[text edit] Typos and grammer fixes from spectre1viper.

locations/foto_models.qsrc

@@ -1221,7 +1221,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anastasiasex3':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/anastasia_p/talking/1.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Wow!"'
-		'"Yes indeed, we are quite privileged to have the opportunities we do. However, I really must be going deary. I have an appointment soon." You nod as she stand and picks up her panties. "Let me know if you''d like to get started on escorting. I''d love to help introduce you to the company. But before I go, may I offer some advice?"'
+		'"Yes indeed, we are quite privileged to have the opportunities we do. However, I really must be going deary. I have an appointment soon." You nod as she stands and picks up her panties. "Let me know if you''d like to get started on escorting. I''d love to help introduce you to the company. But before I go, may I offer some advice?"'
 		'You listen eagerly as Anastasia leans in to whisper in your ear.'
 		'"There are three things you need to know in this business. Make sure to enjoy yourself, never forget your birth control, and <i>always</i> charge extra for creampies, swallowing, and anal."'
 		'She stands back, meeting your eyes with a smile. "Words to live by my dear. Words to live by. But I must be off now. Don''t be a stranger!"'

locations/gdktoilet.qsrc

@@ -888,7 +888,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blowjob':
 		*clr
 		temp = rand(1, 3)
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/womens/sex/ghbj<<temp>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You suck on his dick, bobbing your head, sometimes using your hands to stroke his shaft at the same time, other times your hands massage his balls. Before to long you hear the guy moan in pleasure, "I''m coming."'
+		'You suck on his dick, bobbing your head, sometimes using your hands to stroke his shaft at the same time, other times your hands massage his balls. Before to long you hear the guy moan in pleasure, "I''m cuming."'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'unknown', 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Swallow':
@@ -1050,7 +1050,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy2':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/womens/sex/ghsex.mp4"></video></center>'
 	end
 	gs 'gdktoilet', 'pussy'
-	'You turn around and back up to the hole, you use one hand to guide his dick into your pussy. The <<npc_dick[$npclastgenerated]>>cm long <<$npc_thdick[$npclastgenerated]>> cock slides easily into your wet pussy, causing you to moan in pleasure as you move your hips back and forth. You start humping his dick with fast movements, taking the full length of him balls deep into you, which causes him to moan loudly. After several minutes, you hear him on the other side of the wall yell out, "I''m gonna come."'
+	'You turn around and back up to the hole, you use one hand to guide his dick into your pussy. The <<npc_dick[$npclastgenerated]>>cm long <<$npc_thdick[$npclastgenerated]>> cock slides easily into your wet pussy, causing you to moan in pleasure as you move your hips back and forth. You start humping his dick with fast movements, taking the full length of him balls deep into you, which causes him to moan loudly. After several minutes, you hear him on the other side of the wall yell out, "I''m gonna cum."'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'unknown', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	if protect ! 1:

locations/noticeboard.qsrc

@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'advert1':
 	'<center><table bgcolor="#FFFF66" width="60%" cellspacing="30"><tr><th align="center"><h3>Pavlovsk police department newsletter</h3></th></tr><tr><td align="left">'+ _
 	'&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;The Pavlovsk police department recently investigated the rumours that a secret prostitution ring was being run from the Pavlovsk hotel.<p>'+ _ 
 	'&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;After a very thorough investigation, we found absolutely no evidence of this. The hotel manager, <b>Herman Leonidovich</b>, was interrogated and not only did we find him completely innocence he also gave a substantial donation to our department.'+ _
-	'He ensured us that any young, pretty girl could apply for a maid job in their hotel and there is absolutely no chance that they would be forced to prostitute themselves<p><p>.</td></tr></table></center>'
+	'He ensured us that any young, pretty girl could apply for a maid job in their hotel and there is absolutely no chance that they would be forced to prostitute themselves.<p><p></td></tr></table></center>'
 	minut +=2
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue': gt 'noticeboard','look'

