[edited] Text editing done while doing willpower seeding

locations/pavShared_gp.qsrc

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gp':
 	'<h3><center><font color=#<<$gp_font>>><<$gp_name>></font></h3></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/sharedapt/gp/gp.jpg"></center>'
 	''
-	'He is a gopnik, showing violent and aggressive behaviour. You feel something like a bad aura coming from him.'
+	'He is a gopnik, showing violent and aggressive behavior. You feel something like a bad aura coming from him.'
 	if gp_hadSex = 1:'As you know very well, <<$gp_name>> has <<gpDick>> cm long <a href="exec:gt ''pavShared_gp'', ''gpDick''">dick</a> with somehow maintained pubic hair.'
 	''
 	'<b>Today he looks to be in a <<$gp_mood>> mood.</b>'

locations/pavShared_nd.qsrc

@@ -1584,7 +1584,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ndSexPiss':
 		''
 		'<font color=#<<$nd_font>>>"The first delivery was made, now to the second one! Engage!"</font>'
 		'In your attempt to get up from the wet, plastic sheets he pushes you back, making you stay in the same doggystyle position as he furiously masturbates his cock.'
-		'it doesn''t take long before he finally ejaculates, cumming on your asscheeks before he thrust the tip into your piss-filled anus with loud sigh.'
+		'it doesn''t take long before he finally ejaculates, cumming on your ass-cheeks before he thrust the tip into your piss-filled anus with loud sigh.'
 		'<font color=#<<$nd_font>>>"AAAHHHHH!"</font>'
 		act 'Continue':nd_cumVol = 0 & step = 90 & gt 'pavShared_nd', 'ndSexPiss'
 
@@ -1597,7 +1597,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ndSexPiss':
 
 		! first time ?
 		if nd_piss = 0:
-			'<font color=#<<$nd_font>>>"Are you allright <<$pcs_firstname>>? I hope I wasn''t too harsh on you. I was so aroused and drawn into it that I almost lost control over myself."</font>'		
+			'<font color=#<<$nd_font>>>"Are you alright <<$pcs_firstname>>? I hope I wasn''t too harsh on you. I was so aroused and drawn into it that I almost lost control over myself."</font>'		
 			'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"I..I''m OK. I think."</font>'
 			'<font color=#<<$nd_font>>>"So how was it <<$pcs_firstname>>?"</font>'
 			act 'The worst experience ever! Never speak of it again':pissLike = -1 & step = 100 & gt 'pavShared_nd', 'ndSexPiss'
@@ -1605,7 +1605,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ndSexPiss':
 			act 'It wasn''t so bad, but it doesn''t really arouse me though':pissLike = 1 & step = 100 & gt 'pavShared_nd', 'ndSexPiss'
 			act 'I didn''t think I would, but I loved it':pissLike = 2 & step = 100 & gt 'pavShared_nd', 'ndSexPiss'
 		else
-			'<font color=#<<$nd_font>>>"Are you allright <<$pcs_firstname>>? I hope I wasn''t too harsh on you. I was so aroused and drawn into it that I almost lost control over myself."</font>'
+			'<font color=#<<$nd_font>>>"Are you alright <<$pcs_firstname>>? I hope I wasn''t too harsh on you. I was so aroused and drawn into it that I almost lost control over myself."</font>'
 			act 'I''m fine':step = 110 & gt 'pavShared_nd', 'ndSexPiss'
 		end
 

locations/pavcomplexrolan.qsrc

@@ -258,32 +258,32 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 		rolanapol = 3
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanturn1.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Rolan i''m sorry if i''ve done something wrong...it''s only that i don''t know what i''ve done, if only you will explain me what happend i can try to smooth things up...."'
+		'"Rolan I''m sorry if I''ve done something wrong...it''s only that I don''t know what i''ve done, if only you will explain me what happend I can try to smooth things up...."'
 		'But Rolan turn back his shoulder too...'
 		act 'Please':
 			cla & *clr
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanturncry.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Mphhhf...I cannot believe you don''t know what you have done. You snoop around in my house and take what you want...and me ....i even allow you to wander around. You really don''t know what have you done? Well i''ll tell you: you have stolen my Babushka and used her to repair my bath. Happy....what else do you want to take from me. You have taken what was the most important thing to me and throw it away..."'
+			'"Mphhhf...I cannot believe you don''t know what you have done. You snoop around in my house and take what you want...and me ....I even allow you to wander around. You really don''t know what have you done? Well I''ll tell you: you have stolen my Babushka and used her to repair my bath. Happy....what else do you want to take from me. You have taken what was the most important thing to me and throw it away..."'
 			*nl
-			'"I-I...i can''t believe it, if only i could have know something like this i could never be able to use the powder...you have to believe me..."'
+			'"I-I...I can''t believe it, if only I could have know something like this I could never be able to use the powder...you have to believe me..."'
 			*nl
-			'"...I''m orthodox and cremation is not allowed. But i haven''t money to afford burial too and i couldn''t leave Babushka to be throwed away. This is why i can believe you, but that''s not the point...you shouldn''t snoop around someone else house. That''s not polite for a woman. And...and...Oh Babushka what have i done...why didn''t i take care of you...you were everything to me....". Rolan start crying in agony....'
+			'"...I''m orthodox and cremation is not allowed. But I haven''t money to afford burial too and I couldn''t leave Babushka to be throwed away. This is why I can believe you, but that''s not the point...you shouldn''t snoop around someone else house. That''s not polite for a woman. And...and...Oh Babushka what have I done...why didn''t I take care of you...you were everything to me....". Rolan start crying in agony....'
 			act 'Cheer him up':
 				cla & *clr
 				money -= 8000
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'panties', 'dispose'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanapolgift.jpg"></center>'
-				'"....Rolan here...take this to dry your tears...i know you like them, and i don''t have some wipes, you can have them...i have a bunch...."'
+				'"....Rolan here...take this to dry your tears...I know you like them, and I don''t have some wipes, you can have them...I have a bunch...."'
 				*nl
-				'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>...i think it''s time for me to make my apologize. I was extremely rude to kick you out from my house in that way...."'
+				'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>...I think it''s time for me to make my apologize. I was extremely rude to kick you out from my house in that way...."'
 				*nl
-				'"Oh Rolan there''s no need...probably i would have done the same if i was you"'
+				'"Oh Rolan there''s no need...probably I would have done the same if I was you"'
 				*nl
 				'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>...please, let me finish. It''s not from everybody to understand peoples habits and to not judge them, that''s the reason why my door will be open again for you. Please miss <<$pcs_lastname>> wolud you be so kind to accept my apologize?"'
 				*nl
-				'"Oh Rolan i''m the one who have to apologise, i''m very happy to spend some time again with you like in the past time. Just...here take those, it cannot give you back babushka as nothing happened but you can recruit some worker to restore the vessel..."'
+				'"Oh Rolan I''m the one who have to apologise, I''m very happy to spend some time again with you like in the past time. Just...here take those, it cannot give you back babushka as nothing happened but you can recruit some worker to restore the vessel..."'
 				*nl
 				'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>...'
 				act 'Say goodbye':
@@ -301,7 +301,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 			cla & *clr
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanturn1.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Rolan i''m sorry if i''ve done something wrong...it''s only that i don''t know what i''ve done, if only you will explain me what happend i can try to smooth things up...."'
