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Merge branch 'master' of https://git.tfgames.site/Kevin_Smarts/glife

LinaHirata 4 달 전
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+ 3 - 1
glife.qproj

@@ -545,6 +545,7 @@
 		<Location name="KatjaHomeTalk"/>
 		<Location name="katja_sex"/>
 		<Location name="Katja_Tanga"/>
+		<Location name="katja_pantyquest"/>
 		<Location name="katja_meynold_schedule"/>
 		<Location name="katja_uni"/>
 		<Location name="katja_uni_sex"/>
@@ -1057,9 +1058,10 @@
 	<Folder name="University Characters">
 		<Location name="vecher"/>
 		<Location name="djibril"/>
+		<Location name="djibrilev1"/>
 		<Location name="gosha"/>
 		<Location name="kendra"/>
-		<Location name="djibrilev1"/>
+		<Location name="sofia"/>
 		<Location name="Vika"/>
 		<Location name="vikaev1"/>
 	</Folder>

+ 1 - 1
locations/AppearanceSystem.qsrc

@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SetBodyShapeBonus':
 
 	!!Setting the pcs_apprnc bonus based on fat and strength
 	else
-		temp_BodyShapeBonus = func('body_structure', 'appearance_bonus', pcs_bmi, strenbuf, succubusflag)
+		tempBodyShapeBonus = func('body_structure', 'appearance_bonus')
 
 		!!This modifies bodykoef for high or low pcs_mass['body'] values
 		if salocatnow = 0 or salocatnow >= 7:

+ 1 - 1
locations/_body_image.qsrc

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 
 $body_image_msg = ''
 if $ARGS[0] = 'body':
-	$bodyVars['img'] = func('body_structure', 'body_img', pcs_bmi, strenbuf, succubusflag)
+	$bodyVars['img'] = func('body_structure', 'body_img')
 	$result = $bodyVars['img']
 	$body_image_msg += 'You are <<pcs_hgt>>cm tall and <<$bodyVars[''desc'']>>'
 end

+ 4 - 4
locations/body.qsrc

@@ -156,6 +156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'DailyUpdate':
 
 	gs 'body', 'Update_Teeth'
 
+	gs 'AppearanceSystem', 'UpdateBaseAppearance'
 	gs 'body', 'Update_Appearance'
 
 	!skin variable reset
@@ -167,7 +168,6 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Update_Appearance':
 	gs 'body', 'UpdateBodyImage'
-	gs 'AppearanceSystem', 'UpdateBaseAppearance'
 	gs 'AppearanceSystem'
 	gs 'body_desc'
 end
@@ -182,9 +182,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'UpdateBodyImage':
 	end
 
 
-	$bodyVars['desc']     = func('body_structure', 'body_desc', pcs_bmi, strenbuf, succubusflag)
-	$bodyVars['img']      = func('body_structure', 'body_img',  pcs_bmi, strenbuf, succubusflag)
-	$bodyVars['bmi_desc'] = func('body_structure', 'bmi_desc',  pcs_bmi, strenbuf, succubusflag)
+	$bodyVars['desc']     = func('body_structure', 'body_desc')
+	$bodyVars['img']      = func('body_structure', 'body_img')
+	$bodyVars['bmi_desc'] = func('body_structure', 'bmi_desc')
 end
 
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/body_desc.qsrc

@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anus':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'BMI':
-	$bodyVars['bmi_desc'] = func('body_structure', 'bmi_desc', pcs_bmi)
+	$bodyVars['bmi_desc'] = func('body_structure', 'bmi_desc')
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'breasts':

+ 78 - 51
locations/boy.qsrc

@@ -14,16 +14,35 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'details':
 	!Select Photos
 
-:boydetailsloop
-	lover_picrand =  RAND(1,30)
-	if lover_picrand = lover_picture[0] or lover_picrand = lover_picture[1] or lover_picrand = lover_picture[2]: jump 'boydetailsloop'
-
-	loverGenderTmp = 0
+	loverGenderTmp = npc_gender[$npclastgenerated]
 	silaVag = npc_sexskill[$npclastgenerated]
 	$npc_usedname[$npclastgenerated] = $npc_firstname[$npclastgenerated]
 	$boydesc = $npc_usedname[$npclastgenerated]
 
+	hairBoy = npc_haircol[$npclastgenerated]
+	titBoy = npc_bust[$npclastgenerated]
+	vneshBoy = npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated]
+
 	!!appearance
+	gs 'boy', 'set_boybody'
+
+	!!Variables responsible for any features like
+	!!security, is responsible for the money and requirements
+	gs 'boy', 'set_finance'
+
+	gs 'boy', 'set_preferences'
+end
+
+! set_unique_pic is depricated
+if $ARGS[0] = 'set_unique_pic':
+	!! boys 1-30, girlfriends 31-60
+	:boydetailsloop
+		lover_picrand[$npclastgenerated] =  rand(1, 30)
+	if lover_picrand[$npclastgenerated] = lover_picture[0] or lover_picrand[$npclastgenerated] = lover_picture[1] or lover_picrand[$npclastgenerated] = lover_picture[2]: jump 'boydetailsloop'
+end
+
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'set_boybody':
 	boybodyrand = rand(1, 3)
 
 	if boybodyrand = 1: 
@@ -54,63 +73,71 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'details':
 	end
 	
 	boyfacerand = rand(1, 3)
+	if boyfacerand = 1: 
+		$boyface = 'black'
+	elseif boyfacerand = 2:
+		$boyface = 'brown'
+	else 
+		$boyface = 'blond'
+	end
+end
 
-	if boyfacerand = 1: $boyface = 'black'
-	if boyfacerand = 2: $boyface = 'brown'
-	if boyfacerand = 3: $boyface = 'blond'
-
-	!!Variables responsible for any features like
-	!!security, is responsible for the money and requirements
+if $ARGS[0] = 'set_finance':
 	harakBoy = rand(0, 2)
-	finance = rand(0, 2)
+	finance = npc_finance[$npclastgenerated]
 
-	if finance = 0:
+	if npc_finance[$npclastgenerated] = 0:
 		!!Gopnik beggar or a hard worker
 		!!check in appearance Primary
-		if harakBoy = 0: npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 8)
-		if harakBoy = 1: npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 16)
-		if harakBoy = 2: npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 32)
+		if harakBoy = 0:
+			npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 8)
+		elseif harakBoy = 1:
+			npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 16)
+		else 
+			npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 32)
+		end
 
 		$boyClo = 'wearing a tracksuit.'
-	elseif finance = 1:
+	elseif npc_finance[$npclastgenerated] = 1:
 		!!middle_peasant
 		!!check in appearance
-		if harakBoy = 0: npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 16)
-		if harakBoy = 1: npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 24)
-		if harakBoy = 2: npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 32)
+		if harakBoy = 0:
+			npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 16)
+		elseif harakBoy = 1:
+			npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 24)
+		else
+			npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 32)
+		end
 
 		$boyClo = 'wearing jeans and a sweater.'
-	elseif finance = 2:
+	elseif npc_finance[$npclastgenerated] = 2:
 		!!middle_peasant
 		!!check in appearance
-		if harakBoy = 0: npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(16, 32)
-		if harakBoy = 1: npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(24, 32)
-		if harakBoy = 2: npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(32, 40)
+		if harakBoy = 0:
+			npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(16, 32)
+		elseif harakBoy = 1:
+			npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(24, 32)
+		else
+			npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(32, 40)
+		end
 
 		$boyClo = 'wearing an expensive suit.'
 	end
+end
 
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'set_preferences':
 	!!requirements of the figure, chest size, hair color.
 	!!0 - ass less 80, 1 back from 80 prior_to 100, 2 ass over 100
 	figurBoy = rand(0, 2)
-	!!0 set here as they are boys
-	npc_bust[$npclastgenerated] = 0
-	!!0 - black, 1 - brown, 2 - Redhead, 3 - blonde
-	npc_haircol[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 3)
-	!!character 0 - soft, 1 -norm 2 - aggressor
+
+	!character 0 - soft, 1 - norm,  2 - aggressor
 	if rand(0, 100) < 80:
 		izvrat = 0
 	else
 		izvrat = 1
 	end
 
-
-
-	hairBoy = npc_haircol[$npclastgenerated]
-	titBoy = npc_bust[$npclastgenerated]
-	vneshBoy = npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated]
-
-
 	!! trying to make the preference section 
 	!! Variables here are clotTypePrefTmp, clotQualPrefTmp, clotTopPrefTmp, bottShorPrefTmp, clotThinPrefTmp, bimbPrefTmp, pierPrefTmp, tattPrefTmp, lipsPrefTmp, bodyPrefTmp, makePrefTmp, IQPrefTmp.
 
@@ -120,15 +147,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'details':
 	!!0 - none, 1 - cheap, 2 - average, 3 - formal, 4 - fetish.
 	clotTypePrefTmp = 0
 	if rand(0, 4) = 4:
-		if finance = 0:
+		if npc_finance[$npclastgenerated] = 0:
 			clotTypePrefTmp = rand(1,2)
-			if rand(0, 1) = 1 and izvrat = 1:clotTypePrefTmp = 4
-		elseif finance = 1:
+			if rand(0, 1) = 1 and izvrat = 1: clotTypePrefTmp = 4
+		elseif npc_finance[$npclastgenerated] = 1:
 			clotTypePrefTmp = rand(1,3)
-			if rand(0, 2) = 2 and izvrat = 1:clotTypePrefTmp = 4
-		elseif finance = 2:
+			if rand(0, 2) = 2 and izvrat = 1: clotTypePrefTmp = 4
+		elseif npc_finance[$npclastgenerated] = 2:
 			clotTypePrefTmp = rand(2,3)
-			if rand(0, 1) = 1 and izvrat = 1:clotTypePrefTmp = 4
+			if rand(0, 1) = 1 and izvrat = 1: clotTypePrefTmp = 4
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -137,9 +164,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'details':
 	!! 0 - no preference, 1 - 1 to 4 units cheap to average (Locked if formal chosen), 2 - 5 to 7 units expensive to ballroom quality (Locked if fetish is chosen)
 	clotQualPrefTmp = 0
 	if rand(0, 5) = 5:
-		if finance = 0:
+		if npc_finance[$npclastgenerated] = 0:
 			clotQualPrefTmp = 1
-		elseif finance = 1:
+		elseif npc_finance[$npclastgenerated] = 1:
 			clotQualPrefTmp = rand(1, 2)
 			randchan = rand(0, 1)
 			if randchan = 0 and clotTypePrefTmp ! 3:
@@ -147,7 +174,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'details':
 			elseif randchan = 1 and clotTypePrefTmp ! 1:
 				clotQualPrefTmp = 2
 			end
-		elseif finance = 2:
+		elseif npc_finance[$npclastgenerated] = 2:
 			randchan = rand(0, 2)
 			if randchan = 2 and clotTypePrefTmp ! 1:
 				clotQualPrefTmp = 2
@@ -160,14 +187,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'details':
 
 	!!Need to add modifiers based on breast size, where larger breasts end up forcing the player to show more cleavage than those with smaller breasts.
 	!! 0 - no preference, 1 - 1 to 2 or neckline to moderate, 2 - 3 to 4 or heavy to severe, 3 - 5 to 7 or buldging to outpouring 
-	!! The breast size must be adjusted either when the action is being calculeted or we can base it on their ideal breast size :titBoy + 0/3 depending on the players breast size
+	!! The breast size must be adjusted either when the action is being calculeted or we can base it on their ideal breast size :npc_bust[$npclastgenerated] + 0/3 depending on the players breast size
 
 
 	!!0 - no preference, 1 - 1 neckline , 2 - 2 or moderate, 3 - 3 to 4 or heavy to severe
 	!! It doesn''t matter if your poor or rich, everyone loves tits.
 
 	slutConstant = 0
-	if rand(0, 1) = 1 and izvrat = 1:slutConstant = 1
+	if rand(0, 1) = 1 and izvrat = 1: slutConstant = 1
 
 
 	clotTopPrefTmp = 0
@@ -180,7 +207,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'details':
 		elseif randchan = 2 and clotTypePrefTmp ! 3:
 			clotTopPrefTmp = 3
 		end
-		if clotTopPrefTmp ! 0 and titBoy = 2:
+		if clotTopPrefTmp ! 0 and titnpc_bust[$npclastgenerated] = 2:
 			if clotPref ! 3:
 				clotTopPrefTmp += 1
 			end
@@ -200,8 +227,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'details':
 		elseif randchan = 2:
 			bottShorPrefTmp = 3
 		end
-		randchan = rand(0, 1)
-		if slutConstant = 1 and randchan = 1 and clotTypePrefTmp = 4:
+		if slutConstant = 1 and rand(0, 1) = 1 and clotTypePrefTmp = 4:
 			bottShorPrefTmp = 3
 		end
 	end
@@ -292,10 +318,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'details':
 	!!0 - no preference, 1 - 1 to 30 intelligence, 2 - 30 to 85 intelligence, 3 - 85 + intelligence. 
 
 	IQPrefTmp = 0
-	if rand(0, 4) = 4:IQPrefTmp = rand(1, 3) 
+	if rand(0, 4) = 4: IQPrefTmp = rand(1, 3)
 
 	killvar 'randchan'
 end
 
+
 --- boy ---------------------------------
 

+ 9 - 1
locations/dateF.qsrc

@@ -16,8 +16,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	!! generate a girlfriend
 	menu_off = 1
 	$location_type = 'event_outdoors'
-	gs 'girl'
 	*clr & cla
+	!! generate a girl
+	if $region = 'pav':
+		gs 'npcgeneratec', 1, '', rand(18,45), 1
+	elseif $region = 'city':
+		gs 'npcgeneratec', 1, '', rand(18,45), rand(3,4)
+	end
+	gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
+	gs 'girl', 'details'
+
 	act 'Ignore her and hurry away':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	!!1) Sveta in a school uniform
 	if PCloStyle2 = 4:

+ 2 - 0
locations/dateM.qsrc

@@ -23,6 +23,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, '', rand(18,45), rand(3,4)
 	end
 	gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
+	gs 'boy', 'details'
+
 	act 'Ignore him and hurry away':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 !!1) Sveta in a school uniform
 	if PCloStyle2 = 4:

+ 97 - 53
locations/girl.qsrc

@@ -18,76 +18,125 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'details':
 	!Select Photos
 
-:girldetailsloop
-	!! boys 1-30, girlfriends 31-60
-	lover_picrand =  RAND(31,60)
-	if lover_picrand = lover_picture[0] or lover_picrand = lover_picture[1] or lover_picrand = lover_picture[2]: jump 'girldetailsloop'
-
-	loverGenderTmp = 1
-	npc_gender[$npclastgenerated] = 1
+	loverGenderTmp = npc_gender[$npclastgenerated]
 	silaVag = npc_sexskill[$npclastgenerated]
 	$npc_usedname[$npclastgenerated] = $npc_firstname[$npclastgenerated]
 	$boydesc = $npc_usedname[$npclastgenerated]
 
+	hairboy = npc_haircol[$npclastgenerated]
+	titboy = npc_bust[$npclastgenerated]
+	vneshboy = npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated]
+
 	!!appearance
+	gs 'girl', 'set_boybody'
+
+	!!Variables responsible for any features like
+	!!security, is responsible for the money and requirements
+	gs 'girl', 'set_finance'
+
+	gs 'girl', 'set_preferences'
+end
+
+! set_unique_pic is depricated
+if $ARGS[0] = 'set_unique_pic':
+	!! boys 1-30, girlfriends 31-60
+	:girldetailsloop
+		lover_picrand[$npclastgenerated] =  rand(31,60)
+	if lover_picrand[$npclastgenerated] = lover_picture[0] or lover_picrand[$npclastgenerated] = lover_picture[1] or lover_picrand[$npclastgenerated] = lover_picture[2]: jump 'girldetailsloop'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'set_boybody':
 	boybodyrand = rand(1, 3)
 
-	if boybodyrand = 1: $boybody = 'short'
-	if boybodyrand = 2: $boybody = 'average'
-	if boybodyrand = 3: $boybody = 'tall'
+	if boybodyrand = 1: 
+		$boybody = 'short'
+		$boybody_pref = 'a short'
+	elseif boybodyrand = 2: 
+		$boybody = 'average'
+		$boybody_pref = 'an average'
+	elseif boybodyrand = 3: 
+		$boybody = 'tall'
+		$boybody_pref = 'a tall'
+	end
 
 	boybodrand = rand(1, 4)
 
-	if boybodrand = 1 and boybodyrand = 1: $boybod = 'petite'
-	if boybodrand = 1 and boybodyrand > 1: $boybod = 'slender'
-	if boybodrand = 2: $boybod = 'toned'
-	if boybodrand = 3: $boybod = 'average'
-	if boybodrand = 4: $boybod = 'chubby'
-
+	if boybodrand = 1 and boyboyrand = 1: 
+		$boybod = 'petite'
+		$boybod_pref = 'a petite'
+	elseif boybodrand = 1 and boybodyrand = 1: 
+		$boybod = 'slender'
+		$boybod_pref = 'a slender'
+	elseif boybodrand = 2: 
+		$boybod = 'toned'
+		$boybod_pref = 'a toned'
+	elseif boybodrand = 3: 
+		$boybod = 'average'
+		$boybod_pref = 'an average'
+	else
+		$boybod = 'chubby'
+		$boybod_pref = 'a chubby'
+	end
+	
 	boyfacerand = rand(1, 3)
+	if boyfacerand = 1: 
+		$boyface = 'black'
+	elseif boyfacerand = 2:
+		$boyface = 'brunette'
+	else 
+		$boyface = 'blond'
+	end
+end
 
-	if boyfacerand = 1: $boyface = 'black'
-	if boyfacerand = 2: $boyface = 'brunette'
-	if boyfacerand = 3: $boyface = 'blond'
-
-	!!Variables responsible for any features like
-	!!security, is responsible for the money and requirements
-	harakboy = rand(0, 2)
-	finance = rand(0, 2)
+if $ARGS[0] = 'set_finance':
+	harakBoy = rand(0, 2)
+	finance = npc_finance[$npclastgenerated]
 
-	if finance = 0:
+	if npc_finance[$npclastgenerated] = 0:
 		!!Gopnik beggar or a hard worker
 		!!check in appearance Primary
-		if harakboy = 0: npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 8)
-		if harakboy = 1: npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 16)
-		if harakboy = 2: npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 32)
+		if harakBoy = 0:
+			npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 8)
+		elseif harakBoy = 1:
+			npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 16)
+		else 
+			npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 32)
+		end
 
 		$boyClo = 'wearing a tracksuit.'
-	elseif finance = 1:
+	elseif npc_finance[$npclastgenerated] = 1:
 		!!middle_peasant
 		!!check in appearance
-		if harakboy = 0: npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 16)
-		if harakboy = 1: npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 24)
-		if harakboy = 2: npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 32)
+		if harakBoy = 0:
+			npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 16)
+		elseif harakBoy = 1:
+			npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 24)
+		else
+			npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 32)
+		end
 
 		$boyClo = 'wearing jeans and a blouse.'
-	elseif finance = 2:
+	elseif npc_finance[$npclastgenerated] = 2:
 		!!middle_peasant
 		!!check in appearance
-		if harakboy = 0: npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(16, 32)
-		if harakboy = 1: npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(24, 32)
-		if harakboy = 2: npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(32, 40)
+		if harakBoy = 0:
+			npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(16, 32)
+		elseif harakBoy = 1:
+			npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(24, 32)
+		else
+			npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated] = rand(32, 40)
+		end
 
 		$boyClo = 'wearing an expensive dress.'
 	end
+end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'set_preferences':
 	!!requirements of the figure, chest size, hair color.
 	!!0 - ass less 80, 1 back from 80 prior_to 100, 2 ass over 100
 	figurboy = rand(0, 2)
-	!!0 - 60  curve around 22,5 (C/D cups)
-	npc_bust[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0,15) + rand(0,15) + rand(0,15) & if rand(1,10) = 1: npc_bust[$npclastgenerated] += rand(0,15)
-	!!0 - black, 1 - brown, 2 - Redhead, 3 - blonde
-	npc_haircol[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 3)
+
+
 	!!character 0 - soft, 1 -norm 2 - aggressor
 	if rand(0, 100) < 90:
 		izvrat = 0
@@ -95,13 +144,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'details':
 		izvrat = 1
 	end
 
-
-
-	hairboy = npc_haircol[$npclastgenerated]
-	titboy = npc_bust[$npclastgenerated]
-	vneshboy = npc_apprnc[$npclastgenerated]
-
-
 	!! trying to make the preference section 
 	!! Variables here are clotTypePrefTmp, clotQualPrefTmp, clotTopPrefTmp, bottShorPrefTmp, clotThinPrefTmp, bimbPrefTmp, pierPrefTmp, tattPrefTmp, lipsPrefTmp, bodyPrefTmp, makePrefTmp, IQPrefTmp.
 
@@ -111,13 +153,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'details':
 	!!0 - none, 1 - cheap, 2 - average, 3 - formal, 4 - fetish.
 	clotTypePrefTmp = 0
 	if rand(0, 4) = 4:
-		if finance = 0:
+		if npc_finance[$npclastgenerated] = 0:
 			clotTypePrefTmp = rand(1,2)
 			if rand(0, 1) = 1 and izvrat = 1:clotTypePrefTmp = 4
-		elseif finance = 1:
+		elseif npc_finance[$npclastgenerated] = 1:
 			clotTypePrefTmp = rand(1,3)
 			if rand(0, 2) = 2 and izvrat = 1:clotTypePrefTmp = 4
-		elseif finance = 2:
+		elseif npc_finance[$npclastgenerated] = 2:
 			clotTypePrefTmp = rand(2,3)
 			if rand(0, 1) = 1 and izvrat = 1:clotTypePrefTmp = 4
 		end
@@ -128,9 +170,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'details':
 	!! 0 - no preference, 1 - 1 to 4 units cheap to average (Locked if formal chosen), 2 - 5 to 7 units expensive to ballroom quality (Locked if fetish is chosen)
 	clotQualPrefTmp = 0
 	if rand(0, 5) = 5:
-		if finance = 0:
+		if npc_finance[$npclastgenerated] = 0:
 			clotQualPrefTmp = 1
-		elseif finance = 1:
+		elseif npc_finance[$npclastgenerated] = 1:
 			clotQualPrefTmp = rand(1, 2)
 			randchan = rand(0, 1)
 			if randchan = 0 and clotTypePrefTmp ! 3:
@@ -138,7 +180,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'details':
 			elseif randchan = 1 and clotTypePrefTmp ! 1:
 				clotQualPrefTmp = 2
 			end
-		elseif finance = 2:
+		elseif npc_finance[$npclastgenerated] = 2:
 			randchan = rand(0, 2)
 			if randchan = 2 and clotTypePrefTmp ! 1:
 				clotQualPrefTmp = 2
@@ -289,5 +331,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'details':
 	killvar 'randchan'
 end
 
+
+
 --- girl ---------------------------------
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/initg.qsrc

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	if STRPOS($initext, '\r') < 4 : $initext = MID($initext,STRPOS($initext, '\r')+1, len($initext))
 	if STRPOS($initext, '\n') > 0 : jump 'initg_loop'
 	$t = $initext
-	$inittext[] = t
+	$inittext[] = $t
 	$t
 	dynamic $t
 	killvar '$t'

+ 1 - 1
locations/katja_chat.qsrc

@@ -247,7 +247,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_meet':
 	if $university['enrolled_in'] = 'teaching_studies': katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Are you studying at uni?" you ask.'
-	'"Yes, I''m '+iif(year = 2017 and month < 10, 'going to study', 'studying')+' to become a teacher," she says. "What about you. Are you also studying here?"'
+	'"Yes, I''m '+iif(year = 2017 and month < 9, 'going to study', 'studying')+' to become a teacher," she says. "What about you. Are you also studying here?"'
 	'"I''m '+iif( $university['enrolled_in'] = 'teaching_studies', ' also going to study to become a teacher,', ' '+iif(university[student] = 1, 'in the '+func('uni_programs', 'program_name')+' program', 'not studying at the university,')+',')+'" you reply.'
 	act 'Talk about something else': gt 'katja_chat', 'chat1'
 end	

+ 578 - 0
locations/katja_pantyquest.qsrc

@@ -0,0 +1,578 @@
+# katja_pantyquest
+!2023/10/11
+
+!! The quest lines goes as follows for the university
+!! Until KatjaQW['slut'] is above 30 she wont show you anything. 
+!! At katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 1 she will be wearing panties and show that.
+!! At katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 2 she will be wearing panties but not bra, and show that she isn''t wearing a bra.
+!! At katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 3 she will be wearing panties, show that and move them so you can see her pussy.
+!! At katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 4 she will be wearing panties and show that and take them of for the rest of the day.
+!! At katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 5 she wont be wearing panties and show that.
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'kitchen':
+	katjaQW['kitchen_day'] = daystart
+	minuts += 5
+	gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'like', 'kitchen', 1
+	if (katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] < 3 or (katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 3 and katjaQW['slut'] < 65)) and katjaQW['take_of_panties_day'] ! daystart:
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/kitchen_sitting1.jpg"></center>'
+		'You find Katja sitting alone in a chair. "Hi '+iif( katjaQW['couple'] = 0, '<<pcs_nickname>>', 'my love')+' what are you doing here?" Katja asks when she sees you.'
+		'"I came looking for you, what are you doing?" you ask back. "I''m just waiting for my meal to finish cooking," she answers and points at the oven where some food is cooking.'
+		if pcs_traits['commando_lvl'] > 0 and $pantyworntype = 'none' and npc_sex['A14'] > 0 and katjaQW['no_panties_day'] ! daystart:
+			act 'Show her you are not wearing panties':
+				*clr & cla
+				gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2
+				gs 'stat'
+				katjaQW['horny'] += rand(5,10)
+				katjaQW['slut'] += 1
+				katjaQW['no_panties_day'] = daystart
+				if PCloSkirt > 1:
+					if analplugIN = 1:
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga1_7.mp4"></video></center>'
+					else
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga1_<<rand(1,6)>>.jpg"></center>'
+					end
+						'You look around to see if others are coming and then pull up your skirt to show Katja your bare pussy from behind.' 
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activitirs/flashing/pants/inside/pussy/hairy1>>.jpg"></center>'
+					'You look around to see if others are coming and then pull down your pants to show Katja your bare pussy.' 
+				end
+				if katjaQW['slut'] < 30 and katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 0:
+					'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! You can''t just go around flashing your pus... You aren''t wearing panties. What are you doing?! Put some panties on!" Katja exclaims in shock.'
+					'"I flash who I want to, and I don''t wear panties since it''s much nicer not to wear them. Now show me if you wear panties or not," you respond as you cover your pussy again.'
+				elseif katjaQW['slut'] < 50 and katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] < 2:
+					'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! You can''t just go around flashing your naked pussy. Put some panties on!" Katja says, though she''s clearly not really angry.'
+					'"I flash who I want to, and I don''t wear panties since it is much nicer not to wear them. Now show me if you wear panties or not," you respond as you cover your pussy again.'
+				elseif KatjaQW['slut'] < 100 and katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] < 4:
+					'"Stop it <<$pcs_nickname>>, you should really put some panties on," Katja says, but she can''t seem to keep her eyes from staring at your pussy.'
+					'"I flash who I want to, and I don''t wear panties since it is much nicer not to wear them. Now show me if you wear panties or not," you respond to her as you cover your pussy again.'
+				else
+					'"<<$pcs_nickname>> you naughty girl, you should put some panties on," Katja says not at all convincingly while her eyes devour your naked pussy.'
+					'"I don''t wear panties since it is much nicer not to wear them. Now show me if you wear panties or not," you respond to her as you cover your pussy again.'
+				end
+				act 'Katja''s turn':
+					*clr & cla
+					minut += 2
+					if katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] > 0:
+						gs 'arousal', 'erotic', -2
+						gs 'arousal', 'end'
+						gs 'stat'
+						katjaQW['horny'] += rand(0,5)
+						katjaQW['slut'] += rand(0,1)
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/kitchen_sitting_showing_panties1.jpg"></center>'				
+						'Katja looks around to see if there is anybody else around. "I really shouldn''t be doing this..." she says, clearly indicating that she will do as you asked.'
+						'"Come on I showed you mine, it''s only fair that you do it, too," you reply.'
+						'She pulls up her skirt, spreads her legs, and shows her red panties.'
+						'"See I''m still wearing panties. Happy now?" she says with a sly smile. "Not really. You should NOT be wearing panties, that would make me happy," you reply.'
+						'"You wish! Only sluts like you walk around without panties," she shoots back, laughing with a glint in her eye before closing her legs and pulling down her skirt again.'
+					else
+						if katjaQW['slut'] < 30:
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/kitchen_sitting1.jpg"></center>'
+							'"I''m not some slut that goes around flashing my panties. Which, by the way, I of course am wearing," Katja says in a firm voice, though she does not look like she''s actually angry.'
+							'"Sorry I asked. But I do think that you could stand to loosen up a little," you reply.'
+						else
+							katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 1
+							gs 'arousal', 'erotic', -2
+							gs 'arousal', 'end'
+							gs 'stat'
+							katjaQW['horny'] += (5,10)
+							katjaQW['slut'] += 4
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/kitchen_sitting_showing_panties1.jpg"></center>'
+							'Katja looks around to see if there is anybody else around. "I don''t know. We really shouldn''t be doing such things..." she says.'
+							'"Come on! I showed you mine, now it''s only fair that you do it, too," you reply.'
+							'She looks around one more time to make sure you are alone and then pulls up her skirt, spreads her legs, and shows her red panties.'
+							'"See, I''m wearing panties. Happy now?" She smiles slyly before closing her legs and pulling her skirt down again.'
+						end
+					end
+					act 'leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	elseif katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] < 5 and katjaQW['take_of_panties_day'] ! daystart:
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/kitchen_sitting2.jpg"></center>'
+		'You find Katja sitting alone at the dinner table. "Hi '+iif( katjaQW['couple'] = 0, '<<pcs_nickname>>', 'my love')+' what are you doing here?" Katja asks when she sees you.'
+		'"I came looking for you, what are you doing?" you ask back. "I''m just waiting for my meal to finish cooking," she answers, pointing at the oven where some food is cooking.'
+		if pcs_traits['commando_lvl'] > 0 and $pantyworntype = 'none' and npc_sex['A14'] > 0 and katjaQW['no_panties_day'] ! daystart:
+			act 'Show her you are not wearing panties':
+				*clr & cla
+				gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2
+				gs 'stat'
+				katjaQW['horny'] += rand(5,10)
+				katjaQW['slut'] += 1
+				katjaQW['no_panties_day'] = daystart
+				if PCloSkirt > 1:
+					if analplugIN = 1:
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga1_7.mp4"></video></center>'
+					else
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga1_<<rand(1,6)>>.jpg"></center>'
+					end
+						'You look around to see if others are coming and then pull up your skirt to show Katja your bare pussy from behind.' 
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activitirs/flashing/pants/inside/pussy/hairy1>>.jpg"></center>'
+					'You look around to see if others are coming and then pull down your pants to show Katja your bare pussy.' 
+				end
+				if katjaQW['slut'] < 100 and katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] < 4:
+					'"Stop it <<$pcs_nickname>>, you should really put some panties on." Katja says, though she can''t seem to keep her eyes from staring at your pussy.'
+					'"I flash who I want to, and I don''t wear panties since it is much nicer not to wear them. Now show me if you wear panties or not," you respond as you cover your pussy again.'
+				else
+					'"<<$pcs_nickname>> you naughty girl, you should put some panties on!" Katja says not at all convincingly while her eyes devour your naked pussy.'
+					'"I don''t wear panties since it is much nicer not to wear them. Now show me if you wear panties or not," you respond as you cover your pussy again.'
+				end
+				act 'Katja''s turn':	
+					if katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 4:
+						gs 'arousal', 'erotic', -2
+						gs 'stat'
+						katjaQW['horny'] += rand(0,5)
+						katjaQW['slut'] += rand(0,1)
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/kitchen_sitting_showing_panties2.jpg"></center>'
+						'Katja spreads her legs and hikes up her skirt showing you her white simple panties. "Why are you wearing panties again?" you ask.'
+						'"Because I''m not walking around without panties out in public. I''m a good girl, not a slut like some others," Katja says with a wink.'
+						act 'Have her take off her panties':
+							*clr & cla						
+							gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 2
+							gs 'arousal', 'end'
+							gs 'stat'
+							katjaQW['horny'] += rand(0,5)
+							katjaQW['slut'] += rand(0,1)
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/kitchen_sitting_taking_of_panties.jpg"></center>'
+							if katjaQW['slut'] < 80:
+								'"Come oooon, Katja. Take those panties off! You''ve done it before," you plead. She looks around for a moment before sighing and saying, "Fine, you pervert."'
+								'She then gets up, turns her butt towards you, and slowly takes off her panties, pausing to look back at you just before her pussy is visible.'
+								'"Happy now?" she says when the panties are completely off.'
+							else
+								if lazarQW['your_prize_panties_katja'] = 0: lazarQW['your_prize_panties_katja'] = 1
+								katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 5
+								katjaQW['horny'] += (5,10)
+								katjaQW['slut'] += 4
+								'"I''m getting annoyed that I have to keep telling you to take off your panties. You have to learn that proper girls like us don''t wear panties to Uni," you say in a fake angry voice.'
+								'She looks around and says, sighing, "Fine, you pervert."'
+								'She then gets up, turns her butt towards you, and slowly takes off her panties, pausing to look back at you just before her pussy is visible.'
+								'Then, she hands you her panties. "Here '+iif(lazarQW['your_prize_panties_katja'] = 0, 'you can have them', 'another pair for your collection')+' since you insist that I have to be a slut, I don''t need them anymore."'								
+							end
+							act 'leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
+						end
+					else
+						gs 'arousal', 'erotic', -2
+						gs 'stat'
+						katjaQW['horny'] += rand(0,5)
+						katjaQW['slut'] += rand(0,1)
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/kitchen_sitting_showing_panties2.jpg"></center>'
+						'Katja spreads her legs and hikes up her skirt, showing you her white simple panties.'
+						'"Happy now?" she says. "You know I won''t be happy until you take those panties off." you reply.'
+						'"You are relentless!" Katja says. "You know I''m not a quitter," you respond with a smirk.'
+						act 'See what Katja does':
+							*clr & cla
+							gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 2
+							gs 'arousal', 'end'
+							gs 'stat'
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/kitchen_sitting_showing_panties2.jpg"></center>'
+							'She looks around and slowly stands up. "You really want me to follow your slutty example?" she asks.'
+							'"Yes, I do. It is so much nicer without panties, the breeze on your pussy is so liberating! You should really try it," you answer.'
+							act 'Katja finally relents':
+								*clr & cla						
+								gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 2
+								gs 'arousal', 'end'
+								gs 'stat'
+								katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 4
+								katjaQW['horny'] += rand(5,10)
+								katjaQW['slut'] += 4
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/kitchen_sitting_taking_of_panties.jpg"></center>'
+								'She then gets up, turns her butt towards you, and slowly takes off her panties, pausing to look back at you just before her pussy is visible.'
+								'"Happy now?" she says when the panties are completely off.'
+								'"Yes! This is going to be so much fun. Think about how thrilling it will to be careful so you don''t give '+iif(katjaQW['boy_block'] = 1, 'other girls', 'boys')+' a peek of your pussy!" you enthusiastically chirp.'
+								'"I''m already regretting this..." Katja groans. But she does not look upset, nor does she make any move to put her panties back on.'
+								act 'leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
+							end
+						end
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	else
+		if week < 4 and (katjaQW['slut'] < 100 or hour < 18): 
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/kitchen_standing1.jpg"></center>'
+			'You find Katja standing at the kitchen table. "Hi '+iif( katjaQW['couple'] = 0, '<<pcs_nickname>>', 'my love')+' what are you doing here?" Katja ask when she sees you.'
+			'"I came looking for you, what are you doing?" you ask back. "I''m staring to cook my dinner," she answers.'
+		else
+			katjaQW['drinks'] += 2
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/kitchen_standing_with_drink.jpg"></center>'
+			'You find Katja standing at the kitchen table drinking a glass of white wine. "Hi '+iif( katjaQW['couple'] = 0, '<<pcs_nickname>>', 'my love')+' what are you doing here?" Katja ask when she sees you.'
+			'"I came looking for you, what are you doing?" you ask back. "I''m just having a glass of wine before I start to cook my dinner," she answers.'
+			if katjaQW['QWstage'] > 1:
+				'"Why don''t you have a glass with me?" she asks and looks for another glass.'
+				act 'Drink a glass with Katja':
+					*clr & cla
+					gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'wine', 1				
+					minut += 5
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/kitchen_standing_with_drink.jpg"></center>'
+					'"I would love a glass of wine" you say, and she purrs one for you, and you spend some mintues drinking it while she continues her preparations for dinner.'
+					if pcs_traits['commando_lvl'] > 0 and $pantyworntype = 'none' and npc_sex['A14'] > 0 and katjaQW['no_panties_day'] ! daystart:
+						act 'Show her you are not wearing panties':
+							*clr & cla
+							gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2
+							gs 'stat'
+							katjaQW['no_panties_day'] = daystart
+							if PCloSkirt > 1:
+								if analplugIN = 1:
+									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga1_7.mp4"></video></center>'
+								else
+									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga1_<<rand(1,6)>>.jpg"></center>'
+								end
+								'You look around to see if others are coming and then pull up your skirt to show Katja your bare pussy from behind.' 
+							else
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activitirs/flashing/pants/inside/pussy/hairy1>>.jpg"></center>'
+								'You look around to see if others are coming and then pull down your pants to show Katja your bare pussy.' 
+							end
+							act 'Katja''s turn': gt 'katja_pantyquest', 'kitchen_show_pussy'
+						end
+					elseif katjaQW['take_of_panties_day'] = daystart:
+						act 'Try to see if she is still not wearing panties':
+							*clr & cla
+							minut += 2
+							gs 'arousal', 'erotic', -5
+							gs 'arousal', 'end'
+							gs 'stat'
+							katjaQW['horny'] += rand(0,10)
+							katjaQW['slut'] += rand(0,1)
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/kitchen_standing_showing_pussy2.jpg"></center>'
+							'You remember that you got Katja to take off her panties earlier today, and wonder if she still is not wearing them. After all, she has changed her clothes since then.'
+							'So you try to discreetly bend down to see up her skirt when she has her back to you.'
+							'But she notices you. "No, I did not put on my panties, just as you asked me. This is what you want to see, isn''t it, you pervert?" she says mockingly as she pulls up her skirt to show you her naked behind.'
+							'After a moment, she lets her skirt fall down and says, "That is enough for voyeurs like you." Then, she continues with her cooking.'
+							act 'Say thanks for the wine and leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
+						end
+					end
+					act 'Say thanks for the wine and leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
+				end
+			end
+		end
+		if pcs_traits['commando_lvl'] > 0 and $pantyworntype = 'none' and npc_sex['A14'] > 0 and katjaQW['no_panties_day'] ! daystart:
+			act 'Show her you are not wearing panties':
+				*clr & cla
+				gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2
+				gs 'stat'
+				katjaQW['no_panties_day'] = daystart
+				if PCloSkirt > 1:
+					if analplugIN = 1:
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga1_7.mp4"></video></center>'
+					else
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga1_<<rand(1,6)>>.jpg"></center>'
+					end
+					'You look around to see if others are coming and then pull up your skirt to show Katja your bare pussy from behind.' 
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activitirs/flashing/pants/inside/pussy/hairy1>>.jpg"></center>'
+					'You look around to see if others are coming and then pull down your pants to show Katja your bare pussy.' 
+				end
+				act 'Katja''s turn': gt 'katja_pantyquest', 'kitchen_show_pussy'
+			end
+		elseif katjaQW['take_of_panties_day'] = daystart:
+			act 'Try to see if she is still not wearing panties':
+				*clr & cla
+				minut += 2
+				gs 'arousal', 'erotic', -2
+				gs 'arousal', 'end'
+				gs 'stat'
+				katjaQW['horny'] += rand(0,10)
+				katjaQW['slut'] += rand(0,1)
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/kitchen_standing_showing_pussy2.jpg"></center>'
+				'You remember that you got Katja to take off her panties earlier today, and wonder if she still is not wearing them. After all, she has changed her clothes since then.'
+				'So you try to discreetly bend down to see up her skirt when she has her back to you.'
+				'But she notices you. "No, I did not put on my panties, just as you asked. This is what you want to see, isn''t it, you pervert," she says mockingly as she pulls up her skirt to show you her naked behind.'
+				'After a moment, she lets her skirt fall down and says, "That''s enough for voyeurs like you." Then, she continues with her cooking.'
+				act 'leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
+			end
+		end
+		act 'leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
+	end
+	act 'leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'kitchen_show_pussy':
+	minut += 2
+	gs 'arousal', 'erotic', -5
+	gs 'arousal', 'end'
+	gs 'stat'
+	katjaQW['horny'] += rand(5,15)
+	katjaQW['slut'] += rand(0,1)
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/kitchen_standing_showing_pussy1.jpg"></center>'
+	'"Your turn. Katja, show me that you are not wearing panties," you demand. "Really <<$pcs_nickname>>! This again? It''s like you don''t trust me," Katja says, rolling her eyes.'
+	'But she does hike up her skirt and shows you her smoothly shaved pussy, not hidden by any panties.'
+	'"I do trust you, it''s just that--" you start saying but are promptly cut off. "You are a pervert that gets off on ogling innocent girls'' naked private parts," she says with a naughty glint in her eyes.'
+	'She then lets her skirt fall and turns back to her cooking.'
+	act 'leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
+end
+
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_hallway':
+	katjaQW['uni_hallway_day'] = daystart
+	minuts += 5
+	gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'like', 'hallway', 1
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/uni_hallway.jpg"></center>'
+	'You walk up to Katja, who is sitting comfortably on a chair. As you approach, she looks to you and smiles.'
+	'"What are you doing Katja?" you ask. "Not much, just relaxing a little before moving on," she answers.'
+	if pcs_traits['commando_lvl'] > 0 and $pantyworntype = 'none' and npc_sex['A14'] > 0 and katjaQW['no_panties_day'] ! daystart:
+		act 'Show her you are not wearing panties':
+			*clr & cla
+			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2
+			gs 'stat'
+			katjaQW['horny'] += rand(5,10)
+			katjaQW['slut'] += 1
+			katjaQW['no_panties_day'] = daystart
+			if PCloSkirt > 1:
+				if analplugIN = 1:
+					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga1_7.mp4"></video></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga1_<<rand(1,6)>>.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+					'You look around to see if others are coming, then pull up your skirt to show Katja your bare pussy from behind.' 
+			else
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activitirs/flashing/pants/inside/pussy/hairy1>>.jpg"></center>'
+				'You look around to see if others are coming and then pull down your pants to show Katja your bare pussy.' 
+			end
+			if katjaQW['slut'] < 30 and katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 0:
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! you can''t just go around flashing your pus... You aren''t wearing panties. What are you doing, put some panties on!" Katja says, very shocked.'
+				'"I flash who I want to, and I don''t wear panties since it is much nicer not to wear them. Now show me if you wear panties or not," you demand as you cover your pussy again.'
+			elseif katjaQW['slut'] < 50 and katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] < 2:
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! you can''t just go around flashing your naked pussy. Put some panties on!" Katja says, not really angry.'
+				'"I flash who I want to, and I don''t wear panties since it is much nicer not to wear them. Now show me if you wear panties or not," you demand as you cover your pussy again.'
+			elseif KatjaQW['slut'] < 100 and katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] < 4:
+				'"Stop it <<$pcs_nickname>>, you should really put some panties on!" Katja says, though she can''t seem to keep her eyes from staring at your pussy.'
+				'"I flash who I want to, and I don''t wear panties since it is much nicer not to wear them. Now show me if you wear panties or not," you demand as you cover your pussy again.'
+			elseif katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] >= 5:
+				'"Very nice <<$pcs_nickname>>. '+iif( pcs_pubes > 3 , 'But you really need to shave that bush off', 'Perfectly smooth, how a pussy should be')+'" Katja says as her eyes devour your naked pussy.'
+			else
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>> you naughty girl, you should put some panties on!" Katja says not at all convincingly while her eyes devour your naked pussy.'
+				'"I don''t wear panties since it is much nicer not to wear them. Now show me if you wear panties or not," you demand as you cover your pussy again.'
+			end
+			act 'Katja''s turn':
+				*clr & cla
+				minut += 2
+				if katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] > 0:
+					if katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] >= 5:
+						gs 'arousal', 'erotic', -5
+						gs 'arousal', 'end'
+						gs 'stat'
+						katjaQW['horny'] += rand(5,10)
+						katjaQW['slut'] += rand(0,1)
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/uni_hallway_naked_pussy.jpg"></center>'
+						'Katja just puts her arms behind her head and spreads her legs without any hesitation, giving you a good look at her smoothly shaven pussy.'
+						'"See? It''s perfectly smooth '+iif( pcs_pubes > 3, 'as yours should also be', 'like yours')+', and not hidden by any unnecessary layers of clothing," Katja says with a wink before closing her legs again.'
+					elseif katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 4:
+						gs 'arousal', 'erotic', -2
+						gs 'stat'
+						katjaQW['horny'] += rand(0,5)
+						katjaQW['slut'] += rand(0,1)
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/uni_hallway_standing_panties.jpg"></center>'
+						'Katja stands up and moves her skirt away so that you can see her elegant panties. "Why are you wearing panties again?" you ask.'
+						'"Because you should not go to class without panties. I''m a good girl, not a slut like some others," Katja says with a wink.'
+						act 'Have her take off her panties':
+							*clr & cla						
+							gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 2
+							gs 'arousal', 'end'
+							gs 'stat'
+							katjaQW['horny'] += rand(0,5)
+							katjaQW['slut'] += rand(0,1)
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/uni_hallway_taking_off_panties.jpg"></center>'
+							if katjaQW['slut'] < 80:
+								'"Come ooooon, Katja. Take those panties off! You done it before," you whine. She looks around, then says, sighing, "Fine, you pervert."'
+								'She then quickly reachs up under her skirt and pulls down her panties. Then, she puts them in her purse. "Happy now?"'
+							else
+								if lazarQW['your_prize_panties_katja'] = 0: lazarQW['your_prize_panties_katja'] = 1
+								katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 5
+								katjaQW['horny'] += (5,10)
+								katjaQW['slut'] += 4
+								'"I''m getting annoyed that I have to keep telling you to take off your panties. You have to learn that proper girls like us don''t wear panties to Uni," you say in a fake angry voice.'
+								'She looks around, sighs, and says, "Fine you pervert." Then, she quickly reachs up under her skirt and pulls down her panties.'
+								'She then hands you her panties and says, "Here '+iif(lazarQW['your_prize_panties_katja'] = 0, 'you can have them', 'another pair for your collection')+' since you insist that I have to be a slut. I don''t need them anymore."'								
+							end
+							gs 'uni_lessons', 'schedule'
+							act 'say goodbye and move on': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
+						end
+					else
+						gs 'arousal', 'erotic', -2
+						gs 'stat'
+						katjaQW['horny'] += rand(0,5)
+						katjaQW['slut'] += rand(0,1)
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/uni_hallway_stitting_panties.jpg"></center>'
+						'Katja looks around and when she''s sure that nobody else can see you two, she puts down the leg she has on the chair so her legs are spread, then hikes up her skirt so you can see her elegant panties.'
+						if katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 3:
+							'"Happy now?" she asks. "You know I won''t be happy before you take those panties off!" you reply.'
+							'"I can''t do that. Not here." Katja says. "Well, at least give me a liiiiiittle more," you plead, giving her your best puppy-eyes.'
+							if katjaQW['slut'] >= 65:
+								'"You are relentless!" Katja says. "You know I''m not a quitter," you chirp excitedly.'
+								act 'See what Katja does':
+									*clr & cla
+									gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 2
+									gs 'arousal', 'end'
+									gs 'stat'
+									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/uni_hallway_standing_panties.jpg"></center>'
+									'She looks around and stands up, still holding her skirt so you can see her panties. "You really want me to follow your slutty example?" she asks.'
+									'"Yes, I do. It is so much nicer without panties, the breeze on your pussy is so liberating! You should really try it!" you answer.'
+									act 'Katja finally relents':
+										*clr & cla						
+										gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 2
+										gs 'arousal', 'end'
+										gs 'stat'
+										katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 4
+										katjaQW['horny'] += rand(5,10)
+										katjaQW['slut'] += 4
+										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/uni_hallway_taking_off_panties.jpg"></center>'
+										'She looks around once more, then quickly reaches up under her skirt and pulls down her panties. Then, she puts them in her purse. "Happy now?"'
+										'"Yes! This is going to be so much fun. Think about how thrilling it will be being careful so you don''t give '+iif(katjaQW['boy_block'] = 1, 'other girls', 'boys')+' a peek of your pussy!" you say enthusiastically.'
+										'"I''m already regretting this..." Katja groans. But she does not look upset, nor does she make any move to put her panties back on.'
+										gs 'uni_lessons', 'schedule'
+										act 'say goodbye and move on': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
+									end
+								end
+							else
+								'"You know I can''t do that. Not here. But I can give you a little sneak peek again." Katja says.'	
+								act 'See what Katja does':
+									*clr & cla
+									gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 2
+									gs 'arousal', 'end'
+									gs 'stat'
+									katjaQW['horny'] += rand(0,5)
+									katjaQW['slut'] += rand(0,1)
+									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/uni_hallway_showing_pussy.jpg"></center>'
+									'She looks around, then puts her left hand down to pull her panties slightly to the side, allowing you a clear view of her smoothly shaved pussy.'
+									'"Very nice!" you exclaim. "Ah, the sacrifices I have to make so a pervert like you is happy," she says jokingly.'
+									'She then puts them back on completely and lets her skirt fall back into place.'
+									gs 'uni_lessons', 'schedule'
+									act 'say goodbye and move on': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
+								end
+							end
+						elseif katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 2 and katjaQW['slut'] >= 50:
+							'"Happy now?" she says, but she doesn''t look nearly as nervous about someone suddenly turning up as she used to...so you take the chance to push her further.'
+							'"Not really. I would be happy if you took those panties off completely," you reply. "I can''t do that. Not here." Katja says. "Well at least give me a liiiiiittle more," you plead, giving her your best puppy-eyes.'
+							act 'See what Katja does':
+								*clr & cla						
+								gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 2
+								gs 'arousal', 'end'
+								gs 'stat'
+								katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 3
+								katjaQW['horny'] += rand(5,10)
+								katjaQW['slut'] += 4
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/uni_hallway_showing_pussy.jpg"></center>'
+								'She looks around very carefully, then puts her left hand down and pulls her panties slightly to the side, allowing you a clear view of her smoothly shaved pussy.'
+								'"Very nice!" you exclaim. "Stop acting like such a huge pervert. It''s not like you haven''t seen it before!" she says jokingly. She then puts them back on completely and let her skirt fall back into place.'
+								gs 'uni_lessons', 'schedule'
+								act 'say goodbye and move on': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
+							end
+						else
+							'"Happy now?" she says looking, around almost paranoid. You probably can''t push her more for now, so you just nod and Katja gives you a big smile as she closes her legs and let her skirt flutter back down.'
+							gs 'uni_lessons', 'schedule'
+							act 'say goodbye and move on': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
+						end
+					end
+				else
+					if katjaQW['slut'] < 30:
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/uni_hallway.jpg"></center>'
+						'"I''m not some slut that goes around flashing my panties. Which, by the way, I am wearing, of course," Katja says in a firm voice, but she does not look to be really angry.'
+						'"Sorry I asked. But I do think that you could stand to loosen up a little..." you reply.'
+					else
+						katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 1
+						gs 'arousal', 'erotic', -2
+						gs 'arousal', 'end'
+						gs 'stat'
+						katjaQW['horny'] += (5,10)
+						katjaQW['slut'] += 4
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/uni_hallway_stitting_panties.jpg"></center>'
+						'Katja looks around and when she''s sure that nobody else can see you two, she says, "I don''t know. We really shouldn''t be doing such things..."'
+						'"Come ooooon, I showed you mine.  It''s only fair that you do it, too," you reply.'
+						'She looks around one more time to make sure you are alone, then puts down the leg she has on the chair so her legs are spread. Then, she hikes up her skirt so you can see her elegant panties.'
+						'"See I''m wearing panties, happy now?" she asks with a sly smile before closing her legs and pulling down her skirt again.'
+					end
+					gs 'uni_lessons', 'schedule'
+					act 'say goodbye and move on': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+	gs 'uni_lessons', 'schedule'
+	act 'say goodbye and move on': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_exit':
+	katjaQW['uni_hallway_day'] = daystart
+	minuts += 5
+	gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'like', 'hallway', 1
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/uni_exit.jpg"></center>'
+	'You walk up to Katja who is standing next to one of the side doors to the outside. As you approach, she looks to you and smiles.'
+	'"What are you doing, Katja?" you ask. "Not much, just thinking about what to do next," she answers.'
+	if pcs_traits['commando_lvl'] > 0 and $pantyworntype = 'none' and npc_sex['A14'] > 0 and katjaQW['no_panties_day'] ! daystart:
+		act 'Show her you are not wearing panties':
+			*clr & cla
+			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2
+			gs 'stat'
+			katjaQW['horny'] += rand(5,10)
+			katjaQW['slut'] += 1
+			katjaQW['no_panties_day'] = daystart
+			if PCloSkirt > 1:
+				if analplugIN = 1:
+					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga1_7.mp4"></video></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga1_<<rand(1,6)>>.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+					'You look around to see if others are coming and then pull up your skirt to show Katja your bare pussy from behind.' 
+			else
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activitirs/flashing/pants/inside/pussy/hairy1>>.jpg"></center>'
+				'You look around to see if others are coming and then pull down your pants to show Katja your bare pussy.' 
+			end
+			if katjaQW['slut'] < 50 and katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 1:
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! you can''t just go around flashing your naked pussy. Put some panties on!" Katja scolds, not really angry.'
+				'"I flash who I want to, and I don''t wear panties since it is much nicer not to wear them. Now show me if you wear panties or not," you demand as you cover your pussy again.'
+			elseif KatjaQW['slut'] < 100:
+				'"Stop it <<$pcs_nickname>>, you should really put some panties on," Katja says, though she can''t seem to keep her eyes from staring at your pussy.'
+				'"I flash who I want to, and I don''t wear panties since it is much nicer not to wear them. Now show me if you wear panties or not," you demand as you cover your pussy again.'
+			else
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>> you naughty girl, you should put some panties on!" Katja says not at all convincingly while her eyes devour your naked pussy.'
+				'"I don''t wear panties since it is much nicer not to wear them. Now show me if you wear panties or not," you demand as you cover your pussy again.'
+			end
+			act 'Katja''s turn':
+				*clr & cla
+				gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 2
+				gs 'stat'
+				katjaQW['horny'] += rand(0,5)
+				katjaQW['slut'] += rand(0,1)
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/uni_exit_showing_panties.jpg"></center>'
+				'Katja looks around to see if anybody can see the both of you. When she is sure that nobody can, she turns around, pulls up her skirt a little, and bends over to show you her panty clad pussy from behind.'
+				'"See? I''m wearing panties like any good girl should," she says in a mocking tone. "You are boring. There is no fun in being such a good girl," you says as she turns around towards you.'
+				act 'See how she reacts':
+					*clr & cla
+					gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 2
+					gs 'stat'
+					katjaQW['horny'] += rand(0,5)
+					if katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 1:
+						katjaQW['horny'] += rand(10,15)
+						katjaQW['slut'] += 4
+						katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 2
+					else
+						katjaQW['horny'] += rand(0,5)
+						katjaQW['slut'] += rand(0,1)
+					end
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/pantyquesty/uni_exit_showing_panties.jpg"></center>'
+					'"Well. I''m not a completely good girl. I''m not wearing a bra," Katja says. "Let me see!" you whisper eagerly.'
+					'Katja looks around once more, and when she sees that you are alone, she unbuttons her shirt and pulls it open to give you a look of her firm C-cup breasts, nipples stiffening in the air.'
+					'"Well, that is enough for you! Otherwise, you''ll start drooling on the floor," she says as she closes and buttons up her shirt.'
+					gs 'uni_lessons', 'schedule'
+					act 'say goodbye and move on': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+	gs 'uni_lessons', 'schedule'
+	act 'say goodbye and move on': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'uni':
+	if katjaQW['uni_hallway_day'] ! daystart and katjaQW['QWstage'] > 0 and katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 1:
+		*nl
+		if (katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 2 and katjaQW['slut'] < 50) or (katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 1 and katjaQW['slut'] >= 40):
+			'You see<a href="exec:gt ''katja_pantyquest'', ''uni_exit''">Katja</a> standing next to one of the doors to the outside.'
+		else
+			'You see<a href="exec:gt ''katja_pantyquest'', ''uni_hallway''">Katja</a> sitting on a chair in a hallway.'
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+--- katja_pantyquest ---------------------------------
+

+ 175 - 158
locations/katja_procedural.qsrc

@@ -1,136 +1,136 @@
 # katja_procedural
-!2022/08/0
-!{
-These files govern Katja''s procedural actions that are called from many places. 
-
-The model used for Katja''s porn scene was originally the porn actress Faye Reagan, lately Red Fox/Michelle H have also been used for a lot of content. But several others have also been used.
-
-The following variables are part of her storyline (the name in the parenthesis is the old name of that variable):
-
-katjaQW['QWstage'] = 1 You have agreed to hang out with Katja after school. (meynoldQW = 1)
-katjaQW['QWstage'] = 2 You have been to Katja''s house and you can go there to hang out with her. (meynoldQW = 2)
-katjaQW['QWstage'] = 3 You have kissed Katja and she might be interested in more. (katjaFirstKiss = 1 and KatjaOTN)
-npc_sex['A14'] = 1 You have had at least one sexual experience with Katja.
-katjaQW['QWstage'] = 4 Katja has asked you to help have sex with a boy.
-katjaQW['QWstage'] = 5 You have agreed to help Katja have sex with a boy.
-katjaQW['QWstage'] = 6 You have talked with Katja about her first experience with a boy.
-katjaQW['QWstage'] = 7 You have told Katja about the boys in the park.
-
-katjaQW['liberated'] is set to one after some time if the player has not started Katja''s quest. It means she will start to be sexually active without having the player character help her.
-
-katjaQW['first_time_in_nightclub'] is set to 1 if you have sex with Katja during a threesome at the nightclub before you start her storyline, and 2 if you make her come during that scene. Used to trigger a different introduction to her storyline.
-
-katjaQW['boy_block'] is set to 1 if you tell Katja that you have no interest in boys when she asks you about your sexual experience with a boy.
-
-katjaQW['relationship_count_start'] is set to daystart when you have had sex with Katja and the yearstart is more than on (that is in the second year). It starts a countdown of 6 to 12 months before Katja will ask you about your relationship.
-katjaQW['relationship_talk'] = 1 you have had a discussion about your relationship.
-
-katjaQW['couple'] is set to 1 when you agree to be a couple.
-katjaQW['faithful'] is sent to 1 if you are a couple and agree not to have sex with others (unless you both participate)
-katjaQW['cheat_warning'] is set the first time Katja confronts the player because she caught them cheating and to 2 after the player has been caught so many times that Katja warns them that she will also start to sleep around. 
-katjaQW['cheat_times'] the number of times since her last wearing that Katja is certain that you cheated on her.
-
-katjaQW['sex_clossedness'] 0 means no restriction on sex scenes with Katja, 1 means only scenes with Katja and the player character are available, 2 means the player character wont have sex with Katja
-
-katjaQW['anal_quest'] =1 Katja has asked you to help her have anal sex with a boy.
-katjaQW['anal_quest'] =2 You have agreed to help Katja have anal sex with a boy.
-katjaQW['anal_quest'] =3 Katja has had anal sex with a boy and you discussed it after.
-
-katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] 	The stages of the side quest of getting Katja to go commando to school. 1 to 3 are just temporary counts,
-							4 means you have gotten Katja to take off her panties when you ask her, and 5 means that she won''t wear panties to school anymore.
-							If you want to check if Katja is not wearing panties at school use katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] >= 5. (katjaTanga, katja_tanga_end)
-
-katjaQW['school_kiss'] Increases the first two times you kiss at school. Used to trigger the kissing competition in the park. (flag_start_parc)
-
-katjaQW['slut'] a number that increases as Katja becomes more and more sexually liberated, and allows her to be willing to do more sexual stuff. (katjaSlut)
-katjaQW['dom'] a number that tells if Katja is dominant or submissive. 0 is neutral, a negative means she is submissive and a positive means she is dominant. In general, the absolute value needs to be above 30 before you will see any effect. (katjaDom but not a 1 to 1 translation since that variable was all over the place.)
-katjaQW['simultanous_boys'] the number of boys Katja has been with at the same time, Is not really set before the number is 2.
-katjaQW['simultanous_girls'] the number of girls Katja has been with at the same time including the player character, so it is not really set before the number is 2.
-
-katjaQW['horny'] a measure of Katja''s arousal. Grows until she has an orgasm and will determine how willing she is at the moment to have sex.
-katjaQw['drinks'] a measure of how drunk Katja is. 0 means sober, 8 quite drunk and 12 that she can barely stand.
-katjaQW['under_influnece_of_cocaine'] if positive it means that her inhibition is still affected by the cocaine she used.
-
-katjaQW['coke_stage'] = 0 Katja has never tried cocaine, and would need to be convinced by a difficult willpower check to try, the circumstances can make the check harder or easier,
-katjaQW['coke_stage'] = 1 Katja has tried cocaine at least once but is still reluctant. Still need to be convinced by a willpower check try again, but not as difficult as the first time.
-katjaQW['coke_stage'] = 2 Katja has tried cocaine several times and is getting less reluctant to use it. Still need to be convinced by a willpower check try again, but easier and can at times be removed if the circumstances are right.
-katjaQW['coke_stage'] = 3 Katja has tried cocaine several times and is getting comfortable with using it. Does in general not need a willpower check to use it if offered, and might take it if offered even if the player character don''t unless forced not to by a willpower check.
-katjaQW['coke_stage'] = 4 Katja is starting to get into using cocaine. Does not need a willpower check to be convinced to take it, might ask the player character or other for it in the right situation (in general before or at a party), and would usually need a willpower check to be convinced to not use it. Might try to convince the player character to also take it.
-katjaQW['coke_stage'] = 5 Katja is getting even more into it. She will start to sometimes buy it herself and offer it to the Player characters in the right situations (at a party or such) and will need convincing to not take it herself. Still only a party user but might now take it at a party without the player being there.
-katjaQW['coke_stage'] = 6 Katja is starting to get addicted. She will almost always have some and will now start suggesting you are taking it more often, for example just hanging out an normal afternoon/evening and need willpower checks to be convinced not to take even if the Player character done''t take any. Still only takes some without the player being present at parties together with others.
-katjaQW['coke_stage'] = 7 Katja is addicted. Will take several times a week even with out the player characters presence. It will start to slowly affect her every day life. But will still be able to function more or less normally.
-katjaQW['coke_stage'] = 8 Katja is very addicted. Will take every day, and unless the player character provides she will start doing stuff to earn money for that takes time away from studying which will harm her education. She might not turn up to class because she was out all night trying to precure money for it, and will often not be found since she is trying to earn money for it, might prostitutes herself for the money.
-katjaQW['coke_stage'] = -1 Katja have been true a cold turkey/rehab and wont touch cocaine for the fear of getting addicted again.
-
- katjaQW['coke_point'] A a variable used to change the katjaQW['coke_stage'].
-katjaQW['financial_strain'] A variable that is used to check if Katja is using more money on drugs that she has, so that she will start doing things to earn those money.
-
-katjaQW['park_sex'] 	a measure of what experience Katja has had with random guys in the park. 0 means she has not had sex with anybody in the park,
-					1 means that she has had sex with one guy at a time (either alone, in a threesome with the player character or while the player had sex with another guy next to them)
-					2 means she has had a threesome with 2 guys you met in the park, and 3 means she has paticipated in an orgy with guys from the park. (katjaSex)
-
-katjaQW['masturbates'] = 1 Katja has started masturbating at night if she get too horny. (KatjaMastr)
-The following 3 variables function as pcs_throat, pcs_vag and pcs_ass does for the player character. So whenever Katja has sex with a guy or a dildo is used on her you should add code to change them as is done for the player character in arousal.
-npc_throat['A14'] The capacity for Katja to take a dick (or dildo) down her throat. (KatjaThroat)
-npc_vag['A14'] The capacity for Katja to take a dick (or dildo) in the vagina.
-npc_ass['A14'] The capacity for Katja to take a dick (or dildo) in her ass. (KatjaAnus)
-katjaQW['pussy_sex'] = 1 Katja has had pussy sex with a guy where the player character wasn''t present.
-katjaQW['anal_sex'] = 1 Katja has had anal sex with a guy where the player character wasn''t present.
-katjaQW['deepthroat'] Number of time Katja have deepthroated
-katjaQW['dp'] the number of times Katja has been double penetrated.
-katjaQW['creampie'] number of creampies Katja have received
- katjaQW['bondage_sex']  number of times Katja and the player character have had sex where the player character was bound and/or blindfolded.
-
-katjaQW['strapon_bj'] = 1 Katja has given a BJ to your strap-on.
-katjaQW['strapon_vag'] = 1 You have fucked Katja''s pussy with your strap-on.
-katjaQW['strapon_ass'] = 1 You have fucked Katja''s ass with your strap-on.
-katjaQW['fisted_vag'] = 1 You have fisted Katja''s vagina.
-
-katjaQW['ivan_pussy'] = 1 Katja has taken Ivan''s cock in her pussy.
-katjaQW['ivan_anal'] = 1 Katja has taken Ivan''s cock in her ass.
-katjaQW['marcus_pussy'] = 1 Katja has taken Marcus''s cock in her pussy.
-katjaQW['marcus_anal'] = 1 Katja has taken Marcus''s cock in her ass.
-katjaQW['marcus_disco'] = 1 Katja and the player character have had a threesome with Marcus at the community center disco.
-katjaQW['lazar_pussy'] = 1 Katja has taken Lazar''s cock in her pussy.
-katjaQW['lazar_anal'] = 1 Katja has taken Lazar''s cock in her ass.
-
-katjaQW['lazar_pussy_talk'] = 1 Katja and the player character have talked about having sex with Lazar.
-katjaQW['lazar_anal_talk'] = 1 Katja and the player character have talked about having anal sex with Lazar.
-
-katjaQW['Lazar_Ivan_4some'] 1 means the had a foursome but no double penetration, 2 means that the player character received a double penetration during the first foursome and have not talked about it yet, and 3 is if the player character have received a double penetration and they have talked about the first foursome.
-
-katjaQW['Marcus_day'] is set to daystart if you or Katja ask to have a threesome with Marcus. Such that the question will only be asked once per day.
-katjaQW['Lazar_day'] is set to daystart if you or Katja ask to have a threesome with Lazar. Such that the question will only be asked once per day.
-
-katjaQW['birth_control_start_day'] This is set to the daystart value from the day Katja''s birth control will be effective if the player tells her to use it. Should be used to check if Katja can become pregnant by if katjaQW['birth_control_start_day'] ! 0 and katjaQW['birth_control_start_day'] < daystart to make sure she is protected.
-katjaQW['birth_control_know'] = 1  Katja started taking birth control without talking with the player character, and has now told the player character that she uses birth control. Only used in one scene so that the player character does not continue to ask about it every time.
-
-KatjaQW['orgasm_day'] Is set to be equal to daystart when Katja gain an orgasm (It is not set all places). (KatjaOrgasm)
-katjaQW['take_of_panties_day'] is set to daystart if you get katja to take of her panties during school break.
-katjaQW['afterschool_hangout_day'] Is set to be equal daystart when you choose to hang out with Katja after school. (katjaMeynoldday)
-katjaQW['no_panties_day'] Is set to daystart if you show Katja that you are not wearing panties.
-katjaQW['no_panties_day_disco'] Is set to daystart if you show Katja that you are not wearing panties at the pav disco. (tangaday)
-
-katjaQW['knows_masturbation'] = 1 You have told Katja how you masturbate (KatjaKnowMastr =1)
-katjaQW['knows_self_fisting'] = 1 You have told Katja how you stuck your fist into your pussy
-katjaQW['knows_self_fisting_anal'] = 1 You have told Katja how you stuck your fist into your ass
-katjaQW['knows_BJ'] = 1 You have told Katja that you have given a guy a blow-job (KatjaKnowBJ =1)
-katjaQW['knows_sex'] = 1 You have told Katja that you have had virginal sex with a guy (KatjaKnowSex =1)
-katjaQW['knows_anal'] = 1 You have told Katja that you have had anal sex with a guy (KatjaKnowAnal =1)
-katjaQW['knows_cuni'] = 1 You have told Katja that have gone down on another girl (KatjaKnowKuni =1)
-katjaQW['know_Pirced_tongue'] = 1 katja have noticed your tongue piercing (KatjaKnowPirsA =1)
-
-katjaQW['school_sex'] = 1 Katja has taken you to a storage room at school to have sex. (katschoolsex)
-katjaQW['disco_Foto'] =1 somebody has taken a picture of Katja''s exposed breast at the disco. Right now to only use of this variable is so that another foto wont be taken. (katja_disco_Foto)
-
-katjaQW['drunk_help'] is set to 1 when Katja walks you home from the disco because you are too drunk. Will be reset to 0 after you talk to her about it at school. (meynoldQW = 3)
-katjaQW['no_panties_at_disco'] is set if Katja shows you at the disco that she is not wearing panties. Will be reset to 0 at night. (katja_disco_end)
-KatjaQW['sex_in_the_park_comment'] temporary variabel which is set during sex with guys in the park to make sure she gave the right comment before she says goodbye. Will be reset to 0 when going home after sex. (KatjaOhrenet)
-
-katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 1 Katja has told you she is going to uni to study teaching.
-katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] =1 you have told Katja that you are going to the university to study in the teaching program.
-katjaQW['meet_uni_class'] = 1 You have met Katja in your uni class.
-}
+!2022/08/02
+
+!!This files governs Katja''s procedural actions that are called form many places. 
+
+!! The model used for Katja''s porn scene was originally the porn actress Faye Reagan, lately Red Fox/Michelle H have also been used for a lot of content. But several other have also been used.
+
+!! The following variables are part of her story line (the name in the parenthesis is the old name of that variable):
+
+!! katjaQW['QWstage'] = 1 You have agreed to hang out with Katja afer school. (meynoldQW = 1)
+!! katjaQW['QWstage'] = 2 You have been to Katja''s house and you can go there to hang out with her. (meynoldQW = 2)
+!! katjaQW['QWstage'] = 3 You have kissed Katja and she might be interested in more. (katjaFirstKiss = 1 and KatjaOTN)
+!! npc_sex['A14'] = 1 You have had at least one sexual experience with Katja.
+!! katjaQW['QWstage'] = 4 Katja have asked you to help have sex with a boy.
+!! katjaQW['QWstage'] = 5 You have agreed to help Katja have sex with a boy.
+!! katjaQW['QWstage'] = 6 You have talked with Katja about her first experience with a boy.
+!! katjaQW['QWstage'] = 7 You have told Katja about the boys in the park.
+
+!! katjaQW['liberated'] is set to one after some time if the player have not started Katja''s quest. It means she will start to be sexually active with out having the player character help her.
+
+!! katjaQW['first_time_in_nightclub'] is set to 1 if you have sex with Katja during a threesome at the night club before you start her storyline, and 2 if you make her come during that scene. Used trigger a different introduction to her storyline.
+
+!! katjaQW['boy_block'] is set to 1 if you tell Katja that you have no interest in boys when she ask about you sex experience whit boy.
+
+!! katjaQW['relationship_count_start'] is set to daystart when you have had sex with Katja and the yearstart is more than on (that is in the second year). It starts a countdown of 6 to 12 months before Katja will ask you about your relationship.
+!! katjaQW['relationship_talk'] = 1 you have had a discussion about your relationship.
+
+!! katjaQW['couple'] is set to 1 when you agree to be a couple.
+!! katjaQW['faithful'] is sent to 1 if you are a couple and agree not to have sex with others (unless you both participate)
+!! katjaQW['cheat_warning'] is set the first time Katja confronts the player because the caught them cheating and to 2 after the player have been caught so many times that Katja warns them that she will also starts to sleep around. 
+!! katjaQW['cheat_times'] the number of times since her last waring that Katja is certain that you cheated on her.
+
+!! katjaQW['sex_clossedness'] 0 mean no restriction on sex scenes with Katja, 1 mean only scenes with Katja and the player character are available, 2 mean that the player character wont have sex with Katja
+
+!! katjaQW['anal_quest'] =1 Katja has asked you to help her have anal sex with a boy.
+!! katjaQW['anal_quest'] =2 You have agreed to help Katja have anal sex with a boy.
+!! katjaQW['anal_quest'] =3 Katja has had anal sex with a boy and you discussed it afterwards.
+
+!! katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] 	The stages of the side quest of getting Katja to go commando to school. 1 to 3 are just temporary counts,
+!!							4 means you have gotten Katja to take off her panties when you ask her, and 5 means that she won''t wear panties to school anymore.
+!!							If you want to check if Katja is not wearing panties at school use katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] >= 5. (katjaTanga, katja_tanga_end)
+
+!! katjaQW['school_kiss'] Increases the first two times you kiss at school. Used to trigger the kissing competition in the park. (flag_start_parc)
+
+!! katjaQW['slut'] a number that increases as Katja becomes more and more sexually liberated, and allows her to be willing to do more sexual stuff. (katjaSlut)
+!! katjaQW['dom'] a number that tells if Katja is dominant or submissive. 0 is neutral, a negative means she is submissive and a positive means she is dominant. In general the absolute value needs to be above 30 before you will see any effect. (katjaDom but not a 1 to 1 translation since that variable was all over the place.)
+!! katjaQW['simultanous_boys'] the number of boys Katja have been with at the same time, Is not really set before the number is 2.
+!! katjaQW['simultanous_girls'] the number of girls Katja have been with at the same time including the player character, so it is not really set before the number is 2.
+
+!! katjaQW['horny'] a measure of Katja''s arousal. Grows until she have an orgasm and will determine how willing she is at the moment to have sex.
+!! katjaQw['drinks'] a measure of how drunk Katja is. 0 means sober, 8 quit drunk and 12 that she can barely stand.
+!! katjaQW['under_influnece_of_cocaine'] if positive it means that her inhibition is still affected by the cocaine she used.
+
+!! katjaQW['coke_stage'] = 0 Katja have never tried cocaine, and would need to be convinced by a difficult willpower check to try, the circumstances can make the check harder or easier,
+!! katjaQW['coke_stage'] = 1 Katja have tried cocaine at least once, but is still reluctant. Still need to be convinced by a willpower check try again, but not as difficult as the first time.
+!! katjaQW['coke_stage'] = 2 Katja have tried cocaine several times and is getting less reluctant to use it. Still need to be convinced by a willpower check try again, but easier and can at times be removed if the circumstances are right.
+!! katjaQW['coke_stage'] = 3 Katja have tried cocaine several times and is getting comfortable with using it. Does in general not need a willpower check to use it if offered, and might take it if offered even if the player character don''t unless forced not to by a willpower check.
+!! katjaQW['coke_stage'] = 4 Katja is starting to get into using cocaine. Does not need a willpower check to be convinced to take it, might ask the player character or other for it in the right situation (in general before or at a party), and would usually need a willpower check to be convinced to not use it. Might try to convince the player character to also take it.
+!! katjaQW['coke_stage'] = 5 Katja is getting even more into it. She will start to sometimes buy it herself and offer it to the Player characters in the right situations (at a party or such) and will need convincing to not take it herself. Still only a party user but might now take it at a party without the player being there.
+!! katjaQW['coke_stage'] = 6 Katja is starting to get addicted. She will almost always have some and will now start suggesting you are taking it more often, for example just hanging out an normal afternoon/evening and need willpower checks to be convinced not to take even if the Player character done''t take any. Still only takes some without the player being present at parties together with others.
+!! katjaQW['coke_stage'] = 7 Katja is addicted. Will take several times a week even with out the player characters presence. It will start to slowly affect her every day life. But will still be able to function more or less normally.
+!! katjaQW['coke_stage'] = 8 Katja is very addicted. Will take every day, and unless the player character provides she will start doing stuff to earn money for that takes time away from studying which will harm her education. She might not turn up to class because she was out all night trying to precure money for it, and will often not be found since she is trying to earn money for it, might prostitutes herself for the money.
+!! katjaQW['coke_stage'] = -1 Katja have been true a cold turkey/rehab and wont touch cocaine for the fear of getting addicted again.
+
+!!  katjaQW['coke_point'] A a variable used to change the katjaQW['coke_stage'].
+!! katjaQW['financial_strain'] A variable that is used to check if Katja is using more money on drugs thatn she have, so that she will start doing things to earn those money.
+
+!! katjaQW['park_sex'] 	a measure of what experience Katja has had with random guys in the park. 0 means she has not had sex with anybody in the park,
+!!					1 means that she has had sex with one guy at a time (either alone, in a threesome with the player character or while the player had sex with another guy next to them)
+!!					2 means she has had a threesome with 2 guys you met in the park, and 3 means she has paticipated in an orgy with guys from the park. (katjaSex)
+
+!! katjaQW['masturbates'] = 1 Katja has started masturbating at night if she get too horny. (KatjaMastr)
+!! The following 3 variables functions as pcs_throat, pcs_vag and pcs_ass does for the player character. So whenever Katja has sex with a guy or a dildo is used on her you should add code to change them as is done for the player character in arousal.
+!! npc_throat['A14'] The capacity for Katja to take a dick (or dildo) down her throat. (KatjaThroat)
+!! npc_vag['A14'] The capacity for Katja to take a dick (or dildo) in the vagina.
+!! npc_ass['A14'] The capacity for Katja to take a dick (or dildo) in her ass. (KatjaAnus)
+!! katjaQW['pussy_sex'] = 1 Katja have had pussy sex with guy where the player character wasn''t present.
+!! katjaQW['anal_sex'] = 1 Katja have had anal sex with guy where the player character wasn''t present.
+!! katjaQW['deepthroat'] Number of time Katja have deepthroated
+!! katjaQW['dp'] the number of times Katja have been double penetrated.
+!! katjaQW['creampie'] number of creampies Katja have received
+!!  katjaQW['bondage_sex']  number of times Katja and the player character have had sex where the player character was bound and/or blindfolded.
+
+!! katjaQW['strapon_bj'] = 1 Katja has given a BJ to your strap-on.
+!! katjaQW['strapon_vag'] = 1 You have fucked Katja''s pussy with your strap-on.
+!! katjaQW['strapon_ass'] = 1 You have fucked Katja''s ass with your strap-on.
+!! katjaQW['fisted_vag'] = 1 You have fisted Katja''s vagina.
+
+!! katjaQW['ivan_pussy'] = 1 Katja has taken Ivan''s cock in her pussy.
+!! katjaQW['ivan_anal'] = 1 Katja has taken Ivan''s cock in her ass.
+!! katjaQW['marcus_pussy'] = 1 Katja has taken Marcus''s cock in her pussy.
+!! katjaQW['marcus_anal'] = 1 Katja has taken Marcus''s cock in her ass.
+!! katjaQW['marcus_disco'] = 1 Katja and the player character have had a threesome with Marcus at the community center disco.
+!! katjaQW['lazar_pussy'] = 1 Katja has taken Lazar''s cock in her pussy.
+!! katjaQW['lazar_anal'] = 1 Katja has taken Lazar''s cock in her ass.
+
+!! katjaQW['lazar_pussy_talk'] = 1 Katja and the player character have talked about having sex with Lazar.
+!! katjaQW['lazar_anal_talk'] = 1 Katja and the player character have talked about having anal sex with Lazar.
+
+!! katjaQW['Lazar_Ivan_4some'] 1 means the had a foursome but no double penetration, 2 means that the player character received a double penetration during the first foursome and have not talked about it yet, and 3 is if the player character have received a double penetration and they have talked about the first foursome.
+
+!! katjaQW['Marcus_day'] is set to daystart if you or Katja ask to have a threesome with Marcus. Such that the question will only be asked once per day.
+!! katjaQW['Lazar_day'] is set to daystart if you or Katja ask to have a threesome with Lazar. Such that the question will only be asked once per day.
+
+!! katjaQW['birth_control_start_day'] This is set to the daystart value from the day Katja''s birth control will be effective if the player tells her to use it. Should be used to check if Katja can become pregnant by if katjaQW['birth_control_start_day'] ! 0 and katjaQW['birth_control_start_day'] < daystart to make sure she is protected.
+!! katjaQW['birth_control_know'] = 1  Katja started taking birth control without talking with the player character, and has now told the player character that she uses birth control. Only used in one scene so that the player character does not continue to ask about it every time.
+
+!! KatjaQW['orgasm_day'] Is set to be equal to daystart when Katja gain an orgasm (It is not set all places). (KatjaOrgasm)
+!! katjaQW['take_of_panties_day'] is set to daystart if you get katja to take of her panties during school break.
+!! katjaQW['afterschool_hangout_day'] Is set to be equal daystart when you choose to hang out with Katja after school. (katjaMeynoldday)
+!! katjaQW['no_panties_day'] Is set to daystart if you show Katja that you are not wearing panties.
+!! katjaQW['no_panties_day_disco'] Is set to daystart if you show Katja that you are not wearing panties at the pav disco. (tangaday)
+
+!! katjaQW['knows_masturbation'] = 1 You have told Katja how you masturbate (KatjaKnowMastr =1)
+!! katjaQW['knows_self_fisting'] = 1 You have told Katja how you stuck your fist into your pussy
+!! katjaQW['knows_self_fisting_anal'] = 1 You have told Katja how you stuck your fist into your ass
+!! katjaQW['knows_BJ'] = 1 You have told Katja that you have given a guy a blow-job (KatjaKnowBJ =1)
+!! katjaQW['knows_sex'] = 1 You have told Katja that you have had virginal sex with a guy (KatjaKnowSex =1)
+!! katjaQW['knows_anal'] = 1 You have told Katja that you have had anal sex with a guy (KatjaKnowAnal =1)
+!! katjaQW['knows_cuni'] = 1 You have told Katja that have gone down on another girl (KatjaKnowKuni =1)
+!! katjaQW['know_Pirced_tongue'] = 1 katja have noticed your tongue piercing (KatjaKnowPirsA =1)
+
+!! katjaQW['school_sex'] = 1 Katja have taken you to a storage room at school to have sex. (katschoolsex)
+!! katjaQW['disco_Foto'] =1 somebody have takien a picture of Katja''s exposed breast at the disco. Right now to only use of this variable is so that another foto wont be taken. (katja_disco_Foto)
+
+!! katjaQW['drunk_help'] is set to 1 when Katja walks you home from the disco because you are to drunk. Will be reset to 0 after you talk to her about it at school. (meynoldQW = 3)
+!! katjaQW['no_panties_at_disco'] is set if Katja shows you at the disco that she is not vearing panties. Will be reset to 0 at night. (katja_disco_end)
+!! KatjaQW['sex_in_the_park_comment'] temposry varibale which is set during sex with guys in the park to make sure she give the right comment before she says goodbuy. Will be rest to 0 when going home after sex. (KatjaOhrenet)
+
+!! katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 1 Katja has told you she is going to uni to study teaching.
+!! katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] =1 you have told Katja that you are going to the university to study in the teaching program.
+!! katjaQW['meet_uni_class'] = 1 You have meet Katja in you uni class.
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'hourly':
 	!! Modifies Katja''s state each hour, mainly reducing drugs and alcohol levels
 	gs 'katja_meynold_schedule'
@@ -216,7 +216,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cikl':
 	elseif katjaQW['slut'] > 100 and katjaQW['preference_change'] = 1:
 		katjaQW['preference_change'] = 2
 		gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'clothes_thin', 'like'
+		gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'short_skirt', 'love'
 	end	
+	
+	!! Changing of preferences as Katja slowly get convinced to not wear panties at school
+	if katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] > 0 and katjaQW['preference_change_pantQW'] = 0:
+		katjaQW['preference_change_pantQW'] = 1
+		gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'clothes_exposed_ass', 'neutral'
+		gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'clothes_exposed_bra', 'neutral'
+		gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'clothes_exposed_panties', 'neutral'
+		gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'clothes_exposed_pussy',	'dislike'
+		gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'clothes_exposed_tits', 'dislike'	
+	elseif katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] > 4 and katjaQW['preference_change_pantQW'] = 1:
+		katjaQW['preference_change_pantQW'] = 2
+		gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'clothes_exposed_pussy',	'neutral'
+		gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'clothes_exposed_tits', 'neutral'	
+	end
 
 	!! Check if she had sex with other after being at the disco alone
 	if katjaQW['liberated'] = 1 or (katjaQW['relationship_talk'] = 1 and katjaQW['faithful'] = 0):
@@ -430,8 +445,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_set':
 					end
 				else	
 					if rand(0,5) = 0:
-						npc_vag['A14'] += 2
-						katjaQW['pussy_sex'] = 1
+						if npc_vag['A14'] < rand(10,20): npc_vag['A14'] += 2
+						if katjaQW['pussy_sex'] = 0: katjaQW['pussy_sex'] = 1
 					end
 				end
 				if npc_ass['A14'] > 0 and rand(0,3) > 0:
@@ -443,8 +458,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_set':
 					end
 				else	
 					if rand(0,7) = 0:
-						npc_ass['A14'] += 2
-						katjaQW['anal_sex'] = 1
+						if npc_ass['A14'] < rand(10,20): npc_vag['A14'] += 2
+						if katjaQW['anal_sex'] = 0: katjaQW['anal_sex'] = 1
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -452,7 +467,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_set':
 			if npc_throat['A14'] > 0 and rand(0,7) > 0:
 				if npc_throat['A14'] < rand(8,22): npc_throat['A14'] += 1
 			else	
-				if rand(0,3) = 0: npc_throat['A14'] += 1
+				if rand(0,3) = 0 and npc_throat['A14'] < rand(8,22): npc_throat['A14'] += 1
 			end
 			
 			!! It this case Katja will have sex with at most 2 of the boys present
@@ -470,8 +485,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_set':
 				if katjaQW['creampie'] > 0 and rand(0,5) = 0: katjaQW['creampie'] += 1
 			else	
 				if rand(0,5) = 0:
-					npc_vag['A14'] += 2
-					katjaQW['pussy_sex'] = 1
+					if npc_vag['A14'] < rand(10,20): npc_vag['A14'] += 2
+					if katjaQW['pussy_sex'] = 0: katjaQW['pussy_sex'] = 1
 				end
 			end
 			if npc_ass['A14'] > 0 and rand(0,3) > 0:
@@ -483,15 +498,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_set':
 				end
 			else	
 				if rand(0,7) = 0:
-					npc_ass['A14'] += 2
-					katjaQW['anal_sex'] = 1
+					if npc_ass['A14'] < rand(10,20): npc_vag['A14'] += 2
+					if katjaQW['anal_sex'] = 0: katjaQW['anal_sex'] = 1
 				end
 			end
 
 			if npc_throat['A14'] > 0 and rand(0,7) > 0:
 				if npc_throat['A14'] < rand(8,22): npc_throat['A14'] += 1
 			else	
-				if rand(0,3) = 0: npc_throat['A14'] += 1
+				if rand(0,3) = 0 and npc_throat['A14'] < rand(8,22): npc_throat['A14'] += 1
 			end
 
 			!! In this case she can have sex with all the boys present
@@ -505,21 +520,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_set':
 		!! Katja was in a situation with one or more girls where she might have had sex if some of them.
 		if katjaQW['simultanous_girls'] = 0 and rand(0,3) <= katjaQW['slut']/33:
 			!! Katja have never had sex with a girl before
-			if npc_vag['A14'] > 0 and rand(0,5) > 0:
-				 npc_vag['A14'] += 1
-			else	
-				if rand(0,9) = 0: npc_vag['A14'] += 1
-			end
-			if npc_ass['A14'] > 0 and rand(0,7) > 0:
-				 npc_ass['A14'] += 1
-			else	
-				if rand(0,14) = 0: npc_ass['A14'] += 1
-			end
+			if ARGS[1] = 0:
+				if npc_vag['A14'] > 0 and rand(0,5) > 0 and npc_vag['A14'] < 15:
+					 npc_vag['A14'] += 1
+				else	
+					if rand(0,9) = 0: npc_vag['A14'] += 1
+				end
+				if npc_ass['A14'] > 0 and rand(0,7) > 0 and npc_ass['A14'] < 15:
+					 npc_ass['A14'] += 1
+				else	
+					if rand(0,14) = 0: npc_ass['A14'] += 1
+				end
 
-			if npc_throat['A14'] > 0 and rand(0,2) = 0:
-				npc_throat['A14'] += 1
-			else	
-				if rand(0,6) = 0: npc_throat['A14'] += 1
+				if npc_throat['A14'] > 0 and rand(0,2) = 0 and npc_throat['A14'] < 15:
+					npc_throat['A14'] += 1
+				else	
+					if rand(0,6) = 0: npc_throat['A14'] += 1
+				end
 			end
 			
 			!! In this case Katja will have sex with at most 3 of the girls present
@@ -545,9 +562,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_set':
 			end
 
 			!! In this case she can have sex with all the girls present
-			katjaQW['simultanous_girls'] += max(0,rand(0,ARGS[1] - katjaQW['simultanous_girls']))
+			katjaQW['simultanous_girls'] += max(0,rand(0,ARGS[2] - katjaQW['simultanous_girls']))
 				
-			katjaQW['slut'] += min(katjaQW['simultanous_gitls'],ARGS[1])*2
+			katjaQW['slut'] += min(katjaQW['simultanous_gitls'],ARGS[2])*2
 		end
 	end
 end

+ 32 - 32
locations/lover.qsrc

@@ -3,51 +3,51 @@
 if $ARGS[0] = 'add':
 	if mid($boy,1,1) = 'C': gs 'npcpreservec', $boy & gs 'boyStat', $npclastsaved
 	i = arrsize('pcs_lovers')
-	$lover[i] = $boy
-	$loverdesc[i] = $boydesc
-	loverbodyrand[i] = boybodyrand
-	$loverbody[i] = $boybody
-	loverbodrand[i] = boybodrand
-	$loverbod[i] = $boybod
-	loverfacerand[i] = boyfacerand
-	$loverface[i] = $boyface
-	loverdick[i] = dick
-	$loverdick_girth[i] = $dick_girth
-	loversilaVag[i] = silaVag
-	loverfinance[i] = finance
-	vneshlover[i] = vneshBoy
-	$loverClo[i] = $boyClo
-	figurlover[i] = figurBoy
-	titlover[i] = titBoy
-	hairlover[i] = hairBoy
-	haraklover[i] = harakBoy
+	$lover[i] = $boy									& !boyStat: = $npclastcalled
+	$loverdesc[i] = $boydesc							& !boystat (new)
+	loverbodyrand[i] = boybodyrand						& !boy/girl
+	$loverbody[i] = $boybody							& !boy/girl
+	loverbodrand[i] = boybodrand						& !boy/girl
+	$loverbod[i] = $boybod								& !boy/girl
+	loverfacerand[i] = boyfacerand						& !boy/girl
+	$loverface[i] = $boyface							& !boy/girl
+	loverdick[i] = npc_dick[$boy]
+	$loverdick_girth[i] = $npc_thdick[$npclastsaved]
+	loversilaVag[i] = npc_sexskill[$npclastsaved]
+	loverfinance[i] = npc_finance[$npclastsaved]
+	vneshlover[i] = npc_apprnc[$npclastsaved]
+	$loverClo[i] = $boyClo								& !boy/girl
+	figurlover[i] = figurBoy							& !boy/girl
+	titlover[i] = npc_bust[$npclastsaved]
+	hairlover[i] = npc_haircol[$npclastsaved]
+	haraklover[i] = harakBoy							& !boy/girl
 	loverday[i] = daystart
 	loverrelation[i] = 3
 	loverdays[i] = 0
 	boyonce[i] = 0
-	loverizvrat[i] = izvrat
+	loverizvrat[i] = izvrat								& !boy/girl
 	giftDay[i] = 0
 	giftNum[i] = 0
 	loverlove[i] = 0
 	loverscompliance[i] = 0
-	lover_picture[i] = lover_picrand
+	lover_picture[i] = lover_picrand[$npclastsaved]
 	meethour[i] = 0
 	svidanie[i] = 0
 	meetday[i] = 0
 
 	!!new preferences
-	clotTypePref[i] = clotTypePrefTmp
-	clotQualPref[i] = clotQualPrefTmp
-	clotTopPref[i] = clotTopPrefTmp
-	bottShorPref[i] = bottShorPrefTmp
-	clotThinPref[i] = clotThinPrefTmp
-	bimbPref[i] = bimbPrefTmp
-	pierPref[i] = pierPrefTmp
-	tattPref[i] = tattPrefTmp
-	lipsPref[i] = lipsPrefTmp
-	bodyPref[i] = bodyPrefTmp
-	makePref[i] = makePrefTmp
-	IQPref[i] = IQPrefTmp
+	clotTypePref[i] = clotTypePrefTmp					& !boy/girl
+	clotQualPref[i] = clotQualPrefTmp					& !boy/girl
+	clotTopPref[i] = clotTopPrefTmp						& !boy/girl
+	bottShorPref[i] = bottShorPrefTmp					& !boy/girl
+	clotThinPref[i] = clotThinPrefTmp					& !boy/girl
+	bimbPref[i] = bimbPrefTmp							& !boy/girl
+	pierPref[i] = pierPrefTmp							& !boy/girl
+	tattPref[i] = tattPrefTmp							& !boy/girl
+	lipsPref[i] = lipsPrefTmp							& !boy/girl
+	bodyPref[i] = bodyPrefTmp							& !boy/girl
+	makePref[i] = makePrefTmp							& !boy/girl
+	IQPref[i] = IQPrefTmp								& !boy/girl
 	loverGender[i] = npc_gender[$npclastsaved]
 
 	!! making sure lover has pronouns

파일 크기가 너무 크기때문에 변경 상태를 표시하지 않습니다.
+ 226 - 261
locations/mother.qsrc


+ 121 - 137
locations/mother_chats.qsrc

@@ -5,24 +5,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape_talk':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/hug_sad1.jpg"></center>'
-	'"<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>..." you say to get her attention, however, before she can respond or even turn to look at you the emotions and trauma take over and you blurt out. "I''ve been raped!" You barely manage to say it before the flood gates open and you are sobbing in front of her.'
-	'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> goes pale in shock, immediately stops what she''s doing and runs over to you saying "Oh no <<$pcs_nickname>>!..." then wraps you in her arms.'
-	'She doesn''t say anything immediately but holds you tight against her. You can feel her tears wetting your cheek, running down alongside your own.'
-	'Your crying gets worse and you start sobbing uncontrollably in your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s arms. She hugs you tighter until your tears subside.'
-	'Once you''ve stopped crying and are only sniffing she sits down with you and says "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I love you and I''m here for you and will support you through this. If there''s anything you need just come to me. If you want to talk about it or..." Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> leaves it open for you to continue or not.'
-		
+	'"<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>..." you say to get her attention. However, before she can respond or even turn to look at you, the emotions and trauma take over. "I''ve been raped!" You barely manage to say it before the flood gates open and you''re sobbing in front of her.'
+	'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> goes pale in shock, immediately stops what she''s doing and runs over to you. "Oh no! <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
+	'She quickly wraps you in her arms and doesn''t say anything as she holds you tightly against her. You can feel her tears wetting your cheek, running down alongside your own.'
+	'Your crying gets worse and you start sobbing uncontrollably in your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s arms as she hugs you tighter until your tears subside.'
+	'Once you''ve stopped crying, she sits down with you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I love you and I''m here for you and will support you through this. If there''s anything you need, just come to me. If you want to talk about it or..."'
+
 	act 'No':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 10
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/cry_together1.jpg"></center>'
 		'You shake your head slowly. "No <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I just wanted to tell you. I guess to get it off my chest. Thank you for listening."'
-		'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks at you with a sad smile and says "Whatever you want darling just let me know. I haven''t really done anything."'
-		'You smile at her "Yes you did <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, you listened and gave me a hug, which was what I needed."'
+		'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks at you with a sad smile. "Whatever you want darling, just let me know. I haven''t really done anything."'
+		'You smile at her. "Yes, you did <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>! You listened and gave me a hug, which was what I needed."'
 		*nl
 		'Tears well up in your eyes again and she pulls you back into her arms and cuddles you, holding you tight as you both let out all your pain and anguish.'
-		'As you eventually calm down your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks at you strokes your face and smiles. "I''m glad you spoke to me about this rather than carrying the burden by yourself. If you want to talk more about this or anything else I''m here for you; I love you and will support you. <i>Always</i>!"'
-		'You feel that your chat with her has helped you a bit. You continue to hug her crying on her shoulder for a while.'
+		'As you eventually calm down, your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks at you as she strokes your face and smiles. "I''m glad you spoke to me about this rather than carrying the burden by yourself. If you want to talk more about this or anything else, I''m here for you; I love you and will support you. <i>Always</i>!"'
+		'You feel that your chat with her has helped you and you continue to hug her and cry on her shoulder for a while.'
 		act 'Continue': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	end
 	
@@ -32,8 +32,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape_talk':
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/hug_sad2.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Okay <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I just wanted to tell you. I''don''t really know what else there is to say?"'
-		'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks at you with concern, "Well <<$pcs_nickname>>, did he do anything else? I mean... Sorry, this isn''t coming out right." Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> stops and you both start crying again as you hug each other for a while longer.'
+		'"I just wanted to tell you," you reply. "I don''t really know what else there is to say."'
+		'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks at you with concern. "Well, did he do anything else? I mean... Sorry, this isn''t coming out right."'
+		'She stops and you both start crying again as you hug each other for a while longer.'
 		
 		act 'You don''t know':
 			mc_inventory['morning_after_pill'] +=1
@@ -41,10 +42,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape_talk':
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-			'"I don''t know <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> it''s only recently happened and I just didn''t know what to do." You shrug sadly.'
-			'After a very brief pause your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> adds her immediate thought. "Erm... <<$pcs_nickname>>, I take it you''ve taken the morning after pill? If not you need to do that as you don''t want to end up pregnant this way. I can get one for you."'
-			'You nod and say. "Okay <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, thanks." You reply quietly.'
-			'Your mum looks at you with mounting concern. "Also I guess we should report it to the police and most importantly get you checked over at the clinic as you don''t know if he''s got anything unpleasant. I''ll come with you so you don''t have to go through that on your own if you want."'
+			'"I don''t know, <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>! It''s only recently happened and I just didn''t know what to do!"'
+			'After a very brief pause, your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> adds her immediate thought. "Erm... <<$pcs_nickname>>, I take it you''ve taken the morning after pill? If not, then you need to do that as you don''t want to end up pregnant. I can get one for you."'
+			'You nod. "Okay <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>. Thanks."'
+			'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks at you with mounting concern. "I guess we should also report it to the police and most importantly get you checked over at the clinic as you don''t know if he''s got anything unpleasant. I''ll come with you if you want so you don''t have to go through that on your own."'
 			
 			act 'Already done':
 				cla & *clr
@@ -56,16 +57,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape_talk':
 				minut += 10
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-				'Realising what your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> means you tell her "I reported it to the police at the time but don''t expect them to do anything, especially as I couldn''t give them a good description of him." Your body shakes involuntarily at the thought as you pause before continuing.'
-				'"I''ve also been to the clinic but it''s too soon to know anything definite so I''ll have to go back for a second check to make sure there''s nothing further."'
-				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks at you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, If you want me to go with you please just let me know; you don''t have to do that alone."'
-				'"Okay <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> I will but I think I''d rather just go by myself. The embarrassment of letting the doctor examine me down there after what happened... Urgh!"'
+				'"I already reported it to the police, but I don''t expect them to do anything, especially as I couldn''t give them a good description of him." Your body shakes involuntarily at the thought as you pause before continuing.'
+				'"I''ve also been to the clinic, but it''s too soon to know anything definite so I''ll have to go back for a second check to make sure."'
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks at you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, ff you want me to go with you please just let me know; you don''t have to do that alone."'
+				'"I think I''d rather just go by myself, <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>. The embarrassment of letting the doctor examine me down there after what happened..."'
 				'Tears well up in your eyes again and she pulls you back into her arms and cuddles you, holding you tight as you both let out all your pain and anguish.'
-				'As you calm down your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks at you strokes your face and smiles. "At least you talked to me about this <<$pcs_nickname>> rather than keeping all this bottled up inside."'
-				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> makes you both a cup of tea and shuts the kitchen door. As you drink it she spends some time focusing on and comforting you.'
-				'She concludes by saying, "If you want to talk about this or anything else I''m here for you. I love and support you. <i>Always</i>."'
-				'You feel that your chat with her has helped you a bit. You continue to hug her crying on her shoulder for a while.'
-				act 'Continue':gt 'kuhrPar'
+				*nl
+				'As you calm down, your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks at you as she strokes your face and smiles. "At least you talked to me about this rather than keeping it all bottled up inside."'
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> makes you both a cup of tea and shuts the kitchen door. As you drink it, she spends some time focusing on and comforting you.'
+				'She concludes by saying "If you want to talk about this or anything else, then I''m here for you. I love and support you. <i>Always</i>."'
+				'You feel that your chat with her has helped you and you continue to hug her and cry on her shoulder for a while.'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'kuhrPar'
 			end
 
 			act 'No police and will go to the clinic':
@@ -73,23 +75,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape_talk':
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/prost10.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Is there any point in reporting it to the police? I didn''t get a clear look at the bastard and even if I did I doubt they''d do anything." You pause "Yes, the clinic would be a good idea, who knows what he''s got and what the consequence may be!?"'
-				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks as though she''s going to say something but clearly has second thoughts and just shakes her head sadly.'
+				'"Is there any point in reporting it to the police? I didn''t get a clear look at the bastard and even if I did I doubt they''d do anything. The clinic would be a good idea, though. Who knows what he''s got and what the consequence may be!?"'
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks as though she''s going to say something, but has second thoughts and just shakes her head sadly.'
 				'Tears well up in your eyes again and she pulls you back into her arms and cuddles you, holding you tight as you both let out all your pain and anger.'
-				'As you calm down your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks at you strokes your face and smiles. "Okay <<$pcs_nickname>> how about you get yourself freshened up and I''ll wait here for you. I''ll go to the clinic with you so you don''t need to do all this by yourself."'
+				'As you calm down, your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks at you as she strokes your face and smiles. "Okay, how about you get yourself freshened up and I''ll wait here for you. I''ll go to the clinic with you so you don''t need to do all this by yourself."'
+				
 				act 'Go to the clinic':
 					cla & *clr
 					minut += 30
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/hospital.jpg"></center>'
-					'You nod at your mum and return a few minutes later and head to the clinic together.'
-					'On the way you ask your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> to remain in the waiting room as the whole thing is traumatic enough.'
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks at you and smiles. "Of course, if that''s what you want darling."'
-					'A little while later you return to your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and tell her that the doctor didn''t find anything but that you have to come back soon for a second check."'
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks at you. If you want me to go with you please just let me know."'
-					'"Thanks <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> I will but I think I''d rather just go by myself. The embarrassment of letting the doctor examine me down there after what happened... Urgh!"'
+					'You nod and return a few minutes later to head to the clinic together. On the way, you ask her to remain in the waiting room as the whole thing is traumatic enough.'
+					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks at you and smiles. "Of course, if that''s what you want, darling."'
+					'A little while later, you return to your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and tell her that, while the doctor didn''t find anything, you have to come back soon for a second check.'
+					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks at you. "If you want me to go with you, please just let me know."'
+					'"Thanks <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, but I think I''d rather just go by myself. The embarrassment of letting the doctor examine me down there after what happened..."'
 					'Tears well up in your eyes again and she pulls you back into her arms and cuddles you, holding you tight as you both let out all your pain and anguish.'
-					'As you calm down your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks at you strokes your face and smiles. "At least you talked to me about this <<$pcs_nickname>> rather than carrying the burden by yourself. Let''s go home."'
+					'As you calm down, your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks at you as she strokes your face and smiles. "At least you talked to me about this rather than carrying the burden by yourself. Let''s go home."'
 					act 'Go home':
 						cla & *clr
 						if pcs_hydra >= 100:
@@ -102,11 +104,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape_talk':
 						minut += 10
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/prost9.jpg"></center>'
-						'With that you both go back home.'
-						'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> leads you into the kitchen, shuts the door and makes you both a cup of tea. As you drink it she spends some time focusing on and comforting you.'
-						'She concludes by saying, "If you want to talk about this or anything else I want you to feel that you can come to me. I love and support you. <i>Always</i>."'
-						'You feel that your chat with her has helped you a bit. You continue to hug her crying on her shoulder for a while.'
-						act 'Continue':gt 'kuhrPar'
+						'You both go return home, where your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> leads you into the kitchen, shuts the door and makes you both a cup of tea. As you drink it, she spends some time focusing on and comforting you.'
+						'She concludes by saying "If you want to talk about this or anything else, then I want you to feel that you can come to me. I love and support you. <i>Always</i>."'
+						'You feel that your chat with her has helped you and you continue to hug her and cry on her shoulder for a while.'
+						act 'Continue': gt 'kuhrPar'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -120,46 +121,45 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miscarriage_talk1':
 	pregTalkFamily = 2
 	gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', 20
 	gs 'stat'
-
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/prost6.jpg"></center>'
-	'"<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>," you start hesitantly. "I need to tell you something."'
+	'"<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>," you start hesitantly. "I need to tell you something..."'
 	if npc_rel['A29'] > 80:
-		'"What is it my dear?" she asks, turning to smile at her.'
+		'"What is it, dear?" she asks, turning to smile at you.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A29'] > 30:
-		'"Hmm? What is it <<$pcs_nickname>>?" she asks distractedly.'
+		'"Hmm? What is it, <<$pcs_nickname>>?" she asks distractedly.'
 	else
-		'"What now?" she asks with a deep sigh, turning to frown at you. "You didn''t somehow get your baby pregnant did you?"'
+		'"What now?" she asks with a deep sigh while turning to frown at you. "You didn''t somehow get your baby pregnant, did you?"'
 	end
-	'"I lost the baby," you say, suddenly bursting into tears. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> goes pale in shock but only spends a single second frozen in place before striding across the room and wrapping you in her arms.'
-	'"Oh I''m so sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>," she coos, gripping you tight against her. You can feel her tears wetting your cheek, running down alongside your own. She just keeps repeating, "I''m sorry, I''m sorry, I''m sorry..."'
+	'"I lost the baby..." you say, suddenly bursting into tears. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> goes pale in shock, but only spends a single second frozen in place before striding across the room and wrapping you in her arms.'
+	'"Oh, I''m so sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>!" she coos, gripping you tight against her. You can feel her tears wetting your cheek, running down alongside your own. She just keeps repeating "I''m sorry, I''m sorry, I''m sorry..."'
 	'Your crying gets worse and you start sobbing uncontrollably in your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s arms.'
 	gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', 20
 	minut += rand(2,5)
-	gs'stat'
+	gs 'stat'
+	
 	act 'Admit relief':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 10
 		gs 'stat'
-		 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/hug_sad2.jpg"></center>'
-		'After a few minutes, you finally gather yourself together enough to speak.'
-		'"To be honest, I think I''m a little relieved," you confess. "I don''t know that I was ready to be a <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> yet. Does that make me a bad person?"'
-		'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> doesn''t respond immediately but hugs you closer. After a few moments she smiles at you and strokes your face.'
-		'"You''ve been very brave <<$pcs_nickname>>. Even if you didn''t feel ready, you would have been a wonderful <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>. But hush now. Just let it all out."'
-		'In view of your history with her you fully expected a lecture about the responsibilities that come with being a parent, however, her reaction is a pleasant surprise and you feel that your chat with her has helped you a bit. You continue to hug her crying on her shoulder for a while.'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/hug_sad2.jpg"></center>'
+		'After a few minutes, you finally gather yourself together enough to speak. "To be honest, I think I''m a little relieved," you confess. "I don''t know if I was ready to be a mother yet. Does that make me a bad person?"'
+		'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> doesn''t respond immediately, but hugs you closer. After a few seconds, she smiles at you and strokes your face.'
+		'"You''ve been very brave, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Even if you didn''t feel ready, you would have been a wonderful mother. But hush now. Just let it all out."'
+		'In view of your history with her, you fully expected a lecture about the responsibilities that come with being a parent. However, her reaction is a pleasant surprise and you feel that your chat with her has helped you as you continue to hug her and cry on her shoulder for a while.'
 		act 'Continue': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	end
-		
+
 	act 'Upset at the loss of your baby as you wanted it':
 		cla & *clr
 		minut += 10
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/cry_together1.jpg"></center>'
-		'"I worried I was too young to be a <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>," you start babbling through sobs. "... but I loved that baby so much! I was ready to do anything for my little baby! And now it''s gone without even it''s first breath!"'
-		'You wail loudly, babbles descending into unintelligible sobs as your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> holds you tighter in her arms. When your sobbing starts to subside your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> kisses you softly on the cheek and whispers in your ear.'
+		'"I worried I was too young to be a mother," you start babbling through sobs. "... but I loved that baby so much! I was ready to do anything for my little baby! And now it''s gone without even it''s first breath!"'
+		'You wail loudly, your babbles descending into unintelligible sobs as your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> holds you tighter in her arms. When your sobbing starts to subside, she kisses you softly on the cheek and whispers in your ear.'
 		'"I''m so sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>," she murmurs and pulls back to hold your face directly in front of hers. "I know what it''s like to want to do anything and everything to protect your baby. I can''t imagine the pain of what you''re going through right now..."'
 		*nl
 		'Tears well up in your eyes again and she pulls you back into her arms and cuddles you, holding you tight as you both let out all your pain and anguish.'
-		'You feel that your chat with her has helped you a bit. You continue to hug her crying on her shoulder for a while.'
+		'You feel that your chat with her has helped you as you continue to hug her and cry on her shoulder for a while.'
 		act 'Continue': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	end
 	
@@ -169,12 +169,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miscarriage_talk1':
 		will_counter += 20
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/hug_sad1.jpg"></center>'
-		'"I was so scared when I found out I was pregnant," you start babbling through sobs. "I wasn''t ready for that awesome responsibility and was terrified I wasn''t going to be able to care for my baby as a <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> but... but I loved that baby so much! It wasn''t even born yet but I was ready to do anything for my little baby! And now it''s gone without even it''s first breath!"'
-		'You wail loudly, babbles descending into unintelligible sobs as your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> holds you tighter in her arms. When your sobbing starts to subside your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> kisses you softly on the cheek and whispers in your ear.'
+		'"I was so scared when I found out I was pregnant," you start babbling through sobs. "I wasn''t ready for that responsibility and was terrified I wasn''t going to be able to care for my baby but... but I loved that baby so much! It wasn''t even born yet, but I was ready to do anything for my little baby! And now it''s gone without even it''s first breath!"'
+		'You wail loudly, babbles descending into unintelligible sobs as your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> holds you tighter in her arms. When your sobbing starts to subside, she kisses you softly on the cheek and whispers in your ear.'
 		'"I''m so sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>," she murmurs and pulls back to hold your face directly in front of hers. "I know what it''s like to want to do anything and everything to protect your baby. I can''t imagine the pain of what you''re going through right now..."'
 		*nl
 		'Tears well up in your eyes again and she pulls you back into her arms and cuddles you, holding you tight as you both let out all your pain and anguish.'
-		'You feel that your chat with her has helped you a bit. You continue to hug her crying on her shoulder for a while.'
+		'You feel that your chat with her has helped you as you continue to hug her and cry on her shoulder for a while.'
 		act 'Continue': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	end
 end
@@ -184,19 +184,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lost_virginity_talk':
 	gs 'stat'
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/stop_talk.jpg"></center>'
-	'You rip your arm out of your mother''s grasp.'
-	'"How could you treat me like that?!" You hiss. "I''m not a naughty little brat who you can pull around by the ear! Yes, I had sex; that doesn''t make me a whore or a slut!"'
+	'You rip your arm out of your mother''s grasp. "How could you treat me like that?!" you hiss. "I''m not a naughty little girl you can pull around by the ear anymore! Yes, I had sex, but that doesn''t make me a whore or a slut!"'
 	'"I wanted the best for you and your sister!" your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shouts back. "All this trouble I went through to bring you up properly as a decent young lady and this is what I get! As long as you''re living in my house, you''ll do as I say!"'
 	
 	if momslut = 0:
 !! If Sveta has not witnessed any of Mum''s indiscretions
 		act 'So you want me to move out?':
 			minut += 5
-			gs'stat'
+			gs 'stat'
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/walking.jpg"></center>'
 			'"So you''re saying you want me to move out?" you snap.'
-			'"Aaaargh! You insufferable child!" she screeches back, practically tearing out her hair in frustration.'
+			'"Aaaargh! You insufferable brat!" she screeches back, practically tearing out her hair in frustration.'
 			
 			gs 'mother_chats', 'lost_virgin_leave_alone'
 		
@@ -208,7 +207,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lost_virginity_talk':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/walking.jpg"></center>'
 				'"If you don''t want me at home, then I won''t be!" you scream.'
-				'With that you turn and leave slamming the door behind you. You collect your stuff as you''ll need to find somewhere to live at least until your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> calms down. Also maybe Vlad or Anya will have a word with her when the see you aren''t home. You could try your uncle upstairs or the hotel for now.'
+				'You turn and leave, slamming the door behind you. You collect your stuff as you''ll need to find somewhere to live until your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> calms down. Maybe Vlad or Anya will have a word with her when the see you aren''t home? You could try your uncle upstairs or the hotel for now.'
 				act 'Return to Five Eight': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 			end
 		end
@@ -218,12 +217,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lost_virginity_talk':
 			cla & *clr
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/walking.jpg"></center>'
-			'Equally furious at the treatment you''ve received you continue. "Fine <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> so you''re saying you don''t want me at home any more?!"'
-			'You take a deep breath and continue. "Oh and while we''re on the subject of sex you are in no position to preach to me as I''ve seen you cheating on Vlad!"'
-			'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> just glares at you and opens her mouth but all that comes out is "Aaaargh!". She shoos you away with her arms and turns away from you.'
+			'Equally furious at the treatment you''ve received, you continue. "So you''re saying you don''t want me at home any more?!"'
+			'You take a deep breath and continue. "Oh and while we''re on the subject of sex, you''re in no position to preach to me as I''ve seen you cheating on Vlad!"'
+			'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> just glares at you and opens her mouth, but all that comes out is a frustrated growl. She shoos you away with her arms and turns away from you.'
 			
 			gs 'mother_chats', 'lost_virgin_leave_alone'
-				
+		
 			act 'Leave home (You will not be permanently banned from parents home)':
 				gs 'homes_properties', 'block_access', 'parents_home'
 				mother['kickedout_timer'] = daystart
@@ -231,8 +230,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lost_virginity_talk':
 				gs 'stat'
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/walking.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Right well I''m done with taking all this crap! Until you can treat me with respect you''ve just lost a daughter!"'
-				'With that you turn and leave slamming the door behind you. You collect your stuff as you''ll need to find somewhere to live at least until your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> calms down. Also maybe Vlad or Anya will have a word with her when the see you aren''t home. You could try your uncle upstairs or the hotel for now.'
+				'"I''m done with taking all this crap! Until you can treat me with respect, you''ve just lost a daughter!"'
+				'You turn and leave, slamming the door behind you. You collect your stuff as you''ll need to find somewhere to live at least until your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> calms down. Maybe Vlad or Anya will have a word with her when the see you aren''t home? You could try your uncle upstairs or the hotel for now.'
 				act 'Return to Five Eight': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 			end
 		end
@@ -242,38 +241,33 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lost_virgin_leave_alone':
 	act 'Leave her alone for now':
 		cla & *nl
-		'Right now it doesn''t matter how you feel or what you say. It''s clear that neither you or your mother are going to listen to anything. Realizing that this can only end poorly, you throw up your hands and say, "I don''t want to talk about this right now. I''ll be back when I think this won''t just end in a fight between us."'
-		*nl
-		'With that, you stalk off, your mother still raving even as you walk away. But better that than a full blown argument in the street.'
+		'Right now, it doesn''t matter how you feel or what you say. It''s clear that neither you or your mother are going to listen to anything. Realizing that this can only end poorly, you throw up your hands. "I don''t want to talk about this right now. I''ll be back when I think this won''t just end in a fight between us."'
+		'You storm off, your mother still raving even as you walk away. Better that than a full blown argument in the street though.'
 		act 'Return to Five Eight': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 	end
 end
 
-! If Sveta is not at school (e.g. summer break) +3 days from the initial gyno check. In essence she''s found where you stayed the previous night and waits outside.
+!! If Sveta is not at school (e.g. summer break) +3 days from the initial gyno check. In essence she''s found where you stayed the previous night and waits outside.
 if $ARGS[0] = 'reconciliation_talk':
 	act 'Mum is waiting for you':
 		mother['kickedout_timer'] = 0
 		cla & *clr
 		minut += 5
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/stop_talk.jpg"></center>'
-		'You approach your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> warily and greet her. "Hello <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, what are you doing here and how did you know where I was?"'
-		'She responds then with a sad smile she looks at you and speaks.'
-		'"Never mind that <<$pcs_nickname>>, I asked around as I haven''t stopped loving you and you are important to me."'
-		'After a very brief pause she continues before you can say anything. "I feel bad about what happened the other day and think that we really need to try and resolve our differences. Please come with me at the café so we can have a chat."'
+		'You approach your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> warily and greet her. "Hey <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, what are you doing here? How did you know where I was?"'
+		'She responds with a sad smile as she looks at you. "Never mind that, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I asked around as I haven''t stopped loving you and you''re very important to me."'
+		'After a very brief pause, she continues before you can say anything. "I feel bad about what happened the other day and think that we really need to try and resolve our differences. Please come with me to the café so we can have a chat. Please."'
 
 		act 'Decline':
 			mother['kickedout_pending'] = 1
 			cla & *clr
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/stop_talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'You ponder your response and decide that you don''t feel ready to deal with any more on this so feel it best to decline her offer, however, you do realise that it would have taken a lot for her to come to meet you so you carefully formulate your response.'
-			'"It''s very kind of you to come to meet me with and make this offer <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> but I think I need a little more time to come to terms with what happened plus I have to go somewhere now, maybe I can pop home and talk to you when I''m ready?"'
-			'"Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m sorry you can''t make it today." She looks sad and sighs before continuing.'
-			*nl
-			'"Okay, I guess I''ll just have to say it now." She sighs deeply as you wait for her to finish.'
-			'"I just wanted to say I''m so sorry that things went so far and to tell you that I miss you. In fact we all miss you and you are welcome to return home. What happened doesn''t change that. We all hope to see you home soon. I do love you <<$pcs_nickname>>, I hope you know that!"'
-			'You don''t reply but give your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> a quick hug before leaving.'
-			'You''ll have to have a think if you want to return home or if you''re happier as you are.'
+			'You ponder your response and decide that you''re not ready to deal with this right now, so feel it best to decline her offer. However, you do realise that it would have taken a lot for her to come and meet you, so you carefully formulate your response.'
+			'"<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I need a little more time to come to terms with what happened. Plus I have to go somewhere now, so maybe I can come home and talk to you when I''m ready?"'
+			'"Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>," she sighs. "I guess I''ll just have to say it now... I just wanted to say I''m sorry that things went so far and to tell you that I miss you. In fact, we all miss you and you''re welcome to return home. I do love you <<$pcs_nickname>>, I hope you know that!"'
+			'You don''t reply, but give your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> a quick hug before leaving.'
+			'You''ll have to think about whether you want to return home or if you''re happier as you are.'
 			act 'Return to previous location': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
 		act 'Go to the café':
@@ -281,43 +275,37 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reconciliation_talk':
 			minut += 20
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/sveta_mum_restaurant.jpg"></center>'
 			'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> picks a table in a corner of the café and waits for you to sit down. You notice that she looks very sad as you walk up to her.'
-			'She gives you a weak smile. "Please sit down <<$pcs_nickname>> and I''ll get us some tea."'
-			'A minute later she returns with the tea and joins you. Another minute is spent in silence as she fidgets in her seat. Finally, she brushes her hair back and takes a deep breath.'
-			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>... I''m sorry about my behaviour at the clinic. I was very angry and..." She pauses then continues. "You were right. I overreacted and... and I''m sorry for that."'
-			'When it''s clear you aren''t going to reply she takes another deep breath and continues speaking.'
+			'She gives you a weak smile. "Please sit down. I''ll get us some tea."'
+			'A minute later, she returns with the tea and joins you. There''s an awkward silence as she fidgets in her seat before she finally brushes her hair back and takes a deep breath.'
+			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>... I''m sorry about my behaviour at the clinic. I was very angry and..." She pauses before continuing. "You were right. I overreacted and... I''m sorry for that."'
+			'When it''s clear you aren''t going to reply, she takes another deep breath and continues speaking.'
 			act'Continue':
 				cla & *nl
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/sveta_mum_restaurant.jpg"></center>'
 				'"I know I can be a bit overbearing at times," she starts before you interrupt her.'
-				'"More than a bit <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>!" You reply, unable to help yourself.'
+				'"More than a bit!" you reply, unable to help yourself.'
 				'There''s another pause as your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> reflects on your response.'
-				'"Okay, yes you''re probably right but anyway I wanted to apologise for my reaction at the clinic and tell you that you are welcome to return home. In fact we''d all like to see you back at home. <i>I</i> would like to see you back at home."'
+				'"Yeah, you''re probably right, but I wanted to apologise for my reaction at the clinic and tell you that you''re welcome to return home. In fact we''d all like to see you back at home. <i>I</i> would like to see you back at home."'
 				act 'Accept her offer':
 					gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'parents_home'
 					cla & *clr
 					minut += 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mum_gyno1.jpg"></center>'
 					'"Yes, I would like that," you smile gently.'
-					'At this your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gets up and rushes around the table to give you a big hug, nearly knocking her tea over in the process.'
-					'"Thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
-					
+					'At this point, your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gets up and rushes around the table to give you a hug, nearly knocking her tea over in the process. "Thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
 					gs 'mother_chats', 'reconciliation_replies'
 				end
 					
-				act 'You need to think on it':
+				act 'You need to think about it':
 					mother['kickedout_pending'] = 1
 					cla & *clr
 					minut += 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mum_gyno2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You take a moment, slowly tracing your finger around the rim of your teacup, considering carefully what your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> just said.'
+					'You take a moment, slowly tracing your finger around the rim of your teacup, carefully considering what your she just said, but you eventually shake your head.'
+					'"This is too sudden," you say. "I''m still not sure if I''ve forgiven you for what you done."'
+					'You stand up and grab your bag. "I''m glad you apologised and it does make a difference, but I still don''t know if I want to come back home as I can see something similar happening again in the future. Thanks for the tea."'
 					*nl
-					'But eventually you shake your head.'
-					*nl
-					'"This is too sudden," you say. "I''m still not sure if I''ve forgiven you for what you did back there."'
-					'You stand up, grabbing your bag.'
-					'"I''m glad you apologised and it does make a difference to me so thank you for that, but I still don''t know if I want to go back home as I can see something similar happening again in the future. Thanks for the tea."'
-					*nl
-					'Without another word you turn and leave, your lukewarm tea on the table unfinished, and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> behind you who''s expression you have no idea.'
+					'Without another word, you turn and leave your unfinished tea and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> behind.'
 					act 'Return to previous location': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 				end
 			end
@@ -327,17 +315,16 @@ end
 
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'reconciliation_replies':
-!! hornguy6 note: i want to add additional types of responses here, but i think this is a good default options for now
-	act'You''re not going to stop having sex':
+!! hornguy6 note: I want to add additional types of responses here, but I think this is a good default option for now
+	act 'You''re not going to stop having sex':
 		cla & *nl
 		minut += 15
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/prost7.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Don''t think this means that I''m going to stop having sex, <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>," you say, voice muffled by her tight hug. She pulls back suddenly, staring at you with wide eyes. "I''m never going to be able to go back to being a virgin. And you''re going to have to accept and understand that sex is a part of my life now."'
-		'She continues looking concernedly at you for a few more moments before giving you a gentle smile.'
-		'"I guess we''ll just have to work things out as we go," she chuckles ruefully. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>. Let''s go home."'
+		'"Don''t think this means that I''m going to stop having sex though, <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>," you say, your voice muffled by her tight hug. She pulls back suddenly, staring at you with wide eyes. "I''m never going to be able to go back to being a virgin, so you''re going to have to accept that and understand that sex is a part of my life now."'
+		'She continues looking at you in concern for a few more seconds before giving you a gentle smile. "I guess we''ll just have to work things out as we go," she chuckles ruefully. "Come on, let''s go home."'
 		*nl
-		'You nod back and take her arm, walking back to the apartments together.'
-		act'Go home': gt'korrPar'
+		'You nod and take her arm before walking back to the apartments together.'
+		act 'Go home': gt 'korrPar'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -349,31 +336,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'knock':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 5
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/prost1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You have decided to return home and unfortunately when you arrive you find that the door is locked. After a moment''s consideration you decide to knock and see if your parents are in and if they''ll let you return. After all, what have you got to lose? Worst case they turn you away.'
-	'You shrug, take a deep breath and knock on the door then wait.'
-	'A few moments later the door opens and you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> standing in front of you with a shocked but happy expression on her face.'
-	'She looks at you and starts to speak. "So the wanderer returns eh?! Where on earth have you been! Do you realise how worried we''ve been?"'
-	'Before you can respond she continues. "Never mind, you''re here now, that''s all that matters. Well don''t just stand there, come in. Despite our differences I still love and care about you." With that she gives you a hug as you enter.'
+	'When you arrive at your parents'' apartment, you find that the door is locked. After a moment''s consideration, you decide to knock and see if your parents are home. You take a deep breath and knock on the door...'
+	'A few seconds later, the door opens and you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> standing in front of you with a shocked but happy expression on her face. "So the wanderer returns, huh? Where on earth have you been?! Do you realise how worried we''ve been?!"'
+	'Before you can respond, she continues. "Never mind, you''re here now, that''s all that matters. Well don''t just stand there, come in!" She gives you a hug as you enter.'
+	
 	act 'Just visiting':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 25
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/prost2.jpg"></center>'
-		'"I''m sorry for worrying you <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> but I''m not moving back in. I have my own place now but I wanted to visit to see if at least we can get on talking terms."'
-		'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks sad. "Oh! Well wouldn''t you reconsider? I... No we miss you."'
-		'No <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> I''m happy where I am, here''s the address so you can visit if you want. However, I''d really like it if we could at least talk and try to rebuild our relationship"'
-		' Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks sad but nods and hugs you again. "Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, I guess that''ll have to do for now. Come in anyway and I''ll make us a tea."'
-		'You follow your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> into the kitchen and share a tea with her and have a chat after which you get up to leave.'
-		'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gives you another hug before you leave. You promise to visit again soon before you depart.'
-		act 'Stop talking': gt'pod_ezd','etaj_2'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/prost2.jpg"></center>'
+		'"I''m sorry for worrying you <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, but I''m not moving back in. I have my own place now and just came to visit."'
+		'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks sad. "Oh... Well wouldn''t you reconsider? I... No, <i>we</i> miss you."'
+		'No, I''m happy where I am. Here''s the address so you can visit if you want. However, I''d really like it if we could at least talk?"'
+		'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> nods and hugs you again. "Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, I guess that''ll have to do for now. Come in and I''ll make us some tea."'
+		'You follow your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> into the kitchen, where you share a tea with her and have a chat, after which you get up to leave. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gives you another hug and you promise to visit again before you depart.'
+		act 'Stop talking': gt 'pod_ezd','etaj_2'
 	end
+	
 	act 'Move back in':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 25
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mum_gyno1.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Thank you <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>. I''ve been considering things and wanted to ask if it would be alright if I moved back in. I brought my stuff with me on the off chance."'
-		'"Yes of course <<$pcs_nickname>>, welcome home! Let me make a cup of tea and we can chat before you go to your room and unpack."'
-		'You follow your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> into the kitchen and share a tea with her and have a chat after which you both get up. "Thanks <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> I guess I''d better go and unpack."'
-		'She smiles at you and hugs you tightly. I''m so happy you decided to come home <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
+		'"I''ve been considering things and wanted to ask if I could move back in? I brought my stuff with me on the off chance..."'
+		'"Yes, of course!" she replies. "Let me make you a cup of tea and we can chat before you unpack."'
+		'You follow your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> into the kitchen, where you share a tea with her and have a chat. "Thanks <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, but I''d better go and unpack."'
+		'She smiles at you and hugs you tightly. I''m so happy you decided to come home, <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
 		act 'Return to your room': gt 'bedrPar'
 	end
 end
@@ -382,13 +368,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'knock_uni':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 30
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/prost1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You have decided to return home to visit and unfortunately when you arrive you find that the door is locked. After a moment''s consideration you decide to knock and see if your parents are in.'
-	'You knock on the door then wait.'
-	'A few moments later the door opens and you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> standing in front of you with a happy expression on her face.'
-	'She looks at you and starts to speak. "Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s very nice of you to visit, come in and I''ll make us a cup of tea."'
-	'You follow your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> into the kitchen and share a tea with her and have a chat.'
-	'As you both finish your tea your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gives you another hug and says. "You can stay over for the night if you wish."'
-	'"Thanks <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, that''s good to know as I can see the rest of the family then." You get up and leave the kitchen.'
+	'When you arrive at your parents'' apartment, you find that the door is locked, so you knock and wait.'
+	'A few seconds later, the door opens and you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> standing in front of you with a happy expression on her face. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what a nice surprise! Come in and I''ll make us a cup of tea."'
+	'You follow your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> into the kitchen, where you share a tea with her and have a chat.'
+	'"You can stay over for the night if you wish," your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> says as you finish your tea.'
+	'"Thanks <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>," you reply as you get up and leave the kitchen.'
 	act 'Stop talking': gt 'korrPar'
 end
 

+ 191 - 189
locations/mother_sextalk.qsrc

@@ -1,84 +1,87 @@
 # mother_sextalk
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_shriek1':
-	if motherKnowSpravka > 0 or motherKnowWhore > 0:gt'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildo_shriek4'
+	if motherKnowSpravka > 0 or motherKnowWhore > 0: gt 'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildo_shriek4'
 	motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = vanrPar_suction_dildo
 	if motherQW['dildo_caught'] = 0:
 		motherQW['dildo_caught'] += 1
 	elseif motherQW['dildo_caught'] = 1:
 		motherQW['dildo_caught'] += 1
-		gt'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildo_shriek2'
+		gt 'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildo_shriek2'
 	elseif motherQW['dildo_caught'] >= 2:
 		motherQW['dildo_caught'] += 1
-		gt'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildo_shriek3'
+		gt 'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildo_shriek3'
 	end
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
 	'You''re walking down the hall when you suddenly hear a shriek come from the bathroom. It sounds like your mother. You run to the door just as it opens and you see her there.'
 	'"<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>! What happe-"'
 	if vanrPar_suction_dildo = 1:
 		'She cuts you off by holding up a dildo in front of your face.'
-		'"<<$pcs_firstname>>. <b>What is this doing in the bathroom?</b>"'
+		'"<<$pcs_firstname>>. <b>What is this doing in the bathroom</b>?"'
 		if pcs_inhib > 30:
-			act'"It''s my dildo"':
+			act '"It''s my dildo"':
 				dildo_ownership = 1
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
-				'"It''s my dildo?" you say.'
+				'"It''s my dildo?" you nonchalantly reply.'
 				'"What do you think you''re doing with something like this?! It''s improper for a young lady your age! Not to mention if Kolka or your father saw this stuck inside the bathtub! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence! Vladimir would have a heart attack! And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you-" She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
-				'"My God... you haven''t..."'
+				'"My God... You haven''t..."'
 				'You can see where this is going and you don''t like it.'
-				gs'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildo_response_single'
+				gs 'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildo_response_single'
 			end
 		end
 			
-		act'Shamelessly lie your ass off':
+		act 'Shamelessly lie your ass off':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
-			'"It''s not mine! I don''t know where it came from!" It''s an obvious lie, made even more obvious by the fact that your face turns bright red when you say it. But as long as you deny it maybe you can get away with this, maybe Anya-'
-			'"Don''t you lie to me <<$pcs_firstname>>, <i>I am your mother.</i> And I know it''s yours. Anya isn''t stupid enough to bring home another one of these after the last time I caught her with one, let alone stupid enough to leave it in the bathroom where Kolka or Vladimir could find it! What were you thinking?! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence behaving like this, give your father a heart attack too! And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you- She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
-			'"My God... you haven''t..."'
+			'"It''s not mine! I don''t know where it came from!" It''s an obvious lie, made even more obvious by the fact that your face turns bright red when you say it, but as long as you deny it maybe you can get away with it? "Maybe it''s An-"'
+			'"Don''t you lie to me <<$pcs_firstname>>, <i>I am your mother.</i> I know it''s yours because Anya isn''t stupid enough to bring home another one of these after the last time I caught her with one, let alone stupid enough to leave it in the bathroom where Kolka or Vladimir could find it! What were you thinking?! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence behaving like this, give your father a heart attack too! And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you-" She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
+			'"My God... You haven''t..."'
 			'You can see where this is going and you don''t like it.'
-			gs'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildo_response_single'
+			gs 'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildo_response_single'
 		end
 		
-		act'Blame it on Anya':
+		act 'Blame it on Anya':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
-			'"It''s not mine! It must be Anya''s," you protest, trying to throw your sister under the bus. "She-'
-			'"Don''t you lie to me <<$pcs_firstname>>, <i>I am your mother.</i> And I know it''s yours. Anya isn''t stupid enough to bring home another one of these after the last time I caught her with one, let alone stupid enough to leave it in the bathroom where Kolka or Vladimir could find it! What were you thinking?! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence behaving like this, give your father a heart attack too! And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you- She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
-			'"My God... you haven''t..."'
+			'"It''s not mine! It must be Anya''s!" you protest, trying to throw your sister under the bus. "She-"'
+			'"Don''t you lie to me <<$pcs_firstname>>, <i>I am your mother.</i> I know it''s yours because Anya isn''t stupid enough to bring home another one of these after the last time I caught her with one, let alone stupid enough to leave it in the bathroom where Kolka or Vladimir could find it! What were you thinking?! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence behaving like this, give your father a heart attack too! And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you-" She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
+			'"My God... You haven''t..."'
 			'You can see where this is going and you don''t like it.'
-			gs'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildo_response_single'
+			gs 'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildo_response_single'
 		end		
 	else
 		'She cuts you off by holding up a pair of dildos in front of your face.'
 		'"<<$pcs_firstname>>. <b>What are these doing in the bathroom?</b>"'
 		if pcs_inhib > 30:
-			act'"They''re my dildos"':
+			act '"They''re my dildos"':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
-				'"They''re my dildos?" you say. You don''t even bother trying to hide it.'
+				'"They''re my dildos?" you nonchalantly reply, not even bothering to hide it.'
 				'"What do you think you''re doing with things like these?! They''re improper for a young lady your age! Not to mention if Kolka or your father saw these! Stuck all over the bathtub and the walls! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence! Vladimir would have a heart attack! And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you-" She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
-				'"My God... you haven''t..."'
-				gs'mother_sextalk', 'bathroom_dildo_response_multiple'
+				'"My God... You haven''t..."'
+				'You can see where this is going and you don''t like it.'
+				gs 'mother_sextalk', 'bathroom_dildo_response_multiple'
 			end
 			
-			act'Shamelessly lie your ass off':
+			act 'Shamelessly lie your ass off':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
-				'"They''re not mine! I don''t know where they came from!" It''s an obvious lie, made even more obvious by the fact that your face turns bright red when you say it. But as long as you deny it maybe you can get away with this, maybe Anya-'
-				'"Don''t you lie to me <<$pcs_firstname>>, <i>I am your mother.</i> And I know it''s yours. Anya isn''t stupid enough to bring home another one of these after the last time I caught her with one, let alone stupid enough to leave it in the bathroom where Kolka or Vladimir could find it! What were you thinking?! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence behaving like this, give your father a heart attack too! And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you- She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
-				'"My God... you haven''t..."'
+				'"They''re not mine! I don''t know where they came from!" It''s an obvious lie, made even more obvious by the fact that your face turns bright red when you say it, but as long as you deny it maybe you can get away with it? "Maybe they''re An-"'
+				'"Don''t you lie to me <<$pcs_firstname>>, <i>I am your mother.</i> I know they''re yours because Anya isn''t stupid enough to bring home another one of these after the last time I caught her with one, let alone stupid enough to leave it in the bathroom where Kolka or Vladimir could find it! What were you thinking?! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence behaving like this, give your father a heart attack too! And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you-" She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
+				'"My God... You haven''t..."'
 				'You can see where this is going and you don''t like it.'
-				gs'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildo_response_multiple'
+				gs 'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildo_response_multiple'
 			end
 			
-			act'Blame it on Anya':
+			act 'Blame it on Anya':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
-				'"It''s not mine! It must be Anya''s," you protest, trying to throw your sister under the bus. "She-'
-				'"Don''t you lie to me <<$pcs_firstname>>, <i>I am your mother.</i> And I know it''s yours. Anya isn''t stupid enough to bring home another one of these after the last time I caught her with one, let alone stupid enough to leave it in the bathroom where Kolka or Vladimir could find it! What were you thinking?! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence behaving like this, give your father a heart attack too! And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you- She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
-				gs'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildo_response_multiple'
+				'"They''re not mine! They must be Anya''s!" you protest, trying to throw your sister under the bus. "She-"'
+				'"Don''t you lie to me <<$pcs_firstname>>, <i>I am your mother.</i> I know they''re yours because Anya isn''t stupid enough to bring home another one of these after the last time I caught her with one, let alone stupid enough to leave it in the bathroom where Kolka or Vladimir could find it! What were you thinking?! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence behaving like this, give your father a heart attack too! And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you-" She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
+				'"My God... You haven''t..."'
+				'You can see where this is going and you don''t like it.'
+				gs 'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildo_response_multiple'
 			end		
 		end
 	end
@@ -90,13 +93,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_shriek2':
 	if motherQW['dildo_caught'] = 1:
 		motherQW['dildo_caught'] += 1
 	elseif motherQW['dildo_caught'] = 2:
-		gt'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildo_shriek3'
+		gt 'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildo_shriek3'
 	end
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
-	'You''re walking down the hall when you suddenly hear a shriek come from the bathroom. Oh shit, not again. Right as you get to the door, it flies open to show your very angry mother.'
+	'You''re walking down the hall when you suddenly hear a shriek come from the bathroom. Not again... Right as you get to the door, it flies open to show your very angry mother.'
 	'"Again, <<$pcs_firstname>>?!"'
 	if motherKnowDildo = 1 or dildo_ownership = 1:
-		act'"Sorry...?"':
+		act '"Sorry...?"':
 			vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
 			vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
 			vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
@@ -104,13 +107,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_shriek2':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
 			'Unfortunately, you don''t think you can weasel out of this one.'
-			'"Uhh... Sorry...?" you say, hopeful that she won''t do what she did last time.'
-			'She returns your apology with a glare.'
-			'"Confiscated."'
-			'She slams the door in your face. You sigh.'
+			'"Uhh... Sorry?" you say, hopeful that she won''t do what she did last time.'
+			'She returns your apology with a glare. "Confiscated."'
+			'She slams the door in your face and you sigh.'
 			*nl
 			'<i>Well, so much for that...</i>'
-			act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+			act 'Continue': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
 	else
 		vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
@@ -118,42 +120,42 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_shriek2':
 		vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 		motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 		motherKnowDildo = 1
-		'You feel a sinking feeling in your chest. It''s not looking like you''re going to be able to weasel your way out of this one.'
+		'You feel a sinking feeling in your chest. It''s not like you''re going to be able to weasel your way out of this one.'
 		'"Do you have an excuse this time?"'
-		act'"No..."':
+		act '"No..."':
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', -10
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
 			'"No..." you say dejectedly.'
-			'"Honestly," she huffs, shaking her head in disappointment. "I expected more of you <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
-			gs'mother_sextalk','dildo_dumpster_ending2'
-			act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+			'"Honestly," she huffs, shaking her head in disappointment. "I expected more of you, <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
+			gs 'mother_sextalk','dildo_dumpster_ending2'
+			act 'Continue': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
 		
-		act'Well I need some kind of outlet!':
+		act 'I need some kind of outlet!':
 			vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
 			vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
 			vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 			motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Well I need some kind of outlet!" you say, throwing your arms up in exasperation.'
+			'"I need some kind of outlet!" you say, throwing your arms up in exasperation.'
 			'Your mother steps back, apparently surprised at your change of tactics.'
-			'"You''re always telling me to stay away from men and not to act like a slut. Well, I gotta tell you <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <i>I get horny sometimes.</i> Yeah, I was masturbating with it last time too. And if you don''t want me fucking boys, getting pregnant, or worse, then this is what it takes!" She blinks at your outburst but recomposes herself, taking a dignified stance.'
-			'"Well, there are other ways you can deal with that," she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage." You roll your eyes in response.'
-			'"Anyways, you shouldn''t be leaving stuff like this around the house regardless. I''m taking this as punishment," she says.'
+			'"You''re always telling me to stay away from men and not to act like a slut. Well <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <i>I get horny</i>! Yeah, I was masturbating with it last time too! And if you don''t want me fucking boys, getting pregnant, or worse, then this is what it takes!"' 
+			'She blinks at your outburst but recomposes herself, taking a dignified stance. "Well, there are other ways you can deal with that!" she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage!" You roll your eyes in response.'
+			'"Anyway, you shouldn''t be leaving stuff like this around the house regardless. I''m taking this as punishment," she says.'
 			'"But <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>!"'
-			'"No buts young lady! Other people live in this household too! You need to learn to control yourself. If you can''t do that much then you don''t deserve to have one of these."'
+			'"No buts, young lady! Other people live in this household too, so you need to learn to control yourself. If you can''t do that much, then you don''t deserve to have one of these."'
 			*nl
 			if motherQW['dildo_shower_discovery'] = 1:
 				motherQW['dildo_shower_discovery'] = 0
-				gs'mother_sextalk','dildo_shower_ending1'
+				gs 'mother_sextalk','dildo_shower_ending1'
 			else
-				gs'mother_sextalk','dildo_ending1'
+				gs 'mother_sextalk','dildo_ending1'
 			end
 			*nl
 			'<i>Ugh. Great. Now I need a new one. At least this gets <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> off my back...</i>'
-			act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+			act 'Continue': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end		
 	end
 end
@@ -167,10 +169,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_shriek3':
 	motherQW['dildo_caught'] += 1
 	motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
-	'You''re walking down the hall when you suddenly hear a shriek come from the bathroom. Oh shit, not again. Right as you get to the door, it opens up to reveal your very mother. She looks more exasperated than angry this time though.'
-	'"Again, <<$pcs_firstname>>?" She sighs and tosses your sex toy at you and puts a hand to her forehead. "God, I hope you washed everything before I touched it. I''m not going to throw it away this time because I know you''re just going to buy more. But please <<$pcs_nickname>>. Think of your brother and father. Stop leaving stuff like this lying around."'
+	'You''re walking down the hall when you suddenly hear a shriek come from the bathroom. Not again! Right as you get to the door, it opens up to reveal your mother. She looks more exasperated than angry this time though.'
+	'"Again, <<$pcs_firstname>>?" she sighs before tossing your toy at you and putting a hand to her forehead. "God, I hope you washed everything before I touched it. I''m not going to throw it away this time because I know you''re just going to buy more, but please think of your brother and father and stop leaving stuff like this lying around!"'
 	'She shuts the door and you hear the faucet turn and water spray from the shower.'
-	act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+	act 'Continue': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_shriek4':
@@ -182,10 +184,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_shriek4':
 	motherQW['dildo_caught'] += 1
 	motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
-	'You''re walking down the hall when you suddenly hear a shriek come from the bathroom. Oh shit, not again. Right as you get to the door, it flies open to show your very angry mother.'
-	'"<<$pcs_firstname>>! You disgusting whore! How dare you leave filth like this lying around the house! This is going straight into the garbage!"'
-	'She stomps straight past you to the front door and flings it open, going down the stairs.'
-	act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+	'You''re walking down the hall when you suddenly hear a shriek come from the bathroom. Not again! Right as you get to the door, it flies open to show your very angry mother.'
+	'"<<$pcs_firstname>>, you disgusting whore! How dare you leave filth like this lying around the house! This is going straight into the garbage!"'
+	'She stomps straight past you to the front door and flings it open before going down the stairs.'
+	act 'Continue': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
 
 
@@ -194,63 +196,65 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos1':
 	if motherQW['dildo_caught'] = 0:
-		if motherKnowSpravka > 0 or motherKnowWhore > 0:gt'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildos4'
+		if motherKnowSpravka > 0 or motherKnowWhore > 0: gt'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildos4'
 		motherQW['dildo_caught'] += 1
 	elseif motherQW['dildo_caught'] = 1:
 		motherQW['dildo_caught'] += 1
 		gt'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildos2'
 	elseif motherQW['dildo_caught'] >= 2:
-		if motherKnowSpravka > 0 or motherKnowWhore > 0:gt'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildos5'
-		gt'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildos3'
+		if motherKnowSpravka > 0 or motherKnowWhore > 0: gt'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildos5'
+		gt 'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildos3'
 	end
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you step into the hall of your family home, you see your mother is there waiting for you. She looks pissed.'
+	'As you step into the hall, you see your mother there waiting for you. She looks pissed...'
 	'"<<$pcs_firstname>>? Care to explain what I found in the bathroom this morning?"'
 	if motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 1:
 		'She holds up a suction dildo in her hand. The one you stuck in the bathroom.'
 	else
 		'She holds up a pair of suction dildos in her hand. The ones you stuck in the bathroom.'
 	end
-	act'Shamelessly lie your ass off':
+	
+	act 'Shamelessly lie your ass off':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
-		'"It''s not mine," you shrug. "I don''t know where it came from." It''s an obvious lie, made even more obvious by the fact that your face turns bright red when you say it. But as long as you deny it maybe you can get away with this, maybe Anya-'
-		'"Don''t you lie to me <<$pcs_firstname>>, <i>I am your mother.</i> And I know it''s yours. Anya isn''t stupid enough to bring home another one of these after the last time I caught her with one, let alone stupid enough to leave it in the bathroom where Kolka or Vladimir could find it! What were you thinking?! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence behaving like this, give your father a heart attack too! And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you- She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
-		'"My God... you haven''t..."'
+		'"It''s not mine! I don''t know where it came from!" It''s an obvious lie, made even more obvious by the fact that your face turns bright red when you say it, but as long as you deny it maybe you can get away with it? "Maybe it''s An-"'
+		'"Don''t you lie to me <<$pcs_firstname>>, <i>I am your mother.</i> I know it''s yours because Anya isn''t stupid enough to bring home another one of these after the last time I caught her with one, let alone stupid enough to leave it in the bathroom where Kolka or Vladimir could find it! What were you thinking?! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence behaving like this, give your father a heart attack too! And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you-" She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
+		'"My God... You haven''t..."'
 		'You can see where this is going and you don''t like it.'
-		gs'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildo_response_single'
+		gs 'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildo_response_single'
 	end
 	
-	act'Blame it on Anya':
+	act 'Blame it on Anya':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
-		'"It''s not mine," you shrug. "It must be Anya''s. She-"'
-		'"Don''t you lie to me <<$pcs_firstname>>, <i>I am your mother.</i> And I know it''s yours. Anya isn''t stupid enough to bring home another one of these after the last time I caught her with one, let alone stupid enough to leave it in the bathroom where Kolka or Vladimir could find it! What were you thinking?! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence behaving like this, give your father a heart attack too! And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you- She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
-		'"My God... you haven''t..."'
+		'"It''s not mine! It must be Anya''s!" you protest, trying to throw your sister under the bus. "She-"'
+		'"Don''t you lie to me <<$pcs_firstname>>, <i>I am your mother.</i> I know it''s yours because Anya isn''t stupid enough to bring home another one of these after the last time I caught her with one, let alone stupid enough to leave it in the bathroom where Kolka or Vladimir could find it! What were you thinking?! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence behaving like this, give your father a heart attack too! And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you-" She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
+		'"My God... You haven''t..."'
 		'You can see where this is going and you don''t like it.'
-		gs'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildo_response_single'
+		gs 'mother_sextalk','bathroom_dildo_response_single'
 	end
 	
-	act'Well I need some kind of outlet!':
+	act 'I need some kind of outlet!':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Well I need some kind of outlet!" you say, throwing your arms up in exasperation.'
 		'Your mother steps back, apparently surprised at your change of tactics.'
-		'"You''re always telling me to stay away from men and not to act like a slut. Well, I gotta tell you <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <i>I get horny sometimes.</i> And if you don''t want me fucking boys, getting pregnant, or worse, then this is what it takes!" She blinks at your outburst but recomposes herself, taking a dignified stance.'
+		'"You''re always telling me to stay away from men and not to act like a slut. Well <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <i>I get horny</i>! If you don''t want me fucking boys, getting pregnant, or worse, then this is what it takes!"'
+		'She blinks at your outburst but recomposes herself, taking a dignified stance.'
 		if motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 2:
-			'"Well, there are other ways you can deal with that," she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage. You certainly don''t need <i>two</i> of these." You roll your eyes in response.'
+			'"Well, there are other ways you can deal with that!" she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage and you certainly don''t need <i>two</i> of these!" You roll your eyes in response.'
 		else
-			'"Well, there are other ways you can deal with that," she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage." You roll your eyes in response.'
+			'"Well, there are other ways you can deal with that!" she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage!" You roll your eyes in response.'
 		end
 		'"Regardless, you shouldn''t be leaving stuff like this around the house. I''m taking these as punishment," she says.'
 		'"But <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>!"'
-		'"No buts young lady! Other people live in this household too! You need to learn to control yourself. If you can''t do that much then you don''t deserve to have these either."'
+		'"No buts, young lady! Other people live in this household too, so you need to learn to control yourself. If you can''t do that much, then you don''t deserve to have these either."'
 		*nl
 		if motherQW['dildo_shower_discovery'] = 1:
 			motherQW['dildo_shower_discovery'] = 0
-			gs'mother_sextalk','dildo_shower_ending1'
+			gs 'mother_sextalk','dildo_shower_ending1'
 		else
-			gs'mother_sextalk','dildo_ending1'
+			gs 'mother_sextalk','dildo_ending1'
 		end
 		*nl
 		'<i>Ugh. Great. Now I need new ones.</i>'
@@ -261,13 +265,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos1':
 		motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 		motherKnowDildo = 1
 		
-		act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+		act 'Continue': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos2':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you step into the hall of your family home, you see your mother is there waiting for you. She looks pissed.'
+	'As you step into the hall, you see your mother there waiting for you. She looks pissed...'
 	'"What''s your excuse this time?"'
 	if motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 1:
 		'She holds up your suction dildo in her hand.'
@@ -275,7 +279,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos2':
 		'She holds up your suction dildos in her hand.'
 	end
 	if motherKnowDildo = 1 or dildo_ownership = 1:
-		act'"Sorry...?"':
+		act '"Sorry...?"':
 			vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
 			vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
 			vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
@@ -283,14 +287,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos2':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
 			'Unfortunately, you don''t think you can weasel out of this one.'
-			'"Uhh... Sorry...?" you say, hopeful that she won''t do what she did last time.'
-			'She returns your apology with a glare.'
-			'"Confiscated."'
+			'"Uhh... Sorry?" you say, hopeful that she won''t do what she did last time.'
+			'She returns your apology with a glare. "Confiscated."'
 			'She walks away into her bedroom still carrying ' + iif(motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 1, 'it', 'them') + '.'
 			*nl
 			'<i>Well, so much for that...</i>'
 			motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
-			act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+			act 'Continue': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
 	else
 		vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
@@ -303,12 +306,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos2':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
 			'"No..." you say dejectedly.'
-			'"Honestly," she huffs, shaking her head in disappointment. "I expected more of you <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
-			gs'mother_sextalk','dildo_dumpster_ending2'
-			act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+			'"Honestly," she huffs, shaking her head in disappointment. "I expected more of you, <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
+			gs 'mother_sextalk','dildo_dumpster_ending2'
+			act 'Continue': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
 		
-		act'Well I need some kind of outlet!':
+		act 'I need some kind of outlet!':
 			vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
 			vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
 			vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
@@ -317,21 +320,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos2':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Well I need some kind of outlet!" you say, throwing your arms up in exasperation.'
 			'Your mother steps back, apparently surprised at your change of tactics.'
-			'"You''re always telling me to stay away from men and not to act like a slut. Well, I gotta tell you <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <i>I get horny sometimes.</i> Yeah, I was masturbating with it last time too. And if you don''t want me fucking boys, getting pregnant, or worse, then this is what it takes!" She blinks at your outburst but recomposes herself, taking a dignified stance.'
-			'"Well, there are other ways you can deal with that," she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage." You roll your eyes in response.'
-			'"Anyways, you shouldn''t be leaving stuff like this around the house regardless. I''m taking this as punishment," she says.'
+			'"You''re always telling me to stay away from men and not to act like a slut. Well <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <i>I get horny</i>! Yeah, I was masturbating with it last time too! If you don''t want me fucking boys, getting pregnant, or worse, then this is what it takes!"'
+			'She blinks at your outburst but recomposes herself, taking a dignified stance. "Well, there are other ways you can deal with that!" she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage!" You roll your eyes in response.'
+			'"Anyway, you shouldn''t be leaving stuff like this around the house regardless. I''m taking this as punishment," she says.'
 			'"But <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>!"'
-			'"No buts young lady! Other people live in this household too! You need to learn to control yourself. If you can''t do that much then you don''t deserve to have one of these."'
+			'"No buts, young lady! Other people live in this household too, so you need to learn to control yourself. If you can''t do that much, then you don''t deserve to have one of these."'
 			*nl
 			if motherQW['dildo_shower_discovery'] = 1:
 				motherQW['dildo_shower_discovery'] = 0
-				gs'mother_sextalk','dildo_shower_ending1'
+				gs 'mother_sextalk','dildo_shower_ending1'
 			else
-				gs'mother_sextalk','dildo_ending1'
+				gs 'mother_sextalk','dildo_ending1'
 			end
 			*nl
 			'<i>Ugh. Great. Now I need a new one. At least this gets <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> off my back...</i>'
-			act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+			act 'Continue': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end		
 	end
 end
@@ -345,14 +348,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos3':
 	mc_inventory['dildo_suction'] += motherQW['bathroom_dildos']
 	motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you step into the hall of your family home, you see your mother is there waiting for you. She looks more exasperated than angry.'
-	'"Again, <<$pcs_firstname>>?" She sighs and tosses your sex toy at you and puts a hand to her forehead. "God, I hope you washed everything before I touched it. I''m not going to throw it away this time because I know you''re just going to buy more. But please <<$pcs_nickname>>. Think of your brother and father. Stop leaving stuff like this lying around."'
+	'As you step into the hall, you see your mother there waiting for you. She looks more exasperated than angry though.'
+	'"Again, <<$pcs_firstname>>?" She sighs and tosses your toy at you before putting a hand to her forehead. "God, I hope you washed everything before I touched it. I''m not going to throw it away this time because I know you''re just going to buy more, but please think of your brother and father and stop leaving stuff like this lying around!"'
 	if locat['Mother'] = 11 or locat['Mother'] = 12:
-		'With that she walks off into the kitchen.'
+		'With that, she walks off into the kitchen.'
 	elseif locat['Mother'] = 13:
-		'With that she walks off into the living room where you hear your stepfather watching TV.'
+		'With that, she walks off into the living room where you hear your stepfather watching TV.'
 	end
-	act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+	act 'Continue': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos4':
@@ -362,16 +365,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos4':
 	vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 	motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you step into the hall of your family home, you see your mother is there waiting for you. She looks very angry.'
-	'"I want you to know that I found your whore things that you left in the bathroom." You look at her in confusion for a moment.'
-	'"What thi-" and then it hits you. Oh shit, you left your dildo in the bathroom.'
+	'As you step into the hall, you see your mother there waiting for you. She looks very angry.'
+	'"I want you to know that I found your whore things that you left in the bathroom!" You look at her in confusion.'
+	'"What thi-" Then it hits you. You left your dildo in the bathroom!'
 	'"I also want you to know that I threw them out. If you want to be a slut, you can go do it somewhere else."'
 	if locat['Mother'] = 11 or locat['Mother'] = 12:
-		'With that she walks off into the kitchen.'
+		'With that, she walks off into the kitchen.'
 	elseif locat['Mother'] = 13:
-		'With that she walks off into the living room where you hear your stepfather watching TV.'
+		'With that, she walks off into the living room where you hear your stepfather watching TV.'
 	end
-	act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+	act 'Continue': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos5':
@@ -381,16 +384,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildos5':
 	vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
 	motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/korrpar.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you step into the hall of your family home, you see your mother is there waiting for you. She looks very angry.'
+	'As you step into the hall, you see your mother there waiting for you. She looks very angry.'
 	'"I want you to know that I found your whore things that you left in the bathroom." She glares at you. "Again."'
-	'"... did you throw them awa-"'
-	'"<i>Yes.</i> Obviously. I can''t believe that you''re such a whore now, leaving things like that around for your family to find. Do you have no conscience at all?" She sighs deeply. "My daughter is a shameless slut... What am I going to do..."'
+	'"... Did you throw them awa-"'
+	'"<i>Yes.</i> Obviously. I can''t believe that you''re such a whore that you''re leaving things like that around for your family to find! Do you have no conscience at all?!" She then sighs deeply. "My daughter is a shameless slut... What am I going to do?"'
 	if locat['Mother'] = 11 or locat['Mother'] = 12:
-		'With that she walks off into the kitchen.'
+		'With that, she walks off into the kitchen.'
 	elseif locat['Mother'] = 13:
-		'With that she walks off into the living room where you hear your stepfather watching TV.'
+		'With that, she walks off into the living room where you hear your stepfather watching TV.'
 	end
-	act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+	act 'Continue': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
 
 
@@ -401,7 +404,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_wakeup1':
 	motherQW['dildo_wakeup'] = 1
 	InSleep = 0
 	gs 'stat'
-!!	if motherKnowSpravka > 0 or motherKnowWhore > 0:gt'mother_sextalk','dildo_wakeup4'
+!!	if motherKnowSpravka > 0 or motherKnowWhore > 0: gt 'mother_sextalk','dildo_wakeup4'
 	if motherQW['dildo_caught'] = 0:
 		motherQW['dildo_caught'] += 1
 	elseif motherQW['dildo_caught'] = 1:
@@ -412,13 +415,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_wakeup1':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 	if motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 1:
-		'"<<$pcs_firstname>> what the hell is this?!"'
+		'"<<$pcs_firstname>>, what the hell is this?!"'
 		'You wake up in a shock when your door bangs open and you see your mother standing in the doorway holding... a dildo?'
-		'Oh <i>fuck</i>, it''s the dildo you left in the bathroom.'
+		'Oh <i>fuck</i>, it''s the dildo you left in the bathroom!'
 	else
 		'"<<$pcs_firstname>> what the hell are these?!"'
 		'You wake up in a shock when your door bangs open and you see your mother standing in the doorway holding... a pair of dildos?'
-		'Oh <i>fuck</i>, they''re the dildos you left in the bathroom.'
+		'Oh <i>fuck</i>, they''re the dildos you left in the bathroom!'
 	end
 	motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 0
 	
@@ -426,8 +429,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_wakeup1':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 		'"What''re you talkin'' about...?" you say blearily, feigning being drowsy from just having woken up. It''s an obvious lie, made even more obvious by the fact that your face turns bright red when you say it. "Is that a dildo? I-"'
-		'"Don''t you lie to me <<$pcs_firstname>>, <i>I am your mother.</i> And I know it''s yours. Anya isn''t stupid enough to bring home another one of these after the last time I caught her with one, let alone stupid enough to leave it in the bathroom where Kolka or Vladimir could find it! What were you thinking?! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence behaving like this, give your father a heart attack too! And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you- She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
-		'"My God... you haven''t..."'
+		'"Don''t you lie to me <<$pcs_firstname>>, <i>I am your mother.</i> I know it''s yours because Anya isn''t stupid enough to bring home another one of these after the last time I caught her with one, let alone stupid enough to leave it in the bathroom where Kolka or Vladimir could find it! What were you thinking?! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence behaving like this, give your father a heart attack too! And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you-" She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
+		'"My God... You haven''t..."'
 		'You can see where this is going and you don''t like it.'
 		gs 'mother_sextalk', 'bathroom_dildo_response_single'
 	end
@@ -436,31 +439,31 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_wakeup1':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 		'"It''s not mine," you say blearily, feigning being drowsy from just having woken up. "It must be Anya''s."'
-		'"Mmrrph. Not mine," your sister mumbles from her bed, rolling over to the other side and going back to sleep.'
-		'"Ahuh. You were saying?" Your mother puts her hands on her hips and glares at you. "I can''t believe you''re stupid enough to leave this in the bathroom where Kolka or Vladimir could find it! What were you thinking?! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence behaving like this, give your father a heart attack too! And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you- She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
-		'"My God... you haven''t..."'
+		'"Mmrrph! Not mine," your sister mumbles from her bed before rolling over to the other side and going back to sleep.'
+		'Your mother puts her hands on her hips and glares at you. "I can''t believe you''re stupid enough to leave this in the bathroom where Kolka or Vladimir could find it! What were you thinking?! You''ll ruin your brother''s innocence behaving like this, give your father a heart attack too! And you''ll ruin yourself for marriage if you-" She cuts off suddenly with a horrified look on her face.'
+		'"My God... You haven''t..."'
 		'You can see where this is going and you don''t like it.'
 		gs 'mother_sextalk', 'bathroom_dildo_response_single'
 	end
 	
-	act 'Well I need some kind of outlet!':
+	act 'I need some kind of outlet!':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Well I need some kind of outlet!" you say, sitting up in bed and throwing your arms up in exasperation.'
 		'Your mother steps back, apparently surprised at your change of tactics.'
-		'"You''re always telling me to stay away from men and not to act like a slut. Well, I gotta tell you <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <i>I get horny sometimes.</i> And if you don''t want me fucking boys, getting pregnant, or worse, then this is what it takes!"'
-		'"Mmmm. She''s right mom. Horny girls need satisfaction," your sister mumbles before rolling over to her other side and going back to sleep.'
-		'She blinks at your outburst but recomposes herself, taking a dignified stance.'
+		'"You''re always telling me to stay away from men and not to act like a slut. Well <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <i>I get horny</i>! If you don''t want me fucking boys, getting pregnant, or worse, then this is what it takes!"'
+		'"Mmmm. She''s right, mom. Horny girls need satisfaction," Anya mumbles before rolling over and going back to sleep.'
+		'Your mother blinks at your outburst but recomposes herself, taking a dignified stance.'
 
 		if motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 2:
-			'"Well, there are other ways you can deal with that," she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage. You certainly don''t need <i>two</i> of these." You roll your eyes in response.'
+			'"Well, there are other ways you can deal with that!" she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage and you certainly don''t need <i>two</i> of these!" You roll your eyes in response.'
 		else
-			'"Well, there are other ways you can deal with that," she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage." You roll your eyes in response.'
+			'"Well, there are other ways you can deal with that!" she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage!" You roll your eyes in response.'
 		end
 
 		'"Regardless, you shouldn''t be leaving stuff like this around the house. I''m taking these as punishment," she says.'
 		'"But <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>!"'
-		'"No buts young lady! Other people live in this household too! You need to learn to control yourself. If you can''t do that much then you don''t deserve to have these either."'
+		'"No buts, young lady! Other people live in this household too, so you need to learn to control yourself. If you can''t do that much, then you don''t deserve to have these either."'
 		*nl
 		if motherQW['dildo_shower_discovery'] = 1:
 			motherQW['dildo_shower_discovery'] = 0
@@ -486,15 +489,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_wakeup2':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 	if motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 1:
 		'You wake up in a shock when your door bangs open and you see your mother standing in the doorway holding a dildo.'
-		'Oh <i>fuck</i>, you left it in the bathroom again.'
+		'Oh <i>fuck</i>, you left it in the bathroom again!'
 	else
 		'You wake up in a shock when your door bangs open and you see your mother standing in the doorway holding a pair of dildos.'
-		'Oh <i>fuck</i>, you left them in the bathroom again.'
+		'Oh <i>fuck</i>, you left them in the bathroom again!'
 	end
 
-	'"What''s your excuse this time?" she glares at you'
+	'"What''s your excuse this time?" she asks while glaring at you.'
 	if motherKnowDildo = 1 or dildo_ownership = 1:
-		act '"Sorry...?"':
+		act '"Sorry?"':
 			vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
 			vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
 			vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
@@ -503,9 +506,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_wakeup2':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 			'Unfortunately, you don''t think you can weasel out of this one.'
-			'"Uhh... Sorry...?" you say, hopeful that she won''t do what she did last time.'
-			'She returns your apology with a glare.'
-			'"Confiscated."'
+			'"Uhh... Sorry?" you say, hopeful that she won''t do what she did last time.'
+			'She returns your apology with a glare. "Confiscated."'
 			'She walks out of your bedroom and shuts the door.'
 			*nl
 			'<i>Well, so much for that...</i>'
@@ -523,13 +525,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_wakeup2':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 			'"No..." you say dejectedly.'
-			'"Honestly," she huffs, shaking her head in disappointment. "I expected more of you <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
+			'"Honestly," she huffs, shaking her head in disappointment. "I expected more of you, <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
 			'She walks out of your bedroom and shuts the door.'
 
 			act 'Continue': gt 'wakeup_events', 'event_end'
 		end
 		
-		act 'Well I need some kind of outlet!':
+		act 'I need some kind of outlet!':
 			vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
 			vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
 			vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
@@ -538,12 +540,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_wakeup2':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Well I need some kind of outlet!" you say, throwing your arms up in exasperation.'
 			'Your mother steps back, apparently surprised at your change of tactics.'
-			'"You''re always telling me to stay away from men and not to act like a slut. Well, I gotta tell you <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <i>I get horny sometimes.</i> Yeah, I was masturbating with it last time too. And if you don''t want me fucking boys, getting pregnant, or worse, then this is what it takes!" She blinks at your outburst but recomposes herself, taking a dignified stance.'
-			'"Well, there are other ways you can deal with that," she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage." You roll your eyes in response.'
-			'"Anyways, you shouldn''t be leaving stuff like this around the house regardless. I''m taking this as punishment," she says.'
+			'"You''re always telling me to stay away from men and not to act like a slut. Well <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <i>I get horny</i>! Yeah, I was masturbating with it last time too! If you don''t want me fucking boys, getting pregnant, or worse, then this is what it takes!" She blinks at your outburst but recomposes herself, taking a dignified stance.'
+			'"Well, there are other ways you can deal with that!" she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage!" You roll your eyes in response.'
+			'"Anyway, you shouldn''t be leaving stuff like this around the house regardless. I''m taking this as punishment," she says.'
 			'"But <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>!"'
-			'"No buts young lady! Other people live in this household too! You need to learn to control yourself. If you can''t do that much then you don''t deserve to have one of these."'
-			*nl
+			'"No buts, young lady! Other people live in this household too, so you need to learn to control yourself. If you can''t do that much, then you don''t deserve to have one of these."'
 			'She walks out of your bedroom and shuts the door.'
 			*nl
 			'<i>Ugh. Great.</i> you think, throwing your head back against your pillow. <i>Now I need a new one. But maybe at least this gets <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> off my back...</i>'
@@ -565,20 +566,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_wakeup3':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 	if motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 1:
 		'You wake up in shock to something made of rubber slapping you in the face. Startled, you sit up in bed and look around, seeing a dildo laying on your covers.'
-		'"Again, <<$pcs_firstname>>?" Looking up, you see your mother sighing in the doorway to your bedroom with a hand on her forehead. "God, I hope you washed everything before I touched it. I''m not going to throw it away this time because I know you''re just going to buy another one. But please <<$pcs_nickname>>. Think of your brother and father. Stop leaving it lying around like that."'
+		'"Again, <<$pcs_firstname>>?" Looking up, you see your mother sighing in the doorway to your bedroom with a hand on her forehead. "God, I hope you washed everything before I touched it. I''m not going to throw it away this time because I know you''re just going to buy another one, but please think of your brother and father and stop leaving it lying around like that."'
 	else
 		'You wake up in shock to something made of rubber slapping you in the face. Startled, you sit up in bed and look around, seeing a pair of dildos laying on your covers.'
-		'"Again, <<$pcs_firstname>>?" Looking up, you see your mother sighing in the doorway to your bedroom with a hand on her forehead. "God, I hope you washed everything before I touched those. I''m not going to throw them away this time because I know you''re just going to buy more. But please <<$pcs_nickname>>. Think of your brother and father. Stop leaving these lying around like that."'
+		'"Again, <<$pcs_firstname>>?" Looking up, you see your mother sighing in the doorway to your bedroom with a hand on her forehead. "God, I hope you washed everything before I touched those. I''m not going to throw them away this time because I know you''re just going to buy more, but please think of your brother and father and stop leaving these lying around like that."'
 	end
 	'She walks out of your bedroom and shuts the door.'
 
