Merge remote-tracking branch 'origin/master' into planned-september-update

.gitignore

@@ -45,3 +45,6 @@ glife.7z.tmp
 glife.7z
 
 *.test
+*.drawio
+missing_media.txt
+plugins.dat

glife

@@ -0,0 +1 @@
+Subproject commit 9de9b7aaba59068593dde5dcadb2d002e0f8ddba

glife.qproj

@@ -291,6 +291,7 @@
 		<Location name="intro_sg_select_custom"/>
 		<Location name="intro_city_select"/>
 		<Location name="intro_functions"/>
+		<Location name="stat_explanations"/>
 	</Folder>
 	<Folder name="NPCManage">
 		<Location name="npccleanc"/>
@@ -352,6 +353,8 @@
 		<Location name="shop"/>
 		<Location name="bank"/>
 		<Location name="kiosk"/>
+		<Location name="newspaper"/>
+		<Location name="newspaper_pages"/>
 		<Location name="taxi"/>
 		<Location name="events"/>
 		<Location name="flash"/>
@@ -546,6 +549,7 @@
 		<Location name="artemhome"/>
 		<Location name="artem_date_events"/>
 		<Location name="artem_sex"/>
+		<Location name="artem_nush_sex"/>
 		<Location name="artem_dorm"/>
 		<Location name="artem_date_events_uni"/>
 		<Location name="artem_sex_uni"/>
@@ -606,10 +610,15 @@
 		<Location name="anushkamaksim"/>
 		<Location name="anushka_konstantinov_schedule"/>
 		<Location name="valentin_bogdanov_schedule" />
-		<Location name="radomir_popov_schedule" />
 		<Location name="arkadi_fyodorov_schedule" />
 		<Location name="band_tour_anushka_SMS"/>
 	</Folder>
+	<Folder name="Radomir">
+		<Location name="radapt"/>
+		<Location name="radaptev1"/>
+		<Location name="radchat"/>
+		<Location name="radomir_popov_schedule" />
+	</Folder>
 	<Folder name="Sonia">
 		<Location name="soniadisco"/>
 		<Location name="soniahome"/>
@@ -1102,6 +1111,7 @@
 		<Location name="therapist"/>
 		<Location name="therapist_reminder"/>
 		<Location name="therapist_hotel"/>
+		<Location name="therapist_home"/>
 		<Location name="gevent"/>
 		<Location name="pav_park"/>
 		<Location name="pav_park_sex"/>
@@ -1135,31 +1145,32 @@
 		<Location name="pav_beach_chat"/>
 	</Folder>
 	<Folder name="Gadyukino">
-		<Location name="gadhouse"/>
+		<Location name="gad_gphouse"/>
 		<Location name="grandmahelp"/>
 		<Location name="grandpahelp"/>
-		<Location name="gaddvor"/>
-		<Location name="gadsarai"/>
-		<Location name="gadbana"/>
+		<Location name="gad_gpyard"/>
+		<Location name="gad_gpbarn"/>
+		<Location name="gad_gpbath"/>
 		<Location name="gadukino"/>
 		<Location name="gadukino_event"/>
-		<Location name="gadriver"/>
-		<Location name="meadow"/>
-		<Location name="gadprostitutes"/>
-		<Location name="gadfield"/>
-		<Location name="gadgarden"/>
-		<Location name="gadmarket"/>
-		<Location name="gadroad"/>
-		<Location name="miroslavahome"/>
-		<Location name="gadforest"/>
-		<Location name="gadforest_event"/>
-		<Location name="gadforestlost"/>
+		<Location name="gad_river"/>
+		<Location name="gad_beach"/>
+		<Location name="gad_prostitutes"/>
+		<Location name="gad_field"/>
+		<Location name="gad_market"/>
+		<Location name="gad_road"/>
+		<Location name="gad_miroslava_home"/>
+		<Location name="gad_forest"/>
+		<Location name="gad_forest_events"/>
+		<Location name="gad_forest_lost"/>
+		<Location name="gad_meadow"/>
 		<Location name="gad_church"/>
-		<Location name="swamp"/>
-		<Location name="swamp_yard"/>
-		<Location name="swamphouse"/>
-		<Location name="swampspring"/>
-		<Location name="backwater"/>
+		<Location name="gad_swamp"/>
+		<Location name="gad_swamp_yard"/>
+		<Location name="gad_swamphouse"/>
+		<Location name="gad_swampspring"/>
+		<Location name="gad_swamp_woods"/>
+		<Location name="gad_backwater"/>
 	</Folder>
 	<Folder name="Gadyukino Characters">
 		<Location name="hunters"/>
@@ -1168,7 +1179,6 @@
 		<Location name="hunter_ambient"/>
 		<Location name="hunter_favors"/>
 		<Location name="hunter_interactions"/>
-		<Location name="swamp_woods"/>
 		<Location name="andreihunter"/>
 		<Location name="igorhunter"/>
 		<Location name="sergeihunter"/>
@@ -1177,6 +1187,7 @@
 		<Location name="mitkabuh_group"/>
 		<Location name="mitkasex"/>
 		<Location name="miroslava"/>
+		<Location name="miroslava_schedule"/>
 		<Location name="mirasex"/>
 		<Location name="mirafather"/>
 		<Location name="grigory"/>

locations/AnalPR.qsrc

@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
 	gs 'stat'
 	if klismaday ! daystart:
-		act 'Continue':gt'AnalPR','3'
+		act 'Continue':gt 'AnalPR', '3'
 	else
 		money += 2000
 
@@ -113,8 +113,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 	'The man shouts angrily, "Get lost you whore... you''re lucky I''m letting you leave without beating you up! You can forget about your money!"'
 
 	act 'Leave quietly':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
-	act 'Insist he pays anyway':gt'AnalPR','4'
-	if pcs_intel >= 50:act 'Apologize and make amends':gt'AnalPR','5'
+	act 'Insist he pays anyway':gt 'AnalPR', '4'
+	if pcs_intel >= 50:act 'Apologize and make amends':gt 'AnalPR', '5'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '4':
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '5':
 	'He then says, "Good enough. Lie down in the grass."'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
 	gs 'stat'
-	act 'Let him fuck you':gt'AnalPR','6'
+	act 'Let him fuck you':gt 'AnalPR', '6'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '6':

locations/BDSM_training.qsrc

@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	minut += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r2_1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are in the Club, security check your name off the list and let you in.  You give an elderly bookkeeper money and the security guard takes you into a small outbuilding away from the mansion. As you enter, you understand, almost the entire wing is a large room for BDSM-sessions.'
+	'You are in the Club, security checks your name off the list and lets you in.  You give an elderly bookkeeper money and the security guard takes you into a small outbuilding away from the mansion. As you enter, you understand, that almost the entire wing is a large room for BDSM sessions.'
 	'Hanging from the ceiling chains with hooks and ropes, on the walls – lashes, whips, handcuffs, gags.  Submerged in the darkness of the far end of the hall you can just make out pads, tables, crosses and some odd device, you can only guess as to what it does. You are met by the lady from yesterday, her suit replaced by tight leather.  She holds in her hands a stick with glands at the ends.'
 	'"W-Hello," you just about manage.'
  	'"Get undressed." Orders Mistress. "Now!"'
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 		'"This is for electrical shocks." Explains Mistress. "You will meet him later."'
 		'She licks the contacts, then shifts her gaze to you.'
 		'"Are you still dressed, bitch?"'
-		'The whip touchs your skin just below the neck. You tense, waiting for the blow. The lady laughs.'
+		'The whip touches your skin just below the neck. You tense, waiting for the blow. The lady laughs.'
 		'"Scared? Good!"'
 		'She moves away and looks at you. You realize what to do, and quickly take off all your clothes.'
 		'"Spread your legs! Hand behind your back! And the other!"'
@@ -48,9 +48,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r2_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'The Mistress removes from the wall and you puts on you, a leather collar, then wrist cuffs and ankle bracelets with hooks. The collar presses. You reach up to loosen it, but that earns you a slap. The Mistress walks around, the toe of her boot pushes your feet.'
+			'The Mistress removes you from the wall and puts a leather collar on you, then wrist cuffs and ankle bracelets with hooks. The collar presses. You reach up to loosen it, but that earns you a slap. The Mistress walks around, the toe of her boot pushes your feet.'
 			'"That''s right! This is the posture of attention. Does this position make the sub?'
-			'"I don''t know, Mistress!" You answer. Between your legs burns a flame, you feel it building, and flowing down your legs.'
+			'"I don''t know, Mistress!" You answer. Between your legs burns a flame, you feel it building and flowing down your legs.'
 			'"Of course not, but you listened." Mistress nods.'
 			'She walks around you, unceremoniously grabbing and squeezing, pushing fingers into your most secret holes. You feel like produce she might buy.'
 			'"Listen to the rules. During the session, all commands are executed quickly and without hesitation. Failure to comply will be punished – always! You call me Mistress, in conversations with others you call me "Mistress ELEKTRA". Hope that''s clear, what''s my name?'
@@ -68,10 +68,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r2_4.jpg"></center>'
 				'Mistress hits you a few times on your inner thighs.'
-				'"During the session the submissive only speaks with permission. You may ask for permission to speak, but only if very important. Without permission sub only breathes. Permission is required to move, change positions or cum... we may only cum with permission.'
+				'"During the session, the submissive only speaks with permission. You may ask for permission to speak, but only if very important. Without permission sub only breathes. Permission is required to move, change positions or cum... we may only cum with permission.'
 				'Cumming without permission will be punished. You will usually be given just one minute to cum. Don''t manage it in that minute and you stop, immediately. When you cum, we need to report it.'
 				'The hostess walks around you, patting the whip on your shoulders, ass and back.'
-				'"Now the main thing, safe word, to stop, this word is "red". As soon as you say "red", the session is ended. If your mouth is busy, three times shake your head and hum "and-and". If you can''t shake your head three times you slam the palm of your hand. Clear?"'
+				'"Now the main thing, safeword, to stop, this word is "red". As soon as you say "red", the session is ended. If your mouth is busy, three times shake your head and hum "and-and". If you can''t shake your head three times you slam the palm of your hand. Clear?"'
 				'"Yes, Mistress!'
 				
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'maso', 'bound'
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 							'Mistress leads you to the diagonal cross and latches the bracelets to you. You can not move.'
 							'"Failure to comply will be punished."'
 							'Skillfully, Mistress plays with your clit, first fingers, then various tools. You moan, ready to cum, but she is very much aware. Noticing your condition, she removes her hand from your flower and whips you in the stomach.'
-							'Gradually the excitment calms, but you can feel it there, just below the surface. She again starts to caress you, alternating caresses with spanking.'
+							'Gradually the excitement calms, but you can feel it there, just below the surface. She again starts to caress you, alternating caresses with spanking.'
 							
 							gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'maso', 'bound'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 10, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'bound'
@@ -182,10 +182,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'BDSMend':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r2_10.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Well, enough for today." You do not immediately understand, when Mistress announces the completion of the session. "A good start, but there is still work to do."'
+	'"Well, enough for today." You do not immediately understand when Mistress announces the completion of the session. "A good start, but there is still work to do."'
 	'"Is that all?" You ask, having temporarily forgotten about the real world.'
 	'"Almost..."'
-	'Mistress puts you on your knees in front of her and forces you to lick her pussy. The session had excited not only you, but Mistress to, and she cums from a few movements of your tongue. After, having licked up every drop from Mistress, you go.'
+	'Mistress puts you on your knees in front of her and forces you to lick her pussy. The session had excited not only you, but Mistress too, and she cums from a few movements of your tongue. After, having licked up every drop from Mistress, you go.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'maso', 'bound'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -239,7 +239,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r3_5.jpg"></center>'
 					'"Well, you deserve a little encouragement..."'
-					'Mistress unties you, flips you on your back and locks you up again. She holds up a huge vibrator and know it is intended for your pussy. Soon it has you ready to cum. Looking at Misstress, you ask.'
+					'Mistress unties you, flips you on your back and locks you up again. She holds up a huge vibrator and knows it is intended for your pussy. Soon it has you ready to cum. Looking at Misstress, you ask.'
 					'"Mistress, cum! Please!'
 					'"No! And don''t look at me with those puppy dog eyes! Not allowed!'
 					'Mistress almost brings you to orgasm, then takes the vibrator.'
@@ -258,8 +258,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r3_7.jpg"></center>'
 							'"Let''s get weaving..."'
-							'Mistress unties you, leads to a large box, makes to climb on top with your butt in the air. Squinting your eyes, you see, she is unwinding rope. Immediately it is obvious, she has great experience.'
-							'Ropes cover your ankles, wrists, knees and pulling your neck, forcing your nose to the box. After a few minutes you realise, that can''t move. Your ass points to the ceiling, feet apart, displaying your pussy and ass. From helplessness and complete openness you get excited once more.'
+							'Mistress unties you, leads to a large box, makes to climb on top with your butt in the air. Squinting your eyes, you see, she is unwinding the rope. It is Immediately obvious, that she has great experience.'
+							'Ropes cover your ankles, wrists, knees and pull your neck, forcing your nose to the box. After a few minutes you realize, that can''t move. Your ass points to the ceiling, feet apart, displaying your pussy and ass. From helplessness and complete openness, you get excited once more.'
 							'"Welcome to rope club!" Announces Mistress and spanks your butt with her palm.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'maso', 'bound'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -275,7 +275,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r3_9.jpg"></center>'
-									'Mistress Fucks you with a strapon and again brings to your peak, but does not give you the finish the desire.'
+									'Mistress Fucks you with a strapon and again brings you to your peak, but does not give you the finish the desire.'
  									'"Boring..." Disappointedly Mistress pulls out, while you try to catch your breath. "How about hanging you?"'
 									'Mistresses fingers flash so quickly, you can''t keep up. She changes the location of the ropes, turns to you and rattles some chains. You realize with horror, she has tied you hanging from the ceiling chain. The motor sounds, and your body rises.'
 									$orgasm_or = 'no'
@@ -318,11 +318,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 													agape = 2
 													gs 'stat'
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r3_13.jpg"></center>'
-													'"And now for the ass!" Declares Mistress and knocks you sideways. You lose you balance and she quickly has you upside down supported on your shoulders and bound hands.'
+													'"And now for the ass!" Declares Mistress and knocks you sideways. You lose your balance and she quickly has you upside down supported on your shoulders and bound hands.'
 													'Her strapon rests on the edge of your anus, Mistress hisses with displeasure and with a sharp move of her hips, drives it in entirely. You scream and moan, but quickly the pain turns to pleasure.'
 													'"Oh fuck, cum! Please!" You can hardly form the words.'
 													'"Fuck you, bitch! Fine, hurry it though!"'
-													'With those words you are rapidly ograsming, which is immediately followed by a second extremely intense one. You squirm so much, that even the ropes are coming free.'
+													'With those words you are rapidly orgasming, which is immediately followed by a second extremely intense one. You squirm so much, that even the ropes are coming free.'
 													$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 													gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 10, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'maso', 'bound'
 													gs 'stat'
@@ -372,7 +372,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 	pcs_horny += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r4_1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You enter the training hall for your next training session. Mistress said you, this session is the last one before you will be admitted to the mansion. If you manage to fulfill all her instructions.'
+	'You enter the training hall for your next training session. Mistress said this session is the last one before you will be admitted to the mansion. If you manage to fulfill all her instructions.'
 	'"Did you dress up pretty for me?" Says Mistress as she checks you out in a predatory manner, "Well, ready then? Get undressed and get over here!'
 	act 'Obey':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -396,7 +396,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r4_4.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Leg!"'
-				'You lift up your leg. Mistress is holding a thin cane, with considerable force, see hits the sole of your foot.'
+				'You lift up your leg. Mistress is holding a thin cane, with considerable force, she hits the sole of your foot.'
 				'"And again..."'
 				'Mistress walks around you asking questions, at the slightest hitch in your response you get hit by the cane.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'maso', 'bound', 'feet'
@@ -418,7 +418,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 						'"Well, you know the rules... Now let''s see you in action..."'
 						'Mistress frees you from the cage and puts you on your knees.'
 						'"Come!" She says imperatively, you understand, she''s not talking to you.'
-						'From a dark corner you see someone covered from head to toe in what appears to be tight leather. The man, his cock the only thing not covered, is dangling between his legs, a thick sausage. The mask on the mans head has two holes for his eyes. He bows to Mistress and walks closer.'
+						'From a dark corner, you see someone covered from head to toe in what appears to be tight leather. The man, his cock the only thing not covered, is dangling between his legs, a thick sausage. The mask on the mans head has two holes for his eyes. He bows to Mistress and walks closer.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'maso', 'bound'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Await orders':
@@ -444,7 +444,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r4_9.jpg"></center>'
 									'"Stop!" Orders Mistress.'
-									'You stop, freezing in position. Mistress gets clothespins tied to ropes, and begins to attach them to you. The clothespins hurt, especially on your nipples and tongue, but you endure. At a silent command from Mistress, you resume movement.'
+									'You stop, freezing in position. Mistress gets clothespins tied to ropes and begins to attach them to you. The clothespins hurt, especially on your nipples and tongue, but you endure. At a silent command from Mistress, you resume movement.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'maso'
 									gs 'stat'
 									act 'Grind':
@@ -491,7 +491,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dom':
 	minut += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r2_1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You enter the club, security check your name off on their list and let you in.  You give an elderly bookkeeper money they direct you to a small outbuilding away from the mansion. As you enter, you see that almost the entire building is a large room for BDSM-sessions.'
+	'You enter the club, security checks your name off on their list and lets you in.  You give an elderly bookkeeper money they direct you to a small outbuilding away from the mansion. As you enter, you see that almost the entire building is a large room for BDSM sessions.'
 	'Hanging from the ceiling chains with hooks and ropes, on the walls – lashes, whips, handcuffs, gags.  Submerged in the darkness of the far end of the hall you can just make out pads, tables, crosses and some odd device, you can only guess as to what it does. You are met by the lady from the front desk, her suit replaced by tight leather.'
 	'She holds in her hands a long whip.'
 	act 'Greet her':
@@ -507,15 +507,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dom':
 			*clr
 			cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/r2_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mistress Elektra walks over to a women, naked except for collar and cuffs and attaches a leash to her collar.'
+			'Mistress Elektra walks over to a woman, naked except for collar and cuffs and attaches a leash to her collar.'
 			'"A sub should be obedient and not speak unless spoken to, unless naked or wearing bondage gear, sub women should dress as maids and men as butlers."'
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/r2_6.jpg"></center>'
-				'Elektra helps the sub into a harness and boots then points to the floor. The submissive women kneels down, being careful to position her legs and arms very precisely.'
+				'Elektra helps the sub into a harness and boots then points to the floor. The submissive woman kneels down, being careful to position her legs and arms very precisely.'
 				'"This is the "slave" position, it displays your dominance over the sub. A dominant can do anything to a sub, but must not cause lasting harm."'
-				'"You must also stop immediately if they use their safe-word, this is always "red". As soon as they say "red", the session is ended. If their mouth is busy, they can shake their head 3 times and hum "and-and". If they can''t do either they can slam the palm of their hand. Clear?"'
+				'"You must also stop immediately if they use their safeword, this is always "red". As soon as they say "red", the session is ended. If their mouth is busy, they can shake their head 3 times and hum "and-and". If they can''t do either they can slam the palm of their hand. Clear?"'
 				gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 10
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Carry on':
@@ -525,8 +525,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dom':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/r3_5.jpg"></center>'
 					'Elektra removes the harness and boots from the sub and leads her to a rectangular section of wooden floor and ties to it. Making a show of how she tied the knots and talking you through it.'
 					'"This isn''t actually required as I have covered the rules, except to say you must wear expensive or formal clothing when visiting the club. So this is a little bonus for you."'
-					'You do feel quite aroused and are about to thank Elektra, when she hands you a body massager. Normally she would have to ask to cum, but as this is your treat, you can stop when ever you like. For the first time since you met Eletra she cracks a smile.'
-					'Using the body massager you tease the sub for about 10 minutes, but stop short of letting her orgasm. Eletra surprises you by kissing you on the cheek, "I think I''m going to like having you around."'
+					'You do feel quite aroused and are about to thank Elektra, when she hands you a body massager. Normally she would have to ask to cum, but as this is your treat, you can stop when ever you like. For the first time since you met Elektra she cracks a smile.'
+					'Using the body massager you tease the sub for about 10 minutes, but stop short of letting her orgasm. Elektra surprises you by kissing you on the cheek, "I think I''m going to like having you around."'
 					'She walks back to the front gate with you and gives you a shiny new membership card. Suddenly realising she is still in her leather outfit she blushes lightly and briskly walks back.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_vibe_give', 10, 'dom', 'lesbian'
 					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 2, 'lesbian'

locations/BelSex.qsrc

@@ -19,13 +19,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '' or $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 	belybj = rand(0,2)
 	if belybj = 0:
 		'<<$boydesc>> puts his large hands on your shoulders and forces you downwards. Even though you''re trying to cooperate and drop to your knees as soon as you realize what he wants, he''s still kind of rough with you. "Start sucking, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-		act'On your knees':gt 'BelSex', 'bj1'
+		act 'On your knees': gt 'BelSex', 'bj1'
 	elseif belybj = 1:
 		'<<$boydesc>> tugs at your clothes, letting you know that he wants you naked. You quickly obey and assist him in taking your clothes off. He nods approvingly, definitely liking what he sees. "Very nice, girl... but you''d look even better with my cock in you."'
-		act'Drop down on your knees':gt 'BelSex', 'bj2'
+		act 'Drop down on your knees': gt 'BelSex', 'bj2'
 	else
-		'<<$boydesc>> is staring intently into your eyes, pawing between your legs while you unbutton his pants, grabbing hold, you strip them down to his knees. His cock is hanging freely, twitching from excitement...'
-		act'What now?':gt 'BelSex', 'bj3'
+		'<<$boydesc>> is staring intently into your eyes, pawing between your legs while you unbutton his pants, grabbing hold, and pulling them down to his knees. His cock is hanging freely, twitching from excitement...'
+		act 'What now?': gt 'BelSex', 'bj3'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj1':
 	belact -= 1
 	picrand = rand(0,12)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/bj<<picrand>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You take <<$boydesc>>''s <<dick>> cm cock in your mouth and begin stimulating his glans. You can clearly see on <<$boydesc>>''s face that he''s getting irritated at you for trying to prolonge things and just wants you to suck him off quickly.'
+	'You take <<$boydesc>>''s <<dick>> cm cock in your mouth and begin stimulating his glans. You can clearly see on <<$boydesc>>''s face that he''s getting irritated at you for trying to prolong things and just wants you to suck him off quickly.'
 	'You do your best to suck him off, trying to go deep as possible, but <<$boydesc>> is not pleased. He grabs you by the back of your head and begins forcing it closer and closer towards his fat stomach. You start gagging but he just tells you to relax your throat and it will all be fine.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'prostitution', 'deepthroat'
@@ -53,17 +53,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj1':
 			belsexpayment = 300
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
-			act'Get up':gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
+			act 'Get up': gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
 		end
 	end
 	if belact > 0:
 		belyvag = rand(0,3)
 		if belyvag = 0:
 			 '<<$boydesc>> grunts loudly while you suck him off. "Time to give you a real pounding!"'
-			act'Get in position':gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal1'
+			act 'Get in position': gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal1'
 		elseif belyvag = 1:
 			'<<$boydesc>> paws at your ass while you suck him off before he tells you "Get on your back, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''m going to fill you up."'
-			act'Lie down on your back':gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal2'
+			act 'Lie down on your back': gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal2'
 		elseif belyvag = 2:
 			'<<$boydesc>> looks down on you as you''re sucking. He pulls out his cock, lifts you up and throws you onto the bed. "Show me your ass, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 			act 'Get on all fours':gt 'BelSex', 'doggy'
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj2':
 	belact -= 1
 	picrand = rand(0,12)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/bj<<picrand>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You look at <<$boydesc>> with lust in your eyes. Dropping down on your knees without being asked, you unbutton his pants, exposing his full erect cock. Wrapping your <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lips around his strong and warm cock, you quickly begin by sucking the head, caressing it with your tongue and lips.'
+	'You look at <<$boydesc>> with lust in your eyes. Dropping down on your knees without being asked, you unbutton his pants, exposing his fully erect cock. Wrapping your <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lips around his strong and warm cock, you quickly begin by sucking the head, caressing it with your tongue and lips.'
 	'<<$boydesc>> lets out a small groan, clearly enjoying himself. Turned on by seeing <<$boydesc>> enjoying the blowjob, you start sucking his cock while caressing his balls.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'prostitution'
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj2':
 
 	if belact <= 0:
 		'Your tongue is giving every bit of his cock it can reach its attention as you bob your head back and forth.'
-		'Your lust takes over and you take him as deep into your mouth as you can, keeping him there until you start to gag and have to come up for air. Taking few breaths to recover, you take him inside again, rapidly moving your head, sucking and deepthroating him for all you''re worth.'
+		'Your lust takes over and you take him as deep into your mouth as you can, keeping him there until you start to gag and have to come up for air. Taking a few breaths to recover, you take him inside again, rapidly moving your head, sucking and deepthroating him for all you''re worth.'
 		act'Keep sucking':
 			cls
 			gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A113', 1
@@ -98,17 +98,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj2':
 			belsexpayment = 300
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
-			act'Take a shower':gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
+			act 'Take a shower': gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
 		end
 	end
 	if belact > 0:
 	belyvag = rand(0,3)
 		if belyvag = 0:
 			 '<<$boydesc>> grunts loudly while you suck him off. "Time to give you a real pounding!"'
-			act'Get in position':gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal1'
+			act 'Get in position': gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal1'
 		elseif belyvag = 1:
 			'<<$boydesc>> paws at your ass while you suck him off before he tells you "Get on your back, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''m going to fill you up."'
-			act'Lie down on your back':gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal2'
+			act 'Lie down on your back': gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal2'
 		elseif belyvag = 2:
 			'<<$boydesc>> looks down on you as you''re sucking. He pulls out his cock, lifts you up, and throws you onto the bed. "Show me your ass, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 			act 'Get on all fours':gt 'BelSex', 'doggy'
@@ -143,17 +143,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj3':
 			'He squeezes the last few drops of sperm into your mouth and then sticks his dick in your mouth. You swallow his cum obediently and then suck his dick clean, licking every tasty inch of it you can reach. Once he goes soft in your mouth, he pulls out his cock.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
-			act'Take a shower':gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
+			act 'Take a shower': gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
 		end
 	end
 	if belact > 0:
 	belyvag = rand(0,3)
 		if belyvag = 0:
 			 '<<$boydesc>> grunts loudly while you suck him off. "Time to give you a real pounding!"'
-			act'Get in position':gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal1'
+			act 'Get in position': gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal1'
 		elseif belyvag = 1:
 			'<<$boydesc>> paws at your ass while you suck him off before he tells you "Get on your back, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''m going to fill you up."'
-			act'Lie down on your back':gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal2'
+			act 'Lie down on your back': gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal2'
 		elseif belyvag = 2:
 			'<<$boydesc>> looks down on you as you''re sucking. He pulls out his cock, lifts you up, and throws you onto the bed. "Show me your ass, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 			act 'Get on all fours':gt 'BelSex', 'doggy'
@@ -170,8 +170,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vaginal1':
 	picrand = rand(0,7)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/vadim/sex/mitka<<picrand>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'<<$boydesc>> lifts you up, grabs you by the hair, and shoves you onto the bed. You land on your back, as he quickly moves in, you spread your legs. He starts touching your pussy lips with his fat fingers, you let out a moan as he penetrates you with his finger.'
-	'"That''s enough, you''re all wet and ready now." he says. He grabs hold of his penis slowly slides his member into your wet cunt, softly parting your nether lips. As your pussy walls envelops his cock you let out a soft moan.'
-	'Hanging over you, looking into your eyes he starts build up quite a bit of speed. "You''re a pretty good fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>, but I''ve had better." he says as his sweat drips all over you.'
+	'"That''s enough, you''re all wet and ready now." he says. He grabs ahold of his penis and slowly slides it into your wet cunt, softly parting your nether lips. As your pussy walls envelop his cock you let out a soft moan.'
+	'Hanging over you, looking into your eyes he starts to build up quite a bit of speed. "You''re a pretty good fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>, but I''ve had better." he says as his sweat drips all over you.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -182,19 +182,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vaginal1':
 		belsexpayment = 600
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/creampie3.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'<<$boydesc>>''s movements speed up as he keeps pounding you balls deep without showing any signs of slowing down. You think this will go on for a while, but suddenly you hear <<$boydesc>> grunting while cumming deep inside you.'
-		act'Take a shower':gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
+		act 'Take a shower': gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
 	end
 	if belact > 0:
 		belanal = rand(0,2)
 		if belanal = 0:
 			'<<$boydesc>>''s sweat is dripping all over your body. He is huffing and puffing as he pulls out. "Give me a second to catch my breath and then I''ll finish this. Give me your sweet little ass," he says, breathing heavily'
-			act'Take him in your ass':gt 'BelSex', 'anal1'
+			act 'Take him in your ass': gt 'BelSex', 'anal1'
 		elseif belanal = 1:
-			'<<$boydesc>> wipes the sweat off his forehead, clearly worked up from fucking you. Nevertheless, he''s not done with you and tells you to that he wants your ass next.'
-			act'Present your ass':gt 'BelSex', 'anal2'
+			'<<$boydesc>> wipes the sweat off his forehead, clearly worked up from fucking you. Nevertheless, he''s not done with you and tells you that he wants your ass next.'
+			act 'Present your ass':gt 'BelSex', 'anal2'
 		else
 			'<<$boydesc>> pulls out of your pussy as the sensations make you moan; "Oh don''t worry sweetheart, I''m not done yet. It''s your asshole next. Assume the position."'
-			act'Get fucked from behind':gt 'BelSex', 'analdoggy'
+			act 'Get fucked from behind': gt 'BelSex', 'analdoggy'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -217,19 +217,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vaginal2':
 		belsexpayment = 600
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/creampie1.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'<<$boydesc>> groans loudly. His cock stiffens as you feel a jet of warm sperm hitting deep inside your womb.'
-		act'Take a shower':gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
+		act 'Take a shower': gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
 	end
 	if belact > 0:
 		belanal = rand(0,2)
 		if belanal = 0:
 			'<<$boydesc>>''s sweat is dripping all over your body. He is huffing and puffing as he pulls out. "Give me a second to catch my breath and then I''ll finish this. Give me your sweet little ass," he says, breathing heavily'
-			act'Take him in your ass':gt 'BelSex', 'anal1'
+			act 'Take him in your ass': gt 'BelSex', 'anal1'
 		elseif belanal = 1:
 			'<<$boydesc>> wipes the sweat off his forehead, clearly worked up from fucking you. Nevertheless, he''s not done with you and tells you to that he wants your ass next.'
-			act'Present your ass':gt 'BelSex', 'anal2'
+			act 'Present your ass':gt 'BelSex', 'anal2'
 		else
 			'<<$boydesc>> pulls out of your pussy as the sensations make you moan. "Oh don''t worry sweetheart, I''m not done yet. It''s your asshole next. Assume the position."'
-			act'Get fucked from behind':gt 'BelSex', 'analdoggy'
+			act 'Get fucked from behind': gt 'BelSex', 'analdoggy'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -239,8 +239,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'doggy':
 	sex_temp += 1
 	picrand = rand(1,5)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/vag/doggy/vagdog<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'With his cock rock hard and nicely wet he lifts your body, turns you around, and tells you to get on all fours on the floor. He gets down on his knees. Streching your butt cheeks slowly, he runs his shaft along your wet pussy, teasing you, all of a sudden he shoves his cock into your pussy and starts pounding away, not caring about your enjoyment. He just wants to fuck.'
-	'Holding you by the hips, he pounds on without slowing the pace, only occasionally stopping to catch a breath. "Isn''t he going to slow down soon?" you think to yourself. But you''ve underestimated him, instead he grabs your hair and pushes himself even deeper inside.'
+	'With his cock rock-hard and nicely wet he lifts your body, turns you around, and tells you to get on all fours on the floor. He gets down on his knees. Stretching your butt cheeks slowly, he runs his shaft along your wet pussy, teasing you, all of a sudden he shoves his cock into your pussy and starts pounding away, not caring about your enjoyment. He just wants to fuck.'
+	'Holding you by the hips, he pounds on without slowing the pace, only occasionally stopping to catch a breath. "Isn''t he going to slow down soon?" you think to yourself. But you''ve underestimated him, instead, he grabs your hair and pushes himself even deeper inside.'
 	'You moan loudly as he rams his cock deeper and deeper. You hear him panting and grunting he must''ve reached his limit...'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'sub', 'prostitution'
@@ -252,19 +252,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'doggy':
 		belsexpayment = 600
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/creampie4.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'<<$boydesc>> keeps on pounding you from behind. You feel his cock getting stiffer and twitching inside of you. You turn your head and look him in the eyes, pleading that he pulls out and cums on your ass instead. But <<$boydesc>> isn''t budging. He keeps on going, pulling your hips towards him, filling your womb with splashes of semen.'
-		act'Take a shower':gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
+		act 'Take a shower': gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
 	end
 	if belact > 0:
 		belanal = rand(0,2)
 		if belanal = 0:
 			'<<$boydesc>>''s sweat is dripping all over your body. He is huffing and puffing as he pulls out. "Give me a second to catch my breath and then I''ll finish this. Give me your sweet little ass." he says, breathing heavily'
-			act'Take him in your ass':gt 'BelSex', 'anal1'
+			act 'Take him in your ass': gt 'BelSex', 'anal1'
 		elseif belanal = 1:
-			'<<$boydesc>> wipes the sweat off his forehead, clearly worked up from fucking you. Nevertheless, he''s not done with you and tells you to that he wants your ass next.'
-			act'Present your ass':gt 'BelSex', 'anal2'
+			'<<$boydesc>> wipes the sweat off his forehead, clearly worked up from fucking you. Nevertheless, he''s not done with you and tells you that he wants your ass next.'
+			act 'Present your ass': gt 'BelSex', 'anal2'
 		else
 			'<<$boydesc>> pulls out of your pussy as the sensations make you moan. "Oh don''t worry sweetheart, I''m not done yet. It''s your asshole next. Assume the position."'
-			act'Get fucked from behind':gt 'BelSex', 'analdoggy'
+			act 'Get fucked from behind': gt 'BelSex', 'analdoggy'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -274,8 +274,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cowgirl':
 	sex_temp += 1
 	picrand = rand(1,6)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/vag/cowgirl/vagcow<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'<<$boydesc>> lies on the bed. He smirks as he tells you that you''ll be doing all the work today. You look at him, still a bit confused after the blowjob you''ve given him. Wasn''t that enough? "Don''t waste my time <<$pcs_nickname>>. Come here!" Not daring to do upset him even more, you crawl on top of <<$boydesc>> and guide his cock inside your vagina.'
-	'He grabs your hips, controlling the rhythm as you to ride him. He wants it fast. Fast, deep and hard, without any regard to you, or that he actually bumps into your cervix in this position. You keep riding him at the same rhythm as he moves his hands grabbing you breasts instead.'
+	'<<$boydesc>> lies on the bed. He smirks as he tells you that you''ll be doing all the work today. You look at him, still a bit confused after the blowjob you''ve given him. Wasn''t that enough? "Don''t waste my time <<$pcs_nickname>>. Come here!" Not daring to upset him even more, you crawl on top of <<$boydesc>> and guide his cock inside your vagina.'
+	'He grabs your hips, controlling the rhythm as you ride him. He wants it fast. Fast, deep and hard, without any regard to you, or that he actually bumps into your cervix in this position. You keep riding him at the same rhythm as he moves his hands grabbing your breasts instead.'
 	'Unable to think of anything but the pleasure, you moan so loudly that you are almost screaming. Wanting to ride out this intense feeling, you completely forget that you''re supposed to please <<$boydesc>> as you orgasm while riding him.'
 
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
@@ -288,19 +288,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cowgirl':
 		belsexpayment = 600
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/creampie2.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You keep switching the tempo as you ride <<$boydesc>>, from the looks on his face he''s ready to explode. You speed up even more wanting him to finish as soon as possible. As you''re thinking about pulling out not wanting him to cum inside you, you realize that you are too late. <<$boydesc>> suddenly explodes inside of you.'
-		act'Take a shower':gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
+		act 'Take a shower': gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
 	end
 	if belact > 0:
 		belanal = rand(0,2)
 		if belanal = 0:
 			'<<$boydesc>>''s sweat is dripping all over your body. He is huffing and puffing as he pulls out. "Give me a second to catch my breath and then I''ll finish this. Give me your sweet little ass," he says, breathing heavily'
-			act'Take him in your ass':gt 'BelSex', 'anal1'
+			act 'Take him in your ass': gt 'BelSex', 'anal1'
 		elseif belanal = 1:
-			'<<$boydesc>> wipes the sweat off his forehead, clearly worked up from fucking you. Nevertheless, he''s not done with you and tells you to that he wants your ass next.'
-			act'Present your ass':gt 'BelSex', 'anal2'
+			'<<$boydesc>> wipes the sweat off his forehead, clearly worked up from fucking you. Nevertheless, he''s not done with you and tells you that he wants your ass next.'
+			act 'Present your ass': gt 'BelSex', 'anal2'
 		else
 			'<<$boydesc>> pulls out of your pussy as the sensations make you moan. "Oh don''t worry sweetheart, I''m not done yet. It''s your asshole next. Assume the position."'
-			act'Get fucked from behind':gt 'BelSex', 'analdoggy'
+			act 'Get fucked from behind': gt 'BelSex', 'analdoggy'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -323,7 +323,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal1':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/cumanal<<picrand>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You can tell <<$boydesc>> is close to his orgasm. He huffs and puffs quite heavily now. Seconds later he firmly grabs your hips, his movements more erratic, and you feel his cock spasming inside you as he shoots his cum deep inside your asshole. The cum feels kind of warm inside you, and it slowly dribbles from your asshole once he pulls out his cock.'
 
-		act'Take a shower':gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
+		act 'Take a shower': gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -346,7 +346,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal2':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/analcum.jpg"></center>'
 		'You can tell <<$boydesc>> is close to his orgasm. His cock is stiff and has gotten larger inside your anus. Seconds later he firmly grabs your hips and you feel his cock spasming inside you as he shoots his cum deep inside your asshole. The cum feels kind of warm inside you, and it slowly dribbles out as you get up off of him.'
 
-		act'Take a shower':gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
+		act 'Take a shower': gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -369,7 +369,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'analdoggy':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/kafeanpie.jpg"></center>'
 		'You''re at your limit and just as you want to beg him to take it easier, you feel him twitching behind you. All of a sudden you feel his warm cum shooting inside you. It slowly dribbles down your thighs as he pulls out of you.'
 
-		act'Take a shower':gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
+		act 'Take a shower': gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
 	end
 end
 

locations/BurgerTip.qsrc

@@ -44,6 +44,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 			bossrand = rand(0, 3)
 
 			if bossrand = 0:
+				killvar'bossrand'
 				'When you enter Anatoly''s office he glances up and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, bring me a cup of coffee."'
 				
 				act 'Fetch him a coffee':
@@ -59,6 +60,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 					end
 				end
 			elseif bossrand = 1:
+				killvar'bossrand'
 				'When you enter his office, Anatoly tells you: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I need these documents sighed by the accountant. Take them to her, and see that she signs them. When he does, return them to me."'
 
 				act 'Go to the chief accountant':
@@ -81,6 +83,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 					end
 				end
 			elseif bossrand = 2:
+				killvar'bossrand'
 				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I need Ilyushkin working on these documents in a hurry", Anatoly says. You grab the papers, and scamper out of the office'
 
 				act 'Take the papers to Ilyushkin':
@@ -105,6 +108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 				end
 			elseif bossrand = 3:
 				*clr&cla
+				killvar'bossrand'
 				bossexrand = rand(0, 3)
 				pcs_horny += 10
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -115,6 +119,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 				if bossexrand = 1:'His hand slides down your stomach, and crawls under your skirt. You moan softly when his hand begins to caress your pussy.'
 				if bossexrand = 2:'He grabs your ass, and lifting up your skirt begins to knead your ass like dough.'
 				if bossexrand = 3:'He puts his hands on your hips, and slowly raises your skirt.'
+				killvar'bossexrand' 
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A74'
 
 				act 'Kiss him':
@@ -145,6 +150,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 							if bosstipsexrand >= 3:
 								act 'Moan': gt 'BurgerTip', 'sex2'
 							elseif bosstipsexrand < 3:
+								killvar'bosstipsexrand'
 								'His hand goes further finding your sphincter with one of his fingers. The probing of his finger leaves no doubt about what he wants.'
 								
 								gs 'arousal', 'anal_finger', 5, 'sub'
@@ -189,12 +195,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 			bosstiprand = rand(0, 3)
 
 			if bosstiprand = 0:
+				killvar'bosstiprand'
 				BurgerQW['TerminalTask'] = 1
 				BurgerQW['TerminalTaskDay'] = daystart
 				'Anatoly comes out of the office, and asks, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I know it''s lunch time, but I really need these documents taken to the storage terminal in the city industrial area to be signed. I''ll give you the rest of the day off if you take care of it for me," he finishes, with a smile.'
 
 				act 'Deliver the papers':gt 'city_center'
 			elseif bosstiprand = 1:
+				killvar'bosstiprand'
 				'Anatoly comes out of the office, and says: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, before lunch I need you to head down to the loading dock, and sign for a shipment of food that''s due to arrive. There''s a gold star in it for you if take care of this for me."'
 
 				act 'Go sign for the shipment':
@@ -210,6 +218,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 				end
 
 			elseif bosstiprand = 2:
+				killvar'bosstiprand'
 				BurgerQW['BankTask'] = 1
 				BurgerQW['BankTaskDay'] = daystart
 				'Anatoly comes out of the office, and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, please run these documents to the bank for me. I''ll give you the rest of the day off if you take care of it for me," he finishes, with a smile.'
@@ -243,14 +252,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 			bosstiprand = rand(0, 3)
 
 			if bosstiprand = 0:
+				killvar'bosstiprand'
 				'Anatoly comes out of the office and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I have to leave early today. Here''s a few papers for you to file,"  He hands you a folder on his way out of the office.'
 				bburand = rand(0, 10)
 
 				if bburand = 0:
+					killvar'bburand'
 					'The senior manager Ilyushkin shows up in your office.'
 					
 					if $BurgerQW['IlyQWBlackmailPhoto'] = '' or BurgerQW['IlyQWBlackmail'] > 1:
-						'Ilyushkin grins, "Honey, I need you to put your stamp on these papers." You give Ilyushkin a sceptical look, as you find your company stamp. Then you put your stamp on the papers, and hand the back to Ilyushkin.'
+						'Ilyushkin grins, "Honey, I need you to put your stamp on these papers." You give Ilyushkin a skeptical look, as you find your company stamp. Then you put your stamp on the papers, and hand the back to Ilyushkin.'
 
 						if BurgerQW['WorkShift'] = 1:
 							act 'Have your lunch': gt 'burgerWork', 'work'
@@ -265,7 +276,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 					'The assistant manager Sergei shows up in your office.'
 					'Sergei looks at you with carnivorous eyes, "Is Anatoly around?"'
 					'"No, he just he just left." you tell him.'
-
+					killvar'bburand'
 					if BurgerQW['sergeyQW'] = 1:
 						'The pimply young man chuckles, and sits on the edge of your desk. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re dynamite. We are very lucky to have a girl like you around," he says, leering at you.'
 					elseif BurgerQW['sergeyQW'] = 0:
@@ -327,7 +338,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 					'Lena comes up to your desk and asks, "Is the boss around?"'
 					'"No, he stepped out," you reply.'
 					'She purses her lips looking at you with disapproval, before she turns to go.'
-					
+					killvar'bburand'
 					if BurgerQW['WorkShift'] = 1:
 						act 'Have your lunch': gt 'burgerWork', 'work'
 					elseif BurgerQW['WorkShift'] = 2:
@@ -335,7 +346,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 					end
 				elseif bburand = 3:
 					'The personnel manager Vick comes into the office looking for the boss. When you tell her he is gone, she mutters something about personnel, and walks out'
-
+					killvar'bburand'
 					if BurgerQW['WorkShift'] = 1:
 						act 'Have your lunch': gt 'burgerWork', 'work'
 					elseif BurgerQW['WorkShift'] = 2:
@@ -351,6 +362,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 					end
 				end
 			elseif bosstiprand = 1:
+				killvar'bosstiprand'
 				'Anatoly comes out of the office and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s get out of here and go have some fun."'
 
 				act 'Go with Anatoly':
@@ -361,12 +373,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 
 					if BurMestoRand = 0:
 						'You get in the car with Anatoly, and soon arrive at the sauna in the residential area. Your boss gives you a wicked little grin and says, "I made reservations to get us a private room."'
-						
+						killvar'BurMestoRand'
 						act 'Go to the sauna':
 							*clr&cla
 							gs 'stat'
-
+							
 							if SaunaWhore > 0:
+								
 								BurgerQW['SaunaWhoreKnown'] = 1
 								'When you enter the sauna and stop dead in your tracks when you see the madam."<<$pcs_nickname>>, what a surprise are you coming back to work for us."' 
 								'Anatoly says, "Whats going on here?"'
@@ -382,7 +395,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 									*clr&cla
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/anatoly/sex/bossbjs.jpg"></center>'
-									'You kneel before your Anatoly, and shower his groin with gentle kisses and little licks. He is rock hard and ready in no time. You tease him a little by sucking on just the tip of his cock, for awhile. When it looks like he can''t take it anymore, you slide his entire cock into your mouth. You bob your head up and down vigorously, savoring the taste of the boss''s cock. Before you can finish him, he pulls himself from your mouth, and motions for you to follow him to the bench.'
+									'You kneel before your Anatoly, and shower his groin with gentle kisses and little licks. He is rock-hard and ready in no time. You tease him a little by sucking on just the tip of his cock, for awhile. When it looks like he can''t take it anymore, you slide his entire cock into your mouth. You bob your head up and down vigorously, savoring the taste of the boss''s cock. Before you can finish him, he pulls himself from your mouth, and motions for you to follow him to the bench.'
 
 									gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 									gs 'stat'
@@ -440,6 +453,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 							end
 						end
 					elseif BurMestoRand = 1:
+						killvar'BurMestoRand'
 						'You get in the car, but before you can go anywhere Anatoly''s phone rings. He frowns before answering, "Yes dear, i will soon." He hangs up and says to you, "I''ve got to get home. Could you do your boss a favor, before I have to head home to the old battle axe?"'
 
 						act 'You''re great at giving favors':
@@ -461,6 +475,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 
 				exit
 			elseif bosstiprand = 2:
+				killvar'bosstiprand'
 				'Anatoly comes out of the office, and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, call the that guy we had set up our computers. The on button of my PC seems to be broken."'
 
 				act 'Call the computer guy':
@@ -484,6 +499,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 					end
 				end
 			elseif bosstiprand = 3:
+				killvar'bosstiprand'
 				'Anatoly comes out of the office, and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I need you to stay late today. I have some men coming in for a meeting, and I might need an extra set of hand around.'
 
 				act 'Sure thing boss':
@@ -500,12 +516,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 		exit
 	elseif burand = 2:
 		*clr & cla
+		killvar'burand'
 		if $BurgerQW['IlyQWBlackmailPhoto'] ! '' and BurgerQW['IlyQWBlackmail'] = 0:
 			gt 'BurgerTip', 'ily_work'
 		elseif $BurgerQW['IlyQWBlackmailPhoto'] = '' and BurgerQW['IlyQWBlackmail'] > 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/diner/work.jpg"></center>'
 			'The senior manager Ilyushkin shows up in your office.'
-			'Ilyushkin grins, "Honey, I need you to put your stamp on these papers." You give Ilyushkin a sceptical look, as you find your company stamp. Then you put your stamp on the papers, and hand the back to Ilyushkin.'
+			'Ilyushkin grins, "Honey, I need you to put your stamp on these papers." You give Ilyushkin a skeptical look, as you find your company stamp. Then you put your stamp on the papers, and hand the back to Ilyushkin.'
 
 			if BurgerQW['WorkShift'] = 1:
 				act 'Have your lunch': gt 'burgerWork', 'work'
@@ -524,6 +541,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 
 		exit
 	elseif burand = 3:
+		killvar'burand'
 		'The assistant manager Sergei shows up in your office.'
 		'Sergei looks at you with carnivorous eyes, "Is Anatoly around?"'
 		'"No, he just he just left." you tell him.'
@@ -536,6 +554,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 
 		exit
 	elseif burand = 4:
+		killvar'burand'
 		'Lena comes up to your desk and asks, "Is the boss around?"'
 		'"No, he stepped out," you reply.'
 		'She purses her lips looking at you with disapproval, before she turns to go.'
@@ -548,6 +567,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 
 		exit
 	elseif burand = 5:
+		killvar'burand'
 		'The personnel manager Vic comes into the office looking for the boss. When you tell her he is gone, she mutters something about personnel, and walks out'
 
 		if BurgerQW['WorkShift'] = 1:
@@ -558,6 +578,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 
 		exit
 	elseif burand = 6:
+		killvar'burand'
 		'An elegantly dressed woman shows up at the office.'
 
 		if BurgerQW['SlutReputation'] < 10:
@@ -581,6 +602,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 				Pay = BurgerQW['SecretaryTimesWorked'] * 1250
 				BurgerQW['SecretaryTimesWorked'] = 0
 				money += Pay
+				killvar'Pay'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'You quickly write out something that effectively says "I quit!" with some fancy words thrown in.'
 				'Anatoly pays you the <<pay>> <b>₽</b> you are owed, and says, "It''s over <<$pcs_nickname>>, get out of here."'
@@ -630,6 +652,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj':
 		act 'Finish him by hand': gt 'BurgerTip', 'bj_cum'
 		act 'Continue to suck': gt 'BurgerTip', 'bj2'
 	end
+	killvar'wantrand'
+	killvar'numbjrand'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet':
@@ -675,7 +699,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet':
 			gs 'cum_cleanup'
 
 			'You go into the bathroom, and turn the water on in the sink. <<$deytoibur>><<$deytoibur2>>'
-
+			killvar'$deytoibur'
+			killvar'$deytoibur2'
 			if BurgerQW['WorkShift'] = 1:
 				act 'Have your lunch': gt 'burgerWork', 'work'
 			elseif BurgerQW['WorkShift'] = 2:
@@ -683,6 +708,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet':
 			end
 		end
 	end
+	killvar'bosstoirandin'
+	killvar'bosstoirand'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet_wash':
@@ -696,7 +723,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet_wash':
 	gs 'cum_cleanup'
 				
 	'You go into the bathroom, and turn the water on in the sink. <<$deytoibur>><<$deytoibur2>>'
-
+	killvar'$deytoibur'
+	killvar'$deytoibur2'
 	if BurgerQW['WorkShift'] = 1:
 		act 'Have your lunch': gt 'burgerWork', 'work'
 	elseif BurgerQW['WorkShift'] = 2:
@@ -715,7 +743,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet_wash2':
 	gs 'cum_cleanup'
 
 	'You go into the bathroom, and turn the water on in the sink. <<$deytoibur>><<$deytoibur2>>'
-
+	killvar'$deytoibur'
+	killvar'$deytoibur2'
 	if BurgerQW['WorkShift'] = 1:
 		act 'Have your lunch': gt 'burgerWork', 'work'
 	elseif BurgerQW['WorkShift'] = 2:
@@ -780,12 +809,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj2':
 		boburand = rand(0, 10)
 
 		if boburand > 2:
+			killvar'boburand'
 			if BurgerQW['WorkShift'] = 1:
 				act 'Have your lunch': gt 'burgerWork', 'work'
 			elseif BurgerQW['WorkShift'] = 2:
 				act 'Leave work': gs 'burgerWork', 'work2'
 			end
 		elseif boburand <= 2:
+			killvar'boburand'
 			gs 'cum_call', 'clothes', 'A74', 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'Afterword, you notice you got some of his semen on your blouse.'
@@ -806,12 +837,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj2':
 		boburand = rand(0, 10)
 
 		if boburand > 2:
+			killvar'boburand'
 			if BurgerQW['WorkShift'] = 1:
 				act 'Have your lunch': gt 'burgerWork', 'work'
 			elseif BurgerQW['WorkShift'] = 2:
 				act 'Leave work': gs 'burgerWork', 'work2'
 			end
 		elseif boburand <= 2:
+			killvar'boburand'
 			gs 'cum_call', 'clothes', 'A74', 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'You notice that you didn''t get it all. A few drops of semen are staining your blouse.'
@@ -839,7 +872,6 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 	*clr&cla
-	bosstipsex = rand(0, 10)
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A74'
 	pose = 1
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -854,6 +886,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	if bosswantrand >= 3:
+		killvar'bosswantrand'
 		gs 'cum_call', 'butt', 'A74', 1
 		'<<$boydesc>> withdraws his cock, and shoots hot streams of semen all over your naked ass.'
 		
@@ -866,6 +899,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 			act 'Leave work': gs 'burgerWork', 'work2'
 		end
 	elseif bosswantrand < 3:
+		killvar'bosswantrand'
 		'Without warning, Anatoly takes his cock from pussy, and pushes it against your sphincter.'
 		act 'Give it to him': gt 'BurgerTip', 'anal'
 	end
@@ -873,7 +907,6 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'anal':
 	*clr&cla
-	bosstipsex = rand(0, 10)
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A74'
 	pose = 1
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -881,7 +914,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/anatoly/sex/bossanal.jpg"></center>'
 	'You push your hips back presenting your ass for Anatoly.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'anal'
-	!!gs 'dinsex','sexcum'
 	gs 'cum_call', 'butt', 'A74', 1
 	'He finishes by giving you a little smack on the ass and a "good girl".'
 	
@@ -898,7 +930,6 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sex2':
 	*clr&cla
-	bosstipsex = rand(0, 10)
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A74'
 	pose = 0
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -914,6 +945,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex2':
 	gs 'stat'
 	
 	if bosswantrand >= 3:
+		killvar'bosswantrand'
 		gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', 'A74', 1
 		'<<$boydesc>> withdraws his cock, and shoots hot streams of semen all over your naked ass.'
 		
@@ -926,6 +958,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex2':
 			act 'Leave work': gs 'burgerWork', 'work2'
 		end
 	elseif bosswantrand < 3:
+		killvar'bosswantrand'
 		'Without warning, Anatoly takes his cock from pussy, and pushes it against your tight little ass.'
 		act 'Take it in the ass':gt 'BurgerTip', 'anal2'
 	end
@@ -934,12 +967,11 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'anal2':
 	act 'Take it in the ass':gt 'BurgerTip', 'anal2'
 	*clr&cla
-	bosstipsex = rand(0, 10)
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A74'
 	pose = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/anatoly/sex/bossanal2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You brace yourself, as he pushes his rock hard cock against your tight little sphincter.'
+	'You brace yourself, as he pushes his rock-hard cock against your tight little sphincter.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'anal'
 	!!gs 'dinsex','sexcum'
 	gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'A74', 1

locations/Cheatmenu_din.qsrc

@@ -1,7 +1,10 @@
 # Cheatmenu_din
 if settingmode = 0: settingmode = 69
 menu_off = 1
-cls
+$cheatmenu['table_start'] = '<center><table width="80%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top"><tr><td width="500" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top">'
+$cheatmenu['table_second'] = '</td><td width="500" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top">'
+$cheatmenu['table_end'] = '</td></tr></table></center>'
+cla & *clr
 
 $cheatmenu['empty'] = {
 	!Yes, intentionally empty, do not remove it
@@ -23,14 +26,13 @@ $cheatmenu['music'] = {
 }
 
 $cheatmenu['setting'] = {
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	$cheatmenu['this_menu'] = 'setting'
 	$BACKIMAGE = ''
 	if $theme['name'] = 'Custom': gs 'themes', 'check_custom_vars' & gs 'themes', 'set_custom' & gs '$menu_obnovit'
 	gs 'obj_din', 'settingtabs'
 	'<center><h1>Gameplay Settings</h1></center>'
-	'<center><table cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top"><tr>'
-	'<td cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top">'
+	$cheatmenu['table_start']
 
 	'AutoSave: <a href="exec:									disable_autosave					= iif(disable_autosave, 0, 1)					& dynamic $cheatmenu[$cheatmenu[''this_menu'']]"><<iif(disable_autosave						, ''Disabled'', ''Enabled'')>></a>'
 	'Music: <a href="exec:												dynamic $cheatmenu[''music'']												& dynamic $cheatmenu[$cheatmenu[''this_menu'']]"><<iif(music_on								, ''Enabled'', ''Disabled'')>></a>'
@@ -51,7 +53,6 @@ $cheatmenu['setting'] = {
 	*nl
 	'Renaming porn movies you star in: <a href="exec:			cheatVars[''rename_porn'']			= iif(cheatVars[''rename_porn''], 0, 1)			& dynamic $cheatmenu[$cheatmenu[''this_menu'']]"><<iif(cheatVars[''rename_porn'']			, ''Enabled'', ''Disabled'')>></a>'
 	'Remove "once a week" therapist limit: <a href="exec:		cheatVars[''therapist_schedule'']	= iif(cheatVars[''therapist_schedule''], 0, 1)	& dynamic $cheatmenu[$cheatmenu[''this_menu'']]"><<iif(cheatVars[''therapist_schedule'']	, ''Enabled'', ''Disabled'')>></a>'
-	if blackmailQW['stage'] ! 0:	'Purge the "Blackmailer" questline: <a href="exec:		gs ''blackmailer'', ''purge_all'' & dynamic $cheatmenu[$cheatmenu[''this_menu'']]">Permanently reset the entire questline!</a>'
 	*nl
 
 	'<B>Difficulty Setting</B>'
@@ -66,7 +67,7 @@ $cheatmenu['setting'] = {
 	'<li>set to ' + iif($temp_diff = 'hardcore', 'hardcore', '<a href="exec:		FUNC(''_difficulty'',''setdifficulty'',''hardcore'')		& dynamic $cheatmenu[$cheatmenu[''this_menu'']]">hardcore</a>') + '</li>'
 	'</ul>'
 	killvar '$temp_diff'
-	'</tr></table></b></center>'
+	$cheatmenu['table_end']
 }
 
 !!----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
@@ -79,7 +80,7 @@ $cheatmenu['quicktime'] = {
 	gs 'outdoors', 'weather'
 	gs 'stat'
 	gs 'fertility', 'cum_arrcheat'
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 }
 
 $cheatmenu['dynamic'] = {
@@ -91,7 +92,7 @@ $cheatmenu['dynamic'] = {
 
 $cheatmenu['vartracker'] = {
 	gs'stat'
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	act 'Return to cheat index': dynamic $cheatmenu['index']
 	'<center><h1>Cheat menu</h1></center>'
 	'<center>For testing purposes.<br>If reporting a bug only the lines in red are neccessary.</center>'
@@ -128,8 +129,8 @@ $cheatmenu['vartracker'] = {
 	'$clothingworntype: <<$clothingworntype>>'
 	'PCloQuality: <<PCloQuality>>'
 	'Mira''s Father Quest (npc_QW[''A64'']): <<npc_QW[''A64'']>>'
-	'Mira''s Quest (npc_QW[''A60'']): <<npc_QW[''A60'']>>'
-	'mirasextimes: <<mirasextimes>>'
+	'Mira''s Quest (MiraVars[''QW'']): <<MiraVars[''QW'']>>'
+	'MiraVars[''Mitka_fucks'']: <<MiraVars[''Mitka_fucks'']>>'
 	'Mira''s Relationship (npc_rel[''A60'']): <<npc_rel[''A60'']>>'
 	'Mitka''s Quest (npc_QW[''A63'']): <<npc_QW[''A63'']>>'
 	'mirabrosextime: <<mirabrosextime>>'
@@ -233,11 +234,10 @@ $cheatmenu['index'] = {
 	currhour = (daystart-1) * 24 + hour
 	currday = daystart
 	temp_week = week & temp_day = day & $temp_month = $month & temp_month = month & temp_year = year & temp_hour = hour & temp_minut = minut
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	gs 'obj_din', 'cheattabs'
 	'<center><h1>Cheat Menu - Index</h1></center>'
-	'<center><table cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top"><tr>'
-	'<td width="50%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top">'
+	$cheatmenu['table_start']
 	'<a href="exec:dynamic $cheatmenu[''dynamic'']">Dynamic Input Command</a>'
 	'<a href="exec:gs ''fertility'',''cum_arrcheat''">OOX Debug</a>'
 	'Right now <<$week[week]>> <<$month>> <<day>> <<year>> <<hour>>:<<minut>>'
@@ -253,9 +253,10 @@ $cheatmenu['index'] = {
 	*nl
 	'Hide Console input in objects window: <a href="exec:		cheatVars[''console'']		= iif(cheatVars[''console''], 0, 1)		& dynamic $cheatmenu[$cheatmenu[''this_menu'']]"><<iif(cheatVars[''console'']		, ''Enabled'', ''Disabled'')>></a>'
 	'Time Cheat in Objects window: <a href="exec:				cheatVars[''time'']			= iif(cheatVars[''time''], 0, 1)		& dynamic $cheatmenu[$cheatmenu[''this_menu'']]"><<iif(cheatVars[''time'']			, ''Enabled'', ''Disabled'')>></a>'
+	if blackmailQW['stage'] ! 0: 'Purge the "Blackmailer" questline: <a href="exec: gs ''blackmailer'', ''purge_all'' & dynamic $cheatmenu[$cheatmenu[''this_menu'']]">Permanently reset the entire questline!</a>'
 	*nl
 	'<a href="exec:dynamic $cheatmenu[''vartracker'']"><b>Variable tracker</b></a>'
-	'</tr></table></b></center>'
+	$cheatmenu['table_end']
 }
 
 !!----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
@@ -363,14 +364,13 @@ $cheatmenu['slutshot'] = {
 
 $cheatmenu['permanent'] = {
 	gs'stat'
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	gs 'obj_din', 'cheattabs'
 	$cheatmenu['this_menu'] = 'permanent'
 
 	'<center><h1>Cheat Menu - Recurrent Cheats</h1></center>'
 	'<center><font color="red"><b>WARNING!</b></font>: Disabling states may cause some events not to trigger. Use at your own risk!</center>'
-	'<center><table cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top"><tr>'
-	'<td width="90%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top">'
+	$cheatmenu['table_start']
 
 	'Willpower cost always zero: <a href="exec:					cheatVars[''willpower'']			= iif(cheatVars[''willpower''], 0, 1)				& dynamic $cheatmenu[$cheatmenu[''this_menu'']]"><<iif(cheatVars[''willpower'']				, ''Enabled'', ''Disabled'')>></a>'
 	'Infinite willpower: <a href="exec:							cheatVars[''inf_willpower'']		= iif(cheatVars[''inf_willpower''], 0, 1)			& dynamic $cheatmenu[$cheatmenu[''this_menu'']]"><<iif(cheatVars[''inf_willpower'']			, ''Enabled'', ''Disabled'')>></a>'
@@ -417,7 +417,7 @@ $cheatmenu['permanent'] = {
 
 	*nl
 	'<font color="red"><b>WARNING!</b></font>: Disabling states may cause some events not to trigger. Use at your own risk!'
-	'</tr></table></b></center>'
+	$cheatmenu['table_end']
 }
 
 !!----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
@@ -444,7 +444,7 @@ $cheatmenu['therapist_reset'] = {
 }
 
 $cheatmenu['cycle'] = {
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	if cycle ! 5:
 		EggRH = 0
 		LutH = 0
@@ -520,14 +520,13 @@ $cheatmenu['remove_preg'] = {
 
 $cheatmenu['state'] = {
 	gs'stat'
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	gs 'obj_din', 'cheattabs'
 
 	'<center><h1>Cheat Menu - Character State Changes</h1></center>'
 	'<center><font color="red"><b>WARNING!</b></font>: Using cheats can cause bugs and break your save. Cheats manipulating pregnancy or the menstrual cycle are'
 	'especially dangerous unless you know what you''re doing. When reporting bugs, please mention any cheats you used.</center>'
-	'<center><table cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top"><tr>'
-	'<td width="50%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top">'
+	$cheatmenu['table_start']
 	'Set alcohol levels:'
 	'<a href="exec:alko = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''state''] & gs ''stat''">Sober</a> <a href="exec:alko = 2 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''state''] & gs ''stat''">Tipsy</a> <a href="exec:alko = 4 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''state''] & gs ''stat''">Drunk</a> <a href="exec:alko = 7 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''state''] & gs ''stat''">Wasted</a> <a href="exec:alko = 11 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''state''] & gs ''stat''">Barely coherent</a>'
 	*nl
@@ -574,10 +573,10 @@ $cheatmenu['state'] = {
 			'Lactate Rate: <a href="exec:lactation[''lactaterate''] -= 10000 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''state'']">-10</a> <<lactation[''lactaterate'']/1000>>ml/h'
 		else
 			'Lactate Rate: <a href="exec:lactation[''lactaterate''] -= 10000 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''state'']">-10</a> <<lactation[''lactaterate'']/1000>>ml/h <a href="exec:lactation[''lactaterate''] += 10000 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''state'']">+10</a>'
-			'Cap Lactate Rate: ' + _ 
-			iif(lactation['milkprod_type'] = 0 and lactation['caplactaterate'] > 0,'<a href="exec:lactation[''caplactaterate''] -= 2 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''state'']">-2h</a> ','') + _ 
-			iif(lactation['milkprod_type'] = 1 and lactation['caplactaterate'] > 4,'<a href="exec:lactation[''caplactaterate''] -= 2 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''state'']">-2h</a> ','') + _ 
-			iif(lactation['caplactaterate'] > 0,'<<lactation[''caplactaterate'']>>h ','OFF ') + _ 
+			'Cap Lactate Rate: ' + _
+			iif(lactation['milkprod_type'] = 0 and lactation['caplactaterate'] > 0,'<a href="exec:lactation[''caplactaterate''] -= 2 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''state'']">-2h</a> ','') + _
+			iif(lactation['milkprod_type'] = 1 and lactation['caplactaterate'] > 4,'<a href="exec:lactation[''caplactaterate''] -= 2 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''state'']">-2h</a> ','') + _
+			iif(lactation['caplactaterate'] > 0,'<<lactation[''caplactaterate'']>>h ','OFF ') + _
 			iif(lactation['caplactaterate'] < 72,'<a href="exec:lactation[''caplactaterate''] += 2 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''state'']">+2h</a>','')
 			'<font color="grey">Cap lactate rate makes lactate rate stop growing if <<$pcs_firstname>> needs milking more often.</font>'
 		end
@@ -593,7 +592,7 @@ $cheatmenu['state'] = {
 	end
 	*nl
 	'<a href="exec:dynamic $cheatmenu[''therapist_reset'']">Reset therapist states</a>'
-	'</tr></table></b></center>'
+	$cheatmenu['table_end']
 }
 
 $cheatmenu['set_preg_body'] = {
@@ -613,12 +612,11 @@ $cheatmenu['set_body_class'] = {
 }
 
 $cheatmenu['bodyMod'] = {
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	act 'Return to last menu': dynamic $cheatmenu['state']
 
 	'<center><h1>Cheat Menu - Body Modification</h1></center>'
-	'<center><table cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top"><tr>'
-	'<td width="50%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top">'
+	$cheatmenu['table_start']
 	'<center><b><font color="red">WARNING!</font></b></center>'
 	'Changing body shape does not resize clothes.'
 	'May cause adverse interactions, use at your own risk!'
@@ -699,7 +697,7 @@ $cheatmenu['bodyMod'] = {
 		killvar 'bs_temp_bs_class'
 	end
 
-	'</tr></table></b></center>'
+	$cheatmenu['table_end']
 }
 
 !!----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
@@ -721,9 +719,7 @@ $cheatmenu['visualage'] = {
 }
 
 $cheatmenu['avatar_hair_set'] = {
-	$av_hair = input("Input your custom hair:")
-	if $av_hair='':exit
-	avatar_hair = 1
+	$face_style['avatar_hair'] = input("Input your custom hair:")
 	dynamic $cheatmenu['looks']
 }
 
@@ -778,22 +774,23 @@ $cheatmenu['looks'] = {
 		pcs_hgt = 200
 	end
 	gs'stat'
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	gs 'obj_din', 'cheattabs'
 	'<center><h1>Cheat Menu - Character Appearance</h1></center>'
 	'<center><font color="red"><b>WARNING!</b></font>: Using cheats can cause bugs and break your save, use them with care. When reporting bugs, please mention any cheats you used.</center>'
 	*nl
-	'<center><table  width="90%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0" valign="top">'
-	'<tr><td width="33%" cellpadding="20" valign="top">'
+	$cheatmenu['table_start']
 	'<<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>> (<<$pcs_nickname>>). <a href="exec:dynamic $cheatmenu[''rename'']">Rename</a>'
-	if player_avatar = 1:
-		'Custom Avatar: <a href="exec:player_avatar = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">ON</a>'
-	else
-		'Custom Avatar: <a href="exec:player_avatar = 1 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">OFF</a>'
-	end
-	if avatar_hair = 1:
-		'<a href="exec:avatar_hair = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">Custom Hair: ON</a>'
-		'<<$av_hair>>'
+
+
+	if face_style['type'] = 1: '<a href="exec: dynamic $cheatmenu[''change_avatar_path'']">Change current profile path:</a> <<$face_style[''avatar_path'']>>'
+	if face_style['type'] ! 0: '<a href="exec: face_style[''type''] = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">Use the dynamic profile system</a>'
+	if face_style['type'] ! 1: '<a href="exec: face_style[''type''] = 1 & $face_style[''avatar_path''] += iif($face_style[''avatar_path''] = '''', ''images/avatar.jpg'', '''') & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">Use a fixed profile image</a>'
+	if face_style['type'] ! 2: '<a href="exec: face_style[''type''] = 2 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">Use the rendered profile system</a>'
+
+	if $face_style['avatar_hair'] ! '':
+		'<a href="exec: $face_style[''avatar_hair''] = '''' & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">Custom Hair: ON</a>'
+		'<<$face_style[''avatar_hair'']>>'
 	else
 		'<a href="exec:dynamic $cheatmenu[''avatar_hair_set'']">Custom Hair: OFF</a>'
 	end
@@ -833,9 +830,9 @@ $cheatmenu['looks'] = {
 		$pcs_butt[1] = 'bubble'
 	end
 	'You have a <<$pcs_butt[1]>> butt'
-	if pcs_butt < 60: '<a href="exec: bodyVars[''butt_silicone''] += 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">Enlarge butt (silicone)</a>'
+	if pcs_butt < 50: '<a href="exec: bodyVars[''butt_silicone''] += 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">Enlarge butt (silicone)</a>'
 	if bodyVars['butt_silicone'] => 1: '<a href="exec: bodyVars[''butt_silicone''] = max(0, bodyVars[''butt_silicone'']-10) & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">Shrink butt (silicone)</a>'
-	if pcs_butt < 60: '<a href="exec: gs ''Cheatmenu_din'', ''change_pcs_mass_butt'', 10">Enlarge butt (natural)</a>'
+	if pcs_mass['butt'] < 50: '<a href="exec: gs ''Cheatmenu_din'', ''change_pcs_mass_butt'', 10">Enlarge butt (natural)</a>'
 	if pcs_mass['butt'] => 6: '<a href="exec: assreduc = 1 & gs ''Cheatmenu_din'', ''change_pcs_mass_butt'', -10">Shrink butt (natural)</a>'
 
 	!! if pcs_butt < 20:'<a href="exec: bodyVars[''butt_cheat''] += 2 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">Enlarge butt</a>'
@@ -860,7 +857,7 @@ $cheatmenu['looks'] = {
 		'<a href="exec:dounsplkil = 2 & gs ''body'', ''hardreset''">Hard Reset body shape</a>'
 	end
 
-	'</td><td width="33%" cellpadding="20" valign="top">'
+	*nl
 	'<<$pcs_vag>>'
 	if pcs_vag > 0:'<a href="exec:pcs_vag = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">Reinstate virginity</a>'
 	if stat['think_virgin'] < 1:'<a href="exec:stat[''vaginal''] = 0 & stat[''vaginal_fist''] = 0 & stat[''vaginal_dildo''] = 0 & stat[''vaginal_strap''] = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">Make Sveta believe she is a virgin again (resets the related sex stats)</a>'
@@ -894,8 +891,7 @@ $cheatmenu['looks'] = {
 	end
 	*nl
 	'<a href="exec:dynamic $cheatmenu[''tatoo'']">Tattoo removal</a>'
-
-	'</td><td width="33%" cellpadding="20" valign="top">'
+	*nl
 	'<<$hair>>'
 	if pcs_haircol = 0:
 		'Your hair is now (prev) <<$pcs_haircol>> <a href="exec:pcs_haircol +=1 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks''] & nathcol = pcs_haircol">(next)</a>'
@@ -934,7 +930,13 @@ $cheatmenu['looks'] = {
 	elseif pcs_eyecol >= 3:
 		'Your eyes are now <a href="exec:pcs_eyecol -=1 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">(prev)</a> <<$pcs_eyecol>> (next)'
 	end
-	'</td></tr></table></center>'
+	$cheatmenu['table_end']
+}
+
+$cheatmenu['change_avatar_path'] = {
+	$face_style['avatar_path'] = input('Where is the avatar image located? (Leave blank for "images/avatar.jpg")')
+	if $face_style['avatar_path'] = '': $face_style['avatar_path'] = 'images/avatar.jpg'
+	dynamic $cheatmenu['looks']
 }
 
 !!----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
@@ -1022,7 +1024,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'assreduce':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'vneshpara':
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	'<center><h1>Cheat Menu - ?</h1></center>'
 	act 'Return to appearance menu':dynamic $cheatmenu['looks']
 	*nl
@@ -1068,7 +1070,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vneshpara':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'parameters':
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	'<center><h1>Cheat Menu - Appearance Stats</h1></center>'
 	act 'Return to appearance menu':dynamic $cheatmenu['looks']
 	*nl
@@ -1117,7 +1119,7 @@ end
 
 $cheatmenu['tatoo'] = {
 	gs'stat'
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	'<center><h1>Cheat Menu - Tattoos</h1></center>'
 	act 'Return to appearance menu':dynamic $cheatmenu['looks']
 	*nl
@@ -1241,7 +1243,7 @@ $cheatmenu['printStatLinksInverted'] = {
 
 $cheatmenu['stats'] = {
 	gs 'stat'
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	gs 'obj_din', 'cheattabs'
 
 	!Set a floor and ceiling for all attributes and skills
@@ -1271,8 +1273,7 @@ $cheatmenu['stats'] = {
 	'<center><h1>Cheat Menu - Attributes and Skills</h1></center>'
 	'<center><font color="red"><b>WARNING!</b></font>: Using cheats can cause bugs and break your save, use them with care. When reporting bugs, please mention any cheats you used.</center>'
 	*nl
-	'<center><table  width="90%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0" valign="top">'
-	'<tr><td width="50%" cellpadding="10" valign="top">'
+	$cheatmenu['table_start']
 	*pl'<b>Attributes</b> (values 0 - 100):'
 	*pl '<a href="exec:dynamic $cheatmenu[''setAttrs''], 100" >Max Attributes</a>    <a href="exec:dynamic $cheatmenu[''setAttrs''], 0" >Min Attributes</a>'
 	*p 'Strength (<<stren_lvl>>): ' & dynamic $cheatmenu['printStatLinks'], 'stren', 'Strength'
@@ -1329,7 +1330,7 @@ $cheatmenu['stats'] = {
 	*p 'Pool (<<pool_lvl>>) - Total (<<pcs_pool>>): ' & dynamic $cheatmenu['printStatLinks'], 'pool', 'Pool'
 	*p 'Heels (<<pcs_heels>>) - Total (<<pcs_heels>>): ' & dynamic $cheatmenu['printStatLinks'], 'heels', 'Heels'
 	if $start_type[1] ! 'nomagic': *p 'Spell Casting (<<splcstng_lvl>>) - Total (<<pcs_splcstng>>): ' & dynamic $cheatmenu['printStatLinks'], 'splcstng', 'Spellcasting'
-	'</td><td width="50%" cellpadding="10" valign="top">'
+	*nl
 	*pl'<b>Combat:</b>'
 	*p 'Jabs (<<jab_lvl>>)- Total (<<pcs_jab>>): ' & dynamic $cheatmenu['printStatLinks'], 'jab', 'Jabs'
 	*p 'Power Strikes (<<punch_lvl>>) - Total (<<pcs_punch>>): ' & dynamic $cheatmenu['printStatLinks'], 'punch', 'Power Strikes'
@@ -1365,7 +1366,7 @@ $cheatmenu['stats'] = {
 	*p 'Modeling (<<mdlng_lvl>>) - Total (<<pcs_mdlng>>): ' & dynamic $cheatmenu['printStatLinks'], 'mdlng', 'Modeling'
 	*p 'Medicine (<<medcn_lvl>>) - Total (<<pcs_medcn>>): ' & dynamic $cheatmenu['printStatLinks'], 'medcn', 'Medicine'
 	*p 'Cleaning (<<cleaning_lvl>>) - Total (<<pcs_cleaning>>): ' & dynamic $cheatmenu['printStatLinks'], 'cleaning', 'Cleaning'
-	'</tr></table></b></center>'
+	$cheatmenu['table_end']
 }
 
 !!----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
@@ -1374,13 +1375,12 @@ $cheatmenu['stats'] = {
 
 $cheatmenu['reputation'] = {
 	gs'stat'
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	gs 'obj_din', 'cheattabs'
 	'<center><h1>Cheat Menu - Relationships and Renown</h1></center>'
 	'<center>Relationship values are from 0 - 100.</center>'
 	'<center>If they exceed this limit they will be reset overnight.</center>'
-	'<center><table  width="90%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0" valign="top">'
-	'<tr><td width="50%" cellpadding="10" valign="top">'
+	$cheatmenu['table_start']
 	*nl
 	'Relationships in Pavlovsk'
 	*nl
@@ -1519,11 +1519,7 @@ $cheatmenu['reputation'] = {
 			'<<$npc_firstname[''A138'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A138'']>>: <<npc_rel[''A138'']>>  <a href="exec:npc_rel[''A138''] += 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">+10</a> <a href="exec:npc_rel[''A138''] -= 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">-10</a>'
 		end
 	end
-	*nl
-	'<font color="blue"><b>Nicholas'' Family</b></font>'
-	'<a href="exec:gt ''nichUtil'', ''debug''">Storyline Debug Menu</a>'
-	'</td><td width="50%" cellpadding="10" valign="top">'
-	*nl
+	$cheatmenu['table_second']
 	'Miscellaneous relationships'
 	*nl
 	'<font color="blue"><b>Others</b></font>'
@@ -1579,6 +1575,9 @@ $cheatmenu['reputation'] = {
 			'Martin: <<npc_rel[''A216'']>>	<a href="exec:npc_rel[''A216''] += 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">+10</a> <a href="exec:npc_rel[''A216''] -= 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">-10</a>'
 		end
 	end
+	*nl
+	'<font color="blue"><b>Nicholas'' Family</b></font>'
+	'<a href="exec:gt ''nichUtil'', ''debug''">Storyline Debug Menu</a>'
 
 	if pcs_lovers[0] = 1:
 		*nl
@@ -1669,7 +1668,7 @@ $cheatmenu['reputation'] = {
 			'You''ve been expelled from school. <a href="exec:SchoolBlock = 0 & schoolPredupr = 0 & schoolprogul = 0 & pcs_grades = 50 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear</a>.'
 		end
 	end
-	'</td></tr></table></center>'
+	$cheatmenu['table_end']
 }
 
 !!----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
@@ -1678,12 +1677,10 @@ $cheatmenu['reputation'] = {
 
 $cheatmenu['documents'] = {
 	gs'stat'
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	gs 'obj_din', 'cheattabs'
 	'<center><h1>Cheat Menu - Diplomas, Licences, and Certificates</h1></center>'
-	'<center><table cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top"><tr>'
-	'<td width="33%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top">'
-	'<td width="50%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top">'
+	$cheatmenu['table_start']
 	if SchoolAtestat = 0: '<a href="exec:SchoolAtestat = 1 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''documents'']">Get School Certificate</a>'
 	if mid($start_type,1,2) = 'sg' and SchoolAtestat = 0: '<font color="red"><b>WARNING!</b></font>: This will end your school year!' & *nl
 	if SchoolAtestat = 1:'Already have a School Certificate'
@@ -1698,7 +1695,7 @@ $cheatmenu['documents'] = {
 	if masseuse['certification'] >= 10:'You already have a Masseuse Certificate'
 	if prava = 0:'<a href="exec:prava = 1 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''documents'']">Get Driving Licence</a>'
 	if prava = 1:'You already have Driving Licence'
-	'</td></tr></table></center>'
+	$cheatmenu['table_end']
 }
 
 !!----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
@@ -1716,7 +1713,7 @@ $cheatmenu['input_time'] = {
 
 $cheatmenu['week'] = {
 	gs'stat'
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	'<center><a href="exec:dynamic $cheatmenu[''index'']"><b>Cheat menu</b></a> - <a href="exec:dynamic $cheatmenu[''time'']"><b>Time</b></a></center>'
 	*nl
 	'Current time: <b><<day>></b>. day of <b><<$month>></b>, <b><<year>></b>, <<$tempcurtime>>'
@@ -1733,7 +1730,7 @@ $cheatmenu['week'] = {
 
 $cheatmenu['month'] = {
 	gs'stat'
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	'<center><a href="exec:dynamic $cheatmenu[''index'']"><b>Cheat menu</b></a> - <a href="exec:dynamic $cheatmenu[''time'']"><b>Time</b></a></center>'
 	*nl
 	'Current time: <b><<day>></b>. day of <b><<$month>></b>, <b><<year>></b>, <<$tempcurtime>>'
@@ -1803,13 +1800,12 @@ $cheatmenu['time'] = {
 		:femcycloop
 		if femcycloop > 0:gs 'femcyc' & femcycloop -= 1 & jump 'femcycloop'
 	end
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	gs 'obj_din', 'cheattabs'
 	'<center><h1>Cheat Menu - Manipulate Time and Weather</h1></center>'
 	'<center><font color="red"><b>WARNING!</b></font>: Using cheats to manipulate time can <b>easily</b> break quests and cause bugs. Do not use them unless'
 	'you know what you''re doing. When reporting bugs, please mention any cheats you used.</center>'
-	'<center><table cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top"><tr>'
-	'<td width="50%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top">'
+	$cheatmenu['table_start']
 	if temp_minut > 9:
 		if temp_hour > 9: $temptime = '<b><<temp_hour>>:<<temp_minut>></b>' else $temptime = '<b>0<<temp_hour>>:<<temp_minut>></b>'
 	else
@@ -1877,7 +1873,7 @@ $cheatmenu['time'] = {
 	*nl
 	'<a href="exec:day = temp_day & $month = $temp_month & month = temp_month & year = temp_year & hour = temp_hour & minut = temp_minut & currtimecheck = 1 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''time'']">Accept target date & time</a>'
 	'<a href="exec:temp_day = day & $temp_month = $month & temp_month = month & temp_year = year & temp_hour = hour & temp_minut = minut & dynamic $cheatmenu[''time'']">Reset target date & time</a>'
-	'</td></tr></table></center>'
+	$cheatmenu['table_end']
 }
 
 !!----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
@@ -1977,7 +1973,7 @@ $cheatmenu['sucresetdo'] = {
 }
 
 $cheatmenu['succubreset'] = {
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	'Are you sure you want to reset your Succubus status? You will lose all levels, saved power, and succubus skill levels.'
 	*nl
 	'<a href="exec:dynamic $cheatmenu[''magic'']"><b>No, nevermind.</b></a>'
@@ -1987,9 +1983,10 @@ $cheatmenu['succubreset'] = {
 
 $cheatmenu['magic'] = {
 	gs'stat'
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	gs 'obj_din', 'cheattabs'
 	'<center><h1>Cheat Menu - Magic</h1></center>'
+	$cheatmenu['table_start']
 	'<center>Is magical: <a href="exec:pcs_magik += 1 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''magic'']">+1<<pcs_magik>></a></center>'
 	if succubusflag = 1:
 		'<center><a href="exec:dynamic $cheatmenu[''succubreset'']"><b>Remove & Reset Succubus status</b></a></center>'
@@ -2029,6 +2026,7 @@ $cheatmenu['magic'] = {
 
 	*pl func('cleanHTML',$SpellListStr)
 
+	$cheatmenu['table_end']
 	killvar 'i'
 	killvar '$ThisLocation'
 	killvar '$spellFlipper'
@@ -2041,10 +2039,10 @@ $cheatmenu['magic'] = {
 !!----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 
 $cheatmenu['display'] = {
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	gs 'obj_din', 'settingtabs'
 	'<center><h1>Display Setting</h1></center>'
-	*p '<center><table cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top"><tr><td cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top">'
+	$cheatmenu['table_start']
 	if usePopUps = 1:
 		'Allow Popup Pictures: Currently ON - <a href="exec:usePopUps = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''display'']">Turn OFF</a>'
 	else
@@ -2097,7 +2095,7 @@ $cheatmenu['display'] = {
 	if Enable_Android = 1:
 		'Set Fontsize for Status: Unsupported'
 		'Android Mode:Currently ON - <a href="exec:Enable_Android = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''display'']">Turn OFF</a>'
-		! 'click <a href="exec:cls & FUNC (''$menu_obnovit'')">refresh</a> to refresh status window.'
+		! 'click <a href="exec:cla & *clr & FUNC (''$menu_obnovit'')">refresh</a> to refresh status window.'
 		'click <B>refresh</B> on top of status window to renew.'
 	else
 		'Android Mode: Currently OFF - <a href="exec:Enable_Android = 1 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''display'']">Turn ON</a>'
@@ -2108,7 +2106,7 @@ $cheatmenu['display'] = {
 	else
 		'Show Debug window on save load: Currently ON - <a href="exec:loadg_show_debug = 0 & debug_warning_closed = 1 & showobjs 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''display'']">Turn OFF</a>'
 	end
-	*p '</td></tr></table></center>'
+	$cheatmenu['table_end']
 }
 
 $cheatmenu['theme_customize_input'] = {
@@ -2251,7 +2249,7 @@ $cheatmenu['theme_presets_copy'] = {
 }
 
 $cheatmenu['theme_export'] = {
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	act 'Return': dynamic $cheatmenu['theme_customize']
 	"$custom_theme['fname'] = '<<$custom_theme['fname']>>'"
 	"custom_theme['fsize'] = <<custom_theme['fsize']>>"
@@ -2371,7 +2369,7 @@ $cheatmenu['theme_customize'] = {
 	!!  --- LOREM IPSUM ---
 	$icon_selector = iif(theme['is_dark'] = 0, '_b', '_w')
 	icon_height = fsize * 15 / 10
-	*p '<td width="50%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top">'
+	*p '<td width="500" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top">'
 
 	*p '"Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit, sed do eiusmod tempor incididunt ut labore et dolore magna aliqua. Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat. Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur. Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum."'
 
@@ -2417,11 +2415,10 @@ $cheatmenu['theme_customize'] = {
 
 $cheatmenu['status'] = {
 	gs 'stat'
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	gs 'obj_din', 'settingtabs'
 	'<center><h1>Status Window Settings</h1></center>'
-	'<center><table cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top"><tr>'
-	'<td cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top">'
+	$cheatmenu['table_start']
 	if disable_LoadSave = 0:
 		'Save/Load Buttons: Currently Image - <a href="exec:disable_LoadSave = 2 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''status''] & gs ''stat''">Select Text</a>'
 	elseif disable_LoadSave = 1:
@@ -2558,7 +2555,7 @@ $cheatmenu['status'] = {
 	end
 
 	!<a href="exec:gs ''Cheatmenu_din'' & dynamic $cheatmenu[''status''] & gs ''stat''"><img src="images/system/phone/theme/<<$phonetheme_name[pcs_phonetheme]>>/icon_settings.png"></a>
-	'</tr></table></b></center>'
+	$cheatmenu['table_end']
 }
 
 !!----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
@@ -2566,10 +2563,10 @@ $cheatmenu['status'] = {
 !!----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 
 $cheatmenu['theme'] = {
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	gs 'obj_din', 'settingtabs'
 	'<center><h1>Phone Theme Menu</h1></center>'
-	'<center><table width="90%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top"><tr>'
+	$cheatmenu['table_start']
 	*nl
 	if pcs_phonetheme = 0: $phoneNameTemp = 'Standard'
 	if pcs_phonetheme = 1: $phoneNameTemp = 'Bimbo'
@@ -2611,7 +2608,7 @@ $cheatmenu['theme'] = {
 	elseif i <= ARRSIZE('phonetheme') and i > 12 and i <= 15:
 		jump 'phonethemeloop'
 	end
-	'</tr></table></b></center>'
+	$cheatmenu['table_end']
 }
 
 !!----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
@@ -2655,13 +2652,12 @@ $cheatmenu['pain'] = {
 	if pain['clitoris'] < 0: pain['clitoris'] = 0
 	if pain['urethra'] < 0: pain['urethra'] = 0
 	if pain['cervix'] < 0: pain['cervix'] = 0
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	gs 'obj_din', 'cheattabs'
 	'<center><h1>Cheat Menu - Pain Management</h1></center>'
 	'<center><a href="exec:killvar ''pain'' & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">No pain</a></center>'
 	*nl
-	'<center><table  width="90%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0" valign="top">'
-	'<tr><td width="50%" cellpadding="10" valign="top">'
+	$cheatmenu['table_start']
 	'pain[head] = <<pain[''head'']>> <a href="exec:pain[''head''] -= 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">-10</a> <a href="exec:pain[''head''] += 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">+10</a>'
 	'pain[hair] = <<pain[''hair'']>> <a href="exec:pain[''hair''] -= 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">-10</a> <a href="exec:pain[''hair''] += 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">+10</a>'
 	'pain[ears] = <<pain[''ears'']>> <a href="exec:pain[''ears''] -= 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">-10</a> <a href="exec:pain[''ears''] += 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">+10</a>'
@@ -2681,7 +2677,7 @@ $cheatmenu['pain'] = {
 	'pain[thighs] = <<pain[''thighs'']>> <a href="exec:pain[''thighs''] -= 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">-10</a> <a href="exec:pain[''thighs''] += 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">+10</a>'
 	'pain[left leg] = <<pain[''legL'']>> <a href="exec:pain[''legL''] -= 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">-10</a> <a href="exec:pain[''legL''] += 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">+10</a>'
 	'pain[right leg] = <<pain[''legR'']>> <a href="exec:pain[''legR''] -= 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">-10</a> <a href="exec:pain[''legR''] += 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">+10</a>'
-	'</td><td width="50%" cellpadding="10" valign="top">'
+	$cheatmenu['table_second']
 	'pain[feet] = <<pain[''feet'']>> <a href="exec:pain[''feet''] -= 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">-10</a> <a href="exec:pain[''feet''] += 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">+10</a>'
 	'pain[toes] = <<pain[''toes'']>> <a href="exec:pain[''toes''] -= 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">-10</a> <a href="exec:pain[''toes''] += 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">+10</a>'
 	'pain[shoulders] = <<pain[''shoulders'']>> <a href="exec:pain[''shoulders''] -= 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">-10</a> <a href="exec:pain[''shoulders''] += 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">+10</a>'
@@ -2700,7 +2696,7 @@ $cheatmenu['pain'] = {
 	'pain[clitoris] = <<pain[''clitoris'']>> <a href="exec:pain[''clitoris''] -= 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">-10</a> <a href="exec:pain[''clitoris''] += 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">+10</a>'
 	'pain[urethra] = <<pain[''urethra'']>> <a href="exec:pain[''urethra''] -= 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">-10</a> <a href="exec:pain[''urethra''] += 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">+10</a>'
 	'pain[cervix] = <<pain[''cervix'']>> <a href="exec:pain[''cervix''] -= 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">-10</a> <a href="exec:pain[''cervix''] += 10 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''pain'']">+10</a>'
-	'</td></tr></table></center>'
+	$cheatmenu['table_end']
 	*nl
 	'You may still have pain from gaping or having been spanked, you can clear these using "Cure all ailments." in "Cheat Menu - Character State Changes"'
 	'You currently have vaginal gaping of <<vgape>>'
@@ -2734,11 +2730,10 @@ $cheatmenu['DNAC'] = {
 }
 
 $cheatmenu['DNA'] = {
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	gs 'obj_din', 'cheattabs'
 	'<center><h1>Cheat Menu - DNA Generation</h1></center>'
-	'<center><table width="90%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top"><tr>'
-	'<td cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top">'
+	$cheatmenu['table_start']
 	'<center>DNA string generation<br>If parents are not in game, leave the respective IDs empty</center>'
 	*nl
 	if $cheatDNAC ! '':
@@ -2911,7 +2906,7 @@ $cheatmenu['DNA'] = {
 	killvar '$tempDNAM'
 	killvar '$tempDNAC'
 	killvar 'cheatDNAgenerated'
-	'</td></tr></table></center>'
+	$cheatmenu['table_end']
 }
 
 !!----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
@@ -2919,7 +2914,7 @@ $cheatmenu['DNA'] = {
 !!----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 
 $cheatmenu['fame'] = {
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	gs 'obj_din', 'cheattabs'
 	'<center><h1>Cheat Menu - Fame</h1></center>'
 	$table['fame'] = '<center><table width="90%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="5" valign="top" border="1">'
@@ -3068,7 +3063,7 @@ $cheatmenu['bdimcstaddpro'] = {
 }
 
 $cheatmenu['bdimcstadd'] = {
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	'<center><b>Body Image Set Addition</b></center>'
 	'<a href="exec:killvar ''klsetask'' & dynamic $cheatmenu[''bdimmain'']"><b>Go Back</b></a>'
 	*nl
@@ -3094,7 +3089,7 @@ $cheatmenu['bdimcstdesed'] = {
 
 $cheatmenu['bdimdisplay'] = {
 	gs 'stat'
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	'<center><h1>Cheat menu</h1></center>'
 	*nl
 	'<center><b>Body Image Set Display</b></center>'
@@ -3195,7 +3190,7 @@ $cheatmenu['bdimdisplay'] = {
 }
 
 $cheatmenu['bdimcstdel'] = {
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	'<center><b>Body Image Set Removal</b></center>'
 	'<a href="exec:killvar ''klsetask'' & dynamic $cheatmenu[''bdimdisplay'']"><b>Go Back</b></a>'
 	*nl
@@ -3249,11 +3244,10 @@ $cheatmenu['bdimcstdel'] = {
 
 $cheatmenu['bdimmain'] = {
 	gs 'stat'
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	gs 'obj_din', 'cheattabs'
 	'<center><h1>Cheat Menu - Body Image Sets</h1></center>'
-	'<center><table cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top"><tr>'
-	'<td width="50%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top">'
+	$cheatmenu['table_start']
 	'<center><b>Body Image Controls</b></center>'
 	*nl
 	'You are currently using set: <<$bodimgsets[((bodset * 10) + 9)]>>'
@@ -3315,7 +3309,7 @@ $cheatmenu['bdimmain'] = {
 		'<a href="exec:dynamic $cheatmenu[''bdimcstadd'']"><b>Add new set</b></a>'
 		*nl
 	end
-	'</td></tr></table></center>'
+	$cheatmenu['table_end']
 }
 
 !!----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
@@ -3324,17 +3318,17 @@ $cheatmenu['bdimmain'] = {
 
 $cheatmenu['about'] = {
 	gs 'stat'
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	gs 'obj_din', 'settingtabs'
 	gs 'saveg'
 	gs 'addbuilddate'
 	'<center><h1>About Window</h1></center>'
-	'<center><table cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top">'
+	$cheatmenu['table_start']
 	'<tr><td><h3><center>Girl Life version <<version_major+"."+version_minor+"."+version_revision+"."+version_patch+iif($git_hash ! "", "<br>"+$git_hash+" (dev build)", "")>></center></h3></td></tr>'
 	'<tr><td><h3><center>built on <<$builddate>></center></h3></td></tr>'
 	'<tr><td><h5><center>if loaded so it was the save from</center></h5></td></tr>'
 	'<tr><td cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top"><center><<$version>></center></td></tr>'
-	'</table></center>'
+	$cheatmenu['table_end']
 	killvar '$tmp'
 }
 
@@ -3344,7 +3338,7 @@ $cheatmenu['about'] = {
 
 $cheatmenu['items'] = {
 	gs'stat'
-	cls
+	cla & *clr
 	gs 'obj_din', 'cheattabs'
 	'<center><h1>Cheat Menu - Items</h1></center>'
 
@@ -3476,10 +3470,10 @@ $cheatmenu['items'] = {
 		*pl 'Fabric: <a href="exec:mc_inventory[''sewing_fabric'']=input(''Set number'') & dynamic $cheatmenu[''items'']"><b> <<mc_inventory[''sewing_fabric'']>> </b></a>'
 
 		if mc_inventory['sewing_kit'] = 0:
-			*pl 'Sewing kit: <a href="exec:sewing_kit = 1 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''items'']"><b>none</b></a>'
+			*pl 'Sewing kit: <a href="exec:mc_inventory[''sewing_kit''] = 1 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''items'']"><b>none</b></a>'
 		end
 		if mc_inventory['sewing_kit'] = 1:
-			*pl 'Sewing kit: <a href="exec:sewing_kit = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''items'']"><b>owned</b></a>'
+			*pl 'Sewing kit: <a href="exec:mc_inventory[''sewing_kit''] = 1 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''items'']"><b>owned</b></a>'
 		end
 
 		if bag = 1:

locations/Cum_Manage.qsrc

@@ -506,7 +506,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cumeater_icon':
 	*nl
 	j = 0
 	:cumeater_icon_jump
-		if cumloc[j] > 0 and j <> 12 and ((j <> 0 and j <> 3) or FUNC('Cum_Manage', 'check_innards', j) = 1 or cheatVars['enema'] = 1): gs 'cum_manage', 'cumeater', j
+		if cumloc[j] > 0 and j <> 12 and ((j <> 0 and j <> 3) or FUNC('Cum_Manage', 'check_innards', j) = 1 or cheatVars['enema'] = 1) and FUNC('Cum_Manage', 'check_private', j) = 1: gs 'cum_manage', 'cumeater', j
 	if j < 17: j += 1 & jump 'cumeater_icon_jump'
 end
 
@@ -713,20 +713,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cum_stat_display':
 			$icon_txtloc = $txtloc
 		elseif i = 11:
 			if pcs_haircol = 0:
-				$cum_face_image = 'brown/'
-				$cum_face_image += rand(1,31)
+				$cum_face_image = 'brown/<<rand(1,31)>>'
 			elseif pcs_haircol = 1:
-				$cum_face_image = 'black/'
-				$cum_face_image += rand(1,23)
+				$cum_face_image = 'black/<<rand(1,23)>>'
 			elseif pcs_haircol = 2:
-				$cum_face_image = 'red/'
-				$cum_face_image += rand(1,19)
+				$cum_face_image = 'red/<<rand(1,19)>>'
 			elseif pcs_haircol = 3:
-				$cum_face_image = 'blonde/'
-				$cum_face_image += rand(1,25)
+				$cum_face_image = 'blonde/<<rand(1,25)>>'
 			elseif pcs_haircol > 3:
-				$cum_face_image = 'custom/'
-				$cum_face_image += rand(1,20)
+				$cum_face_image = 'custom/<<rand(1,20)>>'
 			end
 			$txtloc_adj = 'across '
 			$icon_txtloc = 'your face'
@@ -931,12 +926,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cum_stat_display':
 			end
 		if j < 7: j+=1 & jump 'ageloop'
 
-		if stat_cumloc_check = 1 and (FUNC('Cum_Manage', 'check_private', i) = 0 _ 
-		or (i <> 0 and cumsumass = 0 and cumsumvag > 0 and FUNC('Cum_Manage', 'check_innards', 0) = 0) _ 
+		if stat_cumloc_check = 1 and _ 
+		  ((i <> 0 and cumsumass = 0 and cumsumvag > 0 and FUNC('Cum_Manage', 'check_innards', 0) = 0) _ 
 		or (i <> 3 and cumsumvag = 0 and cumsumass > 0 and FUNC('Cum_Manage', 'check_innards', 3) = 0) _ 
-		or (i > 3 and cumsumvag > 0 and FUNC('Cum_Manage', 'check_innards', 0) = 0 and cumsumass > 0 and FUNC('Cum_Manage', 'check_innards', 3) = 0)):
-			stat_cumloc_check = 2
+		or (i >  3 and cumsumvag > 0 and FUNC('Cum_Manage', 'check_innards', 0) = 0 and cumsumass > 0 and FUNC('Cum_Manage', 'check_innards', 3) = 0)):
+			stat_cumloc_check = 0
 		end
+		!! if stat_cumloc_check = 1 and FUNC('Cum_Manage', 'check_private', i) = 0: stat_cumloc_check = 2
+
 
 	if i < 18: i+=1 & jump 'cumlocloop'
 	killvar 'i'

locations/FedorEv2.qsrc

@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Train Tracks':
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'	
 		gs 'stat'			
 
-		act 'Walk home with Fedor': gt 'pav_residential'	
+		act 'Walk home with Fedor': gs 'homes_properties', 'go_straight_home'	
 	end	
 	act 'Offer him your hand':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Train Tracks':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/park/nokiss.jpg"></center>'
 		'You think to yourself "This is going too fast." so you offer Fedor your hand. He is a little surprised at first but kisses your hand nonetheless. Fedor lowers your hand as he releases it and after a few moments of silence you notice a Fedor''s posture lowers as he turns away from you "It''s starting to get late, we should probably get going before your parents start to worry about you." He says, with a meek smile as he takes your hand and walks you home.'
 			
-		act 'Walk home with Fedor': gt 'pav_residential'
+		act 'Walk home with Fedor': gs 'homes_properties', 'go_straight_home'
 	end	
 end	
 
@@ -254,7 +254,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Movies 2':
 				*clr & cla				
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/cinema/sex/kinosex3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You slowly turn back to Fedor and notice that he forgot to zip his pants and you can see his underwear poking out, so you slowly reach out to zip it for him when you feel sudden excitement as your hand is over his crootch and with out thinking you reach into his pants and start rubbing on his penis. You can feel how rock hard his cock is and unable to stop yourself you start jerking him off hearing him softly moan. You then look up to him to see him biting his lip trying not to make too much noise.'
+				'You slowly turn back to Fedor and notice that he forgot to zip his pants and you can see his underwear poking out, so you slowly reach out to zip it for him when you feel sudden excitement as your hand is over his crootch and with out thinking you reach into his pants and start rubbing on his penis. You can feel how rock-hard his cock is and unable to stop yourself you start jerking him off hearing him softly moan. You then look up to him to see him biting his lip trying not to make too much noise.'
 				
 				act 'Continue jerking him':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -311,7 +311,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Movie 4':
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'	
 		gs 'stat'			
 
-		act 'Go Home': gt 'korrPar'
+		act 'Go Home': gs 'homes_properties', 'go_straight_home'
 	end
 	
 	act 'Say goodbye and leave':
@@ -322,7 +322,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Movie 4':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/movies/endbye.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You put your index finger on his lips. "Sorry but I just re-applied my lipstick." and then you back up into your apartment as you say, "Bye" Fedor then tilts his head downward and looks noticeably upset as you close the door.'
 
-		act 'Go Home': gt 'korrPar'
+		act 'Go Home': gs 'homes_properties', 'go_straight_home'
 	end
 end	
 	
@@ -364,7 +364,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Home':
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/movies/endbye.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'You tell Fedor that you need to go and he wraps his arms around you, giving you a warm hug as he replies, "I understand, maybe next time." and he walks you home. Fedor fetches your coat and walks you out the door. When you arrive at your apartment, you give Fedor a soft kiss on the cheek. "Until next time." as you give him a wink and close the door.'
 								
-				act 'Go home': gt 'korrPar'
+				act 'Go home': gs 'homes_properties', 'go_straight_home'
 			end
 			
 			act 'How can I say no to that? <b><h4><font color=#ff00cc>[Go steady]</font></h4></b>':
@@ -609,7 +609,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Wash Up':
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'	
 			gs 'stat'
 				
-			act 'Go home': gt 'korrPar'
+			act 'Go home': gs 'homes_properties', 'go_straight_home'
 		end	
 	end	
 end
@@ -700,7 +700,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Skate Kiss':
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'	
 	gs 'stat'		
 	
-	act 'Walk home with Fedor': gt 'korrPar'
+	act 'Walk home with Fedor': gs 'homes_properties', 'go_straight_home'
 	
 	act 'I''ll be fine on my own': gt 'pav_residential'
 end
@@ -714,7 +714,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Skate End':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/park/Skate/skate5.jpg"></center>'
 	'You and Fedor decide that you''ve had enough skating for today, so you both sit down on a nearby bench and discuss your favorite subjects in school, along with past experiences. After a few minutes of chatting Fedor says, "I had a great time with you <<$pcs_firstname>>. Would you like me to walk you home or will you be fine on your own?"'
 	
-	act 'Walk home with Fedor': gt 'korrPar'
+	act 'Walk home with Fedor': gs 'homes_properties', 'go_straight_home'
 	
 	act 'I''ll be fine on my own': gt 'pav_residential'
 end
@@ -1031,7 +1031,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Park End':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/park/walk2.jpg"></center>'
-	'Fedor takes you by the hand then leads you to your apartment while you both chat about various things. When you arrive at your apartment, Fedor spins you around then gives you a passionate kiss as he pushes you against the wall for a more passionate kiss, before pulling off you and giving you a wink as he turns away and walks off.'
+	'Fedor takes you by the hand then leads you home, while you both chat about various things. When you arrive at your place, Fedor spins you around then gives you a passionate kiss as he pushes you against the wall for a more passionate kiss, before pulling off you and giving you a wink as he turns away and walks off.'
 	*nl	
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/endkiss.mp4"></video></center>'
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A5'
@@ -1039,7 +1039,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Park End':
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'	
 	gs 'stat'		
 	
-	act 'Leave': gt 'korrPar'
+	act 'Leave': gs 'homes_properties', 'go_straight_home'
 end		
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Breakup':

locations/FedorEv4.qsrc

@@ -724,7 +724,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'End Date 2':
 	*nl
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/endkiss.mp4"></video></center>'
 
-	act 'Walk home':gt 'korrPar'
+	act 'Walk home': gs 'homes_properties', 'go_straight_home'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'TV':
@@ -1406,7 +1406,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Dimka Aftermath':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console2.jpg"></center>'
 	'You approach Fedor, he stands up and hugs you. "I''m so sorry about not getting there in time. I can''t believe I was so careless and it was you that paid the price." You give Fedor an innocent smile as you place your hand on his cheek and say, "It''s alright Fyodor. He used to make me do things far worst than that." Fedor clenches his fists as he responds, "That fucking coward will never harm you again. I will make sure that he learns his place from now on."'
 	*nl
-	'You give Fedor a soft kiss. "I know that I will always be safe with you." Fedor looks into your eyes. "I will always love you <<$pcs_firstname>>." You reply, "And I, you, Fyodor" then you both share a long passionate kiss.'
+	'You give Fedor a soft kiss. "I know that I will always be safe with you." Fedor looks into your eyes. "I will always love you <<$pcs_firstname>>." You reply, "And I, you, Fedor" then you both share a long passionate kiss.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/kiss2.mp4"></video></center>'
 

locations/FedorEv4_sex.qsrc

@@ -1909,7 +1909,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Shower 2':
 							IvanPregChat = 1
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bathroom/Shower/shower4.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'Fedor gives you a passionate kiss as he increases the pace of his thrusts and you do your best to match his thrusts with your own. After a few seconds, Fedor groans and you feel his seed filling your womb with its warmth as you continue thrusting your hips attempting to drain his dick completely. Fedor gives you a passionate kiss and then looks you in the eyes as he says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> what have i done to deserve a perfect girl like you?"'
+							'Fedor gives you a passionate kiss as he increases the pace of his thrusts and you do your best to match his thrusts with your own. After a few seconds, Fedor groans and you feel his seed filling your womb with its warmth as you continue thrusting your hips attempting to drain his dick completely. Fedor gives you a passionate kiss and then looks you in the eyes as he says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> what have I done to deserve a perfect girl like you?"'
 							*nl
 							'His words of affection catch you off guard as you are left speechless for a few seconds then you recover your thoughts and respond, "You''ve treated me with love and affection and handled my heart with care and that is why you deserve everything I can offer you." You both stare at each other in silence until Fedor gives you another long kiss and then dries off and gets dressed before leaving the room.'
 							*nl

locations/FedorMisc.qsrc

@@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Hall':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/school/Hall/Sex/hall1.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You pull down Fedor''s pants, revealing his rock hard penis which you wrap your fingers around and begin stroking as he caresses your cheek, admiring your beauty. You continue stroking his penis as you look into his eyes to see a very lustful look in them, turning you on, knowing how badly he wants you.'
+		'You pull down Fedor''s pants, revealing his rock-hard penis which you wrap your fingers around and begin stroking as he caresses your cheek, admiring your beauty. You continue stroking his penis as you look into his eyes to see a very lustful look in them, turning you on, knowing how badly he wants you.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'dom'
 		gs 'stat'
 

locations/Gnpc.qsrc

@@ -299,7 +299,7 @@ if GboyBalabol[numnpc] = 1:
 			cla
 			GboyBalabol[numnpc] = 2
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You think about what he said. Because of the rumours, a lot of people have already a bad opinion about you and you don''t want to lose your <<$bfTitle[numnpc]>>, too. So you reluctantly decide to forgive him.'
+			'You think about what he said. Because of the rumors, a lot of people have already a bad opinion about you and you don''t want to lose your <<$bfTitle[numnpc]>>, too. So you reluctantly decide to forgive him.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end

locations/HotelRoom.qsrc

@@ -3,14 +3,9 @@
 CLOSE ALL
 if $ARGS[0] = 'normal':
 	*clr & cla
-	$locM_arg = 'normal'
-	$locM = 'HotelRoom'
-	$loc_arg = 'normal'
-	$loc = 'HotelRoom'
+	gs 'shortgs', 'setloc', 'HotelRoom', 'normal'
 	$prevloc = $loc
 	$location_type = 'private'
-	$menu_loc = 'HotelRoom'
-	$menu_arg = 'normal'
 	menu_off = 0
 	hotelWiFi = 1
 	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
@@ -18,11 +13,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'normal':
 	gs 'internet_mobile', 'get_access', 'free'
 	gs 'music_actions', 'clear_restrictions'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Your normal hotel room</font></b></center>'
-	'<center>You have paid to stay for <<hotelRoomDays[$hotel] - daystart>> more nights in the room.</center>'
+	'<center>You have paid to stay for <<hotelRoomDays[$region] - daystart>> more nights in the room.</center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/hotel.room.normal.jpg"></center>'
-	'Your hotel room is not very large, but it has everything you need and is quite stylish. The large <a href="exec:gt ''bed2''">double bed</a> takes up most of the room. A modern <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a> (where you can choose outfits and organize your clothing) stands near the entrance of the room. Next to the door, you can find a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a>. The door to the <a href="exec:gt ''hotelroom'',''shower1''">bathroom</a> is to the right.'
-	'Your hotel room also has a <a href="exec:gt ''HotelRoom'',''tv''">TV</a>'+iif(mc_inventory['tech_computer'] = 1, ' and your <a href="exec: gt ''Komp'',''start''">computer</a> is on the desk. The hotel offers all guests free Wi-Fi.', '.')
-	
+	'Your hotel room is not very large, but it has everything you need and is quite stylish. The large <a href="exec:gt ''bed''">double bed</a> takes up most of the room. A modern <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a> (where you can choose outfits and organize your clothing) stands near the entrance of the room. Next to the door, you can find a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a>. The door to the <a href="exec:gt ''hotelroom'',''shower1''">bathroom</a> is to the right.'
+	'Your hotel room also has a <a href="exec:gt ''HotelRoom'',''tv''">TV</a>' + iif(mc_inventory['tech_computer'] = 1, ' and your <a href="exec: gt ''Komp'',''start''">computer</a> is on the desk. The hotel offers all guests free Wi-Fi.', '.')
+
 	if $ml_guitar['location'] = $loc: 'Your guitar rests on its stand next to your bed.'
 	gs 'music_actions', 'start'
 
@@ -30,18 +25,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'normal':
 	act'Go to the hotel lobby':
 		if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
 			hotelWiFi = 0
-			gt $hotel
-			killvar '$hotel'
+			if $region = 'pav':
+				gt 'pav_hotel'
+			else
+				gt 'city_hotel'
+			end
 		else
-			msg'<b><font color = red>You need to get dressed before leaving your hotel room.</font></b>'
-			gt'HotelRoom','normal'
+			msg '<b><font color = red>You need to get dressed before leaving your hotel room.</font></b>'
+			gt 'HotelRoom', 'normal'
 		end
 	end
 
-	if hotelRoom[$hotel] ! 0:
-		if money >= 100:act'Order room service (0:30) (100 <b>₽</b>)':gs 'food', 'h_food'
+	if hotelRoom[$region] ! 0:
+		if money >= 100:act 'Order room service (0:30) (100 <b>₽</b>)': gs 'food', 'h_food'
 		act 'Drink some water (0:01)': gs 'beverage', 'bev_wat'
-		if $hotel = 'pav_hotel': gs 'prostitution_functions', 'prostitute_outfit_at_home'
+		if $region = 'pav': gs 'prostitution_functions', 'prostitute_outfit_at_home'
 		gs 'wardrobe', 'default_clothing_options'
 		dynamic $fatdel
 		dynamic $lekarstvo
@@ -51,46 +49,44 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'better':
 	*clr & cla
-	$locM_arg = 'better'
-	$locM = 'HotelRoom'
-	$loc_arg = 'better'
-	$loc = 'HotelRoom'
+	gs 'shortgs', 'setloc', 'HotelRoom', 'better'
 	$prevloc = $loc
-	$menu_loc = 'HotelRoom'
-	$menu_arg = 'better'
+	$location_type = 'private'
 	menu_off = 0
 	hotelWiFi = 1
-	$location_type = 'private'
 	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
-	gs 'stat'	
+	gs 'stat'
 	gs 'internet_mobile', 'get_access', 'free'
 	gs 'music_actions', 'clear_restrictions'
 
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Your luxury room</font></b></center>'
-	'<center>You have paid to stay for <<hotelRoomDays[$hotel] - daystart>> more nights in the room.</center>'
+	'<center>You have paid to stay for <<hotelRoomDays[$region] - daystart>> more nights in the room.</center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/hotel.room.better.jpg"></center>'
-	'Your hotel room is not very large, but it has everything you need and is quite stylish. The large <a href="exec:gt ''bed2''">double bed</a> takes up most of the room. A modern <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a> (where you can choose outfits and organize your clothing) stands near the entrance of the room. Next to the door, you can find a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a>. The door to the <a href="exec:gt ''hotelroom'',''shower1''">bathroom</a> is to the right.'
+	'Your hotel room is not very large, but it has everything you need and is quite stylish. The large <a href="exec:gt ''bed''">double bed</a> takes up most of the room. A modern <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a> (where you can choose outfits and organize your clothing) stands near the entrance of the room. Next to the door, you can find a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a>. The door to the <a href="exec:gt ''hotelroom'',''shower1''">bathroom</a> is to the right.'
 	'Your hotel room also has a small flat-screen <a href="exec:gt ''HotelRoom'',''tv''">TV</a>'+iif(mc_inventory['tech_computer'] = 1, ' and your <a href="exec: gt ''Komp'',''start''">computer</a> is on the desk. The hotel offers all guests free Wi-Fi.', '.')
-	
+
 	if $ml_guitar['location'] = $loc: 'Your guitar rests on its stand next to your bed.'
 	gs 'music_actions', 'start'
-	
+
 	act'Go to the hotel lobby':
 		if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
 			hotelWiFi = 0
-			gt $hotel
-			killvar '$hotel'
+			if $region = 'pav':
+				gt 'pav_hotel'
+			else
+				gt 'city_hotel'
+			end
 		else
-			msg'<b><font color = red>You need to get dressed before leaving your hotel room.</font></b>'
-			gt'HotelRoom','better'
+			msg '<b><font color = red>You need to get dressed before leaving your hotel room.</font></b>'
+			gt 'HotelRoom', 'better'
 		end
 	end
 
-	if hotelRoom[$hotel] ! 0:
-		if money >= 100:act'Order room service (0:30) (100 <b>₽</b>)':gs 'food', 'h_food'
+	if hotelRoom[$region] ! 0:
+		if money >= 100:act 'Order room service (0:30) (100 <b>₽</b>)': gs 'food', 'h_food'
 		act 'Drink some water (0:01)': gs 'beverage', 'bev_wat'
 		act 'Have a coffee (0:05)': gs 'beverage', 'bev_cof'
-		if $hotel = 'pav_hotel': gs 'prostitution_functions', 'prostitute_outfit_at_home'
+		if $region = 'pav': gs 'prostitution_functions', 'prostitute_outfit_at_home'
 		dynamic $fatdel
 		dynamic $lekarstvo
 		dynamic $vitamin
@@ -98,48 +94,46 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'better':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'best':
-	*clr & cla	
-	$locM_arg = 'best'
-	$locM = 'HotelRoom'
-	$loc_arg = 'best'
-	$loc = 'HotelRoom'
+	*clr & cla
+	gs 'shortgs', 'setloc', 'HotelRoom', 'best'
 	$prevloc = $loc
-	$menu_loc = 'HotelRoom'
-	$menu_arg = 'best'
+	$location_type = 'private'
 	menu_off = 0
 	hotelWiFi = 1
-	$location_type = 'private'
 	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
-	gs 'stat'	
+	gs 'stat'
 	gs 'internet_mobile', 'get_access', 'free'
 	gs 'music_actions', 'clear_restrictions'
 
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Your royal suite</font></b></center>'
-	'<center>You have paid to stay for <<hotelRoomDays[$hotel] - daystart>> more nights in the room.</center>'
+	'<center>You have paid to stay for <<hotelRoomDays[$region] - daystart>> more nights in the room.</center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/hotel.room.best.jpg"></center>'
-	'Your hotel room is quite spacious, and is beautifully furnished. For a second, you wonder why a hotel in a town like Pavlovsk even has such a luxurious suite. The room is filled with expensive appliances. The gorgeous <a href="exec:gt ''bed2''">double bed</a> takes up most of the room. A modern <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a> (where you can choose outfits and organize your clothing) stands near the entrance of the room. Next to the door, you can find a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a>. The door to the <a href="exec:gt ''hotelroom'',''shower1''">bathroom</a> is to the right.'
+	'Your hotel room is quite spacious, and is beautifully furnished. For a second, you wonder why a hotel in a town like Pavlovsk even has such a luxurious suite. The room is filled with expensive appliances. The gorgeous <a href="exec:gt ''bed''">double bed</a> takes up most of the room. A modern <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a> (where you can choose outfits and organize your clothing) stands near the entrance of the room. Next to the door, you can find a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a>. The door to the <a href="exec:gt ''hotelroom'',''shower1''">bathroom</a> is to the right.'
 	'Your hotel room also has a huge flat-screen <a href="exec:gt ''HotelRoom'',''tv''">TV</a>'+iif(mc_inventory['tech_computer'] = 1, ' and your <a href="exec: gt ''Komp'',''start''">computer</a> is on the desk. The hotel offers all guests free Wi-Fi.', '.')
-	
+
 	if $ml_guitar['location'] = $loc: 'Your guitar rests on its stand next to your bed.'
 	gs 'music_actions', 'start'
 
 	act'Go to the hotel lobby':
 		if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
 			hotelWiFi = 0
-			gt $hotel
-			killvar '$hotel'
+			if $region = 'pav':
+				gt 'pav_hotel'
+			else
+				gt 'city_hotel'
+			end
 		else
-			msg'<b><font color = red>You need to get dressed before leaving your hotel room.</font></b>'
-			gt'HotelRoom','best'
+			msg '<b><font color = red>You need to get dressed before leaving your hotel room.</font></b>'
+			gt 'HotelRoom', 'best'
 		end
 	end
 
-	if hotelRoom[$hotel] ! 0:
-		if money >= 100:act'Order room service (0:30) (100 <b>₽</b>)':gs 'food', 'h_food'
+	if hotelRoom[$region] ! 0:
+		if money >= 100:act 'Order room service (0:30) (100 <b>₽</b>)': gs 'food', 'h_food'
 		act 'Drink some water (0:01)': gs 'beverage', 'bev_wat'
 		act 'Have a coffee (0:05)': gs 'beverage', 'bev_cof'
 		act 'Make some tea (0:05)': gs 'beverage', 'bev_tea'
-		if $hotel = 'pav_hotel': gs 'prostitution_functions', 'prostitute_outfit_at_home'
+		if $region = 'pav': gs 'prostitution_functions', 'prostitute_outfit_at_home'
 		dynamic $fatdel
 		dynamic $lekarstvo
 		dynamic $vitamin
@@ -148,99 +142,112 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'therapist':
 	*clr & cla
-	$hotel = 'pav_hotel'
-	$locM_arg = 'therapist'
-	$locM = 'HotelRoom'
-	$loc_arg = 'therapist'
-	$loc = 'HotelRoom'
-	$prevloc = $loc
-	$menu_loc = 'HotelRoom'
-	$menu_arg = 'therapist'
+	gs 'schedule', 'A186'
+	gs 'shortgs', 'setloc', 'HotelRoom', 'therapist'
+	if $prevloc ! $loc: $prevloc = $loc & gt 'therapist_home', 'hotel_enter'
+	$location_type = 'private'
 	menu_off = 0
 	hotelWiFi = 1
-	$location_type = 'private'
+
 	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
-	gs 'stat'	
+	gs 'stat'
 	gs 'internet_mobile', 'get_access', 'free'
 	gs 'music_actions', 'clear_restrictions'
 
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Your husband''s hotel room</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/therapist/room.jpg"></center>'
-	'Your hotel room is not very large, but it has everything you need and is quite stylish. The large <a href="exec:gt ''bed2''">double bed</a> takes up most of the room. A modern <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a> (where you can choose outfits and organize your clothing) stands near the entrance of the room. Next to the door, you can find a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a>. The door to the <a href="exec:gt ''hotelroom'',''shower1''">bathroom</a> is to the right.'
+	'Your hotel room is not very large, but it has everything you need and is quite stylish. The large <a href="exec:gt ''bed''">double bed</a> takes up most of the room. A modern <a href="exec:gt ''therapist_home'', ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a> (where you can choose outfits and organize your clothing) stands near the entrance of the room. Next to the door, you can find a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a>. The door to the <a href="exec:gt ''hotelroom'',''shower1''">bathroom</a> is to the right.'
 	'Your hotel room also has a small flat-screen <a href="exec:gt ''HotelRoom'',''tv''">TV</a>'+iif(mc_inventory['tech_computer'] = 1, ' and your <a href="exec: gt ''Komp'',''start''">computer</a> is on the desk. The hotel offers all guests free Wi-Fi.', '.')
-	
+
 	if $ml_guitar['location'] = $loc: 'Your guitar rests on its stand next to your bed.'
 	gs 'music_actions', 'start'
-	
-	act'Go to the hotel lobby':
+
+	act 'Put on your clothes and go to the hotel lobby':
+		gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+		gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
 		if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
 			hotelWiFi = 0
 			gt 'pav_hotel'
-			killvar '$hotel'
 		else
-			msg'<b><font color = red>You need to get dressed before leaving your hotel room.</font></b>'
+			msg '<b><font color = red>You need to get dressed before leaving your hotel room.</font></b>'
 			gt 'HotelRoom', 'therapist'
 		end
 	end
 
-	if hotelRoom[$hotel] ! 0:
-		if money >= 100: act'Order room service (0:30) (100 <b>₽</b>)': gs 'food', 'h_food'
-		act 'Drink some water (0:01)': gs 'beverage', 'bev_wat'
-		act 'Have a coffee (0:05)': gs 'beverage', 'bev_cof'
-		dynamic $fatdel
-		dynamic $lekarstvo
-		dynamic $vitamin
+	act 'Drink some water (0:01)': gs 'beverage', 'bev_wat'
+	act 'Have a coffee (0:05)': gs 'beverage', 'bev_cof'
+	if hour = 17 and minut >= 45 or hour = 18:
+		act 'Cook dinner (0:30)': gt 'therapist_home', 'cook'
+	elseif money >= 100:
+		act 'Order room service (0:30) (100 <b>₽</b>)': gs 'food', 'h_food'
+	end
+	dynamic $fatdel
+	dynamic $lekarstvo
+	dynamic $vitamin
+
+	gs 'therapist_home', 'set_Hotelacts'
+
+	if pcs_sweat >= 20 and locat['A186'] = 2:
+		cla
+		'"Hun, you need a shower, go clean up," he says and you go to the bathroom and clean up.'
+		act 'Take a shower (0:10)': gt 'therapist_home', 'shower'
 	end
+
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'shower1':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 1
 	hotelmc_inventory['shampoo'] =  1
-	$locM_arg = 'shower1'
-	$locM = 'HotelRoom'
-	$loc_arg = 'shower1'
-	$loc = 'HotelRoom'
+	gs 'shortgs', 'setloc', 'HotelRoom', 'shower1'
 	$location_type = 'bathroom'
 	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
-	gs'stat'
-	
+	gs 'stat'
+
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>The bathroom of your hotel room</font></b></center>'
-	if hotelRoom[$hotel] = 1:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/hotel.room.normal1.jpg"></center>'&'A small and unpretentious bathroom, that is nevertheless quite stylish and has everything you need.'
-	elseif hotelRoom[$hotel] = 2 or therapistQW['hotel_key'] = 3:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/hotel.room.better1.jpg"></center>'&'A nice looking and spacious bathroom, with separate bath tub.'
-	elseif hotelRoom[$hotel] = 3:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/hotel.room.best1.jpg"></center>'&'A very luxurious and spacious bathroom, fit for a king.'
+	if hotelRoom[$region] = 1:
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/hotel.room.normal1.jpg"></center>'
+		'A small and unpretentious bathroom, that is nevertheless quite stylish and has everything you need.'
+	elseif hotelRoom[$region] = 2 or therapistQW['hotel_key'] = 3:
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/hotel.room.better1.jpg"></center>'
+		'A nice looking and spacious bathroom, with separate bath tub.'
+	elseif hotelRoom[$region] = 3:
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/hotel.room.best1.jpg"></center>'
+		'A very luxurious and spacious bathroom, fit for a king.'
 	end
 
-	if hotelRoom[$hotel] = 0 and therapistQW['hotel_key'] ! 3:
+	if hotelRoom[$region] = 0 and therapistQW['hotel_key'] ! 3:
 		act 'Return to lobby (It is past checkout time)':
 			hotelWiFi = 0
-			gt $hotel
-			killvar '$hotel'
+			if $region = 'pav':
+				gt 'pav_hotel'
+			else
+				gt 'city_hotel'
+			end
 		end
 	else
 		act 'Return to your room':
 			hotelmc_inventory['shampoo'] =  0
-			if hotelRoom[$hotel] = 1:
+			if therapistQW['hotel_key'] = 3:
+				gt 'HotelRoom', 'therapist'
+			elseif hotelRoom[$region] = 1:
 				gt 'HotelRoom', 'normal'
-			elseif hotelRoom[$hotel] = 2:
+			elseif hotelRoom[$region] = 2:
 				gt 'HotelRoom', 'better'
-			elseif hotelRoom[$hotel] = 3:
+			elseif hotelRoom[$region] = 3:
 				gt 'HotelRoom', 'best'
-			elseif therapistQW['hotel_key'] = 3:
-				gt 'HotelRoom', 'therapist'
 			end
 		end
 	end
-	
-	gs 'din_van', 'private', 'hotelroom', iif(hotelRoom[$hotel] = 1, '', 'bath')
+
+	gs 'din_van', 'private', 'hotelroom', iif(hotelRoom[$region] = 1, '', 'bath')
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'tv':
 	*clr & cla
-	gs'stat'
+	$menu_loc = 'HotelRoom'
+	$menu_arg = 'tv'
+	gs 'stat'
 
 	if therapistQW['hotel_key'] = 3:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/tv2.jpg"></center>'
@@ -249,11 +256,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tv':
 	end
 	'You turn on the TV and make yourself comfortable on the bed.'
 
