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[GRAMMAR] - Final touch

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+ 2 - 2
locations/FedorEv2.qsrc

@@ -457,7 +457,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Virgin Sex':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/virgintalk.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Fedor... This is my first time" you tell Fedor and he responds with a puzzled look "First time?... ohh you mean... I see..." Fedor lightly bites his lip and asks "<<$pcs_firstname>>, Will you let me be your first?...I promise I will take it slow and be as gentle as possible but if you aren''t ready we could try another position" he asks while gently rubbing your legs.'
+	'"Fedor... This is my first time" you tell Fedor and he responds with a puzzled look "First time...? ohh you mean... I see..." Fedor lightly bites his lip and asks "<<$pcs_firstname>>, Will you let me be your first...?  promise I will take it slow and be as gentle as possible but if you aren''t ready we could try another position" he asks while gently rubbing your legs.'
 	
 	act 'Lose Virginity <b><h4><font color=#ff00cc>[Go steady]</font></h4></b>':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -999,7 +999,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Park 2':
 				FedorLuv += 2
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A5'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/park/tracks4.jpg"></center>'
-				'You continue running your finger through his hair as he plays with your hair. After a few seconds on staring into his eyes you lower you head and bring your lips to his. You both share a very passionate kiss that lasts for what feels like an hour. Feeling his warm lips against yours and his hot breath on your chin. After a few more minutes you slowly pull away from him and he casually sits up and says, "Damn <<$pcs_firstname>>. Keep kissing me like that and I''m going to fall for you real hard." you respond, "So my plan is working?... Good" You both share a chuckle then Fedor asks "Are you ready to head back home or would you like to relax here for a bit longer?"'
+				'You continue running your finger through his hair as he plays with your hair. After a few seconds on staring into his eyes you lower you head and bring your lips to his. You both share a very passionate kiss that lasts for what feels like an hour. Feeling his warm lips against yours and his hot breath on your chin. After a few more minutes you slowly pull away from him and he casually sits up and says, "Damn <<$pcs_firstname>>. Keep kissing me like that and I''m going to fall for you real hard." you respond, "So my plan is working...? Good" You both share a chuckle then Fedor asks "Are you ready to head back home or would you like to relax here for a bit longer?"'
 				*nl
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/park/tracks5.jpg"></center>'
 				gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5

+ 1 - 1
locations/NikoDates.qsrc

@@ -1301,7 +1301,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Disco':
 									inhib_exp += 1
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/disco/bj1.mp4"></video></center>'
-									'You finish licking all the cum off of Niko''s penis when Niko leans forward and gives you a kiss on the forehead, "That''s my girl, Always getting braver everyday. Well I''m gonna go clean up, I''ll be right back." Niko then walks toward the restroom. As he leaves you think to yourself, <font color=#FF00FF>Getting braver?... Ohh shit, I totally forgot where I was, what if someone saw me? ohh no, I hope no one saw me.</font> You quickly look around to see in anyone noticed you and you can see a few guy snickering as they both whisper to each other. You slowly rise to your feet, feeling your face growing red. You walk to the other side of the dance floor while keeping an eye out for Niko.'
+									'You finish licking all the cum off of Niko''s penis when Niko leans forward and gives you a kiss on the forehead, "That''s my girl, Always getting braver everyday. Well I''m gonna go clean up, I''ll be right back." Niko then walks toward the restroom. As he leaves you think to yourself, <font color=#FF00FF>Getting braver...? Ohh shit, I totally forgot where I was, what if someone saw me? ohh no, I hope no one saw me.</font> You quickly look around to see in anyone noticed you and you can see a few guy snickering as they both whisper to each other. You slowly rise to your feet, feeling your face growing red. You walk to the other side of the dance floor while keeping an eye out for Niko.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 									gs'stat'
 									

