glife.qproj

@@ -10,6 +10,7 @@
 	<Location name="obj_din"/>
 	<Location name="journal"/>
 	<Location name="journal_quests"/>
+	<Location name="journal_portfolio"/>
 	<Location name="Cheatmenu_din"/>
 	<Location name="themes"/>
 	<Folder name="System">

locations/LCwork.qsrc

@@ -327,5 +327,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Kitchen':
 	end
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'toiletsex':
+	gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Stranger from the diner restroom', rand(18,32)
+	gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/bbq/sex/toiletsexend.jpg"></center>'
+	'You come up from behind the man, and suddenly wrap your arms around him. He''s startled for a moment, but relaxes when you whisper: "That''s a nice cock you have there! I bet we could have some fun together, you and I..."'
+	'The man gives you a toothy grin when he feels you wrap your fingers around his cock, but he wants more. He takes you by the hand and guides you to the rear entrance of the diner, into the back alley. He positions you against the dumpsters and eagerly shoves his cock inside you.'
+	gs 'dinsex', 'vaginal_sex', 6, 'unknown'
+	'Not a surprise, he barely lasts any time at all, with in a few minutes he grunts and pulls out of your pussy and shoots his load all over your ass and without a further word he goes back into the cafe.'
+	gs 'cum_call','butt',$boy,1
+	gs 'npccleanc',$npclastgenerated
+	gs 'arousal', 'end'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Return to the restroom':gt 'laketoilet', 'main'
+end
+
 --- LCwork ---------------------------------
 

locations/camera.qsrc

@@ -182,6 +182,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'city_library':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
 	photoskl_exp += rand(3,5)
+	portfolio_locations[1] = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/activities/photography/sveta_camera.jpg"></center>'
 	'You make your way over to the city library, it is a grand building and would make a wonderful photograph. You move around looking through the camera several times until you find just the perfect spot. You take several photos, then you pause and check them. Happy with your results you know you have something to add to your portfolio.'
@@ -194,6 +195,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'city_uni':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 25
 	photoskl_exp += rand(5,7)
+	portfolio_locations[2] = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/activities/photography/sveta_camera.jpg"></center>'
 	'You make your way over to the city University, it is a grand building and would make a wonderful photograph. You move around looking through the camera several times until you find just the perfect spot. You take several photos, then you pause and check them. You can''t help but also notice all the students moving around the quad and feel that would be a amazing photo as well. You stop and take several photos of the students moving around. Happy with your results you know you have something to add to your portfolio.'
@@ -206,6 +208,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadukino':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 25
 	photoskl_exp += rand(5,7)
+	portfolio_locations[4] = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/activities/photography/sveta_camera.jpg"></center>'
 	'Standing in the village you realize what a wonderful photo this place would make. You move around looking through the camera several times until you find just the perfect spot. You take several photos, then you pause and check them. You can''t help but also notice the houses and feel they would be a amazing photo as well. You stop and take several photos of different houses, finally settling on your grandparents home. Happy with your results you know you have something to add to your portfolio.'
@@ -218,6 +221,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadforest':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
 	photoskl_exp += rand(3,5)
+	portfolio_locations[6] = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/activities/photography/sveta_camera.jpg"></center>'
 	'Standing in the forest you amazed by how breath takingly beautiful it is out here. You walk around taking photos of the trees until you are happy with the results. Checking one last time all the photo''s you took, you feel confident you found something to add to your portfolio and put the camera away.'
@@ -230,6 +234,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pav_church':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 25
 	photoskl_exp += rand(5,7)
+	portfolio_locations[12] = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/activities/photography/sveta_camera.jpg"></center>'
 	'Standing in front of the local church you realize what a wonderful photo this place would make. You move around looking through the camera several times until you find just the perfect spot. You take several photos, then you pause and check them. With that done you spot the cemetery and walk near it and start taking photos of it as well. Happy with your results you know you have something to add to your portfolio.'
@@ -242,6 +247,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pav_train':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
 	photoskl_exp += rand(3,5)
+	portfolio_locations[8] = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/activities/photography/sveta_camera.jpg"></center>'
 	'Standing in front of the local train station you realize what a wonderful photo this place would make. You move around looking through the camera several times until you find just the perfect spot. You take several photos, then you pause and check them. Happy with your results you know you have something to add to your portfolio.'
@@ -254,6 +260,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pav_complex':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
 	photoskl_exp += rand(3,5)
+	portfolio_locations[7] = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/activities/photography/sveta_camera.jpg"></center>'
 	'Standing in the courtyard you realize what a wonderful photo this place would make. You move around looking through the camera several times until you find just the perfect spot. You take several photos, then you pause and check them. Happy with your results you know you have something to add to your portfolio.'
@@ -266,6 +273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pav_school':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
 	photoskl_exp += rand(3,5)
+	portfolio_locations[9] = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/activities/photography/sveta_camera.jpg"></center>'
 	'Standing in front of the school you realize what a wonderful photo this place would make. You move around looking through the camera several times until you find just the perfect spot. You take several photos, then you pause and check them. Happy with your results you know you have something to add to your portfolio.'
@@ -278,6 +286,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pav_park':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
 	photoskl_exp += rand(3,5)
+	portfolio_locations[10] = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/activities/photography/sveta_camera.jpg"></center>'
 	'Walking through the park you realize what a wonderful photo this place would make. You move around looking through the camera several times until you find just the perfect spot. You take several photos, then you pause and check them. Happy with your results you know you have something to add to your portfolio.'
@@ -290,6 +299,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pav_lake':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
 	photoskl_exp += rand(3,5)
+	portfolio_locations[11] = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/activities/photography/sveta_camera.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you look out over the lake you realize what a wonderful photo this place would make. You walk around the shore looking through the camera several times until you find just the perfect spot. You take several photos, then you pause and check them. Happy with your results you know you have something to add to your portfolio.'
@@ -311,7 +321,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pav_lake_sonia':
 		photoskl_exp += rand(3,5)
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girls/sonia/lake/photography/photo1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You get a little closer to her and then start taking her photograph, you move around and take a couple of photo''s from different places and angles. It seems you made to much noise as she suddenly sits up partial and looks your direction.'
+		'You get a little closer to her and then start taking her photograph, you move around and take a couple of photo''s from different places and angles. It seems you made too much noise as she suddenly sits up partial and looks your direction.'
 		act 'Caught':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 2
@@ -349,6 +359,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pav_lake_sonia':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 5
 							photoskl_exp += rand(3,5)
+							portfolio_people[4] = 1
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girls/sonia/lake/photography/photo6.jpg"></center>'
 							'With her now completely naked you keep taking photo''s of her and start getting a lot closer to her as you. The longer it goes on the more turned on she seems to get, eventually she starts playing with her pussy as you take her photographs. Finally haven taken several dozen photo''s you feel you have taken enough and stop taking her photographs. "Thanks Sonia, I got what I needed."'

