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[text edit] translation of gadukino village

sovietmercader 5 anos atrás
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+ 27 - 27
locations/AndreiHanter.qsrc

@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ boyage = npc_dob[$boy]
 boyage = (boyage - boyage mod 10000) / 10000
 boyage = year - boyage
 
-'<center><b><font color = maroon>Andrew</font></b></center>'
+'<center><b><font color = maroon>Andrei</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/andreihanter.jpg"></center>'
-'Andrew is the leader of a group of hunters. He''s <<boyage>> years old. He is divorced and lives near Gadukino.'
+'Andrei is the leader of the group of hunters that frequent the woods and swamp by Gadukino. He''s <<boyage>> years old. He is divorced and lives near Gadukino.'
 if hantersAndreiQw < 0:'You and him have a bad relationship, because you offended him in the past.'
 if hantersAndreiQw >= 0 and hantersAndreiQw < 10:'You have a normal relationship with him.'
 if hantersAndreiQw >= 10 and hantersAndreiQw < 15:'You have friendly relations with him.'
@@ -24,8 +24,8 @@ act 'Chat':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/talk1.'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-	if hantersAndreiQw >= 0:'You chatted with Andrew, learning interesting tidbits about hunting.'
-	if hantersAndreiQw < 0:'You talk to Andrew. He makes it clear he''d rather not talk to you, but takes part in the conversation.'
+	if hantersAndreiQw >= 0:'You chatted with Andrei, learning interesting tidbits about hunting.'
+	if hantersAndreiQw < 0:'You talk to Andrei. He makes it clear he''d rather not talk to you, but takes part in the conversation anyway.'
 
 	act'Continue':gt $loc, $metka
 end
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ if hantersAndreiQw >= 10:
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt1.'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You flirt with Andrew. He doesn''t say so aloud but he likes the attention. You notice him checking you out unconciously.'
+			'You flirt with Andrei. He doesn''t say so aloud but he likes the attention. You notice him checking you out when he thinks you aren''t looking.'
 
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ if hantersAndreiQw >= 10:
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You smile sweetly at Andrew while you flirt and are caught off guard when he suddenly goes in for a kiss.'
+				'You smile sweetly at Andrei while you flirt and are caught off guard when he suddenly goes in for a kiss.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ if hantersAndreiQw >= 10:
 					gs 'stat'
 
                     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss2.jpg"></center>'
-                    'Your lips touch and your heart skips a beat. Andrew takes control and continues agressively, you find yourself responding to his whims.'
+                    'Your lips touch and your heart skips a beat. Andrei takes control and continues agressively, you find yourself responding to his whims.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ if hantersAndreiQw >= 10:
                             gs 'stat'
 
                             '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
-                            '"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you", Andrew whispered, when your lips finally parted. You nod eagerly and Andrew gently took you by the hand and led you to his bed.'
+                            '"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you", Andrei whispered, when your lips finally parted. You nod eagerly and Andrei gently took you by the hand and led you to his bed.'
 							act 'Go':gt 'HanterLoveSex','Andrei'
 						end
 					else
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ if hantersAndreiQw >= 10:
 							gs 'stat'
 
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
-							'"Maybe next time we won''t stop there, <<$pcs_nickname>>", Andrew says when your lips finally parted. "For now though, let''s get back."'
+							'"Maybe next time we won''t stop there, <<$pcs_nickname>>", Andrei says when your lips finally parted. "For now though, let''s get back."'
 
                             act'Continue':gt $loc, $metka
                         end
@@ -102,12 +102,12 @@ if hantersAndreiQw >= 10:
                     gs 'stat'
 
                     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-                    '"Sorry, Andrew, I can''t right now", you say. He leaves with an angry look on his face.'
+                    '"Sorry, Andrei, I can''t right now", you say. He leaves with an angry look on his face.'
 
-                    act'Go':gt $loc, $metka
+                    act'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
                 end
             else
-                act'Depart':gt $loc, $metka
+                act'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
             end
         end
     else
@@ -123,11 +123,11 @@ if hantersAndreiQw >= 10:
             gs 'stat'
 
             '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterlove1.'+rand(1,4)+'.jpg"></center>'
-            'You spend with Andrew time together. He can''t keep his hands and lips off of you as you lie there together. He is glad of your company, you see a look of satisfaction on his face and feel wonderful knowing you''re the one who put it there'
+            'You spend time together with Andrei. He can''t keep his hands and lips off of you as you lie there together. He is happy with your company, you see a look of satisfaction on his face and feel wonderful knowing you''re the one who put it there'
 
 			gs 'stat'
 
-            act'Depart':gt $loc, $metka
+            act'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
         end
     end
 end
@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ if hantersAndreiLove > 0 and pcs_horny >= 60:
 	    gs 'stat'
 
 	    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt2.'+rand(1,6)+'.jpg"></center>'
-	    'You catch Andrew''s eyes with yours and give him a look that leave no doubt what you want. He nods, places an arm around your shoulders, and leads you inside.'
+	    'You catch Andrei''s eyes with yours and give him a look that leaves no doubt what you want. He nods, places an arm around your shoulders, and leads you inside.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -155,18 +155,18 @@ if hantersAndreiLove > 0 and pcs_horny <= 60 and hantersAndreiQw >= 10 and temp
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterlove1.4.jpg"></center>'
-	'As soon as you walked up to Andrew he pulled you in for a kiss without saying a word. You have no time to get a word in as he pulls you along.'
+	'As soon as you walked up to Andrei he pulled you in for a kiss without saying a word. You have no time to get a word in as he pulls you along.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	act 'Go with Andrew':
+	act 'Go with Andrei':
 	    *clr & cla
 	    hantersAndreiQw += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterhands.jpg"></center>'
-		'You go with Andrew, his hands on your hips. You know how this ends and you really don`t mind.'
+		'You go with Andrei, his hands on your hips. You know how this ends and you really don`t mind.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -180,13 +180,13 @@ if hantersAndreiLove > 0 and pcs_horny <= 60 and hantersAndreiQw >= 10 and temp
 		gs 'stat'
 
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-        '"No, Andrew, not now." You quickly leave back the way you came.'
-	    act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
+        '"No, Andrei, not now." You quickly leave back the way you came.'
+	    act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
     end
 end
 
 if hantersAndreiLove > 0:
-    act 'Break up':
+    act 'Break up with Andrei':
 	    *clr & cla
         minut += 5
         hantersAndreiLove = 0
@@ -194,13 +194,13 @@ if hantersAndreiLove > 0:
 	    gs 'stat'
 
 	    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosila.jpg"></center>'
-	    '"Andrew, I feel that our relationship has no future. I''m breaking up with you", you said. You leave while trying not to look at him.'
+	    '"Andrei, I feel that our relationship has no future. I''m breaking up with you", you said. You leave while trying not to look at him.'
 
-	    act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
+	    act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
     end
 end
 
-act'Depart':gt $loc, $metka
+act'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
 
 if hantersAndreiQw < 10 and hantersAndreiLove > 0:
 	*clr & cla
@@ -209,11 +209,11 @@ if hantersAndreiQw < 10 and hantersAndreiLove > 0:
     hantersAndreiQw -= 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosil.jpg"></center>'
-	'You wanted to talk to Andrew, but he cuts in before you can say anything.'
+	'You wanted to talk to Andrei, but he cuts in before you can say anything.'
 	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, It''s over between us," he said firmly and walked away.'
-	'"Well , maybe it`s for the best," you thought, going in the other direction.'
+	'"Well , maybe it`s for the best," you think, as you leave in the other direction.'
 
-	act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
+	act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
 end
 
 --- AndreiHanter ---------------------------------

Diferenças do arquivo suprimidas por serem muito extensas
+ 115 - 115
locations/HanterLoveSex.qsrc


+ 20 - 21
locations/IgorHanter.qsrc

@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ gs 'stat'
 
 '<center><b><font color = maroon>Igor Anisimov</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/igorhanter.jpg"></center>'
-'Igor is a hunter along with the Sergey and Andrew and is here visiting Andrew. He''s <<boyage>> years old. He is not married and lives in the City Center..'
+'Igor is a hunter along with the Sergei and Andrei and is here visiting Andrei. He''s <<boyage>> years old. He is not married and lives in the City Center..'
 if hantersIgorQw < 0:'You and him have a bad relationship, because you offended him in the past.'
 if hantersIgorQw >= 0 and hantersIgorQw < 10:'You have a normal relationship with him.'
 if hantersIgorQw >= 10 and hantersIgorQw < 20:'You have friendly relations with him.'
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ act 'Chat':
     gs 'stat'
 
     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/talk1.'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-    if hantersIgorQw >= 0:'You have a chat with Igor, swapping to stories about life and love.'
+    if hantersIgorQw >= 0:'You have a chat with Igor, swapping stories about life and love.'
     if hantersIgorQw < 0:'You talk to Igor. He wears his heart on his sleeve, so you can tell he doesn''t like you.'
 
     act'Continue':gt $loc, $metka
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ if hantersIgorQw >= 10:
                 gs 'stat'
 
                 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss1.jpg"></center>'
-                'You smile sweetly at Igor. Suddenly Igor takes a kiss when you didnt expect it. You can feel his breath on your skin, smell the scent of the soap he used to clean himself. Suddenly, he looks embarrassed by what he just did and waits to see what your response will be.'
+                'You smile sweetly at Igor. Suddenly Igor steals a kiss when you didnt expect it. You can feel his breath on your skin, smell the scent of the soap he used to clean himself. Suddenly, he looks embarrassed by what he just did and waits to see what your response will be.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -92,9 +92,9 @@ if hantersIgorQw >= 10:
                             gs 'stat'
 
                             '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
-                            '"<<$pcs_nickname>>, Do you want to..?" Igor asked in a whisper, when your lips finally parted. "Yes" you say just as quietly and Igor gently took you by the hand and led inside.'
+                            '"<<$pcs_nickname>>, Do you want to..?" Igor asked in a whisper, when your lips finally parted. "Yes" you say just as quietly and Igor gently took your hand and led you inside.'
 
-							act 'Go':gt 'HanterLoveSex','Igor'
+							act 'Go inside':gt 'HanterLoveSex','Igor'
                         end
                     else
                         act'Continue':
@@ -118,10 +118,10 @@ if hantersIgorQw >= 10:
                     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
                     '"No, Igor, this isn''t right", you say, and try not to look at his sorrowful face as he leaves.'
 
-                    act'Go':gt $loc, $metka
+                    act'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
                 end
             else
-                act'Depart':gt $loc, $metka
+                act'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
             end
         end
     else
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ if hantersIgorQw >= 10:
 
 			gs 'stat'
 
-            act'Depart':gt $loc, $metka
+            act'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
         end
     end
 end
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ if hantersIgorLove > 0 and pcs_horny <= 60 and hantersIgorQw >= 10 and rand(1,5)
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterlove1.4.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walked up to Igor to spend time together, but he suddenly kisses and whispered,'
+	'You walked up to Igor to spend time together, but he suddenly kisses you and whispers,'
 	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s make love."'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ if hantersIgorLove > 0 and pcs_horny <= 60 and hantersIgorQw >= 10 and rand(1,5)
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt2.'+rand(4,6)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'Smiling you wink Igor. He gets a childlike grin on his face and takes leads you by the hand.'
+		'Smiling, you wink at Igor. He gets a childlike grin on his face and leads you by the hand to his bed.'
 		act 'Go':gt 'HanterLoveSex','Igor'
     end
 	act 'Decline':
@@ -194,14 +194,14 @@ if hantersIgorLove > 0 and pcs_horny <= 60 and hantersIgorQw >= 10 and rand(1,5)
 		gs 'stat'
 
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-        '"I can''t right now, Igor ," you say'
+        '"I can''t right now, Igor," you say'
 		'You see a look of regret on his face as you leave'
-	    act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
+	    act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
     end
 end
 
 if hantersIgorLove > 0:
-    act 'Part with a guy':
+    act 'Break up with Igor':
 	    *clr & cla
         minut += 5
         hantersIgorLove = 0
@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@ if hantersIgorLove > 0:
 	    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosila.jpg"></center>'
 	    '"We''re through Igor. I don''t think that this relationship was going where either of us wanted," you say. Igor looks completely blindsided but turns and leaves without saying a word.'
 
-	    act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
+	    act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
     end
 end
 
@@ -228,26 +228,26 @@ if hantersIgorQw < 10 and hantersIgorLove > 0:
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosil.jpg"></center>'
 	'You wanted to talk to Igor, but he cuts you off with an angry look.'
 	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I realized that our love wasn''t real and we need to break up," he says. As you try to find words to answer he turns and resolutely walks away.'
-	'"This may well be for the best," you thought, going in the other direction.'
+	'"This may well be for the best," you think, as you leave in the other direction.'
 
-	act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
+	act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
 end
 
-
 if hantersIgorLove < 2 and hantersIgorQw >= 35 and hantersKnowSlut = 0 and bfA < 1 and hour >= 8 and hour < 20 and pcs_apprnc >= 60:
     *clr & cla
     minut += 1
     gs 'stat'
 
     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss1.jpg"></center>'
-    'Suddenly Igor takes a kiss when you didnt expect it. You can feel his breath on your skin, smell the scent of the soap he used to clean himself. Suddenly, he looks embarrassed by what he just did and waits to see what your response will be.'
+    'Suddenly Igor kisses you when you didn''t expect it.'
+	'He looks a little nervous before gathering up his courage to ask you, "Will you be my girlfriend?"'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 1
 	gs 'stat'
 !! this part is not included properly into boyfriend system yet - rachels
 !! it could be simply replaced with gs 'boyfrend', 'start' but we need to check if a slot is empty
 !! at the moment I disable all the actions
-    act 'Answer kiss':
+    act 'Yes':
         *clr & cla
 	    !stopboy = 0
 !!	    $lover[lover_number] = $boy
@@ -308,7 +308,7 @@ if hantersIgorLove < 2 and hantersIgorQw >= 35 and hantersKnowSlut = 0 and bfA <
             end
         end
     end
-    act 'To remove the face':
+    act 'No':
         *clr & cla
         minut += 5
         hantersIgorQw -= 50
@@ -320,6 +320,5 @@ if hantersIgorLove < 2 and hantersIgorQw >= 35 and hantersKnowSlut = 0 and bfA <
         act'Go':gt $loc, $metka
     end
 end
-
 --- IgorHanter ---------------------------------
 

+ 178 - 178
locations/Meadow.qsrc

@@ -39,15 +39,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 		elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 8 and temper >= 15 and temp_md = 2:
 			'In the clearing you notice <a href="exec: gt ''Meadow'', ''2''">Mira with Mitka</a>.'
 		elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 11 and temper >= 10 and temp_md = 3:
-			'In the clearing you notice <a href="exec: gt ''Meadow'', ''3''">Mira with Kalambay</a>.'
+			'In the clearing you notice <a href="exec: gt ''Meadow'', ''3''">Mira with Kolyamba</a>.'
 		elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 11 and temper >= 10 and temp_md = 4:
-			'In the clearing you notice <a href="exec: gt ''Meadow'', ''4''">Mira with Vasya</a>.'
+			'In the clearing you notice <a href="exec: gt ''Meadow'', ''4''">Mira with Vasyan</a>.'
 		elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 11 and temper >= 25 and temp_md = 5:
-			'In the clearing you notice <a href="exec: gt ''Meadow'', ''5''">Mira with Vasya</a>.'
+			'In the clearing you notice <a href="exec: gt ''Meadow'', ''5''">Mira with Vasyan</a>.'
 		elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 11 and temper >= 12 and temp_md = 6:
-			'In the clearing you notice <a href="exec: gt ''Meadow'', ''6''">Mira with Mitka, Vasya and Kalambay</a>.'
+			'In the clearing you notice <a href="exec: gt ''Meadow'', ''6''">Mira with Mitka, Vasyan and Kolyamba</a>.'
 		elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 20 and temper >= 12 and temp_md = 7:
-			'In the clearing you notice <a href="exec: gt ''Meadow'', ''7''">Mira with Vasya and Kalambay</a>.'
+			'In the clearing you notice <a href="exec: gt ''Meadow'', ''7''">Mira with Vasyan and Kolyamba</a>.'
 		elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 30 and temper >= 20 and temp_md = 8:
 			'In the clearing you notice <a href="exec: gt ''Meadow'', ''8''">A bunch of half-naked hillbilly men</a>.'
 		elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 20 and temper >= 25 and temp_md = 9:
@@ -89,14 +89,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Mira':
 	gs 'stat'
 	if meadow = 2:
 	gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-		'"Wow! This place is awesome. My family and I have only been in the village a few months, but I have never heard anyone ever speaking about this place." Mira tells you. "Now I know where I can come to, when I want to be alone. You don''t mind, do you?"'
+		'"Wow! This place is awesome. My family and I have only been in the village a few months, but I have never heard anyone ever talk about this place." Mira tells you. "Now I know where I can come to, when I want to be alone. You don''t mind, do you?"'
 		act 'You allow her to come here on her own':
 			*clr & cla
 			meadow = 3
 			minut += 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-			'"I think you are a responsible person, Mira, you can come to the meadow whenever it pleases you. BUT, I want this place to remain a secret so you can never tell anyone about this place."'
+			'"I think you are a responsible person, Mira, you can come to the meadow whenever it pleases you. But, I want this place to remain a secret so you can never tell anyone about this place."'
 			'Mira, readily agrees and is as happy as a lark. Mira energetically nodding her head and says, "I''ll take this secret to the grave, I swear. If I don''t, then I''ll grant you three wishes, that I promise I will perform no matter what..."'
 			act 'Finish': gt 'Meadow', 'start'
 		end
@@ -121,10 +121,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Mira':
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira3.jpg"></center>'
 				end
-				'You agree, intrigued. You ask Mira what see has in mind? After a few seconds, she tells you she saw her father masturbateing that morning. She doesn''t think her father has been with a woman since her mother passed away. Mira is sorry for her father''s lose, hers too for that matter, but she has an overwhelming desire to help him. She can''t just do nothing.'
-				'You know Mira loves her father very much, you don''t know what you can do to help. You don''t want or need this drama in your life. First, you find out about migic being real. School is rapid approaching. You tell her that there is nothing you can do to help with her father''s depression. Mira''s pouts and stands with her arms crossed. Her whole demeaner is one of injured innocence.'
-				'A few minutes later, to your surprise, you feel an unexpectedly nice itch and a wicked heat rises up in your crotch of thoughts of his sucking Mira''s father.'
-				act 'Maybe a little followup wont hurt': gt 'Meadow', 'start'
+				'You agree, intrigued. You ask Mira what see has in mind? After a few seconds, she tells you she saw her father masturbating that morning. She doesn''t think her father has been with a woman since her mother passed away. Mira is sorry for her father''s loss, hers too for that matter, but she has an overwhelming desire to help him. She can''t just do nothing.'
+				'You know Mira loves her father very much, you don''t know what you can do to help. You don''t want or need this drama in your life. First, you find out about migic being real. School is rapid approaching. You tell her that there is nothing you can do to help with her father''s depression. Mira''s pouts and stands with her arms crossed. Her whole demeanor is one of injured innocence.'
+				'A few minutes later, to your surprise, you feel an unexpectedly nice itch and a wicked heat rises up in your crotch from thoughts of sucking Mira''s father cock.'
+				act 'Maybe a little follow up won''t hurt': gt 'Meadow', 'start'
 			end
 			act 'Not interested': gt 'Meadow', 'start'
 		end
@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Mira':
 				gs 'stat'
 				if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miralick.jpg"></center>'
-					'Mira immediately sits on the grass and waits until you get undress. Holding out your hand, you throw caution to the winds and push your panties aside, revealing your already dripping snatch...'
+					'Mira immediately sits on the grass and waits until you get undressed. Holding out your hand, you throw caution to the winds and push your panties aside, revealing your already dripping snatch...'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Further':
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Mira':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miralick2.jpg"></center>'
-							'A couple of minutes later you eagerly get rid of your panties wait, while Mira lowers her mouth to your pussy and lightly nibbles on your clit, suddenly you are in the midst of an orgasm.'
+							'A couple of minutes later you eagerly get rid of your panties, while Mira lowers her mouth to your pussy and lightly nibbles on your clit, suddenly you are in the midst of an orgasm.'
 							$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 							gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Mira':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miralick2.jpg"></center>'
-						'Mira obediently kneels at your feet and pulls starts licking your clit and starts to finger your pussy. After a few minutes of this treatment, Mira brings you to blazing orgasm.'
+						'Mira obediently kneels at your feet and starts licking your clit and fingering your pussy. After a few minutes of this treatment, Mira brings you to a blazing orgasm.'
 						$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 						gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 5, 'lesbian'
@@ -186,41 +186,41 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '0':
 	if temper < 20:
 		minut += 2
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr.jpg"></center>'
-		'You were about to approach her, but stop as she undoes her pants. You decide to watch it to what she does...'
+		'You were about to approach her, but stop as she undoes her pants. You decide to watch to what she does...'
 		act 'Watch':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr1.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mira, pulls harshly on her panties so that they bite deeply between her labia. Mira looks around again, but you are concealed in the dense thicket thus she fails to spot you watching...'
+			'Mira, pulls up harshly on her panties so that they bite deeply between her labia. Mira looks around again, but you are concealed in the dense thicket thus she fails to spot you watching...'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Watch':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr2.jpg"></center>'
-				'It is a couple of seconds slowly Stoke himself in the stomach, and then, staring eyes where-in the void, as slowly dives it myself in your pants, starting to RUB her crotch.'
+				'She pauses for a few seconds before slowly sliding her hand inside her panties to rub her crotch.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Watch':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr3.jpg"></center>'
-					'Suddenly she pulls out the perineum hand and look down my pants, that-there looking.'
+					'Next she pulls down her panties and you can see her wet pussy.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 1, 'lesbian'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Watch':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr4.jpg"></center>'
-						'But soon she gets tired of it and she strips off her jacket, but for her and blouse, exposing you her small Tits.'
+						'Then she removes her jacket, exposing her small tits.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'lesbian'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Watch':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr5.jpg"></center>'
-							'Removing the jacket, she-then again puts on a jacket and running one hand in panties, another begins to fondle Breasts.'
+							'She begins to fondle her breasts while continuing to finger herself.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'lesbian'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Watch':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr6.jpg"></center>'
-								'In a minute she provalivaetsja back to the nearest tree, her pants fall down to his knees and she, continuing with one hand to knead and squeeze her Breasts, another brings herself to orgasm. You watch a couple minutes in hopes of a sequel, but Mira has come to life and begins to get dressed, so, you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
+								'Finally she leans against the nearest tree as she brings herself to orgasm. You watch a couple minutes in hopes of a sequel, but Mira begins to get dressed, so, you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
 								gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'lesbian'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -233,31 +233,31 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '0':
 		end
 	elseif temper < 25:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr7.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mira is, leaning against a tree and starts to caress herself.'
+		'Mira is leaning against a tree and starts to caress herself.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Watch':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr8.jpg"></center>'
-			'It is a few minutes continues to play with them, and then stops and a few seconds looking thoughtfully at lying near a log...'
+			'She plays with herself for a few minutes before she stopping to look at a nearby log...'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Watch':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr9.jpg"></center>'
-				'Lastly, having made the decision, she approaches him and starts to remove her panties.'
+				'Having made her decision, she walk over to the log and starts to remove her panties.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Watch':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr10.jpg"></center>'
-					'Taking off panties, she gently sits down on a log and tries to swing it a little bit, checking, see, the strength...'
+					'Taking off her panties, she gently sits down on the log...'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 1, 'lesbian'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Watch':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr11.jpg"></center>'
-						'Sure, what accidentally falls down to him, Mira begins to caress herself, while not forgetting to look around, while, lastly, do not bring yourself to orgasm... You watch a couple minutes in hopes of a sequel, but Mira has come to life and begins to get dressed, so, you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
+						'Mira begins to caress herself again and brings herself to orgasm... You watch a couple minutes in hopes of a sequel, but Mira begins to get dressed, so, you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'lesbian'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -269,29 +269,29 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '0':
 	else
 		minut += 2
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr12.jpg"></center>'
-		'You have time just at the most interesting. Mira stands on a stump, which was lying near razdelennoe bedspread, and looking taller blouse, enjoying the cool breeze, running his hand over crotch himself.'
+		'You see Mira standing on a tree stump with a hand in her pants and her tits exposed enjoying the cool breeze.'
 		act 'Watch':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr13.jpg"></center>'
-			'But she soon gets bored and she, as if on purpose, turning to you ass, pulls off her skirt.'
+			'She soon gets bored and she, as if on purpose, turns her ass towards you and pulls off her skirt.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Watch':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr14.jpg"></center>'
-				'By doing this, she sits down on a stump and continues to caress herself, but after a couple of minutes and do this, it is a little...'
+				'After doing this, she sits down on the stump and continues to caress herself.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Watch':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr15.jpg"></center>'
-					'Walking up from the stump covers, Mira takes off her top and remains only in her panties.'
+					'Getting up from the stump, Mira takes off her top and is now only in her panties.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 1, 'lesbian'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Watch':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr16.jpg"></center>'
-						'Who immediately takes off after the blouse and left in the buff, squatting brings herself to orgasm. You watch a couple minutes in hopes of a sequel, but Mira has come to life and begins to get dressed, so, you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
+						'Finally she takes off her shirt, squats, and brings herself to orgasm. You watch a couple minutes in hopes of a sequel, but Mira begins to get dressed, so, you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'lesbian'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -308,18 +308,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	pcs_horny += 15
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowsex.jpg"></center>'
-	'They are talking to each other, along the way, undressing, but what exactly are they saying, you cannot hear from-for distances.'
+	'You see Mira and Mitka talking to each other. You can''t hear what they are saying from this far away, but they begin to undress in your meadow.'
 	act 'Watch':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowsex1.jpg"></center>'
-		'After a couple of minutes Mira lies before Mitka on the bedspread and dangles invitingly in front of him legs. The, not forcing myself to wait, immediately takes its way between her legs and starts roughly and strongly to bitch-slap her with your dick, why she starts loudly and oohing and podveshivat.'
+		'Mira lies before Mitka on the bedspread and opens her legs invitingly in front of him. Mitka wastes no time and immediately starts roughly fucking her pussy.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 15
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Watch':
 			*clr & cla
 			if npc_QW['A60'] = 2:npc_QW['A60'] = 3
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowsex2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Fifteen minutes Mitka finally cums Mira on his stomach and a little more rested, they begin to gather...'
+			'Fifteen minutes Mitka finally cums in Mira and leaves. Mira cleans up and then leaves as well.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -332,19 +332,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 	temp_md = RAND(0,1)
 	if temp_md = 0:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowanal.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mira ass jumps on a member mitkina, every time Selepas buttocks on his thighs, and loud postanyvat.'
+		'You see Mira lower her ass onto Mitka''s member and begin to bounce on top of him. You can hear the sound everytime her butt cheeks hit his thighs...'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'stat'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowanal1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mira, extending his arms buttocks, is on all fours and moaning loudly, when Mitka, completely removing, drives in her wide open ass my cock.'
+		'Mira get down on all fours and spreads her ass cheeks wide apart.She moans loudly as Mitka drives his cock into her ass.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'stat'
 	end
 	act 'Watch':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowanal2.jpg"></center>'
-		'After a couple of minutes Mitka much slaps her ass and Mira unfolds quickly, gets up on her knees before him and far sticking his tongue out, takes his face his warm sperm...'
+		'After a couple of minutes Mitka slaps her ass and pulls out of Mira. She gets up on her knees before him and sticks her tongue out as his warm cum shoots all over her face.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -355,14 +355,14 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 	if temper < 15:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj.jpg"></center>'
-		'She enthusiastically sucks his cock and sees the holes in her cheeks, when she sucks him into her throat...'
+		'She enthusiastically sucks his cock and takes his whole member down her throat...'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Watch':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj1.jpg"></center>'
-			'But, apparently, you''re a little late, because after a couple minutes calamba puts a hand Mira on the back of the head and with one sharp jerk skewer on yourself. At first she gags and coughs of oneoriginal, but then still cope with the waves of nausea and hanging out a little of the language, obediently swallows his cum...'
+			'But, apparently, you''re a little late, because after a couple minutes Kolyamba puts a hand on the back of Mira''s head and holds her while he cums down her throat. At first she gags, but eventually obediently swallows his cum...'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -370,7 +370,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj2.jpg"></center>'
-		'She''s in some flip-flops is cancer, sticking out in your face your ass, and moaning loudly, when kolamba slaps her crotch with my cock, pushing in her cunt his cock. Mira scratching his hands on the ground and arched like a cat, with that-then in between Kagami speaking Calamba. But the, it seems. isn''t paying absolutely no attention, continuing to batter in her pussy, and soon shall bring the girl to orgasm, a minute later and he cums...'
+		'All Mira has on is some flip-flops with her face in the ground and her ass in the air. She''s moaning loudly as Kolyamba pounds her pussy and cums inside of her...'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -381,28 +381,28 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = '4' or $ARGS[0] = '5':
 	if temper < 12:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj5.jpg"></center>'
-		'Vasya enthusiastically drives the cock in her mouth tied to a tree Mira. She gags and coughs, but at the same time, she moves her head towards the member. After a couple of minutes Vasya tilts back his head and with a blissful roar cums in her mouth...'
+		'Mira is tied to a tree as Vasyan enthusiastically drives his cock in her mouth. She gags and coughs, but at the same time, she moves her head farther down his member. After a couple of minutes Vasyan tilts back his head and with a blissful roar cums in her mouth...'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Leave':minut += 30 & gt 'gadukino'
 	elseif temper >= 12 and temper < 15:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj3.jpg"></center>'
-		'They are both completely naked and Mira, far sticking out his ass, feeling fucked kafousia the Vasya. After a couple of minute you see, as Mira onto the head on his cock and fades, swallowing sperm...'
+		'They are both completely naked and Mira is sticking her ass up in the air as she deepthroats Vasyan. After a couple of minutes you see Mira gulp down his sperm without even removing her mouth from his cock.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Leave':minut += 30 & gt 'gadukino'
 	elseif temper >= 15 and temper < 20:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj4.jpg"></center>'
-		'They are both completely naked and lustful Mira with squeals, like crazy, galloping on Vaskerom member. The long such rate does not stand up and unceremoniously throwing off his rider, cums on her buttocks...'
+		'They are both completely naked and Mira squeals with joy as she rides on Vasyan''s member. He does not last long and cums all over her butt as soon as he pulls out of her.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Leave':minut += 30 & gt 'gadukino'
 	elseif temper >= 20:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj6.jpg"></center>'
-		'Fully naked Mira, bent, facing Vasya and strenuously substitutes his ass, in which he drives his cock. Judging by her lustful moans, she quite like it, what have her in the ass, but after a couple of minutes Vasya takes from it his penis and pulls on her buttocks...'
+		'Mira is completely naked and bent over in front of Vasyan. She is really enjoying it as he thrusts into her ass. After a few minutes he pulls out and sprays cum all over back.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -425,11 +425,11 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = '6':
 	if temper < 20:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj7.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mira is kneeling between the three friends and with pleasure sucks their cocks. You see, how spokeout who in her mouth, who is on the breast, and who is just on the face...'
+		'Mira is kneeling in between the three friends and sucking their cocks with great pleasure. They are all crowded around her so you can''t make out who is in her mouth, who is grabbing her tits, and who is getting a handjob.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 15
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj8.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mira sits on his haunches between the three friends and happily chomps their members. You see, how spokeout who in her mouth, and who is just on the face...'
+		'Mira is kneeling in between the three friends and sucking their cocks with great pleasure. They are all crowded around her so you can''t make out who is in her mouth, who is grabbing her tits, and who is getting a handjob.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -441,15 +441,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '7':
 	npc_QW['A60'] += 1
 	if temper < 15:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj11.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mira sits on his haunches in front of one of the boys and just take in my mouth his cum. Licking and hiding in his pants his cock, it is the same with another prodelyvat...'
+		'Mira squats in front of one of the boys and takes his cock in her mouth while another gets ready for his turn.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 15
 	elseif temper >= 15 and temper < 25:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj10.jpg"></center>'
-		'Boys, the two of us fucking Mira in the mouth and pussy, about what-then with a laugh talking to each other. Mira also echoed them, their moans and placename... Fifteen minutes later they finish and begin to gather...'
+		'Two boys are fucking Mira in her mouth and pussy at the same time. The whole time they are laughing and talking while Mira moans in between them... Fifteen minutes later they finish with her and leave.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 15
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj9.jpg"></center>'
-		'All three of them almost naked and one of them, Mira just sucks, and the second, all appearances, already finished, but because just touching her Breasts and there it goes hand between her lustful rasstavlennyh feet...'
+		'Mira and the two boys she is with are all naked. She is sucking one of them while another plays with her breasts and pusy from behind.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 15
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -460,7 +460,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = '8':
 	npc_QW['A60'] += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj12.jpg"></center>'
-	'Miras for their bodies almost invisible, only a piece of naked ass yeah swaying feet in sneakers. You half an hour watching, as the men take turns fucking weak and tired Mira, but then you get bored and you decide to leave...'
+	'Mira is almost invisible with all the bodies around her. You can only see her naked ass and feet swaying in the air. You spend half an hour watching, as the men take turns fucking Mira until she is all tired out. You get bored watching them and leave.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 30
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -469,7 +469,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '9':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadows.jpg"></center>'
-	'She is on all fours with his back to you and painful, but enough moaning, fingering your ass a ear of corn.'
+	'You see Mira on all fours with her back to you. She is shoving an ear of corn in her ass which looks painful but she is still moaning.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 30
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -482,12 +482,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_mitka':
 	minut += 5
 	pcs_horny += 15
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowsex.jpg"></center>'
-	'Out on the meadow, you suddenly notice Mira Mitya. They talk among themselves, undressing along the way, but what exactly are they saying, you cannot hear because of the distance.'
+	'You see Mira and Mitka talking to each other. You can''t hear what they are saying from this far away, but they begin to undress in your meadow.'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Watch':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowsex1.jpg"></center>'
-		'After a couple of minutes before Miroslav Mitka goes on and puts a blanket invitingly in front of him legs. He was not forcing himself to wait, he immediately takes its way between her legs and starts roughly and badly to slam into her his cock, making loud and she starts to moan and podpisyvat.'
+		'Mira lies before Mitka on the bedspread and opens her legs invitingly in front of him. Mitka wastes no time and immediately starts roughly fucking her pussy.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Watch':
@@ -495,7 +495,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_mitka':
 			if npc_QW['A60'] = 2:npc_QW['A60'] = 3
 			mirasextimes += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowsex2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Fifteen minutes through Miroslav Mitka finally cums on her stomach and a little more rested, they begin to gather...'
+			'Fifteen minutes Mitka finally cums in Mira and leaves. Mira cleans up and then leaves as well.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 15
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -509,7 +509,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_gang':
 	mirasextimes += 1
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj12.jpg"></center>'
-	'Miras for their bodies is almost not visible, only a piece of a naked ass bobbing Yes in sneakers feet. You half an hour watching the guys take turns fucking weak and tired Miroslav, but then you get bored and you decide to leave...'
+	'Mira is almost invisible with all the bodies around her. You can only see her naked ass and feet swaying in the air. You spend half an hour watching, as the men take turns fucking Mira until she is all tired out. You get bored watching them and leave.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 30
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -522,7 +522,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miraperversion11':
 	npc_QW['A60'] = 12
 	gs 'stat'
 	'You don''t know where to begin, so you stay silent just staring at Mira. Mira at the same time is looking at her feet and blushing hard.'
-	'Finally you gather your wits and ask what happened last night? Mira, still no looking you in the eye, stammers out that she doesn''t know why she did it. She says that she was out of control.'
+	'Finally you gather your wits and ask what happened last night? Mira, still not looking you in the eye, stammers out that she doesn''t know why she did it. She says that she was out of control.'
 	'But you were also drunk, and did not do what she did. Her face sinks with shame and she continues to look at the ground.'
 	'You speak with her awhile and somehow manage to soothe her and tell her that, she should just bite the bullet and move on.'
 	'Mira thanks you most sincerely for your support, but her eyes still look down....'
@@ -533,8 +533,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesb_mira':
 	miraday = daystart
 	mirahorny = rand(0,80)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirakiss1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Glade you never came to Mira.'
-	'"Mira, I want you," you whispered in her ear and kissed her passionately on the lips.'
+	'"I''m glad you came Mira" you say.'
+	'You continue, "Mira, I want you," you whispered in her ear and kissed her passionately on the lips.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	if mirahorny < 20:act 'Further':gt 'mirasex','mirakiss'
@@ -545,8 +545,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_lesb':
 	miraday = daystart
 	mirahorny = rand(40,80)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirakiss4.jpg"></center>'
-	'In the meadow you went to Mira, smiling mischievously.'
-	'" - <<$pcs_nickname>>, get freaky?" - she whispered in your ear and pinning you to the tree, dug kiss.'
+	'In the meadow Mira walks up to you, smiling mischievously.'
+	'" - <<$pcs_nickname>>, let me see your pussy" - she whispered in your ear, while pinning you to the tree and kissing your lips.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	if pcs_horny < 20:act 'Agree':gt 'mirasex','mirakiss'
@@ -558,9 +558,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_lesb':
 			pcs_horny -= 5
 			npc_rel['A60'] -= 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira_lesb_talk2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You had to prioritity a lot of effort to break out of her embrace.'
-			'" - Mira, come now, " said you, seeing the silent question in her eyes. - The mood is not very.'
-			'"- You`re beastly, " she sulked resentfully lips in response.'
+			'You tried hard to break out of her embrace.'
+			'" - Mira, come on now, " you said, seeing the silent question in her eyes. - The mood is not right.'
+			'"- You`re mean, " she sulked at you in response.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Further':gt $loc, $metka
@@ -575,17 +575,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesb_talk_mira1':
 	gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 
 	'You are a long time silent, looking at Mira, not knowing how to start the conversation. But then still dare.'
-	' - Mira, you`re all the boys in our gang, gave, you - start. - So?'
-	' - Yeah, is a bit embarrassed replied Miroslava and suspiciously staring at you. - What?'
-	' - Yeah I was thinking simple, all gave, all served, and the friend was forgotten, - with a reproach in his voice said you.'
-	' - So you`re not a guy like you want to do that?, - surprised Mira.'
-	' - And then you`re young and you don`t know how it girls girls give pleasure, ` replied you her.'
-	' - But I don`t do that, not this... uh... not a lesbian - I rounded eyes of Mira. But flushed cheeks and shining eyes, you realize that the idea that she is going to lick a girl very excited.'
-	' - Don`t be like Mirka, you`re not going, " continued you to push her. - In short, or are you now doing to me nice, or I`m leaving. But then you`d only communicate with the Hui village men about me you can forget.'
-	'Mira thought, funny frowned. But it did not last long, the excitement and the prospect of losing a friend did the trick.'
+	' - Mira, you let all the boys in our village fuck you. Why?'
+	' - Yeah, so what?, Mira is bit embarrassed as she replies.'
+	' - I was thinking that you served all the boys but you forgot about your best friend.'
+	' - You are not a guy thought so why would want to do that?, Mira answered surprised.'
+	' - Everyone knows girls know the best ways to pleasure other girls, you shoot back.'
+	' - But I don`t do that, I''m not a lesbian said Mira.'
+	'She may not be a lesbian but you can tell by her flushed cheeks and shaky voice that she is finding the idea very arousing.'
+	' - Don''t worry I won''t be mean or rough like Mitka, you continue to push her. We can lick each other or I''m leaving and you can go back to the village boys instead and forget about me.'
+	'Mira thought for a second but it was an easy choice. She didn''t want to lose your friendship.'
 	' - Well <<$pcs_nickname>>, I`ll do it, " she said falling to her knees.'
 
-	act 'Further':gt 'mirasex','miralick_first'
+	act 'Let Mira lick you':gt 'mirasex','miralick_first'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lesb_talk_mira2':
@@ -594,16 +595,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesb_talk_mira2':
 	mirasex = 2
 	gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 	gs 'stat'
-	'You for a long time looking at Mira with a malicious smile on his lips, then begin the conversation.'
-	' - Well, Mirka, congratulations, you said. - You are now the same whore as I. All the boys gave. So?'
+	'You walk up to Mira with a malicious smile on your face.'
+	' - Well, Mira, congratulations, you said. - You are now the same whore as me. All the boys fucked you too.'
 	'She tried to keep silent, but you are not satisfied.'
-	' - So or not?, - you continued to insist on an answer.'
-	' - Well, not while she acknowledged.'
-	' - You know what that means?, - continued you insinuating voice.'
+	' - So did they or did they not?, - you insist on an answer.'
+	' - Well, yes - she acknowledged.'
+	' - You know what that means?, - you continue.'
 	' - What? - blushing terribly asked Mira, although she already guessed where this is going.'
-	' - It`s time to return the favor, - a triumphant tone replied you and leaning on a tree, beckoned her with your finger. - You can start.'
-	'Mira hesitated a couple of moments, as if pondering something, and then sat down in front of you on your knees.'
-	act 'Further':gt 'mirasex','miralick_first'
+	' - It`s time to return the favor, - you replied in a triumphant tone while leaning on a tree, and beckoned her with your finger. - You can start.'
+	'Mira hesitated a couple of moments, as if pondering something, and then sat down in front of you on her knees.'
+	act 'Let Mira lick you':gt 'mirasex','miralick_first'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lesb_talk_mira3':
@@ -614,10 +615,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesb_talk_mira3':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'You leaned on the tree and beckoned Mira the finger.'
-	'" - Need to be tongue in cheek Mira, " said you. - Get.'
-	'She, already accustomed to, fell in front of you on your knees.'
+	'" - Get over her Mira. You know what to do"'
+	'She already know what to do and got down on her knees in front of you.'
 
