Missing gs, old code removal, proofreading by Lydia

locations/lezbsex.qsrc

@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'startloverhome':
 	minut += 15
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/lesbian/lezbsexhome.jpg"></center>'
 
-	'You spend some time with <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> in the kitchen when she begins to get impatient and starts caressing you.'
+	'You spend some time with <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> in the kitchen when she gets impatient and caresses you.'
 	act 'Kiss her back and take her to the bedroom':
 		loverrelation[lover_number] += 2
 		gt 'lezbsex', 'start'
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ukuni':
 	*clr
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/lesbian/ukuni<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You begin by kissing her breasts, moving gradually down her body, lower and lower until you are facing her pussy. You start by gently caressing her swollen lips with up and down tongue lapping, up and down the swollen mound and moist slit, and getting ready to focus the tip of your tongue directly on her clitoris.  You part her outer lips with your fingers, spreading her pouty inner lips giving you full access to her puffy pink clitoris.'
+	'You begin by kissing her breasts, moving gradually down her body, lower and lower, until you are facing her pussy. You start by gently caressing her swollen lips with up and down tongue lapping, up and down the swollen mound and moist slit, and getting ready to focus the tip of your tongue directly on her clitoris. Next, you part her outer lips with your fingers, spreading her pouty inner lips, giving you full access to her puffy pink clitoris.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 5, 'lesbian'
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anuli':
 	*clr
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/lesbian/anuli<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'She kisses your buttocks in ever decreasing circles, eventually getting to the center where your puckered anus is waiting.  Reaching her goal, she licks all around the tender star to get it plenty moist, then firmly pushes her tongue forward, penetrating your ass with just the tip.  She retracts it, again licking all around your anus, and repeats her tongue invasion into that most private entrance.'
+	'She kisses your buttocks in ever-decreasing circles, eventually reaching the centre where your puckered anus is waiting. Reaching her goal, she licks all around the tender star to get it plenty moist, then firmly pushes her tongue forward, penetrating your ass with just the tip. Finally, she retracts it, again licking all around your anus, and repeats her tongue invasion into that most private entrance.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'rimming', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uanuli':
 	*clr
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/lesbian/uanuli<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You kiss her buttocks in ever decreasing circles, eventually getting to the center where her puckered anus is waiting.  Reaching your goal, you lick all around the tender star to get it plenty moist, then firmly push your tongue forward, penetrating her ass with just the tip.  You retract it, again licking all around her anus, and repeating your tongue invasion into that most private entrance.'
+	'You kiss her buttocks in ever-decreasing circles, eventually reaching the centre where her puckered anus is waiting. Reaching your goal, you lick all around the tender star to get it plenty moist, then firmly push your tongue forward, penetrating her ass with just the tip. Finally, you retract it, again licking all around her anus and repeating your tongue invasion into that most private entrance.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'rimming_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'svag':
 	*clr
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/lesbian/svag<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You put on the strap-on, adjusting it to your hips and centering it, and then insert it slowly into her pussy.  She moans and grinds back at you while you fuck her with it.'
+	'You put on the strap-on, adjusting it to your hips and centring it, and then insert it slowly into her pussy.  She moans and grinds back at you while you fuck her with it.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sanal':
 	*clr
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/lesbian/sanal<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You suck on the shaft to get it well-lubed, then put on the strap-on and gently insert it into <<$lezbsexname>>''s anus, pressing into her slowly at first, and as she adjusts to the backdoor invasion you push in and out, faster and faster.'
+	'You suck on the shaft to get it well-lubed, then put on the strap-on and gently insert it into <<$lezbsexname>>''s anus, pressing into her slowly at first. Then, as she adjusts to the backdoor invasion, you push in and out, faster and faster.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'usvag':
 	*clr
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/lesbian/usvag<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You watch as she puts on the strap-on, adjusting it to her hips and centering the fake cock, and then she moves to you and inserts it slowly into your pussy.  You moan and grind back at her while she fucks you with it.'
+	'You watch as she puts on the strap-on, adjusting it to her hips and centring the fake cock, and then she moves to you and inserts it slowly into your pussy.  You moan and grind back at her while she fucks you with it.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dvag':
 	*clr
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/lesbian/dvag<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You take a dildo and poke her wet pussy with it.  She pulls your face to hers and kisses you while you are driving one shaft into her cunny with one hand and caressing her breasts with a second dildo.'
+	'You take a dildo and poke her wet pussy with it.  She pulls your face to hers and kisses you while you drive one shaft into her cunny with one hand and caress her breasts with a second dildo.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'danal':
 	*clr
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/lesbian/danal<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You take a dildo, making sure she''s watching you as you slowly lick it, trying to cover it with the maximum amount of your thick saliva, and gently insert it into <<$lezbsexname>>''s anus.  At first, you ease it in slowly, getting her used to the invasion, then push it deeper, stroking it into her faster and faster.'
+	'You take a dildo, ensuring that she''s watching you slowly lick it, trying to cover it with the maximum amount of your thick saliva, and gently insert it into  <<$lezbsexname>>''s anus.  At first, you ease it in slowly, getting her used to the invasion, then push it deeper, stroking it into her faster and faster.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -202,11 +202,12 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'udvag':
 	cla
 	*clr
-	minut += 5
-	pcs_horny += 10
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/lesbian/udvag<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'<<$lezbsexname>> inserts the dildo into your wet pussy, moving it in and out while constantly twisting and turning it in her hands to stimulate your love hole as much as possible with it.'
+	'<<$lezbsexname>> inserts the dildo into your wet pussy, moving it in and out while constantly twisting and turning it in her hands to stimulate your love hole as much as possible.'
+	
+	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
+	gs 'stat'
 
 	act 'Continue': xgt 'lezbsex', 'var'
 	act 'Finish': gt 'lezbsex', 'end'
@@ -218,7 +219,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'udanal':
 	*clr
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/lesbian/udanal<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'<<$lezbsexname>> spits in the crack of your ass, watching it slowly glide down to your pucker as she collects some of the saliva and rubs it all around the tip of the dildo before pressing it against your anus. You feel it stretching your puckered hole at it pushes farther and farther inside, bringing you that unique back-door pleasure.'
+	'<<$lezbsexname>> spits in your asscrack, watching it slowly glide down to your pucker as she collects some of the saliva and rubs it all around the tip of the dildo before pressing it against your anus. You feel it stretching your puckered hole as it pushes farther inside, bringing you that unique back-door pleasure.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -230,7 +231,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 	cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/lesbian/lezbsexstart.jpg"></center>'
-	'When you have finished playing, <<$lezbsexname>> thanks you for the good time and leaves.'
+	'When you have finished playing, <<$lezbsexname>> thanks you for the excellent time and leaves.'
 	act 'Leave':
 		if gfsex = 1:
 			killvar 'gfsex'