Merge remote-tracking branch 'oldentree/master'

locations/soba.qsrc

@@ -49,9 +49,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'polactdog':
 
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/first.jpg"></center>'
-	'After looking around and making sure that no one is around you take off your clothes:'
-	'The dogs slick but rough tongue begins licking your pussy, the rhythmic action of the dog''s tongue sends waves of excitement through your body, causing an involuntary moan to escape your lips'
-	'A few minutes later the dog stops licking and starts attempting to capture his bitch, to help him you kneel on all fours. The dog mounts you, sliding his throbbing member against your snatch.'
+	'After looking around and making sure that no one is around you take off your clothes.'
+	'The dog''s slick but rough tongue begins licking your pussy. The rhythmic action of the dog''s tongue sends waves of excitement through your body, causing an involuntary moan to escape your lips.'
+	'A few minutes later, the dog stops licking and starts attempting to capture his bitch. To help him, you kneel on all fours. The dog mounts you, sliding his throbbing member against your snatch.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'beast'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'polactdog':
 		pcs_vag += 3
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/vag.jpg"></center>'
-		'You reach back to him and begin to massage his sack, where his throbbing member protrudes from. You start to masturbate him, his dick grows before your eyes, turning into a formidable 27sm.Vzyav penis in your hand. you guide him a little and he enters you. He does the rest himself, abruptly pushing his member hungrily into your pussy. You groaned with the first blow, and after three strikes you were already fully strung on his member. Dog began to thrust long, strong strokes, reach time pushing his memeber to the hilt with a single blow. The Member of the dog pulls almost completely out, leeaving only 2 cm inside, then he abruptly pushes it to its full length with a powerful stroke. The champ went deep into the vagina, your sex lips tightly wrapping around it in pleasure.Orgasms follow one another, in surging waves. The Dog gained pace, gripping with his paws, pounding his cock into the depths of your vagina.'
+		'You reach back to him and begin to massage his sack, where his throbbing member protrudes from. You start to masturbate him. His dick grows before your eyes, turning into a formidable penis in your hand. You guide him a little and he enters you. He does the rest himself, abruptly pushing his member hungrily into your pussy. You groan with the first blow, and after three strokes, you are fully strung on his member. <<$namesob>> began to thrust with long, strong strokes, each time pushing his member to the hilt. The dog pulls his member almost completely out, leaving only 2 cm inside. Then he abruptly pushes it to its full length with a powerful thrust. The champ goes deep into your vagina, your sex lips tightly wrapping around it in pleasure. Several orgasms follow one another, in surging waves. The dog gains pace, gripping you with his paws, pounding his cock into the depths of your vagina.'
 
 		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'beast', 'rough'
@@ -72,7 +72,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'polactdog':
 			gs 'cum_call', '', $petID, 1, 0, -1, 60
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/vag2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You push your ass higher and rest his paws on the ground, becoming more comfortable for the males dick. Your pussy greedily swallows every centimeter of this member, milking him, squeezing along the entire length. Your Pussy burns and drips with love juice, some of it tricklomg down his thighs and dripping to the ground. The thrusts of the dog became more violent and stronger. Soon he began to growl and you began to push your ass into his penis, trying to swallow more of it. Your pussy walls squeeze as his cock grows inside, and he drives his cock to the balls. His unit expands in your pussy, pushing against your wall, his knot tightly binding you together. The dog begins to escape but the member is firmly stuck in your pussy. You squeeze it tight at the base, determined not to be released until it pumps his bitch full of sperm. You scream when the sperm finally hits, filling your throbbing pussy completely, his thick, hot sperm is warm inside you. His member spent and throbbing in your depths, your pussy milking him of his semen, sucking in every last drop. Cum begins to flow down your legs trickling down your thighs. You are completely filled with his sperm. The dog struggles and moves around but you stay pressed together for a few minutes with his knot in his prize. Eventually his knot loosens and you are released from him. You fall to the ground, the dogs thick spunk flowing out of your pussy and pooling around you on the ground'
+			'You push your ass higher and rest his paws on the ground, making it more comfortable for the male''s dick. Your pussy greedily swallows every centimeter of this member, milking him, squeezing along the entire length. Your pussy burns and drips with love juice, some of it trickling down his thighs and dripping to the ground. The thrusts of the dog become stronger and more violent. Soon he begins to growl and you push your ass against his penis, trying to swallow more of it. Your pussy walls squeeze as his cock grows inside, and he drives his cock to the balls. His unit expands in your pussy, pushing against your wall, his knot tightly binding you together. The dog tries to escape, but his member is firmly stuck in your pussy. You squeeze it tight at the base, determined not to be released until it pumps his bitch full of sperm. You scream when the sperm finally hits, filling your throbbing pussy completely. His thick, hot sperm feels warm inside you.'
+			'His member is spent, throbbing in your depths. Your pussy milks him of his semen, sucking in every last drop. Cum begins to flow down your legs, trickling down your thighs. You are completely filled with his sperm. The dog struggles and moves around, but you stay tied together for a few minutes with his knot in his prize. Eventually, his knot loosens and you are released from him. You fall to the ground, the dogs thick spunk flowing out of your pussy and pooling around you on the ground.'
 
