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Edit text in city gym. More work in here. Reported by yoyodyne

Edit text: lied -> lay. Reported by yoyodyne
HotMike 1 jaar geleden
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3 gewijzigde bestanden met toevoegingen van 8 en 8 verwijderingen
  1. 2 2
      locations/etoexhib.qsrc
  2. 4 4
      locations/fit.qsrc
  3. 2 2
      locations/pod_ezd.qsrc

+ 2 - 2
locations/etoexhib.qsrc

@@ -1661,11 +1661,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos53':
 
 				if krem = 0:
 					pcs_tan += 1
-					'You lie down to sunbathe.'
+					'You lay down to sunbathe.'
 				elseif krem > 0:
 					krem -= 1
 					pcs_tan += 3
-					'You put the sunblock on your body and lied down on the roof to sunbathe.'
+					'You put the sunblock on your body and lay down on the roof to sunbathe.'
 				end
 
 				act 'Get Up':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos53'

+ 4 - 4
locations/fit.qsrc

@@ -561,7 +561,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'exercise_end':
 			end
 		elseif RESULT = 2:
 			cla
-			'As you finish training, a fit girl offers to play a little squash with her as she waits for her boyfriend to came.'
+			'As you finish training, a fit girl offers to play a little squash with you as she waits for her boyfriend to come.'
 
 			act 'Refuse':gt 'fit', 'dressing_room'
 
@@ -570,9 +570,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'exercise_end':
 				*clr
 				picrand = 15
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/gym/sex/zal5.jpg"></center>'
-				'You have fun playing with the girl, neither of you are any good, but it just amuses you. After some time, it appears as a man and looking at your clumsy attempts and offers to show you how to play correctly.'
-				'He stands just behind you and puts one hand on your hand, guiding your racket and showing you how to strike the ball. The other hand starts stroking your hips gradually approaching your crotch.'
-				'You feel his cock resting against your back and looking at the girl, you know that she understands what is going on and that the man is her boyfriend.'
+				'You have fun playing with the girl. Neither of you are any good, but it just amuses you. After some time you notice a man looking at your clumsy attempts. He offers to show you how to play correctly.'
+				'He stands just behind you and puts one hand on your hand, guiding your racket and showing you how to strike the ball. He places his other hand on your side first. You feel his hand stroking your hip and gradually approaching your crotch. He pushes you a bit backwards, making your butt touch his groin.'
+				'You feel his cock resting against your back, poking it a bit. You make eye contact with the girl and her smile makes you know that she understands what is going on; this guy must be her boyfriend.'
 
 				act 'Escape from these perverts':gt 'fit', 'dressing_room'
 				act 'Enjoy':

+ 2 - 2
locations/pod_ezd.qsrc

@@ -294,11 +294,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'roof':
 
 				if krem = 0:
 					pcs_tan += 1
-					'You lie down to sunbathe.'
+					'You lay down to sunbathe.'
 				elseif krem > 0:
 					krem -= 1
 					pcs_tan += 3
-					'You put the sunblock on your body and lied down on the roof to sunbathe.'
+					'You put the sunblock on your body and lay down on the roof to sunbathe.'
 				end
 
 				act 'Get Up':gt 'pod_ezd', 'roof'