locations/gschool_boys_bathroom.qsrc

@@ -1265,7 +1265,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masturbateb4':
 	gs 'arousal', 'mast', 10
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/masturbate'+ rand(1,2) +'.mp4"></video></center>'
 	if $pantyworntype = 'true':
 		'Listening to Miss Orlov getting pounded, the constant slapping sounds of flesh and her moans of pleasure is exciting - too exciting for you. You know you shouldn''t, you know it''s risky, but you just can''t resist: You hike up your skirt and spread your legs. Your hand slides down your thigh, then back up towards your crotch. Your pussy lips are already swollen and starting to get wet, and your clit stands out as if to make it easier for you to find it.'
@@ -1311,7 +1311,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb1':
 		if rand(1,100) < Sweet_talk:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/angryteacher.jpg"></center>'
 			'You hang your head and feign shame as best you can. "I know, and I''m sorry Mr. Vasilyev, but I was feeling stressed out and I just needed a break, just a few minutes alone. I know I shouldn''t have, but I couldn''t help it." You give him a pleading look. "Please, please don''t report me. I promise I won''t do it again."'
-			'Mr. Vasilyev looks at you and snorts. "Do you really think I''m dumb enough to fall for that?" He doesn''t wait for your reply but reaches out, grabs you by the arm and pulls you out of the stall before leading you out of the bathroom. "Come on, I''m taking you to the principal''s office."'
+			'Mr. Vasilyev looks at you and snorts. "Do you really think I''m dumb enough to fall for that?" He doesn''t wait for your reply and reaches out, grabs you by the arm and pulls you out of the stall before leading you out of the bathroom. "Come on, I''m taking you to the principal''s office."'
 			'He is nothing if not a man of his word, and he drags you down the hall by your arm until you are standing in front of the principal''s office.'
 			act 'Go to Principal''s Office':
 				demerit += 10
@@ -1331,9 +1331,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb1':
 	end
 	act 'Suggest a blowjob':
 		*clr & cla
-		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
+		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/seduction.jpg"></center>'
-		'You get down on your knees in front of him and hike up your skirt just a little bit to reveal more of your legs. When you are sure you have his eyes on you, you look up at him and suggestively lick your lips. "You seem tense, sir. How about I help you relax a little bit and you just pretend you didn''t see me here?"'
+		'You get down on your knees in front of him and hike up your skirt to reveal your legs. When you are sure you have his eyes on you, you look up at him and suggestively lick your lips. "You seem tense, sir. How about I help you relax a little bit and you just pretend you didn''t see me here?"'
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'gschool_events', 'sweet', 'sex'
@@ -1341,7 +1341,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb1':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/angryteacher.jpg"></center>'
 				'Mr. Vasilyev looks at you and snorts. "Please don''t embarrass yourself, or me, with such juvenile attempts at seduction. Did you really think that would work on me?" He doesn''t wait for your reply but reaches out, grabs you by the arm and pulls you out of the stall before leading you out of the bathroom. "Come on, I''m taking you to the principal''s office."' 
 				'He is nothing if not a man of his word, and he drags you down the hall by your arm until you are standing in front of the principal''s office.'
-				act 'Go to principal''s office':
+				act 'Go to the principal''s office':
 					demerit += 10
 					if school_bunk = 1:demerit += 5
 					gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
@@ -1351,7 +1351,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb1':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtbj.jpg"></center>'
 				'He looks down at you and seems to freeze. He doesn''t say anything, doesn''t move away either - all he does is look at you, transfixed with your lips. You decide to take that as a yes, stretch out your hand and unzip his pants. You reach inside and feel that his dick is almost hard already.'
 				*nl
-				'He pulls his pants down a little bit, just enough to release his manhood and make it easier for you. You give him an appreciative look and stroke his dick a few times until it is fully hard, then lean forward and start licking it; you lick up and down the shaft and run your tongue around the head, your eyes locked with his all the while before you smile at him and take his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth. You wrap your <<$liptalk>> tightly around his dick and start bobbing your head, stroking his cock with your lips, your tongue still making its rounds. He rests one hand on the top of your head, but he lets you completely control the action.'
+				'He pulls his pants down just enough to release his manhood and make it easier for you. You give him an appreciative look and stroke his dick a few times until it is fully hard, then lean forward and start licking it; you lick up and down the shaft and run your tongue around the head, your eyes locked with his all the while before you smile at him and take his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth. You wrap your <<$liptalk>> tightly around his dick and start bobbing your head, stroking his cock with your lips as your tongue continues making its rounds. He rests one hand on the top of your head, but he lets you completely control the action.'
 				*nl
 				'You caress and fondle his balls with one of your hands while the other strokes him in unison with your head''s movement. You increase your speed over time and take him as deep into your mouth as you can without gagging. He starts moaning and you feel his hand dig into your hair, telling you that he is getting close to cumming.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'dom'
@@ -1360,18 +1360,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb1':
 				act 'Continue':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'stat'
-					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
+					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtcum.jpg"></center>'
-					'You pick up the pace even more, you want him finish soon. "I''m about to cum!" he mutters weakly, as if trying to warn you, but you don''t care and suck him even harder. He starts grunting and you feel his dick throbbing in your mouth, when he suddenly pulls your head away, his hand in your hair firmly gripping you.'
+					'You pick up the pace even more since you want him finish soon. "I''m about to cum!" he mutters weakly, as if trying to warn you, but you don''t care and suck him even harder. He starts grunting and you feel his dick throbbing in your mouth, when he suddenly pulls your head away, his hand in your hair firmly gripping you.'
 					*nl
-					'As soon his dick loudly pops out of your mouth, he jerks it a couple of times while pointing it at you. It soon starts spurting loads of hot cum out and the jets land all over your face, mostly around your mouth. When he finishes, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips and then shoves it back into your mouth, the sight of you covered in his cum emboldening him. You look up at him while you suck his cock clean, smiling around him as you feel him getting soft in your mouth. He then pulls out of your mouth and tucks his dick back into his pants.'
+					'As soon his dick loudly pops out of your mouth, he jerks it a few times while pointing it at you. It soon starts spurting loads of hot cum out and the jets land all over your face, mostly around your mouth. When he finishes, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips and then shoves it back into your mouth, the sight of you covered in his cum emboldening him. You look up at him while you suck his cock clean, smiling around him as you feel him getting soft in your mouth. He then pulls out of your mouth and tucks his dick back into his pants.'
 					*nl
-					'Without a word, your teacher walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see that he''s looking at you in the mirror. Finally, he smiles and says: "Feel free to cut class any time you like, <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''ll happily keep your secret." With a chuckle, he leaves - in fact, you think you can hear him whistling outside as he walks away.' 
-					'You go to the mirror yourself, clean yourself up and fix your hair. That wasn''t too bad, you think, and at least you have the rest of the period to yourself. Still, you wonder what he was doing in the girls bathroom in the first place.'
+					'Without a word, he walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see that he''s looking at you in the mirror. Finally, he smiles and says: "Feel free to cut class any time you like, <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''ll happily keep your secret." With a chuckle, he leaves - in fact, you think you can hear him whistling outside as he walks away.' 
+					'You go to the mirror yourself, clean yourself up and fix your hair. That wasn''t too bad, you think, and at least you have the rest of the period to yourself.'
 					if school_bunk = 0:
-						act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
+						act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 					else
-						act 'Keep smoking':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
+						act 'Keep smoking':gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -1379,7 +1379,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb1':
 	end
 	act 'Offer sex':
 		*clr & cla
-		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
+		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/bendover.jpg"></center>'
 		'You get up and walk past him, out of the stall, then bend over against the wall. One of your hands runs down to your ass and you hike your skirt a bit, then a bit more... then a little bit more, just enough to see a hint of your crotch. All the while, you are looking at him over your shoulder. "I know I''ve been a bad, bad girl... and I don''t want any demerits. If you don''t report me, sir, I will let you fuck me." You follow your offer up with an inviting wiggle of your ass.'
 		act 'Continue':
@@ -1387,16 +1387,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb1':
 			gs 'gschool_events', 'sweet', 'sex'
 			if rand(1,100) < Sweet_talk:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/angryteacher.jpg"></center>'
-				'Your teacher looks at you and snorts. "Please don''t embarrass yourself, or me, with such juvenile attempts at seduction. Did you really think that would work on me?" He doesn''t wait for your reply but reaches out, grabs you by the arm and pulls you out of the stall before leading you out of the bathroom. "Come on, I''m taking you to the principal''s office."' 
+				'Mr. Vasilyev looks at you and snorts. "Please don''t embarrass yourself, or me, with such juvenile attempts at seduction. Did you really think that would work on me?" He doesn''t wait for your reply but reaches out, grabs you by the arm and pulls you out of the stall before leading you out of the bathroom. "Come on, I''m taking you to the principal''s office."' 
 				'He is nothing if not a man of his word, and he drags you down the hall by your arm until you are standing in front of the principal''s office.'
-				act 'Go to principal''s office':
+				act 'Go to the principal''s office':
 					demerit += 10
 					if school_bunk = 1:demerit += 5
 					gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/seduction.jpg"></center>'
-				'Your teacher looks at you for a long moment. You can tell that he is seriously considering his options; you can also see one of those ''options'' getting hard in his pants while he stares at your ass. You smile and tug at your skirt, causing it to rise and fall just a tiny bit every time. Only a few seconds later, he walks towards you while pulling out his dick and stroking it. When he reaches you, he pushes you down. "Get on your knees and give me a blowjob."' 
+				'He looks at you for a long moment. You can tell that he is seriously considering his options; you can also see one of those ''options'' getting hard in his pants while he stares at your ass. You smile and tug at your skirt, causing it to rise and fall just a tiny bit every time. Only a few seconds later, he walks towards you while pulling out his dick and stroking it. When he reaches you, he pushes you down. "Get on your knees and give me a blowjob."' 
 				'You do as he says and reach out for his cock.'
 				act 'Suck him':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -1407,21 +1407,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb1':
 					'You caress and fondle his balls with one of your hands while the other strokes him in unison with your head''s movement. You increase your speed over time and take him as deep into your mouth as you can without gagging.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'dom'
 					gs 'stat'
-					'He enjoys your blowjob in silence and after several minutes.'
+					'He enjoys your blowjob in silence.'
 					if pcs_vag = 0:
 						act 'Cum':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtcum.jpg"></center>'
-							'You suck him for a little bit longer but then he starts to moan and he pulls his dick out of your mouth. He holds his dick near your face, right in front of your mouth, and jerks it a couple of times. It starts spurting loads of hot cum out and the jets land all over your face, mostly around your mouth. When he finishes, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips and then shoves it back into your mouth, the sight of you covered in his cum emboldening him. You look up at him while you suck his cock clean, smiling around him as you feel him getting soft in your mouth. He pulls out of your mouth and tucks his dick back into his pants.'
+							'You suck him for a little longer until he starts to moan and he pulls his dick out of your mouth. He holds his dick near your face, right in front of your mouth, and jerks it a couple of times. It starts spurting loads of hot cum out and the jets land all over your face, mostly around your mouth. When he finishes, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips and then shoves it back into your mouth, the sight of you covered in his cum emboldening him. You look up at him while you suck his cock clean, smiling around him as you feel him getting soft in your mouth. He pulls out of your mouth and tucks his dick back into his pants.'
 							*nl
 							'Without a word, he walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see that he''s giving you sideways glances. Finally, he smiles and says: "Feel free to cut class any time you like, <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''ll happily keep your secret."' 
 							'You smile back. "If I get ''punished'' like that every time I skip class, I will." He chuckles at that, shakes his head, then leaves the bathroom - you think you can hear him whistling outside as he walks away. That was amazing and you also have the rest of the period to yourself, even if you have his cum dripping down your face.'
 							gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A128', 1
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							if school_bunk = 0:
-								act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
+								act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 							else
-								act 'Keep smoking':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
+								act 'Keep smoking':gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 							end
 						end
 					else
@@ -1429,9 +1429,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb1':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughteat.jpg"></center>'
 							if $pantyworntype = 'true':
-						        'He grabs you and manhandles you until you are laying on your back on top of the toilet seat, while pushing your skirt up. His fingers find your pussy a few moments later and he rubs your clit as he gets down on his knees. Once down he lowers his face and starts licking your pussy eating you out, he is fairly talented at this. You just moan, as you lay back and enjoy it. Just as it starts to really feel good he stops, then you see a condom in his hand and he puts it on. As he does that, you try to get comfortable.'
+						        'He grabs and manhandles you until you are laying on your back on top of the toilet seat and pushes your skirt up. His fingers find your pussy a few moments later and he rubs your clit as he gets down on his knees. Once down he lowers his face and starts eating you out. He is fairly talented and you just moan as you lay back and enjoy it. Just as it starts to really feel good, he stops and you see a condom in his hand before he puts it on. As he does that, you try to get comfortable.'
 					        else
-							    'He grabs you and manhandles you until you are laying on your back on top of the toilet seat, pushes up your skirt all the way and pulls your panties off, tossing them aside. His fingers find your pussy a few moments later and he rubs your clit as he gets down on his knees. Once down he lowers his face and starts licking your pussy eating you out, he is fairly talented at this. You just moan, as you lay back and enjoy it. Just as it starts to really feel good he stops, then you see a condom in his hand and he puts it on. As he does that, you try to get comfortable.'
+							    'He grabs and manhandles you until you are laying on your back on top of the toilet seat and pushes up your skirt up before pulling your panties off and tossing them aside. His fingers find your pussy a few moments later and he rubs your clit as he gets down on his knees. Once down he lowers his face and starts eating you out. He is fairly talented and you just moan as you lay back and enjoy it. Just as it starts to really feel good, he stops and you see a condom in his hand before he puts it on. As he does that, you try to get comfortable.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'dom'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Continue':
@@ -1440,20 +1440,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb1':
 							    'Once the condom is in place, he rubs the tip of his dick against your pussy lips, making sure it is well lubricated, then gently pushes his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock inside you, causing you to gasp. His movements are slow and he is taking all the time in the world to work his way deeper into you, one of his hands rubbing your clit all the while. You moan in pleasure.'
 							    *nl
 							    'He might have been slow at first, but he''s steadily picking up the pace now that he is balls deep inside you; he stays gentle with you the whole time though and keeps stimulating your clit and occasionally kneads your breasts as well. You didn''t expect this to feel so good and cry out: "Oh God! Fuck me, sir! Fuck me harder!"'
-								'Just then he stops and pulls out of you, as he does, he says. "Get up and bend over."'
+								'He then stops and pulls out of you. "Get up and bend over."'
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'dom'
 							    gs 'stat'
 								act 'Bend over':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtvag2.jpg"></center>'
-									'You get up and kneel one knee on the toilet seat and the other foot on the floor, as you bend over in front of him. He smiles and slides his dick back into your wet pussy, indeed he gets a little rougher with you. Once or twice, he even smacks your ass cheeks as he fucks you doggy style over the toilet.'
+									'You get up and kneel one knee on the toilet seat and the other foot on the floor. He smiles and slides his dick back into your wet pussy, indeed he gets a little rougher with you. Once or twice, he even smacks your ass as he fucks you doggy style over the toilet.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'dom'
 									gs 'stat'
 									act 'Keep getting fucked':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtvag3.jpg"></center>'
-										'He keeps fucking you, not to hard and fast, but a nice stead pace. Just a little rough with out being to rough, he seems he wants you to enjoy this as much as he is. For several more minutes he fucks you like this until he starts moaning loudly.'
-										$orgasm_txt = 'With an unexpectedly considerate lover like that, it doesn''t take long until you orgasm and scream out your ecstasy, your wet folds twitching around your teacher''s hard cock. He doesn''t let up though, and his stamina seems to know no limit, violating your pussy in all the right ways. A second orgasm and even a third shake you before he finally starts to grunt.'
+										'He keeps fucking you, not too hard or fast, but a nice stead pace. He seems he wants you to enjoy this as much as he is. He fucks you like this for several minutes until he starts moaning loudly.'
+										$orgasm_txt = 'With an unexpectedly considerate lover like this, it doesn''t take long until you orgasm and scream out your ecstasy, your wet folds twitching around your teacher''s hard cock. He doesn''t let up though, and his stamina seems to know no limit, violating your pussy in all the right ways. A second orgasm and even a third shake you before he finally starts to grunt.'
 										$orgasm_or = 'custom'
 										gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'dom'
 										gs 'stat'
@@ -1467,9 +1467,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb1':
 											gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A128', 1
 											gs 'arousal', 'end'
 											if school_bunk = 0:
-												act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
+												act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 											else
-												act 'Keep smoking':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
+												act 'Keep smoking':gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 											end
 										end
 									end
@@ -1498,7 +1498,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/angryteacher.jpg"></center>'
 			'His eye glint in anger. "You either do what I tell you like a good little slut, or I will haul you to the principal''s office and tell her how I caught you taking drugs, but you flushed them before I could take them from you."'
 			'You look at him shocked. "I wasn''t doing drugs."'
-			'He laughs. "Who is she going to believe, someone with your rep or me? Now we both know the answer to that one, you will get suspended, is that what you want?"'
+			'He laughs. "Who is she going to believe? Someone with your rep or me? Now we both know the answer to that one. You''ll get suspended, is that what you want?"'
 			act 'Strip': gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'caughtb2_slut'
 			gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'hard'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -1508,21 +1508,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'You shake your head. "No! I''m not your whore."'
 					'He laughs. "Suit yourself, maybe next time you will reconsider my kind offer." With that he drags you by the arm to the principal''s office.'
-					act 'Go to Principal''s Office': gt 'gschool_office', 'ivanov_revenge'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'ivanov_revenge'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Refuse (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end
 		end
 	elseif (grupTipe = 4 and hotcat >= 6 and pav_slut > 150):
-		'"I saw you in the mirror, girl." he says menacingly as he pushes the door open, the menacing look is replaced with a hungry, lustful one. "Well well well, what do we have here? A little gopnik whore, I remember girls like you from school, always spreading those legs for any boy that would look your way." He waits a moment and when you don''t move. "Strip now!"'
+		'"I saw you in the mirror, girl." he says menacingly as he pushes the door open, the menacing look is replaced with a hungry, lustful one. "Well well well, what do we have here? A little gopnik whore, I remember girls like you from school, always spreading those legs for any boy that would look your way." He waits a moment and snarls at you when you don''t move. "Strip now!"'
 		act 'Strip': gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'caughtb2_slut'
 		act 'Refuse':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/angryteacher.jpg"></center>'
 			'His eye glint in anger. "You either do what I tell you like a good little slut, or I will haul you to the principal''s office and tell her how I caught you taking drugs, but you flushed them before I could take them from you."'
 			'You look at him shocked. "I wasn''t doing drugs."'
-			'He laughs. "Who is she going to believe, someone with your rep or me? Now we both know the answer to that one, you will get suspended, is that what you want?"'
+			'He laughs. "Who is she going to believe? Someone with your rep or me? Now we both know the answer to that one. You''ll get suspended, is that what you want?"'
 			act 'Strip': gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'caughtb2_slut'
 			gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'hard'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -1542,8 +1542,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 		'"I saw you in the mirror, girl." he says menacingly as he pushes the door open. "What do you think you are doing in the boy''s room? Skipping class, I presume?"'
 		if school_bunk = 1:'His eyes fall on the smoldering cigarette on the ground and his eyes narrow. "And smoking in school too, huh? I shouldn''t be surprised."'
 		'Mr. Ivanov looks at you disgustedly. "Well, what are you waiting for, an invitation?! Get your ass out of here and over to the principal''s office!" He points at the bathroom door.'
-		'You don''t know what to say, if or how you could get out of this mess. He never really liked you and of course he knows you are supposed to be in class, so there''s no point in trying to lie to him about that, but maybe you can convince him to let you off with a warning or something.'
-		act 'Go to Principal''s Office':
+		'You don''t know what to say, if or how you could get out of this mess. He never really liked you and of course he knows you''re supposed to be in class, so there''s no point in trying to lie to him about that, but maybe you can convince him to let you off with a warning or something.'
+		act 'Go to the principal''s office':
 			demerit += 10
 			if school_bunk = 1:demerit += 5
 			gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
@@ -1564,7 +1564,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 			else
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sweettalk'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'You hang your head and feign shame as best you can. "I know, and I''m sorry Mr. Vasilyev, but I was feeling stressed out and I just needed a break, just a few minutes alone. I know I shouldn''t have but I couldn''t help it." You give him a pleading look. "Please, please don''t report me. I promise I won''t do it again."'
+				'You hang your head and feign shame as best you can. "I know, and I''m sorry Mr. Ivanov, but I was feeling stressed out and I just needed a break, just a few minutes alone. I know I shouldn''t have but I couldn''t help it." You give him a pleading look. "Please, please don''t report me. I promise I won''t do it again."'
 				'Mr. Ivanov gives you a long, hard look. You can see a vein twitch at his temple and he seems to be struggling with himself but, eventually, he nods curtly. "Okay." he hisses."I''ll let you off with a warning today Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, but I expect you to be at the top of my class and, so help me god, if I find out you''re cutting class again..." he trails off meaningfully. "Do we understand each other?" You nod vehemently - you definitely don''t want to get caught by him again. Without another word, he turns and walks out of sight. You think you can hear him mutter and curse under his breath but a few seconds later, the bathroom door closes and the room is quiet again.'