 			$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'beast', 'rough'
@@ -99,7 +100,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'polactdog':
 			gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $petID, 1, 0, -1, 60
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/anal2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You feel it as he starts spewing his liquid inside your ass. Having stood in the positiong for a few minutes, but the ball on his penis doesn''t decrease and the bored dog begins to pull out of your anus growling. In pain you started yelling, feeling like his huge cock will rip your anus in two. There is a distinctive "schlpop!" sound as his cock pops out of your ass, which gushes sperm mixed with secretions from your anus down your belly.'
+			'You feel it as he starts spewing his liquid inside your ass. You''ve held in the position for a few minutes, but the ball at the base of his penis hasn''t decreased, and the bored dog begins to pull out of your anus, growling. In pain you start yelling, feeling like his huge cock will rip your anus in two. There is a distinctive "schlpop!" sound as his cock pops out of your ass, which gushes sperm mixed with secretions from your anus down your belly.'
 
 			$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'beast', 'rough'
@@ -119,7 +120,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dogreiqdi':
 	minut += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/girl.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once you calm down and adjust yourself you kiss <<$namesob>> and decide to head home. Recovering yourself after intercourse, you struggle to your feet, adjusting your clothes you notice a girl. She watches with curiosity and excitement explicitly looking for all your shows. The girl opens her mouth and wants to say something, but stops and runs away. You watch in a mild surprise but also the fact that you were watched getting filled. You call <<$namesob>> and go home.'
+	'Once you calm down and adjust yourself, you kiss <<$namesob>> and decide to head home. Recovering after intercourse, you struggle to your feet. While adjusting your clothes, you notice a girl. She watches with curiosity and excitement explicitly looking for all your shows. The girl opens her mouth and wants to say something, but stops and runs away. You watch in a mild surprise, but also the fact that you were watched getting filled. You call <<$namesob>> and go home.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'korr'
 end
@@ -142,8 +143,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gamedog':
 		zoo += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/2.jpg"></center>'
 		'You lean back against the wall and spread your legs. Using your hand, you guide <<$namesob>> to your hole.'
-		'My pooch understands, and begins to lick your pussy with his tongue. It''s strange and pleasant.'
-		'His tongue licks all of your pussy at the same time. It is very unusual, but you decide to change the posture.'
+		'Your pooch understands, and begins to lick your pussy with his tongue. It''s strange and pleasant.'
+		'His tongue licks all of your pussy at the same time. It is very unusual, but you decide to change position.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'beast'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -167,8 +168,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gamedog':
 		*clr
 		zoo += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/3.jpg"></center>'
-		'You push your dog onto the floor, and lie on your back. With one hand you hold his balls. Then closing your eyes your tongue touchs his penis.'
-		'It''s very different to a human penis against your tongue, but it''s not so scary. You suck this dick until it''s swollen and his veins start too protrude.'
+		'You push your dog onto the floor, and lie on your back. With one hand you hold his balls. Then, closing your eyes, touch his penis with your tongue.'
+		'It feels very different to a human penis against your tongue, but it''s not so scary. You suck this dick until it''s swollen and his veins start to protrude.'
 		'When it reaches the desired size, you start to wonder if you could have sex with <<$namesob>>.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'beast'
@@ -184,9 +185,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gamedog':
 			pcs_vag += 3
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/5.jpg"></center>'
 			'Realizing <<$namesob>> is now hungry for sex, you excitedly guide him into your wet cunt. Vaginal sex with a pet is very unusual.'
-			'Dog fucks you in powerful spurts. He thrusts deep into your crotch, and an animal brings you to a shuddering orgasm.'
-			'Not wanting a bowwow-creampie you use your feet to push <<$namesob>> away and his cock comes free. It became clear what will happen next.'
-			'You very quickly bring your face to his member, so as not to miss the chance to taste your pets cum.'
+			'Your dog fucks you in powerful spurts. He thrusts deep into your crotch, and an animal brings you to a shuddering orgasm.'
+			'Not wanting a bow-wow-creampie you use your feet to push <<$namesob>> away and his cock comes free. It became clear what will happen next.'
+			'You very quickly bring your face to his member, so as not to miss the chance to taste your pet''s cum.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'beast', 'rough'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -197,8 +198,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gamedog':
 				gs 'cum_call', 'face', $petID, 1, 0, -1, 60
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/9.jpg"></center>'
-				'My sexy dog completes with a powerful ejaculation, which blasts all over your face, getting a few drops in your mouth.'
-				'It tastes the same as human sperm, you love it.'
+				'Your sexy dog completes with a powerful ejaculation, which blasts all over your face, getting a few drops in your mouth.'
+				'It tastes the same as human sperm, and you love it.'
 
