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Text cleaned up and edited to better suit my grand master plan.

Vengeance11 3 years ago
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+ 7 - 5
locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc

@@ -364,7 +364,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'practice':
 					elseif rand(0,7) = 0: 
 						if (cheerleadingQW['backup_game'] ! 1) and (npc_grupTipe['A18'] ! 5):
 							*clr & cla
-							'As you are practicing, Lariska goes over on her ankle and falls to the ground. Albina has the group stop and she and Vicky go to check on her. She meekly insists that she is fine, but Albina disagrees and has her stay on the ground as Vicky checks her over. Christina then walks over and chimes in, a worried looking Lina silently standing behind her. "She said she''s fine, so stop fussing and get back to bossing us around!" Albina narrows her gaze. "Does she look fine to you? No, she''s going to sit this one out and we''ll see how ''fine'' she is later!" In response, Lariska tries to get back on her feet, but whimpers slightly in pain. "Stop faking it and get off your lazy ass!" Christina shouts. Lariska looks at her meekly and tries to stand, but Vicky has her sit back down. "She isn''t in any shape to continue. Vicky, take her over there to sit out and rest. We''ll have to make do without her for the rest of the session. Christina doesn''t seem happy, but doesn''t stop Vicky from carrying Lariska over to the benches to rest her injured foot. Albina beckons you over and reluctantly has you take her place for the remainder of the practice session. When you finish, Lariska seems well enough to walk to the changing room with a slight limp, which annoys Christina and causes her to again accuse her of faking it.'
+							'As you are practicing, Lariska goes over on her ankle and falls to the ground. Albina has the group stop and she and Vicky go to check on her. She meekly insists that she is fine, but Albina disagrees and has her stay on the ground as Vicky checks her over. Christina then walks over and chimes in, a worried looking Lina silently standing behind her. "She said she''s fine, so stop fussing and get back to bossing us around!" Albina narrows her gaze. "Does she look fine to you? No, she''s going to sit this one out and we''ll see how ''fine'' she is later!" In response, Lariska tries to get back on her feet, but whimpers slightly in pain. "Stop faking it and get off your lazy ass!" Christina shouts.' 
+							'Lariska looks at her meekly and tries to stand, but Vicky has her sit back down. "She isn''t in any shape to continue. Vicky, take her over there to sit out and rest." Christina doesn''t seem happy, but doesn''t stop Vicky from carrying Lariska over to the benches to rest her injured foot. Albina beckons you over and reluctantly has you take her place for the remainder of the practice session. When you finish, Lariska seems well enough to walk to the changing room with a slight limp, which annoys Christina and causes her to again accuse her of faking it.'
 							gs 'stat'
 							
 							act 'Go take a shower': gt 'gschool_cheerleading', 'shower'
@@ -388,7 +389,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'practice':
 					elseif rand(0,2) = 0:
 						if npc_grupTipe['A18'] ! 5:
 							*nl
-							'As Lina practices a move that involves holding another girl, Christina decides to amuse herself and pulls Lina''s skirt up, causing her to squeal as her panties are exposed to everyone. She is blushing heavily, forced to endure the humilation since she can''t let go of the girl. Christina eventually lets her skirt go and Albina chews her out for being so reckless and childish while praising Lina for not losing her focus. Christina just laughs and calls her for being a bossy spoilsport while giving a mocking smirk to Lina. Christina just laughs and mocks Albina, comparing her to a yapping little dog.'
+							'As Lina practices a move that involves holding another girl, Christina decides to amuse herself and pulls Lina''s skirt up, causing her to squeal as her panties are exposed to everyone. She is blushing heavily, forced to endure the humilation since she can''t let go of the girl. Christina eventually lets her skirt go and Albina chews her out for being so reckless and childish while praising Lina for not losing her focus. Christina just laughs, calling Albina a bossy spoilsport and mocking her by comparing her to a yapping little dog, all while giving Lina a mocking smirk.'
 						end
 					end
 				else
@@ -690,7 +691,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 		if First_time_3some_with_Lazar = 0:
 			First_time_3some_with_Lazar = 1
 			'You stay in the shower a little longer than usual and it''s quiet when you enter the empty locker room. As you are getting your clothes ready, the door opens and Albina peeks in. "Oh fuck." she mumbles before walking in. "I was hoping it was going to be empty in here. I''m so fucking wet right now and was going to spend a little time here before I went home..."
-			At this point, Lazar peeks his head in the door. He has a wide grin on his face. "I couldn''t help but hear that you are in need of some aid. What kind of gentleman would I be if I didn''t help a lady in distress?" Albina just laughs. "You say the stupidest fucking shit sometimes, you know that?" she replies and he feigns insult at her. "And here I thought we had something after all the times I''ve helped you. Your little neon pink G-string is the pride of my collection you know." Albina smiles and shakes her head at him. "What can I say? A girl has needs and you just happen to be the only person who can satisfy them the way I like. And you''re not ugly or a pervy douchebag. Well, not as much of a pervy douchebag as some of the creeps who hit on me." she says with a grin and Lazar again feigns insult. "Yeah, I would definetly prefer having you inside me instead of my plastic friend here." Lazar playfully bows, then turns his attention to you. "Say, why don''t you join us <<$pcs_nickname>>?" You look at Albina, who just shrugs her shoulders. "Join if you want. We''re just going to have a quicky to get me off."'
+			At this point, Lazar peeks his head in the door, a wide grin on his face. "So we doing this or no- Oh hey <<$pcs_nickname>>..." he trails off as he spots you. Albina just laughs. "Yeah, turns out the place isn''t as empty as we thought." she tells him before she turns to you. "This is exactly what it looks like <<$pcs_nickname>>. What did Marcus call it? ''Friends with benefits''? We''re not in a relationship, we just have sex when we feel like it. This moron is the one guy I actually like checking me out." she says with a smile and gives him a wiggle of her ass.'   
+			'Lazar feigns insult at her comment before turning his attention to you. "Say, why don''t you join us <<$pcs_nickname>>?" You look at Albina, who just shrugs her shoulders. "Join if you want. We''re just going to have a little quicky to get me off."'
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			act 'Refuse':
@@ -726,7 +728,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 					act 'Albina gets anal':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome2.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'When Lazar switches back to Albina, she breaks the kiss and sucks her fingers before slowly pushing them into her asshole and finger blasting her ass. Lazar groans at this. "Oh yeah. Fingering my ass makes my little pussy tighter doesn''t it? Mmmhhhm, fuck yeah!" she says, teasing him through her moans. Lazar quickly pulls out to avoid cumming too soon. "I need to fuck that ass!" he replies and Albina giggles in response. "Oh yeah, you want to stretch my little asshole with your big dick? Well come and get it then." she says as she pulls her fingers out and slaps herself on the ass. You move around and sit next to Albina. Lazar steps in behind you and you suck his dick before spreading Albina''s asscheeks and spitting on her hole. Lazar then guides the tip of his cock between her cheeks and both he and Albina groan as he penetrates her back door.' 
+						'When Lazar switches back to Albina, she breaks the kiss and sucks her fingers before slowly pushing them into her asshole and finger blasting her ass. Lazar groans at this. "Oh yeah. Fingering my ass makes my little pussy tighter doesn''t it? Mmmhhhm, fuck yeah!" she says, teasing him through her moans. Lazar quickly pulls out to avoid cumming too soon. "Time to fuck that ass!" he replies and Albina giggles in response. "Oh yeah, stretch my little asshole with your big dick!" she says as she pulls her fingers out and slaps herself on the ass. You move around and sit next to Albina. Lazar steps in behind you and you suck his dick before spreading Albina''s asscheeks and spitting on her hole. Lazar then guides the tip of his cock between her cheeks and both he and Albina groan as he penetrates her back door.' 
 						'You watch for the next few minutes as he fucks her asshole hard, his balls loudly slapping against her pussy. During one of his thrusts, his cock pops out of her hole and you look at her gape. You suck Lazar''s dick again but before he can put it back in, Albina chimes in. "I want you to taste my ass <<$pcs_nickname>>! Lick my asshole!"'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 1
 						minut += 5
@@ -816,7 +818,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 						act 'Albina gets anal':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome2.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'When Lazar switches back to Albina, she breaks the kiss and sucks her fingers before slowly pushing them into her asshole and finger blasting her ass. Lazar groans at this. "Oh yeah. Fingering my ass makes my little pussy tighter doesn''t it? Mmmhhhm, fuck yeah!" she says, teasing him through her moans. Lazar quickly pulls out to avoid cumming too soon. "I need to fuck that ass!" he replies and Albina giggles in response. "Oh yeah, you want to stretch my little asshole with your big dick? Well come and get it then." she says as she pulls her fingers out and slaps herself on the ass. You move around and sit next to Albina. Lazar steps in behind you and you suck his dick before spreading Albina''s asscheeks and spitting on her hole. Lazar then guides the tip of his cock between her cheeks and both he and Albina groan as he penetrates her back door.' 
+							'When Lazar switches back to Albina, she breaks the kiss and sucks her fingers before slowly pushing them into her asshole and finger blasting her ass. Lazar groans at this. "Oh yeah. Fingering my ass makes my little pussy tighter doesn''t it? Mmmhhhm, fuck yeah!" she says, teasing him through her moans. Lazar quickly pulls out to avoid cumming too soon. "Time to fuck that ass!" he replies and Albina giggles in response. "Oh yeah, stretch my little asshole with your big dick!" she says as she pulls her fingers out and slaps herself on the ass. You move around and sit next to Albina. Lazar steps in behind you and you suck his dick before spreading Albina''s asscheeks and spitting on her hole. Lazar then guides the tip of his cock between her cheeks and both he and Albina groan as he penetrates her back door.' 
 							'You watch for the next few minutes as he fucks her asshole hard, his balls loudly slapping against her pussy. During one of his thrusts, his cock pops out of her hole and you look at her gape. You suck Lazar''s dick again but before he can put it back in, Albina chimes in. "I want you to taste my ass <<$pcs_nickname>>! Lick my asshole!"'
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 1
 							minut += 5

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

@@ -1941,7 +1941,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 		if zverSlutQW = 2:
 			'As you are getting dressed you see a girl from your brother''s grade glaring at Christina, who is trying to get dressed quietly in a corner. Deciding to punish Christina for wearing panties, and maybe cheer the girl up, you sneak up behind Christina, grab her panties, and yank up, hard. Christina screams, then looks over her shoulder angrily to see who would dare, but when she sees you, she turns white, too scared to fight back. You drop to your haunches and push up, hard. Just as you think you might actually left her off the ground, the straps of her panties break, making her stumble into the lockers. Her panties hang off of her, wedged so tightly into her ass and pussy that they don''t fall off. Turning and smiling at the girl, who smiles back, you go back to getting dressed while Christina struggles to dig her panties out, sniffling.'
 		elseif (grupTipe = 3 or grupTipe = 5) and $pantyworntype ! 'none':
-			'Just as you finish dressing, you feel someone grabs the back of your panties. Before you can say or do anything, you feel your panties get yanked up hard,  painfully digging into your ass crack and against your clit. You hear the other girls all laugh as you struggle to free yourself. As you try and get up, you almost lose your balance as the person pulling up your panties keeps pulling them up higher. You are finally able to pull yourself free and turn to see Christina laughing at you. "Fucking loser, likely the closest anything has been to rubbing your clit." She laughs and then heads out with Lariska and Lina in tow. You spend a few minutes pulling your panties out of your ass crack and getting them back in place.'
+			'Just as you finish dressing, you feel someone grabs the back of your panties. Before you can say or do anything, you feel your panties get yanked up hard, painfully digging into your ass crack and against your clit. You hear the other girls all laugh as you struggle to free yourself. As you try and get up, you almost lose your balance as the person pulling up your panties keeps pulling them up higher. You are finally able to pull yourself free and turn to see Christina laughing at you. "Fucking loser, likely the closest anything has been to rubbing your clit." She laughs and then heads out with Lariska and Lina in tow. You spend a few minutes pulling your panties out of your ass crack and getting them back in place.'
 			gs 'pain', 1, 'asscheeks', 'ache'
 		else
 			'As you finish dressing, you turn around in time to see Christina stand up on one of the benches, reach down, and grab a girl from your brother''s grade''s panties from behind. She yanks up on them hard, making the girl yelp and stand up. This doesn''t stop Christina though, who keeps lifting until she manages to lift the girl off her feet. She squirms and cries out, dangling from her panties. Some of the girls laugh, a few nervously, obviously afraid to make Christina mad, as others look away in disgust. The girl starts to beg Christina to let her go, which seems to only encourage Christina, who now starts bouncing the girl by her panties until there is a loud rip and the girl''s panties end up under her arms. The girl looks to be on the verge of tears and runs out once Christina finally lets go. Christina laughs some more then heads out with Lariska and Lina in tow.'

+ 4 - 3
locations/gschool_lessonsev1.qsrc

@@ -61,14 +61,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 				gs 'stat'
 				grupvalue[2] +=1
-				'He starts to back up but you manage to kick him hard in the shin, causing him to hop around on one leg while holding his shin in pain, which just got the others laughing harder. A couple of the other girls give the guys dirty looks and walk over to give you moral support and use their bodies to shield you from the rest of the class so you can peel your panties out of your ass, putting everything back in it''s proper place.'
+				'He starts to back up, but you manage to kick him hard in the shin, causing him to hop around on one leg while holding his shin in pain, which causes the others to laugh harder at him. A few of the other girls give the guys dirty looks and walk over to give you moral support and use their bodies to shield you from the rest of the class so you can peel your panties out of your ass, putting everything back in it''s proper place.'
 				act 'End of lesson':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 			end
 		else
 			act 'Kick him (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
 		gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'hard'
-		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
+		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr and (grupeTipe = 2 or grupTipe = 4):
 			act 'Beat his ass (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'hard'
@@ -79,7 +79,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/beathisass.jpg"></center>'
 				'Your first kick catches him on the shin, causing him to hop around on one leg. Not expecting any more, his attention wanders and he doesn''t see you charging him. You bash into him, knocking him to the floor, and quickly climb on top of him. You start furiously punching him in the face, beating him senseless in front of everyone.'
 				*nl
-				'He is stunned by this sudden and vicious attack and tries to block your incoming blows to no avail. Luckily for him, the coach arrives just in time. The coach grabs you by the back of the neck and with one powerful yank, pulls you off a bloody and beaten Dan, nearly throwing you on your back. He then steps between the two of you, stopping you from going at it again. He turns to you and says "Go to the principal''s office, NOW!" You try and protest, but he doesn''t want to hear it and points sternly at the door.'
+				'He is stunned by this sudden and vicious attack and tries to block your incoming blows, to no avail. Luckily for him, the coach arrives just in time. The coach grabs you by the back of the neck and pulls you off Dan with a powerful yank, causing you to stumble backwards and almost fall on your back. He then steps between the two of you, stopping you from going at it again, and turns to you. "Go to the principal''s office, NOW!" You try and protest, but he doesn''t want to hear it and points sternly at the door.'
+				'You begrudingly walk out as the coach helps Dan to his feet. Everyone is stunned or amused by your actions - some of the gopniks even look a little impressed.'
 				act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 			end
 		else

+ 10 - 10
locations/gschool_lunch.qsrc

@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break':
 	gs 'stat'
 	urand = rand(0,8)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/chat/cooljocks.jpg"></center>'
-	'During break many of the kids split up to hang out with those in their same social groups. The nerds and outcast hangout in the classrooms, while the cool kids and jocks hang out in the hallway near the lockers, and the gopniks hangout in the stairwell, near the classrooms that are not used.'
+	'During break, the students split up to hang out with those in their social groups. The nerds and outcasts hang out in the classrooms, the cool kids and jocks hang out in the hallway near the lockers, and the gopniks hang out in the stairwell near the disused classrooms.'
 
 	$eventtype = 'long_break'
 
@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break':
 	if meynoldQW = 0 and npc_rel['A14'] >= 30 and pav_slut < 25 and pcs_grades >= 70 and pcs_makupskl >= 40 and hotcat >= 6: gt 'gschool_chats1', 'Katjaproblems'
 
 	if $breaktype ! 'long':
-		if dimaRevenge = 4 and dimaRevChoice = 2 and hour < 10: '<br>"Hi Nat did you happen to see Dimka?" "Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, he was here before speaking with Lena and Lera.'
+		if dimaRevenge = 4 and dimaRevChoice = 2 and hour < 10: '<br>"Hi Nat, did you happen to see Dimka?" "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, he was here earlier, speaking with Lena and Lera.'
 
 		if dimaRevenge = 2:
 			gt 'dimaRevenge', 2
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break':
 		if school_period = 6:
 			if lunch_event ! daystart: lunch_event = daystart & gt 'gschool_lunch', 'events'
 
-			if soniaPS = 2: soniaPS = 3 & 'During break, while you''re wandering through the school hallways killing time, you notice Sonia Ivanko and Vitek Kotov talking about something. Sonia looks like she''s about to cry, but eventually she gives a quiet nod as Vitek whispers something in her ear.'
+			if soniaPS = 2: soniaPS = 3 & 'During break, you''re wandering through the school hallways killing time when you notice Sonia and Vitek talking about something. Sonia looks like she''s about to cry, but eventually she gives a quiet nod as Vitek whispers something in her ear.'
 
 			act 'Use water cooler': $breaktype = 'long' & gt 'gschool_break', 'watercooler'
 			act 'Go to the girls restroom': $breaktype = 'long' & gt 'gschool_break', 'girls_restroom'
@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break':
 				gt 'gschool_events', 'break_events'
 			end
 
-			if soniaPS = 2: soniaPS = 3 & 'During break, while you''re wandering through the school hallways killing time, you notice Sonia Ivanko and Vitek Kotov talking about something. Sonia looks like she''s about to cry, but eventually she gives a quiet nod as Vitek whispers something in her ear.'
+			if soniaPS = 2: soniaPS = 3 & 'During break, you''re wandering through the school hallways killing time when you notice Sonia and Vitek talking about something. Sonia looks like she''s about to cry, but eventually she gives a quiet nod as Vitek whispers something in her ear.'
 
 			act 'Use water cooler': $breaktype = 'short' & gt 'gschool_break', 'watercooler'
 			act 'Go to the girls restroom': $breaktype = 'short' & gt 'gschool_break', 'girls_restroom'
@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break':
 
 	act 'Relax in a classroom': gt 'gschool_chats', 'nerds'
 	act 'Hang out in the hallway': gt 'gschool_chats', 'cooljocks'
-	act 'Go hangout with the gopniks': gt 'gschool_chats', 'gopniks'
+	act 'Hang out with the gopniks': gt 'gschool_chats', 'gopniks'
 
 	if school_period = 6:
 		act 'Stay in cafeteria':
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break':
 			gs 'gschool_groups', 'teachers'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			if rolanmeet < 1:
-				'Rolan is sitting with his head on the table, he seems lonely.'
+				'Rolan is sitting with his head on the table, looking a little lonely.'
 				act 'Look for the lonely man': gt 'gschool_lunch', 'rolan_meet'
 			elseif rolanmeet < 2:
 				'Rolan is sleeping at the table as usual.'
@@ -230,10 +230,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'marcus_event':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/marcus/marcusflirt.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you stop at your locker before lunch, Marcus walks over. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you are looking fine today. Damn, you look good in that little plaid skirt!"'
+	'As you stop at your locker before lunch, Marcus walks over. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re looking fine today. Damn, you look good in that little plaid skirt!"'
 	'You can''t help but smile and shake your head a little. You can tell by the way his eyes roam all over your body that despite his compliments, there is only one thing on his mind right now. If the way he''s flirting wasn''t obvious enough, the bulge straining against his pants is a dead give away. "Well you''re not looking too bad yourself Marcus. And by the look of things, you sure are VERY happy to see me." you say with a giggle while deliberately staring at his crotch.'
 	*nl
-	'He blushes slightly and pulls out his shirt so it hangs over his crotch, trying to hide his erection a little. "Oh fuck, sorry about that. I just had two girls in my last class who took turns flashing me. I swear those girls get a huge kick out of teasing me." He looks around a bit and then leans in a little close to you and softly says "Hey, think you might be able to you know... help me out with this?", indicating the evident bulge in his pants.'
+	'He blushes slightly and pulls out his shirt so it hangs over his crotch, trying to hide his erection a little. "Oh fuck, sorry about that. I just had two girls in my last class who took turns flashing me. I swear those girls get a huge kick out of teasing me." He looks around a bit and then leans in a little close to you and softly says "Hey, think you might be able to you know... help me out with this?" while indicating the evident bulge in his pants.'
 	gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 		act 'Make an excuse and go (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'marcus_event':
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big146.jpg"></center>'
-			'You shake your head. "Sorry not today Marcus."'
+			'You shake your head. "Sorry, not today Marcus."'
 			'He nods his head in understanding. "Yeah ok, not a problem. I figured, you know it wouldn''t hurt to ask, but don''t worry about it. But hey you want to sit with me at lunch and talk?"'
 			act 'Yeah that would be nice':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -429,7 +429,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events':
 		'During the break, you are approached by some of the gopniks. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, come to the bathroom with us so we can have a little fun. You look like you could use a protein snack anyways." A couple of them snicker as they put their hands around your arms and try to guide you towards the restrooms.'
 		*nl
 		'You pull back, slapping their hands away playfully. "Give a girl a chance to consider her options." You already know what you plan to do, but you like to tease them when you get the chance. Should you give them all a quick suck or just leave them high and dry?'
-		act 'Nah I don''t think so':
+		act 'I don''t think so':
 			*clr & cla
 			if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/buttflash.mp4"></video></center>'