 				if school_bunk = 0:
 					act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
@@ -1577,7 +1577,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/seduction.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get down on your knees in front of him and hike up your skirt just a little bit to reveal more of your legs. When you are sure you have his eyes on you, you look up at him and suggestively lick your lips. "You seem tense, sir. How about I help you relax a little bit and you just pretend you didn''t see me here?"'
+			'You get down on your knees in front of him and hike up your skirt a little to reveal your legs. When you are sure you have his eyes on you, you look up at him and suggestively lick your lips. "You seem tense, sir. How about I help you relax a little bit and you just pretend you didn''t see me here?"'
 			gs 'gschool_events', 'sweet', 'sex'
 			if rand(1,100) < Sweet_talk:
 				*clr & cla
@@ -1594,7 +1594,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 				Ivanov_toilet = 1
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A129'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtbj1.jpg"></center>'
-				'He looks down at you and, one second later, unzips his pants and pulls his dick out. It is not even hard yet, but he seems to have made his choice and so you stroke his dick a few times until it is rock hard, then lean forward and start licking it; you lick up and down the shaft and run your tongue around the head while looking up at him to gauge his nonexistent reaction, before you take his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth. You wrap your <<$liptalk>> tightly around his dick when you feel him grab the back of your head and shove your head down, forcing his dick deep into your mouth and down your throat. You start gagging almost at once, but he doesn''t relent - he pulls out briefly, only to shove his cock right back in.'
+				'He looks down at you and, one second later, unzips his pants and pulls his dick out. It''s not even hard yet, but he seems to have made his choice and so you stroke his dick a few times until it is rock hard, then lean forward and start licking it; you lick up and down the shaft and run your tongue around the head while looking up at him to gauge his nonexistent reaction, before you take his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth. You wrap your <<$liptalk>> tightly around his dick when you feel him grab the back of your head and shove your head down, forcing his dick deep into your mouth and down your throat. You start gagging almost at once, but he doesn''t relent - he pulls out briefly, only to shove his cock right back in.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Continue':
@@ -1629,14 +1629,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/bendover.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get up and walk past him, out of the stall, then bend over against the wall. One of your hands runs down to your ass and you hike the skirt a bit, then a bit more... then a little bit more, just enough to see a hint of your crotch. All the while, you are looking at Mr. Ivanov over your shoulder. "I know I''ve been a bad, bad girl... and I don''t want any demerits. If you don''t report me, sir, I will let you fuck me." You follow your offer up with an inviting wiggle of your butt.'
+			'You get up and walk past him, out of the stall, then bend over against the wall. One of your hands runs down to your ass and you hike the skirt up just enough for him to see a hint of your crotch. All the while, you are looking at Mr. Ivanov over your shoulder. "I know I''ve been a bad, bad girl... and I don''t want any demerits. If you don''t report me, sir, I will let you fuck me." You follow your offer up with an inviting wiggle of your ass.'
 			gs 'gschool_events', 'sweet', 'sex'
 			if rand(1,100) < Sweet_talk:
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/angryteacher.jpg"></center>'
-				'Mr. Ivanov snorts. "Don''t embarrass yourself, girl. Do you really think that acting like a prostitute would work on me?" He doesn''t wait for your reply but reaches out, grabs you by the arm and pulls you out of the stall and leads you out of the bathroom. "We are going to the principal''s office, right now!"'
+				'Mr. Ivanov snorts. "Don''t embarrass yourself, girl. Do you really think that acting like a prostitute would work on me?" He doesn''t wait for your reply and reaches out, grabs you by the arm and pulls you out of the stall and leads you out of the bathroom. "We are going to the principal''s office, right now!"'
 				'He is nothing if not a man of his word, and he drags you down the hall by your arm until you are standing in front of the principal''s office.'
-				act 'Go to principal''s office':
+				act 'Go to the principal''s office':
 					demerit += 10
 					if school_bunk = 1:demerit += 5
 					gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
@@ -1651,7 +1651,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A129'
 					$orgasm_or = 'no'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtbj1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You do as you are told and stroke his dick a few times until it is fully hard, then lean forward and start licking it; you lick up and down the shaft and run your tongue around the head while looking up at him to gauge his nonexistent reaction, before you take his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth. You wrap your <<$liptalk>> tightly around his dick and start bobbing your head, stroking his cock with your lips, your tongue still making its rounds. He rests one hand on the top of your head, but he lets you control the action.'
+					'You do as you''re told and stroke his dick a few times until it is fully hard, then lean forward and start licking it; you lick up and down the shaft and run your tongue around the head while looking up at him to gauge his nonexistent reaction, before you take his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth. You wrap your <<$liptalk>> tightly around his dick and start bobbing your head, stroking his cock with your lips, your tongue still making its rounds. He rests one hand on the top of your head, but he lets you control the action.'
 					*nl
 					'You caress and fondle his balls with one of your hands while the other strokes him in unison with your head''s movement. You increase your speed over time and take him as deep into your mouth as you can without gagging. He enjoys your blowjob in silence and after several minutes of this, he grabs you by the hair and roughly pulls you up and bends you over.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
@@ -1660,9 +1660,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 						*clr & cla
 						Ivanov_toilet = 1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtanal.jpg"></center>'
-						'Once you are bent over in the stall Mr. Ivanov, rubs his fingers against your pussy. When he notices that you are relatively wet, he slips them inside, finger fucking you to lubricate his fingers with your juices and  he pulls his fingers out of you, he rubs them against your asshole and slips one of them inside your puckered hole. You moan in pleasure, with a little bit of pain mixed in, then louder when he adds a second finger and have to bite your lip and flinch a little when he shoves the third one. Mr. Ivanov gets your asshole lubed up and stretches it out a bit, and you doubt he''s only doing that for the fun of it.'
+						'Once you are bent over in the stall, Mr. Ivanov rubs his fingers against your pussy. When he notices that you''re relatively wet, he slips them inside, finger fucking you to lubricate his fingers with your juices. When he pulls his fingers out of you, he rubs them against your asshole and slips one of them inside your puckered hole. You moan in pleasure, with a little bit of pain mixed in, then louder when he adds a second finger and have to bite your lip and flinch a little when he shoves the third one. Mr. Ivanov gets your asshole lubed up and stretches it out a bit, and you doubt he''s doing it for the fun of it.'
 						*nl
-						'When he feels you are sufficiently prepared, he rubs the tip of his dick against your backdoor and, uses one of his hands to spread your ass cheeks wide. Once he has your ass cheeks spread wide and his cock lined up, he shoves his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your ass. You groan loudly in pleasure and pain. In a few uncomfortable strokes, he shoves his cock all the way into your bowels until he is balls deep inside. You cry out at the last stroke, the pain too intense to keep quiet, and he doesn''t pauses to give your ass a little time to adjust, he just begins to give you a proper hard fucking.'
+						'When he feels you are sufficiently prepared, he rubs the tip of his dick against your backdoor and uses one of his hands to spread your ass cheeks wide. Once he has your ass cheeks spread wide and his cock lined up, he shoves his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your ass. You groan loudly in pleasure and pain. In a few uncomfortable strokes, he shoves his cock all the way into your bowels until he is balls deep inside. You cry out at the last stroke, the pain too intense to keep quiet, and he doesn''t pauses to give your ass a little time to adjust, he just begins to give you a proper hard fucking.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 4
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal_finger', 1,'lube'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'rough'
@@ -1670,17 +1670,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 						act 'Anal':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtanal.jpg"></center>'
-							'He quickly works up the speed of his thrusts and is soon pounding your ass balls deep with every stroke, slamming your shoulders against the mirror with each hard thrust. He grunts, clearly taking pleasure from violating your ass like that, and you too can''t deny that a part of you loves being pounded like this as you''re rubbing your clit.'
-							$orgasm_txt = 'Despite the rough treatment he is giving your ass, you feel an orgasm roll in and when it hits with loud screams, Mr. Ivanov fucks you even harder as you orgasm, he pounds your ass all the way through your orgasm.'
+							'He quickly works up the speed of his thrusts and is soon pounding your ass balls deep with every stroke, slamming your shoulders against the mirror with each hard thrust. He grunts, clearly taking pleasure from violating your ass like this, and you too can''t deny that a part of you loves being pounded like this as you''re rubbing your clit.'
+							$orgasm_txt = 'Despite the rough treatment he is giving your ass, you feel an orgasm roll in and when it hits with loud screams, Mr. Ivanov fucks you even harder as you orgasm. He pounds your ass all the way through your orgasm.'
 							$orgasm_or = 'custom'
 							gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'rough'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Continue':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtcum.jpg"></center>'
-								'Next thing you know, you feel a spurts of hot cum filling your ass. With a loud groan, he buries his cock balls deep up your ass. You feel his dick twitching as he blows his load deep inside of you. He pulls out of your gapping ass, you can feel his cum leaking out of you, as tucks his dick back into his pants.'
+								'Next thing you know, you feel spurts of hot cum filling your ass. With a loud groan, he buries his cock balls deep up your ass. You feel his dick twitching as he blows his load deep inside of you. He pulls out of your gapping ass, you can feel his cum leaking out of you, as tucks his dick back into his pants.'
 								*nl
-								'Wordlessly, Mr. Ivanov walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see he is giving you sideways glances. He breaks his silence with a cruel smile. "We will be doing this again, <<$pcs_lastname>>. Next time I feel like it, I will keep you after class and fuck that cute little ass of yours." He laughs and, without waiting for a reply from you, walks out of the bathroom.'
+								'Wordlessly, Mr. Ivanov walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see he is giving you sideways glances. He breaks his silence with a cruel smile. "We will be doing this again, <<$pcs_lastname>>. Next time I feel like it, I will keep you back after class and fuck that cute little ass of yours." he laughs and, without waiting for a reply from you, walks out of the bathroom.'
 								*nl
 								'You go to the mirror yourself and clean yourself up and fix your hair. Your ass and throat are burning and his ''promise'' still rings in your ears. You are also kind of glad you didn''t have to go the principal and you also have the rest of the period to yourself.'
 								gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'A129', 1
@@ -1705,7 +1705,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2_slut':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A129'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtbj1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You strip out of your clothes like he demands. Once you are completely naked, he roughly shoves you down to your knees, pulling his cock out. He rubs his cock against your lips and the pushes it between them, you open your mouth and let him stick his cock in your mouth. At this point there is no point fighting it. You start sucking his dick, but before long he just starts fucking your mouth instead.'
+	'You strip out of your clothes like he demands. Once you''re completely naked, he roughly shoves you down to your knees and pulls his cock out. He rubs his cock against your lips and the pushes it between them, you open your mouth and let him stick his cock in your mouth. At this point there is no point fighting it. You start sucking his dick, but before long he just starts fucking your mouth instead.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'rough'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Get mouth fucked':
@@ -1713,30 +1713,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2_slut':
 		Ivanov_toilet = 1
 		gs 'boyStat', 'A129'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtbj2.jpg"></center>'
-		'He places his hand at the back of your head, to keep you from pulling away, as he jams his dick down your throat. As you gag on his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick, you feel his balls slap against your chin. You feel your own slobber running out of your mouth as he gags you over and over, violently deep throating you. Finally he pulls his dick out of your mouth and pulls you up to your feet by your hair. His slips one hand between your legs to your pussy and slides is fingers inside of you.'
+		'He places his hand at the back of your head, to keep you from pulling away, as he jams his dick down your throat. As you gag on his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick, you feel his balls slap against your chin. You feel your own slobber running out of your mouth as he gags you over and over, violently deep throating you. Finally he pulls his dick out of your mouth and pulls you up to your feet by your hair. His slips one hand between your legs to your pussy and slides his fingers inside of you.'
 		*nl
 		if stat['vaginal'] = 0:
-			'He snorts in surprise. "Well I can''t believe a slut like you is still a virgin. Well that''s ok, you have another hole for fucking, isn''t that right?" He asks you rhetorically, as he still holding you by the hair turns you around and bends you over in the bathroom stall. While bent over you feel him spit between your ass cheeks and then his fingers work your spit into your asshole. Before you realize it, you feel the tip of his dick pressed up against you anus.'
+			'He snorts in surprise. "Well I can''t believe a slut like you is still a virgin. Well that''s okay, you have another hole for fucking, isn''t that right?" he asks rhetorically. Still holding you by the hair, he turns you around and bends you over in the stall. You feel him spit between your ass cheeks and his fingers work his spit into your asshole. Before you realize it, you feel the tip of his dick pressed up against your anus.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'rough', 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Get butt fucked':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtanal1.jpg"></center>'
-				'He holds onto your hip with one hand, while the other grabs your ass cheek and spreads it wide. With that he forces his dick painfully into your ass, the spit on your ass and your slobber on his dick helps some. But not enough, as he soon forces his cock balls deep up your ass and just starts fucking it with out mercy. With each thrust you feel his balls slap against your slit. You grit your teeth against the pain and do your best to enjoy it.'
+				'He holds onto your hip with one hand, while the other grabs your ass cheek and spreads it wide. With that, he forces his dick painfully into your ass. The spit on your ass and your slobber on his dick helps somewhat, but not enough. He soon forces his cock balls deep up your ass and just starts fucking it without mercy. With each thrust you feel his balls slap against your slit. You grit your teeth against the pain and do your best to bear it.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'rough'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Anal pounding':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtanal2.jpg"></center>'
-					'He grabs both of your hips and starts grunting with effort as he just hammers away at your ass with no regard for your feelings at all, in fact the more you groan in pain, or hiss, or make any other noise like you are not enjoying it, the harder he hammers himself into your butt. He seems to be getting off on your pain. Not wanting to give him the satisfaction, you bite you lower lip and do your best to not make any noise at all.'
+					'He grabs both of your hips and starts grunting with effort as he hammers away at your ass with no regard for your feelings at all, in fact the more you groan in pain, or make any other noise that shows you''re not enjoying it, the harder he hammers himself into your butt. He seems to be getting off on your pain. Not wanting to give him the satisfaction, you bite your lower lip and do your best to not make any noise at all.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'rough'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Cum filled':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtcum.jpg"></center>'
-						'After what feels like forever he finally gives one more thrust burying himself balls deep in your ass. You feel his dick start twitching, followed by the sensation of his hot cum filling your bowels. Once the last squirt of cum fills you, he pulls his dick out of you. As he puts his dick away you can feel his hot cum leaking out of your gapping asshole.'
+						'After what feels like forever he finally gives one more thrust burying himself balls deep in your ass. You feel his dick start twitching, followed by the sensation of his hot cum filling your bowels. Once the last squirt of cum fills you, he pulls his dick out of you. As he puts his dick away you can feel his hot cum leaking out of your gaping asshole.'
 						*nl
-						'Wordlessly, Mr. Ivanov walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see he is giving you sideways glances. He breaks his silence with a cruel smile. "We will be doing this again, <<$pcs_lastname>>. Next time I feel like it, I will keep you after class and fuck that cute little ass of yours." He laughs and, without waiting for a reply from you, walks out of the bathroom.'
+						'Wordlessly, Mr. Ivanov walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see he is giving you sideways glances. He breaks his silence with a cruel smile. "We will be doing this again, <<$pcs_lastname>>. Next time I feel like it, I will keep you after class and fuck that cute little ass of yours." he laughs and, without waiting for a reply from you, walks out of the bathroom.'
 						*nl
 						'You go to the mirror yourself and clean yourself up and fix your hair. Your ass and throat are burning and his ''promise'' still rings in your ears. You are also kind of glad you didn''t have to go the principal and you also have the rest of the period to yourself.'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'A129', 1
@@ -1751,39 +1751,39 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2_slut':
 				end
 			end
 		else
-			'He digs his fingers deep inside or you pussy. "Not surprising how loose you feel whore." He says, as he still holding you by the hair turns you around and bends you over in the bathroom stall. While bent over you feel the tip of his dick rubbing up and down against your slit, making you wet as he does.'
+			'He digs his fingers deep inside your pussy. "I''m not surprised at how loose you feel whore." he says while still holding you by the hair. He then turns you around and bends you over in the bathroom stall. You feel the tip of his dick rubbing up and down against your slit, making you wet as he does.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'rough', 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Get fucked':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtvag1.jpg"></center>'
-				'He slides his dick into your wet twat, he at once starts fucking you hard and deep. Obviously not caring, as he doesn''t let you get warmed up before he starts hammering your cunt. His balls slap against your clit with each thrust, causing your to moan in pleasure. Which only encourages him to get harder and rougher with you.'
+				'He slides his dick into your wet pussy and starts fucking you hard and deep. Obviously not caring about your comfort, he doesn''t let you get warmed up before he starts hammering your cunt. His balls slap against your clit with each thrust, causing you to moan in pleasure, which only encourages him to get harder and rougher with you.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'rough'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Pussy pounding':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtvag2.jpg"></center>'
-					'He grunts with each thrust, seemingly enjoying himself a great deal. He doesn''t say anything to you, just pounds you. The only sound his his grunts, your moans and the slapping of his flesh against yours with each thrust. Then just as it is really starting to feel good he pulls out of your. "Lets see if your other hole is any tighter."'
+					'He grunts with each thrust, seemingly enjoying himself a great deal. He doesn''t say anything and just pounds you. The only sounds are his grunts, your moans and the slapping of his flesh against yours with each thrust. Just as it''s really starting to feel good, he pulls out of you. "Lets see if your other hole is any tighter."'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'rough'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Get butt fucked':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtanal1.jpg"></center>'
-						'He holds onto your hip with one hand, while the other grabs your ass cheek and spreads it wide, then he spits on your butt hole. He uses his fingers to work the spit into you anus a moment, before you feel the tip of his cock pressed against your asshole. With that he forces his dick painfully into your ass, the spit on your ass and the wetness on his dick from your pussy helps some. He soon forces his cock balls deep up your ass and just starts fucking it with out mercy. "That''s better, at least your ass isn''t completely wore out, not yet anyways." He says with a laugh. With each thrust you feel his balls slap against your slit. You grit your teeth against the pain and do your best to enjoy it.'
+						'He holds onto your hip with one hand, while the other grabs your ass cheek and spreads it wide. He spits on your asshole and uses his fingers to work the spit in before you feel the tip of his cock pressed against your asshole. With that, he forces his dick painfully into your ass, the spit on your ass and your pussy juices on his dick helping somewhat. He soon forces his cock balls deep up your ass and just starts fucking you without mercy. "That''s better! At least your ass isn''t completely worn out, not yet anyways." he says with a laugh. With each thrust, you feel his balls slap against your slit. You grit your teeth against the pain and do your best to bear it.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'rough'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Anal pounding':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtanal2.jpg"></center>'
-							'He grabs both of your hips and starts grunting with effort as he just hammers away at your ass with no regard for your feelings at all, in fact the more you groan in pain, or hiss, or make any other noise like you are not enjoying it, the harder he hammers himself into your butt. He seems to be getting off on your pain. Not wanting to give him the satisfaction, you bite you lower lip and do your best to not make any noise at all.'
+							'He grabs both of your hips and starts grunting with effort as he hammers away at your asshole with no regard for your feelings at all, in fact the more you groan in pain or make any other noise that shows you''re not enjoying it, the harder he fucks you. He seems to be getting off on your pain. Not wanting to give him the satisfaction, you bite your lower lip and do your best to not make any noise at all.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'rough'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Cum filled':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtcum.jpg"></center>'
-								'After what feels like forever he finally gives one more thrust burying himself balls deep in your ass. You feel his dick start twitching, followed by the sensation of his hot cum filling your bowels. Once the last squirt of cum fills you, he pulls his dick out of you. As he puts his dick away you can feel his hot cum leaking out of your gapping asshole.'
+								'After what feels like an eternity, he finally gives one more thrust and buries himself balls deep in your ass. You feel his dick start twitching, followed by the sensation of his hot cum filling your bowels. Once the last squirt of cum fills you, he pulls his dick out of you. As he puts his dick away you can feel his hot cum leaking out of your gapping asshole.'
 								*nl
-								'Wordlessly, Mr. Ivanov walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see he is giving you sideways glances. He breaks his silence with a cruel smile. "We will be doing this again, <<$pcs_lastname>>. Next time I feel like it, I will keep you after class and fuck that cute little ass of yours." He laughs and, without waiting for a reply from you, walks out of the bathroom.'
+								'Wordlessly, Mr. Ivanov walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see he is giving you sideways glances. He breaks his silence with a cruel smile. "We will be doing this again, <<$pcs_lastname>>. Next time I feel like it, I will keep you back after class and fuck that cute little ass of yours." He laughs and, without waiting for a reply from you, walks out of the bathroom.'
 								*nl
 								'You go to the mirror yourself and clean yourself up and fix your hair. Your ass and throat are burning and his ''promise'' still rings in your ears. You are also kind of glad you didn''t have to go the principal and you also have the rest of the period to yourself.'
 								gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'A129', 1