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'beast'
@@ -217,7 +218,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hardcoredog':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/zoof.jpg"></center>'
-	'You go to <<$namesob>>, who''s in a playful mood, he begins to wag his tail and his nose pokes between your legs.'
+	'You go to <<$namesob>>, who''s in a playful mood. He begins to wag his tail and his nose pokes between your legs.'
 
 	act 'Kiss <<$namesob>>':
 		cla
@@ -230,7 +231,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hardcoredog':
 			*clr
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/spa.jpg"></center>'
-			'You undress and lie down on the bed putting <<$namesob>>s mouth to your honeypot, he begins to carefully lick your pussy'
+			'You undress and lie down on the bed putting <<$namesob>>''s mouth to your honeypot. He begins to carefully lick your pussy'
 			'You start to feel the warmth as your arousal builds.'
 
 			$orgasm_or = 'no'
@@ -242,7 +243,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hardcoredog':
 				*clr
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/sog.jpg"></center>'
-				'You stroke and caress <<$namesob>>s cock.'
+				'You stroke and caress <<$namesob>>''s cock.'
 				'Your juices start to flow.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'beast'
@@ -253,7 +254,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hardcoredog':
 					*clr
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/spa1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You lick <<$namesob>>s dick and choke it down.'
+					'You lick <<$namesob>>''s dick and choke it down.'
 					'You are going crazy with excitement'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'beast'
@@ -309,24 +310,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hardcoredog':
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/spa6.jpg"></center>'
 										'Your dog starts pawing at you so you jump off and get onto all fours, yeilding control.'
 										'<<$namesob>> jumps onto you and rams his cock into your well worked pussy.'
-										'This is too much, you can hold on any longer.'
+										'This is too much for you and you can''t hold on any longer.'
 
 										gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'beast'
 										gs 'stat'
 
-										act 'Take me to Nivarna <<$namesob>>':
+										act 'Take me to Nirvana, <<$namesob>>':
 											cla
 											*clr
 											gs 'cum_call', '', $petID, 1, 0, -1, 60
 											gs 'stat'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/spa7.jpg"></center>'
-											'You clung to the dog and he starts cumming inside you.'
+											'You cling to the dog as he starts cumming inside you.'
 
 											gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'beast'
 											$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-											$orgasm_txt = 'Screaming <<$namesob>>s name, your dam breaks and you orgasm so hard you forget your own name.'
+											$orgasm_txt = 'Screaming <<$namesob>>''s name, your dam breaks and you orgasm so hard you forget your own name.'
 
-											'Sometime later, having calmed down you slowly regain your senses.'
+											'Sometime later, having calmed down, you slowly regain your senses.'
 
 											gs 'arousal', 'end'
 											gs 'stat'
@@ -348,20 +349,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hardcoredog':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/zoof3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You go into the hall, undress and sit on the sofa, <<$namesob>> is very excited and jumps on you'
+			'You go into the hall, undress and sit on the sofa. <<$namesob>> is very excited and jumps on you'
 
 			act 'Push <<$namesob>> off you':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/zoof4.jpg"></center>'
-				'You tried to push your dog off you, but <<$namesob>> no longer ignores any attempt to do so.'
+				'You try to push your dog off you, but <<$namesob>> no longer seems interested in obeying you.'
 
 				act 'Continue resisting':
 					cla
 					*clr
 					pcs_vag += 3
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/zoof5.jpg"></center>'
-					'Your struggle with <<$namesob>> fails,	<<$namesob>> puts his paws on your shoulders and pushing you down, enters your pussy.'
+					'Your struggle with <<$namesob>> fails.	<<$namesob>> puts his paws on your shoulders and, pushing you down, enters your pussy.'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/zoof6.jpg"></center>'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'beast'
@@ -372,7 +373,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hardcoredog':
 						*clr
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/zoof7.jpg"></center>'
-						'You have no choice so embrace the passion with doggie.'
+						'You have no choice so you embrace the passion with doggie.'
 						'You are close to orgasm.'
 
