[GRAMMAR] - More fixes

Focused on capitalization after full stop

locations/AlbStars.qsrc

@@ -368,7 +368,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'starlets':
 								'Albina avoids eye contact. "Nothing, it''s just...see that guy? If you go with him and be...''affectionate''" she says hesitantly, "you will get <<AlbinaQW[''StarletPay'']*1000>> <b>₽</b>."'
 								'She looks you in the eye, the fear within her apparently growing. "Please <<$pcs_nickname>>, I need you to do this for me. Just...please."'
 							else
-								'Albina avoids eye contact. "Nothing, it''s just..see those guys? If you go with them and be...''affectionate''" she says hesitantly, "you will get <<AlbinaQW[''StarletPay'']*1000>> <b>₽</b>."'
+								'Albina avoids eye contact. "Nothing, it''s just... see those guys? If you go with them and be...''affectionate''" she says hesitantly, "you will get <<AlbinaQW[''StarletPay'']*1000>> <b>₽</b>."'
 								'She looks you in the eye, the fear within her apparently growing. "Please <<$pcs_nickname>>, I need you to do this for me. Just...please."'
 							end
 							

locations/BDsex.qsrc

@@ -782,7 +782,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'autobj':
 	if pcs_horny >= 100:
 		pcs_mood += 15
 
-		'As you suck the dick before you, a fire smolders between your legs, building into a conflagration of orgasm. you moan around the cock in your mouth, never once slowing your pace.'
+		'As you suck the dick before you, a fire smolders between your legs, building into a conflagration of orgasm. You moan around the cock in your mouth, never once slowing your pace.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', -5, 'sub'
 		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 		gs 'stat'

locations/BelSex.qsrc

@@ -309,7 +309,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal1':
 	belact -= 1
 	anal_temp += 1
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/anal/piledriver/kotovsexanal36.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'<<$boydesc>> begins rubbing the tip of his dick against you anus. Before you can even protest, his <<dick>> cm cock has already painfully penetrated your ass. You instinctively want to flinch away, but he grabs your hips with surprising strength and forces his dick as far into your ass as he can... before he starts hammering away.'
+	'<<$boydesc>> begins rubbing the tip of his dick against your anus. Before you can even protest, his <<dick>> cm cock has already painfully penetrated your ass. You instinctively want to flinch away, but he grabs your hips with surprising strength and forces his dick as far into your ass as he can... before he starts hammering away.'
 	'"All the other girls I''ve fucked over the years loved getting their ass destroyed," he informs you between slaps of flesh against flesh. "I hope you don''t mind." The only response you manage to let out is a little squeak as if you''re giving him permission to continue on, not that he needs it.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 15, 'sub', 'prostitution', 'rough'

locations/BurgerTip.qsrc

@@ -298,7 +298,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 								fat += 4
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/diner/kafe.jpg"></center>'
-								'Sergei takes you to a local restaurant not far from work. he orders food and drinks for both of you, after you find a table. Soon you are chatting, eating and drinking wine with Sergei. Before you realize it, you start feeling a little tipsy, but the conversation is still pleasant enough. When you are finished Sergei pays for everything, and invites you back to his place.'
+								'Sergei takes you to a local restaurant not far from work. He orders food and drinks for both of you, after you find a table. Soon you are chatting, eating and drinking wine with Sergei. Before you realize it, you start feeling a little tipsy, but the conversation is still pleasant enough. When you are finished Sergei pays for everything, and invites you back to his place.'
 						
 								act 'Let him down easy':
 									*clr&cla

locations/FedorEv.qsrc

@@ -299,7 +299,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Home':
 		fedorkozqw = 3
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/hold.jpg"></center>'
-		'You giggle lightly then tell Fedor "I would love to go with you and watch some movies that I''m sure you downloaded...legally" as you grin at him he says, "Yeah..about that..." which causes both of you to laugh simultaneously. Fedor then wraps his arm gently around your neck and leads you to his house.'	
+		'You giggle lightly then tell Fedor "I would love to go with you and watch some movies that I''m sure you downloaded... legally" as you grin at him he says, "Yeah.. about that..." which causes both of you to laugh simultaneously. Fedor then wraps his arm gently around your neck and leads you to his house.'	
 		
 		act 'Go with Fedor to his home':gt 'FedorEv2', 'Home'
 	end

locations/FedorEv2.qsrc

@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Train Tracks':
 		FedorLuv += 2			
 		gs 'boyStat', 'A5'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/park/kiss.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you stare into Fedor''s eyes you see a look of desire in his eyes and you can almost feel how badly he wants you which causes your heart to race and unable to resist you further, Fedor moves in and kisses you passionately, massaging your lips with his while never breaking eye contact. You occasionally feel his breath on your upper lip, his hands on your hips ans his lips on yours. the passionate kiss lasts for what feels like an hour until Fedor slowly lowers you to your feet as he whispers in your ear "<<$pcs_firstname>>, I''ve never met a girl like you, I feel like I can relax around you" Fedor then lowers you back to you feet "I had a great time with you but I should really get you home before it gets too late. I wouldn''t want your parents to scorn me but feel free to meet me after school whenever you would like to go out again." Fedor says, as he takes your hand and walks you home.'
+		'As you stare into Fedor''s eyes you see a look of desire in his eyes and you can almost feel how badly he wants you which causes your heart to race and unable to resist you further, Fedor moves in and kisses you passionately, massaging your lips with his while never breaking eye contact. You occasionally feel his breath on your upper lip, his hands on your hips ans his lips on yours. The passionate kiss lasts for what feels like an hour until Fedor slowly lowers you to your feet as he whispers in your ear "<<$pcs_firstname>>, I''ve never met a girl like you, I feel like I can relax around you" Fedor then lowers you back to you feet "I had a great time with you but I should really get you home before it gets too late. I wouldn''t want your parents to scorn me but feel free to meet me after school whenever you would like to go out again." Fedor says, as he takes your hand and walks you home.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 10, 'sub'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'	
 		gs 'stat'			
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Cinema':
 			pcs_breath = 0				
 			gs 'stat'				
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/movies/seat.jpg"></center>'
-			'You enter the theater to see it pretty packed and Fedor leads you to the back corner row where there are 4 empty seats. as you both get settled in Fedor hands you your popcorn and snacks then the lights start to dim and the advertisments start up meaning the movie is getting ready to start.'
+			'You enter the theater to see it pretty packed and Fedor leads you to the back corner row where there are 4 empty seats. As you both get settled in Fedor hands you your popcorn and snacks then the lights start to dim and the advertisments start up meaning the movie is getting ready to start.'
 		
 			act 'Watch the movie': gt 'FedorEv2', 'Movies 2'
 		end	
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Cinema':
 			pcs_breath = 0				
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/movies/seat.jpg"></center>'
-			'You enter the theater to see it pretty packed and Fedor leads you to the back corner row where there are 4 empty seats. as you both get settled in Fedor hands you a bag of popcorn then the lights start to dim and the advertisments start up meaning the movie is getting ready to start.'
+			'You enter the theater to see it pretty packed and Fedor leads you to the back corner row where there are 4 empty seats. As you both get settled in Fedor hands you a bag of popcorn then the lights start to dim and the advertisments start up meaning the movie is getting ready to start.'
 
 			act 'Watch the movie': gt 'FedorEv2', 'Movies 2' 
 		end	
@@ -380,7 +380,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Home':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/bj.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You gently push Fedor onto the bed and he lays back anxiously waiting to see what you do next and you climb on the bed and start licking his dick and then begin sucking his hard cock causing him to moan softly. you occasionally pull it out and lick the length of his penis to keep him from cumming too quickly. After a few moments he sits up and lifts you up by you shoulders and drops you onto the bed on your back.'			
+					'You gently push Fedor onto the bed and he lays back anxiously waiting to see what you do next and you climb on the bed and start licking his dick and then begin sucking his hard cock causing him to moan softly. You occasionally pull it out and lick the length of his penis to keep him from cumming too quickly. After a few moments he sits up and lifts you up by you shoulders and drops you onto the bed on your back.'			
 					*nl	
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'dom'	
 					gs 'stat'						
@@ -495,7 +495,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Virgin Sex':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/cowgirlkiss2.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You return his kiss as you continue to thrust yourself up and down and soon you feel the pleasure that was building erupt and suddenly all your muscles tenses up, and you feel a warm heat in your groin and your breath stops then suddenly you feel a burst of pleasure erupt inside you. Unable to think of anything but the pleasure you moan so loudly you are almost screaming and you ride out this intense feeling. when it is over you realize that you have just had your first vaginal orgasm then suddenly Fedor pushes you on your back.'
+					'You return his kiss as you continue to thrust yourself up and down and soon you feel the pleasure that was building erupt and suddenly all your muscles tenses up, and you feel a warm heat in your groin and your breath stops then suddenly you feel a burst of pleasure erupt inside you. Unable to think of anything but the pleasure you moan so loudly you are almost screaming and you ride out this intense feeling. When it is over you realize that you have just had your first vaginal orgasm then suddenly Fedor pushes you on your back.'
 					*nl	
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/orgasm.mp4"></video></center>'
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
@@ -694,7 +694,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Skate Kiss':
 	pcs_mood += 20
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A5'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/park/skate/kiss.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slow down the speed of your skating then turn to face Fedor and look into his eyes. You slowly lean your head forward toward his as he does the same. After a second you feel his lips pressed against yours. You and Fedor enjoy a long kiss. After a minute you both pull away from each other then Fedor says, "I had a great time with you <<$pcs_firstname>>. would you like me to walk you home or will you be fine on your own?"'
+	'You slow down the speed of your skating then turn to face Fedor and look into his eyes. You slowly lean your head forward toward his as he does the same. After a second you feel his lips pressed against yours. You and Fedor enjoy a long kiss. After a minute you both pull away from each other then Fedor says, "I had a great time with you <<$pcs_firstname>>. Would you like me to walk you home or will you be fine on your own?"'
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'	
 	gs 'stat'		

locations/FedorEv3.qsrc

@@ -856,7 +856,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Man':
 						*clr & cla				
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/cumanal1.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'Instead of pulling off him you start pushing against his crotch and he grabs your hips firmly as he groans and fills your ass with his seed. you can feel him pumping his seed into your ass almost filling you up completely, he then suddenly pulls out of you sending a stream of semen to leak out of your ass and drip on the floor. The man watches you for a few seconds then says, "Damn girl, I don''t know what I did to deserve this but thank you, You are a real angel." He kisses you on the forehead as he pulls up his pants then leaves the restroom.'
+						'Instead of pulling off him you start pushing against his crotch and he grabs your hips firmly as he groans and fills your ass with his seed. You can feel him pumping his seed into your ass almost filling you up completely, he then suddenly pulls out of you sending a stream of semen to leak out of your ass and drip on the floor. The man watches you for a few seconds then says, "Damn girl, I don''t know what I did to deserve this but thank you, You are a real angel." He kisses you on the forehead as he pulls up his pants then leaves the restroom.'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'anus'							
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'dom'					
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'

