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[text edit] clean up text in agentned

Spackled Lanturn 3 years ago
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      locations/agentned.qsrc

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locations/agentned.qsrc

@@ -19,16 +19,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	*nl
 	'This is the head office of the largest real estate agency in the Leningrad Oblast.'
 	*nl
-	'At the reception you notice a large print banner,'
-	'"Please be aware that all sales transactions are made exclusively through your bank account. Rent payments excluded from this policy."'
+	'At the reception, you notice a large print banner:'
+	'"Please be aware that all sales transactions are made exclusively through your bank account. Rent payments are excluded from this policy."'
 
 	if home_owned[1] = 1 and ArendHouseSL > 0:
 		*nl
-		'You have <B><<ArendHouseSL>> days</B> rental on your St. Petersburg apartment remaining. '+iif(money >= home_rent[1],'You can make a rent <a href="exec:money -= home_rent[1] & home_owned[1] = 1 & ArendHouseSL += ArendHouseSL_due & gs ''$menu_obnovit''">payment</a> in cash.','You can''t afford to pay your rent at the moment')+''
+		'You have <B><<ArendHouseSL>> days</B> remaining on your St. Petersburg apartment lease. '+iif(money >= home_rent[1],'You can make a rent <a href="exec:money -= home_rent[1] & home_owned[1] = 1 & ArendHouseSL += ArendHouseSL_due & gs ''$menu_obnovit''">payment</a> in cash to extend it.','You can''t afford to pay your rent at the moment')+''
 	end
 	if home_owned[4] > 0 and ArendHouseSL4 > 0:
 		*nl
-		'You have <B><<ArendHouseSL4>> days</B> rental on your Pushkin apartment. '+iif(money >= home_rent[4],'You can make a rent <a href="exec:money -= home_rent[4] & home_owned[1] = 1 & ArendHouseSL4 += ArendHouseSL_due & gs ''$menu_obnovit''">payment</a> in cash.','You can''t afford to your pay rent at the moment')+''
+		'You have <B><<ArendHouseSL4>> days</B> remaining on your Pushkin apartment lease. '+iif(money >= home_rent[4],'You can make a rent <a href="exec:money -= home_rent[4] & home_owned[1] = 1 & ArendHouseSL4 += ArendHouseSL_due & gs ''$menu_obnovit''">payment</a> in cash to extend it.','You can''t afford to your pay rent at the moment')+''
 	end
 
 	if home_owned[1] = 2 or home_owned[3] > 0 or home_owned[5] = 1:
@@ -266,9 +266,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent':
 		'We currently have no properties listed for rent.'
 	elseif home_owned[1] = 0 and home_owned[4] = 0:
 		*nl
-		'There are two properties available for rent.'
-		*nl
-		'There are two apartments for available to rent. They are located in the city residential area and in Pushkin.'
+		'There are two apartments available for rent. They are located in the city residential area and in Pushkin.'
 		act 'View the city apartment details': gt 'agentned', 'rent_cityres'
 		act 'View the Pushkin apartment details': gt 'agentned', 'rent_pushkin'
 	elseif home_owned[1] = 0:
@@ -367,7 +365,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent_pushkin':
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'You take the pen and start filling out the paperwork. After writting for an hour, you hand over the money and receive the keys to your new apartment.'
+			'You take the pen and start filling out the paperwork. After writing for an hour, you hand over the money and receive the keys to your new apartment.'
 
 			act 'Return':gt'agentned', 'start'
 		end
@@ -432,7 +430,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy_dacha':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the purchase of a cottage with a garden in the co-op. It''s located 5km away from St. Petersburg. <<$home_value_txt[3]>> <b>₽</b> has been removed from your bank account.'
+	'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the purchase of a cottage with a garden in the co-op. It''s located 5 km away from St. Petersburg. <<$home_value_txt[3]>> <b>₽</b> has been removed from your bank account.'
 
 	act 'Return':gt'agentned', 'start'
 end
@@ -455,7 +453,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy_Mansion':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the purchase of a lot for building a mansion 1km up the north road. <<$home_value_txt[5]>> <b>₽</b> has been removed from your bank account.'
+	'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the purchase of a lot for building a mansion 1 km up the north road. <<$home_value_txt[5]>> <b>₽</b> has been removed from your bank account.'
 
 	act 'Return':gt'agentned', 'start'
 end