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'beast'
@@ -390,7 +391,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hardcoredog':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/zoof10.jpg"></center>'
 				'You turn your back and get on all fours.'
-				'With your help <<$namesob>> finds you ass with his cock and rides you like you''re his bitch.'
+				'With your help <<$namesob>> finds your ass with his cock and rides you like you''re his bitch.'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/zoof9.jpg"></center>'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'beast'
@@ -417,14 +418,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hardcoredog':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/yl1.jpg"></center>'
-			'Do you take <<$namesob>> into the woods behind your house, grab his dick and start masturbating him.'
+			'You take <<$namesob>> into the woods behind your house, grab his dick, and start masturbating him.'
 
 			act 'Take off underwear and bend':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/yl2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bend down before <<$namesob>>, he begins to lick your pussy.'
+				'You bend down before <<$namesob>> and he begins to lick your pussy.'
 				'You are starting to get wet between the legs.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'beast'
@@ -435,7 +436,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hardcoredog':
 					*clr
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/yl3.jpg"></center>'
-					'You greedily suck <<$namesob>>s dick.'
+					'You greedily suck <<$namesob>>''s dick.'
 					'This is even more exciting and you want sex.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'beast'
@@ -454,7 +455,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cumshot2':
 	*clr
 	gs 'cum_call', '', $petID, 1, 0, -1, 60
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/zoof8.jpg"></center>'
-	'<<$namesob>> discharges into your vagina, you stick together with the dog passionately'
+	'<<$namesob>> discharges into your vagina. You stick together with the dog passionately'
 
 	$orgasm_or = 'custom'
 	$orgasm_txt = 'You orgasm.'
@@ -476,7 +477,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cumshot1':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/zoof11.jpg"></center>'
-	'You take <<$namesob>>s penis to your mouth just as he cums.'
+	'You take <<$namesob>>''s penis into your mouth just as he cums.'
 
 	$orgasm_or = 'custom'
 	$orgasm_txt = 'The sensation is enough for you to enjoy a small, but powerful orgasm.'
@@ -495,10 +496,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'zoof14':
 	*clr
 	gs 'cum_call', '', $petID, 1, 0, -1, 60
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/yl4.jpg"></center>'
-	'You take the hold of <<$namesob>>s cock and start to fuck yourself with it.'
+	'You take the hold of <<$namesob>>''s cock and start to fuck yourself with it.'
 
 	$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-	$orgasm_txt = 'Your dog cums, as you bring yourself to orgasm.'
+	$orgasm_txt = 'Your dog cums as you bring yourself to orgasm.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'beast'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -515,7 +516,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'zoof15':
 	gs 'cum_call', '', $petID, 1, 0, -1, 60
 	pcs_vag += 3
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/yl5.jpg"></center>'
-	'You turn your back on <<$namesob>>, he jumps on you and starts to fuck you.'
+	'You turn your back on <<$namesob>>. He jumps on you and starts to fuck you.'
 
 	$orgasm_or = 'custom'
 	$orgasm_txt = 'He blows his load inside you, fueling your orgasm.'
@@ -565,7 +566,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'zoof27':
 		*clr
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/kuh1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You get naked and sit down. You then get <<$namesob>> to lick your pussy, he willingly obliges.'
+		'You get naked and sit down. You then try to get <<$namesob>> to lick your pussy. He willingly obliges.'
 		'He keeps going until you orgasm and push him away.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'beast'
@@ -583,8 +584,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'zoof27':
 		*clr
 		gs 'cum_call', '', $petID, 1, 0, -1, 60
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/kuh.jpg"></center>'
-		'You assume the position, doggy ​​jumps on you and starts fucking.'
-		'It doesn''t take for <<$namesob>> to cum inside you.'
+		'You assume the position. Your doggy ​​jumps on you and starts fucking.'
+		'It doesn''t take long for <<$namesob>> to cum inside you.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'beast'
 		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
@@ -638,7 +639,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'zoof30':
 		*clr
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/zal.jpg"></center>'
-		'<<$namesob>> run up to you and starts licking between your legs.'
+		'<<$namesob>> runs up to you and starts licking between your legs.'
 		'You start to feel the warmth as your arousal builds.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'beast'
@@ -669,7 +670,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dogcancerstyle':
 	gs 'cum_call', '', $petID, 1, 0, -1, 60
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/zal3.jpg"></center>'
 	'You get on all fours and your dog ​​jumps you and starts fucking your pussy.'
-	'It doesn''t take for <<$namesob>> to cum inside you.'
+	'It doesn''t take long for <<$namesob>> to cum inside you.'
 
