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minor text fixes for mother

nugerumon 6 miesięcy temu
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1 zmienionych plików z 32 dodań i 32 usunięć
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      locations/mother.qsrc

+ 32 - 32
locations/mother.qsrc

@@ -241,7 +241,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
             gs 'stat'
         end
     end
-    
+
     if SchoolAtestat = 1 and SAtestatGift = 0:
 		if class['school_grade_average'] >= 90:
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', 40
@@ -289,14 +289,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 				act 'Move away':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			end
 		end
-      
+
 		!Tell mother that you were raped and skip mother being angry at you for being sexualy active event
 		if motherKnowRaped = 0 and (rape > 0 or hidden_rape > 0):
 			act 'Tell her about your rape':
 				gt 'mother_chats', 'rape_talk'
 			end
 		end
-      
+
 		act 'Chat':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut+=rand(10,15)
@@ -348,7 +348,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 							moneyfrommom90 = 200
 							moneyfrommom70 = 50
 						end
-						
+
 						if npc_rel['A29'] >= 40:
 							gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', 'dislike'
 							motherPayDay = daystart
@@ -379,7 +379,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 				else
 					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shakes her head. "You are old enough to earn your own money <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can''t keep depending on me forever. Get a job."'
 					act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
-				end	
+				end
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -1472,7 +1472,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'motherQW_2':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon><<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>></font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-		'You defiantly look her in the eyes when she''s done with her rant, and calmly say: "You know, <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>... what you''re saying is all true. No one can argue with that. But... don''t you think you are in no position to be lecturing me about this?'
+		'You defiantly look her in the eyes when she''s done with her rant, and calmly say: "You know, <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>... what you''re saying is all true. No one can argue with that. But... don''t you think you are in no position to be lecturing me about this?"'
 		'Your mother doesn''t understand what you''re trying to say, and still tries to talk you down from the superior moral position she thinks he has over you: "What do you mean? We''re talking about you, young lady, and how you are ruining your fut-"'
 		'Getting tired of her hypocritical attitude, you bluntly cut her off: "What I''m saying, <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, is that you did even worse things than I did!"'
 		'Your mother is deeply insulted by your accusation, and tries to protest: "<<$pcs_nickname>>! What has gotten into you, you can''t talk to your mother like that!"'
@@ -1482,7 +1482,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'motherQW_2':
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon><<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>></font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 			'Before she can get another word in, you continue: "Oh, but I can. We''re both adults, let''s talk this out like adults. Since you don''t seem to understand, I will keep it simple."'
-			'Your mother has never heard you talk back to her like this before, and tries again to silence you: "<<$pcs_nickname>>! Do not interru-'
+			'Your mother has never heard you talk back to her like this before, and tries again to silence you: "<<$pcs_nickname>>! Do not interru-"'
 			'"No, <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, now it''s <b>you</b> who needs to stop interrupting <b>me</b>. I just listened to a 30 minute tirade on how a girl should behave... from you!?"'
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
 			*nl
@@ -1508,7 +1508,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'motherQW_2':
 				'It takes a while for your mother to respond. She is lost in the memories of her youth, blankly staring at a wall. "It was nice... especially when we went camping that one summer..." she mumbles, her face turning a deep shade of red.'
 				'"No comment", you snort.'
 				'Another awkward silence. Your mother, deeply embarrassed by what you said, is unsure how to continue the conversation now without making it even worse for herself and just keeps staring at the wall. A full minute later, still no word has been said.'
-				'She finally breaks the silence: "Well, you are my daughter.'
+				'She finally breaks the silence: "Well, you are my daughter."'
 				'You give her a smile: "And you are my mother... I suppose it''s true what they say: like mother, like daughter?"'
 				*nl
 				'Your mother suddenly looks very sad, like she might be about to cry and repeats what you just said: "Like mother, like daughter... I suppose so."'
@@ -1517,7 +1517,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'motherQW_2':
 				'You feel a little guilty now, is she really just doing this out of love because she wants better for you? Even so it is no excuse for her to be this overbearing.'
 				'You nod and give your mother a weak smile. "Ok I guess... I guess I can see that. But it''s too much, you could have just talked to me instead of trying to run my life. All that did is make me want to rebel."'
 				*nl
-				'She nods and wipes at a stray tear that trickles down her face. "Your right, I went to far and I''m sorry for that. I should have learned from your sister but I didn''t. Please forgive me and try to be better than I am.'
+				'She nods and wipes at a stray tear that trickles down her face. "You''re right, I went too far and I''m sorry for that. I should have learned from your sister but I didn''t. Please forgive me and try to be better than I am.'
 				'You feel yourself tearing up as well, you nod and then you and your mother hug for a long time. This is the closest you have felt to your mother in a long time. You get up getting ready to leave the room after giving her the hug.'
 
 				act 'Leave the room':
@@ -1559,7 +1559,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clo_react':
 	menu_off = 1
 	!! TEMPORARY PICTURE
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-	
+
 	if $ARGS[1] = 'apartment':
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', 'dislike'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -1574,11 +1574,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clo_react':
 				!! TEMPORARY PICTURE
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Well..." You take a step back, moving out of her reach so she couldn''t fuss with your clothes anymore. "I bought them myself."
-				She stares at you blankly for a moment. "You bought these? You look like a cheap hooker!" Suddenly she breaks out into a fit of laughter. It takes you a moment to realize it but she''s laughing at you, right to your face, and you can feel your cheeks burning red in anger and embarrassment as you stand there waiting for her to finally stop. 
+				She stares at you blankly for a moment. "You bought these? You look like a cheap hooker!" Suddenly she breaks out into a fit of laughter. It takes you a moment to realize it but she''s laughing at you, right to your face, and you can feel your cheeks burning red in anger and embarrassment as you stand there waiting for her to finally stop.
 				"No, you''re not going out like that. Go back and change right now, <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> continues to laugh, brushing this all off like a bad joke.'
-				
+
 				act 'Go back and change': gt 'bedrPar'
-				
+
 				gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 					act 'Refuse to change (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -1611,7 +1611,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clo_react':
 					"To see how I would react? Is this some kind of joke?" She doesn''t seem all that convinced but you go along with it anyways.
 					"Yeah, it''s just a joke. Anya came up with it and said I should do it to see the look on your face if I tried to go out like this," You ramble on. Maybe if you keep talking, she''ll believe you...
 					Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is silent for what feels like an eternity before groaning and shaking her head. "Of course Anya is the one to come up with something like that. Well, it''s not funny. Now go change," she shoos you away back to your room. You managed to avoid getting into trouble but there''s no way you''re going out dressed like that this time.'
-					
+
 					act 'Go back and change': gt 'bedrPar'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1630,7 +1630,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clo_react':
 				'Natasha gives you a small appreciative smile. "Thank you. I just worry about you, is all. I don''t want you to attract the wrong kind of attention."'
 				act 'Go back to your room': gt 'bedrPar'
 			end
-			
+
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'easy'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Tell her not to worry (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -1659,7 +1659,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clo_react':
 				'"You can''t even get Anya to respect you, so give me a fucking break! I said I''m changing so go back to cleaning the kitchen or whatever the hell you do," you snap.'
 				act 'Go to your room and change': gt 'bedrPar'
 			end
-			
+
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Argue back (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -1697,7 +1697,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clo_react':
 				'As if it all suddenly made sense, Natasha throws her hands up and sighs. "Anya! Of course it''s hers. She probably borrowed it from one of her friends." She goes off into a rant about the crowd your sister hangs around with and it distracts her from being upset with you. Seems like you''re off the hook!'
 				act 'Walk away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			end
-			
+
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'easy'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Proudly tell the truth (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -1707,7 +1707,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clo_react':
 					gs 'stat'
 					!! TEMPORARY PICTURE
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-					'"Oh, this? Do you like it? I''ve been getting looks all day!" You shamelessly reply as you start to pose and model the slutty outfit to your mother. 
+					'"Oh, this? Do you like it? I''ve been getting looks all day!" You shamelessly reply as you start to pose and model the slutty outfit to your mother.
 					Confused and disgusted, Natasha takes a step back. "What''s wrong with you, <<$pcs_nickname>>? I didn''t raise you to be like this," she hisses. She starts to say more but stops when she catches people nearby staring at the two of you. Whether it''s because she''s angry, embarrassed or both, you watch with a pleased smile as Natasha''s cheeks burn red before she rushes off in the opposite direction of you.'
 					act 'Continue on your way': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 				end
@@ -1717,9 +1717,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clo_react':
 		elseif npc_rel['A29'] >= 40:
 			'When Natasha catches sight of you, she slowly shakes her head. "Is that you, <<$pcs_nickname>>? I almost couldn''t tell, I thought you were just some cheap prostitute..." She looks you up and down, not bothering to hide the repulsed look on her face. "You really don''t have any shame, do you?"'
 			'With a disapproving click of her tongue, she quickly starts to walk by you. It''s obvious she doesn''t want to be seen with you in public when you''re dressed like that.'
-			
+
 			act 'Ignore her': gt $loc, $loc_arg
-			
+
 			if momslut >= 1:
 				gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'hard'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -2057,7 +2057,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plug_find':
 	'Thinking about a quick answer you go on the offensive, "Why where you going through my stuff?!"'
 	'Not even batting an eye your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> replies, "I was cleaning your room and I find this?! What the hell <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
 	'Your face turns red as she keeps holding it in front of you, "So <<$pcs_nickname>> have you been using this?"'
-	! if used butt-plug 
+	! if used butt-plug
 	!! Since there is no variable that tracks this I''m simply going to go by pcs_ass > 0. It''s imperfect, but there''s no way to tell if it ever was used.
 	if pcs_ass > 0:
 		act 'Tell the truth':
@@ -2139,7 +2139,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ask_mother_workout':
 	if npc_rel['A29'] >= 60:
 		motherQW['workout'] = 1
 		'"You know what <<$pcs_firstname>>, that sounds like it could be fun. Grab me whenever I''m home or when we''re visiting your grandparents; it''d be nice to get out into the countryside. You''d better be dressed and ready, though!"'
-	else 
+	else
 		'"No thanks <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''ll leave all that to people younger than me"'
 		$OpenInnerThought+'I guess I need to work at it more. Maybe get more confident about my body to be convincing or improve my relationship with her and find that extra something to get her to open up.'+$CloseInnerThought
 	end
@@ -2173,20 +2173,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mother_workout_gad':
 	act 'Meet her outside for a jog': gt 'mother', 'mother_jog_gad'
 	act 'Meet her outside for yoga': gt 'mother', 'mother_yoga_gad'
 end
-	
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mother_jog_pav':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += rand(4,6)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/ready_run.jpg"></center>'
 	'You are waiting outside in the courtyard when you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> appear from around the corner. She does a few stretches before announcing to you that she is ready to get moving. The two of you walk to the park, as you do you chat about a variety of things. Once you get to the park you both do a little stretching before you start jogging.'
-	act 'Go Jogging': 
+	act 'Go Jogging':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'exercise', 'tier1', 60, 'run'
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/pavrun1.jpg"></center>'
 		'You and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> start jogging down one of the park paths. It''s not particularly taxing but you are glad to spend time with her. As you run you notice some men leering, but neither of you make a big deal out of it. Running through the park is quite refreshing overall, especially with company.'
-		act 'Return Home': 
+		act 'Return Home':
 			npc_rel['A29'] += rand(2,3)
 			minut += 30
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -2214,11 +2214,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mother_yoga_pav':
 		'You see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> has put on some very light clothing, and you head off towards the park - chatting as you go. It is not long before you arrive, so you quickly get ready to start your routine.'
 		act 'Do some yoga':
 			*clr & cla
-			gs 'exercise', 'tier2', 30, 'sprt', 'agil'	
+			gs 'exercise', 'tier2', 30, 'sprt', 'agil'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/pavyoga2.jpg"></center>'
 			'You and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> do some simple yoga routines together. It isn''t as pressing as when you do them by yourself, but you enjoy being able to spend time with her. Sometimes men walk by and leer at you both for awhile, seeming to enjoy the free show.'
-			act 'Check on her': 
+			act 'Check on her':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += rand(2,4)
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -2229,7 +2229,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mother_yoga_pav':
 		end
 	end
 end
-	
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mother_jog_gad':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
@@ -2239,7 +2239,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mother_jog_gad':
 	'You go outside to wait for your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and do a little stretching while you wait.'
 	'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is ready very quickly, and she''s showing quite a lot of enthusiasm for the run. She must be looking forward to it, or spending time with you.'
 	'"Well, I''m ready! Should we set off?"'
-	act 'Let her take the lead': 
+	act 'Let her take the lead':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'exercise', 'tier1', 60, 'run'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -2256,7 +2256,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mother_jog_gad':
 		end
 	end
 end
-	
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mother_yoga_gad':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
@@ -2273,11 +2273,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mother_yoga_gad':
 		'You see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> has put on some very light clothing and you both head off towards the meadow, chatting as you go. It''s not long before you arrive and you quickly get ready to start your routine.'
 		act 'Do some yoga':
 			*clr & cla
-			gs 'exercise', 'tier2', 30, 'sprt', 'agil'	
+			gs 'exercise', 'tier2', 30, 'sprt', 'agil'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/gadyoga2.jpg"></center>'
 			'You and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> do some simple yoga routines together. It isn''t as pressing as when you do them by yourself but you enjoy being able to spend time with her. The area is quite secluded and private, and you and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> are left to run your routine in peace and quiet. It is a nice experience and gives you plenty of time to talk whilst going through your poses and stretches.'
-			act 'Check on her': 
+			act 'Check on her':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += rand(2,4)
 				gs 'stat'