+ 1 - 1
locations/NikoDreams.qsrc

@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/kuh/help/event/gif/ra8.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'You can faintly feel something entering your vagina and can feel your tears leaking down your cheeks. You can faintly hear some soft voices in the distance. "Hey watch her head!... Don''t drop her!... Come on get that door open!" A few seconds later, you hear someone whispering in your ear. "It''s okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. This is your place now. You didn''t think that you can keep that precious body to yourself, did you?"'
+							'You can faintly feel something entering your vagina and can feel your tears leaking down your cheeks. You can faintly hear some soft voices in the distance. "Hey watch her head...! Don''t drop her...! Come on get that door open!" A few seconds later, you hear someone whispering in your ear. "It''s okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. This is your place now. You didn''t think that you can keep that precious body to yourself, did you?"'
 
 							act 'Turn around':
 								*clr & cla

+ 1 - 1
locations/NikoWhore.qsrc

@@ -701,7 +701,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 																			gs'stat'
 																			'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 																			*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-																			'You can feel your consciousness fading in and out. You can hear some words but they too seem to fade in and out... "You''ll be a star <<$pcs_nickname>>. An even bigger whore than Sonia."... "Well you look all tuckered out. Had a good time?"... "I think we broke our new toy."... "It looks like she passed out... Too much fun maybe."...'
+																			'You can feel your consciousness fading in and out. You can hear some words but they too seem to fade in and out... "You''ll be a star <<$pcs_nickname>>. An even bigger whore than Sonia."... "Well you look all tuckered out. Had a good time...?" "I think we broke our new toy."... "It looks like she passed out... Too much fun maybe."...'
 																			'Then you hear footsteps as they leave the room and everything starts to fade until you hear... "How could they do this to her?"..."Aww wow, she looks... Sticky."..."It''s not the time for jokes Vicky! We need to do something! We can''t just leave her like this!"...'
 																		
 																			act '...':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoDreams', 'Family'

+ 1 - 1
locations/dimalina.qsrc

@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkalina1':
 		'You hesitantly walk over and peer inside. You are... not sure what he was doing until you see the chains. What the hell? The sick fuck has improvised a bondage set in his closet.'
 		'"Ahh... Why that face?. And to think I spent all this time making this lovely gift for you!" He sighs. "Don''t worry I''m sure you will learn to appreciate it. So... come on, get in."'
 		'You''re looking apprehensively at the chains and start to consider making a run for the door when Dimka''s mobile sounds. Quickly, he answers the call.' 
-		'"Dimka here... Hm... Oh?... You''re on your way?... Hm... What?... No!... Of course, no!... Yeah, I''ll be waiting."' 
+		'"Dimka here... Hm... Oh...? You''re on your way...? Hm... What...? No...! Of course, no...! Yeah, I''ll be waiting."' 
 		'With an enthusiastic smile, Dimka shoves you into the closet and chains you up, even taking a moment to admire his work. The chains hurt you and the position doesn''t let you relax.'
 		'"Alright, this is what is about to happen: I''m going to close the door, and if I hear a <i>single</i> sound from you during this visit, you will be punished. Understood?"'
 		gs 'willpower', 'humiliation', 'resist', 'medium'

+ 1 - 1
locations/foto_events.qsrc

@@ -1098,7 +1098,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fine_art':
 											gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 											gs 'stat'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/foto.jpg"></center>'
-											'"Hey!... HEY!!" you yell at her.'
+											'"Hey...! HEY!!" you yell at her.'
 											'She stops her maniacal laughing and finally looks back at you.'
 											'"That''s not the point! The point is that I don''t want to lose my virginity right now!" The woman frowns at you, this time with disappointment.'
 											'"And vhy not? Iz it becauze you have not found ze right man? Not to worry, Alexhandar iz great man. I know. He iz my zon. Zatisfies many girls. He vill-"'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gdktoilet_womens.qsrc