+ 112 - 112
locations/gschool_office.qsrc

@@ -9,10 +9,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'principal':
 	'The office is, in a word, impressive: It must have cost a full year''s worth of the school''s budget to decorate it. At least now you know why so much of the rest of the school has cracked and faded paint, or is in need of repair that never seems to happen - all the money is spent on this one room.'
 	*nl
 	if detention_set = 2:
-		'You take a seat at Principal <<$npc_lastname[''A134'']>>''s desk and wait for her to address you with an exacerbated tone: "I usually give pupils the choice of detention so that I don''t have to punish them personally... but you have abused my leniency one time too many. I''m going to teach you not to insult my kindness." She is clearly angry and you can almost already feel the pain on your butt that you are about to receive.'
+		'You take a seat at Miss Volkov''s desk and wait for her to address you with an exacerbated tone: "I usually give pupils the choice of detention so that I don''t have to punish them personally, but you have abused my leniency one time too many. I''m going to teach you not to insult my kindness." She is clearly angry and you can almost already feel the pain on your ass that you are about to receive.'
 		act 'Accept the inevitable': gt 'gschool_office', 'spanked'
 	elseif demerit > 50:
-		'You take a seat at Principal <<$npc_lastname[''A134'']>>''s desk and wait for her to address you with an exacerbated tone: "What did you do this time, <<$pcs_lastname>>? No, I don''t want to know. I really don''t care what it is. You obviously have no respect for me or your teachers." She looks over your file some more and shakes her head slightly. "You have been here enough and you know what comes next. So, what will it be this time? Spanking, or perhaps Saturday detention?" She seems more than a bit annoyed that you appear to be immune to her punishment system... or maybe that you are that troubled of a student.'
+		'You take a seat at Miss Volkov''s desk and wait for her to address you with an exacerbated tone: "What did you do this time, <<$pcs_lastname>>? No, I don''t want to know. I really don''t care what it is. You obviously have no respect for me or your teachers." She looks over your file some more and shakes her head slightly. "You have been here enough and you know what comes next. So, what will it be this time? Spanking or Saturday detention?" She seems more than a bit annoyed that you appear to be immune to her punishment system, or maybe that you are that troubled of a student.'
 		if detention_set = 0: 
 			act 'Choose detention': detention_set = 1 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			act 'Choose spanking': gt 'gschool_office', 'spanked'
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'principal':
 !!		if demerit >= 50:act 'Choose suspension': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'suspension'
 !!		act 'Call Parents': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'Call Parents' - I will add this one in later as it will be a bit of work to write and tie in events at home.
 	elseif demerit > 20:
-		'You take a seat at her desk and wait for Principal <<$npc_lastname[''A134'']>> to address you. "This is becoming a routine with you; I feel like I am seeing you every day! What has changed, <<$pcs_lastname>>? You used to be such a good girl, perhaps a bit quiet, but now? This is not the way to get attention." She looks over your file some more and shakes her head slightly.'
+		'You take a seat at her desk and wait for Miss Volkov to address you. "This is becoming a routine with you; I feel like I am seeing you every day! What has changed, <<$pcs_lastname>>? You used to be such a good girl, perhaps a bit quiet, but now? This is not the way to get attention." She looks over your file some more and shakes her head slightly.'
 		'"We can''t have you keep getting in trouble like this - I will have to punish you." She looks directly at you for a moment to make sure you understand that when you cause problems, you will be getting punished. "I believe in giving the students a voice in their future, so I will let you decide: Saturday detention, or a spanking, right now - which will it be?"'
 
 		if detention_set = 0: 
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'principal':
 			act 'Get spanked': gt 'gschool_office', 'spanked'
 		end
 	else
-		'You take a seat at Principal <<$npc_lastname[''A134'']>>''s desk and wait for her to address you. "Do you know why you are here, <<$pcs_lastname>>?", before you have a chance to reply she continues on. "It was a rhetorical question - we both know why you are here. You are here because you got in trouble." She pauses to look over at the folder in front of her. "Your file shows you have mostly stayed out of trouble until now. I hope this is only a minor lapse in judgment and not a new trend from you. We won''t get into what you did, just understand this is a warning. Straighten yourself out or there will be consequences. Now, return to class."'
+		'You take a seat at Miss Volkov''s desk and wait for her to address you. "Do you know why you are here, <<$pcs_lastname>>?" Before you have a chance to reply, she continues on. "It was a rhetorical question - we both know why you are here. You are here because you got in trouble." She pauses to look over at the folder in front of her. "Your file shows you have mostly stayed out of trouble until now. I hope this is only a minor lapse in judgment and not a new trend from you. We won''t get into what you did, just understand this is a warning. Straighten yourself out or there will be consequences. Now, return to class."'
 		act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
 end
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spanked':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Principal''s Office</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big134.jpg"></center>'
 	if detention_set ! 2:'No way are you coming back to school on a Saturday. "Uh, I would rather just get it over with, so... Spanking."'
-	'"Very well, come over here." She says as she gets up, pulls a chair out and sits down on it. You get up and walk over to her.'
+	'"Very well, come over here." she says as she gets up, pulls a chair out and sits down on it. You get up and walk over to her.'
 	demerit -= 10
 	if principal_spank <= 5 and detention_set ! 2:
 		principal_spank += 1
@@ -59,15 +59,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spanked':
 		elseif $pantyworntype = 'none' and analplugin = 1:
 			gt 'gschool_office', 'plugin_nude'
 		else
-			act 'Take Punishment':
+			act 'Take punishment':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'pain', 1, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/schoolspank.jpg"></center>'
-				'Once you walk over to her, Principal <<$npc_lastname[''A134'']>> pulls you down across her knees. With you laying like that, she pulls up your skirt and gives your ass a hard smack with her hand. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank your butt with enough force to teach you a lesson.'
+				'Once you walk over to her, Miss Volkov pulls you down across her knees, pulls up your skirt and gives your ass a hard smack with her hand. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank you with enough force to teach you a lesson.'
 				*nl
 				'You silently take your punishment, even if it is not all that bad and a bit of you actually likes it. Regardless, you don''t want her to know this doesn''t bother you all that much, so you play along, withering around and whimpering as she spanks you for a good solid minute.'
-				'Then she lifts you back to your feet and rubs your arm. "I hope this has taught you a lesson; I don''t want to see you in my office anymore, <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can return to your classes now." With that, she goes back to her desk and you head back to class.'
+				'She then lifts you back to your feet and rubs your arm. "I hope this has taught you a lesson; I don''t want to see you in my office anymore, <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can return to your classes now." With that, she goes back to her desk and you head back to class.'
 				
 				!!butt stuff insertion for jul
 				
@@ -83,13 +83,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spanked':
 				gs 'pain', 2, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/schoolspank.jpg"></center>'
-				'Once you walk over to her, Principal <<$npc_lastname[''A134'']>> pulls you down across her knees. With you laying like that, she pulls up your skirt and gives your ass a hard smack with her hand. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank your butt with enough force to teach you a lesson.'
+				'Once you walk over to her, Miss Volkov pulls you down across her knees, pulls up your skirt and gives your ass a hard smack with her hand. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank you with enough force to teach you a lesson.'
 				*nl
-				'With each hit, you give a moan, soft at first but getting louder each time she strikes. "Stop that!", she says and gives you the hardest smack on your ass yet. You moan even louder and wiggle your butt a bit.'
+				'With each hit, you give a moan, soft at first but getting louder each time she strikes. "Stop that!" she says and gives you the hardest smack on your ass yet. You moan even louder and wiggle your ass a bit.'
 				*nl
-				'"Oh yes, Mrs. <<$npc_lastname[''A134'']>>, yes, please, harder, harder!", you beg as if you were on the verge of an orgasm. "Yes, spank me, spank me harder and I promise to be your special, little, bad girl," you say with a giggle.'
+				'"Oh yes, Miss Volkov, yes please! Harder, harder!" you beg as if you were on the verge of an orgasm. "Yes, spank me! Spank me harder and I promise to be your special, little, bad girl..." you say with a giggle.'
 				*nl
-				'To her credit, she doesn''t relent and even manages to spank you harder. After another a minute or two of this, however, she roughly lifts you off her knees and back on your feet. She points at the door, her voice quivering with anger: "Back to class now, before I give you detention as well." Not wanting detention, you don''t say anymore but, instead, head for the door, putting a bit of extra sway into your hips as you go.'
+				'To her credit, she doesn''t relent and even manages to spank you harder. After another a minute or two of this, however, she roughly lifts you off her knees and back on your feet. She points at the door, her voice quivering with anger: "Back to class now, before I give you detention as well!" Not wanting detention, you don''t say anymore and head for the door, putting a bit of extra sway into your hips as you go.'
 							
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'maso', 'rough'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -107,16 +107,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spanked':
 		elseif $pantyworntype = 'none' and analplugin = 1:
 			gt 'gschool_office', 'plugin_nude'
 		else
-			act 'Take Punishment':
+			act 'Take punishment':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'pain', 2, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/schoolbarespank.jpg"></center>'
-				'Once you walk over to her, Principal <<$npc_lastname[''A134'']>> pulls you down across her knees. With you laying like that, she pulls up your skirt and your panties down to your knees, exposing your bare ass before she gives it a hard smack with her hand. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank your butt with enough force to teach you a lesson.'
+				'Once you walk over to her, Miss Volkov pulls you down across her knees, pulls up your skirt and your panties down to your knees, exposing your bare ass before she gives it a hard smack with her hand. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank you with enough force to teach you a lesson.'
 				*nl
-				'You silently take your punishment, even if it is not all that bad and a bit of you actually likes it. Regardless, you don''t want her to know this doesn''t bother you all that much, so you play along, withering around and whimpering as she spanks you for a good solid minute, giving your butt a nice crimson hue.'
+				'You silently take your punishment, even if it is not all that bad and a bit of you actually likes it. Regardless, you don''t want her to know this doesn''t bother you all that much, so you play along, withering around and whimpering as she spanks you for a good solid minute, giving your ass a nice crimson hue.'
 				*nl
-				'Then she lifts you back to your feet and rubs your arm. "I hope this has taught you a lesson; I don''t want to see you in my office anymore, <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can return to your classes now." With that, she goes back to her desk and you pull your panties up before heading back to class.'
+				'She then lifts you back to your feet and rubs your arm. "I hope this has taught you a lesson; I don''t want to see you in my office anymore, <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can return to your classes now." With that, she goes back to her desk and you pull your panties up before heading back to class.'
 				
