Merge branch 'master-grammar-fixes' of Crux/glife into master

[fixed] easy grammar corrections from Crux

locations/HotelWork.qsrc

@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'firsthotelprosevent':
 		'As you continue servicing Pavlin''s manhood, the black guy moves behind you. He suddenly grabs you by the hips and yanks you up to a standing position.'
 		if pcs_vag = 0:'As you feel the massive member rub up against your exposed snatch, your heart skips a beat. "Oh god, am I really about to lose my virginity to a black man?!?! What would my family think of me if they knew? And why do I feel so excited about it?" You think, mind racing with emotion. '
 		'He places one calloused hand on you back and starts pushing his big <<dick>> cm schlong inside your dripping pussy. "Oh fuck!" You groan as he buries himself inside you.'
-		if pcs_vag = 0:'As the thick, dark dick slams into you, you yelp in pain as tears roll down your cheeks. It feels as if your being split in half and you''re sure there''s some blood leaking from your conquered maidenhead. "Too late to turn back now." you think. "My virginity is his. It will always be his. God, how am i going to explain this to my mother?"'
+		if pcs_vag = 0:'As the thick, dark dick slams into you, you yelp in pain as tears roll down your cheeks. It feels as if you''re being split in half and you''re sure there''s some blood leaking from your conquered maidenhead. "Too late to turn back now." you think. "My virginity is his. It will always be his. God, how am i going to explain this to my mother?"'
 		' '
 		'Mr. Black gives you little time to adjust to his size before he''s pounding away in force.'
 		'"Don''t get distracted skank, you got plenty of dick right here too." Pavlin says as he forces your mouth back onto his cock.'

locations/Snpc.qsrc

@@ -563,7 +563,7 @@ if numnpc = 16:
 				orgasm += 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natasha/sex/school/natschoolowe.jpg"></center>'
-				'Her tongue starts to lick your clit, you bite your lip to try and keep from moaning to loudly. You lean back and relax, as you let Natasha pleasure you with her tongue. She is getting a lot better at this and if your not mistaken she is starting to like it a lot.'
+				'Her tongue starts to lick your clit, you bite your lip to try and keep from moaning to loudly. You lean back and relax, as you let Natasha pleasure you with her tongue. She is getting a lot better at this and if you''re not mistaken she is starting to like it a lot.'
 				'She starts using her fingers on you as well and is really getting into it, you start to pant and moan. Clamping a hand over your own mouth to keep yourself from crying out, it doesn''t her long to bring you to a climax.'
 				'Your whole body shudders as the orgasm rocks your body, you grind your pussy against her face as it does. Once the sensation has passed you look down and see Natasha smiling up at you, obviously pleased with herself. You lean down and give her a long slow passionate kiss, tasting your own pussy juices. A few moments later the bell rings and you both hurry to class.'
 				if $loc ! 'gdkin':

locations/Voltrenersex.qsrc

@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Anal':
 			act 'Recover':
 				cls
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/sex/voitrensex28.jpg"></center>'
-				'He lets you guide the pace and depth for most of the time, but as he begins to pant, he grabs your hips and firmly pulls you down as he thrusts up with his hips. Jamming himself balls deep into your ass. You cry out a little in pain as he stretch out your ass a bit more. After several such thrusts he finally pulls you down, leaving himself buried balls deep in your not moving. You feel his spurts of sperm filling up your ass. Once he has finished he finally lets go of your hips so you can pull yourself up, freeing his cock from your ass. You can already feel the cum running out of your gapped asshole.'
+				'He lets you guide the pace and depth for most of the time, but as he begins to pant, he grabs your hips and firmly pulls you down as he thrusts up with his hips. Jamming himself balls deep into your ass. You cry out a little in pain as he stretch out your ass a bit more. After several such thrusts he finally pulls you down, leaving himself buried balls deep in you not moving. You feel his spurts of sperm filling up your ass. Once he has finished he finally lets go of your hips so you can pull yourself up, freeing his cock from your ass. You can already feel the cum running out of your gapped asshole.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 			end
 		end