locations/FedorEv4.qsrc

@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Hall Sex':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/hall/sex/hall4.jpg"></center>'
-			'Fedor grabs your leg and lifts it up on his shoulders, giving himself better access to you pussy as he continues caressing your clitoris at an increased pace, trying his best to give you an orgasm. You tilt your head back and say, "Ohh yes Fedor, just like that." as he continues to pick up the pace making you feel weak in the knees as his strong arms hold you up.'
+			'Fedor grabs your leg and lifts it up on his shoulders, giving himself better access to your pussy as he continues caressing your clitoris at an increased pace, trying his best to give you an orgasm. You tilt your head back and say, "Ohh yes Fedor, just like that." as he continues to pick up the pace making you feel weak in the knees as his strong arms hold you up.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -871,7 +871,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Livingroom 2':
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/livingroom/sex/sofa6.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Fedor grins as he pulls out of you and climbs over you while jerking his penis in front of your face. You stare at Fedor''s penis while licking your lips and soon you see it begin to erupt and spray cum all over you face. You close your eyes while enjoying the warmth of his seed on your face, giving Fedor a pleased smile as he continues pumping your face with his cum. When Fedor finishes he looks down to you "You really seem to enjoy cum on your face. don''t you <<$pcs_firstname>>?" Which you respond, "Only yours babe." Fedor flashes a bright smile as he replies, "That''s my girl" Fedor then gets dressed and walks out of the room.'
+				'Fedor grins as he pulls out of you and climbs over you while jerking his penis in front of your face. You stare at Fedor''s penis while licking your lips and soon you see it begin to erupt and spray cum all over you face. You close your eyes while enjoying the warmth of his seed on your face, giving Fedor a pleased smile as he continues pumping your face with his cum. When Fedor finishes he looks down to you "You really seem to enjoy cum on your face. Don''t you <<$pcs_firstname>>?" Which you respond, "Only yours babe." Fedor flashes a bright smile as he replies, "That''s my girl" Fedor then gets dressed and walks out of the room.'
 				*nl
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/cum/cum9.mp4"></video></center>'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy, 1
@@ -1204,7 +1204,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bathroom Cam 2':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 5
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bathroom/toilet/cam/camanal1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You turn to face Fedor as you say, "I want you to fill my as with your cum." Fedor flashes a wide smile as he replies, "As you wish milady." and begins increasing his pace while giving your ass an occasional smack. After a few seconds Fedor grips your hips firmly and begins filling your ass with his seed as you thrust your hips against his, doing your best to milk him dry. Fedor takes a few seconds to catch his breath as he pulls out of you causing a jet of sperm to pour out of your ass, causing a loud moan to escape your. mouth. Fedor picks up the camera and says to himself, "Maybe I should have placed the camera on the other side... oh well, I''m sure it will come out great anyway." he then looks to you "Good job <<$pcs_nickname>> you were great." as he gets dressed and leaves the bathroom.'
+						'You turn to face Fedor as you say, "I want you to fill my as with your cum." Fedor flashes a wide smile as he replies, "As you wish milady." and begins increasing his pace while giving your ass an occasional smack. After a few seconds Fedor grips your hips firmly and begins filling your ass with his seed as you thrust your hips against his, doing your best to milk him dry. Fedor takes a few seconds to catch his breath as he pulls out of you causing a jet of sperm to pour out of your ass, causing a loud moan to escape your mouth. Fedor picks up the camera and says to himself, "Maybe I should have placed the camera on the other side... oh well, I''m sure it will come out great anyway." he then looks to you "Good job <<$pcs_nickname>> you were great." as he gets dressed and leaves the bathroom.'
 						*nl
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/cumanal2.mp4"></video></center>'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy, 1
@@ -1615,7 +1615,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bedroom Cam':
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/anal/doggy/anal8.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'You give Fedor a wink then walk up to a nearby stool and bend over. You lick your fingertips then begin massaging your anus with your fingers while giving Fedor a very inviting look.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'anal'
-				'Fedor gives you a seductive smile as he takes off his pants then approaches you and soon you feel his penis tip pressing against you anus. Suddenly you feel Fedor''s penis enter your ass causing a jolt of pain. Fedor holds still for a few seconds, giving your ass some time to adjust to his dick before slowly fucking your ass. After a few minutes of Fedor fucking your ass he says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> are you ready for my cum?"'
+				'Fedor gives you a seductive smile as he takes off his pants then approaches you and soon you feel his penis tip pressing against your anus. Suddenly you feel Fedor''s penis enter your ass causing a jolt of pain. Fedor holds still for a few seconds, giving your ass some time to adjust to his dick before slowly fucking your ass. After a few minutes of Fedor fucking your ass he says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> are you ready for my cum?"'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism'
 				gs 'stat'
 
@@ -1842,7 +1842,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bedroom 1':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/sex/bj3.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'"I''m always ready to cum with you." Fedor immediately returns to licking your clit as you continue sucking his dick, feeling the pleasure build up quickly and then feeling your clitoris heat up as your body begins squirming as waves of pleasure hit your whole body. You moan loudly as you feel Fedor''s hands tighten around your hips and his penis begins throbbing in your mouth filling it with his cum which you can''t seem to keep from leaking out of your mouth as you climax. After you both finish, you roll off of Fedor and catch your breath as he says, "<<$pcs_nickname>> You''re the best. you know that right?" You reply, "Only the best deserves the best." Fedor give you a very passionate kiss before getting dressed then walking out of the bedroom.'
+				'"I''m always ready to cum with you." Fedor immediately returns to licking your clit as you continue sucking his dick, feeling the pleasure build up quickly and then feeling your clitoris heat up as your body begins squirming as waves of pleasure hit your whole body. You moan loudly as you feel Fedor''s hands tighten around your hips and his penis begins throbbing in your mouth filling it with his cum which you can''t seem to keep from leaking out of your mouth as you climax. After you both finish, you roll off of Fedor and catch your breath as he says, "<<$pcs_nickname>> You''re the best. You know that right?" You reply, "Only the best deserves the best." Fedor give you a very passionate kiss before getting dressed then walking out of the bedroom.'
 				*nl
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/vagkiss.mp4"></video></center>'
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
@@ -2015,7 +2015,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bedroom 2':
 		act 'Doggystyle':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/virginanal3.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Fedor gives you ass a few seconds to adjust to his cock and then begins thrusting his dick inside you which causes a bit of pain at first but the pain begins to dissipate and it is quickly replaced with pleasure. The feeling of Fedor''s hard cock inside your ass which fills you with excitement as you shout out "Ohh yes Fyodor. Fuck me like a bitch!" Fedor gives you a firm smack on the ass as he replies, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''ll fuck you real good."'
+			'Fedor gives your ass a few seconds to adjust to his cock and then begins thrusting his dick inside you which causes a bit of pain at first but the pain begins to dissipate and it is quickly replaced with pleasure. The feeling of Fedor''s hard cock inside your ass which fills you with excitement as you shout out "Ohh yes Fyodor. Fuck me like a bitch!" Fedor gives you a firm smack on the ass as he replies, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''ll fuck you real good."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -2678,7 +2678,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Sleeping':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/fedor.jpg"></center>'
-	'Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''m a bit too tired to walk you home right now but you can climb into bed and spend the night if you like. just don''t let my mother see you leave.'
+	'Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''m a bit too tired to walk you home right now but you can climb into bed and spend the night if you like. Just don''t let my mother see you leave.'
 	if pcs_health < 100: 'Fedor then looks back at you and frowns. "<<$pcs_firstname>> you''re hurt. My mother works as a nurse. You should have her take a look at you."'
 
 	act 'Walk away':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Bedroom'
@@ -3080,7 +3080,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Bedroom':
 	*nl
 	'Fedor is laying on his bed, relaxing.'
 	if FedorLove = 0:
-		'He seems lost in thought but as soon as you approach, he opens his mouth to speak but no words escape his mouth. he then closes his mouth and stares at the ceiling. It seems as though he has something he wants to talk to you about.'
+		'He seems lost in thought but as soon as you approach, he opens his mouth to speak but no words escape his mouth. He then closes his mouth and stares at the ceiling. It seems as though he has something he wants to talk to you about.'
 	end
 
 	if pcs_health < 100:

locations/FedorMisc.qsrc

@@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/school/lockerroom/lr8.jpg"></center>'
-				'Fedor gives your ass a quick smack before pulling out of you then rubbing his penis in between your ass cheeks until he groans and begins spraying his load on your lower back. You move your hips up and down, trying to milk Fedor with your ass cheeks while enjoying the warmth of his cum covering your back. After Fedor finishes, he looks down at you and says, "You have an great ass <<$pcs_firstname>>. so soft and plump." You look back at him and reply, "Well maybe next time you can give it a good fucking." Fedor gives your ass a playful smack as he responds, "I might just do that sometime." Fedor then gets dressed and walks out of the locker room.'
+				'Fedor gives your ass a quick smack before pulling out of you then rubbing his penis in between your ass cheeks until he groans and begins spraying his load on your lower back. You move your hips up and down, trying to milk Fedor with your ass cheeks while enjoying the warmth of his cum covering your back. After Fedor finishes, he looks down at you and says, "You have an great ass <<$pcs_firstname>>. So soft and plump." You look back at him and reply, "Well maybe next time you can give it a good fucking." Fedor gives your ass a playful smack as he responds, "I might just do that sometime." Fedor then gets dressed and walks out of the locker room.'
 				*nl
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum3.mp4"></video></center>'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'butt', 'A5'
@@ -393,7 +393,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Hall':
 	minut -= 5
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A5'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/kiss2.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You approach Fedor with a mischievous smile on your face as you begin rubbing on his crotch. Fedor gives you a pleased look as he begins gently kissing your lips. while rubbing your ass with both his hands and pushing you toward the windowsill.'
+	'You approach Fedor with a mischievous smile on your face as you begin rubbing on his crotch. Fedor gives you a pleased look as he begins gently kissing your lips. While rubbing your ass with both his hands and pushing you toward the windowsill.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay_give', 5, 'dom'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -953,7 +953,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Vs Dimka':
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big5.jpg"></center>'
 		end
-		'Fedor nods then tells you "You lure him to the other side of school and I will wait for you there." you give Fedor a kiss before responding "I will..and thank you again Fedor. This means a great deal to me." Fedor gives you a wink as he walks off.'
+		'Fedor nods then tells you "You lure him to the other side of school and I will wait for you there." you give Fedor a kiss before responding "I will.. and thank you again Fedor. This means a great deal to me." Fedor gives you a wink as he walks off.'
 
 		act 'Lure Dimka':
 			*clr & cla

locations/HotelWork.qsrc

@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hotcouple':
 					'You lie down on the bed and spread your legs. Uliana takes Motya''s cock in her hand and guides it towards your pussy.'
 					'"Just relax Honey, he will be very gentle." she said while giving you a little smile.'
 					'<left><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/hotcouple6.jpg"></left>'
-					'Motya began pressing his dick into your pussy. he was slow and careful not to push too hard.'
+					'Motya began pressing his dick into your pussy. He was slow and careful not to push too hard.'
 					'You let out a little moan as the dick had slowly but surely invaded your pussy.'
 					'His shaft sank in deeper and suddenly you let out a little grunt and twitch. You looked into Motya''s eyes and you both knew that your virginity was no more.'
 					'You could feel every inch of his <<dick>> cm dick inside you now. He gave you a little wink and then started moving again.'

locations/LBZhouse.qsrc

@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Shower':
 	LBZhouseShower = 1
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/dush.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You grab your stuff then enter the bathroom before climbing into the shower. You carefully run the faucet, check the water temperature before washing yourself off while enjoying the warm water hitting your body. You spend the next few minutes. taking a relaxing bath before climbing out, drying yourself off, getting dressed then leaving the bathroom.'
+	'You grab your stuff then enter the bathroom before climbing into the shower. You carefully run the faucet, check the water temperature before washing yourself off while enjoying the warm water hitting your body. You spend the next few minutes. Taking a relaxing bath before climbing out, drying yourself off, getting dressed then leaving the bathroom.'
 	if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & '<br>Your deodorant gets washed away in the shower.'
 
 	act 'Get out of the bathroom': gt 'LBZhouse', 'End'

locations/MeynoldHome.qsrc

@@ -768,7 +768,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Park':
 	'You, and Natalia walk through the park while having small talk until you sit down on a bench, and Natalia sits down next to you. Natalia smiles, as she asks, "What do you plan to do with Niko?" You reply, "I don''t know yet. I need to sleep on it." Natalia nods slowly, "I guess that''s fair, I''m just worried about you. No one can go through what you did, and be unphased." You nod, as you reply, "Nothing will be the same, I know that, but I can still choose where I go from here." Natalia places her hand on your knee. "You don''t need to be alone in this. If you ever need anything then you can always talk to me." You give Natalia a warm smile as you reply, "That''s so sweet of you, but why do you care so much about what happens to me? I''m no one special."'
 	*nl
 	if SexTalkNatalia = 4 or NataliaPavlovaQW >= 10:
-		'"I..um..care for you, I..." Natalia remains silent for a few seconds, as she rubs her arm while staring at the ground, in front of her.'
+		'"I.. um.. care for you, I..." Natalia remains silent for a few seconds, as she rubs her arm while staring at the ground, in front of her.'
 		act 'Kiss her':VKNataliaKiss = 1 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Natalia Kiss'
 		act 'Change subject':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Natalia Park 2'
 	else	

locations/NikoDates.qsrc

@@ -1483,7 +1483,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Sonia Block':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"Sonia Ivanko">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/hallway/soniaupset.jpg"></center>'
-	'Niko wraps his arm around your neck then leads you to the locker room. As you are both walking, you suddenly hear, "No walking in the halls until class is back in session!" You turn to see Sonia Ivanko holding a notepad. Niko responds, "What''s it to you?" Sonia replies, "I''m the school hall monitor and it''s my duty to stop students from breaking the rules. so get back to the lunch room before I report you to the principle."'
+	'Niko wraps his arm around your neck then leads you to the locker room. As you are both walking, you suddenly hear, "No walking in the halls until class is back in session!" You turn to see Sonia Ivanko holding a notepad. Niko responds, "What''s it to you?" Sonia replies, "I''m the school hall monitor and it''s my duty to stop students from breaking the rules. So get back to the lunch room before I report you to the principle."'
 	*nl
 	'Niko grunts, "Fine! You really need to lighten up sometime Sonia. Better yet, try getting laid. It will help you not being such an up tight bitch." Sonia scowls then points her pencil at Niko. "Lunch room, NOW!" You can hear Niko utter under his voice, "If only <font color=#FF00FF>Sonia wasn''t such a prude and got laid</font> then we could have had a good time." As you both walk back to the cafeteria.'
 

locations/NikoDreams.qsrc

@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Friends':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00>Viktoria "Vicky" Meynold</font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/vicky.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slowly open your eyes and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but...Where am I?" Vicky replies, "After what happened at school, we were bored, so we decided to have you dance for us." You tilt your head. "Dance..for us?" Vicky giggles as she points to her right. You turn to see Katja Meynold and Natalia Pavlova sitting on the seats right next to the bed. Katja says, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. What are you waiting for?" Natalia adds, "Don''t worry, I threw away all your clothes. Whores don''t need clothes." You look down and notice that you are naked. Katja suddenly slams the bed frame. "Enough messing around! DANCE WHORE!"'
+	'You slowly open your eyes and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but...Where am I?" Vicky replies, "After what happened at school, we were bored, so we decided to have you dance for us." You tilt your head. "Dance.. for us?" Vicky giggles as she points to her right. You turn to see Katja Meynold and Natalia Pavlova sitting on the seats right next to the bed. Katja says, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. What are you waiting for?" Natalia adds, "Don''t worry, I threw away all your clothes. Whores don''t need clothes." You look down and notice that you are naked. Katja suddenly slams the bed frame. "Enough messing around! DANCE WHORE!"'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'
 	

locations/NikoEv.qsrc

@@ -505,7 +505,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Disco Chat':
 	if npc_rel['A189'] >= 80:'You and Niko have a great relationship.'	
 	*nl	
 	if NikoLuv > -4 and  NikoPayback = 0 and NikoAlko = 0:
-		'You approach Niko and he gives you a welcoming smile. "Good to see you again. would you like a drink?"'
+		'You approach Niko and he gives you a welcoming smile. "Good to see you again. Would you like a drink?"'
 	elseif NikoLuv > -4 and  NikoPayback = 0 and NikoAlko >= 2:
 		'You approach Niko and he gives you a welcoming smile. "You''re looking lovely today, Would you like to dance."'
 	elseif NikoPayback = 2 and NikoPayed ! daystart:

locations/NikoEv2.qsrc

@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Reward':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/yurikev/sex/deek/deek.jpg"></center>'
-								'You meekly nod and he says, "Good, you know your place." Yurik lifts you up then drops you on the bed with your head at the foot of the bed then he quickly romoves his pants causing his 19 centimeter penis to spring out. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Ohh wow. his dick is so big. There is no way that will fit inside me.'+$CloseInnerThought+' Yurik approaches your face as you lay still, in complete shock.'
+								'You meekly nod and he says, "Good, you know your place." Yurik lifts you up then drops you on the bed with your head at the foot of the bed then he quickly romoves his pants causing his 19 centimeter penis to spring out. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Ohh wow. His dick is so big. There is no way that will fit inside me.'+$CloseInnerThought+' Yurik approaches your face as you lay still, in complete shock.'
 
 								act 'See what Yurik does':	
 									*clr & cla
@@ -380,7 +380,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Vicky Talk':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoria [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vickysmile1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You turn around to see Vicky Meynold with a playful look on her face as she says, "You seem to be spending a lot of time with the boys. having fun out there?" You lower your head, feeling ashamed. Vicky approaches you and places both of her hands on your shoulders then says,. "You still with Niko aren''t you?" You keep your head lowered as you reply, "Yes... I am." Vicky lightly rocks you from side to side. "Maybe this is the path for you. Maybe you are a... uhh... You know."'		
+		'You turn around to see Vicky Meynold with a playful look on her face as she says, "You seem to be spending a lot of time with the boys. Having fun out there?" You lower your head, feeling ashamed. Vicky approaches you and places both of her hands on your shoulders then says,. "You still with Niko aren''t you?" You keep your head lowered as you reply, "Yes... I am." Vicky lightly rocks you from side to side. "Maybe this is the path for you. Maybe you are a... uhh... You know."'		
 
 		act 'finish her sentence':	
 			*clr & cla
@@ -442,9 +442,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat 2':
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><b><h4><font color=#9b5800><<"Petia Alkaev">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big159.jpg"></center>'
-				'As you enter the locker room you see Petia waiting for you. You immediately know what he wants and you turn to Niko then ask, "Do you want me to suck his dick again?" But you say it with a smile. Niko looks at you with a surprised, but pleased look on his face, "You really seem to be getting into this, good, but no, he wants to fuck you this time. Don''t worry, he will pay a lot more this time. so take off your clothes." You obediently nod then remove your clothes. Petia watches you undress while removing his pants and stroking his penis.' 
+				'As you enter the locker room you see Petia waiting for you. You immediately know what he wants and you turn to Niko then ask, "Do you want me to suck his dick again?" But you say it with a smile. Niko looks at you with a surprised, but pleased look on his face, "You really seem to be getting into this, good, but no, he wants to fuck you this time. Don''t worry, he will pay a lot more this time. So take off your clothes." You obediently nod then remove your clothes. Petia watches you undress while removing his pants and stroking his penis.' 
 				*nl
-				'After fully undressing, you walk up to Petia then ask him, "How do you want me?" His jaw is hanging as he freezes for a few moments while scanning you body with his eyes. "SPEAK UP LOSER! TIME IS MONEY!" Niko exclaims. Petia jumps up in shock before replying, "Oh.. Oh.. Oh yes, Over.. By.. Um.. here..Climb on me." He then quickly sits on a bench. You can see the sweat trailing down his face.'
+				'After fully undressing, you walk up to Petia then ask him, "How do you want me?" His jaw is hanging as he freezes for a few moments while scanning you body with his eyes. "SPEAK UP LOSER! TIME IS MONEY!" Niko exclaims. Petia jumps up in shock before replying, "Oh.. Oh.. Oh yes, Over.. By.. Um.. here.. Climb on me." He then quickly sits on a bench. You can see the sweat trailing down his face.'
 				
 				act 'Approach Petia':
 					*clr & cla

locations/NikoPayback.qsrc

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Payback':
 			if NikoVolkovQW = -1:
 				'"Please stop Niko, I''m so sorry for breaking up with you. I was just really upset and didn''t give you a chance. Please forgive me." Niko scuffs then replies, "Don''t give me that bullshit! you don''t give a shit about me but you will pay me back. From now on you will either pay me 200 <b>₽</b> everyday or I will be using your body as payment. Do you understand bitch?"'
 			else	
-				'"Please stop Niko, I''m so sorry for insulting you. I don''t know what came over me. and never gave you a chance. Please forgive me." Niko scuffs then replies, "Don''t give me that bullshit! you''re not fucking sorry but you will be. From now on you will either pay me 200 <b>₽</b> everyday or I will be using your body as payment. Do you understand bitch?"'
+				'"Please stop Niko, I''m so sorry for insulting you. I don''t know what came over me. And never gave you a chance. Please forgive me." Niko scuffs then replies, "Don''t give me that bullshit! you''re not fucking sorry but you will be. From now on you will either pay me 200 <b>₽</b> everyday or I will be using your body as payment. Do you understand bitch?"'
 			end	
 
 			act 'I understand':	

locations/NikoSlut.qsrc

@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 1':
 	minut += 15
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/borisdiner/npc/1.jpg"></center>'
-	'A biker approaches Niko then says, "I want to spend some time with this girl again." He then begins rubbing your cheek gently. as he hands Niko the money. Niko counts the money then nods to the biker, who leads you to the restroom where he says, "Take off your clothes please." The biker removes his pants while watching you undress.'
+	'A biker approaches Niko then says, "I want to spend some time with this girl again." He then begins rubbing your cheek gently. As he hands Niko the money. Niko counts the money then nods to the biker, who leads you to the restroom where he says, "Take off your clothes please." The biker removes his pants while watching you undress.'
 
 	act 'Blowjob':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 1':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/1/anal1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You lean over the toilet and spit on your two fingers then use them to lubricate your anus. The man immediatly realizes what you are doing then lines up behind you then slowly inserts his penis inside of your anus, causing you to let out a low, but long lasting moan. After you anus adjusts, for this man''s penis then he begins thrusting his thick penis in your ass. The pleasure of his big dick is so intense as it squeezes its way through your ass. The man begins moaning loudly before saying, "Holy fuck! Your ass is so tight." You can tell by his heavy breathing that he is about ready to cum.'
+		'You lean over the toilet and spit on your two fingers then use them to lubricate your anus. The man immediatly realizes what you are doing then lines up behind you then slowly inserts his penis inside of your anus, causing you to let out a low, but long lasting moan. After your anus adjusts, for this man''s penis then he begins thrusting his thick penis in your ass. The pleasure of his big dick is so intense as it squeezes its way through your ass. The man begins moaning loudly before saying, "Holy fuck! Your ass is so tight." You can tell by his heavy breathing that he is about ready to cum.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'dom'
 		gs 'stat'
 
@@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 2':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/swallow7.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'As you reach forward and grab onto the man''s crotch, he immediately pulls down his pants then let''s you touch his hard penis. You lean more and wrap your lips around his dick, hearing him let out a long moan as you are sucking and licking his rock hard cock. He begins squirming almost immediately then groans as he fills your mouth with his cum. <font color=#FF00FF>Wow, he came so quickly. Touching on my body must have really turned him on.</font> The man fully milks his dick in your mouth before pulling up his pants then saying, "Damn girl, you really got me off quickly. great work." He then walks back into the diner as you spit his cum onto the floor. Niko approaches you then asks, "Are you ready for another customer, or would you like to clean up first?"'
+				'As you reach forward and grab onto the man''s crotch, he immediately pulls down his pants then let''s you touch his hard penis. You lean more and wrap your lips around his dick, hearing him let out a long moan as you are sucking and licking his rock hard cock. He begins squirming almost immediately then groans as he fills your mouth with his cum. <font color=#FF00FF>Wow, he came so quickly. Touching on my body must have really turned him on.</font> The man fully milks his dick in your mouth before pulling up his pants then saying, "Damn girl, you really got me off quickly. Great work." He then walks back into the diner as you spit his cum onto the floor. Niko approaches you then asks, "Are you ready for another customer, or would you like to clean up first?"'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 2':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/2/anal1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You get up and walk over to the nearby wall then lean forward while lubricating your anus, signaling him to fuck your ass. The man''s eyes light up as he approaches you then begins rubbing his penis against you anus before slowly pushing it inside. You moan as you feel his warm hard cock, enter your ass, pushing its way inside you. The man start moaning with you before muttering under his breath. "Fuck her ass is so tight. I won''t last long at this rate." The man begin fucking your ass as he moans loudly.'
+				'You get up and walk over to the nearby wall then lean forward while lubricating your anus, signaling him to fuck your ass. The man''s eyes light up as he approaches you then begins rubbing his penis against your anus before slowly pushing it inside. You moan as you feel his warm hard cock, enter your ass, pushing its way inside you. The man start moaning with you before muttering under his breath. "Fuck her ass is so tight. I won''t last long at this rate." The man begin fucking your ass as he moans loudly.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -634,7 +634,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 5':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/5/anal1.jpg"></center>'
 			'You begin unbuttoning the trucker''s pants as you say, "I want you to fuck my ass." The truckers eyes light up. "Hot damn, that sound great to me." You giggle at his accent as you pull down his pants then begin lubing his penis before approaching the nearby wall. You bend over then give the trucker a seductive wink, causing him to approach you then slowly push his penis inside of your ass.'
 			*nl
-			'You close your eyes then focus on his hard penis slowly making its way inside you. After the trucker gives your ass a chance to adjust to his penis, he begins slowly thrusting, causing pleasure to build as you anus tightens around his dick. The trucker begin moaning loudly before saying, "You''re rear end is so tight. It''s so nice feeling."'
+			'You close your eyes then focus on his hard penis slowly making its way inside you. After the trucker gives your ass a chance to adjust to his penis, he begins slowly thrusting, causing pleasure to build as your anus tightens around his dick. The trucker begin moaning loudly before saying, "You''re rear end is so tight. It''s so nice feeling."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -1319,7 +1319,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Diner Interior':
 
 	if hour = 18:
 		if $YurikEv['Name'] = 'Yurik':
-			'You can see <a href="exec:gt ''NikoSlut'', ''Yurik In''">Yurik</a> sitting in the corner of the bar. eating some dinner.'
+			'You can see <a href="exec:gt ''NikoSlut'', ''Yurik In''">Yurik</a> sitting in the corner of the bar. Eating some dinner.'
 		else
 			'You can see <a href="exec:gt ''NikoSlut'', ''Yurik In''">a burly bearded man</a> sitting in the corner of the bar, eating some dinner.'
 		end

locations/NikoWhore.qsrc

@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 															*nl
 															'Dan: I told you that she was a freak. She loves getting fucked. She was basically begging me to fuck her ass.'
 															'Vasily: Come on guys, we already have Sonia, we don''t need <<$pcs_nickname>> too.'
-															'Dan: She might be like Sonia 2.0, It would be wrong, for us to NOT to show her off. Now is the perfect time too. the boys are still on the stairwell.'
+															'Dan: She might be like Sonia 2.0, It would be wrong, for us to NOT to show her off. Now is the perfect time too. The boys are still on the stairwell.'
 															if hotcat >= 6 and salocatnow < 5:
 																'Vitek: That sounds like a great idea. <<$pcs_firstname>> is much hotter than Sonia anyway. Let''s do it. Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>, you''re coming with us.'
 															else
@@ -444,7 +444,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Exposed':
 										inhib_exp = 5
 										gs'stat'
 										'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lock1.mp4"></video></center>'
-										'You can feel Radomir''s penis enter your vagina causing a jolt of pressure as your weight pushes his cock completely inside of you. knowing that it is too late to go back, you begin riding Radomir. You can hear the boys cheering as they enjoy the show. You can still see Pauline recording you and the other girls cheering with malicious smirks on their faces.'
+										'You can feel Radomir''s penis enter your vagina causing a jolt of pressure as your weight pushes his cock completely inside of you. Knowing that it is too late to go back, you begin riding Radomir. You can hear the boys cheering as they enjoy the show. You can still see Pauline recording you and the other girls cheering with malicious smirks on their faces.'
 										$orgasm_txt = ''
 										gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
 										gs 'stat'

locations/ParChurch2.qsrc

@@ -663,7 +663,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'secrets':
 			end
 			if evgenQW < 3:
 				'You shake your head then realize that Father Kirill can''t see you.'
-				'"No, Father. we only watched the movies." you tell him.'
+				'"No, Father. We only watched the movies." you tell him.'
 				'"Well then, no harm done then." he says, almost sounding disappointed.'
 				act 'Finish':
 					*clr & cla

locations/VoltrenerSexShower.qsrc

@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 	act 'To get a better look':
 		cls
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/sex/voltrenersexshower19.jpg"></center>'
-		'You wipe the steam off a patch of the glass in front of you and see coach sitting in the dark, watching as Ivan Fucks you in the ass. when he got here and how much he''s seen, you don''t know, but your eyes meet and you are hit by a wave of shame and arousal. You literally throw yourself forward trying to jump off Ivan''s member, but your shaky legs betray you.'
+		'You wipe the steam off a patch of the glass in front of you and see coach sitting in the dark, watching as Ivan Fucks you in the ass. When he got here and how much he''s seen, you don''t know, but your eyes meet and you are hit by a wave of shame and arousal. You literally throw yourself forward trying to jump off Ivan''s member, but your shaky legs betray you.'
 		'Whether from Ivan''s actions, the fact that the coach is watching you, or the combination of both you begin to cum violently shouting and rhythmically squeezing your classmates cock with your anus. This is more than enough to send Ivan over the edge, his cum filling your ass.'
 		pcs_mood = 100
 		$orgasm_txt = 'The sudden feeling of being watched, was new, acute, the orgasm intense. You drop to the floor of the shower and lay there helplessly for some time.'

locations/_clothing_name.qsrc

@@ -216,7 +216,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swimwear':
 	if ARGS[1] = 211:$RESULT = 'A bikini set with floral print, it has a triangle top and a Brazilian bottom.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 212:$RESULT = 'A two-piece swimsuit in the color pine green, it has a full coverage top and a thong bikini bottom.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 213:$RESULT = 'A two-piece swimsuit in the color black, it has a halter top with transparent mesh and a double-strap thong bottom.'
-	if ARGS[1] = 214:$RESULT = 'A two-piece swimsuit that looks like one-piece. it has a tankini top and a classic full bikini bottom.' 
+	if ARGS[1] = 214:$RESULT = 'A two-piece swimsuit that looks like one-piece. It has a tankini top and a classic full bikini bottom.' 
 
 
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'beach':

locations/andrey.qsrc

@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 			if young_shop_salary > 0 or young_shop_bonus > 0:
 				money += young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205
 				'For working <b><<young_shop_salary>></b> days you get paid <b><<young_shop_salary * 205>></b> with a bonus of <b><<young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. Total income is <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>'
-				'Mr. Sobulyagin. counts <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> and hands it over to you.'
+				'Mr. Sobulyagin counts <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> and hands it over to you.'
 				! reset money,young_shop_salary,young_shop_bonus to zero for a new week
 				young_shop_salary = 0
 				young_shop_bonus = 0
@@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 				if young_shop_salary > 0 or young_shop_bonus > 0:
 					money += young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205
 					'For working <b><<young_shop_salary>></b> days you get paid <b><<young_shop_salary * 205>></b> with a bonus of <b><<young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. Total income is <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>'
-					'Mr. Sobulyagin. counts <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> and hands it over to you.'
+					'Mr. Sobulyagin counts <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> and hands it over to you.'
 					! reset money,young_shop_salary,young_shop_bonus to zero for a new week
 					young_shop_salary = 0
 					young_shop_bonus = 0
@@ -308,7 +308,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 				if young_shop_salary > 0 or young_shop_bonus > 0:
 					money += young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205
 					'For working <b><<young_shop_salary>></b> days you get paid <b><<young_shop_salary * 205>></b>, with a bonus of <b><<young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. Total income is <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>'
-					'Mr. Sobulyagin. counts out <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> and hands it over to you.'
+					'Mr. Sobulyagin counts out <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> and hands it over to you.'
 					! reset money,young_shop_salary,young_shop_bonus to zero for a new week
 					young_shop_salary = 0
 					young_shop_bonus = 0

locations/anushkachat.qsrc

@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			'She shakes her head. "Where did you hear that? Never mind because it doesn''t matter. We''re not friends that is... not really. He is ok I guess."'
 			*nl
 			'You are a bit confused by her response. "Why are you hooking up if you''re not friends?"'
-			'She laughs. "Because it''s taboo and you know how people are. He''s black... he''s an American. Either would be enough for people to think it is wrong. but both just makes it doubly taboo. That makes it fucking hot. Not to mention he has a huge fucking dick."'
+			'She laughs. "Because it''s taboo and you know how people are. He''s black... he''s an American. Either would be enough for people to think it is wrong. But both just makes it doubly taboo. That makes it fucking hot. Not to mention he has a huge fucking dick."'
 			'You nod in agreement, he does have a big dick, at least from what you have seen and heard. "Is it just because he has a big dick and is black?"'
 			'She shrugs slightly. "Yeah, pretty much. I mean just thinking about getting ploughed by his big black cock is making me horny." she says with a laugh, but you can tell she really is starting to get aroused.'
 			*nl

locations/arousal.qsrc

@@ -874,7 +874,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'auto_lube':
 	if $ARGS[1] = 'anal' and auto_anal_lube = 1:
 		if lubri > 0:
 			if $ARGS[2] ! 'custom': 
-				'You rub some lube in and around you anus.'
+				'You rub some lube in and around your anus.'
 			elseif $lube_txt ! '':
 				$lube_txt
 			end

locations/balkon2.qsrc

@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masopt':
 				*clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/apartment/sex/balcony_anal2.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'As you''re pleasuring yourself inserting the finger in and out, you grab your dildo and begin sucking on it, trying to lube it as much as you can.'
-				'Not being able to contain yourself you remove the dildo from your mouth and slowly insert it into you anus. At first you feel discomfort but the amazing feeling as the dildo penetrates makes you forget all about it.'
+				'Not being able to contain yourself you remove the dildo from your mouth and slowly insert it into your anus. At first you feel discomfort but the amazing feeling as the dildo penetrates makes you forget all about it.'
 				'As your anus eases you start to pump away the dildo at a faster speed. The sexual pleasure you''re experiencing is greater than anything you''ve ever known would be possible to feel.'
 				
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'

locations/bordel.qsrc

@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel':
 			act 'Go to the bathroom':gt 'bordel', 'dysh'
 		elseif $clothingworntype ! 'burlesque' and PCloStyle ! 4 and $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
 			cla
-			'You need to wear an outfit that can be used for prostitution. if you haven''t got anything suitable and you are desperate, you could work naked but you will get paid less and might get treated badly.'
+			'You need to wear an outfit that can be used for prostitution. If you haven''t got anything suitable and you are desperate, you could work naked but you will get paid less and might get treated badly.'
 			'You can change your clothes in the bathroom.'
 
 			act 'Go to the bathroom':gt 'bordel', 'dysh'

locations/brothel.qsrc

@@ -209,7 +209,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abducted':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/pinchandfingertiedtobed.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'He jumps on to you, grabbing your ass and pinching your cheeks.'
-		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Ouch! It..hurts.. Ouch!"</font> The pain forces you back to a consciousness for a brief moment.'
+		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Ouch! It.. hurts.. Ouch!"</font> The pain forces you back to a consciousness for a brief moment.'
 		'Aroused with your reaction, he pushes his finger into your pussy, one by one until there are four of them.'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"What a whore! She''s already wet!"</font>'
 		'He uses the juiced fingers and thrusts them into your anus, once again forcing you back to a living world.'
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abducted':
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Now slut let''s get you your drink!"</font>'
 		'He reaches for a bottle of champagne from the minibar.'
 		'All you can hear in that moment is a popping sound as the bottle plug shoots out.. The barman covers the neck of the bottle with his thumb and shakes it to build up a pressure..'
-		'..and then he forces it into you anus as far as it goes, while the sparkling wine gushes out deep into your intestines.'
+		'..and then he forces it into your anus as far as it goes, while the sparkling wine gushes out deep into your intestines.'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Ayyyieeee!"</font> Again you scream aloud shaking both in surprise and pain.'
 		gs 'pain', 6, 'asshole', 'stretch'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo', 5
@@ -454,7 +454,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:leave':
 	*nl
 	if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 		'The Receptionist looks up from his desk and gazes upon you: <font color=#<<$rec_font>>>"Didn''t you forget something, whore?"</font>'
-		'It takes you few seconds to realize that you are naked! <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Oops..let me get my clothes first, I guess.."</font>'
+		'It takes you few seconds to realize that you are naked! <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Oops.. let me get my clothes first, I guess.."</font>'
 		if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/nude.jpg"></center>'
 		else
@@ -1372,7 +1372,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:lieOnBack':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/onbackkneeshigh.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	'The client reaches for your neck, forcefully leading you to one of the beds.'
-	'You know what''s coming..he throws you on the soft pillows: <font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Lie on your back and put your knees as close to your head as you can!"</font>'
+	'You know what''s coming.. he throws you on the soft pillows: <font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Lie on your back and put your knees as close to your head as you can!"</font>'
 	'You do as ordered..'
 	act 'Continue': gt 'brothel', $sessionB
 end
@@ -1397,7 +1397,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:nailsandneedlestits':
 	elseif step = 1:
 		caneFeetCount = 0
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Would a bonus to your pay change your mind?"</font>'
-		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Wh..what bonus?"</font>'
+		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Wh.. what bonus?"</font>'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Ah, let''s say 50% more?"</font>'
 		act 'Say you''ll do it': step = 2 & bonus = 50 & gt 'brothel', $this
 		act 'Say you''ll do it fot 100% more': step = 3 & gt 'brothel', $this

locations/buklinik_event.qsrc

@@ -856,7 +856,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'event2':
 										stat['cuni'] += 1
 										cls
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/mercyclinic/sex/facesitting.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You told him about it. he immediately agreed. You sat on his face and began to slowly move his hips. Arousal gushed on and you reschili...'
+		'You told him about it. He immediately agreed. You sat on his face and began to slowly move his hips. Arousal gushed on and you reschili...'
 										act'To accelerate the pace':
 											cls
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/mercyclinic/sex/tube.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -865,7 +865,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'event2':
 		- God, my! - you screamed.
 		- Respirator... pipes... - after saying the last word you gave him.
 		- I think it''s worth to wait for later. - you said.
-		After inhaling he asked if we could have sex. you asked him to listen to your breath, reached into my purse for a condom and quickly put it on.'
+		After inhaling he asked if we could have sex. You asked him to listen to your breath, reached into my purse for a condom and quickly put it on.'
 											act'Take the dick':
 												cls
 												gs 'boyStat', 'A185'

locations/city_lake.qsrc

@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/andrew/sex/andreia.jpg"></center>'
 									'You try to break out of his grasp, but your struggles just seem to make him even more excited and you feel his now rock hard cock firmly press into your tender thigh.'
-									'The stranger turn you to your stomach and begins to wet you anus with his saliva.'
+									'The stranger turn you to your stomach and begins to wet your anus with his saliva.'
 									'He forcefully spreads your buttocks, opening up your quivering hole and crushing you with its heavy body. You blinked, a wheeze escapes from your throat and painfully his giant cock enters into your inner sanctum.'
 									'You do not feel pleasure, only acute pain, your aversion to the rapist and the feeling that you are being using, like a whore. However, his fingers casually touch your clit, and you catch the wave of lust. Over and over again as if you punched through by the huge cock of your abuser, you push back wanting more of him, and can not hold back the sweet moans.'
 									$orgasm_or = 'yes'

locations/city_trashplace.qsrc

@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ $workbomzdi = {
 				'This sauna is located near your home, it is strange that you did not notice it before.'
 			end
 
-			'You go to the sauna, and you''re introduced to the local managers. it is explained to you who you need to deliver to, and reminded that it is necessary to return the envelope the same day you receive it.'
+			'You go to the sauna, and you''re introduced to the local managers. It is explained to you to whom you need to deliver to, and reminded that it is necessary to return the envelope the same day you receive it.'
 			'"Don''t forget to use secure transport. We''ll see you on Fridays and don''t fuck up."'
 
 			act 'Leave':bomzQW = 2 & minut += 1 & gt $loc, $loc_arg

locations/dimaEv.qsrc

@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'firstvisitsex':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/arthur/sex/facefuck0.jpg"></center>'
 				if pcs_throat < 16:
-					'Your sense of time seems altered, minutes?, hours?, it doesn''t seem to be important, you just keep sucking his cock as if it is the only thing in your little world. Dimka grabs you by the hair and pulls you onto his member. His hard <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock enters your throat, you choke but are too confused to really do anything about it. Dimka doesn''t pay any attention to your distress, and in fact, seems to enjoy your gagging sounds. he just fucks your mouth with his hard cock. Finally the torture ends and he fills your mouth with his hot slimy sperm that you instinctively swallow.'
+					'Your sense of time seems altered, minutes?, hours?, it doesn''t seem to be important, you just keep sucking his cock as if it is the only thing in your little world. Dimka grabs you by the hair and pulls you onto his member. His hard <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock enters your throat, you choke but are too confused to really do anything about it. Dimka doesn''t pay any attention to your distress, and in fact, seems to enjoy your gagging sounds. He just fucks your mouth with his hard cock. Finally the torture ends and he fills your mouth with his hot slimy sperm that you instinctively swallow.'
 				else
 					'Your sense of time seems altered, minutes?, hours?, it doesn''t seem to be important, you just keep sucking his cock as if it is the only thing in your little world. Dimka grabs you by the hair and pulls you onto his member. His hard <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock enters your throat, you resist gagging, but are too confused to really understand what he is doing. Dimka enjoys the fact that he can push his hard cock to the back of your throat and relentlessly fucks your mouth. Finally the torture ends and he cums his hot slimy sperm that you instinctively swallow.'
 				end
@@ -503,7 +503,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkaabuse6':
 	if pcs_makeup ! 1:pcs_makeup = 0
 	minut += 20
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/sex/nip.jpg"></center>'
-	'Dimka make you lie down, and binds you until you are fully immobilized. He looks at you with a pensive expression. "Ok..Hm..I think that you don''t understand your position.. Hmm.. lets see if a you can learn something" Then he clamps your nipples in small vices and tightens the jaws. It hurt, but then you see what he has prepared, and cry in terror. Suddenly he stabs a needle through your nipple. You howl in pain, but Dimka spits on you as you cry and sticks in another needle forcing you to howl again. You yell and swear at this fucking sadist, but Dimka coldly continues an to your ever growing horror, connect them to a battery. Little shocks run through your body, enhancing the sensation of helplessness. After an eternity of sobbing, pain and pleading. He release you.'
+	'Dimka make you lie down, and binds you until you are fully immobilized. He looks at you with a pensive expression. "Ok..Hm..I think that you don''t understand your position.. Hmm.. let''s see if a you can learn something" Then he clamps your nipples in small vices and tightens the jaws. It hurt, but then you see what he has prepared, and cry in terror. Suddenly he stabs a needle through your nipple. You howl in pain, but Dimka spits on you as you cry and sticks in another needle forcing you to howl again. You yell and swear at this fucking sadist, but Dimka coldly continues an to your ever growing horror, connect them to a battery. Little shocks run through your body, enhancing the sensation of helplessness. After an eternity of sobbing, pain and pleading. He release you.'
 	if pirsF > 0:
 		'When he gets bored of watching you in pain, Dimka pulls the needles out of your nipples and sets you free.'
 		gs 'pain', 7, 'nipples', 'pierce'

locations/dimaRevenge.qsrc

@@ -726,8 +726,8 @@ if dimaRevChoice = 3:
 			*nl
 			'"Shut your god damn mouth, you bitch!" You must have really touched a nerve there.'
 			'"So that''s how it is then. Okay I''m off to show the video around. Bye."'
-			'"No wait! I''m sorry. I''ll stop everyone from talking. I swear. just don''t show that to anyone."'
-			'"That''s more like it. You have until the end of the day to get results, or else you know what will happen. don''t you? I don''t want to see you in class until you get it done." He nods and heads into the hall. You breathe a sigh of relief. You were seriously scared there, but it was also exciting seeing him so scared himself. You think about following him around to make sure he keeps his word, but that would mean skipping class. You know he won''t cross you as long as you have dirt on him. You head to class.'
+			'"No wait! I''m sorry. I''ll stop everyone from talking. I swear. Jst don''t show that to anyone."'
+			'"That''s more like it. You have until the end of the day to get results, or else you know what will happen. Don''t you? I don''t want to see you in class until you get it done." He nods and heads into the hall. You breathe a sigh of relief. You were seriously scared there, but it was also exciting seeing him so scared himself. You think about following him around to make sure he keeps his word, but that would mean skipping class. You know he won''t cross you as long as you have dirt on him. You head to class.'
 			act 'Go to class':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
@@ -1147,7 +1147,7 @@ if dimaRevChoice = 6:
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/revenge/crying.jpg"></center>'
 			'As you hide in the stall, crying hysterically, all you can think about is how your life is over. All the girls are going to give you the cold shoulder. The boys are going to treat you like a whore and make you give them blowjobs alongside Sonia. Your mother will disown you. Your despair is interrupted by a banging on the restroom door.'
-			'"Come out, <<$pcs_nickname>>. you can''t stay in their forever." It''s Dimka, that fucking asshole.'
+			'"Come out, <<$pcs_nickname>>. You can''t stay in there forever." It''s Dimka, that fucking asshole.'
 			'"Your public is waiting for you, slut. Come out and show us what a good cocksuc- Ow! Fuck! Get the hell off me Artem!"'
 			act 'peek your head out':
 				*clr & cla

locations/dimalina.qsrc

@@ -422,7 +422,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkalina3':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/linased/D2.jpg"></center>'
 			'Gritting your teeth, you look to Dimka. He''s distracted adjusting some settings, so you throw the pills into your clothes and hide them. Relieved that he hasn''t noticed, you put on the gag ball. Fortunately, this time it''s you who put this thing on and manage to do so without hurting your jaw. Dimka ends what he was doing and looks at you with an expression of satisfaction on his face.' 
 			'"Look Slut, if you behave, the next time I will give you a gift. OK?"'
-			'You wordlessly agree by nodding, and he seems satisfied. as usual he chains you up in the closet but weirdly, today he seems genuinely in a good mood. You wait there as Dimka prepare the cameras in the room.'
+			'You wordlessly agree by nodding, and he seems satisfied. As usual he chains you up in the closet but weirdly, today he seems genuinely in a good mood. You wait there as Dimka prepare the cameras in the room.'
 			act 'Watch': gt 'dimalina', 'watch3'
 		end
 	else
@@ -434,7 +434,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkalina3':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/linased/D2.jpg"></center>'
 		'You are trapped and without options. Gritting your teeth, you take them. After eating the pills, you put in the gag. Fortunately, this time it''s you who put this thing on and manage to put it on without hurting your jaw. Dimka ends what he was doing and looks at you with an expression of satisfaction on his face.' 
 		'"Look Slut, if you behave, the next time I will give you a gift. OK?"'
-		'You wordlessly agree with a nod, and he seems satisfied. as usual he chains you up in the closet but weirdly, today he seems genuinely in a good mood. You wait there as Dimka prepare the cameras in the room.'
+		'You wordlessly agree with a nod, and he seems satisfied. As usual he chains you up in the closet but weirdly, today he seems genuinely in a good mood. You wait there as Dimka prepare the cameras in the room.'
 		act 'Watch': gt 'dimalina', 'watch3'
 	end
 end

locations/dinParty.qsrc

@@ -478,7 +478,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rex_dance':
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_rex_party_gost_3_<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
 	end
-	'Rex takes you by the hand and drags you out to dance. you are happy to follow him.'
+	'Rex takes you by the hand and drags you out to dance. You are happy to follow him.'
 	'You dance, slowly getting closer to each other and finally grinding a bit against each other.'
 	'You turn around, putting your back to him and grind your tight ass against his crotch. You can feel his hard cock against your ass as you grind against it.'
 	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg 

locations/din_pav.qsrc

@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ $pavser1 = {
 
 $pavser3 = {
 	menu_off = 1
-    'Condition Bedrooms more you plunged into a stupor. quite ragged room with awkward standing in the midst of her perfectly preserved ancient, plush ottoman.'
+    'Condition Bedrooms more you plunged into a stupor. Quite ragged room with awkward standing in the midst of her perfectly preserved ancient, plush ottoman.'
     act '- The chair would look good in a hall, - You dropped it withheld.':
         *clr & cla
         pcs_mana -= 50

locations/etoexhib.qsrc

@@ -512,7 +512,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos15':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/market/butplag.jpg"></center>'
 		'You showed no displeasure by his actions even with a lot of people around. All you could hear were people groaning because of the heat.'
-		'He moved his hand to your other cheek stopping in the middle, a little below. Little by little. he began to squeeze your ass in his hands. You did not react so he began to move his fingers under the fabric of your skirt to between your legs.'
+		'He moved his hand to your other cheek stopping in the middle, a little below. Little by little. He began to squeeze your ass in his hands. You did not react so he began to move his fingers under the fabric of your skirt to between your legs.'
 		'He felt that his "victim" was startled, but not surprised. Because he was experienced, he realized that you were excited and already quite wet.'
 		'You felt really excited. You wanted the guy to pull up your skirt and put cock inside... The sensations claimed you, your excitement increasing. You had to keep yourself from starting to groan and moan ...'
 		'The man, meanwhile, pulled at your skirt, and with skillful movements got under your skirt. His hand was on your damp with sweat ass and his fingers touched your anal tunnel.'
@@ -863,7 +863,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos22':
 		pcs_horny += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/altschool/ptu_rand.jpg"></center>'
-		'You met Olga L. the teacher of Foreign Languages. She is wearing a pretty sexy outfit, you think that''s against the rules.'
+		'You met Olga L., the teacher of Foreign Languages. She is wearing a pretty sexy outfit, you think that''s against the rules.'
 
 		act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos22'
 	end

locations/fathersex.qsrc

@@ -296,7 +296,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fathersex_act1':
 															spafinloc = 0
 															gs 'cum_manage'
 															'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/cumvaginal1.mp4"></video></center>'
-															'With his cock deep inside you and between his moans and cum pumping deep inside you. your dad looks at you and says... "i love you <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+															'With his cock deep inside you and between his moans and cum pumping deep inside you. Your dad looks at you and says... "i love you <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 															$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 															gs 'cuminsidereact'
 															gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'rough'

locations/foto.qsrc

@@ -2058,7 +2058,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blackm':
 					'On the back of a chair hangs sexy lingerie and white shirt. Apparently, all of this is meant to you. You dress up and sit on the edge of the bed. Almost immediately two men enter the room - one blond and buff the other slim and brunette.'
 					'"OK, a simple scenario." Directs Victor, following them with his camera. "Girl undressing. Sexy but quickly, then you get to know the boys. For the girl the actions will be a surprise." He winks at the guys and you suspect they know full well that you have no idea what to expect.'
 					'You start trying to undress but your hands won''t respond, but after the blond guy starts poking and probing your mental resistance fails. You take off your shirt and undo your bra, by then the guys are already taking matters into their own hands. The blond guy literally ripped the bra off you as the brunette pushes you back on to the bed and swiftly pulls your panties off.'
-					'Foreplay is clearly not part of the scene as the blond guy flips you over on to all fours and abruptly enters you, you have no time to get in the mood and are not ready for it. It hurts, but he seems to have used a little lube as he is able to fuck you deeply with little resistance. his hands roughly grope at your chest and you feel sore and violated.'
+					'Foreplay is clearly not part of the scene as the blond guy flips you over on to all fours and abruptly enters you, you have no time to get in the mood and are not ready for it. It hurts, but he seems to have used a little lube as he is able to fuck you deeply with little resistance. His hands roughly grope at your chest and you feel sore and violated.'
 					'The other guy having undress kneels in front of you and presents his erect cock to your mouth. You stare at it and your lack of action earns you a hard slap in the face, tears gush from your eyes with the pain.'
 					gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Brunette', rand(19,45)
 					gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated, 'a'

locations/foto_events2.qsrc

@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kickboxing_documentary':
                     if city_kickboxing >=150 and razradKik >= 5:						                               
                         'Two hours later, the model session/interviews end. After returning to the studio, you are handed <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> in payment for the job.'
                         'Sometime later, the article is sent to your phone...' 
-                        'And is a little awkward... The realization, that you are getting famous, as one of the best, if not the BEST, female kickboxer in all St.petersburg. Practically, the article turns around you. With even fans asking all kinds of personal questions. Damn! You are Hot, Mean and Famous!'                            
+                        'And is a little awkward... The realization, that you are getting famous, as one of the best, if not the BEST, female kickboxer in all St. Petersburg. Practically, the article turns around you. With even fans asking all kinds of personal questions. Damn! You are Hot, Mean and Famous!'                            
                     elseif city_kickboxing >=60 and razradKik >= 2:
                         'Two hours later, the model session/interviews end. After returning to the studio, you are handed <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> in payment for the job.' 
                         'Sometime later, the article is sent to your phone...' 
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'track_&_field_documentary':
                     if city_running >=90 and razradbeg >= 3:					
                         'Two hours later, the model session/interviews ends. After returning to the studio, you are handed <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> in payment for the job.'
                         'Sometime later, the article is sent to your phone...' 
-                        'And is a little awkward... The realization, that you are getting famous, as one of the best, if not THE best runner in The Women''s 400 Meter Dash category in all of St.petersburg. Practically, the article turns around you. With even fans asking all kinds of personal questions. Damn! You are Hot, Fast and Famous!'                            
+                        'And is a little awkward... The realization, that you are getting famous, as one of the best, if not THE best runner in The Women''s 400 Meter Dash category in all of St. Petersburg. Practically, the article turns around you. With even fans asking all kinds of personal questions. Damn! You are Hot, Fast and Famous!'                            
                     elseif city_running >=30 and razradKik >= 1:
                         'Two hours later, the model session/interviews ends. After returning to the studio, you are handed <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> in payment for the job.' 
                         'Sometime later, the article is sent to your phone...' 

locations/gdktoilet_womens.qsrc

@@ -377,7 +377,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/womens/sex/ghanal.mp4"></video></center>'
 
 		if pcs_ass < 10:
-			'The pain doesn''t fade and instead it starts to hurt worse after a while and the pleasure starts to fade. You fuck his dick with your ass, at first taking him deeper and deeper, as you get faster and faster. As the pleasure fades and the pain gets worse you slow down and don''t take him as deep. you start to rub your clit to help with the sensation of pleasure. You consider stopping as the pain gets worse, but you can tell by the throbbing of his dick and ragged breathing he is about to cum and decided to keep it up so he can finish.'
+			'The pain doesn''t fade and instead it starts to hurt worse after a while and the pleasure starts to fade. You fuck his dick with your ass, at first taking him deeper and deeper, as you get faster and faster. As the pleasure fades and the pain gets worse you slow down and don''t take him as deep. You start to rub your clit to help with the sensation of pleasure. You consider stopping as the pain gets worse, but you can tell by the throbbing of his dick and ragged breathing he is about to cum and decided to keep it up so he can finish.'
 		elseif pcs_ass < 20:
 			'The pain fades slowly and soon all you feel pleasure. You fuck his dick with your ass, taking him deeper and deeper, as you get faster and faster, you start to rub your clit as you feel yourself getting close to climax. You can tell by the throbbing of his dick and ragged breathing he is about to cum.'
 		else

locations/gschool_chats1.qsrc

@@ -988,7 +988,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vanya':
 			'"What the hell Vanya!" you angrily stomp towards him...'
 			'"What now?" he looks innocently at you. "I''m getting tired of you accusing me for things I haven''t done..."'
 			'"It must''ve been you! Who else replaces talc powder with itching powder?!" you continue on.'
-			'"No idea. what an amazing...I mean cruel joke though..." he coolly replies.'
+			'"No idea. What an amazing...I mean cruel joke though..." he coolly replies.'
 		else
 			'"Funny joke you played on me there, dickhead." you angrily push Vanya.'
 			'"What are you talking about? You''ve gone crazy!" he replies.'

locations/gschool_chats2.qsrc

@@ -332,7 +332,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'natalia':
 		elseif VK = 2:
 			'Natalia sits quietly staring at the other students chatting, looking very lonely. You approach her and wave. Natalia''s eyes immediately light up as she says "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s so great to see you. Would you like to chat for a while?" You nod and reply."Of course I would." You both spend the next few minutes swapping stories while laughing and joking.'
 		elseif VK = 3:
-			'You see Natalia chatting with Zinaida. "Come on Natalia, you have to download this game. It is free to play. There is no reason to not try it out." Natalia replies. "I just don''t really have time to download it. I..." Zin quickly responds, "Well you have time right now. I''m trying to get you into this game so that I can help you power level. All you need to do is..." Sensing that Nat is uncomfortable with the conversation, you approach Natalia and say "Hey Nat, the guidance counselor wants to see you about something. You shouldn''t keep her waiting." Natalia gives you an approving nod then says "Okay I better go. See you Zin..and you too <<$pcs_firstname>>. Bye" She leaves as Zin hollers "But we were....Fine." She then turns around and returns to her game.'
+			'You see Natalia chatting with Zinaida. "Come on Natalia, you have to download this game. It is free to play. There is no reason to not try it out." Natalia replies. "I just don''t really have time to download it. I..." Zin quickly responds, "Well you have time right now. I''m trying to get you into this game so that I can help you power level. All you need to do is..." Sensing that Nat is uncomfortable with the conversation, you approach Natalia and say "Hey Nat, the guidance counselor wants to see you about something. You shouldn''t keep her waiting." Natalia gives you an approving nod then says "Okay I better go. See you Zin.. and you too <<$pcs_firstname>>. Bye" She leaves as Zin hollers "But we were....Fine." She then turns around and returns to her game.'
 		elseif VK = 4:
 			'As you approach Natalia, she closes her notebook and waves at you. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, come and have a seat." You sit down next to Natalia and discuss current events while occasionally gossiping about your classmates.'
 		else		
@@ -461,7 +461,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesco':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big7.jpg"></center>'
 	if rand(0,5) = 0:
 		'You see Lesco talking to Lera and, unsurprisingly, things look tense. Knowing how volatile the gopnik can be, you approach them carefully. They greet you and Lesco is the first to speak up. "Lera and I were talking about her needing to take care some of her chores at home, but she doesn''t want to listen..."'
-		'An annoyed Lera is quick to snap back. "Why are you telling your little girlfriend my business? Trying to show off? Try that shit again and I''ll tell her all your dirty..little..secrets." she says while prodding him on the chest.'
+		'An annoyed Lera is quick to snap back. "Why are you telling your little girlfriend my business? Trying to show off? Try that shit again and I''ll tell her all your dirty.. little.. secrets." she says while prodding him on the chest.'
 		'Hearing this, you start to wonder what kind of secrets someone like Lesco is hiding but decide to keep quiet as you don''t really want to get involved. They continue bickering for a while before you decide that it''s time to leave them alone.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A7'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 200:
 		npc_rel['A7'] += 1

locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc

@@ -295,7 +295,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'practice':
 		else
 			if cheerleadingQW['quest_stage'] = 2:
 				if (cheerleadingQW['game_count'] > 6) and (rand(0,3)=0):
-					'As you enter the hall, Albina walks up to you, looking strangely cheerful. "Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''ve been talking with the girls and, since you''ve proven yourself capable, we''re <i>mostly</i> in agreement that you deserve a spot on the squad. I''ll sort you out with a uniform in due time, but you''re part of the squad now. So..welcome, I guess?" she says before walking away to prepare the rest of the squad for practice. You contain your excitement as you take your place among the other girls, overjoyed that you actually made it onto the squad!'
+					'As you enter the hall, Albina walks up to you, looking strangely cheerful. "Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''ve been talking with the girls and, since you''ve proven yourself capable, we''re <i>mostly</i> in agreement that you deserve a spot on the squad. I''ll sort you out with a uniform in due time, but you''re part of the squad now. So.. welcome, I guess?" she says before walking away to prepare the rest of the squad for practice. You contain your excitement as you take your place among the other girls, overjoyed that you actually made it onto the squad!'
 					cheerleadingQW['quest_stage'] = 3
 				else
 					if npc_grupTipe['A18'] = 5:
@@ -778,7 +778,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 				end
 			end
 		else
-			'While you''re getting dressed, Albina approaches you with a mischievious grin on her face. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m feeling...tense again and Lazar is going to help me..relax. I was wondering if you wanted to join me again? I must admit that I loved you being a submissive little minx and would enjoy playing with you again."'
+			'While you''re getting dressed, Albina approaches you with a mischievious grin on her face. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m feeling...tense again and Lazar is going to help me.. relax. I was wondering if you wanted to join me again? I must admit that I loved you being a submissive little minx and would enjoy playing with you again."'
 
 			act 'Refuse':
 				*clr & cla

locations/gschool_office.qsrc

@@ -585,7 +585,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore2':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/whore7.jpg"></center>'
-	'She half-lifts, half-pushes you onto her desk where she has you kneel down and sit back until you''re touching your heels. With your feet dangling off the edge of the desk, your backdoor is easily accessible, which seems to be the idea - you feel the pressure of the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> strap-on against you anus. It only lasts for a moment, though: As soon as she is sure she has it lined up, she shoves the dildo up your ass. Given how unprepared you were and that the only lubrication was whatever wetness clung to the dildo, your cry of pain was surprisingly soft, but your first reflex still is to move forward.'
+	'She half-lifts, half-pushes you onto her desk where she has you kneel down and sit back until you''re touching your heels. With your feet dangling off the edge of the desk, your backdoor is easily accessible, which seems to be the idea - you feel the pressure of the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> strap-on against your anus. It only lasts for a moment, though: As soon as she is sure she has it lined up, she shoves the dildo up your ass. Given how unprepared you were and that the only lubrication was whatever wetness clung to the dildo, your cry of pain was surprisingly soft, but your first reflex still is to move forward.'
 	*nl
 	'Realizing that, she grabs hold of your hips to keep you from pulling away. "I''m not done with you yet, <<$pcs_lastname>>. This is what whores do every day, and they have to like it," she says as she pounds the dildo into your ass. The first few thrusts are the worst, even worse than the initial penetration... but after a while - and maybe also due to the Principal spitting on your puckered hole several times - the pain subsides to tolerable levels and it starts feeling good, <i>really</i> good. Soft moans escape your lips as she pounds your little ass. No longer trying to pull away, you are pushing back against her.' 
 	'"Now you''re acting like a good little whore," she comments, and with your only response being another moan and thrust against her, she is not wrong.'

locations/igorev.qsrc

@@ -1075,7 +1075,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'walk':
 					'He blushes a deep red. "Well ok, it''s... it''s just. Well I really wanted to flirt with him. He was so cute."'
 					'You give him a resasuring hug. "If it makes you happy that''s all that matters. Do you think you might like boys?"'
 					'He seems taken back by the question but considers his answer. "I don''t know, I just think I wish I was a girl is all."'
-					'"Ok, well next time flirt and see how it feels. then."'
+					'"Ok, well next time flirt and see how it feels then."'
 					'He nods a bit. "I better get changed before my parents get home." With that he goes and changes back into his boy clothes.'
 					act 'Finish': gt 'igorhome', 'igorroom'
 				end
@@ -1116,7 +1116,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'walk':
 					'He blushes a deep red. "Well ok, it''s... it''s just. I got quite turned on flirting with that guy. He was so cute."'
 					'You give him a resasuring hug. "If it makes you happy that''s all that matters. Do you think you might like boys?"'
 					'He seems taken back by the question but considers his answer. "I don''t know, I just think I wish I was a girl is all."'
-					'"Ok, well next time take it a step further and see how it feels. then."'
+					'"Ok, well next time take it a step further and see how it feels then."'
 					'He nods a bit. "I better get changed before my parents get home." With that he goes and changes back into his boy clothes.'
 					act 'Finish': gt 'igorhome', 'igorroom'
 				end

locations/kafesvid.qsrc

@@ -255,7 +255,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/12.jpg"></center>'
 			'A little nervous, you take his penis in your hand, and begin to stroke.'
-			'<<$telsob>> continues to chat with you paying no attention to the man: "That''s a good girl, <<$pcs_nickname>>. doesn''t it feel great knowing you can please a total stranger with so little effort?" With that the man grunts loudly, signaling he is about to cum. "Are you just going to let him finish on the table? It would be a shame if we came all the way to the cafe, and you passed up the most tasty treat."'
+			'<<$telsob>> continues to chat with you paying no attention to the man: "That''s a good girl, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Doesn''t it feel great knowing you can please a total stranger with so little effort?" With that the man grunts loudly, signaling he is about to cum. "Are you just going to let him finish on the table? It would be a shame if we came all the way to the cafe, and you passed up the most tasty treat."'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -275,7 +275,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 			act 'Continue with your hand':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/12.jpg"></center>'
-				'Wanting to get this over with, you concentrate on making him cum. he soon spills his seed all over the table top.'
+				'Wanting to get this over with, you concentrate on making him cum. He soon spills his seed all over the table top.'
 				'<<$telsob>> starts up again, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you have to at least try the yogurt. It would be a shame for it to go to waste."'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'sub'

locations/kino.qsrc

@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 							gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'guy from the cinema', rand(19,45)
 							gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 							'You walk over to him, and with a wicked grin ask: "Is this seat taken?"'
-							'"Umm..no ma''am it''s not", he says.'
+							'"Umm.. no ma''am it''s not", he says.'
 							'"Such a gentleman", you say smiling, as you sit down next to him. You immediately rest a hand on his inner thigh, and begin to gently caress him. It''s not long before he is breathing heavy.'
 							'With your intentions made clear, you slowly unbutton your top. All that''s left is to tell him what you want.'
 

locations/korr.qsrc

@@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ $ninel0 = {
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/apartment/event/sick/nadom1.jpg"></center>'
 			'You undress and the doctor listens to your lungs for a long time. Her hands are cool and gentle as she touches you, while the stethoscope is cold.'
-			'"Mmmm, now let''s take a look at your mouth. open wide and say Aaah."'
+			'"Mmmm, now let''s take a look at your mouth. Open wide and say Aaah."'
 
 			act 'Ahh':
 				cla

locations/leonid.qsrc

@@ -490,7 +490,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bdsmHorse':
 	leoHorny -= rand(20, 50)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/leonid/sex/horse'+rand(1, 5)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'<<$bName>> ties you up and leads you to a room with bondage devices.'
-	'He decides to play with you on a wooden horse..this is going to hurt!'
+	'He decides to play with you on a wooden horse.. this is going to hurt!'
 	'With bound hands you are seaten on it. The top is dull but it hurts anyway - the wooden top is squeezing your labia against the crotch.'
 	'As much as you try to twist and ease, it gets only worse.'
 

locations/lesbimistress.qsrc

@@ -2013,7 +2013,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mistvisit':
 				gs'stat'
 				
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/natalya/sex/sub44.jpg"></center>'
-				'Mistress angrily rips off your clothes and begins to brutally spank you, whilst screaming obscene curses. You howl and roll up on the floor in tears, as she pays particular attention to your breasts, butt and feet. she searches through your apartment, rummaging through desks and lockers, until she finds your hidden money. She takes some and puts it in her purse, before taking some of the cash you have on you. Not even bothering to close the door behind her or say anything, she leaves.'
+				'Mistress angrily rips off your clothes and begins to brutally spank you, whilst screaming obscene curses. You howl and roll up on the floor in tears, as she pays particular attention to your breasts, butt and feet. She searches through your apartment, rummaging through desks and lockers, until she finds your hidden money. She takes some and puts it in her purse, before taking some of the cash you have on you. Not even bothering to close the door behind her or say anything, she leaves.'
 				
 				act 'Close the door':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			end

locations/mirasex.qsrc

@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '69_1':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/lickmira_69_cum'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		$text69[4]+$textlick[iif(lesbian < 10,rand(7,9),rand(10,12))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,5,iif(pcs_horny < 80,6,7))]+$text69[5]+$textlick[iif(miralick < 10,rand(1,3),rand(4,6))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,1,iif(pcs_horny < 80,2,3))]
 		$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-		$orgasm_txt = 'Mira and you cum together. your mouth filled with her taste and her scent filling the air you lie for a minute blissed out before you slowly regain your senses and get ready to go.'
+		$orgasm_txt = 'Mira and you cum together. Your mouth filled with her taste and her scent filling the air you lie for a minute blissed out before you slowly regain your senses and get ready to go.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'lesbian'
 		minut -= 15

locations/natbelEv.qsrc

@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'carrybooks':
 				'Natasha looks over her shoulder at you with a faint blush on her cheeks. "I... Uhm... Thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>." She says, blushing at you prettily.'
 				'"We have some time before school." You tell her while you start pulling off her skirt and panties.'
 				'"Today you''ll be wearing them a little differently." You say, pushing her back on the couch. "Open your legs."'
-				'Natasha obediently opens her legs for you. showing off her pretty pussy. Not wasting any time you start playing with her, first rubbing her lips, then focussing more on her clit as you watch closely while Natasha''s pussy gets wetter and wetter.'
+				'Natasha obediently opens her legs for you. Showing off her pretty pussy. Not wasting any time you start playing with her, first rubbing her lips, then focussing more on her clit as you watch closely while Natasha''s pussy gets wetter and wetter.'
 				act 'Stuff her panties':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natasha/sex/stuffpanties.mp4"></video></center>'

locations/office.qsrc

@@ -736,7 +736,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kuh':
 				officeslut += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/sex/m14.jpg"></center>'
 				'As you kneel, he unzips his pants and pulls out his already erect cock, which falls right against your cheek as it comes free. You put your hands on his thighs and take hold of his cock with your mouth.  His hand moves behind your head.'
-				'"Oh yes, you are a good girl" he says as begins stroking your head, moving some hair from your face. You obediently start to suck his cock. You take his dick all the way into your throat and close your eyes, thinking to yourself "I just can''t control myself when they act like I''m supposed to blow them on command." You start to bob back and forth on the cock in your mouth, when suddenly you think you hear faint giggles from the door. You slow for a moment, but then he pushes your head down and you deep throat him again. he says "don''t stop now <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re not done yet."'
+				'"Oh yes, you are a good girl" he says as begins stroking your head, moving some hair from your face. You obediently start to suck his cock. You take his dick all the way into your throat and close your eyes, thinking to yourself "I just can''t control myself when they act like I''m supposed to blow them on command." You start to bob back and forth on the cock in your mouth, when suddenly you think you hear faint giggles from the door. You slow for a moment, but then he pushes your head down and you deep throat him again. He says "don''t stop now <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re not done yet."'
                 'Now you''re sure you hear the door opening wider. You definitely hear the voices of some of the girls from marketing giggling.  You want to stop, but his hand on your head keeps your mouth all the way down his cock. You''re forced to stay there as you hear cell phone cameras clicking and one girl saying "I''m getting this on video." You look up and him with his dick deep in your throat, and he says "Ok, time to shine. Show them how a good girl finishes a blowjob." You can''t help it now. He''s told you to finish. The command to please him, along with the rolling cameras have your panties absolutely soaked now.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'hj', 30, 'sub', 'exhibitionism'
@@ -846,7 +846,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boss1':
 						cla
 						*clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/sex/b6.jpg"></center>'
-						'You sit down on the couch and spread your legs wide, smiling and winking at <<$pcs_nickname>>. She leans down to your pussy and begins to service you.  Her tongue feels amazing, almost like a small dick, as she tongue fucks you. The boss gets behind <<$pcs_nickname>>, and slides into her pussy. You can feel her moan against your pussy as she penetrates deeper into you. she is so skilled with it, despite being fucked simultaneously, that less than a minute later you are cumming and your juices are dripping out into her mouth. A few minutes later her boss takes out his cock, and looks at you saying "I want to feel that tight little asshole around my dick, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+						'You sit down on the couch and spread your legs wide, smiling and winking at <<$pcs_nickname>>. She leans down to your pussy and begins to service you.  Her tongue feels amazing, almost like a small dick, as she tongue fucks you. The boss gets behind <<$pcs_nickname>>, and slides into her pussy. You can feel her moan against your pussy as she penetrates deeper into you. She is so skilled with it, despite being fucked simultaneously, that less than a minute later you are cumming and your juices are dripping out into her mouth. A few minutes later her boss takes out his cock, and looks at you saying "I want to feel that tight little asshole around my dick, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 						gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'group'
@@ -1080,7 +1080,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'komer0':
 						'"You really can make me a man?" you asks.'
 						'"I said I can make you feel like a man again, for a few minutes, and we can have some fun." she replies.'
 						'"Yes, I want that" you answer.'
-						'"Good choice.  You''re a good girl.. or boy, but what''s the difference?  You know who you are. Now listen and remember to do whatever I tell you. Don''t give me a reason to punish you." No sooner than the words leave her mouth, you are lying on her desk, completely naked. You can''t move or speak, she moves toward your legs, looks into your eyes and plunges her fingers into her vagina. inside you, her fingers begin to expand and lengthen, it feels like enormous tentacles inside you. You try to scream, no sound comes from your mouth. Soon she finishes, and you feel no different than you did before. You get up from the desk, and she points to your clothes, so you begin to dress. "And now back to work, for now." she says.'
+						'"Good choice.  You''re a good girl.. or boy, but what''s the difference?  You know who you are. Now listen and remember to do whatever I tell you. Don''t give me a reason to punish you." No sooner than the words leave her mouth, you are lying on her desk, completely naked. You can''t move or speak, she moves toward your legs, looks into your eyes and plunges her fingers into her vagina. Inside you, her fingers begin to expand and lengthen, it feels like enormous tentacles inside you. You try to scream, no sound comes from your mouth. Soon she finishes, and you feel no different than you did before. You get up from the desk, and she points to your clothes, so you begin to dress. "And now back to work, for now." she says.'
 
 						act 'Back to work':gt 'office', 'work'
 					end
@@ -1597,7 +1597,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boss6':
 	officeslut += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/sex/b21.jpg"></center>'
-	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, just the girl I wanted to see. Go to the filing room and bring me file 97645." he says as you walk into his office. You quickly go to the archives and find the file, and return to his office. As you take them to his desk, you drop the file and the papers scatter all over the floor.  This huge file will take an hour to re-sort. The boos is clearly not in the best mood today, and he starts yelling at you. Then he walks up to you and grabs you, throwing you back onto his desk. tears start streaming from your eyes, while he continues to yell at you'
+	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, just the girl I wanted to see. Go to the filing room and bring me file 97645." he says as you walk into his office. You quickly go to the archives and find the file, and return to his office. As you take them to his desk, you drop the file and the papers scatter all over the floor.  This huge file will take an hour to re-sort. The boos is clearly not in the best mood today, and he starts yelling at you. Then he walks up to you and grabs you, throwing you back onto his desk. Tears start streaming from your eyes, while he continues to yell at you'
 
 	act 'Continue':
 		cla

locations/pav_aptcourtev.qsrc

@@ -1414,7 +1414,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'smokeblowjob':
 	$location_type = 'public_indoors'
 	pav_sex += 3
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/sex/smokebj1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You get down on your knees, as you do one of them says. "Oh shit I can''t believe she''s really going to do it." Both of them quickly pull their dicks out. you start sucking the cock of the one that told you to get down on your knees and jerking the other one off with your free hand.'
+	'You get down on your knees, as you do one of them says. "Oh shit I can''t believe she''s really going to do it." Both of them quickly pull their dicks out. You start sucking the cock of the one that told you to get down on your knees and jerking the other one off with your free hand.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5,  'group', 'exhibitionism'
 	gs 'arousal', 'hj', -5,  'group', 'exhibitionism'
 	gs 'stat'

locations/pav_shared_gp.qsrc

@@ -265,7 +265,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gpServe':
 		elseif actionR = 5:
 			if gp_anal = 0:
 				if gp_doAnal = 1:
-					'<font color=#<<$gp_font>>>"Hmmm.. what woud I like to do to you?"</font>'
+					'<font color=#<<$gp_font>>>"Hmmm.. what would I like to do to you?"</font>'
 					act 'It''s your choice':gt 'pav_shared_gp', 'gpServe'
 					act 'You told me you like anal, do you?': gp_rel += 3 & gt 'pav_shared_gp', 'gpSexAnal'
 				else
@@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gpServe':
 			end
 		elseif actionR = 6:
 			if gp_doVacuum >= 1:
-				'<font color=#<<$gp_font>>>"Hmmm.. what woud I like to do to you?"</font>'
+				'<font color=#<<$gp_font>>>"Hmmm.. what would I like to do to you?"</font>'
 				act 'It''s your choice':gt 'pav_shared_gp', 'gpServe'
 				act 'You told me you bought some vacuum enlarger, did you?':step = 6 & gp_rel += 2 & gt 'pav_shared_gp', 'gpSexVaginal'
 			else

locations/pod_ezd.qsrc

@@ -1104,7 +1104,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'smoke_danvas':
 		*nl
 		'He idly runs his hand over his groin, and you can see the outline of his hard cock through the fabric of his pants quite clearly.'
 		'You look at him with some doubt: "I don''t know Shulga, people might see."'
-		'He reassures you: "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ll be fine. we''ll keep an eye out, and there''s no one here now right? Just take it in your mouth. I know you''re good at it, you can finish me off quickly."'
+		'He reassures you: "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ll be fine. We''ll keep an eye out, and there''s no one here now right? Just take it in your mouth. I know you''re good at it, you can finish me off quickly."'
 		gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Refuse giving him a blowjob (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':

locations/qwmeet.qsrc

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'"<<$qwvladwork>>" You tell him.'
 					'"Right. I work behind a big desk, a businessman. I buy and sell, for short."'
-					'At this time the waiter appeared. carrying your orders to the table. After the plates were placed; Vladimir continued.'
+					'At this time the waiter appeared carrying your orders to the table. After the plates were placed; Vladimir continued.'
 					'"I''m 40 years old. Married and have a child. I''ve been with my wife for a long time and nothing binds us together any more, I''m ready to divorce her at any time."'
 					'Vladimir poured the wine and raised a toast to the relationship.'
 

locations/reks.qsrc

@@ -394,13 +394,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rex_story':
 						'5 Seconds later you have gathered your thoughts. The first thing you say is: '
 						'– Woow...! I don''t even know what to say... On your face you have a mixture of surprise and a smile.'
 						'"At least answer me this : after this confession do you still want to talk with me or did I blow up our relation ?" Rex asked with a desperate voice'
-						'Well do you take pictures like that of all the girls that blow you ? I..Well... I don''t want to be part of your personal collection, for now... you said. Then an awkward silence followed. So you said : "just messing with you Egor". while giving him a little bump on the shoulder.'
+						'Well do you take pictures like that of all the girls that blow you ? I..Well... I don''t want to be part of your personal collection, for now... you said. Then an awkward silence followed. So you said : "just messing with you Egor", while giving him a little bump on the shoulder.'
 						'Rex slightly relaxed, laughing at your ambiguous joke, he understood that all is not lost. Gradually the conversation turned in a different direction. You sat there while Rex finished his beer. Then he threw the empty bottle out the window and asked: '
 						'Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>, can we go?'
 						'No, no, no... you are not driving drunk. Come walk with me, we don''t have to walk very far...'
 						'Rex turned on the car indicators and you moved towards the house. Rex was walking with you but staggering and he did not have the courage to take you by the hand. The only thing he could think about now was what you thought of him now.'
-						'Suddenly you felt something between you legs. It looks like the conversation got you very excited and you have become very wet between your legs. the entire way home you''ve run the conversation you just had in you head and started pondering... Why the hell did I say that?... "for now"... Why "for now"?... I wonder what he thinks of me now...'
-						'Soon you arrive at the house. you exchanged a few words, said your goodbyes and parted ways.'
+						'Suddenly you felt something between you legs. It looks like the conversation got you very excited and you have become very wet between your legs. The entire way home you''ve run the conversation you just had in you head and started pondering... Why the hell did I say that?... "for now"... Why "for now"?... I wonder what he thinks of me now...'
+						'Soon you arrive at the house. You exchanged a few words, said your goodbyes and parted ways.'
 						act 'Home': gt 'pav_residential'
 					end
 				end
@@ -655,7 +655,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sms':
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/reks/event/phone/smsrex9.jpg"></center>'
-				'You took off your clothes and posed in front of the mirror. you lift your top a little so that the underside of your boobs is a little bit exposed.'
+				'You took off your clothes and posed in front of the mirror. You lift your top a little so that the underside of your boobs is a little bit exposed.'
 				act 'Send': gt 'reks', 'sms_end2'
 			end
 		elseif smsForRex = 10:
@@ -823,7 +823,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Party_rex_sex_cow':
 	rex_sex +=1
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_rex_party_gost_10_<<rand(1,5)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You jumped on top of Rex and took full control of the situation. Judging by his pleading eyes you knew he would not be able to resist.
-	You lower yourself on his dick and start moving slowly until his dick his fully inserted into your pussy. Then you start increasing the pace. you let go of all your inhibitions and begin to moan very loud.
+	You lower yourself on his dick and start moving slowly until his dick his fully inserted into your pussy. Then you start increasing the pace. You let go of all your inhibitions and begin to moan very loud.
 	You Lean on his hands and begin to move you body even faster than before. You can see that this is bringing Rex to ecstacy.
 	His hands grabbed you by the waist and he started to help you move up and down on his powerful dick! You opened your mouth wide, and were taking a lot of deep breaths'
 	if sexvar > 1: 'Slightly lowering the pace, Rex asks you to change position.'

locations/road.qsrc

@@ -145,9 +145,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		'A <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''furi''">lorry</a> is parked next to the road. The driver is currently taking a break, and is having a cigarette. He could probably bring you to Gadukino or St. Petersburg, for a price...'
 		'A small road leads to an almost hidden old <a href="exec:gt ''brothel'', ''lobby''">hotel</a>. Usually tourists use it when passing by or when visiting the old town of Pavlovsk.'
 		if hour >= 7 and hour <= 17:
-			'You can see a bunch of trucks around the <a href="exec:gt ''NikoSlut'', ''Diner Exterior''">Boris diner</a>. which is a diner that is frequently visited by both truckers and bikers.'
+			'You can see a bunch of trucks around the <a href="exec:gt ''NikoSlut'', ''Diner Exterior''">Boris diner</a>. Which is a diner that is frequently visited by both truckers and bikers.'
 		else
-			'You can see a bunch of motorcycles around the <a href="exec:gt ''NikoSlut'', ''Diner Exterior''">Boris diner</a>. which is a diner that is frequently visited by both truckers and bikers.'
+			'You can see a bunch of motorcycles around the <a href="exec:gt ''NikoSlut'', ''Diner Exterior''">Boris diner</a>. Which is a diner that is frequently visited by both truckers and bikers.'
 		end
 		if hour = 22 and NikoEv < 21 and Yurik_Diner_Daystart ! daystart:
 			'You can see a <a href="exec:gt ''NikoSlut'', ''Yurik Out''">drunk man</a> stumbling along the highway with a beer bottle in his hand.'

locations/sexm.qsrc

@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'room':
 	end
 
 	if haraklover[lover_number] = 2:
-		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> grabs you and rudely pushes you on your back. he starts to kiss you passionately and tries to take off your clothes.'
+		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> grabs you and rudely pushes you on your back. He starts to kiss you passionately and tries to take off your clothes.'
 		'Finally <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> won the difficult battle with your bra straps.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'sub'
@@ -844,7 +844,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gangbang':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/group/gangbang.jpg"></center>'
 	'One of the guys lives nearby and he drags you into his apartment. There he started tearing off your clothes.'
 	'Once you are completely naked they put you on your knees. One of them shoves his dick inside your mouth. They give you a cock in each hand and instruct you to start jerking them off. They make you feel like a real whore.'
-	'Suddenly one of the boys pushes you on the couch and grabs you by the waist. he thrusts his cock deep inside your pussy, you do not have time to react to this because you get two cocks shoved into your mouth at once.'
+	'Suddenly one of the boys pushes you on the couch and grabs you by the waist. He thrusts his cock deep inside your pussy, you do not have time to react to this because you get two cocks shoved into your mouth at once.'
 	'You feel a cold sensation on your ass. It looks like they are rubbing some lubrication there. Then you feel something big and solid at your rear entrance.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'gangbang', 'sub'
@@ -864,7 +864,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gangbang':
 		gs 'stat'
 	
 		if pcs_ass >= 10:
-			'Two cocks are hammering you from behind, you can feel like them rubbing through the thin barriers between the anus and the vaginal wall. you are starting to get wet while the two cocks enthusiastically continue to pound.'
+			'Two cocks are hammering you from behind, you can feel like them rubbing through the thin barriers between the anus and the vaginal wall. You are starting to get wet while the two cocks enthusiastically continue to pound.'
 		elseif pcs_ass < 10:
 			pcs_horny += (10 - pcs_ass)
 			'You are crying very hard from the severe pain you feel from the hard cock ramming your ass while another cock is fucking you in your pussy.'
@@ -1039,7 +1039,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 		'"<<$husName>> it''s not what you think. It''s just sex, no feelings, I only love you. He does not mean anything. Come to me, I''ll show you how much I love you. " you answered him. You know you are caught red-handed so you made up some excuse on the spot but you don''t really think he will believe this.'
 
 		if izvratH = 0:
-			'"You filthy slut. what love? You fuck with everyone. Let''s see if you will still like it in the forest you whore." he said and left the room, slamming the door.'
+			'"You filthy slut. What love? You fuck with everyone. Let''s see if you will still like it in the forest you whore." he said and left the room, slamming the door.'
 
 
 			if haraklover[lover_number] = 0:
@@ -1091,7 +1091,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 					gs 'Cum_Manage'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/p3.jpg"></center>'
 					'"So you''re married? You cheated on me even though I loved you. You despicable liar! goodbye!" your guy shouted and ran out of the room.'
-					'<<$husName>> did not pay any attention to him, he put his dick in your mouth and grabbed your head. he litterally started to fuck you in the mouth with each thrust pushing it deeper. You were frantically grasping and trying to breathe, desperately trying not to choke as he continued, suddenly he made an abrupt movement and his cock popped into your throat, you try to pull away, but he sternly tells you to take it. He gave you a couple of seconds to get used to the dick in your throat and began to fuck your throat, you are still not getting enough air and you frantically begin to beat him to get free, but this makes <<$husName>> only tighten his grip on your head. When you''re starting to lose consciousness, he finally finishes. You feel his sperm go down your throat. After a couple of strong aftershocks he lets you go. You collapse on the floor coughing up sperm mixed with your saliva and wheezing air. <<$husName>> looked at you as you writhe on the floor. He spits on the floor next to you, and leaves the room.'
+					'<<$husName>> did not pay any attention to him, he put his dick in your mouth and grabbed your head. He literally started to fuck you in the mouth with each thrust pushing it deeper. You were frantically grasping and trying to breathe, desperately trying not to choke as he continued, suddenly he made an abrupt movement and his cock popped into your throat, you try to pull away, but he sternly tells you to take it. He gave you a couple of seconds to get used to the dick in your throat and began to fuck your throat, you are still not getting enough air and you frantically begin to beat him to get free, but this makes <<$husName>> only tighten his grip on your head. When you''re starting to lose consciousness, he finally finishes. You feel his sperm go down your throat. After a couple of strong aftershocks he lets you go. You collapse on the floor coughing up sperm mixed with your saliva and wheezing air. <<$husName>> looked at you as you writhe on the floor. He spits on the floor next to you, and leaves the room.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -1103,7 +1103,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popala':
 				end
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 1:
 				'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> stood and watched as you get fucked by your husband, "Well, I''ll probably go." he said.'
-				'"Wait! This whore can handle two cocks. you can join us if you want." offered <<$husName>>.'
+				'"Wait! This whore can handle two cocks. You can join us if you want." offered <<$husName>>.'
 				'"Thanks for the offer, I do believe she will be able to handle me." replied <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>'
 
 				act 'Lie on the bed':

locations/sexshop.qsrc

@@ -1261,7 +1261,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shprod':
 	menu_off = 1
 	minut += 5
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/shprod.jpg"></center>'
-	'The cashier is right in front of you, offering to help, and holding a miniskirt. "Girl, this is very you. will you try it on?"'
+	'The cashier is right in front of you, offering to help, and holding a miniskirt. "Girl, this is very you. Will you try it on?"'
 
 	act 'Refuse':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 

locations/shulga_room.qsrc

@@ -1157,7 +1157,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shulga_bazar_night':
 		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 7: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = '  "Do you like anal now <<$pcs_nickname>>? Does it hurt, or does it give you pleasure?", Vasily asks.<br>  "My <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> has a dildo in here closet. I could get it if you want to find out for yourself", you say laughing.<br>  "Yeah, I''ll pass", he says dryly.<br>  "Party pooper", you say sticking out you tongue at him.'
 		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 8: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = '  Vasily asks: "What your favorite position?"<br>  "Comfortable", answer you laughing.<br>  All the boys join in laughing.'
 		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 9: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = '  "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you want to play some cards?", Vasily asks.<br>  "I don''t know, will I get to keep my clothes on?",you ask.<br>  "Sure, we can to play for money", he says.<br>  "Too bad, I guess I''l pass", you say disappointedly. You flash him you tits, and have a good laugh.'
-		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 10: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = '  Vasily says: "Do you remember that barmaid in the city I was telling you about? I finally made it back to the barbecue to see her again. She gave me the best blowjob I''ve had in my life!"<br>  "Umm Vasily, there''s something I...."<br>  "I didn''t mean it babe. She was good is all. nobody is better than you", he says apologetically.<br>  You decide not to push the topic of the barmaid.'
+		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 10: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = '  Vasily says: "Do you remember that barmaid in the city I was telling you about? I finally made it back to the barbecue to see her again. She gave me the best blowjob I''ve had in my life!"<br>  "Umm Vasily, there''s something I...."<br>  "I didn''t mean it babe. She was good is all. Nobody is better than you", he says apologetically.<br>  You decide not to push the topic of the barmaid.'
 		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 11: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = '"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, are you into water sports?", he ask innocently.<br>  "Oh, I don''t know. I''m better at volleyball and running than I am at swimming. If it''s warm out I do like to cool off in the water though"<br>  Vasily announces to the room: "I think that means she''s up for it guys."<br> "What are you guys talking about? Up for what?", you say suspiciously.'
 		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 12 and npc_rel['A11'] < 30: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = '  "I love <<$pcs_haircol>> hair, and it looks so good on you <<$pcs_nickname>>."<br>  "Thanks Vasily, that''s very sweet", you say blushing.<br>  "Does the carpet match the drapes?", he asks with a smirk.<br>  "Typical", is all you answer with an exasperated sigh.'
 		if vasyan_textb_gorslut = 12 and npc_rel['A11'] >= 30 and webcamera = 1: $vasyan_textb_gorslut = '  "<<$pcs_nickname>> would you grab me a beer?", Vasily asks.<br>  "Sure thing", you say.<br>  "Grab one for yourself too", he adds.<br>  "Vasily Shulgin, are you trying to get me drunk?", you answer in a shocked tone. Laughing you head for the kitchen.'

locations/skverdin.qsrc

@@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ $d_pp_double = {
 			cls
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/park/sex/ppbjdouble2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You have become a polished just two bow with her wet lips spitted her mouth purple hat guys take turns. soon <<$boydesc>> groaned "Open your mouth slut"'
+			'You have become a polished just two bow with her wet lips spitted her mouth purple hat guys take turns. Soon <<$boydesc>> groaned "Open your mouth slut"'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'sub', 'group'
 			gs 'stat'

locations/stallion.qsrc

@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape':
 				'Stallion smiles as you plead for him not to cum inside you.'
 				'"I''m sure you''ll manage to bear my child just fine." He says as he continues to thrust into you.' 
 			else
-				'Stallion smiles. "I''m not lifting the curse. You should accept your fate. it will be easier on you in the long run."'
+				'Stallion smiles. "I''m not lifting the curse. You should accept your fate. It will be easier on you in the long run."'
 			end
 			act 'Continue': gt 'stallion', 'finish'
 		end

locations/train.qsrc

@@ -621,7 +621,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'oldman':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'pain', 3, 'asshole', 'ache'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>>  src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/oldanal.jpg" ></center>'
-				'He keeps this up for a while and it is almost starting to feel okay when he pulls out and pauses. Again, you briefly think that he is done and only have a second to realize that, actually, he is rubbing the tip of his cock against you anus. Before you can even protest, his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock has already painfully penetrated your ass. You instinctively want to flinch away but he grabs your hips with surprising strength and forces his cock as far into your ass as he can... before he starts hammering your ass. "My wife loved anal", he informs you between slaps of flesh against flesh, "I hope you don''t mind."'
+				'He keeps this up for a while and it is almost starting to feel okay when he pulls out and pauses. Again, you briefly think that he is done and only have a second to realize that, actually, he is rubbing the tip of his cock against your anus. Before you can even protest, his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock has already painfully penetrated your ass. You instinctively want to flinch away but he grabs your hips with surprising strength and forces his cock as far into your ass as he can... before he starts hammering your ass. "My wife loved anal", he informs you between slaps of flesh against flesh, "I hope you don''t mind."'
 				*nl
 				'You can merely groan in response as he violates your little asshole. His wife must have really liked rough sex, if this was the norm for them. He lifts your leg up and props your foot on the wall to keep your legs spread, which thankfully puts you at an angle where it hurts a little less. Still, you are really starting to regret that you wanted to help him out.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'rough', 'unknown'