 				!!butt stuff insertion for jul
 				
@@ -132,13 +132,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spanked':
 				gs 'pain', 3, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/schoolbarespank.jpg"></center>'
-				'Once you walk over to her, Principal <<$npc_lastname[''A134'']>> pulls you down across her knees. With you laying like that, she pulls up your skirt and your panties down to your knees, exposing your bare ass before she gives it a hard smack with her hand. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank your butt with enough force to teach you a lesson.'
+				'Once you walk over to her, Miss Volkov pulls you down across her knees and pulls your skirt up and your panties down to your knees, exposing your bare ass before she gives it a hard smack with her hand. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank you with enough force to teach you a lesson.'
 				*nl
-				'With each hit, you give a moan, soft at first but getting louder each time she strikes. "Stop that!", she says and gives you the hardest smack on your ass yet. You moan even louder and wiggle your butt a bit.'
+				'With each hit, you give a moan, soft at first but getting louder each time she strikes. "Stop that!" she says and gives you the hardest smack on your ass yet. You moan even louder and wiggle your ass a little.'
 				*nl
-				'"Oh yes, Mrs. <<$npc_lastname[''A134'']>>, yes, please, harder, harder!", you beg as if you were on the verge of an orgasm. "Yes, spank me, spank me harder and I promise to be your special, little, bad girl," you say with a giggle.'
+				'"Oh yes, Miss Volkov, yes please! Harder, harder!" you beg as if you were on the verge of an orgasm. "Yes, spank me! Spank me harder and I promise to be your special, little, bad girl!" you say with a giggle.'
 				*nl
-				'To her credit, she doesn''t relent and even manages to spank you harder. After another a minute or two of this, about the time your butt has taken on a nice shade of red, she roughly lifts you off her knees and back on your feet. She points at the door, her voice quivering with anger: "Back to class now, before I give you detention as well." Not wanting detention, you slowly pull your panties back up, giving her an extra-long look at your cherry-red butt cheeks before you head for the door, putting a bit of extra sway into your hips as you go.'
+				'To her credit, she doesn''t relent and even manages to spank you harder. After another a minute or two of this, she roughly lifts you off her knees and back on your feet. She points at the door, her voice quivering with anger: "Back to class now, before I give you detention as well!" Not wanting detention, you slowly pull your panties back up, giving her an extra-long look at your cherry-red cheeks before you head for the door, putting a bit of extra sway into your hips as you go.'
 				
 				!!butt stuff insertion for jul
 				
@@ -158,16 +158,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spanked':
 		elseif $pantyworntype = 'none' and analplugin = 1:
 			gt 'gschool_office', 'plugin_nude'
 		else
-			act 'Take Punishment':
+			act 'Take punishment':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'pain', 4, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/schoolpaddle2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Once you walk over to her, Principal <<$npc_lastname[''A134'']>> pulls you down across her knees. With you laying like that, she pulls up your skirt and your panties down to your knees, exposing your bare ass. This time she pulls out a leather paddle and gives you a hard smack across your bare butt. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank your butt with enough force to teach you a lesson... and it''s kinda working, too.'
+				'Once you walk over to her, Miss Volkov pulls you down across her knees and pulls your skirt up and your panties down to your knees, exposing your bare ass. This time she pulls out a leather paddle and gives your ass a hard smack. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank you with enough force to teach you a lesson... and it''s kind of working too.'
 				*nl
-				'You silently take your punishment. It almost brings you to tears but a part of you gets turned on by it as well... a circumstance you don''t want her to know about. You don''t have to play along much to hide it either: It <b>really</b> stings, even if you are enjoying it too, so you wither around and whimper as she spanks you for a good solid minute or three, until your butt is bright red and feels like it''s radiating heat.'
+				'You silently take your punishment. It almost brings you to tears, but a part of you gets turned on by it as well... a circumstance you don''t want her to know about. You don''t have to play along much to hide it either: It <b>really</b> stings, even if you are enjoying it too, so you wither around and whimper as she spanks you for a good solid minute or three, until your ass is bright red and feels like it''s radiating heat.'
 				*nl
-				'Then she lifts you back to your feet and rubs your arm. "I hope this has taught you a lesson; I don''t want to see you in my office anymore, <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can return to your classes now." With that, she goes back to her desk and you pull your panties up before heading back to class.'
+				'She then lifts you back to your feet and rubs your arm. "I hope this has taught you a lesson; I don''t want to see you in my office anymore, <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can return to your classes now." With that, she goes back to her desk and you pull your panties up before heading back to class.'
 				
 				!!butt stuff insertion for jul
 				
@@ -183,13 +183,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spanked':
 				gs 'pain', 5, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/schoolpaddle2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You walk over to her, swaying your hips. You pull your panties down to your knees and lay across her legs, biting your lower lips and looking back up at her expectantly like you might at a lover. Principal <<$npc_lastname[''A134'']>> tries to ignore your look and picks up a leather paddle with which she then smacks you hard across your bare ass. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows really sting - but a soft moan escapes you while she is obviously trying to spank your butt with enough force to teach you a lesson.'
+				'You walk over to her, swaying your hips. You pull your panties down to your knees and lay across her legs, biting your lower lips and looking back up at her expectantly. Miss Volkov tries to ignore your look and picks up a leather paddle which she smacks hard across your bare ass. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows really sting - but a soft moan escapes you. She is obviously trying to spank you with enough force to teach you a lesson.'
 				*nl
-				'With each hit, you''re getting louder. She smacks your ass even harder, really putting her shoulder into it now, but all it does is cause you to respond with a louder groan and a wiggle of your butt. She looks a little troubled, like she is unsure if this is working at all, but the troubled look only lasts a second and her face hardens into an expression of stern, if not stubborn, resolve.'
+				'With each hit, you''re getting louder. She smacks your ass even harder, really putting her shoulder into it now, but all it does is cause you to respond with a louder groan and a wiggle of your ass. She looks a little troubled, like she is unsure if this is working at all, but the troubled look only lasts a second and her face hardens into an expression of stern, if not stubborn, resolve.'
 				*nl
-				'"Oh yes, Mrs. <<$npc_lastname[''A134'']>>, yes, please, harder, harder!", you beg as if you were on the verge of an orgasm. "Yes, spank me, spank me harder and I promise to be your special, little, bad girl. Oh god, you are making me so wet," you say in a husky tone.'
+				'"Oh yes, Miss Volkov, yes please! Harder, harder!" you beg as if you were on the verge of an orgasm. "Yes, spank me! Spank me harder and I promise to be your special, little, bad girl. Oh god, you are making me so wet!" you say in a husky tone.'
 				*nl
-				'To her credit, she doesn''t relent and even manages to spank you harder. After another a minute or two of this, about the time your butt has taken on a nice shade of red, she roughly lifts you off her knees and back on your feet. She points at the door, her voice quivering with anger... but also uncertainty: "Back to class now, before this gets worse for you." You head for the door, putting a bit of extra sway into your hips and very slowly pulling your panties back up as you go, giving her an extra-long look at your cherry-red butt cheeks.'
+				'To her credit, she doesn''t relent and even manages to spank you harder. After another a minute or two of this, she roughly lifts you off her knees and back on your feet. She points at the door, her voice quivering with anger... but also uncertainty: "Back to class now, before this gets worse for you!" You head for the door, putting a bit of extra sway into your hips and very slowly pulling your panties back up as you go, giving her an extra-long look at your cherry-red cheeks.'
 								
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'maso', 'rough'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -209,16 +209,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spanked':
 		elseif $pantyworntype = 'none' and analplugin = 1:
 			gt 'gschool_office', 'plugin_nude'
 		else
-			act 'Take Punishment':
+			act 'Take punishment':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'pain', 5, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/schoolpaddle1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Once you walk over to her, Principal <<$npc_lastname[''A134'']>> pulls you down across her knees. With you laying like that, she pulls up your skirt and your panties down to your knees, exposing your bare ass. This time she pulls out a large wooden paddle and gives you a hard smack across your bare butt. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank your butt with enough force to teach you a lesson... and it''s kinda working, too.'
+				'Once you walk over to her, Miss Volkov pulls you down across her knees and pulls your skirt up and your panties down to your knees, exposing your bare ass. This time she pulls out a large wooden paddle and gives you a hard smack. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank you with enough force to teach you a lesson... and it''s kind of working too.'
 				*nl
-				'You silently take your punishment. It almost brings you to tears but a part of you gets turned on by it as well... a circumstance you don''t want her to know about. You don''t have to play along much to hide it either: It <b>really</b> stings, even if you are enjoying it too, so you wither around and whimper as she spanks you for a good solid minute or three, until your butt is bright red and feels like it''s radiating heat.'
+				'You silently take your punishment. It almost brings you to tears, but a part of you gets turned on by it as well... a circumstance you don''t want her to know about. You don''t have to play along much to hide it either: It <b>really</b> stings, even if you are enjoying it too, so you wither around and whimper as she spanks you for a good solid minute or three, until your ass is bright red and feels like it''s radiating heat.'
 				*nl
-				'Then she lifts you back to your feet and rubs your arm. "I hope this has taught you a lesson; I don''t want to see you in my office anymore, <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can return to your classes now." With that, she goes back to her desk and you pull your panties up before heading back to class.'
+				'She then lifts you back to your feet and rubs your arm. "I hope this has taught you a lesson; I don''t want to see you in my office anymore, <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can return to your classes now." With that, she goes back to her desk and you pull your panties up before heading back to class.'
 							
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'maso', 'rough'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -232,13 +232,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spanked':
 				gs 'pain', 6, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/schoolpaddle1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You walk over to her, swaying your hips. You pull your panties down to your knees and lay across her legs, biting your lower lips and looking back up at her expectantly like you might at a lover. Principal <<$npc_lastname[''A134'']>> tries to ignore your look and picks up a large wooden paddle with which she then smacks you hard across your bare ass. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows really sting - but a soft moan escapes you while she is obviously trying to spank your butt with enough force to teach you a lesson.'
+				'You walk over to her, swaying your hips. You pull your panties down to your knees and lay across her legs, biting your lower lips and looking back up at her expectantly. Miss Volkov tries to ignore your look and picks up a large wooden paddle which she smacks hard across your bare ass. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows really sting - but a soft moan escapes you. She is obviously trying to spank you with enough force to teach you a lesson.'
 				*nl
-				'With each hit, you''re getting louder. She smacks your ass even harder, really putting her shoulder into it now, but all it does is cause you to respond with a louder groan and a wiggle of your butt. She looks a little troubled, like she is unsure if this is working at all, but the troubled look only lasts a second and her face hardens into an expression of stern, if not stubborn, resolve.'
+				'With each hit, you''re getting louder. She smacks your ass even harder, really putting her shoulder into it now, but all it does is cause you to respond with a louder groan and a wiggle of your ass. She looks a little troubled, like she is unsure if this is working at all, but the troubled look only lasts a second and her face hardens into an expression of stern, if not stubborn, resolve.'
 				*nl
-				'"Oh yes, Mrs. <<$npc_lastname[''A134'']>>, yes, please, harder, harder!", you beg as if you were on the verge of an orgasm. "Yes, spank me, spank me harder and I promise to be your special, little, bad girl. Oh god, you are making me so wet," you say in a husky tone.'
+				'"Oh yes, Miss Volkov>, yes please! Harder, harder!" you beg as if you were on the verge of an orgasm. "Yes, spank me! Spank me harder and I promise to be your special, little, bad girl. Oh god, you are making me so wet!" you say in a husky tone.'
 				*nl
-				'To her credit, she doesn''t relent and even manages to spank you harder. After another a minute or two of this, about the time your butt has taken on a nice shade of red, she roughly lifts you off her knees and back on your feet. Her hands rest on your hips and as she stands up to face you, one hand slips down to your bare ass and stays there for just a moment... Then she removes her hands and points at the door, her expression unreadable. "You are playing a very dangerous game, young lady. Get back to class." You head for the door, putting a bit of extra sway into your hips and very slowly pulling your panties back up as you go, giving her an extra-long look at your cherry-red butt cheeks. You don''t dare to look back but you are almost certain that Principal <<$npc_lastname[''A134'']>> had her eyes on your ass right until the door closed behind you.'
+				'To her credit, she doesn''t relent and even manages to spank you harder. After another a minute or two of this, she roughly lifts you off her knees and back on your feet. Her hands rest on your hips and as she stands up to face you, one hand slips down to your bare ass and stays there for just a moment... She then removes her hand and points at the door, her expression unreadable. "You are playing a very dangerous game, young lady. Get back to class." You head for the door, putting a bit of extra sway into your hips and very slowly pulling your panties back up as you go, giving her an extra-long look at your cherry-red cheeks. You don''t dare to look back, but you are almost certain that Miss Volkov had her eyes on your ass right until the door closed behind you.'
 				
