Update 'locations/carF.qsrc'

[fixed] [fixed text] [changed] - numerous fixes in locations and descriptions - added a couple of missing locations and fixed the order of locations - carF module - spectre1viper

locations/carF.qsrc

@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	act 'Move away from the car':dynamic $enddrive
 
 	if kanistra > 0:
-		'In the trunk there is a <<kanistra>>. It contains 5 liters of gasoline.'
+		'In the trunk there is <<kanistra>> canister/s of gasoline. Each canister contains 5 liters of gasoline.'
 
 		if benz <= 35:
 			act 'Pour gasoline into the tank':
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				menu_off = 1
 				benz += 5
 				kanistra -= 1
-				'You emptied the canister of gasoline in the tank.'
+				'You emptied the canister of gasoline into the tank.'
 
 				act 'Move away':gt 'carF', 'start'
 			end
@@ -81,18 +81,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 
 	'<<$teh>>'
 
-	if cardrive = 1:'Through the windshield, you see the residential area.'
-	if cardrive = 2:'Through the windshield, you see downtown.'
-	if cardrive = 3:'Through the windshield, you see the city industrial region.'
+	if cardrive = 1:'Through the windshield, you see St. Petersburg''s residential area.'
+	if cardrive = 2:'Through the windshield, you see St. Petersburg''s downtown (city center).'
+	if cardrive = 3:'Through the windshield, you see St. Petersburg''s industrial region.'
 	if cardrive = 4:'Through the windshield, you see the lake.'
-	if cardrive = 12:'Through the windshield, you see a construction site.'
-	if cardrive = 14:'Through the windshield, you see the old town.'
 	if cardrive = 5:'Through the windshield, you can see the park.'
-	if cardrive = 19:'Through the windshield, you see the Station.'
+	if cardrive = 12:'Through the windshield, you see a construction site.'
+	if cardrive = 14:'Through the windshield, you see the Old Town (Pushkin).'
+	if cardrive = 19:'Through the windshield, you see the Train Station.'
+	if cardrive = 20:'Through the windshield, you can see Pavlovsk''s residential area.'
 	if cardrive = 23:'Through the windshield, you see the huts of the village of Gadukino.'
-	if cardrive = 24:'Through the windshield, you can see the Old Town.'
+	if cardrive = 24:'Through the windshield, you can see Pavlovsk''s commercial region.'
 	if cardrive = 25:'You cross one of the bridges that leads to the island.'
-	if cardrive = 26:'Through the windshield, you can see the Old Town.'
+	if cardrive = 26:'Through the windshield, you can see Pavlovsk''s industrial region.'
 
 	if prava = 0:'You don''t have a driver''s license.'
 
@@ -155,7 +156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 			if avarand >= 50:
 				teh = teh/2
 				wrek = 1
-				'Driving drunkn, you crash into a tree and wreck your car.'
+				'Driving drunken, you crash into a tree and wreck your car.'
 
 				act 'In the salon':gt 'carF', 'salon'
 
@@ -166,7 +167,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 		if wrek = 0:
 			if cardrive >= 20:
 				if cardrive ! 3:
-					act 'Go to town':
+					act 'Go to St. Petersburg''s Industrial Region':
 						cla
 						minut += 75
 						benz -= 1
@@ -212,7 +213,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 			end
 
 			if cardrive ! 1 and cardrive < 20:
-				act 'Go to the residential area':
+				act 'Go to St. Petersburg''s residential area':
 					cla
 					minut += 15
 					benz -= 1
@@ -224,7 +225,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 			end
 
 			if cardrive ! 2 and cardrive < 20:
-				act 'Go to the city center':
+				act 'Go to St. Petersburg city center':
 					cla
 					minut += 15
 					benz -= 1
@@ -236,7 +237,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 			end
 
 			if cardrive ! 3 and cardrive < 20:
-				act 'Go to the city industrial area':
+				act 'Go to the St. Petersburg''s industrial area':
 					cla
 					minut += 15
 					benz -= 1
@@ -298,7 +299,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 			end
 
 			if cardrive ! 7 and cardrive < 20:
-				act 'Go to the car wash':
+				act 'Go to the auto repair shop':
 					cla
 					minut += 15
 					benz -= 1
@@ -310,7 +311,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 			end
 
 			if cardrive ! 8 and cardrive < 20:
-				act 'Go to a car dealership':
+				act 'Go to the car dealership':
 					cla
 					minut += 15
 					benz -= 1
@@ -382,14 +383,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 			end
 
 			if cardrive ! 14:
-				act 'Go to the Old Town':
+				act 'Go to Old Town (Pushkin)':
 					cla
 					if cardrive < 20:
 						minut += 75
-						'It takes you more than an hour to get to the Old Town.'
+						'It takes you more than an hour to get to Old Town (Pushkin).'
 					else
 						minut += 15
-						'15 minutes later, you reach the Old Town.'
+						'15 minutes later, you reach Old Town (Pushkin).'
 					end
 					benz -= 1
 					teh -= rand(2, 5)
@@ -399,16 +400,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 				end
 			end
 
-			if cardrive ! 20:
-				act 'Go to Pavlovsk residential area':
+			if cardrive ! 23:
+				act 'Go to the village of Gadukino':
 					cla
-					benz -= 1
-					teh -= rand(3, 6)
-					cardrive = 20
+					benz = benz - 1
+					teh = teh - RAND(3,6)
+					cardrive = 23
 
 					if cardrive < 20:
 						minut += 75
-						'You spend more than an hour on the highway going to Pavlovsk.'
+						'You spend more than an hour on the highway going to Gadukino.'
 					else
 						minut += 15
 						'15 minutes later, you reach your destination.'
@@ -418,16 +419,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 				end
 			end
 
-			if cardrive ! 23:
-				act 'To go to the village of Gadukino':
+			if cardrive ! 20:
+				act 'Go to Pavlovsk''s Residential Area':
 					cla
-					benz = benz - 1
-					teh = teh - RAND(3,6)
-					cardrive = 23
+					benz -= 1
+					teh -= rand(3, 6)
+					cardrive = 20
 
 					if cardrive < 20:
 						minut += 75
-						'You spend more than an hour on the highway going to Gadukino.'
+						'You spend more than an hour on the highway going to Pavlovsk.'
 					else
 						minut += 15
 						'15 minutes later, you reach your destination.'
@@ -438,7 +439,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 			end
 
 			if cardrive ! 24:
-				act 'Go to Pavlovsk high street':
+				act 'Go to Pavlovsk''s Commercial Region':
 					cla
 					benz -= 1
 					teh -= rand(3, 6)
@@ -457,7 +458,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'salon':
 			end
 
 			if cardrive ! 26:
-				act 'Go to Pavlovsk Industrial Region':
+				act 'Go to Pavlovsk''s Industrial Region':
 					cla
 					benz -= 1
 					teh -= rand(3, 6)