@@ -275,7 +275,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'virgin':
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/womens/sex/eww.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You let go of him, wondering what possessed you to grab some stranger''s dick in the first place. You quickly leave the stall, you can hear the guy. "Hey why did you stop?... Hello? Are you still there? What the fuck!"'
+				'You let go of him, wondering what possessed you to grab some stranger''s dick in the first place. You quickly leave the stall, you can hear the guy. "Hey why did you stop...? Hello? Are you still there? What the fuck!"'
 				act 'Quickly get out': gt 'gdktoilet_womens', 'womens'
 			end
 		else

+ 6 - 6
locations/gopsex.qsrc

@@ -1193,7 +1193,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hide':
 			elseif rnd_caught_mom = 5:
 				$rnd_caught_mom = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>> your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> and <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: - "Girl, you shoud have a break and not to fuck for a while."'
 			elseif rnd_caught_mom = 6:
-				$rnd_caught_mom = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>> your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> and <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: - "Girl, how come they bitched you so?... Will you be home soon?" <<$rnd_mom_txt1>>'
+				$rnd_caught_mom = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>> your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> and <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: - "Girl, how come they bitched you so...? Will you be home soon?" <<$rnd_mom_txt1>>'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -1242,9 +1242,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hide':
 		if rnd_caught_othernpc = 4 and pav_slut >= 250:$rnd_caught_othernpc = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>> Natasha Belova, <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> and <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: - <<$rnd_telogg2_text>>'
 		if rnd_caught_othernpc = 5 and pav_slut < 250:$rnd_caught_othernpc = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>> Julia Milov, <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> and <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: - <<$rnd_telogg_text>>'
 		if rnd_caught_othernpc = 5 and pav_slut >= 250:$rnd_caught_othernpc = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>> Julia Milov, <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> and <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: - <<$rnd_telogg2_text>>'
-		if rnd_caught_othernpc = 6:$rnd_caught_othernpc = 'Young boys notice you. Nudging each other, they are clicking on their phone what''s happening. You overhear their talk vaguely: "Look!... Look!... Not here, over there!... There is... Oh shit!"... "Shoot! Shoot! Faster!"... "Holy shit!", I''ve never seen a woman being fucked in real." "What the fuck?"... "That''s a cunt!" "Can it be done also in the ass?" "Idiot, they''re able almost whole forearm insert there. Heifers want it so. I''ve seen pics at Kirian''s." "Don''t brag!"... "Let''s no quarrel!"'
+		if rnd_caught_othernpc = 6:$rnd_caught_othernpc = 'Young boys notice you. Nudging each other, they are clicking on their phone what''s happening. You overhear their talk vaguely: "Look...! Look...! Not here, over there...! There is... Oh shit...!" "Shoot! Shoot! Faster...!" "Holy shit!", I''ve never seen a woman being fucked in real." "What the fuck...?" "That''s a cunt!" "Can it be done also in the ass?" "Idiot, they''re able almost whole forearm insert there. Heifers want it so. I''ve seen pics at Kirian''s." "Don''t brag...!" "Let''s no quarrel!"'
 		if rnd_caught_othernpc = 7 and evgenQW < 4:$rnd_caught_othernpc = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>>, uncle Misha <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: "Oh dear! What kind of people! Like mother, like daughter! Exactly the same! Boobs exposed, legs apart. And the eyes are so cunning... Come to me then, we need to talk."'
-		if rnd_caught_othernpc = 7 and evgenQW >= 4:$rnd_caught_othernpc = 'Your brother''s football buddies notice you, when they are walking past you. They stop and start talking about you intensively: "Oh, my fuck, we treat her like a princess: only in her mouth... thank you... please... see you! It turns out that she is quite a prostitute. Oh shit, if we had known it then, we would have '+func('gopsex','hide','gop_sextext2')+' that ripper in one gate all three of us, as we had wanted always. Well... Svetochka... It isn''t hard for you to help us, is it?... After all, you are Kolya''s sister... moreover older. Cavaliers, fuck... Now we get all. After all, they don''t ask whores, they bang them right with their cocks, do they? Am I right, <<$pcs_nickname>>?" ... "Hurrah, she nodded! Oooh, you''re such our sweetie! Fuck yeah! We''re lucky: We have got our cum dumpster now. See you soon, fuckhole! Prepare your butt hole! Let''s delight Kolya. He has been always jacking off dreaming about her. ... I call dibs on her ass!" "Can she hold three at once in her mouth? We should try it long ago. Fuck, we were too shy to suggest it, frigging gentlemen!"'
+		if rnd_caught_othernpc = 7 and evgenQW >= 4:$rnd_caught_othernpc = 'Your brother''s football buddies notice you, when they are walking past you. They stop and start talking about you intensively: "Oh, my fuck, we treat her like a princess: only in her mouth... thank you... please... see you! It turns out that she is quite a prostitute. Oh shit, if we had known it then, we would have '+func('gopsex','hide','gop_sextext2')+' that ripper in one gate all three of us, as we had wanted always. Well... Svetochka... It isn''t hard for you to help us, is it...? After all, you are Kolya''s sister... moreover older. Cavaliers, fuck... Now we get all. After all, they don''t ask whores, they bang them right with their cocks, do they? Am I right, <<$pcs_nickname>>?" ... "Hurrah, she nodded! Oooh, you''re such our sweetie! Fuck yeah! We''re lucky: We have got our cum dumpster now. See you soon, fuckhole! Prepare your butt hole! Let''s delight Kolya. He has been always jacking off dreaming about her. ... I call dibs on her ass!" "Can she hold three at once in her mouth? We should try it long ago. Fuck, we were too shy to suggest it, frigging gentlemen!"'
 		if rnd_caught_othernpc = 8:$rnd_caught_othernpc = 'You are approached by a charwoman in the stairwell: "Well boys, step back and let your toy have a rest for a while. Don''t throw away bottle, just put them on window sill when you''re done. I''ll take them away. Don''t make a mess with scumbags everywhere! I gather up after you on half a bucket each day! Better, don''t use them at all: it will be much pleasurable for you and your smasher without them or stack them neatly into her purse: she can take her trophies home with her, when she is done. Oi! Oi!!! Fuckbunny! Swallow, don''t spit on the floor! Did you understand? Washing the floor after every whore, I would ruin my health. Don''t drain your pussy onto the floor otherwise I''ll make you lick all the scum!"'