 				act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
@@ -246,7 +246,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spanked':
 	else
 		*nl
 		principal_spank += 1
-		'"It is obvious spanking is not an option any longer. In fact, I doubt it was an adequate punishment for you to begin with: You just moan and act like a whore when I try and punish you." She looks at you for a long moment to see if you will dispute it, but, really, what can you say? She''s right - you do - and it is just as funny now as it was the first time you did it, despite her best efforts.' 
+		'"It is obvious that spanking is not an option any longer. In fact, I doubt it was an adequate punishment for you to begin with: You just moan and act like a whore when I try and punish you." She looks at you for a long minute to see if you will dispute it. She''s right - you do - and it is just as funny now as it was the first time you did it, despite her best efforts.' 
 		'"You leave me no choice. If you are going to act like a whore, I will treat you like a whore. Come over here."'
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none' and analplugin = 0:
 			gt 'gschool_office', 'no_plugin_nude'
@@ -262,21 +262,21 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'no_plugin_nude':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/principal/bare.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once you walk over to her, Principal <<$npc_lastname[''A134'']>> bends you over. With you standing like that, she pulls up your skirt and when she see''s your bare ass she pauses. "Where are your panties?"'
+	'Once you walk over to her, Miss Volkov bends you over. She pulls up your skirt, but pauses. "Where are your panties?"'
 	act 'Feign innocence':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'pain', 7, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/schoolpaddle1.jpg"></center>'
-		'"What? Oh, I must have forgotten them," you tell her in mock-surprise.'
-		'She sighs. "You seriously expect me to believe you forgot to put on your underwear?" She pauses for the briefest of moments and, before you can reply, she adds. "I don''t care what reasons you have - it is simply unacceptable not to wear underwear to school. I will note this down as additional demerits; don''t let me catch you not wearing them again, <<$pcs_lastname>>. Do you understand me?" Without waiting for a response, she pulls out a large wooden paddle and gives you a hard smack across your bare butt. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank your butt with enough force to teach you a lesson... and it''s kinda working, too.'
+		'"What? Oh, I must have forgotten them." you tell her in mock-surprise.'
+		'She sighs. "You seriously expect me to believe you forgot to put on your underwear?" She pauses very briefly but before you can reply, she adds. "I don''t care what reasons you have - it is simply unacceptable not to wear underwear to school. I will note this down as an additional demerit; don''t let me catch you not wearing them again, <<$pcs_lastname>>. Do you understand me?" Without waiting for a response, she pulls out a large wooden paddle and gives you a hard smack across your bare ass. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank you with enough force to teach you a lesson... and it''s kind of working too.'
 		*nl
-		'You silently take your punishment. It almost brings you to tears... but a part of you gets turned on by it as well - a circumstance you don''t want her to know about. You don''t have to play along much to hide it either: It <b>really</b> hurts, even if you are enjoying it too, so you wither around and whimper as she spanks you for a good solid minute or three, until your butt is bright red and feels like it''s radiating heat.'
+		'You silently take your punishment. It almost brings you to tears, but a part of you gets turned on by it as well - a circumstance you don''t want her to know about. You don''t have to play along much to hide it either: It <b>really</b> hurts, even if you are enjoying it too, so you wither around and whimper as she spanks you for a good solid minute or three, until your ass is bright red and feels like it''s radiating heat.'
 		*nl
-		'Then she lifts you back to your feet. "I hope this has taught you a lesson; I don''t want to see you in my office anymore, <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can return to your classes now." With that, she goes back to her desk and you pull your skirt down, making sure your naked privates are properly covered, before heading back to class.'
+		'She then lifts you back to your feet. "I hope this has taught you a lesson; I don''t want to see you in my office anymore, <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can return to your classes now." With that, she goes back to her desk and you pull your skirt down before heading back to class.'
 		if detention = 0:
 			detention_set = 1
-			'Just before you walk out the door she adds. "I am also giving you detention this Saturday, do not miss it."'
+			'Just before you walk out the door, she adds. "I am also giving you detention this Saturday. Do <i>not</i> miss it."'
 		end
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'maso', 'rough'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'no_plugin_nude':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/angry.jpg"></center>'
 		'"I don''t like wearing them; the freedom I feel when I don''t have them on is just so..."'
 		*nl
-		'You stop when you realize how quickly your headmaster''s face darkens. A blind man could tell she is angry with you, even without the shrill tone of her voice: "I don''t care if you don''t like wearing them, you will not walk around my school like some whore. Do you understand me?"'
+		'You stop when you realize how quickly her face darkens. A blind man could tell she is angry with you, even without the shrill tone of her voice: "I don''t care if you don''t like wearing them, you will not walk around my school like some whore. Do you understand me?"'
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -298,9 +298,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'no_plugin_nude':
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/angry.jpg"></center>'
-				'"No, I don''t have to wear them if I don''t want to," you say in a haughty voice; it''s not like she can force you, right?'
+				'"No, I don''t have to wear them if I don''t want to!" you say in a haughty voice.'
 				*nl
-				'She gives you a long, hard look and her eyes narrow dangerously. "Fine, if that is what you wanna be... but this is a school, <b>your</b> school, and as your teacher, I will show you how to be a proper whore."'
+				'She gives you a long, hard look and her eyes narrow dangerously. "Fine, if that is what you want to be, but this is a school, <b>your</b> school, and as your teacher, I will show you how to be a proper whore."'
 
 				act 'See how she treats a whore': gt 'gschool_office', 'whore'
 			end
@@ -313,11 +313,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'no_plugin_nude':
 			gs 'pain', 7, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/schoolpaddle1.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Yes, I understand, I won''t let it happen again," you respond meekly. She nods, pulls out a large wooden paddle and gives you a hard smack across your bare butt. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank your butt with enough force to teach you a lesson... and it''s kinda working, too.'
+			'"Yes, I understand, I won''t let it happen again..." you respond meekly. She nods, pulls out a large wooden paddle and gives you a hard smack across your bare ass. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank you with enough force to teach you a lesson... and it''s kind of working too.'
 			*nl
-			'You silently take your punishment. It almost brings you to tears... but a part of you gets turned on by it as well - a circumstance you don''t want her to know about. You don''t have to play along much to hide it either: It <b>really</b> hurts, even if you are enjoying it too, so you wither around and whimper as she spanks you for a good solid minute or three, until your butt is bright red and feels like it''s radiating heat.'
+			'You silently take your punishment. It almost brings you to tears, but a part of you gets turned on by it as well - a circumstance you don''t want her to know about. You don''t have to play along much to hide it either: It <b>really</b> hurts, even if you are enjoying it too, so you wither around and whimper as she spanks you for a good solid minute or three, until your ass is bright red and feels like it''s radiating heat.'
 			*nl
-			'Then she lifts you back to your feet. "I hope this has taught you a lesson; I don''t want to see you in my office anymore, <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can return to your classes now." With that, she goes back to her desk and you pull your skirt down, making sure your naked privates are properly covered, before heading back to class.'
+			'She then lifts you back to your feet. "I hope this has taught you a lesson; I don''t want to see you in my office anymore, <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can return to your classes now." With that, she goes back to her desk and you pull your skirt down before heading back to class.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'maso', 'rough'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -328,13 +328,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'no_plugin_nude':
 	act 'Flirt':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/principal/flirt.jpg"></center>'
-		'You wiggle your butt around a bit. "I didn''t wear any for you. Like what you see?"'
+		'You wiggle your ass around a little. "I didn''t wear any, just for you. Like what you see?"'
 		*nl
-		'"Stop acting like some little whore right this moment!", she says in a stern voice, obviously not pleased by you or your antics.'
+		'"Stop acting like some little whore!" she says in a stern voice, obviously not pleased by you or your antics.'
 		*nl
-		'You smile at her. "Come on and give my ass a slap, you know you want to."'
+		'You smile at her. "Come on and give my ass a slap, you know you want to..."'
 		*nl
-		'She gives you a long, hard look and her eyes narrow dangerously. "Fine, if that is what you wanna be... but this is a school, <b>your</b> school, and as your teacher, I will show you how to be a proper whore."'
+		'She gives you a long, hard look and her eyes narrow dangerously. "Fine, if that is what you want to be, but this is a school, <b>your</b> school, and as your teacher, I will show you how to be a proper whore."'
 