locations/anushkaev1.qsrc

@@ -599,7 +599,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rad_selfie':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushbed.jpg"></center>'
 	'Wondering why she took that selfie of the two you, with you having cum on your face. "What are you going to do with that selfie of us?"'
 	'She shrugs a little. "Keep it as a memento at least for awhile, I often take selfies during sex or after sex as keep sakes, why?"'
-	'You nod a little. "Your not going to show it to anyone are you?"'
+	'You nod a little. "You''re not going to show it to anyone are you?"'
 	'She looks a little surprised you would ask. "No of course not." Then she grins. "Unless you want me to."'
 	act 'Hangout in her room': gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
 	act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
@@ -990,7 +990,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talkaboutval':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushbed.jpg"></center>'
 			'Wondering why she took that selfie of the two you, with you having cum on your face. "What are you going to do with that selfie of us?"'
 			'She shrugs a little. "Keep it as a memento at least for awhile, I often take selfies during sex or after sex as keep sakes, why?"'
-			'You nod a little. "Your not going to show it to anyone are you?"'
+			'You nod a little. "You''re not going to show it to anyone are you?"'
 			'She looks a little surprised you would ask. "No of course not." Then she grins. "Unless you want me to."'
 			act 'Hangout in her room': gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
 			act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
@@ -1265,7 +1265,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk_about_marcus':
 			else
 				'Wondering why she took that selfie of the two you, with you having cum on your face. "What are you going to do with that selfie of us?"'
 				'She shrugs a little. "Keep it as a memento at least for awhile, I often take selfies during sex or after sex as keep sakes, why?"'
-				'You nod a little. "Your not going to show it to anyone are you?"'
+				'You nod a little. "You''re not going to show it to anyone are you?"'
 				'She looks a little surprised you would ask. "No of course not." Then she grins. "Unless you want me to."'
 			end
 			if OluQW['sex'] = 1 and OluQW['nush_inv'] = 0:

locations/artemEv.qsrc

@@ -777,7 +777,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cum_surprise':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/firstcpie.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you are riding him, getting lost in your own pleasure you glance down at his face and see him tense up and you realize that he is cumming too late. You can feel his cum shooting into you. As you lift yourself up, you can feel his cum oozing out of your pussy.'
 		'Then it hits him and he suddenly looks alarmed as he realizes he just came inside of you. "Oh my god, I am so sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, I didn''t mean to do that."'
-		'You smile to him as you get off him. "It''s ok, don''t worry about it." He looks relieved obviously thinking your are on birth control.'
+		'You smile to him as you get off him. "It''s ok, don''t worry about it." He looks relieved obviously thinking you are on birth control.'
 		act 'Continue': gs 'artemEv', 'after_sex', 'cp'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/firstfacial.jpg"></center>'

locations/artemhome.qsrc

@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 				end
 			else
 				if artlie = 2 or artembrokenheart = 1 or artemblok = 1:
-					'You stand outside the Chebotarev household, knocking on the door. The door is quickly answered by Artem''s mother, who has a big friendly smile on her face, until she recognizes you then it turn to a frown, you have never seen her frown before. "Oh, it''s you. I don''t know what you did to my sweet Artem but he says he never wants to see you again. I thought you was such a sweet girl, but he says your not, so please leave." With that she closes the door in your face.'
+					'You stand outside the Chebotarev household, knocking on the door. The door is quickly answered by Artem''s mother, who has a big friendly smile on her face, until she recognizes you then it turn to a frown, you have never seen her frown before. "Oh, it''s you. I don''t know what you did to my sweet Artem but he says he never wants to see you again. I thought you was such a sweet girl, but he says you''re not, so please leave." With that she closes the door in your face.'
 					act 'Leave': gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
 				elseif pav_slut >= 200 or grupTipe = 4:
 					'You stand outside the Chebotarev household, knocking on the door. The door is quickly answered by Artem''s mother, who has a big friendly smile on her face, that falters when she sees you. "Oh, Hello again <<$pcs_firstname>>, can I help you?" She asks.'

locations/city_marketsex.qsrc

@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'the_beginning':
 				cla
 
 				'While Artur is fucking you, you hear the creaking of the front door, you look up to see two more men enter the room. You know them it''s Abdul and Hassan, owners of the neighboring stalls.'
-				'You freeze in astonishment and shame, caught moaning as your being fucked, laying naked on your stomach as Artur rides you, he apparently doesn''t mind the audience as he keeps fucking you. The men smile and laugh, saying something to each other and then they say something to Artur who barely grunts a reply to them as he keeps fucking you.'
+				'You freeze in astonishment and shame, caught moaning as you''re being fucked, laying naked on your stomach as Artur rides you, he apparently doesn''t mind the audience as he keeps fucking you. The men smile and laugh, saying something to each other and then they say something to Artur who barely grunts a reply to them as he keeps fucking you.'
 				'Hasan then says to you. "Hey girl, why don''t you give us a turn when Artur is done and we won''t tell everyone in the market." You glance back at Artur as he is still riding you and he doesn''t show any indication he cares.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 20, 'sub', 'rough'

