totminut - 242 and painkiller > 0: 'Take a <a href="exec:pain[''killer''] = 1 & painkiller -= 1 & pain_timer = totminut & gs ''din_bad'', ''d_bag''">painkiller</a>. <b><<painkiller>></b> painkillers left in your purse.'
+	if painkiller > 0 and pain['total'] > 0 and pain['killer'] = 0: 
+		'You have <b><<painkiller>></b> painkiller'+iif(painkiller > 1, 's ', ' ')+'left in your purse. <a href="exec: pain[''killer''] += 1 & painkiller -= 1 & gs ''din_bad'', ''d_bag''">Take One</a>'
+	elseif painkiller > 0 and (pain['total'] = 0 or pain['killer'] > 0):
+		'You have <b><<painkiller>></b> painkiller'+iif(painkiller > 1, 's ', ' ')+'left in your purse.'
+	end
 	if mouthwash > 0 and (pcs_breath = 0 or cumloc[12] = 1): 
 		'There''s mouthwash in your purse. <b><<mouthwash>></b> uses remaining. <a href="exec:dynamic $d_mouthwash">Use mouthwash</a>'
 	elseif mouthwash > 0 and pcs_breath = 1 and cumloc[12] = 0:

+ 5 - 5
locations/din_pav.qsrc

@@ -28,8 +28,8 @@ $koncepodos = {
             set koncepo = 1
             '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/oldtown/vacanthouse/koncepod.jpg" ></center>'
             'Well, on the fence, too, every write - with blatant mockery said the old man.'
-            act'Send and go':gt 'dvor'
-            act'To cry and go':SUB = SUB + 1 & gt 'dvor'
+            act'Send and go': gt 'dvor'
+            act'To cry and go': sub += 1 & gt 'dvor'
                 
         end              
     end
@@ -93,13 +93,13 @@ $pavser1 = {
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
     psiho = 1
-    pcs_pcs_manna = pcs_pcs_manna - 30
+    pcs_manna -= 30
     gs'stat'
     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/oldtown/pavser/pavserjil.jpg" ></center>'
     'Before you appeared no longer a young man. From him it emanated a savage force and evidence were the dimensions of the body, barely distinguishable from-a beige raincoat and crumpled.'
     act 'Who you are?':
         *clr & cla        
-        pcs_pcs_manna = pcs_pcs_manna - 30
+        pcs_manna -= 30
         gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="'+FUNC('$face_image')+'"></center>'
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/oldtown/pavser/pavserjil.jpg" ></center>'
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ $pavser3 = {
     act '- The chair would look good in a hall, - You dropped it withheld.':
         *clr & cla
         sub += 15
-        pcs_pcs_manna = pcs_pcs_manna - 50
+        pcs_manna -= 50
         pcs_horny += 20
         gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="'+FUNC('$face_image')+'"></center>'

+ 2 - 6
locations/din_van.qsrc

@@ -530,8 +530,6 @@ $basin = {
 			menu_off = 1
 			*clr & cla
 			pcs_makeup = 1
-			cumspclnt = 2
-			gs 'cum_cleanup'
 			cumspclnt = 9
 			gs 'cum_cleanup'
 			cumspclnt = 11
@@ -569,7 +567,7 @@ $basin = {
 			pcs_makeup = 1
 			cumspclnt = 9
 			gs 'cum_cleanup'
-			cumspclnt = 13
+			cumspclnt = 11
 			gs 'cum_cleanup'
 			pcs_hairbsh = 0
 			if pcs_sweat > 19 : pcs_sweat -= 5
@@ -971,9 +969,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'private':
 	end
 
 	if painkiller > 0:
-		$pluralS = 's'
-		if painkiller = 1:$pluralS = ''
-		'You have <b><<painkiller>></b> painkiller<<$pluralS>>.'
+		'You have <b><<painkiller>></b> painkiller'+iif(painkiller > 1, 's.', '.')
 		if pain['total'] > 0 and pain['killer'] = 0:
 			act 'Take a painkiller':
 				cla

+ 1 - 1
locations/dk.qsrc

@@ -232,7 +232,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'holl':
 							minut += 20
 							gs 'stat'
 							'Alexei lives in a studio apartment. The decoration leaves no doubt in your mind that he lives alone - it would seem that Alexei is a bachelor, a musician and... and sometimes a drunk: Lying on the floor are bottles of beer and wine, huge speakers - as big as those you''d find on a concert - take up two entire corners of the living room and most of the floor near them is cluttered up by musical equipment that looks really expensive.' 
-							'He has you sit down on the sofa and brings a bottle of spirit and a snack, then sits down in an armchair opposite you and you two start drinking and talking. Alexei turns out to be a helpful, simple, cheerful guy with a rich biography and a interesting outlook on life and he somehow manages to make you thoughtful at one moment only to make you break out in laughter the next.' 
+							'He has you sit down on the sofa and brings a bottle of spirit and a snack, then sits down in an armchair opposite you and you two start drinking and talking. Alexei turns out to be a helpful, simple, cheerful guy with a rich biography and an interesting outlook on life and he somehow manages to make you thoughtful at one moment only to make you break out in laughter the next.' 
 							'Time passes and even though you drink quite a bit, you are handling the alcohol quite well; Alex, however, quickly goes from tipsy to drunk.'
 							'After a relatively long silence, he speaks up again. His speech is slurred but his look is sharp and there''s a glint in his eyes: "Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>, we''ve been having fun so far... but you didn''t just agree to come with me for a little chat, did you? I think it''s time we go to the main event. Come here."'
 							'You are completely taken aback by his arrogance for a moment and part of you is angry and wants to walk out. A much stronger, hornier part makes you rise to your feet and wobbly walk to Alexei''s chair.'

+ 3 - 3
locations/dolls.qsrc

@@ -178,10 +178,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'savva':
 		npc_rel['A204'] += 2
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Patch Work Dolls</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/savva/savva.jpg"></center>'
-		'You ask him about the shop. He tells you it opened a few years ago and they mostly cater to the college kids. Occasionally they get hassled by the local gopniks or police, but he likes the job. Then asks if you need help finding a outfit.'
+		'You ask him about the shop. He tells you it opened a few years ago and they mostly cater to the college kids. Occasionally they get hassled by the local gopniks or police, but he likes the job. Then asks if you need help finding an outfit.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'dolls', 'savva'
 	end
-!!this only shows up as a option if Anushka sent Sveta to the store from one of her chat options in anushka file or anushapt file.
+!!this only shows up as an option if Anushka sent Sveta to the store from one of her chat options in anushka file or anushapt file.
 	if Anush_dolls = 2:
 		act 'Anushka sent me':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'viola':
 		'You ask her about the shop. She tells you the place is only a few years old and is about the only place to buy a decent outfit in the whole city; unless you are willing to shop online, that is, which leads her to talking about the woes of online shopping where clothes don''t fit and never seem to have anywhere near as good a quality as they seem to on the pictures. You get the impression that the topic really bothers her and she could go on for some time if you let her.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'dolls', 'viola'
 	end
-!!this only shows up as a option if Anushka sent Sveta to the store from one of her chat options in anushka file or anushapt file.
+!!this only shows up as an option if Anushka sent Sveta to the store from one of her chat options in anushka file or anushapt file.
 	if Anush_dolls = 2:
 		act 'Anushka sent me':
 			*clr & cla

+ 4 - 4
locations/down.qsrc

@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ if shantpopala > 0:
 	'"Don''t lie to use you stupid bitch.", as he said that, he hits you on your head and you pass out.'
 	'You wake up somewhere out of town, you''re tied up and naked. You look down on yourself and notice traces of cum on your body, it also seems like that cum is flowing from your ass and your pussy.'
 	'You notice that the blokes, who captured you sit next to you and seem to have a break, some of them are smoking.'
-	'"Oh, she is finally awake, then the next fuck-cycle will be far more fun.", one of the men said, as he noticed you moving. Some of them are starting to get a evil grin on their face.'
+	'"Oh, she is finally awake, then the next fuck-cycle will be far more fun.", one of the men said, as he noticed you moving. Some of them are starting to get an evil grin on their face.'
 	'They got up and came back at you, barely a minute later you wished your were still knocked out, as these jackasses had their ways with. You tried to resist, but the tape hindered you from moving. Not long after, everything faded to black and you lost you consciousness again.'
 	'You feel groggy as you wake up, but it feels like someone is grapping you by the hair and shouts at you. "Let this be a lesson for you, bitch.", he shouts, then kicks you into the stomach and leaves. As you collapse on the ground holding your stomach in pain, you take a glimpse at the street and see the assholes driving away in their black jeep. The mainroad is about 200m away, you crawl most of the way there, but soon you can walk again and eventually you find your way back to one of the mainstreets.'
 
@@ -201,12 +201,12 @@ else
 end
 'Next door is the <<$desc_txt1>> followed by a <<$desc_txt2>> and <<$desc_txt3>> and the 5-star <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''hotel'', ''foyer''">Hotel Indigo</a> for your housing needs. Lastly, the local <<$desc_txt4>> and <<$desc_txt5>> can be found at the end of the road.'
 *nl
-if week < 6 and hour >= 9 and hour <= 17:
+if week < 6 and hour >= 7 and hour <= 17:
 	$desc_txt6 = '<a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''sentence'',''start''">The Regional Courthouse</a>'
 elseif week < 5 and hour > 17:
-	$desc_txt6 = '<a href="exec:msg ''The Regional Courthouse is closed and will reopen tomorrow at 9:00''">Regional Courthouse</a>'
+	$desc_txt6 = '<a href="exec:msg ''The Regional Courthouse is closed and will reopen tomorrow at 7:00''">Regional Courthouse</a>'
 else
-	$desc_txt6 = '<a href="exec:msg ''The Regional Courthouse is closed and will reopen on Monday at 9:00''">Regional Courthouse</a>'
+	$desc_txt6 = '<a href="exec:msg ''The Regional Courthouse is closed and will reopen on Monday at 7:00''">Regional Courthouse</a>'
 end
 $desc_txt7 = '<a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''police_station'',''start''">Main city police station</a>'
 'Away from the shops is both <<$desc_txt6>> and the <<$desc_txt7>>.'

+ 11 - 2
locations/ender.qsrc

@@ -334,11 +334,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'win':
 		if rikudo > 10:rikudo += 100
 		pcs_dom += 1
 		Win += 1
-		money += RAND(500,2000)
+		money += rand(500,2000)
+		gs 'stat'
 
 		'You''ve managed to batter one of your attackers face while you broke the others nose. As he spits you can see that his spit is mixed with blood as he can barely hold his hand up to surrender. You quickly run over to them and empty the cash from their pockets and mock them that this should cover you expenses. The attacker quickly rise up and run away in fear.'
 
-		act 'Logout':gt'street'
+		act 'Go home':
+			if curr_home = 1:
+				gt 'pavResidential'
+			elseif curr_home = 2:
+				gt 'gadukino'
+			elseif curr_home = 3:
+				gt 'street'
+			end
+		end
 	elseif ZverevaFight = 1:
 		zverSlutQW = 1
 		lariskaQwestStart = daystart + 7

+ 2 - 2
locations/experiment.qsrc

@@ -441,7 +441,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'testarea:lockeroom:gown':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\shared\clinic\experiment\gown.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	'You wear nothing but the long, plain white gown. It is secured behind your back by a strap, leaving your back and ass cheeks barely covered.'
-	'You feel as if you were naked, and a insecurity comes over you...'
+	'You feel as if you were naked, and an insecurity comes over you...'
 
 	if expVolunteer = 0:act 'Leave the room and go back to nurse':gt 'experiment', 'testarea:start:treatment:ask1'
 	if expVolunteer = 1:act 'Leave the room and go back to nurse':gt 'experiment', 'deskTalk:volunteer:start'
@@ -2389,7 +2389,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'testarea:treatment:room:event:nurse:talk:Q7':
 	'"And?" the excitement is killing you...'
 	'"They don''t survive it. Better said, their ''devices'' don''t survive it, and they slowly follow afterwards." she explains.'
 	'You gasp, "They died because why, their cocks... fell off?"'
-	'The nurse nods, "Crudely said, yes. It can cause a incurable gangrene that in the end causes the victim to die. That is another reason why doctors use these africans, people without documents, without connection to reality. People who are missed by nobody... Until they finally fix this side effect, that is."'
+	'The nurse nods, "Crudely said, yes. It can cause an incurable gangrene that in the end causes the victim to die. That is another reason why doctors use these africans, people without documents, without connection to reality. People who are missed by nobody... Until they finally fix this side effect, that is."'
 	nurseTalk = 0
 	act 'Continue':gt 'experiment', 'testarea:treatment:room:event:nurse:check'
 end

+ 1 - 1
locations/femcyc.qsrc

@@ -756,7 +756,7 @@ end
 
 
 !{Luteal to Menstration or Pregnancy. First it verifies this is the Luteal phase. Then it adds an hour to the age of the eggs. Then if there is a fertized egg, it rolls a random chance. if the egg age is low, it checks for risk of an entopic pregnancy. This is increased with older age and if you have a tubal ligation sterilization.}
-!{If there is a ectopic pregnancy, it sets the first unborn baby in the array to this. Ectopic pregnancies occur when the fertilized egg implants "too early" after fertlization (and therefore in the fallopian tube). The risk is higher with age, but this is also a common complication with certain forms of birth control, notably tubal ligation. Each egg could be different. It then removes the fertilized egg, adds an embryo, Then it adds some pregnancy hormone if you arent already pregnant, and calls you officially pregnant.}
+!{If there is an ectopic pregnancy, it sets the first unborn baby in the array to this. Ectopic pregnancies occur when the fertilized egg implants "too early" after fertlization (and therefore in the fallopian tube). The risk is higher with age, but this is also a common complication with certain forms of birth control, notably tubal ligation. Each egg could be different. It then removes the fertilized egg, adds an embryo, Then it adds some pregnancy hormone if you arent already pregnant, and calls you officially pregnant.}
 !{Otherwise, it adds your womb sterility factor to the imp_rand. Then it checks if your imp_rand crosses a threshold for implantation. Younger women implant easier. It then sets the next baby to the next unimplanted baby in your kid array. It registers the kid as a normal pregnancy, removes a fertilized egg and adds an embryo. Then it adds some pregnancy hormone if you arent already pregnant, and calls you officially pregnant.}
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'cyc3':

+ 5 - 2
locations/fit.qsrc

@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dressing room':
 		'"You can at least tell me your name, maniac, seeing as you did not even have the decency to do so before you raped me." The girl says, catching her breath.'
 		'"I am <<$pcs_nickname>>, and how can I rape someone so keen?" You ask trying to find your panties.'
 		'"Looking for this?" asks the girl twirling your panties on her finger. "I''m Tanya, and you seduced me, I have never been with a girl before, and with very good reason. I live here with my parents, if you want to come for a visit."'
-		'"Okay that would be nice, can I have my briefs?" you say holding out your hand.'
+		'"Okay that would be nice, can I have my panties back?" you ask, while holding out your hand.'
 		'"Nope, no return, there must be something of a momento from my first girl." With these words, Tanya slips your panties in her pocket and leaves.'
 
 		act 'Further':gt 'fit', 'dressing room'
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dressing room':
 				gt 'danceclass'
 			end
 
-			act 'Go to a crossfit workout':
+			act 'Go do a crossfit workout':
 				cla
 				gt 'crossfit_north_box', 'box'
 			end
@@ -522,6 +522,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kickboxing':
 	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Kickboxing Gym</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/gym/kickboxing/kik.jpg"></center>'
+	'This section is dominated by the ring itself, square like a boxing ring and the only equipment that can''t be easily moved.'
+	'Around it there are various punching bags of different sizes and weights and a couple of coaches with practice pads.'
+	'You can try your luck in a fight here on Saturdays but safety concerns limit everyone to a maximum of 1 bout per week.'
 
 	act 'Work on your jabs':
 		cla

+ 1 - 1
locations/gameover.qsrc

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ gs 'stat'
 
 if over = 1:
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/gameover/deadgirl.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are dragged out by the morgue attendants, the pathologist noted that you died from a unknown cause. Soon your body was handed over to your parents...'
+	'You are dragged out by the morgue attendants, the pathologist noted that you died from an unknown cause. Soon your body was handed over to your parents...'
 elseif over = 2:
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/gameover/over.jpg"></center>'
 	if StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:

+ 1 - 1
locations/gdksport.qsrc

@@ -1142,7 +1142,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Ivan_bored':
 			'He rubs the tip of his dick against your asshole for a couple of moments and then you feel a sharp pain as he pushes it in. With only your saliva as lubrication, it doesn''t slide in as easily. You bite your lip and cry out a little in pain. He relaxes a little and rubs your back as he takes it slow, giving you time to stretch and adjust to his cock invading your ass.'
 			'He slowly strokes his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock in your ass, with each stroke pushing it just a little deeper in your ass. Once he is about half way in your moans turn from pain to pleasure, while one of your hands starts rubbing your clit. You start moaning louder and panting, your pussy is now soaking wet. After a couple of minutes the pleasure is building up inside of your body so much you no longer even need to stimulate your clitorous any longer. "Fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>, you not only have the hottest ass of any girls in school, but the tightest one I have ever fucked." Ivan says as he can tell your getting into it, grabbing your hips with both hands. He drives himself balls deep into your ass, eliciting a squeak of pain from you, but sensation of pain is quickly overwhelmed by pleasure.'
 			'Holding onto your hips with both hands, he holds you steady and keeps you from pulling away, as he jack hammers his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock balls deep in your ass. You moan in pain and pleasure, mostly pleasure, the sounds of your moans, almost drowned out the sounds of his skin slapping against yours, his balls slapping against your wet pussy. You place your hands against the stall wall to keep him from driving your head into it, from his powerful and violent thrusts. As he abuses your poor little asshole, you find yourself loving every second of it.'
-			'You have a intense orgasm that leaves your legs shaking and barely able to keep standing. You are almost to the point where you are unable to take it anymore, either from the intense pleasure or the growing burning sensation in your ass. Either way the matter is moot, as Ivan drives himself once more balls deep into your ass, but this time holds himself there. You feel his cock twitching as he shoots hot sperm deep in your ass, spurt after spurt filling you up with his seamen in what seems a almost unending stream. Finally he takes a shuddering breath and pulls out of you, leaving you to almost collapse with out his support.'
+			'You have an intense orgasm that leaves your legs shaking and barely able to keep standing. You are almost to the point where you are unable to take it anymore, either from the intense pleasure or the growing burning sensation in your ass. Either way the matter is moot, as Ivan drives himself once more balls deep into your ass, but this time holds himself there. You feel his cock twitching as he shoots hot sperm deep in your ass, spurt after spurt filling you up with his seamen in what seems an almost unending stream. Finally he takes a shuddering breath and pulls out of you, leaving you to almost collapse with out his support.'
 			'You both start to get dressed, him faster than you, as your still unsteady on your feet, from your shaky legs. Once he is done getting dressed he helps you gather the rest of your clothes from where he tossed them aside. As you are seeing to the final adjustments of your clothes he goes to the bathroom door and looks out both ways down the hall, motioning you over just as the class bell rings. Oh well, at least you have a good excuse to be a little late, you think to yourself with a smile.'
 			'As you start to go out the door, he stops you and squeezes your ass with his strong hand and says. "That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>, you are coolest chick in school, not to mention the hottest. Maybe we can do this again sometime soon, or maybe I will come see you in the shower at the community center some night, maybe even tonight." He grins and winks at you, giving your ass a hard slap, as he rushes off to class. You only have time to nod in agreement to his idea of doing this again, you bite your lip as you watch him go. You have mixed feelings about this, Ivan is a great guy and a lot of fun, but you know he doesn''t want a girlfriend. He just wants to be friends with benefits, but is that enough for you? You don''t have time to think on it more as you hurry to class.'
 

+ 4 - 4
locations/gdktoilet.qsrc

@@ -388,7 +388,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mensmast':
 					gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'guy from the men''s bathroom', rand(19,45)
 					npc_dick[$npclastgenerated] = RAND(10,24)
 					gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
-					'You look up and notice the stall door opens. Right then a man in a orange jumpsuit walks in. He tells you, "Do you know where you are?" Unable to respond after your intense orgasm the man unzips his jumpsuit and takes out his <<npc_dick[$npclastgenerated]>>cm dick and places it near your mouth.'
+					'You look up and notice the stall door opens. Right then a man in an orange jumpsuit walks in. He tells you, "Do you know where you are?" Unable to respond after your intense orgasm the man unzips his jumpsuit and takes out his <<npc_dick[$npclastgenerated]>>cm dick and places it near your mouth.'
 					if pcs_dom >= 20:
 						act 'Run away':
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -487,7 +487,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mensglory':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/mens/sex/4standmiss.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'He suddenly pulls out of you and roughly turns you back around, and picks you up. You spread your legs and he lowers you back down, till you feel his <<$dick_girth>> dick slide back inside of your pussy. He carries you, fucking you the whole time, you are impressed by his strength, as he manages to not only carry you, but fuck you at the same time. He slams your back roughly but not painfully onto a open stall door and presses your body against it, then he starts fucking you in harder. It seems he is nowhere near ready to cum.'
+				'He suddenly pulls out of you and roughly turns you back around, and picks you up. You spread your legs and he lowers you back down, till you feel his <<$dick_girth>> dick slide back inside of your pussy. He carries you, fucking you the whole time, you are impressed by his strength, as he manages to not only carry you, but fuck you at the same time. He slams your back roughly but not painfully onto an open stall door and presses your body against it, then he starts fucking you in harder. It seems he is nowhere near ready to cum.'
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'rough'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -506,7 +506,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mensglory':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/cum1,1.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'You pull away right before he cums. You start to stroke his dick and you open your mouth. His hot load fills your mouth, it tastes salty and warm.'
-							act 'swallow':
+							act 'Swallow':
 								minut +=5
 								swallow += 1
 								spafinloc = 12
@@ -517,7 +517,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mensglory':
 								'You decide to swallow his cum. The man says, "You are much better than that hole in the wall." You smile and nod to him and get dressed. You leave the bathroom feeling satisfied and relaxed.'
 								act 'Leave': gt'gdktoilet', 'start'
 							end
-							act 'spit':
+							act 'Spit':
 								minut +=5
 								spafinloc = 10
 								gs 'cum_manage'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gopsex.qsrc

@@ -1684,7 +1684,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hide':
 	if $ARGS[1] = 'text_sex_cumface':
 		txt_sex_cumface = RAND(0,3)
 		if txt_sex_cumface = 0:$txt_sex_cumface = '<<$boydesc>> covers all your face with his hot sticky semen.'
-		if txt_sex_cumface = 1:$txt_sex_cumface = '<<$boydesc>> pulls out his cock and aims it at your face. You see its purple head from which spurts his cum. You feel as warm sticky blobs are landing on your face and a after a while his hot cum runs down over your chin and drips on the ground.'
+		if txt_sex_cumface = 1:$txt_sex_cumface = '<<$boydesc>> pulls out his cock and aims it at your face. You see its purple head from which spurts his cum. You feel as warm sticky blobs are landing on your face and after a while his hot cum runs down over your chin and drips on the ground.'
 		if txt_sex_cumface = 2:$txt_sex_cumface = '"Oh fuck!" <<$boydesc>> shouts out and pulls his cock out of your sweet captivity and takes it in his hand. A first long stream appears, you screw up your eyes and feel as a trickle of semen hits your chin and made a rope over your cheek. The second shot he aims deliberately straight at your cheek so you have barely a chance to close your eyes. This eruption is rich enough to cover your face with sticky cream.'
 		if txt_sex_cumface = 3:$txt_sex_cumface = '<<$boydesc>> shifts his cock up to front of your face. At that moment a sticky stream strikes straight into your <<$liptalk3>>. Trickles of semen is flowing down along your chin and drips on the ground. Ropes of sticky cum hangs down from your chin now. <<$boydesc>> spots it after a while when he finally complacently releases last drops of his semen.'
 		'<<$txt_sex_cumface>>'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gpoli.qsrc

