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Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/julzor/glife

KevinSmarts 6 years ago
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+ 6 - 5
locations/MartinSex

@@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 					MartinSexTalkDay = daystart
 					pcs_mood -= 8
 					*nl
-					$OpenInnerThough+'Too young? Really?'+$CloseInnerThough
+					$OpenInnerThought+'Too young? Really?'+$CloseInnerThought
 					'Being treated like you are basically a child pisses you off to no end. Who is he to decide what is good or bad for you, anyway?'
 					'Well, if he wants some teenage drama, he can have it!'
 					*nl
@@ -241,6 +241,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			'You turn and go towards the exit. You can hear something behind you, feel his look on your back, but you ignore it as best you can and go outside, the matter between you unresolved.'
 			
 			act 'Leave': gt 'nord'
+		end
 		
 		if exhibitionism > 15 and pcs_dom > 20 and cycle ! 0:
 			act 'Go on the offensive - Strip':MartinStripVar = 1 & gt'MartinSex','MartinTease'
@@ -328,7 +329,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 				minut += 1
 				pcs_mood -= 8
 				*nl
-				OpenInnerThough+'I want to talk about this! I really, really do!'+$CloseInnerThough+' You tell yourself.'
+				$OpenInnerThought+'I want to talk about this! I really, really do!'+$CloseInnerThought+' You tell yourself.'
 				'... but that doesn''t mean it has to be today, right?'
 				*nl
 				'"Nevermind, it''s not urgent," you backpedal quickly. "I have to go now."'
@@ -715,7 +716,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinTease':
 						if pcs_dom > 20 and cycle ! 0:
 							act 'Tell Martin to go down on you':gt 'MartinSex3','MartinPussyLick'
 						elseif temp = 1 and cycle ! 0:
-							act 'Martin wants to go down on you':
+							act 'Martin wants to go down on you':gt 'MartinSex3','MartinPussyLick'
 						end
 						
 						act 'Take care of Martin (Blowjob)':gt 'MartinSex3', 'MartinBlowTease'
@@ -862,7 +863,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinTease':
 							if pcs_dom > 20 and cycle ! 0:
 								act 'Tell Martin to go down on you':gt 'MartinSex3','MartinPussyLick'
 							elseif temp = 1 and cycle ! 0:
-								act 'Martin wants to go down on you':
+								act 'Martin wants to go down on you':gt 'MartinSex3','MartinPussyLick'
 							end
 							
 							act 'Take care of Martin (Blowjob)':gt 'MartinSex3', 'MartinBlowTease'
@@ -956,7 +957,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinTeaseDildo':
 			if pcs_dom > 20 and cycle ! 0:
 				act 'Tell Martin to go down on you':gt 'MartinSex3','MartinPussyLick'
 			elseif temp = 1 and cycle ! 0:
-				act 'Martin wants to go down on you':
+				act 'Martin wants to go down on you':gt 'MartinSex3','MartinPussyLick'
 			end
 			
 			act 'Take care of Martin (Blowjob)':gt 'MartinSex3', 'MartinBlowTease'

+ 12 - 12
locations/MartinSex2

@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinSexPrep':
 	end
 end
 	
-if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinSexDyn'
+if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinSexDyn':
 	cls
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A216'
 	if $martinpos ! 'sideways':
@@ -217,13 +217,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinSexDyn'
 	
 	*nl	
 	if tabletkishot < 1 and pillcon2 < 30000: 
-		'The thought that you could get pregnant is still present in the back of your head, now that Martin''s dick is deep inside you, but you have long passed the point of no return. <<$OpenInnerThough>>I can always have him pull out,<<$CloseInnerThough>> you think to yourself and allow the thought to fade as you give in to the sensations that flood your senses.'
+		'The thought that you could get pregnant is still present in the back of your head, now that Martin''s dick is deep inside you, but you have long passed the point of no return. <<$OpenInnerThought>>I can always have him pull out,<<$CloseInnerThought>> you think to yourself and allow the thought to fade as you give in to the sensations that flood your senses.'
 	end
 	
 	*nl	
 	if $martinpos = 'cowgirl':
 		'Feeling Martin''s <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock slowly move inside you as you lift yourself up and fall back down is incredible; the control you have over the situation makes it even more satisfying. You moan softly as you ever so slightly speed up your movements, looking at Martin from under hooded eyes and enjoying the sight of his slightly parted lips, or the intense look with which he focuses on your swaying breasts - he is completely under your spell.'
-	elseif $martinpos = 'rev_cowgirl'
+	elseif $martinpos = 'rev_cowgirl':
 		'Feeling Martin''s <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock slowly move inside you as you lift yourself up and fall back down is incredible; the control you have over the situation makes it even more satisfying. You moan softly as you ever so slightly speed up your movements. You look back over your shoulder and he seems completely focused on where the two of you are connected, watching with lustful intensity as your ass sways before him and you take his cock inside your wet hole again and again.'
 	elseif $martinpos = 'doggystyle':
 		'Feeling Martin''s <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock move inside you as he enters you and withdraws is wonderful. You have little control over the situation, now that everything''s said and done and the barkeeper is balls-deep inside you, and that is exactly what makes you moan so loud. You look back over your shoulder and he seems completely focused on where the two of you are connected, watching with lustful intensity as he shoves his cock inside your wet hole again and again, kneading your ass as he goes.'
@@ -449,7 +449,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinSexDyn'
 			else
 				if $martinpos = 'cowgirl':
 					'<center><video src="images/locations/city/industrial/bar/sex/bar/martin/cumshot/cum_cowgirl.mp4"></center>'
-				elseif $martinpos = 'rev_cowgirl'
+				elseif $martinpos = 'rev_cowgirl':
 					'<center><video src="images/locations/city/industrial/bar/sex/bar/martin/cumshot/cum_rev_cowgirl.mp4"></center>'
 				elseif $martinpos = 'doggystyle':
 					'<center><video src="images/locations/city/industrial/bar/sex/bar/martin/cumshot/cum_doggy.mp4"></center>'
@@ -516,7 +516,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinSexDyn'
 					'"Shit, I think the condom slipped off," Martin curses under his breath. A shiver runs through you as you realize that you have a used condom stuck inside you and could just have been impregnated after all.'
 				elseif sexcontra = 5 and preziktype = 0: 
 					'"Shit, I think the condom slipped off," Martin curses under his breath.' 
-					'"Don''t worry," you say with a comforting smile, "I''m on the pill." <<$OpenInnerThough>>Still need to get that condom out of my vagina though,<<$CloseInnerThough>> you think to yourself.'
+					'"Don''t worry," you say with a comforting smile, "I''m on the pill." <<$OpenInnerThought>>Still need to get that condom out of my vagina though,<<$CloseInnerThought>> you think to yourself.'
 				elseif sexcontra = 7:
 					'"Shit, I think the condom broke," Martin curses under his breath.' 
 					'"Don''t worry," you say with a comforting smile, "I''m on the pill." It was a blatant lie, of course - you poked those holes into the condom and no hormone would get in the way of that sperm.'
@@ -686,13 +686,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinAnalDyn':
 					*nl
 					'It takes a while like this, but after a few minutes of slow up-and-down, your butt cheeks meet his pelvis for the first time and you feel wonderfully full. Martin''s groan causes you to look back at him and you grin when you see the expression on his face: It is one of pure bliss. The bartender seems completely overwhelmed by the fact that a young, beautiful woman is riding his dick with her ass.'
 					*nl
-					'<<$OpenInnerThough>You ain''t seen nothing yet<<$CloseInnerThough>>, you think to yourself and lift yourself up. This time, however, you push down faster. Up again and, encouraged by the lack of pain the first time around, you slam your ass down, slapping against Martin''s hips as you take him balls-deep.'
+					'<<$OpenInnerThought>>You ain''t seen nothing yet<<$CloseInnerThought>>, you think to yourself and lift yourself up. This time, however, you push down faster. Up again and, encouraged by the lack of pain the first time around, you slam your ass down, slapping against Martin''s hips as you take him balls-deep.'
 				else
 					'Truth be told, even without the lube your asshole would have been wide enough to accommodate Martin''s dick, but with the lube, you don''t have to hold back: Feeling like a pornstar, you take his cock inside your ass and, without pausing, keep lowering yourself until you feel his hips against your ass cheeks.'
 					*nl
 					'You feel incredibly full, and a single look over the shoulder confirms that Martin is no less pleased: He is looking at where you are connected, spell-bound by the sight of his cock hilted in your ass.'
 					*nl
-					'<<$OpenInnerThough>You ain''t seen nothing yet<<$CloseInnerThough>>, you think to yourself and lift yourself up. This time, however, you push down faster. Up again and, encouraged by the lack of pain the first time around, you slam your ass down, slapping against Martin''s hips as you take him balls-deep again.'
+					'<<$OpenInnerThought>>You ain''t seen nothing yet<<$CloseInnerThought>>, you think to yourself and lift yourself up. This time, however, you push down faster. Up again and, encouraged by the lack of pain the first time around, you slam your ass down, slapping against Martin''s hips as you take him balls-deep again.'
 				end
 		
 			elseif pcs_ass >= dick:	
@@ -700,7 +700,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinAnalDyn':
 				*nl			
 				'You feel incredibly full, and a single look over the shoulder confirms that Martin is no less pleased: He is looking at where you are connected, spell-bound by the sight of his cock hilted in your ass.'
 				*nl
-				'<<$OpenInnerThough>You ain''t seen nothing yet<<$CloseInnerThough>>, you think to yourself and lift yourself up. This time, however, you push down faster. Up again and, encouraged by the lack of pain the first time around, you slam your ass down, slapping against Martin''s hips as you take him balls-deep again.'
+				'<<$OpenInnerThought>>You ain''t seen nothing yet<<$CloseInnerThought>>, you think to yourself and lift yourself up. This time, however, you push down faster. Up again and, encouraged by the lack of pain the first time around, you slam your ass down, slapping against Martin''s hips as you take him balls-deep again.'
 		
 			else
 				gt 'MartinSex2', 'PainalDyn'
@@ -860,7 +860,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'PainalDyn':
 			'Maybe this wasn''t such a good idea after all?'
 			*nl
 		end		
-		iif($martinpos='rev_cowgirl','But f','F') + 'eeling both stubborn and horny, you think <<$OpenInnerThough>>fuck it, I can do this<<$CloseInnerThough>>, literally, anally.'
+		iif($martinpos='rev_cowgirl','But f','F') + 'eeling both stubborn and horny, you think <<$OpenInnerThought>>fuck it, I can do this<<$CloseInnerThought>>, literally, anally.'
 		'Trying to help move things along with a little more spit, you push against Martin''s cock once more, ignoring the unpleasant sensations that go with it. You succeed, too: His cock slips inside your asshole.'
 		*nl
 		
@@ -965,7 +965,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinCumshot_Mouth':
 	cls
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A216'
 	'<center><video src="images/locations/city/industrial/bar/martin/cumshot/cum_mouth.mp4"></center>'
-	if $martinpos ! ('MartinBlowjob_dressed' or 'MartinBlowjob_undressed'): 'You quickly move off Martin''s cock and get on your knees in front of him, taking his dick into your mouth and savoring the taste of yourself on your man as you get him off.'
+	if $martinpos ! 'MartinBlowjob_dressed' or $martinpos ! 'MartinBlowjob_undressed': 'You quickly move off Martin''s cock and get on your knees in front of him, taking his dick into your mouth and savoring the taste of yourself on your man as you get him off.'
 	'For a moment, you think about saying something dirty, like verbally asking him to cum in your mouth, but by the time this thought has manifested, Martin has already pulled out and complied with it, shooting his hot sperm into your open, waiting mouth.'
 	'You wait like this for the second and third spurt, but then you take him right back into your mouth, sucking and licking him through his orgasm.'
 	*nl
@@ -985,7 +985,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinCumshot_Face':
 	'<center><video src="images/locations/city/industrial/bar/martin/cumshot/cum_facial.mp4"></center>'
 	
 	!Variation for pic and text sticking out your tongue for the cumshot
-	if $martinpos ! ('MartinBlowjob_dressed' or 'MartinBlowjob_undressed'): 'You quickly move off Martin''s cock and get on your knees in front of him, taking his dick into your mouth and savoring the taste of yourself on your man as you help him finish.'
+	if $martinpos ! 'MartinBlowjob_dressed' or $martinpos ! 'MartinBlowjob_undressed': 'You quickly move off Martin''s cock and get on your knees in front of him, taking his dick into your mouth and savoring the taste of yourself on your man as you help him finish.'
 	'He pulls out, about ready for the moneyshot.' 
 	*nl
 	'For a moment, you think about saying something dirty, like asking him to cum all over your face, but by the time this thought has manifested, Martin has already complied with it, shooting his hot sperm all over your cheek and forehead. You flinch a little, screwing your eyes shut as you feel his spurt hit you right at the corner of one of them, but you are acutely aware of how hot it feels, literally and figuratively, to have Martin''s sperm run down your face.'
@@ -1000,7 +1000,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinCumshot_Tits':
 	cls
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A216'
 	'<center><video src="images/locations/city/industrial/bar/martin/cumshot/cum_tits.mp4"></center>'
-	if $martinpos ! ('MartinBlowjob_dressed' or 'MartinBlowjob_undressed'): 'You quickly move off Martin''s cock and get on your knees in front of him, stroking his dick as you point it at your bust and savoring the expression of bliss on your man''s face.'
+	if $martinpos ! 'MartinBlowjob_dressed' or $martinpos ! 'MartinBlowjob_undressed': 'You quickly move off Martin''s cock and get on your knees in front of him, stroking his dick as you point it at your bust and savoring the expression of bliss on your man''s face.'
 	'"Go ahead", you whisper in your sultriest voice, "Cum all over my tits, baby."'
 	'That''s all the invitation Martin needs: With a final moan, the first hot jet of cum hits your breasts, soon followed by another, and another. By the time his cock stops twitching, your breast and chin are covered in sperm. Cleaning up is gonna take a while, but with a single look at Martin and the satisfied boyish grin the sight of you puts on his face, you know that it''s worth it.'
 	gs 'cum_call', 'breasts', $boy, 1

+ 1 - 1
locations/MartinSex3

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinBlowTease':
 			'You undo his fly as you kiss him, liberating his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock, rock-hard from the show you put on for him. With a wicked smile, you get down on your knees. He seems even bigger now that you''re face to face with him, and you''re only just getting to know him. You give its tips a few measured licks to gauge Martin''s reaction, closely observing his face.'
 			'Martin wears a mask of strained stoicism - he has caught on and seems to have no intention of letting you monopolize the control.'
 			*nl
-			$OpenInnerThough+'If that''s how you want to play it...'+$CloseInnerThough
+			$OpenInnerThought+'If that''s how you want to play it...'+$CloseInnerThought
 			'You close your eyes and take the head inside your mouth and slowly pull it out again, paying special attention that your <<$pcdesc_lipgloss>>, <<$pcdesc_lips>> lips massage every spot of it; and to top off your performance, you give a soft lascivious moan, just loud enough to sound involuntary.'
 			*nl
 			'This time, when you look up to him, you see that Martin has dropped all pretense of equilibrium. If you hadn''t shown him that you were in charge right now, you''re sure he would have already grabbed your head and started fucking your mouth.'

+ 6 - 6
locations/MartinTalk

@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		'As gruff and menacing as Martin looks and acts sometimes, it''s good to know that he will pull your leg and laugh about just like anybody else. His shell may be hard but there''s definitely more to him than that. You''re not sure that his core is soft, but whatever it is, it''s bound to be interesting. And as strange as this episode was, it feels like something changed, like, after chipping away at it for a while, you finally broke the ice.'
 		*nl
 		'And armed with that knowledge and a newfound ease, you chat and joke with Martin a while longer before another patron demands his attention.'
-		$OpenInnerThough+'Hm... Maybe I really should try and talk to him when he''s starting to clean up and close for the night - I think he starts throwing people out around quarter to Midnight.'+$CloseInnerThough
+		$OpenInnerThought+'Hm... Maybe I really should try and talk to him when he''s starting to clean up and close for the night - I think he starts throwing people out around quarter to Midnight.'+$CloseInnerThought
 		
 		act 'Finish your drink': gt 'qwBarPolet'
 				
@@ -432,7 +432,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		
 	elseif MartinTalkVar = 9 and npc_rel['A216'] >= 48:
 		MartinTalkVar = 10
-		'"Here you go." Martin puts your drink in front of you before you''ve even properly come to rest on the stool. '+$OpenInnerThough+'When your bartender has your drink ready by the time you order it, maybe you''ve been spending too much time in the bar,'+$CloseInnerThough+' you think to yourself.'
+		'"Here you go." Martin puts your drink in front of you before you''ve even properly come to rest on the stool. '+$OpenInnerThought+'When your bartender has your drink ready by the time you order it, maybe you''ve been spending too much time in the bar,'+$CloseInnerThought+' you think to yourself.'
 		*nl
 		'"How are you doing today?" You ask.'
 		'Martin shrugs. "Same as always: You kill a man, you move on."'
@@ -783,7 +783,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		
 		act 'Finish your drink': gt 'qwBarPolet'	
 	
-	elseif MartinTalkVar = 11 and MartinSex = 1 and  and npc_rel['A216'] >= 65:
+	elseif MartinTalkVar = 11 and MartinSex = 1 and npc_rel['A216'] >= 65:
 		MartinTalkVar = 12
 		'Martin nods and a few seconds later, a drink sits in front of you.'
 		*nl
@@ -922,7 +922,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'NotInUseRightNow':
 		'It hurts. You always kinda knew that he felt this way, and it''s not like you were pushing for a proposal or a baby, but to hear it still hurts.'
 		*nl
 		'He continues: "Maybe with a woman my age, one day, but not with a girl who..." He hesitates.' 
-		$OpenInnerThough+'Who is young enough to be my daughter?'+$CloseInnerThough+' You think.' 
+		$OpenInnerThought+'Who is young enough to be my daughter?'+$CloseInnerThought+' You think.' 
 		'"Who would outlive me by many years," he finishes the thought. "I want you to look for a man your age, a man you can have a future with."'
 		'"Maybe I want you," you say sulkily, "a future with you."'
 		'"Mi amor, you know how much I want you, and you can have me for as long as you wish... but a future?" He shakes his head, a sad look on his face. "That''s not in the cards for us."'
@@ -975,7 +975,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinTalkApartment':
 		'"Well, it''s not ''my'' apartment. I just live in a room in it. It''s a bit complicated, but basically, I get to live in the city center, rent-free."'
 		*nl
 		'Martin laughs. "Well, you definitely make it sound complicated. Good for you. But," he turns serious once more, "nothing like that is ever truly ''free'', so... be careful."'
-		$OpenInnerThough+'He wouldn''t be Martin if he didn''t tell me to "watch out" at least once a day,'+$CloseInnerThough+' you think and roll your eyes, but still nod yes at him before he has to get back to work.'
+		$OpenInnerThought+'He wouldn''t be Martin if he didn''t tell me to "watch out" at least once a day,'+$CloseInnerThought+' you think and roll your eyes, but still nod yes at him before he has to get back to work.'
 	
 	elseif student > 0:
 		'"I have a room in one of the university dormitories, actually. I wouldn''t call it ''living'', though."'
@@ -984,7 +984,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinTalkApartment':
 		'"Yeah, but that doesn''t earn any money, and probably won''t for some time, so..." You shrug.'
 		'Martin nods understandingly. "I get it. At least you have a place to live near the center. Though it can get pretty wild there during the weekend, I heard," he comments, "and drunk people can be unpredictable. So, you watch yourself, okay?"'
 		*nl
-		$OpenInnerThough+'He wouldn''t be Martin if he didn''t tell me to "watch out" at least once a day,'+$CloseInnerThough+' you think and roll your eyes, but still smile and say "I always do" before he has to get back to work.'
+		$OpenInnerThought+'He wouldn''t be Martin if he didn''t tell me to "watch out" at least once a day,'+$CloseInnerThought+' you think and roll your eyes, but still smile and say "I always do" before he has to get back to work.'
 	
 	elseif StoryLine = 1 and ParHomeBlock = 0:
 		'"I still live with my parents, in Pavlovsk," you admit.'

+ 2 - 2
locations/korr

@@ -108,14 +108,14 @@ if hour >= 9 and hour <= 20 and santehnikDolg > 0 and money >= santehnikDolg:
 	act 'Go to the door':
 		cls
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You went to the door and looked through the peephole. You see a dark male figure. Apparently the man heard you and said through the door. "It''s me. Plumber Grisha. You''ll need money."'
+		'You go to the door and look through the peephole. You see a dark male figure. Apparently the man heard you and says through the door. "It''s me. Plumber Grisha. You owe me money, remember?"'
 
 		act 'Answer the door':
 			cls
 			money -= santehnikDolg
 			santehnikDolg = 0
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You opened the door and plumbing Gregory smiled. "I thought you were hiding from me now will. Well? There is nothing to pay?" You nodded and climbed for his wallet. Counting half thousand you gave the money he Dwarf and put them in his pocket. Then you said goodbye and left.'
+			'You open the door and Gregory smiles. "I thought you were hiding from me now. Well? Do you have my money?" You nod and pay him the 1,500 rubles.'
 
 			act 'Close the door':gt $curloc
 		end

+ 7 - 11
locations/mirasex

@@ -40,10 +40,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirakiss':
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	if pcs_horny < 20 or mirahorny < 20:
-
 		act 'Continue kissing':gt 'mirasex','mirakiss'
 	else
-
 		act 'Further':gt 'mirasex','foreplay'
 	end
 end
@@ -64,18 +62,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'foreplay':
 		if temp = 2:'You feel the hot breath on his chest, slick tongue Mira, neptunea caressing your nipples and give you great pleasure.'
 		if temp = 3:'Mira fondles your breasts, gently squeezing them in his hands, Pokrywa kisses and playing with papillae tongue.'
 	end
+	if mirahorny < 80:mirahorny += 5
 	*nl
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	if pcs_horny < 40 or mirahorny < 40:
-
 		act 'To continue to caress':gt 'mirasex','foreplay'
 	else
 		if pcs_horny >= mirahorny:
-
 			act 'Further':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_start'
 		else
-
 			act 'Further':gt 'mirasex','miralick_start'
 		end
 	end
@@ -178,7 +174,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lickmira_mis1':
 	if mirahorny < 100:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/lickmira_mis'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		$textmis[rand(1,3)]+$textlick[iif(lesbian < 10,rand(7,9),rand(10,12))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,5,iif(pcs_horny < 80,6,7))]
-		gs  'mirasex','miralick_orgasm'
+		gs 'mirasex','miralick_orgasm'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 	else
@@ -186,7 +182,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lickmira_mis1':
 		mirahorny = 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/lickmira_mis_cum.jpg"></center>'
 		$textmis[rand(1,3)]+$textlick[iif(lesbian < 10,rand(7,9),rand(10,12))]+$text_emotions[7]+$text_cum[2]
-		gs  'mirasex','miralick_orgasm'
+		gs 'mirasex','miralick_orgasm'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 		if pcs_horny < 60:
@@ -216,14 +212,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lickmira_mis2':
 	if mirahorny < 100:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/lickmira_mis'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		$textmis[rand(1,3)]+$textlick[iif(lesbian < 10,rand(7,9),rand(10,12))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,5,iif(pcs_horny < 80,6,7))]
-		gs  'mirasex','miralick_orgasm'
+		gs 'mirasex','miralick_orgasm'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 	else
 		miraorgasm = 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/lickmira_mis_cum.jpg"></center>'
 		$textmis[rand(1,3)]+$textlick[iif(lesbian < 10,rand(7,9),rand(10,12))]+$text_emotions[7]+$text_cum[2]
-		gs  'mirasex','miralick_orgasm'
+		gs 'mirasex','miralick_orgasm'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 		if you_orgasm = 0:'Moving away from orgasm, Mira opened my legs, releasing your mind from captivity. After some time, moving away from orgasm, you continued with Mira...'
@@ -684,8 +680,8 @@ $textmis[3] = 'Spread her legs wide apart, enjoying the Peace, feeling your hot
 $text69[1] = 'You and Mira are lying in pose "69", and greedily lick each other. '
 $text69[2] = 'You lie on the ground and can see before my eyes, dripping with juices Merino pussy. '
 $text69[3] = 'Spread her legs wide apart, Mira is hanging her pussy over you and enjoy feeling your hot breath on my crotch and feeling the stimulating touch of tongue to vagina. '
-$text69[4] = 'You lie on the ground with Mira, throwing a leg over you, takes the position on top. You feel the hot breath of Miras between her legs and stimulating touch of her tongue.  '
-$text69[5] = 'Licking Mira you feel the hot breath between her legs and stimulating touch of her tongue.  '
+$text69[4] = 'You lie on the ground with Mira, throwing a leg over you, takes the position on top. You feel the hot breath of Miras between her legs and stimulating touch of her tongue. '
+$text69[5] = 'Licking Mira you feel the hot breath between her legs and stimulating touch of her tongue. '
 $textlick[1] ='Apart by fingers sex lips, she licks clumsily, inexperienced by swiping a tongue across the length of your pisi, '
 $textlick[2] ='She timidly TSelouet your IPRe= > powithasawaI ee lips, sometimes touching inexperienced asickom your ClitoR, '
 $textlick[3] ='She carefully leads the inexperienced tongue from top to bottom, across the length of your recording, sometimes gently touching ClitoRA '

+ 1 - 1
locations/park

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'The central park is huge, sandy paths spread out in every direction and every so often you''ll find a bench to sit on. In the summer you''ll see a lot people playing ball, relaxing or have a picnic in the more open areas, while in the winter you''ll meet families with their children sledding down the grass banks.'
 	'Despite its almost paradise-like appearance, the park can be very dangerous once the sun goes down.'
 	*nl
-	'There is a sign that points into general direction of the city center. You estimate the walk to the city center would take 45 minutes.'
+	'There is a sign that points into general direction of the city center. You estimate the walk to the city center would take 35 minutes.'
 	'The second sign points into the direction of the residential area. If you have to guess, the walk to the residential are should take 20 minutes.'
 	'The third sign says city industrial district on it. You know the city industrial District is rather far away from here, you estimate that the walk would take an hour.'
 	*nl

+ 6 - 7
locations/qwBarBilliard

@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'billiard_ev1':
 				'He laughs and says you almost had him, pointing out how lucky he got there at the end to beat you, though you''re not quite sure it was as close as he makes it sound.' 
 				'Still, he offers to play you again for the same amount, so you get a chance to "win your money back."'
 				
-				if money > 2500:
+				if money >= 2500:
 					act 'Play again':
 						cla
 						*nl
@@ -159,7 +159,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'billiard_ev1':
 			act 'Lose':
 				cls
 				pool_exp += rand(2,5)
-				money -= 2500
 				killvar 'billiard_ev_var'
 				minut += 30
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -519,11 +518,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'billiard_ev2':
 		*nl
 		'As they set up a new one, they invite you to play with them.'
 		
-		if money >= 300:
-			act 'Suggest playing for money (300 <b>?</b>)':
+		if money >= 250:
+			act 'Suggest playing for money (250 <b>?</b>)':
 				cla
 				*nl
-				'"How about we make this more interesting?" You suggest. "We could play for money. Maybe like 300 rubles each?"'
+				'"How about we make this more interesting?" You suggest. "We could play for money. Maybe like 250 rubles each?"'
 				
 				if bill_rand > 3:
 					if pcs_pool >= 60: temp = rand(1,4)
@@ -616,14 +615,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'billiard_money':
 		money += 500
 		'Lady Luck seems to be smiling on you tonight - you end up ' + iif(pcs_pool>50,'comfortably','closely') + ' winning the game.'
 		'Your opponents look disappointed but remain friendly as they hand over your winnings.'
-		'Understandably, they don''t feel like playing another round, so you all return to the main room together. Still, 900 rubles isn''t a bad turnout for half an hour''s work.'
+		'Understandably, they don''t feel like playing another round, so you all return to the main room together. Still, 500 rubles isn''t a bad turnout for half an hour''s work.'
 							
 	else
 		pcs_mood -= rand(1,4)
 		money -= 250
 		'Luck really wasn''t on your side this time: You ' + iif(pcs_pool>50,'give them a run for their money but end up fumbling several critical shots','are getting absolutely destroyed by them') + ' and have to admit defeat.'
 		'You commend them for their skill as you hand over the cash, since you don''t wanna be a sore loser, but you don''t really feel like playing another round with them.'
-		'Since they also have to leave, you return to the main room with them where you part ways, 300 rubles poorer than half an hour ago.'
+		'Since they also have to leave, you return to the main room with them where you part ways, 250 rubles poorer than half an hour ago.'
 	end
 						
 	act 'Return to the bar': gt 'qwbarPolet'

+ 4 - 2
locations/qwBarEncounters

@@ -201,8 +201,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 					act 'Return to the bar': gt 'qwBarPolet'
 				end
 				
-				if money > 2500:
+				if money >= 2500:
 					act 'Accept':
+						*clr
 						cla
 						*nl
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/bar/sex/pool/pool2.jpg"></center>'
@@ -248,11 +249,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 						end
 						
 						act 'You''re on':
+							*clr
 							cla
 							*nl
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/bar/sex/pool/pool2.jpg"></center>'
 							billiard_ev_var = 2
-							$OpenInnerThough+'I can take him,'+$CloseInnerThough+' you think to yourself, '+$OpenInnerThough'and even if he beats me, it''s just a blowjob.'+$CloseInnerThough 
+							$OpenInnerThought+'I can take him,'+$CloseInnerThought+' you think to yourself, '+$OpenInnerThought+'and even if he beats me, it''s just a blowjob.' +$CloseInnerThought 
 							'With that in mind, you nod your head and tell him he''s got himself a deal.'
 							gs 'qwBarBilliard', 'billiard_engine'
 							gs 'qwBarBilliard', 'billiard_ev1'

+ 3 - 3
locations/qwBarPolet

@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'DrinkingBooze':
 	
 	else
 		if MartinTalkDay = 0:
-			act 'Order a drink and chat with Martin (150 <b>₽</b>)':
+			act 'Order the drink and chat with Martin':
 				MartinTalkDay = 1
 				npc_rel['A216'] += rand(1,2)
 				gt 'MartinTalk'
@@ -510,7 +510,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'RandomDrinkEvents':
 		'The third one raises his glass. "To sluts!" The other two join in, down their drinks and order another round while the first describes another public exposure he has witnessed.'
 		*nl
 		'Only now that their storytime is over do you notice how enthralled you were by it, how you pictured that woman being molested in public... and that the thought aroused you a little.'
-		$OpenInnerThough+'Maybe I should ride the metro more often.'+$CloseInnerThough
+		$OpenInnerThought+'Maybe I should ride the metro more often.'+$CloseInnerThought
 		
 		act 'Finish your drink': gt 'qwBarPolet'
 	
@@ -570,7 +570,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'RandomDrinkEvents':
 		'He talks about how the world has gone to shit and how a man can no longer be a man without someone stepping on him... then more or less starts over, apparently not remembering that he already told you about his "bitch wife".' 
 		'You are feeling genuinely sympathetic towards him... but you are quite happy nonetheless when he finally falls unconscious right in the middle of the sentence and starts drooling on the counter.'
 		*nl
-		$OpenInnerThough+'They can take his job, but they can never take his dignity,'+$CloseInnerThough+' you think to yourself with a smirk.'
+		$OpenInnerThought+'They can take his job, but they can never take his dignity,'+$CloseInnerThought+' you think to yourself with a smirk.'
 		
 		act 'Finish your drink': gt 'qwBarPolet'
 		

+ 1 - 1
locations/qwBarPoletToilet

@@ -21,9 +21,9 @@ if temp <= 6:
 	'You walk into the unisex toilet, bracing yourself for the absolute worst, but find it surprisingly clean, all things considered.' 
 	'The smell of urine is noticeable, but not overwhelming, and both the stalls and the floor look relatively hygienic (so do the urinals, but you''re not really in a position to make use of that insight).'
 	'The <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a> you see above the sinks has some cracks radiating from one of the corners, but other than that, it''s perfectly usable.'
+	act 'Return to the main room': minut += 1 & gt 'qwBarPolet'
 	dynamic $basin
 	dynamic $quickwash
-	act 'Return to the main room': minut += 1 & gt 'qwBarPolet'
 elseif temp = 7:
 	if pcs_horny < 90: pcs_horny += 10
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/bar/sex/bathroom/eventb1.mp4"></video></center>'