locations/club.qsrc

@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inside':
 					act 'Return':gt 'club', 'inside'
 				end
 			else
-				'You ask him about work, but he says your not pretty enough and walks off. You are shocked enough that you just stand there and watch him walk away.'
+				'You ask him about work, but he says you''re not pretty enough and walks off. You are shocked enough that you just stand there and watch him walk away.'
 			end
 
 			exit

locations/gdksport.qsrc

@@ -859,7 +859,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Ivan_bored':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/ivan/sex/school/schoolanal.jpg"></center>'
 			'He rubs the tip of his dick against your asshole for a couple of moments and then you feel a sharp pain as he pushes it in. With only your saliva as lubrication, it doesn''t slide in as easily. You bite your lip and cry out a little in pain. He relaxes a little and rubs your back as he takes it slow, giving you time to stretch and adjust to his cock invading your ass.'
-			'He slowly strokes his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock in your ass, with each stroke pushing it just a little deeper in your ass. Once he is about half way in your moans turn from pain to pleasure, while one of your hands starts rubbing your clit. You start moaning louder and panting, your pussy is now soaking wet. After a couple of minutes the pleasure is building up inside of your body so much you no longer even need to stimulate your clitorous any longer. "Fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>, you not only have the hottest ass of any girls in school, but the tightest one I have ever fucked." Ivan says as he can tell your getting into it, grabbing your hips with both hands. He drives himself balls deep into your ass, eliciting a squeak of pain from you, but sensation of pain is quickly overwhelmed by pleasure.'
+			'He slowly strokes his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock in your ass, with each stroke pushing it just a little deeper in your ass. Once he is about half way in your moans turn from pain to pleasure, while one of your hands starts rubbing your clit. You start moaning louder and panting, your pussy is now soaking wet. After a couple of minutes the pleasure is building up inside of your body so much you no longer even need to stimulate your clitorous any longer. "Fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>, you not only have the hottest ass of any girls in school, but the tightest one I have ever fucked." Ivan says as he can tell you''re getting into it, grabbing your hips with both hands. He drives himself balls deep into your ass, eliciting a squeak of pain from you, but sensation of pain is quickly overwhelmed by pleasure.'
 			'Holding onto your hips with both hands, he holds you steady and keeps you from pulling away, as he jack hammers his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock balls deep in your ass. You moan in pain and pleasure, mostly pleasure, the sounds of your moans, almost drowned out the sounds of his skin slapping against yours, his balls slapping against your wet pussy. You place your hands against the stall wall to keep him from driving your head into it, from his powerful and violent thrusts. As he abuses your poor little asshole, you find yourself loving every second of it.'
 			*nl
 			'You have an intense orgasm that leaves your legs shaking and barely able to keep standing. You are almost to the point where you are unable to take it anymore, either from the intense pleasure or the growing burning sensation in your ass. Either way the matter is moot, as Ivan drives himself once more balls deep into your ass, but this time holds himself there. You feel his cock twitching as he shoots hot sperm deep in your ass, spurt after spurt filling you up with his semen in what seems an almost unending stream. Finally he takes a shuddering breath and pulls out of you, leaving you to almost collapse with out his support.'

locations/gschool_break.qsrc

@@ -389,7 +389,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 												act 'Continue':
 													*clr & cla
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/gbully7.jpg"></center>'
-													'The girl on the bottom finally has had enough and pushes you off her dildo. Paulina keeps fucking your ass for a bit, while the other one slides out from under you. Soon the other girls demand a turn, though none seem to want to use your pussy anymore. They take turns wearing a strapon and fucking your ass, your not sure if all of them did, but it sure feels like it.'
+													'The girl on the bottom finally has had enough and pushes you off her dildo. Paulina keeps fucking your ass for a bit, while the other one slides out from under you. Soon the other girls demand a turn, though none seem to want to use your pussy anymore. They take turns wearing a strapon and fucking your ass, you''re not sure if all of them did, but it sure feels like it.'
 													gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 10, 'humiliation', 'maso', 'gangbang', 'lesbian'
 													gs 'arousal', 'end'
 													gs 'stat'
@@ -400,7 +400,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 														gs 'underwear', 'remove'
 														gs 'stat'
 														'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/gbully8.jpg"></center>'
-														'Your ass has been pounded so hard and so much it feels like it''s on fire. They seem to get bored, finally, and the last one pulls the dildo out of your ass. Paulina reaches down, grabs you by the chin, and says "Next time we fucking tell you to leave, you better listen." With that the girls leave, laughing and talking about you, but your not paying attention. You crawl over into one of the stalls and curl up, waiting until you can no longer hear them. Maybe next time you will do what Paulina says and leave when you can. Once you are sure they are gone, you do your best to clean up, but that''s when you notice they also stole your clothes.'
+														'Your ass has been pounded so hard and so much it feels like it''s on fire. They seem to get bored, finally, and the last one pulls the dildo out of your ass. Paulina reaches down, grabs you by the chin, and says "Next time we fucking tell you to leave, you better listen." With that the girls leave, laughing and talking about you, but you''re not paying attention. You crawl over into one of the stalls and curl up, waiting until you can no longer hear them. Maybe next time you will do what Paulina says and leave when you can. Once you are sure they are gone, you do your best to clean up, but that''s when you notice they also stole your clothes.'
 														act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_break', 'naked_bathroom'
 													end
 												end

locations/huntersex.qsrc

@@ -1198,7 +1198,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sluthomeAnalDogCum1':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/hunter/sluthomeAnalDogСum1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You feel his pace quicken and your are sure he is about to cum.'
+	'You feel his pace quicken and you are sure he is about to cum.'
 	gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy, 1
 	gs 'dinSex','boy_wants_anal','','lubri' & gs 'dinsex','analsex'
 	'<<$textsexhunter3>>'
@@ -1226,7 +1226,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sluthomeAnalDogCum2':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/hunter/sluthomeAnalDogСum2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You feel his pace quicken and your are sure he is about to cum.'
+	'You feel his pace quicken and you are sure he is about to cum.'
 	gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy, 1
 	gs 'dinSex','boy_wants_anal','','lubri' & gs 'dinsex','analsex'
 	'<<$textsexhunter3>>'
@@ -1256,7 +1256,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sluthomeAnalCowCum1':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy, 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/hunter/sluthomeAnalCowСum1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You feel his pace quicken and your are sure he is about to cum.'
+	'You feel his pace quicken and you are sure he is about to cum.'
 	gs 'dinSex','boy_wants_anal','','lubri' & gs 'dinsex','analsex'
 	'<<$textsexhunter3>>'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'rough'
@@ -1288,7 +1288,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sluthomeAnalCowCum2':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy, 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/hunter/sluthomeAnalCowСum2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You feel his pace quicken and your are sure he is about to cum.'
+	'You feel his pace quicken and you are sure he is about to cum.'
 	gs 'dinSex','boy_wants_anal','','lubri' & gs 'dinsex','analsex'
 	'<<$textsexhunter3>>'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'rough'
@@ -1315,7 +1315,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sluthomeAnalSideCum1':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/hunter/sluthomeAnalSideСum1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You feel his pace quicken and your are sure he is about to cum.'
+	'You feel his pace quicken and you are sure he is about to cum.'
 	gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy, 1
 	gs 'dinSex','boy_wants_anal','','lubri' & gs 'dinsex','analsex'
 	'<<$textsexhunter3>>'
@@ -1346,7 +1346,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sluthomeAnalSideCum2':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/hunter/sluthomeAnalSideСum2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You feel his pace quicken and your are sure he is about to cum.'
+	'You feel his pace quicken and you are sure he is about to cum.'
 	gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy, 1
 	gs 'dinSex','boy_wants_anal','','lubri' & gs 'dinsex','analsex'
 	'<<$textsexhunter3>>'