-	if hotelRoom[$hotel] = 0 and therapistQW['hotel_key'] ! 3:
+	if hotelRoom[$region] = 0 and therapistQW['hotel_key'] ! 3:
 		act 'Return to lobby (It is past checkout time)':
 			hotelWiFi = 0
-			gt $hotel
-			killvar '$hotel'
+			if $region = 'pav':
+				gt 'pav_hotel'
+			else
+				gt 'city_hotel'
+			end
 		end
 	else
 		act 'Get up from the bed': gt $loc, $loc_arg
@@ -265,15 +275,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watch_tv':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 60
 	pcs_mood += rand(10,20)
-	gs'stat'
+	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/tv0,'+rand(0,4)+'.jpg"></center>'
 	'You are watching the country''s main television channel. None of their programs are really worth watching, but the distraction is welcome anyway.'
 
-	if hotelRoom[$hotel] = 0 and therapistQW['hotel_key'] ! 3:
+	if hotelRoom[$region] = 0 and therapistQW['hotel_key'] ! 3:
 		act 'Return to lobby (It is past checkout time)':
 			hotelWiFi = 0
-			gt $hotel
-			killvar '$hotel'
+			if $region = 'pav':
+				gt 'pav_hotel'
+			else
+				gt 'city_hotel'
+			end
 		end
 	else
 		act 'Get up from the bed': gt $loc, $loc_arg

locations/JuliaMilHome.qsrc

@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptdoor.jpg"></center>'
 
-	act 'Leave':gt'pod_ezd','etaj_3'
+	act 'Leave':gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_3'
 	if kanikuli = 0 and hour > 6 and hour < 15 and week < 6:
 		'You knock on the door, but no one comes to answer. Julia must not be home.'
 	elseif hour > 20 :

locations/KatjaHomeTalk.qsrc

@@ -1237,12 +1237,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj_talk1':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Yeah. I''ve given a few," you admit.'
 				'"What''s it like?" Katja asks, eyes wide with excitement.'
-				gs'KatjaHomeTalk','bj_talk2'
+				gs 'KatjaHomeTalk', 'bj_talk2'
 			end
 		elseif stat['bj'] > 0:
 			minut += 3
 			katjaQW['horny'] += 5
-			gs'KatjaHomeTalk','bj_talk2'
+			gs 'KatjaHomeTalk', 'bj_talk2'
 		end
 	else
 		act 'No':

locations/Komp.qsrc

@@ -624,7 +624,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rabota':
 				'You click the button for the full job description, but it''s brief and not entirely helpful.'
 				'<i>Are you a girl who likes exposing herself on camera in erotic situations for other people''s pleasure? If so, then come to this address and ask for Dimitri! Under 21s preferred.</i>"'
 				'A quick search of the listed address tells you that it''s located somewhere in the red light district of the city.'
-				if pornstudio = 0: 'You''ve heard rumours that an underground porn studio is located somewhere in that area.'
+				if pornstudio = 0: 'You''ve heard rumors that an underground porn studio is located somewhere in that area.'
 				if pornstudio = 1: 'The porn studio is located in that area. This job listing suddenly makes more sense to you.'
 				
 				if pcs_inhib >= 40:

locations/LBZhouse.qsrc

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	act 'Let him lead':
 		*clr & cla	
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/bimbo.knees3.jpg"></center>'		
-		'<<$boydesc>> continues kissing you as he begins unzipping his pants, revealing his bulge. He proceeds to run his hand across your body, feeling your breasts, all the way down to your ass. Looking down, you see his cock is rock hard.'
+		'<<$boydesc>> continues kissing you as he begins unzipping his pants, revealing his bulge. He proceeds to run his hand across your body, feeling your breasts, all the way down to your ass. Looking down, you see his cock is rock-hard.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5 
 		gs 'stat' 

locations/LCwork.qsrc

@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start4':
 		'They live in the residential area of the city, and it''s a short drive there. You''re fairly sure the guy is the one in charge of this relationship, and when you arrive at their home, you''re proven right.'
 		'He acts like a director, telling you and the other girl to do all sorts of acts on one another while he watches, and then has the two of you please him together.'
 		'He''s particularly interested in your ass. "I hope you like anal, sweetie..." he whispers in your ear after a while. "Because my girlfriend won''t take anything up there, you''ll have to take it for the both of you!"'
-		'Fortunately he takes it slow, and it doesn''t feel all that unpleasant. The girl is very fascinated by it all, and asks you a few questions while she absent-mindedly rubs your clit and kisses your boobs as if you''re doing her a huge favour. After all: as long as her boyfriend enjoys your ass, her''s can remain unfucked.'
+		'Fortunately he takes it slow, and it doesn''t feel all that unpleasant. The girl is very fascinated by it all, and asks you a few questions while she absent-mindedly rubs your clit and kisses your boobs as if you''re doing her a huge favor. After all: as long as her boyfriend enjoys your ass, her''s can remain unfucked.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 120, 'sub', 'prostitution', 'lesbian'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 120, 'sub', 'prostitution', 'lesbian'

locations/LakeBoyDy.qsrc

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ride':
 			minut+=5
 			gs'stat'
 			'The apartment is actually in decent shape. The minimal amount of furniture and decorations don''t make it look very hospitable though, and you assume this might just be one of the places Vadim rented for business or pleasure, not for living in. Noticing you''re spending too much time looking around and aren''t following him swiftly enough, he grabs you by your hair and pulls your face to his, roughly shoving his tongue in your mouth. You can smell the tabacco on his breath, and do your best to ignore the taste as he kisses you.'
-			act'Kiss him':gt 'BelSex'
+			act 'Kiss him': gt 'BelSex'
 		end
 	end
 end

locations/LariskaSex.qsrc

@@ -232,7 +232,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal_miss_give_1':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/sex/home/strapgive_4.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'Lariska lays on her back, opens her legs, and spreads her cheeks, inviting you in. As you ease the dildo in, already wet from her mouth, she groans in both pain and pleasure, clearly enjoying it.'
-	'Pulling her legs over each of your shoulders you start thrusting into her ass as she cries out "Uhh, don''t stop! Fuck my ass!" Needing no more encouragment you pick up your speed, pounding her with everything you have.'
+	'Pulling her legs over each of your shoulders you start thrusting into her ass as she cries out "Uhh, don''t stop! Fuck my ass!" Needing no more encouragement you pick up your speed, pounding her with everything you have.'
 	'Her cries of pleasure and pain grow with each moment, until she starts orgasming, hard. You wrap your left arm around her legs to keep her from kicking you and start pinching her nipples with your right. She grips the bed sheets with both hands as her chest heaves and her eyes roll back in her head.'
 	'As her body starts to settle down, you pull out, drop her legs, and crawl up next to her to snuggle for a few minutes, until her breathing normalizes. She looks at you in adoration, and you cannot help but to plant a few soft kisses on her lips, happy just to be there with her.'
 	pcs_horny += 10

locations/MagEncounterFairy.qsrc

@@ -247,18 +247,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teleport':
 			'The Fairy says, "It''s important to take the time to feel each Fairy Ring, that''s how you can find your way back."  She flies off.'
 			'You decide it would be wise to memorize your surroundings.'
 			spellKnown['teleport'] = 1
-			tpKnown['GadForest'] = 1
+			tpKnown['gad_forest'] = 1
 			cla
-			act 'You step out of the circle...':gt 'gadforest', 'forest_edge'
+			act 'You step out of the circle...': gt 'gad_forest', 'forest_edge'
 		end
 	else
 		!take the user to random location
 
 		'The Fairy nudges you into the nearby tree circle, and giggles as you hear her incant "inla", then flies out of the ring.'
 
-		$tpRand[0]='GadForest'
-		$tpRand[1]='PushkinPark'
-		$tpRand[2]='Village'
+		$tpRand[0] = 'gad_forest'
+		$tpRand[1] = 'PushkinPark'
+		$tpRand[2] = 'Village'
 
 		act 'See where the Fairy teleports you to': gt 'treeCircle', $tpRand[rand(0,2)]
 
@@ -266,6 +266,4 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teleport':
 end
 
 
-
 --- MagEncounterFairy ---------------------------------
-

locations/MartinSex.qsrc

@@ -125,11 +125,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 				end
 
 				if exhibitionist_lvl > 0 and cycle ! 0:
-					act 'Go on the offensive - Strip':MartinStripVar = 1 & gt'MartinSex','MartinTease'
+					act 'Go on the offensive - Strip':MartinStripVar = 1 & gt 'MartinSex', 'MartinTease'
 				end
 
 				if exhibitionist_lvl > 0 and stat['bj'] > 20:
-					act 'Be even more aggressive - Give Martin a blowjob': MartinConvinceBJ = 1 & gt'MartinSex3','MartinBlowTease'
+					act 'Be even more aggressive - Give Martin a blowjob': MartinConvinceBJ = 1 & gt 'MartinSex3', 'MartinBlowTease'
 				end
 
 				act 'I understand (calm)':
@@ -237,11 +237,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		end
 
 		if exhibitionist_lvl > 0 and cycle ! 0:
-			act 'Go on the offensive - Strip':MartinStripVar = 1 & gt'MartinSex','MartinTease'
+			act 'Go on the offensive - Strip':MartinStripVar = 1 & gt 'MartinSex', 'MartinTease'
 		end
 
 		if exhibitionist_lvl > 0 and stat['bj'] > 20:
-			act 'Be even more aggressive - Give Martin a blowjob': MartinConvinceBJ = 1 & gt'MartinSex3','MartinBlowTease'
+			act 'Be even more aggressive - Give Martin a blowjob': MartinConvinceBJ = 1 & gt 'MartinSex3', 'MartinBlowTease'
 		end
 
 	elseif MartinSexTalk = 2 and MartinSex = 0:
@@ -387,11 +387,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		end
 
 		if exhibitionist_lvl > 0 and cycle ! 0:
-			act 'Go on the offensive - Strip':MartinStripVar = 1 & gt'MartinSex','MartinTease'
+			act 'Go on the offensive - Strip':MartinStripVar = 1 & gt 'MartinSex', 'MartinTease'
 		end
 
 		if exhibitionist_lvl > 0 and stat['bj'] > 20:
-			act 'Be even more aggressive - Give Martin a blowjob': MartinConvinceBJ = 1 & gt'MartinSex3','MartinBlowTease'
+			act 'Be even more aggressive - Give Martin a blowjob': MartinConvinceBJ = 1 & gt 'MartinSex3', 'MartinBlowTease'
 		end
 
 	else
@@ -537,7 +537,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinTease1':
 				gs 'stat'
 				killvar 'MartinStripVar'
 
-				act 'Let Martin fuck you':$martinpos='missionary' & gt'MartinSex2','MartinSexDyn'
+				act 'Let Martin fuck you':$martinpos='missionary' & gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinSexDyn'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -637,7 +637,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinTease2':
 					gs 'stat'
 					killvar 'MartinStripVar'
 
-					act 'Let Martin fuck you':$martinpos='doggystyle' & gt'MartinSex2','MartinSexDyn'
+					act 'Let Martin fuck you':$martinpos='doggystyle' & gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinSexDyn'
 				end
 			end
 		end

locations/MartinSex2.qsrc

@@ -106,8 +106,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinSexPrep':
 	end
 	
 	act 'Get him off with your mouth':MartinSexStop = 1 & gt 'MartinSex3','MartinBlowjob'
-	act 'Have anal sex instead':MartinSurpAnal = 1 & gt'MartinSex2','MartinAnalDyn'
-	act 'Ask Martin to wear a condom':MartinPrezik = 1 & gt'MartinSex2','MartinSexDyn'
+	act 'Have anal sex instead':MartinSurpAnal = 1 & gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinAnalDyn'
+	act 'Ask Martin to wear a condom':MartinPrezik = 1 & gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinSexDyn'
 	if $martinpos = 'cowgirl' or $martinpos = 'rev_cowgirl':
 		act 'Lower yourself onto his dick':gt 'MartinSex2','MartinSexDyn'
 	elseif $martinpos = 'sideways' or $martinpos = 'doggystyle' or $martinpos = 'missionary':
@@ -239,9 +239,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinSexDyn':
 	
 	if $martinpos = 'rev_cowgirl' or $martinpos = 'doggystyle':
 		if $martinpos = 'doggystyle':
-			act '"Fuck my ass, Martin"':gt'MartinSex2','MartinAnalDyn'
+			act '"Fuck my ass, Martin"':gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinAnalDyn'
 		elseif $martinpos = 'rev_cowgirl':
-			act 'Lower your ass onto his dick':gt'MartinSex2','MartinAnalDyn'
+			act 'Lower your ass onto his dick':gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinAnalDyn'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -818,7 +818,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinAnalDyn':
 				$orgasm_txt = ''
 				gs 'stat'
 				
-				act 'Get cleaned up':gt'MartinSex2','MartinCleanup'
+				act 'Get cleaned up':gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinCleanup'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -915,7 +915,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'PainalDyn':
 			gs 'pain', 2, 'asshole', 'tear'
 			pcs_horny -= 30
 					
-			act 'Get cleaned up':gt'MartinSex2','MartinCleanup'
+			act 'Get cleaned up':gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinCleanup'
 		end
 	end
 	
@@ -959,7 +959,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinCumshot_Mouth':
 	pcs_energy += 5
 	gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy, 1
 	
-	act 'Get cleaned up':gt'MartinSex2','MartinCleanup'
+	act 'Get cleaned up':gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinCleanup'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinCumshot_Face':
@@ -976,7 +976,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinCumshot_Face':
 	'It takes a moment or three until Martin stops painting your face white, but when you tentatively open your eyes, you are met with a smile of self-satisfaction and adoration.'
 	gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy, 1
 	
-	act 'Get cleaned up':gt'MartinSex2','MartinCleanup'
+	act 'Get cleaned up':gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinCleanup'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinCumshot_Tits':
@@ -988,7 +988,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinCumshot_Tits':
 	'That''s all the invitation Martin needs: With a final moan, the first hot jet of cum hits your breasts, soon followed by another, and another. By the time his cock stops twitching, your breast and chin are covered in sperm. Cleaning up is gonna take a while, but with a single look at Martin and the satisfied boyish grin the sight of you puts on his face, you know that it''s worth it.'
 	gs 'cum_call', 'breasts', $boy, 1
 	
-	act 'Get cleaned up':gt'MartinSex2','MartinCleanup'
+	act 'Get cleaned up':gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinCleanup'
 end	
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinCleanup':

locations/MartinSex3.qsrc

@@ -179,7 +179,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinBlowjob':
 				! '<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/bar/sex/bar/martin/blowjob/dressdom_deep.mp4"></center>'
 			! end	
 			! 'But that''s not enough for you. You like having a dick in your mouth, but you <b>love</b> having one in your throat. Martin seems a little too gentlemanly (or intimidated by your attitude) to take what he doubtlessly wants, so when you feel his cock approach that magic threshold in the depths of your mouth again, you force your head down further than before, plunging Martin''s hard <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock down your <<$pc_desc[''throat'']>> throat until your ' + iif(pirsD>0,'pierced ','') + 'nose almost touches his belly.'
-			! 'You hold it there for a moment, revelling in the feeling of self-inflicted abuse, before you pull back, only to go right back down again. You''re not holding back, and you''re making it all too clear to Martin that you don''t want him to hold back either as you''re taking him deep again and again, all the way to its base, proud and horny at your accomplishment.'
+			! 'You hold it there for a moment, reveling in the feeling of self-inflicted abuse, before you pull back, only to go right back down again. You''re not holding back, and you''re making it all too clear to Martin that you don''t want him to hold back either as you''re taking him deep again and again, all the way to its base, proud and horny at your accomplishment.'
 			! gs 'arousal', 'bj', 2, 'deepthroat', 'dom'
 		! end
 		! *nl
@@ -310,8 +310,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinPussyLick':
 	act 'Lie down on your side (Sideways)':$martinpos='sideways' & gt 'MartinSex2','MartinSexPrep'
 	act 'Get up and tell Martin you wanna ride him (Cowgirl)':$martinpos='cowgirl' & gt 'MartinSex2','MartinSexPrep'
 	act 'Get up and tell Martin you wanna ride him (<b>Reverse</b> Cowgirl)':$martinpos='rev_cowgirl' & gt 'MartinSex2','MartinSexPrep'
-	act '"Fuck my ass, Martin"':$martinpos = 'doggystyle' & gt'MartinSex2','MartinAnalDyn'
-	act 'Lower your ass onto his dick': $martinpos = 'rev_cowgirl' & gt'MartinSex2','MartinAnalDyn'
+	act '"Fuck my ass, Martin"':$martinpos = 'doggystyle' & gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinAnalDyn'
+	act 'Lower your ass onto his dick': $martinpos = 'rev_cowgirl' & gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinAnalDyn'
 			
 	act 'Blueball him - Get dressed and leave':
 		cls

locations/MeynoldHome.qsrc

@@ -14,17 +14,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 	if npc_rel['A240'] < 90:npc_rel['A240'] = 90	
 	pcs_hairbsh = 0
 	pcs_makeup = 1
-	pcs_sleep += 45
 	cumspclnt = 1
 	gs 'cum_cleanup'
-	pcs_sweat += 5	
-	minut += 270
+	pcs_sweat += 5
 	NikoAftermath = 1
-	gs'stat'
+	gs 'sleep_simple', 'forced', 270
+
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickySmile.jpg"></center>'
 	'You slowly open your eyes, and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but... where am I?" <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "After what happened at school, we couldn''t just leave you alone, to be abused by the boys, so we brought you back to our place." You scratch your head. "We?" <<$VK_VikName>> smiles then turns to her left.' 
-		
+
 	act 'Turn with her':	
 		*clr & cla		
 		minut += 5
@@ -94,10 +93,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath 2':
 	*clr & cla
 	music_loop = 0
 	close all
-	pcs_sleep += 10
 	pcs_sweat += 10
-	minut += 60
-	gs'stat'
+	gs 'sleep_simple', 'forced', 60
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'
 	'You quickly jump up, and see Katja with a concerned look on her face. "It''s okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. You were just having a bad dream." You look around the room, trying to get your bearings then turn to Katja, "Thank you Katja, I hope these nightmare don''t become a habit." Katja rubs your forehead, as she responds, "Everything will be alright. You don''t worry need to worry about anything right now. You are among friends. Remember that." As she lightly rubs your forehead. You give her a smile and an approving nod. Katja returns the smile before saying, "Now that''s what I like to see, a fresh smile."' 

locations/NikoDates.qsrc

@@ -580,13 +580,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'date_rape':
 					act '...':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
-						if NikoEv < 4:NikoEv = 4
-						if hour > 6:gs 'cikl'
-						hour = 6
-						minut = 0
-						pcs_sleep = 100
+						if NikoEv < 4: NikoEv = 4
 						NikoDate = 0
-						gs 'stat'
+						gs 'sleep_simple', 'sleep_until', 6, 0
+
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/2/Home/wake.jpg"></center>'
 						'You awaken to birds chirping and roll around in the bed before a splitting headache suddenly hits you as Niko walks into the room with a bowl of cereal in his hand and lays down next to you. "Hey you''re up. You were way too tipsy yesterday, so I took you to my place to catch some shut eye." He takes a spoonful of cereal and puts it in his mouth, chomping down on his breakfast before continuing. "I hope you slept well."'
 						'"I feel awful!" you reply. "My head is killing me."'
@@ -595,7 +592,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'date_rape':
 						
 						act 'Continue':
 							*clr & cla
-							gs 'stat'						
+							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile1.jpg"></center>'							
 							'Niko kisses your leg. "You were a bit wild. It was a side of you that I haven''t seen before and I liked it."' 
 							'"Really?" you reply. "Well, I guess I could try cutting loose a bit more often."'

locations/NikoDreams.qsrc

@@ -469,7 +469,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'friends':
 										gs 'stat'							
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/nightmares/friends/darkness.jpg"></center>'
 										'You fall to the ground and stare at your stomach, watching as an almost endless stream of cum pours out of you. You suddenly hear someone whisper in your ear. "Hey, are you alright?" You look around to see who it was, but see nothing at all. You''re surrounded by darkness. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Where did everyone go? Where am I? It''s so dark.'+$CloseInnerThought+' You hear the voice whisper again. "<<$pcs_firstname>>, wake up..."'
-										act '...':minut += 120 & gt 'NikoEv2', 'niko_wake'
+										act '...': gt 'NikoEv2', 'niko_wake'
 									end	
 								end	
 							end	

locations/NikoEv2.qsrc

@@ -219,8 +219,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Reward':
 												
 												act 'Enter Niko''s room':	
 													*clr & cla
-													minut += 10
-													gs 'stat'
+													gs 'sleep_simple', 'forced', 130
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/home/bedroom/laying.jpg"></center>'
 													'As you enter the room, Niko lays you down and climbs into the bed next to you, running his fingers through your hair while staring into your eyes. You feel incredibly lightheaded as your nerves have drained you of any focused thoughts. You close your eyes as you feel your energy slowly fading away...'
 													
@@ -241,11 +240,10 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'niko_wake':
 	*clr & cla
-	pcs_sleep += 20
 	NikoVolkovQW = 10
 	NikoEv = 12
-	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
+
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/charmer2.jpg"></center>'
 	'You open your eyes and see Niko with a concerned look on his face, his hand on your shoulder shaking you. "<<$pcs_firstname>>, are you alright? You looked like you were having an intense dream."' 
 	'You quickly look around the room and take several deep breaths as Niko gives you a kiss on the forehead. "I''m so worried about you. Are you alright?"'
@@ -504,7 +502,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat 2':
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/petia2.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You climb on top of Petia and feel his rock hard penis entering your vagina, the jolt of pleasure causing you to moan loudly. Petia moans with you, almost in perfect harmony, as you start riding his cock. He breathes heavily in your ear before his breath suddenly stops and he lets out a loud moan as he fills the condom, cumming almost immediately.'
+						'You climb on top of Petia and feel his rock-hard penis entering your vagina, the jolt of pleasure causing you to moan loudly. Petia moans with you, almost in perfect harmony, as you start riding his cock. He breathes heavily in your ear before his breath suddenly stops and he lets out a loud moan as he fills the condom, cumming almost immediately.'
 					
 						act 'Watch Petia cum':
 							*clr & cla

locations/NikoSlut.qsrc

@@ -352,7 +352,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 3':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/3/Ride1.jpg"></center>'
 			'You lightly push the man down on the toilet. "I want to ride that hard cock of yours."' 
 			'The man happily smiles. "Hell yeah! We can do that."' 
-			'You slowly approach and mount the man''s rock hard cock while keeping your ass to his face. You feel his dick slowly pushing its way inside you, causing a very gradual build of pleasure to fill your body as you start riding him at an increased pace.' 
+			'You slowly approach and mount the man''s rock-hard cock while keeping your ass to his face. You feel his dick slowly pushing its way inside you, causing a very gradual build of pleasure to fill your body as you start riding him at an increased pace.' 
 			'The man starts moaning as you ride him. "Damn girl, you''re so fucking hot!"'
 			
 

locations/Nudelake.qsrc

@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ if PCloswimwear = 1 or $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 		gs 'bras', 'wear', $lastwornbratype['swim'], lastwornbranumber['swim']
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/secluded_beach/dress/dress_nudebeach.jpg"></center>'
 		'You put your clothes back on.'
-		act'Continue':gt'Nudelake'
+		act 'Continue': gt'Nudelake'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -40,12 +40,12 @@ if temper >= 15 and month >= 5 and month <= 9 and hour >= 6 and hour <= 20:
 				'You want to change into a swimsuit, but with no changing room here and your pussy oozing juices down your leg, coupled with the thought that people will see, horrifies you. You abandon the idea.'
 				'"I should sort out my arousal first." you think to yourself.'
 
-				act'Continue':gt'Nudelake'
+				act 'Continue': gt'Nudelake'
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/secluded_beach/dress/swimsuit_nudebeach.jpg"></center>'
 				'You wrap a towel around yourself and you''re ready to change into your swimsuit.'
 
-				act'Choose outfit':gt'changingroom', 'view_swim_list'
+				act 'Choose outfit': gt'changingroom', 'view_swim_list'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ if temper >= 15 and month >= 5 and month <= 9 and hour >= 6 and hour <= 20:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/secluded_beach/self/shyness.jpg"></center>'
 				'Even though no one is around, you don''t feel confident enough to actually take your clothes off.'
 			end
-			act'Continue':gt'Nudelake'
+			act 'Continue': gt'Nudelake'
 		end
 	end
 

locations/Palatka.qsrc

@@ -22,9 +22,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	act 'Leave': gt 'Military', 'start'
 
 	act 'Sleep':
-		minut += 480
-		gs 'stat'
-		pcs_sleep = 100
+		gs 'sleep_simple', 'forced', 480
 		gt 'palatka', 'start'
 	end
 end

locations/ParkKafe.qsrc

@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'table':
 		if pk_rand = 1:'Observing the people while enjoying your meal you notice a <a href="exec:gt ''ParkKafe'', ''youth''">group</a> of younger people making noise.'
 		if pk_rand = 2:'Observing the people while enjoying your meal you notice a younger lonely <a href="exec:gt ''ParkKafe'', ''the_boy''">man</a> sitting by the table.'
 		if pk_rand = 3:'You are watching the world go by when you see some <a href="exec:gt ''ParkKafe'', ''blacks''">Africans</a>.'
-		if pk_rand = 4:'Observing the people while enjoying your meal you notice a <a href="exec:gt ''ParkKafe'', ''woman''">woman</a> who''ve just recieved her meal.'
+		if pk_rand = 4:'Observing the people while enjoying your meal you notice a <a href="exec:gt ''ParkKafe'', ''woman''">woman</a> who''ve just received her meal.'
 		if pk_rand = 5:'Observing the people while enjoying your meal you notice a middle-aged <a href="exec:gt ''ParkKafe'', ''man''">man</a> sitting and observing the people at the café.'
 		if pk_rand = 6:'Observing the people while enjoying your meal you notice a <a href="exec:gt ''ParkKafe'', ''seniors''">senior</a> walking back and forth outside the café.'
 		if pk_rand = 7:'Observing the people while enjoying your meal you notice two <a href="exec:gt ''ParkKafe'', ''guys''">sporty guys</a> sitting at a table and drinking beer.'
@@ -1117,7 +1117,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'the_boy':
 											'You pull down his pants and briefs then his cock pops out. It stands ready for you to play with. You look at him and lick your lips as you move in. You start playing with his head and he groans lightly as you keep on teasing him.'
 											*nl
 											'"Want me to keep teasing you?" you playfully ask him. The only response you get is his head shaking no as you grab hold of his shaft and start sucking him off. You bob your head front and back while savoring every moment. Gosha is also enjoying himself. He grabs the back of your head to slightly push you deeper and deeper.'
-											'"Don''t stop, <<$pcs_nickname>>..." you hear him panting as he says. He''s rock hard and you can feel that he''s ready to cum. You tease him a little more as you wrap your lips around him one last time. He explodes in your mouth.'
+											'"Don''t stop, <<$pcs_nickname>>..." you hear him panting as he says. He''s rock-hard and you can feel that he''s ready to cum. You tease him a little more as you wrap your lips around him one last time. He explodes in your mouth.'
 											gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'sub'
 											gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', '127', 1
 											gs 'stat'

locations/Prostitute.qsrc

@@ -520,7 +520,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work2':
 							if prostRand <= 50:
 								pose = 1
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/car/sexcar<<rand(1, 7)>>.jpg"></center>'
-								'You lean against the car and expose your bare ass to the man. He''s not wasting any time and immediately gets behind you, eagerly rubbing his cock against your vagina. The feeling of a rock hard erection rubbing on your pussy lips excites you. Your hips move involuntarily seeking out more friction. The man smiles at your eagerness to be fucked and grants your wish by slamming powerfully his hard member deep into your willing vagina. '
+								'You lean against the car and expose your bare ass to the man. He''s not wasting any time and immediately gets behind you, eagerly rubbing his cock against your vagina. The feeling of a rock-hard erection rubbing on your pussy lips excites you. Your hips move involuntarily seeking out more friction. The man smiles at your eagerness to be fucked and grants your wish by slamming powerfully his hard member deep into your willing vagina. '
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'prostitution', 'unknown'
 								gs 'stat'
 							elseif prostRand <= 75:

locations/SMS_schedules.qsrc

@@ -24,4 +24,4 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cikl':
 end
 
 
---- SMS_schedules ------------------------------------------
+--- SMS_schedules ---------------------------------

locations/Serge_Shulgin.qsrc

@@ -100,13 +100,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sleep':
 				cla
 				'You get comfortable in Sergey''s bed, and sleep for a few hours.'
 				npc_rel['A112'] += 1
-				minut += 240
-				if pcs_sleep >= 60: 
-					pcs_sleep = 100
-				else
-					pcs_sleep += 40
-				end
-				gs 'stat'
+				gs 'sleep_simple', 'forced', 240
 				act 'Get out of bed': gt 'vasilyhome', 'sergey_room'
 			end
 			if pcs_horny > 30 and mesec <= 0: act 'Try to seduce Sergey': gt 'Serge_Shulgin','hide','sleep_prstsex'

locations/Serge_kuh.qsrc

@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vodka':
 						act 'Continue':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/kuh/event/alko5.jpg"></center>'
-							'"My turn. <<$pcs_nickname>>, get on the table, I''ll return the favour now", Sergey grins.'
+							'"My turn. <<$pcs_nickname>>, get on the table, I''ll return the favor now", Sergey grins.'
 							'You''re not really sure what he means by that, but you''re not about to say no! You obediently sit down on the corner of the table, and pull up your legs. "Like this, uncle Sergey?" you ask him.'
 							'Sergey gives you a pleased nod: "Excellent. Now, let me help you with these..."'
 							'He begins to tug at your clothes, wanting easy access to your wet slit. "There we go... show me that young pussy and those cute tits of yours, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
@@ -1198,7 +1198,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'izdev13':
 									pcs_horny += 10
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/kuh/help/sex1-9.jpg"></center>'
 									'Sergey gives you a minute or two to catch your breath, holding perfectly still. He never pulls his cock out of you though; he''s not finished with you yet, and his posture is making it very clear that he''s not about to let you go.'
-									'He then helps you up from the table and lies down on it himself, his erection still pointing straight up in the air. "Ride me, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I made you feel good... now it''s time for you to return the favour", he grins.'
+									'He then helps you up from the table and lies down on it himself, his erection still pointing straight up in the air. "Ride me, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I made you feel good... now it''s time for you to return the favor", he grins.'
 									'You happily do as he says, and slowly lower yourself onto his cock after you climb on top of him. You have full control over the situation like this, and ride him eagerly. Sometimes increasing the pace and fucking him enthusiastically, sometimes slowing down to catch your breath and tease him at the same time.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 									gs 'stat'
@@ -1528,7 +1528,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'izn2':
 	'"Speak up, girl! Answer the question" he insists, pretending he didn''t hear you. You loudly repeat your answer, and Sergey grins: "Actually... why don''t we have a little chat about you? Sit down."'
 	'When you sit down at the table, Sergey begins to ask you all sorts of questions. Intimate questions! How long ago you''ve lost your virginity, how many partners you''ve had, your favourite position, whether you like anal sex, how often you masturbate...'
 	'You answer all his questions truthfully, without exaggerating. Sergey likes your answers and continues asking more and more. "Do you like sucking dick, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
-	'All these questions have really made you think about your sexuality... and you feel very turned on right now! Your pussy is wet, you feel a tingle in your lower abdomen, and your nipples are rock hard, poking through your clothes again.'
+	'All these questions have really made you think about your sexuality... and you feel very turned on right now! Your pussy is wet, you feel a tingle in your lower abdomen, and your nipples are rock-hard, poking through your clothes again.'
 	'Sergey notices you fidgeting in your chair and laughs: "You''re thinking about cock right now, aren''t you? Here, suck."'
 	'He pulls you down to the ground in front of him, and exposes his fully erect penis. Deciding you don''t need to get used to it slowly, he begins to fuck your throat right away.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'rough', 'deepthroat'

locations/Terminal.qsrc

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ $askfather = {
 				'You went to your father but forgot about the semen smeared on your face.'
 				'You tell him who you are and his eyes widen as rage builds within him.'
 				'"You fucking whore, Get fuck out of here, go back to your slut of a mother."'
-				'You feel very ashamed and realise looking for your father has been a terrible mistake as you have blown any hope of ever building a relationship with him.'
+				'You feel very ashamed and realize looking for your father has been a terrible mistake as you have blown any hope of ever building a relationship with him.'
 				trfatherQW = -1
 				act 'Leave':minut += 5 & gt 'Terminal'
 			else

locations/TerminalOffice.qsrc

@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 		'You talk with the Manager about buying small trinkets...'
 		
 		!Get current balances
-		TovarRepository1 = tovarL
+		TovarRepository1 = mc_inventory['trinkets_home']
 		if TovarRepository1 => TovarLimitRepository1:
 			'There is no more free space at home.'
 		else
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 		
 		if YouCanGar > 0:
 			!Get the current balances in the garage
-			TovarRepository2 = GarTorgItem
+			TovarRepository2 = mc_inventory['trinkets_garage']
 			if TovarRepository2 => TovarLimitRepository2:
 				'There is no space in the garage.'
 			else
@@ -139,18 +139,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 					
 					!First populate channelise 1
 					if MaxQuantityA => MaxQuantity1:
-						tovarL = TovarRepository1 + MaxQuantity1
+						mc_inventory['trinkets_home'] = TovarRepository1 + MaxQuantity1
 						MaxQuantityA -= MaxQuantity1
 						if YouCanGar > 0 : *P ', in t.h. <<MaxQuantity1>> PCs. storage room, garage <<MaxQuantityA>> PCs.'
 					else
 						if YouCanGar > 0 : *P ', in t.h. <<MaxQuantityA>> PCs. storage room, garage 0 PCs.'
-						tovarL = TovarRepository1 + MaxQuantityA
+						mc_inventory['trinkets_home'] = TovarRepository1 + MaxQuantityA
 						MaxQuantityA = 0
 					end
 					
 					!Now fill channelise 2
 					if MaxQuantityA > 0:
-						GarTorgItem = TovarRepository2 + MaxQuantityA
+						mc_inventory['trinkets_garage'] = TovarRepository2 + MaxQuantityA
 					end
 					
 					if YouCanGar = 0 and money > 100: 
@@ -191,18 +191,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 					
 					!First populate channelise 1
 					if MaxQuantityA => MaxQuantity1:
-						tovarL = TovarRepository1 + MaxQuantity1
+						mc_inventory['trinkets_home'] = TovarRepository1 + MaxQuantity1
 						MaxQuantityA -= MaxQuantity1
 						if YouCanGar > 0 : *P ', in t.h. <<MaxQuantity1>> PCs. storage room, garage <<MaxQuantityA>> PCs.'
 					else
 						if YouCanGar > 0 : *P ', in t.h. <<MaxQuantityA>> PCs. storage room, garage 0 PCs.'
-						tovarL = TovarRepository1 + MaxQuantityA
+						mc_inventory['trinkets_home'] = TovarRepository1 + MaxQuantityA
 						MaxQuantityA = 0
 					end
 					
 					!Now fill channelise 2
 					if MaxQuantityA > 0:
-						GarTorgItem = TovarRepository2 + MaxQuantityA
+						mc_inventory['trinkets_garage'] = TovarRepository2 + MaxQuantityA
 					end
 					
 					if YouCanGar = 0 and money > 100: 

locations/Vika.qsrc

@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'awake_actions':
 						minut += 60
 						npc_rel['A220'] += 5
 						$sexloc = 'uni_dorm'
-						gt'lezbsex','start'
+						gt 'lezbsex', 'start'
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Suggest you do something fun (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'

locations/Voltrener - WIP.qsrc

@@ -144,21 +144,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk':
 					'Spewing out a torrent of words, you rush out the door and slam it shut behind you.'
 					*nl
 					'<i>What were you thinking?</i>'
-					act'Continue':gt'gdksport','start'
+					act 'Continue': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 				end
 				
-				act'Follow him':gt'Voltrener','massage'
+				act 'Follow him': gt 'Voltrener', 'massage'
 			elseif vball['coach_lust'] >= 30:
 				'You see his gaze roam up and down your body and for a moment, you think he might be considering it before he suddenly looks away.'
 				'"No, you just need... rest. Don''t bother me right now <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
 				'He immediately turns back towards whatever he was working on on his desk.'
 				*nl
 				'<i>Tch. So close.</i>'
-				act'Continue':gt'gdksport','start'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 			else
 				'"No <<$pcs_lastname>>, you just need rest. Go home. Don''t bother me with this."'
 				'He doesn''t even give you another look as he continues looking at his stats.'
-				act'Continue':gt'gdksport','start'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 			end
 		elseif vball['coachsex'] >= 1:
 	end
@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage':
 				*nl
 				$orgasm_txt = 'Despite the fact that it''s just a massage you can''t help but be aroused. Arousal builds to excitement, and before you know it you find yourself quivering in orgasm, biting hard on your lip to keep from crying out. "Are you feeling okay <<$pcs_lastname>>? Something wrong?" You simply shake your head in response, not trusting yourself to speak.'
 				gs 'arousal','massage', 30
-				act'Finish':gt'Voltrener','massage_end'
+				act 'Finish': gt 'Voltrener', 'massage_end'
 			elseif vball['coach_massage'] <= 4:
 				'It''s just as good as last time. You groan in pleasure as the coach''s hands work through your sore muscles, gasping when he hits those perfect spots that can''t help but turn you on.'
 				*nl
@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage':
 				$orgasm_txt = 'Eventually you can''t take it anymore, and you find yourself climaxing under his touch. Even as every muscle in your body tenses up again, he doesn''t let up. "You''re <i>very</i> tight <<$pcs_lastname>>. You need to loosen up some more." Breathing slowly, you choose not to respond.'
 				gs 'arousal','massage', 25
 				gs 'arousal','foreplay', 5
-				act'Finish':gt'Voltrener','massage_end'
+				act 'Finish': gt 'Voltrener', 'massage_end'
 			elseif vball['coach_massage'] = 5:
 				'He''s starting to get bolder now.'
 				*nl
@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage':
 				$orgasm_txt = 'When your climax comes, you don''t even try to hide it. It starts as soft grunts before becoming loud moans and then a gasping cry as you cum hard, your clit fingered through your pants as you ride out your orgasm.'
 				gs 'arousal','massage', 15
 				gs 'arousal','foreplay', 15
-				act'Finish':gt'Voltrener','massage_end'
+				act 'Finish': gt 'Voltrener', 'massage_end'
 			else
 				'<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s hands roam your body freely and you moan in response to his touch. Half massage, half foreplay, you enjoy yourself while <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> enjoys your body. Sore muscles are worked loose and erogenous zones are teased and played with. Through one way or another, you find yourself supremely relaxed.'
 				*nl
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage':
 				$orgasm_txt = 'Under <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s magic touch, you find yourself gasping in orgasm in no time at all.'
 				gs 'arousal','massage', 15
 				gs 'arousal','foreplay', 15
-				act'Finish':gt'Voltrener','massage_end'
+				act 'Finish': gt 'Voltrener', 'massage_end'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage_end':
 		!! IMAGE LINK
 		'"Much better," you say, stretching your arms behind your back so your breasts push out against your top, heavily emphasizing your stiff nipples. "Thanks for the massage Coach."'
 		'"You''re welcome <<$pcs_lastname>>. Now hit the showers."'
-		act'Yes Coach':gt'gdksport','start'
+		act 'Yes Coach': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 		
 		act'Gonna join me?':
 			cla & *clr
@@ -276,7 +276,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage_end':
 				'"Nobody likes a tease, <<$pcs_lastname>>," he sighs.'
 				'"You know you love it," you say, slipping out the door.'
 			end
-			act'Continue':gt'gdksport','start'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 	
@@ -296,7 +296,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage_end':
 			'"Why not?"'
 			'"We just... can''t." He takes a further step away from you. "You need to go. Now."'
 			'You sigh in dejection, moving out the door without another word.'
-			act'Leave':gt'gdksport','start'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 		else
 			'"What are you doing <<$pcs_lastname>>?"'
 			act'Nothing':
@@ -308,7 +308,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage_end':
 				'"But-"'
 				'"<b>Out.</b>'
 				'You sigh in dejection, moving out the door without another word.'
-				act'Leave':gt'gdksport','start'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 			end
 			
 			act'Paying you back for your massage':
@@ -320,7 +320,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage_end':
 				'"But-"'
 				'"<b>Out.</b>'
 				'You sigh in dejection, moving out the door without another word.'
-				act'Leave':gt'gdksport','start'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 			end
 			
 			act'Seducing you':
@@ -339,9 +339,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage_end':
 					'"But-"'
 					'"OUT!"'
 					'Taken aback by his anger, you shrink away and leave his office. You can only hope this hasn''t damaged your relationship with him too much.'
-					act'Leave':gt'gdksport','start'
+					act 'Leave': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 				else
-					'Mikhail''s body tenses up but he doesn''t move. It gives you a great opportunity to feel his rock hard erection beneath his clothes.'
+					'Mikhail''s body tenses up but he doesn''t move. It gives you a great opportunity to feel his rock-hard erection beneath his clothes.'
 					'"I want you," you whisper under your breath. "Don''t you want me too?"'
 					'"I... This is..." He hesitates.'
 					act'Pull out his cock':
@@ -374,7 +374,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage_end':
 								'You quickly clean the cum up off the floor, wiping your hand with a tissue while you''re at it. Once that''s done, you move over to him and share one more kiss before quietly leaving his office.'
 								*nl
 								'<i>Maybe this will be the start of something else...</i>'
-								act'Leave':gt'gdksport','start'
+								act 'Leave': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 							end
 							
 							act'Lick your hand clean':
@@ -391,7 +391,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage_end':
 								'Finally, you move over to <<$npc_nickname[''A69'']>> and give him one more gentle kiss before departing his office.'
 								*nl
 								'<i>Maybe this will be the start of something else...</i>'
-								act'Leave':gt'gdksport','start'
+								act 'Leave': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 							end
 						end
 					end

locations/Voltrener.qsrc

@@ -193,11 +193,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk':
 							end
 						end
 					elseif fame['pav_slut'] > 200:
-						'You ask the coach about joining the team. The coach thinks for a minute, "Hey <<$pcs_lastname>>, I hear loads of rumours about you. Such as you being a <<$gnikname>>. Is this true?"'
+						'You ask the coach about joining the team. The coach thinks for a minute, "Hey <<$pcs_lastname>>, I hear loads of rumors about you. Such as you being a <<$gnikname>>. Is this true?"'
 						act 'It''s all lies':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/mikhail/volleytrener6.jpg"></center>'
-							'You tell him it''s not true and that some of the kids have been spreading false rumours about you.'
+							'You tell him it''s not true and that some of the kids have been spreading false rumors about you.'
 							'He doesn''t appear to be convinced, the only options are to go aggressive or drop it, for now.'
 							act 'Drop it': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 							gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'hard'

locations/VoltrenerSexShower.qsrc

@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '5':
 				act 'On your knees':
 					cls
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/sex/voltrenersexshower23.jpg"></center>'
-					'You drop to your knees and take a moment to admire Mikhail''s impressive, rock hard member. As it moves closer, you start to work your tongue, carefully licking first the head of the penis and then the whole thing, with determination burning in your eyes.'
+					'You drop to your knees and take a moment to admire Mikhail''s impressive, rock-hard member. As it moves closer, you start to work your tongue, carefully licking first the head of the penis and then the whole thing, with determination burning in your eyes.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Take it in your mouth':

locations/_attributes_cats_dress.qsrc

@@ -1404,10 +1404,9 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 207:
 	CloDress = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 208:
-!! Duplicate of Coco 210
 	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloSkirtShortness = 4
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 209:

locations/_attributes_cats_outfits.qsrc

@@ -688,10 +688,9 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 111:
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 112:
 	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 5
+	CloThinness = 3
 	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloPantsShortness = 5
-	CloStyle = 4
+	CloPantsShortness = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 113:
 	CloQuality = 3

locations/_attributes_fashionista_panties.qsrc

@@ -431,11 +431,12 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 57:
 	PanThinness = 2
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 58:
-	PanType = 1
+	PanType = 3
 	PanFun = 1
 	PanMaterial = 6
 	PanQuality = 3
 	PanThinness = 4
+	PanCoverBack = 4
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 59:
 	PanType = 1

locations/_attributes_gm_dress.qsrc

@@ -1557,9 +1557,9 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 217:
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 218:
 	CloQuality = 2
-	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 219:
 	CloQuality = 2

locations/_attributes_moncheri_bodysuit.qsrc

@@ -365,14 +365,13 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 32:
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 33:
 	BraType = 7
-	BraMaterial = 3
+	BraMaterial = 6
 	BraFun = 1
 	BraQuality = 6
-	BraThinness = 4
+	BraThinness = 3
 	BraCover = 3
 	PanThinness = 4
-	PanCoverFront = 3
-	PanCoverBack = 3
+	PanCoverBack = 2
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 34:
 	BraType = 7

locations/_attributes_moncheri_dress.qsrc

@@ -689,7 +689,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 89:
 	CloQuality = 6
 	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 2
 	CloDress = 1
 	CloStyle = 3
 

locations/_attributes_scandalicious_dress.qsrc

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ if ARGS[1] = 1:
 	CloDress = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 2:
-	CloQuality = 4
+	CloQuality = 3
 	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 3
 	CloSkirtShortness = 3

locations/_attributes_scandalicious_outfits.qsrc

@@ -145,9 +145,9 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 19:
 	CloStyle = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 20:
-	CloQuality = 5
+	CloQuality = 3
 	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloBra = 1
 	CloPantsShortness = 5
 	CloBimbo = 1
 	CloStyle = 4

locations/_attributes_school.qsrc

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 # $attributes_school
-!!2022/01/26
+!!2024/04/04
 !Quality range is usually 2-5.
 
 if ARGS[1] = 1:
@@ -10,14 +10,14 @@ if ARGS[1] = 1:
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 2:
-	CloQuality = 4
+	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 1
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 3
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 3:
-	CloQuality = 4
+	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 1
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 2
@@ -25,9 +25,9 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 3:
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 4:
 	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 1
+	CloThinness = 3
 	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 5:
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 11:
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 12:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 2
 	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 2
@@ -104,12 +104,12 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 15:
 	CloQuality = 3
 	CloThinness = 3
 	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
 	CloBimbo = 1
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 16:
-	CloQuality = 4
+	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 3
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 3
@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 17:
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 18:
 	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 4
 	CloStyle2 = 4
@@ -147,14 +147,14 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 21:
 	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 3
 	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 22:
 	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 2
+	CloThinness = 1
 	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 23:
@@ -189,12 +189,12 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 27:
 	CloQuality = 3
 	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 28:
 	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 2
+	CloThinness = 1
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 3
 	CloStyle2 = 4
@@ -208,14 +208,14 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 29:
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 30:
 	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 2
+	CloThinness = 1
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 2
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 31:
 	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 3
 	CloStyle2 = 4
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 32:
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 33:
-	CloQuality = 5
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 1
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 4
@@ -237,8 +237,8 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 33:
 elseif ARGS[1] = 34:
 	CloQuality = 3
 	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 35:
@@ -253,7 +253,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 36:
 	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 3
 	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 37:
@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 38:
 	CloQuality = 3
 	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 39:
@@ -280,7 +280,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 39:
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 40:
 	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 2
+	CloThinness = 3
 	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloSkirtShortness = 4
 	CloStyle2 = 4
@@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 41:
 	CloQuality = 3
 	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	CloBimbo = 1
 
@@ -308,7 +308,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 43:
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 44:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 2
 	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloSkirtShortness = 3
@@ -317,7 +317,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 44:
 elseif ARGS[1] = 45:
 	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 2
-	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 3
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	
@@ -338,7 +338,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 47:
 elseif ARGS[1] = 48:
 	CloQuality = 3
 	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 3
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	
@@ -352,29 +352,29 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 49:
 elseif ARGS[1] = 50:
 	CloQuality = 3
 	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 3
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 51:
 	CloQuality = 3
 	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 3
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 52:
 	CloQuality = 3
 	CloThinness = 2
-	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 4
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	CloStyle = 2
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 53:
 	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloThinness = 2
+	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 3
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	
@@ -388,7 +388,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 54:
 elseif ARGS[1] = 55:
 	CloQuality = 3
 	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 2
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	
@@ -402,7 +402,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 56:
 	CloStyle = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 57:
-	CloQuality = 5
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 3
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 3
@@ -430,7 +430,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 60:
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 61:
-	CloQuality = 4
+	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 1
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 3

locations/_face_image.qsrc

@@ -1,95 +1,301 @@
 # $face_image
 
-!!use with - <img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>">
-
-if player_avatar = 1:$RESULT = 'images/avatar.jpg' & exit
-
-!! These images are missing from my copy of the image folder, so I am commenting them out for now
-!!if glass = 2:
-!!	$RESULT = 'images/pc/body/hcolglass<<pcs_haircol>>.jpg'
-!!	exit
-!!end
-!!if glass = 1:
-!!	$RESULT = 'images/pc/body/nerd.jpg'
-!!	exit
-!!end
-!!if shorthair = 1:
-!!	$RESULT = 'images/pc/body/shcol<<pcs_haircol>>.jpg'
-!!	exit
-!!end
-
-
-$RESULT = 'images/pc/body/hairstyles/'
-
-if pcs_haircol > 3: 
-	$RESULT += 'colours'
-	jump 'skipsteps'
-end
+!!use with - <img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<func(''$face_image'')>>">
 
-!! length
-if pcs_hairlng > 400:
-	$RESULT += 'vlng'
-elseif pcs_hairlng > 260:
-	$RESULT += 'lng'
-elseif pcs_hairlng > 160:
-	$RESULT += 'medlo'
-elseif pcs_hairlng > 80:
-	$RESULT += 'med'
-elseif pcs_hairlng > 30:
-	$RESULT += 'short'
-else
-	$RESULT += 'vshort'
-end
-$RESULT += '/'
-
-!! style for medium or longer hair
-if pcs_hairlng > 80:
-	if hbraids > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'braids'
-	elseif hpigtail > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'pigtails'
-	elseif curly > 0 and hbangs > 0 and hpingripw > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'curly-bangs-buns'
-	elseif curly > 0 and hbangs > 0 and hscrunchw > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'curly-bangs-scrunch'
-	elseif curly > 0 and hbangs > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'curly-bangs'
-	elseif curly > 0 and hpingripw > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'curly-buns'
-	elseif curly > 0 and hscrunchw > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'curly-scrunch'
-	elseif hbangs > 0 and hpingripw > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'bangs-buns'
-	elseif hbangs > 0 and hscrunchw > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'bangs-scrunch'
-	elseif curly > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'curly'
-	elseif hbangs > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'bangs'
-	elseif hpingripw > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'buns'
-	elseif hscrunchw > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'scrunch'
+if face_style['type'] = 1:
+	if $face_style['avatar_path'] = '': $face_style['avatar_path'] = 'images/avatar.jpg'
+	$result = $face_style['avatar_path']
+
+elseif face_style['type'] = 2:
+	$result = 'images/pc/body/head/'
+
+		!!----------GLASSES----------
+	!! stylish
+	if glass >= 2:
+		$result += 'stylish/'
+	!! cheap
+	elseif glass = 1:
+	!!	$result += 'cheap/'	!! missing !! will load stylish !!
+		$result += 'stylish/'
+	!! none
+	else
+		$result += 'noglass/'
+	end
+
+	!!----------EYE COLOR----------
+	!! hazel
+	if pcs_eyecol = 0:
+	!!	$result += 'hazel/'	!! missing !! will load blue !!
+		$result += 'blue/'
+	!! grey
+	elseif pcs_eyecol = 1:
+	!!	$result += 'grey/'	!! missing !! will load blue !!
+		$result += 'blue/'
+	!! green
+	elseif pcs_eyecol = 2:
+		$result += 'green/'
+	!! blue
+	elseif pcs_eyecol = 3:
+		$result += 'blue/'
+	!! other
+	else
+	!!	$result += 'other/'	!! missing !! will load blue !!
+		$result += 'blue/'
+	end
+
+	!!----------HAIR COLOR----------
+	!! black
+	if pcs_haircol = 0:
+		$result += 'black/'
+	!! brunette
+	elseif pcs_haircol = 1:
+		$result += 'brunette/'
+	!! red
+	elseif pcs_haircol = 2:
+		$result += 'red/'
+	!! blonde
+	elseif pcs_haircol = 3:
+		$result += 'blonde/'
+	!! other
+	else
+	!!	$result += 'other'	!! missing !! will load brunette !!
+		$result += 'brunette/'
+	end
+
+	!!----------HAIR LENGTH----------
+	!! very long
+	if pcs_hairlng > 400:
+	!!	$result += 'very_long/'	!! missing !! will load long !!
+		$result += 'long/'
+	!! long
+	elseif pcs_hairlng > 260:
+		$result += 'long/'
+	!! medium long
+	elseif pcs_hairlng > 160:
+	!!	$result += 'medium_long/'	!! missing !! will load medium !!
+		$result += 'medium/'
+	!! medium
+	elseif pcs_hairlng > 80:
+		$result += 'medium/'
+	!! short
+	elseif pcs_hairlng > 30:
+		$result += 'short/'
+	!! very short
+	else
+		$result += 'very_short/'
+	end
+
+	!!----------HAIR STYLE----------
+	!! messy/tangled
+	if pcs_hairbsh <= 0:
+		$result += 'messy/'
+	!! braids
+	elseif pcs_hairlng > 80:
+		if hbraids > 0:
+			$result += 'braids/'
+		!! pigtails
+		elseif hpigtail > 0:
+			$result += 'pigtails/'
+		!! curly-bangs-buns
+		elseif curly > 0 and hbangs > 0 and hpingripw > 0:
+		!!	$result += 'curly-bangs-buns/'	!! missing !! will load curly !!
+			$result += 'curly/'
+		!! curly-bangs-scrunch
+		elseif curly > 0 and hbangs > 0 and hscrunchw > 0:
+		!!	$result += 'curly-bangs-scrunch/'	!! missing !! will load curly !!
+			$result += 'curly/'
+		!! curly-bangs
+		elseif curly > 0 and hbangs > 0:
+		!!	$result += 'curly-bangs/'	!! missing !! will load curly !!
+			$result += 'curly/'
+		!! curly-buns
+		elseif curly > 0 and hpingripw > 0:
+		!!	$result += 'curly-buns/'	!! missing !! will load curly !!
+			$result += 'curly/'
+		!! curly-scrunch
+		elseif curly > 0 and hscrunchw > 0:
+		!!	$result += 'curly-scrunch/'	!! missing !! will load curly !!
+			$result += 'curly/'
+		!! bangs-buns
+		elseif hbangs > 0 and hpingripw > 0:
+		!!	$result += 'bangs-buns/'	!! missing !! will load bangs !!
+			$result += 'bangs/'
+		!! bangs-scrunch
+		elseif hbangs > 0 and hscrunchw > 0:
+		!!	$result += 'bangs-scrunch/'	!! missing !! will load bangs !!
+			$result += 'bangs/'
+		!! curly
+		elseif curly > 0:
+			$result += 'curly/'
+		!! bangs
+		elseif hbangs > 0:
+			$result += 'bangs/'
+		!! buns (updo)
+		elseif hpingripw > 0:
+			$result += 'buns/'
+		!! scrunch (ponytail)
+		elseif hscrunchw > 0:
+			$result += 'scrunch/'
+		!! normal
+		else
+			$result += 'normal/'
+		end
+	elseif pcs_hairlng > 30:
+		if hbangs > 0:
+			$result += 'bangs/'
+		elseif curly > 0:
+			$result += 'curly/'
+		else
+			$result += 'normal/'
+		end
 	else
-		$RESULT += 'normal'
+		$result += 'normal/'
 	end
-!! style for short hair (other images don''t exist)
-elseif pcs_hairlng <= 80 and pcs_hairlng > 30:
-	if hbangs > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'bangs'
+
+	!!----------MAKEUP----------
+	!! none
+	if pcs_makeup = 1:
+		$result += 'no_makeup_'
+	!! light
+	elseif pcs_makeup = 2:
+	!!	$result += 'light_'	!! missing !! will load vibrant !!
+		$result += 'vibrant_'
+	!! vibrant
+	elseif pcs_makeup = 3:
+		$result += 'vibrant_'
+	!! heavy
+	elseif pcs_makeup = 4:
+	!!	$result += 'heavy_'	!! missing !! will load vibrant !!
+		$result += 'vibrant_'
+	!! professional
+	elseif pcs_makeup = 5:
+	!!	$result += 'prof_'	!! missing !! will load vibrant !!
+		$result += 'vibrant_'
+	!! bimbo
+	elseif pcs_makeup = 6:
+	!!	$result += 'bimbo_'	!! missing !! will load vibrant !!
+		$result += 'vibrant_'
+	!! smeared
 	else
-		$RESULT += 'normal'
+		$result += 'smeared_'
 	end
-!! style for very short hair (other images don''t exist)
+
+	!!----------CUM----------
+	if cumloc[11] = 1:
+		!! enormous
+		if cumvol[11] > 250:
+		!!	$result += 'enormous'	!! missing !! will load decent !!
+			$result += 'decent'
+		!! huge
+		elseif cumvol[11] > 100:
+		!!	$result += 'huge'	!! missing !! will load decent !!
+			$result += 'decent'
+		!! decent
+		elseif cumvol[11] >= 20:
+			$result += 'decent'
+		!! small
+		else
+		!!	$result += 'small'	!! missing !! will load decent !!
+			$result += 'decent'
+		end
+	!! none
+	else
+		$result += 'no_cum'
+	end
+
+	$result += '.jpg'
+
 else
-	$RESULT += 'normal'
+	!! These images are missing from my copy of the image folder, so I am commenting them out for now
+	!!if glass = 2:
+	!!	$result = 'images/pc/body/hcolglass<<pcs_haircol>>.jpg'
+	!!	exit
+	!!end
+	!!if glass = 1:
+	!!	$result = 'images/pc/body/nerd.jpg'
+	!!	exit
+	!!end
+	!!if shorthair = 1:
+	!!	$result = 'images/pc/body/shcol<<pcs_haircol>>.jpg'
+	!!	exit
+	!!end
+
+	$result = 'images/pc/body/hairstyles/'
+
+	if pcs_haircol > 3:
+		$result += 'colours'
+		jump 'skipsteps'
+	end
+
+	!! length
+	if pcs_hairlng > 400:
+		$result += 'vlng'
+	elseif pcs_hairlng > 260:
+		$result += 'lng'
+	elseif pcs_hairlng > 160:
+		$result += 'medlo'
+	elseif pcs_hairlng > 80:
+		$result += 'med'
+	elseif pcs_hairlng > 30:
+		$result += 'short'
+	else
+		$result += 'vshort'
+	end
+	$result += '/'
+
+	!! style for medium or longer hair
+	if pcs_hairlng > 80:
+		if hbraids > 0:
+			$result += 'braids'
+		elseif hpigtail > 0:
+			$result += 'pigtails'
+		elseif curly > 0 and hbangs > 0 and hpingripw > 0:
+			$result += 'curly-bangs-buns'
+		elseif curly > 0 and hbangs > 0 and hscrunchw > 0:
+			$result += 'curly-bangs-scrunch'
+		elseif curly > 0 and hbangs > 0:
+			$result += 'curly-bangs'
+		elseif curly > 0 and hpingripw > 0:
+			$result += 'curly-buns'
+		elseif curly > 0 and hscrunchw > 0:
+			$result += 'curly-scrunch'
+		elseif hbangs > 0 and hpingripw > 0:
+			$result += 'bangs-buns'
+		elseif hbangs > 0 and hscrunchw > 0:
+			$result += 'bangs-scrunch'
+		elseif curly > 0:
+			$result += 'curly'
+		elseif hbangs > 0:
+			$result += 'bangs'
+		elseif hpingripw > 0:
+			$result += 'buns'
+		elseif hscrunchw > 0:
+			$result += 'scrunch'
+		else
+			$result += 'normal'
+		end
+	!! style for short hair (other images don''t exist)
+	elseif pcs_hairlng > 30:
+		if hbangs > 0:
+			$result += 'bangs'
+		elseif curly > 0:
+			$result += 'curly'
+		else
+			$result += 'normal'
+		end
+	!! style for very short hair (other images don''t exist)
+	else
+		$result += 'normal'
+	end
+
+	:skipsteps
+	$result += '/'
+
+	!! color
+	$result += 'hcol<<pcs_haircol>>.jpg'
 end
 
-:skipsteps
-$RESULT += '/'
 
-!! color
-$RESULT += 'hcol<<pcs_haircol>>.jpg'
 
 --- $face_image ---------------------------------
 

locations/abduction.qsrc

@@ -470,9 +470,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdSleep':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
-	minut += 240
-	pcs_sleep += 50
-	gs 'stat'
+	gs 'sleep_simple', 'forced', 240
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/bed1.jpg"></center>'
 	'You''ve slept for several hours, but nightmares have awakened you.'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abduction', 'abdRoom'

locations/abductionCustomer.qsrc

@@ -391,12 +391,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin8':
 	act 'Lie down':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-virgin9'
 end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin9':
-	minut += 480
-	pcs_sleep += 70
+	gs 'sleep_simple', 'forced', 480
+
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorevirgin9.jpg"></center>'
 	'Your hands still bound, you are thrown on your bed and are once again chained to the wall.'
 	'Your master leaves and you are left lying on the bed, your pussy still plugged by the <<dick>> cm long <<$dick_girth>> dildo.'
-	gs 'stat'
+
 	act 'Try to rest':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-virgin10'
 end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin10':
@@ -404,7 +404,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin10':
 	pcs_mood = 5
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorevirgin10.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'The sound of your master coming downstairs wakes you up. You must have fallen asleep from the exhaustion.'
-    '"Kneel and get that ass in the air, slut."'
+	'"Kneel and get that ass in the air, slut."'
 	*nl
 	'You''re so desperate that you don''t even think about not doing what he orders you. You just stick your ass as high as possible.'
 	'It points so he has good access to both your ass and your ruthlessly plugged, deflowered pussy.'
@@ -776,7 +776,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-fuckAnalDeep':
 		*nl
 	end
 	'With every thrust of his dick deep inside your intestines, you feel as if it''s your very stomach being poked by it.'
-    *nl
+	*nl
 	if buyout = 1:
 		'After about a half an hour of deep anal banging, <<$bName>> is about to cum.'
 	else

locations/act_extras1.qsrc

@@ -13,15 +13,15 @@
 
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'setup':
-	if $acting['role'] = 'Background Shower Girl':gt'act_extras1','back_shower'
-	if $acting['role'] = 'Spring Break Flasher':gt'act_extras1','car_flash'
-	if $acting['role'] = 'Valya Zakharovna aka Corpse Girl':gt'act_extras1','cadaver'
-	if $acting['role'] = 'Dildo Girl':gt'act_extras1','cucumber'
-	if $acting['role'] = 'Naked Locker Girl':gt'act_extras1','lockertits1'
-	if $acting['role'] = 'Undressing Locker Girl':gt'act_extras1','lockertits2'
-	if $acting['role'] = 'Modest Cheerleader' or $acting['role'] = 'Underwear Cheerleader' or $acting['role'] = 'Topless Cheerleader 3':gt'act_extras1','lockertits3'
-	if $acting['role'] = 'Hot Shower Girl':gt'act_extras1','showertits'
-	if $acting['role'] = 'Werewolf Victim':gt'act_extras1','werewolf'
+	if $acting['role'] = 'Background Shower Girl':gt 'act_extras1', 'back_shower'
+	if $acting['role'] = 'Spring Break Flasher':gt 'act_extras1', 'car_flash'
+	if $acting['role'] = 'Valya Zakharovna aka Corpse Girl':gt 'act_extras1', 'cadaver'
+	if $acting['role'] = 'Dildo Girl':gt 'act_extras1', 'cucumber'
+	if $acting['role'] = 'Naked Locker Girl':gt 'act_extras1', 'lockertits1'
+	if $acting['role'] = 'Undressing Locker Girl':gt 'act_extras1', 'lockertits2'
+	if $acting['role'] = 'Modest Cheerleader' or $acting['role'] = 'Underwear Cheerleader' or $acting['role'] = 'Topless Cheerleader 3':gt 'act_extras1', 'lockertits3'
+	if $acting['role'] = 'Hot Shower Girl':gt 'act_extras1', 'showertits'
+	if $acting['role'] = 'Werewolf Victim':gt 'act_extras1', 'werewolf'
 end
 
 !! EXTRAS
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'back_shower':
 		actress['pay'] += 1
 		acting['jobdone'] = 1
 		actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-		act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+		act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -56,11 +56,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'car_flash':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/extra/car_flash.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'Filming starts and you follow the director''s instructions of flirting, taunting, and teasing while playing with your boobs before pulling up your top to <i>really</i> shake them for the camera and give your best party girl "Woooooo!"'
 		*nl
-		'You do a few takes for variation, a few in the wide, a few close up, and a few just mixing up your movements to see what looks good before the shoot is finished. All in all, the camera wasn''t filming for very long but the setup for the stage and the equipment pushed the time to about 40 minutes. But with that done, you''re free to leave the set and collect your pay.'
+		'You do a few takes for variation, a few in the wide, a few close-up, and a few just mixing up your movements to see what looks good before the shoot is finished. All in all, the camera wasn''t filming for very long but the setup for the stage and the equipment pushed the time to about 40 minutes. But with that done, you''re free to leave the set and collect your pay.'
 		actress['pay'] += 1
 		acting['jobdone'] = 1
 		actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-		act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+		act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cadaver':
 								actress['pay'] += 1
 								acting['jobdone'] = 1
 								actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-								act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+								act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cucumber':
 	actress['pay'] += 1
 	acting['jobdone'] = 1
 	actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-	act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+	act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits1':
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits1':
 	actress['pay'] += 1
 	acting['jobdone'] = 1
 	actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-	act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+	act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits2':
@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits2':
 	actress['pay'] += 1
 	acting['jobdone'] = 1
 	actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-	act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+	act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits3':
@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits3':
 	'Even with only one take, due to the need for organization and setup, the whole process takes about 20 minutes, but after that you''re done and can collect your pay.'
 	actress['pay'] += 1
 	acting['jobdone'] = 1
-	act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+	act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 end
 
 
@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertits':
 	actress['pay'] += 1
 	acting['jobdone'] = 1
 	actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-	act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+	act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'werewolf':
@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'werewolf':
 		actress['pay'] += 1
 		acting['jobdone'] = 1
 		actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-		act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+		act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 	end
 end
 

locations/act_extras3.qsrc

@@ -13,15 +13,15 @@
 
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'setup':
-	if $role = 'Background Shower Girl':gt'act_extras3','back_shower'
-	if $role = 'Spring Break Flasher':gt'act_extras3','car_flash'
-	if $role = 'Valya Zakharovna aka Corpse Girl':gt'act_extras3','cadaver'
-	if $role = 'Dildo Girl':gt'act_extras3','cucumber'
-	if $role = 'Naked Locker Girl':gt'act_extras3','lockertits1'
-	if $role = 'Undressing Locker Girl':gt'act_extras3','lockertits2'
-	if $role = 'Modest Cheerleader' or $role = 'Underwear Cheerleader' or $role = 'Topless Cheerleader 3':gt'act_extras3','lockertits3'
-	if $role = 'Hot Shower Girl':gt'act_extras3','showertits'
-	if $role = 'Werewolf Victim':gt'act_extras3','werewolf'
+	if $role = 'Background Shower Girl':gt 'act_extras3', 'back_shower'
+	if $role = 'Spring Break Flasher':gt 'act_extras3', 'car_flash'
+	if $role = 'Valya Zakharovna aka Corpse Girl':gt 'act_extras3', 'cadaver'
+	if $role = 'Dildo Girl':gt 'act_extras3', 'cucumber'
+	if $role = 'Naked Locker Girl':gt 'act_extras3', 'lockertits1'
+	if $role = 'Undressing Locker Girl':gt 'act_extras3', 'lockertits2'
+	if $role = 'Modest Cheerleader' or $role = 'Underwear Cheerleader' or $role = 'Topless Cheerleader 3':gt 'act_extras3', 'lockertits3'
+	if $role = 'Hot Shower Girl':gt 'act_extras3', 'showertits'
+	if $role = 'Werewolf Victim':gt 'act_extras3', 'werewolf'
 end
 
 !! EXTRAS
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'back_shower':
 		actress['pay'] += 1
 		acting['jobdone'] = 1
 		actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-		act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+		act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'car_flash':
 		actress['pay'] += 1
 		acting['jobdone'] = 1
 		actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-		act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+		act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cadaver':
 								actress['pay'] += 1
 								acting['jobdone'] = 1
 								actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-								act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+								act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cucumber':
 	actress['pay'] += 1
 	acting['jobdone'] = 1
 	actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-	act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+	act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits1':
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits1':
 	actress['pay'] += 1
 	acting['jobdone'] = 1
 	actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-	act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+	act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits2':
@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits2':
 	actress['pay'] += 1
 	acting['jobdone'] = 1
 	actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-	act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+	act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits3':
@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits3':
 	'Even with only one take, due to the need for organization and setup, the whole process takes about 20 minutes, but after that you''re done and can collect your pay.'
 	actress['pay'] += 1
 	acting['jobdone'] = 1
-	act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+	act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 end
 
 
@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertits':
 	actress['pay'] += 1
 	acting['jobdone'] = 1
 	actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-	act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+	act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'werewolf':
@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'werewolf':
 		actress['pay'] += 1
 		acting['jobdone'] = 1
 		actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-		act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+		act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 	end
 end
 

locations/act_main1.qsrc

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gen_nude1':
 	'You film a nude sex scene with another actor but for some reason the logistics of it all are taking forever. They''ve had you laying naked on this bed for 20 minutes and every time you think they''re about to start something else comes up.'
 	*nl
 	'You spend another 20 minutes more laying on that bed, bored out of your mind while you wait for this scene to actually get filmed.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 !! ----------------------  Generic nude sex scenes for random inserts ---------------------------------------
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gen_nudesex1':
 	'You film a nude sex scene with another actor but for some reason the logistics of it all are taking forever. They''ve had you laying naked on this bed for 20 minutes and every time you think they''re about to start something else comes up.'
 	*nl
 	'You spend another 20 minutes more laying on that bed, bored out of your mind while you wait for this scene to actually get filmed.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 !! ----------------------  Generic dialogue scenes for random inserts ---------------------------------------
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gen_dialogue1':
 	'You film a "morning after" scene with somebody. After going through all the boring dialogue, you end with the comedic one liner.'
 	'"Where''s my buttplug?"'
 	'And the director calls cut.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'gen_dialogue2':
@@ -46,22 +46,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gen_dialogue2':
 	'You film a scene about you and a bunch of other characters playing games <i>wayyyyy</i> too competitively.'
 	'"It''s a sock asshole!" you say as you pitch a pen into another actor.'
 	'It takes a little while, but eventually the scene wraps up and you go to break.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'gen_dialogue3':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/generic/dialogue/3.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You film a scene with your character''s weird and quirky friend. Most of the scene is you just being there and keeping a straight face while your counterpart does some <i>really</i> weird gestures.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 !! ----------------------  Generic miscellaneous scenes for random inserts ---------------------------------------
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'gen_misc1':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/generic/misc/1.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You film a raunchy scene of your character participating in a drinking contest. The scene involves spilling a very large amount of beer down the front of your rather thin top. By the end of the scene your tits are soaked, sticky, and absolutely freezing in the cold air conditioning of the set. Which you''re sure must be on purpose because your nipples are rock hard and visible through your top as well. It''s like they say, sex sells.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	'You film a raunchy scene of your character participating in a drinking contest. The scene involves spilling a very large amount of beer down the front of your rather thin top. By the end of the scene, your tits are soaked, sticky, and absolutely freezing in the cold air conditioning of the set. Which you''re sure must be on purpose because your nipples are rock-hard and visible through your top as well. It''s like they say, sex sells.'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 !! ----------------------  Generic underwear scenes for random inserts ---------------------------------------
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gen_underwear1':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/generic/underwear/1.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You film a scene with your character seeming to be down and on hard times, too lazy to do anything in her apartment except drink beer or put on clothes.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 
@@ -79,21 +79,21 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_Start':
 	if act_unashamed['scenes'] = 0:
-		gt'act_main1','Unashamed_Intro'
+		gt 'act_main1', 'Unashamed_Intro'
 	elseif acting['scenetype'] = 'nude_sex':
-		gt'act_main1','nude_sex<<rand(1,10)>>'
+		gt 'act_main1', 'nude_sex<<rand(1,10)>>'
 	elseif acting['scenetype'] = 'nude':
-		gt'act_main1','nude<<rand(1,10)>>'
+		gt 'act_main1', 'nude<<rand(1,10)>>'
 	elseif acting['scenetype'] = 'clothed_sex':
-		gt'act_main1','clothed_sex<<rand(1,10)>>'
+		gt 'act_main1', 'clothed_sex<<rand(1,10)>>'
 	elseif acting['scenetype'] = 'dialogue':
-		gt'act_main1','dialogue<<rand(1,10)>>'
+		gt 'act_main1', 'dialogue<<rand(1,10)>>'
 	elseif acting['scenetype'] = 'misc':
-		gt'act_main1','misc<<rand(1,10)>>'
+		gt 'act_main1', 'misc<<rand(1,10)>>'
 	elseif acting['scenetype'] = 'underwear':
-		gt'act_main1','underwear<<rand(1,10)>>'
+		gt 'act_main1', 'underwear<<rand(1,10)>>'
 	elseif acting['scenetype'] = 'swimsuit':
-		gt'act_main1','swimsuit<<rand(1,10)>>'
+		gt 'act_main1', 'swimsuit<<rand(1,10)>>'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_Intro':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/set1.jpg"></center>'
 					'The director calls cut as you finish up your first take. You spend a while longer cleaning up the bits that needed correction or the director wanted to tweak before going to the break.'
-					act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+					act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude1':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/unashamed/nude/1.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You film a topless after sex scene with flirty dialogue between you and one of this season''s love interests.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude2':
 	'"Oh, fuck that!" you say, jumping out of the shower and grabbing a towel.'
 	'"What? Is this really such a big deal?"'
 	'"Yes! Are you fucking kidding me?!"'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 
@@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude3':
 		'"Shit. Well, if I can help at all, you''ll let me know right? Cause you like me, don''t you?"'
 		'You snicker back at Vitaly and reach down to take a big grab of his ass.'
 		'"Oh please, you know I only like you for your sweet fuckable ass." The line is delivered with clear sarcasm to show you''re just teasing, but also avoids the implied question the character was really asking about. "Anyways, I gotta go. I have to pick up my sister from school," you say, getting up to end the scene.'
-		act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+		act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude4':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/unashamed/nude/4.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You film a topless after sex scene with flirty dialogue between you and one of this season''s love interests.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 !! ----------------------  "Unashamed" nude sex scenes ---------------------------------------
@@ -218,26 +218,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude_sex1':
 						cla & *clr
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/unashamed/nude_sex/1_5.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'Once back in position, you spend several more takes dry humping against each other until the director calls cut and finishes the scene.'
-						act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+						act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 					end
 				end
 			end
 		end
 	else
-		gs'arousal','vag',2
+		gs 'arousal', 'vag',2
 		'The director calls action and you and Vitaly fall forward onto the bedpost. His dick is deep inside your pussy, the real thing being better than any kind of simulation you could do otherwise. You your ass back towards him and focus on the sensation of him thrusting in and out of you, using your real arousal to maintain a lusty expression. You continue through several camera angles until someone knocks on the door of the set and you both turn towards the sound.'
 		'"What?" Vitaly calls out.'
 		'"Is Yulya in there?" someone says from the other side of the door.'
 		act'Keep filming':
 			cla & *clr
-			gs'arousal','vag',2
+			gs 'arousal', 'vag',2
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/unashamed/nude_sex/1_2.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'You shake your head to signal him to deny it.'
 			'"No!" he calls back.'
 			'"Bullshit! Tell her I''m not fucking leaving till she faces me!"'
 			act'Keep filming':
 				cla & *clr
-				gs'arousal','vag',2
+				gs 'arousal', 'vag',2
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/unashamed/nude_sex/1_3.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'"Ugh, turns out lesbians are <i>super</i> possessive" you say, continuing the scene.'
 				'"I fucking love you Yulya! I fucking love you you bitch!" You lean back, pulling the sheet with you to give crotch coverage and sit back on Vitaly''s cock. It''s actually a terribly awkward position and you have to work hard to not accidentally bend his dick in half even as it hits uncomfortable angles inside you. Though useful before, the real sex is proving to be distracting.'
@@ -245,7 +245,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude_sex1':
 				'"So what do you want to do? Cause I have to pick up my brother in a few minutes."'
 				act'Keep filming':
 					cla & *clr
-					gs'arousal','vag',2
+					gs 'arousal', 'vag',2
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/unashamed/nude_sex/1_4.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'"Yulya! Come out here and face me!"'
 					'You turn back towards Vitaly. "I''ll let you borrow my car if I can hide under your bed?"'
@@ -253,10 +253,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude_sex1':
 					'"Hang on, I haven''t cum yet," and you lean forward and let him re-mount you, his cock in a much more comfortable position than it was before.'
 					act'Keep filming':
 						cla & *clr
-						gs'arousal','vag',5
+						gs 'arousal', 'vag',5
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/unashamed/nude_sex/1_5.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'You spend several more minutes worth of takes fucking each other until the director calls cut and finishes the scene.'
-						act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+						act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -279,7 +279,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude_sex2':
 		'The next shot is a hard cut of you and Vitaly flopping down on your bed.'
 		'"Oh my god, that was incredible. Are you normally this good? What made this time so different?"'
 		'"..."'
-		act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+		act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -296,7 +296,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude_sex3':
 		if acting['realsex'] = 0:
 			'He''s not actually licking your pussy but you can feel his breath on your clit and it''s <i>very</i> irritating. Your hand didn''t go down because you were acting, you were trying to stop from squirming too much and ruin the shot. It''s like something tickling your face during a haircut. You just want to stop and scratch the itch but now isn''t the time or place.'
 		else
-			gs'arousal','cuni',10
+			gs 'arousal', 'cuni',10
 			'Even while you were filming the close up shot, this extra has been steadily licking your pussy and for fuck''s sake he''s really good at it and it''s fucking distracting! When your hand went down to grab the sheets earlier, that wasn''t acting, that was an involuntary reaction. But you guess that''s kind of the whole point of this scene isn''t it?'
  		end
  		'Someone calls out the next line of what the person on the other end of the phone is supposed to be saying.'
@@ -313,7 +313,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude_sex3':
 				'"Yeah alright well you''re off the hook but I need you for dinner."'
 				'"SURE!" you say a little louder than you were planning to as the extra blows on you again. "OKay, I''ll sEe you later!"'
 			else
-				gs'arousal','cuni',10
+				gs 'arousal', 'cuni',10
 				'You gasp as you feel the extra tease your clit with his tongue but somehow barely manage to keep focused on the next line. You smack him on the head instinctively to try get him to slow down.'
 				'"No no! I can! I can! I--just thought if it wasn''t busy-?"'
 				'"Yeah alright well you''re off the hook but I need you for dinner."'
@@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude_sex3':
 					'You feel exhausted and on edge at the same time, being kept in orgasm denial for the better part of 20 minutes now. You really need to cum. Maybe you have time to rub one out during the break or something.'
 				end
 				gs'stat'
-				act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+				act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -354,7 +354,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude_sex4':
 		'You pretend to deal with it for a few seconds longer until you slap him away.'
 		'"Stop! Stop! No, nope. Nice fucking you but I''m going. Can''t deal with it, see you later."'
 		'You finish up the more boring parts of the scene and soon enough it''s time for a break.'
-		act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+		act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude_sex5':
 			'"That doesn''t count and you know it Yulya. We fucked in the bathroom that night too unless you were too drunk to remember it."'
 			'"Oh for fuck''s sake! Just hurry up and cum already, I can''t deal with this today."'
 			'The argument continues until Vitaly "cums" and you get dressed and leave in a rush. The scene ends with Vitaly looking dejected and unsatisfied alone in the room.'
-			act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+			act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 		end
 	end
 	
@@ -422,7 +422,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_incest1':
 	'You strip off your robe revealing your naked body underneath. You walk away, calling back, "You coming?"'
 	'Misha debates with himself staring forward while the camera maintains visual of your ass in the background.'
 	'"Fuck. On one hand she''s my sister. I could get in serious trouble for this." Then he nods his head to the side in concession. "Fuck it, my dick''s not getting any softer," and then follows you up the stairs.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_incest2':
@@ -446,7 +446,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_incest2':
 		*nl
 		'The irony of this scene and how you''ve fucked your brother in real life is not at all lost on you.'
 	end
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 !! ----------------------  "Unashamed" dialogue scenes ---------------------------------------
@@ -460,7 +460,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dialogue1':
 	else
 		'Your performance overall is alright, the frustration and emotion of the character showing through but the director wanted some more evocative visuals in the scene and has makeup put some fake tear eyedrops in. You hold them carefully in your eyes, trying not to blink until action is called and the scene is filmed. The scene is finished shortly and the director calls break while they set up the next scene.'
 	end
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dialogue2':
@@ -472,7 +472,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dialogue2':
 	else
 		'Your performance overall is alright, the frustration and emotion of the character showing through but the director wanted some more evocative visuals in the scene and has makeup put some fake tear eyedrops in. You hold them carefully in your eyes, trying not to blink until action is called and the scene is filmed. The scene is finished shortly and the director calls break while they set up the next scene.'
 	end
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dialogue3':
@@ -484,7 +484,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dialogue3':
 	else
 		'Your performance overall is alright, the frustration and emotion of the character showing through but the director wanted some more evocative visuals in the scene and has makeup put some fake tear eyedrops in. You hold them carefully in your eyes, trying not to blink until action is called and the scene is filmed. The scene is finished shortly and the director calls break while they set up the next scene.'
 	end
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dialogue4':
@@ -496,7 +496,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dialogue4':
 	else
 		'Your performance overall is alright, the frustration and emotion of the character showing through but the director wanted some more evocative visuals in the scene and has makeup put some fake tear eyedrops in. You hold them carefully in your eyes, trying not to blink until action is called and the scene is filmed. The scene is finished shortly and the director calls break while they set up the next scene.'
 	end
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 
@@ -508,7 +508,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'misc1':
 	'You film a scene where your character fingerblasts her friend in the middle of a sauna, looking bored out of her mind.'
 	*nl
 	'Given all the other lascivious scenes in this show, you''d think that a scene like this would be for sex appeal but the tone you get from the director makes it seem like it''s going to be played for laughs instead.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'misc2':
@@ -517,14 +517,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'misc2':
 	'You film a scene where you go for coffee with a friend and end up breaking down crying in front of her as you confess confused feelings over your fuck buddy Vitaly. You have feelings for him, you don''t, he''s just a good friend, no you want something more, it''s just about the sex, but then why do you want to be with him all the time, this and that and everything else. As you stop to breathe your friend decides to console you by initiating a kiss. You get drawn further and further into it until the scene ends with just a few more lines of dialogue.'
 	'"Feel better?"'
 	'"Oh just pay the bill and let''s just get to your place already, I''m completely soaked."'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'misc3':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/unashamed/misc/3.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You film a scene where you and the rest of your character''s family are rushing off to deal with the crisis of the episode.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 

locations/act_minor1.qsrc

@@ -12,12 +12,12 @@
 !! roletype = 9 - A main character with nude scenes
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'setup':
-	if $role = 'Slutty Club Girl':gt'act_minor1','club_flash'
+	if $role = 'Slutty Club Girl':gt 'act_minor1', 'club_flash'
 	if $role = 'Diner Waitress':
 		if costuming['check'] = 1:
-			gt'act_minor1','diner_waitress1'
+			gt 'act_minor1', 'diner_waitress1'
 		elseif costuming['check'] = 1:
-			gt'act_minor1','diner_waitress2'
+			gt 'act_minor1', 'diner_waitress2'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'club_flash':
 								actress['nude_scene'] += 1
 								actress['minor_role'] += 1
 								!! insert payment and reset stuff
-								act'Leave':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+								act 'Leave': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'diner_waitress1':
 					acting['scenes_filmed'] += 1
 					acting['scene_outfit'] = 2
 					'"Cut!" the director yells. "Alright, that''s good for this scene. Let''s move on to the next one. Remember everybody, we''re meeting at set <<acting[''setnumber'']>>! Set <<acting[''setnumber'']>>! Don''t forget! <<$pcs_lastname>>, go back to makeup and get changed for the next scene."'
-					act'Leave':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+					act 'Leave': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -216,7 +216,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'diner_waitress2':
 						actress['nude_scene'] += 1
 						actress['sex_scene'] += 1
 						actress['minor_role'] += 1
-						act'Leave':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+						act 'Leave': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 					end
 				end
 			end

locations/actress.qsrc

@@ -23,14 +23,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene_prep':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/accessories/acting/script.jpg"></center>'
 	'You open up your copy of the script and skim the words thinking about what to do.'
-	act'Put down the script':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+	act 'Put down the script': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	act'Practice for your role (0:15)':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/accessories/acting/rehearse.jpg"></center>'
 		minut += 15
 		audition['scene_prep'] += 1
 		'You spend a bit of time practicing your lines and actions. Most of the time is just spent memorizing the dialogue, you can''t really get into the mindset of the role in only fifteen minutes.'
-		act'Continue':gt'actress','scene_prep'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'actress', 'scene_prep'
 	end
 	
 	act'Practice for your role (0:30)':
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene_prep':
 		minut += 15
 		audition['scene_prep'] += 2
 		'You spend some time practicing your lines and actions. Most of the time is just spent memorizing the dialogue, but you manage to incorporate some of the posture your character might have and how you might hold yourself during filming.'
-		act'Continue':gt'actress','scene_prep'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'actress', 'scene_prep'
 	end
 	
 	act'Practice for your role (0:45)':
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene_prep':
 		minut += 15
 		audition['scene_prep'] += 3
 		'You spend a good amount of time practicing your lines and actions. You manage a good amount of progress on memorizing your lines and even think of a few hand motions your character might use.'
-		act'Continue':gt'actress','scene_prep'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'actress', 'scene_prep'
 	end
 	
 	act'Practice for your role (1:00)':
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene_prep':
 		minut += 15
 		audition['scene_prep'] += 5
 		'You spend a full hour practicing your lines and actions. Not only do you get a decent amount of time in memorizing your lines, but you really manage to get into character during this time. How you should hold yourself, how you should talk, how you should <i>feel</i>, and you feel a good deal more confident in getting into the role.'
-		act'Continue':gt'actress','scene_prep'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'actress', 'scene_prep'
 	end
 end
 

locations/alarmclock.qsrc

@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Reset':
 	gt 'alarmclock', 'start'
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] = 'fin':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+if $ARGS[0] = 'fin':gt $menu_loc, $menu_arg
 
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'build_table':

locations/albina_chat.qsrc

@@ -6,13 +6,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 	act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
-	act 'Make small talk': gt'albina_chat','small_talk2'
-	act 'Talk about sex': gt'albina_sex_chat','sex_talk_start'
+	act 'Make small talk': gt 'albina_chat', 'small_talk2'
+	act 'Talk about sex': gt 'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk_start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'small_talk':
 	act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
-	act 'Keep talking': gt'albina_chat','small_talk2'
+	act 'Keep talking': gt 'albina_chat', 'small_talk2'
 	act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
 end
 
@@ -557,7 +557,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pube_talk2':
 	cla & *nl
 	'"What about you? Do you shave?"'
 	if $pube_style['word'] = 'shaved':
-		!! clean shaven
+		!! clean-shaven
 		act 'I hate bush too':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'

locations/albina_house_events.qsrc

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	gs 'stat'
 !!	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big23.jpg"></center>'
 	if AlbinaQW['albride'] = 1:
-		gt'albina_house_events','first_visit'
+		gt 'albina_house_events', 'first_visit'
 	else
 		gt 'albinahome', 'hallway'
 	end
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit':
 							'"It''s okay..." you continue on cooing. "I forgive you Albina. I''m not holding this against you."'
 							'"But I-!"'
 							'"I don''t care. You''re still my friend." Your last words cause her to bawl even harder and she becomes completely unintelligable for the next few minutes as she releases what you can only imagine to be years of frustration and trauma.'
-							act 'Continue':gt'albina_house_events','first_visit2'
+							act 'Continue':gt 'albina_house_events', 'first_visit2'
 						end
 					else
 						'She turns to face you, eyes brimming. "And when it wasn''t enough, he sold my friends too."'
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit':
 						'"It''s okay..." you continue on cooing. "It''s not your fault."'
 						'"But I-!"'
 						'"It''s not. No matter what you tell yourself, it wasn''t your fault. And no matter what you think, you''re still my friend." Your last words cause her to bawl even harder and she becomes completely unintelligable for the next few minutes as she releases what you can only imagine to be years of frustration and trauma.'
-						act 'Continue':gt'albina_house_events','first_visit2'
+						act 'Continue':gt 'albina_house_events', 'first_visit2'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swim_winter1':
 	if AlbinaQW['winter_hot_tub_dip'] < 1:
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! I didn''t know you were here! I was just going to go for a swim, care to join me?"'
 		'"You want to go swimming in <i>this</i> weather?" you ask, raising your eyebrow, following her as she walks past you down the stairs.'
-		'Albina smirks at you. "Not swimming, just a quick dip! Just long enough to get your nipples rock hard."'
+		'Albina smirks at you. "Not swimming, just a quick dip! Just long enough to get your nipples rock-hard."'
 		'"And <i>why</i> would I want to do that?"'
 		'"So you can jump in the hot tub after!" She looks at you pointedly. "What, you mean you''ve never jumped in the lake before a sauna session before? Don''t you know anything about enjoying yourself, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 		'She drops her robe, revealing that she''s wearing only a skimpy bikini thong as she starts strutting towards the back door. Opening it up, she shudders as a cold wind blows over her before glancing back at you. "Well? You coming or what?"'
@@ -576,7 +576,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hot_tub3':
 				'You rather brazenly decide to take your panties off and throw them into your pile of clothes before climbing into the hot tub naked. Albina, normally rather daring around you, is taken aback by your decison, but decides to join you. She wriggles around and pulls her thong off before tossing it aside and smiling.'
 				'"Oh <i>fuck</i>..." she moans softly. "Good choice <<$pcs_nickname>>. This is <i>much</i> better..."'
 				*nl
-				'You soon realise what she means when you sit down and instantly feel the jets of warm water softly tickling your clit. It''s slowly turning you on and you can feel your juices flowing in response to the stimulation. It seems to have the same effect on Albina, who reaches over and turns up the bubbles even more. You lose track of time, but it''s a very pleasurable experience.'
+				'You soon realize what she means when you sit down and instantly feel the jets of warm water softly tickling your clit. It''s slowly turning you on and you can feel your juices flowing in response to the stimulation. It seems to have the same effect on Albina, who reaches over and turns up the bubbles even more. You lose track of time, but it''s a very pleasurable experience.'
 				act 'Continue':
 					minut +=6
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -764,7 +764,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tv_1':
 		minut +=24
 		gs 'stat'
 		AlbinaQW['visiting'] = 0
-		act'Leave':gt 'pav_residential'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_residential'
 	end
 
 	act 'It was okay':
@@ -782,7 +782,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tv_1':
 		minut +=24
 		gs 'stat'
 		AlbinaQW['visiting'] = 0
-		act'Leave':gt 'pav_residential'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_residential'
 	end
 end
 

locations/albina_lazar_sex.qsrc

@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'peek':
 	menu_off = 1
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/lazar/alblaz1.jpg"></center>'				
-	'You glance around to make sure nobody is nearby, then crack the door open slightly to peek in. You can see Albina in her underwear, squatting in front of Lazar. She pulls his jeans down and his impressively sized and rock hard dick springs free.' 
+	'You glance around to make sure nobody is nearby, then crack the door open slightly to peek in. You can see Albina in her underwear, squatting in front of Lazar. She pulls his jeans down and his impressively sized and rock-hard dick springs free.' 
 	'She starts licking and jerking it before she takes it into her mouth and starts bobbing her head up and down his shaft as she sucks his dick. After a few seconds of this, she gags as she takes it further into her mouth and down her throat, deepthroating him as far as she can before pulling her head back up and coughing. Lazar barely lets her breath before he shoves his dick back into her mouth, moaning in pleasure as he holds her down as long as possible.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 	gs 'stat'

locations/albina_mother_events.qsrc

@@ -265,7 +265,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_shower':
 
 		act 'Finish':
 			CLOSE ALL
-			gs'arousal','end'
+			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 		end
@@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_shower':
 				'You smile and move your hand back down between her legs. Being rather flexible, Albina lifts her leg straight up and places her foot against the shower wall, giving you better access to her pussy, which is dripping wet in anticipation. You slide two fingers inside her and start finger fucking her pussy as your thumb massages her clit. She moans loudly in pleasure as she leans against you to steady herself. A few minutes of this is enough to bring her to the edge and she starts moaning even louder. "Don''t you dare stop <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m about to cum!" You finger her even faster and she lets out a pleasured shriek as her pussy starts squirting her juices over your arm. She steadies herself against you as she rides through the pleasure of her orgasm. You pull your fingers out of her and shove them in her mouth. She sucks on them before smiling at you.' 
 				'"Ohhh <<$pcs_nickname>>, that... that was amazing! Just let me finish up in here and I''ll be out." You nod and step out of the shower, grabbing one of the nearby towels and wrapping yourself in it before walking back into her bedroom.'
 				'As you dry off, you hear the water turn off and a naked Albina casually strolls into the room.'
-				'"You were amazing in there and I want to return the favour." She walks over and pushes you down onto her bed. "I''m going to eat your ass until you cum. And I won''t take no for an answer!"' 
+				'"You were amazing in there and I want to return the favor." She walks over and pushes you down onto her bed. "I''m going to eat your ass until you cum. And I won''t take no for an answer!"' 
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 
@@ -293,7 +293,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_shower':
 					'You firmly squeeze her ass in your hand before pushing her down onto all fours. She looks back and gives you a knowing smile as you kneel down next to her and spread her ass. She moans and giggles as you start rimming her asshole before grabbing you by the hair and holding you tightly against her, forcing your face between her ass cheeks as you continue pleasuring her backdoor. She soon relaxes enough for you to start pushing the tip of your tongue against her hole and it eventually penetrates. You start tongue fucking her ass in addition to rimming it, all to Albina''s immense pleasure. She reaches back and starts fondling her clit, her grip on your hair tightening as she approaches orgasm. Hearing her moans getting louder and her breathing more ragged, you start going even faster, pushing your tongue as deep as you can into her ass before Albina suddenly lets out a pleasured shriek as her pussy starts squirting juices. She lets go of your hair and you continue eating her ass as she rides through her orgasm. Once she recovers, she pulls herself up and the two of you sit in the shower making out for a few minutes before Albina breaks the kiss and smiles at you.' 
 					'"Ohhh <<$pcs_nickname>>, that... that was amazing! Just let me finish up in here and I''ll be out." You nod and step out of the shower, grabbing one of the nearby towels and wrapping yourself in it before walking back into her bedroom.'
 					'As you dry off, you hear the water turn off and a naked Albina casually strolls into the room.'
-					'"You were amazing in there and I want to return the favour." She walks over and pushes you down onto her bed. "I''m going to eat your ass until you cum. And I won''t take no for an answer!"' 
+					'"You were amazing in there and I want to return the favor." She walks over and pushes you down onto her bed. "I''m going to eat your ass until you cum. And I won''t take no for an answer!"' 
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'rimming_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -309,7 +309,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_shower':
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Finish':
 							CLOSE ALL
-							gs'arousal','end'
+							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
 							gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 						end

locations/albina_school_sex.qsrc

@@ -12,38 +12,43 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_fun_1':
 	'"Come to the girls restroom now. No questions."'
 	*nl
 	'You decide not to keep her waiting and make your way to the restroom.'
+	
 	act 'Go to the restroom':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/bathroom/bathroom1.jpg"></center>'
 		'You enter the girls restroom to find that nobody is inside. As you walk further in, you hear Albina. "In here <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 		'You walk over to the furthest stall and find Albina inside sitting on the toilet, her legs spread wide. She has a mischievous grin on her face and you know exactly what kind of mood she''s in.'
-		'"Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, nobody will disturb us. I made sure of it." she says with a smile and motions for you to come closer.'
+		'"Don''t worry, nobody will disturb us. I made sure of it," she says with a smile and motions for you to come closer.'
+		
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/bathroom/bathroom2.jpg"></center>'
 			'You''re pretty certain of what she wants to do, but you decide to ask anyway.'
 			'"So what are you doing in here?" She justs laughs at your question as she stands and walks up to you.'
 			'"Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re not that stupid. I was thinking about the times we''ve had some fun and how fucking amazing your tongue felt on my pussy." She pulls up her skirt and invintingly wiggles her ass at you. "Now I''m wet and want you to eat me out."'
+			
 			act 'Refuse':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/maekup.jpg"></center>'
-				'You shake your head at her. "Sorry Albina, but I don''t want to do that."'
-				'She looks a little disappointed as she fixes her skirt, but walks over to you and leans in to whisper in your ear. "That''s okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, but just know that I''ll be sitting in class with a <i>very</i> wet pussy thinking about how good you are at eating it." she says softly before walking over to the mirror and touching up her makeup before leaving. You find yourself feeling a little aroused.'
+				'You shake your head. "Sorry Albina, but I don''t want to do that."'
+				'She looks a little disappointed as she fixes her skirt, but walks over to you and leans in to whisper in your ear. "That''s okay, but just know that I''ll be sitting in class with a <i>very</i> wet pussy thinking about how good you are at eating it..." she says softly before walking over to the mirror and touching up her makeup before leaving. You find yourself feeling a little aroused.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
+			
 			act 'Accept':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/bathroom/bathroom3.jpg"></center>'
 				'She''s clearly manipulating you and it''s working. You find yourself aroused by what she said and what she''s doing and obediently get on your knees in front of her as she pulls her thong down and steps out of it before lifting her leg up to rest it on the door frame.'
-				'She wasn''t kidding. Her glistening pussy is dripping wet as you bring your head up to her crotch. She grabs you by the hair and shoves your face into her pussy, holding you tightly against her as you start licking and sucking her engorged clit, her soft moans of pleasure arousing you even further. "Mmmmhm, yeah that feels fucking great <<$pcs_nickname>>. Keep fucking going!"'
+				'She wasn''t kidding. Her glistening pussy is dripping wet as you bring your head up to her crotch. She grabs you by the hair and shoves your face into her pussy, holding you tightly against her as you start licking and sucking her engorged clit, her soft moans of pleasure arousing you even further. "Mmmmhm... Yeah, that feels fucking great, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Keep going!"'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -5, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
+				
 				act 'Continue':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/bathroom/bathroom4.jpg"></center>'
 					'This continues for a while until she pulls you away from her and shoves you down on the floor.'
-					'"I''m almost there <<$pcs_nickname>>, but I want to sit on your face first."'
-					'You lay flat on your back as she lowers herself down and plants her pussy on your face, coating you with her wetness as you resume pleasuring her. Soon, her moans become louder and she starts grinding against you as she reaches climax. "Fuck, yes yes YES!!! I''m going to cum!" she cries before she lifts herself off you and you''re drenched by a flood of her pussy juices.' 
+					'"I''m almost there, but I want to sit on your face first."'
+					'You lay flat on your back as she lowers herself down and plants her pussy on your face, coating you with her wetness as you resume pleasuring her. Soon, her moans become louder and she starts grinding against you as she reaches climax. "Fuck, gonna cum!!" she cries before she lifts herself off you and you''re drenched by the flood of juices that spray from her pussy.' 
 					'When she finishes squirting, she drops back down and grinds against you again, smearing her wetness all over your face.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -5, 'lesbian'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -56,11 +61,11 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'break_fun_2':
 	menu_off = 1
-	temp = rand(1, 2)
+	temp = rand(1,2)
 	*clr & cla
 	if temp = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/maekup.jpg"></center>'
-		'Satisfied, she climbs off of you and helps you to your feet. "That was amazing <<$pcs_nickname>>, I really needed that," she says before pulling her thong back on and fixing her skirt. She walks over to the mirror to touch up her makeup when her phone pings with a text message and she suddenly takes off. "I''d love to return the favour <<$pcs_nickname>>, but I promised Vicky I would do something with her before our next class. I need to go, but I owe you one!" she says and winks at you before walking out the door with some sway in her hips. You clean up at the sink and prepare to leave yourself, feeling very horny and a little disappointed that you won''t get a release.' 
+		'Satisfied, she climbs off of you and helps you to your feet. "That was amazing <<$pcs_nickname>>, I really needed that," she says before pulling her thong back on and fixing her skirt. She walks over to the mirror to touch up her makeup when her phone pings with a text message and she suddenly takes off. "I''d love to return the favor, but I promised Vicky I''d do something with her before our next class. I need to go, but I owe you one!" she says and winks at you before walking out the door with some sway in her hips. You clean up at the sink and prepare to leave yourself, feeling very horny and a little disappointed that you won''t get a release.' 
 		act 'Continue': 
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -68,7 +73,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_fun_2':
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/bathroom/bathroom5.jpg"></center>'
-		'Satisfied, she climbs off of you and helps you to your feet. "That was amazing <<$pcs_nickname>>, I really needed that," she says before pulling her thong back on and fixing her skirt. A sly grin appears on her face as she pulls her phone out and looks at it. "We''ve got just enough time for me to return the favour..." she says before pushing you down onto the toilet and kneeling in front of you.'
+		'Satisfied, she climbs off of you and helps you to your feet. "That was amazing <<$pcs_nickname>>, I really needed that," she says before pulling her thong back on and fixing her skirt. A sly grin appears on her face as she pulls her phone out and looks at it. "We''ve got just enough time for me to return the favor..." she says before pushing you down onto the toilet and kneeling in front of you.'
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
 			'She pushes your skirt up and is surprised at what she sees. "No panties <<$pcs_nickname>>? You are a naughty girl!" she says with a laugh before spreading your legs and burying her face in your crotch.'
 		else
@@ -84,7 +89,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_fun_2':
 			$orgasm_or = 'custom'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -15, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
-			'When your orgasm passes, she pulls away from you and you look down at her with an appreciative smile. She licks her lips and winks at you in response before getting to her feet and walking over to the sink to clean up. You fix your clothes and join her, your legs still rather weak. Once you''ve both cleaned up, she gives you a quick kiss before leaving, a teasing sway in her hips. You compose yourself and head out behind her.'
+			'When your orgasm passes, she pulls away from you and you look down at her with an appreciative smile. She licks her lips and winks at you in response before getting to her feet and walking over to the sink to clean up. You fix your clothes and join her, your legs still rather weak. Once you''ve both cleaned up, she gives you a quick kiss before leaving with a teasing sway in her hips. You compose yourself and head out behind her.'
 			
 			act 'Continue': 
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -95,7 +100,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_fun_2':
 	end
 end
 
-
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lunch_fun_1':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -107,13 +111,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lunch_fun_1':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big23.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Not today Albina. I don''t feel like it," you tell her while shaking your head.'
-		'She looks a little disappointed, but doesn''t press the matter any further. "In that case, just know that I''ll be sitting in class with a <i>very</i> wet pussy thinking about great you are at eating it." she whispers teasingly.'
+		'She looks a little disappointed, but doesn''t press the matter any further. "In that case, just know that I''ll be sitting in class with a <i>very</i> wet pussy thinking about great you are at eating it..." she whispers teasingly.'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
 	act 'Accept':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big23.jpg"></center>'
-		if rand(1,4) = 1:
+		if rand(1,4) = 1 and AlbinaQW['julia_sex'] = 0:
 			'You silently nod and she discreetly motions for you to follow her to one of the empty classrooms. Once inside, she grabs hold of you and is about to kiss you when she jumps back and squeals in fright. You look round and find Julia blankly staring at the two of you.'
 			act 'Continue': gt 'albina_school_sex', 'lunch_fun_1_2'
 		else
@@ -125,30 +129,34 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lunch_fun_1_2':
 	menu_off = 1
+	AlbinaQW['julia_sex'] = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/classroom/threesome1.jpg"></center>'
 	'Albina drags you over to the desk where Julia is sitting, which is cluttered with studying materials. Albina leans on the desk as you stand behind Julia and take a peek at what she''s doing.'
-	'"What the fuck are you doing here? Shouldn''t you be with the other geeks?" Albina asks teasingly and Julia squirms in her chair.'
+	'"Why are you all alone in here? Shouldn''t you be with the other geeks?" Albina asks teasingly and Julia squirms in her chair.'
 	'"Uh... We... Uhh, have a test coming up. I, uh, just needed a quiet place... T-To study.... Away from... The others. Wha... What are you doing here?" she stutters, clearly frightened of what Albina''s intentions are.'
 	'Albina leans over into Julia''s face. "<<$pcs_nickname>> and I were just going to have a little fun is all. I know you would love to watch that."'
-	'Julia blushes and looks around for a way out and Albina smiles even more. "Don''t be shy Julia. I know you love staring at my ass, and who can blame you? It''s so <i>big</i> and <i>firm</i> and you''d just love to feel it in your hands and give it a good squeeze, wouldn''t you?"'
+	'Julia blushes and looks around for a way out as Albina smiles. "Don''t be shy, Julia. I know you love staring at my ass, and who can blame you? It''s so <i>big</i> and <i>firm</i> and you''d just love to feel it in your hands and give it a good squeeze, wouldn''t you?"'
 	'Julia blushes and squirms even more as she looks at the floor. "I, I... What are you... Talking about?"'
-	'"Don''t be like that Julia! I''d like it, no <i>love</i> it, if you played with my ass right here, right now. I bet you''d love to have a feel of <<$pcs_nickname>>''s ass as well, wouldn''t you?"'
+	'"Don''t be like that, Julia! I''d like it, no <i>love</i> it, if you played with my ass right here, right now. '+iif(func('pcs_has_attr', 'body_ass_bubble'),'I bet you''d love to have a feel of <<$pcs_nickname>>''s big ass as well, wouldn''t you?','')+'"'
+	
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/classroom/threesome2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Julia sits in silence before awkwardly answering. "Ye...Yes. I like both your asses, but please don''t tell anyone! Please, just leave me alone!"'
+		'Julia sits in silence before awkwardly answering. "Ye... Yes, but please don''t tell anyone! Please, just leave me alone!"'
 		'Albina smiles. "Oh, I won''t tell anyone. It''ll be our little secret. I''ve got a far better idea." She then takes both you and Julia by surprise by sweeping Julia''s stuff off the desk and climbing over to softly kiss Julia on the lips. Julia doesn''t flinch and even starts returning the kiss. The two of them are soon passionately making out in front of you and you see Julia closing her legs tightly together.'
+		
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/classroom/threesome3.jpg"></center>'
 			'After a few seconds, Albina breaks the kiss and has Julia sit up on the desk and spread her legs. Albina pushes her skirt up and pulls her panties aside to reveal how aroused Julia is feeling.'
-			'"That is one very wet pussy. What a naughty girl! I bet you''re thinking about how wet our pussies must be..."'
+			'"That''s one very wet pussy! What a naughty girl! I bet you''re thinking about how wet our pussies must be..."'
 			'Julia sits quietly and Albina just laughs before undoing her skirt and stepping out of it. She then grabs Julia''s hands and places them on her thong clad ass. "Give it a good squeeze, Julia. I''m not going to bite you."'
 			'To your surprise, Julia actually does start playing with Albina''s ass, and with great enthusiasm. You think you see a small smile creep onto her face as Albina continues undressing and you follow her lead.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', -5, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
+			
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/classroom/threesome4.jpg"></center>'
@@ -156,6 +164,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lunch_fun_1_2':
 				'You see another small smile on Julia''s face as she gets on her knees between Albina''s legs and, without hesitation, starts licking Albina''s pussy. "Shit, your tongue feels fucking great! Keep going!" Julia complies and soon reduces Albina to a quivering mess of loud, pleasured moans. She grabs Julia''s hair and holds her tightly against her crotch. Julia doesn''t seem to care and appears to double her efforts, which causes Albina to moan even louder.' 
 				gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', -8, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
+				
 				act 'Continue':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/classroom/threesome5.jpg"></center>'
@@ -166,21 +175,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lunch_fun_1_2':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'Julia soon brings Albina over the edge and her muffled moans feel amazing against your sensitive clit before you climb off her and she lays on the desk in ecstasy.'
 					'"Fuck Julia, you''re an absolute pro! Only <<$pcs_nickname>> has come close to eating my pussy as good as you did!" She then sits up and looks down at the meek looking nerd, who''s clearly aroused and in need of a release. "Get up here. It''s your turn."'
+					
 					act 'Continue':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/classroom/threesome6.jpg"></center>'
 						'Julia seems a little stunned, and maybe afraid, by what Albina said, so you slide off the desk and pull her to her feet before getting her to climb up onto the desk and bend over.'
-						'You kneel below her now dripping wet pussy and gently run your tongue along her folds to her engorged clit. You flick your tongue over her bean, which causes her to moan loudly in pleasure. Albina spanks her before going down on her ass, rimming and tongue fucking Julia''s asshole as you concentrate on her clit. She covers her mouth to muffle her pleasured moans and a few seconds, you and Albina''s combined efforts bring her over the edge. She barely contains her screams of pleasure as she cums, you and Albina continuing to please her throughout her orgasm. Once her orgasm passes, she collapses onto the desk.'
+						'You kneel below her now dripping wet pussy and gently run your tongue along her folds to her engorged clit. You flick your tongue over her bean, which causes her to moan loudly in pleasure. Albina spanks her before going down on her ass, rimming and tongue fucking Julia''s asshole as you concentrate on her clit.' 
+						'She covers her mouth to muffle her pleasured moans and a few seconds later, you and Albina''s combined efforts bring her over the edge. She barely contains her screams of pleasure as she cums, you and Albina continuing to please her throughout her orgasm. Once her orgasm passes, she collapses onto the desk.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -5, 'lesbian'
 						gs 'stat'
+						
 						act 'Continue':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/classroom/threesome7.jpg"></center>'
 							'Albina pulls her into an embrace as you sit back on the desk alongside them. You sit quietly for a few minutes in post orgasm bliss before Julia suddenly scurries to her feet.'
 							'"Oh no no no! Lunch is almost over! I.. I need to go before Zinaida wonders where I am. I said I would discuss strategies for our game night with her after I finished studying."'
 							'You and Albina sit and watch in amusement as Julia frantically picks up her clothes and stumbles around pulling them on as quickly as she can before she picks up her scattered belongings from the floor, stuffs them into her bag and runs out of the room.'
+							*nl
 							'Once she''s gone, the two of you share a laugh at what just happened before you both get dressed yourselves.'
-							'"Well that certainly was fun. I suspected Julia had a thing for me, but I wasn''t expecting her to be so... enthusiastic..." Albina says with a grin as she pulls her skirt back on. "The girl''s got some great tits and an amazing ass. Shame she hangs with those geeks." The bell rings as you finish dressing and you both head out to your next class.'
+							'"Well that certainly was fun. I suspected Julia had a thing for me, but I wasn''t expecting her to be so... enthusiastic..." Albina says with a grin as she pulls her skirt back on. "The girl''s got some great tits and an amazing ass. Shame she hangs with those geeks."'
+							'The bell rings as you finish getting dressed and you both head out to your next class.'
 							act 'Continue': 
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -196,26 +210,21 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lunch_fun_2':
 	menu_off = 1
-	gs 'stat'
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
 	'After a few seconds, she breaks the kiss and smiles at you. "I hope you''re hungry because you''re having my pussy for lunch today." You can sense the lust in her voice as she pushes you onto the floor, hikes up her skirt and pulls her thong off before sitting on your face. She moans loudly in pleasure as you start eating her out.' 
 	'Her moans grow louder and her pussy grows wetter as she starts grinding against you, smearing her wetness across your face. After a few more seconds where she moans even louder and grinds even faster, she suddenly pulls herself off of you, her breath heavy. "I don''t want to cum just yet. I need more of that tongue first."'
-	minut += 3
-	gs 'stat'
 
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/classroom/class2.jpg"></center>'
 		'She pulls you up to your feet and you practically rip each other''s clothes off and make out before she lies back on a desk and spreads her legs. "Get that magic tongue of yours over here and make me cum <<$pcs_nickname>>!" You smile at her as you climb onto the desk and crawl over to her. You tease her a little by sucking on and licking her nipple before moving down to her now dripping wet pussy.' 
 		'She tightly wraps her legs around your head, pressing your face against her crotch as you lick and suck on her engorged clit. After a few minutes of this, her grip tightens around your head. "Oh fuck, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Don''t stop, I''m gonna...." She isn''t able to finish her sentence before she lets out a muffled cry of pleasure and starts squirting into your mouth and across your face. Once she finishes, you swallow her juices and she relaxes her grip, allowing you to sit up as she lies panting on the desk.'
-		minut += 3
-		gs 'stat'
-
+		
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/classroom/class3.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Oh...oh wow. That was...fucking amazing <<$pcs_nickname>>. I really needed that," she pants as she rides out her orgasm. "I should return the favour." She sits up and flashes her tongue piercing at you as she motions for you to lie down. She climbs off the desk and pulls you over to the edge as you lie back. She licks her lips and immediately buries her head in your crotch, making you moan loudly as she eats you out for all she''s worth. She knows exactly what she''s doing and has you approaching orgasm within minutes.' 
+			'"Oh... Oh wow. That was... Amazing... I really needed that..." she pants as she rides out her orgasm. "I should return the favor," she says before she sits up and flashes her tongue piercing at you as she motions for you to lie down. She climbs off the desk and pulls you over to the edge as you lie back. She licks her lips and immediately buries her head in your crotch, making you moan loudly as she eats you out for all she''s worth. She knows exactly what she''s doing and has you approaching orgasm within minutes.' 
 			'Seeing this, she stops licking your pussy and stands up; you barely have time to ask what''s happening before she jams her fingers deep inside you and starts fingerbanging you. "That''s right <<$pcs_nickname>>, cum for me." she whispers teasingly in your ear before making out with you. You moan loudly into her mouth as she brings you to orgasm. You lie panting on the desk as she pulls her fingers out and sucks on them. "Mhmm. You taste really fucking good, you know that?" she says teasingly with a wink.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 6, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -230,10 +239,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lunch_fun_2':
 				act 'Spank her':
 					cla
 					*nl
-					'Her ass is too inviting and she yelps in surprise when you smack it hard. "<<$pcs_nickname>>!! You''re so naughty!" she says while looking back and biting her lip. "You know I''d love it if you continued, but lunch is almost over and we need to get dressed before someone finds us." You nod and start getting dressed, Albina making a show of giving you what you can only describe as a reverse striptease. Once you''re dressed, she gives you a final kiss and surprises you by spanking you back, making you jump a little as she smiles and walks out the door with some sway in her hips. You quickly hurry out behind her as the bell for your next class rings.'
-					minut += 3
-					gs 'stat'
-
+					'Her ass is too inviting and she yelps in surprise when you smack it hard. "<<$pcs_nickname>>!! You''re so naughty!" she says while looking back and biting her lip. "You know I''d love it if you continued, but lunch is almost over and we need to get dressed before someone finds us."'
+					'You nod and start getting dressed, Albina making a show of giving you what you can only describe as a reverse striptease. Once you''re dressed, she gives you a final kiss and surprises you by spanking you back, making you jump a little as she smiles and walks out the door with some sway in her hips. You quickly hurry out behind her as the bell for your next class rings.'
+					
 					act 'Finish':
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -244,10 +252,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lunch_fun_2':
 				act 'Finger her':
 					cla
 					*nl
-					'Her legs are slightly spread, so you move in behind her and slide your fingers inside her still wet hole. "Ooohh <<$pcs_nickname>>..." she moans softly. "While I''d love a round two, lunch is almost over and we should get dressed before someone finds us." You nod and start getting dressed, Albina making a show of giving you what you can only describe as a reverse striptease. Once you''re dressed, she gives you a final kiss and gets her own back by pinching your nipple, making you squeal a little as she smiles and walks out the door with some sway in her hips. You quickly hurry out behind her as the bell for your next class rings.'
-					minut += 3
-					gs 'stat'
-
+					'Her legs are slightly spread, so you move in behind her and slide your fingers inside her still wet hole. "Ooohh <<$pcs_nickname>>..." she moans softly. "While I''d love a round two, lunch is almost over and we should get dressed before someone finds us."'
+					'You nod and start getting dressed, Albina making a show of giving you what you can only describe as a reverse striptease. Once you''re dressed, she gives you a final kiss and gets her own back by pinching your nipple, making you squeal a little as she smiles and walks out the door with some sway in her hips. You quickly hurry out behind her as the bell for your next class rings.'
+				
 					act 'Finish':
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'

locations/albina_sex_chat.qsrc

@@ -793,7 +793,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'birth_control_pill_hassle_condom_ver':
 	act 'Too much hassle':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"Too much hassle," you sigh. "I don''t want to remember to take a pill every day. It''s just easier to put a condom on the guy''s cock before he fucks me. If the condom breaks, I can just get a morning after pill."'
+		'"Too much hassle," you sigh. "I don''t want to remember to take a pill every day. It''s just easier to put a condom on the guy''s cock before he fucks me. If the condom breaks, I can just get a morning-after pill."'
 		'"I guess that''s fair," she concedes. "Just takes one missed day to get knocked up. That''s why I take mine religiously. I set alarms and everything to remind me. You don''t know what you''re missing out on, though. Bareback is the best."'
 		*nl
 		'She grins a slutty grin at you.'
@@ -804,7 +804,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'birth_control_pill_hassle_no_condoms':
 	act 'Too much hassle':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"Too much hassle," you sigh. "I don''t want to remember to take a pill every day. It''s just one more annoying thing to do. I just want to have sex and enjoy it. Besides, I can always get a morning after pill."'
+		'"Too much hassle," you sigh. "I don''t want to remember to take a pill every day. It''s just one more annoying thing to do. I just want to have sex and enjoy it. Besides, I can always get a morning-after pill."'
 		'"You''re crazy," she says while shaking her head. "Condom or bareback, I wouldn''t fuck guys <i>at all</i> if I wasn''t on birth control... but that''s why I need to be on birth control."'
 		*nl
 		'You both erupt into laughter.'

locations/albina_starlets.qsrc

@@ -47,9 +47,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina1':
 			   *clr & cla
 			   gs 'stat'
 			   '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big23.jpg"></center>'
-			   'The music starts playing and you instantly realise your mistake in trying to compare yourself to Albina. She flawlessly performs a number of dance moves you could never even hope to do, all with a smug smile on her face directed at you.'
+			   'The music starts playing and you instantly realize your mistake in trying to compare yourself to Albina. She flawlessly performs a number of dance moves you could never even hope to do, all with a smug smile on her face directed at you.'
 			   'She finishes her performance as the music ends and you sheepishly avoid eye contact with her as she walks up to you, breathless.'
-			   '"Not so loud mouthed now are you?" she gleefully remarks with a laugh. "Now why don''t you fuck off and take your humble ass back to the amateur corner where you belong?"' 
+			   '"Not so loud-mouthed now are you?" she gleefully remarks with a laugh. "Now why don''t you fuck off and take your humble ass back to the amateur corner where you belong?"' 
 			   if grupTipe = 4:
 					'"A junkie like you will never dance with <i>us</i>!"'
 				else
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina2':
 			   *clr & cla
 			   gs 'stat'
 			   '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big23.jpg"></center>'
-			   'The music starts playing and you instantly realise your mistake in trying to compare yourself to Albina. She flawlessly performs a number of dance moves that you could never even hope to do, all with a smug smile on her face directed at you.'
+			   'The music starts playing and you instantly realize your mistake in trying to compare yourself to Albina. She flawlessly performs a number of dance moves that you could never even hope to do, all with a smug smile on her face directed at you.'
 			   'She finishes her performance as the music ends and you sheepishly avoid eye contact with her as she walks up to you, breathless.'
 			   '"Not so loud mouthed now are you?" she gleefully remarks with a laugh. "I''m in a good mood today. I want to see you dance. Get your ass up and prove you''re as good as you claim."'
 			   