@@ -1752,7 +1752,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maternity_ward_donation':
 			nipple_cream = 0
 			if lactatemv > lactatemm/2:
 				'The nurse looks at your breasts'
-				'Nurse: Looks like you could go for a another pumping...shall we?'
+				'Nurse: Looks like you could go for another pumping...shall we?'
 				act 'have your breasts pumped again': gt 'gpoli', 'maternity_ward_donation'
 				act 'enough for today':
 					*clr & cla

+ 7 - 7
locations/gschool_boys_bathroom.qsrc

@@ -748,7 +748,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6':
 	elseif gruptipe = 4 and hotcat < 5:
 		'After a couple of minutes, you hear several boy''s voices and recognize several of them as gopniks from your class. Several stall doors slam open, their echo loud as thunder and just as startling, and one of them says, "Man, you sure?" There is a pause in the noise as another answers, "I''m telling you, I saw her come in here just after the bell rang." A few more doors of stalls slam open until, suddenly, your door is the one to slam. You see Dan standing there, grinning at you. "Found her. You was right." He steps in and grabs you around the waist, dragging you out of the stall.'
 		*nl
-		'When they see it is you they all look disappointed. You even hear one of them say, "Oh, it''s you." They let go of you and walk away, back towards the door. When you hear another one say, "Well, what the fuck are we going to do now?" Then Vitek speaks up, "Shut up, I got a idea." With that, they leave without another word to you.'
+		'When they see it is you they all look disappointed. You even hear one of them say, "Oh, it''s you." They let go of you and walk away, back towards the door. When you hear another one say, "Well, what the fuck are we going to do now?" Then Vitek speaks up, "Shut up, I got an idea." With that, they leave without another word to you.'
 		if school_bunk = 0:
 			act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 		else
@@ -1001,7 +1001,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'companyb1':
 	act 'Wait them out':
 		cla
 		*nl
-		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having a orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her harder. A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
+		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her harder. A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
 		if school_bunk = 0:
 			act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 		else
@@ -1046,7 +1046,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'companyb2':
 	act 'Wait':
 		cla
 		*nl
-		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having a orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her ass harder. A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
+		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her ass harder. A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
 		if school_bunk = 0:
 			act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 		else
@@ -1092,7 +1092,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'companyb3':
 		act 'Wait':
 			cla
 			*nl
-			'You banish these thoughts from your mind - with great effort - and decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having a orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her ass harder. A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
+			'You banish these thoughts from your mind - with great effort - and decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her ass harder. A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
 			if school_bunk = 0:
 				act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 			else
@@ -1190,7 +1190,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Join them':
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			*nl
-			'Anushka starts to scream as her body rocks by muscle spasms, obviously having a orgasm. Arkadi just fucks her right through her orgasm, shortly after he pulls out and pushes her down. She quickly turns around and drops to her knees, opening her mouth and sticking out her tongue. He gives his cock a few jerks, before his cum starts flying all over her face and in her mouth. Once he finishes, she sucks his dick, sucking out the last few drops of cum from him. Afterwards as he gets dressed she uses her fingers to clean up her face of cum, sucking the cum from her fingers before she gets dressed as well. As she finishes getting dressed she looks over at you and winks, "Hope you enjoyed the show." Then the two of them leave.'
+			'Anushka starts to scream as her body rocks by muscle spasms, obviously having an orgasm. Arkadi just fucks her right through her orgasm, shortly after he pulls out and pushes her down. She quickly turns around and drops to her knees, opening her mouth and sticking out her tongue. He gives his cock a few jerks, before his cum starts flying all over her face and in her mouth. Once he finishes, she sucks his dick, sucking out the last few drops of cum from him. Afterwards as he gets dressed she uses her fingers to clean up her face of cum, sucking the cum from her fingers before she gets dressed as well. As she finishes getting dressed she looks over at you and winks, "Hope you enjoyed the show." Then the two of them leave.'
 			act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 		act 'Just watch':
@@ -1201,7 +1201,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Join them':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/coupleturn.jpg"></center>'
 			'He lifts one of her legs off the ground and turns her sideways. Her leg is barely up in the air when his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock penetrates her pussy. You would be impressed with his stamina if you weren''t so occupied with enjoying this.'
 			*nl
-			'Anushka starts to scream as her body rocks by muscle spasms, obviously having a orgasm. Arkadi just fucks her right through her orgasm, shortly after he pulls out and pushes her down. She quickly turns around and drops to her knees, opening her mouth and sticking out her tongue. He gives his cock a few jerks, before his cum starts flying all over her face and in her mouth. Once he finishes, she sucks his dick, sucking out the last few drops of cum from him. Afterwards as he gets dressed she uses her fingers to clean up her face of cum, sucking the cum from her fingers before she gets dressed as well. As she finishes getting dressed she looks over at you and winks, "Hope you enjoyed the show." Then the two of them leave.'
+			'Anushka starts to scream as her body rocks by muscle spasms, obviously having an orgasm. Arkadi just fucks her right through her orgasm, shortly after he pulls out and pushes her down. She quickly turns around and drops to her knees, opening her mouth and sticking out her tongue. He gives his cock a few jerks, before his cum starts flying all over her face and in her mouth. Once he finishes, she sucks his dick, sucking out the last few drops of cum from him. Afterwards as he gets dressed she uses her fingers to clean up her face of cum, sucking the cum from her fingers before she gets dressed as well. As she finishes getting dressed she looks over at you and winks, "Hope you enjoyed the show." Then the two of them leave.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'group'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -1238,7 +1238,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'companyb4':
 		cla & *clr
 		pcs_horny += 15
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having a orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her harder. A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close, and all is quiet once more.'
+		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her harder. A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close, and all is quiet once more.'
 		if school_bunk = 0:
 			act 'Continue playing on phone':gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 		else

+ 12 - 12
locations/gschool_detention.qsrc

@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 end
 
 !!new detention events
-!!If Sveta is a outcast, nerd or popular girl it can be the following girls - Paulina, Lena, Lera, Alyona, Lina, Lariska, Christina, or Stasya
+!!If Sveta is an outcast, nerd or popular girl it can be the following girls - Paulina, Lena, Lera, Alyona, Lina, Lariska, Christina, or Stasya
 !!If Sveta is a jock it can be the following girls - Paulina, Lena, Lera, Alyona, or Christina
 !!If Sveta is a Gopnik it can be the following girls - Paulina, Lena, Lera, or Alyona
 if $ARGS[0] = 'wedgie':
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Anushka_wedgie':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/atomicwed.jpg"></center>'
 				'When you let go and put your hands up to show you have stopped she, yanks you forward and trips you. Once you are on the ground, you try to turn over but she holds onto your panties and starts dragging you across the floor by your panties. You struggle to get up but she keeps pulling you before you can get your balance and you can''t pry her hands off your panties. Just then the teacher walks in. "What''s the meaning of this? Miss Konstantinov let go of her at once." Anushka lets go, but not with out a final yank.'
 				*nl
-				'The teacher speaks again. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>> take your seat. The rest of you take your seats and study. Miss Konstantinov come with me." He grabs Anushka roughly by the arm and drags her out of the library. You go and take your seat and try and pick your underwear out of your twat and crack of your ass. It is all stretched out of shape, it might even be ruined. About fifteen minutes later the teacher returns alone and takes a seat, he keeps a eye on everyone the rest of detention.'
+				'The teacher speaks again. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>> take your seat. The rest of you take your seats and study. Miss Konstantinov come with me." He grabs Anushka roughly by the arm and drags her out of the library. You go and take your seat and try and pick your underwear out of your twat and crack of your ass. It is all stretched out of shape, it might even be ruined. About fifteen minutes later the teacher returns alone and takes a seat, he keeps an eye on everyone the rest of detention.'
 				gs 'gschool_detention', 'sitting_events'
 			end
 			act 'Refuse to let go first': gt 'anushka', 'wedgie fight'
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'upskirt1':
 	if $rand_girl = 'Veronika' or $rand_girl = 'Ekaterina' or $rand_girl = 'Anushka': jump'newupskirtgirl1'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/spreadg.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you are sitting at a table bored out of your mind waiting for detention to end. You start looking around and you notice <<$rand_girl>> sitting at a table across from you, after a few minutes she leans back in her chair and relaxes. Spreading her legs slightly as she does, the movement draws your eyes and you are given a eye full. Apparently she forgot her panties today because her pussy is now on full display for any to see, well any from the right vantage point, like yourself.'
+	'As you are sitting at a table bored out of your mind waiting for detention to end. You start looking around and you notice <<$rand_girl>> sitting at a table across from you, after a few minutes she leans back in her chair and relaxes. Spreading her legs slightly as she does, the movement draws your eyes and you are given an eye full. Apparently she forgot her panties today because her pussy is now on full display for any to see, well any from the right vantage point, like yourself.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -268,7 +268,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'upskirt1':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/spreadg.jpg"></center>'
-		'You decided it is none of your business and do your best to ignore it. After several minutes one of the boys takes notice and walks over to the table and puts his phone under it and starts taking pictures. She quickly realizes what''s going on and closes her legs together and blushes, soon the two of them are in a heated whisper argument which soon draws the teachers attention. When both feign nothing is wrong and go back to their seats, the teacher keeps a eye on them for a bit before losing interest.'
+		'You decided it is none of your business and do your best to ignore it. After several minutes one of the boys takes notice and walks over to the table and puts his phone under it and starts taking pictures. She quickly realizes what''s going on and closes her legs together and blushes, soon the two of them are in a heated whisper argument which soon draws the teachers attention. When both feign nothing is wrong and go back to their seats, the teacher keeps an eye on them for a bit before losing interest.'
 		'The rest of detention passes much more quietly with nothing else interesting happening.'
 		act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_detention', 'end'
 	end
@@ -484,7 +484,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strange':
 			npc_rel['A152'] -= 5
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/feofan/sex/school/det1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You call the teacher over and all color leaves Feofan''s face. He pleads with you not to tell on him but when the teacher arrives, you let him know what he was doing. After a bit of arguing, the teacher grabs the magazine from him, looks it over and let''s him know that what got him into detention is nothing compared to the trouble he''s in now. The teacher has Feofan move to a seat near his desk so he can keep a eye on him, then thanks you and leads Feofan to the front of the library.'
+			'You call the teacher over and all color leaves Feofan''s face. He pleads with you not to tell on him but when the teacher arrives, you let him know what he was doing. After a bit of arguing, the teacher grabs the magazine from him, looks it over and let''s him know that what got him into detention is nothing compared to the trouble he''s in now. The teacher has Feofan move to a seat near his desk so he can keep an eye on him, then thanks you and leads Feofan to the front of the library.'
 			'As they walk away, Feofan gives you a really dirty look. You spend the rest of the time playing on your phone occasionally getting dirty looks from him, whenever the teacher is not looking.'
 			act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_detention', 'end'
 		end
@@ -513,7 +513,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strange':
 				$orgasm_or = 'no'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'dom'
 				gs 'stat'
-!!want to change this to needing dom/will what ever we use in place of dom in the future or being a gopnik, a gopnik bullying a nerd should always be a option.
+!!want to change this to needing dom/will what ever we use in place of dom in the future or being a gopnik, a gopnik bullying a nerd should always be an option.
 				if pcs_dom >= 10:
 					act 'Glaze his face':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -582,7 +582,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ass_fuck':
 	*nl
 	'He pauses and it takes a moment for him to process what you just said but when it dawns on him that he can realize his porn magazine fantasy, he wastes no time, perhaps afraid you might change your mind: He climbs up on the table next to you, spooning you, then starts rubbing the tip of his dick against your anus. He rubs it against your pussy again, gathering more juices from there, and repeats the process; you almost didn''t expect him to be this considerate when you stated your desire. When he has your puckered hole lubed up a little with your own fluids, he gently eases his dick into your ass. Eliciting a moan of pleasure and pain from you, he slowly slides his way deeper into your ass, only stopping when he feels you tense up. Then, he start fucking your ass, gingerly at first, savoring the feeling of being inside your other hole.'
 	*nl
-	'He even reaches over and starts rubbing your clit as he moves in and out, and as your moans get louder, you feel yourself building up towards a orgasm, but his slow pace is driving you mad and you can''t take it anymore. You reach back, grab his ass and pull him closer so his dick slides deeper up your ass. Perceptive as ever, he takes the hint and works his way deeper into you butt until he is balls deep. Once there, he starts fucking you faster too, slowly building up speed until he is hammering your ass, giving you exactly what you wanted, what you needed.'
+	'He even reaches over and starts rubbing your clit as he moves in and out, and as your moans get louder, you feel yourself building up towards an orgasm, but his slow pace is driving you mad and you can''t take it anymore. You reach back, grab his ass and pull him closer so his dick slides deeper up your ass. Perceptive as ever, he takes the hint and works his way deeper into you butt until he is balls deep. Once there, he starts fucking you faster too, slowly building up speed until he is hammering your ass, giving you exactly what you wanted, what you needed.'
 	$orgasm_txt = 'Another, even more intense orgasm crashes through your body and to your luck, the hand of his that isn''t rubbing your clit clamps tightly over your mouth, muffling your cries.'
 	$orgasm_or = 'no'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 10, 'dom'
@@ -936,7 +936,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'eatout':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/eatout.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You watch them, he seems to really know what he is doing, she is fighting to keep from screaming out, many minutes go by. Then she starts to spasm, obviously having a orgasm. He keeps it up through her whole orgasm, once it is finally over. She stands up and pulls up her panties, while he starts to unbutton his pants. She says something that leads to a bit of a heated discussion that you can''t quite hear but you think you know what it is about. Finally he gives up and buttons his pants back and they both head back for the front of the library. As she gives him a kiss on the cheek.'
+		'You watch them, he seems to really know what he is doing, she is fighting to keep from screaming out, many minutes go by. Then she starts to spasm, obviously having an orgasm. He keeps it up through her whole orgasm, once it is finally over. She stands up and pulls up her panties, while he starts to unbutton his pants. She says something that leads to a bit of a heated discussion that you can''t quite hear but you think you know what it is about. Finally he gives up and buttons his pants back and they both head back for the front of the library. As she gives him a kiss on the cheek.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Masturbate':
@@ -979,7 +979,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'finger':
 		cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/blowjob.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You watch them, he seems to really know what he is doing, she is fighting to keep from screaming out, many minutes go by. She pulls her shirt and bra off half way through. After a bit more finger banging from him, she starts to spasm, obviously having a orgasm. He keeps it up through her whole orgasm, once it is finally over. She drops down to her knee''s as he pulls his dick out of his pants, she immediately starts sucking his cock. She bobs her head up and down along the shaft of his cock, sucking it for all she is worth. Finally he grunts, she slows down a bit and uses her hand to help milk his cock. Only once he has finished does she stop sucking his dick. Having obviously swallowed his whole load, they both get dressed and then head back to the front of the library.'
+		'You watch them, he seems to really know what he is doing, she is fighting to keep from screaming out, many minutes go by. She pulls her shirt and bra off half way through. After a bit more finger banging from him, she starts to spasm, obviously having an orgasm. He keeps it up through her whole orgasm, once it is finally over. She drops down to her knee''s as he pulls his dick out of his pants, she immediately starts sucking his cock. She bobs her head up and down along the shaft of his cock, sucking it for all she is worth. Finally he grunts, she slows down a bit and uses her hand to help milk his cock. Only once he has finished does she stop sucking his dick. Having obviously swallowed his whole load, they both get dressed and then head back to the front of the library.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Masturbate':
@@ -1024,7 +1024,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'doggy':
 		cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/doggy'+rand(1,2)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You watch them, for a bit and they go at it for some time. She especially seems to really be having the time of her life. She is fighting to keep from screaming out, for several minutes as she starts to spasm, obviously having a orgasm. He keeps it up through her whole orgasm, once it is finally over. He hammers away at her for a few more minutes before pulling out and shooting his load all over her ass. Afterwards they get cleaned up and dressed, exchanging a few quiet words, before heading back to the front of the library.'
+		'You watch them, for a bit and they go at it for some time. She especially seems to really be having the time of her life. She is fighting to keep from screaming out, for several minutes as she starts to spasm, obviously having an orgasm. He keeps it up through her whole orgasm, once it is finally over. He hammers away at her for a few more minutes before pulling out and shooting his load all over her ass. Afterwards they get cleaned up and dressed, exchanging a few quiet words, before heading back to the front of the library.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Masturbate':
@@ -1067,7 +1067,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'couple':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/couple.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You watch them, they are very passionate and surprisingly tender in their love making and that is what this is. They are making love instead of fucking, many minutes go by. Then she starts to spasm, obviously having a orgasm. He keeps it up through her whole orgasm, once it is finally over. They quickly get dressed and straighten up their clothes, they have one more final passionate kiss before heading back to the front of the library.'
+		'You watch them, they are very passionate and surprisingly tender in their love making and that is what this is. They are making love instead of fucking, many minutes go by. Then she starts to spasm, obviously having an orgasm. He keeps it up through her whole orgasm, once it is finally over. They quickly get dressed and straighten up their clothes, they have one more final passionate kiss before heading back to the front of the library.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Masturbate':
@@ -1109,7 +1109,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesbian':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/udesklick.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You watch them, Lera seems to really know how to lick pussy. Most likely she has a lot of practice at it, after awhile Lena finally has a orgasm. Once she does she pushes Lera''s face away form her pussy and gets dressed, as Lera continues to masturbate herself for some time before she finally has a orgasm as well. Once she does she moves up and takes a seat next to Lena, all smiles and the two of them start to talk. The seem intent on staying their for the rest of detention.'
+		'You watch them, Lera seems to really know how to lick pussy. Most likely she has a lot of practice at it, after awhile Lena finally has an orgasm. Once she does she pushes Lera''s face away form her pussy and gets dressed, as Lera continues to masturbate herself for some time before she finally has an orgasm as well. Once she does she moves up and takes a seat next to Lena, all smiles and the two of them start to talk. The seem intent on staying their for the rest of detention.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Masturbate':

+ 2 - 2
locations/gschool_events.qsrc

@@ -420,7 +420,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rand_scoolboy':
 !!instead of random lets make it Vitek, Dan, or Vasily which uses group 1 in this pav_sex act. Or Roman, Lavrenti, Radomir or Arkadi then it is group two for the pav_sex act
 			'The brazen look on his face betrays <<$rand_boy>>, it must have been him touching your ass. Knowing him, he probably would''ve gone further if there weren''t so many people here.'
 		elseif scoolboy = 5:
-!!Random is fine since we only have two of them currently and Fedor if he becomes a outcast but again block Fedor if Sveta is still seeing him.
+!!Random is fine since we only have two of them currently and Fedor if he becomes an outcast but again block Fedor if Sveta is still seeing him.
 			'<<$rand_boy>> is trembling slightly, his eyes shifting back and forth as he awkwardly tries to not be noticed by you. It must''ve been him.'
 			'"<<$rand_boy>>, are you out of your mind!?" you cry out, as the other boys burst out into laughter. You can see the panic in his face as he raises his hands in defense, rapidly apologizing:'
 			'"Please, I didn''t want to! They made me, I promise! I''m sorry!"'
@@ -432,7 +432,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rand_scoolboy':
 			'Wait a minute... you don''t recognize any of these people! You must be in the wrong classroom!'
 		end
 		if npc_rel[$school_static_num] <= 50 and scoolboy ! 3:
-!!this option doesn''t show up if it is a outcast since the text above says you believe him.
+!!this option doesn''t show up if it is an outcast since the text above says you believe him.
 			act 'Slap him across the face as hard as you can':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel[$school_static_num] -= 5

+ 4 - 4
locations/gschool_girls_bathroom.qsrc

@@ -420,7 +420,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'company1':
 		*clr & cla
 		pcs_horny += 15
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having a orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her "harder!". A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close, and all is quiet once more.'
+		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her "harder!". A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close, and all is quiet once more.'
 		if school_bunk = 0:
 			act 'Continue playing on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 		else
@@ -459,7 +459,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'company2':
 		*clr & cla
 		pcs_horny += 15
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having a orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her ass "harder!". A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
+		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her ass "harder!". A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
 		if school_bunk = 0:
 			act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 		else
@@ -502,7 +502,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'company3':
 		act 'Wait':
 			cla
 			*nl
-			'You banish these thoughts from your mind - with great effort - and decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having a orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her ass "harder!". A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
+			'You banish these thoughts from your mind - with great effort - and decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her ass "harder!". A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
 			if school_bunk = 0:
 				act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 			else
@@ -563,7 +563,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'company4':
 		*clr & cla
 		pcs_horny += 15
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having a orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her "harder!". A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close, and all is quiet once more.'
+		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her "harder!". A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close, and all is quiet once more.'
 		if school_bunk = 0:
 			act 'Continue playing on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 		else

+ 3 - 3
locations/gschool_lessons.qsrc

@@ -483,7 +483,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			elseif VK = 1 and npc_rel['A18'] >= 80 and zverRageQW = 0 or VK = 1 and grupTipe = 2 and zverRageQW = 0:
 				VKrand = rand(1,3)
 				if salocatnow >= 5:
-					'As you are browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina Zvereva, reading; "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I can''t help but notice that you have been putting on some weight. Would you like to run with Lina and I, after school to maybe burn some of those calories?" Feeling embarrassed, you reply, "Um maybe another time." Christina replies, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, the other girls are starting to talk about you. You don''t want to be known as the fat girl of the school, do you?" You look toward Christina and see a mildly concerned look on her face before she texts one last message; "A few workouts a day and a proper diet can do wonders for your future. Think about it <<$pcs_firstname>>." She gives you a assuring nod before turning back, toward the teacher.'
+					'As you are browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina Zvereva, reading; "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I can''t help but notice that you have been putting on some weight. Would you like to run with Lina and I, after school to maybe burn some of those calories?" Feeling embarrassed, you reply, "Um maybe another time." Christina replies, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, the other girls are starting to talk about you. You don''t want to be known as the fat girl of the school, do you?" You look toward Christina and see a mildly concerned look on her face before she texts one last message; "A few workouts a day and a proper diet can do wonders for your future. Think about it <<$pcs_firstname>>." She gives you an assuring nod before turning back, toward the teacher.'
 				elseif VKrand = 1:
 					'As you are browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina Zvereva, reading; "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, when are you getting those track shoes that I told you about? I still see you wearing those raggedy ones at PE." You giggle then reply, "I keep forgetting to check them out when stop by the shop." Christina replies, "I know what you mean. I always get side distracted by the other clothes then forget why I went in their in the first place lol."'
 					*nl
@@ -561,7 +561,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 						demerit += 5
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/nophone.jpg"></center>'
-						'You deftly shove the phone in your bra then smile fiendishly, as you see the indecisiveness on Anatoly''s face. Pretending that it''s a perfectly normal place to store your phone, you say in a innocent tone, "Is there a problem, Mr. Tsarev? Do you want my phone? You can take it, if you want." You slowly thrust your chest forward, raising your breast toward him, giving him a nice view of your ample cleavage; the outline of your phone very visible through the fabric.'
+						'You deftly shove the phone in your bra then smile fiendishly, as you see the indecisiveness on Anatoly''s face. Pretending that it''s a perfectly normal place to store your phone, you say in an innocent tone, "Is there a problem, Mr. Tsarev? Do you want my phone? You can take it, if you want." You slowly thrust your chest forward, raising your breast toward him, giving him a nice view of your ample cleavage; the outline of your phone very visible through the fabric.'
 						*nl
 						'Mr. Tsarev seems flabbergasted by your actions, he remains silent for a few seconds before shaking his head then turning around and walking back to the front of the class. It seems that Anatoly realized that it''s not worth the effort to take your phone away from you, without causing all sorts of awkward situations, You pull your phone back out of your bra then continue browsing the web, as the lesson goes on.'
 						'<center><b><font color=#00BFFF><<"Anatoly E. Tsarev">></font></b></center>'
@@ -2122,7 +2122,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 		'Mr. Vasilyev has go on one of his epically long indepth explanations about one of the music styles and how it influenced society in all sorts of ways and in return was influenced by current events. You thought this was about music not history.'
 		*nl
 		'That comes to an abrupt end when a loud crash in the room nearly startles you out of your chair.'
-		'As one, everyone in the room turns to look, only to see Radomir and Petia sitting by a over turned rack of music instruments. Radomir looks at Petia and says "Fuck I told you not to touch them, now look what you did, you loser." Petia starts to open his mouth and say something but apparently thinks better of it and closes his mouth instead. Mr. Vasilyev makes his way over and says to Radomir. "Language young man!" Radomir just rolls his eyes, Mr. Vasilyev gets them to help him pick up all the instruments and then gets the whole class to check them to see if any was damaged. Which gets finished just in time for the bell for school to be over.'
+		'As one, everyone in the room turns to look, only to see Radomir and Petia sitting by an over turned rack of music instruments. Radomir looks at Petia and says "Fuck I told you not to touch them, now look what you did, you loser." Petia starts to open his mouth and say something but apparently thinks better of it and closes his mouth instead. Mr. Vasilyev makes his way over and says to Radomir. "Language young man!" Radomir just rolls his eyes, Mr. Vasilyev gets them to help him pick up all the instruments and then gets the whole class to check them to see if any was damaged. Which gets finished just in time for the bell for school to be over.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 	end
 	act'Daydream':