locations/ivanRoom.qsrc

@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ if StoryLine = 0 or altQS = 1:
 															cumface = 0
 															gs 'stat'
 															'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/shared/karinpre.jpg"></center>'
-															'You secretly prepared a camera filming through a hole in her purse at Ivan. Tatiana meanwhile handed him a glass of water, thirsty Ivan drank the water as Tatiana asked him. Tell me how you stole from his boss. Ivan grinned "Elementary, I lost big time at the casino and I urgently needed the money. I knew this old asshole kept his bribe money in the safe. And he really liked the dumb slut dishwasher. And I came up with a brilliant plan. I convinced her to distract the manger. He would have done anything she asked he was so hot for her. I convinced her to get the keys for me and stood where the cameras could not see me and took what I wanted.  Then I had the cleaning woman take the money out and return it to me outside of work for a small cut. "And where is the money now?" Ivan said sadly "It''s all gone I paid off my casino debt and some other bills." Tatiana grinned, "It''s done Ivan you go to sleep." Ivan was immediately snoring on the couch. Tatiana turned to you. "That was close we almost screwed up because of his cold. Good lesson for you. Everything can not go according to plan. Thought I would have to paralyze him, but I have tried that once. Paralyzed object can choke if your not careful. Okay, let''s get out of here we got what we need." You quickly wash up in the bathroom with Tatiana, washing the left over sperm from each others faces and chests. She smiles at you while looking into yours and gets the last of the sperm off your chin and together you return to the street.'
+															'You secretly prepared a camera filming through a hole in her purse at Ivan. Tatiana meanwhile handed him a glass of water, thirsty Ivan drank the water as Tatiana asked him. Tell me how you stole from his boss. Ivan grinned "Elementary, I lost big time at the casino and I urgently needed the money. I knew this old asshole kept his bribe money in the safe. And he really liked the dumb slut dishwasher. And I came up with a brilliant plan. I convinced her to distract the manger. He would have done anything she asked he was so hot for her. I convinced her to get the keys for me and stood where the cameras could not see me and took what I wanted.  Then I had the cleaning woman take the money out and return it to me outside of work for a small cut. "And where is the money now?" Ivan said sadly "It''s all gone I paid off my casino debt and some other bills." Tatiana grinned, "It''s done Ivan you go to sleep." Ivan was immediately snoring on the couch. Tatiana turned to you. "That was close we almost screwed up because of his cold. Good lesson for you. Everything can not go according to plan. Thought I would have to paralyze him, but I have tried that once. Paralyzed object can choke if you''re not careful. Okay, let''s get out of here we got what we need." You quickly wash up in the bathroom with Tatiana, washing the left over sperm from each others faces and chests. She smiles at you while looking into yours and gets the last of the sperm off your chin and together you return to the street.'
 
 															gs 'arousal', 'end'
 															gs 'stat'
@@ -350,7 +350,7 @@ else
 															cumface = 0
 															gs 'stat'
 															'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/shared/karinpre.jpg"></center>'
-															'You secretly prepared a camera filming through a hole in her purse at Ivan. Tanya meanwhile handed him a glass of water after putting something into it,  thirsty Ivan drank the water as Tanya asked him. Tell me how you stole from his boss. Ivan grinned "Elementary, I lost big time at the casino and I urgently needed the money. I knew this old asshole kept his bribe money in the safe. And he really liked the dumb slut dishwasher. And I came up with a brilliant plan. I convinced her to distract the manger. He would have done anything she asked he was so hot for her. I convinced her to get the keys for me and stood where the cameras could not see me and took what i wanted.  Then I had the cleaning woman take the money out and return it to me outside of work for a small cut. "And where is the money now?" Ivan said sadly "It''s all gone I paid off my casino debt and some other bills." Tanya grinned, "it''s done Ivan, go to sleep." Ivan was immediately snoring on the couch. Tanya turned to you. "That was close we almost screwed up because of his cold. Good lesson for you. Everything can not go according to plan. Thought I would have to paralyze him, but I have tried that once. Paralyzed object can choke if your not careful. Okay, let''s get out of here we got what we need." You quickly wash up in the bathroom with Tanya, washing the left over sperm from each others faces and chests. She smiles at you while looking into yours and gets the last of the sperm off your chin and together you return to the street.'
+															'You secretly prepared a camera filming through a hole in her purse at Ivan. Tanya meanwhile handed him a glass of water after putting something into it,  thirsty Ivan drank the water as Tanya asked him. Tell me how you stole from his boss. Ivan grinned "Elementary, I lost big time at the casino and I urgently needed the money. I knew this old asshole kept his bribe money in the safe. And he really liked the dumb slut dishwasher. And I came up with a brilliant plan. I convinced her to distract the manger. He would have done anything she asked he was so hot for her. I convinced her to get the keys for me and stood where the cameras could not see me and took what i wanted.  Then I had the cleaning woman take the money out and return it to me outside of work for a small cut. "And where is the money now?" Ivan said sadly "It''s all gone I paid off my casino debt and some other bills." Tanya grinned, "it''s done Ivan, go to sleep." Ivan was immediately snoring on the couch. Tanya turned to you. "That was close we almost screwed up because of his cold. Good lesson for you. Everything can not go according to plan. Thought I would have to paralyze him, but I have tried that once. Paralyzed object can choke if you''re not careful. Okay, let''s get out of here we got what we need." You quickly wash up in the bathroom with Tanya, washing the left over sperm from each others faces and chests. She smiles at you while looking into yours and gets the last of the sperm off your chin and together you return to the street.'
 															gs 'arousal', 'end'
 															gs 'stat'
 															act 'Leave':gt'city_industrial'

locations/love.qsrc

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '0':
 	loverlove[lover_number] = 1
 	'You start talking about living together. <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> tells you that he is not against it, but first he wants you to meet his parents.'
 	'He warns you that his mother is very demanding and rigorous. <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says that he loves his mother and does not want to upset her. Therefore, you must look gorgeous, wear a dress from a boutique, be well-groomed with curled hair and use cosmetics only in moderation.'
-	'For your next date, if your are ready, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> will take you to his parents.'
+	'For your next date, if you are ready, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> will take you to his parents.'
 
 	act 'To invite':
 		cla

locations/metro_events.qsrc

@@ -924,7 +924,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'twobbc':
 	act 'Go with them':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/station/2bbc1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You decided why not, a little risk is always fun. Sure someone might come in a catch you with them but then again maybe no one will. As soon as you walk in the mens room, one of them takes you over near the stalls and starts kissing you. While his friend seems to be doing something at the door, your not sure what and you really don''t care at this moment.'
+		'You decided why not, a little risk is always fun. Sure someone might come in a catch you with them but then again maybe no one will. As soon as you walk in the mens room, one of them takes you over near the stalls and starts kissing you. While his friend seems to be doing something at the door, you''re not sure what and you really don''t care at this moment.'
 		'After a couple of minutes of kissing he pushes you down by your shoulders.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'exhibitionism'
 		gs 'stat'

locations/olu.qsrc

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'olusex':
 				act 'Continue':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/olu/sex/firstanal2.jpg"></center>'
-					'Your ass is really starting to burn and he is showing no signs of slowing down. He even manages to push a little deeper into you, until you finally feel his large balls slapping against your hands as you rub your clit, well at least that is as deep as he can go, that is something. It seems like it has been forever since he first shoved it up your butt. You glance over at the clock and nearly choke in surprise, he has been fucking your ass for at least half an hour straight. No wonder your ass feels like it''s burning. Finally he starts to grunt and you can tell he is about to cum, thank god, your not sure how much more of this you could take. Then he suddenly pulls out of your ass and rolls you over onto your back. "Open mouth" He says.'
+					'Your ass is really starting to burn and he is showing no signs of slowing down. He even manages to push a little deeper into you, until you finally feel his large balls slapping against your hands as you rub your clit, well at least that is as deep as he can go, that is something. It seems like it has been forever since he first shoved it up your butt. You glance over at the clock and nearly choke in surprise, he has been fucking your ass for at least half an hour straight. No wonder your ass feels like it''s burning. Finally he starts to grunt and you can tell he is about to cum, thank god, you''re not sure how much more of this you could take. Then he suddenly pulls out of your ass and rolls you over onto your back. "Open mouth" He says.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 15
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Open your mouth':
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'olusex':
 						act 'Continue':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/olu/sex/firstanal2.jpg"></center>'
-							'Your ass is really starting to burn and he is showing no signs of slowing down. He even manages to push a little deeper into you, until you finally feel his large balls slapping against your hands as you rub your clit, well at least that is as deep as he can go, that is something. It seems like it has been forever since he first shoved it up your butt. You glance over at the clock and nearly choke in surprise, he has been fucking your ass for at least half an hour straight. No wonder your ass feels like it''s burning. Finally he starts to grunt and you can tell he is about to cum, thank god, your not sure how much more of this you could take. Then he suddenly pulls out of your ass and rolls you over onto your back. "Open mouth" He says.'
+							'Your ass is really starting to burn and he is showing no signs of slowing down. He even manages to push a little deeper into you, until you finally feel his large balls slapping against your hands as you rub your clit, well at least that is as deep as he can go, that is something. It seems like it has been forever since he first shoved it up your butt. You glance over at the clock and nearly choke in surprise, he has been fucking your ass for at least half an hour straight. No wonder your ass feels like it''s burning. Finally he starts to grunt and you can tell he is about to cum, thank god, you''re not sure how much more of this you could take. Then he suddenly pulls out of your ass and rolls you over onto your back. "Open mouth" He says.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'anal', 15
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Open your mouth':
@@ -254,7 +254,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'seduction_strip':
 					act 'Continue':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/olu/sex/seduction14.jpg"></center>'
-						'Your ass is starting to burn a little as the pain and pleasure mixes. He even manages to push a little deeper into you, until you finally feel his large balls slapping against your pussy, well at least that is as deep as he can go, that is something. It seems like it has been forever since he first shoved it up your butt. You glance over at the clock and nearly choke in surprise, he has been fucking your ass for at least half an hour straight. No wonder your ass feels like it''s burning. Finally he starts to grunt and you can tell he is about to cum, thank god, your not sure how much more of this you could take. Then he suddenly pulls out of your ass and pulls you off the ouch onto your knees. "Open mouth" He says.'
+						'Your ass is starting to burn a little as the pain and pleasure mixes. He even manages to push a little deeper into you, until you finally feel his large balls slapping against your pussy, well at least that is as deep as he can go, that is something. It seems like it has been forever since he first shoved it up your butt. You glance over at the clock and nearly choke in surprise, he has been fucking your ass for at least half an hour straight. No wonder your ass feels like it''s burning. Finally he starts to grunt and you can tell he is about to cum, thank god, you''re not sure how much more of this you could take. Then he suddenly pulls out of your ass and pulls you off the ouch onto your knees. "Open mouth" He says.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal', 15
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Open mouth':
@@ -313,7 +313,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'seduction_strip':
 								act 'Continue':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/olu/sex/seduction14.jpg"></center>'
-									'Your ass is starting to burn a little as the pain and pleasure mixes. He even manages to push a little deeper into you, until you finally feel his large balls slapping against your pussy, well at least that is as deep as he can go, that is something. It seems like it has been forever since he first shoved it up your butt. You glance over at the clock and nearly choke in surprise, he has been fucking your ass for at least half an hour straight. No wonder your ass feels like it''s burning. Finally he starts to grunt and you can tell he is about to cum, thank god, your not sure how much more of this you could take. Then he suddenly pulls out of your ass and pulls you off the ouch onto your knees. "Open mouth" He says.'
+									'Your ass is starting to burn a little as the pain and pleasure mixes. He even manages to push a little deeper into you, until you finally feel his large balls slapping against your pussy, well at least that is as deep as he can go, that is something. It seems like it has been forever since he first shoved it up your butt. You glance over at the clock and nearly choke in surprise, he has been fucking your ass for at least half an hour straight. No wonder your ass feels like it''s burning. Finally he starts to grunt and you can tell he is about to cum, thank god, you''re not sure how much more of this you could take. Then he suddenly pulls out of your ass and pulls you off the ouch onto your knees. "Open mouth" He says.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'anal', 15
 									gs 'stat'
 									act 'Open your mouth':
@@ -395,7 +395,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'olusex1':
 							act 'Continue':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/olu/sex/sex10.jpg"></center>'
-								'He pushes a little deeper up your butt, until you finally feel his large balls slapping against your pussy. As you start to feel a little sore you glance over at the clock and notice again he has been hammering at your ass for over half a hour straight now. He has amazing stamina, you wonder if he caught a second wind just how long he could go, though your are not sure your ass could handle that. Then he suddenly pulls out of your ass and pulls you off the couch and you squat in front of him now use to it and open your mouth before he even says it. "Open mouth" He says.'
+								'He pushes a little deeper up your butt, until you finally feel his large balls slapping against your pussy. As you start to feel a little sore you glance over at the clock and notice again he has been hammering at your ass for over half a hour straight now. He has amazing stamina, you wonder if he caught a second wind just how long he could go, though you are not sure your ass could handle that. Then he suddenly pulls out of your ass and pulls you off the couch and you squat in front of him now use to it and open your mouth before he even says it. "Open mouth" He says.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'anal', 15
 								gs 'stat'
 								act 'Open mouth':
@@ -457,7 +457,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'olusex1':
 										act 'Continue':
 											*clr & cla
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/olu/sex/sex10.jpg"></center>'
-											'He pushes a little deeper up your butt, until you finally feel his large balls slapping against your pussy. As you start to feel a little sore you glance over at the clock and notice again he has been hammering at your ass for over half a hour straight now. He has amazing stamina, you wonder if he caught a second wind just how long he could go, though your are not sure your ass could handle that. Then he suddenly pulls out of your ass and pulls you off the couch and you squat in front of him now use to it and open your mouth before he even says it. "Open mouth" He says.'
+											'He pushes a little deeper up your butt, until you finally feel his large balls slapping against your pussy. As you start to feel a little sore you glance over at the clock and notice again he has been hammering at your ass for over half a hour straight now. He has amazing stamina, you wonder if he caught a second wind just how long he could go, though you are not sure your ass could handle that. Then he suddenly pulls out of your ass and pulls you off the couch and you squat in front of him now use to it and open your mouth before he even says it. "Open mouth" He says.'
 											gs 'arousal', 'anal', 15
 											gs 'stat'
 											act 'Open mouth':
@@ -613,7 +613,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'olunush':
 		'After awhile you hear a knock on the door, you get up and go answer it. You see Anushka standing there looking at you with a questioning look. "Well where is this huge massive cock you promised me?"'
 		'you grin and shake your head, opening the door wide to let her walk in. "Olu this is my friend Nush."'
 		'He smiles to her and stands up. "Hello, You are very pretty."'
-		'She walks over to him and starts stripping. "Your not so bad yourself and <<$pcs_nickname>> told me you have a massive cock." She practically purrs.'
+		'She walks over to him and starts stripping. "You''re not so bad yourself and <<$pcs_nickname>> told me you have a massive cock." She practically purrs.'
 		'He nods. "It is true, very big, how you say ... massive yes?"'
 		'She stops next to him stripped down to just her underwear and grabs his crotch and her eyes get big and she grins. "Massive might be a understatement. I don''t know if it will fit but i want to try." She turns and starts rubbing her butt against his crotch. "I want you to tear up my tight little white holes with your monster black dick, I want you to fuck me hard and rough and rip my tight little holes up."'
 		'He grins, obviously liking the idea of that. "Ok I no be gentle with you."'

locations/parksvid.qsrc

@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/park/3.jpg"></center>'
 			'<<$telsob>> and you walk up to the guy, she leans against you and whispers in your ear. "Well ask."'
-			'"Is it true what they say? That your not suppose to wear anything at all under a kilt?" you ask'
+			'"Is it true what they say? That you''re not suppose to wear anything at all under a kilt?" you ask'
 			'"You want to know, look and see." He replied with a smile.'
 			'"Do you want to take a look <<$pcs_nickname>>?" asks <<$telsob>>'
 			'"Go ahead and look yourself." You answer.'

locations/pod_ezd.qsrc

@@ -1736,7 +1736,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_ev1_anal':
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/stairs/event/sex/sex_ev1_4.jpg"></center>'
-			'Several thoughts race through your mind as your being brutally assfucked. You quickly dismiss the thoughts of getting away; there''s no way the guys will just let you go now. Your tactic switches to the next-most desirable option: making them cum as quick as possible before anyone comes along and finds you getting assfucked in the stairwell.'
+			'Several thoughts race through your mind as you''re being brutally assfucked. You quickly dismiss the thoughts of getting away; there''s no way the guys will just let you go now. Your tactic switches to the next-most desirable option: making them cum as quick as possible before anyone comes along and finds you getting assfucked in the stairwell.'
 			'While <<$boydesc[2]>> is still pounding your ass, you do your best to give the other guy a seductive smile as you say: "We need to wrap this up, boys. How about I suck you both off quickly now and you can both cum in my mouth? You can fuck my ass some other time?"'
 			*nl
 			if pav_slut >= 250:
@@ -1885,7 +1885,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_ev2':
 								npc_sex[$boy[2]] += 1
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/stairs/event/sex/sex_ev2_8.jpg"></center>'
-								'Mere moments later, <<$boydesc[1]>> moans and suddenly pulls out of you. He puts his free hand on your shoulder and forces you to kneel down, just in time to take both of their loads on your face. The guys now done with you, pull up their pants and ignore you. Their cum is still slowly running down your face, as they start talking like your not even there.'
+								'Mere moments later, <<$boydesc[1]>> moans and suddenly pulls out of you. He puts his free hand on your shoulder and forces you to kneel down, just in time to take both of their loads on your face. The guys now done with you, pull up their pants and ignore you. Their cum is still slowly running down your face, as they start talking like you''re not even there.'
 								gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 4
 								gs 'stat'
 								act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'

locations/sny.qsrc

@@ -319,7 +319,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/newyear/sex/pett.jpg"></center>'
-	'You kiss Dimka and he slowly undresses you down to your underwear. He gently wraps his hands around you, he sits down on the arm of the couch and pulls you down till your are leaning back against him. His hand reaches around and starts rubbing your clit with his fingers.'
+	'You kiss Dimka and he slowly undresses you down to your underwear. He gently wraps his hands around you, he sits down on the arm of the couch and pulls you down till you are leaning back against him. His hand reaches around and starts rubbing your clit with his fingers.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 	minut -= 5