@@ -493,7 +493,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'StarletsEnd':
 	cla
-	'You enter the locker room and immediately see the disapproving looks on the girls faces. Albina walks over to you and, looking severly disappointed, shakes her head. "Why <<$pcs_nickname>>? You used to be cool, but now you''ve gone and done this to yourself. I''m sorry, but I just can''t have someone like you being associated with us anymore."' 
+	'You enter the locker room and immediately see the disapproving looks on the girls faces. Albina walks over to you and, looking severely disappointed, shakes her head. "Why <<$pcs_nickname>>? You used to be cool, but now you''ve gone and done this to yourself. I''m sorry, but I just can''t have someone like you being associated with us anymore."' 
 	'She motions to the door and you walk out in shame as tears well up in your eyes.'
 	starlets_practice = 0
 	minut += 2

locations/albina_starlets_sex.qsrc

@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore2':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/bjd.jpg"></center>'
 			'The two men watch with hungry perversion as you stand and reluctantly undress in front of them. Once you''re naked, they unbuckle their pants and pull their cocks out before one of them grabs you and forces you to your knees.'
-			'He maintains tightly grabs your hair and holds you in place as you lick, jerk, and suck the two cocks until they''re both rock hard. You look up at the two men, seeking their approval.'
+			'He maintains tightly grabs your hair and holds you in place as you lick, jerk, and suck the two cocks until they''re both rock-hard. You look up at the two men, seeking their approval.'
 			'"Very good little lamb. Now take my cock. Take it all!" one of the men barks and forces his entire length into your mouth, causing you to choke. The two men laugh and force you to keep sucking and jerking them off.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'hj', 3, 'dick', 'group', 'sub'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 6, 'dick', 'group', 'sub', 'rough', 'humiliation'
@@ -284,7 +284,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore2':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/bjd.jpg"></center>'
 			'The two men watch with hungry perversion as you stand and reluctantly undress in front of them. Once you''re naked, they unbuckle their pants and pull their cocks out before one of them grabs you and forces you to your knees.'
-			'He maintains tightly grabs your hair and holds you in place as you lick, jerk, and suck the two cocks until they''re both rock hard. You look up at the two men, seeking their approval.'
+			'He maintains tightly grabs your hair and holds you in place as you lick, jerk, and suck the two cocks until they''re both rock-hard. You look up at the two men, seeking their approval.'
 			'"Very good little lamb. Now take my cock. Take it all!" one of the men barks and forces his entire length into your mouth, causing you to choke. The two men laugh and force you to keep sucking and jerking them off.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'hj', 3, 'dick', 'group', 'sub'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 6, 'dick', 'group', 'sub', 'rough', 'humiliation'
@@ -581,6 +581,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore5':
 		tipdarand = rand(0,1)
 
 		if tipdarand = 0:
+			killvar'tipdarand'
 			'The guys then effortlessly lift you to your feet and lead you over to the bed. You get on all fours and one guy kneels in front of you. You resume sucking his huge cock as the other moves in behind you and spits on your anus before sliding his finger inside you.'
 			'You moan softly as you keep sucking the cock in your mouth. The guy keeps fingering your ass before withdrawing and bringing his cock to your asshole.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'dick', 'sub', 'group'
@@ -618,6 +619,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore5':
 				end
 			end
 		elseif tipdarand = 1:
+			killvar'tipdarand'
 			'The guys then effortlessy lift you up and lay you on the bed, your head leaning over the edge.'
 			'One of them climbs in beside you and spreads your legs as the other moves to the edge of the bed and presses his cock against your lips.'
 
@@ -719,7 +721,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore6':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/reward.jpg"></center>'
 						'The man flips you back onto your back and spreads your legs. You moan heavily as his tongue returns to your clit and starts swirling away as his fingers slide into your wet hole and start working their magic once more.'
 						'Your pussy starts tightening and the man picks up the pace. Soon enough, you let out a scream and squeeze your legs around his head as you''re brought to an explosive orgasm. You release the man from your grip and lay on the bed riding the waves of pleasure rushing through you.'
-						'The man is sitting on the edge of the bed as you step off. "Oh one last thing." He grabs hold of your ass, his cum still wet on your cheek. "You''re going home like that." You blush at him, but obidiently slide your panties back over your cum covered ass. He gives you a final smack on the ass and lets you leave.'
+						'The man is sitting on the edge of the bed as you step off. "Oh one last thing." He grabs hold of your ass, his cum still wet on your cheek. "You''re going home like that." You blush at him, but obediently slide your panties back over your cum covered ass. He gives you a final smack on the ass and lets you leave.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'sub'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', -1, 'sub'
 						$orgasm_or = 'yes'

locations/albina_wine_event.qsrc

@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
 			else
 				AlbinaQW['wine_convo_1'] = daystart
 			end
-			gs'albina_wine_event','pussy_taste'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event', 'pussy_taste'
 		elseif AlbinaQW['wine_convo'] = 2:
 			!! Shaving convo
 			if AlbinaQW['wine_convo_2'] = daystart: 
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
 			gs 'albina_wine_event','boob_size_talk'
 			
 		elseif AlbinaQW['wine_convo'] = 7:
-			if AlbinaQW['commando_know'] = 0: gt'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+			if AlbinaQW['commando_know'] = 0: gt 'albina_wine_event', 'wine_chat1'
 			if AlbinaQW['wine_convo_7'] = daystart: 
 				gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
 			else
@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_talk':
 	if pubestyle = 1 and pcs_pubes <= 3:
-		!! clean shaven
+		!! clean-shaven
 		'"I can''t believe how many girls at school don''t shave their pussy," Albina says with a disgusted look on her face. "How can they stand having all that hair down there?"'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_answer1'
 !!	elseif pcs_pubes <= 10:
@@ -306,10 +306,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dominate_albina':
 	
 	act 'Bend you over and spank you':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"First, I''d bend you over my lap," you smile gently, running your fingers through her hair. Something in your voice makes her eyes go wide. She glances to the side, as if realizing that her head is exactly where you said you''d bend her over.'
+		'"First, I''d bend you over my lap," you smile gently, running your fingers through her hair. Something in your voice makes her eyes go wide. She glances to the side as if realizing that her head is exactly where you said you''d bend her over.'
 		'"Then, I''d sit you up so your ass is nice and high," you continue. "And then I''d <i>spank you within an inch of your life.</i>" You keep your easy tone, but give Albina a hard stare and her breath hitches. "I''d keep going until your ass is red and swollen. Let my fingers trail over your pussy, edging you until you <i>beg</i> me to let you cum. And then, <i>I won''t.</i>"'
 		*nl
-		'Albina''s face flushes red and she swallows reflexively. Looking down her body, you see her nipples are rock hard and her thighs are practically dripping with girl cum.'
+		'Albina''s face flushes red and she swallows reflexively. Looking down her body, you see her nipples are rock-hard and her thighs are practically dripping with girl cum.'
 		'"That..." she gulps. "Would be a pretty good way of doing it..."'
 		*nl
 		'She tears herself away from your gaze and buries her face in her wine glass, taking big desperate gulps.'
@@ -362,7 +362,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'masturbation_talk':
 	'"How often do you masturbate <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Albina asks loudly, without even a shred of shame or decency.'
-	act 'Embarassed':
+	act 'Embarrassed':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"Albina! That''s..." you stammer and trail off. You suddenly can''t look at her anymore and your face grows hot for reasons you try to rationalize is just the wine.'
 		'"Oh please. Don''t be such a prude <<$pcs_nickname>>," she rolls her eyes. "I know you do it, everyone does. I have to get off when I feel the urge or I just can''t concentrate. Even if you don''t do it <i>every</i> day, I know you do."'
@@ -401,7 +401,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masturbation_talk':
 		act 'Rarely':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Rarely," you say with a shrug.'
-			'"Ha!" she chortles. "I call bullshit. There isn''t a girl our age who doesn''t schlick off on a regular basis. I know for a fact that even Katja does it."'
+			'"Ha!" she chortles. "I call bullshit. There isn''t a girl our age who doesn''t slack off on a regular basis. I know for a fact that even Katja does it."'
 			act 'No time':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"No, I''m serious! I would do it more often, but I just don''t have time," you sigh. "I''m too busy with other things to masturbate. By the time I get home, I''m practically asleep."'
@@ -412,13 +412,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masturbation_talk':
 			act 'No privacy':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"I don''t have any privacy," you say dryly. "Unlike you, I''m not an only child in a big ass mansion. I share a room with my sister, have a little brother who doesn''t respect boundaries, and a mother who loses her mind at the slightest mention of sex! It''s extremely rare for nobody else to be home so I rub one out in peace."'
-				'"Excuses, excuses," she says while rolling her eyes. "Ever heard of a shower dildo? Or just a shower head? It''s not like your brother is using the bathroom while you shower, is he?"'
+				'"Excuses, excuses," she says while rolling her eyes. "Ever heard of a shower dildo? Or just a showerhead? It''s not like your brother is using the bathroom while you shower, is he?"'
 				if brothershowertalk > 0:
 					'Your face feels hot as you think about all the times you''ve let Kolka in while you were showering and quickly move to hide it by taking a gulp of wine. Fortunately, Albina takes your silence for a victory.'
 					'"You need to start thinking with your dick, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she giggles giddily as she takes another sloppy slurp of wine.'
 				else
 					'You frown, wanting to come up with an argument against her, but she has an undeniable point. Albina takes your silence for a victory.'
-					'"You need to start thinking with your dick, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she giggles giddily as she takes another sloppyof wine.'
+					'"You need to start thinking with your dick, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she giggles giddily as she takes another sip of wine.'
 				end
 				gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 			end
@@ -498,7 +498,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'porn_talk':
 		act 'Vanilla porn':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Just vanilla stuff," you shrug. "Blowjob, some fucking, finish with a facial. That''s enough for me to get off."'
-			'"Boooooorriiiing!" she hollars at the top of her lungs.'
+			'"Boooooorriiiing!" she hollers at the top of her lungs.'
 			act 'Blush':
 				cla & *nl
 				'Your face flushes with heat unrelated to the wine.'
@@ -684,7 +684,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boob_size_talk':
 			gs 'albina_wine_event','large_tits'
 		else
 !!			$titsize = 'K cup'
-			'"Your tits are so fucking huge," Albina says while staring in wide eyed awe at your enormous breasts that hang above her. "How do you survive carrying those puppies around?"'
+			'"Your tits are so fucking huge," Albina says while staring in wide-eyed awe at your enormous breasts that hang above her. "How do you survive carrying those puppies around?"'
 			gs 'albina_wine_event','huge_tits'
 		end
 	end
@@ -772,7 +772,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'commando_talk':
 				'"That''s why I wear thongs," she smirks proudly. "All the ass, none of the slut shame."'
 				act'Maybe I should switch':
 					cla & *nl
-					'"Maybe I should switch," you mumble. "That sounds like a good in between."'
+					'"Maybe I should switch," you mumble. "That sounds like a good in-between."'
 					'"Yeah... Lemme see dat ass..."'
 					'"Albina, I''m already commando most days. You can see my ass whenever you want."'
 					'"But with a thong, it''s..." She trails off. "Fuck... What were we talking about?"'
@@ -830,7 +830,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stripper_talk':
 		'"<i>Bitchy?!</i>" she sputters.'
 		'"Yeah, too bitchy."'
 		'"What the fuck is that supposed to mean?"'
-		'"You''d rip the balls off the first guy who called you a slut," you say matter of factly. "You couldn''t put up with enough bullshit to be a stripper."'
+		'"You''d rip the balls off the first guy who called you a slut," you say matter-of-factly. "You couldn''t put up with enough bullshit to be a stripper."'
 		'"...Fuck."'
 		'"See? Bitchy," you smile before smugly sipping your wine.'
 		'"Oh fuck off," she grumbles back and takes a much bigger gulp.'
@@ -893,7 +893,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat2':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 		'With Albina right on your lap, you find your thoughts drifting to her mother. Her hair, her facial structure, she really is her mother''s daughter. It''s easy to tell where she got her good looks from.'
 		*nl
-		'"Your mom is fucking hot," you blurt out, autocompleting your thoughts before it finishes passing through your brain. You freeze in panic.'
+		'"Your mom is fucking hot," you blurt out, auto-completing your thoughts before it finishes passing through your brain. You freeze in panic.'
 		'"I <i>know!</i>" Albina whines beneath you. "I got ass for days, but she''s gots tits to match. Big bootyful bouncy fucking tits that give her cleavage in a motherfucking t-shirt. <i>And</i> a great ass! Life is so un-fucking-fair!"'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
 	end
@@ -929,7 +929,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat2':
 					gs 'stat'
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
-					'Despite her supposed acceptance, it''s easy to tell that Albina is trying to be stoic, covering up for the still-open wounds inside her. Taking her head in your arm, you pull her close against your chest. She stiffens at your touch, but slowly loosens up, closing her eyes and nuzzling her face into your breasts. The two of you sit like this for a few minutes and when you finally release her, a real smile is spread across her face.'
+					'Despite her supposed acceptance, it''s easy to tell that Albina is trying to be stoic, covering up for the still-open wounds inside her. Taking her head in your arms, you pull her close against your chest. She stiffens at your touch, but slowly loosens up, closing her eyes and nuzzling her face into your breasts. The two of you sit like this for a few minutes and when you finally release her, a real smile is spread across her face.'
 					*nl
 					'No further words are necessary between you.'
 					act 'Continue': gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
@@ -973,7 +973,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masturbate_answer2':
 	act 'Showerhead':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
-		'"In the shower usually," you say. "Lots of privacy, can take my time, and I can use the showerhead. The pressure on my clit never fails to get me off."'
+		'"In the shower usually," you say. "Lots of privacy can take my time, and I can use the showerhead. The pressure on my clit never fails to get me off."'
 		'"A good showerhead is a girl''s best friend," she nods.'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 	end
@@ -992,7 +992,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masturbate_answer2':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 			'"I use a dildo too," you say. "But not on my ass. And I usually do it in the shower."'
 			'"Oh, you''ve got a shower dildo too?"'
-			'"Yeah. Showering is a good time for it. Privacy, can take my time, and I can use the showerhead to make it even better."'
+			'"Yeah. Showering is a good time for it. Privacy can take my time, and I can use the showerhead to make it even better."'
 			'"Mmmm..." She rubs her thighs together unconsciously. "I love that too. Except I-"'
 			'"Shove it up your ass, yeah yeah," you interrupt.'
 			'"Aww, you know me so well!" she drunkenly giggles.'
@@ -1015,7 +1015,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_answer1':
 		cla & *nl
 		'You hum in agreement while you take another sip of wine.'
 		'"I''s sho itchy," you mumble around the glass.'
-		'"<i>Right?!</i>" she says, sitting up to look at you with wide exhasperated eyes before laying her head back down on your lap.'
+		'"<i>Right?!</i>" she says, sitting up to look at you with wide exasperated eyes before laying her head back down on your lap.'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
 	end
 	
@@ -1027,10 +1027,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_answer1':
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
 	end
 	
-	act 'Easy maintanence':
+	act 'Easy maintenance':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"Mmmm," you hum in agreement while you take another sip of wine.'
-		'"I''s defini''ly eashier tha ''ay," you mumble around the glass. "I have no patience for styling down there. Easier to shuck it all off. Don''t know why they all don''t do the same."'
+		'"I''s definitely easier tha ''ay," you mumble around the glass. "I have no patience for styling down there. Easier to shuck it all off. Don''t know why they all don''t do the same."'
 		'"Shaving is a pretty annoying chore," she agrees. "But that''s not what I mean. It''s just so <i>fucking itchy!</i>"'
 		'She scowls while looking between her legs, seemingly disgusted at the mere thought of hair growing between them.'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
@@ -1101,7 +1101,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_answer5':
 	
 	act 'Maybe I should try shaving':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"Hmmm, you might have a point," you muse. "You look pretty sexy all clean shaven down there. Maybe I should try it some time," you mumble before taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside it.'
+		'"Hmmm, you might have a point," you muse. "You look pretty sexy all clean-shaven down there. Maybe I should try it sometime," you mumble before taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside it.'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
 	end
 end
@@ -1258,11 +1258,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'small_tits':
 	act 'It bothers me a lot':
 		cla & *nl
 		if pcs_cupsize <= 5:
-			'"Of course it bothers me!" you say uncomfortably while looking down at your flat chest. "I''m flatter than drywall, Albina. Guys like big boobs, things they can grab and play with. At the least, they want a view. I can''t even give them that. I''m practically a boy!"'
+			'"Of course, it bothers me!" you say uncomfortably while looking down at your flat chest. "I''m flatter than drywall, Albina. Guys like big boobs, things they can grab and play with. At the least, they want a view. I can''t even give them that. I''m practically a boy!"'
 		elseif pcs_cupsize <= 10:
-			'"Of course it bothers me!" you say uncomfortably while looking down at your modest chest. "I barely have any curve to me. I wouldn''t have cleavage if I wore a V-neck down to my stomach. I see the looks that other girls get that I don''t. Including you!"'
+			'"Of course, it bothers me!" you say uncomfortably while looking down at your modest chest. "I barely have any curve to me. I wouldn''t have cleavage if I wore a V-neck down to my stomach. I see the looks that other girls get that I don''t. Including you!"'
 		else
-			'"Of course it bothers me!" you say uncomfortably while looking down at your modest chest. "Big boobs draw all the attention. They''re so much hotter than small boobs."'
+			'"Of course, it bothers me!" you say uncomfortably while looking down at your modest chest. "Big boobs draw all the attention. They''re so much hotter than small boobs."'
 		end
 		'"It''s the worst when I''m with Irina and Bella," she mumbles, a furious blush spreading through her cheeks. "But even nerdy Natasha has bigger tits than us. It drives me crazy!"'
 		
@@ -1355,7 +1355,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'like_your_boobs':
 		'"But big boobs are sexier!" she moans. "It''s not fair! I want big tits!"'
 		act 'Your boobs are perfect':
 			cla & *nl
-			'"Well <i>I</i> think your boobs are perfect," you say above Albina''s loud tantruming. "You should learn to love them too."'
+			'"Well <i>I</i> think your boobs are perfect," you say above Albina''s loud tantrum. "You should learn to love them too."'
 			gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 		end
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
@@ -1376,7 +1376,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mom_boobs':
 	act 'Is this because of your mom?':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
-		'You stare at Albina for a moment, judging her exppression, peering deep into her psyche.'
+		'You stare at Albina for a moment, judging her expression, peering deep into her psyche.'
 		*nl
 		'"Is this because your mom has big boobs?" you blurt out.'
 		'"No!" she says immediately and her face grows even more red.'
@@ -1436,15 +1436,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boob_play':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/boob_play.jpg"></center>'
 			'You silently nod down at her and your nipple immediately tingles with pleasure as you feel her pierced tongue start working circles over it.'
-			'After a few seconds of this, she takes your breast into her mouth and starts sucking on it while continuing to lick your now rock hard nipple and using her free hand to keep squeezing your other breast. You moan softly in pleasure as she expertly teases you.'
+			'After a few seconds of this, she takes your breast into her mouth and starts sucking on it while continuing to lick your now rock-hard nipple and using her free hand to keep squeezing your other breast. You moan softly in pleasure as she expertly teases you.'
 			if pregchem >= 4380:
-				'As your pleasure builds, you feel something else and realise too late that Albina''s actions have caused you to start lactating! You''re unable to pull away before breast milk starts spurting out of you - and into her mouth.'
+				'As your pleasure builds, you feel something else and realize too late that Albina''s actions have caused you to start lactating! You''re unable to pull away before breast milk starts spurting out of you - and into her mouth.'
 				'You quickly pull away. "Oh my god! Albina, I''m so sorry! I didn''t mean to do that!" you say in a panic and feel your face turning red as Albina turns her head and spits your milk out.'
 				'"Calm down <<$pcs_nickname>>, it wasn''t your fault. I should''ve expected it considering your... condition," she replies before a grin appears on her lips. "It was actually kind of hot."'
 				'You still feel a little embarrassed as you untangle yourselves from each other and Albina cleans herself up before you both grab your glasses and snuggle down on the couch together.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'albina_wine_event', 'end'
 			else
-				'You feel your pleasure slowly building as Albina continues playing with your nipple, but she abruptly, and rather teasingly, stops just as it''s getting good. You pull away and look down to see her smiling up at you. "Have fun?" you ask with a grin.'
+				'You feel your pleasure slowly building as Albina continues playing with your nipple, but she abruptly, and rather teasingly stops just as it''s getting good. You pull away and look down to see her smiling up at you. "Have fun?" you ask with a grin.'
 				'"That was so fucking hot!" she replies with a giggle. "Your tits are amazing! I could suck on them all day!"'
 				'"You can suck on these puppies whenever you feel like it," you giggle back before you untangle yourselves from each other and grab your glasses before snuggling down on the couch together.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'albina_wine_event', 'end'
@@ -1479,7 +1479,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/kitchen.jpg"></center>'
 		'"What the hell do you think you''re doing, young lady?!" Zoya asks before grabbing Albina by the ear and yanking her to her feet. "Drunk in the middle of the day?! And while <i>naked</i>?!"'
-		'"Ow! Ow ow ow ow ow!" Albina whines in pain while standing on her tip toes trying to escape her mother''s grasp. "We''re just having some fun! Lay off Mama!"'
+		'"Ow! Ow ow ow ow ow!" Albina whines in pain while standing on her tiptoes trying to escape her mother''s grasp. "We''re just having some fun! Lay off Mama!"'
 		'Zoya ignores her pleas. "I thought even you had better sense than this, Albina!"'
 		'"What are you gonna do? <i>Spank me</i>?" Albina glares back rebelliously. "Don''t be such a bitch!"'
 		'"What did you just say to me?!" Zoya sputters before she drags Albina off towards the stairs, howls of pain following. "I am your <i>mother</i>! I will not tolerate such disrespect!"' 

locations/albinahome.qsrc

@@ -197,7 +197,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bedroom':
 		if month >=11 or month <=3:
             AlbinaQW['activities'] = rand(1,3)
             if AlbinaQW['activities'] = 1:
-                gt'albina_house_events','swim_winter1'
+                gt 'albina_house_events', 'swim_winter1'
             end
         end
 		if AlbinaQW['extra'] ! daystart: 
@@ -250,7 +250,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dancing':
 			'"Eyes up here, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Anyway, if you want, I could teach you about stripping and pole dancing?"'
 			act 'No thanks': AlbinaQW['SportDay'] = daystart & gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 			act 'Teach me stripping': gt 'albinahome', 'stripping'
-			act 'Teach me poledancing': gt 'albinahome', 'poledancing'
+			act 'Teach me pole-dancing': gt 'albinahome', 'poledancing'
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/train.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dancing':
 		'She smiles at you. "Well? Want me to teach you some things?"'
 		act 'No thanks': AlbinaQW['SportDay'] = daystart & gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 		act 'Teach me stripping': gt 'albinahome', 'stripping'
-		act 'Teach me poledancing': gt 'albinahome', 'poledancing'
+		act 'Teach me pole-dancing': gt 'albinahome', 'poledancing'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -610,7 +610,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'receive_strapon':
 		'After a few minutes, Albina moves on with her lesson. "Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, you ready?" she asks and you nod your head. "Okay. Start off with a little teasing. Run your tongue around the tip while jerking them off."'
 		'You do as she says and she makes you look up at her. "Eye contact, <<$pcs_nickname>>. They like that." You nod at her and look her in the eye as you continue jerking off her fake cock. "Good. Now some guys like taking control, but only let them do that if it''s what you want. That''s enough teasing anyway. Now I want you take as much of the shaft into your mouth as you can."' 
 		*nl
-		'You obdiently take as much of the dildo into your mouth as you can without choking. "Good," Albina says. "Now start bobbing your head up and down; imagine that you''re sucking on a popsicle while swirling your tongue around the head. And keep using your hand."'
+		'You obediently take as much of the dildo into your mouth as you can without choking. "Good," Albina says. "Now start bobbing your head up and down; imagine that you''re sucking on a popsicle while swirling your tongue around the head. And keep using your hand."'
 		'You spend the next few minutes practicing on the dildo until your arm and jaw start to ache and you stop. You pop the dildo out of your mouth and look up at Albina, who smiles. "You''re a natural, <<$pcs_nickname>>! If I had a dick, then my cum would be all over your face by now."'
 		'You smile at the compliment. "Time for me to fuck you now," Albina says with a grin.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
@@ -833,7 +833,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal_refuse':
 	'Albina smiles. "That''s okay, but if you want to do it with me or want some advice, then just ask. It''s best to get help from someone with... experience on the matter," she says with a grin.'
 	'You grin back. "I''ll be sure to ask the master buttslut for any of her wisdom."'
 	'She punches you in the arm. "Damn right you will."'
-	act 'Do something else' :gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
+	act 'Do something else': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_finish':
@@ -858,7 +858,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_finish':
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Finish' :gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
+		act 'Finish': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 	end
 end
 

locations/alexandriaChat.qsrc

@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		elseif random_event = 28:
 			'"That sound strange. Romantic, but strange."'
 			'Aleksei tries to stop himself from showing a smug smile by hitting his cigarette, but it''s evident in his tone that he is failing.'
-			'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, I must admit. Dancing under the moonlight to the sound of <i>Por Una Cabeza</i> with a thousand year old dead princess is difficult to surpass."'
+			'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, I must admit. Dancing under the moonlight to the sound of <i>Por Una Cabeza</i> with a thousand-year-old dead princess is difficult to surpass."'
 
 		elseif random_event = 29:
 			'"So... If secret global conspiracies like The Council and The Veil are a reality, there must be others out there, like the MIB and Area 51."'
@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 
 		elseif random_event = 30:
 			'"That sounds a lot like the A-Team."'
-			'Aleksei raises a hand in a dismissing gesture, only to stop halfway as realization crossing his eyes.'
+			'Aleksei raises a hand in a dismissing gesture, only to stop halfway as realization crosses his eyes.'
 			'"I suppose? I can see the similarities, <<$pcs_lastname>>. A Warband of brothers always on the road, enemies at our back and new horrors in the future. Obviously, it wasn''t as romantic as it sounds, but... my friends would have loved that comparison."'
 		end
 
@@ -228,9 +228,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'magic':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Aleksei</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/chair.jpg"></center>'
-			'"At its most basic, schools and arts are academic disciplines that help a wizard learn how to manipulate mana and cast spells. As all crafts in our world, most wizards need to specialize to attain any measure of power, truly multi-mathematical masters are unheard of."'
+			'"At its most basic, schools and arts are academic disciplines that help a wizard learn how to manipulate mana and cast spells. As with all crafts in our world, most wizards need to specialize to attain any measure of power, truly multi-mathematical masters are unheard of."'
 			'"Magic schools are general areas where magic seems to work without clear limits, and beyond some basic spells that form their core teachings, a wizard can pass hundreds of years exploring its applications. The schools are Air, Earth, Electric, Fire and Water"'
-			'"Arts, on the other hand, are more specialized, without the academic deepness and power than the schools'' possess. However, they are less mana exhausting, with an undetermined number of specializations. As a clarification, the term <i>minor</i> is a misnomer used by the uneducated. The arts are in itself powerful tools, and their lower mana cost compared with the schools make them more attractive to the less powerful of our brethren. As an example, your acquaintance that practices the flesh-crafting or body-modding art."'
+			'"Arts, on the other hand, are more specialized, without the academic deepness and power that the schools'' possess. However, they are less mana exhausting, with an undetermined number of specializations. As a clarification, the term <i>minor</i> is a misnomer used by the uneducated. The arts are in themselves powerful tools, and their lower mana cost compared with the schools makes them more attractive to the less powerful of our brethren. As an example, your acquaintance that practices the flesh-crafting or body-modding art."'
 
 			act 'Continue talking about magic':gt 'alexandriaChat',	'magic'
 
@@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'magic':
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'"The so-called mutants and psychics, if we must use a modern vulgarism, form an interesting phenomenon in The Council''s periphery. They are normally grouped under The Wizards'' chair, as they lack magical power or a unifying agenda."'
-			'"Mutants are in general any lifeform that has been altered through magical means that let them perceive beyond The Veil. You and I aren''t considered mutants because our magical talents give us full-wizard status. Those that lack magical talent fall into this category. Beyond that, there isn''t a unifying factor, as mutants can go from wretched beings that must be euthanized to erase their suffering, to the more... <i>fortunate</i> that win some magical enhancements, like your acquaintance, Gustav."'
+			'"Mutants are in general any lifeform that has been altered through magical means that let them perceive beyond The Veil. You and I aren''t considered mutants because our magical talents give us full-wizard status. Those, that lack magical talent fall into this category. Beyond that, there isn''t a unifying factor, as mutants can go from wretched beings that must be euthanized to erase their suffering, to the more... <i>fortunate</i> that win some magical enhancements, like your acquaintance, Gustav."'
 			'"Psychics, on the other hand, are the brown dwarfs of the magical world. Born with enough magic to see beyond The Veil, but lacking enough strength to manipulate mana, At best, they will have some minor magical talents, like seeing the dead, talking to goldfish or predicting the weather."'
 			'"Mutants and Psychics live in a nebulous zone on the edge of The Veil, their relationship with both sides varying in a case-by-case scenario. Most of them live relatively normal lives, beyond the interest of The Council. Of course, there are exceptions that, for one reason or another, end up entangled in magical matters, but they are the exceptions to the rule."'
 
@@ -287,8 +287,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'magic':
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'"The Veil is a global, self-sustained, delusional magical effect that hijacks the pattern recognization capacity on the mundanes'' brains, so the affected look for alternative explanations to any perceived magical event. As this method isn''t perfect, there is a veritable risk that continued exposure to magic will damage the mental health of any given observer. As a side note, The Veil only affects humans."'
-			'"The original proposal came from the High Sidhe around the 10th century, who wanted to <i>veil</i> their holdings from mundane influence, and promised magical knowledge and gifts to those that helped them. From this came a centuries-long collaboration between hundreds of high-level wizards, me and Rikudo included, that ended with decades-long rituals. Around 1350, The Veil was fully functional, and we began to see the unwanted side-effects."'
-			'"What was the cause? Nobody is sure, the most likely are that we somehow exceeded our goals or that somebody altered the ritual. The most likely candidates were the High Sidhe or Rikudo, but nobody is sure."'
+			'"The original proposal came from the High Sidhe around the 10th century, who wanted to <i>veil</i> their holdings from mundane influences and promised magical knowledge and gifts to those that helped them. From this came a centuries-long collaboration between hundreds of high-level wizards, me and Rikudo included, that ended with decades-long rituals. Around 1350, The Veil was fully functional, and we began to see the unwanted side-effects."'
+			'"What was the cause? Nobody is sure, the most likely cause is, that we somehow exceeded our goals or that somebody altered the ritual. The most likely candidates were the High Sidhe or Rikudo, but nobody is sure."'
 			'"And to end, the answer to the questions all youngsters ask; Yes, we can take down The Veil, but it would require a significant effort similar to its creation as a rushed job would have apocalyptic consequences and there isn''t political support in The Council for this idea. The reason for this is that most of us see The Veil as actually being a good thing. We, the wizards, can continue our quest for knowledge without the pestering masses interfering. As for them, look at what humanity has achieved after the European Renaissance. What new peaks will they reach now that we have distracted them with quantum theory?"'
 
 			act 'Continue talking about magic':gt 'alexandriaChat',	'magic'
@@ -311,7 +311,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'magic':
 
 				'Even with the evident derision in Aleksei''s words, you don''t feel any hostility against The Succubae.'
 
-				'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, it''s obvious that I don''t exactly approve your new... <i>lifestyle</i>, but like others, Succubae are chained by their own needs, so I try to be sympathetic. No... What I don''t like is that most of your brethren seem to lose sight of the extraordinary powers they inherit in a quest for more... decadent experiences. You''re probably waiting for me to spill some of their secrets, but I''m not going to do that. Your trickster is doing the work for me, but I will tell you a tidbit."'
+				'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, it''s obvious that I don''t exactly approve of your new... <i>lifestyle</i>, but like others, Succubae are chained by their own needs, so I try to be sympathetic. No... What I don''t like is that most of your brethren seem to lose sight of the extraordinary powers they inherit in a quest for more... decadent experiences. You''re probably waiting for me to spill some of their secrets, but I''m not going to do that. Your trickster is doing the work for me, but I will tell you a tidbit."'
 				'"Thanks to an ancient curse, The Succubae are chained to The High Sidhe reproductive cycle. That is what gives you an extraordinary leeway and let your brethren act like royalty. Some try to act on that like idealized <i>Faeric Ladies</i>, but most fail, enjoying the perks but ignoring any responsibility, and this is a potential danger, and opportunity, for you."'
 				'"You have suddenly entered an exclusive club, jumping the figurative line, and most Succubae will react to that, in diverse, sometimes dangerous ways. At least until they find the next shiny toy, leaving you in that nebulous place between where those on their way up meet those on their way down, a place of vast potential."'
 
@@ -363,7 +363,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'people':
 			'The mere mention of that name makes Aleksei grit his teeth, and his posture grows more tense.'
 			'"Rikudo... No name in this world can fill my heart with so much hate... The creator of The Talisman of Power, an item destined to give the <i>man</i> that acquired it, powers beyond the reach of the High Sidhe... Hmpf... I believed myself smarter than that supreme trickster, and in my hubris, ended up cursed to be a <i>woman</i> and have my prize forever beyond my reach."'
 			'Aleksei drags his cigarette, trying to calm himself, but the vitriol soon returns to his voice.'
-			'"So, you want information about him/her/it/them? There isn''t any... Rikudo is an enigma, the essence of chaos, one of the <i>old guard</i> appearing and disappearing randomly, wearing many masks, and helping or hindering us in aid of an unknown goal. Some call Rikudo the Keyser Soze of the magical world, and doubt its existence. Some youngsters even look at him as some kind of Promethean figure. You want my opinion <<$pcs_lastname>>?"'
+			'"So, you want information about him/her/it/them? There isn''t any... Rikudo is an enigma, the essence of chaos, one of the <i>old guards</i> appearing and disappearing randomly, wearing many masks, and helping or hindering us in aid of an unknown goal. Some call Rikudo the Keyser Soze of the magical world and doubt its existence. Some youngsters even look at him as some kind of Promethean figure. You want my opinion <<$pcs_lastname>>?"'
 			'He then looks at you fiercely, making you shiver under his gaze.'
 			'"Rikudo is real! Very real. I have met <i>HIM</i>, been tricked by <i>HER</i>, been cursed by <i>IT</i> and even killed a pair of <i>THEM</i>. There will be a reckoning someday and Rikudo''s name will be erased by my hand, but until that time, if you hear about Rikudo, just run and pray that you don''t end up entangled in another of Rikudo''s mad schemes."'
 
@@ -380,7 +380,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'people':
 			'"Let''s begin with some basic information <<$pcs_lastname>>. Reinhold is a high-level agent for The Council, under the aegis of The Wizards'' chair, who has been lucky enough to claim oversight over your case. He isn''t only a master of the Time art, but a hero in every definition of the term, as he has fought against forces beyond the mouth of madness and won. We made the same oaths to protect the inhabitants of this world, and even if we don''t see them in the same light, he has won my respect."'
 			'Aleksei bends slightly towards you, with a conspiratory smile.'
 			'"And here is the part where I take away the blindfold from your eyes and explain some details. Reinhold is playing with your welfare. His intentions maybe altruistic, but most people will only see him trying to disrupt The Council''s status quo in favor of The Wizards'' chair. The problem? Reinhold has decided on a hands-off approach where any magical knowledge can only be filtered down through his apprentice, limiting your growth, and making you... less desirable to the powers-that-be. That plan has imploded, but what hasn''t changed is that you are mostly alone, as nobody is going to risk a confrontation to save you from any mismatch you can walk uninformed."'
-			'After saying this, he reclines in his chair, letting smoke drift from his nostrils like an ancient dragon.'
+			'After saying this, he reclines in his chair, letting the smoke drift from his nostrils like an ancient dragon.'
 			'"What do you think about your <i>handler''s</i> actions <<$pcs_lastname>>?"'
 
 			act 'Continue talking about people':gt 'alexandriaChat', 'people'
@@ -397,7 +397,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'people':
 			'Sarcasm drips from his voice as Aleksei lets you know his feelings for Tatiana.'
 			'"I suppose that we can lose some semi-valuable minutes talking about your <i>teacher</i>. She is Reinhold''s apprentice, older than she looks, a flesh crafter and a trickster, or... pardon me... a <i>body modding wizard</i> and <i>prankster</i>... and now we can jump to a more in-depth analysis."'
 			'Aleksei pauses to put the now burned-out cigarette in an ashtray, and lights another before continuing.'
-			'"That woman''s limited magical potential makes her a little bird under the wing of a bigger one, and smart enough to not make waves so more powerful predators evade her for fear of Reinhold''s retribution, but she is ambitious and wants more. Her plan to use her meretrix arts to entice Reinhold and use him for her own advancement has failed, but now she has another opportunity in you. That woman is leeching your magical power to raise her own at the same time. She latches to your case, waiting for an opportunity to advance in status. Under other circumstances, I would applaud her ambition, but she is a trickster, and they don''t understand anything about loyalty or morals. Her betrayal is inevitable, so remember to keep your friends close and her closer."'
+			'"That woman''s limited magical potential makes her a little bird under the wing of a bigger one, and smart enough to not make waves so more powerful predators evade her for fear of Reinhold''s retribution, but she is ambitious and wants more. Her plan to use her charms to entice Reinhold and use him for her own advancement has failed, but now she has another opportunity in you. That woman is leeching your magical power to raise her own at the same time. She latches to your case, waiting for an opportunity to advance in status. Under other circumstances, I would applaud her ambition, but she is a trickster, and they don''t understand anything about loyalty or morals. Her betrayal is inevitable, so remember to keep your friends close and her closer."'
 
 			act 'Continue talking about people':gt 'alexandriaChat', 'people'
 
@@ -411,8 +411,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'people':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, you must understand this. Civilizations have risen and crumbled, history made and forgotten, but The Council has existed in one form or another under the High Sidhe leadership from as early as the last glacial period. They have rewritten history, altered landscapes and are behind the greatest lie ever created. Impressive feats for an organization to which the average wizard only gives lip service."'
 			'Aleksei reclines in his chair and looks to the ceiling before continuing.'
-			'"The Council is supposed to be a democratic quorum for the magically gifted, a place to settle disputes without bloodshed and a bridle for the unruly horse that is the standard wizard. It''s divided into Chairs that represent and care for the needs of specific magical subspecies, the most promiment The High Sidhe, <i>primus inter pares</i> with the right to veto, but largely uncaring about political affairs. The Succubae happily try to reign in their place wit great opposition from The Wizards, the most numerous group. In short terms, The Council is the governing body of the magical world."'
-			'He sighs. "I may sound bitter, but my tenure with them wasn''t happy. Like all governments, The Council is a cesspool of drama and backroom deals, a place for the undistinguished penpushers of our society to feel important. My job was going from crisis to crisis without help or acknowledgement, siphoning away my resources and time from more worthy undertakings. In the end, I quit without remorse."'
+			'"The Council is supposed to be a democratic quorum for the magically gifted, a place to settle disputes without bloodshed and a bridle for the unruly horse that is the standard wizard. It''s divided into Chairs that represent and care for the needs of specific magical subspecies, the most prominent The High Sidhe, <i>primus inter pares</i> with the right to veto, but largely uncaring about political affairs. The Succubae happily try to reign in their place with great opposition from The Wizards, the most numerous group. In short terms, The Council is the governing body of the magical world."'
+			'He sighs. "I may sound bitter, but my tenure with them wasn''t happy. Like all governments, The Council is a cesspool of drama and backroom deals, a place for the undistinguished penpushers of our society to feel important. My job was going from crisis to crisis without help or acknowledgment, siphoning away my resources and time from more worthy undertakings. In the end, I quit without remorse."'
 			'"In general, I must say that the common wizard doesn''t care or even give any thought about their decisions, and beyond maintaining The Veil or stopping Existential Threats, The Council tends to delegate any policing action to the local magical or mundane authority. This is something that you youngsters must understand, The Council WILL NOT intervene to save the miscreants from any lynching mob triggered by their foolishness, not even you <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
 
 			act 'Continue talking about people':gt 'alexandriaChat', 'people'
@@ -427,16 +427,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'people':
 			gs 'stat'
 			if succubusQW > 4:
 				'"Your <i>Queen</i>? Conqueror of high and low beds? You want to know about your clique''s role model?"'
-				'You lick your dry lips at the word <i>Queen</i>, your instinct telling you that this title would be better attached at your name, and whatever Aleksei can tell you about The Lilith could be useful to take it for your own.'
+				'You lick your dry lips at the word <i>Queen</i>, your instinct telling you that this title would be better attached to your name, and whatever Aleksei can tell you about The Lilith could be useful to take it for your own.'
 
 			else
 				'"Ah yes, the self-proclaimed <i>Queen</i> of the Succubae, conqueror of high and low beds. Why can''t you youngsters think with something above your waist?"'
 				'You lick your dry lips as Aleksei''s words trigger your memories of the alien woman, something in the back of your head wanting to know everything about the Faeric lady.'
 			end
 
-			'He sighs. "Well, the first thing you must to know is how seriously she takes her duties in The Council, as that name is a joke. Somebody began to use it around two hundred years ago and it stuck. Childishly, I assume, because it sounds somewhat <i>mystical</i> to the bunch of hicks that run towards her so-called <i>court</i> but let''s be merciful. It''s evident that trying to reign over her notoriously unruly sisterhood is a hard job, so she passes the days <i>socializing</i> and <i>entertaining</i> The High Sidhe, milking their influence and trying to convince them to break the chains that their ancestors, in all their wisdom, imposed on the Succubae."'
+			'He sighs. "Well, the first thing you must know is how seriously she takes her duties in The Council, as that name is a joke. Somebody began to use it around two hundred years ago and it stuck. Childishly, I assume, because it sounds somewhat <i>mystical</i> to the bunch of hicks that run towards her so-called <i>court</i> but let''s be merciful. It''s evident that trying to reign over her notoriously unruly sisterhood is a hard job, so she passes the days <i>socializing</i> and <i>entertaining</i> The High Sidhe, milking their influence and trying to convince them to break the chains that their ancestors, in all their wisdom, imposed on the Succubae."'
 			'Woah, that sounds bitter, and it seems that he hasn''t stopped.'
-			'"So now I explain where she offended me on a personal level. During my tenure, she was constantly dismissing my efforts, ignoring Rikudo''s threat and loading me with the jobs that nobody seemed to like. That I can understand, in the sort of backstabbing atmosphere The Council seems to promote. My problem is that she dismissed my curse, as that <i>name</i>... Alexandria... was her idea!"'
+			'"So now I explain where she offended me on a personal level. During my tenure, she was constantly dismissing my efforts, ignoring Rikudo''s threat and loading me with jobs that nobody seemed to like. That I can understand, in the sort of backstabbing atmosphere The Council seems to promote. My problem is that she dismissed my curse, as that <i>name</i>... Alexandria... was her idea!"'
 
 			act 'Continue talking about people':gt 'alexandriaChat', 'people'
 
@@ -450,9 +450,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'people':
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, <i>Est potentia ex testamento</i>, was the motto from the honorably disbandment <i>Council Army Forces</i>, a force that i have the privilege to command."'
-				'Aleksei smile at those words, obviously they mean much for him, and during a long moment, he looks to the ceiling lost in his thoughts, before continuing.'
+				'Aleksei smile at those words obviously, they mean much to him, and during a long moment, he looks to the ceiling lost in his thoughts, before continuing.'
 				'"I will not explain in deep all the details, <<$pcs_lastname>>, but what I will give you is this: We were the iron fist of The Council, enforcers of their will, and for a thousand years, the <i>Creme de la creme</i> of the world military forces. We used all to win, martial training, the last technology, and the more powerful magics all bend to our will to spill the blood of our enemies. I will not taint our history with lies, we did some of the most atrocious war crimes in the name of the uncaring High Sidhe, but thanks to us, today there are a lot fewer monsters waiting in the shadows of the world."'
-				'He takes a deep drag from his cigarette, a proud smirk in his lips that soon turns in a gesture of absolute ruthlessness.'
+				'He takes a deep drag from his cigarette, a proud smirk on his lips that soon turns into a gesture of absolute ruthlessness.'
 				'"I must say <<$pcs_lastname>>, that that girl, has committed a serious mistake taking our legacy in vain, as even now, decades after our disbandment, those words - <i>Est potentia ex testamento</i> - carry a lot of weight in our corner of the world."'
 
 				act 'Continue talking about people':gt 'alexandriaChat', 'people'
@@ -520,7 +520,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'electric1':
 
 	else
 		'"Yes, I will teach you, but remember that this is a <i>Quid pro quo</i> thing, so don''t make me regret it."'
-		'Aleksei opens a drawer and pulls out some papers that he silently reads before sighing in exasperation and look at you.'
+		'Aleksei opens a drawer and pulls out some papers that he silently reads before sighing in exasperation and looking at you.'
 	end
 
 	'"Reinhold had the initiative to send some interesting data about your training <<$pcs_lastname>>. I don''t know why he tolerates this nonsense as the teaching technique of his ex-apprentice is obviously sub-par. That or they are actively stalling your growth, so you are chained to them. Of course, in the likely event that both theories are true, you are fortunate to have found me."'
@@ -610,7 +610,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'electric3':
 		
 		'Aleksei is silent at your question, looking at you with curiosity "You dodn''t know... Isn''t it <<$pcs_lastname>>?"'
 		'"Know what? Is there a problem?"'
-		'An amused smirk creeps into Aleksei face as he deign to answer "<<$pcs_lastname>>, that depend on your point of view at the prospect of being pregnant."'
+		'An amused smirk creeps into Aleksei''s face as he deigns to answer "<<$pcs_lastname>>, that depends on your point of view at the prospect of being pregnant."'
 		'You take a moment to process those words. Are you really with child? Well... it seems that you must ask for a medical appointment.'
 		
 		act 'Talk about other things': thinkpreg = 1 & knowpreg = 1 & minut += 5 & gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'
@@ -650,8 +650,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
         gs 'stat'
         '<center><b><font color="maroon">Aleksei</font></b></center>'
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/alexandria3.jpg"></center>'
-        '"It''s seems that Mr.Kudashov, has put it in a security box and... well... sold the key to a woman called Ana, and... she had challenged me for it possession..."'
-        'You grimace as those words fill the room, and a suddenly very tense Aleksei, raise an eyelid. The next moments lengthening as you can feel the wizard''s displeasure.'
+        '"It''s seems that Mr.Kudashov, has put it in a security box and... well... sold the key to a woman called Ana, and... she had challenged me for its possession..."'
+        'You grimace as those words fill the room, and a suddenly very tense Aleksei, raises an eyelid. The next moments lengthen as you can feel the wizard''s displeasure.'
         '"Interesting, <<$pcs_lastname>>. Please, explain to me in detail what happened."'
         'You... follow with your <i>encounter</i> with Filipp Kudashov, his double cross, and finally Ana''s call. During it, he takes out a tablet and seems to look for something, and even when you end your tale, he takes some minutes loss in... whatever he is doing.'
         '"Ehm... what now?"'
@@ -668,9 +668,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/saber.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you deliver those words, Aleksei put a package over his desk, and begin to open it. Inside, shrouded in red cloth, is the sword.'
 		'"Yes, <<$pcs_lastname>>, let''s talk about this sword, that that little nuisance has sent me with a detailed and <i>colurfull</i> description of your actions."'
-		'You freeze, as Aleksei fix his gaze into yours... He seems <i>superficially</i> calm, but if eyes are a window to the soul... Well... It has been good to know you <<$pcs_nickname>>.'
-		'"Let''s be clear <<$pcs_lastname>>. I am old, I know betrayal in all forms and colors, and even with that, it always surprises me human pettiness... It seems that putting my confidence in you, was... unwise. In time you will help me to find those who are behind this travesty, but until then, our <i>study methodology</i> must be re-evaluated."'
-		'He then, stand up and walking menacingly behind you... put his hands over your shoulders... and let fall into your hands some leather straps...'
+		'You freeze, as Aleksei fixes his gaze into yours... He seems <i>superficially</i> calm, but if eyes are a window to the soul... Well... It has been good to know you <<$pcs_nickname>>.'
+		'"Let''s be clear <<$pcs_lastname>>. I am old, I know betrayal in all forms and colors, and even with that, it always surprises me, human pettiness... It seems that putting my confidence in you was... unwise. In time you will help me to find those who are behind this travesty, but until then, our <i>study methodology</i> must be re-evaluated."'
+		'He then, stands up and walks menacingly behind you... put his hands over your shoulders... and let fall into your hands some leather straps...'
 		'"Let''s start now <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
 
 		act 'There is no escape': gt 'alexandriaSex', 'grumpy2'
@@ -683,9 +683,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
 		'As you deliver those words, Aleksei put a package over his desk, and begin to open it. Inside, shrouded in red cloth, is the sword.'
 		'"Yes, <<$pcs_lastname>>, let''s talk about this sword, that that little nuisance has sent me with a detailed and <i>colurfull</i> description of your actions."'
 		'You can only frown in silence at the item, that has given you so many troubles, from your silent reaction, Aleksei, take advantage dragging into his cigar and continuing.'
-		'"This, <<$pcs_lastname>>, is war. Let me explain something to you, people like me are just plain simple too powerful. When there is some kind of irreparable rift between parties, we can''t just sort this out with a backstreet brawl... too much collateral damage... That is a reason for The Council continued existence, but not all of us accept their arbitration... and some of the most imaginative of our brethren, resort to these acts of pettiness to settle any perceived grievance."'
+		'"This, <<$pcs_lastname>>, is war. Let me explain something to you, people like me are just plain simply too powerful. When there is some kind of irreparable rift between parties, we can''t just sort this out with a backstreet brawl... too much collateral damage... That is a reason for The Council continued existence, but not all of us accept their arbitration... and some of the most imaginative of our brethren, resort to these acts of pettiness to settle any perceived grievance."'
 		'"Ok... so... what now?"'
-		'Alex rises from his chair and paces up and down around the room, seemingly lost in his thought before turning towards you and give an exasperated sigh.'
+		'Alex rises from his chair and paces up and down around the room, seemingly lost in his thought before turning towards you and giving an exasperated sigh.'
 		
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -693,7 +693,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Aleksei</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/alexandria2.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Now <<$pcs_lastname>>, i must search the miasma that are my so-called <i>enemies</i>, looking for the idiot that has decided to waste our precious time on this childish <i>attack</i>."'
+			'"Now <<$pcs_lastname>>, I must search the miasma that are my so-called <i>enemies</i>, looking for the idiot that has decided to waste our precious time on this childish <i>attack</i>."'
 			'"You don''t have an idea of who can be behind this?"'
 			'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, that isn''t the question, no, take this lesson to heart... When you are as old and powerful as I am, the problem is to crib through the cesspit of incompetence that rise regularly against you... is not that I don''t have an idea about who is behind this, no... my problem is that I have, <i>too many ideas</i>, but... let''s leave this for later, we must talk about your actions aftermatch."'
 			'Aleksei takes a long drag from his cigar, to calm himself before continuing.'
@@ -718,10 +718,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Aleksei</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/alexandria2.jpg"></center>'
-				'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, at risk to sound ill-bred, I want to ask you a question... Why you decided to lie with the little nuisance?"'
-				'The air freeze as he says those words, and you try to find a satisfactory answer, to the question asked by the irascible wizard. Fortunately, before you can mess this a little more, Aleksei, choose to throw you a bone.'
+				'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, at risk of sounding ill-bred, I want to ask you a question... Why you decided to lie with the little nuisance?"'
+				'The air freezes as he says those words, and you try to find a satisfactory answer, to the question asked by the irascible wizard. Fortunately, before you can mess this a little more, Aleksei, choose to throw you a bone.'
 				'"Ehm... <<$pcs_lastname>>, maybe you find my question... <i>inpropper</i>... is not like I want to be privy of your <i>affairs</i>, but that woman is an agent for, at the moment, a unknow enemy, whose objectives are at best nebulous."'
-				'Aleksei, then walk towards you, put his hands in your shoulders, and push you towards the studio''s exit.'
+				'Aleksei, then walk towards you, put his hands on your shoulders, and push you towards the studio''s exit.'
 				'"Is evident, that I must to up your training <<$pcs_lastname>>, first teaching you the secrets of the Lighting spell, and then helping you to take away the idea of another dalliance with that <i>woman</i>."'
 
 				act 'Follow your master': gt 'alexandriaSex', 'nice2'
@@ -734,8 +734,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/alexandria2.jpg"></center>'
 				'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, at risk to sound ill-bred, I want to ask you a question... Why you didn''t lie with the little nuisance?"'
 				'You look confused at the irascible wizard. "I was supposed to do it?" Aleksei locks his eyes on yours, as he stands there letting the cigar burn away.'
-				'"Of course no! <<$pcs_lastname>> you did the correct! I just thought that..." He stops in his track and seems to consider his answer before continuing. "Well <<$pcs_lastname>>, it doesn''t matters, is evident that as my apprentice you have the <i>Gravitas</i>, to do the correct and ignore the siren''s call from some loose moral woman, that obviously is working for one of my so-called enemies."'
-				'Aleksei, then walk towards you, put his hands in your shoulders, and lead you outside his home... towards a waiting limousine?'
+				'"Of course no! <<$pcs_lastname>> you did the correct! I just thought that..." He stops in his tracks and seems to consider his answer before continuing. "Well <<$pcs_lastname>>, it doesn''t matter, is evident that as my apprentice you have the <i>Gravitas</i>, to do the correct and ignore the siren''s call from some loose moral woman, that obviously is working for one of my so-called enemies."'
+				'Aleksei, then walk towards you, put his hands on your shoulders, and lead you outside his home... towards a waiting limousine?'
 				'"Is evident, that I must to up your training <<$pcs_lastname>>, teaching you the secrets of the Lighting spell, but first... I think a little shopping is necessary."'
 
 				act 'Mon Cheri?!':
@@ -743,8 +743,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
 					minut += 13
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/boutique/butik.jpg"></center>' 
-					'A silent and somewhat sullen Aleksei, take you in the limousine towards the city center and a... very high class <i>women</i>''s clothes boutique, the sort, that entertain the shoppers with champagne and have shoes in the one hundred thousands rubles rank.'
-					'"I admit, <<$pcs_lastname>>, that I wasn''t expecting for me to come to this establishment, but... you need a recompense, and sadly, my curse acting through the <i>aprentice link</i>, will, without doubt, end in a more <i>girly</i> outcome so... we will need to ride the wave and find something of good taste that you can wear, without embarrassing both of us."'
+					'A silent and somewhat sullen Aleksei, take you in the limousine towards the city center and a... very high class <i>women</i>''s clothes boutique, the sort, that entertain the shoppers with champagne and have shoes in the one hundred thousand rubles rank.'
+					'"I admit, <<$pcs_lastname>>, that I wasn''t expecting for me to come to this establishment, but... you need a recompense, and sadly, my curse acting through the <i>apprentice link</i>, will, without doubt, end in a more <i>girly</i> outcome so... we will need to ride the wave and find something of good taste that you can wear, without embarrassing both of us."'
 					'Saying this, he made a gesture, and the boutique''s staff surge towards you.'
 
 					act 'Try on the gowns the retainers bring to you':
@@ -756,8 +756,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Aleksei</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/alexandria.jpg"></center>'
 						if loop_counter = 300:
-							'You spend the next 30 minutes trying on various gowns, with the full complement of the shop''s staff fuzzing all over you, and making you feel like a <i>pretty princess</i>. Aleksei on his part seems somewhat mortified at the staff attention, that doesn''t seem to understand what exactlly is your relationship, and don''t know how to treat him. That attention is cut short after somebody call him... <i>Miss</i>, triggering a seething glade that make the staff blanch... promptly making them to put all their attention into you, but you are unable to find any that you either don''t already own or that you are willing to wear. This seems to amuse Aleksei - and fright the shop''s staff - that take you back towards the limousine.'
-							'"Sorry <<$pcs_lastname>>, that was a waste of our valuable time, that could have been used for more worthy endeavours... sigh... let get that for late and indulge us on something more worthy of our time."'
+							'You spend the next 30 minutes trying on various gowns, with the full complement of the shop''s staff fuzzing all over you, and making you feel like a <i>pretty princess</i>. Aleksei on his part seems somewhat mortified at the staff''s attention, that doesn''t seem to understand what exactly is your relationship, and don''t know how to treat him. That attention is cut short after somebody calls him... <i>Miss</i>, triggering a seething glade that makes the staff blanch... promptly making them put all their attention on you, but you are unable to find any that you either don''t already own or that you are willing to wear. This seems to amuse Aleksei - and fright the shop''s staff - that takes you back towards the limousine.'
+							'"Sorry <<$pcs_lastname>>, that was a waste of our valuable time, that could have been used for more worthy endeavors... sigh... let get that for late and indulge us on something more worthy of our time."'
 							'The rest of the trip towards his home, go without problems, and when you arrive, Aleksei don''t lose time in taking you to his room.'
 						else
 							numrand = rand(1, 100)
@@ -771,13 +771,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
 								moncheri_gown_h[numrand] = 50
 								moncheri_gown_b[numrand] = pcs_hips
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/moncheri/gown/<<numrand>>.jpg"></center>'
+								killvar 'numrand'
 							else
 								jump 'markbuycloalexandria'
 							end
 						end
 
-						'You spend the next 30 minutes trying on various gowns, with the full complement of the shop''s staff fuzzing all over you, and making you feel like a <i>pretty princess</i>. Aleksei on his part seems somewhat mortified at the staff attention, that doesn''t seem to understand what exactlly is your relationship, and don''t know how to treat him. That attention is cut short after somebody call him... <i>Miss</i>, triggering a seething glade that make the staff blanch... promptly making them to put all their attention into you, until you find a gown that seem to <i>complement your eyes</i>, an somewhat quicklly - but extremely politely - Aleksei and you are accompanied towards the limusine.'
-						'"That was... interesting <<$pcs_lastname>>, but sadlly a necesity, as is inescapable that you, as my aprentice, will require to attempt certain societal gatherings where... so-called <i>masters</i> will judge you based onlly on your apparence... sigh... let get that for late and indulge us on something more worthy of our time."'
+						'You spend the next 30 minutes trying on various gowns, with the full complement of the shop''s staff fuzzing all over you, and making you feel like a <i>pretty princess</i>. Aleksei on his part seems somewhat mortified at the staff''s attention, that doesn''t seem to understand what exactly is your relationship, and don''t know how to treat him. That attention is cut short after somebody calls him... <i>Miss</i>, triggering a seething glare that makes the staff blanch... promptly making them put all their attention on you until you find a gown that seems to <i>complement your eyes</i>, an somewhat quickly - but extremely polite - Aleksei and you are accompanied towards the limousine.'
+						'"That was... interesting <<$pcs_lastname>>, but sadly a necessity, as is inescapable that you, as my apprentice, will be required to attempt certain societal gatherings where... so-called <i>masters</i> will judge you based only on your appearance... sigh... let get that for late and indulge us on something more worthy of our time."'
 						'The rest of the trip towards his home, go without problems, and when you arrive, Aleksei don''t lose time in taking you to his room.'
 
 						act 'Continue':	minut += 13 & gt 'alexandriaSex', 'nice2'
@@ -790,7 +791,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Aleksei</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/alexandria3.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Is evident, that I must to up your training <<$pcs_lastname>>, teaching you the secrets of the Lighting spell."'
-				'Aleksei, then walk towards you, put his hands in your shoulders, and push you towards the studio''s exit.'
+				'Aleksei, then walk towards you, put his hands on your shoulders, and push you towards the studio''s exit.'
 
 				act 'Continue': gt 'alexandriaSex', 'nice2'
         
@@ -801,7 +802,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Aleksei</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/alexandria3.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Is evident, that I must to up your training <<$pcs_lastname>>, teaching you the secrets of the Lighting spell."'
-			    'Aleksei, then walk towards you, put his hands in your shoulders, and push you towards the studio''s exit.'
+			    'Aleksei, then walk towards you, put his hands on your shoulders, and push you towards the studio''s exit.'
 
 				act 'Continue': gt 'alexandriaSex', 'grumpy2'
 			end  
@@ -816,8 +817,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
 	    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/chair.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Yes, <<$pcs_lastname>>?"'
 		'"Hum... I haven''t made much progress to recover it."'
-		'Aleksei just raise an eyebrow, looking nonplussed, and answer somewhat drilly...'
-		'"And... What is impeding you to find this child <<$pcs_lastname>>? Sigh... She will be around the city center during the weekdays, and it''s challenge will be somewhat physical, so... is better if you dress properlly."'
+		'Aleksei just raises an eyebrow, looking nonplussed, and answers somewhat drily...'
+		'"And... What is impeding you to find this child <<$pcs_lastname>>? Sigh... She will be around the city center during the weekdays, and it''s challenge will be somewhat physical, so... is better if you dress properly."'
 		'You shut up, is better if you look for Ana, you don''t know how much time you have, and... Aleksei won''t take that well if you procrastinate.'
 		
 		act 'Continue': gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'
@@ -833,7 +834,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tractatus':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Aleksei</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><table><tr><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/chair.jpg"></td><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/tractatus.jpg"></tr></td></table></center>'
 	'Aleksei is already sitting in his chair in the studio, some kind of leatherbound book on his lap. "I find myself in a conundrum <<$pcs_lastname>>, as now you are irretrievably tangled in this childish feud. If you were one of my agents, I would have spirited you away from the current situation, but, alas, is evident that even if The Council isn''t involved in the current mess, they are going to limit any reasonable option, so... I must lend this to you."'
-	'Aleksei pass you the text, that now you realize isn''t a book. In fact, is a set of yellowish sheets, sewn together, written elegantly in... <i>Latin</i>? and keep in some kind of leather portfolio. The set seems <i>handcrafted</i> and <i>centuries</i> old, but well preserved, with a tingle of magic.'
+	'Aleksei passes you the text, that now you realize isn''t a book. In fact, is a set of yellowish sheets, sewn together, written elegantly in... <i>Latin</i>? and keep in some kind of leather portfolio. The set seems <i>handcrafted</i> and <i>centuries</i> old, but well preserved, with a tingle of magic.'
 	'"This - written by me - <i>tractatus</i>, is and advanced <i>discourse</i> on unarmed combat. I am not sure when exactly it turned magical, but that is the nature of magic... unpredictable. It''s primary power, is that in exchange for some mana, it will train your unarmed combat skills without the need to do the physical part, letting you grow - let''s hope - in the security of your home... additionally, you don''t need to know Latin to understand it. It''s limitation is somewhat confusing, the number of <i>lessons</i> are variable but seems related to your performance on any task related to me. I assume that this last adventure will have granted you some uses."'
 
 	act 'Continue': gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'

locations/alexandriaEv.qsrc

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 		'At that moment the front door opens, and Alexandria get out, locking her gaze with Reinhold, and suddenly, the air around you feel cold and heavy with tension.'
 		'"There is a problem? Ehm... Reinhold isn''t it?"'
 		'The mentioned, walk slowly until he is in front of you and to the right, with his left hand slightly raised in a protective(possessive?) gesture in front of you.'
-		'"Yes, Councilor, and I am here to talk with <<$pcs_firstname>> in an official matter, so... if you excuse us."'
+		'"Yes, Councilor and I am here to talk with <<$pcs_firstname>> in an official matter, so... if you excuse us."'
 		'Alexandria look around the street, looking for something, before returning her gaze towards you two, a purple flash flicking through her eyes, and Reinhold quickly put himself between the two of you. There is a sudden flash, and you blink surprised as something appears on Reinhold''s hand. The item seems to flick around your visual field, in some sort of focused(and powerful) Haste spell... It''s a gun! Fuck! Are they going to fight here?!'
 
 		gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'force', 'hard'
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/thelilith/thelilith.jpg"></center>'
 				'You must stop this, they are two high-level wizards in the middle of the street, go figure the level of damage, so there is only a thing you can do... stand before Reinhold, look him into the eyes and...'
 				'"Ok Reinhold, you better go."'
-				'Reinhold looks like he has just received a backhanded blow and Alexandria look at you with renewed interest and during a moment there is silence, before Reinhold talk again.'
+				'Reinhold looks like he has just received a backhanded blow and Alexandria looks at you with renewed interest and during a moment there is silence before Reinhold talks again.'
 				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I don''t think is a good idea, so please, listen to me and..."'
 				'And then, he stops, as around you, magic begins to rain, silencing the sounds and concealing your surroundings, there is a flicker of light and the partial image of the most beautiful and alien woman that you has ever seen, bloom in the air between you three.'
 				'"Reinhold, It''s seems that your protege''s words sound truer than you seem to imagine, as our presence here attest."'
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 				pcs_willpwr += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				act 'Aftermatch':gt'alexandriaEv','interview2'
+				act 'Aftermatch':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'interview2'
 			end
 		else
 			act 'Ask Reinhold to leave (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 
 			if rand(1,100) < pcs_persuas:
 				npc_rel['A241'] +=2
-				'You must stop this, they are two high-level wizards in the middle of the street, go figure the level of damage, so there is only a thing you can do... stand between the two, look into their eyes and...'
+				'You must stop this, they are two high-level wizards in the middle of the street, go figure the level of damage, so there is only one thing you can do... stand between the two, look into their eyes and...'
 				'"Ok you two stops right now! I don''t care who do you think you are, this is a public place, so stop the cock wielding contest!"'
 				'The two of them seem to ignore your words, but after some tense heartbeats, they slowly turn towards you. Reinhold seems intrigued at your words and Alexandria... is smiling? At least her next words sound... amused?'
 				'"And <<$pcs_lastname>> how do you think, we must resolve..."'
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 3, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'Aftermatch':gt'alexandriaEv','interview2'
+			act 'Aftermatch':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'interview2'
 		end
 
 		act 'Wait for a resolution':
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 			pcs_mood -= 10
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'Aftermatch':gt'alexandriaEv','interview2'
+			act 'Aftermatch':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'interview2'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview2':
 			minut += 2
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act '"A man?"':gt'alexandriaEv','interview3'
+			act '"A man?"':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'interview3'
 		end
 
 		act 'Defend Tatiana':
@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview2':
 			minut += 2
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act '"A man?"':gt'alexandriaEv','interview3'
+			act '"A man?"':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'interview3'
 		end
 
 		act 'Let her rant':
@@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview2':
 			minut += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act '"A man?"':gt'alexandriaEv','interview3'
+			act '"A man?"':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'interview3'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview3':
 			minut += 2
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'End the interview':gt'alexandriaEv','interview4'
+			act 'End the interview':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'interview4'
 		end
 	else
 		if succubusQW = 5:
@@ -262,7 +262,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview3':
 				minut += 2
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				act 'End the interview':gt'alexandriaEv','interview4'
+				act 'End the interview':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'interview4'
 			end
 		else
 			act '"That is horrible!"':
@@ -293,7 +293,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview3':
 				minut += 2
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				act 'End the interview':gt'alexandriaEv','interview4'
+				act 'End the interview':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'interview4'
 			end
 
 			act '"Hm?"':
@@ -307,7 +307,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview3':
 				'Then, he takes a drag from his cigarette, and wait for you to digest this explanation, before tilting his head like he was hearing something.'
 				'"Hm... Interesting. <<$pcs_lastname>> we have company."'
 
-				act 'End the interview':gt'alexandriaEv','interview4'
+				act 'End the interview':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'interview4'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -332,7 +332,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview4':
 		pcs_mood += 50
 		'Aleksei, begin to concentrate on a spell, charging the room with static and making your hair stand, before a purple flash fills the room and something magical exit it.'
 		'"Hm... That will teach her a lesson <<$pcs_lastname>>, but..." Aleksei turns towards you with a half-smile, and intrigued eyes "I think that you must go and see if your <i>friend</i> is safe, we will continue our talks later."'
-		'He then stands, and signal towards the door, waiting for you to follow, and as you leave the room towards the exit, Aleksei decides to say something.'
+		'He then stands, and signals towards the door, waiting for you to follow, and as you leave the room towards the exit, Aleksei decides to say something.'
 		'"I must admit, that this has ended better than I expected <<$pcs_lastname>>, is my impression that you have the potential to master the high arts, and... even taking into consideration, my personal interest on you, I''m tempted to offer you something."'
 		'Aleksei put out the cigarette in an ashtray, the next words exiting somewhat excited from his mouth.'
 		'"I offer you the possibility of an apprenticeship under my wing. This will protect you, partially from The Council and Reinhold interests, but, I expect respect and diligence, so... until the next time and remember, my door is open only on daily hours."'
@@ -354,7 +354,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview4':
 		'"You told her that? And she confirmed it? Because I don''t have much information about..." You blink surprised at her lack of concern, which prompts her to sigh and change the theme. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, when I talked about Reinhold and The Council, I was... well, <i>having fun at your expense</i>. But the truth is that you must be a little wary of their intentions. I wanted to win some time before talking to Reinhold and prevent, that some red-lipped succubus charmed you away to some gilded cage, and for Alexandria... Look, is my fault ok? I wasn''t expecting for you to run after her, but <<$pcs_nickname>>, you must understand that she is the equivalent of a walking magical WMD. She can impose terms at The Council, and ending on her grasp... Well, that can trigger all sort of bad scenarios with you in the middle, something that Reinhold is trying to prevent."'
 		'After this explanation, that you don''t know if belive, Tatiana turn back and return to her hideout, leaving you alone to digest the new situation.'
 
-		act 'Continue':gt'city_suburbs','start'
+		act 'Continue':gt 'city_suburbs', 'start'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -404,17 +404,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'filipp':
 			'"Ohh! The sword! yeah! That horrible situation with the police! Ehm... I will need some minutes to look where it is stored, but in the meantime, you can fill into some minor <i>red tape</i>!"'
 			'He winks at you as he pronounces the words <i>red tape</i>, before reclining back into his chair, and open slightly his legs so you can have a perfect line of sight, of his corduroy covered crotch. To make the situation even more obvious, he picks a cup with the words <i>to bribe or not to bribe</i>'
 
-			act 'Get out of here':gt'alexandriaEv','anacall'
+			act 'Get out of here':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anacall'
 
-			act 'Kneel': gt'alexandriaEv','kneel'
+			act 'Kneel': gt 'alexandriaEv', 'kneel'
 
 			act '"Mr. Aleksei already paid you"': gt'alexandriaEv', 'persufilipp'
 
 			if money >= 5000:
-				act 'Give him a 5K <i>contribution</i>': gt'alexandriaEv','contribution'
+				act 'Give him a 5K <i>contribution</i>': gt 'alexandriaEv', 'contribution'
 			end
 			if succubusQW > 4:
-				act 'Call your True Face': gt'alexandriaEv','succubribe'
+				act 'Call your True Face': gt 'alexandriaEv', 'succubribe'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -474,7 +474,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kneel':
 		'Kneeling, you roll your eyes and decide to finish this quickly and without fuss, so, you take out his <i>tool</i>... and gasp... this guy is <i>big</i>, easily 25cm! and he doesn''t seemed in full swing!'
 		'"Impressed Ms.Assistant? I call it <i>Sir-Lance-A-Lot</i> and it keeps me happy! So, I supposed that is a good moment to practice the skills learned, under Mr.Aleksei...  <i>service</i>."'
 		'You content yourself, with the knowledge, that probably Aleksei will kill this guy, in the meantime, you begin to lick his <i>Sir-Lance-A-Lot</i>, carefully going from its base to the tip, giving him little laps to the head, before returning down, all of it accompanied with your hands massaging his balls.'
-		'"Good technique Ms.Assistant! But now... i think you need to take it more <i>deep</i>."'
+		'"Good technique Ms.Assistant! But now... I think you need to take it more <i>deep</i>."'
 		'You open your mouth and put the now very turgid <i>Sir-Lance-A-Lot''s</i> head. It''s BIG! but you manage to suck the humongous thing, at the same time, you accompany the blowjob with some hand play. On his part, Mr.Kudashov seems to enjoy your job and grab himself to his chair, slightly raising his hips, as you, quickly lead him to climax."'
 		'"Yes! Yes! Ms.Assistant! You have a great... GRAHH! YEAH!!!!!"'
 		'Suddenly, The jerk grabs your head and takes away <i>Sir-Lance-A-Lot''s</i>, so his semen can fly all over your face. Mr.Kudashow''s seems utterly satisfied with your new <i>outlook</i>, and after resting some moments, pass you a post-it with a number.'
@@ -482,7 +482,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kneel':
 		'Before you can protest, a policeman enters and <i>escort</i> you, out of the room, as you can see a devil-may-care smile on Mr. Kudashov''s face. It seems that you have been tricked.'
 	end
 
-	act 'A call?': gt'alexandriaEv','anacall'
+	act 'A call?': gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anacall'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'contribution':
@@ -495,10 +495,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'contribution':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/bribes.jpg"></center>'
 	'With the most cynical sigh that you can manage, you take your wallet, pick five thousand rubles, and boringly, put them into Mr. Kudashov''s cup. He, in turn, has the gal, to look disappointingly to your action, and mumbling something. "There is no way to get some tail in this job." Pick a post-it with the number 159 and pass it to you.'
 	'"What is the meaning of this?!"'
-	'Giving a tired sigh, Filipp, return to his work, but have the decency to answer.'
+	'Giving a tired sigh, Filipp, returns to his work, but has the decency to answer.'
 	'"Mr. Aleksei''s possession is in a security box in the local VTB bank. That is the number, but you will need a security key. I give it to that other girl, Ana, now I have work to do. Gregor! Take her out!"'
 	'Before you can protest, a policeman enters and <i>escort</i> you, out of the room, as you can see a devil-may-care smile on Mr. Kudashov''s face. It seems that you have been tricked.'
-	act 'A call?': gt'alexandriaEv','anacall'
+	act 'A call?': gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anacall'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'succubribe':
@@ -518,7 +518,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'succubribe':
 	'Bending sexily at your waist, you carefully rearrange the lapels on his shirt, before whispering sultrily into his ear.'
 	'"Mr. Kudashov... You are so lucky that I don''t have a chastity cage right now."'
 	'Without waiting for more stupid words, you straighten your back and get out of his <i>office</i>, your hunger transforming into rage. You are going to kill that BITCH!'
-	act 'A call?': gt'alexandriaEv','anacall'
+	act 'A call?': gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anacall'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'persufilipp':
@@ -545,20 +545,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'persufilipp':
 		end
 	else
 		'Filipp Kudashov tilts his head and looks at you with smugness "Ms. Assistant, I don''t know what are you insinuating but..." You cut him before he can continue.'
-		'"No Mr.Kudashov, listen to me. I am as you say <i>Mr.Aleksei''s Assistant</i>...  I work for <i>Mr.Aleksei</i>... No some two-bit criminal... No some mediocre penpusher... No Mr. Kudashov, I work for someone with <i>true power</i>, so don''t try to play with me and for extension Mr.Aleksei. We have a deal, you were generously compensated, so were is the sword?"'
+		'"No Mr.Kudashov, listen to me. I am as you say <i>Mr.Aleksei''s Assistant</i>...  I work for <i>Mr.Aleksei</i>... No some two-bit criminal... Not some mediocre penpusher... No Mr. Kudashov, I work for someone with <i>true power</i>, so don''t try to play with me and for extension Mr.Aleksei. We have a deal, you were generously compensated, so were is the sword?"'
 		'You don''t know if call your words a bluff, mostly because you are pretty sure they are true, but will Filipp take them seriously?'
 		'"Snort... Pfff... Jajaja... Yeah... Sure... Ms.Assistant"'
 		'Filip covers his smiling face with the cup and gives it some little taps. Is evident that the idiot don''t believe you, and is willing to challenge Aleksei''s annoyance. He has a death wish, but you must make a decision... Submit to his wishes or get out of here.'
 
-		act 'Get out of here':gt'alexandriaEv','anacall'
+		act 'Get out of here':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anacall'
 
 		act 'Kneel': gt'alexandriaEv', 'kneel'
 
 		if money >= 5000:
-			act 'Give him a 5K <i>contribution</i>': gt'alexandriaEv','contribution'
+			act 'Give him a 5K <i>contribution</i>': gt 'alexandriaEv', 'contribution'
 		end
 		if succubusQW > 4:
-			act 'Call your True Face': gt'alexandriaEv','succubribe'
+			act 'Call your True Face': gt 'alexandriaEv', 'succubribe'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -575,26 +575,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase1':
 	'"Est potentia ex testamento!"'
 	'Around you two, the spectators giggle at Ana''s antics, probably believing that this is some kind of spectacle, but... the truth is... that you don''t have fucking idea why she is doing that!'
 	'"Ana! Where is the key?!"'
-	'She blinks confused, grimace, points at you, and mouths an "Ups!", before beginning to frantically search around his many pockets until she shows you a key in her open hand.'
+	'She blinks confused, grimaces, points at you, and mouths an "Ups!", before beginning to frantically search around his many pockets until she shows you a key in her open hand.'
 
 	if npc_rel['A241'] = 1:
-		'"Sexy! Stop for a moment and hear my reasons! In my defense, I will say, that I was paid a fuckton of money to get that sword! I mean a SUV was parked in front of my home!"'
+		'"Sexy! Stop for a moment and hear my reasons! In my defense, I will say, that I was paid a fuckton of money to get that sword! I mean an SUV was parked in front of my home!"'
 		'Around you, more people begin to gather to see the spectacle, you even hear their comments "The red-eyed is the good one, isn''t it?" You don''t know how to take that.'
 		'"Ok, look Sexy, let''s make a deal! You really don''t owe Alexandria anything! I have this little expense account, and I can skim around... let''s see... 35000 rubles if you turn back?"'
 		'"What if I refuse Ana?"'
 		'"Pfff... Then you lose everything! I will run away and there is no way that you can catch me!"'
 
 	else
-		'"Ok! Sorry! I didn''t want to put me into St.Petersburg''s sexiest prodigy bad side, but... sniff... I thought that you will understand! Sniff... I am only a mutant girl fighting to survive in a world with the darkest powers!"'
+		'"Ok! Sorry! I didn''t want to put myself into St.Petersburg''s sexiest prodigy bad side, but... sniff... I thought that you would understand! Sniff... I am only a mutant girl fighting to survive in a world with the darkest powers!"'
 		'She then, put on puppy dog eyes, even managing to begin to cry, her face quickly filling with snot. "Dawww! Forgive the poor girl!" That is the public that obviously can''t take this absurd situation seriously.'
 		'"So... Sexy... I was thinking of doing something to fix this situation! I just will run away, and you chase after me, but... obviously, you will never catch this cutie! Then you can return to Alexandria, and tell about, how that cute cross between Playmate and Terminator escaped! You will save face, and I will win a fuckton of money! What do you say?"'
 	end
 
 	act 'Just leave, this is ridiculous.': AlexandriaMissionQW -= 1 & AlexandriaQW = 17 & gt 'city_center'
 
-	act '"Challenge accepted!"': gt'alexandriaEv','anachase2'
+	act '"Challenge accepted!"': gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anachase2'
 
-	act 'Kick Ana in the guts, then grab the key!': gt'alexandriaEv','anafight1'
+	act 'Kick Ana in the guts, then grab the key!': gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anafight1'
 
 	if npc_rel['A241'] = 1:
 		act 'Accept the bribe.':
@@ -606,7 +606,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase1':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Ana</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/ana3.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Ok, Ana"'
-			'Ana blinks surprised at your answer, and during a moment stand there open-mouthed, apparently, trying to process your answer.'
+			'Ana blinks surprised at your answer, and during a moment stands there open-mouthed, apparently, trying to process your answer.'
 			'"Seriously Sexy? I mean... this isn''t some trick to sucker-punch me and try to take away the key?"'
 			'You are going to answer, but Ana has begun to carefully walk backward, putting back the key, and looking for something else in her pockets, all the time warily eyeing you. Finally, her retreat put her back against a parked black SUV, and finding what she was looking for, she trow it towards you.'
 			'"So... Sexy... Why are even?"'
@@ -635,7 +635,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase2':
 	'....'
 	wait 725
 	'"Go! Beep Beep!"'
-	'And then she turns from the sidewalk! Run straight into the street traffic! And do an impressive jump over an unsuspecting car! There is an immediate panic reaction coming from the surprised drivers, that do the impossible to try to no slam into the loonie, that now stand defiantly in the middle of the street.'
+	'And then she turns from the sidewalk! Run straight into the street traffic! And do an impressive jump over an unsuspecting car! There is an immediate panic reaction coming from the surprised drivers, who do the impossible to try to slam into the loonie, that now stands defiantly in the middle of the street.'
 
 	act 'You aren''t crazy! Abandon this chase!': AlexandriaMissionQW -= 1 & AlexandriaQW = 17 & gt 'city_center'
 
@@ -654,11 +654,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase2':
 			dummy = rand(1,100)
 			gs 'stat'
 			if dummy <= pcs_run:
-				gt'alexandriaEv','anachase3'
+				gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anachase3'
 			elseif dummy >= pcs_run and dummy >= 90:
-				gt'alexandriaEv','anacrash1'
+				gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anacrash1'
 			else
-				gt'alexandriaEv','anachase4'
+				gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anachase4'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -678,7 +678,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase2':
 			'Finally, the spell is completed, and time seems to slow, as your brain capacity to process information is multiplied.'
 			'"EPP!!!" Ana, give a little yelp, surprise plastered all over her face, as you launch yourself after her. If she thinks that you are going to back off, she is going to be disappointed, and with the surprise on your side, you rush to grab the annoying nut.'
 			'"Sexy! Don''t touch, we aren''t that close!"'
-			'You ignore her rant, as your hands close over her... arm?! There is sudden <i>squishi</i> sensation, and it <i>breaks</i> in black-crimson ribbons? Ana, then, sidestep you, and with a black-crimson mist trailing her, she begins a mad dash down the street, it seems that is going to be harder than you thought.'
+			'You ignore her rant, as your hands close over her... arm?! There is a sudden <i>squishi</i> sensation, and it <i>breaks</i> in black-crimson ribbons? Ana, then, sidesteps you, and with a black-crimson mist trailing her, she begins a mad dash down the street, it seems that is going to be harder than you thought.'
 
 			act 'Run!':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -719,13 +719,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase3':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Ana</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/ana4.jpg"></center>'
-	'Ana run through the traffic demonstrating cinematic levels of agility and strength, doing backflips over cars, and filling the air with the driver''s insults, as she creates an insane ruckus just to stop you.'
+	'Ana runs through the traffic demonstrating cinematic levels of agility and strength, doing backflips over cars, and filling the air with the driver''s insults, as she creates an insane ruckus just to stop you.'
 	'"You can''t catch me! You can''t catch me!"'
 	'And yes... somehow... sing-songing all the way, without catching her breath! But is not enough... All that is just theatrics, and you have hard-trained your running skills... You don''t do <i>fantasy</i> moves... You don''t waste your breath... and finally, she is at your reach... a hand quickly closing on her back.'
 	'Then, she is already gone, her jacket dissolving in the same black-crimson mist, as she twists, sidesteps, and runs towards an alley, doing a series of jumps that leave her in a fire exit just over your head.'
 
 	if npc_rel['A241'] = 1:
-		'"Woah! I mean! Woah! Sexy I am pretty fast, but you?! That is awesome! What if I double my offer! Think about that! 70000 Rubles!"'
+		'"Woah! I mean! Woah! Sexy I am pretty fast, but you?! That is awesome! What if I double my offer? Think about that! 70000 Rubles!"'
 
 	else
 		'"Woah! I mean! Woah! Sexy I am pretty fast, but you?! That is awesome!"'
@@ -764,16 +764,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase4':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Ana''s number</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/selfie.jpg"></center>'
-	'Ana run through the traffic demonstrating cinematic levels of agility and strength, doing backflips over cars, and filling the air with the driver''s insults, as she creates an insane ruckus just to stop you.'
+	'Ana runs through the traffic demonstrating cinematic levels of agility and strength, doing backflips over cars, and filling the air with the driver''s insults, as she creates an insane ruckus just to stop you.'
 	'"You can''t catch me! You can''t catch me!"'
-	'And yes... somehow... sing-songing all the way, without catching her breath! All that, make it impossible for you, to keep with the mad rush, and in a moment, she leaves you heaving in the middle of the street'
+	'And yes... somehow... sing-songing all the way, without catching her breath! All that, makes it impossible for you, to keep up with the mad rush, and in a moment, she leaves you heaving in the middle of the street'
 	'"Ring! Ring!"'
 	'Your phone ring... is Ana...'
 	'"Come on Sexy! What are you waiting for?! Look, two more blocks! Turn left at the stop signal and look up!"'
-	'She then hangs up, leaving you to follow her instructions, and find her with a shit-eating-grin in a fire scape just over your head.'
+	'She then hangs up, leaving you to follow her instructions, and find her with a shit-eating-grin on a fire escape just over your head.'
 
 	if npc_rel['A241'] = 1:
-		'"Oh Sexy! You disappoint me, That was too hard for you? Hm... Let''s then end this quickly! What if I double my offer! Think about that! 70000 Rubles!"'
+		'"Oh Sexy! You disappoint me, Was it too hard for you? Hm... Let''s then end this quickly! What if I double my offer? Think about that! 70000 Rubles!"'
 
 	else
 		'"Oh Sexy! You disappoint me, That was too hard for you?"'
@@ -786,7 +786,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase4':
 	act 'Do some PARKOUR! and block her way!': dummy = rand(1,100) & gt 'alexandriaEv','anachase6'
 
 	if spellKnown['shock'] = 1 and pcs_mana >= 20:
-		act 'The paint job in the fire scape has peeled away... and you know Electric Shock...': dummy = rand(1,100) & gt 'alexandriaEv','anachase7'
+		act 'The paint job in the fire escape has peeled away... and you know Electric Shock...': dummy = rand(1,100) & gt 'alexandriaEv','anachase7'
 	end
 
 	if npc_rel['A241'] = 1:
@@ -841,7 +841,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anacrash1':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/crash.jpg"></center>'
 	'Ana run through the traffic demonstrating cinematic levels of agility and strength, doing backflips over cars, and filling the air with the driver''s insults, as she creates an insane ruckus just to stop you.'
 	'"You can''t catch me! You can''t catch me!"'
-	'And yes... somehow... sing-songing all the way, without catching her breath! All that, make impossible for you, to keep with the mad rush, and be aware of the traffic...'
+	'And yes... somehow... sing-songing all the way, without catching her breath! All that, makes it impossible for you, to keep up with the mad rush, and be aware of the traffic...'
 	'"SCREEEEE!!!"'
 	'You barely register the sound of a car''s brakes, as the driver try to evade you... there is an impact... a weightlessness moment... and you find yourself in the ground... pain shooting through your body.'
 
@@ -871,10 +871,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hospital':
 	close all
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><table><tr><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/alexandria2.jpg"></td><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/clinic/wakeup.jpg"></tr></td></table></center>'
-	'A mix of pain and numbness hit you as conscience return. You are lying down in a hospital bed, in what it seems to be the ER, with an IV and medical equipment monitoring your health. "Feeling better <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You turn towards the voice, and see Aleksei observing you, a cigarette in his hands in defiance to the hospital''s rules.'
+	'A mix of pain and numbness hit you as your conscience returned. You are lying down in a hospital bed, in what seems to be the ER, with an IV and medical equipment monitoring your health. "Feeling better <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You turn towards the voice, and see Aleksei observing you, a cigarette in his hands in defiance of the hospital''s rules.'
 	'"Oh... What the hell?" You groan in discomfort and palpate, your body, the shadow of some kind of magical effect dissipating quickly. Everything seems to be in it''s place and with some effort manages to sit in the bed.'
-	'"I''m... sorry <<$pcs_lastname>>. I wasn''t expecting this task to escalate, and you end needing urgent medical attention. I... have taken the liberty to heal the most grievous wounds and ordered to clean your clothes. Take your time to recover and then return to me, we need to talk."'
-	'Saying that Aleksei departs, leaving you to the care of the medical staff that helps you to get up and dress. After a last medical examination - that leaves a baffling physician assuming that your wounds were misdiagnosed - you are put in a wheelchair and escorted to the hospital''s exit.'
+	'"I''m... sorry <<$pcs_lastname>>. I wasn''t expecting this task to escalate, and you end up needing urgent medical attention. I... have taken the liberty to heal the most grievous wounds and ordered to clean your clothes. Take your time to recover and then return to me, we need to talk."'
+	'Saying that Aleksei departs, leaving you to the care of the medical staff that helps you get up and dress. After a last medical examination - that leaves a baffling physician assuming that your wounds were misdiagnosed - you are put in a wheelchair and escorted to the hospital''s exit.'
 	act 'Leave': gt 'city_residential'
 end
 
@@ -888,7 +888,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'heal1':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Ana''s number</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/selfie.jpg"></center>'
-	'You lie there in the ground as pain and shock try to put you down, and chaos descent over the street, as the traffic stop and somebody begins to call an ambulance... but you don''t accept it... Gritting your teeth, a word of power is forced out and a balming sensation travels your injured body.'
+	'You lie there in the ground as pain and shock try to put you down, and chaos descent over the street, as the traffic stops and somebody begins to call an ambulance... but you don''t accept it... Gritting your teeth, a word of power is forced out and a balming sensation travels your injured body.'
 	'"Hey girl don''t move!"'
 	'You ignore whatever is trying to help you and rise, your bones and flesh knitting back together... is not enough... but you will live'
 	'"Ring! Ring!"'
@@ -896,7 +896,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'heal1':
 	'"<i>Madre de dios</i>! <<$pcs_nickname>> are you ok?!"'
 	'"No Ana, I am not ok! Where the fuck is the key!"'
 	'"Ehm... I am... Look, two more blocks... Turn left at the stop signal and look up."'
-	'She then hangs up, leaving you to follow her instructions, and find her fingering in a fire scape just over your head.'
+	'She then hangs up, leaving you to follow her instructions, and find her fingering in a firescape just over your head.'
 
 	if npc_rel['A241'] = 1:
 		'"Hm <<$pcs_nickname>> Hm... Maybe you want to take it easy... What if I double my offer... Hm? 70000 Rubles?"'
@@ -932,7 +932,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anacarchase':
 	'Ana stand a moment there, looking at you totally out-witted. Then straight her back and race down the street, a black-crimson mist trailing her way as she supernaturally accelerates, trying to leave your car behind, but is not enough, as she not only must go faster but deal with the scared drivers.'
 	'Finally, she has enough and suddenly turns towards a side alley, trying to lose you, but as you try to follow her, she stops mid-step, turns, and runs back! Instinctively making you hit the brakes.'
 	'"SCREEEEE!!!"'
-	'The car stop painfully as the suspension fight against the inertia, trying to don''t ran over Ana, that continues her unstoppable race, finally ending it, using your car''s hood to jump at a fire escape.'
+	'The car stops painfully as the suspension fights against the inertia, trying not to run over Ana, who continues her unstoppable race, finally ending it, using your car''s hood to jump at a fire escape.'
 
 	if npc_rel['A241'] = 1:
 		'"Sexy, you are a crazy bitch! What if I double my offer! Think about that! 70000 Rubles!"'
@@ -989,11 +989,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jail':
 	AlexandriaQW = 17
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/police/pavhold.jpg"></center>'
-	'After your little scuffle, a pair of serious-looking policemen take you to the police station near the courthouse. You soon realize that something is amiss when they take away your phone and wallet without any search, promptly putting you in a cell, and during the next hour, you see cops come and go around the cell block, but without exception, they ignore any of your calls, or try to collect a declaration.'
+	'After your little scuffle, a pair of serious-looking policemen take you to the police station near the courthouse. You soon realize that something is amiss when they take away your phone and wallet without any search, promptly putting you in a cell, during the next hour, you see cops come and go around the cell block, but without exception, they ignore any of your calls, or try to collect a declaration.'
 	'"Hey Sexy! Take this!" With a TUDD a plastic bag fall to the ground, launched through the cell window, by a climbing Ana. In it, there is a 2L Coke and some sandwiches.'
 	'"What the hell?! What is happening Ana?!"'
 	'"Jeez! Ok... look Sexy... ehm... it wasn''t my idea! <i>Da Boss</i> think that you have abandoned the race too soon... so... well... you are going to pass this day <i>en chirona</i>... hm... so sorry! Bye! I have exams!"'
-	'"Wait! Ana! What the fuck!" but is too late, Ana has run away and has left you alone... so... you only can sit and wait. You pass the next 24 hours, bored out of your mind, without other things to do except sleep and look to the slowly peeling paint in the walls, until the time pass, and without fanfare, you are escorted out of the cell towards the street.'
+	'"Wait! Ana! What the fuck!" but is too late, Ana has run away and has left you alone... so... you only can sit and wait. You pass the next 24 hours, bored out of your mind, without other things to do except sleep and look at the slowly peeling paint on the walls, until the time passes, and without fanfare, you are escorted out of the cell towards the street.'
 	act 'Leave': gt 'city_residential'
 end
 
@@ -1006,9 +1006,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anabribe1':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Ana</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/ana3.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Ok, Ana"'
-	'Ana blinks surprised at your answer, and during a moment stand there open-mouthed, apparently, trying to process your answer.'
+	'Ana blinks surprised at your answer, and during a moment stands there open-mouthed, apparently, trying to process your answer.'
 	'"Seriously Sexy? I mean... this isn''t some trick to sucker-punch me and try to take away the key?"'
-	'You are going to answer, but Ana, give a jump, backflip mid-air, and land behind you, before begin to carefully walk backward, putting back the key, and looking for something else in her pockets, all the time warily eyeing you. Finally, her retreat put her back against a black SUV that just parked, and finding what she was looking, she trow it towards you.'
+	'You are going to answer, but Ana, give a jump, backflip mid-air, and land behind you, before beginning to carefully walk backward, putting back the key, and looking for something else in her pockets, all the time warily eyeing you. Finally, her retreat put her back against a black SUV that just parked, and finding what she was looking, she trow it towards you.'
 	'"So... Sexy... Why are even?"'
 	'You grab the item, a little pouch with money inside. That is the moment that chooses Ana to jump inside the SUV and drive away.'
 	act 'Leave': gt 'city_center'
@@ -1023,8 +1023,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase5':
 	close all
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><table><tr><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/tv.jpg"></td><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/gopniks.jpg"></tr></td></table></center>'
-	'You quickly climb after Ana, just for her to do an inhuman-looking jump towards the opposite wall, latch at it like spider-man, and continue with a series of acrobatics that put Ana two floors over you! There something catches her attention, make Ana smile, and enter the building through a near open window.'
-	'You end your climbing and enter the window, that leads you towards a living room... where in a side is a broken TV and in the other a group of very pissed Gopniks... that seems to be threatening a not impressed Ana...'
+	'You quickly climb after Ana, just for her to do an inhuman-looking jump towards the opposite wall, latch at it like Spider-Man, and continue with a series of acrobatics that put Ana two floors over you! There something catches her attention, make Ana smile, and enter the building through a near open window.'
+	'You end your climbing and enter the window, that leads you towards a living room... with a broken TV to one side and a group of very pissed Gopniks in the other... who seem to be threatening a not impressed Ana...'
 	'"Ok guys! I said I am sorry! Hey, Sexy! Take one for the team and remember! Spartak forever!"'
 	'The group is distracted by your sudden entrance and Ana''s words. That is the signal for her to jump up to the ceiling, rebound, and somehow do a free-running maneuver that put her behind the angry fellows... coincidentally beside the exit door... that promptly cross.'
 	'"What the fuck?! You know that bitch?! You are going to pay for our TV! The Zenit was playing today!"'
@@ -1036,13 +1036,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase5':
 			AlexandriaMissionQW += 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/gopniks.jpg"></center>'
-			'You don''t have time to lose with this shits! So... uncaring over their aptitude, you walk towards them, crack your knuckles, and confront the <i>shitmouth</i>.'
+			'You don''t have time to lose with these shits! So... uncaring over their aptitude, you walk towards them, crack your knuckles, and confront the <i>shitmouth</i>.'
 			'"Ok dude... get out of my way or I pray to god, my feet will kick your ass so hard, that you will taste your own shit."'
 			'The Gopnikcs seemed to rise to the challenge, obviously, accustomed to violence and with the numbers on their side, you don''t seem intimidating... and then the whispers begin...'
 			'"Kickboxing master! Really mean left hook! She took him in a round!"'
-			'They grunt, and part, so you can exit the apartment towards the building''s stairs, just to saw Ana one floor lower.'
+			'They grunt, and part, so you can exit the apartment towards the building''s stairs, just to see Ana one floor lower.'
 			'"Woah! Sexy! Can you teach me how to do that?!" Then trying to talk like Batman, she says "I am Sexy!"'
-			'Trying to reach before the end of her tirade, you jump down the stairs, making Ana scream and scramble down the building towards the street, where she again dance between the coming cars to cross towards a multistory car park.'
+			'Trying to reach before the end of her tirade, you jump down the stairs, making Ana scream and scramble down the building towards the street, where she again dances around the incoming cars to cross towards a multistory car park.'
 
 			act 'Follow her': gt 'alexandriaEv','anachasefinal'
 		end
@@ -1058,11 +1058,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase5':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/gopniks.jpg"></center>'
 			'You don''t have time to lose with this shits! So... uncaring over their aptitude, you walk towards them, take away your wallet and press 15K, against the <i>smartmouth''s</i> chest.'
 			'"Ok dude... just pick one better this time."'
-			'The Gopnikcs are speechless, their mouths are frozen on whatever shit they were gonna say. Then begin to scramble to take the money.'
-			'"Fuck! Where is the nearest shop! Shit! Take my car! Ouch! You stepped on my son-of-a-bitch!"'
-			'You somehow dance between the frantic fans, and exit the apartment towards the building''s stairs, just to saw Ana one floor lower.'
+			'The Gopniks are speechless, their mouths are frozen on whatever shit they were gonna say. Then begin to scramble to take the money.'
+			'"Fuck! Where is the nearest shop? Shit! Take my car! Ouch! You stepped on my foot, son-of-a-bitch!"'
+			'You somehow dance between the frantic fans, and exit the apartment towards the building''s stairs, just to see Ana one floor lower.'
 			'"Hey Sexy! I was expecting something with more... well, blood and teeth... but I quest if it works..."'
-			'Trying to reach before the end of her tirade, you jump down the stairs, making Ana scream and scramble down the building towards the street, where she again dance between the coming cars to cross towards a multistory car park.'
+			'Trying to reach before the end of her tirade, you jump down the stairs, making Ana scream and scramble down the building towards the street, where she again dances around the incoming cars to cross towards a multistory car park.'
 			act 'Follow her': gt 'alexandriaEv','anachasefinal'
 		end
 	end
@@ -1089,10 +1089,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase5':
 			'"Ok guys, I am sorry for what that nut said! I am in the same situation! That freak had been messing with me all day long, and I was trying to teach her a lesson!"'
 			'You try to defuse the situation, but only seem to win time, as they seemed <i>really</i> pissed, at the prospect of losing today Zenith''s match... Fortunately, that wasn''t your plan... as the truth is, that you only wanted to win time, until you can reach the window.'
 			'"Fuck! That bitch is trying to scape!"'
-			'<i>To late</i>, you think as finally, you cross the opening, and quickly close it after you. The Gopniks crowding, impeding your persecution, and letting you run away down the fire escape, towards the street... where you don''t know where ana has gone.'
+			'<i>To late</i>, you think as finally, you cross the opening and quickly close it after you. The Gopniks crowding, impeding your persecution, and letting you run away down the fire escape, towards the street... where you don''t know where ana has gone.'
 			'"Ring! Ring!"'
 			'Your phone ring with Ana''s number.'
-			'"Hey Sexy! Still alive?! Good! But what is entertaining you? I am bored in this parking lot! What are you waiting?!"'
+			'"Hey Sexy! Still alive?! Good! But what is entertaining you? I am bored in this parking lot! What are you waiting for?!"'
 			act 'Follow her': gt 'alexandriaEv','anachasefinal'
 
 		else
@@ -1103,7 +1103,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase5':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/gopniks.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Ok guys, I am sorry for what that nut said! There''s no need to get pissed, The Spartak is a great team!"'
-			'Shit! That was probably one of the worst things to say, as The Zenith has a traditional rivalry with Moscow-based teams... of which the Spartak is part... and these guys seem Harcore Zenith fans... so with murder in their eyes, they throw themselves at you.'
+			'"Shit! That was probably one of the worst things to say. The Zenith has a traditional rivalry with Moscow-based teams, Spartak being one of them, and these guys seem like hardcore Zenith fans." With murder in their eyes, they throw themselves at you.'
 			act 'BRAWL!':
 				*clr & cla
 				$boydesc = 'Pissed Gopniks'
@@ -1162,9 +1162,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase6':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/city/ana/parkour.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You take some moments to stretch, and show off to a puzzled Ana, then... without hesitation, run towards a garbage container and using it as a trampoline, you jump towards her, grabbing the stairs'' railing and propelling behind a surprised Ana.'
 		'"Sexy! <i>Eso mola</i>! But... two can play to that!"'
-		'She then... give an inhuman-looking jump towards the opposite wall, latch at it like spider-man and continue with a series of acrobatics that put Ana two floors over you! There, she gives a bowing and begins to climb towards the rooftop.'
+		'She then... give an inhuman-looking jump towards the opposite wall, latch at it like Spider-Man and continue with a series of acrobatics that put Ana two floors over you! There, she gives a bowing and begins to climb towards the rooftop.'
 		'"That isn''t going to help you, Ana!"'
-		'You scream at that nut, and climb after her, reaching the rooftop, seeing Ana running away quickly, but... she is far from winning, as that black-crimson mist signal her pass, and you using hard-earned skills, jump between rooftops, slide down rain gutters and scare terrace dwelling pets to reach to her.'
+		'You scream at that nut and climb after her, reaching the rooftop. You see Ana running away quickly, but she''s far from winning. That black-crimson mist signals her path, and using your hard-earned skills, you jump between rooftops, slide down rain gutters, and scare terrace-dwelling pets to catch up to her.'
 		'"Woah Sexy! The <i>Parkata Urbatsu</i> is strong in you!"'
 		'She screams and tries to lose you, descending to the street level, and dancing through traffic. Her objective is a multistory car park but is not enough and as she enters the building, you enter through a window, just in front of her... The chase has ended.'
 		act 'Endgame': gt 'alexandriaEv','anachasefinal'
@@ -1221,9 +1221,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase6':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/crash.jpg"></center>'
 		'You take some moments to stretch, and show off to a puzzled Ana, then... without hesitation, run towards a garbage container to use it as a trampoline(<i>somehow</i> that work), you jump towards her, grabbing the stairs'' railing and propelling yo behind a surprised Ana(<i>somehow</i> that work <i>again</i>).'
 		'"Sexy! That is Cool! But... two can play to that!"'
-		'She then... give an inhuman-looking jump towards the opposite wall, latch at it like spider-man and continue with a series of acrobatics that put Ana two floors over you! There, she gives a bowing and begins to climb towards the rooftop.'
+		'She then... give an inhuman-looking jump towards the opposite wall, latch at it like Spider-Man and continue with a series of acrobatics that put Ana two floors over you! There, she gives a bowing and begins to climb towards the rooftop.'
 		'"That isn''t going to help you, Ana!"'
-		'You scream at that nut, and climb after her, reaching the rooftop, seeing Ana running away quickly, but... as you try to reach to her, you fumble a jump, and fall towards the street! Fortunately, some clotheslines and a low height save your life.'
+		'You scream at that nut, and climb after her, reaching the rooftop, seeing Ana running away quickly, but... as you try to reach to her, you fumble a jump, and fall towards the street! Fortunately, some clotheslines and the low height save your life.'
 
 		act 'You fall unconscious': gt 'alexandriaEv', 'hospital'
 
@@ -1250,13 +1250,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase6':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/ana4.jpg"></center>'
 		'You take some moments to stretch, and show off to a puzzled Ana, then... without hesitation, run towards a garbage container to use it like a trampoline and jump towards her... At least, that WAS the plan.'
 		'"Pfff... Sexy? Hmm... What are you doing? Te-He!"'
-		'Ana look at your sprawling form on the ground, a hand over her mouth... Yes... Because free-running look easy on the films, and you just made a fool of yourself as your improvised acrobatics, has ended with you falling on your ass, and Ana trying to contain a giggle'
-		'"Ok Sexy! Let act like... this has not happened!"'
+		'Ana look at your sprawling form on the ground, a hand over her mouth... Yes... Because free-running looks easy on the films, and you just made a fool of yourself as your improvised acrobatics, has ended with you falling on your ass, and Ana trying to contain a giggle'
+		'"Ok Sexy! Let acts like... this has not happened!"'
 
 		act 'Climb after her!': gt 'alexandriaEv','anachase5'
 
 		if spellKnown['shock'] = 1 and pcs_mana >= 20:
-			act 'The paint job in the fire scape has peeled away... and you know Electric Shock...': dummy = rand(1,100) & gt 'alexandriaEv','anachase7'
+			act 'The paint job on the fire escape has peeled away... and you know Electric Shock...': dummy = rand(1,100) & gt 'alexandriaEv','anachase7'
 		end
 
 		if npc_rel['A241'] = 1:
@@ -1296,11 +1296,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase7':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/zap.jpg"></center>'
 		'For what you understand, <i>magical</i> electricity, don''t necessarily work like the <i>natural</i> one. At the same time, Electrical Shock your only spell of the Electrical School, isn''t really that powerful to push enough charge through the stairs to affect Ana.'
 		'"Sexy! What are you waiting for?!"'
-		'That means, that even if you generate a charge powerful enough, it''s doubtful that it reaches the infuriating nut... so what to do? Well... Probably Aleksei knows a better answer, but the only thing that you can think off is to overpower the spell... and pray.'
+		'That means, that even if you generate a charge powerful enough, it''s doubtful that it reaches the infuriating nut... so what to do? Well... Probably Aleksei knows a better answer, but the only thing that you can think of is to overpower the spell... and pray.'
 		'"Sexy?"'
-		'Slowly, and with care, you follow the spell instructions, and soon blue lighting cross through your fingers, then... you pour mana into it, making it unstable... and release it towards the stair...'
+		'Slowly, and with care, you follow the spell instructions, and soon blue lighting crosses through your fingers, then... you pour mana into it, making it unstable... and release it towards the stairs...'
 		'"ARGGG!!!!!"'
-		'Ana scream as the overpowered TASER-like spell reach to her and make Ana fall... Convulsing... maybe you must look that she hasn''t suffered a heart attack...'
+		'Ana screams as the overpowered TASER-like spell reaches her and makes Ana fall... Convulsing...  you should probably make sure, that she hasn''t suffered a heart attack...'
 		'"Ana?"'
 		'You climb towards Ana''s prone form, some of that black-crimson mist surrounding her trembling body, but before you can touch her... she gets up and jumps towards a nearby window, breaking it and entering in the building.'
 
@@ -1316,9 +1316,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase7':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/true.jpg"></center>'
 			'Taking care to don''t be cut with the broken cristal, you pass through the window, to what seems to be a storeroom.'
 			'"Ana?"'
-			'There isn''t answer, except some kind of animal growls, coming from behind a rack, and as you approach to investigate, a hand reach out and grab around the corner... behind... slowly rising from a prone position is Ana... Or would be Ana, if her torso wasn''t now a giant gaping maw, full of teeth, and tentacle-like tongues.'
+			'There isn''t answer, except some kind of animal growls, coming from behind a rack, and as you approach to investigate, a hand reached out and grabs around the corner... behind... slowly rising from a prone position is Ana... Or would be Ana, if her torso wasn''t now a giant gaping maw, full of teeth, and tentacle-like tongues.'
 			'"BOOOOOOOOOO!"'
-			'Ana, scream, covering you in copious amounts of spit, before turning, and doing a <i>Slimer</i> impersonation, run out of the room, towards the building stairs. You stand there a moment... confused... before running after the quickly reforming mutant, and evading panicked neighbors.'
+			'Ana, scream, covering you in copious amounts of spit, before turning, and doing a <i>Slimer</i> impersonation, running out of the room, towards the building stairs. You stand there a moment... confused... before running after the quickly reforming mutant, and evading panicked neighbors.'
 			'"Come back Ana! I swear to god! You can''t scape me!"'
 			'Most of Ana''s velocity seems to have faded, as most of her attention seems to be on reforming herself, she even is run over by a car, as she tries to cross a street full head-on towards a multistory car park, where finally you reach her.'
 
@@ -1338,11 +1338,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase7':
 		'"Sexy! What are you waiting for?!"'
 		'That means, that even if you generate a charge powerful enough, it''s doubtful that it reaches the infuriating nut... so what to do? Well... Probably Aleksei knows a better answer, but the only thing that you can think of is to overpower the spell... and pray.'
 		'"Sexy?"'
-		'Slowly, and with care, you follow the spell instructions, and soon blue lighting cross through your fingers, then... you pour mana into it, making it unstable... and release it towards the stair...'
+		'Slowly, and with care, you follow the spell instructions, and soon blue lighting crosses through your fingers, then... you pour mana into it, making it unstable... and release it towards the stair...'
 		'"ARGGG!!!!!"'
-		'You scream as the overpowered TASER-like spell reaches to the stairs... bounce back... and discharge its energy on you... there is a kaleidoscopic halo and, you find your mana quicklly evaporating.'
+		'You scream as the overpowered TASER-like spell reaches the stairs... bounces back... and discharges its energy on you... there is a kaleidoscopic halo and, you find your mana quicklly evaporating.'
 		'"Ohhhh... Pretty! Sexy, I give you extra points for a beautiful display, but... what exactly was your plan?"'
-		'Gritting the teeth to suppress a scream, you look at your smoking hands. That wasn''t a good idea, better think on an alternative, to catch Ana.'
+		'Gritting your teeth to suppress a scream, you look at your smoking hands. That wasn''t a good idea, better think of an alternative, to catch Ana.'
 
 		act 'Climb after her!': gt 'alexandriaEv','anachase5'
 
@@ -1363,10 +1363,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachasefinal':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Ana</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/boss.jpg"></center>'
-	'Ana stand in the silent parking, with her arms stretched and that black-crimson mist forming a vaguely blade-like nimbus around her left arm... All in all, his pose would not be out of place, in an anime.'
+	'Ana stands in the silent parking, with her arms stretched and that black-crimson mist forming a vaguely blade-like nimbus around her left arm... All in all, his pose would not be out of place, in an anime.'
 	'"Ok, Sexy, this is enough! I have given you every excuse to give up! I don''t know what class of power have Alexandria - <i>cough</i> - The Great Bitch - <i>cough</i> - over you, but this is enough!"'
 	'"Then give me the key Ana!"'
-	'"I can''t Sexy! I am like Jack from Bioshock, compelled to go forward against forever increasing odds! Think in poor little mutant me, Sexy! I am not a kickass sorceress like you!"'
+	'"I can''t Sexy! I am like Jack from Bioshock, compelled to go forward against forever-increasing odds! Think in poor little mutant me, Sexy! I am not a kickass sorceress like you!"'
 	'Ana has the gall to pout and cross her hands in a pleading gesture. Is evident, at least for you, that this girl isn''t going to take you seriously, and during a long moment, the two of you stand there in an impasse, before Ana decides to break the silence.'
 
 	if npc_rel['A241'] = 1:
@@ -1397,9 +1397,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachasefinal':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Ana</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/ana3.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Ok, Ana"'
-			'Ana blinks surprised at your answer, and during a moment stand there open-mouthed, apparently, trying to process your answer.'
+			'Ana blinks surprised at your answer, and during a moment stands there open-mouthed, apparently, trying to process your answer.'
 			'"Seriously Sexy? I mean... this isn''t some trick to sucker-punch me and try to take away the key?"'
-			'You are going to answer, but Ana has begun to carefully walk backward, and looking for something else in her pockets, all the time warily eyeing you. Finally, her retreat put her back against a just arriving black SUV, and finding what she was looking for, she trow it towards you.'
+			'You are going to answer, but Ana has begun to carefully walk backward, and look for something else in her pockets, all the time warily eyeing you. Finally, her retreat put her back against a just arriving black SUV, and finding what she was looking for, she trow it towards you.'
 			'"So... Sexy... Why are even?"'
 			'You grab the item, a little pouch with money inside. That is the moment that chooses Ana to jump inside the SUV and drive away.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'city_center'
@@ -1461,10 +1461,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anascore':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/ana4.jpg"></center>'
 	'You try to put as much seriousness as you can to your words, if this nut has the gal to <i>think</i> that she can stop you, she is going to be disappointed.'
 	'"Oh come on Sexy! That is so cute! Really?! I am..."'
-	'She answers you with this mockingly smile on her lips, before abruptly stop... surprised? She turns her head slightly like she was listening to something, before turning towards you, a more serious expression on her face. Then, she looks for something in a pocket that trow at you.'
+	'She answers you with this mockingly smile on her lips, before abruptly stopping... surprised? She turns her head slightly like she is listening to something, before turning towards you, a more serious expression on her face. Then, she looks for something in a pocket and throws whatever it is at you.'
 	'It''s a <i>key</i> but now that you can examine it, not the sort used on security boxes. You are going to retort to the annoying fuck before she rise her hands in a conciliating gesture.'
 	'"Yeah I know! It just... Look sexy, I don''t have the key, but if you come with me, I will tell you where is the sword! Ehm... Girl Scout Word!"'
-	'Ana pout, giving puppy eyes, as she raises a hand in the three-finger salute.'
+	'Ana pouts, giving you her best puppy eyes, as she raises a hand in a three-finger salute.'
 	act 'Go with the loonie':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anamotel'
 end
 
@@ -1475,14 +1475,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anaryan':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Ana</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/ana4.jpg"></center>'
-	'Ana made an interesting <i>confused dog</i> impersonation, when she tilt her head, at the same time one of her hands - seemed on its own <i>mind</i> and compelled for your use of Jack''s codewords - search the pockets... The display truly unnerving.'
+	'Ana made an interesting <i>confused dog</i> impersonation, when she tilted her head, at the same time one of her hands - seemed on its own <i>mind</i> and compelled for your use of Jack''s codewords - search the pockets... The display truly unnerving.'
 	'"Hey! What are you doing!"'
 	'Her screams, fill the parking, as Ana finally realizes her rebel hand movements, but is too late to stop <i>it</i>, before the key is trow towards you.'
 	'"Thanks... Ana?!"'
 	'You look at the key, but now that you can examine it, is not the sort used on security boxes. You are going to retort to the annoying fuck, but she seems lost in a bout of crazy shrieks of laughter.'
 	'"BWAHAHAHA! Oh my! <i>Tu cara</i>! It''s priceless! You were expecting that something like that worked?! Come on Sexy!"'
-	'Ok, you are going to scrub the ground with her face! You reach for her, but stops as she rise her hands in a defeated gesture, her head slightly turned like she was listening to something.'
-	'"Sexy! I surrender! You win! Yeah! <i>I don''t care! She win!</i>! Look sexy, I don''t have the key, but if you come with me, I will tell you where is the sword! Ehm... Girl Scout Word!"'
+	'Ok, you are going to scrub the ground with her face! You reach for her but stop as she raises her hands in a defeated gesture, her head slightly turned like she was listening to something.'
+	'"Sexy! I surrender! You win! Yeah! <i>I don''t care! She wins!</i>! Look sexy, I don''t have the key, but if you come with me, I will tell you where is the sword! Ehm... Girl Scout Word!"'
 	'Ana pout, giving puppy eyes, as she raises a hand in the three-finger salute.'
 	act 'Go with the loonie':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anamotel'
 end
@@ -1494,13 +1494,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anamotel':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Ana</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/ana5.jpg"></center>'
-	'Ana take you, to a motel''s room, where she jumps in the bed and kneel.'
+	'Ana take you, to a motel''s room, where she jumps in the bed and kneels.'
 	'"Well Ana, where is the sword?"'
-	'Ana don''t seems to want to look at your face, and during a moment kneel there in silence. Finally, when she finally talks, it is without her normally flamboyant style.'
+	'Ana doesn''t seem to want to look at your face, and for a moment kneels there in silence. Finally, when she finally talks, it is without her normally flamboyant style.'
 	'"At this time my boss will have sent it to Alexandria" You blink, and some really nasty words surge towards your mouth, but Ana continues, shortcircuiting your outburst "Sorry! It wasn''t my idea! Really! This is the sort of game our bosses use to limit the <i>collateral damage</i>! It''s a message to Alexandria! And... a test to take your mettle!"'
 	'You facepalm, suddenly very tired. "So... Now what Ana?!"'
 	'Ana shrugged "You won, so I suppose that is a point for Alexandria. Additionally... Ehm... I don''t know how to say this... My boss explained to me that i... well... you know... Hm... After all this running around, you are sweaty, and maybe you want a shower... and I can... scrub you? If you want!"'
-	'A moment? The room? The shower? Is she insinuating herself to you? Oh hell no! That weirdo is... Suddenly, there is a change in Ana''s posture, and some of the unearthly vibes she has been transmitting disappear... She now looks more... Normal? Insecure? Timid? Cute? Was she affecting you with some kind of magic? What can you do now?'
+	'A moment? The room? The shower? Is she insinuating herself to you? Oh hell no! That weirdo is... Suddenly, there is a change in Ana''s posture and some of the unearthly vibes she has been transmitting disappear... She now looks more... Normal? Insecure? Timid? Cute? Was she affecting you with some kind of magic? What can you do now?'
 
 	act 'Don''t put on crazy! Run away!': AlexandriaQW = 18 & gt 'city_center'
 
@@ -1510,26 +1510,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anamotel':
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/sex/AS1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Ana get up and walk towards the bathroom. Her <i>clothes</i> reabsorbed in a twirl of black-crimson mist, making her look... <i>fuller</i> and very naked, and during a moment, you doubt what to do, before walking towards the cute blonde, taking off your clothes along the way.'
-		'She is already in the shower, when you, half-naked, reach her, and before she has time to open the water, you step into the shower, a fresh and minty fragrance filling the small space. Ana just looks at you with his trademarked big puppy eyes as you bend to kiss the shorted girl''s lips.'
-		'She freezes as your tongue fight to go beyond her mint-flavored lips, and you realize your error... Ana is looking at you with doe-like and frightened eyes... then, the damnedest, snort, and puts her forehead on your chest for support, as paroxysms of laughter rock her body.'
-		'"<i>Lo siento <<$pcs_nickname>>! Te-He! Virginal e Inocente?! Te-He! Por Dios no</i>!" Ana - <i>slowly</i> - calms and look at you with this big-goofy smile "<<$pcs_nickname>> Sigh... Now more seriously, yeah... I have never been with a woman and feel out of my comfort zone so... well... sorry, but I am not as experienced as you."'
-		'"Ana, What do you mean by <i>experienced</i>?!" At your question, she just rolls her eyes. "Oh! Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>! Alexandria is a lot of things, but <i>chaste</i> isn''t one of them! It would be surprising, if she hasn''t tied you to her bed, and have her way with your ass!"'
-		'You mussed over Ana''s word, remembering your <i>teaching lessons</i> with Aleksei, and strange words find their way towards your mouth. "So... Ana... You want to learn what <i>Aleksei</i> taught me? What if I ask you to kneel?"'
-
-		act 'She do it.':
+		'Ana gets up and walks towards the bathroom. Her <i>clothes</i> reabsorbed in a twirl of black-crimson mist, making her look... <i>fuller</i> and very naked, and during a moment, you doubt what to do, before walking towards the cute blonde, taking off your clothes along the way.'
+		'She is already in the shower, when you, half-naked, reach her, and before she has time to start the water, you step into the shower, a fresh and minty fragrance fills the small space. Ana just looks at you with her trademarked big puppy eyes as you bend to kiss the shorter girl''s lips.'
+		'She freezes as your tongue tries to get past her mint-flavored lips, and you realize your mistake. Ana looks at you with frightened, doe-like eyes. Then she snorts and rests her forehead on your chest, laughing uncontrollably.'
+		'"<i>Lo siento <<$pcs_nickname>>! Te-He! Virginal e Inocente?! Te-He! Por Dios no</i>!" Ana - <i>slowly</i> - calms and looks at you with this big-goofy smile "<<$pcs_nickname>> Sigh... but seriously, yeah... I have never been with a woman and feel out of my comfort zone so... well... sorry, but I am not as experienced as you."'
+		'"Ana, What do you mean by <i>experienced</i>?!" At your question, she just rolls her eyes. "Oh! Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>! Alexandria is a lot of things, but <i>chaste</i> isn''t one of them! It would be surprising, if she hasn''t tied you to her bed, and had her way with your ass!"'
+		'You mussed over Ana''s word, remembering your <i>teaching lessons</i> with Aleksei, and strange words find their way towards your mouth. "So... Ana... Do you want to learn what <i>Aleksei</i> taught me? What if I ask you to kneel?"'
+
+		act 'She does it.':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 3, 'dom'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/sex/AS2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Ana don''t hesitates, and with eyes full of determination, she kneels before you in submission, then... as an afterthought, Ana open the water, and grab a bar of soap and sponge. "Well... I promised to scrub you <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-			'You try to equate Ana sudden meekly act, with her late craziness, as somehow your brain look for some trick, and new words fill the shower. "Don''t use that Ana."'
-			'Again, she doesn''t falters, and without taken away her eyes from your face, she grabs your tighs and begins to kiss your leg, adding little laps to the sweaty skin. You meanwhile take away what is left of your cumbersome clothes until nothing is separating your skin from Ana''s mouth.'
+			'Ana doesn''t hesitate, and with eyes full of determination, she kneels before you in submission, then... as an afterthought, Ana turns the water back on, and grabs a bar of soap and a sponge. "Well... I promised to scrub you <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+			'You try to reconcile Ana''s sudden meekness with her recent craziness, as your brain searches for a trick. New words fill the shower: "Don''t use it, Ana."'
+			'Again, she doesn''t falters, and without taking her eyes from your face, she grabs your tighs and begins to kiss your leg, adding little laps to the sweaty skin. You meanwhile take away what is left of your cumbersome clothes until nothing is separating your skin from Ana''s mouth.'
 			'"Are you so desperate to be my sub, Ana? Hm? Then, show me <i>Mutant Girl</i>."'
 			'The new christened Mutant Girl, look at you intensely and again without vacillation, put her forehead in a silent supplication gesture, against your <i>mons Venus</i>, waiting for whatever order you quickly aroused mind can think, and during a long moment, you two stay like this with the water falling over you.'
 			'"Get up Mutant Girl!"'
-			'Your dominant hand, close over Ana''s throat... <i>Hard</i>... and make her stand. She doesn''t gasps or tries to stop you, as you use your superior height to make her tiptoed as she is put against the shower''s wall.'
+			'Your dominant hand, close over Ana''s throat... <i>Hard</i>... and make her stand. She doesn''t gasp or try to stop you, as you use your superior height to make her tiptoed as she is put against the shower''s wall.'
 
 			act 'Kiss her... and more.':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -1541,9 +1541,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anamotel':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/sex/AS3.jpg"></center>'
 				'You lick Ana''s minty flavor from your lips, as with a hand, you slowly raise one of her legs. Is a tribute to her strength and flexibility that even reaching the height of your head, Ana doesn''t lose her balance.'
 				'"Ok Mutant Girl, I don''t want to see you lower that leg... understood?"'
-				'Ana nods, and, with the raised leg never wavering a millimeter, fix herself against the shower walls. Meanwhile, you begin your journey down, kissing little by little her body, taking attention to her neck, bust, stomach, and finally her pubic mound.'
+				'Ana nods, and, with the raised leg never wavering a millimeter, fix herself against the shower walls. Meanwhile, you begin your journey down, kissing her body little by little, giving extra attention to her neck, bust, stomach, and finally her pubic mound.'
 				'"Don''t get nervous, we have reached the best part Mutant Girl."'
-				'Even with the water falling over you two, your tongue probing of her nethers show you Ana''s excitement and another thing... minty! Satisfied with this knowledge, you raise a hand to finger the salacious mutant, as you redirect your tongue to feast on her pink bean.'
+				'Even with the water falling over you two, your tongue probes her nethers, tasting Ana''s excitement and another thing... mint! Satisfied with this knowledge, you raise a hand to finger the salacious mutant, as you redirect your tongue to feast on her pink bean.'
 				'"<i>Me corro! Me corro!</i>"'
 				'In no time you have the horny Ana shaking in orgasmic bliss, and during a moment her form <i>ripple</i> showing you... brunette hair? But is just a moment before she recovers her self-control, and you observe Ana''s blissed-out expression.'
 				'"Woah! That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>! Ehm... Can we sit on the floor? Is your turn, and I want to try something!"'
@@ -1565,10 +1565,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anamotel':
 					'"Hey Mutant Girl! I am supposed to be the one giving commands!"'
 					'Ana give you innocent eyes, before literally <i>slither</i> down the wall and over you, in a tangled mess of arms and legs, that somehow end without breaking your neck against the wall, and with the two of you sitting, water falling over as your vaginas touch in a scissoring position.'
 					'"I think you will open to suggestions <i>Mistress</i>"'
-					'Ana then, pout and flutter her eyes in a parody of innocence, before giggling and begin to rock against you... frotting her lower lips against yours, trying to stimulate the flesh of your nether regions... and failing... growing frustrated as she, even with her extraordinary flexibility, seems incapable to guide both of you towards your release.'
+					'Ana then, pouts and flutters her eyes in a parody of innocence, before giggling and begin to rock against you... frotting her lower lips against yours, trying to stimulate the flesh of your nether regions... and failing... growing frustrated as she, even with her extraordinary flexibility, seems incapable to guide both of you towards your release.'
 					'"Stop Mutant Girl... let me help you..."'
-					'You somehow extend a hand without losing balance in the wet floor, and caress her face, before grabbing one of her hands and put it between you two, where your flesh meet, using it as a fixed point, were you two begin to frot, slowly taking you towards your mutual satisfaction.'
-					'"<i>Si! Ya llego!</i>." Her scream, proclaim her second orgasm of your bout of sex, and during a moment it seems that this is the end... until she bends, grabs your head, and kisses you... an impossibly long tongue going beyond your lips, as the hand between you two, goes crazy, forcing your own release soon after.'
+					'You somehow extend a hand without losing balance on the wet floor, and caress her face, before grabbing one of her hands and putting it between you, where your skin meets, using it as a fixed point, where you two begin to frot, slowly taking you towards your mutual satisfaction.'
+					'"<i>Si! Ya llego!</i>." Her scream, proclaims her second orgasm of your bout of sex, and during a moment it seems that this is the end... until she bends, grabs your head, and kisses you... an impossibly long tongue going beyond your lips, as the hand between you two, goes crazy, forcing your own release soon after.'
 
 					act 'Afterglow':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -1584,14 +1584,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anamotel':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Ana</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/ana6.jpg"></center>'
-						'After the weird experience of cumming with a tentacle-like-minted-tongue filling your mouth, Ana fulfills her promise to scrub you, and you end your shower. Then, you two return to the bedroom, where she, thanks to her powers, <i>regrow</i> her <i>clothes</i> and fix her appearance.'
-						'However on your part, you must pass for the more <i>slow</i> and <i>traditional</i> methods to put back your clothes and tidy your looks. All the time, with a strangely silent Ana that lie in the bed.'
+						'After the weird experience of cumming with a tentacle-like-minted-tongue filling your mouth, Ana fulfills her promise to scrub you, and you end your shower. Then, you two return to the bedroom, where she, thanks to her powers, <i>regrow</i> her <i>clothes</i> and fixes her appearance.'
+						'However, on your part, you must pass for the more <i>slow</i> and <i>traditional</i> methods to put back your clothes and tidy your looks. All the time, with a strangely silent Ana that lie in the bed.'
 						'"What happened, Ana? Are you falling for me?"'
 
 						if npc_rel['A241'] = 0:
-							'Ana roll her eyes "What? No! Come on Sexy! I am straight! I recognize, that It was fun, but... sorry... our bosses are going to be at each other throats in no time, and well... even without taking that into consideration, I prefer my lovers tall, dark-skinned and very male."'
+							'Ana rolls her eyes "What? No! Come on Sexy! I am straight! I recognize, that It was fun, but... sorry... our bosses are going to be at each other throats in no time, and well... even without taking that into consideration, I prefer my lovers tall, dark-skinned and very male."'
 							'"So... what happened back there?" She shrugs "just some little fun? Sexy, at the end of the day, we are rivals, and... is probably better that we leave any emotional attachment back there... in a safe place."'
-							'Saying this she doesn''t seems in the mood to talk more, and you take your things and leave the room.'
+							'Saying this she doesn''t seem in the mood to talk more, and you take your things and leave the room.'
 
 						else
 							'Ana snort "Oh my god! No! Look, I am sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, but you need more than fulfill my lesbian fantasy, for this straight girl to rethink her sexual orientation! I prefer my lovers tall, dark-skinned, and very male, but... I can add certain tall Russian woman!"'
@@ -1607,5 +1607,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anamotel':
 	end
 end
 
+killvar 'dummy'
+
 --- alexandriaEv ---------------------------------
 

locations/alexandriaHome.qsrc

@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'study':
 		act 'Training': gt 'alexandriaChat', 'training'
 		
 		if  AlexandriaQW > 13 and AlexandriaQW < 20:
-		    act '"About that sword"': gt'alexandriaChat','sword'
+		    act '"About that sword"': gt 'alexandriaChat', 'sword'
 		    
 		end
 		

locations/alexandriaSex.qsrc

@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nice1':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N3.jpg"></center>'
 			'When you try to play with your trapped cunt, he slaps your hand and forcefully takes it away.'
 			'"Ordering me again <<$pcs_lastname>>? What am I supposed to do with you? I think I must meditate on it, but until then, don''t you think that your bosom needs some attention?"'
-			'You bite your lips to stop a retort, and obediently raise your hands towards your rock hard nipples and begin to play with them. Aleksei just looks down at your ever-growing arousal with an amused smirk while humming a lullaby.'
+			'You bite your lips to stop a retort and obediently raise your hands towards your rock-hard nipples and begin to play with them. Aleksei just looks down at your ever-growing arousal with an amused smirk while humming a lullaby.'
 			'"Hm?! What the... Yes!"'
 			'It takes you by surprise when Aleksei suddenly and forcefully opens your legs and starts lapping away at your pussy like a rabid dog, the sensation quickly cutting through the knot in your stomach and releasing an orgasm that lashes against your magical core, triggering an even more powerful orgasm.'
 			'"Isn''t it better when you listen to me <<$pcs_lastname>>?"'
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nice1':
 					'As a dutiful apprentice, you understand your master''s commands without words, and following them, you begin to kiss and fondle Aleksei''s gorgeous body until you end up in a tangled mess with your face over his beautiful love box.'
 					'"Remember my apprentice... slow... We have all the time to enjoy this."'
 					'"I will try <i>master</i>..."'
-					'You expect some kind of retort, but Aleksei just gives his archetypical half-smile and caresses your hair, putting only the slightest strength to mark the rhythm as he relaxes and lets you pleasure him. With moans of pleasure signalling his pleasured arousal, you slowly raise his hips until you feel his climax in a beautiful display of pleasure.'
+					'You expect some kind of retort, but Aleksei just gives his archetypical half-smile and caresses your hair, putting only the slightest strength to mark the rhythm as he relaxes and lets you pleasure him. With moans of pleasure signaling his pleasured arousal, you slowly raise his hips until you feel his climax in a beautiful display of pleasure.'
 
 					act 'Afterglow':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -85,10 +85,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nice1':
 						end
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N6.jpg"></center>'
-						'After cuddling for a few minutes, Aleksei gets up and sit on a nearby chair, where he proceeds to light a cigarette and look at the void. His posture is slightly slouched, yet strangely relaxed when compared with Aleksei''s always ram-rod demeanor'
+						'After cuddling for a few minutes, Aleksei gets up and sits on a nearby chair, where he proceeds to light a cigarette and look at the void. His posture is slightly slouched, yet strangely relaxed when compared with Aleksei''s always ram-rod demeanor'
 						'"That was strange. I wasn''t expecting Rikudo''s magic to force us into this situation <<$pcs_lastname>>. However, I must say that is fascinating! I have not had this sort of insight into Rikudo''s work in centuries. I assume, that it has been as... enlightening to you as it was to me?"'
 						'You answer by stretching sexily over the covers and extending your hands, a slight electric flash illuminating your smiling face and making Aleksei cover a smile with a drag of his cigarette before he walks up and kneels by your side.'
-						'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, this is an opportunity I can''t refuse. With your approval, we will continue with more of these <i>teaching sessions</i>, but I want to emphasize that this has been enjoyable, and I am sure that neither of us regrets what just happened. However, this can''t be anything more that an exchange for my knowledge'
+						'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, this is an opportunity I can''t refuse. With your approval, we will continue with more of these <i>teaching sessions</i>, but I want to emphasize that this has been enjoyable, and I am sure that neither of us regrets what just happened. However, this can''t be anything more than an exchange for my knowledge'
 						'He caresses your face before getting to his feet and, with a disgusted grimace, collects his discarded lingerie and exits the room, leaving you alone with your thoughts. As Aleksei said, you will need more <i>teaching sessions</i>, but for the moment, you must get dressed.'
 						'"What the...?"'
 						'As you rise from the bed, you realize the fresh feeling over your skin, and your perfectly arranged hair. Did Aleksei''s curse <i>clean</i> you in an act of utter bullshit?'
@@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grumpy1':
 				'"Well <<$pcs_lastname>>, time to teach you some magic."'
 				'You look at him scornfully. You are sore, tired and breathless with bound hands and wobbly legs, and he wants you to continue? A look at Aleksei''s determined eyes tells you one thing. "No" isn''t the answer he is expecting.'
 				'"<<$pcs_lastname>> You are a wizard, a literal <i>willworker</i> that can make the world cry like a little girl. So why should pain, fatigue or mental duress be allowed to have power over you?"'
-				'He then grabs your chin, sending some mana through your nervous system as he begins to whisper words of power, again and again, until you grit your teeth and push mana to your bound hands, repeat his words and a sudden flash of electricity illuminates the room.'
+				'He then grabs your chin, sending some mana through your nervous system as he begins to whisper words of power, again and again, until you grit your teeth and push mana to your bound hands, repeats his words and a sudden flash of electricity illuminates the room.'
 				'"It is evident that I''m a great teacher <<$pcs_lastname>>, so how will you thank me?"'
 
                 act 'It''s his turn':
@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grumpy1':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G5.jpg"></center>'
 					'Aleksei sits on the low table and grabs your hair, positioning you between his thighs, with a leg over one of your shoulders so you end up fixed in place. His hot, wet pussy is pushed firmly against your mouth.'
 					'"Remember my pet. Slow. We have all the time to enjoy us."'
-					'You can''t retort with your face firmly in his crotch. He relaxes and lets you pleasure him, his moans of pleasure signalling that you''re doing a good job. You slowly raise his hips until you feel his climax in a dominant display of pleasure.'
+					'You can''t retort with your face firmly in his crotch. He relaxes and lets you pleasure him, his moans of pleasure signaling that you''re doing a good job. You slowly raise his hips until you feel his climax in a dominant display of pleasure.'
 
 					act 'Resting':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grumpy1':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G4.jpg"></center>'
 						'This time, you can barely talk after the session and collapse over the table with a smug-looking, cigarette smoking Aleksei looking down at you with what you hope is satisfaction, because you are going to need some rest if he wants to encode.'
-						'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, I suppose that this lesson is over. It''s seems that the curse it''s stronger than i thought, but... We have learned something isn''t it <<$pcs_lastname>>? so... our deal is unchanged. I must clear up some facts, however. The truth is that this is only the beginning. I will escalate our methodology."'
+						'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, I suppose that this lesson is over. It seems that the curse is stronger than I thought, but... We have learned something isn''t it <<$pcs_lastname>>? so... our deal is unchanged. I must clear up some facts, however. The truth is that this is only the beginning. I will escalate our methodology."'
 						'He then kneels and again grabs you by your chin before continuing.'
 						'"You may dislike my methods, but at the end of the day, that is irrelevant. I have not had this sort of insight into Rikudo''s work in centuries, and I am not going to refuse it, so... this is the new deal <<$pcs_lastname>>. If you want the knowledge that I can impart, we will continue these <i>teaching sessions</i>."'
 						'He then removes the ropes and exits the room, leaving you to try and get to your feet.'
@@ -308,7 +308,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ns1':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N3.jpg"></center>'							   
 	'Lying down over Aleksei''s fluffy bed, you treat him with the vision of your hands caressing your body, arousing the flesh, trying and failing to elicit a reaction beyond amusement from your master.'
 	'"Hm... Okay, let''s continue with some thaumaturgic terms"'
-	'With this, he lies on top of you, your rock hard nipples poking against his perfect bosom and his amused gaze against your dilated pupils. You know that Aleksei won''t let you climax until he decides that the lesson is over.'
+	'With this, he lies on top of you, your rock-hard nipples poking against his perfect bosom and his amused gaze against your dilated pupils. You know that Aleksei won''t let you climax until he decides that the lesson is over.'
 	'His lips in the nook of your neck signal the beginning as he slowly caresses and kisses his way down your body, words of power weaving magic all over your skin, making you heave and dig your fingers into the sheets as you let the wizard overload your senses.'
 	'You are groaning over a needed release as his face reaches your pussy and stops... He smells it and looks at you wickedly before he starts devouring your love button, making you climax in a torrent of magical force that wipes away all your tension and leaves you exhausted.'
 	'"You have done well, my new apprentice."'
@@ -373,9 +373,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ns3':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N5.jpg"></center>'
 	'After being driven to an intense climax and learning more about the Electrical School, you can''t do anything more as a dutiful apprentice than show your master all the tricks you have learned.'
 	'"<<$pcs_lastname>>... Don''t rush, I''m not going anywhere."'
-	'A sardonic smile accompanies Aleksei statement as he lies comfortably on his bed, a hand caressing your head and marking your rhythm as you lap at his cunt and try with all your heart to break that confident facade and make him scream like a bitch.'
+	'A sardonic smile accompanies Aleksei''s statement as he lies comfortably on his bed, a hand caressing your head and marking your rhythm as you lap at his cunt and try with all your heart to break that confident facade and make him scream like a bitch.'
 	'"Hm... Yes, my apprentice... Hm... You are doing well..."'
-	'You caress, lick, penetrate, sink, slurp and stroke all around his pussy using your fingers, mouth and tongue, but it''s not enough. Only elicit entertained half-smiles appear on his face, pushing you a little more in a restless effort until you see him close his eyes and hear a change in his breathing as one of Aleksei''s hand travels sensually down his body and he soon moans in constricted pleasure,'
+	'You caress, lick, penetrate, sink, slurp and stroke all around his pussy using your fingers, mouth and tongue, but it''s not enough. Only elicit entertained half-smiles appear on his face, pushing you a little more in a restless effort until you see him close his eyes and hear a change in his breathing as one of Aleksei''s hands travels sensually down his body and he soon moans in constricted pleasure,'
 	'For the next minutes, a smug Aleksei caresses your hair as you lie with your head in his pussy. You have not been able to make him scream like a bitch, but there is always another training lesson.'
 
 	act 'Redress and follow Aleksei':gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'
@@ -450,7 +450,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gs2':
 	end
 	gs 'stat'								   
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G4.jpg"></center>'
-	'After making you orgasm in a session of magical bondage, Aleksei reclines you against the wall and hovers over your tired form, the ropes, seemingly even more tight, digging into your itching flesh as he waits for you to catch your breath.'
+	'After making you orgasm in a session of magical bondage, Aleksei reclines you against the wall and hovers over your tired form, the ropes, seemingly even tighter, digging into your itching flesh as he waits for you to catch your breath.'
 	'"Repeat after me <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
 	'Maybe a little too soon, Aleksei grabs you by the chin so he can raise your face towards his so nothing obstructs the line of vision as words of power are pronounced and magic energy begins to fill the room as you follow his example and will your mana.'
 	'"Hm... Well, that will be all for now <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
@@ -489,8 +489,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gs3':
 	gs 'stat'							   
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G5.jpg"></center>'
 	'After a session of magical bondage and some <i>teaching</i> from Aleksei, done in his unmistakable style, you find yourself kneeling on hardwood, wrapped in bondage ropes with your head between your teacher''s toned thighs that cross behind your neck so you can''t escape.'
-	'"Ah-Ah-Ah... With care <<$pcs_lastname>>, you aren''t a vulgar meretrix!"'
-	'You eat out Aleksei, his constant nagging and <i>helpfull</i> advice making sure that you <i>properly</i>, caress, lick, penetrate, sink, slurp and stroke all around his pussy using your fingers, mouth and tongue, but it is not enough. Only elicit moans and even more nagging escape his mouth, pushing you a little more in a restless effort until you see him close his eyes and hear a change in his breathing as one of his hand travels sensually down his body he soon moans in constricted pleasure,'
+	'"Ah-Ah-Ah... Easy now, <<$pcs_lastname>>, you''re not some common harlot!"'
+	'You eat out Aleksei, his constant nagging and <i>helpfull</i> advice making sure that you <i>properly</i>, caress, lick, penetrate, sink, slurp and stroke all around his pussy using your fingers, mouth and tongue, but it is not enough. Only elicit moans and even more nagging escape his mouth, pushing you a little more in a restless effort until you see him close his eyes and hear a change in his breathing as one of his handw travels sensually down his body he soon moans in constricted pleasure,'
 	'For the next minutes, a smug Aleksei sits relaxed, smoking a cigarette as he observes you catching your breath, a silent question in the air... do you want another session?'
 
 	act 'Redress and follow Aleksei':gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'
@@ -502,7 +502,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nL1':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N3.jpg"></center>'
 	'Lying down over Aleksei''s fluffy bed, you treat him with the vision of your hands caressing your body, arousing the flesh, trying and failing to elicit a reaction beyond amusement from your master.'
 	'"Hm... Okay, let''s continue with some thaumaturgic terms"'
-	'With this, he lies on top of you, your rock hard nipples poking against his perfect bosom and his amused gaze against your dilated pupils. You know that Aleksei won''t let you climax until he decides that the lesson is over.'
+	'With this, he lies on top of you, your rock-hard nipples poking against his perfect bosom and his amused gaze against your dilated pupils. You know that Aleksei won''t let you climax until he decides that the lesson is over.'
 	'His lips in the nook of your neck signal the beginning as he slowly caresses and kisses his way down your body, words of power weaving magic all over your skin, making you heave and dig your fingers into the sheets as you let the wizard overload your senses.'
 	'You are groaning over a needed release as his face reaches your pussy and stops... He smells it and looks at you wickedly before he starts devouring your love button, making you climax in a torrent of magical force that wipes away all your tension and leaves you exhausted.'
 	'"You have done well, my new apprentice."'
@@ -542,9 +542,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nL1':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N5.jpg"></center>'
 			'After being driven to an intense climax and learning more about the Electrical School, you can''t do anything more as a dutiful apprentice than show your master all the tricks you have learned.'
 			'"<<$pcs_lastname>>... Don''t rush, I''m not going anywhere."'
-			'A sardonic smile accompanies Aleksei statement as he lies comfortably on his bed, a hand caressing your head and marking your rhythm as you lap at his cunt and try with all your heart to break that confident facade and make him scream like a bitch.'
+			'A sardonic smile accompanies Aleksei''s statement as he lies comfortably on his bed, a hand caressing your head and marking your rhythm as you lap at his cunt and try with all your heart to break that confident facade and make him scream like a bitch.'
 			'"Hm... Yes, my apprentice... Hm... You are doing well..."'
-			'You caress, lick, penetrate, sink, slurp and stroke all around his pussy using your fingers, mouth and tongue, but it''s not enough. Only elicit entertained half-smiles appear on his face, pushing you a little more in a restless effort until you see him close his eyes and hear a change in his breathing as one of Aleksei''s hand travels sensually down his body and he soon moans in constricted pleasure,'
+			'You caress, lick, penetrate, sink, slurp and stroke all around his pussy using your fingers, mouth and tongue, but it''s not enough. Only elicit entertained half-smiles appear on his face, pushing you a little more in a restless effort until you see him close his eyes and hear a change in his breathing as one of Aleksei''s hands travels sensually down his body and he soon moans in constricted pleasure,'
 			'For the next minutes, a smug Aleksei caresses your hair as you lie with your head in his pussy. You have not been able to make him scream like a bitch, but there is always another training lesson.'
 
 			act 'Redress and follow Aleksei':gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'
@@ -568,7 +568,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gL1':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G4.jpg"></center>'
-		'After making you orgasm in a session of magical bondage, Aleksei reclines you against the wall and hovers over your tired form, the ropes, seemingly even more tight, digging into your itching flesh as he waits for you to catch your breath.'
+		'After making you orgasm in a session of magical bondage, Aleksei reclines you against the wall and hovers over your tired form, the ropes, seemingly even tighter, digging into your itching flesh as he waits for you to catch your breath.'
 		'"Repeat after me <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
 		'Maybe a little too soon, Aleksei grabs you by the chin so he can raise your face towards his so nothing obstructs the line of vision as words of power are pronounced and magic energy begins to fill the room as you follow his example and will your mana.'
 		'"Hm... Well, that will be all for now <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
@@ -604,7 +604,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gL1':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G5.jpg"></center>'
 			'After a session of magical bondage and some <i>teaching</i> from Aleksei, done in his unmistakable style, you find yourself kneeling on hardwood, wrapped in bondage ropes with your head between your teacher''s toned thighs that cross behind your neck so you can''t escape.'
-			'"Ah-Ah-Ah... With care <<$pcs_lastname>>, you aren''t a vulgar meretrix!"'
+			'"Ah-Ah-Ah... Easy now, <<$pcs_lastname>>, you''re not some common harlot!"'
 			'You eat out Aleksei, his constant nagging and <i>helpfull</i> advice making sure that you <i>properly</i>, caress, lick, penetrate, sink, slurp and stroke all around his pussy using your fingers, mouth and tongue, but it is not enough. Only elicit moans and even more nagging escape his mouth, pushing you a little more in a restless effort until you see him close his eyes and hear a change in his breathing as one of his hand travels sensually down his body he soon moans in constricted pleasure,'
 			'For the next minutes, a smug Aleksei sits relaxed, smoking a cigarette as he observes you catching your breath, a silent question in the air... do you want another session?'
 
@@ -617,12 +617,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nice2':
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N7.jpg"></center>'
-    'Aleksei, don''t run to take away your clothes, in fact, he goes slow, taking with care every piece of your outfits and carefully folding them. You in the meantime bit your lips and moan, as every touch coming from the powerful wizard, sends a pleasant mana discharge up your body''s nerves.'
+    'Aleksei, don''t run to take away your clothes, in fact, he goes slow, taking with care every piece of your outfits and carefully folding them. You in the meantime bit your lips and moans, as every touch coming from the powerful wizard, sent a pleasant mana charge up your body''s nerves.'
     '"Good, my apprentice, good. You are learning to be patient and... <i>obedient</i>."'
-    'Blushing at the strange level of flattery on Aleksei''s voice, you <i>obedientlly</i> bend over the bed, so the now very naked wizard, have an easy job taking off the rest of your clothes. You don''t know what exactly he is perceiving, but you? a beautiful woman, with just the right amount of make-up in a well-lit room taken out from a film... Yes, <i>his</i> curse is bullshit.'
+    'Blushing at the strange level of flattery in Aleksei''s voice, you <i>obedientlly</i> bend over the bed, so the now very naked wizard, has an easy job taking off the rest of your clothes. You don''t know what exactly he is perceiving, but you? a beautiful woman, with just the right amount of make-up in a well-lit room taken out from a film... Yes, <i>his</i> curse is bullshit.'
     '"Nice my apprentice, very... nice. Now, sit on the headboard and present you to me."'
     'You don''t doubt, and wiggling your ass, climb unto the bed, exposing as much you can to the wizard and tantalizingly dragging yourself towards the headboard, where you sit on the fluffy pillows, and lean back, opening your legs so Aleksei has a close-up of your aroused pussy.'
-    'Aleksei stands beside the bed, obviously please as his eyes travel your body, then climb unto it, and kneel between your legs. The next moments pass in silence until Aleksei extends a hand and delicately grabs your chin, an amused smirk into his lips.'
+    'Aleksei stands beside the bed, obviously pleased as his eyes travel your body, then climbs unto it, and kneels between your legs. The next moments pass in silence until Aleksei extends a hand and delicately grabs your chin, an amused smirk on his lips.'
 
     act 'He goes down on you.':
         *clr & cla
@@ -631,11 +631,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nice2':
         gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 	    gs 'stat'
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N8.jpg"></center>'		
-        'The grab turns into a caress, that slowly goes down your neck towards your bust, where he stops a minute to slowly fondle your diamond hard nipples, seemingly pleased with the ragged moans, his mana-enhanced touch elicit. You in the meantime clench your teeth, grab the headboard, and somehow resist the urge to dip your hands between your tensed legs.'
+        'The grab turns into a caress, that slowly goes down your neck towards your bust, where he stops a minute to slowly fondle your diamond-hard nipples, seemingly pleased with the ragged moans, his mana-enhanced touch elicits. You in the meantime clench your teeth, grab the headboard, and somehow resist the urge to dip your hands between your tensed legs.'
         '"Hm... It''s seems that you have waited enough my apprentice. Let''s see if we can end this in a pleasant note."'
-        'Aleksei hand continue its travel towards your wetness, were sweetly, begin to push a finger between your drenched folds... and then stop. You gasp and instinctively try to move your hips to indulge your needs, but again and again, Aleksi moves away his finger, all the time an evil smile on his lips.'
-        '"Patience my aprentice... i don''t want to <i>feel</i> you... i want to <i>taste</i> you."'
-        'He then, begin to bend, first to kiss your bosom, and after that, to lick your blood-engorged love bud, at the same time, the until that moment quiescent fingers, begin to play with the rest of your aroused pussy. The room fills with your unrestricted sex-induced moans, accompanied by the sound of his mouth sucking your wet flesh. Aleksei barely contains your rising hips, as the constant stimulation, begins to charge your nerves with mana-enhanced arousal, quickly peeling away any rational thought, except the need for his tongue. Finally, the arousal is just too much and all the accumulated magical tension... explode... as your mind turns to mush and your body shakes in a mind-shattering orgasm.'
+        'Aleksei hand continues its travel towards your wetness, where sweetly, he begins to push a finger between your drenched folds... and then stop. You gasp and instinctively try to move your hips to indulge your needs, but again and again, Aleksi moves away his finger, all the time an evil smile on his lips.'
+        '"Patience my apprentice... I don''t want to <i>feel</i> you... i want to <i>taste</i> you."'
+        'He then, begin to bend, first to kiss your bosom, and after that, to lick your blood-engorged love bud, at the same time, the until that moment quiescent fingers, begin to play with the rest of your aroused pussy. The room fills with your unrestricted sex-induced moans, accompanied by the sound of his mouth sucking your wet flesh. Aleksei barely contains your rising hips, as the constant stimulation, begins to charge your nerves with mana-enhanced arousal, quickly peeling away any rational thought, except the need for his tongue. Finally, the arousal is just too much and all the accumulated magical tension... explodes... as your mind turns to mush and your body shakes in a mind-shattering orgasm.'
         
         act 'Learn some magic':
             minut += 10
@@ -644,15 +644,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nice2':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N9.jpg"></center>'
             'Enjoying your mana-enhanced afterglow, you lie no-cuddling over Aleksei, with your head resting on his beautiful bust, as he caresses your scalp, his mind seeming on another place, probably thinking in whatever insights your magical link has shown him.'
             '"Enough <<$pcs_lastname>>, is time to continue your training."'
-            'Aleksei accompany his words with a pair of finger taps to the back of your head before rolling, putting you two on your side, and grabbing your face with both hands, begin to say words of power. You shortly join in a magical duet, filling your mind with knowledge. Finally, instinctively, you interlock a hand, with one of Aleksei''s ones, and extending the united member, you concentrate to unleash a shower of sparks in the middle of the bedroom.' 
-            'The magical display only last a second, and end with you looking into Aleksei''s amused eyes... then, something catches your attention... from the corner of the eye, you see a strange item... a transparent dildo has found its way to Aleksei''s fluffy bed, and sit innocently by your side - <i>AlExAnDrIa HaVe a BeAuTiFuLl RuMp IsN''t It?</i> - You blink at the strange thought, and look down at the sex toy - <i>YeS, ShE WiLl ApPrEcIaTe A LiTtLe LoVe DoWn ThErE</i> - Yeah! That is a great idea!'
+            'Aleksei accompanies his words with a pair of finger taps to the back of your head before rolling, putting you two on your side, and grabbing your face with both hands, begin to say words of power. You shortly join in a magical duet, filling your mind with knowledge. Finally, instinctively, you interlock a hand, with one of Aleksei''s ones, and extending the united member, you concentrate to unleash a shower of sparks in the middle of the bedroom.' 
+            'The magical display only lasts a second, and with you looking into Aleksei''s amused eyes... then, something catches your attention... from the corner of the eye, you see a strange item... a transparent dildo has found its way to Aleksei''s fluffy bed, and sit innocently by your side - <i>AlExAnDrIa HaVe a BeAuTiFuLl RuMp IsN''t It?</i> - You blink at the strange thought, and look down at the sex toy - <i>YeS, ShE WiLl ApPrEcIaTe A LiTtLe LoVe DoWn ThErE</i> - Yeah! That is a great idea!'
             
             act 'FiRsT, TaStE HeR':
                 *clr & cla
                 gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 	            gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N10.jpg"></center>'
-                'You smile and try to put as much sultriness you can on your next words "Master! Will you let your <i>obedient</i> apprentice to <i>requite</i> your largesse?" Aleksei don''t answers but look at you with curiosity, and you take that like a keep going. You, then push him to his side until he is on all fours.'
+                'You smile and try to put as much sultriness you can on your next words "Master! Will you let your <i>obedient</i> apprentice to <i>requite</i> your largesse?" Aleksei don''t answers but looks at you with curiosity, and you take that like a keep going. You, then push him to his side until he is on all fours.'
                 '"Let me <i>serve</i> you master."'
                 'Kneeling by his side, you bend and begin a trail of kisses, down her back towards his buttocks, where with care, you open them and proceed to cover with kisses his puckered hole, all the way feeling Aleksei''s tenseness through your lips. He quickly loses that strain and with care, you begin to stick your tongue into the supernaturally clean b-hole.'
                 'There is a jolt of... something... and your head is flooded with the taste of... a thunderstorm annihilating an army, of old musty books whispering dark secrets and of... agelessness. You blink, your <i>mundane</i> mind trying to understand the alien tastes, but... your growing <i>magical</i> one? Just delight on the taste of true power.'
@@ -665,12 +665,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nice2':
                     gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	                gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N11.jpg"></center>'
-                    'Cleaning your mouth with the back of a hand after your feast, you rise and look to an expectant Aleksei. He is obviously flustered and heaving, but his eyes look at you with curiosity, waiting for your next move that is, slide a hand down his tummy towards his drenched cunt. During a moment, your hand plays with Aleksei''s well-groomed bush before change objectives, and finger his wet snatch.'
-                    'Aleksei give a contented sigh and languidly rest his head in the bed, surrendering completely to your ministrations. You take cue of this, and without stopping your attack to his box, you grab the dildo, that soon finds itself against Aleksei''s backdoor, and with care, you begin to push.'
+                    'Cleaning your mouth with the back of a hand after your feast, you rise and look to an expectant Aleksei. He is obviously flustered and heaving, but his eyes look at you with curiosity, waiting for your next move that is, slide a hand down his tummy towards his drenched cunt. During a moment, your hand plays with Aleksei''s well-groomed bush before changing objectives, and finger his wet snatch.'
+                    'Aleksei gives a contented sigh and languidly rests his head in the bed, surrendering completely to your ministrations. You take cue of this, and without stopping your attack to his box, you grab the dildo, that soon finds itself against Aleksei''s backdoor, and with care, you begin to push.'
                     '"Hmmm..."'
-                    'Aleksei pleasured wailings, fill your ears, as you begin to love with daintiness, his accommodating innards, slowly, but without pause, rising the cranky wizard excitement. You are totally engrossed in the act to give him a well-deserved orgasm, and in a reciprocity gesture - and with flexibility worthy of porn - Aleksei turn slightly to grab your face and look into your eyes.'
+                    'Aleksei pleasured wailings, fill your ears, as you begin to love with daintiness, his accommodating innards, slowly, but without pause, rising the cranky wizard excitement. You are totally engrossed in the act to give him a well-deserved orgasm, and in a reciprocity gesture - and with flexibility worthy of porn - Aleksei turns slightly to grab your face and look into your eyes.'
                     '"Ahhh..."' 
-                    'You are so utterly lost into Aleksei''s eyes, that barely hears the orgasmic moan, that accompanies his climax. He trembles and through your skin contact, feel the shivers that signal the highlight of all your work before his limbs fail, and Aleksei drops boneless in orgasmic bliss.'
+                    'You are so utterly lost in Aleksei''s eyes, that barely hears the orgasmic moan, that accompanies his climax. He trembles and through your skin contact, feel the shivers that signal the highlight of all your work before his limbs fail, and Aleksei drops boneless in orgasmic bliss.'
 
                     act 'No-Cuddling':
                         *clr & cla
@@ -695,11 +695,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nice2':
 						end
                         gs 'stat'
                         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N9.jpg"></center>'
-                        'No-cuddling again, over Aleksei''s comfortable bosom, you somewhat startled, observe the disintegrating dildo on his hands. Now that your <i>teaching lesson</i> has ended, you can see with clarity how Aleksei''s curse has manipulated you again.'
+                        'No-cuddling again, over Aleksei''s comfortable bosom, you somewhat startled, observe the disintegrating dildo in his hands. Now that your <i>teaching lesson</i> has ended, you can see with clarity how Aleksei''s curse has manipulated you again.'
                         '"Fascinating! Isn''t it <<$pcs_lastname>>? Your magic interacts with my curse, in truly interesting ways! Beyond altering your thought patterns and senses, now we have <i>Creatio ex nihilo</i>! All of this without true volition!"'
                         'Aleksei doesn''t seems to mind that his curse has basically made you a brainwashed <i>ass</i> crazy, that essentially has had her way with his butt, in fact, he seems genuinely in a good mood after the whole act, as he is caressing your hair as he muses over the whole situation.'
-                        '"Well, it has been illuminating, but i think that this <i>teaching lesson</i> has come to an end, and i must think in how to <i>reward</i> you the next time <<$pcs_lastname>>"'
-                        'He says this as the dildo finally disappear, and during a moment, Aleksei observes the know empty hand, before takin it towards your buttocks and... slice a finger towards your asshole, where he plays a little with it, before rise up from the bed, re-dress and leave the room.'
+                        '"Well, it has been illuminating, but I think that this <i>teaching lesson</i> has come to an end, and I must think on how to <i>reward</i> you the next time <<$pcs_lastname>>"'
+                        'He says this as the dildo finally disappears and during a moment, Aleksei observes the know empty hand, before taking it towards your buttocks and... slice a finger towards your asshole, where he plays a little with it, before rising up from the bed, re-dress and leave the room.'
                         act 'Redress and follow him.':gt 'alexandriaChat', 'tractatus'
                     end
                 end
@@ -751,22 +751,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grumpy2':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G10.jpg"></center>'
                 'Aleksei returns to your sigh and sits on the stool, a smirk on his lips as he lights another cigar and observes you squirm and sob. The sensations are overwhelming. You suffer painful cramps all over your bound limbs... Your asshole burns after the <i>cleaning</i> and the rubbing <i>analhook</i>... but the WORST is that you are incredibly aroused, and beyond moaning or grunting, there is nothing that you can do to quell the burn in your loins.'
                 '"Don''t worry <<$pcs_lastname>>! Just relax! We have all the time in the world!"'
-                'Aleksei look at you with the most beatific expression that you have ever seen, like he, in His infinite goodness, is doing you a favor. The mocking display extends several minutes that don''t help your arousal before he finally gets up and after delicately rearranging your hair, walk away beyond your line of sight.'
+                'Aleksei look at you with the most beatific expression that you have ever seen, like he, in His infinite goodness, is doing you a favor. The mocking display extends several minutes that don''t help your arousal before he finally gets up and after delicately rearranging your hair, walks away beyond your line of sight.'
                 '"BRRRRR"'
-                'Aleksei press a vibrating-something against your needed clit, at the same time, he uses his other hand to play with your vagina and asshole. "Oh, God!" You scream in surprise to the creator, trash against the tight ropes that dig into your skin, and lose all reasoning, as finally, Aleksei decide to <i>play</i> with your needy cunt and anus, but <i>somehow</i>, even with that, you can''t reach the climax.'
+                'Aleksei presses a vibrating something against your needed clit, at the same time, he uses his other hand to play with your vagina and asshole. "Oh, God!" You scream in surprise to the creator, trash against the tight ropes that dig into your skin, and lose all reasoning, as finally, Aleksei decides to <i>play</i> with your needy cunt and anus, but <i>somehow</i>, even with that, you can''t reach the climax.'
                 '"Good <<$pcs_lastname>>, good, now you can have your release."'
-                'With that words, <i>something</i> magical click in your head, and all the tension accumulated against your core, explode in a body-shaking magical orgasm, making you give a silent scream as all your muscles tense fighting against the ropes.'
+                'With those words, <i>something</i> magical clicks in your head, and all the tension accumulated against your core, explodes in a body-shaking magical orgasm, making you give a silent scream as all your muscles tense fighting against the ropes.'
                 
                 act 'Learn some magic':
                     *clr & cla
                     minut += 10
 	                gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G11.jpg"></center>'
-                    'It takes a while for your mind, to get clear from the mana-enhanced <i>petite mort</i>, and perceive a silent Aleksei looking intensely into your eyes. He then, when finally realize that you are more or less cognizant, rise your head by your hair... and kiss you. It''s only a moment, and immediately, he withdraws his head but maintaining your lower lip between his teeth... There is sharp sensation, pain and you taste blood... He has bitten your lip!'
+                    'It takes a while for your mind, to get clear from the mana-enhanced <i>petite mort</i>, and perceive a silent Aleksei looking intensely into your eyes. He then, when finally realizes that you are more or less cognizant, raises your head by your hair... and kisses you. It''s only a moment, and immediately, he withdraws his head but maintains your lower lip between his teeth... There is a sharp sensation, pain and you taste blood... He has bitten your lip!'
                     '"Now <<$pcs_lastname>>, let''s see if you can learn something."'
-                    'Uncaring, Aleksei twist your head and put his mouth beside your ear. Then, words of power began to push into your mana-overloaded brain, building the foundations for a new spell. Somehow, you push over the discomforts and pains, and join Aleksei in a magical duet, that little by little begins to channel all your overflowing mana in a sudden lightning flash, that send sparks flying all over the room.'
+                    'Uncaring, Aleksei turns your head and puts his mouth beside your ear. Then, words of power began to push into your mana-overloaded brain, building the foundations for a new spell. Somehow, you push over the discomforts and pains, and join Aleksei in a magical duet, that little by little begins to channel all your overflowing mana in a sudden lightning flash, that sends sparks flying all over the room.'
                     '"Nice <<$pcs_lastname>>... very nice..."'
-                    'Aleksei then, take away your ropes, making you fall down painfully, before return to the stool, and open his thighs.'
+                    'Aleksei then, take away your ropes, making you fall down painfully, before returning to the stool, and opening his thighs.'
   
                     act 'You get the message':
                         *clr & cla
@@ -778,9 +778,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grumpy2':
                         '"What are you waiting <<$pcs_lastname>>? You are a will-worker! Just come here!"'
                         '<i>Encoraged</i> by Aleksei''s words, you fight against cramps, soreness, pain, and the blood in your mouth to somehow rise to a doggy position. The next crawl towards the waiting wizard, eternalizes, as you fight to move your sleeping extremities.'
                         '"Only a litte more <<$pcs_lastname>>!"'
-                        'Finally, breathless, you reach between Aleksei''s spread legs, where he grab your hair and forcefully makes you dip into his beautiful pink box. Understanding what is expecting from you, you open your mouth and begin to eat the cranky wizard only for another jolt of mana to shake your mind... tasting... a thunderstorm annihilating an army, old musty books whispering dark secrets and... agelessness. You blink, your <i>mundane</i> mind trying to understand the alien tastes, but... your growing <i>magical</i> one? Just delight on the taste of true power.'
+                        'Finally, breathless, you reach between Aleksei''s spread legs, where he grabs your hair and forcefully makes you dip into his beautiful pink box. Understanding what he is expecting from you, you open your mouth and begin to eat the cranky wizard only for another jolt of mana to shake your mind... tasting... a thunderstorm annihilating an army, old musty books whispering dark secrets and... agelessness. You blink, your <i>mundane</i> mind trying to understand the alien tastes, but... your growing <i>magical</i> one? Just delight in the taste of true power.'
                         '"Hm... ¨You are learning <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
-                        'Suddenly, you are re-energized and launch yourself to devour Aleksei''s pink bottom. Your hands grabbing firmly his thigs as you try to drink on Aleksei''s <i>unearthly</i> flavor, filling the room with the sound of your lapping, and Aleksei''s silent moans, until you sense him tensing as he climaxes.'
+                        'Suddenly, you are re-energized and launch yourself to devour Aleksei''s pink bottom. Your hands grabbing firmly his thighs as you try to drink on Aleksei''s <i>unearthly</i> flavor, filling the room with the sound of your lapping, and Aleksei''s silent moans, until you sense him tensing as he climaxes.'
 
                         act 'Some afterwords':
                             *clr & cla
@@ -809,9 +809,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grumpy2':
 						    end
                             gs 'stat'
                             '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G4.jpg"></center>'
-                            'A pleased Aleksei look down at your prone form, too sore and tired to do much more than heave in the floor, but.... strangely, coming out utterly satisfied from the rough treatment. After some moments of introspective smoking, he bent, grab your chin, and look into your eyes.'
+                            'A pleased Aleksei looks down at your prone form, too sore and tired to do much more than heave in the floor, but.... strangely, coming out utterly satisfied from the rough treatment. After some moments of introspective smoking, he bent, grabbed your chin, and looked into your eyes.'
                             '"<<$pcs_lastname>>, It''s evident to me, that you have enjoyed this lesson beyond whatever the curse made you feel... What do you think about that? Hm? Well, at the end of the day it''s unimportant, as it seems that you can''t learn without discipline."'
-                            'Saying this, Aleksei rise, grab his carefully folded clothes, and exits the room, leaving your slowly recovering body on the floor, until with a great deal of willpower you manage to get up.'
+                            'Saying this, Aleksei rises, grabs his carefully folded clothes, and exits the room, leaving your slowly recovering body on the floor, until with a great deal of willpower you manage to get up.'
                             
                             act 'Redress and follow him.':gt 'alexandriaChat', 'tractatus'
                         end
@@ -827,11 +827,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nL2':
 	if sound = 0:PLAY 'sound/moaning6.mp3',10
     gs 'stat'
     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N8.jpg"></center>'
-    '<i>Obediently</i>, you take your clothes for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... <i>Obediently</i> you crawl towards the bed''s headboard for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... <i>Obediently</i> you sit on the fluffy pillows and open your legs for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... Then, you watch in silence as a chuckling Aleksei, get himself naked and crawl towards you.'
+    '<i>Obediently</i>, you take your clothes for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... <i>Obediently</i> you crawl towards the bed''s headboard for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... <i>Obediently</i> you sit on the fluffy pillows and open your legs for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... Then, you watch in silence as a chuckling Aleksei, gets himself naked and crawls towards you.'
     '"Good, my apprentice, good. You are learning to be patient and... <i>obedient</i>."'
-    'He then, caress delicately your chin and giving you a half-smile begin the long-road towards your burning sex, taking care that your bosom receives a well-earned attention, making your sigh as goosebumps trigger all over your skin. The next minutes pass with you heaving and moaning as Aleksei, do his dammest to impede you from cum! He eats and caresses your cunt, only to retreat and observe pleased at you squirm obediently, wetting his sheets and forcing yourself to don''t rush your hands towards your sex, until you finally can''t stop and plead.'
+    'He then, caress delicately your chin and giving you a half-smile begins the long-road towards your burning sex, taking care that your bosom receives well-earned attention, making your sigh as goosebumps trigger all over your skin. The next minutes pass with you heaving and moaning as Aleksei, do his dammest to impede you from cum! He eats and caresses your cunt, only to retreat and observe pleased at you squirm obediently, wetting his sheets and forcing yourself to don''t rush your hands towards your sex, until you finally can''t stop and plead.'
     '"So be it, my apprentice."'
-    'Then, and only then, Aleksei let your arousal rise without impediment under his ministrations. You moan, scream and trash as mana begin to gather in your core, in sync with your sexual excitement, until you climax and a torrent of power sublimate your body in an orgasmic wave.'
+    'Then, and only then, Aleksei let your arousal rise without impediment under his ministrations. You moan, scream and trash as mana begins to gather in your core, in sync with your sexual excitement, until you climax and a torrent of power sublimates your body in an orgasmic wave.'
     'After this, you slide down the headboard and cuddle with Aleksei so you can continue with your <i>lesson</i>.'
 
     act 'Continue':
@@ -839,10 +839,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nL2':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N9.jpg"></center>'
         'After getting eaten by Aleksei, and being overflowed with mana, you lie over his comfortable bust. He doesn''t seems to dislike your need to cuddle and scratch lazily your scalp.'
-        '"Ok, my aprrentice, that is enought procrastination, is time for your next <i>lesson</i>"'
-        'He then, grab your head and look deep into your eyes. His mouth opens and unearthly words fill your head with arcane knowledge. Little by little you join him in a duet, at first labored but soon easily as you work through your magical connection.'
+        '"Ok, my apprentice, that is enough procrastination, is time for your next <i>lesson</i>"'
+        'He then, grabs your head and looks deep into your eyes. His mouth opens and unearthly words fill your head with arcane knowledge. Little by little you join him in a duet, at first labored but soon easily as you work through your magical connection.'
         '"Good my apprentice... good... now show me."'
-        'You stir over Aleksei and extend a hand, soon, as you push mana through words of power, sparks begin to form between the fingers until there is an electrical flash, and magical lighting illuminated the room. Aleksei observe your demonstration with a critical eye, before assenting with approval. After that, is just you two, lazily lying in each other arms, before a sudden magical compulsion in the back of your head, made you move. Aleksei looks at you in understanding... is time to continue with his part of the <i>lesson</i>.'
+        'You stir over Aleksei and extend a hand, soon, as you push mana through words of power, sparks begin to form between the fingers until there is an electrical flash, and magical lighting illuminates the room. Aleksei observe your demonstration with a critical eye, before assenting with approval. After that, is just you two, lazily lying in each other arms, before a sudden magical compulsion in the back of your head, made you move. Aleksei looks at you in understanding... is time to continue with his part of the <i>lesson</i>.'
 		
         act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -868,9 +868,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nL2':
 			end
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N10.jpg"></center>'
-            'Aleksei has made you climax, and fill your mind with arcane knowledge, so is time to being reciprocal and give something back to your master, so... you put him in his fours, and delicately begin to kiss his back down to that beautiful rump that hides his little brown star.'
-            'He doesn''t stop you as your tongue dig into that delicious hole - a light sigh in his lips as the only reaction - and your mind is flooded with strange visions and sensations, as your magics <i>connect</i>, making you shudder as mana begin to flow between you two. Instinctively, one of your hands reach towards his pubic mound and play with his well-groomed bush... but that isn''t your final destination... After some moments, you reach to his perfect box, and begin to work.'
-            'The room fills with Aleksei''s dainty moans and your wet laps, as you edge his wet box and hot asshole, pleasuring the unflappable wizard. The only signal that he is getting near his climax, is when he finally caress your face, so you turn and look into Aleksei''s eyes, as he cum.'
+            'Aleksei has made you climax, and fill your mind with arcane knowledge, so it is time to reciprocate and give something back to your master, so... you put him in his fours, and delicately begin to kiss his back down to that beautiful rump that hides his little brown star.'
+            'He doesn''t stop you as your tongue digs into that delicious hole - a light sigh on his lips as the only reaction - and your mind is flooded with strange visions and sensations, as your magics <i>connect</i>, making you shudder as mana begin to flow between you two. Instinctively, one of your hands reaches towards his pubic mound and plays with his well-groomed bush... but that isn''t your final destination... After some moments, you reach to his perfect box, and begin to work.'
+            'The room fills with Aleksei''s dainty moans and your wet laps, as you edge his wet box and hot asshole, pleasuring the unflappable wizard. The only signal that he is getting near his climax, is when he finally caresses your face, so you turn and look into Aleksei''s eyes, as he cum.'
             'After this, you again cuddle with him thinking in your lessons, until he pats lightly your backhead, to signal the end of your little runt.'
 
             act 'Redress and follow Aleksei':gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'
@@ -885,18 +885,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gL2':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G10.jpg"></center>'
     'Aleksei, ties you with ropes in utter silence, ignoring your grunts of pain, as your body is bound so you can''t enact any move. When he is sure you can''t move your extremities, he hangs you face down from the ceiling. Aleksei then, takes away slowly his clothes, letting you come under cramps as he ignores your suffering.'
     '"Well... Let''s begin <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
-    'You contain your breath because you know what is going to happen. Aleksei, disappear from your line of sight as he walks behind you, and push a finger up your rectum... "AHHHH!" You scream as an electrical jolt cleans your innards, and make you shake in your bounds... Then, without care for your sore asshole, Aleksei begins to smear some K-Y Jelly inside it. Your ragged breath fills the room at the mix of sensations as the Jelly touches the sensitive inner skin.'
-    '"Hmpf" That barely whispered grunt, is the only sound that occasionally says Aleksei to accompany your grunts and moans. He, with utter detachment, play with you, first stirring your asshole with an analhook and after that work your cunt with a magic wand. Your body suffers from painful cramps, your asshole is sore and stretched tight, and occasionally magical jolts shake your body. Even with all that you can negate your arousal, and little by little Aleksei manages to forcibly made you cum, triggering your core to suffuse your body in mana.'
+    'You contain your breath because you know what is going to happen. Aleksei disappears from your line of sight as he walks behind you, and pushes a finger up your rectum... "AHHHH!" You scream as an electrical jolt cleans your innards, and make you shake in your bounds... Then, without care for your sore asshole, Aleksei begins to smear some K-Y Jelly inside it. Your ragged breath fills the room at the mix of sensations as the Jelly touches the sensitive inner skin.'
+    '"Hmpf" That barely whispered grunt, is the only sound that occasionally says Aleksei to accompany your grunts and moans. He, with utter detachment, plays with you, first stirring your asshole with an analhook and after that, he works your cunt with a magic wand. Your body suffers from painful cramps, your asshole is sore and stretched tight, and occasionally magical jolts shake your body. Even with all that you can negate your arousal, and little by little Aleksei manages to forcibly made you cum, triggering your core to suffuse your body in mana.'
     
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G11.jpg"></center>'
-        'After hanging you from the ceiling, and forcefully make you climax, Aleksei stands in front of you. He smokes and seems strangely pleased with your squirming and sore form. Finally, after some moments of introspection, he rises your head by your hair, and kisses you, not forgetting to bit slightly your lips.'
+        'After hanging you from the ceiling, and forcefully making you climax, Aleksei stands in front of you. He smokes and seems strangely pleased with your squirming and sore form. Finally, after some moments of introspection, he raises your head by your hair, and kisses you, not forgetting to bite your lips slightly.'
         'Pay attention <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
-        'Aleksei put his mouth beside your ear, and begin to spell words of power. You fight through the numbness provoked by the manna-enhanced climax, your tired body, and sore limbs, managing to somehow join him in the spell crafting, and little by little something unearthly begins to form in the room. There is a flash and momentarily lighting illuminates the room.'
+        'Aleksei puts his mouth beside your ear and begins to spell words of power. You fight through the numbness provoked by the manna-enhanced climax, your tired body, and sore limbs, managing to somehow join him in the spell crafting, and little by little something unearthly begins to form in the room. There is a flash and momentarily lighting illuminates the room.'
         'Hm... Well done <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
-        'After that, Aleksei rearranges your hair, before without too much fanfare, release the ropes, that tie you, and you fall painfully to the ground, ready for your next <i>lesson</i>.'
+        'After that, Aleksei rearranges your hair, before without too much fanfare, releases the ropes, that tie you, and you fall painfully to the ground, ready for your next <i>lesson</i>.'
         
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -926,8 +926,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gL2':
 			end
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G5.jpg"></center>'
-            'After a session of magical bondage and some <i>teaching</i> from Aleksei, done in his unmistakable style, you find yourself, kneeling on hardwood, wrapped in bondage ropes and with your head between your teacher toned thigs, that cross behind your neck, so you can''t scape this munching session.'
-            '"Ah-Ah-Ah... Whit care <<$pcs_lastname>>, you aren''t a vulgar meretrix!"'
+            'After a session of magical bondage and some <i>teaching</i> from Aleksei, done in his unmistakable style, you find yourself, kneeling on hardwood, wrapped in bondage ropes and with your head between your teacher toned thighs, that cross behind your neck, so you can''t scape this munching session.'
+            '"Ah-Ah-Ah... Easy now, <<$pcs_lastname>>, you''re not some common harlot!"'
             'And you munch... and munch... with Aleksei''s hand in your head, marking the rhythm, and his constant nagging and <i>helpfull</i> advice, so you <i>properly</i>, caress, lick, penetrate, sink, slurp and stroke all around his pussy using your fingers, mouth, and tongue... and is not enough... only elicit more nagging from the elder wizard, pushing you a little more, in a restless effort... until you see him close the eyes, and hear a change in his breathing as one of Aleksei''s hand travels sensually his body, and soon the blonde, moan in constricted pleasure,'
             'During the next minutes, a smug Aleksei sits relaxed, smoking a cigarette as he observes you, recatching your breath, a silent question in the air... do you want another session?'
             
@@ -959,11 +959,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ns4':
 	end
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N8.jpg"></center>'
-    '<i>Obediently</i>, you take your clothes for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... <i>Obediently</i> you crawl towards the bed''s headboard for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... <i>Obediently</i> you sit on the fluffy pillows and open your legs for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... Then, you watch in silence as a chuckling Aleksei, get himself naked and crawl towards you.'
+    '<i>Obediently</i>, you take your clothes for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... <i>Obediently</i> you crawl towards the bed''s headboard for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... <i>Obediently</i> you sit on the fluffy pillows and open your legs for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... Then, you watch in silence as a chuckling Aleksei, gets himself naked and crawls towards you.'
     '"Good, my apprentice, good. You are learning to be patient and... <i>obedient</i>."'
-    'He then, caress delicately your chin and giving you a half-smile begin the long-road towards your burning sex, taking care that your bosom receives a well-earned attention, making your sigh as goosebumps trigger all over your skin. The next minutes pass with you heaving and moaning as Aleksei, do his dammest to impede you from cum! He eats and caresses your cunt, only to retreat and observe pleased at you squirm obediently, wetting his sheets and forcing yourself to don''t rush your hands towards your sex, until you finally can''t stop and plead.'
+    'He then, caress delicately your chin and giving you a half-smile begins the long-road towards your burning sex, taking care that your bosom receives some well-earned attention, making your sigh as goosebumps trigger all over your skin. The next minutes pass with you heaving and moaning as Aleksei, does his dammest to impede you from cum! He eats and caresses your cunt, only to retreat and observe pleased at you squirm obediently, wetting his sheets and forcing yourself to don''t rush your hands towards your sex, until you finally can''t stop and plead.'
     '"So be it, my apprentice."'
-    'Then, and only then, Aleksei let your arousal rise without impediment under his ministrations. You moan, scream and trash as mana begin to gather in your core, in sync with your sexual excitement, until you climax and a torrent of power sublimate your body in an orgasmic wave.'
+    'Then, and only then, Aleksei let your arousal rise without impediment under his ministrations. You moan, scream and trash as mana begins to gather in your core, in sync with your sexual excitement, until you climax and a torrent of power sublimates your body in an orgasmic wave.'
     'After this, you slide down the headboard and cuddle with Aleksei so you can continue with your <i>lesson</i>.'
 	
 	act 'Redress and follow Aleksei':gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'
@@ -993,10 +993,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ns5':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N9.jpg"></center>'
     'After getting eaten by Aleksei, and being overflowed with mana, you lie over his comfortable bust. He doesn''t seems to dislike your need to cuddle and scratch lazily your scalp.'
-    '"Ok, my aprrentice, that is enought procrastination, is time for your next <i>lesson</i>"'
-    'He then, grab your head and look deep into your eyes. His mouth opens and unearthly words fill your head with arcane knowledge. Little by little you join him in a duet, at first labored but soon easily as you work through your magical connection.'
+    '"Ok, my apprentice, that is enough procrastination, is time for your next <i>lesson</i>"'
+    'He then, grabs your head and looks deep into your eyes. His mouth opens and unearthly words fill your head with arcane knowledge. Little by little you join him in a duet, at first labored but soon easily as you work through your magical connection.'
     '"Good my apprentice... good... now show me."'
-    'You stir over Aleksei and extend a hand, soon, as you push mana through words of power, sparks begin to form between the fingers until there is an electrical flash, and magical lighting illuminated the room. Aleksei observe your demonstration with a critical eye, before assenting with approval. After that, is just you two, lazily lying in each other arms, before a sudden magical compulsion in the back of your head, made you move. Aleksei looks at you in understanding... is time to continue with his part of the <i>lesson</i>.'
+    'You stir over Aleksei and extend a hand, soon, as you push mana through words of power, sparks begin to form between the fingers until there is an electrical flash, and magical lighting illuminates the room. Aleksei observe your demonstration with a critical eye, before assenting with approval. After that, is just you two, lazily lying in each other arms, before a sudden magical compulsion in the back of your head, made you move. Aleksei looks at you in understanding... is time to continue with his part of the <i>lesson</i>.'
 
     act 'Redress and follow Aleksei':gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'
 end
@@ -1024,9 +1024,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ns6':
 	end
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N10.jpg"></center>'
-    'Aleksei has made you climax, and fill your mind with arcane knowledge, so is time to being reciprocal and give something back to your master, so... you put him in his fours, and delicately begin to kiss his back down to that beautiful rump that hides his little brown star.'
-    'He doesn''t stop you as your tongue dig into that delicious hole - a light sigh in his lips as the only reaction - and your mind is flooded with strange visions and sensations, as your magics <i>connect</i>, making you shudder as mana begin to flow between you two. Instinctively, one of your hands reach towards his pubic mound and play with his well-groomed bush... but that isn''t your final destination... After some moments, you reach to his perfect box, and begin to work.'
-    'The room fills with Aleksei''s dainty moans and your wet laps, as you edge his wet box and hot asshole, pleasuring the unflappable wizard. The only signal that he is getting near his climax, is when he finally caress your face, so you turn and look into Aleksei''s eyes, as he cum.'
+    'Aleksei has made you climax, and filled your mind with arcane knowledge, so it is time to reciprocate and give something back to your master, so... you put him on his fours, and delicately begin to kiss his back down to that beautiful rump that hides his little brown star.'
+    'He doesn''t stop you as your tongue digs into that delicious hole - a light sigh on his lips is the only reaction - and your mind is flooded with strange visions and sensations, as your magics <i>connect</i>, making you shudder as mana begin to flow between you two. Instinctively, one of your hands reaches towards his pubic mound and plays with his well-groomed bush... but that isn''t your final destination... After some moments, you reach to his perfect box, and begin to work.'
+    'The room fills with Aleksei''s dainty moans and your wet laps, as you edge his wet box and hot asshole, pleasuring the unflappable wizard. The only signal that he is getting near his climax, is when he finally caresses your face, so you turn and look into Aleksei''s eyes, as he cum.'
     'After this, you again cuddle with him thinking in your lessons, until he pats lightly your backhead, to signal the end of your little runt.'
     
     act 'Redress and follow Aleksei':gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'
@@ -1061,8 +1061,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gs4':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G10.jpg"></center>'
     'Aleksei, ties you with ropes in utter silence, ignoring your grunts of pain, as your body is bound so you can''t enact any move. When he is sure you can''t move your extremities, he hangs you face down from the ceiling. Aleksei then, takes away slowly his clothes, letting you come under cramps as he ignores your suffering.'
     '"Well... Let''s begin <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
-    'You contain your breath because you know what is going to happen. Aleksei, disappear from your line of sight as he walks behind you, and push a finger up your rectum... "AHHHH!" You scream as an electrical jolt cleans your innards, and make you shake in your bounds... Then, without care for your sore asshole, Aleksei begins to smear some K-Y Jelly inside it. Your ragged breath fills the room at the mix of sensations as the Jelly touches the sensitive inner skin.'
-    '"Hmpf" That barely whispered grunt, is the only sound that occasionally says Aleksei to accompany your grunts and moans. He, with utter detachment, play with you, first stirring your asshole with an analhook and after that work your cunt with a magic wand. Your body suffers from painful cramps, your asshole is sore and stretched tight, and occasionally magical jolts shake your body. Even with all that you can negate your arousal, and little by little Aleksei manages to forcibly made you cum, triggering your core to suffuse your body in mana.'
+    'You contain your breath because you know what is going to happen. Aleksei disappears from your line of sight as he walks behind you, and push a finger up your rectum... "AHHHH!" You scream as an electrical jolt cleans your innards, and make you shake in your bounds... Then, without care for your sore asshole, Aleksei begins to smear some K-Y Jelly inside it. Your ragged breath fills the room at the mix of sensations as the Jelly touches the sensitive inner skin.'
+    '"Hmpf" That barely whispered grunt, is the only sound that occasionally says Aleksei to accompany your grunts and moans. He, with utter detachment, play with you, first stirring your asshole with an analhook and after that works your cunt with a magic wand. Your body suffers from painful cramps, your asshole is sore and stretched tight, and occasionally magical jolts shake your body. Even with all that you can negate your arousal, and little by little Aleksei manages to forcibly made you cum, triggering your core to suffuse your body in mana.'
     
     act 'Redress and follow Aleksei':gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'
 end
@@ -1094,11 +1094,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gs5':
 	end
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G11.jpg"></center>'
-    'After hanging you from the ceiling, and forcefully make you climax, Aleksei stands in front of you. He smokes and seems strangely pleased with your squirming and sore form. Finally, after some moments of introspection, he rises your head by your hair, and kisses you, not forgetting to bit slightly your lips.'
+    'After hanging you from the ceiling, and forcefully making you climax, Aleksei stands in front of you. He smokes and seems strangely pleased with your squirming and sore form. Finally, after some moments of introspection, he rises your head by your hair, and kisses you, not forgetting to bit slightly your lips.'
     'Pay attention <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
-    'Aleksei put his mouth beside your ear, and begin to spell words of power. You fight through the numbness provoked by the manna-enhanced climax, your tired body, and sore limbs, managing to somehow join him in the spell crafting, and little by little something unearthly begins to form in the room. There is a flash and momentarily lighting illuminates the room.'
+    'Aleksei put his mouth beside your ear and began to spell words of power. You fight through the numbness provoked by the manna-enhanced climax, your tired body, and sore limbs, managing to somehow join him in the spell crafting, and little by little something unearthly begins to form in the room. There is a flash and momentarily lighting illuminates the room.'
     'Hm... Well done <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
-    'After that, Aleksei rearranges your hair, before without too much fanfare, release the ropes, that tie you, and you fall painfully to the ground, ready for your next <i>lesson</i>.'
+    'After that, Aleksei rearranges your hair, before without too much fanfare, releases the ropes, that tie you, and you fall painfully to the ground, ready for your next <i>lesson</i>.'
 
 	act 'Redress and follow Aleksei':gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'
 end
@@ -1130,8 +1130,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gs6':
 	end
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G5.jpg"></center>'
-    'After a session of magical bondage and some <i>teaching</i> from Aleksei, done in his unmistakable style, you find yourself, kneeling on hardwood, wrapped in bondage ropes and with your head between your teacher toned thigs, that cross behind your neck, so you can''t scape this munching session.'
-    '"Ah-Ah-Ah... Whit care <<$pcs_lastname>>, you aren''t a vulgar meretrix!"'
+    'After a session of magical bondage and some <i>teaching</i> from Aleksei, done in his unmistakable style, you find yourself, kneeling on hardwood, wrapped in bondage ropes and with your head between your teacher toned thighs, that cross behind your neck, so you can''t scape this munching session.'
+    '"Ah-Ah-Ah... Easy now, <<$pcs_lastname>>, you''re not some common harlot!"'
     'And you munch... and munch... with Aleksei''s hand in your head, marking the rhythm, and his constant nagging and <i>helpfull</i> advice, so you <i>properly</i>, caress, lick, penetrate, sink, slurp and stroke all around his pussy using your fingers, mouth, and tongue... and is not enough... only elicit more nagging from the elder wizard, pushing you a little more, in a restless effort... until you see him close the eyes, and hear a change in his breathing as one of Aleksei''s hand travels sensually his body, and soon the blonde, moan in constricted pleasure,'
     'During the next minutes, a smug Aleksei sits relaxed, smoking a cigarette as he observes you, recatching your breath, a silent question in the air... do you want another session?'
 

locations/andreihunter.qsrc

@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ else
 			if huntersAndreiQw < 10 : huntersAndreiQw += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+			act 'Continue': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
 
 		if huntersAndreiQw >= 10:
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ else
 										minut += 5
 										gs 'stat'
 
-										act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+										act 'Continue': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 									end
 								end
 							end
@@ -145,11 +145,11 @@ else
 								huntersAndreiQw -= 50
 								gs 'stat'
 
-								act'Leave':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+								act 'Leave': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 							end
 						end
 					end
-					act'Leave':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+					act 'Leave': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Spend time together':
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ else
 					pcs_mood = 100
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					act'Leave':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+					act 'Leave': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 				end
 				if pcs_horny >= 60:
 					act 'Have sex':
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ else
 				end
 			end
 		end
-		act'Leave':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+		act 'Leave': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	end
 end
 

locations/anush_bedroom.qsrc

@@ -525,7 +525,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 										npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 										'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les2.jpg"></center>'
-										'Once in bed, you waste no time pulling her clothes off, and she returns the favour and starts to remove your clothes as well. It would go much faster if the two of you weren''t also passionately kissing while caressing each others'' bodies. Regardless, you''re soon both naked.'
+										'Once in bed, you waste no time pulling her clothes off, and she returns the favor and starts to remove your clothes as well. It would go much faster if the two of you weren''t also passionately kissing while caressing each others'' bodies. Regardless, you''re soon both naked.'
 										gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'lesbian'
 										act 'Get pleasured': gt 'anushkaev1', 'getpleasured'
 									end
@@ -749,7 +749,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar':
 			npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushplay.jpg"></center>'
-			'Anushka''s eyes brighten up as you ask her. She reaches over and grabs the acoustic guitar, strumming a few bars to check it''s still in tune. "I''ll play you the very first song I ever learned. It''s one of my dad''s favourites." She starts playing and then singing the song. It takes you a moment to recognize that she''s playing and singing ''Wanted Dead or Alive'' by Bon Jovi.'
+			'Anushka''s eyes brighten up as you ask her. She reaches over and grabs the acoustic guitar, strumming a few bars to check it''s still in tune. "I''ll play you the very first song I ever learned. It''s one of my dad''s favorites." She starts playing and then singing the song. It takes you a moment to recognize that she''s playing and singing ''Wanted Dead or Alive'' by Bon Jovi.'
 			*nl
 			'You''re impressed with her talent. She''s a good singer, better than some people you''ve heard on the radio, but is an even better guitar player. As she ends her song, you clap your hands. "Wow, I''ve heard you''re good, but I didn''t know that you were this good!"'
 			'She blushes at your compliment. "Thanks. I work hard at it, so it''s nice to be appreciated for it," she replies as she gets up and puts her guitar back in its place.'
@@ -780,7 +780,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar':
 			npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushplay.jpg"></center>'
-			'She reaches over and grabs the acoustic guitar. "Sure, I''ll play you something else. This is a lot more our generation." She strums the guitar and checks to ensure it''s still in tune. "This is the first song Rad and I worked on learning together. It''s ''Make Me Wanna Die'' by The Pretty Reckless. It''s also when my obsession, and girl crush, with Taylor started."'
+			'She reaches over and grabs the acoustic guitar. "Sure, I''ll play you something else. This is a lot more our generation." She strums the guitar and checks to ensure it''s still in tune. "This is the first song Rad and I worked on learning together. It''s ''Make Me Wanna Die'' by The Pretty Reckless. It''s also when my obsession, and girl crush, with Taylor, started."'
 			*nl
 			'She motions to the band poster on her wall. She starts playing and singing the new song; it still has that rock feel like the others, but is more modern.'
 			'She plays and sings just as well as before. When she ends her song, you clap your hands and praise her. "Another great song. You really are good at this."'
@@ -794,7 +794,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar':
 				'"What?" she asks, having been lost in thought.'
 				'"What you just said, about how he thought it was perfect for you guys and in the end, you guess he was right?" You don''t know if she was just being obtuse or evasive.'
 				*nl
-				'She turns silent, making you think she was being evasive and knew precisely what you meant, before she sighs. "Rad thinks I was a good girl playing a bad girl and that he corrupted me and made me fall in love with him and life. So to him, the song was always about that. He saw himself as the seductive charmer that drew me in."'
+				'She turns silent, making you think she was being evasive and knew precisely what you meant before she sighs. "Rad thinks I was a good girl playing a bad girl and that he corrupted me and made me fall in love with him and life. So to him, the song was always about that. He saw himself as the seductive charmer that drew me in."'
 				'She shrugs. "I suppose there''s a tiny bit of truth to that, but I was already well on my way to being a wild rocker chick by that point. He might have sped me into who I always was going to be, but he didn''t make me." She stops, but you know there''s more to it. You''re not sure she wants to talk about it though.'
 				act 'Let it go': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 				act 'Press it': 
@@ -831,7 +831,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar':
 			'She reaches over and grabs the acoustic guitar. "Sure, I''ll play you something else. This one I learned shortly after seeing the uncensored music video for it." She strums the guitar and checks to ensure it''s still in tune. "It''s ''Heaven Knows'' by The Pretty Reckless."'
 			'She starts playing and singing the new song, playing and singing just as well as before. When she ends her piece, you clap your hands and praise her. "Another great song. You really are good at this."'
 			*nl
-			'Thanks. I still remember the first time I watch the music video for this." She bites her lower lip, clearly getting a little turned on thinking about it. "When Taylor pulled off her robe and flashed her naked body... Oh man, that was so fucking hot. I can''t lie; I''ve rubbed one out more times than I care to remember thinking about that scene while staring at that poster," she says while indicating The Pretty Reckless poster on her wall.'
+			'Thanks. I still remember the first time I watched the music video for this." She bites her lower lip, clearly getting a little turned on thinking about it. "When Taylor pulled off her robe and flashed her naked body... Oh man, that was so fucking hot. I can''t lie; I''ve rubbed one out more times than I care to remember thinking about that scene while staring at that poster," she says while indicating The Pretty Reckless poster on her wall.'
 			'You giggle and glance at the poster. You could see Anushka rubbing one out while looking at the poster. Thinking about her rubbing one out, laying on the bed she''s now on, is starting to make you a little horny. You shake your head to banish the thought and change the subject while she puts the guitar back in its place, talking about her future music career.'
 			act 'Continue':gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 		elseif anushkaQW['guitar_play'] = 5:
@@ -1081,7 +1081,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar_play_together':
 		minut += 60
 		'You don''t make any mistakes and don''t have any trouble keeping up with her. In fact, you feel confident that you outplayed her. You play together for about an hour before she stops. "Damn <<$pcs_nickname>>, I think you''re better than I am!" she says with a smile.'
 		'You return her smile. "Thanks. I''ve been working hard on trying to master it."'
-		'"Well, it sounds like it was time well spent. I had fun and think we should totally do this again." The two of you talk about your different styles of practising and any tips or tricks you learned along the way that might help each other.'
+		'"Well, it sounds like it was time well spent. I had fun and think we should totally do this again." The two of you talk about your different styles of practicing and any tips or tricks you learned along the way that might help each other.'
 		act 'Get off the bed': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 		act 'Chat to her': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 	end

locations/anush_bedroom_city.qsrc

@@ -938,7 +938,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar_play_together':
 		minut += 60
 		'You don''t make any mistakes and don''t have any trouble keeping up with her. In fact, you feel confident that you outplayed her. You play together for about an hour before she stops. "Damn <<$pcs_nickname>>, I think you''re better than I am!" she says with a smile.'
 		'You return her smile. "Thanks. I''ve been working hard on trying to master it."'
-		'"Well, it sounds like it was time well spent. I had fun and think we should totally do this again." The two of you talk about your different styles of practising and any tips or tricks you learned along the way that might help each other.'
+		'"Well, it sounds like it was time well spent. I had fun and think we should totally do this again." The two of you talk about your different styles of practicing and any tips or tricks you learned along the way that might help each other.'
 		act 'Get off the bed': gt 'anush_bedroom_city','anushroom'
 		act 'Chat to her': gt 'anushkachat_city', 'chat'
 	end

locations/anushapt.qsrc

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 # anushapt
-!2024/03/25
+!2024/04/03
 !AnushkaLoc tells us where Anvushka is located
 !----------------------------------------------
 !AnushkaLoc = 0 (Anushka not home)
@@ -12,6 +12,9 @@
 !AnushkaLoc = 7 (Anushka in the bathroom)
 !---------------------------------------------
 
+!!anushkaQW['edtalk'] += 1  how many times Sveta has talked to Ed in the living room
+!!anushkaQW['kidstory'] += 1 How many times Ed has told Sveta bout Anushka as a kid
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 	menu_off = 0
 	$track_loop = ''
@@ -36,10 +39,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 	'You walk up to the front door and knock.'
 	if hour >= 22:
 		'It''s too late in the day to visit Anushka.'
-		act 'Move away from the door':gt'pav_complex', 'start'
+		act 'Move away from the door':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 	elseif hour < 8:
 		'It''s too early in the day to visit Anushka.'
-		act 'Move away from the door':gt'pav_complex', 'start'
+		act 'Move away from the door':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 	elseif locat['A144'] = 30:
 		*clr & cla
 		menu_off = 1
@@ -47,27 +50,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
 		'You stand outside the Konstantinov household knocking on the door. It''s some time before someone answers it. In the end, it turns out to be Maksim. He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "Nush isn''t here right now. She''s driving around the country with the band, they went on tour, I wish I could have gone."'
 		'You nod to that, you remember that now. "Right, I can''t believe I forgot that, well hope they are having fun."'
-		'"Rad is likely banging all the bitch''s." His tone makes it sound like he is a little jealous. "Nush is likely getting gangbanged by the band or a bunch of random dude every night." He says smuggly like it is some kind of joke.'
+		'"Rad is likely banging all the bitch''s." His tone makes it sound like he is a little jealous. "Nush is likely getting gangbanged by the band or a bunch of random dude every night." He says smugly like it is some kind of joke.'
 		*nl
 		'You shake your head. "You really shouldn''t say that about your sister."'
-		'He snorts derisively. "What are you my dad all of a sudden? Besides that''s what mom says."'
+		'He snorts derisively. "What are you my dad all of a sudden? Besides that''s what Mom says."'
 		'You just sigh, no point trying to talk to him about that. "Anyways do you know when they will be back?"'
-		'He shrugs. "She is suppose to be back sometime in August, mom said I can''t let any of her friends in while she is gone." Before you can even get a word in, he slowly closes the door checking you out as he does. With nothing more to do, you turn to leave.'
-		act 'Move away from the door':gt'pav_complex', 'start'
+		'He shrugs. "She is supposed to be back sometime in August, mom said I can''t let any of her friends in while she is gone." Before you can even get a word in, he slowly closes the door checking you out as he does. With nothing more to do, you turn to leave.'
+		act 'Move away from the door':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 	elseif yearstart > 1:
 		*clr & cla
 		menu_off = 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
-		'You stand outside the Konstantinov household knocking on the door. It''s some time before someone answers it. In the end, it turns out to be Maksim. He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "Nush isn''t moved out, she moved to the city with Rad and the guys, they got some apartment near the Uni so she can go to school." He sounds like he is about to throw up thinking about choosing to attend more school, he doesn''t seem to like school much.'
+		'You stand outside the Konstantinov household knocking on the door. It''s some time before someone answers it. In the end, it turns out to be Maksim. He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "Nush isn''t here she moved out, she moved to the city with Rad and the guys, they got some apartment near the University so she can go to school." He sounds like he is about to throw up thinking about choosing to attend more school, he doesn''t seem to like school much.'
 		'You nod to that. "Oh... ok, do you have their address?"'
-		'He sighs loudly like you are huge bother. "No, Rad works at the music store in the mall, I try and stop by when I get time to go to the city. Maybe you can stop by and ask him." He makes it sound like he is real busy and traveling around doing important stuff.'
+		'He sighs loudly like you are a huge bother. "No, Rad works at the music store in the mall, I try and stop by when I get time to go to the city. Maybe you can stop by and ask him." He makes it sound like he is real busy and traveling around doing important stuff.'
 		*nl
-		'You snort slightly in amusement. "Your sister work there too?"'
-		'He rolls his eyes. "No." He says no like you are a idiot for asking. "She works as a waitress or something at a coffee shop near where they live, like she could get a cool job like Rad, she is just some dumb waitress."'
-		'You just sigh, you are briefly tempted to point out your mom is just a waitress too. But no point trying to talk to him about that. "Anyways thanks I guess."'
-		'He shrugs. "Whatever, mom said I can''t let any of her friends since she doesn''t live here anymore." Before you can even get a word in, he slowly closes the door checking you out as he does. With nothing more to do, you turn to leave.'
-		act 'Move away from the door':gt'pav_complex', 'start'
+		'You snort slightly in amusement. "Your sister works there too?"'
+		'He rolls his eyes. "No." He says no like you are an idiot for asking. "She works as a waitress or something at a coffee shop near where they live, like she could get a cool job like Rad, she is just some dumb waitress."'
+		'You just sigh, you are briefly tempted to point out that your mom is just a waitress too. But no point trying to talk to him about that. "Anyways thanks I guess."'
+		'He shrugs. "Whatever, Mom said I can''t let any of her friends since she doesn''t live here anymore." Before you can even get a word in, he slowly closes the door checking you out as he does. With nothing more to do, you turn to leave.'
+		act 'Move away from the door':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 	elseif ((hour >= 15 and hour < 20) or (week > 5 and hour >= 10 and hour < 20)) and locat['A144'] ! 22 and (rand(0,4) = 0):
 		*clr & cla
 		menu_off = 1
@@ -75,24 +78,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/valeria.jpg"></center>'
 		'You stand outside the Konstantinov household knocking on the door. It''s some time before someone answers it. In the end, it turns out to be Anushka''s mother.'
 		'Her mother just stands there, glaring at you for a while. "Well now, don''t just stand there. What do you want? Oh wait, let me guess you want to see Anushka? Well, the little slut isn''t here, and I don''t know when she''ll be back, so why don''t you just go bother someone else?" Before you can even get a word in, she slams the door in your face, and you hear all the locks click into place. With nothing more to do, you turn to leave.'
-		act 'Move away from the door':gt'pav_complex', 'start'
+		act 'Move away from the door':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 	elseif locat['A144'] = 24:
 		*clr & cla
 		AnushkaLoc = 0
 		band['practice_invite'] = 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
-		'Maksim answers the door instead. He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "Anushka''s not here right now. She''s down in the garage the band rents and turned into some sort of cool studio. They''re likely practicing or partying with some bitches. You can wait for her in her room if you want, or you can just go down there."'
+		'Maksim answers the door instead. He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "Anushka''s not here right now. She''s down in the garage with the band, that they turned into some sort of cool studio. They''re likely practicing or partying with some bitches. You can wait for her in her room if you want, or you can just go down there."'
 		'You shake your head, but there''s nothing you can do about it. Should you go in and wait for her or just go? As you decide, you can feel Maksim undressing you with his eyes as he stares straight at your tits.'
-		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-		act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+		act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 	elseif locat['A144'] = 25:
 		*clr & cla
 		AnushkaLoc = 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
 		'Maksim answers the door instead. He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "Anushka''s not here right now. She''s at the disco or out sucking some guy''s dick or something. You can wait for her in her room if you want, or you can just go there."'
 		'You shake your head, but there is nothing you can do about it. Should you go in and wait for her or just go? As you decide, you can feel Maksim undressing you with his eyes as he stares straight at your tits.'
-		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-		act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+		act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 	elseif locat['A144'] = 22:
 		*clr & cla
 		menu_off = 1
@@ -109,27 +112,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 			'Maksim answers the door instead. He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "What?" he asks.'
 			'You ignore his staring and ask "Is Anushka home?"'
 			'He hooks his thumb over his shoulder to point down the hall. "She''s taking a shower."'
-			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-			act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
-			act 'Wait in her room': gt 'anushapt','shower_wait'
-			act 'Go to the bathroom': gt 'anushapt','nushshower'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+			act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
+			act 'Wait in her room': gt 'anushapt', 'shower_wait'
+			act 'Go to the bathroom': gt 'anushapt', 'nushshower'
 			act 'Ask how he knows that':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
 				'You smile a little. "How do you know she''s taking a shower?"'
 				'He blushes a little and sputters "I can hear the water."'
-				act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-				act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
-				act 'Wait in her room': gt 'anushapt','shower_wait'
-				act 'Go to the bathroom': gt 'anushapt','nushshower'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+				act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
+				act 'Wait in her room': gt 'anushapt', 'shower_wait'
+				act 'Go to the bathroom': gt 'anushapt', 'nushshower'
 				act 'Tease him':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
 					'You grin at him. "So you haven''t been spying on her taking a shower? She told me you spy on her and her friends."'
 					'He blushes red and sputters "No!" He doesn''t seem to know what to do, so he turns and walks away. Just before he goes into his room, he adds "Fuck you, I can hear the water." Before you can reply, he goes into his room and closes the door.'
-					act 'Wait in her room': gt 'anushapt','shower_wait'
-					act 'Go to the bathroom': gt 'anushapt','nushshower'
-					act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+					act 'Wait in her room': gt 'anushapt', 'shower_wait'
+					act 'Go to the bathroom': gt 'anushapt', 'nushshower'
+					act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 				end
 			end
 		elseif nushdoor <= 6:
@@ -138,8 +141,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
 			'You stand outside the Konstantinov household and hope that Anushka will open the door.'
 			'To your relief, she opens the door, smiling. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>. Come on in."'
-			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-			act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+			act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 		elseif nushdoor <= 9 and anushkaQW['tv_day'] ! daystart:
 			*clr & cla
 			AnushkaLoc = 5
@@ -147,7 +150,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
 			'You stand outside the Konstantinov household and hope that Anushka will open the door.'
 			'To your relief, she opens the door, smiling. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>. Come in, I was just watching some TV." As you go inside, she closes the door and heads for the living room where some action movie is playing on the TV. She practically falls down on the couch as she takes a seat.'
-			act 'Take a seat next to her': gt 'anushapt','nushlivroom'
+			act 'Take a seat next to her': gt 'anushapt', 'nushlivroom'
 		elseif nushdoor <= 10 and locat['A154'] = 23:
 			*clr & cla
 			AnushkaLoc = 2
@@ -155,23 +158,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 			'You stand outside the Konstantinov household and wait for Anushka to open the door, but Maksim answers instead.'
 			'He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "What?" he asks.'
 			'You ignore his staring and ask "Is Anushka home?"'
-			'With a smug look on his face, he hooks his thumb over his shoulder to point down the hall. "She''s in her room getting pounded like the slut she is by Radomir."'
-			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+			'With a smug look on his face, he hooks his thumb over his shoulder to point down the hall. "She''s in her room getting pounded like the slut she is by Rad."'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 			act 'Enter':
 				*clr & cla
 				AnushkaLoc = 2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big154.jpg"></center>'
 				'You ignore his comment and step around him to enter the apartment. Just then, you see Radomir walking up the hall towards the door, buckling his belt back in place. He gives you a huge grin and a wink. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, bad timing because you just missed out. Nush is in her room recovering from the ass fucking I just gave her."'
 				'He then reaches over and ruffles Maksim''s hair with his hand. "Your sister has a real nice tight ass, or at least she did." With that, he walks past both of you and leaves the apartment.'
-				'"See?" he sneers before walking back to his room.'
-				act 'Walk past him': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+				'"See?" Maksim sneers before walking back to his room.'
+				act 'Walk past him': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 			end
 			act 'Go to her room':
 				*clr & cla
 				AnushkaLoc = 2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/listen.jpg"></center>'
 				'As you reach Anushka''s bedroom door, you hear voices inside. One of them is Anushka, and the other is obviously a guy, probably Radomir if Maksim is to be believed. You can''t quite make out what they''re saying, so you lean against the door to hear better. You hear the guy say "Turn around and let me see that fine ass of yours."'
-				act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+				act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 				gs 'willpower', 'voyeur', 'self'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 					act 'Take a peek (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -180,8 +183,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/peek.jpg"></center>'
 						'Taking a little peek won''t hurt anyone. You glance around to make sure no one can see you, then you crack the door open to just barely peek in. You can just see Anushka stripping down to her underwear inside, but you can''t see the guy.'
-						act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-						act 'Watch': gt 'anushkaev2','watch_nushrad'
+						act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+						act 'Watch': gt 'anushkaev2', 'watch_nushrad'
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Take a peek (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -195,7 +198,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 			'He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "What?" he asks.'
 			'You ignore his staring and ask "Is Anushka home?"'
 			'With a smug look on his face, he hooks his thumb over his shoulder to point down the hall. "She''s in her room getting fucked by Val."'
-			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 			act 'Enter':
 				*clr & cla
 				AnushkaLoc = 2
@@ -205,14 +208,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 				'He just grins a little. "Oh you know, just hanging out and having fun." He then turns to Maksim. "Are you going to come by later and help me work on my bike?"'
 				'Maksim responds to Valentin. "If my dad lets me. He''s on my ass about my homework." Val just nods at him. "Gotcha." He gives both of you a slight wave and walks out.'
 				'"See?" is all Maksim says before he walks back to his room.'
-				act 'Walk past him': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+				act 'Walk past him': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 			end
 			act 'Go to her room':
 				*clr & cla
 				AnushkaLoc = 2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/listen.jpg"></center>'
 				'As you reach Anushka''s bedroom door, you hear voices inside. One of them is Anushka, and the other is obviously a guy, probably Valentin if Maksim is to be believed. You can''t quite make out what they''re saying. You lean against the door to hear better, and you hear the guy ask "You wanna fuck?"'
-				act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+				act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 				gs 'willpower', 'voyeur', 'self'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 					act 'Take a peek (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -221,8 +224,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/peek.jpg"></center>'
 						'Taking a little peek won''t hurt anyone. You glance around to make sure no one can see you, then you crack the door open to just barely peek in. You can just see Anushka pulling down the pants of some guy that is lying on her bed. You can only see him from the waist down from your vantage point, so you can''t see his face, but you do see his hard dick spring free when his pants come off.'
-						act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-						act 'Watch': gt 'anushkaev2','watch_nushval'
+						act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+						act 'Watch': gt 'anushkaev2', 'watch_nushval'
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Take a peek (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -236,22 +239,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 			'He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "What?" he asks.'
 			'You ignore his staring to ask "Is Anushka home?"'
 			'He hooks his thumb over his shoulder to point down the hall. "She''s in her room taking some black guy''s dick up her ass." he says with disgust.'
-			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 			act 'Enter':
 				*clr & cla
 				AnushkaLoc = 2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big146.jpg"></center>'
 				'You ignore his comments and step around him to enter the apartment. Just then, you see Marcus walking up the hall towards the door. He freezes in place, looking very embarrassed. He looks down to avoid eye contact. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I was just hanging out... anyways I need to get going... see you at school, yeah?" Without waiting for a reply, he hurries out of the apartment.'
 				'Maksim gives him a disgusted look as he walks by, then looks at you. "She''s so disgusting." he sneers before he walks back to his room.'
-
-				act 'Walk past him': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+				act 'Walk past him': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 			end
 			act 'Go to her room':
 				*clr & cla
 				AnushkaLoc = 2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/listen.jpg"></center>'
 				'As you reach Anushka''s bedroom door, you hear voices inside. One of them is Anushka, and the other is obviously a guy. You can''t quite make out what they''re saying. You lean against the door to hear better, and you hear the guy say "God, you''re so beautiful."'
-				act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+				act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 				gs 'willpower', 'voyeur', 'self'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 					act 'Take a peek (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -261,8 +263,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 						AnushkaLoc = 2
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/peek.jpg"></center>'
 						'Taking a little peek won''t hurt anyone. You glance around to make sure no one can see you, then you crack the door open to just barely peek in. You can see a naked Anushka dropping to her knees in front of a naked black guy who has his back to you.'
-						act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-						act 'Watch': gt 'anushkaev2','watch_nushmar'
+						act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+						act 'Watch': gt 'anushkaev2', 'watch_nushmar'
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Take a peek (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -276,9 +278,39 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 			'He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "What?" he asks.'
 			'You ignore his staring and ask "Is Anushka home?"'
 			'He hooks his thumb over his shoulder to point down the hall. "She''s in her room, likely getting stoned or masturbating to porn or something."'
-			'You ignore his comments and step around him to enter the apartment. He closes the door and heads back to his room.'
-			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-			act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+			if maksim_blackmail >= 1:
+				*nl
+				'You ignore his comments and start to step around him, to enter the apartment. But he puts his arm up blocking you from entering.'
+				'You give him a look of annoyance. "Do you mind?"'
+				'He grins. "Show me your tits!"'
+				'You know what this is about. You can''t believe you let this little shit blackmail you. "Seriously?"'
+				'He laughs. "If you want to come in, that''s the price now. So pay up or fuck off." You sigh, you know the little snitch would tell Anushka, so do you just leave or flash him.'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+				act 'Flash Maksim': gt 'anushkamaksim', 'hallway_flash_tits'
+			elseif maksimQW['blackmail_flash'] > 5:
+				*nl
+				'You ignore his comments and start to step around him, to enter the apartment. But he puts his arm up blocking you from entering.'
+				'You sigh, knowing what he wants. "Fine!" You say as you start to show him your tits again.'
+				'He shakes his head and grins. "Not this time, show me your pussy!"'
+				'You know what this is about. You can''t believe you let this little shit blackmail you. "Seriously?"'
+				'He laughs. "If you want to come in, that''s the price now. So pay up or fuck off." You sigh, you know the little snitch would tell Anushka, so do you just leave or flash him.'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+				act 'Flash Maksim': gt 'anushkamaksim', 'hallway_flash_pussy'
+			elseif maksimQW['blackmail_flash'] > 10:
+				*nl
+				'You ignore his comments and start to step around him, to enter the apartment. But he puts his arm up blocking you from entering.'
+				'You sigh, knowing what he wants. "Fine!" You say as you start to show him your pussy again.'
+				'He shakes his head and grins. "Not this time, I want to see it all! So come to my room and get naked."'
+				'You know what this is about. You can''t believe you let this little shit blackmail you. "Seriously? What about your brother."'
+				'He laughs. "If you want to come in, that''s the price now. Don''t worry that little shit is outside at the moment, we got time."'
+				'You sigh, you know the little snitch would tell Anushka, so do you just leave or flash him.'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+				act 'Go to Maksim''s room': gt 'anushkamaksim', 'maksim_room_naked'
+			else
+				'You ignore his comments and step around him to enter the apartment. He closes the door and heads back to his room.'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+				act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
+			end
 		end
 		killvar 'nushdoor'
     elseif (hour >= 15 and hour < 22) or (week > 5 and hour >= 8 and hour < 22):
@@ -290,27 +322,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 			'He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "What?" he asks.'
 			'You ignore his staring and ask, "Is Anushka home?"'
 			'"No, she''s not here right now. She''s probably out sucking some guy''s dick or something, but you can go wait for her in her room if you want."'
-			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-			act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+			act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 			act 'Why would you say that?':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
 				'You are aghast that her brother would say such a thing about her. "Why would you tell people something like that?"'
 				'At first, he looks a little confused, as if he''s not sure what you mean, then just shrugs. "That''s what mom always says when I ask where Anushka is."'
 				'You shake your head, unsure what to think about this. Should you go in and wait for her or just go? Maksim just stands there staring at your tits, and you can actually feel him undressing you with his eyes.'
-				act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-				act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+				act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 			end
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
 			'Maksim answers the door instead. He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "Anushka''s not here right now. She''s probably out sucking some guy''s dick or something, but you can wait for her in her room if you want."'
 			'You shake your head, but there''s nothing you can do about it. Should you go in and wait for her or just go? As you decide, you can feel Maksim undressing you with his eyes as he stares straight at your tits.'
 		end
-		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-		act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+		act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 	else
 		'You knock on the door several times, but no one answers. You assume that there probably isn''t anyone home at the moment.'
-		act 'Move away from the door': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+		act 'Move away from the door': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -337,18 +369,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hallway':
 		'You stand still for a little while longer, listening for something, but nothing happens. After a while, you decide to move on, but you''re pretty sure that it was just Anushka''s younger brother, Maksim, spying on you.'
 	end
 	if AnushkaLoc ! 1:
-		act '<b>Leave Anushka''s apartment</b>': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-		act 'Anushka''s room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
-		act 'Bathroom': gt 'anushapt','bathroom'
-		act 'Anushka''s brother''s room': gt 'anushaptbr','brotherroom'
-		act 'Living room': gt 'anushapt','livingroom'
-		act 'Kitchen': gt 'anushapt','kitchen'
-		act 'Parents room': gt 'anushapt','anushparents'
+		act '<b>Leave Anushka''s apartment</b>': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+		act 'Anushka''s room': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
+		act 'Bathroom': gt 'anushapt', 'bathroom'
+		act 'Anushka''s brother''s room': gt 'anushaptbr', 'brotherroom'
+		act 'Living room': gt 'anushapt', 'livingroom'
+		act 'Kitchen': gt 'anushapt', 'kitchen'
+		act 'Parents room': gt 'anushapt', 'anushparents'
 	else
 		'Anushka is standing next to you, looking at you expectantly. "What''s up, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
-		act '<b>Leave Anushka''s apartment</b>': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-		act 'Let''s go to your room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
-		act 'Let''s check on your brother': AnushkaLoc = 3 & gt 'anushaptbr','brotherroom'
+		act '<b>Leave Anushka''s apartment</b>': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+		act 'Let''s go to your room':AnushkaLoc=2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
+		act 'Let''s check on your brother': AnushkaLoc = 3 & gt 'anushaptbr', 'brotherroom'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -358,8 +390,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 	minut += 1
 	gs 'shortgs', 'setloc', 'anushapt', $ARGS[0]
 	$location_type = 'bathroom'
-	gs 'stat'
-	
+	gs 'stat'	
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Bathroom</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/bathroom.jpg"></center>'
 	'The bathroom has seen better days. It looks like it hasn''t been cleaned for quite some time, with mold growing in the corners of the walls and floor.'
@@ -367,7 +398,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 	'You can do your hair and makeup in the <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a> above the sink.'
 	*nl
 	if pirsA + pirsB + pirsC + pirsD + pirsE + pirsF + pirsN + pirsG > 0:'<a href="exec:dynamic $pirManage">Manage Piercings</a>'
-	act 'Leave the bathroom': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+	act 'Leave the bathroom': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 	act 'Take a shower':
 		*clr & cla
 		menu_off = 1
@@ -383,7 +414,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/showergetout.jpg"></center>'
 				'You pull the shower curtain tight against your body to make sure there is nothing for him to see other than your head, but you look out at him in consternation.'
 				'He looks up at you when you question him. It takes him a moment to realize who you are and he quickly zips up his pants. "Shit sorry... I thought you were my wife." He turns away and hurries for the door. "I''ll just be going... Sorry again." he says as he pulls the door closed. Unsure about what to think, you just decide to finish your shower.'
-				act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt','bathroom'
+				act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt', 'bathroom'
 			end
 			if pcs_inhib >= 50:
 				act 'Give him a show':
@@ -395,7 +426,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 					'He is a bit surprised at first. "Oh sorry... I thought you were my wife." His eyes roam up and down your naked body as he pulls out his dick and starts to piss in the toilet. "Don''t mind me. Just get back to your shower." he adds with a smirk.'
 					*nl
 					'You keep showering with the curtain open while glancing at him every now and then, but after his first once over, he doesn''t really pay you much attention. Once he is done, he washes his hands and leaves. He closes the door behind him without even another glance at your naked body. You decide to continue with your shower, and you don''t have any more surprises after that.'
-					act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt','bathroom'
+					act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt', 'bathroom'
 				end
 			end
 		elseif temp = 1 and maksimQW['QWstage'] >= 5:
@@ -410,10 +441,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 				else
 					'You pull the shower curtain tight against your body to make sure there is nothing for him to see other than your head. "Get out of here you little pervert!"'
 					'He just laughs at you and keeps watching.'
-					'"Get out of her or I will tell your sister... or you dad." You tell him.'
+					'"Get out of here or I will tell your sister... or your dad." You tell him.'
 					'You see a flicker of fear in his eyes at the mention of his sister a lot when you mention his dad, he gives you a angry glare before closing the door leaving you in peace.'
 				end
-				act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt','bathroom'
+				act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt', 'bathroom'
 			end
 			if pcs_inhib >= 50:
 				act 'Give him a show':
@@ -422,7 +453,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/showershow.jpg"></center>'
 					'Looking straight at him, you give him a smile. You pull the curtain wide open to give him the perfect view of your naked, wet, supple body. His eyes grow wide and he wastes no time, quickly coming into the bathroom, pulling the door closed behind him. After a few minutes of just watching you, you notice him pulling out his phone and trying to take a picture. You immediately shake your head at him. "No pictures or I will tell your sister that you snuck in here and started taking pictures of me in the shower." He doesn''t say anything, but gives you a look that''s a mixture of disgust, annoyance and fear at the mention of his sister.'
 					'He just settles in, enjoying watching you shower and dry yourself off. As you start getting dressed, you shoo him out of the room before finishing up.'
-					act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt','bathroom'
+					act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt', 'bathroom'
 				end
 			end
 		else
@@ -432,7 +463,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 			act 'Take a selfie':
 				gs 'telefon', 'Phone_selfie_image_bathing', 'shower'
 			end
-			act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt','bathroom'
+			act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt', 'bathroom'
 		end
 		if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & '<br>Your deodorant gets washed away in the shower.'
 		killvar 'temp'
@@ -449,8 +480,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nushshower':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'shortgs', 'setloc', 'anushapt', $ARGS[0]
 	$location_type = 'bathroom'
-	gs 'stat'
-	
+	gs 'stat'	
 	AnushkaLoc = 7
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Bathroom</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/bathroom/dry1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -527,7 +557,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nushshower':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/anushka/6.jpg"></center>'
 										'She lets the towel completely drop away and turns to put one foot on the edge of the tub. This gives you a nice view of her backside.'
-										'"Yeah, show me that cute little ass!" you tell her as you take a couple of more pictures until she throws the towel at you.'
+										'"Yeah that''s it, work that cute little ass!" you tell her as you take a couple of more pictures until she throws the towel at you.'
 										gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 2
 										gs 'stat'
 										act 'Continue':
@@ -576,7 +606,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_wait':
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 2
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
-	act 'Get out of the bed': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
+	act 'Get out of the bed': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 	act 'Chat': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 end
 