locations/gschool_girls_bathroom.qsrc

@@ -701,15 +701,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught1':
 			if pav_slut >= 200:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/eartwist.jpg"></center>'
 				'You hang your head and feign shame as best you can. "I know, and I''m sorry Ms. Braakman. I was feeling stressed out and I just needed a break, just a few minutes alone. I know I shouldn''t have, but I couldn''t help it." You give her a pleading look. "Please, please don''t report me. I promise I won''t do it again."'
-				'Ms. Braakman looks at you in silence. For a moment, you think you''ve convinced her, but then you see something change in her eyes: She wasn''t angry before, but she definitely is now. "You <i>dare</i> lie to my face like that? Do you really think I''m dumb enough to fall for that? I know what kind of girl you are, everyone talks about what kind of girl you are." She doesn''t give you a chance to reply but you see something in her eye, maybe a glint of excitement. Then she reaches out, grabs you by the arm and, with surprising strength, pulls you out of the stall before leading you to the sinks. She pushes you forward, bending over the sink.'
+				'Ms. Braakman looks at you in silence. For a moment, you think you''ve convinced her, but then you see something change in her eyes: She wasn''t angry before, but she definitely is now. "You <i>dare</i> lie to my face like that? Do you really think I''m dumb enough to fall for that? I know what kind of girl you are. <i>Everyone</i> talks about what kind of girl you are." She doesn''t give you a chance to reply but you see something in her eye, maybe a glint of excitement. Then she reaches out, grabs you by the arm and, with surprising strength, pulls you out of the stall before leading you to the sinks. She pushes you forward, bending over the sink.'
 				act 'What now': gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'caught1_slut_punishment'
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/eartwist.jpg"></center>'
 				'You hang your head and feign shame as best you can. "I know, and I''m sorry Ms. Braakman. I was feeling stressed out and I just needed a break, just a few minutes alone. I know I shouldn''t have, but I couldn''t help it." You give her a pleading look. "Please, please don''t report me. I promise I won''t do it again."'
-				'Ms. Braakman looks at you in silence. For a moment, you think you''ve convinced her, but then you see something change in her eyes: She wasn''t angry before, but she definitely is now. "You <i>dare</i> lie to my face like that? Do you really think I''m dumb enough to fall for that?" She doesn''t give you a chance to reply but reaches out, grabs you by the arm and, with surprising strength, pulls you out of the stall before leading you out of the bathroom. "I''m taking you to the principal''s office. And you should pray that she''s feeling more lenient than I do right now."' 
+				'Ms. Braakman looks at you in silence. For a moment, you think you''ve convinced her, but then you see something change in her eyes: She wasn''t angry before, but she definitely is now. "You <i>dare</i> lie to my face like that? Do you really think I''m dumb enough to fall for that?" She doesn''t give you a chance to reply but reaches out, grabs you by the arm and, with surprising strength, pulls you out of the stall before leading you out of the bathroom. "I''m taking you to the principal''s office. You should pray that she''s feeling more lenient than I do right now."' 
 				*nl
 				'True to her word, she drags you around the school by your arm, furiously muttering under her breath, until you are standing in front of the principal''s office.'
-				act 'Go to Principal''s Office':
+				act 'Go to the principal''s office':
 					demerit += 10
 					if school_bunk = 1:demerit += 5
 					gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
@@ -736,10 +736,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught1':
 			gs 'gschool_events', 'sweet'
 			if rand(1,100) < Sweet_talk:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/eartwist.jpg"></center>'
-				'Ms. Braakman looks at you in silence. For a moment, you think you''ve convinced her, but then you see something change in her eyes: She wasn''t angry before, but she definitely is now. "You <i>dare</i> trying to manipulate me like that? Do you really think I''d be base enough to fall for such juvenile attempts at seduction?" She doesn''t give you a chance to reply but reaches out, grabs you by the arm and, with surprising strength, pulls you to your feet before leading you out of the bathroom. "I''m taking you to the principal''s office. And you should pray that she''s feeling more lenient than I do right now."' 
+				'Ms. Braakman looks at you in silence. For a moment, you think you''ve convinced her, but then you see something change in her eyes: She wasn''t angry before, but she definitely is now. "You <i>dare</i> trying to manipulate me like that? Do you really think I''d fall for such juvenile attempts at seduction?" She doesn''t give you a chance to reply before she reaches out, grabs you by the arm and, with surprising strength, pulls you to your feet before leading you out of the bathroom. "I''m taking you to the principal''s office. You should pray that she''s feeling more lenient than I do right now."' 
 				*nl
 				'True to her word, she drags you around the school by your arm, furiously muttering under her breath, until you are standing in front of the principal''s office.'
-				act 'Go to principal''s office':
+				act 'Go to the principal''s office':
 					demerit += 10
 					if school_bunk = 1:demerit += 5
 					gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
@@ -750,7 +750,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught1':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/strap.jpg"></center>'
-						'Ms. Braakman looks at you for a long moment. You can tell that she is seriously considering her options, can see a hardness in her eyes, a desire to punish you that seems greater than you expected. A moment later, she has made up her mind and walks over to you. "I suppose the principal doesn''t have to know about this, as long as you get properly punished." She grabs you by the hair, pulls you over to the sinks and bends you over, your head nearly touching the mirror. "And make no mistake: I will make sure you''ll remember this lesson."'
+						'Ms. Braakman looks at you for a long moment. You can tell that she is seriously considering her options. You can see a hardness in her eyes, a desire to punish you that seems greater than you expected. A moment later, she has made up her mind and walks over to you. "I suppose the principal doesn''t have to know about this, as long as you get properly punished." She grabs you by the hair, pulls you over to the sinks and bends you over, your head nearly touching the mirror. "And make no mistake: I <i>will</i> make sure you remember this lesson."'
 						act 'What now': gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'caught1_slut_punishment'
 					end
 				else
@@ -892,7 +892,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught1_slut_punishment':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/raven/sex/school/caughtfanal1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You wince in pain when instead of feeling it slip back into your pussy, the lubed-up tip force its way into your asshole. It hurts, and you try to pull away, but she grabs your hips and keeps you in place. "You''ve been a bad little girl, <<$pcs_firstname>>!" Ms. Braakman states, her voice somewhere between imperious and gleeful, "and bad little girls deserve to have their asses punished." You shiver in fearful anticipation as she slowly pushes the massive dildo deeper inside.'
+						'You wince in pain when instead of feeling it slip back into your pussy, the lubed-up tip force its way into your asshole. It hurts and you try to pull away, but she grabs your hips and keeps you in place. "You''ve been a bad little girl, <<$pcs_firstname>>!" she snarls, her voice somewhere between imperious and gleeful, "and bad little girls deserve to have their asses punished." You shiver in fearful anticipation as she slowly pushes the massive dildo deeper inside.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 10, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'lube'
 						gs 'stat'
 					end
@@ -934,14 +934,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught2':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/caught'+ rand(1,2) +'.jpg"></center>'
-	'After a couple of minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You peek out and see Mr. Vasilyev standing at the mirror. You duck back into the stall, close the door as quietly as you can and sit down on the toilet, your heart beating like crazy, hoping he didn''t notice you. What the hell is he doing in the girls bathroom anyways?! You hear his footsteps coming closer, closer... and stop, right outside your stall door.' 
+	'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You peek out and see Mr. Vasilyev standing at the mirror. You duck back into the stall, close the door as quietly as you can and sit down on the toilet, your heart beating like crazy, hoping he didn''t notice you. What the hell is he doing in the girls bathroom anyways?! You hear his footsteps coming closer, closer... and stop, right outside your stall door.' 
 	*nl
 	'"I saw you in the mirror, young lady." he says sternly as he pushes the door open. "What do you think you''re doing anyways? Skipping class?"'
 	if school_bunk = 1:'His eyes fall on the smoldering cigarette on the ground. His eyes narrow. "Smoking in school, I see. I really thought you were smarter than that, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
 	*nl
 	'Mr. Vasilyev shakes his head. He looks more disappointed than angry, you think. "Well, come on young lady. Get down to the principal''s office." He points in the direction of the bathroom door.'
 	'You don''t know what to say, if or how you could get out of this mess. Of course he knows you are supposed to be in class, so there''s no point in trying to lie to him about that, but maybe you can convince him to let you off with a warning or something.'
-	act 'Go to principal''s office':
+	act 'Go to the principal''s office':
 		demerit += 10
 		if school_bunk = 1:demerit += 5
 		gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
@@ -952,9 +952,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught2':
 		if rand(1,100) < Sweet_talk:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/angryteacher.jpg"></center>'
 			'You hang your head and feign shame as best you can. "I know, and I''m sorry sir, but I was feeling stressed out and I just needed a break, just a few minutes alone. I know I shouldn''t have, but I couldn''t help it." You give him a pleading look. "Please, please don''t report me. I promise I won''t do it again."'
-			'The teacher looks at you and snorts. "Do you really think I''m dumb enough to fall for that?" He doesn''t wait for your reply but reaches out, grabs you by the arm and pulls you out of the stall before leading you out of the bathroom. "Come on, I''m taking you to the principal''s office."' 
-			'He is nothing if not a man of his word, and he drags you down the hall, by your arm, until you are standing in front of the principal''s office.'
-			act 'Go to principal''s office':
+			'Mr. Vasilyev looks at you and snorts. "Do you really think I''m dumb enough to fall for that?" He doesn''t wait for your reply and reaches out, grabs you by the arm and pulls you out of the stall before leading you out of the bathroom. "Come on, I''m taking you to the principal''s office."' 
+			'He is nothing if not a man of his word, and he drags you down the hall by your arm until you are standing in front of the principal''s office.'
+			act 'Go to the principal''s office':
 				demerit += 10
 				if school_bunk = 1:demerit += 5
 				gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
@@ -962,7 +962,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught2':
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sweettalk'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 			'You hang your head and feign shame as best you can. "I know, and I''m sorry sir, but I was feeling stressed out and I just needed a break, just a few minutes alone. I know I shouldn''t have, but I couldn''t help it." You give him a pleading look. "Please, please don''t report me. I promise I won''t do it again."'
-			'Your teacher looks at you for a long minute and then sighs. You think you can see pity in his eyes. "Okay. I''ll let you off with a warning and you take some time to collect yourself... but no more cutting class, you hear me?" You nod that you understand, then he shakes his head, mumbles something that sounds like "my good nature be damned" and goes about his business. A few seconds later, the bathroom is quiet again, leaving you to wonder why he was in the girls bathroom in the first place. You can''t think of a good reason.'
+			'Mr. Vasilyev looks at you and then sighs. You think you can see pity in his eyes. "Okay. I''ll let you off with a warning and you take some time to collect yourself... but no more cutting class, you hear me?" You nod that you understand, then he shakes his head, mumbles something that sounds like "my good nature be damned" and goes about his business. A few seconds later, the bathroom is quiet again, leaving you to wonder why he was in the girls bathroom in the first place. You can''t think of a good reason.'
 			if school_bunk = 0:
 				act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 			else
@@ -974,7 +974,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught2':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/seduction.jpg"></center>'
-		'You get down on your knees in front of him and hike up your skirt just a little bit to reveal more of your legs. When you are sure you have his eyes on you, you look up at him and suggestively lick your lips. "You seem tense, sir. How about I help you relax a little bit and you just pretend you didn''t see me here?"'
+		'You get down on your knees in front of him and hike up your skirt a little to reveal your legs. When you''re sure you have his eyes on you, you look up at him and suggestively lick your lips. "You seem tense, sir. How about I help you relax a little and you just pretend you didn''t see me here?"'
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'gschool_events', 'sweet', 'sex'
@@ -1003,11 +1003,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught2':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtcum.jpg"></center>'
-					'You pick up the pace even more, you want him finish soon. "I''m about to cum!" he mutters weakly, as if trying to warn you, but you don''t care and suck him even harder. He starts grunting and you feel his dick throbbing in your mouth, when he suddenly pulls your head away, his hand in your hair firmly gripping you.'
+					'You pick up the pace even more since you want him finish soon. "I''m about to cum!" he mutters weakly, as if trying to warn you, but you don''t care and suck him even harder. He starts grunting and you feel his dick throbbing in your mouth before he suddenly pulls your head away, his hand in your hair firmly gripping you.'
 					*nl
-					'As soon his dick loudly pops out of your mouth, he jerks it a couple of times while pointing it at you. It soon starts spurting loads of hot cum out and the jets land all over your face, mostly around your mouth. When he finishes, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips and then shoves it back into your mouth, the sight of you covered in his cum emboldening him. You look up at him while you suck his cock clean, smiling around him as you feel him getting soft in your mouth. He then pulls out of your mouth and tucks his dick back into his pants.'
+					'As soon his dick loudly pops out of your mouth, he jerks it a few times while pointing it at you. It soon starts spurting loads of hot cum out and the jets land all over your face, mostly around your mouth. When he finishes, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips and then shoves it back into your mouth, the sight of you covered in his cum emboldening him. You look up at him while you suck his cock clean, smiling around him as you feel him getting soft in your mouth. He then pulls out of your mouth and tucks his dick back into his pants.'
 					*nl
-					'Without a word, your teacher walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see that he''s looking at you in the mirror. Finally, he smiles and says: "Feel free to cut class any time you like, <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''ll happily keep your secret." With a chuckle, he leaves - in fact, you think you can hear him whistling outside as he walks away.' 
+					'Without a word, he walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see that he''s looking at you in the mirror. Finally, he smiles and says: "Feel free to cut class any time you like, <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''ll happily keep your secret." With a chuckle, he leaves - in fact, you think you can hear him whistling outside as he walks away.' 
 					'You go to the mirror yourself, clean yourself up and fix your hair. That wasn''t too bad, you think, and at least you have the rest of the period to yourself. Still, you wonder what he was doing in the girls bathroom in the first place.'
 					if school_bunk = 0:
 						act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
@@ -1028,16 +1028,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught2':
 			gs 'gschool_events', 'sweet', 'sex'
 			if rand(1,100) < Sweet_talk:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/angryteacher.jpg"></center>'
-				'Your teacher looks at you and snorts. "Please don''t embarrass yourself, or me, with such juvenile attempts at seduction. Did you really think that would work on me?" He doesn''t wait for your reply but reaches out, grabs you by the arm and pulls you out of the stall before leading you out of the bathroom. "Come on, I''m taking you to the principal''s office."' 
+				'Mr. Vasilyev looks at you and snorts. "Please don''t embarrass yourself, or me, with such juvenile attempts at seduction. Did you really think that would work on me?" He doesn''t wait for your reply but reaches out, grabs you by the arm and pulls you out of the stall before leading you out of the bathroom. "Come on, I''m taking you to the principal''s office."' 
 				'He is nothing if not a man of his word, and he drags you down the hall by your arm until you are standing in front of the principal''s office.'
-				act 'Go to principal''s office':
+				act 'Go to the principal''s office':
 					demerit += 10
 					if school_bunk = 1:demerit += 5
 					gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/seduction.jpg"></center>'
-				'Your teacher looks at you for a long moment. You can tell that he is seriously considering his options; you can also see one of those ''options'' getting hard in his pants while he stares at your ass. You smile and tug at your skirt, causing it to rise and fall just a tiny bit every time. Only a few seconds later, he walks towards you while pulling out his dick and stroking it. When he reaches you, he pushes you down. "Get on your knees and give me a blowjob."' 
+				'Mr. Vasilyev looks at you for a long moment. You can tell that he is seriously considering his options; you can also see one of those ''options'' getting hard in his pants while he stares at your ass. You smile and tug at your skirt, causing it to rise and fall just a tiny bit every time. Only a few seconds later, he walks towards you while pulling out his dick and stroking it. When he reaches you, he pushes you down. "Get on your knees and give me a blowjob."' 
 				'You do as he says and reach out for his cock.'
 				act 'Suck him':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -1048,12 +1048,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught2':
 					'You caress and fondle his balls with one of your hands while the other strokes him in unison with your head''s movement. You increase your speed over time and take him as deep into your mouth as you can without gagging.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'dom'
 					gs 'stat'
-					'He enjoys your blowjob in silence and after several minutes.'
+					'He enjoys your blowjob in silence for several minutes.'
 					if pcs_vag = 0:
 						act 'Cum':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtcum.jpg"></center>'
-							'You suck him for a little bit longer but then he starts to moan and he pulls his dick out of your mouth. He holds his dick near your face, right in front of your mouth, and jerks it a couple of times. It starts spurting loads of hot cum out and the jets land all over your face, mostly around your mouth. When he finishes, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips and then shoves it back into your mouth, the sight of you covered in his cum emboldening him. You look up at him while you suck his cock clean, smiling around him as you feel him getting soft in your mouth. He pulls out of your mouth and tucks his dick back into his pants.'
+							'You suck him for a little longer until he starts to moan and he pulls his dick out of your mouth. He holds his dick near your face, right in front of your mouth, and jerks it a few times. It starts spurting loads of hot cum out and it lands all over your face, mostly around your mouth. When he finishes, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips and then shoves it back into your mouth, the sight of you covered in his cum emboldening him. You look up at him while you suck his cock clean, smiling around him as you feel him getting soft in your mouth. He pulls out of your mouth and tucks his dick back into his pants.'
 							*nl
 							'Without a word, he walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see that he''s giving you sideways glances. Finally, he smiles and says: "Feel free to cut class any time you like, <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''ll happily keep your secret."' 
 							'You smile back. "If I get ''punished'' like that every time I skip class, I will." He chuckles at that, shakes his head, then leaves the bathroom - you think you can hear him whistling outside as he walks away. That was amazing and you also have the rest of the period to yourself, even if you have his cum dripping down your face. Still, you can''t help but wonder what he was doing in the girls bathroom in the first place.'
@@ -1070,9 +1070,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught2':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughteat.jpg"></center>'
 							if $pantyworntype = 'true':
-						        'He grabs you and manhandles you until you are laying on your back on top of the toilet seat, while pushing your skirt up. His fingers find your pussy a few moments later and he rubs your clit as he gets down on his knees. Once down he lowers his face and starts licking your pussy eating you out, he is fairly talented at this. You just moan, as you lay back and enjoy it. Just as it starts to really feel good he stops, then you see a condom in his hand and he puts it on. As he does that, you try to get comfortable.'
+						        'He grabs and manhandles you until you are laying on your back on top of the toilet seat and pushes your skirt up. His fingers find your pussy a few moments later and he rubs your clit as he gets down on his knees. Once down he lowers his face and starts eating you out. He is fairly talented and you just moan as you lay back and enjoy it. Just as it starts to really feel good he stops and you see a condom in his hand before he puts it on. As he does that, you try to get comfortable.'
 					        else
-							    'He grabs you and manhandles you until you are laying on your back on top of the toilet seat, pushes up your skirt all the way and pulls your panties off, tossing them aside. His fingers find your pussy a few moments later and he rubs your clit as he gets down on his knees. Once down he lowers his face and starts licking your pussy eating you out, he is fairly talented at this. You just moan, as you lay back and enjoy it. Just as it starts to really feel good he stops, then you see a condom in his hand and he puts it on. As he does that, you try to get comfortable.'
+							    'He grabs and manhandles you until you are laying on your back on top of the toilet seat and pushes up your skirt before pulling your panties off and tossing them aside. His fingers find your pussy a few moments later and he rubs your clit as he gets down on his knees. Once down he lowers his face and starts eating you out. He is fairly talented and you just moan as you lay back and enjoy it. Just as it starts to really feel good, he stops and you see a condom in his hand before he puts it on. As he does that, you try to get comfortable.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'dom'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Continue':
@@ -1080,28 +1080,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught2':
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtvag1.jpg"></center>'
 							    'Once the condom is in place, he rubs the tip of his dick against your pussy lips, making sure it is well lubricated, then gently pushes his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock inside you, causing you to gasp. His movements are slow and he is taking all the time in the world to work his way deeper into you, one of his hands rubbing your clit all the while. You moan in pleasure.'
 							    *nl
-							    'He might have been slow at first, but he''s steadily picking up the pace now that he is balls deep inside you; he stays gentle with you the whole time though and keeps stimulating your clit and occasionally kneads your breasts as well. You didn''t expect this to feel so good and cry out: "Oh God! Fuck me, sir! Fuck me harder!"'
-								'Just then he stops and pulls out of you, as he does, he says. "Get up and bend over."'
+							    'He might have been slow at first, but he''s steadily picking up the pace now that he is balls deep inside you; he is gentle with you the whole time though and keeps stimulating your clit and occasionally kneads your breasts as well. You didn''t expect this to feel so good and cry out: "Oh God! Fuck me, sir! Fuck me harder!"'
+								'Just then he stops and pulls out of you. "Get up and bend over."'
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'dom'
 							    gs 'stat'
 								act 'Bend over':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtvag2.jpg"></center>'
-									'You get up and kneel one knee on the toilet seat and the other foot on the floor, as you bend over in front of him. He smiles and slides his dick back into your wet pussy, indeed he gets a little rougher with you. Once or twice, he even smacks your ass cheeks as he fucks you doggy style over the toilet.'
+									'You get up and place one knee on the toilet seat and the other foot on the floor. He smiles and slides his dick back into your wet pussy; indeed he gets a little rougher with you. Once or twice, he even smacks your ass as he fucks you doggy style over the toilet.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'dom'
 									gs 'stat'
 									act 'Keep getting fucked':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtvag3.jpg"></center>'
-										'He keeps fucking you, not to hard and fast, but a nice stead pace. Just a little rough with out being to rough, he seems he wants you to enjoy this as much as he is. For several more minutes he fucks you like this until he starts moaning loudly.'
-										$orgasm_txt = 'With an unexpectedly considerate lover like that, it doesn''t take long until you orgasm and scream out your ecstasy, your wet folds twitching around your teacher''s hard cock. He doesn''t let up though, and his stamina seems to know no limit, violating your pussy in all the right ways. A second orgasm and even a third shake you before he finally starts to grunt.'
+										'He keeps fucking you, not too hard or fast, but at a nice stead pace. It seems he wants you to enjoy this as much as he is. He fucks you like this for several more minutes until he starts moaning loudly.'
+										$orgasm_txt = 'With an unexpectedly considerate lover like this, it doesn''t take long until you orgasm and scream out in ecstasy, your wet folds twitching around your teacher''s hard cock. He doesn''t let up though, and his stamina seems to know no limit, violating your pussy in all the right ways. A second orgasm and even a third shake you before he finally starts to grunt.'
 										$orgasm_or = 'custom'
 										gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'dom'
 										gs 'stat'
 										act 'Cum':
 											*clr & cla
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtcum.jpg"></center>'
-											'Your teacher pulls out of you and drags you off the toilet, gently pushing you down to your knees while he gets rid of the condom. He holding his dick near your face, right in front of your mouth, and jerks it a couple of times. It starts spurting loads of hot cum out and the jets land all over your face, mostly around your mouth. When he finishes, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips and then shoves it back into your mouth, the sight of you covered in his cum emboldening him. You look up at him while you suck his cock clean, smiling around him as you feel him getting soft in your mouth. He pulls out of your mouth and tucks his dick back into his pants.'
+											'He pulls out of you and drags you off the toilet, gently pushing you down to your knees while he gets rid of the condom. He holds his dick near your face, right in front of your mouth, and jerks it a few times. It starts spurting loads of hot cum out and it lands all over your face, mostly around your mouth. When he finishes, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips and then shoves it back into your mouth, the sight of you covered in his cum emboldening him. You look up at him while you suck his cock clean, smiling around him as you feel him getting soft in your mouth. He pulls out of your mouth and tucks his dick back into his pants.'
 											*nl
 											'Without a word, he walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see that he''s giving you sideways glances. Finally, he smiles and says: "Feel free to cut class any time you like, <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''ll happily keep your secret."' 
 											'You smile back. "If I get ''punished'' like that every time I skip class, I will." He chuckles at that, shakes his head, then leaves the bathroom - you think you can hear him whistling outside as he walks away. That was amazing and you also have the rest of the period to yourself, even if you have his cum dripping down your face. Still, you can''t help but wonder what he was doing in the girls bathroom in the first place.'
@@ -1130,14 +1130,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught3':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/caughtpr1.jpg"></center>'
-	'After a couple of minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You peek out and see Miss Volkov standing at the mirror. You duck back into the stall, close the door as quietly as you can and sit down on the toilet, your heart beating like crazy, hoping she didn''t notice you. You hear her footsteps coming closer, closer... and stop, right outside your stall door.' 
+	'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You peek out and see Miss Volkov standing at the mirror. You duck back into the stall, close the door as quietly as you can and sit down on the toilet, your heart beating like crazy, hoping she didn''t notice you. You hear her footsteps coming closer, closer... and stop, right outside your stall door.' 
 	*nl
-	'"I saw you in the mirror, girl." she says menacingly as she pushes the door open. "What do you think you are doing? Skipping class, I presume?" Then her eyes fall on the smoldering cigarette on the ground and her eyes narrow. "And smoking in school too, huh? You know how I feel about students smoking in my school."'
+	'"I saw you in the mirror, young lady." she says menacingly as she pushes the door open. "What do you think you are doing? Skipping class, I presume?" Then her eyes fall on the smoldering cigarette on the ground and her eyes narrow. "And smoking in school too, huh? You know how I feel about students smoking in my school."'
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/caughtpr2.jpg"></center>'
 		'Before you can even respond, she grabs you painfully by the hair and yanks the cigarette out of your mouth. "I am tired of you kids thinking you can just do anything you want. Well, you can''t and you need to learn that there are consequences to your actions."'
-		'She seems really pissed. You try tt come up with anything to defuse the situation, but she is having none of it. She interupts you before you even get a word out. "I don''t want to hear any of your feeble excuses!"'
+		'She seems really pissed. You try to come up with anything to defuse the situation, but she is having none of it. She interrupts you before you even get a word out. "I don''t want to hear any of your feeble excuses!"'
 		act 'Not the ear':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/caughtpr3.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1148,7 +1148,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught3':
 				'She twists you ear so painfully that tears well up in your eyes. She forces you down on all fours on the floor, slides her foot forward and forces your head down. "Lick my shoes clean" When you hesitate, she twists your ear hard enough you think she is about to rip if off the side of your head. Not having much of a choice, you start licking her shoes. After you do as you are told, she lets go of your ear and instead directs you on how to lick her shoes. You are tempted to stop, but you know she will just grab your ear again, or worse, so you do as you are instructed.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation'
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'This is not fair':
+				act 'This isn''t fair':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/caughtpr5.jpg"></center>'
 					'As you lick her shoes, she reaches down, grabs you by the hair and twists it painfully in her hand before painfully yanking you to your feet. She then pushes you forward, bending you over as her hand in your hair holds you in place while her other hand pulls up your skirt and pulls your panties down around your knees.'
@@ -1160,12 +1160,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught3':
 					if detention_set = 0:
 						detention_set = 1
 						gs 'pain', 2, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
-						'Once your bare ass is exposed, she begins to spank it with her open hand. She uses the full force of her swings to deliver stinging slaps to your bare ass and spanks you until your ass is cherry red. She only stops when her hand starts to hurt too much to continue. She finally lets go of you and steps away. "In addition, you will report to detention this weekend. Now get your ass to class! I don''t want to catch you cutting class again, you understand?" You nod your head and wipe away the tears before you straighten up your clothes and go to class.'
+						'Once your bare ass is exposed, she begins to spank it with her open hand. She uses the full force of her swings to deliver stinging slaps to your bare ass and spanks you until your ass is bright red. She only stops when her hand starts to hurt too much to continue. She finally lets go of you and steps away. "In addition, you will report to detention this weekend. Now get your ass to class! I don''t want to catch you cutting class again, you understand?" You nod your head and wipe away the tears before you straighten up your clothes and go to class.'
 					else
 						gs 'pain', 2, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
-						'Once your bare ass is exposed, she begins to spank it with her open hand. She uses the full force of her swings to deliver stinging slaps to your bare ass and spanks you until your ass is cherry red. She only stops when her hand starts to hurt too much to continue. She finally lets go of you and steps away.' 
+						'Once your bare ass is exposed, she begins to spank it with her open hand. She uses the full force of her swings to deliver stinging slaps to your bare ass and spanks you until your ass is bright red. She only stops when her hand starts to hurt too much to continue. She finally lets go of you and steps away.' 
 !!Todo: Has to be written
-!!						'"In addition you will report to my office after school. Now get your ass to class and I don''t want to catch you cutting class again, you understand?" You nod your head and wipe away the tears, you straighten up your clothes and go to class.'
+!!						'"In addition you will report to my office after school. Now get your ass to class! I don''t want to catch you playing truant again, you understand?" You nod your head and wipe away the tears as you straighten up your clothes and go to class.'
 					end
 					act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end