+			'"Rolan I''m sorry if i''ve done something wrong...it''s only that I don''t know what i''ve done, if only you will explain me what happend I can try to smooth things up...."'
 			'But Rolan turn back his shoulder too...'
 			act 'Cheer him up':
 				cla & *clr
@@ -313,9 +313,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 				*nl
 				'You cannot believe what you have heard."...but...but.."'
 				*nl
-				'"...Before you ask your stupid question, i''m orthodox and cremation is not allowed. But i haven''t money to afford burial too and i couldn''t leave Babushka to be throwed away..."'
+				'"...Before you ask your stupid question, I''m orthodox and cremation is not allowed. But I haven''t money to afford burial too and I couldn''t leave Babushka to be throwed away..."'
 				*nl
-				'"...i''m sorry Rolan ... i could never imagined...i''m so sorry Rolan, i don''t know what to do...here take those money, they cannot give you back babushka as nothing happened but you can recruit some worker to restore the vessel...if only i could have know something like this i could never be able to use the powder...you have to believe me..."'
+				'"...I''m sorry Rolan ... I could never imagined...I''m so sorry Rolan, I don''t know what to do...here take those money, they cannot give you back babushka as nothing happened but you can recruit some worker to restore the vessel...if only I could have know something like this I could never be able to use the powder...you have to believe me..."'
 				*nl
 				'"I appreciate your effort, but that doesn''t changes things. You could have asked, and you didn''t do it. You should learn what''s yours and what''s not. Give me your panty."'
 				*nl
@@ -326,7 +326,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 					gs 'stat'
 					gs 'panties', 'dispose'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanapol0.jpg"></center>'
-					'"...o-ok...i think i''ve learned the lesson"'
+					'"...o-ok...I think I''ve learned the lesson"'
 					*nl
 					'"No you didn''t....that''s because you should''n snoop around to take things that aren''t yours, and you know nothing about. Than we have to fix this, so you should really be able to remember the lesson. Now bend over."'
 					'...'
@@ -357,7 +357,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 									gs 'stat'
 									rolanblockhome = 0
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanturncry.jpg"></center>'
-									'"I''m sorry too miss <<$pcs_lastname>>...i would like this thing was not necessary. I''m sure you have learned your lesson. '
+									'"I''m sorry too miss <<$pcs_lastname>>...I would like this thing was not necessary. I''m sure you have learned your lesson. '
 									act 'leave':gt 'pavComplex', 'start'
 								end
 							end
@@ -383,7 +383,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 			cla & *clr
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolangiveme.jpg"></center>'
-			'"...o-ok...i think i''ve learned the lesson"'
+			'"...o-ok...I think I''ve learned the lesson"'
 			*nl
 			'"No you didn''t....we have to fix this. Now give it to me."'
 			'...'
@@ -393,7 +393,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'panties', 'dispose'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanapol0.jpg"></center>'
-				'"...o-ok...i think i''ve learned the lesson"'
+				'"...o-ok...I think I''ve learned the lesson"'
 				*nl
 				'"No you didn''t....that''s because you should''n snoop around to take things that aren''t yours, and you know nothing about. Than we have to fix this, so you should really be able to remember the lesson. Now bend over."'
 				'...'
@@ -424,7 +424,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 								gs 'stat'
 								rolanblockhome = 0
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanturncry.jpg"></center>'
-								'"I''m sorry too miss <<$pcs_lastname>>...i would like this thing was not necessary. I''m sure you have learned your lesson. '
+								'"I''m sorry too miss <<$pcs_lastname>>...I would like this thing was not necessary. I''m sure you have learned your lesson. '
 								act 'leave':gt 'pavComplex', 'start'
 							end
 						end
@@ -449,7 +449,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 			cla & *clr
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolangiveme.jpg"></center>'
-			'"...o-ok...i think i''ve learned the lesson"'
+			'"...o-ok...i think I''ve learned the lesson"'
 			*nl
 			'"No you didn''t....we have to fix this. Now bend over."'
 			'...'
@@ -485,7 +485,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends':
 							gs 'stat'
 							rolanblockhome = 0
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolanturncry.jpg"></center>'
-							'"I''m sorry too miss <<$pcs_lastname>>...i would like this thing was not necessary. I''m sure you have learned your lesson. '
+							'"I''m sorry too miss <<$pcs_lastname>>...I would like this thing was not necessary. I''m sure you have learned your lesson. '
 							act 'leave':gt 'pavComplex', 'start'
 						end
 					end