@@ -612,7 +642,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 		'She laughs a bit. "No, but he doesn''t know that. However, if he doesn''t or he keeps being mean to you, come get me. I will kick his ass for you, OK?"'
 		'He nods all happy and gets up from the table. He tries to dart out of the room, but she manages to give him a one armed hug that he tries his best to squirm away from. He manages to finally break free, then he hurries out of the kitchen.'
 		'She stands up and looks at you. "Got everything?" When you nod, she says "Sweet, let''s go back to my room."'
-		act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
+		act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 	elseif snacktime <= 5 and ((week < 6 and hour >= 20 and hour < 23) or (week >= 6 and (hour >= 8 and hour < 16) or (hour >= 18 and hour < 23))):
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kitchen</font></b></center>'
@@ -623,7 +653,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 		'Her dad frowns at that. "That''s not funny. You shouldn''t even joke about stuff like that."'
 		'Anushka grins. "Oh come on, it was a little funny."'
 		'He just sighs and shakes his head slightly, resigned to what his daughter is like. "So, do you girls want a sandwich?"'
-
 		act 'No':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -634,12 +663,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 			*nl
 			'He rubs his hand over the top of his head. "I am well aware of how old you are. See all these gray hairs? I didn''t have any of them until you became a teenager."'
 			'Anushka rolls her eyes as she gets some snacks and drinks. "Right... and mom and those brats had nothing to do with it."'
-			'He smirks to her. "Ok... yeah... They may have had a little bit to do with it as well."'
+			'He smirks at her. "Ok... yeah... They may have had a little bit to do with it as well."'
 			'As the two of you walk out of the kitchen and back towards her room, he follows you both out and heads for the living room. "Have fun girls... but not too much fun."'
-			'Anushka looks back, and in a exacerbated tone says "Dad!" before she leads you back into her room'
-			act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
+			'Anushka looks back, and in an exacerbated tone says "Dad!" before she leads you back into her room'
+			act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 		end
-
 		act 'Yes':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -650,10 +678,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 			'He rubs his hand over the top of his head. "I am well aware of how old you are. See all these gray hairs? I didn''t have any of them until you became a teenager."'
 			*nl
 			'Anushka rolls her eyes as she gets some snacks and drinks. "Right... and mom and those brats had nothing to do with it."'
-			'He smirks to her. "Ok... yeah... They may have had a little bit to do with it as well."'
+			'He smirks at her. "Ok... yeah... They may have had a little bit to do with it as well."'
 			'As the two of you walk out of the kitchen and back towards her room, he follows you both out and heads for the living room. "Have fun girls... but not too much fun."'
-			'Anushka looks back, and in a exacerbated tone says "Dad!" before she leads you back into her room'
-			act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
+			'Anushka looks back, and in an exacerbated tone says "Dad!" before she leads you back into her room'
+			act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 		end
 	elseif snacktime <= 7 and anushkaQW['valeria_introduced'] = 0:
 		anushkaQW['valeria_introduced'] = 1
@@ -694,7 +722,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 					*nl
 					'Anushka walks over to the fridge and grabs two drinks plus a bag of chips. She grabs you by the arm and leads you out of the kitchen. As you walk out, she glances back at her mother to scream "Bitch!"'
 					'"It was great to meet you. I do hope to see you again, even though I doubt you''ll be back..." you hear Valeria sarcastically say as you''re leaving the kitchen.'
-					act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
+					act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -715,7 +743,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 			'Instead of getting angry, her mom just laughs. "You''re one to talk. We both know you''re a clingy, needy, little slut that will do anything to get anyone to pay attention to you. The only reason you''re in that band of yours is because you slept your way into it and continue to be their slut just so they will let you stay."'
 			'Anushka raises her hand like she might hit her mother. For a tense moment, you think she might, but then she lowers it. "You don''t know anything about me! You''ve never wanted to know anything about me! I fucking hate you! I wish you would just fucking leave if you hate it here so much!" With that, she turns and grabs some snacks. She pushes them into your hands so hard and fast that you are barely able to keep hold of them as she says "Come on, let''s go."'
 			'Her mother shakes her head. "That''s right! Go running to your room and cry like you have always done when you are faced with the truth. I can''t believe I raised such a pathetic excuse of a daughter."'
-			act 'Follow Anushka back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
+			act 'Follow Anushka back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Defend Anushka (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -727,7 +755,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 					'You can''t take listening to Valeria talk about your friend like that anymore. "You''re wrong! Anushka is a better person than you will ever be! If you would just talk to her for once instead of at her, you might realize just how great she really is!"'
 					'Anushka smiles at you and obviously appreciates what you said. Her mom just gives you a look of complete disgust. "You must be another one of those disgusting lesbians." she says scornfully before shooting an equally disgusted look at her daughter. "It is so sinful and shameful, but I guess I can''t expect my daughter to hang out with anyone decent." With that, she turns back to her cooking.'
 					'Anushka grabs you by the arm before you can say more. "Come on, let''s go. She just isn''t worth it."'
-					act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
+					act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Defend Anushka (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -740,7 +768,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 		'She gets up and heads to the kitchen with you, the two of you talking and laughing the whole way.'
 		'As you walk into the kitchen, Anushka points to a refrigerator. "Grab some drinks out of the fridge and anything else good."'
 		'While you are doing that, she grabs a couple of snack cakes and chips from the cabinets, and once you both have your spoils from your raid on the kitchen, you head back to her room.'
-		act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
+		act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 	end
 	killvar 'snacktime'
 end
@@ -762,7 +790,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 	if livingev = 1 and anushkaQW['dad_mom_livingroom'] = 0 and ((week < 6 and hour >= 20 and hour < 23) or (week >= 6 and (hour >= 8 and hour < 16) or (hour >= 18 and hour < 23))):
 		livingev_day = daystart
 		'As you start to walk into the living room, you overhear some muffled voices that are getting louder and louder as they go on... You notice that the door is ajar and sneak towards it to see if you can make out what is being said.'
-		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 		act 'Listen in':
 			cla & *nl
 			anushkaQW['dad_mom_livingroom'] = 1
@@ -770,7 +798,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 			'You see Valeria standing in front of the TV, yelling at Eduard. "I want to see that little bitch punished! And for real this time!!!"'
 			'Eduard sighs, clearly annoyed by Valeria being in the way. "What''s wrong now Valeria? I just want to relax and watch the TV..."'
 			'Valeria continues. "She''s undermining me in front of the boys! She talks back to me, and the boys are picking up on it. They''ve started doing it as well! So put a fucking stop to it, or else I''ll do it for you!"'
-			'Eduard frowns at her. "You''ll do what?! You''re not the better influence either, calling your own daughter a slut, a whore, and God knows what else while the boys overhear you. They repeat it to Anushka and call her names. What is wrong with you? God dammit, she''s your own daughter!" Eduard screams back at her.'
+			'Eduard frowns at her. "You''ll do what?! You''re not the better influence here, calling your own daughter a slut, a whore, and God knows what else while the boys overhear you. They repeat it to Anushka and call her names. What is wrong with you? God dammit, she''s your own daughter!" Eduard screams back at her.'
 			'"Like I care about that little whore... She needs to be put in her place and I want you to do something for once! Enough with this daddy''s little princess shit!" she says scoffingly.'
 			'You worry about getting caught, so you sneak away from the door without making a noise.'
 			act 'Leave the room':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
@@ -820,7 +848,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 						'"We should be on our way <<$pcs_nickname>>." Anushka whispers, then nudges you.'
 						'"Sure. It was nice to meet you." you say.'
 						'He raises his arm as he''s too into the program on the TV to answer by now.'
-						act 'Move away': AnushkaLoc = 1 & gt'anushapt', 'hallway'
+						act 'Move away': AnushkaLoc = 1 & gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -830,8 +858,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 				*clr & cla
 				menu_off = 1
 				gs 'stat'
-				edtalk = rand(1,5)
-				if edtalk = 1:
+				if anushkaQW['edtalk'] = 0:
+					anushkaQW['edtalk'] += 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/eduard.jpg"></center>'
 					'You smile at Eduard. "Hello Mr. Konstantinov, is Anushka around?"'
 					'An agitated Eduard calls you over. "Call me Ed. Come here <<$pcs_nickname>>, I need to ask you about something."'
@@ -848,7 +876,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 							*nl
 							'You try to defend Anushka and yourself. "We both just know what we want, and we''re not afraid to enjoy life how we want, but we are the ones that call the shots. We are not just some boy toys to be passed around."'
 							'He sighs and leans back in the chair, looking a bit defeated with a worried look on his face. "Well, you''re not my daughter, and she is old enough to make her own decisions. I just hope the both of you don''t end up like..." He suddenly trails off, looking at you as if he had more to say.'
-							act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+							act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 							if momslut >= 1:
 								act 'End up like my mom?':
 									*clr & cla
@@ -857,7 +885,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 									'He nods a bit. "Yeah, I don''t mean anything by it... but your mom had one hell of a rep when she was younger, and it has followed her for her whole life. That is something I would like you and my daughter to avoid. I know it''s not fair, but that''s just the way it is."'
 									'It wouldn''t hurt to try and ease his mind a bit. "Don''t worry, we like to have fun, but we know better than to take things too far."'
 									'He sighs and nods, more in acceptance of things he can''t control than anything else.'
-									act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+									act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 								end
 							end
 						end
@@ -871,7 +899,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 								'You look him straight in the eye and coldly say "I don''t know where those rumors came from. Someone must be talking behind our backs and trying to make us look bad. There''s no reason for us to act like that."'
 								'You''re still not sure if Eduard bought it or not, but he sighs despairingly. "I''ll take your word for it for now, but I''ll ask around some more to get to the bottom of this! There''s some explaining needing done here!" he says as he cracks his knuckles.'
 								'You let out a faint sigh of relief as he returns to his normal self.'
-								act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+								act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 							end
 						else
 							act 'Lie (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -887,7 +915,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 							*nl
 							'You try and defend Anushka. "She knows what she wants and isn''t afraid to enjoy life how she wants, but she never lets anyone take advantage of her. That is, unless she wants to take advantage of them."'
 							'He sighs and leans back in the chair, looking a bit defeated with a worried look on his face. "Well, she is old enough to make her own decisions. I just hope she doesn''t end up like..." He suddenly trails off, looking at you as if he has more to say.'
-							act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+							act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 							if momslut >= 1:
 								act 'End up like my mom?':
 									*clr & cla
@@ -896,7 +924,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 									'He nods a bit. "Yeah, I don''t mean anything by it... but your mom had one hell of a rep when she was younger, and it has followed her for her whole life. That is something I would like my daughter to avoid. I know it''s not fair, but that''s just the way it is."'
 									'It wouldn''t hurt to try and ease his mind a bit. "Don''t worry she likes to have fun, but she knows better than to take things too far."'
 									'He sighs and nods, more in acceptance of things he can''t control than anything else.'
-									act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+									act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 								end
 							end
 						end
@@ -910,17 +938,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 								'You look him straight in the eye and coldly say "I don''t know where those rumors came from. Someone must be talking behind her back and trying to make her look bad. There''s no reason for her to act like that."'
 								'You''re still not sure if Eduard bought it or not, but he sighs despairingly. "I''ll take your word for it for now, but I''ll ask around some more to get to the bottom of this! There''s some explaining needing done here." he says as he cracks his knuckles.'
 								'You let out a faint sigh of relief as he returns to his normal self.'
-								act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+								act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 							end
 						else
 							act 'Lie (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 						end
 					end
-				elseif edtalk <= 3:
+				elseif anushkaQW['edtalk'] = 1:
+					anushkaQW['edtalk'] += 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/eduard.jpg"></center>'
 					'You smile at Eduard. "Hello Mr. Konstantinov, is Anushka around?"'
 					'He turns to look at you and gives you a friendly smile. "Call me Ed. I have no idea where that girl is, but you can check her room if you want. If she''s not there, then there is no telling where she is." he says, sounding somewhat sad and worried.'
-					act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+					act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 					act 'Is everything ok?':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/living.jpg"></center>'
@@ -943,14 +972,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 								act 'Tell her I stopped by':
 									*clr & cla
 									'You nod and know how he feels. There''s no point in waiting for her since she could be gone for hours. "Thanks, you can just tell her I stopped by."'
-									act 'Leave Anushka''s apartment': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+									act 'Leave Anushka''s apartment': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 								end
 								act 'Thanks, I''ll wait':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/living.jpg"></center>'
 									'"Make yourself at home." he says with a small smile. "Just a bit of advice... if you can, avoid that... that..." Ed hesitates and grinds his teeth while he struggles to find the right words. "That woman... to put it nicely... She is always looking for a reason to pick a fight and argue with someone. Honestly, if it weren''t for the kids..." He trails off before falling silent for a few moments. You think he may have forgotten who he was talking to or that you''re even in the room, but eventually his expression softens.'
 									'"Just do your best to stay out of her way alright? You seem nice, and I''d hate to see her drive off another of Nush''s friends, especially one that could be a good influence on her."'
-									act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+									act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 								end
 							end
 						end
@@ -965,14 +994,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 							'He shakes his head. "Enough of my depressing talk. There is no telling when she might be home. You''re free to wait for her in her room if you want, or I can tell her you stopped by when I see her next?"'
 							act 'Tell her I stopped by':
 								'You nod and know how he feels. There''s no point waiting for her. She could be gone for hours. "Thanks, let her know I stopped by. Bye."'
-								act 'Leave Anushka''s apartment': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+								act 'Leave Anushka''s apartment': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 							end
 							act 'Thanks I''ll wait':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/living.jpg"></center>'
 								'"Make yourself at home." he says with a small smile. "Just a bit of advice... if you can, avoid that... that..." Ed hesitates and grinds his teeth while he struggles to find the right words. "That woman... to put it nicely... She is always looking for a reason to pick a fight and argue with someone. Honestly, if it weren''t for the kids..." He trails off before falling silent for a few moments. You think he may have forgotten who he was talking to or that you''re even in the room, but eventually his expression softens.'
 								'"Just do your best to stay out of her way alright? You seem nice, and I''d hate to see her drive off another of Nush''s friends, especially one that could be a good influence on her."'
-								act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+								act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -983,7 +1012,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 					'You nod. "Ok thanks, sorry to have bothered you. I''ll be quiet so you can watch your show."'
 					*nl
 					'Eduard just laughs. "We have three kids running around here, so there''s no need for that. Besides, if I saw you trying to be quiet and sneaking around, I would think you were up to something. Nush taught me long ago that if you see a kid being quiet or suddenly going quiet, it means that they are up to something." He shakes his head with a fond smile. "That does remind me of a time when Nush was younger..." He trails off and looks up at you. "Don''t mind me, I''m just reminiscing. I''m sure you''re not interested in hearing about that."'
-					act 'It''s fine, I would love to hear a story':gt 'anushapt', 'nushkidstory'
+					if anushkaQW['kidstory'] < 5:
+						act 'It''s fine, I would love to hear a story':gt 'anushapt', 'nushkidstory'
+					end
 					act 'Make an excuse':
 						cla & *clr
 						minut += 2
@@ -991,7 +1022,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 						'You shake your head. "I''m really sorry, but I should get going. Can I get a rain check for another time?"'
 						'He nods his head and says "Sure... sure... you have better stuff to do than listening to me. Go, go!"'
 						'You nod then say your goodbyes and quickly leave.'
-						act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+						act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -1004,7 +1035,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/living.jpg"></center>'
 				if rand(1,2) = 1:
 					'You turn and carefully tread out of the living room while Eduard is busy watching the TV. You quietly make it to the doorway to enter the hallway. With a final glance back, you see he is still sitting there watching TV, not having noticed you coming in at all.'
-					act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+					act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 				else
 					'You walk very carefully towards the door since you don''t want to make too much noise and disturb Eduard.'
 					'All of a sudden, you hear him clearing his throat. "Sneaking around are we?"'
@@ -1018,7 +1049,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 						'You shake your head. "I''m really sorry, but I should get going. Can I get a rain check for another time?"'
 						'He nods his head and says, "Sure... sure... you have better stuff to do than listening to me. Go, go!"'
 						'You nod then say your goodbyes and quickly leave...'
-						act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+						act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -1055,7 +1086,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/eduard.jpg"></center>'
 							'"Well it was nice talking to you, but I should likely get back to Anushka." you tell him.'
 							'He smiles a little. "Yeah, I wouldn''t want her wondering where you got off to. You girls have fun." he says before he turns back to the TV.'
-							act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+							act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -1084,7 +1115,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kitchen':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/kitchen.jpg"></center>'
 	if kitchenev = 1 and anushkaQW['dad_mom_kitchen'] = 0 and ((week < 6 and hour >= 20 and hour < 23) or (week >= 6 and (hour >= 8 and hour < 16) or (hour >= 18 and hour < 23))):
 		'As you start to enter the kitchen, you overhear some muffled voices that are getting louder and louder as they go on... You notice that the door is ajar and sneak towards it to see if you can make out what is being said.'
-		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 		act 'Listen':
 			*clr & cla
 			anushkaQW['dad_mom_kitchen'] = 1
@@ -1098,11 +1129,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kitchen':
 			'"So what? Didn''t you have a similar reputation when you were seeing me?" he asks.'
 			'"You''re really getting on my nerves right now Eduard! You know what I''m capable of doing..." She crosses her arms as she turns her eyes towards a knife that''s lying on the kitchen counter...'
 			'Feeling that this is getting out of hand, you quietly move away from the door and start walking back down the hallway as the yelling continues behinds you.'
-			act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+			act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 		end
 	else
 		'The room is not clean, and there are dishes on most of the available surfaces. The wood floor is not polished and only covers the areas being used. You''re surprised by the lack of a dining table.'
-		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 		act 'Look in the fridge': gt 'anushapt', 'fridge'
 		dynamic $fill_bottle
 		dynamic $driwater
@@ -1220,7 +1251,6 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'anushparents':
 	menu_off = 0
-
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'shortgs', 'setloc', 'anushapt', $ARGS[0]
 	minut += 1
@@ -1230,7 +1260,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushparents':
 	'The room is fairly barren. What is in here is disorganized and untidy, with everything all over the place. You see that there is a bed, a bookshelf and a dresser with a TV on it. The dresser appears to be cheaply manufactured and poorly constructed. Even though it''s minimally furnished, the room is still quite dirty.'
 	if hour < 7:
 		'You look into the bedroom and see Anushka''s parents asleep. They are both on the edge of their side of the bed, as far apart as the bed allows. You don''t want to disturb them, so you close the door and leave.'
-		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 	elseif anushkaQW['valeria_introduced'] = 1 and rand(0,1) = 0:
 		menu_off = 1
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -1242,19 +1272,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushparents':
 			act 'Ask about the band':gt 'anushapt', 'band'
 			act 'Photo album':gt 'anushapt', 'album'
 			act 'Ask about Alyona': gt 'anushapt', 'alyona_ask'
-			act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+			act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 		end
-		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 	else
 		'Since nobody''s here, you should probably leave, but you could take a look around if you''re curious.'
-		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 		act 'Look around':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 10
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anushka''s parent''s room</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/momsdrawer.jpg"></center>'
 			'You snoop around, opening drawers and looking in the closet, but you don''t find anything of interest. The room is too disorganized for you to find much. The only thing of note is a vibrator with a large pack of batteries in one of the night stands.'
-			act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+			act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -1272,8 +1302,44 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'band':
 		'Valeria turns serious. "Yeah, I mean if I were in her shoes I wouldn''t give two shits about the others and focus all my energy on Radomir."'
 		'"Anushka is a fool for not latching onto Radomir. Just look at him, perfect body and he''s a really talented musician. He''ll probably amount to something big. She''s really stupid for not latching onto him while she still can, before he makes it big and leaves her behind."'
 		'You can''t even get a word in as she just keeps talking with a dreamy sigh. "Just think about the life she could have living with a big rock star. Hell if I was younger, I would''ve made sure that Radomir was all mine."'
+		*nl
 		'"What about being free and living your own life just like she''s doing right now?" you ask.'
 		'She looks at you as if you just asked the most stupid question ever. "Who gives a fuck? I can''t for the life of me understand why any woman would want that instead of having a man provide the perfect life. She would be free to do whatever, like just party, spend his money, and do whatever she wants." Valeria replies.'
+		if anushkaQW['raddate'] = 2:
+			act 'Point out Radomir broke up with Anushka':
+				*clr & cla
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/parroom.jpg"></center>'
+				'"Um you do know Rad broke up with Nush, not the other way around." You tell her.'
+				'She gives you a look like you are an idiot. "I know what my darling daughter claims, most likely she was sleeping around and cheating on him."'
+				'You frown at that. "Actually Rad was cheating on her and she kept forgiving him."'
+				'She now looks annoyed. "No man is going to break up with a girl if she keeps forgiving him for cheating, then he can have his cake and eat it too. What nonsense."'
+				'You decide to push it a bit more. "Rad is the one that told me this."'
+				'She just shakes her head. "Oh I am sure he did, but if she wasn''t cheating she probably got all clinging and smothering with him, constantly being jealous anytime a girl even looked at him. Men don''t like that and she had to know with his talent he was going to attract girls. She should have done a better job making him happy and then he wouldn''t have had to break up with him. If she was smart she would do everything in her power to win him back, while she can."'
+				'You just sigh, you can tell there is nothing you can say that will convince her otherwise. So you decided it would be best to just change the topic.'
+				act 'Leave':
+					killvar 'nush_band'
+					killvar 'nush_album'
+					gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
+				end
+				if nush_album = 0: act 'Ask about the photo album':gt 'anushapt', 'album'
+				act 'Bring up Alyona':gt 'anushapt', 'alyona_ask'
+				act 'How about the other bandmates?':
+					*clr & cla
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/parroom.jpg"></center>'
+					'Valeria looks at you confused and begins to laugh. "Who? You mean the other two losers that are in the band? Don''t make me laugh, because they''re nothing compared to Radomir."'
+					'"Maybe you should just let her choose for herself." you answer.'
+					'"Listen here <<$pcs_nickname>>, I might not give two shits about Anushka, but the best outcome for me-" she stops and takes a deep breath. "For her I mean... is to hook up with Radomir and that''s the end of the story."'
+					'Seeing you''re not getting anywhere with Valeria you sigh, say goodbye, and turn around to leave.'
+					act 'Leave':
+						killvar 'nush_band'
+						killvar 'nush_album'
+						gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
+					end
+					if nush_album = 0: act 'Ask about the photo album':gt 'anushapt', 'album'
+					act 'Bring up Alyona':gt 'anushapt', 'alyona_ask'
+				end
+			end
+		end
 		act 'How about the other bandmates?':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/parroom.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1297,7 +1363,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'album':
 	*clr & cla
 	nush_album = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/parroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'There is an photo album on the nightstand that''s next to the bed. You walk up, open it up, and look at the photos inside. "Is that your family?"'
+	'There is a photo album on the nightstand that''s next to the bed. You walk up, open it up, and look at the photos inside. "Is that your family?"'
 	'In a rare occurrence, Valeria almost seems to smile as she picks up the old album and starts to look through the photos of her and her family.'
 	'"We all looked so happy then..." she says. "It was a whole different world back then. Come and have a look."'
 	'You sit next to her as she flips through the photo album. All of a sudden, you notice something...'
@@ -1305,7 +1371,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'album':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/parroom.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Is that who I think it is?" you ask smiling as you see a picture of a young Anushka running around completely naked.'
-		'"It sure is. She''s my first born. She should have been my pride and joy, but something happened that just made that girl hardheaded and stupid."'
+		'"It sure is. She''s my firstborn. She should have been my pride and joy, but something happened that just made that girl hardheaded and stupid."'
 		'She continues on. "Anushka''s has always been quite the exhibitionist. I remember her being around two or three years old and I was trying to make her wear clothes. As soon as I turned my back, she was always taking her clothes off and running around naked. It didn''t matter if we had someone over or if we were outside in public. She grew up, but didn''t change. Now she whores around, instead of focusing on trying to find a man to take care of her. It doesn''t matter what I tell her. She thinks she knows it all, the snotty little bitch." Her tone quickly changed from friendly to anger.'
 		*nl
 		'You debate saying anything, but feel you have to. "Maybe she wants to be her own woman and lead her own life without having to have a guy take care of her?"'
@@ -1370,7 +1436,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'firstvisit':
 	end	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/stairs/etaj4.jpg"></center>'
 	'Anushka leads you to her apartment, and the two of you talk a bit as you go. It''s nothing important, just idle small talk to pass the time. Once on the fourth floor of her building, she leads you to apartment 17. It''s one of the corner apartments. You know from your own building these are the bigger three bedroom apartments. She unlocks the door with her keys and leads you inside. "Let''s see if my dad is home." she tells you as she leads you to the living room.'
-	act 'Continue': AnushkaLoc = 5 & gt'anushapt','livingroom'
+	act 'Continue': AnushkaLoc = 5 & gt 'anushapt', 'livingroom'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'nushlivroom':
@@ -1393,8 +1459,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nushlivroom':
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Living room</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/tv/tv_watch_1.jpg"></center>'
 		'The two of you watch some cheesy American action movie. You chat about how nice it will be when you are on your own without always having people around and parents telling you what to do. You barely pay attention to the movie as you talk. In fact, it ends, and something else comes on that you don''t even remember. After a couple of hours though, you hear keys in the lock of the door and Anushka says "Shit they''re home already. Come on let''s go." As she gets up and heads to her room, her brothers come running by on the way to theirs. They are quickly followed by Valeria complaining about where they ate. Ed walks by and gives you a slight nod, then goes into the kitchen.'
-
-		act 'Follow Anushka to her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
+		act 'Follow Anushka to her room': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 	end
 	if strapnumber > 0:
 		act 'Pull out your strap-on':
@@ -1418,7 +1483,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nushlivroom':
 					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Living room</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/tv/tv_watch_1.jpg"></center>'
 					'The two of you watch some cheesy American action movie. You chat about how nice it will be when you are on your own without always having people around and parents telling you what to do. You barely pay attention to the movie as you talk. In fact, it ends, and something else comes on that you don''t even remember. After a couple of hours though, you hear keys in the lock of the door and Anushka says "Shit they''re home already. Come on, let''s go." As she gets up and heads to her room, her brothers come running by on the way to theirs. They are quickly followed by Valeria complaining about where they ate. Ed walks by and gives you a slight nod, then goes into the kitchen.'
-					act 'Follow Anushka to her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
+					act 'Follow Anushka to her room': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1431,35 +1496,41 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nushkidstory':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/eduard.jpg"></center>'
-	nushkidstory = rand(1,4)
-	if nushkidstory = 1:
+	anushkaQW['kidstory'] += 1
+	if anushkaQW['kidstory'] = 1:
 		'The corner of Eduard''s mouth turns upwards as he starts. "I remember one autumn day when I was out in the garage and our car was in there. I had just given it a tuneup. Nush had helped me until she got bored and started running around as usual trying to find trouble. I think she was about eight at the time." He shakes his head in amusement as he remembers it.'
 		'"As usual." you reply as a smile spreads across your face and Eduard gives you a relatable look. "So all of a sudden she disappears somewhere. I remember her playing around with my jacket. Before you know it, I hear the car start, and off it goes! Nush is sitting in the drivers seat with a huge grin on her face, driving towards the garage door on the opposite side..."'
+		*nl
 		'You gasp as he continues. "Don''t worry. I start yelling at her to stop and she hits the brakes. She manages to stop less than a meter from the other garage. I don''t know how she was able to reach the pedals while being able to see over the dashboard. Anyways, I''m pissed, and I yank open the door to really lay into her. However, she is sitting there all sad. She knows she did something wrong and she looks up at me with those big puppy eyes..." he says sighing. "I couldn''t do anything as my anger just melted away. I just pulled her out and got in the car to back it back into the garage."'
 		*nl
 		'"This makes what she''s like now make so much more sense. My mom would have tanned my hide if I had done that!" you comment.'
 		'He nods a little. "Yeah, I should have been harder on her when she was growing up. Maybe it would have curbed her wilder ways now." He shakes his head. "She has always managed to wrap me around her little finger, and with just a look, melt away my anger to make me a better man."'
-		'You give him an awww look, and he clears his throat. "Yeah, anyways the little free spirited wild child looking for trouble is my Nush." Eduard responds. With that, you can tell he is done with telling stories, at least for now. "Well thank you for telling me. I loved hearing about it. Anyways, I should get going." you tell him, and he nods to you as you leave the living room.'
-	elseif nushkidstory = 2:
+		'You give him an awww look, and he clears his throat. "Yeah, anyways the little free-spirited wild child looking for trouble is my Nush." Eduard responds. With that, you can tell he is done with telling stories, at least for now. "Well thank you for telling me. I loved hearing about it. Anyways, I should get going." you tell him, and he nods to you as you leave the living room.'
+	elseif anushkaQW['kidstory'] = 2:
 		'The corner of Eduard''s mouth turns upwards as he starts. "I remember one of those warm spring days while Anushka was in preschool. She was creating havoc most likely. On this day, I was helping out at home looking after the baby when all of a sudden the phone rings and it''s the preschool..."'
 		'"You must''ve gotten lots of those back in the days!" you reply smiling and Eduard rolls his eyes. "I pick up the phone and there''s a hysterical teacher on the other side. She starts yelling that Nush is gone and that they can''t find her anywhere..."'
+		*nl
 		'You gasp as he continues. "I go to the preschool and join in the search. I even call some of my friends to help us look. The preschool even calls the police after a few hours." The way he says police sounds like he wants to spit the word. "Anyways... one of my friends finds her out near the palace. We still don''t know how she got there. When he brings her back, I ask what the hell she was doing and why she went off..." He sighs. "She just shrugs her shoulders and says that she felt like exploring the town. Turns out, my friend tells me, that she was conning tourists out of sweets then giving them bad directions. Apparently, she thought it was funny. That is until she got sick from eating too many sweets after I took her home. She threw up all over the place."'
+		*nl
 		'You continue on talking for a while about Anushka''s adventures while she was younger. "This makes what she''s like now make so much more sense." you comment.'
-		'"Yeah, anyways the little free spirited wild child looking for trouble my Nush." Eduard responds.'
-	elseif nushkidstory = 3:
+		'"Yeah, anyways the little free-spirited wild child looking for trouble my Nush." Eduard responds.'
+	elseif anushkaQW['kidstory'] = 3:
 		'The corner of Eduard''s mouth turns upwards as he starts. "This is a good story, so Nush used to like playing games when she was younger. I bought a used PlayStation and she just loved it. She spent all her time on it for a while and always wanted the newest games for it. Anyways, some of the kids from the neighborhood had been talking about this new game that was just about to get released, so of course, she comes running and asks for me to buy it..."'
 		'"Quite spoiled." you reply as you smile and Eduard gives you a relatable look. "Here comes the best part. So I tell her that we can''t afford it right now. At first she pouts, but she quickly stops and leaves the room. She never was much of a pouter. After about 30 minutes, we hear the door slam shut and the house goes really quiet..."'
+		*nl
 		'You smile as he continues. "So what did my dear daughter do? Well, she took her little brother down the street and tried to sell him for the same price as that game cost. Luckily a neighbor walked past and had the two of them follow her home. This was after she promised that she would think about buying Maksim."'
 		'"I about hit the roof when the neighbor brings them back and tells us what happened. My wife gets hysterical about it... Anyways I start yelling at Nush asking her why she would do that. As calmly as you please, she explains if she sold him I wouldn''t have to pay for the game. Since we wouldn''t have to feed him, then we would have more money for more games." He shakes his head laughing. "That''s when I knew she wasn''t just going to be trouble like most kids, but that she was too smart for her own good."'
+		*nl
 		'You continue on talking for a while about Anushka''s adventures while she was younger. "This makes what she''s like now make so much more sense." you comment.'
-		'"Yeah, anyways, the little free spirited wild child looking for trouble my Nush." Eduard responds.'
+		'"Yeah, anyways, the little free-spirited wild child looking for trouble my Nush." Eduard responds.'
 	else
-		'"Nush has always liked to take bike rides with me, specially when she was younger." he starts reminiscing. "So this one time we are riding along with her on the back of the bike. She was ten at the time I think. I was already going fast, and she was yelling to go faster... faster all the time."'
+		'"Nush has always liked to take bike rides with me, especially when she was younger." he starts reminiscing. "So this one time we are riding along with her on the back of the bike. She was ten at the time I think. I was already going fast, and she was yelling to go faster... faster all the time."'
 		'"I guess you listened?" you ask, but you already know what the answer will be.'
 		'Eduard starts laughing. "Well, of course, so we''re going way too fast and Nush is screaming out of joy when all of a sudden a police car appears behind us and pulls us over. The police officer and I are having a talk and all of a sudden, he turns towards Nush, and what does she do? Sticks out her tongue and flips him off. She was mad because he ruined her fun you see..."'
+		*nl
 		'You gasp as he continues laughing. "Luckily the police officer and I knew each other. He was a decent sort and just laughed it off. He petted her on her head and commented that she was going to be a real handful when she grew up. Boy was he right..." Eduard starts laughing.'
 		'You continue on talking for a while about Anushka''s adventures while she was younger. "This makes what she''s like now make so much more sense." you comment.'
-		'"Yeah, anyways the little free spirited wild child looking for trouble my Nush." Eduard responds.'
+		'"Yeah, anyways the little free-spirited wild child looking for trouble my Nush." Eduard responds.'
 	end
 	killvar 'nushkidstory'
 	act 'Leave': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'

locations/anushaptbr.qsrc

@@ -1,4 +1,9 @@
 # anushaptbr
+!!2024/04/03
+!!maksimQW['QWstage'] = 1 - tracks the stage of his overall questline
+!!maksimQW['blackmail_flash'] += 1 - tracks how many times Sveta has been blackmailed after agreeing to it
+!!maksimQW['blackmail'] = 1 = shows if Sveta has agreed to be blackmailed
+!!maksimQW['nush_games'] += 1 shows how many times Sveta and Nush have played her brothers in video games
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 	$menu_loc = 'anushaptbr'
@@ -10,16 +15,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anushka''s brother''s room</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'The room is disorganized and untidy. It''s fairly messy with a lot of clothes scattered about in various piles. Two beds are crammed against opposite walls, leaving an open space in the center. There is a small TV on a stand in the room with a PlayStation console lying partially hidden under some clothes in front of it.'
-	
-	act 'Leave': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
-	
+	'The room is disorganized and untidy. It''s fairly messy with a lot of clothes scattered about in various piles. Two beds are crammed against opposite walls, leaving an open space in the center. There is a small TV on a stand in the room with a PlayStation console lying partially hidden under some clothes in front of it.'	
+	act 'Leave': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'	
 	if AnushkaLoc = 3 and maksimQW['QWstage'] = 0:
 		maksimQW['QWstage'] = 1
 		menu_off = 1
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
-		'The two of you enter her brothers'' room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing and look towards you in fear and anger. Maksim, the older brother, is 13 or 14, the age when boys start paying attention to girls. Timofey is about a year or two younger.'
+		'The two of you enter her brothers'' room. They immediately stop doing what they are doing and look towards you in fear and anger. Maksim, the older brother, is 13 or 14, the age when boys start paying attention to girls. Timofey is about a year or two younger.'
 		'Maksim gathers some courage before speaking. "What do you want? Get out of our room!"'
 		*nl
 		'"Calm down. I just wanted to see what you were up to because I know you little shitheads are always up to something!" Anushka quickly replies.'
@@ -27,7 +30,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 		'Anushka reaches out and slaps him on the back of the head. "Watch what you say, or I''ll beat your little ass!"'
 		*nl
 		'He rubs the back of his head. "That''s what mother always says."'
-		'Anushka fumes. "Fuck that bitch and don''t listen to her. You better listen to dad, you little asshole!"'
+		'Anushka fumes. "Fuck that bitch and don''t listen to her. You better off listen to dad, you little asshole!"'
 		'He just rolls his eyes and ignores her. "Don''t tell me... Is this one of the famous groupies that we''ve heard so many stories about?" he asks while looking at you.'
 		act 'Excuse me?':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -36,9 +39,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anushka''s brother''s room</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
 			'"What do you mean?" you ask.'
-			'"We hear a lot of great stories about the band and its groupies from Radomir," he answers.'
+			'"We hear a lot of great stories about the band and its groupies from Rad," he answers.'
 			'"Don''t listen to him! He''s just making most of that stuff up to impress you!" Anushka snaps.'
-			'"Well, at least we can hope this groupie is better than Alyona."'
+			'"Well, at least we can hope this groupie is better than Alyona." Maksim says.'
 			act 'Why''s that?':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
@@ -47,23 +50,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
 				'"She''s really mean to us! She always beats me up and won''t play games with us," Maksim says as he looks at you sadly. Timofey nods in agreement.'
 				'"If you stop trying to film her while she''s taking a shower, maybe she wouldn''t be kicking your ass, you little pervert!" Anushka interjects.'
-				'"Your brothers are really something else. I guess even boys at this age think with their smaller head," you reply.'
+				'"Your brothers are really something else. I guess even boys at this age think with their smaller heads," you reply.'
 				*nl
 				'Anushka nods in agreement. "Yeah, most of them are slaves to their lust, even if they''re too young to even understand it yet."'
 				'Maksim puffs up. "I''m not too young!"'
-				'Anushka laughs at him and turns to you. "Maybe I should tell my dad what they''re up to?"'
+				'Anushka laughs at him and turns to you. "Maybe I should tell Dad what they''re up to?"'
 				act 'Laugh':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
 					'The brothers are looking at the two of you in total fear as Anushka continues. "Look at them! They''re scared shitless!"'
 					'Maksim is fuming with anger and starts yelling. "Get out of our room!"'
 					'When you and Anushka just keep laughing, he and Timofey get up and push you out the door.'
-					act 'Leave': AnushkaLoc = 2 & gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+					act 'Leave': AnushkaLoc = 2 & gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 				end
 			end
 		end
-	elseif AnushkaLoc = 3 and maksimQW['QWstage'] = 1:
-		if maksimQW['QWstage'] = 1: maksimQW['QWstage'] = 2
+	elseif AnushkaLoc = 3 and maksimQW['nush_games'] = 0:
+		maksimQW['QWstage'] = 1
+		maksimQW['nush_games'] = 1
 		menu_off = 1
 		minut += 3
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -72,7 +76,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 		'Maksim glances at his brother for a moment, then back at Anushka. "All of us?"'
 		*nl
 		'She nods. "That''s the plan. The two of us against the two of you."'
-		'Both of them get excited. "Your friend better be great. We''ve been practicing really hard, and we''ll definitely beat you this time!"'
+		'Both of them get excited. "Your friend better be great, because we are getting really good at this game!"'
 		'"You really think you can beat me this time? You got your asses handed to you the last time!" Anushka quickly replies while smiling.'
 		'The boys nod at each other. "This time will be different. We''re sure we''ll win!"'
 		act 'What''s this all about?':
@@ -80,7 +84,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 			minut += 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Oh don''t worry. Sometimes I sit and play video games with them. I always beat their asses."'
+			'"Oh don''t worry. Sometimes I sit and play video games with them. I always beat their asses." Anushka explains.'
 			'"Not this time!" Maksim looks at the two of you determined.'
 			act 'Sit down and play':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -97,14 +101,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
 					if pcs_gaming <= 20:
-						'The game is pretty much over. Both of them are better players than you are. Anushka does what she can, but the brothers easily manage to win back to back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Haha, we win and you lose!" Maksim taunts.'
+						maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 1
+						'The game is pretty much over. Both of them are better players than you are. Anushka does what she can, but the brothers easily manage to win the first game, they have a big lead during the second game when Anushka uses her foot to push Maksim off the bed, he manages to get back up. It gives you a chance but Timofey manages to keep you from taking advantage of it, despite Anushka trying to cheat the brothers manage to win again.'
+						'Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Haha, we win and you lose! Even if you did try and cheat, loser!" Maksim taunts.'
 						'Anushka rolls her eyes at their antics. "You just got lucky is all."'
 						'"You suck, you suck!" Maksim chants and Timofey quickly joins in. "Losers, losers!"'
 						'Anushka gets up and shakes her head. "Come on, let''s go. They''re not going to stop acting like jackasses anytime soon." You get up and follow her out.'
 					elseif pcs_gaming <= 40:
-						'You start to get a handle on things, and for a while, the game is pretty much a draw with no team getting the upper hand. All of a sudden however, you make a mistake, and the brothers are about to win. Just as they''re about to grab their victory though, Anushka uses her foot to push Maksim off the bed. This allows her to secure the win while he''s trying to recover.'
+						maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 2
+						'You start to get a handle on things, and for a while, the game is pretty much a draw with no team getting the upper hand. All of a sudden, however, you make a mistake, and the brothers are about to win. Just as they''re about to grab their victory though, Anushka uses her foot to push Maksim off the bed. This allows her to secure the win while he''s trying to recover.'
 						'He immediately starts yelling. "You cheated! You always do this when you''re about to lose!"'
-						'"Yeah, Anushka''s a cheater!" Timofey chimes in.'
+						'"Yeah, Nush''s a cheater!" Timofey chimes in.'
 						'"Don''t be such a crybaby! I thought you said you were prepared this time?" she says, teasing them with a smile on her face.'
 						*nl
 						'The comment only makes the situation worse, and things escalate. The brothers are now yelling at Anushka and taking it way too seriously. After a while, Anushka gets fed up with them and starts yelling back.'
@@ -113,13 +120,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 						'"But dad nothing. Weren''t you supposed to be studying?" Eduard asks.'
 						*nl
 						'"Y-Yes..." both brothers answer.' 
-						'"Well get to it!" he says to them, then turns to you and Anushka. "You two get out of their room. And stop tormenting your brothers, Nush!" He holds the door open until you both leave, then pulls it shut hard.'
+						'"Well get to it!" he says to them, then turns to you and Anushka. "You two get out of their room and stop tormenting your brothers, Nush!" He holds the door open until you both leave, then pulls it shut hard.'
 						'Anushka starts to respond, but Eduard interrupts her. "I don''t care! Leave them alone so they can study. Take your friend to your room." With that, he turns and goes back to the living room.'
 					else
-						'While it''s your first time playing, you manage to hold your own, and with Anushka''s skill, it becomes clear you two have the upper hand. The brothers keep it close, but they fall a little short in both matches.'
+						maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 3
+						'While it''s your first time playing, you manage to hold your own, and with Anushka''s skill, it becomes clear you two have the upper hand. The brothers keep it close, but they fall a little short in both games.'
 						'Maksim throws down his controller and turns on Timofey. "Why are you so bad? We could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much!"'
 						'Timofey tries to defend himself. "It''s not my fault Nush and <<$pcs_nickname>> are too good!"'
-						'Before Maksim can respond, Anushka cuts him off. "It''s not Timo''s fault. I killed you three times when you kept trying to go through that courtyard. You''re just mad because you got beat by a girl... Again," she says teasingly and sticks her tongue out at him.'
+						'Before Maksim can respond, Anushka cuts him off. "It''s not Timo''s fault. I killed you three times when you kept trying to go through that courtyard. You''re just mad because you got beat by a girl... Again!" she says teasingly and sticks her tongue out at him.'
 						'Maksim''s eyes flare at Anushka. "GO SUCK A DICK! THAT''S ALL <i>YOU''RE</i> GOOD AT, SLUT!" he screams at her.'
 						*nl
 						'Anushka''s eyes narrow. "Watch your mouth, you little shit! It''s just a game!"'
@@ -129,21 +137,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 						*nl
 						'Eduard turns and glares at Anushka. "Stop teasing your brothers and go to your room." When she starts to open her mouth, he cuts her off. "I don''t want to hear it. Go to your room!" With that, she gets up in a huff and does as she''s told. You follow behind her.'
 						'"What have I told you about calling your sister a slut?" you hear Eduard ask as you leave.'
-						'Maksim''s voices cracks. "I''m sorry..."'
+						'Maksim''s voice cracks. "I''m sorry..."'
 						'The door closes before you can hear any more, leaving you unable to make out anything beyond muffled sounds.'
 					end
-					act 'Go to Anushka''s room': AnushkaLoc = 2 & gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
+					act 'Go to Anushka''s room': AnushkaLoc = 2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 				end	
 			end
 		end
 	elseif AnushkaLoc ! 3:
 		brotherroom = rand(1,6)
 		menu_off = 1
-		if brotherroom = 1 and maksimQW['QWstage'] >= 3:
-			if maksimQW['QWstage'] = 3: maksimQW['QWstage'] = 4
+		if brotherroom = 1 and maksimQW['QWstage'] = 1:
+			maksimQW['QWstage'] = 2
 			minut += 2
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You open the door and look into the brothers'' room. You see the boys sitting talking about something. Maksim is 13 or 14, the age when boys start paying attention to girls. Timofey is about a year or two younger.'
+			'You open the door and look into the brothers'' room. You see the boys sitting and talking about something. Maksim is 13 or 14, the age when boys start paying attention to girls. Timofey is about a year or two younger.'
 			act 'What are you up to?':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 2
@@ -186,9 +194,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 					end	
 				end
 			end	
-		elseif brotherroom = 2 and maksimQW['QWstage'] >= 4:
+		elseif brotherroom = 2 and maksimQW['QWstage'] = 2:
 			gs 'stat'
-			if maksimQW['QWstage'] = 4: maksimQW['QWstage'] = 5
+			maksimQW['QWstage'] = 3
 			'You open the door and look in the brothers'' room. You see them fighting on Maksim''s bed. They immediately stop when they see you.'
 			act 'What are you doing?':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -206,7 +214,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
 					'You walk up to them and grab the magazine. Maksim tries his hardest to stop you, but you easily manage to push him away.'
-					'"Give that back! It''s mine!" he says dejected. "It''s all your fault!" he says as he turns to his brother. "If you could only keep your mouth shut. I can''t wait to get my own room."'
+					'"Give that back! It''s mine!" he says dejectedly. "It''s all your fault!" he says as he turns to his brother. "If you could only keep your mouth shut. I can''t wait to get my own room."'
 					'Timofey just keeps on sneering at his brother.'
 					act 'Calm down':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -216,16 +224,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 						'"It doesn''t have to be all bad," you say. "I share a room with my sister."'
 						'"Wow, two girls in one room? That''s so hot!" Maksim says. "Our sister is the only one with her own room. That''s so unfair!"'
 						'"She is a girl after all. Wouldn''t it be awkward if she shared a room with you?" you try to explain.'
-						'"I guess, but she could sleep in the living room, then we could each have our own room!" he says, as if that would be totally fair.'
+						'"I guess, but she could sleep in the living room, then we could each have our own room!" he says as if that would be totally fair.'
 						'Giving up on reasoning with him, you shrug and turn to the magazine. As you flip through the pages, you realize the boy has some kinky tastes and wonder who might have bought something like this for him. Whoever it was, you figure there''s no harm in him looking at pictures, so when you reach the end, you throw the magazine back onto his bed. "I won''t tell anyone your secret, but try to be nice to each other at least."'
 						act 'Leave': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 					end
 				end	
 			end
-		elseif brotherroom = 3 and maksimQW['QWstage'] >= 2:
+		elseif brotherroom = 3 and maksimQW['QWstage'] >= 3:
+			maksimQW['QWstage'] = 4
 			gs 'stat'
-			if maksimQW['QWstage'] = 2: maksimQW['QWstage'] = 3
-			'You open the door and look in the brothers'' room. You see Maksim in there alone, playing some first person shooter on the PlayStation.'
+			'You open the door and look in the brothers'' room. You see Maksim in there alone, playing some first-person shooter on the PlayStation.'
 			act 'Ask where Timofey is':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 2
@@ -240,24 +248,43 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 3
 					gs 'stat'
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-					'You nod while trying not to laugh. "Oh I see. Do you want to play a game with me then?"'
-					'It looks like he''s about to say no, but then he smiles. "Okay, but only if we make it interesting."'
-					'"Interesting how?" you ask.'
-					'He grins. "If I win, you have to show me your boobs, but if you win, I''ll tell you a secret about Nush that you don''t know."'
-					act 'I don''t think so':
-						*clr & cla
-						minut += 3
+					if maksimQW['blackmail_flash'] > 10:
+						maksimQW['blackmail_flash'] += 1
+						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
+						inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim_blackmail/naked_video_games.jpg"></center>'
+						'You nod while trying not to laugh. "Oh, I see. Do you want to play a game with me then?"'
+						'It looks like he''s about to say no, but then he smiles. "Okay, but you have to play naked."'
+						'You shake your head. "I don''t think so." you tell him.'
+						'He grins. "Do it or I will tell Nush you were spying on her."'
+						*nl
+						'You sigh once more being blackmailed by a boy who is barely a teenager, how did you get yourself into this. "Fine!" With that, you strip out of your clothes and pick up one of the controllers. The two of you play a game but you easily beat him, as he spends the whole time staring at your naked body instead of paying attention to the game.'
+						'With him still staring at your naked body you decided you had enough for now. Getting up you get dressed. "Hey you don''t got to get dressed we can play another game." He says.'
+						'You shake your head. "Maybe some other day." Once you finish getting dressed you leave.'
+						gs 'arousal', 'flash', 15, 'humiliation', 'sub'
+						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
-						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shake your head. "No, I don''t think so..." you tell him.'
-						'He frowns. "Fine then! Get out of my room. Just get out!"'
-						'You back out of the doorway. "Okay... Okay, I''m going."'
 						act 'Leave': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
-					end
-					act 'Deal': gt 'anushaptbr', 'race_maksim_result'
-					if pcs_inhib > 30: act 'Deal (Go easy on Maksim)': gt 'anushaptbr', 'race_maksim_result', 1
-				end	
+					else
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
+						'You nod while trying not to laugh. "Oh I see. Do you want to play a game with me then?"'
+						'It looks like he''s about to say no, but then he smiles. "Okay, but only if we make it interesting."'
+						'"Interesting how?" you ask.'
+						'He grins. "If I win, you have to show me your boobs, but if you win, I''ll tell you a secret about Nush that you don''t know."'
+						act 'I don''t think so':
+							*clr & cla
+							minut += 3
+							gs 'stat'
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
+							'You shake your head. "No, I don''t think so..." you tell him.'
+							'He frowns. "Fine then! Get out of my room. Just get out!"'
+							'You back out of the doorway. "Okay... Okay, I''m going."'
+							act 'Leave': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
+						end
+						act 'Deal': gt 'anushaptbr', 'race_maksim_result'
+						if pcs_inhib > 30: act 'Deal (Go easy on Maksim)': gt 'anushaptbr', 'race_maksim_result', 1
+					end	
+				end
 			end
 		else
 			'You open the door and look into the brothers'' room. You see Maksim and Timofey are here, doing whatever it is that boys do. Maksim stares at your breasts for a few seconds before telling you to get lost.'
@@ -338,122 +365,291 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rematch':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anushka''s brother''s room</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-	if rand(1,2) = 1:
+	if maksimQW['nush_games'] = 1:
 		'The two of you enter her brothers'' room and they immediately stop doing whatever they were doing. Maksim gathers some courage. "What do you want?" He notices you and starts staring at your breasts. "I see you brought your groupie with you again."'
 		'"I just wanted to see if you were up for a rematch?" Anushka replies, pointing to the gaming console in their room.'
 		'Maksim glances at his brother for a moment, then back at Anushka. "Okay, fine."'
 		*nl
-		'Both of them get excited. "Your friend better be great. We''ve been practicing really hard and we''ll definitely beat you this time!"'
-		'Anushka quickly questions him while smiling. "You really think you can beat me this time?"'
-		'The boys nod at each other. "We''re sure!"'
-		act 'Sit down and play':
-			*clr & cla
-			minut += 15
-			gs 'exp_gain', 'gaming', rand(1, 3)
-			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
-			'The brothers turn away from you and start whispering. You''re sure that they must be planning something.'
-			'"Let''s play!" Timofey says smiling.'
-			'The four of you play for several minutes. It''s the same shooter game as last time, and you''re a little bit better than before.'
-			act 'Finish':
+		if maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 1:
+			'Both of them get excited. "Even when you tried to cheat we won easily, we will again too!"'
+			'Anushka quickly questions him while smiling. "You really think you can beat us this time? Keep in mind it was <<$npc_nickname>> first time playing that game, you know how it takes time to learn a game."'
+			'Timofey looks concerned while Maksim looks confident. "Pfft, girls suck at video games."'
+			'Anushka grins a bit and continues in a teasing tone of voice. "Then we do I... a GIIIIRRRLLLL always beat you when it''s just us playing uh?"'
+			*nl
+			'Maksim looks mad and turns on her. "Cause you always cheat!"'
+			'Timofey is starting to look upset as his brother and sister start to fight so you speak up. "How about we just play then uh?"'
+			'Anushka nods to that. "Yeah let''s just play and see what happens."'
+			'Maksim still looks angry but nods. "Fine!"'
+		elseif maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 2:
+			'Both of them get excited. "If you don''t cheat again, we''ll definitely beat you this time!"'
+			'Anushka quickly questions him with a teasing smiling. "If you are half as good as you think then it wouldn''t have mattered."'
+			'Maksim responds. "Shut up!"'
+			'Then Timofey chimes in, obviously not liking it when his brother and sister fight. "Can we play now?"'
+			'Anushka''s face instantly softens. "Yeah sure we can."'
+		else
+			'Both of them get excited. "Your friend better be great. We''ve been practicing really hard and we''ll definitely beat you this time!"'
+			'Anushka quickly questions him while smiling. "You really think you can beat us this time?"'
+			'The boys nod at each other. "We''re sure!"'
+			act 'Sit down and play':
 				*clr & cla
+				maksimQW['nush_games'] = 2
 				minut += 15
+				gs 'exp_gain', 'gaming', rand(1, 3)
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
-				if pcs_gaming <= 20:
-					'The game is pretty much over and both of them are still better players than you are. Anushka does what she can again, but the brothers easily manage to win back to back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Haha, we win and you lose!" Maksim taunts.'
-					'Anushka rolls her eyes at their antics. "Yeah, yeah. You won." She reaches over and ruffles Timofey''s hair, which he tries and fails to dodge. "Good job, kiddo."'
-					'"Pfft, I won it! Timo almost caused us to lose, but I carried his sorry ass!" Maksim says.'
-					'Timofey pulls away from his sister. "Nuh-uh, I almost scored as good you as you did!" This quickly turns into them arguing over who did better.'
-					'Anushka gets up and shakes her head. "Come on, let''s go. They''re not going to stop acting like brats anytime soon." You get up and follow her out.'
-				elseif pcs_gaming <= 40:
-					'The game is pretty much a draw with no one getting the upper hand until Anushka starts to cheat again. She starts jabbing Maksim with her foot and covers Timofey''s eyes with her hand at a critical moment. The brothers try to return the favor, and soon the three of them are more interested in wrestling and fighting than actually winning the game. With everyone else distracted, you take advantage and win the match.'
-					'Realizing what happened, Maksim starts yelling. "Not fair! You cheated again!"'
-					'"You were doing the same to me, so you were cheating too!" Anushka replies, teasing them with a smile on her face.'
-					*nl
-					'Maksim doesn''t see it that way. "You started it, and your groupie took advantage of the situation!"'
-					'Anushka just laughs. "Well whose fault is that? If you weren''t so consumed with trying to get back at me, you would have noticed what she was doing and maybe won."'
-					'"SHUT UP!" Maksim yells in response.'
-					'Anushka interjects before he can say more. "Be quiet! Do you want Dad to come in here again?"'
-					'He immediately goes quiet and glances at the door, as if expecting their dad to burst in any moment. When the moment passes, Maksim jumps on Anushka. "Cheater!" He''s loud, but not too loud.'
-					*nl
-					'Anushka and Maksim start to wrestle. She quickly starts to get the upper hand because he just isn''t big enough to beat his older sister yet. Once it becomes clear she''s about to pin him down, Timofey jumps on her back and the three of them wrestle around. Anushka manages to pin one of them, but the other gets loose as she tries to pin them both. They come close a few times to pinning her down, but in the end, they all just give up, out of breath and lying in a heap.'
-					'Finally, Anushka gets up and untangles herself from them. "Come on, let''s go back to my room," she says to you. As you follow her out of the room, the brothers start to play another game. "We''ll win next time!" you hear Maksim say as Anushka closes the door on them.'
-				else
-					'Before too long, it''s pretty clear you and Anushka have the upper hand. The brothers keep it close, but they fall a little short in both matches.'
-					'Maksim throws down his controller and turns on Timofey. "Why are you so bad? We could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much!"'
-					'Timofey tries to defend himself. "It''s not my fault that Nush and <<$pcs_nickname>> are just too good!"'
-					'Before Maksim can respond, Anushka cuts him off. "It''s not Timo''s fault, and you know it. When you fall behind, you get too aggressive like always, which makes it easier for me to kill you. You''re just mad because you got beat by a girl... Again," she says in a teasing tone, then sticks her tongue out at him.'
-					'Maksim''s eyes flare at Anushka and it looks like he''s about to scream at her again until she interjects. "Calm down, we don''t want Dad in here again." He shuts his mouth and glances at the door, then glares at Anushka.'
-					*nl
-					'"Get out! Get out of our room!" he says as he tries to shove her off the bed.'
-					'Anushka gets up. "Oh my God, you''re such a baby! I don''t even know why I bother playing with you."'
-					'He pushes her towards the door. "Good, then don''t... Get out!"'
-					'Anushka sounds exasperated. "Fine then, you little brat!"'
-					*nl
-					'She turns towards you. "Come on, let''s go before this little shit starts to cry."'
-					'"Fuck you, bitch! Get out of our room!" he starts to yell, but catches himself and lowers his voice partway through.'
-					'Timofey runs up to his sister. "No, come back and play with us!" he pleads.'
-					'Anushka instantly eases up, and her anger seems to melt away. "Some other time, squirt..." she says with a smile and ruffles his hair, much to his annoyance.'
-					'As she closes the door and leaves, you can hear Maksim berating his brother for being a pussy and pleading with their sister to play games with them.'
-				end
-				act 'Go to Anushka''s room': AnushkaLoc = 2 & gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
-			end	
+				'The brothers turn away from you and start whispering. You''re sure that they must be planning something.'
+				'"Let''s play!" Timofey says smiling.'
+				'The four of you play for several minutes. It''s the same shooter game as last time, and you''re a little bit better than before.'
+				act 'Finish':
+					*clr & cla
+					minut += 15
+					gs 'stat'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
+					if pcs_gaming <= 20:
+						maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 1
+						'The game is pretty much over and both of them are still better players than you are. Anushka does what she can again, but the brothers easily manage to win back to back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Haha, we win and you lose!" Maksim taunts.'
+						'Anushka rolls her eyes at their antics. "Yeah, yeah. You won." She reaches over and ruffles Timofey''s hair, which he tries and fails to dodge. "Good job, kiddo."'
+						'"Pfft, I won it! Timo almost caused us to lose, but I carried his sorry ass!" Maksim says.'
+						'Timofey pulls away from his sister. "Nuh-uh, I almost scored as good you as you did!" This quickly turns into them arguing over who did better.'
+						'Anushka gets up and shakes her head. "Come on, let''s go. They''re not going to stop acting like brats anytime soon." You get up and follow her out.'
+					elseif pcs_gaming <= 40:
+						maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 2
+						minut += 15
+						'The game is pretty much a draw with no one getting the upper hand until Anushka starts to cheat again. She starts jabbing Maksim with her foot and covers Timofey''s eyes with her hand at a critical moment. The brothers try to return the favor, and soon the three of them are more interested in wrestling and fighting than actually winning the game. With everyone else distracted, you take advantage and win the match.'
+						'Realizing what happened, Maksim starts yelling. "Not fair! You cheated again!"'
+						'"You were doing the same to me, so you were cheating too!" Anushka replies, teasing them with a smile on her face.'
+						*nl
+						'Maksim doesn''t see it that way. "You started it, and your groupie took advantage of the situation!"'
+						'Anushka just laughs. "Well, whose fault is that? If you weren''t so consumed with trying to get back at me, you would have noticed what she was doing and maybe won."'
+						'"SHUT UP!" Maksim yells in response.'
+						'Anushka interjects before he can say more. "Be quiet! Do you want Dad to come in here again?"'
+						'He immediately goes quiet and glances at the door, as if expecting their dad to burst in any moment. When the moment passes, Maksim jumps on Anushka. "Cheater!" He''s loud, but not too loud.'
+						*nl
+						'Anushka and Maksim start to wrestle. She quickly starts to get the upper hand because he just isn''t big enough to beat his older sister yet. Once it becomes clear she''s about to pin him down, Timofey jumps on her back and the three of them wrestle around. Anushka manages to pin one of them, but the other gets loose as she tries to pin them both. They come close a few times to pinning her down, but in the end, they all just give up, out of breath and lying in a heap.'
+						'Finally, Anushka gets up and untangles herself from them. "Come on, let''s go back to my room," she says to you. As you follow her out of the room, the brothers start to play another game. "We''ll win next time!" you hear Maksim say as Anushka closes the door on them.'
+					else
+						maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 3
+						'Before too long, it''s pretty clear you and Anushka have the upper hand. The brothers keep it close, but they fall a little short in both matches.'
+						'Maksim throws down his controller and turns on Timofey. "Why are you so bad? We could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much!"'
+						'Timofey tries to defend himself. "It''s not my fault that Nush and <<$pcs_nickname>> are just too good!"'
+						'Before Maksim can respond, Anushka cuts him off. "It''s not Timo''s fault, and you know it. When you fall behind, you get too aggressive like always, which makes it easier for me to kill you. You''re just mad because you got beat by a girl... Again!" she says in a teasing tone, then sticks her tongue out at him.'
+						'Maksim''s eyes flare at Anushka and it looks like he''s about to scream at her again until she interjects. "Calm down, we don''t want Dad in here again." He shuts his mouth and glances at the door, then glares at Anushka.'
+						*nl
+						'"Get out! Get out of our room!" he says as he tries to shove her off the bed.'
+						'Anushka gets up. "Oh my God, you''re such a baby! I don''t even know why I bother playing with you."'
+						'He pushes her towards the door. "Good, then don''t... Get out!"'
+						'Anushka sounds exasperated. "Fine, I won''t, you little brat!"'
+						*nl
+						'She turns towards you. "Come on, let''s go before this little shit starts to cry."'
+						'"Fuck you, bitch! Get out of our room!" he starts to yell, but catches himself and lowers his voice partway through.'
+						'Timofey runs up to his sister. "No, come back and play with us!" he pleads.'
+						'Anushka instantly eases up, and her anger seems to melt away. "Some other time, squirt..." she says with a smile and ruffles his hair, much to his annoyance.'
+						'As she closes the door and leaves, you can hear Maksim berating his brother for being a pussy and pleading with their sister to play games with them.'
+					end
+					act 'Go to Anushka''s room': AnushkaLoc = 2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
+				end	
+			end
 		end
-	else
+	elseif maksimQW['nush_games'] = 2:
+		'The two of you walk down the hall and enter her brothers'' room. As you do you hear moaning sounds, you have heard enough porn to recognize that sound. Maksim looks up with huge wide eyes like he was caught in the middle of something. He slams a small laptop closed and the sounds stop as he turns bright red, you notice Timofey is nowhere to be found. Anushka just stops a moment, she obviously knows the sounds as well as she says. "Just what was you doing you little pervert?"'
+		*nl
+		'He looks scared, angry and embarrassed all at once. "Nothing! Go away!" He says as he tries to hide the laptop, only making it more obvious. Anushka suddenly rushes across the room and jumps on his bed with him and starts trying to wrestle the laptop away from him. He puts up a decent fight but he still hasn''t hit his growth spurt yet and she manages to get it away from him. With one hand she holds him at bay, while she opens the laptop with the other. Within a moment the sounds start up again, you walk over to see and within moments it changes from movie to movie. A compilation of girls getting cum facials or cum shot into their mouths, only to then stick out their tongues showing the cum before swallowing it.'
+		*nl
+		'Anushka laughs when she looks at him. "Oh my god you little pervert, you better not be showing Timo this smut."'
+		'Maksim lunges and grabs the laptop back, Anushka lets him take it back as he closes it again. He is obviously embarrassed to be caught by his sister, looking at porn. "Shut up, you do that all the time, with every guy around."'
+		'All the humor leaves Anushka''s face. "Shut up you little bastard. I do not!"'
+		'Now he looks a little smug like he feels he is controlling things. "That''s not what mom says."'
+		'You think you almost hear Anushka growl at the mention of their mom. "Don''t listen to that cunt, she is just a stupid jealous cunt, who''s time is past and now she lashes out at everyone."'
+		*nl
+		'Now he looks more confident the more upset she gets. "Mom didn''t make you into a slut! You are just a slut, like most girls." The last bit he says while looking at you.'
+		'For a moment she pulls back her hand like she might slap him but then drops her hand, for a moment he looked scared when it looked like she might. "Stop listening to her, she lies all the time." She says in a more reasonable voice, obviously trying to calm down.'
+		'He regains his smug look when he is sure she isn''t going to smack him. "Yeah sure, I see all the boys leaving your room all the time, we can hear you through the wall, while they pound you stupid, stupider than you already are, you dumb slut."'
+		*nl
+		'Anushka''s anger flares back up but she just takes a deep breath and looks at Maksim and shakes her head. "No use trying to talk to you, but you better not be showing Timo that stuff or telling him this crap, or I will kick your ass next time." Maksim wisely clams up, seems even he knows he has pushed his sister as far as he safely can. Then she gets up and leads you out of the room. "God I fucking hate that cunt!" Obviously talking about her mother, as you go back to her room.'
+		act 'Go to Anushka''s room': AnushkaLoc = 2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
+	elseif maksimQW['nush_games'] = 3:
 		'The two of you walk down the hall and enter her brothers'' room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing and Maksim visibly gathers up his courage. "What is it? What do you want?" He notices you and starts staring at your breasts. "I see you brought your groupie along again."'
-		'"Calm down. I just wanted to see if you were up for a rematch?" Anushka replies, pointing to the gaming console in their room.'
-		'Both of them get excited. "Yeah, and this time we will beat you!"'
-		'"You really think you can beat us this time?" Anushka quickly replies while smiling. '
-		'The boys nod at each other. "This time will be different. We''re sure we''ll win!"'
-		'Anushka laughs. "Nah, I don''t think so. Maybe you boys just like getting beat by girls?"'
-		'Maksim looks mad. "Just shut up and play!"' 
-		'Anushka just laughs again and mimics what he said in a mutter that taunts him.'
+		'"Calm down. I just wanted to see if you guys wanted to play some more?" Anushka replies, pointing to the gaming console in their room.'
+		if maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 1:
+			'Both of them get excited. "Even when you tried to cheat we won easily, we will again too!"'
+			'Anushka quickly questions him while smiling. "Fine, I admit you have won, twice. But keep in mind it was <<$npc_nickname>> second time playing that game, you know how it takes time to learn a game."'
+			'Timofey looks concerned while Maksim looks confident. "Pfft, girls suck at video games."'
+			'Anushka grins a bit and continues in a teasing tone of voice. "Then why do I... a GGGIIIRRRLLL always beat you when it''s just us playing uh?"'
+			*nl
+			'Maksim looks mad and turns on her. "Cause you always cheat!"'
+			'Timofey is starting to look upset as his brother and sister start to fight so you speak up. "How about we just play then uh?"'
+			'Anushka nods to that. "Yeah let''s just play and see what happens."'
+			'Maksim still looks angry but nods. "Fine!"'
+		elseif maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 2:
+			'Both of them get excited. "If you don''t cheat again, we''ll definitely beat you this time!"'
+			'Anushka quickly questions him with a teasing smile. "If you are half as good as you think then it wouldn''t have mattered."'
+			'Maksim responds. "Shut up!"'
+			'Then Timofey chimes in, obviously not liking it when his brother and sister fight. "Can we play now?"'
+			'Anushka''s face instantly softens. "Yeah sure we can."'
+		else
+			'Both of them get excited. "Yeah, and this time we will beat you!"'
+			'"You really think you can beat us this time?" Anushka quickly replies while smiling. '
+			'The boys nod at each other. "This time will be different. We''re sure we''ll win!"'
+			'Anushka laughs. "Nah, I don''t think so. Maybe you boys just like getting beat by girls?"'
+			'Maksim looks mad. "Just shut up and play!"' 
+			'Anushka just laughs again and mimics what he said in a manner that taunts him.'
+			act 'Play':
+				*clr & cla
+				gs 'exp_gain', 'gaming', rand(1,3)
+				minut += 15
+				gs 'stat'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
+				'"Come on guys, let''s just have fun!" you tell them.'
+				'"We''ll win this time!" Maksim says as he looks at the two of you, determined.'
+				'"Let''s play!" Timofey says smiling.'
+				'The four of you play for several minutes. You''ve gotten better since the last time you played. You learned a lot and are able to help out more than you did before.'
+				act 'Finish':
+					*clr & cla
+					minut += 15
+					gs 'stat'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
+					if pcs_gaming <= 20:
+						'It''s not enough, however, as all of them are still better players than you. Anushka does what she can again, but the brothers easily manage to win back-to-back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Haha, go suck a dick that''s all your good at!" Maksim taunts as he looks directly at Anushka.'
+						'Anushka reaches out and grabs him by the shirt. "Shut your fucking mouth, I am so sick of your fucking shit." She looks visibly angry this time.'
+						'Maksim actually goes a little white, like he is actually afraid of her, while Timofey jumps up and grabs Anushka''s arm. "Stop... stop fighting, he didn''t mean it."'
+						*nl
+						'Anushka turns to look at Timofey and you see the anger melt away from her as she lets go of Marksim. "Ok for you." Then she kisses him on the top of his head much to his dismay, unable to get away from her until she finishes.'
+						'"EEEWWW stop it!" Timofey whines while Maksim laughs at him. Then he gives Maksim a dirty look while he is laughing. "Why do you both have to always be so mean."'
+						'Anushka rolls her eyes. "I wasn''t being mean."'
+						'Maksim decides to taunt his brother more. "Now you got all her sex cooties from all the guys she lets fuck her."'
+						*nl
+						'Timofey looks more distressed and then leaves the room. Anushka gives Maksim a dirty look. "Why do you always have to be such an asshole."'
+						'"Fuck you, get out!" Maksim says as Anushka just shakes her head in obvious disgust at her brother and then leaves the room.'
+						'You follow her, she catches up to Timofey as he is going into the bathroom. "Hey I don''t have cooties, stop listening to him."'
+						'He looks at her like she is stupid. "All girls have cooties, I need to wash them off." Then he goes into the bathroom closing the door.'
+						'Anushka just shakes her head and laughs. "God boys are so stupid, in a few years he will be chasing girls." Then the two of you go back to her room.'
+					elseif pcs_gaming <= 40:
+						'The two of you are slightly better than they are, and after some time, you come out on top. Maksim gets mad and throws his controller down. "Fuck!" He then turns on his brother. "Why are you so bad, if you didn''t suck so much we would have won."'
+						'Timofey shakes his head. "No, you suck and you''re why we lost. You always have to try and be the hero and try and win on your own, instead of sticking with me."'
+						'"I leave you because you suck and slow me down!" Maksim yells.'
+						'Before you can even react, Anushka tells him. "You want dad to come back in here?"'
+						'Maksim pushes Anushka. "Get out of my room. Get out!"'
+						'Anushka just shakes her head and goes for the door. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s get out of here."' 
+						'Maksim rushes across the room and pushes the two of you the rest of the way out before slamming the door closed. Anushka angrily goes back to her room.'
+					else
+						'Before too long, it''s pretty clear you and Anushka have the upper hand. The brothers keep it close, but they fall a little short in both matches.'
+						'Maksim throws down his controller. "Fuck!" He then turns on his brother. "Why are you so bad? We could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much!"'
+						'Timofey tries to defend himself. "It''s not my fault. Nush and <<$pcs_nickname>> are just too good."'
+						'Before Maksim can respond, Anushka cuts him off. "It''s not Timo''s fault, and you know it. When you fall behind, you get too aggressive, and don''t work with Timofey. You just try to win it on your own. Also, you''re just mad because you got beat by a girl... again." she says in a teasing tone.'
+						'Maksim''s eyes flare at Anushka "Get out... Get out of our room!" he says as he tries to shove her off the bed.'
+						*nl
+						'Anushka gets up. "Oh my God, you''re such a baby! I don''t even know why I bother playing with you."'
+						'He pushes her towards the door. "You only play with us to bully us! I don''t want to play with you anymore!"'
+						'Anushka sounds exasperated. "Fine then, you little brat! I won''t!" She turns towards you. "Come on, let''s go before this little shit starts to cry."'
+						'"Go suck a cock!" Maksim starts to yell, but catches himself and lowers his voice partway through.'
+						'Timofey runs up to his sister. "You will play with us again, won''t you?" he asks in a somewhat pleading tone.'
+						'Anushka instantly eases up, and her anger seems to melt away. "Some other time, squirt..." she says with a smile and ruffles his hair, much to his annoyance.'
+						'As she closes the door and leaves, you can hear Maksim berating his brother for being a pussy and pleading with their sister to play games with them.'
+					end
+					act 'Go to Anushka''s room': AnushkaLoc = 2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	elseif maksimQW['nush_games'] = 4:
+		'The two of you walk down the hall and enter her brothers'' room. As you do you only see Timofey on his bed reading a comic, he looks up at the two of you but doesn''t say anything. "Where''s your brother?" Anushka asks.'
+		'Timofey shrugs. "I don''t know, he ran off outside with his friends, they wouldn''t let me play with them." He says sadly.'
+		'You see Anushka''s expression softens along with her voice. "How about we play instead huh? What do you say?"'
+		'He perks up to that and closes the comic. "Really?" He now sounds excited and happy.'
+		'She nods. "Yep any game you want, as long as all three of us can play."'
+		'He jumps up and starts setting up the game. He ends up picking Crash Team Racing, a kids racing game similar to Mario Kart. Anushka looks at you as he gets it all set up. "Come on." The two of you sit on Maksim bed while Timofey hands you both a controler before sitting on his.'
+		'As you start playing it is obvious Timofey is pretty good at this game, likely his favorite game as he seems to know all just what to do.'
 		act 'Play':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'exp_gain', 'gaming', rand(1,3)
 			minut += 15
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Come on guys, let''s just have fun!" you tell them.'
-			'"We''ll win this time!" Maksim says as he looks at the two of you, determined.'
-			'"Let''s play!" Timofey says smiling.'
-			'The four of you play for several minutes. You''ve gotten a lot better since the last time you played. You learned a lot and are able to help out more than you did before.'
-			act 'Finish':
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/timo_play.jpg"></center>'
+			if pcs_gaming <= 20:
+				'They are both way better at the game than you are, you are pretty sure Anushka is better than Timofey because each time he messes up. She suddenly messes up to and seems unable to get going again until he passes her. You quickly realize she is keeping it close but letting him win on purpose, but he doesn''t seem to notice as he is into the game, getting excited as he wins. After playing a couple of times, he exclaims "I WIN!" Anushka just laughs as she gets up and ruffles his hair much to his annoyance. "Yeah you did, you are getting really good at it, but need to go." He suddenly looks crest fallen as she says you are going. "I will come play with your later, ok?"'
+				'He smiles again and nods. "Ok but I won''t take it easy on you."'
+				'She for her part just smiles. "I know you won''t." Then she turns to look at you. "Come on let''s go back to my room."'
+			elseif pcs_gaming <= 40:
+				'You are about as good as Timofey, you think Anushka is better than you both though. You notice each time he makes a mistake and you get in the lead she gets by him too suddenly, not long after she always manages to crash into you, letting Timofey get back ahead of both of you. You quickly realize she is keeping it close but letting him win on purpose, but he doesn''t seem to notice as he is into the game, getting excited as he wins. After playing a couple of times, he exclaims "I WIN!" Anushka just laughs as she gets up and ruffles his hair much to his annoyance. "Yeah you did, you are getting really good at it, but need to go." He suddenly looks crest fallen as she says you are going. "I will come play with your later, ok?"'
+				'He smiles again and nods. "Ok but I won''t take it easy on you."'
+				'She for her part just smiles. "I know you won''t." Then she turns to look at you. "Come on let''s go back to my room."'
+			else
+				'You are better than Timofey and maybe better than Anushka, each time she gets close to you, she always crashes into you. Which allows Timofey to get ahead again of both of you. You quickly realize she is keeping it close but letting him win on purpose, so you then join in and keep it close, but always let him get ahead before the end to win. He doesn''t seem to notice that you and Anushka are letting him win, as he is so into the game, getting excited as he wins. After playing a couple of times, he exclaims "I WIN!" Anushka just laughs as she gets up and ruffles his hair much to his annoyance. "Yeah you did, you are getting really good at it, but need to go." He suddenly looks crest fallen as she says you are going. "I will come play with your later, ok?"'
+				'He smiles again and nods. "Ok but I won''t take it easy on you."'
+				'She for her part just smiles. "I know you won''t." Then she turns to look at you. "Come on let''s go back to my room."'
+			end
+			act 'Go to Anushka''s room': AnushkaLoc = 2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
+		end
+	else
+		'The two of you walk down the hall and enter her brothers'' room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing and Maksim visibly gathers up his courage. "What is it? What do you want?" He notices you and starts staring at your breasts.'
+		'"Calm down. I just wanted to see if you guys wanted to play some more?" Anushka replies, pointing to the gaming console in their room.'
+		if maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 1:
+			'Both of them get excited. "Even when you tried to cheat we won easily, we will again too!"'
+			'Anushka quickly questions him while smiling. "Fine I admit you have won, a few times finally. But keep in mind <<$npc_nickname>> doesn''t own the game so she can''t practice like you two do all the time and you know how it takes time to learn a game."'
+			'Maksim sneers. "Like like excuses from a couple of pussies."'
+			'Anushka rolls her eyes and continues in a teasing tone of voice. "Like you know what a pussy is, now you want to play or not?"'
+			*nl
+			'Maksim looks mad and turns on her. "I do too!"'
+			'Timofey is starting to look upset as his brother and sister start to fight so you speak up. "Can we just play?"'
+			'Anushka nods to that. "Yeah let''s just play and see what happens."'
+			'Maksim still looks angry but nods. "Fine!"'
+		elseif maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 2:
+			'Both of them get excited. "If you don''t cheat again, we''ll definitely beat you this time!"'
+			'Anushka quickly questions him with a teasing smile. "Like you don''t do the same thing all the time."'
+			'Maksim responds. "Shut up!"'
+			'Then Timofey chimes in, obviously not liking it when his brother and sister fight. "Can we play now?"'
+			'Anushka''s face instantly softens. "Yeah sure we can."'
+		else
+			'Both of them get excited. "Yeah, and this time we will beat you!"'
+			'"You really think you can beat us this time?" Anushka quickly replies while smiling. '
+			'The boys nod at each other. "This time will be different. We''re sure we''ll win!"'
+			'Anushka laughs. "Nah, I don''t think so. Maybe you boys just like getting beat by girls?"'
+			'Maksim looks mad. "Just shut up and play!"' 
+			'Anushka just laughs again and mimics what he said in a manner that taunts him.'
+			act 'Play':
 				*clr & cla
+				gs 'exp_gain', 'gaming', rand(1,3)
 				minut += 15
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
-				if pcs_gaming <= 20:
-					'It''s not enough however, as all of them are still better players than you. Anushka does what she can again, but the brothers easily manage to win back to back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Haha, we win and you lose!" Maksim taunts.'
-					'Anushka rolls her eyes at their antics. "Yeah, yeah. You won." She reaches over and ruffles Timofey''s hair, which he tries and fails to dodge. "Good job, kiddo."'
-					'"Pfft, I won it! Timo almost caused us to lose, but I carried his sorry ass!" Maksim says.'
-					'Timofey pulls away from his sister. "Nuh-uh, I almost scored as good you as you did!" It quickly turns into them arguing over who did better.'
-					'Anushka gets up and shakes her head. "Come on, let''s go. They''re not going to stop acting like brats anytime soon." You get up and follow her out.'
-				elseif pcs_gaming <= 40:
-					'The two of you are slightly better than they are, and after some time, you come out on top. Maksim gets mad and throws his controller down. "Fuck!" He then turns on his brother. "It''s your fault we lost! God, you''re so stupid!"'
-					'Timofey shakes his head. "No, you''re stupid and you''re why we lost. You always have to try and be the hero, so Nush tricks you every time."'
-					'Maksim suddenly leaps on top of his brother. "Shut your mouth, you little shit! She doesn''t trick me!" he yells as he starts beating on him. Before you can even react, Anushka grabs Maksim by the back of his collar and yanks him off Timofey. "Leave him alone! He''s right. I baited you out then <<$pcs_nickname>> killed you. It''s not his fault."'
-					'Maksim gets back up and pushes Anushka. "Get out of my room. Get out or I''ll tell Dad you''re picking on us again!"'
-					'Anushka just shakes her head and goes for the door. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s get out of here." Just as you start to leave, Anushka stops and looks back in. "Maksim, you better leave him alone or I''ll come back in here and beat your ass."' 
-					'Maksim rushes across the room and pushes the two of you the rest of the way out before slamming the door closed. Anushka angrily goes back to her room.'
-				else
-					'Before too long, it''s pretty clear you and Anushka have the upper hand. The brothers keep it close, but they fall a little short in both matches.'
-					'Maksim throws down his controller. "Fuck!" He then turns on his brother. "Why are you so bad? We could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much!"'
-					'Timofey tries to defend himself. "It''s not my fault. Nush and <<$pcs_nickname>> are just too good."'
-					'Before Maksim can respond, Anushka cuts him off. "It''s not Timo''s fault, and you know it. When you fall behind, you get too aggressive, and don''t work with Timofey. You just try to win it on your own. Also, you''re just mad because you got beat by a girl... again." she says in a teasing tone, then sticks her tongue out at him.'
-					'Maksim''s eyes flare at Anushka and it looks like he''s about to scream at her again until she interjects. "Calm down, we don''t want Dad in here again." He shuts his mouth and glances at the door, then glares at Anushka.'
-					*nl
-					'"Get out... Get out of our room!" he says as he tries to shove her off the bed.'
-					'Anushka gets up. "Oh my God, you''re such a baby! I don''t even know why I bother playing with you."'
-					'He pushes her towards the door. "You only play with us to bully us! I don''t want to play with you anymore!"'
-					'Anushka sounds exasperated. "Fine then, you little brat! I won''t!" She turns towards you. "Come on, let''s go before this little shit starts to cry."'
-					'"Go suck a cock!" Maksim starts to yell, but catches himself and lowers his voice partway through.'
-					'Timofey runs up to his sister. "You will play with us again, won''t you?" he asks in a somewhat pleading tone.'
-					'Anushka instantly eases up, and her anger seems to melt away. "Some other time, squirt..." she says with a smile and ruffles his hair, much to his annoyance.'
-					'As she closes the door and leaves, you can hear Maksim berating his brother for being a pussy and pleading with their sister to play games with them.'
+				'"Come on guys, let''s just have fun!" you tell them.'
+				'"We''ll win this time!" Maksim says as he looks at the two of you, determined.'
+				'"Let''s play!" Timofey says smiling.'
+				'The four of you play for several minutes. You''ve gotten better since the last time you played. You learned a lot and are able to help out more than you did before.'
+				act 'Finish':
+					*clr & cla
+					minut += 15
+					gs 'stat'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
+					if pcs_gaming <= 20:
+						'It''s not enough, however, as all of them are still better players than you. Anushka does what she can again, but the brothers easily manage to win back to back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Haha, see told you girls suck at video games!" Maksim taunts.'
+						'Anushka rolls her eyes at their antics. "Yeah, yeah. You won." She reaches over and ruffles Timofey''s hair, which he tries and fails to dodge. "Good job, kiddo."'
+						'"Pfft, I won it! Timo almost caused us to lose, but I carried his sorry ass!" Maksim says.'
+						'Timofey pulls away from his sister. "Nuh-uh, I almost scored as good you as you did!" It quickly turns into them arguing over who did better.'
+						'Anushka gets up and shakes her head. "Come on, let''s go. They''re not going to stop acting like brats anytime soon." You get up and follow her out.'
+					elseif pcs_gaming <= 40:
+						'The two of you are slightly better than they are, and after some time, you come out on top. Maksim gets mad and throws his controller down. "Fuck!" He then turns on his brother. "It''s your fault we lost! God, you''re so stupid!"'
+						'Timofey shakes his head. "No, you''re stupid and you''re why we lost. You always have to try and be the hero, so Nush tricks you every time."'
+						'Maksim suddenly leaps on top of his brother. "Shut your mouth, you little shit! She doesn''t trick me!" he yells as he starts beating on him. Before you can even react, Anushka grabs Maksim by the back of his collar and yanks him off Timofey. "Leave him alone! He''s right. I baited you out then <<$pcs_nickname>> killed you. It''s not his fault."'
+						'Maksim gets back up and pushes Anushka. "Get out of my room. Get out or I''ll tell Dad you''re picking on us again!"'
+						'Anushka just shakes her head and goes for the door. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s get out of here." Just as you start to leave, Anushka stops and looks back in. "Maksim, you better leave him alone or I''ll come back in here and beat your ass."' 
+						'Maksim rushes across the room and pushes the two of you the rest of the way out before slamming the door closed. Anushka angrily goes back to her room.'
+					else
+						'Before too long, it''s pretty clear you and Anushka have the upper hand. The brothers keep it close, but they fall a little short in both matches.'
+						'Maksim throws down his controller. "Fuck!" He then turns on his brother. "Why are you so bad? We could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much!"'
+						'Timofey tries to defend himself. "It''s not my fault. Nush and <<$pcs_nickname>> are just too good."'
+						'Before Maksim can respond, Anushka cuts him off. "It''s not Timo''s fault, and you know it. When you fall behind, you get too aggressive, and don''t work with Timofey. You just try to win it on your own. Also, you''re just mad because you got beat by a girl... again." she says in a teasing tone.'
+						'Maksim''s eyes flare at Anushka "Get out... Get out of our room!" he says as he tries to shove her off the bed.'
+						*nl
+						'Anushka gets up. "Oh my God, you''re such a baby! I don''t even know why I bother playing with you."'
+						'He pushes her towards the door. "You only play with us to bully us! I don''t want to play with you anymore!"'
+						'Anushka sounds exasperated. "Fine then, you little brat! I won''t!" She turns towards you. "Come on, let''s go before this little shit starts to cry."'
+						'"Go suck a cock!" Maksim starts to yell, but catches himself and lowers his voice partway through.'
+						'Timofey runs up to his sister. "You will play with us again, won''t you?" he asks in a somewhat pleading tone.'
+						'Anushka instantly eases up, and her anger seems to melt away. "Some other time, squirt..." she says with a smile and ruffles his hair, much to his annoyance.'
+						'As she closes the door and leaves, you can hear Maksim berating his brother for being a pussy and pleading with their sister to play games with them.'
+					end
+					act 'Go to Anushka''s room': AnushkaLoc = 2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 				end
-				act 'Go to Anushka''s room': AnushkaLoc = 2 & gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 			end
 		end
 	end

locations/anushkaev2.qsrc

@@ -29,8 +29,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watch_nushrad':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A154'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/spyrad4.jpg"></center>'
-				'Just as she''s starting to moan in pleasure, he pulls out of her and flips her over, grabbing her ass and giving her cheek a hard squeeze, followed by another hard slap that leaves a red outline of his hand behind, causing her to yelp again. "Fuck, you have such a nice ass Nush." She apparently knows what that means, and she quickly grabs the bottle of lube out of her night stand. Before she can use it, he grabs it from her. "Give me that, you always use too much." he growls before squirting just a little onto the head of his dick and rubbing it down the shaft. Once he''s done, he briefly rubs his fingers between her cheeks.'
-				'He pushes her down until she''s on her stomach and tosses the bottle aside before he leans forward, pushing his dick between her cheeks as she struggles a little. "You didn''t use enough lube!" she winces as he keeps struggling to penetrate her. "Shut up Nush, this feels better. You''re so fucking tight!" he says and shoves his hips forward hard, which causes her to jump a little and cry out in pain. "Oh fuck that hurt! You need to use more lube!" she protests in a stressed voice, but he pushes her head against the mattress. You can see her wincing in pain and white knuckling her grip on the bed sheets. "See? I knew you didn''t need much lube." he says as he struggles to force his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick into her ass, moaning in pleasure as he does.'
+				'Just as she''s starting to moan in pleasure, he pulls out of her and flips her over, grabbing her ass and giving her cheek a hard squeeze, followed by another hard slap that leaves a red outline of his hand behind, causing her to yelp again. "Fuck, you have such a nice ass Nush." She apparently knows what that means, and she quickly grabs the bottle of lube out of her nightstand. Before she can use it, he grabs it from her. "Give me that, you always use too much." he growls before squirting just a little onto the head of his dick and rubbing it down the shaft. Once he''s done, he briefly rubs his fingers between her cheeks.'
+				'He pushes her down until she''s on her stomach and tosses the bottle aside before he leans forward, pushing his dick between her cheeks as she struggles a little. "You didn''t use enough lube!" she winces as he keeps struggling to penetrate her. "Shut up Nush, this feels better. You''re so fucking tight!" he says and shoves his hips forward hard, which causes her to jump a little and cry out in pain. "Oh fuck that hurt! You need to use more lube!" she protests in a stressed voice, but he pushes her head against the mattress. You can see her wincing in pain and white-knuckling her grip on the bed sheets. "See? I knew you didn''t need much lube." he says as he struggles to force his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick into her ass, moaning in pleasure as he does.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Leave apartment': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'pav_complex','start'
@@ -42,11 +42,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watch_nushrad':
 						'"What are you doing?" You nearly jump out of your skin and blush when you look back and see Maksim, cursing to yourself for being so foolish as to let yourself be caught spying.'
 						'You feel your stomach really drop when you see the phone in his hand. He was recording you. "Uh... I ... Nothing..." you sheepishly reply.'
 						*nl
-						'"Well this recording says otherwise. Maybe I should show Anushka and Rad what you were doing?" You reach for the phone, but he pulls it away and pushes a button. "There. I just uploaded to the cloud. Maybe we can work something out?" His smug grin is huge.'
+						'"Well this recording says otherwise. Maybe I should show Anushka and Rad what you were doing?" You reach for the phone, but he pulls it away and pushes a button. "There. I just uploaded it to the cloud. Maybe we can work something out?" His smug grin is huge.'
 						'You sigh in defeat. "What do you want?"'
 						'He grins even wider and looks even more smug. "Whatever I want."'
 						*nl
-						'You start to shake your head, but before you can tell him to get lost, he interrupts you. "Just little stuff, like showing me your tits when I want, buying me a girly mag, stuff like that." You''re about to tell him fuck off, but stop. You''re sure Anushka wouldn''t care, but Radomir... What if he told everyone in school? On the other hand, do you want Maksim to lord this over you for who knows how long?'
+						'You start to shake your head, but before you can tell him to get lost, he interrupts you. "Just small favors, like showing me your tits when I want, buying me a girly mag, stuff like that." You''re about to tell him fuck off, but stop. You''re sure Anushka wouldn''t care, but Radomir... What if he told everyone in school? On the other hand, do you want Maksim to lord this over you for who knows how long?'
 						act 'Agree': gt 'anushkamaksim','maksim_blackmail'
 						gs 'willpower', 'action', 'resist', 'medium'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wait_nushrad':
 			minut += 2
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big154.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Well you could try not being so rough with her," you tell him.'
-			'He snorts and shakes his head. "Please! She''s just like all you bitches - she loves every minute of it. I could come back later and she would just roll over, spread those cheeks and let me fuck her ass again. No matter how much she whines and cries about it, she''s always ready for another good ass fucking."'
+			'He snorts and shakes his head. "Please! She''s just like all you bitches - she loves every minute of it. I could come back later and she would just roll over, spread those cheeks and let me fuck her ass again. No matter how much she whines and cries about it, she''s always ready for another good ass-fucking."'
 			*nl
 			'You''re not really sure what to say. If she didn''t like it, why would she keep letting him do it? You don''t get to find out since he already left while you were lost in your thoughts. You open Anushka''s door and walk in, deciding not to say anything about what you just saw.'
 			act 'Enter her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
@@ -156,14 +156,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rad3some':
 	AnushkaLoc = 2
 	gs 'stat'
 	if hotcat >= 6:
+		radomirQW['had_sex'] += 1
 		if npc_sex['A144'] = 0:npc_sex['A144'] = 1 & girl += 1
 		if npc_sex['A154'] = 0:npc_sex['A154'] = 1 & boy += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/join/walkin1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You walk in, confident you''ll be joining them. Closing the door behind you, you walk up to the bed where Radomir is still hammering away at Anushka''s pussy. After a few seconds, Anushka notices you and gives you a grin. "Oh hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, what''s up?" she asks through grunts and moans as Radomir keeps hammering away. He only stops once she speaks to you, turning his head to give you a once over from head to toe.'
+		'You walk in, confident you''ll be joining them. Closing the door behind you, you walk up to the bed where Radomir is still hammering away at Anushka''s pussy. After a few seconds, Anushka notices you and gives you a grin. "Oh hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, what''s up?" she asks through grunts and moans as Radomir keeps hammering away. He only stops once she speaks to you, turning his head to give you a once-over from head to toe.'
 		'You smile in return. "You look like you''re having fun, so I thought I might as well join you."'
 		*nl
 		'Anushka glances at Radomir. "It''s fine by me, Rad."'
-		'He grins as he rolls off Anushka and onto his back on the bed, his dick pointing straight up. "Of course you did <<$pcs_nickname>>, and who could blame you?" he says in a cocky tone. He then glances at Anshuka and back to you. "Don''t worry, girls. There is enough of me to go around." he says with a laugh as he looks at you. Anushka rolls her eyes at his comment and sits at his side. "Well, come on <<$pcs_nickname>>. Make that pretty mouth of yours useful," he says, indicting his cock.'
+		'He grins as he rolls off Anushka and onto his back on the bed, his dick pointing straight up. "Of course you did <<$pcs_nickname>>, and who could blame you?" he says in a cocky tone. He then glances at Anshuka and back to you. "Don''t worry, girls. There is enough of me to go around." he says with a laugh as he looks at you. Anushka rolls her eyes at his comment and sits at his side. "Well, come on <<$pcs_nickname>>. Make that pretty mouth of yours useful," he says, indicating his cock.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Suck his dick':
@@ -189,9 +190,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rad3some':
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A154'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/join/rad/radnushs3.jpg"></center>'
-					'You roll over onto your back and spread your legs. He gives your ass a firm slap. "Yeah, this is a fine looking little ass." Anushka gets the cue and grabs a bottle of lube from her nightstand. Radomir growls as he sees it, but grabs it anyway. "You girls are so fucking obsessed with lube. If it was up to you, you would use so much you couldn''t feel anything." he complains as he grudgingly squirts just a little onto his finger tip and rubs it briefly against your asshole. There''s barely any real lubrication beyond your own pussy juices on his dick.'
+					'You roll over onto your back and spread your legs. He gives your ass a firm slap. "Yeah, this is a fine-looking little ass." Anushka gets the cue and grabs a bottle of lube from her nightstand. Radomir growls as he sees it, but grabs it anyway. "You girls are so fucking obsessed with lube. If it was up to you, you would use so much you couldn''t feel anything." he complains as he grudgingly squirts just a little onto his fingertip and rubs it briefly against your asshole. There''s barely any real lubrication beyond your own pussy juices on his dick.'
 					*nl
-					'He tosses the bottle aside, just as you realize he is planning to fuck your ass, just as he lines his dick up with your asshole. You feel the head pressing against tight hole, the pressure builds up until the head painfully pops into your asshole, making you cry out a little in pain. There isn''t enough lube, but once inside, he keeps shoving his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick deeper into your ass until he finally works it balls deep. He then starts painfully hammering away at your ass while Anushka starts licking your pussy, which helps ease the pain a little.'
+					'He tosses the bottle aside, just as you realize he is planning to fuck your ass, just as he lines his dick up with your asshole. You feel the head pressing against your tight hole, the pressure builds up until the head painfully pops into your asshole, making you cry out a little in pain. There isn''t enough lube, but once inside, he keeps shoving his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick deeper into your ass until he finally works it balls deep. He then starts painfully hammering away at your ass while Anushka starts licking your pussy, which helps ease the pain a little.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 3, 'group', 'lesbian', 'rough', 'lube'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -3, 'group', 'lesbian'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -230,7 +231,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rad3some':
 									minut += 5
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/spyrad6.jpg"></center>'
-									'You keep getting dressed while Radomir turns towards Anushka. "Stay out of this, Nush!" he says as he grabs her by the hair and forces her face down against the mattress before he looks to you. "Yeah, that''s right bitch. Get the fuck out of here. No one wants you here!" he barks as he uses his other hand to guide his dick to Anushka''s asshole. He struggles as he pushes against her asshole with his dick. "Use some fucking lube." she says before he shoves forward, popping the head of his dick into her ass and causing her to cry out and grimace in pain while he moans in pleasure.'
+									'You keep getting dressed while Radomir turns towards Anushka. "Stay out of this, Nush!" he says as he grabs her by the hair and forces her face down against the mattress before he looks at you. "Yeah, that''s right bitch. Get the fuck out of here. No one wants you here!" he barks as he uses his other hand to guide his dick to Anushka''s asshole. He struggles as he pushes against her asshole with his dick. "Use some fucking lube." she says before he shoves forward, popping the head of his dick into her ass and causing her to cry out and grimace in pain while he moans in pleasure.'
 									*nl
 									'"Shut up about the fucking lube already!" he growls as he grabs her hips and shoves himself balls deep into her ass. It makes her cry out more, and she white knuckles the bed sheets, obviously finding it just as painful as you did. However, she isn''t telling him to stop, even though you don''t think she is enjoying it. Not knowing what else to do, you finish getting dressed to the sounds of Anushka grunting in pain and Radomir moaning in pleasure. You leave the two of them alone and walk out of her bedroom, closing the door behind you and heading for the apartment door to leave.'
 									act 'Leave apartment': gt 'pav_complex','start'
@@ -253,7 +254,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rad3some':
 		*nl
 		'Anushka hesitates for a moment. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, uh..."'
 		'Before Anushka can finish what she was about to say, Radomir interrupts. "For fucks sake <<$pcs_nickname>>, can you get out of here! Your face is killing my boner!" he says in disgust.'
-		'Anushka slaps him on the arm. "You don''t have to be a dick about it, Rad." She then turns towards you. "This really isn''t a good time. Maybe we can hang out sometime later, but can you, you know, take off?" she asks fairly pleasantly, but it is obvious she has no more desire to hook up with you than Radomir does. Feeling rejected, you nod and mumble a apology as you leave her room, shutting the door before leaving the apartment.'
+		'Anushka slaps him on the arm. "You don''t have to be a dick about it, Rad." She then turns towards you. "This really isn''t a good time. Maybe we can hang out sometime later, but can you, you know, take off?" she asks fairly pleasantly, but it is obvious she has no more desire to hook up with you than Radomir does. Feeling rejected, you nod and mumble an apology as you leave her room, shutting the door before leaving the apartment.'
 		act 'Leave apartment': gt 'pav_complex','start'
 	end
 end
@@ -262,7 +263,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'radnush_asspound':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/join/rad/radnushs4.jpg"></center>'
-	'He moans in pleasure as he hammers away. "Fuck yeah <<$pcs_nickname>>, your ass is almost as tight as Nush''s." He then grabs you by the ankles and spreads your legs apart and towards you. "Grab her legs, Nush." Anushka does as he asks and takes hold of your ankles, holding your legs apart and pulled up towards your face as Radomir starts taking the longest strokes he can. "Fuck yeah, just like that!" he moans out, seeming to really be enjoying himself. You take several deep breaths, and try to relax and enjoy this as much as you can.'
+	'He moans in pleasure as he hammers away. "Fuck yeah <<$pcs_nickname>>, your ass is almost as tight as Nush''s." He then grabs you by the ankles and spreads your legs apart and towards you. "Grab her legs, Nush." Anushka does as he asks and takes hold of your ankles, holding your legs apart and up towards your face as Radomir starts taking the longest strokes he can. "Fuck yeah, just like that!" he moans out, seeming to really be enjoying himself. You take several deep breaths, and try to relax and enjoy this as much as you can.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'group', 'lesbian', 'maso', 'rough'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Anushka''s turn':
@@ -293,7 +294,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'radnush_asspound':
 				act 'Cum sharing':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/join/rad/radnushs8.jpg"></center>'
-					'"Fuck, I''m about to cum! Get on your knees!" he demands as he pulls out of your ass. You turn and slide off the bed onto your knees. Anushka already on her knees beside you, waiting. Within moments, Radomir starts cumming on both your faces, switching which face his dick is pointing towards between spurts of cum. It doesn''t take long until both your faces are covered. With the last spurt, he stumbles back and collapsed on a chair to look at you both. "Fuck, that was amazing. We''ve got to do this again sometime." he says with a laugh. Anushka ignores him and just leans over and gives you a kiss, swapping his cum between you.'
+					'"Fuck, I''m about to cum! Get on your knees!" he demands as he pulls out of your ass. You turn and slide off the bed onto your knees. Anushka is already on her knees beside you, waiting. Within moments, Radomir starts cumming on both your faces, switching which face his dick is pointing towards between spurts of cum. It doesn''t take long until both your faces are covered. With the last spurt, he stumbles back and collapses on a chair to look at you both. "Fuck, that was amazing. We''ve got to do this again sometime." he says with a laugh. Anushka ignores him and just leans over and gives you a kiss, swapping his cum between you.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'group', 'lesbian'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A154'
@@ -335,7 +336,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rad_selfie':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/anushka/7.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Can I see it? The selfie that is."'
-		'"Sure, if you want." She reaches over and grabs her phone, takes a moment to pull up the image and then shows it to you. You take a moment to look at it. You have to admit it is kind of hot and it turns you on a little just looking at it. She then interrupts your thoughts. "I can send it to you, if you want a copy of it."'
+		'"Sure, if you want." She reaches over and grabs her phone, takes a moment to pull up the image and then shows it to you. You take a moment to look at it. You have to admit it is kind of hot and it turns you on a little just looking at it. She then interrupts your thoughts. "I can send it to you if you want a copy of it."'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -388,7 +389,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'about_rad':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushbed.jpg"></center>'
 			'"There is more to it than that. We''re friends right? So why don''t you tell me?" you say, continuing to prod her.'
-			'You can tell she is getting more and more annoyed. "For fuck''s sake, you''re like a dog with a bone about this! We use to date, okay? It makes things different. You happy now?"'
+			'You can tell she is getting more and more annoyed. "For fuck''s sake, you''re like a dog with a bone about this! We used to date, okay? It makes things different. You happy now?"'
 			'"Thank you for telling me." you reply.'
 			act 'Drop it': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 			act 'You guys use to date?':
@@ -460,11 +461,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watch_nushval':
 					'"What are you doing?" You nearly jump out of your skin and blush when you look back and see Maksim, cursing to yourself for being so foolish as to let yourself be caught spying.'
 					'You feel your stomach really drop when you see the phone in his hand. He was recording you. "Uh... I ... Nothing..." you sheepishly reply.'
 					*nl
-					'"Well this recording says otherwise. Maybe I should show Anushka and Val what you were doing?" You reach for the phone, but he pulls it away and pushes a button. "There. I just uploaded to the cloud. Maybe we can work something out?" His smug grin is huge.'
+					'"Well this recording says otherwise. Maybe I should show Anushka and Val what you were doing?" You reach for the phone, but he pulls it away and pushes a button. "There. I just uploaded it to the cloud. Maybe we can work something out?" His smug grin is huge.'
 					'You sigh in defeat. "What do you want?"'
 					'He grins even wider and looks even more smug. "Whatever I want."'
 					*nl
-					'You start to shake your head, but before you can tell him to get lost, he interrupts you. "Just little stuff, like showing me your tits when I want, buying me a girly mag, stuff like that." You''re about to tell him fuck off, but stop. You''re sure Anushka wouldn''t care, but Valentin... What if he told everyone in school? On the other hand, do you want Maksim to lord this over you for who knows how long?'
+					'You start to shake your head, but before you can tell him to get lost, he interrupts you. "Just small favors, like showing me your tits when I want, buying me a girly mag, stuff like that." You''re about to tell him fuck off, but stop. You''re sure Anushka wouldn''t care, but Valentin... What if he told everyone in school? On the other hand, do you want Maksim to lord this over you for who knows how long?'
 					act 'Agree': gt 'anushkamaksim','maksim_blackmail'
 					gs 'willpower', 'action', 'resist', 'medium'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -504,12 +505,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watch_nushval':
 						act 'Climax':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/spyval6.jpg"></center>'
-							'"I''m about to cum!" he groans and pulls his cock out of her ass, slides off the bed and starts jerking his dick. Anushka quickly slides off the bed snd onto her knees in front of him. She leans her head back and opens her mouth just in time for his load of cum to explode across her face.'
+							'"I''m about to cum!" he groans and pulls his cock out of her ass, slides off the bed and starts jerking his dick. Anushka quickly slides off the bed and onto her knees in front of him. She leans her head back and opens her mouth just in time for his load of cum to explode across her face.'
 							*nl
-							'Most of it ends up on her forehead and nose, but some of it ends up in her open mouth. He milks the last few drops of cum out of his dick, letting them land on her tongue. "Fuck, that was amazing." he says as she swallows what was in her mouth. They both start getting dressed as she cleans his cum off her face. Once she''s cleaned up, he kisses her on the forehead. "I need to get going babe. I need to see that guy about a part for my bike."'
+							'Most of it ends up on her forehead and nose, but some of it ends up in her open mouth. He milks the last few drops of cum out of his dick, letting them land on her tongue. "Fuck, that was amazing," he says as she swallows what was in her mouth. They both start getting dressed as she cleans his cum off her face. Once she''s cleaned up, he kisses her on the forehead. "I need to get going babe. I need to see that guy about a part for my bike."'
 							*nl
 							'She sits on her bed and smirks at him. "Whatever, I got what I needed. You can go."'
-							'He laughs and bows slightly. "Why thank you your majesty, I''m glad I could be of service." They both laugh and he turns towards the door. You quickly close it before you''re spotted.'
+							'He laughs and bows slightly. "Why thank you, your majesty, I''m glad I could be of service." They both laugh and he turns towards the door. You quickly close it before you''re spotted.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -528,7 +529,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wait_nushval':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big158.jpg"></center>'
-	'You only take a few steps from the door when it opens and turn like you were just heading to the room. He looks a little surprised to see you, but smiles. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, Anushka is in her room if you''re looking for her. I need to get going, got to get this part for my bike..." he explains as he walks past you. "See you around." With that, he walks towards the front door and leaves. You open Anushka''s door and walk in, deciding not to say anything about what you just saw.'
+	'You only take a few steps from the door when it opens and turn like you were just heading to the room. He looks a little surprised to see you but smiles. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, Anushka is in her room if you''re looking for her. I need to get going, got to get this part for my bike..." he explains as he walks past you. "See you around." With that, he walks towards the front door and leaves. You open Anushka''s door and walk in, deciding not to say anything about what you just saw.'
 	act 'Enter her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 end
 