-	act 'Further':gt 'mirasex','miralick_first'
+	act 'Let Mira lick you':gt 'mirasex','miralick_first'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_lesb_talk1':
@@ -630,47 +631,47 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_lesb_talk1':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira_lesb_talk.jpg"></center>'
 	if MiraLoc ! 2:'In the clearing you met Mira. Seeing you, she immediately came up with a sly smile on his lips.'
 	if MiraLoc = 2:'When you came into the clearing, Mira immediately came to you with a sly smile on his lips.'
-	'" - <<$pcs_nickname>>, you`re all the boys in our gang, gave, " she began. - So?'
-	'You tried to keep silent, but it didn`t suit Mira.'
-	'" - So or not?," - continued to insist she answer.'
-	'" - Well, is not even acknowledged you."'
-	'" - Yeah I was thinking simple, all gave, all served, and the friend forgot, " continued Mira looking you in the eye.'
+	'" - <<$pcs_nickname>>, you fucked all the boys in the village now.'
+	'You tried to keep silent, but Mira wouldn''t let it go.'
+	'" - So did they or did they not?," - she insisted you answer.'
+	'" - Well, yeah so?"'
+	'" - I was thinking you served all the boys and forgot about your best friend." Mira said looking you in the eye.'
 	if lesbian = 0:
-		'" - So you`re not a guy like you want to do that?," - surprised you.'
-		'" - And then you`re young and you don`t know how it girls girls give pleasure," she answered you.'
+		'" - So you''re not a guy. Do you want to do that?," - you.say surprised'
+		'" - Everyone knows girls know the best ways to pleasure girls," she answered you.'
 	else
-		'You although already guessed where she was going, but still hesitated.'
-		'" - Come on, don`t break <<$pcs_nickname>>, it doesn`t suit you, " she continued to push to get comfortable on the nearest stone.'
+		'You already guessed where she was going with this, but still hesitated.'
+		'" - Come on, don`t sulk <<$pcs_nickname>>, it doesn`t suit you, " she continued to get comfortable on the nearest stone.'
 		'" - Well Mira, I`ll do it, " you said falling on his knees.'
-		'"In the end, why not make her friend pleased?" - thought you talking about yourself.'
+		'"In the end, why not make her friend pleased?" - you thought to yourself.'
 	end
 	if lesbian = 0:
-		act 'Further':
+		act 'Hesitate':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			pcs_horny += 30
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira_lesb_talk2.jpg"></center>'
-			'From these words, you stared dumbfounded Mira.'
-			'" - But I don`t do that, not this... uh... not a lesbian, " I tried to deny you. But the idea that you will go down on a girl right here in the middle of the clearing, forcing your pussy treacherously sasodei.'
-			act 'Further':
+			'After these words, you stared dumbfounded Mira.'
+			'" - But I don`t do that, I''m not a lesbian, " you try to find a way out of this. But the idea that you will go down on a girl right here in the middle of the clearing, makes your pussy soaking wet even if you didn''t want it to.'
+			act 'Try to convince Mira':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
 				pcs_horny += 10
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira_lesb_talk3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You still hoped, looking at Mira that she changes her mind.'
-				'" - Come on, don`t break <<$pcs_nickname>>," - said Mira, taking you for a t-shirt and pulling him to the nearest stone. - "Little Sluts should always bring joy to my friends."'
-				'Sitting on the she looked eagerly at you:'
-				'" - Well what are you waiting, I`m waiting."'
-				'" - Well Mira, I`ll do it, " you finally gave in, sinking to his knees. "In the end, why not make her friend pleased?" - thinking to himself.'
-				act 'Further':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_start'
+				'You still hoped, that you could change Mira''s mind.'
+				'" - Come on, don`t be a prude now <<$pcs_nickname>>," - said Mira, taking you by the shirt and pulling you to the nearest stone. - "Sluts should always pleasure their friends first."'
+				'Sitting on the stone she looked eagerly at you:'
+				'" - Well what are you waiting for, I`m ready."'
+				'" - Well Mira, I`ll do it, " you finally gave in, sinking to his knees. "In the end, why not help Mira out?" - thinking to himself.'
+				act 'Lick Mira':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_start'
 			end
 		end
 	else
-		act 'Further':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_first'
+		act 'Lick Mira':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_first'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -681,17 +682,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_lesb_talk2':
 	mirahorny = rand(0,80)
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira_lesb_talk.jpg"></center>'
-	'When you came into the clearing, Mira immediately came to you with a sly smile on his lips.'
-	'" - Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>, congratulations, " she said. - You are now the same whore as I. All the boys gave. So?'
-	'You tried to keep silent, but it didn`t suit Mira.'
-	'"- So or not?," - continued to insist she answer.'
-	'" - Well, is not even acknowledged you."'
-	' "- You know what that means?," - continued Mira insinuating voice.'
-	'" - What?," - you asked, although already guessed where this is going.'
-	'" - It`s time to return the favor," - a triumphant tone replied Mira and began to get comfortable on the nearest stone. - You can start.'
-	'"Well, everything is logical.", - you thought falling on his knees before her.'
-	act 'Further':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_first'
+	'Mira walks up toyou with a malicious smile on her face.'
+	' - Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>, congratulations, she said. - You are now the same whore as me. All the boys fucked you too.'
+	'You tried to keep silent, but she is not satisfied.'
+	' - So did they or did they not?, - she insists on an answer.'
+	' - Well, yes - you acknowledged.'
+	' - You know what that means?, - she continues.'
+	' - What? - blushing terribly you ask, although you already guessed where this is going.'
+	' - It`s time to return the favor, - a triumphant tone she replied leaning on a tree, beckoned you with her finger. - You can start.'
+	'You hesitated a couple of moments, as if pondering something, and then sat down in front of her on your knees.'
+	act 'Lick Mira':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_first'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_lesb_talk3':
@@ -705,15 +705,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_lesb_talk3':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira_lesb_talk3.jpg"></center>'
 	if MiraLoc ! 2:
 		'In the clearing you met Mira. Seeing you, she immediately came to you with an excited face.'
-		'" - But where are you <<$pcs_nickname>>, I was looking for you, looking for, " she said. - Need to be tongue in cheek.'
-		'And started to get comfortable.'
+		'" - But where are you <<$pcs_nickname>>, I was looking for you," she said. - Get over here and help me out.'
 	else
 		'When you came into the clearing, Mira immediately turned to you with an excited face.'
-		'" - Need to be tongue in cheek <<$pcs_nickname>>," - she said and started to get comfortable. -" Get."'
+		'" - Come help me out, <<$pcs_nickname>>," - she said and started to get comfortable.'
 	end
-	'You are already familiar fell on his knees before her.'
+	'You are already familiar with how this works and get on your knees before her.'
 
-	act 'Further':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_first'
+	act 'Lick Mira':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_first'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_lesb_talk4':
@@ -725,12 +724,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_lesb_talk4':
 	gs 'stat'
 	gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 
-	'Walking through the village you meet Mira. Seeing you, she immediately came to you with an excited face.'
-	'" - But where are you <<$pcs_nickname>>, I was looking for you, looking for, " she said. - "Let`s go take a walk in our meadow."'
-	'And grabbing you by the hand, literally dragged behind him. You walked behind Mira, hearing ahead of her excited breath, knowing full well why she leads you there. Arriving at the clearing of Mira immediately turned to you with an excited face.'
-	'" - Need to be tongue in cheek <<$pcs_nickname>>," - she said and started to get comfortable. -" Get."'
-	'You are already familiar fell on his knees before her.'
-	act 'Further':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_first'
+	'Walking through the village you meet Mira. Seeing you, she immediately came up to you with an excited face.'
+	'" - But where were you <<$pcs_nickname>>, I was looking for you," she said. - "Let`s go take a walk in our meadow."'
+	'She grabs you by the hand, and literally dragged you behind her. You can hear Mira''s excited breath and know full well why she is taking you to the meadow.'
+	'When you came into the clearing, Mira immediately turned to you with an excited face.'
+		'" - Come help me out, <<$pcs_nickname>>," - she said and started to get comfortable.'
+	'You are already familiar with how this works and get on your knees before her.'
+	act 'Lick Mira':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_first'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
@@ -740,45 +740,45 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 2
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr.jpg"></center>'
-		'You were about to approach her, but you are surprised to see her start to unzips her pants... You are excited by what you are seeing and decide to watch...'
+		'You are about to approach her, but stop as she undoes her pants. You decide to watch to what she does...'
 		act 'Watch':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr1.jpg"></center>'
-			'Miroslava, with the force lifting the panties so that they cut between her labia, furtively looks around, but, of course, because of the dense vegetation does not notice, and therefore continues...'
+			'Mira, pulls up harshly on her panties so that they bite deeply between her labia. Mira looks around again, but you are concealed in the dense thicket thus she fails to spot you watching...'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Watch':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr2.jpg"></center>'
-				'A couple of seconds she slowly strokes herself on his stomach, and after staring gaze somewhere in the void, as slowly it dives my pants, starting to stroke the crotch.'
+				'She pauses for a few seconds before slowly sliding her hand inside her panties to rub her crotch.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Watch':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr3.jpg"></center>'
-					'Suddenly, she pulls the crotch of the hand, and look down my pants, there is something looking out.'
+					'Next she pulls down her panties and you can see her wet pussy.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 1, 'lesbian'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Watch':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr4.jpg"></center>'
-						'But soon she is bored and she takes off her jacket and blouse, exposing you her small Tits.'
+						'Then she removes her jacket, exposing her small tits.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'lesbian'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Watch':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr5.jpg"></center>'
-							'Removing the jacket, she again puts on a jacket and running one hand into her panties, the other begins to caress Breasts.'
+							'She begins to fondle her breasts while continuing to finger herself.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'lesbian'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Watch':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr6.jpg"></center>'
-								'A minute later she perevalivaetsya back to the nearest tree, her pants fall down to his knees and she continued with one hand to knead and squeeze her Breasts, the other brings themselves to orgasm. You see a couple of minutes in hope for a sequel, but already Mira wakes up and starts to dress, so you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
+								'Finally she leans against the nearest tree as she brings herself to orgasm. You watch a couple minutes in hopes of a sequel, but Mira begins to get dressed, so, you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
 								gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'lesbian'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
-								act 'Go':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
+								act 'Leave':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -788,35 +788,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 	elseif meadow = 3 and MiraLoc = 0 and mirasextimes < 15 and temper >= 20 and temper < 25 and sunWeather = 1 and temp_md = 0:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr7.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mira is standing, leaning against a tree and starts to caress herself.'
+		'Mira is leaning against a tree and starts to caress herself.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Watch':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr8.jpg"></center>'
-			'A few minutes she continues to play with herself, and then stops a moment and looks thoughtfully at lying near a log...'
+			'She plays with herself for a few minutes before she stopping to look at a nearby log...'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Watch':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr9.jpg"></center>'
-				'Finally, having made the decision, she approaches him and starts to remove her panties.'
+				'Having made her decision, she walk over to the log and starts to remove her panties.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Watch':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr10.jpg"></center>'
-					'Taking off panties, she gently sits down on a log and tries to swing it a little bit, checking to see that the strength...'
+					'Taking off her panties, she gently sits down on the log...'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 1, 'lesbian'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Watch':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr11.jpg"></center>'
-						'Making sure that accidentally fall to him, Mira begins to caress herself, while not forgetting to look around, before finally brings himself to orgasm... You see a couple of minutes in hope for a sequel, but already Mira wakes up and starts to dress, so you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
+						'Mira begins to caress herself again and brings herself to orgasm... You watch a couple minutes in hopes of a sequel, but Mira begins to get dressed, so, you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'lesbian'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
-						act 'Go':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
+						act 'Leave':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -825,33 +825,33 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 2
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr12.jpg"></center>'
-		'You have time just at the most interesting. Mira stands on a stump, near which lies rasteenie veil, and looking higher up the blouse, enjoying the cool breeze, running his hand over the crotch himself.'
+		'You see Mira standing on a tree stump with a hand in her pants and her tits exposed enjoying the cool breeze.'
 		act 'Watch':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr13.jpg"></center>'
-			'But she is soon bored and she, as if on purpose, turning to you ass, pulls off her skirt.'
+			'She soon gets bored and she, as if on purpose, turns her ass towards you and pulls off her skirt.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Watch':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr14.jpg"></center>'
-				'That done, she sits down on a tree stump and continues to fondle herself, but after a couple of minutes and do this, it is a little...'
+				'After doing this, she sits down on the stump and continues to caress herself.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Watch':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr15.jpg"></center>'
-					'Walking up from the stump covered, Mira takes off her blouse and remains only in her panties.'
+					'Getting up from the stump, Mira takes off her top and is now only in her panties.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 1, 'lesbian'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Watch':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowmastr16.jpg"></center>'
-						'Which immediately takes off after the blouse and remained in the buff, squatting brings herself to orgasm. You see a couple of minutes in hope for a sequel, but already Mira wakes up and starts to dress, so you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
+						'Finally she takes off her shirt, squats, and brings herself to orgasm. You watch a couple minutes in hopes of a sequel, but Mira begins to get dressed, so, you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'lesbian'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
-						act 'Go':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
+						act 'Leave':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -863,11 +863,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 		pcs_horny += 15
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowsex.jpg"></center>'
-		'They talk among themselves, undressing along the way, but what exactly are they saying, you cannot hear because of the distance.'
+		'You see Mira and Mitka talking to each other. You can''t hear what they are saying from this far away, but they begin to undress in your meadow.'
 		act 'Watch':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowsex1.jpg"></center>'
-			'After a couple of minutes before Miroslav Mitka goes on and puts a blanket invitingly in front of him legs. He was not forcing himself to wait, he immediately takes its way between her legs and starts roughly and badly to slam into her his cock, making loud and she starts to moan and podpisyvat.'
+			'Mira lies before Mitka on the bedspread and opens her legs invitingly in front of him. Mitka wastes no time and immediately starts roughly fucking her pussy.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Watch':
@@ -875,11 +875,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 				if npc_QW['A60'] = 2:npc_QW['A60'] = 3
 				mirasextimes += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadowsex2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Fifteen minutes through Miroslav Mitka finally cums on her stomach and a little more rested, they begin to gather...'
+				'Fifteen minutes Mitka finally cums in Mira and leaves. Mira cleans up and then leaves as well.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Go':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
+				act 'Leave':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -889,12 +889,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 		gs 'stat'
 		if temp_md = 0:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowanal.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mira jumping ass on mitkina member, every time Selepas buttocks on his thighs, and loudly postanimal.'
+			'You see Mira lower her ass onto Mitka''s member and begin to bounce on top of him. You can hear the sound everytime her butt cheeks hit his thighs...'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 			gs 'stat'
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowanal1.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mirka, extending his arms buttocks, is on all fours and moaning loudly, when Mitka, completely removing, drives in her wide open ass my cock.'
+			'Mira get down on all fours and spreads her ass cheeks wide apart.She moans loudly as Mitka drives his cock into her ass.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 			gs 'stat'
 		end
@@ -902,39 +902,39 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 			*clr & cla
 			mirasextimes += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowanal2.jpg"></center>'
-			'After a couple of minutes Mitka strongly slaps her ass and Mira quickly turns around gets on her knees before him and far out his tongue, takes his face in his warm cum...'
+			'After a couple of minutes Mitka slaps her ass and pulls out of Mira. She gets up on her knees before him and sticks her tongue out as his warm cum shoots all over her face.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
-			act 'Go':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
+			act 'Leave':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
 		end
 	end
 	if meadow = 3 and MiraLoc = 0 and npc_QW['A60'] >= 11 and temper >= 15 and sunWeather = 1 and temp_md = 3:
 		*clr & cla
 		if temper < 15:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj.jpg"></center>'
-			'She enthusiastically sucks his cock and sees the pits in her cheeks when she sucks him into her throat...'
+			'She enthusiastically sucks his cock and takes his whole member down her throat...'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Watch':
 				*clr & cla
 				mirasextimes += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj1.jpg"></center>'
-				'But, apparently, you`re a little late, because after a couple of minutes calamba Miroslav puts his hand on the back of the head and with one sharp jerk skewer on yourself. She gags and coughs otnositelnosti, but then cope with the waves of nausea and slightly sticking out his tongue, obediently swallows his cum...'
+				'But, apparently, you''re a little late, because after a couple minutes Kolyamba puts a hand on the back of Mira''s head and holds her while he cums down her throat. At first she gags, but eventually obediently swallows his cum...'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Go':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
+				act 'Leave':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
 			end
 		else
 			*clr & cla
 			mirasextimes += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj2.jpg"></center>'
-			'She flops some is doggy sticking out in your face your ass, and moaning loudly, when kolamba slaps her crotch with my cock, pushing into her vagina his penis. Miroslav scratching his hands on the ground and arched like a cat, with something in between Kagami speaking Calamba. But that, it seems. not paying absolutely no attention, continuing to batter her pussy, and soon brought the girl to orgasm and then cums himself...'
+			'All Mira has on is some flip-flops with her face in the ground and her ass in the air. She''s moaning loudly as Kolyamba pounds her pussy and cums inside of her...'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
-			act 'Go':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
+			act 'Leave':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
 		end
 	end
 	if meadow = 3 and MiraLoc = 0 and npc_QW['A60'] >= 11 and temper >= 15 and sunWeather = 1 and temp_md = 4:
@@ -943,19 +943,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 		if temper < 20:
 			mirasextimes += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj5.jpg"></center>'
-			'Vasya enthusiastically drives the cock in her mouth, Mira is tied to a tree. She gags and coughs, but at the same time, she moves towards the head member. After a couple of minutes Vasya tilts back his head and roar with blissful cums in her mouth...'
+			'Mira is tied to a tree as Vasyan enthusiastically drives his cock in her mouth. She gags and coughs, but at the same time, she moves her head farther down his member. After a couple of minutes Vasyan tilts back his head and with a blissful roar cums in her mouth...'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
-			act 'Go':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
+			act 'Leave':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
 		else
 			mirasextimes += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj6.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mira fully naked, bends over, standing in front of Vasya and intensively exposes her ass to him, Vasya drives his cock deep into your ass. Judging by her lustful moans, she likes having her ass violated and after a couple of minutes Vasya pulls out of her ass and cums on her backside.'
+			'Mira is completely naked and bent over in front of Vasyan. She is really enjoying it as he thrusts into her ass. After a few minutes he pulls out and sprays cum all over back.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
-			act 'Go':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
+			act 'Leave':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
 		end
 	end
 	if meadow = 3 and MiraLoc = 0 and npc_QW['A60'] >= 11 and temper >= 15 and sunWeather = 1 and temp_md = 5:
@@ -964,18 +964,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 		if temper < 20:
 			mirasextimes += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj3.jpg"></center>'
-			'They are both completely naked and Mira, far from sticking out his ass, feeling kafousia fucked by Vasya. After a couple of minute you see how Miroslav onto the head on his cock and calms down, swallowing sperm...'
+			'They are both completely naked and Mira is sticking her ass up in the air as she deepthroats Vasyan. After a couple of minutes you see Mira gulp down his sperm without even removing her mouth from his cock.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
-			act 'Go':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
+			act 'Leave':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj4.jpg"></center>'
-			'They are both completely naked and lustful Mira squeals like crazy, jumping on Vasicinol member. The long such rate does not stand up and unceremoniously dropping off his rider cums on her buttocks...'
+			'They are both completely naked and Mira squeals with joy as she rides on Vasyan''s member. He does not last long and cums all over her butt as soon as he pulls out of her.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
-			act 'Go':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
+			act 'Leave':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
 		end
 	end
 	if meadow = 3 and MiraLoc = 0 and npc_QW['A60'] >= 11 and temper >= 15 and sunWeather = 1 and temp_md = 6:
@@ -983,56 +983,56 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 		mirasextimes += 1
 		if temper < 20:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj7.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mira is kneeling between the three friends and with pleasure sucking their cocks. You watch as they take turns in who spokeout her mouth, who is on the breast, and who is just on the face...'
+			'Mira is kneeling in between the three friends and sucking their cocks with great pleasure. They are all crowded around her so you can''t make out who is in her mouth, who is grabbing her tits, and who is getting a handjob.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj8.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mira squats between the three friends and happily chomps their members. You watch as they take turns in who spokeout her mouth, and who is just on the face...'
+			'Mira is kneeling in between the three friends and sucking their cocks with great pleasure. They are all crowded around her so you can''t make out who is in her mouth, who is grabbing her tits, and who is getting a handjob.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		end
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Go':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
+		act 'Leave':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
 	end
 	if meadow = 3 and MiraLoc = 0 and npc_QW['A60'] >= 11 and temper >= 15 and sunWeather = 1 and temp_md = 7:
 		*clr & cla
 		if npc_QW['A60'] < 20: npc_QW['A60'] += 1
 		if temper < 20:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj11.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mira squats in front of one of the boys and just take in my mouth his cum. Licking and hiding in his pants his cock, it`s the same with other prodelyvat...'
+			'Mira squats in front of one of the boys and takes his cock in her mouth while another gets ready for his turn.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		elseif temper >= 20 and temper < 25:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj10.jpg"></center>'
-			'Guys, the two of us fucking Peace in her mouth and her pussy, something with a laugh talking to each other. Miroslav also echoed them, their moans and placename... Fifteen minutes later they finish and start packing...'
+			'Two boys are fucking Mira in her mouth and pussy at the same time. The whole time they are laughing and talking while Mira moans in between them... Fifteen minutes later they finish with her and leave.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj9.jpg"></center>'
-			'All three of them almost naked and one of them, Mira just sucks, and the second, apparently, already finished, but because just touching her Breasts and there it goes hand from between her Horny legs rasstavlennyh...'
+			'Mira and the two boys she is with are all naked. She is sucking one of them while another plays with her breasts and pussy from behind.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		end
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Go':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
+		act 'Leave':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
 	end
 	if meadow = 3 and MiraLoc = 0 and npc_QW['A60'] > 30 and temper >= 15 and sunWeather = 1 and temp_md = 8:
 		*clr & cla
 		npc_QW['A60'] += 1
 		mirasextimes += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj12.jpg"></center>'
-		'Miras for their bodies is almost not visible, only a piece of a naked ass bobbing Yes in sneakers feet. You half an hour watching the guys take turns fucking weak and tired Miroslav, but then you get bored and you decide to leave...'
+		'Mira is almost invisible with all the bodies around her. You can only see her naked ass and feet swaying in the air. You spend half an hour watching, as the men take turns fucking Mira until she is all tired out. You get bored watching them and leave.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 30
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Go':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
+		act 'Leave':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
 	end
 	if meadow = 3 and MiraLoc = 0 and npc_QW['A60'] >= 20 and temper >= 15 and sunWeather = 1 and temp_md = 9:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirameadows.jpg"></center>'
-		'She is on all fours with his back to you and painfully, but enough moaning, fingering her butt a ear of corn.'
+		'You see Mira on all fours with her back to you. She is shoving an ear of corn in her ass which looks painful but she is still moaning.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Go':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
+		act 'Leave':minut += 30 & gt'Gaddvor'
 	end
 end
 

+ 3 - 3
locations/Mirafather.qsrc

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ gs 'stat'
 if npc_QW['A64'] < 10:'<center><b><font color = maroon>Father Miroslava</font></b></center>'
 if npc_QW['A64'] >= 10:'<center><b><font color = maroon>Afanasiy</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mirafather.jpg"></center>'
-'Mira''s father, <<boyage>> years old. After his wife died, he drank heavily and looks much older than is actually is, still he is in good shape for a man his age.'
+'Mira''s father, <<boyage>> years old. After his wife died, he drank heavily and looks much older than he actually is. He is still in good shape for a man his age.'
 if MiraFather ! daystart:
 	MiraFather = daystart
 
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ if MiraFather ! daystart:
 
 		act 'Leave': gt 'miroslavahome', 'start'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mirafather.jpg"></center>'
-		'You are greeted with Mira''s father and politely inquire about his health.  He responds with a smile and says,"All is well, little lady"'
+		'You are greeted by Mira''s father and politely inquire about his health.  He responds with a smile and says,"All is well, little lady."'
 		if npc_QW['A64'] >= 10:
 
 			act 'Chat':
@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ if MiraFather ! daystart:
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mirafather.jpg"></center>'
 						if temp_mf < 5:
-							'You expressly wink at Afanasiy and he understands your meaning.  Looking about for noicy nieghbors, he quickly waves for you to enter the house.'
+							'You expressly wink at Afanasiy and he understands your meaning.  Looking about for nosy neighbors, he quickly waves for you to enter the house.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 							gs 'stat'
 

+ 212 - 237
locations/Miroslava.qsrc

@@ -37,9 +37,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 	! npc_QW['A60'] = 12 PC tells her about it
 	! npc_QW['A60'] += Mira pose as a prostitute
 	
-	! 
-	
-	
 	gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 	'Mira is a sociable girl. She is <<girlage>> years old. She lives with her father, who recently had to move in here because of the huge debts he had to some disreptuble men in the city. He had to sell all the families property, including an apartment in the city center. With the little money they had left over, they could only afford to buy a house in a rundown village, like this one.'
 
@@ -57,7 +54,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 	end
 
 	if graze_cow = 1:
-
 		act 'Talking to Mira':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 60
@@ -65,15 +61,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 			if npc_rel['A60'] < 50: npc_rel['A60'] += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/graze_cow_mira.jpg"></center>'
-			'Within the hour you chatted with Mira. Your relationship has improved.'
+			'You chat with Mira for an hour. You feel like your relationship with her has improved.'
 
 			if hour < 13:act 'Further':gt'gadfield','cow'
 			if hour >= 13 or hour < 16:act 'Further':gt'gadfield','cow2'
 			if hour >= 16:act 'Further':gt'gadfield','cow3'
 		end
+		
 		if hour < 13 or hour >= 16:
-
-			act 'To run on the field':
+			act 'Go for a run on the field':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 60
 				if salo > 3 and cheatNoFat = 0:salo -= RAND(1,3)
@@ -84,14 +80,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 				if temper >= 25 and sunWeather = 1:pcs_hydra -= 24
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/graze_cow_run_mira.jpg"></center>'
-				'You within the hour, nothing to do, was running across the field.'
+				'You spend the next hour running around the field with Mira.'
 
 				if hour < 14:act 'Further':gt'gadfield','cow'
 				if hour >= 16:act 'Further':gt'gadfield','cow3'
 			end
 			if temper >= 15 and sunWeather = 1:
-
-				act 'Tan':
+				act 'Tan by the field':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 60
 					pcs_mood += 10
@@ -99,16 +94,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					pcs_sweat += 10
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/graze_cow_sun_mira.jpg"></center>'
-					'You lie down next to Mira on the cover and thrilled in the sun.'
+					'You lie down next to Mira and tan together in the sun.'
 
 					if hour < 14:act 'Further':gt'gadfield','cow'
 					if hour >= 16:act 'Further':gt'gadfield','cow3'
 				end
 			end
 		end
+		
 		if hour >= 13 and hour < 16 and temper >= 15 and sunWeather = 1:
-
-			act 'Swim':
+			act 'Swim in the nearby river':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 15
 				cumspclnt = 4 & gs 'cum_cleanup'
@@ -119,12 +114,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 				if pcs_inhib < 50:inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/graze_cow_river_mira.jpg"></center>'
-				'You wade in the river, fun with Mira spray each other with water.'
+				'You wade in the river, splashing around with Mira is lot of fun.'
 
 				act 'Further':gt'gadfield','cow2'
 			end
 
-			act 'Tan':
+			act 'Tan by the river':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 30
 				pcs_sweat += 10
@@ -132,7 +127,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 				pcs_tan += 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/graze_cow_sun_mira2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You lie down next to Mira on the sand and chatting about nothing, thrilled in the sun.'
+				'You lie down next to Mira and tan together in the sun.'
 
 				act 'Further':gt'gadfield','cow2'
 			end
@@ -141,30 +136,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 		act 'Depart':gt'gadfield','field'
 	end
 	if npc_QW['A60'] = 11:
-
-		act 'Talk':
+		act 'Talk to Mira in the meadow':
 			gt 'Meadow','miraperversion11'
 		end
 	elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 15 and mirasex = 0 and MiraLoc = 2 and npc_QW['A63'] < 13 and pcs_horny >= 40:
-
-		act 'Talk':
+		act 'Talk to Mira in the meadow':
 			gt 'Meadow','lesb_talk_mira1'
 		end
 	elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 15 and npc_QW['A63'] >= 13 and mirasex = 1 and miralick = 0 and MiraLoc = 2 and pcs_horny >= 60:
-
-		act 'Talk':
+		act 'Talk to Mira in the meadow':
 			gt 'Meadow','lesb_talk_mira2'
 		end
 	else
 		if mirasex = 1 and npc_QW['A63'] < 13 and miralick > 0 and MiraLoc = 2 and pcs_horny >= 40:
-			
-			act 'Ordered to lick':
+			act 'Talk to Mira in the meadow':
 				gt 'Meadow','lesb_talk_mira3'
 			end
 		end
 		if mirasex = 2 and MiraLoc = 2 and pcs_horny >= 40 and npc_rel['A60'] >= 15:
-		
-			act 'Stick':
+			act 'Talk to Mira in the meadow':
 				gt 'Meadow','lesb_mira'
 			end
 		end
@@ -173,7 +163,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 		act 'Chat':gt 'Miroslava', 'miratalk'
 
 		if month >= 4 and month <= 10 and sunWeather = 1:
-
 			act 'Offer to walk together':
 				*clr & cla
 				if Mira_no = 0:
@@ -203,11 +192,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 							elseif mitkarand <= 5 and hour >= 7 and hour <= 19 and gadboyday ! daystart and week > 5:
 								gt 'gadukino_event', 'mira_3boys'
 							else
-
 								act 'Leave':mira_guest = 0 & gt 'gadukino'
 							end
 						else
-
 							act 'Finish':mira_guest = 0 & gt 'gadukino'
 						end
 					else
@@ -230,7 +217,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 		end
 
 		if meadow = 1 and MiraLoc ! 3:
-
 			act 'Show her your secret place':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 30
@@ -244,14 +230,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 				end
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/girls_go.jpg"></center>'
-				'You lead Mira through the thickets to the hidden meadow and all the way she talks about everything and anything, merrily chirping and telling stories from her past urban life.'
+				'You lead Mira through the thickets to the hidden meadow and all the way she talks about everything and anything, merrily telling stories from her past urban life.'
 
 				act 'Continue':gt 'meadow'
 			end
 		end
 
 		if (meadow = 3 or meadow = 6) and hour >= 8 and hour < 19 and MiraLoc ! 2 and MiraLoc ! 3 and sunWeather = 1:
-
 			act 'Offer to go to the Meadow':
 				*clr & cla
 				if Mira_no = 0:
@@ -265,14 +250,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 						end
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/girls_go.jpg"></center>'
-						'You offer Mira to take a stroll down to your secret place and she readily agrees. On the way you tell each other different stories, some true but mostly tall tales.'
+						'You offer go with Mira to to the meadow and she readily agrees. On the way you tell each other different stories, some true but mostly tall tales.'
 
 						act 'Further':gt 'meadow'
 					else
 						minut += 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira_said_no.jpg"></center>'
-						'You offer Mira to walk outside the village, but she says she doesn`t want you to trudge wherever is handy.'
+						'You offer to walk with Mira outside the village, but she says she doesn`t want to wander that far away from home.'
 
 						act 'Leave':gt 'Miroslava','Leave'
 					end
@@ -280,7 +265,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira_shy.jpg"></center>'
-					'You ask Mira ifg she wants to go to the meadow, but Mira only shakes her head, saying that she is too ashamed to leave the house.'
+					'You ask Mira if she wants to go to the meadow, but Mira only shakes her head, saying that she is too ashamed to leave the house.'
 
 					act 'Leave':gt 'Miroslava','Leave'
 				end
@@ -288,7 +273,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 		end
 
 		if npc_rel['A60'] >= 15 and hour >= 20 and npc_QW['A60'] = 0 and sunWeather = 1 and MiraLoc ! 3:
-
 			act 'Ask if she has met the local boys?':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 2
@@ -308,7 +292,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 		end
 
 		if npc_rel['A60'] >= 16 and hour >= 21 and npc_QW['A60'] > 0 and sunWeather = 1 and MiraLoc ! 3:
-
 			act 'Suggest catching up with the local guys and having a drink or three':
 				if Mira_no = 0:
 					*clr & cla
@@ -322,15 +305,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					gs 'stat'
 					gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 					if npc_QW['A60'] = 5:
-						'You suggest drinking with the village boys and Mira sadly agrees. Then she whispers that when she leaves with Mitka you should wait for a little then follow them to his home.'
+						'You suggest drinking with the village boys and Mira agrees. Then she whispers that when she leaves with Mitka you should wait for a little then follow them to his home.'
 					else
 						'You suggest drinking with the village boys and Mira readily agrees, then asks you to wait a couple of minutes while she changes. When she comes out, you go to to drink with the group of boys near your house....'
 					end
 					if npc_QW['A60'] > 15 and npc_QW['A63'] > 15 and gadriver_gang < 3 :
-
 						act 'Further':mira_guest = 0 & MiraLoc = 5 & minut += 15 & temp = 0 & npc_drunk['A60'] = 0 & gt 'mitkabuh_group'
 					else
-
 						act 'Further':mira_guest = 0 & MiraLoc = 5 & minut += 15 & temp = 0 & npc_drunk['A60'] = 0 & gt 'mitkabuh'
 					end
 				else
@@ -345,7 +326,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 		end
 
 		if npc_rel['A60'] >= 20 and week >= 6 and hour > 18 and hour < 22:
-
 			act 'Suggest taking a steam bath in your grandparents sauna':
 				if Mira_no = 0:
 					if npc_QW['A63'] < 13 or npc_QW['A60'] >= 10 or mirasex > 1:
@@ -362,16 +342,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 						mira = 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-						'You offer Mira the opportunity to relax with you in the bath. She pauses for a few moments to think, but then agrees slowly. You led her into your grandparent''s backyard...'
+						'You offer Mira the opportunity to relax with you in the bath. She pauses for a few moments to think, but then agrees slowly. You lead her into your grandparent''s backyard...'
 
-						act 'Further':gt 'Gadbana'
+						act 'Go to the your home':gt 'Gadbana'
 					else
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 5
 						MiraLoc = 0
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira_said_no.jpg"></center>'
-						'You offer Mira together to relax you in the bath, but she rudely answers that will never go out with such a whore like you, one-bath.'
+						'You offer Mira together to relax you in the bath, but she rudely answers that will never go bathe with such a whore like you.'
 
 						act 'Leave':gt 'Miroslava','Leave'
 					end
@@ -387,7 +367,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 			end
 		end
 		if sunWeather = 1 and temper >= 15 and month >= 5 and month <= 9 and MiraLoc ! 1:
-
 			act 'Offer to go to the river':
 				*clr & cla
 				if Mira_no = 0:
@@ -429,7 +408,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 		end
 		!125s
 		if miratalkforest = 0 and npc_rel['A60'] >= 5:
-
 			act 'Ask about the forest':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 15
@@ -455,13 +433,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 				'"Okay, okay, no more excuses," you chuckled, looking at a confused Mira. "Let`s just go together?."'
 				'"I don`t know <<$pcs_nickname>>," Mira said. "If it''s warm and the weather is nice, you can count on me to go with you."'
 				'"But, I just willing only go to the forest edge. I refuse to go deep into the forest," Mira quickly added.'
-				'"Okay, okay, we''ll only walk along the edge of the forest," - you have agreed.'
+				'"Okay, okay, we''ll only walk along the edge of the forest," - you agree.'
 
 				act 'Further':gt $loc, $metka
 			end
 		end
+		
 		if sunWeather = 1 and temper >= 15 and month >= 5 and month <= 9 and MiraLoc ! 3 and miratalkforest > 0 and npc_rel['A60'] >= 5:
-
 			act 'Offer to go to the forest':
 				*clr & cla
 				if Mira_no = 0:
@@ -476,7 +454,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 						end
 						gs 'stat'
 						gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-						'You offer her to go to the forest for mushrooms and berries and she willingly agrees.'
+						'You offer her to go to the forest to look for mushrooms and berries and she willingly agrees.'
 
 						act 'Go into the woods':minut += 45 & gt'gadforest','1'
 					else
@@ -484,7 +462,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 						MiraLoc = 0
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira_said_no.jpg"></center>'
-						'You have to offer Mira together to go to the forest for mushrooms and berries, but the contemptuous snorts in response and says that`s not going anywhere with this slut as you.'
+						'You have to offer Mira together to go to the forest for mushrooms and berries, but she contemptuous snorts in response and says that she''s not going anywhere with this slut as you.'
 
 						act 'Leave':gt 'Miroslava','Leave'
 					end
@@ -500,7 +478,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 		end
 
 		if sunWeather = 1 and temper >= 15 and month >= 5 and month <= 9 and MiraLoc = 3 and miratalkforest > 1 and npc_rel['A60'] >= 5 and $clothingworntype ! 'nude' and forestpicnic = 0:
-
 			act 'Offer to walk naked':
 				*clr & cla
 				!the clothing remains in the woods
@@ -517,7 +494,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 		end
 		!125e
 		if npc_QW['A60'] >= 30 and hour < 19 and month >= 5 and month <= 9 and MiraLoc ! 3:
-
 			act '<b>Make your third wish</b>':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 2
@@ -534,9 +510,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					minut += 15
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/street.jpg"></center>'
-					'You lead Mira on the village street. Mira stares at his feet, sometimes throwing at you with watchful eyes...'
+					'You lead Mira out to the village street. Mira stares at her feet, sometimes looking at you with watchful eyes...'
 
-					act 'Ordering her to undress':
+					act 'Order her to undress':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 2
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -546,7 +522,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 						'Mira in silence and looks at you, then looks around at the village street on which people walk about their business.'
 						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, please don''t make this your wish. I will die of embarrassment!" - Mira plaintively begs hoping it will change your mind.'
 
-						act 'Confirm your words':
+						act 'Confirm your wish':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 5
 							pcs_horny += RAND(5,10)
@@ -583,7 +559,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 							end
 						end
 
-						act 'Forgive':
+						act 'Forgive her':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 5
 							npc_rel['A60'] += 5
@@ -618,7 +594,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 							'"Come on", you tell the girl. With a contemptuous snort you say, "We both know that you''re a whore and prostitute, and can''t live without dick in you at least a few times a day. And right here," you point at Bandit''s dick, "is a huge cock ready to go! Mitka''s cock is puny next to this one, is it not?"'
 							'Mira stares at you like a deer in headlights, Bandit''s huge pulsating cock and just quivers, she isn''t going for it. You decide to push her and say, "It isn''t his first time with a human. I have been riding this cock for awhile now. It''s heavenly." Mira looks at you after that confession with eyes wide and round, as if seeing you for the first time.'
 
-							act 'To confirm my words':
+							act 'Confirm your wish':
 								*clr & cla
 								minut += 5
 								pcs_horny += RAND(5,15)
@@ -659,7 +635,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/sarai.jpg"></center>'
 					'You lead Mira to his barn, where there is an empty kennel next to Bandit`s. Mira looks at you blankly, waiting for you to continue.'
 
-					act 'Ordering her to undress':
+					act 'Order her to undress':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 2
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -669,7 +645,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 						'Mira stares on you, then on the booth, which still bears a dog.'
 						'- <<$pcs_nickname>>, can do not suddenly see who? - plaintively asks hopefully it.'
 
