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[Text Edit] minor corrections.

Karma199696 5 ani în urmă
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1 a modificat fișierele cu 3 adăugiri și 3 ștergeri
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      locations/gschool_lessons.qsrc

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locations/gschool_lessons.qsrc

@@ -1612,7 +1612,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/classbiology.jpg"></center>'
-	'You go to your biology class and find a seat at your lab station. Before long all of your fellow students file in and takes their seats as well. Once the bell rings Miss Orlov takes roll call, you say here when your name is called. With that done, she gets up and starts walking around the room explaining todays lessons. Occasionally stopping at each lab station to make sure the students are doing the work correctly, she often gives words of encouragement if things are going well or stops and helps the student understand what they are doing wrong.'
+	'You go to your biology class and find a seat at your lab station. Before long all of your fellow students file in and takes their seats as well. Once the bell rings Miss Orlov takes roll call, you say here when your name is called. With that done, she gets up and starts walking around the room explaining today's lessons. Occasionally stopping at each lab station to make sure the students are doing the work correctly, she often gives words of encouragement if things are going well or stops and helps the student understand what they are doing wrong.'
 	*nl
 	'She occasionally asks questions and those that get them right, she heaps praise upon them. Those that get them wrong, she takes the time to explain why they was wrong and what the correct answer is. Then making sure the student understands, once she is sure the student understands their mistake she moves on with her lesson. She is always quick to help anyone with a problem or answer questions about class, always with that shy smile of hers.'
 	act 'Listen attentively to Miss Orlov':
@@ -1766,7 +1766,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/classcomputer.jpg"></center>'
-	'You go to your computer class and find a seat at one of the computer stations. Before long all of your fellow students file in and takes their seats as well. Once the bell rings Mr. Ivanov takes roll call, you say here when your name is called. With that done, he gets up and starts walking around the room explaining todays lessons. Occasionally stopping to look at the screen of varies students to make sure they are doing it right.'
+	'You go to your computer class and find a seat at one of the computer stations. Before long all of your fellow students file in and takes their seats as well. Once the bell rings Mr. Ivanov takes roll call, you say here when your name is called. With that done, he gets up and starts walking around the room explaining today's lessons. Occasionally stopping to look at the screen of various students to make sure they are doing it right.'
 	*nl
 	'If he has to correct one of the nerds he will take his time and quietly explain it to them, giving them lots of encouragement. For everyone else he loudly proclaims what you did wrong, drawing attention to how easy this is. He makes sure the whole class knows about their mistake and he does it in such a condescending manner, like he is trying to prove to everyone how much smarter he is than you are, or maybe he just wants the others students to make fun of them. With Mr. Ivanov it is hard to tell. He doesn''t seem to approve of anyone but the nerds and harshly grades everyone else.'
 	act 'Listen attentively to Mr. Ivanov':
@@ -1784,7 +1784,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				'Mr. Ivanov nods approvingly. He happily spends some extra time explaining the topic again to you, and answers any extra questions you might have. You feel like you learned a lot, thoroughly understanding today''s lessons now.'
 			else
 				!!If Sveta is anything else other than a nerd then get this text.
-				'Mr. Ivanov audibly sighs. "Why are you unable to grasp this. I know you are not the smartest student, but this is very simple. Even a small child should be able to grasp it." He goes on to explain the part you asked about again, but he does so in a completely belittling manner.'
+				'Mr. Ivanov audibly sighs. "Why are you unable to grasp this? I know you are not the smartest student, but this is very simple. Even a small child should be able to grasp it." He goes on to explain the part you asked about again, but he does so in a completely belittling manner.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 		end