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[Text Edit] sentence structure and verb form

location/gopsex : "takw a" ==> "takes a" && "uncork a" ==> "uncorks a"
location/gopsex : reorder verb to before object in "grope" block
Christopher Nelson 4 years ago
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      locations/gopsex.qsrc

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locations/gopsex.qsrc

@@ -359,7 +359,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shgopsex_tits':
 	gs 'stat'
 	gs 'gopsex', 'hide','ind_stamina_npc'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/bigroom/gopsex/tits/tits'+rand(1,6)+'.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Well <<$boydesc>>, do you like my boobies '+func('gopsex','hide','gop_text3')+'?"'
+	'"Well <<$boydesc>>, do you like to ' + func('gopsex', 'hide', 'gop_text3') + ' my boobies?"'
 	'"Yes <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ve got awesome tits!"'
 	act 'Suck boobs': gt 'gopsex', 'hide','shgopsex_eattits'
 	act 'Titty fuck': gt 'gopsex', 'hide','shgopsex_fucktits'
@@ -1463,11 +1463,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hide':
 		if dummyi = 1:$dummy = func('gopsex','hide','gop_name_npc')+' pours beer into an empty glass and hands it to you. You stay to drink with the guys.'
 		if dummyi = 2:$dummy = func('gopsex','hide','gop_name_npc')+' hands you a bottle of beer. You take a draught. '+func('gopsex','hide','gop_family_npc')+' says loudly, "Drunken slut".'
 		if dummyi = 3:$dummy = func('gopsex','hide','gop_name_npc')+' uncorks and gives you a can of beer. You eagerly drain it in one gulp. "Wow" '+func('gopsex','hide','gop_text_npcr')+' gives a sigh of admiration seeing it.'
-		if dummyi = 4:$dummy = func('gopsex','hide','gop_name_npc')+' take a flask, pours beer into a glass, and hands it to you. You sit down on the bench and sprawl leisurely boozing with chavs.'
+		if dummyi = 4:$dummy = func('gopsex','hide','gop_name_npc')+' takes a flask, pours beer into a glass, and hands it to you. You sit down on the bench and sprawl leisurely boozing with chavs.'
 		if dummyi = 5:$dummy = func('gopsex','hide','gop_name_npc')+' opens a bottle of beer and hands it to you. You sip beer slowly.'
-		if dummyi = 6:$dummy = func('gopsex','hide','gop_name_npc')+' uncork a bottle of beer and gives it to you. You eagerly drain it and plop the empty bottle on the bench.'
-		if dummyi = 7:$dummy = func('gopsex','hide','gop_name_npc')+' take a sip from a big PET-bottle and hands it to you. You take few gulps and '+func('gopsex','hide','gop_family_npc')+' takes the bottle from you.'
-		if dummyi = 8:$dummy = func('gopsex','hide','gop_name_npc')+' takw a sip from a can and hands it to you. You begin eagerly swig the beer... '+func('gopsex','hide','gop_family_npc')+' takes the can away from you "Fuck, let some for us, fool!"'
+		if dummyi = 6:$dummy = func('gopsex','hide','gop_name_npc')+' uncorks a bottle of beer and gives it to you. You eagerly drain it and plop the empty bottle on the bench.'
+		if dummyi = 7:$dummy = func('gopsex','hide','gop_name_npc')+' takes a sip from a big PET-bottle and hands it to you. You take few gulps and '+func('gopsex','hide','gop_family_npc')+' takes the bottle from you.'
+		if dummyi = 8:$dummy = func('gopsex','hide','gop_name_npc')+' takes a sip from a can and hands it to you. You begin eagerly swig the beer... '+func('gopsex','hide','gop_family_npc')+' takes the can away from you "Fuck, leave some for us, fool!"'
 		if dummyi = 9:$dummy = '"Have one." '+func('gopsex','hide','gop_name_npc')+' hands you a bottle of unfinished Zhiguli and he smirks seeing as you drink it eagerly. Your mood lightenes.'
 		$result = $dummy
 		killvar 'dummyi'