-						act 'To confirm his words':
+						act 'Confirm your wish':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 5
 							pcs_horny += RAND(5,10)
@@ -696,7 +672,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 							end
 						end
 
-						act 'Forgive':
+						act 'Forgive her':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 5
 							npc_rel['A60'] += 2
@@ -717,7 +693,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 		if npc_rel['A60'] >= 15 and MiraLoc ! 3 and (npc_QW['A63'] < 13 or npc_QW['A60'] >= 10 or mirasex > 1):
 			if mira_guest = 0:
 
-				act 'To invite as a guest':
+				act 'Invite Mira back to your grandparent''s house':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 5
 					mira_guest = 1
@@ -736,7 +712,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 							gs 'underwear', 'wear'
 							gs 'clothing', 'wear', $lastwornclothingtype, lastwornclothingnumber
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/river/dressbch.jpg"></center>'
-							'You changed into some new clothes and went home with Mira.'
+							'You changed into your regular clothes and went home with Mira.'
 
 							act 'Further': minut += 15 & gt'Gadhouse'
 						end
@@ -744,7 +720,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 				end
 			end
 			if mira_guest = 1:
-
 				act 'Watch TV':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 60
@@ -764,9 +739,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					if npc_rel['A60'] < 20: npc_rel['A60'] += RAND(1,2)
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira_tv'+rand(1,12)+'.jpg"></center>'
-						'You ask your grandparents if Mira can sleep over. They tell you it''s fine with them. So you invite Mira to sleep over.'
+						'You ask your grandparents if Mira can sleep over. They tell you it''s fine with them, so you invite Mira to sleep over.'
 						*nl
-						'You and Mira head over to the huge wardrobe where your cloths are and you spend an hour trying on different cloths and underwear.'
+						'You and Mira head over to the huge wardrobe where your clothes are and spend an hour trying on different clothes and underwear.'
 
 						act 'Mira and you raid the kitchen for a late night snack (0:15)': 'You and Mira head to the kitchen to make a quick snack' & gs 'food', 'snack'
 						act 'Go to sleep':'You''re feeling tired. You and Mira head to your bed and crawl under the covers together and get into bed.' & gt 'bed2'
@@ -775,8 +750,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 				end
 			end
 			if mira_guest > 0:
-
-				act 'Goodbye':
+				act 'Say goodbye to Mira':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 5
 					mira_guest = 0
@@ -784,213 +758,215 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					gs 'stat'
 					gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 					'You say goodbye to Mira, and she went home.'
-
-					act 'Further':gt'Gaddvor'
+					
+					act 'Walk back home':gt'Gadhouse'
 				end
 			end
 		end
+		
+		act 'Leave':gt 'Miroslava','Leave'
+		
+		if npc_rel['A60'] >= 15 and Mira_no = 0 and (npc_QW['A63'] < 13 or npc_QW['A60'] >= 10 or mirasex > 1):
+			if mira_guest = 0 and mira_temp >= 1 and mira_temp <= 2 and mira_go_blok = 0 and MiraLoc ! 3:
+				*clr & cla
+				minut += 1
+				gs 'stat'
 
-	act 'Leave':gt 'Miroslava','Leave'
-	if npc_rel['A60'] >= 15 and Mira_no = 0 and (npc_QW['A63'] < 13 or npc_QW['A60'] >= 10 or mirasex > 1):
-		if mira_guest = 0 and mira_temp >= 1 and mira_temp <= 2 and mira_go_blok = 0 and MiraLoc ! 3:
-			*clr & cla
-			minut += 1
-			gs 'stat'
+				if MiraLoc = 1:gs 'Miroslava', 'mira_river'
+				if MiraLoc ! 1:gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s so boring here," Mira pouts, "I know! Let''s go to your place." Mira suggests brightly.'
 
-			if MiraLoc = 1:gs 'Miroslava', 'mira_river'
-			if MiraLoc ! 1:gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s so boring here," Mira pouts, "I know! Let''s go to your place." Mira suggests brightly.'
+				act'Agree':
+					if ($clothingworntype ! 'nude' and $clothingworntype ! 'swimwear'):
+						mira_go_blok = 1
+						mira_guest = 1
+						minut += 15
+						npc_rel['A60'] += 1
+						gt 'Gadhouse'
+					else
+						*clr & cla
+						npc_rel['A60'] += 1
+						mira_go_blok = 1
+						mira_guest = 1
+						if npc_rel['A60'] < 30:npc_rel['A60'] += 1
+						minut += 20
+						gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+						gs 'clothing', 'wear', $lastwornclothingtype, lastwornclothingnumber
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/river/dressbch.jpg"></center>'
+						'You change into your clothes and go home with Mira.'
 
-			act'Agree':
-				if ($clothingworntype ! 'nude' and $clothingworntype ! 'swimwear'):
-					mira_go_blok = 1
-					mira_guest = 1
-					minut += 15
-					npc_rel['A60'] += 1
-					gt 'Gadhouse'
-				else
+						act 'Further': gt'Gadhouse'
+					end
+				end
+
+				act'Refuse':
 					*clr & cla
-					npc_rel['A60'] += 1
-					mira_go_blok = 1
-					mira_guest = 1
-					if npc_rel['A60'] < 30:npc_rel['A60'] += 1
-					minut += 20
-					gs 'underwear', 'wear'
-					gs 'clothing', 'wear', $lastwornclothingtype, lastwornclothingnumber
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/river/dressbch.jpg"></center>'
-					'You change into your clothes and go home with Mira.'
+					minut += 1
+					npc_rel['A60'] -= 1
+					gs 'stat'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
+					'You deny Mira, saying that you don''t want to right now.'
 
-					act 'Further': gt'Gadhouse'
+					act 'Further': gt 'Miroslava', 'Start'
 				end
 			end
-
-			act'Refuse':
+			if mira_guest = 1 and mira_temp >= 3 and mira_temp <= 4:
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 1
-				npc_rel['A60'] -= 1
 				gs 'stat'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-				'You denied Mira, citing the fact that there you will be bored.'
+				gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, come watch TV with me, that''s boring -"  Mira said.'
 
-				act 'Further': gt 'Miroslava', 'Start'
-			end
-		end
-		if mira_guest = 1 and mira_temp >= 3 and mira_temp <= 4:
-			*clr & cla
-			minut += 1
-			gs 'stat'
-			gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, come on the telly see, and that is something boring -" he offered you Mira.'
+				act'Agree':
+					*clr & cla
+					minut += 60
+					if npc_rel['A60'] < 20:npc_rel['A60'] += 1
+					pcs_mood += 10
+					mira_go_blok = 1
+					gs 'stat'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira_tv'+rand(1,12)+'.jpg"></center>'
+					'You watch TV with Mira for an hour.'
 
-			act'Agree':
-				*clr & cla
-				minut += 60
-				if npc_rel['A60'] < 20:npc_rel['A60'] += 1
-				pcs_mood += 10
-				mira_go_blok = 1
-				gs 'stat'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira_tv'+rand(1,12)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'You Mira for an hour killed for watching TV.'
+					act'Further':gt'Gadhouse'
+				end
 
-				act'Further':gt'Gadhouse'
-			end
+				act'Refuse':
+					*clr & cla
+					minut += 1
+					npc_rel['A60'] -= 1
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
+					'You deny Mira, saying that you don''t want to right now.'
 
-			act'Refuse':
+					act 'Further': gt $loc, $metka
+				end
+			end
+			if MiraLoc ! 2 and mira_temp = 5 and (meadow = 3 or meadow = 6) and mira_go_blok = 0 and MiraLoc ! 3 and hour < 19 and sunWeather = 1:
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 1
-				npc_rel['A60'] -= 1
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-				'You denied Mira, referring to the fact that you are not interested.'
+				gs 'stat'
+				gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, can we go to the meadow?" Mira asked you. "Let''s take a walk, get some fresh air."'
+
+				act'Agree':
+					*clr & cla
+					minut += 15
+					if npc_rel['A60'] < 50:npc_rel['A60'] += 1
+					mira_guest = 0
+					MiraLoc = 2
+					mira_go_blok = 1
+					if ($clothingworntype = 'nude' or $clothingworntype = 'swimwear'):
+						gs 'clothing', 'wear', $lastwornclothingtype, lastwornclothingnumber
+						gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+					end
+					gs 'stat'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/girls_go.jpg"></center>'
+					'You go to Mira through the dense undergrowth to the hidden meadow. Along the way she merrily tells stories from her past city life.'
+
+					act 'Further': gt 'Meadow'
+				end
+
+				act'Refuse':
+					*clr & cla
+					minut += 1
+					npc_rel['A60'] -= 1
+					gs 'stat'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
+					'You deny Mira, saying that you don''t want to right now.'
 
-				act 'Further': gt $loc, $metka
+					act 'Further': gt 'Miroslava', 'Start'
+				end
 			end
-		end
-		if MiraLoc ! 2 and mira_temp = 5 and (meadow = 3 or meadow = 6) and mira_go_blok = 0 and MiraLoc ! 3 and hour < 19 and sunWeather = 1:
-			*clr & cla
-			minut += 1
-			gs 'stat'
-			gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, can we could go to the meadow?" Mira asked you. "Let''s take a walk, get some fresh air."'
 
-			act'Agree':
+			if hour >= 20 and mira_temp > 10 and sunWeather = 1 and mira_go_blok = 0 and npc_QW['A60'] > 0 and MiraLoc ! 3:
 				*clr & cla
-				minut += 15
-				if npc_rel['A60'] < 50:npc_rel['A60'] += 1
-				mira_guest = 0
-				MiraLoc = 2
+				minut += 1
 				mira_go_blok = 1
+				MiraLoc = 5
+				mira_guest = 0
 				if ($clothingworntype = 'nude' or $clothingworntype = 'swimwear'):
 					gs 'clothing', 'wear', $lastwornclothingtype, lastwornclothingnumber
 					gs 'underwear', 'wear'
 				end
 				gs 'stat'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/girls_go.jpg"></center>'
-				'You go to Mira through the dense undergrowth to the hidden meadow and all the way she goes, merrily chirping and telling stories from his past city life.'
-
-				act 'Further': gt 'Meadow'
-			end
-
-			act'Refuse':
-				*clr & cla
-				minut += 1
-				npc_rel['A60'] -= 1
-				gs 'stat'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-				'You denied Mira, citing the fact that there you will be bored.'
+				gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s go hang out with those guys and drink a little?" Mira asks you. "I''m bored and want to party."'
+				if npc_QW['A60'] > 15 and npc_QW['A63'] > 15:
 
-				act 'Further': gt 'Miroslava', 'Start'
-			end
-		end
+					act 'Agree':mira_guest = 0 & MiraLoc = 5 & minut += 15 & temp = 0 & npc_drunk['A60'] = 0 & gt 'mitkabuh_group'
+				else
 
-		if hour >= 20 and mira_temp > 10 and sunWeather = 1 and mira_go_blok = 0 and npc_QW['A60'] > 0 and MiraLoc ! 3:
-			*clr & cla
-			minut += 1
-			mira_go_blok = 1
-			MiraLoc = 5
-			mira_guest = 0
-			if ($clothingworntype = 'nude' or $clothingworntype = 'swimwear'):
-				gs 'clothing', 'wear', $lastwornclothingtype, lastwornclothingnumber
-				gs 'underwear', 'wear'
-			end
-			gs 'stat'
-			gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s go hang out with those guys and drink a little?" Mira asks you. "I''m bored and want to party."'
-			if npc_QW['A60'] > 15 and npc_QW['A63'] > 15:
+					act 'Agree':mira_guest = 0 & MiraLoc = 5 & minut += 15 & temp = 0 & npc_drunk['A60'] = 0 & gt 'mitkabuh'
+				end
 
-				act 'Agree':mira_guest = 0 & MiraLoc = 5 & minut += 15 & temp = 0 & npc_drunk['A60'] = 0 & gt 'mitkabuh_group'
-			else
+				act'Refuse':
+					*clr & cla
+					minut += 1
+					npc_rel['A60'] -= 1
+					gs 'stat'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
+					'You deny Mira, saying that you don''t want to right now.'
 
-				act 'Agree':mira_guest = 0 & MiraLoc = 5 & minut += 15 & temp = 0 & npc_drunk['A60'] = 0 & gt 'mitkabuh'
+					act 'Further': gt 'Miroslava', 'Start'
+				end
 			end
 
-			act'Refuse':
+			if mira_temp >= 8 and mira_temp <= 9:
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 1
-				npc_rel['A60'] -= 1
+				mira_go_blok = 1
 				gs 'stat'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-				'You denied Mira, citing the fact that there you will be bored.'
-
-				act 'Further': gt 'Miroslava', 'Start'
-			end
-		end
+				gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
+				'Mira wants to chat with you.'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, do you want to just chat a little?" Mira asks.'
 
-		if mira_temp >= 8 and mira_temp <= 9:
-			*clr & cla
-			minut += 1
-			mira_go_blok = 1
-			gs 'stat'
-			gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-			'Mira wants to chat with you.'
-			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, do you want to just chat a little?" Mira asks.'
+				act 'Chat':gt 'Miroslava', 'miratalk'
 
-			act 'Chat':gt 'Miroslava', 'miratalk'
+				act'Refuse':
+					*clr & cla
+					minut += 1
+					npc_rel['A60'] -= 1
+					gs 'stat'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira.jpg"></center>'
+					'"Not right now Mira," you said. "I''m not in the mood to talk right now."'
 
-			act'Refuse':
+					act 'Further': gt 'Miroslava', 'Start'
+				end
+			end
+			if MiraLoc ! 1 and mira_temp >= 6 and mira_temp <= 7 and sunWeather = 1 and temper >= 15 and month >= 5 and month <= 9 and mira_go_blok = 0 and MiraLoc ! 3 and hour < 18:
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 1
-				npc_rel['A60'] -= 1
 				gs 'stat'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Not right now Mira," you said. "I''m not in the mood to talk right now."'
+				gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, do you want to go to the river?" - Mira asks. "Let''s go swim and sunbathe."'
 
-				act 'Further': gt 'Miroslava', 'Start'
-			end
-		end
-		if MiraLoc ! 1 and mira_temp >= 6 and mira_temp <= 7 and sunWeather = 1 and temper >= 15 and month >= 5 and month <= 9 and mira_go_blok = 0 and MiraLoc ! 3 and hour < 18:
-			*clr & cla
-			minut += 1
-			gs 'stat'
-			gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, do you want to go to the river?" - Mira asks. "Let''s go swim and sunbath."'
+				act'Agree':
+					*clr & cla
+					minut += 15
+					if npc_rel['A60'] < 30:npc_rel['A60'] += 1
+					mira_guest = 0
+					MiraLoc = 1
+					mira_go_blok = 1
+					if ($clothingworntype = 'nude' or $clothingworntype = 'swimwear'):
+						gs 'clothing', 'wear', $lastwornclothingtype, lastwornclothingnumber
+						gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+					end
+					gs 'stat'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/girls_go.jpg"></center>'
+					'You decided to go with Mira to the village beach and all the way she goes, merrily chattering and telling stories.'
 
-			act'Agree':
-				*clr & cla
-				minut += 15
-				if npc_rel['A60'] < 30:npc_rel['A60'] += 1
-				mira_guest = 0
-				MiraLoc = 1
-				mira_go_blok = 1
-				if ($clothingworntype = 'nude' or $clothingworntype = 'swimwear'):
-					gs 'clothing', 'wear', $lastwornclothingtype, lastwornclothingnumber
-					gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+					act 'Further': gt'Gadriver', 'Gadbitch'
 				end
-				gs 'stat'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/girls_go.jpg"></center>'
-				'You decided to go with Mira to the village beach and all the way she goes, merrily chattering and telling stories.'
-
-				act 'Further': gt'Gadriver', 'Gadbitch'
-			end
 
-			act'Refuse':
-				*clr & cla
-				minut += 1
-				npc_rel['A60'] -= 1
-				gs 'stat'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-				'You tell Mira that you don''t feel like going to the river, citing the fact that there you will be bored.'
+				act'Refuse':
+					*clr & cla
+					minut += 1
+					npc_rel['A60'] -= 1
+					gs 'stat'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
+					'You tell Mira that you don''t feel like going to the river right now.'
 
-				act 'Further': gt 'Miroslava', 'Start'
+					act 'Further': gt 'Miroslava', 'Start'
+				end
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -1007,7 +983,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 		if MiraLoc ! 1:gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re fun to be with, but Dad has chores for me to work on." Mira tells you.'
 
-		act 'Further':mira_guest = 0 & MiraLoc = 0 & gt 'Gadukino'
+		act 'Go back to the village':mira_guest = 0 & MiraLoc = 0 & gt 'Gadukino'
 	end
 
 	if mira_temp = 0 and mira_go_blok = 0 and meadow > 2 and MiraLoc ! 0:
@@ -1022,7 +998,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 		if MiraLoc ! 1:gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re fun to be with, but I gotta get home. Dad has chores for me to work on.," Mira tells you.'
 
-		act 'Further':mira_guest = 0 & MiraLoc = 0 & gt 'Gadukino'
+		act 'Go back to the village':mira_guest = 0 & MiraLoc = 0 & gt 'Gadukino'
 	end
 
 	if hour = 23 and MiraLoc = 0:
@@ -1033,7 +1009,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 		gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re fun to be with, but it''s late. I gotta get to bed. Dad has chores for me to work on tomorrow." Mira tells you.'
 
-		act 'Further':gt 'Gadukino'
+		act 'Go back to the village':gt 'Gadukino'
 	end
 
 	if hour = 23 and MiraLoc ! 0:
@@ -1048,7 +1024,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 		if MiraLoc ! 1:gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re fun to be with, but I gotta get home and get to bed. Dad has chores for me to work on tomorrow." Mira tells you.'
 
-		act 'Further':mira_guest = 0 & MiraLoc = 0 & gt 'Gadukino'
+		act 'Go back to the village':mira_guest = 0 & MiraLoc = 0 & gt 'Gadukino'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1086,7 +1062,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 		if npc_QW['A63'] < 13 or mirasex > 1:
 			'You have ten minutes of fun talking about all sorts of trivia.'
 		else
-			'While you''re trying to talk with Mira, she remained silent, sometimes leaving you scornful glances.'
+			'While you''re trying to talk with Mira, she remained silent, sometimes giving you scornful glances.'
 		end
 		gs 'stat'
 
@@ -1113,7 +1089,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 				npc_rel['A60'] += 1
 				npc_QW['A60'] = 2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You ask Mira if there is something between her and Mitka. She looks at you a little timidly, but responds yes, there is. She refuses to go into further detail, so you decide to leave the subject until a more appropriate time come up...'
+				'You ask Mira if there is something between her and Mitka. She looks at you a little timidly, but responds yes, there is. She refuses to go into further detail, so you decide to leave the subject until a more appropriate time comes up...'
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				act 'Finish':gt $loc, $metka
@@ -1179,7 +1155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 						npc_rel['A60'] -= 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You say you want to see my fuck her ass because she told your secret. Mira jumps to her feet from such a word and just looks at you, but you don`t give her time to recover and continue to emphasize further, Recalling that a deal is a deal, and if it is his word doesn`t, then your friendship will end. Miroslav densely blushes and hesitantly shifting from foot to foot and you decided to go for broke, turn around and start to leave...'
+						'You say you want to see Mitka fuck her ass because she told him your secret. Mira jumps to her feet from the suggestion and just looks at you, but you don`t give her time to recover and continue to emphasize further, Recalling that a deal is a deal, and if your word doesn''t matter, then out friendship will end. Miroslav blushes and hesitantly shifts from foot to foot. You decide to go for broke, turn around and start to leave...'
 						' - Wait, so it`s screaming you in the back of Mira, but you pretend to not notice and go on.'
 						' - Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>, - after a couple of seconds until you hear a hysterical scream from Mira, I`ll think of something!'
 
@@ -1222,7 +1198,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 			npc_QW['A60'] = 7
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You tell Mira, that you have now seen Mitka fuck her in the ass. Maliciously you ask, does she like having her ass fucked? To your surprise, Mira responds that yes she does like it a bit. Your slightly disappointedly, and then remind her, that she still has two wishes to fullfil. Once they are all fullfilled, you will fill she had satisfied her debt to you. Mira nods her head and says, she is ready to redeem your wishes upon demand. You think it over several moments before walking away...'
+			'You tell Mira, that you have now seen Mitka fuck her in the ass. Maliciously you ask, does she like having her ass fucked? To your surprise, Mira responds that yes she does like it a bit. You are slightly disappointed because this was supposed to be a punishment, and then remind her, that she still has two wishes to fullfill. Once they are all fullfilled, she will have satisfied her debt to you. Mira nods her head and says, she is ready to redeem your wishes upon demand. You think it over several moments before walking away...'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt 'Miroslava','Leave'
 		end
@@ -1236,11 +1212,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 		if MiraLoc ! 1:gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 		if MiraLoc = 1:gs 'Miroslava', 'mira_river'
 		if npc_QW['A60'] < 20 and npc_QW['A63'] < 13:
-			'You spend ten minutes sluggishly talking about trivia, you often refer to Mira as a whore, but she just pretends not to hear.'
+			'You spend ten minutes talking about trivia, you often refer to Mira as a whore, but she just pretends not to hear.'
 		elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 20 and npc_QW['A60'] < 30 and npc_QW['A63'] < 13:
-			'You spend ten minutes sluggishly talking about trivia, Mira tries her best not to look you in the eyes, she seems distracted by other thoughts.'
+			'You spend ten minutes talking about trivia, Mira tries her best not to look you in the eyes, she seems distracted by other thoughts.'
 		elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 30 and npc_QW['A63'] < 13:
-			'You spend ten minutes sluggishly talking about trivia, but Mira in General isn''t listening, all she wants to talk about is sex.'
+			'You spend ten minutes talking about trivia, but Mira isn''t listening, all she wants to talk about is sex.'
 		else
 			'You have ten minutes of fun talking about all sorts of trivia.'
 		end
@@ -1268,6 +1244,5 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Leave':
 	end
 end
 
-
 --- Miroslava ---------------------------------
 

+ 32 - 31
locations/MiroslavaHome.qsrc

@@ -1,6 +1,5 @@
 # MiroslavaHome
 
-
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	$metka = $ARGS[0]
 	$loc = $CURLOC
@@ -44,7 +43,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		elseif temper >= 15 and sunWeather = 1 and npc_QW['A60'] = 7 and hour >= 8 and hour <= 18:
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/miraqw7.jpg"></center>'
-			'Entering the courtyard, you notice Miroslav, working in the garden. She is bent over and, to your amazement, you see her bare naked crotch...'
+			'Entering the courtyard, you notice Mira, working in the garden. She is bent over and, to your amazement, you see her bare naked crotch...'
 			MiraLoc = 0
 
 			act 'Approach it':
@@ -58,7 +57,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				act 'Watch':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirawish2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You enjoy the view, then you comes to mind crazy idea, and you decide to make a second wish. Mira Sadly said that you thought this was your second wish, but you answer that just could not resist, after which the speaks her to go for you.'
+					'You enjoy the view, then you have a crazy idea, and you decide to make a second wish. Mira sadly said that she thought this was your second wish, but you answer that you just could not resist, after which you ask her to follow you.'
 					pcs_horny += 15
 					minut += 15
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -66,12 +65,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					act 'Go out on the road':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirawish2_1.jpg"></center>'
-						'Out on the road you say Miroslava, so she posed as a prostitute, this will be the second wish. Mira sadly nods her head, looks around and seeing that the street was quiet, fulfills your desire...'
+						'Out on the road you say, "Mira, pose as a prostitute, this will be the second wish." Mira sadly nods her head, looks around and seeing that the street was quiet, fulfills your desire...'
 						minut += 15
 						npc_QW['A60'] = 8
 						gs 'stat'
 
-						act 'Go':gt'gadukino'
+						act 'Go back to the village':gt'gadukino'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -102,10 +101,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'Mira isn''t home.'
 					if miraprost > 0 and month >= 5 and month <= 9 and hour >= 18 and hour >= 0 and rand(0,5) >= 4:
-						' You think you know where to find her. Ever since granting your second wish Mira has been earning money as a prostitute on the highway '
-						act 'go to the highway': gt 'gadprostitutes','start'
+						' You think you know where to find her. Ever since granting your second wish Mira has been earning money as a prostitute on the highway.'
+						act 'Go to the highway': gt 'gadprostitutes','start'
 					else
-						'She definitely isn''t around here, and you have no idea where she might be. Maybe you should ask her father, or go look around town'
+						'She definitely isn''t around here, and you have no idea where she might be. Maybe you should ask her father, or go look around town.'
 					end
 					act 'Leave': gt 'gadukino'
 				end
@@ -140,7 +139,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mirahome.jpg"></center>'
-		if hour > 22 or hour < 3: 'It''s late, most of Mira''s family is asleep, no need to wake people up unnecessarily.' else 'It''s too early, most of Mira''s family is still asleep, no need to wake people up unnecessarily.'
+		if hour > 22 or hour < 3: 'It''s late, most of Mira''s family is asleep, no need to them up unnecessarily.' else 'It''s too early, most of Mira''s family is still asleep, no need to wake people up unnecessarily.'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'gadukino'
 	end
 	act 'Leave': gt 'gadukino'
@@ -164,19 +163,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirabrother':
 		'You ask Mira''s brother for a ride on his motorcycle.'
 		if hotcat < 5:
 			if npc_rel['A60'] > 20:
-
-				'He looks you up and down appraisingly and tells you, some other time.'
+				'He looks you up and down checking you out and says, "Some other time."'
 			else
-				'He gazes at you a couple of seconds, and then asks, "Who are you anyway again?"'
+				'He gazes at you a couple of seconds, and then asks, "Who are you again?"'
 			end
-				act 'Walk away': gt 'gadukino'
+			
+			act 'Walk away': gt 'MiroslavaHome', 'start'
 		else
 			if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
-				'"No problem", he says to you while looking you up and down with strange glent in his eyes. "But my bike, well he only allows girls without panties to ride on his back and there''s nothing I can do about it, this bike is a little devil"'
-				act 'You look shocked and walk away.': gt 'gadukino'
+				'"No problem", he says to you while looking you up and down with a strange glint in his eyes. "But my bike, well he only allows girls without panties to ride on his back and there''s nothing I can do about it, this bike is a little devil"'
+				act 'Remove panties':
+					gs 'underwear', 'remove'
+					'You really want a ride on his motorcycle, and quickly slide them down your legs and stuff them in your pocket.'
+					gt 'MiroslavaHome', 'mirabrother'
+				end
+				act 'You look at him in disgust and walk away.': gt 'MiroslavaHome', 'start'
 			else
-
-				'"No problem", he says to you, and then adds with a mischievous smile. "But first, sit down on him, he''ll check to make sure he likes you. He is fussy sombitch."'
+				'"No problem", he says to you, and then adds with a mischievous smile. "But first, sit down on him, he''ll check to make sure he likes you. He is fussy son of a bitch."'
 				act 'Get on the bike':
 					*clr & cla
 					pcs_horny += 10
@@ -184,11 +187,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirabrother':
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mira/mirabromoto.jpg"></center>'
-					'You quickly swing your leg up and over the iron horse, you plop your ass down on the motorcycles padded seat and grab the handlebars. Mira''s brother, with a satisfied smile, never takes his eyes off your crotch. You wiggle your ass on the seat a little giving him a great view of your naked pussy.'
-
+					'You quickly swing your leg up and over the motorcycle, plop your ass down on the padded seat and grab the handlebars. Mira''s brother, with a satisfied smile, never takes his eyes off your crotch. You wiggle your ass on the seat a little giving him a great view of your naked pussy.'
 					'"Fine", he say still smiling, "Just fine! You have an awesome pussy, and I''m sure my friend," and he slaps the gas tank,"is looking forward to having you ride on him. You know what I mean, yes?" You give him a wicked grin and nod. "We''ll give you a ride to remember, and then you can give me a ride to remember..." You just continue to nod.'
 
-
 					act 'Hell yes, you agree...':
 						*clr & cla
 						pcs_horny += 10
@@ -209,7 +210,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirabrother':
 
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mira/mirabromoto1.jpg"></center>'
 
-							'You slide your as back to allow him room to mount the motorcycle. He grabs his helmet from the handlebars and slams it down on his head.'
+							'You slide your ass back to allow him room to mount the motorcycle. He grabs his helmet from the handlebars and slams it down on his head.'
 
 
 							act 'Wrap your arms around his waist...':
@@ -230,7 +231,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirabrother':
 									gs 'stat'
 
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mira/mirabromoto3.jpg"></center>'
-									'He rolls down a higway another mile he pulls the motorcycle off the main road onto a little side track and parks a couple hundred meters off the road. He jumps off the bike, pulling off his helmet, and turns to you with a "devil may care" attitude. He pulls the helmet of your head and drops it to the ground. He turns you around and begins to paw your crotch and tits...'
+									'He rolls down the highway another mile before pulling off onto a little side track and parks a couple hundred meters off the road. He jumps off the bike, pulling off his helmet, and turns to you with a "devil may care" attitude. He pulls the helmet of your head and drops it to the ground. He turns you around and begins to feel your bare pussy...'
 
 									act 'Stand':
 										*clr & cla
@@ -239,26 +240,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirabrother':
 										gs 'stat'
 
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mira/mirabromoto4.jpg"></center>'
-										'You, bearing in mind the deal, obediently stand, while his hands imperiously crumple your Breasts and stroking the crotch.'
+										'You, bearing in mind the deal, obediently stand, while his hands knead your breasts and stroke your crotch.'
 
-										act 'Stand':
+										act 'Try to enjoy his touch':
 											*clr & cla
 											pcs_horny += RAND(5,15)
 											minut += 2
 											gs 'stat'
 
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mira/mirabromoto5.jpg"></center>'
-											'You feel, as his hand rubs your crotch, fingering labia. A minute later a guy turns you on yourself, and persistently puts pressure on the shoulders...'
+											'You feel, as his hand rubs your crotch, fingering your labia. A minute later he turns you around and press down on your shoulders...'
 
 
-											act 'To squat':
+											act 'Squat':
 												*clr & cla
 												pcs_horny += RAND(5,15)
 												minut += 2
 												gs 'stat'
 
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mira/mirabromoto6.jpg"></center>'
-												'You obediently sit down in front of him on his haunches and unzip his pants. Opened them together with cowards, you see right in front of my face on his swelling member...'
+												'You obediently sit down in front of him on your knees and unzip his pants. His quickly growing member pops out right in front of your face...'
+												
 												act 'Suck':
 													*clr & cla
 													pcs_horny += RAND(10,20)
@@ -266,7 +268,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirabrother':
 													gs 'stat'
 
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mira/mirabromoto7.jpg"></center>'
-													'You have a few seconds, transfixed, watching, as he grows in power, and then, mouth wide open, gently absorb it into himself and then release, then take in hand and begin to suck on it and at the same time nadrachivat hand.'
+													'You stare for a few seconds, transfixed, as he grows larger and larger. You take his dick in your mouth and begin to suck on it and at the same time caressing his balls with your hands.'
 
 													act 'Swallow':
 														*clr & cla
@@ -280,9 +282,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirabrother':
 														if mirabrosextime = 0:mirabrosextime = 1 & guy += 1
 														gs 'stat'
 														'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mira/mirabromoto8.jpg"></center>'
-														'After a couple of minutes you in the mouth strikes unexpectedly warm sticky cum and you quickly begin to swallow. Miroslava brother for another minute stands, blissfully closed his eyes, while you are sucking his cock, and then zips up pants, sits on a motorcycle and drives away...'
+														'After a couple of minutes you feel his warm sticky cum hit the back of your throat and being to swallow it all down. Mira''s brother stands still for a minute, his eyes closed in bliss. Finally he takes his cock out of your mouth, zips up pants, sits on a motorcycle and drives you back to the village...'
 
-														act 'Going home': gt 'Gadhouse'
+														act 'Go back to your grandparents house': gt 'Gadhouse'
 													end
 												end
 											end
@@ -300,6 +302,5 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirabrother':
 	end
 end
 
-
 --- MiroslavaHome ---------------------------------
 

+ 30 - 30
locations/SergeiHanter.qsrc

@@ -5,17 +5,17 @@ harakBoy = 1
 boyage = year - ((npc_dob['A174'] - (npc_dob['A174'] mod 10000)) / 10000)
 gs 'stat'
 
-'<center><b><font color = maroon>Sergey</font></b></center>'
+'<center><b><font color = maroon>Sergei</font></b></center>'
 
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/sergeihanter.jpg"></center>'
 
-'Sergey is a friend of Andrew and Igor, and a member of the hunter party. He''s <<boyage>> years old. He is married and lives in the City Center..'
+'Sergei is a friend of Andrei and Igor, and a member of the group of hunters that frequent the woods and swamp by Gadukino. He''s <<boyage>> years old. He is married and lives in the City Center..'
 if hantersSergeiQw < 0:'You and him have a bad relationship, because you offended him in the past.'
 if hantersSergeiQw >= 0 and hantersSergeiQw < 10:'You have a normal relationship with him.'
 if hantersSergeiQw >= 10 and hantersSergeiQw < 20:'You have friendly relations with him.'
 if hantersSergeiQw >= 20 and hantersSergeiQw < 25:'You''re good friends.'
-if hantersSergeiQw >= 25 and hantersSergeiQw < 30:'It looks like he`s in love with you.'
-if hantersSergeiQw >= 30 and hantersSergeiQw <= 35:'It looks like he you love him.'
+if hantersSergeiQw >= 25 and hantersSergeiQw < 30:'It seems he has a crush on you.'
+if hantersSergeiQw >= 30 and hantersSergeiQw <= 35:'You have a mutual crush on each other.'
 if hantersSergeiQw > 35 :'You have an unrequited love for him.'
 if hantersSergeiLove = 1:'You two love each other.'
 
@@ -26,8 +26,8 @@ act 'Chat':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/talk1.'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-    if hantersSergeiQw >= 0:'You spend some time chatting with Sergey, listening to interesting stories from his life and telling some stories of your own.'
-    if hantersSergeiQw < 0:'You talk with Sergey. He seems uncomfortable, but doesn''t force you away.'
+    if hantersSergeiQw >= 0:'You spend some time chatting with Sergei, listening to interesting stories from his life and telling some stories of your own.'
+    if hantersSergeiQw < 0:'You talk with Sergei. He seems uncomfortable, but doesn''t force you away.'
 
     act'Continue':gt $loc, $metka
 end
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ if hantersSergeiQw >= 10:
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt1.'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-            'You flirt playfully with Sergey. He is glad for your company, though he can'' stop himself from letting his eyes wander.'
+            'You flirt playfully with Sergei. He is glad for your company, though he can'' stop himself from letting his eyes wander.'
 
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ if hantersSergeiQw >= 10:
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You''ve been waiting for this and respond just as passionately. Sergey keeps kissing you and you are right ther with him, answering every kiss.'
+					'You''ve been waiting for this and respond just as passionately. Sergei keeps kissing you and you are right there with him, returning every kiss.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -79,9 +79,9 @@ if hantersSergeiQw >= 10:
 							gs 'stat'
 
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
-                            '"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I want to make love to you," he says, when he finally pulls back. You answer Sergey with a kiss every bit as passionate as the one that started this. You''re making your way back towards his room as you do so.'
+                            '"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I want to make love to you," he says, when he finally pulls back. You answer Sergei with a kiss every bit as passionate as the one that started this. You begin to make your way back towards his room as you do so.'
 
-                            act 'Go': gt'HanterLoveSex', 'Sergei'
+                            act 'Go inside': gt'HanterLoveSex', 'Sergei'
                         end
                     else
                         act'Continue':
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ if hantersSergeiQw >= 10:
                             gs 'stat'
 
                             '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
-                            '"That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>," Sergey said, when your lips finally parted. You see a look that clearly shows he wishes for more and smile.'
+                            '"That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>," Sergei said, when your lips finally parted. You see a look that clearly shows he wishes for more and smile.'
 
                             act'Continue':gt $loc, $metka
                         end
@@ -103,12 +103,12 @@ if hantersSergeiQw >= 10:
                     gs 'stat'
 
                     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-                    '"Sorry, Sergey, but this isn''t what I wanted", you say. He leaves with an angry look on his face.'
+                    '"Sorry, Sergei, but this isn''t what I wanted", you say. He leaves with an angry look on his face.'
 
-                    act'Go':gt $loc, $metka
+                    act'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
                 end
             else
-                act'Depart':gt $loc, $metka
+                act'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
             end
         end
     else
@@ -124,11 +124,11 @@ if hantersSergeiQw >= 10:
             gs 'stat'
 
             '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterlove1.'+rand(1,4)+'.jpg"></center>'
-            'You and Sergey spend time together, spooning the whole while. You can almost feel how much he needed to spend time with you. You notice the happy look on his face, feeling very satisfied you put it there.'
+            'You and Sergei spend time together, spooning the whole while. You can almost feel how much he needed to spend time with you. You notice the happy look on his face and feel very satisfied you put it there.'
 
 			gs 'stat'
 
-            act'Depart':gt $loc, $metka
+            act'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
         end
     end
 end
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ if hantersSergeiLove > 0 and pcs_horny >= 60:
 	    gs 'stat'
 
 	    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt2.'+rand(1,6)+'.jpg"></center>'
-	    'You pull Sergey off to the side and kiss him. You guide his hands to your sopping, needy snatch so there''s no doubt what you want. Sergey doesn''t hesitate and leads you to his bed, never removing his hand.'
+	    'You pull Sergei off to the side and kiss him. You guide his hands to your sopping, needy snatch so there''s no doubt what you want. Sergei doesn''t hesitate and leads you to his bed, never removing his hand.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ if hantersSergeiLove > 0 and pcs_horny <= 60 and hantersSergeiQw >= 10 and rand(
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterlove1.4.jpg"></center>'
-	'You went to Sergey to spend time together, but instead he passionately bites into your lips.'
+	'You went to Sergei to spend time together, but instead he kisses you and playfully bites on your lip.'
 	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you," he whispers after the kiss.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ if hantersSergeiLove > 0 and pcs_horny <= 60 and hantersSergeiQw >= 10 and rand(
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt2.'+rand(4,6)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		act 'Go':gt 'HanterLoveSex','Sergei'
 	end
-		'Smiling, you bite softly on Sergey''s neck. He rushes and pulls you along with him.'
+		'Smiling, you bite softly on Sergei''s neck. He rushes to pull you along with him.'
 	act 'Decline':
 	    *clr & cla
 	    minut += 5
@@ -180,13 +180,13 @@ if hantersSergeiLove > 0 and pcs_horny <= 60 and hantersSergeiQw >= 10 and rand(
 		gs 'stat'
 
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-        '"No, Sergey, not now, but soon." You give him a small look of regret as you leave.'
+        '"No, Sergei, not now, but soon." You give him a small look of regret as you leave.'
 	    act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
     end
 end
 
 if hantersSergeiLove > 0:
-    act 'Part with a guy':
+    act 'Break up with Sergei':
 	    *clr & cla
         minut += 5
         hantersSergeiLove = 0
@@ -194,9 +194,9 @@ if hantersSergeiLove > 0:
 	    gs 'stat'
 
 	    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosila.jpg"></center>'
-	    '"Sergey the passion is gone", you say, "I think it''s time we parted." You leave without looking back.'
+	    '"Sergei the passion is gone", you say, "I think it''s time we parted." You leave without looking back.'
 
-	    act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
+	    act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
     end
 end
 
@@ -209,11 +209,11 @@ if hantersSergeiQw < 10 and hantersSergeiLove > 0:
     hantersSergeiQw -= 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosil.jpg"></center>'
-	'You wanted to talk to Sergei, but he beat you, not having to tell you to say nislova.'
-	' - <<$pcs_nickname>>, I realized that our relationship had no future, and we need to leave, " he said, and trying not to look in your direction, resolutely walked away.'
-	' - Well , maybe it`s for the best, " you thought, going in the other direction.'
+	'You wanted to talk to Sergei, but he beat you to it, and started speaking before you could get a word in.'
+	'<<$pcs_nickname>>, I realized that our relationship had no future, and we need to stop seeing each other, " he said, and trying not to look in your direction, resolutely walked away.'
+	'"Well, maybe it''s for the best, " you think, as you leave in the other direction.'
 
-	act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
+	act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
 end
 
 if hantersSergeiQw > 50 and hantersSergeiLove > 0:
@@ -223,11 +223,11 @@ if hantersSergeiQw > 50 and hantersSergeiLove > 0:
     hantersSergeiQw -= 50
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosil.jpg"></center>'
-	'You wanted to talk to Sergey, but before you say anything he speaks instead.'
+	'You wanted to talk to Sergei, but before you say anything he speaks instead.'
 	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I realized that our relationship has no future. You`re passion is unmatched, but I really love my family. I can''t risk that for you, " he says. He turns and walks away without saying another word, nor giving you time to say anything.'
-	'''Well, that''s how you feel is it?'' you thought as you stand there stunned. ''Although this is probably for the best.'' you finaly conclude before going the other way.'
+	'"Well, that''s how you feel is it?" you think as you stand there stunned. "Although this is probably for the best since he was married." you conclude before walking away.'
 
-	act 'Go':gt $loc, $metka
+	act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
 end
 --- SergeiHanter ---------------------------------
 

+ 4 - 5
locations/backwater.qsrc

@@ -1,6 +1,5 @@
 # backwater
 
-
 $location_type = 'secluded'
 $metka = $ARGS[0]
 $loc = $CURLOC
@@ -27,7 +26,7 @@ if $clothingworntype = 'nude' and hantersKnowSlut = 0 and hanters = 1 and hour >
 			gs 'clothing', 'recover_lost_clothes', $CURLOC, 1
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/swampbackwaternude1.jpg"></center>'
-			'Noticing the hunter, you rush over to your clothes and begin dressed yourself in panic. As you get fully dressed, you look over your shoulder, expecting the hunter standing there, but there is no one there.'
+			'Noticing the hunter, you rush over to your clothes and begin dressing yourself in panic. As you get fully dressed, you look over your shoulder, expecting the hunter standing there, but there is no one there.'
 			act'Further':gt 'backwater'
 		end
 	else
@@ -35,8 +34,8 @@ if $clothingworntype = 'nude' and hantersKnowSlut = 0 and hanters = 1 and hour >
 			cls
 			minut += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/swampbackwaternude2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Covering your Breasts and crotch you jump into the nearest bush. In your state of fear and confusion, you start scanning the area but you don''t see anyone there. You quickly run back towards the cabin.'
-			act'Further':gt 'swamp_yard'
+			'Covering your breasts and crotch you jump into the nearest bush. In your state of fear and confusion, you start scanning the area but you don''t see anyone there. You quickly run back towards the cabin.'
+			act'Go back to the hut':gt 'swamp_yard'
 		end
 	end
 	act'Stay naked':
@@ -261,7 +260,7 @@ if temper >= 10:
 	end
 end
 
-act 'Go':minut += 5 & gt'swamp_yard'
+act 'Go back to the hut':minut += 5 & gt'swamp_yard'
 
 if hantersRape = 2:
 	cla

+ 3 - 3
locations/gadfield.qsrc

@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'horse':
 			hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3) 
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'Further':gt'Gadsarai'
+			act 'Go back to your grandparent''s barn':gt'Gadsarai'
 		end
 	end
 	act 'Back':gt'gadfield','field'
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cow':
 			hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3) 
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'Further':gt'Gadsarai'
+			act 'Go back to your grandparent''s barn':gt'Gadsarai'
 		end
 	end
 	if graze_cow = 1:
@@ -463,7 +463,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cow3':
 			hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3) 
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'Further':gt'gadukino'
+			act 'Go back to the village':gt'gadukino'
 		end
 	end
 end

+ 9 - 11
locations/gadforest.qsrc

@@ -1,6 +1,5 @@
 # gadforest
 
-
 if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	PC_arrive = iif($loc ! 'Miroslava', 1 , 0)
 	!out skirt
@@ -155,7 +154,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 		end
 	end
 	if hour >= 6 and hour <= 20 and month >= 6 and month <= 9 and boletus + bilberry < 10 and edge_forestday ! daystart:
-		act 'To look for mushrooms and berries':
+		act 'Look for mushrooms and berries':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			minut += 30
@@ -200,7 +199,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 		end
  	end
 	if hour >= 6 and hour <= 20 and month >= 6 and month <= 9 and MiraLoc ! 3:
-		act 'To go further into the forest':
+		act 'Go further into the forest':
 			if goforest >= lostrand:minut += 30 & gt 'gadforest','2'
 			if goforest < lostrand:gt 'gadforest', 'gadforestloststart'
 	 	end
@@ -289,7 +288,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 		if goforest < lostrand:gt 'gadforest', 'gadforestloststart'
 	end
 	if hour >= 6 and hour <= 20 and month >= 6 and month <= 9 and boletus + bilberry < 10 and forestday ! daystart:
-			act 'To look for mushrooms and berries':
+			act 'Look for mushrooms and berries':
 				cla
 			*clr
 			minut += 30
@@ -334,7 +333,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 		end
 	end
 	if hour >= 6 and hour <= 20 and month >= 6 and month <= 9:
-		act 'To go further into the forest':
+		act 'Go further into the forest':
 			if goforest >= lostrand:minut += 30 & gt 'gadforest','3'
 			if goforest < lostrand:gt 'gadforest', 'gadforestloststart'
 	 	end
@@ -391,7 +390,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 	end
 	if hour >= 6 and hour <= 20 and month >= 6 and month <= 9 and boletus + bilberry < 10 and thicketday ! daystart:
 
-	act 'To look for mushrooms and berries':
+	act 'Look for mushrooms and berries':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 30
 			thicketday = daystart
@@ -410,7 +409,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 	end
 	if hour >= 6 and hour <= 20 and month >= 6 and month <= 9:
 
-		act 'To go further into the forest':
+		act 'Go further into the forest':
 			if goforest >= lostrand:minut += 30 & gt 'gadforest','4'
 			if goforest < lostrand:gt 'gadforest', 'gadforestloststart'
 	 	end
@@ -454,7 +453,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '4':
 			'Forest. Night in the winter forest is very scary and uncomfortable.'
 		end
 	end
-	if goforest < 60:'You do not know this part of the forest, then it is better not to go too far.'
+	if goforest < 60:'You do not know this part of the forest. It is better not to go too far in.'
 
 	if foresteventrand < 2 and month >= 6 and month <= 9 and foresteventday ! daystart: gt 'gadforest_event', 'bilberry'
 	if foresteventrand > 7 and month >= 6 and month <= 9 and foresteventday ! daystart: gt 'gadforest_event', 'mushroom'
@@ -466,7 +465,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '4':
 		if goforest < lostrand:gt 'gadforest', 'gadforestloststart'
 	end
 	if hour >= 6 and hour <= 20 and month >= 6 and month <= 9 and boletus + bilberry < 10 and swampforest ! daystart:
-			act 'To look for mushrooms and berries':
+			act 'Look for mushrooms and berries':
 				cla
 			*clr
 			minut += 30
@@ -485,7 +484,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '4':
 			act 'Further':gt 'gadforest','4'
 		end
 	end
-	act 'To go further into the forest':
+	act 'Go further into the forest':
 		if goforest >= lostrand and goswamp = 1:minut += 30 & gt 'swamp'
 		if goforest >= lostrand and goswamp = 0:minut += 30 & gt 'gadforestswamp','1'
 		if goforest < lostrand:gt 'gadforest', 'gadforestloststart'
@@ -563,6 +562,5 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'torncloth':
 	end
 end
 
-
 --- gadforest ---------------------------------
 

+ 112 - 114
locations/gadforest_event.qsrc

@@ -1,7 +1,6 @@
 # gadforest_event
 
-
-	!MiaLoc tells us where Mira is Located
+	!MiraLoc tells us where Mira is Located
 	!----------------------------------------------
 	!MiraLoc = 0 (Mira at home)
 	!MiraLoc = 1 (Mira at river)
@@ -24,7 +23,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_mitka':
 				gs 'stat'
 				!gs 'time'
 
-				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Pin</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Shkvoryen</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mitka.jpg"></center>'
 				'Walking through the forest you met Mitka, you chatted with him for a bit and went on.'
 
@@ -37,7 +36,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_mitka':
 				gs 'stat'
 				!gs 'time'
 
-				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Pin</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Shkvoryen</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mitka.jpg"></center>'
 				'Walking through the forest you met Mitka. You see him shamelessly scratching his balls.'
 				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, seeing you always gives me a boner, let''s go fuck." he says grinning.'
@@ -56,7 +55,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_mitka':
 					gs 'stat'
 					!gs 'time'
 
-					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Pin</font></b></center>'
+					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Shkvoryen</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mitka.jpg"></center>'
 					'Walking through the forest with Mira, you met Mitka. You chatted a bit together, as you were about to go further you noticed Mira wasn''t following you.'
 					'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you go on, I need to talk to Mitka in private." She says blushing. "He''ll take me home."'
@@ -129,7 +128,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_mitka':
 					gs 'stat'
 					!gs 'time'
 
-					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Pin</font></b></center>'
+					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Shkvoryen</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mitka.jpg"></center>'
 					'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Mitka. Seeing Mira, Mitka grabbed her hand and dragged her into the nearest bush, seeing that Mira is not resisting, you decided not to interfere and mind your own business.'
 
@@ -169,7 +168,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_mitka':
 					gadboyday = daystart
 					gs 'stat'
 					!gs 'time'
-					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Pin</font></b></center>'
+					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Shkvoryen</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mitka.jpg"></center>'
 					'Walking through the forest with Mira, you met Mitka. You had a little chat, noticing the interest Mira showed Mitka, and went on.'
 					act 'Further':gt 'gadforest','1'
@@ -182,7 +181,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_mitka':
 				gs 'stat'
 				!gs 'time'
 
-				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Pin</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Shkvoryen</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mitka.jpg"></center>'
 				'Walking through the woods with Mira you met Mitka. Scratching his balls and not paying any attention to Mira, who was standing right next to him, he said with a grin:'
 				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, seeing you always gives me a boner, let''s go fuck."'
@@ -200,7 +199,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_mitka':
 				gs 'stat'
 				!gs 'time'
 
-				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Pin</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Shkvoryen</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mitka.jpg"></center>'
 				'Walking through the woods with Mira you met Mitka. Scratching his balls, he said with a grin:'
 				'"Oh, you`re just who I need!" He grabbed you by the hand and dragged you into the nearest bush.'
@@ -231,13 +230,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_mitka':
 				gs 'stat'
 				!gs 'time'
 
-				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Pin</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Shkvoryen</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mitka.jpg"></center>'
 				if temp_gadf = 1:'Walking through the forest you come face-to-face with Mitka. He stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
 				if temp_gadf = 2:'Walking through the forest you saw Mitka. Realizing that he hasn''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 				*pl
 				if temp_gadf = 1:
-					act 'To run away and dress':
+					act 'Run away and get dressed':
 						cla
 						*clr
 						gopsawnaked += 1
@@ -294,7 +293,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_mitka':
 				gs 'stat'
 				!gs 'time'
 
-				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Pin</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Shkvoryen</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mitka.jpg"></center>'
 				'Walking through the forest you met Mitka. After spotting him him, you tried to dress, but Mitka, without wasting another minute he grabbed you by the hand and dragged you into the nearest bush.'
 
@@ -311,12 +310,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_mitka':
 					gs 'stat'
 					!gs 'time'
 
-					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Pin</font></b></center>'
+					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Shkvoryen</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mitka.jpg"></center>'
 					if temp_gadf = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka. He stared longingly at your naked body...'
 					if temp_gadf = 2:'Walking through the forest you saw Mitka. Realizing that he hasn''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 					if temp_gadf = 1:
-						act 'To run away and dress':
+						act 'Run away and get dressed':
 							cla
 							*clr
 							if gopsawnaked >= 10:gopsawnaked = 0 & npc_QW['A63'] += 1
@@ -357,13 +356,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_mitka':
 					gs 'stat'
 					!gs 'time'
 
-					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Pin</font></b></center>'
+					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Shkvoryen</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mitka.jpg"></center>'
 					if temp_gadf = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka. He stared longingly your naked body...'
 					if temp_gadf = 2:'Walking through the forest you saw Mitka. Realizing that he hasn''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 
 					if temp_gadf = 1:
-						act 'To run away and dress':
+						act 'Run away and get dressed':
 							cla
 							*clr
 							mitboyrand = 1
@@ -436,7 +435,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_mitka':
 				gs 'stat'
 				!gs 'time'
 
-				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Pin</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Shkvoryen</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mitka.jpg"></center>'
 				if temp_gadf = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka. You yelp in surprise, and rush to your clothing. You are running away with Mira, but before you get too far Mitka grabs you in his arms and drags you with him into the nearest bush.'
 				if temp_gadf = 2:'Walking through the forest you saw Mitka. Realizing that he hasn''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
@@ -466,7 +465,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_mitka':
 				gs 'stat'
 				!gs 'time'
 
-				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Pin</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Shkvoryen</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mitka.jpg"></center>'
 				'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka. Seeing you naked Mitka scratched his balls and dragged you into the nearest bush.'
 				act 'Further':gt 'mitkasex', 'forest1', 'A63'
@@ -477,7 +476,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_mitka':
 				gs 'stat'
 				!gs 'time'
 
-				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Pin</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Shkvoryen</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mitka.jpg"></center>'
 				'Walking through the forest you saw Mitka. Realizing that he hasn''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 				act 'Hide':
@@ -508,9 +507,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_kolyamba':
 				gs 'stat'
 				!gs 'time'
 
-				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Calamba</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolyamba Pyut</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/kolyamba.jpg"></center>'
-				'Walking through the forest you met Kolambu. You chatted with him for a bit and then went on.'
+				'Walking through the forest you met Kolyamba. You chatted with him for a bit and then went on.'
 
 				act 'Further':gt 'gadforest','1'
 			else
@@ -521,9 +520,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_kolyamba':
 				gs 'stat'
 				!gs 'time'
 
-				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Calamba</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolyamba Pyut</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/kolyamba.jpg"></center>'
-				'Walking through the forest you met Kolambu. Seeing you, he scratched his balls and dragged you into the nearest bushes.'
+				'Walking through the forest you met Kolyamba. Seeing you, he scratched his balls and dragged you into the nearest bushes.'
 
 				act 'Further':forest_gopsex = 1 & temphant = 5 & gt 'hanters', 'start'
 			end
@@ -538,9 +537,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_kolyamba':
 					gs 'stat'
 					!gs 'time'
 
-					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Calamba</font></b></center>'
+					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolyamba Pyut</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/kolyamba.jpg"></center>'
-					'Walking through the forest with Mira, you met Kolambu. Seeing Mira he grabbed her hand and dragged her into the nearest bush, seeing that Mira is not resisting, you decided not to interfere and mind your own business.'
+					'Walking through the forest with Mira, you met Kolyamba. Seeing Mira he grabbed her hand and dragged her into the nearest bush, seeing that Mira is not resisting, you decided not to interfere and mind your own business.'
 
 					act 'Go':gt 'gadforest','1'
 					act 'Spy':
@@ -549,7 +548,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_kolyamba':
 						mirasextimes += 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj2.jpg"></center>'
-						'Mira is still wearing her flip-flops, you see them sticking out, pressed right at Kolambu''s ass, as Mira has her legs wrapped around him. She groans loudly as Kolambu keeps slapping her crotch with his balls, driving his hard penis deep into her vagina. Mira is scratching the ground with her hands, her back arched like a cat''s, it looks like she is saying something to Kolambu. But he is not paying any attention, as he keeps battering her pussy, soon he brought her to orgasm and then he cums too...'
+						'Mira is still wearing her flip-flops, you see them sticking out, pressed right at Kolyamba''s ass, as Mira has her legs wrapped around him. She groans loudly as Kolyamba keeps slapping her crotch with his balls, driving his hard penis deep into her vagina. Mira is scratching the ground with her hands, her back arched like a cat''s, it looks like she is saying something to Kolyamba. But he is not paying any attention, as he keeps battering her pussy, soon he brought her to orgasm and then he cums too...'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Further':gt 'gadforest','1'
@@ -561,9 +560,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_kolyamba':
 					gadboyday = daystart
 					gs 'stat'
 					!gs 'time'
-					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Calamba</font></b></center>'
+					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolyamba Pyut</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/kolyamba.jpg"></center>'
-					'Walking through the forest with Mira, you met Kolambu. You had a little chat and went on.'
+					'Walking through the forest with Mira, you met Kolyamba. You had a little chat and went on.'
 					act 'Further':gt 'gadforest','1'
 				end
 			elseif npc_QW['A63'] >= 13 and npc_QW['A60'] < 11 and gadriver_gang < 3:
@@ -575,9 +574,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_kolyamba':
 				gs 'stat'
 				!gs 'time'
 
-				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Calamba</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolyamba Pyut</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/kolyamba.jpg"></center>'
-				'Walking through the woods with Mira you met Kolambu. Scratching his balls and not paying any attention to Mira, who was standing right next to him, he dragged you into the nearest bush.'
+				'Walking through the woods with Mira you met Kolyamba. Scratching his balls and not paying any attention to Mira, who was standing right next to him, he dragged you into the nearest bush.'
 
 				act 'Further':forest_gopsex = 1 & temphant = 5 & gt 'hanters', 'start'
 			elseif npc_QW['A63'] >= 13 and npc_QW['A60'] >= 11 and gadriver_gang < 3:
@@ -589,9 +588,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_kolyamba':
 				gs 'stat'
 				!gs 'time'
 
-				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Calamba</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolyamba Pyut</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/kolyamba.jpg"></center>'
-				'Walking through the woods with Mira you met Kolambu. Seeing you, he scratched his balls and grabbing you both by the arms, dragged into the bushes.'
+				'Walking through the woods with Mira you met Kolyamba. Seeing you, he scratched his balls and grabbing you both by the arms, dragged into the bushes.'
 				act 'Further':gt 'mitkasex', 'forest1', 'A61'
 			else
 				cla
@@ -601,9 +600,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_kolyamba':
 				gs 'stat'
 				!gs 'time'
 
-				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Calamba</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolyamba Pyut</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/kolyamba.jpg"></center>'
-				'Walking through the forest with Mira, you met Kolambu. You had a little chat and went on.'
+				'Walking through the forest with Mira, you met Kolyamba. You had a little chat and went on.'
 				act 'Further':gt 'gadforest','1'
 			end
 		end
@@ -618,10 +617,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_kolyamba':
 				gadboyday = daystart
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Calamba</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolyamba Pyut</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/kolyamba.jpg"></center>'
-				if temp_gadf = 1:'Walking through the forest you come face-to-face with Kolambu. He stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
-				if temp_gadf = 2:'Walking through the forest you saw Kolambu. Realizing that he hasn''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
+				if temp_gadf = 1:'Walking through the forest you come face-to-face with Kolyamba. He stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
+				if temp_gadf = 2:'Walking through the forest you saw Kolyamba. Realizing that he hasn''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 				*pl
 				if temp_gadf = 1:
 					act 'To run away and dress':
@@ -651,7 +650,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_kolyamba':
 						!gs 'time'
 
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/mitkahideforest.jpg"></center>'
-						'You quickly hide in the nearby bushes. Kolambu walks right past not noticing you. You let out a breath and go on.'
+						'You quickly hide in the nearby bushes. Kolyamba walks right past not noticing you. You let out a breath and go on.'
 
 						act 'Further':gt 'gadforest','1'
 					end
@@ -665,9 +664,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_kolyamba':
 				gs 'stat'
 				!gs 'time'
 
-				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Calamba</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolyamba Pyut</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/kolyamba.jpg"></center>'
-				'Walking through the forest you met Kolambu. After spotting him, you tried to dress, but Kolambu, without wasting another minute grabbed you by the hand and dragged you into the nearest bush.'
+				'Walking through the forest you met Kolyamba. After spotting him, you tried to dress, but Kolyamba, without wasting another minute grabbed you by the hand and dragged you into the nearest bush.'
 
 				act 'Further':forest_gopsex = 1 & temphant = 5 & gt 'hanters', 'start'
 			end
@@ -682,10 +681,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_kolyamba':
 					gs 'stat'
 					!gs 'time'
 
-					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Calamba</font></b></center>'
+					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolyamba Pyut</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/kolyamba.jpg"></center>'
-					if temp_gadf = 1:'Walking through the forest you come face-to-face with Kolambu. He stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
-					if temp_gadf = 2:'Walking through the forest you saw Kolambu. Realizing that he hasn''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
+					if temp_gadf = 1:'Walking through the forest you come face-to-face with Kolyamba. He stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
+					if temp_gadf = 2:'Walking through the forest you saw Kolyamba. Realizing that he hasn''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 					if temp_gadf = 1:
 						act 'To run away and dress':
 							cla
@@ -714,7 +713,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_kolyamba':
 							!gs 'time'
 
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/gophideforest.jpg"></center>'
-							'You and Mira, quickly hide in the nearby bushes. Kolambu walks right past not noticing you. You let out a breath and go on.'
+							'You and Mira, quickly hide in the nearby bushes. Kolyamba walks right past not noticing you. You let out a breath and go on.'
 
 							act 'Further':gt 'gadforest','1'
 						end
@@ -728,10 +727,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_kolyamba':
 					gs 'stat'
 					!gs 'time'
 
-					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Calamba</font></b></center>'
+					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolyamba Pyut</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/kolyamba.jpg"></center>'
-					if temp_gadf = 1:'Walking through the forest you come face-to-face with Kolambu. He stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
-					if temp_gadf = 2:'Walking through the forest you saw Kolambu. Realizing that he hasn''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
+					if temp_gadf = 1:'Walking through the forest you come face-to-face with Kolyamba. He stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
+					if temp_gadf = 2:'Walking through the forest you saw Kolyamba. Realizing that he hasn''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 
 					if temp_gadf = 1:
 						act 'To run away and dress':
@@ -749,7 +748,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_kolyamba':
 							!gs 'time'
 
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/gopforestnude.jpg"></center>'
-							'You yelp in surprise, and you and Mira rush to your clothes. Running away you barely catch with the corner of your eye Kolambu grabbing Mira''s hand and dragging her into the nearest bush. Seeing that Mira is not resisting, you decide not to intervene. Dressed and calm you decide...'
+							'You yelp in surprise, and you and Mira rush to your clothes. Running away you barely catch with the corner of your eye Kolyamba grabbing Mira''s hand and dragging her into the nearest bush. Seeing that Mira is not resisting, you decide not to intervene. Dressed and calm you decide...'
 
 							act 'Go':gt 'gadforest','1'
 							act 'Spy':
@@ -760,7 +759,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_kolyamba':
 								mirasextimes += 1
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirameadowbj2.jpg"></center>'
-								'Mira is still wearing her flip-flops, you see them sticking out, pressed right at Kolambu''s ass, as Mira has her legs wrapped around him. She groans loudly as Kolambu keeps slapping her crotch with his balls, driving his hard penis deep into her vagina. Mira is scratching the ground with her hands, her back arched like a cat''s, it looks like she is saying something to Kolambu. But he is not paying any attention, as he keeps battering her pussy, soon he brought her to orgasm and then he cums too...'
+								'Mira is still wearing her flip-flops, you see them sticking out, pressed right at Kolyamba''s ass, as Mira has her legs wrapped around him. She groans loudly as Kolyamba keeps slapping her crotch with his balls, driving his hard penis deep into her vagina. Mira is scratching the ground with her hands, her back arched like a cat''s, it looks like she is saying something to Kolyamba. But he is not paying any attention, as he keeps battering her pussy, soon he brought her to orgasm and then he cums too...'
 								act 'Further':gt 'gadforest','1'
 							end
 						end
@@ -774,7 +773,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_kolyamba':
 							!gs 'time'
 
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/gophideforest.jpg"></center>'
-							'You and Mira, quickly hide in the nearby bushes. Kolambu walks right past not noticing you. You let out a breath and go on.'
+							'You and Mira, quickly hide in the nearby bushes. Kolyamba walks right past not noticing you. You let out a breath and go on.'
 
 							act 'Further':gt 'gadforest','1'
 						end
@@ -789,10 +788,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_kolyamba':
 				gs 'stat'
 				!gs 'time'
 
-				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Calamba</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolyamba Pyut</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/kolyamba.jpg"></center>'
-				 if temp_gadf = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Kolambu. You yelp in surprise, and rush to your clothing. You are running away with Mira, but before you get too far Kolambu grabs you in his arms and drags you with him into the nearest bush.'
-				 if temp_gadf = 2:'Walking through the forest you saw Kolambu. Realizing that he hasn''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
+				 if temp_gadf = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Kolyamba. You yelp in surprise, and rush to your clothing. You are running away with Mira, but before you get too far Kolyamba grabs you in his arms and drags you with him into the nearest bush.'
+				 if temp_gadf = 2:'Walking through the forest you saw Kolyamba. Realizing that he hasn''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 
 				if temp_gadf = 1:act 'Further':Miraloc = 0 & forest_gopsex = 1 & temphant = 5 & gt 'hanters', 'start'
 				if temp_gadf = 2:
@@ -805,7 +804,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_kolyamba':
 						!gs 'time'
 
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/gophideforest.jpg"></center>'
-						'You and Mira, quickly hide in the nearby bushes. Kolambu walks right past not noticing you. You let out a breath and go on.'
+						'You and Mira, quickly hide in the nearby bushes. Kolyamba walks right past not noticing you. You let out a breath and go on.'
 
 						act 'Further':gt 'gadforest','1'
 					end
@@ -820,9 +819,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_kolyamba':
 				gs 'stat'
 				!gs 'time'
 
-				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Calamba</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolyamba Pyut</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/kolyamba.jpg"></center>'
-				'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Kolambu. Seeing you naked Kolambu scratched his balls and dragged you into the nearest bush.'
+				'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Kolyamba. Seeing you naked Kolyamba scratched his balls and dragged you into the nearest bush.'
 				act 'Further':gt 'mitkasex', 'forest1', 'A61'
 			else
 				cla
@@ -832,9 +831,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_kolyamba':
 				gs 'stat'
 				!gs 'time'
 
-				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Calamba</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolyamba Pyut</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/kolyamba.jpg"></center>'
-				'Walking through the forest you saw Kolambu. Realizing that he hasn''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
+				'Walking through the forest you saw Kolyamba. Realizing that he hasn''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 				act 'Hide':
 					cla
 					*clr
@@ -844,7 +843,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_kolyamba':
 					!gs 'time'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/gophideforest.jpg"></center>'
-					'You and Mira, quickly hide in the nearby bushes. Kolambu walks right past not noticing you. You let out a breath and go on.'
+					'You and Mira, quickly hide in the nearby bushes. Kolyamba walks right past not noticing you. You let out a breath and go on.'
 
 					act 'Further':gt 'gadforest','1'
 				end
@@ -1222,9 +1221,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_2boys':
 				!gs 'time'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/2boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				if temphant = 4:'Walking through the forest you met Mitka and Kolambu. You chatted with them a bit and went on.'
+				if temphant = 4:'Walking through the forest you met Mitka and Kolyamba. You chatted with them a bit and went on.'
 				if temphant = 5:'Walking through the forest you met Mitka and Vasyan. You chatted with them a bit and went on.'
-				if temphant = 6:'Walking through the forest you met Kolambu and Vasyan. You chatted with them a bit and went on.'
+				if temphant = 6:'Walking through the forest you met Kolyamba and Vasyan. You chatted with them a bit and went on.'
 
 				act 'Further':gt 'gadforest','1'
 			else
@@ -1236,9 +1235,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_2boys':
 				!gs 'time'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/2boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				if temphant = 4:'Walking through the forest you met Mitka and Kolambu. Seeing you, they grinned and dragged you to the bushes.'
+				if temphant = 4:'Walking through the forest you met Mitka and Kolyamba. Seeing you, they grinned and dragged you to the bushes.'
 				if temphant = 5:'Walking through the forest you met Mitka and Vasyan. Seeing you, they grinned and dragged you to the bushes.'
-				if temphant = 6:'Walking through the forest you met Kolambu and Vasyan. Seeing you, they grinned and dragged you to the bushes.'
+				if temphant = 6:'Walking through the forest you met Kolyamba and Vasyan. Seeing you, they grinned and dragged you to the bushes.'
 
 				act 'Further':forest_gopsex = 2 & gt 'hantersex', 'doublelovesex'
 			end
@@ -1255,9 +1254,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_2boys':
 					!gs 'time'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/2boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-					if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Mitka and Kolambu. Seeing Mira, they grabbed by the arms and dragged her into the nearest bush, seeing that Mira is not resisting, you decided not to interfere and mind your own business.'
+					if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Mitka and Kolyamba. Seeing Mira, they grabbed by the arms and dragged her into the nearest bush, seeing that Mira is not resisting, you decided not to interfere and mind your own business.'
 					if mitboyrand = 2:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Mitka and Vasyan. Seeing Mira, they grabbed by the arms and dragged her into the nearest bush, seeing that Mira is not resisting, you decided not to interfere and mind your own business.'
-					if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Kolambu and Vasyan. Seeing Mira, they grabbed by the arms and dragged her into the nearest bush, seeing that Mira is not resisting, you decided not to interfere and mind your own business.'
+					if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Kolyamba and Vasyan. Seeing Mira, they grabbed by the arms and dragged her into the nearest bush, seeing that Mira is not resisting, you decided not to interfere and mind your own business.'
 
 					act 'Go':gt 'gadforest','1'
 					act 'Spy':
@@ -1292,9 +1291,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_2boys':
 					!gs 'time'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/2boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-					if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Mitka and Kolambu. You chatted with them a bit and went on.'
+					if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Mitka and Kolyamba. You chatted with them a bit and went on.'
 					if mitboyrand = 2:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Mitka and Vasyan. You chatted with them a bit and went on.'
-					if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Kolambu and Vasyan. You chatted with them a bit and went on.'
+					if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Kolyamba and Vasyan. You chatted with them a bit and went on.'
 					act 'Further':gt 'gadforest','1'
 				end
 			elseif npc_QW['A63'] >= 13 and npc_QW['A60'] < 11 and gadriver_gang < 3:
@@ -1307,9 +1306,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_2boys':
 				!gs 'time'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/2boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Mitka and Kolambu. Seeing you, they smiled and not paying any attention to Mira, who was standing right next to them, they dragged you into the nearest bush.'
+				if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Mitka and Kolyamba. Seeing you, they smiled and not paying any attention to Mira, who was standing right next to them, they dragged you into the nearest bush.'
 				if mitboyrand = 2:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Mitka and Vasyan. Seeing you, they smiled and not paying any attention to Mira, who was standing right next to them, they dragged you into the nearest bush.'
-				if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira you meet Kolambu and Vasyan. Seeing you, they smiled and not paying any attention to Mira, who was standing right next to them, they dragged you into the nearest bush.'
+				if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira you meet Kolyamba and Vasyan. Seeing you, they smiled and not paying any attention to Mira, who was standing right next to them, they dragged you into the nearest bush.'
 
 				act 'Further':forest_gopsex = 2 & gt 'hantersex', 'doublelovesex'
 			elseif npc_QW['A63'] >= 13 and npc_QW['A60'] >= 11 and gadriver_gang < 3:
@@ -1322,9 +1321,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_2boys':
 				!gs 'time'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/2boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Mitka and Kolambu. They are happy to see you, grabbing you both by the arms, they drag you into the nearest bush.'
+				if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Mitka and Kolyamba. They are happy to see you, grabbing you both by the arms, they drag you into the nearest bush.'
 				if mitboyrand = 2:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Mitka and Vasyan. They are happy to see you, grabbing you both by the arms, they drag you into the nearest bush.'
-				if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Kolambu and Vasyan. They are happy to see you, grabbing you both by the arms, they drag you into the nearest bush.'
+				if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Kolyamba and Vasyan. They are happy to see you, grabbing you both by the arms, they drag you into the nearest bush.'
 				act 'Further': gt 'mitkasex', 'forest2', mitboyrand
 			else
 				cla
@@ -1335,9 +1334,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_2boys':
 				!gs 'time'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/2boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Mitka and Kolambu. You chatted with them a bit and went on.'
+				if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Mitka and Kolyamba. You chatted with them a bit and went on.'
 				if mitboyrand = 2:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Mitka and Vasyan. You chatted with them a bit and went on.'
-				if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Kolambu and Vasyan. You chatted with them a bit and went on.'
+				if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Kolyamba and Vasyan. You chatted with them a bit and went on.'
 				act 'Further':gt 'gadforest','1'
 			end
 		end
@@ -1356,13 +1355,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_2boys':
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/2boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 				if temp_gadf = 1:
-					if temphant = 1:'Walking through the forest you come face-to-face with Mitka and Kolambu. They stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
+					if temphant = 1:'Walking through the forest you come face-to-face with Mitka and Kolyamba. They stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
 					if temphant = 2:'Walking through the forest you come face-to-face with Mitka and Vasyan. They stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
-					if temphant = 3:'Walking through the forest you come face-to-face with Kolambu and Vasyan. They stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
+					if temphant = 3:'Walking through the forest you come face-to-face with Kolyamba and Vasyan. They stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
 				else
-					if temphant = 1:'Walking through the forest you saw Mitka and Kolambu. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
+					if temphant = 1:'Walking through the forest you saw Mitka and Kolyamba. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 					if temphant = 2:'Walking through the forest you saw Mitka and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
-					if temphant = 3:'Walking through the woods you saw Kolambu and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
+					if temphant = 3:'Walking through the woods you saw Kolyamba and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 				end
 				*pl
 				if temp_gadf = 1:
@@ -1405,9 +1404,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_2boys':
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/2boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				if temphant = 1:'Walking through the forest you met Mitka and Kolambu. Seeing them you tried to run away and dress, but without wasting another minute they grabbed you by the arms and dragged you into the nearest bush.'
+				if temphant = 1:'Walking through the forest you met Mitka and Kolyamba. Seeing them you tried to run away and dress, but without wasting another minute they grabbed you by the arms and dragged you into the nearest bush.'
 				if temphant = 2:'Walking through the forest you met Mitka and Vasyan. Seeing them you tried to run away and dress, but without wasting another minute they grabbed you by the arms and dragged you into the nearest bush.'
-				if temphant = 3:'Walking through the forest you met Kolambu and Vasyan. Seeing them you tried to run away and dress, but without wasting another minute they grabbed you by the arms and dragged you into the nearest bush.'
+				if temphant = 3:'Walking through the forest you met Kolyamba and Vasyan. Seeing them you tried to run away and dress, but without wasting another minute they grabbed you by the arms and dragged you into the nearest bush.'
 
 				act 'Further':forest_gopsex = 2 & gt 'hantersex', 'doublelovesex'
 			end
@@ -1425,13 +1424,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_2boys':
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/2boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 					if temp_gadf = 1:
-						if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka and Kolambu. They stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
+						if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka and Kolyamba. They stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
 						if mitboyrand = 2:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka and Vasyan. They stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
-						if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Kolambu and Vasyan. They stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
+						if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Kolyamba and Vasyan. They stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
 					else
-						if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Mitka and Kolambu. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
+						if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Mitka and Kolyamba. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 						if mitboyrand = 2:'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Mitka and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
-						if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Kolambu and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
+						if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Kolyamba and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 					end
 					if temp_gadf = 1:
 						act 'To run away and dress':
@@ -1479,13 +1478,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_2boys':
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/2boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 					if temp_gadf = 1:
-						if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka and Kolambu. They stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
+						if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka and Kolyamba. They stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
 						if mitboyrand = 2:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka and Vasyan. They stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
-						if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Kolambu and Vasyan. They stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
+						if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Kolyamba and Vasyan. They stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
 					else
-						if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Mitka and Kolambu. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
+						if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Mitka and Kolyamba. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 						if mitboyrand = 2:'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Mitka and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
-						if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Kolambu and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
+						if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Kolyamba and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 					end
 
 					if temp_gadf = 1:
@@ -1558,13 +1557,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_2boys':
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/2boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 				if temp_gadf = 1:
-					if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka and Kolambu. You yelp in surprise, and rush to your clothing. You are running away with Mira, but before you get too far the guys grab you by the arms and drag you with them into the nearest bush.'
+					if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka and Kolyamba. You yelp in surprise, and rush to your clothing. You are running away with Mira, but before you get too far the guys grab you by the arms and drag you with them into the nearest bush.'
 					if mitboyrand = 2:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka and Vasyan. You yelp in surprise, and rush to your clothing. You are running away with Mira, but before you get too far the guys grab you by the arms and drag you with them into the nearest bush.'
-					if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Kolambu and Vasyan. You yelp in surprise, and rush to your clothing. You are running away with Mira, but before you get too far the guys grab you by the arms and drag you with them into the nearest bush.'
+					if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Kolyamba and Vasyan. You yelp in surprise, and rush to your clothing. You are running away with Mira, but before you get too far the guys grab you by the arms and drag you with them into the nearest bush.'
 				else
-					if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Mitka and Kolambu. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
+					if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Mitka and Kolyamba. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 					if mitboyrand = 2:'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Mitka and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
-					if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Kolambu and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
+					if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Kolyamba and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 				end
 
 				if temp_gadf = 1:act 'Further':Miraloc = 0 & forest_gopsex = 2 & gt 'hantersex', 'doublelovesex'
@@ -1594,9 +1593,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_2boys':
 				!gs 'time'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/2boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka and Kolambu. Seeing you naked they scratched their balls and dragged you into the nearest bush.'
+				if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka and Kolyamba. Seeing you naked they scratched their balls and dragged you into the nearest bush.'
 				if mitboyrand = 2:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka and Vasyan. Seeing you naked they scratched their balls and dragged you into the nearest bush.'
-				if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Kolambu and Vasyan. Seeing you naked they scratched their balls and dragged you into the nearest bush.'
+				if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Kolyamba and Vasyan. Seeing you naked they scratched their balls and dragged you into the nearest bush.'
 				act 'Further': gt 'mitkasex', 'forest2', mitboyrand
 			else
 				cla
@@ -1607,9 +1606,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_2boys':
 				!gs 'time'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/2boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Mitka and Kolambu. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
+				if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Mitka and Kolyamba. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 				if mitboyrand = 2:'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Mitka and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
-				if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Kolambu and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
+				if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Kolyamba and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 				act 'Hide':
 					cla
 					*clr
@@ -1639,7 +1638,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_3boys':
 				!gs 'time'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/3boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'Walking through the forest you met Mitka, Kolambu and Vasyan. You chatted with them a bit and went on.'
+				'Walking through the forest you met Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan. You chatted with them a bit and went on.'
 
 				act 'Further':gt 'gadforest','1'
 			else
@@ -1651,7 +1650,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_3boys':
 				!gs 'time'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/3boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'Walking through the forest you met Mitka, Kolambu and Vasyan. Seeing you, they grinned and dragged you with them to the bushes.'
+				'Walking through the forest you met Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan. Seeing you, they grinned and dragged you with them to the bushes.'
 
 				act 'Further':forest_gopsex = 3 & gt 'hanters', 'start'
 			end
@@ -1667,7 +1666,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_3boys':
 					!gs 'time'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/3boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-					'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Mitka, Kolambu and Vasyan. Seeing Mira, they grabbed her by the arms and dragged her into the nearest bush, seeing that Mira is not resisting, you decided not to interfere and mind your own business.'
+					'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan. Seeing Mira, they grabbed her by the arms and dragged her into the nearest bush, seeing that Mira is not resisting, you decided not to interfere and mind your own business.'
 
 					act 'Go':gt 'gadforest','1'
 					act 'Spy':
@@ -1690,7 +1689,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_3boys':
 					!gs 'time'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/3boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-					'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Mitka, Kolambu and Vasyan. You chatted with them a bit and went on.'
+					'Walking through the forest with Mira, you meet Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan. You chatted with them a bit and went on.'
 					act 'Further':gt 'gadforest','1'
 				end
 			elseif npc_QW['A63'] >= 13 and npc_QW['A60'] < 11 and gadriver_gang < 3:
@@ -1703,7 +1702,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_3boys':
 				!gs 'time'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/3boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'Walking through the forest with Mira you meet Mitka, Kolambu and Vasyan. Seeing you, they smiled and not paying any attention to Mira, who was standing right next to them, they dragged you into the nearest bush.'
+				'Walking through the forest with Mira you meet Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan. Seeing you, they smiled and not paying any attention to Mira, who was standing right next to them, they dragged you into the nearest bush.'
 
 				act 'Further':forest_gopsex = 3 & gt 'hanters', 'start'
 			elseif npc_QW['A63'] >= 13 and npc_QW['A60'] >= 11 and gadriver_gang < 3:
@@ -1716,7 +1715,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_3boys':
 				!gs 'time'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/3boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'Walking through the forest with Mira you meet Mitka, Kolambu and Vasyan. They are happy to see you, grabbing you both by the arms, they drag you into the nearest bush.'
+				'Walking through the forest with Mira you meet Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan. They are happy to see you, grabbing you both by the arms, they drag you into the nearest bush.'
 				act 'Further': gt 'mitkasex', 'forest3'
 			else
 				cla
@@ -1727,7 +1726,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_3boys':
 				!gs 'time'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/3boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'Walking through the forest with Mira you meet Mitka, Kolambu and Vasyan. You chatted with them a bit and went on.'
+				'Walking through the forest with Mira you meet Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan. You chatted with them a bit and went on.'
 				act 'Further':gt 'gadforest','1'
 			end
 		end
@@ -1745,9 +1744,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_3boys':
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/3boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 				if temp_gadf = 1:
-					'Walking through the forest you come face-to-face with Mitka, Kolambu and Vasyan. They stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
+					'Walking through the forest you come face-to-face with Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan. They stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
 				else
-					'Walking through the forest you saw Mitka, Kolambu and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
+					'Walking through the forest you saw Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 				end
 				*pl
 				if temp_gadf = 1:
@@ -1793,7 +1792,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_3boys':
 				!gs 'time'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/3boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'Walking through the forest you met Mitka, Kolambu and Vasyan. Seeing them you tried to run away and dress, but without wasting another minute they grabbed you by the arms and dragged you into the nearest bush.'
+				'Walking through the forest you met Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan. Seeing them you tried to run away and dress, but without wasting another minute they grabbed you by the arms and dragged you into the nearest bush.'
 
 				act 'Further':forest_gopsex = 3 & gt 'hanters', 'start'
 			end
@@ -1810,9 +1809,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_3boys':
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/3boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 					if temp_gadf = 1:
-						'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka, Kolambu and Vasyan. They stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
+						'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan. They stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
 					else
-						'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Mitka, Kolambu and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
+						'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 					end
 					if temp_gadf = 1:
 						act 'To run away and dress':
@@ -1860,9 +1859,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_3boys':
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/3boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 					if temp_gadf = 1:
-						'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka, Kolambu and Vasyan. They stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
+						'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan. They stared longingly at your naked body, and you decide...'
 					else
-						'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Mitka, Kolambu and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
+						'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 					end
 
 					if temp_gadf = 1:
@@ -1923,9 +1922,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_3boys':
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/3boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 				if temp_gadf = 1:
-					'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka, Kolambu and Vasyan. You yelp in surprise, and rush to your clothing. You are running away with Mira, but before you get too far the guys grab you by the arms and drag you with them into the nearest bush..'
+					'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan. You yelp in surprise, and rush to your clothing. You are running away with Mira, but before you get too far the guys grab you by the arms and drag you with them into the nearest bush..'
 				else
-					'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Mitka, Kolambu and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
+					'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 				end
 
 				if temp_gadf = 1:act 'Further':Miraloc = 0 & forest_gopsex = 3 & gt 'hanters', 'start'
@@ -1955,7 +1954,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_3boys':
 				!gs 'time'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/3boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka, Kolambu and Vasyan. Seeing you naked they scratched their balls and dragged you into the nearest bush.'
+				'Walking through the forest with Mira, you come face-to-face with Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan. Seeing you naked they scratched their balls and dragged you into the nearest bush.'
 				act 'Further': gt 'mitkasex', 'forest2', rand(1,3)
 			else
 				cla
@@ -1966,7 +1965,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopforest_3boys':
 				!gs 'time'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/3boys.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Mitka, Kolambu and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
+				'Walking through the forest with Mira you saw Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan. Realizing that they haven''t noticed you yet, you decide...'
 				act 'Hide':
 					cla
 					*clr
@@ -2759,6 +2758,5 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'relax':
 	end
 end
 
-
 --- gadforest_event ---------------------------------
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/gadforestlost.qsrc

@@ -298,7 +298,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadforestlostfinish4':
 end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'searchfood':
 	if hour >= 6 and hour <= 20 and month >= 6 and month <= 9 and boletus + bilberry < 10:
-		act 'To look for mushrooms and berries':
+		act 'Look for mushrooms and berries':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			minut += 30

+ 5 - 5
locations/gadforestrelax.qsrc

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ end
     
 if ($clothingworntype ! 'nude' and $clothingworntype ! 'swimwear') and bonfire = 1:
 	if edahot = 1:
-	    act 'To eat fried mushrooms':
+	    act 'Eat fried mushrooms':
 	        cla
 	        *clr
 	        minut += 15
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ if ($clothingworntype ! 'nude' and $clothingworntype ! 'swimwear') and bonfire =
             act 'Further':gt 'gadforestrelax'
         end
     end       	     
-   	act 'To get warm by the fire':
+   	act 'Get warm by the fire':
         cla
    	    *clr
         minut += 60
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ if ($clothingworntype ! 'nude' and $clothingworntype ! 'swimwear') and bonfire =
    	    
    	    act 'Further':gt 'gadforestrelax' 
    	end
-	act 'To lie down to take a NAP around the campfire':
+	act 'Nap by the campfire':
         cla
    	    *clr	
 	    if pcs_sleep < 40:
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ if $clothingworntype ! 'nude' and bonfire = 0:
    	    
    	    act 'Further':gt 'gadforestrelax' 
    	end
-	act 'To lie down and take a NAP':
+	act 'Nap on the ground':
         cla
    	    *clr	
 	    if pcs_sleep < 40:
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ if $clothingworntype ! 'nude' and bonfire = 0:
 end
 
 if bilberry > 0:
-	act 'To eat berries':
+	act 'Eat berries':
 	    cla
 	    *clr
 	    minut += 30

+ 4 - 4
locations/gadforestswamp.qsrc

@@ -21,11 +21,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/gadforestlostswamp_winter_night.jpg"></center>'
 		end
 	end
-	'You went to the marsh, behind it you can see some kind of hut. You can go back into the woods or try to get to the hut through the mash, but will you have enough strength and dexterity to overcome this mess?'
+	'You went to the marsh, behind it you can see some kind of hut. You can go back into the woods or try to get to the hut through the mash, but will you have enough strength and agility to overcome this obstacle?'
 
 	act 'Go back to the forest':gt 'gadforestlost','4'
 
-	act 'To go through the mire':
+	act 'Try to go forward through the mire':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 10
 		swamprand = pcs_stren + pcs_agil
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Trying to get back to the woods':
+	act 'Try to get back to the woods':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 10
 		swamprand = pcs_stren + pcs_agil
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 			if swamprand < temp_gads and temp_gads > 20:gt 'gadforestswamp','2'
 		end
 	end
-	act 'Try to go on to the house':
+	act 'Try to go on to the hut':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		minut += 10

+ 7 - 7
locations/gadprostitutes.qsrc

@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	if hour >= 18:
 		if miraprost > 0 and npc_QW['A60'] > 30:
 			!last events end after 1.2.5 will be 31 by illume
-			'You a look around for a bit, for Mira, you spot her standing below a streetlight down road a little ways.'
+			'You a look around for Mira and spot her standing below a streetlight down the road a little ways.'
 			if mirapimp = 0:
 				pcs_dom += RAND(2,6)
 				mirapimp = 1
@@ -68,22 +68,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						minut += 20
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/village/mira/miraprost2.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You walk up and look into the van.  You see Mira showing the John her tits and rubbing her pussy.  You see a hungry gleam in the guys eyes, which Mira returns in force.'
+						'You walk up and look into the van.  You see Mira showing the john her tits and rubbing her pussy.  You see a hungry gleam in the guys eyes, which Mira returns in force.'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miraprost2_1.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'Mira and her John jump into the back of the van and you watch as he start fucking her wet pussy.  His hand covers her mouth as she screams in ecstasy.  The guy pounds his 20cm cock deep into her pussy.  From Mira''s grunts of partial ecstasy, partial pain, you know the John is hitting or entering her cervix.'
+						'Mira and her john jump into the back of the van and you watch as he start fucking her wet pussy.  His hand covers her mouth as she screams in ecstasy.  The guy pounds his 20cm cock deep into her pussy.  From Mira''s grunts of partial ecstasy, partial pain, you know the John is hitting or entering her cervix.'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miraprost2_2.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'You have to duck behing some bushes as they move outside the van.  The guy continues to pound into Mira''s pussy until he cums...and cums...and cums. '
 						'<left><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mira/miracumpump.mp4"></video></left>''<right><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mira/miracumdump.mp4"></video></right>'
-						'After the wild sex, Mira and the John sit in the van and talk for a bit.  He gives her a nice wad of cash and she starts walking to the village.  Seeing you, she smiles and waves a fist full of bills.'
+						'After the wild sex, Mira and the john sit in the van and talk for a bit.  He gives her a nice wad of cash and she starts walking to the village.  Seeing you, she smiles and waves a fist full of bills.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 25
 						gs 'stat'
 					else
 						'Mira walks along the street showing off her legs to passing car and trucks, but no one stops to partake of her services.'
 					end
-					act 'walk away': gt 'gadukino'
+					act 'Walk back to the village': gt 'gadukino'
 				end
 			end
-			act 'walk away': 
+			act 'Walk back to the village': 
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				gt 'gadukino'
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	else
 		'At this time no one will be here.'
 	end
-	act 'walk away': gt 'gadukino'
+	act 'Walk backto the village': gt 'gadukino'
 end
 
 --- gadprostitutes ---------------------------------

+ 22 - 22
locations/gadriver.qsrc

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		end
 	end
 
-	'A large river flows lazily a hundred meters in the northern outskirts of Gadukino.'
+	'A large river flows lazily a for a few hundred meters in the northern outskirts of Gadukino.'
 
 	if hour >= 6 and hour < 21 and sunWeather = 1: 'You see the local <a href="exec:gt ''Gadriver'', ''fishers''">fishermen</a> fishing with their rods on the riverbank.'
 
@@ -34,12 +34,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	if temp_gr = 4 and MiraLoc ! 1 and npc_QW['A63'] >= 13 and hour >= 5 and sub > 0:
 		if mitkaguysriver ! daystart:
 			mitkaguysriver = daystart
-			'While going to the river you meet Kolyamba and Vasya. They first invite you to join them, then insist you go with them.'
+			'While going to the river you meet Kolyamba and Vasyan. They first invite you to join them, then insist you go with them.'
 
 			act 'Go with them':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex17.jpg"></center>'
-				'The boys take you to Vasya''s house, where, they rudely keep pushing you until you are bent over the kitchen table. They then take turns fucking you...'
+				'The boys take you to Vasyan''s house, where, they rudely keep pushing you until you are bent over the kitchen table. They then take turns fucking you...'
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A61'
 				npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 				pose = 1
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			act 'Go with them':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex18.jpg"></center>'
-				'The boys lead you to Vasya''s house, where they spend an hour fucking you in the ass...'
+				'The boys lead you to Vasyan''s house, where they spend an hour fucking you in the ass...'
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A63'
 				npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 20, 'gangbang', 'sub'
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	elseif temp_gr = 6 and MiraLoc ! 1 and npc_QW['A63'] >= 13 and hour >= 5 and sub > 0:
 		if mitkaguysriver ! daystart:
 			mitkaguysriver = daystart
-			'On your way to the river you meet Vasya, he insists you follow him home...'
+			'On your way to the river you meet Vasyan, he insists you follow him home...'
 
 			act 'Go with him':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -114,12 +114,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 				if mesec = 0:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex20.jpg"></center>'
-					'As soon as you open the door, Vasya pushes you inside and starts pulling your clothes off crudely. Once you are naked, he pushes you towards the sofa and forces you to your knees...'
+					'As soon as you open the door, Vasyan pushes you inside and starts pulling your clothes off crudely. Once you are naked, he pushes you towards the sofa and forces you to your knees...'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 20, 'sub'
 					gs 'cum_call','butt',$boy,1
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex21.jpg"></center>'
-					'As soon as you open the door, Vasya pushes you inside and starts pulling your clothes off crudely. He then throws you onto his bed. Noticing, that you are slightly bleeding he asks if it is that time of the month. You whimper, "Yes." He curses angrily, turns you over and begins roughly fucking your ass...'
+					'As soon as you open the door, Vasyan pushes you inside and starts pulling your clothes off crudely. He then throws you onto his bed. Noticing, that you are slightly bleeding he asks if it is that time of the month. You whimper, "Yes." He curses angrily, turns you over and begins roughly fucking your ass...'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 20, 'sub'
 					gs 'cum_call','butt',$boy,1
 				end
@@ -383,7 +383,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Gadbitch':
 							pcs_tan += 1
 						elseif krem > 0:
 							krem -= 1
-							'You smear the suntan lotion all over your body to help prevent a sunburn. You use the lotion all of your body and lie down.'
+							'You smear the suntan lotion all over your body to help prevent a sunburn.'
 							pcs_tan += 3
 						end
 						act 'Finish sunbathing':
@@ -476,7 +476,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Gadbitch':
 							elseif MiraLoc = 1 and npc_QW['A60'] >= 15 and temp_gr = 1 and hour >= 8 and hour < 20:
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex16.jpg"></center>'
-								'After a while, you hear voices rapidly approaching from the village, in a couple of minutes you see the village boys emerge from the bushes. Seeing Miroslava they smile obscenely, and without hesitation they quickly surround her as she lays on the sand. You sit up and watch as they fuck her in all her holes...'
+								'After a while, you hear voices rapidly approaching from the village, in a couple of minutes you see the village boys emerge from the bushes. Seeing Mira they smile obscenely, and without hesitation they quickly surround her as she lays on the sand. You sit up and watch as they fuck her in all her holes...'
 
 								gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 30, 'gangbang', 'dom'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -718,7 +718,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GuysRiver':
 		'"Ah, no Mira, it''s just our other hot babe. Come here lovely, we have something really special for you."'
 	end
 	if temp_gr < 4:
-		act 'Pleasure Kolyambu':
+		act 'Pleasure Kolyamba':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'boyStat', 'A61'
 			pose = 0
@@ -731,7 +731,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GuysRiver':
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'Pleasure Vasya':
+			act 'Pleasure Vasyan':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A62'
 				pose = 0
@@ -739,7 +739,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GuysRiver':
 				temp_gr = RAND(0,2)
 				if temp_gr = 0:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Vasya, rolls you onto your back, sticking his cock into your wet pussy.'
+					'Vasyan, rolls you onto your back, sticking his cock into your wet pussy.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -761,7 +761,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GuysRiver':
 					gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex3.jpg"></center>'
-					'Vasya forces you on all four and starts pumping his dick into your ass.'
+					'Vasyan forces you on all four and starts pumping his dick into your ass.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'group', 'rough'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -781,7 +781,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GuysRiver':
 			'He only manages to hold out for a short time finishing in your mouth...'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'group', 'rough'
 			gs 'stat'
-			act 'Pleasure Vasya':
+			act 'Pleasure Vasyan':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A62'
 				pose = 0
@@ -789,7 +789,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GuysRiver':
 				temp_gr = RAND(0,2)
 				if temp_gr = 0:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex5.jpg"></center>'
-					'Vasya, lays you onto your back, using his fingers stimulating your vaginal lips while sticking his cock into your wet pussy.'
+					'Vasyan, lays you onto your back, using his fingers stimulating your vaginal lips while sticking his cock into your wet pussy.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'group', 'rough'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -799,7 +799,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GuysRiver':
 					gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex6.jpg"></center>'
-					'Vasya steps up and roughs you up a little with his hands and then takes out his dick forcing you to suck him off.'
+					'Vasyan steps up and roughs you up a little with his hands and then takes out his dick forcing you to suck him off.'
 					'He shoves the cock into your mouth and soon cums violently...'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'group', 'rough'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -811,7 +811,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GuysRiver':
 					gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex7.jpg"></center>'
-					'Vasya forces you on all four, telling you that you will enjoy this. He pulls out his dick and starts fucking you in the ass.'
+					'Vasyan forces you on all four, telling you that you will enjoy this. He pulls out his dick and starts fucking you in the ass.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'group', 'rough'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -838,7 +838,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GuysRiver':
 			minut -= 10
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'Pleasure Vasya':
+			act 'Pleasure Vasyan':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A62'
 				pose = 1
@@ -847,7 +847,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GuysRiver':
 
 				if temp_gr = 0:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex9.jpg"></center>'
-					'Vasya tells you he heard about a sex position where both of you will reach ecstasy. Intrigued by this you take your clothes off and start caressing his cock. He removes your hand from his cock and tells you to get down on your hands and knees. Vasya walks behind you, grabs his cock and enters you from behind. You gasp as he mounts you. Soon enough you both cry out in ecstasy cumming at the same time.'
+					'Vasyan tells you he heard about a sex position where both of you will reach ecstasy. Intrigued by this you take your clothes off and start caressing his cock. He removes your hand from his cock and tells you to get down on your hands and knees. Vasya walks behind you, grabs his cock and enters you from behind. You gasp as he mounts you. Soon enough you both cry out in ecstasy cumming at the same time.'
 
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'group', 'rough'
@@ -863,7 +863,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GuysRiver':
 					gs'stat'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex10.jpg"></center>'
-					'Vasya steps closer to you and tells you he wants his cock sucked. You drop down on your knees and start sucking his glans.'
+					'Vasyan steps closer to you and tells you he wants his cock sucked. You drop down on your knees and start sucking his glans.'
 					'Feeling dissatisfied by your performance he grabs you by the head and forces his cock deep down your throat mumbling something about teaching you how to do it properly. He finishes inside your mouth...'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'group', 'rough', 'deepthroat'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -876,7 +876,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GuysRiver':
 					gs'stat'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguysriversex11.jpg"></center>'
-					'Vasya forces you to your hands and knees and starts thrusting his dick into your anus.'
+					'Vasyan forces you to your hands and knees and starts thrusting his dick into your anus.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'group', 'rough'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -1103,7 +1103,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fishing':
 
 				act 'Leave':minut += 5 & gt $loc, $metka
 			end
-			act 'Give to Uncle Stepa':
+			act 'Give to Uncle Stepan':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				minut += 5

+ 74 - 73
locations/gadukino.qsrc

@@ -14,18 +14,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
-		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Kingpin</font></b></center>'
+		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Shkvoryen</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mitka.jpg"></center>'
-		'While walking through the village, you meet your old friend Mitka who approaches you.'
+		'In the village you are approached by your old friend Mitka.'
 
 		act 'Further':gt 'mitka'
 	elseif mitkaday ! daystart and mitka = 1 and hour >= 17 and hour < 20 and mitkarand = 1 and mitkaday ! daystart and npc_QW['A63'] < 13:
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
-		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Kingpin</font></b></center>'
+		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Shkvoryen</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mitka.jpg"></center>'
-		'While walking through the village, you meet your old friend Mitka who approaches you.'
+		'In the village you are approached by your old friend Mitka.'
 
 		act 'Further':gt 'mitka'
 	else
@@ -59,13 +59,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/street_winter_night.jpg"></center>'
 			end
 		end
-		'A small village with many rickety wooden houses and even more ruins of houses. This village has certainly seen better times.'
+		'A small village with many rickety wooden houses and even more ruins of houses. This village has seen better times.'
 		if car > 0 and cardrive = 23: '<a href="exec:GS ''carF'',''start''">Your <<$car>></a> is close by.'
 		if StoryLine = 1 :
-			'Nearby there are several small farms, in one of which <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''Gaddvor''">your grandparents</a> live.'
+			'Nearby are a series of small farms, on one of which <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''Gaddvor''">your grandparents</a> live.'
 			act 'Grandparent''s house': minut += 5 & gt 'Gaddvor'
 		else
-			'Nearby there are several small farms, in one of which <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''Gaddvor''">old couple</a> live.'
+			'Nearby are a series of small farms, on one of which <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''Gaddvor''">old couple</a> live.'
 			act 'Old couple''s house': gt 'Gaddvor'
 		end
 		if npc_rel['A60'] > 0: 'Just down the road from your grandparents house is <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''MiroslavaHome'', ''start''">Mira''s</a> house.'
@@ -75,10 +75,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			if hour >= 9 and hour <= 11:
 				'A truck from the city has come to <a href="exec: gt ''gadukino'',''collection_point''">collect</a> mushrooms and berries. Will stay around until noon.'
 			else
-				'Between 09:00 and 12:00, there''s a truck waiting to collect mushrooms and berries.'
+				'Between 9.00 and 12.00, a truck will come to collect mushrooms and berries.'
 			end
 		else
-			'It''s not the right season for mushrooms or berries. The truck which takes them to town won''t come during this season.'
+			'It''s not the right season for mushrooms or berries. The truck which takes them in town won''t come.'
 		end
 
 !MiaLoc tells us where Mira is Located
@@ -91,10 +91,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 !MiraLoc = 5 (Mira with gop)
 !---------------------------------------------
 
-		if hour >= 17 and hour < 20:'Not far from the house scared <a href="exec:GT ''mitka''">Mitka Kingpin</a>'
+		if hour >= 17 and hour < 20:'Not far from the house is  <a href="exec:GT ''mitka''">Mitka Kingpin</a>'
 		if hour >= 20 and sunWeather = 1:
 			!MiraLoc = 0
-			'Not far from the house sits a rustic style company of <a href="exec:GT ''mitkabuh''">youths</a>'
+			'Not far from the house sits a group of country <a href="exec:GT ''mitkabuh''">youths</a>'
 		end
 	!125e
 	!Looks like no reference to Gadmarket exists. Adding it...FinnMacha
@@ -161,14 +161,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			end
 		end
 
-		act 'Head to the river':minut += 20 & gt 'gadriver', 'start'
-		act 'Head to forest road':minut += 20 & gt'gadroad'
+		act 'Go to the river':minut += 20 & gt 'gadriver', 'start'
+		act 'Go to forest road':minut += 20 & gt'gadroad'
 !!Succubus active hunting, can only hunt successfully once a day, but can try until success
 		if (hour <= 7 or hour >= 21) and succubusQW = 5 and suchuntday ! daystart:
-			act 'Go on the prowl (this can take a lot of time)': suchunt = 1 & gt 'gadukino', 'succubus_hunt'
+			act 'Go Hunting (this can take a lot of time)': suchunt = 1 & gt 'gadukino', 'succubus_hunt'
 		end
 
-		act 'Head to the highway':minut += 30 & nroad = 10 & dirtyclothes = 0 & gt 'road'
+		act 'Go to the highway':minut += 30 & nroad = 10 & dirtyclothes = 0 & gt 'road'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -176,15 +176,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'succubus_hunt':
 	cla
 	minut += 30
 	*nl
-	'At this time of the night, the village is only illuminated by the light of the moon. You know this will be to your advantage. No one will be able to see you coming... That is, if there was anyone out at night. You prowl the village looking for prey, but as the minutes pass, your frustration grows.'
+	'At this hour of the night, the village is only illuminated by the light of the moon. You know this will be to your advantage. No one will be able to see you coming... That is, if there were anyone out at night. You prowl the village looking for prey, but as the minutes pass, your frustration grows.'
 	if rand(1,100) < 70:
 		minut += 30
 		mood -= 5
 		*nl
-		'God, this place is dull! After spending an hour searching, you find no one; not even a stray cat seems to be out and about tonight. You give up reluctantly, pondering how else you are going to feed tonight.'
+		'God, this place is dull! After searching for an hour, you find no one; not even a stray cat seems to be out and about tonight. You give up reluctantly, pondering how else you are going to feed tonight.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gadukino'
 	else
-		'You are getting really anxious to feed, and after finding absolutely nobody outside, you decide that breaking into someone''s house, risky as it is, is still better than starving.' 
+		'You are getting really antsy to feed, and after finding absolutely no one outside, you decide that breaking into someone''s house, risky as it is, is still better than going hungry.' 
 		*nl
 		!Another rand_check here to choose the scene?
 		'You break the lock of the first house you see and go inside. You sneak around the house, looking for a meal, but there''s nobody there. This entire night is a bust... Well, since you''re here, you might as well try and see if there''s any regular food that helps with your hunger, even though you doubt it.' 
@@ -199,14 +199,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'succubus_hunt':
 			gs 'underwear', 'remove'
 			!Just took a guess at where this image might go - Adjust src accordingly
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/succubus/kitchennude.jpg"></center>'
-			'Heavy footsteps echo through the corridor, approaching the kitchen, and with nowhere to hide, you decide to strip instead. You are here to feed, after all, and if he sees you naked, surely he will forget what he is angry about.'
+			'Heavy footsteps echo through the corridor, approaching the kitchen, and with nowhere to hide, you decide to strip instead. You are here to feed, after all, and if he sees you nude, surely he will forget what he is angry about.'
 			'When the man enters the dark kitchen, his first reaction is about what you''d expect: "Who the hell are you!?"'
-			'You let him have a good look at your body; according to your plan, that should be enough to calm him down. Unfortunately, he doesn''t seem to care about your plan, because he isn''t behaving like you expected.'
+			'You give him a good look at your body; according to your plan, that should be enough to calm him down. Unfortunately, he doesn''t seem to be aware of the plan, cause he is having none of it.'
 			'"Have you been eating my food?! Get the hell out of my house!"'
 			*nl
-			'He grabs you and starts dragging you towards the door. You protest and try in vain to seduce him, wondering how anyone could resist your charms like this. Then you remember that you are stronger than him - weird how easily superhuman strength can slip off your mind.' 
-			'As soon as you resist his pull, he grinds to a halt, confused by the fact that he can''t move you further. With the tables turned, you grab him and half-drag, half-throw him into his own living room where he heavily lands on his back, surprised by the fact that this woman so easily overpowered him.'
-			'You pull his pants off and, being already nude yourself, lower your pussy to meet his cock. He may have played the angry man, but the fact that it stands at attention soothes your bruised ego - your seduction efforts didn''t go completely unnoticed - and you plunge yourself down on top of him.'
+			'He grabs you and starts dragging you towards the door. You protest and try in vain to seduce him, wondering how anyone could resist your charms like this. Then you remember that you are stronger than him - weird how easily superhuman strength can slip your mind.' 
+			'As soon as you resist his pull, he grinds to a halt, confused by the fact that he can''t move you further. With the tables turned, you grab him and half-drag, half-throw him into his own living room where he lands on his back, stunned by the fact that this woman so easily overpowered him.'
+			'You pull his pants off and, already nude yourself, lower your pussy to his cock. He may have played the angry man, but the fact that it stands at attention soothes your bruised ego - your seduction efforts didn''t go completely unnoticed - and you plunge yourself down on top of him.'
 			
 			act 'Feed on him':
 				*clr
@@ -233,17 +233,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'succubus_hunt':
 				
 				'You ride him hard, desperate to get your hungry pussy the nourishment it requires.' 
 				if scrand < succublvl:
-					'Your seduction and succubus powers were strong enough to get your victim hard, but they weren''t enough to make him forget about his situation: He is giving you hateful looks, clearly pissed about his door and food and, what else? oh yeah, the fact you are raping him, but you simply ignore that.' 
-					'All you need is his sperm. You couldn''t care less about his happiness, and if he wants to complain about a woman like you fucking his brains out, that''s his problem. Just as you''re thinking that, your powers surge and force him to come, unloading his jizz deep into your waiting cunt.' 
+					'Your seduction and succubus powers were strong enough to get your victim hard, but they weren''t enough to make him forget about his situation: He is giving you hateful looks, clearly pissed about his door and food and, oh yeah, the fact you are raping him, but you simply ignore that.' 
+					'All you need is his sperm. You could care less about his happiness, and if he wants to complain about a woman like you fucking his brains out, that''s his problem. Just as you''re thinking that, your powers surge and force him to come, unloading his jizz deep into your waiting cunt.' 
 					*nl
-					'You don''t know how long you go at it with him exactly, but after coming inside you <<$scxcum>>, and thus making you come too, he runs out of energy and falls unconscious. You lift yourself off your passed-out plaything and head for the kitchen to collect your clothes as well as one last snack, feeling wonderfully relaxed after getting your "meal".' 
+					'You don''t know how long you go at it with him exactly, but after coming inside you <<$scxcum>>, and thus making you come too, he runs out of energy and falls unconscious. You lift yourself off of your passed-out plaything and head for the kitchen to collect your clothes as well as one last snack, feeling wonderfully relaxed after getting your fix.' 
 					'Then you head out the back door, making sure to break the handle on the way out - you''re nothing if not consistent.'
 				else
 					'He was resisting you initially, but after a while, your powers break any resistance he had in him. By the time his first orgasm hits and he shoots his sperm into your needy cunt, he would have betrayed his own mother, much less broken his front door and laid his fridge at your feet, just to be inside you a little longer.'
-					'However unsavory the first few minutes of your meeting, this state of bliss you share with him pushes that memory in the far back of your mind and lets both of you enjoy the hard ride you''re giving him.'
+					'However unsavory the first few minutes of your meeting, this state of bliss you share with him pushes that memory in the far back of your minds and lets both of you enjoy the hard ride you''re giving him.'
 					*nl
-					'You don''t know how long you go at it with him exactly, but after coming inside you <<$scxcum>>, and thus making you come too, he runs out of energy and falls unconscious. You lift yourself off your passed-out plaything, patting his head affectionately, and head for the kitchen to collect your clothes as well as one last snack, feeling wonderfully relaxed after getting your "meal". There''s nothing better than sex with a willing subject.'
-					'Then you head out the back door. For a split second, you consider breaking that door too... but why add insult to injury when he has pleased you so much?'
+					'You don''t know how long you go at it with him exactly, but after coming inside you <<$scxcum>>, and thus making you come too, he runs out of energy and falls unconscious. You lift yourself off of your passed-out plaything, patting his head affectionately, and head for the kitchen to collect your clothes as well as one last snack, feeling wonderfully relaxed after getting your fix. There''s nothing better than sex with a willing subject.'
+					'Then you head out the back door. For a split second, you consider breaking that door too... but why add insult to injury when he has pleased you so?'
 				end
 				killvar 'scfeed' & killvar 'scrand'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -261,13 +261,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/meadow/trail_meadow.jpg"></center>'
 	'Walking around the village you see a small path that leads between neighbor''s houses, the path leads away from the village into a dense thicket...'
 
-	act 'Follow the path to see where it leads':
+	act 'Follow the path to see where it goes':
 		*clr & cla
 		meadow = 1
 		minut += 10
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/meadow/meadow_thicket.jpg"></center>'
-		'You follow the path to see where it leads, but about ten minutes later the path disappears into a very dense thicket of bushes and trees.'
+		'You follow the path to see where it goes, but about ten minutes later the path disappears into a very dense thicket if bushes and trees.'
 
 		act 'Look for a way around':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -310,15 +310,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 	if npc_rel['A60'] = 0:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/miroslava.jpg"></center>'
-		'Walking around the village you notice an unfamiliar young girl around your own age, she is pulling on a rope attached to the collar on a small calf. The calf grunts with displeasure, shakes its head and refuses to move any further.'
+		'Walking around the village you notice a young girl around your own age. You do not recognize her from the last time you were at the village. She is pulling on a rope attached to the collar on a small calf. The calf grunts with displeasure, shakes her head and refuses to move any further.'
 		act 'Help':
 			*clr & cla
 			npc_rel['A60'] = 1
 			minut += 15
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira.jpg"></center>'
-			'You decide to lend a hand to the girl with the calf. Your lonely in the village, maybe this girl, if you get to know her, could make it seem to the other villagers that you are not a complete stranger in Gadukino. You walk over to the girl and introduce yourself asking if she needs help. She nods and resumes pulling on the rope, while you walk over behind the calf and give it a loud slap on the rump. The calf is surprised and immediately moves forward, away from you. The girl gives you a thankful smile and tells you her name is Miroslava.'
-			'Together you are able to guide the calf back to its pen. Mira turns out to be quite a sociable girl and a chatterbox. You learn that her family was recently forced to move to the village from the city. Her father''s huge gambling debts to some questionable individuals forced him to eventually sell the family''s property in the city to pay them back. Mira is having a rough time getting used to the life in a small village. She misses the apartment in the center of the city and the money to buy nice dresses and makeup with. After selling everything and paying off the debt, her father was told to leave the city "or else...", so they were broke and could only afford to buy a house in this battered dust covered village. You walk with her and chat until you reach her house, which is only a little away from your grandparent''s place. Mira invites you to come and visit her at any time. She is just as bored in the village as you are.'
+			'You decide to lend a hand to help the girl with the calf. You are lonely in the village, and maybe this girl, if you get to know her, could your trips to Gadukino less boring. You walk over to the girl and introduce yourself and ask if she wants help. She nods and resumes pulling on the rope, while you walk over behind the calf and give it a load slap on the rump. The calf is surprised and immediately to moves forward away from you. The girl smiles in thanks and tells you her name is Miroslava, but everyone calls her Mira.'
+			'Together you are able to guide the calf back into its pen. Mira turns out to be quite a sociable girl and conversationalist. You learn that her family was recently forced to move to the village from the city. Her father''s huge gambling debts to some questionable men forced him to eventually sell the family''s property in the city to pay them back. Mira is having a rough time adjusting to the life in a small village. She misses the apartment in the center of the city and the money to buy nice dresses and makeup with. After selling everything and paying off the debt, her father was told to leave the city "or else...", so they were destitute and could only afford to buy a house in this run down dust covered village. You walk with her and chat until you reach her house, which is close by to your grandparent''s place. Mira invites you to come and visit her at any time. She is just as bored in the village as you are.'
 
 			act 'Finish': gt 'gadukino'
 		end
@@ -342,16 +342,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 					temp = RAND(0,30)
 					if temp < 5:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirasp2.jpg"></center>'
-						'You ask Mira to show you her pussy. She smiles casually sits down on the fence and, looking at you with a gleam in her eyes and a mischievous smile, she pulls aside panties showing off her juicy pussy...'
+						'You ask Mira to show you her pussy. She smiles casually, sits down on the fence and, looking at you with a gleam in her eyes and a mischievous smile, she pulls aside panties showing off her juicy pussy...'
 					elseif temp < 10:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirasp.jpg"></center>'
-						'You ask Mira to show you her pussy. She smiles casually and rests her hands on the bench, giving you a view of her bare pussy. She isn''t wearing any panties.'
+						'You ask Mira to show you her pussy. She smiles casually and rests her hands on the bench, giving you a view of her bare pussy. She isn''t wearing any panties!'
 					elseif temp < 25:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirasp1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You ask Mira to show you her pussy. She smiles casually and sits down on the fence and slightly spreading his legs, showing you her bare naked pussy. She isn''t wearing any panties.'
+						'You ask Mira to show you her pussy. She smiles casually and sits down on the fence and slightly spreading his legs, showing you her bare naked pussy. She isn''t waering any panties!'
 					else
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirasp5.jpg"></center>'
-						'You ask Mira to show you her pussy. She smiles casually and getting on her hand and knees on the bench. She quickly glances around, quickly pulls up her skirt and arched her back, showing you her naked pussy. Hold on a sec, she isn''t wearing any panties'
+						'You ask Mira to show you her pussy. She smiles casually and gets on her hands and knees on the bench. She quickly glances around before pulling up her skirt and arching her back, showing you her naked pussy. Hold on a sec, she isn''t wearing any panties!'
 					end
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'lesbian'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -369,7 +369,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 						'"Who did that to you?" you ask her. Mira just smiles devilishly and tells you that it''s a secret.'
 					else
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirasp4.jpg"></center>'
-						'You ask Mira to show you her pussy. She smiles casually and swats down on her haunches... You immediately notice how much her cunt and asshole gape. She must have just been fucked in both holes.'
+						'You ask Mira to show you her pussy. She smiles casually and squats down... You immediately notice how much her cunt and asshole gape. She must have just been fucked in both holes.'
+						'"Who did that to you?" you ask her. Mira just smiles devilishly and tells you that it''s a secret.'
 					end
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'lesbian'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -395,17 +396,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 	elseif npc_rel['A60'] > 0 and npc_QW['A60'] >= 4 and mirasextimes >= 10 and temper >= 12 and sunWeather = 1 and temp < 7:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirasexgad.jpg"></center>'
-		'Walking through the village, you happen to notice Mira, sucking Mitka''s cock in the backyard. She chomps her lips, almost completely taking the dick into her mouth, and sometimes she glancing to the sides.'
+		'Walking through the village, you happen to notice Mira, sucking Mitka''s cock in the backyard. She wraps her lips around it, almost completely taking the dick into her mouth. Sometimes she glances to the side...'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 		gs 'stat'
 		if rand(0,1) = 0:
 			act 'Watch':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirasexgad1.jpg"></center>'
-				'A couple of times you think, she''s about to notice you watching, but she never does, continuing to suck Mitka''s cock. Finally, he tilts his head back and Mira, seeing this, quickly takes his dick in her hand directing it towards her mouth, taking a mouth full of sperm. She greedily swallowing it all, and she licks Mitka''s cock clean before tucking it back into his pants. You see she is about to rise from her knees, so you hastily depart.'
+				'A couple of times you think, she''s about to notice you watching, but she never does, continuing to suck Mitka''s cock. Finally, he tilts his head back and Mira, quickly seeing this takes his dick in her hand and directs it into in her mouth, taking a mouth full of sperm. She greedily swallows it all, and licks Mitka''s cock clean before tucking it back into his pants. You see she is about to rise from her knees, so you hastily depart.'
 			end
 		else
-			'Until she finally spots you watching her. You see she blushes crimson, but she does not stop sucking, only occasionally shifts her eyes in your direction. You continue to watch as if not seeing anything unusual, while Mira''s head bobs up and down keeping to suck Mitka''s cock. Finally, he tilts his head back and Mira, seeing this, quickly takes his dick in hand directing it towards her mouth, taking a mouth full of sperm. She greedily swallowing it all, and she licks Mitka''s cock clean before tucking it back into his pants. You smile at Mira with the most peaceful of expressions and walk away...'
+			'Until she finally spots you watching her. You see she blushes crimson, but she does not stop sucking, only occasionally shifts her eyes in your direction. You continue to watch as if not seeing anything unusual, as Mira''s head bobs up and down continuing to suck Mitka''s cock. Finally, he tilts his head back and Mira, quickly seeing this takes his dick in her hand and directs it into in her mouth, taking a mouth full of sperm. She greedily swallows it all, and licks Mitka''s cock clean before tucking it back into his pants. You smile at Mira with the most peaceful of expressions and walk away...'
 		end
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -418,7 +419,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 	elseif npc_rel['A60'] > 0 and npc_QW['A60'] >= 6 and mirasextimes >= 10 and temper < 18 and sunWeather = 1 and temp >= 7:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirasexgad2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Walking through the village, you happen to notice Mira fucking Mitka. Mitka slowly grinded his cock deep into Mira''s pussy. You see Mira shudder under him as she climaxes. She moans and scratches his back with her fingernails as she squirts and continues to cum. Mitka increases his pace and starts to roughly hammer his cock into her dripping pussy. With his left hand he reached for Mira''s right tit and starts to squeeze it without mercy. Mira just grunts and laughs.'
+		'Walking through the village, you happen to notice Mira fucking Mitka. Mitka slowly grinds his cock deep into Mira''s pussy. You see Mira shudder under him as she climaxed. She moaned and raked his back with her fingernails as she squirted and continued to cum. Mitka increased his pace and started to roughly hammer his cock into her dripping pussy. With his left hand he reached for Mira''s right tit and started to squeeze it without mercy. Mira just grunts and laughs.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Watch':
@@ -426,14 +427,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 				*clr & delact 'Watch'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirasexgad3.jpg"></center>'
-				'They are so absorbed in fucking each other senseless that they are ignoring everything else, so you decide to quietly continue to watch. Within a few minutes you see Mitka begin to pick up the pace and he starts to drive his cock faster and faster into Mira''s pussy until he grunts like a pig and dumps a huge load of cum into Mira''s pussy which is again squirting. After a few minutes of just laying together holding each other and gasping for breath, they slowly begin to kiss and laugh as they freshen up. You smile and rub your own dripping snatch before moving away.'
+				'They are so absorbed in fucking each other senseless that they ignoring everything else, so you decide to quietly continue to watch. Within a few minutes you see Mitka begin to pick up the pace and he started to drive his cock faster and faster into Mira''s pussy until he grunts like a pig and dumps a huge load of cum into Mira''s pussy which is again squirting. After a few minutes of them just laying together holding each other and gasping for breath, they slowly begin to kiss and laugh as they freshen up. You smile and rub your own dripping snatch before moving away.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 				gs 'stat'
 			else
 				*clr & delact 'Watch'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirasexgad3.jpg"></center>'
-				'They are so absorbed in fucking each other senseless that they are ignoring everything else, so you decide to quietly continue to watch. You see Mitka pull his cock out of Mira''s dripping pussy and driving it deep into her ass, without any preparation. Mira lets out a short scream of protest as Mitka continues to drive his cock into her asshole until his pubes rub up against her ass. Mira writhes under his brutal onslaught. After only a few minutes, Mitka starts to slap her ass leaving bright red marks on it. Mitka begins to falter in his thrusts into her ass. Finally, Mitka leans back with his dick still embedded balls deep in Mira''s asshole and lets out a bestial growl as he begins to cum...'
+				'They are so absorbed in fucking each other senseless that they ignoring everything else, so you decide to quietly continue to watch. You see Mitka pull his cock out of Mira''s dripping pussy and he drives it deep into her ass, barebacked. Mira let''s out a short scream of protest as Mitka continues to drive his cock into her asshole until his pubes rub up against her ass. Mira writhes under his brutal onslaught. After only a few minutes, Mitka starts to slap her ass leaving bright red marks. Mitka begins to shudder from his thrusts into her ass. Finally, Mitka leans back with his dick still embedded balls deep in Mira''s asshole and lets out a bestial growl as he begins to cum...'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 				gs 'stat'
 			end
@@ -446,7 +447,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 	else
 		'<center><h2>Village Gadukino</h2></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/walk.jpg"></center>'
-		'To kill time, you take a walk through the village.'
+		'You kill time, walking through the village.'
 		act 'Leave':gt 'gadukino'
 	end
 end
@@ -472,12 +473,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 		elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 20:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira3,<<rand(0,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
 		end
-		'You quietly sneak up to her, but she notices your approach and turns around, her hands pull her skirt back into place, blushing. You stare at her for a few seconds silently, and then ask, "Why don''t you have any panties on?" Mira, her eyes darting around, shifting her weight from foot to foot, explains hesitantly, "Well what happened is, well it''s very hot and I thought it would feel better without panties." You interrupt her with an upraised hand as you get an idea for your second wish... You remind her she still owes you wishes and tell you''re ready to collect your second wish.'
-		'You tell Mira to sit down. Mira reluctantly agrees, and when is finally sitting on the ground, you order her to show you her pussy, you are thinking fast of other punishments for her. Mira grumbles incoherently and glares at you, but eventually sighs and slowly lifts up her skirt, giving you a good look at her crotch.'
+		'You quietly sneak up to her, but she notices your approach and turns around, her hands pull her skirt back into place, blushing. You stare at her for a few seconds silently, and then ask, "Why don''t you have any panties on?" Mira, her eyes darting about, shifting her weight from foot to foot, explaining hesitantly, "Well what happened is, well it''s very hot and I thought it would feel better without panties." You interrupt her with an upraised hand as you get an idea for your second wish... You remind her she still owes you wishes and you''re ready to collect your second wish. You tell Mira to sit down. Miroslava reluctantly agrees, and when is finally sitting on the ground, you order her to show you her pussy, you are thinking fast of other punishments for her. Mira grumbles incoherently and glares at you, but eventually sighs and slowly lifts up her skirt, giving you a good look at her crotch.'
 		act 'Watch':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirawish2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You enjoy the view, then snap your fingers as a wicked idea comes to mind for your second wish. Mira says sadly, that she thinks you just came up with your second wish. You ask if she is thinking about backing out of granting your wishes, but Mira says no, she will go through with them. You smile wickedly and tell her to follow you.'
+			'You enjoy the view, then snap your fingers as a wicked idea comes to mind for your second wish. Mira says sadly, that she thought you had come up with your second wish. You ask if she is thinking about backing out of granting your wishes, but Mira says no, she will go through with them. You smile wickedly and tell her to follow you.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'exhibitionism', 'lesbian', 'dom'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -503,7 +503,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 10
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/miraprost.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can''t hear what she is saying but after only a few minutes the door opens and Mira steps into the vehicle. It pulls away, but doesn''t go far. You see it pull off the main road and head down a dirt road. Smiling and wanting to see the action, you run into the woods trying to head off to the vehicle.'
+						'You can''t hear what she is saying but after only a few minutes the door opens and Mira steps into the vehicle. It pulls away, but doesn''t go far. You see it pull off the main road and head down a dirt road. Smiling and wanting to see the action, you run into the woods trying to head off the vehicle.'
 						gs 'stat'
 
 						act 'Continue':
@@ -533,7 +533,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 											*clr & cla
 											minut += 10
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/miramoney.jpg"></center>'
-											'Mira walks back towards town counting the money he gave her as she absentmindedly licking the cum as it drips down her face. She smiles at you and shows you the money as you join her.'
+											'Mira walks back towards town counting the money he gave her as she absentmindedly licks the cum as it drips down her face. She smiles at you and shows you the money as you join her.'
 											gs 'arousal', 'end'
 											gs 'stat'
 
