[text edit] small text edits and typos

locations/NatBelHome.qsrc

@@ -376,16 +376,16 @@ elseif lernHome = 0:
 										natcp += 1
 										'You let her pull away from your brother, but it appears Kolka was really close, and before anyone could do anything, your brother pumps his seed in Natasha''s body.'
 										'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natasha/sex/natcp.mp4"></video></center>'
-										'"Fuck, I really am sorry, Nat!", he says apologetically. "It is just, you are so hot!"'
+										'"Fuck, I really am sorry, Natasha!", he says apologetically. "It is just, you are so hot!"'
 										'Natalia doesn''t even listen to him, just looks at you with a strange expression on her face. You can''t really decide whether she is scared that Kolka came in her pussy, or enjoyed it. Maybe both at the same time?'
-										'You quitely signal your brother to dress up and leave while you kiss her deeply. "I hope you enjoyed it, pet. We may repeat it."'
+										'You quietly signal your brother to dress up and leave while you kiss her deeply. "I hope you enjoyed it, pet. We may repeat it."'
 										if rand(1,100) >= 95 and natpregday = 0:natpregday = daystart
 									else
 										'You let her pull away from your brother, so that you brother''s dick slips out of her just in time. His seed sprays Natasha''s ass, back and hair, and it even reaches your face and hair.'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natasha/sex/natkolfacial.jpg"></center>'
 										'"Nice shot, bro!", you say laughing, wiping his seed away from your eyelid. "That was quite the distance!"'
 										'"That was close," whispers Nat, with a strange look in her face. You actually can''t decide whether she is relieved or disappointed that Kolka didn''t cum in her pussy.'
-										'You quitely signal your brother to dress up and leave while you kiss her deeply. "I hope you enjoyed it, pet. We may repeat it."'
+										'You quietly signal your brother to dress up and leave while you kiss her deeply. "I hope you enjoyed it, pet. We may repeat it."'
 										gs 'boyStat', 'A34'
 										spafinloc = 11
 										sexpartkno = 1

locations/NikoDates.qsrc

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # NikoDates
 
-if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_1':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 1_1':
 	cls
 	NikoDate_Day = daystart
 	minut += 5
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_1':
 							minut += 5
 							'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/charmer1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You downcast your eyes; feeling more bashful, as Niko approaches you; moving his face one inch from yours. "So, May I?" You finally get up the courage to tell him, "You...You may.." Niko gives you a warm smile, as he leans forward, pressing his lips against yours; sharing a very gently but firm kiss. After you both finish kissing, you look up to Niko, and see a very pleased smile on his face. "You are so beautiful <<$pcs_firstname>>, and your lips are as soft as silk; So perfect." You can feel your face quickly growing flushed, as you turn your head; trying to hide how red it is. Niko chuckles lightly, "We''re not done yet. Let''s go to the boxing game next."'
+							'You downcast your eyes; feeling more bashful, as Niko approaches you; moving his face one inch from yours. "So, May I?" You finally get up the courage to tell him, "You... You may..." Niko gives you a warm smile, as he leans forward, pressing his lips against yours; sharing a very gently but firm kiss. After you both finish kissing, you look up to Niko, and see a very pleased smile on his face. "You are so beautiful <<$pcs_firstname>>, and your lips are as soft as silk; So perfect." You can feel your face quickly growing flushed, as you turn your head; trying to hide how red it is. Niko chuckles lightly, "We''re not done yet. Let''s go to the boxing game next."'
 							*nl
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/kiss1.mp4"></video></center>'
 
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_1':
 						minut += 5
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad2.jpg"></center>'
-						'You and Niko grab a plastic gun then begin shooting the bottles, as quickly, and efficiently, as possible. After a few minutes, the scores get tallied up, and...You won. The man hosting the event, hands you a plastic gnome. Niko looks at the score, a little shocked, as he scratches the back of his head. "I guess... You won. So what do you desire for your prize?" Niko moves his face closer to yours.'
+						'You and Niko grab a plastic gun then begin shooting the bottles, as quickly, and efficiently, as possible. After a few minutes, the scores get tallied up, and... You won. The man hosting the event, hands you a plastic gnome. Niko looks at the score, a little shocked, as he scratches the back of his head. "I guess... You won. So what do you desire for your prize?" Niko moves his face closer to yours.'
 						'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/charmer1.jpg"></center>'
 