@@ -574,7 +575,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'val3some':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/join/val/valnushs4.jpg"></center>'
-						'You roll over onto your hands and knees and join Anushka in sucking his dick. You take turns, passing it back and forth between you as you do, before Anushka stops and pushes you slightly to the side. She crawls on top of him and straddles him reverse cowgirl style.'
+						'You roll over onto your hands and knees and join Anushka in sucking his dick. You take turns, passing it back and forth between you as you do before Anushka stops and pushes you slightly to the side. She crawls on top of him and straddles him reverse cowgirl style.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'group', 'lesbian'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Watch Anushka ride him':
@@ -596,7 +597,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'val3some':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/join/val/valnushs7.jpg"></center>'
-									'A few minutes pass before he lifts Anushka up and sits up, cauing his dick to slide out of your pussy. You start to get up to switch to whatever new position they want to get in, but he gently pushes you back down. He slides up between your legs, slides his cock back in your pussy and starts fucking you again, a little harder and rougher than before. Anushka lies down on her side next to you and starts playing with your tits snd you reach up and return the favor, squeezing her tits and gently pinching her nipples. As Valentin fucks you, he reaches over and slides his hand between Anushka''s legs, finger banging her as he fucks you.'
+									'A few minutes pass before he lifts Anushka up and sits up, causing his dick to slide out of your pussy. You start to get up to switch to whatever new position they want you to get in, but he gently pushes you back down. He slides up between your legs, slides his cock back in your pussy and starts fucking you again, a little harder and rougher than before. Anushka lies down on her side next to you and starts playing with your tits and you reach up and return the favor, squeezing her tits and gently pinching her nipples. As Valentin fucks you, he reaches over and slides his hand between Anushka''s legs, finger banging her as he fucks you.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'group', 'lesbian'
 									gs 'stat'
 									act 'Pussy eating':
@@ -623,9 +624,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'val3some':
 												*nl
 												'"Yeah, that''s it. Pretend like you''re fucking her ass Nush!" he says.'
 												'Anushka grabs your hips a little harder. "Oh yeah, fucking take that bitch! You dirty little slut. You love getting fucked in the ass don''t you?"'
-												'You play along and nod. "Yeah, fuck my ass!" She seems to be as amused as you are about this. As you play along at getting fucked by Anushka, Valentin grabs a bottle of lube out of the night stand, squirts some lube on his dick and moves up behind Anushka.'
+												'You play along and nod. "Yeah, fuck my ass!" She seems to be as amused as you are about this. As you play along at getting fucked by Anushka, Valentin grabs a bottle of lube out of the nightstand, squirts some lube on his dick and moves up behind Anushka.'
 												*nl
-												'She stops moving, then moans out in pleasure and pain. "Oh fuck! Yes, god yes!" You feel her being banged against you and glance back to see Valentin fucking her from behind, each thrust forcing her hips to bounce against your ass. Several minutes of this go by. "Yes yes, fuck my ass Val! Harder!" she cries out before you feel her wetness from her orgasm dripping onto your ass cheeks as she cums. "Okay, your ass is next <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+												'She stops moving, then moans out in pleasure and pain. "Oh fuck! Yes, god yes!" You feel her being banged against you and glance back to see Valentin fucking her from behind, each thrust forcing her hips to bounce against your ass. Several minutes of this go by. "Yes yes, fuck my ass Val! Harder!" she cries out before you feel the juices from her orgasm dripping onto your ass cheeks as she cums. "Okay, your ass is next <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 												gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'group', 'lesbian'
 												gs 'stat'
 												act 'No anal':
@@ -633,7 +634,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'val3some':
 													gs 'stat'
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/join/val/valnushs10.jpg"></center>'
 													'You shake your head as you support Anushka''s weight as she recovers from her orgasm. "I don''t want to do anal."'
-													'He shrugs at you and then looks at Anushka. "Your ass ready for round two then babe?" She bites you shoulder blade and looks back at him.'
+													'He shrugs at you and then looks at Anushka. "Your ass ready for round two then babe?" She bites your shoulder blade and looks back at him.'
 													*nl
 													'You can feel her hips bouncing against your ass as she bounces and wiggles her ass at him. "Yeah, I want you to fuck my ass. Fuck my ass like I''m a dirty little slut!" she purrs.'
 													'He just grins. "Your wish is my command." He moves back up behind her and slams his dick back up her ass, causing her to cry out a little. He starts really hammering her ass this time and she seems to be loving it. She grips you tightly, occasionally nipping and biting at the back of your neck as she moans loudly in pleasure. It doesn''t take long until she has another huge orgasm. "Fuck, I''m about to cum!" he cries out.'
@@ -657,7 +658,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'val3some':
 															'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/anushka/8.jpg"></center>'
 															'After a few minutes, Valentin gets up. "I need to get going girls." He starts getting dressed, but as you also get up, Anushka pulls you in close. You follow her gaze just in time to see her holding her phone up and taking a selfie of both of you with your tits covered in cum.'
 															*nl
-															'She then grabs some tissues and hands you some before she starts wiping the cum off her tits. As the two of you clean up, he finishes getting dressed. You and Anushka then start to get dressed as well and once he finishes, he leans over and gives Anushka a kiss on the forehead. "See you around babe. This was a blast, we should do again sometime." he says it and points at both of you. He then heads out the door, leaving Anushka to roll her eyes at his comment as the two of you finish getting dressed.'
+															'She then grabs some tissues and hands you some before she starts wiping the cum off her tits. As the two of you clean up, he finishes getting dressed. You and Anushka then start to get dressed as well and once he finishes, he leans over and gives Anushka a kiss on the forehead. "See you around babe. This was a blast, we should do it again sometime." he says and points at both of you. He then heads out the door, leaving Anushka to roll her eyes at his comment as the two of you finish getting dressed.'
 															act 'Hang out in her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 															act 'Say nothing and join her on the bed': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 															act 'Talk about what just happened': gt 'anushkaev2' , 'talkaboutval'
@@ -696,7 +697,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'val3some':
 															'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/anushka/8.jpg"></center>'
 															'After a few minutes, Valentin gets up. "I need to get going girls." He starts getting dressed, but as you also get up, Anushka pulls you in close. You follow her gaze just in time to see her holding her phone up and taking a selfie of both of you with your tits covered in cum.'
 															*nl
-															'Anushka grabs some tissues and hands you some before she starts wiping the cum off her tits. As the two of you clean up, he finishes getting dressed. You and Anushka start to get dressed as well and once he finishes, he leans over and gives Anushka a kiss on the forehead. "See you around babe. This was a blast, we should do again sometime." he says and points at both of you. He then he heads out the door, leaving Anushka to roll her eyes at his comment as the two of you finish getting dressed.'
+															'Anushka grabs some tissues and hands you some before she starts wiping the cum off her tits. As the two of you clean up, he finishes getting dressed. You and Anushka start to get dressed as well and once he finishes, he leans over and gives Anushka a kiss on the forehead. "See you around babe. This was a blast, we should do it again sometime." he says and points at both of you. He then heads out the door, leaving Anushka to roll her eyes at his comment as the two of you finish getting dressed.'
 															act 'Hang out in her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 															act 'Say nothing and join her on the bed': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 															act 'Talk about what just happened':gt 'anushkaev2' , 'talkaboutval'
@@ -764,7 +765,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talkaboutval':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/anushka/8.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Can I see it? The selfie that is."'
-				'"Sure, if you want." She reaches over and grabs her phone, takes a moment to pull up the image and then shows it to you. You take a moment to look at it. You have to admit it is kind of hot and it turns you on a little just looking at it. She then interupts your thoughts. "I can send it to you, if you want a copy of it."'
+				'"Sure, if you want." She reaches over and grabs her phone, takes a moment to pull up the image and then shows it to you. You take a moment to look at it. You have to admit it is kind of hot and it turns you on a little just looking at it. She then interrupts your thoughts. "I can send it to you if you want a copy of it."'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -791,7 +792,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watch_nushmar':
 	menu_off = 1
 	AnushkaLoc = 2
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/spymar1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You push the door open just a little to get a better look. You can tell that it''s Marcus from school, his dick already rock hard. She takes the head of his cock into her mouth and starts sucking on it, slowly working her lips further and further down his shaft. He starts really moaning and grabs her by the hair and starts to fuck her mouth. He''s not too rough, but he takes control of the action.'
+	'You push the door open just a little to get a better look. You can tell that it''s Marcus from school, his dick already rock-hard. She takes the head of his cock into her mouth and starts sucking on it, slowly working her lips further and further down his shaft. He starts really moaning and grabs her by the hair and starts to fuck her mouth. He''s not too rough, but he takes control of the action.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Leave apartment': gt 'pav_complex','start'
@@ -821,11 +822,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watch_nushmar':
 					'"What are you doing?" You nearly jump out of your skin and blush when you look back and see Maksim, cursing to yourself for being so foolish as to let yourself be caught spying.'
 					'You feel your stomach really drop when you see the phone in his hand. He was recording you. "Uh... I ... Nothing..." you sheepishly reply.'
 					*nl
-					'"Well this recording says otherwise. Maybe I should show Anushka and Marcus what you were doing?" You reach for the phone, but he pulls it away and pushes a button. "There. I just uploaded to the cloud. Maybe we can work something out?" His smug grin is huge.'
+					'"Well this recording says otherwise. Maybe I should show Anushka and Marcus what you were doing?" You reach for the phone, but he pulls it away and pushes a button. "There. I just uploaded it to the cloud. Maybe we can work something out?" His smug grin is huge.'
 					'You sigh in defeat. "What do you want?"'
 					'He grins even wider and looks even more smug. "Whatever I want."'
 					*nl
-					'You start to shake your head, but before you can tell him to get lost, he interrupts you. "Just little stuff, like showing me your tits when I want, buying me a girly mag, stuff like that." You''re about to tell him fuck off, but stop. You''re sure Anushka wouldn''t care, but Marcus... What if he told everyone in school? On the other hand, do you want Maksim to lord this over you for who knows how long?'
+					'You start to shake your head, but before you can tell him to get lost, he interrupts you. "Just small favors, like showing me your tits when I want, buying me a girly mag, stuff like that." You''re about to tell him fuck off, but stop. You''re sure Anushka wouldn''t care, but Marcus... What if he told everyone in school? On the other hand, do you want Maksim to lord this over you for who knows how long?'
 					act 'Agree': gt 'anushkamaksim','maksim_blackmail'
 					gs 'willpower', 'action', 'resist', 'medium'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -862,7 +863,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watch_nushmar':
 							*clr & cla
 							nushmarcus_selfie = 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/spymar6.jpg"></center>'
-							'She slides off the bed and onto her knees in front of him. She tilts her head back and opens her mouth while taking a firm grip of his dick and jerking him off. It doesn''t take long before he groans loudly and his cum starts raining down on her face. Some of it ends up on her face, but most of it manages to make it into her mouth. She gives his cock several more hard long strokes, milking out every last drop of cum from him and letting it fall onto her tongue. She doesn''t stop until he is dry and wiggles her tongue around, showing the cum on it before swallowing it down, followed by her licking her lips clean. "God, I love Russian girls. You''re just so amazing."'
+							'She slides off the bed and onto her knees in front of him. She tilts her head back and opens her mouth while taking a firm grip on his dick and jerking him off. It doesn''t take long before he groans loudly and his cum starts raining down on her face. Some of it ends up on her face, but most of it manages to make it into her mouth. She gives his cock several more hard long strokes, milking out every last drop of cum from him and letting it fall onto her tongue. She doesn''t stop until he is dry and wiggles her tongue around, showing the cum on it before swallowing it down, followed by her licking her lips clean. "God, I love Russian girls. You''re just so amazing."'
 							*nl
 							'He bends over and gives her a kiss on the lips, then they both get up. He starts getting dressed while she pulls out her phone and takes a couple of naked selfies with his cum on her face. Once he is dressed and she is done taking selfies, she pats him on the chest with her hand. "That was amazing Marcus, I really needed that." Just the way she said it makes it clear she is done and is ready for him to leave. He seems to have picked up on the tone as well. "Oh yeah, anytime. Well, I guess I better get going... See you at school yeah?" She nods and grabs her panties off the floor and starts to put them on. "Yeah sure, see you at school." You can hear the dismissive nature in her tone, even if she doesn''t say it. He seems to notice it too and he turns towards the door. You quickly step away from the door before you get seen, softly closing it.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
@@ -888,9 +889,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wait_nushmar':
 	'"Um yeah, we did... I need to go... See you at school <<$pcs_nickname>>..." He quickly hurries past you and out of the apartment. You open Anushka''s door and walk in to see that she is only half dressed with some of his cum still on her face.'
 	*nl
 	'She glances over at you as you walk in and smiles. "Hey you."'
-	'You smile back at her and her casual response. "Hey you back. So... you and Marcus, huh?"'
+	'You smile back at her and her casual response. "Hey, you back. So... you and Marcus, huh?"'
 	'She arches her brow as she finishes getting dressed. "Me and Marcus what?"'
-	'You point to your side of your face, indicating the splatter of cum still on her face. It takes her a moment to realize before she looks in the mirror and cleans the rest of it off. "Oh... Shut up." she says, but you can tell by her tone that she''s more amused than bothered by it.'
+	'You point to your cheek, indicating the splatter of cum still on her face. It takes her a moment to realize before she looks in the mirror and cleans the rest of it off. "Oh... Shut up." she says, but you can tell by her tone that she''s more amused than bothered by it.'
 	act 'Hang out in her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 	act 'Say nothing and join her on the bed': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
 	act 'Talk about what just happened': gt 'anushkaev2', 'talk_about_marcus'
@@ -905,7 +906,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mar3some':
 	if hotcat >= 6:
 		if npc_sex['A144'] = 0:npc_sex['A144'] = 1 & girl += 1
 		if npc_sex['A146'] = 0:npc_sex['A146'] = 1 & boy += 1
-		'You walk in, confident in joining them, and close the door. You manage to walk all the way over to the bed before Anunshka finally notices you and gives you a slight wave as she keeps sucking Marcus'' dick. Perhaps hearing you or noticing her wave, Marcus turns his head and notices you, quickly stepping away and using his hands to cover himself up. As he does, he backs into the bed and ends up falling onto it. He gives you and Anushka a very confused and awkward look. "I... Uh... I mean..." he stammers, not sure what to say.'
+		'You walk in, confident in joining them, and close the door. You manage to walk all the way over to the bed before Anushka finally notices you and gives you a slight wave as she keeps sucking Marcus'' dick. Perhaps hearing you or noticing her wave, Marcus turns his head and notices you, quickly stepping away and using his hands to cover himself up. As he does, he backs into the bed and ends up falling onto it. He gives you and Anushka a very confused and awkward look. "I... Uh... I mean..." he stammers, not sure what to say.'
 		'Anushka laughs at his reaction before turning towards you and calmly asking "So what''s up <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 		*nl
 		'You smile in return. "It looked like you guys were having fun and I thought I could join in as well..."'
@@ -995,7 +996,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'eat_nush_fucked':
 				act 'Kiss Anushka':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/join/mar/marnushs10.jpg"></center>'
-					'You occasionally share a kiss with Anshuka, although she is barely focused on you as she gets off on Marcus fucking her ass. "Yes! Yes, fuck me harder! Harder!" She slips back into Russian as she starts to get overwhelmed with passion. Marcus abides her request and starts fucking her a little harder and slapping her ass with one of his hands. Moments later, she cries out and her whole body shudders as she orgasms hard. She collapses and Marcus pulls out of her, close to climaxing as well. "Come over and open your mouth <<$pcs_nickname>>." he moans as Anushka rolls over onto her back.'
+					'You occasionally share a kiss with Anshuka, although she is barely focused on you as she gets off on Marcus fucking her ass. "Yes! Yes, fuck me harder! Harder!" She slips back into Russian as she starts to get overwhelmed with passion. Marcus abides by her request and starts fucking her a little harder and slapping her ass with one of his hands. Moments later, she cries out and her whole body shudders as she orgasms hard. She collapses and Marcus pulls out of her, close to climaxing as well. "Come over and open your mouth <<$pcs_nickname>>." he moans as Anushka rolls over onto her back.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'group', 'lesbian'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Climax':
@@ -1041,10 +1042,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk_about_marcus':
 	'She laughs. "Because it''s taboo. You know how people are. He''s black <i>and</i> American. Either would be enough for people to think it''s wrong, but him being both just makes it doubly taboo and fucking hot. Not to mention he has a <i>huge</i> fucking dick."'
 	*nl
 	'You nod in agreement. "So it''s just because he has a big black dick?"'
-	'She shrugs, then rolls onto her back. "Yeah, pretty much. I mean just thinking about getting ploughed by his big black dick is making me horny again." she says with a laugh, but you can tell she really is starting to get aroused again.'
+	'She shrugs, then rolls onto her back. "Yeah, pretty much. I mean just thinking about getting plowed by his big black dick is making me horny again." she says with a laugh, but you can tell she really is starting to get aroused again.'
 	'You laugh. "Okay, okay I get it. Big black dicks make you horny."'
 	*nl
-	'She shakes her head slightly. "It''s not just that, or I should say only that. It''s about everyone saying it''s wrong. It''s the same reason I like fucking other chicks, or getting naked. Breaking the rules and rubbing it in their narrow minded faces is a huge turn on. I mean fuck what society thinks or wants us to think or how to act. The more people tell me good girls shouldn''t do this or that, the more I want to fucking do it. I say break all the fucking rules and live free."'
+	'She shakes her head slightly. "It''s not just that, or I should say only that. It''s about everyone saying it''s wrong. It''s the same reason I like fucking other chicks or getting naked. Breaking the rules and rubbing it in their narrow-minded faces is a huge turn-on. I mean fuck what society thinks or wants us to think or how to act. The more people tell me good girls shouldn''t do this or that, the more I want to fucking do it. I say break all the fucking rules and live free."'
 	'You can only nod at that. You know Anushka is a bit of an anarchist at heart, so it''s not a surprise that breaking social norms turns her on.'
 	act 'Hang out in her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 	act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'bed'
@@ -1063,8 +1064,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk_about_marcus':
 			if nushmarcus_selfie = 1:
 				'You''re curious about the selfie she took. "Why did you take that selfie, you know... with his cum on your face?"'
 				'She cocks her head slightly and smiles. "How do you know I did that?"'
-				'"When he opened the door to leave, I seen you with your phone in your hand taking a selfie."'
-				'She gives you a slightly suspecious look and you''re not sure if she believes you or not, but but she seemingly doesn''t care either way. "I often take selifes during or after sex as keep sakes. Why?"'
+				'"When he opened the door to leave, I''ve seen you with your phone in your hand taking a selfie."'
+				'She gives you a slightly suspicious look and you''re not sure if she believes you or not, but she seemingly doesn''t care either way. "I often take selfies during or after sex as keepsakes. Why?"'
 				'You shake your head slightly. "I was just curious is all."'
 			else
 				'"What are you going to do with that?" you ask, wondering why she took a selfie of you when you had cum splattered over your face.'
@@ -1083,7 +1084,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk_about_marcus':
 				gs 'stat'
 				if nushmarcus_selfie = 1:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/nushmarselfie.jpg"></center>'
-					'You bite your lower lip, curious what the selfie she took looks like. "Can I see it? The selfie you took I mean."'
+					'You bite your lower lip, curious about what the selfie she took looks like. "Can I see it? The selfie you took I mean."'
 					'She grins. "You''re such a pervert," she says in a teasing tone, but grabs her phone and pulls up the image before handing the phone over. You take it and look at the image of Anushka covered in cum with Marcus'' dick in front of her face. After a minute or so, you hand her her phone back.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1099,7 +1100,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk_about_marcus':
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/anushka/9.jpg"></center>'
 					'"Can I see it? The selfie that is."'
-					'"Sure, if you want." She reaches over and grabs her phone, takes a moment to pull up the image and then shows it to you. You take a moment to look at it. You have to admit it is kind of hot and it turns you on a little just looking at it. She then interupts your thoughts. "I can send it to you, if you want a copy of it."'
+					'"Sure, if you want." She reaches over and grabs her phone, takes a moment to pull up the image and then shows it to you. You take a moment to look at it. You have to admit it is kind of hot and it turns you on a little just looking at it. She then interrupts your thoughts. "I can send it to you if you want a copy of it."'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -1159,13 +1160,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'disco_restroom':
 			act 'Get fingered':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/disco_restroom4.jpg"></center>'
-				'She slides a hand between your thighs and starts rubbing your clit, making you moan softly. As soon as your pussy is wet enough, she slides two fingers inside you and starts finger banging you. "Oh you like this don''t you, you dirty little slut?!"'
+				'She slides a hand between your thighs and starts rubbing your clit, making you moan softly. As soon as your pussy is wet enough, she slides two fingers inside you and starts finger-banging you. "Oh you like this don''t you, you dirty little slut?!"'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 2, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Into the stall':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/disco_restroom5.jpg"></center>'
-					'She suddenly grabs you by the hair and drags you into the stall on the end of the row. Once inside, she strips away some of her clothes and the rest of yours before leaning against the wall and spreading her legs. She drags you over by your hair and pulls your face between her legs. You start to lick her pussy, which is already wet. After a few minutes of this, she pulls your face away from her. "Where''s your strap-on?" she asks and you point to your purse.'
+					'She suddenly grabs you by the hair and drags you into the stall at the end of the row. Once inside, she strips away some of her clothes and the rest of yours before leaning against the wall and spreading her legs. She drags you over by your hair and pulls your face between her legs. You start to lick her pussy, which is already wet. After a few minutes of this, she pulls your face away from her. "Where''s your strap-on?" she asks and you point to your purse.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 2, 'lesbian'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Wait':
@@ -1190,7 +1191,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'disco_restroom':
 									*clr & cla
 									minut += 10
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/disco_restroom9.jpg"></center>'
-									'You shake your head. "Not tonight, tonight I want to ride you." You pull away from her and feel the dildo slide out of you. You turn around and manhandle her to sit on the toilet before you straddle her and slowly impale yourself onto the didlo again. You ride her like this until your legs start to get tired and she lifts you off her and unbuckles the harness, letting it fall to the ground before leaning against the wall and spreading her legs. "Finish me off."'
+									'You shake your head. "Not tonight, tonight I want to ride you." You pull away from her and feel the dildo slide out of you. You turn around and manhandle her to sit on the toilet before you straddle her and slowly impale yourself onto the dildo again. You ride her like this until your legs start to get tired and she lifts you off her and unbuckles the harness, letting it fall to the ground before leaning against the wall and spreading her legs. "Finish me off."'
 									gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 5, 'lesbian'
 									gs 'stat'
 									act 'Eat her out again':
@@ -1266,8 +1267,171 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'disco_emptyroom':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
+	
+	if spellKnown['penisenvy'] = 1:
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/misc/strapon_under_dress.jpg"></center>'
+		'You find an unlocked door and tell her to go inside. "Head in, I''ll join you in a minute." You quickly walk to the women''s restroom, enter one of the stalls and slide the strap-on harness on under your skirt so the dildo hangs between your legs. The strap-on in place, you head back to the room where you left Anushka.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 1, 'lesbian'
+		gs 'stat'
+		if penisEnvyVariable = 0:
+			act 'Cast Penis Envy spell':
+				*clr & cla
+				gs 'castSpell', 'penisenvy'
+				if spellSuccess > 0:
+					act 'Show her your magic strapon': gt 'anushkaev2', 'disco_emptyroom_show_strapon_magic'
+				else
+					act 'Show her the strapon as is': gt 'anushkaev2', 'disco_emptyroom_show_strapon'
+				end
+			end
+		else
+			act 'Show her your magic strapon': gt 'anushkaev2', 'disco_emptyroom_show_strapon_magic'
+		end
+	else
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked1.jpg"></center>'
+		'You find an unlocked door and tell her to go inside. "Head in, I''ll join you in a minute." You quickly walk to the women''s restroom, enter one of the stalls and slide the strap-on harness on under your skirt so the dildo hangs between your legs. The strap-on in place, you head back to the room where you left Anushka. When you enter, you look around, unsure what the purpose of the room is before locking the door. Anushka is standing in a corner smoking a joint as you walk over and lean against the wall. She looks you over with a hungry lust-filled look in her eye and offers you a hit of the joint.'
+		act 'Take a hit':
+			cla
+			minut += 15
+			gs 'drugs', 'joint', 1
+			*nl
+			'You take the offered joint from her and take a hit of it before handing it back. You spend several minutes passing the joint back and forth until it''s gone. Feeling nice and high, it''s time to show her what you''re already wearing.'
+			act 'Show her the strapon': gt 'anushkaev2', 'disco_emptyroom_show_strapon'
+		end
+		act 'Show her the strapon instead': gt 'anushkaev2', 'disco_emptyroom_show_strapon'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'disco_emptyroom_show_strapon':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	gs 'stat'
+	if strapnumber >= 5:
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
+		'You grab the straps that loosely hold the harness in place and pull them tight. The dildo rises up like you''re getting a hard-on, lifting your skirt as it does. Pulling your skirt up, you expose it to her to see her reaction. At first, she looks turned on, but when you reveal the full size of it, she starts shaking her head. "No way, that thing wouldn''t fit in my ass. I thought you had... you know, a human-sized dildo, not some horse cock." You try to talk her into it, but she flat out refuses to let you stick something that big up her ass.' 
+		'After a few minutes, she tells you she''s going back to the disco, leaving you alone with your horse cock dildo.'
+		act 'Go back to the disco': gt 'pav_disco'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'
+	else
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked2.jpg"></center>'
+		'You grab the straps that loosely hold the harness in place and pull them tight. The dildo rises up like you''re getting a hard-on, lifting your skirt as it does. Pulling your skirt up, you expose it to her to see her reaction. At first, she looks turned on, but when you reveal the full size of it, she starts kissing you. "Am I making you hard, baby?" she asks in an aroused tone as she reaches over and starts stroking your fake cock.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 1, 'lesbian'
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Make her suck your dick': gt 'anushkaev2', 'disco_emptyroom_suck_strapon'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'disco_emptyroom_suck_strapon':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	if npc_sex['A144'] = 0:npc_sex['A144'] = 1 & girl += 1
+	gs 'stat'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked4.jpg"></center>'
+	'"I want you to suck my dick like the dirty little slut you are." You tell her as you push her down until she''s squatting on the floor in front of your. You start rubbing the tip of the dildo against her lips until she opens her mouth. As soon as she opens her mouth you slide your fake dick into her mouth, she starts to sucking your cock while stroking it with one hand.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay_give', 2, 'lesbian', 'dom'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Watch her suck you off':
+		*clr & cla
+		minut += 10
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked3.jpg"></center>'
+		'She starts really getting into it, getting the dildo wet with her slobber as she bobs her head up and down on it while stroking it with one hand. The boys must love her blowjob skills. While it''s fun to watch, you''re getting bored, so you grab her and pull her back up before twirling her around with your hands. You push her forward until she''s bent over and slide your hands down her sides to her hips before reaching up under her skirt and pulling her panties midway down her thighs. As you say. "I am going to pound your pretty little tight ass, with my fat cock."'
+		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay_give', 2, 'lesbian', 'dom'
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Eat her out':
+			*clr & cla
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked5.jpg"></center>'
+			'You squat down behind her and start licking her already wet pussy. She moans loudly and presses herself back against your face as you start lapping at her asshole, getting it wet with her pussy juices and your slobber. After a few minutes, you stop licking her and stand up behind her. "Make sure to use plenty of lube."'
+			if mc_inventory['lubricant'] > 0:
+				'You open your purse, pull out the little bottle of lube you carry around and start lubing up your dildo until it''s nice and slick before adding some to her asshole.'
+			else
+				'"Sorry, but I don''t have any." you reply.'
+				'She shakes her head slightly. "There''s a bottle in my purse." You open her purse and pull out the little bottle of lube she apparently carries around and start lubing up your dildo until it''s nice and slick before adding some to her asshole.'
+			end
+			gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 2, 'lesbian'
+			gs 'arousal', 'rimming_give', 2, 'lesbian'
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Stick your cock in her ass':
+				*clr & cla
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked6.jpg"></center>'
+				'With your fake cock and her ass lubed up, you start rubbing the tip of it against her asshole. You push against her until the tip pops into her ass, causing her to gasp slightly and moan loudly. You start slowly letting her get used to it and she moans softly.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 2, 'lesbian', 'dom'
+				gs 'stat'
+				act 'Fuck her ass':
+					*clr & cla
+					gs 'boyStat', 'D<<strapnumber>>'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked7.jpg"></center>'
+					'When she seems ready, you grab her by the hips and shove the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo balls deep into her ass, causing her to moan even louder. You start fucking her ass in earnest and she seems to be loving every moment of it if her loud moans and body language is any indication. "Look at you being such a slut! My cock slides balls deep into you and all you do is moan like a whore!" you tell her, which causes her to glance back at you with an aroused smile. You can tell she''s loving what you''re doing.'
+					gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 2, 'lesbian', 'dom'
+					gs 'stat'
+					act 'Push her down on all fours':
+						*clr & cla
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked8.jpg"></center>'
+						'You push her panties the rest of the way down her legs and help her step out of them before pushing her down on all fours. You go down with her, keeping the dildo inside her the whole way. While kneeling on one knee, you smack her ass as you start fucking her a bit harder and pull nearly all the way out of her before shoving the shaft back inside her ass, taking long thrusts each time.'
+						gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 2, 'lesbian', 'dom'
+						gs 'stat'
+						act 'Pound her balls deep':
+							*clr & cla
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked9.jpg"></center>'
+							'She starts moaning louder and louder as you slam the fake cock into her balls deep, causing her to cry out in pleasure. "That''s right, cum for me you dirty little anal slut!" you tell her, which seems to do the trick as less than a minute later she starts shaking and cumming hard. You have to use your hands to keep her steady as you fuck her through her orgasm. Once it passes, she starts to get up, causing the dildo to slide out of her gaping ass.'
+							gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 2, 'lesbian', 'dom'
+							gs 'stat'
+							act 'Finish':
+								*clr & cla
+								minut += 10
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked12.jpg"></center>'
+								'Now that she has came, you''re about to stand up, but slip backward and land on your ass. You both giggle as she stands up to help pull you up. She cleans herself up while you clean up your dildo and put it away. By the time you finish, she has her clothes back in place and gives you a quick kiss. "I had a blast, but I''m going to go back to the disco now. See you later." With that, she leaves and heads back to the disco.'
+								'You could go back and see what might still be going on or just head home.'
+								gs 'arousal', 'end'
+								gs 'stat'
+								act 'Go back to the disco': gt 'pav_disco'
+								act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'
+							end
+							act 'Assert dominance':
+								*clr & cla
+								pcs_stam -= 5
+								anushkaQW['dom_nush'] += 1
+								gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked10.jpg"></center>'
+								'Before she can stand up, you grab her and pull her back down on one knee. She glances back at you with a puzzled stare, but you push her forward and bend her over. "I didn''t say I was done with you, slut!" you tell her as you roughly shove your fake cock back in her ass, causing her to gasp and moan. You hold onto her hips with one hand so she can''t pull away and start fucking her ass again.'
+								gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 3, 'lesbian', 'dom', 'rough'
+								gs 'stat'
+								act 'Pound her ass':
+									*clr & cla
+									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked11.jpg"></center>'
+									'She glances back at you and bites her lower lip. You can tell she''s starting to get a little sore, but you don''t care. You start hammering her ass as hard and fast as you can. "Tell me whose ass this is!"'
+									'"OH... It''s yours!" she cries out. Despite her attitude, you can tell she likes being dominated.'
+									'"That''s right! And I can fuck it whenever and for as long as I want! Isn''t that right, you dirty fucking slut?!" you tell her as you keep pounding her as hard and fast as you can. You can feel sweat running down your back as you grow tired.'
+									'"OH... Fuck!... Yes..." She seems to be caught in a mix of pleasure and pain and seems to be getting close again, so you pull out of her and shove it back in balls deep without warning. "Ow... Fuck!"'
+									'You pull out and stop, slapping her ass with your hand. "That''s right and I get to decide if you enjoy it or not."'
+									gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 3, 'lesbian', 'dom', 'rough'
+									gs 'stat'
+									act 'Finish':
+										*clr & cla
+										minut += 10
+										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked12.jpg"></center>'
+										'Now that you have established your dominance, you go to stand up, but slip backward and land on your ass. You both giggle as she stands up to help pull you up. She cleans herself up while you clean up your dildo and put it away. By the time you finish, she has her clothes back in place. "Fuck, my ass hurts now. Bitch!"'
+										'You laugh and give her a kiss. "We both know you loved it! You''re such an anal slut."'
+										'She laughs and shakes her head a little. "You''re a fucking bitch, you know that? But you''re my bitch," she says before giving you a long passionate kiss. "I''m going back to the disco now. See you later." With that, she leaves and heads back to the disco. You could go back and see what might still be going on or just head home.'
+										gs 'arousal', 'end'
+										gs 'stat'
+										act 'Go back to the disco': gt 'pav_disco'
+										act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'
+									end
+								end
+							end
+						end
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'disco_emptyroom_show_strapon_magic':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You find an unlocked door and tell her to go inside. "Head in, I''ll join you in a minute." You quickly walk to the womens restroom, enter one of the stalls and slide the strap-on harness on under your skirt so the dildo hangs between your legs. The strap-on in place, you head back to the room where you left Anushka. When you enter, you look around, unsure what the purpose of the room is before locking the door. Anushka is standing in a corner smoking a joint as you walk over and lean against the wall. She looks you over with a hungry lust filled look in her eye and offers you a hit of the joint.'
+	'When you enter, you look around, unsure what the purpose of the room is before locking the door. Anushka is standing in a corner smoking a joint as you walk over and lean against the wall. She looks you over with a hungry lust-filled look in her eye and offers you a hit of the joint.'
 	act 'Take a hit':
 		cla
 		minut += 15
@@ -1275,19 +1439,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'disco_emptyroom':
 		*nl
 		'You take the offered joint from her and take a hit of it before handing it back. You spend several minutes passing the joint back and forth until it''s gone. Feeling nice and high, it''s time to show her what you''re already wearing.'
 		act 'Show her the strapon':
-			*clr & cla
 			if strapnumber >= 5:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
-				'You grab the straps that loosely holds the harness in place and pull them tight. The dildo rises up like you''re getting a hard on, lifting your skirt as it does. Pulling your skirt up, you expose it to her to see her reaction. At first she looks turned on, but when you reveal the full size of it, she starts shaking her head. "No way, that thing wouldn''t fit in my ass. I thought you had... you know, a human sized didlo, not some horse cock." You try to talk her into it, but she flat out refuses to let you stick something that big up her ass.' 
+				'You grab the straps that loosely hold the harness in place and pull them tight. The dildo rises up like you''re getting a hard-on, lifting your skirt as it does. Pulling your skirt up, you expose it to her to see her reaction. At first, she looks turned on, but when you reveal the full size of it, she starts shaking her head. "No way, that thing wouldn''t fit in my ass. I thought you had... you know, a human-sized dildo, not some horse cock." You try to talk her into it, but she flat out refuses to let you stick something that big up her ass.' 
 				'After a few minutes, she tells you she''s going back to the disco, leaving you alone with your horse cock dildo.'
 				act 'Go back to the disco': gt 'pav_disco'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You grab the straps that loosely holds the harness in place and pull them tight. The dildo rises up like you''re getting a hard on, lifting your skirt as it does. Pulling your skirt up, you expose it to her to see her reaction. At first she looks turned on, but when you reveal the full size of it, she starts kissing you. "Am I making you hard, baby?" she asks in an aroused tone as she reaches over and starts stroking your fake cock.'
+				'You grab the straps that loosely hold the harness in place and pull them tight. The dildo rises up like you''re getting a hard-on, lifting your skirt as it does. Pulling your skirt up, you expose it to her to see her reaction. At first, she looks turned on, but when you reveal the full size of it, she starts kissing you. "Am I making you hard, baby?" she asks in an aroused tone as she reaches over and starts stroking your fake cock. When her fingers wrap around the dildo you can feel them wrapping around it is if it was your own dick. When her hand starts to stroke the shaft you moan softly, as you feel a tingling in your loins from the connection your magic made with it.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 1, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Make her suck your dick': gt 'anushkaev2', 'disco_emptyroom_suck_strapon'
+				act 'Make her suck your dick': gt 'anushkaev2', 'disco_emptyroom_suck_strapon_magic'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -1295,45 +1458,47 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'disco_emptyroom':
 		*clr & cla
 		if strapnumber >= 5:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
-			'You grab the straps that loosely holds the harness in place and pull them tight. The dildo rises up like you''re getting a hard on, lifting your skirt as it does. Pulling your skirt up, you expose it to her to see her reaction. At first she looks turned on, but when you reveal the full size of it, she starts shaking her head. "No way, that thing wouldn''t fit in my ass. I thought you had... you know, a human sized didlo, not some horse cock." You try to talk her into it, but she flat out refuses to let you stick something that big up her ass.' 
+			'You grab the straps that loosely hold the harness in place and pull them tight. The dildo rises up like you''re getting a hard-on, lifting your skirt as it does. Pulling your skirt up, you expose it to her to see her reaction. At first, she looks turned on, but when you reveal the full size of it, she starts shaking her head. "No way, that thing wouldn''t fit in my ass. I thought you had... you know, a human-sized dildo, not some horse cock." You try to talk her into it, but she flat out refuses to let you stick something that big up her ass.' 
 			'After a few minutes, she tells you she''s going back to the disco, leaving you alone with your horse cock dildo.'
 			act 'Go back to the disco': gt 'pav_disco'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You grab the straps that loosely holds the harness in place and pull them tight. The dildo rises up like you''re getting a hard on, lifting your skirt as it does. Pulling your skirt up, you expose it to her to see her reaction. At first she looks turned on, but when you reveal the full size of it, she starts kissing you. "Am I making you hard, baby?" she asks in an aroused tone as she reaches over and starts stroking your fake cock.'
+			'You grab the straps that loosely hold the harness in place and pull them tight. The dildo rises up like you''re getting a hard-on, lifting your skirt as it does. Pulling your skirt up, you expose it to her to see her reaction. At first, she looks turned on, but when you reveal the full size of it, she starts kissing you. "Am I making you hard, baby?" she asks in an aroused tone as she reaches over and starts stroking your fake cock. When her fingers wrap around the dildo you can feel them wrapping around it is if it was your own dick. When her hand starts to stroke the shaft you moan softly, as you feel a tingling in your loins from the connection your magic made with it.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 1, 'lesbian'
+			gs 'arousal', 'magicd_hj', 1, 'lesbian'
+			minut -= 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			act 'Make her suck your dick': gt 'anushkaev2', 'disco_emptyroom_suck_strapon'
+			act 'Make her suck your dick': gt 'anushkaev2', 'disco_emptyroom_suck_strapon_magic'
 		end
 	end
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] = 'disco_emptyroom_suck_strapon':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'disco_emptyroom_suck_strapon_magic':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	if npc_sex['A144'] = 0:npc_sex['A144'] = 1 & girl += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked4.jpg"></center>'
-	'You push her down until she''s squatting on the floor and rub the tip of the dildo against her lips. She opens her mouth and starts to suck on your fake cock while stroking it with one hand.'
-	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay_give', 2, 'lesbian'
+	'"I want you to suck my dick like the dirty little slut you are." You tell her as you push her down until she''s squatting on the floor in front of your.  You start rubbing the tip of the dick against her lips, until she opens her mouth. As soon as she opens her mouth you slide your magical cock into her warm wet mouth, she wraps her lips tightly around the shaft of your cock, as she starts to bop her head, sucking your cock while stroking it with one hand. It feels amazing, she really knows how to suck a dick and make it feel wonderful, you moan softly as she sucks your dick.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'magicd_bj', 2, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Watch her suck you off':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 10
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked3.jpg"></center>'
-		'She starts really getting into it, getting the dildo wet with her slobber as she bobs her head up and down on it while stroking it with one hand. The boys must love her blowjob skills. While it''s fun to watch, you''re getting bored, so you grab her and pull her back up before twirling her around with your hands. You push her forward until she''s bent over and slide your hands down her sides to her hips before reaching up under her skirt and pulling her panties midway down her thighs.'
-		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay_give', 2, 'lesbian'
+		'She starts really getting into it, getting your dick wet with her slobber as she bobs her head up and down on it while stroking it with one hand. With how amazing this feels, you know the boys must love her blowjob skills. As amazing as this feels, you desire more, you desperately want to fuck her, so you grab her and pull her back up before twirling her around with your hands. You push her forward until she''s bent over and slide your hands down her sides to her hips before reaching up under her skirt and pulling her panties midway down her thighs. As you say. "I am going to pound your pretty little tight ass, with my fat cock."'
+		gs 'arousal', 'magicd_bj', 2, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Eat her out':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked5.jpg"></center>'
 			'You squat down behind her and start licking her already wet pussy. She moans loudly and presses herself back against your face as you start lapping at her asshole, getting it wet with her pussy juices and your slobber. After a few minutes, you stop licking her and stand up behind her. "Make sure to use plenty of lube."'
 			if mc_inventory['lubricant'] > 0:
-				'You open your purse, pull out the little bottle of lube you carry around and start lubing up your dildo until it''s nice and slick before adding some to her asshole.'
+				'You open your purse, pull out the little bottle of lube you carry around and start lubing up your magical dick until it''s nice and slick before adding some to her asshole.'
 			else
 				'"Sorry, but I don''t have any." you reply.'
-				'She shakes her head slightly. "There''s a bottle in my purse." You open her purse and pull out the little bottle of lube she apparently carries around and start lubing up your dildo until it''s nice and slick before adding some to her asshole.'
+				'She shakes her head slightly. "There''s a bottle in my purse." You open her purse and pull out the little bottle of lube she apparently carries around and start lubing up your magical dick until it''s nice and slick before adding some to her asshole.'
 			end
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 2, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'arousal', 'rimming_give', 2, 'lesbian'
@@ -1341,69 +1506,200 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'disco_emptyroom_suck_strapon':
 			act 'Stick your cock in her ass':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked6.jpg"></center>'
-				'With your fake cock and her ass lubed up, you start rubbing the tip of it against her asshole. You push against her until the tip pops into her ass, causing her to gasp slightly and moan loudly. You start slowly letting her get used to it and she moans softly.'
-				gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 2, 'lesbian'
+				'With your cock and her ass lubed up, you start rubbing the tip of it against her asshole. You push against her until the tip pops into her ass, causing her to gasp slightly and moan loudly. You start slowly letting her get used to it and she moans softly, you moan softly as well. Her asshole is gripped tightly around the shaft of your cock and it feels amazing.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'magicd_anal', 2, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Fuck her ass':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'boyStat', 'D<<strapnumber>>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked7.jpg"></center>'
-					'When she seems ready, you grab her by the hips and shove the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo balls deep into her ass, causing her to moan even louder. You start fucking her ass in earnest and she seems to be loving every moment of it if her loud moans and body language is any indication. "Look at you being such a slut! My cock slides balls deep into you and all you do is moan like a whore!" you tell her, which causes her to glance back at you with an aroused smile. You can tell she''s loving what you''re doing.'
-					gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 2, 'lesbian'
+					'When she seems ready, you grab her by the hips and shove the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> magic dick balls deep into her ass, causing her to moan even louder, you feel your magic balls slap against her wet pussy. You start fucking her ass in earnest and she seems to be loving every moment of it, if her loud moans and body language is any indication. "Look at you being such a slut! My cock slides balls deep into you and all you do is moan like a whore!" you tell her, which causes her to glance back at you with an aroused smile. You can tell she''s loving what you''re doing. The sensation of taking long full strokes into her tight asshole with your dick is such a amazing feeling, topped off, by feeling those balls smack against her wet pussy, when you bury your cock balls deep in her ass.'
+					gs 'arousal', 'magicd_anal', 2, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Push her down on all fours':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked8.jpg"></center>'
-						'You push her panties the rest of the way down her legs and help her step out of them before pushing her down on all fours. You go down with her, keeping the dildo inside her the whole way. While kneeling on one knee, you smack her ass as you start fucking her a bit harder and pull nearly all the way out of her before shoving the shaft back inside her ass, taking long thrusts each time.'
-						gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 2, 'lesbian'
+						'You push her panties the rest of the way down her legs and help her step out of them before pushing her down on all fours. You go down with her, keeping your dick inside her ass the whole way. While kneeling on one knee, you smack her ass as you start fucking her a bit harder and pull nearly all the way out of her before shoving the shaft back inside her ass, taking long thrusts each time. You feel her tight little asshole milking the shaft of your cock each time you pull out and then you feel your balls smack against her wet pussy each time you thrust balls deep back inside of her butt. No wonder boys like fucking girls up the butt, this feels amazing, you idly think as you fuck her ass.'
+						gs 'arousal', 'magicd_anal', 2, 'lesbian', 'dom', 'rough'
 						gs 'stat'
-						act 'Go balls deep':
+						act 'Pound her balls deep':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked9.jpg"></center>'
-							'She starts moaning louder and louder as you slam the fake cock into her balls deep, causing her to cry out in pleasure. "That''s right, cum for me you dirty little anal slut!" you tell her, which seems to do the trick as less than a minute latter she starts shaking and cumming hard. You have to use your hands to keep her steady as you fuck her through her orgasm. Once it passes, she starts to get up, causing the dildo to slide out of her gaping ass.'
-							gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 2, 'lesbian'
+							'She starts moaning louder and louder as you slam your cock into her balls deep, causing her to cry out in pleasure. "That''s right, cum for me you dirty little anal slut!" you tell her, which seems to do the trick as less than a minute later she starts shaking and cumming hard. You have to use your hands to keep her steady as you fuck her through her orgasm. Once it passes, she starts to get up, causing your dick to slide out of her gaping asshole, but you havn''t cum yet and you already miss the tightness of her asshole around your cock. You could grab her, shove it back in, and fuck her until you cum.'
+							gs 'arousal', 'magicd_anal', 2, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 							gs 'stat'
-							act 'Finish':
+							act 'Stop her and jerk off':
 								*clr & cla
-								minut += 10
-								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked12.jpg"></center>'
-								'Now that she has came, you''re about to stand up, but slip backwards and land on your ass. You both giggle as she stands up to help pull you up. She cleans herself up while you clean up your dildo and put it away. By the time you finish, she has her clothes back in place and gives you a quick kiss. "I had a blast, but I''m going to go back to the disco now. See you later." With that, she leaves and heads back to the disco.'
-								'You could go back and see what might still be going or just head home.'
-								gs 'arousal', 'end'
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/magic/penis_envy/jerking_off.jpg"></center>'
+								'"Wait!" You tell her urgently. She pauses half way up as you start to furiously jerk off. She gives you a questioning look, obviously finding it weird you are jerking off a dildo. "I''m about to cum!" You try and explain which makes her even more confused but so far she is still on her knees watching you, obviously curious as well as confused by your actions. You feel your balls start to tighten, you can tell you are about to cum, now you just have to decide where you will cum.'
+								gs 'arousal', 'magicd_hj', 1, 'masturbate'
 								gs 'stat'
-								act 'Go back to the disco': gt 'pav_disco'
-								act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'
+								act 'Cum on her tits':
+									*clr & cla
+									minut += 10
+									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/magic/penis_envy/tits_cum1.jpg"></center>'
+									$orgasm_or = 'yes'
+									$orgasm_txt = 'You quickly grab her shirt and pull it off, exposing her perky little breasts. Moments later you feel the sudden release and you can feel the cum spraying out of your dick. You moan loudly as the spurts of cum splatter Anushka''s breasts covering them. "What the fuck!" She responds obviously confused.'
+									'Once you finish you look down at your handy work and explain. "It is one of those dildo''s with fake cum and a vibrator, I can trigger the cum to spurt out when I cum from the vibrator."'
+									*nl
+									'She looks a little confused up at you and then at her cum splattered breasts. "Oh..." She obviously has never heard of such a thing but due to the power of the magic making people rationalize away magic, she takes it at face value. She pulls some tissues out of her purse and starts cleaning herself up, while you clean up your dick, dismissing the spell, then taking the strapon harness off, you put away the now unmagical strapon back away in your purse. By the time you finish, she has her clothes back in place and gives you a quick kiss. "I had a blast, but I''m going to go back to the disco now. See you later." With that, she leaves and heads back to the disco.'
+									'You could go back and see what might still be going on or just head home.'
+									gs 'arousal', 'end'
+									gs 'stat'
+									act 'Go back to the disco': gt 'pav_disco'
+									act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'
+								end
+								act 'Cum on her face':
+									*clr & cla
+									minut += 10
+									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/magic/penis_envy/facial_girl1.jpg"></center>'
+									$orgasm_or = 'yes'
+									$orgasm_txt = 'You point your dick right at her face as you continue to stroke it. Moments later you feel the sudden release and you can feel the cum spraying out of your dick. You moan loudly as the spurts of cum splatter Anushka''s face covering it. "What the fuck!" She responds obviously confused.'
+									'Once you finish you look down at your handy work and explain. "It is one of those dildo''s with fake cum and a vibrator, I can trigger the cum to spurt out when I cum from the vibrator."'
+									*nl
+									'She looks a little confused up at you and then at her cum splattered breasts. "Oh..." She obviously has never heard of such a thing but due to the power of the magic making people rationalize away magic, she takes it at face value. She pulls some tissues out of her purse and starts cleaning herself up, while you clean up your dick, dismissing the spell, then taking the strapon harness off, you put away the now unmagical strapon back away in your purse. By the time you finish, she has her clothes back in place and gives you a quick kiss. "I had a blast, but I''m going to go back to the disco now. See you later." With that, she leaves and heads back to the disco.'
+									'You could go back and see what might still be going on or just head home.'
+									gs 'arousal', 'end'
+									gs 'stat'
+									act 'Go back to the disco': gt 'pav_disco'
+									act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'
+								end
+								act 'Cum in her mouth':
+									*clr & cla
+									minut += 10
+									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/magic/penis_envy/mouthful_girl1.jpg"></center>'
+									$orgasm_or = 'yes'
+									$orgasm_txt = 'You point your dick right at her face as you continue to stroke it. "Open your mouth and stick out your tongue." You tell her, still looking perplexed she does as you ask, opening her mouth and sticking out her tongue.'
+									'Moments later you feel the sudden release and you can feel the cum spraying out of your dick. You moan loudly as the spurts of cum shoot into Anushka''s mouth. The magic fuels your balls and you cum, shooting spurt after spurt into her mouth, coating her tongue and filling her mouth, until your cum is leaking out of her mouth and down her chin.'
+									*nl
+									'You look down and see her tongue is completely covered in your cum and her mouth is completely full. "Don''t just kneel there with a mouthful of my cum, swallow bitch!" You tell her.'
+									'She does as you command and swallow your cum, she makes a bit of a face and looks even more confused now. "What was that? It even tasted like real cum, only a little sweeter."'
+									'You look down at her and explain. "It is one of those dildo''s with fake cum and a vibrator, I can trigger the cum to spurt out when I cum from the vibrator."'
+									*nl
+									'She looks a little confused up at you. "Oh... and the taste? What is it?"'
+									'"Oh that, it is a little bit of yogurt and some other stuff. There are recipes online for it and this one works well and tastes pretty accurate." You explain, knowing this is true if she later looks it up.'
+									'She grins. "Wow ok, that was pretty fucking wild, I didn''t know you could buy a dildo that did that or make fake cum taste near like the real thing. That was amazingly close to the real deal." She seems to have completely bought it. The magic making people rationalize away when they encounter magic helps of course.'
+									*nl
+									'She pulls some tissues out of her purse and starts cleaning herself up, while you clean up your dick, dismissing the spell, then taking the strapon harness off, you put away the now unmagical strapon back away in your purse. By the time you finish, she has her clothes back in place and gives you a quick kiss. "I had a blast, but I''m going to go back to the disco now. See you later." With that, she leaves and heads back to the disco.'
+									'You could go back and see what might still be going on or just head home.'
+									gs 'arousal', 'end'
+									gs 'stat'
+									act 'Go back to the disco': gt 'pav_disco'
+									act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'
+								end
 							end
-							act 'Assert dominance':
+							act 'Fuck her until you cum':
 								*clr & cla
 								pcs_stam -= 5
 								gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked10.jpg"></center>'
-								'Before she can stand up, you grab her and pull her back down on one knee. She glances back at you with a puzzled stare, but you push her forward and bend her over. "I didn''t say I was done with you, slut!" you tell her as you roughly shove your fake cock back in her ass, causing her to gasp and moan. You hold onto her hips with one hand so she can''t pull away and start fucking her ass again.'
-								gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 3, 'lesbian'
+								'Before she can stand up, you grab her and pull her back down on one knee. She glances back at you with a puzzled stare, but you push her forward and bend her over. "I didn''t say I was done with you, slut!" you tell her as you roughly shove your cock back in her ass, causing her to gasp and moan. You hold onto her hips with one hand so she can''t pull away and start fucking her ass again, hard long deep strokes, until your balls slap against her wet slit. "Fuck yeah, I could pound your tight little ass all night."'
+								gs 'arousal', 'magicd_anal', 3, 'lesbian', 'dom', 'rough'
 								gs 'stat'
 								act 'Pound her ass':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked11.jpg"></center>'
-									'She glances back at you and bites her lower lip. You can tell she''s starting to get a little sore, but you don''t care. You start hammering her ass as hard and fast as you can. "Tell me whose ass this is!"'
+									'She glances back at you and bites her lower lip. You can tell she''s starting to get a little sore, but you don''t care, because you can feel you are starting to get close and this sensation is simple amazing. You start hammering her ass as hard and fast as you can. "Tell me whose ass this is!"'
 									'"OH... It''s yours!" she cries out. Despite her attitude, you can tell she likes being dominated.'
 									'"That''s right! And I can fuck it whenever and for as long as I want! Isn''t that right, you dirty fucking slut?!" you tell her as you keep pounding her as hard and fast as you can. You can feel sweat running down your back as you grow tired.'
+									*nl
 									'"OH... Fuck!... Yes..." She seems to be caught in a mix of pleasure and pain and seems to be getting close again, so you pull out of her and shove it back in with balls deep without warning. "Ow... Fuck!"'
-									'You pull out and stop, slapping her ass with your hand. "That''s right and I get to decide if you enjoy it or not."'
-									gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 3, 'lesbian'
+									'You slap her ass with your hand as you go back to fucking her butt. "That''s right and I get to decide if you enjoy it or not." You are on the edge, as her tight little asshole milks your cock with each stroke. You can tell you are about to cum any moment, you could just fill her ass with your cum, or pull out and cum on her somewhere.'
+									gs 'arousal', 'magicd_anal', 3, 'lesbian', 'dom', 'rough'
 									gs 'stat'
-									act 'Finish':
+									act 'Cum in her ass':
 										*clr & cla
 										minut += 10
-										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/disco/nush_getfucked12.jpg"></center>'
-										'Now that you have established your dominance, you go to stand up, but slip backwards and land on your ass. You both giggle as she stands up to help pull you up. She cleans herself up while you clean up your dildo and put it away. By the time you finish, she has her clothes back in place. "Fuck, my ass hurts now. Bitch!"'
+										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/magic/penis_envy/creampie_anal_girl1.jpg"></center>'
+										$orgasm_or = 'yes'
+										$orgasm_txt = 'You shove your cock balls deep into her ass, just as you feel the release from your balls, you pump her butt full of your cum. Once you finish cumming you pull your dick out of her ass, as you step back you see, your cum, come pouring out of her gapping butthole.'
+										'She looks back at you confused, obviously able to feel the cum leaking out of her gaping asshole. "What the fuck is that?" She asks very confused.'
+										'"It is one of those dildo''s with fake cum and a vibrator, I can trigger the cum to spurt out when I cum from the vibrator." You explain to her.'
+										*nl
+										'She looks a little confused up at you, as she reaches back to wipe some of the cum off her butt with her fingers to look at it. "Oh..." She obviously has never heard of such a thing but due to the power of the magic making people rationalize away magic, she takes it at face value. She pulls some tissues out of her purse and starts cleaning herself up, while you clean up your dick, dismissing the spell, then taking the strapon harness off, you put away the now unmagical strapon back away in your purse. By the time you finish, she has her clothes back in place and gives you a quick kiss. "Fuck, my ass hurts now. Bitch!"'
+										*nl
 										'You laugh and give her a kiss. "We both know you loved it! You''re such an anal slut."'
-										'She laughs and shakes her head a little. "You''re a fucking bitch, you know that? But you''re my bitch," she says before giving you a long passionate kiss. "I''m going back to the disco now. See you later." With that, she leaves and heads back to the disco. You could go back and see what might still be going or just head home.'
+										'She laughs and shakes her head a little. "You''re a fucking bitch, you know that? But you''re my bitch," she says before giving you a long passionate kiss. "I''m going back to the disco now. See you later." With that, she leaves and heads back to the disco. You could go back and see what might still be going on or just head home.'
 										gs 'arousal', 'end'
 										gs 'stat'
 										act 'Go back to the disco': gt 'pav_disco'
 										act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'
 									end
+									act 'Pull out and cum on her':
+										*clr & cla
+										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/magic/penis_envy/jerking_off.jpg"></center>'
+										'You pull your cock out of her tight little butthole. "Don''t move, I''m about to cum!" She doesn''t move other than to look back over her shoulder at you, obviously curious as well as confused by your actions. You feel your balls start to tighten, you can tell you are about to cum, now you just have to decide where you will cum, her butt cheeks make for an inviting target, or you could get her on her knee''s.'
+										gs 'arousal', 'magicd_hj', 1, 'masturbate'
+										gs 'stat'
+										act 'Cum on her butt cheeks':
+											*clr & cla
+											minut += 10
+											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/magic/penis_envy/butt_cum_girl1.jpg"></center>'
+											$orgasm_or = 'yes'
+											$orgasm_txt = 'You just start jerking off, pointing your dick at her pert little butt cheeks. Moments later you feel the sudden release and you can feel the cum spraying out of your dick. You moan loudly as the spurts of cum splatter Anushka''s butt cheeks covering them. "What the fuck!" She responds obviously confused.'
+											'Once you finish you look down at your handy work and explain. "It is one of those dildo''s with fake cum and a vibrator, I can trigger the cum to spurt out when I cum from the vibrator."'
+											*nl
+											'She looks a little confused up at you, as she reaches back to wipe some of the cum off her butt with her fingers to look at it. "Oh..." She obviously has never heard of such a thing but due to the power of the magic making people rationalize away magic, she takes it at face value. She pulls some tissues out of her purse and starts cleaning herself up, while you clean up your dick, dismissing the spell, then taking the strapon harness off, you put away the now unmagical strapon back away in your purse. By the time you finish, she has her clothes back in place and gives you a quick kiss. "I had a blast, but I''m going to go back to the disco now. See you later." With that, she leaves and heads back to the disco.'
+											'You could go back and see what might still be going on or just head home.'
+											gs 'arousal', 'end'
+											gs 'stat'
+											act 'Go back to the disco': gt 'pav_disco'
+											act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'
+										end
+										act 'Cum on her tits':
+											*clr & cla
+											minut += 10
+											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/magic/penis_envy/tits_cum1.jpg"></center>'
+											$orgasm_or = 'yes'
+											$orgasm_txt = 'You quickly grab her shirt and pull it off, exposing her perky little breasts. Moments later you feel the sudden release and you can feel the cum spraying out of your dick. You moan loudly as the spurts of cum splatter Anushka''s breasts covering them. "What the fuck!" She responds obviously confused.'
+											'Once you finish you look down at your handy work and explain. "It is one of those dildo''s with fake cum and a vibrator, I can trigger the cum to spurt out when I cum from the vibrator."'
+											*nl
+											'She looks a little confused up at you and then at her cum splattered breasts. "Oh..." She obviously has never heard of such a thing but due to the power of the magic making people rationalize away magic, she takes it at face value. She pulls some tissues out of her purse and starts cleaning herself up, while you clean up your dick, dismissing the spell, then taking the strapon harness off, you put away the now unmagical strapon back away in your purse. By the time you finish, she has her clothes back in place and gives you a quick kiss. "I had a blast, but I''m going to go back to the disco now. See you later." With that, she leaves and heads back to the disco.'
+											'You could go back and see what might still be going on or just head home.'
+											gs 'arousal', 'end'
+											gs 'stat'
+											act 'Go back to the disco': gt 'pav_disco'
+											act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'
+										end
+										act 'Cum on her face':
+											*clr & cla
+											minut += 10
+											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/magic/penis_envy/facial_girl1.jpg"></center>'
+											$orgasm_or = 'yes'
+											$orgasm_txt = 'You point your dick right at her face as you continue to stroke it. Moments later you feel the sudden release and you can feel the cum spraying out of your dick. You moan loudly as the spurts of cum splatter Anushka''s face covering it. "What the fuck!" She responds obviously confused.'
+											'Once you finish you look down at your handy work and explain. "It is one of those dildo''s with fake cum and a vibrator, I can trigger the cum to spurt out when I cum from the vibrator."'
+											*nl
+											'She looks a little confused up at you and then at her cum splattered breasts. "Oh..." She obviously has never heard of such a thing but due to the power of the magic making people rationalize away magic, she takes it at face value. She pulls some tissues out of her purse and starts cleaning herself up, while you clean up your dick, dismissing the spell, then taking the strapon harness off, you put away the now unmagical strapon back away in your purse. By the time you finish, she has her clothes back in place and gives you a quick kiss. "I had a blast, but I''m going to go back to the disco now. See you later." With that, she leaves and heads back to the disco.'
+											'You could go back and see what might still be going on or just head home.'
+											gs 'arousal', 'end'
+											gs 'stat'
+											act 'Go back to the disco': gt 'pav_disco'
+											act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'
+										end
+										act 'Cum in her mouth':
+											*clr & cla
+											minut += 10
+											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/magic/penis_envy/mouthful_girl1.jpg"></center>'
+											$orgasm_or = 'yes'
+											$orgasm_txt = 'You point your dick right at her face as you continue to stroke it. "Open your mouth and stick out your tongue." You tell her, still looking perplexed she does as you ask, opening her mouth and sticking out her tongue.'
+											'Moments later you feel the sudden release and you can feel the cum spraying out of your dick. You moan loudly as the spurts of cum shoot into Anushka''s mouth. The magic fuels your balls and you cum, shooting spurt after spurt into her mouth, coating her tongue and filling her mouth, until your cum is leaking out of her mouth and down her chin.'
+											*nl
+											'You look down and see her tongue is completely covered in your cum and her mouth is completely full. "Don''t just kneel there with a mouthful of my cum, swallow bitch!" You tell her.'
+											'She does as you command and swallow your cum, she makes a bit of a face and looks even more confused now. "What was that? It even tasted like real cum, only a little sweeter."'
+											'You look down at her and explain. "It is one of those dildo''s with fake cum and a vibrator, I can trigger the cum to spurt out when I cum from the vibrator."'
+											*nl
+											'She looks a little confused up at you. "Oh... and the taste? What is it?"'
+											'"Oh that, it is a little bit of yogurt and some other stuff. There are recipes online for it and this one works well and tastes pretty accurate." You explain, knowing this is true, if she later looks it up.'
+											'She grins. "Wow ok, that was pretty fucking wild, I didn''t know you could buy a dildo that did that or make fake cum taste near like the real thing. That was amazingly close to the real deal." She seems to have completely bought it. The magic making people rationalize away when they encounter magic helps of course.'
+											*nl
+											'She pulls some tissues out of her purse and starts cleaning herself up, while you clean up your dick, dismissing the spell, then taking the strapon harness off, you put away the now unmagical strapon back away in your purse. By the time you finish, she has her clothes back in place and gives you a quick kiss. "I had a blast, but I''m going to go back to the disco now. See you later." With that, she leaves and heads back to the disco.'
+											'You could go back and see what might still be going on or just head home.'
+											gs 'arousal', 'end'
+											gs 'stat'
+											act 'Go back to the disco': gt 'pav_disco'
+											act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'
+										end
+									end
 								end
 							end
 						end

locations/anushkamaksim.qsrc

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 # anushkamaksim
-!2021/03/26
+!2024/04/03
 if $ARGS[0] = 'maksim_blackmail':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maksim_blackmail':
 	'He grins at you and looks you over as if he''s giving it some serious thought. "For now, just show me your tits."'
 	act 'Show him your tits':
 		*clr & cla
-		maksim_blackmail = 1
+		maksimQW['blackmail'] = 1
 		gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 		inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/hallflashtits.jpg"></center>'
@@ -20,18 +20,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maksim_blackmail':
 		gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 5, 'humiliation', 'sub'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
-
 		act 'Follow him':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/maksim/downstairs.jpg"></center>'
 			'You follow him as he leads you down the stairs and outside to the playground. Once there, he walks over to a few boys around his age and stops. The boys check you out. "Who''s that?" one of them asks.'
-			'He has his back to your as he responds. You can only imagine the smug look on his face. "She does things for me."'
+			'He has his back to you as he responds. You can only imagine the smug look on his face. "She does things for me."'
 			'One of the boys snorts a laugh. "Sure she does."'
 			'He turns towards you. "Go buy me a pack of smokes."'
 			'"What?!"'
-			'"I said go buy me a pack of cigarettes." He gives you a stern look, but it just shows how young he is and isn''t not intimidating at all.'
-			'You sigh. This is only going to get worse. You''ll have to figure a way out of this, but for now you can only play along. You turn and start walking to the nearby kiosk.'
+			'"I said go buy me a pack of cigarettes." He gives you a stern look, but it just shows how young he is and is not intimidating at all.'
+			'You sigh. This is only going to get worse. You''ll have to figure a way out of this, but for now, you can only play along. You turn and start walking to the nearby kiosk.'
 			'As you walk away, you hear the boys talking, surprised that you''re doing what Maksim says as he acts smug.'
 			if money >= 150:
 				act 'Buy him cigarettes':
@@ -49,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maksim_blackmail':
 						'They all start muttering, seemingly surprised you actually did it.'
 						*nl
 						'Maksim takes the pack of cigarettes and passes them out to his friends. They all light up and a few of them cough, but it seems most of them have smoked before. After a few minutes, you''re about to leave when one of them starts talking to Maksim. "Having her buy you cigarettes is one thing..." You see the rest all nodding in agreement.'
-						'Maksim smirks at them. "Oh I see how it is. You have no faith in me! Okay then, let me prove it." He turns towards you. "Show me your tits."'
+						'Maksim smirks at them. "Oh, I see how it is. You have no faith in me! Okay then, let me prove it." He turns towards you. "Show me your tits."'
 						'You give him a look of surprise and don''t move, but his stern glare tells you what will happen if you don''t.'
 
 						act 'Flash them your tits':
@@ -66,7 +65,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maksim_blackmail':
 							'"I''m still breaking her in and it will be when I say." He gives his friends a look to show that he''s in charge here. "Now pay up!"'
 							'The boys start handing over money, way more than the cigarettes would cost. He must have bet them that you would show your breasts. You sigh again and can''t believe you''re more or less being pimped out by a young boy. They all stare at your breasts for a few more minutes before Maksim looks at you. "Okay, you can go. We''ll talk later." He tries to make it sound like he''s in charge and sexy at the same time. He failed, but his friends seem to have bought it.' 
 							'You can''t help but roll your eyes as you rearrange your clothes back in place and walk away.'
-							act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+							act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -87,7 +86,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maksim_blackmail':
 						'They all start muttering, seemingly surprised you actually did it.'
 						*nl
 						'Maksim takes the pack of cigarettes and passes them out to his friends. They all light up and a few of them cough, but it seems most of them have smoked before. After a few minutes, you''re about to leave when one of them starts talking to Maksim. "Having her buy you cigarettes is one thing..." You see the rest all nodding in agreement.'
-						'Maksim smirks at them. "Oh I see how it is. You have no faith in me! Okay then, let me prove it." He turns towards you. "Show me your tits."'
+						'Maksim smirks at them. "Oh, I see how it is. You have no faith in me! Okay then, let me prove it." He turns towards you. "Show me your tits."'
 						'You give him a look of surprise and don''t move, but his stern glare tells you what will happen if you don''t.'
 
 						act 'Flash them your tits':
@@ -104,7 +103,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maksim_blackmail':
 							'"I''m still breaking her in and it will be when I say." He gives his friends a look to show that he''s in charge here. "Now pay up!"'
 							'The boys start handing over money, way more than the cigarettes would cost. He must have bet them that you would show your breasts. You sigh again and can''t believe you''re more or less being pimped out by a young boy. They all stare at your breasts for a few more minutes before Maksim looks at you. "Okay, you can go. We''ll talk later." He tries to make it sound like he''s in charge and sexy at the same time. He failed, but his friends seem to have bought it.' 
 							'You can''t help but roll your eyes as you rearrange your clothes back in place and walk away.'
-							act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+							act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -121,16 +120,72 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maksim_blackmail':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Fuck off, you little shit!" you snarl and he blinks in surprise, eliciting a smirk from you. He obviously expected you to agree without question.'
 			'Anger washes over him. "Fine bitch! I''ll just go and show her!"'
-			'You smirk at him. "Go right head, I''m sure your sister won''t mind that you were trying to blackmail one of her friends. Who do you think she''ll be more pissed at?"'
+			'You smirk at him. "Go right ahead, I''m sure your sister won''t mind that you were trying to blackmail one of her friends. Who do you think she''ll be more pissed at?"'
 			'He sneers at you and pauses before angrily walking away.'
 
-			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 		end
 	else
 		act 'Tell him to fuck off (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 	end
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'hallway_flash_tits':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	AnushkaLoc = 2
+	maksimQW['blackmail_flash'] += 1
+	gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
+	inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/hallflashtits.jpg"></center>'
+	'You sigh as you pull your clothes aside and show him your bare breasts. His grin widens as he stares at you. A few moments pass and you''re about to say something when he reaches out with his hand.' 
+	'You quickly pull your shirt back down. "You said show you."'
+	'"Fine," he sneers before stepping out of your way. "Go on then."'
+	gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 1, 'humiliation', 'sub'
+	gs 'arousal', 'end'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'hallway_flash_pussy':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	AnushkaLoc = 2
+	maksimQW['blackmail_flash'] += 1
+	gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
+	inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
+	if PCLoSkirt > 0:
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim_blackmail/flash_pussy_dress.jpg"></center>'
+		'You sigh as you lift your skirt to show him your naked pussy. His grin widens as he stares at you. A few moments pass and you''re about to say something when he reaches out with his hand.' 
+		'You quickly pull your skirt back down. "You said show you."'
+		'"Fine," he sneers before stepping out of your way. "Go on then."'
+	else
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim_blackmail/flash_pussy_pants.jpg"></center>'
+		'You sigh as you pull your pants down to show off your naked pussy to him. His grin widens as he stares at you. A few moments pass and you''re about to say something when he reaches out with his hand.' 
+		'You quickly pull your pants back up. "You said show you."'
+		'"Fine," he sneers before stepping out of your way. "Go on then."'
+	end
+	gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 1, 'humiliation', 'sub'
+	gs 'arousal', 'end'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
+end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'maksim_room_naked':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	AnushkaLoc = 2
+	maksimQW['blackmail_flash'] += 1
+	gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
+	inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim_blackmail/strip_naked.jpg"></center>'
+	'You follow him to his room and just as he said Timofey is not there. Maksim sits on his bed looking at you with a huge grin. "Well go on, strip. Slow and sexy."' 
+	'You sigh loudly but then do as he says. You slowly start stripping out of your clothes, while he leers at you. Once you are finally naked, you stand there for a minute or two. "Ok you seen enough."'
+	'"Fine," he sneers. "You can go then." You quickly get dressed and once you are you leave his room.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'flash', 5, 'humiliation', 'sub'
+	gs 'arousal', 'end'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Go back to the hall': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
+end
 
 --- anushkamaksim ---------------------------------

locations/artem_date_events_uni.qsrc

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'firstdate':
 	npc_rel['A2'] += 1
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/park/walk_<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You enjoy a pleasant walk in the around the quad while making small talk with Artem.'
+	'You enjoy a pleasant walk around the quad while making small talk with Artem.'
 	'After a while, you end up near the small movie theater on campus. Artem''s eyes light up when he sees it. "Hey, let''s go see a movie!"'
 	minut += 15
 	gs 'stat'

locations/artem_dorm.qsrc

@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/dorm/artemroom/artem_dorm_room.jpg"></center>'
 	'The dorm room has two beds. The one on the left belongs to Artem''s roommate while the one on the right is Artem''s.' 
 	if $locat['A2'] = 'dormroom_ studying_or _relaxing':
-		'Above his bed is a small <a href="exec:gt ''artem_dorm'',''bookshelf''">bookshelf</a> full of books, and the wall is plastered with sci-fi, fantasy, anime and super hero posters. At the foot of his bed is a small desk with a <a href="exec:gt ''artem_dorm'',''computer''">laptop</a> on it. Artem is sitting on a couch facing a tv against the wall.'
+		'Above his bed is a small <a href="exec:gt ''artem_dorm'',''bookshelf''">bookshelf</a> full of books, and the wall is plastered with sci-fi, fantasy, anime and super hero posters. At the foot of his bed is a small desk with a <a href="exec:gt ''artem_dorm'',''computer''">laptop</a> on it. Artem is sitting on a couch facing a TV sitting against the wall.'
 	elseif $locat['A2'] = 'dormroom_asleep':
 		'Artem is getting ready to go to sleep, so you better leave.'
 	else
@@ -74,7 +74,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bookshelf':
 		act 'Ask to borrow a book':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 2
-			gs 'stat'
 			artemQW['artfall'] += 1
 			artem_borrowed_book = 1
 			artembook = 5
@@ -97,11 +96,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bookshelf':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artem_dorm/artemroom/bookshelf.jpg"></center>'
 			'"I brought your book back," you tell him as you take it out of your purse and put it back in place on the shelf, right where you got it from.'
-			'"Did you like it?"'
+			'"Did you like it?" he asks.'
 			act 'I did':
 				cla
 				'"Yeah, it was good."'
-				'Artem''s face lights and he joins you at the bookshelf. "Yeah, I really liked that one too."'
+				'His face lights up and he joins you at the bookshelf. "Yeah, I really liked that one too."'
 				act 'Look at more books': gt 'artem_dorm','bookshelf'
 				act 'Find something else to look at':gt 'artem_dorm', 'start'
 			end
@@ -109,9 +108,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bookshelf':
 				cla
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'dislike'
 				if pcs_intel <= 40:
-					'"It was a bit complicated for me," you admit, embarrassed.'
+					'"It was a bit complicated for me," you admit, feeling a little embarrassed.'
 				else
-					'"It was a bit too bland for me. In the end, it just bored me. I could guess the outcome right at the start, and it turned out I was right."'
+					'"It was a bit bland and just bored me in the end. I could guess the outcome right at the start, and it turned out I was right."'
 				end
 				'Artem looks crushed at your answer.'				
 				act 'Look at more books': gt 'artem_dorm','bookshelf'
@@ -138,9 +137,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		act 'Go online': gt 'Komp', 'start'
 		act 'Find something else to look at':gt 'artem_dorm', 'start'
 	else
-		'You look at the computer, then at Artem. Artem meets your gaze... and breaks into a smile. "Go ahead and use it if you want. I don''t mind."'
+		'You look at the computer, then at Artem. He meets your gaze and breaks into a smile. "Go ahead and use it if you want. I don''t mind."'
 		act 'Go online': gt 'Komp', 'start'
-		act 'Find something else to look at':gt 'artem_dorm', 'start'
+		act 'Find something else to look at': gt 'artem_dorm', 'start'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -170,7 +169,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Artem''s Dorm Room</font></h4></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/hugging.jpg"></center>'
-				'As you sit beside him, you look at him for maybe a bit too long because he turns to look at you. You lean over to give him a kiss and he returns it fully.'
+				'As you sit beside him, you perhaps look at him a little too long because he turns to look at you. You lean over to give him a kiss and he returns it fully.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Stop kissing and talk': gt 'artem_dorm', 'chat'
@@ -178,7 +177,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Artem''s Dorm Room</font></h4></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/makeout.jpg"></center>'
-					'He pulls you in close and you''re soon passionately making out, the kisses full of eager lust and urgent need. You feel yourself getting more aroused as he scoots back until his back is against the wall and he pulls you onto his lap. You can feel the hard bulge in his pants as you straddle him.'
+					'He pulls you in close and you''re soon passionately making out, the kisses full of eager lust and urgent need. You feel yourself getting more aroused as he scoots back against the wall and pulls you onto his lap. You can feel the hard bulge in his pants as you straddle him.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Stop making out': 
@@ -213,7 +212,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-								'You pull your hand away and climb off him. "No, I can''t... not yet. I want to wait still."'
+								'You pull your hand away and climb off him. "No, I can''t... Not yet. I still want to wait."'
 								'He looks visibly disappointed, but nods and smiles. "Sure, I understand. I don''t want to pressure you, so whenever you''re ready is fine."'
 								act 'Talk to him': gt 'artem_dorm', 'chat'
 							end
@@ -241,7 +240,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 									gs 'arousal', 'end'
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-									'You pull your hand away and climb off him. "No, I can''t... not yet. I want to wait still."'
+									'You pull your hand away and climb off him. "No, I can''t... Not yet. I still want to wait."'
 									'He looks visibly disappointed, but nods and smiles. "Sure, I understand. I don''t want to pressure you, so whenever you''re ready is fine."'
 									act 'Talk to him': gt 'artem_dorm', 'chat'
 								end
@@ -259,7 +258,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		*clr & cla
 		artemQW['dateask'] = daystart
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Artem smiles at you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, do you want to go for a walk in the quad?"'
+		'Artem smiles at you. "Do you want to go for a walk on the quad?"'
 		act 'Stay here': 
 			*clr & cla
 			artemQW['artfall'] -= 4
@@ -275,7 +274,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'love'
 			artemQW['date'] += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You give him a cute smile. "Sure, we could go for a walk. That sounds like fun!"'
+			'You give him a cute smile. "Sure. That sounds like fun!"'
 			'You quickly pack up your things and leave the dorm room with him, heading for the quad.'
 			act 'Walk in the quad': gt 'artem_date_events_uni','firstdate'
 		end
@@ -283,7 +282,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		*clr & cla
 		artemQW['dateask'] = daystart
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Artem smiles at you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, would you like to go out on a date?"'
+		'Artem smiles at you. "Would you like to go out on a date?"'
 		act 'Stay here': 
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'dislike'
@@ -298,7 +297,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'love'
 			artemQW['date'] += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You give him a cute smile. "Sure, we can go out on a date. That sounds like fun!"'
+			'You give him a cute smile. "Sure. That sounds like fun!"'
 			'You quickly pack up your things and leave his dorm room with him.'
 			act 'Go on a date': gt 'artem_date_events_uni','artem_date'
 		end
@@ -306,7 +305,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		*clr & cla
 		artemQW['dateask'] = daystart
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/talk.jpg"></center>'
-		'Artem has an embarrassed look on his face when he says:'
+		'Artem has an embarrassed look on his face.'
 		if artemQW['stripsee'] = 0:
 			'"You know... I''ve never seen a girl naked before. Only in pictures... Maybe you could..."'
 		else
@@ -318,14 +317,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		artemQW['dateask'] = daystart
 		menu_off = 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/flowers.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you sit down to talk, Artem suddenly produces a bouquet of flowers and offers it to you. "I got these for you, I hope you like them."'
+		'As you sit down to talk, Artem suddenly produces a bouquet of flowers and offers it to you. "I got these for you. I hope you like them."'
 		act 'Accept the flowers':
 			*clr & cla
 			$giftedflowers = 'Artem'
 			artemQW['date'] += 1
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'adore'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/makeout.jpg"></center>'
-			'You smile at him and mutter, "Awww, they''re beautiful! You shouldn''t have!"'
+			'You smile at him. "Awww, they''re beautiful! You shouldn''t have!"'
 			'He blushes. "Not as beautiful as you..."'
 			'He leans in and kisses you before you can pull away and gently begins to caress your <<$titsize>> breasts through your clothes.'
 			minut += 2
@@ -338,7 +337,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 					'You push his hands away. "Wait... You''re going too fast, please stop!"'
-					'Artem does as you ask and pulls his hands back as he apologizes.'
+					'He does as you ask and pulls his hands back as he apologizes.'
 					act 'Just talk': gt 'artem_dorm', 'chat'
 				end
 			else
@@ -347,7 +346,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			act 'Enjoy his touch':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/makeout.jpg"></center>'
-				'You return his kiss as his hands keep awkwardly groping at your breasts. He sits with his back against the wall and pulls you on top of him. You can feel the hard bulge in his pants as you keep making out. After a few seconds, he takes one of your hands and pulls it down to his crotch.'
+				'You return his kiss as his hands keep awkwardly groping at your breasts before he sits with his back against the wall and pulls you on top of him. You can feel the hard bulge in his pants as you keep making out. After a few seconds, he takes one of your hands and pulls it down to his crotch.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Give him a handjob': gt 'artem_sex_uni', 'hj'
@@ -378,14 +377,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/flowerstrash.jpg"></center>'
 			'You look at Artem compassionately, but don''t take the flowers. "Thank you... They''re very nice, but we''re just friends... I don''t want to give you the wrong idea by accepting them, you know?"'
 			'Artem sighs, and disappointedly throws the flowers into the trash.'
-			'After a couple of minutes of awkwardness as you try and talk to him but it is obvious he no longer feels like talking to you, you finally make your goodbyes and get up and leave his dorm room.'
+			'There''s a few minutes of awkwardness as you try and talk to him, but it''s obvious he no longer feels like talking to you, so you get up and leave his dorm room.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
 		end
 	elseif artemQW['date'] >= 6 and artemQW['date'] <= 8 and artemQW['dateask'] ! daystart:
 		*clr & cla
 		artemQW['dateask'] = daystart
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Artem smiles at you as he walks over and hugs you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, would you like to go out on another date?"'
+		'Artem smiles at you as he walks over and hugs you. "Would you like to go out on another date?"'
 		act 'Stay here': 
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'dislike'
@@ -400,7 +399,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'love'
 			artemQW['date'] += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You give him a cute smile. "Sure, we can go out on a date. That sounds like fun!"'
+			'You give him a cute smile. "Sure. That sounds like fun!"'
 			'You quickly pack up your things and leave his dorm room with him.'
 			act 'Go on a date': gt 'artem_date_events_uni','artem_date'
 		end
@@ -417,7 +416,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		'Artem reassures you. "Relax, <<$pcs_nickname>>. My roommate will be out all night. So please... Let''s just sit down and chat?"'
 		'You relax a little and nod at him. "Okay... I have to admit, that does sound nice."'
 		'You spend the next half hour talking about your plans for the future. The bottle of wine is empty before you know it, and you feel a bit tipsy.'
-		'After you''ve drank most of the wine and talked for a while, Artem is silent for a few seconds before he asks "<<$pcs_nickname>>, will you be my girlfriend?"'
+		'After you''ve drank most of the wine and talked for a while, Artem is silent for a few seconds before he takes a deep breath. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, will you be my girlfriend?" he quickly asks.'
 		minut += 30
 		if pcs_hydra >= 100:
 			pcs_hydra -= 5
@@ -426,20 +425,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		end
 		gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'wine', 2
 		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Tell him no':
+		act 'No':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', -25
 			artemQW['artembrokenheart'] = 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/artemcry.jpg"></center>'
-			'You shake your head. "I''m sorry if you got the wrong impression Artem. I like you, I really do, but I don''t want to be your girlfriend."'
+			'You shake your head. "I''m sorry if you got the wrong impression, Artem. I like you, I really do, but I don''t want to be your girlfriend."'
 			'He looks so heartbroken that he might cry. "Is there someone else?"'
-			'You sigh slightly. "It''s not that. I just don''t want to be anyone''s girlfriend right now. Can''t we just keep doing what we are? Be friends and go out on dates?"'
+			'You sigh. "It''s not that. I just don''t want to be anyone''s girlfriend right now. Can''t we just keep doing what we''re doing? Be friends and go out on dates?"'
 			*nl
-			'Tears star rolling down his cheeks as he stands up. "I get it, you want to just date anyone. Well I can''t do that! I thought we had something special, but I guess I was wrong. Please leave now and never come back!" You know there''s nothing you can say and trying to explain will only make things worse, so you get up and head for the door.'
+			'Tears start rolling down his cheeks as he stands up. "I get it. You want to just date anyone. Well I can''t do that! I thought we had something special, but I guess I was wrong. Please leave and never come back!" You know there''s nothing you can say and trying to explain will only make things worse, so you get up and head for the door.'
 			'"I''ll see you later, okay?" you say, but he turns away from you. Once you close the door, you can hear him crying. Not sure what else to do, you just leave.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
 		end
-		act 'Tell him yes':
+		act 'Yes':
 			*clr & cla
 			artemQW['bf'] = 1
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'adore'
@@ -560,12 +559,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/talk.jpg"></center>'
 				'You''re unsure how to bring this up. "I was hanging out with Nush the other day, and well, we started talking about you."'
-				'Artem looks at you questioningly. "Oh? Why did you guys talk about me?"'
-				'You smile as you look at him. "Because you''re my boyfriend, silly."'
-				'Artem looks a bit sheepish. "Oh... Uh... So what did you guys talk about?"'
+				'He looks at you questioningly. "Oh? Why?"'
+				'You smile as you look at him. "Because you''re my boyfriend, silly!"'
+				'He looks a little sheepish. "Oh... Uh... So what did you guys talk about?"'
 				*nl
-				'You can tell he''s curious, and a little anxious. "Lots of stuff, but eventually we started talking about sex and ... anyway, we talked about it and wondered if you might be interested in a threesome?"'
-				'Artem looks a bit nervous. "Uh... Are you sure?"'
+				'"Lots of stuff, but eventually we started talking about sex and ... Anyway, we talked about it and wondered if you might be interested in a threesome?"'
+				'He looks almost shocked. "Uh... Are you sure?"'
 				*nl
 				'You give him a slightly surprised look. "You don''t want to? I thought all guys wanted to have sex with two girls at the same time?"'
 				'He nervously laughs. "Well yeah, but she has such a reputation..." You can tell there''s more to it by how he''s acting.'
@@ -575,10 +574,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/talk2.jpg"></center>'
-					'He sighs. "I''m afraid. Afraid of what she''ll think or say. She''s... really experienced. What if she thinks I''m no good?"'
+					'He sighs. "I''m afraid. Afraid of what she''ll think or say. She''s... Really experienced. What if she thinks I''m no good?"'
 					'You lean over and give him a kiss. "She''s not like that. She might give you some advice, but she''s not the type to lay back and judge others. Instead, she''s more likely to encourage you to do what she likes."'
 					*nl
-					'He starts to nod. "Okay yeah, I would like to be with two girls, and if she''s your choice, then I''m good with it." He seems to want to say more, but he stays silent.'
+					'He starts to nod. "Okay yeah, I''d like to be with two girls, and if she''s your choice, then I''m good with it." He seems to want to say more, but stays silent.'
 					'You smile, catching it. "What?"'
 					'He blushes. "Nothing."'
 					'You raise his face to yours to look into each other''s eyes. "Just tell me. We should be honest with each other about everything."'
@@ -605,15 +604,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/talk2.jpg"></center>'
 					'You give him a kiss. "So, are you ready for our threesome?"'
-					'Artem looks into your eyes and nods with a nervous smile. "Yeah, I''m ready. As ready as I''ll ever be."'
-					'You smile and give him a reassuring pat on the leg as you look at him. "Don''t worry, it will be fun." He just nods and doesn''t say anything more, but you can tell he''s also eager under his nervousness.'
+					'He looks into your eyes and nods with a nervous smile. "Yeah, I''m ready. As ready as I''ll ever be."'
+					'You smile and give him a reassuring pat on the leg as you look at him. "Don''t worry, it''ll be fun." He just nods and doesn''t say anything, but you can tell he''s also eager under his nervousness.'
 					*nl
-					'You pull out your phone and text Anushka. "Hey, what''s up? You ready to come over for that threesome with Artem?"'
-					'It takes a minute or so before she responds. "Sure, where at?", followed by a bunch of sexual innuendo emojis. You can feel Artem looking over and reading what she wrote.'
+					'You pull out your phone and text Anushka. "Hey, what''s up? You ready to come over for that threesome?"'
+					'It takes a minute or so before she responds. "Sure, where at?", followed by a bunch of sexual innuendo emojis. You can sense Artem looking over and reading what she wrote.'
 					'You text back. "Artem''s dorm room, just knock and he''ll answer the door."'
 					'She just texts back several more sexual innuendo emojis.'
 					*nl
-					'You put your phone down. "Well, she''s on her way." He tidies up the dorm room while waiting for her, stopping at his dresser and digging into the bottom drawer before setting a bottle of lube down on the end table. You can''t help but smile; he''s serious about getting a little payback. He sits back next to you to wait for Anushka to show up.'
+					'You put your phone down. "She''s on her way."'
+					'He tidies up the dorm room while waiting for her, stopping at his dresser and digging into the bottom drawer before setting a bottle of lube down on the end table. You can''t help but smile; he''s serious about getting a little payback. He sits back next to you to wait for Anushka to show up.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Wait for Anushka': gt 'artem_sex_uni', 'anushka_3some'
@@ -632,9 +632,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					'You decide to see if Artem wants to have another threesome with Anushka. "I was thinking, since you had fun last time when we had a threesome with Anushka, what would you say about doing it again?"'
 					'He seems a little surprised. "Yeah, she said maybe, but that sounded more like a polite no to me..." He pauses and gives you a hopeful look. "Do you think she might be willing to do it again?" He''s trying to hide his eagerness from you.'
 					*nl
-					'You nod. "Yeah, I think I she would be into it. Do you want me to?"'
+					'You nod. "Yeah, I think I she would be into it. Do you want me to ask?"'
 					'He blushes, but nods. "Yeah. Yeah, I think I do."'
-					'You smile at his blush. "Ok next time I see her I will ask." He just nods to that and the two of you talk about last time for a little bit.'
+					'You smile at his blush. "Okay, next time I see her, I''ll ask."'
+					'He just nods to that and the two of you talk about last time.'
 					act 'Stop talking': gt 'artem_dorm', 'start'
 					act 'Keep talking': gt 'artem_dorm', 'chat'
 				end
@@ -650,22 +651,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/talk2.jpg"></center>'
 					if artemQW['rough_anal_nush'] = 2 or anushkaQW['artem_dom'] = 1:
-						'You give him a kiss. "So, are you ready to have a threesome Nush again?"'
-						'Artem looks into your eyes and nods with a confident smile. "Oh yeah, I''m ready. This time I''m going to totally make her my little bitch, I am going to tear her little pussy and tight ass up." He seems very eager for a second go around.'
-						'You smile and give him a reassuring pat on the leg as you look at him. "Don''t get to carried away, we all want to have fun and YOUR little bitch?"'
-						'He blushes a bit at your last comment. "I know, I won''t be to rough. I just want her to know after today that when we have our fun together that I own her ass and she is OUR little bitch." He says with a smile. You laugh and shake you head at his comment.'
+						'You give him a kiss. "So, are you ready to have a threesome with Nush again?"'
+						'He looks into your eyes and nods with a confident smile. "Oh yeah, I''m ready. This time I''m going to totally make her my little bitch! I''m going to tear her little pussy and tight ass up!" He seems very eager for a second go around.'
+						'You smile and give him a reassuring pat on the leg as you look at him. "Don''t get too carried away. We all want to have fun and... Wait, <i>your</i> little bitch?"'
+						'He blushes. "I know, I won''t be too rough. I just want her to know after today that when we have our fun together, I own her ass and she''s OUR little bitch," he says with a smile.'
+						'You laugh and shake you head at his comment.'
 					else
-						'You give him a kiss. "So, are you ready to have a threesome Nush again?"'
-						'Artem looks into your eyes and nods with a confident smile. "Yeah, I''m ready. This time will be different, no holding back. I''m going to show her who''s the boss." You think he is more talking to himself than you at this point.'
-						'You smile and give him a reassuring pat on the leg as you look at him. "Don''t worry, it will be fun." He just nods and doesn''t say anything more, but you can tell he''s also eager under his nervousness.'
+						'You give him a kiss. "So, are you ready to have a threesome with Nush again?"'
+						'He looks into your eyes and nods with a confident smile. "Yeah, I''m ready. This time will be different, no holding back. I''m going to show her who''s the boss." You think he''s more talking to himself than you at this point.'
+						'You smile and give him a reassuring pat on the leg as you look at him. "Don''t worry, it''ll be fun."'
+						'He just nods and doesn''t say anything, but you can tell he''s also eager under his nervousness.'
 					end
 					*nl
 					'You pull out your phone and text Anushka. "Hey, what''s up? You ready to come over for another threesome with Artem?"'
-					'It takes a minute or so before she responds. "Sure, dorm room again?", followed by a bunch of sexual innuendo emojis. You can feel Artem looking over and reading what she wrote.'
+					'It takes a minute or so before she responds. "Sure, dorm room again?", followed by a bunch of sexual innuendo emojis. You can sense Artem looking over and reading what she wrote.'
 					'You text back. "Yes, just knock and he''ll answer the door."'
 					'She just texts back several more sexual innuendo emojis.'
 					*nl
-					'You put your phone down. "Well, she''s on her way." He tidies the dorm room while waiting for her, stopping at his dresser and digging into the bottom drawer before setting a bottle of lube down on the end table. You can''t help but smile; he''s serious about getting a little payback. He sits back next to you to wait for Anushka to show up.'
+					'You put your phone down. "She''s on her way."'
+					'He tidies the dorm room while waiting for her, stopping at his dresser and digging into the bottom drawer before setting a bottle of lube down on the end table. You can''t help but smile; he''s serious about getting a little payback. He sits back next to you to wait for Anushka to show up.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Wait for Anushka': gt 'artem_nush_sex_uni', 'anushka_3some1'
@@ -681,12 +685,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					minut += 30
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/talk2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You give him a kiss. "So, are you ready to fuck our pet bitch Nush again?"'
-					'Artem looks into your eyes and nods with a confident smile. "Hell yes, tell her to get her ass over here right now." He seems very eager for another go.'
-					'You smile and give him a reassuring pat on the leg as you look at him. "Ok I will tell her you want her ass over here right now." He just grins at you and watches as you pull out your phone and text Anushka. "Hey, Artem says to get your slutty ass over to his dorm room right now so he can fuck it again."'
+					'You give him a kiss. "So, are you ready to fuck our pet bitch again?"'
+					'Artem looks into your eyes and nods with a confident smile. "Hell yes, tell her to get her ass over here right now!" He seems very eager for another go.'
+					'You smile and give him a reassuring pat on the leg as you look at him. "Okay, I''ll tell her you want her ass over here right now." He just grins at you and watches as you pull out your phone and text Anushka. "Hey, Artem says to get your slutty ass over to his dorm room right now so he can fuck it again."'
 					*nl
 					'It takes a minute or so before she responds. "One slutty ass on the way", followed by a bunch of sexual innuendo emojis.'
-					'You glance over at him, you know he read along but you tell him anyways. "Well, her ass slutty as is on the way for your fucking pleasure." He laughs then gets up to tidy the room while you wait for her, stopping at his dresser and digging into the bottom drawer before setting a bottle of lube down on the end table. Afterwards he sits back down next to you to wait for Anushka to show up.'
+					'You glance over at him. "Her slutty ass is on the way for your fucking pleasure."'
+					'He laughs, then gets up to tidy the room while you wait for her, stopping at his dresser and digging into the bottom drawer before setting a bottle of lube down on the end table. Afterwards, he sits back down next to you to wait for Anushka to show up.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Wait for Anushka': gt 'artem_nush_sex_uni', 'anushka_3some2'
@@ -700,7 +705,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon1.jpg"></center>'
 				'You wonder just how kinky he is. "Artem, we''ve been having sex and it''s been great, but I was wondering if you might want to try something new?"'
-				'Just the word sex, and you have his full attention. "Uh sure, I guess so. Is it a new position you want to try?" As he talks, he starts taking off his pants.'
+				'Just the word sex, and you have his full attention. "Uh sure, I guess so. Is it a new position you want to try?"'
+				'As he talks, he starts taking off his pants.'
 				act 'Show him the strapon':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 1
@@ -710,8 +716,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					if strapnumber >= 4:
 						'You pull the strapon harness with its <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo out of your purse and hold it up, showing it to him. "I thought we could use this."'
 						'His eyes bulge when he sees how big it is and starts shaking his head. "Hell no! That thing is massive! There''s no way you''re sticking that in me!"'
-						'You sigh. "Come on baby, I''ll go easy on you. I let you fuck me in the ass, so it''s only fair. You''ll enjoy it, I promise."'
-						'He keeps shaking his head and laughs a little. "Fair? That thing is way bigger than I am! Maybe if it was my size or smaller, I might consider it but not that thing." You try to convince him, but he''s stead fast against it and pushes you to have regular sex instead.'
+						'You sigh. "Come on baby, I''ll go easy on you! I let you fuck me in the ass, so it''s only fair. You''ll enjoy it, I promise."'
+						'He keeps shaking his head and laughs a little. "Fair? That thing is way bigger than I am! Maybe if it was my size or smaller, I might consider it but not that thing!"'
+						'You try to convince him, but he''s stead fast against it and pushes you to have regular sex instead.'
 						act 'Have sex': gt 'artem_sex_uni', 'sex'
 						act 'Stop talking': gt 'artem_dorm', 'start'
 						act 'Keep talking': gt 'artem_dorm', 'chat'
@@ -719,7 +726,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 						'You pull the strapon harness with its <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo attached out of your purse and hold it up, showing it to him. "I thought we could use this."'
 						'His eyes bulge when he see''s what you''re holding. "Wait... You want to wear that and... you know..."'
 						'You grin at his reaction. "Come on baby, I''ll go easy on you. I let you fuck me in the ass, so it''s only fair. You''ll enjoy it, I promise."'
-						'He looks at the dildo, then to you, and back again before finally sighing and nodding slightly. "Okay fine, but you can''t tell anyone we tried this, you swear?"'
+						'He looks at the dildo, then to you, and back again before finally sighing and nodding slightly. "Okay fine, but you can''t tell anyone we tried this, okay?"'
 						'You nod. "I swear I won''t tell anyone unless you''re okay with it."'
 						'He frowns at how you worded it, but it seems good enough. "Okay, if it''ll make you happy, then I''ll try it, but if it starts to hurt, we''re stopping." You nod in agreement.'
 						act 'Put on harness': gt 'artem_sex_uni', 'strapon_first'
@@ -740,7 +747,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 end	
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'artemgirlfriend':
-	act 'Tell him to stop it':
+	act 'Tell him to stop':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 		'You smile at him as you push his hands away. "Artem, wait! All in good time, okay? We''ll get there, just please... Slow down a little."'
@@ -782,14 +789,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'askedstrip':
 	act 'Agree to strip': gt 'artemhome', 'stripagree', 0
 	gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-		act '"No way!" (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+		act 'No way (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/talk.jpg"></center>'
 			'You decline. "No, I wouldn''t be comfortable doing that."'
 			if artemQW['stripsee'] = 0:
-				'You can tell he''s seriously let down by your refusal. "Please <<$pcs_nickname>>, all the other guys have seen a naked girl before. Please?"'
+				'You can tell he''s seriously let down by your refusal. "Please <<$pcs_nickname>>, all the other guys have seen a naked girl before! Please?"'
 			else
 				'You can tell he''s seriously let down by your refusal. "Please <<$pcs_nickname>>, I really enjoyed watching you naked last time. Please?"'
 			end
@@ -812,7 +819,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'askedstrip':
 			act 'Agree to strip': gt 'artem_dorm', 'stripagree', 1
 		end
 	else
-		act '"No way!" (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+		act 'No way (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -827,8 +834,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stripagree':
 	else
 		'You give him a serious look. "You want me to get naked for you that badly?"'
 	end
-	'You see him visible swallow as he blushes before nodding. "Yes, I do. I would really love it if you did."'
-	'You think it over for a moment before nodding. "Okay fine. Sit back and enjoy the show." He grins widely as you start slowly stripping out of your clothes, teasing him as you do. You might as well have some fun with this.'
+	'You see him visibly swallow as he blushes before nodding. "Yes, I do. I would really love it if you did."'
+	'You think it over for a moment before nodding. "Okay fine. Sit back and enjoy the show."'
+	'He grins widely as you start slowly stripping out of your clothes, teasing him as you do. You might as well have some fun with this.'
 	act 'Start stripping': gt 'artem_dorm', 'striptease'
 end
 

locations/artem_nush_sex.qsrc

@@ -0,0 +1,1145 @@
+# artem_nush_sex
+!2024/03/19
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some1':
+	*clr & cla
+	artemQW['nushart_oral'] = 0
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some1.jpg"></center>'
+	'He just nods and you talk about how things will go before your phone buzzes; it''s a text from Anushka containing more emojis. Seeing this, Artem gets up and leaves the room, returning a few minutes later with Anushka in front of him. As he closes the door he reaches out and slaps her hard on the ass, causing her to jump, yepping slightly in surprise. She looks back to him and then looks back to you with a grin, as she moves over to sit next to you. After that he closes the door and locks it after she does. "Someone is feeling feisty today I see." She says.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 2, 'sub'
+	gs 'stat'
+	*nl
+	if anushkaQW['artem_dom'] = 1:
+		artemQW['artem_dom'] += 1
+		'As he turns around, he nods and gives her a confident smile. "Why wouldn''t I be? I owned your ass and we all know it. Now the bad girl is back for more nerd dick."'
+		'She looks up at him and bites her lower lip. "You think so?" While her tone has a bit of a bite to it, you don''t buy it. Artem is right and you can see by the look on his face that he knows it too.'
+		'He grins. "I know so. Deep down, we both know you like being treated like a dirty slut and the thought of some nerd you used to bully treating you like his little cum slut has you all wet. You can''t wait to be humiliated by a nerd while he fucks you. Tell me I''m wrong."'
+		*nl
+		'She''s speechless; the shock of just how different he''s acting seems to be too much for her to process. When she doesn''t reply, he confidently walks over, leans forward and runs his hand up her skirt. You see her stiffen and gasp slightly when his hand disappears up her skirt. "Just what I suspected," he grins. "You''re soaking wet already." When he pulls his hand out of her skirt, he pulls her panties off and tosses them aside. Even you''re a little surprised by how dominant he''s being, but you figure this is good for him.'
+		'You watch as he grabs her skirt and unbuttons it before yanking it off. He then pulls off her shirt and then her bra. She never once complains or acts like she''s not into it. In fact, she mostly bites her lower lip and occasionally giggles. He then forces her to kneel on the floor, completely exposed and naked in front of him as he starts to unbutton his pants. "Open your mouth," he orders.'
+		act 'Watch': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some1_dom_bj'
+	elseif artemQW['rough_anal_nush'] = 2:
+		'As he turns around, he nods and gives her a confident smile. "I knew you''d be back. When I''m done with you, you''ll know your ass was completely owned by a nerd. That a nerd made you his bitch and fucked you for his pleasure."'
+		'She looks up at him and bites her lower lip. "I... Almost believe you..."'
+		'He confidently walks over and grabs her by the chin, then lowers his face down so they''re looking eye to eye. "Seeing is believing. I figured girls like you get off on being treated like dirty little sluts, so I''m going to give you exactly what you want."'
+		*nl
+		'He lets go of her and sits down between the two of you before he gives you a look and smiles. You give him a proud smile. "Now both of you strip and make out while I watch," he orders.'
+		'Anushka doesn''t say anything as she starts stripping down to her underwear. You do the same and the two of you are soon making out while Artem watches. After a few minutes of this, you turn and kiss Artem as Anushka pulls down her panties and bends over, inviting one of you to eat her out. Artem grabs you by the hair and forces your face into Anushka''s crotch from behind.'
+		act 'Eat her out': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some11_oral2'
+	elseif artemQW['rough_anal_nush'] = 1:
+		'As he turns around, he nods and gives her a confident smile. "I promised myself that if I ever got another chance to fuck you, that I was going to fuck your ass raw."'
+		'She looks up at him and bites her lower lip. "That''s a bold claim."'
+		'He confidently walks over and forces himself between the two of you. "It''ll be a fact soon enough. Now I want both of you to strip and make out while I watch."'
+		'Anushka doesn''t say anything as she starts stripping down to her underwear. You do the same and the two of you are soon making out while Artem watches. After a few minutes of this, you turn and kiss Artem as Anushka pulls down her panties and bends over, inviting one of you to eat her out. Artem grabs you by the hair and forces your face into Anushka''s crotch from behind.'
+		act 'Eat her out': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some11_oral2'
+	else
+		'As he turns around, he nods and gives her a confident smile. "That''s right, and I''m not going to hold back on you this time."'
+		'She looks around the room and you can see her smirking. "Promises, promises..."'
+		'He takes a deep breath before he walks over and sits between the two of you. "I think the two of you should strip and makeout while I watch."'
+		'Anushka grins at his comment. "Well look at you, all bossy and confident. I like it." She starts stripping down to her underwear and you do the same. The two of you are soon making out as you strip while Artem watches. After a few minutes of this, you turn and kiss Artem as Anushka pulls down her panties and bends over, inviting one of you to eat her out. Artem grabs you by the hair and forces your face into Anushka''s crotch from behind.'
+		act 'Eat her out': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some11_oral2'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some1_oral1':
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some2.jpg"></center>'
+	'Artem buries his face in Anushka''s pussy from behind and starts eating her out, which causes her to moan loudly as you watch the action. After a few minutes, he pulls away from her. "You''re wet enough, but I''m not ready to fuck you yet," he says as he takes off the rest of his clothes, indicating for you to get naked as well before he lays down on the couch and motions you over. "I want you to suck my dick."'
+	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2, 'dom'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Give Artem a blowjob': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some1_bj'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some1_oral2':
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some3.jpg"></center>'
+	'Artem pushes your face into Anushka''s pussy and you start licking. She''s already wet and moans loudly as you feel Artem let go of you.' 
+	'You eat her out for a few minutes with no idea what Artem is doing before you pull away and see him kneeling next to you. He quickly leans in to take your place.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 2, 'lesbian'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Watch Artem eat her out': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some1_oral1'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some1_dom_bj':
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some_dom_bj.jpg"></center>'
+	'Anushka opens her mouth and he shoves his dick in before she starts sucking. After a minute or so of this, he grabs her by the back of the head and shoves his hips forward, sliding his dick all the way into her mouth until his balls are against her chin. You can hear her gagging as he starts roughly fucking her mouth.'
+	'He finally pulls his dick out of her mouth and she gasps for air as he pulls her up from where she was kneeling. He turns her around and pushes her onto the couch where she kneels as he reaches over to grab you and pull your head over to her pussy.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2, 'dom'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Eat her out': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some1_oral2'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some1_bj':
+	*clr & cla
+	minut -= 2
+	gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some4.jpg"></center>'
+	if anushkaQW['artem_dom'] = 1:
+		'You get on all fours on the couch between his legs and start stroking his cock with your hand before you take it into your mouth, bobbing your head up and down on his shaft. Artem moans as you start sucking his dick. "Don''t just stand there! Use that mouth of yours for something good for a change and get my girl nice and wet!" Moments later, you feel a warm wet tongue starts lapping at your clit as Anushka starts eating you out.'
+	else
+		'You get on all fours on the couch between his legs and start stroking his cock with your hand before you take it into your mouth, bobbing your head up and down on his shaft. Artem moans as you start sucking his dick. "Go on and pleasure my girl," he orders and moments later, you feel a warm wet tongue starts lapping at your clit as Anushka starts eating you out.'
+	end
+	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 2
+	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 2, 'lesbian'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Tell Anushka to suck his dick':
+		*clr & cla
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some5.jpg"></center>'
+		if anushkaQW['artem_dom'] = 1:
+			'You pop his dick out of your mouth and look back at Anushka. "Get up here and suck his cock like the good little slut you are!"' 
+			'She stops eating you out to look up at you with an amused smirk on her face before she moves up and kneels down beside the couch. She obediently takes his cock in one hand and starts stroking it while she takes the head into her mouth, tightly wraps her lips around his shaft and starts sucking. You glance up at Artem and see him smiling. "I''m glad you talked me into this. It''s great having our own little fuck slut."'
+			'You give him an amused smile before you start licking his balls, which makes him moan loudly.'
+		else
+			'You pop his dick out of your mouth and look back at Anushka. "Get up here and suck this cock like the good little slut you are!"' 
+			'She stops eating you out to look up at you with an amused smirk on her face before she moves up and kneels down beside the couch. She obediently takes his cock in one hand and starts stroking it while she takes the head into her mouth, tightly wraps her lips around his shaft and starts sucking. After you''re satisfied that she''s doing what you want, you start licking his balls and hear him moaning loudly.'
+		end
+		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Mount him':
+			*clr & cla
+			gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some6.jpg"></center>'
+			'He grabs hold of Anushka''s head and pulls her off as he looks at you. "I need to fuck you, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+			'You lift yourself up and straddle him before lining his dick up with your pussy and slowly lowering yourself down on it, taking his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick inside you. As you start riding him, Anushka moves up to his head, straddles his face and lowers herself down, grinding her crotch into his face as you ride him. You both moan from the pleasure of the act and watching your friend be pleasured by your boyfriend.' 
+			'A few minutes later, he lifts her off and then smacks your ass. "Bring that sweet pussy up here."'
+			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 3
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Switch with Anushka':
+				*clr & cla
+				gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some7.jpg"></center>'
+				if anushkaQW['artem_dom'] = 1:
+					'You get off him and move up to his face to straddle it. As you do, you look at Anushka. "Sit on my boyfriend''s cock like a good little slut."'
+					'Anushka laughs at your comment. "Whatever you say, nerd tamer."'
+					'She lifts herself up and shimmies down his body until she''s above his dick. You straddle his face and he starts licking your wet pussy as you watch Anushka lower herself down until his cock slides into her wet pussy. She moans softly as she starts riding him in reverse cowgirl style.'
+					'"Take the whole thing," you tell her as you reach over and grab her shoulders, pushing her down until she''s impaled balls deep on his cock.'
+				else
+					'You get off him and move up to his face to straddle it. As you do, you look at Anushka. "Get over here. I want to see you ride this cock, slut."'
+					'Anushka laughs at your comment. "Whatever you say, nerd tamer."' 
+					'She lifts herself up and shimmies down his body until she''s above his dick. You straddle his face and he starts licking your wet pussy as you watch Anushka lower herself down, impaling herself on his cock. She moans softly as she starts riding him in reverse cowgirl style.'
+				end
+				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 2
+				gs 'stat'
+				act 'Lay on your side':
+					*clr & cla
+					gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some8.jpg"></center>'
+					'After a few minutes, you lean forward and slap her ass, which causes her to yelp a little in surprise. "Don''t be greedy! I want another go."'
+					'She scoffs. "Me? Greedy? You rode him for longer than I did!" She rolls her eyes and climbs off him as you lie down on your side next to him and he turns on his side to face you. You hold up one of your legs and Artem wastes no time. He slides his dick back inside you and starts gently thrusting as Anushka gets down and starts licking and sucking his balls.'
+					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 2
+					gs 'stat'
+					act 'Let Artem to take charge':
+						*clr & cla
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some9.jpg"></center>'
+						'He pulls out of you and gets up. You slide off the couch as he grabs Anushka and forcefully pushes her down on the ottoman. She gasps a little at his sudden action, but before she can say anything, he grabs her leg and pulls her towards him until her ass is almost hanging off the end. He then pushes her legs apart and plunges his cock back into her pussy, causing her to moan as you move up towards her head and sit on her face. She starts eating you out as you glance at Artem and give him a reassuring smile.'
+						'"Can you hand me the lube?" he asks.'
+						gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 2, 'lesbian'
+						gs 'stat'
+						act 'Hand him the lube':
+							*clr & cla
+							gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some10.jpg"></center>'
+							'You reach over and grab the lube while grinding your pussy against Anushka''s face. You don''t know if Anushka heard him or if she''s just ignoring what the two of you are saying as you keep riding her face until you hear her muffled loud groan. Glancing back, you see that Artem has inserted his dick into her ass.'
+							gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 2, 'lesbian'
+							gs 'stat'
+							act 'Let him have his fun': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some1_rough1'
+						end
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some1_rough1':
+	*clr & cla
+	gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some11.jpg"></center>'
+	'You want to watch your boyfriend fuck your friend''s ass, so you climb off her and kneel beside her so you can get a good look at Artem''s cock sliding in and out of her ass. "Come on, fuck her like the dirty little slut she is!"'
+	'Anushka looks up at him while biting her lower lip, but doesn''t say anything. He looks at you when you speak up, then looks at her, and his gaze hardens before he starts ramming his cock harder in her ass. Anushka responds by moaning louder, enjoying the hard fucking Artem is giving her ass.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2, 'dom'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Ask him to butt fuck you': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some1_anal'
+	act 'Let him keep going': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some1_doggy'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some1_anal':
+	*clr & cla
+	minut -= 2
+	gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some12.jpg"></center>'
+	'You reach up and cup his face in your hands, holding his gaze so he looks directly into your eyes. "I want you to fuck my ass now."'
+	'He grins widely at you and you move to straddle Anushka''s face while he moves around behind you, near the top of her head. He squirts some lube onto your asshole and works it in before he gently slides his cock up your ass, pausing when you tense up and only moving again when you relax. He''s soon slowly, yet lovingly fucking your ass while Anushka eats you out.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 2, 'lube'
+	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 2, 'lesbian'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Eat her out':
+		*clr & cla
+		minut -= 4
+		gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some13.jpg"></center>'
+		'You lower your head between Anushka''s legs and start lapping at her clit, and she does the same to you as Artem continues fucking your ass. He gets a little rougher with you and starts fucking you harder and deeper as he seems to get caught up in the moment before he he suddenly pulls out of you and slaps your butt cheek. "Let''s switch it up."'
+		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 2, 'lube'
+		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 2, 'lesbian'
+		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 2, 'lesbian'
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Let him control the situation': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some1_doggy'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some1_doggy':
+	*clr & cla
+	minut -= 2
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some14.jpg"></center>'
+	if anushkaQW['artem_dom'] = 1:
+		'Artem half pulls, half helps Anushka get up as you lay down in her place. As soon as you''re on your back, she straddles your face and you see her slightly gaping asshole above you. As you start licking her pussy, Artem comes up behind her and shoves his dick balls deep up her ass in one thrust, causing her to moan loudly. "You love taking my nerd dick up your ass, don''t you? Tell me you love it. Beg me to fuck your ass."'
+		'"Oh fuck yes! I love your big nerd dick in my ass..." she moans as he fucks her ass while you eat her out. "Please, please... Pound my ass..." He gives her ass cheek a few smacks as he pounds her ass.'
+	else
+		'Artem half pulls, half helps Anushka get up as you lay down in her place. As soon as you''re on your back, she straddles your face and you see her slightly gaping asshole above you. As you start licking her pussy, Artem comes up behind her and slides his dick back into her asshole, causing her to moan loudly. "Yeah, you like that, don''t you slut? Tell me how much you love taking nerd dick in your ass."'
+		'"Oh fuck yes! I love your big nerd dick in my ass..." she moans as he fucks her ass while you eat her out. He gives her ass cheek a few smacks as he keeps thrusting into her ass.'
+	end
+	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 2, 'lesbian'
+	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Keep eating her out': 
+		*clr & cla
+		minut -= 2
+		gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some15.jpg"></center>'
+		'As you lick your friend''s pussy, you have a perfect view to watch Artem''s cock as he starts taking long, hard thrusts into her ass. "OH FUCK... OH FUCK... OH FUUUCCCKKK!" she cries out as her her legs start shaking and your face is covered in her pussy juices. Artem fucks her through her orgasm, not letting up or slowing down as she cums hard.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 2, 'lesbian'
+		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Slurp at her soaking wet pussy': 
+			*clr & cla
+			minut -= 5
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some16.jpg"></center>'
+			if anushkaQW['artem_dom'] = 1:
+				'"That''s right. Moan like a slut as this nerd pounds that ass. I own your ass now," he says before he leans forward and reaches out with one of his arms. A moment later, you feel her breasts lifting off your stomach as Artem pulls her up. "Tell me whose ass this is."'
+				'"It''s your ass..." she pants.'
+				*nl
+				'He grunts a reply. "No, this ass belongs to the nerds. You used to be some cool badass chick. Now... Now you''re owned by some nerd. Maybe I''ll share you with the other nerds and they can all take a turn fucking you. You''d like that, wouldn''t you?" Anushka is panting harder and moaning louder as he speaks.'
+				'When she doesn''t respond to his question, he asks again. "WOULDN''T YOU?!" he asks in a commanding voice and you find yourself getting wet at his dominating tone.'
+				*nl
+				'"OHHH YES... YES... YES...." Anushka cries out as she has another orgasm, coating your face with her juices again.'
+				'"Look at you cumming again just thinking about being fucked by other nerds!" Artem boasts as he keeps fucking her until she rides out her second orgasm. He then pulls out of Anushka and starts stroking his dick while pulling her off you.'
+			elseif artemQW['rough_anal_nush'] <= 1:
+				artemQW['rough_anal_nush'] = 2
+				'Despite grunting like he''s about to cum, he manages to control himself and starts smacking her ass as he continues fucking her. "OHHH... YES... YES... YES...." she cries out as she has another orgasm, coating your face with her juices again. He keeps fucking her until she rides out her second orgasm. He then pulls out of Anushka and starts stroking his dick while pulling her off you.'
+			else
+				'It doesn''t take much longer before he starts to grunt, and you can tell he''s about to cum, yet he manages to control himself. "OHHH... YES... YES... YES...." she cries out as she has another orgasm, coating your face with her juices again. He keeps fucking her until she rides out her second orgasm. He then pulls out of Anushka and starts stroking his dick while pulling her off you.'
+			end
+			gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian'
+			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Sit up and watch': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some1_dom_facial'
+		end
+	end	
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some1_dom_facial':
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some_mouthful.jpg"></center>'
+	'"Stick out your tongue," he orders once he has Anushka kneeling on the floor in front of him. You watch as she sticks out her tongue and he puts the tip of his dick just above it. He groans loudly as he shoots his cum into her mouth; most of it ends up in her mouth, but some lands on the side of her face and on her breasts. Once he squeezes the last drop of cum out of his dick, he lets out a loud satisfied sigh and sits on the couch.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'end'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Clean up': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some1_cleanup'
+	act 'Lick the cum from her face':
+		*clr & cla
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some17.jpg"></center>'
+		'You kneel down next to Anushka as she closes her mouth and swallows Artem''s cum. You start licking the cum off her face as she patiently sits still until you''ve licked up every last drop of Artem''s cum from her face. Once you finish, you look over at him and notice that his dick is already hard again. You let go of Anushka and get up, grabbing some tissues to clean yourself before passing the box to her. Artem soon follows suit and starts cleaning himself up as well.'
+		gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A2', 1
+		gs 'arousal', 'end'
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Clean up': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some1_cleanup'
+	end
+	act 'Kiss her':
+		*clr & cla
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some_dom_cumkiss.jpg"></center>'
+		'You kneel down and start kissing her as he sits on the couch and watches you. The two of you deeply and passionately make out, passing Artem''s cum back and forth between you. Once you''re finished, you both swallow his cum before you look over at him and notice that his dick is already hard again. You let go of Anushka and get up, grabbing some tissues to clean yourself before passing the box to her. Artem soon follows suit and starts cleaning himself up as well.'
+		gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A2', 1
+		gs 'arousal', 'end'
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Clean up': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some1_cleanup'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some1_cleanup':
+	*clr & cla
+	cumspclnt = 12
+	gs 'cum_cleanup'
+	gs 'stat'
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/pc/activities/misc/dress_1.mp4"></video></center>'
+	'Once you''re all cleaned up, you start dressing before Anushka grabs her purse off the floor where she dropped it. "I have to admit, you surprised me Artem. That sex there was better than I was expecting. Hell, you were better than I was expecting. Who knew you had such a bad boy streak in you?"'
+	'Artem blushes a little at her compliment, but you also notice his chest swell in obvious pride at her words. "Thanks... Uh... I hope everything I said was okay and I didn''t push it too far?"'
+	*nl
+
+	'You bite your lip, half expecting Anushka to go off on him now for admitting it was just an act, but to your surprise, she walks over and pats him on the cheek. "You did great and I loved it. Word of advice, though. Don''t ruin it like that. Own the attitude, okay?"'
+	'He giggles softly as he nods. "Got it." Then it seems to hit him. "Next time?"'
+	'She shrugs as she starts getting dressed. "Sure, if you guys want. I had fun, so why not?"'
+
+	*nl
+	'He grins ear from ear, apparently never expecting to hear all the praise he''s getting. "Yeah, sure." Then he glances at you. "I mean if <<$pcs_nickname>> is okay with it."'
+	'You smile at him. "We can talk about it later." You had fun, but do you want your boyfriend fucking one of your best friends to be a regular thing?'
+	if grupTipe3 = 1:
+		'Once you''re all dressed, Anushka touches up her makeup using her compact mirror. Once she''s done, she stands up. "Okay, I need to get going. Later nerds."'
+	else
+		'Once you''re all dressed, Anushka touches up her makeup using her compact mirror. Once she''s done, she stands up. "Okay, I need to get going. Later losers."'
+	end
+	act 'Ask how he feels': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'nush3some1_how_he_feels'
+	act 'You need to leave too':
+		*clr & cla
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
+		'You smile and kiss him again. "I''m glad you had fun, but I need to get going as well."'
+		'He hugs you. "Thank you, thank you for everything. I had a great time. I really needed this more than you''ll ever know." He kisses you again before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. You''ve set it up so your boyfriend and best friend are interested in having more threesomes. As you head out the door and Artem closes it behind you, you wonder if this was a mistake or the smartest thing you''ve ever done. You suppose only time will tell...'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'nush3some1_how_he_feels':
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
+	'You smile and kiss him again. You pause while looking at him; he just seems a little different and more confident. "So, how did that make you feel?"'
+	if anushkaQW['artem_dom'] = 1:
+		'He gets up and starts pacing around, full of energy. "Fuck, that was amazing! It was great making my former bully say all that stuff and I totally owned her and treated her like my bitch!" You notice he said ''former bully'' and wonder if he even realized it, but it seems like he doesn''t plan on letting her bully him anymore, not after this.'
+		*nl
+		'You give him an encouraging look to continue, so he does. "I mean I never dreamed in a million years that I would be fucking Nush in the ass and making her beg me to pound her harder." He shakes his head in disbelief, like he''s still having problems believing what just happened. "Man what a RUSH!" Then he turns suddenly to look back at you. "Did you see how turned on she got when I said I might share her with the others?"'
+		'You nod your head, not that you could have missed it. "Yes I heard her, kinda hard not to with how loud she was."'
+		*nl
+		'He nods and goes back to pacing. "Maybe next time I''ll invite Petka over. Wouldn''t he be freaked if I made her submit to him? I know he''d love getting some payback on her too."'
+		'You frown. "She''s not a whore for you to pimp out."'
+		'He looks at you, seemingly a little confused by what you said. "I know, I know. I just thought..." He trails off, clearly unsure where he was going with this.'
+		'You smile at him. "Just remember; she might like to be submissive and let guys use her, but she''s letting it happen. Push her too far and she''s going to push back. <i>Hard</i>."'
+		act 'Wait for his reply':
+			*clr & cla
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
+			'He looks thoughtful before he nods. "You''re right, I just sometimes get carried away because of all the times she bullied me, you know?"'
+			'You give him a soft, caring smile. "I know, but she''s my friend and she isn''t that bad really. Plus she''s still a person."'
+			'He nods again. "Yeah, you''re right. Maybe we can causally bring involving someone else, then we can bring up Petka and see what she thinks?"'
+			*nl
+			'You nod in agreement. "I think that would be a good way to do it."'
+			'He nods. "Yeah, I think so too. I mean not all the time, but sometimes. If you''re okay with it, that is..." he says while looking at you, worried he might be coming across as too eager.'
+			act 'We''ll see':
+				*clr & cla
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
+				'You smile at him. "We''ll see. Maybe I''ll save it for special rewards for you."'
+				'He laughs and hugs you. "Thank you, thank you for everything. I had a great time. I never realized how much I would enjoy being so... so dominant to a girl..."'
+				'You talk for a few minutes before you tell him you need to get going. He kisses you before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. You''ve set it up so your boyfriend and best friend are interested in having more threesomes. As you head out the door and Artem closes it behind you, you wonder if this was a mistake or the smartest thing you''ve ever done. You suppose only time will tell...'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
+			end
+		end
+	else
+		'He looks thoughtful for a second. "You know what? I feel great, I really do. It was great making her say all that stuff and I totally owned her and treated her like my bitch!" He pauses and glances to you with a slight blush. "I mean <i>our</i> bitch."'
+		'You give him an encouraging look to continue, so he does. "I mean I never dreamed in a million years that I would get to fuck Nush and humiliate her by making her tell me how much she loves it."'
+		'You squeeze his hand. "Well you look happy and if this makes you happy, then I''m happy. So does this mean you really want to do this again?"'
+		'He nods at once. "Yeah, yeah I really would. I mean not all the time but sometimes, yeah. If you''re okay with it, that is..." he says while looking at you, worried he might be coming across as too eager.'
+		act 'We''ll see':
+			*clr & cla
+			anushkaQW['artem_dom'] = 1
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
+			'You smile at him. "We''ll see. Maybe I''ll save it for special rewards for you."'
+			'You talk for a few minutes before you tell him you need to get going. He kisses you before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. You''ve set it up so your boyfriend and best friend are interested in having more threesomes. As you head out the door and Artem closes it behind you, you wonder if this was a mistake or the smartest thing you''ve ever done. You suppose only time will tell...'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some2':
+	*clr & cla
+	artemQW['artem_dom'] += 1
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some1.jpg"></center>'
+	'The two of you talk about last time and what he is expecting this time, before your phone buzzes; it''s a text from Anushka containing more emojis. Seeing this, Artem gets up and leaves the room, returning a few minutes later with Anushka in front of him. As he closes the door, he reaches out and slaps her hard on the ass. "Yeah baby, smack my ass..." she says teasingly as he locks the door before quickly catching up to smack her again.'
+	'"I''m going to do a lot more than smack it!" he replies with a grin.'
+	'She gives you an amused, yet slightly aroused grin as she walks over to the couch and Artem starts undressing her. Once she''s naked, he pushes her down firmly by the shoulders and she drops down onto her knees in front of him. "Open your mouth, slut," he says as he unbuttons his pants.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'dom'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Watch': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some2_dom_bj'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some2_dom_bj':
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some_dom_bj.jpg"></center>'
+	'Anushka opens her mouth and he shoves his dick in before she starts sucking. After a minute or so of this, he grabs her by the back of the head and shoves his hips forward, sliding his dick all the way into her mouth until his balls are against her chin. You can hear her gagging as he starts roughly fucking her mouth.'
+	'He finally pulls his dick out of her mouth and she gasps for air as he pulls her up from where she was kneeling. He turns her around and pushes her onto the couch where she kneels as he reaches over to grab you and pull your head over to her pussy.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2, 'dom'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Eat her out':
+		*clr & cla
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some3.jpg"></center>'
+		'Artem buries your face in Anushka''s pussy and you start licking. She''s already wet and moans loudly as you feel Artem let go of you. "That''s it. Get her nice and wet for me, <<$pcs_nickname>>."' 
+		'As you eat her out, you notice Artem undressing out of the corner of your eye. Once he''s naked, he kneels down next to you. "Take off your clothes," he orders as you move aside, letting him lean in and take your place.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 2, 'lesbian'
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Watch Artem eat her out':
+			*clr & cla
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some2.jpg"></center>'
+			'Artem buries his face in Anushka''s pussy and starts eating her out, which causes her to moan loudly as you watch the action while undressing. After a few minutes, he pulls away and examines her wet pussy. "Look how wet you are! You just can''t wait for some nerd dick, can you? Beg me to fuck you."'
+			'She glances over at you with a bemused grin on her face. "Please fuck me with your big nerd dick! Pound my little pussy, please!" You can tell she''s hamming it up a little for him.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Watch Artem fuck her':
+				*clr & cla
+				minut -= 2
+				gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some_dom_fuck1.jpg"></center>'
+				'Artem stands up and smacks his dick against Anushka''s ass cheeks a few times before he rubs the tip against her soaking wet pussy, causing her to moan. You watch as he slides his dick into her, her pussy easily swallowing up <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock as he starts fucking her. Listening to her moaning with each thrust is arousing you, so you slide your hand down to your own wet pussy and start rubbing your clit, masturbating as you watch them fuck.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
+				gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', 2, 'masturbate'
+				gs 'stat'
+				act 'Watch Anushka get really pounded':
+					*clr & cla
+					minut -= 2
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some_dom_fuck2.jpg"></center>'
+					'Artem suddenly buries his cock balls deep into Anushka''s pussy and she moans loudly as he starts really pounding her hard, his balls slapping against her clit with each thrust. She stares right at you as you rub your clit with your hand, watching your boyfriend pound your friend in front of you.'
+					'He glances over at you. "Are you ready to join in, my love?"'
+					if mc_inventory['strapon'] = 1 and strapnumber > 0 and strapnumber < 5:
+						'You do have a strapon in your purse, so you could fuck her too.'
+					end
+					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
+					gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', 2, 'masturbate'
+					gs 'stat'
+					act 'Yes': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some2_bj'
+					if mc_inventory['strapon'] = 1 and strapnumber > 0 and strapnumber < 5:
+						act 'You want to fuck her': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some2_dom_strapon'
+					end
+					act 'You just want to watch':
+						*clr & cla
+						minut -= 2
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some_dom_anal1.jpg"></center>'
+						'You look at him and smile. "I just want to watch you fuck her this time."'
+						'Artem looks a little surprised, but just nods. "Okay. Can you hand me the lube then?" You grab the lube and pass it to him, and he lubes up Anushka''s asshole as he keeps fucking her pussy. Once he has her ready, he pulls out of her pussy and lines his dick up against her asshole before he pushes forward and his cock slides into her ass, causing her to gasp and moan. She glances back over her shoulder, watching you masturbate while Artem starts fucking her ass.'
+						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
+						gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', 2, 'masturbate'
+						gs 'stat'
+						act 'Watch':
+							*clr & cla
+							minut -= 2
+							gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some_dom_anal2.jpg"></center>'
+							'As Artem fucks Anushka''s ass, he starts slapping her ass cheek with one hand, which makes her moan louder before her legs start to shake as she cries out in orgasm. Artem keeps fucking her hard and fast as she rides through her orgasm until her legs stop shaking.'
+							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
+							gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', 2, 'masturbate'
+							gs 'stat'
+							act 'Keep watching':
+								*clr & cla
+								minut -= 2
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some_dom_anal3.jpg"></center>'
+								'Anushka reaches back and puts a hand against his hip to try and slow him down, but Artem keeps smacking her hand away and doesn''t slow down as he starts to grunt, getting close to shooting his load as well. "Stop trying to slow me down! This ass belongs to the nerds, so take my cock. Take it!" he grunts, barely able to contain himself anymore.'
+								gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
+								gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', 2, 'masturbate'
+								gs 'stat'
+								act 'Watch him cum':
+									*clr & cla
+									minut -= 2
+									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some_dom_anal_cum.jpg"></center>'
+									'Artem suddenly pulls out of Anushka and starts cumming over her ass. He milks every drop out of his cock before he lets out a loud sigh and half sits, half collapses on the couch. Anushka remains where she is with her ass in the air, covered in his cum.'
+									gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
+									gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', 2, 'masturbate'
+									gs 'arousal', 'end'
+									gs 'stat'
+									act 'Clean up':
+										*clr & cla
+										minut += 5
+										'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/pc/activities/misc/dress_1.mp4"></video></center>'
+										'Anushka grabs some tissues and starts cleaning herself up. "Why didn''t join in?" she asks. "That time of the month?"'
+										'You smirk. "No, I just wanted to watch your ass get owned by some nerd dick. You''re really starting to become a submissive little slut to him."'
+										'Anushka rolls her eyes and shakes her head. "Whatever gets you off." Once she finishes cleaning the cum off herself, she starts getting dressed, as do you and Artem. Anushka then grabs her purse and compact and starts touching up her makeup.'
+										if grupTipe3 = 1:
+											'Once you''re all dressed, Anushka finishes her makeup and gets up. "Okay, I need to get going. Later nerds."'
+										else
+											'Once you''re all dressed, Anushka finishes her makeup before she gets up. "Okay, I need to get going. Later losers."'
+										end
+										act 'You need to leave too':
+											*clr & cla
+											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
+											'You smile and kiss him again. "I''m glad you had fun, but I need to get going as well."'
+											'He hugs you. "See you later, babe. I can''t wait to do this again, though I hope you join in next time." He kisses you again before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. You just let your boyfriend fuck your best friend. As you head out the door and Artem closes it behind you, you wonder if it was a mistake to watch them. You suppose only time will tell...'
+											act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
+										end
+									end
+								end
+							end
+						end
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some2_bj':
+	*clr & cla
+	minut -= 2
+	gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some4.jpg"></center>'
+	'You nod and he pulls out of Anushka and slaps her ass so that she''ll move out of the way before he lays down on his back. "Come over and give me a blowjob," he orders and you get on all fours between his legs and start stroking his cock with your hand before you take it into your mouth, bobbing your head up and down on his shaft.'
+	'Artem moans as you start sucking his dick. "Don''t just stand there. Use that mouth of yours for something good for a change and get my girl nice and wet!" he barks at Anushka before you feel her tongue start lapping at your clit as she starts eating you out.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 2
+	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 2, 'lesbian'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Tell Anushka to suck his dick':
+		*clr & cla
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some5.jpg"></center>'
+		'You pop his dick out of your mouth and look back at Anushka. "Get up here and suck his cock like the good little slut you are!"' 
+		'She stops eating you out to look up at you with an amused smirk on her face before she moves up and kneels down beside the couch. She obediently takes his cock in one hand and starts stroking it while she takes the head of his dick into her mouth, tightly wraps her lips around his shaft and starts sucking. You glance up at Artem and see him smiling. "I''m glad you talked me into this. It''s great having our own little fuck slut."' 
+		'You give him an amused smile before you start licking his balls, which makes him moan loudly.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Mount him':
+			*clr & cla
+			gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some6.jpg"></center>'
+			'He grabs hold of Anushka''s head and pulls her off before he looks at you. "I need to fuck you, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+			'You straddle him and line his dick up with your pussy before slowly lowering yourself down onto it, taking his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick inside you. As you start riding him, Anushka moves up to his head, straddles his face and lowers herself down, grinding her crotch into his face as you ride him. You both moan from the pleasure of the act.'
+			'A few minutes later, he lifts her off and smacks your ass. "Bring that sweet pussy up here."'
+			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 3
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Switch with Anushka':
+				*clr & cla
+				gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some7.jpg"></center>'
+				'You get off him and move up to his face to straddle it. As you do, you look at Anushka. "Sit on my boyfriend''s cock like a good little slut."'
+				'Anushka laughs at your comment. "Whatever you say, nerd tamer." She lifts herself up and shimmies down his body until she''s above his dick. You straddle his face and he starts licking your wet pussy as you watch Anushka lower herself down until his cock slides into her wet pussy. She moans softly as she starts riding him reverse cowgirl style.'
+				'"Take the whole thing," you tell her as you reach over and grab her shoulders, pushing her down until she''s impaled balls deep on his cock.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 2
+				gs 'stat'
+				act 'Lay on your side':
+					*clr & cla
+					gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some8.jpg"></center>'
+					'After a few minutes, you lean forward and slap her ass, which causes her to yelp a little in surprise. "Don''t be greedy! I want another go."'
+					'She scoffs. "Me? Greedy? You rode him for longer than I did!" She rolls her eyes and climbs off him as you lie down on your side next to him and he turns on his side to face you. You hold up one of your legs and Artem wastes no time. He slides his dick back inside you and starts gently thrusting as Anushka gets down and starts licking and sucking his balls.'
+					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 2
+					gs 'stat'
+					act 'Let Artem take charge':
+						*clr & cla
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some9.jpg"></center>'
+						'He pulls out of you and gets up. You slide off the couch as he grabs Anushka and forecefully pushes her down on the ottoman. She gasps a little at his sudden action, but before she can say anything, he grabs her leg and pulls her towards him until her ass is almost hanging off the end. He then pushes her legs apart and plunges his cock back into her pussy, causing her to moan as you move up towards her head and sit on her face. She starts eating you out as you glance at Artem and give him a reassuring smile.'
+						'"Can you hand me the lube?" he asks.'
+						gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 2, 'lesbian'
+						gs 'stat'
+						act 'Hand him the lube':
+							*clr & cla
+							gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some10.jpg"></center>'
+							'You reach over and grab the lube while grinding your pussy against Anushka''s face before passing it back to him. You don''t know if Anushka heard him or if she''s just ignoring what the two of you are saying as you keep riding her face until you hear her muffled groan. Glancing back, you see that Artem has inserted his dick into her ass and started butt fucking her.'
+							gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 2, 'lesbian'
+							gs 'stat'
+							act 'Let him have his fun': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some2_rough1'
+						end
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some2_rough1':
+	*clr & cla
+	gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some11.jpg"></center>'
+	'You want to watch your boyfriend fuck your friend''s ass, so you climb off her and kneel beside her so you can get a good look at Artem''s cock sliding in and out of her ass. "Listen to this slut moan! She loves getting her ass owned by nerd cock!"'
+	'Anushka responds by moaning louder as he looks at you and grins. "Yeah she does! By the time we''re done with her, she''ll be begging every nerd to fuck her ass!" He then looks down at Anushka. "Wouldn''t you, slut?" He doesn''t wait for her to respond. "Oh how the mighty have fallen. I remember when you were a badass bitch and now you''re our little submissive fuck slut."'
+	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2, 'dom'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Ask him to butt fuck you': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some1_anal'
+	act 'Let him keep going': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some1_doggy'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some2_anal':
+	*clr & cla
+	minut -= 2
+	gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some12.jpg"></center>'
+	'You reach up and cup his face in your hands, holding his gaze so he looks directly into your eyes. "I want you to fuck my ass now."'
+	'He grins widely at you and you move to straddle Anushka''s face while he moves around behind you, near the top of her head. He squirts some lube onto your asshole and works it in before he gently slides his cock up your ass, pausing when you tense up and only moving again when you relax. He''s soon slowly yet lovingly fucking your ass while Anushka eats you out.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 2, 'lube'
+	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 2, 'lesbian'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Eat her out':
+		*clr & cla
+		minut -= 4
+		gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some13.jpg"></center>'
+		'You lower your head between Anushka''s legs and start lapping at her clit, and she does the same to you as Artem continues fucking your ass. He gets a little rougher with you and starts fucking you harder and deeper as he seems to get caught up in the moment before he he suddenly pulls out of you and slaps your ass cheek. "Let''s switch it up."'
+		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 2, 'lube'
+		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 2, 'lesbian'
+		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 2, 'lesbian'
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Let him control the situation': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some2_doggy'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some2_doggy':
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some14.jpg"></center>'
+	'Artem half pulls, half helps Anushka get up as you lay down in her place. As soon as you''re on your back, she straddles your face and you see her slightly gaping asshole above you. As you start licking her pussy, Artem comes up behind her and shoves his dick balls deep up her ass in one thrust, causing her to moan loudly. "Damn, look how easy my dick just slides into her slutty ass! It''s like her ass was made for taking dick!"'
+	'"Oh fuck... Yes... I love big nerd dick... In my ass..." she moans breathlessly as he fucks her ass and you eat her out.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 2, 'lesbian'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Keep eating her out': 
+		*clr & cla
+		gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some15.jpg"></center>'
+		'As you lick your friend''s pussy, you have a perfect view to watch Artem''s cock as he starts taking long, hard thrusts into her ass. "OH FUCK... OH FUCK... OH FUUUCCCKKK!" she cries out as her her legs start shaking and your face is covered in her pussy juices. Artem fucks her through her orgasm, not letting up or slowing down as she cums hard.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 2, 'lesbian'
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Slurp at her soaking wet pussy': 
+			*clr & cla
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some16.jpg"></center>'
+			'"That''s right. Moan like a slut while taking my dick in your ass!" he says before he leans forward and reaches out with one of his arms. A moment later you feel her breasts lifting off your stomach, you can only guess that he is pulling her up and back by her hair. "Tell me whose ass this is."'
+			'She moans and pants. "It belongs to the nerds!"'
+			*nl
+			'He grunts a reply. "That''s right, your ass belongs to the nerds. What do you think about me inviting Petka over to have a turn with your ass? Or maybe at the next D&D night, I''ll just bend you over the table and fuck your ass in front of all my friends? You''d like that, wouldn''t you?" Anushka is panting hard and doesn''t respond. "WOULDN''T YOU!" He sounds louder in a commanding voice and you find yourself getting wetter at his dominating tone.'
+			*nl
+			'It seems to be working for Anushka. "OHHH... YES... YES... YES...." she cries out as she has another orgasm, coating your face with her juices again. You''re pretty sure she isn''t really paying attention to what he''s saying.'
+			'Artem laughs as he keeps fucking her. "Look at you cumming again just thinking about being fucked by other nerds!" He keeps fucking her until she rides out her second orgasm, then pulls out of Anushka''s asshole and starts stroking his dick while pulling her off you.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian'
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Sit up and watch': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some2_dom_facial'
+		end
+	end	
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some2_dom_facial':
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some_mouthful.jpg"></center>'
+	'"Stick out your tongue," he orders once he has Anushka kneeling on the floor in front of him. You watch as she sticks out her tongue and he puts the tip of his dick just above it. He groans loudly as he shoots his cum into her mouth; most of it ends up in her mouth, but some lands on the side of her face and on her breasts. Once he squeezes the last drop of cum out of his dick, he lets out a loud satisfied sigh and sits on the couch.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'end'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Clean up': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some2_cleanup'
+	act 'Lick the cum from her face':
+		*clr & cla
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some17.jpg"></center>'
+		'You kneel down next to Anushka as she closes her mouth and swallows Artem''s cum. You start licking the cum off her face as she patiently sits still until you''ve licked up every last drop of Artem''s cum from her face. Once you finish, you look over at him and notice that his dick is already hard again. You let go of Anushka and get up, grabbing some tissues to clean yourself before passing the box to her. Artem soon follows suit and starts cleaning himself up as well.'
+		gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A2', 1
+		gs 'arousal', 'end'
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Clean up': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some2_cleanup'
+	end
+	act 'Kiss her':
+		*clr & cla
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some_dom_cumkiss.jpg"></center>'
+		'You kneel down and start kissing her as he sits on the couch and watches you. The two of you deeply and passionately make out, passing Artem''s cum back and forth between you. Once you''re finished, you both swallow his cum before you look over at him and notice that his dick is already hard again. You let go of Anushka and get up, grabbing some tissues to clean yourself before passing the box to her. Artem soon follows suit and starts cleaning himself up as well.'
+		gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A2', 1
+		gs 'arousal', 'end'
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Clean up': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some2_cleanup'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some2_cleanup':
+	*clr & cla
+	cumspclnt = 12
+	gs 'cum_cleanup'
+	gs 'stat'
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/pc/activities/misc/dress_1.mp4"></video></center>'
+	'Once you''re all cleaned up, you start dressing before Anushka grabs her purse off the floor where she dropped it. "I have to admit, you''re starting to get really good at this. That new bad boy streak of yours is really starting to shine."'
+	'Artem blushes a little at her compliment, but you also notice his chest swell in obvious pride at her words. "Thanks. You weren''t too bad yourself."'
+	*nl
+	'Anushka snorts a laugh in reply then looks at you. "I think we might have created a monster."' 
+	'He swells with pride again. "Next time you''ll have <i>three</i> orgasms!" he proclaims.'
+	'"Promises, promises..." she grins before looking at you. "He''s all yours to deal with."'
+	if grupTipe3 = 1:
+		'Once you''re all dressed, Anushka touches up her makeup using her compact mirror. Once she''s done, she gets up. "Okay, I need to get going. Later nerds."'
+	else
+		'Once you''re all dressed, Anushka touches up her makeup using her compact mirror. Once she''s done, she gets up. "Okay, I need to get going. Later losers."'
+	end
+	act 'You need to leave too':
+		*clr & cla
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
+		'You smile and kiss him again. "I''m glad you had fun, but I need to get going as well."'
+		'He hugs you. "I look forward to next time. Maybe we can change it up a bit?" He kisses you again before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. You''ve managed to make it a regular thing for you and your boyfriend to have a threesome with your best friend. As you head out the door and Artem closes it behind you, you wonder if this was a mistake or the smartest thing you''ve ever done. You suppose only time will tell...'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some2_dom_strapon':
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some_dom_strap1.jpg"></center>'
+	'While Artem fucks Anushka doggy style, you grab your purse and pull out your strapon harness. You slip into it and buckle it in place before taking the dildo out and attaching it to the harness. Artem glances over at you once you have the strapon firmly attached and pulls out of Anushka before standing aside. You walk up and give her ass a hard slap. "Roll over. I want you to watch me while I fuck you with my big dick!"'
+	'Anushka rolls over onto her back and spreads her legs before you scoot up on your knees and slide the dildo into her. Your <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo slides easily into her wet pussy, making her moan loudly as you start fucking her.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap_give', 2
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Keep fucking Anushka':
+		*clr & cla
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some_dom_fuck2.jpg"></center>'
+		'Artem leans over to watch your dildo slide in and out of her pussy while stroking his dick, eager to get another go himself. "Damn, she''s so wet that thing''s just sliding in and out of her with ease." Anushka for her part just moans loving getting fucked by you while Artem watches. After a couple of minutes Artem grabs the lube off the end table and starts to lube up his dick with it. "Okay, roll the slut over so I can have a go at her ass."'
+		'You pull out of her, which causes her to moan softly in disappointment as you stand up. "Roll over and present that ass, slut!" Anushka bites her lower lip and rolls back over before Artem pulls her off the couch into a kneeling position on the floor in front of it. He then pushes her forward, bending her over the couch seat.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap_give', 2
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Watch':
+			*clr & cla
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some_dom_anal1.jpg"></center>'
+			'He squirts amble lube onto her asshole before tossing the bottle aside. "Time to ripen up some gopnik ass with a nerd dick!" he laughs as he roughly shoves his dick up her ass.'
+			'She partially jumps forward, but her hips hit the edge of the couch and can''t she move. "Ow, fuck..." Artem goes very slowly until she fully relaxes and starts moaning loudly.'
+			'You stroke your dildo like it''s a cock while you watch Artem fuck Anushka''s ass; the louder she moans, the harder and faster he goes.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Take turns fucking her ass': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'anushka_3some2_dom_strapon_anal'
+			act 'Just watch him fuck her ass':
+				*clr & cla
+				minut -= 2
+				gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some_dom_anal2.jpg"></center>'
+				'As Artem fucks Anushka''s ass, he starts slapping her ass cheek, which makes her moan louder before her legs start to shake and she cries out in orgasm. Artem keeps fucking her hard and fast as she rides through her orgasm until her legs stop shaking.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
+				gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', 2, 'masturbate'
+				gs 'stat'
+				act 'Keep watching':
+					*clr & cla
+					minut -= 2
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some_dom_anal3.jpg"></center>'
+					'Anushka reaches back and puts a hand against his hip to try and slow him down, but Artem keeps smacking her hand away and doesn''t slow down as he starts to grunt, getting close to shooting his load as well. "Stop trying to slow me down! This ass belongs to the nerds, so take my cock. Take it!" he grunts, barely able to contain himself anymore.'
+					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
+					gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', 2, 'masturbate'
+					gs 'stat'
+					act 'Watch him cum':
+						*clr & cla
+						minut -= 2
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some_dom_anal_cum.jpg"></center>'
+						'Artem suddenly pulls out of Anushka and starts cumming over her ass. He milks every drop out of his cock before he lets out a loud sigh and half sits, half collapses on the couch. Anushka remains where she is with her ass in the air, covered in his cum.'
+						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
+						gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', 2, 'masturbate'
+						gs 'arousal', 'end'
+						gs 'stat'
+						act 'Clean up':
+							*clr & cla
+							minut += 5
+							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/pc/activities/misc/dress_1.mp4"></video></center>'
+							'Anushka grabs some tissues and starts cleaning herself up. "How come you didn''t join in?" she asks. "That time of the month?"'
+							'You laugh. "No, I just wanted to watch your ass get owned by some nerd dick. You''re starting to really become a submissive slut to him."'
+							'Anushka rolls her eyes and shakes her head. "Whatever gets you off." Once she finishes cleaning herself, she starts getting dressed, as do you and Artem. Anushka then grabs her purse and compact and starts to touch up her makeup.'
+							if grupTipe3 = 1:
+								'Once you''re all dressed and Anushka is done touching up her makeup, she gets up. "Okay, I need to get going. Later nerds."'
+							else
+								'Once you''re all dressed and Anushka is done touching up her makeup, she gets up. "Okay, I need to get going. Later losers."'
+							end
+							act 'You need to leave too':
+								*clr & cla
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
+								'You smile and kiss him again. "I''m glad you had fun, but I need to get going as well."'
+								'He hugs you. "See you later, babe. I can''t wait to do this again, though I hope you join in next time." He kisses you again before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. You just let your boyfriend fuck your best friend. As you head out the door and Artem closes it behind you, you wonder if it was a mistake to watch them. You suppose only time will tell...'
+								act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
+							end
+						end
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some2_dom_strapon_anal':
+	menu_off = 1
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some_dom_strap_anal1.jpg"></center>'
+	'You stand next to him and watch as he fucks her ass. "Babe, I want to fuck her too," you tell him.'
+	'He looks over at you and grins, then pulls out of her asshole, leaving it gaping and waiting for you. You grab her ass cheeks with your hands and spread them wide, making her hole gape a bit wider as you position yourself and line the tip of the dildo up with her hole before you push it in.'
+	'She moans loudly as the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo easily slides into her lubed asshole and you fuck her for a few minutes before Artem starts crowding against you, wanting another go himself.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 2
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Let Artem have a turn':
+		*clr & cla
+		gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some_dom_anal2.jpg"></center>'
+		'You pull out of her and move aside as Artem slides over to take your place. He slides his dick into her awaiting asshole and starts fucking her ass while slapping her ass cheek. Before too long, her legs start to shake as she cries out in orgasm, Artem fucking her hard and fast until her legs stop shaking.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Take your turn again':
+			*clr & cla
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some_dom_strap_anal2.jpg"></center>'
+			'"I want to fuck her ass some more," you tell Artem, who suddenly pulls out of Anushka and gives her ass a good slap and moves aside.'
+			'"Sorry honey, I got carried away fucking our pet slut''s ass," he grins and you smile at him as you slide your dildo back up her ass and start fucking her hard and fast. After a few minutes, you think she''s about to have another orgasm and can tell Artem is not that far off himself, so you move aside to give him another go.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 2
+			gs 'arousal', 'end'
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Let Artem have another turn':
+				*clr & cla
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some_dom_anal3.jpg"></center>'
+				'Artem shoves his dick into Anushka, going balls deep into her ass in a single thrust before he starts fucking her. "Take my cock, bitch!" he grunts as Anushka''s legs start shaking again as she has a second orgasm. As she''s coming down, he starts to grunt, barely able to contain himself anymore.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
+				gs 'stat'
+				act 'Watch him cum':
+					*clr & cla
+					minut -= 2
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some_dom_anal_cum.jpg"></center>'
+					'Artem suddenly pulls out of Anushka and starts cumming over her ass. He milks every drop out of his cock before he lets out a loud sigh and half sits, half collapses on the couch. Anushka remains where she is with her ass in the air, covered in his cum.'
+					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
+					gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', 2, 'masturbate'
+					gs 'arousal', 'end'
+					gs 'stat'
+					act 'Clean up':
+						*clr & cla
+						minut += 5
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/pc/activities/misc/dress_1.mp4"></video></center>'
+						'Anushka grabs some tissues and starts cleaning up. "That was amazing, though I think my ass is going to be sore tomorrow."'
+						'Artem snorts. "Serves you right for all the years you bullied me."'
+						'You laugh. "You''re becoming a real submissive butt slut for this nerd, aren''t you?"'
+						'Anushka rolls her eyes and shakes her head. "Whatever. I just like getting fucked." Once she finishes cleaning herself, she starts getting dressed, as do you and Artem. Anushka then grabs her purse and compact and starts to touch up her makeup.'
+						if grupTipe3 = 1:
+							'Once you''re all dressed and Anushka is done touching up her makeup, she gets up. ""Okay, I need to get going. Later nerds."'
+						else
+							'Once you''re all dressed and Anushka is done touching up her makeup, she gets up. ""Okay, I need to get going. Later losers."'
+						end
+						act 'You need to leave too':
+							*clr & cla
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
+							'You smile and kiss him again. "I''m glad you had fun, but I need to get going as well."'
+							'He hugs you. "See you later babe, I can''t wait to do this again." He kisses you again before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. You and your boyfriend justed fucked your best friend. As you head out the door and Artem closes it behind you, you wonder if this was a mistake. You suppose only time will tell...'
+							act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
+						end
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'artem_nush_disco_walk':
+	menu_off = 1
+	*clr & cla
+	minut += 10
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="'+'images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/anushka/walking.jpg"></center>'
+	'Artem leads you down the side streets and into the alleyway that runs behind the apartment courtyard where all the garages are located. You and Artem hold hands and Anushka walks on the other side of him as the three of you talk about a variety of subjects, mostly about your classmates and teachers. Artem then talks about the D&D game, but quickly drops it when Anushka seems like she''s getting bored.'
+	'She changes the subject by asking you what you thought of some of the boys at the disco tonight, but is interrupted by a smacking sound as she jumps. "What the fuck, dude?" she asks.'
+	*nl
+	'Artem has a smug look on his face. "Just a little punishment for trying to get my girl to look at other guys."'
+	'Anushka responds. "She''s a big girl," she replies. "If she wants to look she can look. Who knows... Maybe she''ll find someone better?"'
+	'Artem barks a laugh. "Doubtful. I''m a great boyfriend. I''m kind, caring, romantic, good in bed and when my girl needs to be dominated, then I can do that too. What more could she want?"'
+	act 'Just let them banter':
+		*clr & cla
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="'+'images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/anushka/walking.jpg"></center>'
+		'Anushka snorts. "Maybe she wants to try a real bad boy for a change..."'
+		'Artem responds by smacking her on the ass again. "Maybe, but I''m not worried."'
+		'Anushka scowls a little. "What was that for?"'
+		'Artem looks smugly pleased with himself. "Just a reminder that, for all your bad girl attitude, your ass still belongs to the nerds."'
+		*nl
+		'They keep bantering for a few minutes before they fall into silence, so you bring the conversation back around to school.'
+		'You soon arrive in front of the garages as you walk towards the courtyard. Artem suddenly stops and takes his jacket off before spreading it wide on the ground. "Hey, why don''t we sit down and talk for a bit here?" If you want Anushka to have sex with Artem, then you should sit with her between you and him. If you want to have sex with him, then you should sit between them.'
+		act 'Sit between Artem and Anushka': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'artem_sveta'
+		act 'Sit on the other side of Anushka': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'artem_nush'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'artem_nush':
+	menu_off = 1
+	*clr & cla
+	minut += 5
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/anushka/walk1.jpg"></center>'
+	'Anushka sits and leaves room for you between her and Artem, but you motion for her to scoot over next to Artem and you sit next to her, sandwiching her between the two of you. Artem gives you a questioning look, but you just smile and nod at him.'
+	'He grins and leans back in a half reclining position as you engage Anushka in a conversation about her latest sexual partner. You can see the bulge growing in his pants, and Anushka soon does as well. "Guess someone likes my story, huh?" she asks in a bemused tone.'
+	act 'Tell her to peek':
+		*clr & cla
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/anushka/walk2.jpg"></center>'
+		'You lean against her, pushing her closer to Artem. "I think someone wants to say hi. Why don''t you take a peek?"'
+		'She looks back at you with a questioning look, but starts to unbutton and unzip his pants to peek inside. "It''s too dark to see anything. Pull his dick out so we can see it," you tell her.'
+		act 'Tell her to take it out':
+			*clr & cla
+			gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/anushka/walk_bj1.jpg"></center>'
+			'She reaches into his underwear and pulls out his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick. Once it''s free, he reaches over and pulls her head down into his lap. "You made it hard, so now you got to suck it," you say with a smirk.'
+			'She starts stroking his dick with one hand before taking it into her mouth and sucking on it as Artem moans in pleasure.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
+			gs 'arousal', 'end'
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Push her head down':
+				*clr & cla
+				anushkaQW['dom_nush'] += 1
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/anushka/walk_bj2.jpg"></center>'
+				'As Anushka continues sucking Artem''s cock, you reach over and push her head down to force her to take more of it into her mouth.'
+				'"Oh yeah babe! Just like that..." Artem moans as he looks at you.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2, 'dom'
+				gs 'stat'
+				act 'Grab her hair':
+					*clr & cla
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/anushka/walk_bj3.jpg"></center>'
+					'You grab hold of Anushka''s hair and push her head down until you hear her gagging on his cock.'
+					'"Just think if some of the other gopniks walked by and seen you sucking my nerd dick. What would they think?" Artem says to her between moans as you make her deepthroat his cock.'
+					'After a few minutes of this, Artem looks you dead in the eye. "Help me take her jeans off so I can fuck this slut."'
+					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2, 'dom'
+					gs 'stat'
+					act 'Take her pants off': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'artem_nush_strip'
+				end
+			end
+			act 'Let her suck his dick':
+				*clr & cla
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/anushka/walk_bj2.jpg"></center>'
+				'As Anushka sucks Artem''s cock, you lean over and partially lay on her back so you can peek around and watch as most of his dick disappears into her mouth with each downward bob of her head.'
+				'"Yeah bitch... Just like that... Suck my dick!" Artem groans between moans of pleasure.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2, 'dom'
+				gs 'stat'
+				act 'Grab her hair':
+					*clr & cla
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/anushka/walk_bj3.jpg"></center>'
+					'You grab ahold of Anushka''s hair to pull it up out of the way so it is easier to watch her suck Artem''s dick. "Just think if some of the other gopniks walked by and seen you sucking my nerd dick. What would they think?" Artem says with a smirk.' 
+					'After a few minutes of this, Artem looks you dead in the eye. "Help me take her jeans off so I can fuck this slut."'
+					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2, 'dom'
+					gs 'stat'
+					act 'Take her pants off': gt 'artem_nush_sex', 'artem_nush_strip'
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end	
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'artem_nush_strip':
+	menu_off = 1
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/anushka/walk_strip1.jpg"></center>'
+	'You pull her head up and both you and Artem start unbuttoning her jeans. Once you have them off, Artem tosses them aside as Anushka continues jerking him off. He then starts to tug at her panties.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 1
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Watch Artem take off her panties':
+		*clr & cla
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/anushka/walk_strip2.jpg"></center>'
+		'Artem roughly pulls her panties off and tosses them down by her jeans before he stands up and starts pulling down his pants and underwear. "Roll the dirty slut over on all fours so I can fuck her."'
+		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 1
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Help her onto all fours':
+			*clr & cla
+			gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/anushka/walk_vaginal1.jpg"></center>'
+			'You help Anushka get up on all fours so her ass is facing Artem. Once she''s in place, Artem kneels down behind her. "Damn, you''re soaking wet! Look babe, her juices are already running down her thigh!"'
+			'He moves forward and she suddenly moans loudly as he shoves his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock inside her pussy and starts fucking her as you lean in and start kissing her.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 2
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Spread her ass cheeks':
+				*clr & cla
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/anushka/walk_vaginal2.jpg"></center>'
+				'After you break the kiss with her, you reach back and spread her ass cheeks as wide as you can while looking up at Artem. He grins as he gets the hint.'
+				'"Look at that little asshole, just begging to be used by nerd dick!" he says before he spits on her ass and uses a finger to rub it into her asshole.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
+				gs 'stat'
+				act 'Hold her in place':
+					*clr & cla
+					artemQW['artem_dom'] += 1
+					gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/anushka/walk_anal1.jpg"></center>'
+					'After spending a few more minutes fucking her pussy, he pulls his hips back. "Tell me you want this nerd dick in your ass."'
+					'"Yes... I want you to fuck my ass with your big nerd dick," she says, sounding rather desperate, yet also aroused.'
+					'You hold her ass cheeks wide for him as he lines his dick up with her asshole. "Oh fuck!" she mutters as he forces his cock up her ass.'
+					*nl
+					'He moans loudly as he works his dick deeper into her. "Damn, her ass feels tighter without all that bottled lube."'
+					'She starts leaning forward in an effort to keep him from going too deep. "Hold her for me, babe," he says and you grab hold of her arms to keep her from pulling away from him.'
+					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
+					gs 'arousal', 'end'
+					gs 'stat'
+					act 'Keep holding her':
+						*clr & cla
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/anushka/walk_anal2.jpg"></center>'
+						'Now that she''s unable to move, Artem shoves his hips forward again, causing her to moan loudly. As he starts really hammering her ass, she starts crying out and shaking as she has a massive orgasm, so much so you have to help hold her up as Artem starts grunting louder himself.'
+						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
+						gs 'arousal', 'end'
+						gs 'stat'
+						act 'Watch him cum':
+							*clr & cla
+							minut += 5
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/anushka/walk_facial.jpg"></center>'
+							'Artem suddenly pulls out of Anushka and stands up. "Turn her around to face me." You help her quickly turn around, her body still shaking from her orgasm. "Jerk me off and let me cum over your face, slut!" he orders.' 
+							'She takes hold of his dick and starts jerking him off. Almost at once, he starts cumming over her face. She milks his cock until every last drop of it has been squeezed out of it. They both sigh and sit back against the garage once he''s finished.'
+							*nl
+							'Anushka grabs some tissues from her purse and starts cleaning the cum off her face. "Where are my clothes?"'
+							'Artem points to where her jeans and panties. "I threw them over there."'
+							'She gets up and walks over to pick up her panties before she flips him off. "You''re turning into a bit of an asshole, you know that?"'
+							*nl
+							'He just laughs at her response. "Yet you just came from it, so you obviously love it."'
+							'Anushka rolls her eyes and shakes her head as she starts putting her jeans back on and Artem starts to get dressed as well.'
+							if grupTipe3 = 1:
+								'Once they''re both dressed, Anushka gets ready to leave. ""Okay, I need to get going. Later nerds."'
+							else
+								'Once they''re both dressed, Anushka gets ready to leave. ""Okay, I need to get going. Later losers."'
+							end
+							act 'You need to leave too':
+								*clr & cla
+								minut += 5
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
+								'Artem walks you up to your apartment door. You smile and kiss him. "Good night, honey."'
+								'He hugs you. "See you later, babe. I can''t wait to do this again, though maybe next time I can fuck you instead?" He kisses you again before you head into your apartment. As you stand in the hallway, you think about what just happened. Your boyfriend just fucked your best friend while you watched. You wonder if it was a mistake, but suppose that only time will tell...'
+								act 'Go home': minut += 4 & pavhome_enter = 1 & gt 'korrPar'
+							end
+						end
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'artem_sveta':
+	menu_off = 1
+	*clr & cla
+	minut += 5
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/sveta/walk1.jpg"></center>'
+	'Artem and Anushka take a seat, with Anushka leaving room for you to sit between her and Artem. You sit between them and lean against Artem as the three of you talk a bit more.'
+	'Artem leans back in a half reclining position and you can see his bulge growing in his pants. After a while, Anushka notices as well. "Looks like someone is getting a little worked up, huh?" she asks is a bemused tone.'
+	'Artem smiles at you. "Sorry babe, but I can''t help it. You''re just so beautiful."'
+	act 'Take a peek':
+		*clr & cla
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/sveta/walk2.jpg"></center>'
+		'You unbutton his pants, but it''s too dark to see anything as you hear Anushka''s voice in your ear. It seems she''s leaned over to try and take a look too. "Go on. Pull it out."'
+		act 'Pull his dick out':
+			*clr & cla
+			gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/sveta/walk_bj1.jpg"></center>'
+			'You pull his dick out and he looks at you with pleading eyes. "Please suck it, babe."'
+			'You lean forward and take his dick into your mouth and start sucking it while stroking his shaft. "Damn <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re getting good at that!" Anushka says.'
+			'You''re unable to answer, so Artem replies for you. "She''s the best!"'
+			'Anushka snorts a bit of a giggle, Artem likely not getting why she found it funny.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 2
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Deepthroat':
+				*clr & cla
+				gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/sveta/walk_bj2.jpg"></center>'
+				'As you''re sucking Artem''s dick, you feel a hand press down on the back of your head and force it down until his dick slides down your throat, causing you to gag. You think it''s Artem at first, but soon realize that it''s Anushka.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 2, 'deepthroat'
+				gs 'stat'
+				act 'Get your hair grabbed':
+					*clr & cla
+					gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/sveta/walk_bj3.jpg"></center>'
+					'You feel her fingers wrap themselves in your hair as she roughly forces you to deepthroat Artem before he speaks up. "Okay, let her up."'
+					'You can keep sucking his dick until he blows his load, offer up your pussy or give him your ass.'
+					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 2, 'deepthroat', 'rough'
+					gs 'stat'
+					act 'Spread your legs': gt 'artem_nush_sex_uni', 'artem_sveta_vag'
+					act 'Offer up your ass': gt 'artem_nush_sex_uni', 'artem_sveta_anal'
+					act 'Just suck him off':
+						*clr & cla
+						minut += 5
+						gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/sveta/walk_facial.jpg"></center>'
+						'He stands up and you keep sucking his dick until he tells you he''s about to cum. You then pop his dick out of your mouth and jerk him off until he starts cumming on your face. Once you''ve milked every last drop out of him, you look up at him with a grin as he tucks his dick back away in his pants.'
+						gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A2', 1
+						gs 'arousal', 'end'
+						gs 'stat'
+						if grupTipe3 = 1:
+							'"Thanks for the show guys, but I need to get going," Anushka says. "Later nerds."'
+						else
+							'"Thanks for the show guys, but I need to get going," Anushka says. "Later losers."'
+						end
+						act 'You need to leave too':
+							*clr & cla
+							cumspclnt = 12
+							gs 'cum_cleanup'
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
+							'Artem walks you up to your apartment door. You smile and kiss him. "Good night, honey."'
+							'He hugs you. "See you later, babe. Maybe next time I can fuck Nush? What do you think?" He kisses you again before you head into your apartment. As you stand in the hallway, you think about what just happened. You just sucked your boyfriend''s dick in front of your friend. You wonder if it was a mistake, but you suppose only time will tell...'
+							act 'Go home': minut += 4 & pavhome_enter = 1 & gt 'korrPar'
+						end
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'artem_sveta_vag':
+	menu_off = 1
+	*clr & cla
+	gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/sveta/walk_vaginal1.jpg"></center>'
+	'You slide his dick out of your mouth and turn to look at him. "I want you to fuck me, right here, right now."'
+	'He just grins and gets up as Anushka helps you get naked from the waist down while he strips out of his pants and underwear. Once you''re both ready, you lay on your back and spread your legs wide before he lays down between your legs and slides his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your already wet pussy.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 2
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Watch Anushka':
+		*clr & cla
+		gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/sveta/walk_vaginal2.jpg"></center>'
+		'As Artem fucks you, you glance over and see that Anushka has her hand down her pants, rubbing one out as she watches you get fucked by Artem. You just grin.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 2
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Offer up your ass': gt 'artem_nush_sex_uni', 'artem_sveta_anal'
+		act 'Get fucked some more':
+			*clr & cla
+			gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/sveta/walk_vaginal3.jpg"></center>'
+			'Anushka is soon moaning almost as loud as you are, enough to attract even Artem''s attention. "What a little slut you are, rubbing one off while you watch me fuck your friend," he grins. "Admit it. You wish you were being fucked by some nerd cock right now, don''t you?"'
+			'Anushka bites her lower lip and redoubles her effort as she keeps rubbing one off. "YES! Oh fuck yes, I wish you were fucking me with your big nerd cock right now!"'
+			'Artem looks at you and smiles before looking back at her as he keeps fucking you. "Maybe next time I''ll ask Petka or Feofan to come along and they can fuck you while you watch me fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>. You''d like that, wouldn''t you? I can tell by your expression that the meer thought of some other nerd using you turns you on."'
+			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 2
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Let him finish':
+				*clr & cla
+				gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/sveta/walk_vaginal4.jpg"></center>'
+				'He then starts really pounding your pussy, even more so once Anushka starts arching her back and moaning loudly as she rubs herself to orgasm. This pushes Artem to the edge as well as he starts grunting hard before he pulls out of you and points his dick in your face.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 2
+				gs 'stat'
+				act 'Artem blows his load':
+					*clr & cla
+					minut += 5
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/sveta/walk_facial.jpg"></center>'
+					'You quickly jerk him off and he soon starts cumming on your face. Once you''ve milked every last drop out of him, you look up at him with a grin as he tucks his dick back away in his pants.'
+					gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A2', 1
+					gs 'arousal', 'end'
+					gs 'stat'
+					if grupTipe3 = 1:
+						'"Thanks for the show guys, but I need to get going," Anushka says. "Later nerds."'
+					else
+						'"Thanks for the show guys, but I need to get going," Anushka says. "Later losers."'
+					end
+					act 'You need to leave too':
+						*clr & cla
+						cumspclnt = 12
+						gs 'cum_cleanup'
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
+						'Artem walks you up to your apartment door. You smile and kiss him. "Good night, honey."'
+						'He hugs you. "See you later, babe. Maybe next time I can fuck Nush? What do you think?" He kisses you again before you head into your apartment. As you stand in the hallway, you think about what just happened. You just let your boyfriend fuck you in some dirty alley while your friend watched and rubbed one out. You wonder if this was a mistake, but suppose only time will tell...'
+						act 'Go home': minut += 4 & pavhome_enter = 1 & gt 'korrPar'
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'artem_sveta_anal':
+	menu_off = 1
+	*clr & cla
+	gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/sveta/walk_anal1.jpg"></center>'
+	'"I want you to fuck my ass," you tell him with a smile.'
+	'He grins. "Get on all fours for me then."'
+	'You get on all fours while Anushka keeps rubbing one out. Artem uses your pussy juices and some spit to lube your asshole up before he gently slides it in. Once his dick is inside you, he starts to slowly fuck your ass.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 2, 'lube'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Take an anal pounding':
+		*clr & cla
+		gs 'boyStat', 'A2'		
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/sveta/walk_anal2.jpg"></center>'
+		'Artem pushes his cock deeper into your ass as he starts to fuck you harder and faster, even more so once Anushka starts arching her back and moaning loudly as she rubs herself to orgasm. This pushes Artem to the edge as well as he starts grunting hard before he pulls out of you and points his dick in your face.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 2, 'lube'
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Artem blows his load':
+			*clr & cla
+			minut += 5
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/city/coffe_hole/sveta/walk_facial.jpg"></center>'
+			'You quickly jerk him off and he soon starts cumming on your face. Once you''ve milked every last drop out of him, you look up at him with a grin as he tucks his dick back away in his pants.'
+			gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A2', 1
+			gs 'arousal', 'end'
+			gs 'stat'
+			if grupTipe3 = 1:
+				'"Thanks for the show guys, but I need to get going," Anushka says. "Later nerds."'
+			else
+				'"Thanks for the show guys, but I need to get going," Anushka says. "Later losers."'
+			end
+			act 'You need to leave too':
+				*clr & cla
+				cumspclnt = 12
+				gs 'cum_cleanup'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
+				'Artem walks you up to your apartment door. You smile and kiss him. "Good night, honey."'
+				'He hugs you. "See you later, babe. Maybe next time I can fuck Nush? What do you think?" He kisses you again before you go into your apartment. As you stand in the hallway, you think about what just happened. You just let your boyfriend fuck you in the ass in some dirty alley while your friend watched and rubbed one out. You wonder if this was a mistake, but suppose only time will tell...'
+				act 'Go home': minut += 4 & pavhome_enter = 1 & gt 'korrPar'
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+--- artem_nush_sex ---------------------------------
+

locations/artem_sex.qsrc

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 # artem_sex
-!2022/09/17
+!2024/03/19
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'hj':
 	menu_off = 1
@@ -12,7 +12,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hj':
 	act 'Finish him off':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/hj2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Several minutes go by and you''re starting to think this will take a while when cum suddenly starts shooting out of his cock. It flies up, narrowly missing your face, and lands on his pants, the bed and your hands. "Wow, that was amazing, <<$pcs_nickname>>! You''re the best!"'
+		'Several minutes go by and you''re starting to think this will take a while when cum suddenly starts shooting out of his cock. It flies up, narrowly missing your face, and lands on his pants, the bed and your hands.'
+		'"Wow, that was amazing, <<$pcs_nickname>>! You''re the best!" he blurts out.'
 		if artemQW['hj'] = 0:
 			'You smile at him. "Was that your first time?"'
 			'He blushes hard. "Sorry... Was it that obvious? I''ll do better next time..." He''s deeply embarrassed at the idea of thinking he did something wrong.'
@@ -168,7 +169,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 						act 'Tell him you''re on your period':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You take his dick out of your mouth. "Sorry Artem, but it''s that time of the month. We can''t.""'
+							'You take his dick out of your mouth. "Sorry Artem, but it''s that time of the month. We can''t."'
 							if analplugin = 1:
 								'"Since you seem to like buttplugs so much, how about I fuck your ass again then?" he replies.'
 							else
@@ -176,9 +177,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 							end
 							act 'Agree to have anal sex instead': gt 'artem_sex', 'anal'
 							if analplugin = 1:
-								gs 'willpower', 'action', 'resist', 'hard'
+								gs 'willpower', 'anal', 'resist', 'hard'
 							else
-								gs 'willpower', 'action', 'resist', 'medium'
+								gs 'willpower', 'anal', 'resist', 'medium'
 							end
 							if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 								act 'Finish him with your mouth (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -187,7 +188,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/first5.jpg"></center>'
 									'You take his dick out of your mouth and shake your head. "No. I know we did it before, but I don''t want to do it this time."'
-									'Artem looks at the floor. "I''m sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>... I shouldn''t have tried to talk you into it.""'
+									'Artem looks at the floor. "I''m sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>... I shouldn''t have tried to talk you into it."'
 									'You take his hand in yours and reassure him. "It''s okay, babe. Just... Don''t pressure me for anal, okay? I''ll let you know when I''m ready for it."'
 									'He nods hopefully, pleased that you''ll still give him a blowjob after his blunder and that you''re still open to having anal sex with him someday.'
 									act 'Just keep sucking': gt 'artem_sex', 'bj'
@@ -343,8 +344,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cum_surprise':
 	if rand(1,10) = 1 and noprotect = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/firstcpie.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you''re riding him, getting lost in your own pleasure, you glance down and see him tense up before feeling his cum shoot into you. It oozes out of your pussy as you lift yourself up.'
-		'That''s when he realizes that he just came inside you. "Oh my god, I''m so sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>! I didn''t mean to do that!"'
-		'You smile at him as you get off him. "It''s okay, don''t worry about it." He looks relieved, obviously thinking you''re on birth control.'
+		'That''s when he realizes that he just came inside you. "Oh my god! I''m so sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>! I didn''t mean to do that!"'
+		'You smile as you get off him. "It''s okay, don''t worry about it." He looks relieved, obviously thinking you''re on birth control.'
 		act 'Continue': gs 'artem_sex', 'after_sex', 'cp'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/firstfacial.jpg"></center>'
@@ -458,6 +459,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slut_bj':
 	*clr & cla
 	artemQW['bj'] += 1
 	npc_rel['A2'] += 1
+	artemQW['artem_dom'] += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/bj3.jpg"></center>'
 	'You slide off the bed onto your knees in front of him. His stiff, erect cock is right in front of your face, so you grab it with your hand and start stroking and kissing it before you start licking the head, getting a taste of his precum. He moans softly as you play with his dick.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'hj', 3, 'sub'
@@ -494,9 +496,13 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'slut_fuck':
 	*clr & cla
 	artemQW['sex'] += 1
+	artemQW['artem_dom'] += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/first3.jpg"></center>'
-	'You start stripping before him, giving him a little show as you remove your clothes, revelling in his undivided attention. Once you''re fully naked, he mutters "Lie down on your side, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+
+	'You start stripping before him, giving him a little show as you remove your clothes, revelling in his undivided attention.'
+	'"Lie down on your side," he mutters once you''re naked.'
+
 	gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Lay on your side':
@@ -539,9 +545,10 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'slut_anal':
 	*clr & cla
-	artemQW['anal'] = 1
+	artemQW['anal'] += 1
+	artemQW['artem_dom'] += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/first3.jpg"></center>'
-	'You start stripping before him, giving him a little show as you remove your clothes, revelling in his undivided attention. Once you''re fully naked, he mutters "Get on your hands and knees, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+	'You start stripping before him, giving him a little show as you remove your clothes, reveling in his undivided attention. Once you''re fully naked, he mutters "Get on your hands and knees, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 	gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Get on your hands and knees':
@@ -580,7 +587,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some':
 	*clr & cla
 	artemQW['nushart_oral'] = 0
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some1.jpg"></center>'
-	'He just nods and you talk about how things will go before your phone buzzes; it''s a text from Anushka containing more emojis. Seeing this, Artem gets up and leaves the room, returning a few minutes later with Anushka following him. "Not a bad looking apartment. Looks way nicer than any of the others I''ve seen around here."'
+	'He just nods and you talk about how things will go before your phone buzzes; it''s a text from Anushka containing more emojis. Seeing this, Artem gets up and leaves the room, returning a few minutes later with Anushka following him.'
+	'"Not a bad looking apartment," she says. "Looks way nicer than any of the others I''ve seen around here."'
 	'He nods, but you can see the proud smile. "Thanks."'
 	'She looks around the room and you can see her smirking. "Yep, exactly how I pictured it. Nerd nirvana." He glances at you, but doesn''t say anything. You''re not sure if he knows how to take what she just said.'
 	*nl
@@ -609,7 +617,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_oral2':
 	*clr & cla
 	artemQW['nushart_oral'] += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some3.jpg"></center>'
-	'You look at her inviting ass and pussy and can''t help yourself. You move in behind Anushka, bury your face in her pussy and start licking. She starts quickly getting wet as she moans loudly.' 
+	'You look at her inviting pussy and can''t help yourself. You move in behind Anushka, bury your face in her pussy and start licking. She starts quickly getting wet as she moans loudly.' 
 	'You eat her out for a few minutes with no idea what Artem is doing before you pull away and see him staring at you wide-eyed and flushed.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 2, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -624,7 +632,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_bj':
 	*clr & cla
 	artemQW['nushart_oral'] = 0
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some4.jpg"></center>'
-	'Youall strip down before you push Artem onto his back on the ottoman. His dick is already hard from watching what happened or at the thought of what will come. You get on your hands and knees on the couch between his legs and start stroking his cock with your hand before you take it into your mouth, bobbing your head up and down on his shaft. As you do, you feel a warm wet tongue starts lapping at your clit as Anushka starts eating you out.'
+	'You all strip down before you push Artem onto his back on the ottoman. His dick is already hard from watching what happened or at the thought of what will come. You get on your hands and knees on the couch between his legs and start stroking his cock with your hand before you take it into your mouth, bobbing your head up and down on his shaft. As you do, you feel a warm wet tongue starts lapping at your clit as Anushka starts eating you out.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 2
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -2, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -663,13 +671,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_bj':
 					act 'Encourage Artem to take charge':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some9.jpg"></center>'
-						'You slide off the ottoman and pat his cheek. "Just do it!" Anushka stands up and he glances at you, so you give him a nod of encouragement. Emboldened, he grabs Anushka and pushes her down on the ottoman in a mammer that''s forceful for him.'
+						'You slide off the ottoman and pat his cheek. "Just do it!" Anushka stands up and he glances at you, so you give him a nod of encouragement. Emboldened, he grabs Anushka and pushes her down on the ottoman in a manner that''s forceful for him.'
 						'She gasps a little at his sudden action, then looks up at him and bites her lower lip. You can tell it turned her on. "I didn''t think you had it in you. Maybe you''re not the shy submissive nerd I always took you for..."'
-						'He grabs her leg and pulls her towards him until her ass is almost hanging off the end. He then pushes her legs apart and plunges his cock back into her pussy, causing her to moan as you move up towards her head and sit on her face. She starts eating you out as you glance at Artem and give him a reassuring smile.'
+						'He grabs her leg and pulls her towards him until her ass is almost hanging off the end. He then pushes her legs apart and plunges his cock back into her pussy, causing her to moan as you move up towards her head and sit on her face. She starts eating you out as you glance at Artem and gives him a reassuring smile.'
 						'"Can you hand me the lube?" he asks after a few minutes.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 2, 'lesbian'
 						gs 'stat'
-						act 'Hand Artem the lube':
+						act 'Hand him the lube':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some10.jpg"></center>'
 							'You reach over and grab the lube while grinding your pussy against Anushka''s face and pass it back to him. You don''t know if Anushka heard him or if she''s just ignoring what the two of you are saying. You keep riding her face until you hear her muffled groan louder and glance back to see that Artem has inserted his dick into her ass and is slowly and gently butt fucking her.'
@@ -700,7 +708,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_rough1':
 	anushkaQW['domnush'] += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some11.jpg"></center>'
 	'He''s being slow and gentle, but know he wants to get rough with her, so you climb off her and kneel beside her waist so you can get a good look at Artem''s cock sliding in and out of her ass. "Come on, fuck her already! Give it to her like you mean it!"'
-	'Anushka looks up at him while biting her lower lip, but doesn''t say anything. He looks at you when you speak up, then looks at her, and his gaze hardens just a bit before he looks back at you and nods. He starts ramming into her harder than before, but is still not going all out. Anushka responds by moaning louder.'
+	'Anushka looks up at him while biting her lower lip, but doesn''t say anything. He looks at you when you speak up, then looks at her, and his gaze hardens just a bit before he looks back at you and nods. He starts ramming into her harder than before but is still not going all out. Anushka responds by moaning louder.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'erotic_sex', 2, 'dom'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Ask him to butt fuck you': gt 'artem_sex', 'anushka_3some_anal'
@@ -712,7 +720,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_anal':
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some12.jpg"></center>'
 	'You reach up and cup his face in your hands, holding his gaze so he looks directly into your eyes. "I want you to fuck my ass now."'
-	'He grins widely at you and you move to straddle Anushka''s face while Artem moves around behind you, near the top of her head. He squirts some lube onto your asshole and works it in before he gently slides his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock up your ass, pausing when you tense up and only moving again when you relax. He''s soon slowly yet lovingly fucking your ass while Anushka eats you out.'
+	'He grins widely at you and you move to straddle Anushka''s face while Artem moves around behind you, near the top of her head. He squirts some lube onto your asshole and works it in before he gently slides his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock up your ass, pausing when you tense up and only moving again when you relax. He''s soon slowly, yet lovingly fucking your ass while Anushka eats you out.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 2
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -2, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -732,14 +740,14 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_doggy':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some14.jpg"></center>'
-	'You get up, pulling yourself away from all those sensations that were threatening to overwhelm you, and slap Anushka on the thigh. "Get up and switch with me."'
+	'You get up, pulling yourself away from all those sensations that were threatening to overwhelm you and slap Anushka on the thigh. "Get up and switch with me."'
 	'She sits up and gives you a bemused look as Artem takes a step back to watch, eager to get it stuck back in. Anushka gets up and you get on the ottoman bench with your head facing Artem before you encourage her to straddle you and start licking her pussy. You push her forward so her upper body is lying on you, then slide your hands back to her ass and pull her ass cheeks apart, causing her asshole to gape a little. This is all the encouragement Artem needs as he quickly steps closer and slides his dick back up her ass. You can hear her moan loudly as he does.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 2, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Let him finish': 
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some15.jpg"></center>'
-		'You decide not to encourage him further. If he doesn''t have what it takes to fuck a girl roughly, then that''s on him. You know he''ll be a little disappointed in himself for not taking full advantage of his opportunity as you keep licking Anushka while Artem fucks her ass. It doesn''t take much longer before he starts to grunt, and you can tell he''s about to cum. In fact, he soon pulls out of Anushka''s asshole and starts stroking his cock.'
+		'You decide not to encourage him further. If he doesn''t have what it takes to fuck a girl roughly, then that''s on him, but you know he''ll be a little disappointed in himself for not taking full advantage of his opportunity as you keep licking Anushka while Artem fucks her ass. It doesn''t take much longer before he starts to grunt, and you can tell he''s about to cum. In fact, he soon pulls out of Anushka''s asshole and starts stroking his cock.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 4, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Get on your knees': gt 'artem_sex', 'anushka_3some_facial'
@@ -754,7 +762,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_doggy':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some15.jpg"></center>'
 			'You stop licking her pussy to say a few encouraging words. "Come on, baby! Fuck this slut''s ass! Show her who''s boss!"'
-			'Instead of Artem responding to you, Anushka does. "Save your breath. This pussy boyfriend of yours doesn''t know how to fuck me like a man." You can tell by her teasing tone that she''s also encouraging him to get rougher.'
+			'Instead of Artem responding, Anushka does. "Save your breath. Your pussy ass bitch of a boyfriend doesn''t know how to fuck me like a man." You can tell by her teasing tone that she''s also encouraging him to get rougher.'
 			'"Shut up, slut!" he growls before he starts fucking her harder, causing Anushka to start crying out and moaning loudly before you feel her body spasm as an orgasm rips through her, causing her to get pretty loud. After she cums, he starts to slow down a little again.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 3, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -762,7 +770,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_doggy':
 			act 'Let him finish': 
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some15.jpg"></center>'
-				'You decide not to encourage him further. If he doesn''t have it in him to pound a girl like she''s nothing more than a wet hole for his pleasure, then that''s his fault. You know he''ll be a little disappointed in himself for not taking full advantage of his opportunity as you keep licking Anushka while Artem fucks her ass. It doesn''t take much longer before he starts to grunt, and you can tell he''s about to cum. In fact, he soon pulls out of Anushka''s asshole and starts stroking his cock.'
+				'You decide not to encourage him further. If he doesn''t have it in him, then that''s his fault, but you know he''ll be a little disappointed for not taking full advantage of his opportunity as you keep licking Anushka while Artem fucks her ass. It doesn''t take much longer before he starts to grunt, and you can tell he''s about to cum. In fact, he soon pulls out of Anushka''s asshole and starts stroking his cock.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 2, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Get on your knees': gt 'artem_sex', 'anushka_3some_facial'
@@ -774,19 +782,36 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_doggy':
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'force'
 					artemQW['rough_anal_nush'] = 2
 					anushkaQW['domnush'] += 1
+					artemQW['artem_dom'] += 1
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some16.jpg"></center>'
-					'"Don''t slow down, baby. Tear that ass up and show her who owns it!" you tell him as you grab hold of her hips to stop her from pulling away.'
+					'"Don''t slow down, baby. Tear that ass up and show her who owns it!" you tell him as you grab hold of her hips to stop her from pulling away, as you go back to licking her pussy.'
 					'You feel his hands reach up and firmly grab her by the hips, one hand reaching up to hold her by the shoulder as he slides his dick nearly entirely out of her before slamming it back in and hammering her balls deep. You can feel her trying to pull away, but he holds her firm. "That''s right bitch, tonight your ass is mine!"'
-					'Her moans start turning into grunts, but he''s not done. "Tonight, you''re the pussy assed bitch! I own your ass and I''m going to tear it up because there''s nothing you can do about it!" You''re a little shocked that you''ve brought this side out of him, but are also feeling a little proud.'
-					*nl
-					'She grips your leg tightly. "Oh fuck... Oh fuck... Not... So hard." She''s starting to resist, but is still enjoying being used.'
-					'"Shut that slut mouth up! I''ll show you the same mercy you''ve shown me over the years. None!" You can tell by his deep breathing, grunts and tensing body that he''s trying really hard not to cum so he can keep fucking her, but it''s too much and he jerks out of her. "I''m cumming, bitch!" he cries out.'
-					gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'dom'
-					gs 'arousal', 'end'
+
+					'Her moans start turning into grunts, but he''s not done. "Who''s the pussy assed bitch now!?"'
+					'When she doesn''t respond, he reaches up and grabs her by the hair before turning her head until she''s looking back over her shoulder at him. "I asked you a question, bitch! Answer it!" You''re a little shocked that you''ve brought this side out of him, but are also feeling a little proud.'
+
+					gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 2, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 					gs 'stat'
-					act 'Get on your knees': gt 'artem_sex', 'anushka_3some_facial'
+					act 'Let this play out':
+						*clr & cla
+						gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
+						gs 'stat'
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some14.jpg"></center>'
+						'You can hear her grunts turning back into moans as well, not to mention her already soaking wet pussy is soaking your face even more, she is getting off this big time. Your thoughts are interrupted as she answers him. "OOOHHH... I... am..." Her reply is breathless.'
+						'You can hear the excitement in his voice, it seems he is really starting to get into this. "You are what?"'
+						'"OH... OH... I''m.... the pussy.... assed bitch." She struggles to get out from the hard fucking Artem is giving her, but her ever increasing soaking pussy tells you she''s loving it.'
+
+						*nl
+						'"That''s right. I own your ass and I''m going to tear it up because there''s nothing you can do about it!"'
+						'You have to admit that you wern''t expecting him to be this assertive as she grips your leg tightly. "Oh fuck... Oh fuck... Not... So hard." She''s starting to resist, but is still enjoying being used.'
+						'"Shut that slut mouth up! I''ll show you the same mercy you''ve shown me over the years. None!" You can tell by his deep breathing, grunts and tensing body that he''s trying really hard not to cum so he can keep fucking her, but it''s too much and he jerks out of her. "I''m cumming, bitch!" he cries out.'
+						gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 2, 'lesbian', 'dom'
+						gs 'arousal', 'end'
+						gs 'stat'
+						act 'Get on your knees': gt 'artem_sex', 'anushka_3some_facial'
+					end
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Encourage him to really pound her (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -824,33 +849,40 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 	'You let go of Anushka and get up, grabbing some tissues to clean yourself before passing the box to her. Artem soon follows suit and starts cleaning himself up. Once you''re all cleaned up, you start dressing before Anushka grabs her purse off the floor where she dropped it.'
 	*nl
 	if artemQW['rough_anal_nush'] = 1:
-		'"I must admit, the sex was better than I expected, especially from a nerd. At best, I was expecting this to be lackluster, but you surprised me, Artem. You fuck better than I expected, but still not great either." She looks directly at you and smirks. "You still got a fair bit of work training your nerd on how to fuck like a man, though."'
+		'"I must admit, the sex was better than I expected, especially from a nerd. At best, I was expecting this to be lackluster, but you surprised me, Artem. You fuck better than I expected, but you''re not that great either."'
+		'She looks directly at you and smirks. "You''ve still got a fair bit of work training your nerd on how to fuck like a man."'
+		'You''re pretty sure she''s teasing him and doesn''t really mean it, but you doubt Artem will understand that.'
 		act 'Defend Artem':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'love'
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'like'
+			artemQW['nush3some_again'] = 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Nush!" you say in a scolding tone. "He did great. You got off, so what more do you want?" You lean over and kiss him quickly. "You were great. Nush is just being a bitch."'
-			'She just laughs. "Don''t fill his head with lies. He was okay. You eating my pussy is what put me over the edge. He still has a lot to learn. Later losers." As she starts walking out of his room, he glances at you briefly before looking back at her.'
-			'"That might be true, but I know that today I tore your ass up and from now on when we see each other in school..." He pauses a moment while she stops and looks at him to let him finish. "We''ll both know my dick was buried deep in your ass." She lifts her eyebrows briefly in surprise, then grins in amusement.'
+			'She just laughs. "Don''t fill his head with lies. He was okay. You eating my pussy is what put me over the edge. He still has a lot to learn. Later losers."'
 			*nl
-			'"The little tiger has a bit of a roar. I like it." She then glances at you. "I might even be tempted to try this again. Maybe..." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close.'
-			'Artem gives you a side fist pump. "Fuck yeah, I stood up to her." Looking at him, he seems happy, but you can tell her words bothered him. Just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon, and I need to get started on my homework."'
+			'As she''s about to walk out of his room, he glances at you briefly before looking back at her.'
+			'"That might be true, but I know that I tore your ass up and from now on when we see each other at school..." He pauses while she stops and looks at him. "We''ll both know my dick was buried deep in your ass."'
+			'She lifts her eyebrows briefly in surprise, then grins in amusement. "The little tiger has a bit of a roar. I like it..." She then glances at you. "I might even be tempted to try this again. Maybe..."'
+			'She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close.'
+			'Artem gives you a side fist pump. "Fuck yeah, I stood up to her!" Looking at him, he seems happy, but you can tell her words bothered him. Just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon and I need to get started on my homework."'
 			act 'He had fun': gt 'artem_sex', 'nush3some_had_fun'
 			act 'Ask how he feels': gt 'artem_sex', 'nush3some_how_he_feels'
 		end
 		act 'Agree with Anushka':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'loathe'
+			artemQW['nush3some'] = -1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
-			'You look at her. "Nush, come on. I''m working on it. It takes a while to train boys. Even you admitted he wasn''t bad, and you did get off. Don''t worry, I promise he''ll be even better next time."'
-			'She just laughs. "Next time? I don''t know about that. You know I only like being with guys who know how to fuck." Looking at your expression, she sighs begrudgingly. "While I did get off, that was more from you licking my pussy than anything he did, but he wasn''t bad. He just needs a bit more fire." You glance over at Artem and see his shoulders slump and his grin fade away as he listens to the two of you. "Anyways, see you losers later," she adds in a teasing tone as she walks out of his room. You hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
+			'You look at her. "Nush, come on. I''m working on it. It takes a while to train boys. Even you admitted he wasn''t bad, and you did get off. I promise he''ll be even better next time."'
+			'She just laughs. "Next time? I don''t know about that. You know I only like being with guys who know how to fuck." Looking at your expression, she sighs begrudgingly. "While I did get off, that was more from you licking my pussy than anything he did, but he wasn''t bad. He just needs a bit more fire."'
+			'You glance over at Artem and see his shoulders slump and his grin fade away as he listens to the two of you. "Anyway, see you losers later," she adds in a teasing tone as she walks out of his room. You hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
 			*nl
-			'You and Artem sit in silence, but just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon, and I need to get started on my homework."'
+			'You and Artem sit in silence, but just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon and I need to get started on my homework."'
 			'You smile and try to kiss him, but he turns his head and you end up kissing his cheek. "Don''t listen to her. You''re getting better, and you''re plenty good for me."'
-			'He sighs loudly and shakes his head. "Yeah, sure. I know she''s your friend, but I just don''t and never will like her. Honestly, I don''t like how you act around her. So please do me a favour and don''t invite her to hang out with us anymore, okay?"'
+			'He sighs loudly and shakes his head. "Yeah, sure. I know she''s your friend, but I just don''t and never will like her. Honestly, I don''t like how you act around her. So please do me a favor and don''t invite her to hang out with us anymore, okay?"'
 			'You sigh and nod before he gives you a tight-lipped smile and walks you to the door.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 		end
@@ -858,23 +890,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'dislike'
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'like'
+			artemQW['nush3some_again'] = 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
-			'You don''t want to get in the middle of this. You glance at him, but don''t meet his eyes, and his grin fades as he sighs and looks at her. "Sorry I wasn''t very good."'
-			'She rolls her eyes slightly and shakes her head a little. You know she dislikes it when people won''t stand up for themselves. "What... ever... Later losers." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
+			'You don''t want to get in the middle of this. You glance at him, but don''t meet his eyes, and his grin fades as he sighs and looks at her. "Sorry I wasn''t very good..."'
+			'She rolls her eyes slightly and shakes her head. You know she dislikes it when people won''t stand up for themselves. "What. Ever. Later losers." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
 			*nl
-			'Artem still seems happy, but you can tell her words bothered him. Just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon, and I need to get started on my homework."'
+			'Artem still seems happy, but you can tell her words bothered him. Just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon and I need to get started on my homework."'
 			'You smile and kiss him again. "Don''t listen to her. You were great as always."'
 			'He snorts softly. "Sure... Thanks for standing up for me then."'
 			act 'You need to stand up for yourself':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 				'You give him a hug, but he doesn''t really return it. "I''m sorry, but she''s my friend, and I thought you could stand up for yourself."'
-				'He starts to say something, then stops and sighs before nodding his head in agreement. "You''re right. I should have stood up to her, but I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me. I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me... that she intimidates me. Not sure what I expected from her anyway. She is who she is."'
+				'He starts to say something, then stops and sighs before nodding in agreement. "You''re right. I should have stood up to her, but I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me. I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me... That she intimidates me. I''m not sure what I expected from her anyway. She is who she is."'
 				*nl
 				'You give him another hug. "She''s more bark than bite. Plus, you just got to fuck one of your bullies in the ass."'
-				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right. I guess I got her back a little; hopefully it hurt." He blushes at his own words and glances at you. "Do you think it did?"'
-				'You smile at him and give him a reassuring look. "Hell yes, how you were pounding her ass there at the end. I bet her ass will be sore tomorrow too." He glances at you, then laughs, and you laugh with him.'
+				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right! I guess I got her back a little; hopefully it hurt." He blushes at his own words and glances at you. "Do you think it did?"'
+				'You smile at him and give him a reassuring look. "Hell yes, how you were pounding her there at the end. I bet her ass will be sore tomorrow too." He glances at you, then laughs, and you laugh with him.'
+
 				'"Thanks, I needed that." He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. Hoping this didn''t bother him, you head on your way.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 			end
@@ -887,44 +921,93 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 				'He starts to say something. "No... I''m nearly an adult, and I should''ve stood up to her. My girlfriend shouldn''t have to defend me, but I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me that she intimidates me."'
 				*nl
 				'You give him another hug. "She''s more bark than bite. Plus, you just got to roughly fuck one of your bullies in the ass."'
-				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right. Not only did I get to fuck her, but I tore her ass up, something I never dreamed would ever happen, so yeah, I think I''m good." He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. Hoping this didn''t bother him, you head on your way.'
+				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right! Not only did I get to fuck her, but I tore her ass up, something I never dreamed would ever happen. Yeah, I think I''m good."'
+				'He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. Hoping this didn''t bother him, you head on your way.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 			end
 		end
 	elseif artemQW['rough_anal_nush'] = 2:
 		'"I must admit, I was expecting this to be lackluster at best, but you surprised me, Artem. You were better than I expected." She looks directly at you and bites her lower lip. "You trained your nerd pretty well. I might be tempted to try again one day."'
 		'You grin at her comment. "I told you he was a great lover."'
-		'She just laughs. "Maybe, he is a great ''lover''." She makes it sound like it''s a bad thing. "But he''s still not a great fuck, at least not yet."'
+		'She just laughs. "Sure, he''s a great ''lover''," She makes it sound like it''s a bad thing. "But he''s still not a great fuck, at least not yet."'
+		'You''re pretty sure she''s just teasing him on purpose and doesn''t really mean it, but you doubt Artem will understand that.'
 		act 'Defend Artem':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'love'
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'like'
+			artemQW['nush3some_again'] = 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Ha!" you say in a scolding tone. "He did great. He tore your slutty ass up." You turn to Artem "You were great. Nush is just being a bitch."'
+			'"Ha!" you say in a scolding tone. "He did great. He tore your slutty ass up." You then turn to Artem. "You were great. Nush is just being a bitch."'
 			'She just laughs. "He was pretty good, but not great, and we both know it. Hell, look at him. Even he knows it." You glance over at Artem and his shoulders slump and his grin fades.'
+			'As she''s about to leave his room, he glances at you before looking back to her, then straightens up his shoulders. He seems more confident all of a sudden.'
 			*nl
-			'As she starts to walk out of his room, he glances at you for a moment before looking back to her, then straightens up his shoulders and something changes. He seems more confident all of a sudden. "That might be true. I might not be, as you put it, a great fuck, but what''s also true is that you bent over and presented your ass to me. I was tearing your ass up and showed you no mercy, and you couldn''t do anything about it. So you just meekly let me, a lowly nerd, make you my bitch." She lifts her eyebrows in surprise at what he says. She starts to retort, but before she can, he finishes. "When we see each other at school, we''ll both know what happened."'
+			'"That might be true. I might not be, as you put it, a great fuck, but what''s also true is that I bent you over and tore your ass up, showing you no mercy, and you couldn''t do anything about it. You just meekly and submissively took it, from a lowly nerd like me, while I made you my bitch."'
+			'She lifts her eyebrows in surprise. She starts to retort, but before she can, he continues. "When we see each other at school, we''ll both know that I totally made you my bitch, and nothing will ever change that."'
 			act 'Let him get it all out':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
-				'Once he finishes, an amused grin appears on her flushed face as she glances over at you. You just shrug and she looks back at him. "Wow, the mouth on him. Where was this Artem earlier? Would you have even done any of that if <<$pcs_nickname>> and I hadn''t encouraged you?" She steps up to him and places a hand on his chest while looking him in the eye and shakes her head.'
+				'Once he finishes, an amused grin appears on her flushed face as she glances over at you. You just shrug and she looks back at him. "Wow, the mouth on him. Where was this Artem earlier? Would you have even done any of that if <<$pcs_nickname>> and I hadn''t encouraged you?" She steps up to him and places a hand on his chest while looking him in the eye.'
+				'"I don''t think so," she says. "I like this new Artem. He''s sexy, but I don''t buy that it''s you." She then walks out, stopping at the door to glance back one last time. "At least not yet," she says with a grin.'
 				*nl
-				'"I don''t think so. I like this new Artem. He''s sexy, but I don''t buy that it''s you." She then walks out, stopping at the door to glance back one last time. "At least not yet," she says with a grin before walking out of his room. You hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
-				'After she leaves, you see his grin has faded and he sighs. He still seems happy, but you can tell her words bothered him some. Just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon, and I need to get started on my homework."'
-				act 'He had fun': gt 'artem_sex', 'nush3some_had_fun'
-				act 'Ask how he feels': gt 'artem_sex', 'nush3some_how_he_feels'
+				'He doesn''t back down from her. "You''re wrong and next time you''ll know it too."'
+				'She snorts. "Who says there will be a next time?"'
+				'He steps up right to her, crowding her and forcing her to take a step back. "I do," he says in a firm voice and quickly glances at you before looking back at Anushka. You don''t know if he was looking from encouragement from you or checking if he crossed a line, but he seems to believe he''s good to go as he crowds her even more. "I finally figured you out. Deep down, you like guys that bully, dominate and humiliate you." He keeps crowding her and making her back up more and more until he finally corners her.'
+
+				act 'Just watch':
+					*clr & cla
+					artemQW['nush3some_again'] = 2
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
+					'She smiles at him when her back bumps into the corner and she''s unable to back up more. "Is that so?" She tries to act tough and defiant, but her breathless tone confirms what he''s saying.'
+					'You can''t see his face, but his tone says he''s in command and knows it. He places his hands on the wall on each side of her, giving her nowhere to go. "Yeah, it is. I also know you loved getting fucked and dominated by a nerd, just like you''re loving this..." He pulls his right hand off the wall and slides it up her skirt, causing her to gasp. "Your wet pussy agrees with me. The idea of getting owned and humiliated by a nerd like me makes it even better, doesn''t it?"'
+					*nl
+					'You can just barely see her face. She looks very aroused and also in as much shock as you are by how Artem is acting; you''ve never seen him like this. When she doesn''t respond, he places his right hand back on the wall to block any escape. "Say it!" he demands in a forceful tone.'
+					'"Yes..." she replies so quietly that you can barely hear her. There''s a pause as she looks up at him towering over her. "I love the idea of a nerd making me his bitch... And humiliating me..." she continues.'
+					act 'Keep watching':
+						*clr & cla
+						artemQW['nush3some_again'] = 3
+						anushkaQW['artem_dom'] = 1
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
+						'You see his shoulders relax as his hands slide down from the wall and he steps back to make space for her. "Like I said, there will be another time. We''ll let you know where and when, got it?"'
+						'She casts her eyes down and bites her lower lip as she nods. "Yes..." she says softly.'
+						'He crosses his arms and looks down at her. "Good. Now get your little ass out of here," he orders and she moves past him to the door and opens up the door. As she does, Artem reaches out and slaps her ass hard enough that the sound carries across the room.'
+						'As Artem turns to you, you can see a grin on her face that tells you she loved ever moment of that and she gives you a wink as she closes the door. You hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
+						act 'Ask how he feels':
+							*clr & cla
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
+							'He walks back over and sits next to you. You smile and kiss him. "I won''t lie, I was impressed by how you handled her. How did it make you feel?"'
+							'He looks thoughtful for a second. "You know what? I feel great, I really do." He pauses, as if he''s considering what to say next. "I don''t know... I just suddenly had enough and thought I push back for once. As I told her what I thought and realized she was backing down from me... from ME!" He shakes his head. "That''s when I had a real surge of confidence, so I pushed back even more. That''s... That''s when it suddenly hit me: She liked it and... I don''t know, it''s like so many things suddenly clicked in my head and it just seemed so much better."'
+							*nl
+							'You give his hand a reassuring squeeze. "I''m glad you had this moment. Confidence looks good on you."'
+							'He turns his head and looks at you. "Thanks, but it was your encouragement that helped me get here. Without you..." He trails off.'
+							'You shake your head. "No. While I might have helped get you here a little faster, this is who you always were, who I always saw you to be. You would have gotten here on your own eventually, but I''m just glad I could help."'
+							'He smiles. "Thanks... I still can''t really believe I fucked Nush like a slut and then made her my bitch afterwards, forcing her to agree." He sounds elated beyond words and looks like the weight of the world has lifted off him.'
+
+							act 'Ask if he wants to do it again':
+								*clr & cla
+								minut += 10
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
+								'"So does that mean you want to do this again?" you ask.'
+								'He nods. "Hell yes! Next time I''m going to totally own her!" Then he looks at you and blushes a bit. "I mean I''d like to, if you want to, of course."'
+								'You grin at how he can be so dominant one moment, but care about your feelings the next. "You made sure she said say yes already, so why waste that? I''ll let you know when I''m ready to invite her again." You also want to talk to Anushka about this now.'
+								'He nods. "Of course, just let me know." The two of you then talk for a while before he stops. "My mom will be home soon and I need to get started on my homework."'
+								act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
+							end
+						end
+					end
+				end
 			end
 		end
 		act 'Agree with Anushka':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'loathe'
+			artemQW['nush3some'] = -1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
 			'You look at her. "Nush, come on. I''m working on it. It takes a while to train boys. He''ll be even better next time, I promise."'
-			'She just laughs. "Next time? I don''t know about that. You know I only like being with guys that know how to fuck you properly. Artem shows some promise, but he''s a long way from that. Even with prompting from both of us, he was only okay." You glance over at Artem and see his shoulders slump and his grin fade as he listens to the two of you. "Anyway, I need to get going. Later losers." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
+			'She just laughs. "Next time? I don''t know about that. You know I only like being with guys that know how to fuck me properly. Artem shows some promise, but he''s a long way from that. Even with prompting from both of us, he was only okay." You glance over at Artem and see his shoulders slump and his grin fade as he listens to the two of you. "Anyway, I need to get going. Later losers." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
 			*nl
-			'You and Artem sit in silence, but just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon, and I need to get started on my homework."'
+			'You and Artem sit in silence, but just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon and I need to get started on my homework."'
 			'You smile and try to kiss him, but he turns his head and you end up kissing his cheek. "Don''t listen to her. You''re getting better, and you''re good enough for me."'
 			'He sighs loudly and shakes his head. "Yeah, sure. It''s okay. Not sure what I expected from her, she is who she is, but hey, I got to fuck her in the ass, something I never dreamed would ever happen, so I''m good." He gives you a tight-lipped smile before walking you to the door.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
@@ -933,14 +1016,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'dislike'
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'like'
+			artemQW['nush3some_again'] = 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
 			'You don''t want to get in the middle of this. You glance at him, but don''t meet his eyes as he takes a breath. "Is that so? Then why were you asking me to slow down then, huh?"'
-			'She snorts. "Oh, I''ll give it to you that for the last few minutes, you started to actually fucked me like a man, but that was only after <<$pcs_nickname>> and I encouraged you several times." She steps up close to him and taps him on the chest. "Which means you have it in you, but where was that earlier, hmm? The last few minutes don''t make up for the rest."'
-			'His grin fades and he sighs. "Sorry I wasn''t very good."'
+			'She snorts. "Oh, I''ll give it to you that for the last few minutes, you started to actually fuck me like a man, but that was only after <<$pcs_nickname>> and I encouraged you several times." She steps up close to him and taps him on the chest. "Which means you have it in you, but where was that earlier, hmm? The last few minutes don''t make up for the rest."'
+			'His grin fades and he sighs. "Sorry I wasn''t very good..."'
 			*nl
-			'She rolls her eyes and shakes her head. You know she dislikes it when people won''t stand up for themselves. "What... ever... Later losers." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
-			'As she leaves, you can see he still seems happy, but tell her words bothered him. Just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon, and I need to get started on my homework."'
+			'She rolls her eyes and shakes her head. You know she dislikes it when people won''t stand up for themselves. "What. Ever. Later losers." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
+			'As she leaves, you can see he still seems happy, but tell her words bothered him. Just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon and I need to get started on my homework."'
 			'You smile and kiss him again. "Don''t listen to her. You were great as always."'
 			'He snorts softly. "Sure... Thanks for standing up for me then."'
 			act 'You need to stand up for yourself':
@@ -948,15 +1032,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 				'You give him a hug, but he doesn''t really return it. "I''m sorry, but she''s my friend, and I thought you could stand up for yourself."'
-				'He starts to say something, then stops and sighs before nodding his head in agreement. "You''re right. I should have stood up to her, but I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me. I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me... that she intimidates me. Hell, even she was right. I was pretty meek and passive until the very end."'
+				'He starts to say something, then stops and sighs before nodding his head in agreement. "You''re right. I should have stood up to her, but I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me. I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me... That she intimidates me. Hell, she was right! I was pretty meek and passive until the very end."'
 				act 'Look on the bright side':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 					'You give him a hug. "She''s more bark than bite, but look on the bright side. You just got to fuck one of your bullies in the ass."'
-					'He laughs at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right. I guess I got her back a little. Hopefully it hurt." He blushes at his own words and glances at you. "Do you think it did?"'
+					'He laughs at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right! I guess I got her back a little. Hopefully it hurt." He blushes at his own words and glances at you. "Do you think it did?"'
 					*nl
-					'You smile at him and give him a reassuring look. "Hell yeah, with how you were pounding her ass there at the end? You felt her trying to pull away! I bet her asshole feels like it''s on fire right now and will be really sore tomorrow."'
-					'He looks at you and laughs even more, and you laugh with him. "Thanks, I needed that." Looking at him, he seems happy, but you can tell her words bothered him. Just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon, and I need to get started on my homework."'
+					'You smile at him and give him a reassuring look. "Hell yeah, with how you were pounding her there at the end? You felt her trying to pull away! I bet her asshole feels like it''s on fire right now and will be really sore tomorrow."'
+					'He looks at you and laughs even more, and you laugh with him. "Thanks, I needed that." Looking at him, he seems happy, but you can tell her words bothered him. Just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon and I need to get started on my homework."'
 					act 'He had fun': gt 'artem_sex', 'nush3some_had_fun'
 					act 'Ask how he feels': gt 'artem_sex', 'nush3some_how_he_feels'
 				end
@@ -974,32 +1058,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 				'You give him a hug, but he doesn''t really return it. "I''m sorry. I should have stood up for you."'
-				'He starts to say something. "No. I''m nearly a adult and I should have stood up to her! I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me, but I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me, that she intimidates me. She was right; I was pretty meek and passive until the very end when you both encouraged me."'
+				'"No. I''m nearly an adult and I should have stood up to her! I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me, but I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me that she intimidates me. She was right; I was pretty meek and passive until the very end when you both encouraged me."'
 				*nl
 				'You give him a hug. "She''s more bark than bite. Plus, you just got to fuck one of your bullies in the ass."'
-				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right. Not only did I get to fuck her, but I tore her ass up, something I never dreamed would ever happen. Yeah, I think I''m good." He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. Hoping this didn''t bother him, you head on your way.'
+				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right! Not only did I get to fuck her, but I tore her ass up, something I never dreamed would ever happen. Yeah, I think I''m good." He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. Hoping this didn''t bother him, you head on your way.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 			end
 		end
 	else
-		'"It wasn''t nearly as bad as I expected it to be. Don''t get me wrong, it wasn''t good either, but I expected it to be terrible. I''m just disappointed with a case of girl blue balls. I''ll need to rub one out tonight." She looks directly at you and smirks. "You still have a lot of work training your nerd to fuck like a man." You glance at Artem and see her words hit home.'
+		'"It wasn''t nearly as bad as I expected it to be. Don''t get me wrong, it wasn''t good either, but I expected it to be terrible. I''m just disappointed with a case of girl blue balls. I''ll need to rub one out tonight." She looks directly at you and smirks. "You still have a lot of work training your nerd to fuck like a man."'
+		'You glance at Artem and see her words hit home.'
 		act 'Defend Artem':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'love'
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'like'
+			artemQW['nush3some_again'] = 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Nush!" you say in a scolding tone. "He did just fine." You lean over and kiss him quickly. "You were great. Nush is just being a bitch!"'
-			'She just laughs. "Don''t lie to him. He needs to hear the truth if he ever wants to get better. Hell, I couldn''t even get off with you eating me out at the same time." Sglances at him before speaking to you again. "Look at him; even he knows it." You glance over at Artem, and notice that his shoulders are slumped and his grin has faded. "Later losers. I''m off to get off." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
+			'She just laughs. "Don''t lie to him. He needs to hear the truth if he ever wants to get better. Hell, I couldn''t even get off with you eating me out at the same time." She glances at him before speaking to you again. "Look at him; even he knows it."'
+			'You glance over at Artem and notice that his shoulders are slumped and his grin has faded. "Later losers. I''m off to get off." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
 			*nl
-			'When she leaves, Artem sighs. He still seems somewhat happy, but her words have bothered him a lot. Just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon, and I need to get started on my homework."'
+			'When she leaves, Artem sighs. He still seems somewhat happy, but her words have bothered him a lot. Just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon and I need to get started on my homework."'
 			act 'Look on the bright side':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 				'You smile and kiss him again. "Look on the bright side! You got to fuck one of your bullies in the ass. How many people ever get to say that?"'
-				'He looks at you and laughs while shaking his head. "You''re right... you''re right. I just wish..."'
+				'He looks at you and laughs while shaking his head. "You''re right... I just wish..."'
 				'You look at him. "Wish what?"'
-				'He sighs. "I wish I had taken better advantage of the situation, maybe really paid her back some for all the teasing she''s put me through over the years."' 
+				'He sighs. "I wish I had taken better advantage of the situation, maybe really paid her back for all the teasing she''s put me through over the years."' 
 				'Before you can reply, he kisses you before walking you to the door. It seems it didn''t bother him too much, so you head on your way.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 			end
@@ -1007,21 +1094,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 				'You smile and kiss him again. "Don''t listen to her. You were great as always."'
-				'He laughs and shakes his head. "It''s okay. Not sure what I expected from her; she is who she is. I''m good, honestly." He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. It seems it didn''t bother him too much, so you head on your way.'
+				'He laughs and shakes his head. "It''s okay. I''m not sure what I expected from her; she is who she is. I''m good, honestly." He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. It seems it didn''t bother him too much, so you head on your way.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 			end
 		end
 		act 'Agree with Anushka':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'loathe'
+			artemQW['nush3some'] = -1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
 			'You look at her. "Nush, come on. I''m working on it. It takes a while to train boys. He''ll be even better next time, I promise."'
-			'She just laughs. "No, I don''t think so. There won''t be a next time. You know I only like being with guys that know how to fuck you good, ones that can get me off." You glance over at Artem and see his shoulders slump and his grin fades as he listens to the two of you. "Anyway, this was a mistake I don''t plan on repeating. Later losers." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
+			'She just laughs. "No, I don''t think so. There won''t be a next time. You know I only like being with guys that know how to fuck me good, ones that can get me off." You glance over at Artem and see his shoulders slump and his grin fades as he listens to the two of you. "Anyway, this was a mistake I don''t plan on repeating. Later losers." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
 			*nl
-			'You and Artem sit in silence, but just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon, and I need to get started on my homework."'
+			'You and Artem sit in silence, but just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon and I need to get started on my homework."'
 			'You smile and try to kiss him, but he turns his head and you end up kissing his cheek. "Don''t listen to her; you getting better, and you''re good enough for me."'
-			'He sighs loudly and shakes his head. "Yeah, sure. I know she''s your friend, but I just don''t and never will like her. Honestly, I don''t like how you act around her. So please do me a favour and don''t invite her to hang out with us anymore, okay?"'
+			'He sighs loudly and shakes his head. "Yeah, sure. I know she''s your friend, but I just don''t and never will like her. Honestly, I don''t like how you act around her. So please do me a favor and don''t invite her to hang out with us anymore, okay?"'
 			'You sigh and nod before he gives you a tight-lipped smile and walks you to the door.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 		end
@@ -1029,25 +1117,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'dislike'
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'like'
+			artemQW['nush3some_again'] = 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
-			'You don''t want to get in the middle of this. You glance at him, but don''t meet his eyes, and his grin fades as he sighs and looks at her. "Sorry I wasn''t very good."'
+			'You don''t want to get in the middle of this. You glance at him, but don''t meet his eyes, and his grin fades as he sighs and looks at her. "Sorry I wasn''t very good..."'
 			'She rolls her eyes slightly and shakes her head. You know she dislikes it when people won''t stand up for themselves. "Not good? Dude, you couldn''t even get me off!"'
-			'He blushes at the comment. "Sorry," he says meekly while looking down at the floor, unable to meet her gaze.'
-			'What... ever... Later losers." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
+			'He blushes at the comment. "Sorry..." he says meekly while looking down at the floor, unable to meet her gaze.'
+			'"What. Ever. Later losers." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
 			*nl
-			'Once she leaves, you can tell her words bothered him a lot, but just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon, and I need to get started on my homework."'
+			'Once she leaves, you can tell her words bothered him a lot, but just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon and I need to get started on my homework."'
 			'You smile and kiss him again. "Don''t listen to her. You were great as always."'
 			'He snorts softly. "Sure... Thanks for standing up for me then."'
 			act 'Stand up for himself':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 				'You give him a hug, but he doesn''t really return it. "I''m sorry, but she''s my friend, and I thought you could stand up for yourself."'
-				'He starts to say something, then stops and sighs before nodding his head in agreement. "You''re right. I should have stood up to her, but I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me. I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me... that she intimidates me. Not sure what I expected from her anyway. She is who she is."'
+				'He starts to say something, then stops and sighs before nodding in agreement. "You''re right. I should have stood up to her, but I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me. I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me... That she intimidates me. I''m not sure what I expected from her anyway. She is who she is."'
 				*nl
 				'You give him another hug. "She''s more bark than bite. Plus, you just got to fuck one of your bullies in the ass."'
-				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right. I guess I got her back a little; hopefully it hurt." He blushes at his own words and glances at you. "Do you think it did?"'
-				'You smile at him and give him a reassuring look. "Hell yes, how you were pounding her ass there at the end. I bet her ass will be sore tomorrow too." He glances at you, then laughs, and you laugh with him.'
+				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right! I guess I got her back a little; hopefully it hurt." He blushes at his own words and glances at you. "Do you think it did?"'
+				'You smile at him and give him a reassuring look. "Hell yes, how you were pounding her there at the end. I bet her ass will be sore tomorrow too." He glances at you, then laughs, and you laugh with him.'
 				'"Thanks, I needed that." He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. Hoping this didn''t bother him, you head on your way.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 			end
@@ -1057,10 +1146,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 				'You give him a hug, but he doesn''t really return it. "I''m sorry. I should have stood up for you."'
-				'He starts to say something. "No. I''m nearly a adult and I should have stood up to her! I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me, but I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me, that she intimidates me. She was right; I was pretty meek and passive until the very end when you both encouraged me."'
+				'"No. I''m nearly an adult and I should have stood up to her! I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me, but I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me that she intimidates me. She was right; I was pretty meek and passive until the very end when you both encouraged me."'
 				*nl
 				'You give him a hug. "She''s more bark than bite. Plus, you just got to fuck one of your bullies in the ass."'
-				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right. Not only did I get to fuck her, but I tore her ass up, something I never dreamed would ever happen. Yeah, I think I''m good." He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. Hoping this didn''t bother him, you head on your way.'
+				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right! Not only did I get to fuck her, but I tore her ass up, something I never dreamed would ever happen. Yeah, I think I''m good." He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. Hoping this didn''t bother him, you head on your way.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 			end
 		end
@@ -1071,7 +1160,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush3some_had_fun':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 	'You smile and kiss him again. "I''m glad you had fun."'
-	'He laughs and hugs you. "Thank you, thank you for everything. I had a great time. I really needed that." He kisses you again before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him anymore, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acted. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
+	'He laughs and hugs you. "Thank you, thank you for everything. I had a great time. I really needed that."'
+	'He kisses you again before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acted. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
 	act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 end
 
@@ -1085,45 +1175,48 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush3some_how_he_feels':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 		'You smile at him. "I''m glad you had fun."'
-		'He laughs and hugs you. "Thank you, thank you for everything. I had a great time. I really needed that." He kisses you before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him anymore, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acted. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
+		'He laughs and hugs you. "Thank you, thank you for everything. I had a great time. I really needed that."'
+		'He kisses you before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him anymore, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acted. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 	end
 	act 'Press him':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 		'You cock your head slightly. "You wish what?"'
-		'He shakes his head and blushes. "Nothing, forget I said anything."'
+		'He shakes his head and blushes. "Nothing, forget I said anything..."'
 		'You grin at how adorable he''s acting. "Artem, please. Relationships are about sharing and I want to know how you feel."'
-		'He looks at you before nodding slightly. "Okay... yeah, you''re right. If it was you, I would want to know what you thought too." He pauses and takes a deep breath as if steadying himself. "I just wish I had taken charge more. I know you encouraged me, but I wish I''d done it myself or even gone further."'
+		'He looks at you before nodding slightly. "Okay... Yeah, you''re right. If it was you, I would want to know what you thought too." He pauses and takes a deep breath, as if steadying himself. "I just wish I had taken charge more. I know you encouraged me, but I wish I''d done it myself or even gone further."'
 		act 'Let him continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 			if artemQW['rough_anal_nush'] = 2:
-				'He pauses again. "I just wish I''d grabbed her by the hips sooner and fucked her ass as hard as I could until she felt like her asshole was on fire." His tone becomes harder and more vicious before he realizes what he said and blushes. "I mean, I don''t want to really hurt her..." He looks at you and blushes more. "Okay, maybe hurt her a little... Just to get some payback for all the times she and others tormented me at school. It would have been nice to really get some revenge you know?" He ends it looking and sounding a little sheepish.'
+				'He pauses again. "I just wish I''d grabbed her by the hips and fucked her ass as hard as I could until she felt like her asshole was on fire." His tone becomes harder and more vicious before he realizes what he said and blushes. "I mean, I don''t want to really hurt her..." He looks at you and blushes more. "Okay, maybe hurt her a little... Just to get some payback for all the times she tormented me at school. It would have been nice to really get some revenge, you know?" He looks and sounds a little sheepish.'
 				'You''re a little surprised by this outburst, but also proud that he''s gaining self-confidence. "Wow! I didn''t know the bullying bothered you this much." He starts to say something, but you keep going. "But I get it, I really do. She and the other gopniks have bullied and sometimes hurt you, and you just wanted some payback. It''s only natural."'
 				'He relaxes a little, seemingly relieved you''re not upset by what he just said. "Yeah... I just regret missing my only chance to really get some payback." You think about what he said. You know you could likely talk her back into coming back eventually, but do you want to share your boyfriend with her again?'
 			else
-				'He pauses again. "At the end, I wish I had just grabbed her by the hips and fucked her ass as hard as I could until she pleaded with me to stop." His tone becomes harder and more vicious before he realizes what he said and blushes. "I mean, I don''t want to really hurt her..." He looks at you and blushes more. "Okay, maybe hurt her a little... Just to get some payback for all the times she and others tormented me at school. It would have been nice to really get some revenge you know?" He ends it looking and sounding a little sheepish.'
+				'He pauses again. "At the end, I wish I had just grabbed her by the hips and fucked her ass as hard as I could until she pleaded with me to stop." His tone becomes harder and more vicious before he realizes what he said and blushes. "I mean, I don''t want to really hurt her..." He looks at you and blushes more. "Okay, maybe hurt her a little... Just to get some payback for all the times she tormented me at school. It would have been nice to really get some revenge, you know?" He looks and sounds a little sheepish.'
 				'You''re a little surprised by this outburst, but also proud that he''s gaining self-confidence. "Wow! I didn''t know the bullying bothered you this much." He starts to say something, but you keep going. "But I get it, I really do. She and the other gopniks have bullied and sometimes hurt you, and you just wanted to get a little revenge. It''s only natural."'
 				'He relaxes a little, seemingly relieved you''re not upset by what he just said. "Yeah... I just regret missing my only chance to really get some payback." You think about what he said. You know you could likely talk her back into coming back eventually, but do you want to share your boyfriend with her again?'
 			end
 			act 'Agree he missed his chance': 
 				*clr & cla
+				artemQW['nush3some'] = -1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You smile at him. "Yeah, but at least you had fun and got her back a little."'
-				'He laughs and hugs you. "You''re right. Thank you for everything. I had a great time. I really needed that." He kisses you before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him anymore, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acted. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
+				'You smile at him. "Yeah you did, but at least you had fun and got her back a little."'
+				'He laughs and hugs you. "You''re right. Thank you for everything. I had a great time. I really needed that."'
+				'He kisses you before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acted. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 			end
 			act 'Invite her again':
 				*clr & cla
-				artemQW['nush3some'] += 1
+				artemQW['nush3some_again'] = 2
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 				'It was fun and seems to have helped Artem feel more confident. "Maybe not. You heard what she said."'
 				'He seems unsure. "Yeah, she said maybe, but that sounded more like a polite no to me..." He pauses and gives you a hopeful look. "Do you think she might be willing to do it again?" He''s trying to hide his eagerness from you.'
 				*nl
 				'You nod. "Yeah, I think I can talk her into it. Do you want me to?"'
-				'He blushes, but nods. "Yeah. Yeah, I think I do." You consider it, but he''s all fired up to use it as an excuse to get back at her. You could tell him not to be too rough, or encourage him to let out his frustration on her to gain more confidence. You don''t think she would mind; she is into the rough stuff.'
+				'He blushes, but nods. "Yeah. Yeah, I think I do." You consider it, but he''s all fired up to use it as an excuse to get back at her. You could tell him not to be too rough, or encourage him to let out his frustration on her to gain more confidence. You don''t think she would mind; she''s into the rough stuff after all.'
 				act 'Only if you''re nice':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1132,18 +1225,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush3some_how_he_feels':
 					*nl
 					if grupTipe = 4:
 						'He then looks like he''s suddenly thought of something. "Hey, you''re friends with all the gopnik girls. Do you think you could talk the rest of them into it too?"'
-						'You give him a slightly shocked look. He''s asking you to set him up with other girls so he can get a little revenge on them. "I''ll think about it. We can talk about it some other time." He nods in understanding, then gives you a kiss and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him anymore, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acts. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
+						'You give him a slightly shocked look. He''s asking you to set him up with other girls so he can get a little revenge on them. "I''ll think about it... We can talk about it some other time..."'
+						'He nods in understanding, then gives you a kiss and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acts. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
 					else
-						'He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him anymore, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acts. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
+						'He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acts. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
 					end
 					act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 				end
 				act 'Only if you''re really rough':
 					*clr & cla
-					artemQW['nush3some'] += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You think for a few seconds before nodding. Anushka likes the rough stuff, and more importantly, you think this will do Artem some good. "Okay, I''ll try and talk her into it, but..." You pause, and can tell he''s expecting you to ask him to not be too rough next time. "Only if you promise to not hold back."'
+					'You think for a few seconds before nodding. Anushka likes the rough stuff, and more importantly, you think this will do Artem some good. "Okay, I''ll try and talk her into it, but..." You pause and can tell he''s expecting you to ask him to not be too rough next time. "Only if you promise to not hold back."'
 					'He looks surprised by your comment. "Really!?"' 
 					act 'Yes':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -1153,7 +1246,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush3some_how_he_feels':
 							'He looks dumbfounded as he sits and looks at you. "So let me get this straight. You''re okay with me hate fucking your friend for all the years she and the other gopniks bullied me? You''re okay with me taking my frustration, humiliation and anger out on her?"'
 							'You giggle at his expression. "If that''s what you need, then yes, that''s exactly what I want you to do."'
 							*nl
-							'He looks and sounds sceptical. "And you think she''ll be okay with it?"'
+							'He looks and sounds skeptical. "And you think she''ll be okay with it?"'
 							'"It doesn''t matter what she wants; this is about you. Like her, the rest didn''t care what you wanted when they bullied you. Besides, Nush is a good sport. She''ll understand that you need a little payback, especially after what you said to her today." You think about telling him that you''re pretty sure she''s into being dominated, but that might ruin it for him, and if this makes him happy, it''s a win-win for everyone. "So, is that a yes?"'
 							act 'Continue':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -1163,7 +1256,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush3some_how_he_feels':
 								'He blushes again. "Sorry, I didn''t mean for it to sound like that."'
 								*nl
 								'You hug him. "It''s okay. I know how you meant it."'
-								'He returns the hug. "Thank you, I think I needed this more than I realized." It seems like a weight has been lifted from his shoulders as he gives you a kiss before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him anymore, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acted. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
+								'He returns the hug. "Thank you, I think I needed this more than I realized." It seems like a weight has been lifted from his shoulders as he gives you a kiss before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acted. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
 								act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 							end
 						else
@@ -1174,7 +1267,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush3some_how_he_feels':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 								'He starts nodding. "Hell yes! Oh man, I can''t wait. Next time, I won''t show her any mercy at all."'
-								'You laugh and roll your eyes slightly at him. It seems like a weight has been lifted from his shoulders as he gives you a kiss before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him anymore, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acted. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
+								'You laugh and roll your eyes slightly at him. It seems like a weight has been lifted from his shoulders as he gives you a kiss before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acted. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
 								act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 							end
 						end
@@ -1188,70 +1281,113 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_first':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 3
+	artemQW['artem_dom'] -= 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon3.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slip on the harness, and he helps you buckle it in place as he takes his pants off. You can tell by how he''s acting that he''s nervous and do your best to give him reassuring smiles, but it doesn''t seem to help. Once the harness is in place, you look at him. "Come and suck my dick, baby," you tell him with a grin.'
+	'You slide the harness on and he helps you buckle it in place before he takes his pants off. You can tell he''s nervous and do your best to give him reassuring smiles, but it doesn''t seem to help.'
+	'Once the harness is in place, you look at him. "Come and suck my dick, baby," you tell him with a grin.'
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon4.jpg"></center>'
-		'He gets on his knees in front of you and grabs the back of your legs with his hands before slowly opening his mouth and taking the dildo in. He starts slowly sucking on it; by his expression, you don''t think he''s really into it, but is doing it to make you happy. "Okay, take off your shirt and get on the bed."'
+		'He gets on his knees in front of you and grabs the back of your legs with his hands before slowly opening his mouth and taking the dildo in. He starts slowly sucking on it; by his expression, you don''t think he''s really into it, but is doing it to make you happy.'
+		'"Okay, take off your shirt and get on the bed," you tell him.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay_give', 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Get the lube':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon5.jpg"></center>'
-			'He stops sucking on the dildo and takes off his shirt before sitting back on the bed. You smile at him. "You need to roll over." He blushes, but rolls over onto his stomach as you open his nightstand and take out the lube he got to use on you before crawling onto the bed on your knees. You lube up the dildo before squirting some lube between his ass cheeks and working it in.'
-			*nl
+			'He stops sucking on the dildo and takes off his shirt before sitting back on the bed as you smile at him. "You need to roll over."'
+			'He blushes, but rolls over onto his stomach as you open his nightstand and take out the lube before crawling onto the bed on your knees. You lube up the dildo before squirting some lube between his ass cheeks and working it in.'
 			'He glances back over his shoulder at you. "That feels weird."'
-			'You give him a reassuring smile. "It''s okay, just take a deep breath and relax." Once he and the dildo are lubed up, you cap the bottle of lube and toss it aside. "You ready, Artem?" He just nods in response. You line up the dildo and slowly push it into his asshole until the head pops in and Artem hisses in pain, causing you to stop moving. "Just breathe." He does as you instruct, and you wait until you feel him relax before pushing the dildo further into him.'
+			'You give him a reassuring smile. "It''s okay. Just take a deep breath and relax."'
+			*nl
+			'Once he and the dildo are lubed up, you cap the bottle of lube and toss it aside. "You ready?"'
+			'He just nods in response and you line the dildo up and slowly push it into his asshole, causing him to hiss in pain.'
+			'"Just breathe," you tell him and he does as you instruct. You wait until you feel him relax before pushing the dildo further into him.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'boyStat', 'D<<strapnumber>>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon6.jpg"></center>'
-				'You start to slowly fuck him with the strapon, only thrusting about half the length of the dildo into him. "How does that feel?"'
+				'You start slowly fucking him with the strapon, only thrusting about half the length of the dildo into him. "How does that feel?"'
 				'He doesn''t answer at first. "Not as bad as I thought. It stopped hurting."'
 				'You slowly slide the entire length of the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo into his ass, causing him to moan as you climb on top of him, laying on his back as you slowly start fucking him. "Sounds like you like that."'
 				*nl
 				'He glances back over his shoulder at you. "It feels weird, but yeah, I kind of like it."'
-				'You give him a reassuring smile. "Great, because I love this. Now take a deep breath." You push it in as far as it will go and start steadily fucking him, picking up the pace as he starts moaning louder. By the sound of it, he''s starting to enjoy it.'
+				'You give him a reassuring smile. "Great, because I love this. Now take a deep breath."'
+				'You push it in as far as it will go and start steadily fucking him, picking up the pace as he starts moaning louder. By the sound of it, he''s starting to enjoy it.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 2
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Start fucking him hard and fast':
 					*clr & cla
-					minut += 5
-					artemQW[strapon] = -1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon7.jpg"></center>'
-					'You start to pick up speed until you''re really hammering his ass. "Fuck yeah, take my cock bitch!"'
-					'His moans turn to grunts, and he puts his hands back against your hips to slow you down. "Stop! That hurts!"'
-					'You don''t do as he asked. "Come on baby, just relax."'
-					'He shoves you off before sitting up and glaring at you. "What the hell, <<$pcs_nickname>>?! That hurt!"'
-					'You frown. "Sorry, I just got carried away. Forgive me?"'
-					'He sighs. "Okay, I forgive you, but that''s it. I''m not doing that again." You start to speak, but he shakes his head. "No! Never. Again. I''m going to go take a shower. Talk to you later."'
+					'You start to pick up speed until you''re really hammering his ass. "Fuck yeah, take my cock, bitch!"'
+					'He pushes his hands against your hips to slow you down. "Not so hard! That hurts!"'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 2
 					gs 'stat'
-					act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
+					act 'Keep fucking him hard':
+						*clr & cla
+						minut += 5
+						artemQW[strapon] = -1
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon6.jpg"></center>'
+						'You don''t do as he asks. "Come on baby, just relax."'
+						'His moans quickly turn to pained grunts. "Stop! That hurts!" he cries out and shoves you off before sitting up and glaring at you. "What the hell, <<$pcs_nickname>>?! That hurt!"'
+						'You frown. "Sorry, I just got carried away. Forgive me?"'
+						'He sighs. "Okay, I forgive you, but that''s it. I''m not doing that again." You''re about to speak, but he shakes his head. "No! Never. Again. I''m going to go take a shower. Talk to you later."'
+						*nl
+						'You sigh and slide the harness off before leaving his apartment.'
+						gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 2
+						gs 'stat'
+						act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
+					end
+					act 'Ease up':
+						*clr & cla
+						artemQW[strapon] = 1
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon7.jpg"></center>'
+
+						'You ease up a little, making sure not to go too hard as you lift yourself up so you can more easily thrust into him. He starts moaning a little louder as you do. "Oh... Fuck... Ah..."'
+						'You grin. "You like taking my cock in your ass, don''t you?"'
+						'He raises his head, but doesn''t look back at you. At first, you''re not sure he even heard you. "Uh... I... Ah... YES... Yes, I like it."'
+						'He keeps moaning louder, which only turns you on more, but ater several minutes, his moans start to subside. "Okay, I think we need to stop. It''s starting to hurt again."'
+						gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5
+						gs 'arousal', 'end'
+						gs 'stat'
+						act 'Continue':
+							*clr & cla
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon1.jpg"></center>'
+							'You roll off him and pull your dildo out of his ass, making him moan as you do. Once you''re off him, he quickly gets up and slides off the bed; as you watch, he starts furiously jerking off and quickly starts cumming.'
+							'"I guess you really liked it..." you say once he finishes.'
+							*nl
+							'He glances at you and turns as red as you think is humanly possible. He looks down, refusing to meet your eyes. "Yeah, it felt much better than I thought it would." He then raises his gaze to look at you. "Did you like it?"'
+							'You nod your head. "Yes, I had a lot of fun. Maybe we can do it again?"'
+							'"Let me think about it," he replies and you nod as you start removing the harness and cleaning the dildo while he cleans himself up. "I need to shower and should finish my homework. See you tomorrow?"'
+							'You nod and he kisses you before leaving his room and going to the bathroom. Placing the strap-on back in your purse, you leave his apartment with a massive grin on your face.'
+							act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
+						end
+					end
 				end
 				act 'Fuck him nice and steady':
 					*clr & cla
-					artemQW['strapon'] = 1
+					artemQW[strapon] = 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon7.jpg"></center>'
-					'You keep the pace up, making sure not to go too hard as you lift yourself up so you can more easily thrust into him. He starts moaning a little louder as you do. "Oh... fuck... Ah..."'
-					'You grin as it sounds like he''s really starting to enjoy it. "You like taking my cock in your ass, don''t you?"'
-					'He raises his head, but doesn''t look back at you. At first, you''re not sure he even heard you. "Uh... I... Ah... YES... yes, I like it." He keeps moaning louder, which only turns you on more. Finally, after several minutes of this, his moans start to subside. "Okay, I think we need to stop. It''s starting to hurt a little again."'
+					'You keep your steady pace, making sure not to go too hard as you lift yourself up so you can more easily thrust into him. He starts moaning a little louder as you do. "Oh... Fuck... Ah..."'
+					'You grin. "You like taking my cock in your ass, don''t you?"'
+					'He raises his head, but doesn''t look back at you. At first, you''re not sure he even heard you. "Uh... I... Ah... YES... Yes, I like it."'
+					'He keeps moaning louder, which only turns you on more, but after several minutes, his moans start to subside. "Okay, I think we need to stop. It''s starting to hurt again."'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Continue':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You roll off him, pulling your dildo out of his ass, making him moan as you do. Once you''re off him, he quickly gets up and slides off the bed; as you watch, he starts furiously jerking off and quickly starts cumming. "I guess you really liked it," you say once he finishes.'
-						'He glances at you and turns as red as you think is humanly possible. He looks down, refusing to meet your eyes. "Yeah, it felt much better than I thought it would." He raises his gaze to look at you. "Did you like it?"'
-						'You nod your head. "Yes, I had a lot of fun. Maybe we can do it again?"'
+						'You roll off him and pull your dildo out of his ass, making him moan as you do. Once you''re off him, he quickly gets up and slides off the bed; as you watch, he starts furiously jerking off and quickly starts cumming.'
+						'"I guess you really liked it..." you say once he finishes.'
 						*nl
-						'"Let me think about it," he replies and you nod as you start removing the harness and cleaning the dildo while he cleans himself up. "I think I need to shower, and I really should finish my homework. See you tomorrow?"'
-						'You nod. "Sure, see you tomorrow." He kisses you briefly before leaving his room and going to the bathroom. Placing the strap-on back in your purse, you leave his apartment with a massive grin on your face.'
+						'He glances at you and turns as red as you think is humanly possible. He looks down, refusing to meet your eyes. "Yeah, it felt much better than I thought it would." He then raises his gaze to look at you. "Did you like it?"'
+						'You nod your head. "Yes, I had a lot of fun. Maybe we can do it again?"'
+						'"Let me think about it," he replies and you nod as you start removing the harness and cleaning the dildo while he cleans himself up. "I need to shower and should finish my homework. See you tomorrow?"'
+						'You nod and he kisses you before leaving his room and going to the bathroom. Placing the strap-on back in your purse, you leave his apartment with a massive grin on your face.'
 						act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 					end
 				end

locations/artem_sex_uni.qsrc

@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artem_bj':
 				artemQW['bj'] += 1
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/bj4.jpg"></center>'
-				'You open your mouth and wrap your lips around his shaft while you keep stroking it with your hand. He moans loudly as soon as his cock is inside your mouth. After spending barely a few seconds sucking it, you suddenly feel a stream of cum shoot in your mouth without warning. The surprise of it causes you to pull away.'
+				'You open your mouth and wrap your lips around his shaft while you keep stroking it with your hand. He moans loudly as soon as his cock is inside your mouth. After spending barely a few seconds sucking it, you suddenly feel a stream of cum shooting into your mouth without warning. The surprise of it causes you to pull away.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 2
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Continue':
@@ -285,11 +285,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 							if analplugin = 1:
 								'He immediately grabs your buttplug and slowly pulls it out of your ass.'
 							end
-							'With his encouragement you get into a doggystyle position.'
+							'With his encouragement, you get into a doggystyle position.'
 							act 'Get butt fucked':gt 'artem_sex_uni', 'anal'
 						else
 							'You take his dick out of your mouth. "Would you like to fuck me in the ass?"'
-							'"Uh, yeah, sure," he stutters. "That sounds great." He seems a little surprised at your suggestion, but likes the idea. With his encouragement, you get into a doggystyle position.'
+							'"Uh, yeah, sure," he stutters. "That sounds great." He seems a little surprised at your suggestion but likes the idea. With his encouragement, you get into a doggystyle position.'
 							act 'Get butt fucked':gt 'artem_sex_uni', 'anal'
 						end
 					end
@@ -302,7 +302,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 							if mc_inventory['equipped_condoms'] > 0:
 								mc_inventory['equipped_condoms'] -= 1
 								noprotect = 0
-								'You grab a condom out of your purse and tell him to put it on. He struggles do so, but eventually manages to get it.'
+								'You grab a condom out of your purse and tell him to put it on. He struggles to do so, but eventually manages to get it.'
 							else
 								noprotect = 1
 								'"You do have a condom, right?" you ask.'
@@ -428,7 +428,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal':
 	act 'Anal bliss':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/firstanal2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Once you get used to his dick filling up your ass, he starts going a little deeper, but keeps thrusting gently, more making love to your ass than fucking it. You moan in pleasure and start rubbing your clit with one of your hands to make it feel better. You even start pushing back against him to take him a little deeper.'
+		'Once you get used to his dick filling up your ass, he starts going a little deeper but keeps thrusting gently, more making love to your ass than fucking it. You moan in pleasure and start rubbing your clit with one of your hands to make it feel better. You even start pushing back against him to take him a little deeper.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', -5
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -458,7 +458,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some':
 	*clr & cla
 	artemQW['nushart_oral'] = 0
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some1.jpg"></center>'
-	'He just nods and you talk about how things will go before there is a knock on the dorm room door. Hearing this, Artem gets up and answers the door, you can see Anushka standing in the hallway. He stands aside so she can walk in, he closes the door and locks it after she does. "Not a bad looking dorm room." She says.'
+	'You talk about how things will go before there''s a knock on the door. Hearing this, Artem gets up and answers it, and you see Anushka standing in the hallway. He stands aside to let her in before he closes the door and locks it. "Not a bad looking dorm room," she says.'
 	'He nods, but you can see the proud smile. "Thanks."'
 	'She looks around the room and you can see her smirking. "Yep, exactly how I pictured it. Nerd nirvana." He glances at you, but doesn''t say anything. You''re not sure if he knows how to take what she just said.'
 	*nl
@@ -610,7 +610,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_doggy':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some14.jpg"></center>'
-	'You get up, pulling yourself away from all those sensations that were threatening to overwhelm you, and slap Anushka on the thigh. "Get up and switch with me."'
+	'You get up, pulling yourself away from all those sensations that were threatening to overwhelm you and slap Anushka on the thigh. "Get up and switch with me."'
 	'She sits up and gives you a bemused look as Artem takes a step back to watch, eager to get it stuck back in. Anushka gets up and you get on the ottoman bench with your head facing Artem before you encourage her to straddle you and start licking her pussy. You push her forward so her upper body is lying on you, then slide your hands back to her ass and pull her ass cheeks apart, causing her asshole to gape a little. This is all the encouragement Artem needs as he quickly steps closer and slides his dick back up her ass. You can hear her moan loudly as he does.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 2, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -669,7 +669,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_doggy':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some14.jpg"></center>'
 						'You can hear her grunts turning back into moans as well, not to mention her already soaking wet pussy is soaking your face even more, she is getting off this big time. Your thoughts are interrupted as she answers him. "OOOHHH... I... am..." Her reply is breathless.'
 						'You can hear the excitement in his voice, it seems he is really starting to get into this. "You are what?"'
-						'"OH... OH... I''m.... the pussy.... assed bitch." She struggles to get out from the hard fucking Artem is giving her but her ever increasing soaking pussy tells you she is loving it.'
+						'"OH... OH... I''m.... the pussy.... assed bitch." She struggles to get out from the hard fucking Artem is giving her but her ever-increasing soaking pussy tells you she is loving it.'
 						*nl
 						'"That''s right you are. Now I own your ass and I''m going to tear it up because there''s nothing you can do about it!" You have to admit you wasn''t expecting him to be this assertive, seems he has grown up a bit since the Pavlovsk days.'
 						'She grips your leg tightly. "Oh fuck... Oh fuck... Not... So hard." She''s starting to resist, but is still enjoying being used.'
@@ -744,7 +744,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 			*nl
 			'You and Artem sit in silence, but just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My roommate should be home soon, and I need to still study tonight."'
 			'You smile and try to kiss him, but he turns his head and you end up kissing his cheek. "Don''t listen to her. You''re getting better, and you''re plenty good for me."'
-			'He sighs loudly and shakes his head. "Yeah, sure. I know she''s your friend, but I just don''t and never will like her. Honestly, I don''t like how you act around her. So please do me a favour and don''t invite her to hang out with us anymore, okay?"'
+			'He sighs loudly and shakes his head. "Yeah, sure. I know she''s your friend, but I just don''t and never will like her. Honestly, I don''t like how you act around her. So please do me a favor and don''t invite her to hang out with us anymore, okay?"'
 			'You sigh and nod before he gives you a tight-lipped smile and watches you leave his dorm room.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
 		end
@@ -835,8 +835,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 							*nl
 							'You give his hand a reassuring squeeze. "I''m glad you had this moment, confidence looks good on you."'
 							'He turns his head and looks at you. "Thanks, I mean it, it was your encouragement that helped me get here, with out you..." He trails off.'
-							'You shakes your head. "No while I might have helped get you here a little faster this is who you always was, who I always saw you to be, you would have got here on your own, I am just glad I could help."'
-							'He smiles to you. "Thanks... I still can''t really believe I fucked Nush like a slut and then made her my bitch afterwards, forcing her to agree." He sounds elated beyond words, he looks like the weight of the world has lifted off him. Apparently all the bullying has bothered him more than he said and now it seems to have lifted at least for now.'
+							'You shake your head. "No while I might have helped get you here a little faster this is who you always were, who I always saw you to be, you would have got here on your own, I am just glad I could help."'
+							'He smiles to you. "Thanks... I still can''t really believe I fucked Nush like a slut and then made her my bitch afterward, forcing her to agree." He sounds elated beyond words, he looks like the weight of the world has lifted off him. Apparently all the bullying has bothered him more than he said and now it seems to have lifted at least for now.'
 							act 'Ask if he wants to do it again':
 								*clr & cla
 								minut += 10
@@ -863,7 +863,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 			*nl
 			'You and Artem sit in silence, but just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My roommate should be home soon, and I need to still study tonight."'
 			'You smile and try to kiss him, but he turns his head and you end up kissing his cheek. "Don''t listen to her. You''re getting better, and you''re good enough for me."'
-			'He sighs loudly and shakes his head. "Yeah, sure. It''s okay. Not sure what I expected from her, she is who she is, but hey, I got to fuck her in the ass, something I never dreamed would ever happen, so I''m good." He pauses and frowns and then looks at you in all seriousness and says. "Look. I know she''s your friend, but I just don''t and never will like her. Honestly, I don''t like how you act around her. So please do me a favour and don''t invite her to hang out with us anymore, okay?"'
+			'He sighs loudly and shakes his head. "Yeah, sure. It''s okay. Not sure what I expected from her, she is who she is, but hey, I got to fuck her in the ass, something I never dreamed would ever happen, so I''m good." He pauses and frowns and then looks at you in all seriousness and says. "Look. I know she''s your friend, but I just don''t and never will like her. Honestly, I don''t like how you act around her. So please do me a favor and don''t invite her to hang out with us anymore, okay?"'
 			'You sigh and nod before he gives you a tight-lipped smile and watches you leave his dorm room.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
 		end
@@ -962,7 +962,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 			*nl
 			'You and Artem sit in silence, but just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My roommate should be home soon, and I need to still study tonight."'
 			'You smile and try to kiss him, but he turns his head and you end up kissing his cheek. "Don''t listen to her; you getting better, and you''re good enough for me."'
-			'He sighs loudly and shakes his head. "Yeah, sure. I know she''s your friend, but I just don''t and never will like her. Honestly, I don''t like how you act around her. So please do me a favour and don''t invite her to hang out with us anymore, okay?"'
+			'He sighs loudly and shakes his head. "Yeah, sure. I know she''s your friend, but I just don''t and never will like her. Honestly, I don''t like how you act around her. So please do me a favor and don''t invite her to hang out with us anymore, okay?"'
 			'You sigh and nod before he gives you a tight-lipped smile and walks you to the door.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
 		end
@@ -988,7 +988,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 				'He starts to say something, then stops and sighs before nodding his head in agreement. "You''re right. I should have stood up to her, but I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me. I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me... that she intimidates me. Not sure what I expected from her anyway. She is who she is."'
 				*nl
 				'You give him another hug. "She''s more bark than bite. Plus, you just got to fuck one of your bullies in the ass."'
-				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right. I guess I got her back a little; hopefully it hurt." He blushes at his own words and glances at you. "Do you think it did?"'
+				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right. I guess I got her back a little; hopefully, it hurt." He blushes at his own words and glances at you. "Do you think it did?"'
 				'You smile at him and give him a reassuring look. "Hell yes, how you were pounding her ass there at the end. I bet her ass will be sore tomorrow too." He glances at you, then laughs, and you laugh with him.'
 				'"Thanks, I needed that." He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. Hoping this didn''t bother him, you head on your way.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
@@ -999,7 +999,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 				'You give him a hug, but he doesn''t really return it. "I''m sorry. I should have stood up for you."'
-				'He starts to say something. "No. I''m nearly a adult and I should have stood up to her! I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me, but I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me, that she intimidates me. She was right; I was pretty meek and passive until the very end when you both encouraged me."'
+				'He starts to say something. "No. I''m nearly an adult and I should have stood up to her! I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me, but I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me, that she intimidates me. She was right; I was pretty meek and passive until the very end when you both encouraged me."'
 				*nl
 				'You give him a hug. "She''s more bark than bite. Plus, you just got to fuck one of your bullies in the ass."'
 				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right. Not only did I get to fuck her, but I tore her ass up, something I never dreamed would ever happen. Yeah, I think I''m good." He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. Hoping this didn''t bother him, you head on your way.'
@@ -1083,7 +1083,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush3some_how_he_feels':
 					artemQW['artem_dom'] += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You think for a few seconds before nodding. Anushka likes the rough stuff, and more importantly, you think this will do Artem some good. "Okay, I''ll try and talk her into it, but..." You pause, and can tell he''s expecting you to ask him to not be too rough next time. "Only if you promise to not hold back."'
+					'You think for a few seconds before nodding. Anushka likes the rough stuff, and more importantly, you think this will do Artem some good. "Okay, I''ll try and talk her into it, but..." You pause and can tell he''s expecting you to ask him to not be too rough next time. "Only if you promise to not hold back."'
 					'He looks surprised by your comment. "Really!?"' 
 					act 'Yes':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -1131,7 +1131,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_first':
 	artemQW['artem_dom'] -= 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon3.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slip on the harness, and he helps you buckle it in place as he takes his pants off. You can tell by how he''s acting that he''s nervous and do your best to give him reassuring smiles, but it doesn''t seem to help. Once the harness is in place, you look at him. "Come and suck my dick, baby," you tell him with a grin.'
+	'You slip on the harness and he helps you buckle it in place before he takes his pants off. You can tell he''s nervous and do your best to give him reassuring smiles, but it doesn''t seem to help. Once the harness is in place, you look at him. "Come and suck my dick, baby," you tell him with a grin.'
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon4.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1141,10 +1141,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_first':
 		act 'Get the lube':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon5.jpg"></center>'
-			'He stops sucking on the dildo and takes off his shirt before sitting back on the bed. You smile at him. "You need to roll over." He blushes, but rolls over onto his stomach as you open his nightstand and take out the lube he got to use on you before crawling onto the bed on your knees. You lube up the dildo before squirting some lube between his ass cheeks and working it in.'
+
+			'He stops sucking on the dildo and takes off his shirt before sitting back on the bed as you smile at him. "You need to roll over." He blushes, but rolls over onto his stomach as you open his nightstand and take out the lube he got to use on you before crawling onto the bed on your knees. You lube up the dildo before squirting some between his ass cheeks and working it in.'
+
 			*nl
 			'He glances back over his shoulder at you. "That feels weird."'
-			'You give him a reassuring smile. "It''s okay, just take a deep breath and relax." Once he and the dildo are lubed up, you cap the bottle of lube and toss it aside. "You ready, Artem?" He just nods in response. You line up the dildo and slowly push it into his asshole until the head pops in and Artem hisses in pain, causing you to stop moving. "Just breathe." He does as you instruct, and you wait until you feel him relax before pushing the dildo further into him.'
+			'You give him a reassuring smile. "It''s okay. Just take a deep breath and relax." Once he and the dildo are lubed up, you cap the bottle of lube and toss it aside. "You ready?" He just nods in response and you line up the dildo and slowly push it into his ass until the head pops in and he hisses in pain, causing you to stop moving. "Just breathe."'
+			'He does as you instruct, and you wait until you feel him relax before pushing the dildo further into him.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Continue':
@@ -1169,10 +1172,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_first':
 					act 'Keep fucking him hard':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 5
-						artemQW[strapon] = -1
+						artemQW['strapon'] = -1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon6.jpg"></center>'
-						'You don''t do as he asked. "Come on baby, just relax."'
-						'His his grunts turned to pained grunts. "Stop! That hurts!" He shoves you off before sitting up and glaring at you. "What the hell, <<$pcs_nickname>>?! That hurt!"'
+						'You don''t do as he asks. "Come on baby, just relax."'
+						'His grunts turn to pained groans. "Stop! That hurts!" He shoves you off before sitting up and glaring at you. "What the hell, <<$pcs_nickname>>?! That hurt!"'
 						'You frown. "Sorry, I just got carried away. Forgive me?"'
 						'He sighs. "Okay, I forgive you, but that''s it. I''m not doing that again." You start to speak, but he shakes his head. "No! Never. Again. I''m going to go take a shower. Talk to you later."'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 2
@@ -1181,46 +1184,46 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_first':
 					end
 					act 'Ease up a bit':
 						*clr & cla
-						artemQW[strapon] = 1
+						artemQW['strapon'] = 1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon7.jpg"></center>'
-						'You ease up abit, making sure not to go too hard as you lift yourself up so you can more easily thrust into him. He starts moaning a little louder as you do. "Oh... fuck... Ah..."'
+						'You ease up a bit, making sure not to go too hard as you lift yourself up so you can more easily thrust into him. He starts moaning a little louder as you do. "Oh... Fuck... Ah..."'
 						'You grin as it sounds like he''s really starting to enjoy it. "You like taking my cock in your ass, don''t you?"'
-						'He raises his head, but doesn''t look back at you. At first, you''re not sure he even heard you. "Uh... I... Ah... YES... yes, I like it." He keeps moaning louder, which only turns you on more. Finally, after several minutes of this, his moans start to subside. "Okay, I think we need to stop. It''s starting to hurt a little again."'
+						'He raises his head, but doesn''t look back at you. At first, you''re not sure he even heard you. "Uh... I... Ah... YES... Yes, I like it." He keeps moaning louder, which only turns you on more. Finally, after several minutes of this, his moans start to subside. "Okay, I think we need to stop. It''s starting to hurt a little again."'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Continue':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You roll off him, pulling your dildo out of his ass, making him moan as you do. Once you''re off him, he quickly gets up and slides off the bed; as you watch, he starts furiously jerking off and quickly starts cumming. "I guess you really liked it," you say once he finishes.'
-							'He glances at you and turns as red as you think is humanly possible. He looks down, refusing to meet your eyes. "Yeah, it felt much better than I thought it would." He raises his gaze to look at you. "Did you like it?"'
+							'You roll off him and pull your dildo out of his ass, making him moan as you do. Once you''re off him, he quickly gets up and slides off the bed; as you watch, he starts furiously jerking off and quickly starts cumming. "I guess you really liked it," you say once he finishes.'
+							'He glances at you and turns as red as you think is humanly possible. He looks down, refusing to meet your eyes. "Yeah, it felt much better than I thought it would..." He raises his gaze to look at you. "Did you like it?"'
 							'You nod your head. "Yes, I had a lot of fun. Maybe we can do it again?"'
 							*nl
 							'"Let me think about it," he replies and you nod as you start removing the harness and cleaning the dildo while he cleans himself up. "I think I need to shower, and I really should finish my homework. See you tomorrow?"'
-							'You nod. "Sure, see you tomorrow." He kisses you briefly before leaving his room and going to the bathroom. Placing the strap-on back in your purse, you leave his apartment with a massive grin on your face.'
+							'You nod. "Sure, see you tomorrow." He kisses you briefly before leaving his room and going to the bathroom. Placing the strap-on back in your purse, you leave his room with a massive grin on your face.'
 							act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
 						end
 					end
 				end
 				act 'Fuck him nice and steady':
 					*clr & cla
-					artemQW[strapon] = 1
+					artemQW['strapon'] = 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon7.jpg"></center>'
-					'You keep the pace up, making sure not to go too hard as you lift yourself up so you can more easily thrust into him. He starts moaning a little louder as you do. "Oh... fuck... Ah..."'
+					'You keep the pace up, making sure not to go too hard as you lift yourself up so you can more easily thrust into him. He starts moaning a little louder as you do. "Oh... Fuck... Ah..."'
 					'You grin as it sounds like he''s really starting to enjoy it. "You like taking my cock in your ass, don''t you?"'
-					'He raises his head, but doesn''t look back at you. At first, you''re not sure he even heard you. "Uh... I... Ah... YES... yes, I like it." He keeps moaning louder, which only turns you on more. Finally, after several minutes of this, his moans start to subside. "Okay, I think we need to stop. It''s starting to hurt a little again."'
+					'He raises his head, but doesn''t look back at you. At first, you''re not sure he even heard you. "Uh... I... Ah... YES... Yes, I like it." He keeps moaning louder, which only turns you on more. Finally, after several minutes of this, his moans start to subside. "Okay, I think we need to stop. It''s starting to hurt a little again."'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Continue':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You roll off him, pulling your dildo out of his ass, making him moan as you do. Once you''re off him, he quickly gets up and slides off the bed; as you watch, he starts furiously jerking off and quickly starts cumming. "I guess you really liked it," you say once he finishes.'
-						'He glances at you and turns as red as you think is humanly possible. He looks down, refusing to meet your eyes. "Yeah, it felt much better than I thought it would." He raises his gaze to look at you. "Did you like it?"'
+						'You roll off him and pull your dildo out of his ass, making him moan as you do. Once you''re off him, he quickly gets up and slides off the bed; as you watch, he starts furiously jerking off and quickly starts cumming. "I guess you really liked it," you say once he finishes.'
+						'He glances at you and turns as red as you think is humanly possible. He looks down, refusing to meet your eyes. "Yeah, it felt much better than I thought it would..." He raises his gaze to look at you. "Did you like it?"'
 						'You nod your head. "Yes, I had a lot of fun. Maybe we can do it again?"'
 						*nl
 						'"Let me think about it," he replies and you nod as you start removing the harness and cleaning the dildo while he cleans himself up. "I think I need to shower, and I really should finish my homework. See you tomorrow?"'
-						'You nod. "Sure, see you tomorrow." He kisses you briefly before leaving his room and going to the bathroom. Placing the strap-on back in your purse, you leave his apartment with a massive grin on your face.'
+						'You nod. "Sure, see you tomorrow." He kisses you briefly before leaving his room and going to the bathroom. Placing the strap-on back in your purse, you leave his room with a massive grin on your face.'
 						act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
 					end
 				end

locations/artstudia.qsrc

@@ -5,6 +5,7 @@ menu_off = 1
 $location_type = 'secluded'
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bodimod1':
+	minut += 5
 	cla
 	*clr
 	gs'stat'
@@ -14,18 +15,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bodimod1':
 	act 'Leave':gt'ugol'
 	
 	if arts = 1:
-		act 'Go to the art studio': artsb = 1 & gt'artstudia','bodimod2'
+		act 'Go to the art studio': artsb = 1 & gt 'artstudia', 'bodimod2'
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bodimod2':
+	minut += 5
 	cla
 	*clr
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>The studio of the artist</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pushkin/artscor.jpg"></center>'
 	'The walls of the hallway leading to the art school are decorated in a variety of art. Even if the sign out front did not indicate this was the school, this hallway would be a dead give away.'
-    act 'Leave':gt'artstudia','bodimod1'
+    act 'Leave':gt 'artstudia', 'bodimod1'
 	
 	if rand(0,2) = 0 and arts_day ! daystart:
 		'There are a number of students gathered here. Some of them have removed their clothes and have already been painted by Masya.'
@@ -42,6 +44,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bodimod2':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bodimod3':
+	minut += 30
 	cla
 	*clr
     gs'stat'
@@ -49,10 +52,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bodimod3':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pushkin/artstudio/downud.jpg"></center>'
 	'After agreeing to join one of the projects, you strip naked and have most of your body painted along with several other students. Once all of you are painted, you are sent to one of the busier streets in the Old Town to model the art.'
 	'After several hours and more than a bit of harassment from some of the men, the project is over, and you all head back to the studio.'
-	act 'Leave': gt'artstudia','bodimod2'
+	act 'Leave': gt 'artstudia', 'bodimod2'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bodimod4':
+	minut += 45
 	cla
 	*clr
     gs'stat'
@@ -60,7 +64,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bodimod4':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pushkin/artstudio/downud.jpg"></center>'
 	'After agreeing to join one of the projects, you strip naked and have most of your body painted along with several other students. Once all of you are painted, you are sent to one of the busier streets in the city center to model the art.'
 	'After several hours and more than a bit of harassment from some of the men, the project is over, and you all head back to the studio.'
-	act 'Leave': gt'artstudia','bodimod2'
+	act 'Leave': gt 'artstudia', 'bodimod2'
 end
 
 --- artstudia ---------------------------------

locations/audition_reflections.qsrc

@@ -176,39 +176,39 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reflection_thoughts':
 	
 	act'Normal':
 		cla
-		gs'audition_reflections','normal'
+		gs 'audition_reflections', 'normal'
 	end
 	
 	act'Dirty':
 		cla
-		gs'audition_reflections','dirty'
+		gs 'audition_reflections', 'dirty'
 	end
 	
 	act'Hollow':
 		cla
-		gs'audition_reflections','hollow'
+		gs 'audition_reflections', 'hollow'
 	end
 	
 	act'Angry':
 		cla
-		gs'audition_reflections','angry'
+		gs 'audition_reflections', 'angry'
 	end
 	
 	act'Horny':
 		cla
-		gs'audition_reflections','horny'
+		gs 'audition_reflections', 'horny'
 	end
 	
 	if audition['result'] >= audition['requirement']:
 		act'Powerful':
 			cla
-			gs'audition_reflections','powerful'
+			gs 'audition_reflections', 'powerful'
 		end
 	end
 	
 	if audition['result'] < audition['requirement']:
 		act'Upset you didn''t get the part':
-			gs'audition_reflections','powerful'
+			gs 'audition_reflections', 'powerful'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -294,7 +294,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'normal':
 			end
 		end
 	end
-	act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 end
 	
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dirty':
@@ -637,7 +637,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dirty':
 			end
 		end
 	end
-	act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'hollow':
@@ -835,7 +835,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hollow':
 			end
 		end
 	end
-	act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 end
 	
 if $ARGS[0] = 'angry':
@@ -860,7 +860,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'angry':
 		*nl
 		'Your rage continues to burn inside as you stand trembling in the hallway but in the end, you can''t tell who you''re really angry at. The man you gave your body to? Or yourself for choosing to do it...'
 	end
-	act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 end
 	
 if $ARGS[0] = 'horny':
@@ -1027,7 +1027,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'horny':
 	
 	gs 'arousal','end'
 	gs 'stat'
-	act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 		
 	gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', 1, 'masturbate'
 	pcs_horny += 50
@@ -1057,7 +1057,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'horny':
 	end
 	gs 'arousal','end'
 	gs 'stat'
-	act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 end
 	
 if $ARGS[0] = 'powerful':
@@ -1087,12 +1087,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'powerful':
 	end
 	*nl
 	'As long as you''re willing to use your body, you can get anything you want in this industry. And that makes you feel more empowered than ever.'
-	act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'upset':
 