@@ -552,7 +552,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 								act 'Continue':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miraprost2_1.mp4"></video></center>'
-									'Mira and her John jump into the back of the van and you watch as he starts fucking her wet pussy. His hand covers her mouth as she screams in ecstasy. The guy heavily pounds her pussy with his 20cm cock. From Mira''s grunts of a mix of ecstasy and pain, you know the John is reaching or entering her cervix.'
+									'Mira and her John jump into the back of the van and you watch as he starts fucking her wet pussy. His hand covers her mouth as she screams in ecstasy. The guy pounds his 20cm cock deep into her pussy. From Mira''s grunts of partial ecstasy, partial pain, you know the John is hitting or entering her cervix.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'exhibitionism', 'prostitution'
 									gs 'stat'
 
@@ -567,7 +567,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 											*clr & cla
 											minut += 10
 											'<left><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mira/miracumpump.mp4"></video></left>''<right><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mira/miracumdump.mp4"></video></right>'
-											'After the wild sex, Mira and the John sit in the van and talk for a bit. He gives her a nice wad of cash and she starts walking to the village. Seeing you, she smiles and thanks you.'
+											'After the wild sex, Mira and the John sit in the van and talk for a bit. He gives her a nice wad of cash and she starts walking to the village. Seeing you, she smiles and says thanks.'
 											gs 'arousal', 'end'
 											gs 'stat'
 
@@ -587,7 +587,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = '4':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirasexgad5.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking through the village, you notice that behind a shed Vasya and Mira are having sex. Mira moans as she rides his cock and it seems as if she''s oblivious to everything around her. But you''re not sure you can say the same about Vasya... So, you decide not to risk being caught peeking and leave the couple alone.'
+	'Walking through the village, you notice that behind a shed Vasya and Mira are having sex. Mira moans as she rides his cock and it seems as if she''s oblivious to anything around her. But you''re not sure you can say the same about Vasya... So, you decide not to risk being caught peeking and leave the couple alone.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -598,7 +598,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = '5':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirasexgad6.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking through the village, you notice that behind a shed Vasya and Mira are having sex. Mira moans as she rides his cock and it seems as if she''s oblivious to everything around her. But you''re not sure you can say the same about Vasya... So, you decide not to risk being caught peeking and leave the couple alone.'
+	'Walking through the village, you notice that behind a shed Vasya and Mira are having sex. Mira moans as she rides his cock and it seems as if she''s oblivious to anything around her. But you''re not sure you can say the same about Vasya... So, you decide not to risk being caught peeking and leave the couple alone.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -609,7 +609,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = '6':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirasexgad7.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking through the village, you notice Kolyamba and Mira hiding behind some bushes. She''s squatting before him, passionately smacking her lips on his cock...'
+	'Walking through the village, you notice Kolambu and Mira hiding behind some bushes. She''s squatting before him, passionately sucking on his cock...'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -620,7 +620,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = '7':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirasexgad8.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking through the village, you notice Kolyamba with Vasya and Mira behind the bushes. She''s butt naked on all fours and is eagerly sucking off the guys in turn...'
+	'Walking through the village, you notice behind the bushes Kolambu with Vasya and Mira. Mira is butt naked on all fours and taking turns sucking the boys members...'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -631,7 +631,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = '8':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirahorny.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking through the village, you see Mira. She sits on the fence and constantly looking nervously around while intensely playing with her pussy, when no one is watching...'
+	'Walking through the village, you see Mira. She sits on the fence intensely rubbing her pussy, as if no one is watching...'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -642,7 +642,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = '9':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirasexgad9.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking through the village, you notice Mira trying to hide behind a fence with Kolyamba. She squirms and moans, but dutifully opens her bare ass for Kolyamba as he''s trying to shove a bottle into it...'
+	'Walking through the village, you notice Mira behind a fence with Kolyamba. She squirms and moans, but dutifully exposes her bare butt to Kolyamba, who is trying to shove a bottle in her...'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -653,7 +653,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = '10':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirasexgad10.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking through the village, you spot Mira and Mitka hidden between two buildings. Mira is bent over slightly, baring her ass to him as he probes her hole with his fingers, revealing her prolapsed anus to him.'
+	'Walking through the village, you see Mira, facing Mitka with his pants down and sticking his fingers in her ass...'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -664,7 +664,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirasexgad11.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking through the village, you meet Mira, after a while you''ve been chatting she bends over to fix her shoes. You can clearly notice that she''s not wearing any panties, you get a full view of her bare pussy...'
+	'Walking through the village, you meet Mira. You notice she is not wearing panties and the white thread of a tampon is sticking out of her pussy...'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -676,7 +676,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '12':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 5
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/gadlol.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking through the village, you see two grandmas, sawing wood, preparing for the winter...'
+	'Walking through the village, you see two grandmas, sawing boards...'
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	act 'Leave': gt 'gadukino'
@@ -686,7 +686,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '13':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 5
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/gadlol1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking through the village, you see two thieving grannies hastily making their way down the street, having stole bundles of wooden boards from an old run down building.'
+	'Walking through the village, you see two thieving grannies, taking load-bearing boards from a dilapidated farm...'
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	act 'Leave': gt 'gadukino'
@@ -697,21 +697,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '14':
 	minut += 5
 	if temper >= 15:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/gadlol3.jpg"></center>'
-		'Walking through the village, you come across the elderly gang. As you pass them, they kindly smile at you, but you know as soon as you pass by, they''ll immediately start gossiping among themselves...'
+		'Walking through the village, you see local elders. They kindly smile in your face, and as soon as you pass by, immediately start whispering among themselves...'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/gadlol2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Walking through the village, you come across the elderly gang. As soon as you approach them, they all turn their back to you as they all pretentiously look away, not wanting to interact with you...'
+		'Walking through the village, you see local elders. They, as if on command, all huddle together and stare, as you walk by them...'
 	end
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	act 'Continue on': gt 'gadukino'
+	act 'Pass by': gt 'gadukino'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '15':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 5
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/gadlol4.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking through the village, a group of young boys, looking no older than 13 or 14, are playing in the road. Two of the older boys sit on an old, beat up dirt bike. You''re not even sure it even works, but the kids are having fun playing on it nonetheless.'
+	'Walking through the village, you see some younger children. They happily smile at you...'
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	act 'Leave': gt 'gadukino'
@@ -721,7 +721,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '16':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><h2>Village Gadukino</h2></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/walk.jpg"></center>'
-	'Wanting to kill time, you decide on taking a stroll throughout the village.'
+	'You kill time, walking through the village.'
 
 	act 'Leave': gt 'gadukino'
 end
@@ -730,28 +730,29 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'collection_point':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
+
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/collection_point.jpg"></center>'
-	'Parked half way off the road is an old, unmarked truck. The back doors are held open and found inside is usually a farmer looking to buy any mushrooms locals find while out in the nearby woods. Some find it odd that they''re operating out of a truck, but you imagine it''s cheaper to maintain than a shop and it lets them get around to other villages like yours to buy their mushrooms, too.'
+	'Mobile procurement vehicle for local mushrooms and berries.'
 
 	if boletus > 0:
-		act'Sell your mushrooms':
+		act'sell mushrooms':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 30
 			money += boletus*150
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/collection_point.jpg"></center>'
-			'You decide to sell your mushrooms for <<boletus*150>> <b>₽</b>.'
+			'You sale your mushrooms for <b><<boletus*150>></b> rubles.'
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			act'Further':boletus = 0 & gt 'gadukino','collection_point'
 		end
 	end
 	if bilberry > 0:
-		act'Sell your berries':
+		act'sell berries':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 30
 			money += bilberry*75
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/collection_point.jpg"></center>'
-			'You decide to your berries for <<bilberry*75>> <b>₽</b>.'
+			'You sale your berries for <b><<bilberry*75>></b> rubles.'
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			act'Further':bilberry = 0 & gt 'gadukino','collection_point'

+ 30 - 30
locations/gadukino_event.qsrc

@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_apologise':
 			'"No, Mira, I don''t want anything more from you," you reply. "I''m not sexually interested in girls."'
 			'"Well, if you ever change your mind..." said Mira. "Let''s get back to the village."'
 			'You walk back to the village, gossiping about the boys in the village.'
-			act 'Go':gt 'gadukino'
+			act 'Go back to the village':gt 'gadukino'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mitka_apologise':
 			'"Well, what can I do. If she begs me to it, I can''t promise I''ll say no." he laughed. "Well, I think we''re all set, I''ll try to avoid Mira... But if she begs me to fuck her I won''t say no."'
 			'Mitka starts walking towards Kolyamba''s house. You watch him for a while, until he disappears behind a corner.'
 		end
-		act 'Go':gt 'gadukino'
+		act 'Go back to the village':gt 'gadukino'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gang_apologise':
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Uncle Styopa</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/uncle_stepan.jpg"></center>'
 		'For a moment you hesitated, wondering what he wants. While you contemplating to stay or run away, he caught up with you. He started nervously shifted from foot to foot, clearly not knowing how to begin the conversation. You looked puzzled at him thinking he would be prepared, when he finally speaks up.'
-		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, KKH-um," he began, but immediately faltered. "In short, I''m trully sorry for what happened the other night... I don''t know what came over us, it was like a demon possessed me, I got arroused by Mitka''s drunken tales."'
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, -uh," he began, but immediately faltered. "In short, I''m trully sorry for what happened the other night... I don''t know what came over us, it was like a demon possessed me, I got aroused by Mitka''s drunken tales."'
 		'He looked at you with sorrow in his eyes. You did not expect that anyone of them would be sorry.'
 		'"I had a talk with the other men in the morning, and, uh," uncle Stepan losing his composure. "Well, in short, I decided that I wanted to talk to you, apologize and ask if you could forget about yesterday... I''m really sorry and I''m worried that we might have damaged you physically."'
 		'You looked skeptically at "your uncle", not really knowing if he''s joking or not.'
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gang_apologise':
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/10000.jpg"></center>'
 			'Feeling that you''re still skeptical, Uncle Stepan reached into his sweatpants and pulled out a bundle, handing it over to you.'
-			'"Here," he showed the money in your hand. "It''s ten thousand rubels."'
+			'"Here," he showed the money in your hand. "It''s ten thousand rubles."'
 			'"What do you do want me to do with this?" you asked somewhat annoyed.'
 			'"I don''t know, you can do whatever you want with them," replied uncle Stepan. "Spend it on some treatment, or buy yourself something nice."'
 			'Not knowing what to choose, you look at the money, then at "your uncle."'
@@ -134,10 +134,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gang_apologise':
 				'"Okay, I accept your money," you finally decide. "Let''s pretend nothing happened yesterday."'
 				'You take the money from his hand.'
 				'"That''s a relief..." Stepan says relieved. "I''ll be on my way."'
-				'You were about to turn and leave, when uncle Stepa added:'
+				'You were about to turn and leave, when Uncle Stepan added:'
 				'"And yeah... <<$pcs_nickname>>, none of the men will fuck you like that again, so there''s no need to be afraid."'
 				'"I understand..." you answer, turning away and walking away from him.'
-				act 'Go':gt 'gadukino'
+				act 'Walk back to the village':gt 'gadukino'
 			end
 			act 'Refuse':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -150,10 +150,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gang_apologise':
 				'"I don''t need your fucking money, I''m not a prostitute or a whore" you said in a firm voice, clearly annoyed, looking straight into Uncle Stepan eyes. "You think you can buy my silence with some money, are you really that dumb?"'
 				'He starts acting anxiously telling you once more to take the money. "I''ve already said it, I don''t want your money! But you don''t need to worry I won''t tell anyone what happened." you sternly tell him.'
 				'"That''s a relief..." Stepan says relieved. "I''ll be on my way."'
-				'Just as you were leaving, uncle Stepan added:'
+				'Just as you were leaving, Uncle Stepan added:'
 				'"One last thing <<$pcs_nickname>>. None of the men will try to fuck you anymore. Mitka warned everyone that if it happens again their cannon would be shooting blanks for the rest of their life... If anyone approaches you, you come to me and I''ll sort it out."'
 				'"I understand..." you answer, turning away and walking away from him.'
-				act 'Go':gt 'gadukino'
+				act 'Walk back to the village':gt 'gadukino'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 				guy += 1
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_oral3.jpg"></center>'
-				'The men continued piling up, one after another. Some of the men got so impatient they shoved two cocks at once. You sucked each one of them off, embracing their penis head with your <<$liptalk>> lips, deepthroating them all. '
+				'The men continued piling up, one after another. Some of the men got so impatient they shoved two cocks at you at once. You sucked each one of them off, embracing their penis head with your <<$liptalk>> lips, deepthroating them all. '
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -304,7 +304,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 										npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_mis1.jpg"></center>'
-										'The men lay you on your back. You move your head wanting to see who''s about to enter you this time and you see your uncle Stepan, the fisherman, readying his cock between your splayed legs.'
+										'The men lay you on your back. You move your head wanting to see who''s about to enter you this time and you see your Uncle Stepan, the fisherman, readying his cock between your splayed legs.'
 										'You look straight into his eyes begging him not to do this, showing no remorse, you only hear him say "I''ve been fantasizing about this for a very long time."'
 
 										pose = 0
@@ -340,8 +340,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 												npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_mis3.jpg"></center>'
-												'You see a familiar face again, Vasya.'
-												'"Zachit and Kolyamba are also here somewhere waiting for their turn", he tells you before shoving his cock deep inside you.'
+												'You see a familiar face again, Vasyan.'
+												'"Mitka and Kolyamba are also here somewhere waiting for their turn", he tells you before shoving his cock deep inside you.'
 
 												gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 												gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
@@ -445,7 +445,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																		guy += 1
 
 																		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog8.jpg"></center>'
-																		'Next up is a drunk man barely able to stand straight, his cock is pretty limp as he''s having difficult getting an erection. He doesn''t pay to much mind to it as he enters your anus.'
+																		'Next up is a drunk man barely able to stand straight, his cock is pretty limp as he''s having difficult getting an erection. He doesn''t seem to mind too much as he enters your anus.'
 																		gs 'dinSex','boy_wants_anal','lubri'
 																		gs 'dinsex','analsex'
 																		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
@@ -477,7 +477,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																				guy += 1
 
 																				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog10.jpg"></center>'
-																				'You continue to get anally fucked, when the next man decided to take advantage of your pussy. In the corner of your eye, you notice in the Kolyamba standing in the crowd awaiting eagerly for his turn.'
+																				'You continue to get anally fucked, when the next man decided to take advantage of your pussy. In the corner of your eye, you notice in Kolyamba standing in the crowd eagerly awaiting his turn.'
 
 																				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 																				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
@@ -495,7 +495,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_oral5.jpg"></center>'
 																					'You''re suddenly surprised to find that no one is using your pussy or ass.'
 																					'"I really hope that that was the last one..." you thought.'
-																					'This was just unfortunately wishfull thinking. The men soon put you on your knees and then several men shoved their cocks in your face.'
+																					'This was just unfortunately wishful thinking. The men soon put you on your knees and then several men shoved their cocks in your face.'
 
 																					act 'Further':
 																						*clr & cla
@@ -521,7 +521,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																							guy += 1
 
 																							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_cow2.jpg"></center>'
-																							'The next guy was also lying on the ground, you climb him on your own, without any hesitation. Someone else steps to you with his cock out which you immediately began sucking.'
+																							'The next guy was also lying on the ground, you climb on top of him on your own, without any hesitation. Someone else steps up to you with his cock out which you immediately began sucking.'
 
 																							dick = rand(10,20)
 																							guy += 1
@@ -541,7 +541,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																								guy += 1
 
 																								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_cow3.jpg"></center>'
-																								'You see another man lying on the ground, as you''ve already gotten used to it, you climb him.'
+																								'You see another man lying on the ground, as you''ve already gotten used to it, you climb on him too.'
 
 																								protect = rand(0,1)
 																								pose = 1
@@ -626,7 +626,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																													gs 'stat'
 
 																													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_cum4.jpg"></center>'
-																													'When the last men finally came, the crowd began to disperse, leaving you wrapped around on the tattered blanket. You hear them sharing impressions of their drunken antics.'
+																													'When the last men finally came, the crowd began to disperse, leaving you wrapped in a tattered blanket. You hear them sharing impressions of their drunken antics.'
 																													gs 'arousal', 'end'
 																													gs 'stat'
 																													act 'Further':minut += 5 & gt'Gadriver', 'Gadbitch'
@@ -665,7 +665,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadukino_mitka':
 	mitkaday = daystart
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Pin</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Shkvoryen</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mitka.jpg"></center>'
 	'Walking through the village you met Mitka. Seeing you, he started rubbing his crotch and said with a grin.'
 	'"Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s go have some fun getting rid of this boner you just gave me."'
@@ -678,7 +678,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadukino_kolyamba':
 	kolyambaday = daystart
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolyamba</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolyamba Pyut</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/kolyamba.jpg"></center>'
 	'Walking through the village you met Kolyamba. Seeing you, he reached into his pants and started playing with his balls. He then grabbed you by the arm and dragged into the bushes next to the road.'
 
@@ -690,7 +690,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadukino_vasyan':
 	vasyanday = daystart
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Vasya Package</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Vasya Paket</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/vasyan.jpg"></center>'
 	'Walking through the village you met Vasya. Seeing you, he smiled and waved you over to him. He kisses you on the lips and asks you to join him as he walked into the bushes next to the road.'
 
@@ -720,7 +720,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_mitka':
 	mitkaday = daystart
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Pin</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Shkvoryen</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mitka.jpg"></center>'
 	'Walking with Mira in the village you met Mitka. Seeing Mira, he started playing with his balls and said with a grin.'
 	'"Oh hey Mira, let''s go have some fun getting rid of this boner you just gave me."'
@@ -733,7 +733,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_kolyamba':
 	kolyambaday = daystart
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolyamba</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolyamba Pyut</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/kolyamba.jpg"></center>'
 	'Walking with Mira in the village you met Kolyamba. Seeing Mira, he started playing with his balls, dragging her into the bushes next to the road.'
 
@@ -745,9 +745,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_vasyan':
 	vasyanday = daystart
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Vasan Package</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Vasyan Paket</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/vasyan.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking with Mira in the village you met Vasya. Seeing Mira, he smiled and dragged her into the bushes next to the road.'
+	'Walking with Mira in the village you met Vasyan. Seeing Mira, he smiled and dragged her into the bushes next to the road.'
 
 	act 'Further': gt 'mitkasex', 'forest1', 'A62'
 end
@@ -764,8 +764,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_2boys':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/2boys.2.jpg"></center>'
 	end
 	if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking with Mira in the village you met Mitka and Kolyamba. Seeing Mira, they grin, grab her arms and drag her into the bushes.'
-	if mitboyrand = 2:'Walking with Mira in the village you met Mitka and Vasya. Seeing Mira, they grin, grab her arms and drag her into the bushes.'
-	if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking with Mira in the village you met Kolyamba and Vasya. Seeing Mira, they grin, grab her arms and drag her into the bushes.'
+	if mitboyrand = 2:'Walking with Mira in the village you met Mitka and Vasyan. Seeing Mira, they grin, grab her arms and drag her into the bushes.'
+	if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking with Mira in the village you met Kolyamba and Vasyan. Seeing Mira, they grin, grab her arms and drag her into the bushes.'
 
 	act 'Further': gt 'mitkasex', 'forest2', mitboyrand
 end
@@ -781,7 +781,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_3boys':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/drunk.jpg"></center>'
 	end
 
-	'Walking with Mira in the village you met Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasya. Seeing Mira, they grin, grab her arms and drag her into the bushes.'
+	'Walking with Mira in the village you met Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan. Seeing Mira, they grin, grab her arms and drag her into the bushes.'
 
 	act 'Further': gt 'mitkasex', 'forest3'
 end
@@ -825,7 +825,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'go_home_ender':
 	end
 	gadstay = 0
 	gs 'stat'
-	'You get into the Volga with the rest of your family and before you know it, you''ve arrived back in Pavlovo.'
+	'You get into the Lada with the rest of your family and before you know it, you''ve arrived back in Pavlovosk.'
 	act 'Go to your room': gt 'bedrPar'
 end
 
@@ -834,7 +834,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'to_gadukino':
 	!family_trip_month = 1
 	minut += rand(15,25)
 	gs 'stat'
-	'You get into the Volga with the rest of your family and before you know, you''ve arrived in Gadukino. Your grandparents have lived here for forty years.'
+	'You get into the Lada with the rest of your family and before you know, you''ve arrived in Gadukino. Your grandparents have lived here for forty years.'
 	act 'Go into the house': gt 'gadhouse'
 end
 

Diferenças do arquivo suprimidas por serem muito extensas
+ 303 - 303
locations/hanters.qsrc


Diferenças do arquivo suprimidas por serem muito extensas
+ 244 - 258
locations/hantersex.qsrc


+ 111 - 98
locations/mirasex.qsrc

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miralick_first':
 		'Kneeling down, Mira timidly reaches for your panties while looking you in the eyes and smiling shyly. You relax against the tree, close your eyes and soak in the anticipation.'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mira_start_tanga0.jpg"></center>'
-		'Dropping to his knees and not finding you cowards, Mira timidly touched your vagina, as if tasted, causing you involuntary moan of pleasure. You leaned on the tree and covering his eyes, began to wait for the continuation...'
+		'Dropping to her knees and not finding you wearing panties, Mira timidly touched your vagina, causing you involuntary moan of pleasure. You lean on the tree and covering your eyes, began to wait for her to continue...'
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -33,10 +33,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirakiss':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirakiss'+rand(1,4)+'.jpg"></center>'
 	if pcs_horny < 20: pcs_horny += rand(1,5)
 	temp = rand(1,4)
-	if temp = 1:'You passionately bite your lips in luscious lips Mira. She responds to your kiss no less passionately, causing you moan of joy.'
-	if temp = 2:'You kiss with Mira feeling her soft lips on his lips and her slim nimble tongue penetrates into your mouth.'
-	if temp = 3:'Miroslav gently kisses you <<$liptalk3>> and you will feel how the thrill of her kiss, embracing you.'
-	if temp = 4:'Mira passionately kisses your <<$liptalk3>> and you return the kiss, feeling the exhilaration covers every part of your body.'
+	if temp = 1:'You passionately bite Mira''s luscious lips. She responds to your kiss no less passionately, causing you to moan out of joy.'
+	if temp = 2:'You kiss with Mira feeling her soft lips and her slim nimble tongue penetrate into your mouth.'
+	if temp = 3:'Miroslav gently kisses you <<$liptalk3>> and you will feel thrill of her kiss washing over you.'
+	if temp = 4:'Mira passionately kisses your <<$liptalk3>> and you return the kiss, feeling the exhilaration in every part of your body.'
 	*nl
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -53,27 +53,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'foreplay':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miraforeplay'+rand(1,4)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		if pcs_horny < 60:pcs_horny += rand(1,5)
 		temp = rand(1,3)
-		if temp = 1:'You passionately kiss with Mira, stroking ladoshki her crotch and arousing even more.'
-		if temp = 2:'World you kiss on the lips with a gentle kiss, stroking her pussy, through her panties, his hand..'
-		if temp = 3:'You kiss Miroslava, your <<$liptalk3>> touching her lips in a hot kiss, and your hand on the crotch making her moan excitedly.'
+		if temp = 1:'You passionately kiss with Mira, stroking her crotch and arousing both of you even more.'
+		if temp = 2:'You give Mira a gentle kiss while stroking her pussy through her panties...'
+		if temp = 3:'You kiss Mira, your <<$liptalk3>> touching her lips in a hot kiss, and your hand on her crotch making her moan excitedly.'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miraforeplay'+rand(5,7)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		temp = rand(1,3)
 		if temp = 1:'Mira fondles your <<tits>> cup breasts, gently squeezing them in her hands and kissing them.'
-		if temp = 2:'You feel the hot breath on his chest, slick tongue Mira, neptunea caressing your nipples and give you great pleasure.'
-		if temp = 3:'Mira fondles your breasts, gently squeezing them in his hands, Pokrywa kisses and playing with papillae tongue.'
+		if temp = 2:'You feel her hot breath on your chest, and her slick tongue caressing your nipples and giving you great pleasure.'
+		if temp = 3:'Mira fondles your breasts, gently squeezing them in her hands. She kisses and teases your nipples with her tongue.'
 	end
 	if mirahorny < 80:mirahorny += 5
 	*nl
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	if pcs_horny < 40 or mirahorny < 40:
-		act 'To continue to caress':gt 'mirasex','foreplay'
+		act 'Continue to caress her':gt 'mirasex','foreplay'
 	else
 		if pcs_horny >= mirahorny:
-			act 'Further':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_start'
+			act 'Lick Mira':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_start'
 		else
-			act 'Further':gt 'mirasex','miralick_start'
+			act 'Let Mira lick you':gt 'mirasex','miralick_start'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -83,18 +83,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miralick_start':
 	miralick += 1
 	if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mira_start_tanga1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Kneeling down, Mira reached out to your cowards with a smile on your face, looking you in the eye. You leaned on the tree and covering his eyes, began to wait for the continuation...'
+		'Kneeling down, Mira reached out for your panties with a smile on your face, looking you in the eye. You lean on the tree and cover your eyes, waiting for her to continue...'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mira_start_tanga0.jpg"></center>'
-		'Dropping to his knees and not finding you cowards of Mira licked your tongue <<$vaginatipe2>> vagina, sampling her taste, causing you involuntary moan of pleasure. You leaned on the tree and covering his eyes, began to wait for the continuation...'
+		'Dropping to her knees and not finding any panties, Mira licked your <<$vaginatipe2>> vagina, sampling it''s taste, and causing an involuntary moan of pleasure from you. You lean on the tree and cover your eyes, waiting for her to continue...'
 	end
 	*nl
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 
-		act 'To stand on his feet':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
-		act 'Become doggy':
+		act 'Stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
+		act 'Doggy':
 			temp = rand(1,2)
 			if temp = 1:gt 'mirasex','miralick_dog'
 			if temp = 2:gt 'mirasex','mirafinger_dog'
@@ -109,9 +109,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lickmira_first':
 	if mirasex = 0:mirasex = 1 & girl += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/lickmira_start.jpg"></center>'
 	if lesbian < 10:
-		'Kneeling down, you gently touched the cowards Mira and began their awkward stagisti it. She, burning with excitement, lifted his ass with a stone, determined to help you and speeding up the process...'
+		'Kneeling down, you gently touched the Mira''s panties and begin pulling them down. She is hot with excitement and wiggles her ass to help you get them off faster...'
 	else
-		'Kneeling down, you reached for cowards Mira and began flicking them off with her. She, burning with excitement, lifted his ass with a stone, determined to help you and speeding up the process...'
+		'Kneeling down, you reached for Mira''s panties and began pulling them off of her. She is hot with excitement and wiggles her ass to help you get them off faster...'
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -124,9 +124,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lickmira_start':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/lickmira_start.jpg"></center>'
 	if lesbian < 10:
-		'Kneeling down, you gently touched the cowards Mira and began their awkward stagisti it. She, burning with excitement, lifted his ass with a stone, determined to help you and speeding up the process...'
+		'Kneeling down, you gently touched the Mira''s panties and begin pulling them down. She is hot with excitement and wiggles her ass to help you get them off faster...'
 	else
-		'Kneeling down, you reached for cowards Mira and began flicking them off with her. She, burning with excitement, lifted his ass with a stone, determined to help you and speeding up the process...'
+		'Kneeling down, you reached for Mira''s panties and began pulling them off of her. She is hot with excitement and wiggles her ass to help you get them off faster...'
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -137,24 +137,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'horny_talk':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/horny_talk.jpg"></center>'
-	'Mira caught your gaze smiled. Coming up to you in tight, she turned you back to yourself and sanow hand in your panties cried:'
+	'Mira caught your gaze smiled. She turns around and put your hand under her skirt so you can feel how wet she is.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 	if pcs_horny >= 80:
-		' - Oh, Yes, there is a waterfall!'
+		' - Oh, Yes, there is a waterfall down ther right now!'
 	else
 		' - You see, the bitch flowed!'
 	end
-	'Polozhiv in your pants for another couple of moments, Mira said:'
+	'She lets your hand stay in her pantiess for another couple of moments, before saying:'
 	if npc_rel['A60'] < 15:
 		' - Get the fuck out of here slut, I have no time to deal with you.'
-		'Singing for a song and went home. You looked her in the trail a few moments, too, went towards his house.'
+		'She walks home alone singing a song. You watch her for a moment before heading back to the village as well.'
 	else
-		' - Okay, get cancer, will help your floozy.'
-		'You willingly pulled off her panties and flopped on his knees, becoming before her cancer.'
+		' - Okay, get ready, you asked for this.'
+		'You willingly pulled off her panties and slipped a finger inside of her.'
 	end
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	if npc_rel['A60'] < 15:act 'Further':MiraLoc ! 2 & minut += 20 & gt'Gaddvor'
+	if npc_rel['A60'] < 15:act 'Leave':MiraLoc ! 2 & minut += 20 & gt'Gaddvor'
 	if npc_rel['A60'] >= 15:act 'Moan':gt 'mirasex','mirafinger'
 end
 
@@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miralick_orgasm':
 		pcs_mood += 15
 		pcs_willpwr += 15
 		$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-		$orgasm_txt = 'Suddenly you Otlizat Mira, you began to cum themselves. Between the legs of blazing fire and waves of pleasure covered the body, you moaned, but licking didn`t stop.'
+		$orgasm_txt = 'Suddenly Mira begins to cum. You are still between her legs but keep licking as her warm cum covers your face and drips down onto your breasts.'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -187,16 +187,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lickmira_mis1':
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 		if pcs_horny < 60:
-			'Moving away from orgasm, Mira opened my legs, releasing your mind from captivity. Wiping her juices off your face and clean yourself yourself up, you went home.'
+			'After Mira orgasms,you get out from between her legs and wipe her juices off your face. You clean yourself yourself up, head home.'
 		else
-			'Moving away from orgasm, Mira opened my legs, releasing your mind from captivity. Wiping her juices off your face and clean yourself yourself up, you looked at Mira.'
+			'After Mira orgasms,you get out from between her legs and wipe her juices off your face. You clean yourself yourself up and smiled at Mira before heading back to the village with her.'
 		end
 	end
 	*nl
 	if miraorgasm = 0:
-		act 'To lick on':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_mis1'
+		act 'Continue licking Mira':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_mis1'
 	else
-		if pcs_horny < 60:act 'Further':MiraLoc ! 2 & minut += 20 & gt'Gaddvor'
+		if pcs_horny < 60:act 'Leave':MiraLoc ! 2 & minut += 20 & gt'Gaddvor'
 		if pcs_horny >= 60:act 'Further':gt 'mirasex','horny_talk'
 	end
 	killvar '$textmis'
@@ -223,21 +223,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lickmira_mis2':
 		gs 'mirasex','miralick_orgasm'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
-		if you_orgasm = 0:'Moving away from orgasm, Mira opened my legs, releasing your mind from captivity. After some time, moving away from orgasm, you continued with Mira...'
-		if you_orgasm = 1:'Moving away from orgasm, Mira opened my legs, releasing your mind from captivity. Wiping her juices off your face and clean yourself yourself up, you and Mira went home.'
+		if you_orgasm = 0:'After Mira orgasms,you get out from between her legs and wipe her juices off your face. You clean yourself yourself up, head home.'
+		if you_orgasm = 1:'After Mira orgasms,you get out from between her legs and wipe her juices off your face. You clean yourself yourself up, head back to village with Mira.'
 	end
 	*nl
 	if miraorgasm = 0 and you_orgasm = 0:
 		if pcs_horny >= mirahorny:
 			temp = rand(1,2)
 
-			if temp = 1:act 'To lie on the ground':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
-			if temp = 2:act 'To lick on':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_mis2'
+			if temp = 1:act 'Lie on the ground':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
+			if temp = 2:act 'Continue licking Mira':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_mis2'
 		else
 
-			act 'To lie on the ground':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
-			act 'To stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
-			act 'Become doggy':
+			act 'Lie on the ground':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
+			act 'Stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
+			act 'Doggy':
 				temp = rand(1,2)
 				if temp = 1:gt 'mirasex','miralick_dog'
 				if temp = 2:gt 'mirasex','mirafinger_dog'
@@ -245,22 +245,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lickmira_mis2':
 		end
 	elseif miraorgasm = 1 and you_orgasm = 0:
 
-		act 'To stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
-		act 'Become doggy':
+		act 'Stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
+		act 'Doggy':
 			temp = rand(1,2)
 			if temp = 1:gt 'mirasex','miralick_dog'
 			if temp = 2:gt 'mirasex','mirafinger_dog'
 		end
 	elseif miraorgasm = 0 and you_orgasm = 1:
 
-		act 'To lick on':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_mis2'
+		act 'Continue licking Mira':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_mis2'
 	else
 		miraorgasm = 0
 		you_orgasm = 0
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'Further':MiraLoc ! 2 & minut += 20 & gt'Gaddvor'
+		act 'Leave':MiraLoc ! 2 & minut += 20 & gt'Gaddvor'
 	end
 	killvar '$textmis'
 	killvar '$textlick'
@@ -287,7 +287,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '69_1':
 		mirahorny = 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/lickmira_69_cum2.jpg"></center>'
 		$text69[4]+$textlick[iif(lesbian < 10,rand(7,9),rand(10,12))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,5,iif(pcs_horny < 80,6,7))]+$text69[5]+$textlick[iif(miralick < 10,rand(1,3),rand(4,6))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,1,iif(pcs_horny < 80,2,3))]+$text_cum[2]
-		'Moving away from orgasm, Mira opened my legs, releasing your mind from captivity.'
+		'After a while Mira cums and she turns her attention to you...'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 		minut -= 5
@@ -298,7 +298,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '69_1':
 		pcs_horny = 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/lickmira_69_cum1.jpg"></center>'
 		$text69[4]+$textlick[iif(lesbian < 10,rand(7,9),rand(10,12))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,5,iif(pcs_horny < 80,6,7))]+$text69[5]+$textlick[iif(miralick < 10,rand(1,3),rand(4,6))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,1,iif(pcs_horny < 80,2,3))]+$text_cum[1]
-		'After some time, moving away from orgasm, you smile and Mira continued...'
+		'After a while you cum and turn your attention to her...'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 		minut -= 5
@@ -309,7 +309,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '69_1':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/lickmira_69_cum'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		$text69[4]+$textlick[iif(lesbian < 10,rand(7,9),rand(10,12))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,5,iif(pcs_horny < 80,6,7))]+$text69[5]+$textlick[iif(miralick < 10,rand(1,3),rand(4,6))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,1,iif(pcs_horny < 80,2,3))]+$text_cum[3]
 		$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-		$orgasm_txt = 'After some time, moving away from orgasm, you and Mira resulted in proyadok and happy went home...'
+		$orgasm_txt = 'After a while you and Mira cum together...'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 		minut -= 5
@@ -320,13 +320,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '69_1':
 		if pcs_horny >= mirahorny:
 			temp = rand(1,2)
 
-			if temp = 1:act 'To lick on':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
+			if temp = 1:act 'Continue licking':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
 			if temp = 2:act 'Get on your knees':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_mis2'
 		else
 
-			act 'To lick on':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
-			act 'To stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
-			act 'Become doggy':
+			act 'Continue licking':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
+			act 'Stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
+			act 'Doggy':
 				temp = rand(1,2)
 				if temp = 1:gt 'mirasex','miralick_dog'
 				if temp = 2:gt 'mirasex','mirafinger_dog'
@@ -334,8 +334,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '69_1':
 		end
 	elseif miraorgasm = 1 and you_orgasm = 0:
 
-		act 'To stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
-		act 'Become doggy':
+		act 'Stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
+		act 'Doggy':
 			temp = rand(1,2)
 			if temp = 1:gt 'mirasex','miralick_dog'
 			if temp = 2:gt 'mirasex','mirafinger_dog'
@@ -349,7 +349,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '69_1':
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'Further':MiraLoc ! 2 & minut += 20 & gt'Gaddvor'
+		act 'Leave':MiraLoc ! 2 & minut += 20 & gt'Gaddvor'
 	end
 	killvar '$text69'
 	killvar '$textlick'
@@ -371,19 +371,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '69_2':
 		mirahorny = 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/lickmira_69_cum2.jpg"></center>'
 		$text69[rand(1,3)]+$textlick[iif(lesbian < 10,rand(7,9),rand(10,12))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,5,iif(pcs_horny < 80,6,7))]+$text69[5]+$textlick[iif(miralick < 10,rand(1,3),rand(4,6))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,1,iif(pcs_horny < 80,2,3))]+$text_cum[2]
-		'Moving away from orgasm, Mira opened my legs, releasing your mind from captivity.'
+		'After a while Mira cums and she turns her attention to you...'
 	elseif mirahorny < 100 and pcs_horny >= 100:
+		orgasm += 1
+		you_orgasm = 1
+		pcs_horny = 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/lickmira_69_cum1.jpg"></center>'
 		$text69[rand(1,3)]+$textlick[iif(lesbian < 10,rand(7,9),rand(10,12))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,5,iif(pcs_horny < 80,6,7))]+$text69[5]+$textlick[iif(miralick < 10,rand(1,3),rand(4,6))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,1,iif(pcs_horny < 80,2,3))]+$text_cum[1]
 		$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-		$orgasm_txt = 'After some time, moving away from orgasm, you smile and Mira continued...'
+		$orgasm_txt = 'After a while you cum and turn your attention to her...'
 	else
 		miraorgasm = 1
 		mirahorny = 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/lickmira_69_cum'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		$text69[rand(1,3)]+$textlick[iif(lesbian < 10,rand(7,9),rand(10,12))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,5,iif(pcs_horny < 80,6,7))]+$text69[5]+$textlick[iif(miralick < 10,rand(1,3),rand(4,6))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,1,iif(pcs_horny < 80,2,3))]+$text_cum[3]
 		$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-		$orgasm_txt = 'After some time, moving away from orgasm, you and Mira resulted in proyadok and happy went home...'
+		$orgasm_txt = 'After a while you and Mira cum together...'
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian'
@@ -394,13 +397,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '69_2':
 		if pcs_horny >= mirahorny:
 			temp = rand(1,2)
 
-			if temp = 1:act 'To lick on':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
+			if temp = 1:act 'Continue licking':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
 			if temp = 2:act 'Get on your knees':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_mis2'
 		else
 
-			act 'To lick on':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
-			act 'To stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
-			act 'Become doggy':
+			act 'Continue licking':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
+			act 'Stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
+			act 'Doggy':
 				temp = rand(1,2)
 				if temp = 1:gt 'mirasex','miralick_dog'
 				if temp = 2:gt 'mirasex','mirafinger_dog'
@@ -408,8 +411,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '69_2':
 		end
 	elseif miraorgasm = 1 and you_orgasm = 0:
 