+ 4 - 4
locations/gschool_lessonsev1.qsrc

@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 			gs 'gschool_events', 'rand_boy_arg', 1, 1, 0, 1, 0, 0
 			gs 'gschool_events', 'rand_boy_arg1', 0, 0, 1, 0, 1, 0
 			'During gym class you hear a commotion from one side and you look over to see two boys shoving at each other. <<$rand_boy>> shoves <<$rand_boy2>> again and it quickly starts escalating, a few punches are thrown and soon the two of them are down on the ground fighting. The coach rushes over and quickly pulls them apart, before sending them straight to the principal.'
-!!add code to use a random name of a gopnik, cool guy, or jock, with a chance of a unknown <<$rand_boy>>.
+!!add code to use a random name of a gopnik, cool guy, or jock, with a chance of an unknown <<$rand_boy>>.
 		elseif fizperand = 8:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/tinydick.jpg"></center>'
 			'During a break in gym class, you and several other girls are talking when Igor wanders over and tries to chat you all up. You find his efforts amusing at best and you can tell his efforts are not working on the other girls either, yet he seems to think he is just oozing cool and he keeps chatting up the lot of you. Suddenly, Vitek rushes over behind him, grabs his shorts and yanks them down to his ankles.'
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 				'He is a bit stunned by this sudden attack and at first he just covers up to try and block some of your punches, before he finally starts to fight back. For him, the coach arrives just in time. The coach grabs you by the back of the neck and with one powerful yank, pulls you off <<$rand_boy>> and nearly tosses you on your back. He steps between the two of you, stopping <<$rand_boy>> and you from going at it again. He turns to you and says, "Go to the principal''s office, NOW!" You try and protest but he doesn''t want to hear it and points at the door.'
 				act 'Go to the principals offices': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 			end
-!!add code to use a random name of a gopnik, cool guy, or jock, with a chance of a unknown <<$rand_boy>>.
+!!add code to use a random name of a gopnik, cool guy, or jock, with a chance of an unknown <<$rand_boy>>.
 		elseif fizperand = 10:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/hanging.jpg"></center>'
 			gs 'gschool_events', 'rand_girl_arg', 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 0
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 			act 'Tease him':
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizperand6.jpg"></center>'
-				'You decide to have a little fun of your own. You ''accidentally'' drop something, while he is keeping you steady. You bend over at the waist, pushing your ass back against his crotch. You grind yourself against him and you can feel him getting hard. Then you pick up the item and quickly stand up, before heading out of the room. You glance back and flash him a sweet smile, noticing he''s trying to hide the erection in his shorts. You add a bit of a extra sway to your hips as you walk away.'
+				'You decide to have a little fun of your own. You ''accidentally'' drop something, while he is keeping you steady. You bend over at the waist, pushing your ass back against his crotch. You grind yourself against him and you can feel him getting hard. Then you pick up the item and quickly stand up, before heading out of the room. You glance back and flash him a sweet smile, noticing he''s trying to hide the erection in his shorts. You add a bit of an extra sway to your hips as you walk away.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'
 				act 'End of lesson':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'postphys'
 			end
@@ -1055,7 +1055,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 19:
 			*clr & cla
-			'For today''s lesson Mr. Yenotin decides to have the class to read out a passage from a old literature book out loud, one that even native Russian speakers sometimes finds difficult with the slightly different pronunciations. You and your classmates open the book and Mr. Yenotin tells Stasya to begin from the top of the page, she sighs and starts reading loudly. After a couple of pages Mr. Yenotin stops and thanks Stasya. He looks around for someone to take over spotting Marcus, "Why don''t we have our exchange student read some pages, you need the practice anyway."'
+			'For today''s lesson Mr. Yenotin decides to have the class to read out a passage from an old literature book out loud, one that even native Russian speakers sometimes finds difficult with the slightly different pronunciations. You and your classmates open the book and Mr. Yenotin tells Stasya to begin from the top of the page, she sighs and starts reading loudly. After a couple of pages Mr. Yenotin stops and thanks Stasya. He looks around for someone to take over spotting Marcus, "Why don''t we have our exchange student read some pages, you need the practice anyway."'
 			'Marcus looks worryingly around hesitating if he really should do this, "Can I skip it this time?" he asks. Mr. Yenotin is shaking his head, "Don''t worry Marcus, go on, it''ll be fine."'
 			*nl
 			'Marcus clears his throat and begins reading. He''s painfully slow at times and his American accent doesn''t help but he does his best. As he comes to a difficult part he starts stammering and gets stuck trying to pronounce a word correctly.'

+ 9 - 9
locations/gschool_lessonsev2.qsrc

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 			'You hear your teacher. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Lazar behind you is snickering. The teacher looks at you curiously.'
 			act 'Nothing is wrong':
 				cla
-				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Lazar, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping a eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Lazar, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping an eye on you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Slap Lazar':
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 7:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/dickpic.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get a alert on your phone, you pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someones dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
+			'You get an alert on your phone, you pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someones dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'unknown'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 8:
@@ -476,7 +476,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'help':
 		pcs_dom += 1
 		*nl
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashteach.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You edge closer and closer to Anatoly as he continues to explain some solutions, you step back and pull open your shirt, exposing your cleavage. Anatoly stares at your chest for a ew seconds, but from the look on his face, it is clear that he knows this is wrong. You lean forward then whisper in his ear, "You can touch them if you want. I won''t tell anyone." You give him an innocent smile, and you can tell he is thoroughly confused now. You know he''s definitely on board with the idea, but at the same time, has his doubts. You decide to help him decide, and pull your skirt up slightly before whispering seductively into his ear, "You can touch me here too, Anatoly. I''m soaking wet right now. Don''t you want to feel it?"'
+		'You edge closer and closer to Anatoly as he continues to explain some solutions, you step back and pull open your shirt, exposing your cleavage. Anatoly stares at your chest for a few seconds, but from the look on his face, it is clear that he knows this is wrong. You lean forward then whisper in his ear, "You can touch them if you want. I won''t tell anyone." You give him an innocent smile, and you can tell he is thoroughly confused now. You know he''s definitely on board with the idea, but at the same time, has his doubts. You decide to help him decide, and pull your skirt up slightly before whispering seductively into his ear, "You can touch me here too, Anatoly. I''m soaking wet right now. Don''t you want to feel it?"'
 		*nl
 		'Even though he''s clearly uncomfortable doing this, you feel his fingers rubbing over your wet pussy lips now. You encourage him some more, "That feels so good, Anatoly can you feel how wet I am?" Making sure that no one else is watching what he is doing, his actions grow more and more bold, as he begins to rub your pussy more firmly. He then plunges in two fingers and begins to fuck you with them. You let out light moans as your heart is pounding faster. Obviously worried that someone might notice Mr. Tsarev slowly pulls his fingers out then says, "You should let you get back to work." Anatoly gets up then walks back to his desk. He takes a quick look around to make sure that no one notices before placing his two finger in his mouth swallowing your juices.'
 		*nl
@@ -543,7 +543,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			'You hear your teacher. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Roman behind you is snickering. The teacher looks at you curiously.'
 			act 'Nothing is wrong':
 				cla
-				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Roman, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping a eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Roman, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping an eye on you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Slap Roman':
@@ -607,7 +607,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			'Then you hear your teacher. "Is there a problem miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Roman behind you is snickering. The teacher looks at you accusingly.'
 			act 'Nothing is wrong':
 				cla
-				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Roman, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping a eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Roman, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping an eye on you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Slap Roman':
@@ -631,7 +631,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 8:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/dickpic.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get a alert on your phone, you pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someones dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
+			'You get an alert on your phone, you pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someones dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'unknown'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 9:
@@ -779,7 +779,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			'You hear Mr. Kuznetsov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Dan behind you is snickering. The teacher looks at you curiously.'
 			act 'Nothing is wrong':
 				cla
-				'You shake your head no to Mr. Kuznetsov and desperately want to turn around and strangle Dan, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping a eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head no to Mr. Kuznetsov and desperately want to turn around and strangle Dan, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping an eye on you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Slap Dan':
@@ -843,7 +843,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			'Then you hear Mr. Kuznetsov. "Is there a problem miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Vasily behind you is snickering. The teacher looks at you accusingly.'
 			act 'Nothing is wrong':
 				cla
-				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Vasily, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping a eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Vasily, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping an eye on you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Slap <<$rand_boy>>':
@@ -862,7 +862,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 8:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/dickpic.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get a alert on your phone, you pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someones dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
+			'You get an alert on your phone, you pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someones dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'unknown'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 9:

+ 6 - 6
locations/gschool_lessonsev3.qsrc

@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reading':
 		act 'Say nothing':
 			cla
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
-!!any spot with out a image Akossi does not want it cleared but to have the text just add to the existing text and image from the previous acts
+!!any spot with out an image Akossi does not want it cleared but to have the text just add to the existing text and image from the previous acts
 			*nl
 			'Unable to respond, you turn around without confronting him. You hear him chuckle and mutter something incoherent under his breath, but he doesn''t say anything else for the remaining class period. Replaying the encounter in your head, a part of you wonders if saying nothing was the right thing to do.'
 			cla
@@ -750,7 +750,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			'You hear you Mr. Vasilyev. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Radomir behind you is snickering. Mr. Vasilyev looks at you curiously.'
 			act 'Nothing is wrong':
 				cla
-				'You shake your head no to Mr. Vasilyev and desperately want to turn around and strangle Radomir, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping a eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head no to Mr. Vasilyev and desperately want to turn around and strangle Radomir, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping an eye on you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Slap Radomir':
@@ -814,7 +814,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			'Then you hear your teacher. "Is there a problem miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Lavrenti behind you is snickering. The teacher looks at you accusingly.'
 			act 'Nothing is wrong':
 				cla
-				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Lavrenti, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping a eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Lavrenti, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping an eye on you.'
 				if n_tanga = 3:
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga5_6.jpg"></center>'
@@ -846,7 +846,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 10:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/dickpic.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get a alert on your phone, you pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someones dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
+			'You get an alert on your phone, you pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someones dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'unknown'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 11:
@@ -1019,7 +1019,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			'Then you hear Mr. Vasilyev. "Is there a problem miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Anuska behind you is snickering. The teacher looks at you accusingly.'
 			act 'Nothing is wrong':
 				cla
-				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Anushka, but you don''t dare with Mr. Vasilyev now keeping a eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Anushka, but you don''t dare with Mr. Vasilyev now keeping an eye on you.'
 				if n_tanga = 3:
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga5_6.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1047,7 +1047,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 9:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/dickpic.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get a alert on your phone, you pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someones dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
+			'You get an alert on your phone, you pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someones dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'unknown'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 10:

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_lunch.qsrc

@@ -479,7 +479,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events':
 		end
 		act 'Go somewhere private':gt 'gschool_sex', 'Anush_private2'
 
-	!!This part I moved because it was in the middle of parts I felt was connected and I wanted this one to no longer be connected to that group of scenes. Instead I wanted it to be a unlock lunch scene because it can only trigger if Sveta has enough rep with the gopnik to be considered a hanger on or higher.
+	!!This part I moved because it was in the middle of parts I felt was connected and I wanted this one to no longer be connected to that group of scenes. Instead I wanted it to be an unlock lunch scene because it can only trigger if Sveta has enough rep with the gopnik to be considered a hanger on or higher.
 	!!chance this happens is 1 in 4, if the other unlock scenes don''t trigger first of course.
 	elseif gruptipe = 4 and rand(0, 3) = 0:
 		cla

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_office.qsrc

@@ -435,7 +435,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'detPunishment1':
 			*clr
 			cla
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You and <<$rand_girl>> stand facing the corner together, your ass is seriously stinging and if anything <<$rand_girl>>''s butt is must be much redder than yours. Apparently expecting one of you to disobey her, Miss Volkov keeps a eye on you for a while, but neither of you do. The two of you stay standing facing the corner, naked with your butts on fire.'
+			'You and <<$rand_girl>> stand facing the corner together, your ass is seriously stinging and if anything <<$rand_girl>>''s butt is must be much redder than yours. Apparently expecting one of you to disobey her, Miss Volkov keeps an eye on you for a while, but neither of you do. The two of you stay standing facing the corner, naked with your butts on fire.'
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr
 				cla

+ 5 - 5
locations/gschool_sex.qsrc

@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/sex/69doggy.jpg"></center>'
 				'Ivan pulls out of Katja and gets up. You lean forward and begin to lick Katja''s soaking wet pussy. Your tongue easily sliding inside of her in place of Ivan''s dick, while Ivan walks around the two of you and kneels down behind you, near Katja''s head.'
 				*nl
-				'Within seconds you feel Ivan''s <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock slide inside of your wet pussy, he starts pounding himself balls deep into you immediately. A few moments later Katja starts sucking his balls while he pounds your pussy. For several more minutes Ivan fucks you while you eat Katja, then her body begins to convulse as she starts having a orgasm.'
+				'Within seconds you feel Ivan''s <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock slide inside of your wet pussy, he starts pounding himself balls deep into you immediately. A few moments later Katja starts sucking his balls while he pounds your pussy. For several more minutes Ivan fucks you while you eat Katja, then her body begins to convulse as she starts having an orgasm.'
 				*nl
 				'Hearing her cum, Ivan beings to grunt and pick up the pace.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'group'
@@ -169,13 +169,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/sex/anal.jpg"></center>'
 					'After her orgasm Katja, slides around under you, till you are face to face and your laying on her stomach, your breasts smashed together, as she begins to kiss you.'
 					*nl
-					'Meanwhile Ivan starts to pant, it sounds like he is starting to get close to a orgasm himself. Katja reaches up with both her hands and grabs your ass, pulling your butt cheeks as far apart as she can. Grunting as he fucks you, Ivan understands the invitation.'
+					'Meanwhile Ivan starts to pant, it sounds like he is starting to get close to an orgasm himself. Katja reaches up with both her hands and grabs your ass, pulling your butt cheeks as far apart as she can. Grunting as he fucks you, Ivan understands the invitation.'
 					*nl
 					'Pulling out of your pussy and slipping his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock in your ass, he hardly misses a beat. In a single stroke he plunges his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick balls deep in your ass. You gasp and moan in a mixture of surprise, pain, and pleasure.'
 					*nl
 					'Looking down at Katja, your eyes lock and you realize now this is what she and Ivan had been talking about when you approached them earlier. You begin to pant, your hand rubbing your own clit.'
 					*nl
-					'Katja slides out from under you and kneels down next to your ass, as she watches Ivan roughly plough your ass. You begin to cry out as your body spasms in a intense orgasm.'
+					'Katja slides out from under you and kneels down next to your ass, as she watches Ivan roughly plough your ass. You begin to cry out as your body spasms in an intense orgasm.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'group'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'group'
 					minut -= 10
@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Anush_private':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/anules5.jpg"></center>'
 					'Again just before you are ready to hit that special moment she stops. Now she crawls up to lay beside you on her back, she spreads her legs wide as she reaches over and grabs you by the hair. She pulls your head by your hair down to her crotch and rubs your face against her pussy, you go to work at once, licking and sucking on her clit, lapping up her growing juices and tongue banging her pussy.'
-					'Several minutes later she starts moaning loudly and grinding her crotch against your face, completely glazing your face in her pussy juices. Her crys of ecstasy reach a crescendo, just as her body tenses up and she nearly crushes your head, by squeezing her legs together as she has a orgasm. After several shuddering moments her orgasm passes. "Fuck you eat pussy, good."'
+					'Several minutes later she starts moaning loudly and grinding her crotch against your face, completely glazing your face in her pussy juices. Her crys of ecstasy reach a crescendo, just as her body tenses up and she nearly crushes your head, by squeezing her legs together as she has an orgasm. After several shuddering moments her orgasm passes. "Fuck you eat pussy, good."'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'lesbian'
 					act 'Continue':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Anush_private2':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/sex/adrink.jpg"></center>'
 		'You take a swig of the vodka from the bottle and you feel it burn your throat, it is the cheap stuff. The others offer encouragement and Anushka even tips the bottle back up once you start to lower it for a moment to make you drink a little more. Afterwards you pass the bottle to Anushka who takes the bottle and takes a much bigger swig before passing it back to the boys. "Hell yeah, this beats lunch or anything else about school any day." She adds.'
 		*nl
-		'Valentin holds up the bottle. "I''ll drink to that, especially when we get to hang out with some fine ass bitches like the two of you." Which is followed by him taking a even bigger swig than Anushka took, so much so Arkadi elbows him in the side. "Hey stop trying to hog it all and pass it over."'
+		'Valentin holds up the bottle. "I''ll drink to that, especially when we get to hang out with some fine ass bitches like the two of you." Which is followed by him taking an even bigger swig than Anushka took, so much so Arkadi elbows him in the side. "Hey stop trying to hog it all and pass it over."'
 		*nl
 		'Valentin coughs from the elbow and passes it to Arkadi, who promptly takes a big swig, while Valentin berate him. "Fucking asshole you almost made me choke on that." After his drink Arkadi passes the bottle back to you.'
 		act 'Don''t drink again':

+ 9 - 9
locations/gschool_socialchg.qsrc

@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'coolkid':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/joincool.jpg"></center>'
 		'You nod your head, "Yes I would love it, I love hanging out with you guys."'
-		'Albina gives you a hug, once she lets go Andrey wraps a arm around your shoulder and starts leading you to your next class. "From now on you are one of us." Stasya gives you a friendly smile, as the four of you walk to your next class.'
+		'Albina gives you a hug, once she lets go Andrey wraps an arm around your shoulder and starts leading you to your next class. "From now on you are one of us." Stasya gives you a friendly smile, as the four of you walk to your next class.'
 		grupvalue[2] -= 20
 		grupvalue[3] -= 20
 		grupvalue[4] -= 20
@@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerd':
 
 		act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 	end
-!!need a code so after school a new option pops up go to game night is a option.
+!!need a code so after school a new option pops up go to game night is an option.
 	act 'No':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nerdslut.jpg"></center>'
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik':
 		gopnik_initiation = 1
 		gopnik_initiation_day = daystart
 		gs 'stat'
-!!need so it triggers a event so their is a new option if Sveta goes to the apartment garages at that time tonight.
+!!need so it triggers an event so their is a new option if Sveta goes to the apartment garages at that time tonight.
 
 		act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 	end
@@ -444,7 +444,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik initiation':
 			act 'Wait for distraction':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><video src="images/locations/pavlovsk/events/gopnikinvite/distraction.mp4"></center>'
-				'You make your way towards the back, keeping a eye on Lena and Lera who are standing near the checkout and then they start making out. Lera seems to be really into it, pulling Lena back in for further kisses having her hands roam all over Lena''s body. Well it seems to have worked as the only other customer and the man behind the counter are both staring at them.'
+				'You make your way towards the back, keeping an eye on Lena and Lera who are standing near the checkout and then they start making out. Lera seems to be really into it, pulling Lena back in for further kisses having her hands roam all over Lena''s body. Well it seems to have worked as the only other customer and the man behind the counter are both staring at them.'
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 
@@ -481,7 +481,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik initiation':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/events/gopnikinvite/liqstoreout.jpg"></center>'
 					'Your heart is pounding so hard it feels like it is going to come out of your chest. You look around and decide that you can''t do this. So you turn and walk outside. A few minutes later Lena and Lera join you, they are looking at you. Obviously trying to see where you got the bottles hidden. You blush slightly and look down. "Sorry I couldn''t do it."'
-					'Lena goes red with rage and crowds you, pushing you up against the side of the building. "Are you fucking kidding me? You fucking useless bitch, why are you even here if all you''re going to do is waste our time. I should beat your fucking ass!" She looks around and notices some people are watching what''s going on with her yelling. She then looks back at you. "You''re fucking lucky bitch, stay the fuck away from us from now on or I will give you a epic ass beating." With that she turns and leaves, with Lera smirking at you, obviously looking forward to pick on you from now on.'
+					'Lena goes red with rage and crowds you, pushing you up against the side of the building. "Are you fucking kidding me? You fucking useless bitch, why are you even here if all you''re going to do is waste our time. I should beat your fucking ass!" She looks around and notices some people are watching what''s going on with her yelling. She then looks back at you. "You''re fucking lucky bitch, stay the fuck away from us from now on or I will give you an epic ass beating." With that she turns and leaves, with Lera smirking at you, obviously looking forward to pick on you from now on.'
 					act 'Stay silent':
 						cla & *clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/events/gopnikinvite/liqstoreout.jpg"></center>'
@@ -546,7 +546,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik initiation':
 				act 'Wait for distraction':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video src="images/locations/pavlovsk/events/gopnikinvite/distraction.mp4"></center>'
-					'You make your way towards the back, keeping a eye on Lena and Lera. Who are standing near the checkout and then they start making out. Lera seems to be really into it, pulling Lena back in for further kisses while her hands roam all over Lena''s body. Well it seems to have worked as the only other customer and the man behind the counter are both staring at them.'
+					'You make your way towards the back, keeping an eye on Lena and Lera. Who are standing near the checkout and then they start making out. Lera seems to be really into it, pulling Lena back in for further kisses while her hands roam all over Lena''s body. Well it seems to have worked as the only other customer and the man behind the counter are both staring at them.'
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
 
@@ -580,7 +580,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik initiation':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/events/gopnikinvite/liqstoreout.jpg"></center>'
 					'Your heart is pounding so hard it feels like it is going to come out of your chest. You look around and decide that you can''t do this. So you turn and walk outside. A few minutes later Lena and Lera join you, they are looking at you. Obviously trying to see where you got the bottles hidden. You blush slightly and look down. "Sorry I couldn''t do it."'
-					'Lena goes red with rage and crowds you, pushing you up against the side of the building. "Are you fucking kidding me? You fucking useless bitch, why are you even here if all you''re going to do is waste our time. I should beat your fucking ass!" She looks around and notices some people are watching what''s going on with her yelling. She then looks back at you. "You''re fucking lucky bitch, stay the fuck away from us from now on or I will give you a epic ass beating." With that she turns and leaves, with Lera smirking at you, obviously looking forward to pick on you from now on.'
+					'Lena goes red with rage and crowds you, pushing you up against the side of the building. "Are you fucking kidding me? You fucking useless bitch, why are you even here if all you''re going to do is waste our time. I should beat your fucking ass!" She looks around and notices some people are watching what''s going on with her yelling. She then looks back at you. "You''re fucking lucky bitch, stay the fuck away from us from now on or I will give you an epic ass beating." With that she turns and leaves, with Lera smirking at you, obviously looking forward to pick on you from now on.'
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					act 'Stay silent':
@@ -1068,7 +1068,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tLena':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/head/20.jpg"></center>'
 				'"In what way?" you worringly ask her.'
-				'"Well, they can be pretty hands on when it comes to sex. Luckily or rather unluckily I have Vitek that ''protects'' me for the rest of them. So yeah, don''t be surprised if someone makes a move on you and won''t take no for a answer." she says.'
+				'"Well, they can be pretty hands on when it comes to sex. Luckily or rather unluckily I have Vitek that ''protects'' me for the rest of them. So yeah, don''t be surprised if someone makes a move on you and won''t take no for an answer." she says.'
 				'You begin getting cold feet, "Maybe this group isn''t for me..."'
 				'Lena begins shaking her head, "No, no, no. I am saying, you might have to force them to back down. Do what you got to, even if it makes kicking them in the balls. Eventually they will learn how far they can push you, just don''t let them push you further than you want to go."'
 				'You thank for the advice and give her a hug before moving away from her.'
@@ -1675,7 +1675,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik slut':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/oldschool/main.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you get closer, you can already hear music playing and people talking loudly. Once inside you see all the gopniks from school, along with a few you don''t know. Some are from the other years class and others you think have already graduated or dropped out. Many of them cast hungery eyes on you, as the new girl. You are far less sure about this, but also you know it was way to late to change your mind. You are pretty sure you choices are go along with it willingly or unwillingly. If you go along with it, maybe it won''t be to bad.'
 		*nl
-		'Lena walks over to her brother Vitek, while Lera motions for you to stop. You do and look around the room. It seems the gopniks have been busy, several of the windows have been busted out and covered with boards, graffiti covers the walls, though much of it is pretty good. A large potbellied stove is near one of the boarded up windows with a pipe going out between two boards. Several tables in varies styles and condition litter the room, along with a motley crew of chairs and even a couple of old couches. Candles seem to be all over as the main source of light, while a old boombox plays music. A couple of doors lead off the main room, you suspect to the teachers lounge and principals office, or what they use to be.'
+		'Lena walks over to her brother Vitek, while Lera motions for you to stop. You do and look around the room. It seems the gopniks have been busy, several of the windows have been busted out and covered with boards, graffiti covers the walls, though much of it is pretty good. A large potbellied stove is near one of the boarded up windows with a pipe going out between two boards. Several tables in varies styles and condition litter the room, along with a motley crew of chairs and even a couple of old couches. Candles seem to be all over as the main source of light, while an old boombox plays music. A couple of doors lead off the main room, you suspect to the teachers lounge and principals office, or what they use to be.'
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		act 'Party favor':

+ 10 - 10
locations/housecall.qsrc

@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel0':
 										'"So?"'
 										'Since you have not asked her to stop she keeps caressing your clitoris. "That is, if we have sex,  I can heal you, if you agree of course. Do you agree?"'
 										'"And what do you get in return?"'
-										'"Nothing, I''m doing this solely for my own satisfaction. You see I can only cast if I having a orgasm."'
+										'"Nothing, I''m doing this solely for my own satisfaction. You see I can only cast if I having an orgasm."'
 										'Feeling your arousal mounting you find yourself nodding your head. "Then I agree."'
 
 										gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 15, 'lesbian'
@@ -127,8 +127,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel0':
 										lekar += 3
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/apartment/event/sick/nadom4.jpg"></center>'
-										'Once you roll back over the doctor gives you a injection in the butt, you wince slightly in pain.'
-										'She gives you a slight reassuring pat."We are just about done with everything. I prescribing you lots of bed rest, hot drinks, antibiotics, nose drops and a balanced diet. When the temperature drops, make a appointment at the clinic for a followup."'
+										'Once you roll back over the doctor gives you an injection in the butt, you wince slightly in pain.'
+										'She gives you a slight reassuring pat."We are just about done with everything. I prescribing you lots of bed rest, hot drinks, antibiotics, nose drops and a balanced diet. When the temperature drops, make an appointment at the clinic for a followup."'
 										'You nod."Thank you Doctor."'
 										'The Doctor gets up. "Goodbye <<$pcs_nickname>>, get lots of rest." Then she leaves.'
 
@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel0':
 										cla
 										*clr
 										'You start crying and coughing. "Oh, Doctor, I do not want to go to the hospital."'
-										'She frowns slightly then looks thoughtful. "Well, I guess we could try a out patient treatment. In that case I will need to give you a couple of shots, to start with."'
+										'She frowns slightly then looks thoughtful. "Well, I guess we could try an out patient treatment. In that case I will need to give you a couple of shots, to start with."'
 										'You stop crying and smile to her. "Oh, thank you, doctor!"'
 
 										act 'Lie on your stomach and bare ass':
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel0':
 											'"So?"'
 											'"That is, if we have sex, so I can heal you, if you agree of course. Do you agree?"'
 											'"And what do you get in return?"'
-											'"Nothing, I''m doing this solely for my own satisfaction. You see I can only cast if I''m having a orgasm."'
+											'"Nothing, I''m doing this solely for my own satisfaction. You see I can only cast if I''m having an orgasm."'
 											'Feeling your arousal mounting you find yourself nodding your head. "Then I agree."'
 
 											act 'Agree':gt 'housecall', 'ninel2'
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel1':
 							'"So?"'
 							'"That is, if we have sex, I can heal you, if you agree of course. Do you agree?"'
 							'"And what do you get in return?"'
-							'"Nothing, I''m doing this solely for my own satisfaction. You see I can only cast if I have a orgasm."'
+							'"Nothing, I''m doing this solely for my own satisfaction. You see I can only cast if I have an orgasm."'
 							'Feeling your arousal mounting you find yourself nodding your head. "Then I agree."'
 
 							gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 10, 'lesbian'
@@ -362,7 +362,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel1':
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/apartment/event/sick/sex/ninel19.jpg"></center>'
 													'You lay there panting, sweating and exhausted on your bed. Ninel snuggles as the two of you share a gentle kiss.'
 													'She looks at you. "Well, how do you feel?"'
-													'Unable to resist grinning. "Ooh, Just perfect" You answer and only then do you realize just how well you do feel. The sickness seems to have passed and you feel perfectly healthy, not to mention in a wonderful mood. The sweet bouquet of sex drifts in the air and the exhaustion makes this a even more pleasant sensations.'
+													'Unable to resist grinning. "Ooh, Just perfect" You answer and only then do you realize just how well you do feel. The sickness seems to have passed and you feel perfectly healthy, not to mention in a wonderful mood. The sweet bouquet of sex drifts in the air and the exhaustion makes this an even more pleasant sensations.'
 													'She smiles at you. "Well, It''s magic, baby. Mm-m, you''re just a miracle. For a long time I have not gotten so much pleasure from my magic. If you get sick again, just call me or if you just want to spend time with me. You can also look for me in the clinic.'
 													'You promised to be sure to find her, closing your eyes falling asleep. While you was sleeping, Ninel quietly dressed and left.'
 
@@ -416,7 +416,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel2':
 			act 'Change position':
 				cls
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/apartment/event/sick/sex/ninel16.jpg"></center>'
-				'As a orgasm wracks your body, Ninel crawls forward and straddles your stomach, she leans forward. Her hand going back to your crotch as her fingers plunge back into your wet depths. You can feel her pussy juices flowing down her thighs onto your stomach. You groan, as your hands ecstatically squeeze her butt checks, holding onto her tightly.'
+				'As an orgasm wracks your body, Ninel crawls forward and straddles your stomach, she leans forward. Her hand going back to your crotch as her fingers plunge back into your wet depths. You can feel her pussy juices flowing down her thighs onto your stomach. You groan, as your hands ecstatically squeeze her butt checks, holding onto her tightly.'
 				'Ninel fingers plunge in and out of your pussy frantically, her own breath coming in short gasps now.'
 				'"Oh, <<$pcs_nickname>>, <<$pcs_nickname>>!"She exhales. "I want to feel your fingers in me!'
 
@@ -461,7 +461,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel2':
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/apartment/event/sick/sex/ninel19.jpg"></center>'
 							'You lay there panting, sweating and exhausted on your bed. Ninel snuggles as the two of you share gentle kiss.'
 							'She looks at you. "Well, how do you feel?"'
-							'Unable to resist grinning. "Ooh ... Just perfect" You answer and only then do you realize just how well you do feel. The sickness seems to have passed, leaving you feeling perfectly healthy and in a wonderful mood. The sweet bouquet of sex hangs in the air and the exhaustion makes this a even more pleasant sensations.'
+							'Unable to resist grinning. "Ooh ... Just perfect" You answer and only then do you realize just how well you do feel. The sickness seems to have passed, leaving you feeling perfectly healthy and in a wonderful mood. The sweet bouquet of sex hangs in the air and the exhaustion makes this an even more pleasant sensations.'
 							'She smiles at you. "Well, It''s magic, baby. Mm-m, you''re just a miracle. For a long time I have not gotten so much pleasure from my magic. If you get sick again, just call me or if you just want to spend time with me. You can also look for me in the clinic.'
 							'You promised to be sure to find her, closing your eyes falling asleep. While you was sleeping, Ninel quietly dressed and left.'
 
@@ -510,7 +510,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel3':
 			'You start to roll over to let her take your temperature. "The usual?"'
 			'She shakes her head as she smiles at you. "Well, no. You''re far to excited for a rectal reading. We will have to do it orally this time."'
 			'You lay back on your back. "Do you have a different one?"'
-			'She holds up a oral thermometer. "You mean like this one?" She places it in your mouth.'
+			'She holds up an oral thermometer. "You mean like this one?" She places it in your mouth.'
 
 			act 'Taking your temperature':
 				cla

+ 1 - 1
locations/hunters.qsrc

@@ -2722,7 +2722,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hunters_talk':
 		'"Who hasn''t heard of it?"'
 		'"So I..."'
 	elseif temp = 10:
-		'"As I''m getting out of the house I see something resembling a eagle standing on the telephone pole."'
+		'"As I''m getting out of the house I see something resembling an eagle standing on the telephone pole."'
 		'"I run into the house and get my rifle, aim. Bang, Bang, Bang."'
 		'"I hit the eagle and it falls down to the ground. As I look at the telephone pole I see pole spurs on both sides..."'
 	elseif temp = 11:

+ 2 - 2
locations/igorhome.qsrc

@@ -448,7 +448,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Living room</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/igorhome/livingroom.jpg"></center>'
 	'The room is very clean and neat. Everything is perfectly in place, the furniture is all very nice. There is several very large windows giving a great view at the lawn. In the corner is a very nice flat screen tv.'
-	!!this is a elseif, if it is 18:00 to 23:00 Igor''s father is here during the week. On weekends he is here from 09:00 to 23:00
+	!!this is an elseif, if it is 18:00 to 23:00 Igor''s father is here during the week. On weekends he is here from 09:00 to 23:00
 	if met_IgorDad = 0 and ((hour >= 18 and hour <= 22 and week => 1 and week <= 5) or (hour >= 9 and hour <= 22 and week => 6 and week <= 7)):
 		'You see Igor''s father Gemorgen is in the living room watching tv. He is well dressed and not bad looking, you don''t think he has noticed you yet.'
 		if Igor_with = 0:
@@ -746,7 +746,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kitchen':
 	'The room is very clean and neat. Everything is perfectly in place, the counters are polished to a near mirror like quality. The wood floor is also highly polished.'
 
 	act 'Leave the kitchen': gt 'igorhome','hallway'
-	!!this is a elseif, if it is 06:00 to 07:00 igors mother is here, or if it is 18:00 to 23:00 she is here during the week. On weekends she is here from 08:00 to 23:00
+	!!this is an elseif, if it is 06:00 to 07:00 igors mother is here, or if it is 18:00 to 23:00 she is here during the week. On weekends she is here from 08:00 to 23:00
 	if (week <=5 and (hour = 6 or (hour >= 18 and hour < 23))) or (week > 5 and hour >= 8 and hour < 23):
 		'You see Igor''s mother Inga is in the kitchen drinking tea. She is very neatly dressed, you don''t think she has noticed you yet.'
 		if met_IgorMother = 0:

+ 3 - 3
locations/ira.qsrc

@@ -33,9 +33,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Ira and Lena</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_gost_1_' + rand(1,7) + '.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'Moving to the rhythmic sounds, you indulge in a unrestrained dance with Lena and Ira.'
+	'Moving to the rhythmic sounds, you indulge in an unrestrained dance with Lena and Ira.'
 	'You jump, sway your body, and rock your booty, losing yourself in the general merriment.'
-	if pcs_danc >= 50:'You move your body perfectly with the rhythm of the music in a erotic way, getting you a lot of attention from others and you love they attention.'
+	if pcs_danc >= 50:'You move your body perfectly with the rhythm of the music in an erotic way, getting you a lot of attention from others and you love they attention.'
 	if pcs_danc < 50:'Your ridiculous movements during the dance does not bother anyone, You dance badly, but you do not care.'
 	act 'Have a rest':gt $loc,$metka
 	act 'Kiss':
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><b><font color = maroon>Ira and Lena</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_iralena_7_10.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'Laying side by side with you in the middle, your hands on each others clits, rubbing and caressing them until a incredibly strong orgasm overtakes you all, and the three of you wither in sweet release. "Uhh, who says we need men anyways?" All of your answers with satisfied giggles.'
+						'Laying side by side with you in the middle, your hands on each others clits, rubbing and caressing them until an incredibly strong orgasm overtakes you all, and the three of you wither in sweet release. "Uhh, who says we need men anyways?" All of your answers with satisfied giggles.'
 						'Continuing to be in ecstasy, you slowly come down on your sexual high, as you do you slowly fall asleep.'
 						$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 5, 'lesbian', 'group'

+ 1 - 1
locations/kafeM.qsrc

@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 	'You go with <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> to the dance floor. He puts his arms around you and you start to dance.'
 
 	if haraklover[lover_number] = 0:
-		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> is very reserved in his dance. He holds you a bit awkwardly and apologises.'
+		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> is very reserved in his dance. He holds you a bit awkwardly and apologizes.'
 
 		act 'Finish the dance':
 			cla

+ 1 - 1
locations/katalkin.qsrc

@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ elseif hour >= 22:
 				act 'Do not move':gt 'katalkinSex','sex'
 			end
 		elseif schtraf > 0:
-			'Captain Katalkin looks at you with a uninterested look in his eyes. Even though he''s drunk, he won''t let you off the hook: "You have to pay a fine of <<schtraf>> <b>₽</b>. Once you pay, you can go."'
+			'Captain Katalkin looks at you with an uninterested look in his eyes. Even though he''s drunk, he won''t let you off the hook: "You have to pay a fine of <<schtraf>> <b>₽</b>. Once you pay, you can go."'
 
 			if money >= schtraf:
 				act 'Pay the fine':

+ 3 - 3
locations/kikbox.qsrc

@@ -31,9 +31,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		if minround = 5:'<b>Time in round 2:00</b>'
 		if minround = 6:'<b>Time in round 2:30</b>'
 		'<b><<$boydesc>></b> Life <b><font color="red"><<healthV>></font></b>, Endurance <b><font color="green"><<staminaV>></font></b>'
-		'Your life <b><font color="red"><<pcs_health>></font></b>, Endurance <b><font color="green"><<stamina>></font></b>'
+		'Your life <b><font color="red"><<pcs_health>></font></b>, Endurance <b><font color="green"><<pcs_stam>></font></b>'
 		'<b>= = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = =</b>'
-		'Your points <<pointKik>>Points opponent <<pointKikV>>'
+		'Your points <<pointKik>>  Points opponent <<pointKikV>>'
 		'<b>= = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = =</b>'
 		gs 'initKik'
 
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sta':
 	if minround = 6:'<b>Time in round 3:00</b>'
 	'<b>= = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = =</b>'
 	'<b><<$boydesc>></b> Life <b><font color="red"><<healthV>></font></b>, Endurance <b><font color="green"><<staminaV>></font></b>'
-	'Your life <b><font color="red"><<pcs_health>></font></b>, Endurance <b><font color="green"><<stamina>></font></b>'
+	'Your life <b><font color="red"><<pcs_health>></font></b>, Endurance <b><font color="green"><<pcs_stam>></font></b>'
 	'<b>= = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = =</b>'
 
 	act 'Further':gt 'kikbox', 'start'

+ 1 - 1
locations/kisameQW.qsrc

@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/kisame/sex/kisame3.jpg"></center>'
 			'Kisame plays with you like a toy, he swims under you and skewers your pussy on his cock. You are simultaneously on the verge of orgasm and fainting from suffocation. You hear Kisames voice in your head and you can breathe underwater.'
-			'He fucks you hard in the pussy and you breathe in water, instead of water filling your lungs they recieve completely normal air. Sighing you immediately orgasm, and bend in convulsions of pleasure. Kisame also ends inside you.'
+			'He fucks you hard in the pussy and you breathe in water, instead of water filling your lungs they receive completely normal air. Sighing you immediately orgasm, and bend in convulsions of pleasure. Kisame also ends inside you.'
 
 			$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 20, 'sub', 'rough'

+ 1 - 1
locations/klofdomhouse.qsrc

@@ -245,7 +245,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ev14':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/jora/sex/klof14.jpg"></center>'
-		'Jora discharges in your ass, then using a a small toy he plays with your ass. It''s quite pleasant so you don''t think to question his actions.'
+		'Jora discharges in your ass, then using a small toy he plays with your ass. It''s quite pleasant so you don''t think to question his actions.'
 		'You get dressed and get ready to go home.'
 		'Jora hands you money, "Earned yourself a crumb."'
 		guy += 1

+ 8 - 8
locations/korr.qsrc

@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ else
 	'Modern hall with stylish furniture, a wall-mounted <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a>.'
 end
 
-if umbrella > 0:'On a hook hangs a umbrella.'
+if umbrella > 0:'On a hook hangs an umbrella.'
 if sobaka = 1:'Your dog, <a href="exec:gt ''soba'', ''start''"><<$namesob>></a>, is lying on the floor near the entrance.'
 if krolik = 1:'Resting on the floor your rabbit <a href="exec:gt ''krol'', ''start''"><<$namekrol>></a>.'
 if popugai = 1:'In the cage sits your parrot <a href="exec:gt ''popu'', ''start''"><<$namepopu>></a>.'
@@ -256,11 +256,11 @@ $ninel0 = {
 	cla
 	*clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/apartment/event/sick/ninel00.jpg"></center>'
-	'You open the door. Stands on the threshold of a pretty young girl with meitsinskim suitcase in hand.'
-	'(You) - Hello, doctor'
-	'(Doctor) - Hello. My name is Ninel P. - I replaces your local therapist. Where the patient?'
-	'(You) - This is me ... kha-kha-kha.'
-	'(Doctor) - Clear. Then come - you need to go back to bed.'
+	'You open the door. Standing on the threshold is a pretty young girl with a doctors bag in her hand.'
+	'You greet her.'
+	'"Hello. My name is Ninel P. - I do the home visits for the clinic. Where is the patient?"'
+	'"That would be me ... kha-kha-kha."'
+	'"Understood. First we need to get you back into bed."'
 
 	act 'Pursue a doctorate in the bedroom and lay down':
 		cla
@@ -271,7 +271,7 @@ $ninel0 = {
 		'(Doctor) - On that complain of <<$pcs_nickname>>? Can I call you that?'
 		'(You) - Of course ... Ahem, ahem, ahem ... Oh, Doctor, perhaps I have the flu - cough just kills and very sore throat. And the temperature is high.'
 		'(Doctor) - Runny nose is? Headaches? Aching bones?'
-		'(You) - Yes. A Aptchee and!'
+		'(You) - Yes. Aachoo and!'
 		'(Doctor) - Now I will examine you. Undress.'
 
 		act 'Undress':
@@ -455,7 +455,7 @@ $drPP = {
 		'(Doctor) - Well, the patient, to complain that?'
 		'(You) - Ahem, ahem, ahem ... Oh, Doctor, perhaps, I have a sore throat - very sore throat and high temperature.'
 		'(Doctor) - And cough, as I see it. And judging by your voice, you have a nose, sick, laid.'
-		'(You) - Yes. A Aptchee and!'
+		'(You) - Yes. Aachoo!'
 		'(Doctor) - Well, the sick, you hear Dwight. Undress.'
 
 		act 'Undress':

+ 1 - 1
locations/korr2x.qsrc

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ end
 '<center><b><font color = maroon>Corridor</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/oldtown/apartment/korr2x.jpg"></center>'
 
-if umbrella > 0:'On a hook hangs a umbrella'
+if umbrella > 0:'On a hook hangs an umbrella'
 if sobaka = 1:'Near the entrance to the bedroom is your <a href="exec:gt ''soba'',''start''"><<$namesob>></a>'
 if krolik = 1:'On the floor, resting is <a href="exec:gt ''krol'',''start''"><<$namekrol>></a>'
 if popugai = 1:'In the cell, sitting is <a href="exec:gt ''popu'',''start''"><<$namepopu>></a>'

+ 2 - 2
locations/kotovSex.qsrc

@@ -551,7 +551,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cum81':
 		'Suddenly Vitek''s thrusts stop, and you grin when you realize he''s trying to postpone his orgasm. You squeeze your vaginal walls around his cock as tightly as you can and sure enough, within moments you feel hot jets of his sperm being squirted into your body.'
 		gs 'cum_call','',$boy,1
 		'"You horny little minx, you knew!" he gasps. You look over your shoulder and wink at him: "Of course I knew, baby. Did I make you feel good?"'
-		'Unable to produce a coherent reply, he just moans while he rests on the mattress in a euphoric haze. Feeling pleased with yourself for exhausting your boyfriend so thoroughly, you give him a kiss on the cheek and get up from the bed.'
+		'Unable to produce a coherent reply, he just moans while he rests on the mattress in an euphoric haze. Feeling pleased with yourself for exhausting your boyfriend so thoroughly, you give him a kiss on the cheek and get up from the bed.'
 		gs 'cuminsidereact'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -582,7 +582,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cum8':
 	elseif protect ! 1:
 		gs 'npc_intro',$boy,'images/shared/sex/cum/cum8.mp4','',' ','',1
 		'Suddenly Vitek''s thrusts become shorter and more intense, and while he groans you feel hot jets of his sperm being squirted into your body. His cock remains erect for a while longer and you happily keep riding him while you can, not wanting to give up on this great feeling just yet.'
-		'Eventually you get up, and give him a kiss on the cheek while he just relaxes on the bed in a euphoric haze.'
+		'Eventually you get up, and give him a kiss on the cheek while he just relaxes on the bed in an euphoric haze.'
 		gs 'cum_call','',$boy,1
 		gs 'cuminsidereact'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'

+ 1 - 1
locations/love.qsrc

@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>''s "friend"', rand(18,32)
 			act 'Further':xgt 'sexdvoe', 'var'
 		elseif pcs_intel > 30:
 			proverka1 = 1
-			'You defend yourself for a a few minutes trying to tell him, that you didn''t do anything wrong and that his friends are just jealous. In the end, you manage to convince him, and <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> agrees with you.'
+			'You defend yourself for a few minutes trying to tell him, that you didn''t do anything wrong and that his friends are just jealous. In the end, you manage to convince him, and <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> agrees with you.'
 
 			act 'Further':gt 'love', 'frends'
 		end

+ 1 - 1
locations/lover_change.qsrc

@@ -1054,7 +1054,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Tits':
 	end
 end
 
-!!This is a interesting one as it will take in a couple of things, not just clothes preferences. I need to find clothing pictures for most of the types of clothes. Think of these as quest clothes.
+!!This is an interesting one as it will take in a couple of things, not just clothes preferences. I need to find clothing pictures for most of the types of clothes. Think of these as quest clothes.
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Clothes':
 !! void code - need future work
 !!	act 'Enter Clothing Shop':

+ 1 - 1
locations/lover_meet.qsrc

@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	gs 'lover_likes', 'makePrefTmp'
 
 	if haraklover[lover_number] = 0:'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> looks like a timid and not very confident young <<$loverGenderName>> <<$clom>>'
-	if haraklover[lover_number] = 1:'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> looks like a average young <<$loverGenderName>> <<$clom>>'
+	if haraklover[lover_number] = 1:'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> looks like an average young <<$loverGenderName>> <<$clom>>'
 	if haraklover[lover_number] = 2:'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> looks like a cocky and brash young <<$loverGenderName>> <<$clom>>'
 		
 	!!This is to reset the like part later

+ 7 - 7
locations/masharoom.qsrc

@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		minut += 15
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/masha/sex/r2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You see a row of sexual fetish outfits and latex outfits, three of them are about your size. Since no one is around it wouldn''t hurt to try a one of them on.'
+		'You see a row of sexual fetish outfits and latex outfits, three of them are about your size. Since no one is around it wouldn''t hurt to try one of them on.'
 		act 'Wear the latex mini skirt and hose.': gt 'masharoom', 'masha'
 		act 'Wear the leather corset and panties.': gt 'masharoom', '1'
 		act 'Wear the latex corset, stockings, leather collar and bondage cuffs.': gt 'masharoom', '2'
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masha':
 		*clr
 		menu_off = 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/masha/sex/r34.jpg"></center>'
-		'You order Masha to start licking your pussy, she immediately drops to her knees in front of you. Her tongue slides into your pussy and she expertly begins lapping at your clit, very quickly she nearly brings you to a orgasm. You pull her up by her leash and order her to insert a candle in place of the strapon dildo on your harness. Masha fiddles a little with the candle a before she finally gets it seated in place well for you.'
+		'You order Masha to start licking your pussy, she immediately drops to her knees in front of you. Her tongue slides into your pussy and she expertly begins lapping at your clit, very quickly she nearly brings you to an orgasm. You pull her up by her leash and order her to insert a candle in place of the strapon dildo on your harness. Masha fiddles a little with the candle a before she finally gets it seated in place well for you.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masha':
 					cla
 					*clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/masha/sex/r38.jpg"></center>'
-					'You took off the makeshift strapon, you moved so you was straddling her face in a 69 position. Masha immediately went into motion with her tongue on your pussy. It didn''t take her long, you was so excited and with in a few seconds a orgasm rocked your body and you covered her face in your pussy juices.'
+					'You took off the makeshift strapon, you moved so you was straddling her face in a 69 position. Masha immediately went into motion with her tongue on your pussy. It didn''t take her long, you was so excited and with in a few seconds an orgasm rocked your body and you covered her face in your pussy juices.'
 
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian', 'dom'
@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masha':
 		*clr
 		menu_off = 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/masha/sex/r27.jpg"></center>'
-		'You lie on the couch and beckon Masha to you as you spread your legs. Commanding her you say "Lick" Masha immediately crouches lips against your crotch, you pull on her leash, pulling her face even more into your pussy. Her tongue laps at your pussy, caressing the clitoris, and penetrating your vagina with her tongue, you''ll soon feel like your about to have a orgasm.'
+		'You lie on the couch and beckon Masha to you as you spread your legs. Commanding her you say "Lick" Masha immediately crouches lips against your crotch, you pull on her leash, pulling her face even more into your pussy. Her tongue laps at your pussy, caressing the clitoris, and penetrating your vagina with her tongue, you''ll soon feel like your about to have an orgasm.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masha':
 				*clr
 				picrand = rand(49, 51)
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/masha/sex/r<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-				'You grab the whip from the table and plunge the handle into her pussy and start fucking her hard with it, She starts screaming and moaning, she quickly has a orgasm.'
+				'You grab the whip from the table and plunge the handle into her pussy and start fucking her hard with it, She starts screaming and moaning, she quickly has an orgasm.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo_give', 10, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -290,7 +290,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masha':
 
 				act 'Let continues':
 					cla
-					'You did not stop her and a few seconds a orgasm rocks your body, leaving you quivering.'
+					'You did not stop her and a few seconds an orgasm rocks your body, leaving you quivering.'
 
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian', 'dom'
@@ -349,7 +349,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masha':
 
 			act 'Let continues':
 				cla
-				'You did not stop it, and a few seconds later your body shudders from a orgasm.'
+				'You did not stop it, and a few seconds later your body shudders from an orgasm.'
 
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 10, 'lesbian', 'dom'

+ 136 - 135
locations/mey_tamara_events.qsrc

@@ -15,8 +15,8 @@ if $args[0] = 'tamara':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Tamara Mikhailovna</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/meynolds/tamara.jpg"></center>'
-	'Tamara Mikhailovna, the twins mother. She''s a tall, big busted woman, quite outspoken just like a man. She''s a very attractive woman just under "fifty" years old, redheaded just like the daughters.'
-	'If it wasn''t for the fiery hair color, no one would ever think that Katja and Vicky are her daughters. Tamara Mikhailovna works in the city Bank holding a middle management position, even though she often complains about the work, the pay is good so she stays put.'
+	'Tamara Mikhailovna, the twins mother, is a tall, big busted woman, quite outspoken just like a man. She''s a very attractive woman just under "fifty" years old, redheaded just like the daughters.'
+	'If it wasn''t for the fiery hair color, no one would ever think that Katja and Vicky are her daughters. Tamara works in the city Bank holding a middle management position, even though she often complains about the work, the pay is good so she stays put.'
 
 	if $curloc = 'bank': act 'To go home': minut += 30 & gt 'mey_home', 'start'
 	if $curloc = 'mey_home' and mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] >= 32 and mey_tamara['qw_end'] = 0:
@@ -54,12 +54,12 @@ if $args[0] = 'first_meet':
 		'"Sighing, she replies:"'
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"After the experience I had with my ex-husband, all the desire went away for getting into a new relationship. And there was no time either, I had to earn money and raise my daughters. There was never time to treat myself I was always sacrificing so my daughters could live a good life! Who would want me now, an old battered woman with a rusty roof?"</i></font>'
 		'You start objecting:'
-		'<font color="navy"><i><font color="navy"><i>"What are you saying Tamara Mikhailovna, there is nothing called too old! You are a beautiful and a successful woman in your prime age. The men would be running head over heels for you!"</i></font>'
+		'<font color="navy"><i><font color="navy"><i>"What are you saying Tamara, there is nothing called too old! You are a beautiful and a successful woman in your prime age. The men would be running head over heels for you!"</i></font>'
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Thank you for the kind words. You don''t need to be so formal, <<$pcs_nickname>>. We''re not at work. You can call me aunt Tamara."</i></font>'
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Vicky, your girlfriend is wonderful! You should invite <<$pcs_nickname>> here more often!"</i></font>'
 		'Vicky interrupts your conversation:'
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Mother, you talk too much! You always scare away my friends with your talk."</i></font>'
-		'Tamara Mikhailovna pretends sighing and says:'
+		'Tamara pretends sighing and says:'
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"That''s what I get for raising you! Don''t worry about your lonely mother, just go on and play with your friend!"</i></font>'
 
 		act 'Go with Vicky': gs 'mey_vika_events', 'first_visit'
@@ -86,13 +86,13 @@ if $args[0] = 'next_meet':
 			if zz_stage = 1:
 				'"Oh hi, <<$pcs_nickname>>! I''m so glad to see you! Come in, come in, make yourself at home! I''ll put on a kettle right away!"'
 				'<font color="maroon"><i>"My little carrots are somewhere in the house, while I''m here all alone..."</i></font>'
-				'You shyly walk past her, passing through a spacious hall from which a staircase leads to the second floor to the kitchen. The kitchen is large, bright and spacious, tastefully furnished. From the kitchen there is access to the veranda. You sit down at the oval dining table and Tamara Mikhailovna, wearing an apron, quickly moves over to the fridge, pulling out all sorts of jars with jam, fruit and cheese and placing them on the table.'
+				'You shyly walk past her, passing through a spacious hall from which a staircase leads to the second floor to the kitchen. The kitchen is large, bright and spacious, tastefully furnished. From the kitchen there is access to the veranda. You sit down at the oval dining table and Tamara, wearing an apron, quickly moves over to the fridge, pulling out all sorts of jars with jam, fruit and cheese and placing them on the table.'
 			elseif zz_stage = 2:
 				'There''s a large vintage nickel plated kettle on the stove boiling, it doesn''t really fit in with the rest of the kitchen setting, but you think as long as it does what it''s supposed to than being visually appealing. The kitchen has a lots of flowers in pots, there''s pots hanging along the walls and pots standing on the floor. The atmosphere is cozy, peaceful and relaxed.'
 			elseif zz_stage = 3:
 				'Aunt Tamara asks you about school, friends, family, and your interests.'
 				'Finally the tea is ready and you''re sitting at a table, happily sipping a lemon fragrant tea, and talk about yourself. You start by telling aunt Tamara about how your father abandoned your mother a long time ago and now you all live with your stepfather. You keep on telling how the stepfather is good to you and your sister. Next you tell her about your sister that was not able to attend the University and now works at the checkout in the supermarket instead...'
-				'Tamara Mikhailovna listens with interest, pouring tea and offering you a plate filled with croissants and toast, while on the other plate there''s thinly sliced cheese and ham.'
+				'Tamara listens with interest, pouring tea and offering you a plate filled with croissants and toast, while on the other plate there''s thinly sliced cheese and ham.'
 			elseif zz_stage = 4:
 				'Your shyness is disappearing more and more and the two of you start excitedly chatting just like old friends, sharing stories.'
 				'You don''t even notice the age difference because aunt Tamara talks ceaselessly to you, telling you about herself. She is the daughter of a naval officer, and the family had to move around all over the country because the father served in the Baltic, Kamchatka and in the Northern Fleet.'
@@ -102,14 +102,14 @@ if $args[0] = 'next_meet':
 				'You can see both Katja''s and Vicky''s small quirks in aunt Tamara. She has preserved the beauty of Katja, sophisticated but not as youthfully naïve as Katja. She is calmer and more sensible than Vicky, even being more sociable and open than the cautious Katja.'
 				'Tamara gets a bottle of wine from the wine cooler and one glass:'
 				'<font color="maroon"><i>"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you won''t mind if aunt Tamara has a glass of wine while we have this wonderful conversation?"</i></font>'
-				'<font color="maroon"><i>"I have been living a reclusive life instead of just running wild. So that''s made me very distrusting. At work, I''m not dear Tamara Mikhailovna, but the big bad "boss", or the strict "businesswoman", I know that the "friendly female staff" are bad mouthing me, they probably think I slept my way up to the top."</i></font>'
+				'<font color="maroon"><i>"I have been living a reclusive life instead of just running wild. So that''s made me very distrusting. At work, I''m not dear Tamara, but the big bad "boss", or the strict "businesswoman", I know that the "friendly female staff" are bad mouthing me, they probably think I slept my way up to the top."</i></font>'
 			elseif zz_stage = 6:
-				'You are laughing at the figurative comparison, Tamara Mikhailovna is also smiling.'
+				'You are laughing at the figurative comparison, Tamara is also smiling.'
 				'<font color="maroon"><i>"I had a lot of friends here in Pavlovsk in my thirties, but as soon as I learned that I was pregnant the relationships started deteriorating. So I had a hard time talking to someone else but my ex-husband about becoming a mother."</i></font>'
 				'<font color="maroon"><i>"Nine months later I gave birth to them. Katja came out first. It is hard for me to bear. "</i></font> says aunt Tamara tearing up a little. <font color="maroon"><i>"Katja had us scared for a minute or so because she didn’’t make any sounds immediately, it took two slaps from the doctor for her to start screaming."</i></font>'
 				'<font color="maroon"><i>"Vicky flew out soon after like a cork from a bottle! You know, just like you see on comedy shows on tv."</i></font>'
 			elseif zz_stage = 7:
-				'Tamara Mikhailovna glances at the wall clock.'
+				'Tamara glances at the wall clock.'
 				'<font color="maroon"><i>"Oh, look at the clock, time really flies by when you''re enjoying yourself! "</i></font>'
 				'<font color="maroon"><i>" Look how dark it is outside! "</i></font>'
 				'<font color="maroon"><i>"You know what, you can stay the night. I don''t want you to running around this late! "</i></font>'
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'learning0':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/learning10.jpg"></center>'
 	'Nervously, you rang the doorbell to the Meynold residence. Short there after you hear the lock click open and the twins mother stands in front of you.'
-	'<font color="navy"><i>"Hello Tamara Mikhailovna! I''ve come here to study."</i></font> You still don''t dare to call her aunt Tamara.'
+	'<font color="navy"><i>"Hello Tamara! I''ve come here to study."</i></font> You still don''t dare to call her aunt Tamara.'
 	'<font color="maroon"><i>"So you''ve finally decided to go through it. Come in."</i></font> says Tamara.'
 	'The two of you make your way to the kitchen, Tamara puts on the familiar nickel plated kettle, and she begins taking out the jars of jam of the closet.'
 	'While doing her kitchen chores, Tamara is silent and not looking at you. You have a troubling feeling in the stomach, but you do not dare to start a conversation, you''re still too shy to talk with her.'
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'learning0':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/learning11.jpg"></center>'
 		'You drink tea and talk casually with each other. You''re sitting on needles filled with anticipation waiting for Tamara to speak up.'
-		'Having finished the tea, Tamara Mikhailovna casually says:'
+		'Having finished the tea, Tamara casually says:'
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Stand up, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I want to take a look at you.</i></font>'
 		'You stand up. She carefully examines you like a bug under a microscope.'
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Turn around, darling."</i></font>'
@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'learning0':
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Not bad, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I can work with this."</i></font> said Tamara nodding. <font color="maroon"><i>"But right now you''re just raw clay, which can be formed as a sculptural masterpiece or a simple brick. And who knows it may turn out to be just a dried up worthless piece of clay. Everything depends on you."</i></font>'
 		'She continues looking at you somewhat skeptical. It feels like she''s in a store checking the quality of the item. Under her careful scrutiny, you begin to shrink, like a violet.'
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Walk around a little."</i></font>'
-		'You take a few steps in the kitchen. Tamara Mikhailovna snorts:'
+		'You take a few steps in the kitchen. Tamara snorts:'
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"No no, my dear, this will not do!"</i></font>'
 		'<font color="navy"><i>"What''s wrong with my walk?"</i></font> you ask a bit surprised.'
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Well my dear, to put it lightly, you walk like you just crapped your pants and you''re afraid it will smudge."</i></font> hearing this "compliment" you feel ashamed... <font color="maroon"><i>"But don''t worry, I''ll teach you how to walk like a goddess."</i></font>'
@@ -173,18 +173,18 @@ if $args[0] = 'learning0':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/learning10.jpg"></center>'
 			if pcs_danc < 50:
-				'Tamara Mikhailovna annoyingly answers: <font color="maroon"><i>"Your dancing skills are exactly what I expected them to be. You dance like a skank from a rural disco."</i></font>'
+				'Tamara, clearly annoyed, answers: <font color="maroon"><i>"Your dancing skills are exactly what I expected them to be. You dance like a skank from a rural disco."</i></font>'
 			elseif pcs_dancero < 50:
-				'<font color="maroon"><i>"You did okay..."</i></font> nods Tamara Mikhailovna. <font color="maroon"><i>"But you still need to improve."</i></font>'
+				'<font color="maroon"><i>"You did okay..."</i></font> nods Tamara. <font color="maroon"><i>"But you still need to improve."</i></font>'
 			else
-				'<font color="maroon"><i>"Very nice, <<$pcs_nickname>>!"</i></font> nods Tamara Mikhailovna approvingly. <font color="maroon"><i>"One less thing you need to teach."</i></font>'
+				'<font color="maroon"><i>"Very nice, <<$pcs_nickname>>!"</i></font> nods Tamara approvingly. <font color="maroon"><i>"One less thing you need to learn."</i></font>'
 			end
 
 			act 'Hmm...':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/learning10.jpg"></center>'
-				'Tamara stands up from the table, pushing her cup, which she only had taken a sip of:'
-				'<font color="maroon"><i>"Let''s take a trip to the city, my dear, so we can get going. Consider this the beginning of your studies."</i></font>'
+				'Tamara stands up from the table, putting down her cup, which she had only taken a sip of:'
+				'<font color="maroon"><i>"Let''s take a trip to the city, my dear, so we can get started. Consider this the beginning of your studies."</i></font>'
 
 				if pcs_apprnc < 15: 
 					'<font color="maroon"><i>"We can''t have you looking like this... We have a lot of work in front of us."</i></font>'
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'learning0':
 				end
 
 				if pcs_apprnc >= 30 and pcs_apprnc < 50: 
-					'<font color="maroon"><i>"You''re quite good looking, and with such appearance there will be many suitors asking for your hand in marriage. You might even marry some average sugar daddy, being used by them for some years, until he finds someone prettier.</i></font>'
+					'<font color="maroon"><i>"You''re quite good looking, and with such an appearance there will be many suitors asking for your hand in marriage. You might even marry some average sugar daddy, being used by them for some years, until he finds someone prettier.</i></font>'
 				end
 
 				if pcs_apprnc >= 50: 
@@ -213,11 +213,11 @@ if $args[0] = 'learning1':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 30
 	gs 'stat'
-	'You hop into the car and the two of you drive to the city center. Tamara Mikhailovna leads you to the shopping mall.'
+	'You hop into the car and the two of you drive to the city center. Tamara leads you to the shopping mall.'
 
 	act 'Go shopping':
 		cla
-		'Under the watchful eye of your mentor, she tells you can buy two outfits, one from Pussy-Cats and the other one from the expensive boutique.'
+		'Under the watchful eye of your mentor, she says you can buy two outfits, one from Pussy-Cats and the other one from the expensive boutique.'
 
 		newdress_count = 0
 		newdress_loop = 0
@@ -260,14 +260,14 @@ if $args[0] = 'learning1':
 		
 		act 'Buy the clothes':
 			cla
-			'<font color="maroon"><i>"This will do, it''s the first time after all."</i></font> she says, approaching the counter, pulling out the purse.'
+			'<font color="maroon"><i>"This will do, it''s the first time after all."</i></font> she says, approaching the counter, pulling out her purse.'
 			'<font color="navy"><i>"But it''s so expensive! I can''t..."</i></font> you are taken aback by such generosity.'
 			'<font color="maroon"><i>"My dear! Don''t see it as a gift but as an investment in a long-term project."</i></font><br>'
 
 			act 'Enter the beauty salon':
 				cla
 				*clr
-				'Looks like Tamara Mikhailovna is well-known in both of the shops. As soon as she entered, the most experienced salesperson dropped everything, walked over to you and started picking out clothes for you.<br>'
+				'Looks like Tamara is well-known in both of the shops. As soon as she entered, the most experienced salesperson dropped everything, walked over to you and started picking out clothes.<br>'
 
 				tan = 10
 				if pcs_lashes < 2:pcs_lashes = 2
@@ -301,8 +301,8 @@ if $args[0] = 'learning1':
 					if newdress_id = 0 and newdress_loop <= 38:jump 'looptamaraschool'
 					
 					if newdress_id > 0:
-						'<font color="navy"><i>"I picked a real sexy outfit, it''s so sexy that the boys will be spontaneously cumming in their pants."</i></font> you said smiling.'
-						'<font color="maroon"><i>"Good! Now remember it’’s only to be used in school. Now lets start training how you walk. You can start by getting out of my car and take a walk home."</i></font> Tamara Mikhailovna hands you two thousand rubles. <font color="maroon"><i> "It''s important that you take care of your health so take the money and head over to the clinic and get an health exam. I''ll be waiting for you by the restaurant by 9 o''clock, don''t be late."</i></font>'
+						'<font color="navy"><i>"I picked a real sexy outfit, it''s so sexy that the boys will spontaneously be cumming in their pants."</i></font> you said smiling.'
+						'<font color="maroon"><i>"Good! Now remember it’’s only to be used in school. Now lets start training you how to walk elegantly. You can start by getting out of my car and take a walk home."</i></font> Tamara hands you two thousand rubles. <font color="maroon"><i> "It''s important that you take care of your health so take the money and head over to the clinic and get an health exam. I''ll be waiting for you by the restaurant at 9 o''clock, don''t be late."</i></font>'
 						
 						killvar 'newdress_id'
 						killvar 'newdress_count'
@@ -317,10 +317,10 @@ if $args[0] = 'learning1':
 						cla
 						minut += 20
 						gs 'stat'
-						'Tamara Mikhailovna reaches into the purse and hands you two thousand rubles.'
-						'<font color="maroon"><i>"I need to buy yourself a decent looking school uniform. And it''s only attended to be worn in school. I don''t want to see you wearying it somewhere else."</i></font>'
+						'Tamara reaches into her purse and hands you two thousand rubles.'
+						'<font color="maroon"><i>"You need to buy yourself a decent looking school uniform. And it''s only intended to be worn in school. I don''t want to see you wearying it somewhere else."</i></font>'
 						'<font color="navy"><i>"Where should I buy it?" you ask her.</i></font>'
-						'Tamara Mikhailovna nods towards a sign. Looking up you see the luminous sign showing "Sex Shop".'
+						'Tamara nods towards a sign. Looking up you see the luminous sign showing "Sex Shop".'
 						'<font color="maroon"><i>"I''ll wait for you in the car."</i></font>'
 						'You quickly hide the money in your pocket and overcoming the shame, you walk into the sex shop. 20 minutes later you return with a brand new school uniform.<br>'
 						
@@ -349,7 +349,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'learning1':
 						act 'Return to the Meynolds residence': mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] = 40 & minut += 30 & gt 'mey_home', 'start'
 						act 'Stay in the city':
 							cla
-							'<font color="maroon"><i>"No, dear. I need you to stay near here if you want I can drive you home to me or if you want to walk around the city. Either way you will need to kill a couple of hours. I''m feeling hungry so I''ll go and get something to eat."</i></font> said Tamara Mikhailovna. <font color="maroon"><i> "Whatever you decide, I expect you to be by the restaurant by 9 o''clock, I''ll be waiting for you there."</i></font><br>'
+							'<font color="maroon"><i>"No, dear. I need you to stay near here if you want I can drive you home to me or if you want to walk around the city. Either way you will need to kill a couple of hours. I''m feeling hungry so I''ll go and get something to eat."</i></font> She says. <font color="maroon"><i> "Whatever you decide, I expect you to be by the restaurant by 9 o''clock, I''ll be waiting for you there."</i></font><br>'
 
 							act 'I insist staying here in the city': mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] = 36 & gt 'down'
 							act 'Return to the Meynolds residence': mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] = 40 & minut += 30 & gt 'mey_home', 'start'
@@ -365,7 +365,7 @@ end
 if $args[0] = 'wait_qw':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/expensiverest/restoran.jpg"></center>'
-	'Near the entrance, glancing at the clock, Tamara Mikhailovna waits for you.'
+	'Near the entrance, glancing at the clock, Tamara waits for you.'
 
 	act 'Return to the Meynolds residence': mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] = 40 & minut += 30 & gt 'mey_home', 'start'
 end
@@ -374,7 +374,7 @@ end
 if $args[0] = 'rebuke':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/meynolds/tamara_tea0.jpg"></center>'
-	'You stand outside the Meynold residence. You can hear footsteps behind the door, but when you ring the bell no one opens.'
+	'You stand outside the Meynold residence. You can hear footsteps behind the door, but when you ring the bell, no one opens.'
 
 	act 'Ring the doorbell':
 		cla
@@ -383,42 +383,42 @@ if $args[0] = 'rebuke':
 		act 'Ring the doorbell again':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/learning10.jpg"></center>'
-			'After some anxious waiting, the door opens. Tamara Mikhailovna looked at you without her usual warm smile, she just stood there silently. She stands in the doorway, reluctantly letting you enter. She seems upset.'
-			'Her cold gaze is making your belly upset and you feel the anxiety increase.'
-			'You finally gather some strength and say <font color="navy"><i>"P-please forgive m-me, Tamara Mikhailovna!"</i></font> in a childs thin voice when it knows it did something bad. <font color="navy"><i>"I promise I''ll never do the same mistake again! It will never happen again! Please believe me!"</i></font>'  
-			'Tamara Mikhailovna silently answered with a nod indicating for you to continue on inside.'
+			'After some anxious waiting, the door opens. Tamara looks at you without her usual warm smile. She just stands there silently. After a few moments she slowly glides out of the doorway, reluctantly letting you enter. She seems upset.'
+			'Her cold gaze is upsetting your belly and you feel the anxiety increase.'
+			'You finally gather some courage and say <font color="navy"><i>"P-please forgive m-me, Tamara!"</i></font> in a child''s thin voice when it knows it did something bad. <font color="navy"><i>"I promise I''ll never make the same mistake again! It will never happen again! Please believe me!"</i></font>'  
+			'Tamara  silently answered with a nod indicating for you to continue on inside.'
 
