Minor text edits

locations/body_desc.qsrc

@@ -412,7 +412,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'butt':
 	elseif pcs_butt <= 8:
 		$pcs_butt = 'You have an average, feminine looking <a href="exec:view''images/pc/body/ass/2.jpg''">ass</a>. While it''s not flat, it''s nothing special either.'
 	elseif pcs_butt <= 12:
-		$pcs_butt = 'Your tight <a href="exec:view''images/pc/body/ass/3.jpg''">ass</a> is a little bigger, rounder and firmer than average. You often draw the stares of guys around you.'
+		$pcs_butt = 'Your tight <a href="exec:view''images/pc/body/ass/3.jpg''">ass</a> is bigger, rounder and firmer than average. You often draw the stares of guys around you.'
 	elseif pcs_butt <= 16:
 		$pcs_butt = 'You have a large and natural bubble <a href="exec:view''images/pc/body/ass/4.jpg''">butt</a> that jiggles and sways as you walk. Guys hungrily fixate on you with their tongues hanging out and other girls are often envious of your booty.'
 	end

locations/intro_sg_tg.qsrc

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/shared/npc_ivan.jpg"></center>'
 	'You are Mikhail Ivanov.'
 	'<<$startdob>>'
-	'Your parents died shortly after you were born and our only remaining relative, your great uncle Ivan, took you in. Your uncle has always made it clear that he took you in as a courtesy to your parents, not to become one himself. You never became close, resulting in a lonely childhood.'
+	'Your parents died shortly after you were born and your only remaining relative, your great uncle Ivan, took you in. Your uncle has always made it clear that he took you in as a courtesy to your parents, not to become one himself. You never became close, resulting in a lonely childhood.'
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/4_csb/1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -428,7 +428,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro_8':
 				act 'Run away':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/run_wolf.jpg"></center>'
-					'You turn to help <<$pcs_nickname>> just in time to see a wolf knock her to the ground. She screams in fear and reaches out to you before the wolf sinks its fangs into her neck, her blood spraying over the wolf as she helplessly gurgles and chokes on it. You look on in shock before hearing the sound of rustling brush and try to escape, but almost immediately feel something heavy crash into you from behind and knock you down.'
+					'You turn to help <<$pcs_nickname>> just in time to see a wolf knock her to the ground. She screams in fear and reaches out to you before the wolf sinks its fangs into her throat, blood spraying over the wolf and pouring down her neck as she helplessly gurgles and chokes on it. You look on in shock before trying to escape, but almost immediately feel something heavy crash into you from behind and knock you down.'
 					act 'Lash out':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/wolf.jpg"></center>'
@@ -437,7 +437,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro_8':
 						act 'Scream in pain':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/gadforest_night2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You let out a scream of pain, every thought being buried under the wild panic of adrenaline. You try to get up to run, but a pair of jaws bites deep into your thigh, sending you to the ground. You catch a brief glimpse of the blood soaked wolf tearing into <<$pcs_nickname>>''s corpse. There is a look of immense terror in her now dead eyes.'
+							'You let out a scream of pain, every thought being buried under the wild panic of adrenaline. You try to get up to run, but a pair of jaws bites deep into your thigh, sending you to the ground. You catch a brief glimpse of the blood soaked wolf and other members of the pack tearing into <<$pcs_nickname>>''s corpse. There is a look of immense terror in her now dead eyes.'
 
 							act 'Oh god...':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -483,7 +483,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro_9':
 		fcolor = rgb(0, 0, 0)
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/shared/npc_tatiana.jpg"></center>'
 		'You open your eyes to see you are in a hospital room. Next to you is an unfamiliar red-haired girl.'
-		'"Ah, you woke up," she chirps. "We found you half-dead, you know. You almost didn''t make it. There wasn''t anything that I could do for the girl though. Those wolves really did a number on the two of you. Running half-exhausted through the forest must have made you a pretty tempting target. Then again, given how you picked up that amulet, you probably wouldn''t have lasted much longer, even if you had managed to get away."'
+		'"Ah, you woke up," she chirps. "We found you half-dead, you know. You almost didn''t make it. There was nothing I could do for the girl though, poor thing was ripped to pieces before I could get to you. Running half-exhausted through the forest made you a pretty tempting target for that pack. Then again, given how you picked up that amulet, you probably wouldn''t have lasted much longer, even if you had managed to get away."'
 
 		act 'What? Who? Where?':
 			*clr & cla