locations/gschool_lessonsev1.qsrc

@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 		pcs_mood += 20
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizperand5.jpg"></center>'
-		'Ivan offers to help you with a workout on the exercise balls. Lariska is enthusiastic about the idea and asks if she can join in too; of course you agree. After you and Lariska each fetch a ball and get ready, Ivan has you do all sorts of stretches and exercises. After a while, you realize that in every pose Ivan suggests, you are showing off either your breasts or your ass. One look at his face confirms that this was his intention all along. Ivan is having the time of his life ''coaching'' the two of you. With a lewd smile, you redouble your efforts and show off your ass as much as you can.'
+		'Ivan offers to help you with a workout on the exercise balls. Lariska is enthusiastic about the idea and asks if she can join in. You agree and after you and Lariska each fetch a ball and get ready, Ivan has you do all sorts of stretches and exercises. After a while, you realize that in every pose Ivan suggests, you are showing off either your breasts or your ass. One look at his face confirms that this was his intention all along. Ivan is having the time of his life ''coaching'' the two of you. With a lewd smile, you redouble your efforts and show off your ass as much as you can.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	elseif fizperand = 5 and temper >= 20 and sunWeather = 1 and hotcat >= 6:
@@ -44,9 +44,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 		'During gym class, you hear a commotion from one side and you look over to see two boys shoving each other. They are from your brother''s grade and the first one shoves the second one again and it quickly starts escalating. A few punches are thrown and soon the two of them are down on the ground fighting. The coach rushes over and quickly pulls them apart, before sending them straight to the principal.'
 	elseif fizperand = 7:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/tinydick.jpg"></center>'
-		'During a break in gym class, you and several other girls are talking when Igor wanders over and tries to chat you all up. You find his efforts amusing at best and you can tell they aren''t working on the other girls either, yet he seems to think he is just oozing cool and keeps chatting up the lot of you. Suddenly, Vitek rushes over behind him, grabs his shorts and yanks them down to his ankles.'
+		'During a break in gym class, you and several other girls are talking when Igor wanders over and tries to chat you all up. You find his efforts amusing at best and you can tell they aren''t working on the other girls either, yet he seems to think he is just oozing cool and keeps chatting up the lot of you. Suddenly, Vitek rushes up behind him, grabs his shorts and yanks them down to his ankles.'
 		*nl
-		'Unfortunately for Igor, his underwear went with the shorts and now he''s standing half naked in front of a bunch of girls. What''s worse is that now everyone can see how tiny his dick is, making you and the others gasp and giggle, several girls even pointing and laughing loudly. Soon the whole class is in stitches, Igor desperately trying to pull up his shorts and failing, all while cursing at Vitek and calling him all kinds of names. You almost feel sorry for him; not only is he a terrible flirt, but the whole class has seen his tiny dick.'
+		'Unfortunately for Igor, his underwear went with the shorts and now he''s standing half naked in front of a bunch of girls. What''s worse is that now everyone can see how tiny his dick is, making you and the others gasp and giggle, several girls even pointing and laughing loudly. Soon the whole class is in stitches as Igor desperately tries to pull up his shorts and fails, all while cursing at Vitek and calling him all kinds of names. You almost feel sorry for him; not only is he a terrible flirt, but the whole class has seen his tiny dick.'
 	elseif fizperand = 8 and $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/wedgie.jpg"></center>'
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 				gs 'stat'
 				grupvalue[2] +=1
-				'He starts to back up, but you manage to kick him hard in the shin, causing him to hop around on one leg while holding his shin in pain, which causes the others to laugh harder at him. A few of the other girls give the guys dirty looks and walk over to give you moral support and use their bodies to shield you from the rest of the class so you can peel your panties out of your ass, putting everything back in it''s proper place.'
+				'He starts to back up, but you manage to kick him hard in the shin, causing him to hop around on one leg while holding his shin in pain, which causes the others to laugh harder at him. A few of the other girls give the guys dirty looks and walk over to give you moral support and use their bodies to shield you from the rest of the class so you can peel your panties out of your ass and put everything back in it''s proper place.'
 				act 'End of lesson':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 			end
 		else
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/beathisass.jpg"></center>'
 				'Your first kick catches him on the shin, causing him to hop around on one leg. Not expecting any more, his attention wanders and he doesn''t see you charging him. You bash into him, knocking him to the floor, and quickly climb on top of him. You start furiously punching him in the face, beating him senseless in front of everyone.'
 				*nl
-				'He is stunned by this sudden and vicious attack and tries to block your incoming blows, to no avail. Luckily for him, the coach arrives just in time. The coach grabs you by the back of the neck and pulls you off Dan with a powerful yank, causing you to stumble backwards and almost fall on your back. He then steps between the two of you, stopping you from going at it again, and turns to you. "Go to the principal''s office, NOW!" You try and protest, but he doesn''t want to hear it and points sternly at the door.'
+				'He is stunned by this sudden and vicious attack and tries to block your incoming blows, to no avail. Luckily for him, the coach arrives just in time. The coach grabs you by the back of the neck and effortlessly pulls you off of Dan with a powerful yank, causing you to stumble backwards and almost fall on your back. He then steps between the two of you, stopping you from going at it again, and turns to you. "Go to the principal''s office, NOW!" You try to protest, but he doesn''t want to hear it and points sternly at the door.'
 				'You begrudingly walk out as the coach helps Dan to his feet. Everyone is stunned or amused by your actions - some of the gopniks even look a little impressed.'
 				act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 			end
@@ -94,20 +94,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 	elseif fizperand = 10 and hotcat >= 5 and pav_slut >= 150:
 		cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/supply.jpg"></center>'
-		'The coach asks you to help him get some equipment out of the storage room. You go along and he starts pointing out several things you need for the class. He gets uncomfortably close and touches you way more than is necessary. At one point, you are reaching for something high on a shelf and he stands so close behind you, you can feel his crotch against your ass as his hands grip your waist. "Careful we wouldn''t want you to fall, let me steady you." He says.'
+		'The coach asks you to help him get some equipment out of the storage room. You go along and he starts pointing out several things you need for the class. He gets uncomfortably close and touches you way more than is necessary. At one point, you are reaching for something high on a shelf and he stands so close behind you, you can feel his dick against your ass as his hands grip your waist. "Careful! We wouldn''t want you to fall now, so let me steady you." he says.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'
 		act 'Do nothing':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/storage1.jpg"></center>'
-			'When you don''t object his hands slide up under your shirt and squeeze your boobs, then he pulls your shirt off over your head before you can even protest.'
+			'When you don''t object, his hands slide under your shirt and squeeze your breasts. He then pulls your shirt over your head before you can even protest.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'sub'
 			act 'Say nothing': gt 'gschool_sex', 'storagesex'
 			act 'Tell him no':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/storageno.jpg"></center>'
 				'You jerk away from him and snatch your shirt out of his hand. "Mr Pavlovich, I''m not that kind of girl."'
-				'He laughs. "Thats not what I hear."'
-				'He give him a dirty look and put your shirt back on and storm out.'
+				'He laughs. "That''s not what I hear."'
+				'You give him a dirty look and put your shirt back on before storming out.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				act 'End of lesson':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 			end
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizperand6.jpg"></center>'
-				'You decide to have a little fun of your own. You ''accidentally'' drop something while he is keeping you steady. You bend over at the waist, pushing your ass back against his crotch. You grind yourself against him and you can feel him getting hard. You pick up the dropped item and quickly stand up before heading out of the room. You glance back and flash him a sweet smile, noticing he''s trying to hide the erection in his shorts. You add a bit of a extra sway to your hips as you walk away.'
+				'You decide to have a little fun of your own. You ''accidentally'' drop something while he is keeping you steady. You bend over to pick it up, pushing your ass up against his crotch. You grind yourself against him and you can feel him getting hard. You pick up the dropped item and quickly stand up before heading out of the room. You glance back and flash him a sweet smile, noticing he''s trying to hide the erection in his shorts. You add a bit of extra sway to your hips as you walk away.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -197,7 +197,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 4:
 			cla
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Dan''s hand away, but he jerks it away and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your breasts. You squeak loudly and try to smack Dan''s hand away, but he jerks it away and all you manage to do is smack your breast.'
 			*nl
 			'You hear Miss Orlov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Dan snickers behind you. Miss Orlov looks at you curiously.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -356,7 +356,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 			'Lavrenti quickly wiggles himself out, gets the desk upright again and hurriedly sits down again, blushing furiously all the while. After making sure he is OK, Miss Orlov gets the class back under control and finishes the lesson.'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 8:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Glancing around the class, you notice Lavrenti reaching around the girl sitting in front of him and grabbing her boob. At first, she tries to fend him off and tell him to stop, but after the teacher shoots her a few dirty looks for the noise she''s making, she just gives up and tries to ignore his groping hands.'
+			'Glancing around the class, you notice Lavrenti reaching around the girl sitting in front of him and grabbing her breast. At first, she tries to fend him off and tell him to stop, but after the teacher shoots her a few dirty looks for the noise she''s making, she just gives up and tries to ignore his groping hands.'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 9:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/dickpic.jpg"></center>'
 			'You get an alert on your phone. After quickly checking that Miss Orlov is busy, you sneakily pull it out of your purse and rest it in your lap. You lean back a bit, glancing down to see that someone has sent you an image. You open it up, expecting something innocent - only to be confronted by a photo of someone''s dick. You hear snickering from one side and look up to investigate, but you can''t tell who it was or exactly where it came from. Unsure what to do about it, you decide that you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
@@ -886,7 +886,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 3:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Vasily''s hand away, but he jerks it away and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your breasts. You squeak loudly and try to smack Vasily''s hand away, but he jerks it away and all you manage to do is smack your breast.'
 			*nl
 			'You hear Mr. Ivanov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Vasily snickers behind you. Mr. Ivanov looks at you curiously.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -1039,7 +1039,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 6:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Glancing around the class, you notice Vasily reaching around the girl sitting in front of him and grabbing her boob. At first, she tries to fend him off and tell him to stop, but after Mr. Ivanov shoots her a few dirty looks for the noise she''s making, she just gives up and tries to ignore his groping hands.'
+			'Glancing around the class, you notice Vasily reaching around the girl sitting in front of him and grabbing her breast. At first, she tries to fend him off and tell him to stop, but after Mr. Ivanov shoots her a few dirty looks for the noise she''s making, she just gives up and tries to ignore his groping hands.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 7:
 			if soniaPS = 1:
@@ -1054,7 +1054,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 8:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/soniaflash.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear some whispers and see some other students looking towards the back of the room every time Mr. Ivanov isn''t looking. You glance back and see Sonia flashing her boobs at Artem every time Mr. Ivanov looks away, while the other boys take pictures of her each time and keep encouraging her to show more.'
+			'You hear some whispers and see some other students looking towards the back of the room every time Mr. Ivanov isn''t looking. You glance back and see Sonia flashing her breasts at Artem every time Mr. Ivanov looks away, while the other boys take pictures of her each time and keep encouraging her to show more.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1410,7 +1410,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 22:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/computer/soniashirt.jpg"></center>'
-			'At the end of class, Mr. Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. As your fellow students finish it, some of them get up and start checking out some of the computer books Mr. Ivanov has available in class. Sonia sits on one of the desks, her legs slightly spread and showing off her panties as she unbuttons her shirt until you can see between her boobs. Mr. Ivanov scolds her "Sit down and button your shirt."'
+			'At the end of class, Mr. Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. As your fellow students finish it, some of them get up and start checking out some of the computer books Mr. Ivanov has available in class. Sonia sits on one of the desks, her legs slightly spread and showing off her panties as she unbuttons her shirt until you can see between her breasts. Mr. Ivanov scolds her "Sit down and button your shirt."'
 			'Sonia smiles to him seductively. "I thought you liked what you saw?"'
 			'He blushes and repeats himself. "Sit down now." Sonia, with a bemused smile, sits back in her chair and slowly buttons her shirt back up.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
@@ -1504,7 +1504,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 8 and soniaPS = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/soniaflash.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear some whispers and see some other students looking towards the back of the room every time Mr. Yenotin is not looking. You glance back and see Sonia flashing her boobs at Marcus every time Mr. Yenotin looks away, while the boys take pictures of her each time and keep encouraging her to show more.'
+			'You hear some whispers and see some other students looking towards the back of the room every time Mr. Yenotin is not looking. You glance back and see Sonia flashing her breasts at Marcus every time Mr. Yenotin looks away, while the boys take pictures of her each time and keep encouraging her to show more.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'

locations/gschool_lessonsev2.qsrc

@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 4:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Glancing over, you notice Vitek reaching around and grabbing the boob of the girl in front of him. At first she tries to fend him off and tell him to stop, but after a few looks from Mrs. Sokoloff at her making noise, she just gives up and tries to ignore his groping hands.'
+			'Glancing over, you notice Vitek reaching around and grabbing the breast of the girl in front of him. At first she tries to fend him off and tell him to stop, but after a few looks from Mrs. Sokoloff at her making noise, she just gives up and tries to ignore his groping hands.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -753,7 +753,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 4:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Roman''s hand away, but he jerks it away and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your breasts. You squeak loudly and try to smack Roman''s hand away, but he jerks it away and all you manage to do is smack your breast.'
 			*nl
 			'You hear Mrs. Sokoloff. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Roman snickering behind you. Mrs. Sokoloff looks at you curiously.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -1211,7 +1211,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 5:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Dan''s hand away, but he jerks it away and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your breasts. You squeak loudly and try to smack Dan''s hand away, but he jerks it away and all you manage to do is smack your breast.'
 			*nl
 			'You hear Mr. Kuznetsov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Dan snickering behind you. Mr. Kuznetsov looks at you curiously.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -1360,7 +1360,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 7:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Glancing over, you notice Vitek reaching around and grabbing the boob of the girl in front of him. At first, she tries to fend him off and tell him to stop, but after a few looks from Mr. Kuznetsov at her making noise, she just gives up and tries to ignore his groping hands.'
+			'Glancing over, you notice Vitek reaching around and grabbing the breast of the girl in front of him. At first, she tries to fend him off and tell him to stop, but after a few looks from Mr. Kuznetsov at her making noise, she just gives up and tries to ignore his groping hands.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'

locations/gschool_lessonsev3.qsrc

@@ -634,7 +634,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 9:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/english/lenlerbras.jpg"></center>'
-			'Near the end of class Lena, Lera and Radomir are talking. As he is bragging about some girl he banged recently, Lena and Lera exchange looks and then pull their shirts open to show off their bras. This causes Radomir to stammer in mid sentence as he gets distracted by the boobs neatly on display in front of him. After he stops talking, they laugh and pull their shirts closed, which causes him to grumble.'
+			'Near the end of class Lena, Lera and Radomir are talking. As he is bragging about some girl he banged recently, Lena and Lera exchange looks and then pull their shirts open to show off their bras. This causes Radomir to stammer in mid sentence as he gets distracted by the breasts neatly on display in front of him. After he stops talking, they laugh and pull their shirts closed, which causes him to grumble.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -911,7 +911,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 6:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Radomir''s hand away, but he jerks it away and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your breasts. You squeak loudly and try to smack Radomir''s hand away, but he jerks it away and all you manage to do is smack your breast.'
 			*nl
 			'You hear you Mr. Vasilyev. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Radomir snickering behind you. Mr. Vasilyev looks at you curiously.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -1390,7 +1390,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 7:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/soniaflash.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear some whispers and see some other students looking towards the back every time Mr. Vasilyev is not looking. You glance back and see Anushka flashing her boobs at Erast every time Mr. Vasilyev looks away, while the boys take pictures of her each time and keep encouraging her to show more.'
+			'You hear some whispers and see some other students looking towards the back every time Mr. Vasilyev is not looking. You glance back and see Anushka flashing her breasts at Erast every time Mr. Vasilyev looks away, while the boys take pictures of her each time and keep encouraging her to show more.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'

locations/gschool_office.qsrc

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'principal':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Principal''s Office</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/principal/office.jpg"></center>'
-	'The office is, in a word, impressive: It must have cost a full year''s worth of the school''s budget to decorate it. At least now you know why so much of the rest of the school has cracked and faded paint, or is in need of repair that never seems to happen - all the money is spent on this one room.'
+	'The office is, in a word, impressive: It must have cost a full year''s worth of the school''s budget to decorate it. At least now you know why so much of the school is in dire need of repair and it never seems to happen - all the money is spent on this one room.'
 	*nl
 	if detention_set = 2:
 		'You take a seat at Miss Volkov''s desk and wait for her to address you with an exacerbated tone: "I usually give pupils the choice of detention so that I don''t have to punish them personally, but you have abused my leniency one time too many. I''m going to teach you not to insult my kindness." She is clearly angry and you can almost already feel the pain on your ass that you are about to receive.'
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'principal':
 			act 'Get spanked': gt 'gschool_office', 'spanked'
 		end
 !!		if demerit >= 50:act 'Choose suspension': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'suspension'
-!!		act 'Call Parents': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'Call Parents' - I will add this one in later as it will be a bit of work to write and tie in events at home.
+!!		act 'Call parents': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'call parents' - I will add this one in later as it will be a bit of work to write and tie in events at home.
 	elseif demerit > 20:
 		'You take a seat at her desk and wait for Miss Volkov to address you. "This is becoming a routine with you; I feel like I am seeing you every day! What has changed, <<$pcs_lastname>>? You used to be such a good girl, perhaps a bit quiet, but now? This is not the way to get attention." She looks over your file some more and shakes her head slightly.'
 		'"We can''t have you keep getting in trouble like this - I will have to punish you." She looks directly at you for a moment to make sure you understand that when you cause problems, you will be getting punished. "I believe in giving the students a voice in their future, so I will let you decide: Saturday detention, or a spanking, right now - which will it be?"'
@@ -84,13 +84,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spanked':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/schoolspank.jpg"></center>'
 				'Once you walk over to her, Miss Volkov pulls you down across her knees, pulls up your skirt and gives your ass a hard smack with her hand. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank you with enough force to teach you a lesson.'
-				*nl
-				'With each hit, you give a moan, soft at first but getting louder each time she strikes. "Stop that!" she says and gives you the hardest smack on your ass yet. You moan even louder and wiggle your ass a bit.'
+				'With each hit, you let out a moan, soft at first but getting louder each time she strikes. "Stop that!" she says and gives you the hardest smack on your ass yet. You moan even louder and wiggle your ass a bit.'
 				*nl
 				'"Oh yes, Miss Volkov, yes please! Harder, harder!" you beg as if you were on the verge of an orgasm. "Yes, spank me! Spank me harder and I promise to be your special, little, bad girl..." you say with a giggle.'
 				*nl
 				'To her credit, she doesn''t relent and even manages to spank you harder. After another a minute or two of this, however, she roughly lifts you off her knees and back on your feet. She points at the door, her voice quivering with anger: "Back to class now, before I give you detention as well!" Not wanting detention, you don''t say anymore and head for the door, putting a bit of extra sway into your hips as you go.'
-							
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'maso', 'rough'
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -133,8 +131,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spanked':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/schoolbarespank.jpg"></center>'
 				'Once you walk over to her, Miss Volkov pulls you down across her knees and pulls your skirt up and your panties down to your knees, exposing your bare ass before she gives it a hard smack with her hand. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows sting quite a bit. She is obviously trying to spank you with enough force to teach you a lesson.'
-				*nl
-				'With each hit, you give a moan, soft at first but getting louder each time she strikes. "Stop that!" she says and gives you the hardest smack on your ass yet. You moan even louder and wiggle your ass a little.'
+				'With each hit, you let out a moan, soft at first but getting louder each time she strikes. "Stop that!" she says and gives you the hardest smack on your ass yet. You moan even louder and wiggle your ass a little.'
 				*nl
 				'"Oh yes, Miss Volkov, yes please! Harder, harder!" you beg as if you were on the verge of an orgasm. "Yes, spank me! Spank me harder and I promise to be your special, little, bad girl!" you say with a giggle.'
 				*nl
@@ -184,13 +181,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spanked':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/schoolpaddle2.jpg"></center>'
 				'You walk over to her, swaying your hips. You pull your panties down to your knees and lay across her legs, biting your lower lips and looking back up at her expectantly. Miss Volkov tries to ignore your look and picks up a leather paddle which she smacks hard across your bare ass. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows really sting - but a soft moan escapes you. She is obviously trying to spank you with enough force to teach you a lesson.'
-				*nl
 				'With each hit, you''re getting louder. She smacks your ass even harder, really putting her shoulder into it now, but all it does is cause you to respond with a louder groan and a wiggle of your ass. She looks a little troubled, like she is unsure if this is working at all, but the troubled look only lasts a second and her face hardens into an expression of stern, if not stubborn, resolve.'
 				*nl
 				'"Oh yes, Miss Volkov, yes please! Harder, harder!" you beg as if you were on the verge of an orgasm. "Yes, spank me! Spank me harder and I promise to be your special, little, bad girl. Oh god, you are making me so wet!" you say in a husky tone.'
 				*nl
 				'To her credit, she doesn''t relent and even manages to spank you harder. After another a minute or two of this, she roughly lifts you off her knees and back on your feet. She points at the door, her voice quivering with anger... but also uncertainty: "Back to class now, before this gets worse for you!" You head for the door, putting a bit of extra sway into your hips and very slowly pulling your panties back up as you go, giving her an extra-long look at your cherry-red cheeks.'
-								
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'maso', 'rough'
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -219,7 +214,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spanked':
 				'You silently take your punishment. It almost brings you to tears, but a part of you gets turned on by it as well... a circumstance you don''t want her to know about. You don''t have to play along much to hide it either: It <b>really</b> stings, even if you are enjoying it too, so you wither around and whimper as she spanks you for a good solid minute or three, until your ass is bright red and feels like it''s radiating heat.'
 				*nl
 				'She then lifts you back to your feet and rubs your arm. "I hope this has taught you a lesson; I don''t want to see you in my office anymore, <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can return to your classes now." With that, she goes back to her desk and you pull your panties up before heading back to class.'
-							
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'maso', 'rough'
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -233,7 +227,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spanked':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/aleksandrina/sex/school/schoolpaddle1.jpg"></center>'
 				'You walk over to her, swaying your hips. You pull your panties down to your knees and lay across her legs, biting your lower lips and looking back up at her expectantly. Miss Volkov tries to ignore your look and picks up a large wooden paddle which she smacks hard across your bare ass. You jerk a bit in reflex - she is a strong woman and her blows really sting - but a soft moan escapes you. She is obviously trying to spank you with enough force to teach you a lesson.'
-				*nl
 				'With each hit, you''re getting louder. She smacks your ass even harder, really putting her shoulder into it now, but all it does is cause you to respond with a louder groan and a wiggle of your ass. She looks a little troubled, like she is unsure if this is working at all, but the troubled look only lasts a second and her face hardens into an expression of stern, if not stubborn, resolve.'
 				*nl
 				'"Oh yes, Miss Volkov>, yes please! Harder, harder!" you beg as if you were on the verge of an orgasm. "Yes, spank me! Spank me harder and I promise to be your special, little, bad girl. Oh god, you are making me so wet!" you say in a husky tone.'
@@ -645,16 +638,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ivanov_revenge':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Principal''s Office</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/principal/office.jpg"></center>'
-	'The office is, in a word, impressive: It must have cost a full year''s worth of the school''s budget to decorate it. At least now you know why so much of the rest of the school has cracked and faded paint, or is in need of repair that never seems to happen - all the money is spent on this one room. As Mr. Ivanov drags you into the office you see Miss Volkov''s sitting behind the desk. She looks up at once. "Whats the meaning of this?"'
-	'Mr. Ivanov lets go of you and says. "I caught her in the bathroom doing some kind of drugs, before I could grab the bagging from her she flushed it down the toilet."'
-	'You start to say something but one look from Miss Volkov silences you, you know your only chance is if she believes you and disobeying her won''t help. She looks at him a moment and then to you. "This is very serious it carries a one week suspension, is this true?"'
+	'The office is, in a word, impressive: It must have cost a full year''s worth of the school''s budget to decorate it. At least now you know why so much of the school is in dire need of repair and it never seems to happen - all the money is spent on this one room. As Mr. Ivanov drags you into the office you see Miss Volkov sitting behind her desk. She looks up at once. "What''s the meaning of this?"'
+	'Mr. Ivanov lets go of you and says "I caught her in the bathroom doing some kind of drugs, but she flushed them down the toilet before I could get them."'
+	'You start to say something, but one look from Miss Volkov silences you. You know your only chance is if she believes you and disobeying her won''t help. She looks at him, and then to you. "This is a very serious offence that carries a one week suspension. Is this true?"'
 	act 'Admit it':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Principal''s Office</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/principal/office.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sigh, you know there is no way anyone will believe you over Mr. Ivanov, so might as well just admit it. "Yes Miss Volkov, I was taking drugs and I am very sorry."'
-		'She leans back and regards you a moment. "I appreciate your honesty but this is very serious, I am afraid I can''t let you off with a warning. You are suspended for one week. Go wait in the outer office until one of your parents can come get you." Your heart sinks, you just nod and go wait in the outer office.'
+		'You sigh, knowing there is no way she will believe you over Mr. Ivanov. "Yes Miss Volkov, I was taking drugs and I am very sorry."'
+		'She leans back in her chair. "I appreciate your honesty, but this is very serious. I''m afraid I can''t let you off with a warning. You are suspended for one week. Go and sit in the waiting area until one of your parents can come and get you." Your heart sinks and you just nod before leaving.'
 		act 'Wait': gt 'gschool_office', 'suspended'
 	end
 	act 'Say nothing':
@@ -662,7 +655,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ivanov_revenge':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Principal''s Office</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/principal/office.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sigh, you know there is no way anyone will believe you over Mr. Ivanov, so you decided to say nothing at all. After several moments of you not talking, she leans back and regards you a moment. "I appreciate you not lying to me at least, even if you refuse to talk. You are suspended for one week. Go wait in the outer office until one of your parents can come get you." Your heart sinks, you just nod and go wait in the outer office.'
+		'You sigh, knowing there is no way she will believe you over Mr. Ivanov, so you decide to say nothing at all. After several seconds of silence, she leans back in her chair. "I appreciate you not lying to me at least, even if you refuse to talk. You are suspended for one week. Go and sit in the waiting area until one of your parents can come and get you." Your heart sinks and you just nod before leaving.'
 		act 'Wait': gt 'gschool_office', 'suspended'
 	end
 	act 'Deny it':
@@ -670,8 +663,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ivanov_revenge':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Principal''s Office</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/principal/office.jpg"></center>'
-		'You angrily reply. "I didn''t do it Miss Volkov, I wasn''t doing drugs." You glance at Mr. Ivanov. "Maybe he thought he saw it but I wasn''t I swear."'
-		'She leans back and regards you a moment. "I would like to believe you, but you was obviously skipping class, so it is not a stretch to believe you was doing more than that, I am afraid I can''t let you off with a warning. You are suspended for one week. Go wait in the outer office until one of your parents can come get you." Your heart sinks, you just nod and go wait in the outer office.'
+		'"I wasn''t doing drugs! I didn''t do anything!" you angrily reply while glancing at Mr. Ivanov. "I don''t know what he thought he saw, but I wasn''t doing what he says I did."'
+		'She leans back in her chair. "I would like to believe you, but you were obviously skipping class, so it''s not a stretch to believe you were doing more than that. I''m afraid I can''t let you off with a warning. You''re suspended for one week. Go and sit in the waiting area until one of your parents can come and get you." Your heart sinks and you just nod before leaving.'
 		act 'Wait': gt 'gschool_office', 'suspended'
 	end
 	act 'Say he is lying':
@@ -679,11 +672,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ivanov_revenge':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Principal''s Office</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/principal/office.jpg"></center>'
-		'You angrily reply. "I didn''t do it Miss Volkov, he''s lying, he tried to blackmail me into having sex with him."'
-		'She leans back and regards you a moment. "That''s a very serious accusation miss. Do you have any proof of this?"'
-		'You shake your head no. "No just my word."'
+		'"He''s lying! He tried to blackmail me into having sex with him!" you angrily reply.'
+		'She leans back in her chair. "That''s a very serious accusation Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Do you have any proof?"'
+		'You shake your head. "No, just my word."'
 		*nl
-		'She shakes her head and then says angrily to you. "I''m sorry but if Mr. Ivanov says he saw you, I am inclinded to believe him. He has no reason to lie, as for your accusation, well I just don''t believe he would ever do that. I never thought you would stoop to such low tactics to keep out of trouble to try and ruin a mans reputation? Shame on you. You are suspended for one week, if I could I would expel you. Now go wait in the outer office until one of your parents can come get you." Your heart sinks, you just nod and go wait in the outer office.'
+		'She shakes her head. "I''m sorry, but if Mr. Ivanov says he saw you, then I am inclinded to believe him since he has no reason to lie. As for your accusation, I just don''t believe he would ever do that. I never thought you would resort to such tactics to try and keep yourself out of trouble. Shame on you! You are suspended for one week, but I would expel you if I could. Now go and sit in the waiting area until one of your parents can come and get you." Your heart sinks and you just nod before leaving.'
 		act 'Wait': gt 'gschool_office', 'suspended'
 	end
 end
@@ -698,7 +691,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'suspended':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Office</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big29.jpg"></center>'
-	'You wait around for half a hour, when your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shows up and she looks about as pissed as you have ever seen her. She walks over, you start to open your mouth but she interrupts you. "I don''t want to hear it, you know how ashamed I am of you right now? They called me at work, so I had to come get you. Now everyone at work knows. You are so selfish, all you have to do is go to school and get good grades. But apparently that is to hard for you." She grabs you arm and drags you out of the school. She lectures you the whole way, in fact she never stops talking until she drops you off at the apartment. "Now I have to go back to work, make yourself useful for once and clean this place up." Then before you can reply she walks out and slams the door'
+	'You wait for half an hour until your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shows up and she looks about as pissed as you have ever seen her. She walks over and you start to open your mouth, but she interrupts you. "I don''t want to hear it! Do you know how ashamed I am of you right now? They called me at work and told me to come and get you. Now everyone at work knows! You are so selfish! All you have to do is behave yourself and get good grades, but that''s apparently too hard for you."' 
+	'She grabs your arm and drags you out of the school. She lectures you the whole way home, in fact she never stops talking until she drops you off at the apartment. "I have to go back to work, so make yourself useful for once and clean this place up." She walks out and slams the door before you can reply.'
 	act 'Now what': gt 'korrPar'
 end
 

locations/gschool_sex.qsrc

@@ -11,9 +11,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'suck':
 	else
 		cla
 		if gruptipe ! 4:
-			'Vitek and some of the other gopniks are waiting for you outside the school. "Hold on <<$pcs_nickname>>. Everyone in school says you''re a great cocksucker. Do you want to put that mouth of yours to work? Come back to school with us, let''s have some fun."'
+			'Vitek and some of the other gopniks are waiting for you outside the school. "Hold up <<$pcs_nickname>>. Everyone says you''re a great cocksucker and I want you to prove it. Come with us and have some fun."'
 		else
-			'Vitek and some of the other gopniks are waiting for you outside the school. "Hold on <<$pcs_nickname>>. Let''s have a little fun before we go home."'
+			'Vitek and some of the other gopniks are waiting for you outside the school. "Hold up <<$pcs_nickname>>. Let''s have a little fun before we go home."'
 		end
 		act 'Return to school':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -22,8 +22,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'suck':
 			minut += 15
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/boysbathroom.jpg"></center>'
-			'You return to school with the guys, a hand groping your ass as you walk through the hallway. You pretend to ignore it and just keep walking, but your heart is racing. The guys pull you into the men''s room and Vitek says "Get on your knees slut." as he is pulling his dick out of his pants.'
-			act 'Suck Vitek''s cock':
+			'You return to school with the guys, a hand groping your ass as you walk through the hallway. You pretend to ignore it and just keep walking, but your heart is racing as they pull you into the men''s room. "Get on your knees slut!" Vitek snarls as he pulls his dick out of his pants.'
+			act 'Suck his dick':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 15
 				stat['bj'] += 3
@@ -32,9 +32,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'suck':
 				if npc_Sex['A11'] = 0: npc_Sex['A11'] = 1 & guy += 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/group/toiletbjtreesome.jpg"></center>'
-				'You obediently squat and start stroking Vitek''s dick with your hand, getting it rock hard. You rub his hard cock against your <<$liptalk3>>, then open your mouth and begin to suck his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock. After making sure no one is coming, Dan and Vasily also approach you and take out their dicks, pointing them at you expectantly. Now sucking the dicks of all three boys in turns, you do your best to please the ones you''re not sucking by jerking them in your hands.'
+				'You obediently squat and start stroking Vitek''s dick with your hand, getting it rock hard. You rub his hard cock against your <<$liptalk3>>, then open your mouth and begin to suck his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock. After making sure no one is coming, Dan and Vasily also approach you and take out their dicks, pointing them at you expectantly. Now sucking the dicks of all three boys in turn, you do your best to please the ones you''re not sucking by jerking them off.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'group', 'sub'
-				act 'Take their cum on your face':
+				act 'Let them cum on your face':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 15
 					stat['bj'] += 3
@@ -48,13 +48,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'suck':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/group/toiletbjcum.jpg"></center>'
 					if gruptipe ! 4:
-						'You close your eyes to fully focus on what you''re doing, and a few minutes later you feel the dick that''s currently in your mouth spasm. Several ropes of cum hit your tongue; it tastes rather bitter. Carefully opening one eye, you see that it is Vitek''s. The other two tell you to keep your eyes closed, and Dan shoots his load on your face before you can even comply. Luckily, he didn''t hit the eye that was open. You obediently close them, and a few seconds later you feel Vasily''s cum splattering against your eye lids and cheek.'
+						'You close your eyes to fully focus on what you''re doing, and a few minutes later you feel the dick that''s currently in your mouth spasm. Several ropes of cum hit your tongue; it tastes rather bitter. Carefully opening one eye, you see that it''s Vitek''s. The other two tell you to keep your eyes closed, and Dan shoots his load across your face before you can even comply. Luckily, he didn''t hit the eye that was open. You obediently close them, and a few seconds later you feel Vasily''s cum splattering against your eye lids and cheek.'
 						*nl
 						'You hear the click of a camera and open your eyes after wiping the cum off your face. They pull up their pants and leave, laughing at how much of a slut you are and how they had never thought you would actually come with them.'
 					else
-						'You close your eyes to fully focus on what you''re doing, and a few minutes later you feel the dick that''s currently in your mouth spasm. Several ropes of cum hit your tongue; it tastes rather bitter. Carefully opening one eye, you see that it is Vitek''s. As soon as you open your eye, Dan tells you "Keep your eyes closed." as he shoots his load on your face before you can even comply. Luckily, he didn''t hit the eye that was open. You obediently close them, and a few seconds later you feel Vasily''s cum splattering against your eye lids and cheek. You open your eyes after wiping the cum off your face.'
+						'You close your eyes to fully focus on what you''re doing, and a few minutes later you feel the dick that''s currently in your mouth spasm. Several ropes of cum hit your tongue; it tastes rather bitter. Carefully opening one eye, you see that it''s Vitek''s. As soon as you open your eye, Dan tells you to "keep your eyes closed" as he shoots his load on your face before you can even comply. Luckily, he didn''t hit the eye that was open. You obediently close them, and a few seconds later you feel Vasily''s cum splattering against your eye lids and cheek. You open your eyes after wiping the cum off your face.'
 						*nl
-						'They wait for you to get cleaned up and walk you out as they laugh and talk. "Damn <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re the best slut around! Maybe next time we can fuck you as well." Dan says as the four of you walk out of the school. Once outside the boys peel off, but Vasily lags behind a bit and turns back to you "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, come by my place later and we can study." he says with a laugh, then turns and catches back up with the others.'
+						'They wait for you to get cleaned up and walk you out as they laugh and talk. "Damn <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re the best slut around! Maybe next time we can fuck you as well." Dan says as the four of you walk out of the school. Once outside the boys peel off, but Vasily lags behind a bit and turns back to you. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, come by my place later and we can study." he says with a laugh, then turns and catches back up with the others.'
 					end
 
 					act 'Leave the school building':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'suck':
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/teasefo.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You shake your head. "Sorry boys, but I''ve got stuff I have to do. You''ll just have to suck each other off today." you tell them as you walk away from them, but you do lift up your skirt to give them a nice view of your ass and put some extra hip sway into your walk. You hear Dan call you a fucking tease and turn around and stop, like you might be changing your mind and suck on two of your fingers. The boys watch intently and you can tell they are getting excited at the idea you are going to change your mind, but as you pull your fingers out of your mouth you flip them off with a smile, then giggle and walk away.'
+				'You shake your head. "Sorry boys, but I''ve got stuff I have to do. You''ll just have to suck each other off today." you tell them as you walk away, but you do lift up your skirt to give them a nice view of your ass and put some extra hip sway into your walk. You hear Dan call you "a fucking tease" and turn around and stop, like you might be changing your mind and suck on two of your fingers. The boys watch intently and you can tell they are getting excited at the idea you are going to change your mind, but as you pull your fingers out of your mouth you flip them off with a smile, then giggle and walk away.'
 				*nl
 				'Seeing you do that, you are sure they are returning the favor as they tell you to fuck off and call you a variety of names, but you don''t care. It was too funny to see the expression on their faces.'
 			end
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'suck':
 				lpp = rand(0,6) 
 				if lastlpp = lpp: jump 'ReCheck'
 				if lpp = 0:
-					'"Sorry boys... but I''ve got a dentist appointment, my tooth hurts a lot!" you say as you rub your jaw, feigning pain.'
+					'"Sorry, but I''ve got a dentist appointment, my tooth hurts a lot!" you say as you rub your jaw, feigning pain.'
 				elseif lpp = 1:
 					'"I can''t, I have some sores in my mouth."'
 				elseif lpp = 2:
@@ -128,22 +128,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool':
 	pcs_horny += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/afterschool.jpg"></center>'
-	'You go back to where you and Katja made out with Ivan. You find both of them already there talking. As soon as they see you, they both stop talking.'
+	'You go back to where you and Katja made out with Ivan and find both of them already there talking. As soon as they see you, they both stop talking.'
 	'Katja has a suspicious grin on her face while you can already see the bulge of Ivan''s cock straining against his pants as he looks at you hungrily.'
 	*nl
 	'You can tell by Katja''s look that she planned something with Ivan and you find yourself eager to find out what it is as Katja waves you over. "Well what took you? We''ve been waiting for a few minutes, come on." Before you can even respond, she takes you both by the hand and leads you down the least used wing of the school to one of the classrooms that barely sees any activity.'
 	*nl
-	'Katja pulls you into the room as Ivan stops a moment and looks back down the hall before coming in and closing the door.' 
+	'Katja pulls you into the room as Ivan stops for a moment and looks back down the hall before coming in and closing the door.' 
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		pcs_horny += 10
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/sex/doublebj.jpg"></center>'
-		'Katja and you begin kissing and pulling each other''s clothes off and within moments, you''re both naked. Breaking your kiss, you both look at Ivan, cheek to cheek. Ivan stands there with his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock in his hand, stroking it as he watches the two of you.'
+		'You and Katja begin kissing and pulling each other''s clothes off and within moments, you''re both naked. Breaking your kiss, you both look at Ivan, cheek to cheek. He stands there with his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock in his hand, stroking it as he watches the two of you.'
 		*nl
-		'Katja wastes no time. She walks over to him, pulling you along. She drops to her knees in front of him and pulls his pants the rest of the way off as you kneel down beside her.'
+		'Katja wastes no time. She walks over to him, pulling you along, and drops to her knees in front of him. She pulls his pants the rest of the way off as you kneel down beside her.'
 		*nl
-		'She pulls his hand away and takes his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into her mouth. He moans at once, even louder once she starts sucking him off, quickly offering you a turn. Licking your lips, you take Ivan''s <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth as well.'
+		'She pulls his hand away and takes his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into her mouth. He moans at once, even louder once she starts sucking him off, quickly offering you a turn. Licking your lips, you take Ivan''s cock into your mouth as well.'
 		'The two of you trade his cock back and forth between you.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'group'
 		act 'Katja wants more':
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/sex/cowgirlmissionary.jpg"></center>'
 			'Pulling away from Ivan, Katja lays down on her back. She pulls you on top of her and you are straddling her face, looking down towards her legs. Her tongue immediately begins to lap at your pussy and you feel yourself getting wet.'
 			*nl
-			'She spreads and lifts her legs up, inviting Ivan in and he wastes no time. Lowering himself between her legs, he slides his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick into her pussy and starts fucking her. Within moments, you and Ivan are kissing while Katja is getting fucked by him and her tongue probes your pussy for several minutes.'
+			'She spreads and lifts her legs up, inviting Ivan in and he wastes no time. Lowering himself between her legs, he slides his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick into her pussy and starts fucking her. You and Ivan start kissing while he fucks Katja and her tongue teases your wet pussy.'
 			'You and Katja are both moaning in pleasure as Ivan looks into your eyes and says "I want to fuck you now."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'group'
 			act 'Ivan fucks you':
@@ -162,9 +162,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/sex/69doggy.jpg"></center>'
 				'Ivan pulls out of Katja and gets up. You lean forward and begin to lick Katja''s soaking wet pussy, your tongue easily sliding inside her in place of Ivan''s dick. Ivan walks around and kneels down behind you, near Katja''s head.'
-				*nl
-				'Within seconds, you feel Ivan''s <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock slide inside of your wet pussy and he starts pounding you balls deep. Katja starts sucking his balls while he pounds your pussy. Ivan fucks you for several more minutes while you eat Katja out. Her body begins to convulse as she starts having an orgasm.'
-				*nl
+				'Within seconds, you feel Ivan''s <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock slide inside your wet pussy and he starts pounding you balls deep as Katja sucks his balls. Ivan fucks you for several more minutes while you eat Katja out. Her body begins to convulse as she starts having an orgasm.'
 				'Hearing her cum, Ivan beings to grunt and pick up the pace.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'group'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'group'
@@ -176,12 +174,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool':
 					'After her orgasm, Katja slides under you. You''re face to face and laying on her stomach, your breasts squeezed together, as she begins to kiss you.'
 					*nl
 					'Ivan starts to pant. It sounds like he is starting to get close himself. Katja reaches up with both her hands and grabs your ass, pulling your cheeks as far apart as she can. Grunting as he fucks you, Ivan understands the invitation.'
-					*nl
-					'Pulling out of your pussy and slipping his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock in your ass, he hardly misses a beat. In a single stroke, he plunges his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick balls deep in your ass. You gasp and moan in a mixture of surprise, pain and pleasure.'
+				    'Pulling out of your pussy and slipping his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your ass, he hardly misses a beat. In a single stroke, he plunges his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick balls deep into your ass. You gasp and moan in a mixture of surprise, pain and pleasure.'
 					*nl
 					'Looking down at Katja, your eyes lock and you realize now this is what she and Ivan had been talking about when you approached them earlier. You begin to pant while rubbing your clit.'
-					*nl
-					'Katja slides out from under you, kneels down next to you and watches Ivan roughly plough your ass. You begin to cry out as your body spasms in an intense orgasm.'
+					'Katja slides out from under you, kneels down next to you and watches Ivan roughly hammer your ass. You begin to cry out as your body spasms in an intense orgasm.'
 					anal_slip += 4
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'group'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'group'
@@ -196,13 +192,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/sex/katjacumkiss.jpg"></center>'
 						'Feeling you orgasm, Ivan redoubles his efforts and within minutes, he pulls out of you and begins shooting spurts of cum all over your ass and Katja''s face.'
-						*nl
-						'Ivan sits back on his heels, sweating as he catches his breath and watches Katja lick all his cum off your ass. Once she is done, you sit up next to her. Seeing the cum running down her face, you lean over and lick it off her face. You then kiss each other with your cum coated tongues, sharing Ivan''s sperm between you.'
+						'Ivan sits back on his heels, sweating as he catches his breath and watches Katja lick all his cum off your ass. Once she is done, you sit up next to her. Seeing the cum running down her face, you lean over and lick it up. You then kiss each other with your cum coated tongues, sharing Ivan''s sperm between you.'
 						'Watching this, Ivan only says one word. "Damn!"'
 						*nl
-						'You all start getting dressed and Ivan looks at the two of you. "Girls, we got to do this again some time! What do you say?"'
+						'You all start getting dressed and Ivan looks at the two of you. "Girls, we''ve got to do this again some time! What do you say?"'
 						'You look at each other and start giggling before Katja turns to look at him. "If you''re a good boy maybe. We''ll see." You both give him a look that promises, right or wrong, you want another go as badly as he does.'
-						*nl
 						'"I''m always good." he says with a laugh. He quickly finishes dressing and leaves, likely late for practice. Once he is gone, you and Katja look at each other and giggle, then leave as well.'
 						act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 					end
@@ -616,13 +610,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lunch_bj':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/boysbathroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'Hmm he is kind of cute. It could be your good deed for the day? Plus you''re kind of bored and a little horny. Making sure no one is watching you, you tell him "Alright then, come with me." You take him by the hand and quickly guide him to the men''s restroom. At first you have to pull him along, he seems to be surprised you agreed. Soon, he is eagerly leading the way and pulling you along.'
+	'Hmm, he is kind of cute. It could be your good deed for the day? Plus you''re kind of bored and a little horny. Making sure no one is watching you, you tell him "Alright then, come with me." You take him by the hand and quickly guide him to the men''s restroom. At first you have to pull him along, he seems to be surprised you agreed. Soon, he is eagerly leading the way and pulling you along.'
 	act 'Suck him off':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'a schoolboy you don''t know', rand(15,17)
 		gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/sex/lunchbrbj.jpg"></center>'
-		'After you make sure the ground is clean, you get down on your knees and pull down his pants, revealing his stiff erection. You humor him for a bit and let him thrust the purple head against your lips before you flash him a smile and close your <<$liptalk3>> around his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock. You don''t plan on taking long and quickly use all your tricks to get him to cum as quick as you can: swirling your tongue over the head, licking the shaft and sucking for all you''re worth.'
+		'After you make sure the ground is clean, you get down on your knees and pull down his pants, revealing his stiff erection. You humor him for a bit and let him thrust the tip against your lips before you flash him a smile and close your <<$liptalk3>> around his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock. You don''t plan on taking long and quickly use all your tricks to get him to cum as quick as you can: swirling your tongue over the head, licking the shaft and sucking for all you''re worth.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue':
@@ -663,7 +657,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lunch_sex':
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/sex/roofvag.jpg"></center>'
 				'You shake your head. "No, just keep fucking my pussy."'
-				'"OK..." He sounds a little disappointed. You can tell he was really hoping you would let him fuck your ass, but you don''t care. A few minutes later he pulls out and begins to stand up.'
+				'"Okay..." He sounds a little disappointed. You can tell he was really hoping you would let him fuck your ass, but you don''t care. A few minutes later he pulls out and begins to stand up.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10
 				gs 'stat'
 
@@ -702,57 +696,57 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'storagesex':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/storage1.jpg"></center>'
-	'He stands behind you and starts undressing you. Soon he has you completely naked, once he does he suddenly jerks you around to face him. No sooner are you facing him, he pushes you roughly down to your knees.'
+	'He stands behind you and starts undressing you. He soon has you completely naked and suddenly jerks you around to face him before pushing you roughly down on your knees.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Kneel':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/storage4.jpg"></center>'
-		'What awaits you is his hard dick already out in your face, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips, you can feel his wet pre-cum on your lips as he does. "Lick my dick, like a lollipop." He tells you.'
+		'What awaits you is his hard dick already out in your face. He rubs the tip of his dick against your lips and you can feel his sticky pre-cum on your lips as he does. "Lick my dick, like a lollipop." he tells you.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 	act 'Lick his dick':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/storage3.jpg"></center>'
-		'You start licking along the shaft of his dick up and down, you swirl your tongue around the head of his dick each time you reach the top again. "Enough, stop teasing me and suck it girl."'
+		'You start licking the length of his shaft, swirling your tongue around the head of his dick each time you reach the top. "Enough! Stop teasing me and suck it already!"'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Suck his dick':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/storage2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You open your mouth and take his dick into it as you wrap your lips around his shaft. You start bobbing your head and sucking his dick for a couple of minutes before he says "Stand up. So I can fuck you."'
+			'You open your mouth and wrap your lips around his shaft. You start bobbing your head and sucking his dick for a few minutes before he says "Stand up so I can fuck you."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'stat'
 			if pcs_vag = 0:
 				act 'Let him':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/storage6.jpg"></center>'
-					'He pulls you up off your knees and sits down on the bench. He pulls you over and into his lap, you staddle him and feel his dick slide into you. You slowly start riding him, fucking him. After a few minutes he slaps your ass kinda hard. "Turn around."'
+					'He pulls you up off your knees and sits down on the bench before pulling you into his lap. You straddle him and feel his dick slide into you. You slowly start riding him and after a few minutes, he slaps your ass hard. "Turn around."'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 3, 'sub'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Turn around':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/storage7.jpg"></center>'
-						'You get up and turn around, he grabs your hips and pulls you back down on his dick hard. You start fucking him again, he keeps his hands on your hips to control the pace as hard and fast. Once you are going hard and fast enough on your own, he lets go and leans back, letting you do all the work. Several minutes go by before he says. "Get up and lay on the bench."'
+						'You get up and turn around. He grabs your hips and pulls you back down onto his dick hard. You start fucking him again, and he keeps his hands on your hips to control the pace, keeping it as hard and fast as possible. Once you are going hard and fast enough on your own, he lets go and leans back, letting you do all the work. Several minutes go by before he says "Get up and lay on the bench."'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 						gs 'stat'
-						act 'Laydown':
+						act 'Lay down':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs 'boyStat', 'A131'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/storage8.jpg"></center>'
-							'You lay down on the bench and he pulls you towards the end of the bench, your legs hanging off the edge. He pulls your legs apart and kneels down between them and rubs the tip of his dick against your pussy lips, getting his tip and your pussy wet. Once he seems content that you are wet enough, he slides his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock in your pussy. You can feel him fill you nicely as he slowly pushes himself all the way inside you and starts fucking you. After several minutes, he starts groaning and you can tell he is about to cum. Suddenly he and pulls out of you.'
+							'You lay down on the bench and he pulls you towards him, causing your legs to hang off the edge. He pulls your legs apart and kneels down between them. He slides his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock back into your pussy. You can feel him filling you nicely as he slowly pushes himself all the way inside you and starts fucking you. After several minutes, he starts groaning and you can tell he is about to cum. He then suddenly pulls out of you.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Cum': 
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/storage9.jpg"></center>'
-								'Just as his dick pulls out of your pussy, you feel hot jets of cum splattering against your stomach. A couple more spurts hit your tits as well as he loudly moans, as he jerks off. Once the last spurt has landed, he rubs the tip of his dick against your stomach, wiping off the last bit of cum. Satisfied, he pulls up his pants and smiles to you. "Your reputation is well earned girl. We will have to do this again. Now get cleaned up and get home." He walks out of the storage room, leaving you naked on your knees with his cum covering your stomach and tits.'
+								'Just as his dick pulls out of your pussy, you feel hot jets of cum splattering against your stomach. A couple more spurts hit your tits as well as he loudly moans. Once the last spurt has landed, he rubs the tip of his dick against your stomach, wiping off the last bit of cum. Satisfied, he pulls up his pants and smiles at you. "Your reputation is well earned girl. We''ll have to do this again some time. Now get cleaned up and get out of here." He walks out of the storage room, leaving you naked on your knees with his cum all over you.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'sub'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'cum_call', 'tits', 'A131'
 								gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', 'A131'
 								gs 'stat'
-								act 'Leave school': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+								act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 								act 'Go take a shower':
 									*clr & cla
 									menu_off = 1
@@ -761,7 +755,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'storagesex':
 									shower_shave = 0
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/watch2.jpg"></center>'
-									'By the time you arrive in the girls locker room, you realize all the other girls have left. You quickly get undressed and head to the showers. You enjoy the sensation of the hot water on your skin. The steam filling the room gives it an almost sauna-like feel and makes you feel very relaxed.'
+									'By the time you arrive in the girls locker room, you realize all the other girls have left. You quickly get undressed and head to the showers. You enjoy the sensation of the hot water on your skin and the steam filling the room gives it an almost sauna-like feel, making you feel very relaxed.'
 									act 'Go to the locker room':
 										*clr & cla
 										minut += 5
@@ -781,9 +775,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'storagesex':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A131'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/locker5.jpg"></center>'
-				'You really don''t want him to fuck your pussy, but surely he won''t mind just fucking your ass instead. You turn around with your back facing him and get down on all fours on the bench instead, wiggling your ass at him. "Why don''t you fuck my tight little asshole instead?" you tease.'
-				'He gives you a look of slight surprise and then smiles. "I don''t mind if I do." He grabs a bottle off one of the shelves. He rubs some of the contents onto his dick and then on your asshole. You''re not sure what it is, but you can feel it''s slickness, so it''s obviously something he uses for lube.'
-				'With his dick and your asshole lubed up, he moves up behind you. You feel the tip of his dick against your anus and the pressure building up until it suddenly pops into your asshole. It hurts a little at first, but he doesn''t move, giving you a moment to relax and adjust to the feeling of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock in your ass. He then starts slowly fucking your ass, but not too deeply, letting you get use to it so it doesn''t hurt as much.'
+				'You really don''t want him to fuck your pussy, but surely he won''t mind just fucking your ass instead. You turn around with your back facing him and get down on all fours on the bench instead, wiggling your ass at him. "Why don''t you fuck my tight little asshole instead?" you say teasingly.'
+				'He gives you a look of slight surprise and then smiles. "I don''t mind if I do." He grabs a bottle off one of the shelves and rubs some of the contents onto both his dick and your asshole. You can feel it''s slickness, so it''s obviously something he uses for lube.'
+				'With his dick and your asshole lubed up, he moves up behind you. You feel the tip of his dick press against your asshole until it suddenly pops into you. It hurts a little at first, but he doesn''t move, giving you a moment to relax and adjust to the feeling of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock in your ass. He then starts slowly fucking your ass, but not too deeply, letting you get comfortable with the sensation.'
 				anal_slip += 10
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'lube'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -796,18 +790,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'storagesex':
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/storage4.jpg"></center>'
 					'You really don''t want to fuck him, but you have an idea on how to convince him to just let you suck him off. Once he lets go of the back of your head, you pull his dick out of your mouth so you can respond as he tries to pull you up. "I can''t, I''m still a virgin. Why don''t I just suck you off instead?"'
-					'He gives you a slightly disbelieving look. You don''t think he believes you, but then he nods. "Fine, but strip off so I can see your naked body." You nod and start sucking his dick again as you start taking off your clothes. He puts his hand on the back of your head and forces his dick all the way down your throat again as you strip. He starts to moan loudly, taking his hand from the back of your head. You pull your head back just in time as he grabs a hold of his dick and starts to stroke it.'
+					'He gives you a slightly disbelieving look. You don''t think he believes you, but then he nods. "Fine, but strip off so I can see your naked body." You nod and start sucking his dick again as you start taking off your clothes. He puts his hand on the back of your head and forces his dick all the way down your throat again as you strip. He starts to moan loudly, taking his hand from the back of your head. You pull your head back just in time as he grabs hold of his dick and starts to stroke it.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 					gs 'stat'
-					act 'Cum catching':
+					act 'Cum':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/locker9.jpg"></center>'
-						'With a couple more strokes, you feel hot jets of cum splattering against your cheek. A couple more spurts hit your face as well as he loudly moans. Once the last spurt has landed, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips, wiping off the last bit of cum. Satisfied, he pulls up his pants and smiles to you. "Your reputation is well earned girl. We will have to do this again. Now get cleaned up and get home." He walks out of the storage room, leaving you naked on your knees with his cum running down your cheek.'
+						'With a few strokes, you feel hot jets of cum splattering against your cheek. A few more spurts hit your face as well as he loudly moans. Once the last spurt has landed, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips, wiping off the last bit of cum. Satisfied, he pulls up his pants and smiles at you. "Your reputation is well earned girl. We''ll have to do this again some time. Now get cleaned up and get out of here." He walks out of the storage room, leaving you naked on your knees with his cum running down your face.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'sub'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A131'
 						gs 'stat'
-						act 'Leave school': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+						act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 						act 'Go take a shower':
 							*clr & cla
 							menu_off = 1
@@ -816,7 +810,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'storagesex':
 							shower_shave = 0
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/watch2.jpg"></center>'
-							'By the time you arrive in the girls locker room, you realize all the other girls have left. You quickly get undressed and head to the showers. You enjoy the sensation of the hot water on your skin. The steam filling the room gives it an almost sauna-like feel and makes you feel very relaxed.'
+							'By the time you arrive in the girls locker room, you realize all the other girls have left. You quickly get undressed and head to the showers. You enjoy the sensation of the hot water on your skin and the steam filling the room gives it an almost sauna-like feel, making you feel very relaxed.'
 							act 'Go to the locker room':
 								*clr & cla
 								minut += 5
@@ -840,10 +834,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'storagesex_anal':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/locker6.jpg"></center>'
-	'He steadily works his dick as deep into your asshole as you can comfortably take and starts fucking you harder and faster. Each time you tense up or cry out, he eases up a bit until he finds just the right spot where he can go as deep as you can take and as hard as you can handle and keeps that rhythm, pumping your ass in a fairly pleasant fucking. It starts feeling surprisingly good after a few minutes and you find yourself moaning and getting into it almost as much as he is. Just then, he pulls his dick out of your asshole. "Get on your knees." he says. You turn around and just barely get down on your knees in time.'
+	'He steadily works his dick as deep into your asshole as you can comfortably take and starts fucking you harder and faster. Each time you tense up or cry out, he eases up until he finds just the right spot where he can go as deep and as hard as you can handle and keeps that rhythm, pumping your ass in a fairly pleasant fucking. It starts feeling surprisingly good after a few minutes and you find yourself moaning and getting into it almost as much as he is. Just then, he pulls his dick out of your asshole. "Get on your knees." he says and you turn around and just barely get down on your knees in time.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
-	act 'Cum catching':
+	act 'Cum':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/locker9.jpg"></center>'
 		'With a couple more strokes, you feel hot jets of cum splattering against your cheek. A couple more spurts hit your face as well as he loudly moans. Once the last spurt has landed, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips, wiping off the last bit of cum. Satisfied, he pulls up his pants and smiles to you. "Your reputation is well earned girl. We will have to do this again. Now get cleaned up and get home." He walks out of the storage room, leaving you naked on your knees with his cum running down your cheek.'
@@ -851,7 +845,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'storagesex_anal':
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A131'
 		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Leave school': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		act 'Go take a shower':
 			*clr & cla
 			menu_off = 1
@@ -893,14 +887,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar_lockerroom':
 			'You don''t reply to his request and keep sucking his dick. You think he gets the hint as he doesn''t ask again. Maybe he is afraid if he pushes things you will just stop altogether. Regardless, you keep sucking his dick and he moans a bit louder and starts to move. At one point, he nearly slips and falls on the slick floor. Instead, you ease him down onto his back and you keep sucking his dick that way.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			act 'Cum fountain': gt 'gschool_sex', 'lazar_lockerroom_cum'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_sex', 'lazar_lockerroom_cum'
 		end
 		act 'Mount him':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'boyStat', 'A149'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/lazar/sex/school/shower/lazar6.jpg"></center>'
 			'You pull his dick out of your mouth so you can respond. "OK, lay down on your back." you tell him.'
-			'He grins and quickly lays down on his back. You straddle and mount him reverse cowgirl style. You slowly lower yourself down, guiding his cock with your hand. You feel the tip make contact with your slit and gently ease yourself down, slowly impaling yourself on his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick. You only slide about half way down his dick and already feel full, so you start riding him. You can feel his desire to buck up and drive himself deeper inside of you, but you place your hands on his hips to control the action.'
+			'He grins and quickly gets down on his back. You straddle and mount him reverse cowgirl style. You slowly lower yourself down, guiding his cock with your hand. You feel the tip make contact with your slit and gently ease yourself down, slowly impaling yourself on his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick. You only slide about half way down his dick and already feel full, so you start riding him. You can feel his desire to buck up and drive himself deeper inside of you, but you place your hands on his hips to control the action.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'dom'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Ride him':
@@ -909,7 +903,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar_lockerroom':
 				'After a few minutes, you turn around so you are facing him in the cowgirl position. As you start riding him, you slowly lower yourself down more and more until you take his full length inside of you. You feel so full and in complete control. You control the depth and the rhythm so it''s no wonder why guys like controlling the action, it is very empowering. He starts moaning loudly as you now have his full length inside you and you can tell he is about to cum.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'dom'
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Cum fountain': gt 'gschool_sex', 'lazar_lockerroom_cum'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_sex', 'lazar_lockerroom_cum'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -921,21 +915,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar_lockerroom_cum':
 	'You climb off him once you are sure he is close and get on your knees and start to sucking his cock again, tasting your own juices and stroking it with your hand. When you feel his dick start to twitch, you stop sucking and barely pull your mouth off his dick when his cum spurts out, hitting the side of your face. You stroke him several more times, milking every last drop of cum out of him. He moans loudly as he says "Fuck I needed that! That was amazing <<$pcs_nickname>>." Then he stands up and pulls his pants back up.'
 	*nl
 	if grupTipe = 2:
-		'"Hey you going to the game on Saturday?" he asks as he starts getting cleaned up.'
-		'You smile to him. "Maybe. Depends on what is going on. Why?" you ask him.'
+		'"Hey, you going to the game on Saturday?" he asks as he starts getting cleaned up.'
+		'You smile at him. "Maybe. Depends on what''s going on. Why?" you ask.'
 		'He grins. "I thought we might hook up after the game? I am sure I could use another release by then. So what do you think?" he asks.'
 		'You grin yourself in reply. "Maybe, maybe not." you say in a teasing tone, which makes him laugh.'
-		'"OK, got it. Well I hope to see you at the game then. I think you got a little something there." he says, indicating the right side of your face.'
+		'"Okay, got it. Well I hope to see you at the game then. I think you got a little something there." he says, indicating the right side of your face.'
 		'You roll your eyes, knowing full well his cum is still all over your right cheek. "Ha ha, very funny."'
 		'He laughs. "See you later <<$pcs_nickname>>." He walks out of the girls shower and you go into the girls locker room to get dressed.'
 	else
 		'"Hey would you like to hook up sometime?" he asks as he starts getting cleaned up.'
-		'You smile to him. "Maybe. Depends on what is going on."'
+		'You smile at him. "Maybe. Depends on what''s going on."'
 		'He grins. "Cool. Give me your number." After you give him your number, he adds "Maybe I will call you this weekend and we can hook up or something."'
 		'You smile in reply. "Sounds like fun."'
 		'"I think you got a little something there." he says, indicating the right side of your face.'
 		'You roll your eyes, knowing full well his cum is still all over your right cheek. "Ha ha, very funny."'
-		'He laughs. "See ya later <<$pcs_nickname>>." He walks out of the girls shower and you go into the girls locker room to get dressed.'
+		'He laughs. "See ya later <<$pcs_nickname>>." He walks out of the shower and you go into the locker room to get dressed.'
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'hj', 1
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 1
@@ -1437,7 +1431,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_lockerroom':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/fingered.jpg"></center>'
-	'Her hand slides between your legs and you part them slightly to allow her hand between your thighs. She rubs your clit with her fingers for a bit before you feel one of her fingers slide inside you. She finger bangs you while she caresses your body with the other hand and occasionally nuzzles your neck and ear with her mouth. She pulls her finger out of you and walks over to a bench, pulling you along. She sits down on the bench and spreads her legs wide. "Eat me <<$pcs_nickname>>." she commands. You can tell by her tone of voice she isn''t asking.'
+	'Her hand slides between your legs and you part them slightly to allow it between your thighs. She softly rubs your clit before you feel one of her fingers slide inside you. She starts finger banging you while caressing your body with her other hand and occasionally nuzzles your neck and ear with her mouth. She pulls her finger out of you and walks over to a bench, pulling you along. She sits down on the bench and spreads her legs wide. "Eat me <<$pcs_nickname>>." she commands. You can tell by her tone of voice that she isn''t asking.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 5, 'sub'
 	minut -=5
@@ -1484,7 +1478,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_lockerroom':
 							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerles4.jpg"></center>'
-							'You reach up, pull her hand loose from your hair and go back to licking her pussy. She doesn''t say anything, but you don''t think she''s happy about your refusal to eat her ass. A few minutes later, she pulls away and turns to you. "Get on your back. I want to sit on your face."'
+							'You reach up, pull her hand loose from your hair and go back to licking her pussy. She doesn''t say anything, but you can tell that she isn''t happy about your refusal. A few minutes later, she pulls away and turns to you. "Get on your back. I want to sit on your face."'
 							gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Lie back': gt 'gschool_sex', 'albina_lockerroom69'
@@ -1501,7 +1495,8 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_lockerroom69':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerles6.jpg"></center>'
-	'You lie on your back and she straddles your face and lowers herself down until her pussy is grinding against your mouth. You start licking and sucking her engorged clit and she leans forward and returns the favor by licking your pussy. Several minutes of heaven pass as you both eat each other out when her body is rocked by an orgasm that completely coats your mouth and chin in her juices. She almost collapses on top of you, barely holding herself up before finally climbing off you on shaking legs. As you stand up, she embraces you in a passionate French kiss as she reaches round and gives you a firm smack on the ass. She makes out with you for a few seconds before breaking the kiss and getting dressed.'
+	'You lie on your back and she straddles your face and lowers herself down until her pussy is grinding against your face. You start licking and sucking her engorged clit and she leans forward and returns the favor by licking your pussy. Several minutes of heaven pass as you both eat each other out when her body is rocked by an orgasm that completely coats your mouth and chin in her juices.' 
+	'She almost collapses on top of you, barely holding herself up before finally climbing off you on shaking legs. As you stand up, she embraces you in a passionate kiss as she reaches round and gives you a firm smack on the ass. She makes out with you for a few seconds before breaking the kiss and getting dressed.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5
 	minut -= 5
@@ -1512,7 +1507,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_lockerroom69':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/getdressed.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you both get dressed she comments "It''s nice being with another girl. Men can be such assholes sometimes." with a look of slight frustration on her face.'
 		'You nod slightly in agreement with her. "Yeah..."'
-		'She giggles a little. "Don''t get me wrong, it''s nice to just get fucked hard and put away wet, but sometimes it is nice feeling another girl''s touch. It''s so much softer and gentler than a guy''s, especially some of the guys I know."'
+		'She giggles a little. "Don''t get me wrong, it''s nice to just get fucked hard and put away wet, but sometimes it''s nice feeling another girl''s touch. It''s so much softer and gentler than a guy''s, especially some of the guys I know."'
 		'You don''t know about that. You are sure some guys can be gentle and some girls really rough, but you guess it''s true. "Yeah, most times..."'
 		if AlbinaQW['StarletsJoined'] > 0 and AlbinaQW['StarletsShutDown'] = 0:
 			'As she finishes dressing, she turns to you. "I''ll see you at practice yeah?"'
@@ -1527,7 +1522,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'victor_lockerroom':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/locker2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You just can''t resist. You reach down and rub your hand against the bulge in his shorts. He has a decent sized dick and it only grows larger as you rub it. It soon becomes rock hard to your touch. You partially wrap your fingers around it as much as you can, stroking it slightly. He is bigger than average by the feel of it. As you wonder about his dick, your thoughts are interrupted by him speaking. "Go on. Pull it out and feel it."'
+	'You just can''t resist. You reach down and rub your hand against the bulge in his shorts. He has a decent sized dick and it only grows larger as you rub it. It soon becomes rock hard to your touch and you partially wrap your fingers around it as much as you can, stroking it slightly. Your thoughts are then interrupted by him. "Go on. Pull it out and feel it."'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 	gs 'stat'
 	gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'medium'
@@ -1549,7 +1544,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'victor_lockerroom':
 	act 'Pull down his shorts':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/locker3.jpg"></center>'
-		'You feel yourself getting aroused at the idea of playing with his dick some more. You give into your temptation and drop down to your knees, pull his shorts down and watch his hard cock spring free directly in front of your face. It is a little longer than most, but is also a bit thicker, at least for a non porn star that is. You reach up and take it in your hand. You can''t wrap your fingers all the way around it, but start stroking it a bit. He lets out a little moan. "Yeah that''s it. Now open your mouth and suck it at the same time." he tells you.'
+		'You feel yourself getting aroused at the idea of playing with his dick some more. You give in to your temptation and drop down to your knees, pull his shorts down and watch his hard cock spring free directly in front of your face. It is a little longer than most, but is also a bit thicker. You reach up and take it in your hand. You can''t wrap your fingers all the way around it, but start stroking it a little as he lets out a little moan. "Yeah that''s it. Now open your mouth and suck it at the same time." he tells you.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'medium'
@@ -1571,7 +1566,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'victor_lockerroom':
 		act 'Suck his dick':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/locker4.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you keep stroking his dick, you lean forward and open your mouth, letting the head of his cock pass your lips. You wrap your lips around his shaft and start sucking on his dick, bobbing your head back and forth in rhythm with the stroking of your hand. For a couple of minutes, you just suck on his dick while stroking it before you feel his hand on the back of your head and he starts forcing you to take more and more of his dick into your mouth. You eventually  have to move your hand away as he forces you to deepthroat him. After a minute or so of this, he says "Take your clothes off."'
+			'As you keep stroking his dick, you lean forward and open your mouth, letting the head pass your lips. You wrap your lips around his shaft and start sucking his dick, bobbing your head back and forth in rhythm with the stroking of your hand. You do this for a few minutes until you feel his hand on the back of your head and he starts forcing you to take more and more of his dick into your mouth. You eventually have to move your hand away as he forces you to deepthroat him. After a minute or so of this, he says "Take your clothes off."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'stat'
 			gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'medium'
@@ -1582,7 +1577,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'victor_lockerroom':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/locker4.jpg"></center>'
 					'You pull your head back until his dick pops out of your mouth so you can talk. "I just want to suck you off." you tell him.'
-					'He looks down at you a moment before saying. "Is that so?"'
+					'He looks down at you a moment before saying "Is that so?"'
 					'You are about to reply, but as soon as your mouth starts to open, he shoves his dick back in your mouth as one of his hands wraps around the back of your head so he can force himself balls deep down your throat.'
 					'He lets you alternate between using your hand to stroke him at the same time and deep throating you. Several more minutes of this pass by before he says "I''m about to cum. Take off your shirt."'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'deepthroat'
@@ -1595,7 +1590,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'victor_lockerroom':
 			act 'Strip':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/locker8.jpg"></center>'
-				'You start to strip down, you remove most of your clothes before he pushes you up against the lockers and lifts up one your legs. From behind you, you feel his dick slide into your wet pussy as he starts fucking you. Then he abruptly stops, dragging you over to the bench, he pushes you forward while your back is to him, as he says "Bend over."'
+				'You start to strip down, removing most of your clothes before he pushes you up against the lockers and lifts up one your legs. You feel his dick slide into your wet pussy and he starts fucking you before he abruptly stops and drags you over to the bench, where he pushes you forward.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10
 				minut -=5
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1603,25 +1598,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'victor_lockerroom':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A131'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/locker5.jpg"></center>'
-					'With him man handling you, you quickly find yourself standing bent over the bench, with your ass presented to him. He quickly strips his clothes off before he straddles the bench and moves up behind you. You feel the tip of his dick rub against your slit, getting it and your pussy wetter before he eases his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock about half way inside of you and starts fucking you. He is slow and gentle at first, but as you start moaning more, he starts going balls deep and fucking you harder.'
+					'With him man handling you, you quickly find yourself bent over the bench with your ass presented to him. He quickly strips his clothes off before he straddles the bench and moves up behind you. You feel the tip of his dick rub against your slit before he eases his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock about half way inside you and starts fucking you. He is slow and gentle at first, but as you start moaning more, he starts going balls deep and fucking you harder.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 					gs 'stat'
-					act 'Get ploughed':
+					act 'Get hammered':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/locker6.jpg"></center>'
-						'He grabs your hip with his hand as he starts pounding your wet pussy hard and fast. The locker room echoes with the sounds of moans and slapping flesh. His hand pulls your hips back just as he thrusts forward and you can feel your tits bouncing with each impact of your bodies. Then on one of his strokes, he pulls all the way out of you, but when he goes to put it back in, he aims high and you feel his dick slide into your ass. You don''t know if it was an accident or if he did it on purpose, all you know is he just started fucking your ass.'
+						'He grabs your hip with his hand as he starts pounding your wet pussy hard and fast, the sounds of moans and slapping flesh echoing into the locker room. On one of his strokes, he pulls all the way out of you, but when he goes to put it back in, he aims high and you feel his dick slide into your ass. You don''t know if it was an accident or if he did it on purpose.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 						anal_slip += 4
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Wrong hole!':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/locker6.jpg"></center>'
-							'A dick suddenly popping into your ass makes you cry out and you try to pull away, but his hand holds you firm. "Wrong hole!" you cry out.'
+							'You cry out and try to pull away, but his hand holds you firm. "Wrong hole!" you cry out.'
 							'He doesn''t slow down as he fucks your ass. At first you think he is ignoring you as you look back at him over your shoulder, then he gets a slightly confused look on his face. "What?"'
-							'You grit your teeth as he keeps fucking your ass. "I said wrong hole! You''re fucking my ass! Please, stop!" you whine.'
-							'Hearing your words, he looks down, but doesn''t stop fucking you. "Are you sure?"'
-							'Exacerbated, you shout "Yes! I am fucking sure that''s my ass!"'
-							'He looks a bit more then says "Oh sorry! Well, I''m almost done." True to his word, a few seconds later he starts moaning loudly and pulls out of your ass. "I''m about to cum. Get on your knees." You turn around and drop to your knees.'
+							'You grit your teeth as he keeps fucking your ass. "I said wrong hole! You''re fucking my ass! Please stop!" you whine. He looks down, but doesn''t stop fucking you. "Are you sure?"'
+							'Exacerbated, you shout "Yes! I''m fucking sure! You''re in my ass!"'
+							'He looks down again and finally notices. "Oh sorry! Well, I''m almost done." True to his word, a few seconds later he starts moaning loudly and pulls out of your ass. "Get on your knees, I''m going to cum." You turn around and drop to your knees.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Cum': gt 'gschool_sex', 'victor_lockerroom_cum'
@@ -1629,7 +1623,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'victor_lockerroom':
 						act 'Say nothing':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/locker6.jpg"></center>'
-							'You moan and groan loudly, gripping the bench tightly as he pounds your little ass hard and fast. Part of you is really enjoying this, but you are still unsure if he did it on purpose until he moans out "Fuck you have a tight little ass." He keeps pounding away at your ass for a couple more minutes before he starts moaning loudly and pulls out of you. "I''m about to cum. Get on your knees." You turn around and drop to your knees.'
+							'You moan and groan loudly, gripping the bench tightly as he pounds your ass hard and fast. Part of you is really enjoying it, but you''re still unsure if he did it on purpose until he moans out "Fuck, you have a tight little ass!" He keeps pounding away at your ass for a few more minutes before he starts moaning loudly and pulls out of you. "Get on your knees, I''m going to cum." You turn around and drop to your knees.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Cum': gt 'gschool_sex', 'victor_lockerroom_cum'
@@ -1645,9 +1639,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'victor_lockerroom_cum':
 	*clr & cla
 !!to do note: to raise PE grade when we redo school grades.
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/locker9.jpg"></center>'
-	'He grabs you by the hair with one hand to hold your face right in front of his cock, while he jerks off with his other hand. It doesn''t take long before he starts moaning loudly and hot sperm comes streaming out. Most of it lands on your face, but a little ends up in your open mouth. He keeps stroking his dick until no more streams of cum emerge and only a last few drops are milked out of him. You lick the tip of his dick, licking up the last couple of drops of cum.'
+	'He grabs you by the hair with one hand while he jerks off with the other. It doesn''t take long before he starts moaning loudly and hot sperm comes streaming out. Most of it lands on your face, but a little ends up in your open mouth. He keeps stroking his dick until he stops cumming. You lick the tip of his dick, licking up the last couple of drops of cum.'
 	*nl
-	'He pulls up his shorts, tucking his dick away as he looks around, apparently making sure no one is coming to find out what the noise was. He looks down at you and smiles. "Congratulations you just passed P.E. Now you better get cleaned up." Satisfied, he turns and and walks out of the locker room, leaving you on your knees with his cum all over your tits.'
+	'He pulls up his shorts, tucking his dick away as he looks around, apparently making sure no one is coming to find out what the noise was. He then looks down at you and smiles. "Congratulations, you just passed P.E. Now you better get cleaned up." Satisfied, he turns and and walks out of the locker room, leaving you on your knees with his cum all over your face.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 	gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A131'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'

locations/journal.qsrc

@@ -18,6 +18,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'records':
 		'<br><center><h3>Non-Combat</h3></center><br>'
 		func('spellBook','learn','$nonComSpells')
 	end
+	
+	if ARRSIZE('$portfolio_locations') > 0 or ARRSIZE('$portfolio_people') > 0:
+		act 'View your photography portfolio': gt 'journal_portfolio'
+	end
 
 	'<center><h2>Housing</h2></center>'
 	

locations/laketoilet.qsrc

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 		'When you enter the restroom, you see a naked man slowly jerking himself off. He hasn''t noticed you yet.'
 
 		act 'Seduce him':
-			gt 'LCporn', 'toiletsex'
+			gt 'LCwork', 'toiletsex'
 		end
 
 		act 'Leave the restroom':gt 'lakecafe', 'main'

locations/shop_photography.qsrc

@@ -1,13 +1,15 @@
 # shop_photography
 
-! Photography shop in the City Center Mall
-! Variables used:
-! photographyEv = Track shop progression through buying a camera
-!	0 = First visit
-!	1 = Return visitor, but have not bought camera
-!	2 = Bought camera, unlocks portfolio sharing
-! photography_job = Track progression through job events
-! photojob_daystart = Track when job last accepted - only allowed one job per week
+!! Photography shop in the City Center Mall
+!! Variables used:
+!! photographyEv = Track shop progression through buying a camera
+!!	0 = First visit
+!!	1 = Return visitor, but have not bought camera
+!!	2 = Bought camera, unlocks portfolio sharing
+!! photography_job = Track progression through job events
+!! photojob_daystart = Track when job last accepted - only allowed one job per week
+!! portfolio_locations[n] for storing which images Sveta has of locations (value of 1 for have)
+!! portfolio_people[n] for storing which images Sveta has of people
 
 ! The owner of the shop is Branko Volenskii
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
@@ -305,7 +307,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'phototank':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 20
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img src="images/characters/shared/37.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img src="images/characters/shared/headshots_generic/37.jpg"></center>'
 	'You head over to the Industrial Region where you quickly meet up with your contact at the Experience Center.'
 	'"Hi there; you must be <<$pcs_firstname>>. The group is already on their way to the site so I''ll take you up there in my car. I am sure you know everything you will need to do but feel free to ask if you have any queries"'
 	'You get in the car and ride for nearly half a hour until you reach the location of the Experience Center. Once there the representative parks the car, you get out and head inside.'
@@ -342,7 +344,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'photowedding':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += rand(10,18)
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img src="images/characters/shared/18.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img src="images/characters/shared/headshots_generic/18.jpg"></center>'
 	'You head over to the Residential District where you meet one of the family members of the betrothed.'
 	'"Hello, you must be the photographer! If you follow me then I will take you to the happy couple to take the pictures of them."'
 	act 'Follow them':
@@ -364,7 +366,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'photomotorsport':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += rand(15,20)
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img src="images/characters/shared/11.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img src="images/characters/shared/headshots_generic/11.jpg"></center>'
 	'You head over to the Industrial Region and meet a representative of the Autodrome who will take you to racetrack and give you a VIP pass; there you will be expected to take pictures of the event and deliver them back to your contact at the track.'
 	'"Why hello there, you must be the person Branko said they would be sending. As I''m sure you know everything you have to do at the track I will give you this Press Pass and take you to the Autodrome!"'
 	'You look at the pass they gave you and confirm it is all legitimate then get into their car to be taken to the track.'