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_1':
 	end
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] =  'Stranger Danger':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'Stranger Danger':
 	cls
 	minut += 5
 	gs'stat'
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Stranger Danger':
 	end
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_2':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 1_2':
 	cls
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A189'
@@ -244,7 +244,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_2':
 	end
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] =  'Home 1':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'Home 1':
 	cls
 	NikoEv = 3
 	minut += 30
@@ -257,7 +257,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Home 1':
 	act 'Walk toward the city':gt 'pavResidential'
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] =  'Home Sad':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'Home Sad':
 	cls
 	minut += 20
 	gs'stat'
@@ -269,7 +269,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Home Sad':
 	act 'Walk toward the city':gt 'pavResidential'
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 2':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 2':
 	cls
 	NikoDate_Day = daystart
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A189'
@@ -353,7 +353,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 2':
 	end
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 2_2':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 2_2':
 	cls
 	NikoDate_Day = daystart
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A189'
@@ -392,7 +392,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 2_2':
 				minut += 5
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/2/d2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Niko climbs off of the burly man then turns to  you, and asks, "Are you okay, he didn''t hurt you did he?" You quickly hug Niko then reply, "I''m fine. Thank you Niko. I feel so safe with you." You then kiss Niko''s neck, as he leads you back toward the bar, for a few drinks. While drinking with Niko, you can''t help but think to yourself: <font color=#FF00FF>What if that big guy gets up then comes back for revenge? Should we just leave?</font> Niko hands you another drink when you see the restroom door open, and the burly man steps out then brush off the dirt from his jacket before casually leaving the bar, not even looking back.'
+				'Niko climbs off of the burly man then turns to you, and asks, "Are you okay, he didn''t hurt you did he?" You quickly hug Niko then reply, "I''m fine. Thank you Niko. I feel so safe with you." You then kiss Niko''s neck, as he leads you back toward the bar, for a few drinks. While drinking with Niko, you can''t help but think to yourself: <font color=#FF00FF>What if that big guy gets up then comes back for revenge? Should we just leave?</font> Niko hands you another drink when you see the restroom door open, and the burly man steps out then brush off the dirt from his jacket before casually leaving the bar, not even looking back.'
 				*nl
 				'<font color=#FF00FF>He... He wasn''t mad? I thought that he would want revenge. That is so strange.</font> You try to focus on what Niko is saying, as he chats about various topics with you.'
 				*nl
@@ -415,7 +415,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 2_2':
 	end
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] =  'Date Rape':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'Date Rape':
 	cls
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A189'
 	minut += 5
@@ -484,7 +484,7 @@ if NikoVolkovQW = 5 and NikoEv = 4 and NikoDate = 0:
 	'You, and Niko walk out of the cafeteria then Niko leans against the wall, and pulls you toward him, gently kissing your lips before whispering in your ear, "" '
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] =  'Cafeteria':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'Cafeteria':
 	cls
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A189'
 	NikoDate = 1
@@ -513,7 +513,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Cafeteria':
 	end
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 3':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 3':
 	cls
 	NikoDate_Day = daystart
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A189'
@@ -632,7 +632,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 3':
 	end
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] =  'Home':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'Home':
 	cls
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A189'
 	minut += 5
@@ -1471,7 +1471,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/fedor.jpg"></center>'
 												'You run to Fedor then jump into his arms, as he stares into your eyes, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>. I will keep you safe." Vitek shouts, "Hey, she is ours, give her back." Fedor stands his ground, "No, she is mine!" Vitek walks up to his face, "What did you say punk?" Dan adds, "Hey, I''m sure Fedor misunderstands what''s going on, let me explain. <<$pcs_firstname>> has been a very naughty girl who has been fucking many other students." Fedor responds, "Bullshit! I know <<$pcs_firstname>>, and she''s better than that." Dan responds, "Ohh really? Watch this, and decide for yourself."'
 												*nl
-												'Dan shows Fedor the video of you sucking off Niko then confessing your love to him. Fedor''s face grows red with anger. "You..You bitch! How could you just use me like that?" You lower your head, "I..." You can''t collect your words. Fedor grabs the back of your neck then pushes you toward Vitek who catches you, "Have fun with her. I don''t want her anymore." Dan pats Fedor on the back, as he responds, "Why don''t you join us? We were just about to show her off to everyone else." Fedor nods then you all head into the cafeteria.'
+												'Dan shows Fedor the video of you sucking off Niko then confessing your love to him. Fedor''s face grows red with anger. "You... You bitch! How could you just use me like that?" You lower your head, "I..." You can''t collect your words. Fedor grabs the back of your neck then pushes you toward Vitek who catches you, "Have fun with her. I don''t want her anymore." Dan pats Fedor on the back, as he responds, "Why don''t you join us? We were just about to show her off to everyone else." Fedor nods then you all head into the cafeteria.'
 												'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorangry.jpg"></center>'
 