locations/pavaptcourtev.qsrc

@@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events1':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/3girls.jpg"></center>'
 		'You see some guys checking out three girls, who seem well aware of their attention. After a bit of staring one of the boys says something to his friends and they seem to egg him on, but before he can do what ever is he had planned, the girl on the right walks around her friend in the center, firmly grips her hips and starts to pretend to fuck her from behind. Which gets both of her friends to laugh and the boys to hoot and holler, with this the girl on the left grabs the head of her friend in the center, turning towards her and pulls her head down to her crotch and starts to pretend to fuck her mouth.'
 		*nl
-		'The middle girl seems to get into it and pretends to suck a dick and while her other friend pounds against her ass. They keep this up for a little bit until the boys as a group starts to head for them, with that they giggle, flip off the boys, then run off together. Leaving the boys to holler after them calling them teases and far less pleasant things.'
+		'The middle girl seems to get into it and pretends to suck a dick and while her other friend pounds against her ass. They keep this up for a little bit until the boys as a group starts to head for them, with that they giggle, flip off the boys, then run off together. Leaving the boys frustrated and hollering some surprisingly unpleasant things after them.'
 		act 'Move away':gt 'pavComplex', 'start'
 	elseif events = 8:
 		*clr & cla
@@ -881,7 +881,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'female_gopnik_beer_2':
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/passedout.jpg"></center>'
 							'You lose count of the number of beers you drink and really everything becomes fuzzy before going black.'
-							'You don''t know how long you was passed out for, but you are sure you was. You feel sick to your stomach, your head is starting to hurt. You find yourself laying face down on the ground. As you slowly get up you notice you are completely naked other than your shoes and your purse laying a few feet away. Feeling a bit panicked you look around but don''t see anyone at all. Just all the empty bottles by the bench where they girls where.'
+							'You don''t know how long you were passed out for, but you are sure you were. You feel sick to your stomach, your head is starting to hurt. You find yourself laying face down on the ground. As you slowly get up you notice you are completely naked other than your shoes and your purse laying a few feet away. Feeling a bit panicked you look around but don''t see anyone at all. Just all the empty bottles by the bench where the girls where.'
 							act 'Go home':gt 'pavaptcourtev', 'homenaked'
 						end
 					end
@@ -901,17 +901,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'follownush':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/complex/hey.jpg"></center>'
 	'You follow her inside, not seeing her at the moment you start to head upstairs. Then you hear her below you, apparently she was going down stairs for some reason. "Hey you following me?"'
-	'Not sure what to say, I mean you was following her. "Kinda, I was just curious what you was up too."'
+	'Not sure what to say, I mean you were following her. "Kinda, I was just curious what you were up too."'
 	if hotcat > 5 and npc_rel['A45'] >= 30:
-		'You gives you a small amused smile. "So you''re stalking me huh? Look I know I''m hot, so I can hardly blame you."'
-		'You shake you head, no you''re not stalking her, that just is wrong. "No! I was just curious... never mind." But before you can turn away she grabs your hand.'
+		'She gives you a small amused smile. "So you''re stalking me huh? Look I know I''m hot, so I can hardly blame you."'
+		'You shake your head, no you''re not stalking her, that just is wrong. "No! I was just curious... never mind." But before you can turn away she grabs your hand.'
 		'"Relax I was just yanking your chain. I was just going to sit down here on the basement steps, if you want to join me." With that she takes a seat about half way down the steps.'
 		'You could join her or maybe you should just be on your way.'
 		act 'Leave':gt 'pavComplex', 'start'
 		act 'Join her':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/complex/kiss.jpg"></center>'
-			'You sit down next to her, the two of you start chatting about what has been going on lately in your lives. Just as you was telling her about something your sister did, she leans over and kisses you. You are briefly taken aback but not that much, it is just what she does.'
+			'You sit down next to her, the two of you start chatting about what has been going on lately in your lives. Just as you were telling her about something your sister did, she leans over and kisses you. You are briefly taken aback but not that much, it is just what she does.'
 			act 'Stop the kiss':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 1

locations/talent_agency.qsrc

@@ -545,7 +545,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wrong_room':
 	elseif interview = 7:
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/interview/wrong/7.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You open the door and see an upset looking girl bent over the desk as the man behind her slowly pulls his cock out from her pussy. You freeze in shock and then swiftly shut the door without a word but through it you can hear voices.'
-		'"Congratulations on landing the part sweetie. I just hope you what you''re role is going to be moving forward."'
+		'"Congratulations on landing the part sweetie. I just hope you realise what your role is going to be moving forward."'
 		act 'Leave':gt'talent_agency','hallway'
 	
 	elseif interview = 8:

locations/telefon.qsrc

@@ -290,7 +290,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lover' and loverGender[ARGS[1]] = 0:
 
 	'Hey <<$sveta>>, it''s me, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>. How''s it going?'
 
-	act 'Normally':
+	act 'Reply':
 		cla
 		'"Pretty good, you?"'
 		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>, "Great, but I kind of miss you, can we meet today?"'
@@ -410,7 +410,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lover' and loverGender[ARGS[1]] = 0:
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Leave':
+	act 'Hang up (end relationship)':
 		cla
 		gs 'lover', 'remove', lover_number
 		gt 'telefon', 'fin'
@@ -436,7 +436,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lover' and loverGender[ARGS[1]] = 1:
 
 	'Hey <<$sveta>>, it''s me, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>. How''s it going?'
 
-	act 'Normally':
+	act 'Reply':
 		cla
 		'"Pretty good, you?"'
 		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>, "Great, but I kind of miss you, can we meet today?"'
@@ -481,7 +481,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lover' and loverGender[ARGS[1]] = 1:
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Leave':
+	act 'Hang up (end relationship)':
 		cla
 		gs 'lover', 'remove', lover_number
 		gt 'telefon', 'fin'