 			act 'Enter':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/rebuke3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You stand in front of her in the hall disheartened, while she sits on the couch, legs crossed, silently staring at you.'
-				'You feel this burning sensation in your ears and cheeks. All of a sudden this feeling that you need to visit the bathroom comes over you. You can barely hold it in.'
+				'You stand in front of her in the living room, disheartened, while she sits on the couch, legs crossed, silently staring at you.'
+				'You feel a burning sensation in your ears and cheeks. All of a sudden the feeling that you need to visit the bathroom comes over you. You can barely hold it in.'
 
 				act 'Drink tea with Tamara':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/rebuke4.jpg"></center>'
-					'Finally Tamara Mikhailovna ends the long drawn out silence by saying'
-					'<font color="maroon"><i>"Listen to me very carefully, girl. What we set out to do is a very serious and difficult task. Also very expensive might I add. I invested my hard earned money on you. A lot of money, not to mention the effort and time and expect you to be able to justify these efforts. I don''t ask for much. But I demand complete obedience and to follow my instructions to the letter, if you want to succeed in life. I''m hoping you don’’t think I do this all out of pure unselfishness? You''re not Aladdin, and I''m not a genie here to fulfill any of your whishes. I have a lot to teach you, which will help you in many ways, giving you much more than you can accomplish alone."</i></font>'
-					'<font color="maroon"><i>"But don''t be fooled, don''t take my kindness for weakness. Otherwise we will stop this right away. I''ll be frank with you, maybe you''re pleased having a bland life, marrying someone ugly, working a dead ass job at the local sewing factory, repeating the same thing day after day to the point of exhaustion. Do you want to end up like that?"</i></font>'
-					'<font color="navy"><i>"No I don''t!"</i></font> you furiously shake your head, almost ripping it off. <font color="navy"><i>"I understand! Please, believe me! It will never happen again!"</i></font>'
-					'<font color="maroon"><i>"I really hope this is the only time we need to have this conversation. Because there won''t be a second time, my dear."</i></font> said Tamara Mikhailovna clicking her nails on the armrest.'
-					'<font color="maroon"><i>"Now come on, let''s have some tea, I''ve baked some wonderful cookies!</i></font> she suddenly warmly smiles again.'
+					'Finally Tamara ends the long drawn out silence by saying:'
+					'<font color="maroon"><i>"Listen to me very carefully, girl. What we set out to do is a very serious and difficult task. Also, very expensive might I add. I invested my hard earned money in you. A lot of money, not to mention the effort and time and expect you to be able to justify these efforts. I don''t ask for much. But I demand complete obedience and for you to follow my instructions to the letter if you want to succeed in life. I''m hoping you don’’t think I do this all out of pure unselfishness? You''re not Aladdin and I''m not a genie here to fulfill any of your whishes. I have a lot to teach you, which will help you in many ways, giving you much more than you can accomplish alone."</i></font>'
+					'<font color="maroon"><i>"But don''t be fooled, don''t take my kindness for weakness. Otherwise we will stop this right away. I''ll be frank with you, maybe you''re pleased having a bland life, marrying someone ugly, working a dead end job at the local sewing factory, repeating the same thing day after day to the point of exhaustion. Do you want to end up like that?"</i></font>'
+					'<font color="navy"><i>"No, I don''t!"</i></font> You furiously shake your head, almost ripping it off. <font color="navy"><i>"I understand! Please, believe me! It will never happen again!"</i></font>'
+					'<font color="maroon"><i>"I really hope this is the only time we need to have this conversation. Because there won''t be a second time, my dear."</i></font> Says Tamara, clicking her nails on the armrest.'
+					'<font color="maroon"><i>"Now come on, let''s have some tea. I''ve baked some wonderful cookies!</i></font> She suddenly smiles warmly again.'
 
 					act 'Have a conversation':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/rebuke5.jpg"></center>'
-						'You drink the tea in the kitchen and taste the most delicious cookies you ever tasted, aunt Tamara laughs and tells all sorts of stories, and the anxiety that was in your belly, disappears.'
+						'You drink tea in the kitchen and taste the most delicious cookies you''ve ever tasted. Aunt Tamara laughs and tells all sorts of stories and the anxiety that was in your belly disappears.'
 						'She''s not the Snow Queen Tamara Mikhailovna anymore, that frightened you as just as she takes pleasure doing the same thing to her subordinates at the Bank. Instead she''s the fun-loving and kind aunt Tamara again.'
-						'All of a sudden Tamara Mikhailovna puts down her cup…'
+						'All of a sudden Tamara puts down her cup…'
 
 						act 'Listen':
 							cla
 							if pcs_grades < 80:
-								'<font color="maroon"><i>"Listen to me very carefully. From now on, no more adventures. You will follow all my orders, no exemptions. To the letter. You''re not even allowed to fart without my permission, understand! Don''t worry you''ll have lots of adventures."</i></font>'
+								'<font color="maroon"><i>"Listen to me very carefully. From now on, no more adventures. You will follow all my orders, no exemptions. To the letter. You''re not even allowed to fart without my permission, understand! Don''t worry you''ll have lots of excitement."</i></font>'
 								'<font color="maroon"><i>"Whether you like it or not, your school performance must improve. You will make a plan that you''ll show me on how you''ll improve. Don''t think this is a fairy tale. You will be putting blood, sweat and tears until your grades have gone up and I''m satisfied! You can forget about drinking and partying until your grades are good enough."</i></font>'
 								'You sadly nod your head, saying goodbye to the easy life...'
 							else
-								'<font color="maroon"><i>"Listen to me very carefully, my dear. You have a good thing going on here, and I''m happy about the progress you''ve made. But, from now on, no more adventures. You will follow all my orders. Without any questions. You''re not even allowed to fart without my permission, understand! Don''t worry I have lots of adventures planned for you."</i></font>'
+								'<font color="maroon"><i>"Listen to me very carefully, my dear. You have a good thing going on here, and I''m happy about the progress you''ve made. But, from now on, no more adventures. You will follow all my orders. Without any questions. You''re not even allowed to fart without my permission, understand! Don''t worry I have lots of exciting things planned for you."</i></font>'
 								'<font color="maroon"><i>"And don''t be afraid, I''m not threatening you. But if you want to succeed in life you must follow the tasks I give and execute them to the letter. Without that, you''re just a diamond in the rough."</i></font><br>'
 								'<font color="maroon"><i>"Based on your action, there seems to be a little nympho inside of you that loves sex, and with your talent and shamelessness you could easily become a career porn actress. You''ll probably become a big star, being sought after many men but in reality, you''ll just be lonely because all the men will think you''re only good for one thing. But who am I to judge, you can become whatever you want, I will not interfere, if your mind is made up. But whatever you decide to become you got to put in hard work in it. You have to focus on one thing only, not straying away from the path you''ve laid for yourself..."</i></font>'
 								'<font color="maroon"><i>"Don''t be stupid throwing away all that you''ve learned. You can be sure I will never forgive you. Knowledge never hurt anyone, it will help you a lot in life...'
@@ -430,7 +430,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'rebuke':
 								mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] = 40
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/rebuke10.jpg"></center>'
 								'As you''re about to leave she stops you in the doorway...'
-								'<font color="maroon"><i>"I hope you were paying attention to what I said today,"</i></font> and in a second the image of a smiling middle-aged housewife turns into the ice queen. <font color="maroon"><i>"I can''t barely wait until our next lesson!</i></font> Tamara Mikhailovna warmly smiles at you while she says goodbye.'
+								'<font color="maroon"><i>"I hope you were paying attention to what I said today,"</i></font> and in a second the image of a smiling middle-aged housewife turns into the ice queen. <font color="maroon"><i>"I can barely wait until our next lesson!</i></font> Tamara adds warmly as she says goodbye.'
 								'<font color="maroon"><i>"Oh yeah, I forgot one thing. I called your mother and told her that the girls and I are enjoying your company so we agreed that you would be staying with us for the next two weeks. I want to keep you on a tight leash."<font color="maroon"><i>'
 
 								act 'Move away': gt 'mey_home', 'start'
@@ -451,7 +451,7 @@ end
 if $args[0] = 'party0':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party0.jpg"></center>'
-	'<font color="maroon"><i>"My dear, my company is having an office party tonight, would you like to accompany me? I would like to introduce you to some people. If you do decide to tag along, you need to make yourself presentable. As soon as we enter I want the whole room to look in awe at you."</i></font>'
+	'<font color="maroon"><i>"My dear, my company is having an office party tonight, would you like to accompany me? I would like to introduce you to some people. If you do decide to tag along, you need to make yourself presentable. As soon as we enter I want the whole room to look at you in awe."</i></font>'
 
 	act 'Refuse':
 		cla
@@ -467,8 +467,8 @@ if $args[0] = 'party0':
 		! gotta get ready for work
 		mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] = 41
 		'<font color="navy"><i>"I would love to accompany you to the party, aunt Tamara! I''ll go and get ready right away."</i></font>'
-'Tamara Mikhailovna looks mischievously at you, but strictly instructs you to...'
-'<font color="maroon"><i>"Wear your formal dress and put on normal makeup," she smiles. "Don''t overdo the makeup you should look normal, not too little, but don''t put on a ton of makeup either, you''re not a soldier, putting on war paint before battle! Be ready by 18 o''clock. I can''t be bothered waiting for you, I''ll be leaving by that time. Fail to show up and there might be some consequences..."</i></font>'
+		'Tamara looks mischievously at you, but strictly instructs you to...'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Wear your formal dress and put on normal makeup," she smiles. "Don''t overdo the makeup. You should look normal. Not too little, but don''t put on a ton of makeup either. You''re not a soldier, putting on war paint before battle! Be ready by 18 o''clock. I can''t be bothered waiting for you. I''ll leave without you if you''re not on time and there might be some consequences..."</i></font>'
 
 		act 'Move away': gt 'mey_home', 'start'
 	end
@@ -483,7 +483,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'check_look':
 		! if long hair is desired styling
 		if shorthair = 0 and pcs_hairbsh = 0:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party0.jpg"></center>'
-			'Tamara Mikhailovna examines you and shake his head in disproval. You''re not ready for your great "debut"... Disappointed, you head back...'
+			'Tamara examines you and shakes her head in dissaproval. You''re not ready for your great "debut"... Disappointed, you head back...'
 
 			act 'Depart': gt 'mey_home', 'start'
 		else
@@ -496,7 +496,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'check_look':
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party0.jpg"></center>'
-		'Tamara Mikhailovna examines you and shake his head in disproval. You''re not ready for your great "debut"... Disappointed, you head back...'
+		'Tamara examines you and shakes her head in dissaproval. You''re not ready for your great "debut"... Disappointed, you head back...'
 
 		act 'Depart': gt 'mey_home', 'start'
 	end
@@ -507,20 +507,20 @@ if $args[0] = 'party1':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 30
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/expensiverest/restoran.jpg"></center>'
-	'Tamara Mikhailovna stops the car in front of the restaurant.'
-	'<font color="maroon"><i>"Listen closely now, <<$pcs_nickname>>. It''s a very formal party with some big shots from the city so try not to embarrass me. You should act like Cinderella at the ball, being charming and entrance them with your beauty. Don''t get drunk and begin dancing naked on the table or accompany different men to the toilet, you''re not a prostitute. I really hope you follow my advice. Unlike the time I let Vicky tag along...</i></font>'
-	'You wisely decided not to ask aunt Tamara what happened that time she brought Vicky with her, you''ll ask her at the party instead.'
+	'Tamara stops the car in front of the restaurant.'
+	'<font color="maroon"><i>"Listen closely now, <<$pcs_nickname>>. It''s a very formal party with some big shots from the city so try not to embarrass me. You should act like Cinderella at the ball, be charming and entrance them with your beauty. Don''t get drunk and begin dancing naked on the table or accompany different men to the toilet, you''re not a prostitute. I really hope you follow my advice. Unlike the time I let Vicky tag along...</i></font>'
+	'You wisely decide not to ask aunt Tamara what happened that time she brought Vicky with her, you''ll ask her at the party instead.'
 
 	act 'Go inside the restaurant':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party6.jpg"></center>'
-		'The doorman opens the door for you. The restaurant is hall filled with people. Men in expensive suits, and all the women in evening gowns. You hear classic music playing, the waiters carrying drinks are moving effortlessly among the guests. Tamara Mikhailovna takes a glass of champagne from a tray while a waiter passes by.'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Don''t be shy, my dear. Start mingling. I''ll call you over when I need you. Remember don''t drink too much. And be charming!"</i></font> she says while she theatrically raises her glass, smiling, and quickly moving towards someone she recognizes.'
+		'The doorman opens the door for you. The restaurant''s hall filled with people. The men in expensive suits and all the women in evening gowns. You hear classical music playing. The waiters, carrying drinks, are moving effortlessly among the guests. Tamara takes a glass of champagne from a tray while a waiter passes by.'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Don''t be shy, my dear. Start mingling. I''ll call you over when I need you. Remember don''t drink too much. And be charming!"</i></font> She says while she theatrically raises her glass, smiling, and quickly moving towards someone she recognizes.'
 
 		act 'Enter':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party7.jpg"></center>'
-			'You look around the hall. There''s a soft playing live string quartet in one of the corners. This is not some regular diner with a cheap tape recorder and karaoke. In another corner there''s a set of tables with all sorts of appetizers. The waiters are tirelessly running around the room with their trays...'
+			'You look around the hall. There''s a live string quartet playing in one of the corners. This is not some regular diner with a cheap tape recorder and karaoke. In another corner there''s a set of tables with all sorts of appetizers. The waiters are tirelessly running around the room with their trays...'
 			'You grab a glass from a waiters tray while he''s passing by, with the same grace and elegance like your mentor. Around the room you see groups of people with glasses in their hands, mingling with each other. There''s a lot of people, but no one catches your attention.'
 
 			act 'Have a drink':
@@ -529,13 +529,13 @@ if $args[0] = 'party1':
 				minut += 10
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party8.jpg"></center>'
-				'You walk down the hall with a glass, observing the people around you. You notice that you''re the only youth there, mainly the guests are respectable middle-aged men and elderly women pretending being younger than what they are. You would think that these "middle-aged" women should be classy, but they''re all tacky dressed, showing more skin than you would expect them to do. You also notice the expensive jewelry being worn by the women, there''s enough jewelry to fill three stores!'
+				'You walk down the hall with your glass, observing the people around you. You notice that you''re the only youth there. Mainly, the guests are respectable middle-aged men and women. Most of the women are pretending to be younger than they really are. You would think that these "middle-aged" women should be classy, but they''re all dressed tackily, showing more skin than you would expect them to. You also notice the expensive jewelry being worn by the women. There''s enough jewelry to fill three stores!'
 
 				act 'Look around':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party9.jpg"></center>'
-					'In the Banquet hall you hear a light humming. The guests have splited into smaller groups, speaking about something inaudibly. Tamara Mikhailovna has left you to fend for yourself, once again spotting someone she recognized. You, not knowing anyone else but her, feel scared approaching someone, striking up a conversation with these refined guests.'
-					'Playing with your glass, you decide for yourself "Tamara Mikhailovna said to get noticed. It''s time to let them know who I am..." You take a big sip from the glass, and start slowly wandering around the room, trying to find someone to approach.'
+					'In the Banquet hall you hear a light humming. The guests have split into smaller groups, speaking about something inaudibly. Tamara has left you to fend for yourself, once again spotting someone she recognizes. You, not knowing anyone else but her, feel scared approaching someone, striking up a conversation with these refined guests.'
+					'Playing with your glass, you decide for yourself "Tamara said to get noticed. It''s time to let them know who I am..." You take a big sip from the glass, and slowly start wandering around the room, trying to find someone to approach.'
 
 					act 'Enter the banquet hall':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -543,8 +543,8 @@ if $args[0] = 'party1':
 						alko += 2
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party10.jpg"></center>'
-						'Some men look in your direction, but most of them are occupied with some boring business conversation. You spend about twenty minutes aimlessly wandering around not being able to find anyone interesting.'
-						'<font color="navy"><i>"This won''t do, I''m too nervous... To hell with the advice aunt Tamara gave me!"</i></font> you think to yourself. The first glass is empty, and you grab another glass from a waiters tray. You taste the expensive champagne, it has a delicate aroma, and a wonderful aftertaste making it easy to drink.'
+						'Some men look in your direction. But most of them are occupied with some boring business conversation. You spend about twenty minutes aimlessly wandering around, not being able to find anyone interesting.'
+						'<font color="navy"><i>"This won''t do, I''m too nervous... To hell with the advice aunt Tamara gave me!"</i></font> you think to yourself. The first glass is empty, and you grab another glass from a waiters tray. You taste the expensive champagne, it has a delicate aroma and a wonderful aftertaste, making it easy to drink.'
 
 						act 'Eavesdrop on the men': gt 'mey_tamara_events', 'party2'
 					end
@@ -559,13 +559,13 @@ if $args[0] = 'party2':
 	*clr & cla
 	if hour = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/expensiverest/restoran.jpg"></center>'
-		'The party finishes, the restaurant is closing, it''s time to go home.'
+		'The party finishes. The restaurant is closing. It''s time to go home.'
 
 		act 'Go inside': minut += 30 & gt 'mey_home', 'start'
 		exit
 	end
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party'+rand(8,10)+'.jpg"></center>'
-	'"You must try the food, it''s what the oligarchs usually eat..." someone points you in the direction of a luxuriously table filled with appetizers.'
+	'"You must try the food, it''s what the oligarchs usually eat..." someone points you in the direction of a luxurious table filled with appetizers.'
 
 	act 'Try the food':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -587,7 +587,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'party2':
 		minut += 10
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party7.jpg"></center>'
-		'You take a sip of the expensive champagne, it has a delicate aroma, and a wonderful aftertaste making it easy to drink.'
+		'You take a sip of the expensive champagne, it has a delicate aroma and a wonderful aftertaste, making it easy to drink.'
 
 		act 'Step away': gt 'mey_tamara_events', 'party2'
 	end
@@ -596,7 +596,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'party2':
 		minut += 10
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party9.jpg"></center>'
-		'By now you''re really bored and feeling left out, Tamara Mikhailovna, is too absorbed by the conversation, not paying you any attention.'
+		'By now you''re really bored and feel left out.	Tamara is too absorbed by the conversation, not paying you any attention.'
 
 		if alko >= 3:
 			if mesec = 0 and pcs_vag > 0 and mey_tamara['drink_qw'] = 0:
@@ -621,9 +621,10 @@ end
 if $args[0] = 'party3':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party15.jpg"></center>'
-	'Champagne is a treacherous drink. It goes down like lemonade, but once it hits you it feels you like a sledgehammer hit you. Towards the end of the evening you are swaying about clearly drunk. You keep on drifting around with a glass, giggling and hiccupping. At the end, your legs are no longer being able to serve you. Gathering your last remaining strength, you find a chair in the corner, crashing on it thinking <font color="navy"><i>"I need to take a short break. Just a few seconds and then I''m good to go again!"</i></font>'
-	'You''re awoken by Tamara Mikhailovna in the yard. She deliberately slams the car door, while you were sleeping in the back seat. Your mouth tastes like crap and you have a hell of a headache.'
-	'<font color="maroon"><i>"Go to your room! We''ll about this talk tomorrow."</i></font>'
+	'Champagne is a treacherous drink. It goes down like lemonade. But once it hits you it feels like you were hit by a sledgehammer. Towards the end of the evening you are swaying about, clearly drunk. You keep on drifting around with a glass, giggling and hiccuping. At the end, your legs are no longer able to keep you on your feet. Gathering your last remaining strength, you find a chair in the corner. You crash on it thinking <font color="navy"><i>"I need to take a short break. Just a few seconds and then I''m good to go again!"</i></font>'
+	'...'
+	'You''re awoken by Tamara in the front yard. She deliberately slams the car door, while you were sleeping in the back seat. Your mouth tastes like crap and you have a hell of a headache.'
+	'<font color="maroon"><i>"Go to your room! We''ll talk about this tomorrow."</i></font>'
 