@@ -1491,7 +1491,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 	end
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] =  'Exposed':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'Exposed':
 	cls
 	if grupTipe = 1:VKGroup = 1 & grupTipe = 5
 	if grupTipe = 2:VKGroup = 2 & grupTipe = 5

locations/brother_lessons.qsrc

@@ -623,7 +623,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson4':
 			act'Continue':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><video src="images/shared/sex/kuni/pussylick3.mp4"></center>'
-				'	Before you know it, he''s found a rhythm and is licking you like there''s no tomorrow. You eyes roll back in your head and every other sensation fades and blurs into the background except the feeling of your brother''s tongue on your clit.'
+				'	Before you know it, he''s found a rhythm and is licking you like there''s no tomorrow. Your eyes roll back in your head and every other sensation fades and blurs into the background except the feeling of your brother''s tongue on your clit.'
 				'	He stops briefly and you vaguely hear him say, "Girls taste good," before diving back in and returning you to bliss.'
 				act'"I''m cumming!"':
 					cla & *clr

locations/dinsister.qsrc

@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ $sischecks = {
 			*nl
 			'I can not approach her junked up like this.'
 			
-			act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+			act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 		end
 		
 		if StrongNarkota <= 20:
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ $sischecks = {
 			*nl
 			'You tell yourself, "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, deep breath, focus, you can do this."'
 			'You feel your head is clear enough to talk to your sister once more.'
-			act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+			act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -231,26 +231,26 @@ $narkosisterspalila = {
 	!'sister slept on drugs.'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sister2.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-    '"Come on, keep it together, act sober." You think. "I have just got talk normal and not think about it."'
-    'Your sister looks at you quizzically. "Are you stoned <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
-    act'No':
-	    cla
-	    set narkossister = 1
-	    gs'stat'
-	    'You adversely shake your head "No." You back away, but it''s very clear you sister could tell that you are stoned.'
-        act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+	'"Come on, keep it together, act sober." You think. "I have just got talk normal and not think about it."'
+	'Your sister looks at you quizzically. "Are you stoned <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+	act'No':
+		cla
+		set narkossister = 1
+		gs'stat'
+		'You adversely shake your head "No." You back away, but it''s very clear you sister could tell that you are stoned.'
+		act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 	end
 	act'Share':
-		    cls
-		    set narkossista = 1
-		    gs'stat'
-		    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sister2.jpg"></center>'
-		    *nl
-		    'You tell your sister, that you learned where to buy drugs, and you really wanted to try and it is just this once never again.'
-		    'Your sister strictly looks at you and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>> I''m not your mother, who would kill you if she found out, but this is the first and last time. It''s not worth it!'
-			'If you continue, then your whole life will not be worth shit.'
-            act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
-        exit
+		cls
+		set narkossista = 1
+		gs'stat'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sister2.jpg"></center>'
+		*nl
+		'You tell your sister, that you learned where to buy drugs, and you really wanted to try and it is just this once never again.'
+		'Your sister strictly looks at you and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>> I''m not your mother, who would kill you if she found out, but this is the first and last time. It''s not worth it!'
+		'If you continue, then your whole life will not be worth shit.'
+		act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
+		exit
 	end
 }
 
@@ -264,7 +264,7 @@ $d_sister[1]={
 		npc_rel['A33'] +=(pcs_intel/10)+(pcs_apprnc/20)
 		gs'stat'
 		'You apologize to your sister and it seems she forgives you.'
-		act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+		act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 		end
 	end
 }
@@ -278,7 +278,7 @@ $d_sister[2]={
 		npc_rel['A33'] +=(pcs_intel/10)+(pcs_apprnc/20)
 		gs'stat'
 		'You suck up to your sister and she appears to be slowly treating you better.'
-		act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+		act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 		end
 	end
 }
@@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ $d_sister[3]={
 			'You chat with your sister and she advises you where you can earn some money.'
 		end
 		if sisterTalk = 15:
-			'You chat with your sister and she tells you that you can find a lot of interesting bargins if you wander through the market.'
+			'You chat with your sister and she tells you that you can find a lot of interesting bargains if you wander through the market.'
 		end
 		if sisterTalk = 16:
 			'Anya tells you horror stories about a pretty girl who didn''t wash or shave her legs, and how it became so terrible, that she looked like a bum and had no friends. She advises you to take care of your body.'

locations/gdksport.qsrc

@@ -1190,7 +1190,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor First Date':
 		minut += 15
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/park/walk.jpg"></center>'
-		'"I would like that." you said with a smile and Fedor respondes "Good, I hear that this movie will have us in stiches." with a delighted look on his face as he wraps his arm around yours then walks you to the movie theater.'
+		'"I would like that." you said with a smile and Fedor responds: "Good, I hear that this movie will have us in stiches." with a delighted look on his face as he wraps his arm around yours then walks you to the movie theater.'
 