 		if rnd_caught_othernpc = 9:$rnd_caught_othernpc = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>>, Aunt Luda <<$rnd_viewgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg_text>> <<$rnd_talkgg2_text>>: "Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>, how is your sex life? Just think, it was only recently, when a tweeny, bows in her hair, blushing and stuttering, bought pads in my pharmacy for the first time. And now her lap squelches here all around so one can hear even on the street. You grew up very early. You better not stand like doggie here, fool. Do you know, what distinguishes sluts from decent girls? Scraped knees. Come for Green, I''ll give it to you for a half price, goof!"'
 		if rnd_caught_othernpc = 10:$rnd_caught_othernpc = '<<$rnd_rodnya_text>>, a mother with her little daughter notice you. The mother takes daughter by the hand and tells her: "Turn away and don''t watch! This girl just did not obey her mama and that''s why she''s punished. Do you hear her calling her mama now? Obey mama and you''ll never end up like her!" She turns to you: "Couldn''t you wait, until you get home, slut? Do you have to shake buttocks just here? By the way, children walk here."'
@@ -1548,7 +1548,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hide':
 		if txt_sex_hj = 1:$txt_sex_hj = 'You take his still soft cock into your hand and it starts growing noticeably. You begin a hand job feasting your eyes on his strong prick.'
 		if txt_sex_hj = 2:$txt_sex_hj = '<<$boydesc>> shoves his cock into your hand. Your fingers grip on his fat elastic trunk shakily. He tells you to hold it firmer.'
 		'"Don''t release it and move your hand up and down..." He takes hold showing how to do it.'
-		'"Not so sharply... yes so. Don''t pull... Yes,that''s it. Great!... More... More.!"'
+		'"Not so sharply... yes so. Don''t pull... Yes,that''s it. Great...! More... More.!"'
 		if txt_sex_hj = 3:$txt_sex_hj = '<<$boydesc>> asks you to do hand job to him. You take his dick firmly into your hand and start to rub the skin back and forth.'
 		'<<$txt_sex_hj>>'
 		killvar '$text_sex_hj'
@@ -1614,7 +1614,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hide':
 	if $ARGS[1] = 'text_sex_doggy_anal':
 		txt_sex_doggy_anal = RAND(0,8)
 		if txt_sex_doggy_anal = 0:$txt_sex_doggy_anal = '<<$boydesc>> puts his cock to your anus and shoves it in your tight hole up to his sack with one stroke. You succeed in only twitching and screaming, when his big prick pierces your butt. After a couple of minutes, you become used and start moaning.
-		"Oh yess!... mmm... deeper!... mmmm..."
+		"Oh yess...! mmm... deeper...! mmmm..."
 		He grabs your hips and starts banging increasing his pace gradualy. You diligently fuck back wanting to get even more on his shaft. You are insanely excited and serve him with pleasure.'
 		if txt_sex_doggy_anal = 1:$txt_sex_doggy_anal = '<<$boydesc>> is kneeling between your legs and shoving his prick into your ass hole up to his balls.You are on all fours having your bum lifted and you are fucking back in pace and moaning with pleasure. Your lover is propelled even more by your moaning. He is fucking you in silence for a while and then begins moaning excitedly.
 		"You have got a nice big butt, <<$pcs_nickname>>...", he tells you, still keeping his pace."
@@ -1657,7 +1657,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hide':
 		You turn on your back and invitingly spread your legs. He doesn''t need to be asked twice. <<$boydesc>> lies down at you and his member plungs into your wet tunnel. You clasp his body with your legs as if you were afraid that he leaves you. <<$boydesc>> starts moving rhythmically gradually increasing his pace and you are fucking back actively. You moan loudly and scream when he shoves his prick extra deep into your squelching slit.'
 		if txt_sex_miss = 2:$txt_sex_miss = '<<$boydesc>> puts you down on your back, he spreads your legs with his pelvis to sides and he lies down his stomach at you. He penetrates you groaning and watching his member sliding fast into your love hole, softly parting your nether lips. Elastic walls of your cunt softly envelope and captivate his member. He leans his hands on the bed hanging down over you, looking into your face and you keep your eyes on him. You are quite skilled, despite your age. When he is in you, you tightly squeeze your feet beneath him and to further stimulate his member with your hips. He is screwing you experiences a special gripping pleasure, being tightly captured with your hips.'
 		if txt_sex_miss = 3:$txt_sex_miss = 'His member is tossing in your cunt like a crazy bull, you sense his hard trunk every time when <<$boydesc>> literally stamps your tender groin with his pelvis. He tenses up somewhat and starts banging you tirelessly, what make his dick quite hot.'
-		if txt_sex_miss = 4:$txt_sex_miss = 'You are lying on your back, <<$boydesc>> starts running along yours nether lips with his bare glans. You feel very ticklish sensation, when he rubs your clit. Later, when he reaches your hole, he starts dipping there a bit more, ramming several times and then he gets out again. Gradually the deepness increases and finally he is fucking you fully. To say true, the position isn''t very comfortable, but on the other hand he can see the whole body of his moaning mate and it was worth seeing. Suddenly you moans : "More!... More!... Come on!"'
+		if txt_sex_miss = 4:$txt_sex_miss = 'You are lying on your back, <<$boydesc>> starts running along yours nether lips with his bare glans. You feel very ticklish sensation, when he rubs your clit. Later, when he reaches your hole, he starts dipping there a bit more, ramming several times and then he gets out again. Gradually the deepness increases and finally he is fucking you fully. To say true, the position isn''t very comfortable, but on the other hand he can see the whole body of his moaning mate and it was worth seeing. Suddenly you moans : "More...! More...! Come on!"'
 		if txt_sex_miss = 5:$txt_sex_miss = 'Your pussy is well greased and his member slides easily into your love hole. You feel as his mushroom head is stretching inner walls of your fanny. You let out moan with each penetration. It doesn''t last long and you get accustomed. You put your hands on his buttock and start set the pace. "Faster! faster!" Your whisper is melting into moaning and you tilt your head back. <<$boydesc>> doesn''t contain himself and he rams his prick so deep so your pubes touched. You are breathing fast and heavily through your teeth. After a while <<$boydesc>> is fucking you openly. In turn, you seize his back and moan monotonously.'
 		'<<$txt_sex_miss>>'
 		killvar '$text_sex_miss'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_boys_bathroom.qsrc