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'beast'
@@ -687,8 +688,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dogmissionarystyle':
 	*clr
 	gs 'cum_call', '', $petID, 1, 0, -1, 60
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/zal2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You push yourself up on ti your feet, from this better angle <<$namesob>> easily finds his way into your pussy.'
-	'It doesn''t take for <<$namesob>> to cum inside you.'
+	'You push yourself up on to your feet. From this better angle <<$namesob>> easily finds his way into your pussy.'
+	'It doesn''t take long for <<$namesob>> to cum inside you.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'beast'
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
@@ -708,9 +709,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dzoof1':
 	act 'Find Sonia':
 		cla
 		'"Hi, it''s me, <<$pcs_nickname>>"'
-		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, <<$pcs_nickname>>? Oh yeah! The girl who really loves dogs." asks Sonia.'
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>... <<$pcs_nickname>>? Oh yeah! The girl who really loves dogs?" asks Sonia.'
 		'"Yes, that''s me," you respond without even thinking that it''s an odd thing to admit to.'
-		'"I''ll meet you in the park, in about 20 minutes," Sonia says before hanging up.'
+		'"I''ll meet you in the park in about 20 minutes," Sonia says before hanging up.'
 
 		act 'Run to the park':
 			cla
@@ -758,7 +759,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dzoof1':
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/dzoof3.jpg"></center>'
 							'You kneel down and begin to suck Rex, he quickly cums in your mouth.'
-							'Sonia smiles and says, "Oh, you slut, seducing my boy. Come here, you will need to be punished."'
+							'Sonia smiles and says, "Oh, you slut, seducing my boy. Come here. You will need to be punished."'
 
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'beast'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -770,7 +771,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dzoof1':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/dzoof16.jpg"></center>'
 								'Sonia takes your hand and you walk to her apartment, she turns to you and playfully says,'
-								'Well are you ready for your punishment?'
+								'Well? Are you ready for your punishment?'
 
 								act 'You''re ready':
 									cla
@@ -798,7 +799,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dzoof1':
 											gs 'stat'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/dzoof8.jpg"></center>'
 											'You watch as Sonia flirts with Rex, dirty thoughts race around your head and you start to get excited.'
-											'"Calm and caressed him," commands Sonia.'
+											'"Calm and caress him," commands Sonia.'
 
 											gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 											gs 'stat'
@@ -841,7 +842,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dzoof1':
 															'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/dzoof11.jpg"></center>'
 															'You remove your panties and begin to stroke your pussy.'
 															'Rex notices, and wagging his tail, he runs to you and buries his mouth between your legs.'
-															'Sonia says with a grin, "Looks like I have competition," and gets on to all fours.'
+															'"Looks like I have competition," Sonia says with a grin, and she gets on all fours.'
 
 															gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 2
 															gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 2, 'beast'
@@ -853,8 +854,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dzoof1':
 																*clr
 																gs 'stat'
 																'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/dzoof13.jpg"></center>'
-																'Rex runs back to Sonia, jumps her and plants his cock into her.'
-																'You also take a doggy position and begin to swing your ass invitingly, hoping to win Rexs attention.'
+																'Rex runs back to Sonia, jumps onto her, and plants his cock in her.'
+																'You also take a doggy position and begin to swing your ass invitingly, hoping to win Rex''s attention.'
 																'"You want it bitch?" Says Sonia.'
 
 																gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
@@ -878,9 +879,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dzoof1':
 																		money += RAND(30,60)
 																		gs 'stat'
 																		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/dzoof15.jpg"></center>'
-																		'You greedily lick Sonias vagina, making sure to pay special attention to her clit, while behind you Rex keeps thrusting.'
-																		'Rex finishes inside you, and then Sonia grabs your head moaning as she orgasms. This is enough to push you over the edge.'
-																		'After you have come down from your orgams, Sonia shows you the door and throws you a few bills.'
+																		'You greedily lick Sonia''s vagina, making sure to pay special attention to her clit, while behind you Rex keeps thrusting.'
+																		'Rex finishes inside you, and Sonia grabs your head moaning as she orgasms. This is enough to push you over the edge.'
+																		'After you have come down from your orgasms, Sonia shows you the door and throws you a few bills.'
 
 																		gs 'arousal', 'give_cuni', 20, 'sub'
 																		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
@@ -914,4 +915,3 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dzoof1':
 end
 
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