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[text edit] clean up stat

Spackled Lanturn 3 gadi atpakaļ
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1 mainītis faili ar 3 papildinājumiem un 3 dzēšanām
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      locations/stat.qsrc

+ 3 - 3
locations/stat.qsrc

@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ if MagikDostup = 0:
 	if pcs_magik > magikhigh:
 		magikhigh += 1
 		rikudo += pcs_magik * 100
-		$stat_msg += '<BR><b>You feel like a strength has been revealed within you and you gush with magic, lifting you to a new energy level.</b>'
+		$stat_msg += '<BR><b>You feel like a strength has been revealed within you, and you gush with magic, lifting you to a new energy level.</b>'
 !!		This will be replaced when a more advanced physical system is made
 		if (pcs_magik mod 2 ! 0) and pcs_eyesize < 2: pcs_eyesize += 1
 		if (pcs_magik mod 2 = 0) and pcs_lashes < 2: pcs_lashes += 1
@@ -961,7 +961,7 @@ elseif pcs_willpwr >= willpowermax * 50 / 100:
 elseif pcs_willpwr >= willpowermax * 25 / 100:
 	$pcs_willpwr = '<font color="red">You will have to toe the line.</font>'
 else
-	$pcs_willpwr = '<font color="red">You are completely at our people''s mercy.</font>'
+	$pcs_willpwr = '<font color="red">You are completely at other people''s mercy.</font>'
 end
 
 !!stop auto birth control pill taking if the player believes they are pregnant or are pregnant
@@ -1033,7 +1033,7 @@ end
 
 if hotelroom > 0:
 	if hotelroom1day = daystart: $stat_msg += '<BR>You have 1 night left on your hotel booking.'
-	if hotelroom1day < daystart and hour <= 11: $stat_msg += '<BR>Your hotel booking has expired and you cannot return to your room after 11:00'
+	if hotelroom1day < daystart and hour <= 11: $stat_msg += '<BR>Your hotel booking has expired, and you cannot return to your room after 11:00'
 	if hotelroom1day < daystart and hour > 11: hotelroom = 0
 end