@@ -764,7 +764,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6':
 					'Afraid of what they might do, you use the element of surprise, break through their circle and run out of the bathroom, hearing them curse behind you. You run down the hall, past several classrooms; you don''t even really know where you''re going, you just want to put some distance between them and you. You think you are almost in the clear when you hear a loud, commanding voice in the hall behind you, "Where do you think you are going in such a hurry, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You got busted. Sighing, you turn around and see a teacher glaring at you.'
 					*nl
 					'"Well, you see, I..." He interrupts you before you can even properly begin an excuse, "I know you have class this period and you are late, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. You weren''t cutting class, now, were you?"'
-					'You know he already knows the answer but maybe you can get out of this? "Yes!... Uh, I mean, no... I- I mean, yes, I have a class but I wasn''t cutting! I was just running late, I, uh, had stuff to do and..." you trail off lamely; you can tell he is not buying it for one second - hell, judging by the look he''s giving you, you could have been saying the truth and he''d still punish you.'
+					'You know he already knows the answer but maybe you can get out of this? "Yes...! Uh, I mean, no... I- I mean, yes, I have a class but I wasn''t cutting! I was just running late, I, uh, had stuff to do and..." you trail off lamely; you can tell he is not buying it for one second - hell, judging by the look he''s giving you, you could have been saying the truth and he''d still punish you.'
 					*nl
 					'"Be that as it may, Miss, that is no excuse. Now get your butt to the principal''s office. I will let her know you are on your way." With that, he points down the hall and waits until you start heading toward the office before returning to his class. With a sigh, but without a choice, you go to the principal''s office.'
 					'The only good thing about this is that you got away from the horny gopniks.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_lunch.qsrc

