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[text edit] small text edits

julzor 5 years ago
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2 changed files with 7 additions and 7 deletions
  1. 1 1
      locations/Gadbana.qsrc
  2. 6 6
      locations/Gaddvor.qsrc

+ 1 - 1
locations/Gadbana.qsrc

@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ if mira = 0:
 
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mit.jpg"></center>'
-		'You lather your body washcloth and start scrubbing your body. You rinse off the soap and start to lather the hair with the shampoo. After rising off the shampoo you are completely clean.'
+		'You lather your body washcloth and start scrubbing your body. You rinse off the soap and start to lather your hair with the shampoo. After rinsing off the shampoo you are completely clean.'
 
 		act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
 	end

+ 6 - 6
locations/Gaddvor.qsrc

@@ -44,9 +44,9 @@ if $ARGS[0]='':
 		end
 	end
 	if StoryLine = 1:
-		'A fenced yard behind your grandparents'' house. The yard is surrounded by a small barn packed with junk and a separate building that is used as a banya where you can take a bath. On the back porch there are a few chairs to sit in.'
+		'A fenced yard behind your grandparents'' house. The yard is surrounded by a small barn packed with junk and a separate building that is used as a banya where you can take a bath. On the back porch are a few chairs to sit in.'
 	else
-		'A fenced yard behind the house. The yard is surrounded by a small barn packed with junk and a separate building that is used as a banya where people take a bath. On the back porch there are a few chairs to sit in.'
+		'A fenced yard behind the house. The yard is surrounded by a small barn packed with junk and a separate building that is used as a banya where people take a bath. On the back porch are a few chairs to sit in.'
 	end
 
 
@@ -63,8 +63,8 @@ if $ARGS[0]='':
 
 		if mira_guest = 1: Miraloc = 7 & 'Your friend <a href="exec: gt ''Miroslava'', ''Start''">Mira</a> stands next to you.'
 
-		act 'Enter the barn':minut += 1 & gt 'Gadsarai'
-		act 'Enter garden':minut += 1 & gt'Gadgarden','garden'
+		act 'Go to the barn':minut += 1 & gt 'Gadsarai'
+		act 'Go to the garden':minut += 1 & gt'Gadgarden','garden'
 		if meadow > 0 and hour >= 6 and hour < 20 and month >= 4 and month <= 10:act 'Go to the meadow':minut += 20 & gt 'Meadow', 'start'
 		act '<b>Go to Gadukino</b>':minut += 5 & gt 'gadukino'
 
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ if $ARGS[0]='chickens':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/chickens1.jpg"></center>'
 	'Ordinary chickens clucking about their pen.'
-	minut += 5
+	minut += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	!job Granny
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ if $ARGS[0]='chickens':
 			act 'Finish':gt'Gaddvor'
 		end
 	end
-	act 'Go': gt'Gaddvor'
+	act 'Leave': gt'Gaddvor'
 end
 !!125e