 		act 'See how she treats a whore': gt 'gschool_office', 'whore'
 	end
@@ -342,21 +342,21 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'plugin_panties':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/plug.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once you walk over to her, Principal <<$npc_lastname[''A134'']>> bends you over. With you standing like that, she pulls up your skirt, pulls down your panties and stops when she see''s the buttplug. "Why do you have that stuck in your butt?"'
+	'Once you walk over to her, Miss Volkov bends you over. She pulls up your skirt and pulls down your panties, but stops when she sees the buttplug. "Why do you have <i>this</i>, young lady?"'
 	act 'Say you''re sorry':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'pain', 7, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/schoolpaddle1.jpg"></center>'
-		'"What? Oh, sorry. I like the way it feels and I forgot I was wearing it. I meant to take it out before I came to school this morning," you tell her.'
-		'She sighs. "You seriously expect me to believe you forgot you had a plug stuck in your butt?" She pauses for the briefest of moments and, before you can reply, she adds. "I don''t care what reasons you have - it is simply unacceptable to wear a buttplug to school. I will note this down as additional demerits; don''t let me catch you wearing this again, <<$pcs_lastname>>. Do you understand me?" Without waiting for a response, she pulls out a large wooden paddle and gives you a hard smack across your bare butt. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank your butt with enough force to teach you a lesson... and it''s kinda working, too.'
+		'"What? Oh, sorry. I like the way it feels and I forgot I was wearing it. I meant to take it out before I came to school this morning." you tell her.'
+		'She sighs. "You seriously expect me to believe you forgot you had a plug jammed in your ass?" She pauses very briefly, but before you can reply, she adds. "I don''t care what reasons you have - it is simply unacceptable to wear a buttplug to school. I will note this down as an additional demerit; don''t let me catch you wearing this again, <<$pcs_lastname>>. Do you understand me?" Without waiting for a response, she pulls out a large wooden paddle and gives you a hard smack across your bare ass. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank you with enough force to teach you a lesson... and it''s kind of working too.'
 		*nl
-		'You silently take your punishment. It almost brings you to tears... but a part of you gets turned on by it as well - a circumstance you don''t want her to know about. You don''t have to play along much to hide it either: It <b>really</b> hurts, even if you are enjoying it too, so you wither around and whimper as she spanks you for a good solid minute or three, until your butt is bright red and feels like it''s radiating heat.'
+		'You silently take your punishment. It almost brings you to tears, but a part of you gets turned on by it as well - a circumstance you don''t want her to know about. You don''t have to play along much to hide it either: It <b>really</b> hurts, even if you are enjoying it too, so you wither around and whimper as she spanks you for a good solid minute or three, until your ass is bright red and feels like it''s radiating heat.'
 		*nl
-		'Then she lifts you back to your feet. "I hope this has taught you a lesson; I don''t want to see you in my office anymore, <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can return to your classes now." With that, she goes back to her desk; you pull your panties back up before heading back to class.'
+		'She then lifts you back to your feet. "I hope this has taught you a lesson; I don''t want to see you in my office anymore, <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can return to your classes now." With that, she goes back to her desk; you pull your panties back up before heading back to class.'
 		if detention = 0:
 			detention_set = 1
-			'Just before you walk out the door she adds. "I am also giving you detention this Saturday, do not miss it."'
+			'Just before you walk out the door, she adds. "I am also giving you detention this Saturday. Do <i>not</i> miss it."'
 		end
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'maso', 'rough'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -377,8 +377,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plugin_panties':
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/angry.jpg"></center>'
-				'"No, I like wearing it and I''m not gonna let you tell me what I can or can''t do," you say in a haughty voice; it''s not like she can force you, right?'
-				'She gives you a long, hard look and her eyes narrow dangerously. "Fine, if that is what you wanna be... but this is a school, <b>your</b> school, and as your teacher, I will show you how to be a proper whore."'
+				'"No, I like wearing it and I''m not going to let you tell me what I can or can''t do!" you say in a haughty voice.'
+				'She gives you a long, hard look and her eyes narrow dangerously. "Fine, if that is what you want to be, but this is a school, <b>your</b> school, and as your teacher, I will show you how to be a proper whore."'
 
 				act 'See how she treats a whore': gt 'gschool_office', 'whore'
 			end
@@ -391,14 +391,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plugin_panties':
 			gs 'pain', 7, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/schoolpaddle1.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Yes, I understand, I won''t let it happen again," you respond meekly. She nods, pulls out a large wooden paddle and gives you a hard smack across your bare butt. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank your butt with enough force to teach you a lesson... and it''s kinda working, too.'
+			'"Yes, I understand, I won''t let it happen again..." you respond meekly. She nods, pulls out a large wooden paddle and gives you a hard smack across your bare ass. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank you with enough force to teach you a lesson... and it''s kind of working too.'
 			*nl
-			'You silently take your punishment. It almost brings you to tears... but a part of you gets turned on by it as well - a circumstance you don''t want her to know about. You don''t have to play along much to hide it either: It <b>really</b> hurts, even if you are enjoying it too, so you wither around and whimper as she spanks you for a good solid minute or three, until your butt is bright red and feels like it''s radiating heat.'
+			'You silently take your punishment. It almost brings you to tears, but a part of you gets turned on by it as well - a circumstance you don''t want her to know about. You don''t have to play along much to hide it either: It <b>really</b> hurts, even if you are enjoying it too, so you wither around and whimper as she spanks you for a good solid minute or three, until your ass is bright red and feels like it''s radiating heat.'
 			*nl
-			'Then she lifts you back to your feet. "I hope this has taught you a lesson; I don''t want to see you in my office anymore, <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can return to your classes now." With that, she goes back to her desk; you pull your panties back up before heading back to class.'
+			'She then lifts you back to your feet. "I hope this has taught you a lesson; I don''t want to see you in my office anymore, <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can return to your classes now." With that, she goes back to her desk; you pull your panties back up before heading back to class.'
 			if detention = 0:
 				detention_set = 1
-				'Just before you walk out the door she adds. "I am also giving you detention this Saturday, do not miss it."'
+				'Just before you walk out the door, she adds. "I am also giving you detention this Saturday. Do <i>not</i> miss it."'
 			end
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'maso', 'rough'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -410,13 +410,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plugin_panties':
 	act 'Flirt':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/principal/flirt.jpg"></center>'
-		'You wiggle your butt around a bit. "I wore it for you. Like what you see?"'
+		'You wiggle your ass around a little. "I wore it for you. Like what you see?"'
 		*nl
-		'"Stop acting like some little whore right this moment!", she says in a stern voice, obviously not pleased by you or your antics.'
+		'"Stop acting like some little whore!" she says in a stern voice, obviously not pleased by you or your antics.'
 		*nl
-		'You smile at her. "Come on and give my ass a slap, you know you want to."'
+		'You smile at her. "Come on and give my ass a slap, you know you want to..."'
 		*nl
-		'She gives you a long, hard look and her eyes narrow dangerously. "Fine, if that is what you wanna be... but this is a school, <b>your</b> school, and as your teacher, I will show you how to be a proper whore."'
+		'She gives you a long, hard look and her eyes narrow dangerously. "Fine, if that is what you want to be, but this is a school, <b>your</b> school, and as your teacher, I will show you how to be a proper whore."'
 
 		act 'See how she treats a whore': gt 'gschool_office', 'whore'
 	end
@@ -424,21 +424,21 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'plugin_nude':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/plug.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once you walk over to her, Principal <<$npc_lastname[''A134'']>> bends you over. With you standing like that, she pulls up your skirt and when she see''s your bare ass she pauses. "Where are your panties? And why do you have that stuck in your butt?"'
+	'Once you walk over to her, Miss Volkov bends you over. With you standing like that, she pulls up your skirt and when she see''s your bare ass she pauses. "Where are your panties? And why do you have <i>that</i> inside you?"'
 	act 'Say you''re sorry':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'pain', 7, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/schoolpaddle1.jpg"></center>'
-		'"What? Oh, sorry. I like the way it feels and I forgot I was wearing it. I meant to take it out before I came to school this morning, but I forgot... and I guess I also forgot my panties," you tell her.'
-		'She sighs. "You seriously expect me to believe you forgot to put on your underwear <b>and</b> forgot that you had a plug stuck in your butt?" She pauses for the briefest of moments and, before you can reply, she adds. "I don''t care what reasons you have - it is simply unacceptable to wear a buttplug to school... or <i>not to</i> wear underwear. I will note this down as additional demerits; don''t let me catch you doing this again, <<$pcs_lastname>>. Do you understand me?" Without waiting for a response, she pulls out a large wooden paddle and gives you a hard smack across your bare butt. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank your butt with enough force to teach you a lesson... and it''s kinda working, too.'
+		'"What? Oh, sorry. I like the way it feels and I forgot I was wearing it. I meant to take it out before I came to school this morning, but I forgot. I guess I also forgot my panties too..." you tell her.'
+		'She sighs. "You seriously expect me to believe you forgot to put on your underwear <b>and</b> forgot that you had a plug jammed in your ass?" She pauses very briefly but before you can reply, she adds. "I don''t care what reasons you have - it is simply unacceptable to wear a buttplug to school... or <i>not to</i> wear underwear. I will note these down as additional demerits; don''t let me catch you doing this again, <<$pcs_lastname>>. Do you understand me?" Without waiting for a response, she pulls out a large wooden paddle and gives you a hard smack across your bare ass. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank you with enough force to teach you a lesson... and it''s kind of working too.'
 		*nl
-		'You silently take your punishment. It almost brings you to tears... but a part of you gets turned on by it as well - a circumstance you don''t want her to know about. You don''t have to play along much to hide it either: It <b>really</b> hurts, even if you are enjoying it too, so you wither around and whimper as she spanks you for a good solid minute or three, until your butt is bright red and feels like it''s radiating heat.'
+		'You silently take your punishment. It almost brings you to tears, but a part of you gets turned on by it as well - a circumstance you don''t want her to know about. You don''t have to play along much to hide it either: It <b>really</b> hurts, even if you are enjoying it too, so you wither around and whimper as she spanks you for a good solid minute or three, until your ass is bright red and feels like it''s radiating heat.'
 		*nl
-		'Then she lifts you back to your feet. "I hope this has taught you a lesson; I don''t want to see you in my office anymore, <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can return to your classes now." With that, she goes back to her desk and you pull your skirt down, making sure your naked privates and plug are properly covered, before heading back to class.'
+		'She then lifts you back to your feet. "I hope this has taught you a lesson; I don''t want to see you in my office anymore, <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can return to your classes now." With that, she goes back to her desk and you pull your skirt down before heading back to class.'
 		if detention_set = 0:
 			detention_set = 1
-			'Just before you walk out the door she adds. "I am also giving you detention this Saturday, do not miss it."'
+			'Just before you walk out the door, she adds. "I am also giving you detention this Saturday. Do <i>not</i> miss it."'
 		end
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'maso', 'rough'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -450,7 +450,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plugin_nude':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/angry.jpg"></center>'
 		'"I don''t like wearing them; the freedom I feel when I don''t have them on is incredible, and the sensations of having a plug in my ass are..."'
 		*nl
-		'You stop when you realize how quickly your headmaster''s face darkens. A blind man could tell she is angry with you, even without the shrill tone of her voice: "I don''t care if you don''t like wearing them, you will not walk around my school like some whore. Do you understand me?"'
+		'You stop when you realize how quickly her face darkens. A blind man could tell she is angry with you, even without the shrill tone of her voice: "I don''t care if you don''t like wearing them, you will not walk around my school like some whore. Do you understand me?"'
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -459,9 +459,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plugin_nude':
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/angry.jpg"></center>'
-				'"No, I''m not gonna let you tell me what I can or can''t wear," you say in a haughty voice; it''s not like she can force you, right?'
+				'"No, I''m not going to let you tell me what I can or can''t wear!" you say in a haughty voice.'
 				*nl
-				'She gives you a long, hard look and her eyes narrow dangerously. "Fine, if that is what you wanna be... but this is a school, <b>your</b> school, and as your teacher, I will show you how to be a proper whore."'
+				'She gives you a long, hard look and her eyes narrow dangerously. "Fine, if that is what you want to be, but this is a school, <b>your</b> school, and as your teacher, I will show you how to be a proper whore."'
 
 				act 'See how she treats a whore': gt 'gschool_office', 'whore'
 			end
@@ -474,14 +474,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plugin_nude':
 			gs 'pain', 7, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/schoolpaddle1.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Yes, I understand, I won''t let it happen again," you respond meekly. She nods, pulls out a large wooden paddle and gives you a hard smack across your bare butt. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank your butt with enough force to teach you a lesson... and it''s kinda working, too.'
+			'"Yes, I understand, I won''t let it happen again," you respond meekly. She nods, pulls out a large wooden paddle and gives you a hard smack across your bare ass. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank you with enough force to teach you a lesson... and it''s kind of working too.'
 			*nl
-			'You silently take your punishment. It almost brings you to tears... but a part of you gets turned on by it as well - a circumstance you don''t want her to know about. You don''t have to play along much to hide it either: It <b>really</b> hurts, even if you are enjoying it too, so you wither around and whimper as she spanks you for a good solid minute or three, until your butt is bright red and feels like it''s radiating heat.'
+			'You silently take your punishment. It almost brings you to tears, but a part of you gets turned on by it as well - a circumstance you don''t want her to know about. You don''t have to play along much to hide it either: It <b>really</b> hurts, even if you are enjoying it too, so you wither around and whimper as she spanks you for a good solid minute or three, until your ass is bright red and feels like it''s radiating heat.'
 			*nl
-			'Then she lifts you back to your feet. "I hope this has taught you a lesson; I don''t want to see you in my office anymore, <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can return to your classes now." With that, she goes back to her desk and you pull your skirt down, making sure your naked privates and plug are properly covered, before heading back to class.'
+			'She then lifts you back to your feet. "I hope this has taught you a lesson; I don''t want to see you in my office anymore, <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can return to your classes now." With that, she goes back to her desk and you pull your skirt down before heading back to class.'
 			if detention_set = 0:
 				detention_set = 1
-				'Just before you walk out the door she adds. "I am also giving you detention this Saturday, do not miss it."'
+				'Just before you walk out the door, she adds. "I am also giving you detention this Saturday. Do <i>not</i> miss it."'
 			end
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'maso', 'rough'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -493,11 +493,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plugin_nude':
 	act 'Flirt':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/principal/flirt.jpg"></center>'
-		'You wiggle your butt around a bit. "I wore it for you. Like what you see?"'
-		'"Stop acting like some little whore right this moment!", she says in a stern voice, obviously not pleased by you or your antics.'
-		'You smile at her. "Come on and give my ass a slap, you know you want to."'
+		'You wiggle your ass around a little. "I wore it for you. Like what you see?"'
+		'"Stop acting like some little whore!" she says in a stern voice, obviously not pleased by you or your antics.'
+		'You smile at her. "Come on and give my ass a slap, you know you want to..."'
 		*nl
-		'She gives you a long, hard look and her eyes narrow dangerously. "Fine, if that is what you wanna be... but this is a school, <b>your</b> school, and as your teacher, I will show you how to be a proper whore."'
+		'She gives you a long, hard look and her eyes narrow dangerously. "Fine, if that is what you want to be, but this is a school, <b>your</b> school, and as your teacher, I will show you how to be a proper whore."'
 
 		act 'See how she treats a whore': gt 'gschool_office', 'whore'
 	end
@@ -513,18 +513,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'detPunishment1':
 	gs 'pain', 7, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank1.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Very well, since you both wanted to be naked so badly, take off your clothes. All of them." She says as she pulls a chair over near her leather couch, taking a seat. Hesitantly you both slowly remove all your clothes. Once you are both naked, Miss Volkov motions you over. As soon as you are within an arms reach she grabs you and pulls you across her lap. She then proceeds to spank your bare ass until your buttcheeks are cherry red and stinging like crazy, while <<$rand_girl>> takes a seat on the couch and just watches you get spanked.'
+	'"Very well, since you both wanted to be naked so badly, take off your clothes. All of them." she says as she pulls a chair over near her leather couch, taking a seat. Hesitantly, you both slowly remove all your clothes. Once you are both naked, Miss Volkov motions you over. As soon as you are within arms reach, she grabs you and pulls you across her lap. She then proceeds to spank your bare ass until your cheeks are cherry red and stinging, while <<$rand_girl>> takes a seat on the couch and just watches you get spanked.'
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 15
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Once she is satisfied, she pulls you up and points to the corner of her office. "Go stand over there. Leave your clothes where they are, face the corner." You do as you are told, gingerly rubbing your butt as you go. You glance back when you hear the slap of flesh on flesh, it seems to be <<$rand_girl>>''s turn. She is laid out across Miss Volkov''s lap, getting her ass spanked as well. As time passes, you can hear <<$rand_girl>> moaning, either pretending to like it or really enjoying it. Miss Volkov seems annoyed at this and spends considerably more time spanking <<$rand_girl>>''s already glowing ass than she did with you. Finally she seems to grow tired of it, lifting <<$rand_girl>> off her lap and pointing to your corner. "Go join your friend."'
+		'Once she is satisfied, she pulls you up and points to the corner of her office. "Go and stand over there. Leave your clothes where they are and face the corner." You do as you are told, gingerly rubbing your ass as you go. You glance back when you hear the slap of flesh on flesh, it seems to be <<$rand_girl>>''s turn. She is laid out across Miss Volkov''s lap, getting her ass spanked as well. As time passes, you can hear <<$rand_girl>> moaning, either pretending to like it or really enjoying it. Miss Volkov seems annoyed at this and spends considerably more time spanking <<$rand_girl>>''s already glowing ass than she did with you. Finally she seems to grow tired of it, lifting <<$rand_girl>> off her lap and pointing to your corner. "Go join your friend."'
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr
 			cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You and <<$rand_girl>> stand facing the corner together, your ass is seriously stinging and if anything <<$rand_girl>>''s butt is must be much redder than yours. Apparently expecting one of you to disobey her, Miss Volkov keeps an eye on you for a while, but neither of you do. The two of you stay standing facing the corner, naked with your butts on fire.'
+			'You and <<$rand_girl>> stand facing the corner together, your ass is seriously stinging and if anything <<$rand_girl>>''s must be much redder than yours. Apparently expecting one of you to disobey her, Miss Volkov keeps an eye on you for a while, but neither of you do. The two of you stay standing facing the corner, naked with your backsides on fire.'
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 120
@@ -532,11 +532,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'detPunishment1':
 				gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank4.jpg"></center>'
-				'A couple of hours later, Miss Volkov finally speaks to you again. "Alright you two, get dressed and go home. I don''t want to see you in here again."'
+				'A few hours later, Miss Volkov finally speaks to you again. "Alright you two, get dressed and go home. I don''t want to see you in here again."'
 				*nl
-				'With that you quickly gather up your clothes and get dressed again.'
+				'You quickly gather up your clothes and get dressed again.'
 
-				act 'Leave the school building as fast as you can': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+				act 'Leave the school building': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -546,30 +546,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/whore.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Strip off your clothes." When you hesitate, she adds: "Either that or I call your parents right now and tell them why you are being expelled from school." A cold chill runs down your spine at the thought - could she really expel you for this? Unwilling to test her and with little choice in the matter, you strip off your clothes. Once you are down to just your shoes and socks, she pulls you across her lap and starts giving your bare ass a hard spanking with her hand. She hits you with full force every single time and keeps it up until her own hand starts to sting and she stops. You''re starting to think you''re done then she grips you by the hair and bends you over her desk instead.'
+	'"Strip off your clothes." When you hesitate, she adds: "Either that or I call your parents right now and tell them why you are being expelled from school." A cold chill runs down your spine at the thought. Unwilling to test her and with little choice in the matter, you strip off your clothes. Once you are down to just your shoes and socks, she pulls you across her lap and starts giving your bare ass a hard spanking with her hand. She hits you with full force every single time and keeps it up until her own hand starts to sting and she stops. You''re starting to think you''re done then she grips you by the hair and bends you over her desk instead.'
 	act 'She takes out the paddle':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/whore1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Once bent over her desk, she takes out a large paddle and spanks you hard with it, leaving your ass red and throbbing. After a while, the pain is really starting to get to you, and she doesn''t seem to have any intention of stopping. Finally, after many minutes, she seems to be getting tired, her hits lack the zip the early ones had. She pulls you away from the desk and turns you to face the other way, then forces you down to your knees. "Stay like this", she commands, and walks behind you, back to her desk.'
+		'Once bent over her desk, she takes out a large paddle and spanks you hard with it, leaving your ass red and throbbing. After a while, the pain is really starting to get to you, and she doesn''t seem to have any intention of stopping. Finally, after many minutes, she seems to be getting tired, her hits lacking the sting the early ones had. She pulls you away from the desk and turns you to face the other way, then forces you down to your knees. "Stay like this." she commands, and walks behind you, back to her desk.'
 		act 'When she comes back...':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/whore4.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear her rummaging around in her desk for a moment and then... well, you can''t really sort the sounds and you don''t dare looking at her. But sure enough, she comes back into view a couple of minutes later, wearing a rather large strap-on. Your eyes widen a bit in shock at the sight of it, and while you''re still preoccupied with working through your surprise, she closes the gap between you and starts rubbing the tip of the dildo against your lips, as if trying to force it into your mouth. "Open your mouth like the good little whore you so desperately want to be."'
+			'You hear her rummaging around in her desk before she comes back into view a few minutes later, wearing a rather large strap-on. Your eyes widen a bit in shock at the sight of it, and while you''re still preoccupied with working through your surprise, she closes the gap between you and starts rubbing the tip of the dildo against your lips, as if trying to force it into your mouth. "Open your mouth like the good little whore you so desperately want to be."'
 			act 'Suck it':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A64'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/whore5.jpg"></center>'
-				'You barely even have time to open your mouth at all before she shoves the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> strap-on inside and down your throat, causing you to start gagging at once. Unconcerned by this, she shoves the dildo as far down your throat as it will physically go and then she starts roughly fucking your throat with it, barely giving you any time to catch your breath. After several minutes, your throat feels like it is on fire and she finally stops, finally giving you time to gulp down the air you so desperately needed. As you do, she lifts you up and bends you over her desk once more. She briefly slips one finger into your pussy, likely checking if you are a virgin.'
+				'You barely even have time to open your mouth at all before she shoves the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> strap-on inside and down your throat, causing you to start gagging at once. Unconcerned by this, she shoves the dildo as far down your throat as it will physically go and then she starts roughly fucking your throat with it, barely giving you any time to catch your breath. After several minutes, your throat feels like it is on fire and she finally stops, finally giving you time to gulp down the air you so desperately need. As you do, she lifts you up and bends you over her desk once more. She briefly slips one finger into your pussy, likely checking if you are a virgin.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'lesbian', 'humiliation', 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'stat'
 				if pcs_vag = 0:
-					'"I must admit, I am very surprised anyone acting like such a whore like yourself would still be a virgin. I suppose that means you are one of those girls that just let the boys use their other holes instead."'
+					'"I must admit, I am very surprised that anyone acting like such a whore would still be a virgin. I suppose that means you are one of those girls that just let the boys use their other holes instead..."'
 					act 'Get your ass fucked': gt 'gschool_office', 'whore2'
 				else
 					act 'Get fucked':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/whore6.jpg"></center>'
-						'Lifting one of your legs up to place your knee on the desk, you know what is about to come next, and though knowing itself only helps so much, the natural wetness of your pussy and your slobber on the dildo absolutely do. It hurts a little when she shoves the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> strap-on basically all the way into your twat, and the moan you give is one of both pain and pleasure. "You even moan like a little whore," the Principal says as she hammers the dildo''s full length into you repeatedly.'
+						'Lifting one of your legs up to place your knee on the desk, you know what is about to come next, and though knowing itself only helps so much, the natural wetness of your pussy and your slobber on the dildo absolutely do. It hurts a little when she shoves the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> strap-on all the way inside you, and the moan you give is one of both pain and pleasure. "You even moan like a little whore." she says as she hammers the dildo''s full length into you repeatedly.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'humiliation', 'sub'
 						gs 'stat'
 
@@ -585,37 +585,37 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore2':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/whore7.jpg"></center>'
-	'She half-lifts, half-pushes you onto her desk where she has you kneel down and sit back until you''re touching your heels. With your feet dangling off the edge of the desk, your backdoor is easily accessible, which seems to be the idea - you feel the pressure of the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> strap-on against your anus. It only lasts for a moment, though: As soon as she is sure she has it lined up, she shoves the dildo up your ass. Given how unprepared you were and that the only lubrication was whatever wetness clung to the dildo, your cry of pain was surprisingly soft, but your first reflex still is to move forward.'
+	'She half-lifts, half-pushes you onto her desk where she has you kneel down and sit back until you''re touching your heels. With your feet dangling off the edge of the desk, your backdoor is easily accessible, which seems to be the idea - you feel the pressure of the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> strap-on against your anus. It only lasts for a moment, though: As soon as she is sure she has it lined up, she shoves the dildo up your ass. Given how unprepared you were and that the only lubrication was whatever wetness clung to the dildo, your cry of pain is surprisingly soft, but your first reflex is to move forward.'
 	*nl
-	'Realizing that, she grabs hold of your hips to keep you from pulling away. "I''m not done with you yet, <<$pcs_lastname>>. This is what whores do every day, and they have to like it," she says as she pounds the dildo into your ass. The first few thrusts are the worst, even worse than the initial penetration... but after a while - and maybe also due to the Principal spitting on your puckered hole several times - the pain subsides to tolerable levels and it starts feeling good, <i>really</i> good. Soft moans escape your lips as she pounds your little ass. No longer trying to pull away, you are pushing back against her.' 
-	'"Now you''re acting like a good little whore," she comments, and with your only response being another moan and thrust against her, she is not wrong.'
+	'Realizing this, she grabs hold of your hips to keep you from pulling away. "I''m not done with you yet, <<$pcs_lastname>>. This is what whores do every day, and they have to like it!" she says as she pounds the dildo into your ass. The first few thrusts are the worst, even worse than the initial penetration, but after a while - and maybe also due to her spitting on your puckered hole several times - the pain subsides to tolerable levels and it starts feeling good, <i>really</i> good. Soft moans escape your lips as she pounds your little ass. No longer trying to pull away, you are pushing back against her.' 
+	'"Now you''re acting like a good little whore." she comments, with your only response being another moan and thrust against her.'
 	anal_slip += 4
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'humiliation', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Take it deep':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/whore8.jpg"></center>'
-		'She pulls out of you and part of you is relieved... but another part of you wants her to keep going. She pushes you forward until your elbows touch the top of her desk, and once you are on your hands and knees, she climbs onto the desk behind you. It seems she isn''t actually done after all, slipping the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo back into your gaping ass and sliding inside with ease.'
+		'She pulls out of you and part of you is relieved, but another part wants her to keep going. She pushes you forward until your elbows touch the top of her desk, and once you are on your hands and knees, she climbs onto the desk behind you. It seems she isn''t actually done after all, slipping the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo back into your gaping ass, sliding inside with ease.'
 		*nl
-		'Her one hand holds onto your hips for leverage, but with the other she grabs a handful of your hair and painfully pulls and twists it as she starts jackhammering your ass again.'
+		'Her free hand holds onto your hips for leverage while the other grabs a handful of your hair and painfully pulls and twists it as she starts jackhammering your ass again.'
 		*nl
-		'Many more minutes pass, and while it did feel extraordinarily good for a while, your butt is now starting to get really sore and hurt; all the lubrication seems to have come off the dildo and the friction is turning every thrust into a bigger (literal) pain in the ass than the last. You grit your teeth and bear it as best you can, but eventually it starts hurting so much that your ass feels like it is on fire and you beg: "Please, Miss Volkov, please stop, it is really starting to hurt!"'
-		$orgasm_txt = 'As she gives your ass a merciless pounding, you can feel that familiar tingling building up inside of your body, and soon an orgasm crashes over you. You start humping back against her as she fucks your ass while the orgasm courses through your body. Barely coherent, you hear her say something along the lines of "that''s right, my little whore, moan and orgasm like the dirty little anal slut you are", and eventually the sensation passes... but she doesn''t stop fucking you.'
+		'Many more minutes pass, and while it did feel extraordinarily good for a while, your ass is now starting to get really sore; all the lubrication seems to have come off the dildo and the friction is making every thrust more painful than the last. You grit your teeth and bear it as best you can, but eventually it starts hurting so much that your ass feels like it is on fire and you beg: "Please, Miss Volkov, please stop, it is really starting to hurt!"'
+		$orgasm_txt = 'As she gives your ass a merciless pounding, you can feel that familiar tingling building up inside of your body, and soon an orgasm crashes over you. You start humping back against her as she fucks your ass while the orgasm courses through your body. Barely coherent, you hear her say something along the lines of "That''s right my little whore, moan and orgasm like the dirty little anal slut you are!" and eventually the sensation passes, but she doesn''t stop fucking you.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 10, 'lesbian', 'humiliation', 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		$orgasm_txt = ''
 		*nl
-		'"I thought you wanted to act like a little whore in my school. Are you saying you changed your mind?", she asks as she pulls nearly completely out and then slams the entire shaft back in again.'
+		'"I thought you wanted to act like a little whore in my school? Are you saying you''ve changed your mind?" she asks as she pulls almost completely out and then slams the entire shaft back in again.'
 		*nl
-		'You cry out in agony; at this point, you''d be willing to do just about anything to stop this. "Yes! Yes, I changed my mind! I''m sorry, Principal, I don''t want to be a whore. Please stop!"'
+		'You cry out in agony; at this point, you''d be willing to do just about anything to stop this. "Yes! Yes, I''ve changed my mind! I''m sorry Miss Volkov, I don''t want to be a whore. Please stop!"'
 		*nl
-		'For a moment you don''t know what she''s going to do, and are nonetheless surprised, let alone relieved, when she pulls out. "Very well", she says, "roll over."'
+		'For a minute, you don''t know what she''s going to do, and are nonetheless surprised, let alone relieved, when she pulls out. "Very well." she says. "Roll over."'
 		act 'Roll over':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/whore9.jpg"></center>'
-			'You do as she tells you and roll over, now belly-up on her desk. She steps one leg off the desk, straddling your face, and lowers her pussy right over your mouth. "Good little whores get their customers off. Maybe you have changed your mind, or maybe you just told me what I wanted to hear, but either way, this lesson isn''t over yet. Get licking or I''ll fuck that sore little ass of yours again."'
+			'You do as she tells you and roll over, now laying on your back on her desk. She steps one leg off the desk, straddling your face, and lowers her pussy right over your mouth. "Good little whores get their customers off. Maybe you have changed your mind, or maybe you just told me what I wanted to hear, but either way, this lesson isn''t over yet. Get licking or I''ll fuck that sore little ass of yours again."'
 			*nl
-			'Not wanting her to make good on that threat, you start licking her pussy and find it soaking wet already: It would seem the rumors that she used to be or still is a dominatrix really are true, if fucking you raw excited her this much. You lick and suck on her pussy lips and clit, avoiding the center for a few moments, but then slip your tongue into her twat, fucking her pussy as well as you can to get at least a hint of poetic justice. It doesn''t take long until she orgasms and coats your face in her pussy juices.'
+			'Not wanting her to make good on that threat, you start licking her pussy and find it soaking wet already: It would seem the rumors that she used to be or still is a dominatrix really are true, if fucking you raw excited her this much. You lick and suck on her pussy lips and clit, avoiding the center for a few minutes, but then slip your tongue into her, fucking her pussy as well as you can. It doesn''t take long until she orgasms and coats your face in her pussy juices.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'humiliation', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Clean up':
@@ -630,9 +630,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore2':
 				act 'Get out':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/whore11.jpg"></center>'
-					'Once the Principal deems the dildo clean enough, she removes it from your mouth, gets off the desk and pulls you off as well. She leans against the table and points at the door. "Get your shit and remove yourself from my office right now. If you hurry, you can make it back into the hall and get dressed before the next bell." Your eyes widen slightly at the thought of being forced out into a hall full of the classmates, naked as you are, but the expression on her face and her previous cruelties leave no doubt in your mind that she is serious. You quickly gather your clothes and hurry out of the office.'
+					'Once she deems the dildo clean enough, she removes it from your mouth, gets off the desk and pulls you off as well. She leans against the table and points at the door. "Get your shit and remove yourself from my office right now. If you hurry, you can make it back into the hall and get dressed before the next bell." Your eyes widen slightly at the thought of being forced out into a hall full of the classmates naked, but the expression on her face and her previous cruelties leave no doubt in your mind that she is serious. You quickly gather your clothes and hurry out of the office.'
 					*nl
-					'Once out in the hall, you quickly get dressed and try your best to ignore your burning asshole as you do. You barely finish getting yourself in order before the bell rings and the hall fills up with your fellow students. It takes you a moment to realize that the Principal was fucking you for a full class - no wonder your ass started hurting so much. With a new understanding for what school punishment can entail, you go to your next class, trying not to walk too bowlegged.'
+					'Once out in the hall, you quickly get dressed, trying your best to ignore your burning asshole as you do. You barely finish getting yourself in order before the bell rings and the hall fills up with your fellow students. It takes you a moment to realize that the Principal was fucking you for a full class - no wonder your ass started hurting so much. With a new understanding for what school punishment can entail, you go to your next class, trying not to walk too bowlegged.'
 					act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			end

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_randperson.qsrc

@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'couple_generator':
         $rand_girl = 'Sonia'
         $rand_boy = 'Lavrenti'
 	elseif couple_rand = 41:
-        $rand_girl = 'Albina'
+        $rand_girl = 'Alyona'
         $rand_boy = 'Radomir'
     elseif couple_rand = 42:
         $rand_girl = 'Lizaveta'