@@ -812,7 +812,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rolan_meet':
 						minut += 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolansoup0.jpg"></center>'
-						'"...shit!... I hate to puke... " ... BLUURB... and you spend some time to clean your stomach. "What the fuck! That... roll... better clean..." Fortunately you avoid to make a mess... just in time.'
+						'"...shit...! I hate to puke... " ... BLUURB... and you spend some time to clean your stomach. "What the fuck! That... roll... better clean..." Fortunately you avoid to make a mess... just in time.'
 						'<i>Shit! I''m going to puke!</i> You race to the restroom and find an empty stall just in time. If you''d thought it tasted awful the first time...'
 						act 'Leave ': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 					end

+ 1 - 1
locations/olu.qsrc

@@ -751,7 +751,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nusholusvet':
 					act 'Anushka''s butt':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/olu/sex/anushka/nusholusvet6.jpg"></center>'
-						'Then he pulls out of you and moves over behind Anushka. In a moment you hear her saying. "It''s too big, it''s too bi... AAAAAHHH, FFFUUCCCKK! Oh my god, it is so big." You can''t tell if she is in pain or enjoying it, or maybe both. As he fucks her she gets more vocal. "UH, UH, UH... OH!... OH!"'
+						'Then he pulls out of you and moves over behind Anushka. In a moment you hear her saying. "It''s too big, it''s too bi... AAAAAHHH, FFFUUCCCKK! Oh my god, it is so big." You can''t tell if she is in pain or enjoying it, or maybe both. As he fucks her she gets more vocal. "UH, UH, UH... OH...! OH!"'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5, 'group'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Your turn again':