 		act 'Watch a movie':
 			cls

locations/mitkabuh.qsrc

@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partyalone':
 !! repeat until drunk
 	if alko < 8:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/drunk.jpg"></center>'
-		'Set in a secluded spot behind your grandparents'' house the three village boys, Mitka Shkvoryen, Vasyan Paket and Kolyamba Pyut are drinking moonshine, without any snacks. Mitka pours the brew into a clear plastic shot glass and hand it over to you.'
+		'Set in a secluded spot behind your grandparents'' house the three village boys, Mitka Shkvoryen, Vasyan Paket and Kolyamba Pyut are drinking moonshine, without any snacks. Mitka pours the brew into a clear plastic shot glass and hands it over to you.'
 		act 'Leave':gt 'Gaddvor'
 		act 'Drink':
 			*clr & cla

locations/obj_din.qsrc

@@ -1318,7 +1318,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reputation':
 			end
 		end
 		'<center><table width="225" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top"><tr><td>'
-			'<center>Remown Pavlovsk</center>'
+			'<center>Renown in Pavlovsk</center>'
 			if Enable_pav_Reputation = 0:
 				'<center><a href="exec:Enable_pav_Reputation = 1 & gs ''obj_din'', ''reputation''">Show details</a></center>'
 			end
@@ -2377,7 +2377,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'records':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><h1>Notebook</h1></center>'
 	gs 'housing', 'rent'
-	act 'Put notebok down': gt $loc, $metka
+	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $metka
 	if pavSharedAptEnabled = 1:'You share an apartment with three others in Pavlovsk. Bills are paid by the other tennants in exchange for your house services'
 	*nl
 	if home_owned[1] = 1:'You rent a two-room apartment, in the city residential area. Rent for the apartment is subtracted automatically, in sum of <<home_rent[1]>> <b>₽</b> us electric bill on 25th of each month. You are currently paid up for <b><<ArendHouseSL>></b> days'

locations/sny.qsrc

@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '6':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/newyear/tusa6.jpg"></center>'
 	'Albina and Katja are dancing face to face in the middle of the room. Suddenly Albina kisses Katja on the lips. The room erupts into howling kids encouraging them to continuing. Someone hands you another glass of vodka.'
 
-	act 'drink':
+	act 'Drink':
 		cls
 		minut += 15
 		alko += 3

locations/soba.qsrc

@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gamedog':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/1.jpg"></center>'
 	'You call <<$namesob>> to your bed, so that you can play with him. You kiss him, play with legs and stroke his neck and stomach.'
-	'Suddenly, Your pussy starts to itch. You can not understand why, but strongly want sex. Then, seeing your dogs penis poking out of its sheeth, you have a crazy idea.'
+	'Suddenly, your pussy starts to itch. You can''t understand why, but you strongly want sex. Then, seeing <<$namesob>> penis poking out of its sheeth, you have a crazy idea.'
 	'You could have some fun playing with his member.'
 
 	act 'Leave':pcs_dom += 5 & dynamic $brodila

locations/street_event.qsrc

@@ -784,7 +784,7 @@ if $ARGS[1] = 'main':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<<$streetev_title>>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/street/beatup.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you walk down the street you pass a man that is badly beaten laying unconscious on the sidewalk. You stop a moment unsure what to do, but everyone else just ignores it. Not being sure what you could do to help you, you continue on your way and wonder what happened to him.'
+			'As you walk down the street you pass a man that is badly beaten lying unconscious on the sidewalk. You stop a moment unsure what to do, but everyone else just ignores it. Not being sure what you could do to help, you continue on your way and wonder what happened to him.'
 			act 'Continue':gt $loc
 		elseif streetrand > 84:
 			if hour >= 9:

locations/talent_agency.qsrc

@@ -580,7 +580,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wrong_room':
 		'The man looks up at you and says, "I think you''ve got the wrong room darling," not pausing his fucking for even a moment.'
 		'"Ugh! Ugh! Ugh! Ugh!" The girl doesn''t even seem to notice you''re in front of her, grunting every time his cock slams into her. It looks like she''s not focused on anything and her face appears to be one of tolerance rather than enjoyment. '
 		*nl
-		'"Uhm, ah- sorry."  You close the door as casually as possible, still hearing the slapping of flesh and grunting after it already clicked shut.'
+		'"Uhm, ah- sorry." You close the door as casually as possible, still hearing the slapping of flesh and grunting after it already clicked shut.'
 		act 'Leave':gt'talent_agency','hallway'
 	
 	elseif interview = 11: