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@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
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end
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*nl
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'You are at the swamp on the far side of the woods from the village.'
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- 'It can be dangerous to hike in this area, unless physically fit or have a good knowledge of the forest.'
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+ 'It can be dangerous to hike in this area, unless you are physically fit or have a good knowledge of the forest.'
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act 'Head back to the forest (0:15)': minut += 15 & gt 'gadforest', 'forest_center'
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@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stuck':
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'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/goswamp_nude0.'+rand(4,5)+'.jpg"></center>'
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end
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*nl
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- 'As you walk through the swamp, you feel yourself begin to sink into the mud of the swamp with each step.'
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+ 'As you walk through the swamp, you feel yourself begin to sink into the mud with each step.'
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'You know you''re so close to your destination, but you''re not sure you can make it.'
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act 'Struggle':
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@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stuck':
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end
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end
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*nl
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- 'Your efforts are not in vain as you begin to feel the muds hold loosen. With another burst of strength you free yourself and breathe a sigh of relief.'
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+ 'Your efforts are not in vain as you begin to feel the mud''s hold loosen. With another burst of strength, you free yourself and breathe a sigh of relief.'
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act 'Success!':gt 'swamp_yard','start'
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else
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@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stuck':
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'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/goswamp_nude0.'+rand(4,5)+'.jpg"></center>'
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end
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*nl
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- 'Your efforts are for nothing, the muds hold feels as tight as ever. In fact you feel yourself sinking even deeper.'
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+ 'Your efforts are for nothing. The mud''s hold feels as tight as ever. In fact, you feel yourself sinking even deeper.'
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act 'Failure':gt 'swamp','stuck'
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end
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@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stuck':
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act 'Success!':
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*clr & cla
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'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/handshelp.jpg"></center>'
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- *nl 'You hear men speaking and begin to shout louder. The voices come closer and finally, you feel strong hands grab you and drag you out to solid ground.'
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+ *nl 'You hear men speaking and begin to shout louder. The voices come closer, and finally, you feel strong hands grab you and drag you out to solid ground.'
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gs 'stat'
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act 'Relax':gt 'swamp_yard','start'
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@@ -169,10 +169,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stuck':
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*nl
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if $ARGS[1] = 'forest_edge':
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minut += 60
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- 'After an hour walking through the forest you finally see the hunters cabin ahead.'
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+ 'After an hour walking through the forest, you finally see the hunters cabin ahead.'
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elseif $ARGS[1] = 'swamp':
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minut += 15
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- 'After a few mintues walking through the swamp you finally see the hunters cabin ahead.'
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+ 'After a few minutes walking through the swamp, you finally see the hunters cabin ahead.'
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end
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gs 'stat'
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act 'Continue':gt 'swamp_yard', 'start'
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