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Merge branch 'master' of https://git.tfgames.site/Kevin_Smarts/glife

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glife.qproj

@@ -458,6 +458,7 @@
 		<Location name="brother"/>
 		<Location name="brother2"/>
 		<Location name="brother_voyeur"/>
+		<Location name="brother_voyeur_sex"/>
 		<Location name="brother_lessons"/>
 		<Location name="seeporn"/>
 	</Folder>

+ 13 - 7
locations/JuliaMilHome.qsrc

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 		'It''s too early in the day to visit Julia.'
 	else
 		'You knock on the door. You hear footsteps in the apartment and sure enough, a few seconds later Julia opens the door. "Oh, hi <<$pcs_nickname>>! Come on in!"'
-		act 'Enter Julia''s apartment':gt'JuliaMilHome'
+		act 'Enter Julia''s apartment': gt 'JuliaMilHome', 'hallway'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hallway':
 
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Entrance hall</font></h4></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/julia_home/hallway.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/juliahome/hallway.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you enter the Milov''s hallway, you notice it very nice, well decorated and very clean. Everything in it''s place.'
 
 	act '<b>Leave Julia''s apartment</b>': gt 'JuliaMilHome', 'leave_apartment'
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Living room</font></b></center>'
 	!! Needs actions like watching tv
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/julia_home/living_room.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/juliahome/living_room.jpg"></center>'
 	'Like the rest of the house the living room is spotless, with plenty of decorations around, arranged just perfectly.'
 
 	act 'Leave the room':gt 'JuliaMilHome', 'hallway'
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kitchen':
 
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kitchen</font></b></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/julia_home/kitchen.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/juliahome/kitchen.jpg"></center>'
 	'The kitchen is small but has all the necessary things. There is a stove, a fridge, a sink, and a tiny dining table. Everything looks sparkling clean.'
 
 	act 'Leave the room': gt 'JuliaMilHome','hallway'
@@ -309,7 +309,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 	
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Bathroom</font></h4></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/julia_home/bathroom.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/juliahome/bathroom.jpg"></center>'
 	'The bathroom is kept spotlessly clean. Everything here has a well cared for look to it.'
 	'The toilet sits along the wall next to a small bathtub.'
 	'You can do your hair and makeup in the <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a> above the sink.'
@@ -355,7 +355,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'julia_room':
 
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Julia''s Room</font></b></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/julia_home/julia_room.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/juliahome/julia_bedroom.jpg"></center>'
 	'Julia has a nice room, decorated with high quality furnishings. There are books everywhere, she must really like to read.'
 	if lernHome > 0 and juliaQW['homework_day'] ! daystart:
 		'Julia arranges her school books on a large desk and gets ready to do her homework, inviting you to join her.'
@@ -406,6 +406,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'julia_room':
 				gt 'JuliaMilHome', 'julia_room'
 			end
 		else
+			act 'Leave Julia''s room': gt 'JuliaMilHome', 'hallway'
+			act 'Chat with Julia': gt 'JuliaMilHome', 'julia_chat'
 			if wine = 1:
 				act 'Drink your wine with Julia':
 					juliaQW['JulMilBestFrend'] += 1
@@ -533,7 +535,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'julia_room':
 				end
 			end
 		end
-		act 'Chat with Julia': gt 'JuliaMilHome', 'julia_chat'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -735,5 +736,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'julia_go':
 	end
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'leave_apartment':
+
+	gt 'pod_ezd','etaj_3'	
+end
+
 --- JuliaMilHome ---------------------------------
 

+ 8 - 8
locations/anushapt.qsrc

@@ -326,7 +326,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hallway':
 	else
 		'Anushka is standing next to you, looking at you expectantly. "What''s up, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 		act '<b>Leave Anushka''s apartment</b>': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-		act 'Let''s go to your room':AnushkaLoc=2&gt'anushapt','anushroom'
+		act 'Let''s go to your room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 		act 'Let''s check on your brother': AnushkaLoc = 3 & gt 'anushaptbr','brotherroom'
 	end
 end
@@ -599,7 +599,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 		'She laughs a bit. "No, but he doesn''t know that. However, if he doesn''t or he keeps being mean to you, come get me. I will kick his ass for you, OK?"'
 		'He nods all happy and gets up from the table. He tries to dart out of the room, but she manages to give him a one armed hug that he tries his best to squirm away from. He manages to finally break free, then he hurries out of the kitchen.'
 		'She stands up and looks at you. "Got everything?" When you nod, she says "Sweet, let''s go back to my room."'
-		act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2&gt'anushapt','anushroom'
+		act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 	elseif snacktime <= 5 and ((week < 6 and hour >= 20 and hour < 23) or (week >= 6 and (hour >= 8 and hour < 16) or (hour >= 18 and hour < 23))):
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kitchen</font></b></center>'
@@ -624,7 +624,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 			'He smirks to her. "Ok... yeah... They may have had a little bit to do with it as well."'
 			'As the two of you walk out of the kitchen and back towards her room, he follows you both out and heads for the living room. "Have fun girls... but not too much fun."'
 			'Anushka looks back, and in a exacerbated tone says "Dad!" before she leads you back into her room'
-			act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2&gt'anushapt','anushroom'
+			act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 		end
 
 		act 'Yes':
@@ -640,7 +640,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 			'He smirks to her. "Ok... yeah... They may have had a little bit to do with it as well."'
 			'As the two of you walk out of the kitchen and back towards her room, he follows you both out and heads for the living room. "Have fun girls... but not too much fun."'
 			'Anushka looks back, and in a exacerbated tone says "Dad!" before she leads you back into her room'
-			act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2&gt'anushapt','anushroom'
+			act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 		end
 	elseif snacktime <= 7 and anushkaQW['valeria_introduced'] = 0:
 		anushkaQW['valeria_introduced'] = 1
@@ -681,7 +681,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 					*nl
 					'Anushka walks over to the fridge and grabs two drinks plus a bag of chips. She grabs you by the arm and leads you out of the kitchen. As you walk out, she glances back at her mother to scream "Bitch!"'
 					'"It was great to meet you. I do hope to see you again, even though I doubt you''ll be back..." you hear Valeria sarcastically say as you''re leaving the kitchen.'
-					act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2&gt'anushapt','anushroom'
+					act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -702,7 +702,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 			'Instead of getting angry, her mom just laughs. "You''re one to talk. We both know you''re a clingy, needy, little slut that will do anything to get anyone to pay attention to you. The only reason you''re in that band of yours is because you slept your way into it and continue to be their slut just so they will let you stay."'
 			'Anushka raises her hand like she might hit her mother. For a tense moment, you think she might, but then she lowers it. "You don''t know anything about me! You''ve never wanted to know anything about me! I fucking hate you! I wish you would just fucking leave if you hate it here so much!" With that, she turns and grabs some snacks. She pushes them into your hands so hard and fast that you are barely able to keep hold of them as she says "Come on, let''s go."'
 			'Her mother shakes her head. "That''s right! Go running to your room and cry like you have always done when you are faced with the truth. I can''t believe I raised such a pathetic excuse of a daughter."'
-			act 'Follow Anushka back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2&gt'anushapt','anushroom'
+			act 'Follow Anushka back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Defend Anushka (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -714,7 +714,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 					'You can''t take listening to Valeria talk about your friend like that anymore. "You''re wrong! Anushka is a better person than you will ever be! If you would just talk to her for once instead of at her, you might realize just how great she really is!"'
 					'Anushka smiles at you and obviously appreciates what you said. Her mom just gives you a look of complete disgust. "You must be another one of those disgusting lesbians." she says scornfully before shooting an equally disgusted look at her daughter. "It is so sinful and shameful, but I guess I can''t expect my daughter to hang out with anyone decent." With that, she turns back to her cooking.'
 					'Anushka grabs you by the arm before you can say more. "Come on, let''s go. She just isn''t worth it."'
-					act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2&gt'anushapt','anushroom'
+					act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Defend Anushka (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -727,7 +727,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 		'She gets up and heads to the kitchen with you, the two of you talking and laughing the whole way.'
 		'As you walk into the kitchen, Anushka points to a refrigerator. "Grab some drinks out of the fridge and anything else good."'
 		'While you are doing that, she grabs a couple of snack cakes and chips from the cabinets, and once you both have your spoils from your raid on the kitchen, you head back to her room.'
-		act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2&gt'anushapt','anushroom'
+		act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 	end
 	killvar 'snacktime'
 end

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+ 26 - 1411
locations/brother_voyeur.qsrc


+ 1622 - 0
locations/brother_voyeur_sex.qsrc

@@ -0,0 +1,1622 @@
+# brother_voyeur_sex
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_bj':
+	gs 'boystat','A34'
+	npc_rel['A34'] += 3
+	brotherbj += 1
+	brothershowerbj = daystart
+	if brotherSex < 6:brotherSex = 6
+	cla & *clr
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/showerbj.mp4"></center>'
+	'Kneeling down, you take Kolka''s freshly washed cock and push it between your lips, sucking gently. Several minutes go by while you to continue blowing your brother, going slowly up and down his length, the sound of water raining down from the showerhead muting the soft slurping sounds coming from your mouth.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'bj', rand(3,5)
+	gs 'stat'
+	act'Keep sucking':
+		cla
+		gs 'arousal', 'bj', rand(1,5)
+		brotherbjfinish = rand(1,2)
+		if brotherbjfinish = 1:
+			gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', 'A34', 1
+			brotherbjcomment = rand(1,2)
+			gs 'stat'
+
+			gt'brother_voyeur_sex','shower_swallow'
+		else
+			*nl
+			'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>," he says through grunts. "I''m gonna cum soon. Can I cum on your face?"'
+			act'Ignore him and keep sucking':
+				cla
+				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A34', 1
+				gs 'arousal', 'end'
+				gs 'stat'
+				*nl
+				'Despite his pleas to let him blow his load on your face, you keep sucking until you taste hot liquid spilling into your mouth.'
+				act'Swallow':
+					cla
+					*nl
+					'You swallow his load with a gulp, showing your clean tongue and smiling after you do.'
+					'"Thanks for the warning Kolka. I really appreciate it," you say, standing up.'
+					'"But I wanted to cum on your face..." he says, disappointment seeping from his voice.'
+					act'I was having too much fun':
+						cla & *clr
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershower.jpg"></center>'
+						'"Sorry Kolka, I just couldn''t help myself! Blowing you was too much fun and I didn''t want to stop." You keep licking and sucking on his tip as if to make your point. "I hope you''ll forgive me."'
+						'"Okay, fine... " He''s still clearly disappointed but he nods anyways. "But next time I want to cum on your face!"'
+						'"Maybe," you say with is what is probably a very frustrating wink.'
+						act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+					end
+
+					act'But I just washed my face':
+						cla & *clr
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershower.jpg"></center>'
+						'"But I just washed my face, Kolka. I don''t want to get cum on it after that."'
+						'"But we''re in the shower!" he protests. "What does it matter if I cum on your face? You can just rinse it off two seconds later!"'
+						act'Cum is hard to clean':
+							cla
+							*nl
+							'"Cum is hard to clean off! Even in the shower! It''s all sticky and gets everywhere. Even if you wipe it off your face, it gets on your hands, and then you have to be careful to get it all off before you run it through your hair."'
+							'Kolka opens his mouth to say something but nothing comes out. Guess he thought better of it.'
+							'"Hrmph! Always asking to cum on a girl''s face, never thinking about what a mess it makes or the trouble it causes for her! Boys!"'
+							act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+						end
+
+						act'Cum is still dirty':
+							cla
+							*nl
+							'"So what? It''s still dirty. It''s a sticky fluid that came out of your dick! That makes it dirty and would mean I''d have to use soap, which I don''t feel like doing twice. You should be grateful that I even swallowed!"'
+							'"It''s not dirty! Besides, I hear that cum is good for a girl''s skin. You should be <i>asking</i> me to cum on your face!"'
+							'"Pfft~!" You roll your eyes. "And where did you hear that? From some porno you were watching with your friends?"'
+							'"No!" he says quickly. You turn off the water and pull back the curtain, rolling your eyes again. "... maybe..." you hear him mutter again under his breath behind you.'
+							act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+						end
+					end
+
+					if trt_cumeater = 1:
+						act'I didn''t want to waste it':
+							cla & *clr
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershower.jpg"></center>'
+							'"I didn''t want to waste it. It''s one of my favorite treats!" you say, licking your lips.'
+							'Your brother stares at you for a moment, giving you a look.'
+							'"Slut." he says.'
+							'"Cum dispenser." you smile back.'
+							act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+						end
+					end
+				end
+
+				act'Spit':
+					cla
+					*nl
+					'Opening your mouth, you drool and let his cum drip down off your tongue before wadding up what''s left and spitting it onto the bottom of the bathtub.'
+					'"Thanks for the warning Kolka. I really appreciate it," you say, smiling as you standing up.'
+					'"But I wanted to cum on your face..." he says, disappointment seeping from his voice.'
+					act'I was having too much fun':
+						cla & *clr
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershower.jpg"></center>'
+						'"Sorry Kolka, I just couldn''t help myself! Blowing you was too much fun and I didn''t want to stop." You keep licking and sucking on his tip as if to make your point. "I hope you''ll forgive me."'
+						'"You could have at least swallowed if you weren''t going to let me give you a facial," he grumbles as you stand up.'
+						'"Maybe next time," you say with is what is probably a very frustrating wink.'
+						act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+					end
+
+					act'But I just washed my face':
+						cla & *clr
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershower.jpg"></center>'
+						'"But I just washed my face, Kolka. I don''t want to get cum on it after that."'
+						'"But we''re in the shower!" he protests. "What does it matter if I cum on your face? You can just rinse it off two seconds later!"'
+						act'Cum is hard to clean':
+							cla
+							*nl
+							'"Cum is hard to clean off! Even in the shower! It''s all sticky and gets everywhere. Even if you wipe it off your face, it gets on your hands, and then you have to be careful to get it all off before you run it through your hair."'
+							'Kolka opens his mouth but nothing comes out. Guess he thought better of whatever he was about to say.'
+							'"Hrmph! Always asking to cum on a girl''s face, never thinking about what a mess it makes or the trouble it causes for her! Boys!"'
+							act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+						end
+
+						act'It''s still dirty':
+							cla
+							*nl
+							'"So what? It''s still dirty. It''s a sticky fluid that comes out of your dick! That makes it dirty and would mean I''d have to use soap, which I don''t feel like doing twice."'
+							'"It''s not dirty! Besides, I hear that cum is good for a girl''s skin. You should be <i>asking</i> me to cum on your face!"'
+							'"Pfft~!" You roll your eyes. "And where did you hear that? From some porno you were watching with your friends?"'
+							'"No!" he says quickly. You turn off the water and pull back the curtain, rolling your eyes again. "... maybe..." you hear him mutter again under his breath.'
+							act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+						end
+					end
+				end
+			end
+			act'Let him cum on your face':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','shower_facial'
+		end
+	end
+
+	act'Let him fuck you':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck'
+	act'Offer him your ass':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_anal'
+end
+
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_first':
+	npc_rel['A34'] += 20
+	gs 'boystat','A34'
+	cla & *clr
+	if brotherSex < 7:brotherSex = 7
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/broshower2.mp4"></center>'
+	'You lean back into your brother, gripping his member and jerking it a few times to make sure he''s still hard enough for what you want to do next. You pull on him, carefully guiding his cock until you can feel the tip pressing against the entrance of pussy.'
+	if brother_knows_not_virgin = 1:
+		brotherfuck += 1
+		'"I was wondering if you were going to let me join the "Boys Who Fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>" Club," he says, grin radiating from behind you.'
+		*nl
+		act'It''s pretty exclusive':
+			cla
+			brotherclub = 1
+			'"Be grateful little brother. It''s a pretty exclusive club that not a lot of people get access to. What''re you trying to say about your dear sister? I might take offense to something like that," you say, putting on a pouty face.'
+			'His eyes go wide and immediately begins sputtering, his bravado evaporating instantaneously at the possibility that he might not get laid.'
+			'"I didn''t-! I just meant-! Sorry... I just... I mean... I''ve never been with a girl before... And you''re just so hot, and... I can''t believe you''d let me... You know... With you..." You laugh internally at his clumsy explanation but keep up your false face of disapproval. His eyes go even wider and he says, "Please! Don''t-! Don''t be mad... please..." You smile breaks through, deciding to stop messing around and let him off the hook. His embarrassment is kind of endearing. Your brother can be such a sweet boy sometimes.'
+			!!'"Not many <b>members</b> huh?" he says meaningfully, his dick twitching under your touch. You smile at him.'
+			'"It''s okay Kolka. I''m not mad. Let''s get you into the club. Why don''t I show you the <b>member only</b> entrance?"'
+			'"Don''t you mean member<b>s</b> only entrance sis?" he asks, confused.'
+			'"That''s not what I said," you whisper, pushing your hips back and swallowing him straight to the hilt.'
+			act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_first3'
+		end
+		act'This doesn''t make you''re special':
+			cla
+			brotherclub = 1
+			'"Sorry to say kiddo, but this doesn''t make you special," you smile wryly at him over your shoulder.'
+			'"What do you mean?" he asks, grin disappearing.'
+			'"There''s been a lot of members in that club." You position his tip at your entrance, lining him up for what you''re about to do next.'
+			'"A <b>lot.</b> Of <b>members.</b>" On your emphasized words, you thrust your hips backward to take his entire cock inside you in one go, causing your brother to gasp and grab you by the hips to steady himself.'
+			'"Inside. <i>My. <b>''Club.''</i></b>" you whisper into his ear.'
+			act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_first3'
+		end
+	else
+		brotherfuck += 1
+		'You feel Kolka tense up behind you and he hesitates.'
+		'"Is this...? Are you...?"'
+		'"My first time? A virgin?"'
+		*nl
+		if stat['vaginal'] = 0:
+			act'Yes, I''m a virgin':
+				npc_rel['A34'] += 20
+				cla
+				'"Yeah. I am." You smile at him. "I''m giving my first time to you little brother."'
+				'Still smiling, you push your ass towards him and impale yourself on his cock.'
+				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_first2'
+			end
+
+			act'No, I''m not (lie)':
+				cla
+				brothervirginlie = 1
+				'"Nope!" You smile at him. "Sorry to disappoint, but I lost my virginity a while back little brother."'
+				'You''re not really sure why you''re lying to him about this, but there''s no time to think about that as you push your ass towards him and impale yourself on his cock.'
+				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_first2'
+			end
+
+			act'No, I''m a slut (lie)':
+				cla
+				brothervirginlie = 2
+				'"Nope!" You smile at him. "Sorry to disappoint, but yours is just going to be one more of many different dicks that have been inside my pussy little brother."'
+				'You''re not really sure why you''re lying to him about this, especially with the implication that you''re a huge slut, but there''s no time to think about that as you push your ass towards him and impale yourself on his cock.'
+				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_first2'
+			end
+		else
+			act'No, I''m not':
+				cla
+				'"Nope!" You smile at him. "Sorry to disappoint, but I lost my virginity a while back little brother."'
+				'With one more quick jerk on his cock for good measure and push your ass towards him, swallowing his length with your pussy.'
+				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_first2'
+			end
+
+			act'No, I''m a slut':
+				cla
+				brother_knows_not_virgin = 1
+				'"Nope!" You smile at him. "Sorry to disappoint, but yours is just going to be one more of many different dicks that have been inside my pussy little brother."'
+				'You''re not really sure why you''re telling him about this, especially with the implication that you''re a huge slut, but there''s no time to think about that as you thrust your hips backward to take his entire length inside you in one go. Your brother gasps at the rush of having his cock entirely swallowed by your pussy, grabbing you by the hips to steady himself.'
+				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_first3'
+			end
+
+			act'Yes, you''re my first time (lie)':
+				npc_rel['A34'] += 10
+				cla
+				brothervirginlie = 3
+				'"Yeah. I am." You smile at him. "You''re my first time little brother."'
+				if guy >= 10:'You feel a little bad for lying to him, but you figure it''ll probably make him feel special if he thinks you''re giving him your virginity, especially considering the numerous quantity of dicks that''ve been inside you. You give his cock one more quick jerk for good measure and start pushing him in.'
+				if guy < 10:'You feel a little bad for lying to him, but you figure it''ll probably make him feel special if he thinks you''re giving him your virginity. You give his cock one more quick jerk for good measure and start pushing him inside you.'
+				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_first2'
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_first2':
+	eff_contra = iif(argc > 1,ARGS[1],sexcontra)
+	tmp = func('pregriskeval',eff_contra)
+	cla & *clr
+	if pcs_vag = 0:
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/broshowervirgin.mp4"></center>'
+		'Holding your breath, you push back on Kolka, feeling his tip stretch your pussy. He eventually pushes the entire length of his cock inside causing you to gasp in pain as his <<npc_dick[''A34'']>> cm dick tears through your hymen. Despite your pain, neither of you stop moving, continuing to thrust against each other.'
+		!!elseif stat['hidden_vaginal'] > 0:
+		!!	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/broshower.mp4"></center>'
+		!!	'Kolka slides inside you with surprising ease. Though his dick still stretches your pussy, you find it to be pleasant instead of painful. Of course you''ve heard stories that say it doesn''t hurt for some girls, but you always thought it was a myth or at least a rare occurrence. <i>I must be pretty lucky!<</i> you think to yourself.'
+	else
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/broshower.mp4"></center>'
+		'Your pussy easily swallows your brother''s <<npc_dick[''A34'']>> cm cock and you immediately start building into a rhythm, pushing back on him in time with his thrusts for maximum depth of penetration.'
+	end
+
+	act'Continue':
+		cla & *clr
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/broshower.mp4"></center>'
+		if pcs_vag = 0:
+			'Several minutes pass and your pain is long forgotten. The only thing you can feel now is the ecstasy of Kolka''s cock pumping in and out of your pussy. His hands come up to grope your breasts and you moan in pleasure. Is this what sex is? How did you live your life without it? Why did you wait so long to lose your virginity? Why didn''t you jump on your brother''s cock sooner?!'
+		elseif stat['hidden_vaginal'] > 0 and stat['vaginal'] = 0:
+			'Several minutes go by and you find yourself thoroughly enjoying your brother''s cock pump in and out of your pussy. His hands grope your breasts and you moan in pleasure. Is this what sex is? How did you live your life without it? Why did you wait so long to lose your virginity? Why didn''t you jump on your brother''s cock sooner?!'
+		else
+			'Several minutes go by as you enjoy Kolka''s cock. His hands come up to grope you, and you moan in pleasure, your breasts being used as leverage to fuck you harder. Fuck! He''s pretty good for his first time. Maybe you should have jumped on your brother''s dick ages ago!'
+		end
+		guy += 1
+		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
+		gs 'arousal','breasts', 1
+		gs 'stat'
+
+		if pcs_horny >= 90:
+			gs 'cum_call', '', 'A34', 1
+			*nl
+			'Your incestuous shower sex continues and you vaguely think that Kolka trying to tell you something but you''re too drunk on cock to hear what he''s saying. Suddenly, he pulls you tight, pushing himself as far into you as he can. Something spurts inside you, filling you up, sending you over the edge, orgasming hard on your brother''s cock.'
+			'As your orgasm winds down and your legs stop quivering, you lean forward against the shower wall, Kolka''s cock slipping from between your legs. You start to think about how empty you feel without a cock inside you when you realize you feel something dripping out from your pussy.'
+			'"Is... is that cum? Did you cum inside me?!" you pant.'
+			'"Y-yeah... I was trying to tell you that I was cumming but you didn''t say anything so..."'
+
+			if succubusflag = 0:
+				if birth_control['think_safe'] = 1 or tabletkishot >= 1:
+					'<i>Well,</i> you think to yourself, <i>It''s a good thing '+iif(birth_control['implant_status'] > 1, 'I have a birth control implant.', 'I''m on birth control.')+'</i>'
+				elseif mesec > 0:
+					'<i>Well,</i> you think to yourself, <i>I don''t think I can get pregnant when I''m on my period... right...?</i>'
+				elseif knowpreg = 1:
+					'<i>Well,</i> you think to yourself, <i>I''m already pregnant.</i>'
+				else
+					'<i>Damn...</i> You close your eyes, sighing as you feel another glob of Kolka''s cum drip from your pussy. <i>I should go buy a morning after pill from the pharmacy...</i>'
+				end
+			end
+			act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+		else
+			'Suddenly, you feel your brother tapping you on the shoulder.'
+			act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_fuck_cum'
+		end
+	end
+end
+if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_first3':
+	guy += 1
+	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', rand(5,10)
+	gs 'arousal','breasts', 1
+	gs 'stat'
+	eff_contra = iif(argc > 1,ARGS[1],sexcontra)
+	tmp = func('pregriskeval',eff_contra)
+	cla & *clr
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/broshower.mp4"></center>'
+	'Barely giving him any time at all to recover from your sudden start, you immediately break into a hard rhythm, thrusting your hips back and giving it your all. He''s your little brother after all. You should try to make his first time special. Soon enough, you start giving him tips.'
+	'"Hold my hips so you have more control."'
+	'"Grab my boobs if you like. Boobs are meant to be grabbed during sex.'
+	'"Don''t worry if you feel like you''re going to cum. It''s your first time so just let me kn-OW-OW-WOAH!"'
+	'Kolka''s really getting into it. He pumps in and out you, member slick with your juices. His hands come up to grab your breasts and you gasp when they''re used as leverage to fuck you harder, his cock reaching even deeper inside you. His cock! Oh god! It''s driving you insane! Even though it''s his first time, he''s actually pretty good! Fuck! You should have jumped on his dick ages ago!'
+	'Several minutes go by with you unable to think about anything except how good fucking your brother feels.'
+	'Suddenly, you feel him urgently tapping you on the shoulder.'
+	act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_fuck_cum'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck':
+	broshowerfuck = daystart
+	gs 'boystat','A34'
+	if brotherfuck < 1:gt 'brother_voyeur_sex', 'brother_shower_fuck_first'
+	brotherfuck += 1
+	if brotherSex < 7:brotherSex = 7
+	npc_rel['A34'] += 5
+	gt 'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_fuck_cum'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_anal':
+	broshowerfuck = daystart
+	gs 'boystat','A34'
+	brotheranal += 1
+	npc_rel['A34'] += 5
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
+		if pcs_anus = 0:
+			gt 'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_anal_vagv_analv'
+		else
+			gt 'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_anal_vagnv_analv'
+		end
+	else
+		if pcs_anus = 0:
+			gt 'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_anal_vagv_analnv'
+		else
+			gt 'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_anal_vagnv_analnv'
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_anal_vagv_analv':
+	*clr
+	cla
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowersex2.jpg"></center>'
+	'Kolka looks at you. You know he wants to go further, and you want to do more than a blowjob too, but you know you can''t.'
+	'"We have to stop. I want to do more, but if we continue... if I lose my virginity, then mother will kill me."' 
+	'Kolka looks confused, and with a hint of pleading in his voice says "But... I don''t get it. How would she know?"'
+	'You are momentarily surprised he doesn''t know before realizing that he has no reason to know. "Why do you think I have to go to the doctors every month? I have to get checked."'
+	'Kolka thinks for a moment before smiling. "Are my grades good enough to become a doctor?"'
+	act 'What a smartass':
+		*clr
+		cla
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowersex1.jpg"></center>'
+		'It irritates you that he jokes about a monthly task that you wish you did not have. "Don''t be a smartass..." A thought then comes through your head, and you nervously continue. "Unless... Would you... Do you want... Want to try anal instead? I know it''s not-"'
+		'"Yes!" Kolka says, interrupting you mid-sentence with much more enthusiasm than you were expecting.'  
+		'"Okay, but go slow. I''ve never done this before," you tell him.'
+		act 'Prepare yourself':
+			*clr
+			cla
+			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/broshower2.mp4"></center>'
+			'Kolka gives you a wide smile. "Okay, I''ll go slow, I promise. You can stop me if you want."' 
+			'You turn your back to him, unsure of what to do, so you decide to use your hands to keep your cheeks parted.  He puts one hand on your hip and slowly pushes the tip of his penis against your anus.'
+			'You suddenly panic about the lack of any lube, but decide that the water will be enough. At least you hope it will.'
+			guy += 1
+			$orgasm_or = 'no'
+			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 2
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Try to relax':
+				*clr
+				cla
+				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/showeranal3.mp4"></center>'
+				'As Kolka slowly enters you, you feel yourself unintentionally tighten your ass around his penis and your hands move to brace yourself against the wall. As you do this, Kolka briefly pauses before slowly going deeper. It''s an odd feeling; not exactly painful but not pleasurable either.'
+				'Kolka starts moving a little faster, and you realize that having water as lube isn''t that effective. You feel some burning pain as he begins picking up speed, but there is another feeling. You start to feel... pleasant; it''s not that much, but it''s definitely there.'
+				'You move a hand down to your clit, and while it''s not that easy, you manage to give yourself some extra stimulation. You soon realize that you''re beginning to feel good, really good. Your clit stimulation, the taboo act and now Kolka''s thrusting is turning from pleasant to... pleasure. Indeed, the pain is rapidly falling into history as your pleasure ramps up with every thrust.  Now you are finding it hard not moan in pleasure as this new experience is undeniably pushing you towards a powerful orgasm.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5
+				gs 'arousal', 'finger_clit', 2
+				gs 'stat'
+				act 'Enjoy':
+					*clr
+					cla
+					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/showeranal6.mp4"></center>'
+					'Just as you''re about to cum, you feel Kolka thrust deep and hold it as he cums deep in your bowels, pushing you over the edge. Unable to keep quiet, you moan as your climax tears though you, your body quivering as your knees become weak. You are steadied as Kolka holds you in a firm embrace from behind, squeezing your breasts as he does.'
+					'"That was..." you begin to say before you realize that you''re unsure what to say.'
+					gs 'cum_call', 'anal', 'A34', 1
+					gs 'arousal', 'finger_clit', 2
+					gs 'arousal','breasts', -1
+					$orgasm_txt = ''
+					$orgasm_or = 'custom'
+					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5
+					act 'Was it good for you?':
+						gs 'arousal', 'end'
+						gs 'stat'
+						*clr
+						cla
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brotherwash.jpg"></center>'
+						'You both quietly return to washing before Kolka asks "Was I, um... Was it okay? Did you enjoy it?"'
+						'You replay it in your mind as you say "Well it felt uncomfortable at first and even a bit painful, but by the end it was, well let''s just say, yes, I enjoyed it. Just let me know when you''re about to cum next time, okay?"'
+						'"Does that mean that there will be a next time?" he asks with a hopeful expression on his face.'
+						'"No promises," you say as you realise that he''s not the only one looking forward to trying it again.'
+						'The sit under the water together for a little while longer before you realize someone might notice that your brother is missing and become suspicious. You quickly shut off the water and dry him off, gathering Kolka''s clothes and shooing him into the hallway.'
+						act'Finish':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_anal_vagnv_analv':
+	*clr
+	cla
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowersex2.jpg"></center>'
+	'After a short internal debate over whether or not you should do it, you chew your bottom lip. "Kolka, I''m an anal virgin. Would you be willing to change that?" you ask nervously.'  
+	'He freezes for a second before a broad grin appears on his face. "I''d like that."'
+	'While you''re no virgin, anal sex presents problems that you''ve not had before. Kolka seems to be thinking the same as you and asks "So, how do you want to do this?"'
+	'"Go slow, and if I ask you to stop, please stop, okay?" you reply.'  
+	'"Okay, but what about lube? Is the water enough?"'  
+	'This question stops you. Thinking back to porn that you''ve seen, they often just spit, but that doesn''t sound like a good option to you now that you''re about to have something fairly large entering you.'  
+	'Kolka comes up with a suggestion. "I could try to use some of your pussy juice... You know, like one or two thrusts there first, then we try.  What do you think?"'  
+	'While you''re not sure if you like the label ''pussy juice'', it''s the only plan you''ve got.'
+	act '"Okay, let''s do that."':
+		*clr
+		cla
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/showeranal2.mp4"></center>'
+		'Moving in behind you, Kolka lines up with your pussy before thrusting in. Feeling this, you consider hitting the abort button and returning to what you''re more familiar with, but you want that new experience and still feel the need to try it.'
+		'You widen your stance and push your ass towards Kolka. He grips your hip and his cock slowly pushes at your virgin hole. As the head of Kolka''s cock enters you, he pauses and lets out an annoyed grunt.'
+		'You panic. "What is it? Am I, are we okay?! What''s wrong?!"'  
+		'"Sorry. yes it''s fine.  It''s just, well, perhaps we should have stopped the water. I don''t think our lube has lasted. What should we do?"'
+		guy += 1
+		$orgasm_or = 'no'
+		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 2
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'This is nice':
+			*clr
+			cla
+			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/showeranal3.mp4"></center>'
+			'You briefly think about switching back to ''normal'' shower sex, but you still want to try this and want to see it though.'  
+			'"Keep going," you say, and Kolka pushes deeper, stopping every few seconds to let you breathe before continuing.'  
+			'You can feel Kolka getting deeper when he says "God, you''re tight. I think you''re squeezing me with every heartbeat."'  
+			'"Sorry, I''ll try to stop..."' 
+			'"No, it''s not a complaint, it was just unexpected," he replies.'
+			act 'Try to relax':
+				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/showeranal6.mp4"></center>'
+				'After another minute, Kolka asks "Can I start to move now?"'  
+				'You take a deep breath. "Yes, but go slow."'  
+				'Kolka begins slowly thrusting, but gets into a rhythm as you notice that he''s slowly gaining speed. You could ask him to slow down, but decide against it. You can''t deny that it''s starting to feel good, and every Kolka pushes forward, the pain diminishes and pleasure replaces it.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 2
+				gs 'stat'
+				act 'Enjoy':
+					*clr
+					cla
+					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/showeranal6.mp4"></center>'
+					'You find yourself needing to brace yourself on the wall with your hands. You didn''t even notice, but you''ve bent forward, allowing Kolka better access as his speed increases.'
+					'You''re really getting into it now, and are surprised by how good you feel.'
+					'"I''m about to cum!" Kolka cries.' 
+					'"Do it!" is all you can say. As Kolka bursts inside you, he pushes deep and if he wasn''t holding you, you may have lost your balance. After a performance like that, you don''t want to complain though.'
+					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 3
+					gs 'cum_call', 'anal', 'A34', 1
+					gs 'stat'
+					act 'Wash yourselves':
+						gs 'arousal', 'end'
+						gs 'stat'
+						*clr
+						cla
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brotherwash.jpg"></center>'
+						'As you both quickly rewash yourselves, Kolka asks "So, was it good? More importantly, will you want to do it again?"'  
+						'You''re slightly annoyed by the ''more importantly'' part, but can''t deny that you''ve enjoyed your first butt fucking.'  
+						'"It was..." you say, letting it hang for a moment before finishing with "Good. Will it happen again? I''ll think about it."'
+						act'Finish':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+	
+if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_anal_vagv_analnv':
+	*clr
+	cla
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowersex2.jpg"></center>'
+	'You want, no, <i>need</i> to continue, but thanks to your mother''s stupid rule you know your pussy is out of bounds, but you do have other options...' 
+	'"Kolka, I can''t let you have my pussy, but would you be okay with anal?" You ask and Kolka''s eyes light up.' 
+	act 'Prepare yourself':
+		*clr
+		cla
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/showeranal3.mp4"></center>'
+		'You''re no anal virgin, but sex in a shower isn''t as easy as it looks in porn; the water also makes proper lube impossible. You spread your legs and lean forward, pushing your ass towards Kolka while bracing yourself on the wall.'
+		'Kolka''s cock prods at your anus as he gets into position, placing one hand on your hip. You''re enjoying the anticipation when Kolka slowly but steadily breaches the resistance of your ass as he pushes himself deep into you. He takes a few seconds before beginning a slow but strong piston motion.'
+		guy += 1
+		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 3
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Enjoy':
+			*clr
+			cla
+			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/showeranal6.mp4"></center>'
+			'You find that you are reciprocating his motion as you push back into his thrusts and clench down as he withdraws from you. Kolka reaches up and grabs your right breast, squeezing it hard and thumbing your nipple as his pace increases.'
+			'You know the noise of the shower can only hide so much, and are doing your best to keep your voice down as Kolka says "I''m about to cum."'  
+			'You''re only able to respond with a nod as you''re biting your lower lip to help keep quiet. You feel Kolka push in hard as he cums deep inside you.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'breast', -3
+			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 3
+			gs 'cum_call', 'anal', 'A34', 1
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Clean up':
+				*clr
+				cla
+				gs 'arousal', 'end'
+				gs 'stat'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brotherwash.jpg"></center>'
+				'Straightening up, you both go back to washing yourselves in silence before you turn to face him.'  
+				'"You really are the best sister." Kolka says.'  
+				'"I know," you reply with a wide grin.'
+				act'Finish':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+	
+if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_anal_vagnv_analnv':
+	*clr
+	cla
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowersex2.jpg"></center>'
+	'"Sorry Kolka," you say while doing your best to pretend that you''re not going to continue, before pushing your backside towards him. "You''re going to have to settle for anal today."'  
+	'He grins before sighing. "If I must."'  
+	'You both giggle before Kolka places his hands on your hips and pulls you back. You lean forward, using your arms to brace yourself on the wall and taking a wider stance to give Kolka room behind you.'
+	guy += 1
+	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 3
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Enjoy':
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/showeranal6.mp4"></center>'
+		'As the water from the shower falls on your back and between your ass cheeks, you feel Kolka breaching your anus in one powerful motion. As the glorious feeling of his cock fills you up, he reaches forward and grasps your breasts. A moment later, he''s started moving, and you meet his thrusts by pushing back, willing him to go deeper. Every time he withdraws, you feel yourself gripping him to unconsciously pull him back in.'
+		'"I''m about to cum," he says, and you simply nod. Aafter a final flurry of thrusts, Kolka cums, flooding your bowels with his seed.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 3
+		gs 'cum_call', 'anal', 'A34', 1
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Clean up':
+			gs 'arousal', 'end'
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershower.jpg"></center>'
+			'Straightening up, you both go back to washing yourselves in silence before you turn to face him.'  
+			'"The things I do for you..." Kolka says with a cheeky grin.' 
+			'You just pull a face and stick out your tongue before you both giggle and get out of the shower.'
+			act'Finish':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+!! ----------------------------------------------------------- Cum Variants  ---------------------------------------------------------------------
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/broshower.mp4"></center>'
+	if brotherfuck ! 1:brothercumchoice = rand(1,5)
+	if brotherfuck = 1:
+		brothercumchoice = 1
+	else
+		'"Nnngh~!" you bite your lip as you feel your brother''s <<npc_dick[''A34'']>> cm cock slide all the way into your pussy. You waste no time and the two of you start furiously fucking each other like the sex crazed teenagers you are.'
+		$orgasm_txt = 'After a few minutes of this, you can''t take it anymore and cum. You grab the shower faucet tight, gasping as Kolka continues to pound you even as you quiver in the throes of your orgasm.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', rand(5,10)
+		if brothercumchoice < 5:'Suddenly, Kolka starts tapping you on the shoulder.'
+	end
+	gs 'stat'
+	if brothercumchoice = 1:
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>-! I''m gonna cum! What should I do?"'
+		act'Not inside me!':
+			cla & *clr
+			gs 'arousal','hj', 1
+			gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', 'A34', 1
+			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/showercum.mp4"></center>'
+			'"Not inside me!" you cry out. You quickly pull yourself off him and turn around, grabbing his cock with your hand and jerking him furiously until he groans and you feel his hot cum spattering all over your stomach.'
+			act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+		end
+
+		act'Suck him off':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','shower_swallow'
+
+		act'Let him cum on your face':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','shower_facial'
+		
+		act'Fuck him till he cums':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','shower_creampie'
+
+		act'Fill me up!': gt'brother_voyeur_sex','shower_fill_me_up'
+		
+	elseif brothercumchoice = 2:
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>-! I''m almost there! Can I cum inside you today?"'
+		if knowpreg = 0 and thinkpreg = 0:
+			act'Push him off (not inside!)':
+				cla & *clr
+				gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', 'A34', 1
+				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/showercum.mp4"></center>'
+				'"No! Not inside me!" you cry out. You push him off you and turn around. Grabbing his cock, you jerk him vigorously until he groans, spraying hot cum that spatters all over your stomach.'
+				if birth_control['think_safe'] = 0:
+					'Feeling his spunk on your stomach, you suddenly grow annoyed and wonder why you even finished him off. "What the fuck Kolka?! Are you <i>trying</i> to get me pregnant?"'
+					if birth_control['kolka_knows'] = 1:
+						birth_control['kolka_knows'] = 2
+						'"I thought you were on birth control!"'
+						'"Well I stopped!"'
+						'"Well how was I supposed to know that?"'
+					end
+				end
+				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+			end
+		end
+
+		act'Push him off (not today)':
+			cla & *clr
+			gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', 'A34', 1
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/showercum.mp4"></center>'
+			'"Not today Kolka." You push your brother off of you and turn around. Grabbing his cock, you jerk him vigorously until he groans, spraying hot cum that spatters all over your stomach.'
+			if birth_control['kolka_knows'] = 1:
+				'"Hey what gives?" he complains. "I thought you were on birth control? Why can''t I cum inside?"'
+				if birth_control['think_safe'] = 0:
+					birth_control['kolka_knows'] = 2
+					'"Sorry, I stopped using it a while ago. If you came inside me, you could have seriously knocked me up."'
+					'Kolka gulps at the realization of what you just said.'
+				else
+					'"I just didn''t want you to cum inside me today," you say irritatedly.'
+					'"But why does it matter if you''re on birth control?"'
+					'"Because I said so! It''s my body! I get a say in where you cum on it!"'
+				end
+			end
+			if birth_control['think_safe'] = 0:'"Sorry," you smile apologetically. "I''m not on birth control and I can''t afford to get knocked up. Especially not by my little brother."'
+			act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+		end
+		
+		act'Fuck him till he cums':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','shower_creampie'
+			
+		act'Fill me up!':gt 'brother_voyeur_sex','shower_fill_me_up'
+		
+	elseif brothercumchoice = 3:
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>-! I''m almost there! Let me cum on your face!"'
+		act'Let him cum on your face':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','shower_facial'
+
+		act'Ignore him, make him cum inside you':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','shower_forced_creampie'
+
+	elseif brothercumchoice = 4:
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>-! I''m almost there! Can I cum in your mouth?"'
+		brotherbjcomment = 3
+		act'Let him cum in your mouth':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','shower_swallow'
+
+		act'Ignore him, make him cum inside you':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','shower_forced_creampie'
+			
+	elseif brothercumchoice = 5:
+		act'Continue':
+			cla & *clr
+			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/broshower.mp4"></center>'
+			gs 'cum_call', '', 'A34', 1
+			*nl
+			'Suddenly Kolka grabs you tight, thrusting his cock into you as deep as it can go and you can feel him pulsating inside you.'
+			if pcs_horny >= 95:
+				broshowerorgasm = daystart
+				$orgasm_or = 'custom'
+				$orgasm_txt = 'The sensation sends you over the edge and you clench down on him hard, your orgasm rocking you in waves, and leaving your legs wobbly when it finally subsides.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 1
+			end
+			'A moment later, he pulls out of you and you can feel a thick liquid dripping from your pussy. You frown at that, and turn your head around to face him.'
+			'"What just... wait, is that...? Did you just cum inside me?"'
+			if birth_control['kolka_knows'] = 1:
+				'"Well yeah," he says. "You''re on birth control anyways right?"'
+				if birth_control['think_safe'] = 0:
+					act'"I''m not on it anymore you idiot!"':
+						cla & *nl
+						birth_control['kolka_knows'] = 2
+						'"I''m not on birth control anymore you fucking idiot!"'
+						'"What?? But you said-!"'
+						'"Well you didn''t tell me about it! How was I supposed to know?!"'
+						'"Fuck!"'
+						'<i>Maybe I can get a morning after pill from the pharmacy,</i> you think to yourself.'
+						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+					end
+					
+					act'"I''m not but it''s okay"':
+						cla & *nl
+						birth_control['kolka_knows'] = 2
+						'"Actually... I kinda stopped using it a while ago..."'
+						'"What?? But you said-!"'
+						'"I know, I know. I''m sorry Kolka, this is my fault, I should have told you. But now you know I guess?" you smile weakly at him.'
+						'<i>Maybe I can get a morning after pill from the pharmacy,</i> you think to yourself.'
+						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+					end
+				else
+					act'"Was just asking"':
+						cla & *nl
+						if broshowerorgasm = daystart:
+							'"Yup," you smile. "So it''s no problem. I was just asking because I was a little lightheaded after that. I think we came at the same time."'
+							'"Do you orgasm every time someone cums inside you?" he asks, raising an eyebrow.'
+							'"Only if I''ve been properly fucked beforehand," you respond wryly.'
+						else
+							'"Yup," you smile. "Was just asking because I wasn''t sure what happened."'
+							'"You didn''t feel me cum inside you?" he asks, raising an eyebrow?"'
+							'"I did, I just didn''t understand why you were cumming without making me cum first. I thought you were a better lover than that," you respond wryly.'
+						end
+						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+					end
+					
+					act'"You still need to ask" (tease)':
+						cla & *nl
+						'"Well," you chide him, "you still need to ask."'
+						'"How come? It''s not like you''re in any danger are you?"'
+						'"No, but I like telling you to cum inside me," you smirk.'
+						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+					end
+					
+					act'"You still need to ask"':
+						cla & *nl
+						'"Well, you still need to ask," you chide him.'
+						'"How come? It''s not like you''re in any danger are you?"'
+						'"No, but you still need to ask. It''s my pussy and it''s my right to choose whether you''re filling it with cum or not."'
+						'"Tch. Whatever."'
+						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+					end
+				end
+			else
+				'Kolka''s eyes are wide and filled with worry.'
+				'"I am <i>so</i> sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>! I didn''t mean to! I just couldn''t hold it in and before I could say anything I just-!"'
+				if birth_control['think_safe'] = 1:
+					birth_control['kolka_knows'] = 1
+					act'"I''m on birth control but be careful"':
+						cla & *nl
+						'"It''s okay Kolka, I''m on birth control," you reassure him. His expression melts with visible relief. "But still, you need to be more careful. If I forget to take my pills or stop for some reason, you cumming inside me like that could be really dangerous. I could really get pregnant."'
+						'He nods back at you in understanding. "I''m sorry," he says again. "I''ll be more careful in the future."'
+						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+					end
+					
+					act'"I''m on birth control so you don''t have to worry"':
+						cla & *nl
+						'"It''s okay Kolka, I''m on birth control," you reassure him. His expression melts with visible relief. "So that means you can cum inside me as much as you like and you don''t have to worry."'
+						'You wink at him and his jaw drops open. He looks down at your cum dripping pussy and you can feel a hunger exuding from him.'
+						'<i>Oops. I might have just created a monster,</i> you think to yourself.'
+						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+					end
+					act'Play a prank on him':
+						cla & *nl
+						'"Oh my god," you say, adopting an expression of severe panic. "You just came inside me! Your own sister! Do you have any idea what that means?"'
+						'He wilts back from you. "I-"'
+						'"I could get pregnant Kolka! I''m only <<age>>! I''m not ready to be a mother! Are you ready to be a father?? If I have a baby, are you going to take responsibility? Oh god, what is <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> going to think? Her son knocking up his sister?!"'
+						'Kolka''s face visibly pales. "Oh shit! No! What are we going to do? I don''t want to be a dad! I don''t want to get in trouble for this! I-! I-!"'
+						'He''s on the verge of tears now and you can''t hold back any longer and bust into near uncontrollable laughter. Your body is wracked with giggles, trying not to let your laughs escape the room and echo outside the door.'
+						'"WHY ARE YOU LAUGHING?! THIS IS SERIOUS! YOU WERE SERIOUS A SECOND AGO!!"'
+						'"Shhhhh!" you hush him, still laughing. "Pipe down would you?? Do you want <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and dad to find out? Relax, I''m just fucking with you. I''m on birth control, I''m not gonna get pregnant."'
+						act'Continue':
+							cla & *clr
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/vanrpar.jpg"></center>'
+							'"What the fuck! Are you fucking kidding me?!"'
+							'"Would you rather I not be?" you giggle, his reactions sending you into another fit. "Would you rather have had your sperm swarming around my unprotected uterus looking for eggs to impregnate?"'
+							'"You know what I mean!" His anger has you cackling further and you have to spray yourself in the face with the shower head just to calm down.'
+							act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+						end
+					end
+				else
+					if succubusflag = 0:
+						if mesec > 0:
+							act'"It''s okay, I''m on my period"':
+								cla & *nl
+								'"It''s okay Kolka, I''m on my period right now. I don''t think I can get pregnant on my period."'
+								'His face sighs with visible relief.'
+								'"We got lucky this time. Consider it a freebie," you smile at him.'
+								act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+							end
+							act'"You need to be more careful!"':
+								cla & *nl
+								'"You need to be more careful!" you scold him. "What if I get pregnant?!"'
+								'"I know! I know! I''m sorry!"'
+								'You huff out in anger but turn back to face him again anyways.'
+								'"Look, I was on my period this time and I don''t think I can get pregnant on my period. But you should know better! If I wasn''t on my period right now this could have been really bad! So show some self control next time!" He nods fearfully in agreement.'
+								act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+							end
+						elseif knowpreg = 1:
+							'<i>Well,</i> you think to yourself, <i>I''m already pregnant.</i>'
+							act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+						else
+							act'"It''s okay, it was an accident"':
+								cla & *nl
+								brother['cp_accident'] += 1
+								'"It''s okay Kolka," you say, trying to calm him down. "Look, I''m not mad, it was just an accident."'
+								'"But-!"'
+								'"Yeah, I know. I could get pregnant from this. But we''ll just have to hope I don''t. We can''t change it now, we''ll just have to be more careful in the future."'
+								'"The future? You mean..."'
+								'"Yes, I''m still going to keep fucking you Kolka," you smile at him. "Just cause this happened doesn''t mean I''m going to leave you alone. So just learn from the mistake and we''ll move on from it together, okay? Maybe I can buy a morning after pill from the pharmacy later."'
+								act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+							end
+							act'"You need to be more careful!"':
+								cla & *nl
+								'"You need to be more careful!" you scold him. "What if I get pregnant?!"'
+								'"I know! I know! I''m sorry!"'
+								'You huff out in anger but turn back to face him again anyways.'
+								'"I''m not on birth control! This is really dangerous!"'
+								'"I know! I know!"'
+								'"Fuck! What the fuck were you thinking?!"'
+								'You continue to swear at your brother for the next minute while he pleads for your forgiveness.'
+								'<i>Maybe I can get a morning after pill from the pharmacy,</i> you think to yourself.'
+								act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+							end
+						end
+						if brother['cp_accident'] >= 5:
+							act'"Plan B is expensive!"':
+								brother['cp_accident'] += 1
+								cla & *nl
+								'"Come on Kolka, I''m going to have to buy another morning after pill now! I know accidents happen but this is getting expensive!"'
+								'"Well what if you started taking birth control? Then I can cum in you as much any time right?"'
+								'"That''s not the point Kolka. You need to have more self control!"'
+								'<i>Though he is right...</i>'
+								act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+							end
+						end
+					else
+						'"It''s okay Kolka, I''m on birth control," you lie. His expression melts with visible relief. "So that means you can cum inside me as much as you like and you don''t have to worry."'
+						'You wink at him and his jaw drops open. He looks down at your cum dripping pussy and you can feel a hunger exuding from him.'
+						'<i>Oops. I might have just created a monster,</i> you think to yourself. <i>Well it''s not like I could have told him the truth that I''m a magical sex demon now could I?</i>'
+						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_swallow':
+	cla & *clr
+	brotherbjcomment = rand(1,2)
+	gs 'boystat','A34'
+	gs 'arousal','bj', 1
+	gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A34', 1
+	gs 'stat'
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/showerbj.mp4"></center>'
+	if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+		'Sinking to your knees, you barely put the tip of Kolka''s cock in before he explodes between your lips. Cum fills your mouth and you contemplate what to do with it.'
+	else
+		'You keep sucking on Kolka''s cock until he starts tapping on your head.'
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>-! I''m gonna-!"'
+		'He doesn''t even finish the word before you feel hot liquid squirting into your mouth.'
+		'"... cum."'
+	end
+
+	act'Swallow':
+		cla & *clr
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/showerbj.mp4"></center>'
+		'You suck a little more, making sure you''ve drained him to the last drop and then withdraw your mouth with carefully closed lips. You look up at him, meeting his eyes through the falling water drops, and swallow his sperm in one gulp.'
+		act'"Let''s finish up"':
+			cla & *clr
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershower.jpg"></center>'
+			'You stand up without further comment, letting the water run over your body a little more and making sure your hair is thoroughly rinsed.'
+			'"Come on Kolka, let''s finish up quickly before someone starts wondering where we are."'
+			if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+				act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+			else
+				act'Finish showering together': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+			end
+		end
+
+		act'Stare intimately':
+			cla
+			*nl
+			'Still looking into his eyes, you stare at him and lean forward to give him a very long and intimate kiss on the tip of his cock before standing up. The two of you hold each other in continued silence, spending a few more minutes under the water and basking in the afterglow together.'
+			if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+				act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+			else
+				act'Finish showering together': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+			end
+		end
+
+		if trt_cumeater = 1:
+			act'"Tasty!"':
+				cla & *clr
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershower.jpg"></center>'
+				'"Mmm!" you smile at him. "Say, you''re pretty tasty!" you say, playfully sucking and licking his cock little more before finishing up with a light kiss on the tip and standing up. "Might have to get myself another drink later! ''Right off the tap'' if you know what I mean," winking at him.'
+				if brotherbjcomment = 1:
+					'"That really tastes good to you?"'
+					'"Mhm," you nod, letting the water run through your hair a little more. "Didn''t used to at first. But maybe it''s just an acquired taste. Or maybe little brothers are just the best vintage of cum!" You grin and wiggle your eyebrows at him.'
+					act'Finish showering together': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+				elseif brotherbjcomment = 2:
+					'Kolka regards you with a bit of a look as you stand back up.'
+					'"What?" you ask at him.'
+					'"You''re kind of a slut, aren''t you <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+					act'Feign insult':
+						cla
+						*nl
+						'You gasp in mock indignation. "Kolka! How dare you! I have never been anything other than ladylike! How could you call your beloved sister a slut?"'
+						'"Probably because she loves the taste of cum," he snickers at you while you rinse your hair one last time.'
+						'"Have you considered maybe it''s just yours?" you ask, looking over your shoulder.'
+						'"A cumslut is still a cumslut, even if it''s only for one kind."'
+						'You roll your eyes. He''s being a punk but you can''t find the anger to be annoyed with him. He does have a bit of a point after all.'
+						act'Finish showering together': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+					end
+
+					act'Careful what you say':
+						cla
+						*nl
+						'"Hey! Careful what you say little brother," you say admonishingly. "Your big sister might stop doing you ''favors'' if you act too much like a brat."'
+						'"Hey, I can''t help it if my big sister is a slut!" he grins. "I just call it like I see it, and girls who swallows are usually sluts. Besides, I don''t think I have to worry too much. If you stopped blowing me, where else would you get your favorite drink?"'
+						if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+							'You roll your eyes. "I''m a slut remember? Maybe I''ll just go around the corner and blow someone else!" you growl at him. Tearing back the curtain, you step out of the tub somewhat annoyed with Kolka. Partially because he''s being a punk, but also partially because he''s actually kind of right. Fucking your brother in the shower and swallowing his cum <i>is</i> pretty slutty...'
+							act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+						else
+							'You roll your eyes. "I''m a slut remember? Maybe I''ll just go around the corner and blow someone else!" You growl at him and shut off the water. Tearing back the curtain, you step out of the tub somewhat annoyed with Kolka. Partially because he''s being a punk, but also partially because he''s actually kind of right. Swallowing your brother''s cum <i>is</i> pretty slutty...'
+							act'Finish showering together': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+						end
+					end
+
+					act'Yeah, I am':
+						cla
+						*nl
+						'"Uhmm... yeah? What tipped you off? Was it the part where I gave you shower head?"'
+						'"No, it was the part where you swallowed my cum like a shot of vodka. Only sluts swallow like that," he says, grinning.'
+						'You punch him in the arm playfully but you aren''t really mad. He does have a point after all.'
+						if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+							act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+						else
+							act'Finish showering together': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+						end
+					end
+
+					act'Kiss him to gross him out':
+						cla
+						*nl
+						'You frown at him and without warning fling your arms around his neck to kiss him with as much tongue as you can. He sputters and reels backward, pushing you away.'
+						'"Ugh! Ew! Gross! What the hell <<$pcs_nickname>>?! I just came in your mouth! I don''t want to taste that!"'
+						'He rips open the shower curtain and you grin back in satisfaction as he stumbles out to escape.'
+						'"Well maybe you shouldn''t be calling girls sluts just because they''re nice enough to swallow your cum!"'
+						'<i>Well,</i> you think to yourself. <i>I didn''t <b>just</b> swallow. I did also say I thought it was tasty. I suppose that is a bit slutty isn''t it?</i>'
+						if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+							act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+						else
+							act'Finish showering together': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+						end
+					end
+
+					act'Only for you(sisterly)':
+						cla
+						*nl
+						'"Only for you!" You wrap your arms around him, smothering him and rubbing your head against his cheek. "I just love you so very much! What sister could stop herself from slutting up for such a cute baby brother?"'
+						'"Ack!" he cries out and shoves you away. "Get off of me! Weirdo!"'
+						if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+							'"Hey! What''s wrong with that?" you grin at him. "I''d say it''s pretty weird to for your sister to let you fuck her in the shower. I thought you liked that! Don''t you want me to be a slutty weirdo then?"'
+							'"Bah!" he says, clambering out of the shower to escape you, grumbling as he does so. "More slut and less weirdo!"'
+							act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+						else
+							'"Hey! What''s wrong with that?" you grin at him. "I''d say it''s pretty weird to get slutty blowjobs from your sister in the shower. I thought you liked that! Don''t you want me to be a slutty weirdo then?"'
+							'"Bah!" he says, clambering out of the shower to escape you, grumbling as he does so. "More slut and less weirdo!"'
+							act'Finish showering together': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+						end
+					end
+
+					act'Only for you (loving)':
+						pcs_horny += 25
+						gs 'stat'
+						cla & *clr
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brotherpussyfeel.mp4"></center>'
+						'"Only for you," you whisper, suddenly serious, looking longingly into his eyes.'
+						'He looks back at you a hesitant expression on his face. You lean in, wrapping your arms around him and pressing your breasts into his chest.'
+						'"Yes, I''m a slut," you murmur into his ear. "I would never be a slut for anyone else Kolka," taking his hand. "But I''ll happily be a slut for you."'
+						'With your final words you press his hand against your pussy and the heat between your legs.'
+						'Neither of you say anything for a few minutes, standing still with your breasts still pressed against him and his fingers gently working themselves in and out of your pussy. You realize you can''t stay in there together too long, lest someone become suspicious and you wistfully pull away, Kolka''s fingers slipping from your pussy as you do.'
+						if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+							act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+						else
+							act'Finish showering together': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+						end
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+
+	act'Spit':
+		cla & *clr
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/showerbj.mp4"></center>'
+		'"Yeeeech..."'
+		'Opening your mouth, you drool and let his cum drip down off your tongue before wadding up what''s left and spitting it onto the bottom of the bathtub.'
+		if broshowerfuck = daystart: '"Thanks for the warning Kolka," you say, smiling as you standing up.'
+		if brotherbjcomment = 1:
+			'"Sorry sis," he says looking somewhat ashamed. "I just couldn''t hold it any longer. I tried, I really did!"'
+			'"It''s okay Kolka," you smile up at him. "It happens sometimes. Just try to warn me a little sooner next time, okay?" He nods promisingly.'
+			if brotherbj > 5:'You suppress a grin when he promises to do better in the future. You''ve given him enough blowjobs to suspect that he doesn''t give any warning because he wants to cum in your mouth. He never seems to have this problem when he asks to give you a facial. <i>Oh well,</i> you mentally shrug to yourself. <i>What''s a girl to do?</i>'
+			'"Now come on, let''s finish up before someone wonders where we are."'
+			if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+				act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+			else
+				act'Finish showering together': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+			end
+		elseif brotherbjcomment = 2:
+			'"A little warning next time maybe?"'
+			'"Sorry sis. Your mouth just felt so good and your blowjobs are so great and... Sorry... I just couldn''t hold it."'
+			'"It''s okay Kolka," you smile up at him. "It''s not like I can be mad at you for saying I''m good at giving head." You give him a quick kiss on the tip of his cock before standing up.'
+			'"Now come on, let''s finish up before someone wonders where we are."'
+			if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+				act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+			else
+				act'Finish showering together': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_facial':
+	cla & *clr
+	brotherbjcomment = rand(1,2)
+	gs 'boystat','A34'
+	gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A34', 1
+	gs 'stat'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/facial1.jpg"></center>'
+	if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+		'You kneel down in front of Kolka, jerking his cock off. He starts to cum and as the first spurt hits you, you squeeze your eyes shut, continuing to jerk your brother until your face is thoroughly coated and feel no more droplets.'
+	elseif brothershowerbj = daystart:
+		'You let his cock slip out of your mouth and close your eyes in anticipation, listening to the light fapping sound of your brother jerking off just centimeters in front of you. Within seconds, you feel his hot cum spattering all over you. It''s a surprisingly big load, as you feel several spurts hit your face before he''s finally done ejaculating.'
+	end
+	if brotherbjcomment = 1:
+		'"That''s a pretty good look for you. Ever consider going out like that?"'
+		act'Hardy har har':
+			cla
+			*nl
+			'"Hardy, har, har." Even with your eyes closed, you can feel his self satisfied grin radiating towards you. You squeeze your eyelids tighter, feeling blindly for the water stream to rinse Kolka''s cum off, pushing him out of the way when you realize he''s blocking it. "You ever consider going out with my foot up your ass?"'
+			'"Hey, I''m only asking! You never know, you might start a new trend!" You finish wiping the last of his cum off your face, grimacing when you see that it''s now stuck to your hands instead. You turn, wiping it on your brother''s arm. "Hey!"'
+			'"Maybe you should try wearing it yourself," you retort sarcastically, ignoring his complaint. "''You never know, you might start a new trend!''"'
+			if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+			else
+				act'Finish showering together': gt 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+			end
+		end
+
+		act'Only on Sundays':
+			cla & *clr
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/facial2.jpg"></center>'
+			'"Sometimes. Only on Sundays though. White cum probably goes well with a white dress at Divine Liturgy."'
+			'You hear him snicker and grin at him with closed eyes, flicking your tongue out to have a taste of the spunk slowly dripping down your face. You motion for Kolka to move aside and let you rinse your face off.'
+			'"Good for spreading a reputation as a town slut too," he adds.'
+			'Finishing rinsing off your face you reply, "Well it''s not like they can complain about wearing my best makeup to church," causing you both to muffle laughter.'
+			if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+			else
+				act'Finish showering together': gt 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+			end
+		end
+
+		act'Why? Are you willing to help?':
+			cla & *clr
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/facial2.jpg"></center>'
+			'"Why do you ask?" you ask, flicking your tongue out to catch a taste of cum, eyes still closed. "Did you want to help me put it on every morning?"'
+			'You wipe the spunk out of your eyes to can see Kolka grinning at you. "Well of course I would! What kind of brother would I be if I wasn''t willing to help my sister put on her best makeup?"'
+			'"Mhm," you hum, sucking the tart semen off your fingers. "And you would be doing this for completely selfless reasons with no ulterior motive I''m sure, especially not to get a free blowjob in the morning."'
+			'You rinse the rest of the cum off your face as Kolka continues, "Of course I wouldn''t be doing this <i>just</i> for blowjobs. I''d hope to get a few morning fucks in too!" You smack his arm, rolling your eyes but smiling anyways.'
+			if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+			else
+				act'Finish showering together': gt 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+			end
+		end
+
+		act'I only did this because I owed you one':
+			cla
+			*nl
+			'"I only did this because I owed you one," You say, wiping the cum from your eyes with your hands. Your eyes clear, you see a questioning look on his face. "Did you already forget? I promised I''d let you cum on my face this time."'
+			'"Oh! Right."'
+			'"Yeah. Right. So instead of making fun of me, be grateful that you have a sister who keeps her promises."'
+			'"But what if I''m not making fun of you? Seriously, my cum on your face is one of my favorite looks for you!"'
+			'You roll your eyes, but despite yourself you can''t suppress a smile.'
+			'"So you really don''t like getting facials?" he asks.'
+			act'It''s not all that bad':
+				cla
+				*nl
+				'"It''s not all that bad I guess," you say. "It''s just not something I want <i>every</i> time, you know?"'
+				if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+				else
+					act'Finish showering together': gt 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+				end
+			end
+			act'I prefer to swallow':
+				cla
+				*nl
+				'"Nah," you say. "I prefer to swallow."'
+				'You grin lewdly at him and you can practically feel him drooling.'
+				if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+				else
+					act'Finish showering together': gt 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+				end
+			end
+			act'I prefer creampies':
+				cla
+				*nl
+				'"Nah," you say. "I prefer it when people cum inside me."'
+				'You grin lewdly at him and you can practically feel him drooling.'
+				if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+				else
+					act'Finish showering together': gt 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+				end
+			end
+				
+		end
+	else
+		'"What''s it feel like? Having cum on your face like that?"'
+		act'Sticky':
+			cla
+			*nl
+			'"Sticky," you say, squeezing your eyes tight, feeling blindly for the water stream to rinse your face off. "To be honest, it''s not that enjoyable for me."'
+			'"Really?" Kolka helps you find the showerhead and you start scrubbing your face, annoyed at how it ends up sticking to your hands instead of just sliding down the drain. "If it''s so annoying, why do girls you let people give them facials?"'
+			'Your eyes finally clear of the viscous liquid, you look pointedly at Kolka. "Why do boys always want to cum on girls faces?" you ask, raising an eyebrow and before realizing there''s still a wad of spunk still stuck in it.'
+			'Kolka''s lips twist as he sees your point. "Well... We don''t <i>always</i> want to cum on your faces... Sometimes we want you to swallow instead." Your face finally clean, you shut off the water, rolling your eyes at your brother''s justification.'
+			if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+			else
+				act'Finish showering together': gt 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+			end
+		end
+
+		act'Why don''t you find out?':
+			cla
+			*nl
+			'"Why don''t you find out for yourself if you''re so curious," you say, frowning and blindly searching for the water stream to rinse your face. "I''m sure it wouldn''t be too hard for you to cum all over yourself and wear it on your face."'
+			'"Yeesh, I was just asking," Kolka complains.'
+			'"Yeah, well I''m just telling," you respond, grimacing as you wipe the sticky liquid from your eyes so you can find the showerhead.'
+			'<i>Ugh. Maybe I should have just swallowed,</i> you think to yourself. <i>At least I wouldn''t have to deal with this mess if I had.</i>'
+			if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+			else
+				act'Finish showering together': gt 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+			end
+		end
+
+		act'Feels pretty good':
+			cla & *clr
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/facial2.jpg"></center>'
+			'"Feels pretty good actually," you say cheerfully. "It''s kind of like getting a face mask except it''s hot and comes with a sense of flattery that your face is the place that someone wanted to blow their load."'
+			'"Huh. Wouldn''t have guessed that."'
+			'Your tongue instinctively flicks out to catch a liquid you feel dribbling down your cheek and you feel an overwhelming lack of surprise when it tastes like cum.'
+			act'Better than having to swallow':
+				cla
+				*nl
+				'"Yech-!" you stick your tongue out in distaste of the bitter sperm. "I''ll tell you what else, getting a facial is also a lot better because it means I don''t have to swallow," you say, reaching blindly for the showerhead.'
+				'"Oh. I thought girls were into that sort of thing. At least, a lot of the girls in porn swallow."'
+				'Finding the showerhead at last, you start to rinse off your face, responding, "Yeah, well, anyone who says they like to swallow is either a liar or a slut." Your face washed clean, you blink a couple times to see Kolka grinning at you.'
+				'"And what does that make you? A girl who lets her little brother cum on her face?"'
+				'You pause and smile back at him before answering. "A good sister."'
+				if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+				else
+					act'Finish showering together': gt 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+				end
+			end
+
+			act'Tastes good too':
+				cla
+				*nl
+				'"Mmm... It tastes good too," you say appreciatively, licking your lips to find any more stray drops.'
+				'"Oh! So girls really do like to eat cum! I always wondered if that was just something they did in pornos."'
+				'You wipe your eyes so you can look at him and suck the spunk off your fingers.'
+				'"Oh yeah. I wish all face masks were as edible as a facial. Though they could probably never be this satisfying."'
+				if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+				else
+					act'Finish showering together': gt 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+				end
+			end
+		end
+
+		if trt_cumeater = 1:
+			act'Feels like a waste':
+				cla & *clr
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/facial2.jpg"></center>'
+				'"Feels like a waste," you say, your tongue flicking about for any sperm it can find within its reach.'
+				'Clearly confused, Kolka asks, "What do you mean?"'
+				'Wiping your face with your hand, you give it a hard lick, savouring the flavour as you do. "You lose so much someone cums on your face. Falls off or gets stuck in your hair, hands aren''t really good utensils for scooping up cum either. Much easier to get it straight from the tap if you know what I mean.'
+				'Your brother''s confusion continues until his eyes go wide with the realization that you''re talking about enjoying the taste of semen. Almost as soon as the realization crosses his face, his eyes become obscured by confusion again.'
+				'"But if you like eating cum so much, why did you let me cum on your face?"'
+				'You give your hand another lick, sucking on the tips of your fingers where you scrapped the cum out of your eyebrow.'
+				'"''Cause I''m a good sister," you smile at him.'
+				if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+				else
+					act'Finish showering together': gt 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+				end
+			end
+		end
+
+		act'I only did this because I owed you one':
+			cla
+			*nl
+			'"I only did this because I owed you one," You say, wiping the cum from your eyes with your hands. Your eyes clear, you see a questioning look on his face. "Did you already forget? I promised I''d let you cum on my face this time."'
+			'"Oh! Right... So you don''t like having cum on your face like that?"'
+			act'Not really':
+				cla
+				*nl
+				'"Not really, no," you say, grimacing as some drips into your eye before you find the showerhead.'
+				'"So... Why do you let me do it? Just because you promised?"'
+				'Finally rinsing your face clean, you turn to face him, meeting his eye.'
+				'"''Cause I''m a good sister."'
+				if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+				else
+					act'Finish showering together': gt 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+				end
+			end
+
+			act'It''s just messy':
+				cla
+				*nl
+				'"It''s not like it actually feels that bad," you say, blinking to keep it out of your eyes and reaching for the showerhead. "It''s just really messy. Can be hard to clean out of your hair sometimes."'
+				'"Ahh. I see. So... Why did you let me do it today? Just because you promised? Cause we''re in the shower and it''s easier to clean?"'
+				'You turn towards him, meeting his eye, his cum still coating your face.'
+				'"''Cause I''m a good sister."'
+				if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+				else
+					act'Finish showering together': gt 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_creampie':
+	cla & *clr
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/broshower.mp4"></center>'
+	'You don''t respond verbally but pick up the pace, slapping your ass back against Kolka''s cock until he grabs you tight and you can feel his cock pulsating, spurts of cum pouring out inside you.'
+	$orgasm_txt = 'The sensation sends you over the edge and you orgasm as well, your pussy gripping him and squeezing every last drop of cum from his cock.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 1
+	gs 'cum_call', '', 'A34', 1
+	gs 'stat'
+	'Looking back at Kolka with a self satisfied smirk, you slip off his cock, feeling cum gush from your pussy and spatter on the bath tub floor.'
+	*nl
+	act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+	if succubusflag = 0:
+		if knowpreg = 1 or thinkpreg = 1:
+			'You chuckle to yourself, "Well, at least I can''t get any more pregnant than I already am!"'
+		elseif birth_control['kolka_knows'] = 1:
+			'"I love having a sister who''s on birth control," he grins, watching another glob of cum dribble out of you.'
+!!			act'"Not as much as I do"':
+			
+!!			end
+			
+!!			act'"Be grateful"':
+			
+!!			end
+			
+!!			act'"You''d love me less if I weren''t on birth control?"':
+			
+!!			end
+		elseif birth_control['think_safe'] = 1:
+			birth_control['kolka_knows'] = 1
+			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>!" he says with wide eyes. "Is it okay that I came inside you like that? What if you get pregnant?"'
+			'"Don''t worry about it," you smile. "I''m on birth control. I could take a thousand creampies from you, I won''t get pregnant."'
+			'Kolka''s eyes get even wider and his cock already seems to be hardening up again.'
+			'<i>Whoops,</i> you think to yourself. <i>I wonder if it''s going to come back to bite me that I told him that...</i>'
+		elseif mesec > 0:
+			'"Happy?" you ask him. He nods back at you with a self-satisfied grin. "Just feel lucky that I''m on my period. I might not have let you do that otherwise."'
+		else
+			'You watch as another glob of cum dribbles from your pussy, plopping onto the tub floor. <i>I need to buy a morning after pill from the pharmacy. What if I get pregnant?</i>'
+		end
+	end
+	
+
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_forced_creampie':
+	cla & *clr
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/broshower.mp4"></center>'
+	gs 'cum_call', '', 'A34', 1
+	gs 'stat'
+	if pcs_horny >= 90:
+		$orgasm_or = 'custom'
+		$orgasm_txt = 'Smiling mischievously, you suddenly speed up instead of pulling out, causing your brother to erupt inside you. He groans as his cum spills into you, sending you over the edge as well with legs quivering and pussy milking his cock for everything he has to give. Finally, Kolka pulls away and his cock slips from inside you, cum bursting out of your pussy like an uncorked champagne bottle.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 1
+	else
+		'Smiling mischievously, you suddenly speed up instead of pulling out, causing your brother to erupt inside you. He groans and you curl your toes in pleasure, feeling his cum spurting deep inside you. It''s not enough to bring you to orgasm, but it still feels good. You tighten up on him and work your hips a little more, trying to milk him for a couple more shots. Finally, Kolka pulls away and his cock slips from inside you, cum bursting out of your pussy like an uncorked champagne bottle.'
+	end
+	if brothercumchoice = 3:
+		'Kolka steps back, staring as he watches his spunk drip from your pussy. "Why''d you do that? I wanted to give you a facial."'
+	elseif brothercumchoice = 4:
+		'Kolka steps back, staring as he watches his spunk drip from your pussy. "Why''d you do that? I wanted to cum in your mouth."'
+	end
+	*nl
+	act'And I wanted a creampie (argue)':
+		cla
+		'"And I wanted a creampie! Sorry Kolka, but my vote outweighs yours."'
+		'"And why''s that?!"'
+		'"Because."'
+		'"Because what?"'
+		'"Because I''m a girl, I''m a girl who''s your older sister, and I''m a girl who''s your older sister who''s letting you fuck her! And if it weren''t for me, then you''d be on a date with Pamela Handerson instead," you say, making a jerking motion with your hand. "You should be grateful to be getting anything at all, let alone deciding where you get to cum on me."'
+		'"But that''s not fair! So what I want doesn''t count for anything?"'
+		'"Nope! But I get to decide if I''m feeling generous."'
+		'With Kolka''s hands balled into fists at his side and your hands on your hips, the two of you glare at each other, scowling. This turned into a much bigger argument than you meant it to.'
+		if succubusflag = 0:
+			if knowpreg = 1 or thinkpreg = 1:
+				'You chuckle to yourself: "Well, at least I can''t get any more pregnant than I already am!"'
+			elseif birth_control['think_safe'] = 1 or tabletkishot >= 1:
+				'<i>Goddamn it,</i> you think, looking down to watch another glob of cum drips from your snatch. <i>Only my idiot brother could ruin a perfectly good creampie like this.</i>'
+				'<i>At least '+iif(birth_control['implant_status'] > 1, 'I have a birth control implant', 'I''m on birth control')+'...</i>'
+			elseif mesec > 0:
+				'<i>Goddamn it,</i> you think, looking down to watch another glob of cum drips from your snatch. <i>Only my idiot brother could ruin a perfectly good creampie like this.</i>'
+				'<i>At least I don''t have to worry about getting pregnant on my period... right...?</i>'
+			else
+				'<i>Goddamn it,</i> you think, looking down to watch another glob of cum drips from your snatch. <i>Fuck. I shouldn''t have done this anyways. This gets me pregnant?</i>'
+			end
+		end
+		act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+	end
+
+	act'It felt too good':
+		cla
+		'"I''m sorry Kolka! Your cock just felt so good, I couldn''t stop! You can''t be mad at me for being too addicted to your cock to stop, can you?" You kneel down, trying to apologize by cleaning him up with your tongue.'
+		if brothercumchoice = 3:
+			'He grumbles a bit but you can tell that he''s not mad at you. "I guess I can''t be mad about that... But next time I ask, I want to cum on your face!"'
+		elseif brothercumchoice = 4:
+			'He grumbles a bit but you can tell that he''s not mad at you. "I guess I can''t be mad about that... But next time I ask, I want to cum in your mouth! And you better swallow it!"'
+		end
+		'"Okay, it''s a promise," you say, standing back up and kissing him on the cheek. "So long as I can stop myself that is."'
+		if birth_control['think_safe'] = 1 or tabletkishot >= 1:
+			'<i>Fuck, that felt good...</i> you think to yourself, looking down to watch another glob dribbles out of you with satisfaction.'
+			'<i>It''s a good thing '+iif(birth_control['implant_status'] > 1, 'I have a birth control implant', 'I''m on birth control')+'...</i>'
+		elseif mesec > 0:
+			'<i>Fuck, that felt good...</i> you think to yourself as another glob dribbles out, plopping onto the tub floor.'
+			'<i>It''s a good thing I can''t get pregnant when I''m on my period... right...?</i>'
+		else
+			'<i>Shit... I probably should have had more self control...</i> you think to yourself, watching another glob of cum dribble from your pussy. <i>What if this gets me pregnant?</i>'
+		end
+		act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+	end
+
+	act'Too much mess':
+		cla
+		'"Too messy," you say. "Sorry Kolka, but I don''t feel like cleaning that off my face. You understand don''t you?"'
+		'"Yeah I guess..."'
+		if succubusflag = 0:
+			if knowpreg = 1 or thinkpreg = 1:
+				'You chuckle to yourself: "Well, at least I can''t get any more pregnant than I already am!"'
+			elseif birth_control['think_safe'] = 1 or tabletkishot >= 1:
+				'<i>Fuck, that feels good...</i> you think to yourself, looking down to watch another glob dribbles out of you with satisfaction.'
+				'<i>It''s a good thing '+iif(birth_control['implant_status'] > 1, 'I have a birth control implant', 'I''m on birth control')+'...</i>'
+			elseif mesec > 0:
+				'<i>Fuck, that feels good...</i> you think to yourself as another glob dribbles out, plopping onto the tub floor.'
+				'<i>It''s a good thing I can''t get pregnant when I''m on my period... right...?</i>'
+			else
+				'<i>Shit...</i> Another glob of cum dribbles from your pussy, plopping onto the tub floor. <i>Maybe I should have let him cum on my face after all... What if I get pregnant?</i>'
+			end
+		end
+		act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_fill_me_up':
+	cla & *clr
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/broshower.mp4"></center>'
+	gs 'cum_call', '', 'A34', 1
+	gs 'stat'
+	'"Yes! Yes!" you cry out. "Fill me up!"'
+	if pcs_horny >= 90:
+		broshowerorgasm = daystart
+		$orgasm_or = 'custom'
+		$orgasm_txt = 'Your cries push him over the edge and Kolka can''t hold back any longer. He groans and pulls you tight against him. His cock plunges deep and you feel his cum spurting deep inside you. The sensation brings you to orgasm, body spasming and your pussy tightening up around him, squeezing him to the last drop. As your orgasm winds down and your legs stop quivering, you lean forward against the shower wall, Kolka''s cock slipping from between your legs.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 1
+	else
+		'Your cries push him over the edge and Kolka can''t hold back any longer. He groans and pulls you tight against him. His cock plunges deep and you feel his cum spurting deep inside you. You bite your lip and curl your toes, enjoying the sensation even if it doesn''t bring you to orgasm. Eventually his cock stops pulsating and you feel him slide out of you.'
+	end
+	'Pressing your face against the cool wall, you feel Kolka''s cum drip from your pussy, and look back at him.'
+	*nl
+	if succubusflag = 0:
+		if knowpreg = 1 or thinkpreg = 1:
+			*nl
+		elseif birth_control['kolka_knows'] = 1:
+			'"I love having a sister who''s on birth control," he grins, watching another glob of cum dribble out of you.'
+			'"Yeah, it was good for me too, thanks," you roll your eyes before straightening up.'
+		elseif birth_control['think_safe'] = 1:
+			birth_control['kolka_knows'] = 1
+			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>!" he says with wide eyes. "Is it okay that I came inside you like that? What if you get pregnant?"'
+			'"Don''t worry about it," you smile. "I''m on birth control. I could take a thousand creampies from you, I won''t get pregnant."'
+			'Kolka''s eyes get even wider and his cock already seems to be hardening up again.'
+			'<i>Whoops,</i> you think to yourself. <i>I wonder if it''s going to come back to bite me that I told him that...</i>'
+		elseif mesec > 0:
+			'"Happy?" you faintly smile at him. He nods back at you with a self-satisfied grin. "Just feel lucky that I''m on my period. I might not have let you do that otherwise."'
+		else
+			'He has a grin on his face while he watches the cum spilling out of you.'
+			'<i>Huh...</i> you think, basking in the afterglow. <i>I''ll have to buy a morning after pill from the pharmacy...</i>'
+		end
+	end
+	act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur_sex','brother_shower_fuck_end'
+end
+
+!! ----------------------------------------------------------- Ending ---------------------------------------------------------------------
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_end':
+	cla & *clr
+	noShampoo = 1
+	dynamic $showerdin
+	brother_shower_times += 1
+	minut += 2
+	gs 'arousal','end'
+	if brotherfuck = 1 and brother_knows_not_virgin >= 1:
+		gs'stat'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowersex2.jpg"></center>'
+		'Thoroughly satisfied with the dicking you received from your brother, you lean into him letting him feel you up from behind.'
+		'"So," you ask, nonchalantly grabbing his cock and working it gently. "Did you enjoy losing your virginity? Was it everything your teenage brain dreamed of?"'
+		'"Everything and more," he responds, gently pinching your nipples. You to moan and squeeze his dick in response. "But more than that, I''m happy to be part of the club."'
+		*nl
+		act'I''m glad you''re in the club too':
+			cla
+			'"I''m glad you''re in the club too," you smile back at him. "Seriously, I meant it when I said I don''t get around much. You''re not just another boy who''s fucked me Kolka. You''re my brother. You''re special."'
+			'He hesitates before he asks his next question. "Does that mean that I''m going to be the only ''active'' member of the club? I mean... does this mean that I''m going to be the only one you have sex with?"'
+			act'No, it means we help each other out':
+				cla & *clr
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowersex2.jpg"></center>'
+				if brotherSex < 9:brotherSex = 9
+				'"Well..." You think for a moment. "I''d still like to get a boyfriend, maybe get married some day. And I like fucking you, but you''re still just my brother to me. I can''t really see you any other way. Besides, I''m sure that you''d like to get a real girlfriend someday. Not just be that boy who''s so pathetic because the only poon he can get is from his sister. Maybe we can just take care of each other? So we''d still see other people and stuff, but we can always fuck each other''s brains out whenever we need some relief. How does that sound?"'
+				'"Sounds good," he grins at you. "Besides, you can''t be the only girl I have sex with. I need to fuck a real virgin some day. Not some loose slut throwing freebies to her brother."'
+				'You smack his arm but smile anyways. "Yeah, but I still have <i>your</i> virginity. No matter how many other girls'' you take, yours will always be mine!"'
+				'The two of you banter back and forth for a little while longer before you realize someone might notice that your brother is missing and become suspicious. You quickly shut off the water and dry him off, gathering Kolka''s clothes and shooing him into the hallway.'
+				act'Finish':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+			end
+			act'Yes, I love you':
+				cla & *clr
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowersex2.jpg"></center>'
+				if brotherSex < 10:brotherSex = 10
+				'His question strikes you by surprise. Even more surprisingly, you hear yourself whispering.'
+				'"Yes."'
+				'"You''re the only one for Kolka. You''re my brother and I love you like a brother but... I also feel something more for you. I want to be with you. I love you."'
+				'He seems taken aback by your answer and thinks about it for a minute.'
+				'"Yeah. I love you too sis," he says, gently kissing you. He seems happy but a little wistful. "I wish I could have taken your virginity too though."'
+				'You quickly try to console him. "I''m sorry Kolka! I''m sorry I couldn''t save it for you. But I''ll make it up to you! Because you''re going to get to far more of me than the person who took it. You''ll have me forever..."'
+				'The sit under the water together for a little while longer before you realize someone might notice that your brother is missing and become suspicious. You quickly shut off the water and dry him off, gathering Kolka''s clothes and shooing him into the hallway.'
+				act'Finish':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+			end
+		end
+
+		act'Glad to have a new member (slut)':
+			cla & *clr
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowersex2.jpg"></center>'
+			'"Oh yeah, I''m glad to have a new member. You can never have enough members inside y-, I mean, in the club," you say, winking at him mischievously.'
+			'"Slut."'
+			'"Cocktoy."'
+			'"Cum dump."'
+			'"Dicking machine."'
+			'"Cocksleeve."'
+			'The two of you banter back and forth for a little while longer before you realize someone might notice that your brother is missing and become suspicious. You quickly shut off the water and dry him off, gathering Kolka''s clothes and shooing him into the hallway.'
+			act'Finish':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+		end
+	else
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershower.jpg"></center>'
+		'Your teenage fuck session finished and bodies relatively clean -despite your best attempts to undo the effects of your recent washing- the two of you rinse yourselves off one last time to ensure no cum or other suspicious bodily fluids remain.'
+		*nl
+		if brotherfuck = 1 and brothervirginlie = 3:
+			cla
+			'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>. Can I ask you something? I''ve been wondering..."'
+			'"Hmm? What is it?"'
+			if pcs_vag >= 25:
+				'"If it was your first time, how come you''re so loose?"'
+				'<i>Shit!</i>'
+				'"I always heard that virgins are supposed to be really tight for their first time, but you weren''t. I mean, it still felt really good but I slid in so easily. How come?"'
+				'Unable to come up with a suitable explanation, you decide to retaliate with false offense.'
+				'"What are you trying to say about me? Huh? That I''m a slut? That I would lie to you about giving you my virginity? How dare you!"'
+				'Kolka shies away at your sudden burst of emotion.'
+				'"I''m sorry! I jus-"'
+				'"Just nothing! I can''t believe I just gave my virginity to such an ungrateful brat!"'
+				act'Kick him out to cover up your lie':
+					cla & *clr
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/vanrpar.jpg"></center>'
+					'Not knowing what else to do, you yank open the shower curtain and shove Kolka towards the door.'
+					'"Get out."'
+					'"But I-!"'
+					'"Out!"'
+					'Still dripping wet with his clothes in his arms, you shove your brother into the hallway naked. If your parents ask about it, you''ll just tell them he was peeping on you and you sprayed him with the showerhead.'
+					'Your brother out of the room you lean back onto the door and close your eyes, feeling bad for what you just did. Maybe you shouldn''t have lied to him about that after all...'
+					brother_knows_not_virgin = 1
+					brothervirginlie = 0
+					act'Finish up':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+				end
+			else
+				'"If that was your first time, how come you didn''t have a hymen? Isn''t that supposed to tear the first time a girl has sex? I didn''t feel it when I put my dick inside you."'
+				'<i>Shit!</i>'
+				'"Well, uhh, I''m definitely a virgin! I mean, I was until you fucked me for the first time, uhh, today!" you stammer, hoping your furious blush is covered up by the heat of the shower. "You definitely tore my hymen! It, uhh, it really hurt! Maybe you just didn''t notice when you did! I sure noticed! Ahaha, haha, ha..."'
+				'"Hmm. Well, you <i>were</i> pretty tight. You''re probably right and I just didn''t feel it."'
+				'You sigh quietly in relief, your hasty lies about your chastity bought by your brother. That was a close one...'
+				act'Finish showering':
+					pcs_horny = 0
+					cla & *clr
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/vanrpar.jpg"></center>'
+					'Stepping out of the shower, you grab a towel to personally help your brother dry off, paying special attention to his cock and balls. Once finished, you stand back to smirk at him, you yourself still naked and dripping wet.'
+					'"Well? Did you have fun showering with your sister??"'
+					'Kolka does nothing but grin at you in response.'
+					*nl
+					act'Ruffle his hair and send him on his way':
+						cla
+						'"Well, glad you enjoyed yourself," you say, ruffling his hair, smiling when he cringes back in response to the child-like treatment. "See you later bro."'
+						'He nods back at you, picking up his clothes before peeking into the hallway to make sure no one is there and slipping out the door.'
+						brother_knows_not_virgin = 1
+						brothervirginlie = 0
+						act'Finish drying off':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+					end
+
+					act'Kiss him goodbye':
+						cla
+						'You lean in to give your brother an intimate kiss, then stepping back to meet his eyes.'
+						'"See you later," you whisper.'
+						'He smiles back at you and picks up his clothes before peeking into the hallway to make sure no one is there and slipping out the door.'
+						brother_knows_not_virgin = 1
+						brothervirginlie = 0
+						act'Finish drying off':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+					end
+
+					act'Until next time (grab his cock)':
+						cla
+						'A sly smile on your face, you step forward to grab him by the cock.'
+						'"Until next time little brother," you murmur into his ear, giving his dick a hard squeeze. Then, you slap his ass and push him towards the door. "Now, shoo! Before someone catches us in here together."'
+						'Startled, he does as you say, picking up his clothes and peeking into the hallway to make sure no one is there before slipping out the door.'
+						brothervirginlie = 0
+						act'Finish drying off':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		elseif brotherfuck = 1 and brothervirginlie <= 2 and brothervirginlie >= 1:
+			cla
+			'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>. Can I ask you something? I''ve been wondering..."'
+			'"Hmm? What is it?"'
+			'"When I put it in before, I thought I felt something, some kind of resistance. When I pushed past it I heard you make a sound, like you were in pain. Was... was that your hymen?"'
+			'You freeze in place suddenly, not knowing what to do.'
+			'"Did you lie to me about not being a virgin?"'
+			'You turn towards him, biting your lip and not saying anything. The guilty look on your face gives everything away.'
+			'"Why did you lie about that <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+			act'I don''t know':
+				npc_rel['A34'] += 25
+				cla & *clr
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/vanrpar.jpg"></center>'
+				if brothervirginlie = 1:
+					'"I... I don''t know. I just panicked I guess. Thought that maybe it might be better for you if you thought your big sister was more experienced and had been with other boys before." You look back at him apprehensively, worried about what he''ll say or do next now that you''ve admitted the truth.'
+				elseif brothervirginlie = 2:
+					'"I... I don''t know. I just panicked I guess. Thought that maybe it might be better for you if you thought your big sister was a big slut who fucked all the boys in town." You look back at him apprehensively, worried about what he''ll say or do next now that you''ve admitted the truth.'
+				end
+				'Your brother regards you for a moment. And then he smiles.'
+				'"Dummy."'
+				'You shy away. And then blink a few times registering what you just heard.'
+				'"What...?"'
+				'"I called you a dummy <<$pcs_nickname>>. How could you think that I''d like you more if you were fucking other guys? You know that most guys like to fuck virgins, right?"'
+				'"They do?"'
+				'"Yes, we do! Anyone can fuck a slut. That''s what makes them sluts. But a girl is only a virgin once. And besides..." His grin grows wider. "This means that we lost our virginities together. I have yours and you have mine. And... I know we''re siblings and stuff... I know that some people think that''s wrong, but you being my sister just makes this feel more right to me. I feel closer to you now. How many other brothers and sisters can say they had their first time together? I''m glad you were a virgin! And I''m glad we got to share that together..."'
+				'He trails off and you eye him for a moment before you break into a smile, wrapping him a tight hug.'
+				'"Aww! You''re actually quite the romantic, little brother!"'
+				'"Pfft~! It''s not like I''m gonna marry you or anything like that. You''re still my sister. And I''m still gonna fuck lots of other girls once they start looking my way! But..." he trails off again.'
+				'"... now we have a bond that other siblings don''t have," you finish. "And no matter what else happens, we''ll carry each other''s virginities for the rest of our lives." He nods.'
+				act'Continue':
+					brotherSex = 9
+					minut += 5
+					gs 'stat'
+					cla & *clr
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/vanrpar.jpg"></center>'
+					'You stand together for a few more minutes, holding each other under the water of the shower, not saying anything. Finally, you break the silence.'
+					'"Well, if you''re going to be trying to fuck other girls, you can''t be mad at me when I fuck other boys," you smirk at him.'
+					'"Go ahead! I won''t need you! In a couple years, I''ll practically be drowning in pussy!"'
+					'"Yeah, right! That sounds about as likely as your dick growing 20 centimeters overnight! I''m more likely to find you sitting at home with blue balls, begging me for blowjobs."'
+					'"You''ll see! Girls will be lining up the block for a turn to ride my magnificent cock!"'
+					act'And what if I want a turn?':
+						cla & *clr
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/vanrpar.jpg"></center>'
+						'"And if I want a turn? Will I have to wait in line like the rest?"'
+						'He opens his mouth and pauses, suddenly realizing the implications of your turn in the flow of banter.'
+						'"... no..." he mutters. "... you won''t have to wait... sisters get special dick privileges."'
+						'Kolka looks away, his cheeks a little redder than they were before, an erection hardening and rubbing up against your thighs. You smile at him. He can be such a sweet boy sometimes.'
+						'"Good! And <i>you</i> should know, little brothers get an all access pussy pass too," you say, leaning in to give him a light kiss on the lips.'
+						'"... even if you have a boyfriend?" he asks hesitantly.'
+						'"Even if I have a boyfriend," you insist. "After all, my relationship with my brother is special. He took my virginity!"'
+						*nl
+						'The conversation winding down, the two of you remember that you have to get your brother out of here, lest the rest of your family grow suspicious of his absence. Leaving the shower running, you quickly help him towel off. Afterwards, he collects his clothes, gives you another quick kiss on the cheek, and slips out the door into the hallway. Your brother gone, now there''s nothing left to do but turn off the water and dry yourself off.'
+						brothervirginlie = 0
+						act'Finish drying off':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+		if brothervirginlie = 0:
+			act'Did you have fun?':
+				pcs_horny = 0
+				cla & *clr
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/vanrpar.jpg"></center>'
+				'Thoroughly satisfied with the dicking you received, you grab a towel to personally help your brother dry off, paying special attention to his cock and balls. Once finished, you stand back to smirk at him, you yourself still naked and dripping wet.'
+				'"Well? Did you have fun showering with your sister??"'
+				'Kolka does nothing but grin at you in response.'
+				*nl
+				act'Ruffle his hair and send him on his way':
+					cla
+					brother_knows_not_virgin = 1
+					brothervirginlie = 0
+					'"Well, glad you enjoyed yourself," you say, ruffling his hair, smiling when he cringes back in response to the child-like treatment. "See you later bro."'
+					'He nods back at you, picking up his clothes before peeking into the hallway to make sure no one is there and slipping out the door.'
+					act'Finish drying off':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+				end
+
+				act'Kiss him goodbye':
+					cla
+					brother_knows_not_virgin = 1
+					brothervirginlie = 0
+					'You lean in to give your brother an intimate kiss, then stepping back to meet his eyes.'
+					'"See you later," you whisper.'
+					'He smiles back at you and picks up his clothes before peeking into the hallway to make sure no one is there and slipping out the door.'
+					act'Finish drying off':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+				end
+
+				act'Until next time (grab his cock)':
+					cla
+					brothervirginlie = 0
+					'A sly smile on your face, you step forward to grab him by the cock.'
+					'"Until next time little brother," you murmur into his ear, giving his dick a hard squeeze. Then, you slap his ass and push him towards the door. "Now, shoo! Before someone catches us in here together."'
+					'Startled, he does as you say, picking up his clothes and peeking into the hallway to make sure no one is there before slipping out the door.'
+					act'Finish drying off':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+				end
+			end
+			act'Kick him out':
+				cla & *clr
+				brother_knows_not_virgin = 1
+				brothervirginlie = 0
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/vanrpar.jpg"></center>'
+				if brothervirginlie ! 2:
+					'Thoroughly annoyed with Kolka, you shove him towards the door.'
+				elseif brothervirginlie = 2:
+					'Not knowing what else to do, you yank open the shower curtain and shove Kolka towards the door.'
+					'"Get out."'
+					'"But I-!"'
+					'"Out!"'
+					'Still dripping wet with his clothes in his arms, you shove your brother into the hallway naked. If your parents ask about it, you''ll just tell them he was peeping on you and you sprayed him with the showerhead.'
+					'<br>Your brother out of the room you lean back onto the door and close your eyes, feeling bad for what you just did. Maybe you shouldn''t have lied to him about that after all...'
+				end
+				if pcs_horny > 70 and brothervirginlie ! 2:'And fuck! You''re still so goddamn horny!'
+				act'Finish up':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+
+--- brother_voyeur_sex ---------------------------------
+

+ 201 - 202
locations/gadhouse.qsrc

@@ -112,8 +112,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your grandmother</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/grandmahelp.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'"<<$pcs_firstname>>, your mother called, school is starting soon, and you have to head back to Pavlovsk to get ready."'
-		'"As much as we loved having you around and getting to see you more, this is it for now."'
+		'"<<$pcs_firstname>>, your mother called. School starts soon, and you must head back to Pavlovsk to get ready."'
+		'"As much as we loved having you around and seeing you more, this is it for now."'
 		'"You are always welcome to come and visit on weekends or breaks from school."'
 		'"And if you want to, you can always stay with us again next summer."'
 
@@ -121,10 +121,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			money += grandmaQW['help_amount']*25
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			'Before leaving your grandma hugs you and gives you <<grandmaQW[''help_amount'']*25>> rubles for your help with chores.'
+			'Before leaving, your grandma hugs you and gives you <<grandmaQW[''help_amount'']*25>> rubles for your help with chores.'
 			grandmaQW['help_amount'] = 0
 		else
-			'Before leaving your grandma gives you a big hug goodbye.'
+			'Before leaving, your grandma gives you a big hug goodbye.'
 		end
 
 		'As you turn to leave, she stops you, "One last thing, here are some rubles for the train ticket to get you back to Pavlovsk."'
@@ -143,9 +143,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/babushka.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'"<<$pcs_firstname>>, your grandfather and I were so worried when you didn''t come back home from the forest."'
+		'"<<$pcs_firstname>>, your grandfather and I were so worried when you didn''t come home from the forest."'
 		'"We are so glad you are back safe and sound. Go have a hot meal and shower and relax."'
-		'"Also, don''t worry about any chores today, just focus on recovering."'
+		'"Also, don''t worry about any chores today. Just focus on recovering."'
 
 		act 'Continue':gt 'gadhouse', 'main'
 	!! Returning home after being lost but escaped within the same day; no reaction from grandparents and still expected to get chores done
@@ -165,8 +165,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandma.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'Your grandmother looks at you coldly from across the room. She is speaking softly but somehow that is more unnerving than normal, "I''ve been more than fair to you, <<$pcs_firstname>>, and given you more chances than maybe even your mother."'
-		'"If you won''t at least try to act like a decent lady around here, you are no longer welcome. Take your things and leave. Come back when you''ve learned at least some basic decency."'
+		'Your grandmother looks at you coldly from across the room. She is speaking softly, but somehow that is more unnerving than usual, "I''ve been more than fair to you, <<$pcs_firstname>>, and given you more chances than maybe even your mother."'
+		'"If you won''t at least try to act like a decent lady around here, you are no longer welcome. So take your things and leave. Come back when you''ve learned at least some basic decency."'
 
 		act 'Leave': gadstay = 0 & killvar 'home_name' & gt 'gadukino'
 	!! Grandma scolding for being spotted nude around the village
@@ -182,9 +182,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/babushka.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'Suddenly your grandmother approaches you with disappointed look on her face. "I had higher expectations of you young lady! You should be ashamed of yourself running around outdoors without clothes. You have embarrassed me and your grandfather! Our friends have seen you around naked as have your grandfather and I, so don''t even try to hide it."'
-		'"This will be reflected in your allowance for your chores as well so don''t act all surprised at the beginning of the month either."'
-		'"Unlike you, we have to live in this village, and get along with the people in it. If you keep this up, I''ll be cutting your time here short and sending you back to your mother, and she can deal with your sinful behaviour. We better not hear anymore about this!" She then walks off before you can even respond.'
+		'Suddenly your grandmother approaches you with a disappointed look on her face. "I had higher expectations of you, young lady! You should be ashamed of yourself for running around outdoors without clothes. You have embarrassed your grandfather and me! Our friends have seen you around naked, as have your grandfather and I, so don''t even try to hide it."'
+		'"This will be reflected in your allowance, don''t act surprised at the beginning of the month."'
+		'"Unlike you, we have to live in this village and get along with its people. If you keep this up, I''ll be cutting your time here short and sending you back to your mother, and she can deal with your sinful behaviour. We better not hear any more about this!" She then walks off before you can even respond.'
 
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gadhouse', 'main'
 	!!Grandpa is disappointed in you for failing to do a chore you promised
@@ -200,8 +200,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		*nl
 		'Your grandfather scowls at you as you walk by.'
 		'<br>"<<$pcs_firstname>>. I am disappointed in you," he says flatly.'
-		'"What? Why?" you ask, taken aback a bit by his demeanor.'
-		'"Yesterday I asked you to help me, and you agreed. And here we are, today, and I find that you did not."'
+		'"What? Why?" you ask, taken aback a bit by his demeanour.'
+		'"Yesterday, I asked you to help me, and you agreed. And here we are today, and I find that you did not."'
 		'"Oh n-no, Grandpa," you stutter, "I forgot all about it! I''m sorry!"'
 		'"Quiet, child. I wasn''t done speaking. You promised to help and did not, which means you lied."'
 		'<br>You stare at him, crestfallen.'
@@ -209,7 +209,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		'Your eyes tear up a bit as your grandfather berates you. "Yes, sir," you mumble quietly.'
 		'"I would rather you tell me flat-out if you do not want to help, <<$pcs_firstname>>. At least that makes you honest, even if lazy."'
 		'"Grandpa, I honestly just forg-" you begin, but he cuts you off.'
-		'"Hush, child. I don''t care for excuses. Now go on, some of us have work to do."'
+		'"Hush, child. I don''t care for excuses. Now go on. Some of us have work to do."'
 		'<br>You silently turn and walk away, feeling guilty.'
 
 		act 'Continue':gt 'gadhouse', 'main'
@@ -225,13 +225,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandma.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'Grandma frowns at you as you walk by. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you said you would help me yesterday, and you did not."'
-		'You cringe a little as you remember what you told her you would do. "I''m sorry Grandma, I forgot all about it..."'
-		'"I am an old woman, child. It is difficult for me to do many of the things I once could. But I can still do them if I know I have to."'
-		'You look at the ground, feeling guilty, as she continues, "But it is even harder for me if I expected help and did not receive it."'
+		'You cringe as you remember what you told her you would do. "I''m sorry, Grandma, I forgot all about it..."'
+		'"I am an old woman, child. It is difficult for me to do many things I once could. But I can still do them if I know I have to."'
+		'Feeling guilty, you look at the ground as she continues, "But it is even harder for me if I expected help and did not receive it."'
 		'"Sorry, Grandma," you mumble again.'
-		'She softens a little, finally. "It''s okay child," she says. "But it makes it harder for me to give you your allowance for sweets if you cannot follow through on your promises."'
+		'She softens a little, finally. "It''s okay, child," she says. "But it makes it harder for me to give you your allowance for sweets if you cannot follow through on your promises."'
 		'"Yes, ma''am," you nod.'
-		'"All right child," she says, patting your shoulder softly. "Go on now, I am sure you have things to do."'
+		'"All right, child," she says, patting your shoulder softly. "Go on now. I am sure you have things to do."'
 
 		act 'Continue':gt 'gadhouse', 'main'
 	elseif grandmaQW['first_visit'] = 0 and hour >= 6 and hour < 20:
@@ -315,32 +315,32 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 
 	if hour < 8:
 		temp = rand(0,9)
-		if temp = 0:'In a box filled with scraps of cloth, <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''villagecat''">Boniface</a> is curled up sleeping peacefully.'
+		if temp = 0:'In a box filled with scraps of cloth, <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''villagecat''">Boniface</a>is curled up, sleeping peacefully.'
 	elseif hour >= 8 and hour < 12 and sunWeather = 1:
 		temp = rand(0,2)
-		if temp = 1:'On the table by the window <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''villagecat''">Boniface</a> is busy cleaning himself with his tongue.'
-		if temp = 2:'On the table by the window <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''villagecat''">Boniface</a> lies lazily, soaking up some sunshine rays.'
+		if temp = 1:'<a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''villagecat''">Boniface</a> is busy cleaning himself with his tongue on the table by the window.'
+		if temp = 2:'<a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''villagecat''">Boniface</a> lies lazily on the table by the window, soaking up some sunshine rays.'
 	elseif hour >= 8 and hour < 12 and sunWeather = 0:
 		temp = rand(0,1)
-		if temp = 0: 'In a box filled with scraps of cloth, <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''villagecat''">Boniface</a> is curled up sleeping peacefully.'
-		if temp = 1: 'On the table by the window <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''villagecat''">Boniface</a> is staring in disgust at the rain outside.'
+		if temp = 0: 'In a box filled with scraps of cloth, <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''villagecat''">Boniface</a> is curled up, sleeping peacefully.'
+		if temp = 1: 'On the table by the window, <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''villagecat''">Boniface</a> stares in disgust at the rain outside.'
 	elseif hour >= 12 and hour < 18:
 		temp = rand(0,5)
-		if temp = 3:'Next to the table by the window <a href="exec:feedcat = 1 & gt ''gadhouse'',''villagecat''">Boniface</a> stretches and meows loudly, it''s time for dinner.'
-		if temp = 4 and sunWeather = 1: 'On the table by the window <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''villagecat''">Boniface</a> lies lazily, soaking up some sunshine rays.'
-		if temp = 4 and sunWeather = 0: 'In a box filled with scraps of cloth, <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''villagecat''">Boniface</a> is curled up sleeping peacefully.'
+		if temp = 3:'Next to the table by the window, <a href="exec:feedcat = 1 & gt ''gadhouse'',''villagecat''">Boniface</a> stretches and meows loudly. It''s time for dinner.'
+		if temp = 4 and sunWeather = 1: '<a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''villagecat''">Boniface</a> lies lazily on the table by the window, soaking up some sunshine rays.'
+		if temp = 4 and sunWeather = 0: 'In a box filled with scraps of cloth, <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''villagecat''">Boniface</a> is curled up, sleeping peacefully.'
 	elseif hour >= 18 and hour < 22 and catout ! 2:
 		temp = rand(0,3)
 		if temp = 0:'<a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''villagecat''">Boniface</a> is stalking around the main floor, looking for a nice juicy mouse to play with.'
-		if temp = 1 and catout = 0: catout = 1 &'<a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''villagecat''">Boniface</a> twines around your ankles then goes to the door meowing pitifully.'
+		if temp = 1 and catout = 0: catout = 1 &'<a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''villagecat''">Boniface</a> twines around your ankles, then goes to the door, meowing pitifully.'
 	elseif hour >= 22:
 		temp = rand(0,2)
-		if temp = 1:'In a box filled with scraps of cloth, <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''villagecat''">Boniface</a> is curled up sleeping peacefully.'
+		if temp = 1:'In a box filled with scraps of cloth, <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''villagecat''">Boniface</a> is curled up, sleeping peacefully.'
 	end
 
 	if hour >= 6 and hour < 8:
 		'Your <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''grandma'' ">grandmother</a> is puttering around in the kitchen, making breakfast.'
-		'Your <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''grandpa'' ">grandfather</a> is sitting at the kitchen table, drinking a black cup of coffee.'
+		'Your <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''grandpa'' ">grandfather</a> sits at the kitchen table, drinking a black cup of coffee.'
 	elseif hour >= 8 and hour < 10:
 		'Your <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''grandma'' ">grandmother</a> is slowly wandering through the house, tidying up as she goes along.'
 		'Your <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''grandpa'' ">grandfather</a> is sitting in his recliner, watching the morning news.'
@@ -349,21 +349,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 		'Your <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''grandpa'' ">grandfather</a> is sitting in his recliner, watching the morning news.'
 	elseif hour >= 11 and hour < 12:
 		'Your grandmother is napping on the sofa, curled up under a heavy quilt.'
-		'Your <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''grandpa'' ">grandfather</a> is sitting next to her, stroking her hair and faintly smiling.'
+		'Your <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''grandpa'' ">grandfather</a> sits next to her, stroking her hair and faintly smiling.'
 	elseif hour >= 12 and hour < 13:
 		'Your <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''grandma'' ">grandmother</a> is in the kitchen, making a sandwich, while your <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''grandpa'' ">grandfather</a> waits at the kitchen table.'
 	elseif hour >= 13 and hour < 15:
 		'Your <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''grandma'' ">grandmother</a> is sitting by the window, '+iif(sunWeather = 0, 'watching the rain','looking outside')+'.'
-		'Your grandfather is leaned back in his recliner, fast asleep.'
+		'Your grandfather is leaning back in his recliner, fast asleep.'
 	elseif hour >= 15 and hour < 17:
 		'Your <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''grandma'' ">grandmother</a> and <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''grandpa'' ">grandfather</a> are watching an old-timey-looking show on the TV.'
 	elseif hour >= 17 and hour < 18:
 		'Your <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''grandma'' ">grandmother</a> is puttering around in the kitchen, making dinner.'
-		'Your <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''grandpa'' ">grandfather</a> is sitting at the kitchen table, waiting for grandma to bring his food.'
+		'Your <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''grandpa'' ">grandfather</a> sits at the kitchen table, waiting for grandma to bring his food.'
 	elseif hour >= 18 and hour < 20:
-		'Your <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''grandma'' ">grandmother</a> and <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''grandpa'' ">grandfather</a> are watching the evening news on the TV.'
+		'Your <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''grandma'' ">grandmother</a> and <a href="exec: gt ''gadhouse'',''grandpa'' ">grandfather</a> are watching the evening news on TV.'
 	else
-		'Your grandparents are asleep. They sleep in separate beds, which is quite strange since they''re still madly in love with each other.'
+		'Your grandparents are asleep. They sleep in separate beds, which is strange since they''re still madly in love.'
 	end
 
 	if mira_guest = 1: MiraLoc = 6 & '<a href="exec: gt ''miroslava'', ''Start''">Mira</a> is sitting next to you.'
@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 			inhib_exp += rand(0,2)
 			grandmaQW['nudity_trouble'] += rand(0,2)
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/gaddvor_nude.jpg"></center>'
-			'It''s certainly risky leaving the house like this, and while it''s unlikely anyone saw you go outside naked, there''s a thrill in almost getting caught'
+			'It''s undoubtedly risky leaving the house like this. But, while it''s unlikely anyone saw you go outside naked, there''s a thrill in almost getting caught.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -397,7 +397,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 			minut += 1
 			inhib_exp += rand(0,1)
 			grandmaQW['nudity_trouble'] += rand(0,1)
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/gaddvor_nude.jpg"></center>''It''s certainly risky leaving the hosue like this, and while it''s unlikely anyone saw you go outside in your underwear, there''s a thrill in almost getting caught'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/gaddvor_nude.jpg"></center>''It''s undoubtedly risky leaving the hosue like this, and while it''s unlikely anyone saw you go outside in your underwear, there''s a thrill in almost getting caught'
 			gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -413,7 +413,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 			gs'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/washfloor.jpg"></center>'
-			'You grab a bucket and a rag, and get down on your knees and begin scrubbing the floor. Within the hour the floor shines and you are satisfied with the work you''ve done. You put the cleaning supplies into a corner and continue on with your day.'
+			'You grab a bucket and a rag, get down on your knees and begin scrubbing the floor. Within the hour, the floor shines, and you are satisfied with your work. You put the cleaning supplies into a corner and continue your day.'
 
 			act 'Continue':gt 'gadhouse', 'start'
 			act 'Return back to your grandmother': minut += 1 & gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
@@ -435,7 +435,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 				minut += 10
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/washclothes2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Once you are done with the washing, you walk over to the clothesline where you carefully hang the clothes to dry.'
+				'Once done with the washing, you walk to the clothesline, where you carefully hang the clothes to dry.'
 
 				act 'Continue':gt'gaddvor'
 				act 'Return back to your grandmother': minut += 1 & gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
@@ -517,10 +517,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandma.jpg"></center>'
-	'Your grandma is extremely old, and almost never leaves the house. Most of the time she just sits on her bed watching TV, or is slowly cleaning.'
+	'Your grandma is extremely old and seldom leaves the house. Most of the time, she sits on her bed watching TV or slowly cleans.'
 	if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
-		'Grandma looks a little shocked but it''s nothing she hasn''t seen before.'
-		'"Go put some clothes on dear, you''ll give your poor grandpa a heart attack if he sees you."'
+		'Grandma looks a little shocked, but it''s nothing she hasn''t seen before.'
+		'"Go put some clothes on, dear. You''ll give your poor grandpa a heart attack if he sees you."'
 
 		act 'Maybe you should get dressed before talking to her':gt 'gadhouse', 'start'
 	else
@@ -535,14 +535,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 				boletus_stored -= 5
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/cleaning_mushrooms.jpg"></center>'
 				'You tell Grandma you are ready to help her can mushrooms now.'
-				'She smiles and gives you a basket of mushrooms. You spend a while cleaning them, washing them, and cutting them up, in preparation for canning.'
+				'She smiles and gives you a basket of mushrooms. You spend a while cleaning them, washing them, and cutting them up in preparation for canning.'
 				act 'Continue':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 60
 					gs'stat'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/canning.jpg"></center>'
-					'Once they are prepared, you help put them in glass jars. Once they are all ready, Grandma places the jars in her canner and boils them for an hour.'
+					'Once they are prepared, you help put them in glass jars. Once they are ready, Grandma places the jars in her canner and boils them for an hour.'
 					act 'Continue':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 15
@@ -552,7 +552,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 						grandmaQW['help_amount'] += 2
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/canned_mushrooms.jpg"></center>'
 						'Finally, you help Grandma take them out of the canner and set them aside to cool.'
-						'"Thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "It is important to save food up for the hard winter months. Sure, now you can just walk to the store and get whatever you want, but it wasn''t always that way!"'
+						'"Thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "It is important to save food up for the hard winter months. Sure, now you can walk to the store and get whatever you want, but it wasn''t always that way!"'
 						act 'Finish':gt 'gadhouse','start'
 					end
 				end
@@ -567,14 +567,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 
 				bilberry_stored -= 5
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/cleaning_berries.jpg"></center>'
-				'Grandma gives you a basket of berries and you spend a while cleaning them, removing stems, and picking out any shriveled or bad ones.'
+				'Grandma gives you a basket of berries, and you spend a while cleaning them, removing stems, and picking out any shrivelled or bad ones.'
 				act 'Continue':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 60
 					gs'stat'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/canning.jpg"></center>'
-					'Once they are prepared, you help pour them into glass jars. Once they are all ready, Grandma places the jars in her canner and boils them for an hour.'
+					'Once they are prepared, you help pour them into glass jars. Once they are ready, Grandma places the jars in her canner and boils them for an hour.'
 					act 'Continue':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 15
@@ -599,14 +599,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 
 				grandmaQW['chore_harvest_done'] = 0
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/cleaning_veggies.jpg"></center>'
-				'You and Grandma spend some time sorting out all of the different vegetables from the garden. Once they are sorted you begin cleaning them, cutting them up, removing stems and leaves, and preparing them for canning.'
+				'You and Grandma spend some time sorting out all the vegetables from the garden. Once they are sorted, you begin cleaning them, cutting them up, removing stems and leaves, and preparing them for canning.'
 				act 'Continue':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 90
 					gs'stat'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/canning.jpg"></center>'
-					'It is a tedious process, but eventually you finish, and help Grandma put them all in jars. You stand by while she boils the jars, helping her remove them from the canner when needed and replacing them with others.'
+					'It is a tedious process, but eventually, you finish and help Grandma put them all in jars. Then, you stand by while she boils the jars, helping her remove them from the canner when needed and replacing them with others.'
 					act 'Continue':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 15
@@ -615,9 +615,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 						grandmaQW['chore_can_veggies'] = 0
 						grandmaQW['help_amount'] += 3
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/canned_veggies.jpg"></center>'
-						'Finally, you help Grandma take the last of the jars out of the canner and set them aside to cool.'
-						'"You know <<$pcs_nickname>>, if you know how to can your own food, you can survive years of poor harvests," she says.'
-						'"Your grandfather and I had many hard times when we were younger, but saving our crops when we could kept us from starving to death in the bad times. You would do well to remember that, young lady!"'
+						'Finally, you help Grandma take the last jars out of the canner and set them aside to cool.'
+						'"You know, <<$pcs_nickname>>, if you know how to can your own food, you can survive years of poor harvests," she says.'
+						'"Your grandfather and I had many hard times when we were younger, but saving our crops when we could, kept us from starving to death in the bad times. You would do well to remember that, young lady!"'
 						act 'Finish':gt 'gadhouse','start'
 					end
 				end
@@ -642,7 +642,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandma.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Grandma, the floors are all clean!" you say proudly.'
-				'"Thank you child," your grandmother says, "You have saved my hands and knees a great deal of aching."'
+				'"Thank you, child," your grandmother says, "You have saved my hands and knees a great deal of aching."'
 				'You give her a warm smile and continue on with your day.'
 
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
@@ -659,7 +659,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandma.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Grandma, I finished washing Grandpa''s dirty clothes," you tell her.'
-				'"Thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>. I have no idea how that man gets so dirty!"'
+				'"Thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I have no idea how that man gets so dirty!"'
 				'You and your grandmother share a laugh, and you give her a hug before moving on.'
 
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
@@ -676,8 +676,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandma.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Grandma, I milked Dawn and put the milk away," you tell her.'
-				'"Thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>. She''s such a sweet thing, isn''t she?" your grandmother asks fondly.'
-				'"Um, yes, she is very nice for a cow," you say, smiling. "She''s the nicest cow I know."'
+				'"Thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>. She''s such a sweet thing, isn''t she?" your grandmother asks fondly.'
+				'"Um, yes, she is very nice for a cow," you smile. "She''s the nicest cow I know."'
 				'Grandma nods sagely at that, and you grin and continue on with your day.'
 
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
@@ -694,12 +694,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandma.jpg"></center>'
 				'You show Grandma your sacks of groceries and tell her the grocer will be by later.'
-				'"Thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>. He''s a nice young man. I''ve known him since he was a child, you know."'
-				'"Yes he''s very nice," you say, "but where do you want me to put this stuff?"'
-				'"Oh yes, yes," she says, as if she forgot you were standing there with arms full of groceries. "Just put them in the kitchen, little one, I will put them away in a minute."'
-				'You lug the bags into the kitchen and heft them up on the table, before coming back to Grandma.'
+				'"Thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>. He''s a nice young man. I''ve known him since he was a child, you know."'
+				'"Yes, he''s very nice," you say, "but where do you want me to put this stuff?"'
+				'"Oh yes, yes," she says as if she forgot you were standing there with arms full of groceries. "Just put them in the kitchen, little one. I will put them away in a minute."'
+				'You lug the bags into the kitchen and heft them on the table before returning to Grandma.'
 				'"Anything else you need, Grandma?" you ask.'
-				'"No, that is all, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says, and gives you a gentle pat on the back.'
+				'"No, that is all, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says and gives you a gentle pat on the back.'
 
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
 			end
@@ -716,8 +716,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandma.jpg"></center>'
 				'"I fed the chickens, Grandma," you tell her.'
 				'"Good, thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "A fat chicken is a happy chicken, and happy chickens lay the best eggs."'
-				'She nods to herself as if she had said something very wise.'
-				'"Um, well, I''m happy to help, Grandma," you say, and give her a quick hug.'
+				'She nods to herself as if she has said something sagacious.'
+				'"Um, well, I''m happy to help, Grandma," you say and hug her quickly.'
 
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
 			end
@@ -734,19 +734,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandma.jpg"></center>'
 				'"I finished working in the garden, Grandma."'
 				'"Good, thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "Did you pull out all the weeds?"'
-				'"Yes I did," you say, "and I watered all the plants, and I checked for pests, and everything."'
-				'"Good, good," she nods. "It is very important to take care of your garden, <<$pcs_nickname>>. It is how we provide for ourselves when no one else will."'
+				'"Yes, I did," you say, "and I watered all the plants and checked for pests and everything."'
+				'"Good, good," she nods. "It is crucial to take care of your garden, <<$pcs_nickname>>. It is how we provide for ourselves when no one else will."'
 				'You nod at her advice, and she smiles.'
-				'"You know, you remind me very much of your mother," she says. "She and Luda were always talking about the garden when they were your age."'
+				'"You know, you remind me very much of your mother," she says. "She and Luda always talked about the garden when they were your age."'
 				if npc_QW['A29'] < 2:
 					'"Really?" you ask, trying to picture your mother working in the old garden.'
-					'"Oh yes, yes," Grandma says. "Your mother especially. Every day Natasha would say, ''Luda, Luda, I have to go to the garden,'' and Luda would say, ''But sister, you were just in the garden yesterday!''"'
-					'She purses her lips for a moment and continues, "She wasn''t very good at gardening though, I''m afraid. As much time as she seemed to spend there, I would still find weeds and pests all the time."'
+					'"Oh yes, yes," Grandma says. "Your mother especially. Natasha would say, ''Luda, Luda, I have to go to the garden,'' and Luda would say, ''But sister, you were just in the garden yesterday!"'
+					'She purses her lips and continues, "She wasn''t very good at gardening, I''m afraid. As much time as she seemed to spend there, I would still find weeds and pests all the time."'
 				else
 					'You struggle to contain your laughter. "Oh yeah, <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> has told me all about the ''garden'', Grandma. Like mother, like daughter, I guess!"'
 					'Grandma nods. "Yes, I suppose that is true. She wasn''t much of a gardener though - I always found weeds and pests, no matter how much time she spent there."'
 				end
-				'You grin to yourself, thinking of how <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> must have been at your age.'
+				'You grin, thinking of how <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> must have been at your age.'
 				'"Anyway," she continues, "thank you for doing that for me, <<$pcs_nickname>>. My old bones complain when I do it."'
 				'She gives you a peck on the cheek and sends you on your way.'
 
@@ -764,9 +764,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandma.jpg"></center>'
 				'"I watered all the plants in the garden, Grandma," you tell her.'
-				'"Thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "A healthy plant is always thirsty. You should have some water too, if you want to be a healthy girl."'
+				'"Thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "A healthy plant is always thirsty. So you should have some water, too, if you want to be a healthy girl."'
 				'"Maybe I will. Is there anything else you need?"'
-				'"No, sweet child. That is enough for today," she says, and gives you a gentle pat on the arm.'
+				'"No, sweet child. That is enough for today," she says and gives you a gentle pat on the arm.'
 
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
 			end
@@ -783,7 +783,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandma.jpg"></center>'
 				'You walk up to Grandma and give her the basket of strawberries.'
 				'"I picked all the strawberries I could find, Grandma," you say.'
-				'"Oh <<$pcs_nickname>>," she exclaims, "don''t these just look wonderful? They are plump and juicy this year."'
+				'"Oh, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she exclaims, "don''t these just look wonderful? They are plump and juicy this year."'
 				'You smile and say, "They taste pretty good too!"'
 				'Your grandmother gives you a rueful look and says, "I don''t remember asking you to eat the strawberries, child."'
 				'She cannot hold the charade, though, and breaks into a smile. "I never could resist eating a few fresh off the plant either."'
@@ -803,8 +803,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandma.jpg"></center>'
 				'You walk up to Grandma and give her the basket of fruit.'
 				'"I gathered all the fruits I could reach," you say.'
-				'"Thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "I cannot reach or bend like I used to, so you have done me a great favor."'
-				'You smile and hug your grandmother, and go on about your day.'
+				'"Thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "I cannot reach or bend like I used to, so you have done me a great favour."'
+				'You smile and hug your grandmother and go on about your day.'
 
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
 			end
@@ -822,11 +822,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandma.jpg"></center>'
 				'You bring the baskets of vegetables from the garden into the kitchen and set them on the table, then go back to your grandmother.'
 				'"I think I got everything I could out of the garden, Grandma," you tell her. "There was so much!"'
-				'"Yes child," she says. "We have been blessed with a healthy garden this year. There were many times in the past we were not so lucky."'
+				'"Yes, child," she says. "We have been blessed with a healthy garden this year. But, unfortunately, there were many times in the past we were not so lucky."'
 				'Your smile falters a bit, unsure of how to take that.'
-				'"Oh don''t worry yourself, little <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says, cupping your cheek with her hand. "Forgive an old woman of her wistful ways. We are lucky to have such a kind granddaughter to help us bring in the harvest."'
+				'"Oh, don''t worry yourself, little <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says, cupping your cheek with her hand. "Forgive an old woman of her thoughtful ways. We are lucky to have such a kind granddaughter to help us bring in the harvest."'
 				'You place your youthful hand over her wizened old one and smile at her. "I am happy to help, Grandma. Is there anything else you need?"'
-				'"No, child, you have done more than your fair share today. Soon we will have to preserve these vegetables to keep them from spoiling, but for now you can rest."'
+				'"No, child, you have done more than your fair share today. Of course, soon, we will have to preserve these vegetables to keep them from spoiling, but for now, you can rest."'
 
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
 			end
@@ -847,12 +847,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandma.jpg"></center>'
 					'You bring the basket of mushrooms to your grandmother and say, "Grandma, here are the mushrooms you wanted!"'
-					'She takes them from you. "Thank you my sweet girl, better late than never. I hope you were OK in the forest. They will have to go down in the root cellar until we are ready to can them."'
+					'She takes them from you. "Thank you, my sweet girl. Better late than never. I hope you were OK in the forest. They will have to go down in the root cellar until we are ready to can them."'
 					'"Do you think that will be enough?"'
 					'She laughs. "Oh, with your grandfather around, it is never enough!"'
-					'"I can get more, if you want me to."'
+					'"I can get more if you want me to."'
 					'"No need for that, little one," she clucks. "You''ve done enough for now."'
-					'You give her a quick hug in response, and carry on.'
+					'You give her a quick hug in response and carry on.'
 
 					act 'Continue': grandmaQW['chore_mushroom_quantity'] = 0 & gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
 				end
@@ -868,12 +868,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandma.jpg"></center>'
 					'You bring the basket of mushrooms to your grandmother and say, "Grandma, here are the mushrooms you wanted!"'
-					'She smiles and takes them from you. "Thank you my sweet girl. They will have to go down in the root cellar until we are ready to can them."'
+					'She smiles and takes them from you. "Thank you, my sweet girl. They will have to go down in the root cellar until we are ready to can them."'
 					'"Do you think that will be enough?"'
 					'She laughs. "Oh, with your grandfather around, it is never enough!"'
-					'"I can get more, if you want me to."'
+					'"I can get more if you want me to."'
 					'"No need for that, little one," she clucks. "You''ve done enough for one day."'
-					'You give her a quick hug in response, and carry on.'
+					'You give her a quick hug in response and carry on.'
 
 					act 'Continue': grandmaQW['chore_mushroom_quantity'] = 0 & gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
 				end
@@ -897,8 +897,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 					'You walk over to Grandma and set the heavy basket of berries on the ground next to her.'
 					'"Grandma, I got all the berries!"'
 					'"Oh, thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>," Grandma replied. "Those look fine if a little late. They will have to go down in the root cellar until we are ready to can them."'
-					'You heft the basket up and carry it in the kitchen. Walking back over to Grandma, you ask, "Do you think that will be enough for the winter?"'
-					'"Oh no dear," your Grandma says, "the winter is long and cold and you must gather as much as you can, while you can."'
+					'You heft the basket up and carry it into the kitchen. Then, walking back to Grandma, you ask, "Do you think that will be enough for the winter?"'
+					'"Oh no, dear," your Grandma says, "the winter is long and cold, and you must gather as much as you can while you can."'
 					'Seeing the dismayed look on your face, she adds, "But that is enough for today! I know it is harder work than it seems. You can rest now, child."'
 					'Relieved, you give your grandmother a peck on the cheek and move on.'
 
@@ -918,8 +918,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 					'You walk over to Grandma and set the heavy basket of berries on the ground next to her.'
 					'"Grandma, I got all the berries!"'
 					'"Oh, thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>," Grandma replied. "Those look perfect. They will have to go down in the root cellar until we are ready to can them."'
-					'You heft the basket up and carry it in the kitchen. Walking back over to Grandma, you ask, "Do you think that will be enough for the winter?"'
-					'"Oh no dear," your Grandma says, "the winter is long and cold and you must gather as much as you can, while you can."'
+					'You heft the basket up and carry it into the kitchen. Then, walking back over to Grandma, you ask, "Do you think that will be enough for the winter?"'
+					'"Oh no, dear," your Grandma says, "the winter is long and cold, and you must gather as much as you can while you can."'
 					'Seeing the dismayed look on your face, she adds, "But that is enough for today! I know it is harder work than it seems. You can rest now, child."'
 					'Relieved, you give your grandmother a peck on the cheek and move on.'
 
@@ -948,12 +948,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandma.jpg"></center>'
 					'You bring your basket, heavy with mushrooms and berries from the forest, over to your grandmother.'
 					'"Grandma, here are the mushrooms and berries, just like you asked!"'
-					'"Oh, thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I was starting to think you had forgotten about me, they will have to go down in the root cellar until we are ready to can them," your Grandma replied.'
+					'"Oh, thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I was starting to think you had forgotten about me. They will have to go down in the root cellar until we are ready to can them," your Grandma replied.'
 					'"Do I need to go out on another run, or do you think that''s enough?"'
-					'"Well, little one," your Grandma says, "There is a difference between enough, and enough for today."'
-					'"Oh..." you say, unsure of what to make of her response.'
+					'"Well, little one," your Grandma says, "There is a difference between enough and enough for today."'
+					'"Oh..." you say, unsure what to make of her response.'
 					'She smiles gently and pats your head. "You''ve done enough for today, child."'
-					'You smile back awkwardly, still a little unsure, but give your Grandma a smooch on the cheek and go on with your day.'
+					'You smile back awkwardly, still unsure, but give your Grandma a smooch on the cheek and go on with your day.'
 
 					act 'Continue': grandmaQW['chore_berry_quantity'] = 0 & gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
 				end
@@ -972,12 +972,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandma.jpg"></center>'
 					'You bring your basket, heavy with mushrooms and berries from the forest, over to your grandmother.'
 					'"Grandma, here are the mushrooms and berries, just like you asked!"'
-					'"Oh, thank you very much, <<$pcs_nickname>>, they will have to go down in the root cellar until we are ready to can them," your Grandma replied.'
+					'"Oh, thank you very much, <<$pcs_nickname>>. They will have to go down in the root cellar until we are ready to can them," your Grandma replied.'
 					'"Do I need to go out on another run, or do you think that''s enough?"'
-					'"Well, little one," your Grandma says, "There is a difference between enough, and enough for today."'
-					'"Oh..." you say, unsure of what to make of her response.'
+					'"Well, little one," your Grandma says, "There is a difference between enough and enough for today."'
+					'"Oh..." you say, unsure what to make of her response.'
 					'She smiles gently and pats your head. "You''ve done enough for today, child."'
-					'You smile back awkwardly, still a little unsure, but give your Grandma a smooch on the cheek and go on with your day.'
+					'You smile back awkwardly, still unsure, but give your Grandma a smooch on the cheek and go on with your day.'
 
 					act 'Continue': grandmaQW['chore_mushroom_quantity'] = 0 & grandmaQW['chore_berry_quantity'] = 0 & gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
 				end
@@ -996,15 +996,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandma.jpg"></center>'
 				'You sit next to grandma, eager to have her tell you more about the village.'
-				'"Don''t you remember <<$pcs_nickname>>? You''ve visited us many times," said grandma.'
-				'"The last time I visited here I was really young. I remember some of the houses, but the clearest memory I have is going swimming with Mitya." you reply.'
+				'"Don''t you remember Sveta? You''ve visited us many times," said grandma.'
+				'"The last time I visited here, I was really young. Of course, I remember some of the houses, but the clearest memory I have is going swimming with Mitka," you reply.'
 				'"And look how big you''ve become! Just look at you." grandma smiled.'
 				'She begins telling you about the village.'
-				'"The village is small, as you know. You''ll probably find Mitya by the river or the beach where you can go swimming and sunbathe. There are still some fishermen here in the village if you want to go fishing, ask around after Stepan, he''ll lend you a fishing rod."'
-				'"There is nothing interesting in the village itself. Oh yes... I just remembered... recently a new family moved in, a single parent with his daughter. Could you imagine that, someone new moving in? The girl is about your age. Her father works in the city and from the rumors I''ve heard he''s hardly here because his work forces him to stay in the city most of the time. You''ll probably meet her while you take a walk in the village."'
-				'"In the outskirts of the village is the field where the cattle graze and beyond the field is the forest. You''ll usually find our local hunter Andrew in the forest. He often brings along his friends to hunt, they often stay there for days. They say he built a hut somewhere in the forest. So, if you meet Andrew and his friends out there, don''t be afraid. If you want to go to the forest make sure to ask grandfather first."'
-				'"If you like running, you can take a run on the road leading into the forest. Or you can take a ride on our old bike. I''m pretty sure the bike is in the shed. Make sure to look for it if you''re interested. And if you want to watch your figure, then go to the garden, have some fruit, it''s as healthy as the diet meals you''re eating, if not more healthier."'
-				'"That''s about it my dear granddaughter. Now run along, don''t bother me anymore. My soap opera "Santa Barbara" is about to begin, I don''t want to miss a second of it."'
+				'"The village is small, as you know. You''ll probably find Mitya by the river or the beach where you can go swimming and sunbathe. There are still some fishermen here in the village. If you want to go fishing, ask around after Stepan, he''ll lend you a fishing rod."'
+				'"Nothing is interesting in the village itself. Oh yes... I just remembered... recently, a new family moved in, a single parent with his daughter. Could you imagine someone new moving in? The girl is about your age. Her father works in the city, and from the rumours I''ve heard, he''s hardly here because his work forces him to stay in the city most of the time. You''ll probably meet her while you take a walk in the village."'
+				'"In the outskirts of the village is the field where the cattle graze and the forest beyond the field. You''ll usually find our local hunter Andrew in the forest. He often brings his friends to hunt, who often stay there for days. They say he built a hut somewhere in the forest. So, if you meet Andrew and his friends out there, don''t be afraid. If you want to go to the forest, ask grandfather first."'
+				'"If you like running, you can take a run on the road leading into the forest. Or you can take a ride on our old bike. I''m pretty sure the bike is in the shed. Make sure to look for it if you''re interested. And if you want to watch your figure, go to the garden, and have some fruit. It''s as healthy as the diet meals you''re eating, if not healthier."'
+				'"That''s about it, my dear granddaughter. Now run along, don''t bother me anymore. My soap opera "Santa Barbara" is about to begin. I don''t want to miss a second of it."'
 
 				act 'Continue':gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
 			end
@@ -1020,7 +1020,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandma.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend some time talking with your grandmother. She''s sometimes difficult to understand. Her nearly toothless mouth makes the pronunciation of words difficult for her. Most of what she says boils down to the same thing, life is much more fun when you''re young!'
+				'You spend some time talking with your grandmother. She''s sometimes challenging to understand. Her nearly toothless mouth makes the pronunciation of words difficult for her. But most of what she says boils down to the same thing, life is much more fun when you''re young!'
 
 				act 'Continue':gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
 			end
@@ -1035,58 +1035,58 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/babushka.jpg"></center>'
-				'When you ask your grandmother to tell you a story, she mumbles something. Nevertheless, after a brief second or two, she decides on a story to share with you today, she begins to talk slowly.'
+				'She mumbles something when you ask your grandmother to tell you a story. Nevertheless, after a brief second or two, she decides on a story to share with you today and begins to talk slowly.'
 
 				temp = rand(0,7)
 
 				if temp = 0:
 					'"There was this one time my parents allowed me to stay at my friend''s home for the night. During the night, a lot of snow fell... and we heard a soft knock on the door!" she says in an ominous voice.'
-					'"We listened more closely, but could only hear the wind whistling through the trees... so we decided to go back to sleep. Then we heard the knocking again!"'
-					'"We both ran quickly to the window, but couldn''t see anything other than snow. The knocking became more persistent, and the voice of a small girl begged us to open the door! My friend and I moved to the middle of the room, tightly hugging one another... we were terrified!"'
-					'"The knocking continued into the morning, even when the blizzard stopped. It sounded like someone was panicking, but when we told her parents in the morning, they didn''t believe us. When we went outside... there was no tracks on the snow! As if it never happened!"'
-					'"We never heard the voice or the knocking ever again after that, but I still feel bad for not going downstairs to answer the door. What if some girl was actually there, begging for our help? I hope she''s okay..."'
+					'"We listened more closely but could only hear the wind whistling through the trees... so we decided to go back to sleep. Then we heard the knocking again!"'
+					'""We dashed to the window but couldn''t see anything other than snow. Finally, the knocking became more persistent, and the voice of a small girl begged us to open the door! My friend and I moved to the middle of the room, tightly hugging one another... we were terrified!"'
+					'"The knocking continued into the morning, even when the blizzard stopped. It sounded like someone was panicking, but when we told her parents in the morning, they didn''t believe us. When we went outside... there were no tracks on the snow! As if it never happened!"'
+					'"We never heard the voice or the knocking again after that, but I still feel bad for not going downstairs to answer the door. What if some girl was actually there, begging for our help? I hope she''s okay..."'
 				elseif temp = 1:
-					'"I had a friend when I was younger." she says, in an ominous voice. "Her husband died at her house, he was a drunken bastard. He got drunk one day and died of alcohol poisoning in the very house."'
-					'"One day she came home from work, and the floor boards all of a sudden started creaking! And through the glass panes in the door in the hallway, she could see the silhouette of a man. It looked remarkably like her late husband!"'
-					'"She was terrified! She quickly left her house, and only went back when I promised to go with her... but of course, we found nothing. Do you believe in ghosts, <<$pcs_nickname>>? Because ever since then, I do..."'
+					'"I had a friend when I was younger," she says in an ominous voice. "Her husband died at her house. He was a drunken bastard. He got drunk one day and died of alcohol poisoning in the very same house."'
+					'"One day, she came home from work, and the floorboards suddenly started creaking! And through the glass panes in the hallway door, she could see the silhouette of a man. It looked remarkably like her late husband!"'
+					'"She was terrified! She quickly left her house and only returned when I promised to go with her... but of course, we found nothing. Do you believe in ghosts, <<$pcs_nickname>>? Because ever since then, I do..."'
 				elseif temp = 2:
-					'"I wasn''t born in Gadukino, I grew up in a different village", your grandmother begins. "This is a true story, by the way!"'
-					'"When I was still a little girl, one of our neighbors died. Then, less than two weeks later, one of his brothers died too! And as the legend goes, death comes in threes..."'
-					'"His one surviving sister was terrified. She was a friend of mine, but her parents wouldn''t let her leave the house."'
-					'"It was well into the winter season then, and people could only go to other towns by sleigh. For forty days, they waited... just when they were about to accept that the legend might not be true, they found one of her relatives. Dead. Muzhik I believe his name was, he was found frozen solid, basically a block of ice! He''d tried to attend his cousin''s funeral, but it cost him his life!"'
-					'"Death is not to be trifled with, <<$pcs_nickname>>... her parents were smart to hide her, otherwise she might''ve died instead!"'
+					'"I wasn''t born in Gadukino. I grew up in a different village", your grandmother begins. "This is a true story, by the way!"'
+					'"When I was still a little girl, one of our neighbours died. Then, less than two weeks later, one of his brothers died too! And as the legend goes, death comes in threes..."'
+					'"His one surviving sister was terrified. She was a friend, but her parents wouldn''t let her leave the house."'
+					'"It was well into the winter then, and people could only go to other towns by sleigh. So for forty days, they waited... just when they were about to accept that the legend might not be true, they found one of her relatives. Dead. Muzhik, I believe his name was, was found frozen solid, basically a block of ice! He''d tried to attend his cousin''s funeral, but it cost him his life!"'
+					'"Death is not to be trifled with, <<$pcs_nickname>>... her parents were smart to hide her. Otherwise, she might''ve died instead!"'
 				elseif temp = 3:
-					'"This really happened!" your grandmother reassures you. "When I was young, basically your age... it was just after the war. No one believed in superstition or anything like that. Those were tough times, all anyone cared about was how to get their next meal on the table for their family."'
-					'"We all went to bed, but our cat kept meowing at me! It just wouldn''t let me sleep, for hours and hours!"'
-					'"When I finally caught some sleep and woke up the next morning, my father was next to my bed. He said when he cleaned out the furnace of ashes, he found the remains of our dead cat in there!"'
-					'You see her eyes tear up. "No one knew how she got there... no one noticed anything! Except for me. To this day I believe she was trying to warn me, asking for my help..."'
-					'Your grandmother shrugs, wiping a tear from her eye. You put your hand on her knee reassuringly, but don''t really know what to say to comfort her.'
+					'"This really happened!" your grandmother reassures you. "When I was young, your age... it was just after the war. Then, no one believed in superstition or anything like that. Those were tough times. All anyone cared about was how to get their next meal on the table for their family."'
+					'"We all went to bed, but our cat kept meowing at me! It just wouldn''t let me sleep for hours and hours!"'
+					'"When I finally caught some sleep and woke up the next morning, my father was beside my bed. He said when he cleaned out the furnace of ashes, he found the remains of our dead cat in there!"'
+					'You see her eyes tear up. "No one knew how she got there... no one noticed anything! Except for me. To this day, I believe she was trying to warn me, asking for my help..."'
+					'Your grandmother shrugs, wiping a tear from her eye. You reassuringly put your hand on her knee but don''t know what to say to comfort her.'
 				!125s
 				elseif temp = 4:
-					'"I will tell you a story about an event that happened in the village I was brought up. One day a woman from a place far up in the northern Soviet Union moved to our village."'
-					'"The woman lived alone with this gorgeous dog, it was of white color, quite large and quiet as a mouse. After a while the dog died and the woman did''nt want to bury it."'
-					'"She always said it''s a shame to throw away the pelt since it was so furry. She spent some time thinking about what she could make of this pelt. After a while she decided to make a fur collar of the pelt."'
-					'"It took about two months and she got really sick... I among others visited her, and everything looked fine at the first glance. But as soon as I closed the door she started acting erratic and was hallucinating, these were the characteristics of a rabies. Since she was living alone no one noticed it before it was too late to save her life..."'
+					'"I will tell you a story about an event in the village where I was brought up. One day a woman from a place far up in the northern Soviet Union moved to our village."'
+					'"The woman lived alone with this gorgeous dog. It was a white colour, quite large and quiet as a mouse. But, the dog died after a while, and the woman didn''t want to bury it."'
+					'"She always said it''s a shame to throw away the pelt since it was so furry. So she thought about what she could make of this pelt. After a while, she decided to make a fur collar of the pelt."'
+					'"It took about two months, and she got really sick... I, among others, visited her, and everything looked fine at first glance. But as soon as I closed the door, she started acting erratic and hallucinating. These were the characteristics of rabies. Unfortunately, since she was living alone, no one noticed it before it was too late to save her life..."'
 				elseif temp = 5:
-					'"One evening during the Christmas holidays in my younger days I was hanging out with my girlfriends in the kitchen. It was my school friends, so we were always up to some mischief all the time."'
-					'"We were home alone, and one of my friends persuades us to do a séance. She tells us that a fortune-teller had explained to her how one could summon a spirit. So we light some candles and began chanting for the spirits to show themself."'
-					'"I managed to summon the profile of a male figure. He was holding something resembling a bouquet of flowers. My second friend summoned a kettle looking object while my last friend managed to summon an infant which frightened us."'
-					'"Not being discouraged we decided to try again excited by what we would manage to summon this time. This time I summoned a large steamer. My second friend didn''t summon anything special, but my third friend summoned the same infant again, the difference this time was that the infant was in a stroller."'
-					'"We ended the séance and went back doing ordinary stuff. All of a sudden we heard a knock on the door, it was the young man from the séance. He pulled out a beautiful bouquet of roses for me and gave them to me. I asked him what the reason was but he just answered that he got a feeling that he should deliver flowers to a girl in this specific village. I got the chills, because I remembered the man with a bouquet of flowers from the séance."'
-					'"The most interesting thing that happened was a few months after our séance, my friend that summoned the baby got pregnant. And by the end of the year she had a baby by the young age of 15. So beware when you meet a fortune-teller you never know what might happen..."'
+					'"One evening during the Christmas holidays in my younger days, I was hanging out with my girlfriends in the kitchen. But, of course, it was my school friends, so we were always up to some mischief."'
+					'"We were home alone, and one of my friends persuaded us to do a séance. She tells us that a fortune-teller had explained how one could summon a spirit. So we lit some candles and began chanting for the spirits to show themself."'
+					'"I managed to summon the profile of a male figure. He was holding something resembling a bouquet of flowers. My second friend summoned a kettle-looking object, while my last friend managed to summon an infant, which frightened us."'
+					'"Not being discouraged, we decided to try again, excited by what we would manage to summon this time. This time I summoned a large steamer. My second friend didn''t summon anything special, but my third friend summoned the same infant again. The difference this time was that the infant was in a stroller."'
+					'"We ended the séance and went back to doing ordinary stuff. Suddenly we heard a knock on the door, the young man from the séance. He pulled out a beautiful bouquet of roses and gave them to me. I asked him what the reason was, but he just answered that he felt he should deliver flowers to a girl in this village. After that, I got the chills because I remembered the man with a bouquet of flowers from the séance."'
+					'"The most interesting thing that happened was a few months after our séance, my friend that summoned the baby got pregnant. And by the end of the year, she had a baby by age 15. So beware, when you meet a fortune-teller, you never know what might happen..."'
 				elseif temp = 6:
-					'"I remember sitting down as we are right now," your grandma starts, but suddenly as if she remembered something, she sadly sighs "There are no more matches..."'
-					'You look at her perplexed, questioning what she''s talking about. "We do have matches in the kitchen or if you want I can run over to the store to buy some."'
-					'"You don''t get it, <<$pcs_nickname>>. The matches today are not as good as those made long time ago. I miss those matches we had during the Great Patriotic War, before they had to move the factory to the far east... Those matches were magical, not like this crap we have now... Ugh..."'
+					'"I remember sitting down as we are right now," your grandma starts, but suddenly as if she remembered something, she sadly sighs. "There are no more matches..."'
+					'You look at her perplexed, questioning what she''s talking about. "We do have matches in the kitchen, or if you want, I can run over to the store to buy some."'
+					'"You don''t get it, <<$pcs_nickname>>. The matches today are not as good as those made long ago. I miss those matches we had during the Great Patriotic War before they had to move the factory to the far east... Those matches were magical, not like this crap we have now... Ugh..."'
 
 				!Keep the word brigade if you want to change the text. It''s what the people working on the kolkhoz were called.
 				elseif temp = 7:
-					'"One day my mother, rest her soul, sent us four siblings out to the forest for berry gathering", your grandma begins. "We took our berry collectors and headed out. We reached the entrance of the forest pretty quickly and decided that it would be best to split up to complete the task faster. Since we were familiar with the area we all dispersed to our cherished spots and began gathering berries."'
-					'"My favorite spot was a plot surrounded by dense bushes and in the middle of the plot there was a huge stump. It''s was really a great spot and as I approached I noticed very large number of ripe strawberries. I was rejoicing over the thought that I would gather more than my brothers, slowly gathering the berries and putting them in my berry collector. All of a sudden I hear some rustling behind the bushes. I turn towards the sound, but I''m met with silence. I didn''t notice anyone but I still couldn''t get rid of the eerie feeling."'
-					'"I shook off the eerie feeling and go back gathering strawberries again. All of a sudden I get this strange feeling... I look up and I see a person squatting on the stump. He''s completely still and just stares at me. I got really scared and ran away screaming and crying towards my brothers. They tried to stop and calm me down, but I just kept on running. My brothers started running after me, trying to keep up. I could hear my oldest brother shouting to run towards the kolkhoz. You see <<$pcs_nickname>> long time ago we had central collective farms that were called kolkhoz, your grandma explains."'
-					'"We were lucky that the farms were close to the forest and didn''t have to run through the woods for long. I kept looking back if this person was following us but there was no sign of him. We knew we were safe when we see the farmers belonging to the brigade. My brothers and I ran up to the foreman and explained to him what had happened. He immediately grabbed the phone and called someone. The other farmers reassured us that we were safe now. After we had calmed down we got sent home. Our mother met as at home, she fed us and comforted me."'
-					'"The following day we were informed that not far from the train station Ratomka some people found dismantled railroad rails. Apparently it was done by the same man that I came across in the forest. I didn''t know it then but before the war our area was prone to sabotage by infiltrators, and staying hidden was easy, as the territory is covered by forest, stretching all the way to the border."'
-					'"Ever since that day the fear I experienced never disappeared, as I''ve felt it through my whole life. I’ll carry on this fear for the remaining days of my life…"'
+					'"One day, my mother, rest her soul, sent us four siblings out to the forest for berry gathering", your grandma begins. "We took our berry collectors and headed out. We reached the forest entrance quickly and decided that it would be best to split up to complete the task faster. Since we were familiar with the area, we all dispersed to our cherished spots and began gathering berries."'
+					'"My favourite spot was a plot surrounded by dense bushes, and in the middle of the plot, there was a huge stump. It was a great spot, and as I approached, I noticed a vast number of ripe strawberries. I rejoiced over the thought that I would gather more than my brothers, slowly gathering the berries and putting them in my berry collector. Then, suddenly, I hear some rustling behind the bushes. I turn towards the sound, but I''m met with silence. I didn''t notice anyone, but I still couldn''t get rid of the eerie feeling."'
+					'"I shook off the eerie feeling and returned to gathering strawberries again. All of a sudden, I get this strange feeling... I look up, and I see a person squatting on the stump. He''s completely still and just stares at me. I got terrified and ran away, screaming and crying towards my brothers. They tried to stop and calm me down, but I kept running. My brothers started running after me, trying to keep up. I could hear my oldest brother shouting to run towards the kolkhoz. You saw Sveta a long time ago. Your grandma explains that we had central collective farms called kolkhoz."'
+					'"We were lucky that the farms were close to the forest and didn''t have to run through the woods for long. I kept looking back to see if this person was following us, but there was no sign of him. We knew we were safe when we saw the brigade''s farmers. My brothers and I ran to the foreman and explained what had happened. He immediately grabbed the phone and called someone. The other farmers reassured us that we were safe now. After we had calmed down, we got sent home. Our mother met us at home. She fed us and comforted me."'
+					'"The following day, we were informed that some people found dismantled railroad rails not far from the train station Ratomka. Apparently, it was done by the man I encountered in the forest. I didn''t know it then, but before the war, our area was prone to sabotage by infiltrators. Staying hidden was easy, as the territory is covered by forest, stretching to the border."'
+					'"Ever since that day, the fear I experienced never disappeared, as I''ve felt it throughout my life. I''ll carry on this fear for the remaining days of my life..."'
 				end
 				!125e
 				act 'Thank her for the story':gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
@@ -1103,10 +1103,10 @@ if $ARGS[0]='grandpa':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandpa.jpg"></center>'
-	'Your grandfather is a grumpy old man, who is always complaining about the village elders and how they have neglected the village to barely being fit to live in. He can walk, but requires a cane. He doesn''t really leave the house any more, unless he really has to.'
+	'Your grandfather is a grumpy old man who is always complaining about the village elders and how they have neglected the village to barely being fit to live in. He can walk but requires a cane. So he doesn''t leave the house anymore unless he really has to.'
 	if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
-		'Grandpa looks shocked but it doesn''t stop him from having a good look at you.'
-		'"My God <<$pcs_nickname>>! Are you trying to give me a heart attack? Go and put some clothes on!"'
+		'Grandpa looks shocked, but it doesn''t stop him from having a good look at you.'
+		'"My God, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Are you trying to give me a heart attack? Go and put some clothes on!"'
 
 		act 'Maybe you should get dressed before talking to him':gt 'gadhouse', 'start'
 	else
@@ -1137,7 +1137,7 @@ if $ARGS[0]='grandpa':
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandpa1.jpg"></center>'
 				'"I''ve brought in some firewood, Grandpa," you say to your grandfather.'
-				'"Thank you very much, <<$pcs_nickname>>," he replies with a smile. "Just set down it over there."'
+				'"Thank you very much, <<$pcs_nickname>>," he replies with a smile. "Just set it down over there."'
 				'You put down the heavy wood gratefully. "Is there anything else you need?"'
 				'"No, that is all I have for you today," he says.'
 
@@ -1155,7 +1155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0]='grandpa':
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandpa1.jpg"></center>'
 				'"I fed the horse, Grandpa."'
-				'"Thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>," he says. "It is very important to make sure a horse is well fed. They are hard workers and deserve their meals."'
+				'"Thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>," he says. "It is imperative to make sure a horse is well fed. They are hard workers and deserve their meals."'
 				'You smile in agreement. "I am sure Desperado is a very hard worker."'
 				'"He may not be the young stallion he once was," your grandfather says, "but he is a trusted friend."'
 				'He obviously cares a great deal about his horse.'
@@ -1174,7 +1174,7 @@ if $ARGS[0]='grandpa':
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandpa1.jpg"></center>'
 				'You tell your grandfather, "I fed Dawn her hay, Grandpa."'
-				'"Very good, <<$pcs_nickname>>," he says. "I presume she acted like we were starving her to death?"'
+				'"Excellent, <<$pcs_nickname>>," he says. "I presume she acted like we were starving her to death?"'
 				'"Well, she was definitely excited," you say with a laugh.'
 				'"She always is when it comes to eating," he says.'
 
@@ -1214,13 +1214,13 @@ if $ARGS[0]='grandpa':
 				'"Yes sir, I did," you say.'
 				'"Even his belly?"'
 				'"Yes, even his belly."'
-				'"And did you wash his face and comb his mane and tail?"'
-				'"Ugh, yes Grandpa, I did everything just like you showed me when I was a kid."'
-				'"Don''t sass me, <<$pcs_firstname>>," you grandfather says with a scowl. "Properly brushing a horse is very important for their health."'
+				'"Did you wash his face and comb his mane and tail?"'
+				'"Ugh, yes, Grandpa, I did everything just like you showed me when I was a kid."'
+				'"Don''t sass me, <<$pcs_firstname>>," your grandfather says with a scowl. "Properly brushing a horse is very important for their health."'
 				'The rebuke stings a little. "Sorry, Grandpa."'
-				'His face softens when he sees he upset you. "...no, child, I''m sorry. You did me a favor and here I am berating you for it. Thank you for brushing the horse, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-				'"It''s okay Grandpa. I know Desperado is important to you," you say.'
-				'He smiles and rubs your shoulder. "Thank you again. You may rest now, there is nothing else to do today."'
+				'His face softens when he sees he upset you. "...no, child, I''m sorry. You did me a favour, and here I am berating you for it. Thank you for brushing the horse, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+				'"It''s okay, Grandpa. I know Desperado is important to you," you say.'
+				'He smiles and rubs your shoulder. "Thank you again. You may rest now. There is nothing else to do today."'
 
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gadhouse', 'grandpa'
 			end
@@ -1236,7 +1236,7 @@ if $ARGS[0]='grandpa':
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandpa1.jpg"></center>'
 				'You walk up to your grandfather and tell him, "I fed the pig, Grandpa."'
-				'"Thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>," he says.'
+				'"Thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>," he says.'
 				'"You''re welcome! Is there anything else you need?"'
 				'"No, you can take the rest of the day off, granddaughter."'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gadhouse', 'grandpa'
@@ -1252,10 +1252,10 @@ if $ARGS[0]='grandpa':
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandpa1.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Hey Grandpa, I took Desperado out to the field."'
-				'"Good, good," he says. "Horses need freedom to run."'
+				'"Hey, Grandpa, I took Desperado out to the field."'
+				'"Good, good," he says. "Horses need the freedom to run."'
 				'You nod. "He seemed pretty happy to be able to run around."'
-				'Your grandfather smiles at that. "Thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>. You can rest for now."'
+				'Your grandfather smiles at that. "Thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>. You can rest for now."'
 
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gadhouse', 'grandpa'
 			end
@@ -1270,10 +1270,10 @@ if $ARGS[0]='grandpa':
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandpa1.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Hi Grandpa!" you say. "I took Dawn out to the field."'
+				'"Hi, Grandpa!" you say. "I took Dawn out to the field."'
 				'"Were the others there?" he asks.'
 				'You nod. "Yes, sir. I asked them to drive her home later - they seemed fine with that."'
-				'"Yes, here in the country we all must help one another. Soon it will be our turn to watch the cattle."'
+				'"Yes, here in the country, we all must help one another. Soon it will be our turn to watch the cattle."'
 				'"All of them? For the whole village? Just us?" you ask incredulously.'
 				'"No child, there will be a few others with us. But don''t look so surprised - it does not take many people to herd cows."'
 				'You think of the stories you have heard of a few herders driving thousands of cattle. "Hmm, I guess that''s true..."'
@@ -1293,7 +1293,7 @@ if $ARGS[0]='grandpa':
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandpa1.jpg"></center>'
 				'You walk up to your grandfather and tell him, "I gave Desperado a bath in the river, Grandpa."'
-				'"Thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>," he says. "Grooming him is all well and good, but sometimes it''s not enough."'
+				'"Thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>," he says. "Grooming him is all well and good, but sometimes it''s not enough."'
 				'"You''re welcome! It was actually a lot of fun. Is there anything else you need?"'
 				'"No, you can take the rest of the day off, granddaughter."'
 
@@ -1317,9 +1317,9 @@ if $ARGS[0]='grandpa':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandpa1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You walk up to Grandpa with your basket.'
 					'"Grandpa, here are the mushrooms!"'
-					'"Thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ve made an old man happy," your grandfather replies with a smile. "The mushrooms are in a part of the forest that is difficult to reach, so no wonder it took you so long."'
-					'"I can still go and gather more mushrooms, if you want?"'
-					'"There''s no need <<$pcs_nickname>>," said your grandfather. "But if I need some help, I''ll be sure to let you know. They will have to go down in the root cellar until your grandmother is ready to can them."'
+					'"Thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ve made an old man happy," your grandfather replies with a smile. "The mushrooms are in a part of the forest that is difficult to reach, so no wonder it took you so long."'
+					'"I can still go and gather more mushrooms if you want?"'
+					'"There''s no need <<$pcs_nickname>>," said your grandfather. "But if I need some help, I''ll let you know. They will have to go down in the root cellar until your grandmother is ready to can them."'
 					'You kiss your grandfather on the cheek and get on with your day.'
 
 					act 'Continue': grandpaQW['chore_mushroom_quantity'] = 0 & gt 'gadhouse', 'start'
@@ -1337,9 +1337,9 @@ if $ARGS[0]='grandpa':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandpa1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You walk up to Grandpa with your basket.'
 					'"Grandpa, here are the mushrooms!"'
-					'"Thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ve made an old man very happy," your grandfather replies with a smile. "The mushrooms are in a part of the forest that is difficult to reach."'
-					'"I can still go and gather more mushrooms, if you want?"'
-					'"There''s no need <<$pcs_nickname>>," said your grandfather. "But if I need some help, I''ll be sure to let you know. They will have to go down in the root cellar until your grandmother is ready to can them."'
+					'"Thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ve made an old man very happy," your grandfather replies with a smile. "The mushrooms are in a part of the forest that is difficult to reach."'
+					'"I can still go and gather more mushrooms if you want?"'
+					'"There''s no need, <<$pcs_nickname>>," said your grandfather. "But if I need some help, I''ll let you know. They will have to go down in the root cellar until your grandmother is ready to can them."'
 					'You kiss your grandfather on the cheek and get on with your day.'
 
 					act 'Continue': grandpaQW['chore_mushroom_quantity'] = 0 & gt 'gadhouse', 'start'
@@ -1364,9 +1364,9 @@ if $ARGS[0]='grandpa':
 					'You walk up to Grandpa with your basket.'
 					'"Grandpa, here are the berries!"'
 					'"Oh, thank you, I thought I asked for these yesterday," Grandpa replied. "It''s hard to keep track of things as you get older, just as it is for your grandmother to gather the berries, and she needs them so she can make jam for the winter."'
-					'"If you need some more berries I''ll be glad to go out and gather more."'
-					'"There''s no need <<$pcs_nickname>>," your grandfather said. "But if your grandma needs some more berries, I''ll let you know. They will have to go down in the root cellar until your grandmother is ready to can them."'
-					'You kiss your grandfather on the cheek, you go on with your business.'
+					'"If you need some more berries, I''ll be glad to go out and gather more."'
+					'There''s no need, <<$pcs_nickname>>," your grandfather said. "But if your grandma needs some more berries, I''ll let you know. They will have to go down in the root cellar until your grandmother is ready to can them."'
+					'You kiss your grandfather on the cheek and go on with your business.'
 
 					act 'Continue': grandpaQW['chore_berry_quantity'] = 0 & gt 'gadhouse', 'start'
 				end
@@ -1384,9 +1384,9 @@ if $ARGS[0]='grandpa':
 					'You walk up to Grandpa with your basket.'
 					'"Grandpa, here are the berries!"'
 					'"Oh, thank you, nicely done," Grandpa replied. "It''s hard for your grandmother to gather the berries, and she needs them so she can make jam for the winter."'
-					'"If you need some more berries I''ll be glad to go out and gather more."'
+					'"If you need some more berries, I''ll be glad to go out and gather more."'
 					'"There''s no need <<$pcs_nickname>>," your grandfather said. "But if your grandma needs some more berries, I''ll let you know. They will have to go down in the root cellar until your grandmother is ready to can them."'
-					'You kiss your grandfather on the cheek, you go on with your business.'
+					'You kiss your grandfather on the cheek and go on with your business.'
 
 					act 'Continue': grandpaQW['chore_berry_quantity'] = 0 & gt 'gadhouse', 'start'
 				end
@@ -1412,9 +1412,9 @@ if $ARGS[0]='grandpa':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandpa1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You walk up to Grandpa with your basket.'
 					'"Grandpa, here are the mushrooms and berries!"'
-					'"Oh, thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>, better late than never," your grandfather replied.'
+					'"Oh, thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>, better late than never," your grandfather replied.'
 					'"If you want, I can go out for another run."'
-					'"You don''t need to do that, <<$pcs_nickname>>," your grandfather said. "But I''ll be sure to let you know if something comes up. They will have to go down in the root cellar until your grandmother is ready to can them."'
+					'"You don''t need to do that, <<$pcs_nickname>>," your grandfather said. "But I''ll let you know if something comes up. They will have to go down in the root cellar until your grandmother is ready to can them."'
 					'You give him a smooch on the cheek and go on with your day.'
 
 					act 'Continue': grandpaQW['chore_mushroom_quantity'] = 0 & grandpaQW['chore_berry_quantity'] = 0 & gt 'gadhouse', 'start'
@@ -1434,9 +1434,9 @@ if $ARGS[0]='grandpa':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandpa1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You walk up to Grandpa with your basket.'
 					'"Grandpa, here are the mushrooms and berries!"'
-					'"Oh, thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>," your grandfather replied.'
+					'"Oh, thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>," your grandfather replied.'
 					'"If you want, I can go out for another run."'
-					'"You don''t need to do that, <<$pcs_nickname>>," your grandfather said. "But I''ll be sure to let you know if something comes up. They will have to go down in the root cellar until your grandmother is ready to can them."'
+					'"You don''t need to do that, <<$pcs_nickname>>," your grandfather said. "But I''ll let you know if something comes up. They will have to go down in the root cellar until your grandmother is ready to can them."'
 					'You give him a smooch on the cheek and go on with your day.'
 
 					act 'Continue': grandpaQW['chore_mushroom_quantity'] = 0 & grandpaQW['chore_berry_quantity'] = 0 & gt 'gadhouse', 'start'
@@ -1456,10 +1456,10 @@ if $ARGS[0]='grandpa':
 				'"I spent all day helping with the hay, Grandpa," you tell him, stretching your sore muscles.'
 				'He smiles proudly at you and says, "Yes, I was there too, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I saw you working hard."'
 				'"That was a lot of work!" you exclaim. "I''m completely exhausted."'
-				'"Yes, yes it is," he says. "I am worn out myself. I won''t be able to do it much longer, but you are still young and strong. I am very proud that my granddaughter is such a hard worker."'
+				'"Yes, yes it is," he says. "I have worn myself out. I won''t be able to do it much longer, but you are still young and strong. I am very proud that my granddaughter is such a hard worker."'
 				'Maybe it''s just the exhaustion, but your eyes tear up slightly at that. Your grandfather is usually pretty sparing with his praise.'
 				'"Thank you, Grandpa," you say, giving him a tight hug, which he returns with surprising strength for his age.'
-				'After a few moments he lets go, and tells you, "Go and get some rest, child. You have earned it."'
+				'After a few moments, he lets go and tells you, "Go and get some rest, child. You have earned it."'
 
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gadhouse', 'grandpa'
 			end
@@ -1477,10 +1477,10 @@ if $ARGS[0]='grandpa':
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandpa1.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Listen carefully <<$pcs_nickname>>. You want to explore the forest and that''s great. But be sure of your surroundings, without having any knowledge of the forest you may easily get lost. Don''t go exploring too deep in the forest, because the mushrooms and berries can be found at the edge of the forest. If you choose to explore the forest you''ll find a swamp in the middle of the forest. You can find mushrooms and berries there too... Going into the forest at night is not recommended, wild boars may attack, and you might end up really hurt."'
-				'"If you manage to get lost and can''t find your way out of the forest before it gets dark, then light a fire and sit still there until morning. The beasts in the forest are afraid of the fire, so they won''t approach you."'
+				'"Listen carefully, <<$pcs_nickname>>. You want to explore the forest, and that''s great. But be sure of your surroundings. Without having any knowledge of the forest, you may easily get lost. Don''t explore too deep in the forest because mushrooms and berries can be found at the forest''s edge. If you choose to explore the forest, you''ll find a swamp in the middle of the forest. You can find mushrooms and berries there too... Going into the forest at night is not recommended. Wild boars may attack, and you might end up really hurt."'
+				'"If you manage to get lost and can''t find your way out of the forest before it gets dark, then light a fire and sit still until morning. The beasts in the forest are afraid of the fire, so they won''t approach you."'
 				'"There''s one more thing... While you''re in the woods, avoid dressing yourself up in fancy clothes. You might damage them. It''s better to dress in more comfortable clothes instead..."'
-				'"Well, I think that''s everything <<$pcs_nickname>>, run along now, and remember what I''ve told you."'
+				'"Well, I think that''s everything, <<$pcs_nickname>>, run along now and remember what I''ve told you."'
 
 				act 'Continue':gt 'gadhouse', 'grandpa'
 			end
@@ -1496,7 +1496,7 @@ if $ARGS[0]='grandpa':
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandpa1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Your grandfather stops complaining and smiles at you, he loves telling stories. He has lived a rich and eventful life, and you enjoy listening to his stories and talking to him. He mostly reminisces about his past, and reflects on his earlier life.'
+				'Your grandfather stops complaining and smiles at you. He loves telling stories. He has lived a rich and eventful life, and you enjoy listening to his stories and talking to him. He mostly reminisces about his past and reflects on his earlier life.'
 
 				act 'Continue':gt 'gadhouse', 'grandpa'
 			end
@@ -1534,7 +1534,7 @@ if $ARGS[0]='villagecat':
 			gs 'stat'
 			feedcat = 2
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/feedboniface.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'When Boniface sees you moving towards the cupboard, he jumps down off of the table and runs to his food dish. It is obvious that he feels that you are moving far too slowly and rattles his bowl to make sure you understand that he is starving while you dawdle.'
+			'When Boniface sees you moving towards the cupboard, he jumps off the table and runs to his food dish. He obviously feels that you are moving far too slowly and rattles his bowl to make sure you understand that he is starving while you dawdle.'
 			act 'Continue': gt 'gadhouse', 'start'
 		end
 	end
@@ -1545,14 +1545,14 @@ if $ARGS[0]='villagecat':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 10
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You open the door for Boniface who saunters around you only to stop in the doorway as he becomes aware that it is raining out. He glares up at you as if the rain was your fault. He stares out into the wet for another moment then sedately turns around and goes back to his box.'
+				'You open the door for Boniface, who saunters around you only to stop in the doorway as he becomes aware that it is raining. He glares up at you as if the rain was your fault. He stares out into the wet for another moment, then sedately turns around and returns to his box.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gadhouse', 'start'
 			else
 				*clr & cla
 				minut +=10
 				gs 'stat'
 				catout = 2
-				'You open the door for Boniface who saunters around you only to stop in the doorway as he stops to consider if he really wants to go outside. After considering all the pros and cons, he finally decides to go out.'
+				'You open the door for Boniface, who saunters around you only to stop in the doorway as he stops to consider if he really wants to go outside. After considering all the pros and cons, he finally decides to go out.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gadhouse', 'start'
 			end
 		end
@@ -1609,7 +1609,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'family_trip':
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your mother, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 						*nl
-						'<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you "Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>, are you coming home with us or are you going to stay in the village with your grandparents?"'
+						'<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, are you coming home with us or are you going to stay in the village with your grandparents?"'
 
 						act 'Stay with your grandaparents':gadstay_day = daystart & gadstay = 1 & locat['Fam_inGad'] = 0 & gt 'gadhouse', 'main'
 						act 'Go home to Pavlovsk': gt 'gadhouse', 'to_pavlovsk'
@@ -1639,13 +1639,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'to_pavlovsk':
 		money += grandmaQW['help_amount']*25
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		'Before leaving your grandma hugs you and gives you <<grandmaQW[''help_amount'']*25>> rubles for your help with chores.'
+		'Before leaving, your grandma hugs you and gives you <<grandmaQW[''help_amount'']*25>> rubles for your help with chores.'
 		grandmaQW['help_amount'] = 0
 	else
-		'Before leaving your grandma gives you a big hug goodbye.'
+		'Before leaving, your grandma gives you a big hug goodbye.'
 	end
 
-	'You get into the Volga with the rest of your family and before you know it, you''ve arrived back in Pavlovsk.'
+	'You get into the Volga with the rest of your family, and before you know it, you''ve arrived back in Pavlovsk.'
 	killvar 'home_name' 
 	act 'Go home': gt 'korrPar'
 end
@@ -1657,7 +1657,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'to_gadukino':
 	minut += rand(15,25)
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'You get into the Volga with the rest of your family and before you know it, you''ve arrived in Gadukino.'
+	'You get into the Volga with the rest of your family, and before you know it, you''ve arrived in Gadukino.'
 
 	act 'Go to your grandparents house': gt 'gadhouse', 'start'
 end
@@ -1666,7 +1666,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro':
 	cla & *clr
 	$loc_arg = ''
 	$loc = 'gadhouse'
-	gs 'homes_properties', 'set_home', 'grandparents_house'
 	$temp_nickname = '<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
 	grandmaQW['last_month_paid'] = month
 	display_bb = 1
@@ -1678,7 +1677,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro':
 	'<center><H4>Your Grandparents'' Cottage</H4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/prost4.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'All of a sudden you hear a familiar voice yell out, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, time to get up. You can''t spend the whole day laying around!"'
+	'Suddenly, you hear a familiar voice yell, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, time to get up. You can''t spend the whole day lying around!"'
 	wait 2000
 	$npc_nickname['A29'] = input('<center>What name do you address your mother by?<br>Mother (default), Mum, Mom, Mama, etc.</center>')
 	if $npc_nickname['A29'] = '':$npc_nickname['A29'] = '<<$temp_nickname>>'
@@ -1691,13 +1690,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro':
 		'<center><H4>Your Grandparents'' Cottage</H4></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/prost5.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'You tiredly open your eyes seeing your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> standing over you, "Fifteen more minutes..."'
+		'You tiredly open your eyes, seeing your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> standing over you, "Fifteen more minutes..."'
 		'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> lets out a loud sigh, "No, up now!" as she yanks the cover off...'
 		'"<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>!" you exclaim, as you feel a slight cold breeze hit your body.'
 		if month = 6:
-			'"Listen!, I''m heading back to Pavlovsk this morning, and I don''t want to hear excuses, <<$pcs_nickname>>. You said you''d help out your grandparents during the summer holidays. So, from now on set your alarm, so you can wake up at a reasonable time." <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> says as she stares at you expectantly.'
+			'"Listen! I''m heading back to Pavlovsk this morning, and I don''t want to hear excuses, <<$pcs_nickname>> You said you''d help out your grandparents during the summer holidays. So, from now on, set your alarm, so you can wake up at a reasonable time." <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> says as she stares at you expectantly.'
 		else
-			'"Listen!, I''m heading back to Pavlovsk this morning, and I don''t want to hear excuses, <<$pcs_nickname>>. The summer holidays will be over soon and you need to get used to waking up early, for when school starts. So, from now on set your alarm, so you can wake up at a reasonable time." <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> says as she stares at you expectantly.'
+			'"Listen! I''m heading back to Pavlovsk this morning, and I don''t want to hear excuses, <<$pcs_nickname>>. The summer holidays will be over soon, and you need to get used to waking up early for when school starts. So, set your alarm, so you can wake up at a reasonable time." <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> says as she stares at you expectantly.'
 		end
 		act 'Get up':
 			cla & *clr
@@ -1707,9 +1706,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/prost4.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
 			if month = 6:
-				'As soon as you get off your now coverless bed, your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is quick to resume her nagging, telling you again what you already heard from her a few moments ago. "The work around the farm normally gets done in the morning, so you can''t sleep in anymore, not even for another fifteen minutes." She''s not even looking at you while she talks, but luckily for you that means she misses you rolling your eyes.'
+				'As soon as you get off your now coverless bed, your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is quick to resume her nagging, telling you again what you already heard from her a few moments ago. "The work around the farm normally gets done in the morning, so you can''t sleep in anymore, not even for another fifteen minutes." She''s not even looking at you while she talks, but luckily for you, she misses you rolling your eyes.'
 			else
-			'	As soon as you get off your now coverless bed, your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is quick to resume her nagging, telling you again what you already heard from her a few moments ago. "Summer is almost over, you can''t sleep in anymore, not even for another fifteen minutes." She''s not even looking at you while she talks, but luckily for you that means she misses you rolling your eyes.'
+			'As soon as you get off your now coverless bed, <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is quick to resume her nagging, telling you again what you already heard from her a few moments ago. "Summer is almost over. You can''t sleep in anymore, not even for another fifteen minutes." Of course, she''s not even looking at you while she talks, but luckily for you, she misses you rolling your eyes.'
 			end
 			'"What are you going to do when school starts, or when you get a job? You better get into the habit of setting your alarm so you can wake up bright and early."'
 			act 'Continue':
@@ -1719,11 +1718,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro':
 				'<center><H4>Your Grandparents'' Cottage</H4></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/prost5.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'You let out an exasperated sigh, "Yeah, yeah I know, you told me that already. So, how early are we talking?"'
+				'You release an exasperated sigh, "Yeah, I know, you told me that already. So, how early are we talking?"'
 				if month = 6:
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shoots you a sharp look and you know to fix your attitude or else. "Well, depends on what you plan to do in the morning. There''s showering and brushing your teeth, doing your hair and then makeup and shaving if you really need to. If I remember right... Anya used to wake up at 06:00 when she slept here. Besides, while you are staying at your grandparents house, you should be up extra early helping them tend to the farm, this isn''t a holiday camp!"'
+					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shoots you a sharp look, and you know to fix your attitude or else. "Well, depends on what you plan to do in the morning. There''s showering and brushing your teeth, doing your hair and then makeup and shaving if you really need to. If I remember right... Anya used to wake up at 06:00 when she used to sleep here. Besides, while staying at your grandparents'' house, you should be up extra early helping them tend to the farm. This isn''t a holiday camp!"'
 				else
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shoots you a sharp look and you know to fix your attitude or else. "Well, depends on what you plan to do in the morning. There''s showering and brushing your teeth, doing your hair and then makeup and shaving if you really need to. If I remember right... Anya used to wake up at 06:00 for school. Besides, while you are staying at your grandparents house, you should be up extra early helping them tend to the farm, this isn''t a holiday camp!"'
+					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shoots you a sharp look, and you know to fix your attitude or else. "Well, depends on what you plan to do in the morning. There''s showering and brushing your teeth, doing your hair and then makeup and shaving if you really need to. If I remember right... Anya used to wake up at 06:00 for school. Besides, while staying at your grandparents'' house, you should be up extra early helping them tend to the farm. This isn''t a holiday camp!"'
 				end
 				act 'Continue':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -1734,11 +1733,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro':
 					*nl
 					'"You want me to wake up that early?!" You huff. "Can''t I wake up at like... 07:00?"'
 					if month = 6:
-						'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shrugs. "You could, but then you might have to cut corners or your grandparents will have started work without you, and I won''t be having any of that." she warns you before making her way outside.'
-						if pcs_vag = 0: '"Oh, don''t forget; when you get back to Pavlovsk, you need to head down to the clinic and see the gynecologist for a check up. Not just once, but every month," she adds quickly.'
+						'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shrugs. "You could, but then you might have to cut corners, or your grandparents will have started work without you, and I won''t be having any of that," she warns you before making her way outside.'
+						if pcs_vag = 0: '"Oh, don''t forget; when you get back to Pavlovsk, you need to head to the clinic and see the gynaecologist for a check-up. Not just once, but every month," she adds quickly.'
 					else
 						'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shrugs. "You could, but then you might have to cut corners or even end up running late to school, and I won''t be having any of that. Your teachers won''t either," she warns you before making her way outside.'
-						if pcs_vag = 0: '"Oh, don''t forget; when you get back to Pavlovsk, you need to head down to the clinic and see the gynecologist for a check up. Not just once, but every month," she adds quickly.'
+						if pcs_vag = 0: '"Oh, don''t forget; when you get back to Pavlovsk, you need to head to the clinic and see the gynaecologist for a check-up. Not just once, but every month," she adds quickly.'
 					end
 					act 'But why do I--':
 						cla & *clr
@@ -1749,7 +1748,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro':
 						'<center><H4>Your Grandparents'' Cottage</H4></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/prost5.jpg"></center>'
 						*nl
-						'Before you can finish, she cuts you off. "I''m not going to have you running around town like so many of those other girls I see! Opening their legs for any boy that comes around..." She shakes her head in disgust. "I want a referral every month and it better tell me you''re still a virgin or else, understand?" <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> says as she storms off towards your grandparent''s outside door. "Don''t forget to talk to your grandparent''s and ask if they need help!" she says loudly. Without waiting for your response, she closes the door, and with that, she''s gone.'
+						'Before you can finish, she cuts you off. "I''m not going to have you running around town like so many of those other girls I see! Opening their legs for any boy that comes around..." She shakes her head in disgust. "I want a referral every month and it better tell me you''re still a virgin or else, understand?" <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> says as she storms off towards your grandparent''s outside door. "Don''t forget to talk to your grandparents and ask if they need help!" she shouts. Then, without waiting for your response, she closes the door, and with that, she''s gone.'
 						!! TODO: Check how it gets back to the house and if $home_name is set properly at that point.
 						act 'I understand...':gt 'budilnik', 'start'
 					end

+ 42 - 42
locations/masseuse_schedule.qsrc

@@ -50,9 +50,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 !! First Sunday Shift
 	*P '<tr><td>' 
-	if masseuse['7_shift_1'] = 0 and masseuse['7_shift_1_taken'] < 2:
+	if masseuse['7_shift_1'] = 0 and masseuse['7_shift_1_taken'] < 2 and no (week = 7 and hour > 8 and hour < 13):
 		'<a href="exec:masseuse[''7_shift_1''] = 1 & gt''masseuse_schedule'',''start''"> 09:00-13:00 shift</a>'
-	elseif masseuse['7_shift_1_taken'] = 2:
+	elseif masseuse['7_shift_1_taken'] = 2 or (week = 7 and hour > 8 and hour < 13):
 		'09:00-13:00 shift'
 		'<i>not available</i>'
 	elseif masseuse['7_shift_1'] = 2:
@@ -66,9 +66,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 !! First Monday Shift
 
-	if masseuse['1_shift_1'] = 0 and masseuse['1_shift_1_taken'] < 2:
+	if masseuse['1_shift_1'] = 0 and masseuse['1_shift_1_taken'] < 2 and no (week = 1 and hour > 8 and hour < 13):
 		'<a href="exec:masseuse[''1_shift_1''] = 1 & gt''masseuse_schedule'',''start''"> 09:00-13:00 shift</a>'
-	elseif masseuse['1_shift_1_taken'] = 2:
+	elseif masseuse['1_shift_1_taken'] = 2 or (week = 1 and hour > 8 and hour < 13):
 		'09:00-13:00 shift'
 		'<i>not available</i>'
 	elseif masseuse['1_shift_1'] = 2:
@@ -82,9 +82,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 !! First Tuesday Shift
 
-	if masseuse['2_shift_1'] = 0 and masseuse['2_shift_1_taken'] < 2:
+	if masseuse['2_shift_1'] = 0 and masseuse['2_shift_1_taken'] < 2 and no (week = 2 and hour > 8 and hour < 13):
 		'<a href="exec:masseuse[''2_shift_1''] = 1 & gt''masseuse_schedule'',''start''"> 09:00-13:00 shift</a>'
-	elseif masseuse['2_shift_1_taken'] = 2:
+	elseif masseuse['2_shift_1_taken'] = 2 or (week = 2 and hour > 8 and hour < 13):
 		'09:00-13:00 shift'
 		'<i>not available</i>'
 	elseif masseuse['2_shift_1'] = 2:
@@ -98,9 +98,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 !! First Wednesday Shift
 
-	if masseuse['3_shift_1'] = 0 and masseuse['3_shift_1_taken'] < 2:
+	if masseuse['3_shift_1'] = 0 and masseuse['3_shift_1_taken'] < 2 and no (week = 3 and hour > 8 and hour < 13):
 		'<a href="exec:masseuse[''3_shift_1''] = 1 & gt''masseuse_schedule'',''start''"> 09:00-13:00 shift</a>'
-	elseif masseuse['3_shift_1_taken'] = 2:
+	elseif masseuse['3_shift_1_taken'] = 2 or (week = 3 and hour > 8 and hour < 13):
 		'09:00-13:00 shift'
 		'<i>not available</i>'
 	elseif masseuse['3_shift_1'] = 2:
@@ -114,9 +114,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 !! First Thursday Shift
 
-	if masseuse['4_shift_1'] = 0 and masseuse['4_shift_1_taken'] < 2:
+	if masseuse['4_shift_1'] = 0 and masseuse['4_shift_1_taken'] < 2 and no (week = 4 and hour > 8 and hour < 13):
 		'<a href="exec:masseuse[''4_shift_1''] = 1 & gt''masseuse_schedule'',''start''"> 09:00-13:00 shift</a>'
-	elseif masseuse['4_shift_1_taken'] = 2:
+	elseif masseuse['4_shift_1_taken'] = 2 or (week = 4 and hour > 8 and hour < 13):
 		'09:00-13:00 shift'
 		'<i>not available</i>'
 	elseif masseuse['4_shift_1'] = 2:
@@ -130,9 +130,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 !! First Friday Shift
 	
-	if masseuse['5_shift_1'] = 0 and masseuse['5_shift_1_taken'] < 2:
+	if masseuse['5_shift_1'] = 0 and masseuse['5_shift_1_taken'] < 2 and no (week = 5 and hour > 8 and hour < 13):
 		'<a href="exec:masseuse[''5_shift_1''] = 1 & gt''masseuse_schedule'',''start''"> 09:00-13:00 shift</a>'
-	elseif masseuse['5_shift_1_taken'] = 2:
+	elseif masseuse['5_shift_1_taken'] = 2 or (week = 5 and hour > 8 and hour < 13):
 		'09:00-13:00 shift'
 		'<i>not available</i>'
 	elseif masseuse['5_shift_1'] = 2:
@@ -146,9 +146,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 !! First Saturday Shift
 
-	if masseuse['6_shift_1'] = 0 and masseuse['6_shift_1_taken'] < 2:
+	if masseuse['6_shift_1'] = 0 and masseuse['6_shift_1_taken'] < 2 and no (week = 6 and hour > 8 and hour < 13):
 		'<a href="exec:masseuse[''6_shift_1''] = 1 & gt''masseuse_schedule'',''start''"> 09:00-13:00 shift</a>'
-	elseif masseuse['6_shift_1_taken'] = 2:
+	elseif masseuse['6_shift_1_taken'] = 2 or (week = 6 and hour > 8 and hour < 13):
 		'09:00-13:00 shift'
 		'<i>not available</i>'
 	elseif masseuse['6_shift_1'] = 2:
@@ -165,9 +165,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 !! Second Sunday Shift
 	*P '<tr><td>' 
-	if masseuse['7_shift_2'] = 0 and masseuse['7_shift_2_taken'] < 2:
+	if masseuse['7_shift_2'] = 0 and masseuse['7_shift_2_taken'] < 2 and no (week = 7 and hour > 12 and hour < 17):
 		'<a href="exec:masseuse[''7_shift_2''] = 1 & gt''masseuse_schedule'',''start''"> 13:00-17:00 shift</a>'
-	elseif masseuse['7_shift_2_taken'] = 2:
+	elseif masseuse['7_shift_2_taken'] = 2 or (week = 7 and hour > 12 and hour < 17):
 		'13:00-17:00 shift'
 		'<i>not available</i>'
 	elseif masseuse['7_shift_2'] = 2:
@@ -181,9 +181,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 !! Second Monday Shift
 
-	if masseuse['1_shift_2'] = 0 and masseuse['1_shift_2_taken'] < 2:
+	if masseuse['1_shift_2'] = 0 and masseuse['1_shift_2_taken'] < 2 and no (week = 1 and hour > 12 and hour < 17):
 		'<a href="exec:masseuse[''1_shift_2''] = 1 & gt''masseuse_schedule'',''start''"> 13:00-17:00 shift</a>'
-	elseif masseuse['1_shift_2_taken'] = 2:
+	elseif masseuse['1_shift_2_taken'] = 2 or (week = 1 and hour > 12 and hour < 17):
 		'13:00-17:00 shift'
 		'<i>not available</i>'
 	elseif masseuse['1_shift_2'] = 2:
@@ -197,9 +197,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 !! Second Tuesday Shift
 
-	if masseuse['2_shift_2'] = 0 and masseuse['2_shift_2_taken'] < 2:
+	if masseuse['2_shift_2'] = 0 and masseuse['2_shift_2_taken'] < 2 and no (week = 2 and hour > 12 and hour < 17):
 		'<a href="exec:masseuse[''2_shift_2''] = 1 & gt''masseuse_schedule'',''start''"> 13:00-17:00 shift</a>'
-	elseif masseuse['2_shift_2_taken'] = 2:
+	elseif masseuse['2_shift_2_taken'] = 2 or (week = 2 and hour > 12 and hour < 17):
 		'13:00-17:00 shift'
 		'<i>not available</i>'
 	elseif masseuse['2_shift_2'] = 2:
@@ -213,9 +213,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 !! Second Wednesday Shift
 
-	if masseuse['3_shift_2'] = 0 and masseuse['3_shift_2_taken'] < 2:
+	if masseuse['3_shift_2'] = 0 and masseuse['3_shift_2_taken'] < 2 and no (week = 3 and hour > 12 and hour < 17):
 		'<a href="exec:masseuse[''3_shift_2''] = 1 & gt''masseuse_schedule'',''start''"> 13:00-17:00 shift</a>'
-	elseif masseuse['3_shift_2_taken'] = 2:
+	elseif masseuse['3_shift_2_taken'] = 2 or (week = 3 and hour > 12 and hour < 17):
 		'13:00-17:00 shift'
 		'<i>not available</i>'
 	elseif masseuse['3_shift_2'] = 2:
@@ -229,9 +229,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 !! Second Thursday Shift
 
-	if masseuse['4_shift_2'] = 0 and masseuse['4_shift_2_taken'] < 2:
+	if masseuse['4_shift_2'] = 0 and masseuse['4_shift_2_taken'] < 2 and no (week = 4 and hour > 12 and hour < 17):
 		'<a href="exec:masseuse[''4_shift_2''] = 1 & gt''masseuse_schedule'',''start''"> 13:00-17:00 shift</a>'
-	elseif masseuse['4_shift_2_taken'] = 2:
+	elseif masseuse['4_shift_2_taken'] = 2 or (week = 4 and hour > 12 and hour < 17):
 		'13:00-17:00 shift'
 		'<i>not available</i>'
 	elseif masseuse['4_shift_2'] = 2:
@@ -245,9 +245,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 !! Second Friday Shift
 	
-	if masseuse['5_shift_2'] = 0 and masseuse['5_shift_2_taken'] < 2:
+	if masseuse['5_shift_2'] = 0 and masseuse['5_shift_2_taken'] < 2 and no (week = 5 and hour > 12 and hour < 17):
 		'<a href="exec:masseuse[''5_shift_2''] = 1 & gt''masseuse_schedule'',''start''"> 13:00-17:00 shift</a>'
-	elseif masseuse['5_shift_2_taken'] = 2:
+	elseif masseuse['5_shift_2_taken'] = 2 or (week = 5 and hour > 12 and hour < 17):
 		'13:00-17:00 shift'
 		'<i>not available</i>'
 	elseif masseuse['5_shift_2'] = 2:
@@ -261,9 +261,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 !! Second Saturday Shift
 
-	if masseuse['6_shift_2'] = 0 and masseuse['6_shift_2_taken'] < 2:
+	if masseuse['6_shift_2'] = 0 and masseuse['6_shift_2_taken'] < 2 and no (week = 6 and hour > 12 and hour < 17):
 		'<a href="exec:masseuse[''6_shift_2''] = 1 & gt''masseuse_schedule'',''start''"> 13:00-17:00 shift</a>'
-	elseif masseuse['6_shift_2_taken'] = 2:
+	elseif masseuse['6_shift_2_taken'] = 2 or (week = 6 and hour > 12 and hour < 17):
 		'13:00-17:00 shift'
 		'<i>not available</i>'
 	elseif masseuse['6_shift_2'] = 2:
@@ -280,9 +280,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 !! Third Sunday Shift
 	*P '<tr><td>' 
-	if masseuse['7_shift_3'] = 0 and masseuse['7_shift_3_taken'] < 2:
+	if masseuse['7_shift_3'] = 0 and masseuse['7_shift_3_taken'] < 2 and no (week = 7 and hour > 16 and hour < 21):
 		'<a href="exec:masseuse[''7_shift_3''] = 1 & gt''masseuse_schedule'',''start''"> 17:00-21:00 shift</a>'
-	elseif masseuse['7_shift_3_taken'] = 2:
+	elseif masseuse['7_shift_3_taken'] = 2 or (week = 7 and hour > 16 and hour < 21):
 		'17:00-21:00 shift'
 		'<i>not available</i>'
 	elseif masseuse['7_shift_3'] = 2:
@@ -296,9 +296,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 !! Third Monday Shift
 
-	if masseuse['1_shift_3'] = 0 and masseuse['1_shift_3_taken'] < 2:
+	if masseuse['1_shift_3'] = 0 and masseuse['1_shift_3_taken'] < 2 and no (week = 1 and hour > 16 and hour < 21):
 		'<a href="exec:masseuse[''1_shift_3''] = 1 & gt''masseuse_schedule'',''start''"> 17:00-21:00 shift</a>'
-	elseif masseuse['1_shift_3_taken'] = 2:
+	elseif masseuse['1_shift_3_taken'] = 2 or (week = 1 and hour > 16 and hour < 21):
 		'17:00-21:00 shift'
 		'<i>not available</i>'
 	elseif masseuse['1_shift_3'] = 2:
@@ -312,9 +312,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 !! Third Tuesday Shift
 
-	if masseuse['2_shift_3'] = 0 and masseuse['2_shift_3_taken'] < 2:
+	if masseuse['2_shift_3'] = 0 and masseuse['2_shift_3_taken'] < 2 and no (week = 2 and hour > 16 and hour < 21):
 		'<a href="exec:masseuse[''2_shift_3''] = 1 & gt''masseuse_schedule'',''start''"> 17:00-21:00 shift</a>'
-	elseif masseuse['2_shift_3_taken'] = 2:
+	elseif masseuse['2_shift_3_taken'] = 2 or (week = 2 and hour > 16 and hour < 21):
 		'17:00-21:00 shift'
 		'<i>not available</i>'
 	elseif masseuse['2_shift_3'] = 2:
@@ -328,9 +328,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 !! Third Wednesday Shift
 
-	if masseuse['3_shift_3'] = 0 and masseuse['3_shift_3_taken'] < 2:
+	if masseuse['3_shift_3'] = 0 and masseuse['3_shift_3_taken'] < 2 and no (week = 3 and hour > 16 and hour < 21):
 		'<a href="exec:masseuse[''3_shift_3''] = 1 & gt''masseuse_schedule'',''start''"> 17:00-21:00 shift</a>'
-	elseif masseuse['3_shift_3_taken'] = 2:
+	elseif masseuse['3_shift_3_taken'] = 2 or (week = 3 and hour > 16 and hour < 21):
 		'17:00-21:00 shift'
 		'<i>not available</i>'
 	elseif masseuse['3_shift_3'] = 2:
@@ -344,9 +344,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 !! Third Thursday Shift
 
-	if masseuse['4_shift_3'] = 0 and masseuse['4_shift_3_taken'] < 2:
+	if masseuse['4_shift_3'] = 0 and masseuse['4_shift_3_taken'] < 2 and no (week = 4 and hour > 16 and hour < 21):
 		'<a href="exec:masseuse[''4_shift_3''] = 1 & gt''masseuse_schedule'',''start''"> 17:00-21:00 shift</a>'
-	elseif masseuse['4_shift_3_taken'] = 2:
+	elseif masseuse['4_shift_3_taken'] = 2 or (week = 4 and hour > 16 and hour < 21):
 		'17:00-21:00 shift'
 		'<i>not available</i>'
 	elseif masseuse['4_shift_3'] = 2:
@@ -360,9 +360,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 !! Third Friday Shift
 	
-	if masseuse['5_shift_3'] = 0 and masseuse['5_shift_3_taken'] < 2:
+	if masseuse['5_shift_3'] = 0 and masseuse['5_shift_3_taken'] < 2 and no (week = 5 and hour > 16 and hour < 21):
 		'<a href="exec:masseuse[''5_shift_3''] = 1 & gt''masseuse_schedule'',''start''"> 17:00-21:00 shift</a>'
-	elseif masseuse['5_shift_3_taken'] = 2:
+	elseif masseuse['5_shift_3_taken'] = 2 or (week = 5 and hour > 16 and hour < 21):
 		'17:00-21:00 shift'
 		'<i>not available</i>'
 	elseif masseuse['5_shift_3'] = 2:
@@ -376,9 +376,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 !! Third Saturday Shift
 
-	if masseuse['6_shift_3'] = 0 and masseuse['6_shift_3_taken'] < 2:
+	if masseuse['6_shift_3'] = 0 and masseuse['6_shift_3_taken'] < 2 and no (week = 6 and hour > 16 and hour < 21):
 		'<a href="exec:masseuse[''6_shift_3''] = 1 & gt''masseuse_schedule'',''start''"> 17:00-21:00 shift</a>'
-	elseif masseuse['6_shift_3_taken'] = 2:
+	elseif masseuse['6_shift_3_taken'] = 2 or (week = 6 and hour > 16 and hour < 21):
 		'17:00-21:00 shift'
 		'<i>not available</i>'
 	elseif masseuse['6_shift_3'] = 2:

+ 2 - 2
locations/moncheri.qsrc

@@ -220,10 +220,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bodysuit':
 
 	i = 1
 
-	:looplusso_bodysuit
+	:loopmoncheri_bodysuit
 		if boutique_bodysuit[i] = 0:*p '<a href="exec: i = <<i>> & gt ''moncheri'', ''bodysuit2''"><img src="images/pc/items/moncheri/bodysuits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a> '
 		i += 1
-	if i <= 90:jump 'looplusso_bodysuit'
+	if i <= 50:jump 'loopmoncheri_bodysuit'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bodysuit2':

+ 1 - 1
locations/music_onlinemusic.qsrc

@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'recordSong':
 		'As you don''t have a computer you can''t really do much with the songs quality. But then you have seen quite a few people work with only with their phones. Like Ling Ling.'
 	end
 
-	gs 'music_online_music', 'recording_stats'
+	gs 'music_onlinemusic', 'recording_stats'
 
 	killvar 'recording_time'
 	killvar 'ml_no_interruption'

+ 5 - 5
locations/parkBimbo.qsrc

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos1':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/park/parkbimbo1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You notice an old guy, who has to be in his sixties watching you. Then you notice he has his rather large dick out and he has a raging hard on.'
+	'You notice an old guy who has to be in his sixties watching you. Then you see he has his rather large dick out and a raging hard-on.'
 	act 'Help the old guy out':gt 'parkBimbo', 'pos2'
 	gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -30,8 +30,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos2':
 	gs 'cum_manage'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/park/sex/parkbimbo2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You grab hold of the old man''s hand, pull him up and over to a tree. You drop to your knees and start sucking his cock at once. He was taken aback at first and started to protest but as your warm wet mouth began sucking his cock, he stopped protesting.'
-	'You begin sucking him with earnest and fondling his balls with your hand.'
+	'You grab the old man''s hand and pull him over to a tree. Then, you drop to your knees and start sucking his cock at once. He was taken aback at first and started to protest, but as your warm wet mouth began sucking his cock, he stopped protesting.'
+	'You begin sucking him in earnest and fondling his balls with your hand.'
 	'You don''t have long to wait when you feel the hot spurts of his semen shooting into your mouth.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub'
@@ -42,12 +42,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos2':
 		pcs_horny += 10
 		'You feel a little hornier.'
 	else
-		'You enjoy the experience so much, your body convulses in orgasm. It takes a great deal of control, but you manage to keep his cum in your mouth throughout.'
+		'You enjoy the experience so much that your body convulses in orgasm. It takes a lot of control, but you keep his cum in your mouth throughout.'
 		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 		gs 'stat'
 		
 	end
-	'Getting up you swallow his sperm and wink at him as you walk away.'
+	'Getting up, you swallow his sperm and wink at him as you walk away.'
 
 	act 'finish':
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'

+ 7 - 1
locations/sexshop.qsrc

@@ -557,6 +557,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 		act 'No':
 			*clr & cla
 			kendrano = 1
+			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A84', 'dislike'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/redlight/erotomaniac/sex/shkend.jpg"></center>'
 			'You smile at her. "Sorry, no. I still don''t belong to anyone."'
 			'She sighs softly. "Such a waste. Oh well, there''s plenty of pretty little white Russian bitches that love being owned by an ebony Mistress. Perhaps we''ll meet again and you''ll change your mind. I go to the University, so you should stop by sometime." She gives you directions to her dorm room before she returns to browsing.'
@@ -571,6 +572,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 			act 'Serve Kendra':
 				*clr & cla
 				kendraslave += 1
+				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A84', 'like'
 				kendratoy = rand(1,2)
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/redlight/erotomaniac/sex/shkend1.jpg"></center>'
 				'You follow her down into the basement, where she sits on the edge of a table and pulls her fetish clothing aside, exposing her pussy. "Strip for me, bitch." You do as you''re told and begin to slowly strip out of your clothes until you''re naked. "Good little slave. Now get over here and worship my pussy." You kneel before her and start eagerly licking her pussy as Kendra squeals and moans in pleasure.'
@@ -595,6 +597,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 				gs 'stat'
 				minut += 5
+				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A84', 'dislike'
 				'You quickly leave while Kendra can''t stop you.'
 				gt 'city_redlight', 'start'
 			end
@@ -603,6 +606,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 		end
 		act 'Serve Kendra':
 			*clr & cla
+			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A84', 'like'
 			kendratoy = rand(1,2)
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/redlight/erotomaniac/sex/shkend1.jpg"></center>'
 			'You follow her down into the basement, where she sits on the edge of a table and pulls her fetish clothing aside, exposing her pussy. "Strip for me, bitch." You do as you''re told and begin to slowly strip out of your clothes until you''re naked. "Good little slave. Now get over here and worship my pussy." You kneel before her and start eagerly licking her pussy as Kendra squeals and moans in pleasure.'
@@ -627,7 +631,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 		act 'Talk to her':
 			*clr & cla
 			meet_kendra = 1
-			npc_rel['A84'] = 40
+			npc_rel['A84'] = 45
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/redlight/erotomaniac/sex/shkend01.jpg"></center>'
 			if mid($start_type,1,2) = 'sg' and SchoolAtestat = 0:
 			  'You ask her about her clothes and start talking with her. You tell her that you live in Pavlovsk and are in your final year of school and she replies by saying that she''s a student from the Republic of Congo and is attending the local university on a student visa. You talk about a wide range of subjects for a while before she eventually says "You''re very pretty. I love making pretty little Russian bitches my slaves. Call me Mistress Kendra, <<$pcs_nickname>>, and become mine." Should you call her mistress? You have no doubt where that will lead.'
@@ -637,6 +641,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 			act 'Call her Kendra':
 				*clr & cla
 				kendrano = 1
+				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A84', 'dislike'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/redlight/erotomaniac/sex/shkend.jpg"></center>'
 				'You smile at her. "Sorry, but I don''t belong to anyone."'
 				'She sighs softly. "Such a waste. Oh well, there''s plenty of pretty little white Russian bitches that love being owned by an ebony Mistress. Perhaps we''ll meet again and you''ll change your mind?" She gives you directions to her dorm room and you both return to shopping.'
@@ -644,6 +649,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 			end
 			act 'Call her Mistress Kendra':
 				*clr & cla
+				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A84', 'like'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/redlight/erotomaniac/sex/shkend.jpg"></center>'
 				'You look down to show your submission to her. "Yes, Mistress Kendra."'
 				'She smiles. "I think you''re going to make a great little slave. We''re going to have a lot of fun together. Now follow me slave."'

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