-		act 'To stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
-		act 'Become doggy':
+		act 'Stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
+		act 'Doggy':
 			temp = rand(1,2)
 			if temp = 1:gt 'mirasex','miralick_dog'
 			if temp = 2:gt 'mirasex','mirafinger_dog'
@@ -423,7 +426,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '69_2':
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'Further':MiraLoc ! 2 & minut += 20 & gt'Gaddvor'
+		act 'Leave':MiraLoc ! 2 & minut += 20 & gt'Gaddvor'
 	end
 	killvar '$text69'
 	killvar '$textlick'
@@ -440,20 +443,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miralick_stand1':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miralick_stand'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		$textstand[rand(1,3)]+$textlick[iif(miralick < 10,rand(1,3),rand(4,6))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,1,iif(pcs_horny < 80,2,3))]
 	else
+		orgasm += 1
+		you_orgasm = 1
+		pcs_horny = 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miralick_stand_cum.jpg"></center>'
 		$textstand[rand(1,3)]+$textlick[iif(miralick < 10,rand(1,3),rand(4,6))]+$text_emotions[3]+$text_cum[1]
 		$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-		$orgasm_txt = 'Legs you go and you slide down, unable to move. After some time, moving away from orgasm, you gave up, and went home.'
+		$orgasm_txt = 'Mira continues to lick you until you cum. After some time, you head back to the village.'
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	*nl
 	if you_orgasm = 0:
-
 		act 'Moan':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand1'
 	else
-
-		act 'Further':MiraLoc ! 2 & minut += 20 & gt'Gaddvor'
+		act 'Leave':MiraLoc ! 2 & minut += 20 & gt'Gaddvor'
 	end
 	killvar '$textstand'
 	killvar '$textlick'
@@ -469,11 +473,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miralick_stand2':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miralick_stand'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		$textstand[rand(1,3)]+$textlick[iif(miralick < 10,rand(1,3),rand(4,6))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,1,iif(pcs_horny < 80,2,3))]
 	else
+		orgasm += 1
 		you_orgasm = 1
+		pcs_horny = 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miralick_stand_cum.jpg"></center>'
 		$textstand[rand(1,3)]+$textlick[iif(miralick < 10,rand(1,3),rand(4,6))]+$text_emotions[3]+$text_cum[1]
-		if miraorgasm = 0:'Legs you go and you slide down, unable to move. After some time, moving away from orgasm, you continued with Mira...'
-		if miraorgasm = 1:'Legs you go and you slide down, unable to move. After some time, moving away from orgasm, you and Mira brought herself up and went home.'
+		if miraorgasm = 0:'You lick Mira''s pussy but she hasn''t cum yet so you continue...'
+		if miraorgasm = 1:'You lick Mira''s pussy until she cums...'
 		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
@@ -483,13 +489,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miralick_stand2':
 		if pcs_horny >= mirahorny:
 			temp = rand(1,2)
 
-			if temp = 1:act 'To lie on the ground':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
+			if temp = 1:act 'Lie on the ground':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
 			if temp = 2:act 'Get on your knees':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_mis2'
 		else
 
-			act 'To stand on':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
-			act 'To lie on the ground':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
-			act 'Become doggy':
+			act 'Stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
+			act 'Lie on the ground':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
+			act 'Doggy':
 				temp = rand(1,2)
 				if temp = 1:gt 'mirasex','miralick_dog'
 				if temp = 2:gt 'mirasex','mirafinger_dog'
@@ -497,8 +503,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miralick_stand2':
 		end
 	elseif miraorgasm = 1 and you_orgasm = 0:
 
-		act 'To stand on':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
-		act 'Become doggy':
+		act 'Stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
+		act 'Doggy':
 			temp = rand(1,2)
 			if temp = 1:gt 'mirasex','miralick_dog'
 			if temp = 2:gt 'mirasex','mirafinger_dog'
@@ -512,7 +518,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miralick_stand2':
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'Further':MiraLoc ! 2 & minut += 20 & gt'Gaddvor'
+		act 'Leave':MiraLoc ! 2 & minut += 20 & gt'Gaddvor'
 	end
 	killvar '$textstand'
 	killvar '$textlick'
@@ -533,11 +539,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miralick_dog':
 		minut -= 5
 		gs 'stat'
 	else
+		orgasm += 1
 		you_orgasm = 1
+		pcs_horny = 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miralick_dog_cum.jpg"></center>'
 		$textdog[rand(1,3)]+$textlick[iif(miralick < 10,rand(1,3),rand(4,6))]+$text_emotions[4]+$text_cum[1]
-		if miraorgasm = 0:'The body you are not listening and you flop down on your stomach, unable to move. After some time, moving away from orgasm, you continued with Mira.'
-		if miraorgasm = 1:'The body you are not listening and you flop down on your stomach, unable to move. After some time, moving away from orgasm, you and Mira brought herself up and went home.'
+		if miraorgasm = 0:'You lick Mira''s pussy but she hasn''t cum yet so you continue...'
+		if miraorgasm = 1:'You lick Mira''s pussy until she cums...'
 		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -550,24 +558,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miralick_dog':
 	if miraorgasm = 0 and you_orgasm = 0:
 		if pcs_horny >= mirahorny:
 			temp = rand(1,2)
-			if temp = 1:act 'To lie on the ground':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
+			if temp = 1:act 'Lie on the ground':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
 			if temp = 2:act 'Get on your knees':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_mis2'
 		else
-			act 'To be a cancer on':
+			act 'Continue licking':
 				temp = rand(1,2)
 				if temp = 1:gt 'mirasex','miralick_dog'
 				if temp = 2:gt 'mirasex','mirafinger_dog'
 			end
-			act 'To stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
-			act 'To lie on the ground':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
+			act 'Stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
+			act 'Lie on the ground':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
 		end
 	elseif miraorgasm = 1 and you_orgasm = 0:
-			act 'To be a cancer on':
+			act 'Continue licking':
 				temp = rand(1,2)
 				if temp = 1:gt 'mirasex','miralick_dog'
 				if temp = 2:gt 'mirasex','mirafinger_dog'
 			end
-		act 'To stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
+		act 'Stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
 	elseif miraorgasm = 0 and you_orgasm = 1:
 		act 'Get on your knees':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_mis2'
 	else
@@ -575,7 +583,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miralick_dog':
 		you_orgasm = 0
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Further':MiraLoc ! 2 & minut += 20 & gt'Gaddvor'
+		act 'Leave':MiraLoc ! 2 & minut += 20 & gt'Gaddvor'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -590,10 +598,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirafinger':
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 	else
+		orgasm += 1
 		you_orgasm = 1
+		pcs_horny = 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirafinger_dog_cum.jpg"></center>'
 		$textdog[4]+$textfinger[rand(1,3)]+$text_emotions[4]+$text_cum[1]
-		'The body you are not listening and you flop down on your stomach, unable to move. Mira slyly looked at you and giving to lick your fingers to clean them from your selections, went to the side of the house. After some time, moving away from orgasm, you gave up, and went home.'
+		if miraorgasm = 0:'Mira slyly looked at you and puts her fingers in your mouth to clean them off from your secretions.'
+		if miraorgasm = 1:'Mira slyly looked at you and puts her fingers in your mouth to clean them off from your secretions. You promptly return the favor.'
 		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -604,9 +615,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirafinger':
 	killvar '$text_emotions'
 	killvar '$text_cum'
 	if you_orgasm = 0:
-		act 'To be a cancer on':gt 'mirasex','mirafinger'
+		act 'Continue':gt 'mirasex','mirafinger'
 	else
-		act 'Further':MiraLoc ! 2 & minut += 20 & gt'Gaddvor'
+		act 'Leave':MiraLoc ! 2 & minut += 20 & gt'Gaddvor'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -621,11 +632,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirafinger_dog':
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 	else
+		orgasm += 1
 		you_orgasm = 1
+		pcs_horny = 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirafinger_dog_cum.jpg"></center>'
 		$textdog[rand(1,3)]+$textfinger[rand(1,3)]+$text_emotions[4]+$text_cum[1]
-		if miraorgasm = 0:'The body you are not listening and you flop down on your stomach, unable to move. After some time, moving away from orgasm, you continued with Mira.'
-		if miraorgasm = 1:'The body you are not listening and you flop down on your stomach, unable to move. After some time, moving away from orgasm, you and Mira brought herself up and went home.'
+		if miraorgasm = 0:'Mira slyly looked at you and puts her fingers in your mouth to clean them off from your secretions.'
+		if miraorgasm = 1:'Mira slyly looked at you and puts her fingers in your mouth to clean them off from your secretions. You promptly return the favor.'
 		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -638,24 +651,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirafinger_dog':
 	if miraorgasm = 0 and you_orgasm = 0:
 		if pcs_horny >= mirahorny:
 			temp = rand(1,2)
-			if temp = 1:act 'To lie on the ground':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
+			if temp = 1:act 'Lie on the ground':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
 			if temp = 2:act 'Get on your knees':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_mis2'
 		else
-			act 'To be a cancer on':
+			act 'Continue':
 				temp = rand(1,2)
 				if temp = 1:gt 'mirasex','miralick_dog'
 				if temp = 2:gt 'mirasex','mirafinger_dog'
 			end
-			act 'To stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
-			act 'To lie on the ground':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
+			act 'Stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
+			act 'Lie on the ground':gt 'mirasex','69_2'
 		end
 	elseif miraorgasm = 1 and you_orgasm = 0:
-			act 'To be a cancer on':
+			act 'Continue':
 				temp = rand(1,2)
 				if temp = 1:gt 'mirasex','miralick_dog'
 				if temp = 2:gt 'mirasex','mirafinger_dog'
 			end
-		act 'To stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
+		act 'Stand up':gt 'mirasex','miralick_stand2'
 	elseif miraorgasm = 0 and you_orgasm = 1:
 		act 'Get on your knees':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_mis2'
 	else
@@ -663,7 +676,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirafinger_dog':
 		you_orgasm = 0
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Further':MiraLoc ! 2 & minut += 20 & gt'Gaddvor'
+		act 'Leave':MiraLoc ! 2 & minut += 20 & gt'Gaddvor'
 	end
 end
 

+ 7 - 7
locations/mitka.qsrc

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # mitka
 gs 'stat'
-'<center><b><font color="maroon">Mitka Kingpin</font></b></center>'
+'<center><b><font color="maroon">Mitka Shkvoryen</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mitka.jpg"></center>'
 *nl
 'He is barely older than you, you remember him from your childhood. You both used to swim in the local river together.'
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ else
 						else
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkabjhomecum1.jpg"></center>'
 							*nl
-							'Mitya places his large hands on the back of your head and roughly force you to take his cock deep into your throat. Slowly he builds up a rhythm and finally finishes in your mouth.'
+							'Mitka places his large hands on the back of your head and roughly forces you to take his cock deep into your throat. Slowly he builds up a rhythm and finally finishes in your mouth.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'deepthroat', 'rough'
 							gs 'cum_call','mouth',1
 							swallow += 1
@@ -91,8 +91,8 @@ else
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka2.jpg"></center>'
 				    end
 					*nl
-					'Mitka takes you to his house and onto the veranda. He has you sit on the couch and begins pawing at your cloths pulling them off you.'
-					'Breathing heavily, Mitka steps to your side and says, "Nice fuck!"'
+					'Mitka takes you to his house and onto the veranda. He has you sit on the couch and begins pawing at your clothes pulling them off you.'
+					'Breathing heavily, Mitka gets off of you and says, "Nice fuck!"'
 					npc_QW['A63'] += 1
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A63'
 					npc_sex[$boy] += 1
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ else
 						else
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkabjhomecum1.jpg"></center>'
 							*nl
-							'Mitya places his large hands on the back of your head and roughly force you to take his cock deep into your throat. Slowly he builds up a rhythm and finally finishes in your mouth.'
+							'Mitka places his large hands on the back of your head and roughly forces you to take his cock deep into your throat. Slowly he builds up a rhythm and finally finishes in your mouth.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'deepthroat', 'rough'
 							gs 'cum_call','mouth',1
 						end
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ else
 					elseif pcs_ass >= 25:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaanalhome2.jpg"></center>'
 					end
-					'Mitka takes you to his house and onto the veranda. He has you sit on the couch and begins pawing at your cloths pulling them off you.'
+					'Mitka takes you to his house and onto the veranda. He has you sit on the couch and begins pawing at your clothes pulling them off you.'
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A63'
 					npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 					npc_QW['A63'] += 1
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ else
 
 			'You hesitate for a moment then look at him sternly.'
 			'"What about Mira? Aren''t you going out with her?"'
-			'Mitka smiles sheepishly and has the decentcy to blush. He looks around to make sure Mira isn''t nearby then tries to explain.'
+			'Mitka smiles sheepishly and has the decency to blush. He looks around to make sure Mira isn''t nearby then tries to explain.'
 			'"Well, I just figured since, you know, we already did stuff..." he trails off as he notices that you aren''t going for it.'
 			'"You thought wrong." you tell him coldly, "Unlike boys, girls don''t fool around with their best friend''s boyfriend."'
 			'You turn around and walk away and Mitka kicks at the ground in frustration. You decide not to mention this to Mira.'

+ 76 - 103
locations/mitkabuh.qsrc

@@ -1,7 +1,6 @@
 # mitkabuh
 
-
-!MiaLoc tells us where Mira is Located
+!MiraLoc tells us where Mira is Located
 !----------------------------------------------
 !MiraLoc = 0 (Mira at home)
 !MiraLoc = 1 (Mira at river)
@@ -35,12 +34,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partyalone':
 !! repeat until drunk
 	if alko < 8:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/drunk.jpg"></center>'
-		'Set in a secluded spot behind your grandparents'' house the three village boys, Mitka Kingpin, Bob Package and Kolyamba are drinking moonshine, without any snacks. Mitka pours the brew into a clear plastic shot glass and hands it over to you.'
+		'Set in a secluded spot behind your grandparents'' house the three village boys, Mitka Shkvoryen, Vasyan Paket and Kolyamba Pyut are drinking moonshine, without any snacks. Mitka pours the brew into a clear plastic shot glass and hand it over to you.'
 		act 'Leave':gt 'Gaddvor'
 		act 'Drink':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 30
-			alko += 4
+			alko += rand(3,5)
 			cumspclnt = 2
 			gs 'cum_cleanup'
 			pcs_breath = 0
@@ -51,7 +50,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partyalone':
 			end
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/drunk.jpg"></center>'
-			'You drank the moonshine and it burns as it goes down your throat. Your eyes water a little and you have a tough time catching your breath. you wipe your eyes and mouth on your sleeve , you look around and are a little disappointed because of the lack of snacks to munch on. Mitka said approvingly "Good shit, huhh."'
+			'You drink the moonshine and it burns as it goes down your throat. Your eyes water a little and you have a tough time catching your breath. You wipe your eyes and mouth on your sleeve, and look around but are a little disappointed because of the lack of snacks to munch on. Mitka said approvingly "Good shit, huh."'
 
 			act 'Catching your breath':gt 'mitkabuh'
 		end
@@ -60,10 +59,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partyalone':
 		if mitkadaybuh ! daystart:
 			mitkadaybuh = daystart
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/drunk.jpg"></center>'
-			'You are trashed - your legs can barely keep you upright. Mitka, noticing your condition, grabs you by the waist. "Well, well little Chicka, <<$pcs_nickname>>, come with me?"'
+			'You are trashed - your legs can barely keep you upright. Mitka, noticing your condition, grabs you by the waist. "Well, well little <<$pcs_nickname>>, come with me."'
 
 			if npc_QW['A63'] < 3:
-				act 'you nod and slurred your words...mumbled something as you fell into his waiting arms':
+				act 'You nod and slur your words...mumbling something as you fell into his waiting arms':
 					*clr & cla
 					if pcs_vag = 0:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkafirst.jpg"></center>'
@@ -71,9 +70,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partyalone':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka2.jpg"></center>'
 					end
 					*nl
-					'Mitka takes you to his house and onto the veranda. He has you sit on the couch and begins pawing at your cloths pulling them off you.'
+					'Mitka takes you to his house and onto the veranda. He has you sit on the couch and begins pawing at your clothes pulling them off you.'
 					*nl
-					'Mitka, breathing heavily stepped to your side and said, "You''re a good fuck!"'
+					'Mitka, breathing heavily gets off of you and says, "You''re a good fuck!"'
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A63'
 					npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 					pose = 0
@@ -106,7 +105,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partyalone':
 			if npc_QW['A63'] < 10:
 				'The guys talk about you, not paying you any attention.'
 			else
-				' "Yo, <<$pcs_nickname>>, come drink with us again, we love fucking you!! Ha-ha!" They laugh as you make your way back to your grandparents cottage. You scream at them, "Find someone-else, something... You fucking bastards."'
+				' "Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>, come drink with us again, we love fucking you!! Ha-ha!" They laugh as you make your way back to your grandparents cottage. You scream at them, "Find someone-else, something... You fucking bastards."'
 			end
 			act 'Leave':gt'Gaddvor'
 		end
@@ -120,30 +119,19 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'partywithMira':
 	if npc_QW['A60'] = 0:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/drunk.jpg"></center>'
-		'Set in a secluded spot behind your grandparents'' house the three village boys, Mitka Kingpin, Vasya Package and Kolyamba are drinking moonshine, without any snacks. You and Mira approach them and ask for a drink. The guys immediately brighten up and actively nod their heads. They introduce theyselves and welcome you both to the party. Mitka pours the brew into a clear plastic shot glass and hands it over to you and Mira.'
+		'Set in a secluded spot behind your grandparents'' house the three village boys, Mitka Shkvoryen, Vasyan Paket and Kolyamba Pyut are drinking moonshine, without any snacks. You and Mira approach them and ask for a drink. The guys immediately brighten up and nod their heads. They introduce theyselves and welcome you both to the party. Mitka pours the brew into a clear plastic shot glass and hands it over to you and Mira.'
 		npc_QW['A60'] = 1
 		act 'Further': gt 'mitkabuh'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/drunk.jpg"></center>'
-		if alko = 0: 'Set in a secluded spot behind your grandparents'' house the three village boys, Mitka Kingpin, Vasya Package and Kolyamba are drinking moonshine, without any snacks. You and Mira approach them and ask for a drink. The guys immediately brighten up and actively nod their heads. Mitka pours the brew into a clear plastic shot glass and hands it over to you and Mira.'
-		if alko > 0: 'Set in a secluded spot behind your grandparents'' house the three village boys, Mitka Kingpin, Vasya Package and Kolyamba are drinking moonshine, without any snacks. Mitka pours the brew into a clear plastic shot glass and hands it over to you and Mira.'
+		if alko = 0: 'Set in a secluded spot behind your grandparents'' house the three village boys, Mitka Shkvoryen, Vasyan Paket and Kolyamba Pyut are drinking moonshine, without any snacks. You and Mira approach them and ask for a drink. The guys immediately brighten up and actively nod their heads. Mitka pours the brew into a clear plastic shot glass and hands it over to you and Mira.'
+		if alko > 0: 'Set in a secluded spot behind your grandparents'' house the three village boys, Mitka Shkvoryen, Vasyan Paket and Kolyamba Pyut are drinking moonshine, without any snacks. Mitka pours the brew into a clear plastic shot glass and hands it over to you and Mira.'
 		if alko < 8 and npc_drunk['A60'] < 8:
 
 			if alko <4: act 'Leave':MiraLoc = 0 & gt'Gaddvor'
 
-			temp_mb = RAND(0,3)
+			temp_mb = RAND(0,1)
 			if temp_mb = 0:
-				act 'You pass the shot glass of liquor to Mira':
-					*clr & cla
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/drinking.jpg"></center>'
-					'You pass Mira a shot glass full of liquor, she examines the glass''s contents for a moment, then gulps down the entire glass with a single toss of her head. Her eyes wided and she coughs a little, sucking in her breath with a smile. You talk lively with the guys as they drink as well.'
-					npc_drunk['A60'] += 2
-					minut += 15
-					gs 'stat'
-
-					act 'Further':gt 'mitkabuh'
-				end
-			elseif temp_mb = 1:
 				act 'You take the liquor and swallow it quickly':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/drinking.jpg"></center>'
@@ -157,10 +145,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partywithMira':
 
 					act 'Catching your breath':gt 'mitkabuh'
 				end
-			elseif temp_mb = 2:
+			elseif temp_mb = 1:
 				act 'You pass the shot glass of liquor to Mira':
 					*clr & cla
-					npc_drunk['A60'] += RAND(3,4)
+					npc_drunk['A60'] += RAND(3,5)
 					minut += 15
 					mirapiss = RAND(0,10)
 					if npc_QW['A60'] >= 8 and mirapiss <= 2:
@@ -175,22 +163,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partywithMira':
 						act 'Further':gt 'mitkabuh'
 					end
 				end
-			else
-				act 'You take the liquor and swallow it quickly':
-					*clr & cla
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/drinking.jpg"></center>'
-					'You take a glass of moonshine and quickly gulp it down, you cough and suck in your breath. Mira meanwhile holds her drink and slowly sips on it, while the local youths encourage her to slug it down like you did.'
-					minut += 15
-					alko += rand(3,5)
-					cumspclnt = 2
-					gs 'cum_cleanup'
-					pcs_breath = 0
-					gs 'stat'
-
-					act 'Catching your breath':gt 'mitkabuh'
-				end
 			end
-		elseif alko >= 8 :
+		elseif alko >= 8:
 			mitkadaybuh = daystart
 			if (npc_QW['A63'] = 0 and npc_QW['A60'] < 11) or gadriver_gang > 2:
 				*clr & cla
@@ -203,14 +177,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partywithMira':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/drunk.jpg"></center>'
 				if mirasextimes < 13:'You are trashed, your legs can barely hold you upright. Mitka, noticing your condition, steps over to you and grabs you by the waist and pulls you close. "Well now, <<$pcs_nickname>>, come with me and lets have some fun?"'
-				if mirasextimes >= 13:'You got so drunk on the swill they served you, your legs can barely hold you upright. Mitka notices your condition, he walks over to your and offers to fuck you right there in front of the others.'
+				if mirasextimes >= 13:'You got so drunk on the swill they served you, your legs can barely hold you upright. Mitka notices your condition, he walks over and offers to fuck you right there in front of the others.'
 !				if npc_QW['A63'] < 10:
 					temp_mb = RAND(0,5)
 					if temp_mb = 0 or (temp_mb < 3 and pcs_vag > 0):
-						act 'You mumble and slurred your words':
+						act 'You mumble and slur your words':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkasex1.jpg"></center>'
-							'Mitka, with a last wink to the other guys, and not paying Mira any attention, he walked you back to he house''s porch where he quickly began to undress you.'
+							'Mitka, with a last wink to the other guys, and not paying Mira any attention, walks you back to his house''s porch where he quickly began to undress you.'
 							gs 'boyStat', 'A63'
 							npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 							pose = 0
@@ -223,7 +197,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partywithMira':
 								gs 'dinSex','boy_wants_anal','lubri'
 								gs 'dinsex','analsex',10
 							end
-							'Mitka, laying down on his side tells you. "I really liked fucking you <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
+							'Mitka, get off of you after cumming. "I really liked fucking you <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
 
@@ -233,7 +207,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partywithMira':
 						act 'Suck':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkabj.jpg"></center>'
-							'Mitka, with a last wink to the other guys, and not paying Mira any attention, he walked you back to he house''s porch where he demanded you get on knees and give him a blowjob'
+							'Mitka, with a last wink to the other guys, and not paying Mira any attention, walks you back to his house''s porch where he demanded you get on knees and give him a blowjob.'
 							gs 'boyStat', 'A63'
 							npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 							gs 'oral','start'
@@ -243,7 +217,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partywithMira':
 								act 'Swallow':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkabjcum.jpg"></center>'
-									'Mitka, suddenly stops fucking your mouth for a few seconds. You tighten your grip around his cock without taking it out of his mouth. Mitka yells fiercely, as he begins to erupt into your mouth. Cum...you love the taste of the warm sticky liquid of life.'
+									'Mitka, suddenly stops fucking your mouth for a few seconds. You tighten your grip around his cock without taking it out of your mouth. Mitka yells fiercely, as he begins to erupt into your mouth. Cum...you love the taste of the warm sticky liquid of life.'
 									minut += 10
 									gs 'cum_call','mouth',$boy,1
 									gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -267,7 +241,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partywithMira':
 								act 'Swallow':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkabjcum2.jpg"></center>'
-									'You''re trying to take a Mitka''s cock in her mouth, but he rudely grabs you by the hair and puts his cock out of your mouth and starting to spray cum on your face...'
+									'You''re trying to take Mitka''s cock in your mouth, but he rudely grabs you by the hair and pulls his cock out of your mouth and starts to spray cum on your face...'
 									minut += 10
 									gs 'cum_call','face',$boy,1
 									gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -285,7 +259,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partywithMira':
 							else
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaanal1.jpg"></center>'
 							end
-							'Mitka, with a last wink to the other guys, and not paying Mira any attention, he walked you back to he house''s porch where he quickly began to undress you.'
+							'Mitka, with a last wink to the other guys, and not paying Mira any attention, walks you back to his house''s porch where he quickly began to undress you.'
 							gs 'boyStat', 'A63'
 							npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 							pose = 0
@@ -305,13 +279,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partywithMira':
 			if npc_QW['A60'] = 5:
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/drunkgirl.jpg"></center>'
-				'You''re already two sheets to the wind (drunk), but remember Mira''s words, Therefore, still trying not to touch any of the others. Mira threw you a knowing look, and as soon as they said their goodbyes to you, you waited a couple of minutes before following behind Vasya and Kolahoi and go to Mitka''s home. A little short of a the house you hear the couple a few dozen feet in front of you, loudly chattering at each other. You fumbling in the dark a bitr before you find a hiding place to watch from without being seen yourself. You watch what is happening on Mira in the yard....'
+				'You''re already drunk, but remember Mira''s words, Therefore, still trying not to touch any of the others. Mira threw you a knowing look, and as soon as they said their goodbyes to you, you waited a couple of minutes before following behind Vasya and Kolambaya and go to Mitka''s home. A little short of a the house you hear the couple a few dozen feet in front of you, loudly chattering at each other. You fumble in the dark a bit before you find a hiding place to watch from without being seen yourself. You watch what is happening to Mira in the yard....'
 				minut += 10
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Watch':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirawish1_2.jpg"></center>'
-					'A drunk and naked Mira was lying on a wooden table, leaning against a fence. Mitka was with measured movements nailing her with his cock. Each time you push, sickly sickly, softly moaned Mira, and then udaras the top of the fence, and hysterically boards creaked. Peering, you get the idea, what Mira has kept its promise, - a member of the Mitki to the eggs included in her ass, which sometimes heard strange squelch, NAC which, however, no one, except you, didn''t pay attention. The loud slaps of the contacting bodies wedged into this animal musical bacchanalia two snoshayuschimisya young people, adding even more spice. Mitka ten minutes was busting my ass wriggling and Mira mooing, until finally the whole length of the latter not jerk drove into the girl of his cock and began noisily to erupt... Mira at this time drunken eyes searched the surrounding area, sure you looking, but never noticed. Half a minute later Mitka pulled out of her ass his cock and lit, started watching, as Mira wipes wipes oozing from the anus sperm...'
+					'A drunk and naked Mira is lying on a wooden table, leaning against a fence. Mitka was, with measured movements, nailing her with his cock. Each time he pushes into her, Mira softly moaned and the table creaked under her. Looking closer you can see that Mira kept her promise letting Mitka ravage her ass while you watch. The loud slaps of their contacting bodies could easily be heard from where you were spying from. After 10 minutes Mira is wriggling her ass and mooing, having the time of her life. This is too much for Mitka and he begins to noisily cum in her ass, not even bothering to pull out. Mira''s now looking around trying to find you in her drunk state, but can''t spot you. Mitka pulls out and get Mira to clean his cock before she cleans herself up...'
 					mirasextimes += 1
 					npc_QW['A60'] = 6
 					pcs_horny += 50
@@ -323,7 +297,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partywithMira':
 			else
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/drunkgirl.jpg"></center>'
-				'Mira got blind drunk, my legs are practically holding her, so she leaned against derieva and trying not to fall. She mumbles something completely unintelligible and hardly understands, where is it and what all is around. And you yourself are no better - head kuritsa, earth and then leaves-under the feet and all, what you now want, it is to lie down on a soft warm bed. You, understanding, what if you drink at least one glass, then you fall right here, decide to leave, therefore say goodbye to the companions and go home.'
+				'Mira got blind drunk, you had to support her all the way home so that she didn''t fall down. She mumbles something completely unintelligible at times and has no idea where she is. You yourself are no better - you can barely see in the dark and just want to get home and sleep in a soft warm bed. If you drink even one more glass you will fall over so you decide to leave for the night. You say goodbye to the boys and go home.'
 				mirasextimes += 1
 				minut += 10
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -344,7 +318,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_3to9':
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka2.jpg"></center>'
 			end
-			'Mitka takes you to his house and starts pulling off your cloths and tosses them aside.'
+			'Mitka takes you to his house and starts pulling off your clothes and tosses them aside.'
 			*nl
 			'"Fuck me <<$pcs_nickname>>, your pussy felt so good wrapped around my dick!", Mitka whispered in your ear.'
 			gs 'boyStat', 'A63'
@@ -371,14 +345,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_3to9':
 			gs 'boyStat', 'A63'
 			npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkabj.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mitka takes you to his house and pulled off your shirt then pressed down on your shoulders, you know what he wants...'
+			'Mitka takes you to his house, pulls off your shirt and then presses down on your shoulders; you know what he wants...'
 			gs 'oral','start'
 			gs 'stat'
 			if RAND(0,2) = 0:
 				act 'Swallow':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkabjcum.jpg"></center>'
-					'You tighten your lips and suck harder on Mitka''s cock. Your head bobs up and down fiercely as you cram as much of his ''yummy'' cock as deep in your mouth and throat as you can take it. Finally, with a shout of beastal preasure, Mitka erupts into your mouth. You swallow all of the warm sticky sperm...'
+					'You tighten your lips and suck harder on Mitka''s cock. Your head bobs up and down fiercely as you cram as much of his ''yummy'' cock as deep in your mouth and throat as you can take it. Finally, with a shout of beastial preasure, Mitka erupts into your mouth. You swallow all of the warm sticky sperm...'
 					minut += 10
 					gs 'cum_call','mouth',$boy, 1
 					swallow += 1
@@ -406,7 +380,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_3to9':
 				act 'Swallow':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkabjcum2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You''re bobbomg your head up and down fiercely as you cram as much of his ''yummy'' cock as deep in your mouth and throat as you can take it. Mitka, roughly grabs you by by the hair and pulls his cock out of your earger mouth and starts to spurt warm sticky spunk all over your face and hair...'
+					'You''re bobbing your head up and down fiercely as you cram as much of his ''yummy'' cock as deep in your mouth and throat as you can take it. Mitka, roughly grabs you by by the hair and pulls his cock out of your earger mouth and starts to spurt warm sticky spunk all over your face and hair...'
 					minut += 10
 					gs 'cum_call','face',$boy, 1,'','',20
 					gs 'cum_call','hair',$boy, 1,'','',20
@@ -426,7 +400,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_3to9':
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaanal1.jpg"></center>'
 			end
-			'Mitka takes you to his house and onto the veranda. He has you sit on the couch and begins pawing at your cloths, pulling them off you.'
+			'Mitka takes you to his house and onto the veranda. He has you sit on the couch and begins pawing at your clothes, pulling them off you.'
 			minut += 15
 			gs 'boyStat', 'A63'
 			npc_sex[$boy] += 1
@@ -450,7 +424,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_10':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/drunkgirl.jpg"></center>'
 		'You stumble and fall to the ground, and giggle drunkenly. You just pissed yourself. Mitka watches you and laughs when he sees you fall and piss. Mitka stumbles over to you, barely able to stand himself and pulls you to your feet. "Listen, <<$pcs_nickname>>, come with me," Mitka says loudly. You want to hide from the hungry eyes of the village boys in the bushes, but the guys already know what happened. "I''m going have you fucked like the whore you are. You don''t mind, do you?" Mitka grins evilly.'
 		'He turns to his drunken friends, "Here," pointing to a drunken Kolyamba. "Get your ass over here and have some fun with this cunt," Kolyamba stumbles forward pulling his pants down as he approaches. "We may be drunk, but we can still service this cunt''s pussy..."'
-		'"Well, that''s... Hic... a beautifully sight," Mitka stammers smugly. "So let''s get this party started... Hic!"'
+		'"Well, that''s ... a beautifully sight," Mitka stammers smugly. "So let''s get this party started!"'
 
 		if sub > 0:
 			act 'Bend over and get fucked':
@@ -553,7 +527,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_11':
 					act 'Leave':gt'Gaddvor'
 				end
 			else
-				'You keep sucking Kolyamba''s dick, until suddenly you feel his strong meaty hands slap your ass and lift your pelvis. You maintain your suction on his cock and your your head bobs up and down. You feel his hand pawing your ass, until Koyamba slips one of his rough calloused fingers into your ass and another finger glides into your pussy too.'
+				'You keep sucking Kolyamba''s dick, until suddenly you feel his strong meaty hands slap your ass and lift your pelvis. You maintain your suction on his cock and your head bobs up and down. You feel his hand pawing your ass, until Koyamba slips one of his rough calloused fingers into your ass and another finger glides into your pussy too.'
 				act 'Swallow':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkabjpublicguys.jpg"></center>'
@@ -581,7 +555,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_12':
 			npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 			pose = 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkasexpublic.jpg"></center>'
-			'You''re startled and stumble to your feet, you make your way over to Mitka and fall into into his waiting arms. You feel Mitka pull up your skirt up and bares your ass...'
+			'You''re startled and stumble to your feet, you make your way over to Mitka and fall into into his waiting arms. You feel Mitka pull up your skirt up and bare your ass...'
 			if mesec = 0:
 				gs 'dinsex', 'boy_puts_condom'
 				gs 'dinsex','vaginal_sex',10
@@ -660,7 +634,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_13':
 		act 'Bend':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkasexpublic.jpg"></center>'
-			'You''re startled and stumble to your feet, you make your way over to Mitka and fall into into his waiting arms. You feel Mitka pull up your skirt up and bares your ass...'
+			'You''re startled and stumble to your feet, you make your way over to Mitka and fall into into his waiting arms. You feel Mitka pull up your skirt up and bare your ass...'
 			gs 'boyStat', 'A63'
 			npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 			pose = 1
@@ -720,13 +694,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_13':
 		act 'Sit on the bench':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkagroup.jpg"></center>'
-			'You sit on the bench and the boys immediately begin to touch you and push there fingers into all your cracks.'
+			'You sit on the bench and the boys immediately begin to touch you and push there fingers into all your holes.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 15, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal_finger', 15, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 			minut -=15
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'Post a kid':
+			act 'Lie down':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkagroupcum.jpg"></center>'
 				'You undress and lie down on a wooden bench...'
@@ -736,7 +710,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_13':
 				gs 'stat'
 
 
-				act 'Moan':
+				act 'Get fucked':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkagroupcum.jpg"></center>'
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A61'
@@ -756,7 +730,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_13':
 						gs 'dinsex','sexcum'
 						gs 'stat'
 
-						act 'Moan':
+						act 'Suck':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkagroupcum2.jpg"></center>'
 							gs 'boyStat', 'A62'
@@ -766,7 +740,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_13':
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
 
-							'exhausted, you hear, Vasya straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guides it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
+							'Exhausted, you hear Vasya straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guide it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
 
 							act 'Leave':gt'Gaddvor'
 						end
@@ -804,7 +778,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_14':
 		act 'Bend':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkasexpublic.jpg"></center>'
-			'You stumble around until you come to reach a nearby log and placing both hands on it lean against it for support. Mitka walks up behind you and grabs your cloths and pulls them down, exposing your bare your ass...'
+			'You stumble around until you come to reach a nearby log and placing both hands on it lean against it for support. Mitka walks up behind you and grabs your clothes and pulls them down, exposing your bare ass...'
 			gs 'boyStat', 'A63'
 			npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 			pose = 1
@@ -845,13 +819,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_14':
 		act 'Sit on the bench':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkagroup.jpg"></center>'
-			'You sit on the bench and the boys immediately begin to touch you and push there fingers into all your cracks.'
+			'You sit on the bench and the boys immediately begin to touch you and push there fingers into all your holes.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 15, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal_finger', 15, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 			minut -=15
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'Post a kid':
+			act 'Lie down':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkagroupcum.jpg"></center>'
 				'You undress and lie down on a wooden bench...'
@@ -860,7 +834,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_14':
 				minut += 10
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				act 'Moan':
+				act 'Get fucked':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkagroupcum.jpg"></center>'
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A61'
@@ -885,7 +859,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_14':
 							gs 'boyStat', 'A62'
 							npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 							gs 'oral','start'
-							'exhausted, you hear, Vasya straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guides it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
+							'Exhausted, you hear Vasya straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guide it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
 							gs 'cum_call','mouth',$boy,1
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -900,7 +874,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_14':
 		act 'Slurred mumble':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguys2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Vasya and Kolyamba took you to Vasya''s house and into the summer kitchen, where they quickly began to take off your clothes...'
+			'Vasya and Kolyamba took you to Vasyan''s house and into the summer kitchen, where they quickly began to take off your clothes...'
 			gs 'boyStat', 'A61'
 			npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 			pose = 1
@@ -922,7 +896,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_14':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguys2.jpg"></center>'
 						gs 'boyStat', 'A61'
 						gs 'oral','start'
-						'exhausted, you hear, Vasya straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guides it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
+						'Exhausted, you hear Vasyan straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guide it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
 						gs 'cum_call','mouth',$boy,1
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -946,7 +920,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_14':
 						gs 'boyStat', 'A62'
 						npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 						gs 'oral','start'
-						'exhausted, you hear, Vasya straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guides it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
+						'Exhausted, you hear Vasyan straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guide it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
 						gs 'cum_call','mouth',$boy,1
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -983,7 +957,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_ge15':
 			end
 		end
 	elseif temp_mb = 1:
-		act 'Bend':
+		act 'Bend over':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkasexpublic.jpg"></center>'
 			'You stumble around until you come to reach a nearby log and placing both hands on it lean against it for support. Mitka walks up behind you and grabs your cloths and pulls them down, exposing your bare your ass...'
@@ -1021,7 +995,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_ge15':
 		act 'Sit on the bench':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkagroup.jpg"></center>'
-			'You sit on the bench and the boys immediately begin to touch you and push there fingers into all your cracks.'
+			'You sit on the bench and the boys immediately begin to touch you and push their fingers into all your holes.'
 			pcs_horny += 20
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1061,7 +1035,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_ge15':
 							gs 'boyStat', 'A62'
 							npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 							gs 'oral','start'
-							'exhausted, you hear, Vasya straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guides it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
+							'Exhausted, you hear Vasyan straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guide it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
 							gs 'cum_call','mouth',$boy,1
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -1076,7 +1050,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_ge15':
 		act 'Slurred mumble':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguys2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Vasya and Kolyamba take you to Vasya''s and into the summer kitchen, where they quickly began to take off your clothes...'
+			'Vasya and Kolyamba take you to Vasyan''s and into the summer kitchen, where they quickly began to take off your clothes...'
 			gs 'boyStat', 'A61'
 			npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 			npc_QW['A63'] += 1
@@ -1098,7 +1072,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_ge15':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkaguys2.jpg"></center>'
 						gs 'boyStat', 'A61'
 						gs 'oral','start'
-						'exhausted, you hear, Vasya straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guides it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
+						'Exhausted, you hear Vasyan straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guide it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
 						gs 'cum_call','mouth',$boy,1
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -1122,7 +1096,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_ge15':
 						gs 'boyStat', 'A62'
 						npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 						gs 'oral','start'
-						'exhausted, you hear, Vasya straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guides it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
+						'Exhausted, you hear Vasyan straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guide it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
 						gs 'cum_call','mouth',$boy,1
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -1133,7 +1107,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_ge15':
 			end
 		end
 	else
-		act 'Stand in the position':
+		act 'Get in position':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkapublicguys2.jpg"></center>'
 			'You climb up on the bench and obediently get on all fours. The boys drunkenly talk among themselves about who will go first, you pull down your panties and get a couple seconds later a cock is crammed into your pussy...'
@@ -1159,7 +1133,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_ge15':
 						gs 'boyStat', 'A61'
 						npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 						gs 'oral','start'
-						'exhausted, you hear, Vasya straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guides it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
+						'Exhausted, you hear Vasya straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guide it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
 						gs 'cum_call','mouth',$boy,1
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -1184,7 +1158,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_ge15':
 						gs 'boyStat', 'A62'
 						npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 						gs 'oral','start'
-						'exhausted, you hear, Vasya straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guides it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
+						'Exhausted, you hear Vasyan straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guide it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
 						gs 'cum_call','mouth',$boy,1
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -1199,7 +1173,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'with_mira_piss_1':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mirapiss.jpg"></center>'
-	'You give Mira a shot glass of moonshine, but she asks you wait a few of minutes. You watch as she goes over to the nearest tree, where she lifts up her skirt, squats down and startis to pee. Vasya with Kolyamba loudly laughing and stare hungerly at Mira. Mitka smiles and looks on indifferently. Having finish peeing, Mira walks back over to you as if nothing had happened and starts speaking to you and the guys as if nothing had happened. She gulps down her moonshine and asks for more.'
+	'You give Mira a shot glass of moonshine, but she asks you wait a few of minutes. You watch as she goes over to the nearest tree, where she lifts up her skirt, squats down and startis to pee. Vasya and Kolyamba are laughing loudly and stare hungerly at Mira. Mitka smiles and looks on indifferently. Having finish peeing, Mira walks back over to you as if nothing had happened and starts speaking to you and the guys as if nothing had happened. She gulps down her moonshine and asks for more.'
 	minut += 5
 	if npc_QW['A60'] < 10: npc_QW['A60'] += 1
 