 	mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] = 50
 	mey_tamara['qw_end'] = 1
@@ -650,18 +651,18 @@ if $args[0] = 'party4':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party'+zz_stage+'.jpg"></center>'
 	if zz_stage = 16:
 		zz_stage += 1
-		'The champagne silently creeps up on you. You''re feeling more loose and finally find the strength to mingle. The alcohol is making you a bit horny and you can''t shake off this desire that you want to hook up with someone. You are totally forgetting about the strict orders that Tamara Mikhailovna gave you about "keeping your composure at all times, and don''t go looking for sexual encounters".'
+		'The champagne silently creeps up on you. You''re feeling more loose and finally find the strength to mingle. The alcohol is making you a bit horny and you can''t shake off the desire, wanting to hook up with someone. You are totally forgetting the strict orders that Tamara gave you about "keeping your composure at all times, and not going looking for sexual encounters".'
 		'You look around the room observing the men. The only men you notice are either ugly or they''ve brought their wives or girlfriends with them.'
 		'"Well, fuck!" you think angrily. "They''re either ugly or taken!"'
-		'All of a sudden you notice something very interesting... A man in his thirties having a rowdy discussion with his girlfriend. You could see him getting upset when his girlfriend said something quite upsetting. She starts pushing him away, wanting him to leave her alone. As he''s moving away she mocks him by doing a foul gesture. Sensing blood, you head in his direction...'
+		'All of a sudden you notice something very interesting... A man in his thirties having a rowdy discussion with his girlfriend. You can see him getting upset when his girlfriend says something quite upsetting. She starts pushing him away, wanting him to leave her alone. As he moves away she mocks him with a foul gesture. Sensing blood, you head in his direction...'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'mey_tamara_events', 'party4a'
 	elseif zz_stage = 17:
 		zz_stage += 1
-		'You slowly approach the man, leaning close to him, glancing, not really sure how to approach the situation. He immediately notices you, and clearly signaling that he doesn''t want to be bothered right now...'
-		'<font color="navy"><i>"I see that you''re having some issues with your girlfriend?"</i></font> you say while trying to look as flirtatious as you can.'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Her? She''s a gold-digger that doesn''t know when to shut up. She''s not going anywhere. She''ll get it all out at the club with her friends, then return home and sleep in my bed. When she wakes up tomorrow all will be back to normal again..."</i></font> said the man. <font color="maroon"><i>"And you see, I can do whatever I want tonight, fuck her..."</i></font>'
-		'<font color="navy"><i>"Well, if you want I could help you out with so you don''t feel lonely tonight. I find this party very boring!"</i></font> you look seductively at him.'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Yeah, sure why not. Come with me, I''ll give you a grand tour of the restaurant. I''m one the co-owners. I''ll show you the hidden parts here around. I''m sure you''ll find it exciting."</i></font>'
+		'You slowly approach the man, leaning close to him, glancing, not really sure how to approach the situation. He immediately notices you, and clearly signals that he doesn''t want to be bothered right now...'
+		'<font color="navy"><i>"I see that you''re having some issues with your girlfriend?"</i></font> You say while trying to look as flirtatious as you can.'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Her? She''s a gold-digger that doesn''t know when to shut up. She''s not going anywhere. She''ll get it all out at the club with her friends, then return home and sleep in my bed. When she wakes up tomorrow, everything will be back to normal again..."</i></font> Says the man. <font color="maroon"><i>"And you see, I can do whatever I want tonight, fuck her..."</i></font>'
+		'<font color="navy"><i>"Well, if you want I could help you out so you don''t feel lonely tonight. I find this party very boring!"</i></font> You look seductively at him.'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Yeah, sure why not. Come with me, I''ll give you a grand tour of the restaurant. I''m one the co-owners. I''ll show you the hidden parts around here. I''m sure you''ll find it exciting."</i></font>'
 		act 'Refuse':
 			mey_tamara['drink_qw'] = 1
 			gt 'mey_tamara_events', 'party2'
@@ -674,28 +675,28 @@ if $args[0] = 'party4a':
 	*clr & cla
 	zz_stage = 18
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party18.jpg"></center>'
-	'The two of you get out of the Banquet hall. As you''re walking he''s feeling your butt and you start getting more excited. You stop at a door, with a bronze sign showing "Employees only". He tells you that this is the first stop and opens the door. Well inside he opens another door leading you deeper insider.'
-	'As soon as the door closes the two of you start passionately kissing. Riled up, you push the man on the table, grabbing his tie pulling him towards you.'
+	'The two of you get out of the Banquet hall. As you walk he feels your butt and you start getting more excited. You stop at a door, with a bronze sign showing "Employees only". He tells you that this is the first stop and opens the door. Further inside he opens another door leading you in.'
+	'As soon as the door closes the two of you start kissing passionately. Riled up, you push the man on the table and seat yourself next to him, grab his tie and pull him towards you.'
 	act 'Continue':
 		cls
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party19.jpg"></center>'
-		'Without any hesitation he slides his hand between your legs. Touching your wet pussy lips, making you moan softly. You grab him by the shoulders and push him down on his knees, lifting your dress and starts kissing you just above your clit. You move your panties aside and he starts licking you. The sensation that hits you is indescribable and when he starts using his finger you can''t avoid nearing the edge. Your breathing intensifies and your wet pussy is pulsating, the moaning is getting louder and louder and before you know it, you cum in his mouth...'
+		'Without any hesitation he slides his hand between your legs. Touching your wet pussy lips, making you moan softly. You grab him by the shoulders and push him down on his knees. He lifts your dress and starts kissing you just above your clit. You move your panties aside and he starts licking you. The sensation that hits you is indescribable and when he starts using his finger you can''t avoid nearing the edge. Your breathing intensifies and your wet pussy is pulsating, the moaning is getting louder and louder and before you know it, you cum in his mouth...'
 		act 'Continue':
 			cls
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party20.jpg"></center>'
-			'Wanting to repay the favor you undo his pants pulling out his hard cock, you kneel and begin caressing it with your hands. You switch over enveloping his throbbing cock with your mouth. He''s now groaning louder and louder and his cock is growing inside your mouth, not wanting it to end too early you stop and take off your dress.'
+			'Wanting to repay the favor you undo his pants and pull out his hard cock. You kneel and begin caressing it with your hands. Wanting to taste it, you switch over to enveloping his throbbing cock with your mouth. He starts groaning louder and louder and his cock grows inside your mouth. Not wanting it to end too early, you stop and take off your dress.'
 			act 'Continue':
 				cls
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party21.jpg"></center>'
-				'The man overcome with lust bends you over the table, pulling your panties off, sliding a finger inside your now dripping wet pussy testing to see if you''re ready. You turn your head nodding wanting him to enter you...'
+				'The man, overcome with lust, bends you over the table, pulls your panties off and slides a finger inside your now dripping wet pussy. Testing to see if you''re ready. You turn your head and nod, wanting him to enter you...'
 				act 'Continue':
 					cls
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party22.jpg"></center>'
-					'He teases you by stroking the tip of his cock against your lips, making you wetter. Suddenly you feel his cock penetrate you, as you gasp by the size of his cock. After a slow start he begin picking up his pace as he''s pounding you. You start moaning louder and louder, trembling and cumming again.'
+					'He teases you by stroking the tip of his cock against your lips, making you wetter. Suddenly, you feel his cock penetrate you and the size of his cock makes you gasp. After a slow start he begins picking up the pace as he''s pounding you. You start moaning louder and louder, trembling and cumming again.'
 					act 'Continue':
 						cls
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -706,13 +707,13 @@ if $args[0] = 'party4a':
 							cls
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party24.jpg"></center>'
-							'As you come out from the office you stumble upon an angry Tamara Mikhailovna. Not allowing you to go to back to the party, she orders you to...'
+							'As you come out from the office you stumble upon an angry Tamara. Not allowing you to go back to the party, she orders you...'
 							'<font color="maroon"><i>"Follow me!"</i></font>'
-							'You faintly realize that you''ve done something wrong, but champagne is still controlling your senses, and you''re in a great mood after the sex. You try to justify that nothing happened and that you "just went out to powder your nose and that it took a while..." However, Tamara Mikhailovna doesn''t even budge, she walks in front of you, now visibly upset.'
+							'You faintly realize that you''ve done something wrong. But champagne is still controlling your senses, and you''re in a great mood after the sex you just had. You try to justify yourself saying that nothing happened and that you "just went out to powder your nose and that it took a while..." However, Tamara Mikhailovna doesn''t even budge, she walks in front of you, now visibly upset.'
 							'Approaching her car, she opens the rear passenger door...'
 							'<font color="maroon"><i>"Get in, now!"</i></font>'
 							'You sit down, not understanding why she''s so upset.'
-							'<font color="maroon"><i>"Wait for me here! You can blame yourself. You have no idea what you''ve done..."</i></font> says Tamara Mikhaylovna before returning to the restaurant.'
+							'<font color="maroon"><i>"Wait for me here! You can blame yourself. You have no idea what you''ve done..."</i></font> Says Tamara Mikhaylovna before returning to the restaurant.'
 							act 'Continue':
 								cls
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -740,8 +741,8 @@ if $args[0] = 'party4a':
 									pcs_sleep += 3
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party15.jpg"></center>'
-									'You''re awoken by Tamara Mikhailovna in the yard. She deliberately slams the car door, while you were sleeping in the back seat. Your mouth tastes like crap and you have a hell of a headache.'
-									'<font color="maroon"><i>"Go to your room! We''ll about this talk tomorrow."</i></font>'
+									'You''re awoken by Tamara in the front yard. She deliberately slams the car door, while you were sleeping in the back seat. Your mouth tastes like crap and you have a hell of a headache.'
+									'<font color="maroon"><i>"Go to your room! We''ll talk about this tomorrow."</i></font>'
 
 									act 'Go to the car': 
 										msg 'End of current story'
@@ -761,27 +762,27 @@ end
 if $args[0] = 'party5':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party25.jpg"></center>'
-	'<font color="maroon"><i>"Why is such a sweet young thing standing here alone?"</i></font> you hear a male voice behind the shoulder. <font color="maroon"><i>"Don''t worry I''ll keep you company..."</i></font>'
-	'You turn facing the direction the voice is coming from. You spot a bald short man dressed in an expensive suit. The outfit fits him badly mostly because of his enormous belly. Judging by the looks he has the classic sugar-daddy appearance.'
-	'<font color="maroon"><i>"How can it be possible that such a delicate flower is by herself, you do know it''s not good for you to be alone."</i></font> he smiles. <font color="maroon"><i>"A delicate flower like yourself must be carefully nurtured and groomed properly, preferably by an experienced gardener. Let me buy you some champagne, I promise it''ll taste just as heavenly as you."</i></font>'
-	'He extend his hand and you notice his thick hairy fingers which are studded with multiple rings. The sugar-daddy grabs another glass from a tray and brings it to you. He speaks up again...'
+	'<font color="maroon"><i>"Why is such a sweet young thing standing here alone?"</i></font> you hear a male voice saying behind you. <font color="maroon"><i>"Don''t worry I''ll keep you company..."</i></font>'
+	'You turn facing the direction the voice is coming from. You spot a short, bald man dressed in an expensive suit. The outfit fits him badly, mostly because of his enormous belly. You judge his looks to be those of the classic sugar-daddy.'
+	'<font color="maroon"><i>"How can it be possible that such a delicate flower is by herself, don''t you know it''s not good for you to be alone?"</i></font> he smiles. <font color="maroon"><i>"A delicate flower like yourself must be carefully nurtured and groomed properly, preferably by an experienced gardener. Let me buy you some champagne. I promise it''ll taste just as heavenly as you."</i></font>'
+	'He extends his hand and you notice his thick hairy fingers are decorated with multiple rings. The sugar-daddy grabs another glass from a tray and brings it to you. He speaks up again...'
 
 	act 'Mingle':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party26.jpg"></center>'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"You should try the lobster! It goes perfectly with the champagne! To be honest, I''m not that big of a fan when it comes to champagne and lobster, I''d rather have a glass of vodka and cabbage rolls in a modest hut by the river. Or a beer and some crayfish! I own a modest house near the town. I''m just a simple contractor, as I''ve built the house myself, it''s very modest, the pool is only twenty five meters."</i></font> he obscenely laughs, making his second chin shake.'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"You should try the lobster! It goes perfectly with the champagne! To be honest, I''m not that big of a fan when it comes to champagne and lobster, I''d rather have a glass of vodka and cabbage rolls in a modest hut by the river. Or a beer and some crayfish! I own a modest house near town. I''m just a simple contractor. As I''ve built the house myself, it''s very modest. The pool is only twenty five meters long."</i></font> he laughs obscenely, making his second chin shake.'
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"So what do you say my delicate flower, I would love to take you on a date. We''d had a great time, we can swim in the pool, grab something to eat."</i></font> he says while trying to hug you by the waist.'
-		'<font color="navy"><i>"What a disgusting pig."</i></font> you think to yourself. <font color="navy"><i>"But a very rich pig, he''s a simple minded buffoon that I can probably use to my advantage."</i></font>'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Come on gorgeous. Don''t worry I''m very kind, you won''t regret it."</i></font> he pulls out a big cell phone from his inside pocket a cell phone asking what''s your name and number.'
+		'<font color="navy"><i>"What a disgusting pig."</i></font> You think to yourself. <font color="navy"><i>"But a very rich pig. He''s a simple minded buffoon that I can probably use to my advantage."</i></font>'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Come on gorgeous. Don''t worry, I''m very kind, you won''t regret it."</i></font> He pulls a big cell phone from his inside pocket and asks for your name and number.'
 
 		act 'Try the lobster':
 			*clr & cla
 			mey_tamara['builder_qw'] = 1
 			minut += 15
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party27.jpg"></center>'
-			'You contemplate giving him your real number. You know that this disgusting pig only wants to fuck you, it''s written all over his face. But he can come in handy one day. You decide to give him your real the phone number. He smirks and hands you a business card...'
+			'You contemplate giving him your real number. You know that this disgusting pig only wants to fuck you. It''s written all over his face. But he can come in handy one day. You decide to give him your real phone number. He smirks and hands you a business card...'
 			'<font color="maroon"><i>"If you ever need anything just give me a call. And I really mean anything. You won''t regret it, I love pleasing pretty girls!"</i></font>'
-			'You say goodbye, barely escaping from this so called man that wants to take you to his "house" to have god knows what with you. Once again you find yourself alone and decide to make another round around the room.'
+			'You say goodbye, barely escaping from this so called man that wants to take you to his "house" to do god knows what with you. Once again you find yourself alone and decide to make another round around the room.'
 
 			act 'Mingle': gt 'mey_tamara_events', 'party2'
 		end
@@ -792,29 +793,29 @@ end
 if $args[0] = 'party6':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party28.jpg"></center>'
-	'You notice a middle-aged, short, but an awe-inspiring man with a square face. He''s rough and ugly, but there''s something attractive about him, some sort of charisma, just like Charles Bronson. He keeps looking in your direction very often as he''s assessing you. He''s standing with an older, once very beautiful woman. She manages to keep up her good looks by paying a lot of money to maintain her appearance, but you can''t win the battle against time...'
+	'You notice a middle-aged, short, but awe-inspiring man with a square face. He''s rough and ugly, but there''s something attractive about him, some sort of charisma, just like Charles Bronson. He looks in your direction very often as he assesses you. He''s standing with an older, once very beautiful woman. She manages to keep up her good looks by paying a lot of money to maintain her appearance, but you can''t win the battle against time...'
 	act 'Observe the man':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party29.jpg"></center>'
-		'Someone taps you on the shoulder. Turning around, you see it''s Tamara Mikhailovna. She grabs you under her elbow and leads you over...'
+		'Someone taps you on the shoulder. Turning around, you see it''s Tamara. She grabs you under her elbow and leads you over...'
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"I noticed you were checking out that man, my dear. Well, let me introduce you to him, I''m sure you two will hit it off."</i></font>'
 
 		act 'Follow Tamara':
 			*clr & cla
 			mey_tamara['bronson_qw'] = 1
 			minut += 15
-			'Grabbing you by the elbow, she leads you to the very couple that had awoken your attention, "Bronson" and his lady friend.'
-			'She greets the man like an old friend, kissing him on the cheek, but indifferently greets his lady friend. "Something complicated happened between these two..." you think to yourself.'
+			'Grabbing you by the elbow, she leads you to the very couple that had awoken your interest, "Bronson" and his lady friend.'
+			'She greets the man like an old friend, kissing him on the cheek, but indifferently greets the woman by his side. "Something complicated happened between these two..." you think to yourself.'
 			'<font color="maroon"><i>"Let me introduce my pupil, <<$pcs_nickname>>."</i></font>'
-			'"Bronson" smiles, making you back off a bit seeing his face up close. It looks quite rough like someone had slashed his face with a razor. Him missing teeth makes his smile seem off and crooked. But despite the roughly slashed face and crooked smile, he seems very sincere.'
-			'<font color="maroon"><i>"It''s so nice meeting someone young here! The only other people here are old goblins and hags... But not you, with your youth and beauty, you''re like a ray of light! You have to forgive an old man for the bad compliments, <<$pcs_firstname>>."</i></font>'
+			'"Bronson" smiles, making you back off a bit seeing his face up close. It looks quite rough like someone has slashed his face with a razor. His missing teeth makes his smile seem off and crooked. But despite the roughly slashed face and crooked smile, he seems very sincere.'
+			'<font color="maroon"><i>"It''s so nice meeting someone young here! The only other people here are old goblins and hags... But not you. With your youth and beauty, you''re like a ray of sunshine! You have to forgive an old man for the bad compliments, <<$pcs_firstname>>."</i></font>'
 			'<font color="maroon"><i>"My dear Tamara! You always had a great eye for talent!"</i></font>'
-			'<font color="maroon"><i>"I still remember your scent, it''s the same one when you helped me many years ago... When I had to get away from my husband..."</i></font> sighed Tamara Mikhailovna with concealed sadness briefly glancing at him. <font color="navy"><i>"There''s definitely something going on here."</i></font> you think to yourself.'
+			'<font color="maroon"><i>"I still remember your scent, it''s the same one when you helped me many years ago... When I had to get away from my husband..."</i></font> Sighs Tamara with concealed sadness, briefly glancing at him. <font color="navy"><i>"There''s definitely something going on here."</i></font> You think to yourself.'
 			'<font color="maroon"><i>"Well, let''s not dwell on the past. Let bygones be bygones!</i></font> "Bronson" smiles, answering without any malice or mockery. His friend, feeling clearly undesirable in this conversation, places her half empty glass of champagne on the table, grabbing a new one from a passing waiter, silently walked away towards the musicians. She moves away without having said one word.'
-			'You keep up the small talk. "Bronson" gradually looks at you like he''s trying to read you. With some help by Tamara Mikhailovna you don''t get embarrassed by this prying eyes. The way the two of them behave it''s quite obvious that they’re old friends, though you believe that they''re more than friends.'
-			'<font color="maroon"><i>"<<$pcs_firstname>>, will you make an old man happy and dine with him?"</i></font> he asks you confidently. The way he conduct himself in a conversation, despite the sloppy appearance, makes him somehow, likable and not frightening.'
+			'You keep up the small talk. "Bronson" gradually looks at you like he''s trying to read you. With some help from Tamara you don''t get embarrassed by this prying eyes. The way the two of them behave it''s quite obvious that they’re old friends. Though, you believe that they''re more than friends.'
+			'<font color="maroon"><i>"<<$pcs_firstname>>, will you make an old man happy and dine with him?"</i></font> He asks you confidently. The way he conducts himself in a conversation, despite the sloppy appearance, makes him somehow, likable and not frightening.'
 			'<font color="navy"><i>"I would be honoured."</i></font>'
-			'<font color="maroon"><i>"Well, then it''s settled, <<$pcs_firstname>>!"</i></font> "Bronson" smiles and moves away from you and aunt Tamara. You suddenly realize that he didn''t ask you about your number, now that you think about it, he never properly introduced himself, even though you talked for a good hour!'
+			'<font color="maroon"><i>"Well, then it''s settled, <<$pcs_firstname>>!"</i></font> "Bronson" smiles and moves away from you and aunt Tamara. You suddenly realize that he didn''t ask you for your number. Now that you think about it, he never properly introduced himself, even though you talked for a good hour!'
 
 			act 'Mingle': gt 'mey_tamara_events', 'party2'
 		end
@@ -827,55 +828,55 @@ if $args[0] = 'reputation':
 	zz_stage = args[1]
 	if zz_stage!3:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/reputation'+zz_stage+'.jpg"></center>'
 	if zz_stage = 0:
-		'You stand in front of Tamara Mikhailovna, with your eyes tearing up.'
+		'You stand in front of Tamara, with your eyes tearing up.'
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Well, what do you want? I don''t want you here anymore."</i></font>'
 	elseif zz_stage = 1:
 		'You start sniffing and let out...'
 		'<font color="navy"><i>"Please, I beg you, don''t send me away! Please! I... I''ll do whatever you want..."</i></font> you say bursting into tears.'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Oh... What am I going to do with you?"</i></font> Tamara Mikhailovna sighed after a few minutes. <font color="maroon"><i>"I can''t really kick you out, but I can''t let you off the hook either... I guess I''ll keep on mentoring you..."</i></font>'
-		'<font color="navy"><i>"Ma-m-maybe, it''s possible redeem myself? Some way to improve?"</i></font> you sob, trying to wipe away the tears.'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"I really thought you were smarter than my girls. They''ve got their brains after their daddy. Both of them."</i></font>'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Oh... What am I going to do with you?"</i></font> Tamara sighs after a few minutes. <font color="maroon"><i>"I can''t really kick you out, but I can''t let you off the hook either... I guess I''ll keep on mentoring you..."</i></font>'
+		'<font color="navy"><i>"Ma-m-maybe, it''s possible to redeem myself? Some way to improve?"</i></font> you sob, trying to wipe away the tears.'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"I really thought you were smarter than my girls. They''ve got their brains from their daddy. Both of them."</i></font>'
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Especially Vicky, lascivious like a cat in the spring. Not caring who she picks as a sexual partner. You being an example."</i></font>'
 	elseif zz_stage = 2:
-		'Tamara Mikhailovna was deeply in her thoughts, biting her glasses, twisting them in her hands until...'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"But you should be praised that you immediately came here and confessed, so I didn''t find it out through the "grapewine". So you''re not completely hopeless. But you''ve made things more complicated for yourself. There''s a simple way to save face though. But we need something to raise your reputation all over again..."</i></font>'
-		'Tamara Mikhailovna thinks out loud to herself, sucking on her glasses, not paying attention to you. The tears are still rolling down your cheeks, but you are start getting back your composure! Aunt Tamara starts talk to herself again, silently pointing to the door.'
+		'Tamara was deep in her thoughts, biting her glasses, twisting them in her hands until...'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"But you should be praised that you immediately came here and confessed. So I didn''t find it out through the "grapevine". So you''re not completely hopeless. But you''ve made things more complicated for yourself. There''s a simple way to save face though. But we need something to raise your reputation all over again..."</i></font>'
+		'Tamara thinks out loud to herself, sucking on her glasses, not paying attention to you. The tears are still rolling down your cheeks, but you start getting back your composure! Aunt Tamara starts talking to herself again, silently pointing to the door.'
 	elseif zz_stage = 3:
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/reputation3.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'Tamara Mikhailovna pauses for a short time, continuing to nibble on the earpiece and starts clicking her nails on the armrest. A couple of minutes later seeming like an eternity she finally looks at you.'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Listen very carefully, I will not repeat myself. I''ve come up with a way how you can redeem yourself. But for someone like you this might be very hard!"</i></font> she starts while you fully focus on her. She stands up and continues...'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"First and foremost. From now on, you''re going to behave as a nun. You should avoid sex unless for education purpose... No more of that generous attitude to having sex everywhere, the disco, in parks, not even in school! You are forbidden having sex with anyone in Pavlovsk. The only people you can even considerate having sex with is people closest to you who you can fully trust. You have to strictly maintain the good girl reputation in Pavlovsk."</i></font>'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"If you really find it unbearable and have to let off some steam go to the city, there''s a club there or you can go somewhere else where you can meet someone. If nobody knows you, you can have sex however you want and without harm to your reputation. The main thing is that you do not forget to use protection or people will know and then not even I can help you."</i></font>'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"And finally,"</i></font> Tamara Mikhailovna claps her hands. <font color="maroon"><i>"time for a lesson. What''s the quickest way to orgasm?"</i></font>'
+		'Tamara pauses for a short time, continuing to nibble on the earpiece and starts clicking her nails on the armrest. A couple of minutes later, that seem like an eternity, she finally looks at you.'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Listen very carefully, I will not repeat myself. I''ve come up with a way how you can redeem yourself. But for someone like you this might be very hard!"</i></font> She starts while you fully focus on her. She stands up and continues...'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"First and foremost. From now on, you''re going to behave as a nun. You should avoid sex unless for education purpose... No more of that generous attitude to having sex everywhere, the disco, in parks, not even in school! You are forbidden to have sex with anyone in Pavlovsk. The only people you can even consider having sex with are the people closest to you, those who you can fully trust. You have to strictly maintain the good girl reputation in Pavlovsk."</i></font>'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"If you really find it unbearable and have to let off some steam, go to the city. There''s a club there. Or you can go somewhere else where you can meet someone. If nobody knows you, you can have sex however you want and without harm to your reputation. The main thing is that you don''t forget to use protection or people will know and then not even I can help you."</i></font>'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"And finally."</i></font> Tamara claps her hands. <font color="maroon"><i>"Time for a lesson. What''s the quickest way to orgasm?"</i></font>'
 		'<font color="navy"><i>"By having anal sex..."</i></font> you quickly answer without thinking, instantly regretting your answer.'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Come here!"</i></font> Tamara Mikhailovna sternly tells you...'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Come here!"</i></font> Tamara sternly tells you...'
 	elseif zz_stage = 4:
 		'She makes you take off your panties, bending you across her knees. She then proceeds slapping your butt over and over again...'
-		'You try to endure because you''re deserving it but Tamara Mikhailovna doesn''t stop after a few slaps, she continues slapping you butt harder and harder, leaving your poor butt with a burning sensation, hurting like hell. You start squealing more loudly with each slap. At the end, you can''t handle it anymore and you start crying floods. The spanking immediately stops.' 
+		'You try to endure because you deserve it. But Tamara doesn''t stop after a few slaps, she continues slapping your ass harder and harder, leaving your poor butt with a burning sensation, hurting like hell. You start squealing more loudly with each slap. At the end, you can''t handle it anymore and you start crying hard. The spanking immediately stops.' 
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"There, there, baby, don''t cry. Come on, stop, I admit, I was filled with anger and got carried away, I may have overdone it a little."</i></font>'
-		'Sobbing, you try to pull the panties over your bruised ass. Tamara Mikhailovna stops you, and pulls off your panties...'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"You won''t be needing them yet. You don''t have to be embarrassed, no one will see you here. Let''s go to my room, I have a lotion in my room that''ll help..."</i></font> she takes you by the hand and leads you into her room.'
-		'There she grabs a bottle with some kind of lotion.'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Now, lie down on the bed, and relax your little cute butt!"</i></font> You lie down on the Tamara Mikhailovna''s bed. Her bed is quite modest and hard compared to the enormous, luxurious bed in Vicky''s room!'
-		'Tamara Mikhailovna carefully starts rubbing your butt, with the pleasant-smelling ointment on your red marked ass. And as she said, the burning sensation immediately began to subside under the caress of the hands of aunt Tamara. You''re having a hard time believing these are the same hands that just severely flogged you. "How can she snap so easily?" you once again start thinking about it...'
-		'Her gentle hands continue caressing your back and feet, no longer focusing only on your butt, which, by the way, already feels much better, you start enjoying yourself a bit too much. Your bare pussy starts getting wet! Without thinking about it you start moaning by the skillful caresses.'
+		'Sobbing, you try to pull the panties over your bruised ass. Tamara stops you, and pulls off your panties...'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"You won''t be needing them yet. You don''t have to be embarrassed, no one will see you here. Let''s go to my room, I have a lotion in my room that''ll help..."</i></font> She takes you by the hand and leads you into her room.'
+		'There, she grabs a bottle with some kind of lotion in it.'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Now, lie down on the bed, and relax your cute little butt!"</i></font> You lie down on Tamara''s bed. Her bed is quite modest and hard compared to the enormous, luxurious bed in Vicky''s room!'
+		'Tamara carefully starts rubbing the pleasant-smelling ointment on your red, marked ass. And as she said, the burning sensation immediately begins to subside under the caress caressing hands of aunt Tamara. You have a hard time believing these are the same hands that just severely flogged you. "How can she snap so easily?" You once again start thinking about it...'
+		'Her gentle hands continue caressing your back and feet, no longer focusing only on your butt, which already feels much better. You start enjoying yourself a bit too much. Your bare pussy starts getting wet! Without thinking about it you start moaning under the skillful caresses.'
 	elseif zz_stage = 5:
-		'Suddenly the caresses abruptly stop. You turn your head wondering why it stopped. Next to you, sitting on the bed you notice a completely nude Tamara Mikhailovna, awkwardly cross legged, looking away from you...'
+		'Suddenly the caresses stop abruptly. You turn your head wondering why it stopped. Sitting on the bed next to you, you notice a completely nude Tamara, awkwardly cross legged, looking away from you...'
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"I''m sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I think I got a little carried away again... you''ve never seen me naked..."</i></font>'
 	elseif zz_stage = 6:
-		'An inner impulse makes you to take off your shirt and sit next to your mentor. You start caressing her magnificent breast, touching her pink nipples with your fingers.'
+		'An impulse makes you take off your shirt and sit next to your mentor. You start caressing her magnificent breasts, touching her pink nipples with your fingers.'
 	elseif zz_stage = 7:
-		'Tamara moans, leaning towards you, grabbing you against the small of your back, pulling you in closer. She arches her back and throws her head back, like a big red cat, showing the smooth skinned neck.'
+		'Tamara moans, leans towards you, grabs you at the small of your back and pulls you in closer. She arches her back and throws her head back, like a big red cat, showing her smooth skinned neck.'
 		'Your hands start gliding over her flawless skin. You kiss her exposed neck, continuing along the jaw line...'
 	elseif zz_stage = 8:
-		'You kiss her, gently nibbling her lower lip. While you kiss, you slowly slid your hand near Tamara''s pussy lips. You start circling your finger just inside her lips being careful not to make contact with her clit.'
-		'Getting more wet Tamara pushes you on the bed and spread your legs, slowly circled her tongue just inside your lips, right on the edge. Slowly getting closer and then moving away, and then getting closer again teasing you...'
+		'You kiss her, gently nibbling her lower lip. While you kiss, you slowly slide your hand near Tamara''s pussy lips. You start circling your finger just inside her lips, being careful not to make contact with her clit.'
+		'Getting wetter, Tamara pushes you on the bed and spreads your legs. She slowly circles her tongue just inside your lips, right on the edge. Slowly getting closer and then moving away, and then getting closer again teasing you...'
 	elseif zz_stage = 9:
-		'You let out a moan, and Tamara moves up your body kissing you. As she approaches your lips you move down a little slowly making your way towards her breast. Nibbling on her breast you hear Tamara letting out tiny moans, wordlessly egging you on. You finally place your mouth around her nipple and gently start sucking them, she gasps...'
+		'You let out a moan, and Tamara moves up your body kissing you. As she approaches your lips you move down a little, slowly making your way towards her chest. Nibbling on her breasts, you hear Tamara letting out tiny moans, wordlessly egging you on. You finally place your mouth around her nipple and gently start sucking them, making her gasp...'
 	elseif zz_stage = 10:
-		'Tamara panting, begins moving down again. All of a sudden you gasp involuntarily and began moaning louder as she flicks her tongue faster over your anus. While licking your anus she slowly slides a finger inside your wet hole. Overcome with ecstasy you tighten your pussy. She devours your delicious juices and slowly introduces another finger inside of you. As you start panting she increases the speed. You shudder as you start letting out what feels like never ending orgasms. You sure can learn a lot from her...'
+		'Tamara, panting, begins to move down again. All of a sudden you gasp involuntarily and begin moaning louder as she flicks her tongue faster over your anus. While licking your anus she slowly slides a finger inside your wet hole. Overcome with ecstasy you tighten your pussy. She devours your delicious juices and slowly introduces another finger inside of you. As you start panting she increases the speed. You shudder as you start having what feels like never ending orgasms. You sure can learn a lot from her...'
 	elseif zz_stage = 11:
-		'Catching your breath, you thank your mentor. But there is no time for that. You slide a finger inside her feeling her pulsating pussy. Tamara pants harder and harder, you edge her several times. While sucking and nibbling on her pussy when you feel she can''t handle it anymore. She bends her knees, screams, and cums hard. You lick her clean after she orgasms. It looks like you''re a quick learner! She lays back after a few seconds, panting, with sweat coating her body. Tamara satisfied, finally turns to face you, saying...'
+		'Catching your breath, you thank your mentor. But there is no time for that. You slide a finger inside her feeling her pulsating pussy. Tamara pants harder and harder, you edge her several times. While sucking and nibbling on her pussy when you feel she can''t handle it anymore. She bends her knees, screams, and cums hard. You lick her clean after she orgasms. It looks like you''re a quick learner! She lays back after a few seconds, panting, with sweat coating her body. Tamara, satisfied, finally turns to face you saying...'
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>! You have a real talent! Promise me you won''t waste it on those primates hanging out in the Park... They don''t deserve you..."</i></font>'
 	end
 

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+ 232 - 218
locations/mey_vika_events.qsrc


+ 3 - 3
locations/mirror.qsrc

@@ -545,7 +545,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'd_bag_mirror':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><h1>Compact Mirror</h1></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="/images/shared/Accessories/compact_mirror.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="/images/pc/items/compact_mirror.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center><table cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top"><tr>'
 	'<td cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0" valign="top">'
 	'You have '+iif(kosmetitka > 0, '<b><<kosmetitka>></b>', 'no')+' cosmetic applications and '+iif(salfetka > 0, '<b><<salfetka>></b>', 'no')+' tissues left in your purse.'
@@ -568,7 +568,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'kosmetitka_apply':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><h1>Compact Mirror</h1></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="/images/shared/Accessories/compact_mirror.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="/images/pc/items/compact_mirror.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center><table cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top"><tr>'
 	'<td cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0" valign="top">'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -583,7 +583,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'kosmetitka_fix':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><h1>Compact Mirror</h1></center>'	
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="/images/shared/Accessories/compact_mirror.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="/images/pc/items/compact_mirror.jpg"></center>'
 	salfetka -= 1
 	makupskl_exp += rand(1,3)
 	if makeupSetting = 1:

+ 1 - 1
locations/mother.qsrc

@@ -592,7 +592,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 			if motherKnowWhore = 0:motherKnowWhore = 1
 
-			'Your mother notices the sperm you''re wearing on your face, and looks at you with a tinge of concern.'
+			'Your mother notices the sperm you''re wearing on you, and looks at you with a tinge of concern.'
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I can certainly understand that you want to keep your man happy. Believe me, I do, but you should at least clean up his mess after he finishes on your face, before you go out the door. Quickly, go wash up in the bathroom, hopefully no one has seen you like this!'
 			'Your face turns beet red, and you quietly nod and mumble an apology as you head for the bathroom.'
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/motherQW.qsrc

@@ -328,7 +328,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'oluHome':
 					'Finally he pulls his fingers away, and you feel the head of his huge cock resting against your sphincter. Taking a deep breath, you try to relax as much as you can.'
 					'You squeal as the head passes your sphincter, which still hurt, hopefully you will eventually get use to it. You beg him to go slow for a second and Olu freezes, giving your ass time to adapt to the size of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock. After a few more deep breaths you feel the worst of the pain subside and you nod at him, gesturing to continue slowly.'
 					'It still hurts a bit, but at the same time you feel a pleasant fullness every time he shoves his dick inside you. You still can''t take much more than half of it inside your asshole, but it feels a lot less painful and you masturbate yourself from the start, which helps. Thanks to his precautions and being mentally ready for it, it actually feels kind of good despite the pain.'
-					'After a awhile it starts hurting again, this time he notices and seems unsure what to do at first. Then he strokes a little deeper than you are happy with and a whole lot faster. You bite your lower lip as the pain gets worse but before you can protest you feel the hot spurts of his sperm filling up your ass.'
+					'After awhile it starts hurting again, this time he notices and seems unsure what to do at first. Then he strokes a little deeper than you are happy with and a whole lot faster. You bite your lower lip as the pain gets worse but before you can protest you feel the hot spurts of his sperm filling up your ass.'
 
 					if oluD = 0 and RAND(1,10) = 10:
 						oluD = 1

+ 1 - 1
locations/motherkafeboss.qsrc

@@ -411,7 +411,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_sex1':
 				'He grunts in satisfaction and reaches down to slap your breast. Your eyes widen at the impact and you go back to thinking about biting down before his other hand joins the first and begins to massage your breasts skillfully. You decide to fuck around with him and put in a token effort, lightly sucking on the head of his cock instead of trying to go for depth.'
 				'<i>No balls like blue balls...</i> you think to yourself.'
 				'"Ahh..." he sighs. "I have to say, Natasha is still better at giving head but a younger and more supple pair of breasts..." he says, emphasizing his words with hard squeezes, "is always better than an older pair."'
-				'With his comments about your mother while he''s abusing your body, you''re ready to snap. You try to get a little deeper so when you bite you can take off as much of his dick as possible when he suddenly yanks you upward by your breasts. You feel genuinely disappointed you couldn''t have blown him for a couple more seconds or he''d have become a eunuch.'
+				'With his comments about your mother while he''s abusing your body, you''re ready to snap. You try to get a little deeper so when you bite you can take off as much of his dick as possible when he suddenly yanks you upward by your breasts. You feel genuinely disappointed you couldn''t have blown him for a couple more seconds or he''d have become an eunuch.'
 				'Now standing in front of Borislav, he pushes you backwards onto the desk and says, "Time for the main course."'
 				act'Continue':gt 'motherkafeboss','first_sex2'
 			end

+ 1 - 1
locations/npcbreeder.qsrc

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # npcbreeder
 
-!! This expects you to do a boystat a call for the reciever, and a boystat b call for the giver. example--- gs 'boystat', 'A14', 'a' & gs 'boystat' 'A34', 'b'
+!! This expects you to do a boystat a call for the receiver, and a boystat b call for the giver. example--- gs 'boystat', 'A14', 'a' & gs 'boystat' 'A34', 'b'
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	gs 'npcbreeder', 'insert'

+ 1 - 1
locations/npcgeneratec.qsrc

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 # npcgeneratec
 
 ! {This file expects npctempgsex which is the desired sex of the NPC to be generated, $npctempgn[0], which is the used name of the generated NPC. Rapist or Red Headed Stranger, for example. And npctempgage, which is the approximate age of the NPC in years. Everything is then randomly generated, and you are expected to fix the generated NPC yourself with any special items you need from it after it completes running. So sex, what you call them until they introduce themselves, and age.}
-!! {A example to use this would be gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'stranger', rand(18,45) which would generate a male with a use name of stranger between 18 and 45.}
+!! {A example to use this would be gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'stranger', rand(18,45) which would generate a male with a used name of stranger between 18 and 45.}
 
 npctempgsex = ARGS[0]
 $npctempgn[0] = $ARGS[1]

+ 1 - 1
locations/npcgenext.qsrc

@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'pers':
 	end
 end
 
-! {Venerial Disease Generator. requires a index.}
+! {Venerial Disease Generator. requires an index.}
 if $args[0] = 'rstd':
 	if $ARGS[1] = '': $ARGS[1] = 0
 	if mid($ARGS[1],1,1) < 10: 

+ 1 - 1
locations/npcpreservec.qsrc

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 # npcpreservec
-!! {It expects a Args containing a C array index}
+!! {It expects an Args containing a C array index}
 !! {This initializes the array and acts as a gate to deny bad calls.}
 $npctemp = $ARGS[0]
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/npcstatic1.qsrc

@@ -2058,7 +2058,7 @@ $npc_firstname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Bella'
 $npc_nickname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Bella'
 $npc_lastname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Artamonov'
 $npc_usedname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Bella'
-$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Bella Artamonov is a beautiful girl that is really arrogant. You don''t know her very well as she doesn''t want to deal with "kids". She seems to consider herself a adult already and the rest of her classmates are beneath her, as being to young and childish. You''ve heard some rumors about her only hanging around older people.'
+$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Bella Artamonov is a beautiful girl that is really arrogant. You don''t know her very well as she doesn''t want to deal with "kids". She seems to consider herself an adult already and the rest of her classmates are beneath her, as being to young and childish. You''ve heard some rumors about her only hanging around older people.'
 npc_dob['A<<npctemp>>'] = 19990422
 npc_vital['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(10,30)
 npc_stren['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(10,30)

+ 1 - 1
locations/npcstatic3.qsrc

@@ -4053,7 +4053,7 @@ $npc_firstname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Anushka'
 $npc_nickname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Anushka'
 $npc_lastname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Konstantinov'
 $npc_usedname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Anushka'
-$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Anushka Konstantinov is the lead guitarist in Radomir''s band. She has very strong political views, which she shares in her anarchist lyrics that she writes for the band. She has strong if untrained vocal ability as well, doing some of the singing. She is pretty dominant and can be cruel but not sadistic like some of the other Gopniks. She is very adventurous and not shy about her bisexuality, she is also a bit of a exhibitionist.'
+$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Anushka Konstantinov is the lead guitarist in Radomir''s band. She has very strong political views, which she shares in her anarchist lyrics that she writes for the band. She has strong if untrained vocal ability as well, doing some of the singing. She is pretty dominant and can be cruel but not sadistic like some of the other Gopniks. She is very adventurous and not shy about her bisexuality, she is also a bit of an exhibitionist.'
 npc_dob['A<<npctemp>>'] = 0
 npc_vital['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(10,30)
 npc_stren['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(10,30)

+ 3 - 3
locations/nyp_school.qsrc

@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Drink some more':pcs_hydra += 10 & gt 'nyp_school', 'drink more'
 					if grupTipe = 5:
-						!!If Sveta is a outcast this should be the only option and the above options should not show up, if Sveta is a outcast. If Sveta is not a outcast then the go stand against the wall alone should not show up.
+						!!If Sveta is an outcast this should be the only option and the above options should not show up, if Sveta is an outcast. If Sveta is not an outcast then the go stand against the wall alone should not show up.
 						act 'Go stand against the wall alone':gt 'nyp_school', 'outcast'
 					else
 						act 'Hangout with the cool kids and jocks':gt 'nyp_school', 'cool jocks'
@@ -948,7 +948,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'outcast':
 					'"That''s it the show is over!" Vitek yells, "Until next time, <<$pcs_nickname>>." he winks.'
 					act 'Leave the party':
 						cla
-						'Once the gopniks hurry off you glance around, you notice the exchange got a lot of attention and attention for a outcast is bad. With final look at the decorations you sadly leave the party before things get worse.'
+						'Once the gopniks hurry off you glance around, you notice the exchange got a lot of attention and attention for an outcast is bad. With final look at the decorations you sadly leave the party before things get worse.'
 						act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 					end
 				end
@@ -1071,7 +1071,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'drink more':
 	alko += 5 
 	gs 'stat'
 	if grupTipe = 5:
-		!!If Sveta is a outcast this should be the only option and the above options should not show up, if Sveta is a outcast. If Sveta is not a outcast then the go stand against the wall alone should not show up.
+		!!If Sveta is an outcast this should be the only option and the above options should not show up, if Sveta is an outcast. If Sveta is not an outcast then the go stand against the wall alone should not show up.
 		act 'Go stand against the wall alone':gt 'nyp_school', 'outcast'
 	else
 		act 'Drink some more':gt 'nyp_school', 'drink more'

+ 7 - 7
locations/obj_din.qsrc

@@ -1322,7 +1322,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reputation':
 			*nl
 			'Regional renown as an intellectual = <<global_int>>'
 			if global_int = 0:
-				'You are not famous enough as a intellectual to be known outside of any local areas.'
+				'You are not famous enough as an intellectual to be known outside of any local areas.'
 			end
 			*nl
 			'Regional renown through social media = <<global_social>>'
@@ -2484,9 +2484,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'records':
 		$obj_loverpron = 'She'
 	end		
 	if pcs_lovers[1] = 1:'<<$obj_loverintro>> <<$loverdesc[0]>> is <<$loverbody[0]>> height and <<$loverbod[0]>> build with <<$loverface[0]>> hair. <<$loverdesc[0]>> is <<$loverClo[0]>>. Your relationship is <<loverrelation[0]>> after <<loverdays[0]>> days dating.'
-	if haraklover[1] = 0 and loverrelation[0] > 1:'<<$obj_loverpron>>''s timid and lacks confidence.'
-	if haraklover[1] = 1 and loverrelation[0] > 1:'<<$obj_loverpron>> has a cheerful and sociable personality.'
-	if haraklover[1] = 2 and loverrelation[0] > 1:'<<$obj_loverpron>>''s short-tempered and strict.'
+	if haraklover[1] = 0 and loverrelation[1] > 1:'<<$obj_loverpron>>''s timid and lacks confidence.'
+	if haraklover[1] = 1 and loverrelation[1] > 1:'<<$obj_loverpron>> has a cheerful and sociable personality.'
+	if haraklover[1] = 2 and loverrelation[1] > 1:'<<$obj_loverpron>>''s short-tempered and strict.'
 	*nl
 	if loverGender[2] = 0:
 		$obj_loverintro = 'Your boyfriend'
@@ -2496,9 +2496,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'records':
 		$obj_loverpron = 'She'
 	end		
 	if pcs_lovers[2] = 1:'<<$obj_loverintro>> <<$loverdesc[0]>> is <<$loverbody[0]>> height and <<$loverbod[0]>> build with <<$loverface[0]>> hair. <<$loverdesc[0]>> is <<$loverClo[0]>>. Your relationship is <<loverrelation[0]>> after <<loverdays[0]>> days dating.'
-	if haraklover[2] = 0 and loverrelation[0] > 1:'<<$obj_loverpron>>''s timid and lacks confidence.'
-	if haraklover[2] = 1 and loverrelation[0] > 1:'<<$obj_loverpron>> has a cheerful and sociable personality.'
-	if haraklover[2] = 2 and loverrelation[0] > 1:'<<$obj_loverpron>>''s short-tempered and strict.'
+	if haraklover[2] = 0 and loverrelation[2] > 1:'<<$obj_loverpron>>''s timid and lacks confidence.'
+	if haraklover[2] = 1 and loverrelation[2] > 1:'<<$obj_loverpron>> has a cheerful and sociable personality.'
+	if haraklover[2] = 2 and loverrelation[2] > 1:'<<$obj_loverpron>>''s short-tempered and strict.'
 	*nl
 
 	*nl

+ 10 - 10
locations/office.qsrc

@@ -2238,7 +2238,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rand_IT':
 			$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved] = 'Milorad'
 			$npc_nickname[$npclastsaved] = 'Milorad'
 			$npc_lastname[$npclastsaved] = 'Sukhorukov'
-			$npc_notes[$npclastsaved] = 'A IT support guy.'
+			$npc_notes[$npclastsaved] = 'An IT support guy.'
 			$mitname[randIT] = $npclastsaved
 		end
 		$mname = $mitname[randIT]
@@ -2249,7 +2249,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rand_IT':
 			$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved] = 'Leontiy'
 			$npc_nickname[$npclastsaved] = 'Leontiy'
 			$npc_lastname[$npclastsaved] = 'Fedulov'
-			$npc_notes[$npclastsaved] = 'A IT support guy.'
+			$npc_notes[$npclastsaved] = 'An IT support guy.'
 			$mitname[randIT] = $npclastsaved
 		end
 		$mname = $mitname[randIT]
@@ -2260,7 +2260,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rand_IT':
 			$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved] = 'Stepan'
 			$npc_nickname[$npclastsaved] = 'Stepan'
 			$npc_lastname[$npclastsaved] = 'Shcheglov'
-			$npc_notes[$npclastsaved] = 'A IT support guy.'
+			$npc_notes[$npclastsaved] = 'An IT support guy.'
 			$mitname[randIT] = $npclastsaved
 		end
 		$mname = $mitname[randIT]
@@ -2271,7 +2271,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rand_IT':
 			$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved] = 'Yuriy'
 			$npc_nickname[$npclastsaved] = 'Yuriy'
 			$npc_lastname[$npclastsaved] = 'Ozerov'
-			$npc_notes[$npclastsaved] = 'A IT support guy.'
+			$npc_notes[$npclastsaved] = 'An IT support guy.'
 			$mitname[randIT] = $npclastsaved
 		end
 		$mname = $mitname[randIT]
@@ -2282,7 +2282,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rand_IT':
 			$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved] = 'Gennadiy'
 			$npc_nickname[$npclastsaved] = 'Gennadiy'
 			$npc_lastname[$npclastsaved] = 'Shlykov'
-			$npc_notes[$npclastsaved] = 'A IT support guy.'
+			$npc_notes[$npclastsaved] = 'An IT support guy.'
 			$mitname[randIT] = $npclastsaved
 		end
 		$mname = $mitname[randIT]
@@ -2293,7 +2293,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rand_IT':
 			$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved] = 'Polikarp'
 			$npc_nickname[$npclastsaved] = 'Polikarp'
 			$npc_lastname[$npclastsaved] = 'Strelkov'
-			$npc_notes[$npclastsaved] = 'A IT support guy.'
+			$npc_notes[$npclastsaved] = 'An IT support guy.'
 			$mitname[randIT] = $npclastsaved
 		end
 		$mname = $mitname[randIT]
@@ -2304,7 +2304,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rand_IT':
 			$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved] = 'Dominik'
 			$npc_nickname[$npclastsaved] = 'Dominik'
 			$npc_lastname[$npclastsaved] = 'Chernakov'
-			$npc_notes[$npclastsaved] = 'A IT support guy.'
+			$npc_notes[$npclastsaved] = 'An IT support guy.'
 			$mitname[randIT] = $npclastsaved
 		end
 		$mname = $mitname[randIT]
@@ -2315,7 +2315,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rand_IT':
 			$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved] = 'Eduard'
 			$npc_nickname[$npclastsaved] = 'Eduard'
 			$npc_lastname[$npclastsaved] = 'Pichushkin'
-			$npc_notes[$npclastsaved] = 'A IT support guy.'
+			$npc_notes[$npclastsaved] = 'An IT support guy.'
 			$mitname[randIT] = $npclastsaved
 		end
 		$mname = $mitname[randIT]
@@ -2326,7 +2326,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rand_IT':
 			$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved] = 'Milan'
 			$npc_nickname[$npclastsaved] = 'Milan'
 			$npc_lastname[$npclastsaved] = 'Safronov'
-			$npc_notes[$npclastsaved] = 'A IT support guy.'
+			$npc_notes[$npclastsaved] = 'An IT support guy.'
 			$mitname[randIT] = $npclastsaved
 		end
 		$mname = $mitname[randIT]
@@ -2337,7 +2337,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rand_IT':
 			$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved] = 'Georgiy'
 			$npc_nickname[$npclastsaved] = 'Georgiy'
 			$npc_lastname[$npclastsaved] = 'Alexandrov'
-			$npc_notes[$npclastsaved] = 'A IT support guy.'
+			$npc_notes[$npclastsaved] = 'An IT support guy.'
 			$mitname[randIT] = $npclastsaved
 		end
 		$mname = $mitname[randIT]

Неке датотеке нису приказане због велике количине промена