-	act'Continue': gt 'wakeup_events', 'event_end'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'wakeup_events', 'event_end'
 end
 
 !! branching path if a SINGLE dildo was left in the bathroom
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_single':
 	if dildo_ownership ! 1:
-		act 'I swear! It''s not mine!':
+		act 'I swear it''s not mine!':
 			vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
 			vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
 			vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
@@ -590,8 +591,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_single':
 			GspravkaTimes = 2
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-			'"I swear <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>! It''s not mine! I don''t know where it came from!"'
-			'"Oh yeah? Then you won''t mind if I throw this straight into the garbage. And you won''t mind getting a referral from the clinic either. <i>Today</i> <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
+			'"I swear, <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>! It''s not mine! I don''t know where it came from!"'
+			'"Yeah? Then you won''t mind if I throw this straight into the garbage. And you won''t mind getting a referral from the clinic either. <i>Today</i> <<$pcs_firstname>>!"'
 
 			gs 'mother_sextalk', 'dildo_dumpster_ending1'
 			*nl
@@ -622,18 +623,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_single':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 		if stat['vaginal_dildo'] = 0 or stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 			'"No! I haven''t! I... I didn''t get to use it yet..."'
-			'"You think I''m going to fall for an obvious lie like that <<$pcs_firstname>>??"'
+			'"You think I''m going to fall for an obvious lie like that, <<$pcs_firstname>>??"'
 			'"No! I swear! It''s true!"'
-			'"Oh yeah? Then you won''t mind if I throw this straight into the garbage. And you won''t mind getting a referral from the clinic either. <i>Today</i> <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
+			'"Yeah? Then you won''t mind getting a referral from the clinic. <i>Today</i> <<$pcs_firstname>>!"'
 			gs 'mother_sextalk', 'dildo_dumpster_ending1'
 			*nl
 			'<i>Great. Now I have to do that too. I didn''t even get to use it...</i>'
 		else
 			'At this point, you decide it''s time to come clean. Well, at least about the ownership.'
 			'"No! I haven''t! I... I didn''t get to use it yet..." You decide to double down on the lie instead.'
-			'"You think I''m going to fall for an obvious lie like that <<$pcs_firstname>>??"'
+			'"You think I''m going to fall for an obvious lie like that, <<$pcs_firstname>>??"'
 			'"No! I swear! It''s true!"'
-			'"Then prove it. Get a new referral from the clinic either. <i>Today</i> <<$pcs_firstname>>. And I''m taking this. It''s going in the trash right now."'
+			'"Then prove it. Get a new referral from the clinic. <i>Today</i> <<$pcs_firstname>>. And I''m taking this. It''s going in the trash right now."'
 			gs 'mother_sextalk', 'dildo_dumpster_ending1'
 			*nl
 			'<i>Great. Now I''m going to get in even bigger trouble. <b>And</b> I lost my dildo...</i>'
@@ -658,9 +659,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_single':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 		'"No! I haven''t! I... I just suck on it in the shower..."'
-		'"Do you expect me to believe that <<$pcs_firstname>>?"'
+		'"Do you really expect me to believe that, <<$pcs_firstname>>?"'
 		'"Yes! It''s the truth!" you lie.'
-		'"Oh yeah? Then you won''t mind if I throw this straight into the garbage. And you won''t mind getting a referral from the clinic either. <i>Today</i> <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
+		'"Yeah? Then you won''t mind getting a referral from the clinic. <i>Today</i> <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
 		gs 'mother_sextalk', 'dildo_dumpster_ending1'
 		*nl
 		if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
@@ -675,7 +676,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_single':
 		end
 	end
 
-	act'Well I need some kind of outlet!':
+	act 'I need some kind of outlet!':
 		vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
 		vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
 		vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
@@ -685,11 +686,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_single':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Well I need some kind of outlet!" you say, throwing your arms up in exasperation.'
 		'Your mother steps back, apparently surprised at your change of tactics.'
-		'"You''re always telling me to stay away from men and not to act like a slut. Well, I gotta tell you <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <i>I get horny sometimes.</i> And if you don''t want me fucking boys, getting pregnant, or worse, then this is what it takes!" She blinks at your outburst but recomposes herself, taking a dignified stance.'
-		'"Well, there are other ways you can deal with that," she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage." You roll your eyes in response.'
-		'"Anyways, you shouldn''t be leaving stuff like this around the house regardless. I''m taking this as punishment," she says.'
+		'"You''re always telling me to stay away from men and not to act like a slut. Well <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <i>I get horny</i>! If you don''t want me fucking boys, getting pregnant, or worse, then this is what it takes!"' 
+		'She blinks at your outburst but recomposes herself, taking a dignified stance. "Well, there are other ways you can deal with that!" she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage!" You roll your eyes in response.'
+		'"Anyway, you shouldn''t be leaving stuff like this around the house regardless. I''m taking this as punishment," she says.'
 		'"But <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>!"'
-		'"No buts young lady! Other people live in this household too! You need to learn to control yourself. If you can''t do that much then you can''t have this back."'
+		'"No buts, young lady! Other people live in this household too, so you need to learn to control yourself. If you can''t do that much, then you can''t have this back."'
 		*nl
 		if motherQW['dildo_shower_discovery'] = 1:
 			motherQW['dildo_shower_discovery'] = 0
@@ -711,7 +712,7 @@ end
 !! if MULTIPLE dildos were left in the bathroom
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_multiple':
 	if dildo_ownership ! 1:
-		act 'I swear! They''re not mine!':
+		act 'I swear they''re not mine!':
 			vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
 			vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
 			vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
@@ -724,13 +725,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_multiple':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 			'"I swear <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>! They''re not mine! I don''t know where they came from!"'
-			'"Oh yeah? Then you won''t mind if I throw these straight into the garbage. And you won''t mind getting a referral from the clinic either. <i>Today</i> <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
+			'"Yeah? Then you won''t mind if I throw these straight into the garbage. And you won''t mind getting a referral from the clinic either. <i>Today</i> <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
 			gs 'mother_sextalk', 'dildo_dumpster_ending1'
 			*nl
 			if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
-				'<i>Great. Now I''m going to get in even bigger trouble. <b>And</b> I lost my dildo...</i>'
+				'<i>Great. Now I''m going to get in even bigger trouble. <b>And</b> I lost my dildos...</i>'
 			else
-				'<i>Great. Now I have to do that too. I didn''t even get to use it...</i>'
+				'<i>Great. Now I have to do that too. I didn''t even get to use them...</i>'
 			end
 			if motherQW['dildo_wakeup'] = 1:
 				act 'Continue': gt 'wakeup_events', 'event_end'
@@ -754,21 +755,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_multiple':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 		if stat['vaginal_dildo'] = 0 or stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 			'"No! I haven''t! I... I didn''t get to use them yet..."'
-			'"You think I''m going to fall for an obvious lie like that <<$pcs_firstname>>? There were <i>two of them</i> in there!"'
-			'"No! I swear! It''s true!"'
-			'"Oh yeah? Then you won''t mind if I throw these straight into the garbage. And you won''t mind getting a referral from the clinic either. <i>Today</i> <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
+			'"You think I''m going to fall for an obvious lie like that, <<$pcs_firstname>>? There were <i>two of them</i> in there!"'
+			'"I swear! It''s true!"'
+			'"Yeah? Then you won''t mind getting a referral from the clinic. <i>Today</i> <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
 			gs 'mother_sextalk', 'dildo_dumpster_ending1'
 			*nl
-			'<i>Great. Now I have to do that too. I didn''t even get to use it...</i>'
+			'<i>Great. Now I have to do that too. I didn''t even get to use them...</i>'
 		else
 			'At this point, you decide it''s time to come clean. Well, at least about the ownership.'
 			'"No! I haven''t! I... I didn''t get to use it yet..." You decide to double down on the lie instead.'
-			'"You think I''m going to fall for an obvious lie like that <<$pcs_firstname>>??"'
-			'"No! I swear! It''s true!"'
-			'"Then prove it. Get a new referral from the clinic either. <i>Today</i> <<$pcs_firstname>>. And I''m taking this. It''s going in the trash right now."'
+			'"You think I''m going to fall for an obvious lie like that, <<$pcs_firstname>>??"'
+			'"I swear! It''s true!"'
+			'"Then prove it. Get a new referral from the clinic. <i>Today</i> <<$pcs_firstname>>. And I''m taking these. They''re going in the trash right now."'
 			gs 'mother_sextalk', 'dildo_dumpster_ending1'
 			*nl
-			'<i>Great. Now I''m going to get in even bigger trouble. <b>And</b> I lost my dildo...</i>'
+			'<i>Great. Now I''m going to get in even bigger trouble. <b>And</b> I lost my dildos...</i>'
 		end
 		if motherQW['dildo_wakeup'] = 1:
 			act 'Continue': gt 'wakeup_events', 'event_end'
@@ -777,7 +778,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_multiple':
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'I just suck on it':
+	act 'I just suck on them':
 		vanrPar_bathtub_dildo = 0
 		vanrPar_bath_shower_dildo = 0
 		vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0
@@ -789,16 +790,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_multiple':
 		GspravkaTimes = 3
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-		'"No! I haven''t! I... I just suck on it in the shower..."'
-		'"Do you expect me to believe that <<$pcs_firstname>>?'
+		'"No! I haven''t! I... I just suck on them in the shower..."'
+		'"Do you really expect me to believe that, <<$pcs_firstname>>?'
 		'"Yes! It''s the truth!" you lie.'
-		'There were <i>two of them</i> in there! Are you jerking one off while you suck on the other? Besides, you shouldn''t be doing that either!" she sputters. "Well, if you''re telling the truth then you won''t mind if I throw these straight into the garbage. And you won''t mind getting a referral from the clinic either. <i>Today</i> <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
-		gs'mother_sextalk','dildo_dumpster_ending1'
+		'There were <i>two of them</i> in there! Are you jerking one off while you suck on the other? Besides, you shouldn''t be doing that either!" she sputters. "Well, if you''re telling the truth, then you won''t mind if I throw these straight into the garbage. And you won''t mind getting a referral from the clinic either. <i>Today</i> <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
+		gs 'mother_sextalk','dildo_dumpster_ending1'
 		*nl
 		if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
-			'<i>Great. Now I''m going to get in even bigger trouble. <b>And</b> I lost my dildo...</i>'
+			'<i>Great. Now I''m going to get in even bigger trouble. <b>And</b> I lost my dildos...</i>'
 		else
-			'<i>Great. Now I have to do that too. I didn''t even get to use it...</i>'
+			'<i>Great. Now I have to do that too. I didn''t even get to use them...</i>'
 		end
 		if motherQW['dildo_wakeup'] = 1:
 			act 'Continue': gt 'wakeup_events', 'event_end'
@@ -807,20 +808,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_dildo_response_multiple':
 		end
 	end
 	
-	act'Well I need some kind of outlet!':
+	act 'I need some kind of outlet!':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Well I need some kind of outlet!" you say, throwing your arms up in exasperation.'
 		'Your mother steps back, apparently surprised at your change of tactics.'
-		'"You''re always telling me to stay away from men and not to act like a slut. Well, I gotta tell you <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <i>I get horny sometimes.</i> And if you don''t want me fucking boys, getting pregnant, or worse, then this is what it takes!" She blinks at your outburst but recomposes herself, taking a dignified stance.'
+		'"You''re always telling me to stay away from men and not to act like a slut. Well, <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <i>I get horny</i>! If you don''t want me fucking boys, getting pregnant, or worse, then this is what it takes!"'
+		'She blinks at your outburst but recomposes herself, taking a dignified stance.'
 		if motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] = 2:
-			'"Well, there are other ways you can deal with that," she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage. You certainly don''t need <i>two</i> of these." You roll your eyes in response.'
+			'"Well, there are other ways you can deal with that!" she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage and you certainly don''t need <i>two</i> of these!" You roll your eyes in response.'
 		else
-			'"Well, there are other ways you can deal with that," she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage." You roll your eyes in response.'
+			'"Well, there are other ways you can deal with that!" she sniffs. "You didn''t have to ruin yourself for marriage!" You roll your eyes in response.'
 		end
 		'"Regardless, you shouldn''t be leaving stuff like this around the house. I''m taking these as punishment," she says.'
 		'"But <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>!"'
-		'"No buts young lady! Other people live in this household too! You need to learn to control yourself. If you can''t do that much then you don''t deserve to have these either."'
+		'"No buts, young lady! Other people live in this household too, so you need to learn to control yourself. If you can''t do that much, then you don''t deserve to have these either."'
 		*nl
 		gs 'mother_sextalk','dildo_ending1'
 		*nl
@@ -845,7 +847,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_ending1':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_dumpster_ending1':
-	'And she stomps past you out the front door, presumably to make good on her promise to throw away your dildo. You sigh deeply.'
+	'She stomps past you and out the front door, presumably to make good on her promise to throw away your dildo. You sigh deeply.'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_dumpster_ending2':
@@ -854,7 +856,7 @@ end
 
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_shower_ending1':
-	'That being her last word on the matter, she walks back inside the bathroom with your dildo and shuts the door on you. Moments later you hear the shower start spraying.'
+	'That being her last word on the matter, she walks back inside the bathroom with your dildo and shuts the door on you. Moments later, you hear the shower start spraying.'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_shower_ending2':

+ 20 - 3
locations/npc_standard_preferences.qsrc

@@ -229,13 +229,30 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'A11':
 	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A11', 'cum_clothes', 'like'
 
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'A14':
+	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'body_ass_bubble', 'like'
+	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'body_ass_big', 'like'
+	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'body_bmi_starving', 'dislike'
+	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'body_bmi_normal', 'like'
+	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'body_fit', 'like'
 	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'body_tan', 'like'
-	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'clothes_style_bimbo', 'dislike'
-	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'clothes_style_punk', 'dislike'
+	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'body_tits_big', 'like'
+	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'body_tits_average', 'like'
+	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'clothes_bimbo',	'hate'
+	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'clothes_punk', 'dislike'
 	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'clothes_thin', 'dislike'
-	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'cosmetics_makeup', 'like'
+	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'clothes_exposed_ass', 'dislike'
+	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'clothes_exposed_bra', 'dislike'
+	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'clothes_exposed_panties', 'dislike'
+	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'clothes_exposed_pussy', 'hate'
+	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'clothes_exposed_tits', 'hate'
+	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'cosmetics_deodorant', 'like'
+	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'cosmetics_makeup', 'love'
 	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'cosmetics_piercing', 'dislike'
 	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'cosmetics_tattoo', 'dislike'
+	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'hair_pubes_shaven', 'love'
+	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'hair_pubes_grown', 'dislike'
+	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'hair_leg', 'hate'
+	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A14', 'hair_leg_not', 'love'
 
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'A20':
 	gs 'npc_set_preference', 'A20', 'body_pregnant', 'dislike'

+ 14 - 6
locations/npcgeneratec.qsrc

@@ -109,7 +109,6 @@ if npctempgsex = 0:
 	npc_dick[$npclastgenerated] = npctempgn[5]
 	$npc_notes[$npclastgenerated] = 'A male.'
 	npc_bust[$npclastgenerated] = 0
-	lover_picrand[$npclastgenerated] = rand(1,30)
 elseif npctempgsex = 1:
 	! {Female}
 	gs 'npcrnamefile', 'rusFemale'
@@ -119,7 +118,8 @@ elseif npctempgsex = 1:
 	npc_dick[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0,1)
 	$npc_notes[$npclastgenerated] = 'A female.'
 	!!0 - 60  curve around 22,5 (C/D cups)
-	npc_bust[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0,15) + rand(0,15) + rand(0,15) & if rand(1,10) = 1: npc_bust[$npclastgenerated] += rand(0,15)
+	npc_bust[$npclastgenerated] = rand(0, 15) + rand(0, 15) + rand(0, 15)
+	if rand(1, 10) = 1: npc_bust[$npclastgenerated] += rand(0, 15)
 elseif npctempgsex = 2:
 	! {HermFemale}
 	gs 'npcrnamefile', 'rusFemale'
@@ -256,11 +256,19 @@ npc_outfit[$npclastgenerated] = 0
 
 !! Unspecified dad and <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>.
 if npctempgsex = 1 or npctempgsex = 2:
-   !! A female face
-   $npc_pic[$npclastgenerated] = 'icon_bf' + rand(31, 60) + '.png'
+	!! A female face
+	:girldetailsloop
+		lover_picrand[$npclastgenerated] =  rand(31, 60)
+	if lover_picrand[$npclastgenerated] = lover_picture[0] or lover_picrand[$npclastgenerated] = lover_picture[1] or lover_picrand[$npclastgenerated] = lover_picture[2]: jump 'girldetailsloop'
+
+	$npc_pic[$npclastgenerated] = 'icon_bf' + lover_picrand[$npclastgenerated] + '.png'
 else
-   !! A male face
-   $npc_pic[$npclastgenerated] = 'icon_bf' + rand(1, 30) + '.png'
+	!! A male face
+	:boydetailsloop
+		lover_picrand[$npclastgenerated] =  rand(1, 30)
+	if lover_picrand[$npclastgenerated] = lover_picture[0] or lover_picrand[$npclastgenerated] = lover_picture[1] or lover_picrand[$npclastgenerated] = lover_picture[2]: jump 'boydetailsloop'
+
+	$npc_pic[$npclastgenerated] = 'icon_bf' + lover_picrand[$npclastgenerated] + '.png'
 end
 
 !! STDs set to 0. For characters with a STD, you need to gs npcgenext rstd

+ 1 - 0
locations/npcpreservec.qsrc

@@ -32,6 +32,7 @@ if mid($npctemp,1,1) = 'C':
 	$npc_usedname[$npclastsaved]	= $npc_usedname[$npctemp]
 	$npc_notes[$npclastsaved]		= $npc_notes[$npctemp]
 	$npc_pic[$npclastsaved]			= $npc_pic[$npctemp]
+	lover_picrand[$npclastsaved]	= lover_picrand[$npctemp]
 	
 	npc_age[$npclastsaved]			= npc_age[$npctemp]
 	npc_dob[$npclastsaved]			= npc_dob[$npctemp]

+ 1 - 1
locations/post_master.qsrc

@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				postworkday = daystart
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/postgirl.jpg"></center>'
-				'The first hour goes by rather quickly. It''s fairly easy work, but you notice that you''re losing a lot of time by avoiding the ''dangerous'' streets though. You could easily save half an hour, if not more, just by cutting through them if needed.'
+				'The first hour goes by rather quickly. It''s fairly easy work, but you notice that you''re losing a lot of time by avoiding the ''dangerous'' streets. You could easily save half an hour, if not more, just by cutting through them if needed.'
 				'Then again, he wouldn''t warn you and go through the trouble of drawing out a map if it wasn''t important...'
 				*nl
 				act 'Stick to the ''safe'' streets':

+ 86 - 92
locations/sister.qsrc

@@ -4,14 +4,12 @@
 sisterAge = year - ((npc_dob['A33'] - (npc_dob['A33'] mod 10000)) / 10000)
 $sisterLocationTitle = '<center><h1><font color="maroon">Anya</font></h1></center>'
 gs 'stat'
-
-'<center><h1><font color="maroon">Anya</font></h1></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sister' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-'Your sister Anya is a bit older than you. She is <<sisterAge>> years old. She graduated from school, but didn''t go to the university. She works at Pavlovsk''s local supermarket.'
+'Your sister Anya is a little older than you at <<sisterAge>> years old. She graduated from school but, much to your mother''s disappointment, didn''t go to the university and ended up working at Pavlovsk''s local supermarket instead.'
 gs 'sister_chat', 'checks'
 
 if hour = 8 and week < 6:
-	'God damn it, <<$pcs_nickname>>! I will be late for work because of you!'
+	'Goddamn it, <<$pcs_nickname>>! I''ll be late for work because of you!'
 	act 'Apologize and let her get ready': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 exit
 end
@@ -26,34 +24,33 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pav_commcenter':
 			sisboyparty = -1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_7.jpg"></center>'
-			'You forgot to go to Rexs'' birthday party.'
-			'You brush it off thinking, '+$OpenInnerThought+'Oh well, hopefully he won''t be offended.'+$CloseInnerThought
-			act 'Move away':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+			'You forgot to go to Rex''s birthday party, but brush it off. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Oh well. Hopefully he won''t be too offended.'+$CloseInnerThought
+			act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			exit
 		end
 	end
 	*clr & cla
 	if npc_rel['A33'] < 20:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/community/anyaroma1.jpg"></center>'
-		'"What do you want? Fuck off!" Anya and her friends laugh and point at you until you leave them alone.'
+		'"What do you want? Fuck off!" Anya and her friends point and laugh at you until you leave them alone.'
 		act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
-	! Showing up after party invite
+	!! Showing up after party invite
 	elseif week = 5 and ((daystart + 2) / 7) mod 2 = 0 and sisterQW['party'] = 1 and daystart - sisterQW['partyday'] < 5:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/community/anyaroma2.jpg"></center>'
 		'Anya and some of her friends are dressed up and organizing themselves before going to the party. Anya sees you and waves at you. "Come on, I was starting to wonder if you were going to show up."'
 		gs 'sister', 'partyanswer', 'anya'
-	! Anya heading to party
+	!! Anya heading to party
 	elseif npc_rel['A33'] >= 70 and week = 5 and ((daystart + 2) / 7) mod 2 = 0 and (sisterQW['party'] = 0 or sisterQW['party'] = 2):
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		if npc_rel['A57'] >= 80:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/reks/reks.jpg"></center>'
-			'Anya and her friends are dressed up and hanging out but look like they are about to leave and go somewhere.'
+			'Anya and her friends are dressed up and hanging out, but look like they''re about to leave and go somewhere.'
 			gs 'sister', 'partyanswer', 'rex'
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/community/anyaroma2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Anya and her friends are dressed up and hanging out but look like they are about to leave and go somewhere.'
-			'Your sister sees you, smiles and waves you over. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! We''re going to a party at Rex''s place. Want to come with us?"'
+			'Anya and her friends are dressed up and hanging out, but look like they''re about to leave and go somewhere.'
+			'Your sister sees you and waves you over. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! We''re going to a party at Rex''s place. Want to come with us?"'
 			gs 'sister', 'partyanswer', 'anya'
 		end
 	else
@@ -89,19 +86,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partyanswer':
 		if mesec > 0 or pcs_mood < 25 or alko >= 3 or cumloc[11] = 1 or cumloc[6] = 1 or cumloc[7] = 1:
 			sisterQW['party'] = -1
 			if mesec > 0:
-				'"Sorry Anya, I''m not in the mood today. You go without me."'
+				'"Sorry Anya, but I''m not in the mood today. You go without me."'
 				'"What, are you on the rag today? You should have told me! Alright, go home and get some rest."'
 				act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			elseif pcs_mood < 25:
-				'"Sorry Anya, I''m not in the mood today. You go without me."'
-				'"You do look a little pale sis. Go home and get some rest."'
+				'"Sorry Anya, but I''m not in the mood today. You go without me."'
+				'"You do look a little pale, sis. Go home and get some rest."'
 				act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			elseif alko >= 3:
-				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, how the hell did you get so drunk already? I was going to invite you to a party, but you look like you have already been to one. Go home and sleep it off!"'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, how the hell did you get so drunk already? I was going to invite you to a party, but you look like you''ve already been to one! Go home and sleep it off!"'
 				act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			else
 				'Her smile fades, and she seems confused for a moment before a look of disgust appears on her blushing face. "My God, why are you walking around with cum all over your face!? You''ll get yourself a reputation! Go home and wash that off, quickly!" She then shoos you away as her friends stare at you.'
-				'You feel a little ashamed that you have embarrassed yourself and your sister by walking around like this in public.'
+				'You feel a little ashamed that you embarrassed yourself and your sister by walking around like this in public.'
 				act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			end
 		else
@@ -125,25 +122,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partyanswer':
 			rexPark = 0
 			rexCar = 0
 			if fame['pav_slut'] >= 250:
-				'"Shit, <<$pcs_nickname>> people everywhere are saying you are a fucking whore. What is this garbage, <<$pcs_nickname>>? I thought we were an item and things were getting serious, but you''re fucking everything that moves?"'
-				'"I don''t know what came over me. I wasn''t myself. Please, forgive me if you can."'
-				'"Listen, everything''s OK, but let''s just be friends and forget being together. Okay?"'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, everyone''s saying you''re a fucking whore. I thought we were an item and things were getting serious, but you''re fucking everything that moves?"'
+				'"I don''t know what came over me! I wasn''t myself! Please forgive me."'
+				'"Listen, let''s just be friends and forget about being together, okay?"'
 				'"Okay..."'
 				act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			else
-				'"Shit <<$pcs_nickname>>, is that cum?" He leans in to get a better look then recoils in disgust.'
-				'Your hand goes up to the dried cum on your face that you forgot to wipe off. "I don''t know what came over me, I wasn''t myself. Please, forgive me if you can."'
-				'"Whatever slut. Just get away from me." He moves away from you, and you see everyone giving you either a disgusted or angry look.'
-				'"Okay..." Not knowing what else to say, you walk away disheartened.'
+				'"Is that cum?!" He leans in to get a better look, then recoils in disgust.'
+				'Your hand goes up to the dried cum on your face that you forgot to wipe off.'
+				'"Get away from me, slut!" He moves away from you and you see everyone else either giving you a disgusted or angry look.'
+				'Not knowing what to say, you walk away disheartened.'
 				act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			end
 		elseif mesec > 0 or pcs_mood < 50:
 			'"Sorry sweetie, but I''m not feeling too good today. You go without me."'
-			'"Babe, I don''t want to leave you alone, but I need to go with the guys. Take care and do not be sad."'
+			'"Babe, I don''t want to leave you alone, but I need to go with the guys. Take care."'
 			'Rex gives you a gentle kiss on the cheek and leaves.'
 			act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		elseif alko >= 3:
-			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, are you drunk? I wanted to invite you to the party, but you look like you just left one. Go home and sleep it off."'
+			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, are you drunk? I wanted to invite you to the party, but you look like you just left one! Go home and sleep it off."'
 			act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		else
 			'"Babe, let''s go to my place. I''m throwing another one of my parties."'
@@ -152,8 +149,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partyanswer':
 				minut += 5
 				sisterQW['party'] = -1
 				gs 'stat'
-				'"Sorry Rex, but I have a lot of homework. I''d love to come, but I don''t want to fail my exams."'
-				'"Well, go on then. But you''re definitely coming next time, okay?"'
+				'"Sorry, Rex. I''d love to come, but I have a lot of homework to do and don''t want to fail my exams."'
+				'"Okay, go on then. But you''re definitely coming next time, okay?"'
 				act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			end
 			act 'Accept': gt 'rex_party', 'start'
@@ -174,15 +171,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 			npc_QW['A33'] = 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/community/sisboyqw_02.jpg"></center>'
-			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you wanted to meet my boyfriend, right? Well, this is Roma. Roma, this is my sister <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-			'"To friendship!!!" Rex shouts drunkenly, raising his cup. You pick up a cup full of beer and start drinking, glancing at your sister''s boyfriend.'
-			'Roma, red-haired and skinny, is actually pretty cute. He reminds you of Katja and Vicky, but more manly. You think to yourself how lucky Anya is to have him.'
+			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you wanted to meet my boyfriend, right? Well, this is Roma. Roma, this is my sister, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+			'"To friendship!!!" Rex shouts drunkenly while raising his cup. You pick up a cup full of beer and start drinking while glancing at your sister''s boyfriend.'
+			'Roma, red-haired and skinny, is actually pretty cute. He reminds you of Katja and Vicky, but more manly.'
 			act 'Continue to drink beer': gt 'sister', 'scene2'
 		end
 	else
 		temp = rand(0,4)
 		if temp = 0:
-			'Impatiently, Anya picks up a bottle of beer and shouts, "Come on guys! Will you pour me some beer today or what?"'
+			'Anya impatiently picks up a bottle of beer. "Come on, guys! Will you pour me some beer today or what?"'
 			if rand(0,1) = 0:
 				'Rex takes the bottle out of Anya''s hands.'
 				temprand = rand(0,4)
@@ -190,37 +187,37 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 					'"Stop shouting, I''m pouring!"'
 					temprand = rand(0,2)
 					if temprand = 0:
-						'Between fits of giggles, Anya says, "I haven''t even started to yell. If I do, you''ll know!"'
+						'"I haven''t even started to yell. If I do, you''ll know!" Anya says between fits of giggles.'
 					elseif temprand = 1:
-						'With a resounding slap on Rex''s shoulder, Lusya says, "Hurry up, you piece of dog shit!"'
+						'"Hurry up, you piece of dog shit!" Lusya says with a resounding slap on Rex''s shoulder.'
 					else
-						'With a smile, Ira says, "Don''t get angry, Rex."'
-						if rand(0,10) = 0:'Anya quickly interjects, "We might need to chain him to a post until he calms down."'
+						'"Don''t get angry, Rex!" Ira says with a smile.'
+						if rand(0,10) = 0: 'Anya quickly interjects. "We might need to chain him to a post until he calms down."'
 					end
 				elseif temprand = 1:
 					'"Well, you always like to be late for the fun. Will your loud ass relax? I''m sorting it all out."'
 					temprand = rand(0,2)
 					if temprand = 0:
-						'Between fits of giggles, Anya says, "My ass is always relaxed."'
-						'Roma wraps his arm around her and cups the side of her hip with his hand. "Hell yeah it is," he says, which gets everyone laughing.'
+						'"My ass is always relaxed!" Anya says between fits of giggles.'
+						'Roma wraps his arm around her and cups the side of her hip with his hand. "Hell yeah it is!" he says, which gets everyone laughing.'
 					elseif temprand = 1:
-						'With a resounding slap on Rex''s shoulder, Lusya says, "If we had something to drink, we would be relaxed!"'
+						'"If we had something to drink, we would be relaxed!" Lusya says with a resounding slap on Rex''s shoulder.'
 					else
-						'Roma giggles and says, "If she relaxes it anymore, it will be too loose to feel anything."'
+						'Roma giggles. "If she relaxes it anymore, it will be too loose to feel anything."'
 						'"That''s just because you have a little dick," Anya quips, which gets everyone laughing.'
 					end
 				elseif temprand = 2:
-					'"Come on, you could have opened it yourself, you lazy bitch. Don''t you have hands?" he says with a smile.'
+					'"You could have opened it yourself, you lazy bitch. Don''t you have hands?" he says with a smile.'
 					temprand = rand(0,2)
 					if temprand = 0:
 						'Anya giggles. "Yeah, but what else are yours good for?"'
-						if rand(0,10) = 0:'With mock indignation, Rex answers, "Really? Just one other thing..."'
+						if rand(0,10) = 0: 'With mock indignation, Rex answers. "Really? Just one other thing..."'
 					elseif temprand = 1:
-						'With a resounding slap on Rex''s shoulder, Lusya says, "Is that how you speak to a lady?"'
-						if rand(0,10) = 0:'With mock indignation, Rex answers, "Yes, I speak Russian to her."'
+						'"Is that how you speak to a lady?" Lusya asks with a resounding slap on Rex''s shoulder.'
+						if rand(0,10) = 0: 'With mock indignation, Rex answers. "Yes, I speak Russian to her."'
 					else
-						'Ira smiles, saying, "Don''t get so upset, Rex."'
-						if rand(0,10) = 0:'Anya quickly interjects, "We might need to chain him to a tree to keep him calm."'
+						'Ira smiles. "Don''t get so upset, Rex!"'
+						if rand(0,10) = 0: 'Anya quickly interjects. "We might need to chain him to a tree to keep him calm."'
 					end
 				elseif temprand = 3:
 					'"Allow me, madame."'
@@ -228,20 +225,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 					if temprand = 0:
 						'Anya giggles. "Of course, monsieur."'
 					elseif temprand = 1:
-						'With mock indignation, Anya says, "Don''t you Madame me!"'
-						if rand(0,10) = 0:'Rex bows gallantly and answers, "I''m truly sorry, mademoiselle."'
+						'"Don''t you Madame me!" Anya says with mock indignation.'
+						if rand(0,10) = 0: 'Rex bows gallantly. "I''m truly sorry, mademoiselle."'
 					else
-						'Impatiently, Anya says, "Pour it already, you clown."'
+						'"Pour it already, you clown!" Anya says impatiently.'
 					end
 				else
 					'"Shit! Where are the cups? Did we not buy any?"'
 					temprand = rand(0,2)
 					if temprand = 0:
-						'Anya picks up the cups. "They''re right here, you blind moron."'
+						'Anya picks up the cups. "They''re right here, you blind moron!"'
 					elseif temprand = 1:
 						'"Rex, you''re the one who bought them. Is your memory really that bad?" Roma asks.'
 					else
-						'Lusya holds up the cups and says, "Rex, calm down."'
+						'Lusya holds up the cups. "Rex, calm down."'
 					end
 				end
 			else
@@ -250,37 +247,37 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 				if temprand = 0:
 					'Rex holds the cups while Roma pours the beer.'
 				elseif temprand = 1:
-					'Rex takes the cups and mutters, "That worthless ass. Can''t he use both of his hands at once?"'
+					'Rex takes the cups. "That worthless ass!" he mutters. "Can''t he use both his hands at once?"'
 				elseif temprand = 2:
-					'Ira takes the cups and says, "Pour already, you big doofus."'
+					'Ira takes the cups. "Pour already, you big doofus!"'
 				else
-					'As Roma pours beer in the cups, he suddenly starts to tip over. Unable to regain his balance while this drunk, he falls over and spills all the beer on the ground.'
+					'As Roma pours beer into the cups, he suddenly starts to tip over. Unable to regain his balance, he falls over and spills the beer on the ground.'
 					temprand = rand(0, 2)
 					if temprand = 0:
-						'Outraged, Rex screams, "You worthless drunk ass! No one can trust you! Didn''t your mother ever tell you ''Always pour with two hands?!''"'
+						'Rex is outraged. "You worthless drunk ass! Didn''t your mother ever tell you ''Always pour with two hands?!''"'
 					elseif temprand = 1:
-						'Outraged, Rex says, "How the fuck could you spill that? Are you really that drunk already?"'
+						'Rex is outraged. "What the fuck?! Are you really that drunk already?"'
 					else
-						'Placing her head in her hand, Anya indignantly mutters, "Always the fucking same! Getting too drunk, too fast..."'
+						'Anya places her head in her hand. "Always the fucking same! Getting too drunk, too fast..." she indignantly mutters.'
 					end
 				end
 			end
 		elseif temp = 1:
-			'Indignantly, Lusya says, "Did we come here to drink beer or to look at it?"'
+			'"Did we come here to drink beer or to look at it?" Lusya asks indignantly,'
 		elseif temp = 2:
-			'With a flirty look, Ira bats her eyelashes and says, "Boys, are we going to drink beer today or not?"'
+			'With a flirty look, Ira bats her eyelashes. "Boys, are we going to drink beer today or not?"'
 		elseif temp = 3:
 			if rand(0,1) = 0:
 				'Rex picks up a bottle of beer and pops it open.'
 				if rand(0,2) = 0:
 					'"Shit! Where are the cups? Did we not buy any?"'
-					temprand = rand(0, 2)
+					temprand = rand(0,2)
 					if temprand = 0:
 						'Anya picks up the cups. "They''re right here, you blind moron!"'
 					elseif temprand = 1:
-						'"Rex, you''re the one who bought them. Is your memory really that bad? Roma asks."'
+						'"Rex, you''re the one who bought them. Is your memory really that bad?" Roma asks."'
 					else
-						'Lusya holds up the cups and says, "Rex, calm down."'
+						'Lusya holds up the cups. "Rex, calm down."'
 					end
 				else
 					'"Roma, hold the cups while I pour."'
@@ -292,39 +289,39 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 				if temprand = 0:
 					'Rex holds the cups while Roma pours the beer.'
 				elseif temprand = 1:
-					'Rex takes the cups and mutters, "That worthless ass. Can''t he use both of his hands at once?"'
+					'Rex takes the cups. "That worthless ass!" he mutters. "Can''t he use both his hands at once?"'
 				elseif temprand = 2:
-					'Ira takes the cups and says, "Pour it already, you big doofus."'
+					'Ira takes the cups. "Pour it already, you big doofus!"'
 				else
-					'As Roma pours beer in the cups, he suddenly starts to tip over. Unable to regain his balance while this drunk, he falls over and spills all the beer on the ground.'
+					'As Roma pours beer in the cups, he suddenly starts to tip over. Unable to regain his balance, he falls over and spills the beer on the ground.'
 					temprand = rand(0, 2)
 					if temprand = 0:
-						'Outraged, Rex screams, "You worthless drunk ass! No one can trust you! Didn''t your mother ever tell you ''Always pour with two hands?!''"'
+						'Rex is outraged. "You worthless drunk ass! Didn''t your mother ever tell you ''Always pour with two hands?!''"'
 					elseif temprand = 1:
-						'Outraged, Rex says, "How the fuck could you spill that? Are you really that drunk already?"'
+						'Rex is outraged. "What the fuck?! Are you really that drunk already?"'
 					else
-						'Anya places her head in her hand and indignantly mutters, "Always the fucking same! Getting too drunk, too fast..."'
+						'Anya places her head in her hand. "Always the fucking same! Getting too drunk, too fast..." she indignantly mutters.'
 					end
 				end
 			end
 		else
-			'Roma picks up the bottle of beer, opens it and says, "Somebody hold the cups."'
+			'Roma picks up the bottle of beer and opens it. "Somebody hold the cups."'
 			temprand = rand(0, 3)
 			if temprand = 0:
 				'Rex holds the cups while Roma pours the beer.'
 			elseif temprand = 1:
-				'Rex takes the cups and mutters, "That worthless ass. Can''t he use both of his hands at once?"'
+				'Rex takes the cups. "That worthless ass!" he mutters. "Can''t he use both his hands at once?"'
 			elseif temprand = 2:
-				'Ira takes the cups and says, "Pour already, you big doofus."'
+				'Ira takes the cups. "Pour already, you big doofus!"'
 			else
-				'As Roma pours beer in the cups, he suddenly starts to tip over. Unable to regain his balance while this drunk, he falls over and spills all the beer on the ground.'
+				'As Roma pours beer in the cups, he suddenly starts to tip over. Unable to regain his balance, he falls over and spills the beer on the ground.'
 				temprand = rand(0, 2)
 				if temprand = 0:
-					'Outraged, Rex screams, "You worthless drunk ass! No one can trust you! Didn''t your mother ever tell you ''Always pour with two hands?!''"'
+					'Rex is outraged. "You worthless drunk ass! Didn''t your mother ever tell you ''Always pour with two hands?!''"'
 				elseif temprand = 1:
-					'Outraged, Rex says, "How the fuck could you spill that? Are you really that drunk already?"'
+					'Rex is outraged. "What the fuck?! Are you really that drunk already?"'
 				else
-					'Anya places her head in her hand and indignantly mutters, "Always the fucking same! Getting too drunk, too fast..."'
+					'Anya places her head in her hand. "Always the fucking same! Getting too drunk, too fast..." she indignantly mutters.'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -335,13 +332,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 	end
 	
 	
-	'Eventually, everybody''s plastic cup is filled with ice cold beer. You all drink merrily together.'
+	'Eventually, everybody''s plastic cup is filled with ice cold beer, which you all drink merrily together.'
 	if reksLike = 1 and toiletRexSex = 0 and sisterQW['partycount'] > 0 and rex_breakup = 0:
 		temp = rand(1,100)
 		if temp >= 70:
 			'You notice Rex briefly glancing at your feet.'
 			if pcs_horny > 30 and (PCloSkirt > 2 or PCloPants > 4):
-				act 'Show off your legs ':
+				act 'Show off your legs':
 					cla
 					minut += 5
 					pcs_horny += 5
@@ -359,8 +356,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A57', 'like'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/reks/rex.jpg"></center>'
-			'Already pretty tipsy, Rex approaches you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, let me refill your glass." However, he, seemingly by accident, spills some on your foot. "Oh <<$pcs_nickname>>, forgive me! Here, I''ll clean that up for you."'
-			'Rex begins wiping off your legs with his shirt sleeve.'
+			'Already pretty tipsy, Rex approaches you. "Let me refill your glass, <<$pcs_nickname>>..." However, he spills some on you, seemingly by accident. "Oh sorry! Here, I''ll clean that up for you."'
+			'He starts wiping off your legs with his shirt sleeve.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'foreplay', 'resist', 'easy'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Step back (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -370,7 +367,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 					gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A57', 'dislike'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/reks/event/community/rexnet.jpg"></center>'
-					'"No problem, I can manage that," you say as you clean your own shoe.'
+					'"No problem, I can manage that," you say as you clean yourself.'
 					act 'Continue to drink beer': gt 'sister', 'scene2'
 				end
 			else
@@ -383,7 +380,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A57', 'love'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/reks/event/community/rexda.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Laughing, you wait until Rex finishes wiping your foot. While you are giggling, Rex becomes more bold, gradually replacing his sleeve with his palm and working up your leg towards your thigh. Just as Rex''s hand starts to drift to your inner thigh, you realize what is going on and hurriedly remove his hand, saying, "Hey..."'
+				'Laughing, you wait until Rex finishes. He gradually grows more bold, replacing his sleeve with his palm and working his way up your leg towards your thigh. Just as Rex''s hand starts to drift to your inner thigh, you realize what''s going on and quickly remove his hand.'
 				act 'Continue to drink beer': gt 'sister', 'scene2'
 			end
 		elseif rexPark = 1 and rexParkDay < daystart and rexSisTalk = 2:
@@ -398,7 +395,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/reks/rex.jpg"></center>'
 			gs 'rex_events', 'rexRep'
-			'Rex comes up to you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I looked like a real chump waiting for you alone in the park yesterday! That wasn''t very nice..."'
+			'Rex comes up to you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I looked like a real chump waiting for you in the park yesterday! That wasn''t very nice..."'
 			act 'Continue to drink beer': gt 'sister', 'scene2'
 		elseif rexCar = 1 and rexCarDay < daystart and rexSisTalk = 3:
 			cla
@@ -450,7 +447,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 !2 - agreed to go to the party
 !!again want to change rexs party to only every other Friday
 		elseif week < 5 and week > 1 and ((daystart+2) / 7) mod 2 = 0 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0 and (sisterQW['party'] = 0 or sisterQW['party'] = 2) and daystart - sisterQW['partyday'] > 3:
-			'Roma looks up at you, suddenly remembering something. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, Rex''s apartment is available on Friday and he''s having a party. Do you want to go?"'
+			'Roma looks up at you, suddenly remembering something. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, Rex is having a party on Friday. Do you want to come?"'
 			sisterQW['partyday'] = daystart
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -458,8 +455,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 				sisterQW['party'] = -1
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You turn down the invitation.'
-				'"Sorry Roma, I would love to, but I can''t get behind at school. I have homework to do and books to read, you know what it''s like."'
+				'You turn down the invitation. "I''d love to, but I can''t get behind at school. I have homework to do and books to read. You know what it''s like."'
 				act 'Finish': gt 'sister', 'pav_commcenter'
 			end
 			if razradbeg > 0:
@@ -467,8 +463,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 					sisterQW['party'] = -1
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_4.jpg"></center>'
-					'You turn down the invitation.'
-					'"I would love to, but I have a competition to prepare for. I have to train."'
+					'You turn down the invitation. "I''d love to, but I have a competition to prepare for and have to train."'
 					act 'Finish': gt 'sister', 'pav_commcenter'
 				end
 			end
@@ -477,8 +472,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 					sisterQW['party'] = -1
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_5.jpg"></center>'
-					'You turn down the invitation.'
-					'"Sorry, but I can''t. Coach doesn''t allow me to stay out late, and drinking is also prohibited."'
+					'You turn down the invitation. "Sorry, but I can''t. Coach doesn''t allow me to stay out late, and drinking is also prohibited."'
 					act 'Finish': gt 'sister', 'pav_commcenter'
 				end
 			end
@@ -487,7 +481,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene1':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/community/anyaroma1.jpg"></center>'
 				'You agree to go to the party.'
-				'"Awesome <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''ll be fun. We will meet here. Just don''t forget to be here before 18:00, otherwise we will leave without you."'
+				'"Awesome! It''ll be fun. Just be here before 18:00, otherwise we''ll leave without you."'
 				'Anya gives Roma a dirty look, but he just shrugs it off.'
 				act 'Finish': gt 'sister', 'pav_commcenter'
 			end
@@ -500,7 +494,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene2':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/community/anyaroma1.jpg"></center>'
-	'The bottles of beer are quickly drained and everyone seems a little tipsy at this point. Soon everyone gets up and staggers inside. As they go, they all shout goodbye at you, so you wave to them and head on your way.'
+	'The bottles of beer are quickly drained and everyone seems a little tipsy at this point as they get up and stagger inside. As they go, they all shout goodbye at you, so you wave to them and head on your way.'
 	act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'
 end
 

+ 94 - 82
locations/sisterQW.qsrc

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboyQW_bedroom':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/sisboyqw_08.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk up to your bedroom door and stop. Your sister asked you to give her some privacy with her boyfriend, and you are sure they are having or are going to have sex. You know you should just walk away, but you cannot shake the stimulating thoughts of your desire to spy on Anya and her boyfriend.'
+	'You walk up to your bedroom door and stop. Your sister asked you to give her some privacy with her boyfriend, and you''re sure they''re having or are going to have sex. You know you should just walk away, but you can''t shake the stimulating thoughts of your desire to spy on Anya and her boyfriend.'
 	act 'Leave them in peace':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 1
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboyQW_bedroom':
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/spy/peep1.jpg"></center>'
 			'You force yourself to slowly grab the handle of the door. You turn it slowly and push the door open just a crack. Pressing your face to the gap, you peer into the room.'
-			'Your eyes focus on your sister and her boyfriend passionately kissing and undressing each other. It looks like they are about to have sex.'
+			'Your eyes focus on your sister and her boyfriend passionately kissing and undressing each other. It looks like they''re about to have sex.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Close the door':
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboyQW_bedroom':
 				minut += 1
 				blockBedrPar = 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/spy/peep3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You feel guilty about spying on your sister after you promised you would leave her in peace, and you close the door softly so they don''t hear you. You lean your head against the door for a few moments to collect yourself before walking away.'
+				'You feel guilty about spying on your sister after you promised you would leave her in peace, and you close the door softly so they don''t hear you. You lean your head against the door for a few seconds to collect yourself before walking away.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'korrPar'
@@ -84,10 +84,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy1':
 	*clr & cla
 	sisterbfspy += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once naked, Roma lies back on her bed. Anya kneels on the bed next to him and starts to kiss and lick his cock. She then slowly starts sucking his dick.'
-	'He is lying relaxed, as if he had fallen asleep, but your sister is wide awake and continues playing with him.'
-	'Anya looks pretty skilled handling a cock, and you think that she could teach you a thing or two. You start imagining yourself in her position.'
-	'You are getting a little carried away. You should leave the room before they see you.'
+	'Once naked, Roma lies back on her bed as Anya kneels on the bed next to him and starts to kiss and lick his cock. She then slowly starts sucking his dick.'
+	'Anya looks pretty skilled handling a cock, and you think that she could teach you a thing or two. You start imagining yourself in her position...'
+	'You realise that you''re getting a little carried away and should leave the room before they see you.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	
@@ -110,8 +109,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy2':
 	*clr & cla
 	sisterbfspy += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy4.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once naked, Anya lies down on her bed with her legs hanging off the edge. She spreads her legs wide, and Roma kneels down at the edge of the bed between her legs. He leans forward and buries his face in her pussy. You can hear her moaning from where you stand. By the sounds of it, Roma really knows what he is doing. Several minutes pass, and your sister starts squirming around and moaning loudly on the bed like she is about to have an orgasm already.'
-	'At that moment, you wish to be in your sister''s place, but you are exposed here by the door, and you don''t want to be caught.'
+	'Once naked, Anya lies down on her bed with her legs hanging off the edge. She spreads her legs wide, and Roma kneels down at the edge of the bed between them. He leans forward and buries his face in her pussy. You can hear her moaning from where you stand. By the sounds of it, Roma really knows what he''s doing.' 
+	'Several minutes pass, and your sister starts squirming around and moaning loudly on the bed, like she''s about to have an orgasm.'
+	'At that moment, you wish to be in your sister''s place, but you''re exposed here by the door and don''t want to get caught.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	
@@ -134,12 +134,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy3':
 	*clr & cla
 	sisterbfspy += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy2.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once Anya is naked, Roma pushes her down to her knees roughly. She pulls down his pants, and his large hard cock springs free. She immediately starts stroking and sucking it.'
+	'Once Anya is naked, Roma roughly pushes her down on her knees. She pulls down his pants, and his large hard cock springs free. She immediately starts stroking and sucking it.'
 	'Anya relishes swallowing his member balls deep, and when she takes it out of her mouth, she sobs heavily, her face plastered in saliva.'
 	*nl
 	'She has a hard time deep-throating such a large cock with mascara and tears running down her face, but Roma forcefully grabs her hair in both his hands and starts fucking her mouth roughly, his balls slapping against her chin.'
 	'You can hear her gags and muffled gasps from here. Your mischievous sister suffers, just to please her boyfriend.'
-	'You want to watch until the end, but you are running the risk of being noticed.'
+	'You want to watch until the end, but you''re running the risk of being noticed.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	
@@ -162,10 +162,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy4':
 	*clr & cla
 	sisterbfspy += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy9.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once they are both naked, Anya crawls on the bed. While she is still on all fours, Roma comes up behind her and slaps her ass. He then grabs her hips and pulls her back towards him. She then moans loudly, and Roma starts thrusting against her, obviously fucking her and she seems to be loving it. This goes on for several minutes.'
+	'Once they''re both naked, Anya crawls on the bed on all fours before Roma comes up behind her and slaps her ass. He then grabs her hips and pulls her back towards him. She then moans loudly as he starts thrusting against her.'
 	*nl
-	'Roma is red and sweaty when he suddenly freezes for a moment, then falls on his back. You look closely and can clearly see his cum trickling from her pussy.'
-	'Your sister groans. "Already?" Her tone turns angry when she realizes what''s happened. "What the fuck!? You came inside me again? How many times do I have to tell you, you fucking moron? Get the fuck away from me!"'
+	'After several minutes, Roma is now red and sweaty when he suddenly freezes, then falls on his back. You look closely and can clearly see his cum trickling from her pussy.'
+	'Your sister groans. "Already?" Her tone turns angry when she realizes what''s happened. "What the fuck!? You came inside me again? How many times do I have to tell you, you fucking moron?! Get the fuck away from me!"'
 	'It seems they need to talk, and so you take the opportunity to run away before they notice you.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -189,11 +189,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy5':
 	*clr & cla
 	sisterbfspy += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy10.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once they are both naked, Anya crawls on the bed. While she is still on all fours, Roma comes up behind her and slaps her ass. He reaches over to her nightstand and grabs a small bottle. He squirts some of its contents on his dick and then some on her ass before he grabs her hips and pulls her back towards him. He reaches down to grab his dick with one hand while keeping the other on her hip. He takes a moment to line things up then pushes forward. Suddenly, your sister gasps and tenses up for a moment. Her hands tightly gripping the sheets, she takes a relaxing breath as Roma starts to slowly fuck her.'
+	'Once they''re both naked, Anya crawls on the bed on all fours before Roma comes up behind her and slaps her ass. He reaches over to her nightstand and grabs a small bottle. He squirts some of its contents on his dick and then some on her ass before he grabs her hips and pulls her back towards him. He reaches down to grab his dick with one hand while keeping the other on her hip. He takes a moment to line things up then pushes forward.'
+	'Your sister gasps and tenses up, her hands tightly gripping the sheets before she takes a relaxing breath as Roma starts to slowly fuck her.'
 	*nl
-	'Anya slowly leans forward as Roma starts to really pound her. She is soon lying on her stomach, offering her ass to her man. "God damn your ass is so tight, babe," Roma grunts out as he boldly and confidently tears into Anya''s ass, tightly gripping her hips as he starts to really hammer her back door.'
-	'His movements get faster and faster, and their bodies soon sway in unison as Anya screams, "More... more! Yes... fuck my tight little ass... just like that!"'
-	'They are so engrossed in each other that they have not yet noticed your presence. Now might be the time to leave the hot couple to it.'
+	'Anya slowly leans forward as Roma starts to really pound her. She''s soon lying on her stomach, offering her ass to her man. "God damn your ass is so tight, babe!" Roma grunts out as he boldly and confidently tears into Anya''s ass, tightly gripping her hips as he starts to really hammer her back door.'
+	'His movements get faster and faster, and their bodies soon sway in unison as Anya screams out. "More... More! Yes... Fuck my tight little ass... Just like that!"'
+	'They''re so engrossed in each other that they''ve not yet noticed your presence. Now might be the time to leave the hot couple to it.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	
@@ -215,9 +216,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy6':
 	menu_off = 1
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy3.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once naked, Roma lies back on her bed. Anya kneels on the bed next to him and starts to kiss and lick his cock. She then slowly starts sucking his dick.'
-	'Anya looks pretty skilled handling a cock, and you think that she could teach you a thing or two. You start imagining yourself in her position.'
-	'You are getting a little carried away. You should leave the room before you are discovered, but you really want to watch the whole thing.'
+	'Once naked, Roma lies back on her bed as Anya kneels on the bed next to him and starts to kiss and lick his cock. She then slowly starts sucking his dick.'
+	'Anya looks pretty skilled handling a cock, and you think that she could teach you a thing or two. You start imagining yourself in her position...'
+	'You realise that you''re getting a little carried away and should leave the room before you''re discovered, but you really want to watch the whole thing.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	
@@ -240,35 +241,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spy6':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy5.jpg"></center>'
-			'After receiving her blowjob, he pulls her up until she is kneeling while facing him. He grabs her and lifts her up, and she spreads her legs and lines his cock up with her pussy before he lowers her back down, impaling her on his dick. They both moan as he holds her up as they fuck. Roma seems to be pretty strong, being able to hold her up like that and still fuck her.'
+			'After receiving her blowjob, Roma effortlessly picks her up and lowers her down onto his dick. They both moan as they start fucking.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			act 'Ride''em cowgirl':
+			act 'Keep watching':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy6.jpg"></center>'
-				'Eventually Roma gets tired and lies back on the bed. Anya then mounts him and starts riding him hard. Her pace is frantic, almost animal like. After a few minutes, she cries out as an orgasm pulses through her body, and she slowly stops moving while sitting on top of him, his dick still inside her pussy.'
+				'Eventually, Roma gets tired and lies back on the bed. Anya then mounts him and starts riding him hard. Her pace is frantic, almost animal like. After a few minutes, she cries out as an orgasm pulses through her body, and she slowly stops moving while sitting on top of him, his dick still inside her pussy.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Doggy for the win':
+				act 'Keep watching':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy7.jpg"></center>'
-					'Having recovered his strength, Roma rolls Anya off him and gets back up on his knees. He pulls her up on her knees, spins her around and pushes her shoulders forwards until she bends over on all fours. Once she is in position, he slides up behind her and starts fucking her doggy style. He smacks her ass with one hand and grabs hold of her hair with the other, occasionally pulling it back and causing her head to strain back.'
+					'Having recovered his strength, Roma rolls Anya off him and gets back up on his knees. He pulls her up on her knees, spins her around and pushes her shoulders forwards until she bends over on all fours. Once she''s in position, he slides up behind her and starts fucking her doggy style. He smacks her ass with one hand and grabs hold of her hair with the other, occasionally pulling it back and causing her head to strain back.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
-					act 'Tight ass no more':
+					act 'Keep watching':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy8.jpg"></center>'
-						'He suddenly pulls out of her pussy and takes only a moment to line his large dick up against her asshole before pushing forward. The head of his dick pops into her ass before she really has time to react. She cries out in a mixture of pain and pleasure. Roma, on the other hand, groans in pleasure as he starts fucking her ass, quickly starting to really hammer it. You see her hands grip the sheets tightly, and her moans and groans remain a mixture of pain and pleasure.'
+						'He suddenly pulls out of her pussy and takes only a moment to line his large dick up against her asshole before pushing forward. The head of his dick pops into her ass before she has time to react and she cries out in both pleasure and pain. Roma, on the other hand, groans in pleasure as he starts fucking her ass, quickly starting to really hammer it. You see her hands grip the sheets tightly as she moans and grunts.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 						gs 'stat'
-						act 'Ass To Mouth':
+						act 'Keep watching':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spy11.jpg"></center>'
-							'He suddenly pulls out of her and grabs her by the hair. He pulls her head around towards his dick, and the first spurt of cum lands on her chest. Before another spurt comes out, he sticks his dick in her mouth and groans loudly. He unloads into her mouth, filling it with his sperm. He then pulls out and says, "Swallow it!" Anya makes a swallowing motion then opens her mouth, sticking out her clean tongue. Roma collapses on the bed just out of your view, with only your sister and her cum splattered tits visible.'
+							'He suddenly pulls out of her and grabs her by the hair, pulling her head around towards his dick as the first spurt of cum lands on her chest. He then quickly shoves his dick in her mouth and groans loudly as he unloads in her mouth. He then pulls out and Anya makes a swallowing motion before sticking her tongue out. Roma collapses on the bed just out of your view, with only your sister and her cum splattered breasts visible.'
 							*nl
-							'After a few moments, your sister finally speaks. "I told you to stop doing that. It''s fucking gross."'
-							'You hear Roma chuckle. "You said you love the taste of my cum babe."'
-							'She sighs. "I mean pulling out of my ass and sticking it straight into my mouth. Stop doing it, it''s gross." Roma mutters something that you can''t quite make out. You have been watching them for a long time. You need to leave before someone finds you spying or before Roma gets dressed and leaves.'
+							'After a few seconds, your sister finally speaks. "I told you to stop doing that. It''s fucking gross."'
+							'You hear Roma chuckle. "You said you love the taste of my cum, babe."'
+							'She sighs. "I meant pulling out of my ass and putting it in my mouth! Stop doing it, it''s gross." Roma mutters something that you can''t quite make out. You decide to leave before someone finds you spying or Roma gets dressed and leaves.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -290,10 +291,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caress':
 	if pcs_inhib < 40:inhib += rand(1,3)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/spymas<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You can''t help yourself. You turn and press your back against the wall.'
-	'You pull your panties down and rub your glistening, wet pussy with your finger as you listen to the moans and groans coming from your room.'
-	'You lick your finger before rhythmically caressing your swollen clit and caressing your breasts with your other hand. You are lost in the moment, oblivious to everything around you.'
-	'Your muscles contract, your breath shortens. Realizing you have hit your peak, you bite your lip to stifle your moans.'
+	'You can''t help yourself. You turn and press your back against the wall before pulling your panties down and rubbing your glistening wet pussy as you listen to the moans and groans coming from your room.'
+	'You lick your finger before rhythmically caressing your swollen clit and caressing your breasts with your other hand. You''re lost in the moment, oblivious to everything around you.'
+	'Your muscles contract, your breath shortens. Realizing you''ve hit your peak, you bite your lip to stifle your moans.'
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', 3, 'masturbate', 'exhibitionism'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -303,7 +303,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboytrioQW_bedroom':
 	menu_off = 1
-!!I don''t understand how the two options are decided so I am just leaving the code as is, I know it has to do with if you are to late to join, but not sure how it works I will just rewriting and expanding the sex part, while leaving you to figure out the code 
+!!I don''t understand how the two options are decided, so I''m just leaving the code as is. I know it has to do with if you''re to late to join, but not sure how it works, so I''ll just rewrite and expand the sex part while leaving the code to someone else.
 	CLOSE ALL
 	blockBedrPar = 1
 	locat['Anya'] = 15
@@ -319,20 +319,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboytrioQW_bedroom':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_07.jpg"></center>'
 		'Anya opens the door, looking sad.'
-		'"You promised to come! What happened? Well maybe next time..."'
+		'"You promised to come! What happened?"'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'korrPar'
 		exit
 	end
-!!I am leaving the sisboytrio counter, for now there will just be one much better version but later I will expand it so there is a couple of different ones.
+!!I''m leaving the sisboytrio counter for now. There will be a much better version later.
 	sisboytrio += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_41.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you enter the room, you see Anya and Roma tumbling in the bed.'
-	'Anya notices you. Roma frees her from his embrace, and she walks slowly to you, gives you an intimate hug and pulls you towards the bed.'
+	'Anya notices you and Roma frees her from his embrace. She walks slowly towards you while giving you an intimate hug and pulling you towards the bed.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 	gs 'stat'
+	
 	act 'This is wrong':
-	!!can we have this block all future invites for a 3some
 		*clr & cla
 		sisboytrioQW = -1
 		sisboytrioDayOtkaz = daystart + 3
@@ -343,8 +343,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboytrioQW_bedroom':
 		sisThank = 0
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/spy/peep4.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Screw this! Someone in this family should have a shred of dignity!"'
-		'It feels so wrong, you think you might throw up. You turn and flee from these perverts. Once outside the door, you turn and close it. You hold the door closed a moment with a look of shock on your face as you realize what almost happened. You then let go of the door and walk away.'
+		'Suddenly having last second thoughts, you turn and flee. Once outside, you turn and close the door. You hold it tightly as you realize what almost happened before you let go and walk away.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Flee': gt 'korrPar'
@@ -352,17 +351,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboytrioQW_bedroom':
 	act 'Join her on the bed':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You crawl on her bed with her, and the two of you hug and lightly fondle each other as Roma just watches the for the moment. Roma licks his lips as he watches, obviously already aroused at the thought of what is to come. "Come on girls, show me your tits."'
+		'You crawl onto her bed with her and the two of you hug and lightly fondle each other as Roma just watches while licking his lips. "Come on girls, show me your tits!"'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Flash':
 			*clr & cla
 			if $braworntype ! 'none':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You and Anya both expose your bras to him. His eyes are drawn to your chest, then Anya''s before going back and forth as if he can''t decide who to look at. "Nice bras, but I said tits. Don''t be shy girls." With his encouragement, you pull up your bra.'
+				'You and Anya both expose your bras to him and his eyes are drawn to your chest, then Anya''s before going back and forth as if he can''t decide who to look at. "Nice bras, but I said tits. Don''t be shy now!"' 
+				'With his encouragement, you pull up your bra.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 1, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Boobs': gt 'sisterQW', 'flash_boobs'
+				act 'Flash your breasts': gt 'sisterQW', 'flash_boobs'
 			else
 				gt 'sisterQW', 'flash_boobs'
 			end
@@ -374,32 +374,34 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'flash_boobs':
 	menu_off = 1
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some3.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you expose your tits, Anya moves around behind you and cups them in her hands while Roma walks closer and places his hands on your hips as he stares at them. He starts pulling off your top as he says, "Take off Anya''s top." You and Anya are soon topless. "Now kiss for me girls."'
+	'As you expose your breasts, Anya moves around behind you and cups them in her hands while Roma moves closer and places his hands on your hips as he stares at them before he starts pulling off your top. "Take off Anya''s top."'
+	'You and Anya are soon topless. "Now kiss."'
 	gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Kiss':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some4.jpg"></center>'
-		'You and Anya kiss as Roma takes turns fondling both of you. "Damn this is so fucking hot," Roma says as he starts tugging at the rest of your clothes as well as Anya''s, obviously wanting to get you both naked as quickly as he can.'
+		'You and Anya kiss as Roma takes turns fondling both of you. "Damn, this is so fucking hot!" he says as he starts tugging at the rest of your clothes as well as Anya''s.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 3, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Fondle':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some5.jpg"></center>'
-			'Once you are both naked, Roma removes his clothes as well. All of you now naked, Roma starts to rub your pussy while he suckles at one of your nipples. Anya plays with your other tit with one hand while the other smacks and squeezes your ass. Not wanting Anya to feel left out, you start rubbing her clit with one of your hands. Roma then stops playing with you and says, "Damn, one of you needs to start sucking my dick."'
+			'Once you''re both naked, Roma removes his clothes as well. All of you now naked, Roma starts to rub your pussy while he suckles at one of your nipples and Anya plays with your other breast with one hand while the other smacks and squeezes your ass. Not wanting Anya to feel left out, you start rubbing her clit with one of your hands.' 
+			'Roma then stops playing with you. "One of you needs to start sucking my dick!"'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 			gs 'stat'
-			act 'Watch Anya suck':
+			act 'Watch Anya suck his dick':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some6.jpg"></center>'
-				'Anya gets down on all fours and starts sucking Roma''s dick like a pro. You get down as well and have a close view of her work. Roma places a hand on top of your head and on the back of Anya''s. He makes her deepthroat him as you watch. After a couple of minutes, Anya pops his dick out of her mouth and offers it to you.'
+				'Anya gets down on all fours and starts sucking Roma''s dick. You get down as well as Roma makes her deepthroat him as you watch. After a few minutes, Anya pops his dick out of her mouth and offers it to you.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Suck Roma':
+				act 'Suck Roma''s dick':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some7.jpg"></center>'
-					'You open your mouth as he slides his wet dick into it. Closing your lips around his shaft, you start sucking his dick. You feel his hand slide to the back of your head to force you to go deep on his dick, while Anya starts playing with your tits. Several minutes go by of you sucking Roma before he states, "I want to fuck you <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+					'You open your mouth as he slides his wet dick into it. Closing your lips around his shaft, you start sucking his dick. You feel his hand slide to the back of your head to force you to go deep while Anya starts playing with your breasts. Several minutes go by before Roma speaks up. "I want to fuck you now, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 					gs 'stat'
 					gs 'willpower', 'action', 'resist', 'medium'
@@ -411,24 +413,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'flash_boobs':
 
 					!!pc is virgin:
 					if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-						act 'You are virgin, offer butt':
+						act 'Offer your ass':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs 'boyStat', 'A56'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some12.jpg"></center>'
-							'You shake your head. "Sorry Roma, I am saving myself... but you can take me from behind if you want"'
-							'Roma smiles and you can feel the head of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick pressing against your asshole.'
-							'He pushes his dick forward until the head of it painfully pops into your ass, pauses for a moment to let you get used to it. He then slowly starts sliding his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your ass. It is already wet from you and Anya''s saliva, so it slides into you fairly easily. He is fairly gentle, not going too fast or too deep, giving you time to adjust and stretch out. As he does, you start fingering Anya with two fingers as you lick her clit.'
+							'You shake your head. "Sorry Roma, but I''m saving myself. You can take me from behind if you want?"'
+							'Roma smiles and you soon feel the head of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick pressing against your asshole.'
+							'He pushes his dick forward until the head of it painfully pops into your ass and he slowly starts sliding his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock inside you. It''s already wet from you and Anya''s saliva, so it slides in fairly easily.' 
+							'He''s fairly gentle, not going too fast or too deep and giving you time to adjust and stretch out. As he does, you start fingering Anya as you lick her clit.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', -5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Deep pounding':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some10.jpg"></center>'
-								'Once his dick starts more easily sliding back and forth in your ass, he gets up on his feet and grips your hips. He pushes his cock balls deep into your asshole and starts fucking it a little harder, slowly picking up speed and only backing off when you visibly tense up. You keep licking Anya''s clit and fingering her pussy as Roma fucks your ass. He does a pretty good job of pounding you without being too rough, but eventually he starts getting rougher and you can hear him straining. You can tell he is getting ready to cum, and at that moment, Anya has an orgasm rock through her body. Roma then pulls his dick out of your ass.'
+								'Roma gets up on his feet and grips your hips as he pushes his cock balls deep into your asshole and starts fucking you a little harder, slowly picking up speed and only backing off when you visibly tense up.'
+								'He does a pretty good job of pounding you without being too rough, but eventually he starts getting rougher and you can hear him straining. He pulls his dick out of your ass as Anya suddenly has an orgasm that rocks her body.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', -5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 								gs 'stat'
-								act 'Cum prize': gt 'sisterQW', 'first_cum_shot'
+								act 'Continue': gt 'sisterQW', 'first_cum_shot'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -439,27 +443,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'flash_boobs':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some8.jpg"></center>'
 						if pcs_vag = 0:
 							roma_cherry = 1
-							'When you nod your head in agreement, Roma pulls his dick out of your mouth and lies down on his back. Anya encourages you to straddle him, and she takes hold of his dick and guides it as you lower yourself down. You feel the head of his dick, already slick with drool, press up against your lips and then force them apart, sliding into you. You feel your hymen tearing as his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick fills you. As you ride his cock, Anya licks and sucks at your clit, reducing the pain and causing the pleasure to be almost overwhelming.'
+							'When you nod your head in agreement, Roma pulls his dick out of your mouth and lies down on his back. Anya encourages you to straddle him and takes hold of his dick to guide it as you lower yourself down. You feel the head of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick, already slick with drool, press up against your lips before you feel your hymen tearing as it slides into you. As you ride his cock, Anya licks and sucks at your clit, reducing the pain and causing the pleasure to be almost overwhelming.'
 							gs 'pain', 3, 'vaginal', 'tear'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 							gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -10, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 							gs 'stat'
-							act 'Red surprise': gt 'sisterQW', 'first_cum_shot'
+							act 'Continue': gt 'sisterQW', 'first_cum_shot'
 						else
-							'When you nod your head in agreement, Roma pulls his dick out of your mouth and lies down on his back. Anya encourages you to straddle him and she takes hold of his dick and guides it as you lower yourself down. You feel the head of his dick, already slick with drool, press up against your lips and then force them apart, sliding into you with his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick. As you ride his cock, Anya licks and sucks at your clit, causing the pleasure to be almost overwhelming.'
+							'When you nod your head in agreement, Roma pulls his dick out of your mouth and lies down on his back. Anya encourages you to straddle him and takes hold of his dick to guide it as you lower yourself down. You feel the head of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick, already slick with drool, press up against your lips and force them apart as it slides into you. As you ride his cock, Anya licks and sucks at your clit, causing the pleasure to be almost overwhelming.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 							gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Anya''s turn':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some9.jpg"></center>'
-								'After what seems like a long time and no time at all, he lifts you off of him and places you aside. He drags Anya over and rolls her onto her side. He slides his dick effortlessly into her, and she moans loudly as he starts fucking her. "Straddle her face <<$pcs_nickname>>." Doing as Roma says, you straddle Anya''s face, and she starts licking your pussy as Roma fucks her.'
+								'After what seems like a long time and no time at all, he lifts you off of him and places you aside. He then drags Anya over and rolls her onto her side before effortlessly sliding his dick into her. She moans loudly as he starts fucking her. "Straddle her face, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+								'Doing as Roma says, you straddle Anya''s face and she starts licking your pussy as Roma fucks her.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 								gs 'stat'
 								act 'Your turn again':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some11.jpg"></center>'
-									'You then feel a sudden smack on your ass. "OK, come over here and get on all fours. I want to fuck you again," Roma demands. You are sure he is the one that smacked you. You climb off Anya and get on all fours as Roma scoots up behind you and easily slides his dick back in your pussy, while Anya lies down in front of your face and spreads her legs. Roma reaches forward and forces your face into her crotch, and you start licking her pussy as Roma starts fucking you again. Several minutes pass before Roma pulls his dick out of your pussy and you feel the head of it pressing against your asshole.'
+									'You then feel a sudden smack on your ass. "Come over here and get on all fours. I want to fuck you again," Roma demands.'
+									'You climb off Anya and get on all fours as Roma scoots up behind you and easily slides his dick back into your pussy while Anya lies down in front of you and spreads her legs. Roma reaches forward and forces your face into her crotch, so you start licking her pussy as Roma starts fucking you again.' 
+									'Several minutes pass before Roma pulls his dick out of your pussy and you feel the head of it pressing against your asshole.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 									gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 									gs 'stat'
@@ -470,31 +477,34 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'flash_boobs':
 											gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 											gs 'stat'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some9.jpg"></center>'
-											'You pull away and turn your head back to him. "No anal!" He sighs, obviously having looked forward to fucking your ass.'
-											'"OK, no anal." He grabs Anya and drags her back over to him while she is still on her back. You watch as he slides his dick into her ass, then he glances up at you. "Well, get back on her face." You straddle her face as he fucks her, and she licks your pussy. You glance back occasionally and see how he switches which of her holes he is fucking, going from ass to pussy and then back to ass again.'
+											'You pull away. "No anal!"'
+											'He sighs. "Okay..." He then grabs Anya and drags her back over to him while she''s still on her back. You watch as he slides his dick into her ass, then glances up at you. "Well? Get back on her face!"' 
+											'You straddle her face and she starts licking your pussy. You glance back occasionally and see how he switches which of her holes he''s fucking, going from ass to pussy and then back to ass again.'
 											gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 											gs 'stat'
-											act 'Cum prize': gt 'sisterQW', 'first_cum_shot'
+											act 'Continue': gt 'sisterQW', 'first_cum_shot'
 										end
 									else
 										act 'Refuse to fuck Roma (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 									end	
-									act 'In the butt':
+									act 'Anal':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs 'boyStat', 'A56'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some12.jpg"></center>'
-										'When you don''t say anything, he pushes his dick forward until the head of it painfully pops into your ass, pausing for a moment to let you get used to it. He then slowly starts sliding his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your ass. It is already wet from you and Anya''s pussy juices, so it slides into you fairly easily. He is fairly gentle, not going too fast or too deep, giving you time to adjust and stretch out. As he does, you start fingering Anya with two fingers as you lick her clit.'
+										'When you don''t say anything, he pushes his dick forward until the head of it painfully pops into your ass and he slowly starts sliding his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock inside you. It''s already wet from you and Anya''s saliva, so it slides in fairly easily.' 
+										'He''s fairly gentle, not going too fast or too deep and giving you time to adjust and stretch out. As he does, you start fingering Anya as you lick her clit.'
 										gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 										gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', -5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 										gs 'stat'
 										act 'Deep pounding':
 											*clr & cla
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some10.jpg"></center>'
-											'Once his dick starts more easily sliding back and forth in your ass, he gets up on his feet and grips your hips. He pushes his cock balls deep into your asshole and starts fucking it a little harder, slowly picking up speed and only backing off when you visibly tense up. You keep licking Anya''s clit and fingering her pussy as Roma fucks your ass. He does a pretty good job of pounding you without being too rough, but eventually he starts getting rougher and you can hear him straining. You can tell he is getting ready to cum, and at that moment, Anya has an orgasm rock through her body. Roma then pulls his dick out of your ass.'
+											'Roma gets up on his feet and grips your hips as he pushes his cock balls deep into your asshole and starts fucking you a little harder, slowly picking up speed and only backing off when you visibly tense up.'
+											'He does a pretty good job of pounding you without being too rough, but eventually he starts getting rougher and you can hear him straining. He pulls his dick out of your ass as Anya suddenly has an orgasm that rocks her body.'
 											gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 											gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', -5, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 											gs 'stat'
-											act 'Cum prize': gt 'sisterQW', 'first_cum_shot'
+											act 'Continue': gt 'sisterQW', 'first_cum_shot'
 										end
 									end
 								end
@@ -511,10 +521,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'refuse_to_fuck_roma':
 	menu_off = 1
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some9.jpg"></center>'
-	'You shake your head. "I just want to do oral. Maybe next time." He frowns, obviously a little disappointed, but nods. He drags Anya over and rolls her onto her side. He slides his dick effortlessly into her, and she moans loudly as he starts fucking her. "Straddle her face <<$pcs_nickname>>." Doing as Roma says, you straddle Anya''s face, and she starts licking your pussy as Roma fucks her. He fucks her for some time, and you occasionally glance back at what they are doing, seeing him sometimes switch holes. A few moments later, a massive orgasm rocks her body, which causes Roma to start grunting, obviously on the verge of an orgasm himself.'
+	'You shake your head. "I just want to do oral. Maybe next time?" He frowns, obviously a little disappointed, but nods before he drags Anya over and rolls her onto her side. He effortlessly slides his dick into her and she moans loudly as he starts fucking her. "Straddle her face, <<$pcs_nickname>>."' 
+	'Doing as Roma says, you straddle Anya''s face and she starts licking your pussy as Roma fucks her. He fucks her for some time, and you occasionally glance back at what they are doing, seeing him sometimes switch holes. A few minutes later, a massive orgasm rocks her body, which causes Roma to start grunting, clearly on the verge of an orgasm himself.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 15, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 	gs 'stat'
-	act 'Cum prize': gt 'sisterQW', 'first_cum_shot'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'sisterQW', 'first_cum_shot'
 end
 	
 if $ARGS[0] = 'first_cum_shot':
@@ -526,22 +537,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_cum_shot':
 		npc_rel['A33'] += 10
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_03.jpg"></center>'
 		'Despite the pain from having your cherry popped, you still enjoyed it. Roma changes positions, and as he does, he looks down at his dick and notices the blood. "Anya, you didn''t tell me that <<$pcs_nickname>> was a virgin!"'
-		'Anya frantically sits up. "What!!??" She looks at Roma, then to the blood on his dick and then to you. As she looks at you, her eyes grow wide at the realization that her boyfriend just took her little sister''s virginity.'
+		'Anya frantically sits up. "What!!??" She looks at Roma, then at the blood on his dick and then at you. As she looks at you, her eyes grow wide at the realization.'
 		*nl
-		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, what the hell were you thinking?" she asks you angrily.'
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, what the hell were you thinking?!" she asks you angrily.'
 		'Seeing their reaction, you start to tear up. "I was thinking I loved you! I was tired of being a virgin and couldn''t think of a better way to lose my virginity!"'
-		'Anya, seeing your tears, gives you a hug. "I''m sorry I yelled at you <<$pcs_nickname>>. It was just a shock. Let''s get you cleaned up and we can talk about it." She gives Roma a glare, and he leaves.'
+		'Anya, seeing your tears, gives you a hug. "I''m sorry I yelled at you, <<$pcs_nickname>>. It was just a shock. Let''s get you cleaned up and we can talk about it."'
+		'She gives Roma a glare and he gets up to take a shower and finish himself off in there.'
 		*nl
-		'Roma gets up to take a shower and finish himself off in there.'
 		'You and Anya end up having a long talk about what just happened and what it means going forward. Your bond, if anything, is now stronger.'
-		'"Shit, what are you going to tell mother?" she asks aloud.'
+		'"Shit, what are you going to tell mom?" she asks aloud.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		roma_cherry = 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Get up': gt 'bedrPar'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some13.jpg"></center>'
-		'Roma pulls you over and onto your back so your head is just under his dick. Anya climbs on the top of you so she is is just above you, with his dick between you. He starts jerking off, and mere moments later, cum starts spurting out of his cock. Anya opens her mouth, and you follow suit. Most of his cum ends up on her face or yours, but some of it ends up in both of your mouths. More drops drip from Anya''s face onto your face or into your mouth.'
+		'Roma pulls you over onto your back so your head is just under his dick. Anya climbs on the top of you, his dick between you as he starts jerking off. Anya opens her mouth and you follow suit as cum starts spurting out of his cock. Most of it ends up on her face or yours, but some of it ends up in both your mouths. More drops drip from Anya''s face onto you or into your mouth.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 		gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A56', 1
 		gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', 'A56', 1
@@ -549,9 +560,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_cum_shot':
 		act 'Aftermath':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/anya3some14.jpg"></center>'
-			'Once the last drop of cum is spent, Roma collapses back on the bed. Anya starts licking the cum off your face and kissing you, the two of you sharing his cum as you kiss. A few moments later, she climbs off you, some of his cum still on your face. She grabs a tissue and starts cleaning her face before offering you one. You follow suit and start cleaning your face and then get dressed. Just as you finish dressing, Roma says, "That was a blast girls! We have to do that again." He gives Anya a pleading look as he says it.'
+			'Once the last drop of cum is spent, Roma collapses back on the bed. Anya starts licking the cum off your face and kissing you, the two of you sharing his cum as you kiss. A few seconds later, she climbs off you and grabs a tissue to clean her face before offering you one. You start cleaning your face and get dressed as Roma smiles. "That was a blast! We have to do it again sometime." He gives Anya a pleading look.'
 			'Anya laughs and shakes her head. "Maybe. It depends on how good you are."'
-			'He laughs and grabs her, pulling her up into a huge bear hug. "I am always good, that''s why you love me." Before she can respond, he kisses her deeply and passionately. Feeling like they are getting all romantic, you decide to leave.'
+			'He laughs and grabs her, pulling her up into a huge bear hug. "I''m always good, that''s why you love me!"'
+			'Before she can respond, he kisses her deeply and passionately. Feeling like they''re getting all romantic, you decide to leave.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'lesbian', 'incest', 'group'
 			cumspclnt = 12
 			gs 'cum_cleanup'

파일 크기가 너무 크기때문에 변경 상태를 표시하지 않습니다.
+ 187 - 226
locations/sister_chat.qsrc


+ 132 - 146
locations/sister_sex_talk.qsrc

@@ -8,66 +8,57 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_talk1':
 	temp = rand(1,13)
 	if temp = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/sister1.jpg"></center>'
-		!!'Your sister boasts to you about how good her boyfriend is in bed. She goes into a surprising amount of detail.'
-		*nl
-		'"Roma is <i>so</i> good in bed," Anya says proudly. "He can do this thing with his hips to rub his dick against my g-spot and it makes me come every time. He can do it in any position too!"'
+		'"Roma is <i>so</i> good in bed!" she says proudly. "He can do this thing with his hips to rub his dick against my g-spot and it makes me cum every time. He can do it in any position too!"'
 		gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 	elseif temp = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/sister2.jpg"></center>'
-		'"One time, for my friend''s birthday, I was kind of tight on money so decided to give him a blowjob. Only, it turns out, another girl had the same idea. So we <i>both</i> sucked him off. I bet that''s the best birthday present he''ll ever get."'
-		!!'Your sister tells you a story about her and her friend sucking off her other friend on his birthday. Afterwards, he came on both their faces, and they licked his cum off of each other.'
+		'"One time, for my friend''s birthday, I was kind of tight on money so decided to give him a blowjob. Only, it turns out, another girl had the same idea. So we <i>both</i> sucked him off. At the same time. I bet that''s the best birthday present he''ll ever get!"'
 		gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 	elseif temp = 3:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/sister3.jpg"></center>'
-		!! 'Your sister reveals to you that she just loves it in the ass. With mother having her innocence checked all the time, she wanted to have sex and so decided to try anal. It hurt the first couple of times, but after that she loved it. Once she lost her virginity, she found she liked vaginal sex more, but still does anal. She suggests that you try it or just stick to blowjobs to keep mom from finding out you''re sexually active.'
 		if sisterknowslut > 0:
-			'"I love taking it up the ass," Anya confesses to you. "I really wanted to fuck someone but with those monthly gyno checks, I knew I was gonna get the belt if I came home with a broken hymen. So I went with the only option I had: anal! It hurt the first couple times, but once my ass got used to it, I started to love it. Even now, I still love it! You should try it too if you don''t want to get in trouble. Or stick to blowjobs."'
+			'"I love taking it up the ass," Anya confesses to you. "I really wanted to fuck someone but with those monthly gyno checks, I knew I was gonna get the belt if I came home with a broken hymen. So I went with the only option I had: anal! It hurt the first few times, but once my ass got used to it, I started to love it. Even now, I still love it! You should try it too if you don''t want to get in trouble. Or stick to blowjobs."'
 		else
-			'"I love taking it up the ass," Anya confesses to you. "I really wanted to fuck someone but with those monthly gyno checks, I knew I was gonna get the belt if I came home with a broken hymen. So I went with the only option I had: anal! It hurt the first couple times, but once my ass got used to it, I started to love it. Even now, I still love it! It''s not as good as vaginal sex but the occasional assfuck keeps things spicy."'
+			'"I love taking it up the ass," Anya confesses to you. "I really wanted to fuck someone but with those monthly gyno checks, I knew I was gonna get the belt if I came home with a broken hymen. So I went with the only option I had: anal! It hurt the first few times, but once my ass got used to it, I started to love it. Even now, I still love it! It''s not as good as vaginal sex, but the occasional assfuck keeps things spicy."'
 		end
 		gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 	elseif temp = 4:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/sister4.jpg"></center>'
-		!!'Your sister tells you about how she gave her boyfriend a blowjob and swallowed his load without slowing down. "Oh, you should have seen his face!"'
-		'"One time I was blowing Roma and he came without warning me," your sister says. "I don''t know what happened, but I swallowed on instinct and then I decided to keep on sucking. Every load that came out, I kept swallowing until I had sucked him completely dry. You should have seen his face! I think I blew his mind with that!"'
+		'"One time I was blowing Roma and he came without warning me," your sister says. "I don''t know what happened, but I swallowed on instinct and decided to keep on sucking. Every load that came out, I kept swallowing until I had sucked him completely dry. You should have seen his face! I think I blew his mind with that!"'
 		gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 	elseif temp = 5:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/sister5.jpg"></center>'
 		'"When I was still in school, I had this friend I would sometimes study with after class. He''d always help me with my homework and in return, I''d let him fuck my ass. Win win!" she grins at you.'
-		!!'Your sister tells you about how, when she was in school, she would go to a classmate''s apartment to study and afterwards he would fuck her ass.'
 		gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 	elseif temp = 6:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/sister6.jpg"></center>'
-		!!'Your sister reveals to you that she just loves it when a guy takes over, grabs her by the head and just fucks her mouth hard.'
 		'"One of the things I love the most is when I''m giving a guy a blowjob and he suddenly takes over. When he grabs me by the hair and shoves his cock down my throat and face fucks me—"'
-		'Your sister stops, shivering.'
-		'"I''m getting wet just thinking about it."'
+		'She starts shivering. "I''m getting wet just thinking about it..."'
 		gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 	elseif temp = 7:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/sister7.jpg"></center>'
-		!!'Your sister reveals to you that, at a party, she let two guys fuck her at the same time. Sucking one and getting fucked by the other was fun, but having one fuck her pussy while his friend fucked her ass was amazing.'
-		'"There was this one time I was at a party and things started getting really wild. I was fucking this guy, but another one also wanted to fuck me so I started to blow him. It''s actually pretty fun to suck on a cock while you''re being fucked, but I guess he got impatient or something cause he got behind me and mounted my ass. <i>Ho-ly shit.</i> I almost came right then. Double penetration became my new fetish that night. If you ever can get two guys to fuck you at the same time, you <i>have</i> to try it!"'
+		'"There was this one time I was at a party and things started getting really wild. I was fucking this guy, but another one also wanted to fuck me so I started to blow him. It''s actually pretty fun to suck on a cock while you''re being fucked, but I guess he got impatient or something cause he got behind me and mounted my ass. <i>Ho-ly shit.</i> I almost came right then. Double penetration became my new fetish that night. If you can ever get two guys to fuck you at the same time, you <i>have</i> to try it!"'
 		gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 	elseif temp = 8:
-		gt'sister_sex_talk','black_sex'
+		gt 'sister_sex_talk','black_sex'
 	elseif temp = 9:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_05.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Roma likes to fuck me doggy style but it''s not my favorite," Anya confesses. "It''s not like I hate it, but I prefer being on top."'
+		'"Roma likes to fuck me doggy style, but it''s not my favorite," Anya confesses. "It''s not like I hate it, but I prefer being on top."'
 		if sisterknowslut > 0:
-			act'I like missionary':
+			act 'I like missionary':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/vag/miss/1.jpg"></center>'
 				'"I like missionary," you tell her.'
-				'"Sometimes it''s nice to be able to just lay back and get plowed, isn''t it?" Anya says, nodding along.'
+				'"Sometimes it''s nice to be able to just lay back and get plowed, isn''t it?" she says, nodding along.'
 				gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 			end
 			
-			act'I like doggy':
+			act 'I like doggy':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/vag/doggy/dog1.jpg"></center>'
-				'"I like doggy," you say.'
-				'"You''re just like Roma," Anya says, rolling her eyes but also smiling. "What <i>is</i> it about that you like so much?"'
-				act'Angle is better':
+				'"I actually like doggy," you say.'
+				'"You''re just like Roma," she says, rolling her eyes but also smiling. "What <i>is</i> it about that you like so much?"'
+				act 'Angle is better':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"The angle is so much better from behind," you grin. "It goes in deep and rubs right against my G-spot."'
 					'"Grinding on top is way better for that," your sister contends.'
@@ -76,7 +67,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_talk1':
 					gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 				end
 				
-				act'I like it rough':
+				act 'I like it rough':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"Doggy is the best position to get pounded," you grin. "I like it when a guy gets a little rough with me and doggy is the roughest."'
 					'"Why don''t you just get rough with him instead?" your sister grins back. "Ride him like a wild stallion?"'
@@ -86,7 +77,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_talk1':
 				end
 			end
 			
-			act'I like cowgirl':
+			act 'I like cowgirl':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"I like being on top too," you say.'
 				'"It must be in our blood," Anya giggles.'
@@ -95,7 +86,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_talk1':
 				gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 			end
 			
-			act'I don''t have a favorite position':
+			act 'I don''t have a favorite position':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Does the position really matter that much to you?" you ask. "It all pretty much feels the same to me, so I just do whatever the guy wants."'
 				'"Seriously?" Anya looks at you with genuine surprise. "You really don''t care?"'
@@ -105,7 +96,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_talk1':
 				'"Doggy?"'
 				'"It''s different, I guess?"'
 				'"Cowgirl?"'
-				'"It''s fun but I get tired after a while."'
+				'"It''s fun, but I get tired after a while."'
 				'"Wow," Anya says, taken aback. "You might be the first person I''ve met who doesn''t have a favorite position."'
 				gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 			end
@@ -114,9 +105,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_talk1':
 		end
 	elseif temp = 10:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/cum/creampie/cumpussy9.jpg"></center>'
-		'"I love riding bareback," Anya says. "But I hate it when guys come inside me. It feels good in the moment, but it''s such a chore to clean out afterwards!"'
+		'"I love riding bareback," Anya says. "But I hate it when guys cum inside me. It feels good in the moment, but it''s such a chore to clean out afterwards!"'
 		if sisterknowslut > 0 and (pcs_cp_safe_known + pcs_cp_notsafe_known + pcs_cp_risky_known) > 0:
-			act'Creampies suck':
+			act 'Creampies suck':
 				cla & *nl
 				if pcs_traits['commando_lvl'] > 1:
 					'"It takes forever!" you moan. "And sometimes it gets so far up in there, it ends up coming out hours later, when you least expect it."'
@@ -127,7 +118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_talk1':
 				gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 			end
 			
-			act'That''s why I use condoms':
+			act 'That''s why I use condoms':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"I just use condoms," you say. "No mess."'
 				'"But then you don''t get that skin on skin contact," Anya replies. "All you feel is rubber."'
@@ -135,31 +126,31 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_talk1':
 				gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 			end
 			
-			act'I don''t mind':
+			act 'I don''t mind':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"I don''t mind," you shrug. "It''s not <i>that</i> messy. Not enough to get annoyed about."'
-				'"Seriously?" Anya asks. "I can''t stand it. I feel so gross later if I find cum stains on my panties."'
+				'"Seriously?" Anya asks. "I can''t stand it! I feel so gross later if I find cum stains on my panties."'
 				gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 			end
 			
-			act'I like creampies':
+			act 'I like creampies':
 				cla & *nl
-				'"I actually love creampies," you say. "They feel so good! It''s my favorite thing when a guy comes inside me."'
+				'"I actually love creampies," you say. "They feel so good! It''s my favorite thing when a guy cums inside me."'
 				'"Agree to disagree," your sister replies, wrinkling her brow in disgust.'
 				gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 			end
 			if birth_control['think_safe'] = 0:
-				act'Fear of pregnancy (dislike)':
+				act 'Fear of pregnancy (dislike)':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"I''m just afraid of getting knocked up," you shiver. "That fear is more of a turn off than any feeling so I always make them pull out."'
-					'"Wait, you''re not on birth control?" your sister gasps. "Go get the pill from Aunt Luda! She won''t tell mom, I promise. But mom will beat your ass with a broom if your belly starts rounding out! You can''t trust guys with that shit. I can''t tell you how many times Roma has come inside me even though he knows I hate it."'
+					'"Wait, you''re not on birth control?!" your sister gasps. "Go get the pill from Aunt Luda! She won''t tell mom, I promise. But mom will beat your ass with a broom if your belly starts rounding out! You can''t trust guys with that shit! I can''t tell you how many times Roma has cum inside me even though he knows I hate it."'
 					gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 				end
 				
-				act'Fear of pregnancy (like)':
+				act 'Fear of pregnancy (like)':
 					cla & *nl
-					'"I actually like the feeling of when a guy comes inside," you say. "But I always make them pull out just because I''m afraid of getting knocked up."'
-					'"Wait, you''re not on birth control?" your sister gasps. "Go get the pill from Aunt Luda! She won''t tell mom, I promise. But mom will beat your ass with a broom if your belly starts rounding out! You can''t trust guys with that shit. I can''t tell you how many times Roma has come inside me even though he knows I hate it."'
+					'"I actually like the feeling when a guy cums inside me," you say. "But I always make them pull out because I''m afraid of getting knocked up."'
+					'"Wait, you''re not on birth control?!" your sister gasps. "Go get the pill from Aunt Luda! She won''t tell mom, I promise. But mom will beat your ass with a broom if your belly starts rounding out! You can''t trust guys with that shit! I can''t tell you how many times Roma has cum inside me even though he knows I hate it."'
 					gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 				end
 			end
@@ -201,37 +192,36 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'virgin_ask':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
 	'"What about you, <<$pcs_nickname>>? Have you popped your cherry yet?"'
 	if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-		act'Saving for marriage':
+		act 'Saving for marriage':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"No," you shake your head. "I''m saving myself for marriage."'
-			'"Aww! That''s so cute <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
+			'"Aww! That''s so cute!"'
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 		end
 		
-		act'Saving for marriage (embarrassed)':
+		act 'Saving for marriage (embarrassed)':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Not yet," you shake your head, blushing hard. "I... I want to save myself for marriage."'
-			'"Aww! That''s so cute <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
+			'"Aww! That''s so cute!"'
 			'Your sister gushes over you, making you blush even harder.'
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 		end
 		
-		act'Waiting for the right guy':
+		act 'Waiting for the right guy':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Not yet," you shake your head. "I really want to, but I don''t want to do it with just anybody. I guess I''m waiting for the right guy."'
-			'Your sister nods.'
-			'"That''s for the best. It''s how it was with me too. But I also let people fuck my ass," she grins.'
+			'Your sister nods. "That''s for the best. It''s how it was with me too. But I also let people fuck my ass," she grins.'
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 		end
 		
-		act'Don''t want to upset <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>':
+		act 'I don''t want to upset <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Not yet," you shake your head. "I don''t want to upset <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, so I''m holding off for a while."'
 			'"That''s probably a good idea," your sister nods. "Mom was <i>pissed</i> when she found out I lost my virginity. But not as pissed as when she went to spank me and saw my asshole..."'
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 		end
 		
-		act'Don''t want to deal with <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>':
+		act 'I don''t want to deal with <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Not yet," you say with a huff. "I want to, but with <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> breathing down my neck, I don''t want to deal with it when she finds out."'
 			'"That''s probably a good idea," your sister nods. "Mom was <i>pissed</i> when she found out I lost my virginity. But not as pissed as when she went to spank me and saw my asshole..."'
@@ -239,24 +229,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'virgin_ask':
 		end
 	else
 		sisterknowslut = 1
-		act'Yes (embarrassed)':
+		act 'Yes (embarrassed)':
 			cla & nl
 			'You hesitate for a moment, but that''s all it takes for your sister to catch on.'
 			'"You have!" Your face flushes with heat as Anya scoots over on the bed, getting close to you. "So? How was it? Your first time?"'
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'first_time'
 		end
 		
-		act'Yes (neutral)':
+		act 'Yes (neutral)':
 			cla & nl
 			'"Mhmm," you nod. "I lost it a little while ago."'
 			'Anya''s eyes brighten and she scoots over on the bed, getting close to you. "So? How was it? Your first time?"'
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'first_time'
 		end
 		
-		act'Yes (excited)':
+		act 'Yes (excited)':
 			cla & nl
 			'"Yes!" you nod vigorously with obvious excitement. "I finally had sex with someone!"'
-			'"That''s great!" Anya says. She scoots over on the bed, getting close to you. "So? How was it? Your first time?"'
+			'"That''s great!" she says as she scoots over on the bed, getting close to you. "So? How was it? Your first time?"'
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'first_time'
 		end
 	end
@@ -264,16 +254,16 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'first_time':
 	if stat['vaginal'] >= 1:
-		act'It really hurt':
+		act 'It really hurt':
 			cla & nl
-			'"It was..." You wince as the memory of your first time comes back to you. "It actually hurt a lot. Seriously, it was so painful, I thought I was going to die!"'
+			'"It was..." You wince as the memory comes back to you. "It actually hurt a lot. Seriously, it was so painful, I thought I was going to die!"'
 			'"I have a few girlfriends who said their first time was like that too," Anya says, nodding sagely. "My first time, there was a little prick of pain, but I only remember feeling good after that."'
-			'"You were lucky then," you say, pouting and Anya laughs.'
+			'"You were lucky then," you say, pouting as Anya laughs.'
 			'"Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>. They all said that it gets a lot better after the first time. You just need a little more pussy practice."'
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 		end
 		
-		act'It was okay':
+		act 'It was okay':
 			cla & nl
 			'"It was... okay?" you say, shrugging. "It didn''t hurt, but it didn''t really feel good either. It was just like having a ''thing'' inside me. I don''t really understand why everybody seems to like this so much."'
 			'"You just need to do it a few more times," Anya says insistently. "Get your pussy used to being fucked and then you''ll enjoy it more. Maybe try it with a different boy? Not all of them are great in bed. You could have just gotten unlucky."'
@@ -290,7 +280,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_time':
 	end
 	
 	if stat['vaginal'] > 1:
-		act'First time was painful, better the second time':
+		act 'First time was painful, better the second time':
 			cla & nl
 			'"My first time <i>sucked</i>," you say, grimacing. "It actually hurt a lot. Seriously, it was so painful, I thought I was going to die! The second time was a lot better, but fuck me! That first time hurt!"'
 			'"I have a few girlfriends who said their first time was like that too," Anya says, nodding sympathetically. "My first time, there was a little prick of pain when he put it in, but I only remember feeling good after that."'
@@ -299,11 +289,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_time':
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 		end
 		
-		act'First time was okay, but got better':
+		act 'First time was okay, but got better':
 			cla & nl
 			'"It was... okay?" you say, shrugging. "It didn''t hurt, but it didn''t really feel good either. It took a few more times before I really started to enjoy it."'
 			'"Really?" Anya asks quizzically. "For my first time there was a little prick of pain at the beginning, but I only remember feeling good after that."'
-			'"I guess my pussy just needed to get used to having a dick inside of it?"'
+			'"I guess my pussy just needed to get used to having a dick inside it?"'
 			*nl
 			'You both look at each other and shrug about the mysteries of human anatomy.'
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
@@ -311,7 +301,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_time':
 	end
 	
 	if $virgin_stats['cock_size'] = 'long' or $virgin_stats['cock_size'] = 'huge' or $virgin_stats['cock_size'] = 'enormous' or $virgin_stats['cock_size'] = 'lengthy' or $virgin_stats['cock_size'] = 'gigantic' or $virgin_stats['cock_size'] = 'monster':
-		act'He was big':
+		act 'He was big':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/vag/miss/blood1.jpg"></center>'
 			if $virgin_stats['cock_size'] = 'long' or $virgin_stats['cock_size'] = 'huge' or $virgin_stats['cock_size'] = 'enormous':
@@ -321,7 +311,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_time':
 			end
 			'Your sister pulls her lips back into a sympathetic grimace.'
 			'"Ooooh. Ouch. I have a friend who lost her virginity to a guy with a big cock. She said it still hurt a week later."'
-			act'It hurt':
+			act 'It hurt':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
 				if virgin_stats['day_lost'] > daystart - 7 and pain['vaginal'] > 0:
@@ -332,7 +322,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_time':
 				gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 			end
 			
-			act'It felt good':
+			act 'It felt good':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Actually... It felt pretty good..." you admit. "It hurt at first, but once I got used to his size it was <i>amazing</i>. It was like my entire body was being filled with his cock."'
@@ -349,10 +339,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_talk':
 	if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 		gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 	else
-		act'Clean shaving is dumb':
+		act 'Clean shaving is dumb':
 			cla
 			if $pube_style['word'] = 'trimmed':
-				act'I just trim':
+				act 'I just trim':
 					cla & *nl
 					if stat['think_virgin'] ! 1:
 						'"I trim anyways," you shrug. "It''s not up to boys whether or not I have hair down there. They want to fuck my pussy? They have to deal with the fur. Otherwise they can just go fuck themselves."'
@@ -366,10 +356,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_talk':
 			end
 			
 			if $pube_style['word'] = 'bush' or $pube_style['word'] = 'untrimmed':
-				act'I go full bush':
+				act 'I go full bush':
 					cla & *nl
 					if stat['think_virgin'] ! 1:
-						'"I don''t care what other people say, I go full bush anyways," you shrug. "It''s my bush, I''ll do what I want. They want to fuck my pussy? They have to deal with the fur. Otherwise they can just go fuck themselves."'
+						'"I don''t care what other people say, I go full bush anyways," you shrug. "It''s my bush, so I''ll do what I want. They want to fuck my pussy? They have to deal with the fur. Otherwise they can just go fuck themselves."'
 						'"I wish I had that kind of confidence," your sister smiles back ruefully. "But Roma likes it this way, so even if it weren''t for other boys, I''d still keep doing it for him."'
 					else
 						'"That sucks," you say. "I hate shaving too so I just let it grow out."'
@@ -380,7 +370,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_talk':
 			end
 			
 			if stat['think_virgin'] ! 1:
-				act'I feel the same way':
+				act 'I feel the same way':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"I know what you mean," you nod sympathetically. "I hate shaving too, but I know how much boys love it so I do it anyways."'
 					if brotherSex >= 7:
@@ -390,7 +380,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_talk':
 					gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 				end
 				
-				act'Boys are dumb':
+				act 'Boys are dumb':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"Boys are dumb like that," you roll your eyes, commiserating with your sister. "We''re expected to put smelly sweaty cocks in our mouths but a little bit of hair down there and suddenly it''s all ''why don''t you shave?''"'
 					'"Exactly!" Anya exclaims. "Although... I have to admit, I kind of like the taste of sweaty cock."'
@@ -400,16 +390,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_talk':
 			end
 		end
 		
-		act'Disagree':
+		act 'Disagree':
 			cla
-			act'I don''t mind':
+			act 'I don''t mind':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"I don''t really mind one way or the other," you shrug. "If boys like it, I''m happy to do it. What''s ten more minutes in the shower?"'
 				'"It''s such a chore!" your sister moans. "My neck hurts by the time I''m done."'
 				gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 			end
 			
-			act'Bush is unfashionable':
+			act 'Bush is unfashionable':
 				cla & *nl
 				if stat['think_virgin'] ! 1:
 					'"But bush is so unfashionable!" you reply. "Don''t you know? Clean shaven is all the rage."'
@@ -421,7 +411,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_talk':
 				gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 			end
 			
-			act'Prefer shaving':
+			act 'Prefer shaving':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Really?" you ask. "I prefer shaving. I hate having itchy scratchy stubbly hair down there."'
 				'"It wouldn''t be scratchy and stubbly if you let it grow out," your sister retorts.'
@@ -435,19 +425,17 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'penetration_cum':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/vag/cowgirl/vagcow2.jpg"></center>'
 	if sisterknowslut = 0:
-		'"I was talking with my girlfriends recently," your sister tells you. "And I found out that most of them can''t orgasm just from getting fucked. That totally blew my mind. I''ve always been able to come from penetration alone. I can''t imagine what it would be like if I couldn''t."'
+		'"I was talking with my girlfriends recently," your sister tells you. "And I found out that most of them can''t orgasm just from getting fucked. That totally blew my mind. I''ve always been able to cum from penetration alone. I can''t imagine what it would be like if I couldn''t."'
 		gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 	else
 		'"I was talking with my girlfriends recently," your sister tells you. "And I found out that most of them can''t orgasm just from getting fucked. Apparently it''s kind of rare? Can you come from penetration only?"'
 		if orgasm = 0:
-			'"Anya..." you say. "I wouldn''t know. I''ve never had an orgasm before."'
-			'Her jaw drops.'
-			'"Are you serious?!"'
+			'"I wouldn''t know," you reply. "I''ve never had an orgasm before..."'
+			'Her jaw drops. "Are you serious?!"'
 			'"Turns out that most guys just aren''t that good at sex," you say wistfully.'
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 		else
-			'You nod.'
-			'"Yeah. I can orgasm only from penetration too."'
+			'You nod. "Yeah. I can orgasm only from penetration too."'
 			'"I can''t imagine what it would be like if I couldn''t. We must have good genes or something," Anya giggles.'
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 		end
@@ -457,19 +445,18 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'anal_virginity':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/anal/anal23.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Two of my best friends both got their cherry popped by a guy we all hang out with. He was about <i>this close</i> to talking me into giving up mine, but I changed my mind at the last second. I would''ve let him, but I was still too scared of mom finding out. So I let him fuck my ass instead!" your sister giggles. "Turns out, that was his first ass fucking too. Made me feel special."'
+	'"Two of my best friends both got their cherry popped by a guy we all hang out with. He was about <i>this close</i> to talking me into giving up mine, but I changed my mind at the last second. I would''ve let him, but I was still too scared of mom finding out, so I let him fuck my ass instead!" your sister giggles. "Turns out, that was his first ass fucking too. Made me feel special."'
 	gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'black_sex':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/sister8.jpg"></center>'
-!!	'Your sister admits to you that she wants to have sex with a black man. To suck his dick, to get fucked by him and finally for him to pound her little ass.'
-	'"Something I''ve always been curious about is what it''s like to fuck a black guy," Anya admits. "I want to know what it''s like to have a big black cock in my mouth, what it feels like inside my pussy, and..." Your sister blushes, even she apparently a little embarrassed about what she wants. "... I want him to pound my ass. Do you ever fantasize about it too?"'
+	'"Something I''ve always been curious about is what it''s like to fuck a black guy," Anya admits. "I want to know what it''s like to have a big black cock in my mouth, what it feels like inside my pussy, and..." Your sister blushes, even she is apparently a little embarrassed about what she wants. "... I want him to pound my ass. Do you ever fantasize about it too?"'
 	act 'Tell her you don''t':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
-		'You shake your head. "Eww! Don''t you have a boyfriend anyway?"'
+		'You shake your head. "Eww! Don''t you have a boyfriend?"'
 		'She sighs. "Yes, but if we ever break up..."'
 		'She then awkwardly drops the topic.'
 		gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
@@ -477,16 +464,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'black_sex':
 	act 'Tell her you want to':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
-		'You grin at that imagery as well. "God yes I would like to as well. There is a boy in my school from America. He is tall, well built and as dark skinned as I have ever seen."'
-		'She laughs. "Well why don''t you hit on him then? I am sure he would be eager to show you what it is like."'
-		'You laugh, and the two of you talk about what it would be like and why it is taboo.'
+		'You grin at that imagery as well. "God yes, I would like to as well! There is a boy in my school from America. He''s tall, well built and as dark skinned as I have ever seen."'
+		'She laughs. "Well why don''t you hit on him then? I''m sure he would be eager to show you what it''s like."'
+		'You laugh, and the two of you talk about what it would be like and why it''s taboo.'
 		gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 	end
 	if OluQW['sex'] = 1 and OluQW['anya_inv'] = 0:
 		act 'Tell her about Olu':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
-			'You tell her you have been having sex with Olu, your aunt''s boyfriend. She is shocked at first until you explain that your aunt knows all about it and even asked for help satisfying him.'
+			'You tell her that you''ve been having sex with Olu, your aunt''s boyfriend. She''s shocked at first until you explain that your aunt knows all about it and even asked for help satisfying him.'
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 			if OluQW['anya_inv'] = 0:
 				act 'Ask if she wants to join':
@@ -494,8 +481,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'black_sex':
 					OluQW['anya_inv'] = 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
 					'"Would you like to come up with me next time I visit him?" you ask.'
-					'She thinks about it for a moment, then grins and nods. "Yes I think I would. You know, just to try it," she says while blushing.'
-					'You promise to text her next time you are going up there and let him know she is willing to help with his needs too. "OK, next time I am going up there I will let you know and tell him."'
+					'She thinks about it for a moment, then grins and nods. "Yes, I think I would. You know, just to try it..." she says while blushing.'
+					'You promise to text her next time you''re going up. "Okay, I''ll let you know and tell him."'
 					gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 				end
 			end
@@ -504,15 +491,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'black_sex':
 		act 'Tell her about Djibril':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
-			'You tell her about meeting Olu''s nephew Djibril and having sex with him. She asks a lot of questions, how did you meet him, was he any good, does Olu know, how big is he. You answer all her questions and more, the two of you talk for some time giggling about the details.'
+			'You tell her about meeting Olu''s nephew Djibril and having sex with him. She asks a lot of questions, which you answer as the two of you talk for some time, giggling about the details.'
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 			act 'Ask if she wants to join you':
 				*clr & cla
 				DjibrilQW['anya_inv'] = 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Would you like to come up with me next time I go?" you ask.'
-				'She thinks about it for a moment, then grins and nods. "Yes I think I would. You know, just to try it," she says while blushing.'
-				'"OK, next time I am going to the city to see them, I will let you know."'
+				'She thinks about it for a moment, then grins and nods. "Yes, I think I would. You know, just to try it..." she says while blushing.'
+				'"Okay, next time I''m going to the city to see him, I''ll let you know."'
 				gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 			end
 		end
@@ -520,52 +507,52 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'black_sex':
 		act 'Tell her about the dorm':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
-			'You tell her about Djibril and his African college friends in the dorm and how you let them all fuck you at the same time. At first she is shocked but as you keep talking, she starts to ask questions and then seems to start getting curious and turned on listening to your story.'
+			'You tell her about Djibril and his African college friends in the dorm and how you let them all fuck you at the same time. She''s shocked at first, but as you keep talking, she starts to ask questions and seems to start getting curious.'
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 			act 'Ask if she wants to join you':
 				*clr & cla
 				DjibrilQW['anya_inv'] = 2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Would you like to come up with me next time I go?" you ask.'
-				'She thinks about it for a moment, then grins and nods. "Yes I think I would. You know, just to try it," she says while blushing.'
-				'"OK, next time I am going to the city to see them, I will let you know."'
-				gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
-			end
-		end
-	elseif npc_sex['A146'] > 0:
-		act 'Tell her about Marcus':
-			*clr & cla
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
-			'You tell her about Marcus from school and how you have been having sex with him. Her eyes grow wide and she starts asking all kinds of questions about how it was. You tell her how big he is and start getting into details about your sex with him.'					
-			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
-			act 'Ask if she wants a turn':
-				*clr & cla
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Maybe I could invite him over one evening, and you can give him a go? Interested?" you ask.'
-				'She thinks about it for a moment, then grins and nods. "Yes I think I would. You know, just to try it," she says while blushing.'
-				'"OK, I will talk to him about it and let you know."'
+				'She thinks about it for a moment, then grins and nods. "Yes, I think I would. You know, just to try it..." she says while blushing.'
+				'"Okay, next time I''m going to the city to see them, I''ll let you know."'
 				gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 			end
 		end
+	!!elseif npc_sex['A146'] > 0:
+		!!act 'Tell her about Marcus':
+			!!*clr & cla
+			!!'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
+			!!'You tell her about Marcus from school and how you''ve been having sex with him. Her eyes grow wide and she starts asking all kinds of questions. You tell her how big he is and start getting into details.'					
+			!!gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
+			!!act 'Ask if she wants a turn':
+				!!*clr & cla
+				!!'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
+				!!'"Maybe I could invite him over one evening and you can give him a go? Interested?" you ask.'
+				!!'She thinks about it for a moment, then grins and nods. "Yes, I think I would. You know, just to try it..." she says while blushing.'
+				!!'"Okay, I''ll talk to him about it and let you know."'
+				!!gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
+			!!end
+		!!end
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'style_preference':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Do you prefer rough sex or gentle sex?" Anya asks.'
-	act'Gentle':
+	act 'Gentle':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"I like it gentle," you tell her. "I don''t like feeling like I''m getting fucked to death. But when it''s slow and gentle, I can feel everything and concentrate on it."'
+		'"I like it gentle," you reply. "I don''t like feeling like I''m getting fucked to death. When it''s slow and gentle, I can feel everything and concentrate on it."'
 		gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 	end
 	
-	act'Rough':
+	act 'Rough':
 		cla & *nl
-		
+		'"I like it rough," you reply while blushing slightly. "If he''s not pounding me, then I just can''t get into it."'
 		gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 	end
 	
-	act'Whatever he wants':
+	act 'Whatever he wants':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"I''m not really fussed either way," you shrug. "I like both, so I''ll let the guy set the pace."'
 		gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
@@ -575,70 +562,70 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'spit_or_swallow':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
 	'"When you blow a guy, do you spit or swallow?" Anya asks.'
-	act'Spit':
+	act 'Spit':
 		cla
-		act'It tastes funny':
+		act 'It tastes funny':
 			cla & *nl
-			'"Spit," you say, wrinkling your nose. "It tastes funny."'
-			'"I didn''t used to like it either," your sister admits. Her cheeks redden slightly as she continues. "Boys in school always asked me to do it but I refused until I met Roma. At first I did it just because I loved him, but after a while I started to like it. Once you get used to it, you start to crave it. Now, I''ll even lick it up off the bed!"'
+			'"Spit," you reply while wrinkling your nose. "It tastes funny."'
+			'"I didn''t used to like it either," your sister admits. Her cheeks redden slightly as she continues. "Boys in school always asked me to do it, but I refused until I met Roma. At first I did it just because I loved him, but after a while I started to like it. Once you get used to it, you start to crave it. Now, I''ll even lick it up off the bed!"'
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 		end
 		
-		act'It tastes gross':
+		act 'It tastes gross':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Spit," you say, looking at your sister in disgust. "It''s so gross! I can''t believe anybody likes swallowing."'
-			'"I didn''t used to like it either," your sister admits. Her cheeks redden slightly as she continues. "Boys in school always asked me to do it but I refused until I met Roma. At first I did it just because I loved him, but after a while I started to like it. Once you get used to it, you start to crave it. Now, I''ll even lick it up off the bed!"'
+			'"I didn''t used to like it either," your sister admits. Her cheeks redden slightly as she continues. "Boys in school always asked me to do it, but I refused until I met Roma. At first I did it just because I loved him, but after a while I started to like it. Once you get used to it, you start to crave it. Now, I''ll even lick it up off the bed!"'
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 		end
 		
-		act'It feels weird':
+		act 'It feels weird':
 			cla & *nl
-			'"Spit," you say a little ambivalently. "I don''t mind the taste all that much but the texture is just too weird. It feels like I''m swallowing snot." You shudder in discomfort.'
-			'"I didn''t used to like it either," your sister admits. Her cheeks redden slightly as she continues. "Boys in school always asked me to do it but I refused until I met Roma. At first I did it just because I loved him, but after a while I started to like it. Once you get used to it, you start to crave it. Now, I''ll even lick it up off the bed!"'
+			'"Spit," you say a little ambivalently. "I don''t mind the taste, but the texture is just too weird. It feels like I''m swallowing snot." You shudder in discomfort.'
+			'"I didn''t used to like it either," your sister admits. Her cheeks redden slightly as she continues. "Boys in school always asked me to do it, but I refused until I met Roma. At first I did it just because I loved him, but after a while I started to like it. Once you get used to it, you start to crave it. Now, I''ll even lick it up off the bed!"'
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 		end
 	end
 	
-	act'Swallow':
+	act 'Swallow':
 		cla
-		act'Spitting is quitting':
+		act 'Spitting is quitting':
 			cla & *nl
-			'"Spitting is quitting," you say with not a little bit of pride.'
+			'"Spitting is quitting," you say with a little bit of pride.'
 			'"A waste of tasty protein too," your sister laughs.'
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 		end
 		
-		act'Boys like it':
+		act 'Boys like it':
 			cla & *nl
 			if pcs_traits['cumeater'] = 1:
-				'"Swallow," you admit. "I''ve gotten used to the taste so I don''t care one way or the other, but boys think it''s hot, so I do it anyways."'
+				'"Swallow," you admit. "I''ve gotten used to the taste, so I don''t care one way or the other, but boys think it''s hot, so I do it anyways."'
 				'"Don''t worry, you''ll like it soon enough," your sister assures you. "And trust me, they can tell if you like it or not. You''ll be so much sexier."'
 			else
-				'"Swallow. I don''t really like it," you admit. "But boys think it''s hot, so I do it anyways."'
+				'"Swallow," you admit. "I don''t really like it, but boys think it''s hot, so I do it anyway."'
 				'"Don''t worry, you''ll like it soon enough," your sister assures you. "And trust me, they can tell if you like it or not. You''ll be so much sexier."'
 			end
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 		end
 		
-		act'Swallow (makes me feel sexy)':
+		act 'Swallow (makes me feel sexy)':
 			cla & *nl
 			if pcs_traits['cumeater'] = 1:
-				'"Swallow," you grin. "The taste is hit or miss depending on the guy but it makes me feel like a goddess. I love seeing the look on his face when I gulp his load."'
+				'"Swallow," you grin. "The taste is hit or miss depending on the guy, but it makes me feel like a goddess. I love seeing the look on his face when I gulp down his load."'
 			else
-				'"Swallow. The taste isn''t that great," you admit. "But it makes me feel like a goddess. I love watching his face when I gulp his load."'
+				'"Swallow," you admit. "The taste isn''t that great, but it makes me feel like a goddess. I love watching his face when I gulp down his load."'
 			end
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 		end
 		
 		if pcs_traits['cumeater'] = 1:
-			act'I love the taste of cum':
+			act 'I love the taste of cum':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Swallow," you grin. "It tastes so good, I can''t resist swallowing every time."'
-				'"Right?" Your sister nods enthusiastically. "I can''t believe some girls don''t like it."'
+				'"Right?!" your sister nods enthusiastically. "I can''t believe some girls don''t like it."'
 				gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 			end
 			
-!!{					act'I got used to the taste':
+!!{					act 'I got used to the taste':
 				cla & *nl
 				
 				gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
@@ -646,19 +633,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spit_or_swallow':
 		end
 	end
 	
-	act'I don''t like blowjobs':
+	act 'I don''t like blowjobs':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"I hate blowjobs," you say, crinkling your nose.'
 		'"Really?" Your sister looks back at you with surprise. "I love giving head! What don''t you like about it?"'
-		act'The taste':
+		act 'The taste':
 			cla & *nl
-			'"The taste is awful," you grimace. "You know guys never clean up down there and just putting my tongue on some unwashed cock makes me want to gag."'
-			'"It is a bit of an acquired taste," Anya admits. "But if you just keep doing it, you''ll get used to it. I actually kind of love the taste of cock now. It''s very manly."'
+			'"The taste is awful!" you grimace. "You know guys never clean up down there and just putting my tongue on some unwashed cock makes me want to gag."'
+			'"It''s a bit of an acquired taste," Anya admits. "But if you just keep doing it, you''ll get used to it. I actually kind of love the taste of cock now. It''s very manly."'
 			'"Ew," you say, giving her a look.'
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 		end
 		
-		act'The smell':
+		act 'The smell':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"It''s the smell I can''t stand," you grimace. "Guys never wash down there and you can just smell <i>everything</i> down there. It''s such a huge turn off."'
 			'"Really? I don''t mind. It kinda turns me on actually."'
@@ -666,19 +653,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spit_or_swallow':
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 		end
 		
-		act'The motion':
+		act 'The motion':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"It hurts," you complain. "Keeping my mouth in that position makes my jaw ache. Even worse if the guy is big. And bobbing my head up and down makes my neck cramp up."'
-			'"Ouch," Anya winces back. "I guess I can''t blame you for that. Never bothered me though. Maybe I just sucked so much cock I built up the muscles!"'
+			'"Ouch," Anya winces back. "I guess I can''t blame you for that. Never bothered me though. Maybe I''ve just sucked so much cock that I built up the muscles!"'
 			'You both laugh at that.'
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 		end
 		
-		act'It''s just gross':
+		act 'It''s just gross':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"It''s just gross," you grimace. "It''s a guy''s dick <b>in my mouth</b>. I can''t stop thinking about it! How can you love it?"'
-			'Anya shrugs.'
-			'"It''s not any different than having his dick in my pussy or up my ass. I guess it just doesn''t bother me the way it bothers you."'
+			'Anya shrugs. "It''s not any different than having his dick in my pussy or up my ass. I guess it just doesn''t bother me the way it bothers you."'
 			gs 'sister_sex_talk', 'sex_talk_continue'
 		end
 	end

+ 100 - 102
locations/sistersleep.qsrc

@@ -1,13 +1,12 @@
 # sistersleep
 
-!!when sveta looks at her sister when her sister is asleep or passed out in her bed. I am redoing this part, this first one happens until sisterLesb = 2 then use sister_sleep1 args instead
+!!When Sveta looks at her sister when she''s asleep or passed out in her bed. The first one happens until sisterLesb = 2, then uses sister_sleep1 args instead.
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep':
 	*clr & cla
-	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Anya</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sleep0<<rand(1,7)>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'Anya is sleeping face down on her bed, with her covers tossed aside, exposing her panty clad ass. You admit she has a really nice ass, but you never see her work out, leaving you wondering how she keeps so fit.'
+	'Anya is sleeping face down on her bed, with her covers tossed aside, exposing her panty clad ass. She has a really nice ass, but you never see her work out, leaving you wondering how she keeps so fit.'
 	if sisterLesb >= 7 or sisterLesb = -1:
-		'You want to touch her again, but you stop yourself from doing it. You agreed to not wake her up like this anymore. You sigh and then move away.'
+		'You want to touch her again, but stop yourself from doing it. You agreed to not wake her up like this any more, so you sigh and move away.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic', -2
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Move away': gt 'bedrPar'
@@ -40,25 +39,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_1':
 	act 'Move away': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'bedrPar'
 	if sisterLesb <= 2:
 		sisterLesb += 1
-		'You dare to touch your sleeping sister''s perfect ass.'
-		'Touching such a soft butt with your hand, you feel a shock run through your body. The feeling is weird, and you can''t seem to place it.'
-		'Her ass feels as good as it looks. You want to touch it more, but when her breathing changes, you panic a bit and pull away.'
+		'You place your hand on Anya''s ass. Touching such a soft butt, you feel a shock run through your body. The feeling is weird, and you can''t seem to place it.'
+		'Her ass feels as good as it looks. You want to touch it more, but when her breathing changes, you panic and pull away.'
 	elseif sisterLesb = 3:
-		'You dare to touch your sleeping sister''s perfect ass.'
-		'Touching such a soft butt with your hand, you feel a shock run through your body. The feeling is weird, and you can''t seem to place it.'
+		'You place your hand on Anya''s ass. Touching such a soft butt, you feel a shock run through your body. The feeling is weird, and you can''t seem to place it.'
 		'Her ass feels as good as it looks.'
 		gs 'willpower', 'foreplay', 'self'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Proceed (<<will_cost>> Willpower)': gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self' & gt 'sistersleep', 'sister_sleep_2'
+			act 'Continue (<<will_cost>> Willpower)': gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self' & gt 'sistersleep', 'sister_sleep_2'
 		else
-			act 'Proceed (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Continue (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
 	else
-		'You can not stop thinking about the feelings you experienced last time you touched your sister''s bare ass.'
+		'You can''t stop thinking about the feelings you experienced last time you touched your sister''s bare ass.'
 		'Convinced that Anya is fast asleep, you once more dare yourself to caress her ass.'
-		'This time, you decide to caress her a little longer, enjoying the moment.'
-		'Anya''s whole body is seriously sexy, and it is filling you with desire.'
-		act 'Proceed': gt 'sistersleep', 'sister_sleep_2'
+		'This time, you decide to caress her a little longer, enjoying the moment. You feel yourself being filled with desire...'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'sistersleep', 'sister_sleep_2'
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -67,11 +63,11 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_2':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/touch2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You continue to explore your sister''s hot body, your frisky fingers accidentally slipping between her legs. Her panties are wet. You gently pull her panties aside, exposing her wet pussy. Sensations of heat and moisture overwhelm you. Her pussy is oozing with desire. She seems to be having a sexual dream, or is it her response to your touch?'
-	'You are caught up in a fantasy. You start to lower your face to her pussy with your tongue out, wanting to taste her, when she suddenly stirs. "Fuck... fuck!" She''s waking up!'
-	'Anya sleepily rolls over, looks up and sees you on her bed as you hastily remove your hand and hide it behind your back.'
-	'"What... what''s going on here? <<$pcs_nickname>>? What are you doing?" she asks as she sleepily sits up.'
-	'You sit in front of your sister on her bed, excited, caught off guard and not knowing what to do.'
+	'You continue to explore your sister''s hot body when your fingers accidentally slip between her legs. Her panties are wet. You gently pull them, exposing her wet pussy. Sensations of heat and moisture overwhelm you. Is she having a sexual dream, or is this her response to your touch?'
+	'You''re caught up in a fantasy and start lowering your face down to her pussy with your tongue out when she suddenly stirs...'
+	'She sleepily rolls over and looks up at you as you hastily remove your hand and hide it behind your back.'
+	'"What... What''s going on? <<$pcs_nickname>>? What are you doing?" she asks as she sleepily sits up.'
+	'You sit in front of your sister on her bed, caught off guard and not knowing what to do.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Act innocent':
@@ -79,13 +75,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_2':
 		minut += 1
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A33', -10
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_20.jpg"></center>'
-		'You decide to do nothing and quietly move away from your sleepy sister. Maybe she will forget it all in the morning...'
-		'As you step away from her bed, she calls to you.'
+		'You decide to do nothing and quietly move away from your sleepy sister. Maybe she''ll forget it all in the morning...'
+		'As you step away from her bed, she calls out to you.'
 		if sisterLesb = 3:
 			sisterLesb = 4
 			'"I don''t want to know what you did to me while I was asleep, but don''t do it again."'
 		else
-			'"I told you last time I don''t want to do stuff with you, so please stop and don''t do it again," she says and rolls over angrily.'
+			'"I told you last time I don''t want to do stuff with you, so stop!" she says and rolls over angrily.'
 		end
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -94,28 +90,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_2':
 	if sisterLesb <= 4:
 		gs 'willpower', 'foreplay', 'self'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Kiss Anya (<<will_cost>> Willpower)': gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self' & gt 'sistersleep', 'sister_sleep_2_kiss'
+			act 'Kiss her (<<will_cost>> Willpower)': gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self' & gt 'sistersleep', 'sister_sleep_2_kiss'
 		else
-			act 'Kiss Anya (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Kiss her (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
 	else
-		act 'Kiss Anya': gt 'sistersleep', 'sister_sleep_2_kiss'
+		act 'Kiss her': gt 'sistersleep', 'sister_sleep_2_kiss'
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_2_kiss':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/touch3.jpg"></center>'
-	'With nothing to lose, you feel yourself fill with courage, and while Anya is still half asleep, you bring your face to hers and sensually kiss her on the lips.'
-	'Anya is too aroused and sleepy to think or resist, her soft body easily giving in to your touches as you bring her pleasure.'
-	'Your fingers again slip under your sister''s panties, but your affection is now bold and confident.'
-	'She starts fully waking and breaks the kiss and looks at you in a confused way. "What are you doing?"'
+	'With nothing to lose, you feel yourself fill with courage. While Anya is still half asleep, you bring your face to hers and sensually kiss her on the lips.'
+	'Anya is too aroused and sleepy to think or resist, her soft body easily giving in to your touches.'
+	'Your fingers slip under her panties, but your affection is now bold and confident.'
+	'She starts fully waking and breaks the kiss before looking at you in confusion. "What are you doing?"'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
-	act 'Finger your sister':
+	act 'Finger her':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les3.jpg"></center>'
-		'You smile at her. "Shh... you looked stressed earlier, and I thought I would help you out," you tell her as you slide your hand down her panties and then slip a finger inside of her soaking wet pussy. She grabs your wrist, obviously intent on stopping you until her breath catches and you can see how turned on she is.'
+		'You smile at her. "Shh... You looked stressed earlier, and I thought I would help you out," you tell her as you slip a finger inside her soaking wet pussy. She grabs your wrist, intent on stopping you until her breath catches and you see how turned on she is.'
 		'She slowly lets go of your wrist and just lies back, spreading her legs and enjoying you fingering her. You pull her panties off and toss them aside before going back to fingering her pussy as she starts to moan in pleasure.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -123,8 +119,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_2_kiss':
 			*clr & cla
 			if sisterLesb < 5: sisterLesb = 5
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les4.jpg"></center>'
-			'You slip another finger in her, now fingering her deeply with two fingers while your thumb rubs her clit. Anya lies all the way back and starts to moan louder, so you lean forward and start kissing and sucking on her nipple as you keep finger banging her soaking wet pussy. Suddenly, her pussy gently convulses, and she orgasms. Anya looks at you with a sleepy but pleased look on her face and smiles.'
-			'"Well, aren''t you just the sweetest little sister? Now go to sleep," she says as she grabs her panties, slides them back on and rolls over, nuzzling into her pillow and falling asleep. You are a little upset not to receive your own release, but you are satisfied for now.'
+			'You slip another finger in her while your thumb rubs her clit. Anya lies back and starts to moan louder, so you lean forward and start kissing and sucking on her nipple as you keep finger banging her soaking wet pussy. Her pussy then gently convulses as she orgasms and she looks at you with a sleepy but pleased look on her face.'
+			'"Well, aren''t you just the sweetest little sister? Now go to sleep," she says as she grabs her panties, slides them back on and rolls over, nuzzling into her pillow and falling asleep. You''re a little upset not to receive your own release, but you''re satisfied for now.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -135,13 +131,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_2_kiss':
 		act 'Tell her you want to have sex':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les1.jpg"></center>'
-			'"I want to make you feel good, I want to make you orgasm," you tell her and then kiss her. She stiffens at the kiss, but then relents and lets you kiss her. She is obviously turned on and trying to fight her desires.'
-			'She breaks the kiss and pulls away from you. "No, it''s wrong, we''re sisters." She only sounds half convinced to you.'
-			act 'Say you''re sorry':
+			'"I want to make you feel good, I want to make you orgasm," you tell her and kiss her. She stiffens at the kiss, but then relents and lets you kiss her.'
+			'She''s clearly trying to fight her desires, and manages to break the kiss and pull away from you. "No, it''s wrong! We''re sisters!" She only sounds half convinced.'
+			act 'Apologize':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_20.jpg"></center>'
-				'You pull away from her. "Sorry, I didn''t think it was a big deal just comforting each other," you say softly.'
-				'She sighs. "It''s fine. Just don''t do it again, OK? It''s wrong and I''m into guys anyways." She rolls over and goes back to sleep.'
+				'You pull away from her. "Sorry, I didn''t think it was a big deal just comforting each other..." you say softly.'
+				'She sighs. "It''s fine. Just don''t do it again, okay? It''s wrong and I''m into guys anyway."'
+				'She rolls over and soon goes back to sleep.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Move away': gt 'bedrPar'
@@ -164,25 +161,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_3':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les2.jpg"></center>'
 	if sisterLesb = 5:
-		'"Why is it wrong? We love each other, and how can making each other feel good be wrong?" you ask her as you pull her panties down. She only half heartedly resists you.'
-		'"You know why! We''re sisters, and even if that wasn''t the case, I like guys," she says, still not really putting up much of a fight.'
-		'You push her legs apart, and you can see her pussy is wet. "If it is so wrong, why are you so wet?"'
-		'"I... I was having a... dream is all," she explains.'
+		'"Why is it wrong? We love each other, so how can making each other feel good be wrong?" you ask her as you pull her panties down. She only half heartedly resists you.'
+		'"You know why! We''re sisters, and even if that wasn''t the case, I like guys!" she says, still not really putting up much of a fight.'
+		'You push her legs apart and you can see her pussy is wet. "If it''s so wrong, then why are you so wet?"'
+		'"I... I was having a dream!" she explains.'
 	else
 		'"Did it feel wrong last time? I think you enjoyed it enough to cum! Tell me you didn''t enjoy it," you say as you pull her panties down. She only half heartedly resists you.'
 		'"It doesn''t matter. You can enjoy things that are wrong, but it doesn''t make them any less wrong!" she says, still not really putting up much of a fight.'
-		'You push her legs apart, and you can see her pussy is wet. "If it is so wrong, why are you so wet?"'
-		'"I... shut up," she says with a blush, knowing why she is wet and knowing you know why as well.'
+		'You push her legs apart and you can see her pussy is wet. "If it''s so wrong, then why are you so wet?"'
+		'"I... Shut up!" she says with a blush.'
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Finger her':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les3.jpg"></center>'
-		'You reach down and slide two fingers into her soaking wet pussy. They easily slide in with how turned on she is. You start rubbing her clit with your other hand. She moans softly, obviously enjoying the sensations.'
-		'She moans out, "We should stop."'
+		'You reach down and slide two fingers into her soaking wet pussy. You start rubbing her clit with your other hand as she moans softly, enjoying the sensation.'
+		'"Mmmm... No! We need to stop!" she moans.'
 		'You keep fingering her and rubbing her clit. "Do you really want me to stop?"'
-		'She moans louder, "Yes... No..."'
+		'She moans louder. "Yes... No..."'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 5, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Go down on her':
@@ -201,18 +198,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_3':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les6.jpg"></center>'
 				if sisterLesb = 5:
-					'You get up and strip down and lie down near her head. She watches you with lust in her eyes, but you can still see a bit of resistance. Not wanting to give her time to recover, you reach over and pull her head between your legs. She resists for a moment and then stops. She starts to lick your pussy in return.'
+					'You get up and strip down before lying down near her head. She watches you with lust in her eyes, but you can still see a bit of resistance. Not wanting to give her time to recover, you reach over and pull her head between your legs. She resists for only a moment before she starts licking your pussy in return.'
 				else
-					'You get up and strip down and lie down near her head. This time, without even needing to prod her, she rolls over and places her face between your legs and starts licking at your pussy and clit.'
+					'You get up and strip down before lying down near her head. Without even needing to prod her, she rolls over, places her face between your legs and starts licking your pussy and clit.'
 				end
-				$orgasm_txt = '"Aaaaaaaaaaaa!!!" You catch a wave of pure bliss as you violently cum.'
+				$orgasm_txt = '"Aaaaaaaaaaaah!!!" You catch a wave of pure bliss as you violently cum.'
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act '69':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les7.jpg"></center>'
-					'Obviously still wanting more, Anya gets up and moves. She climbs on top of you and places her pussy above your face. You start licking her again as she positions her face over your pussy and starts licking it again as well. The two of you lie there lapping at each other''s pussies in complete bliss until Anya''s body starts to convulse and she has an orgasm right on your face. She grinds her pussy against you, riding out her orgasm.'
+					'Still wanting more, Anya gets up and climbs on top of you before placing her pussy above your face. You start licking her again as she positions her face over your pussy and starts licking it again as well. The two of you lap away at each other in complete bliss until Anya''s body starts to convulse and she has an orgasm on your face. She grinds her pussy against you, riding out her orgasm.'
 
 					$orgasm_txt = '"Aaaaaaaaahhh!!!" You catch a wave of pure bliss as you violently cum.'
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
@@ -223,11 +220,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_3':
 					act 'Aftermath':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les8.jpg"></center>'
-						'Once her orgasm has fully passed, she climbs off you, gets up on her knees and blushes deeply. "Look, I had fun, but let''s forget this ever happened OK?"'
+						'Once her orgasm has fully passed, she climbs off you, gets up on her knees and blushes deeply. "Look, I had fun, but let''s forget this ever happened, okay?"'
 						if sisterLesb = 5:
 							sisterLesb = 6
-							'You respond by getting up on your knees and kissing her, and she returns the kiss. Once you finish kissing her, you tell her, "Sure sis, nothing happened," in a slightly teasing tone.'
-							*nl
+							'You respond by getting up on your knees and kissing her. "Sure sis, nothing happened," you reply in a slightly teasing tone when you pull away.'
 							'She shakes her head. "I need to get some sleep. You need to go back to your bed and go to sleep too." She lies back down and rolls over, facing away from you, and tries to go back to sleep.'
 							act 'Move away': gt 'bedrPar'
 						else
@@ -236,30 +232,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_sleep_3':
 								*clr & cla
 								sisterLesb = -1
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sisboyqw_20.jpg"></center>'					
-								'You put your best little sister pout on your face, but thinking she has already made her mind up, you shrug and accept that you won''t be having any more private times with her.'
-								'She rolls over and goes to sleep.'
+								'You put your best little sister pout on, but knowing she''s already made her mind up, you shrug and accept that you won''t be having any more ''fun'' with her as she rolls over and goes to sleep.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
 								act 'Move away': gt 'bedrPar'
 							end
 							!! Flagged for skill check (instead of willpower check, which has been removed)
-							act 'Convince her otherwise':
+							act 'Convince her':
 								*clr & cla
 								sisterLesb = 7
 								gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A33', 'adore'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les8.jpg"></center>'
-								'"Anya, you don''t have to be a lesbian to enjoy a special release that only another woman knows how to give you," you say as you begin lightly caressing her thigh.'
-								'"What if we agreed that we''ll help each other out only when we REALLLLYYYYY need it, but depend on our boyfriends most of the time, hmmm?" Her breathing gets faster as your fingertips glide to the center of her legs.'
+								'"Anya, you don''t have to be a lesbian to enjoy a special release that only another woman knows how to give you," you say as you begin lightly caressing her thigh. What if we agreed that we''ll help each other out when we REALLLLYYYYY need it, but depend on our boyfriends most of the time, hmmm?" Her breathing gets faster as your fingertips glide to the center of her legs.'
 								*nl
-								'"Well... when you put it that way. I''m still not a lesbian, but helping each other out when we... REALLLLYYYYY... need... mmmmmhhmmmm... help might be okay... mmmmm..." she sighs as she leans in and kisses you.'
-								$orgasm_txt = 'You both start feeling the heat and lie down, kissing, touching and licking each other into orgasm.'
+								'"Well... When you put it that way. I''m still not a lesbian, but helping each other out when we <i> really</i> need... Mmmmmhhmmmm... Help might be okay... Mmmmm..." she moans as she leans in and kisses you.'
+								$orgasm_txt = 'You both start feeling the heat and lie down before kissing, fondling and licking each other into orgasm.'
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 10, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', -10, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 								gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -10, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 								*nl
-								'Once you break the kiss, she adds, "OK, but seriously. No more waking me up like this. We can... when we really need it, just tell the other one OK?" You nod and agree to not wake her up anymore. Besides, her being into it from the start would be better anyways. She rolls over and tries to go to sleep. "Night," she tells you. You tell her good night as well and then go leave her to sleep.'
-
+								'She eventually breaks the kiss. "Okay, but seriously. No more waking me up like this. We can, when we really need it, just tell the other one, okay?"' 
+								'You nod and agree to not wake her up anymore. Besides, her being into it from the start would be better anyway. She rolls over and goes back to sleep, so you return to your own bed.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
 								act 'Move away': gt 'bedrPar'
@@ -291,26 +285,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_lesbian':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A33', 'like'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les1.jpg"></center>'
-	'The two of you start kissing and fondling each other as you slowly undress each other. Anya lies back on the bed as you do. Your hands roam each other''s bodies as you undress each other and passionately keep kissing.'
+	'The two of you start kissing and fondling each other as you slowly undress each other. Anya lies back on the bed as you do and your hands roam each other''s bodies as you undress each other and passionately keep kissing.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Spread her legs ':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You finally pull her panties off and place your hands on her knees, spreading her legs wide apart. You can see her labia enlarged and the gleam of her wetness, showing she is already turned on.'
+		'You finally pull her panties off and place your hands on her knees, spreading her legs wide apart. You can see the gleam of her wetness, showing she''s already turned on.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Finger her':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You slip one finger in her already wet pussy and start thrusting it in and out of her, causing her to moan in pleasure. After a couple of minutes, you add a second finger as well.'
+			'You slip one finger in her already wet pussy and start thrusting it in and out of her, causing her to moan in pleasure. After a few minutes, you add a second finger as well.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 5, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Go down on her': gt 'sistersleep', 'sister_lesbian_cuni'
 			act 'Keep fingering her':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les4.jpg"></center>'
-				'She lies all the way back as you keep fingering her. You use one hand to kneed her breasts before lowering your mouth to suck on her nipple. She moans and writhes in pleasure as your fingers slide in and out of her and you keep sucking on her nipple.'
+				'She lies back as you keep fingering her, using one hand to kneed her breasts before lowering your mouth to suck on her nipple. She moans and writhes in pleasure as your fingers slide in and out of her and you keep sucking on her nipple.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 5, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', -5, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -323,21 +317,21 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_lesbian_cuni':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les5.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slide down the bed as you finger your sister and crawl between her legs. You lower your tongue to her clit and start to suck and lick on it as your fingers thrust in and out of her increasingly wet hole, her moans getting steadily louder and louder.'
+	'You slide down the bed and crawl between her legs. You lower your tongue to her clit and start to suck and lick on it as your fingers thrust in and out of her increasingly wet hole, her moans getting steadily louder and louder.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', -5, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Have her return the favor':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les6.jpg"></center>'
-		'You stop licking and fingering her. She gives you a slightly confused look at first and then seems to realize why. You lie on your back and spread your legs as she rolls over, crawls up between your legs and then starts to lick and nuzzle at your pussy. For someone that keeps telling you she isn''t into girls, she really knows how to eat pussy.'
+		'You stop licking and fingering her and lie on your back and spread your legs as she rolls over, crawls up between your legs and starts to lick and nuzzle at your pussy. For someone that keeps telling you she isn''t into girls, she really knows how to eat pussy.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act '69':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les7.jpg"></center>'
 			'After several minutes of her eating you out, she apparently isn''t content with just that. While still licking your pussy, she slowly spins her body around and climbs on top of you until her pussy is directly above your face. You start licking her as the two of you enter a sixty-nine. Several minutes pass until she cries out and her whole body quivers as an orgasm shoots through it. Her juices flow out of her pussy, coating your face.'
-			$orgasm_txt = 'With her orgasming above you and your face getting covered in her juices, you feel your own orgasm wrack your body. You cry out as the waves of pleasure rock your body, until it slowly fades.'
+			$orgasm_txt = 'With her orgasming above you and your face getting covered in her juices, you feel your own orgasm wrack your body. You cry out as the waves of pleasure rock your body until it slowly fades.'
 			$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
@@ -345,8 +339,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_lesbian_cuni':
 			act 'Aftermath':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les8.jpg"></center>'
-				'Once the orgasm passes, she rolls off you, and the two of you lie side by side, panting and basking in the afterglow of sex. Finally, she gets up onto her knees, and you do the same. You share a brief kiss and squeeze her ass before she breaks away from you, pushing you slightly away. "That was fun, but we shouldn''t do that... at least not too often," she says with a slight blush.'
-				'You grin at her. "Whatever you say sis." She starts getting cleaned up and getting ready to go to sleep as you move away.'
+				'Once the orgasm passes, she rolls off you and the two of you lie side by side, panting and basking in the afterglow before she gets up onto her knees and you do the same. You share a brief kiss and squeeze her ass before she breaks away from you, pushing you slightly away. "That was fun, but we shouldn''t do that... At least not too often," she says with a slight blush.'
+				'You grin at her. "Whatever you say, sis."'
+				'She starts getting cleaned up and getting ready to go to sleep as you move away.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -361,11 +356,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_strapon':
 	gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A33', 'like'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/strap1.jpg"></center>'
 	if sisterQW['strapon'] = 0:
-		'The two of you start kissing and fondling each other, but when you start to try to remove her clothes, she stops you. "What? What''s wrong?" you ask her.'
-		'She smiles at you and, you are not sure you like the way she is smiling. "Nothing. I just wanted to do something different this time, something I have been wanting to actually try for a long time..." She reaches over to her nightstand drawer and opens it up. She spends a few moments fishing around for something as you watch her curiously. When she turns back, she has a strapon harness with attached dildo in her hand.'
+		'The two of you start kissing and fondling each other, but when you try to remove her clothes, she stops you. "What? What''s wrong?" you ask her.'
+		'She smiles at you, but you''re not sure you like the way she''s doing it. "Nothing. I just wanted to do something different this time, something I''ve been wanting to actually try for a long time..."' 
+		'She reaches over to her nightstand drawer and opens it up before fishing around for something as you watch her curiously. When she turns back, she has a strapon harness with an attached dildo in her hand.'
 	else
-		'The two of you start kissing and fondling each other, but when you start to try to remove her clothes, she stops you. "What? What''s wrong?" you ask her.'
-		'She smiles to you with a naughty glint in her eye. "Nothing. I just wanted to fuck you again." She reaches over to her nightstand drawer and opens it up. You smile, knowing she is grabbing her strapon.'
+		'The two of you start kissing and fondling each other, but when you try to remove her clothes, she stops you. "What? What''s wrong?" you ask her.'
+		'She smiles at you with a naughty glint in her eye. "Nothing. I just wanted to fuck you again."'
+		'She reaches over to her nightstand drawer and you smile, knowing she''s grabbing her strapon.'
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -374,15 +371,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_strapon':
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A33', 'dislike'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/home/sister_chat.jpg"></center>'
 		'You shake your head. "No way, I don''t want to get fucked, I just want to make love to you."'
-		'She frowns and drops the strapon back in the drawer. "Well I don''t want to do that. I have told you before I am not into girls."'
-		'You put your hand on her hip. "Come on, you know you love it."'
-		'She shoves your hand away. "No! I don''t want to do that and if you don''t want to do this, then we should just let it be." She lies down on her bed and pulls a book out. Knowing you shouldn''t push it while she is in her mood right now, you back away.'
+		'She frowns and drops the strapon back in the drawer. "Well I don''t want to do that. I''ve told you before that I''m not into girls!"'
+		'You put your hand on her hip. "Come on, you know you love it..."'
+		'She shoves your hand away. "No! I don''t want to do that and if you don''t want to do this, then we should just let it be!" She lies down on her bed and pulls a book out. Knowing you shouldn''t push it, you back away.'
 		act 'Move away': gt 'bedrPar'
 	end
 	act 'Help her put it on':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/strap2.jpg"></center>'
-		'When you don''t disagree, she takes it as consent and starts slipping the harness on. You help her get it into place and pull all the straps nice and tight. While she is on her knees with the dildo pointing at you, you take it in your hand and stroke it a bit, testing if the harness is securely in place. She gives you a look. "Well? Start sucking my dick."'
+		'When you don''t disagree, she takes it as consent and starts slipping the harness on. You help her get it into place and pull all the straps nice and tight. While she''s on her knees with the dildo pointing at you, you take it in your hand and stroke it, testing if the harness is securely in place. She gives you a lustful stare. "Well? Start sucking my dick."'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Suck her dick':
@@ -392,8 +389,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_strapon':
 				sisterQW['strapon'] = 1
 				'Anya monitors your actions and talks you through how to suck a cock. You lick the shaft from the base upwards and then suck the head. It isn''t too big, maybe a bit above average size. Anya then grabs you by the hair and abruptly shoves the dildo down your throat, causing you to choke and thrash your arms in panic. She quickly pulls it out of you, ropes of your drool sticking to the shaft from your mouth as your eyes water.'
 				*nl
-				'You cough and splutter as you speak. "What... what are you doing? You could have killed me!"'
-				'"Don''t be so dramatic <<$pcs_nickname>>! I would never hurt you. You see, guys like this. It''s called ''deepthroating.'' I''m just helping you train your mouth and throat so you know how to give boys proper blowjobs."'
+				'You cough and splutter. "What... What are you doing? You could have... killed me!"'
+				'"Don''t be so dramatic, <<$pcs_nickname>>! I would never hurt you. You see, guys like this. It''s called ''deepthroating.'' I''m just helping you train your mouth and throat so you know how to give boys proper blowjobs."'
 				'Without another word, she shoves the dildo back in your mouth and teaches you the finer arts of how to suck a cock, not to mention what to expect from the boys.'
 				*nl
 			else
@@ -401,7 +398,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_strapon':
 				*nl
 			end
 			if pcs_vag = 0:
-				'After she fucks your mouth for a bit, she stops and starts stripping you. Once you are fully naked, she slips her hands between your legs and slides a finger inside of your vagina. "Oh I see you''re still a virgin. Mom will be happy, but luckily, you have another hole I can use," she says as she pushes you down on the bed to lie on your side. She slides in behind you and starts rubbing the head of the dildo against your anus.'
+				'After she fucks your mouth for a while, she stops and starts stripping you. Once you''re fully naked, she slips her hands between your legs and slides a finger inside your pussy. "Oh, you''re still a virgin. Mom will be happy, but luckily, you have another hole I can use," she says as she pushes you down on the bed to lie on your side. She slides in behind you and starts rubbing the head of the dildo against your anus.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Get butt fucked': gt 'sistersleep', 'sister_strapon_anal'
@@ -409,19 +406,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_strapon':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A33'] -= 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les8.jpg"></center>'
-					'You shake your head. "No way, I don''t want to get fucked in the butt."'
-					'She frowns and backs away from you. "OK suit yourself, but I''m not taking your virginity and I am tired of fucking your mouth." She starts taking the harness off, and feeling a bit disappointed, you help her remove it. Once done, she cleans it up and drops it back in her nightstand.'
-					'With that all taken care of, you share a brief kiss and squeeze her ass before she breaks away from you. "OK, time for bed." She starts getting cleaned up and getting ready to go to sleep as you move away.'
+					'You shake your head. "No way, I don''t want to get fucked in the butt!"'
+					'She frowns and backs away from you. "Okay, suit yourself, but I''m not taking your virginity and I''m tired of fucking your mouth." She starts taking the harness off, and feeling a bit disappointed, you help her remove it. Once done, she cleans it up and drops it back in her nightstand.'
+					'With that all taken care of, you share a brief kiss and squeeze her ass before she breaks away from you. "Okay, time for bed." She starts getting cleaned up and getting ready to go to sleep as you move away.'
 					act 'Move away': gt 'bedrPar'
 				end
 			elseif sisterQW['knownotvirgin'] = 0:
 				sisterQW['knownotvirgin'] = 1
-				'After she fucks your mouth with the dildo, she stops and starts stripping you. Once you are fully naked, she slips her hands between your legs and slides a finger inside of your vagina. "Oh I see you are no longer a virgin. Mom won''t be happy," she says as she lies down on her back with the dildo pointing straight up. "Mount up and show me what you have learned, cowgirl."'
+				'After she fucks your mouth with the dildo, she stops and starts stripping you. Once you''re fully naked, she slips her hands between your legs and slides a finger inside of your vagina. "Oh, you''re no longer a virgin. Mom won''t be happy!" she says as she lies down on her back with the dildo pointing straight up. "Mount up and show me what you''ve learned, cowgirl."'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Get fucked': gt 'sistersleep', 'sister_strapon_vaginal'
 			else
-				'After she fucks your mouth with the dildo, she stops and starts stripping you. Once you are fully naked, she slips her hands between your legs and slides a finger inside of your vagina. "Oh I see you are already wet. Good, that will make this more fun," she says as she lies down on her back with the dildo pointing straight up. "Mount up and show me what you have learned, cowgirl."'
+				'After she fucks your mouth with the dildo, she stops and starts stripping you. Once you''re fully naked, she slips her hands between your legs and slides a finger inside your pussy. "I see you''re already wet. Good, that will make this more fun," she says as she lies down on her back with the dildo pointing straight up. "Mount up and show me what you''ve learned, cowgirl."'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Get fucked': gt 'sistersleep', 'sister_strapon_vaginal'
@@ -433,15 +430,14 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_strapon_vaginal':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/strap4.jpg"></center>'
-	'You straddle your sister and slowly lower yourself down until you feel the tip of the dildo pressing against your slit. You reach between your legs, line up the dildo and lower yourself until you feel it part your lips and start to slide inside of you, causing you to moan softly. You lower yourself down further and start to slowly fuck the dildo, your sister taking off her top as you do. You take the whole thing inside you. It''s sightly longer and thicker than average and fills you up completely.'
-	*nl
-	'As it feels better and better, you start riding the dildo faster and faster. Just as it really starts to feel good, Anya slaps your ass. "Get up and face the wall. I want to be in control now."'
+	'You straddle your sister and slowly lower yourself down until you feel the tip of the dildo pressing against your slit. You reach between your legs, line up the dildo and lower yourself until you feel it part your lips and start to slide inside you, causing you to moan softly. You lower yourself down further and start to slowly fuck the dildo, your sister taking off her top as you do. You manage to take the whole thing inside you. It''s sightly longer and thicker than average and fills you up completely.'
+	'As it starts feeling better, you start riding the dildo faster and faster. Just as it really starts to feel good, Anya slaps your ass. "Get up and face the wall. I want to be in control now."'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Stand up':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/strap5.jpg"></center>'
-		'You stand up on the bed and face the wall. Anya gets up and stands behind you. She grabs the dildo and lines it up, rubbing the tip against your wet slit a couple of times before sliding it in. She quickly thrusts it balls deep into your hole, completely filling you up. She quickly starts fucking you hard and fast, her hips bouncing against your ass, causing you to place your hands on the wall to keep your balance as she pounds your little pussy. After a few minutes, she starts to pant, obviously starting to wear herself out. She slaps your ass again. "Lie down so I can fuck that little ass of yours."'
+		'You stand up on the bed and face the wall as Anya gets up and stands behind you. She grabs the dildo and lines it up, rubbing the tip against your wet slit a few times before sliding it in. She quickly thrusts it balls deep into your hole, completely filling you up and quickly starts fucking you hard and fast, her hips bouncing against your ass, causing you to place your hands on the wall to keep your balance as she pounds you. After a few minutes, she starts to pant, clearly starting to wear herself out. She slaps your ass again. "Lie down so I can fuck that little ass of yours."'
 		$orgasm_txt = 'You spasm and have an intense orgasm with the dildo buried deep in your pussy. You almost can''t keep yourself upright as your legs threaten to give out.'
 		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'incest'
@@ -451,10 +447,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_strapon_vaginal':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A33', 'dislike'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les8.jpg"></center>'
-			'You shake your head. "No way, I don''t want to get fucked in the butt."'
-			'She frowns and backs away, pulling the strapon out of you. "OK suit yourself, but I am too tired to do this anymore." She starts taking the harness off, and feeling a bit disappointed, you help her remove it. Once done, she cleans it up and drops it back in her nightstand.'
-			'With that all taken care of, you share a brief kiss and squeeze her ass before she breaks away from you. "That was fun, but we shouldn''t do that... at least not too often," she says with a slight blush.'
-			'You grin at her. "Whatever you say sis." She starts getting cleaned up and getting ready to go to sleep as you move away.'
+			'You shake your head. "No way, I don''t want to get fucked in the butt!"'
+			'She frowns and backs away, pulling the strapon out of you. "Okay, suit yourself, but I''m too tired to do this anymore." She starts taking the harness off, and feeling a bit disappointed, you help her remove it. Once done, she cleans it up and drops it back in her nightstand.'
+			'With that all taken care of, you share a brief kiss and squeeze her ass before she breaks away from you. "That was fun, but we shouldn''t do that... At least not too often," she says with a slight blush.'
+			'You grin at her. "Whatever you say, sis."' 
+			'She starts getting cleaned up and getting ready to go to sleep as you move away.'
 			act 'Move away': gt 'bedrPar'
 		end
 	end
@@ -463,11 +460,11 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_strapon_anal':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/strap6.jpg"></center>'
-	'You do as she says and lie down on your side. Anya goes to her dresser, pulls out a small bottle of lube and generously applies it to the strap-on. She then rubs some on your anus.'
-	'She lies down behind you and lines the dildo up with your ass. Once she has it in place, she pushes forwards. You can feel the pressure building up before the head of the dildo suddenly pops into your ass.'
+	'You do as she says and lie down on your side as Anya goes to her dresser, pulls out a small bottle of lube and generously applies it to the strap-on. She then rubs some on your anus.'
+	'She then lies down behind you and lines the dildo up with your ass. Once she has it in place, she pushes forward. You feel the pressure building before the head of the dildo suddenly pops into your ass.'
 	*nl
 	if pcs_ass = 0:
-		'Your first impression is unbearable pain. You want to get away, but her hands on your hips hold you in place and pull you further back as she thrusts her hips forward and the dildo goes deep into your ass. You gradually stop resisting as it starts to feel great, really great. Once you stop resisting, she lets go of your hip and lifts your leg up with her hand.'
+		'Your first impression is unbearable pain. You want to move away, but her hands on your hips hold you in place and pull you further back as she thrusts her hips forward and the dildo goes deeper into your ass. You gradually stop resisting as the pain slowly gives way to pleasure. Once you stop resisting, she lets go of your hip and lifts your leg up with her hand.'
 	else
 		'It hurts a little at first, but the pain quickly gives way to pleasure. As you start to moan, she starts thrusting the dildo deeper into your ass. Reading your actions well, she finds the right rhythm and depth and starts butt fucking you to ecstasy.'
 	end
@@ -485,8 +482,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sister_strapon_anal':
 		act 'Aftermath':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sex/les8.jpg"></center>'
-			'Finally, she stops fucking you and rolls onto her back, causing the dildo to pop out of your ass. She is sweating slightly and panting, obviously spent from fucking you. The two of you lie side by side panting and basking in the afterglow of sex. She eventually gets up onto her knees, and you do the same. You help her take off the harness. Once it is off, you share a brief kiss and squeeze her ass before she breaks away from you. "Well that was a lot of fun, little sis. I think we are going to have to do that again sometime," she says with a slight blush.'
-			'You grin at her. "I enjoyed it as well." She starts getting cleaned up and getting ready to go to sleep as you move away.'
+			'Finally, she stops fucking you and rolls onto her back, causing the dildo to pop out of your ass. She''s sweating slightly and panting, clearly spent from fucking you. The two of you lie side by side panting and basking in the afterglow before she eventually gets up onto her knees and you do the same. You help her take off the harness and share a brief kiss and squeeze her ass before she breaks away from you. "That was a lot of fun, little sis. I think we''re going to have to do that again sometime," she says with a slight blush.'
+			'You grin at her. "I enjoyed it as well."'
+			'She starts getting cleaned up and getting ready to go to sleep as you move away.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'incest', 'lesbian'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'

+ 211 - 0
locations/sofia.qsrc

@@ -0,0 +1,211 @@
+# sofia
+
+!! file of the interactions with Sofia, Katja''s uni roommate who is studying to become a nurse. She comes from a small town where she and her boyfriend Maxim were the king and queen of the local school.
+!! They both study at the university of St. Petersburg where he studies law. She knows nobody else other than her boyfriend since she goes home every weekend (leaves Thursday night) to her parents so she doesn''t have much opportunity to meet people.
+!! She believes that she and Maxim have true love and are destined to be together. He on the other hand just wants to fuck as many beautiful girls as possible, and does so behind her back all the time.
+!! He even encourages her to go home at the weekend so she won''t meet other people and therefore learn how big of a cheater he actually is.
+!! Her quest will be about convincing her that Maxim is no good and to start living her life for herself.
+!! Her defining characteristic is that she talks a lot (mostly about how great Maxim is)
+!! She has never had sex with a woman (or anybody other than Maxim) but is latent bisexual with male preference. She does have a lot of sexual experience including anal sex and maybe even more kinks, but only with Maxim.
+
+!! The variables governing Sofia''s quest
+!! sofiaQW['know'] = 1: The player has met Sofia (So far only through Katja''s quest, but will add an introduction to the Nurse class)
+!! sofiaQW['QWstage'] = 1: The player has had her first discussion with Katja about Sofia.
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'not_spying':
+	sofiaQW['spying_day'] = daystart
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm_hall.jpg"></center>'
+	'As you''re about to open the door, the noises get louder and leave no question in your mind that somebody is having sex in the room.'
+	act 'Take a peek': gt 'sofia', 'spying'
+	act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'spying':
+	if sofiaQW['spying_day'] ! daystart: sofiaQW['spying_day'] = daystart
+	if sofiaQW['maxim_know'] = 1:
+		$sexpartner = 'Maxim'
+	else
+		if sofiaQW['spying_times'] = 0:
+			$sexpartner = 'the boy'
+		else
+			$sexpartner = 'her boyfriend'
+		end
+	end
+	sofiaQW['spying_times'] += 1
+	gt 'sofia', 'spying_sex<<rand(1,6)>>'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'spying_sex_introdesc':
+	if $sexpartner = 'the boy':
+		'You open the door carefully as quietly as you can, just far enough for you to see Sofia and a boy on her bed.'
+	elseif $sexpartner = 'her boyfriend':
+		'You open the door carefully as quietly as you can, just far enough for you to see Sofia and the same boy as last time, presumably her boyfriend, on her bed.'
+	else
+		'You open the door carefully as quietly as you can, just far enough for you to see Sofia and Maxim on her bed.'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'spying_sex1':
+	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 3
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/sofia/dorm/spying_sex1.jpg"></center>'
+	if spyscenefirst = 0:
+		spyscenefirst = 1
+		gs 'sofia', 'spying_sex_introdesc'
+	end
+	'Sofia is on all fours giving <<$sexpartner>> a loud and sloppy blowjob. His cock is '+iif( npc_dick['A261'] < pcs_vag, 'not that impressive.', 'average sized.')+''
+	act 'Leave before you get caught': 
+		gs 'arousal', 'end'
+		killvar 'spyscenefirst'
+		killvar '$sexpartner'
+		gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
+	end
+	act 'Continue to watch': 
+		if rand(0,3)= 0:
+			cla
+			gs 'arousal', 'end'
+			killvar 'spyscenefirst'
+			killvar '$sexpartner'
+			'Sofia suddenly stops and pops his cock out of her mouth. "Did you hear that?" she asks.'
+			'You quickly close the door and head for the elevator before you''re seen.'
+			act 'Take the elevator': gt 'uni_dorm', 'elevator'
+		else
+			gt 'sofia', 'spying_sex2' 
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'spying_sex2':
+	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 3
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/sofia/dorm/spying_sex2.jpg"></center>'
+	if spyscenefirst = 0:
+		spyscenefirst = 1
+		gs 'sofia', 'spying_sex_introdesc'
+	end
+	'Sofia sits with her back to the headrest, moaning loudly as <<$sexpartner>> goes down on her.'
+	act 'Leave before you get caught': 
+		gs 'arousal', 'end'
+		killvar 'spyscenefirst'
+		killvar '$sexpartner'
+		gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
+	end
+	act 'Continue to watch':
+		if rand(0,3)= 0:
+			cla
+			gs 'arousal', 'end'
+			killvar 'spyscenefirst'
+			killvar '$sexpartner'
+			'<<$sexpartner>> suddenly stops. "Did you hear that?" he asks.' 
+			'You quickly close the door and head for the elevator before you''re seen.'
+			act 'Take the elevator': gt 'uni_dorm', 'elevator'
+		else
+			gt 'sofia', 'spying_sex3' 
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'spying_sex3':
+	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 3
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/sofia/dorm/spying_sex3.jpg"></center>'
+	if spyscenefirst = 0:
+		spyscenefirst = 1
+		gs 'sofia', 'spying_sex_introdesc'
+	end
+	'Sofia gets on her back and props herself up with her arms, biting her lip as <<$sexpartner>> moves in between her legs. He gropes her perky breasts as he slides his '+iif( npc_dick['A261'] < pcs_vag, 'not so impressive', 'average')+' cock into her pussy and starts fucking her hard.'
+	act 'Leave before you get caught':
+		killvar 'spyscenefirst'
+		killvar '$sexpartner'
+		gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
+	end
+	act 'Continue to watch':
+		if rand(0,3)= 0:
+			cla
+			gs 'arousal', 'end'
+			killvar 'spyscenefirst'
+			killvar '$sexpartner'
+			'<<$sexpartner>> suddenly stops. "Did you hear that?" he asks.'
+			'You quickly close the door and head for the elevator before you''re seen.'
+			act 'Take the elevator': gt 'uni_dorm', 'elevator'
+		else
+			gt 'sofia', 'spying_sex4' 
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'spying_sex4':
+	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 3
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/sofia/dorm/spying_sex4.jpg"></center>'
+	if spyscenefirst = 0:
+		spyscenefirst = 1
+		gs 'sofia', 'spying_sex_introdesc'
+	end
+	'Sofia is on all fours moaning loudly as <<$sexpartner>> pounds her hard doggystyle with his '+iif( npc_dick['A261'] < pcs_vag, 'not so impressive', 'average')+' cock.'
+	act 'Leave before you get caught':
+		gs 'arousal', 'end'
+		killvar 'spyscenefirst'
+		killvar '$sexpartner'
+		gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
+	end
+	act 'Continue to watch':
+		if rand(0,3)= 0:
+			cla
+			gs 'arousal', 'end'
+			killvar 'spyscenefirst'
+			killvar '$sexpartner'
+			'<<$sexpartner>> suddenly stops. "Did you hear that?" he asks.' 
+			'You quickly close the door and head for the elevator before you''re seen.'
+			act 'Take the elevator': gt 'uni_dorm', 'elevator'
+		else
+			gt 'sofia', 'spying_sex5' 
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'spying_sex5':
+	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 3
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/sofia/dorm/spying_sex5.jpg"></center>'
+	if spyscenefirst = 0:
+		spyscenefirst = 1
+		gs 'sofia', 'spying_sex_introdesc'
+	end
+	'Sofia is bouncing up and down on <<$sexpartner>>''s '+iif( npc_dick['A261'] < pcs_vag, 'not so impressive', 'average')+' cock, riding him hard cowgirl style while moaning loudly.'
+	act 'Leave before you get caught':
+		gs 'arousal', 'end'
+		killvar 'spyscenefirst'
+		killvar '$sexpartner'
+		gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
+	end
+	act 'Continue to watch':
+		if rand(0,3)= 0:
+			cla
+			gs 'arousal', 'end'
+			killvar 'spyscenefirst'
+			killvar '$sexpartner'
+			'Sofia suddenly stops. "Did you hear that?" she asks.'
+			'You quickly close the door and head for the elevator before you''re seen.'
+			act 'Take the elevator': gt 'uni_dorm', 'elevator'
+		else
+			gt 'sofia', 'spying_sex6' 
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'spying_sex6':
+	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 3
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/sofia/dorm/spying_sex6.jpg"></center>'
+	if spyscenefirst = 0:
+		spyscenefirst = 1
+		gs 'sofia', 'spying_sex_introdesc'
+	end
+	'Sofia sits on all fours on the bed, presenting her big round ass to <<$sexpartner>>, who jerks his '+iif( npc_dick['A261'] < pcs_vag, 'not so impressive', 'average')+' cock over it.'
+	'He finally squirts a small amount of cum over her ass while yelling very loudly, as if he was letting loose a fire hose of it.'
+	'Sofia does cheer him on, so you''re not sure if she''s aware of how little cum he actually delivered.'
+	act 'Leave before you get caught': 
+		gs 'arousal', 'end'
+		killvar 'spyscenefirst'
+		killvar '$sexpartner'
+		gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
+	end
+end
+
+--- sofia ---------------------------------
+

+ 19 - 3
locations/uni_dorm.qsrc

@@ -170,9 +170,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'second_floor':
 
 				act 'Enter': gt 'katja_dorm', 'start'
 			else
-				if locat['katja'] = 29 and sofiaQW['know'] = 1 and rand(0,3) = 0 and week < 5:
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big260.jpg"></center>'
-					'Sofia opens the door. "Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Katja is at the library right now and I have Maxim over so I don''t have time to talk. See you later!" she says before closing the door.'			
+				if locat['katja'] = 29 and sofiaQW['know'] = 1 and rand(0,1) = 0 and week < 5:
+					if rand(0,2) = 0 and sofiaQW['spying_day'] ! daystart:
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm_hall.jpg"></center>'
+						'You know on the door and can clearly hear that somebody is in the room, but nobody opens the door.'
+						if pcs_prcptn > rand(30,70):
+							gs 'exp_gain', 'prcptn', rand(1,2)
+							'Listening a little more carefully, you are sure that somebody is having sex in the room.'
+							!! act 'Take a peek': gt 'sofia', 'spying'
+						else
+							!! act 'Open the door': gt 'sofia', 'not_spying'
+						end
+					else
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big260.jpg"></center>'
+						'Sofia opens the door. "Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Katja is at the library right now and I have Maxim over so I don''t have time to talk. See you later!" she says before closing the door.'			
+					end
+				elseif (locat['katja'] = 32 or locat['katja'] = 33) and katjaQW['kitchen_day'] ! daystart
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm_hall.jpg"></center>'
+					'You knock on the door, but no one answers. Noticing what thime it is Katja is probably in the shared Kitchen eating or preparing food.'
+					act 'See if Katja is in the shared kitchen': gt 'katja_pantyquest', 'kitchen'
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm_hall.jpg"></center>'
 					'You knock on the door, but no one answers. She must be asleep or not home.'

+ 1 - 0
locations/uni_lessons.qsrc

@@ -89,6 +89,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'short_break':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Lecture Building Hallway</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/lecture_hall/lecture_hall.jpg"></center>'
 	'Walking down the halls, you are still amazed at how well maintained the buildings are compared to your old school.'
+	gs 'katja_pantyquest', 'uni'
 	gs 'uni_lessons', 'schedule'
 	act 'Go to the university plaza': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 end

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