-	act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 end
 
 
@@ -1123,7 +1123,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'virgin_reflect':
 			'So you auditioned, you got fucked, you didn''t get the role in the end. But you don''t feel too upset about it either. Maybe this is a sign that things won''t so bad? Maybe if you can keep this up you might just be able to make it in this industry.'
 		end
 		'You shrug your shoulders and continue on with your life.'
-		act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 	end
 	
 	act'Dirty':
@@ -1154,7 +1154,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'virgin_reflect':
 				'How could you let this happen? You traded a part of yourself, something precious and valuable and for what? A bit part in an acting gig? You shudder as you feel another glob of cum drip from your pussy and run down your leg and you wonder if your legs will ever feel clean again...'
 			end
 		end
-		act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 	end
 	
 	act'Hollow':
@@ -1172,7 +1172,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'virgin_reflect':
 				'... hollow. You bring your hand to your face and run your hand down your cheek, feeling where the cum was smeared across your face. You just fucked a guy and let him cum on your face so you could land a role in an acting gig. You gave him your first time to get this job and now that you have it you just... don''t care. Your just-fucked pussy throbs between your legs, and you cum ooze from it to run down your leg, leaving your insides feeling aching and empty. You feel a similar emptiness in your chest and wonder just what it was that you gave up when you let that man take your virginity...'
 			end
 		end
-		act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 	end
 	
 	act'Angry':
@@ -1190,7 +1190,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'virgin_reflect':
 				'<i><b>Angry!</b></i> Your eyes well up with tears of rage and you wipe at your face to clear them. What the fuck was that?! So you didn''t do well enough in the audition to get the role and then what happened? You got pressured into doing something and ultimately gave up your virginity. Is this what is going to happen working in this industry? Just time after time of getting literally fucked over by people? Your rage continues to burn inside as you stand trembling in the hallway, cum dripping from your pussy and running down your leg, but in the end, you can''t tell who you''re really angry at. The one who took your virginity, or yourself for giving it up...'
 			end
 		end
-		act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 	end
 	
 	act'Horny':
@@ -1356,7 +1356,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'virgin_reflect':
 		
 		gs 'arousal','end'
 		gs 'stat'
-		act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 	end
 	
 	if audition['result'] >= audition['requirement']:
@@ -1377,7 +1377,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'virgin_reflect':
 			end
 			*nl
 			'As long as you''re willing to use your body, you can get anything you want in this industry. And that makes you feel more empowered than ever.'
-			act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 		end
 	end
 	

locations/audition_sex1.qsrc

@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj1':
 	if will_cost > pcs_willpwr:
 		act'Chicken out (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 	else
-		act'Chicken out (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':gt'auditions','audition_escape'
+		act 'Chicken out (<<will_cost>> Willpower)': gt 'auditions', 'audition_escape'
 	end
 	
 	act'Tentatively blow him':
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj1':
 				if will_cost > pcs_willpwr:
 					act'Run away (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 				else
-					act'Run away (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':gt'auditions','audition_escape'
+					act 'Run away (<<will_cost>> Willpower)': gt 'auditions', 'audition_escape'
 				end
 				
 				act'No! Please! I''ll do a better job!':
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj1':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/reluctant/bj3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'"No, wait! Please! I''ll do a better job, I promise! Please! I''ll really try!"'
 					'"Fine," he growls. "But your clothes are still coming off. And you better do better than you''re doing now! I''m not giving you this part for some halfway decent head."'
-					act'Take off your clothes':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_bj2'
+					act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_bj2'
 				end
 
 				if stat['vaginal'] = 0 and will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj1':
 						'"No wait! Please! I''m a virgin!" you cry out. "I don''t want... my first time..."'
 						if rand(0,1) = 0:
 							'"Fine," he growls. "But your clothes are still coming off. And you better do better than you''re doing now! I''m not giving you this part for some halfway decent head."'
-							act'Take off your clothes':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_bj2'
+							act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_bj2'
 						else
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/grope.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'"A virgin huh?" he says with a hungry look. "Well if you''re a virgin, then I could <i>definitely</i> give this part for you..." His hands are all over you now, groping you through your clothes. "... that is if you... give something to me..."'
@@ -123,13 +123,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj1':
 							cla & *nl
 							'"No!" you gasp, shaking out of his grasp as you feel his fingers grab at your crotch. "No! Only a blowjob!"'
 							'"Fine," he growls. "But your clothes are still coming off. And you better do better than you''re doing now! I''m not giving you this part for some halfway decent head."'
-							act'Take off your clothes':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_bj2'
+							act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_bj2'
 						end
 !!						act'What about anal instead?':
 !!							cla & *nl
 !!							'"What if I gave you my ass instead?" you ask hesitantly. "Not my virginity, but I''ll let you fuck my ass. For the role."'
 !!							'"Well let''s see that ass and then we''ll decide if you get the role."'
-!!							act'Take off your clothes':gt'auditions','reluctant_anal1'
+!!							act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_anal1'
 !!						end
 						
 						act'Give in':
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj1':
 							'"Okay," you whisper, closing your eyes. "Okay. I''ll let you... fuck me..."'
 							'<<$boydesc>> grins wolfishly.'
 							'"Then let''s get those clothes off," he says, now pulling at your clothes with renewed vigor.'
-							act'Take off your clothes':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_virgin'
+							act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_virgin'
 						end
 
 						act'Freeze in panic':
@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj1':
 								'"Huh?"'
 								'You blink and come back to reality. While you were lost in your panic thoughts, <<$boydesc>> took off all your clothes and has you naked right in front of him. "A little weird how you zoned out like that, but as long as your pussy''s still tight..." He grabs you by the shoulder and roughly shoves you face first onto the desk. You tense up as you feel something hovering right between your legs."
 								"Wait, I-!"'
-								act'<i>AAHHHHHH!!</i>':gt'audition_sex1','panic_virgin1'
+								act '<i>AAHHHHHH!!</i>': gt 'audition_sex1', 'panic_virgin1'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj1':
 !!						cla & *nl
 !!						'"What if I gave you my ass instead?" you ask hesitantly. "Not my virginity, but I''ll let you fuck my ass. For the role."'
 !!						'"Well let''s see that ass and then we''ll decide if you get the role."'
-!!						act'Take off your clothes':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_anal1'
+!!						act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_anal1'
 !!					end
 					
 					act'Give in':
@@ -179,17 +179,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj1':
 						'"Okay," you whisper, closing your eyes. "Okay. I''ll let you... fuck me..."'
 						'<<$boydesc>> grins wolfishly.'
 						'"Then let''s get those clothes off," he says, now pulling at your clothes with renewed vigor.'
-						act'Take off your clothes':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_fuck1'
+						act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_fuck1'
 					end
 				end
 			end
 		end
 		
-!!		act'Put in real effort': gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_bj3'
+!!		act'Put in real effort': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_bj3'
 		
 		act'Undress and try harder': 
 			audition['undress'] = 1
-			gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_bj2'
+			gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_bj2'
 		end
 		
 !!		act'Let him take control':
@@ -249,12 +249,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 					'You take them and begin cleaning yourself up, first your lips and then wiping away the cum that dripped from them onto your clothes. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled his pants up and is sitting behind the desk again with a sheet of paper on it between you and him.'
 					'"Well, I thought that was quite enjoyable, didn''t you?" he asks, still smirking. "I think you''re a fine choice for this role. After all, you''ve got such a pretty mouth."'
 					'He slides the paper closer towards you and a pen with it. "Just sign here and the casting will be official."'
-					act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','signature'
+					act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'signature'
 				else
 					'You take them and begin cleaning yourself up, first your lips and then wiping away the cum that dripped from them onto your clothes. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled his pants up and is sitting behind the desk again with a sheet of paper on it between you and him.'
 					'"Well, I thought that was quite enjoyable, didn''t you?" he asks, still smirking. "I think you''re a fine choice for this role. After all, you''ve got such a pretty mouth."'
 					'He slides the paper closer towards you and a pen with it. "Just sign here and the casting will be official."'
-					act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','naked_signature'
+					act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'naked_signature'
 				end
 				
 !!				act'Just leave':
@@ -272,9 +272,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 !!					actress['cast_couch_walk'] = 1
 !!				end
 				if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
-					act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','signature'
+					act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'signature'
 				else
-					act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','naked_signature'
+					act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'naked_signature'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -308,17 +308,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'Once the floor is as clean as you think you can get it (though you''re pretty sure it''s still going to stain), you take a moment to gather your clothes and redress yourself. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already resituated himself behind the desk.'
-								act'Find out if you got the role now':gt'auditions','reluctant_swallow_end'
+								act 'Find out if you got the role now': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_swallow_end'
 							end
 						
 							act'Stand up':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'Swallowing again to cope with the aftertaste, you ignore your clothes for the moment and stand up as you see <<$boydesc>> has already pulled his pants up and has resituated himself behind the desk.'
-								act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_swallow_end'
+								act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_swallow_end'
 							end
 						else
-							act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_swallow_end'
+							act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_swallow_end'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -357,7 +357,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking the tissues up from the floor, you wipe your mouth and body clean before picking up your disgarded clothes and pulling them back on. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already resituated himself behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_swallow_end'
+							act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_swallow_end'
 						end
 						
 						act'Just clean yourself':
@@ -370,7 +370,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking the tissues up from the floor, you wipe your hands and breasts off before carefully wiping your mouth clean. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already resituated himself behind the desk. You ignore your disgarded clothes for the moment and you stand, still naked, to face him.'
-							act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_swallow_end'
+							act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_swallow_end'
 						end
 						
 						
@@ -379,7 +379,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Not bothering to clean yourself up, you stand up, still naked and covered in cum, and watch as <<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants to resituate himself behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_swallow_end'
+							act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_swallow_end'
 						end
 					end
 					
@@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking the tissues up from the floor, you wipe your mouth clean before crawling over to your disgarded clothes and pulling them back on. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already resituated himself behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_swallow_end'
+							act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_swallow_end'
 						end	
 						
 						act'Just wipe your mouth':
@@ -420,7 +420,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking the tissues up from the floor, you carefully wipe your mouth clean before tossing the used tissue into a wastebasket. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already resituated himself behind the desk. You ignore your disgarded clothes for the moment and you stand, still naked, to face him.'
-							act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_swallow_end'
+							act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_swallow_end'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -454,7 +454,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video></center>'
 								'You take them and begin cleaning yourself up, wiping your face and then wiping away the cum that dripped onto your breasts, and then finally cleaning off your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled his pants up and is sitting behind the desk again with a sheet of paper on it between you and him. You pull your clothes on while he watches you, leering the whole time.'								
-								act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_facial_end'
+								act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_facial_end'
 							end
 
 							act'Just get dressed':
@@ -464,7 +464,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'You look blankly at the packet in front of you but for some reason you can''t summon the will inside you to be bothered by the cum covering your face. You blink your tired eyes a few times before pulling on your clothes, unavoidably smearing them with cum from your body as you do.'
 								'"That''s a good look on you," he smirks "You should wear that out."'
-								act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_facial_end'
+								act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_facial_end'
 							end
 						end
 						
@@ -481,7 +481,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video></center>'
 								'You take them and begin cleaning yourself up, wiping your face and then wiping away the cum that dripped onto your breasts, and then finally cleaning off your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled his pants up and is sitting behind the desk again with a sheet of paper on it between you and him. You leave your clothes where they were thrown on the ground and stand up naked to face him.'
 							end
-							act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_facial_end'
+							act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_facial_end'
 						end
 						
 						act'Too stunned to care':
@@ -493,7 +493,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 								'You look blankly at the packet in front of you but for some reason you can''t summon the will inside you to be bothered by the cum covering your face. You blink your puffy eyes a few times and stand up naked, watching and waiting as <<$boydesc>> pull his pants up and sit down at the desk again.'
 							end
 							'"That''s a good look on you," he smirks "You should wear that out."'
-							act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_facial_end'
+							act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_facial_end'
 						end
 					end
 					
@@ -516,14 +516,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'You take them and begin cleaning yourself up, wiping your face and then wiping away the cum that dripped onto your clothes, and then finally cleaning off your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled his pants up and is sitting behind the desk again with a sheet of paper on it between you and him.'
-								act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_facial_end'
+								act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_facial_end'
 							end
 							act'Too stunned to care':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'You look blankly at the packet in front of you but for some reason you can''t summon the will inside you to be bothered by the cum covering your face. You blink a few times and stand, watching <<$boydesc>> pull his pants up and sit down at the desk again.'
 								'"That''s a good look on you," he smirks. "You should wear that out."'
-								act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_facial_end'
+								act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_facial_end'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -548,7 +548,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 									'You take them and begin cleaning yourself up, wiping your face and then wiping away the cum that dripped onto your breasts, and then finally cleaning off your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled his pants up and is sitting behind the desk again with a sheet of paper on it between you and him. You pull your clothes on while he watches you, leering the whole time.'								
-									act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_facial_end'
+									act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_facial_end'
 								end
 
 								act'Just get dressed':
@@ -558,7 +558,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 									'You look blankly at the packet in front of you but for some reason you can''t summon the will inside you to be bothered by the cum covering your face. You blink your puffy eyes a few times before pulling on your clothes, unavoidably smearing them with cum from your body as you do.'
 									'"See? That''s the spirit! Wear it with pride," he smirks.'
-									act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_facial_end'
+									act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_facial_end'
 								end
 							end
 							
@@ -576,7 +576,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 									'You take them and begin cleaning yourself up, wiping your face and then wiping away the cum that dripped onto your breasts, and then finally cleaning off your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled his pants up and is sitting behind the desk again with a sheet of paper on it between you and him. You leave your clothes where they were thrown on the ground and stand up naked to face him.'
 								end
-								act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_facial_end'
+								act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_facial_end'
 							end
 							
 							act'Too stunned to care':
@@ -588,7 +588,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 									'You look blankly at the packet in front of you but for some reason you can''t summon the will inside you to be bothered by the cum covering your face. You blink your puffy eyes a few times and stand up naked, watching and waiting as <<$boydesc>> pull his pants up and sit down at the desk again.'
 								end
 								'"See? That''s the spirit! Wear it with pride," he smirks.'
-								act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_facial_end'
+								act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_facial_end'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -642,7 +642,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_fuck_cum':
 				audition['creampie_surprise'] = 1
 				audition['cast_couch'] = 12
 				'Suddenly and without any warning whatsoever <<$boydesc>> thrusts deep into your pussy, cock pulsing. Your whole body tenses up and your eyes go wide when you feel something filling you up inside. When he pulls out you feel something gush from your pussy.'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_creampie'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_creampie'
 			end
 		end
 	elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 1:
@@ -660,7 +660,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_fuck_cum':
 !!			end
 			'You squeeze your eyes tight, not saying anything and just endure his relentless fucking, waiting for it to be over. After a couple more pumps <<$boydesc>> thrusts balls deep into you and grunts and you feel something hot spill out inside you. <<$boydesc>> waits until he finishes his orgasm and then slides out, a slurry of white liquid spilling out of your pussy.'
 			audition['cast_couch'] = 12
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_creampie'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_creampie'
 		end
 		
 		act'Not inside me!':
@@ -676,7 +676,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_fuck_cum':
 !!				end
 				'"Please! Don''t cum inside me! Not insi-!" Your voice cuts off and eyes go wide as <<$boydesc>> thrusts himself balls deep and you feel something hot spill out inside you. His cock pulses several times inside you before sliding out, a slurry of white liquid spilling out after it.'
 				audition['cast_couch'] = 12
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_creampie'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_creampie'
 			else
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/table_miss/fuck2.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -695,14 +695,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_fuck_cum':
 						cla & *clr
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cry_facial2.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'Emotion wells up inside you but you steel yourself. You are determined not to humilate yourself further by crying when you feel another glob of cum flicked from <<$boydesc>>''s cock onto your face and it almost breaks you right then, but you barely contain it. Your lips quiver, but no tears fall from your face.'
-						act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_facial1'
+						act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_facial1'
 					end
 					
 					act'Cry':
 						cla & *clr
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cry_facial3.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'Tears fall from your eyes and mix with the cum on your face. You put your head in your hands taking deep breaths, trying to cover up the huffing of the sobbs that come from your heaving chest.'
-						act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_facial2'
+						act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_facial2'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -751,14 +751,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_fuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'You take the packet and wipe your mouth coughing heavily into the tissues as you do. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','reluctant_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'After coughing a few more times, you decide you don''t want to stall this any longer, you want this audition to end and ignore the packet, standing up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','reluctant_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -773,7 +773,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_fuck_cum':
 					'With nothing else you can do, you decide to endure it, even as his cock and his cum chokes your throat. To stop yourself from actually suffocating, you force yourself to swallow his vile semen, eliciting a wide smile from <<$boydesc>>.'
 					*nl
 					'"Outstanding," he says, grinning ear to ear as he withdraws himself from your mouth. He pulls a pack of tissues from the desk and wipes himself off before pulling up his pants. You stand to face him and find out the result of the audition.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','reluctant_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_results'
 				end
 				
 				act'Spit it out':
@@ -786,7 +786,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_fuck_cum':
 					'You wait until the torrent of cum stops filling your mouth and <<$boydesc>> pulls away. The moment he does you spit the cum out into your hand. Looking up at <<$boydesc>>, he has an irritated expression on his face.'
 					'"Tch."'
 					'He pulls a packet of tissues from the desk and wipes himself clean. He sees the cum on your hands, but just puts the pack back in the desk without offering you any.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','reluctant_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -807,14 +807,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_fuck_cum':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cry_facial2.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'Emotion wells up inside you but you steel yourself. You are determined not to humilate yourself further by crying when you feel another glob of cum flicked from <<$boydesc>>''s cock onto your face and it almost breaks you right then, but you barely contain it. Your lips quiver, but no tears fall from your face.'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_facial1'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_facial1'
 			end
 			
 			act'Cry':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cry_facial3.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'Tears fall from your eyes and mix with the cum on your face. You put your head in your hands taking deep breaths, trying to cover up the huffing of the sobbs that come from your heaving chest.'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_facial2'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_facial2'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -832,15 +832,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_creampie':
 			'<i>Oh my god! He just came inside me!<i> you think to yourself, looking up at <<$boydesc>> as he passes by. <i>What if I get pregnant?</i>'
 		end
 		'He''s already pulled a packet of tissues from the desk and is wiping himself off with them. When he''s done, he leaves the packet next to you.'
-		act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
+		act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
 			
-		act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+		act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 		
 		act'Don''t bother':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed and sits down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','reluctant_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_results'
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum111.jpg"></center>'
@@ -858,15 +858,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_creampie':
 				'<i>How did I let this happen...<i> you think to yourself, looking up at <<$boydesc>> as he passes by.'
 			end
 			'He''s already pulled a packet of tissues from the desk and is wiping himself off with them. When he''s done, he leaves the packet next to you.'
-			act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
+			act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
 				
-			act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+			act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 			
 			act'Don''t bother':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 				'You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed and sits down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, enjoying the visuals of his work.'
-				act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','reluctant_results'
+				act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_results'
 			end
 		end
 		
@@ -875,24 +875,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_creampie':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			if birth_control['think_safe'] = 1:
 				'"What the fuck!" you shout. "You just came inside me! What the fuck were you thinking??"'
-				'"What?" he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk. "You''re complaining about getting creampied? If you don''t want to get pregnant, you shouldn''t have sex. Goodness knows I wasn''t your first time," <<$boydesc>> smirks. "If you''re really that scared go get yourself a morning after pill from the pharmacy."'
+				'"What?" he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk. "You''re complaining about getting creampied? If you don''t want to get pregnant, you shouldn''t have sex. Goodness knows I wasn''t your first time," <<$boydesc>> smirks. "If you''re really that scared go get yourself a morning-after pill from the pharmacy."'
 				'<i>I guess this is why I''m on birth control...</i> you think to yourself, glaring at him while he wipes his cock off. He leaves the packet next to you on the desk.'
-				act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
+				act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
 				
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 			else
 				'"What the fuck!" you shout. "You just came inside me! What the fuck were you thinking?? I''m not on birth control!"'
-				'"Well you should have thought of that before deciding to fuck someone," he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk to clean his cock off. "That''s not my problem if you''re too stupid to trade sex for favors without taking birth control. Besides, your pussy was so tight, it was practically begging me to cum inside it! Just buy a morning after pill. Or don''t, maybe you''ll get pregnant. I bet it''d be a real handsome kid. You''ve got a gold mine of DNA in that pussy of yours," <<$boydesc>> smirks arrogantly.'
+				'"Well you should have thought of that before deciding to fuck someone," he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk to clean his cock off. "That''s not my problem if you''re too stupid to trade sex for favors without taking birth control. Besides, your pussy was so tight, it was practically begging me to cum inside it! Just buy a morning-after pill. Or don''t, maybe you''ll get pregnant. I bet it''d be a real handsome kid. You''ve got a gold mine of DNA in that pussy of yours," <<$boydesc>> smirks arrogantly.'
 				'He leaves the packet next to you on the desk.'
-				act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
+				act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
 				
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 				
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'<i>Fuck it,</i> you think to yourself. You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed to sit down behind the desk. Wiping your pussy now wouldn''t do anything, you might as well just use it to your advantage while you can. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','reluctant_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -904,8 +904,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_facial1':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Love the look on a girl''s face after she''s been pasted," you hear <<$boydesc>> say. Carefully opening your eyes, you look past strands of cum to see him pulling some tissues from the desk to clean himself up. He tosses the packet down to you on the floor.'
 	'You look down at the tissues in front of you.'
-	act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
-	act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+	act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
+	act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 	act'Don''t bother':
 		cla & *clr
 		audition['bonus'] += 5
@@ -914,7 +914,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_facial1':
 		'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 		'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 		'Looks like your bet is paying off.'
-		act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','reluctant_results'
+		act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_results'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -924,15 +924,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_facial2':
 	'"Oh come on, it''s just a bit of cum," you hear <<$boydesc>> say. Between sobs, you look past strands of cum to see him pulling some tissues from the desk to clean himself up. He tosses the packet down to you on the floor.'
 	'You look down at the tissues in front of you.'
 	'"Just wipe it off. I''m sure this isn''t the first time someone''s fucked you and dropped a load on your face. Calm down.'
-	act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
-	act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+	act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
+	act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 	act'Don''t bother':
 		cla & *clr
 		audition['bonus'] += 5
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 		'Staring at the packet, your vision blurs and you can''t bring yourself to pick it up. You stand up sniffling and covered in cum, waiting for <<$boydesc>> to deliver to you the results of your audition.'
 		'"That''s a good look on you. You should you wear that more often."'
-		act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','reluctant_results'
+		act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_results'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -971,14 +971,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panic_virgin1':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cry_facial2.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'Emotion wells up inside you but you steel yourself. You are determined not to humilate yourself further by crying when you feel another glob of cum flicked from <<$boydesc>>''s cock onto your face and it almost breaks you right then, but you barely contain it. Your lips quiver, but no tears fall from your face.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','panic_virgin2'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'panic_virgin2'
 		end
 		
 		act'Cry':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cry_facial3.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'Tears fall from your eyes and mix with the cum on your face. You put your head in your hands taking deep breaths, trying to cover up the huffing of the sobbs that come from your heaving chest.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','panic_virgin2'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'panic_virgin2'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -1001,7 +1001,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panic_virgin2':
 		'<i><<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>></i>'
 		'"Congratulations! You officially cast as <<$audition[''role'']>>. Thank you for auditioning," he says, his smile breaking into a grin.'
 		'"Thank you for casting me," you say flatly and exit the room.'
-		act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 	end
 	
 	act'Don''t bother':
@@ -1015,7 +1015,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panic_virgin2':
 		'"Are you sure you don''t want to clean up?"'
 		'You blink at him blankly.'
 		'"Well anyways, this is the paperwork that means you''ve got the job if you just sign here," he gestures at a line at the bottom of a page.'
-		act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','facial_signature_upset'
+		act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'facial_signature_upset'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1041,10 +1041,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin':
 		if rand(0,1) = 1:
 			'Suddenly he pulls out of you.'
 			'"Get on your knees," he says, pulling you off the desk and shoving you to the ground. '
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_virgin_facial'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_virgin_facial'
 		else
 			'Suddenly, he begins to pick up his pace.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_virgin_creampie'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_virgin_creampie'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -1062,14 +1062,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_facial':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cry_facial2.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'The cum that dribbles down your face causes something to bubble up inside you and suddenly you want to cry, not knowing entirely why. The feeling fades and just as you think it''s about to pass, <<$boydesc>> flicks one last glob of cum from his cock onto your forehead. The impact on your face nearly causes you to instantly burst into tears but taking deep breaths through your nose, you somehow hold it back.'
-		act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_virgin_facial2'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_virgin_facial2'
 	end
 	
 	act'Cry':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cry_facial3.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'Everything that''s happening is just too much and you burst into tears, the droplets that fall from your eyes mixing with the cum that already coats your cheeks. You heave shuddering breaths as sobs wrack your body and you hang your head in your hands, unable to contain your blubbering emotions.'
-		act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_virgin_facial2'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_virgin_facial2'
 	end
 	
 	act'Take it in stride':
@@ -1078,7 +1078,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_facial':
 		'Opening your eyes, you look down at yourself. <<$boydesc>> cum is everywhere, you can even feel it in your hair. Looking up at him, he seems to be very satisfied with his work that he''s left all over your face and breasts.'
 		*nl
 		'All things considered, you don''t know if you''re entirely comfortable with everything that just happened or how he pressured you into it, but at the end of the day it was still your decision, so you take it in stride.'
-		act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_virgin_facial2'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_virgin_facial2'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1087,14 +1087,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_facial2':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Ahh, virgins really are the best," <<$boydesc>> says, pulling some tissues from the desk to clean himself up. He tosses the packet down to you on the floor.'
 	'You look down at the tissues in front of you.'
-	act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
-	act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+	act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
+	act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 	act'Don''t bother':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 		'Unable to bring yourself to care about your current state, you stand up, cum covered and naked, to face <<$boydesc>> as he pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk.'
 		'"I like that look," he says. "You should wear that more often."'
-		act'Find out the results':gt'auditions','reluctant_virgin_results'
+		act 'Find out the results': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_virgin_results'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1117,8 +1117,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_creampie':
 				'"Ahh yeah, creampies really are the best" <<$boydesc>> says, picking a pack of tissues out of the desk and wiping himself off before tossing them over towards you.'
 				'<i>It''s a good thing that I started birth control a while back. I guess being careful paid off,</i> you think to yourself as you feel another glob dribble down your leg.'
 			end
-			act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
-			act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+			act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
+			act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 		end
 		
 		act'What the fuck!':
@@ -1137,8 +1137,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_creampie':
 				'"Apparently I can," <<$boydesc>> says, picking a pack of tissues out of the desk and wiping himself off before tossing them to you.'
 				'<i>It''s a good thing that I started birth control a while back. I guess being careful paid off,</i> you think to yourself looking at the cum dangling from your fingers.'
 			end
-			act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
-			act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+			act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
+			act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 		end
 		
 		if birth_control['think_safe'] = 0:
@@ -1150,8 +1150,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_creampie':
 				'"Huh? Well, you should have said something then." <<$boydesc>> doesn''t seem to feel guilty or regretful in the least, even having the audacity to have a grin on his face.'
 				'"I didn''t think you were going to just cum inside me without warning!" you cry.'
 				'<i>Oh fuck oh fuck oh fuck oh fuck! What if I get pregnant??</i>'
-				act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+				act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 			end
 		end
 	else
@@ -1173,11 +1173,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_creampie':
 					'<i>It''s a good thing that I started birth control a while back. I guess being careful paid off,</i> you think to yourself as you feel another glob dribble down your leg.'
 				end
 			end
-			act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
-			act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+			act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
+			act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 		end
 		
-		gs'willpower','cum_inside','resist'
+		gs 'willpower', 'cum_inside','resist'
 		if will_cost >= pcs_willpwr:
 			act'Not inside me! (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -1191,7 +1191,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_creampie':
 						'"Please! Don''t cum inside me!" you beg.'
 					end
 					'"Fine, then get on your knees," he says, pulling out of you and roughly shoving you to the ground.'
-					act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_virgin_facial'
+					act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_virgin_facial'
 				else
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					gs 'cum_call', 'butt', $boydesc
@@ -1209,8 +1209,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_creampie':
 						'"Whew," <<$boydesc>> says. "Now that''s a tight pussy. Almost came inside anyways just to feel what it was like."'
 					end
 					'He moves over to the other side of the desk and pulls a packet of tissues from a drawer. After wiping himself off, he throws it in front of you, still bent over the desk with cum coating your backside.'
-					act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
-					act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+					act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
+					act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 					act'Don''t bother':
 						cla & *clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1280,9 +1280,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_clean_dress':
 	end
 	act'Find out the results':
 		if audition['cast_couch_virgin'] = 1:
-			gt'auditions','reluctant_virgin_results'
+			gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_virgin_results'
 		else
-			gt'auditions','reluctant_results'
+			gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_results'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -1335,9 +1335,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_clean':
 	end
 	act'Find out the results':
 		if audition['cast_couch_virgin'] = 1:
-			gt'auditions','reluctant_virgin_results'
+			gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_virgin_results'
 		else
-			gt'auditions','reluctant_results'
+			gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_results'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -1377,9 +1377,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_clean_dress':
 	end
 	act'Find out the results':
 		if audition['cast_couch_virgin'] = 1:
-			gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+			gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 		else
-			gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+			gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -1442,9 +1442,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_clean':
 	end
 	act'Find out the results':
 		if audition['cast_couch_virgin'] = 1:
-			gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+			gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 		else
-			gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+			gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -1507,9 +1507,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_clean':
 	end
 	act'Find out the results':
 		if audition['cast_couch_virgin'] = 1:
-			gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+			gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 		else
-			gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+			gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 		end
 	end
 end

locations/audition_sex2.qsrc

@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 								'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, wiping your chin first and then your clothes, and finally your hands to make sure there is nothing remaining. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 							end
 							act'Don''t bother':
 								cla & *clr
@@ -125,11 +125,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 								'You consider the cum hanging from your chin and spattering your clothes but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it and simply stand up.'
 								'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 								'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 							end
 						else
-							act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
-							act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+							act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
+							act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 							act'Don''t bother':
 								cla & *clr
 								audition['bonus'] += 5
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 								'You consider the cum hanging from your chin and spattering your breasts but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it and simply stand up.'
 								'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 								'"Good choice. I love your suit. And especially the accessories you chose to go with it."'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, wiping your chin first and then your clothes, and finally your hands to make sure there is nothing remaining. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							audition['bonus'] += 5
@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 							'You consider the cum hanging from your chin and spattering your clothes but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 							'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -194,14 +194,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 								'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 							end
 							
 							act'Don''t bother':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 							end
 						end
 						
@@ -217,14 +217,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 								'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 							end
 							
 							act'Don''t bother':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'Making firm eye contact with <<$boydesc>>, you take a deep breath and gather the cum in your mouth and gulp it down, sticking your tongue out after to show you swallowed everything.'
 						'"Outstanding," <<$boydesc>> says, grinning ear to ear. He pulls a pack of tissues from the desk and wipes himself off before pulling up his pants. You stand to face him and find out the result of the audition.'
-						act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+						act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 					end
 					
 					act'Spit it out':
@@ -250,7 +250,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 						'You know he told you to, but you don''t really like the idea of swallowing and spit the cum out into your hand. Looking up at <<$boydesc>>, he has an irritated expression on his face.'
 						'"Tch."'
 						'He pulls a packet of tissues from the desk and wipes himself clean. He sees the cum on your hands, but just puts the pack back in the desk without offering you any.'
-						act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+						act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 					end
 				end
 				act'Jerk him off into your mouth':
@@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'Making firm eye contact with <<$boydesc>>, you take a deep breath and gather the cum in your mouth and gulp it down, sticking your tongue out after to show you swallowed everything.'
 						'"Outstanding," <<$boydesc>> says, grinning ear to ear. He pulls a pack of tissues from the desk and wipes himself off before pulling up his pants. You stand to face him and find out the result of the audition.'
-						act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+						act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 					end
 					
 					act'Spit it out':
@@ -279,7 +279,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 						'You know he told you to, but you don''t really like the idea of swallowing and spit the cum out into your hand. Looking up at <<$boydesc>>, he has an irritated expression on his face.'
 						'"Tch."'
 						'He pulls a packet of tissues from the desk and wipes himself clean. He sees the cum on your hands, but just puts the pack back in the desk without offering you any.'
-						act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+						act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 					end
 				end
 			elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 3:
@@ -303,7 +303,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
@@ -312,7 +312,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 							'You consider the cum covering your face and coating your hands but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 							'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -340,7 +340,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 !!							cla & *clr
 !!							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 !!							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-!!							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+!!							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 !!						end
 !!						act'Don''t bother':
 !!							cla & *clr
@@ -349,7 +349,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 !!							'You consider the cum covering your face and coating your hands but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 !!							'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 !!							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-!!							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+!!							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 !!						end
 !!					end
 					
@@ -367,7 +367,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
@@ -376,7 +376,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 							'You consider the cum covering your face and coating your hands but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 							'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -406,7 +406,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'"... no," you say hesitantly. "I''ll... do what you want..."'
 								'"Good," he says. "Now bend over."'
-								act'Get assfucked':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_anal2'
+								act 'Get assfucked': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_anal2'
 							end
 							
 							act'... yes':
@@ -423,13 +423,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 								else
 									'"For fuck''s sake! Well, this better be the best blowjob of your fucking life or you won''t even have a chance at this! Get back down there!" he says, shoving you to your knees.'
 								end
-								act'Blow him':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_bj2'
+								act 'Blow him': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_bj2'
 							end
 						end
 						act'Get assfucked':
 							gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 							gs 'underwear', 'remove'
-							gt'audition_sex2','neutral_anal2'
+							gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_anal2'
 						end
 					else
 						'"A virgin huh?" he says with a hungry look. "Well if you''re a virgin, then I could <i>definitely</i> give this part for you... that is, if you give something to me in return..."'
@@ -446,7 +446,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 							else
 								'He roughly shoves you down onto the desk. Immediately, you can feel him pressing into your asshole.'
 							end
-							act'Get assfucked':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_anal1'
+							act 'Get assfucked': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_anal1'
 						end
 						act'What about anal instead?':
 							cla & *nl
@@ -456,10 +456,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 								act'Take off your clothes':
 									gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 									gs 'underwear', 'remove'
-									gt'auditions','neutral_anal2'
+									gt 'auditions', 'neutral_anal2'
 								end
 							else
-								act'Bend over':gt'auditions','neutral_anal2'
+								act 'Bend over': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_anal2'
 							end
 						end
 						
@@ -469,10 +469,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 							'<<$boydesc>> grins wolfishly.'
 							'"It''s a promise. Now let''s get those clothes off," he says, now pulling at your clothes with renewed vigor.'
 							audition['cast_couch_virgin'] = 1
-							act'Take off your clothes':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin2'
+							act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin2'
 							act'Ask him to use a condom':
 								audition['condom'] = 1
-								gt'auditions','neutral_virgin2'
+								gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin2'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -480,10 +480,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 			else
 				act'Do as he says':
 					if rand(0,1) = 1:
-						gt'audition_sex2','neutral_fuck1'
+						gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_fuck1'
 					else
 						audition['surprise_anal'] = 1
-						gt'audition_sex2','neutral_anal1'
+						gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_anal1'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -531,7 +531,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj3':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 		end
 		act'Don''t bother':
 			cla & *clr
@@ -540,7 +540,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj3':
 			'You consider the cum covering your face and coating your hands but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 			'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 			'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -569,7 +569,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj4':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 		end
 		act'Don''t bother':
 			cla & *clr
@@ -578,7 +578,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj4':
 			'You consider the cum covering your face and coating your hands but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 			'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 			'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -639,20 +639,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'Now that <<$boydesc>>''s finished fucking you, you don''t want to continue being naked in front of him and ignore the packet, picking up your clothes. They''re all your own juices anyways since he came in the condom. By the time you''re finished, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you get dressed from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 				act'Wipe your pussy and get dressed':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_pussy.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you pull out a tissue, wiping your pussy and cleaning up the juices that leak from your lower lips. Afterwards, you reach for your clothes. <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and watches you get dressed from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 				act'Wipe your pussy':
 					audition['bonus'] += 5
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_pussy.mp4"></video></video></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you pull out a tissue, wiping your pussy and cleaning up the juices that leak from your lower lips. Once satisfied, you stand up to face <<$boydesc>>, who has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -660,7 +660,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'You don''t bother getting dressed, hoping it will earn you some extra points with <<$boydesc>>, and you ignore the packet of tissues to clean up as well. It''s not like there''s anything to clean up since he used a condom. The rest are all your own juices.'
 					'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 			else
 				audition['cast_couch'] = 12
@@ -674,7 +674,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 				end
 				audition['creampie_surprise'] = 1
 				'After a few minutes, you feel him tense up and without warning he thrusts deep into your pussy, cock pulsing. Your eyes go wide when you feel something filling you up inside and when he pulls out you feel it gush from your pussy.'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_creampie'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_creampie'
 			end
 		end
 	elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 1:
@@ -692,20 +692,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'Now that <<$boydesc>>''s finished fucking you, you don''t want to continue being naked in front of him and ignore the packet, picking up your clothes. They''re all your own juices anyways since he came in the condom. By the time you''re finished, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you get dressed from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 				act'Wipe your pussy and get dressed':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_pussy.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you pull out a tissue, wiping your pussy and cleaning up the juices that leak from your lower lips. Afterwards, you reach for your clothes. <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and watches you get dressed from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 				act'Wipe your pussy':
 					audition['bonus'] += 5
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_pussy.mp4"></video></video></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you pull out a tissue, wiping your pussy and cleaning up the juices that leak from your lower lips. Once satisfied, you stand up to face <<$boydesc>>, who has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -713,7 +713,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'You don''t bother getting dressed, hoping it will earn you some extra points with <<$boydesc>>, and you ignore the packet of tissues to clean up as well. It''s not like there''s anything to clean up since he used a condom. The rest are all your own juices.'
 					'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 			else
 				cla & *clr
@@ -726,7 +726,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/doggy1.mp4"></video></center>'
 				end
 				'You decide not to say anything and close your eyes, waiting for it to happen. After a couple more pumps <<$boydesc>> thrusts balls deep into you and grunts and you feel something hot spill out inside you. <<$boydesc>> waits until he finishes his orgasm and then slides out, a slurry of cum and pussy juice spills out after it.'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_creampie'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_creampie'
 			end
 		end
 		
@@ -743,7 +743,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/doggy1.mp4"></video></center>'
 				end
 				'"Please! Don''t cum inside me! Not insi-!" Your voice cuts off and eyes go wide as <<$boydesc>> thrusts himself balls deep and you feel something hot spill out inside you. His cock pulses several times inside you before sliding out, a slurry of white liquid spilling out after it.'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_creampie'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_creampie'
 			else
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/table_miss/fuck2.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -756,7 +756,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial0,3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'You flinch instinctively when you feel hot liquid spatter across your face.'
-					act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_facial'
+					act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_facial'
 				end
 				act'Stick out your tongue':
 					gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boydesc
@@ -782,7 +782,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
@@ -792,7 +792,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 							'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 							'Looks like your bet is paying off'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -812,7 +812,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 			end
 			'"Cum inside me," you grunt between thrusts.'
 			'"Now that''s how you impress me at an audition!" <<$boydesc>> pumps twice more and then thrusts balls deep into you. He grunts and you feel something hot spill out inside you. You wait patient while his cock pulses several times before he withdraws himself from you, cum spilling out after.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_creampie'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_creampie'
 		end
 		
 		act'Cum wherever you want':
@@ -829,7 +829,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 			gs 'cum_call', '', $boydesc
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<<$boydesc>> says the last word and he thrusts balls deep into you, grunting as you feel him release his load inside you hot spill out inside you. You wait patient while his cock pulses several times before he withdraws himself from you, cum spilling out after.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_creampie'					
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_creampie'					
 		end
 	elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 2:
 		'After a few more minutes, <<$boydesc>> grunts.'
@@ -873,14 +873,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 					end
 					
@@ -896,14 +896,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -917,7 +917,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Making firm eye contact with <<$boydesc>>, you take a deep breath and gather the cum in your mouth and gulp it down, sticking your tongue out after to show you swallowed everything.'
 					'"Outstanding," <<$boydesc>> says, grinning ear to ear. He pulls a pack of tissues from the desk and wipes himself off before pulling up his pants. You stand to face him and find out the result of the audition.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 				
 				act'Spit it out':
@@ -930,7 +930,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 					'You know he told you to, but you don''t really like the idea of swallowing and spit the cum out into your hand. Looking up at <<$boydesc>>, he has an irritated expression on his face.'
 					'"Tch."'
 					'He pulls a packet of tissues from the desk and wipes himself clean. He sees the cum on your hands, but just puts the pack back in the desk without offering you any.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -945,7 +945,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial0,3.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'You flinch instinctively when you feel hot liquid spatter across your face.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_facial'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_facial'
 		end
 		act'Stick out your tongue':
 			gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boydesc
@@ -971,7 +971,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -981,7 +981,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 					'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 					'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 					'Looks like your bet is paying off'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -999,15 +999,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_creampie':
 			'<i>Oh no... Why did I let him cum inside me? I could get pregnant!<i> you think to yourself, looking up at <<$boydesc>> as he passes by.'
 		end
 		'He''s already pulled a packet of tissues from the desk and is wiping himself off with them. When he''s done, he leaves the packet next to you.'
-		act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
+		act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
 			
-		act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+		act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 		
 		act'Don''t bother':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed and sits down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum111.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1025,15 +1025,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_creampie':
 				'<i>How did I let this happen...<i> you think to yourself, looking up at <<$boydesc>> as he passes by.'
 			end
 			'He''s already pulled a packet of tissues from the desk and is wiping himself off with them. When he''s done, he leaves the packet next to you.'
-			act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
+			act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
 				
-			act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+			act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 			
 			act'Don''t bother':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 				'You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed and sits down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, enjoying the visuals of his work.'
-				act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+				act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 			end
 		end
 		
@@ -1042,24 +1042,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_creampie':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			if birth_control['think_safe'] = 1:
 				'"What the fuck!" you shout. "You just came inside me! What the fuck were you thinking??"'
-				'"What?" he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk. "You''re complaining about getting creampied? If you don''t want to get pregnant, you shouldn''t have sex. Goodness knows I wasn''t your first time," <<$boydesc>> smirks. "If you''re really that scared go get yourself a morning after pill from the pharmacy."'
+				'"What?" he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk. "You''re complaining about getting creampied? If you don''t want to get pregnant, you shouldn''t have sex. Goodness knows I wasn''t your first time," <<$boydesc>> smirks. "If you''re really that scared go get yourself a morning-after pill from the pharmacy."'
 				'<i>I guess this is why I''m on birth control...</i> you think to yourself, glaring at him while he wipes his cock off. He leaves the packet next to you on the desk.'
-				act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
+				act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
 				
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 			else
 				'"What the fuck!" you shout. "You just came inside me! What the fuck were you thinking?? I''m not on birth control!"'
-				'"Well you should have thought of that before deciding to fuck someone," he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk to clean his cock off. "That''s not my problem if you''re too stupid to trade sex for favors without taking birth control. Besides, your pussy was so tight, it was practically begging me to cum inside it! Just buy a morning after pill. Or don''t, maybe you''ll get pregnant. I bet it''d be a real handsome kid. You''ve got a gold mine of DNA in that pussy of yours," <<$boydesc>> smirks arrogantly.'
+				'"Well you should have thought of that before deciding to fuck someone," he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk to clean his cock off. "That''s not my problem if you''re too stupid to trade sex for favors without taking birth control. Besides, your pussy was so tight, it was practically begging me to cum inside it! Just buy a morning-after pill. Or don''t, maybe you''ll get pregnant. I bet it''d be a real handsome kid. You''ve got a gold mine of DNA in that pussy of yours," <<$boydesc>> smirks arrogantly.'
 				'He leaves the packet next to you on the desk.'
-				act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
+				act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
 				
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 				
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'<i>Fuck it,</i> you think to yourself. You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed to sit down behind the desk. Wiping your pussy now wouldn''t do anything, you might as well just use it to your advantage while you can. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1071,8 +1071,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_facial':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Love the look on a girl''s face after she''s been pasted," you hear <<$boydesc>> say. Carefully opening your eyes, you look past strands of cum to see him pulling some tissues from the desk to clean himself up. He tosses the packet down to you on the floor.'
 	'You look down at the tissues in front of you.'
-	act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
-	act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+	act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
+	act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 	act'Don''t bother':
 		cla & *clr
 		audition['bonus'] += 5
@@ -1081,7 +1081,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_facial':
 		'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 		'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 		'Looks like your bet is paying off.'
-		act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+		act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1174,7 +1174,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 			end
 			audition['creampie_surprise'] = 1
 			'After a few minutes, you feel him tense up and without warning he thrusts deep into your pussy, cock pulsing. Your eyes go wide when you feel something filling you up inside and when he pulls out you feel it gush from your pussy.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin_creampie'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_virgin_creampie'
 		end
 	elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 1:
 		if audition['condom'] = 1:jump 'cum_choice2'
@@ -1191,20 +1191,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'Now that <<$boydesc>>''s finished fucking you, you don''t want to continue being naked in front of him and ignore the packet, picking up your clothes. By the time you''re finished, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you get dressed from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 				end
 				act'Wipe your pussy and get dressed':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_pussy.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you pull out a tissue, wiping your pussy and cleaning up the blood now leaking from your lower lips. Afterwards, you reach for your clothes. <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and watches you get dressed from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 				end
 				act'Wipe your pussy':
 					audition['bonus'] += 5
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_pussy.mp4"></video></video></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you pull out a tissue, wiping your pussy and cleaning up the blood now leaking from your lower lips. Once satisfied, you stand up to face <<$boydesc>>, who has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 				end
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -1213,7 +1213,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 					'You don''t bother getting dressed, hoping it will earn you some extra points with <<$boydesc>>, and you ignore the packet of tissues to clean up as well.'
 					'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk.'
 					'"Guess you really were cherry," he says, noting the trickle of blood running down your leg.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 				end
 			else
 				cla & *clr
@@ -1226,7 +1226,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/doggy1.mp4"></video></center>'
 				end
 				'You decide not to say anything and close your eyes, waiting for it to happen. After a couple more pumps <<$boydesc>> thrusts balls deep into you and grunts and you feel something hot spill out inside you. <<$boydesc>> waits until he finishes his orgasm and then slides out, a slurry of cum and pussy juice spills out after it.'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin_creampie'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_virgin_creampie'
 			end
 		end
 		
@@ -1242,7 +1242,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/doggy1.mp4"></video></center>'
 				end
 				'"Please! Don''t cum inside me! Not insi-!" Your voice cuts off and eyes go wide as <<$boydesc>> thrusts himself balls deep and you feel something hot spill out inside you. His cock pulses several times inside you before sliding out, a slurry of white liquid and pussy juice slightly tinged with red spills out after it.'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin_creampie'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_virgin_creampie'
 			else
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/table_miss/fuck2.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -1254,7 +1254,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial0,3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'You flinch instinctively when you feel hot liquid spatter across your face.'
-					act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin_facial'
+					act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_virgin_facial'
 				end
 				act'Stick out your tongue':
 					gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boydesc
@@ -1280,7 +1280,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 						end
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
@@ -1290,7 +1290,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 							'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 							'Looks like your bet is paying off'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -1309,7 +1309,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 			end
 			'"Cum inside me," you grunt between thrusts.'
 			'"Now that''s how you impress me at an audition!" <<$boydesc>> pumps twice more and then thrusts balls deep into you. He grunts and you feel something hot spill out inside you. <<$boydesc>> waits until he finishes his orgasm and then slides his cock out, a slurry of cum, pussy juice, and blood spilling out after it.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin_creampie'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_virgin_creampie'
 		end
 		
 		act'Cum wherever you want':
@@ -1321,7 +1321,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 			gs 'cum_call', '', $boydesc
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<<$boydesc>> says the last word and he thrusts balls deep into you, grunting as you feel him release his load inside you hot spill out inside you. <<$boydesc>> waits until he finishes his orgasm and then slides his cock out, a slurry of cum, pussy juice, and blood spilling out after it.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin_creampie'					
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_virgin_creampie'					
 		end
 	elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 2:
 		'After a few more minutes, <<$boydesc>> grunts.'
@@ -1365,14 +1365,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 						end
 					end
 					
@@ -1388,14 +1388,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -1409,7 +1409,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Making firm eye contact with <<$boydesc>>, you take a deep breath and gather the cum in your mouth and gulp it down, sticking your tongue out after to show you swallowed everything.'
 					'"Outstanding," <<$boydesc>> says, grinning ear to ear. He pulls a pack of tissues from the desk and wipes himself off before pulling up his pants. You stand to face him and find out the result of the audition.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 				end
 				
 				act'Spit it out':
@@ -1422,7 +1422,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 					'You know he told you to, but you don''t really like the idea of swallowing and spit the cum out into your hand. Looking up at <<$boydesc>>, he has an irritated expression on his face.'
 					'"Tch."'
 					'He pulls a packet of tissues from the desk and wipes himself clean. He sees the cum on your hands, but just puts the pack back in the desk without offering you any.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1436,7 +1436,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial0,3.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'You flinch instinctively when you feel hot liquid spatter across your face.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin_facial'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_virgin_facial'
 		end
 		act'Stick out your tongue':
 			gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boydesc
@@ -1462,7 +1462,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 				end
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -1472,7 +1472,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 					'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 					'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 					'Looks like your bet is paying off'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1491,15 +1491,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_creampie':
 			'<i>Oh no... Why did I let him cum inside me? I could get pregnant!<i> you think to yourself, looking up at <<$boydesc>> as he passes by.'
 		end
 		'He''s already pulled a packet of tissues from the desk and is wiping himself off with them. When he''s done, he leaves the packet next to you.'
-		act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
+		act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
 			
-		act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+		act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 		
 		act'Don''t bother':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed and sits down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum111.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1518,15 +1518,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_creampie':
 				'<i>How did I let this happen...<i> you think to yourself, looking up at <<$boydesc>> as he passes by.'
 			end
 			'He''s already pulled a packet of tissues from the desk and is wiping himself off with them. When he''s done, he leaves the packet next to you.'
-			act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
+			act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
 				
-			act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+			act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 			
 			act'Don''t bother':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 				'You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed and sits down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, enjoying the visuals of his work.'
-				act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+				act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 			end
 		end
 		
@@ -1535,25 +1535,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_creampie':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			if birth_control['think_safe'] = 1:
 				'"What the fuck!" you shout. "You just came inside me! What the fuck were you thinking??"'
-				'"I don''t see what the problem is," he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk to clean his cock off. "Your pussy was so tight, it was practically begging me to cum inside it! Just buy a morning after pill if you''re afraid of getting pregnant. Or don''t, maybe you''ll have a great kid. You''ve got a gold mine of DNA in there," <<$boydesc>> smirks arrogantly.'
+				'"I don''t see what the problem is," he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk to clean his cock off. "Your pussy was so tight, it was practically begging me to cum inside it! Just buy a morning-after pill if you''re afraid of getting pregnant. Or don''t, maybe you''ll have a great kid. You''ve got a gold mine of DNA in there," <<$boydesc>> smirks arrogantly.'
 				'<i>It''s a good thing I was already on birth control,</i> you think to yourself. <i>I could''ve ended up with this guy''s baby growing inside me...</i>'
 				'He leaves the packet next to you on the desk.'
-				act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
+				act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
 				
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 			else
 				'"What the fuck!" you shout. "You just came inside me! What the fuck were you thinking?? I''m not on birth control!"'
-				'"Well you should have thought of that before deciding to fuck someone," he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk to clean his cock off. "That''s not my problem if you''re too stupid to trade sex for favors without taking birth control. Besides, your pussy was so tight, it was practically begging me to cum inside it! Just buy a morning after pill. Or don''t, maybe you''ll get pregnant. I bet it''d be a real handsome kid. You''ve got a gold mine of DNA in that pussy of yours," <<$boydesc>> smirks arrogantly.'
+				'"Well you should have thought of that before deciding to fuck someone," he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk to clean his cock off. "That''s not my problem if you''re too stupid to trade sex for favors without taking birth control. Besides, your pussy was so tight, it was practically begging me to cum inside it! Just buy a morning-after pill. Or don''t, maybe you''ll get pregnant. I bet it''d be a real handsome kid. You''ve got a gold mine of DNA in that pussy of yours," <<$boydesc>> smirks arrogantly.'
 				'He leaves the packet next to you on the desk.'
-				act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
+				act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
 				
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 				
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'<i>Fuck it,</i> you think to yourself. You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed to sit down behind the desk. Wiping your pussy now wouldn''t do anything, you might as well just use it to your advantage while you can. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1565,8 +1565,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_facial':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Ahh, virgins really are the best," you hear <<$boydesc>> say. Carefully opening your eyes, you look past strands of cum to see him pulling some tissues from the desk to clean himself up. He tosses the packet down to you on the floor.'
 	'You look down at the tissues in front of you.'
-	act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
-	act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+	act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
+	act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 	act'Don''t bother':
 		cla & *clr
 		audition['bonus'] += 5
@@ -1575,14 +1575,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_facial':
 		'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 		'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 		'Looks like your bet is paying off'
-		act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+		act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 	end
 end
 
 
 !! ---------------------------------------- Anal -------------------------------------------------
 if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_anal1':
-	gs'arousal','anal',rand(4,14)
+	gs 'arousal', 'anal',rand(4,14)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/table_doggy/fuck1.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You cry out in shock when <<$boydesc>> suddenly plunges his cock into your ass dry.'
 	if audition['surprise_anal'] = 1:'<i>Fuck!</i> He didn''t tell you he was going to assfuck you! <i>Fucking warn a girl!</i>'
@@ -1590,7 +1590,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_anal1':
 	'The next few minutes are filled with the sound of your grunting and his as you hang on for dear life, holding the edges of the desk in a death grip while <<$boydesc>> drives into your ass again and again with no regard for your personal comfort.'
 	'"Gotta love assfucking defenseless girls!" he cries smugly, giving your ass a few slaps for his own benefit.'
 	*nl
-	gs'audition_sex2','neutral_assfuck_cum'
+	gs 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_assfuck_cum'
 end
 
 
@@ -1605,10 +1605,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_anal2':
 		gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'anal','custom'
 		'<<$boydesc>>''s cock enters your ass and you grunt in discomfort, your rectum painfully dry. However uncomfortable it is for you, he doesn''t seem to mind and quickly builds up to a steady rhythm.'
 	end
-	gs'arousal','anal',rand(4,14)
+	gs 'arousal', 'anal',rand(4,14)
 	'"Man oh man, do I love fucking a vulnerable girl''s ass!" he grunts, emphasizing his words with each thrust. You can hear the smugness in his voice.'
 	*nl
-	gs'audition_sex2','neutral_assfuck_cum'
+	gs 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_assfuck_cum'
 end
 	
 if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_assfuck_cum':
@@ -1624,7 +1624,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_assfuck_cum':
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/cumanal1.mp4"></video></center>'
 			audition['creampie_surprise'] = 1
 			'After a few minutes, you feel him tense up and without warning he goes balls deep, cock pulsing. You groan at the sudden intrusion and feel a hot liquid spurting into your ass. When his cock stops pulsing he withdraws, you immediately feel cum drip from your gaping asshole.'
-			act'Continue':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 		end
 	elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 2:
 		'After a few more minutes, <<$boydesc>> grunts.'
@@ -1664,14 +1664,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_assfuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 					end
 					
@@ -1687,14 +1687,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_assfuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -1708,7 +1708,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_assfuck_cum':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Making firm eye contact with <<$boydesc>>, you take a deep breath and gather the cum in your mouth and gulp it down, sticking your tongue out after to show you swallowed everything.'
 					'"Outstanding," <<$boydesc>> says, grinning ear to ear. He pulls a pack of tissues from the desk and wipes himself off before pulling up his pants. You stand to face him and find out the result of the audition.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 				
 				act'Spit it out':
@@ -1721,7 +1721,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_assfuck_cum':
 					'You know he told you to, but you don''t really like the idea of swallowing and spit the cum out into your hand. Looking up at <<$boydesc>>, he has an irritated expression on his face.'
 					'"Tch."'
 					'He pulls a packet of tissues from the desk and wipes himself clean. He sees the cum on your hands, but just puts the pack back in the desk without offering you any.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1741,14 +1741,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_assfuck_cum':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Ahh, love a good assfuck," you hear <<$boydesc>> say. Carefully opening your eyes, you look past strands of cum to see him pulling some tissues from the desk to clean himself up. He tosses the packet down to you on the floor.'
 				'You look down at the tissues in front of you.'
-				act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+				act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'Unable to bring yourself to care about your current state, you stand up, cum covered and naked, to face <<$boydesc>> as he pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk.'
 					'"I like that look," he says. "You should wear that more often."'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1776,7 +1776,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_assfuck_cum':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 				end
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -1786,7 +1786,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_assfuck_cum':
 					'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 					'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 					'Looks like your bet is paying off'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end

locations/audition_sex3.qsrc

@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, wiping your chin first and then your clothes, and finally your hands to make sure there is nothing remaining. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 							end
 							act'Don''t bother':
 								cla & *clr
@@ -119,11 +119,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 								'You consider the cum hanging from your chin and spattering your clothes but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it and simply stand up.'
 								'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 								'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 							end
 						else
-							act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean_dress'
-							act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean'
+							act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean_dress'
+							act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean'
 							act'Don''t bother':
 								cla & *clr
 								audition['bonus'] += 5
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 								'You consider the cum hanging from your chin and spattering your breasts but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it and simply stand up.'
 								'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 								'"Good choice. I love your suit. And especially the accessories you chose to go with it."'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, wiping your chin first and then your clothes, and finally your hands to make sure there is nothing remaining. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							audition['bonus'] += 5
@@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 							'You consider the cum hanging from your chin and spattering your clothes but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 							'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -188,14 +188,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 								'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 							end
 							
 							act'Don''t bother':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 							end
 						end
 						
@@ -211,14 +211,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 								'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 							end
 							
 							act'Don''t bother':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'Making firm eye contact with <<$boydesc>>, you take a deep breath and gather the cum in your mouth and gulp it down, sticking your tongue out after to show you swallowed everything.'
 						'"Outstanding," <<$boydesc>> says, grinning ear to ear. He pulls a pack of tissues from the desk and wipes himself off before pulling up his pants. You stand to face him and find out the result of the audition.'
-						act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+						act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 					end
 					
 					act'Spit it out':
@@ -244,7 +244,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 						'You know he told you to, but you don''t really like the idea of swallowing and spit the cum out into your hand. Looking up at <<$boydesc>>, he has an irritated expression on his face.'
 						'"Tch."'
 						'He pulls a packet of tissues from the desk and wipes himself clean. He sees the cum on your hands, but just puts the pack back in the desk without offering you any.'
-						act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+						act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 					end
 				end
 				act'Jerk him off into your mouth':
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'Making firm eye contact with <<$boydesc>>, you take a deep breath and gather the cum in your mouth and gulp it down, sticking your tongue out after to show you swallowed everything.'
 						'"Outstanding," <<$boydesc>> says, grinning ear to ear. He pulls a pack of tissues from the desk and wipes himself off before pulling up his pants. You stand to face him and find out the result of the audition.'
-						act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+						act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 					end
 					
 					act'Spit it out':
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 						'You know he told you to, but you don''t really like the idea of swallowing and spit the cum out into your hand. Looking up at <<$boydesc>>, he has an irritated expression on his face.'
 						'"Tch."'
 						'He pulls a packet of tissues from the desk and wipes himself clean. He sees the cum on your hands, but just puts the pack back in the desk without offering you any.'
-						act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+						act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 					end
 				end
 			elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 3:
@@ -297,7 +297,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
@@ -306,7 +306,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 							'You consider the cum covering your face and coating your hands but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 							'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 !!							cla & *clr
 !!							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 !!							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-!!							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+!!							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 !!						end
 !!						act'Don''t bother':
 !!							cla & *clr
@@ -343,7 +343,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 !!							'You consider the cum covering your face and coating your hands but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 !!							'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 !!							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-!!							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+!!							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 !!						end
 !!					end
 					
@@ -361,7 +361,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
@@ -370,7 +370,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 							'You consider the cum covering your face and coating your hands but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 							'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -400,7 +400,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'"... no," you say hesitantly. "I''ll... do what you want..."'
 								'"Good," he says. "Now bend over."'
-								act'Get assfucked':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_anal2'
+								act 'Get assfucked': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_anal2'
 							end
 							
 							act'... yes':
@@ -417,13 +417,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 								else
 									'"For fuck''s sake! Well, this better be the best blowjob of your fucking life or you won''t even have a chance at this! Get back down there!" he says, shoving you to your knees.'
 								end
-								act'Blow him':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_bj2'
+								act 'Blow him': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_bj2'
 							end
 						end
 						act'Get assfucked':
 							gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 							gs 'underwear', 'remove'
-							gt'audition_sex1','slutty_anal2'
+							gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_anal2'
 						end
 					else
 						'"A virgin huh?" he says with a hungry look. "Well if you''re a virgin, then I could <i>definitely</i> give this part for you... that is, if you give something to me in return..."'
@@ -440,7 +440,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 							else
 								'He roughly shoves you down onto the desk. Immediately, you can feel him pressing into your asshole.'
 							end
-							act'Get assfucked':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_anal1'
+							act 'Get assfucked': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_anal1'
 						end
 						act'What about anal instead?':
 							cla & *nl
@@ -450,10 +450,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 								act'Take off your clothes':
 									gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 									gs 'underwear', 'remove'
-									gt'audition_sex3','slutty_anal2'
+									gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_anal2'
 								end
 							else
-								act'Bend over':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_anal2'
+								act 'Bend over': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_anal2'
 							end
 						end
 						
@@ -462,7 +462,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 							'"Okay," you whisper, closing your eyes and taking a deep breath. "Okay. I''ll let you fuck me... If you promise to give me the role."'
 							'<<$boydesc>> grins wolfishly.'
 							'"It''s a promise. Now let''s get those clothes off," he says, now pulling at your clothes with renewed vigor.'
-							act'Take off your clothes':gt 'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin2'
+							act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin2'
 							act'Ask him to use a condom':
 								audition['condom'] = 1
 								gt 'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin2'
@@ -473,10 +473,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 			else
 				act'Do as he says':
 					if rand(0,1) = 1:
-						gt'audition_sex3','slutty_fuck1'
+						gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_fuck1'
 					else
 						audition['surprise_anal'] = 1
-						gt'audition_sex3','slutty_anal1'
+						gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_anal1'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -524,7 +524,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj3':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 		end
 		act'Don''t bother':
 			cla & *clr
@@ -533,7 +533,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj3':
 			'You consider the cum covering your face and coating your hands but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 			'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 			'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -562,7 +562,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj4':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 		end
 		act'Don''t bother':
 			cla & *clr
@@ -571,7 +571,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj4':
 			'You consider the cum covering your face and coating your hands but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 			'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 			'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -598,23 +598,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck':
 				'"By the way, I''m a virgin," you say hoping to entice him for a more favorable audition, bending over and spreading your pussy lips to show him the proof.'
 				'"A virgin huh?" He gives you a hungry look. "Well, don''t mind if I do then..." he continues, lining his cock up with your pussy.'
 				audition['bonus'] += 10
-				act'Lose your virginity':gt 'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin2'
+				act 'Lose your virginity': gt 'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin2'
 			end
 		end
 		act'Get fucked':
 			if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-				gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin2'
+				gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin2'
 			else
-				gt'audition_sex3','slutty_fuck2'
+				gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_fuck2'
 			end
 		end
 		if mc_inventory['normal_condoms'] > 0:
 			act'Put on a condom on him':
 				audition['condom'] = 1
 				if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-					gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin2'
+					gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin2'
 				else
-					gt'audition_sex3','slutty_fuck2'
+					gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_fuck2'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -626,23 +626,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck':
 				'"By the way, I''m a virgin," you say hoping to entice him for a more favorable audition, laying back on the desk and spreading your pussy to show him the proof.'
 				'"A virgin huh?" He gives you a hungry look. "Well, don''t mind if I do then..." he continues, lining his cock up with your pussy.'
 				audition['bonus'] += 10
-				act'Lose your virginity':gt 'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin1'
+				act 'Lose your virginity': gt 'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin1'
 			end
 		end
 		act'Get fucked':
 			if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-				gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin1'
+				gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin1'
 			else
-				gt'audition_sex3','slutty_fuck1'
+				gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_fuck1'
 			end
 		end
 		if mc_inventory['normal_condoms'] > 0:
 			act'Put on a condom on him':
 				audition['condom'] = 1
 				if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-					gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin1'
+					gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin1'
 				else
-					gt'audition_sex3','slutty_fuck1'
+					gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_fuck1'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -696,20 +696,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'Now that <<$boydesc>>''s finished fucking you, you don''t want to continue being naked in front of him and ignore the packet, picking up your clothes. They''re all your own juices anyways since he came in the condom. By the time you''re finished, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you get dressed from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 				act'Wipe your pussy and get dressed':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_pussy.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you pull out a tissue, wiping your pussy and cleaning up the juices that leak from your lower lips. Afterwards, you reach for your clothes. <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and watches you get dressed from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 				act'Wipe your pussy':
 					audition['bonus'] += 5
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_pussy.mp4"></video></video></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you pull out a tissue, wiping your pussy and cleaning up the juices that leak from your lower lips. Once satisfied, you stand up to face <<$boydesc>>, who has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -717,7 +717,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'You don''t bother getting dressed, hoping it will earn you some extra points with <<$boydesc>>, and you ignore the packet of tissues to clean up as well. It''s not like there''s anything to clean up since he used a condom. The rest are all your own juices.'
 					'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 			else
 				audition['cast_couch'] = 12
@@ -731,7 +731,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 				end
 				audition['creampie_surprise'] = 1
 				'After a few minutes, you feel him tense up and without warning he thrusts deep into your pussy, cock pulsing. Your eyes go wide when you feel something filling you up inside and when he pulls out you feel it gush from your pussy.'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_creampie'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_creampie'
 			end
 		end
 	elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 1:
@@ -749,7 +749,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/doggy1.mp4"></video></center>'
 			end
 			'You decide not to say anything and just keep moaning along, waiting for it to happen. After a couple more pumps <<$boydesc>> thrusts balls deep into you and grunts and you feel something hot spill out inside you. <<$boydesc>> waits until he finishes his orgasm and then slides his cock out, thick globs of cum dripping out after.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_creampie'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_creampie'
 		end
 		
 		act'Why don''t you finish on my face?':
@@ -766,7 +766,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 				end
 				'"Why don''t you finish on my face?" you ask him. "Bet I''d look great with your cum all over me."'
 				'"Why don''t I do what I please?" <<$boydesc>> grunts back and thrusts himself balls deep into you. You feel his cock start pulsing and something hot spills out inside you. After a few moments he pulls out, a slurry of white liquid spilling out after it. "You look better with cum coming out of you."'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_creampie'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_creampie'
 			else
 				cla & *clr
 				if audition['position'] = 3:
@@ -800,7 +800,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
@@ -811,7 +811,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 							'"I put it on just for you!"'
 							'Looks like your bet is paying off.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -831,7 +831,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 			end
 			'"Cum inside me!" you mew. "Pump me with your baby batter! Fill me up!"'
 			'Your words must have sent him over the edge because <<$boydesc>> thrusts balls deep into you and begins groaning. Inside your pussy you can feel his cock pulsing and spurts of liquid painting your insides, and you moan, squeezing tight and trying to milk him for all he''s worth. A few moments later, he removes himself from you and you feel the dribble of cum spill from your pussy.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_creampie'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_creampie'
 		end
 		
 		act'Where do you want to cum?':
@@ -849,7 +849,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<<$boydesc>> cuts you off by thrusting balls deep into you and groaning loaudly. Inside your pussy you can feel his cock pulsing and spurts of liquid painting your insides, and you moan, squeezing tight and trying to milk him for all he''s worth. A few moments later, he removes himself from you and you feel the dribble of cum spill from your pussy.'
 				'"I want to cum inside you," he says belatedly, grinning.'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_creampie'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_creampie'
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 				'<<$boydesc>> cuts you off by pulling out of you and throwing you to the floor, jerking off in front of your face.'
@@ -879,7 +879,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
@@ -890,7 +890,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 							'"I put it on just for you!"'
 							'Looks like your bet is paying off.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -938,14 +938,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 					end
 					
@@ -961,14 +961,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -982,7 +982,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Making firm eye contact with <<$boydesc>>, you take a deep breath and gather the cum in your mouth and gulp it down, smiling with your tongue out after to show you swallowed everything.'
 					'"Outstanding," <<$boydesc>> says, grinning ear to ear. He pulls a pack of tissues from the desk and wipes himself off before pulling up his pants. You stand to face him and find out the result of the audition.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1014,7 +1014,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -1025,7 +1025,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 					'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 					'"I put it on just for you!"'
 					'Looks like your bet is paying off.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1043,15 +1043,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_creampie':
 			'<i>Oh no... Why did I let him cum inside me? I could get pregnant!<i> you think to yourself, looking up at <<$boydesc>> as he passes by.'
 		end
 		'He''s already pulled a packet of tissues from the desk and is wiping himself off with them. When he''s done, he leaves the packet next to you.'
-		act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean_dress'
+		act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean_dress'
 			
-		act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean'
+		act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean'
 		
 		act'Don''t bother':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed and sits down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum111.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1069,15 +1069,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_creampie':
 				'<i>How did I let this happen...<i> you think to yourself, looking up at <<$boydesc>> as he passes by.'
 			end
 			'He''s already pulled a packet of tissues from the desk and is wiping himself off with them. When he''s done, he leaves the packet next to you.'
-			act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean_dress'
+			act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean_dress'
 				
-			act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean'
+			act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean'
 			
 			act'Don''t bother':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 				'You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed and sits down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, enjoying the visuals of his work.'
-				act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+				act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 			end
 		end
 		
@@ -1088,29 +1088,29 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_creampie':
 				'"What the fuck!" you shout. "You just came inside me! What the fuck were you thinking??"'
 				'"What?" he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk. "You''re the one who offered to have sex," <<$boydesc>> says, rolling his eyes. "You have a problem with someone creampieing you, maybe you shouldn''t be slutting it up in back rooms of talent agencies without birth control. That just seems stupid."'
 				'<i>I guess this is why I''m on birth control...</i> you think to yourself, glaring at him while he wipes his cock off. He leaves the packet next to you on the desk.'
-				act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean_dress'
+				act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean_dress'
 				
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean'
 				
 				act'Don''t clean up':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'<i>Fuck it,</i> you think to yourself. You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed to sit down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 			else
 				'"What the fuck!" you shout. "You just came inside me! What the fuck were you thinking?? I''m not on birth control!"'
 				'"Well you should have thought of that before deciding to fuck someone," he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk to clean his cock off. "That''s not my problem if you''re too stupid to trade sex for favors without getting knocked up. If you''re that afraid of getting pregnant, maybe you shouldn''t be slutting it up in back rooms of talent agencies without birth control. That just seems stupid," <<$boydesc>> says, rolling his eyes.'
 				'He leaves the packet next to you on the desk.'
-				act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean_dress'
+				act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean_dress'
 				
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean'
 				
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'<i>Fuck it,</i> you think to yourself. You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed to sit down behind the desk. Wiping your pussy now wouldn''t do anything, you might as well just use it to your advantage while you can. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1207,7 +1207,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 			end
 			audition['creampie_surprise'] = 1
 			'After a few minutes, you feel him tense up and without warning he thrusts deep into your pussy, cock pulsing. Your eyes go wide when you feel something filling you up inside and when he pulls out you feel it gush from your pussy.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin_creampie'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin_creampie'
 		end
 	elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 1:
 		if audition['condom'] = 1: jump 'cum_choice2'
@@ -1223,7 +1223,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/doggy1.mp4"></video></center>'
 			end
 			'You decide not to say anything and just keep moaning, waiting for it to happen. After a couple more pumps <<$boydesc>> thrusts balls deep into you and grunts and you feel something hot spill out inside you. <<$boydesc>> waits until he finishes his orgasm and then slides out, a slurry of cum and pussy juice slightly tinged with red spills out after it.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin_creampie'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin_creampie'
 		end
 		
 		act'Not inside me!':
@@ -1238,7 +1238,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/doggy1.mp4"></video></center>'
 				end
 				'"Please! Don''t cum inside me! Not insi-!" Your voice cuts off and eyes go wide as <<$boydesc>> thrusts himself balls deep and you feel something hot spill out inside you. His cock pulses several times inside you before sliding out, a slurry of white liquid and pussy juice slightly tinged with red spills out after it.'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin_creampie'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin_creampie'
 			else
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/table_miss/fuck2.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -1250,7 +1250,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial0,3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'You flinch instinctively when you feel hot liquid spatter across your face.'
-					act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin_facial'
+					act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin_facial'
 				end
 				act'Stick out your tongue':
 					gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boydesc
@@ -1276,7 +1276,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 						end
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
@@ -1286,7 +1286,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 							'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 							'Looks like your bet is paying off'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -1305,7 +1305,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 			end
 			'"Cum inside me," you grunt between thrusts.'
 			'"Now that''s how you impress me at an audition!" <<$boydesc>> pumps twice more and then thrusts balls deep into you. He grunts and you feel something hot spill out inside you. <<$boydesc>> waits until he finishes his orgasm and then slides his cock out, a slurry of cum, pussy juice, and blood spilling out after it.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin_creampie'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin_creampie'
 		end
 		
 		act'Cum wherever you want':
@@ -1317,7 +1317,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 			gs 'cum_call', '', $boydesc
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<<$boydesc>> says the last word and he thrusts balls deep into you, grunting as you feel him release his load inside you hot spill out inside you. <<$boydesc>> waits until he finishes his orgasm and then slides his cock out, a slurry of cum, pussy juice, and blood spilling out after it.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin_creampie'					
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin_creampie'					
 		end
 	elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 2:
 		'After a few more minutes, <<$boydesc>> grunts.'
@@ -1361,14 +1361,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 						end
 					end
 					
@@ -1384,14 +1384,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -1405,7 +1405,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Making firm eye contact with <<$boydesc>>, you take a deep breath and gather the cum in your mouth and gulp it down, sticking your tongue out after to show you swallowed everything.'
 					'"Outstanding," <<$boydesc>> says, grinning ear to ear. He pulls a pack of tissues from the desk and wipes himself off before pulling up his pants. You stand to face him and find out the result of the audition.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 				end
 				
 				act'Spit it out':
@@ -1418,7 +1418,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 					'You know he told you to, but you don''t really like the idea of swallowing and spit the cum out into your hand. Looking up at <<$boydesc>>, he has an irritated expression on his face.'
 					'"Tch."'
 					'He pulls a packet of tissues from the desk and wipes himself clean. He sees the cum on your hands, but just puts the pack back in the desk without offering you any.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1432,7 +1432,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial0,3.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'You flinch instinctively when you feel hot liquid spatter across your face.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin_facial'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin_facial'
 		end
 		act'Stick out your tongue':
 			gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boydesc
@@ -1458,7 +1458,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 				end
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -1468,7 +1468,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 					'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 					'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 					'Looks like your bet is paying off'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1487,15 +1487,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_creampie':
 			'<i>Oh no... Why did I let him cum inside me? I could get pregnant!<i> you think to yourself, looking up at <<$boydesc>> as he passes by.'
 		end
 		'He''s already pulled a packet of tissues from the desk and is wiping himself off with them. When he''s done, he leaves the packet next to you.'
-		act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean_dress'
+		act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean_dress'
 			
-		act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean'
+		act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean'
 		
 		act'Don''t bother':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed and sits down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum111.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1514,15 +1514,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_creampie':
 				'<i>How did I let this happen...<i> you think to yourself, looking up at <<$boydesc>> as he passes by.'
 			end
 			'He''s already pulled a packet of tissues from the desk and is wiping himself off with them. When he''s done, he leaves the packet next to you.'
-			act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean_dress'
+			act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean_dress'
 				
-			act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean'
+			act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean'
 			
 			act'Don''t bother':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 				'You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed and sits down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, enjoying the visuals of his work.'
-				act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+				act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 			end
 		end
 		
@@ -1533,29 +1533,29 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_creampie':
 				'"What the fuck!" you shout. "You just came inside me! What the fuck were you thinking??"'
 				'"What?" he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk. "You''re the one who offered to have sex," <<$boydesc>> says, rolling his eyes. "If you''re that afraid of getting pregnant, maybe you shouldn''t be offering up your virginity in the back room of talent agenciy without birth control. That just seems stupid."'
 				'<i>I guess this is why I''m on birth control...</i> you think to yourself, glaring at him while he wipes his cock off. He leaves the packet next to you on the desk.'
-				act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean_dress'
+				act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean_dress'
 				
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean'
 				
 				act'Don''t clean up':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'<i>Fuck it,</i> you think to yourself. You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed to sit down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 			else
 				'"What the fuck!" you shout. "You just came inside me! What the fuck were you thinking?? I''m not on birth control!"'
 				'"Well you should have thought of that before deciding to fuck someone," he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk to clean his cock off. "That''s not my problem if you''re too stupid to trade sex for favors without taking birth control. If you''re that afraid of getting pregnant, maybe you shouldn''t be slutting it up in back rooms of talent agencies without birth control. That just seems stupid," <<$boydesc>> says, rolling his eyes.'
 				'He leaves the packet next to you on the desk.'
-				act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean_dress'
+				act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean_dress'
 				
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean'
 				
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'<i>Fuck it,</i> you think to yourself. You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed to sit down behind the desk. Wiping your pussy now wouldn''t do anything, you might as well just use it to your advantage while you can. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1567,8 +1567,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_facial':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Ahh, virgins really are the best," you hear <<$boydesc>> say. Carefully opening your eyes, you look past strands of cum to see him pulling some tissues from the desk to clean himself up. He tosses the packet down to you on the floor.'
 	'You look down at the tissues in front of you.'
-	act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean_dress'
-	act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean'
+	act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean_dress'
+	act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean'
 	act'Don''t bother':
 		cla & *clr
 		audition['bonus'] += 5
@@ -1577,14 +1577,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_facial':
 		'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 		'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 		'Looks like your bet is paying off'
-		act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+		act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 	end
 end
 
 
 !! ---------------------------------------- Anal -------------------------------------------------
 if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_anal1':
-	gs'arousal','anal',rand(4,14)
+	gs 'arousal', 'anal',rand(4,14)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/table_doggy/fuck1.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You cry out in shock when <<$boydesc>> suddenly plunges his cock into your ass dry.'
 	if audition['surprise_anal'] = 1:'<i>Fuck!</i> He didn''t tell you he was going to assfuck you! <i>Fucking warn a girl!</i>'
@@ -1593,7 +1593,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_anal1':
 	'"Gotta love assfucking defenseless girls!" he cries smugly, giving your ass a few slaps for his own benefit.'
 	'"Oh yeah! Harder!" you groan as sexily as possible, trying to roll with the punches.'
 	*nl
-	gs'audition_sex3','slutty_assfuck_cum'
+	gs 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_assfuck_cum'
 end
 
 
@@ -1608,10 +1608,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_anal2':
 		gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'anal','custom'
 		'<<$boydesc>>''s cock enters your ass and you grunt in discomfort, your rectum painfully dry. However uncomfortable it is for you, he doesn''t seem to mind and quickly builds up to a steady rhythm.'
 	end
-	gs'arousal','anal',rand(4,14)
+	gs 'arousal', 'anal',rand(4,14)
 	'"Man oh man, do I love fucking a vulnerable girl''s ass!" he grunts, emphasizing his words with each thrust. You can hear the smugness in his voice.'
 	*nl
-	gs'audition_sex3','slutty_assfuck_cum'
+	gs 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_assfuck_cum'
 end
 	
 if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_assfuck_cum':
@@ -1627,7 +1627,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_assfuck_cum':
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/cumanal1.mp4"></video></center>'
 			audition['creampie_surprise'] = 1
 			'After a few minutes, you feel him tense up and without warning he goes balls deep, cock pulsing. You groan at the sudden intrusion and feel a hot liquid spurting into your ass. When his cock stops pulsing he withdraws, you immediately feel cum drip from your gaping asshole.'
-			act'Continue':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 		end
 	elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 2:
 		'After a few more minutes, <<$boydesc>> grunts.'
@@ -1667,14 +1667,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_assfuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 					end
 					
@@ -1690,14 +1690,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_assfuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -1711,7 +1711,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_assfuck_cum':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Making firm eye contact with <<$boydesc>>, you take a deep breath and gather the cum in your mouth and gulp it down, sticking your tongue out after to show you swallowed everything.'
 					'"Outstanding," <<$boydesc>> says, grinning ear to ear. He pulls a pack of tissues from the desk and wipes himself off before pulling up his pants. You stand to face him and find out the result of the audition.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 				
 				act'Spit it out':
@@ -1724,7 +1724,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_assfuck_cum':
 					'You know he told you to, but you don''t really like the idea of swallowing and spit the cum out into your hand. Looking up at <<$boydesc>>, he has an irritated expression on his face.'
 					'"Tch."'
 					'He pulls a packet of tissues from the desk and wipes himself clean. He sees the cum on your hands, but just puts the pack back in the desk without offering you any.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1756,7 +1756,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_assfuck_cum':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -1767,7 +1767,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_assfuck_cum':
 					'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 					'"I put it on just for you!"'
 					'Looks like your bet is paying off.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end

locations/auditions.qsrc

@@ -55,17 +55,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'setup':
 		if audition['unique'] > 0:
 			gt'auditions_minor1', 'unique'
 		else
-			gt'auditions_minor1','general_dialogue'
+			gt 'auditions_minor1', 'general_dialogue'
 		end
 	elseif audition['roletype'] = 6 or audition['roletype'] = 7:
 		gt'auditions_secondary', $audition['role']
 	elseif audition['roletype'] >= 8:
 		gt'auditions_main', $audition['role']
 	else
-		if $audition['type'] = 'general':gt'auditions','general_dialogue'
-		if $audition['type'] = 'extra':gt'auditions','extra'
-		if $audition['type'] = 'titty':gt'auditions','tit_audition'
-		if $audition['type'] = 'general_titty':gt'auditions','general_tit_audition'
+		if $audition['type'] = 'general':gt 'auditions', 'general_dialogue'
+		if $audition['type'] = 'extra':gt 'auditions', 'extra'
+		if $audition['type'] = 'titty':gt 'auditions', 'tit_audition'
+		if $audition['type'] = 'general_titty':gt 'auditions', 'general_tit_audition'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tit_audition':
 	'"Ahh, yes. Thank you for coming. Just stand there for now please." She looks at you with a critical eye, making notes on a paper in front of her.'
 	if pcs_skin < 40:
 		'"Your skin is awful, you have acne everywhere. You need a better facial care routine. Actually, I''m sorry I have to stop right here. You simply don''t have the face for this role. Next please!" She calls out to the hall while unsympathetically shooing you out with her hand.'
-		act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 	else
 		if pcs_skin >= 40 and pcs_skin < 60:
 			'"Your skin could be a little better but nothing the makeup department can''t cover up. Now show me your breasts please."'
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tit_audition':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/hallway.jpg"></center>'
 				'Blushing, you can''t do it and leave the room red faced while you hear the casting director sneer in disgust again.'
 				'"Next!"'
-				act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 			end
 			if pcs_inhib < 50:
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tit_audition':
 							'"Ahh, uhh, yeah I did..."'
 							'"Hrmph. Maybe I should think about getting one of those myself some time..." she mutters.'
 						end
-						act'Continue':gt'auditions','tit_audition_result'
+						act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'tit_audition_result'
 					end
 				
 				end
@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tit_audition':
 						'"Ahh, uhh, yeah I did..."'
 						'"Hrmph. Maybe I should think about getting one of those myself some time..." she mutters.'
 					end
-					act'Continue':gt'auditions','tit_audition_result'
+					act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'tit_audition_result'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tit_audition':
 						'"Ahh, uhh, yeah I did..."'
 						'"Hrmph. Maybe I should think about getting one of those myself some time..." she mutters.'
 					end
-					act'Continue':gt'auditions','tit_audition_result'
+					act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'tit_audition_result'
 				end
 			end
 		else
@@ -222,7 +222,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tit_audition':
 					'"Yes! They used to be a lot smaller but I thought I''d upgrade."'
 					'"Hrmph. Maybe I should about get one of those myself some time..." she mutters.'
 				end
-				act'Continue':gt'auditions','tit_audition_result'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'tit_audition_result'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tit_audition_result':
 		'"Well, if it were up to me, I''d hire you. You''ve got a great complexion and nice perky boobs, but the director specifically asked for, in his own words, ''big fat titties,'' and unfortunately you''re just too small. Thanks for coming anyways, maybe another time. Next!"'
 		'You''re a bit stunned at how quickly you were dismissed based on something as discriminatory as the size of your breasts, but you don''t know what else to do so you simply prepare to leave.'
 		'"Can somebody please be intelligent enough to only send in busty girls? Thank you!"'
-		act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 	elseif first_tit_audition = 0:
 		first_tit_audition = 1
 		'"Well, you''ve got great tits! You''re hired."'
@@ -248,14 +248,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tit_audition_result':
 		else
 			'You start as you suddenly realize you were so surprised you never pulled your top back into place when she said you were hired. As you put everything back in place, you think about all that time you spent preparing for this audition and wonder why you even bothered...'
 		end
-		act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 	else
 		'"Welp, you''ve got great tits! You''re hired."'
 		'"Really? Great! Thank you!"'
 		'"Mhmm, yeah. Sure thing. Congratulations on landing the role of <<$audition[''role'']>>. Filming is in <<acting[''shoot_day''] - daystart>> days. Don''t be late Now clear out please, I need to keep auditioning other roles."'
 		'You knew this audition was never going to test your acting skills, you''ve done these before, but it still feels nice to be hired, even if it''s just for your breasts.'
 		!!insert variable to say the audition was successful
-		act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 	end
 
 end
@@ -297,9 +297,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_swallow_end':
 		'"Here''s the contract. Just sign here and it''s all official."'
 		act'Sign the contract':
 			if $clothingworntype = 'none':
-				gt'auditions','naked_signature'
+				gt 'auditions', 'naked_signature'
 			else
-				gt'auditions','signature'
+				gt 'auditions', 'signature'
 			end
 		end
 	else
@@ -317,7 +317,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_swallow_end':
 			else
 				'Completely stunned, you quickly get dressed and leave the room, stepping out into the hallway.'
 			end
-			act'Close the door':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Close the door': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 		
 		act'What the fuck?!':
@@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_swallow_end':
 			else
 				'You''re still fuming, but you can see that you really don''t have any real options here. You yank your clothes back on and stomp your way to the door, flinging it open and slaming it shut behind you.'
 			end
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -356,7 +356,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_facial_end':
 		'"Yeah I suppose so," he says as if musing to himself. "I think you''re a fine choice for the job. Shame you can''t wear your audition makeup for it though." He continues to smirk at you.'
 		'<<$boydesc>> reaches over to a stack of papers and looks through it for a bit before pulling one out and sliding it across the table towards you with a pen.'
 		'"Here''s the contract. Just sign here and it''s all official."'
-		act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','facial_signature_upset'
+		act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'facial_signature_upset'
 	else
 		'"Pfff," he huffs. "As if. I''ve had better before. Either get better at acting or practice giving head cause neither one is a good enough justification to get you the job. Now get out. I have real applicants to audition."'
 		act'Leave the room':
@@ -364,7 +364,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_facial_end':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You blink, finding yourself not exactly surprised, but also unable to conjure a response.'
 			'Without another word, you pick up your things and leave the room, stepping out into the hallway.'
-			act'Close the door':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Close the door': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 		
 		act'What the fuck?!':
@@ -386,7 +386,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_facial_end':
 					'You''re still fuming, but you can see that you really don''t have any real options here. You yank your clothes back on and stomp your way to the door, flinging it open and slaming it shut behind you.'
 				end
 			end
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -417,9 +417,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_results':
 			'"If you''re free on Fridays I''d be happy to toss you a few rubles to fuck it again," he says, sliding the paper over to you with a pen. "Just sign this and it''s all offical."'
 		end
 		if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
-			act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','signature'
+			act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'signature'
 		else
-			act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','naked_signature'
+			act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'naked_signature'
 		end
 	else
 		'"Well a deal''s is a deal... but I don''t think you really held up your end."'
@@ -441,7 +441,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_results':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You blink, unable to conjure a response.'
 			'Without another word, you pick up your things and leave the room, stepping out into the hallway.'
-			act'Close the door':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Close the door': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 		
 		act'Clench your jaw in anger and leave':
@@ -451,7 +451,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_results':
 			if actress['cast_couch_deny'] > 0:'<i>Great, another stingy fucker,</i> you think to yourself. <i>And another wasted audition spent on the casting couch.</i>'
 			
 			'As pissed off as you are, there isn''t anything you can do about this. You grab your things and stomp to the door, slamming it shut on the way out.'
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 		
 !!{		act'What the fuck?!':
@@ -497,7 +497,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_results':
 					'You''re still fuming, but you can see that you really don''t have any real options here. You yank your clothes back on and stomp your way to the door, flinging it open and slaming it shut behind you.'
 				end
 			end
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end}
 	end
 end
@@ -512,7 +512,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_results':
 		'"Well, a promise is a promise," he says, reaching into a stack of papers. "Damn, what a tight pussy," he continues to speak as he scribbles a few marks on the sheet he pulls out.'
 		'"Not much of an actress, but a great fuck. Maybe you should be doing porn instead. Though if you were, I might never get to fuck you again, ha!"'
 		'With his last comment, he slides the paper over to you with a pen. "Just sign this and it''s all offical."'
-		act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','naked_signature'
+		act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'naked_signature'
 	else
 		'"Well a promise is a promise... but you weren''t <i>that</i> good a fuck."'
 		'You feel the blood drain from your face.'
@@ -523,7 +523,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_results':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You blink, unable to conjure a response.'
 			'Without another word, you pick up your things and leave the room, stepping out into the hallway.'
-			act'Close the door':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Close the door': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 		
 		act'What the fuck?!':
@@ -551,7 +551,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_results':
 					'You''re still fuming, but you can see that you really don''t have any real options here. You yank your clothes back on and stomp your way to the door, flinging it open and slaming it shut behind you.'
 				end
 			end
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -589,9 +589,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_results':
 			'"If you''re free on Fridays I''d be happy to toss you a few rubles to fuck it again," he says, sliding the paper over to you with a pen. "Just sign this and it''s all offical."'
 		end
 		if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
-			act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','signature'
+			act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'signature'
 		else
-			act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','naked_signature'
+			act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'naked_signature'
 		end
 	else
 		'"Well a deal''s is a deal... but I don''t think you really held up your end."'
@@ -613,7 +613,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_results':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You blink, unable to conjure a response.'
 			'Without another word, you pick up your things and leave the room, stepping out into the hallway.'
-			act'Close the door':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Close the door': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 		
 		act'Clench your jaw in anger and leave':
@@ -623,7 +623,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_results':
 			if actress['cast_couch_deny'] > 0:'<i>Great, another stingy fucker,</i> you think to yourself. <i>And another wasted audition spent on the casting couch.</i>'
 			
 			'As pissed off as you are, there isn''t anything you can do about this. You grab your things and stomp to the door, slamming it shut on the way out.'
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 		
 		act'What the fuck?!':
@@ -669,7 +669,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_results':
 					'You''re still fuming, but you can see that you really don''t have any real options here. You yank your clothes back on and stomp your way to the door, flinging it open and slaming it shut behind you.'
 				end
 			end
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -684,7 +684,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_results':
 		'"Well, a promise is a promise," he says, reaching into a stack of papers. "Damn, what a tight pussy," he continues to speak as he scribbles a few marks on the sheet he pulls out.'
 		'"Not much of an actress, but a great fuck. Maybe you should be doing porn instead. Though if you were, I might never get to fuck you again, ha!"'
 		'With his last comment, he slides the paper over to you with a pen. "Just sign this and it''s all offical."'
-		act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','naked_signature'
+		act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'naked_signature'
 	else
 		'"Well a promise is a promise... but you weren''t <i>that</i> good a fuck."'
 		if cumloc[0] > 0:
@@ -701,7 +701,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_results':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You blink, unable to conjure a response.'
 			'Without another word, you pick up your things and leave the room, stepping out into the hallway.'
-			act'Close the door':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Close the door': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 		
 		act'What the fuck?!':
@@ -729,7 +729,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_results':
 					'You''re still fuming, but you can see that you really don''t have any real options here. You yank your clothes back on and stomp your way to the door, flinging it open and slaming it shut behind you.'
 				end
 			end
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -760,9 +760,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_results':
 			'"You''re my favorite kind of actress you know that?" he says, pulling a sheet from a stack of papers. "Anyone ever tell you what a great ass you have? Real tight and very slappable," he continues to say as he scribbles a few marks on the sheet he pulled. He slides it over to you with a pen. "Just sign this and it''s all offical."'
 		end
 		if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
-			act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','signature'
+			act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'signature'
 		else
-			act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','naked_signature'
+			act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'naked_signature'
 		end
 	else
 		'"True talent my ass, I''ve met street whores with more ''talent'' than you."'
@@ -784,7 +784,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_results':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You blink, unable to conjure a response.'
 			'Without another word, you pick up your things and leave the room, stepping out into the hallway.'
-			act'Close the door':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Close the door': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 		
 		act'Clench your jaw in anger and leave':
@@ -794,7 +794,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_results':
 			if actress['cast_couch_deny'] > 0:'<i>Great, another stingy fucker,</i> you think to yourself. <i>And another wasted audition spent on the casting couch.</i>'
 			
 			'As pissed off as you are, there isn''t anything you can do about this. You grab your things and stomp to the door, slamming it shut on the way out.'
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 		
 		act'What the fuck?!':
@@ -840,7 +840,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_results':
 					'You''re still fuming, but you can see that you really don''t have any real options here. You yank your clothes back on and stomp your way to the door, flinging it open and slaming it shut behind you.'
 				end
 			end
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -856,7 +856,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_results':
 		'"You''re my favorite kind of actress, you know that?" he says, reaching into a stack of papers. "So many of them are all, <i>''Noo-ooo! I want to save my first time for someone special!''</i>," he continues to speak as he scribbles a few marks on the sheet he pulls out.'
 		'"You knew what to do to get what you wanted. Besides, no one stays cherry for long in this business."'
 		'With his last comment, he slides the paper over to you with a pen. "Just sign this and it''s all offical."'
-		act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','naked_signature'
+		act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'naked_signature'
 	else
 		'"Please, I''ve had loose old whores who were better than you."'
 		if cumloc[0] > 0:
@@ -873,7 +873,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_results':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You blink, unable to conjure a response.'
 			'Without another word, you pick up your things and leave the room, stepping out into the hallway.'
-			act'Close the door':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Close the door': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 		
 		act'What the fuck?!':
@@ -901,7 +901,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_results':
 					'You''re still fuming, but you can see that you really don''t have any real options here. You yank your clothes back on and stomp your way to the door, flinging it open and slaming it shut behind you.'
 				end
 			end
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -927,7 +927,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'signature':
 	*nl
 	'"Congratulations <<$pcs_firstname>>. You are officially cast as <<$audition[''role'']>>. Thank you for coming."'
 	'"Thank you for casting me," you nod back and then take your copy of the contract and step out into the hallway.'
-	act'Shut the door':gt'auditions','reflection'
+	act 'Shut the door': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'naked_signature':
@@ -954,7 +954,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'naked_signature':
 	end
 	gs 'clothing','wear_last_worn'
 	gs 'underwear','wear'
-	act'Shut the door':gt'auditions','reflection'
+	act 'Shut the door': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 end
 
 
@@ -968,7 +968,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'facial_signature_upset':
 	'As the pen scribbles on paper, a drop of cum falls from your face and spatters on the page next to your name, as if dotting it with finality.'
 	'"Congratulations! You officially cast as <<$audition[''role'']>>. Thank you for auditioning," he says, his smile breaking into a grin.'
 	'"Thank you for casting me," you say quietly, taking your copy of the contract and step out into the hallway.'
-	act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+	act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'facial_signature_slutty':
@@ -978,7 +978,7 @@ end
 !! ----------------------------------- Sexual Favors -----------------------------------------
 if $ARGS[0] = 'audition_escape':
 	gs 'willpower','pay','resist'
-	gs'auditions','role_denied'
+	gs 'auditions', 'role_denied'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 	'"I have to go!" you yelp and rush out of the room.'
 	act'Rush out the door':
@@ -993,7 +993,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'audition_escape':
 			'<i>Well, that''s another horny casting director escaped.</i>'
 			'Shaking your head, you continue on down the hall, the audition definitely over.'
 		end
-		act'Leave':gt'talent_agency','start'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'talent_agency', 'start'
 	end
 
 end
@@ -1049,7 +1049,7 @@ end
 
 	
 if $ARGS[0] = 'reflection':
-	gs'arousal','end'
+	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 		gs 'clothing','wear_last_worn'
 		gs 'underwear','wear'
@@ -1057,16 +1057,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reflection':
 	gs'stat'
 	if audition['cast_couch'] > 0:
 		if actress['cast_couch_vag'] = 1 and audition['cast_couch_virgin'] = 1:
-			gt'auditions','virgin_reflect'
+			gt 'auditions', 'virgin_reflect'
 	!!	elseif actress['cast_couch'] = 1:
-	!!		gt'auditions','reflect_first_time'
+	!!		gt 'auditions', 'reflect_first_time'
 		else
-			gt'audition_reflections','reflection_thoughts'
+			gt 'audition_reflections', 'reflection_thoughts'
 	!!	else
-	!!		gt'auditions','reflection_refused'
+	!!		gt 'auditions', 'reflection_refused'
 		end
 	else
-		gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+		gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1077,7 +1077,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reflection_end':
 	else
 		gs 'auditions','role_fail'
 	end
-	gt'talent_agency','hallway'
+	gt 'talent_agency', 'hallway'
 end
 
 !!if $ARGS[0] = 'reflect_first_time':

locations/auditions_minor1.qsrc

@@ -13,14 +13,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'general_dialogue':
 		'"Your skin is awful," he says shaking his head. "Don''t you have any kind of skin care routine at all? I''m sorry, but I just can''t cast you for this role like that. Please work on that before you audition for another role like this."'
 		*nl
 		'You''re shamefully shooed out of the room as the next girl is called in.'
-		act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 	else
 		if pcs_skin >= 40 and pcs_skin < 60:
 			'"Hmm, your skin is a little rough but it''s nothing the makeup department can''t fix. Very well, please start your audition."'
 		else
 			'"Good skin," he mutters to himself while marking on a paper. "Will be good for the camera, but how will her acting be? Okay, please read the lines you were given."'
 		end
-		act'Continue':gt'auditions_minor1','general_dialogue2'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'auditions_minor1', 'general_dialogue2'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -45,16 +45,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'general_dialogue2':
 			'You do... okay. You didn''t do a lot of preparation for the scene, but at least it isn''t your first time reading the script. It isn''t a strong performance, but it isn''t a weak one either. But maybe you should have put in some more work...'
 		end
 		'...'
-		act'Finish the audition':gt'auditions_minor1','general_dialogue_result'
+		act 'Finish the audition': gt 'auditions_minor1', 'general_dialogue_result'
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'general_dialogue_result':
 	gs 'auditions', 'audition_result'
 	if audition['result'] >= audition['requirement']:
-		gt'auditions_minor1','general_audition_success'
+		gt 'auditions_minor1', 'general_audition_success'
 	else
-		gt'auditions_minor1','general_audition_fail'
+		gt 'auditions_minor1', 'general_audition_fail'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'general_dialogue_success':
 	end
 	'"Yes, you have the job. Now make sure to keep rehearsing before it''s time to shoot. Remember, the scene is scheduled to film in <<acting[''shoot_day''] - daystart>> days. Don''t be late, he says while shuffling through some papers on the desk. Eventually he pulls one out, double checks it, and slides it across the table to you with a pen.'
 	'"Here''s your contract. Just sign here and it''s a done deal."'
-	act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','signature'
+	act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'signature'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'general_dialogue_fail':
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'general_dialogue_fail':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/hallway.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Oh... okay. Thank you for having me..."'
 		'Dejected and humiliated you leave the room and exit to the hallway where a perky girl is already excitedly preparing to go in. The door closes behind you and the truth of what happens comes with it. You failed the audition.'
-		act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 	end
 	gs 'auditions_minor1','casting_couch'
 end
@@ -115,14 +115,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 				'You stop suddenly as <<$boydesc[0]>> cuts you off with a wave.'
 				'"Stop! I''ve heard enough! You didn''t get the role now leave!" he points towards the door. "Or I will get security to escort you out."'
 				'Dejected and humiliated you leave the room and exit to the hallway where a perky girl is already excitedly preparing to go in. The door closes behind you and you slouch in place. Well, it''s really over now. You failed the audition.'
-				act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 			else
 				actress['audition_pressure'] += 1
 				'You stop suddenly as <<$boydesc[0]>> stands up and walks around the desk towards to you.'
 				'"Really? You''ll do anything?" He steps very close to you, close enough to feel his breath. "Do you really mean that? Anything?"'
 				'"Huh-? I... I, uhh..."'
 				gs 'willpower','misc','resist','easy'
-				act'Run away (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':gt'auditions','audition_escape'
+				act 'Run away (<<will_cost>> Willpower)': gt 'auditions', 'audition_escape'
 				
 				act'"Uhmm... Umm......"':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -130,11 +130,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 					'"Uhmm... Umm......" you freeze not knowing what to do. "I- Eeek-!"'
 					'You yelp as you feel <<$boydesc[0]>>''s hand take a huge grab of your ass.'
 					'"I can get you this part," he whispers in your ear. "But what are you willing to do to make that happen?" <<$boydesc[0]>> moves his hand to your shoulder and begins to push you down towards the floor.'
-					act'Run away (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':gt'auditions','audition_escape'
+					act 'Run away (<<will_cost>> Willpower)': gt 'auditions', 'audition_escape'
 					
-					act'Don''t resist':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_bj1'
+					act'Don''t resist':gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_bj1'
 					
-					act'Kneel down and blow him':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_bj1'
+					act 'Kneel down and blow him': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_bj1'
 				end
 				
 				act'"I''ll do anything" (neutral)':
@@ -145,11 +145,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 					audition['position'] = rand(1,3)
 					if audition['position'] = 1:
 						'"Then get on your knees."'
-						act'Kneel down':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_bj1'
+						act 'Kneel down': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_bj1'
 						act'Undress first':
 							gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 							gs 'underwear', 'remove'
-							gt'audition_sex2','neutral_bj1'
+							gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_bj1'
 						end
 					elseif audition['position'] = 2:
 						'"Then take off your clothes and bend over."'
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 										'He flips up your skirt.'
 										'"No panties. You little <i>whore</i>. I bet you came here hoping this would happen didn''t you?" he says, pushing his cock into your asshole.'
 									end
-									act'Get fucked':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_assfuck2'
+									act 'Get fucked': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_assfuck2'
 								else
 									cla & *clr
 									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/grope.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -193,13 +193,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 											'He roughly pushes you down onto the desk and flips up your skirt.'
 											'"No panties. You little <i>whore</i>. I bet you came here hoping this would happen didn''t you?" he says, pushing his cock into your asshole.'
 										end
-										act'Get fucked':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_anal2'
+										act 'Get fucked': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_anal2'
 									end
 									act'What about anal instead?':
 										cla & *nl
 										'"What if I gave you my ass instead?" you ask hesitantly. "Not my virginity, but I''ll let you fuck my ass. For the role."'
 										'"Well let''s see that ass and then we''ll decide if you get the role."'
-										act'Take off your clothes':gt'auditions','neutral_anal1'
+										act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_anal1'
 									end
 									
 									act'Give in':
@@ -207,24 +207,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 										'"Okay," you whisper, closing your eyes and taking a deep breath. "Okay. I''ll let you fuck me... If you promise to give me the role."'
 										'<<$boydesc[0]>> grins wolfishly.'
 										'"It''s a promise. Now let''s get those clothes off," he says, now pulling at your clothes with renewed vigor.'
-										act'Take off your clothes':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin1'
+										act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin1'
 									end
 								end
 							end
 						end
 						act'Bend over':
 							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin2'
+								gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_virgin2'
 							else
-								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_fuck2'
+								gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_fuck2'
 							end
 						end
 						act'Ask him to put on a condom':
 							audition['condom'] = 1
 							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin2'
+								gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_virgin2'
 							else
-								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_fuck2'
+								gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_fuck2'
 							end
 						end
 					elseif audition['position'] = 3:
@@ -247,7 +247,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 										'He flips up your skirt.'
 										'"No panties. You little <i>whore</i>. I bet you came here hoping this would happen didn''t you?" he says, pushing his cock into your asshole.'
 									end
-									act'Get fucked':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_assfuck2'
+									act 'Get fucked': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_assfuck2'
 								else
 									cla & *clr
 									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/grope.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -269,13 +269,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 											'He roughly pushes you down onto the desk and flips up your skirt.'
 											'"No panties. You little <i>whore</i>. I bet you came here hoping this would happen didn''t you?" he says, pushing his cock into your asshole.'
 										end
-										act'Get fucked':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_anal2'
+										act 'Get fucked': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_anal2'
 									end
 									act'What about anal instead?':
 										cla & *nl
 										'"What if I gave you my ass instead?" you ask hesitantly. "Not my virginity, but I''ll let you fuck my ass. For the role."'
 										'"Well let''s see that ass and then we''ll decide if you get the role."'
-										act'Take off your clothes':gt'auditions','neutral_anal1'
+										act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_anal1'
 									end
 									
 									act'Give in':
@@ -284,24 +284,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 										'"Okay," you whisper, closing your eyes and taking a deep breath. "Okay. I''ll let you fuck me... If you promise to give me the role."'
 										'<<$boydesc[0]>> grins wolfishly.'
 										'"It''s a promise. Now let''s get those clothes off," he says, now pulling at your clothes with renewed vigor.'
-										act'Take off your clothes':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin1'
+										act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin1'
 									end
 								end
 							end
 						end
 						act'Get on the desk':
 							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin1'
+								gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_virgin1'
 							else
-								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_fuck1'
+								gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_fuck1'
 							end
 						end
 						act'Ask him to put on a condom':
 							audition['condom'] = 1
 							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin1'
+								gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_virgin1'
 							else
-								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_fuck1'
+								gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_fuck1'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -313,11 +313,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 					audition['position'] = rand(1,3)
 					if audition['position'] = 1:
 						'"Then get on your knees."'
-						act'Kneel down':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_bj1'
+						act 'Kneel down': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_bj1'
 						act'Undress first':
 							gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 							gs 'underwear', 'remove'
-							gt'audition_sex3','slutty_bj1'
+							gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_bj1'
 						end
 					elseif audition['position'] = 2:
 						'"Then take off your clothes and bend over."'
@@ -337,27 +337,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 								'"By the way, I''m a virgin," you say hoping to entice him for a more favorable audition, bending over and spreading your pussy lips to show him the proof.'
 								if rand(1,2) = 1:									
 									'"So?" You feel a hovering presence above your hands, a little too high for where he should be to line up with your pussy. "I was going to assfuck you."  And you gasp when his cock immediately starts pushing into your asshole.'
-									act'Get assfucked':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_assfuck2'
+									act 'Get assfucked': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_assfuck2'
 								else
 									'"A virgin huh?" He gives you a hungry look. "Well, don''t mind if I do then..." he continues, lining his cock up with your pussy.'
 									audition['bonus'] += 10
-									act'Lose your virginity':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin2'
+									act 'Lose your virginity': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin2'
 								end
 							end
 						end
 						act'Bend over':
 							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin2'
+								gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin2'
 							else
-								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_fuck2'
+								gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_fuck2'
 							end
 						end
 						act'Ask him to put on a condom':
 							audition['condom'] = 1
 							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin2'
+								gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin2'
 							else
-								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_fuck2'
+								gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_fuck2'
 							end
 						end
 					elseif audition['position'] = 3:
@@ -378,22 +378,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 								'"By the way, I''m a virgin," you say hoping to entice him for a more favorable audition, laying back on the desk and spreading your pussy to show him the proof.'
 								'"A virgin huh?" He gives you a hungry look. "Well, don''t mind if I do then..." he continues, lining his cock up with your pussy.'
 								audition['bonus'] += 10
-								act'Lose your virginity':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin1'
+								act 'Lose your virginity': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin1'
 							end
 						end
 						act'Get on the desk':
 							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin1'
+								gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin1'
 							else
-								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_anal1'
+								gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_anal1'
 							end
 						end
 						act'Ask him to put on a condom':
 							audition['condom'] = 1
 							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin1'
+								gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin1'
 							else
-								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_anal1'
+								gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_anal1'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -419,7 +419,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Well..." you start. "What if I suck your dick?"'
 				'"Let''s see how good you are first," he responds while pushing you down to your knees.'
-				act'Kneel down':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_bj1'
+				act 'Kneel down': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_bj1'
 			end
 			
 			act'"I''ll fuck you for it"':
@@ -427,7 +427,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Well..." you say with a sultry smile. "What if I fuck you for it?"'
 				'"Then you''d have to be naked," he says tugging at your clothes.'
-				act'Strip down':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_fuck'
+				act 'Strip down': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_fuck'
 			end
 			
 			act'"I''ll let you fuck my ass"':
@@ -435,7 +435,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 				'"I''ll let you fuck my ass if you give me the part," you say.'
 				'"Then get naked," he says tugging at your clothes.'
-				act'Strip down':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_anal2'
+				act 'Strip down': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_anal2'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -451,7 +451,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'unique':
 	!! this is to leave room for the possibility of having more files than just this one
-	if $audition['role'] = 'Slutty Club Girl':gt'auditions_minor1','SluttyClubGirl'
+	if $audition['role'] = 'Slutty Club Girl':gt 'auditions_minor1', 'SluttyClubGirl'
 	
 end
 
@@ -495,7 +495,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SluttyClubGirl':
 			'...'
 		end
 		'You''re nearing the end of the dialogue and according to the script, your character flashes her breasts and you wonder if you should do that in an audition like this or if it''s not necessary and you would embarrass yourself.'
-		act'Finish the audition without flashing':gt'auditions_minor1','minor1_skip_flash'
+		act 'Finish the audition without flashing': gt 'auditions_minor1', 'minor1_skip_flash'
 		if pcs_inhib < 50:
 			if pcs_inhib > 40:
 				gs 'willpower', 'skill', 'pcs_inhib', 'force', 'easy'
@@ -503,12 +503,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SluttyClubGirl':
 				gs 'willpower', 'skill', 'pcs_inhib', 'force', 'hard'
 			end
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-				act 'Flash your tits (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':gt'auditions_minor1','minor1_flash'				
+				act 'Flash your tits (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':gt 'auditions_minor1', 'minor1_flash'				
 			else
 				act 'Flash your tits (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You''re too shy to show him your breasts.</font>'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Flash your tits':gt'auditions_minor1','minor1_flash'
+			act 'Flash your tits':gt 'auditions_minor1', 'minor1_flash'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -526,7 +526,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'minor1_flash':
 	elseif pcs_inhib > 50:
 		'You pop your top and flash the casting director without any reservation, holding the pose for a couple seconds before putting your top back down again. It''s not like you mind showing off your body off. Whether or not the role demands it, you just don''t have a problem with it.'
 	end
-	act'Finish the audition':gt'auditions_minor1','minor1_result'
+	act 'Finish the audition': gt 'auditions_minor1', 'minor1_result'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'minor1_skip_flash':
@@ -548,7 +548,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'minor1_skip_flash':
 		'He looks very irritated.'
 		*nl
 		'What are you going to do about it?'
-		act'Just accept the results':gt'auditions_minor1','minor1_result'
+		act 'Just accept the results': gt 'auditions_minor1', 'minor1_result'
 		act'Redo the line and flash him':
 			cla & *clr
 			audition['flash'] = 1
@@ -567,7 +567,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'minor1_skip_flash':
 				'You do so without any reservation, holding the pose for a couple seconds before putting your top back down again. It''s not like you mind showing off your body off. If he wanted to see your tits he just should have asked to begin with.'
 			end
 			'"How was that?"'
-			act'Finish the audition':gt'auditions_minor1','minor1_result'
+			act 'Finish the audition': gt 'auditions_minor1', 'minor1_result'
 		end
 		
 		act'Just flash him':
@@ -599,7 +599,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'minor1_skip_flash':
 			'You do so without any reservation, holding the pose for a couple seconds before putting your top back down again. It''s not like you mind showing off your body off. If he wanted to see your tits he just should have asked to begin with.'
 		end
 		'"How was that?"'
-		act'Finish the audition':gt'auditions_minor1','minor1_result'
+		act 'Finish the audition': gt 'auditions_minor1', 'minor1_result'
 	end
 	
 	act'Just flash him':
@@ -611,7 +611,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'minor1_skip_flash':
 		'You don''t redo the line, simply pulling up your top and flashing your tits at him.'
 		'"There."'
 		'He seems a little amused by your attitude, but otherwise doesn''t say anything as you pull your top back down.'
-		act'Finish the audition':gt'auditions_minor1','minor1_result'
+		act 'Finish the audition': gt 'auditions_minor1', 'minor1_result'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -628,7 +628,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'minor1_result':
 		'You smile brightly, happy you got the job.'
 		'"Which reminds me," he says, shuffling through some papers on his desk, looking for one in particular. Finding it, he slides it forward with a pen.'
 		'"Here''s your contract. We''re filming in <<acting[''shoot_day''] - daystart>> days. Keep practicing in the meantime. Sign here and it''s a done deal."'
-		act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','signature'
+		act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'signature'
 	else
 		if audition['result'] > audition['requirement'] - 10:
 			if audition['flash'] = 1:
@@ -657,9 +657,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'minor1_result':
 			'Dejected and humiliated you leave the room and exit to the hallway where a girl who is clearly braless is already pushing past you to go in.'
 			*nl
 			'The door closes behind you and the result is cemented: failure.'
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
-		gs'auditions_minor1','casting_couch'
+		gs 'auditions_minor1', 'casting_couch'
 	end
 end
 --- auditions_minor1 ---------------------------------

locations/balkon2.qsrc

@@ -6,7 +6,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kurit':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 10
 	gs 'drugs', 'smoke'
-	pcs_sleep += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/apartment/kurit.jpg"></center>'
 	'You put the cigarette in your mouth and tightly squeeze it with your lips as you light it. You inhale the smoke and hold it in for for a second before continuing and enjoying your smoke.'

locations/ballet_npc.qsrc

@@ -1,8 +1,13 @@
 # ballet_npc
+!! Date Created: 17th Sept, 2022
+!! Modified date: 11th April, 2024
+!! Version: .01 - initial release
+!! Version: .02 - bug fixes, code refactor and new character variable $npc_img_path to link characters default profile image and related images.
+!! Author: Hooded Silence
+!!
+!! Set up dance school dramatis personae - Start at 3500 to avoid conflicts with main game.
 
-!! Set up dance school dramatis personae - Start at 3500 to avoid conflicts with main game...
-
-!! Students
+!! Pushkin Ballet School Students - Year one schoot start
 
 npctemp = 3501
 $npc_firstname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Maya'
@@ -22,36 +27,39 @@ gs 'npcstaticdefaults', 'body', 'model'
 !! mod appearance NPC settings, height in cm, weight in kg
 $npc_haircolour['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Blonde'
 $npc_eyecolour['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'blue'
-$npc_height['A<<npctemp>>'] = 160
-$npc_weight['A<<npctemp>>'] = 50 
+$npc_height['A<<npctemp>>'] = str(160)
+$npc_weight['A<<npctemp>>'] = str(50)
+$npc_img_path['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'images/characters/pushkin/maya'
 
-!! NPC Temp: 3502 - Kima
+npctemp = 3502 
 !! Kima Agapova - The dance critic and fanatical to become a dancer, no matter the cost. Keeps a 'black book' of contacts and information. Arguably the best dancer in the school alongside Maya. She will try and gather information on Sveta's activities.
 !! will try and blackmail Sveta into either giving up if she learns if she's has dirty secrets such as prostitution, slut rep, etc or passing the information to Rudolph to destroy her career to remove her as competition.
+$npc_img_path['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'images/characters/ballet'
 
-!! NPC temp: 3503 - Tanis
+npctemp = 3503
 !! Tanis Komarova - Bitchy dancer who thinks she''s already the Principle Dancer. Age 17. Future concept as the class bully to other dancers and students.
+$npc_img_path['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'images/characters/ballet' 
 
-!! NPC temp: 3504 - Galina
+npctemp = 3504
 !! Galina Molchalina - Quiet and shy student, age 16. Highly secretive and doesn't engage with the class, she also has a nervous personality as if she's afraid. This comes from her family being marked as 'radicals' by the old KGB and under constant watch from FSB even to this day.
+$npc_img_path['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'images/characters/ballet' 
 
-!! NPC temp: 3505 - Taisiya
+npctemp = 3505 
 !! Taisiya Lebedeva - The eldest student, and an elegant beauty, Age 18. A quiet, but captivating beauty who has a enchanting charismatic presence that men can't keep their eyes off her leading to bitchy remarks from other girls. 
 !! She''s oblivous to her beauty instead focusing on acting and dance. (side note: surname is one of the most common in St P.), she's got a strong religous personality.
-!! Malta Aurelie
-
-!! NPC temp: 3506 - Nikita
-!! Nikita Volkova - Bronya''s daughter. Age 16. Keep fit fanatic, and does tap, ballet, etc. As Bronya's daughter she's been given privileged access to the school, whilst no great talent she's still one of the better dance students at the school but just not at ballet despite Bronya's wishes.
+!! Character model: Malta Aurelie
+$npc_img_path['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'images/characters/ballet'
 
-!! NPC temp: 3507 - Gasha
-!! Gasha Morozova - The youngest in the class at 15, close friend of Nikita as the grew up in the same village. Nikita and Galina are often seen in each others company in the local coffee shop and rarely seen alone leading to rumours. She''s a bit of a foodie, and love sweet things which conflicts with keeping in shape for her dance career.
+npctemp = 3506
+!! Nikita Volkova - Bronya''s daughter. Age 16. Keep fit fanatic, and does tap, ballet, etc. As Bronya's daughter she's been given privileged access to the school, whilst not a great talent she's still one of the best dance students at the school but just not at ballet despite Bronya's hopes.
+$npc_img_path['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'images/characters/ballet'
 
 npctemp = 3507
 $npc_firstname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Gasha'
 $npc_nickname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Gasha'
 $npc_lastname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Morozova'
 $npc_usedname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Gasha'
-$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'The youngest in the class at 15, close friend of Nikita as the grew up in the same village. Nikita and Galina are often seen in each others company in the local coffee shop and rarely seen alone leading to rumours. She''s a bit of a foodie, and love sweet things which conflicts with keeping in shape for her dance career.'
+$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'The youngest in the class at 15, close friend of Nikita as the grew up in the same village. Nikita and Galina are often seen in each others company in the local coffee shop and rarely seen alone leading to rumors. She''s a bit of a foodie, and love sweet things which conflicts with keeping in shape for her dance career.'
 npc_dob['A<<npctemp>>'] = 20000705
 npc_gender['A<<npctemp>>'] = 1
 npc_bust['A<<npctemp>>'] = 9
@@ -64,16 +72,20 @@ gs 'npcstaticdefaults', 'body', 'model'
 !! mod appearance NPC settings, height in cm, weight in kg
 $npc_haircolour['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Brunette'
 $npc_eyecolour['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Blue'
-$npc_height['A<<npctemp>>'] = 145
-$npc_weight['A<<npctemp>>'] = 40 
-
-
-!! NPC temp: 3508 - Calina
-!! NPC temp: 3509 - Ruza
+$npc_height['A<<npctemp>>'] = str(145)
+$npc_weight['A<<npctemp>>'] = str(40)
+$npc_img_path['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'images/characters/pushkin/gasha'
+
+!! Calina
+npctemp = 3508 
+$npc_img_path['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'images/characters/ballet'
+!! Ruza
+npctemp = 3509 
+$npc_img_path['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'images/characters/ballet'
 !! Calina and Ruza Sokolova - Twin dancers. Not interested in ballet, but took the course to further their education into becoming dancers. Age 17. They also professional models with a Moscow agency. 
 !! Adel and Alina Fakhteeva twins?
 
-!! Staff
+!! Ballet Staff 
 
 npctemp = 3510
 $npc_firstname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Rudolf'
@@ -81,7 +93,7 @@ $npc_nickname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Rudolf '
 $npc_lastname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Baryshnikov'
 $npc_usedname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Rudolf'
 npc_dob['A<<npctemp>>'] = 19820920
-$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Rudolf is a charming and handsome man, he was on course to become one of Russia''s best ballet dancers until a stage accident cut short his career. Today he works at the dance school as a instructor, agent and a board member. Many rumours about his life have swirled around him over the years but none have been proven.'
+$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Rudolf is a charming and handsome man, he was on course to become one of Russia''s best ballet dancers until a stage accident cut short his career. Today he works at the dance school as a instructor, agent and a board member. Many rumors about his life have swirled around him over the years but none have been proven.'
 npc_gender['A<<npctemp>>'] = 0
 gs 'npcstaticdefaults', 'defaults'
 $npc_thdick['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'slim'
@@ -90,25 +102,27 @@ npc_sexskill['A<<npctemp>>'] = 2
 npc_intel['A<<npctemp>>'] = 67
 hotcat_rating['A<<npctemp>>'] = 8
 npc_spermpot['A<<npctemp>>'] = 15000
+$npc_img_path['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'images/characters/pushkin/rudolph'
 
-
-!! NPC temp: 3511 - Biserka
 !! class teacher: Biserka Ananiashvili
+npctemp = 3511
+$npc_img_path['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'images/characters/ballet'
 
-!! NPC temp: 3512 - Sofia
 !! class teacher/pianist: Sofia Solovyova
+npctemp = 3512
+$npc_img_path['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'images/characters/ballet'
 
-!! NPC temp: 3513 - Bronya 
 !! Residential Warden: Bronya Volkova and former violinist, strict but fair has two daughters with Nikita being the youngest training to be a ballet dancer and her eldest in Germany training to be a surgeon. 
-
-npc_temp = 3513
+npctemp = 3513 
 $npc_firstname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Bronya'
 $npc_nickname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Bronya '
 $npc_lastname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Volkova'
 $npc_usedname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Bronya'
+gs 'npcstaticdefaults', 'defaults'
+$npc_img_path['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'images/characters/ballet'
 
 !! NPC temp: 3514 - Physio - Pelageya Makarova
- 
+
 !! Make up teacher: Rada Egorova, the teacher never bothers to tell the class after a week. Former stage make up artist, beautician and scatterbrained.
 
 !! Staff Physio -  Syuzanna Zakharova / Klavdii Frolov (Klavdii is a pun)
@@ -117,6 +131,7 @@ $npc_usedname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Bronya'
 !! Names f: Boleslava Grigoreva, Esfir Mikhaylova, Gavriila Makarova (warrior),Yustina Vinogradova
 !! Names m: Ipatiy Novikov, Venedikt Sorokin, Ony Volkov, Kazimir Sokolov
 
+killvar 'npctemp'
 --- ballet_npc ---------------------------------