@@ -1207,15 +1181,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'with_mira_piss_1':
 		act 'Further':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/drunk.jpg"></center>'
-			'As soon as she drank the liquor, a tipsy Vasya asks her, with a devilish grin on his face, if she will service both his and Kolyamba''s dicks.'
+			'As soon as she drank the liquor, a tipsy Vasyan asks her, with a devilish grin on his face, if she will service both his and Kolyamba''s dicks.'
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			if npc_drunk['A60'] >= 4:
-				'Mira, already pretty tipsy, only chuckles in response and says, "Sure, but can you guys get it up with all the moonshine you have been drinking?" Mitka then gives her a slight pat on the ass, and says that she is a responsible adult and can make up her own mind. Kolyamba meanwhile, walk over to Mira and hugs her, then he persistently and forcefully pressing down on her shoulders. Mira, drunkenly giggles, but willfully resists for a few seconds, but eventually caeases and gets on her on knees. She watches in a daze as he unzips his pants and pulls them down to his ancles...'
+				'Mira, already pretty tipsy, only chuckles in response and says, "Sure, but can you guys get it up with all the moonshine you have been drinking?" Mitka then gives her a slight pat on the ass, and says that she is a responsible adult and can make up her own mind. Kolyamba meanwhile, walks over to Mira and hugs her, then he persistently and forcefully presses down on her shoulders. Mira, drunkenly giggles, but willfully resists for a few seconds, but eventually gets on her on knees. She watches in a daze as he unzips his pants and pulls them down to his ankles...'
 				act 'Watch':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miraqw10.jpg"></center>'
-					'Mira, seeing that his dick is not yet fully erect, immediately leans forward and swallows it down to the balls and begins to give him an excellent blowjob. Her lips slide over the skin, then sucking it fullly into her mouth, then releasing the dick and licking the head and shaft. Kolyamba blissfully closes his eyes, enjoys Mira''s blowjob. Mitka askes if you will do the same for him, but you snort and tell him no. Mitka looks disappointed, but hands you another shot glass full of moonshine.'
+					'Mira, seeing that his dick is not yet fully erect, immediately leans forward and swallows it down to the balls and begins to give him an excellent blowjob. Her lips slide over the skin, then sucking it fully into her mouth, then releasing the dick and licking the head and shaft. Kolyamba blissfully closes his eyes and enjoys Mira''s blowjob. Mitka askes if you will do the same for him, but you snort and tell him no. Mitka looks disappointed, but hands you another shot glass full of moonshine.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'group'
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -1223,28 +1197,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'with_mira_piss_1':
 					act 'Watch':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miraqw10_1.jpg"></center>'
-						'After a several minutes of Mira sucking on his cock, Kolyamba roughly pushes her away from his cock and he begins to shoot ropes of cum onto her face. Mira''s eyes are closed, she drunkenly mumbles, trying seem like a sexy pronstar and slowly wipes her fingers across her face collecting the sperm and then places the fingers into her mouth and suck them clean.'
+						'After a several minutes of Mira sucking on his cock, Kolyamba roughly pushes her away from his cock and he begins to shoot ropes of cum onto her face. Mira''s eyes are closed, she drunkenly mumbles, trying seem like a sexy pronstar and slowly wipes her fingers across her face collecting the sperm and then places the fingers into her mouth and sucks them clean.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'group'
 						gs 'stat'
 
 						act 'Watch':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miraqw10_2.jpg"></center>'
-							'"Well, now it''s my turn", says Vasya and steps before Mira. She enthusiastically sucks him as well and he eventually cums on her tonue and in her mouth. She swallows his entire load.'
+							'"Well, now it''s my turn", says Vasyan and steps before Mira. She enthusiastically sucks him as well and he eventually cums on her tongue and in her mouth. She swallows his entire load.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'group'
 							gs 'stat'
 
 							act 'Watch':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miraqw10_3.jpg"></center>'
-								'Mitka, having drunk several shots himself already, silently walks over to Mira and without saying a word, signals for her to get into a position. Mira, drunkenly staggered about a few second before she obediently turns her ass to him and a slips her panties aside exposing her wet cunt to all to see. Mitka pulls out his cock and places the head between her cuntlips, rubbing it up and down lubricating it with her cunt juices.'
+								'Mitka, having drunk several shots himself already, silently walks over to Mira and without saying a word, signals for her to get into a position. Mira, drunkenly staggered about a few second before she obediently turns her ass to him and a slips her panties aside exposing her wet cunt to all to see. Mitka pulls out his cock and places the head between her pussy lips, rubbing it up and down lubricating it with her cunt juices.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'group'
 								gs 'stat'
 
 								act 'Watch':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miraqw10_4.jpg"></center>'
-									'Mitka slaps her on the butt hard, leaving a red hand print on her ass cheek. He then roughly grabs her pants and pulls them down to her knees. He starts to fuck her roughly. Mira sighs with a of satisfaction on her face, sometimes bumps her head into a tree. Your own crotch is on fire and all you want is to masterbate. You tell the guys that your tired and need to go...they all smile knowlingly seeing your hand slightly touching your own crotch and rubbing your legs together. You need to get away before you lose control and ask the guys to fuck you too...'
+									'Mitka slaps her on the butt hard, leaving a red hand print on her ass cheek. He then roughly grabs her panties and pulls them down to her knees. He starts to fuck her roughly. Mira sighs with a look of satisfaction on her face, even though sometimes she bumps her head into a tree. Your own crotch is on fire and all you want is to masturbate. You tell the guys that your tired and need to go...they all smile knowlingly, seeing your hand slightly touching your own crotch and rubbing your legs together. You need to get away before you lose control and ask the guys to fuck you too...'
 									gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'group'
 									npc_QW['A60'] = 11
 									mirasextimes += 3
@@ -1258,7 +1232,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'with_mira_piss_1':
 					end
 				end
 			else
-				'Mira only chuckles in response, and Mitka cuffs Vasya on the head...'
+				'Mira only chuckles in response, and Mitka cuffs Vasyan on the head...'
 				act 'Further':gt 'mitkabuh'
 			end
 		end
@@ -1273,20 +1247,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'with_mira_piss_2':
 		if npc_QW['A60'] < 30: npc_QW['A60'] += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miraqw11.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Well Mira," Mirka says while smiling. "Are you ready to work that pussy?" - The other guys voice their agreement.'
+		'"Well Mira," Mitka says while smiling. "Are you ready to work that pussy?" - The other guys voice their agreement.'
 		'Mira drunkenly giggles in response, after which she readily pulls down her pants infront of the group and turns her back to them and then pulls down her panties. She bends forward displaying her pussy and ass.'
 		act 'Watch':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			if mirapiss = 3:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miraqw11_1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Kolyamba is displeased with the show. He frowns and pulls Mira aside, where he orders her to work her cunt on his cock. He pulls off his pants and plops down, Mira jumps on top of him and starts to ride his cock until he cum in her cunt...'
+				'Kolyamba is displeased with the show. He frowns and pulls Mira aside, where he orders her to work her cunt on his cock. He pulls off his pants and plops down, Mira jumps on top of him and starts to ride his cock until he cums in her cunt...'
 			elseif mirapiss = 4:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miraqw11_2.jpg"></center>'
 				'Mitka grunts approvingly and takes the drunk Mira aside, where and he pulls down his pants a little and shoves his cock into her exposed pussy. He fucks her for several moments until her dumps his load into her pussy.'
 			elseif mirapiss = 5:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miraqw11_3.jpg"></center>'
-				'Vasya enjoys the show and asks Mira to follow him. She does so. Vasya orders her to take off her clothes. Mira looks at him a second before complying with his order. Once completely naked Vasya pulls off his pants and starts to fuck Mira. Vasya, hoots and hollers as he roughly fucks Mira. Acting like a cowbow. Eventally, he cums deep in her pussy.'
+				'Vasyan enjoys the show and asks Mira to follow him. She does so. Vasyan orders her to take off her clothes. Mira looks at him a second before complying with his order. Once completely naked Vasyan pulls off his pants and starts to fuck Mira. Vasyan, hoots and hollers as he roughly fucks Mira, acting like a cowboy. Eventally, he cums deep in her pussy.'
 			end
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20, 'group'
 			mirasextimes += 1
@@ -1307,13 +1281,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'with_mira_piss_2':
 			minut += 5
 			if mirapiss = 3:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miraqw11_5.jpg"></center>'
-				'The boys immediately forget about you, they surround Mira and pull out their cocks and present them to her. Mira in turn starts to suck off all the guys with loud chomping lips...'
+				'The boys immediately forget about you, as they surround Mira and pull out their cocks and present them to her. Mira in turn starts to suck off all the guys with loud slurping lips...'
 			elseif mirapiss = 4:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miraqw11_6.jpg"></center>'
-				'The boys immediately forget about you, they surround Mira and take turns roughly fucking her mouth. She always grunts and gags a lot, but they don''t pay attention, they continuing to slam their cock into her mouth and throat.'
+				'The boys immediately forget about you, as they surround Mira and take turns roughly fucking her mouth. She grunts and gags a lot, but they don''t pay attention, they continuing to slam their cocks into her mouth and throat.'
 			elseif mirapiss = 5:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miraqw11_7.jpg"></center>'
-				'The boys immediately forget about you, they surround Mira and she turns starting all carefully suck off each guy while jerking off the others with her free hands.'
+				'The boys immediately forget about you, as they surround Mira and she in turns starts carefully sucking off each guy while jerking off the others with her free hands.'
 			end
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20, 'group'
 			mirasextimes += 3
@@ -1331,13 +1305,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'with_mira_piss_3':
 		if npc_QW['A60'] < 25: npc_QW['A60'] += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/drunkgirl.jpg"></center>'
-		'"I''m bored!" Mitka yells. "Mira get your ass down and give us a show to remember!" he snorts like a pig. "Show us how how lose your holes are whore..."'
+		'"I''m bored!" Mitka yells. "Mira get your ass down and give us a show to remember!" he snorts like a pig. "Show us how how loose your holes are whore..."'
 		'Mira grunts affirmatively, and undresses.'
 
 		act 'Watch':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miraqw15.jpg"></center>'
-			'She gets down on all hours and stickis out her ass in the direction of the party. She begins to fuck many of her fingers into both holes. Mira grunts like an animal as she forces more fingers into her painfully stretched holes. She moans and continues to awkwardly thrust her fingers deep into both her pussy and ass. Mira eventuall brings himself to the first of many orgasms she will have this night.'
+			'She gets down on all hours and sticks out her ass in the direction of the party. She begins to push her fingers into both holes. Mira grunts like an animal as she forces more fingers into her painfully stretched holes. She moans and continues to awkwardly thrust her fingers deep into both her pussy and ass. Mira eventually brings himself to the first of many orgasms she will have this night.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'group'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -1345,7 +1319,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'with_mira_piss_3':
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/drunkgirl.jpg"></center>'
-		'"I''m bored!" Mitka yells. "Mira get your ass down and give us a show to remember!" he snorts like a pig. "Show us how how lose your holes are whore..."'
+		'"I''m bored!" Mitka yells. "Mira get your ass down and give us a show to remember!" he snorts like a pig. "Show us how how loose your holes are whore..."'
 		'Mira refuses. Mitka and the others immediately demand she follow their orders. She continues to refuses to do their bidding. Eventually Mira offers a compromise and they agree with it, she''ll just strip naked and be made to crawl around in front of them on all fours, portraying a dog...'
 		minut += 5
 		if npc_QW['A60'] < 25: npc_QW['A60'] += 1
@@ -1363,6 +1337,5 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'with_mira_piss_3':
 	end
 end
 
-
 --- mitkabuh ---------------------------------
 

+ 50 - 45
locations/mitkabuh_group.qsrc

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # mitkabuh_group
 
-!MiaLoc tells us where Mira is Located
+!MiraLoc tells us where Mira is Located
 !----------------------------------------------
 !MiraLoc = 0 (Mira at home)
 !MiraLoc = 1 (Mira at river)
@@ -12,10 +12,11 @@
 !! default entry point
 if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/drunk.jpg"></center>'
-	'Sitting in a secluded place, three village youths - Mitka Kingpin, Vasya Package and Kolyamba - drink vodka without snacks. You with Mira approach them and ask them if to join them. The boys immediately brightened up and actively nodding you heads. Mitya immediately begins to pour the moonshine into the glasses, then passes one of them to you, saying that, as they don''t have enough cups, so you will have to drink one to two turns.'
+	'Sitting in a secluded place, three village youths - Mitka Shkvoryen, Vasyan Paket and Kolyamba Pyut - drink vodka without snacks. You and Mira approach them and ask them if you can join them. The boys immediately brighten up and nod their heads. Mitka immediately begins to pour the moonshine into some extra glasses, then passes one of them to you, saying that, as they don''t have enough cups, you and Mira may have to take turns drinking.'
 !! repeat until drunk
 	if alko < 8:
 		if alko <4: act 'Leave': gt'Gaddvor'
+		temp_mb = RAND(0,1)
 		if temp_mb = 0:
 			act 'You take the liquor and swallow it quickly':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -36,7 +37,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		else
 			act 'You pass the shot glass of liquor to Mira':
 				*clr & cla
-				npc_drunk['A60'] += rand (1,4)
+				npc_drunk['A60'] += rand (3,5)
 				minut += 15
 				temp_mb = 0
 				mirapiss = RAND(0,10)
@@ -49,7 +50,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 					gt 'mitkabuh_group','mirapiss_3'
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/drinking.jpg"></center>'
-					'You pass Mira a shot glass full of liquor, she examines the glass''s contents for a moment, then gulps down the entire glass with a single tose of her head. Her eyes wided and she coughs a little, sucking in her breath with a smile. You talk lively with the guys as they drink as well.'
+					'You pass Mira a shot glass full of liquor, she examines the glass''s contents for a moment, then gulps down the entire glass with a single tose of her head. Her eyes wided and she coughs a little, sucking in her breath with a smile. You talk with the guys as they drink as well.'
 
 					act 'Further':gt $curloc
 				end
@@ -58,7 +59,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	else
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/drunkgirl1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You got so drunk on the swill they served you, your legs can barely hold you upright. The guys notice your condition. They immediately grabbed you and Mira by the hands and lead you both over to Mitya''s house.'
+		'You got so drunk on the swill they served you, your legs can barely hold you upright. The guys notice your condition. They immediately grabbed you and Mira by the hands and lead you both over to Mitka''s house.'
 		mitkadaybuh = daystart
 		temp_mb = RAND(0,5)
 			if temp_mb = 0:
@@ -81,9 +82,9 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mirapiss_1':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/drunk1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You pass Mira a shot glass full of liquor, she examines the glass''s contents for a moment, then gulps down the entire glass with a single tose of her head. Her eyes wided and she coughs a little, sucking in her breath with a smile.'
-	'After she drank the liquor, Vasya jokingly says that you both look incredible, but would look even better with cocks in your mouths.'
-	'Mira, already pretty drunk, just giggles in response and nods. You shrug, nod in agreement as well. Kolyamba immediately stands up and crushed Mira in a bear hug, while Vasya approachs you. Mira, continues to giggle drunkenly as Kolyamba finished his hug and forces her to her knees. You smile at Vasya as you see him slowly unzipping his pants and lowering them to his anckles. You then follow Mira''s example and get on your knees before Vasya.'
+	'You pass Mira a shot glass full of liquor, she examines the glass''s contents for a moment, then gulps down the entire glass with a single tose of her head. Her eyes widened and she coughs a little, sucking in her breath with a smile.'
+	'After she drank the liquor, Vasyan jokingly says that you both look incredible, but would look even better with cocks in your mouths.'
+	'Mira, already pretty drunk, just giggles in response and nods. You shrug, and nod in agreement as well. Kolyamba immediately stands up and crushed Mira in a bear hug, while Vasyan approaches you. Mira, continues to giggle drunkenly as Kolyamba finished his hug and forces her to her knees. You smile at Vasyan as you see him slowly unzipping his pants and lowering them to his ankles. You then follow Mira''s example and get on your knees before Vasyan.'
 	minut += 5
 	if npc_QW['A60'] < 20: npc_QW['A60'] += 1
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -100,7 +101,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirapiss_1':
 		act 'Swallow':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/mitkabuhcum0.'+rand(1,5)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You tightly squeeze Vasya''s cock in your hand and without taking it out of your mouth, he starts to fiercely slam his cock into your gaping mouth until he finally erupts into your mouth. You taste his warm sticky sperm in your mouth and sliding down your throat as you swallow it all.'
+			'You tightly squeeze Vasyan''s cock in your hand and without taking it out of your mouth, he starts to fiercely slam his cock into your gaping mouth until he finally erupts into your mouth. You taste his warm sticky sperm in your mouth and sliding down your throat as you swallow it all.'
 			swallow += 1
 			gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy, 1
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -117,7 +118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirapiss_1':
 				act 'Swallow':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/mitkabuhcum0.'+rand(1,5)+'.jpg"></center>'
-					'You enthusiastically suck him, until he releases a torrant of cum into your mouth. He holds you mouth closed until you swallow it all.'
+					'You enthusiastically suck him, until he releases a torrent of cum into your mouth as well. He holds your mouth closed until you swallow it all.'
 					swallow += 1
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy, 1
@@ -126,7 +127,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirapiss_1':
 					act 'Bend over':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/mitkasexpublic0.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-						'Mitka, who had already drunk a couple more glasses of liquor as he watched the others getting blowjobs from you and Mira, silently walked over to you and tells you to bend over. You can barely stand on your feet approach a nearby log and bend over it resting your hands on the rough bark. Feeling his lust surging, Mitya pulls down your pants and bares your ass before he lowers his own pants, he then starts to roughly fuck you.'
+						'Mitka, who had already drunk a couple more glasses of liquor as he watched the others getting blowjobs from you and Mira, silently walked over to you and tells you to bend over. You can barely stand on your feet and approach a nearby log and bend over it resting your hands on the rough bark. Feeling his lust building, Mitka pulls down your pants and bares your ass before he lowers his own pants, he then starts to roughly fuck you.'
 						gs 'boyStat', 'A63'
 						npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 						if mesec = 0:
@@ -151,7 +152,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirapiss_2':
 	if npc_drunk['A60'] >= 4:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/mitkabuhshow1.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Bitches," Mitka yelled at both you and Mira. "I want to see a show, how about you bitches play with those holes? Show us how truely nasty you are!" The rest of the drunken guys yell their approval.'
-		'Mirka smiled as you both willingly comply with his demands.'
+		'Mira smiled as you both willingly comply with his demands.'
 		minut += 5
 		if npc_QW['A60'] < 30: npc_QW['A60'] += 1
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -164,7 +165,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirapiss_2':
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'Give the boys':
+			act 'Let the boys have their way with you':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitkagroupcum.jpg"></center>'
 				'You lie back on a wooden bench...'
@@ -199,7 +200,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirapiss_2':
 							gs 'boyStat', 'A62'
 							npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 							gs 'oral','start'
-							'exhausted, you hear, Vasya straining as he fucks your mouth.	You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guides it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
+							'Exhausted, you hear, Vasyan straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guide it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
 							gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy, 1
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -212,8 +213,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirapiss_2':
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/miraqw11_4.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Alright girls," Mitka yelled. "Its time to pay us back for all the boose you have be drinking. Get on your knees and show us how much you like cock!" - The rest of the drunken guys yell their approval.'
-		'You and Mira both nod together and obediently knell down right where you stood.'
+		'"Alright girls," Mitka yelled. "Its time to pay us back for all the booze you have been drinking. Get on your knees and show us how much you like cock!" - The rest of the drunken guys yell their approval.'
+		'You and Mira both nod together and obediently kneel down right where you stood.'
 		minut += 5
 		if npc_QW['A60'] < 20: npc_QW['A60'] += 1
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -230,7 +231,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirapiss_2':
 			act 'Swallow':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/mitkabuhcum0.'+rand(1,5)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'You tightly squeeze Vasya''s cock in your hand and without taking it out of your mouth, he starts to fiercely slam his cock into your gaping mouth until he finally erupts into your mouth. You taste his warm sticky sperm in your mouth and sliding down your throat as you swallow it all.'
+				'You tightly squeeze Vasyan''s cock in your hand and without taking it out of your mouth, he starts to fiercely slam his cock into your gaping mouth until he finally erupts into your mouth. You taste his warm sticky sperm in your mouth and sliding down your throat as you swallow it all.'
 				swallow += 1
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy, 1
@@ -266,7 +267,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirapiss_2':
 							act 'Swallow':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/mitkabuhcum0.'+rand(1,5)+'.jpg"></center>'
-								'You compress the Mitka''s large cock between your lips and increase the tempo, until you are rewarded with a mouthful of cum, which you greedily swallow.'
+								'You tigten your lips around Mitka''s large cock and increase the tempo, until you are rewarded with a mouthful of cum, which you greedily swallow.'
 								minut += 5
 								swallow += 1
 								gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy, 1
@@ -286,8 +287,8 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mirapiss_3':
 	if npc_drunk['A60'] >= 4:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miraqw15.jpg"></center>'
-		'"I''m bored!" Kolyamba yells. "Mira get your ass down and give us a show to remember!" he snorts like a pig. "Show us how how lose your holes are whore..."'
-		'Mira grunts affirmatively, and undresses. She gets down on all hours and stickis out her ass in the direction of the party. She begins to fuck many of her fingers into both holes. Mira grunts like an animal as she forces more fingers into her painfully stretched holes. She moans and continues to awkwardly thrust her fingers deep into both her pussy and ass. Vasya, looks over at you appraisingly and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, why don''t you join her" - and starts cheering you on. '
+		'"I''m bored!" Kolyamba yells. "Mira get your ass down and give us a show to remember!" he snorts like a pig. "Show us how how loose your holes are whore..."'
+		'Mira slurs affirmatively, and undresses. She gets down on all hours and sticks out her ass in the direction of the party. She begins to fuck many of her fingers into both holes. Mira moans like an animal as she forces more fingers into her stretched holes. She continues to awkwardly thrust her fingers deep into both her pussy and ass. Vasyan, looks over at you appraisingly and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, why don''t you join her" - and starts cheering you on. '
 		minut += 5
 		if npc_QW['A60'] < 30: npc_QW['A60'] += 1
 		if npc_QW['A63'] < 20:npc_QW['A63'] += 1
@@ -295,10 +296,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirapiss_3':
 
 		act 'You join Mira':
 			*clr & cla
-			if anus <= 15:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/mitkabuhshow2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You drunkenly drop down next to Mira as she wantenly continues to masterbate before the group of guys. At first, you are a little uncomfortable masterbating before the guys, but the excitement takes over and you join Mira as a sexual beast. You are moaning and thrusting your fingers as deep as you can into both your holes, you rapidly bring yourself to raging orgasm.'
-			if anus > 15:'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/mitkabuhshow2.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You drunkenly drop down next to Mira as she wantenly continues to masterbate before the group of guys. At first, you are a little uncomfortable masterbating before the guys, but the excitement takes over and you join Mira as a sexual beast. You are moaning and thrusting your fingers as deep as you can into both your holes. Eventually get on your knees and thrust your entire hand into your ass, which rapidly bring yourself to screaming orgasm. The guys stand and cheer your efforts.'
+			if anus <= 15:
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/mitkabuhshow2.jpg"></center>'
+				'You drunkenly drop down next to Mira as she wantonly continues to masturbate before the group of guys. At first, you are a little uncomfortable masterbating before the guys, but the excitement takes over and you join Mira as a sexual beast. You are moaning and thrusting your fingers as deep as you can into both your holes, you rapidly bring yourself to raging orgasm.'
+			end
+			if anus > 15:
+				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/mitkabuhshow2.mp4"></video></center>'
+				'You drunkenly drop down next to Mira as she wantonly continues to masturbate before the group of guys. At first, you are a little uncomfortable masterbating before the guys, but the excitement takes over and you join Mira as a sexual beast. You are moaning and thrusting your fingers as deep as you can into both your holes. Eventually get on your knees and thrust your entire hand into your ass, which rapidly bring yourself to screaming orgasm. The guys stand and cheer your efforts.'
+			end
 			gs 'arousal','masturbate',15,'exhibitionism', 'sub', 'group'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -307,7 +312,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirapiss_3':
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/drunk1.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Okay girls, get off your asses and give us a show!" - Kolyamba demands. "I want to see you dance..."'
-		'Mira and you laughingly strip off your clothes...'
+		'Mira and you laughing while stripping off your clothes...'
 		gs 'clothing', 'strip', 'Gaddvor'
 		gs 'underwear', 'remove'
 		inhib_exp += rand(0,1)
@@ -318,7 +323,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirapiss_3':
 		act 'Dance':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/mitkabuhdance0.'+rand(0,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You whirl and dance around the fire completely naked. You are drunk, but yours having fun and it cool to dance with Mira...'
+			'You whirl and dance around the fire completely naked. You are drunk, but having fun and it is fun to dance with Mira...'
 			gs 'arousal','flash', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -331,7 +336,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirafuck_0':
 	act 'Suck':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/mitkabuhoral0.'+rand(1,8)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'The guys roughly undress both you and Mira. They fall upon you both and start to fuck you both in the mouth at the same time. You think to yourself, "<i>Damn, but they lacked imagination</i>"'
+		'The guys roughly undress both you and Mira. They fall upon you both and start to fuck you both in the mouth at the same time. You think to yourself, "<i>Damn, they lacked imagination</i>"'
 		gs 'clothing', 'strip', 'gadukino'
 		gs 'underwear', 'remove'
 		minut += 10
@@ -367,10 +372,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirafuck_0':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mirafuck_1':
-	act 'Given Mitka':
+	act 'Fuck Mitka':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/mitkabuhgroup1.'+rand(1,5)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'You go with Mirka and he quickly undresses and begins to roughly fuck you. While Mira get simular treatment just a couple feet away by Vasya.'
+		'You go with Mitka and he quickly undresses and begins to roughly fuck you. While Mira gets a similar treatment just a couple feet away from Vasyan.'
 		gs 'clothing', 'strip', 'gadukino'
 		gs 'underwear', 'remove'
 		gs 'boyStat', 'A63'
@@ -387,7 +392,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirafuck_1':
 		end
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'Given Kolyamba':
+		act 'Fuck Kolyamba':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/mitkabuhgroup1.'+rand(1,5)+'.jpg"></center>'
 			'Once Mitka has finished with you he passes you over to Kolyamba. He is even more rough in his treatment as he fucks you hard. Mitka moves over to Mira and fucks her with wild abandon.'
@@ -403,10 +408,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirafuck_1':
 				gs 'dinsex','analsex',10,'gangbang'
 			end
 
-			act 'Given Vasya':
+			act 'Fuck Vasyan':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/mitkabuhgroup1.'+rand(1,5)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'Finally, Vasya takes his turn with your sore pussy, while Kolyamba grabs Mira and slams his cock balls deep in her abused pussy.'
+				'Finally, Vasyan takes his turn with your sore pussy, while Kolyamba grabs Mira and slams his cock balls deep in her abused pussy.'
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A62'
 				npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 				pose = 1
@@ -459,7 +464,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirafuck_2':
 		npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 		gs 'oral','start'
 		gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy, 1
-		'Soon they start cumming on your face, seaming to have balls full of cum. Once they finish, they walk back to their drinks and lose all interest to you...'
+		'Soon they start cumming on your face, seeming to have balls full of cum. Once they finish, they walk back to their drinks and lose all interest to you...'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 
 		act 'Leave': MiraLoc = 0 & minut += 10 & gt'gadukino'
@@ -467,17 +472,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirafuck_2':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mirafuck_3':
-	act 'To flop on the bed':
+	act 'Flop on the bed':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/mitkabuh2.'+rand(3,4)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'You and Mira both flop down on the bed and the boys immediately begin to touch you both and push there fingers into all your cracks.'
+		'You and Mira both flop down on the bed and the boys immediately begin to touch you both and push there fingers into all your holes.'
 		gs 'clothing', 'strip', 'gadukino'
 		gs 'underwear', 'remove'
 		npc_QW['A63'] += 1
 		if npc_QW['A60'] < 30: npc_QW['A60'] += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'Give the boys':
+		act 'Suck':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/mitkabuh2.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 			'You are not given time to get fully into the bed before a cock is shoved into your mouth. You start to suck on the guys cock.'
@@ -485,7 +490,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirafuck_3':
 			minut += 10
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'Moan':
+			act 'Fuck the boys':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/mitkabuhanal0.'+rand(1,5)+'.jpg"></center>'
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A61'
@@ -505,13 +510,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirafuck_3':
 					gs 'dinsex','sexcum'
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					act 'Suck':
+					act 'Suck more':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/mitkabuhoralcum0.'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
 						gs 'boyStat', 'A62'
 						npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 						gs 'oral','start'
-						'exhausted, you hear, Vasya straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guides it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
+						'Exhausted, you hear Vasyan straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guide it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy, 1
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -532,7 +537,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirafuck_4':
 	act 'Go with the boys':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/mitkabuhgroup.jpg"></center>'
-		'The two youths wave goodbye to Mitya and Mirka before they take you to Vasya''s home, where they quickly begin to remove your clothes...'
+		'The two youths wave goodbye to Mitka and Mira before they take you to Vasyan''s home, where they quickly begin to remove your clothes...'
 		gs 'clothing', 'strip', 'gadukino'
 		gs 'underwear', 'remove'
 		temp_mb = RAND(0,5)
@@ -559,7 +564,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirafuck_4':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/mitkabuhoralcum0.'+rand(4,5)+'.jpg"></center>'
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A61'
 					gs 'oral','start'
-					'exhausted, you hear, Vasya straining as he fucks your mouth.	You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guides it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
+					'Exhausted, you hear Vasyan straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guide it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
 					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy, 1
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -585,7 +590,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirafuck_4':
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A62'
 					npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 					gs 'oral','start'
-					'exhausted, you hear, Vasya straining as he fucks your mouth.	You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guides it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
+					'Exhausted, you hear Vasyan straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guide it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
 					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy, 1
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -603,7 +608,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirafuck_5':
 	act 'Get in position':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mitka/mitka_group/mitkabuh2.4.jpg"></center>'
-		'You and Mira obediently get up on all fours. The youths immediately begin to be have fun with your gaping holes...'
+		'You and Mira obediently get on all fours. The youths immediately begin to be have fun with your holes...'
 		gs 'clothing', 'strip', 'gadukino'
 		gs 'underwear', 'remove'
 		temp_mb = RAND(0,5)
@@ -628,7 +633,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirafuck_5':
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A61'
 					npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 					gs 'oral','start'
-					'Exhausted, you hear, Vasya straining as he fucks your mouth.You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guides it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
+					'Exhausted, you hear Vasyan straining as he fucks your mouth.You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guide it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
 					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy, 1
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -655,7 +660,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirafuck_5':
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A62'
 					npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 					gs 'oral','start'
-					'Exhausted, you hear, Vasya straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guides it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
+					'Exhausted, you hear Vasyan straining as he fucks your mouth. You immediately tighten your grip around his cock and squeeze it and guide it into your mouth. A few seconds later you feel the tart taste of semen...'
 					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy, 1
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'

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+ 165 - 165
locations/mitkasex.qsrc


+ 1 - 1
locations/swamp.qsrc

@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ else
 	end
 end
 
-'You''ve found the swamp area of the forest, in which it is considered dangerous to climb in the afternoon, and forbidden at night. But you can find a lot of mushrooms and berries in the woods near the swamp area.'
+'You''ve found the swamp area of the forest. It is considered dangerous to hike here in the afternoon, and forbidden at night. But you can find a lot of mushrooms and berries in the woods near the swamp area.'
 'There''s a small visible path to a clearing that leads to <a href="exec: gt ''swamp_yard'' ">the old hut</a>, it is probably used as a hunting lodge.'
 
 if hour >= 6 and hour <= 21 and month >= 6 and month <= 9:

+ 4 - 6
locations/swamp_yard.qsrc

@@ -1,6 +1,5 @@
 # swamp_yard
 
-
 $location_type = 'secluded'
 $metka = ''
 $loc = 'swamp_yard'
@@ -422,7 +421,7 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour < 20:
 			if hantslutsex = 0:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/swampdvornude2.jpg"></center>'
 				'Seeing you naked, the men get excited...'
-				'"Come over here <<$pcs_nickname>>, I want to check you out more extensivly," said one of the guys.'
+				'"Come over here <<$pcs_nickname>>, I want to check you out more extensively," said one of the guys.'
 
 				act'Further':hantersexnude = 1 & gt 'hanters', 'start'
 			else
@@ -469,7 +468,7 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour < 20:
 		'"I need to talk to you, <<$pcs_nickname>>," he said. "Do you understand what happened yesterday and that you should keep quiet about it?"'
 		'You shamelessly nodded.'
 		'"What happened to you is no one others fault but your own, you wanted to get fucked," said Andrei looking sternly at you. "Don''t pull off anything stupid like that anymore."'
-		'"I wouldn''t advice you to call the police," he adds. "Sergei will cover for me. Infact we''ll just cover for each other, and no one will believe you lying ass. Understand?"'
+		'"I wouldn''t advise you to call the police," he adds. "Sergei will cover for me. In fact, we''ll just cover for each other, and no one will believe your lying pretty ass. Understand?"'
 		'You''re too afraid to look straight at Andrei, you just nod.'
 		'"Perfect," said Andrei, moving away from you.'
 
@@ -822,7 +821,7 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour < 20:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterswork1.7.jpg"></center>'
 				'"You know what Andrei, I''ll take you up on your offer." you said staring down at the ground.'
 				'"Nice!" said Andrei high-fiving Igor. "It was just like I expected. What do you say Igor, you up to it?"'
-				'"No, Andrei, I''m not!" said Igor, looking at you completely disdained. "It''s probably for the best that I go away."'
+				'"No, Andrei, I''m not!" said Igor, looking at you completely disdained. "It''s probably for the best you don''t visit me anymore."'
 				'An upset Igor leaves without even looking at you...'
 
 				act 'Further':gt 'swamp_yard'
@@ -1027,12 +1026,11 @@ if StoryLine = 1 and lost_girl > 0 and daystart > lost_girl:
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/forester.jpg"></center>'
 	'You walked across the yard when noticing a man resembling a park ranger.'
-	'"There you are," he said wearily. "Your grandparents been sick and worried searching for you all over the forrest. They''ve asked me to help them out. Come with me, I''ll take you home."'
+	'"There you are," he said wearily. "Your grandparents been sick and worried searching for you all over the forest. They''ve asked me to help them out. Come with me, I''ll take you home."'
 	'"Oh, this is so embarrassing..." How could I forget about my poor grandparents."'
 	'You quickly pack your stuff, letting the park ranger take you home...'
 	act 'Further':gt 'Gadhouse'
 end
 
-
 --- swamp_yard ---------------------------------
 

+ 13 - 17
locations/swamphouse.qsrc

@@ -1,6 +1,5 @@
 # swamphouse
 
-
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 	$location_type = 'indoors'
 	$metka = 'start'
@@ -215,7 +214,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt2.'+rand(4,6)+'.jpg"></center>'
 			'Smiling you look straight into Igor''s eyes telling him all he needs to know. Without any hesitation he takes you by the hand and leads you...'
-			act 'Go': gt 'HanterLoveSex','Igor'
+			act 'Go with Igor': gt 'HanterLoveSex','Igor'
 		end
 		act 'Refuse':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -225,7 +224,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
 			'"I''m sorry, Igor. I''m not in the mood." you say avoiding eye contact. Igor leaves disappointed...'
-			act 'Go': gt 'swamphouse', 'start'
+			act 'Walk away': gt 'swamphouse', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 	!sex with Sergei
@@ -247,7 +246,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt2.'+rand(4,6)+'.jpg"></center>'
 			'Smiling you look straight into Sergei''s eyes telling him all he needs to know. Without any hesitation he takes you by the hand and leads you...'
-			act 'Go': gt 'HanterLoveSex','Sergei'
+			act 'Go with Sergei': gt 'HanterLoveSex','Sergei'
 		end
 		act 'Refuse':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -257,7 +256,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
 			'"I''m sorry, Sergei. I''m not in the mood." you say avoiding eye contact. Sergei leaves disappointed...'
-			act 'Go': gt 'swamphouse', 'start'
+			act 'Walk away': gt 'swamphouse', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 	! sex with Andrew
@@ -280,7 +279,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterhands.jpg"></center>'
 			'Smiling you look straight into Andrei''s eyes telling him all he needs to know. Without any hesitation he takes you by the hand and leads you...'
-			act 'Further': gt 'HanterLoveSex','Andrei'
+			act 'Go with Andrei': gt 'HanterLoveSex','Andrei'
 		end
 		act 'Refuse':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -290,7 +289,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
 			'"I''m sorry, Andrei. I''m not in the mood." you say avoiding eye contact. Andrei leaves disappointed...'
-			act 'Go': gt 'swamphouse', 'start'
+			act 'Walk away': gt 'swamphouse', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 	! trio of HS, Andrei and Sergei, if love
@@ -333,7 +332,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
 			'"No, I refuse, this is something I don''t want part of," you say and without hesitating you turn around and walk away.'
-			act 'Go': gt 'swamphouse', 'start', 'doublelovesex'
+			act 'Walk away': gt 'swamphouse', 'start', 'doublelovesex'
 		end
 	end
 	!hunters are invited to the table
@@ -438,7 +437,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/swamphousenude1.jpg"></center>'
 				'You take a deep breath and decided to disregard your nerves and leave it as it is. Upon entering the hut, the hunters can''t help themselves, they start staring at your most private parts.'
-				'"Damn, <<$pcs_nickname>>, you look really good. The things I would want to do to you..." said an somewhat aroused Andrei.'
+				'"Damn, <<$pcs_nickname>>, you look really good. The things I would want to do to you..." said a somewhat aroused Andrei.'
 				act 'Further': gt 'swamphouse', 'start'
 			end
 		end
@@ -1231,7 +1230,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hanterstable':
 			temp_sh = rand(1,6)
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/swamphousedrunkgirl.jpg"></center>'
-			'You''re really drunk, you sludder your words, everything is spinning...'
+			'You''re really drunk, you slur your words, and everything is spinning...'
 
 			if hanterslut <= 20:
 				if temp_sh = 1:
@@ -1360,7 +1359,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hanterstable':
 										if hantersSergeiLove > 0:hantersSergeiQw -= 1
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/dance2.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-										'In the sput of the moment, while the men cheer you on, you remove your top, leaving you only with a bra on...'
+										'In the spur of the moment, while the men cheer you on, you remove your top, leaving you only with a bra on...'
 										inhib_exp += rand(0,1)
 										if hanterslut >= 15:
 											act 'Keep dancing':
@@ -1479,7 +1478,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hanterstable':
 							if hantersSergeiLove > 0:hantersSergeiQw -= 1
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/dance2.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-							'In the sput of the moment, while the men cheer you on, you remove your top, leaving you only with a bra on...'
+							'In the spur of the moment, while the men cheer you on, you remove your top, leaving you only with a bra on...'
 							inhib_exp += rand(0,1)
 							act 'Keep dancing':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -1556,7 +1555,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hanterstable':
 			temp_sh = rand(1,6)
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/swamphousedrunkgirl1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You''re really drunk, you sludder your words, everything is spinning...'
+			'You''re really drunk, you slur your words,  and everything is spinning...'
 
 			if temp_sh = 1:
 				act 'Pass out':
@@ -1654,7 +1653,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hanterstable':
 							inhib_exp += rand(0,1)
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/dance2.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-							'In the sput of the moment, while the men cheer you on, you remove your top, leaving you only with a bra on...'
+							'In the spur of the moment, while the men cheer you on, you remove your top, leaving you only with a bra on...'
 
 							act 'Keep dancing':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -1844,8 +1843,5 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dirty_swamphouse':
 	act 'Further':dirty_swamphouse = 0 & gt 'swamphouse', 'start'
 end
 
-
-
-
 --- swamphouse ---------------------------------
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/swampspring.qsrc

@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ if bucket < 10:
 		act 'Finish':gt 'swampspring'
 	end
 end
-act 'Go':minut += 5 & gt 'swamp_yard'
+act 'Leave':minut += 5 & gt 'swamp_yard'
 
 --- swampspring ---------------------------------
 

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