+ 1 - 1
locations/preTG.qsrc

@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'roadPRE':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/tg/dunpre1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You lean against the door, it''s stiff but you manage to push it open.'
 					*nl
-					'"Oh shit!... Take a look over there. Human bones." Igor says nervously.'
+					'"Oh shit...! Take a look over there. Human bones." Igor says nervously.'
 					*nl
 					'You take a look at what Igor is pointing at and see a pile of human bones with a skull on top.'
 					*nl

+ 1 - 1
locations/reks.qsrc

@@ -399,7 +399,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rex_story':
 						'Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>, can we go?'
 						'No, no, no... you are not driving drunk. Come walk with me, we don''t have to walk very far...'
 						'Rex turned on the car indicators and you moved towards the house. Rex was walking with you but staggering and he did not have the courage to take you by the hand. The only thing he could think about now was what you thought of him now.'
-						'Suddenly you felt something between you legs. It looks like the conversation got you very excited and you have become very wet between your legs. The entire way home you''ve run the conversation you just had in you head and started pondering... Why the hell did I say that?... "for now"... Why "for now"?... I wonder what he thinks of me now...'
+						'Suddenly you felt something between you legs. It looks like the conversation got you very excited and you have become very wet between your legs. The entire way home you''ve run the conversation you just had in you head and started pondering... Why the hell did I say that...? "For now"... Why "for now"?... I wonder what he thinks of me now...'
 						'Soon you arrive at the house. You exchanged a few words, said your goodbyes and parted ways.'
 						act 'Home': gt 'pav_residential'
 					end

+ 1 - 1
locations/rolanbath.qsrc

@@ -720,7 +720,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dryOff':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanbusy1.jpg"></center>'
-			'Shit! It''s Rolan!... when did he enter?'
+			'Shit! It''s Rolan...! when did he enter?'
 			act 'Close curtain (0:05)':
 				cla
 				*clr

+ 1 - 1
locations/tatiana_missions.qsrc

@@ -686,7 +686,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mission2sex':
 	'Huh? Oh yeah! How could you forget? You were about to do a photoshoot for an new essential oil with her. It seems you dozed off for a moment, but what were you to do? Tatiana is a professional masseuse, so it''s hard not to get carried away.'
 	'"Okay! Let''s start with the oil, <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
 	'A freezing sensation spreads down your back as Tatiana pours the oil over you. Its coldness seeps into your spine and travels up into your head, making you forget.'
-	'...Huh?... Didn''t you have to do something?'
+	'...Huh...? Didn''t you have to do something?'
 	'"Hey! Look, <<$pcs_nickname>>! The guys are gone! Tell me... Doesn''t this give you ideas?"'
 	'Tatiana turns your face up and sits on your lap, her robe nowhere to be seen as a mischievous smile crosses her face. She bends over, and her cold lips close over your left nipple.'
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'hard'

+ 1 - 1
locations/vann.qsrc

@@ -275,7 +275,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'v4':
 	act 'Cover up':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/sex/bathroom/v10.jpg"></center>'
-		'You instictively cover your naked pussy and unsuccessfully try to cover your breasts with your other hand. The guy just keeps watching you and his smile grows wider. You realize that your hand is still stroking your pussy and his gaze only excites you further. You remove your hand from your crotch and he walks up and sits on the edge of the tub. He lifts a loofah out of the water and hands it to you. "Can I help you?... I mean with washing your back?" he asks. You sit and stare blankly at him, not knowing what to say.'
+		'You instictively cover your naked pussy and unsuccessfully try to cover your breasts with your other hand. The guy just keeps watching you and his smile grows wider. You realize that your hand is still stroking your pussy and his gaze only excites you further. You remove your hand from your crotch and he walks up and sits on the edge of the tub. He lifts a loofah out of the water and hands it to you. "Can I help you...? I mean with washing your back?" he asks. You sit and stare blankly at him, not knowing what to say.'
 
 		gs 'willpower', 'foreplay', 'resist', 'easy'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr: